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Oh, yes, drawing on drawing paper is always helpful.
Then, even if it's a tad blurry, it's still easier to see then on lined paper.

Two things that really stick out for me on the first one are:
a. The eyes are kinda disproportionate; the left one is too big compared to the right one. It's also too high up on the face compared to the other one.
Eyes are really important when you're drawing so try drawing all different types before actually putting them on a face.
and
b. The hair. Hair is a really hard thing to master, but what I see right now is that there's a lot of hair on the left of the picture but not nearly as much on the right. Pairing that with the extra large eye on the left, it makes it seem unbalanced.

So, what I say to work on most right now is hair and eyes.
Don't be afraid to look at other mangas or anime as well to get a feel for the differences. =D

Other than that, just keep drawing and I'm sure that you'll become great. ^_^

Nice...It looks better on the drawing paper ^_^.....looking good...the problem I see is the eyes are not symmetrical and the nose might be a little off to the side but thats a small problem im sure you can easliy over come!