This series is interesting. I wasn't sure if I would like it at first but it is good and entertaining. I prefer Your a Midnight Guardian story but they are both excellent. I have not read any other stories like yours.

I'm surprised Hermione left when Neville asked her. She's generally a favorite character. However, she believes that if a piece of information exists anywhere in this world - even if it is absolutely none of her business - she is entitled to know it.

I thought maybe the Potters would fill in their kids, but if guess they can't without totally blowing Orion's life apart. Still, it sounds like Hayden carries a heavy load of guilt that probably isn't his fault.

That makes me wonder ... Did Hayden give Harry the potion, thinking it was medicine or something?

After what a Bella has done, I don't even know why she is alive. If ever anyone deserved The Veil, she does ... first the Kiss, then The Veil. The woman is an assassin, for Pete's sake, and now she is a kidnapper. No mercy, I say. Bella is not going to suddenly change sides. She is Voldy's for the long haul.

Surely Remus realizes that if James starts talking about the animagus studies, the REASON behind them may be revealed. Does he really want James giving Hayden and Rose that information instead of doing it himself?

If Draco starts taunting Orion or Hayden again, they need to use this neat little spell: "Cosigno Os!" (seal mouth) It would certainly put a stop to his trash talking.

Sometimes Hermione seriously annoys me. A fourteen-year-old (yes, she's 14) Muggle-born with three years in the Wizarding world simply can't understand the corruption in Ministry politics, even though she thinks she knows everything. I would have thought she'd have learned from some of the things Orion explained about the corruption in their first and second years.

Orion: "... Hayden and I were the last to actually see Voldemort in some sort of form." Actually, Sirius and Orion were the most recent to see a form of him, when they slew the Basilisk down in the Chamber of Secrets.

Slytherin should have been made to either play with the reserve seeker or forfeit the match. That's what would have been demanded of Gryffindor.

Okay, the voices Orion heard make me think I was correct ... that something happened to Harry while he was in Sirius's care, and THAT is what caused the breach between the families.

Eek! It was Bella this time? I wonder how she managed to get in. Has she an animagus form no one knows? Let's see ... Black widow spider? Poisonous black mamba snake? Large predatory cat? Whatever it is, if she has a form, it's sure to be terrifying. Then again, something that LOOKS harmless - like a little kitten - could be worse, as no one would suspect it.