oh. my. god. this is so sweet! The next time i talk to my girlfriend i'm going to say 'Em, forget the pairings. Angel needs to find some other man. It's all the way baby!' ahnd then of course an impassioned make-out scene follows during which she forgets evrything i told her. But hey, it'll be nice to say! Anyway, you wrote it exactly how i like it! Spike is a vampire, he doesn't get to be all emotional. Xander is a loser, he needs to get bottom, naturally. And it's always great when the story has flawless spelling and grammar, it helps because i'm a grammar freak. Grammerless authors: Then what the hell are you doing here anyway?

Sorry I'm babbling. Is this a one-shot, i forgot. Well, if it isn't please come up with another chapter in which Xander faces his problems, fucks some more, and kills the t.v. D just a suggestion. D it was great, and I want to read more. 'more more more! AH!' sorry, now im sounding like a horny bitch. But wait, I AM a horny bitch! I should stop typing, but it was great and I loved it so much!D Keep up the great work!D

This is a well written story but 'The End of the World with Waffles' will still be my favourite. You've maintained consistentcy in your writing style and a nice length for one shots. This actually makes me want to continue some of mine lol. I have half written stories coming out of my ears.