Okayy.. you made a continuity mistake... Rose answered a call on her mobile phone while she was in Dimitri's house... And then not long after you're stating she left it in her car? Yeah... NO. Did you proof read this chapter? Because if you did, you didn't do a very good job at it.

Ur Story is absolutely amazing and for that (excuse my language) asshole who said u shouldn't ask for reviews, i kind of do agree, or well, i used too.
U wrote thats its to motivate people to review and i never thought of it that way, i just thought it was kinda stupid to ask for reviews.. But i was wrong

Cute ending, yet I have one major question. What happened to the bird? Does she still have it? Anyways, awesome story,can't wait to read the sequel.

francisca chapter 16 . 3/2/2012

When Rose was in Russia with Dimitri his friend was looking for And Mazur I thought u would have then mabe reveal who Roses father is cause even she doesn't know. BTW if ur bringing Tasha back can u bring her back so she can die nothing to violent she could get hit by a car, death of a car is ok lol

P.s. great job with the story was that the last chapter for this story or do u have one more before the sequel

I want Rose to be strong minded and when Dimitri comes back into her lifee she didnt frogive him or let him talk unless its guardian bussiness!

Plz... After Dimitri and Rose make up and do their honey moon and wedding can you not put whats going to happen when Rose get pregnant and what happens to the kids 'cause it will ruin my imagination! But if you have to i'll understand :D