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Looks like he's using IMPACT for the font. You should ask pb69 what font he used.
Thoughts in take-em or leave-em no particular order:
-I like the side panels as they were in the other design (sans the red star).
-To many AGD logo's
-Would like to see the bird bigger. Wingtips at the shoulders

I think the Name/Numbers font was WAY better on the first one. The second one looks horrible.

Looks like the AO Army on the front could be a little bigger, but maybe that's just me. I hope that isn't his final design for that, though. The "AO Army" is the centerpiece of our jersey, and it needs to pop more

One of the "Automags.org" logos on the sleeves is backwards.

And as another member said a couple of days ago, if we're paying for the jerseys and the "artist", why are we also putting their logos on there?

The side panels look O.K., it's kinda hard to picture what they'll look like on there, though.

I kinda pictured him taking our design, and using his jersey designing experience to make it stronger.. Not trying to be a downer, but I think it needs some work.

I like this idea, you could have a larger bird in the background behind the name/numbers. The "we are everywhere" and "magpies" would need to be either be axed or creatively moved though, which would stink if they need to be axed because I like them.

Don't worry about the artist feelings. If he's been a graphic designer for more than 20 minutes, trust me, he's VERY used to it. That is our job (well not mine anymore). I for one don't mind putting their logo's on the jerseys. Everyone was down with Blitz' final iteration so I would say lets get as close as possible to that.

Is it me or shouldn't the AGD logo be more prominent? BT will I have the option to make the AO logo bigger on the sleeves or will I be stuck with the final draft? I like tots logo and the original. Kinda want to have old/new together.

I don't mind their logos being on there a whole lot either, but I don't want to see that he's given attention to adding his own logo when the whole design looks like something that was made in high school graphic arts.

I don't mind their logos being on there a whole lot either, but I don't want to see that he's given attention to adding his own logo when the whole design looks like something that was made in high school graphic arts.

lol I wouldn't go that far. I'm assuming there are some design restrictions the we are (or at least I am) unaware of. I used to run into that allot when designing for flexo print. I'm staring at it trying to figure out what flattened it so much compared to your design. Two things I noticed; the hex pattern is now horizontal rather than vertical, the paint splashes no longer migrate out onto the hex.

Well what if we take to solid line out of the border and make the hex borders as the borders

Looks this design incorporates the eclipse splash only, not sure if that was deliberate or not. But removing the border doesn't really do anything without the "splat" splash. I should probably just quit yammering my chop. As a graphic artist there are no more difficult clients than other graphic artists. My instinct on this one is to have Travis send the template and design restrictions to Blitz804 (if he's willing) since his design was the one everyone voted for. Then he can plug the deign in and if any changes need to be made after that at least everyone is working from the same source files.

I could do it as well if both parties want to send the files to me, but I can't promise a quick turn time.

lol I wouldn't go that far. I'm assuming there are some design restrictions the we are (or at least I am) unaware of. I used to run into that allot when designing for flexo print. I'm staring at it trying to figure out what flattened it so much compared to your design. Two things I noticed; the hex pattern is now horizontal rather than vertical, the paint splashes no longer migrate out onto the hex.

That's a good point. I shouldn't be so harsh because I really don't know about the constraints.

I just want it to be awesome!

Originally Posted by pgop2.0

Looks this design incorporates the eclipse splash only, not sure if that was deliberate or not. But removing the border doesn't really do anything without the "splat" splash. I should probably just quit yammering my chop. As a graphic artist there are no more difficult clients than other graphic artists. My instinct on this one is to have Travis send the template and design restrictions to Blitz804 (if he's willing) since his design was the one everyone voted for. Then he can plug the deign in and if any changes need to be made after that at least everyone is working from the same source files.

I could do it as well if both parties want to send the files to me, but I can't promise a quick turn time.

I don't know how well I'd be able to do. Plugging pics into a small-scale template for a rough draft is easy, but I'm not too experienced with vector and all of that.

I would be happy to know exactly what his restraints are, though, so that maybe we can give him a better idea of what we'd like to see done.

I love it ...call me happy,his logo is already on the back, replace his logo on the front bottom center with the older AGD crest and I would poop kittens with chainsaws (that means good). BT I am even good with the the bird on the back, you can see it clearly and it's not covered up with the slogan.