To tell you the truth, I only made this account for this story. So I will be really disappointed if there will be no update, if ever. I’m not pressuring you to update really soon as in now because I myself am not really into regular updates of my stories. But please update? Pretty please? Thanks!

By the way, what I think will happen in the next chapter are Everett will have a fight with Draco (maybe get poisoned, whatever Draco had planned) and well, get kissed... by Hermione of course!

Malfoy and Kip (especially in combination) are hilarious. Malfoy thinking about the photo and Kip's rant are especially funny.

I also liked the way you ended the cliffhanger with a sort of awkward conversation between the two. It was a surprise to me, but a welcome one.

Furthermore the idea of letting Landon be an animagus and him becoming Hermione's "friend" in form of a cat is great. I also liked the flashback, because it hinted, but did not reveal.

I love it so far - your story has unexpected turns and is very entertaining to read with nice funny scenes in between that break up the tension.

The only thing I would want to criticize is that (based on the assumption that Landon is Harry) Harry's animagus form probably would not be a cat - but then I never thought much about what it would be, so never mind (unless you really really want to).

Malfoy and Kip (especially in combination) are hilarious. Malfoy thinking about the photo and Kip's rant are especially funny.

I also liked the way you ended the cliffhanger with a sort of awkward conversation between the two. It was a surprise to me, but a welcome one.

Furthermore the idea of letting Landon be an animagus and him becoming Hermione's "friend" in form of a cat is great. I also liked the flashback, because it hinted, but did not reveal.

I love it so far - your story has unexpected turns and is very entertaining to read with nice funny scenes in between that break up the tension.

The only thing I would want to criticize is that (based on the assumption that Landon is Harry) Harry's animagus form probably would not be a cat - but then I never thought much about what it would be, so never mind (unless you really really want to).

You're moving the plot quite fast and while you could probably fit in more descriptions and things, I really enjoy it - there is no chance of getting bored while reading. Also you put in enough details to not make your plot feel rushed. So, well done.

I have to say I already love Kip Flaggan!!! I think he might be my favorite character in this fic. Also, in the scene with him Harry reminded me of Lupin/Dumbledore or a mix of the two. I don't know if you intended that, but I liked it and think that his character would develop into their direction since they were people he idolized.

Also, you had me bursting out laughing at the Malfoy scene about the spiders - I enjoy reading about this new Malfoy!

Nice cliffhanger at the end. Well, I got to read on, want to know where you're taking this - You certainly got me hooked.

You're moving the plot quite fast and while you could probably fit in more descriptions and things, I really enjoy it - there is no chance of getting bored while reading. Also you put in enough details to not make your plot feel rushed. So, well done.

I have to say I already love Kip Flaggan!!! I think he might be my favorite character in this fic. Also, in the scene with him Harry reminded me of Lupin/Dumbledore or a mix of the two. I don't know if you intended that, but I liked it and think that his character would develop into their direction since they were people he idolized.

Also, you had me bursting out laughing at the Malfoy scene about the spiders - I enjoy reading about this new Malfoy!

Nice cliffhanger at the end. Well, I got to read on, want to know where you're taking this - You certainly got me hooked.

You're moving the plot quite fast and while you could probably fit in more descriptions and things, I really enjoy it - there is no chance of getting bored while reading. Also you put in enough details to not make your plot feel rushed. So, well done.

I have to say I already love Kip Flaggan!!! I think he might be my favorite character in this fic. Also, in the scene with him Harry reminded me of Lupin/Dumbledore or a mix of the two. I don't know if you intended that, but I liked it and think that his character would develop into their direction since they were people he idolized.

Also, you had me bursting out laughing at the Malfoy scene about the spiders - I enjoy reading about this new Malfoy!

Nice cliffhanger at the end. Well, I got to read on, want to know where you're taking this - You certainly got me hooked.

So far, I liked it and will read on. I would normally review this early, but since you asked so nicely. Here are some thoughts:

God - how could you do that to poor old Malfoy? Actually I think it's quite funny, I'll just have to get used to the idea of a nice Malfoy who's disgusted by bad behavior.

I liked the introduction of Harry and the explanation you offered about Ron and Ginny, they seem plausible and I think using Hermione remembering was a good way to summarize the past events.

The only thing I would not agree with is McGonagall hiring teachers without even so much as an interview, even if she's desperate. But I understand that it's much easier and less confusing to start of your plot like that.

CAT !!!!!!! i always thought his animagnus will be stag not convinced sorry but its ur plot...:)nice chapter i love draco character he is mixture of ron one , i can see , nervous wreck, fear of spider...:)

really intresting plot. i was socked when i read hey hermoine !! how come draco can say like that, but poor draco ..u know i like the old one more...:). i am little sad as u have killed my most fav character ron and second has lost his memory huhhbut this plot is so cahhy that after creating my account i am reading this story firstly

I absolutley love your writings! Please write another chapter as soon as possible, I am desperately waiting to read how the story goes on.I guess in the next chapter, Everett will have a fight with Malfoy and also tell Hermione about his true identity.By the way, your ideas are absolutely great. Hope to read more from you soon. :)

Sorry-haven't been reviewing too much because i was too caught up in the pace of the story!

I've got to tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

Malfoy, however, disappointed me. Here i thought he would be just an innocent rival, but I guess he'll have to do a few ugly things to make Harry perfect for Hermione.

Also, maybe his memories came back?

As for your question, I don't think Everett will get sacked or have a mental breakdown. He's too powerful and strong for that. He might get poisoned (you can never trust Malfoy) and tell Hermione. So i choose a. And a maybe c.

I'd also like Everett to move on already. bBeing depressed like this forever is not in human nature.