Since this is just a draft, I can overlook the glitches (as I do in my own drafts) but I was bothered by the unannounced shifts from first to third person. But anyone who has been a parent of a fourteen year old will find himself in compassion for Amelia - the physical torture, the false suspicions, and even the hard facts in her family history.. Best wishes to the writer! (Roy Haymond, Jr., whose "It Don't Bloom When Things Is Bad" is in the Drama file)