jxchen

Good concept and I like the execution of the surrounding elements. To me, however, the dragon's design does not fit with the other elements. There is also something odd about the neck shape, and the arms appear to not be connected. The shape of the burn where he's sitting is also a bit harsh and distracting.

marnelra

kinzoku

I'm not a fan of the repetition of the copied vector splatters and I think they'd look far better if you just drew them out yourself instead of pasting the same ones on there over and over, but I love everything else and I'm glad you resubbed it. Revoted.

Demonbuttercup

D3lusional

elviswind wrote:You're gonna have to define polish and how the lack of it detracts from this work.

I see shorter line work than some of McHerly's other work, but I don't think it detracts. To me, it reinforces the spontaneity of the depicted scene.

I really don't need to explain what I meant by "polish" or why I feel this isn't on par with his other designs. I'm not trying to change your mind, I'm merely stating an opinion. If you have a counter opinion (you do) feel free to state it (you did) but I'm really not trying to debate the validity of said opinions.

JRWorkshop

TobiasAmaranth

AdderXYU wrote:As was noted earlier and then deleted, glowing fungus is not fire. If you think it is, I would love to see you attempt to barbecue.

Given the entirety of this design, there's no reason to believe this is anything but a magical glowing land of foxes. Nothing reads fire.

TobiasAmaranth wrote:@Adder - Kitsune-bi, lit. foxfire, is one of the powers of Japanese foxes of myth. Foxfire is also a term FOR the bioluminescence of such fungi, as linked. It's also green. This is a play on words.

Is this really so hard to comprehend, Adder? I'll copy it as many times as needed until it somehow clicks. *laughs*

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