tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post360744391305957624..comments2019-09-14T21:22:11.720-04:00Comments on Fiction University: The Difference Between Good Setup and Bad Setup Janice Hardyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02356672149097741248noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-2575102244621149392015-08-06T14:31:00.333-04:002015-08-06T14:31:00.333-04:00Thanks! And very cool about the editing work :)Thanks! And very cool about the editing work :)Janice Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02356672149097741248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-13065876010632837882015-08-06T14:30:30.313-04:002015-08-06T14:30:30.313-04:00Glad it was helpful! Glad it was helpful! Janice Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02356672149097741248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-45419270229724380362015-07-29T11:21:36.315-04:002015-07-29T11:21:36.315-04:00Love this post, Janice! Especially handy as I&#39;...Love this post, Janice! Especially handy as I&#39;m doing more freelance editing work :-)Paul Anthony Shortthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14393249001158230985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-19910514403347667502015-07-28T18:12:47.015-04:002015-07-28T18:12:47.015-04:00Janice, this post has taught me so things I&#39;ve...Janice, this post has taught me so things I&#39;ve been going round and round about for some time now. This is especially true in your last example, the typical day. Thanks.Glynis Jollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09716902434885633884noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-54995988519027102952015-07-28T10:58:01.976-04:002015-07-28T10:58:01.976-04:00Yes to both! :) I&#39;d definitely submit somethin...Yes to both! :) I&#39;d definitely submit something for you. I have some killer infodumps and purple prose in my earliest work :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-85167104712082675762015-07-28T10:05:59.579-04:002015-07-28T10:05:59.579-04:00LOL I try! I should see if I have any of my really...LOL I try! I should see if I have any of my really old writing laying around. I know I have some terrible examples there.<br /><br />Oh! I should do a &quot;send me a page of your worst old drafts&quot; day. Anyone who wants, can send stuff I can use as examples when I need them. Janice Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02356672149097741248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-623727957080879522015-07-28T10:04:28.308-04:002015-07-28T10:04:28.308-04:00Thanks!Thanks!Janice Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02356672149097741248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-8380585602113220702015-07-28T09:23:53.227-04:002015-07-28T09:23:53.227-04:00Terrific points as always Janice. But I have to sa...Terrific points as always Janice. But I have to say I found myself chuckling, because even your Bad Setup examples are actually pretty good and wouldn&#39;t stop this reader. LOL. You&#39;re too good a writer to do bad easily...you really must try harder on the BAD writing examples. ;-)<br /><br />Best<br />DarioAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-7921223698719265672015-07-28T00:26:06.880-04:002015-07-28T00:26:06.880-04:00Great examples, as usual, Janice! I learn so much ...Great examples, as usual, Janice! I learn so much from your posts.Sandy Perlichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16747832913903729517noreply@blogger.com