An Excerpt From A Book I'll Never Write #1

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"Why?" she screeches. Anger had been forged in her eyes; a fire was nestled deep in her belly. She was venomous, vehement, and vicious. Her spine was arched with an achy tautness that she was refusing to give up.

She reminded me of a dragon. I could imagine her glory. I imagined her with ruby scales that glinted like flames in the sunlight. I could imagine what would be the soft arch in her neck as she hovered over her hoard. But, her hoard wouldn't be gold, no. It would be emotions. I've never seen so much passion packed into a singular person. She has more ardor in one day of her life that I'll ever possess in my entirety.

"Why, what?" I lazily threw back at her scream, coming 0ut of my thoughts.

"Why are you leaving?" A tear sprang out of her eye, and swept down her cheek. I could have sworn I saw steam.

"You're too much for me." But please don't ever dull your edges, dear. There's someone out there who can handle all the fire you've burned me with.

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Animeviewer:
It is one of the best stories I've ever read. This story will have you riding a roller coaster of emotions and nearly dying to know what happens next.You will get very attached to the characters and in my case I relate well with some of their very traumatic or emotional experiences, Just Juliet f...

Sandra Estrada:
I loved every minute of it and I thank my lucky stars that brought me to the story, it's been a whirlwind of emotions, plot twist after plot twist but I never got tired of them. Abby and Kade's story is a hard one to understand but once you're submerged in their story and love, you can't help but...

ernbelle:
When I first started this story I was a little unsettled by all of the information that appears in the prologue, and wasn't sure if I would continue. However, I am very glad I did. The plot was very well thought out and really interesting. There were not any page breaks or markers to acknowledge ...

Prasino45:
Hi! I happen to see your updated chapter on FF.NET!It happened to be about you coming onto Inkitt with this story! I've been a fan for a while! I'm a scqualphie writer myself. I ship them HARD! Love this story! I'm gonna do a reread as you said you changed some things! Glad we both made the switc...

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I loved this story so much! I generally can't stand super girly romance stories, but this one was so relatable! I could not stop reading this, I read it straight through!! I wish this was a series, not just a single story 😊

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As a beta, I found this story outstanding!! Plot, grammar, phraseology, etc Rachel gives us it all. She takes the story into the future from where due South ends. She is an exacting and thoughtful author.

Carolyn Hahn-Re:
I really liked this story! The writing was well done, and the plot was suspenseful. I couldn't stop reading chapter after chapter, on the edge of my seat! The characters were well developed, and true to form. Thank you so much for this wonderful read.

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Overall I thought your story was really good! It drew me in right away and kept me interested as the story progressed. I loved the character of Kayla being inserted into this story, and the way she affected and shaped the life of the original story into something totally new and interesting. I lo...