SUDELNUPPE !
you did way better already tho !
( music sounded like an amiga-mod @one_speaker_only at times -> just 2 of 4 channels )
@home applies what Ferris said ! i guess you tweaked it for the bigscreen !

WAIT: after watching the VIMEO it seems my demobox doesnt show this demo correct...colors are fucking ace as seen on the biggy !
minimalistic music still aint my cup of tea tho !

Throwing random low-poly 3d meshes in your demo editor, spreading them across the timeline and adding a 1-pattern loop track makes for a somewhat careless looking demo. It's not that I dismiss the style, but I wish there would be some sort of visible, overarching concept.

when I see this kind of thing I always wonder if there is some quick way to do it that I don't understand... but then when I see non abstract things like mickey mouse on the cross and a buddha statue it makes me realize someone just put in a lot of time on this and I'm too lazy!