Questions tagged with 'Whats'http://www.grammarly.com/answers/questions/tags/whats2015-03-03T16:39:44ZWhat's wrong with this sentence?http://www.grammarly.com/answers/questions/42453-whats-wrong-with-this-sentence/
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What&#39;s wrong with this sentence and how could I improve it to make it more effective?</p>
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- Do you use your news magazines digitally as well as printed?</p>
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&nbsp;Thanks</p>
<p><small>asked <a href="/answers/questions/42453-whats-wrong-with-this-sentence/">Aug 29 &#39;13 at 10:51</a> by <a href="/answers/users/228161/george-donnison-layton" class="profile">George Donnison Layton</a>, New member</small></p>
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<em>Digitally</em> is an adverb and <em>printed</em> is an adjective.&nbsp; The adverb modifies the verb.&nbsp; How are you using them?&nbsp; The adjective modified a noun.&nbsp; What kind of newspapers?&nbsp; Since you are linking the two together with <em>as well as</em>, they should both be the same kind of word.&nbsp; I think that <em>as well as</em> is wordy and can be taken to mean<em> is one as good as the other</em>, instead of <em>do you do both things</em>.&nbsp;</p>
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<em>Do you read both digital and printed news magazines?&nbsp; </em></p>
<p><small>answered <a href="/answers/questions/42453-whats-wrong-with-this-sentence/#answer_29607">Aug 29 &#39;13 at 11:10</a> by <a href="/answers/users/24140/patty-t" class="profile">Patty T</a>, Grammarly Fellow</small></p>
wHATS WRONG WITH THIS TEXThttp://www.grammarly.com/answers/questions/5498-whats-wrong-with-this-text/
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In the year of 1939 a tragic war broke out causing great danger for Jewish people.</p>
<p><small>asked <a href="/answers/questions/5498-whats-wrong-with-this-text/">May 13 &#39;12 at 16:37</a> by <a href="/answers/users/114284/miranda" class="profile">Miranda</a>, New member</small></p>
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wHATS WRONG WITH THIS TEXThttp://www.grammarly.com/answers/questions/5497-whats-wrong-with-this-text/
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In the year of 1939 a tragic war broke out causing great danger for Jewish people.</p>
<p><small>asked <a href="/answers/questions/5497-whats-wrong-with-this-text/">May 13 &#39;12 at 16:37</a> by <a href="/answers/users/114284/miranda" class="profile">Miranda</a>, New member</small></p>