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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2010-01-12 00:11:32

Yeowch...

Ouch, thats one amazingly grating guitar riff. I did notice some melodies. You cut off the guitar abruptly twice, replacing it with some other melody, which only lasted for a second before being destroyed once again by the guitar. Yes, i could sense a song somewhere, but i couldnt hear it.

Darklight17

P.S This is your judging review from NGADM Round 1. I posted it for ya just cos its always nice to have more reviews.

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars2009-12-26 10:39:07

man that was crazy

Ok, first dont listen to the guy below, he's just more comfortable with other music styles i think, no offense. It's only a matter of taste.
That song is epic, it's so rare and nice to see people let their insanity take over, lol. The drums sound a bit drum-machine like, maybe by replacing the crash sound would help. But other then that, i cannot really say bad about it.
gj, do more like this:)

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2009-12-24 07:15:47

A MELODY!

....that is then ruined by the fact that for 90% of the song, it is simply a giant droning guitar riff that dissolves into noise. The production values in this song are at least decent by heavy metal standards, and there seems to be a hint of some rather epic guitar riffs in here, but they are painfully destroyed by the noise factor, until the song TOTALLY RANDOMLY turns into acoustic at about 3:00.... and 20 seconds later goes back into guitar riff madness.

The drums in this song are absolutely nonexistent, which I do not understand. The guitar is overpowering everything in the entire song. The drums should at least be side-chained with the guitar or _something_ to make them more then background noise.

I'd try to criticize the failed execution of what sounded like an attempt at a melody at 1:00, but at this point I'm not sure it would really matter. I do note that there are actual chord progressions in this song, which is impressive. The ideas near the 2 minute mark are at least promising but sadly are ruined because the guitar is completely out of whack with everything else. There seems ot be a song stuck somewhere under that endless guitar riff, but its been crushed by the endless noise and its impossible to make out.