five girls, no. five women, five DANGEROUS women. Genma has fallen into their grasp, and endures horrific tortures as he becomes the play thing and entertainment of these deranged rouges and can only wait for konoha's rescue.torture, masochism MATURE ONLY

third commentary...cause I
can, and they keep my mind on the story, really they do, it's
amazing. Besides I can't constantly right fight and torture scenes
they hurt my brain. XD

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Ashi-kun: Ok we are back
with another commentary of the cast! So how is everyone doing today?

Kyoukou: I'm fine...but I
still hate you.

Itsumi: Kyoukou that was
uncalled for

Senchi: Yes it was

Aikyo: what can you do
she's a bitch.

Satou: I LIKE SUGAR!
-WHACK!- OW! AIKYO-CHAAAAN!

Aikyo: Shut it.

Satou: -shoves pocky in
mouth- neh...

Aikyo: -glare-

Ashi-kun: Anyway! We
actually have something to get done today!

all except Ashi-kun: We
do?

Ashi-kun: My comment on
the last chapter probably left some people confused, so I've decided
to explain the power over the fan-characters of this story.

Itsumi: Makes sense.

Ashi-kun: I thought so
too.

Satou: well then let's get
this show on the road.

Aikyo: Didn't I tell you
not to talk.

Satou: -closes mouth-

Aikyo: that's better.

Itsumi: Ashi-kun mind if I
start?

Ashi-kun: Go for it.

Itsumi: All right. Well
starting at the top; the leader of our "organization" is
Senchi Damarikomu; commonly referred to as the blind ninja because of
the headband covering her eyes. She is the oldest of us at
twenty-four, she is an ex-Anbu from the cloud village; in the land of
thunder, and is the brain child of Ashi-kun. Making it so that she
belongs one hundred percent to the authoress herself.

Senchi: Do you want to
give them my phone number too?

Ashi-kun: Shush.

Senchi: -grumble-

Aikyo: Then there is Satou
Higashi, she is the youngest of us at twenty and is known most
commonly for the flaming pocky stick that is always in her mouth; she
is an ex-jounin from the rain village in the rain country, and though
she was meant to be the brain child of an ex-friend of our Authoress,
she is in fact from Ashi-kun's mind.

Satou: Why is that?

Ashi-kun: she was feeling
particularly uncreative that day. Which at the time made me upset
because I had to do everything from giving you a name to figuring out
your powers without her help, because she liked to go silent on the
other end of the line A LOT, but looking at it now, the fact that she
was being lazy was actually a good thing. Because if she had made you
up, she would have the right to pull you from the story...but she
doesn't so I'm happy.

Satou: oooooooh. OK!

Senchi: then we have Aikyo
Sonoda who is the third oldest at twenty-two; she is an ex-jounin
from the stone village in the earth country; and is known most
commonly for the leather whip she carries and her obsessive need to
torture men who she deems attractive. She was actually a
collaboration, between Ashi-kun and her friend
Guardian-Devil-Hawkeye. Now though the both of them worked on her; a
big majority belongs to our authoresses friend; though she does not
contribute to the writing of the story personally she is one of the
first people who gets to read the new chapters sometimes before they
are released. And, she owns a good seventy-five percent of Aikyo;
while Ashi-kun owns twenty-five percent. Aikyo's colors, general
personality, blood line trait, village, and weapons were the idea of
Guardian-Devil-Hawkeye; making it so that Aikyo's body type, written
personality, clothing and other Jutsu all belong to Ashi-kun.

Itsumi: Wow...good thing
they're friends.

Senchi: On the contrary,
the fact that they are friends will not have any standing in the
story, for the two have already made an agreement that in the off
chance that anything were to happen Ashi-kun would be permitted to
continue using Aikyo until the story was finished and through the
possible sequel; but then her friend would then take Aikyo's full
ownership.

Satou: but would Aikyo
really make sense outside of this group and setting? She already has
a storyline that involves all of us.

Senchi: Not really, but if
Guardian-Devil-Hawkeye felt the need to write out her past and such
then she would be able to without a problem.

Kyoukou: Makes sense.

Ashi-kun: See not all of
my friends are lazy.

Satou: Next we have
Kyoukou Hitogoroshi she is the second youngest at twenty-one; she is
an ex-jounin from the sand village in the country of wind; most known
for her aggressive personality and the knives that she is always
carrying. She was supposed to be the idea of another friend of the
authoresses but once more turned into the property of Ashi-kun. Our
writer owns seventy-five percent of Kyoukou while the other girl only
owns about twenty-five percent.

Itsumi: How does that work
out.

Satou: Well, when it comes
to Kyoukou Ashi-kun thought of her colors, interacting personality,
jutsu's, village, weapons, clothing, and name

Itsumi: -quirks eyebrow-
then what did the other girl think of?

Satou: her pants,
blood-line trait, body type, and general personality

Aikyo: Man that's sad.

Kyoukou: tell me about it.

Ashi-kun: What can I
say...it was just a day for creative blocks with those two; but it's
cool; just means I don't need their permission for anything. Hell I
could kill them off and they wouldn't be able to do a thing about it.

Satou: EEP! -ducks behind
chair-

Kyoukou: You wouldn't
dare.

Ashi-kun: I was just
giving an example jeez.

Kyoukou: Whatever. Finally
we have Itsumi Ikari she is the second oldest at twenty-three; and is
an ex-medic nin from the mist village in the country of water; she is
most known for the black mask covering the bottom half of her face,
and the wire like threads she uses to heal wounds. She was a
collaboration between Ashi-kun and her friend Kaze; in this Ashi-kun
owns about sixty percent of Itsumi and Kaze owns about forty percent.
Ashi-kun thought up the outfit, jutsu, previous occupation, hair
design, body type, weapons, and personality; while Kaze thought of
the Name, village, bloodline trait, colors, mask, and special
markings.

Satou: So, even though
Ashi-kun thought of the most, Kaze put in a huge chunk of idea?