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Review:

blueirony says:Eep, I forgot to add something! Tack this on to the review I gave you for Chapter 5.

The transition between the ages of Teddy is very noticeable from chapter to chapter. In each one, he grows up a little more. And you can see it. It really is visible. And not just him. Victoire as well. Even smaller characters like Dominique. You said it was one of your strengths. And I definitely agree!

Author's Response: Thanks!! I commented on this in the main response. :) You're too wonderful.