I like how you designed your article. Your style of writing is free-flowing which made your conversation with the readers very casual and cool. You were also clear and straight to the point when it comes to having your New Year’s Resolution. It was also full of animated description and good sense of humor. Although I hade a hard time reading your article (I have to look very close to the monitor), I still had a great time reading your article. Kudos!

It’s nice to see your creativity the way you presented your article. Actually, it’s unique but I think be considerate to the eyes of your readers like me. It seems it’s really difficult to read this type of article. You know, I am here to get entertain and be educated but not to make an effort (zooming in and out) just to know your output. Overall, please do improve the font text of the article if you still want to continue this style of blogging.

creative way presenting your article but I got tired scrolling (hahaha) maybe next time you shouldn’t make things harder for us just ti get your article, and I notice that you don’t have a lead sentence (or it was your writing style not to put lead sentences).

I appreciate your effort, In fact, this layout is good for a teen magazine. However, readers don’t have enough time to ‘zoom in’ your article in order for them to understand it. It’s nice that you put a lot of creativity to your work, but don’t sacrifice the content and readability of your work for the designs/layouts.

Your layout is very creative however there’s a problem with the font. I have read your article and I can say that you did a great job. I hope that these resolutions will be followed to become a better YOU.