Just wanted to say that the last Anonymous review was my own. I really think you shoulc consider writing more!

Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2011

This is cute and true to charecter, but it ends kind of sadly. To make it well rounded, I think you might write in the part where they get to Narnia, and maybe have Peter apologize to Lucy for what he'd done. You know, it was a bit of an injustice. But otherwise, well written. You should write more about narnia. There aren't very many

littlemsEMOtional chapter 2 . 2/6/2011

Even though it was short it had a good concept with cute peter and lucy moments

Good job seeing how you told me you were havin a hard time on this chap. Good story all in all. Oh um you know who (I'm pretty sure you do) hasn't messages me back so...ya. But I'll send you it late when they do. Kay? Luv ya! God Bless! Xoxoxox :*

it was a good one i had to spanked my brother and sister when i was left in charge it broke my heart like it did to peter but that is what the oldest has to do i even had to spanked my cousins when i was left in charge thanks keep up the great job