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King Sombra has returned from the shadows, his sights on a new conquest. Twilight Sparkle's efforts to save the Crystal Empire may have gone unnoticed by the masses, but not by Sombra. She has earned his interest. Much to her dismay. ·Journey Blue

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Twilight Sparkle plunges Equestria into the depths of deprivation as she skillfully plots against her former friends and confidants, using any means at her disposal to claw her way to power. ·FallBlau

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King Sombra has returned from the shadows with his sights set on a new conquest: Princess Twilight Sparkle. In her, he sees an extraordinary talent for dark magic—one that he will not let go to waste. ·Journey Blue

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After Twilight's use Dark Magic, it begins to infect her. Causing damage to her mentality and is ruining her friendship. She seeks help and tries to stop the darkness from consuming her. ·DawnedDusk

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The Dark king returned for what he started with Crysalis in Tow, Celestia has fallen entrapped in a Magical crystal resin, The users of the elements fall to the same fate but Twilight was thrown to the crystal caverns, what will happen? ·FLUTTERxxDASH

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Sombra may have been defeated after his attempt to retake the Crystal Empire, but he was not destroyed. He still lives, and now he seeks to work his way into the mind of Princess Twilight Sparkle. As she struggles with the implications of her new immortality, she finds less comfort in the wise words of Princess Celestia, and is drawn to the dark magic of a fallen king.

I will tell you for a fact that you stole a few of these lines from a Comic Dub on youtube, or the comic itself. It's called "A somber Meeting". The original author/artist of the comic stated that you're only allowed to produce a story about the comic if you credit him and send him a link so he can read it.

I wonder what advice Luna would have given Twi about immortality and the consequences of using dark magic. I mean Luna knows what immortality is like, she has also dabbed with dark magic and probably wont give advice basically saying "Figure it out yourself Twilight". AlsoI hope you will add Luna or Celestia to the story at some point of the story (I will eagerly await till they appear if you are planing on adding them)

P.S. Obviously I really like your story and I cant wait till the next update.

I wonder what advice Luna would have given Twi about immortality and the consequences of using dark magic. I mean Luna knows what immortality is like, she has also dabbed with dark magic and probably wont give advice basically saying "Figure it out yourself Twilight". AlsoI hope you will add Luna or Celestia to the story at some point of the story (I will eagerly await till they appear if you are planing on adding them)

P.S. Obviously I really like your story and I cant wait till the next update.

>>51025155102515 But there is a tragedy tag. A tragedy occurs between to lovers. I think that Twilight may fall in love with Sombra and then have to kill him, like Rosebud, for Twilight to learn the full spell.

This story is the start of something beautiful. Now (at least in my opinion), all that needs to happen is Twilight Sparkle needs to kill the princess that was responsible for her transformation into Alicorn form, Princess Celestia. If it hadn't been for Celestia transforming Twilight into an Alicorn, she would never have had a reason to listen to Sombra, and she would have never had a reason to kill that poor innocent mare. But, like I said, that is just my opinion. The story is still sure to be a good story either way, especially when it gets finished.

Smiling, Sombra teased the princess's expectations "What, you think I spend all my time sitting by the fire? I have a life you know, aside from teaching you magic. If you'd spend any time looking around my home you'd see I have a garden in the back."

OMG! Sombra is starting to make me like, him! The world has ended!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!