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JLHufflepuff says:This piece holds a lot of meaning, with Cho unexpectedly finding the dress that reminds her of Cedric and all that they had been. I can tell that she still cares about him, still misses him but has moved on in life as well. This shows her level of maturity and independence that she can remember him with fondness but is not completely debilitated by grief. I think this is a very clever way of answer the challenge. It contains some good characterization as well as a good life-lesson. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad that you said something about the piece having meaning and that it has a life lesson. I am always harping on about how JKR has so many lessons in her writing, so I suppose this was my attempt at trying my hand out at dishing out some advice! It means a lot that you thought that aspect worked!

Grief is funny that way. I know absolutely nothing about grief since I am very fortunate to have never lost anyone close to me, but I think that grief is something you truly never get over. And I tried my best to convey that here, that moving on does not mean forgetting.

Thank you for your comments about Cho's character, as well. I wanted to make her seem a little more than just the pretty girl who serves as Harry's first crush and I hope it worked!