OMG! I don't want to sound like a girly-girl (which I am not; I am a girl, true, but I'm not a girly-girl!) but it was so good! I love all your stories and I think you are an amazing author. I hope there's more to come!

This story is really different from the other Marauder Era stories. Most stories have James as the leader from day one, but not this one. I really like this story, and it must be challenging to write a story so different from the other stories. I just have one little complaint: I don't think Sirius would have been able to be the Quidditch Captain when James tried out because he would have only had one year of experience playing on the Gryffindor team before he became Captain. Plus, don't you have to at least be a fourth or fifth year to be considered for the position?

I loved your story. This ending was fabulous it explains why Peter was chosen as the secret keeper, the bonds that Lily and James developed, and I love how you had Daniel in the story! I was so sad when he died! Amazing job!

*says sarcastically*Oh yes... Lily is just going to fall into Daniel's hands if James Potter is taken away. Lily is going to love him once she finds out he was helping out the Lord Voldemort.*stops the sarcastic tone* This is just too obvious, when Lily finds out Daniel's a Death Eater she's going to get mad at him!

i think it's great so far, but i really didn't like the transition between the two chapters. i really really felt bad for daniel, and in the last chapter, she's mourning him, as she rightly should, and in this chapter, she seemed to forget all about him, like they were never even friends. i wanted to know how James finally coaxed her out and comforted her, and i just think it kinda ruined it, that it was like he wasn't even a part of her life, and all she cares about is James.

Hello....This was very emotinol full of suspense hate love and so much more than your usall fan fiction...You have talent and i just think that you could do so well go so far all you have to do is try! And i'm usally bouncy and hypo but i decieded that for my (i call them my long last reviews) Last review i would settle to a more sensible attitude...
This story had so many wonderfull warm moments that made me smile and some that made me fumming with anger and with every wonderfull story comes those moments that this one had were i cryed bitter and sad tears ....i think you could do so well with writing so i say..GO FOR IT TAKE THE CHANCE YOU HAVE!

Omg your fic is aesome I just love to be reminded how things happened in the real storie, Too bad James and Lily dies (I love them so much) because now i an't ask you to make a sequel lots and lots of luv ~*Ellie*~