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What do I do now? What career is best for me?

Most of people whom are high school students, college students and graduate students or inexperience person facing career choose options; it often comes to his/ her mind of decision making struggling for which to choose. It can also bring a lot of uncertainty and confusion. As a twenty-one year old student, what I want to be in the future is a graphic designer that I have to make plans to become a successful graphic designer. Before that, there are some step have to do it. Know yourself, investigate the job market, and find an occupation to suit you that is most important for choose a career.

Actually, modern people image their ideal life and desire pursuer all of it, it is no matter what age or what varied social status they are in. According to New Directions textbook, The New American Dreams which from On Her Own: Growing Up in the Shadow of the American Dream (1990), written by Ruth Sidel. She is a modern woman who carries out an investigation of interview some women from different cities of the U.S.A. Even thought they are in different position, they identical toward a great future. They image a bright future such as have a successful career, an own house, an own car, lovely family and so on.

2. Most of people whom are.... ==> Most people either high school .......all face the career choice option.

3. As a twenty-one year old student==> ....years old

4. What I want to be in the future......that I have to make plans to become a successful graphic designer.==> What是多餘的 I want to be a graphic designer in the future, so that I need to make planes to be..........

5. step==> steps

6. In my opinion, to know your self and investigating the job market then find out suitable career (occupation) is the most important.

7. pursuer all of it ==> all of them (it就不需要加all了)

8. 不懂你"it is no matter what age or what varied social status they are in"要表達的是什麼?? 不過兩句之間要加上and或分號

Actually, modern people alway image their ideal life and eager to pursue them; that is no matter what the age or social status.