Or: "a butterfly flitting." Shinji Ogawa points out that naki means "sang" in this haiku, not, as I originally thought, "devoid of."With his correction, the haiku now makes perfect sense.Issa sits on his old tatami mat, enjoying the spring day along with the birds and butterflies.

1820

.鳥の巣に明渡したる庵哉tori no su ni akewatashitaru iori kana

surrendering itto the nesting birds...my hut

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Issa ends this haiku, simply, with "hut" (iori kana). In a revision four years later (in 1824), he clarifies his meaning by ending the haiku with "the hut that is empty because its owner is away" (rusu no io). Issa is leaving his hut for a while, generously offering it to nesting birds. Shinji Ogawa notes that the verb akewatashitaru denotes Issa's abandoning or surrending his hut.

1813

.けふもけふもだまって暮す小鴨哉kyô mo kyô mo damatte kurasu ko kamo kana

today tookeeping perfectly quiet...little duck

issa

1796

.旅笠を小さく見せる霞かなtabi-gasa wo chiisaku miseru kasumi kana

their traveling hatslooking small...mist

issa

year unknown

.青の葉は汐干なぐれの烏哉ao no ha wa shiohi nagure no karasu kana

some stay behindin the green leaves...low tide crows

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Nagure is the same as nagori ("vestiges," "remains"); see Kogo dai jiten (Shogakukan 1983) 1213. The crows at low tide are doing the same thing as their human counterparts: looking for shellfish. A few linger behind in trees and field.

1807

.近づけば急に淋しき紅葉哉chikazukeba [kyû] ni sabishiki momiji kana

drawing near thema sudden lonelinessautumn leaves

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1811

.うしろから大寒小寒夜寒哉ushiro kara ôsamu kosamu yozamu kana

behind me--big cold, little coldnight cold

issa

1825

.雪の日や堂にぎっしり鳩雀 yuki no hi ya dô ni gisshiri hato suzume

on a snowy daythe temple is packed...pigeons, sparrows

issa

many continued thank yous to the amazing david g lanoue and his glorious issa pages, revealing the poet's humanity, humor, and the nature and customs of his world.

as is obvious, i have not yet been able to find a july for 1906 yet.will remedy and announce when i do.