Really enjoyed this chapter. Love the interactions between Mary and Matthew. I'm guessing Mary is going to have to try to get info from Richard. That's dangerous for her. Can't wait to see what happens next!

I love the idea that Anna is living in the cottage, rather than in limbo at the house, and that Matthew suddenly remembered he's a lawyer and might be able to help. Looking forward to what he's discovered.

Thank you both for the kind reviews! This is my first time trying something like this, so I appreciate any and all feedback. I should have been more clear about Mary and Matthew's living situations. In my mind, Mary was living with Cousin Isobel while Matthew lived in his own, separate house.

Promissing beginning. Just a little inconsistency I think, 'This conversation had been routine since Matthew came home to Cousin Isobel's house straight from work three weeks ago. "We've got it!" he had called through the house until Mary emerged from her room.' That last bit makes it seem like Mary is living at Grantham House. But later you write '"I know you do, love," Matthew said exasperated at his fiancé's persistence.' If they aren't married yet, they couldn't be living together in the same house. Not at that time at least. Unless I am misunderstanding what you wrote? :)