Any comments? We struggled in time succinct. Literally the original take was like close to eight minutes long. There was also an error in one of the edits that left us quite perplexed. We are going to get a legit editor and make it look more professional but the lack of sound and a super-high quality camera depressed the production value quite a bit.

If anyone wants to see the original script let me know or has any feedback as to how I can adapt to channel 101 standards and practices.