That... Was...BRILLIANT! Seriously, I despise Mary Sues and nowni won't give aby YGO stories containing OCs a chance at all. The sad thing is that Mare is actually pretty much what a lot of crappy OCs people really have are like, and my god, I've seen some in the YGO section before where someone wrote about pretty much all her favorite male characters dating her. This story was a great laugh, and had an even greater message; Mary Sues suck.

"Joey: Okay, I'm going to (CENSORED) her (CENSORED) and then grab her (CENSORED) and (CENSORED) it until it (CENSORED) and finish the (CENSORED) with a big (CENSORED) (CENSORED). And that's how I plan to comb my wife's hair, if I ever get a wife."

Even though I do own a mari sue and she has somehow made her way into the character list (Taniya)this is hilarious and oddly accurate to most everyone's sue stories. Would you mind reading mine and reviewing it? I don't care if it is a flame I just want opinions on my story.