First stanza, third line; it stand out due to its length, but what gets me is the kind of human voice that comes with, "or two". That is how I would of said it if it was I in this situation. It is like an afterthought, but a blunt reality.

That's a really lovely comment, thanks so much. I really love it when people get those tiny little things that go into a piece like this. I love my writing to have a real human voice, so it really means so much when you pick up on that Thanks so much for the fave.

Oh, you are very welcome. Honestly, I am trying to get what I can from the work. I know that our common exchange on dA is a simple comment and thus, I try to break that up to give other people a fresher look.