Rated 3 / 5 stars2010-08-17 16:52:19

you got some work to do bud

Your animation, microphone and script definitely need work, with that said, it was a good attempt and i commend you on the work you put in to it, who knows? maybe with some practice, and english courses you could be a good flash artist, it wasn't all negative, sometimes i laughed because it was so awkwardly edited and scripted, and to the other voice actors on the project i'm so glad you read straight off of the page, that gave me a few laughs too.

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars2010-08-13 16:25:15

Rated 0 / 5 stars2010-08-13 01:53:28

I didn't laugh

I didn't laugh at all, or chuckle, or even smile a bit, this isn't a good piece of work, for many reasons.
some ideas were pretty funny if you think about it, but the delivery of the jokes/humor was horrible and the crude animation killed any chance of it ever being funny
work on animation, get a better mic, and get a sense of humor, your main problem is delivery, something's ticking up there but they're not coming out right