cute story!!! Although i think that if i were harry that i would be thinking about ginny but then again he would probably look for any excuse to not think about her... and you do have to admit... it was pretty funny :p

Even a year after this was written, I enjoyed reading this darling little story. You've captured Ron's lack of self-confidence perfectly and I love the fact that he hid his efforts from both Harry and Hermione. Hermione's reaction to Ron's first offering is classic Hermione which sets up the rest of this story perfectly. As for Harry, well, he needs to learn a little respect for his friends' growing relationship. Well done. Thanks for making me smile.

Her angry rant was cut short by the presence of the most pathetic, weakest, dilapidated daisy Hermione had ever seen. Its petals were weeping, the core was brown, and the whole thing was sagging, with only Ron's hand keeping it from wilting in half. But when she looked up at Ron, who was biting his lip, still holding out the flower, and nervously making eye contact, she had no doubt in her mind that this was the most beautiful flower in the world.

I love this paragraph! That's just so sweet. I totally love that flower
And Harry's reaction is helarious.

I thought you did an excellent job of staying with JKR's Ron...he couldn't make that bouquet until he knew she really wanted them/him. Her love was his 'Lucky Potion' ...true of us all. Really, it was very enjoyable. Winning isn't everything...doing a good job of it is more than enough reward. hope others find time to review. But I should talk......a.l.

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