How would it be if Romney said something like this tonight at the convention?

President Obama said to the entrepreneurs of America that they did not build their businesses on their own.
Let me tell you something Mr. President, I built Bain Capital, the entrepreneurs of America built their businesses. And what have you built Mr. President?
I’ll tell you what you built. You built that! ( pointing to the debt clock ticking away ) And if that is not bad enough, every second you are building it even bigger.

This was not completely original, it was a collar on the Philadelphia talk show who came up with the idea.