Excellent! It does not seem very out of character! I find it refreshing that he is senisitive.

Author's Response: Thanks!!! Yeah, I sort of imagined him as a typical guy and not some unreachable sex god. Despite previous assumptions, guys are not as heartless as they love to let on. That's sort of what I wanted to prove... but guys are still jerks.

I love this story!!! It was a bit confusing, It didn't really seem like a one-shot, more like a short story... but I love the interaction between the four of them. Where was Peter?

Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, originally it was going to be a short story, but I looked at it and wanted people to really think about the story, not just read it and know the answers, but think. You know? I somehow just can't imagine the Marauders without them being a band, you know? Maybe that'll be my next story... Oh, and to answer you question. I have no clue where Peter was. He didn't fit with the story line so I erased him temporarily... yeah...

I really enjoyed reading this.. however it was a little bit confusing but just a little bit.. i would give it a 9/10

is there going to be a sequel cos i want to see what these possibilities are haha

good job !

Author's Response: It was confusing? OH... see, I had this first part to add to it, but I was like "leave it to the imagination of the reader". I guess that wasn't exactly a wise decision when the plot isn't fully developed... and I am hopefully going to post a stort story based on the characters. I'm still working out the bugs... :)