Oh, Wow! This is great. Love these lines. I'm right with ya in this. Moving on over........a new poet is in the HOUSE!
But a generation of lions with the fire of Zion
Aflame with Levitical praise
With a prophetic roar in worship they soar
Rising above the apathetical age

oh-oh! Better watch out, all you prize winning poets. Competition is moving up fast in the FW race, and just might take over the lead!
George, this is great---you've got rhythm and rhyme within rhyme, and a message to boot. I'll have to keep a better eye on you!