and i love hermiones sister. and her name, it doesn't seem a name too far off hermione and so doesn't sound like its obvious that you've just come up with it of your head. it could acctually be her sisters name. if that makes sense

but the 'mione name got annoying. her names hermione not 'mione or hermy or herm. sorry, if theres one thing i don't like its that! but no offense on you, thats my opinion and judging by the rest of the fandom i'm out numered so...

I always wondered why Hermione spent so little time at home! I mean, she's gone like 9 months and then she spends all her time with her friends (when she sees them most of the time anyway)! Poor Erin and poor Hermione's parents...

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm very glad you liked that. I always wondered why too...that's how I think I came up with this idea. Thank you soooo much for the review!!! You ROX!!!!!!!!~~Emma~~

adorablely cute. i love it. and i would also love a sequel including erin. sounds awesome, i love your writing all too well. and eventually ((too tired now)) i will add all your stories to my favorites and hurry up and get those other two one-shots posted. i want more to read!
LMW

Author's Response: LOLLLL...you are SOOOOO SWEEEEEEEEET!!!!!!!!! ((I love that E button!))...Welp...I'll get right on that. *Goes off to type a sequel* Lol....thank you soooo much for another amazingly sweet review...YOU ROX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~Emma~~

This was cute! I loved it! One thing to fix- change it from a one-shot to something with multiple chapters! You've developed these characters so nicely, and I'd love to see more. This is definitely going under my favorites.

Author's Response: Hmmm...well...I wrote a pasrt two to this fic...but then I just decoded that it wasn't nearly as good as this one..soo...I left it as is. Thank you though. You are soo sweet!! Thank you for your review!! You ROX!!!~~Emma~~

I just posted a review, but i forgot to say that i really liked the story up to this point, but if you had extended it a few chapters, and narrated about when they actually went to hermione's house, i think that would continue the story so nicely! I really wanted to know how that would turn out!

Author's Response: Loll...well...I was going to write a part two...but then I just decided that I couldn't. Thank you for your review. You ROXXX!~~Emma~~

the whole ron/hermione relationship thing seems to be more rushed than it should be. i t hink if you extended the story just a little bit, i mean just in length or whatever, and went took it a little slower, it would be perfect. but awesome job!

Hey Gebra my gal! Just got off chat so I could read and review your one-shot in peace. lol. Ok, firstly I'll let you know that I don't really read Hermione/Ron fanfictions so I might not really be able to appreciate what other Hermione/Ron fans might like in your fanfiction. First thing I realise in your fanfiction is that it's quite short and random (yay! :D ). You don't really expand on the storyline and so it seems a little rushed. I didn't like the idea of Ron and Hermione suddenly springing their affections onto one another and Hermione calling Ron her boyfriend within seconds of them admitting to their liking of one another. Also, you seem to simply show and not tell what's really going on in the fanfiction. It might be good to re-read this fanfiction and tweaking it here and there to improve it. Another thing, I think it would be better if you put both the letters in italics instead of having them in normal font with speech marks. Also, you have some spelling mistakes here and there that you can correct. I think it would be advisable for you to get this fanfiction beta'ed by someone whose experienced in beta'ing. That way they can add some much needed description and detail into the fanfiction as well as sorting out the spelling mistakes and the change in the tense near the beginning of the fanfiction. However, you can of course do it all by yourself. I was wondering, is Erin (the character) based wholly on Erin (your cousin)? That is so very sweet of you to write a fanfiction with her as a character as well as dedicating it to her. It's so sad that you lost her to Cystic Fibrosis and at such a young age! Over-all I think it was an adorable, simple and very sweet fanfiction. It really made me smile :) By the way, I love the Erin quote. That was a nice touch to the fanfiction. I hope this isn't too long a review though I can't be sure of it's length from typing into this tiny little box. lol. Thanks for an enjoyable read, my partner in randomness (though we haven't been up to our antics lately *sob* and I think Padfoot_Potter may just take over the show *wipes tear*). Good job! Yay!

Author's Response: Wow zubz..Thank you. =D I'm soo glad that you took the time to read a Ron/Hermione review. I will go fix them No one wants to beta a R/Hr fic tho! :( Almost everyone said that only do H/Hr (That is soo gross!) or Draco/Hermione (Not as gross). Thank you for taking the time to tell me all of this. It really helps. Yes. Erin (Hermione's sister) was just like Erin (My cousin). Erin and I were BEST friends. I mean, we were friends, then cousins. The only thing different about the charrie Erin and my couz Erin, is that the real Erin hsd really pretty blonde hair. *tear* I miss her soo much! *sobs* Anywho...Long Live Randomness!! We are still the queens!!!! Thank you for this awesome, lovely review. It really made me smile. You ROX MY SOCKS ZUBZ!!!! ~~Emma~~ (Gebra)

oohhh emma. *huggles* that was so cute. 'Mione...I-I-I-I lov-v-ve y-you." how sweet, i love ron and mione...eek i love this one shot. you have talent and hey who cares about grammer, mine sucks at the bets of times, lol. Lv Etta

awwww.... you have a few spelling mistakes, though (grammar goddess inside me) in write and right. yeah. but anyways, really fluffy and cute!!! huzzah! *gives you cheese*Luna

Author's Response: *Still hates grammer* Aww! Thank you Luna! *Takes cheese and takes a bit* Sorry 'bout the grammer..but...I never have it quiet when i type...so...Lol. Thanks for the awesome review. You ROX! ~~Emma~~

That was so sweet! From the two stories of yours that I have read - I can tell that you are a great writer - you have a lovely unique style! Absolutely great!

Author's Response: AWWW! Thank you willow! You are awesome!! I love chatting w/ you in the chat room, and thank you sooo much for the banner you are making moi (Yup..There's the french again! Ha ha!) Thanks for the review! You ROXXXXXX!!!!~~Emma~~