Speech Openings CNBC

I heard a speaker at a United Way Tocqueville Society luncheon yesterday, who gave us insights into the economy. CNBC pundit, Joe Battipaglia, was the speaker. A large man with a large personality, his energetic approach, even with the grim news, kept the audience interested. Despite that positive assessment of his speaking style, I still have some comments that could improve his presentation … tips that you can put into use in your speeches, also.

He started his presentation with a joke. I really don’t like speeches that begin with jokes. They can put an audience ill at ease. You never know whether it will be funny, edgy, offensive, or delivered poorly. He did deliver it well. But it was too long. It took several minutes to tell. And the punch line dealt with sex, always a no-no in speaking.

Your own stories are better than a canned joke. Later in his presentation he told about some interactions he had with his family about the economy. They were much funnier and captured the audience attention better than his opening remarks.

The other public speaking tip that applies to everyone relates to the use of audio visuals. He did not use any, but should have. Joe dealt with very heady issues about the economy. Those in the audience with financial backgrounds were fine with his information, but those in the crowd who did not have that expertise got lost a few times. Some visual aids would have helped the audience retain the information much more easily.