That was a really good poem, I admire how you're always able to come up with words that rhyme and still stay in rhythm and make sense, that can be a challenge to do sometimes. I also like how your descriptions of naughty girls and sexually frustrated old men are always so droll and witty...Kane reminds me a bit of Frank Alexander and Louise reminds me somewhat of Janelle...

I really liked this one - it had such a nice rhythm to it and flowed very well. I also like how you write about such unique things set in history that are very different from the rest - it's so nice to find that! ;)