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The weight of Sora's failure at the keyblade exam slowly began to eat away at him. In his lonely despair a door appears in front of him, opening a way to a new world with creatures he would have never thought he would see. ·steel soul

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The final battle between Sora and Xehanort was a failure. Sora is on his last legs and his friends have all been captured. When he refuses to help Xehanort, he is sent into darkness. What he finds on the other side surprises him above all else. ·Mudkipman98

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Roxas and Namine find themselves in Equestria after the Mane Six's hearts call out to them. Now trapped in this strange land, together they must survive the darkness growing as well as keep their new friends safe from Roxas' past. ·DJSkywalker

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You know if you told me that my friends and I would become Organization XIII and would end up in Equestria just to bug alot of ponies... I would have thought that it sounded like fun.. ·Mr Darkstone

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The final battle between Sora and Xehanort was a failure. Sora is on his last legs and his friends have all been captured. When he refuses to help Xehanort, he is sent into darkness. What he finds on the other side surprises him above all else. ·Mudkipman98

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Deemo and the little girl come across a window within their castle inside was another world, seizing their chance to explore the unknown they enter into the school of Canterlot High but what really gets the duo is the upcoming Battle of the Bands ·Deemo

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Nolan Anderson, a member of S.W.A.T., is teleported to Equestria during a mission. In this new land, humans have taken over and enslaved a sentient pony species. He must find a way back to Earth, while both sides hate him for different reasons ·Superdale33

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I'm someone that doesn't stay in one Universe for very long, because that would be boring. One Universe in particular is quite memorable, what with six ponies, two princesses, and two Wastelanders. Sounds like the beginning of a bad joke... ·Superdale33

A powerful magic had suddenly revealed itself, drawing unwanted attention from the Darkness. Riku was sent to investigate the phenomenon, but was never heard from. With Riku's whereabouts unknown, Sora must travel there to find his friend, discover where the powerful magic is located, and protect it. After all, everyone shares this special magic, and if it disappears, who knows what will happen. Little did Sora know that he would have to go through High School to accomplish his mission. But with the help of six friends, he could make it through in one piece.

A well written Kingdom Hearts story. And it has a Sunset tag! Me Freaking Gusta! Please continue, I mostly curious to know why Sunset went back on her word. Still, she'd make for an interesting boss fight.

Very nice start thusfar. I do think that Sunset would TRY to make friends after what happened. But, not just for the shake of making friends, at least at first. She sought to become a princess cause she thought she was entitled to it, entitled to power, but thought she had to seek out that power alone. Only to learn that true power, more than she could imagine, results from having friends. But, just cause she said she wants to make friends now(likely to at first to gain power from such), doesn't mean she'd be able to break old habits easily. The ol' 'some things never change' scenario.

Oh yeah. Also, how is Twilight there? Unless Twilight's counterpart joined the school to learn of its mysteries after having witnessed youtube videos of the magical events there.^_^ Which is quite possible. Bet some tried to record even while zombified by Sunset. XD

While I like it, I don't think that making Sunset Shimmer a bad guy again was a good choice. It seems that after such a big failure, no one would care about her. They'd realize just how little control she had over them and stop bothering with her or having anything to do with her. Also, Twilight is not there anymore. I can understand wanting to bring the normal human Twilight into it, but she has no connection to the other girls, so why is the normal human Twilight their friend? Maybe if pony Twilight revisited the school, then that'd make sense, but here, it just doesn't work. Accepting those flaws though, I look forward to reading the story and experiencing it. Your writing is pretty strong, so I'll give it a shot.

Ok! Just finished reading this chapter, and you've got me hooked. The combat flowed nicely and the interactions with Fluttershy were good. However, I strongly question when you started each song. To be more exact, when you started it was fine, but do we just play the music until the next one starts? I did that for all of them, but the one that felt the most out of place was Kairi's theme and Sinister Shadows. I think that it would have been better to start sinister shadows when Sora first noticed the shadow, and not let Kairi's theme go until he actually started fighting the heartless. I'd recommend starting it here:

Narrowing his eyes, Sora saw the Heartless dash out of sight into another hallway.

>>34306313430631 I really tried to think of how readers would flow with the music and reading, and I have to make a lot of assumptions. Sometimes I wanted parts with no music, but I wasn't sure if people would know that there's no music on a spot when a scene break appears. Not only that, but I put the music in right before I upload, so I fail pretty badly when it comes to music placement.

For your other concern in another comment, I understand that everyone views Sunset as a failure (especially after re-watching the movie), but I can still see people fear her a bit. Even still, I didn't want her to be some person in the background I'd have to bring up, and it's far easier (and better, in terms of story) to just make her a villain. Oh, and don't even get me started on Flash Sentry. I have no idea what to do with him.

And >>34306163430616, you are absolutely right. Pureblood heartless don't release hearts. I fail at research. I'll be sure to change that.

This is a fine pickle that Sora got himself into (not that he got into trouble.), and I thought have one of org use Sunset Shimmer not as helpless, but use power of darkness like how Riku lost the keyblade and lost the battle on the first one.

Honestly, I think Sunset was honest about wanting to get friends... but not for the sake of friendship. What Sunset wanted was the power to rule.... and Twilight proved the true way to such power is with friends. So, she likely would seek friends not for redemption's sake... but rather, so she can acquire the same power Twilight had. Or at least, that would be the reason at first.