- fix the spelling mistake (Sciences) on the Bio page and rewrite it - the grammar is very poor.
- Remove the obvious Edinburgh views and festival type pics and the Royals pics too - neither seem relevant to me.
- The pic of Salmond is terrible, I'd take that out too.
- The UK section is particularly strong - good content (with changes above)
Also - use capital letters on India and Uganda too??

- fix the spelling mistake (Sciences) on the Bio page and rewrite it - the grammar is very poor.
- Remove the obvious Edinburgh views and festival type pics and the Royals pics too - neither seem relevant to me.
- The pic of Salmond is terrible, I'd take that out too.
- The UK section is particularly strong - good content (with changes above)

How about this grammar?...
Primarily pursuing documentary portrait photography with a view to covering social issues, my photography will enable business, media and NGO’s to develop articles, reports and any other publications which will require images for the purposes of public relations, social responsibility and advertising.
And then...
Timothy Aikman is from Edinburgh, was educated at the Edinburgh Academy and graduated from Stevenson College in 2003 with a Licentiateship of the British Institute of Professional Photography. He has since graduated from the Open University with a BA Hons. which incorporates his photography and interest in Social Sciences and International Studies.
Predominantly interested in the third world and its peoples, Timothy has combined his work as a documentary photographer with that of an international aid worker. Some of the issues that affect him, and that are reflected in his work, are poverty and AIDS in Africa. Timothy’s work focuses on how individuals cope with such problems and his subjects are active participants in his portraits.
Based in Edinburgh, Timothy is available for editorial and documentary work.
Subtle but possibly better!
Also, what's on page 4?? - comes up blank for me.

How about this grammar?...

Primarily pursuing documentary portrait photography with a view to covering social issues, my photography will enable business, media and NGO’s to develop articles, reports and any other publications which will require images for the purposes of public relations, social responsibility and advertising.

And then...

Timothy Aikman is from Edinburgh, was educated at the Edinburgh Academy and graduated from Stevenson College in 2003 with a Licentiateship of the British Institute of Professional Photography. He has since graduated from the Open University with a BA Hons. which incorporates his photography and interest in Social Sciences and International Studies.

Predominantly interested in the third world and its peoples, Timothy has combined his work as a documentary photographer with that of an international aid worker. Some of the issues that affect him, and that are reflected in his work, are poverty and AIDS in Africa. Timothy’s work focuses on how individuals cope with such problems and his subjects are active participants in his portraits.

Based in Edinburgh, Timothy is available for editorial and documentary work.

Thanks - I was just looking at the writing...
Please ignore page four for the time being - I may just delete that page, or use it for "current and/or future work".
But, first things first - I'll try to get the current pages remedied first!

Thanks - I was just looking at the writing...

Please ignore page four for the time being - I may just delete that page, or use it for "current and/or future work".

But, first things first - I'll try to get the current pages remedied first!