I'm obsessed with this poem. I think the repetition of "tired" is just right. The simplicity of the poem makes it very relatable; I'm sure that many people can relate to these feelings (myself included).

jon suggested that i write a little something to go along with the picture, which i drew first. when i finished, and asked him what he thought, he said i ought to post it by itself. so, i wanted them to connect a little bit. thank you!