What a terrific story! Every line fascinating, I was glad the poem was long, didnt want it to end. "We were like wind chimes on the verandah." Beautiful, and I love the repetition of the song playing. The piece comes full circle. Highly satisfying read.

Thanks so much, JINGLE, I'm happy to be a part of Poetry Potluck! Glad you enjoyed it again, SHASHI,and FIVELOAF, glad you liked that line...I think we all resonate with the things that are closest to our hearts! ;)

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