Mind Reading

Below is the poem entitled Mind Reading which was written by poet
Michael J.
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Mind Reading

I have a crazy mind that dances to everything..
I read every angle of a word till it's staggering..
Sometimes I crawl behind sentences and hide..
When no one is around I peek and look inside..
There is a need to figure out what is really meant..
Sometimes the answers are not so transparent..
Good or bad I have the desire to explore..
At times I see three words when there is really four..
So this is me, a mind that reads with a poetic stare..
A flaw some may say ,but still a mind that cares..

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Love this poem, I find myself almost never looking at things as they are, life is not simple, what makes a person tick, why people say what they say or act a certain way, and at times, it is just simple, beautifull write, love debra

a brilliant mind too Michael luv to pen such a dynamic write touching us so deeply..u share and care in a poetic way to capture the reader and hypnotize with your awesome spell.. JG .. in spell mode..xoxo

Michael just love the way you crafted this one, in and out front and back searching those words, thanks for your comment, yep a crack pot was right but thankfully she is off the soup now....take care buddy..Dave

Ah..there you are my brother:) You`ll always be a mind and soul that care,its truly a gem you`ve posted here Michael.Its your unique ability to reflect on life`s many challenges that keeps your pen write such gems like this.Keep that golden pen working! Have a great weekend ahead,its been a sunny and hot day over here today..Your brother,Arild

It is certainly not a flaw my friend! There is no flaw in poetic measures, you can use it to magnify the deeper meaning, this inside voice, what is truly meant by what might have been said, written, or displayed! I truly love this in depth message Michael! Great Work!!