Your fanfic was great ! But there is just something that you would want to edit a bit : in season 3 or 4 it is confirmed that Korra was the "first avatar who could metal bend" so Aang metalbending doesn't really fit. I would suggest you'd bring an intervention from Toph. I'm pretty sure it could be funny if you wrote her lines according to her personality.

This was awesome! :D I've been looking for a story exactly like this! You portrayed all the characters so well, and even though we don't know much about Bumi or Kya yet, I think this is exactly what they will turn out to be like! Great job, you attention to detail is amazing, and humor was pretty present too! Thanks for the read, insta-fav! ;)

BTW- (in medical terms) a cloudbaby is an infectious baby that presents a medical risk to other infants. The child looks heathy but conceals a bacterial or viral infection that puts other youlings in parrel

I love it so much! This is the best cloudbaby FanFics I have ever read! And the crush between Lin and Tenzin was a perfect explaination for why Lin was sour to Tenzin in te first episode. I really hope you can at least try and continue it! Please, it's really good! I really love it!