I love the manga. We really need to spread the word so that we can have more of these stories. I noticed this: Bartender has two stories, but something called Samurai Pizza Cats has ninety-eight. I have no idea what that series is...but I'm pretty sure it's not 49 times better.

In words to this story, really cute. I like that you kept Miwa's little 'guard' around Ryuu at the end.

Gosh, this is adorable and just what I was looking for. I had no idea this had a fanfic archive, wowza. This is one of my favorite manga and I'll definitely think about writing my own fic. Anyway... I love how you managed to keep the story brief and quick-paced, that definitely kept my attention. The dialogue is spot-on, and goshhh, that "or..." part was so cuteeee. I enjoyed this.