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Regarding the OWL 2 Document Overview document current at
http://www.w3.org/TR/owl2-overview
(http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-owl2-overview-20090611/):
* Section 2.3 says:
However, some conditions must be placed on ontology structures in
order to ensure that they can be translated into a SROIQ knowledge
base, for example, transitive properties cannot be used in number
restrictions (see Section 3 of the OWL 2 Structural Specification
document [OWL 2 Structural Specification] for a complete list of these
conditions).
That should be "... base; for example, ..."
* Section 2.3 says "RDF-graphs." That should be simply "RDF graphs."
* Section 2.3 says:
... Specification, i.e, as ...
That sould be:
... Specification, i.e., as ...
Daniel
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