Thanks for taking your own approach to the format. :) It looks nice and clean, and none of the blocks of text are too long (good paragraph lengths, and legible font).
As for the review. I like it. It's concise and to the point but also specific about why you like what you like. I haven't read Rokulily's comic myself, but it looks charming, and I might have to check it out.

Glad you guys like it. Normally Monkey and I would be having a conversation about the comic, but I didn't get his email in time. So you have me doing it by myself. I think that's one reason that it seems like there's too much text. On of the goals was to avoid having a lot of small text in big blocks, I think I succeeded in that regard.