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Review:

BKL8008 says:Great imagining of the aftermath of the blast. So real to "see" as you read it. Enough detail, but not overly so as to be cumbersome. Well done, with just hints of magic, so that we who know, know what's going on!

Author's Response: You've caught me as I'm going through answering all my reviews! It was quite a surprise to refresh the page and see this here, and I'm so pleased to see you've returned. I've responded to about 5 reviews from you tonight -- that just blows my mind, I am so grateful!

I'm glad you enjoyed this story, too -- I think it's at least in my top 5 one-shots I've written. I like the darker ones, for some reason, although I'm not sure why. I don't think of myself as a particularly dark person! Thanks so much for the review!