Sally 's real name is Lina, what is she running from? Or should I ask whom is she running from? Sally is working my last nerve, she takes teo steps forward then five steps back. What does Sally/Lina have to with Storm's father and God father? So good!

What is really going on in Sally'a head.? Storm has the patience of Job, Sally is working my last nerve. It has to be than feeling like she isn't good enough, but what? When will she let her guard down with Storm? Storm is a keeper!! Team Storm!

I don't typically review but I have to say I'm not really a fish person the only fish I like is salmon but girl these descriptions of this seafood got me wanting to try some lobster. Anyways good chapter I'm so rooting for Storm and I'm extremely curious about Sally.

I don't typically review but I have to say I'm not really a fish person the only fish I like is salmon but girl these descriptions of this seafood got me wanting to try some lobster. Anyways good chapter I'm so rooting for Storm and I'm extremely curious about Sally.

Thank you for updating! ! Sally why are so close off? You haven't opened up about aspect of your life except for school. Storm isn't letting you go, just let go and allow him to love you. He his capable of protecting you.

I like Storm, but back when he was pissed that Sally left him the morning after, that pissed me off. She was right he had done that before on numerous occassions. Okay fine. They had an argument and went their separate ways for a minute. They were not in a relationship, I know, but Storm slept with five women and possibly more, but still can't get Sally off his mind. WTF!! Yes, Sally kissed whoever she was with. Okay I get that too, but Sally was not off effin everything with legs and to make it okay say, 'I had to think of Sally to finish.' Would he care if Sally slept with six men and say she only did it because she was trying to chase that feeling with him away. I'll answer that, YES he would care. But the only reason this is not an issue is because Sally will never know. Yeah, he had better showed her those STD free papers. I know them not being together is the important part, but if they were together and they argued would he just go on a f*ckin spee? The story has progressed since then, but Storm made me sick in that chapter. This is a great story, but Storm gets on my nerves.

I really wish that Sally would tell Storm about her stalker. He is an ADA and is friends with a cop so he really can help her. Rhonda is such a dumb ho, and is not really your friend Sally. Cut her loose! Thank you for the update!

Not sure who's copying who.. biut I literally just read this same story on literotica.com in the interracial love category with the same story title by an author who goes by the pen name honeyrider1517. I just wanted to bring this to your attention. It looks as though you started your story back in 2011 and the fraud started theirs in 2014. I just thought you should be aware that some lame is bootlegging your ideas.

I'm glad she's opening up to him. He's definitely an Aplha male!! lol. Which is good and probably what she needs in her life, but he needs to listen to her and respect her too. His mother is gonna be a handful, but I think he'll handle her easily. Good update!!

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