Very well done, I think that this is one of your better poems - It has a cohesively compleate feel. you state the problem and you show how it needs to be fixed - the solution. but you do it in a way that makes one think and feel ( or try to feel what your conveying). Very well done indeed

Wow, this is really a deep piece, and one of my favorites. It's been a while since I've heard from you, but you were right when you said that this was well worth the wait. Please post more soon and check out my work as well.