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Well I do have many poems, but didn't want to overwhelm the thread or you guys.

terra, that is a sweet poem. I have a hard time with sweet, so i give you credit.

Walt Whitman was an american poet around the time of the american civil war. ( Mid to late 1800's.) He spent most of his career on a book called "Leaves of Grass." I LOVE Whitman. Fett_II, do you have a favorite poem or verse of his?

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder."Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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Si Titran wrote:

Well I do have many poems, but didn't want to overwhelm the thread or you guys.

terra, that is a sweet poem. I have a hard time with sweet, so i give you credit.

Walt Whitman was an american poet around the time of the american civil war. ( Mid to late 1800's.) He spent most of his career on a book called "Leaves of Grass." I LOVE Whitman. Fett_II, do you have a favorite poem or verse of his?

Whitman rules, doesn't he. Not into "sweet" poetry either myself, I prefer when it's kind of deeper, darker. I like Nelligan. Some others too.

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Wow, I like the poems people I'm not very good at writing poetry, and like AA, I never really got into it, but all of yours are really creative. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more

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cloneapart wrote:

Aww, thats cute, wish I had a guy say that to me

I agree whole heartedly. Here's something for AA.

Leave me,As untouched porcilenRather for the bestBecause I know what we would end upBeing the conclusion here,And I want something better for your future.I can not tear apart your world apart for my own sakeI might even stop you from your self hereBetter to leave everything else you've left unsaidLocked behind the toungeEven desired so by my earsI would just rip this hope; life apartSeperate you from what has been confessed to me as a great loveI'll be the one that makes you lose joy in your ambitions and work, Bring out that beaten down person,Once everything is said and done.It would all start hereIf I agreed with this absurd kissMostly made of sleeplessnessThe current dependancy suits our needs to such detailIn a great balanceNo, I'll move on and forget everything each of us has saidAs long as I know that you're willing to do the sameAnd this will never have happened.I worked it out, over the yearsEven, prepaired for every situationSo, even though this hurtsPlease be willing to trust meWhen I explain how it's better my way,For the both of us.

((sorry for any bad spelling mistakes))

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder."Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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That poem I must have wrote sometime between... July 2001 through. October 2006. I know that's a broad time frame... but I know with certaintly who this poem was about and that was our relationship's time frame.

I'm glad you like it A_A and Dave!

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder."Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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Si Titran wrote:

That poem I must have wrote sometime between... July 2001 through. October 2006. I know that's a broad time frame... but I know with certaintly who this poem was about and that was our relationship's time frame.

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JustDave wrote:

Si Titran wrote:

That poem I must have wrote sometime between... July 2001 through. October 2006. I know that's a broad time frame... but I know with certaintly who this poem was about and that was our relationship's time frame.

I'm glad you like it A_A and Dave!

Sounded like a tough one for you. Hope life makes you happier now.

It does, thank you.

Hurrah for no smoking!

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder."Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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I hope I'm not being a hog here. I wrote this one last night. This is as close to sweet as I think I've ever come.

The song played softlyIn the cold nightThe vision of a futureSo close, almost to the touchQuiet from voicesJust two entiwined in danceHolding each other tenderlyThere is no one elseAfter all, the day is throughAnd theirs is now to each other.

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder."Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."