Idea: maybe write a journal entry of right after Bella's change in BD when she realized that Jacob had imprinted on her daughter. That scene was the funniest in the whole book! I so would love to read Edward's take on his Bella finally snapping when it came to Jake (even if it was short-lived).

My goodness, why have I not read this one-shot yet? You GET him, Marliarna - you do!

I loved this: "It is too much...the beautiful, terrible crimson rush, every drop of it a separate flame in my throat, pooling, wasted- scattering my thoughts like ashes in a high wind; there is only -need."

And this: " Liquid light burning its way through my body and leaving rapture in its wake, ecstasy too intense to bear." - Marvellous.

I have a suggestion: What were Edward's impressions of Alice and Jasper the first time he met them? I've been thinking a lot about that, and I'd be interested to read your take.