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I loved it. A little part of me lit up with happiness when I read this. Especially that closing paragraph had to be my favorite. Honestly this made my day. I RED TONS OF STORIES FOR THIS CONTEST BUT YOURS TAKES THE CAKE. Good luck !

I gave this a heart because the ending was very touching, but it was a lot of telling and not enough showing. You get to write 1200 words! You should use them to show as much of their love as possible. Show a scene at one of their dates or the first day they met. Something like that. But over all, it was a very sweet story. Good luck :)