dark, I adore all literary things that are dark. :3 now this, is really well done. not a single flaw within its depths, nothing that I can really detect in my eyes. a lovely start to something that looks as though it could be something really grand. _ I hope you continue this.

There are certain powers priest have, rites of exorcism. These “arcane” powers are not their own, they come from the faith of the populace in God. Could a faithless human society fall to the devil? I plan to touch on this in my “The Last Man’s Warrior” series.

Good one. For some reason I found 'Daemionette' a bit funny. Oh well. It was good, but maybe you should drop the description of her weight, as this seems rather needless. And 'jade' should not be capitalized.