Awesome beginning, though excuse me for ask, are the Night Riders work for the Nightwatch, Daywatch or Inqusistion? I believe the Daywatch because of the way some people act, but you never know. Anyway, update when you can :3

wow! this your first ff? it is great and so well written. very exciting. Not to long not too short. It is really good! The only thing I can critique is that why do you have the names in all capitals? I mean you can do that if you want, just asking why. Other than that, this is great. KEEP ON GOING!