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LilyGreenEyes says:Firstly, thankyou so much for coming to my review thread! I LOVE this!

You have used some beautiful descriptive scenes and imagery throughout the story to great effect, the reader actually feels that they are there with Dominique as she experiences those last minute nerves.

The emotions portrayed are absolutely stunning, you seem to have really got them spot on and although I'm not expert on next gen or Dominique in fact, I really do think that it is just spot on, the perfect balance so congratulations for portraying a difficult set of emotions so well :)

The story has such an elegant simplicity to it; you don't waste words but neither do you hold back with them, if that makes any sense? Again, you have mastered the balance perfectly with an elegance I rarely see in fanfic.

But the ending, so sad, so shocking! But yet it fits the story perfectly. I am intrigued by the massive question everyone will be asking. whodnunnit? This is a story I would love to see continued and I will certainly be favouriting both you and the story as I would adore to read more of your writing!

Keep up the good work, you have a lot of talent and will certainly go far!

LGE

Author's Response: WOW that was fast!

Aw, thank you so much! My jaw dropped reading this :)

When I was writing this, it was originally going to be a light-hearted humor fic. That obviously failed :P It wrote itself, really.

My beta said much the same, about wanting to know who killed her. I can't decide if I should leave it up in the air or not...hmm...knowing me, I'll end up turning this into novel length mystery. Ahaha.