I rather liked this story, but not for the usual reasons. I
didn’t get a bit of titillation from it (I usually don’t from F/f scenes)
but the writing is excellent and there are several parts that are funny
enough that I had to laugh out loud. You can read the whole thing
here. I think the posted story changes from time to time, so I can’t be
certain this link will be valid much into the future. But this one has been
around for at least a few months so perhaps they don’t change it very often,
heh. [Link broken and removed.]