Raised above the cloud curtain, Lietenant Sienna has been dropped in the wasteland thanks to a failed rescue mission. Now, she's in unfamiliar territory and being threatened by a mysterious villain. Can she help her new friends before it's too late?

A meteor impacts the nation of Equestria, Planet Equis. Tranquility is quickly snuffed out when a poison begins to spread violently. The Princesses cannot combat this unknown threat, as no knowledge of it exists. Help comes from an unexpected source.

At the bottom of Stable 10, the great generator that has kept its pegasi alive for 200 years is beginning to fail. As solutions are sought within, one pegasus has set her sights on the very ponies who built - and sabotaged - her home.

Manehatten, for all intents and purposes, is the safest place to live. There's walls. Protection. The Wasteland doesn't seem to have an influence on what happens within the district. All is safe and well, there is nothing for anypony to worry about.

A lot of grammar errors in this one, detracted a little from the story but it was still enjoyable. I didn't realize that the narrator was a female until the mentions of romping, it's sometimes hard to work in the sex of the narrator in first person stories but I might've established that earlier on.

This one was weird, everything from the writing style that seemed like it was out of an old fairy tale to the centered text, the hands thing made me think it was anthro or something (I personally do not like anthro). Hate to say it, but this is my least favorite so far.

10168790Thanks for the answer. Really had to face palm after that.Though what I really meant was what does a Zonkey look like? I don't really think there was enough description to picture Mikaella, or another Zonkey.