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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

6 years ago

one drink, then two
happy, bubbly, nice, and sweet
and I start to wonder who
stands on those feet.
three drinks, then four
careless, stupid,
always knbow that alcohol destroys friends, family, job, and most of all you
this is a powerful that needs to convey the importance of responsibility and consequences
keep writing-great job

rosie347

6 years ago

I enjoyed this poem's cathartic honesty, its poignant realism. It conveys your ability to tell a relatable story, an elusive element which writers constantly strive for. Well done, and I can't wait to see it published.

Star Soaked Hands

6 years ago

I really enjoyed the narritive aspect of this poem, great job.

Misty Meadows

6 years ago

The strength...

fredabomb

6 years ago

Really enjoyed this piece, and expect more in the future.

applestar

5 years ago

wow this is really interesting and amazing. try to understand that when people drink too much it is due to a serious mental/emotional problem. and the best thing they could use is a sound friend.

cptutorow

5 years ago

I enjoy the format in which you write.

Keep it up, writing is a cathartic experience.

I wrote a poem once on how alcohol and drugs ruined my family.

Know that you are not alone, and that writing will always give you someone with whom you can relate, even if you don't know them.

It shows, if not you, then that person that they aren't alone and they have someone else with whom they can share similar life pasts.