Rose Persian, I see in my dreamsDwells in Italy, in that far placeSo nice, so cute and always beams..With beauty, hope, and moony faceI spent my life search and seekI've just found and followed the traceI won't stop even if I feel weakOh rose! You're my life, my last wishYou're my heaven, my high ideal peakDon't leave me, it'll be my finish****************************** 1I love you , can't you get this fact?"You waste our time" many times, I saidYou always blame for my past actAnd mourn our love as mourn the deadOur love-days pass like dust in windYou’re my roe, in my heart you bedI loved you, pleased you, but you dinned.. "you don't love me, you love many"You accused me, wronged me, you sinnedI'm yours and you're mine.. oh honey****************************** 2Take me with you, you took my heartIt beat inside me with your nameNow it's with you, we are apartBut you still lament and still blameYou can please me, you are so smartI don’t deserve you, its a shameYou're truthful, so cute and so brightBut I'm liar, unclear with my dameYou're my eyes, hands, sweet dreams in nightBlame me if this will give me fame****************************** 3All I have said is for your sakeAnd your name's written by my bloodTrust me ! my poem is not a fake Words flow from my chest like a floodI saw your face, I became madYou're still so fresh like a bloom budSo don’t leave me, don’t make me sadYour love erased all the past deedsI know you are good and I'm badBut you always grant my needs****************************** 4

woooooow new poem in short time ,you are so g enerous for us (readers) thanx for that freind

now let's come to ur poem as usual it's about theme of love of course with new symbol which is rose this time .By the way i do not agree with ur choice of this symbol (rose) because roses are so soft so weak live only for too short time then wilt . i agree that roses enjoy us since birth to die of it with view ..smell and touch but LOVE should be more srtong than rose it should be like (diamond)bright ..soft ..strong and last forever

so when u like ur lover with a rose for me ur telling her: i love u but by the end u'll vanish how long i look for you ..how long i wait for you but at last u'll vanish and go and u support that idea with

You're my heaven, my high ideal peak

wht means of ur ideal peak if this peak is going to disappear this means that you spend your life searching for nothing..........................

no grammatical mistakes of course ..strong touchable words ...maybe i become so hostile forgive me for that

shakespear wrote:All I have said is for your sakeAnd your name's written by my bloodTrust me ! my poem is not a fake Words flow from my chest like a floodI saw your face, I became madYou're still so fresh like a bloom budSo don’t leave me, don’t make me sadYour love erased all the past deedsI know you are good and I'm badBut you always grant my needs

Hello Shakes, what a nice poem :) ....well in this poem you compare a woman with a flower/rose, especially when you talk about youth; although she may not be young, she can reflect youth, i think that's why you said "You're still so fresh like a bloom bud"Wonderful Poem cu!!!

hello sweetsyou said that the rose or flower have short life and even is this happened but its symbol stays in our mind so if it vanish it'll be kept in our mind as beautiful...as nice perfume, scent....read this line

shakespear wrote:You're still so fresh like a bloom bud

i think u got the aim nowany way u made lovely analyses to my poem and i really thankful to u lovely comment...u r able to make lovely assays by analyses different topics

hello elisa

Elisa wrote:Waw! You are a true Don Giovanni

listen all persons in the world can be our personalities in our poems...they r symbols like flowers and roses and places and historical figures...so we can make use of all we can meet or read or see in our life..

hello lara

Lara wrote:she can reflect youth, i think that's why you said "You're still so fresh like a bloom bud"

i think u hit the target by ur comment and guess what i meant koz always flowers and roses reflect youth and beauty so u could hit the target and guess the intention behind the the lines...thnx for ur comments and i have lots of speech i wana say but i hate to talk lots ...i hope i can make another comments laterthnx again have nice moments

Shak, you are really funny!!!Anyway I think this is one of your best poems.I like it so much and I wish to write one but I am not as inspired as you are.I hope you will soon read my "opera". For the moment I can only send to you a strong hug ;)