wicked. that is so cool, i love how you didn't totally frick up Beast Boy's past (everyone keeps doing that. in some way, everyone always seems to screw up his story to fit their fic.) but that was great. i mean i read it and it fit all the real stuff perfectly so it was so great. but yeah, i loved how she said that she read the letters and figured it out, and then figured out Raven likes him too. i loved Elasti Girl she was wicked awesome in the show.

yeah...my review probably makes no sense but anyways, great story.

jdbb1 chapter 1 . 10/26/2006

Great start and great idea in the "parent's blessing" part, because in dating, most parents would have to get to know the respective crush before consending responsibility over to the two. And it was best that Rita have the role as true parent, because Steve (alais Mento) could be a bit of a hardass and like the Justice League, would probably turn Raven down simply due to her demonic heritage, even though Raven herself was nothing like her satantic father nor her neglectful-not that she had a choice, though-mother (despite the fact that Raven does, in fact, have that sliver of demonic essence).

There were a couple grammatical errors and the usual beginner's issues, but I think you're off to a better start than I was. Just make sure to pay attention to the following;

1- Spelling and punctuation of course,

2- Try not to say the same things over and over again,

3- Try and picture yourself as the character who's acting and/or speaking and determine whether or not something would actually be spoken out loud or acted upon. It's actually quite often that I have to say character's lines out loud.

Other than those couple things, you did pretty well. Good luck on your next work. I'll try and keep track of you to help you along as much as I can.