Not the ending I wanted, but the ending I dread will actually happen in Book 7. After that interview JKR gave my only hope now is that Hermione will die before she can marry Ron. Better that she should die, helping to rid the world of Voldermort, than become a younger version of Molly, with all her intelligence and talent wasted

Author's Response: Well, that's your opinion. ;) I mean that Ron and Hermione look very cute together and I hope none of them will die.

I'm normally someone who is dead against H/Hr, simply because their relationship is so... sibling-like, and I have a brother, so it's a bit creepy to me. But rather than let this throw your interest off of this review, finish reading and hopefully the fact I'm a hardcore R/Hr shipper makes this review more.... meaningful, as cheesy as that sounds.

First of all, never let your reviewers manipulate your story. I looked over a few of those reviews, and some of them were irritating in the least. This is your story, you are the author. You are the god (or goddess) in that realm, no one else can tell you what you should or shouldn't write. Just remember that, seeing as you seem to be a mighty strong magnet towards those reviewers who forget that it is a hard enough job to be a writer, and you don't need someone telling you what to write.

Second of all, the only problem with this story is that its too short (I know, that's like saying that your only weakness is that you work too hard in a job interview). You have an original idea (Hermione dreaming of being a princess and facing reality).

Now, do you have...1. A Beta and 2. Microsoft word or some other nifty word processer. If not, you should, as both deal with grammer and flowing problems so you can focus on the story more and build onto it.

This story is good, it's just choppy. You just need to build onto your ideas.

And, er, sorry for the long review.

Author's Response: H/Hr is really sibling-like, but I like some stories about them. I'm really a biiig R/Hr fan, but that's definitely not why I wrote the ending I did. And I don't care too much about what a couple of reviewers think; some of them are actually amusing. I know, it's too short (I hate that I agree to most of the things smart reviewers say, but it's true that I know!). If I was going to write this story again (a new, stronger version that I WON'T write), I would start with an even younger Hermione who dreamed about being a princess, and instead of the flasback in chapter two, I would have another chapter where what happened in sixth year would happen. And probably have at least one more chapter with... something. lol. I have Microsoft Word, but not a beta. I've tried, but I just didn't... like it. Er - well. There was nothing wrong with the beta, but it just felt wrong. Okay, that sounds ridiculous, but never mind. I do have Word. And never apologize for long reviews! :) I just wish that I could give a just as long answer...

i actually really like this story! i dont really care all that much for harry/hermione stories... but it was great and it is ur story so dunt worry about all the people who didnt like it cause its ur view not theirs... 10/10 cause it was completely original and sweet! good luck !

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm so glad some people actually like it. I like Harry/Hermione better and better, but there are few stories about them out there that are really good. Thanks for the 10/10!

Okay, i really despise RW/HG..BUT!! (DON'T THINK I'M LIKE THE OTHER IDIOTS WHO DON'T RECONGIZE A BRILLANT STORY WHEN THEY SEE ONE.) this story was awesome! i like how Harry and Hermione don't get married. Even though i'm all for people showing their true affections, i'm glad they thought of the other people (Ron&Luna). oh and about the people who thought it was bad.. i noticed most of them weren't even authors themselfs. Writing and pubicly showing it is like bearing your soul. Some people are just too afraid of what people think about them. Anywho i'll stop babbaling and end this horribly long review. lol. All in all, great story and i can't wait to read more of your stories.~10/10~

Author's Response: Well, as you despise R/Hr, you should probably stay away from my Ron/Hermione fics, but I'm actually working on a new H/Hr story which is, in my opinion, slightly better than this one. This fic is one of my worst fics, so I really don't think it's awesome. lol. But it's okay for readers to think so! I'm glad someone actually likes it