Art's just ok, a little out of proportion here and there, and the eyes are mostly whitish with no shading, it's a little difficult to get used to. Not very attractive either.The theme dealt with is mature.. but this is one of those short oneshots which feels more like a sample test for a mangaka, it's not enough to develop a storyline or engage readers. Certainly I see very negligible character development. Fingers and actions are elegant but facials need a lot of work.

Overall this story has the feeling of an epilogue or prologue or something... certainly not a standalone piece.