I really liked some of the details you added to this. Hitsugaya's human name is one of them. It maybe just be a detail, but I like that you put thought into that.

I also really really liked Matsumoto's connection to Hitsugaya. The liberty you took there with their past was great. I like that you gave them some sort of foundation for their current relationship. Again, very thoughtful.

This story was a great look into how Hitsugaya might have rose to his position in the Gotei 13. The fandom needs more of these kinds of stories. Thanks so much for writing one!

o, cool! U dont see fics like these very often. Good job 4 tryin! _ actually, i thought the timin was pretty good, cept that hinamori applied in shinigami school before hitsugaya did, and then she graduated and became 5th division, THEN hitsugaya decided somehow in one way or another to attend shinigami school, even tho he said he didnt want to...yup...but its pretty good! _