Wow

learn how to write a sentence

learn how to write a sentence. all of the comma's in all the wrong places, trying to extend sentences is so screwed up. get someone to teach you how to write and the proper use of punctuation.

by
Anonymous10/28/12

Good stuff

Ignore the idiot who was negative about the grammar. What a tossa he is!

by
Anonymous10/29/12

Bad Grammar Takes Away From This Story

Ignore the idiot who said "Ignore the idiot who was negative about the grammar." Poor sentence structure and inconsistent use of tense severely detract from your story. Find someone to proofread your work or, if you already have a proofreader, get a better one.