It seems like the Deathbanes would be happy to have people killing Deaths, even if they weren’t the same person. Why do they only let “born Deathsbanes” (which I’m guessing means “knighted Deathsbanes”) get swords and training?

I suppose for training it’s easier to teach yourself than somebody else, but why aren’t they selling the swords to anybody who does want one (even if so few people who aren’t them do)?

I liked it! You gave a really good sense of Moque's personality, I thought, and the familiars running around after their wizards were gone were a nice touch that made me smile. The last section seemed very abrupt to me, though.

(Also, maybe it makes sense to move the "This story was inspired by a Tumblr post" notice to the end of the story, not the beginning? I clicked on the link and read the post before I read your story, and so already knew about the twist...)

It occurred to me as I was telling my mom about the story - did Moque ever get knighted herself? I assumed it only worked on infants, but I also assumed that every Deathsbane to get a sword had to be knighted first, and she does end up getting her sword. So did they just decide to fudge the rules for her or something? Or is it that the rule really is just "born Deathsbanes" not "Deathsbanes knighted as infants", and so she manages to get in on that technicality?