Artist Comment

It's been a while since I submitted my last fan art. So, I made another one. :)
I made this for my friends here in Minitokyo. Thank you for all!! :D
And this is my entry for contest 3 (Fan art) in Syaoran-shrine.
Syaoran and Sakura from Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle. ^^
Comments and suggestions are welcome. :)

hi sakura o chan ...i know both of them are nice couple i really liek tsubasa ..sori to say for ur this
fanart....sakura's position for her head is abit out and her face is too plain ..should give more expressions. Syoran
too stiff ..should draw him wit more movement and they should have more shadows and highlight to contrast more. Overall
the its okay ...keep up the good work and practice more ..

Wow.. almost a perfect match of the original Tsubasa designs!^-^ You've definitely got a great feel of CLAMP's art
there, just make Sakura's neck a little longer and Syaoran's arm a little thinner and it will be perfect!

Tsubasa tends to have lengthened bodies and thin figures so you might want to attempt an artpiece with that concept in
mind.^^;; Their expressions are definitely priceless though, great colouring there too!

Nice work on your picture. You've captured the essence that is Tsubasa Chronicles. :) Perhaps a bit more shading and
variation to it would add to things. I do think that Sakura's head and shoulders look a bit squished and wide, but
nothing too bad. As riku-chan said about Souran's arms they could be a little thinner if you're going by the actual
show, but I think that on the show they all look like they have too long of arms anyway so I like your version better!
:) They look like they have overally long arms on the show - a bunch of monkey people. ;) So yeah, you've got a good
eye to mimic the original Clamp feel - Nice work.

Cool, this is your fan-art? So cute, Sakura! XD The charry blossoms setting matches the mood of the characters real
well, and I love how well-drawn they look! So clean, detailed, and superb highlights and shadowing, shows how talented
you are ten fold! Way to go, Sakura! ;)

What a cute picture! I love seeing them together so happy. ^.^ Great line work and great cging. Shaoran's face is
really well done but Sakura's face is lil smush to the side. The hair is nice and detailed. One thing I noticed that
you should elongate Shaoran's torso just a lil bit more or elongate Sakura's b/c their height is a lil skewered. But
that's not a big of deal. XD I really think you did an amazing job! Love to see more.

Not bad, Sakura0chan...better than I could ever do, that's for sure! XD Anyway, This is pretty good....but you had to
put Sakura in there too, didn't you? Lol, I like seeing him by himself *gigglez* Okay, I'm just being weird
now....please pay me no mind. It's a good job of coloring, but I have to agree with Barbara about Sakura's face.
Anyway, well done, good luck in the doujin contest!

S&S: Smile.
I am going to list down several reasons on how your fanart was judge inorder to be free of Biased.
I am Crewcifix, a moderator of Syaoran-Shrine and I shall be one of the judges to judge your wall for Syaoran-Shrine.
Wait for the announcement of winners to be done by the admins. :)

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Criteria:Quality of Work
Very good quality of color. Its almost as if its vectored. If not, then it must have been vectored! Good job.
xd

however. I find the Sakura pic rather annoying because she has a big bobbing head compared to that of Syaoran who's
workmanship seems flawless and perfect.

Work on Sakura's head....... and nose. I find it TOO FLAT.

Shadowing is very good. Very intensive work you made here. Truly impressive!!

Concept and Originality
A couple work. You definitely broke bounderies and instead of submitting just a syaoran pic, you made it into a couple
one. Quite unique I must say. But the sakura just really made this a little less romantic. lol. But then again, it is a
very nice work. Lupit ng colors at ang ganda ng pagkakagawa ng quality. ;)

Workmanship
Another high grade doujinshi. Maybe a few adjustments more and it would have been purrfect! But I don't like perfection
because it makes this less interesting. Your work is very much autographed with undenying quality.

hello, great pic! tsubasa chronicles is a good anime, they are actually showing the 8th episode tomorrow night in japan.
my brother has managed to get 7 episodes off the internet somehow ^_^ my brothers annoyed because he thinks they are
spelling shaoran's name wrong, shaoran in card captor sakura and syaoran in tsubasa chronicles, for me, i don;t care.
it doesn't matter how you spell it in english text it matters in how you spell it in kanji. okat well anyway, i love
this pic, good job!

The lines are good and the shadings/colors are well done... This doujin gives a cute and romantic feeling.. :) The
background blends well to your characters, I like the cherry blossoms!!! Hope you draw again ;)