aw, this sequel made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I don't often enjoy sequels because more often than not, they water down and weaken the prequel before it but this one was well, just a little extra bonus to a great story in the first place. I really have fallen for Max and Eddie.

Wow-fantastic. I was confused at first between the switching from the recent past, to the present situations, but I got it covered now. I just hope that something better comes along for both of your characters' situations while they survive in New York.

No more Max and Eddie. And I only discovered them this morning. Oh well, a sweet way to send them off!

mynamerhymeswithTV chapter 4 . 1/4/2008

I loved your a relationship,both people ultimately have,no matter the size or triviality, some sort of Eddie's case it was his panic attack and the way Max helped him was just...God.I thought I loved .I KNOW i love Max I for sure love this work!

Haha, I love the sequel as well. Now I'm going to go sleep because my eyes are dead after reading Act I and this one in a matter of a few hours lol. Great job )

Update soon!

~Mia

SJ chapter 4 . 8/28/2007

Both of these stories are awesome! I can really see the changes in Max from one story to the other. These characters are wonderfully endearing. :D

I'm not clear on one thing, possibly just because of my university experiences versus those of Max and Eddie - are they still living on campus even though they are (or at least, Max is) in graduate school? Maybe that was just a detail I missed.

boredom-sucks-ass chapter 4 . 8/14/2007

It's absolutely great. I read your first one too. I really enjoyed both stories. Also, you hardly had any grammatical errors and I thank you for that. Grammar mistakes give me head aches but your story was a breeze. Keep doing what your doing, and whatever you do, just keep on finishing your stories. Because there's nothing more frustrating ,for the reader, than not being able to finish reading a story.

Bonnie chapter 4 . 6/12/2007

Hi. I just wanted to say that I LOVE Max and Eddie and Eric, and every character from Act I. They ROCK! And you rock, for creating them. Towards the end I got really involved in the story. When Eddie completely aces the performance of 'Quotation Marks' and how Max almost cries and stuff I was all 'Oh. My God.' I And I squealed too many times to count. I love these one shots and I love Act I. TOTALLY AWESOME.