Author Comments

This is my entry for 1st round of the NMAE tournament (made in 21 days). The theme was "sweet and sour". I wanted to challenge myself a bit, so I decided to go with something film noir-inspired.
To be honest I ended up getting a bit bored with this animation, and no matter how much I stared at it it didn't seem to help. Buuut at least I've got a list of things that worked as well as things that didn't now.

Reviews

Rated 5 / 5 stars2013-08-03 10:35:25

Great animation skills done in a short notice, I can see that you got talent. Your animation story is interesting, movements are fluid, voice acting are synced and cool. I don't have to say much as most of the reviewers below me had pointed out your animation's strengths and weaknesses. Such as cloudy, short, need more such series, more potential to be a story, etc.
P.S. The voice of the detective kinds of somehow reminds me of Snake from Metal Gear Solid. :/