Upon His Blameless Feet

Below is the poem entitled Upon His Blameless Feet which was written by poet
Mark
Pringle. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Upon His Blameless Feet

Glass and fractured imaginings are trite
Upon his blameless feet
Even as he dance and play about them
Toxic and perilous smoke are authority
Outside his naive lungs
While he freely breathes to ensure laughter
Blood sprinkles and routine metal shards
Within his innocent hands
Presently, as he claps to the street’s tune
Mordant activities be forever present
Before his youthful eyes
Just before the gleams therein make hearts sway
Remarkable is…
Miraculous is…
Wondrous is…
The resilience and spirit of youth

The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. I like the creative format of the last stanza. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success.
Karen