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Elliott

The morning has come and so you must go like the morning’s dew or winter’s snow I will see you again when your back in town to calm this hectic chaos down you were once in love with me then you found a more reliable dependency one that wouldn’t leave you for another and the greater expense wasn’t that much of a bother so now you’ve stranded me to find a different kind of piece of mind one that cannot accomplish a simple feat and just like a piece it’s incomplete you should clean up or I should tell you to leave you say you want to cause you know Im naive but the feeling lingers and the absence I dread and life is the sun it’s always over my head too bright to see it for what it is and when you finally get it the season changes but it’s our fault orbiting to different position

I THINK IT'S A GREAT POEM BECAUSE I COULD RELATE TO IT AND I'M HAPPY SOMEONE WROTE SOMETHING ABOUT THIS BECAUSE IT SOMETHING THAT SEEM TO HAPPENED ALOT NOT JUST TO ME BUT TO ALOT OF PEOPL E I KNOW AND DON'T REALLY KNOW THAT MUCH SO MY COMMENT I S THAT IT A GREAT POEM AND I LIKED IT ALOT .

hey elliott,My name is emily and i really like your poem, because im a film student at a high school, andan assignment i had was to get a poem and write basically a short poem and all thisthen film it and my first poem glorified marijuanaand my teacher was gona take of on letter gradeso I said I was gona , basically im gonna use your poem for my short film because im gonna shotit good, if you wana hear whatI will film e-mail me

This poem reminds me of what one of my friend who has gone thru with someone who left our town for some-thing she couldn't control she found out that therewas nothing better but it was too late so anyway that was beautiful thank you for that!keep on writing

i like the thought or the message of your poem.. but there's something wrong wtih your delivery.. I think you have poor choice of words. try expanding your vocabulary so you could write a better one and so that you could express yourself in a better way