]]>By: Teresahttp://www.skycycler.com/2010/02/rift/comment-page-1/#comment-353
Sun, 14 Feb 2010 19:43:26 +0000http://www.skycycler.com/?p=157#comment-353Wowee, what another incredibly evocative picture of humanity you paint with your words… makes me reflect on the depth I miss in those near to me. Thankyou for this epiphany story.
]]>By: Cathy Olliffehttp://www.skycycler.com/2010/02/rift/comment-page-1/#comment-346
Sat, 13 Feb 2010 21:14:12 +0000http://www.skycycler.com/?p=157#comment-346There’s so much I want to say about this story. But no words will come close to describing how it makes me feel.
The story is so Real.
The writing, Perfect.
]]>By: Deanna Schrayerhttp://www.skycycler.com/2010/02/rift/comment-page-1/#comment-345
Sat, 13 Feb 2010 19:32:34 +0000http://www.skycycler.com/?p=157#comment-345Unsurprisingly gorgeous Simon. I’m always anxious to read your stories because they’re so beautifully told. I can only echo what everyone else has said – lovely lines throughout but I believe, if I had to choose, my favorite is “..her tears fell into the gap like a blessing…” So telling.
Bravo!
]]>By: Jen Bhttp://www.skycycler.com/2010/02/rift/comment-page-1/#comment-343
Sat, 13 Feb 2010 12:40:55 +0000http://www.skycycler.com/?p=157#comment-343By writing the entire thing where they only converse via notes, it’s heartbreakingly distant– and saying he doesn’t know his neighbour’s wife’s name, whereas his neighbour knows his… more distance. I feel sad for this MC. This story is beautiful and wonderfully pivoted around this strange and simple event. Well done. I’ll definitely come back and read more of what you write.
]]>By: Michellehttp://www.skycycler.com/2010/02/rift/comment-page-1/#comment-341
Sat, 13 Feb 2010 03:03:52 +0000http://www.skycycler.com/?p=157#comment-341Great writing – such a sad story.
]]>By: CJhttp://www.skycycler.com/2010/02/rift/comment-page-1/#comment-340
Fri, 12 Feb 2010 23:06:32 +0000http://www.skycycler.com/?p=157#comment-340Do you see me applauding? You’ve done it again – Bravissimo!
]]>By: Laura Enohttp://www.skycycler.com/2010/02/rift/comment-page-1/#comment-339
Fri, 12 Feb 2010 22:45:07 +0000http://www.skycycler.com/?p=157#comment-339There are many kinds of rifts. How sad to be so close to reaching an agreement, then life propels you in opposite directions. Your story was beautifully written, so full of symbolisms.
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