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Nutty says:I actually like the way she opened up to james - its telling us that she is starting to trust him. Maybe it would have been more realistic if he had comforted her after her telling her story? then it would seem as if james has more of a heart :) i reckon that the death eatery people will come after jen but james will die saving her, but then, cos of jens locket, he isnt actually dead and they live happily ever after :) i defo wanna see what you come up with for in classes through - that'll be fun :) and the only thing is maybe you could incorporate more of jenny's friends storys into it, like paige and ryan (dorta like in no chance of that how theres the alice/frank and the sirius/brittney if u get me) i'd like to see a bit more of albus though :) oh oh oh, maybe james will do something really nasty/stupid but he doesnt really mean it, then jenny finds out he likes her so she goes out with albus then theres like big firey brother duel :) that'd be good :) so yeh - more of other peoples storiess :) love the head dorms btw :)

Nutty
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Author's Response: Thanks! You'll just have to wait and see what I have planned, but I'll give you a clue- something you mentioned will deffo happen at soem point ;) lol! x