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The Knight Templar thing comes from Aqua being Eraqus's best student... and his teachings can reach into Knight Templar territory occasionally. If Aqua became a Puella Magi, I can see her adding witch-hunting (...heh, witch-hunting...) to her duties as a Keyblade Wielder with great enthusiasm.

Then, she learns the truth.

She does not take it well.

Then, the slower realization that darkness and grief can never be truly eradicated piles onto this, and she goes witch. Which is (just as I planned, kekekeke...) incredibly ironic considering the KH canon. >w>

Now that you've explained the logic behind it, I can see where you're coming from. Still not entirely sure how the Witch design you came up with has anything at all to do with Aqua (though the Familiars now make sense, when before I was just kind of not thinking about them too much), but other than that I can see the connection.

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All you need is a little Insane Troll Logic. ;3

Speaking of connections... wanna hear about my Grand Mass Guess on the connections between the Soul Anatomy of various series, including Madoka? [/totallynotSchmuckBait]

I'm totally jealous of that Insane Troll Logic, then.

And now that you've brought it up, I'm already trying to work out connections in my head. Dammit, I'm a sucker for random crap like this.

Now that you've explained the logic behind it, I can see where you're coming from. Still not entirely sure how the Witch design you came up with has anything at all to do with Aqua (though the Familiars now make sense, when before I was just kind of not thinking about them too much), but other than that I can see the connection.

Methinks it was inspired by the stained glass platforms you see during a Destati/Dive to the Heart sequence.

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I'm totally jealous of that Insane Troll Logic, then.

And now that you've brought it up, I'm already trying to work out connections in my head. Dammit, I'm a sucker for random crap like this.

^^;

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Totally not falling for the bait, by the way. <_<

Darnit. Once I get going about my fanfic ideas... well, I find it hard to stop.

I had a similar idea involving a fic taking place within Kriemhild Gretchen's Heaven, based on an idea somebody--Triple R, maybe--brought up that perhaps the entire series was taking place in Kriemhild Gretchen's Heaven. I ended up bailing on it when I realized there was no good way to truly flesh it out (without being a rehash of the main series anyway), but it's still a pretty sweet idea.

Flicked through first chapters. Found original characters named Gen and Kitamura.
If the nearest original character I'll encounter next is named Akiyuki, I'll freak out.
But merging MGLN and PMMM is something that waited to be done sooner or later.

btw, now that the timeline 6 magical system revolves around battling demons... Is anyone up to a ShinMegaTen crossover?

I've been thinking about it and I came to the conclusion that I need to write some Homura fanfiction to exorcize my not so pleasant feelings about the ending, so to speak.

It's going to be post canon, centered on Homura. Mostly want to explore her coming to terms with Madoka's sacrifice. I'm gonna use her rediscovery of her powers as well as her encounter with Madoka's family as plot devices for Homura to find her role in this new world and what Madoka's "hope" actually means for her and for all the others magical girls.

I've been thinking about it and I came to the conclusion that I need to write some Homura fanfiction to exorcize my not so pleasant feelings about the ending, so to speak.

It's going to be post canon, centered on Homura. Mostly want to explore her coming to terms with Madoka's sacrifice. I'm gonna use her rediscovery of her powers as well as her encounter with Madoka's family as plot devices for Homura to find her role in this new world and what Madoka's "hope" actually means for her and for all the others magical girls.

I'll post a link here when it's done.

I'll be looking forward to this. I've been looking for something that isn't Homura-centric lately due to the sheer quantity of Homura-centric fanfiction out there (though I suppose at this point treating her fully as the protagonist makes sense), but this sounds really interesting.

After watching the last episodes there has been a plot ghosting around my head. What do you think?

Spoiler for Chapter 1 - Last entry into her diary:

Chapter 1 - Last entry into her diary

Small near crystalline droplets were purchasing ground on her cheeks as she opened her battered diary. The last page of it. This far the two of them had never gotten before but still the looming doom above their heads was tearing her up and her tears flowed without hesitation.

12.07.2014

It has been long since I have been able to write something in a calm hour lately. The Incubators were coming closer to find their hiding place. Homura has been calm the last few hours, she probably thinks another end is near once again and preserves her magic energy supply as much as possible. With each cycle the Incubators were becoming aware of us more quickly and respond to us with ever more ferocity. I write this in hope that in this time I may be able to prevent someone else making the same mistake as me, Homura and any other Magical Girl. The Incubators are evil and cruel to mankind playing some kind of important game on the shoulders of us Magical Girls. If you read this please hear my voice and never contract with an Incubator. Nothing good will come of it! Despair will consume you and everyone you love! The story of Homura and me has become obscure after my mistake. My wish that made me a Magical Girl has gone so very wrong... Kyuube deceived me promising my wish could change the entire universe as I was destined to become the strongest Magical Girl in existence but upon wishing that I want to prevent all witches from ever being born, everything went wrong. I was not powerful enough and this wish changed only two people. Homura and me. Suddenly exempt from the system with a different system in place for just the two of us Walpurgis Night was not defeated but we were. Our misery become certain inescapable reality once the Incubators discovered the true nature of my wish. Magical Girls suddenly would not give emotional energy upon converting to witches anymore and would not server any purpose to the ever plotting Incubators anymore. Well it is not entirely true that Magical Girls do not give energy anymore. All but two are like that. Upon death Homura and I have being the most delicious energy snack for Kyuube ever in existence and thus he pursues us never ceasing. If death would be the end however I could rest next to Homura in peace... But life has been torturing us ever since it became impossible for Homura to prevent me from becoming a Magical Girl through my wish. Every time we die, releasing more energy the more prolonged and painful our death is, we are reincarnated immediatly giving the Incubators another new target to chase.
The only that keeps us going is...

The door burst open and a gust of wind startled the two inhabitants as they warily looked up to the open door. Three Magical Girls with mean looking weapons were just outside of their temporary sanctuary grinning and them with unhidden disgust and hate.

"Time to die evil witches!" One of the three shouted.

I'm of two minds here. On one hand the idea is almost unbearably interesting, and it really sounds like something I could sit down and waste hours reading, but on the other hand I'm not sure if the diary-esque style you've given it does it justice. Maybe it's just me but I think a faster paced, in-the-moment sort of writing would suit this idea better; something along the lines of the Darker Than Black OVA, where everything is thrown at you almost randomly and you're left to pick up clues of what the hell is going on as they come.

Plus I had a tough time believing that diary entry was something Madoka would write, but again, that could just be me.

At the moment it is rough draft of the story outline. The first chapter is basically the only one meant to be in diary style. Following ones will be different. I am looking to give a short yet comprehensive outline of the stories premise in chapter 1.

I'll post a revised and updated one later. THanks for your tips.

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If there are individuals who are unlike one another, it is certain that their fates are different as well. But what if, a collision occurred bringing individuals, very different from each other, together. Most likely, we think that these people, very unlike from one another cannot possibly be companions, friends, or even lovers for their fates will ultimately separate them in the end...

Sign me up for the next chapter--I'm definitely hooked. Great concept, AP. This would have been a terrific "bad but good" ending. Plus the sudden uneexpected reversal of MGs into the Bad Guys is classic Urobuchi. Smart!

It is the name of an ancient love,
Two maidens who govern magical powers,
The peace of this newly born hope their hands protect.

Chapter 1 - Last entry into her diary

Small near crystalline droplets were purchasing ground on her cheeks as she opened her battered diary. The last page of it. This far the two of them had never gotten before but still the looming doom above their heads was tearing her up and her tears flowed without hesitation. Homura watched her friend with a distant glimmer and mused what she would be writing if it was her diary.

12.07.2014

It has been long since I have been able to write something in a calm hour lately. The Incubators are coming closer to find our hiding place once more. Madoka has been calm the last few hours, she probably thinks another end is near once again and preserves her magic energy supply as much as possible. With each cycle the Incubators were becoming aware of us more quickly and respond to us with ever more ferocity. I write this in hope that in this time I may be able to prevent someone else making the same mistake as me, Madoka and any other Magical Girl. The Incubators are evil and cruel to mankind playing some kind of important game on the shoulders of us Magical Girls. If you read this please hear my voice and never contract with an Incubator. Nothing good will come of it! Despair will consume you and everyone you love! The story of Madoka and me has become obscure irony after my mistake of letting her contract. My wish that made me a Magical Girl has gone so very wrong... Kyuube deceived me promising my wish could change Madoka's fate who I want to protect with everything I got, yet I was not powerful enough and though this wish changed two fates. Madoka's and mine, we are still trapped in a nightmare so ever lasting it even might see the end of all other existence. Suddenly exempt from the system with a different system in place for just the two of us Walpurgis Night was not defeated but we were, by Madoka's wish to protect the world! Our misery became certain and inescapable reality once the Incubators discovered the true nature of her wish. Magical Girls suddenly would not give emotional energy upon converting to witches anymore and would not serve any purpose to the ever plotting Incubator race anymore. Well it is not entirely true that Magical Girls do not give energy anymore. All but two are like that. Upon death Madoka and I have been the most delicious energy snack for Kyuube ever in existence and thus he pursues us never ceasing. If death would be the end however I could rest next to Madoka in peace content to have seen her blissful smile a last time... But life has been torturing us ever since it became impossible for Madoka to change the Magical Girl system through her wish. Every time we die, releasing more energy the more prolonged and painful our death is, we are reincarnated immediatly giving the Incubators another new target to chase, as Madoka's and my wish granted us near immortality.
The only that keeps me going is... Madok...

The door burst open and a gust of wind startled the two inhabitants as they warily looked up to the open door. Three Magical Girls with mean looking weapons were just outside of their temporary sanctuary grinning and them with unhidden disgust and hate.

"Time to die evil witches!" One of the three shouted, yet in a second gust that blew through the door, both Homura and Madoka were gone, leaving just a small ticking package onto which a card leaned reading: "I am sorry."

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If there are individuals who are unlike one another, it is certain that their fates are different as well. But what if, a collision occurred bringing individuals, very different from each other, together. Most likely, we think that these people, very unlike from one another cannot possibly be companions, friends, or even lovers for their fates will ultimately separate them in the end...