Michelle

Colors blend with one another as they swirl around me. First, there is a mix of red and blue. Then, purple. Then there is a flash of yellow, which dimmed to a burned orange.
I am flying, soaring, up and up. The ground below me is growing farther and farther away. But I am not afraid.
I am free.

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I only read the first four chapters, but I feel like this story has a lot of potential, and I liked it so far. Although as PJD17 said, it could use a bit more description, just so the reader can really visualize everything clearly. Otherwise, keep up the good work (:

i have read the first eight chapters so far, and i will try to read more if i get the chance, but let me tell you what i think so far the storty starts off well the first couple of lines really draw the reader in the prologue is interesting and certainly made me want to continue reading, but i did have a little bit of a problem with how it was written i thought that the prologue came off as a little choppy im afraid i cant really come up with a specific exampl... (more »)

Wow, this is amazing! I normally don’t like stories like this, but I just had to keep reading, I was so excited to figure out more about the characters. The emotion was so strong in some places that I felt like I was about to cry, especially in the Prologue when Hope kills her brother, and Chapter 12 when Michelle visits her parents and Sam. The plot is really good too; it kept me guessing- I was sure that Luke was the murderer for a while, and then Chapter 17 made me ... (more »)