Muke - I agree with Phat, and try bringing the E up in line with the rest of the throw
Nouv - That shit looks straight to me, no crits...
Top - get those letters consistent as first then start playing with different sizes later
DC - I'd work with the RBK for right now, work on the lettering and not so much on the highlights and reflections
Dusk - Try keeping the letters balanced for right now, the D looks bottom left heavy, and the U looks bottom right heavy, the S looks right heavy and the K just has a big wart on the bottom.
Hip - The E's look too hidden and the S looks too squished in the middle, try giving equal space to each letter.

Muke- The M and the U aren't too bad. M actually has some style on it. I would shape it up a little better, but it's a good start. the K and E need some work for sure. And just your whole throw could be proportioned better. But keep at it, it has potential.

Pesoe - I have to agree your first E is hidden. Bring it out more. And I think the leaning style you have (and I have ) looks better when each letter is aligned. Look at the size difference from your P and your last E. Use some graph paper to keep them all the same height. I used to have the same problem (and still get caught doing it a lot).

Dar- That's more of a straight letter. Try to do throws with minimal lines and in smooth motions (one smooth motion is optimal. My throws rarely have more than 3 lines per letter) Throws are meant to be done quickly. Research some throws and copy a few to get the jist of how to form some letters. Then base your letters off of that. But remember, don't bite, just draw influence.

Tempo- listen to H1P3. work on letters instead of trying to to stupid fills.
Pesoe- i kinda like the bottom one better because mostly the P is better. imo. but there both sick. but then again nouv kills it with the throws so maybe just listen to him ahha