Aww, I think it's sweet :)
Of course 10/10 as usual for it's sweetness, and they only think I noted was some punctuation; like comma whn there should be natural pauses. Overall, great, like always. It's getting better and I can see your writing improving! :D
Great as usual, Kat.
{Ps. Love the banner! and I have a new story up, I was wondering if maybe, just maybe, you could check it out?}
Anyways sorry, I didnt see this was up. Great lovely story!

Author's Response: I will definitely check it out! Thanks so much for the great review! I love your story too. Thanks again for the review and I hope you continue to enjoy the story! Jenna :)

Hey, it's KatnissMalfoy with the review.
First off, I thought this would be a dark story, but it's actually quite lovely. I enjoyed the characterisation of the twins, however I would like to know more about Katherine. She seems a bit plain, rather boring, but I guess we don't know much about her.
Overall, the plot carried on smoothly, but in the beginning, it is very unclear who Gideon and Fabian are. Also, there needs to commas when the quote ends to complete it, like in "'The password's exordium of
terminus'", ""Welcome to Gryffindor house", "'actually he's my mirror image'", "'Believe me my mother is Worse than yours'", etc.
Plot - 9/10
Characterisation - 8/10
Conventions - 7/10
Overall - 8/10
It was a nice and believable read. I like it because I've never read one when Gred&Forge are first-years. :)
-Kat x

Author's Response: It may seem dark but I think it's just bittersweet. I'm glad you enjoyed the twin's characterization, Katherine seems boring now but she's relateable gal.

Awww again! Stop (but don't really stop) writing adorable stories! Okay so this one was humorous.. It started off a bit slow but got better and better as it went on. Umm I liked it a lot, especially the Blaise and Draco parts (He has no hair!) and (Don't be racist, Blaise. {I found this very funny since Blaise is black aha})
I liked it a ton and the ending was killerxx

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This story is so cool that there's no way to put it.
Okay. Non cliche Audrey+Scott Pilgrim+Percy=amazing story.
10/10. So awesome and I can't wait for more. I love Penelope and the Dr. Who refrences. Awesome story. :)))

Author's Response: Two reviews!? Thank you so much! I'm glad you like this story. :) Percy's just so much like Scott Pilgrim I had to write it. :)

AWW! :) Oh gosh that was amazing! I hate Rose/Scorpius because both of the characters are so unrealistic..
This was REAL love, REAL characters.. I love how Rose has frizzy hair and glasses. I am in love with your story and everything about it. :)

Hi again!
I love the voices in the head, Umbridge, and how the feelings for each other becoming more real!
Overall, a great chapter and I can't wait to hear more.. Because how will Ron react? O__o
Good job! [and btw you nailed the angsty Harry spot on] :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for another amazing review! It means so much to me that you actually enjoy reading this!I really hope you continue to enjoy the story! Thanks again Jenna :)

Cuttteee :) Love the Whovian refrences and the older Mrs Finnegan, I really like this. I just don't understand why Pavarti has blue eyes, but other than that, she's very Pavarti-ish. Great characterisation as we don't know much about Lavender from the books, so I can't wait to read more! :D

Author's Response: Why can't Pavarti have blue eyes? I guess I see where you're coming from, but still.

I really like this (I'm in the time travel contest too). Your descriptions are good, especially of Andromeda and how Teddy wants to look good for Victoire. I really don't enjoy NextGen but this is a pleasant surprise! I can't wait to see how he travels and where :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm in the exact same boat as you, I'm not a big Next Gen fan at all :/ Thank you so much for the lovely review!

Aww good so far! A bit of Dominique/Scorpius too! I like murder mysteries but dislike Scorose, but I'll keep reading.

Author's Response: Hiya! Thank you so much for your review. Quite a few people have a strange dislike for Scorose, lol. But one of my betas who is also a friend of mine despises Scorose and yet she still enjoyed the story, so I'm hoping you will also enjoy the rest. Please, do review again -- and I've still got a Scominique one-shot in my head that I hope to write one day :)

Cute!! I love it.. I love unusual pairings and I've read a few Draco/Lunas but I think this is my favourite. Good job, you kept the plot going throughout and the plot was pretty believable. I normally pair Blaise or Dean or Ron with Luna but this wa a breath a fresh air from all the Neville/Lunas! Yay and good job ~ I'm entered in the same contest, but I have Hermione/Terry Boot o___O

Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks :)

Yeah, I've done a Ron and Luna as well... I love Luna so I've done a few different stories with her...

I really like this, and that's saying something! Sorry, but I'm just not a fan of Second Generation, and I really do not Scorpius/Rose.
But something about this story make it unusual. It's not too cliche but in face it's very cliche. It's very.. enjoyable! I really, really like it! I think it's because I identify TONS with Kate and your portrayal of Rose. Good job!!! 9/10 and I will continue reading for sure! Very enjoyable ! I like your Teddy/Vic oneshot too. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, that was sort of the plan - cliched but not :D
Thanks for the lovely review :)

Heyyy! Yes! It's up! Okay. So good story so far, can't wait to see where this is gonna go. Um your summary is a bit choppy and super boring, just being honest. So yeah, change that. :P CHANGE YOUR SUMMARY!
Other than that, good so far, maybe you need a bit more puntuaction but yeahhh! :) Now I can request your banner and stuff. I guess it's a tiny bit boring, but you had to start the story off. Cool! :) Go Morfina aka Quin and Iris aka Lauren LOL. 9/10 now cuz it's a bit boring but it was a good start and all stories have to start somewhere. Besides, my story doesn't get "good" until like chapter 10, aha.
-Kat/Dory/Marika

Author's Response: yeahh well the reason why it is is choppy is cuz they won't let me put in everything:( it can only be like seriously 3 friggin sentences and idk how to conclude it into 3 sentences

Love it :) I honestly think that your story is getting better from every chapter, and I can't wait for more.. Youre probably bored of my reviews but OH WELL! just one thing; You Know Who should be You-Know-Who.. And I can't wait to see Hermione do paperwork for Weasley's Wizarding Weezes! :) Thanks for all your reviews.
-Kat.

Author's Response: Never going to be bored of your reviews you're too kind! I love your reviews and thanks a lot for taking the time to review. I love your story as well by the way! Jenna :)

I am love with this story! It is beautiful and sad. I want to kill Hannah and Rolf.. They killed everything between Neville and Luna!

Author's Response: Don't hate them too much! This story was all about moving on with life and how people change over time and how that needs to be accepted. Old loves should stay in the past and new ones should be cultivated.

Oh this must be the OC! To be honest, I didn't really like her. She seems kinda fake and too sugary. Blegh :P. Sorry.. I love the rest if the story and I'm pretty happy about a possible Pansy/Theo ship, maybe make Scarlett a bit less so 'cheery on a Monday morning' and 'always smiling' type.. I like the rest; the only thing that would make it better would be a Scarlett put into the noble house of Ravenclaw (don't judge, I'm a Slytherclaw). Uh yeah, great story, go Theo/Pansy, Draco/OC and coming from a longgg shot Harry/Luna or Ron/Luna. But cool story, I love this! And so many thanks for being practically my Beta; I can't respond to reviews on my phone ): I LOVE THIS!
-Kat

Author's Response: awww thank you so very much, you are sooo sweet :) theres more to the OC than just the sweet cliche girl. believe me, this story will NOT be like that. As for the house? I haven't decided yet but I will defininetly consider Ravenclaw. I had a huge writers block and this review cleared up 75% of it :) thanks. You will also get a shout out in the next chapter for all your support. its greatly appreciated
~Dramionedrunadrinny
PS: Slytherclaw for the win!

I like it so far, I really do! Very interesting and I don't even like Dramione stories! One question: why is Blaise Zabini white?
Anyways, 10/10, very well written. :)

Author's Response: Well I'm glad you like it even though you aren't a Dramione fan! As for Blaise being white, it's just how I've always imagined him haha but yes, I know he's black in the films. Thank you for your review!