Kristin is away on a trip. I don't know how long she will be gone. I think it will sound better and as long as it's allowed I'm going to take the chance and make the changes now. I can always move them back if that's what Kristin prefers.

> at 3:22: [Aside] – this seems to be one of those scripts where the aside comes after the related speech (that's annoying ). From what is said, I am quite sure this should be Jolly doing the aside. Actually the lines are spoken with a good “aside” intonation anyway, so the easiest thing would be to cut it out altogether

> at 8:36: [The captain knocks] – it would make more sense to put those directions before Jolly says “Who’s that knocks at the back-door ?”

> at 15:33: [She goes, and he follows her; she turns, and bids him stay.] – same here, this would be better placed before she actually says “I'll swear you shall not go in”, otherwise it’ll sound strange after the speech, in my opinion