intriguing
Yes, an intriguing poem. I'm not entirely sure what to make of it. The scene has a sadness to it, but also a sort of sinister undertone, which is there right through, but only really makes itself shown on that last line. Kinda creepy, actually.

Good poem. Not sure that it's worth the 9s and 10s that it's got so far, but I'll happily give it a solid 8/10.