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Review:

The Claw of Raven says:This is too choppy. Can you please fix the formatting? Hopefully that will help.

Author's Response: What do you mean when you say it's too choppy? Are you talking about the flow of the story or the spacing? I'll re-read the story to check out the flow, but if you're talking about the spacing there's a minimum amount of space required between paragraphs. Thanks for your review, though.