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Thursday, August 23, 2012

Prologue or NO Prologue--What do you prefer?

The use of prologues have sparked many opinions—some authors swear
by them, some say never use them.

What is the purpose of a prologue?

It’s a writing technique that allows authors to outline a
complicated back-story that would otherwise bog down a chapter with flashbacks. It is
also used as a tease introduction to hook the reader. You’ll find prologues
used more in the fantasy and science fiction genre than any other genre.

This prologue serves to let the reader know up front that
there are ancient ties between the planets of Otharia and Earth. It also gives
hints about the origin of the Arthurian legends, the Lady of the Lake and the
magician Merlin., at least, according to Dave and I. Here’s an example of the prologue used in QUEST FOR
NOBILITY:

Prologue – Earth, 5th
Century AD

With bloody sword in
hand, Reaver looked over the scene of the massacre.It did not sit well with him, what he had done, but he was
loyal to his commander.The orders
had been simple: kill them all, and so he had done his best.Now, with most of the killing done, he
had time to reflect.

May the gods have
mercy on our souls.

***

The Telkur duty
telekinetic looked up as the unauthorized portal started to form. He checked
the coordinates and was shocked to see that the incoming portal was from the
planet Earth. That off-world expedition was not due to check in for another
month.

“What the...”

Before he could finish
his sentence, two bloodied men staggered through the opening.

“We’ve been attacked,”
the first man said. “All is lost.”

More men and women
stumbled through the portal with varying degrees of battle wounds. The duty
telekinetic was stunned. Earth was a primitive planet, but from all the
previous indications, its people were peaceful.

Snapping out of his
shock, he opened a comm link directly to the Duke of Telkur.

“Sire, we have trouble
at the portal station. Some of the expedition members are back and are badly
wounded.Please come immediately
and bring the healers.”

***

The gavel banged and the
Master Clerk read the declaration.

“Let it be known that,
from this day forward, off-world travel to the planet Earth is prohibited.”

Duke Rael Telkur sat
unmoving in the Grand Council chamber room. The decree was final. There would
be no more travel to Earth. He had lost a fortune financing the ill-fated expedition.It had required four 10K crystals
powering the portals to transport the hundred-plus explorers and their
supplies.Normally, a 10K crystal
would provide a duchy with more than three years of local planetary
travel.But more importantly than
the crystal expense, he had lost fifty loyal men and women to brutality.Only five of his expedition team had
made it back to Otharia, but they all subsequently died of their wounds.The Vogdo team members had fared only
slightly better; a mere ten of their men returned.

Rael glanced down the
table to where his partner in this venture, Duke Jaks Vogdo, sat stone-faced.
There was nothing more to be done.

Jaks looked at Rael and
nodded.You naive fool, Rael.If only you knew the truth.

Jak’s duchy was
rich in crystal mines located within the Sharellian Mountains.Everyone believed the crystal veins
were bottomless, and the Vogdo family thought the same until the veins started
to dry up.

Fate and fortune
had shone favorably upon Jaks Vogdo when mineral-rich Earth was discovered. He
eagerly agreed to form an alliance with Rael to explore this strange new world.
They would share expenses for the exorbitant cost of off-world exploration and
divide any potential riches evenly.

At least that was
the plan, but greed has a way of eliminating alliances even among friends.
Blinded by unimaginable wealth, Jaks had no compunction about turning on his
partner and ordering the massacre of the Telkur team members.

“The crystals must
be shipped back here without a trace,” Jaks told his man on Earth.“I’ll open the portal from Earth
directly into my mines and transfer the foreign crystals unseen.No one will ever know the truth.”

***

“I told you this would work,” Merlinius Telkur said.

His partner Vivienne shook her head at his boasting.She hated this planet Earth.They had been running for days from the
Vogdo hunting party and she was at the end of her patience.Their 10K traveling crystal was gone
and they had no way to return to Otharia or even contact them to let them know
what had transpired here.There
were so few of the Telkur expedition that had escaped the initial attack, and
now they were stuck on this primitive planet.

“Save your breath, Merlinius,” Vivienne shot back.“Just concentrate on holding your shield
until those bastards out there leave and we can get out of here.”

“I know that,”
Merlinis replied, exasperated at Vivienne’s curt command.“You make sure your own shield
holds.If they detect our life
signs, this ruse will be for nothing and we’ll have to run again.”

Vivienne sighed heavily.At the moment, she didn’t know which was worse: Merlinius’ bravado, or
being stranded on Earth with a band of Vogdo killers outside the cave hunting
them.

When we began writing QUEST, we struggled with how to convey
these hints without bogging down the story of royal twins, Darius and Dyla
Telkur, and their struggle to hold onto their duchy when they are accused of murder. There had to be a reason that the twins would flee to Earth and this served that purpose because in less than 900 words, it put the link between Earth and Otharia in the reader's minds from the beginning of the story.

We ended up using two options to convey information to the reader and
keeping the story moving. We opted for a prologue and also at the beginning of
each chapter, set down the rules from the Chronicles
of Otharia.This informed the reader about the history of Otharia
rule without slowing down the story. Here’s an example:

Excerpt from the Chronicles of Otharia during the reign of the First
Vacancy:

Division I – The Rule of Otharia

Subsection I – The Kingdom

The planet of Otharia has
two major landmasses and multiple island chains.The larger of the two continents is referred to as the
Kingdom of Otharia, though there hasn’t been a reigning king in over a thousand
years.The kingdom is subdivided
into a number of duchies, each ruled by a royal family and a seated duke or
duchess.The duchies vary in size,
but their wealth is dependant on the natural resources of the region and the
ingenuity of the reigning duke.The smaller continent is ruled by multiple clans of gypsies, who broke
from the Kingdom at the death of the last King.

So
what about you? Have you used prologues in your books? Do you like them or do
you think they are unnecessary?

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