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Chazzie says:Brilliant: i love dracomiones! You had great speach, and amazing characters. I dont like ron much, and im glad ginny and harry are taking hermiones side rather than rons. Draco is such a sweetie! And i love the way hermione is a fashionista :) only downfall - i want to read more! Ha ha. Please update soon... I know you only updated today... But i loved it so much! (And im plain impatient :P ) x

Author's Response: Thanks for your review it means a lot and im still in the process of trying to make my chapter non cliche but here is a small excerpt just like i promised
âWhy are ve at the Veach?â viktor asked as they got out of the convertible.
âI love the beach especially at sunset, it looks just so beautiful you know, it has a certain mysteriousness to it.â Hermione replied as she grabbed his hand and led him towards the water while kicking off her shoes. She spun around in a circle relishing the feeling of sand in her toes, viktor watched her mildly amused at least until she leaped onto him knocking them both onto the ground. She giggled as she straddled her legs on either side of his hips, âI like this view much better of you.â she giggled tapping his nose with her index finger.
âI vink I vould eventually vome to like it, vut not vite now.â viktor said with a grin flipping Hermione over so he was on top, âI myself have alvays preferred the posiyion of power.â she gave him a sheepish smile as she snaked her arms around his neck and whispered.
âIm not one who enjoys being on the bottom, but if you're on top I donât think I would mind that much.â