So Put Them In Charge For A Welcome Change!

If you’re anything like me, wouldn’t you agree that it’s time for someone to finally show you why you’ve failed to lose those extra 20 pounds? Obviously you’re eating the wrong foods, and since you don’t want to hear about it over and over, we will offer this discount for today only. That’s the best way to get you motivated, no?

How’s that for breaking EVERY SINGLE RULE ABOVE in just 54 words?

Read it to yourself and notice how you feel.

Have someone else read it to you and notice how you feel… ABOUT THEM.

Compare to this:

I agree, maintaining your optimum weight and overall health can challenging with how busy schedules can be and the limited options available. If you, like me, can see the possibilities for real changes in your weight, energy levels, and overall fitness, could you find yourself taking the first step toward making those changes? Now, take a moment for yourself to see how it works. You may look back upon this and say “That was the best decision I’ve ever made about my health and wellness!”