this one would definitely be the endingvery deep and it really makes you think"well dang what did this person do??"I really like the 2 partsit's very interesting because of this workmy mind is starting to make a story, just off of this work

your poems are very powerful Frosty, and that fact is absolutely marvelous

A woman or man, overtaken by his or her guiltdecides to exile himself/herself, and refuses to eat, sleep, or other necessary actions.Slowly they wither away in the cold dungeon-like crypt, and soon, their heart slows,and their blood freezes, making their body freeze as well.When they died, their ghost then roams the halls for all eternity, trying to overcome the guilt.