haha, this was brilliant. as a Canadian, and a devout football fan, i say we sure do have bigger balls up here in the Great White North! this was super cute, and seemed totally real! and forthe record, when two teams are named "Roughriders" or "Rough Riders" it makes it really hard to bet for or against them.

I had read this story a while ago and a few days ago I remembered it and thought about looking for it. I can't remember very well but you've made some changes, haven't you? I think it's for the better, I think some things weren't very clear when I first read it. Anyway, loved it. It was very funny.

Hey. Are you ragging on Canadians and Canadian football? I'm Canadian and I don't appreciate it. FYI: The Roughriders, while there WERE two, never existed at the same time. Ottawa had it first, then they disbanded their team and Saskatchewan (the Riders are MY team) picked it up, then Ottawa got a team back and have a different name now. I can only imagine that you're American, no offense. Good job though.

Wow! What can I say, but PLEASE (I'm on my knees) please write a second chapter. This was so funny and cute that I was so sad when I got to the end. I wanted more. Loved the whole Canadian Football and Pink Floyd references.. ) Good Job! Great Fluff! Please write a sequel! PLEASE!