Amazing!, I can really imgine this happening! It sounds just like Vegeta you're really good at his POV, but I have a little constructive criticism, hope you don't mind.

He might be an alien but I doubt he's unfamilier with words such as buffet table. And the way he talks is slightly different(IMO)like instead of saying two words he's the type to shorten them..like instead of

"Damn I am good"

"Damn I'm good"

And I think you should stick to one language and not use Japanese words, even if that was the original language:)

But these are just personal views, no offence is meant to your writing(Which is amazing!)Because the characters were really In Character, the whole fic, and I loved the last bit, it was so them.

I've only read your fics in the DBZ section but I've read a Lot in the Tekken section and I have to say, you write REALLY well

I loved this one-shot! You have a true talent...I don't think I'd be too good at telling it in Vegeta's PO like you can! This is going on my favorites and now when I get the chance I'm going to have to read more.

You did an excellent job from his PO, it was like the reader was inside Vegeta's head and we were getting to see what he saw in this fic's setting. Great job and KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!