Recent comments on this piece

dickdonaYou are too eager to get all your ideas finished. You don't play around with your themes and instruments to make it more interesting. You think linear at the moment but you need to try oblique! Switch the theme to the base occasionaly; Add a higher instrument intermittantly; don't be so obvious with your cadences etc etc. Play around with the themes you've got.....

7 years ago

Corinne777i like it. if you added lerics that changed alot through the song with a choir and the orchistra part it would be even better. love it!

8 years ago

Corinne777i like it. if you added lerics that changed alot through the song with a choir and the orchistra part it would be even better. love it!