Heh. Just me being a smartass. I like what I'm seeing from the story so far. You do a good job of bringing some nuance to a group in history that is reviled as one of the worst ever envisioned by humanity. Too often, recountings of WWII turn into: the EVIL Germans started invading everybody and slaughtering those they didn't like wholesale, while the EVIL Japanese did the same in the Pacific, and then the HEROIC and GOOD Americans/British/French Resistance/Russians/Speaker's Country of Origin came in and SAVED THE DAY!

In reality, it was a lot more complex than that, and I think you showing a ground-level view of the action from the Axis side does a good job of showing that, so kudos.

I do have some narrative concerns. Hoch and Jarva are progressing EXTREMELY quickly down the relationship path. It's a bit unfeasible that they went from "shots fired" to "one step short of sex" over the course of the month. Real-life relationships take a while longer to evolve to that point, especially when this complex of a circumstance, involving first contact, lies, insults, traumatic injuries, and violence, is in play. That being said, it isn't a deal breaker, and I'm under no illusions that you're in a position to revise at this point; you're four stories in, and you can't revise at the whim of every random reviewer anyway.

One thing that keeps bugging me is grammar and proofing. There are errors all over the place, from misspellings to comma misuse, from run-on sentences to tense errors, from punctuation mix-ups to confusing sentence parsing. This isn't unreadable by any means, but it could definitely use the services of an editor. It's just distracting.

These aside, though, I really do like the story. The idea that aliens would show up for selfish reasons isn't a new one, but that they would come in on the side of the Nazis absolutely is, and I look forward to seeing where it's going. The internal politics of Nazi Germany are something you've only touched on so far, and I really can't wait to see more of that. Will we see anything of the Japanese, or is that another story for another time, and possibly another author?