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Review:

APerkins says:Ok, im really really glad mandy thinks luke is boring, so do I. You have made the marauders the stars of this story, and they shine, while Luke, nice guy and all, but cant work out what he is doing there.

Loved - absolutely LOVED the skating on a pair of brooms. Yo uare so creative, and that is so typical of what I picture the marauders would have been like!

I think mel suits a horse too I really liked that.

Also-and this is probably a trivial thing- but I have just sat down and caught up on where the story is up to -as in Ive read the last few chapters all together-and not reviewed until now! Now I get to the end of this chapter and you reminded me to review. I had forgotten! Your story kinda sucks me in, and I just keep reading, cause thats what I like doing, and this story is so easy to read!
So thankyou for the reminder, I actually needed and appreciate it, because I really REALLY should review when I am enjoying a story this much! i've gone back and reviewed all three of them from today. I feel like the writing has been improving the whole way through to the point where Im limited in constructive anything, but Im happy to gush :)

-anthea

Author's Response: Haha, she likes Luke because he's cute. Melanie is a teenage girl after all - and I can't say I was much better when I was her age either! :P

I think it'd be fun to skate on brooms! :D So I'm glad that was amusing. And thanks - I'm happy to hear that you think the horse Patronus works for her.

It's reassuring to hear that the writing has improved too. The first 11 chapters or so took about 3 years because I kept stopping for months, and then when I finally came back to finish the story I'd learned how to write in the meantime, haha. I know those first ones are kind of choppy so I'm really glad you stuck through them! And no, of course I don't mind reading the gushing reviews - it is really lovely to see that you're enjoying the story!