that was . But mainly interesting.
I just love how you tackle subjects as diverse as vampires and transgenders xD
Hmmm I really loved the story! But it just feels a bit unrealistic :( I feel like you tried to summarize a novel worth of story into 11k words... Especially the ending. I understand that Ethan is open minded and all that... but he was understanding all too easily... So yeah xD
It's a beautiful story, idea and characters and I think it deserved a bit more space xD a higher number of words xD so that everything would fit and be perfect like all other stories I read By you :D

I've been screaming at the computer screen the entire time it took me to read this.

"Ethan, it's so obvious! Cinderella is a HE. It's Stephen!"

"Oh yeah, it's his TWIN SISTER. Believe it. My god."

I really liked this story... it made me cry.

I don't know if you've ever looked at my profile but... I am struggling with transgenderism, except female-male. And I'm straight so it makes it even weirder. I'm a girl who wants to be a guy to be with guys.