This is one of the best, if not the best, hacks I've ever seen. You've done so many complicated things that I rarely see, and the story is just... amazing.

It's just... disturbing, but with a cute setting, which just adds to the overall effect. All these innocent phrases for bad things, it really seems realistic to what a pokemon would think. The talk of "Magicians" and the "Flash-born"... I love it.

It's late, so I'm going to go in detail at the moment, but... this looks great. Good luck. I'll come back and give a better review later.