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Yea I like this man. Delivery is top notch. Sounds really clean, flow is on point. Hook is pretty cool. Lyrically nice too. Did u make the beat aswell? Fits the song nicely. Beat is done well tooDope man

You obviously know what you are doing, and, that will come in handy in the future.Whatever project you will be working on will need that extra time, though.You'll wanna make sure that you'll craft your project to perfection.

At the moment, it seems like you have spent extensive amounts of time on this rap thing, and, if you are really serious about this, you should go through with putting yourself out there.Don't be afraid to use social media, hand out CDs, and use word of mouth.

TripleNineThree wrote:I have to get going so I don't have time to leave detailed feedback but wow, this is really dope. I actually replayed it, that does not happen very often with songs on TR. Great job man!

Thank you! I’m glad you replayed it, hopefully it became easier to grasp with each listen.

-AKA- wrote:Yea I like this man. Delivery is top notch. Sounds really clean, flow is on point. Hook is pretty cool. Lyrically nice too. Did u make the beat aswell? Fits the song nicely. Beat is done well tooDope man

Nope I didn't produce the beat but I mixed the vocals into it. When I saw that the instrumental for Big Sean’s “Beware” was available to the public I had to jump on it. Thanks for the listen, glad you can appreciate the writing.

mdemaz wrote:Gonna say this now while I can.

You obviously know what you are doing, and, that will come in handy in the future.Whatever project you will be working on will need that extra time, though.You'll wanna make sure that you'll craft your project to perfection.

At the moment, it seems like you have spent extensive amounts of time on this rap thing, and, if you are really serious about this, you should go through with putting yourself out there.Don't be afraid to use social media, hand out CDs, and use word of mouth.

Alright, take it easy.

Keep up the good work.

This post meant a lot. I’m actually going to medical school in January, but I’m hoping to finish and release an EP by then (or a mix tape, whatever this qualifies as). I put a lot of time into each line on a song, so you’re spot on. Thank you for the tips dude, I hope you continue to appreciate my work!

Eedee wrote:I liked it a lot. Not much else I can say that hasn't already been said.

Good shit bro. I dropped in this section years back and you would of been top 4 on this site judging on this track alone. I would like to hear more from you so i can geta broader feel and offer some constructive critism

Boston wrote:Good shit bro. I dropped in this section years back and you would of been top 4 on this site judging on this track alone. I would like to hear more from you so i can geta broader feel and offer some constructive critism

That's awesome to hear. New stuff coming soon (I have a mixtape with 5 songs I will be releasing slowly, and soon)

Kangol wrote:sorry for the bump but this is dopee GJ

No need to apologize, I appreciate the feedback and the bump! stay tuned for more new shit coming soon

Ha, this is smooth as fuck.The harmonies work well most of the time, they're nice and laid back without being to "look at me I can sing a few notes", like you're not trying to hard just going where the beat takes you or some philosophical shit like that.Rhyme schemes were nice. Overall pretty good.