Not to bad to be a beginner.
DM Guide will sure help you, but I highly suggest you to read Forum_Account's Programming tips, such as other developer's posts as well.
They will surely be useful for you, since they are way more explained than the DM Guide itself.

Teka, add eyebrows to your base.. you need to do a space between your body and your arm & between the two legs. Also remember to add the watercourse on the water . For the grass you should make it wriggle like if there were wind. So to be more simple you need to add a weather System that changes a little the turf ! Else everything else, look great.

If you really want players, players want sexy sleek look, (no ofence) but wdf is this trash?its sqaures and circles.Look at herioes united, then look at this ..just saying once again not starting beef but dayum i saw what you did in your iocn packs and im sure as hell you can make something look better than that