What does that mean? 40% of the ships were lost in a typical engagement?

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Not typically - rather it was meant to suggest that the attrition rate fluctuated through the war, and that it was 40% at its highest. I imagined in my own head it averaged around 25%-30%. I shall edit accordingly.

Okay, fixed.

Chapter Ten - War

The Dominion War saw the last (and largest) deployment of Excelsiors in a wide-scale combat role. At the war's onset in 2373, over 300 Excelsiors were in still service, with over 150 more in varying states of repair sitting decommissioned in surplus yards. The Federation and Klingons were initially forced to go on the defensive, although they struck a major victory at the onset by destroying the Dominion shipyards of Torros III. Starfleet took surprisingly heavy casualties, and quickly discovered that it needed more ships than it had. To accomodate, numerous decommissioned ships were reconditioned and recommissioned, including the decommissioned Excelsiors and even including some Constitution class ships that had been mothballed for over forty years. Some 'jigsaw' builds were launched without even being given a proper name, although they were later given informal names by their crews. Excelsior class ships formed the backbone of the cruiser divisions of every fleet in every major battle of the war. Most were pulled from their regular assignments in Federation space, while some were redeployed along the Federation border opposite the front, to ensure other governments would not try to take advantage of the situation. In cases like the U.S.S. Farragut, the Excelsior-class predecessor replaced her Nebula-class successor after she was lost in action.

The Federation and Klingons achieved their first real victory in 2374 by retaking station Deep Space Nine at the mouth of the Bajoran worhmole. Still, they struggled to hold their own. The Dominion managed to occupy Betazed. Not since the Romulan War of two centuries prior had the fighting reached the doorstep of the Federation's founding worlds. The capture of Betazed put many of them in danger, including Earth, Vulcan, Tellar, and Andoria. The Federation was able to convince the Romulans to join their alliance, and with their added firepower began to put the Dominion on the defensive. Sadly, the Excelsior class ships that saw combat with the Dominion were greatly outclassed, and their attrition rate peaked at nearly 40%, averaging between 20% and 30%. Nonetheless, yard engineers kept patching the surviving ships back together and sending them back into the fray, where they served valiantly against their Dominion foes. Even the destroyed Excelsiors proved valuable, as the class's modularity continued to prove an asset; salvaged wrecks provided repair components for their sisters. Some were even combined and rebuilt into 'new' ships. Even the U.S.S. Excelsior herself was not safe from the fighting. Two of the oldest Excelsiors in service continued to beat the odds: the U.S.S. Repulse and the U.S.S. Shras were both part of the original production group from the 2290s and served with distinction on the front. Both ships escaped destruction in battle after battle as newer, more capable ships fell around them.

In 2375, the Breen Confederacy entered the war on the side of the Dominion, and launched a surprise attack on Starfleet Headquarters on Earth. When the Breen fleet reached the Sol System, they achieved almost complete surprise. Only the contingent of the Third Fleet permanently assigned to the sector stood between the Breen and Earth. Among the 45 ships that stood to face the Breen was the 90-year-old Excelsior. Although outnumbered more than two to one, the ships simply could not allow the Breen to reach Earth; the powerful warships in their fleet could devastate the planet and leave it virtually uninhabitable. The battle was fierce. Breen warships stalled the fleet while fighters penetrated the defensive perimeter and made their way to Earth. Earth defenses mounted a worthy opposition, and destroyed many of the fighters before they reached Earth, but some were able to enter the atmosphere and attack San Francisco. Fifteen Starfleet ships were destroyed, and Excelsior, under the command of a relatively inexperienced captain, assumed command of the fleet. By outflanking and dividing the enemy, Starfleet was able to destroy most of the Breen warships, and force the surviving ships to retreat. The remaining Starfleet ships returned to Earth to assist in emergency response efforts as reinforcements arrived to guard against a second attack wave.

The Breen's entry to the war marked another shift in fortune. After the Breen attack on Earth, the Dominion launched a devastating attack to re-take the Chin'toka system where the Breen first deployed energy dampening weapons capable of disabling allied ships. The entire fleet sent to counter the Dominion incursion in Chin'toka was destroyed, including fifty Excelsior class starships. Thus, the Dominion again had the allies on the defensive as scientists struggled to find a way to counteract the Breen weapons, leaving only the Klingons, whose ships could easily be modified to be immune to the Breen weapons, to hold the front. However, the acquisition of a Jem'Hadar vessel provided a means to devise a countermeasure to the energy dampening weapons. All Starfleet ships, including the surviving Excelsiors, had their entire shield systems reconfigured. By this time, approximately 300 Excelsior class ships still remained in operation.

Able to resist the Breen weapon, the allies were able to put the Dominion on the defensive again, forcing the Dominion to withdraw to Cardassian space. The Federation and her allies knew that this would buy the Dominion all the time they needed to rebuild their fleets unless the war ended then and there. At the cost of many lives, the allies penetrated Cardassian space and began the Battle of Cardassia. The tide of battle turned when the Cardassian fleet turned against the Dominion, and ultimately the Founders surrendered. The Treaty of Bajor ended the war, but much work would be needed to pick up the pieces.

I still have to scan all my hand-drawings, and then start retracing and filling in details. (My head hurts already.) But the tech section does provide a basic breakdown of the decks that should allow everyone to evaluate the approach I'm taking and formulate a basic mental picture as I do it. And obviously, since I will probably take a deck one down view in doing the actual drawings, I might be able to do the drawings as we evaluate each deck.

Then, there are other call-out drawings I plan to do - rooms, equipment, and so on - that feature with separate sub-articles under each deck, related to where each feature is found. My structural approach is similar to that of Shane Johnson in doing 'Mr. Scott's Guide.'

Okay, now for chapter eleven. It's short, and the last before we move to the technical text.

Chapter Eleven - Legacy

After the end of the Dominion War, Starfleet turned to the task of evaluating its fleet. They were left with a great number of damaged ships in varying states of operation. Many, including numerous Excelsiors, were damaged beyond repair. These were decommissioned and sent to surplus depots or disassembled, along with many of the ships that had been re-commissioned exclusively to fight in the war. Ultimately, almost two hundred Excelsiors remained in service, most of them newer ships from the class's final production run. With Starfleet returning to peacetime operations, most were redeployed for patrol duties along Federation borders. Some were also sent on relief missions into Cardassian space, delivering much needed humanitarian aid to the suffering Cardassian people. Starfleet began producing new ships to fill the Excelsior's niche in its operations, and made plans to retire the entire class by the end of the first quarter of the 25th century.

In 2386, the Excelsior class celebrated its centennial. More members of the class had been retired in the interim since the end of the Dominion War; in all, some three hundred Excelsior class ships remained in service, as ships of other classes gradually assumed their mission roles. The U.S.S. Excelsior underwent preparations for ceremonial retirement to the fleet museum. The Excelsior would not only be a museum piece, but a historic tribute and memorial to the 470 ships of the class that had gallantly served in Starfleet over the past century. On 1 August, 2386, the Excelsior, flying in honor formation with several other ships, was flown into her berth at the Copernicus Shipyards museum complex on Luna. Thousands of viewers gathered to bear witness to the event. Many former Excelsior crew members came with their families to offer their respect for the ship. As the Starfleet Academy marching band played the Starfleet Anthem (more popularly known by its name "Where No Man Has Gone Before") Excelsior took her place in her pressurized berth alongside such other historic vessels. Admiral Demora Sulu, daughter of late Excelsior Captain and Federation President Hikaru Sulu, and former commander of the Enterprise-B, delivered a powerful keynote speech that brought thunderous applause from the audience. The Federation News Service was there to record the mixed emotions of joy and sadness felt by the scores in attendance. A holo-recording of the event, including Admiral Sulu's speech, is now a part of the Excelsior exhibit. After the assembly, those in attendance were invited to tour the ship as her first visitors as a memorial. The ship had been restored (at least cosmetically) to its 2290 state, although many modern systems were retained inobtrusively. Admiral Sulu was accompanied by FNS reporters, who recorded her visit to the bridge. There, she paused at the Captain's chair, holding back tears. The exhibit has since already been visited by over twenty thousand people in the subsequent months. Recently, Starfleet commissioned a new Sovereign-class starship U.S.S. Excelsior, both in commemoration of that particular ship's Starfleet service and in honor of all the Excelsior class ships that have served the Federation.

Much has been said about the U.S.S. Excelsior and her sisters over the previous century. At first, the Excelsior's stature as the 'Great Experiment' was shattered by the failure of her transwarp drive. However, even in defeat was the Excelsior victorious, as shown in the illustrious and successful service careers of not only Excelsior, but the 470 other ships of the class that were built, most of which are since long gone. The Excelsior rose in a time of uncertainty and change in the political climate of the known galaxy, to become one of the most successful classes in Starfleet history, and one of the most ubiquitous symbols of Federation principles. Excelsiors gave hope to literally the thousands of worlds they visited, and offered fierce opposition for those who tried to silence the call of freedom throughout space. As the 24th century draws to a close, the remaining Excelsiors still in service will be retired, committed to the history books, but their legend and the spirit of the men and women who served on them, boldly going where no one has gone before, will live on.

Why yes, yes it is. In my head, it is the full orchestral TMP theme. (Not the TNG version - too fast for what I had in mind.) I have a really lovely image in my head of the Excelsior slowly maneuvering into the berth as that theme plays - one that I plan to recreate photographically in photoshop, alas sans music of cousre. But those of you with the soundtrack can play it as you look at the picture for the full experience.

I must admit taking a nod from BSG in making the theme song the anthem.

Starfleet commissioned a new Sovereign-class starship U.S.S. Excelsior, both in commemoration of that particular ship's Starfleet service and in honor of all the Excelsior class ships that have served the Federation.

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It seems odd to me for a class ship to not be the final use of its name.

As the 24th century draws to a close, the remaining Excelsiors still in service will be retired, committed to the history books, but their legend and the spirit of the men and women who served on them, boldly going where no one has gone before, will live on.

Praetor,
Great way to wrap it up before the technical stuff EXCELLENT WORK!!!!

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Thank you!!!

Okay, the last two chapters once more before we start the tech stuff:

Chapter Ten - War

The Dominion War saw the last (and largest) deployment of Excelsiors in a wide-scale combat role. At the war's onset in 2373, over 300 Excelsiors were in still service, with over 150 more in varying states of operation sitting decommissioned in surplus yards. The Federation and Klingons were initially forced to go on the defensive, although they struck a major victory at the onset by destroying the Dominion shipyards of Torros III. Starfleet took surprisingly heavy casualties, and quickly discovered that it needed more ships than it had. To accomodate, numerous decommissioned ships were reconditioned and recommissioned, including the decommissioned Excelsiors and even including some Constitution class ships that had been mothballed for over forty years. Some 'jigsaw' builds were launched without even being given a proper name, although they were later given informal names by their crews. Excelsior class ships formed the backbone of the cruiser divisions of every fleet in every major battle of the war. Most were pulled from their regular assignments in Federation space, while some were redeployed along the Federation border opposite the front, to ensure other governments would not try to take advantage of the situation. In cases like the U.S.S. Farragut, the Excelsior-class predecessor replaced her Nebula-class successor after she was lost in action.

The Federation and Klingons achieved their first real victory in 2374 by retaking station Deep Space Nine at the mouth of the Bajoran worhmole. Still, they struggled to hold their own. The Dominion managed to occupy Betazed. Not since the Romulan War of two centuries prior had the fighting reached the doorstep of the Federation's founding worlds. The capture of Betazed put many of them in danger, including Earth, Vulcan, Tellar, and Andoria. The Federation was able to convince the Romulans to join their alliance, and with their added firepower began to put the Dominion on the defensive. Sadly, the Excelsior class ships that saw combat with the Dominion were greatly outclassed, and their attrition rate peaked at nearly 40%, averaging between 20% and 30%. Nonetheless, yard engineers kept patching the surviving ships back together and sending them back into the fray, where they served valiantly against their Dominion foes. Even the destroyed Excelsiors proved valuable, as the class's modularity continued to prove an asset; salvaged wrecks provided repair components for their sisters. Some were even combined and rebuilt into 'new' ships. Even the U.S.S. Excelsior herself was not safe from the fighting. Two of the oldest Excelsiors in service continued to beat the odds: the U.S.S. Repulse and the U.S.S. Shras were both part of the original production group from the 2290s and served with distinction on the front. Both ships escaped destruction in battle after battle as newer, more capable ships fell around them.

In 2375, the Breen Confederacy entered the war on the side of the Dominion, and launched a surprise attack on Starfleet Headquarters on Earth. When the Breen fleet reached the Sol System, they achieved almost complete surprise. Only the contingent of the Third Fleet permanently assigned to the sector stood between the Breen and Earth. Among the 45 ships that stood to face the Breen was the 90-year-old Excelsior. Although outnumbered more than two to one, the ships simply could not allow the Breen to reach Earth; the powerful warships in their fleet could devastate the planet and leave it virtually uninhabitable. The battle was fierce. Breen warships stalled the fleet while fighters penetrated the defensive perimeter and made their way to Earth. Earth defenses mounted a worthy opposition, and destroyed many of the fighters before they reached Earth, but some were able to enter the atmosphere and attack San Francisco. Fifteen Starfleet ships were destroyed, and Excelsior, under the command of a relatively inexperienced captain, assumed command of the fleet. By outflanking and dividing the enemy, Starfleet was able to destroy most of the Breen warships, and force the surviving ships to retreat. The remaining Starfleet ships returned to Earth to assist in emergency response efforts as reinforcements arrived to guard against a second attack wave.

The Breen's entry to the war marked another shift in fortune. After the Breen attack on Earth, the Dominion launched a devastating attack to re-take the Chin'toka system where the Breen first deployed energy dampening weapons capable of disabling allied ships. The entire fleet sent to counter the Dominion incursion in Chin'toka was destroyed, including fifty Excelsior class starships. Thus, the Dominion again had the allies on the defensive as scientists struggled to find a way to counteract the Breen weapons, leaving only the Klingons, whose ships could easily be modified to be immune to the Breen weapons, to hold the front. However, the acquisition of a Jem'Hadar vessel provided a means to devise a countermeasure to the energy dampening weapons. All Starfleet ships, including the surviving Excelsiors, had their entire shield systems reconfigured. By this time, approximately 300 Excelsior class ships still remained in operation.

Able to resist the Breen weapon, the allies were able to put the Dominion on the defensive again, forcing the Dominion to withdraw to Cardassian space. The Federation and her allies knew that this would buy the Dominion all the time they needed to rebuild their fleets unless the war ended then and there. At the cost of many lives, the allies penetrated Cardassian space and began the Battle of Cardassia. The tide of battle turned when the Cardassian fleet turned against the Dominion, and ultimately the Founders surrendered. The Treaty of Bajor ended the war, but much work would be needed to pick up the pieces.

Chapter Eleven - Legacy

After the end of the Dominion War, Starfleet turned to the task of evaluating its fleet. They were left with a great number of damaged ships in varying states of operation. Many, including numerous Excelsiors, were damaged beyond repair. These were decommissioned and sent to surplus depots or dismantled, along with many of the ships that had been re-commissioned exclusively to fight in the war. Ultimately, almost two hundred Excelsiors remained in service, most of them being newer ships from the class's final production run. With Starfleet returning to peacetime operations, most were redeployed for patrol duties along Federation borders. Some were also sent on relief missions into Cardassian space, delivering much-needed humanitarian aid to the suffering Cardassian people. Starfleet began producing new ships to fill the Excelsior's niche in its operations, and made plans to retire the entire class by the end of the first quarter of the 25th century.

In 2386, the Excelsior class celebrated its centennial. More members of the class had been retired in the interim since the end of the Dominion War; in all, a just over one hundred Excelsior class ships remained in service, as ships of other classes gradually assumed their mission roles. The U.S.S. Excelsior underwent preparations for ceremonial retirement to the fleet museum. The Excelsior would not only be a museum piece, but a historic tribute and memorial to the 470 ships of the class that had gallantly served in Starfleet over the past century. On 1 August, 2386, the Excelsior, flying in honor formation with several other ships, was flown into her berth at the Copernicus Shipyards museum complex on Luna. Thousands of viewers gathered to bear witness to the event. Many former Excelsior crew members came with their families to offer their respect for the ship. As the Starfleet Academy marching band played the Starfleet Anthem (more popularly known by its name "Where No Man Has Gone Before") Excelsior took her place in her pressurized berth alongside such other historic vessels. ormer commander of the Enterprise-B and daughter of late Excelsior captain and Federation President Hikaru Sulu, delivered a powerful keynote speech that brought thunderous applause from the audience. The Federation News Service was there to record the mixed emotions of joy and sadness felt by the scores in attendance. A holo-recording of the event, including Admiral Sulu's speech, is now a part of the Excelsior exhibit. After the assembly, those in attendance were invited to tour the ship as her first visitors as a memorial. The ship had been restored (at least cosmetically) to its 2290 state, although many modern systems were retained unobtrusively. Admiral Sulu was accompanied by FNS reporters, who recorded her visit to the bridge. There, she paused at the Captain's chair, holding back tears. The exhibit has since already been visited by over twenty thousand people in the subsequent months. Recently, Starfleet commissioned a new Sovereign-class starship U.S.S. Excelsior, both in commemoration of that particular ship's Starfleet service and in honor of all the Excelsior class ships that have served the Federation.

Much has been said about the U.S.S. Excelsior and her sisters over the previous century. At first, the Excelsior's stature as the 'Great Experiment' was shattered by the failure of her transwarp drive. However, even in defeat was the Excelsior victorious, as shown in the illustrious and successful service careers of not only Excelsior, but the 469 other ships of the class that were built, most of which are since long gone. The Excelsior rose in a time of uncertainty and change in the political climate of the known galaxy, to become one of the most successful classes in Starfleet history, and one of the most ubiquitous symbols of Federation principles. Excelsiors gave hope to the thousands of worlds they visited, and offered fierce opposition for those who tried to silence the call of freedom throughout space. As the 24th century draws to a close, the remaining Excelsiors still in service will be retired, committed to the history books--but their legend and the spirit of the men and women who served on them, boldly going where no one has gone before, will live on.

Admiral Demora Sulu, daughter of late Excelsior Captain and Federation President Hikaru Sulu, and former commander of the Enterprise-B, delivered a powerful keynote speech that brought thunderous applause from the audience.

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I feel like this should be inverted to "Admiral Demora Sulu, former commander of the Enterprise-B and daughter of late Excelsior captain and Federation President Hikaru Sulu, delivered. . ." I think this is a somewhat clearer form of presentation, as the original left the possibility that "and former commander of the Enterprise-B" could refer to Hikaru rather than Demora. It's also slightly less complicated, which is always a benefit for the sake of flow and clarity.

Excelsiors gave hope to the literally thousands of worlds they visited

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I'd actually just leave "literally" out, I feel like it's unnecessary and really just clutters up the sentence. "Excelsiors gave hope to the thousands of worlds they visited" flows better and treats the subject more matter-of-fact. It kind of says that there's no need for exaggeration here, the Excelsiors lived up to whatever you have to say about them.

Much has been said and written about the U.S.S. Excelsior and her sister ships over the previous century. At first, the Excelsiors' stature as the 'Great Experiment' was shattered by the failure of her transwarp drive. However, even with this early defeat, she continued on to final victory. The illustrious and successful service career of not only Excelsior, but also her 469 sister ships, most of which are long since gone, proved through an era of uncertainty and constant political change, too be one of the most successful starship classes in Starfleet history.And also, one of the most ubiquitous symbols of Federation principles.Excelsiors gave hope to millions on the myriad of worlds they visited and offered fierce opposition to those who tried to silence the call of freedom throughout Federation space.As the 24th century draws to a close, the remaining Excelsiors still in service will be retired, committed to the history books, but their legend and the spirit of the men and women who served on them, --boldly going where no one has gone before-- will live on.