Alright guys so the point of this thread is to to get lyrical or melodic help on a song you're writing. This might have been done before but I couldn't find such a thread so I made my own. The rules are very simple; just post original songs or titles you're working on and make sure to help others too. If you post here, you're expected to help somebody else if you want help in return. You can post media on here or request that others check your page for your music. Constructive criticism only please
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So I'm planning on writing a song called I Brought A Knife To A Gun Fight And Won. I'm going for a posthardcore, pop punk thing something like Asking Alexandria, Alesana, or Falling In Reverse. I just need someone to start me off.
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