Wow. This was amazing. I felt like I was in emotional hell. I felt every single emotion that you were trying to convey in this story. I think I have probably experienced that with only one other story on here.
I'm speechless. I wish I knew what to say.
And this was only a one-shot! Unbelievable!
If I eventually get over this weird state that I'm in right now, I'll come back and do a proper review. I hate people that do what I'm doing right no. My apologies!
Fantastic once again! I'm a big fan!

Aw, that was so cute!! The ending pulled together the raw emotion and darkness from the begining and made it into one big happy-ish ending.but not in the fluffy way...you know? I'm going to assume you don't because I'm not even sure anymore...ok so I loved the begining, especially Lily's calender. Her emoitions when she talks to Sirius were great and I liked Jame's even better. It was a great take on how the couple would of felt with Harry on the way, and personally, I loved it!!

I loveddd this, you almost made me cry. It was fantastic, there aren't even enough words to describe it. I love your writing. Everything about this was wonderful, from Lily's worry, to her anger, to James' disbelief and jumping to conclusions, to the calendar...amazing. I can't wait till I have more time to read your stories, but unfortunately, I now have to attend to the homework I've put off all day...

I loved this story. I was a little hesitant at first to read it especially when your author's note at the top mentioned that you were a Sirius/Lily supporter and that you couldn't do that in this story. I figured that you would try to focus solely on them anyway and for a minute I really thought you were doing that when Sirius came back. But you didn't so I'm glad you were able to step outside of your normal writing. I really enjoyed the piece and I thought it was very true of a real marriage and of child birth. Most stories talk about how great and absolutely wonderful it is to have a kid, no one ever really brings up how hard and absolutely terrifying it is. I'm glad you explored this! Anyway 10!
~Meg

Wow! This is so beautiful and emotional! You have it all there; love, cuteness, passion, anger, sadness... As always, you write Lily and Sirius so well, but I like how you write James too! Only thing I wondered about a bit was why Lily was not out there fighting, even when she did not have Harry yet. I loved every moment of it, from the quiet beginning, Sirius' gentleness, Lily's rage, James' anger to the last lines of joking cuteness.

great job!! for someone who never writes James/Lily, you did great, hell you did better than some people who write that ship all the time!! you once again prove how great of an author you are...and I love your storys! That was so great, the way Lily went into a rant against poor Sirius was hilarious, James` initial reaction was completly realistic, as was his second reaction! lol...great job!! completly loved it...10/10