I wouldn't call it industrial (not that I'm an industrial purist or anything), but that title did get my attention I like the sounds and the rhythm. It's strong and fun. I might suggest bringing the arpeggiated synth up a bit in the mix, and lower the hihat a bit. Otherwise, it's a fun bit of aggressive synth metal/techno, or whatever

Have you heard the music Jarrid Mendelson made for House Ordos in the Dune Emperor game soundtrack? This reminds me of that. Check it out

Agreed on adding aggressive vocals and guitar, but I vote for no Cookie Monster vocalist, since it seems most aggressive vocals tend to ignore actual singing But then, this isn't our song to write, it's Vort3x's