Got a great cast of characters but a weak plot? Or a great premise but a confusing timeline? Are you halfway through a novel, memoir, or screenplay with no idea how to finish it? Developmental editing (otherwise known as “substantive editing”) is a good option for authors who want professional direction and expertise on a rough draft or a work-in-progress. You will have the opportunity to ask follow-up questions and re-submit material for a second read at a discounted rate. Samples are available upon request.

FOR NOVELS, MEMOIRS, & GENERAL NONFICTION

Developmental Editing Type A: Editorial LetterTypical quotes for full-length manuscripts range from $900 - $1,350.This service is also known as an "Extensive Manuscript Critique." Your editor reads your full manuscript and compiles feedback in an extensive editorial letter, usually ranging from 8-10 single-spaced pages. The editorial letter covers feedback on a range of issues, including any or all of the following: pacing; flow of narrative; transitions; voice; plot; structure; dialogue; character development; audience; potential market. This service does NOT include line edits or comments made directly into the manuscript.

Developmental Editing Type B: Editorial Letter PLUS Feedback in MarginsTypical quotes for full-length manuscripts range from $1,200 - $2,500A blend between a big-picture critique and line-by-line edit, we’ll review your complete manuscript or manuscript-in-progress, inserting extensive comments in the margins throughout the document. Your editor will also provide an editorial letter summarizing macro feedback on the work at large, as well as any additional feedback that hasn't already been captured in the margin comments. This service does NOT include line edits via track changes.

FOR EVERYTHING ELSE

Developmental Editing for ScreenplaysTypical quotes range from $250 - $575.Your editor will read your screenplay draft and compile feedback in an editorial letter ranging from 5-7 single-spaced pages. The letter will cover feedback on a range of issues, including: pacing; transitions; voice; plot; structure; dialogue; character development; audience; potential market. This service does NOT include line edits made via track changes.

Developmental Editing for Poetry ChapbooksTypical quotes range from $250 - $575.Your editor will read your poetry chapbook and provide comments in the margins of the draft as well as a 1-2 page letter summarizing his/her feedback on the collection. This service does NOT include line edits made via track changes.

Developmental Editing for Short Story CollectionsFor individual short stories, typical quotes range from $75 - $175 per story (depending on length). Discounts are available for collections that include four or more stories.Your editor will read your collection of stories and provide comments in the margins of the draft as well as a 1-3 page letter summarizing his/her feedback on the collection as a whole. This service does NOT include line edits made via track changes.

All services above include one round of follow-up questions via email or 30-minute phone call.