Fight Simulation #3 (Namikaze vs AI)

While the Sensei enters Namikaze into the Fight Simulation Chamber, he sees the a lot of different wires and computers. Sit on that connector, please. Then, the Sensei gave him the DataCard. This card has the information of the Virtual Mission or fight. Insert it in the connector and start. You won't be in the fight until you act.

((OK. You just have to write the fight as if it was a book, but following the rules for writing I gave you before (DialogThoughts Events). You can execute 3 turns per reply. Using a Jutsu needs 2 turns, attacking is one turn, and moving one square is also one turn. Think that when you enter you don't know where is the enemy, so you have to act in consequence.))

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Saratoga didn't expect to be seen so fast. It's the sharingan. That's why I hate the Uchiha clan. The, he performed some hand seals. Why don't you welcome my friend Gatsu? (Actions 2&3, Earth Golem Summoning). Then, the huge rocky golem started to move, until being in the middle of the shuriken's traject.Then, the shuriken hit the golem, without any effect. You'll have to work a bit harder guy! (No action 3)

(( Be careful of not god modding. You can say that you searched for the weak spots, but you can't say you found them. It's better to say, "I used the sharingan for searching a weak spot a throwing two shuriken's there" then I have two options: write "Namikaze found the weak spots and the shuriken's left the golem laying in the floor" or "Namikaze found no weak points on the golem, so he didn't even try to throw the shurikens" or "Namikaze found the weak spots and threw the shurikens, but then the golem avoided them by creating a sand wall in front of him" Correct your attack in a way I can decide what happens, and then I'll answer. Think that you're only yourself, and If I don't tell you "The golem has weak spots in x and y", you can't know it. ))

The shuriken's hit the golem on the sides, making him lose a part of mass. Then, the Golem started to heal himself.(Action 1, healing). As Namikaze could see, the Golem used it's own mass for healing the wounds, becoming a bit smaller. Come here man! I don't wanna hurt you! Just a hug, ha ha ha!. Suddenly, Saratoga got onto the golem's shoulders (Action 1, movement) and started to do some handseals. Do you know what is the Symbiosis Jutsu? Then, Saratoga started to sink onto the Golem's body. Then, the 2 meters old Golem doubled its size. Now I am the golem! I can heal it with my own chakra! You're lost!(Action 2&3, Earth Symbiosis Jutsu)

Namikaze couldnt believe his own eyesokay i will just use my sharingan[action1&2]Namikaze hopes that his eyes dont decieve him nowhe then threw some shuriken at the golem aiming at the cracks in the golems armor hoping to pierce the enemy

Namikaze's shuriken hit the golem's only crack, making it become bigger.You! Just stop it! . Then, the golem Grabbed a piece a nearby tree (Action 1) and then threw it to Namizake.(Action 2)

(( Tr to wrtie what you do as a story. It has to make the people who read it to be expecting the next turn. It has to be catchy. And also try to make the min. Spelling Mistakes you can, as it makes it much easier for me to read it, as I'm not a native english speaker. ))

(( Read what I told you before and try to correct the action. I won't be able to answer until tomorrow. It would be fine that you tried to correct all your posts in this fight, Tomorrow I'll continue with the fight.))

(( Think that you must say the number of shuriken, and that they probably fail to hit the enemy, so you must act in consequence. I'll continue, but think at what I've been telling you. Try to do it more complex, with thoughts and words. Also respect Majs. Please, the appeareance of the post changes a lot. ))

Namikaze's shuriken had hit Saratoga's golem very near from the crack, but not with the needed strength for making it bigger. Don't think that's all you need! Then, Saratoga healed the golem's crack by consuming part of his chakra. (Action one, Healing). Then, The golem started to run against Namikaze (Action2, movement) spitting senbons formed by the minaral salts of the golem's body. (Action 3, attack).

wat to do now my sharingan is useless now okay then lets try thisnamikaze runs at the golem[action1movement]namikaze brings out one of his kunai and soaks it in chakra[ation2prep]he then swiftly with all his might throws it towards the golems eyelets see what happens now

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THe golem lost half of his face, being unable to see where Namikaze was. As Namikaze didn't try to avoid the rock senbons, he got hurted by one of them in the left shoulder. Hey Namikaze, why don't you eat some dust? Then, the golem sunk his armas in the terrain. If I'm not able to see him, I'll use a ranged attack for avoiding hits until my eye is fine. (Actions 1&2, SandStorm Jutsu)(Action 3, Saratoga uses his chakra for healingthe golem's face)

(( Ok, that's a bit better. Think at using the caps, I repeat that it makes your text much more "good-looking". Also think that italics are only for thoughts, that actions must go without any special type of font. If you could link your actions a bit, so that they can seem a whole instead of some steps, it would be better:

Eg: "Oh no, my sharingan is useless with this kind of enemyThen, Namikaze started to run against the golem, thinking at what he should do next. (Action1, movement) If I damage his eyes I'll have a little advantage. Let's try itYou're going to suffer Saratoga! Then, after soaking his kunai in chakra (Action 2, chakra load) Namikaze throws it to the golem's eye, trying to dissolve a part of his face and leaving him blind." ))

Seeing that his efforts were useless namikaze searched for waterBingo! if all else doesnt work i can as well try this Namikaze said running towards water[action1movement]if he heals attacks i can just try to dissolve that sand golem in water namikaze thought hoping he was rightthen namikaze emptied out his smoke bomb container and filled it with water[action2prep]then namikaze shouts hey saratoga u thirsty y dont u drink this and swiftly throws the smoke bomb now filed with water with all his might towards the golem i hope this works

(( Ok, that's much better. The only thing you need to improve are the spelling mistakes. It's difficult for me to read some things, because as I told you before I'm not english native. But leaving that apart, very good post, that's what you have to do. ))

With the only eye that was still good, the golem started to advance to the lake running.(Action 1, movement) Why do you say that? Then, the newly created water bomb hit the golem's torax. Suddenly, the whole golem started to dissolve. Wasting chakra on this is useless... i'll have to fight directly..

When nothing more than dust was left from the old golem, Namikaze could see his opponent from near. I didn't expect that from you.. you didn't look like the kind of ninja which thinks such a simple but neverthought strategy. You have my greetings for making me enjoy this fight. But it's over now. Then, Saratoga started to do hand seals. Have you ever met the power of the various sandstorm jutsus? Then, an enormous sandstorm started where Saratoga and Namikaze where, creating fast air currents and limitating their eyes. The sharingan would be more useful than never, as without it he wouldn't be able to avoid a possible future attack. (ACtions 2&3, Sandstorm Jutsu)

wow atleast that worked now i will have to deal with thisokay then namikaze said activating his sharingan[action1&2]saratoga why dont u follow me namikaze shouts running to the surface of the lake using chakra[action3]i hope that guy is runnning out of chakra doesnt really matter i havnt used much anyway namikaze thoughtatleast if he comes here is will be soaking and will not be able to use sand jutsus

For avoiding him being soaked, Saratoga didn't even try to advance. He created three sand senbons (ACtion 1, prepare weapon) and threw them to Namizake, for showing him that from away he couldn't do much. Come here. My skatana awaits you. (action 2&3, throw senbons and prepare katana)

Namikaze swiftly dodges the sand senbons[action 1]wow he smarter than i thought okay this might be stupid but why notNamikaze runs toward saratoga tryiong to avoid the sand and saratogas katana unties his belt and uses it to try and catch saratogas leg and stab with his kunai[action2&3]

Namikaze could easily avoid two of the senbons, but the last one hit him on the left leg. Namikaze could easily avoid Saratoga's katana, as he didn't even try to avoid it. But when Namikaze grabbed Saratoga's belt he discovered that it was made of sand. I can control this sand. I'm from the Desert clan. I'm part of the offspring of the greatest ninjas ever. Then, The sand that had once been Saratoga's belt compresed onto Namikaze's hand, leaving it useless, and causing a major pain on him. Don't even try to clear it with water. It's a rock now, you would only lose time. (ACtion one, attack, sand compression)

The searing pain made namikaze think extra hard this timewow not my best plan Namikaze tries to bring out chakra on his trapped handahhh Namikaze exerts the pressure on the stone[/b][action1]saratoga you should realize by now that this was a trapNamikaze brings out his kunai and soaks it in chakra[action2]Namikaze quickly tried to stab saratogas heart[action3]

(( Not sure If I understood what you say. I'll act supposing that you act with your free hand, as the other one i caught by the rock. ))

Namikaze's kunai was stopped by Saratoga's katana, which, after absorbing the kunai's chakra, dissolved, leaving only some sand. (Action 1, defense) Not bad... Then, the pressure in Namikaze's hand augmented (Action 2, attack, pressure). You're going to lose that hand. You'd better accept that you are no challenge for me.

Saratoga easily avoided the attack, and decided to end this. Sand Stomach Jutsu! After performing some seals, a huge amount of sand formed a little cavity (( Size, more or les like two elephants )). If I don't finish this fast, this Jutsu will end with you and me. (( Actions 1&2, Sand Stomach Jutsu )) Do you see that hole in the middle? If you fall there, you're going to become nothing more than the same sand that now coversa your head. Then, Saratoga punched Namikaze in the toracic cavity with a hugr stregth, trying to break his sternon, but he only made Namikaze retreat a little bit, without arriving to cause a major pain. (Action 3, punch)

Wow this is a really bad situation i guess i hav to do disaaahhhh! Namikaze shouts trying to break off his immobile hand[action1]Then Namikaze runs with all his might to the residue of his water bomb luckily it was only the cork that went off[action2]Then used his chakra to run to the lake to refill ithe water bomb with water[action3]

(( This battle won't finish until you do what I ask you too. I remind you: SPELLING, please, if not I won't continue with it. ))

Seeing Namikaze runnning to the water, Saratoga used the Earth Wall jutsu for stopping him before he arrived near the water. (Actions 1&2, Earth Wall Jutsu) You're going to die here. You're supposed to fight, not to play with water toys. Then, a huge sand needle grew onto Saratoga's both hands (Action 3, prepare weapons).