That was really good. I like the pacing and how you gave it all chronologically it helped the story to flow nice and easily. I especially liked the impact that last sentence had...it stuck with me even after I read it. Good job and keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Yeah, that was the effect I was going for, glad it worked for you. I always knew I would do it chronologically, to, but I was afraid it might sound to boring. I'm grateful you still liked it. Thanks for the nice long review!
~Stella

that was good. i liked it..and at the end i was like omg:(..t makes an impact..that one sentece: why didn't they..=(

Author's Response: Yeah, I know, I'm so proud of that last sentence. I like things like that, that pack a real good emotional punch. I'm glad you got the full effect of it. Thanks for the review!
~Stella

Great job! I think that was one of the best "outside perspective" stories I have ever read. It wasn't cheesy...or too fast...it was perfect. Oh..and I absolutely loved how your title went along with the story so well. I truly enjoyed your writing style and plan on reading a few more of your stories soon!

Author's Response: Ooh, ooh, you gave me a great review, but you said you would read more of my stories? That would be great, lol... Thanks for such an uplifting review! I'm glad it worked for you.
~Stella

that was really sad..yeah, i was crying. Anyways i liked how it was from an outside point of view. Good Job.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, you were crying?! That may be the best reaction I've ever had to something I've written in my entire life! I'm so glad that you were touched so deeply! Thanks for the wonderful, wonderful, magnificent review!!!!!!!
~Stella