Please forgive my phasing into art director mode, but...: his tail seems to be a little too long, and maby a little too wavy. The tail serves as a counterbalance, and would be roughly the same length as the head+body above/in front of the hip joint. And while not board-rigid, it'd also be a little too stiff to get that slight slithery action yo have it doing (That's provided I remember text descriptions of how Rhee moves correctly, plus what I remember from assorted "talking to the experts" and "animating the dinosaurs" shorts from the Jurassic Park movies, King Kong, etc. I've tried to picture how Rhee moves from an animator's prespective. Your milage may vary.)

Also, always important with non-human characters: work out how they wear their clothing: how they get into it, how it moves, etc. Not sucha big deal here, but nevertheless worth considering.

This is my first visit here. I really like your artwork. Since I am not familiar with the characters, I won't try to critique you. As others have said, you make me want to find the books they are based upon.

This is not a classroom situation or a job for which I've been contracted. I felt like doodling some pie in-the-sky spinning about the possibility of a TITAN animated series. That's it.

There's no need to do deep crits here because:

1) I will ignore them. I'm simply not taking the "work" seriously enough here to warrant crits and corrections. If the nacelles are off axis or too short for the body or the hull is too white or something, I don't actually care. Because....

2) It's just for FUN. FUN.

3) If it stops being fun I will stop doing it.

If you feel something is off or not exactly as you pictured it in your mind you are very much invited to post your own version in this thread. See point #2.

It's funny because I remember using your bridge design as a mental model when writing SoD. Some people were asking why Ailli had a co-pilot or co-navigator and I was like "There are two chairs and two consoles. Sean won the contest so there must be two stations there."

As you can see from the wallpaper, I'm nowhere near as good at machines as figures and will probably be too lazy to devote the necessary time to a serious bridge shot.

This is not a classroom situation or a job for which I've been contracted. I felt like doodling some pie in-the-sky spinning about the possibility of a TITAN animated series. That's it.

There's no need to do deep crits here because:

1) I will ignore them. I'm simply not taking the "work" seriously enough here to warrant crits and corrections. If the nacelles are off axis or too short for the body or the hull is too white or something, I don't actually care. Because....

2) It's just for FUN. FUN.

3) If it stops being fun I will stop doing it.

If you feel something is off or not exactly as you pictured it in your mind you are very much invited to post your own version in this thread. See point #2.