It was really great. There was a lot of great emotions in there that I have probably ever seen on here. I am indeed new on here but still those were really strong words that you wrote in there about this character. Also you did a good job.

I thought that one could be a lot stronger. For instance, the transition from Brawn's decision to rip his leg off if he couldn't get out to him firing at "the Decepticon" could have been smoother. Also, the D-con's "Believe me" was jarring. Somehow it wasn't i/ right/.

And how did the Decepticon know how to undo the trap? I understand why a person wouldn't want to go into detail, especially just for a drabble, but it sounds at first as if he's struggling against a web, then as if he's got his leg caught in a bear trap, both of which wouldn't necessarily be something a Decepticon alone would know how to undo.

I would also like to tell Ratchet that there's psychological benefit to telling a patient it isn't going to hurt. His philosophy is entirely in-character, though.

Conspiracy Theorist chapter 3 . 8/23/2011

YAY, it's Drift! Why don't you ever write a full-length story about him? (whines) I heard TyLeeChan was going to write one, but then her parents took her off the internet or something. Is she ever coming back? (Or is it all just a minor conspiracy and she actually died or something?)

In other news, I loved the way you've done this. (Did you know some authors say that getting ideas is just a matter of slowing down those "what if" moments?) I did notice, however, that you tend to use Said-Bookism, especially in the third chapter. I hardly noticed, though, so it probably doesn't matter.

Also, there's a couple places that sound awkward- nothing big, it's kind of hard to make big mistakes in unconnected drabbles, but it could use work.

Interesting, I don't know why but I tend to prefer these kinds of stories.

On another note, Perceptor!

In my headcanon, Perceptor didn't really kill off his emotions, cause ya know, emotions are key to creativity in any field (a pure machine isn't nearly as good when it comes the very necessary step of actually coming up with ideas) but instead deadened them so much that everyone just said he deleted them.