I'm really speechless. I think I have never been more that emotionally invested in a story before. And that's a sign of your formidable storytelling skills. For me, this story pushes every damn button! And I mean it.
I think I have never been more excited for a chapter of your story. And it gave me so much more thank I hoped for.
So, thank you!
P.S. You bet I will read that chapter over and over again. Right now I cannot think of any way this story could get any better...

So Sorry! Real life was a bitch. I'm halfway through but translating it in a good way is easier said than done as I had to realize 😅
If you're still interested, I'll try to speed it up a little bit...
Beste Grüße!

First, I fucking LOVE your story. I don't know how to emphazise that, but it really is perfect.
But at this point I was like 'Hold on! HOLD ON! Wait a moment!' Patrick is a gamer, right? Is that safe word what I think it is? If it was what I think it is, this story got even more awesome - if this was even remotely possible.

LOVE IT!
I love to know what makes a guy want to get a muscle monster, getting to know the whole picture. And the part where he slowly turns into a shredded freak and get proud of his achievment, instant boner material.
More of Jeff!

I really like your pic, PhantomderOma. I think of images of how you and other big muscle men look when I do my sets in the gym. It allows me to put more effort into my sets and gives me a bigger natural high.