This was so sad. I really love how you protrayed Mke. He wasn't a creepy stalker. He was jsut a boy with feelings, and with a heart that was hurt because of the oblivious neglect of a girl he really felt for.

Good story, I never had thought about Mike that much really. But it does really show to me that, really, Bella is just hopeless when it comes to Edward. As in, that she's pretty much self-centered. But that's my opinion.

That was the best Twilight oneshot I have ever read. It was so touching. I'm glad you put the spotlight on Mike-I love him, too. The deep simplicity of everything was touching, and I love the format with the numbers and such. Second-person stories are really rare, and, haha, I don't think they're so bad as murder. ;D Excellent stuff. I'm addicted.