'Twas good. The way you did Rose and Scorpius was fantastic. Their interactions were humorous, entertaining and, at times, rather sweet. I loved how they first meet, brought together by the mutual disdain their parents have. It was written well and free of any mistakes, as far as I could tell.

I did find it kinda weird that the goblins used handcuffs though XD Surely a race so potent in crafting and enchanting items would have something better for Gringotts robbers. The plot felt a tad rushed with some of its concepts/events, but was still quite entertaining and well done.