your story was great but i still think that mariah and ray should have kissed that would have been a great ending! the story was worth your 2 hours so yeah i hope you keep writting ray/mariah storys! thanx

Wow, this ficcie is so damned good! I love it to bits! Great chapter! Very kawaii! Stupid idiot who wants to *kill* Mariah! Die you! Hoping it's not a one-shot (like your other recent ficces ;) SO, UPDATE SOON!

evilive chapter 1 . 3/15/2004

_ That was so cute! Can you read my story? The one called 'a breath of air'? PLEASE?