You really could have showed more emotion with emily. It just sounds like she dont care as long as she gets leah back and when she got home why didnt they talk about leah speech?? They should have kissed in my point of view.

You really could have showed more emotion with emily. It just sounds like she dont care as long as she gets leah back and when she got home why didnt they talk about leah speech?? They should have kissed in my point of view.

Author's Response: Thank you! I figured it was time for something this challenging... Most of my oneshots hinge on the character I'm working to have depth, and the others to rely on the depth they already had from the books. I wanted to give both of them depth, which might not have turned out as well as I'd hoped, but it was fun. And I'm glad that it came across that way... I'm rambling. Sorry. Little overexcited about the review...

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