I think I understand the Review you just gave me for The Founder's Revenge. You are not a fan of Long stories, you only do one-shots, you write about James and Lilly as the main character's.

I felt like you dropped me into the middle of some point of time. I had no reference as to when, where, or how the characters got to a dance. In my opinion I would have appreciated a build up as to how they got there.

I also felt like like some of the events were left incomplete and were a bit off track.

You do have some very nice writing in places and I do appreciate the effort you put in to your story.

Author's Response: im sorry i was rude in the review.
i get annoyed when i dont understand where the characters are coming from,
i do think you need to develop on building up the story.
Thanks
Miaa