Monday, 16 December 2013

Week 9

Failed miserably at week one of allocating distinct time but the good news is that I managed to find some before the end of the week. While talking to a friend about stuff, it occurred to me that the content of this blog thus far has been focused mainly on negative states. Not always a good thing but maybe useful in terms of learning to connect to my emotions (currently mostly negative) as I get used to writing about what is going on both internally and externally. Looking at what I need to support my writing last week was intriguing in terms of also thinking about what I need for living. A window seat and a pair of headphones to write, a view and music to live, something to look at and something to listen to. Intriguing too, as my listening skills are actually really shocking. My lovely hubby, J, has suffered a lot from this and will probably be surprised to know that not only am I aware of this but am actually working really hard at getting better at it. Music is a key part of my life and is also a key part of my novel. I’m not sure how it’s going to work but I really want to use music to trigger memories, both good and bad, for my leading lady as well as provide support for progressing. I found a lot of strength in my early recovery from music and it can really pick me up when I’m down. I should also add that it can be like magic when I can dance to it too, space allowing.

Exercise – write about being trapped, thinking about how it feels, fictionalise if wanted…

As I looked at the wine bottle I could swear that I saw something move. Half full of red wine, the bottle had called to me across the kitchen, tempting me to take a sniff, to just have a little sip. No-one was here to notice, no-one to chastise me, to tell me to stop, to ask what I was doing, what harm could there be in a sip? If I’m honest, it had been tempting and I found myself moving towards it, my body taking me forward. But now, just there in the bottom of it, something moved. It wasn’t an animal or an insect but definitely some kind of creature. As I peered more closely at it, I began to see a leg and then an arm. Two tiny feet passed against the glass, almost human but not quite. The creature’s skin was grey, a dirty grey, and it was worn and wrinkled. It was moving slowly in the wine, part swimming, part floating, part drowning. As I watched it, I became aware of how I was feeling. My skin was prickling, hot on the inside and cold on the outside. The wine, no longer alluring but reeking of vinegar, was so overpowering that my stomach began to churn, my head to pound. A face appeared and looked directly at me, its eyes wide and bright, an enticing smile willing me to enter. Momentarily I moved and then stopped as I saw a glimpse of a gloat. As I stayed rooted to the spot, its eyes darkened, the brows furrowed, nostrils flared and the smile narrowed to a glare. The creature let out an almighty howl that I felt roll against my skin but could not hear. It pushed its face against the green glass, snorting through its nostrils, wailing silently, the wine drowning out any trace of a sound before disappearing into the darkness. The prickles subsided, the sickness settled and my head calmed. I turned towards the door and turned out the light.

1 comment:

Perhaps the creature was something that used to be within you? It sounds ugly and trapped within the bottle. You could have chosen to let it out, but you let it be and turned out the light on it. Perhaps a metaphor....?