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Saying Sorry … - Poem by Vidi Writes

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Saying Sorry …

‘Sorry’ is used apologeticallyApology is the admission of guiltGuilt can be referred to FaultFault happens due to imperfectionImperfection is a result of weaknessWeakness occurs due to limitationsLimitations put one into captivity.

Now, let’s read this in reverse…

Being in captivity I had my limitationsLimitations acted on my nerves and made me weakThat weakness brought into me imperfectionWhen I was imperfect I committed a faultEveryone said fault is guiltAdvised me to admit the guilt and apologizeAs an apology I had to say ‘SORRY’.

Now, let’s see things as the crow flies…

While saying this ‘sorry ‘I just talked to myself, “It’s too difficult to say this! ” -If I want to avoid ‘saying sorry’ -Then I should be free from captivityFreedom will free me from saying sorry.I started listing all those causesThose put me in captivity in this world.

Now, let’s see the item in the list.

“1. My EGO” I wondered. Is this only ‘one’ in the list? I realized, ‘this one is equal to thousands’.For all those who find it difficult to say sorry, I have a humble word with you.“Fight for your Freedom from ‘Extreme Sense of Self’ “Thus you may avoid saying sorry.

Comments about Saying Sorry … by Vidi Writes

adds up to the my thing your thing and the correct thing
and done on a very nice note
we fly off sorries....mostly unecessary...
vidi
u hv brought it into a sharp focus...several angles
beautiful... a truly unique poem
loved reading it
cheers and ten(Report)Reply

Saying sorry is the start of healing, acceptance of your sorry, then makes things right. Sorry is the start of healing. No sorry, means the start of guilt, guilt can erode like and like a cancer grow. Result fear and unhappiness. Vidi your poems create good thoughts. Thank you. Bob(Report)Reply

Wow Vidi, first I must confess that your poem was recommended by another poet...it is absolutely fabulous and I will certainly recommend it far and wide to all the egoists that I come across and believe me there are many of them....It is worthy of publication in all national journals and newspapers...10++++(Report)Reply

the poem of the day to me....excellent analysis you have done''all the three views where presented beautifully...though my view would be different....to me ego can never be negated''...ego should grow instead of shrinking...a bigger one will not fear...saying sorry in not at all a problem for me..and i say it from my heart...this poem i take into my favs(Report)Reply

Vidi, you alone can write this logical, arithmatical piece.
yyou are right
its so difficult to apologise,
for then you must have insight,
ego is the one to jeopardise
a chance to mend,
for we'll rather die or defend
lose our peace of mind,
friends, sleep for false sense of pride
insighthul write

I'm thinking about the trip between ego and logic...shall the twain meet in peace? ?
Most oft they pull in opposite directions.....resulting in a lot of hair-splitting..! !
Cheers.
Subroto(Report)Reply