"And when Sora became an empty lifeless doll that shudderred at every touch Riku hunted Axel down for the same revenge once sought on Sora. Revenge for taking away his loved one. However his revenge would involve blood if it was the last thing he did."

Sorry just my thoughts on how blank Sora's responses are. Really awesome story. I particularly enjoyed the style of it where you only heard Sora's words in his point of view...oh gawd analysis tells me it's because Axel can't/doesn't want to hear Sora. *head desk* Okay I just added the last part of my scene cuz I couldn't imagine Riku raping Axel XD Okay the over hyper n00b will shuttup now. Hope to see more awesome soon.

Wow this story is amazing and I totally think that you should continue it because it has an amazing plot. Poor Sora I cant believe that Axel would do that to him just because Roxas disapperaed. I mean its not like either Sora or Roxas had a say in the matter it was all Diz and Ansems fault but he picked Sora who was the easier target, anyways loved this amazing story. Love ya forever and ever. XD