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The Divine Horror - Possible Death Note sequel?

The Divine Horror: Rejected Revolution

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==Table of Contents==

==Characters==
Ugami - Main character
Pak - Main character companion
Keith - Main character companion
Tsam - Main character companion
Anos - Main character family from home
Bee - Main character family from home
Colt - Main character family from home
O - mountain man at center of Earth
Near - narrator
Earth demon - meets character after school -- teaches about underground fighting
Satan - leader of Hell
==Places==
World
School
Home
Hell
Heaven
Mt. Ever Rest
Outer lands -- (for exiled and prisoners)
The land rings (saturn concept)
==Concepts==
Telepathy and clairvoyant wars
Shadow entities with wave and radio communication
An underground legion almost as the flipped version of the world's surface
The rings of society (saturn-like concept)
The outer lands for the evil scum and exiled prisoners
The school organization for training the new comers
Battling the possessed by shadow entities

*All of the art used in this video was from the "Death Note" anime and manga, and/or Google Images.*

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== Prologue - From top to bottom ==

Ryuk & Near in set -

Ryuk: What are you going to do with that?
Near: I'm going to destroy it.
Ryuk: Are you sure that's a good idea?
Near burns the death note to ashes.

The consequence is responsible for unleashing spirits
that have most of the telepathic impact on the world.

End scene

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Ryuk and the Shinigami King in set -

Ryuk: It's so boring here.
Shinigami King: Give your death note to that man...
Ryuk gives his death note to a world leader--also Ugami's father.

End scene

Ugami's father writes his own name in Ryuk's death note in the form
of an epic.

This story shows what he wrote and how he became the head of the
bottom of the pyramid.

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== Story - Part One ==

(Near narrating)

Once upon a time...

The world was being stolen from a group of shadows that aimed to
rule the world...

Most of the entities were able to remotely control their presence
in a shadow form. They could communicate with living, physical
beings in the world. The stronger ones were rumored to have been
in hiding underground, while their shadows caused chaos on the
surface.

With communication and physical brute force, this 'legion' was able
to scramble the surface while dominating the underworld. No one
was safe from fraud or exposure. Many organizations were destroyed
or shut down because unsafe practices or inexperience.

Wars began and telepathy was a weapon; vulnerable eyes were reaped
by deception. Luckily someone above was watching...

A mountain had formed at the center of the surface of the world,
seemingly cutting the bridge to the underworld and the surface.
A world war followed, and as a result, most of the monsters on the
surface were disappearing.

The spirits and shadows remained...The world was slightly more
peaceful and organizations were set up to prepare newcomers for
the adaptation process.

Mankind fought as much as they could. A saturn-ring-like establishment
was formed as a new living geography; those who committed to 'shadow
magic' were exiled to the outer rings, and the corrupt and possessed were jailed.

'The corrupt' were studied and most reports stated that: "they didn't
even know where they were--like they were in two places at once" They were
also noted to be somewhat deceptive.

Meanwhile, anyone who traveled to the center of the world either never
returned, or established secrecy.

An organization that practiced as a global school opened. The alumni
were children and scored in simulated performance tests. Based on
their results, the children were shipped alone or in groups to the ring
and division that operated their best skills.

The perfect scores were sent farther inland, and prepared to climb the
mountain.

The failures that couldn't overcome the shadows were jailed and put in
a 'limbo state' closer to the outer rings, and were monitored as well
as limited in abilities.

The ones that failed the simulations with crime as a result were exiled.

Later on there was one perfect score.

The perfect score was leaving the school and prepared to go the mountain
but disappeared before being moved.

He shows up later, however, as the world's best gladiator. And on his
new throne, guess where he decides to go?

Mount Ever Rest.

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== Part 2 - School ==

Boys and girls are taken into the school at as little as 5 years-old...

As a child, the main character, Ugami, is at home with his parents
and younger brothers and sisters: Anos, Bee, and Colt, in a village town
in one of the inner rings that was suited to be inhabited by breeding folk.

When Ugami is taken to the school, he masters the art of science and math,
historical simulations and futuristic possibilites, as well as the native
language.

He aces all the real-life drills and is eventually accepted to go on
group simulations as a teenager.

He is also taught about letters, when given physical properties and
observations. Such as when an uppercase L falls backwards, it creates
a short wall to climb as opposed to falling forwards and creating
a steep ramp.

When Ugami is grouped with other alumni at his skill level, they
are expected to complete simulations like manning a boat in a storm,
and surviving in various simulated ecosystems and wildlife environments.
The higher their grade, the harder it gets.

At the end of an 18-year course, Ugami is released and prepped for the
ultimate test--climbing the mountain at the center of the world. His
classmates were released to their designated areas.

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== Part 3 - Ugami's life ==

Ugami is deeper inland preparing for his departure to the mountain.

His classmates: Pak, Keith, and Tsam have left for their new places on
the world.

Pak graduated as a master architect.
Keith graduated as a master mathematician.
Tsam graduated as a ninja.

A night before leaving for the mountain, Ugami meets a figure while
alone in the woods.

The creature is a beast with wings, and can speak. The creature shows
Ugami cool things and tricks and later offers a Ugami a better life
if he follows him to the outer rings.

Ugami falls for the offer and journeys with the creature to the outer
lands.

Ugami is also offered many tricks, as well as incredible strength from
the creature, and soon understands that his life force is put into
a duck; and if the duck dies, he will too. Ugami figured a decent
life-cheat would be worth a duck's lifespan.

While Ugami is on his way along with the creature, he takes his new
prized duck to his old home, and meets with his brothers and sisters in
secret before leaving to the outer rings with the creature.

Ugami soon enters an underground gladiating tournament with his new
found powers and dominates the league. He is seen as unstoppable and
also uses the creature as a friend for knowledge while he traverses
through the clans and the outer rings.

One night, Ugami has a dream that he is raped by dark sorcerers, meets
a minotaur, and is forced to eat a glowing purple flower.

Ugami receives a lot of wealth and power in the outer lands.
He is tried and fights against many clans.

Ugami is eventually rediscovered by the inner ring system through fame.
He is captured by world leaders through deception and brought back
inland.

As the school's best student, the world leaders offer Ugami a chance
to climb the mountain or be imprisoned.

He accepts the offer to climb the mountain, however a deal is made
that he can bring anyone he wants, so he decides to ask his old classmates,
and they agree to go.

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== Part 4 - The Mountain ==

Ugami and his team endure fierce cold, avalanches, and snow beasts
as they travel up the mountain. They eventually reach a large door
and they ring the bell. No one answers for 3 hours and they are forced
to squat and run in place to stay warm.

When the door opens, a mysterious dark figure greets them and asks them
to come inside. The figure goes out of sight for a few minutes while
they are waiting by the door, wondering why it's so warm inside.

The figure returns and tells Ugami: "I am O."

O then continues to tour them around, showing them cool tech things.
Later he says: "I know why you're here; you may leave as you choose not
to stay, but you can't stay."

Afterwards, they go down a dark hallway, which led into another room. O
opened the door and pressed a button on a desk that took up most of the
back wall. A portal opens in the center of the room. O says: "It goes
to either Heaven or Hell--but I've never seen anyone come back."

Before entering, Ugami explains to his team that a duck holds his life
force. They understand and turn back to guard the duck. Ugami enters
the portal and fades to black.

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Ugami in the underworld

When Ugami finally reaches the underworld by going to the center
of the world, he travels from the outer rings of the underworld
to the center, making it to his father's lair.

Ugami finds a slave labor union near the throne that is constantly
working to the background music demons are making. It is a wheel
that constantly flows oxygen to the fires. There are many
workers, demons, and spirits.

Ugami fights many demons and near the end, he watches two great
demons battle at his father's throne.

Before he escapes through a portal behind his father's throne,
the entire underground kingdom has a meltdown to a song. Ugami
blacks out after entering the portal...