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Topic: Poetry

I'm not sure how many of you would be interested or not, but this thread stems from a conversation that I had in the chat room with a few of you. I managed to find a poem (that doesn't make me ill with the thought of posting it) on my computer (many are not or on a much older unit). So I am posting it. I think its a few years old.

Feel free to post your own poetic works if you have any!

So much time wastedFloundered around (aground)So much time wastedNever upon my youthScribbled and trashedLost (some-where) inside dark passagesInsecure to pass alone in the shadow IÃ¢Â€Â™ll never find enough fear or courage to get back to those placesThis is the shell I have grown intoBurnt from the sun, cool breezes and green silent treesWise and tall standing forth to mock my very own stupidityLetters and Languages of old memorySlipped from my mindWords spent in different agesBecause I have no faith to voice.Despite all the deception placed in front of my old hopeful effortsHolding still memories of those dreamsOthers comforting arms, songsPeace falling lovely from dark cloudsSilencing eager angers for precious moments.To have become human-Faltered and reborn from deathful past.Does so much truly rest on our histories?Such being, forced to failEven regardless of color changing,Being made newThe Grey, old dirty, sinful self, deceased The White, a new future, filled with forgiveness

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder."Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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ok Chilax Greenie please. Rhyming is hard. But the effort shows. but you don't really need to explain vocabulary, unless that is artistic descison. If someone asks then we can all help inthe understanding of something. I tend to dissagree with the statement of "lifes so boring being a mandalorian". But that is personal preference. Keep trying to expand your ideas.

Meat is murder...... tasty tasty murder."Suggestion: Electrocution works well. Evisceration and Decapitation are also effective, or um, so I've heard."

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green helmeted fett wrote:

I didn't. It's just no one took any notice while they did to ST's. k? I'm not complaining!

You did demand for me to rate yours. I didn't because I don't realy like yours. Si gave you her thoughts on your poems, and they were not 'bad' thoughts. We know how old you are, you can stop telling us every day.

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Mum is sweet, her ciggerette fumeNot so charming as a blossom bloomWhy does she smoke....... I do not knowI dont know why she smokes oh so.alas her time continues and endsher smoke she sendsAlas, Alas, Alas.........

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Si, terra, both your poems are great. I feel like I can relate to both of them because I've had feelings like that before. The feeling I get from terra's poem is a more recent one because of current things going on between me and my girlfriend. I found it eerily similar. The feeling I get from Si's poem is one that I've been having for along time and is somewhat re-occuring. Thanks for sharing Si and Terra.

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