The Romantic Erotic Novel

Chapter 3 – Part 9, DeepThroat’s Bitch

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Chapter 3 – Part 9, DeepThroat’s Bitch

We sometimes watched soft-porn on the TV and laughed and joked about the fake sex. Often the man humped so far from the woman he’d need a two-foot penis to reach her vagina. Three pay channels featured hard-core, something María enjoyed more than I. For her, all sex was good sex, but I thought the simultaneous three-penis penetrations, ejaculations squirting the woman’s face, gang-rapes, and the physical and verbal abuse of the woman were ugly and disrespectful.

María said she liked physical domination during sex, and since she was petite, the men handled her easily. She also said my presence in the room gave her confidence she wouldn’t be harmed, so she surrendered more of herself to these lovers.

Vulva kissing and licking, vulgarly called ‘pussy-eating’, became the newest fad at the club, and finally, all pretense at clothing standards for the back-room girls disappeared. The girls were allowed to be nude, top and bottom, as long as they wore some strip of fabric around their waist. María, to her credit, didn’t change her clothing style, and her ritual still required a stylish finger-fuck before the pussy eating. At home, I always stayed in the room as she fucked her chosen dancers, licking clean her vulva between each ejaculation of these guys. My taste and appreciation for semen developed, and I could detect small differences in the flavor and texture between men. I loved having my face in her vulva, and I loved licking away other men’s semen, especially when mixed with María’s vaginal juices.

María’s second favorite dancer tried to talk her into finger-fucking and pussy-eating from behind. She saw the other girls do it, but she thought it might be a little too raunchy. The man persisted in asking her, so she asked me for advice. I said, no, she couldn’t do that, it was too vulgar how the women bent over exposing their vulvas to the audience, and the men were disrespectful.

Our next time at the club, when María went to the dressing room to change into her back-room clothes, she returned wearing the same style button blouse and wrap skirt, but wore a garter belt, no panty, and thigh-high hose for the first time. It was stunningly sexy, and I drooled with the rest of the men watching her. Her back-room partner artistically danced away her blouse and skirt, then bent her over, and exposed her vulva to the audience, exquisitely framed by the garter belt and hosiery. He proceeded to finger-fuck and pussy-eat her in full view of everyone. The display was vulgar, raunchy – she bent over, her hands on her knees, the man on his knees behind her, the very epitome of a cheap, trashy slut, and I loved it. And I was secretly proud she totally disobeyed my prohibition.

As she fucked that man later in the house, Her disparaging remarks about me were sharper than ever. He physically demonstrated his contempt for me – as I licked his semen from María’s vulva, he punched me in the testicles from behind, then fucked her again as I lay on the floor doubled over in pain, her orgasmic screams proclaiming his superiority.

When he regained his erection, he proceeded to teach María how to deep-throat his penis (and there-by earned his nickname: DeepThroat). It took her less than an hour to practice throat relaxation, swallowing, breathing intervals, and gag-reflex suppression. They lay on the bed, in the 69 position to take advantage of his natural penis curvature. After many attempts, María took in his penis until her lips bumped against his abdomen, her nose buried in his scrotum. She swallowed multiple times to stimulate his penis, then withdrew to breathe. She repeated this a few times.

Sitting on the floor clutching my testicles, I watched fascinated, then realized I mirrored her actions: opening my mouth when she took in his penis, swallowing as she swallowed. DeepThroat watched me, triumph in his face. I knew where he planned to stick his penis next. I struggled to my feet, my testicles screaming bloody murder, and waddled out of the room before he converted me into his next deep-throatee. The next day, I asked María to deep-throat with me, and she refused. She said it was too difficult, I was too big, and she reserved that activity for DeepThroat.

DeepThroat understood how to please María in the club and in our bed. He also understood my perversions. He became María’s favorite sex-dancer and the most frequent visitor to our bed. He guessed correctly María would tolerate any amount of sexual abuse of me, and my abuse excited her immensely. After that first punch to my testicles, both Deep-Throat and I noted María’s enhanced response. He was a quick learner. Already María’s favorite, he became more so as his abuse of my genitals evolved into an elaborate game.

DeepThroat moved behind me as I licked his semen from María’s vulva, spread my legs, grasped my testicles below my bangle, and squeezed, pulled and twisted. He quickly learned to control my actions. If I drove María towards climax, he stopped my stimulation of her by forceful squeezing of my testicles. Or he’d twist my erect penis back into my buttock crack. He never again let me kiss María into climax – he reserved her orgasms for himself. Sometimes, he pulled my face up out of her vulva, so María could see the pain on my face. It excited her to see my torment and humiliation. I often told him to squeeze harder, but sometimes María asked for more pain, my pain. Deep-Throat learned to please us both.

Finally, he’d release my genitals and punch me in the testicles, roll me off the bed, and María would pull him desperately into her vagina. The bangle made these punches easy and effective – they packaged my testicles perfectly for a blow. I never knew when the final punch would occur – I think he tormented me until he regained his erection. I hated the pain to my penis, but loved the testicle abuse – the pain was exquisite, more so because he fucked my slut before and after. I uncovered my genitals when he finished fucking María, and he stepped on them as he left the bed – my final humiliation in front of María.

The abuse of my genitals excited María tremendously, and her most vocal orgasms always came after his roughest treatment of me. Apart from my pleasure with the testicle pain, It pleased me especially to please María with these intense orgasms. Afterward, María leaned-in to whisper “Te quiero” to DeepThroat.

Deep-throating became a regular part of María’s after club sex, but only with DeepThroat. He did at least one deep-throat session per night. It still wasn’t easy for María – she needed a warm-up practice of 5-15 minutes to get his penis beyond the gag point. I was mesmerized watching this, and always found myself mirroring María’s mouth and throat. DeepThroat watched me and he knew I wanted this humiliation.

As the bedroom game first evolved, his verbal abuse increased as I drove him home and evolved into more physical abuse. But he didn’t abuse me to please María, he did it to control and punish me. DeepThroat wanted to own me, and take María away from me. Initially when driving him home, he grabbed my pants to squeeze my genitals, which provoked several near accidents.

However, once he saw my reaction to his deep-throating of María, he played me expertly, bad guy then good guy. The abuse of my genitals in the car became ‘cariños’ (caresses), and he lovingly nuzzled and kissed my ears and neck as I drove. He whispered my genitals belonged to him. He put his fingers to my mouth and I’d instinctively suck and lick them until I inflamed. I reached across to caress his penis and swore I’d love to suck him, but he just continued to tease me. He said, “I don’t do men, only bitches. Are you my bitch?”

But he never let me suck his penis. He treated me like a woman, just another of his cheap sluts, a mouth-fuck of last resort, an unattractive slut with the wrong genital equipment.

This was new to me, that explicit cheap slut feeling, that I was a sexual toy for this man, and I didn’t like it. He seduced me, made me want him and beg him, played me like a yo-yo, and left me frustrated and hungry. But then he’d put his hot tongue in my ear and I’d break, beg him to fuck my mouth, deep into my throat. I was forbidden penises by María, but Deep-Throat overwhelmed me. I begged him pathetically. He owned me but didn’t want me. He found my deep need for humiliation by María’s lovers, and he humiliated my need for humiliation. Unfulfilled humiliation was more humiliating than direct genital abuse. I took it out on María when I arrived back home, pounding her vagina in anger because she reserved her throat for him; because she had no penis to shove down my throat.

This testicle abuse by DeepThroat, JerkFace or others happened once or twice per week, and my testicles were chronically swollen and hurt when I walked. The doctor told me to stop the abuse immediately or my testicles might scar or develop cancer. But I couldn’t stop – I loved the humiliation, and I loved to please María.

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