Excellent

Thanks

I couldn't tell from your comment at the beginning if this was your first story here or first anywhere. Either way, good first chapter. I'm most intrigued by the shifter and really want to know what his past is. He mentions his tribe also. I wonder why he seems so alone if he is part of a pack/tribe?

Congrats

on your first story. I was entertained by your story. I was also left asking questions and wanting more.We know alittle about Lily's background but not much on Agis. I almost get the impression he's the Alpha and if not at least a Beta. What is going to be Lily's response when she wakes up wrapped in the arms of a man, a man/wolf to be exact?

Again congrats on your first of hopefully storys to Lit. And thank you for sharing YOUR story!

Wow

Lovely

beautiful!!!

A beautiful start,keep it up.

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Anonymous12/09/11

keep it up

Oh man, this is a great start. I really hope that you keep this going and where your mind takes this story but you have alot of room to work with and I will gladly read what you post next. Only bad thing about this is that the chapter is to short. good luck and happy writting.

Anonymous

awesome...

Wonderful beginning....

to your story!! I cannot wait to read the rest of your story, so I do hope you post another chapter on here ASAP!! Thank you! :)

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Anonymous03/01/12

Definitely sounds like Sesshomaru. Especially the way he's softening because of a human girl on the run from evil men. Have you read/watched Inuyasha? Also, great start. Please continue soon. And also, more physical descriptions of Lily.

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Anonymous03/11/12

Aww

I love a good were story, and this is very promising! Why haven't you updated it?? I'm curious to find out why she is naturally so defiant--she couldn't have been born into slavery, or in a culture that it was common, could she? Is her former master going to appear in future chapters? Please keep going...

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Anonymous04/03/12

Fuck!

where's the rest, dammit?!

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Anonymous04/14/12

i am very into this story i think it is really good and i cant wait for another chapter please write a new chapter soon.

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Anonymous05/09/12

Oh!

Please update this story with new chapters. It's very promising and I would Love to be able to continue reading it. I would be very greatful if you continue this story. :)

Waiting

with slightly bated breath for more.

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Anonymous07/25/12

MOAR!!!!!

" Moar!!! " She yelled impatiently at her tiny iPod screen. She was growing tired waitng for updates. 'This is just so damn incredible! Why does the author stop and leave me hanging? It's like baiting a hungry, straved animal with teeny bits of scrap food.' She unhappily thought. So, she repeatedly yelled "Moar!!" at her teeny screen to come to nothing. She grumpily hopes that the autthor would update soon. And thus, with this final comment she goes to sleep.

I second that

To be continued.....blah blah blah, just another author on here that doesn't finish their story. Why post anything at all if you don't intend to keep posting? Fed up waiting for an update on this story.

Not again!

Definitely worth a continuation...hopefully you'll have the urge to begin again :)

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Anonymous09/10/13

I love it

Please write more

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Anonymous12/14/13

To be Continued. When?

Are you EVER going to carry on with this story? It has been 2 years since you started it. It is/was a very promising read, and I cannot understand why you won't continue. For all I know, you probably don't read these comments any more. But if you do, then please write a comment to tell us what is happening. PLEASE!

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Anonymous07/08/14

Well, hell! Still Waiting!!!

Come on AsherBlitz89, we're all dying here. Waiting for chapter 2. What's the hold up? Please pull your finger out and get it written and posted. This is beyond a joke now. :(

I'm back!

I want to first apologize for my extended absence. I've had to deal with allot of personal problems that took up my time and left my unable to write anything or even log onto this site. However, I want to assure everyone that I'm back and will be continuing this story and will see it through to it's end. Again I am so sorry for being gone so long and I promise anyone who is still interested that your incredible patience will be rewarded.