The battle continues to wage in epic proportions. Will Neet save the ghostly damsel in distress? Will the bovine demon lord finally be vanquished? What awaits our sort-of hero? I don't know. Read
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Now a party of three, our kinda heroes make their way to the Ghoul King's castle. What perils await them this time? More importantly, will Neet care? If you think he will, you're reading the wrong
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At last, the hour of extinction has come! The Grave Lord has called upon his demonic armies and unleashed them upon the world for the utter annihilation of all life... So where is everyone?! Read Chapter

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Wow! was not preparing to lead such a interesting and humorous story today!

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Sun, July 9th, 2017 1:31am

Glad you enjoyed it! Comedy is a far departure from my usual works, and this was my attempt to make something outside of my comfort zone. I hope you enjoy the other chapters as well. I just came out with Chapter 7, and there will be more to come!

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Sun, July 16th, 2017 12:07am

Holy crap this is great! Funny, clever, and all around damn enjoyable. Honestly, it reminds me a bit of some D&D misadventures my group has had. 'I'd ship 'em'. Oh my Goooood. XD

I'm trying to think of a crit. to offer, here, as I don't like only praising stories- it doesn't help a writer grow- but I really can't find any. Brilliant work, man, keep it up!

It took me a little while, considering it's outside my norm of genre. Inspiration-wise? It started with a friend's suggestion I try a parody of sorts, which I followed up with nerd-culture references (I am one, after all), taking after some trope deconstructions I've grown fond of lately, then adding a bit of 4th wall break which I love when done right. By the time I had the concept, it was a matter of taking what I think is funny and rolling with it. Hope you liked it!

I agree with just about everyone here. I was half expecting the narrative to switch at some point in a long winded speech that someone would say, "Just roll the damned dice."
I wouldn't call this a Crit as they say, but I would have started with the vaporization of the Cleric. I like to start with a bang these days. But I will continue reading. And I think the title is fantastic. Drew me right in.

Brian

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Sun, January 7th, 2018 12:04pm

Very interesting input. I'll have to look back and see if that change could work better. Thank you for your feedback!

Hahaha, humor from you my friend? I hadn't thought I'd see the day, but you definitely managed it hahaha. Great job. I already like Neet, he reminds me a lot of a character of mine, who coincidentally was based off myself, egotistical aren't I? Hahaha. Regardless I'll be reading the rest of this story, as it's definitely caught my eye. After reading a lot of your more horror related works, I'm interested how you do comedy, so far so good my friend haha

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Sat, September 16th, 2017 3:46am

Thank you! Yes, definitely a step out of the norm for me, but it seems to be going well. Enjoy the rest of the chapters!