Ahhhh! Love this story!
I didn't really care about Kaldur, but how you made him- now I realize how awesome he is!
I loved his actions with the Team, and I like this intro to Rocket.
Could you do a story of Rocket- in the comics she's a teen mom because of her ex-Bf Noble, who's in jail and that's how she met Icon etc (She might be one in-universe because they mentioned, her son Amistad in S2) which I think would be really interesting.
And you made the team very in-character which is always nice.
Keep writing!

Another good story. You're pretty good with character analysis. Not the ridiculous levels of awesome from Connecting the Dots, but little pieces like this can be just as good. It's just too bad the series had to go and end... I guess we should just be happy they go through the second season.

Gah I absolutely adore Kaldur and all of his interactions with everyone in this! I stumbled across this and decided I would read it because my brother had just reminded me recently how awesome of a person Kaldur is. This is a definitely a favorite :)

Your portrayal of the Young Justice is... quite simply put amazing. Each character has a unique individual feel and is really brought to life. I really enjoyed the Robin chapter. Way to go. You obviously put thought into the chapters, and it really shows.

It has certainly been a wonderful story to follow. Your attention to detail in revealing the characterization of each team memeber has been a pleasure to read. Most of all, it's been very believable; the segments could easily fit right into the canon. And I love how it's been from Kaldur's pov. You've got his 'voice' right and it really shows as he interacts with his teammates. Thanks for a great read!

I was a little surprised that you made this chapter BEFORE the episode "Usual Suspects", but it makes sense considering what happened in both that episode and the one from today.

Speaking of today's episode, here's my review on it:

At the beginning, I found it odd that they would just flat out say that the Red Arrow we've seen in the show is actually another CADMUS clone, but it turns out to be true. I think it's a little rushed and it almost reminds me of the Spider-Man story arc "Clone Saga".

By the way, I don't paticularly care for this show's version of Vandal Savage, in terms of appearance and voice. I much prefer the one from the Justice League cartoon. That one had a bit more charisma. Wonder Woman's voice could use a bit of tweaking too, cause it seems annoying to me, but that's my opinion.

The positive aspects of the episode were played out in a very appealing way. The New Year's kiss scene had me laughing and imagining what might happen next. And the highlight of the episode was seeing Superman finally making an effort with Superboy.

What are your thoughts? Great job with this story by the way, I'm a little sad you've completed it.

Reader chapter 7 . 4/21/2012

I rarely review, mostly read, but I must say I enjoy this story. Is it fully completed or do you think you'll do more.

Also, maybe it's just me being unobservant, but I don't think the team is referred to as 'Young Justice' in the show itself. So I think it's good either way.

For the record, Rocket was only introduced in the last episode, so it stands to reason that none of the fics have her in it. But you did a good job integrating her, nonetheless. The only slight issue I had was with Batman's speech. He refers to the Team, as "the Team," and not "Young Justice." And apart from that hiccup, it was a good chapter and I look forward to subsequent updates.