FINALLY a mature Makorra story that doesn't include lemons! Hahaha! (I prefer dark themes & torture over smut any day.)

But seriously, this was intense. Poor, poor Mako (and Korra), having to go through that horrible torture ... I wonder what's going to happen in the sequel. That is, if you even plan on posting it, which I think you SHOULD. Great story. :)

I really love this story- it's so emotional and it portrays a great dark side to LoK that a lot of writers ignore. It makes the situations they're in seem more realistic! If you have the time, I would love it if you checked out my LoK story- your opinion would mean a lot

It feels wrong to give cheerful praise for such a dark story; but this is really well-written, and emotional, and real. It definitely calls for a sequel, though, especially since Mako is still unconscious at the end; I at least wanted him and Korra to make eye contact and say something mutual. Good job on this.

please please please put up the sequel VERY VERY soon. i loved this in a creepy but entertainingly sad way. You are a very good writer and ill be checking every day for "Aftershock" hopefully i won't have to wait too much longer!