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Wow, this is a captivating prequel, Mazier. Your descriptions of the King's gradual descent into madness flowed very well, and I was swiftly pulled into the story. His descent, within itself, was also done splendidly. The king feared for the end of his reign, and to a certain level, for the well-being of his family, which is a trait that helps accented the human side of him. This fear, however, drove him to madness and murder, a tale of tragedy that went further as fate itself played out against him. A well written prologue that had me wondering what is going to happen next, good job!

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Sat, September 2nd, 2017 9:26am

Thank you so much for such a kind comment! I hope you'll enjoy the following chapters too, soon I'll update it, this is one of my writing experiments and I hope one day many people will enjoy it :) I'll give it my best!