Week 5 – 9th February 2016

A big well done to all of you who submitted last week, please do not forget to check back for comments later in the week as the challenges are now being posted around the world and comments are coming in all week. To be entered into the world wide competition, your writing must…

Be no more than 7 lines

Include varied vocabulary

Use different openers at the start of sentences (ly, ing words, nouns, time order words, similes or metaphors – see Tips n Tricks!)

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Running down the hallway, Tessie, was screaming as loud as a lion! She had never seen a snake in the canteen before at KPIS International School. Her friends didn’t see the slimy creature and did not believe her when she explained what happened to them. When she went home, she could not believe her eyes. She was shocked to see another snake in her flowery garden!

One quite day, at the fantastic KPIS international school there was a girl name Tessie. She was a nice girl, she always care with other. As fast as a bullet she run to the canteen and she see a gigantic green snake in her food! She thought that horrible snake was a fruit. She ran as fast as a car to his friend. Tessie tell his friend about it but no one believe her. Her friend went to the huge canteen and they saw a massive snake on the table. When she went home… she was shocked to see another immense snake in her beautiful garden!

Long long, time ago there was a lovely girl name Griczellah . She live in the woods,with a lot of her cute dogs. while on her way to the house near the woods.She saw a lot of new dogs and it scares her so much. The dogs doesn’t look lovely and nice. One sunny day, she wake up with tears and sadly saw her lovely dogs die outside her house.

Flying fireman was shock to see Alex on the building that on the fire! The flying fireman try to help Alex because Aliens from Toximoon bomb this building when we see on another building Milke see 2 gas Milke say to Sam. So he give Fox to help Alex but the fire burn Fox so he die! So Sam need to go by himself Sam can help Alex so Alex give all fireman money.

There was a girl named Nicy and she likes roses and flowers,she also had her favorite rose inside a vase, it was red and pretty.One day when she woke up she was so excited because each day her rose will grow bigger and bigger when she got downstairs she was too excited that she broke the vase and then the rose fell down,she quickly catch it,but it fell on the ground it was not pretty anymore,it started to look ugly and terrible she was shocked to see it so much so she put it outside and she felt sad.

So excitedly,the little poor girl name Cilinda saw the living of the snakes and a hungrily dogs in her school! And you know.She is a new student and just come to the school yesterday!She was shocked to see it so much.Suddenly,the little poor girl running as fast as a flash to the teacher and explain every things that she saw.She explain about a snake,about the hungrily dogs and tell teacher to help her but she still don’t believe the things that Cilinda explain.Suddenly,Cilinda got it,what is the word that teacher will help her,and it is “but teacher,everyone will not learn in this school,because this living things!”Suddenly,teacher trust Cilinda that its true so teacher help her as fast as she can do.

Once upon a time there was a girl called Goldilocks, she was at the playground . When she went in the playground she was shocked to see a dancing monkey bar. Then the play full girl came she was about to say that ” That’s a fake monkey bar!” The girl yelled . Next she found a zip she open the zip” There’s a two giant people there!” she screamed.” Its my two brothers!” When she knew that she get her paper and pencil to tell her mom that they tricked me . Mom read that letter she ‘s finished reading it ” I’m mad!” she roared . When she picked them up she give them detention but not Goldilocks. The detention is no playing outside. They did deal.

Today was Katie birthday ! I was so exited I has an awesome give for her I rushed to my pretty car and go straight to Katie house the way to go to her house is abit small she live in a house that look very cute she love pink color .( Ting tong) I rang the doorbell then Katie open the door she smiles and then she hug me Ifeel happy she was my best friend Katie tell me to go inside her cute little house . She get out her birthday cake I help her put the candle on the cake we lid up the candles . I sing “happy birthday to you happy birthday to you happy birthday happy birthday happy birthday to you “.
After that Katie blow up the candle than we eat the cake .Now it’s time to open the give I hand Katie my give wrapped with a pink paper and ribbon when Katie open the present. She was shock to see a little puppy with pink ribbon tie on the giggling tail she was very happy she hug it and name it Lizzy I was happy she love it. By :Milan Gr.4

There was a beautiful girl name Alis.She walk in to a house that they where lots and lots of flower.She pick the pink flower.She love it.The house was in the park.She get the flower and ran to her white house.Every day she will water the flower,she like the flower very much.Two weeks later Alis saw a key on a desk she think that the key was from her dad she quickly said “I think this is my dad keys.”so she fast as a lightning she get the key and use that key to open the small door. She went inside.She slide in to the room. She felt very dizzy so she felt as sleep.The next day she open her eye ,she was shock to see because she was in anther land.She open the door but door was lock.She cry and cry.One rabbit said “Don’t be so sad and hi my name is billy.”now she feel ok so they be friend.So Alis can not came back to her home again and she never so the flower again and she live happily ever after.

That night when Timmy was asleep at midnight . He heard a sound like a witch laughing. “What was that sound?” Timmy was soo scared. But that witch sound did not stop “hello, who are you” said Timmy. Then Timmy saw a shadow, he was so frightened he ran out of his room into his mom and dad’s room but they was not there! Timmy ran to his neighbor’s house and ask for a sleepover the neighbor said “ok???” In the morning he was in his bed. So all that time was a dream. THE END

Running out of the hunted house she scream! Starck ran as fast as a flash from the ghost in the house where she live.At the hunted house they have all of the monster that has create.
But also Stark can escape from the hunted house.She went her new house.But she don’t know that house hunted!Five week later she got hunted again Stark exclaim”I clost all the book for Goosbumps already!”but when she look in her bag one book still open and it the boos one night later she got the boos!

One hot, sunny day Jen was walking in the park. It was so hot that Jen decided to have a rest under the big, old apple tree. Jen saw a humongous, green, lovely apple. She picked the apple and took a massive bite and was happy with the taste. Jen was enjoying the juicy apple when she was shocked to see a big, fat, ugly, wiggly worm. She then felt a wiggly movement at the back of her teeth and screamed out loud!

Driving to Khao Yai, Pim was playing with toys while talking to her mommy and daddy. Boom! Boom! Boom! She heard a loud bang from the top of the mountain. Quick as a flash, Pim’s dad stepped his feet on the car brake. Now she was shocked to see an enormous pile of rocks sliding down the mountain on the road ahead. ” How lucky we are! ” Pim whispered.

It was Christmas,I went Rushing and stumbled down the stairs carelessly”Its here!Its here!”I yelled at my mom’s ear “Settle down kids,we are about to open our Christmas gifts”she said I got 1 gift like my mom and dad my brother got 2.I got a new DVD player,My dad got a new golf set,my brother got a laptop and when my mom open hers she was shocked to see a snake!”Help!Help!she screamed in horror and fear but,it was just rubber everyone laughed she accidentally opened Tc’s gift,his gift was a rubber snake because Tc has 2 gifts everyone laughed had fun on Christmas day.

One day, Lisi was in her wonderful bedroom, she was doing homework.Then, she heard someone talking, it sounded like her mother was talking to her father. But then, there’s a terrifying scream.”Aah! what was that scream?”She ran as fast as she can down the stairs hoping she could help, as she found out that her mother’s shirt was full with strawberry smoothie. She thought angrily, “What a waste of time!” Finally, one the next day, Lisi finish her homework just in time.

First, she was running down the hallway and screaming as loud as a tiger’s roar Sofia was shocked to see that her teacher was eaten by a wolf Sofia was scared Sofia said,”I’m scared please don’t eat me.” Then, Sofia went to her apple tree garden she would not believe her eyes the wolf had follow her Sofia run until the wolf was tired but Sofia keep running and she smashed a gigantic wall she got hurt. Soon after Sofia felt sleepy like a sloth. Later Sofia wake up. Sofia didn’t remember what happens. Finally Sofia went home.

Not long ago there is a stange thing that pop out of the paper wall and it is not belong to any one just of the big sale in bangkok thailand a poor thoughtful kid is a spy and steal money for the bank and the owner of the bank is a very sleepy people and so the boy tiptoed in the
shiny bassment ever in the boy life and it going to be tricky he make a clakle noisily or the owner will might wake up the owner and he will chase us and we will be throw in the jal and we will problely die for ourlife for ever and we will be a rip down the

One day, a girl went to a jungle it was dark but she was so she slept it was morning she started continued walking she screamed because she saw a mouse and,there was a lot of trees and rivers suddenly she was shocked to see an anaconda,tiger,fox and a lion she,quickly ran to hide at the back of a trees.That was the worst day ever.

Racing down the breezeway, Emelya was first in line in the canteen. She saw a real live chicken. She was racing to the other side and she couldn’t eat anything. “That was a creepy day!” she thought. When she went home, she was shocked to see the same chicken with the same marks and the same pattern and everything the same.

Mynie i really like your story. I liked that you used a simile at the start of the sentence.I liked that you used different punctuation. One thing that you can improve is to give more information about the chicken for example, the name.

Once upon a time there was a handsome prince he’s name is Carlose. Carlose was a special kid and after all he was brainy too. One day Carlose mom was capture!Then when Carlose can’t find he saw a letter it says”To Carlose”The wicked witch caught Carlose mom to the underground hotel any people that go in will be capture forever by the wicked witch she will cast a terrible spell on any body
then she said that you get her by your self you will never get her ”ha ha ha” Good luck said the wicked witch.Then when Carlose got there and he was shocked because he was stuck too Carlose say Oh no! To be continued…

In the creepy forest,there was a girl that only dare to enter to the creepy forest.Her name was mary,on the way she was shocked to see a dead person,she can’t believe her eyes.When she went home,she explain what she have seen in the creepy forest,her parents still didn’t believe her.When she went to school she saw another dead people in the closet! she was terrified.

Linda was so excited and ready to go to school this morning. It was the “Chinese New Year!” celebration. Today was the day that she would get Aung-Baos from the grands, aunts and uncles…it was the day that the school would celebrate, she would have her Chinese dance performance on stage and would see the dragon dance that she eagerly awaits to make her wish upon. Suddenly, she hears the drums roll and the gongs gong. She shouts, “Mommy the dragon is coming!!!” She prepares to close her eyes and begins to make a wish, but her curiosity took control and instead of closing her eyes, she takes a harder look at the dragon…..and….she was shocked to see her brother underneath the dragons head! Is it true? My brother is the dragon?

One weird day, a girl name Mew she was walking down the street and saw a gang of men wreaking a person. They were in a room people may not see inside it so Mew walked there and the man spoke loudly nothing is happening go home” the other man yelled “Did you forget we are wreaking a person!” quickly Mew called the police and the gang got captured.
Pat G3/2

First, of all.There was a girl named ”Fancy” she is very magnificent also she like to learn clubs one
day she was going to a fantastic trip with her friends. When she was on a huge school bus we was
driving to go to Silver Lake.After a while we got there and soon we are buying ticket Fancy was shocked to see gangsters shooting gun.But later that day she wasn’t a normal girl she bring a shotgun.
Next’ she tried to aim her gun at one of the people in the gang it hit. Soon half an hour the call the police.Finally everybody was save. THE END BY PAK G4

Pne fine day, a girl name Mew was walking home and she was shocked to see a person got wreaked by a group of men! Quickly Mew ran to the door a man came and explained that nothing happened but the other man yelled back that they were wreaking a person Mew called the poilce and the gamg of men got caught.
Pat G3/2

A nice and sunny day I went to the park I saw many beautiful toys. My mom said I couldn’t buy any of them because it’s so expensive. I was shock to see a snake but not the real one. So I went out to eat something and it’s raining I was shocked to see a big spider but it was just another toy.

On Sunday Bambi went to the shop she saw a bag that’s on sale and she was shocked to see a spider inside the bag. She ran very fast and the big fat spider run very fast too Bambi was scared so they didn’t go back to that shop again. The next day she went to the beach and she said ” who pulled my pants?” she screamed and was shocked to see a fat boy was pulling her pants.

On Sunday Bambi went to the shop she saw a bag that’s on sale and she was shocked to see a spider inside the bag. She ran very fast and the big fat spider run very fast too Bambi was scared so they didn’t go back to that shop again. The next day she went to the beach and she said ” who pulled my pants?” she screamed and was shocked to see a fat boy was pulling her pants.

One cold day when she woke up she was surprised to see it was snowing outside. She was very happy to play with the snow it was great and fun. She was then shocked to see the ground cracking under her feet and she screamed and fell down with the ice on the swimming pool.

Mrs. Beatty lived at the very end of our quiet road were she always felt so alone . All the other kid’s in the street tormented her due to a large dark purple birthmark which covered half her face .
I cut Mrs. Beatty lawn’s everyweek , she had the most beautiful grass on the street . This gave me an idea ! whilst Mrs. Beatty was busy , i turned her lawn into a putting green , invited all the kids in the street .
Mrs. Beatty , she was shocked to see so many kid running around on her beautiful grass , but then she sew the smiles and heard the heart warming laughter and suddenly didn’t feel so alone anymore. Holli 665. G4.

Fluffy dog is coming soon and Lully was very excited to see she favorite dog is coming to the shop but that day she don’t have the time to go there and shop so she need to wait for a week she was Excited for she dog so she don’t remember she birthday party and 3 day ago she still don’t remember she birthday cause she still excited to see she new dog so she call to she mom, Mom when is my birthday she said your birthday is 7 MAR. Mom said thank mom she go to the school in first day she tell friends when is she birthday and she go home for a day but later that day is was she birthday and she was shocked to see lily give Luly favorite dog.
Andy 3/1

Dashing though the road, I was going to eat my dinner at my home. After eating the dinner I went up stair and I went in my room to read my book. Shouting like a monster, I was shock to see a person skeleton, there was there was a nasty, horrible and smelly kind of creature! Sliding down the stair, I was running for my life, when I told my mum about it but she didn’t believe me so I told my mum to walk up and look at it. Walking up the stair, my mum did not see the skeleton, when she turn back the skeleton grab my mum and kill her. Finally, I went out of the house and never come back! Chato G3/2

Dashing though the road, I was going to eat my dinner at my home. After eating the dinner I went up stair and I went in my room to read my book. Shouting like a monster, I was shock to see a person skeleton, there was there was a nasty, horrible and smelly kind of creature! Sliding down the stair, I was running for my life, when I told my mum about it but she didn’t believe me so I told my mum to walk up and look at it. Walking up the stair, my mum did not see the skeleton, when she turn back the skeleton grab my mum and kill her. Finally, I went out of the house and never come back! Chato G3/2

To begin with, there was a one kind girl called Ruby. Also her school is in keerapat international school. When she was at the huge playground. When she was shocked to see a poison snake came to me like a wind. So I grab an enormous stick and throw to the snake to somewhere. Also I go to the toilet then play with my friends it was a lot of fun. But it was weird because today I went home at 3:30 but the other day we went home at 3:00. Finally when I finish playing I but something and go home. Also I went early

Flying fireman was shock to see Alex on the building that on the fire! The flying fireman try to help Alex because Aliens from Toximoon bomb this building when we see on another building Milke see 2 gas Milke say to Sam. So he give Fox to help Alex, but the fire burn Fox so he hurt. So Sam need to give another 3 friend to help fox out they saw fox in the fire, but Fred saw Alex he go to help Alex when Sam see Alex and 4 friend that go help Alex.

On day when Courana walking on a feeble round if her mom on morning for health!She was shock!It
because she saw a dead peple in the grass there was only Courana ‘s mom and Courana they are apprehensive they worried they don’t what can they do if this dead peple .So they when back home
Her mom is cooking.Courana is playing game Finnally her mommy cook finish . Now they were eating breakfast . What a bad day they saw a green snake out side of the widow .

TO begin with it was my friend day to move to the moon I was sad because she was my best friend [10 days later] I was along every day I got to school I would
Be along . I yell “I would have no one like you” later I got home at 3:30 I do my homework “boning “I boning said but later I have a dream then I saw my friend .
1 year later my mom say “your friend is here” I was happy and it was the best day every.

TO begin with it was my friend day to move to the moon I was sad because she was my best friend [10 days later] I was along every day I got to school I would
Be along . I yell “I would have no one like you” later I got home at 3:30 I do my homework “boning “I boning said but later I have a dream then I saw my friend .
1 year later my mom say “your friend is here” I was happy and it was the best day every.

It all began when a little girl was walking on the street her name is Kate . She is very lucky that day because there was a woman who wanted Kate to come and live with her. excitedly Kate said “yes” 10 time, then the woman name Zara hug Kate very soft. Not so long Kate was jumping and said to the nice lady “thank you so much”.

Sprinting up the stair , Rosy feel tired .When Rosy gave the money to the cashier so Rosy can go in the frightened hunted house .Rosy was so exited because it was so scary ,when Rosy need to chose the lucky thing she get a flash light soon , she open the door and then she turn on the flash. The floor was so rough she
hear someone was screaming loud and crying , I saw a table flew over my body and I fell on the floor because I never saw some thing fly over my self! Big Gr.3/2

Going to the school by the little kids name James. He was asking his friends do you know what is to day? ’’It is July 12 2014’’ Just that, ask James? Yes of course. Ok find. He go and asking other peoples. But the answer was the same. When it is home time he go home and ask his mom. What is today? James mother said I don’t know. James was so shock that his mom can’t remember he birthday! When his dad come back home from working. James asked his dad what is today? I don’t know. James was very sad because his dad and his mom can’t remember his birthday. When he wake up he go to school he friends go home very to early. When he went home ’’He was shock to see’’ His mom and his were surprise him for his the birthday.

One exited long day, my mom’s best friend was going to one direction magnificent show!Then,she told her best friend to go with her because she was very exited.She was lazy and don’t want to go so she doesn’t care and go by her self.She was shocked to see One direction and she just sing with them,but it was too loud till she can’t sing,so she just wave the hand instead of singing.Now it was 5:00 P.M. One direction show was over, and now she was exhausted so she had a long sleep!

One pleasant day there was a girl called Chelsea, she’s at the classroom , she was cleaning the classroom for 2/1.then she was shocked by the spooky chair .”Ah!” exclaimed Chelsea. she didn’t saw the string because ,she was only looking down! Soon after she looked up she saw her colourfull string it’s also lengthy she screamed! “What is wrong with me am I frivolous! .The other girl roared” Your pointless Chelsea” I don’t like you!”said Chelsea .Next, somebody told them calm down you both .They calm down .Their best friend.

Once upon a time, there was a boy name Doraemon and his sister name Dorami. They went to the enormous park with a magic door. When they are there they started to eat dorayaki and melon bread. It tasted sweet and delicious. After they ate lunch , they went for a walk. Suddenly there was an evil monster name Let’s Dance. Dorami was shocked to see the ugly monster. The monster made a strange light to Dorami. She couldn’t move, so Doraemon ran to grab his sister and tried to kill the craziest monster in the world, so Doraemon use the mini flashlight to make the monster small.
In the end the monster became tiny, and they were safe and went back home as happily as ever
WinG.4

There was a girl name Lucy she like to buy toy but when she got Iphone she stop playing all her toy. She play only her phone. The next day she went to school she told that she has Iphone so her friend said did you have line and she said i don’t know what is line so her friend tell her to load line. She play her phone more than last time. One day she went home she was shocked to see that all her toy is gone. She see that her mom and dad is packing up so she ask why are you packing up? Her mom and dad said we are packing up because we are moving to Newyork she is really sad she say good bye to her friend sadly.

Once upon a time their was a wonderful day their was a little girl name Cherry. Her older sister name Brownie. Her mother name Annena. And the girls father name Jack. Cherry was busy drawing a beautiful picture for her mom. Brownie also busy making a cookies for her mom. And also Jack making a cake for his wife. They were enjoy making at it and they hope mom will like it . First times Brownie was not gonna put a chocolate chip on Annena cookies but her farther told her that Annena like chocolate chip so Brownie put it on the cookies. Jack enjoy making a colorful cake for Annena he wish that Annena wold like his cake. Then we finish making things for Annena. When that day almost end mom was sleep already Cherry,Brownie,Jack were prepare a things for Annena. When it rise and shine Annena was coming to make a breakfast. When she saw a silk cover something so she flip it up! She was shock to see a beautiful
drawing,yummy cake,and wonderful cookie she quickly said to Cherry,Brownie,Jack that she love the things that they made it last night.
By Prim G.4

There was a girl name Lucy she like to buy toy but when she got Iphone she stop playing all her toy. She play only her phone. The next day she went to school she told that she has Iphone so her friend said did you have line and she said i don’t know what is line so her friend tell her to load line. She play her phone more than last time. One day she went home she was shocked to see that all her toy is gone. She see that her mom and dad is packing up so she ask why are you packing up? Her mom and dad said we are packing up because we are moving to Newyork she is really sad she say good bye to her friend sadly.

Hi! My name is Pom. I have a friend named Nana. One day I was walking with Nana and she was shocked to see a scary alligator right in front of her. She screamed as loud as a lion and was running all over like a monkey. I really wanted to laugh but I could not because I didn’t want to make her feel sad. So I brought her home to her parents. I told them what had happened to her.

Once upon a time, a woman named Wed and Shame they were best friends.One day, Shame got married with a rich man called McQueen they lived together in a gigantic house that is all made out of Birch wood. 3 years later, Shame got pregnant! She told wed that she is pregnant she was shocked to see that Shame is pregnant ,but later that day ,Shame went to the huge hospital to get the baby out of her tummy! Everyone is excited to see the cute little baby. The baby was so cute that every one could not imagine it.HAPPILY EVER AFTER

I was at home and I had a bad dream. When I woke up I went to play with my blocks then I saw a big stripy spider under the table. My mum came in and she was shocked to see the spider. She screamed and the spider ran out the house.

It was 5’ o clock in the afternoon and it was dark the girl was alone in their house. All of a sudden she heard her tummy grumbling and realized she was hungry so she went to the kitchen to get some food on the way down she heard a noise in the toilet and she was shocked to see her grandpa was poopooing.

¬¬¬¬¬¬Today is my friend name Delly he girl friend has a birthday! Name Cellon and everyone was making the party also me! And my friend tell me “this is a amazing day! And a perfect day!” But everyone make the action like everyone don’t
no is she birthday and when is lunch time she was open the door everyone
shout out! Happy brithday cellon!.

Once there was a girl named Jasmine. She was scared because saw blood on the wall in the hallway. Her friends and teacher didn’t believe her. When she went home, she was very scared. She was shocked to see a snake in her homework book. Her parents didn’t believe her. “Things are just crazy” Jasmine yelled to herself.

One nice morning, Cheque was watering her plants in her garden. The flowers were beautiful and smell nice. She loved her garden and her flowers. After school, when she went home. She was shocked to see cat’s poo on her lovely flowers.

I hastened to my next lesson as fast as I could. Jeez, I hated being late to classes. I tightened my grip on my books and tried to swallow the small lump in my throat as I dashed across the hallway. It was literally empty in there.”I hope Professor Snape isn’t too mad…”. Just as I was about to open the door to my class, I heard a horrifying shriek coming from the girl’s bathroom. I followed it. As I peeked through the door I saw Hermione screaming. I caught a glimpse of a huge troll smashing the room. I could tell that she was shocked to see the troll. I wanted to help her, but I was too scared. After all, I was in Ravenclaw, not Gryffindor. – Roxy G6/2

I have been waiting for this day for ages, because One Direction is come to Thailand! I am so exited for their amazing concert tomorrow, but later that day I went to my friend’s house. My friend is a girl her name is Jenna. Soon after, I showed her the news paper about One Direction, she was shocked to see the news paper, there is a bad news. The bad new is Jenna’s dad did not buy her a ticket yet, luckily my mom has one ticket left so she told Jenna kindly do you want to come to the concert with us. Jenna replied happily, yes and thank you Tanwa’s mom. The next day was the day of the concert there is terrible thing, because the manager of the concert said that the concert was canceled. Now me and Jenna was both shocked. BY Tanwa G.4

I don’t know where I am.My mind is full of darkness,confusion,and sorrow.I don’t know who I am,or how I got here.My mind is clear of memory.I felt like I was drifting down,descending down on what seemed like a dark,warm,neverending pit.”Yolk”…I mumbled in a greasy manner.I can’t tell why I kept repeating that word,but it was as it was the only word that managed to leak into my empty mind.Suddenly,it struck me.
Opening my shell-covered eyes in a flash of a quarter of a second,emotion struck me.Whatever I was in started trembling and wobbling uncontrollably.I felt force lifting me high,..or at least higher than I’ve ever felt before.The temperature cooled down to near freezing!Brrrrrr….,and most importantly,faded pictures began forming in my once corrupted mind.Pictures of a family,with me,smiling and jumping for joy.Then,someone took me away…..
Now,I’m in “I don’t know where land”,where I’m being put in a contained area with no one to accompany..Such horrible fate lies upon me…

There was a girl named Sam. She learned at KPIS. One day, She came first in class then after she opened the door and was shocked to see one ghost on her desk. She was so scared and ran back home after that, she told her mom what the ghost look like. She said”It is white as snow,eyes as red as blood.” Then, her mom said ”There are no ghosts”. Try looking in your backyard.” Then Sam went to her backyard and was surprised that she saw another ghost.Then she fell on the ground. That was the end.

Invaders? Again? Can’t they just leave me alone for one day?! She thought. As she pulled out her sword getting ready. She jumped out from what is left of her shelter, damaged by many recent attacks. She swung her sword furiosly at her attacker, as she shouted “Get out of here!” The person gave no words or any cries of pain. They both kept fighting, bruise after bruise without a second of rest. For what seemed like 10 minuites later they stopped. Both were exhausted from constant swinging and blocking. When they were both ready, they charged! They both weren’t injured by the charge, but the invader’s hood got cut off, revealing his true identity. She was so shocked to see, his attacker being her long lost brother!

one day there was a girl name Sunny. Tomorrow Sunny is going to see the one direction she was exited to see the one directions. The next morning she went to see one direction but she was shocked to see a gigantic fire coming . But suddenly the people are running and nobody help her .And she think the fire burn her and the thing that she think did not come true because Harry style came to save her.

There was one kid name Lily. Today she were learning about math and science. And math and science always have a lot of homework. Today teacher gave them a lot of homework, five math page and four science page. When she came back home , she just go and play without remember that she have a lot of homework. When she play finished she go to take a bath and then she play her iPad . But still she didn’t remember that she have homework. Next day she knew that she didn’t do homework. She swaps so shocked to see that she didn’t do homework for real. That day she was in so much trouble. Then she know that she wouldn’t do it again.

Nothing. Nothing is what she is seeing. She couldn’t think, it was as if she was brain washed. She tried to move but she couldn’t. She felt like her weight was 10 times heavier, she felt like a statue, she just couldn’t move. Her legs, she tried moving her legs but she couldn’t. It felt as if her legs were being pierced by thousands of tiny needles. She can’t remember how she got here or even who she was… All she had memory of was her ancestor, Quack. He was dying and alone, lying on cold hard stone. Suddenly, she heard footsteps followed by a shadow. She was trying to figure out who or what it was. She was starting to make out what it was and she was shocked to see her ancestor QUACK!

Dia!” Ran sprinted to the brunette haired girl. She was exhausted to say the least. “Dia..! Please.. follow me..!” she panted out before collapsing onto the grass. “Ran!” Dia screamed as she helped her friend up. A while later, the two finally reached their destination. They were at the park where many couples either walked, sat, talked, ate, even… Cuddling. Oh, how the Charas cringed at this. Moving on, the two skipped along the main pathway to encounter a very, very very, strange sight—not to mention that the other remaining Charas were present, hiding behind a bush. Dia gasped, she was shocked to see what her eyes were locked on. (Queue me having a song stuck in my head and completely forgetting to continue writing this for about a minute) Yoru, the mischievous dark haired kitty-like Chara was holding hands with someone quite familiar. Violet locks, golden crown perched on their head, a beautiful, red cape… Kiseki. They were acting strange.. Holding hands, sitting in the same bench, not arguing, and actually loving each other. By this sight, of course, Dia blushed so red she could overcome Antonio’s tomatoes. She pulled out her camera and took photographs like the paparazzi she was. The two poor lads didn’t have a chance to run, they were stuck in the middle of a wall made of curious, blushing, Charas, willing to know everything. That’s gonna be an ending for those two<3

A/N: Happy (early) Valentines Day~ I couldn't help writing this on the 13th since tomorrow is Valentines Day ahhhh
-person who guesses the right reference/show gets a chocolate chip cookie and my rating on the new Deadpool Movie :,)

She was shocked to see him standing in front of her… She was jittery as he slowly approached her. His tender voice gently asked her to sit down on the bench. Autumn leaves were falling around them and she could feel the soft breeze of wind sweeping across her face. “We have been uhh “Friends” for awhile now and i would… well.” he stuttered. “Well take it to another level.”
he said carefully. My face was slowly starting to heat up as he continued. “I believe we were meant for something greater” “Yes!” I thought as he stopped “Will you be my………. Bestie?” all different kinds of emotion was mixed up. Rage, disappointment, disbelief, sadness, shock “Yes… of course…” i said apathetically. That was the day i got friend zoned.

There was girl named Emily. One morning, her mom walk out to feed a dog and she screamed.Emily quickly run to find out and she found her dog was eaten by a tiger. Emily cried. Suddenly, an old man run and begging “help,help,the tiger!” Emily couldn’t know what to do, she quickly pick a big wood stick and threw it to the old man. He hit the tiger but the tiger was wild and big, so the tiger scratch his face. Then, he knocked to the ground.Her mom run and screamed, Emily warn her to stop but she don’t listen.Her mom fall down into the big hole and die. Then ,Emily screamed. Suddenly, she woke up. Emily touch her head, ” that just a nightmare .” Suddenly, her mom screamed, again….

If you want to hear the tale of the old Tow truck his friend come hear and sit down for it is
about to begin. You see there was a little girl named Amy and she lived in a place called Big Butte
( Big B-e-u-t-e ). and it was an old town but not that old and legend has it that if you walk alone in the streets of Big Butte, you will see the ghost tow truck. But this girl has a story. She was just returning from a store and was walking alone. As she was walking she saw a bright light and she was screaming in terror, but then she heard some talking and she looked in front of her and she was shocked to see that it was just and old truck soon they started talking and later became friends. THE END

She was shocked to see New Haven burning by the hands of Hyperion.They had moved to New Haven because Old Haven had been overrun by bandits hired by the Crimson Lance. As the city burns and people dies she sees her dad rushing the president of Hyperion Handsome Jack with a spoon as the man rushes Jack. Jack stands there dying of laughter then scoops out her dad’s eyes with the spoon and his kids are all crying and Jack just stands there laughing at him as he starts bumping into stuff. The moral of the story is that spoons are very dangerous.

In one night I got stuck in a dream with a freind that I have no idea who she is. But this world is still like nothing is moving. The only way to escape from this world is to find a moving object that is not a person. So I try to find it every where in the city with my freind that I still don’t know who she is. For after a long time I finnaly find one but I have to stop it first. My freind said “it’s impossible to stop the truck that’s going 70k/h” then I ask her “if I die while trying to stop the truck will you be able to live in this still world” she said that she’s not sure. In my mind I think it will free both of us if I die or stop the truck so i go for it. And of course I died. She was shocked to see my death but jest like what I think we both return to the real world.

Runing down the hallway she was late to her class at the end of school day her friend brought a phone.she wanted to take a picture of the school .when she did she looked at the picture she was shock to see a slenderman in evrey picture soon they found leters and put them in the felled and the sleder died.

My name is ice. I at my home I have dragon it my pet name dragi. I love my pet.I have a lot of pet. I love all of them.I have cat,dog,fish,horse,chicken and elephant.Suddenly! My dragon just mad! I don’t know why my dragon just mad? I think my dragon didn’t eat any thing. I let dragon eat. My dragon just mad too. I let dragon drink. My dragon just mad too. I let my dragon do everything. I think my dragon need a. Hug! My dragon love me to hug. My dragon happy now.