I would love to see a follow up on this in an actual story, this is the perfect opener for such a thing, it has great chemistry between neal and dean-not sexual chemistry, but just general on screen chemistry, they work well together- it just has so much potential, i tried to find something similar in the crossover section but nothing compares to what you have here, you left it open in such a way that you could start with neal calling dean about a case or personal experience ect ect and go from there -cries- its such a shame! if you decided to actually follow up on this, please give me a shout, it would be awesome to see this happen!

Wow! This was nice! Just really, really nice and velvety smooth. Excellent flow and all that jazz. I confess I'd love to read a sequel of a similar length involving Neal having to make that call when something weird does happen. I'd definitely read it if you wrote it and let me know that you had.