Wow, a few months have gone by, but I really hope that you're intending to finish this! The cliffhanger will just kill me FOREVER if there's no closure! This story really is wonderfully written, and the suspense is killing me! You are a fantastic author! Everything from your characterization to the dialogues to the fact that you've managed to do something previously thought to be impossible; you made me NOT hate Katara!

Ahaha, anyway, this fic is WAY too good not to be continued, so, if you love me, you'll update soon... :) You're totally awesome, even if you decide not the finish the story (but you still should) :3

Scheming!Toph is awesome, and this is actually a very believable scenario. It could have used some elaboration, maybe, but you summarized it very well.

And argh, I just want to reach through the screen and cuddle your Zuko. He's just adorkable with all his nerdy knowledge. And that's one of the most lovable aspects of his personality, and unfortunately one that most writers forget. So great job on that.

Aang doesn't seem quite as childish, but he also doesn't seem to have somehow transformed into someone completely different as himself. So yeah, great characterization on him, too.

Thanks for updating! I was quite on the edge of my seat waiting for this, and you didn't disappoint. We need more Zukaang chapterfic out there!

I really enjoyed this, I liked how you threw in the awkward relationshi build up. I also enjoyed the 'consiracy' to get the two of them together. I hope you'll continue the story, it'd be a shame to end it here.

Guest chapter 2 . 8/12/2011

I like the story so far. I like how you portrayed Aang and Zuko.

What I don't like is that you have the story listed as being complete, when it is not. I try to avoid reading works in progress because so many promising stories end up being abandoned. As a reader it can be very frustrating.

I hope that you continue with the story, and that you change the status to 'in-progress' until you finish it.