THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!! AWESOME I LOVED IT!!! are you going to write more about this story i really want to know you are a tallented writter you can't leave the story like that!!!!!!!!! i won't let you! please put in an exra chapter i want to know if they end up together in the end!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story. Sad, though. Any thoughts of continuing it? Like, in the future, when he see's her again? I would love to see that. Good work!

Author's Response: Yes, I have been thinking of continuing the story (maybe an epilogue, or a sequel). And I've decided to write it out and see if the story's good enough to be posted here. So you choose if you want to wait for it or not. =) Thanks for reading!

You could have actually wrote something here! Not really any interaction beween the characters all I read was a bunch of crying and yelling by Hermione Maybe the next book you write I might enjoy it! Though I did think it was okay it was a sad story.

Author's Response: I have to be honest, that hurt a bit, but that will help me be a better writer. At least, I'm not wishing you a horrible day, like I would have in other circumstances, right? Just kidding, of course I won't. I appreciate the review all the same. =D

That's so sad! I kind of wish this wasn't a one-shot, so we could know more details about why he was hurt and if they ever get together after everything is safe. At the same time though, this is emotionally powerful, and it might lose some of that if the details were less ambiguous. Great job! *wonders away to fix broken heart*

Author's Response: Well, I was deciding if I should make it chaptered, but the plot was best short. And since you asked, I'm telling you the reason Draco couldn't come (but it's just in my head): Lord Voldeeemort was alerted of their secret meetings, and he planned to use Hermione and Draco as a way to get to Harry. But Draco (knowing that Hermione really cared for Harry--as a brother) refused--and he got hurt. He escaped part of the punishment somehow but decided to put an end to the relationship. And tada!!! We get to the story. Really happy you liked it!