Images 11, 13, 16. Are the three that fit the assignment best. Granted I like to have more eye contact with the camera, but these are strong images and good use of the environments. I would see if you can add two more environments for the series. These images seem to be those that fill out the various facets of an individual. What might these images be. Maintain your subject to camera distance, the closer shots are well done, but these images don't use the space to add insight about the person.

most of the close up pictures have good lighting and perspective. but you have a lot of different elements in your photographs and it kind of confuses me. for most of the pictures, your model is wet and then all of a sudden appears dry. i would also try to put more of the environment in the pictures so people can see where and why she's wet.