Hello.
I fixed it the way it sounds more natural to me but some spots that you once put stress on, like "the gear can be handed in(does it mean that the singer says he can give whatever he puts on, but his longings aren't for some reason? I'm not sure though)", are hardly understandable, at least from a standpoint of translating into Japanese. So I translated it the way I got a hold of it and hope you understand it.