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My knife game, will end ya life lame, slice n maim.
i hated you as soon as i saw ya username.
Your troll game, a cause for disdain.
Wait, didn't you lose to funeral nick….hang your head in shame.

You changed ya name to haymaker, in a attempt to sound greater.
Got boyed off by funeral nick, and changed it back a day later.
That battle wasn't so much rap, more towards slapstick
I especially liked the part where you started mumbling like a spastic
If you and Nick sparred, that retard would've left you scarred
If i knock Yager over, its not just cuz i'm sloppy drunk at the bar.

I don't know if your Canadian, my research was poor.
you look like you come from a nice place, on that one i'm sure.
You say stupid shit, what a attention whore.
TEXT BATTLING DOSEN'T NEED YOUR KIND SOMEONE SHOW HIM THE DOOR!!!!!!!11!!!11!!!!

This'll probably be my only battle, cuz these nerds can't compete.
i'll do my shit, put a lid on it, thats a toilet seat.Toilet seat/cant compete is a stretch but second line was funny

My knife game, will end ya life lame, slice n maim.
i hated you as soon as i saw ya username.
Your troll game, a cause for disdain.
Wait, didn't you lose to funeral nicků.hang your head in shame.Haha losing to funeral nick is a shame. Maybe try making some kind of wordplay or joke here

You changed ya name to haymaker, in a attempt to sound greater.
Got boyed off by funeral nick, and changed it back a day later.'boyed off' gets bonus points for British slang, again try to multi it with 'sound greater' and it'll hit harder

That battle wasn't so much rap, more towards slapstick
I especially liked the part where you started mumbling like a spastic
If you and Nick sparred, that retard would've left you scarred
If i knock Yager over, its not just cuz i'm sloppy drunk at the bar.Last line was sick, build up was too long for a text battle - if you could do a 1-bar setup, that's hard

I don't know if your Canadian, my research was poor.
you look like you come from a nice place, on that one i'm sure.
You say stupid shit, what a attention whore.
TEXT BATTLING DOSEN'T NEED YOUR KIND SOMEONE SHOW HIM THE DOOR!!!!!!!11!!!11!!!!Keystyle? I'm guessing the closer was a bit quick; doesn't hit too hard, but I get what you were doing

Definitely some good concepts, if you don't like punchliney styles, you could try incorporate more jokes, maybe some wordplay type jokes could be in there. Idk. Keep at it!