Twilight has recently been crowned a princes of Mystica, however not all wish her well, namely a former pupil of Celestia, Sunset Shimmer a 'My Little Mages' take on the 'Equestria Girls' series, using parts from the first and third movie and shorts

It has been two years since the human TD ascended to become Princess Antares, and he is settling into his role as one of the rulers of Equestria quite nicely. His loyal guard is strong, his palace is awe-inspiring, and he is beloved and worshiped by ponies everywhere. However, when the Element of Magic is stolen by an old student of Celestia's and taken through a magic mirror while he is visiting the Crystal Empire with the Mane Six, he discovers that another world has been very close by during his whole reign. A rather familiar world at that. Deciding that he is the best pony for the job, he takes his two best soldiers through the portal with him to get the Element back. So, pretending to be a foreign exchange student from Canada, he infiltrates of all things... a high school.

Well, this was the first story my feed ever notified me of, and I must say it didn't do too badly. Also, savvy TD is savvy, but possibly hasn't accounted for law types getting interested about where the diamonds came from...

"Do you have any idea what this means?!" I said, throwing my arms around both of their shoulders. "I... I can pee standing up again now!"

"Er... what?" Lieutenant Rapids said, scooting away from me.

"You can?" Captain Blaze responded, giving me a curious look. "So does that mean...?" I grinned at him and nodded, and he began tapping his chin. "Interesting. Very interesting. This world might be better than I thought."

I know that whenever I publish a story, I love to get reviews, so here's one.

The first Equestria Girls movie was rather shameful for Hasbro. They might not have felt shame, but they should have realized they needed to just be wrong, standing there in their wrongness being wrong and gotten used to it.

This however, this is wonderful. Sunset Shimmer has become one of my favorite characters, but I do love to see a good smack down, one which TD is definitely poised to deliver.

I have to wonder if there is a human version of him in this universe? If there was (which I have no clue on where you are planning on going on that matter) I can't help but wonder if they are male or female. Does TD actually still consider himself one or the other? I mean, I know he consciously thinks himself male, but TD the Alicorn Princess certainly sowed he had gained a certainly fluidity considering gender.

And now I have the sudden image of Princess TD and Equestria Girls TD having a weird snarcastic argument.

I had a little bit of confusion in the first chapter over whether or not TD was still female or not (which you did clarify once he got to EG Earth) but that was my only problem with this. Good job, Brony Writer. If I wasn't already following you, I would do so.

I really like this chapter. I found it funny hei a Fluttershy got all manipulative/innocent when she heard TD loved animals and how TD used the animal abuse line to mock Rapids and Blaze. Also, I found the way he insulted Sunset to be epic. Thanks for this amazing chapter.

I am absolutely loving this. This is everything I had hoped for when I heard you were doing this. Bringing those two guards along was an excellent touch too. I'm really interested in seeing where you go from here, since I really doubt TD will go into a song routine to win the students over, and since he can't defeat Sunset in the same way that they did it in the movie.

There's something I've been wondering. The portal opens every 'thirty moons' so if the mirror was in Canterlot why didn't Sunset come back sooner? (Probably wanting to prep herself or something is what I can think of) The other thing would be how she knew exactly where to find the Element of Magic despite not having seen it for years or being in the least bit familiar with the Crystal Palace. She shows up, bee-lines for Twilight's room with no trouble like she hasn't been a human walking on two legs for years while avoiding the poor security, snatches the crown, and then promptly messes up. It just seems to me that they would need a good jetpack to get over this plot hole without even explaining how they got the jetpack.

That part about Discord being released from his statue? Yeeeah, we don't need you adding plotholes to a story that's already logically impossible, even considering Equestrian logic and the existence of magic and whatnot.