The last comic I especially found nice. :)The whole series is actually a bit underrated in my tastes. If there were something I'd have to critisize, though, it'd be the text.You might want to show text that doesn't look bland (Arial font I feel is a bit of a no-no) and make it comfortably visible in contrast to the background.But overall, not bad!

If there were something I'd have to critisize, though, it'd be the text.You might want to show text that doesn't look bland (Arial font I feel is a bit of a no-no) and make it comfortably visible in contrast to the background.

Thanks and I had changed it to Curlz MT, as can be seen in the new comic: 20th birthday

New comic, New characters part 3, final partI just found out these topics don't die nowI going to make a comic mini-saga/ mini-series/ specail, The comic olympic games and I need other comic makers and 4 other characters of theirs.The events are: Race, Swimming, Javalin, High jump and comic making (authors only, select your best comic)Please note; all charcters will be Chimoru matoran sized toa, so they can use mask and elemental powersAnother note; there shall aslo be obsticles, like; falling objects in race, dangrerous swimming rahi in swimming, and moreEdit: Comic deeplinked.-Wind-

The first time I read it I thought that you had forgotten text in the last panel but then it dawned on me. That is actually pretty clever though the comic is a little fuzzy and you left your sprite sheets on the side.

So I noticed that the links to your comics direct to a site that is forbidden by BZP's advertising policy. You are allowed, however, to deeplink images from there - that is, to have a link to the image itself and not to the page containing the image. Do you think you could deeplink your most recent comics? If you need help, the Pictures Topic should provide, or you can contact me.