Grace is really starting to grow on me. I love how she blames hormones. I'm sure that's what it is, sweetie ;)

I think the best part about this chapter was Grace's interactions with the Slytherins. Well, if she and Snape are going to be doing anything, she really has to stop accusing him without proof and she really can't be calling him names, although it's good to see that she's realized that. The Regulus part made this chapter, though. I absolutely loved it!

I especially loved how Lily assumed that Remus and Grace were... well, you know! ;) That was funny! I sense that Remus is decidedly not a ladies man and that Lily's assumption might have scarred him for life.

Ooh, and the marauders interacting with each other was very nice as well. I loved the little banter between Sirius and James. It's also really good to see James opening up a little bit more to Grace. Potters must stick together, am I right?

This was a really good chapter and other than perhaps a little bit more description here and there (maybe describe the scene that Lily happens upon) would really make it that much more awesome!

Great job Rumpel!
Lo:)

Author's Response: Hey!! :D

I'm glad that she's starting to grow on you ;). Yeah, hormones...

She's having a difficult time with Snape (but he's a difficult character, in her defense). I had been DYING to write that scene!! :D I wasn't sure that anybody else would appreciate my humor ;).

Heheh, oh embarrassing moments.

Potters must stick together, absolutely!

Description (I'm really terrible with including it). I'll work on that!