07 shit, first one is my boy absol, the nig that got me in this shit n the second flick is sum wit my old name
my most recent, sorry so dark, really wish i woulda done sum highlights but fuck it that bitch is ridin the tracks..
n my nig soren wit the cherry bomb lol... crits if yall want, just throwin sum flicks down

phat- u def got the idea of wat u doin but my advice would be to sketch like 10x more than wat u do n start developin ur style some more, need to work on flow alot
props to wost n goms on the last page, stay up. that last mone piece is straight ballin too, u ever paint trains big homie??

phil, yours is at least as bad as phats...no worse...you should keep it simple too...its just lots of bullshit between ugly letters.

Originally Posted by Dirty Doug

haha cool u man u win, i give up

Originally Posted by IbuprofenTablets

Plankton's the most successful troll in this section of the forum atm.

Originally Posted by Phat 2

and to make it interesting and entertaining, whoever loses removes everything in his signature and puts the line "I am (winner's name)'s bitch" in bold capital letters instead. and never takes it off, or else gets banned. deal, fag?

This is exactly the flick I was talking about, and I wasn't aboutta search the entire thread for that picture so I dropped the subject.
But since you've taken the trouble to find it, thanks for proving my words.

Even Ray Charles can see that your wall skills are bullshit compared to the crap you got in your books, and absolute filth for someone with a head and mouth as big as yours. Ray Charles sees it, and Stevie Wonders backs him up on it.

Just so that my post doesn't fall in the "empty shit talking" category, here's what I see in that flick.
a mix mangled mess of bars all over the place. unnecessary and whack extensions and links. uneven flow. a hilarious tag.
a B and R with inverted crosses that are as overplayed as my anarchy A, a pathetic heart at the bottom of the R, an A with a wayyy too high middle bar, a really weak, oversized and broken I that looks like a T, an N that's higher than the other letters , an oversized S with god knows what the fuck kind of extensions are these?!
some 3D mistakes and a some real unclean lines.

you're good on paper and at home... but when it comes to reality and where the real stuff matters. you suck balls dude. yes offense. it's really dissapointing to see someone who talks as much smack as you do, have these kinds of skills.
what's worse is that it's an ultimately chill and legal spot. no pressure, no excuse.

this isn't about me. it's about you.
I admit and reckon that I'm toy. the proof is that I very rarely post my stuff in the intermediate thread.
you on the other hand have THE worst attitude I've seen in a while and think you're king.

07 shit, first one is my boy absol, the nig that got me in this shit n the second flick is sum wit my old name
my most recent, sorry so dark, really wish i woulda done sum highlights but fuck it that bitch is ridin the tracks..
n my nig soren wit the cherry bomb lol... crits if yall want, just throwin sum flicks down

phat- u def got the idea of wat u doin but my advice would be to sketch like 10x more than wat u do n start developin ur style some more, need to work on flow alot
props to wost n goms on the last page, stay up. that last mone piece is straight ballin too, u ever paint trains big homie??

bumpin flicks to new page. n some more from earlier this year for the fuck of it..
i really gotta get a chill wall to piece on lmao!!

pitlord- work on letter structure, it looks like u gettin the idea wit cuts n shit for the fill so just keep workin on that as well, but your letters need to be the main focus

I like the throw and the hollow outline got that simp steez too it for the hollowness. On the Two most recent, thicken up those outlines, the transition from paper to paint would be complete if your outline was on point cause that style is dope, but the painted result looks bad. Is the yard mad dark? or wherever your at? Cause it kinda looks like you painted that yellow one w/ your eyes closed lol (no hate).

thats how it is sometimes man, moon is the only light lol n alotta times once its already fucked i just go along to try n make it somewhat decent looking lmao i been paintin as much as possible gettin lines down, but like i said i need a chill wall to piece on. shits hard to find round here, so i usually just stick to the freights. it'll all come together eventually though. practice,practice,practice lol

Thanks for the crit seywhat. I really need more practice handling the can and as you said, letter structure. Im gonna post some blackboock stuff soon. I need to hold myself back and stick with the simple stuff before getting into shadows and 3D