Ambitious, if a little messy. I'm glad to see you gave some thought to fleshing out the background and composition, but the drawing is still very rough and unrefined. A little more practice will fix that in time.

All right, some SatAM artwork. I like how you were able to put in so much detail without any color. Normally putting in so much detail without color can feel confusing and cluttered, but here, it looks great.