Woooow! This was really goooood! I wish you would have another or a couple more chapters! This took me almost two weeks to read because I took my time reading this, and I'm glad i did. This was great, really great, the characters and everything! Great story! I loved every second of it!

...please update this. seriously. i know writers have this whole perfectionist streak that results in them hemming and hawing over a chapter for two years and their readers waiting in bated breath/annoyance/exasperation, but i can basically guarantee you that whatever you post here will be received with delight and appreciation by all of your readers... you just have to post.