Yeah, any 'I love you's from these two is definitely out of character XD but actually, the way you wrote it was about as close as can get, considering their attitudes. I thought this fic was really well-done - fluffy, very fluffy, but not so gag-me sweet it was sickening. Just - a really good balance. Nice work!

"(even though he’s an atheist and never believed in Heaven or Hell or God or any of that bullshit)" Did you realize that in the book it said that Dally and the gang are Christian! It said in the book, that they went to church once but Dally was too busy trying to ly down in a hamock and didn't go with them and Darry was working.

How dare this only have two reviews! I will personally hunt down the lazy ones who are not reviewing this! This fic should be overflowing with reviews! They shall face my squirrelly wrath! No, really, this is the first slash that involved Tim that I've found. I think... But, I love it, so who cares!

Hey, this was really cute! Actually, the only part of it where I think (PERSONAL opinion btw) that they were out of character was the I love yous. At the beginning, all that rough, passionate, hurts-so-good love seemed very realistically...them. And very male. It was only the speaking aloud that was out of character...but...(this is practically my mantra) it's always the sweetest (and most believable) when love is the reason for being out of character...cause that's what it's like in real life, right?