first of all sorry for destroying the awesome Raven/Gilbert Nightray orzi suck at drawing guys.... ;A;/ tips please~~~and roses look weird too OTL but i still like it ;v;and i did my best ;v; so please don't kill me >A<

It's good. Maybe he looks very young to smoke. If you want tips, the boys has wider shoulders, his hip is not as wide and his hands are bigger. Also you can try to make the nose and face longer and the eyebrows wider to give him more "manliness"