the main thing that i see in this is that the majority of the figure is not feminine shaped. to me it looks like a masculine figure with tits. there's no definition on the waist and the majority of muscles are very big - even for a muscley female.

You need to cover the baby with more dirt. Right now it's a simple line and a slightly darker shade that implies that it is buried underground.

Make dirt piles around the hole and make dirt on it's hand, shoulders, feet and here and there on the underground body. No psychomaniac manages to make a perfect hole that fits perfectly to one certain pose as well as leaving no dirt piles at all.

Worked on the arms a bit before I saw the comments I'll work on sliming her down later

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Sorry if the pic is huge posting from my ipod

shouldn't she have a bit more of a bodacious curve on (our) right side? also her tits look fake as shit, like they have no gravity. the top half of them should be more curved. unless they are fake, in which case yucky.

you're going too fast into the tiny details, leave them and make more gesture sketches without over detailing them
currently you need to work on your anatomy and being busy with one pose for so long is really a slow way to do it

i'm not anatomy expert so correct me if i'm wrong, but something more like this (not like this exactly though i have no expertise)

furthermore, the pose feels very unnatural. she's in a mid-jump pose, and yet so much of her is on a flat angle. her neck particularly is perfectly straight and upright. her arms also feel too straight.

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i thought i close these threads accidentally somehow so i opened them then i realised garry did it my bad closed again