Hey there. This is the latest draft of my first SCP in over a year. I suspect my writing ability, if I ever had it, is not back up to 100% just yet. I hope y'all can find some time to look this over and kick me in the junk offer your thoughts. Thank you for your time and input.

1) There's no reason for the missing boy to be labeled a sub-SCP. There's nothing anomalous about him, he's just a poor kid who got stuck in the waterslide dimension for too long. After the Foundation had learned what they needed to from him, they'd dope him up with amnesiacs and give him to a foster family.
2) The doctor's note at the end is a bit too lolfoundationy.

I still like this. I'd prefer if the redaction in the last test log were gone, though as I think it'd be more interesting without it. And Smapti is right re: The kid doesn't need to be an scp and the lolfoundation.

I liked it and would have upvoted at "SORRY FOR DELAY. REPORT THIS ERROR?" I agree that the boy should be returned to his family, not remain in fake-foster-containment (as the containment procedures note).

You can keep the [DATA REDACTED] because you explain what happens in the final addendum, which I like. I love closure! Just add a note, something like LEVEL 3 CLEARANCE ONLY so we know we're getting something juicy.