I really liked this one, also. I had to read it a few times to get a grasp of it because it's very well written and I'm really tired.. Ha, anyway, I liked how you put this man in a state of wanting more in his life then he actually has. He has all this money yet he is still unhappy? I'm sorry if I'm completely wrong here but that's how I took it. I liked how you put the lines in different wording then the previous line. It's flows so nicely! :D Ugh, KAYLA. YOU HAVE GROWN SO MUCH. YOU MAKE A COUSIN INLAW PROUD.