I love that ending! It is amazing. Loved the part about Melissa being fired! Good story

blank chapter 7 . 8/9/2007

Try to have SOME intelligence in the grammar department okay? Names are capitalized. You need a beta - badly. On the other hand, nice try.

Amy chapter 1 . 1/8/2006

I hope you don't mind my pointing it out, but the spelling and punctuation in your story make it difficult to read. For instance, you don't capitalize certain names in the first chapter. That said, I think it's great that you went ahead and posted your first story. Cheers!

Amazing! I love the way Spike took Buffys hand in the last bit, so funny. And a jealous Buffy, that was hilarious. And how sweet was Spike - making breakfast for Buffy. Hating how everyone keeps interrupting them though! First Xander, then Dawn and now 'Melissa'. Great story, please do more ASAP.