This story is absolutely very great. It makes senses with according to the official story. So meaningful, epic, and lovely. The parts I favourite very much are 'empty gifts for none receivers' and 'Mello...He was never second'. Really, this story deserves to be appreciated as the way it is which is obviously very great.

This story was absolutely amazing. The style, the descriptions, the word choice... everything was perfect! I'm actually having trouble picking out specific things that I liked because the whole thing just flowed so well and felt so beautifully polished. I apologize for not being able to offer a longer or more helpful review, but I fear that if I keep typing I will just end up punching the word "awesome" into my computer over and over again. This was a true work of art and you should be very proud of yourself.

This is written so beautifully; I felt myself tear up a little bit. I think you made Near very believable; I think everything that was written on the gravestones was perfect, especially Mello's. I'm surprised this doesn't have more reviews, actually.