I believe this song is about Romeo and Juliet falling in love with each other however their parents disagree them to be together so they decided to run and live on their own right? Well this song is very well done at the Lyrics as the lyrics contain about the information of Romeo and Juliet and you make it to an easier way for us to sing and when the other people wanted to know what was Romeo and Juliet story , they could listen to this ' Love story' and they will know what happen to them. As for the Melody , It is a bit hard for me to memorise as some of the lyrics are very close to each other and was repeated not only once , so I always mix up with the other lyrics and end up sing a different song. Maybe you could try not to repeat too much of the lyrics. The rhythm was quite good however , it is not so smooth as I think the part when it sing " I got tired of waiting , wondering if you were ever coming around " That part I think you can make it better . Thanks for your time in looking into this comment and I hope you could try my suggestion .

Whoa! It's fun, catchy, romantic and tells a beautiful story. I'm a bit of a Shakespeare freak, and I've read Romeo and Juliet in old english, and modern language. No offense 2 Shakespeare, but neither can compare to THIS work of art! rock on , girl!