beat-dope beat....this shit fire...like the lil chants in the back
dont like how u came in wit the doubles...anyway...voice is coo...real confident with the flow and delivery....emotion could be upped a lil but nothing too big..lyrics is strait, nothing to witty...feeling the hook tho...that shit is nice..
2nd verse...a lil more solid lyrically...hmmm..choppy at one point...but kept it going...kept it moving...feeling the flow..hook agan..solid track..r doubles overpower ur verse at some points
3rd..same shit, solid,like how it dropped consistent..props

pretty creative on your mixing. i like hearing something like this occassionally. beat is sick fa sho. vocals seem to be low. flow is pretty solid, i like your voice. i like your creativity son. it's tight. get at me on the real, we do something together..

played this earlier and forgot to leave feed lol...beats sick...funny thing is he got a beat on his page called da block on lock lol...mic presence needs work and turn ur vocals up a bit...flow and delivery were nice, lyrics were ok...was feelin it aside from the mic presence

yeah the intro was ill..i'm really feeling the beat..i actually like you started it off yeah and the doubles didnt sound good..i think doubles only work for certain people..u have a strong voice so you should do singles and throw some adlibs