Another perfect story! Seriously, you're one of the best SPN writers I've read! I loved the whole idea of this story, it was so gripping I couln't stop reading. You really scared me with suggesting that Dean might have become paralysed! You are great at balancing the mystery, the hurt/comfort scenes and humour. I completely lost it at "You turned it into a harmless kitten high in illegal drugs (...) That's not awesome. That's animal abuse". I was giggling like crazy! :D

So enjoyable! It's obvious how much thought you put into the details of this, of the hazmat stuff and how Sam would rescue him and of the lumbar puncture's dangers. It elevated what could have otherwise been a typical h/c story. I especially love that, yes, Sam's concussion wouldn't make him the best driver, and Dean's fantastic ability to invent a plausible story on the spot to explain the plausible, not to mention his concern for the girl who'd saved them.

Dean was very heroic in making the poor girl that tried to help them feel normal again. Dean is so macho you know it has to be hard to let the girl think he and Sam are irresponsible drug users but he did seem to relieve her fears.