Honestly, this was such a great read. There's so much mystery surrounding this despite the fact that you've told us quite a lot already. Coherency isn't exactly my thing either so this review is going to end up kind of pear-shaped ahaha.

I just... gah the introduction was totally enthralling and just pulled me right in, but I think it was a bit...wordy? The sentences ran on a bit so I'd advise that you ease into it in each section before going on to each separate section with paragraphs of writing. :)

I really liked this because it was decently paced - fast, but it covered everything really nicely and didn't feel rushed either. It feels like you've spent a good amount of time on this and honestly your efforts have not been wasted!

This is just...gah. I want the next chapter so badly. There's so many questions: what mission? what's in the bag? why Roxanne? why muggle and wizard forged documents?

I can't wait for the next chapter - please let me know when its up!!

Author's Response: *blushes* Glad to hear so!! *grins*

It doesnât matter hahaha. That happened quite a lot to me when I review something I truly liked. I see it as a compliment.

Thatâs funny to hear, because Iâm really the opposite of wordy and for this story I decided to try it out and I overdone it hahaha. Thank you I will keep that in mind but the next few chapters are already prewritten.

Well I did spent much time on it to be honest as Iâm not someone who uses a lot of words and describes much but for this story I wanted to change that.

The next chapter is in the queue, but it isnât betaâed yet. So I hope you will enjoy that one also. As for your questions you will slowly find out throughout the story. When I say slowly I do mean slowly haha.