Updated 7/30/12: Another excellent and erotic chapter of bondage. Im hoping the next chapter has Heather involved in some forced sexual acts. As good as the writing is, and the bondage is clever and deliciously cruel in a sexual way, I'm wanting a little more hot and erotic action!.............Updated 5/20/12...Part 9 was fabulous! My only criticism is that it ended to soon. This is a spectacular, erotic, sexy & fun story & I can't wait for part 10. I'm hoping it will be posted quickly, as waiting another 3 1/2 months would be as much torture as what some of the girls are going thru with their wonderfully creative bondage!.....................A very good story & a must read. Although I'm not impressed with Heather at all. For a special agent she keeps getting captured & for a sister, she's enjoying life while Samantha is being tortured. What happened with Alicia & the other female FIRM members after part 7? I'm looking forward to part 9, but am also ready for the confrontation between Heather & Mallory. (10/10)

Thanks, all, for the kind words. This (starting with Part 8) was actually sent as a separate Part II story, but somehow got placed back under the original. There will most certainly be a confrontation between Heather and Mallory in the near future. Thanks again for the feedback.Ari

After a lengthy break, glad you're writing again! Your word pictures are captivating. Love the way you switch back and forth between events involving different characters...keeps the overall storyline very interesting. You have a gift for writing - keep it up so we can enjoy. (10/10)