TEARS of a dying Sweetheart Child

Below is the poem entitled TEARS of a dying Sweetheart Child which was written by poet
Bart
Jonas. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

TEARS of a dying Sweetheart Child

Tears from the eyes
of a child before she dies
Hit for certain by runaway car
Never bothered to look back
or inquire from afar
and now is connected to
her respirator machine
Hard to breathe
difficult to smile
At her family and friends who gleam
Trembling emotion
I AM DROWNING UPON YOUR OCEAN
Sweetheart child not yet of age
to learn of the World,such cruel-filled rage
Jessie silently turns away
Her peepers slowly close
I AM NOW SO FAR AWAY!!