I liked it. It was a little interesting. Funny. Yet short. Am I making any sense right now?

Julia chapter 1 . 6/12/2005

oh no, what were you thinking? That wasn't very good. You're writing style seems like it's changing.

before and after chapter 1 . 6/12/2005

A couple of errors, otherwise an decent story.

"There was no way that sweet, shy Ginny Weasley just asked if she wanted to kiss him." (That doesn't make sense. You probably meant "Ginny Weasley just asked if he wanted to kiss her" ... unless you change the opening line to read: “Do I want to kiss you, Harry?”)