Comments for 'Broken Promise'

Alpha Lance
9:00 pm | November 8, 2003
Thanks. And I put brake instead off break. I got the two mix up. I also surprise that Walker didn't nothice it.

Jinkaiden-XI
1:56 pm | November 8, 2003
Alpha Lance, bravo! I agree with you; it is your best yet, although you used the wrong 'break' in one of the lines, but no big deal. I caught your drift. Excellent work, man.

Growup
9:00 am | November 8, 2003
Sounds powerful and effective, good in that sense.

Alpha Lance
4:14 am | November 8, 2003
Thank you. And just so everyone knows, I will write the last chapters and submit them all at once. And I want them to be big and great chapter. So it will be a while.

Walker
2:35 am | November 8, 2003
It's all been said. I loved it.

Semper Fi

-Walker

Alpha Lance
1:23 am | November 8, 2003
Well, I said, this is the best one from me. I think this is the best one, FROM ME. Thank you all.

Alpha Lance
1:23 am | November 8, 2003
Oh yeah I forgot. The HBO code doesn't work on the comment column. It only work on the news and stories.

crashedwarthog
1:02 am | November 8, 2003
Now this was good, but i think you should let the [b]people[/b] decide whether it is your best yet. I also think you can be up yourself in that way, just be careful when u say things. 9/10

Mainevent
9:26 pm | November 7, 2003
Really fucking good. You were right, this was your best ever. Keep this grade of material up.