Drinking Age(pros and cons)7

It is often said that alcohol makes people talkative and jolly. Sometimes, alcohol is good for us to run communication smoothly.
However, alcohol causes many dangerous problems. If people drink a lot of alcohol, they walk with tipsy steps, a slur, and the condition of being unable to make conscious judgment. Also, too much drinking will throw people into disorder. Heavy drinking may invite death.

A lot of countries have a law of drinking alcohol. These countries lay down rules about drinking age. Some people recommend “lowing drinking age”, others people do not. In my opinion do not low drinking age.
Minors are immature, so they got damage seriously. Drinking alcohol lead to the habit or a bad health.

We adults should tell the danger of alcohol to young people. People need to know a good way how to enjoy drinking alcohol.

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> It is often said that alcohol makes people talkative and jolly.
OK
> Sometimes, alcohol is good for us to run communication smoothly.
OK
> However, alcohol causes many dangerous problems.
OK
> If people drink a lot of alcohol, they walk with tipsy steps, a slur, and the condition of being unable to make conscious judgment.
> and the condition of being unable to make conscious judgment.
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they may be unable to make conscious judgment(s)

> A lot of countries have a law of drinking alcohol.
a law of alcohol drinking age
> These countries lay down rules about drinking age.
repetition of the above sentence
It is rather redundant, but OK???
> Some people recommend “lowing drinking age”, others people do not.
age”, –> age,” –> position of a comma after the quote or before the quote