Rated 4 / 5 stars2012-06-07 21:29:23

Rated 3 / 5 stars2012-06-07 17:47:56

Not bad. It seems like you're a bit new at this, so I won't go into every detail.

It seeems like your lines aren't very smooth. I don't suppose you're using a graphics tablet? They can be a good investment to make. If you don't have a tablet I would use the pen tool rather than the brush tool (which it looks like you're using).