This blog is a record of my learning while I was at Point England School.

Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Disappearing Story

On a Stormy rainy day. Jake the dog and the Finn the human were inside a brown old scruffy house. Finn went up the window and saw something or someone in the sea. “Hey Jake!” said Finn. “We have to go outside and see what’s in the water” Finn got his Raincoat and they were both ready to go.

Both Jake and Finn went down the steps as it makes a creaking noise. They were blown away by the wind as Finns Raincoat was flapping behind his back as they struggled to get to the beach. “Jake I don’t think we can make it!” Said Finn With a loud voice. It was something red in the sea but it was too dark to know what it was.