Loved the story. Your other one is great too.
Keep writing. Your an amazing writer. I hope
you write more fan fictions

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support! Honestly, when I started doing this, I didn't realize how fun it would be, so I'm glad other people are enjoying it too! I actually have a new story I'm working on too, so I hope you keep reading! :D

Aww! Good ending! I like that she told Ron before the wedding day; good call on that. I also like the way you managed to keep the story short (compared to many!) and sweet. Anyone else would've dragged this on forever by twisting their relationships all over the place. The mentioning of Celestina and Draco feeling like he'd been run over by the Knight Bus were hilarious! Cheers! ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I originally had it planned out differently, but the further along I got...there's no way that she'd get to the wedding without talking to Ron.

I'm glad you think it was a good length for this story. I always feel like I should add more. But, really, this was the story. I felt like anything else would dilute the rest.

Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying this! The final chapter of this story posted yesterday, but I'm working on others and have chapter 2 of The Price in the queue. I hope you like that one, too!

Ooo! Terrific ending! Draco in the rain... And I really loved the explanation of the heartstone, and that Ron, of all people, was the one to do the explaining. Hermione is sure in a web of lies, eh? But it's definitely one of those "I don't know what I'd do, either," kind of situations. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Ah, keeping her safe by setting her free... how romantic... and it sucks! Lol. I miss Draco! I know he's being the good guy and everything, and stories need to have 'plots' and 'turmoil' and 'conflict' all this nonsense to be interesting and more than just pure fluff... but I miss Draco! Everything better work out for them! ;)

That aside, I'm glad you write Ron as a good guy and not a raging buffoon the way most people do! Until next chapter!

I like how you manage to write Draco in a cute way without being ridiculous. That's quite a feat, ha! He and Hermione both are so sweet in their curiosity for each other :D

I also love the bit with him kissing her fingertips... that would make any girl weak in the knees! ;)

Author's Response: Yeah, he's tricky to soften, because it's so different than how he is in the books. I'm glad he isn't coming off as lame, because that's one of the hardest things to manage with romance writing, IMO. I tried to tap into that new learning of first loves. I'm glad it's working!!

Your title is spot-on, considering how Hermione feels by the end of the chapter. I feel like you were feeling what these characters felt as you wrote. "What would I feel like if this happened to me? What do they feel differently from me?" I'm sure that was in your head.

Ooooh, this was a good place to end it, heehee! I love that what Draco "hates" about her only reveals that he actually hates himself for staring at her 24/7 (twirling quill... who would notice that but him? *smirk). And as I've said before, I really love the way you write Hermione! I'll be watching for chapter two! :D

Author's Response: Thanks, I thought the chapter was a little short, but I thought it was a good place, too!

And on the list, I tried to make it start with things that could annoy anyone, then as the list went on, they became things you would only notice if you were really attentive.