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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2012-05-08 09:28:01

You know, I really hate that song. On my "worst songs of all time"-list it's definitely in the top 10, haha.

Anyway, I still like the little music video you created here. It had some nice scenes, for example when the king was waiting outside, but nothing happened and he was all like "*sigh* boooring!" ;)

The sad thing about this video is, that the song is cut off after the first refrain. While I don't like the song, I still think it would've been better if you animated the whole pice. Of course, this means more work... but I think the extra effort will pay off in the end.

Rated 4 / 5 stars2012-05-07 18:32:17

Well it was a short yet interesting music video but kind of sad how it cuts off before the song ever finishes sadly. Just ends with a drawing a of a lemon tree then cuts to the final frame saying the end.

The graphics here do not appear to have changed much and funny how the king enjoys TV but not iCarly and I take it that the day was really boring for him then wasn't it?

The music itself was interesting since it had a light playful feel yet bored feel at the same time as if describing the day for someone who is incredibly bored.

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2012-01-29 21:26:29

Not bad

It was okay. I didn't mind the simple art style, but it was a bit inconsistent. The animation was okay, but this also seemed too rushed. Also the end was very abrupt. I liked the idea but i think these things let it down.

Rated 2 / 5 stars2012-01-29 03:42:24

Well...

Look i can see you tried to make this nice but here is some things I'd advice you to look out for next time.

When working with music, specifically a known "SONG" try add something small that gives the illusion of rhythm and continuity.
eg. A bouncing ball that goes left to right with karaoke subtitles, note am not saying you need to that exact same thing but something along those lines even maybe a bird bobbing up and down as if dancing.

Characters where too simply drawn work on your proportions and try cleaning and tidying up the lines some more, I know this is supposed to be quick work but putting that extra effort would have given you more points from me and its easier on anyone's eyes.

Animation wise its was ok ish I'd say try add more interesting things to look at rather than a guy standing in front of the "Camera" all the time. I thought it would have gotten a tad more interesting when i saw your big floating text but that text appearance was about the most exiting thing there was.

Also i hate action script as it can be a pain in the ass but adding a replay button and a a credit to your own name at the end seems obligatory.

Look overall good effort but i don't ever see my self watching this ever again.

I m sorry if this sounds harsh but take as constructive criticism I m only trying to help.