Still wonderful, even on the second reading :) Of all the stories that you read, there are certain ones that stay with you, this is one. Well done, I loved Severus' struggle, how he gives in for a moment, and regains enough control to pull away, but still needing Lily to make the final decision.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm honored to hear that this story is one you like to come back to, truly.

Oh wow, this is just beautiful! The description of everything was...well, magical! I really love Snape/Lily shipping and you did a great job with it! I really enjoyed this being in Snape's point of view, you did that amazingly. The ending is so sad because you know that he wanted her and was trying to protect her from himself. That must've been terribly difficult! Great story, keep up the unbelievable work!

Diandra

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a wonderful review! It really warms my heart to find that someone could like what I wrote enough to say such lovely things. Thanks again!

Oh my goodness, I absolutely adored this story. It was so well written, and it embodies the fullness of Severus' emotions. I could feel his temptations, I could feel his desire (in a G rated way, ha) and I could completely picture how Lily would be and the expressions on her face. Sooo well written, as I had told you previously, it is such a breath of fresh air to read the writings of a new author who really knows how to pen a story. This is a wonderful job!

Author's Response: *is dancing the awesome review jig of joy!*

Thank you so much! I remember when I started to write this that I was as caught up in his emotions as he was. I am so glad that you enjoyed it, as you've mentioned Snape is one of your favorites! (I am using too many exclamation marks!) Thanks again :D

Beautiful story. It's so unlike what I usually read but I loved it! I fail to see why it isn't a person's favourite yet! Well, its mine :P. It was a little short and it lacked a bit of detail. Overall though, it was a great read and something I enjoyed. The fact they Snape and Lily had a 'thing' is so - different. You don't see this happening much - atleast I dont :P I think that's why I liked it :D I love your description. You use great vocabulary that attracts the reader in a way. Keep up the fab work love :D xxx Rosette

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! We Snape/Lily fans ride under the radar, I think--though it's a choice in the 'ship list when submitting and most of my OTPs aren't *wink*! I appreciate your kind words so very much :)