I really like it. Your portrayal of Ginny is exactly on mark, imho. I can't wait to see how you develop her character as she goes through the stages of mourning. And, of course, the twist...is Harry alive, or isn't he? That's the question I can hardly wait to be answered until the next update!

I read both chapters this morning and have been thinking about it all day. I love Ginny's response to Harry's question in the Prologue and think she's very Gryffindor to tackle the refugee camp. I'm looking forward to more chapters no matter where your narrative takes Ginny because your characterizations of her and her family are beautifully written.

KathrynFriday 28th April 2006 23:32

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I read both chapters this morning and have been thinking about it all day.

I'm truely honoured.

I love Ginny's response to Harry's question in the Prologue

I actually thought her answer may get a bit of a backlash.

and think she's very Gryffindor to tackle the refugee camp.

I think the one thing you can never doubt is Ginny's bravery.

I'm looking forward to more chapters no matter where your narrative takes Ginny because your characterizations of her and her family are beautifully written.

This is a really good story. I really like the time you take to explore Ginny's and others' feelings and emotions. Your writing style is engaging and draws you into Ginny's world of coping with her dreams. The initial angst is sensitive but hopeful .... not really dark, a hard fact to achieve. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story, ther seems to be so much more to go.

KathrynWednesday 26th April 2006 11:05

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Thank you.

initial angst is sensitive but hopeful

there are small parts of hope in all the angst.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story, ther seems to be so much more to go.