Tuesday, 10 March 2015

@phil

Hi Phil

Considering that you talked about my character designs on the green light review you didn't say how I could improve it or what I need to look into. you you please comment on what part of my character design that could be expanded or improved, thank you.

2 comments:

Well, partly my point for not giving you too much feedback was in the hope that you're produce a bazillion more designs in a fit of creative curiosity! I think my issue is simply that, in terms of design as an ongoing process, I'd like to see you produce more of these sorts of designs - but perhaps move a little further away from the ball with eyes and the sausage with eyes - I think you can keep things nice and simple, but develop a range of quirky, striking and appealing elements: