Terrifying. The athmosphere of distrust. And I could feel an incredible anger against all Gryffindors welling up in me, and even more against Snape. That's how stories should be!You should have made it a single story with several chapters though, it's faster than searching the archives for the next part.

Harry was caught quite at unawares by this. His first reaction was to scratch his head. "What do you say in a situation like this?" came an almost coherent thought."Either yes or no, I expect," came another, even more coherent thought.Then the clearest of all: "And why not?"-sounds like the conversatuions I have in MY head.. well done, that

i defnitely really liked this. and THANK YOU for aknowledging peopels BRITHDAYS- unlike JK! apprently only harry gets older, as he is the only person with birthdays. feh on that, but well dont on your part!im off to read tha next!

Reviewer: Rudraa

Date: 2002-12-04

Reviewid: 11176

Chapter: 1

Spectacular. I'm a new reader of the Hary Potter series and I'm sure Rwling herself would have been proud of writing something like this. Keep up the good work, and create a complete alternate story for us before Phoenix comes out.

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