Showing 1 to 15 of 15

Perez
Denisse Perez
Brinton
AP European History
09/13/12
The Prince and Utopia Comparison
Perhaps there are issues in the world with which people unanimously agree; government
does not fall within this category. The purpose of government has been greatly

A typical body paragraph
A: Topic Sentence
B: Supporting points
1. Point 1
i) Elaboration of the Point
ii) Examples and Evidence to Support your Point (Quotations and Paraphrases)
iii) Explanation of Evidence
2. Point 2
i) Elaboration of the Point
ii) Exa

Identifying Sentence Problems
1. By the time Julia Roberts was 23, she had won two academy award
nominations, she had also become the world's most popular female actress.
a. fragment
b. fused sentence
c. comma splice
d. choppy
e. correct
2. Since then, Ro

Transitional Devices
Transitional devices are like bridges between parts of your paper. They are cues that help the
reader to interpret ideas a paper develops. Transitional devices are words or phrases that help
carry a thought from one sentence to anothe

Editing Fragments
Fragment or sentence?
1. _ For example, a newcomer might get lost
in the maze of city streets.
2. _Jerry is a person with an interest in fixing
up old houses and apartments.
3. _ An angry motorist blasting his horn
repeatedly and shoutin

Using Transitions
Transition
Idea
Idea
Transitions
Look at the two groups of sentences below.
Which sentences read more smoothly? Click on
an answer below.
My friend, Marcos, loves to play sports and is very athletic.
He has won a scholarship to play foot

Brief Autobiographical Sketch
Denisse Perez
Biographical. There are various things about me that I believe makes me unique. I love to study
languages, especially ones that seem to be underappreciated and those that are not taught in most
schools. I enjoy

Perez
Denisse Perez
Brinton
AP European History
Timeline Essay
As an observer of the past, one cant really do more than study history through what
remains from the battles and dynasties. However, in the novel Timeline, three people are given
the opportuni

Perez
Denisse Perez
Brinton
AP European History
10/17/12
Martin Luther: Revolutionary or Conservative?
History is constantly driven forward by two opposing forces: the necessity for change and
the persistence of the norm. The most drastic events that have

Perez
Denisse Perez
Brinton
AP European History
01/09/13
FRQ Scientific Revolution #3
Preceding the groundbreaking discoveries of the Scientific Revolution, mankind was
under the well-crafted delusion that it was the center of the universe in all respects

Perez
Denisse Perez
Brinton
AP European History
12/05/12
England and France FRQ
The seventeenth century was a time of contrasting conditions between England and
France. Civil war tore at both countries, but England and France addressed the issues that
fol