Oh my, this was indeed so terrible (in a good way, if that makes sense). I liked your characterisation of Stan. I think it suited him, the way you expressed his thoughts. The whole thing was written in such a horrifying manner, especially the end, and I loved it. There were some amazing descriptions and awesome imagery. You really got across the terribleness of the situation so great work there. You also described Umbridge perfectly!

All in all, this was definitely a very interesting take on Stan's hearing and I really enjoyed it. Great job!

Author's Response: Hello! :)

I'm so glad you liked this chapter, as it's the one I'm the most insecure about. I re-wrote it so many times before deciding to just post it! :P

I'm glad you liked Stan, and how his personality and voice was portrayed. It was a bit of an experiment, so I'm thrilled to get positive feedback. Hearing that the imagery was well done is just lovely as well! :)