Moka as a human? You know, that's something I haven't seen in any RV fics. It definitely makes for a different kind of story in the naruto/RV crossover department. I would love to see this become its own story as the concept alone makes it a much different one from canon and I'd like to see what would happen with a female human in a monster school.

This would be a good fic this second chapter but with her reaction from the kiss it would have 20 chapters of her whineing about her first kiss then another 30 of her denying that monsters are real befor the fic would get going to the point people want it to be but all an all good job

I think that you should make a story based on the second one because it doesn't just follow the manga/anime while inserting Naruto. It changes the way the story will project itself, at least it should with the way you are writing it. It would also not make it look like a copy and paste version of the unsealed vampire, but it would use the same starting idea that Moka didn't use the rosary