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Maelody says:How cute that they changed their minds about one another in the same moment. And to think, you described Salazar as having bright, kind eyes! That's not something you read everyday! Though, I was really hoping to see an actual progression past that point into a possible relationship haha. Though maybe you two can collab again someday and continue? ;)

Like I told Rumpel, you two make me insanely jealous that you can write this era. I can't, so I don't normally read it, but this was a great. To see a proud woman, upset about men in the world, against the proud man, who believes women have their place. It was an interesting case.

Her man servant haha. I can never take that term seriously! XD though her lady maid was cool. The way she talked to her showed a good relationship between Rowena and her servant and that she can get personal with them. Telling milady that she never went by rumors alone, and Rowena listening, shows a thoughtful side if her and gives us just a little more background.

One of my favorite parts though was when she listed where everyone was from. Them simply not being only from England was awesome! It gives a little more light on their backgrounds for the time period than what is all written down. I appreciate that!

A wonderful story and collaboration all around! I wish you both the best if luck!

~Mae

Author's Response: Hello!! Thank you so much for your review!! I'm sorry that I'm so late in responding.

Yes, I was quite surprised that I described Salazar with bright, kind eyes, too, but it felt right in the context of the story--we had to put some love in it, after all! :) Arrgghhh, the fact that the one-shot had to be under a certain amount of words was a bit frustrating, because I would LOVE to write more about their relationship!! If Rumpel's up for it, I would love to collab again one day, but alas! Life is so busy!

Awww, don't be jealous!! I feel the same way about Marauders era--mad respect for people who can do it! I don't always read or write Founders, but lately I've been thinking a lot about it. I would like to see more of it! I would like to think that Rowena was somewhat progressive for her time: she ruled in the midst of men who thought she was good for nothing but looking pretty and having children. So I wanted her to really break out of that mold. :)

Man-servant... Haha, yes, it is a pretty funny term. :D Rowena is wise, so it seemed fitting for her to listen to other people's wisdom! In my imagination, she is not rude to people who are below her station, because she realizes that all people are worthy of courtesy.

I am in love with the idea that the Founders came from all different places! It makes the idea of them coming together to create Hogwarts just that much more interesting.