tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post8681116845128919185..comments2017-01-15T06:25:28.819-05:00Comments on Magician's Integration: Chapter 08: This Time for SureXenophon Hendrixhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13993059147024069203noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-10002909392275646222009-03-03T14:22:00.000-05:002009-03-03T14:22:00.000-05:00Well looks like Carol got what was coming to him, ...Well looks like Carol got what was coming to him, nice of Arthur and Ursus to work as one instead during the fight.<BR/><BR/>At least now everyone Arthur knows is talking about something else now. He is still not happy though, poor guy.daymonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-48320198057183078452009-03-03T09:42:00.000-05:002009-03-03T09:42:00.000-05:00I am still enjoying the story, of course I'm greed...I am still enjoying the story, of course I'm greedy and want more, lol.<BR/><BR/>Be well;<BR/>Zaffen@SOLZaffenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754886567668538591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-59894110240820583822009-03-01T19:59:00.000-05:002009-03-01T19:59:00.000-05:00OK, I'll change it. Thanks all.OK, I'll change it. Thanks all.Xenophon Hendrixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13993059147024069203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-51280704361045246382009-03-01T19:23:00.000-05:002009-03-01T19:23:00.000-05:00yay!! new a new post, and so soon.just an awkward ...yay!! new a new post, and so soon.<BR/>just an awkward phrase that stuck out to me<BR/>"I did grab the arm of his with my right and pull downwards."<BR/>would sound better as "I grabbed the arm of his.."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-62137977505821014422009-03-01T18:47:00.000-05:002009-03-01T18:47:00.000-05:00"pull downwards" reads like an instruction, "pulle..."pull downwards" reads like an instruction, "pulled downwards" more properly describes an action being taken. Or so it seems to me. I tried all sorts of formations in my mind, and the only ones where "pull downwards" seemed to flow required adding something akin to "began to" or "commenced to" prior to "pull", and that felt clunky for other reasons.kd7mvshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10288773842965899685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-6497003008803334672009-03-01T17:37:00.000-05:002009-03-01T17:37:00.000-05:00Anonymous, "guy" is sort of an older generation's ...Anonymous, "guy" is sort of an older generation's "dude."<BR/><BR/>Rabababa, I think pull is OK here. Did modifies both grab and pull.<BR/><BR/>Did anyone else find "pull" awkward?Xenophon Hendrixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13993059147024069203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-41611079471493332122009-03-01T16:59:00.000-05:002009-03-01T16:59:00.000-05:00"I did grab the arm of his with my right and pull ..."I did grab the arm of his with my right and pull downwards."<BR/><BR/>s/b "pulled"rabababanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-17898115470132091232009-03-01T14:35:00.000-05:002009-03-01T14:35:00.000-05:00who is this Guy thats so paranoid ?should be: "How...who is this Guy thats so paranoid ?<BR/><BR/>should be: "Howard, you're paranoid."<BR/>or maybe its not a name : <BR/>"Gee, you're paranoid." ( not sure abaout Gee; English isnt my native)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-90313197244175175832009-03-01T11:47:00.000-05:002009-03-01T11:47:00.000-05:00I am really enjoying the story. Thanks for writin...I am really enjoying the story. Thanks for writing.espressobolushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09930777721188162936noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-5323103875688835412009-03-01T10:18:00.000-05:002009-03-01T10:18:00.000-05:00had a great read m8i'm missing you on SOLplease do...had a great read m8<BR/>i'm missing you on SOL<BR/>please do go on<BR/>thanks<BR/><BR/>hamhamsolohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16739425743318888570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-34498005442949891752009-03-01T06:47:00.000-05:002009-03-01T06:47:00.000-05:00more please keep typingmore please keep typingujjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14572551440494222936noreply@blogger.com