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starryskies55 says:Well, questions were certainly answered here, it was all very intriguing. I like the continued development of Patricia's character- although, I have to say that I think that modifying Astoria's memory like that is downright cruel.

The sense of safety and home in the Weasley house was a little too much, I think, and I thought perhaps everything was explained a little too quickly, but overall this was an exciting chapter xD

Some CC- your spacing is a little off- I recommend that when publishing your chapters you use the simple editor- it doesn't create lots of horrible empty lines :D

Author's Response: Thank-you for the review, I appreciate your feedback. Unfortunately I did use the simple editor, it always spaces it twice what I have it spaced when I actually submit the chapters though...