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RomioneWriter says:This is really good! :D I would have liked more background on how their relationship developed though, it feels a little sudden for them to love each other straight after the battle, maybe a prolouge at the beginning of this? :) You write extremely well by the way!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! and yes, that is a great idea! I was planning on a possible elaboration in chapter two, almost like a prologue, but now I think I'll write a flat-out prolouge instead. Thanks again! :)