this was beautifully written! i usually don't read slash pairings to often but every now and then i find them quite interesting and this was certainly no exception. i really liked the entire plot outline of this story. it was simply and plausible and really fit right in to the cannon moments from the book. you did a wonderful job with characterization, especially for a one-shot. fantastic work. keep up the incredible writing and i look forward to reading more work from you!! (:

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review!! I look forward to you reading more of my work and hope to hear what you think of it. :)