Thank you, BoundFeet. Very much. Support (or praise) is as constructive as suggestions can be. — cualquier

is anyone else willing to provide something? — unknown

Yes. — unknown

its too long (not your penis) and the title doesn't make sense (going). — friedMnoodle

The title not making sense I agree to an extent. Particularly the "Phase-changes", the rest of it I find necessary. I will look for an alternative to "Phase-changes" because, although it's open to interpretation, even to me despite the fact that I had a certain meaning for it in mind, that isn't necessarily good. If you have a suggestion, do give. (As for the mention of a penis.. regardless of whether it's random and up to your [surely] universal opinion, i[t] won't [be me who] refute[s] your claim). (; — cualquier

As for being too long, well.. I can't say much there. Structure is structure, and it turned out the way it did. I felt if I placed everything side by side it would be a bit too messy, regardless of the juxtaposition. You'd just need to have diligence in reading, I guess.. — cualquier

Not trying to sound pretentious or anything, but simply saying it's too long isn't really saying much- it's hard to narrow some things down by whim because whim doesn't go far. — unknown