This is a cute story. Seeing Nicole be more playful and human like is very pleasing. I feel Sam could use more fleshing out, maybe more backstory or a quirk to help develop something more with his personality, just a thought. I'm really curious to see Nicole develop more of those "confusing feelings". Hope to see more soon :)

Don't get discouraged just because you're not great about meeting deadlines, as it were. I can assure you that there are many people out there who are a lot, lot worse *cough*me*cough*. Just keep on truckin'. Good work on this, btw.

NUUUUU! NICOLE-KUN! *beats idiots into pulp* Nicole's my favorite character, FYI. I didn't know Mina's side on this, I thought she was as Anti-Nicole as everyone else. I'll have to apologize. What issue did they say that about Mina?

speaking of nanites, if you want a free spoiler for my story, one chapter of which is uploaded on DeviantArt, just PM me in a comment saying "thanks for the review"

i forgot what was happening, but when i saw that it was a machine intended or maybe UN intended to turn nicole human, i said "what that element from TRON Legacy or something" but its still awesome! love ur shiit Gal... i hope your a gal.

Where there's a flying fox with multiple tails, a ring that can make you age six years, and a machine that can turn organic beings into mechanical entities, I think you're pretty safe as far as the realm of possibility. Hehe. Another good chapter, this is getting interesting.