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It was supposed to be a simple vacation. Just a chance to get away from the daily grind, explore a new city, and catch up with an absent friend. But when that friend happens to be Harry Dresden, all bets are off.

It was supposed to be a simple vacation. Just a chance to get away from the daily grind, explore a new city, and catch up with an absent friend. But when that friend happens to be Harry Dresden, all bets are off.

Equestria finds itself under attack and grossly unprepared for a new and ruthless threat. Fortunately, a certain wizard was pulled into the fight as well, and must lend his knowledge to Equestria and its protectors to help combat this threat.

It was supposed to be a simple vacation. Just a chance to get away from the daily grind, explore a new city, and catch up with an absent friend. But when that friend happens to be Harry Dresden, all bets are off.

Equestria finds itself under attack and grossly unprepared for a new and ruthless threat. Fortunately, a certain wizard was pulled into the fight as well, and must lend his knowledge to Equestria and its protectors to help combat this threat.

Just when Harry thought he was finally done with all the crazy things that have grown out of his involvement with Equestria after gaining Sunset Shimmer as an apprentice, he learns that three creatures have followed him back to Earth.

Harry Dresden has dealt with a lot in his life. But when six mysterious girls pop up claiming to be ponies from another realm, Harry finds himself on a strange roller coaster filled with ponies, Outsiders, and strange Halloween pranks.

It was supposed to be a simple vacation. Just a chance to get away from the daily grind, explore a new city, and catch up with an absent friend. But when that friend happens to be Harry Dresden, all bets are off.

Almost a year has gone by for Harry Dresden since he left Equestria. He'd have written, but between saving his newly discovered brother and destroying a scourge of vampires he's been a little busy. Then out of the blue he receives a strange letter from Twilight asking him to return. With no cases at the moment he eagerly accepts, but his friends aren't the only ponies expecting him. There's been a lot of rumors since his last visit and some ponies aren't too keen on seeing him come back.

EXCELLENT first chapter, I'm psyched to see this series continue. You have these characters spot-on--Bob especially had me laughing out loud.

I do have a couple of nitpicks, though:

First, Harry has a .44, not a .45.

Secondly, when he's talking to Thomas about the car, you should capitalize "Beetle", since the Blue Beetle (being a name) is a proper noun.

Lastly, you wrote, "Whatever eldritch horror Michael was going to confront I doubted it was a fan of puppies." This is an awkward sentence construction--try "I doubted that whatever Eldritch horror Michal was going to confront was a fan of puppies."

...Nah, just kidding. That's pretty damn awesome. I'm glad you also filled us in with what happened after the week in Equestria. I myself haven't actually um... read the Dresden Files, so I'm not sure what/who some of the characters are and who they're affiliated with, y'know?

I'm also very curious to see why they'd call in Dresden. While I wouldn't mind it just being a tea-party gone wrong, I'm not sure I'd appreciate an End-of-Equestria scenario. The prologue to this was... troubling.

And Harry! He's the same sarcastic, logic-trusting wizard he's always been... with a burned-up hand now, it seems. Who knows, maybe somepony will be able to heal it.