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Sunday, August 12, 2012

What if...? I Twisted a Fairy Tale?

This post was technically supposed to go up tomorrow, but Mondays are always crazy for me (and I don't trust blogger's post scheduling utility.) That means that I may, possibly, be the first person in this blogfest to post. :)

Have you noticed that by changing one detail; one event, one character trait, one thought...you can completely alter the rest of the story?

Check out the links above for the rules.

Of course, thanks to hanging with so many romance writers, I just HAD to pick:

I was going to work with one of the obscure fairy tales, but then an idea popped into my head and I'm changing a tiny detail in one of my favorite fairy tales of all time, Beauty and the Beast. Note that I didn't use the Disneyfied version!

As the Beast raged on outside, I collapsed to the floor of
my new prison and cried for the first time that night. I was trapped here. Forever.

I cried and felt the gentle arms of the wind wrap around me, pushing
back the loose strands of my hair and drying my tears.

***

Time had no meaning here except when it came to him. It passed in breaths, not hours. He began to speak to me, now and again
breaking the rules and his silence. First, a whisper in my sleep.A word of support as homesickness took hold.
When the Beast was in a particular mood, my wind would be at my side, offering tendrils
of supportive words.

As my friendship grew with the Beast, different feelings
began to form in me for my wind, my silent footman.

I knew he felt the same. In the dark of the night when he
must have thought I was sleeping, I could have sworn I heard the faintest of
whispers—nothing more than a breath—say, “I love you” as it lingered across my
cheek and over my brow. I smiled. Perhaps he guessed. But we didn’t speak of
it.

Until I learned about the curse.

“But we can’t be together. You need to break the spell.” His
voice barely made it to my ears but I could still hear the anguish tangled in
it.

I slid my hands up invisible arms to his neck and pulled his
head down toward mine. “Right now, I don’t care about breaking spells. All I
care about is you.” Even though I couldn’t see him, I could feel the brush of
his breath on my lips, the electric tingle of proximity. “I love you,” I
whispered, and then there was no more distance between us.

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