Hrm, I'll make another version with the last lines omitted. It really does read differently in print, with the flipping of the pages and whatnot. Hey has Joel Priddy talked to you recently by any chance?_________________ihatejim.com

Hrm, I'll make another version with the last lines omitted. It really does read differently in print, with the flipping of the pages and whatnot. Hey has Joel Priddy talked to you recently by any chance?

i think the story works better without the last line, but it's just my opinion. it's your story bro.