If I could recommend something, though - try to go through your documents before you post them on ffn. They can be stupid sometimes and don't always listen to certain commands, like italicization (as in the case here). There were a coupla typos, of course, but that's normal. Great job!

Uh. The song that came on at the precise time I started reading this made it go from great to brilliant. I WANT MORE! This was wonderful. For some reason, I get a bit squicky with ten/rose over nine/rose (probably because I don't feel quite the same chemistry from them), but this was PERFECT! I hope you write more of it. I'd die.

You should pull this into a full length story ad explain her reaction when Ida says that he fell into the pit. And then when they're reunited again. It owuld be brilliant. I would try, but I'm not a very good writer, I'll admitt. And definately not good as you!

Just linked over here from your 'Radiant' fic... wow you're a pro at invoking emotion. My heart swelled with this one, as if it could possibly just happen! _~ So sweet and tender, and as you seem to be good at, so THEM.