2 thoughts on “Torn”

Hey first of all I need to tell you that your poems are filled with words that are truly heartwarming. :) And I really felt ‘me’ when I read the first line itself ‘I used to think being alone was the worst thing, but honestly its having someone and still feeling alone’. Believe it or not I have gone through hard days where my life was rollercoaster; I think it would be better if I say my relationship was a roller coaster. Finally the day came when the relationship actually torned out. But for you I sincerely wish you the best of things and I hope the situation changes in coming days. :)

I enjoy this poem very much. It’s something I can relate to. Being in any sort of relationship can be hard when it seems like a loyal and faithful and suddenly it seems not to be. And the hardest thing of all is when that person is with you and you still feel alone, I have to agree. But when it’s an on and off relationship, I have to admit that the relationship become distant and you just basically have to let go and nothing can change that flow. I like it very much. Keep up the good work! :]