Another portrait captivating as we are accustomed from Nepal. Along with a note with the perfect song. I like the frame of the picture frame by placing the woman at the center of the image and capturing the look impatient.

You caught a good mood here, with a few problems. We'd like to have just a little more visual counterpoint between her and the more bemused daughter (?) behind, whose face is too cut off, and stare uninvolved. The walls around are a bit superfluous, why not a real tight vertical crop around them, since it is what makes the photo.

Hello Bernard,
beautiful sensitive partrait of this dreamily with her yes open woman.I like the way she is standing framing by the window with the curious face behind her to be a bonus to the composition.

Hello Bernard. Waiting for you. Red clothes. A truly ambiguous title. I focus on the very different faces. And then I read the poem .... For me it is a successful social study. Well observed and implemented. . Rgds, Wolfgang.

Hi Bernard
The powerful eyes are looking straight, sharp into your lens, this is the strongest element here. She is well placed within that natural frame under shade allowing her more space for her eyes to wonder about in such a curios manner but attentive. You have got such an attractive subject here a really appealing to the eyes as she appears quite cool and natural in her response, Great timing. Delightful traditional window adds charm and atmosphere. This is excellent capture of daily life here. Well done. Congrats.
Best regards

Hi Bernard,
I like it. There is a sense of romance in the atmosphere. Beautiful colors of her clothes and a somewhat skeptical expression. The girl in the background kind of stole the attention here. You know how sometimes in a movie, the side charactor is actually more interesting and out shined the main charactor.
Way