Please carry on writing this story and update soon!! I love Lily and Luke so much this is one of my favourite stories. I've checked and read it 4 times in the hope that you will have written more I want to find out what happens!! Love this story so much I would give it 1million out of 10 if I could so please update soon for me and all your other readers I'm sure are dying to find out what happens!!

WHY WON'T YOU UPDATE?!?!?! THIS STORY IS MY FAVOURITE STORY! IT IS SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO GOOD! WHY AREN'T YOU UPDATING! LILY AND LUKE ARE AMAZING! I THINK JAMES MIGHT UNDERSTAND IF THEY ACTUALLY TELL HIM! WILL EVERYONE FIND OUT SOON? I REALLY WANT EVERYONE TO FIND OUT AND I WANT TO KNOW EVERYONE'S REACTIONS! PLEASE DON'T ABANDON THIS STORY! I AM CHECKING EVERY DAY TO SEE IF YOU HAVE UPDATED! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO NOT ABANDON THIS STORY! I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I WOULD DO WITH MY LIFE IF YOU ABANDON THIS STORY BECAUSE I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND IT IS SO FANTASTIC! I GOT MY BEST FRIEND ONTO READING FANFICTION BY TELLING THEM ABOUT YOUR STORY! AT FIRST SHE THOUGHT IT WAS WEIRD THAT I READ FANFICTION BUT WHEN SHE READ YOUR STORY, SHE GOT ADDICTED THE SAME WAY I DID AND IF YOU UPDATE SOON YOU WILL BE MY FAVOURITE PERSON EVER! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!I AM BEGGING YOU TO UPDATE!

I love this fan fic so much I've red it 4 times and got all of my friends to read it, please can you update soon we want to know what happens next so badly! This is my favourite story lily and Luke are perfect- especially Luke!!! I know it's been a whiles once the last chapter was posted but if you've given up on this story please don't because so many people love it and your such an amazing writer! Words can't describe how great this story is so please update as there's only so many times I can re-read this! Xxx

ITS BEEN FOUR MONTHS
PLEASE COME BACK NOW!
YOU UPDATED BEFORE MY SUMMER STARTED AND NOW IT HAS ENDEDDD
PLEASE COME BACKKK!!!
I'M NOT YELLING JUST VERY ANXIOUS AND EAGER SO PLEASE COME BACK *CRYING EMOJIS*
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!! This is byfar my most favorite story ever!

WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN? WHY AREN'T YOU GOING TO UPDATE YOUR STORY!!! THIS STORY IS LIKE... MY FAVOURITE STORY EVER! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! DO NOT GIVE UP ON IT BECAUSE IT IS AMAZING! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

An update?? What!? Haha I am so glad you got a new chapter out, I forgot how much I love this story! Please please please don't leave us waiting this long again for an update! Speaking of, when are you planning on posting ch. 20?

Hi Miranda, I think this is the first time I've written a review for your story although it has been a favourite for years. I always think a sign if a good story is in the ability to re-read it and still love it - which I do with this story! I've really enjoyed this story and reading about the characters journeys so far. Looking forward to the next update!

Hi Miranda, I am really sorry that I didn't review to any of the other chapters, I started reading the story about two weeks ago and could't stop reading!
I really literally just LOVE it!
I like the way Luke and Lily got together, how they have to try and keep it secret, and how just perfect they are together :)
And it just feels so real due to how insecure she sometimes feels and how bad the timing sometimes is for them and so on.
I am still really amazed that Albus didn't say anything to James since he definitely suspects/knows something. And I am just SO looking forward to all the reactions; I can't really imagine how everyone will react. I suppose James will be quite...furious, but I hope he'll be ok with it after a while ?
That's also a point where I really like the storie, the way how different the thoughts of the people are, like, how over analysing Lily always is or how much Luke thinks about the fact that it's James' sister and how 'wrong' that is.
So I hope you forgive me for just dropping one review in the end, but I promise, I'll review all the ones still to come :)
Love, Hanna

OMG amazing amazing. I think iv said this before but you are such a brilliant writer i love your stories so much. When i read this its like i am the character and that's one of the things i love about book when it makes your feel like you are there on the story. And i have a question for you what are you going to do with your life? Because i REALLY think you could publish your own book, even if at first publishers say its nit good enough think of Jk Rowling and bow many publishers stupidly let her down but she kept trying and eventually she found a publisher that was smart enough to publish her book and just look how big Harry Potter is now i don't think iv known anyone who has not heard of the name Harry Potter at the most. And yes some people may hat Harry Potter and some people might have there own versions and some people might think its the complete opposite of what it is. Anyway the point in trying to make here is that you have a talent for writing that i just can't ignore .
lots of love
hoping you are well
. Megan xxx

Hii iv decided to write a review on all of the chapters i read from now on and OMG IS THIS THE BEST ONE YET OR NOT! i am so glad they kissed i was waiting for them to get together. But if someone finds out Lilly could get kicked of the team by HER OWN BROTHER and he could loos his best friend :(. I am about to read the next chapter and i know it will be just as good as this one. Keep on writing
love
. Megan xxx

Hi this is such a good story i haven't wrote another review because i havnt stoped reading like literally my boyfriend orderd a Chinese and threw the hole thing i sat there and read he knows i love reading and i read every night before i go to bed no exceptions but i hardly ever read at dinner so he said to me 'that must be a really good fanfic you've got yourself there because the only books you have read during dinner are Harry Potter and The Fault In Our Stars' and hes right i just cant stop reading so i got to this point and decided to write a review. I think you have got a really good talent for writing and should write your own book, you have a great imagination and have come up with some really good ideas for this story if you have written any more i would LOVE to read them.
Love
. Megan xxx

Please please please update soon! I've been obsessed with this story and have been reading the whole thing from time to time with the hopes that you'll update soon and that when you do I'll be ready to jump straight to the new chapter w/o having to read the whole thing haha. I'm absolutely obsessed with this and I was honestly a little worried you had abandoned this story. You literally made my week with this update. I randonmly and spontaneously check up on this story and I've literally had a grin on my face the entire day after I saw that it had been updated!! Please, please please update soon again!