I'm glad that you stepped up and had them make a Rumble Fish section. I'll have to read the book a few more times and try to write something. And no, this should not be a one-shot; you don't tell us anything about Macie or how they got together - this has gotta be before the book though, right? Since he's still in school and welcome in Benny's . . . and he's not in jail.

Hey. :) The story is good although I have to say that its more of a story with multiple chapters rather than just a have a plot line going on here but since its just this one chapter,its not going a bit flat at times and I can't help but wonder where the story is headed.

Remember to add in a disclaimer at the top as well. (Disclaimer:SE Hinton owns all characters except for *name of OC/s*) That's just a formality but you do need to use 's some typos but other than that your grammar and punctuation seems to be fine.