Burning Revenge

Olivia Firestone lost everything.
Everything she had always thought she could never lose.
Her parents.
Her house.
And her heart, which she had sworn never to lose to anyone.
But when she finds out that her parents were murdered, all she wants is revenge.

Wow, this is seriously a great first chapter. So much suspense! Apart from a few grammatical errors it was perfect. But thats understandable as its a first draft. I'm really excited to read the rest of your story!