eeeh,, this freaked me out a little, and i didnt like the fact that masamune was a mean bastard and they kept calling ritsu a retard, and UR KIDDING RIGHT?! who in the right MIND! would think that ritsus eyes are gross,HE IS THE CUTEST GUY IN THE HOKE WORLD *dies*

Hi Candy! I just read this and its true, shed a few tears I did! I can relate to the whole bullying business and as a victim to bullying once, I can understand the need to take one's own life away. None of that silly talk anymore. I love it! For a one-shot it's filled with the right emotions and the right reactions. Quite OOC but like they say... it's fanfiction! *Applause*

Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2012

That was just...wow. The writing is interesting, but the story was messed up. You successfully tugged at my heart strings and sent me spiraling into a sense of depression. I thought it was nicely done but it definitely didn't make sense to me. But I still must say that you did a good job. Your character's were a little unrealistic and not very true to their original character's, but hey it is a fanfiction. Good job.