I loved the feeling behind your poem; you could feel the heartbreak behind each word. It was evocative and sad; two things I really enjoy in a poem, and actually one of the themes I tend to employ myself. The only advise I would give you is to watch your spelling and grammar; there are several errors and it does get a bit distracting. Also, I would change the numerical '2' to an actual word. Maybe it's just my personal preference, but having it start the beginning of a line seems 'off' somehow. All in all, though, I really enjoyed this one; you are a seriously talented writer. I would love to see more from you.