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Review:

Remus says:Heya! Perelandra here with your Hufflepuff review! Sorry that it has taken me forever but life has been a bit crazy lately!

You know, I got a bit worried when I saw that this was less than 700 words. But gah! Now I'm upset that there isn't more!

Your description was fantastic. The feelings and thoughts Mary had felt very real, specially towards the end where she's still hoping that they will see that she was a witch. I love how you took one character that had less than a chapter and gave her her own story; her background. It left me wanting to know more. Was her mother still alive? What happened to the sister? How did she react when she fled the ministry? What happened!! Haha!

I love how you gave us this tiny glimpse of her life before the Ministry. This made me feel worse for Mary than the book did. For me, Mary was just a muggle-born mother being unjustly accused of stealing magic. Your story made me think that she's a daughter, a sister, a mother, and a wife being accused of stealing magic and could possibly die from her 'crime'. Now I'm glad that the Trio saved her!

Gah! such a great story.

Thank you for letting me read this, and if one day you decide to add more to it...let me know! I'll come running to read it!

Until next time

--Rosie

Author's Response: Hello! Sorry for the late response for this! I know what you mean about life getting crazy!!!
I'm so happy to hear that you liked the way I wrote Mary. She's a character that always stuck out to me reading her small part in Deathly Hallows, because she always seemed like a good person. It made me want to explore how she would feel being told the way she was born was a crime, because it's always so heartbreaking when horrible things happen to good people.
I'm so happy this story made you think about other aspects of Mary, and that you enjoyed it so much! Thank you for the lovely review!
Cassie :)