100 word challange by zara

2014 01.09

Lurking in the shadows duskey white sheets skatterd around, of oddly shapes and sizes, like a meeting of ghosts.sqeeks of mice.creaky floor boards.hoots of owls.I could’nt think.plodding up the spiral staircase It felt like miles long.finally reatching the top of the elter skelter stairs a small dusty door caut my eye……aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! A bat tornado flew out (I hate bats!)to my greatest suprise in the door was a GIANT ROBOT!!!

there was some batteries on the floor for some ramdom reason; I picked them up and was wondering why nobody has tryed this before.but when Iput the batteries in………now I know why no one tryed.

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2 Responses to “100 word challange by zara”

Hollo i loved reading you woak. *good use of gerund opening like lurking. *good punctuation like …………….. and brackets. wish – re read your work and re consider punctuation in the second line as your list doesnt read well.