2 comments:

Oh! Yum yum yum! This is SO beautiful. With its own terrible resonance - of idea not sound.

You take me to a place I haven't been before. Sometimes in our poems we are saying what has been said many times before – how could it be otherwise? – and only hope to say it well enough to make it new for the reader or listener. This poem actually SAYS something new.

May I have your permission to use your work sometimes in poetry readings, and/or share it with my writing students, some of whom don't have computers.