so many updates... but so far ther all good... can't wait to see how it all gos wrong~ HA HA Haaaa!

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Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:53 am

musclecar326

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Re: Burning embers

Great updates there luna. I would have never thought that you were 11.

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Fri Nov 11, 2011 11:02 pm

Luna werewolf

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Re: Burning embers

^.^

A tawny coloured cat with a three long scars along his left eye, smiled at Jane, and then spotted Ember, and its face fell into and expression of astonishment. "A-a master" He said, "I am truly hounered to meet another one, in my lifetime". Everyone was stunned, and the loud chatterering died down instently. Then each cat bowed, even Jane and the unruly Jane's sister's Kittens.

By the time the crowd of cats stopped bowing, Ember's cheeks were as red as his fur. "Another Master?" A bright gold cat said, padding out of a den. "I don't belive it!" The haughty cat meowed.

Ember closed his eyes and consentrated as hard as he could. He opened his eyes, and survayed the world with the familer orange tinge, as everyone cheered. A tickling sensation flowed over him, as swirls snaked their way up his back.

The haughty cat's face fitted to surprise for a moment, before it was restored to its hubris staite. "Well, I'm a main master!" He said.

I know no-one posted a comment on the last update, but I'm gonna go and post the next one anyways.

The haughty cat took a loud breath and began:

"At the beginning of time, the power of the Elements belonged to one cat, Kilda, who could weild it in any way she pleased. But she had too many powerful enemies. So she split her power into four major Masters, known as 'the ring'; fire, water, air, earth, rock, heaven, underworld, and Animals. the rest of the powers were split again; Love, War, seas, Ice, plants, and so on. They were passed down in the generations. Only in cats."

"B-but I an a Major" Ember said, "A master of Animals" The haughty cat smirked, but said nothing. He stalked off.

"Well," Jane said, "I'm taking the kittens for a walk, do you want to join me?"

"Yes" Said Ember, firmly.

****

Lily smiled and lay in the thick snow. She enjoyed the refresing feal on snow in her breath. She grinned, and closed her eyes.

"Lily!" Theodore said Gruffly "Get up, now!" He hated that grey lazy bones. She had been the old leader's daughter, but the pack hadn't let him kill her.

"I'm off duty" Lily groaned, "Go away."

"Just telling you, you'll be checking on our little spy tommorow, so you're off morning duty" Theodore growled. He hated letting Lily off work, but he couldn't spare any other huskies.

"Oh, and, you'll be on duty all day tommorow, after that. You won't have food until everyone else has eaten, so you'll be having the scraps" Thedore said. That'll make up for missing morning duty, he thought.

"No." Lily hissing.

"What?" Theodore growled. Lily got up, and stared at him menacingly.

"You heard me" She hissed.

"You- you will not talk to me like that!" Theodore growled, eyes flasing red.

"I never belonged to this pack, and you know that! You have no power over me!" Lily hissed. She turned and walked off.

"You are expelled from this pack! If you come near this place again, you will be killed like a animal, do you hear me!" Theodore called after her. Lily didn't care, she just kept on walking. She was a lone dog now.

Nice little update. Keep at it! And it is fine to post one update after the next. That does not count as double posting, so no worries.

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Thu Nov 17, 2011 1:02 am

Luna werewolf

Joined: Sun Jul 10, 2011 12:15 pmPosts: 227Location: I'M BEHIND YOU!

Re: Burning embers

Do you like my avatar? I dunno if any other people have it or not !!

Ember yawned. The day had passed quickly, he went on a long tour with Jane, before collecting fire wood with Nathan. He circled up into a ball, a soft, warm feeling in him that wasn't from the roaring fire behind him.

*****

Lily was cold. A sort of cold that creeped through her fur, until it chilled her heart. She had stumbled through a blizzard to a strange forest, where she had collaspsed. She was so tired.

Lily shivered. Something inside her told her to keep awake, but she was so tired.

*****

"U-uh, Scar-eye?" A young grey cat said, adressing the leader who was sitting at the top of the rocks. Sudenly everyone was awake, evesdropping on their conversation. If the young cat or the leader noticed, they didn't pay any attention.

"Yes" Scar-eye said.

"We have found a grey husky half-frozen in the snow. Should we bring it in?" The young cat asked.

"Yes, because, not all huskys are Theodore's" Scar-eye meowed, causally.

"Yes, sir!" The cat said, and darted off into the distance. Moments passed. The young cat and lots of other cats carefully dragged Lily into the clearing. Everyone crowded around the husky, staring. Obviously barely any of them had seen a husky before.

Ember felt awful, as if his heart had sunk to his paws. "W-when are they coming?" Asked Jane, not quite beliving what she was hearing.

"Tommorow" Ember whispered.

"TRAITOR!" Yelled Aki, leaping suddenly at Ember. In am matter of moments, Aki was on top of Ember, pinning him down. Ember squirmed, and his muscels tried to change, but there wasn't space between Aki's claws that were digging into his paws.

Jane leapt at Aki, shoving him off Ember. "Fighting will get us no-where" She hissed, "We need to prepare for war!"

Jane got off Aki, and looked at Ember. He would have felt better if there were anger in her eyes, but all he found was heart wrenching disapointing feelings.

*****

The moring was awaited by two cats sitting it the top of the tree.

When the sun poked through the hills of snow in the distance, they woke everyone up in the camp. The cats all sat in the camp waiting. The calm before the storm.

Ember was curled up behind a tree, sobbing. How could he had betrayed the camp? Was his heart as black as coal? Did he not care about Jane?

"Its okay to be sorry." A kind voice said, from the shadows. Lily sat, looking sincer in the shadows of the the tree next to Ember.

"You need to help the camp. You are a master. I'm not saying it will make them forgive you. You brought this on this camp, The least you can do is stop them killing them all. You're no use to them dead" Lily said.

Ooo! Ember is going to fight. This should be an epic battle indeed! Let's hope he becomes a hero and is forgiven!

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Wed Dec 14, 2011 10:08 pm

Luna werewolf

Joined: Sun Jul 10, 2011 12:15 pmPosts: 227Location: I'M BEHIND YOU!

Re: Burning embers

New avatar! Ya!

The huskies leap on the cats with savage fury as the battle began, snapping and snarling. The cats met them in the air, with even more furious determination.

Ember leapt, morphing in the air, into a snow leapord. He pulled a brown husky off Aki, but Aki just hissed at him and bounded away. Ember dropped the husky from his powerful jaws, who leapt away, to attack another cat.

Something glinted in the corner of his eye. Ember turned to see Theodore, in golden armor, with Jane in his muzzel.

Blue light engulfed him as he forgot, and fell uncontious. With a flash of white, Ember found himself on a park bench Tarot, who just happened to be walking by, spotted the cat. She smiled, and tucked a photoshoped picture of her, at a disco with Ember, and a cat The dragon had told her to put in, and walked off. He smelt of wiped memories, She hoped the photo would be enough to keep him busy.

Ember woke.

****

The flame red cat was sitting on the bench, its tail twitching. It was staring at the tree.

“Hi. Who are you?” Peanut asked.

“I dunno” The cat said. Peanut was stunned.

“Um... ok. Who’s your owner?” Peanut asked.

“I dunno,” The cat said. The cat was starting to feel dumb.

“What does it say on your tag?” Peanut asked. The cat flipped over his tag and read the bottom:

Nickname: ----------Name: EmberOwner: ----------Address: ----------

“My name is Ember” The cat said, “That’s a nice name. I like it!” Ember grinned.

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