I like the story so far. I have always wondered how things would have gone differently if she had been pregnant. I also wonder how Mr. Big will react to the news. When she breaks the news, you are going to have her say his name, right? A few things, though. The dialogue is slightly awkward in places. Carrie wouldn't make a decision about the pregnancy so soon or automatically rule out abortion. She has had an abortion before, when she became pregnant by a waiter when she was 22.