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This is the first download to Price of Immortality. Should other versions come out due to bug or glitch fixes, it is advised to remove the original before installing the new one.
Note: Justine NOT required

I, personally, thought this was a great first custom story.
I liked the story and the endings. It was a little short and there were quite a few notes to read. Nonetheless, it was excellent!
I really like what you did with the flashbacks. It was so simple but so nice.
The custom monster sounds actually scared me. When I was down in the *SPOILER?* cellar and that monster killed the grunt, and then you had to run from the weird "monster" like entity into a hole. That actually made me scared. And I was nervous for the rest of the story from that point on.
I've played so many stories that its now difficult to find a good custom story that isn't a full conversion or stories that I have already played.

Nice amount of detail too and the custom music was perfect!

For such a small custom story, I'll rate this 10/10!

Sorry about the previous comment. That was me and I forgot to sign in.

Thank you very much for playing, and thank you for your feedback. I'll try to find more ways to incorporate storytelling into gameplay in the future, to make sure people won't have to read massive walls of text from notes.