hey this is a really nicely done story and I just wanted to say thank you for making a good story

Timbtay Crulixor chapter 3 . 7/17

This was a nice story, I loved it!

LudwigVonKoopa chapter 3 . 7/1

Please do more! Although I do feel sorry for my favorite character Ludwig...
But I still love it! Please don't stop and continue!

Elvira Milton chapter 2 . 4/30

wow... ludwig was sexy

Guest chapter 3 . 4/29

Don't worry it'll be fun when anyone on this site will help you do the boy/girl stories

Guest chapter 3 . 4/25

I agree with the other guest that you should do astrid hofferson and ludwig for chapter 4 please

FoxWolf64 2 chapter 2 . 4/25

Could you please do Astrid hofferson from dragons to take over that bowser monster's place

Guest chapter 1 . 4/3

That was...DISGUSTING! If maybe THAT will be Steven Hazel and Ludmilla doing that and That bowser monster will almost throw up from that and somebody will look after him cos Ludmilla would be a prostitute to be Hazel's lover. I am genuinely shocked about this

Undead Gay Guy chapter 1 . 12/22/2014

Nice story bro
I have an idea for a story for you
Bowser jr gettin gang banged by the koopa's and goombas