OMG! This is absolutely brilliant! Poor Alice, I feel so bad for her. You should totally continue this story, it's amazingly written and the idea is brilliant. I love how you introduce each character, quickly, but well written. Please continue this!

I really enjoyed this story! the concept was really cute, and I especially loved the ending with the AJ meeting. I could definitely see this as a multi-chapter story, and if you're willing to write it, I would read it! I even think that this story from Jasper's POV would be interesting. I hope you consider both of these, because it's a really nice little idea.