It started out really good. But then it just got so mumbo-jumbo. It looked really disorganized to me and it was hard to follow. I also think that your purpose of the poem changed halfway through. At the beginning you were talking about "is it worth it". To me, this is a question to the reader... you are getting ready to explain a situation or a feeling and the reader will decide whether or not it is worth it. But when you said this:

Back to where I was Where We were You were Were you? Where I was? When we wereÖ Us?

I got really lost. I had no clue what you were trying to say anymore. I believe you switch tones into a "this is the way it is, whether you like it or not" type of voice. In love, that does happen alot, I agree, but I don't think that is what you wanted to convey in your poem. I could be wrong. The idea behind it is terrific. I applaude you very much for a noble attempt. And I still think you had a wonderful beginning, but you just lost focus. Keep up your work.

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Though none go with me,
Still I shall follow.
No turning back;
No turning back.

This lot in life
These roads we walk
The choices we make
Do we create
Or is it made
Tailor made
To just
Annoy
Disappoint?

Can someone explain?
Can someone clarify?
If you will
How it seems
To always seem
To go this wayI liked this part alot for some reason, half way through this piece I kinda got lost a bit, I'm not a fan of to much poetry with the obvious "directed at" theme, I think that if you revisted this piece and did a little cutting and tightening, it could be very nice.

I didn't like this. It seemed too long ands too repetive. You could have a great message here but it's lost in trying to hard to be poetic and interesting and you missed the poetry. where's the word play the imagery the emption wheres the part that smacks me in the face and make me want to call the person I'm i love with?

I think it need refining, you need to take its essence and re work this, with the age old tricks of poetry. The line breaks were just there not used to great effect. I'm just not feeling it sorry.