In my opinion, corruption is the country of Brazilians not because of our politicians manner of do politics, but for two principal reasons.

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Nov 7, 2014 06:22

In my opinion, corruption is the country of Brazilians not because of our politicians manner of do politics, but for two principal reasons. The vast majority of the population is blind, so is the first person in the figure, and who do not see, do not fight for their better future without corruption. Moreover, part of population already got used to corruption, they may want to continue to live their lives as it is today: with corruption everywhere.

The two personages in the picture represents the entire population of the country. Unfortunately, the vast majority of the population could be represented by the blind one. Many people argue that politicians are corrupted or that one party is more corrupted than another and that is why the country is so divided nowadays. However, this is just a reflex of the problem showed in the figure: while a few protest and try to make the country a corruption-free-place, the vast majority seem to be blind.

In conclusion, yes most Brazilians desire the new, the change, and a better future. Achieving this dream means to have a corruption-free-country and this will not come as a gift or a boon. Therefore, to have a better future the population need to not only desire this but also actively engage in the change their want for the country.

In my opinion, corruption is the country of Brazilians not because of our politicians manner of do politics, but for two principal reasons.

In my opinion, the country of Brazil is corrupt not because of our politicians' manner of doing politics, but forbecause of two principal reasons.

The vast majority of the population is blind, so is the first person in the figure, and who do not see, do not fight for their better future without corruption.

The vast majority of the population is blind, and so is the first person in the figure, and those who do not see, do not fight for their better future without corruption.

Moreover, part of population already got used to corruption, they may want to continue to live their lives as it is today: with corruption everywhere.

Moreover, part of the population already got used to corruption; they may want to continue to live their lives as it is today: with corruption everywhere.

This sentence is called a compound sentence; it's like two sentences put together. You can make compound sentences in two ways. You can write replace the semicolon ( ';' ) with ', and' or another conjunction.

The two personages in the picture represents the entire population of the country.

The two personagespeople in the picture represents the entire population of the country.

'Personages' is indeed a word, but it is very unusual to find it used like this.

When talking about a plural subject ('people' instead of 'person', or 'cats' instead of 'cat'), the verb (represent) has to agree with it. Let's look at a sentence: "The cat jumps from the table." If we talk about multiple cats, we would have to say "The cats jump from the table." It's like the 's' moves from the verb to the subject if the subject is plural (meaning more than one, or multiple.)

Unfortunately, the vast majority of the population could be represented by the blind one.

This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

Many people argue that politicians are corrupted or that one party is more corrupted than another and that is why the country is so divided nowadays.

Many people argue that politicians are corrupted or that one party is more corrupted than another, and that is why the country is so divided nowadays.

However, this is just a reflex of the problem showed in the figure: while a few protest and try to make the country a corruption-free-place, the vast majority seem to be blind.

However, this is just a reflex of the problem showed in the figure: while a few protest and try to make the country a corruption-free-place, the vast majority seem to be blind.

In conclusion, yes most Brazilians desire the new, the change, and a better future.

In conclusion, yes, most Brazilians desire the new, the change, and a better future.

Achieving this dream means to have a corruption-free-country and this will not come as a gift or a boon.

Achieving this dream means to have a corruption-free-country and this will not come as a gift or a boon.

Therefore, to have a better future the population need to not only desire this but also actively engage in the change their want for the country.

Therefore, to have a better future the population need to not only desire this but also actively engage in the change theirthey want for the country.

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In my opinion, corruption is the country of Brazilians not because of our politicians manner of do politics, but for two principal reasons. The vast majority of the population is blind, so is the first person in the figure, and who do not see, do not fight for their better future without corruption.