2 Responses to You are the air I breathe

Execellent poetry but do you really think that you would fail without C. in your life? I am not being critical just wondering. I have always said that I have a man in my life because I want to not because I need to. I survived (although lesser quality) before I met my husband. He enhances my life 1000 times over but I also know that I will survive should he not be in my life. I would be grief stricken, heartbroken and more (depending ont he circumstances) but I would be me still and I would be ok. I think you would not fail either. Just some ponderings….a beautiful and obviously (for me) thought provoking poem.

Yes Michelle, I think that I would fail wittout her. Let me explain what the poem means to me. I know that I could make it without C, I know that I could live without her, but my life is truely better because she is a part of it. My life has changed and will continue changing by having her in my life. I want to be a better man not for her but for me, she makes me want to be a better man. She is giving this life a new meaning, a new reason to fight. and the love I feel for her is the strongest thing I have ever felt. I know I would survive, but I know my life would not be as cool and full as it is with her… Saying without you I would fail …(to accomplish all the goals that now my life has for us)… Feel free to discuss