- Give Me The Eternity -

Below is the poem entitled - Give Me The Eternity - which was written by poet
Anne Lise
Andresen. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

- Give Me The Eternity -

The longing for a deep red ruby
creeps like an ivy in my heart
Love me today - love me tomorrow
Sparks sensors from a sensitive heart
Give me the eternity
Like a lost child you take my hand
Heart demons in angels inner circle
brought me into beautiful golden moonlight
Take me with you ... in perfection ... the divinity
Hot bodies close together
The silence encourager ... weak breath
A deep red ruby is perfect - a beauty
The eternity - how long is that
07.12.2013
A-L Andresen :)

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Hi Anne-Lise, another gentle slice of Love from your pen. Love, the eternal dream, told in beautiful words from a beautiful heart, who could ask for more. A canvass painted with Love's colours. After this write eternity is yours my friend. Softly, the words you write float on air and seep oh so siftly into the heart. What beautiful images appear in the mind. An excellent write. I enjoyed the read. Enjoy your Sunday. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

It seems with this one, eternity is something or someone near yet so far. It's like a dream, yet certainly a possibility anytime or beyond mortality. May you find it my friend, and cherish it. Love, Wendy

A lovely poem depicting the heart of a lovely Anne Lise. Continue to shower your readers with love. Love is a very powerful too that can reach beyond the imaginary line and bring peace to the heart mind body and soul. Nice love verse.

A very beautiful and romantic poem well crafted by your very creative words my dear friend Anne Lise. I'm so glad & my honor to read again tonight one of your stellar writes. Thank you so much! Have a grace-filled weekend to you and your love ones! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora