this was a manga and i converted it into webcomic and participated in webtoons contest well it is toned (black and white), I need to know what's wrong, it is still on going, i know there is some language mistakes since English isn't my native language so please need your advice why it is not popularwebtoons.com

Humans are foolish , pathetic creatures.
No matter how many times history is repeated.
Living beings seeking immortality at any cost.
Scream, suffer and hate..
But you've to survive... Just like me.....

All I can generally say is:1. the thumbnail is not inviting enough. The thumbnail decides a lot on Webtoons. Maybe experiment with a few other, coloured versions and check your views.2. Webtoon readers highly prefer coloured webtoons. Doesn´t mean uncoloured doesn´t work. But it´s def harder3. The Blurb is very negative - and also doesn´t tell you anything you can expect from the story - or makes you want to read the story.4. The first episode starts with text - and there´s so much text. This is your primer, the first taste your new potential reader gets of the story. There´s no reason so far they´d willingly work themselves trough paragraphs upon text.

Hope that helps English isn´t my first language either, that shouldn´t matter too much, but keep improving and run some checks over blurb etc (free program would be grammarly)

thanx yea (The Blurb) I really don't like it i'm trying to figure out something catchy, about the color version it'll take a hell of a time besides i'm still not that good in digital coloring....and about the intro i made it as a cinematic intro you know narrated by Morgan freeman voice

hm, for the blurb you could describe the starting version for your main characters and the main struggels they will have to overcome. Or an self insert "What would you do if you were (in the situation your webtoon puts it´s characters in).I understand the opener, there´s a strong impulse to make comics like movies (Morgan freeman aka it would work well as a movie), but you sometimes can´t translate it that directly. If you experiment with blurb and thumbnail tough I´m sure more people will at least give it a try

and about the intro i made it as a cinematic intro you know narrated by Morgan freeman voice

While reading it, I don't mind this approach personally. But as the OP asks why you're not gaining popularity - you need to keep in mind you're posting as a comic, not a novel. While yes, you can do this paragraph format and it can fit what style you enjoy, the fact is your first episode is what hooks new readers and gets them to keep reading. They're opening your comic expecting a comic - but that first while of scrolling is blocky paragraphs.

If you want to keep this approach however, I recommend trying to trim it down a bit. There's also an over use of the word "galaxy/galaxies" that make it kind of stiff to read. The program Prowritingaid has a free trail that lets you test smaller word counts and might be helpful for analyzing these paragraphs for repetition and readability.

With the comparison that your format in the beginning is more Telling than Showing the reader this is another example:

this part could have had the owner saying these things in speech bubble, to make it more like reading a comic than a picture book. However, personally I think it works since it gives a news coverage feel to the beginning of the story. But I'm also on the fence, cause I know the standard rule to catch readers is to "Show Don't Tell."

I realise this style is probably intentional, but as you're asking why it's not popular - to be blunt these might be reasons why. This style of narrative isn't bad, it's just not as preferred by the general audience. So if you're worried about gaining popularity, these are things to consider.

From the OP to checking it out now, it seems you've changed the thumbnail and blurb. I think you've made good improvements to both of these