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ILP:yeah i don't normally read the viz translations either but i saw it there and i was bored, the line was incredibly long, so i read it and got ******. and you're right when there is no manga we do seem to go into a slump.

Min: the Zam is screwed line, came from something Zam actually said after one of my chapters. and it is true. he is screwed.

Club: i have begun working on the plot for season 2 which will be starting in late september or october. so i just have some things i want to nail down.

Spoiler:- things:

-First: Min, i'd like to feature you in this coming season so would you mind pm me a character profile, please?

-Second: i have noticed that we all have eachother's personalities pretty much down but i'd like to include some minor details in the next arc. captains, would you wear a haori in a customized way (ie. kenpachi's is sleeve less, kyoraku keeps his covered). and lieutenants would you wear a lietenant's badge in a customized way (ie. rangiku's on her obi).

-Third: i know we all have little mannerisms and ticks that make us unique. are there any that you guys would want written in.

-Fourth: other people have been asking this - battle styles.

-Fifth: backstory. we all have em. and i want em.

please respond to these things, in a pm so i can find them easier. thx in advance.

King me. I passed go and collected $200.

Last edited by kusari; 13th August 2010 at 7:44 PM.

PRETEND THERE IS A SIGNATURE HERE FULL OF WITTY JOKES AND CLAIMS TO FAME AND UNDESERVED BRAVADO AND SELF PROMOTION

so today i went on the weekly trip to the grocery store. i was bored waiting in line so i picked up a copy of this month's shonen jump. the bleach chapters this month showed Szayll(?) using his resureccion. in this english translation the name is not Fornicata. it now is the spanish translation of 'the lustful'. they corrupted it horribly.

"La Lujurosia". Well, very few of us read Viz's translation, anyway, and Bleach.wikia uses "Fornicaras", like most of us do.

Yeah they do, but they put in a note about the Viz translation. Spoiler:

Fornicarás (邪淫妃 (フォルニカラス), Forunikarasu; Spanish for "You Will Fornicate," Japanese for "Lewd Concubine", Viz "La Lujurosia" (Spanish for "The Lustful")).

DK would probably have had a *****-fit. ;p

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

...What?

Ahahahaha

Originally Posted by kusari

Min: the Zam is screwed line, came from something Zam actually said after one of my chapters. and it is true. he is screwed.

:/ ...

Ah, good news to all of you who watch the Viz Bleach dubs on CN...new episodes start August 28th!
I saw an announcement on Adult Swim's little in-between episode monologue thing.

Still counts as bribery. And anyway, you shouldn't bake any more cookies XP

The more you use that phrase the more I'm saying it.

Well, I suppose as humans we all want to be that "heroic person with an angsty background" that the media so often portrays as the protagonist. Though when so many of us come together as a group, a backstory like that becoming overused is to be expected, really.

Bribery or not, I was just responding that you said I was apathetic about the new member. XD

Yes~ I've brought more influence into you

Idk. I myself do like to portray myself that way sometimes, but just a little bit, not VERY much. *shrug*

Originally Posted by kusari

Zam: Well to each his own. food is still a good method. When I joined the club I almost joined Squad 4 because of the cookies. But then I reliezed that, y'know i don't know what made me go to squad 3.

You DID? *hugs*

What the hell are we gonna do when Bleach ends?
gee, idk. I might spend up my time making up new Kido. XD To fill in the gaps. XP

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

@Arc: Random question, do you have any advantage over me in battle?

Generally, no. Because our elements don't clash with each other. But as I've said, other factors matter. Like yours would be more powerful in a dark place, or I would have an advantage over you in a confined space. etc.

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

...What?

XD You have to remember whenever you said 'checkmate', either ILPy or me will think about the chess, but... sails?

Originally Posted by kusari

-Second: i have noticed that we all have eachother's personalities pretty much down but i'd like to include some minor details in the next arc. captains, would you wear a haori in a customized way (ie. kenpachi's is sleeve less, kyoraku keeps his covered). and lieutenants would you wear a lietenant's badge in a customized way (ie. rangiku's on her obi).

-Third: i know we all have little mannerisms and ticks that make us unique. are there any that you guys would want written in.

-Fourth: other people have been asking this - battle styles.

-Fifth: backstory. we all have em. and i want em.

...PM me later, kay? I'd like to reply but I must go soon. If you don't, I'll try to rely on my memory which as of now, quite filled with tasks I must do so don't blame me if I forget.

so today i went on the weekly trip to the grocery store. i was bored waiting in line so i picked up a copy of this month's shonen jump. the bleach chapters this month showed Szayll(?) using his resureccion. in this english translation the name is not Fornicata. it now is the spanish translation of 'the lustful'. they corrupted it horribly.

You don't expect Viz to keep it as "You will have sex" do you?

What the hell are we gonna do when Bleach ends?
Bleach will end when Ichigo beats the king of the universe.
At Bleach's current pace, we'd be somewhere in our 70s by then, so I don't think running out of things to do is gonna be a concern.
Seriously though, I'd probably just...go on drawing and stuff...y'know, life.

ILP:yeah i don't normally read the viz translations either but i saw it there and i was bored, the line was incredibly long, so i read it and got ******. and you're right when there is no manga we do seem to go into a slump.I NOTICED THAT!! XD

Min: the Zam is screwed line, came from something Zam actually said after one of my chapters. and it is true. he is screwed.Well either way, it's funneh. XD

Originally Posted by Zameric

:/ ...FWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEE

Ah, good news to all of you who watch the Viz Bleach dubs on CN...new episodes start August 28th!
I saw an announcement on Adult Swim's little in-between episode monologue thing.YAYZ. but it's about time =O

Spoiler:- things:

-First: Min, i'd like to feature you in this coming season so would you mind pm me a character profile, please?okay umm I was gonna post one anyway so I'll get it to ya in a PM too...
BTW it might not be 100% complete since I'm sorta undecided about some things. XD

-Second: i have noticed that we all have eachother's personalities pretty much down but i'd like to include some minor details in the next arc. captains, would you wear a haori in a customized way (ie. kenpachi's is sleeve less, kyoraku keeps his covered). and lieutenants would you wear a lietenant's badge in a customized way (ie. rangiku's on her obi).I'll PM ya this too, but I wear the armband the normal way. to make up for my not-normal personality... sorta. lol

-Third: i know we all have little mannerisms and ticks that make us unique. are there any that you guys would want written in.What do you mean by that??

-Fourth: other people have been asking this - battle styles.CRAP. I didn't think about this at all. 0.o;;

-Fifth: backstory. we all have em. and i want em.

my profile will contain a backstory. lol

please respond to these things, in a pm so i can find them easier. thx in advance.and I shall.

King me. I passed go and collected $200.YOU'RE PLAYING TWO DIFFERENT GAMES HERE!! XD

XD You have to remember whenever you said 'checkmate', either ILPy or me will think about the chess, but... sails?

Not just checkmate XP A lot of terms that could be chess-related I'll end up thinking of chess XD

Originally Posted by arceus03

...I miss DK and Luppi. =(

Hmm, yeah.

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

@Arc and ILp

My back story actually is too simplified in the spoiler, I'll show you watch I mean in chapter 11, Which I'm working on now...

*Shrug* Okay, looking forward to it.

Originally Posted by Golde

I just want everyone to know, as of Saturday (today) I'm leaving for college. So...expect me to not be on as much. And whatnot. Just an fyi.

D8

Originally Posted by Golde

I also intend to prove to Da.c that you CAN in fact be on during college.

DO IT!

Originally Posted by kusari

ILP & Arc: Checkmate is, of course, a chess reference. The others are references to Battleship and Stratego. Those are games lazy people play because we aren't smart enough to play chess.

I was more wondering why you're making references to so many end-games.
And you don't have to be smart to play chess. You just have to be patient enough to a) learn what each piece does, and b) wait for your opponent to move (while you're doing that, you should be thinking yourself).
And, really, as long as you can think "what is my best move" or "what is my opponent's best move, and how can I stop it" you can do quite well.

Sooooooooooooo Hungryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

Speakin' of college, imma gonna be a senior in high school this fall so imma lookin' at places... FIT and Adelphi are my top choices so far but for Adelphi I'd need financial aid cos its expensive. -.-;; damn lack of money.

...still an hour until fmabr and kekkaishi... then the movies which i'll probably watch anyway. XD

...I'm soooo bored this week!! no Bleach chapter means nothing to talk about and stuff. D=

ok. so i need to apologize to ILP, Zam and Eon. i decided last minute to give Blue some screen time. you all will have time in this chapter but not as much as Blue. i also touch on Arc v. Vello.

And Blue, in this chapter you get an Ichigo moment. also since i didn't expect to put you in now i didn't have time to ask you about it, so i came up with somewhere i thought your zan would be suited for.

and ILP get ready to hate Coba more.

so here is chapter 10. now in your replies, i want you to be truthful, tell me if you had to look at a dictionary or google to know what Lachrymose means.

"Weakling." Brak's foot entered Blue's face, sending him flying. His limp upper body shifted down and caught the sand, sending the reaper into a wild flip.

Gotta move. Gotta fight. Gotta sav... Cameron's mind fell blank.

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"Hey kid. Get up." Blue opened his eyes to a thin hand, reaching out towards him. He grabbed the hand, which helped him up.

"Where am I?" The young reaper looked around. He was in a dark room. His eyes could barely make out, what looked like, iron pillars, the kind you would see in a multi-floored warehouse. Windows, four on each of the walls except for the one behind him, let in no light.

"We're in your inner world kid." Cameron looked towards the owner of the hand that lifted him up. Before him stood a slim, pale, blue haired and red eyed teenager. He wore a blue shirt and blue jeans. "I'm Kagebu. We haven't talked in a while so I guess it's understandable you don't remember me or this place."

"Well why am I here?" Blue was perplexed. The last time he was here was when he attained his bankai, but that was years ago.

"Because you're getting your *** handed to you by that hollow." Kagebu chuckled. "I brought you here so you could become stronger."

"Wait so I have to fight you?"

"No." The spirit waved his arms and laughed. "I hate fighting. You have been gone a long time." He chuckled again. "You'll be fighting my friend here." His thin arm motion towards the darkness. Out stepped a man with shaggy black hair.

Blue couldn't see his face just his lower body. Then he noticed something on the biceps of the figure. On the right arm, a tatoo of the snowdrop in black ink. The insignia of squad 13. On the left arm, a tatoo of the kanji for 13 in carnelian ink. "Hayashi." Blue stammered.

"Damn. How'd you know?" Kagebu laughed again.

"That tatoo. He got it the day he was promoted to captain of squad thirteen. I remember because Kida kept telling him he was an idiot."

"Well then, come on out Hayashi." The man stepped out. He looked exactly the same as Blue's old friend.

"That's not Hayashi." Blue blurted.

"Yeah it is." Kagebu spurted back.

"No it's not. Those eyes aren't Hayashi's. His are always full of life and fighting spirit. Those eyes are empty, hollow, dead. He's never looked like that since I've known him." Blue's hand gripped his sword's hilt tightly.

"Fine you got me. That's not the Hayashi you know. That's the real Hayashi. The one only Hayashi knows."

"But how?"

"All zanpakuto spirit worlds are connected. You just have to find a way to pass through from one to the other. Oto gave me access to this, to test you."

"If you beat the true Hayashi, you can save him." Kagebu walked over and leaned against the wall. "There's only one rule to this fight... win."

At the word 'Hayashi' dove at Blue.

-----------

Vello put his sword back in it's scabbard. "Mr. Akira, put that thing away and come with me."

Tsukibana returned to it's bladed form as it's master resheathed it. "Ok." The captain mumbled nervously. He followed the hollow out of the pillared room, down a hall and into a small white room.

"Welcome to the viewing room." Vello said, without turning his head. "This is where we watch all action going on throughout The Compound."

"The what?" The captain chirped.

"The Compound. It's what we call this place. Las Noches would have been a disgraceful name."

"I"m not even gonna ask about the last part. So why did you bring me here Vello?"

"Just to watch the fights. To tell the truth I'm a complete pacifist. I can't stand fighting."

"So you come here to watch fights because you hate fighting. You're a total hypocrite."

"No I don't like that they fight but it's the only entertainment we've had in a long time." The hollow laid his hand on the wall causing four etheral windows to appear. Each was about 3 feet squared.

"Hey there's Zam's fight." Akira turned his gaze towards the window in the upper right hand side of the wall. (now imagine this is one of those crappy camera effects where the camera zooms into a screen taking you to that event)

-------------

"****. I'm screwed." Zam groaned.

"Damn right you are." Jenk's new form now made itself apparent. Now he was at least nine feet tall. His bone covered arms were as thick as tree trunks and lined with foot long spikes. His shoulders sported four foot spikes and his head was conceiled with what looked like a knight's helmut. The rest of his body was also thickly coated in bone.

Zam clenched a fist in Jenk's direction forcing a large blade to extend form each wall, the cieling and the floor. All hit simultaniously but left no scratches at all.

"Damn I would've been flat if that had connected." The shockwaves released from Jenk hitting the wall, had caused the ceiling to crumble. Before Zameric noticed a large rock fell on top of him, sending him plummeting towards the ground.

Jenk emerged from the hole of his creation. "Heh heh. Finally got you soul reaper. Now I don't have to look at that scrawny little body of your's." He lifted the rock, revealing a crushed Zameric.

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"Now let's begin." The white haired Espada said gleefully. He picked up a scalpel from his silver cart.

"What the hell are you going to do with that?" Seijuro knew he would regret asking that.

Coba took the surgical tool and cut along the length of Arashi's upper forearm. The captain recoiled and tried to escape from his shackles. "The subject appears not to be fond of my methods."

"I'm not your ****ing subject." Seijuro yelled through the pain.

"Says the man chained to the wall being tortured to death. Maybe I should cut that throat open and rip out your vocal cords." Coba was now right up against Seijuro. He held a hunting knife to the soul reaper's neck.

As the hollow pulled the knife away Seijuro noticed a hook-like structure on the blunt edge of the blade. It started at the tip and went back at least an inch. "What's with the hook?"

Coba lifted the knife and tapped the hook. "Is this what you're referring to?" Seijuro nodded yes. "Well this is a special knife called a Gut Knife and that hook is called the Gut Hook. Let me demostrate."

"What do you mean by that?"

"Lev come in here please." A door opened on the opposite wall. A girl stepped into the room. She had shoulder length, dark navy hair. Her face showed impending fear.

"What are you going to do?!"

"Just watch." Coba grabbed the girl by her hair with his left hand and pulled the knife back in his right.

"No no. You better not even consider doing what I think you're doing." Seijuro's eyes were wide.

"No Master Coba please don't. I didn't do anything." His hand went foreward and the knife entered her torso. Now if the hook does the same thing to a person that it does to a deer, I can't describe it on Serebii. So if you really want to know what would happen, google images 'gut hook' and use your imagination.

"Aaaahhhhhh!" Even with the gaping wound in her torso, the girl was screaming. Her eyes streaming tears. "Mr. Reaper please kill him. He does this to all of..."

Coba placed his foot on Lev's head. "Lev, you girls know not to talk to the dead ones."

"Coba I swear if you do it, I'll ****ing kill you!" Coba smirked evily. His foot went down, causing Seijuro to spill the contents of his stomach. The hollow, who seemed to be on a sadistic streak, picked up a large pair of pliers. He walked to Seijuro's left hand and one by one crushed them with the tool.

"Well not so high and mighty now are we cap..." The sentence was cut off by Seijuro's fist planting in Coba's face. "How the hell did you get free?"

"You forgot to remove the scalpel from my arm and I used it to gradually cut that leather strap around my wrist." While he spoke, the captain cut his other arm free.

"Damn you to hell!" Coba lunged with the Gut Hook. Seijuro flipped the scalpel around and stabbed the blade into Coba's face. The hollow dropped the hook as he stumbled backwards.

"Heh heh. Gotcha." The captain leaned down, picked up the hook and sliced the straps from his legs. He grabbed his sword, slid it in his obi and took off running. He stopped by Coba and stabbed the hook into his leg. "Heh heh. Have fun with that you sadistic *******.

As Seijuro left the room Coba stood and limped to his cart. "Damn it." He pulled a small vile filled with pink liquid and dumped it on the wound. "Time for battle." Coba attached his kilij to his left hip, a cannon looking rifle to his back, held a crossbow in his left hand and a halberd in his right. "I'm gonna kill this ******* slowly."

----------------

"Heh heh. I think I lost him." Seijuro ran through the long hall towards the only light he could see. "What the hell?!" Seijuro looked around the room he had just entered. Stakes filled the room. Each was topped with a body. The stake entered in the buttocks and exited out the mouth. Oh ****. He studied Vlad the Impaler. That's what this is. And if I don't get out of here I'll be the next one up on one of those things. With that he ran ahead, looking for an exit.

"First explain what you mean that, it's not the Hayashi everyone knows."

"I believe I can answer this one." A man with a hawk's head walked out of the shadows.

"Hey hey. Nice to see you again Oto. Cameron Blue this is Noba Oto, the spirit of Hayashi's zanpakuto." Kagebu clarified.

"Can I talk now Kagebu?" Oto questioned. The teen nodded yes. "That's what Hayashi feels inside. That is the manfestation of all of the feelings he doesn't let out. It's his anger, his hate, his sadness and his fear. The Hayashi you see is only half of the true Hayashi. He acts the way he does, lazy, tired and scrappy, is all to cover up these feelings."

"So why doesn't he share those feeling with us? We could help him."

"For reasons I'm not at liberty to discuss. Now defeat him." Oto joined Kagebu at the wall.

"Ignite, Noba Oto." 'Hayashi' spoke in a monotone voice. His knives appeared on his knuckles and rushed at Blue.

"Damn it. Disappear and Reappear, Kagebu." His zanpakuto became slightly longer and pitch black. He swung the sword, ready to manifest weapons from the shadows, though nothing happened. "What? Why doesn't it work?"

"You're in pitch darkness kid. There are no shadows." Kagebu informed him, biting from a sandwich that appeared from no where.

"Kojakuarashi." Twelve fire birds shot towards the young reaper dodged, causing the birds to crash into the wall behind him. As the birds hit, a chunk of the wall blew out. It wasn't a wall at all. It was a door. With it's removal sunlight flooded the room.

"I see it know. The key to winning." He was talking about the shadows cast by the iron pillars. "Grip, Kuroi Te!" The shadows formed into hands, which clenched around 'Hayashi'. Blue walked over, his sword ready to kill the enemy.

"Good job kid." Kagebu walked to Blue as the lieutenant put away his sword. The spirit took another bite of his sandwich. Blue looked around noticing that Oto and 'Hayashi' had vanished.

"Where did..."

"They went back home. Now it's time kid. You now know what you have to do. So get out there and kick that hollow's ***."

"As long as you'll help." The reaper smiled. The spirit smiled back.

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"Ha. You're finished." Brak's foot was ready to deliver the final blow.

"Not quite." Blue had disappeared from the ground and was leaning against the white wall of The Compound. "Let's make this fight fair. Disappear and Reappear, Kagebu!"

There ya go. I was going to wait for NL, Eon and MC to post their chapters before i posted this but i don't think those chapters are ever going to come. Please come soon.

EDIT: watching "Memories" and just noticed something, when Ichigo and Senna are at that ghost festival and Toshiro brings a squad to retrieve Senna, Ukitake is in that group. Not to be an ***, but in a situation like that i don't think Ukitake could really do ****.

Last edited by kusari; 15th August 2010 at 7:56 AM.

PRETEND THERE IS A SIGNATURE HERE FULL OF WITTY JOKES AND CLAIMS TO FAME AND UNDESERVED BRAVADO AND SELF PROMOTION

What the hell are we gonna do when Bleach ends?
Bleach will end when Ichigo beats the king of the universe.
At Bleach's current pace, we'd be somewhere in our 70s by then, so I don't think running out of things to do is gonna be a concern.

XDD

Originally Posted by Golde

I also intend to prove to Da.c that you CAN in fact be on during college.

...I'm not doing that already? XD

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

Sooooooooooooo Hungryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Hahahaha. Be patient. Or come here if you want to shorten the period.

Originally Posted by kusari

so here is chapter 10. now in your replies, i want you to be truthful, tell me if you had to look at a dictionary or google to know what Lachrymose means.

EDIT: watching "Memories" and just noticed something, when Ichigo and Senna are at that ghost festival and Toshiro brings a squad to retrieve Senna, Ukitake is in that group. Not to be an ***, but in a situation like that i don't think Ukitake could really do ****.

I did. =P showing sorrow, huh?

They probably just wanted to show everyone in the movie. As with the others, they'll show each character's shikai and bankai at least once. I'm betting that the 4th movie will have Soi Fon's bankai, if they started making it after it was revealed in the manga.

Anime:- Spoiler:

That was another good episode =D They added some scene for Starrk vs Kyoraku. And we had Starrk's flashback. That was a little bit sad. I wonder how are they making up Harribel's backstory, because as far as I'm aware, it wasn't in the manga; only Starrk and Barragan had their backstory. Speaking of those 2, it's ironic that Starrk was regretful that he was unable to repay his debt to Aizen, while Barragan's regret was because he could not kill Aizen.

I know I've mentioned this before, but Ishida as a floating ghost garbed in white is so funny XDD

On a totally unrelated note, HP movie #7 looks good... Or at least the trailer does.

Update:
No new Chapter until Fire has been apologized too, or has received an offering...Which ever is easier.

Who?

Originally Posted by kusari

ok. so i need to apologize to ILP, Zam and Eon. i decided last minute to give Blue some screen time. you all will have time in this chapter but not as much as Blue. i also touch on Arc v. Vello.

Ah, oh well. At least we see more Vello and Coba.

Originally Posted by kusari

and ILP get ready to hate Coba more.

After reading that, I really do.

Originally Posted by kusari

so here is chapter 10. now in your replies, i want you to be truthful, tell me if you had to look at a dictionary or google to know what Lachrymose means.

Guilty. Though I had to use control+F to find where you used it.

Spoiler:- Chapter 10: Lachrymose Moments:

Originally Posted by kusari

"No." The spirit waved his arms and laughed. "I hate fighting. You have been gone a long time."

Kagebu said "I hate fighting"? What? Unless he means "I don't want to fight, I haven't seen you in a long time." then that's just weird.

Originally Posted by kusari

"All zanpakuto spirit worlds are connected. You just have to find a way to pass through from one to the other. Oto gave me access to this, to test you."

That was a good way to explain it... Though that raises the question, what happened to Oto when Hayashi became a Hollow?

Originally Posted by kusari

"Mr. Akira, put that thing away and come with me."

I liked how he said "Mr. Akira". He seems like the kind of person that would say "Akira-San", but not be sarcastic. Though he said "that thing" instead of "your blade" (or something similar) which struck me as a bit odd.

Originally Posted by kusari

"The Compound. It's what we call this place. Las Noches would have been a disgraceful name."

The Compound sounds funny to me XD

Originally Posted by kusari

(now imagine this is one of those crappy camera effects where the camera zooms into a screen taking you to that event)

I think this could have been done without.

Originally Posted by kusari

Coba took the surgical tool and cut along the length of Arashi's upper forearm.

Haha, I flinched at that.

Originally Posted by kusari

"What's with the hook?"

DON'T ASK!

Originally Posted by kusari

"Lev come in here please." A door opened on the opposite wall. A girl stepped into the room. She had shoulder length, dark navy hair. Her face showed impending fear.

*Stabs Coba doll*

Originally Posted by kusari

Now if the hook does the same thing to a person that it does to a deer, I can't describe it on Serebii. So if you really want to know what would happen, google images 'gut hook' and use your imagination.

Google Images didn't do much good... Though it seems bad, what happened.

Originally Posted by kusari

The hollow, who seemed to be on a sadistic streak, picked up a large pair of pliers. He walked to Seijuro's left hand and one by one crushed them with the tool.

Pulling his fingernails out one by one, I think, would've been more cruel.

Originally Posted by kusari

"You forgot to remove the scalpel from my arm and I used it to gradually cut that leather strap around my wrist." While he spoke, the captain cut his other arm free.

I think this would've come out better, if there was a mention of the fact that he left the scalpel into him. Not mentioning the scalpel and then saying "oh yeah, he left it" doesn't really come out well.

Originally Posted by kusari

Coba attached his kilij to his left hip, a cannon looking rifle to his back, held a crossbow in his left hand and a halberd in his right. "I'm gonna kill this ******* slowly."

With those weapons? Doesn't look like it...

Originally Posted by kusari

"You're in pitch darkness kid. There are no shadows." Kagebu informed him, biting from a sandwich that appeared from no where.

Err... If shadows is the absence of light, then pitch darkness would be all shadows... Also, if it IS pitch darkness, then how do they see each other? You'd need light to see them, and light means darkness...

Originally Posted by kusari

"Let's make this fight fair. Disappear and Reappear, Kagebu!"

Let the asskicking begin.

Originally Posted by arceus03

Hahahaha. Be patient. Or come here if you want to shorten the period.

*Takes the first plane there*

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

Kagebu said "I hate fighting"? What? Unless he means "I don't want to fight, I haven't seen you in a long time." then that's just weird.damn you're good at reading subtext

That was a good way to explain it... Though that raises the question, what happened to Oto when Hayashi became a Hollow?you're getting ahead of me here. this is explained but not until later

I liked how he said "Mr. Akira". He seems like the kind of person that would say "Akira-San", but not be sarcastic. Though he said "that thing" instead of "your blade" (or something similar) which struck me as a bit odd.the guy's a pacifist. weapons are "those things" to him.

The Compound sounds funny to me XDi don't get the joke

I think this could have been done without.but i said it anyway

Haha, I flinched at that.Same here

DON'T ASK!that's right. you never ask.

*Stabs Coba doll*what?

Google Images didn't do much good... Though it seems bad, what happened.like i said if it does the same thing it does to a deer.

Pulling his fingernails out one by one, I think, would've been more cruel.considered that but i wanted something that would be a real hinderence later

I think this would've come out better, if there was a mention of the fact that he left the scalpel into him. Not mentioning the scalpel and then saying "oh yeah, he left it" doesn't really come out well. in every chapter there's things i forget to mention and that was one of them. i just don't feel like going back to fix it.

With those weapons? Doesn't look like it...those are just to cripple him so he can't get away.

Err... If shadows is the absence of light, then pitch darkness would be all shadows... Also, if it IS pitch darkness, then how do they see each other? You'd need light to see them, and light means darkness...ILP, shut up.

Let the asskicking begin.a lot of *** kicking.

I have a topic

In a hypothetical situation, Kubo creates a second series Bleach anime with the members of this club as the characters. Who is your Japanese and English VA?
Japanese: Yuya Miyashita
English: Tom Wayland

PRETEND THERE IS A SIGNATURE HERE FULL OF WITTY JOKES AND CLAIMS TO FAME AND UNDESERVED BRAVADO AND SELF PROMOTION

you're getting ahead of me here. this is explained but not until later

I seem to do that quite a bit...

Originally Posted by kusari

the guy's a pacifist. weapons are "those things" to him.

Eh, I suppose that works.

Originally Posted by kusari

i don't get the joke

*Shrug* I think it's one of those "funny words" to me. Like kumquat.

Originally Posted by kusari

what?

Voodoo doll. Should've specified...

Originally Posted by kusari

considered that but i wanted something that would be a real hinderence later

Ah.

Originally Posted by kusari

in every chapter there's things i forget to mention and that was one of them. i just don't feel like going back to fix it.

*Shrug* Okay then...

Originally Posted by kusari

ILP, shut up.

Hahaha, y'know, I'm surprised you don't severely hate me already.

Originally Posted by kusari

a lot of *** kicking.

Good

In a hypothetical situation, Kubo creates a second series Bleach anime with the members of this club as the characters. Who is your Japanese and English VA?
I have absolutely no clue. I don't really pay attention to who the voices are (and which are "good" or "bad"). I'm okay with pretty much anyone. Though since I'll be a young character, I'll almost definitely have a girl being my voice actress in the Japanese version.

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

You (and Min), Blue, Kusari seem to be fighting over her XD. Though Arc's squad is suggested a fair bit.

Well, the only people that are 'fighting' over me are people who don't have many members of their squad and really want more members.

Really, if I was Arenak, I'd actually let this go on a fair bit XD It's rather fun to watch.

I am tempted to let them continue with this too.

Personally, though, I only want someone who's proved that they're worth joining the squad, before asking them to come. Instead of just bribing the person with treats immediately after their first post. So, Arenak, if you want to join Squad 12, you have to show your worth, first.

I will try to show my worth.

Sorry I didn't post my zanpaktou sooner, my computer's fan got clogged with dust and kept shutting down right before I could.

Spoiler:- Zanpaktou:

Zanpaktou Name; kinzoku gekijou (metal fury)
Type; electricity
Sealed form; two kantana, one black one brown.
Zanpaktou Spirit; two men, one has jet black hair and grey eyes, he is wearing a black shirt and brown pants that are torn at the end; the other has long, bright yellow hair and yellow eyes, and is wearing a brown shirt with the sleeves torn off and black pants. They both love to battle, and are irritable and stubborn.
Release Command; release your rage
Shikai Details; my swords split after the hilt into two thinner blades, both are yellow and flowing with electricity and if I cut the air with them they an electric sword-shaped blast goes charging in the direction I swung at. I then visualize my swords looking like any type of sword or object, and my swords can change their shape. I can imitate another shinigami’s zanpaktou, but I can’t go into that’s swords bankai, and its form is tinted yellow (though imitating zanpaktou drains me quickly so I don’t use it very often). It can also cover a foot or leg to make any kick or punch much more painful. Each time it changes shape takes about five seconds and my zanpaktou does change its weight according to its changing shape, and I’m not particularly strong, so if one sword gets too heavy I may have to drop it. My swords can also be combined into one big sword to make them easier to handle, but the swords usually don't stay together.

Bankai Name; hagane seichuu gekijou (steel control fury)
Bankai Details; after going into bankai, my two swords melt into, and then cover everything around me and creates a huge dome with a diameter of about 200 meters, similar to Tosen’s. Then steel gloves appear on my arms that go up to my elbows, these gloves are my swords. I am able to control any part of the metal dome, and my steel gloves are able to change shape like in shikai, but the swords are my gloves. This dome is like an extension of my sword and is controlled eather with hand movements or by visualizing attacks with it. My bankai only lasts about five minutes before the two swords quickly go back into shikai.

Anything Else; in either shikai or bankai, if my zanpaktou feels that the battle is pointless (which usually doesn’t happen) it can return to its sealed form and won’t release again during the battle, so I usually depend on mostly kido and hakuda in a fight. Though that also works in the opposite way, if kinzoku gekijou is really into a battle, it gets stronger and faster.

In a hypothetical situation, Kubo creates a second series Bleach anime with the members of this club as the characters. Who is your Japanese and English VA?
Japanese: Hōchū Ōtsuka (Jiraiya)
English: Lex Lang (Alan - M&#196;R)

Those are the only ones I could think of off the top on my head.
They could probably come up with better picks somehow though.

Originally Posted by Arenak

Sorry I didn't post my zanpaktou sooner, my computer's fan got clogged with dust and kept shutting down right before I could.

Spoiler:- Zanpaktou:

Zanpaktou Name; kinzoku gekijou (metal fury)
Type; electricity
Sealed form; two kantana, one black one brown.
Zanpaktou Spirit; two men, one has jet black hair and grey eyes, he is wearing a black shirt and brown pants that are torn at the end; the other has long, bright yellow hair and yellow eyes, and is wearing a brown shirt with the sleeves torn off and black pants. They both love to battle, and are irritable and stubborn.
Release Command; release your rage
Shikai Details; my swords split after the hilt into two thinner blades, both are yellow and flowing with electricity and if I cut the air with them they an electric sword-shaped blast goes charging in the direction I swung at. I then visualize my swords looking like any type of sword or object, and my swords can change their shape. I can imitate another shinigami’s zanpaktou, but I can’t go into that’s swords bankai, and its form appears yellow and flowing with electricity (like my swords), and any of that zanpaktou’s are electricity based, instead of whatever it used to be (but this drains me quickly so I don’t use it very often). It can also cover a foot or leg to make any kick or punch much more painful. Each time it changes shape takes about five seconds and my zanpaktou does change its weight according to its changing shape, and I’m not particularly strong, so if one sword gets too heavy I may have to drop it.

Bankai Name; hagane seichuu gekijou (steel control fury)
Bankai Details; after going into bankai, my two swords can do two things; the first is be dropped into the ground, melt, and then cover everything around me and creates a huge dome with a diameter of about 200 meters, similar to Tosen’s. Then steel gloves appear on my arms that go up to my elbows. I am able to control any part of the metal dome, and my steel gloves are able to change shape like in shikai, but the swords are my gloves. The second thing is the two swords can be combined into one huge sword, that sword is able to change shape and create huge blasts of lightning instantly. My bankai only lasts about five minutes before the two swords quickly go back into shikai.

Anything Else; in either shikai or bankai, if my zanpaktou feels that the battle is pointless (which usually doesn’t happen) it can return to its sealed form and won’t release again during the battle, so I usually depend on mostly kido and hakuda in a fight. Though that also works in the opposite way, if kinzoku gekijou is really into a battle, it gets stronger and faster.

I think you have an interesting and strong zanpakuto, Arenak.
It's always neat to see a new lightning based zan, since Head-Captain Golde (and Squad 6 Captain MC) has one.
I think it's probably better that you posted your zan first, before entering a squad.
I'll try to make sure Golde doesn't forget to add a link to this on the first post.

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

Just a heads-up, no internet for a week. Yeah, one-liner, I'm not bothered by that for now.

Bummer. Well, see you in a week.Even though you probably won't see this till you get back.

Edit:
Here is your fixed Battle Data Chart, Arceus03.
You're now the fourth captain with a score of 490.

In a hypothetical situation, Kubo creates a second series Bleach anime with the members of this club as the characters. Who is your Japanese and English VA?

idk, since I've never known (and cared) much about VA's. I guess anyone would've been fine. Just as long as he doesn't sound too jerky, yeah.

Originally Posted by Arenak

Spoiler:- Zanpaktou:

Zanpaktou Name; kinzoku gekijou (metal fury)
Type; electricity
Sealed form; two kantana, one black one brown.
Zanpaktou Spirit; two men, one has jet black hair and grey eyes, he is wearing a black shirt and brown pants that are torn at the end; the other has long, bright yellow hair and yellow eyes, and is wearing a brown shirt with the sleeves torn off and black pants. They both love to battle, and are irritable and stubborn.
Release Command; release your rage
Shikai Details; my swords split after the hilt into two thinner blades, both are yellow and flowing with electricity and if I cut the air with them they an electric sword-shaped blast goes charging in the direction I swung at. I then visualize my swords looking like any type of sword or object, and my swords can change their shape. I can imitate another shinigami’s zanpaktou, but I can’t go into that’s swords bankai, and its form appears yellow and flowing with electricity (like my swords), and any of that zanpaktou’s are electricity based, instead of whatever it used to be (but this drains me quickly so I don’t use it very often). It can also cover a foot or leg to make any kick or punch much more painful. Each time it changes shape takes about five seconds and my zanpaktou does change its weight according to its changing shape, and I’m not particularly strong, so if one sword gets too heavy I may have to drop it.

Bankai Name; hagane seichuu gekijou (steel control fury)
Bankai Details; after going into bankai, my two swords can do two things; the first is be dropped into the ground, melt, and then cover everything around me and creates a huge dome with a diameter of about 200 meters, similar to Tosen’s. Then steel gloves appear on my arms that go up to my elbows. I am able to control any part of the metal dome, and my steel gloves are able to change shape like in shikai, but the swords are my gloves. The second thing is the two swords can be combined into one huge sword, that sword is able to change shape and create huge blasts of lightning instantly. My bankai only lasts about five minutes before the two swords quickly go back into shikai.

Anything Else; in either shikai or bankai, if my zanpaktou feels that the battle is pointless (which usually doesn’t happen) it can return to its sealed form and won’t release again during the battle, so I usually depend on mostly kido and hakuda in a fight. Though that also works in the opposite way, if kinzoku gekijou is really into a battle, it gets stronger and faster.

Ah, another lightning one. That makes it... 3, if you include NL's and Golde's. Interesting =]Though... I wouldn't fight you. XD

Feeling proud because is being the only pure water-based zanpakto owner for now

Originally Posted by Zameric

It's always neat to see a new lightning based zan, since Head-Captain Golde (and Squad 6 Captain MC) has one.

Edit:
Here is your fixed Battle Data Chart, Arceus03.
You're now the fourth captain with a score of 490.

Eh? Since when did MC has a lightning based zanpakto? I thought he only could channel lightning away from him, not generate them?

Ah, great, thanks. =D And correction: I'm not the 4th Captain with a 490 score now, I've always been one.

Seeing your VA reminded me, I still haven't finished watching MAR. XD Only up to episode 90+ or so.

kusari: I'll read your chapter.... later, I guess. XD That is, if I remember and after my works are done.

Zanpaktou Name; kinzoku gekijou (metal fury)
Type; electricity
Sealed form; two kantana, one black one brown.
Zanpaktou Spirit; two men, one has jet black hair and grey eyes, he is wearing a black shirt and brown pants that are torn at the end; the other has long, bright yellow hair and yellow eyes, and is wearing a brown shirt with the sleeves torn off and black pants. They both love to battle, and are irritable and stubborn.
Release Command; release your rage
Shikai Details; my swords split after the hilt into two thinner blades, both are yellow and flowing with electricity and if I cut the air with them they an electric sword-shaped blast goes charging in the direction I swung at. I then visualize my swords looking like any type of sword or object, and my swords can change their shape. I can imitate another shinigami’s zanpaktou, but I can’t go into that’s swords bankai, and its form appears yellow and flowing with electricity (like my swords), and any of that zanpaktou’s are electricity based, instead of whatever it used to be (but this drains me quickly so I don’t use it very often). It can also cover a foot or leg to make any kick or punch much more painful. Each time it changes shape takes about five seconds and my zanpaktou does change its weight according to its changing shape, and I’m not particularly strong, so if one sword gets too heavy I may have to drop it.

Bankai Name; hagane seichuu gekijou (steel control fury)
Bankai Details; after going into bankai, my two swords can do two things; the first is be dropped into the ground, melt, and then cover everything around me and creates a huge dome with a diameter of about 200 meters, similar to Tosen’s. Then steel gloves appear on my arms that go up to my elbows. I am able to control any part of the metal dome, and my steel gloves are able to change shape like in shikai, but the swords are my gloves. The second thing is the two swords can be combined into one huge sword, that sword is able to change shape and create huge blasts of lightning instantly. My bankai only lasts about five minutes before the two swords quickly go back into shikai.

Anything Else; in either shikai or bankai, if my zanpaktou feels that the battle is pointless (which usually doesn’t happen) it can return to its sealed form and won’t release again during the battle, so I usually depend on mostly kido and hakuda in a fight. Though that also works in the opposite way, if kinzoku gekijou is really into a battle, it gets stronger and faster.

An electric transmorpher zanpakutou. Interesting.
It'd be pretty useless against my zanpakutou though (in shikai at least), since my vacuum blades are essentially your lightning waves but without the lightning. Still, that isn't really a big concern...
I wonder what would happen if you went up against NL...

Your bankai confuses me though...not the way it works, but the parts that constitute your sword. Ok, so, I read it as this:
One sword melts into the ground and turns into a dome. Then, you magically obtain steel gloves, which are actually the same as the sword that just melted into the ground earlier. You still have another sword with you at the same time. The dome itself should not be considered part of your sword, but rather, a projection of your sword. Did I get that right?