Yay. A new chapter. Awesome job. I really love this new perspective. The two of them telling their stories from their point of views; and Sesshoumaru finding his "writing voice" is a nice add-on. Keep up the great work. ????

This is a very interesting story thus far. I think it might be something enjoyable to read and it's very well written. I hope you keep it going and not abandon it to the realm of incomplete stories for an eternity. LoL :)

Looking forward to as many updates you can post but of course RL happens because we all live in the real world and not in the realm of fanfiction. LoL :)