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Review:

ElissandrAnne says:First of all, I love the banner - but you're a very good graphic maker.

I've been wanting to read this one-shot for some time. And I'm glad I finally did. I do like your writing style. It flows, the rhythm is flawless. And your storyline is great. I liked it a lot!

Especially your characterization of Minerva. We're so used to read about the stern professor that most of the time we forget that at 70 something she's not that old, being a witch. But we know close to nothing about the young woman she once was... and you portrayed her very well. Strong and vulnerable at the same time. Already hiding behind a mask. That was very well done!

Grimm is very intriguing. I did like the way you portrayed him. Now I feel compelled to read the Fires Within. :D

Good job! 10/10.

Author's Response: Thank you, Anne! ^_^ I'm so excited about your review because you're such a great writer yourself, and this is my favourite fanfiction write now. Minerva is a great character - I've loved writing her since my contribution to "Looking Glass" and putting her up against Grimm seemed so perfect. To write their history was wonderful. =D Thanks so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it.