Random comic!

Harry’s Jaw Dropped

I may have missed a few, and some of the chapter references may be a bit off, but I promise you they’re all in there!

I’m going through editing my novel at the moment (57% through and counting) and it’s really hammering home for me how careful you have to be to avoid repeating the same expressions time after time. How J K Rowling’s editor didn’t pick up this phrase after seven books, I really don’t know.

Discussion (2) ¬

After reading this comic my jaw literally dropped! ;o)
Maybe they fell asleep or it all blurred into one monotonously long pre-amble to a dreary seque to make up page numbers BEFOREEVERYTHINGALLHAPPENSATONCEINABOUTTWOPAGES and they reached the end?