(Closed) Could I get STD opinions?

So I did my first draft of my STD. I can’t tell if it’s too simple or not, and would definitely appreciate any sort of feedback! Good, bad, whatever. 🙂 (Oh, and the picture looks a bit funny, but the color of text is actually all the same.)

I wouldn’t say it’s too plain. It doesn’t scream wedding, but it does scream autumn! I think it’s nice. I would make sure you don’t have the white areas in the text (like in the a’s and d’s). Also, have you tried making the leaf between the date and location smaller? Right now it kind of looks like a D, but making it smaller may help it look more like a decoration.

I love the leaves and pumpkins! Great for a fall wedding. I think it looks great, but if I were doing an STD, I would have the date centered, and then the location below the date. You want them to remember the Date!! But that’s my preference!

@BlueChampagne: It’s going to be a postcard. And it definitely isn’t SUPER weddingy, but I think I’m more excited about the fall aspect of it. 🙂 Well, wedding is fun too…but I think I’m really excited about it being in fall, so that’s what my focus is. And I totally agree with the letters. It actually is filled in…though to make it a picture, I had to copy and paste it into paint program, which took away the top half of the color. Complicated stuff. 🙂 I do appreciate your feedback! Thank you!

@Violachap: That makes a lot of sense! I’ll fiddle with rearranging it. Thank you 🙂