wake up, cutting yourself is not the answer. you may hate the world...you may hate everyone you know...but always know that there is someone out there who loves you. it can be your brothers and sisters...some distant relation...whateva, but the point is, self-harm may be a temporary escape, but its not the perfect solution.

remember, people may put you down, but there is always something that you are better at, deep down inside. you have to keep going, embracing obstacles and working hard for what you want.

otherwise, sorry if that was preachy. :) loved the rhyming near the end and the undercurrents of emotions really made this poem stand out. hope you feel better :)

The rhythm wasn't too good. Rhyming seemed unaffective. I can't really seem to relate my own pain to yours, and I do cut myself, so I know a few reason why dying/self-mutilation feels like a good thing. Sorry, but I can't say this was very good.