dear collugues, could you please correct my motivation letter, I need to send it in responce of job opportunity advirtised in Newspaper. thank you forward.

the letter is as follow

Dear Sir or Madam,

Since many time, I have been dreaming to work in your company (Hallibertom company), to practice my background that i learnt from my University as Engineer of Energitic and Fluid Mechanical followed by a Master of Fluid Mechanical from a same University. A subject of research that I treated for my master is «Enhanced oil recovery using a microemulsion/polymer flooding ». I choose this subject myself because I was my favourate subject and field since my childhood and enfance and this field of study and work still interesting and attracting me to.

From my reading of local Newspaper (El Watan) of 5th, Mai 2006, fortunatly I found your Job opportuenity advertisment, for drilling Engineer. Even the position is bit diffirente from mine, but I can assure you that I am a good learner, and motivated and I have a good level in english, which I can improved it easily by working in your company.

I have a good team work sperit that I gain from a differente job position that I did as a part time or full time, and in each position, I add a lot of success and I have also a good ability to work to anywhere.

A waiting for your esteemed interview appointement, please accept my deep regards and respect, and please feel free to contact me by e-mail or selfmobile number for further information.

thak you for your reply, I did what you wrote me, I tried to correct it, and bellow please find the corrected letter, i did my best but i am waiting for your suggestions.

Dear Sir or Madam,

Since many time, I have been dreaming to work in your company (Halliburton company), to practice my background that i learnt from my University as Engineer of Energetic and Fluid Mechanical followed by a Master of Fluid Mechanical from a same University. A subject of research that I treated for my master is «Enhanced oil recovery using a microemulsion/polymer flooding ». I chose this subject myself because I was my favorite subject and field since my childhood and enfance and this Field of study and work still interesting and attracting me to.

From my reading of local Newspaper (xxxxx) of 5th, Mai 2006, fortunately I found your advertised Job opportunity, for drilling Engineer. Even the position is bit different from mine, but I can assure you that I am a good learner, and motivated and I have a good level in English, which I can improve it easily by working in your company.

I have a good team work spirit that I gain from a different job position that I did as a part time or full time, and in each position, I add a lot of success and I have also a good ability to work anywhere.

A waiting for your esteemed interview appointement, please accept my deep regards and respect, and please feel free to contact me by e-mail or self mobile number for further information.

I've fiddled with the order of the letter as this is just an accompaniment to your resume or CV (I hope) and you need to get to the point more quickly.

I saw your advertisment for Drilling Engineer in the ***on 5 May 2006 and am writing to apply.

I have attached my resume/CV. You can see that I graduated from X University as an Engineer of Energetic and Fluid Mechanical (this title doesn't quite make sense, do you mean Mechanics?) followed with a Masters in Fluid Mechanical (again does not quite make sense) from the same University. My Masters research was on enhanced oil recovery using a microemulsion/polymer flooding and I still find this field very interesting.

I have been dreaming of an opportunity to work in your company and hope that you will be kind enough to grant me an interview. I am a good learner, highly motivated and I have a good level of proficiency in English, which I can improve even further when working in your company.

I have a good team work spirit that I have gained from my previous positions, and in each company I have worked for, I have contributed a lot.

thank you a lot, now my letter seems to look more better, yes my Cv will be attecherd to the letter. my fiel of study is Fluid Mechanics in stead of Mechanical.

with your modifications , my letter is as follow:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I saw your advertisment for Drilling Engineer in the ***on 5 May 2006 and am writing to apply.

I have attached my resume/CV. You can see that I graduated from X University as an Engineer of Energetic and Fluid Mechanics followed with a Masters in Fluid Mechanis from the same University. My Masters research was on enhanced oil recovery using a microemulsion/polymer flooding and I still find this field very interesting.

I have been dreaming of an opportunity to work in your company and hope that you will be kind enough to grant me an interview. I am a good learner, highly motivated and I have a good level of proficiency in English, which I can improve even further when working in your company.

I have a good team work spirit that I have gained from my previous positions, and in each company I have worked for, I have contributed a lot.