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Review:

The Empress says:Leslie dear :) I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get around to reviewing. :( Things have been hectic around here. This was a lovely chapter dear! You really know your characters well and it shows in how you write them. So well done you!

One thing, the fourth paragraph, beginning with He did not have to come up with a solution is a bit awkward in wording. I had to read it twice for it to make sense. Well, the first sentence really. It just doesn't quite flow as one, cohesive, thought.

Other than that it's lovely! Great job hun
XOXO
Shiloh

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Shiloh! I really appreciate it and I will definitely take a look at that sentence. Thanks for pointing it out!