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Hi AJ, well done for following the correct structure of a procedural text without any instruction or support from the teacher. You used second person perspective ("you" not "I"), time descriptors (first, then) and wrote the instructions in order. Next time you could work on using more academic vocabulary and editing your writing to make sure that it is formal.

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My name is AJ and I am Samoan, but I was born in Auckland, New Zealand. I am a year 6 student at Glenbrae School and I am in Kauri house. I love my family members and my cousins. My favourite subjects are writing, reading, maths, and inquiry. My favourite sport is rugby and basketball and my favourite hobby is cleaning and playing video games. When I grow up I would like to be a rugby player and to travel the whole world.