27th February Grades 3 – 5 Challenge

I’m alone. In a corner where no one can see. See how different I am. It all started two weeks ago…

I was in school. When I got there it was quiet. Too quiet. No birds sang a sweet song. Nobody chatting. Just silence. It seemed like everybody was spying on each other. “Hello?” I asked. Then I heard a noise. That’s when it turned normal.

I’m in Math’s now. For some reason that noise I heard. You know the whistle, that made everyone start being normal. Like whenever you click a button it switches on, but if you click it again it turns off. Maybe that noise turned the noise off and then on again! But why didn’t happen to me?

Maybe I was different? Or maybe I was switched off and thought I said it? I didn’t know but I knew I had to find out. Because that was me. The girl who has to find out. And that’s why I want to become a detective. (This is a true thing!) : )

13 days later…

Right now I’m in the corner of my bedroom feeling creeped out. *I need to stay hidden* I thought to myself. “Moly!” A loud voice said. “Moly!” “Yeah!” I replied. “Come down to eat.” My Mum replied. I got up from the dusty corner that looked like it was there for a million years. I walked along the floorboards and found that one of them was broken. I got down on my knees and lifted the wooden plank. I found an old piece of paper and it said…

Knock on your head three times and say…

That’s the way to do it

Knock knock knock “That’s the way to do it!” I said. Nothing happened. Then the bed turned into a tree. Then the chairs turned into trees. Then the desk turned into a tree. “HOW DARE YOU TURN US INTO FURNITURE!” Boomed an angry tree. “I-I-I-I didn’t k-k-k-know!” I managed to say.

Before anything else happened I took off. Full speed! *The Forest* I thought. *I’ll go there maybe hide in a tree!* So I skipped 4 steps of the stairs and land with a bump. I expected nothing. But a few seconds later after I got up, I had this horrible pain. Like pins and needles or a billion pins stabbing my back! But I managed to balance a bit. Then I took off again!

I was in the forest. Alone again. It’s sort of a thing I do. You know hanging around alone. That’s me again. “GET BACK HERE YOU FILTHY HUMAN” The tree complained once again. I said nothing. Hoping not to get caught. Cause if I do, I know I’ll be turned into a rotten egg! Then I feel something. Something tickling my nose. *OH NO!* I thought. I knew. I knew I was going to sneeze. “AHHHCHOOOOOOOOOOO!” What a noise I made! “What a FOOL you are little GIRL!” The tree commented. Being quite rude.

*That’s it!* I thought. I jumped off the tree. “Ahhh, little missy!” The tree said pleased. “You have finally given yourself up!” “No I haven’t.” I replied. “As if!” The tree shrieked. “It’s called.” I said. “Common logic.” I smiled. Knock knock knock “That’s the way to do it!” I screamed.

All of a sudden, the trees stopped and dropped. Their root fingertips twitched and twitched until they finally and slowly stopped. Then, I grinned..

The End…

Moly G4/2 😛

This week:

This week we are looking at five words. All need to be in your writing but they can be in any order. You might find it useful to write out a short plan to make sure you get them all in & that your piece makes sense!

The words are:

Ladder Goldfish Flew Brown Slowly

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Conner was a little kid living in the woods. One day, he went to play in the woods far away. He kept on running until no more birds flew in the air like at his home does. An enchantress was going to the city to visit her brother she was walking slowly as like she was hunting. Conner ran around in circles and bumped into the enchantress. The enchantress whispered,” Sorry” Conner scolded,” Why didn’t you look at the way Miss? You know I’m walking why’d you bump into me???!!” ” You have no manners at all!!!! You are cursed now to be a goldfish for my brother until a brown male finch will come on to your bowl!!!” Conner disappeared into the city where the enchantress’s brother lived. Conner was a goldfish now he wished,” Please make me die instead of being in this dumb goldfish form!!” The gods and fairies heard his cry so they decided to make a metal ladder to fall onto him. The ladder landed on his head!!! Guess what!……. No more life for Conner.

There was one evening, a little girl called Glany was playing with her friends playing and playing until her very best friend came with a wonderful, amazing and cute fish. However, Glany got jealous she wanted a fish like that so all her friends could surround her like what they did to her best friend. So, she ran to her mom in her house.
“Mom? Could I have a pet fish like your’s?” Glany asked her mom.
“I could give mine to you do you want it or no?” her mom replied. Glany got excited, made a gigantic smile and nodded. She slowly went to the direction that the tall brown ladder was and quickly ran up to her mom’s room. Her hair flew and dropped in a watery glass, she turned around and her hair slapped her face she picked it up. Soon after, she looked at it and carefully went down the ladder got out of the house and showed her brand new fish all her friends gathered around her best friend and her. That is how they got into a group after all.

There was a child going to Jason’s pet store, one of the best pet shops in the U.S.. He found many kinds of animals like little puppies, kitties,hamsters every pet people want that’s why people love this pet shop. He was going to buy some goldfish but it wasn’t there. He went to ask Jason the owner of the store he said “Climb up the ladder kid!” When he found the ladder he climbed it up.When he was upstairs there was a beautiful aquarium where many people were there were many kinds of fish like Clown fish and other fishes.When he saw the goldfish place he went there and looked everywhere for the fish he wanted.Suddenly he found a brown goldfish it was so beautiful and a little more expensive than the other goldfishes it swam so slowly like a snail. When he was interested in it he asked his mom for it and she said yes.When they went back home he has a glass aquarium with others fishes and his brown fish name Browny.Suddenly the fish fllew out of the Aquariam before he closed the cover of the Aquariam then he use a claw to put it back in quickly and it was back in and it lived happily ever after.

One mysterious day I was walking around the park catching pokémon as usual until I found a ladder it was an odd looking one it looks like it was made out of dead fishes.But it looks like no one noticed it yet I wonder why? But any way I climbed up the ladder and found a small room in the middle was a small brown goldfish. I slowly walked to it and it turned back at me. Then it opened its mouth and start speaking “Hi my name is Bob and I came from a far away planet call the Ocean I came here to find a person to take care of me.” said the fish.” I could take care of you.” I said. “Thank you.”said the fish. Then the fish fin grew bigger and bigger and the fish flew up and the two of them went home somehow without any one noticing the fish.

2 year ago I went to where they sell gold fish because I want to give a present to my little brother.
Mum said that ” Buy two or three gold fish because one is $500.” We went to find small fish because the weight of the fish and water is heavy if we get a big fish the bag will be broken. When we finish buying the fish I slowly carry the brown fish bag to the car when my mum unlock the car I carefully put the bag down on the table and sit my self in the car and went back home. when I arrive at home I went up the ladder to where I kept stuff to get the bowl to put the fish. It was so dusty so I blew it and the dust flew away I slowly and carefully came down the ladder.I put the fish and the water into the old bowl when my little brother came down the stair he shout “Who is that fish for?” for you” I said.

To start I was walking in my house then I looked at the roof then I saw a hole in the roof so I grbed a ladder then I climed the ladder then I realize that it was just a hole it was a secreat room then I grabed a flash light tgen I look at the floor the floor color was brown then I saw a bat it flew slowly then my parents call me to go to a pet shop and after that I bought a goldfish but it didnt last long well the big fish ate the small goldfish so its ok cause I have a lot of fish.

This tale began when 2 brother goldfishes, Mei & Wei were traveling to there grandma, grandma lee.”Every year i would get a magical seedling and every year it would bring the village its magical blessing!” said the chief. “How does it look like father?” asked his son, “Good question son, this seedling is a hard one to find so first….” paused chief Monza in the middle of his sentence. A sudden gigantic rumble came from outside the city’s core “What was that?!” shouted the chief!

“Your majesty the brown tribe has arrived in full force!!!” cried one of the soldiers “Then send in full force too!!” demanded the chief! While on Wei & Mei side chaos was striking too. Wei the older one was waiting for his brother to cross the ladder, he was also fending off the soldiers alone. “Ahhhh!!!!” was the only word he could say before the ladder cracked and broken leaving the steep mountain empty.

“Don’t fall down brother!” said Wei but…..it was too late Mei had already fallen off and headed straight for the deep waterfall. When all hopes were lost a giant eagle swept down to save Mei. “thx..” was the last word before he fainted.

This tale was about the brothers and the unfortunate events. Even though it not the whole tale but, bit by bit , slowly but surely it will add too a lot!

It was the most special time of the year (for me at least), It was my birthday and for my gift my dad took me to the pet shop and firstly, I saw a dog, a brown one with long ears pointing straight up. Nextly, a goldfish and it swam slowly around the fish tank. Lastly, a hamster and it was bright yellow and very cute but I decided to get a goldfish since it was the easiest to take care of.

After that, at home I decided to keep my goldfish on my attic so I climbed up the ladder and I saw a mosquito that flew straight at me right onto my arm and I put my fish onto the table at the attic and that was how my birthday went.

Once there was a girl named Jennis she was not an ordinary girl mean she is an ordinary girl but the one special thing she had is a brown goldfish.
This is not the story yet the story begins on one saturday morning Jennnis was walking to ballet class.She was so tired that she don’t want to walk anymore.The only thing she want is that she want to fly.She really want to do that so she suddenly tried to close her eye and imagine that she got a wing and when she spread her wing and run as fast as she could suddenly she flew up slowly.And when she open her eye again she did it.But i know you think that when Jennis fly she didn’t fly that high but this is not true she flew higher than two ladders standing on each other.

In 1954,their lived a person called “Minzy” she was a kid whom lived in a tiny village in Germany.
when Minzy was a little kid she had a brown tree house on a very big tree somewhere at the back of her garden.In order to get up there she had to climb a big/tall ladder with her mother.But her mother took the time to get up slowly so Minzy had some time to pratics something,when Minzy’s mom finally got up to the giant treehouse and sat down on a comfty place.”mommy could you buy a me a pet goldfish??”she said.”NO!!”said Minzys mom but then the treehouse went loose and the treehouse flew away with both daughter and mother with it.after a couple of hours,the treehouse had landed on somewhere far away from their home and never got back.
THE END :]

It all stared when Kirito is 11 years old he was practicing teakwondo he saw a brown wing by the door he walk forward slowly and see if he was seeing is true then he saw a goldfish that can fly.He is too curios that he kick a wall then a ladder falls down he is curios so he climb up and see a toilet then he was peeing on toilet but when he slap himself onetime he realize it was a dream but he actually pee his pants

“I have an announcement to make,” Mr. Vector exclaimed, “five whole stacks of five hundred pieces were knocked out the window by Lucas, now everyone go make some more while I have a talk with him.”

Lucas and his boss had a chat and he was dismissed. The next day, Lucas came to his desk and found not one, but five whole stacks of five hundred pieces of paper lying there. Puzzled, he decided to leave them on Mr. Vector’s desk.

After that, Lucas was snacking wheat toast when all of a sudden, he dropped it in the copier and it left one brown mess. He was about to get some towels to clean it, when he turned around the copier looked like it was bought five minutes ago.

Something strange is happening, I can’t really figure it out, but every time I make a mistake, its always fixed without me having to fix it. For some reason, the floor was shaking, and the goldfish tank was shaking too. Then a fairy appeared out of nowhere!
It flew to Lucas and gave him a letter.

It said: Dear Lucas, we see you are having lots of troubles, so for the next three weeks we will always fix your problems. This doesn’t happen to everyone, you know.
From, The Fairy Luck Service
When looked back, the fairy wasn’t there.

“Looks like I’m going to have the best three weeks in my life,” He said quietly.

“I have an announcement to make,” Mr. Vector exclaimed, “five whole stacks of five hundred pieces were knocked out the window by Lucas, now everyone go make some more while I have a talk with him.”

Lucas and his boss had a chat and he was dismissed. The next day, Lucas came to his desk and found not one, but five whole stacks of five hundred pieces of paper lying there. Puzzled, he decided to leave them on Mr. Vector’s desk.

After that, Lucas was snacking wheat toast when all of a sudden, he dropped it in the copier and it left one brown mess. He was about to get some towels to clean it, when he turned around the copier looked like it was bought five minutes ago. He even fell down a ladder, and not a single hair on his head was hurt.

Something strange is happening, I can’t really figure it out, but every time I make a mistake, its always fixed without me having to fix it. For some reason, the floor was shaking, and the goldfish tank was shaking too. Then a fairy appeared out of nowhere!
It flew to Lucas and gave him a letter.

It said: Dear Lucas, we see you are having lots of troubles, so for the next three weeks we will always fix your problems. This doesn’t happen to everyone, you know.
From, The Fairy Luck Service
When looked back, the fairy wasn’t there.

“Looks like I’m going to have the best three weeks in my life,” He said quietly.

“I have an announcement to make,” Mr. Vector exclaimed, “five whole stacks of five hundred pieces were knocked out the window by Lucas, now everyone go make some more while I have a talk with him.”

Lucas and his boss had a chat and he was dismissed. The next day, Lucas came to his desk and found not one, but five whole stacks of five hundred pieces of paper lying there. Puzzled, he decided to leave them on Mr. Vector’s desk.

After that, Lucas was snacking wheat toast when all of a sudden, he dropped it in the copier and it left one brown mess. He was about to get some towels to clean it, when he turned around the copier looked like it was bought five minutes ago. He even fell down a ladder, and not a single hair on his head was hurt.

Something strange is happening, I can’t really figure it out, but every time I make a mistake, its always fixed without me having to fix it, he thought. For some reason, the floor was shaking, and the goldfish tank was shaking too. Then a fairy appeared out of nowhere!
It flew to Lucas and gave him a letter.

It said: Dear Lucas, we see you are having lots of troubles, so for the next three weeks we will always fix your problems. This doesn’t happen to everyone, you know.
From, The Fairy Luck Service
When looked back, the fairy wasn’t there.

“Looks like I’m going to have the best three weeks in my life,” He said quietly.