Rated 1 / 5 stars2007-08-09 20:13:16

This is awful.

Where's the story? It's like a sentence or two out of the middle of something, not like a "first chapter" of anything, not even a first page or paragraph. And "Mild violence"? I beg to differ. Slicing someone's throat is not "mild". And you forgot to rate for the (not so mild) language in the background song.
All that said, the graphics were pretty good and I like the concept as outlined in the author's notes but none of that seemed to come through in this submission.

Rated 5 / 5 stars2007-08-09 20:12:04

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars2007-08-09 19:58:17

Mediocre

The length is not the problem here. The intended artistic style flops and instead comes off as either lazy or unskilled. Short movies are fine, but this one doesn't deliver any meaningful content for the amount of time. Overall, the appearance is one of a great story idea that fails in execution.