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Review:

crystal allan says:The beginning here made me giddy. Yeah, it’s silly but it’s the truth. Eliot was so sweet and tender – the way he guided her with his hand on her back or shoulder was just adorable. You didn’t over emphasize those things, and wrote them in there very casually. That made all the difference. I really like how slowly you’re taking that relationship – God knows that if it were me they’d be snogging already ^_^ But seriously, it’s a good progression and makes me love both characters even more.

Now, on the other hand, the H.E. seem a bit creepy to me. There was something very strange about that scene and the way they all interacted, which you seemed to note a bit in the motioning of how strangely formal they were. I’m not exactly sure what to think of them, but at this point in time the impression is skeptical.

That bit at the ending about Harry was very intriguing, dear. I really like how you’ve been unfolding this story. Each chapter brings in a new aspect of the progression and we learn something either important to the plot or something in the characterization (which, of course, is equally important). I’ve never been imaginative with the spells and curses part of the HP fandom, and I’m really very envious of those of you that can come up with all those wonderfully creative things :-)

Author's Response: Thank you... I am very happy that you like this, so far... At the moment I am away and I am not writing much... but I will be back... The H.E. hmm evil, not evil... it is really very hard to say, I hope you'll find the solution to your liking when it comes...