This is really good. It's a good start to what I'm sure will be an awesome story. Though at the end of the first paragraph "When it eventually dwells on you exactly what went wrong, there’s no going back." I think you mean Dawns on you not dwells on you. If I am wrong ignore that. I just think it would flow better with Dawns. That's really all I got to say. Good luck on this story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate all feedback. And yes, it was supposed to be dawns instead of dwells. I'll fix that ASAP.

I'm still laughing! It's utterly brilliant! I've not laughed this hard in a long time. This story made my day. I love Mrs. Pond and Ginny they are so funny. It's really hard not to like them. Rory is adorable. I really can't wait for more. I really like the part with Al calling James a girl all the time! This is really good. XD

I really like this. Good job and I can't wait read more. I think I may have seen a few typos that could be changed later but other than that I thought it was really good. I really like Beth and Luke, they seem fun :)

Author's Response: You make me very happy :) Thank you so much for the review, it means a lot! I will try to get chapter 4 up as soon as possible but I'm sorry if it takes a little while because I'm really busy at the time but don't give up on the story! Spread the word and keep reading and reviewing!

I have to start out by saying this is my favorite story! I enjoyed every minute I spent reading this story. It was highly entertaining and made me laugh my pants off. Rose was such a nut that I could deffinately placew my self in her shoes. You are an awesome writter! Good job and great story! ;-)
Rock m/ On!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And I'm also glad you laughed - I had some laughs writing it! Thanks for reviewing!! (",)