This computer comes equipped solely with Netflix, Hulu, and Microsoft Word. All but Microsoft Word may be taken away as punishment if deemed necessary by Site Director Allen.

… Netflix and Hulu are streaming services. They require an ACTIVE INTERNET CONNECTION. There’s no way in hell they’d even begin to ok that.

SCP-2543 is allowed to request new computer programs or books but has not since it was contained. All materials written by SCP-2543 are to be passed directly to Director Allen.

This is vaguely interesting but might not be super relevant.

SCP-2543's containment cell is to be surveilled robotically at all times.

You don’t have to specify that it’s automated, and robotically is not the word.

All communications with SCP-2543 must be approved by Director Allen.

You just mean interviews, right? It’s not like she’s getting email.

Site 15 medical personnel are to be advised whenever SCP-2543 goes catatonic.

“Goes catatonic” is colloquial. “enters a catatonic state.”

Emergency assistance has not been needed thus far, though SCP-2543 has been treated multiple times for injuries resulting from falling unexpectedly during such events.

Then emergeny assistance was needed.

SCP-2543 is a forty-three year old human female.

Go with “female humanoid.”

It has a height of 168cm and a weight of 60kg.

“, 168 cm in height and 60 kg in weight.” Also, why does this matter?

Its anomalous properties were discovered on March 8, 2017 as a result of Incident 1969-2948-2543.

Naming the incident with the three SCP numbers is a little silly. Only a little.

This phenomenon appears to be localized to SCP-2543's skull but does not impair its brain function.

Why specifically her skull? Why not her head in general? Or just somewhere within her skull? Also, the electricity effect doesn’t make a ton of sense. I’m not suggesting you explain it in more depth, just get it out of the way ASAP so we can get on to the story.

SCP-2543 claims to receive hallucinatory visions on random occasions.

You don’t need to and shouldn’t say random. It has a specific meaning.

When these events occur, the electricity it produces spikes between 1,000% and 35,000%.

“Spikes” is colloquial. Also, these things being expressed as percentages are ridiculous. Just say the new wattages.

SCP-2543 goes catatonic for the duration of these events.

enters a catatonic state

The subject becomes lucid immediately after the cessation of this phenomena and experiences no permanent physical effects.

“this phenomenon” or “these phenomena”

Requests to use SCP-2543 as a power source have been denied.

This is a stupid sentence. It might have a place if you went into more detail on the proposal, but you want to get to the logs as fast as possible, so it does not.

Level 5 Clearance Required

Making this gigantic red text after a line just looks silly and doesn’t meet what can be considered standard form for this kind of thing.

SCP-2543 is believed to be linked to a version of itself in an unknown alternate universe.

Why specify unknown?

It claims that this version of itself, hereby classified Wilson-X

This nomenclature makes a little more sense as described in the log, but up here it just sounds silly. Unless they want to treat her like a PoI, I don’t see why “Wilson-X” and “Wilson-n” wouldn’t be “SCP-2543-A” and “SCP-2543-n”.

During these visions, SCP-2543 claims to view the world through the eyes of one of its alternate universe doppelgängers, usually Wilson-X.

“view the world” seems pretty colloquial. Also, is it just sight, or is it more senses?

SCP-2543 claims to be able to communicate with whichever doppelgänger whose sight it is adopting.

Doppelganges is colloquial.

which nearly resulted in an FK-Class End of the World Scenario.

This is a truly unfortunate choice of letters. I would avoid it.

Addendum:

Having this unnamed one-word collapsible is also silly and irregular.

I’ll stop there. There might be further issues in the log, but I generally enjoyed those. The description and containment need the most attention.

Edit: I would give this all the upvotes for the story in the log, but not when the entirety of the first parts we get to read is so sloppy.

Thanks for the feedback. It's a little frustrating to get it so late after my forum thread got zero responses in two days, but since most of your advice is spot on I don't mind. I've made edits accordingly.

But that interview log. It's hard to really capture someone's personality on this site, and this is a great example of how to give someone a complex characterization, in a very short space.

My criteria for upvote/downvote is "Does this belong on the wiki", no matter if I personally like it, and that's *resoundingly* yes, even if the "object" is boring. Brain what makes electricity and hallucinates, meh. Brain what makes electricity, and hallucinates, and causes her to sabotage the foundation due to her other self mentally torturing/pleasing them? Jesus christ, yes.

Yeah, there was originally another type of energy Harriet produced but without any context it was simply confusing. Eventually there will be a page explaining Alph energy, at which point I will add the crosslink. Or there won't be, who knows.

I love this, but everything that isn't the interview is poorly done enough that I can't upvote.

I guess it's some general tonal issues in the the description - but the interview is really, really wonderful. Better than most of the stuff I've read on this site.

Maybe hide the "Level 5 Clearance Required" thing behind a collapsible? It seems odd for the super duper classified stuff to be in clear view of whatever level 3 just sorta opens the document and glances in that direction.

Or just remove that bit and mention the other universe thing upfront. The electricity and hallucinations isn't the nifty part of this skip - it's the "holding someone hostage with their mind" bit.

I'd assume that the a Level 5 stuff either wouldn't be in the document given to a lower level employee, or it'd all be blacked out. A lot of people seem to be complaining about the first part of the description. True, it isn't exactly thrilling. The point of that bit is to justify to a lower level employee why she's contained. I don't want to mention the other universe upfront for other reasons. But I'll think about a way to spice up the beginning.

Yeah okay, that's reasonable. The reasons I collapsed the interviews were to separate them visually and to not make the article appear so long. But moving the collapsible makes more sense for the first goal and achieves the second, so there you have it.

I actually quite enjoyed this one, although the final log gives me a bit of back and forth. The logs jump from 8 to 32 and the tone shift in Wilson-1 changes VERY dramatically - she's very nearly Wilson-X herself already in that one, and I'm slightly bothered by how there's ZERO buildup to that point.

However, that same 8-to-32 jump kind of leads us to look in that exact direction - the isolation has left her largely at the mercy of Wilson-X, and so being that Wilson-X is not only her only real companion(and friend, as she herself mentions in said log), and is also, largely, herself…it makes sense that with that much time, Wilson-1 would come around to X's way of thinking. Which may have been part of what X intended - sort of replicating herself through all the universes she can get access to, to spread her influence and agenda indirectly when she can't manage it directly as in the one where the Wilson there succeeded in breaching the Foundation entirely. +1 overall.