Now that was an ending. I was cheering all the way through it. Sheon got her happy ending. I'm happy for her and I'm stoked that you wrote it so well. Thumbs up.

Kadaj declaring his feelings were priceless. So like him. It made me go into 'fangirl' mode. Then I was jumping at the end when he said those wonderful words to his love. It was about time and I was going 'Yes!' with me arms in the air.

I'm sad that this story had to end. It was worth the ride, don't get me wrong but did it have to end so soon? Great things have to end some time I guess. This means you have more time to something like this story or even better right? Can't wait to see that. Good job and I look forward to seeing more great and epic stories from you.

I couldn't help but utter, 'Holy CRAP!' while I read this. Seriously, what's up with the blond bitch? And Sephiroth? O_o Sorry for the colorful metaphors here but you caught me by surprise even if I kinda knew what was going to happen. Sorry, but I hope some body beats the crap out of Elena! She needs to get over herself!

You've done a good job when you got an emotional response from me. Seriously, what was Elena thinking? And is Sheon going to be okay? What is Kadaj going to do? Is Sephiroth going to come back and finish the job? I hate cliffhangers! *cries out in frustration.*

I hope you come up with something to put Elena in her place because what she did was so wrong and unforgivable! Gah!

I like it and me really want some closer here. I need to know if things go well after all the stuff that happened.

Lol. The interaction between Kadaj and Sheeon is something else. They act like a couple and Sheeon's feelings about the man she cares about is very relatable. It's good to know that you kept things realisticly here. It's very enjoyable because of it.

Your attention to detail has got my attention and you made a fan out of me. keep up the good work.

I see a litte forshadowing toward the end of the chapter here and I'm very curious how that would turn out here. Please don't keep me waiting for to long.