Hey! I just found this site about two weeks ago, and this is one of the first stories I've read. I'd really like it if you would continue. I'd give you my e-mail, but I'm currently banned from it. I'll be checking back every now and then to see what's up. Oh! That reminds me! Johnny isn't just a boy's name. My aunt's name is Johnny. =) Bye! WTL

I'm quite sure that this is too little too late, but if i were you, i would have continued and finished the story not because you had readers or reviews or whatever, but because you wanted to finish it for yourself. I've only gotten a total of eight reviews for a total of six stories. Only one of them are abandoned and that's because I've been working on other things. I'm just saying, dont' rely on others to make you feel better about your writing. alot of people read but dont review,

Well...you don't seem to have many reviews, so I thought I would help you out cause I know what you're going through....
I think your beginning was really good...the only thing was this chapter...you basically copied it from the book...I know this because I've read the book like 30 times, and know where the passages came from...But I still like your fic, so please update, and try not to copy from the book!!! ^_^

I just realized...you can\'t have the teachers calling her \'Jonny\'. Snape wouldn\'t agree to it. So if you are still taking serious names, how about Adela, Pennina (it means pearl), Leorah (it means light, not as in weight, but as in sunlight), Sarah, Areila, Ariella, Esther (it means I will hide), Alyssia, Isobel, Jenny, if you want to keep it so Johnny is a good nickname, you could do Joanne or Joanie, Lila, Adele, Adelaide, Lauren, Clara, Claire, Alyssia, or Yocheved (G-d\'s glory). If you can\'t tell, I like to pick out names. I personally think she should be called Adela.

Er...that last chapter...I don\'t want to know. Anyway, I just read this thing, and you\'re so annoying, I had the perfect name in mind, and you had to pick Johnny! GO ISRAEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Woohoo!

Er...that last chapter...I don\'t want to know. Anyway, I just read this thing, and you\'re so annoying, I had the perfect name in mind, and you had to pick Johnny! GO ISRAEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Woohoo!

I got my copy the night of, Jen and I waited in line. I just finished reading it. (I\'m a very slow reader) It\'s been 44 hours since I got it, and its taken me awhile to finish it hasn\'t it? LOL!!!!
byes
~Katy

Hello!
Wow! Great chap! one suggestion? don\'t take this the wrong way but it might be better if you didn\'t copy so much from the book. I understand that you will need to sometimes but try adding more new stuff. Nevertheless it was still a GREAT chap! please hurry and update!
byes~
~Katy

WOW!!!!! I really liked that chapter!!! It was really really good!!!!
Ok first off, earlier I left a review saying there were a few things I were some minor parts I was confused about. Mostly it was just the arm breaking thing, but I read your review and reread that part and I think I get it now.
Oh, and like Katy said there is a lot of parts from the book that you copy into the story, but I know that it is only to get the story started, and I know that you will not use so many parts later in the story. But that chapter was really good!!! Keep up the great work!!!!
THANK YOU FOR DEDICATING THE CHAPTER TO US!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!
Update soon!!
Jen

Hey!! It is a really good story!!!! There were a few very minor parts I had difficultly understanding, but overall it was very good!!!!
Thank you for reviewing our story. We really appreciate all your support!! We also love some of the names you suggested!! I couldn\'t think of any names for you at the moment, but I think Katy had left some. Oh and Katy said she is sorry she spelt your name wrong, but she fixed it!!!!
Keep up the good work!!!!!!! Update soon!!!