It was good though; short, but...passionet? I think that's the word that I'm looking for. The happy scene was really sweet and natural, and the sad scene was...well, it was tragic; but the way that you showed everyone's emotions and thoughts was beautifu. I've never really thought about Cam and Zach being together before, but I could see everything in this fic in my head, and it didn't seem weird.

I actually really liked the end, the uncertainty. Those last few lines...I loved those last few lines.

Seriously, at first I was thinking "Aw, they're together and happy - that's so sweet." And then...

And part of me was *glad* they were all suffering. They ignored him once, and he ended up in the loony bin. Then they ignored him *again*, and this time he killed himself. They damn well should feel guilty.