I dunno. I sort of like the picture the way it is. In your words 'messy'. I'm not sure what word I'm looking for, but it's kind of unique.

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naw hes talking about a program its called "Manga Studio" i had it for a while (got it from a torrent) but it was a really long time ago. I'll try and look it up man but its been so long i probably dont have it no more. =[

I thought it was a picture at first.. That's some skill you have there!

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Hm, lets see... There's a really nice variety to the lineart thickness, but I would say it could you a liiittle bit more at the hand closest to the viewer, just because I love me some thick lines.

Somethings up with the girls body, though I can't quite pinpoint it. Perhaps her torso is too long or something?

The massive amounts of lines on the robot-monster thingy really draws the eye towards it. That may be intentional, but if you want to make it a bit more balanced picture, consider drawing some more details on the left part it. Perhaps some background or some accessories on her person. Especially the last one, I think, just a bikini seems a bit plain compared to the detailed monster-robot.

I luuuv all the cool details on him, though. The shoulders seem a bit asymmetrical, though. Shouldn't there be a little spike on his right one, too? As well as some of the shapes on it seems to be different.

Wow Eddie, you've got great style! The poses and coloring are great, but the backgrounds could be worked on.Once you have that, the art really comes to life!(Though I'm really in no place to say this because I cant do backgrounds to save my life >_>)