Octavia Melody is a dreamer. Her mind takes her places, places that she's always wanted to be. Unfortunately, her body doesn't follow. This time, however, she'll have to make her dreams into a reality.

There was only one explanation. For all of it. All of the strange, erratic behavior. Her irrational fear of the sun. Her nocturnal habits of locking herself in in the dark and closing all the blinds. Wearing her sunglasses everywhere, even inside! It was time to invest in some silver, garlic, and a wooden stake.

Very interesting concept, coupled with some shipping too, so I'll be watching this.

Really though, I think Octavia was pretty calm about Vinyl sucking on her cut, like, really? Could have made her freak out a bit more. It's also apparent that Octavia's train of thought is broken very frequently. I know that's intentional, but it's kind of distracting in addition to the many scene changes. It's more a matter of personal preference though, so I'll give you that.

Anyway, I still enjoyed reading this very much. I'm interested in where this is gonna go.

"Was it wrong for me to laugh when she snorted milk out of her nose? Or when she had lettuce in her teeth? Good idea, Vinyl, let’s have a belching contest in a five-star restaurant; I’m sure nopony will mind."Heee, i love silly lines

This is great! Excellent execution of humor is difficult to make great, but you pull it off nicely. I like the concept, and their relationship was interesting to begin with, you just made it more interesting. I'm keeping an eye on this

This is probably going to lead on into some long amount of time spent by Octavia trying to prove that Vinyl is a vampire. It will lead to all of her "evidence" being refuted, but once Octavia calls off the search Vinyl will tell her that she is in fact a vampire.

At least, that's how I see it. My personal record at predicting what the author is going to do is just a little better than 50/50.