I love this fic w
And I love Midori! XDD (I wan't one *pouts*)
AND I LOVE TAKAO OMG I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS FIC!
So cuuuuuuuute (specially 2 leaves X33333)

Although the last bit made me pout a bit (Kazu-kun. Seriously, you have your lucky item! That cancels the bad fortune out! And all's well that ends well. Go Midorimacchi! XDD) but the tension and atmosphere was great XDDD

fjawoifjsioaflkjkg TAKAO, I love him so much! I really loved the image of Takao sleeping on Midorima's bed and the latter next to him...and omg every time you described his pained face, my feels / This was my first midotaka fic and it was absolutely wonderful and very well written. I can't wait for your next story!

how could you? how could you leave me with this suspence? who said it? Please i dont want it to be Shin chan, thatwould totally kill Takao! and it could be considered a cliche...
If it was Takao then there may be more new ways to aproache it...
Well, im so exited to know whosaid it!

Lovely story please write more.
Love the ending!
There is nothing to be said about your plot or english - they were both perfect.
You also have your own style which is really awesome. But remember there is always room for improvement.
And this is my personal preference but i'd be delighted to see a more perverted 'Shin-chan' next time ;3