Need help translating

My friend and I are making a home movie, and it involves a scene where a man tries to convince a character to buy a hotel room in Bolivia.

My friend wrote it, but I just want to make sure his sentences sound authentic, and his grammar/spelling are all correct. I want a native-speaking person to be able to understand this portion of the script!

If you have any questions about the intent of the words, or what we're trying to say, please just ask! Thanks a lot, I really appreciate your help!