I scanned and did color correction on all the images for the article today. They still need resizing and a little clean up but the tough part is over. I'd like this thread to show progress leading up to the final unveiling for the public of the article Internal Structure of Mortar Head. Nu Soard, how are we doing? Do you need anything from me?

A thought occurred to me. What if we put letters instead of the full text for the call-outs in the images? Each letter would match with a block of text (true text) below or to the side of the image. It would keep image size down. Any thoughts on this?

These are just rough mock ups. The image isn't final. The text isn't final (haven't even gone over it with the translator yet). These are just to illustrate 3 options we have. Remember, the article will have 14 diagram images. I would like to hear feedback but please, don't be too unkind. I have feelings too.

I actually like the 1st one the most, because it is most like the original article in Smoke Walls and Designs 2. The 2cnd one isn't bad either. The 3rd is cool. Utilizing this one, you could make the image larger because you wouldn't need the space for Text because of the pop-up word bubbles.

I like the first one. Lettering keys are fine if you don't have another option, but the first image allows immediacy while reading. It's easy to look left/right/up/down and get the information while immediately gazing back and forth between text and line art. The other version forces you to scroll down, scroll back up, scroll down...etc.

The first option is great because it works just like a page in DESIGNS and the last option is great because it works like a feature one would use at a kiosk at the Mortar Headd Museum of History*. For this option I'd use a more fetching font for the letter labels and expand the text blocks to something more akin to the first option; let the text breathe better.

How about doing both and offering the first as the Printer-friendly version? ;]

*(Or it could be called the Mortar Headd History Museum; abbreviated as MHHM, this allows for a sneaky L-Gaim reference.)

I found out I'll have free time after June 16th. It would be nice to sit down then and look at formatting the translated article. During the 2nd half of June I'll be scanning FSS material and discussing with everyone how to use it. Nu Soard, will you have some time then?

As of right now, I have about 1 day a week I can sit down and devote time to this. Currently I am working night shift and on my days off, I keep my schedule so I'm up and about while everyone else in the house is asleep, so there are at least a few hours on my "weekends" where I can work on stuff unmolested. Let me know what you want profiles for and I'll see what I can bang out

Okay, my take would go something like this: I'd take what you've got there and check it against the Japanese Wiki story rundown, making any necessary adjustments/updates with the help of some handytranslators. Looks like we've got eight major movements so far...I'd isolate each block of details beneath a banner showing a bit of the book cover in which the respective saga takes place. If there's a case in which a cover is used more than once, I'd show a different detail of it; if a movement spans more than one, the banner would reflect this by featuring a detail from each. I might also note when each tale initially premiered in NewType. (The ALL ABOUT MAMORU NAGANO insert from March 1999 would be helpful up to a certain point.) All this and some formatting adjustments to make the text a little nicer-looking,