I weep for Hephaestion. Oddly enough, he and Alexander are my favorite bit of ancient history. It's a bit hard to puzzle through in some places, but that could be I'm just sleepy, it's nearing 2 AM here. I love it, though. Such diamond-studded imagery.

zendska not signed in chapter 1 . 1/22/2003

aaah, this is strange and elusively beautiful...so much imagery, and the feeling of being an eavesdropper on someone's memories, some deep feeling not meant for us to hear...on the whole i like it!