I so enjoyed your poem! It is very well written, clearly thought out, and finely crafted.

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Fri, March 2nd, 2012 11:02pm

Thank you I havent ever posted any of my writing on the internet so this is a first for me. I think since this poem did pretty well Im going to start posting some more of my work. I just need to decide whats good enough to post and whats not

This was AMAZING!!! You grasped the audience so well!!! You kept it smooth and interesting... I couldn't stop reading it!!! I really loved this you have talent especially with connecting to the audience... I mean at one point I thought you were gonna come crawling through my computer screen :P haha well I think this was fabulous thankyou for writing this... Keep up the good work!