This is so great. I love how quick the emotion changes and the final lines make you go from feeling happy to sad that fast. This is a great piece of work. I am going to have to read more of your writing.

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Fri, November 30th, 2007 9:39am

Thank you. I've always enjoyed writing, and probably will go on until I run out of ideas. However, that doesn't seem to be happening any time soon.

That poem is in Symphony of Blood, if you're interested. So far, it's the longest story I've done. As of yet, it's incomplete. But I haven't given up on it.