oh wow man. this is like really good! i hope you didn't quite this story! i really wanna know how axel and riku get outta jail! i really like the way roxas was determined about the last thing he said!:D i hope you update soon!

SH: Rude a bouncer? I can see that. PAine a Bartender? I'd go with someone like Tifa if i were you. XD ANyways, I can't beleive i didn't Review for this sooner! I luvs it! *wolf whistles at Roxas, Axel lites my clothes on Fire* F*CK! XD lol and waitin for next chappie.

*SQUEAL* That was too awesome. I got a laugh out of Rude being the bouncer- XD he seems like the type now... XD And LOL at Sora's comment. That was hilarious. Poor Roxas... XD Anyway, great job so far, I hope you continue to update!