Below is my official first full custom sprite sheet, "Gryll (Kirby's Star Stacker-Style)". Gryll has only appeared in the Japan-only Super Famicom game, "Kirby's Super Star Stacker", a remake of Kirby's Star Stacker for the Game Boy, with extra modes. Gryll is the extra boss of the story mode, and can be fought if no continues are used during the past rounds. This is Gryll as he/she would appear in the Round Clear mode, replacing Dedede in an unlockable "Insane" difficulty level, (and no, Gryll's gender has never been identified.)

(Kirby's Star Stacker is one of the 3 Game Boy Kirby games with custom colors/borders on the Super Game Boy SNES attachment, or the Game Boy Player predecessor.)

I have already submitted this to the Kirby Custom / Edited section of The Spriters Resource; I am currently awaiting feedback. Any feedback here would be welcome!

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In short: Oswald the Lucky Rabbit was a cartoon character created by Walt Disney that was lost by him and taken by Walter Lantz through copyright law, leaving Disney to vow never to work for anyone ever again. I've been drawing him a lot lately, and this may be my best one! (Though I'm not entirely satisfied with him.) Feedback is appreciated!

« Last Edit: June 09, 2017, 07:49:34 PM by LeviR.star »

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If you're going to color in straight strokes as opposed to cross hatching or scumbling (coloring in circles), you should be consistent with the direction or at the very least connect it better since it's clear that the pant legs are slightly darker. I also noticed that his left ear and arm look smaller or otherwise thinner than the right counterparts, but idk if one is (or both are) drawn that way intentionally. If you're going to draw something folded, try to imagine what it would look like unfolded, and judge whether the sizes match up

If you're going to color in straight strokes as opposed to cross hatching or scumbling (coloring in circles), you should be consistent with the direction or at the very least connect it better since it's clear that the pant legs are slightly darker. I also noticed that his left ear and arm look smaller or otherwise thinner than the right counterparts, but idk if one is (or both are) drawn that way intentionally. If you're going to draw something folded, try to imagine what it would look like unfolded, and judge whether the sizes match up

Nonetheless, good job with it!

Thanks, Zeila! I'll keep this in mind!

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