Feeling My Pain

Below is the poem entitled Feeling My Pain which was written by poet
Mark
Goodson. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Feeling My Pain

I’m feelen the pain
and I’m hurten again
I’m somebody’s fool -here sitten on this bar stool
Tied to your chain
Bleeden like a hog
Getten drunk as a dog
I’m liven in a dream world- made up make believe world
Feeling my pain
Feeling my pain
Of loven you again
Where I’m gona go now
How my gona stand now
while lying in the pouren rain
Loves gone away
Pains come back to stay
I’m feelen the strain now
Hurten again now
Feelen my pain
You’d said you’d be true
Not to make me a fool
But you slipped up again now- lied to me again now
Cause you’re the girl of my dreams
I can’t get away
You’re in my heart to stay
I’m liven in a dream world - made up make believe world
Feeling my pain

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Good luck with geeting this put to music, Mark. What an added pleasure to take this journey with your musically gifted son. I do feel the country-esque beat in this write. Let me know when I can hear it on You Tube. Joe

I agree that one must fight for love too.This lyric poem has been put to music by my youngest son who is a music performer, He had challenged me to write him a country sad song. We love the country music we came up with to these lyrics. Hope to have it on YOU TUBE shortly.

Just a good old fashion "cry your heart out" "beer drinken song.This lyric poem has been put to music by my youngest son who is a music performer, He had challenged me to write him a country sad song. We love the country music we came up with to these lyrics. Hope to have it on YOU TUBE shortly.