I thought I would take an opportunity to start a discussion of the 'sleazy reporter' variant of the "Susan's Secret Life" Storyline. I thought this might be a better idea than posting extremely long potential chapters as the story progresses. The first thing I thought might be helpful is suggestions of how to keep Susan's family out of her business now that she is so heavily involved in stripping engagements and practice for several weeks. As I can see it, there are two ways to accomplish this.

The first method of keeping everyone out of her business would be to come up with an airtight reason she is missing 6 nights a week. Here are my thoughts on that:

Sue could have a Medusa of the Inhumans provide a fake excuse that she is needed there either for defense of their people, negotiations with another culture, or possibly as a contributor to an interstellar conference on female rights. (I don't recommend defense as the whole family would be constantly looking for any excuse to look in on them to make sure Sue is OK)

Sue could have someone like Black Widow or Ms Marvel tell the family that Sue is on a secret mission for SHIELD

Sue could set up with the Avengers to be a late night monitor duty for several weeks. Instead of actually doing the work for the Avengers she could send a Life Model Decoy of her while the real Sue does her stripper work

Another method is to set up each of the Fantastic Four men with things that will occupy them:

Reed:

A long term project to observe a new universe about to be born via its own big bang. Sue could talk to Dr Alyssa Moy, a colleague of Reed's that also use to be a girl friend of his long ago. Alyssa would jump at the chance and Reed couldn't resist the project as long as Sue was OK with it. (normally she wouldn't be, but with the drive her being drugged is causing she might push her normal objections out of the way to continue stripping.

Johnny

Set Johnny up with a lady extreme sports promoter who has been after him to go on tour.

Get Johnny a role in a Hollywood movie production that will take him out of town for a couple months

Ben

Set up on a long trip with his girlfriend

Set Ben up with one of the other strippers friends that has a thing for him & will keep him too busy to notice Sue's late nights

Get Ben a temporary spot on one of the remaining west coast/Hawaii '50 states initiative' as a team lead/instructor

I just offer these ideas in hopes that it helps. Thanks to the originator and the contributors for giving us something to enjoy and look forward to :-D

I think it would be best to mix and match the two methods. I kind of like the Medusa option but it comes with the issue of how does she convince Medusa to do this for her. I don't know the character very well and wouldn't know how to write this.

I really like the working for SHIELD option as well and have thought of a was to spin it. One of the options tacked onto the latest chapter with Suzanne costume shopping has Sue encountering another heroine while stripping, this would give Sue leverage to get cooperation from the other heroine and also brings up the possibility of Ralph asking for her services in the future after Sue slips up and mentions her when talking about her excuse.

The option with Reed and the other scientist he used to date would roll well with where I see the story going in the future. I had the thought after a slipup resulting in a one night stand (which she enjoyed) that Sue was scared straight from guilt for a while and then after Reed neglecting her she would seek out the 'Suzanne' life again and actually escalate by being open to prostitution. Could easily have it to that Reed misses an anniversery or B-day dinner that Sue went through a lot of trouble to arrange only for her to find him in the lab with Alyssa (maybe standing too close or even better she tripped and he caught her in a suggestive pose just as Sue walks in). Sue in jealousy and spite turns to her secret life for sexual relief and people who give her attention.

I like the idea that Sue encounters another heroine or villainess while stripping, then they would discover her secret and would provide a coverstory for her, in return for certain "favours". The cover story would work better if it was a heroine, but it could be more fun if it was a villain because that would open up new areas of corruption for Sue. She could be blackmailed into porn/prostitution etc, and find that she likes it.

Thanks to everyone for contributing to the story and keeping it bubbling along. I'm also happy for people to go back and open up more avenues for the story if they like!

BTW, I notice that my "demonic whore" chapter for the Mephisto strand has no score. Was it crap? Any suggestions on how that should go forward?

I like where you are going. I could explain how to work the Medusa option, but it sounds like it wouldn't help with this story at this time anyway. As to heroine strippers, I had an idea for Volcana, a heroine struggling to make it in New York, might be a stripper to make ends meet; however she has no connections that would help Sue. Volcana would make a new girlfriend for Ben and as clinging as Volcana is she would keep Ben more than busy enough for a very, very long time.

For other heroines that could be strippers, Wasp and Tigra jump to the top of the list and they might help Sue just because they would love to share their dirty secrets with her. I could see Scarlet Witch doing it too and using her hex magic to cover her guilty pleasures. Shield agents are and interesting topic... Most of the ones that didn't start out as heroines may have done stripping while they were in college simply because willingness to step outside social moral norms is a plus in fieldwork. Anyone with a little power might work out as they would be able to cover for Sue, but the issue there is that they would be as likely to blackmail Sue as the other way around. One possibility that merits thought is Agent Cheesecake. This character is a Life Model Decoy designed to seduce targets. Cheesecake might consider stripping to be honing her seduction skills and might buy that Sue was doing the same as the heroine's hotness has distracted major villains in the past. Cheesecake might helps Sue out as a professional courtesy without even realizing she was being used.

Exidor:

I for one love the demonic variant of this storyline. People tend to contribute when the story fuels a passion within *and* they have vision that throws gasoline on that fire. As long as that is happening, the muses and the author are really working hand in hand to turn out chapters. Sometimes a story will take a turn that may leave one author without as much inspiration. It isn't the fault of the other authors nor a comment on the quality or worth of the story. It simply means that author has less to contribute until they either adjust to the current direction or find another deep seated passions to pursue within the current direction. That is where I find myself at the moment and in my experience it is better to apply the ideas I do have for that story to proposed chapters and message board topics than to try to force out a chapter as my forced chapters tend to derail others as well.

I also feel guilty of derailing Colleem earlier on by shaping one of his expressed ideas about Johnny in the story. I honestly felt I was helping at the time but it definitely took away from what he was planning to write so I do feel badly about it and apologize again.

My suggestion to you is not to wait for me and to keep writing. It is a good story and a lot of fun.

CC :) dont worry. I really liked your Setup with Johnny and you shouldn´t feel sorry about it. The Story is interessting to read. I won´t write anything for the next time. Still fighting with me if i should write a new chapter for the Masterplan... or not :)

CorruptionCentral - I'm glad you're enjoying the Mephisto storyline. Any ideas for a direction you'd like the story to go? I'm kind of trying to hold off on Sue giving in completely to the dark side as long as possible because once that happens, I'm not sure where else it could go. But she has to give in a bit or there would be no fun and games. I welcome any ideas! :)

Kingpin wouldn't have brought Hellstorm in unless he had something that he could give Hellstorm for services rendered... Like the use of MJ and the Seed of Sin within her.

With the Hellstorm breaking Mephisto's connection with MJ and trying to bind her to himself (which may or may not work), Kingpin is calling Reed to tell him that the hero has a choice. He can finish Kingpin off or he can get his ass and as much backup as he can arrange to Mephisto's realm to save his wife; that is unless he wishes to kiss the harlot goodbye. As soon as Reed is off the phone, Kingpin turns evidence of Reed's attack over to SHIELD and has his lawyers put leans on all assets of Reed Richards and the Fantastic Four for damages to his property, savings, and reputation.

Reed needs to deal with his rage, what he has done, and what he is going to do. I would have Dr Strange appear immediately to act as the voice of reason to try to get Reed thinking straight (maybe it works, maybe he blows Kingpin to Kingdom Come, but if he does the latter he damn well better have a plan for dealing with Mephisto in his own realm as no one will go with him).

Good ideas! I'm not really familiar with Hellstrom but am more than happy for you to pick up the story and write something along the lines you suggest. It would be nice to see MJ getting further corrupted too. :)

I've carried on and made a couple of additions to the Sue & Mephisto story line.

I think it might be fun for the FF, Strange and Doom to fall into a trap and be confronted with the new evil Sue. Maybe she could undergo a demonic transformation after taking Mephisto's "Dark Communion", but I think I'd rather she stayed in her normal form, only a more sexed up, evil version. I welcome any thoughts or suggestions! :)

Sounds good to me :-) Want some food for thought? Maybe the Dark Seed gives her the ability to change forms, among other things she hasn't found yet. Right now it might be far more reflexive than conscious. Like her short but fashionable fingernails grow longer and become deeply red with beautiful gold patterns. Her makeup becomes darkly slutty makeup. When Mephisto tells her that her rescuers have arrived she instinctively manifests cloths like her her most revealing costume but the heels on the thigh high boots are 6" stilettos, the color scheme is black satin with gold trim, and the 4 'cleavage window' is relapced with a 5" diameter gold trimmed open hole with a gold hexagram.

I started working on a chapter where MJ is gang banged by Spidey criminals while Hellstorm tried to bind the dark seed within her to himself. Right now I am in the set up where MJ is watching the news coverage and where Kingpin has framed Peter Parker as part of the planning team for Reed's act of terrorism. Anyway, I plan to bring it right to the point where Hellstorm is at the door of success before turning it over. Maybe that can be used by you in the trap/confrontation between Mephisto & Reed.

Yeah, her physical form could change subtly to reflect her new sluttier nature but I'd want her to still be recognizable as Sue. That will just make it all the sweeter when she meets up with the rest of the FF. Maybe she could have the unconscious ability to alter her form slightly in response to the desires of whoever meets her, making her the ultimate seductress?

Hey CorruptionCentral, I took your idea for Sue and ran with it, but with some small changes to the costume to suit my own taste! I hope you don't mind. I loved your MJ chapter so please feel free to hop back to that. :)

Just had a different idea for the Mephisto storyline - Going back a step from my last chapter, what if Mephisto and Evil Sue trick the heroes and Doom into thinking they've rescued her. They find her captive as herself, fight to rescue her, make it back to their plane and think everything's OK, but when she;s alone, Sue drops the act and reveals her true self - the sexy look I described in my latest chapter. Then she could get up to all sorts of depraved fun, unsuspected.

Just a thought. I don't want to clutter the place up with too many alternative off-shoots and I'm happy to keep things going along the lines they are now if you'd prefer. :)

I think there's a way to do both. I just added another potential chapter where the heroes escape with Sue. Maybe when Mespisto screams from the pain of Hellstroms spell, Sue changes back, or so the heroes think. Of course fleeing instead of killing Mephisto would anger Doom. If Sue had completely accepted her new life, it would all be a ruse to further mess with the heroes

Love the last chapter. I think that now Sue has embrace both the Seed of Sin And the Dark Seed, her cosmic powers are being augmented by her growing demonic/succubus powers. Specifically, she can mask demonic nature/abilities as much or as little as she wants, even from Reed and Strange. Hellstrom has always had a fixation on his ex wife Hellcat, that is where Mephisto would most likely go for revenge. Maybe Mephisto has Lustae or Sue manipulate Johnny into suggesting that Hellcat might be of help. Reed also has to keep the authorities at bay so maybe we can get some of Sue's Avenger friends into the Baxter building to negotiate the stand off with Reed & help Sue? Just throwing out ideas here. I'll write something tonight after work. If you have some feedback, please drop a note here ;-)

Thanks! I like the idea of Sue's team-mates thinking she's back to normal now, but her secretly being a super-succubus. Should keep things interesting, and would give her the chance to corrupt others without attracting suspicion. Maybe the Wasp and/or She-Hulk? I'm not very familiar with the Hellcat character but please feel free to write her in. :)

YAY! A new Sleazy Reporter Chapter :-) I love it, by the way ;-) What do you think of subliminals in the music for Wasp and Sue? Maybe the girls upload some new songs for the act for the heroines to listen to that start easing them into an even more promiscuous point of view. As for at the party, maybe after the girls drug the heroines, Mandy lures Janet away while the geek shows a strangely receptive Sue his 'sonic screw driver' in his room?

As to Mephisto chapters, I am having trouble visualizing how bad girl Felicia seduces a devastated Peter... Maybe she gets him drunk first?

Glad you like it! Yes, I like the idea of subliminals in the music, acting along with the drug to make Sue and Janet more slutty, and open to "new experiences". I also think it's time for Sue to go beyond stripping and start to discover the joys of adultery.

Yeah, maybe Felicia could fix them both a drink and then try to seduce him. I think it might be too soon for her to actually succeed though. Maybe she comes on too strong, he leaves her and then she goes looking for someone more willing - a villain?

I have an idea for a further chapter introducing She Hulk and the Wasp, so I'll post that some time today. :)

I also liked the subliminals in the music idea and have gone with it in the latest chapter.

I also planned for Sue to run into a slight issue with her excuse. My thought was that with her supposedly being away on a mission for the Avengers that she can't go home to the Baxter Building every night. This was necitate that she or rather Suzanne get a place to stay. This would also serve to further isolate her from her family and the hero community and push her furhter into the world of sin.

Really hope somone decides to write Janet's interview, I don't think I could do it justice. I was thinking that just to make Ralph seem more an honest man and less like a pervert that he would have Sue be the one to act as the client for the lap dance. Might stir some lesbian attraction between the two.

Later on down the line I was thinking of having Janet design a line of festish clothes under a psuedonym and convince her fellow strippers to act as models for the fashion line.

Here's another suggestion for the excuse... Sue brings up that so far she has been able mission. to avoid detection on pure luck based on the over active lives of the men, but that luck can't last. Janet laughs that she's been playing off her business against the Avengers leaving both thinking that she's which the other but now the heroines need something better. Jan checks her Avenger laptop for potential missions and chooses to do a'long term covert investigation' of a possible cell of Superia's Femizons in a remote mountain location listing reserve member Susan as her partner. Before Sue can react, Jan confirms the mission. When Sue has second thoughts Jan calms her down saying that Sue simply needs to record a video to tell her family she's on a mission and all's well, besides it will serve the boys right to have to take care of everything for a few weeks. For the mission all they have to do is give a quick all is well check twice a day and a quick activity report daily. Black Widow has disappeared for months doing that before and Jan can use some of hanks inventions to use the local insect life to do all the spying for them

I like the idea of the fake mission! That should give the girls the breathing space they need.

As for the subliminals, how about Ralph having a contact in the R&D department at Oscorp who has worked on that sort of thing? Maybe Ralph did an expose on it a few years back. He could get in touch with this contact and ask him to prepare the subliminals, for a price.

What ideas do we have for Wasp's alter-ego Janice, and how she wants the perception filter to change her appearance? Sue has her latex fetish, but what's Jan's kink? Any ideas?

I would start with body art; racy and daring but not outright pornigraphic or cutesy erotic. I like the idea of leather but actually like the idea of something more like the Twin Peaks restaurant uniform without the plaid.

I also had an idea for Jan meeting Ralph. Jan has always been flirty. Well maybe she finds Ralph attractive from the start. Maybe when she and Sue meet up with him, Sue gives him a friendly kiss... Just a peck on lips or cheek, but it spurs her competiviness. Jan gets ultra flirty and gives a great performance, all but the lap dance. While very good it's missing something. Sue demonstrates a better one where she rubs her PVC clad pussy in the mans appreciative face and he gets to kiss her ass, boobs, and panties repeatedly. Instead of turning Jan off, it makes her very horny & competitive

I think its time for Mephisto to stop licking his wounds and do something to hurt Hellstrom. In the past, Mephisto has captured Hellcat, Hellstrom's ex, multiple times and even held her in hell for months fighting in his arena of tainted souls. This time he is going to take her permanently away.... He has one of Cupid's arrows and a flask of Asgardian love potion al a the Enchantress. Mixed with his Dark Seed, the mystic love items become a dark and evil looking arrow that even a scratch of which will make a mortal the obsessive devoted and willing slave of Mephisto, but a heart shot will make Hellcat his perfect consort. Mephisto will have Lustae send Johnny to the Defenders in search of Hellcat while she waits outside with the arrow.

I'll try to write the Mephisto chapter later today. If you all want, I can try my hand at the Ralph meeting as well, but I will check here first to see if either of you would rather do it :)

You do a far better job with the dialogue between character than I do.

My thoughts on direction for the story are that Janet's impulsive actions to create an alibi have a minor negative effect. In other words if Sue and Jan are supposed to be on stakeout out of the country then how can they go home every night. Which means they need a place to stay. I was originally thinking of at least Sue or rather Suzanne getting a cheap apartment in a 'bad' neighborhood. Was thinking maybe have a neighbor who is a prostitute.

Maybe have Ralph arrange things, don't think he would want them to stay with him given his materials they shouldn't see.

I also like the trust angle, remember that Sue hasn't admitted who Janice really is yet, even if Ralph already knows.

On another note I was thinking that a possible means of sliding the girls into prostituion, given the show of trust and affection for Ralph that CC has developed, how about a 'crime boss' (who could be fake) decide Ralph owes him a large amount of money. Possible something Sue and/or Jan do is the cause. This would place pressure on Sue and Jan to fix the situation, a few plausible issues why the women can't use their real ID funds (such as too traceable) and the only way to produce the money may be to do a few prostitute jobs.

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colleem - 12/5/2016 5:21 AMMaster. Question in story boardMaster_Kind - 12/4/2016 9:06 PMThanks! :)colleem - 12/4/2016 7:14 AMMasterkind :) Really like your Ideaextreme1 - 12/2/2016 6:05 PMI start a new story and the site goes down...coincidence or the universe giving it's opinion on the story???gothamalleyviper - 12/2/2016 5:04 PMWe shall see.colleem - 12/2/2016 1:58 PMwuhuuuu working again... i bet.... it will be 8 days until the next crashgothamalleyviper - 11/26/2016 10:08 AMFor world's end Harem, who should be the first to get pregnant?exidor455 - 11/26/2016 5:45 AMCorruptionCentral - No problem. Sorry for being snippy! :)extreme1 - 11/26/2016 12:10 AMgothamalleyviper, thanks (well really thanks to colleem who suggested that I not reveal every buyer at once).
There's a thread on the message board if anyone wants to talk about any ideas or has any feedback.gothamalleyviper - 11/25/2016 10:53 PMInteresting start on X-Men Extreme1