Dark + Stormy Rain Gear

A rainy day inspired this project. I felt like working up a scripty, somewhat tumultuous treatment for the word stormy would be fun. And it sort of evolved into Dark + Stormy Rain Gear. I tried a bunch of different type treatments and came up with a combination I liked.

I also couldn't really decide on a color treatment, so I did four different colorways to see what would look best. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!

UPDATE: After comments from Ray, I jumped back in and made revisions to the project, including a few different presentations of the same typographic work. I hope these are more clear and read a little bit better, in addition to being single-color and more simple. I'd love to hear some opinions. Thank you!