Apology Star Love Poem

by Dave
(Somerville, MA)

This is one of the best sites ever. I have this girl I love really pissed off at me, for something I said and I really didn't know how to say sorry to her.

I googled apologies and read some of the stuff on this site, and found that Online Star Registry idea and wrote up an apology love poem based on star light, star bright. I called her, read the poem, told her about the star and she probably loves me even more now, I could almost hear her heart melt over the phone.

Here's the apology love poem for anyone else who may need it.

Star light, star bright,The first star I see tonight,I wish I may, I wish I might,Have the wish I wish tonight.

I was wrong, you were right,I'm so sorry about our fight,For what I said, for what I might,I apologize, hear my plight.

In the sky on this night,For all to see a new sight,The fairest of stars that shines brightIt now has your name, my guiding light.

Comments for Apology Star Love Poem

------------------------------------Comment from the PA Team:Feel free to use it. I think that's what Dave had in mind when he shared it on the site.

Perfectby: Anonymous

Dave I'm really feeling this idea. Hope it's okay to use it. I have a big date coming up with the girl I believe I will marry one day. We've had a falling out and I believe this flows perfectly with my plans for the night.

Heyby: Anonymous

Hey, Dave! Hope that you allow me to use this. God Bless.

You're the best Daveby: ed

I really like your idea, really smart move... You don't mind if I use part of it to apologize?

Can I Use This Apology Poem?by: Anonymous

Can I use this poem on a friend? Or is it only for the person that you love?

------------------------------------Comment from the PA Team:No reason that you can't. A sincereand heartfelt apology is appropriatefor anyone.

Best Apology Idea EVER!!!by: Anonymous

I am totally dedicating this to my husband who deserves to shine above the rest, thanks!

That is so beautiful. I have made a lot of mistakes and I hope things can work out, sometimes you don't realize you have got a good thing until you do something to make you realize how much you love someone! What a fantastic idea for an apology.

no wayby: Anonymous

ahh dude! that's awesome... u think I can have your permission to like borrow that for lyrics? If it gets famous I could give you like 10% of what it makes.... but I don't wanna get sued for stealing your work.

Apology Star WORKS!by: Mike B. (from Boston)

Dave,

Had a huge fight with my girlfriend. Took your advice, and the advice on the perfect apology site, and tried the apology star idea to fix things. Worked really well.

Thanks!
Mike

This was Fantastic!by: Natalie

This was such a lovely poem, I would not of thought of those words to put in to fill the spaces of someone's heart. I am in love and I know that I can do foolish things, this poem changed my line of thinking.Thanks a lot