Excellent poem!
There is one thing I would change though: "I remember the feeling oh, so well"
doesn't really need the comma, because I've never heard anyone pause when saying it. I think it would read better as "I remember the feeling oh so well"
Just my opinion. Let me know what you think.
Your poem really reminded me of exactly how it felt as a youngster to be on those swings!
Great job.
May God bless.
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship