This is horrible. No proper separation. "Oh hey, this is a self-insert!" Well god damn, I never would've figured. And why mention pony crap at all? WHY? It has no bearing or influence on anything, ANYTHING, Starcraft related You're literally copying and pasting his story, but inserting yourself and replacing the setting as a modern Earth. Good job, you are quite literally the scum you would find on the rafters of an old building. No creativity, no damn line breaking, no unique ideas being brought to the table. Please, just go write more of your junk somewhere else. PLEASE. I'd PAY you to get off this site if I could.

HEY! welcome back!
good to see you again, and good to see you've been practising. this is actually very good, i especially love that you put consideration towards the multinational impact... pun not intended. Goddamn North Korea.

That's nothing I've got 300and climbing on just three chapters of a Stargate/Harry potter crossover... Also who gives a crap what the blizz did. Canon is what you set at this point. As for the bronies I'm not saying I'm judging or anything... But, oh who am I kidding, yeah I'm judging you.