thank god theres more and I think you should do a follow up based a few years later I don't know if this is just me but I want more like is there still unrest in the village or is there still mistrust of the hyuga going on are naruto and hinata married is naruto the hokage can temari walk or has she been paralized andnhow are things going in Tsunadas (hope I spelled that right) village and there are tons more questions left unanswered so please at least do a little thing that atleast answeres one of those questions. please this was just too awesome to leave off at that.

The story was well written, though very dark for a kids manga. Poor Lee!

The death was kind of needed, admittedly. Because of Kiba (and partially Akamaru) the story would not have gotten as far as it did. Ino's death motivated Shikamaru to carve out Hanabi's eyes out, because of Kakashi and Hinata. The eye thing was a good plot device, but very grim.

Why Lee and Shika? It was not crucial, but oh well. The author has sole jurisdiction of a fic. Meh.

Author's Response: First off, Thanks for the review. Yes, I knew it was a little dark but I figure that at least it wasn't the same ol' cut and dry crap thats already been done before. Why Lee and Shikamaru? Because it seriously wouldn't be expected. Sometimes not everyone is able to get off their best moves before a fight is over and I wanted to show that.

holy shit exorcist bitch needs to die i cant believe it what a bitch i just want to strangle her and jeez right when we get some good happening she has to screw it up so now we all need to pick up any weapons we have and mentally hurl them at hanabi the demon seed from hell!

Well aside from the fact that I think there was an entire chapter missing somewhere between the Art of Breaking Part 3 and The Ghost of You it was still a good story. I have to say though, that you're ending was kinda, well rushed or forced. It didn't have the depth and detail and believability that the other chapters had. Also some of the characters acted really out of... pardon the unintended repetition... out of character.So the ending kinda flopped and disappointed.But overall it was still a good story, you made me cry and that happens rarely.

Author's Response: Yeah, I feel the same way...might end up doing a remix or special edition

Fucking hell... the only consoling thought I have is that Lee is not dead in the manga... but damn... I havn't cried that hard since Fred died in the last Harry Potter book... I have a hate/love thing for you now that will fade by the time I finish the series and turn back into a love thing (and if you're freaking out thinking Oh God Creepy Stalker Girl: It's really hard to stalk people over the internet and there are different types of love... this is a love that I gain for my favorite authors... a love that says "thank you for this story please write more")Anyways I'm still crying and It's three in the morning and I have homework I should be doing but I'm gonna continue reading.

Okay okay... I'm on chapter 27... I know I'm much too late to vote and all that... but I'm taking a deep breath and steeling myself for the next chapter... I hope to all heavens Lee won't die... PLEASE GOD!!!!! I will not flame you if he does die... but please note that I will cry... real tears! That's how good your writing is it has involved me this much! I WILL CRY!!!!! Okay... deep breaths.... here I go....

Name: Kieran (Anonymous) · Date: 16/09/07 - 11:58 pm · For: Epilogue

god thats a gud story, really gud story, a heck of a lot of mistakes, as in spelling and shit, but still blody awesome, btw how can naruto be a queen? and when is the next thing gonna be dun? :-)