He's all big and stroppy in it... :p :D (at the moment he's pummelling umberhulks into a pulp... ahhh, the joy of writing violence!)

Hazel

24-09-07, 20:11

Hi,:D

Iíve only managed to read a section of the first chapter, but nonetheless I adored the opening paragraph! :jmp::D

It was sooÖdetailed and I liked the way youíve included small body movements to convey a sense of Jenís character. Iím not familiar with Neverwinter Nights, so I know nothing of the plotline, but I did really get a feel for what kind of person Jen is.

I;d love to read more when i get the chance!;)

Kamrusepas

24-09-07, 20:13

(at the moment he's pummelling umberhulks into a pulp... (...))

I have no idea what that means but it sounds dirty :vlol:

Elysia

24-09-07, 20:14

Hi,:D

I’ve only managed to read a section of the first chapter, but nonetheless I adored the opening paragraph! :jmp::D

It was soo…detailed and I liked the way you’ve included small body movements to convey a sense of Jen’s character. I’m not familiar with Neverwinter Nights, so I know nothing of the plotline, but I did really get a feel for what kind of person Jen is.

I;d love to read more when i get the chance!;)

:hug: Thanks!

I hope you don't get too bogged down with the world that Jen inhabits (it's canon D&D, but if you aren't familiar with it, it can be confusing) - there are certain assumptions I've made (like 'everyone knows drow are on the whole evil' - things like that), and so any questions, just ask :)

I have no idea what that means but it sounds dirty :vlol:
... I forgot to add 'with his mighty weapon', too!