OT: I made a new track today, and I'd really appreciate your feedback on it. S/O to 703 & 757

I just made this track. It’s kind of a new direction for me as far as the subject matter/content, it’s the first time I’ve tried something like this.
I’d really appreciate some feedback from you guys, especially things that you think could be improved upon.

But the song is really good. Your vocal presence really complements the beat. The lyrics are excellent. I like how they aren’t very specific, because that leaves us to put in our own context based on our situation.