This is just wowza!! Your words are so lyrical, it creates the whole piece to be melodic, as if strung along to a rhythm. You can just picture everything; the imagery is beautiful. Grief and sorrow seem to have been portrayed with perfection and I know that it's likely a lot of us have felt on the edge of despair before with the blackness. You've captured it beautifully.

Your work, as ever, is so inspiring. It's powerful and sways the reader into a dream. I'll shut up now . . .