Mati

No opinions about the above post? I really need feedback on this, I want to lead the story on a good path.I'm still not sure if Kenny should betray Rami, or if they stay together till the end. If you read the missions carefully, you can see that Kenny and Rami used to be friends before America. Why? If you read Kenny's police records:

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Arrived in the US in the 1980s on an Israeli passport though, this was confiscated when evidence came to light that he did not, as previously claimed, have a Jewish grandmother.

I mentioned that Rami helped Kenny to make false IDs back in... wherever they were. So I'm not very sure if I should break up their friendship and make them enemies. Yalon has thought about a retirement from his work, but I doubt that he would really do try to do it. My plot point wasn't focused just around Kenny, I still have some things I want to reveal in the upcoming mission.

Tyla

If you're not entirely sure about the Ray Boccino mission you should give it the boot. There's no point including them to extend the storyline if they add no weight to it. Vice City didn't have the most drawn out storyline, only about twenty missions, but it made sure everything that needed to be said was said.

Personally, I don't think Kenny Petrovic would betray Rami. He needs him. Goons and Grunts are ten a penny, but his most prized hitman? Rami betraying Petrovic himself would be a more plausible conclusion. The man wants to retire, Kenny won't let him. He needs money, money that could be made selling his old adversary down the river. He obviously isn't bound by loyalties, just the figure of his payment.

I wanna see the remaining missions! Work on COL 2 - which btw may not be called city of lies - has begun, and seeing as how I'm considering this as canon in the prelude, I'm itching to see where it goes.Also interested to see what the COL reference is

Revenge is something that happens everyday. People are avenging on their sworn nemesis, only for their own satisfaction. You can compare revenge to a huge desert, its never a straight road. It's a wasteland, and just like every other wasteland, it's easy to lose your way and forget where you were going.

Rami Yalon decides to visit his son and his wife once again. He grabs [/I]his stomach for a second and then opens the front door and walks inside. There's nobody on the first floor. ''Samara? Aaron? Anyone here?'', Rami wasn't getting any respond. It was kinda suspicious, so he checked if his gun was reloaded, making his way upstairs. He slowly approached his son's room and slowly opened the door, having his gun ready. He was hearing a noisy sound.

He kicked the door open and aimed the gun on his own son, who was wearing a headset, so he just listened to some music. ''Paranoid again, father? Haha.'', laughed his son evilly. Rami got his gun back as quick as he could and asked: ''Aaron, have you seen your mother? I thought, maybe we could do something together. Like a family. His son took off his headsets and stood up. ''You had more than 24 years to do something with your family. You wanted to kill instead.'', Aaron didn't show any kind of understanding.

Rami sat down on the nearest chair, so did Aaron. ''Aaron, I was thinking a lot. I am a killer. But...'', his son ignored him and walked out of the room. Rami shook his head in disappointment. He got approached by Samara, and received a small kiss on the cheek. She has heard their conversation. She closed the doors and took something out of a small pocket. It was a pistol. ''I found it under Aaron's bed.''

''What the f*ck is this boy up to? How did he even get this gun?'', asked Rami. ''Stop acting like a f*cking priest, we all know it's your fault!'', Samara cried out loudly. Rami took her into his arms. He did now that is's his fault. It could be just for safety. Or he wanted to be a killer too. Or it could be for any possible reason, and Rami didn't have a clue. But he realized that this can't go on like this. He's not only destroying the ones he kills. He also destroys the ones he loves. Plus, he destroys himself. ''Alright... Alright. I'll stop. Say goodbye to Kenny Petrovic, he's gone from my life forever.''