I personally love the format of this story. It is very different from all the other's I've read. All in all, it is very good, I do have a "constructive critism": I know it may sound futile but the phrase could care less should actually be couldn't care less because if you could care less, than you somewhat care about the situation. I don't know if it was a typo of some sort, but I felt like I needed to mention it. Yet it is not really disturbing and the story is really interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Oops...some people couldn't care less about nuances like this, BUT every writer who is a writerwriter should pay close to attention to these. Thanks for pointing it out!
Thanks for reviewing :D

i totally forgot why i looked for this story in the first place! i saw there was a part two and looked for a part one, (even though i didn't read part two,) and discovered an amazing story. as my character in my story, (it's not a fan fiction and I'm still working on it,) would say, "If this story was a cupcake Diamond would have ate it in three seconds!" (diamond's a picky stubborn cat...long story,) but anyway, I LOVE the story and can't wait to get onto the second! 5 million out of ten!

my only words are "oh-emm-gee..." the story is bloody fantastic! for some reason i feel like Ginny won't die. but who knows? i mean i could always skip to the end of the story and find out but happens, but it's more fun to read Draco arguing with himself. ^_^ 5,000-out-of-10!

Love this story. it makes total sense, in Fan Fiction form that is. sry i don't really know what I'm talking about. But your story caused me to say a great "that's what she said". I was looking over the chapter to see how long it was and said, "OK, it's kinda long but not that long," and my friends burst out laughing. but anywayz, LOVE the story! so glad Draco and Hermione are "friends" now, and i can't wait to see what happens about Ginny and everyone else! 500/10!

Author's Response: Haha thanks! Sorry for the length...though it seems you're okay with that. Thanks for the review!

i loved this story! and i'm going to read the next one also. i like how you, unlike others, slowed them into a friendship instead of being too cliche and making them all of a sudden fall madly in love with eachother. great story keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Precisely the effect I was going for, so this is very encouraging.

Wooo :D. Nice ending! I would actually give a nice review, but I'm much too anxious to read the second part! Hopefully a lil' more romance will be involved ;).

And I hope Hermione finds out about Lucius killing his mother soon! That's gonna be an interesting scene.

Oh! And I love your Draco, heh. He's cute, and very in-character. He's still whiney and a /little/ immature, but I think that's much more IC compared to the "dark and brooding" Draco that inhibits most of the Dramione stories throughout fanfiction.

10/10! (And I don't do that very often)

Author's Response: WOW! Thanks for the wonderful review (yes, it is!). Ooh, more romance to come, fo sho. I'm so happy you like this Draco! I'm afraid I've turned him into a hopeless romantic...but hopefully, he'll stay IC, anyhow. Thanks for the 10/10! It means so much :).

"No. I don't feel like killing you today."
Lol, great line ^_^.
I'm enjoying your story so far! It's interesting. Usually I don't like diary-entry formats, but you turn it into a first person story format throughout it so I'm dealing with it :). Draco's an ass - nice going! Most people soften him up too much. -keeps reading-