Don't apologize for your English; it's far better than my [non-existant] Arabic. As Emerana mentioned your image is rather over-sharpened, but the capture itself is very good. She has a great expression - well done.

As far as the edit itself goes, perhaps you could post the original as well, and we could provide some input with respect to recommended processing and so forth. Was this shot as a RAW image, or as a .jpg?