History Fanfic / MyImmortal

* AntiClimax: Chapter 17-18. 17 sets up some fight between "Dumblydore" and Voldemort, but 18 opens with Ebony waking up. It's explained away in a paragraph, where Dumbledore "chased him off" (and then segues into Ebony and Draco having sex to a Linkin Park song...). Of course, most fights end with someone flying away. Rather like ''TheIliad'', only stupid.

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* AntiClimax: Chapter 17-18. 17 sets up some fight between "Dumblydore" and Voldemort, but 18 opens with Ebony waking up. It's explained away in a paragraph, where Dumbledore "chased him off" (and then segues into Ebony and Draco having sex to a Linkin Park song...). Of course, most fights end with someone flying away. Rather like ''TheIliad'', ''Literature/TheIliad'', only stupid.

* DarknessVonGothickname: Most of the original Harry Potter character have been given new names. Such as Hermione now being B'loody Mary, Ron being Diabolo, "Navel" becoming "[[{{Dracula}} Dracola]]" and Harry becoming Vampire.

* FailOSuckyName: Most of the original Harry Potter character have been given new names. Such as Hermione now being B'loody Mary, Ron being Diabolo, "Navel" becoming "[[{{Dracula}} Dracola]]" and Harry becoming Vampire.

See also ''WebVideo/MyImmortalTheWebSeries''", a WebVideo adaptation. Not to be confused with ''VideoGame/TheImmortal''.

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See also ''WebVideo/MyImmortalTheWebSeries''", ''WebVideo/MyImmortalTheWebSeries'', a WebVideo adaptation. Not to be confused with ''VideoGame/TheImmortal''.''VideoGame/TheImmortal'' or the song by Music/{{Evanescence}}.

What this fic ''does'' have, however, is sex, torture, rape, time travel ([[Film/BackToTheFuture Marty McFly]] makes an inexplicable cameo), guns, goth concerts, ludicrous and confusing nicknames, dramatic entrances, tears of blood, wrist-cutting, homo-/bisexuality, fishnets and clothing descriptions worthy of ''Literature/AmericanPsycho''. This is not to mention the OOC drama, ranging from Tara's constant interaction with her incensed reviewers, the rocky relationship between Tara and her best friend, Raven, as well as some back-and-forth between Tara and a mysterious "hacker." The [[RougeAnglesOfSatin constant spelling mistakes]] don't help the reader's understanding either. The story [[FigureItOutYourself may or may not be]] the work of a {{Troll}}. If she is a troll, she's an incredibly skilled, determined, and realistic one. If not, then weep for humanity's future. WEEP.

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What this fic ''does'' have, however, is sex, torture, rape, time travel ([[Film/BackToTheFuture Marty McFly]] makes an inexplicable cameo), guns, goth concerts, ludicrous and confusing nicknames, dramatic entrances, tears of blood, wrist-cutting, homo-/bisexuality, fishnets and clothing descriptions worthy of ''Literature/AmericanPsycho''. This is not to mention the OOC drama, ranging from Tara's constant interaction with her incensed reviewers, the rocky relationship between Tara and her best friend, Raven, as well as some back-and-forth between Tara and a mysterious "hacker." The [[RougeAnglesOfSatin constant spelling mistakes]] don't help the reader's understanding either. The story [[FigureItOutYourself may or may not be]] Depending on who you believe]], it's either one of the work worst fanfics ever written or a shining example of a {{Troll}}. If she is a troll, she's an incredibly skilled, determined, and realistic one. If not, then weep for humanity's future. WEEP.TrollFic.

* TrollFic: [[PoesLaw Maybe...]]Maybe.]] Several people (Someone named [[http://web.archive.org/web/20110430232448/http://ohinternet.com/My_Immortal/TheBatMan%27s_confession TheBatMan]] for example said it was his work) have claimed that this fic was created deliberately badly written.

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