Korra is reeling after the devastation inflicted upon Republic City and the harm her friends have gone through. She needs to protect them, and herself from the many enemies revealing themselves. And as the world starts to unravel and tensions rise amid the nations, she'll learn the true meaning of what it is to be the Avatar. (Criticism welcome) Book 3 of 4 of Changing Elements.

I think this is a good place to stop the story for a while and focus on getting my bearings. The story has suffered because of it. I've been getting too many ideas, trying to implement at the same time, and just making a absolute mess of things in my opinion. I haven't even done a read-through of the series up to this point.

That doesn't mean there won't be another 10 day wait for a chapter. What it means is that I'm just going to be taking a little time off to step away from the series, read it to myself, and go from there. I do have a clear outline of how this story and the final one will end, I just need to work on the events getting us there. And seeing as the Book 2 premiere is just around the corner, I think all of us would rather go watch that anyway.

Okay, that might have seemed like it was 10 days+, but you were just imagining it. Sorry for the wait, I kind of took the opportunity to go back and add in some things I was really meaning to get onto, mainly small bits and pieces about Sensha and Boto to make things a little clearer with them.

But I also made a fairly big change. After watching the absolutely fantastic past few episodes, I had to do something involving a little bit of conflict between Tonraq and Unalaq, and revamped the appearance of the glacier to match the canon version. Mainly because I feel it just reads much better that way. So those are the new additions, and here's the new chapter. Sorry for the wait on this one, but this is where the rest of the story kicks off from.

Just curious about something: how does the firearm that Hiroshi Sato and the Equalists are manufacturing work, exactly? I ask because I'm in the process of working out the details of a LoK fanfic set in the future, and am thinking of concepts for new weapons.

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Basically Hiroshi's revolver works along the same lines as real-life revolvers. If he had developed in our world, there wouldn't be anything mechanically different to it when compared to other revolver designs.

However, in that world, his revolver can become the most deadliest weapon developed.

Apart from that it is also coated in a thin layer of platinum to proof it against metalbending.