This was quite sweet, though I thought that Luna's 'voice' was a little off - she didn't exactly seem the type to quote Shakespeare and such to me in the books, but that might just be a matter of minor personal opinion.

I'm not the hugest fan of Harry/Luna, but I liked this nonetheless. I think you wrote both Harry and Luna pretty well, although they're very hard characters to write perfectly - that's why I don't write them myself. I like that their first kiss was in the forest, with Thestrals nearby and in the middle of a storm, because that's so strange and so Luna-ish. Overall, This was well written and I rather enjoyed it.

This is sweet. Unlike many fanon pairings, I can see the sense in Harry/Luna. Harry felt slightly OOC to me, but I find he's nearly impossible to get right. Surprisingly, Luna felt just a little bit closer, and she's a tough character as well. You have a few SPaG errors throughout this, but they are minor and don't particularly detract. A good job.

I'm not the hugest fan of Harry/Luna, but I liked this nonetheless. I think you wrote both Harry and Luna pretty well, although they're very hard characters to write perfectly - that's why I don't write them myself. I like that their first kiss was in the forest, with Thestrals nearby and in the middle of a storm, because that's so strange and so Luna-ish. I liked your description of Luna in the third paragraph, as well, and I think that's a lovely way to write about her. Spelling and grammar was good, a few places where there could have been commas, but nothing that bad. I do think you could have included a little something about Ginny, though, and why Harry wasn't with her - this seems canon except for that part. The last paragraph is really sweet and romantic, very nice. Good work!

I've never really been a fan of this pairing, but I really really love what you did here. Harry being frustrated and upset after the war was over and getting annoyed with everyone being in his business makes sense. And Luna is the perfect person to just /get/ him and show him how it's okay. But she also has that distinct personality that can make him forget about all of that. It's beautiful. And the bit with the Thestrals is a nice touch too. Harry being able to look at them from Luna's perspective is wonderful and this is just really sweet. Nice job!

Upon reading the title I could have sworn that I had read this already, but it appears I hadn't. This is a sweet little moment between the two of tem and it would make sense that there'd be Thestrals. Not my favourite pairing, but I still enjoyed reading it.