on the 2ed one at the end instead of crow saying 'Aki Izayoi,' Crow thought, 'You truly are a genius of the world...' it should have been something like man i feel sorry for him

Betting Games chapter 1 . 1/22/2010

Why...?

That was funny! Yusei dressed in a pikachu costume! That would be a very funny sight when Jack or Crow caught him in that

Okamialpha chapter 1 . 11/15/2009

Hm, I liked the concept you had. The duel(lolz) view of the story with alternate situations was a very bright idea to impliment. One thing that urked me was the whole use of honorifics due to the fact that they don't often use them in the actual anime. The results of the bet were pretty damn good, and I'd actually like to see the date itself. Most of the humor is also played for great laughs and used nicely. I'd give it an 8/10. The humor was great, but the characters seemed a bit off and it was a bit short.

LeDiva chapter 1 . 6/20/2009

LOL! Yusei is perverted but still nice! Now Aki took it to a whole new level.