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Thursday, October 1, 2009

The Sneeze Unsavored

It's a good thing that I have a whole bunch backed up because I almost didn't even get one posted today! What a terrible way to start out. Anyway, hope you enjoy this one...

The Sneeze Unsavored

Poised, tenaciously hunched overI wait for blast-off like some intrepid astronautThe anticipation, the creeping tickleSpreading through my nasal cavity implores immediate actionBracing, rapidly inhalingThe fuel to spread those noxious bodies at amazing speeds into space… …Stupefied, but still hoveringThe moment must surely be upon meFrustrated, and tenseWhen the hell is it just going to happen?Exasperated, and unresolvedA dull throb indicates no glorious climax, no soothing relief – and a glorious moment wasted