Hahaha! I knew the killer is a girl but I completely forgot about Videl and I thought that it was good but some spelling mistakes and there was a p in the middle of the sentence and I thought, "P... What ever could that mean?" and don't forget the "! Also I think that you need to be better at describing the killings of the people because you just can't have senseless gore without any detail! Also the ribbons on ChiChi( thank god you got the name right!) should have been made out of her flesh because that would have been so cool! Yes! Yes! YES! Vegeta/Goku smut! Must have smut! No Vedil! Don't you dare touch Goku or Vegeta or I will go into this fanfic bring my crazy friend and kill you! No! No! NO! GJ 3)

Topbear chapter 1 . 10/1/2011

I read the story half hind behind screen. It is so scary! But it is touching, when vegeta protect kaka with all his might. It changes from funny to horror in one second. Althrrough it is a bit too scary for my usualy taste. That is why it takes so long for me actually start to read. But you are great writer. I wonder whether you are going to finish abhor. This story is brilliant! This story is brilliant! This story is brilliant! This story is brilliant! This story is brilliant! Thousand times. Now I am going to read the rest of the triology.

Cayla chapter 3 . 2/19/2006

One of the best horror stories I have red but the sad part is that these horror stories are scarier then thehorror movies that are out and have been out. I thnk if this was in theathers it would be very scary. I would be scard(Spelled right?) and I don't get scared buy movies often.

yumi chapter 17 . 12/27/2004

dont like it

Creep chapter 17 . 8/10/2004

I haven't read this story yet, but thanks for putting Radiohead's Creep to it!

Fwahaha...Great ending Well, now I must go read Phobia...BTW, Brutal Fate's chap 7 MIGHT come out tonight, but then again it might take me until tomorrow to post it O_o; I'm taking forever on it X_X Thanks for reviewing me...and I have returned the favor *scuttles off to read Phobia*

Holy bleep! That is so freaky and cool! I love it! *hugglies the ebilness of Gohan dying and being chopped into bite size chunks and his own blood being used for the card written to Goku and and and...* Wow. So cool *goes back to reading* I think I'll find plenty of interest in this little series...*smirks*