Ahh, wow! I really, loved this first chapter! I don't read as much Dom as I do Rose/Scorpius, or even James or Albus/OC, so it's such a nice refreshing change to see Dom as the main character!

I loved your plot! It's really quite unique, and I really enjoyed reading this, honestly. Your writing is terrific, and I just love the idea of Summerbee House! Never seen that in a Harry Potter fan fic yet! :D

I'm also really curious about why Dom is called Nikki by Rose (and who's the other person that would call her that). And also, what exactly is happening with Dom's life and why she's at Summerbee House - so the intrigue is great and I feel really curious, so you've definitely got a reader for your 2nd chapter now! :P

I think Dom's characterisation is great because it's different from usual, and so that makes it interesting ^_^ Great writing, and a great idea for a story! :D

-2nd chapter here i come-

Author's Response: First, I was so happy to see all of your reviews when I logged on - thank you for making my day! ♥ I like writing Dom, because it's true that we don't see as much of her normally in fanfic, which I thought was a fun opportunity to do whatever I liked to her character. :P

I'm glad you liked it and thought it was interesting... the best things I could hear haha! :P Thank you so much for your kind words, I really appreciate it! :)