The American Way

I am completely new to the film world, i have no proffesional knowledge and can't film worth a crap, but that is why i am here

so anyways, i have been making videos for the past couple of months with my friends, and i really like the process, and i have enjoyed 'planning' videos since i was a young child, but i have only started recently, and made youtube profileYouTube - JacobJonJustin's Channel also, just to mention, all my videos ARE meant to be comedys, so yeah.

but anyways the video i want you guys to judge and critique is my most recent one, The american way.
so here is the link

visual effects went off into the widescreen bars which made it seem less realistic

too much camera movement, next time, only move the camera once per shot. rarely should you pan towards something, stop, and then pan back to something else in the same shot. more camera angles would have been nice.