Uhhmmmm...I found the portrayal of the Scorpion child to not be ninja enough. The mother never should have seen the sticky baby fingers coming, and they should have been covered in blood...oh wait...they were.

Great stuff! Scorpion baby be scaaaaary. Can't wait to see it grow up!Good to see the Fire chicken clan getting serious now. Loved the interaction between the Grand Masters, gave me a good chuckle.As for the Mantis part, who said friends can't be bought with koku? For the more critical analysis, that will have to wait a bit. Great read nonetheless.

_________________Mantis Clan • Earth • Shugenja • Spiderman

Interrupt: After you Recruit Daikichi, create a 1F/3C/3PH Mantis Clan • Spider • Nonhuman • Spirit Personality with the ability, "Engage: Enemy Personalities moving from or to the battlefield have -1 Force.

Unfortunately, the Fiction Week is already over and we're awaiting to Spider icons to be mentioned (the Hantei Sword and Shourido). One was stolen and one saved by the Mantis, so I hope to see either Aranai, whose position as Warlord didn't pay out quite as the advertisement of the story prize sounded. As both former Spider and Mantis the now Fudoist monk seems like a great choice for the resolution. But I'd also be happy to see some of our WC4 characters that created ties to the Mantis.

As I said already, I like the new kotei fictions and I'd like to read more Spider ones, so let's have some more Spider icons chosen or as a Spider winner choose another clan's icon.

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