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Daheck is this!?

So, I looked back at "Random weird Google doc fanfic" or whatever it was called. Digging back through my Google Doc I realized I had one as well. It's much longer though.It is…weird.Its cliche with artifacts as crystals. The characterization isn't that bad, although some of the dialogue could use work. The plot is all over the place, and there are some things that you can't grasp, not even with the biggest suspension of disbelief. It's overall a product of the imagination of me and my friend, and it's really, really weird. And kinda stupid. Keep in mind I wrote this in SEVENTH GRADE, as well as a bit through 8th grade. I DON'T write like this, AT ALL.Oh, and there's time travel. Yes, TIME TRAVEL.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rMv … LGoRM/edit

I am not responsible for:- Brain trauma from stupidity of the story-Your face hurting from face palming-Your parents thinking you've forgotten every sentence but "Oh my god this is so stupid."There we go…free of lawsuits.

Re: Daheck is this!?

CountBleck479 wrote:

Anyways, I thought you didn't watch Doctor Who...

It was cowritten by my friend, who is a Whovian. She's the one who wrote Tale of Two Princesses on here [I asked her, and she said she might come back.] Me and her had gotten A LOT better, obviously, and if we team up again I doubt it'll be as WTH as this.