That was extremely interesting, though I would like for there to be some clarification on how the Dolorosa knew Handmaid. Other than that, I liked how it turned out, and how you made Mindfang take the Dolorosa and her money back was genius.

Meu-Meu chapter 1 . 2/8/2013

just one thing. you do know that arenea and the marquise were totally different people. for all we know, spinneret mindfang was he actual name. genetically they were the same, but existed in different incarnations of alternia and BEFORUS AND ALTERNIA ARE NOT THE SAME!

How you wrote her was interesting, I always imagined the handmaid as someone who was all serious and gloomy but I guess since this is a younger her, its different? I love her curiosity with her own race it really makes it more realistic :0!

I think there were a few minor spellings here, what confused me was Tidino/tadano? Are they similar trolls?

Mindfang was amazing (all I can see is her with a Jack Sparrow-esque smirk oh dANG), the slave lady's rage was amazing, the salesfolks were amazing and wow!

I'm a huge handmaid dork and I was doing some research for an ask blog and asdfghjsd this was super great and amazing and wonderful gosh the praise I can gush out for this (pleasereturntoitomgggg)