cant remember the night but remember the faces

Below is the poem entitled cant remember the night but remember the faces which was written by poet
Jessica
Carr. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

cant remember the night but remember the faces

it was cold and dark
but inside it was warm and wild
smoke filled my vision and made my decision
that tiny white pill i fear
but need to know how it feels
i buried the snow and swallowed my pride
colors explode
wow im not alone
too high to for get my worries
too gone to remember any
will you be my last time
for i know ill never quit that sweet smelling smoke
but for you little pill will i want you as bad ?
hours feel like minutes
time is dissolving on me
the sun breaks and my eyes blur
where am i ?
who am i?
more important am i still me ?

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The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Jessica. Love, Carol