This is getting really good! Please say that the end is coming soon...or better yet multiple chapters:) I love that John's plan is slow b/c it seems more real than some of the other stories I've read. The mixed up present was sorta sad but I know they'll work it all out. Great story!

I LOVED this....Rodney all drunk and his thoughts all mashed together. It's like how he normally speaks but he's opened up more--allowing old memories and hurts to flow. Please contiue this. I'll be checking back! :)

I just have to say that I've spent many wonderful hours staring at David Hewlett and you couldn't be more right! I love how crazy this fic is and I can't wait for more. Poor Mckay, getting dragged into all the stories, not being able to say something without it getting turned around...lol. Do I smell some Sheppard/Mckay coming up? Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm afraid you don't smell any Sheppard/McKay coming up - although I read all types of fanfic, including slash, I usually write het. But I intend keeping this series firmly in the gen category. Thanks for taking the time to review! :-)

I liked this very much! First I read it from Mckay's pov, then Elizabeth's. It works for both so well. The last line is amazing, and you could apply it to so many instances, so many interactions, not just Siege. Quite nice:)

Chapter 1: What if

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