Okay, I truthfully didnt read it but just from skimming over it, I can see it is extremely confusing looking. The lyrics are all near the rest and the flashback part isn't the easiest to depict. It's kind of hardish to read. I'll probbly come back pass this later and actually read it but for now, I just wanted to say that. Not to be mean or criticize but just as you know a word of advise for next time - if there is one - to maybe organize a bit better.