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This commission was done for *Kanuvina of her cut-purse rogue character, Kanuvina. For info about this character, please visit *Kanuvina page.

But well I finished this commission towards the beginning of the year for a friend of mine from my WoW guild. It had been a while since I had the chance to do something of this nature so it was a nice change of pace

My biggest problem or criticism I have is that many of my teachers have talked about not liking the close-up shots on the side there. Many people in industries apparently find it really tacky. And I have to admit it kind of does, considering that the upper half of it follows down her face in a linear way (which is a bit repetitive) and then i suddenly juts a little to the left to her bracelet. I would recommend not having that there because it REALLY draws away from the picture as a whole.

Next, for some reason, at least to me, the left leg looks a little disconnected from the body - or it looks like she has no butt. That's kind of odd and disturbing when I look closer to it. That left leg just looks generally off. The left side doesn't feel like it has weight on it, where she's sitting, when it actually would. And I think the perspective of the box, mixed with her leg, makes the lower part of the pose generally awkward.

Fantastic pic, great colors, love the painting style and attention to detail! The layout of the whole pic is awesome as well. I'm thinking that if/when I get back into painting I have a lot to look up to ^.^