Aw! I don't normally go for romance, but this was so cute!
Leave it to Wally to know what to do. At least in the science area ;)
Overall, great spelling, grammar, and punctuation, not to mention an adorable idea.
Keep up the AWESOME work!

Adorable! I love Wally the geeky science nerd, and how he cares about what's going on with Artemis's life.

Nell Scott chapter 1 . 7/8/2012

Clever! Wondering where the idea for this came from... Utilized Wally's propensity for the sciences and integrated it into the heroes' training. And (it must be mentioned), though there was a teensy mistake here and there, the grammar in this piece was commendable! Usually in fan fiction the writing is abhorrent, but this was respectable. My one and only critique: try grabbing a thesaurus and using a few simple writing techniques, like alliteration, to achieve sophistication of voice and better flow!