Cant Really Find A Title For It

We See No Smiles In Our Nation,
Theres Always Pain Everyday,
We'll Fuck You Pussies Any Day,
Aint No Smiles In Our Nation...
We Got Each Others Back
Dont Expect Us To Fall Apart.
We'll Beat Yous Up To Were Yous Come From
If Its Possible To Your Mothers Wound.
There Aint No Pussies Messin With Us
All The People We Need To Know
Are Within Our Hood.
We Need Nothin,exceptourselves
We Got Our Pride,heads High.
Til The End Of Time
We'll Keep On Watchin The Light
Our Light
Our Desire To Keep On Livin
Will Keep On Growin
And Yours Will Keep On Fadin.

I guess, I can say it was good, because it came from what you were feeling at the time, but your thoughts seem to be scrambeled, and i can't find the point, you were trying to make in this piece. i'll still keep peeping your stuff though, keep postin. ^One

I wasn't really diggin' it, I agree with Soul.. I got lost somewhere within what you were saying, a bit redundant, but it wasn't a good repeatitive approach. I thought the meaning and anger was there, yet what you wanted to say came up in complete nonsense at times, or just didn't register with my head at this time at night, it's whatever. Overall, OKAY piece, could've been much better from the potential of how you were writing it and the emotion, voice you showed in it, as well. My blessings..