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Dear Arpit,Without going into critical analysis, I'll just comment on what I read......And let me tell you, the reading was good....though it could had been better but it certainly doesn't contradict the talent you possess.... In poetry, to say, whether a poem good or bad is meaningless because it's the emotion which speaks not words... Words only compliment the emotions.... Though the title seems quite off-track in beggining but as the poem goes on, it's realised that there couldn't had been a better title to this... Keep going like this untill your poems also raise themselves beyound all the points of references. Good work!!