How exciting it is to see your story in this format. I'm not sure I can explain why, but I'm really thrilled for you. I hope you're getting the love you deserve from the fandom.

My favorite phrase in the whole story is "...this big man who showed his weakness without any fear." It shows us so much about both Bella and Jacob, as well as establishing the relationship that eventually develops. This is certainly a 'lovely', understated story that shows that instant attraction is sometimes for that a passing attraction.