Well, I've got to say, I'm really interested to see where you take this. You're very descriptive, which is a huge plus. I'm legitimately curious as to what's going to happen next, so I'll certainly be keeping a close eye on this one. All in all, it's a tight, well-made chapter, and you should be quite pleased with it.

Bummer... Lux got owned!
Although, I can't help but wonder who that girl was and who else is on the planet. Maybe the people in the spaceship? And they might be following her from close behind because she couldn't have survived for that long in that pit. Ideas, ideas..

Anyway, this is another great story! Really looking forward to the next chapter, I almost forgot how well you write! Wishing you all the best, Hoyster.