Just so you know, at first i didn't know what to think about your story but know I've come to hate your writing and your cliffhangers. OK I'm joking I actually love your writing just not your cliffhangers! So I'm docking you a point in my rating.

ok. so i have already left reviews on the other chapters so now i have to write one on the first chapter. Alright, so i have read this entire story and have been waiting for a new chapter since DECEMBER!!! i can't take it anymore!! i really really want you to update soon because i love this story and i really dont want you to forget about it! thank you so much. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!

Please update soon! I love this story. I just have one criticism, it feels like James and Lily aren't very serious, like you never write about them hanging out or anything, so i was just wondering if you could also focus on Lily and James, and while I love Jessica I feel like she gets all the attention. Or show that Jessica and Lily are good friends now too. I don't know if I am making sense to you. But i love the story and if what i said is going to ruin what you already have planned than just ignore this, but it's just a thought. Thank you! =) Please keep writing.

Ok...so I just got done reading everything up until now. That is to say, I started 4 days ago and just finished now. Anyway...wonderful story. I'm really interested in where you are taking it from here

I was a bit leery about the whole Jessica thing, but then I continued reading and I enjoy her as a character. It's interesting to have it be from her POV most of the time and others too.

I find this to be a very easy read, which is good.
I actually just stopped reading the other fanfic I was reading because it was too redundant and too like other stories I have read.

This chapter was hilarious! I can't believe, though, that Madame Pompfry would allow all those people into the Hospital Wing the day after the full moon. And Remus getting up and walking by himself? Hmm.

Well anyway, keep updating. I'm extremely excited as to what you're going to do next!

sorry i havent reviewed but i tend to wait until i've read whats been written before i do so
i love this story - its so different
i woud however like to read about more james and lily romance and maybe another secret that all the girls are hiding like - there all legal animagi maybe or something like that
i just really want more james and lilly romance and more secrets please
thanks
x

I especially like your story. It's a neat concept and not one I have been reading. I enjoy hearing from Peter's point of view since we never really get to hear about him much in other stories. It's fantastic so keep writing!!! Great job!