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This is rocking! Opening on a man in a puddle -- all the rain -- I immediately imagine it as a movie, dark shadows and sinister music. Then... no, it can't be, it's too cruel... not the "super explodey haiku of oblivion!" Yay. Made me smile. I want to know what happens next -- and what the last line of the haiku is! (Although I suppose, for the sake of the lives of your readers, it should probably not be released...)