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Latest revelation Cal, the capital of Britannia is called Pendragon. They sure love the Arthurian names don't you think?

Think the two new Princesses of Guinvere and Carline will be making an appearance alongside Odysseus sometime in your story? I'd also like word on if the Glaston Knights insertion we discussed a while back is still on the board.

Ugh, yeah, I've been sort of following on the ex-post facto revelations Sunrise is making. The most troublesome of all? That the EU stands for Euorpean Universe. What the heck is that? I'm sticking with European Union, or simply EU, whenever I can. I suppose I'll start working the Proper Names of locations into my fic when it is convenient to do so; Darwin street, Pendragon and what not.

I think the other two princesses and Odysseus will make an appearance, but as to the size and nature of the role... I'm not sure. I'll have to wait and see. The Gladstone knights may appear--I'll use them if it is convenient--but their role will be limited because I don't think any of them had a significant number of lines.

Heh, I know what you mean Cal, some of the revelations that come a wee bit late can be highly annoying when you've already used what was thought to have been canon. I totally agree with you, just roll with what you have already written.

Well I suppose I should advertise myself here then.

Prince or Zero?
Chapters: 21
Length: 56,822
Summary: Basically it's an alternate universe fic where Lelouch remained a prince and was the one primarily responsible for the invasion of Japan.

After watching episode 13 I couldn't help myself from writing this(So it could contain possible spoilers, be warned). I have to warn you this was written just after I finished watching the episode, also my Beta is MIA so grammar and spelling may be lacking. This also may seem a little cheesy and rushed, but as stated before; I couldn't help myself.

Spoiler for To be the man she deserves:

Warning: Spoilers for Episode 13.

Word Count: 1,435.

Pairings: Lelouch/Shirley.

Summary: She may have loved him but he didn't deserve it.

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As he wandered aimlessly through the corridors of the hospital Lelouch could only wonder where it all went wrong. The day had started out bumpy but overall it was a success; Jeremiah Gottwald, a person who could have been a potential dangerous foe, had joined his side. The conquest of the Chinese Federation was proceeding as well, and soon enough he would have Kallen back, everything was proceeding was planned.

All except for one thing; Shirley.

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Physical activity was obviously not his strong suit, Lelouch concluded, as he sprinted up and down the endless escalators. Barking orders on the cell-phone while running did not help either it seemed. “Don’t fight him,” The person on the other end of the phone made a confused noise, “He is one of us now!” Lelouch closed his phone, skipping the last step of the escalator, he was about to turn down another corridor when something caught his eye.

Orange mixed with crimsons-red. Even though it was hard to see in the smoke Lelouch recognized what it was instantly, or rather who it was.

“Shirley!” Adrenaline and fear pumping through him Lelouch ran to Shirley’s side instantly.

There she was lying eagle-spread, a gun by her side, eyes closed….it almost looked like she was sleeping if not for the pool of blood spilling from under her. Lelouch kneeled down to her side, when he did pale eyelids slide back and revealed olive colored irises, the energy that seemed to bounce from them draining.

“Lelou?” The name was soft-spoken, lacking the usual energy or anger, it possessed a tone that suggested this was the end; a tone the Black Prince hated above all others, “I am so glad I get to speak with you in the end….” Suddenly Shirley started cough, blood started to pour from her mouth. Panicking Lelouch drew his cell phone and called a doctor, begging for Shirley to hold on.

She had tried to stop him, telling him it was useless but he refused to accept it.

“Shirley please,” Lelouch was fighting back tears as he watched the ambulance load her into the van with a stretcher, “Promise me one thing,” He watched as she turned her beautiful face toward him, expectant; a face that shouldn’t have been caught up in politics or war, a face that deserved happiness more than he ever did.

Lelouch swallowed the lump in his throat as he struggled to finish his sentence, “Don’t die”. It wasn’t spoken with the usual imperial like voice, nor was it spoken with the school-boy lightness. It was just a quite simple two word request.

Shirley just nodded before collapsing onto the stretcher.

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That all happened nearly an hour ago, Shirley and the EMP’s had arrived only six minutes after departing from the building she was found in. As soon as they reached the hospital, the doctors rushed Shirley into intensive care, where they were still operating.

At the nurse’s persistence Lelouch attempted to eat something from the cafeteria but found he was unable to eat, there was still the image of Shirley in his mind; stained with blood. It still surprised him though, no matter how much misfortune befallen her because of his actions she still loved him.

But could he love her back? Could he love her back and be the kind of man she deserves. Crushing the cheap plastic water cup in his hand Lelouch wondered if he deserved her. He, who put her in the middle of this and caused her all this pain, it was him after all who had caused her father to die, and it was him who re-wrote her memories. Even though a year later she fell in love with him again.

Lelouch didn’t get a chance to think any further as one of the doctors tapped him on the shoulder. Looking up Lelouch noticed that the ER room light off, he must of not of noticed Shirley being moved, “You are Lelouch Lamperouge here for Shirley Fenette correct?” Lelouch just nodded, “Good, will you please come with me.” Lelouch rose from his seat, fearing the worst.

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The doctor led him down a series of corridors and Lelouch just followed aimlessly not even thinking of where he was going. All the while thoughts of the inevitable running through his mind; another loved one lost because of his actions. First Euphie, then Nunnally and now Shirley, before that it was his mother, all this time he kept losing people and he never got use to it.

Lelouch was surprised when the tall, muscular doctor, stopped in front of him. Not having time to react Lelouch walked straight into the doctors back before falling backwards on his behind.

The doctor not even noticing just glanced down at his clipboard and then at the room number. Room number 316, which was where they stopped. Lelouch struggled to his feet and waited for the doctor to elaborate.

“I will be bunt Mister Lamperouge,” The man spoke gravely and Lelouch resisted the urge to flinch. This was it, Shirley was dead, and he knew it.

“That you both are incredibly lucky that you called us when you did.”

Lelouch’s eyes winded. Could it be true that, was Shirley...
The doctor saw Lelouch’s expression of disbelief, “Yes boy she’s alive” He stated simply, he reached for the door handle, “The girls’ mom just told me you can spend the night with her here if you want.” Lelouch just nodded dumbly as the man unlocked the door letting Lelouch in.

And there she was, sleeping peacefully on the bed, like an angel. The doctor quietly reminded Lelouch that she needed her rest and told him not to wake her. Lelouch just nodded and quickly thanked the doctor before closing the door gently. Slowly Lelouch approached the hospital bed and as if sensing his presence Shirley’s eyes fluttered open.

Groggily Shirley turned to one side, taking note of her surroundings and noticed her dark-haired crush, no love, kneeling by her bedside.

“Lelou?” The boy raised his head at the sound of his name and Shirley was able to study his face more closely. His normal clear amethyst eyes were puffy and red, indicating many shed tears. Softly she reached out a hand to caress his face, “Lelou…why did you save me?” Lelouch looked at her with a wounded expression and Shirley regretted asking.

The spent a few minutes in uneasy silence before Lelouch asked what happened. Calming herself Shirley explained everything; her memories returning, how she couldn’t keep herself from forgiving him, and most importantly her love for him. By the end of her story she was in tears clinging to Lelouch awkwardly from her bedside.

All the while he stood there running his hands through her hair, whispering words of apologies. Slowly the lump in his throat Lelouch explained everything to Shirley as she did to him; Zero, his time in Britannia, his friendship with Suzaku, and even the incident with Euphie.

They remained there well into the night, talking, and occasionally crying whilst seeking comfort from each other. The conversation drifted from serious topics, like the rebellion, to light-hearted ones, like childhood stories. Eventually they drifted back onto the topic that was both on there minds.

Lelouch took a deep breath and spoke first, “Shirley all of this time you have continued to love me even though you deserve someone much better than I…” He cupped one of her hands in his own and gently placed is forehead against it, “But…I want to work towards being that someone…” As if paying homage to his master Lelouch bowed his head to Shirley. Of course in his mind Shirley was far more beautiful and graceful than any Empress who has ever lived.

Lelouch sucked in another deep breath and raised himself so they were at eye level
“What I am trying to say is ….I love you Shirley.” And unlike last time he was sure of it.

And there it was the words she had been waiting for all this time. Part of her doubted it but there something in her that strove to believe him. So she did. Feeling bold Shirley placed one hand on the back of her prince’s head, guiding him towards her.

Before there lips made the orange-haired Britannian whispered a few words of her own against the prince’s lips.

“And I love you.”

And pressed her lips against his.

Lelouch knew that doing this would possibly endanger both of them. However he would hold true to his promise and strive to be the man that Shirley deserved.

After watching episode 13 I couldn't help myself from writing this(So it could contain possible spoilers, be warned). I have to warn you this was written just after I finished watching the episode, also my Beta is MIA so grammar and spelling may be lacking. This also may seem a little cheesy and rushed, but as stated before; I couldn't help myself.

Spoiler for To be the man she deserves:

Warning: Spoilers for Episode 13.

Word Count: 1,435.

Pairings: Lelouch/Shirley.

Summary: She may have loved him but he didn't deserve it.

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As he wandered aimlessly through the corridors of the hospital Lelouch could only wonder where it all went wrong. The day had started out bumpy but overall it was a success; Jeremiah Gottwald, a person who could have been a potential dangerous foe, had joined his side. The conquest of the Chinese Federation was proceeding as well, and soon enough he would have Kallen back, everything was proceeding was planned.

All except for one thing; Shirley.

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Physical activity was obviously not his strong suit, Lelouch concluded, as he sprinted up and down the endless escalators. Barking orders on the cell-phone while running did not help either it seemed. “Don’t fight him,” The person on the other end of the phone made a confused noise, “He is one of us now!” Lelouch closed his phone, skipping the last step of the escalator, he was about to turn down another corridor when something caught his eye.

Orange mixed with crimsons-red. Even though it was hard to see in the smoke Lelouch recognized what it was instantly, or rather who it was.

“Shirley!” Adrenaline and fear pumping through him Lelouch ran to Shirley’s side instantly.

There she was lying eagle-spread, a gun by her side, eyes closed….it almost looked like she was sleeping if not for the pool of blood spilling from under her. Lelouch kneeled down to her side, when he did pale eyelids slide back and revealed olive colored irises, the energy that seemed to bounce from them draining.

“Lelou?” The name was soft-spoken, lacking the usual energy or anger, it possessed a tone that suggested this was the end; a tone the Black Prince hated above all others, “I am so glad I get to speak with you in the end….” Suddenly Shirley started cough, blood started to pour from her mouth. Panicking Lelouch drew his cell phone and called a doctor, begging for Shirley to hold on.

She had tried to stop him, telling him it was useless but he refused to accept it.

“Shirley please,” Lelouch was fighting back tears as he watched the ambulance load her into the van with a stretcher, “Promise me one thing,” He watched as she turned her beautiful face toward him, expectant; a face that shouldn’t have been caught up in politics or war, a face that deserved happiness more than he ever did.

Lelouch swallowed the lump in his throat as he struggled to finish his sentence, “Don’t die”. It wasn’t spoken with the usual imperial like voice, nor was it spoken with the school-boy lightness. It was just a quite simple two word request.

Shirley just nodded before collapsing onto the stretcher.

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That all happened nearly an hour ago, Shirley and the EMP’s had arrived only six minutes after departing from the building she was found in. As soon as they reached the hospital, the doctors rushed Shirley into intensive care, where they were still operating.

At the nurse’s persistence Lelouch attempted to eat something from the cafeteria but found he was unable to eat, there was still the image of Shirley in his mind; stained with blood. It still surprised him though, no matter how much misfortune befallen her because of his actions she still loved him.

But could he love her back? Could he love her back and be the kind of man she deserves. Crushing the cheap plastic water cup in his hand Lelouch wondered if he deserved her. He, who put her in the middle of this and caused her all this pain, it was him after all who had caused her father to die, and it was him who re-wrote her memories. Even though a year later she fell in love with him again.

Lelouch didn’t get a chance to think any further as one of the doctors tapped him on the shoulder. Looking up Lelouch noticed that the ER room light off, he must of not of noticed Shirley being moved, “You are Lelouch Lamperouge here for Shirley Fenette correct?” Lelouch just nodded, “Good, will you please come with me.” Lelouch rose from his seat, fearing the worst.

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The doctor led him down a series of corridors and Lelouch just followed aimlessly not even thinking of where he was going. All the while thoughts of the inevitable running through his mind; another loved one lost because of his actions. First Euphie, then Nunnally and now Shirley, before that it was his mother, all this time he kept losing people and he never got use to it.

Lelouch was surprised when the tall, muscular doctor, stopped in front of him. Not having time to react Lelouch walked straight into the doctors back before falling backwards on his behind.

The doctor not even noticing just glanced down at his clipboard and then at the room number. Room number 316, which was where they stopped. Lelouch struggled to his feet and waited for the doctor to elaborate.

“I will be bunt Mister Lamperouge,” The man spoke gravely and Lelouch resisted the urge to flinch. This was it, Shirley was dead, and he knew it.

“That you both are incredibly lucky that you called us when you did.”

Lelouch’s eyes winded. Could it be true that, was Shirley...
The doctor saw Lelouch’s expression of disbelief, “Yes boy she’s alive” He stated simply, he reached for the door handle, “The girls’ mom just told me you can spend the night with her here if you want.” Lelouch just nodded dumbly as the man unlocked the door letting Lelouch in.

And there she was, sleeping peacefully on the bed, like an angel. The doctor quietly reminded Lelouch that she needed her rest and told him not to wake her. Lelouch just nodded and quickly thanked the doctor before closing the door gently. Slowly Lelouch approached the hospital bed and as if sensing his presence Shirley’s eyes fluttered open.

Groggily Shirley turned to one side, taking note of her surroundings and noticed her dark-haired crush, no love, kneeling by her bedside.

“Lelou?” The boy raised his head at the sound of his name and Shirley was able to study his face more closely. His normal clear amethyst eyes were puffy and red, indicating many shed tears. Softly she reached out a hand to caress his face, “Lelou…why did you save me?” Lelouch looked at her with a wounded expression and Shirley regretted asking.

The spent a few minutes in uneasy silence before Lelouch asked what happened. Calming herself Shirley explained everything; her memories returning, how she couldn’t keep herself from forgiving him, and most importantly her love for him. By the end of her story she was in tears clinging to Lelouch awkwardly from her bedside.

All the while he stood there running his hands through her hair, whispering words of apologies. Slowly the lump in his throat Lelouch explained everything to Shirley as she did to him; Zero, his time in Britannia, his friendship with Suzaku, and even the incident with Euphie.

They remained there well into the night, talking, and occasionally crying whilst seeking comfort from each other. The conversation drifted from serious topics, like the rebellion, to light-hearted ones, like childhood stories. Eventually they drifted back onto the topic that was both on there minds.

Lelouch took a deep breath and spoke first, “Shirley all of this time you have continued to love me even though you deserve someone much better than I…” He cupped one of her hands in his own and gently placed is forehead against it, “But…I want to work towards being that someone…” As if paying homage to his master Lelouch bowed his head to Shirley. Of course in his mind Shirley was far more beautiful and graceful than any Empress who has ever lived.

Lelouch sucked in another deep breath and raised himself so they were at eye level
“What I am trying to say is ….I love you Shirley.” And unlike last time he was sure of it.

And there it was the words she had been waiting for all this time. Part of her doubted it but there something in her that strove to believe him. So she did. Feeling bold Shirley placed one hand on the back of her prince’s head, guiding him towards her.

Before there lips made the orange-haired Britannian whispered a few words of her own against the prince’s lips.

“And I love you.”

And pressed her lips against his.

Lelouch knew that doing this would possibly endanger both of them. However he would hold true to his promise and strive to be the man that Shirley deserved.

After watching episode 13 I couldn't help myself from writing this(So it could contain possible spoilers, be warned). I have to warn you this was written just after I finished watching the episode, also my Beta is MIA so grammar and spelling may be lacking. This also may seem a little cheesy and rushed, but as stated before; I couldn't help myself.

Spoiler for To be the man she deserves:

Warning: Spoilers for Episode 13.

Word Count: 1,435.

Pairings: Lelouch/Shirley.

Summary: She may have loved him but he didn't deserve it.

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As he wandered aimlessly through the corridors of the hospital Lelouch could only wonder where it all went wrong. The day had started out bumpy but overall it was a success; Jeremiah Gottwald, a person who could have been a potential dangerous foe, had joined his side. The conquest of the Chinese Federation was proceeding as well, and soon enough he would have Kallen back, everything was proceeding was planned.

All except for one thing; Shirley.

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Physical activity was obviously not his strong suit, Lelouch concluded, as he sprinted up and down the endless escalators. Barking orders on the cell-phone while running did not help either it seemed. “Don’t fight him,” The person on the other end of the phone made a confused noise, “He is one of us now!” Lelouch closed his phone, skipping the last step of the escalator, he was about to turn down another corridor when something caught his eye.

Orange mixed with crimsons-red. Even though it was hard to see in the smoke Lelouch recognized what it was instantly, or rather who it was.

“Shirley!” Adrenaline and fear pumping through him Lelouch ran to Shirley’s side instantly.

There she was lying eagle-spread, a gun by her side, eyes closed….it almost looked like she was sleeping if not for the pool of blood spilling from under her. Lelouch kneeled down to her side, when he did pale eyelids slide back and revealed olive colored irises, the energy that seemed to bounce from them draining.

“Lelou?” The name was soft-spoken, lacking the usual energy or anger, it possessed a tone that suggested this was the end; a tone the Black Prince hated above all others, “I am so glad I get to speak with you in the end….” Suddenly Shirley started cough, blood started to pour from her mouth. Panicking Lelouch drew his cell phone and called a doctor, begging for Shirley to hold on.

She had tried to stop him, telling him it was useless but he refused to accept it.

“Shirley please,” Lelouch was fighting back tears as he watched the ambulance load her into the van with a stretcher, “Promise me one thing,” He watched as she turned her beautiful face toward him, expectant; a face that shouldn’t have been caught up in politics or war, a face that deserved happiness more than he ever did.

Lelouch swallowed the lump in his throat as he struggled to finish his sentence, “Don’t die”. It wasn’t spoken with the usual imperial like voice, nor was it spoken with the school-boy lightness. It was just a quite simple two word request.

Shirley just nodded before collapsing onto the stretcher.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

That all happened nearly an hour ago, Shirley and the EMP’s had arrived only six minutes after departing from the building she was found in. As soon as they reached the hospital, the doctors rushed Shirley into intensive care, where they were still operating.

At the nurse’s persistence Lelouch attempted to eat something from the cafeteria but found he was unable to eat, there was still the image of Shirley in his mind; stained with blood. It still surprised him though, no matter how much misfortune befallen her because of his actions she still loved him.

But could he love her back? Could he love her back and be the kind of man she deserves. Crushing the cheap plastic water cup in his hand Lelouch wondered if he deserved her. He, who put her in the middle of this and caused her all this pain, it was him after all who had caused her father to die, and it was him who re-wrote her memories. Even though a year later she fell in love with him again.

Lelouch didn’t get a chance to think any further as one of the doctors tapped him on the shoulder. Looking up Lelouch noticed that the ER room light off, he must of not of noticed Shirley being moved, “You are Lelouch Lamperouge here for Shirley Fenette correct?” Lelouch just nodded, “Good, will you please come with me.” Lelouch rose from his seat, fearing the worst.

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The doctor led him down a series of corridors and Lelouch just followed aimlessly not even thinking of where he was going. All the while thoughts of the inevitable running through his mind; another loved one lost because of his actions. First Euphie, then Nunnally and now Shirley, before that it was his mother, all this time he kept losing people and he never got use to it.

Lelouch was surprised when the tall, muscular doctor, stopped in front of him. Not having time to react Lelouch walked straight into the doctors back before falling backwards on his behind.

The doctor not even noticing just glanced down at his clipboard and then at the room number. Room number 316, which was where they stopped. Lelouch struggled to his feet and waited for the doctor to elaborate.

“I will be bunt Mister Lamperouge,” The man spoke gravely and Lelouch resisted the urge to flinch. This was it, Shirley was dead, and he knew it.

“That you both are incredibly lucky that you called us when you did.”

Lelouch’s eyes winded. Could it be true that, was Shirley...
The doctor saw Lelouch’s expression of disbelief, “Yes boy she’s alive” He stated simply, he reached for the door handle, “The girls’ mom just told me you can spend the night with her here if you want.” Lelouch just nodded dumbly as the man unlocked the door letting Lelouch in.

And there she was, sleeping peacefully on the bed, like an angel. The doctor quietly reminded Lelouch that she needed her rest and told him not to wake her. Lelouch just nodded and quickly thanked the doctor before closing the door gently. Slowly Lelouch approached the hospital bed and as if sensing his presence Shirley’s eyes fluttered open.

Groggily Shirley turned to one side, taking note of her surroundings and noticed her dark-haired crush, no love, kneeling by her bedside.

“Lelou?” The boy raised his head at the sound of his name and Shirley was able to study his face more closely. His normal clear amethyst eyes were puffy and red, indicating many shed tears. Softly she reached out a hand to caress his face, “Lelou…why did you save me?” Lelouch looked at her with a wounded expression and Shirley regretted asking.

The spent a few minutes in uneasy silence before Lelouch asked what happened. Calming herself Shirley explained everything; her memories returning, how she couldn’t keep herself from forgiving him, and most importantly her love for him. By the end of her story she was in tears clinging to Lelouch awkwardly from her bedside.

All the while he stood there running his hands through her hair, whispering words of apologies. Slowly the lump in his throat Lelouch explained everything to Shirley as she did to him; Zero, his time in Britannia, his friendship with Suzaku, and even the incident with Euphie.

They remained there well into the night, talking, and occasionally crying whilst seeking comfort from each other. The conversation drifted from serious topics, like the rebellion, to light-hearted ones, like childhood stories. Eventually they drifted back onto the topic that was both on there minds.

Lelouch took a deep breath and spoke first, “Shirley all of this time you have continued to love me even though you deserve someone much better than I…” He cupped one of her hands in his own and gently placed is forehead against it, “But…I want to work towards being that someone…” As if paying homage to his master Lelouch bowed his head to Shirley. Of course in his mind Shirley was far more beautiful and graceful than any Empress who has ever lived.

Lelouch sucked in another deep breath and raised himself so they were at eye level
“What I am trying to say is ….I love you Shirley.” And unlike last time he was sure of it.

And there it was the words she had been waiting for all this time. Part of her doubted it but there something in her that strove to believe him. So she did. Feeling bold Shirley placed one hand on the back of her prince’s head, guiding him towards her.

Before there lips made the orange-haired Britannian whispered a few words of her own against the prince’s lips.

“And I love you.”

And pressed her lips against his.

Lelouch knew that doing this would possibly endanger both of them. However he would hold true to his promise and strive to be the man that Shirley deserved.

After watching episode 13 I couldn't help myself from writing this(So it could contain possible spoilers, be warned). I have to warn you this was written just after I finished watching the episode, also my Beta is MIA so grammar and spelling may be lacking. This also may seem a little cheesy and rushed, but as stated before; I couldn't help myself.

Spoiler for To be the man she deserves:

Warning: Spoilers for Episode 13.

Word Count: 1,435.

Pairings: Lelouch/Shirley.

Summary: She may have loved him but he didn't deserve it.

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As he wandered aimlessly through the corridors of the hospital Lelouch could only wonder where it all went wrong. The day had started out bumpy but overall it was a success; Jeremiah Gottwald, a person who could have been a potential dangerous foe, had joined his side. The conquest of the Chinese Federation was proceeding as well, and soon enough he would have Kallen back, everything was proceeding was planned.

All except for one thing; Shirley.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

Physical activity was obviously not his strong suit, Lelouch concluded, as he sprinted up and down the endless escalators. Barking orders on the cell-phone while running did not help either it seemed. “Don’t fight him,” The person on the other end of the phone made a confused noise, “He is one of us now!” Lelouch closed his phone, skipping the last step of the escalator, he was about to turn down another corridor when something caught his eye.

Orange mixed with crimsons-red. Even though it was hard to see in the smoke Lelouch recognized what it was instantly, or rather who it was.

“Shirley!” Adrenaline and fear pumping through him Lelouch ran to Shirley’s side instantly.

There she was lying eagle-spread, a gun by her side, eyes closed….it almost looked like she was sleeping if not for the pool of blood spilling from under her. Lelouch kneeled down to her side, when he did pale eyelids slide back and revealed olive colored irises, the energy that seemed to bounce from them draining.

“Lelou?” The name was soft-spoken, lacking the usual energy or anger, it possessed a tone that suggested this was the end; a tone the Black Prince hated above all others, “I am so glad I get to speak with you in the end….” Suddenly Shirley started cough, blood started to pour from her mouth. Panicking Lelouch drew his cell phone and called a doctor, begging for Shirley to hold on.

She had tried to stop him, telling him it was useless but he refused to accept it.

“Shirley please,” Lelouch was fighting back tears as he watched the ambulance load her into the van with a stretcher, “Promise me one thing,” He watched as she turned her beautiful face toward him, expectant; a face that shouldn’t have been caught up in politics or war, a face that deserved happiness more than he ever did.

Lelouch swallowed the lump in his throat as he struggled to finish his sentence, “Don’t die”. It wasn’t spoken with the usual imperial like voice, nor was it spoken with the school-boy lightness. It was just a quite simple two word request.

Shirley just nodded before collapsing onto the stretcher.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

That all happened nearly an hour ago, Shirley and the EMP’s had arrived only six minutes after departing from the building she was found in. As soon as they reached the hospital, the doctors rushed Shirley into intensive care, where they were still operating.

At the nurse’s persistence Lelouch attempted to eat something from the cafeteria but found he was unable to eat, there was still the image of Shirley in his mind; stained with blood. It still surprised him though, no matter how much misfortune befallen her because of his actions she still loved him.

But could he love her back? Could he love her back and be the kind of man she deserves. Crushing the cheap plastic water cup in his hand Lelouch wondered if he deserved her. He, who put her in the middle of this and caused her all this pain, it was him after all who had caused her father to die, and it was him who re-wrote her memories. Even though a year later she fell in love with him again.

Lelouch didn’t get a chance to think any further as one of the doctors tapped him on the shoulder. Looking up Lelouch noticed that the ER room light off, he must of not of noticed Shirley being moved, “You are Lelouch Lamperouge here for Shirley Fenette correct?” Lelouch just nodded, “Good, will you please come with me.” Lelouch rose from his seat, fearing the worst.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

The doctor led him down a series of corridors and Lelouch just followed aimlessly not even thinking of where he was going. All the while thoughts of the inevitable running through his mind; another loved one lost because of his actions. First Euphie, then Nunnally and now Shirley, before that it was his mother, all this time he kept losing people and he never got use to it.

Lelouch was surprised when the tall, muscular doctor, stopped in front of him. Not having time to react Lelouch walked straight into the doctors back before falling backwards on his behind.

The doctor not even noticing just glanced down at his clipboard and then at the room number. Room number 316, which was where they stopped. Lelouch struggled to his feet and waited for the doctor to elaborate.

“I will be bunt Mister Lamperouge,” The man spoke gravely and Lelouch resisted the urge to flinch. This was it, Shirley was dead, and he knew it.

“That you both are incredibly lucky that you called us when you did.”

Lelouch’s eyes winded. Could it be true that, was Shirley...
The doctor saw Lelouch’s expression of disbelief, “Yes boy she’s alive” He stated simply, he reached for the door handle, “The girls’ mom just told me you can spend the night with her here if you want.” Lelouch just nodded dumbly as the man unlocked the door letting Lelouch in.

And there she was, sleeping peacefully on the bed, like an angel. The doctor quietly reminded Lelouch that she needed her rest and told him not to wake her. Lelouch just nodded and quickly thanked the doctor before closing the door gently. Slowly Lelouch approached the hospital bed and as if sensing his presence Shirley’s eyes fluttered open.

Groggily Shirley turned to one side, taking note of her surroundings and noticed her dark-haired crush, no love, kneeling by her bedside.

“Lelou?” The boy raised his head at the sound of his name and Shirley was able to study his face more closely. His normal clear amethyst eyes were puffy and red, indicating many shed tears. Softly she reached out a hand to caress his face, “Lelou…why did you save me?” Lelouch looked at her with a wounded expression and Shirley regretted asking.

The spent a few minutes in uneasy silence before Lelouch asked what happened. Calming herself Shirley explained everything; her memories returning, how she couldn’t keep herself from forgiving him, and most importantly her love for him. By the end of her story she was in tears clinging to Lelouch awkwardly from her bedside.

All the while he stood there running his hands through her hair, whispering words of apologies. Slowly the lump in his throat Lelouch explained everything to Shirley as she did to him; Zero, his time in Britannia, his friendship with Suzaku, and even the incident with Euphie.

They remained there well into the night, talking, and occasionally crying whilst seeking comfort from each other. The conversation drifted from serious topics, like the rebellion, to light-hearted ones, like childhood stories. Eventually they drifted back onto the topic that was both on there minds.

Lelouch took a deep breath and spoke first, “Shirley all of this time you have continued to love me even though you deserve someone much better than I…” He cupped one of her hands in his own and gently placed is forehead against it, “But…I want to work towards being that someone…” As if paying homage to his master Lelouch bowed his head to Shirley. Of course in his mind Shirley was far more beautiful and graceful than any Empress who has ever lived.

Lelouch sucked in another deep breath and raised himself so they were at eye level
“What I am trying to say is ….I love you Shirley.” And unlike last time he was sure of it.

And there it was the words she had been waiting for all this time. Part of her doubted it but there something in her that strove to believe him. So she did. Feeling bold Shirley placed one hand on the back of her prince’s head, guiding him towards her.

Before there lips made the orange-haired Britannian whispered a few words of her own against the prince’s lips.

“And I love you.”

And pressed her lips against his.

Lelouch knew that doing this would possibly endanger both of them. However he would hold true to his promise and strive to be the man that Shirley deserved.

After watching episode 13 I couldn't help myself from writing this(So it could contain possible spoilers, be warned). I have to warn you this was written just after I finished watching the episode, also my Beta is MIA so grammar and spelling may be lacking. This also may seem a little cheesy and rushed, but as stated before; I couldn't help myself.

Spoiler for To be the man she deserves:

Warning: Spoilers for Episode 13.

Word Count: 1,435.

Pairings: Lelouch/Shirley.

Summary: She may have loved him but he didn't deserve it.

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As he wandered aimlessly through the corridors of the hospital Lelouch could only wonder where it all went wrong. The day had started out bumpy but overall it was a success; Jeremiah Gottwald, a person who could have been a potential dangerous foe, had joined his side. The conquest of the Chinese Federation was proceeding as well, and soon enough he would have Kallen back, everything was proceeding was planned.

All except for one thing; Shirley.

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Physical activity was obviously not his strong suit, Lelouch concluded, as he sprinted up and down the endless escalators. Barking orders on the cell-phone while running did not help either it seemed. “Don’t fight him,” The person on the other end of the phone made a confused noise, “He is one of us now!” Lelouch closed his phone, skipping the last step of the escalator, he was about to turn down another corridor when something caught his eye.

Orange mixed with crimsons-red. Even though it was hard to see in the smoke Lelouch recognized what it was instantly, or rather who it was.

“Shirley!” Adrenaline and fear pumping through him Lelouch ran to Shirley’s side instantly.

There she was lying eagle-spread, a gun by her side, eyes closed….it almost looked like she was sleeping if not for the pool of blood spilling from under her. Lelouch kneeled down to her side, when he did pale eyelids slide back and revealed olive colored irises, the energy that seemed to bounce from them draining.

“Lelou?” The name was soft-spoken, lacking the usual energy or anger, it possessed a tone that suggested this was the end; a tone the Black Prince hated above all others, “I am so glad I get to speak with you in the end….” Suddenly Shirley started cough, blood started to pour from her mouth. Panicking Lelouch drew his cell phone and called a doctor, begging for Shirley to hold on.

She had tried to stop him, telling him it was useless but he refused to accept it.

“Shirley please,” Lelouch was fighting back tears as he watched the ambulance load her into the van with a stretcher, “Promise me one thing,” He watched as she turned her beautiful face toward him, expectant; a face that shouldn’t have been caught up in politics or war, a face that deserved happiness more than he ever did.

Lelouch swallowed the lump in his throat as he struggled to finish his sentence, “Don’t die”. It wasn’t spoken with the usual imperial like voice, nor was it spoken with the school-boy lightness. It was just a quite simple two word request.

Shirley just nodded before collapsing onto the stretcher.

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That all happened nearly an hour ago, Shirley and the EMP’s had arrived only six minutes after departing from the building she was found in. As soon as they reached the hospital, the doctors rushed Shirley into intensive care, where they were still operating.

At the nurse’s persistence Lelouch attempted to eat something from the cafeteria but found he was unable to eat, there was still the image of Shirley in his mind; stained with blood. It still surprised him though, no matter how much misfortune befallen her because of his actions she still loved him.

But could he love her back? Could he love her back and be the kind of man she deserves. Crushing the cheap plastic water cup in his hand Lelouch wondered if he deserved her. He, who put her in the middle of this and caused her all this pain, it was him after all who had caused her father to die, and it was him who re-wrote her memories. Even though a year later she fell in love with him again.

Lelouch didn’t get a chance to think any further as one of the doctors tapped him on the shoulder. Looking up Lelouch noticed that the ER room light off, he must of not of noticed Shirley being moved, “You are Lelouch Lamperouge here for Shirley Fenette correct?” Lelouch just nodded, “Good, will you please come with me.” Lelouch rose from his seat, fearing the worst.

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The doctor led him down a series of corridors and Lelouch just followed aimlessly not even thinking of where he was going. All the while thoughts of the inevitable running through his mind; another loved one lost because of his actions. First Euphie, then Nunnally and now Shirley, before that it was his mother, all this time he kept losing people and he never got use to it.

Lelouch was surprised when the tall, muscular doctor, stopped in front of him. Not having time to react Lelouch walked straight into the doctors back before falling backwards on his behind.

The doctor not even noticing just glanced down at his clipboard and then at the room number. Room number 316, which was where they stopped. Lelouch struggled to his feet and waited for the doctor to elaborate.

“I will be bunt Mister Lamperouge,” The man spoke gravely and Lelouch resisted the urge to flinch. This was it, Shirley was dead, and he knew it.

“That you both are incredibly lucky that you called us when you did.”

Lelouch’s eyes winded. Could it be true that, was Shirley...
The doctor saw Lelouch’s expression of disbelief, “Yes boy she’s alive” He stated simply, he reached for the door handle, “The girls’ mom just told me you can spend the night with her here if you want.” Lelouch just nodded dumbly as the man unlocked the door letting Lelouch in.

And there she was, sleeping peacefully on the bed, like an angel. The doctor quietly reminded Lelouch that she needed her rest and told him not to wake her. Lelouch just nodded and quickly thanked the doctor before closing the door gently. Slowly Lelouch approached the hospital bed and as if sensing his presence Shirley’s eyes fluttered open.

Groggily Shirley turned to one side, taking note of her surroundings and noticed her dark-haired crush, no love, kneeling by her bedside.

“Lelou?” The boy raised his head at the sound of his name and Shirley was able to study his face more closely. His normal clear amethyst eyes were puffy and red, indicating many shed tears. Softly she reached out a hand to caress his face, “Lelou…why did you save me?” Lelouch looked at her with a wounded expression and Shirley regretted asking.

The spent a few minutes in uneasy silence before Lelouch asked what happened. Calming herself Shirley explained everything; her memories returning, how she couldn’t keep herself from forgiving him, and most importantly her love for him. By the end of her story she was in tears clinging to Lelouch awkwardly from her bedside.

All the while he stood there running his hands through her hair, whispering words of apologies. Slowly the lump in his throat Lelouch explained everything to Shirley as she did to him; Zero, his time in Britannia, his friendship with Suzaku, and even the incident with Euphie.

They remained there well into the night, talking, and occasionally crying whilst seeking comfort from each other. The conversation drifted from serious topics, like the rebellion, to light-hearted ones, like childhood stories. Eventually they drifted back onto the topic that was both on there minds.

Lelouch took a deep breath and spoke first, “Shirley all of this time you have continued to love me even though you deserve someone much better than I…” He cupped one of her hands in his own and gently placed is forehead against it, “But…I want to work towards being that someone…” As if paying homage to his master Lelouch bowed his head to Shirley. Of course in his mind Shirley was far more beautiful and graceful than any Empress who has ever lived.

Lelouch sucked in another deep breath and raised himself so they were at eye level
“What I am trying to say is ….I love you Shirley.” And unlike last time he was sure of it.

And there it was the words she had been waiting for all this time. Part of her doubted it but there something in her that strove to believe him. So she did. Feeling bold Shirley placed one hand on the back of her prince’s head, guiding him towards her.

Before there lips made the orange-haired Britannian whispered a few words of her own against the prince’s lips.

“And I love you.”

And pressed her lips against his.

Lelouch knew that doing this would possibly endanger both of them. However he would hold true to his promise and strive to be the man that Shirley deserved.

Code Geass Funnies Chapter 2: Saishuu Heiki Kanojo
Genre: Humor
Length: 1400 Words
Summary: Following Kallen's capture, the Black Knights are in a bind as to what to do. Like always, Lelouch finds an answer, this time from an unlikely source.

Depending if the Rag Club is for or against Rolo .
Rolo X Nunnally fic http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4381614/1/World_End
This writer seems to share my thoughts. I always feel that Rolo will be broken saved by Nunnally with her kindness. Yes, hopefully he can have Lelouch as the real brother-in-law

Well, I'm currently running a blog-cum-fanfiction from an interested observer's viewpoint looking at the events in Code Geass. Begins at Turn 13 and will continue to run parallel to the series. May even extend to after the series if I want/need to.

Spoiler for Who!?:

The person is currently the UN's Chief Deplomat for East Asia. He's

Spoiler for You wanna know?:

Rai... Fenette! (I edited his background heavilyfor the purposes of the fanfiction. After all, non-canon playable characters are fun!

I just finished the fourth story of my "Stories of unlikely events" bundle
warning that it is suza/lulu and has a hint on Rolo/lulu, just love the paring X3
this story took a lot from me, I started in April when writing this and finally finished just now.

Summary:
Set in R2, Lelouch has his memories rewriten but has dreams of someone making love to him at night. He becomes paranoid and when Suzaku returns to Ashford things get out of hand.
Pairing: Suza / lulu and hint on Rolo / Lulu
Cathegory: Romance, angst and tragedy.
Warnings: ofc yaoi, character death also
status: complete with bonus chapters at the end as always

After watching episode 13 I couldn't help myself from writing this(So it could contain possible spoilers, be warned). I have to warn you this was written just after I finished watching the episode, also my Beta is MIA so grammar and spelling may be lacking. This also may seem a little cheesy and rushed, but as stated before; I couldn't help myself.

Spoiler for To be the man she deserves:

Warning: Spoilers for Episode 13.

Word Count: 1,435.

Pairings: Lelouch/Shirley.

Summary: She may have loved him but he didn't deserve it.

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As he wandered aimlessly through the corridors of the hospital Lelouch could only wonder where it all went wrong. The day had started out bumpy but overall it was a success; Jeremiah Gottwald, a person who could have been a potential dangerous foe, had joined his side. The conquest of the Chinese Federation was proceeding as well, and soon enough he would have Kallen back, everything was proceeding was planned.

All except for one thing; Shirley.

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Physical activity was obviously not his strong suit, Lelouch concluded, as he sprinted up and down the endless escalators. Barking orders on the cell-phone while running did not help either it seemed. “Don’t fight him,” The person on the other end of the phone made a confused noise, “He is one of us now!” Lelouch closed his phone, skipping the last step of the escalator, he was about to turn down another corridor when something caught his eye.

Orange mixed with crimsons-red. Even though it was hard to see in the smoke Lelouch recognized what it was instantly, or rather who it was.

“Shirley!” Adrenaline and fear pumping through him Lelouch ran to Shirley’s side instantly.

There she was lying eagle-spread, a gun by her side, eyes closed….it almost looked like she was sleeping if not for the pool of blood spilling from under her. Lelouch kneeled down to her side, when he did pale eyelids slide back and revealed olive colored irises, the energy that seemed to bounce from them draining.

“Lelou?” The name was soft-spoken, lacking the usual energy or anger, it possessed a tone that suggested this was the end; a tone the Black Prince hated above all others, “I am so glad I get to speak with you in the end….” Suddenly Shirley started cough, blood started to pour from her mouth. Panicking Lelouch drew his cell phone and called a doctor, begging for Shirley to hold on.

She had tried to stop him, telling him it was useless but he refused to accept it.

“Shirley please,” Lelouch was fighting back tears as he watched the ambulance load her into the van with a stretcher, “Promise me one thing,” He watched as she turned her beautiful face toward him, expectant; a face that shouldn’t have been caught up in politics or war, a face that deserved happiness more than he ever did.

Lelouch swallowed the lump in his throat as he struggled to finish his sentence, “Don’t die”. It wasn’t spoken with the usual imperial like voice, nor was it spoken with the school-boy lightness. It was just a quite simple two word request.

Shirley just nodded before collapsing onto the stretcher.

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That all happened nearly an hour ago, Shirley and the EMP’s had arrived only six minutes after departing from the building she was found in. As soon as they reached the hospital, the doctors rushed Shirley into intensive care, where they were still operating.

At the nurse’s persistence Lelouch attempted to eat something from the cafeteria but found he was unable to eat, there was still the image of Shirley in his mind; stained with blood. It still surprised him though, no matter how much misfortune befallen her because of his actions she still loved him.

But could he love her back? Could he love her back and be the kind of man she deserves. Crushing the cheap plastic water cup in his hand Lelouch wondered if he deserved her. He, who put her in the middle of this and caused her all this pain, it was him after all who had caused her father to die, and it was him who re-wrote her memories. Even though a year later she fell in love with him again.

Lelouch didn’t get a chance to think any further as one of the doctors tapped him on the shoulder. Looking up Lelouch noticed that the ER room light off, he must of not of noticed Shirley being moved, “You are Lelouch Lamperouge here for Shirley Fenette correct?” Lelouch just nodded, “Good, will you please come with me.” Lelouch rose from his seat, fearing the worst.

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The doctor led him down a series of corridors and Lelouch just followed aimlessly not even thinking of where he was going. All the while thoughts of the inevitable running through his mind; another loved one lost because of his actions. First Euphie, then Nunnally and now Shirley, before that it was his mother, all this time he kept losing people and he never got use to it.

Lelouch was surprised when the tall, muscular doctor, stopped in front of him. Not having time to react Lelouch walked straight into the doctors back before falling backwards on his behind.

The doctor not even noticing just glanced down at his clipboard and then at the room number. Room number 316, which was where they stopped. Lelouch struggled to his feet and waited for the doctor to elaborate.

“I will be bunt Mister Lamperouge,” The man spoke gravely and Lelouch resisted the urge to flinch. This was it, Shirley was dead, and he knew it.

“That you both are incredibly lucky that you called us when you did.”

Lelouch’s eyes winded. Could it be true that, was Shirley...
The doctor saw Lelouch’s expression of disbelief, “Yes boy she’s alive” He stated simply, he reached for the door handle, “The girls’ mom just told me you can spend the night with her here if you want.” Lelouch just nodded dumbly as the man unlocked the door letting Lelouch in.

And there she was, sleeping peacefully on the bed, like an angel. The doctor quietly reminded Lelouch that she needed her rest and told him not to wake her. Lelouch just nodded and quickly thanked the doctor before closing the door gently. Slowly Lelouch approached the hospital bed and as if sensing his presence Shirley’s eyes fluttered open.

Groggily Shirley turned to one side, taking note of her surroundings and noticed her dark-haired crush, no love, kneeling by her bedside.

“Lelou?” The boy raised his head at the sound of his name and Shirley was able to study his face more closely. His normal clear amethyst eyes were puffy and red, indicating many shed tears. Softly she reached out a hand to caress his face, “Lelou…why did you save me?” Lelouch looked at her with a wounded expression and Shirley regretted asking.

The spent a few minutes in uneasy silence before Lelouch asked what happened. Calming herself Shirley explained everything; her memories returning, how she couldn’t keep herself from forgiving him, and most importantly her love for him. By the end of her story she was in tears clinging to Lelouch awkwardly from her bedside.

All the while he stood there running his hands through her hair, whispering words of apologies. Slowly the lump in his throat Lelouch explained everything to Shirley as she did to him; Zero, his time in Britannia, his friendship with Suzaku, and even the incident with Euphie.

They remained there well into the night, talking, and occasionally crying whilst seeking comfort from each other. The conversation drifted from serious topics, like the rebellion, to light-hearted ones, like childhood stories. Eventually they drifted back onto the topic that was both on there minds.

Lelouch took a deep breath and spoke first, “Shirley all of this time you have continued to love me even though you deserve someone much better than I…” He cupped one of her hands in his own and gently placed is forehead against it, “But…I want to work towards being that someone…” As if paying homage to his master Lelouch bowed his head to Shirley. Of course in his mind Shirley was far more beautiful and graceful than any Empress who has ever lived.

Lelouch sucked in another deep breath and raised himself so they were at eye level
“What I am trying to say is ….I love you Shirley.” And unlike last time he was sure of it.

And there it was the words she had been waiting for all this time. Part of her doubted it but there something in her that strove to believe him. So she did. Feeling bold Shirley placed one hand on the back of her prince’s head, guiding him towards her.

Before there lips made the orange-haired Britannian whispered a few words of her own against the prince’s lips.

“And I love you.”

And pressed her lips against his.

Lelouch knew that doing this would possibly endanger both of them. However he would hold true to his promise and strive to be the man that Shirley deserved.

Fin.

Wow this touched me(in the heart not on the outside), really good thank you for this.

youngde, here. I'm fairly new to these forums but I just wanted to let everyone know about my first fanfic that I just put up on fanfiction.net. It's called 'Memories of the Rebellion' and follows Kallen's thoughts about the series thus far as she sits in her cell.

It is basically a Kalulu fic, but for all you C.C. fans out there, I tried to portray her in a positive light. If you still don't like it, well, it's not like I'm forcing you to read it (and I could because I'm a fairly big guy and was taught by my dad to fight the ol' Chicago way).

Alright, after seeing episode 16 of SEASON 2, and after reading some really good fanfictions (like karuma's, man that was good, im waiting for the new ones hehe :X), i've decided to write one of my own based off of what could happen after episode 16. I'm going to try to write a lot if i get some good/constructive feedback, not stuff like "it sucks, or it's really good", but something along the lines of "you should work on this or that".

I've never really written one before, and thought it'd be cool to share my ideas.

THE ONLY THING IS, the one i just wrote a few min ago, was written really fast, but contains spoilers FROM episode 16 and is basically a speculation of what might happen in episode 17. If you guys DON"T mind reading it, please leave some feedback. The ONLY problem is that the fanfiction site doesn't allow me to post a new story until two days after registering...and i just registered. So i'm going to go ahead and post my story under a spoiler tag.

BEWARE - THIS FANFICTION OF MINE IS WRITTEN AFTER WATCHING EPISODE 16 OF SEASON 2, THAT MEANS THERE ARE SPOILERS CONTAINING THE LAST PARTS OF THIS EPISODE, AND IT COVERS WHAT MIGHT HAPPEN IN THE NEXT...PLEASE LEAVE CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK:

Spoiler for fanfiction contains spoiler from episode 16 of S2 and talks about what might happen:

I. Spill The Truth

“But I have a condition, if you want me to protect Nunnally, then you should come here to Area 11, where she is located, by yourself. The location will be the Kururugi temple. We shall meet alone…”

Lelouche hung up the phone and made his way back to C.C.
“Don’t leave this room no matter what” Lelouche said as he picked up his mask off the table that had been placed on the neatly stacked outfit.
“Yes master. Have a…a nice trip” C.C. said in a quiet voice while holding onto her bandaged finger.
Lelouche glanced at C.C.’s finger that had been cut because of his spur of the moment outrage. He began to feel remorse for hurting her because he had promised her that he would not hurt her no matter what.
“I-I’m S-…never mind. It’s nothing. Thank you” Lelouche muttered as he walked out of the room with his mask on.
Lelouche meets up with the rest of the Black Knights
“Commence U.F.N. Resolution #1. We leave NOW!” shouted Lelouche.
“Nippon! Banzai! Nippon BANZAI!!!”

“Jeremiah and Rolo, I’d like to have a word with you” exclaimed Lelouche.
“YES! Your Majesty.”
“Jeremiah, I want you to call Guilford. I believe we can bring him onto our side. Rolo, I want you to watch over Cornelia. She is not to escape no matter what. Please go now Rolo.”
“Yes Zero-sama.” Rolo said as he went off to Cornelia.
“Also, Jeremiah. I’m going to need you to watch over Rolo and make sure Cornelia doesn’t say anything to Rolo that will anger him. He might use his geass and harm Cornelia, so I need your help to make sure he doesn’t do anything.”
“Yes, your majesty” said Jeremiah as he bowed.
The Order of the Black Knights leave to Japan and are confronted with Britannia’s Army. Meanwhile, Lelouche sneaks off to Kururugi Temple to meet Suzaku.

It was sunny and bright outside, definitely not a day for the chaos and deaths brought about by war. Lelouche stood at the bottom of the steps to Kururugi Temple, going over in his head, the 15 possible outcomes of the conversation between him and Suzaku, as well as his response to each case if it came down to it.
Lelouche made his way up the steps and was confronted with an angry, hostile-looking Suzaku in his school uniform.
“Suzaku…”
“Lelouche...”
Suzaku took out his Knight of The Rounds badge, “I could arrest you right here and now Lelouche. But that isn’t what I want. I want the whole world to see the real you. But first, I want to ask you one thing. Why…Why did you use that evil power to hurt Euphie? WHAT DID SHE DO TO YOU?”
“Suzaku, I’ve thought about it over and over. I wanted to tell you a long time ago, but I knew that no matter what I said, you wouldn’t believe me.”
“I DON”T CARE. You want me to protect Nunally right? Then tell me the truth!”
Lelouche put his hand over his left eye and took out his anti-geass contact.
“You see this? I’ve used geass to the point where I can’t control it anymore. I use this contact so that it doesn’t affect people when I don’t want them to be affected. It just so happened that this was the case when I was talking to Euphie. I tried telling her that I had the power to command anyone to do anything, and that I could even command her to kill the Japanese, something she would never do. However, at that moment…at that moment my geass went haywire and that last comment affected Euphie. I couldn’t stop her…I didn’t want it to end like that. She…she was probably my first lov-”
Suzaku threw a punch at Lelouche’s face and shouted “GET OUT OF HERE! Do you really expect me to believe that? Are you going to just keep lying to the world? And to have the nerve to say that you loved her? IF YOU REALLY LOVED HER YOU WOULD HAVE GIVEN YOURSELF IN! Get out of my sight. I will protect Nunally, not for your sake, but because she is the Governor-General.”
As Lelouche walked down the steps, he turned around one last time to face Suzaku face to face and said “I don’t expect you to believe me. This IS the truth. You of all people should know me the best…all those years we were together. I leave Nunally’s life in your hands. Please protect her, that’s all I ask of you.”

Author’s comments:
Well, I wrote this in a hurry after I saw this week’s episode, I might continue the story if I get some good feedback, as in where I need to improve/if this is a good or bad idea. Thanks!! And sorry if it has a lot of errors (grammatical/mechanical). I wrote this in a hurry .

Alright, after seeing episode 16 of SEASON 2, and after reading some really good fanfictions (like karuma's, man that was good, im waiting for the new ones hehe :X), i've decided to write one of my own based off of what could happen after episode 16. I'm going to try to write a lot if i get some good/constructive feedback, not stuff like "it sucks, or it's really good", but something along the lines of "you should work on this or that".

I've never really written one before, and thought it'd be cool to share my ideas.

THE ONLY THING IS, the one i just wrote a few min ago, was written really fast, but contains spoilers FROM episode 16 and is basically a speculation of what might happen in episode 17. If you guys DON"T mind reading it, please leave some feedback. The ONLY problem is that the fanfiction site doesn't allow me to post a new story until two days after registering...and i just registered. So i'm going to go ahead and post my story under a spoiler tag.

BEWARE - THIS FANFICTION OF MINE IS WRITTEN AFTER WATCHING EPISODE 16 OF SEASON 2, THAT MEANS THERE ARE SPOILERS CONTAINING THE LAST PARTS OF THIS EPISODE, AND IT COVERS WHAT MIGHT HAPPEN IN THE NEXT...PLEASE LEAVE CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK:

Spoiler for fanfiction contains spoiler from episode 16 of S2 and talks about what might happen:

I. Spill The Truth

“But I have a condition, if you want me to protect Nunnally, then you should come here to Area 11, where she is located, by yourself. The location will be the Kururugi temple. We shall meet alone…”

Lelouche hung up the phone and made his way back to C.C.
“Don’t leave this room no matter what” Lelouche said as he picked up his mask off the table that had been placed on the neatly stacked outfit.
“Yes master. Have a…a nice trip” C.C. said in a quiet voice while holding onto her bandaged finger.
Lelouche glanced at C.C.’s finger that had been cut because of his spur of the moment outrage. He began to feel remorse for hurting her because he had promised her that he would not hurt her no matter what.
“I-I’m S-…never mind. It’s nothing. Thank you” Lelouche muttered as he walked out of the room with his mask on.
Lelouche meets up with the rest of the Black Knights
“Commence U.F.N. Resolution #1. We leave NOW!” shouted Lelouche.
“Nippon! Banzai! Nippon BANZAI!!!”

“Jeremiah and Rolo, I’d like to have a word with you” exclaimed Lelouche.
“YES! Your Majesty.”
“Jeremiah, I want you to call Guilford. I believe we can bring him onto our side. Rolo, I want you to watch over Cornelia. She is not to escape no matter what. Please go now Rolo.”
“Yes Zero-sama.” Rolo said as he went off to Cornelia.
“Also, Jeremiah. I’m going to need you to watch over Rolo and make sure Cornelia doesn’t say anything to Rolo that will anger him. He might use his geass and harm Cornelia, so I need your help to make sure he doesn’t do anything.”
“Yes, your majesty” said Jeremiah as he bowed.
The Order of the Black Knights leave to Japan and are confronted with Britannia’s Army. Meanwhile, Lelouche sneaks off to Kururugi Temple to meet Suzaku.

It was sunny and bright outside, definitely not a day for the chaos and deaths brought about by war. Lelouche stood at the bottom of the steps to Kururugi Temple, going over in his head, the 15 possible outcomes of the conversation between him and Suzaku, as well as his response to each case if it came down to it.
Lelouche made his way up the steps and was confronted with an angry, hostile-looking Suzaku in his school uniform.
“Suzaku…”
“Lelouche...”
Suzaku took out his Knight of The Rounds badge, “I could arrest you right here and now Lelouche. But that isn’t what I want. I want the whole world to see the real you. But first, I want to ask you one thing. Why…Why did you use that evil power to hurt Euphie? WHAT DID SHE DO TO YOU?”
“Suzaku, I’ve thought about it over and over. I wanted to tell you a long time ago, but I knew that no matter what I said, you wouldn’t believe me.”
“I DON”T CARE. You want me to protect Nunally right? Then tell me the truth!”
Lelouche put his hand over his left eye and took out his anti-geass contact.
“You see this? I’ve used geass to the point where I can’t control it anymore. I use this contact so that it doesn’t affect people when I don’t want them to be affected. It just so happened that this was the case when I was talking to Euphie. I tried telling her that I had the power to command anyone to do anything, and that I could even command her to kill the Japanese, something she would never do. However, at that moment…at that moment my geass went haywire and that last comment affected Euphie. I couldn’t stop her…I didn’t want it to end like that. She…she was probably my first lov-”
Suzaku threw a punch at Lelouche’s face and shouted “GET OUT OF HERE! Do you really expect me to believe that? Are you going to just keep lying to the world? And to have the nerve to say that you loved her? IF YOU REALLY LOVED HER YOU WOULD HAVE GIVEN YOURSELF IN! Get out of my sight. I will protect Nunally, not for your sake, but because she is the Governor-General.”
As Lelouche walked down the steps, he turned around one last time to face Suzaku face to face and said “I don’t expect you to believe me. This IS the truth. You of all people should know me the best…all those years we were together. I leave Nunally’s life in your hands. Please protect her, that’s all I ask of you.”

Author’s comments:
Well, I wrote this in a hurry after I saw this week’s episode, I might continue the story if I get some good feedback, as in where I need to improve/if this is a good or bad idea. Thanks!! And sorry if it has a lot of errors (grammatical/mechanical). I wrote this in a hurry .

please help me .

I liked the point it gave and I can understand you were in a hurry, half the time you have to to be able to get the base and deep details of the story down before you forget them. It does feel rushed, but that's to be expected. I think it could be improved if you added greater detail to how the two of them felt. Like their thoughts and emotions. So I think rewriting it to be longer and explaining things just a tad more would make it alot better. The idea is pretty good, but I think it would be good if you made them argue for a bit before Suzaku finally flipped his lid and punched Lelouch. Hopefully a deep arguement?
On a complimentary note, I don't know if you intended for it to be funny or not, but the whole "Make sure Rolo doesn't hurt Cornelia" thing made me grin. The way it was phrased just made it sound funny.

On another note, my own story, but it is full of spectulations and slight spoilers for R2, you've been warned.
Devotion Upon Death
Chapters: 1 (three planned, depends on if I decided to carry on with it.)
Length: 1,686 (currently)
Summary: Well, assuming the Black Knights DID turn on Lelouch, would he be able to save himself before someone had to save him? And if he couldn't, could he make up for his death?
Minor notes are listed at the begining of the story, but I doubt they're important enough to list here. The biggest one is the fact it's in R2 and based off of spoilers and spectulation as stated above.http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4426047/...ion_Upon_Death