I know this is an old story and you probably don't remember where you were going with this story. But its really good and its just got very interesting. I hope you will one day continue and finish this story. Your story is amazing. .

Guest chapter 7 . 2/17/2013

Update soon please. This story is awesome, suspenseful, and well written. I believe that you managed to capture his pain well.

Wow dude- awesome, intense story! You're REALLY good at writing, I was on the edge of my seat through the whole thing! :D And I can't wait to read more chapters! :) And if you ever wanna check out my stories- feel free (my most recent ones are probably the best and I am a HUGE Carol/KW pairing fan LOL) Anyways- freaking cool story you got here dude!

So I was looking through your profile (that makes me sound like a stalker or a pedophile or something...) and I found this. At first I was like, "What the hell?" But then I figured, why not? So here I am, and I am quite interested! Countinue(sp?) please!

Well this is edgy and very suspenseful; waiting to see what will develop. It's not easy to see the Max we knew from the film still in turmoil after about seven years, but it's definitely not out of the question. And of course I'm concerned about what's happening to the WT's and why they are trying to contact Max. The English kid, Liam, will no douubt return to the story. Keep working on this - you've set things up very well and I look forward to seeing what develops. On an aside, I always wondered if Max was perhaps short for either Maxwell or Maximilian (the latter is a family name in my maternal line so I of course leaned toward it); but Maxwell is cool. Where did the surname "Cordon" come from? I always assumed his last name was King. Ha ha ha! That's Alexander's laugh from when he was throwing dirt clods and having a good time for once.