I've got to say this is one of the better one-shots i've ever read. especially for not having any dialoge, but being simply one character's thought process/emotion. This is really quite brilliant, i loved it!

Wow. I'm speachess. That was so short yet so powerful. How do you do it? Your my number 1 Author. I love all of you work. I especially love this 1. You are really good at this whole writing thing.
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I was pleasantly surprisedd. This is a very well written piece, in my opinion. It gave that feeling of stepping up to someone, an inch from their face, and spilling every tiny dark secret of theirs by just looking into their eyes. Every thing that hurts them, and saying it to their face. Not screaming it angrily or with pleasure in their discomfort, just a small, dark whisper will hit anyone hard. Its scary when people do that, and its stronger than any physical blow. I'm glad I decided to read this. Congrats to you, Sabreen, on a good write! ^_^

wow that's wierd i just read this exact same story but by a differnt author, i dont know if they stole it from you, or you stole it from them, that really sucks! but its very good, to whomever the real author is?

Wow, what a passion-filled fan fic. This was really...quite undescribable. It was not sweet, not sad, not heart-touching, but yet it was still moving and almost written angrily. You can feel Hermione's emotion and recognition to Draco's furious passion. You are an amazing writer. KEEP WRITING!!