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Friday, February 14, 2014

Time for another quick peek into my upcoming novel. Around Smoldering Coals. Two children and their mother are trying to find their way back to their home in the catacombs. This is part of what I added today, so I haven't had the time to do a whole lot of editing on it.

Tayletha took two,
then three candles from a stash near the door. After such a harrowing
experience she wanted the comfort of light surrounding her. The
fosser saw them studying the map Cedric had made for them and looked
over their shoulder.

“I can draw you a
quicker route,”

Lydda and Tayletha
looked at each other. Then Lydda saw the exhaustion in her son's
eyes.

“Where is it?”

He took the wax
tablet and started to erase it. Tayletha snatched it back. “We
don't know you! Our pateras made this map and it's good enough
for us.”