Welcome to 'The Forgotten Son'- or TFS. Within this forst post I'll include (1) The Table of Contents, (2) The Prologue (you can't skip this if you hope to understand the story), and (3) The PM List- as part of the list you'll recieve a reminder whenever I post a new chapter. So, if you want to be PMed whenever I update... tell me. And I will.

I'm posting this on every forum in which TFS is updated, as well as editing it into the first post in every forum. Throughout my posting of the story various grammar mistakes have and will be found and altered; for the sake of simplicity the final version of every chapter will be found here.

I'll go back over old chapters once in a while here to edit and alter grammar and structure mistakes, and overall if you're new to the story or plan to read over old chapters again, the given link is the 'official' compiling of all of the most up-to-date versions of each chapter. Feel free to post reviews there in addition to or instead of at this forum, and please feel more than welcome to point out every grammar mistake you can there so that it can be fixed. I'm not always going to catch every single one...

Chapter 2: Not So Bad(A little farther down than chapter one)
Chapter 3: Smile For You(Pretty far down, but easy to spot as the thrid giant block of text)
Chapter 4: Turn for the Better(Bottom of this page)
Chapter 5: Teeter-Totter(Close to the top of page two)

Chapter 6: Through the Darkness(A few posts down from ch. 5)

Chapter 7: Through the Darkness II--------------------------

Prologue----------------------------------
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Tue Jun 06, 2006 8:15 pm

Banov

Dragon Tamer

Joined: Tue Jun 06, 2006 8:14 pmPosts: 149Location: PA, USA

Sorry for the double post, but I did this for the sake of having my chapters a little organized. From here on, I'll post updates every Friday. If you like what you read, please continue to read and tell me what you think!

Chapter 1-------------------------------------------------

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Tue Jun 06, 2006 8:17 pm

daveshan

Pokemon Master

Joined: Thu Nov 03, 2005 2:23 pmPosts: 1959Location: Va

I never got his payment lol.

Pretty good length for a first chapter. No grammar or spelling mistakes. Little cheesy on the "People hate weak pokemon" plot, but it's still pretty good. Hurray for Silver cameo.

9.5/10

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Wed Jun 07, 2006 4:02 am

Banov

Dragon Tamer

Joined: Tue Jun 06, 2006 8:14 pmPosts: 149Location: PA, USA

Thanks for the review! Anyone else...?

Wed Jun 07, 2006 6:15 am

dragonfan149

Pokemon Ranger

Joined: Tue Dec 28, 2004 1:30 pmPosts: 806Location: PDX

I like it; you should continue.

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WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?!

DUST!

Wed Jun 07, 2006 2:45 pm

Banov

Dragon Tamer

Joined: Tue Jun 06, 2006 8:14 pmPosts: 149Location: PA, USA

Yup! Every Friday.

Thu Jun 08, 2006 8:30 am

Banov

Dragon Tamer

Joined: Tue Jun 06, 2006 8:14 pmPosts: 149Location: PA, USA

Happy Friday!

Chapter 2---------------------------------------
Once the red-haired boy disappeared over the horizon, Luke gave the magikarp a tight hug.

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