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Daunte Loper 6 years agofrom Detroit Michigan

Thanks Paul, well said!!

Plarson 6 years agofrom Alabama

Daunte- I like how you included the reader into the last lines. Till then the reader just has a sense of things that are affecting only those protrayed in the lines before it. With that last line you set the record straight that while it may not be part of our immediate world, as a people we all are responsible, even if we don't see it because we all know it is happening. -P

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Daunte Loper 6 years agofrom Detroit Michigan

Thanks Norma

Norma Budden 6 years agofrom Nunavut, Canada

This poem speaks of every day horrors some people face. Tragic realities but you've done a great job with the portrayal.

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Daunte Loper 6 years agofrom Detroit Michigan

Thanks Amy

Amy Becherer 6 years agofrom St. Louis, MO

Another profound masterpiece, Daunte. Babble has a rhythm with a quality that is profound, poetic with a strong message and a heartbeat.