He fell from a futuristic space ship to the sea and blame poverty and the stores for the lack of good inking materials. I also based that poor space ship design on this to keep consistency. I should number the panels next time.

I liked the first panel, mainly the hand, and the panel where he falls. Even though you shouldn't have cut off the right leg, it looks half assed. And that head looking up is abysmal man. Try looking up some reference for that.

speaking candidly, your poses are really stiff and as a result your style lacks a lot of personalityi feel like you don't really understand the concept of gesture which would explain why your drawings are really stiff, so i would seriously recommend watching the videos i'll post below and doing some gesture practiceit'll really help you breathe some life into your drawings

Sifter wrote:And here you are not paying attention to the latest post. Not edit, but post. The one that is exactly on top of this very reply. Do you see it? Yeah that's the one, enjoy yourself.

Well if you want to be a direct asshole about it, feel free to. I chose to give my advice on how to make the poses on your second most recent works better, i had nothing to contribute about the other thing you did so i didn't. If you don't want someone to comment on your older works, remove them you mook. They are also two entirely different subjects of drawing, one a head and hand study. The other being a pose study.