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Author Comments

My brother and some of his friends thought up the story and asked me to make an animation, since I haven't used flash in a while and I am still kind of new at it, so I thought it would be a good place for me to start.

Since I am still new at this please be understanding and don't blam because it doen't quite match up with the pros here.

I optimized the audio but I have had audio problems on NG before so if there are any I will fix them.

***EDIT***

If you are going to give a critical review, offer some constructive criticism. Not just you suck you poo head...

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2007-08-27 17:34:10

Its ok.

4/5. 7/10. Not a very funny flash nor a good one but its ok. Though you used the audio in the right places, its just not greatly drawn out. Where's The humor? Granny vs Dog. I'm sure the title sugessts it is but you dont make it look like it. Come on. Wheres the Fighting? Suspense? Action? I just dont want to see a gun cane shoot and thats it... I mean when they look each other eye to eye, I mean its pretty intense but nope... Use cane. Boom. It needs the real fighting. like killing and killing from head to toe. I hope you do better next time.