It's got a big, spacy sound to it, and a very nice suspense. The moody piano is very good. I don't know what else to say. I like it.
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I know the vocals are out of tempo. I did it on purpose, because I think it sounds nice.

You mean making presets right? What synths do you use? Most come with a lot of cool presets. It's a good idea to modify those instead of making a preset from scratch.

what?

I'm sorry, I know this is music composition rather than synthesis, but I think if you spend a lot of time with synths you really ought to program your own patches. After a while it isn't too difficult, and I think the end result would be more interesting.

granted, I know nothing about creating music, but I really enjoy making synth programs from scratch, and I think it's worthwhile.

Very VERY early intro to a Concept album i'm working on, I mainly made this to get used to FL studio and get a basis for the song down.http://soundcloud.com/kane9-1-1/the-attack-2
I don't know why it suddenly drops like that, I had a far longer instrumental bridge.

The basic concept(Aside from the intro) is slow, ambient tracks, interspersed with tracks of dialogue between a father and his son, set in a fallout shelter after a nuclear attack on england.

So I made a song for the first time in FL Studio. Nothing special, just a simple piano piece. Somewhat inspired by the film The Triplets of Belleville. I might further develop it with more orchestral instruments.

1:30-2:08 you have some sort of clipping that hurts my ears. (same thing around 3:30)
:22-:40 seconds you should add a touch of reverb in my opinion. or stand like five feet back from the mic. Or both.

Here is a little thing I'm making for an EP for my other project. I'd love to get some feedback on this one since I haven't posted anything in a while and when I post everyone ignores me .
It's hidden because I don't want to really "release" it yet, but I'd love to know what people think about ithttp://soundcloud.com/mechanicalgent...cruise/s-6yjqy

This is sounding pretty nice. The snare could use some mids/highs and I'd love to hear some grooving hihats. That high synth could be little lower volume-wise. Aaaand a sub bass maybe? I love that wobbling synth tho, this got potential

Loving this one, really chilling. But I think you could ease with the sidechaining a little. It sounds great on the bass, but I don't like how it ducks out the raining sound and the the synth at 1:19-1:41

I feel like the drums need to develop more past the drop. Nice little riff though.
Also, the snare sound is a bit weak to me - I feel like it needs more of a crack to it at the beginning of the sound. Maybe if you layer a short, sharp snare over the top?

Also, I like the kinda 'fidget dubstep' thing you have going on here, I think you should accentuate that. Maybe even cut some of the notes short on the main synth or remove some, just really play around with blank space more. I think that would give your tune a bit of a unique edge.

I listened to your track too CLungcancer but am not really too sure what to say about it :\. I feel like it would be a cool track if I saw it performed live, or it had some vocals to it or something. As it stands though I feel like there's something missing but I can't really put my finger on what