Shane is the mermaid who is very tall ( amazonish), when she's on land- and muscular. Jack is a little guy - I dont explain these well, so ask her for information lol.No critique desired please ( Im tired)

I love those scales and the way they sparkle, and the dude's poker face and how he's all "...wtf am i doing here" kinda thing.

Okay I know you said no critiques and (I can't blame you xD) but erm, I feel the mermaid's arms should be a tad thinner as well as her hands to make them look a bit more femenin, no matter how muscular she is. That's all x)