Definitely a great story. A few grammatical errors here and there, but still great. By the way, since it was written a few times, I must say this: There is a difference between "were" and "we're (We are)". For example:

"After work, we're (We are) going on a romantic dinner together, and then I'm going to spend the rest of the night spoiling my little puppy, I promise." Kaiba whispered into Joe's ear, feeling guilty that he had to go to work on their special day.

Jou impatiently looks at the clock, knowing that Kaiba will be home any minute. He styled his hair perfectly, and wore a very sexy outfit that hugged every curve of his lean, toned body. After 30 minutes passed, he figured Seto was probably running a little late. After an hour, his phone rang and he knew that Seto wouldn't keep his promise after all. He felt foolish to get his hopes up. They [were] supposed to have dinner together but once again, Seto apologized for cancelling their special evening. Work always came first, even on the day they [were] supposed to be celebrating their 2nd year anniversary.

Guest chapter 9 . 11/15/2016

Not even done reading chapter 9, but I have to say THANK YOU, it has been very interesting thus far, and it's hard to find interesting, well written stories on fanfiction because, well, it's fanfiction. It gets frustrating at times. I'm glad I get to actually enjoy reading this story. Great job. :)

Okay this is the point where I stop reading. While technically (like grammar and flow) you're a good writer, this story is just crap as far as story line goes. Neither of them like each other to begin with, and in two dates they're fucking and then they break up and then Seto wants him but still wants to dump him and now mere hours after dumping Jou for the second time Seto runs out to get him again? This is all way impossible and out of character. Great starting concept but bad execution plot wise.

Okay, so I read most of these fanfic's in the middle of the night when obviously loud, and "questionable" noises can't be made...I do hope you know your talent in humor! You have no idea how hard it was to supress my laughter! This story is absolutely exquisite!
Keep Writing! (Perhaps become an award winning author!)
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