Though the colors blended wonderfully within the technique although likewise the reflect withdrawals far too much impact (the squiggles) such as on each eye and also hair

In other words too much white lines and in bubbles cheeks the small circles of refection are too much it makes the picture too overwhelming Also bad choice of background it doesn't have any theme towards the PPG something more simple would have done well

So my recommendation states either the background is changed auto something more appropriate or the PPG have less texture