Tricky exposure here and for the most part I think you have done really well on this one. I think it is great how you have caught two subjects in the two windows. This would not work nearly as well with just one person.

Not sure if you shot RAW, but I might suggest that if you did, you could develop two files from the original, one adjusted for the windows and one for the interior. Blending this scene wouldn't be all that difficult and I think it would give a better look overall.

So the great stories of life are hidden in new construction sites...;-) I think you made a very nice combination of the text, the view through the windows and the presence of these two people of different generations. You've captured nice symbolism in picture!

This one is exactly in " My style " of photography, therefore I can't refrain from writing a work ,providing I catch it . Perhaps
one stop darker would permit us to see what's outside, and I don't think it would spoil the two characters, but the composition is excellent and the picture attracts the eye !