I love how you portrayed them both! */* I find it hard to find Haru written in a way I really like, and I just super duper enjoyed the way you showed the multifaceted nature of his hard-to-read personality... Imagining his facial expressions was perfect. x) I also like that you fit so many little canonical details/traits into the story-those things really made it feel like their personalities were accurately written. Thank you! xoxo

That was so sexy. I like how shy and delicious Haru is, and Mako tried to be as gentle as possible. They're so made for each other and both such a hot couple. OMG I hope you write more smut. Try a multi-chapter next time! You're s great writer and would love to see more hot stories from you

This was good. I really enjoyed it. The characters worked well and the language features were on point. Though, I do disagree with you about Haru being the initiator. We all have our own head canons of course. xP I feel that events can change circumstances, so I like to explore with both dynamics. Are you going to write more for this fandom? It would be really cool to see some more from you. Are you on AO3? That's where Free! is happening atm. The fics on there are great quality, and I think yours would look well with the bunch. :) Love your Makoto. Good luck and happy writing.