Wow. That is all I can say. You really have great talent. I had that bad feeling that he was going to kill her. I was thinking in my mind when he did, oh no he killed her! kind of like someone who gets too invovled in those soap operas. Anyways that was terrific work. I really really do love this. My first time reading a one shot too.

Author's Response: :D thank you so much, im glad you caught on to the foreshadowing feeeling haha thank you again :)