I was so grateful to have my old blue rose back. I missed it so much! There was just one thing that was bothering me. I walked over to Marzia who was cuddling Pewds.'Marzia! We should go look for a tree for Christmas!' I said this with a look that said 'I NEED TO TALK TO YOU RIGHT NOW!' she understood and said goodbye to Pewdie.Once we were outside she stopped me.'That's not what you wanted me for is it?' come on! Tell me!''okay then. I was just wondering about Pewdie's yellow rose. It looks a lot like Mary's, doesn't it?' she turned away to the woods.'we should start looking for a tree y'know!-''LOOK AT ME MARZIA! WHY? WHY WOUD YOU DO THAT TO HIM?''BECAUSE I HAD NO CHOICE!''I was stunned for a second then realised what she was talking about .'Y-you mean he's back?''Yes.'

Pewdie's POV~

It was Christmas eve and me and Maria went out hunting for the banquet. We went about six meters into the forest before we lost all seriousness at the pond. It was Christmas after all! We stopped at the frozen ice and slid on it for about 10 minutes before the ice cracked. We lay down by the edge of the pond before I turned to her. She giggled and sneaked of into the forest. I followed. I found myself in a clearing and the sun beat down on me, the grass was dry and it felt like summer here. I saw her behind a tree humming a melody. She looked like a little elf. Her hood was up and it pointed, her straight raven hair coming out from under it and her delicate hand plucked up a few fox gloves and lavender stalks.'What'cha doin' red riding hood?' I laughed as she scowled at me.'well I have a lamb a pheasant and a hare...''really?''No not really dumbass!' she poked her tongue out at me. ' I have a pig a rabbit and a pigeon!''Meh, close enough right?' we chuckled. Her laugh sounded nice. Like the tinkling of bells. Maybe I should start calling her Tinkerbell! ' So what about the song you were humming hmm?''Yea, what about it?''Sing for me!' I rested my head on her lap as she made a wreath out of the flowers and grasses around me.' Marzia won't like this you know!''Heh, she doesn't like a lot of things! Besides, she's out with Piggeh finding a tree and screaming orders!' why was I talking about her like this? I love her so much! I could feel Maria's legs tense and flinch a bit.'Fine...' She said after a few moments.' But just this once!' she started to hum the tune and hope that I would be sleepy enough to think she was actually singing.'wow! I didn't know you had such a soft singing voice after all that yelling in the mansion!' ' f-fine. The song goes like this:

Hush! And shush! For they might be listening!Among the moss and green!Among the foxglove and lavender stalks.Never to be seen!Do you believe in magic?Do you believe in their folk?Do you know that the sun sets here? Among the daisy and oak?Mothers, children pets and more.Gather in the town.But here, in the forest.Smaller than small, they gather in the crown.The crown of grass, which we have made.They'll thank us with their kindAnd hear among the peace and glade,The path of evil unwinds.'Her sounded voice was so soft and gentle. She sounded like an angel. While in my half asleep state, she got up abruptly (causing me to land uncomfortably on the ground) and said in her usual loud voice 'That's enough sweetness for today! It's making me sick!' i groaned as I struggled to get up.'You pick those mushrooms and I'll go ahead!' I obediently picked the mushrooms as i tried to get my brain to function properly. After five minutes she returned empty handed but with a horrified look on her face.'Pewdie....You might want to see this.'

hey guys! I honestly think that this is too crap to finish this fic :d . but if you want to finish it be my guest! I'm gonna start a new fan fic called PewDiePie~ The war has just begun so keep an eye out for it! as usuall i will do what my bro's want me to do so if i get enough complaines i will finish it! but please don't !

heh, i might continue but i think the fic so far is a piece of crap :d soi don't think ill continue. If you wan't you can do it? I don't mind. But like i said... if enough people come to my door with pitchforks and torcher=s i might just continue it enough to show someone and someone doing something to do something to someone who wants to do something to Maria whos doing something to Marks

It would make more sense if you corrected the grammar and spelling, so we would actually know what was going on. Transition words between paragraphs would also work, and so would adding in a few more details. Trust me, it would make worlds of differences.