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Obviously this piece needs a lot of work, I just wanted to put it up here and get some feedback. So I know what to work on in order to complete this. Anyways I hope you like it and can give me some good feedback. The complete song should be coming out soon depending on how well you guys critique it.

Rated 5 / 5 stars2010-11-02 12:03:51

Rated 4 / 5 stars2010-01-26 01:21:49

More drum

the whole song is nice, the lead pretty catchy, but the drum really need to more present, you should but a snare in your beat to make a it more intense. Also, i guess somewhere around the middle, like when the song really build up, give the lead a bit of change, so that it feels like something IS happening, not just staying the same.

Rated 5 / 5 stars2010-01-22 19:18:26

definitely a 10 for a WIP

the intro is very good, and overall I'd say it's pretty good even as it is. However, the biggest improvement I can think of is in the main synth part. The whole rest of the song sounds so fast paced and frantic that giving it a faster melody in parts like 1:18 to 1:44 would make it (not an overhaul, just modifying it a bit to give it a faster feel). Also, most of the percussion in the song is just an occasional bass drum beat, so you might add a cymbal in here or there just to complement it a bit. Also, I'd shorten that part from about 1:58 to 2:20 where it's just kind of quiet and repetitive before the buildup. It's not bad, but it does seem to wear on a little.
Outside of that, it was very good overall. If you have other ideas, I'd go with those. These are all just my suggestions.

Rated 5 / 5 stars2010-01-20 22:31:00

you need feedback ? sure ?

i dont think you really need feedback the song is catchy.. need more agressive drum, maybe a guitar too.. a stoping bomb (slowmotion with piano or synthetizer)
DUDE TAKE THOSE FEEDBACK LIKE YOU WANT ITS JUST A WAY I COULD WANT THE SONG IF ITS POSSIBLE TO MAKE IT I WILL BE VERY VERY HAPPY !!! ^_^'
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the song is more technical than an army song... whatever i love it so that the point
10 STARS
5/5 faces
95% cause it could be better its just the repetitive beat but in fact i love it in that version too..
added on fav..
plus downloaded on itune
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