that was truely a touching story! i was almost crying and believe me it takes alot to make me cry. Your truely talented, i love how u made Emmett such a pain in the ass, or how you made Japer seam like he has emotions not just feel them, i love how there was very little Bella cause i find her a bitch, i like how you made Rose like awesome not just a bitchy person, Alice, i kinda wish there was more her, perfect with esme and carslisle! Max, you did good, but is she preggo? and whats with the mating? Fang, he had a alot of emotion i like that! Iggy your soooo smart i luv his new power. Nudge is awesome and you out lined it, Gazzy you did great and the water thing it had me twicey (Idk how to spell, angel you made her like she should be, sweet and lovable! KEEP ON WRITTING!

You made all of the characters perfect. This is definitely one of the better mr fanfics I've read. Once I started, I couldn't stop. xD I kept reading this even through lunch. I'm such a nerd but oh well. Keep writing and great job.

katy chapter 24 . 4/19/2010

I want you to write a sequel , and i think it should on how totla finds his owner and max turns out to be pregnant, they all found their parents.

And fangs mother dies and fang is left with his dad, whom doesn't want him.

then about 5 yrs later or something they all met again and live happily evre after

for a sequal you should have max and the flock hanging with the cullens and going to school and stuff when a kid and his family moves there who had been at itex. they make friends and then one itex building reboots and they go together to defeat it.

Guest chapter 24 . 11/22/2009

this has such a nice ending, it kind of makes me cry. it was supprising when max was pregnant. Good job! O