Ten chapters of pure brilliance they call this fan fiction and zuzzany I'm your biggist fan of them all thank you can't wait for chapter 11

Mark Owens chapter 9 . 8/25/2014

Very intense chapter again feeling like your apart of this wonderful story line

Mark Owens chapter 8 . 8/21/2014

I read in zuzzany's notes that she hasn't seen the Charcters what a fullness and own stamp she brings to them love her portrayal of them

Mark Owens chapter 7 . 8/20/2014

I love Zuzanny fight sceens she has a way of reader feeling their in the middy of the action great story from a great author

Mark Owens chapter 6 . 8/19/2014

Wow what a story just keeps getting better Zuzanny this just wrighting it's a masterpiece of imagery and words get story line this author will be well known one day in the literary world

Mark Owens chapter 5 . 8/18/2014

Zuzanny how beautifully Descriptive and powerfull you are in your written expression this author is going places love the story line what's going on with sai read on mark which I will certainly be doing

Mark Owens chapter 4 . 8/16/2014

Very very intriguing story line this author Zuzanny explores the inner soul of the charcters she breaths life into through the written word her expression her feeling jumps of the page at you

Mark Owens chapter 2 . 8/16/2014

Zuzanny is genius two chapters in has me in a rapture beautifully portrayed

Mark Owens chapter 1 . 7/8/2014

Wow I wonder if sai has true friends but does he really need them do any of us truly have friends or jus series of people that we know is sai any better off if his friends come looking great great read now for part 2