You mentioned in your profile that one is allowed to favourite your story only when they've reviewed.

I didn't really feel like getting sent to a 'special kind of Hell' as you've said. Oops.

Anyway, this one-shot is special, because it gave me the feeling at the start that the 'you' in this particular story would be gone, and that 'I' was just simply brooding over it like many other stories out there. (Uhm, no offense to anyone)

The song fits the story well, and I was grinning like a nut when they ended up together again.

I wish you would make this into a story, nabye put this chapter in later, or start it from here and let them work out their differences. Its an unusual perspective,mplacing you instead you she, makes it more real and more better.