"Another one walks the green mile!" I really like the comparions here between entering high school and entering death row.

"I'm in the wrong class." That's okay, on my first day of high school, I ended up walking into the classroom and I was the only girl there - apparently it was an all-male health class and someone had messed up my timetable. Good stuff. :P

This seriously reminded me of my high school. Like no lie I was having a panic attack cause I was like "AH SCHOOL NO I DON'T WANT TO GO BACK THERE YET!" Overall for a dream this is very realistic. I like this poem, good job! :)

Very interesting to read. These are fears I think all of us have had! I especially liked the "green mile" part. By the way, don't advertise in the summary that it has a slow start. I almost didn't read it because of that and now I don't regret reading your poem.