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Rated 5 / 5 stars2009-02-25 17:12:00

Wow

Very Detailed story here, and it took me a long time to read, but it was well worth it. To be honest though, my eyes are a bit sore from reading so much text from a screen, and I definitely have to take a break and just watch some other animations before I return to view book two. Once again, I am impressed by your gift for story telling, the story vaguely reminds me of a few of the Native American creation stories, but has a pretty unique flavor of its own. The drawing are well done, and although there wasn't much animation, the quality of the sroty more than made up for it. I watch so many cartoons and games here on Newgrounds, so thank you for reminding me of the subtle joys of reading a good story, which until today, I had not done for a couple of months, I'm going to check out some of your other animations before finishing the other two books, but I just wanted to say you did a nice job of this.

Thanks so much, man. I see you've been catching up quite a bit. To tell truth there are big parts of this story that falls apart, something I got a little better at but am still learning. Thnanks for all the great feedback as well.

Rated 5 / 5 stars2005-12-12 22:38:04

WOW!

That was simply amazing! Shame on the fools who do not read!
Fortunately for you, there are people on here that do still care for books.
I would love it if this was published, that way I could get the books for my neice and read them to her.
But yeah, newgrounds was simply made for porno and violence, so I think you should try to find something less degrading than NG.
Don't get me wrong, I like a good naked sex animation myself, because were all somewhat perverted like that, But I find that insulting a piece of artwork without first viewing it is one of the worst sins in my book.
Anyway, nice job and good luck.

Rated 4 / 5 stars2005-07-01 07:26:45

A pleasing fairytale.

I hardly expected to find something like this at Newgrounds or any other flash site, for that matter. The story is humorous and touching. It would make a fine children's book. The writing is rough here and there, but good overall. I'm definitely going to read the other installments.

Rated 0 / 5 stars2005-05-25 12:05:50

nope

I hate to review things that I haven't completely finished, but I'm NOT going to read this. Reading is for the birds. Whenever I come to NG, I'm either thinking porn or violence. The LAST thing I think about is reading.

Rated 5 / 5 stars2003-12-15 23:26:55

screw that last reviewer

Screw that last reviewer. This story reminded me a lot of The Finding Stone: A Modern Day Parable by Kristin Lore Webber. If you haven't read that book already, you should see if you can find a copy of it online. I know that she has it posted up on her website. This story reminded me a lot of the concept behind The Finding Stone.