Red

Everyone called her Red.
From the brown piercing eyes to the blazing red hair; she was perfect and what everyone wanted to be; beautiful, funny and confident. However, no ones perfect. Behind all the glamorous beauty, Red was oblivious and naive. To put it in simpler words "Stupid"
Red was happy. She had everything she wanted and she was actually a genuinely gleeful girl. But all the happiness drains when a certain boy steps into her life.
Damon Cooper: the bad boy in town who was also said to be the leader of the gang Hell Boys. Cooper was home schooled for a while when he was forced to enroll to this school by his new foster parents. Red and Cooper were the complete opposite. She had the happy-go-lucky attitude and he was a dangerous loner that no one wanted to be friends with, well, except for Red.
Throw in a couple of mishaps, drama and a sprinkle of love and you'll get the story of our dear beloved Red and how she managed to get herself and Damon into a pit of problems.
~~~idreamibelieve

Yay! Ariana <3
A very nice chapter! You were detailed and knew how to make the story fun to read, i really enjoyed it!
Though, I do think you should watch your punctuation, because there were quite a number of them.
But other then that, it's nice! Keep writing!