Critics invited !

Feel free to critisize, but bare in mind that I'm trying to learn to draw on my own, without any teachers or special lessons, so your words really matter to me and my future as an artist (if there is any )

Hi there. Like you I've learnt (and am learning) on my own - can be tough at times.

My favorite is definately the second - which in my oppinion could be even better if you lighten up the shade on her zygoma closest to the viewer (*her* right).

The others are weaker. General advice is to study proportions, like for example the woman with the burning hand has an enormous sword hand compared to the rest of her body. Also her arm-jewelery has a weird perspective and seems flat.

The knight is also proportionally-challenged (too short forearms and wobbly posture).

Just keep it going. You have a ways to go until you hit the next level and the only way to get there is to draw and draw. Draw things from realy life, take a life drawing class (nude) and just keep drawing like your life depends on it. Try to put more of yourself into your work, make it personal. Learn about Joseph Campbell and Carl Jung. Images have power in them, seek this source.

Yes russell I'm the same Artox from the stereovision forums !
I really would like to put everything aside for drawing markwagner, however I'm studying internatiobal economic affairs, which actually doesn't leave enough time for drawing as much as I would like.