I'm having trouble writing the description for containment of SCP-XXXX; it comes out very forceful and repetitive, instead of clear and calculated. Perhaps the Foundation community would help with some tips, it'd be greatly appreciated.
Overall my concern is making it sound right, not just copied and pasted, slapped together with too much description and too little proper SCP style.

We can't really help you unless you tell us what you're writing about. As the pitfalls essay points out, Special Containment Procedures should be directly related to the specific anomalous properties of the object or entity in question; therefore by definition we can't help you unless you tell us what you're containing. :)

Terribly sorry about that, I knew giving that information would be detrimental for one to help me but at the same time didn't want to come across as asking to have it written for me by slapping down some details and leaving it be.
The object in question that I'm working on now I've personally titled for myself the 'moral compass', a pocketwatch of gold-plated lead that causes the possessor to become more than righteously indignant, and the formation of delusions thus having the individual become a, for the sake of brevity, an overbearing nutball bent on the destruction of those deemed evil, even at the expense of their own lives.
A safe contained object at the reliquary of Research Sector-15, level 4 access.

The key with containment procedures is you only list the things exceptional about it. You don't need to describe what happens to someone who breaks the rules, or the kind of door you use, or even the dimensions unless that is directly relevant to the SCP

For example, say you have a plant who's spores can dissolve certain types of metal and when breathed by humans turn them into zombies. All you need is the following:

"SCP-XXXX is to be stored in a standard flora containment chamber at site XX. The chamber is to have its own recirculating air supply. The construction of the chamber is not to include [list of metals susceptible to SCP-XXXX]. Personnel entering containment must be equipped with a bio-hazard level 4 suit and isolated air supply. Any personnel or objects leaving containment are to be sterilized and quarantined for a period of no less than 6 hours."

Nothing in there about guards, punishments, lighting, anything like that. Just the items specific to that object.