I'd post the actual pics but My laptop's being funny and says that I have an IO sever problem when I try to upload to places like Photo bucket... but not for facebook or SAP's fancomic so a link ot it on there will have to do. Let me know what you think.

I have one suggestion. While i know it's a intro strip, Try having a bit more sprite poses if you're going to have the sprite stay in one spot, give the strip a feeling of life. If you understand what I mean