Feed back is welcomed! ;-)

Just published my first hub today. Between wrestling with my almost 2 year old and trying to proof read I think it took me the majority of the morning to get it up but alas, I did it!!I would like as much constructive criticism as possible, please and thank you! And some tips and advice here and there is welcomed just the same.

You did a great job. I just think for the dos and don'ts you might considering making a bullet list and bolding the words you want to focus on. Otherwise it was a great length and you did a good job giving quality advice.

A common problem for all writers, taking other peoples' suggestions and criticisms gracefully is essential to the process. I personally, welcome any and all advice from my readers that is constructive and true. I find...

Any advice on what to do when no more tweaking is possible?You’ve got the dreaded Zzzz’s and have tweaked and tuned some particular hubs to the ’nth’ degree. They’re well-written, grammatical and erudite but,...

I've been on hubpages 9 months now and starting to see some light from what i've been doing in a number of my hubs however it's always good to get another opinion and other successful hubbers advice and thoughts. My...

I don't think any ads are showing up on my profile. Google adsense disapproved me because I'm new I guess and it is my understanding that Amazon and Ebay won't accept me until Google Adsense does. Is this correct, or is...