I told you that I would stop by didn't I? Well. Here I am and I attacked the first story at the top of your list, which, by the way, goes on forever! I've got some catching up to do. :D
So happy about that!
For a moment, I wasn't really able to stop laughing as I read this. I adore Percy right now and the way you have his stuffiness is just too amusing, especially since he tends to over analyze every little thing. George and Ron were hilarious too and I loved their teasing, claiming that going out with a girl for pie (Like Ron would know, mind you) concludes that its a date.
Percy's refusal to believe that he didn't understand something was a good insight to his character as well. He'd be so fun to poke at. :D
Loved the bit with Ginny too, it reminded me strangely of the Godfather for some reason and I was dying with laughter. She's as bad as George and Ron though and I thought it was funny that Percy thought he had the upper hand with her.
He failed! Hahaha.
Also, I did enjoy that he was, despite it all, a little uncomfortable once he got to the cafe by noting how ridiculous he supposedly looked. But the bits with Audrey, (Ha! I had my suspicions!!) were great, a tad awkward and sweet, aside from the pie I mean. I was able to picture them very well in my mind and I liked Audrey too, in just a few sentences I was able to get a grasp for her.
Too bad this isn't a full story! D':
The fact that Percy actually enjoyed himself while being completely arrogant with his thoughts on always being on top (No pun intended of course) was pretty interesting. I didn't think that he would want to go back on another date but he surprised me! Good for him! Hahah.
Sort of want to know how that walk turned out!
Not like I can talk, but in this whole thing there were like, two grammar things. Not even big ones so no worries there! It was a great read and I think you should do humor more! There were some funny things in here!
Can't wait for you to update WAT and I'll be trudging back to my page and updating all of my girly-angsty things. ~sigh~
^Its not as bad as I'm making it sound. Hahah.
Anyway, see you on the forums!
Thanks for the great read!
Much love of course,
Gabbie