Friday, June 19, 2015

Plot Bunny - EPL Football Stars in Racist Orgy Shocker!

I saw this news story floating around the UK papers. Some members of Premier League football (soccer for my US readers) team Leicester City filmed themselves taking part in an orgy with some sex workers in Thailand. This is the type of story the UK tabloids loves to whip themselves up into a salivating froth over as witnessed by this Sunday Mirror piece.

There is an uncensored video floating around on the various porn clip sites (I found it on XVideos after about 2 seconds of searching).

I'm not really interested in the morality of it. Young, stupid oafs behave in young, stupid, oafish way and say young, stupid, oafish things. I doubt the sex workers were that fussed so long as they were adequately compensated for their time and work.

My interest as a writer is the potentials of the scenario and getting an ear for the dialogue. Especially as the setting is Thailand, a country known for having an active sex industry (and therefore a good setting for my type of erotic horror story), but not one I've actually visited (I hope this wasn't too obvious in my recent story "Number 66"). While I've been toying with adding annoying SJWs to my roster of asshole victims, the old standby of oafs being oafish to sex workers and getting their (disproportionate) comeuppance at the hands of sexy succubi is always fun. Work out what interesting forms the succubi take when they reveal themselves and hey presto, instant manyeyedhydra story.

Now that's the obvious route a story like this can take, but then the little black cells started to spark and think about other options and pathways.

The one thing modern mainstream media is very good at is omitting context, especially context that gets in the way of establishing a juicy narrative guaranteed to whip the audience up into a forth. Context is the bigger picture that might show the events being witnessed in a different light.

In this case we have a minute and a quarter of some guys indulging in an orgy with some working girls and making a lot of degrading and derogatory remarks about their (I'm assuming) paid-for-escorts. Now, the thing is, if you took any random minute and a quarter of a dom roleplaying with a sub, it's going to make the dom look like an asshole. And if you want to, you can likely take any random small slices of someone's life and stitch them together in a configuration that presents the person in any way you choose to present them. Reality TV shows run off this chicanery.

For example, a writer/storyteller could take a fictionalised version of this minute and a quarter and pan the picture out to reveal a more complex scenario. Within that minute and a quarter frame it's fairly clear-cut - those characters are horrible, we want them to come to a Bad End (in my erotic horror stories, that's usually literally). Pan outside that fictionalised version of a minute and a quarter frame and...

Maybe this is all role-play. Some usually-perfectly-gentlemanly guys wanted to experience being in a really filthy orgy. They hired the sex workers, responsibly went through with them in advance what was and wasn't permitted and the minute and a quarter is a snapshot of an artificially arranged scenario. Maybe their oafish behaviour was encouraged by the working girls themselves. Why? To liven up the orgy to give better client satisfaction. Because they're not actual sex workers and playing at being degraded cheap whores is a turn-on for them. Because this is a honey trap and they need to show their marks off in the worst possible light.

That's the fun part of playing what if? or devil's advocate. What the storyteller initially presents to the audience might become more complex with future information. It can be rewarding to veer the story off down a path the audience was not expecting. It's great if you can switch the audience's perception of a character and maybe have them hoping for a different ending than the one they were expecting.

There's definitely stuff I can play around with here. I might try both versions. The conventional story where usual asshole victims come to sexy Bad End at vaginas of succubi/monster girls. And maybe an unconventional story where things are not as they first appear.

As a should-be-obvious postscript, I hope people aren't thinking I'm attempting to defend the real-life people caught up in this scandal. Sometimes people are assholes that hire women for sex, treat them like shit, are found out and then punished accordingly. Sometimes there's no more to the story than that. (Although it goes without saying - modern mainstream media is not very trustworthy. Always leave yourself open to the possibility there might be more to the story than the narrow slice you're being fed)

If your muse is piqued enough ya could make two versions. A sexy succubus piece without the erotic component then post it in some places with a link to your sexy version. Just saying, it could create new fans since folks love real world satires ;-)

Make another Castlevania succubus story!! You Alucard story is one of the best I have read!On topic, I doubt they did anything wrong I think it's just another lynch on someone so people would buy newspapers. But if they did do something wrong I they should get what they deserve

Responding to the on topic bit. It's curious how things change. In the past they'd have been hung out to dry by the media just for the hiring-prostitutes-for-an-orgy part. Nowadays more and more people take the attitude that what happens behind closed doors between adults is fine so long as everyone is consenting. It was unsurprising the paper chose to push the racism angle (one of the men calls one of the sex workers 'slit-eye'). The thing is, this is a dirty orgy. During a dirty orgy participants are going to say dirty things to each other. They're not going to use lovey-dovey terms of endearment. A truer indication would be how they behaved to their hires either before or after. An example would be a similar scandal involving US secret service agents and escorts in Colombia. They tried to get out of paying their escorts afterwards,which - even after ignoring the much higher inappropriateness of government agents exposing themselves to honey traps etc - is clearly cuntish behaviour.

M. E. Hydra, I thank you for the post earlier. I will someday get my muse working again. As for another Alucard story, we will see. Like Hydra, I have a ton of ideas, just that my muse took a very extended vacation (that bitch). LOL

With you artists it's always the muse! But hey better late then never? I mean we got a Final Fantasy 7 remake and the Last Guardian in one this year. If I waited for that I can wait for more Castlevania succubi stories :D

I had a wobble when I lost confidence in my ability to anything. Mostly pulled through that, but with a few annoying missteps along the way (like starting Okasare Kenny too early before I'd finished other stuff off). I think I might sneak Castlevania into the Jackson in HRPG-World series at some point. So many scenes to choose from, although I haven't really played that series much. The boss fight in Mirror of Fate looks especially juicy inspiration:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b33LIxMwk1c