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Luna was sealed. Inside a boy. In an unlikely partnership, Luna offers the boy a summoning contract to help him in his upcoming ninja exams. She forgets to tell him what it summons. The boy didn't care to ask. Instant recipe for disaster. ·Pen Mightier

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After Link saved Hyrule and Midna returned to the Twilight Realm, Link continues to travel the land for adventure. A year has passed and our hero in green revisits the Sacred Grove where the Master Sword resides only to later discover a portal. ·James

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When a lightning storm gave the yogscast members mystical powers to travel between worlds in thier minds... but its not a power, when it turns out to be a curse. If they die or suffer injuries from the other world, it will happen at Earth! ·TheSpinterCell

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Ruby, team JNPR, and her Uncle Qrow get thrown into Equestria by one of their shadowy foes just before the ponies there celebrate the 1000th Summer Sun Celebration, how will things change with five humans and their otherwordly powers? Come find out! ·hunter81095

Reading an epic tale of one of the Third Hokage's missions, a 6 year old Naruto sets himself on getting some awesome summons of his own. Unable to find a contract on short notice, and not understanding why a contract is required, he goes through the necessary motions anyways and winds up in Equestria. Can Naruto convince the locals to let him be their summoner? Is the ninja world ready for the likes of Pinky Pie? Just how much will a young Naruto benefit from the Magic of Friendship?

The story-line is childish, the premise is excessively cute, and the actions and interactions between the characters are somewhat silly...

And, god help me, I really like it so far.

It's entertaining, well paced, and flows smoothly. Some of the dialogue comes across as a bit awkward... but Naruto always did come across that way in the show and the comics. His thought processes are believably those of a six year old boy, and his attitude shows through, well.

You'll want to italicize his thoughts, by the way. Or do something to visually set them apart from the narration, since this is done in third person. Other than that and the occasional typo/formatting error, neither of which are common enough to detract from immersion, the story is fairly well written.

While it's too early to truly judge the quality of the plot, there's a lot of potential in this idea, and I'm very curious to see where it goes. Good on you! Keep at it and I hope to see more from you soon.

SO you have a good start to this story and I'm interested to see where it goes. One thing that you should probably think of doing is to rough out a general timeline as Naruto is a ridiculously long and convoluted storyline, if you already haven't. Even if it only goes to the chunin exam or even the wave mission it will help you keep the pacing steady and consistent. You also will have less of a chance of getting yourself off on a tangent that you didn't intend to go on. Don't be afraid to do some character development as while it might slow the plot it will help in the long run by investing readers in your characters and their fates.

Invictus is right you should do something to help readers understand what are thoughts and what aren't.

OK you get me tracking it and I want the next update. So you did a good job and the story is showing promise. Just make sure to take the time you need to make each chapter the best you can, don't feel like you need to stamp them out at some insane pace. Even if we are all waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

Hello greetings from Peru, sorry if my English is somewhat crude, but I do not speak English.

Well this would be my first croos over I read, from the day I joined the ranks of MLP: Fim, and well I must admit that for the first two chapters is quite interesting (although I say I hate Naruto-_-no me wrong, what I hate is that it is stupidly long the series). But I must admit what you did in your introduction, I like, and was one of the main reasons I'm writing this comment, the big question is if naruto-_-acceptance, our beloved ponies.

Almost forgot, do not put much filling you like maybe some but not others.

Wow, I subbed to this for about 2 hours and BAM!, new chapter already? Lucky me!

Just one gripe: when you're expressing a character's thoughts in a third person narrative, you isolate the thoughts themselves with single quotes and (not necessary, but common and in good taste) italic font.

Also, nice to see somepony that remembered that Naruto would sure go gaga over an orange pony!

Well... when I first saw this I was thinking it was when he tried summing the Boss Toad... and ended up summoning the Boss Pony, Her Serene Majesty in all her badass glory. Still even being wrong about that you have done a good job so far at merging the worlds.

This is far better than I could have even hoped for. You genuinely surprised me, good job. I'm also impressed with the speed of your updates. Just don't feel that you need to push yourself, we will wait for updates if you need us to.

Of course people look past the anti-hype of the Naruto series, due to the fact that this is an awesome crossover! I mean the Naruto series has gotten so stale that a crossover with anything like another Anime, Book, Cartoon, Game, Movie, or TV show can bring its true potential to light as long as the authors know what they are doing and have enough knowledge of both types of genre in order to use it correctly while following the canon story-line of both sources and combining them at a specific point to make a truly amazing story.

Screw the "real" story the beginning was awesome.... This Naruto is going to astound the teachers at the ninja school. Two solid years of pony training will have turned him into a very solid, strong, smart, and skilled 8 year old. None of his year mates will be able to handle him let alone pick on him. Can't wait to see their reactions when he apple bucks a wooden training dummy right out of the ground.

Ponies are a good influence on everyone. What we are seeing is the side of Naruto that could have been if he had been nurtured early on. This is a great look at character development and you are an incredible speed writer.

I like it. I like it a lot. I can't wait until he summons his ponies to fight. The inevitable underestimation, and the following beat down will be priceless. I think, though, Twilight may need to learn some offensive and defensive Magic.

the dwarf hey -_- is superior, in a series super menso fill it up where it is beaten by Sasuke, u_u, bufeado peer to be the boss over the matter ... if the series would have persentado, a Naruto as that relates in his fiction today would be in my favorites, jijiji reaqlmente now if I like the peak of naruto head. the advantages are incredible

Also, great chapter dude, but you gotta pace yourself. You don't want to burn out all your ideas at once, do you? My advice is to write out all your inspiration in either outline or chapter format and when you have no more inspiration coming to you, that is when you post the next couple of chapters. Any true fan of this story, like myself, will appreciate all the hard work that you put into it no matter how long it takes between chapters. I look forward to the excitement of the next chapter.