hi i think the way he story was written was uniqed never have i read a story like it was don in a play playwritters are rar on fanfic but anyway the plot was a good chocies and explains why luffy as a scare on his face i bet a lot of people are wonder why that as well to sumerzie he whole thing (ahem) IT WAS FANTASIC DIE SNAJI MAKE SANJI DIEE DEATH TOO SANJI ER BEAT HIM UP AGIN AND LANA SHOULD FALL FOR ZOLO YEA ZOLO YEA. but just making a sugestion thank you for reading my comment and have a nices day