Rated 5 / 5 stars2011-02-21 16:34:20

Well done.

Well to start off, I'd like to say that you did a great job. The artwork was fine, there was not a second of dullness and the story was intriguing as well.
My opinion is that you must have put a lot of work into this and well, the results are super.
Keep up the good work.

(oh btw, there was one thing which i didn't fully understand and that you may want to consider, the protagonists voice, i don't think i was needed, and if you had left him numb i think that would have caused a bigger impact then giving him a voice and only a bit of text)

Yours sincerely,

Kriemhield

P.S. the ending still isn't something I'd like to see but oh well, you are the author and so it's your job to introduce us to a new world (with or without furies)

P.P.S all this comments can be ignored, but know that they were meant only in a positive way