You should have done a story based on this line: Because after Harry said "I—I…I'm going to go to bed," Ginny did not respond, "Is that an invitation?"
lol that would have been awesome like when ginny and harry are older... just a thought

What a sweet story! It sure brings back some fond memories...I remember the first time my husband held one of our friends' newborns and the look of utter terror mixed with awe he had on his face. The same look crossed the face of a family friend, Andy, when my son was born a few years later; my son's entire body fit inside one of his large hands and when Andy didn't drop the baby, the smile on his face is one I'll alway remember!

Your characterizations of both Harry and Ginny are really good: I can easily picture Ginny offering to help Charlie and Becca out so they could get some badly-needed sleep and see that terrified look on Harry's face. My favorite line, "Ginny offered "pretend you're holding a Quaffle," made me grin at the illusion. Finally, even though Harry didn't act on his inclination to hold Ginny's hand, I'm glad he had the thought. There's hope that he'll come around eventually...

Short and sweet - the stuff good fics are made of. I loved the idea of Ginny taking care of a baby, and Harry being there , to Harry learning how to, ahem, handle , a baby, to the bittersweet ending. Tomorrow was a new day, after all.

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