Hey! I have noticed that your writng is amazing ,a nd you seem to know alot about MegaMan NT Acess. I was going to write a fanfic about RollXMegaman , Roll would get kiddnapped in Internet City , and Megaman would try to save it ,but i really don't know much about the story , so if you wanted to , you could write it. It would be amazing! Like all your other storys )

Lady: WAH IT'S OVER...yay now i can make a big review on how good it is...

lady: wait...i can;t do that without Billie...where is she..oh yeah...

::Billie and Megaman still in a wrestling match:: BILLIE STOP SCRAPPING AND COME OVER HERE!

Billie: BUT...IAM...WINNING...okay

::Billie and MegaMan drag themselves over::

Lady; I dont know why your fighting her...shouldn't you be more mature than this

MegaMan: ...she started it.. and Iam defending myself-OW

::Both Billie and Megaman are pulled painfully up by a familiar cahracter::

ProtoMan: MegaMan what ARE YOU DOING?

Billie: LET GO YOU-OMG...OMG...!

ProtoMan: who is this and ::to lady:: who are you?

MegaMan: OW-that's-OW Billie and Lady-

ProtoMan: Billie...Oh no Not YOU

Billie: ::rips of her jacket and shows her "I love Protoman" shirt(A/N: no i don't know where she got that)

Billie: PROTOMAN WE!

Lady: uh-oh...man you better run

ProtoMan: I remember you, your're that stalker that kept following me everywhere...KEEP HER AWAY FROM ME OR SHE GETS IT!

Lady: you stalked him..-_-

Billie: ::heart shapes for eyes at ProtoMan:: precious!

Lady: Billie what have I told you about stalkin' people?

Billie... WE ::attacks Protoman::

Protoman: AH IAM OUT OF HERE, LET'S GO MEGAMAN.

MegaMan: but i want to help with the review!

Protoman: the what...-_-

Billie: YAY! ::tackles ProtoMan::

::HUGE racket::

Lady: anyways, good job with the story, I LOVED IT!

MegaMan: :: overviewing story:: wait, i do WHAT! HEY THAT'S NOT-

Billie: ::pauses with attack::OH MAKE ONE ABOUT PROTOMAN!

ProtoMan: make one of what?

Billie: STORY DAMMIT, JEEZ I THOUGHT YOU WERE SMART!

Protoman: ...are you calling me stupid...::fumming::

Billie: yes- OW WAH HE HIT ME- OW STOP-AH

Protoman: OKAY I HAVE ENOUGH ::GOES ON THE OFFENSIVE::

::NOW A REALLY BIG FIGHT IS GOING ON!::

Lady: okay we have to go savebillie but i really loved the plot and how you developed from a conflict with one navi to the main character-

MegaMan: ::still reading:: I DID WHAT!

Lady: - And the imagery you used so we knew exactly what the characters were doing! We hope you create a new story soon, so thanks from Lady of the Shire and Billie...who is in a crisis- PROTOMAN SHE IS A GIRL!

ProtoMan: no she isn't,she is AN ANIMAL!

Lady: okay let's go help...MegaMan...?

MegaMan: I WAS BADD?

Lady: oh no

MegaMan: i killed who and did what? ::crying::

::runs over to Protoman- beating up on Billie, who has launched her theeth into his arm- ouch:: MegaMan: readthis!

Protoman: ::multi tasking:: man you go screwed...up

MegaMan: -_- okay i can accept this...NO I CAN'T WAH! ::pulls out a longsword:: WHERE IS THIS ALISI!

Lady: uh-oh okay iam going to stop now before you get to any moral danger

I like the explanation you have for Megaman's problems and how he wasn't deleted. That was put together very well. :-)

I have to say that the ending was a little odd. I can understand earaches, (I've had one before, I hate them) but I can hardly see Chaud shedding tears at the end. I like the last relationship you had with Lan and Maylu, it really sounded nice.

Well I think this story was very interesting over all. You did a good job Alisi! Congratulations!

This chapter was a little short, but I liked it just the same. There's one little problem though. Not in the writing, you wrote this chapter alright, but something else. I find it hard to believe that Megaman would be in danger of deletion after being shot by just three charged electric blasts. Just three? He is stronger than that. Oh well, I do like the scene with Lan and Maylu. It is pretty nice how she tries to comfort him and how they both feel for Megaman. I hope your writer's block goes away, I can't wait for the finale!