photo for consideration. What do you think?

I'm feeling brave tonight. Tell me what you think and recommend to make it better.

This is a black and white from my first photo shoot. It was done with my A620 at tv 4.1 and av 1/30. There was a window to the right and tungsten lighting at a 45 degree angle on the left at slightly higher than head level. The camera flash was also used.

Re: photo for consideration. What do you think?

I like the image I did a few adjustments to it - hope you don't mind

- Crushed the background to complete black
- Removed the strap, as it isn't significant to the image, had to crop slightly
- Added some creative sharpening for facial features
- Added a slight local contrast to the facial features
- Added a slight output sharpening

Re: photo for consideration. What do you think?

Originally Posted by KentDub

I like the image I did a few adjustments to it - hope you don't mind

- Crushed the background to complete black
- Removed the strap, as it isn't significant to the image, had to crop slightly
- Added some creative sharpening for facial features
- Added a slight local contrast to the facial features
- Added a slight output sharpening

Thanks KentDud,I don't mind. Glad to get the advice and be able to see it instead of just being told what it needed. Really like what you did with the face. I was limited to Picassa PP.I am going to get Photoshop sometime in the near future.
As for the strap, I kinda liked it, maybe because I am a realist and it was there when I got the shot sooo, I would leave it. Thanks a lot it looks great.
Greg

Re: photo for consideration. What do you think?

Hi Greg,

As you probably know, I am not an experienced portraitist myself, so these comments may be way off the mark, well they are certainly a personal viewpoint, based on what I see rather than what you have told us.

I like the pose in general, although the model appears a little 'uncomfortable'. I like the head angle and hair on near shoulder, but think it would be improved if those lovely eyes were looking at the camera/viewer.

Focus seems to be just a tad 'behind' the eyes in as much as here hair looks sharper, but that could be a false impression caused by sharpening.

With the mixed lighting, monochrome probably avoids many pitfalls for the inexperienced, it even makes the noise acceptable.

Re: photo for consideration. What do you think?

Re: photo for consideration. What do you think?

In my opinion, this just doesn't seem to work at a grayscale image

I have to agree. Something odd is happening with the skin tones that gives an unflattering look. Maybe soften the skin areas keeping the sharpness in the eyes and hair? The eyes are beautiful but i need them to speak to me. There is a stiffness in the pose that gives disconnect with the subject. It sort of reminds me of one of those american college year book photos from the sixties.

Whoops I just saw this

Sorry ,no color version.

and it explains alot. I would advise that you always shoot colour and convert. If you have the camera in b/w mode you are only capturing a fraction of the tonal range (I may need to stand corrected on this my technical knowledge is a few points down on Barney Rubble)

Re: photo for consideration. What do you think?

Originally Posted by Wirefox

I have to agree. Something odd is happening with the skin tones that gives an unflattering look. Maybe soften the skin areas keeping the sharpness in the eyes and hair? The eyes are beautiful but i need them to speak to me. There is a stiffness in the pose that gives disconnect with the subject. It sort of reminds me of one of those american college year book photos from the sixties.

I don't think this was actually a pose. I think she was reacting to the other person in the room and I took the shot. I do like it though.

Whoops I just saw this and it explains alot. I would advise that you always shoot colour and convert. If you have the camera in b/w mode you are only capturing a fraction of the tonal range (I may need to stand corrected on this my technical knowledge is a few points down on Barney Rubble)

Steve

I did not realize that there was a loss of tonal range with the black and white setting. Thanks for the info.
Greg

Re: photo for consideration. What do you think?

Here is my version of her portrait.
I didn't like the rotation of the crop. So, I rotated it a bit and made other adjustments like blurring her skin and hair, sharpening her eyes, lips and teeth.

I rather like more informal portraits than these, studio made. However, I think you have done a good use of the available lights on the studio. I wouldn't have done better than you have.
Do you like my version ?

Oh something else I was going to forget: I was going to clone the support of the bra (yes laugh) but I am very poor on CS#. Sorry.
I think she would be better without it like suggested in another version.
It gives a more sensual mood to the person.

Re: photo for consideration. What do you think?

Here is my version of her portrait.
I didn't like the rotation of the crop. So, I rotated it a bit and made other adjustments like blurring her skin and hair, sharpening her eyes, lips and teeth.

I rather like more informal portraits than these, studio made. However, I think you have done a good use of the available lights on the studio. I wouldn't have done better than you have.
Do you like my version ?

Oh something else I was going to forget: I was going to clone the support of the bra (yes laugh) but I am very poor on CS#. Sorry.
I think she would be better without it like suggested in another version.
It gives a more sensual mood to the person.

I like your version very much. I had to laugh when you said studio made. It was in a small bedroom at a friends house with a black sheet hanging on the wall.
For some reason I like the strap. Makes her look, as Geoff F says , like the girl next door.
Thank you very much for your input. What software did you edit with?
Greg

Re: photo for consideration. What do you think?

Here is my version of her portrait.
I didn't like the rotation of the crop. So, I rotated it a bit and made other adjustments like blurring her skin and hair, sharpening her eyes, lips and teeth.

I rather like more informal portraits than these, studio made. However, I think you have done a good use of the available lights on the studio. I wouldn't have done better than you have.
Do you like my version ?

Oh something else I was going to forget: I was going to clone the support of the bra (yes laugh) but I am very poor on CS#. Sorry.
I think she would be better without it like suggested in another version.
It gives a more sensual mood to the person.

Hi Antonio Correia,

You have done very good finising work., it looks much better than original Image