That was all over the fricken place! I don't know what THOSE people were reading << BTW You just like killed Harry Potter. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO JKR!? You just like, don't respect the fact she's taken 15+ years to write 6 novels (and one to still be released) and you just like killed her work with one little stunt. Oh, and if you're going to write a one-hit-wonder, atleast make it a little bit longer << My stories that I write are 6 times the length of that, and that's per chapter. Don't get me wrong, you're a good writer, just your story has no.. background. So I couldn't get into the mood. Like one minute, she's at class running away, twenty words later it's dinner, 15 words later it's after dinner, and thirty words after that Lily's dead. Keep practicing your writing skills, when it's improved, I wil promise you to bite my tongue and appologise for this... creative response. 'Till then ~ Boosyboy

how can you b so evil as to leave a CLIFFIE like that? your EVIL you MUST UPDATE! THATS AN ORDER!!!! MUST UPDATE!! MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST UPDATE!!!! I'll go CRAZY if you don't! c'mon, make James go save Lily!

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cassie black,
a.k.a padfoot