The Truth Your Eyes Deliver

Morning approaches with soft, natural light
Like every day, on cue with expectation
Yet the difference in its effect on me today - is you
In the way you stand by the bedroom window
Facing its welcoming caressive glow
Allowing your eyes to reflect its warm glint
A casting glimmer of breathlessness
Shadows cling close along the contours of your face
Showcasing your best features
The chiseled cheeks I love to touch
The charming chin below your mischievous grin
My emotions get the best of me
Overflowing with obsessive adoration
With the instinct to run to you in need
With desire to touch the object of my affection
Yet, I stay completely still, lost in the scene
Observing your masculinity's silent seduction
I am jealous of the dawn's lucky chance
To kiss your lips first with sunlit sensuality
I trace down along your silhouette to admire
Your mesmerizing morning erection
Then I wait, aroused, feigning patience
Watching your eyes pan the painted sky outside
As if they are searching for something out there
Perhaps, the elusive secret that starts your day
I wait, and wait, and wait some more
Until the mystery almost kills me
Finally, your eyes slowly sweep across the room
Swallowing me whole in their enticing grip
An expression holding sunlight's power within them
Silently, they seductively speak,
"Come hither, my love."
And in that moment, I am made whole
Feeling such sweet unrestrained shivers
From the truth your eyes deliver...........
I am loved!

Comments

Hi Lisa....Thank you so much! I was very personally and emotionally inspired and then engrossed with how to express that in my wording of this...I hope that it comes across as very intimate.....I am very sentimental about love and it makes it a prevalent theme in my poetry. This poem is close in my heart, and my favorite poem I have written this year I believe. I am so happy you found it beautiful....Yay! Bless you. xo ;) Love n Hugs

Friggin' BRILLIANT!!.., this write reads aloud like a soliloquy from a stage play!!..... it is a most excellent example of just how much of a firm grip on the English language you possess!!...... your inner voice shining through as the amazing, angelic, observer, you truly are..... which is an absolute must for anyone attempting to become a great writer...... this expression of love is a most revealing glimpse into what makes you such an excellent conveyer of the romantic side of life...... your words are SO very honestly from your heart that no matter what you're endeavoring to convey.... you are sublimely impactful!!......as a writer..... you're heading directly into the ether....... as a woman....... there are none better!!...... and I...... feel blessed to know you!!......PINNED!!....one of my favorite Cherie Sumner poems EVER!!........ smiles.......T xo ❤❤❤✴👌

Oh wow, T! You are going to make me cry! I could not wait for you to read this poem because I was so emotionally charged when I wrote it.....I hoped you felt my heart. I am very sentimental about what I observe about you in our every day life....You are an inspiration that cannot help but be a part of my writing...Romance is a state of mind...and since I think of you all the time, it is a constant motivation. Thank you for being that continual presence that makes me want to write and express my feelings....I love you! xo Kisses Your devoted wife, C xo

Awww...Thank you so much, Greg. I really felt this write in my soul as I tried to express my feelings...I am so inspired by my new husband...lol He gives me motivation to write in a way that I could not do without his influence....This write is my personal favorite I have done in a very long time because of the emotions that welled up inside me when I wrote. I am so grateful you understand the heart of what I write. I am so pleased you say you love this. Bless you. xo ;)

"Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder"
An old aphorism often said
But when mine meet yours, they speak to me
As I lay here in our bed
.They say you love me truly
With their penetrating stare
As the sunlight bathes your body
Standing manly, and all bared
."Come to me my Angel"
Your words bring chills upon my spine
I melt into your sweet embrace
Then I am yours, and you are mine

Hi dear Larry....Your verses in response feel so romantic and capture the essence I had hoped to write in mine.....lol When you love someone, you cannot help but to study them and want to remember the way they look at you ....that special unique way they validate who you are to them. I loved writing this poem...a special one as it captures a memory I wanted to save. Thank you for always understanding the heart of me. Love n Hugs, xo ;)

I do not know if that is a good thing or bad thing, dear Larry.....lol...But it is the only way I know how to write....from what I feel and experience in life...Thank you for your kind words. Love n Hugs