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LittleLionGirl says:Wow. I can't believe there is so much going on in just the fourth chapter. I have to say this was well written. There was a problem when you italicized a single word it would mash with your followingword (like so). Other than that you did very well! I like the characterization and the first person POV with Devlin was so sad!