I MISS YOU

I MISS YOU
I miss you in my darkest hour , when I am alone and we are far...
I miss you in my sweetest dream , without you its not fun to scream ...
I miss you in my lonely nights,i want you beside me to hold me tight ...
One thing that i really miss........ Is the time when we Kissed
I miss you from the bottom of my heart.. love me , miss me you are my sweetheart...
I want to spend evry moment of my life with you ,even if it would be dark i am alwes with you ....
Please hug me i need your love...
There is nothing beautiful than this over and above...
Hold my hand in the crowd,you are the 1 among millions i found....
Make my life a beautiful journey..
fill it with the most memorable moments of my life..
Be with me till the day i take last few breaths in your arms...
I Love You from every little corner of my Heart...

I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Nishu. Love, Carol

An awesome Love Poem, Nishu -bubbling with deep passion and unshakable devotion.
It is a great write. I feel that the last word in the sixth line is meant to read "always" in place of existing "alwes". Best wishes. -Mohammad