Halloween with monsters? They're welcome as long as they want but they better clean up their mess. I don't want any dried up corpses lying around left by vampires or pieces of humans lying around after wolf dude got out of control :D
I mean do you even know how hard that is to clean up? O.o
Anyways, it was really good one :D Surprised that Frank allowed Milosh to dance with a girl even when he could possibly drink her XD Great work! :D

A clever twist, with basically good skills. However, sometimes there are too many unnecessary words that lessen the impact of the writing:
Little did the people of the town know was that the house wasn't even empty. -the idiom is more generally: Little did W know X: Little did the people of the town know (OMIT THE WAS) (AND YOU CAN OMIT 'THAT') the house wasn't even empty. -which leaves a neat 'Little did the people of the town know the house wasn't even empty.' & This made the hairy man begin to howl. He waited a second for a reply, but when the rest of the world seemed to stay silent he began to howl again.-The hairy man began to howl. When there was no reply, he howled again.

It is a little strange that you get your dialogue tags right here: "Fine, let's try this," Frank said... . & Then he finally asked, "What's a costume?" but not here: "Why am I in so much pain?" The werewolf questioned. & "It's the aftermath of a sugar rush. Your body just isn't use to that much sugar." Joey explained - I would guess they're proofreading goofs.

This was such a fun read! I enjoyed the monsters' naivete in thinking that the children in their Halloween costumes were fellow monsters. I'll be sure to be careful at any Halloween parties I attend in the future! :-)

I love this story! Immediate favourite!
I just love Wolf. He's so cute! And his tail is adorable!
And I like the whole conecpt of this story. I created a story in the Sims once that's almost exactly the same, including a werewolf, a vampire and some kind of plant-human. And I never finished it, but reading this feels like it's finished now somehow.
And it was funny how they found out they were real monsters, and good that you stopped right at that point. It was the best possible ending I think.

I really like this story - my favourite character being Wolf. For some reason he just makes me laugh and I loved the imagery you gave him when they first stepped outside. I loved it from start to finish! This is going to be a favourite of mine :)

TheAliensDidIt chapter 1 . 3/8/2012

Heya Phantom, Aliens here.

Review is long overdue; I'm sorry, I'm a forgetful lazy bum.

This story is interesting enough. I like how you've given the monsters human personalities and the moral at the end. One-shot sequel would be nice, I think. I wonder what the humans will do to the monsters next?

On to the less pleasant stuff - a few spelling and punctuation mistakes here and there, nothing too serious. Also, well, I like this story, but it's a bit too predictable and I felt that you could do better.