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Review:

angel_speaks says:Hiya!
Emesias here with your requested review!

This is very interesting! It surely did grab my attention and i surely do want to read more of this. Plot is definitely interesting and like i said, quite the attention grabber and the characters seem to go really well with the plot. I can't wait to see how Bentley develops throughout the chapters and how the other characters interact with him ^_^ At the moment, for a prologue, it flows really well so far. We'll just have to see with the up coming chapters ^_^ Lastly, this chapter is well written! I didn't see anything that's grammatically incorrect! (I noticed you have a beta; it's always good to have another set of eyes looking over you shoulder ^_^)

Overall, you're off to a good start! I love the uniqueness of the plot and the introduction of your OC! Good job!

Happy Writing!!! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :)

I'm glad you found this story interesting as I know it's really difficult to be original and not mary-sue with it being a teen pregnancy story and all.