Hi all,
I've got a new track that I want feedback on. You can catch the mp3 file here: http://uploadingit.com/files/1271237_ueoqa/Emergence.mp3]Emergence.mp3 (http://uploadingit.com/files/1271237_ueoqa/Emergence.mp3%5DEmergence.mp3)

I've already gotten some tips from a friend of mine, but I figured that more opinions would mean more help. I won't write what the other guy said, because I don't want to bias anyone. Thanks for your input!