The Silencer

Adam Chandler is in trouble. He has just broken into a building in the middle of the night to complete his research and, as he leaves, there's a hitch: he's not alone.

It becomes apparent that someone is very interested in his research and will stop at nothing to uncover the results. Right now, his priorities are to keep alive for, without the result of his research, the future of planet Earth could be at stake...

Very nicely done! I will admit that I enjoyed it thoroughly. However, your play of words in the middle kinda lost me because I wasn't sure if you were referring to Adam Chandler or The Silencer. The Silencer is obviously an assassin which is cool because he brings a level of intensity to the scene. I think you really wanted to stress Adam's level of nervousness. You can do that by making references to, and this is for example, fidgeting, deep breathing, eyes playing tricks on him, noises that aren't there... things of that nature. I'm looking forward to the next chapter so please continue writing. Awaiting the next part! lol :D