I think your work is grate but I beg to disagree with line 17 &18 ,Where you said:
You now filled up
What was lacking
I believe that as a human being, no one can complete you not even your soulmate. Except God, nobody can’t totally fill you up. The poem is romantic and uplifting but the mentality that says anyone can fill someone up is wrong. I do love how you write so keep it up💪🏼 but remember that love between a man and a woman requires both party to be whole and already filled up. One love girl, PEACE ✌🏻