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CoLorful DreaM says:Wow...well, that was really emotional...really sad... really and many more really. I... felt so sorry for Rose. Cancer is such a horrible thing. As Rose said, she couldn't even know when the end would come. You described it so painfully: waiting for death to come, eventually, but still be afraid of that moment. The idea of the heart beating as a non-stopping "Is this the end?" was really good! And she was only sixteen... I can't imagine how it it to feel that at sixteen... Just like a nightmare...

Wonderful one-shot!

Ramona
Gryffindor

Author's Response: Ah, thankyou! It was quite painful to write, because cancer is close to my heart, and it was hard to put myself in Rose's place so completely. But I hope I managed it ok! I'm glad you like the idea of the heart; it would be quite nightmarish to know you're killing yourself.