Who are the characters on top? I kow Luke, Claes, Carol, Terra and G. D. Wallez...but who're the rest?

My friends and family.

The hardest thing is to portray adults vs kids. I haven't quite figured out how to do this yet. I'm very strict because I like portraying teens too (something anime/manga seem to have difficulties in).

Whoa! Great details, especially on the gun. You might wanna make it a bit lighter or no one will notice.

It might seem dumb, but its the truth. I know because it's happened to me before. I made a P90 once, spent about an hour on it, but nobody noticed the details simply because the gun was too dark.

Yeah, I see this now. The bright background was supposed to help. Bleh.

Actually, that G36 would've taken me 15-20 minutes if I had just looked online for real models. My ME art is geared towards making real items cartooned, not the other way around. I think that's why I had so much difficulty in trying to make something that I thought would be easy into something so difficult.

Anyway, I kept having this image in my mind: "Whatface: It's ok. You can post it." Those words were repeating to me every time I thought, "Ah, its an ok job and looks good enough." Then the words haunted me. So I said, "NO! This will be totally awesome!!!"

Whatface never said that, but I could imagine him saying that every 10 minutes. It drove me to work harder and longer.

Funny. When I started, I started with her face, which turned into a 5 hour project! (Yes, I know how simple it looks, but you will not believe how great the difference 6 pixels will do!). I kept saying, "Where's Muffin? Where's Muffin? *GASP!* Wait, wait... *adjusts* Muffin? *looks back*, no, that's not Muffin."

When I stuck the bag of chips under her arm, I looked back and screamed, "MUFFIN!!!!" Squealed like a gaywad, waving my fists in delight at the cutness of Muffin I had tried to keep in accordance with Whatface's art.

Last night I saw a picture of the female Kyon (aka Kyonko, I think) and thought, "You know, that would be kinda fitting for Vinita."

And so, 2 hours later....

Vinita, my OC Gunslinger Girl character, the 4th Generation. She is very brilliant, (as she was a savant before coming back to the Agency). She likes playing different kinds of games, but can't help but beat people. She loves teaching and working on projects (she's with a motherboard and some blueprints in this pic). This nature makes it difficult for her to make friends. She is nicknamed "Little Miss Perfect".

In her room, she asked for an advanced chemistry set, and created a truth serum. Almost every night she struggles to inject herself to help her past memories, and leaving it alone for fear of a horrifying discovery.

Vinita is a non-combatant cyborg, who is part of the advisory and office staff. Occasionally, she works as the facilities handyman.

Almost every night she struggles to inject herself to help her past memories

I like this habit. What will happen if Claes or someone in canon do like this?

Can I called her a geek?

Oh, if anyone is a geek, its Vinita. She beat Claes at chess. Tries to play Muffin and Fredrick at online computer games, loses. Comes back a month later, having overclocked and modified her computer, took up dog fighting (airplane fighting) tactics, and read 3 books on playing first-person-shooters, and beat them at Battlefield 2.

Oh, if anyone is a geek, its Vinita. She beat Claes at chess. Tries to play Muffin and Fredrick at online computer games, loses. Comes back a month later, having overclocked and modified her computer, took up dog fighting (airplane fighting) tactics, and read 3 books on playing first-person-shooters, and beat them at Battlefield 2.

Oh, if anyone is a geek, its Vinita. She beat Claes at chess. Tries to play Muffin and Fredrick at online computer games, loses. Comes back a month later, having overclocked and modified her computer, took up dog fighting (airplane fighting) tactics, and read 3 books on playing first-person-shooters, and beat them at Battlefield 2.

Some of you who know about my MEs may be wondering what in the world has been my avatar.

Well, somebody informed me that I need to work on my casual writing and character development, since all the fan fiction I've been writing has been hurting it. So, I decided to start on a series about a group of Elementary girls called Sweet.

Want to know the basics? Its very complicated so try to keep up...

Chocolate, Nilla, and Pink are friends in the same class in 5th grade. Chocolate has a crush on a teacher Mr. Young, Nilla has a crush on the white-haired kind glasses boy Wiess, Pink has a crush on Chocolate. Cherry, Chocolate's younger sister, is just starting 1st grade, and has a crush on Red who's another student under Mr. Young, while Mr. Young likes Cherry, yet Mr. Young's son, Red, has a crush on Nilla, Red's friend Wiess has a crush on Pink.

Got it? If not, I broke it down:

Chocolate - has crush on Mr. YoungNilla - has a crush on WiessPink - has a crush on ChocolateThese three are friendsCherry - has a crush on Red

Red - has a crush on NillaWiess - has a crush on PinkMr. Young - likes Cherry

So yeah, you've got some of , a bit of , mixed with , add some , a bit of , with a Cherry on top!

As part of a side story, the Pedo Bear is a villain running around the background of the school. Nilla is a new girl who's secretly on a mission to protect the girls. They have epic battles every now and then.

If you're wondering where I got the idea, the names came from the song "Loli Loli" by Three 6 Mafia. You can be pretty sure where I got the storyline ideas from.

@Nachtsider wrote:I think the Pedobear is a 4chan trademark, Colonel. Anonymous might want to have a word with you.

Are you certain of that? I was surprised there wasn't a Wikipedia, and the website I checked up (to make sure of that) take donations, takes pictures from people who submit, with various companies selling various merchandise.

I'm sure you know what 4chan is, but copyright laws are linked to individuals and those who count as individuals (corporations, for example). Being an Internet forum seems a bit odd.

Besides, where in Fan Fiction am I supposed to post this? If I'm not making money, copyright laws are null.

Alright, Colonel, I just got off /b/ after talking to some people there - looks like I may have been wrong. The overall response seemed to be one of ambivalence, so I suppose you CAN go ahead. But bear in mind how fickle these people can be, so proceed at your own risk.

Wikipedia isn't the end-all of sources. I'm inclined to dismiss it as a reliable source.

@Nachtsider wrote:Alright, Colonel, I just got off /b/ after talking to some people there - looks like I may have been wrong. The overall response seemed to be one of ambivalence, so I suppose you CAN go ahead. But bear in mind how fickle these people can be, so proceed at your own risk.

Wikipedia isn't the end-all of sources. I'm inclined to dismiss it as a reliable source.

Hehehe, I actually did some thorough searching because I am inclined to believe your word 1000x over Wikipedia any day.