Fun story! Like a previous commenter, I love your line about the floor breaking formation & tackling Reed.

Have you checked out Southland? They have some great "garbage calls" stories too. For that matter, the Southland discussion list onTelevision Without Pity has some LEOs who share true stories which are also quite amusing.

Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2013

man i love this show...and this fic, nothing is funnier than real life.

"...when suddenly the locker room floor broke formation and tackled him from behind." Oh, my goodness! That is one of the funniest lines I've ever read :D What a clever and unique way to describe the simple task of falling. I loved it! Great story too :)

I loved the humor in this story, it was fantastic! I didn't realize new stories had posted here, I haven't checked this site for ages, so it was a sweet treat to see some new pieces published on here. I like your style of storytelling, it's like how an episode would play out, and the humor is right on the mark as far as Pete and Jim go. I definitely plan to keep checking back to see if you've put anything new up!