Chapter 1 Page 13

Okay... I'll be honest with you guys. Sometimes a page just doesn't turn out how you've hoped it would, and this is one of those pages. I don't know. It might be because I've been seeing some really awesome art lately and feel like recently I haven't been moving that much myself. I think more practising is in order.

... Which I should be able to get, what with it being the christmas holidays soon! Hooraaaaay. As soon as I've got my uni project finished and made my Secret Santa pressie I'll be free to work on this.

So yeah, bear with me a lil' while I finish up with things. In return I shall endevour to make the next one awesome.

Zomiter: MtB ... is taking a snooze. The reasoning is because I was getting very little joy in working on that, especially when I realized how much fun making this was. Making this is just so much fun, and what with another project in the wings (partnered with Krazeh again its looking to be an awesome amount of fun) ... I'm not gunna be working on three and one had to go.

Yeah doing these pages are all for practice and fun. So don't be waiting for MtB updates any time soon. If this makes you think I am a bad and selfish person... Then you'd be right. No point in pretending.

I see Atticus startign to shout, and for some reason, even though you tell us to prepare for a bit of Dragon-thing whompage, I keep expecting him to say, 'wtf quit hitting D-thing!' and just sorta punt Squirtle across the room in its shell.

I love how sad Dragon Thing looks in the first panel. I feel so bad that I'm so amused by animal abuse...

Geez Squirtle, the Charmander is crying. Stop beating him or her up. You're a meanie. Your owner is a meaner for wanting you to attack Dragon Thing even though it is obvious Dragon Thing has surrendered and tapping out as anyone can see.

Slam!I just love Dragonthingie's face in the first panel. I think it just understood what was gonna happen. Poor thing! Stupid squirtle, I'd kill it if I could. Why is Kahn still tackling! Is he insane?! And YES. Atticus sees the Light! He finally gets that something is going wrong.
Don't worry, this page is just another perfect one! Don't compare yourself to others, I really enjoy this style, and I think your drawing is simply terrific. Plus, I doubt that anyone else could even design a character as awesome as Atticus! Amazing work, really.
Hope you do well on your Uni Project and your secret santa gift!