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patronus_charm says:Iím here with your review for the parody challenge and it certainly wasnít silly and Iím so glad that you posted it! This story had so many levels and I found all of them extremely funny and was laughing all the way through. It was just brilliant!

Ok where to start? One thing I really liked was the satirical element to the story and it was woven in so well. Iíve never really seen a fan fiction mock fan fiction but I thought it was such a witty element to it was great! I loved the remarks about the Sirius/OC stories because Iíve read countless ones of them and they really do fade from my mind! And now youíve got me wondering about what Teddyís middle name is. I feel like a fan fiction failure!

The Voice was an ingenious inclusion. It explains Remusí self-restraint perfectly but done in such a humorous way I didnít even have time to ponder the likelihood of him suffering from a mental disorder or whatever. It was like his personal mentor throughout his life and each comment and remark it made had me laughing!

With the mention of Twilight appearing in the author note I was almost wondering whether Bella was going to make an appearance or not, but your version was even better! The idea of Remus/Narcissa/Lucius love triangle was brilliant! At first, I was sitting like there like how the merlin does this connect to Twilight but it was the mention of the alabaster coloured skin which made it. Now you mention it, Lucius really does have vampire-like qualities.

I think the part which had me cracking up the most was when the voice was just like yeah whatever youíll marry the niece instead so stop moaning! I never would have thought of that connection and it works really well with the whole Jacob imprinting on Renesmee thing (yes I may have read them in my dark, dark past!). The comments about Narcissa changing after marrying Lucius were great too, and had me laughing all the way through!

Thank you for submitting such a brilliant entry, it really made my day! ♥

-Kiana

P.S. Your humour was certainly not poor!

Author's Response: Hello! :D I'm so glad that you liked this story and this wonderful review helped with my insecurity about it, so thank you! :) It's great to hear you found it funny!

I'm glad you enjoyed the different little dimensions of the story, and how it mocked some fan fiction stereotypes. I know, I do love a good marauder story but often they do sometimes follow certain patterns which I wanted to affectionately point out. :)

I'm so pleased you liked the Voice as well, which was my way of venting about the inconsistencies and things that don't make sense to me in HP. The Voice is so sassy, and I'm glad you liked the comments and how it affected Remus! :)

Haha, I'm very glad you liked the Twilight bit! I feel like the story wouldn't have been complete without some sparkling vampires and angsty love triangles. I thought Lucius would make a great Edward, and Narcissa such an improbable Bella figure that it just felt so right.

Don't worry, I'm of course also guilty of having knowledge of the intricate details of Twilight. :P I'm glad you thought the niece thing fit well with the imprinting and general creepiness of the whole thing. Haha I'm glad you liked the comments about how Narcissa changed after marrying him and probably becoming a vampire too, I thought the automatic contrast in Twilight was funny and could explain part of why Narcissa is so uptight. :P

Thank you for this wonderful review, and for the challenge! :D I'm very glad you liked the story and the humour, it really made my day! :)