Ok so my daughter is too busy doing whatever teenage girls do so I had to resort to her childhood friends to test out my new body and BD. Please provide some feedback as I am really trying to work on lighting for headshots and would like to know how bad I am doing here .

Yeah human model are def better. Here are two shots with my daughter. Really trying to figure out distance of BD from model and the right settings to use to give the best light and look. I need a different light stand I think to get it positioned better than just my vertical light stand.

Yeah the first one I had a light to the right with BD to the high left on an angle down. I was trying to get the background to out a little more and tried no light on the right with the BD angled down more and also more in front of her. I also turned the power down some on the BD. I have some more to edit and will try to post later but yeah I really need to work on it more to get that look.

Agree - the light is hot on her forehead - but the BD is going to give some pretty hot light and that is part of the look. You just need to expect it and control it. And her eye sockets are shading the top half of her eyes. I suggest a reflector back up into eyes for this kind of light position.

Also, look at the two-toned light you have in number one. Were you using an incandescent bulb as fill? It looks very yellow against the white of the BD. You can see the difference in color in the catchlights in her eyes on #1. One is very white and one is vey yellow. You may be able to get away with that in b/w, but in color, nope.

Another Quick Comment: I would prefer to see more DOF in these portraits.

Also, you seem to be asking something without giving much basic info...I suggest you post in your introduction up top, the specifics for the shots (e.g. aperture, method of exposure metering, settings on camera, etc.)