This was really good and dark but a tad bit confusing at the end. The forked thing. . . how did it cut her mouth? It sounded like it went through the back of her head and stuck out of her mouth "like a snake tongue". Annnddd was she in a furnace or was she just freaking out and saying God let her die? I can't tell if she was dying or not / I'm worried for her :(

What a great story, amazing writing, can't wait for the next chap ! :)

Diein. . .eh you know who I am chapter 8 . 6/7/2011

This was a very sweet chapter, and I have a strong feeling it's like the silent calm before a great storm. It seems foreboding and I can't wait to see what unfolds. I can already see what disasters take place, which leaves me eager. The fact that this story can twist my emotions into whatever it wants is proof that you've got talent. Looking forward for the moment when the shit hits the fan. . . At least I think thats how the gruesome saying goes. . .lol