I. LOVE. THIS STORY. I love how it's not only 3 different points of view, but that each girl is completely different and has her own story to live. And I really like this quote:

I started to walk up the staircase and Albus, stupidly, started after me. As soon as he set a foot on the staircase, it turned into a giant slide, and both he and I slid down, landing in a pile at the bottom of the stairs. He started to laugh, but I, not seeing anything funny about the situation, stood up, dusted myself down and climbed along the railing up to the girls’ dormitory without so much as a backwards glance. Which was good. Because if I had looked back, he would have realised that I was crying.

I love that you included the POVs of the minor characters in this chapter.
I really like Tim. I think you created a really ineresting character. I love the rest of them too.
I hope you keep writing the story.

Since I can`t send you cookies I`m leaving you a review ;)
I think your story is nice so far. I like the way you spred it in the three points of view. That makes it really interesting.
just one little thing I noticed: in the first chapter you wrote that Rose is now in third year and in this chapter you wrote, after the flashback: "And now, exactly one year from that day...", so she would be in second year. I don`t think that is really importand, I just noticed it.
I`m really looking foreward to read the rest so I`m off to the next chapter. I really enjoy the story.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out! Im doing a big edit at the moment, just done chapter one, but I'll fix that ASAP :)

I'm not the hugest fan of Scorpily. I'm kinda hoping that it won't come to that... ^o^;; It's just a stupid preference... I don't particularly have any reasons for it. I started next-gen fics with Rosius, so anything else feels like a betrayal. ahhaa

That being said, I think your shifts in POV are excellent. They are well timed and move the plot forward.

I ADORE your Lily. I love Rose and Victoire too, but I think your Lily steals the show. She's just so vivacious and cool for an eleven year old. haha. What I would give to be a first year at hogwarts...

sighsighsigh...

Author's Response: Don't worry, I'm not a huge fan of Scorpily either (brilliant name by the way), Rose/Scorpius forever, so don't worry, without ruining it for you, there's plenty of Rose/Scorpius on the way :D thanks for the review, I love Lily too :)

**cringe** okay so bad news first: I'm not a fan of the flashbacks... There were too many of them all clustered together to have the impact it should've had. The flashbacks, instead of being fleshed out, were bits and pieces of Rose's memories that oculd have been just told through narration.

That being said, I think Rose's story is a compelling one. I like the spin on how Albus gravitated towards James because he was the "cool older brother." Hmph! Well Rose will be hot. So THERE!

:D

Good transitions from train to Hogwarts.

Oh~! LOVE LOVE LOVED the Sorting Hat's song.

Author's Response: Oh thanks, constructive criticism is always good! And Rose will so be hot, if Cintia Decker is anything to go by ;) And thanks, I ended up spending about an hour on that, with help from my dad and a rhyming dictionary! LOL :)

I like ALL of your POVS. I think my favorite would have to be Lily's actually. The magic of finally starting hogwarts has such a wonderful quality about it. Lily's happiness is infectious. I love how family dynamics are played out here! Plus - Redhead!Victoire is such love. I bet you she's gorgeous though in everyone else's minds. Oh... your picture for chapter one doesnt work. :D

I'm interested to see where this fic goes.

Author's Response: Oh thanks for pointing that out! Must fix :) Victoire should so up her self-esteem :D

hmm this is really interesting so far! I think i like rose the best, then Lily, then victorie. All the different characters in the weasley/potter clan and all their friends are a little hard to keep track of, but the detail is amazing and the characters seem so realistic. just curious, why did you name the chapter 1.09.2017?

Author's Response: Oh, I'm such a massive nerd with no life that I managed to work out that two years after the last chapter of DH would be 2017, and the first of the ninth (September) sooo. Thanks for review! :)

Yay, finally another chapter!!!
So much goes on in the students' heads during breakfast. You should do another chapter like this, in the point of view of those surrounding the three. I'd like to see James and Scorpious's inner workings sometime =) Another amazing chapter, please update soon =)

I read this chapter a while ago and still can't find the words to capture the awesomeness of this chapter. Hope there's an update coming soon =)

- Alie V

Author's Response: Aw thanks, that's so sweet! I had a MAJOR case of writer's block for a couple weeks back there, but as soon as the queue opens up again I will have Chapter 6 straight in there :) Thanks so much!

Update as soon as possible! I can't wait to see what happens next. Not only do we have a love triangle, but we have a love SQUARE... Oh dearie me, whatever shall Rose and Lily and Scorpius do? Erm... I've had some sugar lately... anyway, please update!

Middle_of_September

Author's Response: Oh yes, A LOVE SQUARE! Ah, don't worry, I frequently have too much sugar. I'm working on a Marauders thingy at the moment but then will be straight back with chapter 6 :) thanks for the review :) x

Author's Response: oh wow thankyou that is so sweet! trying to answer each review, not hard as i've only got one so far, but fingers crossed :) now i will update extra fast for my reviewer...i've already written the next four :) x