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FremioneEverything was gone. Fred could see only dark void around him; he felt it's smell, he felt it on his skin... Or maybe it was touch of... someone?H: Fred! - he heared from afar - Fred! Come back!He tried to move, but he was crushed to the ground by something.F: Mione! Where are you?! - he shouted, but he didn't hear his own voice.H: Fred! Come back to me! Come back...He tried, but he couldn't find the way.

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I think that every new Fremione is worse than the previous... I really hope that it's only in my head, but I will understand if someone won't like it.In general the plot id wonderful, to me. It's's idea, which she told me to do. She helps me a lot with the ideas! Maron, I'm sorry if You feel disappointed now, but I did my best.Of course let me know what You think of it - COMMENTS!! And... enjoy!

disappointed?? are you insane? xD this one is great and it fits my imagination I had when I told you about it absolutely perfect! the manip of her leaning above him....the picture of Fred behind the hands, everything is perfect, really! come on, let me give you a hug so that you can feel how I feel about your work!