it was so cute Kawaii! Anyways I thought this was a good fanfic... but at some points it was a little vague... I wish you made more chapters to find out what happens to the baby and stuff... but that's only me.

Yuffine just makes me wanna go hug somebody! It's so cute! And I love how yours are always deep, Mako. Thanks again for all the help! Hey, this is like the only fic I've ever read where in the end Godo didn't suck.