Well, let's see . . . . The music is very good, and the timing of the shots is pretty good, though personally, I like it when the timing is not all the same .
Some shots were repeated, and that gets a bit boring for the viewer. I like the way you had specific parts of the lyrics up, not the whole thing (like subtitles).

I would have loved to have seen some moving video, not just stills.

Is that a good critique for you?

Almond Joy

02-02-2013 08:25 AM

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Originally Posted by tinyliny
(Post 1874133)

Well, let's see . . . . The music is very good, and the timing of the shots is pretty good, though personally, I like it when the timing is not all the same .
Some shots were repeated, and that gets a bit boring for the viewer. I like the way you had specific parts of the lyrics up, not the whole thing (like subtitles).

I would have loved to have seen some moving video, not just stills.

Is that a good critique for you?

Awesome, thank you!

Yeah, we didn't have any moving video prepared since my camera died last time when we planned to get more videos of them, and I really had to stretch some of them out to fit the song :/

Thanks so much for the critique though, it will help a lot if I make another one!