As always you wrote it all so logically and plausible, I completely believe all your EPOV's, they're so in character! I really liked this bit, especially that first his doubt is just about whether Bella had wanted the child, whether she was happy with it or not and only then did it turn to concern for Bella when he realized what was really going on :) I like that his reaction first was purely human in a way! Really well done! :) X Thari

As all your EPOV's I love it, and you're right, after this I can agree with Edward a little more, although I'm really glad he changed his mind after the dream for Bella's sake! She finally was able to have sex with him and then he goes and is all grumpy about it, that must suck! :O Looking forward to the rest of the chapters! X Thari

I am a Fan of your Fiction! This reminded me of what frustrated me about the original books and it's precisely what makes your wonderful writing similar in the flow and tone. There is too much fluff -not to worry though 'cause you still ROCK!