I'm having to thank you a lot. Each chapter flows seamlessly from the previous one and leaves me eagerly looking forward to the next one. The plot and sub-plots are brilliantly crafted and executed, creating a truly enjoyable story. Except for the few bobbles I have pointed out, the story has been excellently written and edited. For all of the above, I thank you. It is, unfortunately, seldom that I can find a story so engrossing and well-written. Keep up the excellent work.

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