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My only problem with this poem is that you say it lasts forever when it doesn't... Which is why we must cherich these beautiful moments. Lovely poem though. I don't think it's possible to read it without being suddenly flooded with warmth and happiness. Nicely done. :)

Thanks for the comment, but I don't mean the scene itself lasting forever, I'm talking about nature itself and how its beautyl has and always will be there. I just thought I'd share what I meant in the poem, thank you for you comment. I love feedback (: