tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393970312548897551.post9079449243936847544..comments2014-03-21T04:46:36.685-07:00Comments on A Shattered Mind : The Soldier's WifeJustin Huskeyhttps://plus.google.com/110148476903184910768noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393970312548897551.post-17981115985362323622013-09-09T18:32:23.770-07:002013-09-09T18:32:23.770-07:00wow what a haunting little piece man...and def mak...wow what a haunting little piece man...and def makes me wonder at the woman...we need to pay attention to moments like that...nice job on the cadence and rhyme schemeBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393970312548897551.post-74223267489956631522013-08-27T08:35:55.030-07:002013-08-27T08:35:55.030-07:00Thank you, Sherry. I appreciate the kind words. I ...Thank you, Sherry. I appreciate the kind words. I am so very glad you liked it and took the time to read it. Her eyes were wild for want of the life she had given up.<br />Justin Huskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13049080209056013300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393970312548897551.post-25557353023769294072013-08-27T06:39:19.852-07:002013-08-27T06:39:19.852-07:00What a wonderful story this is. I love it that she...What a wonderful story this is. I love it that she was a spirit, who shared her wisdom - and that her eyes were wild!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393970312548897551.post-27883205088244585042013-08-26T12:39:11.729-07:002013-08-26T12:39:11.729-07:00Glad you enjoyed it:) Thank you for reading.Glad you enjoyed it:) Thank you for reading.Justin Huskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13049080209056013300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393970312548897551.post-3722431473516229542013-08-26T11:28:48.085-07:002013-08-26T11:28:48.085-07:00Yes. She did indeed... The sorrow was just too muc...Yes. She did indeed... The sorrow was just too much for her to bear. Thank you so much for the kind words, Mary, and thank you for reading:)Justin Huskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13049080209056013300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393970312548897551.post-80904563395276636992013-08-26T11:11:12.502-07:002013-08-26T11:11:12.502-07:00
so moving....<br />so moving....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393970312548897551.post-19672045259993452692013-08-26T10:55:33.349-07:002013-08-26T10:55:33.349-07:00This is excellent, Justin. A sad tale, well told...This is excellent, Justin. A sad tale, well told. I feel sorry for the woman....so sad to lose her husband to war. I interpreted the poem to mean that she became one with the ocean waves!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393970312548897551.post-30879490328679006552013-08-26T10:13:40.890-07:002013-08-26T10:13:40.890-07:00Thank you for reading:) Who knows where she has go...Thank you for reading:) Who knows where she has gone... perhaps to warn some other lost soul of the dangers of losing hope. Justin Huskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13049080209056013300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393970312548897551.post-40091287015971846942013-08-26T08:27:51.421-07:002013-08-26T08:27:51.421-07:00A wistful tale Justin! I wonder where she is now.A wistful tale Justin! I wonder where she is now.gabriellaswritingcornerhttp://gabriellaswritingcorner.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393970312548897551.post-42616194429806090662013-08-26T08:00:29.995-07:002013-08-26T08:00:29.995-07:00Thank you very much, Kerry. I appreciate the kind ...Thank you very much, Kerry. I appreciate the kind words, and I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.Justin Huskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13049080209056013300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393970312548897551.post-12253552045028870832013-08-26T07:57:03.838-07:002013-08-26T07:57:03.838-07:00Your ballad style is perfect for the story-telling...Your ballad style is perfect for the story-telling aspect of this poem.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com