Angelica's name is perfect for her. She looks terrific. That said, I would have preferred this shot taken from a different perspective without the distracting lights in the background. as suggested, a tighter crop would help. I do like that you used a classic black and white treatment.

Great capture and I love it in B & W. I don't mind the lights in the background although it wouldn't be too hard to add a sort of slight vignette that would help focus the eyes on Angelica. To be fair, though, she is so pretty that it makes very little difference since all the males are going to see nothing but her, regardless.