I don't mind stories that have abuse as their main theme or unpunished rape as these things happen in real life. However, I do take issue with a story that is written simply so that deviant and depraved actions can be highlighted and glorified for absolutely no reason. The depravity even went against the logic you've used in your own story. Bella can't protect herself, but she was wanted for the Maine purpose of her powerful shield. Everyone treats her abhorrently and she receives absolutely no justice in any way. There is actually nothing in this story that I'd truly resolved.

I have never actually insulted the writer because I didn't like their story, but I am concerned that you created a story for the sole purpose of writing a woman be abused, tortured, imprisoned, and raped. I will not be reading any other story of yours.

Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2015

If you wish to see Bella repeatedly raped by a pig then develope Stockholm syndrome, this is the fic for you. worst piece of trash I've ever read. Made it pretty far in before my urge to vomit overruled my desire to finish. If only in hopes someone would kill off caius.

I really liked this story, right up until the end.
I can't believe that Alec got away with it. I'm sooo disappointed.
Other than that great story

Guest chapter 46 . 2/14/2015

Sorely disappointed with Ch. 46 since it doesn't really feel as things have been resolved. This Bella character seemed to exist for author's pure enjoyment to heap misery upon misery on. Also what about seer Alice's power and why couldn't she know all this was to happen. Finally it's rather incredible that Caius and Athenodora knew about the kidnap plot but did nothing to warn Bella.

I was really enjoying this story untill all this crap happened with Alec, all this rape and shit and the way u are writing it sound like I'm sorry to say it or make u sound bad but its like u enjoy it (even if its just a story) its gone overboard now. My other problem I have is earlier Kate worked with Bella and she could use her shield and expand it over others so why in the world hasn't Bella pulled her big girl panties on and fought back as she hasn't fought back at all. Hope this story starts getting better cause it went from my favourite to non existent since this Alec stuff started, now just before I go yes I understand in ur story the Vamps ate stuck in the old ways from there human days

Guest chapter 46 . 8/30/2014

I can not believe that she never got justice. I will literally never read another of your stories again. Obviously you have a very twisted mind based on your writing style and the events in this story. I'm sorry I've wasted several hours for this. It is truly a dishonor to the time I won't be getting back.

Guest chapter 40 . 8/30/2014

Honestly what the f$$$ are you doing with this story. She's a SHIELD. Does that mean anything to you? You know the ability to keep people from her mind and body? No? Didn't think so because if that had crossed your mind your entire story line would be screwed.

At first I really really enjoyed this story and wondered why it didn't have more reviews but as I continued reading, I now understand. Bellas treatment in this story was absolutely horrendous, I will give you credit I have never read a story f*cked up. There was no end, nothing happened to either Alec or Aro and the fact that you allowed Alec to still be involved with Bella is really disgusting. I dont usually write such strongly worded reviews but I couldn't not write it.

Also, where was Alice and her powers?

However, props to you and your writing for bringing out such strong emotions in your writing whether it's positive or negative.