Dear Stephane,
Thank you very much for having pulled together a large number of elements to draft the road map.
My last suggestion (hopefully) is to locate "Executive summary" before "Introduction". This is to place the begining of the road map in line with the general expectation of readers.
Thanking you,
Yoshiko
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From: Stephane Boyera <boyera@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 25 Sep 2009 11:30:34 +0200
Subject: Roadmap new release and agenda for monday 28
To: "public-mw4d@w3.org" <public-mw4d@w3.org>
>Dear all,
>
>I just released a new version of the roadmap
>(http://www.w3.org/2008/MW4D/wiki/roadmapv2 ) integrating most of the
>changes we discussed during the last conference:
>*updated the introduction to move up the definition of mobile web
>*added the need for packaged solution for low-cost voice infrastructure
>in the tools section of voice, exec summary and conclusion support actions
>*realized that this is something we should also mention for mobile web
>access and added that too
>*changed wording in the accessibility section to underline the fact that
>this might be more important in developing countries
>*changed 6.1.5 section name (costs for the end user)
>*add a note around cost of voice calls with links to arun's examples
>*also added a note for data service
>*integrated Nicolas's contribution on co-design
>*added/updated contribution from Phillip on USSD and CB
>*started a definition section in the appendix 12.2 after the
>abbreviation, and mentionned that in the intro. I'm just listing for now
>the erm and not putting the definition. Suggestions on which terms to
>put in this section are welcome
>
>Things i didn't implement yet:
>- the corrections sent by Renjish
>- checking section references and numbering
>
>Point that needs to be discussed:
>- change in the organization of the doc proposed by Renjish
>- change in the Audience section proposed by Renjish
>- some other changes proposed by Renjish in
>http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-mw4d/2009Sep/0009.html
>- discoverability of voice apps proposed by Arun
>- authoring of voice apps proposed by Arun
>- lasting-information in voice apps proposed by Arun
>- examples in the appendix
>
>So please:
>- review the new release
>- read the comments we will discuss on monday
>
>This will ease and speed the discussion on monday.
>
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