Warriors names :D Kewl. lolz I like it how Longclaw's just like 'Saberpaw is amazing, HE CAUGHT ONE MOUSE!" that made me laugh :)

good story chapter 6 . 3/30/2013

this fan fiction is great. Here is my warrior that i made up

name: Duskstorm
gender: tom
rank: warrior
Description: A larde golden tom with long fur and light grey patches. His eyes are a blueish-grey.

really good chapter 2 . 3/29/2013

this chapter was great. i enjoyed it but got confused when Silverkit said," Can i go to Yellowstone." I thought Silverkit meant the national park, but that's probably just me. also you ended it on a great cliff hanger.

My I submit a cat for your story?
Lilypaw
Same age as Tigerpaw
Tigerpaw 's clan or Smokepaw's
Light peachish colored shecat with a white muzzle sky blue eyes and a
white tailtip and paws
Also in love with Smokepaw if in tigerpaws clan they can both meet him and accidently meet on the same night