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Scootaloo got the two things she wanted most of all; she got a family and she could fly. There's just two problems; She already had a family, and there are lingering doubts about her ability to fly. ·Dasponi

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Applejack finds a pony at death's door during one of the worst storms of the year. He is bleeding, his wings are broken, and he's unconscious. This new pony has secrets he wants to hide, but as the saying goes, all things must come to light ·thedarkprep

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After escaping years of abuse, Rarity's cousins come to start a new life in Ponyville. Rarity and her friends must help her paranoid, psychic cousin realize the world isn't an evil place before she is pushed over the edge. ·KayMarie09

That was a fast wait. Thanks for that. New crystal pony huh? Wondering how it'll all fit with Black and his revengenda against the foals and the Mane Six as well as that mysterious "dead" pony from HH. Faved, liked, and waiting.

Captivating first chapter and leaves the mystery of how Amethyst ended up in that giant crystal, how did he end up all the way in Equestria, why and how is the only crystal unicorn pony, and also, why does tears flow from his eyes as soon as he looks into Rarity's? I'm favoriting this and going to look for more.

It was a good effort, but it needs editing. Some of the paragraphs contain multiple topics/focuses. Some sentences even contain multiple subjects. On at least one occasion things started getting explained directly to the reader, which is kind of a no-no. Your readers are smart, the world is much more vivid when the picture is drawn through the story.

Try taking a closer look at your collab with TailsFox, that fic seems to avoid the pitfalls a lot of writers make.

I don't know whether to be happy or sad that there is some one else who came up with the same idea I did about why there are no crystal unicorns or pegasi in the empire.

On the one hand, happy that I am not alone.

On the other hand, horrified that Sombra did that and who know what else he did to make sure that there was no unicorns or pegasi left to stop him. I am feeling really bad for the kid and I hate to see what else is up ahead for the kid.

Great update and nice mentions of what happen when the gang learned of Black's escape from prison.

Also, HA-HA for Diamond Tiara as Karma came back to haunt her badly. And she rightfully deserved it too for all she put the CMC and others through.

Poor Rarity, going through motherhood for the first time, is such a learning experience, she is lucky to have friends around her who knows what she's going through.

Now I wonder how will Amethyst deal with Opal ?

Plus nice way of reintroducing everyone in this storyline, but now I do wonder...while Candance is Princess to the Crystal Empire, Shouldn't Princess Luna and Princess Celestia be told of Amethyst appearance as well ?

Other than that, and also question the status of Blaze's parole as I thought he was free of it, this was another great update to the story.

Is it just me or did Rarity seem to be in too much of a rush in introducing Amethyst to all her friends? I mean she could have at least let him listen to Sweetie Belle sing or do something with AB and SB. Also, I feel for him so much every time he looks at his locket, holds it to his chest, and starts to tear up. Also, it looks like there might be an admission of love from Big Mac to Rarity soon.

So, I'm guessing Shimmering Rose was Sombra's right hoof? I have a feeling this mare is more like Moriarty in the waiting.

Amethyst merely nodded and he took a sip of his tea, which already had about five lumps of sugar in it. The colt wanted to place more in it, but Rarity put her hoof down and shook her head when he tried to reach it.

Great update as it was nice to see the Princesses know of Amethyst existence. I do wonder if Princess Luna and Princess Celestia could help out with the search for the little ones parents with any data that Canterlot has on crystal unicorn ponies. Any to all help could be used.

Also how very cliche of you to use the old evil advisor to the royal family gag. I do wonder what is her connection to the evil Sombra.

Nice update as it seems that Silver Spoon is slowly coming around and maybe regretting her choice in friends with Diamond Tiara. Also, it seems that Silver's slowly falling in L-O-V-E with Amethyst and it looks like Spike is the first to notice it.

Still, Rarity a mother is a thought that seems interesting and how you developed this idea into a great character growth for her is amazing.

Great going AJ for making both your brother and your friend feel awkard enough about their feelings for each other.

Overall, this was a great update to the story. Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.

Silver Spoon likes Amethyst. Silver Spoon was already distancing herself from Diamond Tiara after the comment about Apple Bloom's parents. If Diamond loses her only friend, I expect her to fully give in to the dark side when the chance presents itself (and I'm sure it will.)

And so begins Silver Spoon's redemption arc, and if the writing wasn't so awesome, and if this fic didn't know how to keep me in my seat-wanting to know what is happening next, I probably wouldn't have cared as much. I am quite interested in how all of this will go down and what is up ahead.

Is anybody else wondering if Diamond is going to turn corrupt and pure evil later?