The Plucky Duck Show

Summary: Plucky Duck is fed up with being a second banana. He decides to leave Tiny Toon Adventures to start his own TV show.

The Loneliest Number since the Number Two

THE PLUCKY DUCK
SHOW

Pilot Episode:

“The Loneliest
Number since the Number Two”

Act One

We see nothing but
blackness for ten seconds. Suddenly, the bright light of a torch briefly shines
on the camera before it moves away to reveal the face of Plucky Duckgrinning malevolently, holding the torch
under his bill and creating creepy shadows.

Plucky: BOO! He laughs for a beat, before his mirth slowly begins to weaken as if he
has grown uncomfortably aware of the fact that nobody has laughed. (Bitterly)
Everybody’s a critic. (Brightens up) Welcome to THE PLUCKY DUCK SHOW! That’s
right: The Plucky Duck Show! Not Tiny Toon Adventures, MY show. A TV programme
all about me which has NOTHING ta do with rabbits! (Chuckles evilly) Does
anybody have any questions? No? Great. You may all be wondering: What has given
me, the only reason people watch Tiny Toons, the urge to branch off from the
show? He scratches his head with a
contemplating expression. That’s a good question…for YOU! Y’see, ducks have
always been given a raw deal under the command of Warner Bros! They’re afraid
of the fact that we have superior acting prowess over RABBITS! That hasn’t
stopped us though. (Reminiscing) I remember my extremely amazing mentor D.D
carrying out his publicity stunt last week!

The camera ripples
and distorts as we are about to enter a flashback. As the focus begins to
reform, we suddenly get a view of a wreath of dandelions and a message which
reads “IN MEMORY OF DAFFY DORK: 1937-1992” We can see that the “O” in “DORK” has been crossed out and has been
replaced with a tiny “U” over it. We can see tombstones in the background and
the Funeral March can be heard being played badly on a kazoo. Instead of the
sounds of sobbing as the camera pans out to reveal the mourners, we can hear
casual chatter.

Foghorn Leghorn stands on a podium near the wreath as the pallbearers approach it.
They consist of Rocky, Mugsy, Nasty Canasta, Cottontail Smith, Elmer Fudd and Yosemite Sam. Everybody, except Elmer, has a sardonic expression which implies that they were forced to go
to this ceremony.

Elmer: (Sobbing) Wh-Why did he have to
g-go?? AND WHY COUWDN’T I HAVE SHOT HIM?!

Instead of placing
the coffin gently on the podium, the pallbearers toss it. It hits the podium
with a CRASH, knocking the wreath over. Foghorn looks indignant, but it’s due to the fact that the coffin nearly hit
him.

Yosemite Sam: (To Foghorn) Jus’ get this over with, ya razzafrazzin’ blowhard! Ah got
me a date with a casino!

Foghorn clears his throat as the pallbearers go to sit down. As everybody goes
silent, he begins to speak.

Foghorn: As ah stand before all ‘o’ y’all,
ah won, ah say, ah wonder one thing. Why, ah say, why is it that this great
Toon has gone to that high, ah say, high-larious place in the sky so soon? (To
the camera, sardonically) ‘Specially when he owes me fifty bucks. (To the
mourners) Ah suppose, ah say, ah suppose there is one thing that comforts us at
this ter-ri-ble time! And that is that we all get the rest of the day off!

Mourners: A-MEN!

Foghorn steps down as Bugs approaches the podium to give his eulogy. We can see that the rabbit
is munching on a carrot. He swallows it before he speaks.

The camera cuts to Foghorn sitting next to Henery Hawk andMiss Prissy with the
mourners.

Foghorn: (Bitterly) What, ah say, what a
load of bullsh-

The camera cuts back
to Bugs.

Bugs: I mean: who else am I gonna harass
wit’ a paintbrush when I get bored? Who else is gonna wash our cars? Who else
is gonna get shot by Elmer? We hear Elmer bawling offscreen. So, I decided dat, in his honour, we would give
‘um a twenty-one gun salute, ‘cos dat’s what he woulda wanted. He races off the podium, leaving the coffin
alone. (Offscreen) Okay, boys: FIRE AWAY!!

Twenty-one hunters
emerge from behind the tombstones and immediately begin shooting the casket,
obscuring it in a cloud of grey smoke. After ten seconds, the hunters stop
firing and the sarcophagus is burnt, charred and smoking. Bugs walks back up to the podium to
examine it. He then looks skyward.

Bugs: Give us a sign dat you’ve arrived,
Daff!

The lid of the
coffin abruptly bursts open. To everybody’s surprise, a burnt and hole-ridden Daffy emerges from it, coughing out
black smoke.

Plucky: (Offscreen) IT’S A MIRACLE!!

There is an
uncomfortable silence as everybody stares at Daffy. Suddenly, he gets down on one knee as if he’s on stage.

Daffy: (Sings) Greetingth! My name ith-a
Daffy!

He is cut off as the
mourners begin to boo him and we hear the sounds of people leaving. Bugs walks offscreen in disgust.

Daffy: (Protesting) Aw, come on!! I jutht
want thome attention!

He gets splattered
with tomatoes as the flashback ends and we cut back to Plucky in the blackness.

Plucky: (To the camera) D.D told me later
on in prison that he only faked his death so that he wouldn’t hafta pay
taxes…and because he owed Professor Foghorn fifty bucks. I wanna pull off
something just as spectacular as him. So, I decided that I was gonna go it
alone and make my own show ta rival the show I’m currently on! The question is:
how am I gonna do that?

Abruptly, the lights
turn on to reveal that he is in his bedroom with the curtains closed. We hear
his father speaking offscreen.

We cut to the
exterior of Acme Loo. Plucky can be seen walking towards the statues of Bugs and Daffy. His eyes are gleaming as he
approaches the eternal sneer of the sculpture of his mentor.

Plucky: (Glowingly) Here’s the best part
of goin’ ta school! This statue of D.D: the funniest Looney Tune who shoulda
been in charge ‘o’ this dump. He looks
around to see whether the coast is clear…and then rushes over to the Bugs statue, climbs up it and paints a black moustache on its face. (To
the camera) Well, somebody has ta do it while D.D’s in the slammer!

The camera cuts to
the clock tower. Suddenly, Gogo Dodo emerges from it with a megaphone.

Plucky: (To the camera, snarky) When I get
MY own show, I won’t hafta go ta places where ducks are given a raw deal…

He walks offscreen.
As he does so, Byron Basset meanders up to the Daffy statue and lifts a leg. The camera then cuts to a view of the “WAY-OUT PHILOSOPHY CLUB” before we fade to
the long table in the Meeting room. The only Toons who are there, however, are Fifi La Fume and Shirley the Loon. There are sheets of paper on the
table, possibly notes.

Fifi: Oui. Eet shall not be long before
‘e arrives, so let us begin. She clears
her throat. As vous know, ah ‘ave un, how-you-say, ambition to be come ze
president of ze Frères Warner!

Shirley: (Dumbfounded) Like, I didn’t know
that!

Fifi: (Impatiently) Well, now vous do. She shows Shirley a document with the WB symbol
on the top left corner. Pour some reason zat eez trés ridicule; vous cannot
just become ze president by asking. Vous ‘ave to do something zat benefits ze
network.

Suddenly, the doors
to the meeting room slowly begin to open. Shirley looks shocked and a little apprehensive. Fifi, however, just relaxes in her
chair and closes her eyes with a triumphant smile. The song “Also Sprach Zarathustra” begins to play as Shirley squints at the door as it opens. Finally,
it’s completely ajar, and we see Hamton J Pig standing in the doorway. He is carrying a briefcase.

Hamton: (Happily waving) Fifi! It’s me! Am
I late?

Fifi: Au contraire, mon bonbon de
plasir. Tu are right on time!

Hamton cheerfully crosses the threshold, closing the door behind him. Shirley looks confused, then she looks at
the camera, as if silently asking the audience whether they knew this was
coming.

Hamton: (Chuckles) Oh, sure. I was worried
about bein’ late, so I came ta school five hours early. I’m sure Mr Puma
appreciated the help. He says he’s NEVER been able ta clean the basketball
hoops before!

Hamton: Well, he doesn’t have a
lisp, but that’s the only difference. I digress. He’ll go to any great lengths
ta one-up anyone more superior to him. He often fails...but his tenacity is
commendable.

Fifi: (Loftily) Ah suppose ‘e
does, mon cher. Mais, ah refuse to pitch un show avec zat cretin as ze star! She folds her arms, and looks as if she is
about to order her boyfriend to find another idea for a TV show. The pig senses
this and speaks once more.

The camera zooms in on Fifi as she begins to ponder this proposal, when suddenly, we cut to an extreme
close up of Plucky’s
horrified
face.

Plucky: (Shocked, to the camera)
OH MY GOODNESS, ARE YOU GUYS OKAY?! Ya just sat through ten minutes of a scene
I wasn’t in! The camera pans out to
reveal that he is in Elmer’s classroom. (Sternly, to the camera) Don’t
you EVER wander off like that, again!

The camera pans over to an irate Elmer Fudd as he has been
interrupted while he was carrying out his lecture.

Elmer: Pwucky, tawking to
youwsewf is the fiwst sign of wunacy! (Pleased) Gweat job! He returns to his lecture. Before Plucky can say anymore, the PA
speaker suddenly turns on. The booming, terrifying voice of the Principal speaks through it.

Principal: (Furious) Can Mr
Plucky Duck please report to my office...IMMEDIATELY?! We hear a thunderclap and the camera cuts to the green duck’s
frightened face. (Cheerfully) That is all.

Everybody stares at Plucky as he reluctantly stands up and walks towards the door.

Bugs: Yeah. I’m givin’ ya time
off so you can go. (To the camera) As a teacher, I ain’t supposed ta do dat,
but if it means I won’t hafta put up with ‘um, I’m happy. With dat said, I’m
tempted ta do it to one of da other students. He presents a sheet of paper which says: EXPULSION PAPERS FOR ELMYRA DUFF. (To Plucky) Yer dad would take ya, but he still ain’t forgiven ya for
tryin’ ta sell his golf clubs.

Plucky: (Bitterly) That figures.

Bugs: I recommend ya start yer
journey after school. You’ll have a long way ta go. (Chuckles) Ya could even
make a spinoff show if ya wanted to! Upon
hearing this, Plucky’s eyes light up. (To Plucky) Well, dat’s all, uh, folk. He points to the door. Off ya go!

Plucky turns and walks out of the office. It is obvious that he is deep in thought
about what Bugs
has
said.

Plucky: (To the camera) Perhaps
this journey to my aunt’s house in Wisconsin is the perfect way for me ta
create my own show. After all, the writer’s done this sorta thing before! (Muses)
Hmmm... Although it ain’t possible, there’s a chance that people won’t watch a
show that’s just about me... I need some co-stars...that aren’t rabbits. (Slyly)
I have an idea who I’m gonna hire.

The camera cuts to the cafeteria, where Plucky is striding over to Shirley. She is sat on a table
with Fifi
and
Hamton eating a tofu burger.
The vomit-green duck looks extremely smug at what he’s about to do.

Plucky: (Confidently, to the
camera) Take notes, folks! I’m gonna be doin’ something that was barely touched
upon on Tiny Toons! He takes out a mirror
and admires himself. Watch as I convince that lavish loon to join me in my
superior spinoff. Watch as she grows awestruck at my ardent awesomeness. Watch,
my little droogies, as I-

Shirley: (Annoyed) Like, what is
it, Plucky?

Plucky: (digging his webbed toes into the
ground bashfully like Jimmy Stewart asking for a date) Um....Shirl? How would
ya feel ... about travelling to Wisconsin
with me? ...We could have a romantic getaway up at a cabin in the woods?

Shirley: (eyeing the duck suspiciously) Rilly?
Like _yew_ have a cabin in the woods? Up in like - Wisconsin?

Plucky: Well... it's not really mine -
it's on the land on the farm where my Aunt and Uncle live...It'd be totally
fu-un! C'mon!

Shirley: Lemme get this straight - Like
_yew_ want _Me_ to meet yer relatives out in the sticks?

Plucky: Uhhhh..........Yeah!

Shirley: (Suddenly grabbing him,
overflowing with romance) You totally mean like meeting them to announce our
engagement and upcoming wedding??

Shirley: (snapping out of it) Like - Nope.
not fallin' for it, Plucky. Ah'm not gonna go become yer first conquest - Not
until you commit - Totally ta me.

Plucky: Don't worry- (thinking quickly)
Hamton's goin' with us!

Hamton: I am? Pluckyelbows him. Oh! I
am!

Plucky: See? Nothing to worry about.

Shirley: As long as Hammy's going along- She grabs Fifi.Then, like, Fifi
can come with us too!

Fifi: (adamantly) Non! Je do not play
chaperone` to zee undairhanded horny duck!

Shirleywhispers urgently inFifi's
ear. Fifigrins and whispers back intoShirley'sear.Plucky and Hamtongrow annoyed as the girls continue
whispering only to each other.

Fifi: Oui! We WEEL play chaperone` to
zee frisky fowl! Fifi grabs Hamton with her usual fervent
ardour. Aftair all - une cabeen can hold four as well as Deux! Non? Fifi
smothers Hamton with kisses and lipstick.

Hamton: OoooOoo! Oui! We can!

HamtonandFifimelt together into a cooing moaning pink and
purple puddle on the ground.

Plucky: (suddenly angry) Whadaya mean I
gotta share the trip with the stinky- Shirleysuddenly embraces him passionately and
makes a pleading , begging, huge anime eyes "PLEASE?" grin while
she hugs him in an Elmyra-like death-grip.

Plucky: (his green face now blue) ...............okay...

HamtonandFifireform into their bodies and grin
romantically at each other,Shirleysmiles angelically with closed eyes as
she embracesPlucky, who does a silent SLOWBURN.[1]

Plucky: (To the camera) What the heck just
happened? He reaches out and grabs Hamton by the straps of his overalls. (Grimly, to Hamton) We need ta talk…

As Fifi and Shirley look on with mingled amusement and confusion, Plucky pulls an office door out of his
pocket and yanks the pig through it, slamming it shut so that the girls can’t
hear what he is about to say.

The scene changes to Plucky and Hamton in their sports gear, playing
basketball in the gym. We can see Lil’ Beeper rushing around in a referee’s attire.

Plucky: I hate sports. I’d love a spinoff,
though!

He is abruptly hit in the face by
a basketball and is knocked offscreen. The screen undulates as the flashback
comes to an end and we cut back to Hamton.

Hamton: (To Plucky) I’m a part-time psychic.

Plucky: (Beat) An’ there’s another thing.
I’m more than willing ta have Shirl on my show, an’ to a lesser extent…you. He opens the door slightly and points at Fifi. But why’s she coming?!

Hamton: (Indignantly) Fifi happens ta be
MY girlfriend.

Plucky: (Shocked) WHAT?! Since when?!

Hamton: (Cheerily) 2 years this October.

Plucky: (Dumbfounded) I never knew that!

Hamton: Well, with all due respect, you
never pay attention.

Plucky: If you two are together,
then…then, she’s cheatin’ on ya!

Hamton: (Sternly) No, she isn’t, Plucky. Fifi’s
just doing what the script says. He folds
his arms. If you wanna make a spinoff show outta your trip ta Wisconsin, I’m not goin’
without her.

Plucky: Fine! I can make a show without
you, anyway! He opens the door and walks
through it. I’m sure they’ll understand.

There is a beat, before there is a
thunderclap and the screen flashes black and white. Hamton cringes as a burnt and charred Plucky staggers back into the shot.

Plucky: (Coughs) Change of plan. You an’
yer girlfriend are coming.

Act Four

The camera cuts back to the
meeting room of the “WAY-OUT PHILOSOPHY CLUB”. Plucky can be seen wearing a business uniform as he
gives a presentation. Shirley and Fifi
look amused, but not impressed,
whereas Hamton is taking notes and listening intently.

Plucky: (Superciliously) Are any of you
aware of where Wisconsin
is? Hamton eagerly raises his hand. (To Hamton)
Yes?

Hamton: (Rattling) Wisconsin
is a state in the North-Central area of the United States. It’s bordered by Minnesota to the West, Iowa to the South-West…

Plucky: (Exasperated, interrupting) No,
that’s not it!

Shirley: (Bored) Like, yes it is, Plucky.

Plucky: (Confused) What?

Shirley takes out a map of the United
States.

Shirley: Like, Wisconsin IS in the
North-Central area of the USA.

Fifi: (Puzzled) Eez eet? Ah always thought zat eet was dans le sud.

Shirley: Like, mondo incorrect, Feef, it’s always been in the...

Plucky: (Angrily interrupting) WE ALL KNOW IT’S IN THE NORTH, OKAY?!

Fifi: (Indignantly) How trés rude...

Plucky: Wisconsin is where my Aunt and Uncle live! Now, Principal Bugs has given me time off so I could travel to the NORTH CENTRAL and visit ‘em. (Haughtily) I believe that, thanks to my superior intellect, I could take advantage of the amount of time it’ll take for me to get there to create my very own show...(Indifferently) With you guys as secondary characters.

Hamton: (Confused) We’re secondary characters? B-But that’s not what we talked about at the last meeting!

Plucky: (Baffled) Last meeting? What last meeting? This is our first one!

Plucky: Hmph! He turns away from them with his bill in the air. All I can see is that YOU get more screentime. I won’t just have forgettable characters in MY show! If I did that, we may as well have Generic Brown Mouse join us!

Hamton: (Excited) Ooh! Can we ask Lightning ta come?

Plucky suddenly turns around, his face confused.

Plucky: (Puzzled) Who? He shakes his head and continues to rant. If you’re on this show, people’ll expect ya ta have bigger roles. I DESERVE BIGGER ROLES! It’s MY show!

Shirley: (Bored) Like, it ain’t a show, yet.

Plucky: (Puzzled, to Shirley) Excuse me?

Shirley: Well, Warner Bros ain’t aware of our plan ta make a spinoff show, or some junk. An’ they can’t unless we visit the studio on the way to yer aunt’s house.

Fifi: (Smugly) Mais if vous do not like ze idea of moi dans your show, we can always find another idea pour un television programme on ze journey, no?

Hamton: (To Fifi and Shirley) Perhaps Saul would like his own show?

Plucky: (Deadpan, to the camera) Am I the only one that notices the blackmail here? (Baffled) An’ who the heck is Saul? (To F,S&H) Y’know what, fine! Ta quote Burger King, have it your way! He throws his hands in the air.They snap off of his wrists. You can be in my show, but don’t start whinging once you’ve got what ya want!

Plucky suddenly lets go of the fire hydrant, and he and Hamton fly backwards, crashing into the wall of what appears to be a mobile home. Fifi walks over to the green duck and immediately rips him off of Hamton.

Plucky: (Cheerfully) That’ll be easy! He doesn’t have any hair! The camera cuts to him sporting a black eye and a bloody nose. (Bitterly) Women...can’t take a joke!

The camera cuts to Hamton talking to Uncle Stinky as Shirley climbs aboard the mobile home. Please note that Uncle Stinky doesn’t speak except for snorts and grunts. His translations are shown in brackets.

Hamton: Thanks again for takin’ us ta Wisconsin with ya, Uncle Stinky!

Uncle Stinky: (It is of no difficulty whatsoever, dearest nephew. Merrily, I was rolling along to the North Central to wallow alongside my closest companions in a mixture of water and soil at a yearly competition.)

Hamton: (To the camera) Uncle Stinky has such a way with words!

Shirley emerges from the mobile home.

Shirley: Like, he’s also got such a way with cleanliness, too! (To the camera) Mondo ironic, I know.

We cut to a view of the mobile home’s interior. It’s so spotless, it’s creepy. Fifi suddenly emerges from the bathroom, green mist billowing out behind her. Shirleyturns green and begins to hack and cough, while Hamton and Uncle Stinky sigh with satisfaction.

Fifi: (To the camera, indignant) Quoi? Ah was just washing ma ‘ands!

She crosses over to join Shirley, Hamton and Uncle Stinky as the musk begins to clear out, when Plucky, who has rid himself of his injuries, appears in the doorway.

Plucky: (Impatiently, to the group) I don’t know if you’ve noticed, but this show is supposed ta be about me…not you! Stop takin’ up my screentime! He looks around in confusion. By the way…why’re we settin’ off from Hammy’s house?

Hamton: Uh, well, Uncle Stinky was staying here until he had ta go back to Wisconsin.

Fifi: Et we thought zat we should make our departure, how-you-say, high-key.

Hamton: (Gently correcting) Low-key…

Plucky: (Baffled) What does the god of mischief hafta do with it?

Shirley: Like, what they mean is that we’re keeping our exit quiet. If the others find out what we’re gonna do, we’ll totally be in trouble!

Uncle Stinky crosses over to the cab of the mobile home, and the four Toonsters climb aboard. The camera cuts to the interior of the vehicle. Plucky, Shirley, Fifi and Hamton are sat at the breakfast table. Outside, we see the background slowly begin to move, showing that the mobile home is getting underway.

Plucky: (Slumping in his seat) Okay, I’m bored.

Hamton: (Excited) OOH! How about a rousing rendition of 99 Bottles of Non-Alcoholic Beverage on the…

Plucky: (Terrified) NO!!

He clutches his heart and we hear a pounding heartbeat getting faster and faster for five seconds. The camera cuts to Fifi, Hamton and Shirley looking perplexed.

Shirley: (Confused) ANYway… Hamton is right, Pl-ucky. We oughta come up with a new theme song for our spinoff, or some junk.

Fifi: (Musing) Oui! Mais eet ‘as to be different from ze show we used to be on. So zat we can, how-you-say, stand out.

Hamton: (Pondering) Perhaps a parody of a well-known song?

Plucky immediately recovers with a wide grin on his face.

Plucky: (To the camera) I feel a song coming on! A theme song…

The camera cuts to Uncle Stinky. He turns on his radio.

# I Got You Babe – Sonny and Cher (Instrumental)

Shirley: (Singing) Like, Wisconsin's where we're gonna go, so that we'll get our own spinoff show!

Plucky: (Singing) A show where we'll all be free, it's gonna be great 'cos the main star's gonna be ME! It's mine!

Shirley: (Singing) Like, it's our show!

Plucky: (Singing) No, it's my show!

Hamton: (Singing) Plucky's tryin' ta fulfil his dream, but doesn't he know that there's no I in team?

Hamton: (Singing) The time taken may be long, but if we work together, nothing can go wrong!

Fifi: (Singing) A show eez vat we want to do, mais do not make eet just all about vous!

Plucky: (Singing) It’s mine!

SH&F: (Singing) No, it’s OUR show!

Plucky: (Singing) Make it MY show! I’m the one in high demand!

Hamton: (Singing) I don’t think you understand!

Plucky: (Singing) I’m the one who deserves the love!

Fifi: (Singing) Don’t vous dare give us ze shove!

Plucky: (Singing) I’ll make the ratings soar so high!

Shirley: (Singing) Like, where’s yer slice of humble pie?

Plucky: (Singing) I’ll no longer be NUMBER TWO!

SH&F: (Singing) Don’t forget us when you do!

We cut to the exterior of the mobile home as if drives off into the setting sun.

Plucky: (Singing) It’s mine!

SH&F: (Singing) No, it's our show!

Plucky: (Singing) Make it MY show!

SH&F: (Singing) More like OUR show!

The song begins to fade as the camera pans up into the night sky. It halts on a huge golden star, which Plucky suddenly jumps up onto and poses smugly. A heart-shaped bubble floats up next to the star, and Shirley, Fifi and Hamton jump up and pose on that.

TO BE CONTINUED

CREDITS

Based on an idea pitched by: Mopar96

Creative Consultants: Pepe K, Leloni Bunny, HKUriah, The J.A.M

Co-written by: Pepe K

Theme Song Lyrics by: Redtop95

[1] This scene was suggested and written by Pepe-K. The
writer expresses his gratitude.

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