Nice shot except for the bright spot on the side of her face. I would lower the exposure to bring that brightness down, then use fill flash or reflector to bring the shadowed part of her face back to proper exposure.

Very good looking lady, but have to agree with neck/face light issue...
Also I believe had the ladies right hand been rotated by ninety degrees to the camera and semi closed showing the little finger slightly curled with maybe a slightly cocked back wrist too.. I believe would have looked a little more shall we say elegant/classy than the flat back of the hand which is being presented to the camera.(i.e. less mass)