Fan story

I have made fan story :/ But I dunno wheter I should post it or not :/ I wrote the first episode in like sotry style, and then the second in script style. So I'm gonna have to do the first episode in script style first. But to be honest, the story is a bit poopy >.< Should I post it???

Little info on it, some of the people in my story will have something to do with some of the more 'minor' characters in lost, so we get to know them a bit more.