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aww damn this chapter had a nice twisted end to it O.O
i'll admit though that i was once again cracking up when i read this
bathing in chocolate sauce would be an awesome thing to do
especially if i was drunk xD
please update soon

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LOL! Yes, the twist came out of nowhere. It wasn't meant to be there. This whole story is now out of my control.

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all I can say is WOW!
it was a very very amazing chapter!!!!
hahaha after reading the chocolate sauce part I actually began thinking what it would be like to bathe in it:)
I am soo in love with this story!
you are amazing!!!
update soon please!

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LOL! Welcome to my life. Every day I wonder what it would be like to bathe in it.

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O: CHOCOLATE SAUCE IS THE SHIIT MAN! Damn awesome. LOL at Mikey. (: I love his ideas. Somehow, I can imagine a yard full of hot dudes, covered in chocolatey goodness... sounds yummy (:

Awesome update and I actually wasn't expecting the ending. Poor Gee... he's torn between two people... who just happened to be making out with each other.

More pleaseeee.
xo,
Ray

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Ha ha, yes it is.

And yes, sounds like a party I want to have. I tried to get my friends around, male friends, but they weren't up for it. Said I needed to join David Duchoghny (or however you spell it) in sex rehab. So long as I can share a room with David, I don't mind...

Even though there was no massive sex orgy, the chapter was still as amazing as I could have ever imagined. It was also more realistic. I've been wondering how they all would have come to an agreement to have a gangbang. And covered in chocolate sauce. Ah, but there is the drugs. But would drugs been enough for them to completly forget everything and fuck each others brains out? Hmmm. You see? You're an absolute genious. You made it much, much more realistic yet highly enjoyable. And yes, I admit, that was meant to be dirty.

That was most DEFINETLY my favourite chapter! And I think you know why! ;D

WOOT WOOT! Keep 'em coming! And also how could I forget, THANK YOU!! THANK YOU SOOOOOO FUCKING MUCH FOR THIS INCREDIBLE CHAPTER!! I LOVE YOU!! I COULD EAT YOU!! I COULD LOOK YOU UP IN THE YELLOW PAGES AND GET A TAXI AND HUNT DOWN YOUR MO' FO' ASS AND AKDASDHEOUFDEGFUGAEIFUE. Ahem. ;D

Oh yeah, and one more thing! Haha, I talk way to much, eh? Sorry i couldn't review sooner but I've been away for the past two weeks AGAIN. But this time I was very much in England. But to make you feel better, your story was the first I checked for updates. Does that make up for it? ;)

Once again, thank you! I'm now officially gonna shut up.

-Emily xox.

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AHHHHH grabs bag breath into this ... Ha ha, yes I'm sorry. But I wanted you to use your imagination you see.

Plus, there was extra pages I had to cut out. Unspeakable things happened. Things you'll never know, but I'm sure your imagination can think up sexier secinarios then I can write, he he.