((what? I'm not controlling him, I'm making my characters point guns at him. React to it please.))

((You made Silcks character, who was supposed to have already left by that point, return to react to the radio))

((That is where you controlled Silcks character))

((When your guys returned to the radio, the murderer shouldn't have been anywhere near it anymore))

((And why did you make the murderer react to the radio anyways?))

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Subject: Re: Elm Street Sun Oct 13, 2013 8:29 am

((What? I just thought 'Ok, random radio, probably the bad guy, lets react to that.' I'm sorry, I didn't get it. I didn't understand the prescense of the radio. My bad. But I don't really know what to do now, so.....))

((just take over the hooded guy, have him be a random mugger or something))

((or a patsy))

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Subject: Re: Elm Street Mon Oct 14, 2013 8:22 pm

((CS: Do the only logical thingYou decide to do the logical thing and fuck up the timeline. Yeah, that'll work. You edit this part of space so that you never sent BS and GG to some shitty place where you make mistakes.

==>Ok, that's done==>.......==>You just realized you still have no idea what to do. Your plan only went as far as editing the timeline. Fudgeon.))

((UH You're a genius!))((PLOTLINE INBOUND.))BS sifts trough the victims pockets, noticing instantly thanks to his INTENSE FORENSIC TRAINING that someone else has done so recently. He checks the bodies back and instantly notices that no number was carved on this one, but an attempt to was obviously made.BS tells GG what he's noticed."So, this one was either an exception, or...." GG begins, but is interrupted by BS."There could be another attack, I know." BS corrects his glasses"The problem is that we have no idea who it will be. The pattern was broken, but does the pattern even matter? It's hard to tell now.""Maybe we could employ a Mage or Bishop, see if they can pick up anything to do with the killings." GG says nervously."A good idea, but not ideal. These deaths are coming out like rounds from a pistol." "Pun intended?""Yup."

((which victim is this? the one you guys were standing around before the gunshot? because you already said the number was carved, and i said i carved the badge number of the other cop that was guarding the body))

((CC: Give upYou promptely give up all this asshattery and decide to rearrange everything by taking the PROVERBIAL SPACE-TIME REIGNS.

CC: Take said ReignsYou take the reigns and rearrange the space-timeline))

==>The detective and his companion are standing at the second murder site. There was an attempt to carve a number on this one, but it clearly failed. They drag the body to the first murder site, where they find that the policeman guarding it has been killed, his badge torn off. The badge had his ID on it.

((i never tore off the badge and i never killed another victim where you went, i am now thoroughly annoyed and confused by this))

((let me tell you what i did: i left a body where you first posted, i then had a guttersnipe shoot a gun in the air and run off, leaving the gun behind))

((i then went back to the victim and killed the police man guarding it, carving his badge number into his chest, i then rifled through the body and ran off when i found out that the thing i was looking for had already been taken [i leave that up to you, maybe directions to an abandoned house or something like that] and when i ran off my hood fell of my face which would allow and witnesses to identify me if i got caught))

((also next time you do commands for yourself put them in brackets because that is ooc stuff and that belongs in brackets))

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Subject: Re: Elm Street Tue Oct 15, 2013 9:23 pm

((==>The PROVERBIAL SPACE-TIME REIGNS snap in half. Goddammit Slick! The whole point of that was to stabilize a perfectly good plot line! Now the PROVERBIAL SPACE-TIME REIGNS are broken, and we're all confused again!

CC: Summon New ReignsYou summon the PROVERBIAL FORM-FLOW REIGNS and......put everyone in the exact same position as Slick has.

==>

The PROVERBIAL FORM-FLOW REIGNS break.

CC: Give up, you have to go to schoolYou put down the remains of the REIGNS and leave the forum, Mubling something about holidays not being effective enough and 8:30 happening to fast.l))

((nah i am not that pissed, unlike you i stay silent when i get pissed, the angrier i seem the more joking i am))

((and cs i already told you use brackets other wise things get really fucking confusing, i am going to edit them in now but next time do it yourself first ok?))

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Subject: Re: Elm Street Wed Oct 16, 2013 5:26 am

((CS: Agree with UHYou do that, before following it up with a change to 2nd person, so you don't have to talk through the narrative anymore,

Ok guys, How about we just write the plot line down? As of the current moment, BS and GG are at the main site, with a policeman and two victims dead. One of the victims lacks the pattern that all of the others have had, but the policeman has taken his place, his ID carved into his back like every other victim except the latest. Agreeable? Also, sorry about the Poke-bear thing, I was in a bad mood.))