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Ughhh this PAGE. I was dreading doing this one, and once I started it was just as bad as I’d feared, haha. Real sorry its up so late but I couldn’t avoid it. For some reason the Wednesday pages are tough and the Saturday posted pages are easy to do… so the next page will be up on Saturday like usual.

Anyways yeah, awful page, but I really enjoyed the idea of it, haha. Getting kind of crazy now! This page is one of the few in which I heavily referenced my sketch page, you can see that in the vote incentive.

Blah blah blah. The silly thing is that I tried an experiment this week where I did things slower and got more sleep, but now I’m stressing because I’m behind schedule. I’ve got my health BUT AT WHAT COST lol

Okay enough bullshitting, again, sorry to make you all wait! Hopefully you weren’t holding your breath or you’d be dead by now! My only consolation is that I know for a fact that my readers are amazing and you’ll (probably) forgive me, haha.

it is the most reasonable reaction after hearing a weird naked-girl with an unbelieving story saying that it actually grow flowers in her hair! woah! you can imagine what Pinter is thinking about her! ;-D

Thanks! It would have been a relatively boring bg (brown) anyways, but I didn’t compare to see which looked better (I just liked his silhouette). I’ll try it out with a panel instead and see if it looks better!

I see what you mean by the contrast and the silhouette. Maybe a lighter tan that matches the tent walls, his hair would get lost/muddled in a brown bg. We know they’re huddling in a dank tent, I guess that’s why the white seems so out of place.

to build on what eugene said, after a weekend of camping myself, i realize pinter’s tent must smell…special. between the alcohol and the lack of clothes changing and the humidity. one of those smells only the owner could tolerate.

he seems kinda mean!! she was just looking for help :(
yet she was a little intrusive. the middle panels look like he’s too happy (although i assume he’s purposely drawn forced-smiling) but maybe his eyes shoulda been a little less friendly in those 2 shots. make him look more aggrevated, but tryyyinng to be nice :D

Haha, I think they both need to get some sleep and start over. I’ll think more about that expression in the middle panels, he’s supposed to look smiley but maybe its not coming off sarcastic enough! Thanks!

but the question is, would Angora be willing to wear clothes?
I mean, we know she is going to have some dressing anyway, but I wonder why she would do that?
What motivates her to wear those clothes? Is it because she felt somehow rejected from “clothed-people”?

Ha ha, the last panel keeps making me think of Mitch Hedberg talking about getting into a fight with his girlfriend inside a tent and trying to storm out and slam the flap…oh, wait, no one knows what I’m taking about… :)

Poor Angora. I feel bad for her but I can’t help but laugh too because the timing in this panel is perfect. I think my favorite line was the bit about her hair. I HAVE BEAUTIFUL HAIR AND IT SMELLS LIKE BEAUTIFUL FLOWERS. UNLIKE YOU PINTER. YOU”RE A SMELLY POOP HEAD. SO THERE. NYEAH. Hey it’s about time she escaped from that tent which reeks of boy-funk I imagine. Egh now I am espeically anxious to see Saturday’s comics because I am trying my darndest to figure out how she convinces Pinter to go along for the ride. It doesn’t look good :(

FLAP.

(but we all know that’s the sound of moobs striking together at high velocity XD)

I’ll say this much: hungover or not, if a pretty naked girl comes into my tent and asks for favors, I’m really not sure I’d able to refuse. (Moldy hair notwithstanding.) Angora must be excruciatingly irritating.

It’s normal to never be happy with a page- heck, in a month from now, you’ll probably have an epiphany on how to make it even better. But you know what? Keep moving on! This page is already an improvment from the first version. I like the new angle you choose on how to end it. Pinter is shutting Angora AND us, the readers, out of his tent.
Nicely done (I actually like the borderless, white bg first panel).

wow, i admire your discipline! i mean, being able to get down and deal with the page when you’re already having thoughts about it being tough. amazing work ethic.
seriously though, if you need to take a break you should, because we need you in good health! D: the meek must go on!

This page made me laugh – I love how he’s yelling and so upset, and instead of throwing her out and slamming a door in her face.. the tent.. flaps closed. It seems a little anti-climatic, because she can very well sneak her way back in since it’s only a cloth. I love it though, and I think this page is one of my favourites. :3

What are you saying about awful, this is my favorite page so far : D (And the next one will be my favorite as soon as it comes out, but yeah) I like Pinter’s expressions the most even if he does weirdly remind me of my biology teacher who is sort of not cool. D : But the point is that I love your comic and semistalk you thanks goodbye.

I really like how Pinter pops out in the first panel! It’s like he wants to attack Angora but he doesn’t stand a chance 8D
Pinter’s really a nice guy… since he’s so annoyed by Angora but still gives her some clothes. I mean – I wouldn’t do that haha