This story was amazing in so many ways. Cute, fluffy, with hints of sarcasm sprinkled throughout...and the humour was fantastic. I think my favourite part was how Shari's hair was catching fire all the time, and how Jinx pointed it out every time (even if only in his head) and I laughed really hard at the line, "It gets...affectionate when you struggle." All in all, it was really well-done, and fantastically written. My ideal oneshot :)

Hey! I have always enjoyed this story immensely. I think it is beautifully written. I also like that there is an entire universe behind it; Jinx constantly makes references to things that have happened in the past, and to his life before Shari, and etc. I was wondering if maybe you could write a story about maybe when Shari first took Jinx in and saved him from being a weak demon in a demon world, or maybe the story of when Whitney tried to abduct Jinx that one time. Both of those sounded like they would be great stories to read, and although this fic is great as a standalone, I feel that having some 'prequels' of sorts would be awesome too. Anyways, even if you don't decide to write either of those stories at some point, thank you so much for this one! I enjoy it immensely and come back to read it often.

I'm so sad. I have the distinct impression that this is a oneshot. That means no more Jinx. I'm so distraught over that. (is that how you spell that? meh.)

Anyways, I have nothing coherent to say; I'm still busy reveling in the characters you made and bemoaning the fact that I don't live in their world. *sighs* Dammit. I would make a good witch, I swear! I'm tall and "intimidating" but lanky and begging for magic to course through my veins!

OMG that was creepy, read my penname and look at my avatar! I swear I have the intuition of a Mother XD!

Aw... the whole idea of this is EXTREMELY fluffy and yet... sexy... Shari seems to be "Fairty tale" with than wiccan, but at the same time, he seems to be a mix of both since you mentioned an elemnt, in fairy tale witches, they just say random stuff or shoot lightning from their hands P excellent story!