You’re a writer who’s been going at it for a bit now. You really enjoy what you do and put your blood, sweat, and tears into each story. One day, you decide to post it in a random thread to get some feedback.

Just one problem: no takers.You wonder if you should even bother writing; you decide to quit and move on to something else.

If that story applies to you, then hold your horses. If all you wanted was feedback, to improve your writing skills a bit, or maybe just see how others do it, then you’ve come to the right place....Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.

It's about fucking time. I've had a question for a while. Is it possible to make a suicide feel "appropriate" in a story? As in that it doesn't feel edgy, or come across as a cheap way to raise the stakes or grab at the reader's heart? I've had an idea for a character piece (I don't know what you'd call it), and as I let the characters play out their roles in my head, one of them ends up committing suicide.

>What is this thread about?Half human and half pony/other Equestrian species offspring.>What are the rules?There are no thread specific rules, do what you want. But it wont always be met positively.>What is the continuity (world/characters/attributes)?Whatever you want it to be. Sometimes Everything is a variable, there are no absolutes. Sometimes. Characters, names,...Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.

>Ponyville seems to be a hotbed of excitement these days. Between the dragons roosting in the mountains, horrid monsters wandering out from the Everfree Forest, ancient ruins discovered deep in the earth, and the ever-presenting of all-out war between the Equestrians and the Gryphons, it seems like everypony looking for fame or fortune is flocking to this town.>It is an age of knights, adventurers, dark magics, and destined heroes.>You are none of these things.>Your...Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.

>She first gestures for Azura to step forward.>"Azura Ice, I see great potential in you for the arcane arts. You need only to stop looking to yourself so much and instead look to your friends. However, I do believe one of Starswirl's old arcane tomes would help you along in your studies.">Azura's eyes brighten at the mentioning of a tome, and it takes her considerable willpower to keep from squealing...Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.

>Next up was Sweet Heart.>"Private Heart, I know as a Royal Guard you acted out your sense of duty and loyalty to the crown, and that you would never ask for a reward for doing your sworn duties. Nonetheless, you shall be put forth for a commendation and promotion in recognition for your valour and initiative.">"Thank you, Your Majesty," Sweet Heart replies with a long bow.>Next...Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.

>Stepping forward next is White Wine, who seems to be the most at ease in such a formal setting.>"Ms. Wine, I know you'd want me to do something about your father, but I can't solve all your family problems for you," Celestia states, "but what I can do is expand our pre-existing contracts with your winery. Having your product served at future galas and public events will do wonders for your business... and I'm sure you'll...Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.

Finally got far enough where I felt like I could start posting.--->The year is 2552>Humanity is at war with an alien alliance known as "The Covenant"

>We are losing

>The Covenant have burned our worlds, killing billions in their genocidal campaign>Now they have breached the inner colonies, their leaders hunting for our homeworld with their own fleets>One such group...Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.

>>27661230>Everyone but you, still sleeping and oblivious, grabs their helmets and heads for the rack of assorted weapons>Rarity moves to Pie's side and tells her, "Is she wearing /any/ armor?">Pinkie causally responds, "Hey, spooks get their privileges.">The Lance Corporal notices AJ grabbing a suppressed smg>"Pft, seriously?"Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.

>>27661245>The pods then are spun around, the bottom of the Naval ship opening up to the dazzling red of a sunset>The two screens on either side of the hatch light up, showing Blitz and Twilight>Twilight calls over your squad comms>"Latest intel reports Covenant troops are pushing towards the ONI Alpha Site.">"And you're telling us this why?"Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.

Equestria's preparations for the season of sun run into the beginning, for a bit; better to stagger things a bit so that some ponies are still responsible. Still, it can seem a little off when a special day kicks off an otherwise normal week, but that's just more time to figure...Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.

Once the big ceremony's done, it's time for just plain summer fun in Equestria. Amidst all the usual work, of course; Canterlot doesn't shut down just because the princesses hosted a holiday. The vacation mood is strong, though, even at the beginning of the week. Ponies...Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.

ITT: reading, writing, recommending, I jaywalked and got six months in Tartarus, touching yourself to high quality prose, retreading the same old discussion with hightened autism, canon discussion, multiple genitalia, pretty pony names, beating superior officers, my interpretation differs from yours and therefore you're wrong, Rarity is the mightiest unicorn of them all, credits sequences in the middle of your story, Equestria's size, unironically being ironic, the weapons debate eventually veered off into armour, powerlevels, semantics, and Shinkazura finds a way...Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.

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