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Actually Samuel is 10 but that's close enough. The story was inspired by "The king who rained" by Fred Gwynne. Think of these phrases like a kid would. Illustrations would put more meaning to the story.

Hi Samuel, Have they told you yet to grow up and act your age but don't get too big for your britches? They probably will one day.It makes you wonder why adults can't say what they mean. Don't ever stop loving words because I loved your story.

Good job, Samuel! I didn't know a kid had written it until the end either. On the other hand, don't we "children's writers" strive for this freshness and purity in our writing? I know I do. Way to go!!!!