Great Story XD
Few Comments/Questions
1. I noticed that you started calling Harry and Hermione's youngest daughter Ava when her name is Jane but I checked other reviews first and saw that you had explained that they called her by Jane and sometimes Ava. I think that's a good idea, but was a bit confusing at first.
2. I don't think Ava is a good name for a daughter of Harry because it is the first three letters of the curse that ruined his life, Avada Kedavra, the killing curse.
3. I never really imagined Harry and Hermione as a couple but I tried to read a few stories and none seemed realistic until I found your stories. They made me think about what if they were a couple.
4. What would you name H and Hr's new baby that's yet to be born in the last chapter ?
5. You are an amazing writer, Keep it up ... !

True, but don't you think six years old is a little young to be exploring in that region? I don't knnow how things are in Greese, but here in the states that is too young, or should be. Maybe I'm just too old fashioned.

I agree. Anyone would freeze to see their wos=rst nightmare while they were awake, especailly if they weren't expecting it.
How did the bogart get in their house? did someone put it there?
You still need someone to proof read you work. There are spelling and grammar errors, minor, but still there.

You skipped right from them getting to the bed to the after with out mentioning the love makeing in the slightest. Not good form even if you don'tt describe it in detail.
The wedding however was very good.

YES! Finally Ginny makes up with them I wonder who her guy is but I think I have a guess!I like how you made Ron and Luna godparents of James because they have sticked with Harry and Hermione through thick and thin so they deserve it! I can't wait to read part 2 10/10
Cheers!

I love how Hermione does Roses for everything! If I could describe Hermione as a Flower I would use a rose so I will always be looking for a rose around Hermione! I was practically crying my eyes out and I still think I have some tear * grabs tissue box and blows his nose out*! Another great chapter 10/10
Cheers!