Here is a portrait I took of a friend yesterday. Does the composition and lighting look ok? Is there anything else that could be improved in the photo? Also is the red in the left corner of the photo too distracting?

Well I'm not shure but if I was a girl I don't know If I would want that much cleavage(sp?) showing. But if she already looked at it and liked it that's great. Then if you have photoshop or something try to fix the skin tone. If you don't know how to do that there are allot of lessons out there on the Internet.