This is the exact place to go for help improving an SCP, that was just my bad for not actually helping out with improving it. I will edit this reply if I have any further suggestions for how to improve it, but for now all I have is this idea:

What if the animals behaved more like animals and tried to follow the SCP's thoughts the way they interpreted it? You touched on this with the thing about birds trying to feed him premasticated food, but I think it can be taken to larger, more bizzare extremes. This is the Foundation, don't be scared to push the boundaries a little. Briefly skimming over this web article made me think of an incident where SCP-XXXX was sprayed by a skunk because it thought it would scare off whatever was threatening the SCP.

Thank you. I also wanted to ask if there's a "faster" way of getting assistance or head on assistance? I'm having some issues with the chatroom. Whether its my reading comprehension or something with my browser, I'm having trouble getting inside site19 and getting in contact with anyone.

Have you tried going to #site17 to get help with that issue (assuming your chat will work at all)? You could also try PMing other users and asking them if they will take a look at it, you can include the link to this forum or just send the link to your sandbox page.

I don't have my usual link handy, but if you look at Contact Staff and find the section on the Forum Crit Team, PMs to those staffers will draw a response. Please allow 48 hours for said response, possibly longer on weekends.