hey! i'm using this one review for all your poems, 'cause, as you know i'm a lazy bum, and as you know, my memory is worse than a pebble . yeah, i love all your stuffs, i gots some critism but it so minute we can deal with it in person. i especially like this one, hence i'm writing the review in this one . i don't like this because it's well-written, 'cause frankly, you've got better work, but because it was written from inside YOU and no one else, and it is so true. friends foreva girl! i luv ya! .