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Review:

sweetgrl1988 says:wow...this was a powerful chapter! i love those short sentence-d paragraph things...it makes that part seem almost rushed and jumbled, its a nice touch. i would say this is a nasty cliffhanger...if i couldnt just press that little next button...lol

Author's Response: I’m glad you like the pace, it’s a pity you did not read the story when published... I could have tortured you with the wait for the next chapter.