An excellent way to initiate the story—acting out the selkie myth in front of a large gathering of Carpathians. I would like to see more detail about Radu's realization of the legend's meaning for him.

I have been a huge fan of your X-men fanfics for a long time so imagine my shock when I saw you wrote a fanfic for the Carpathian series (which I adore) I loved it. I really hope you write more. Great job!