I hope you update soon, because this has left me excited to know what happens next =P
Really great way to set the story. I have a feeling this will be a classic =D
Keep up, because I'm dying to know ^_^

Magnificent chapter! I really can't wait to find out where they're going to, and if they get caught!!
I love the fact it's written in third person. Even though the chapters are short, they are interesting and keep me reading. Please update this story soon, it's really gripping :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews! I have no idea when I'll update this story again, but your reviews have definitely given me the kick in the pants that I needed. They are much appreciated.

Rinny! I finally got around to reading all my favorites again! And this was one of the firsts on my list!

I had to read the previous two chapters to refresh my memory, and this chapter was fantastic. Having Neville be the one to find Hugo's body was so moving and dramatic. I wonder where Rose and Ellie can possibly go to not get caught! :/

1. Hugo put wax on someone's broom handle, possibly Ginny's, and she fell off and died.

2. Rose is very angry/upset/mentally disturbed by this, and so kills Hugo.

3. Ellie sees.

4. They are now on the run.

Wow. It all looks very simple laid out like that. I still have no idea what's going on. But I like it.

xE

Author's Response: Haha, yes, actually, that's pretty much the jist of it all. :) I think you've got a good handle on what I've given you so far! And yes, I know it's a bit confusing, but that's part of the fun.

Excellent chapter, Rin! This story is so exciting, I can't begin to tell you how much I love it. Just please update soon!

My, your descriptions are phenomenal - I never expect any less than that but still the way you used the words so perfectly to set the mood was stunning. A perfect picture of Neville marking his papers was conjured and your words came to life. My favourite bit probably was when the oranges fell off the table - I could hear it so clearly. Fantastic. When the girl showed him where Hugo was I had chills up and down my spine thanks to simple yet powerful words.

I can't wait to see how everyone reacts and where Rose will go. You must update soon!

- Marina xxx

Author's Response: Ha, the picture of Neville with all those oranges on his desk makes me smile every time I think about it. :) I'm glad you liked it too.

Thank you, Marina! This means a lot to me. I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far. I'll be sure to update soon, just for you! ;)

YAY! Another chapter up! I was surprised to see you had updated. I woke up this morning and there was a reply to the chapter updates at tgs b you. Of course, I spent all day doing nothing, but still I managed to come by and review your lovely chapter!

My goodness. I hate to think what Ron and Hermione will think when they find out about Hugo.

And that poor girl who had to tell Neville. I hate to think what's going on through her head.

Something about this chapter makes me think I've read it before. It may just be my imagination, yes. That's it. My imagination.

This chapter is simply amazing, as always dear!

I can not wait for the next update!

xx

Author's Response: You HAVE read some of it before, my dear! The first part (with Neville) I had proofread by you and a couple people a few months ago. That's why it sounds familiar. ;)

Thank you for the lovely review!! I really appreciate the time you spent on it.

That's so sad. I feel so bad for Hugo, though now it's got me wondering. Who did he kill before Rose went after him? It wasn't mentioned and I'm exceedingly curious. I feel really bad for Ellie, too. It's pretty bad that Rose convinced her that she was in trouble to even though she didn't do anything.

So what's Rose's plan? I keep getting the idea that she's going to off Ellie somewhere away from Hogwarts. Personally, I think it seems like the only way to get rid of the evidence. Though running away is still likely to get people suspicious. She's gonna have to have one heck of a story to tell them as to where she was. That is, if she comes back.

I'm rambling to much though. Love the story so far. It's really interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. So, until then.

--Steff

Author's Response: Again, thanks so much for your lovely reviews. I love hearing what you have to say, good or bad.

I know the first few chapters kind of happen all at once without really an explanation. That can be confusing, but I'm glad you've read all three. I'll be sure to explain myself a bit in the next chapter, so look out for that.

Well...I suppose I was wrong then. No dream. I'm still trying to get a grasp on the idea that Rose just killed Hugo, now that I know for sure it really did happen.

Ellie is rather gullible, I noticed. I guess it kind of sucks that Rose has to run away now. Isn't that another sure sign of guilt?

Anyway, you've done a great job on the story and it's definitely got me interested. Sucks that I've only got one more chapter to look forward at the current moment though.

--Steff

Author's Response: Thanks again for the review. They definitely keep me going, especially when I learn you're looking forward to the next chapter. I'll be sure to try and get that up for you as soon as I can. :)

In Next-Generation stories that I've read in the past, Rose is usually nothing like I've written her. I know that can be kind of confusing at times, so I'm glad you've stuck with it.

Thanks again for the review! I really appreciate your feedback and comments.

Woah, wait what? Did she seriously just kill her brother? I'll admit, I had absolutely no idea what to expect considering there wasn't much of a summary--but that certainly wasn't it. And it definitely caught my attention. I've never read a story where Rose's personality is like that, so I'm intrigued. Definitely looking forward to reading the rest of it.

I'll admit, I'm kinda hoping that the entire scene above is just a dream of sorts. But since I don't have to wait to find out what happens next, I'm gonna end the review.

Great job with the prologue, by the way. It's fantastic.

--Steff

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I really appreciate the feedback you've given. I know the prologue is vague, but part of that is intentional. ;) It doesn't really apply to these beginning chapters, but it will later in the story, I promise.

Again, thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave it. Enjoy the rest of the story!

Anyways! This was fantastic. Wow, there's so much mystery to the plot and rose seems like a great and realistic character. I vant wait to find out more about her.

She and Ginny seem to have this great bond too. Or there's something in rhtheir relationship that really stands out to me.

This was amaZing and I'm dying to learn about exactly what went down.

As always, you wrote this beautifully and described everything wonderfully. Hooray for, Rinny love!

:D

I LOVE YOU!!!'

Author's Response: Oh, Drue, thank you so much! Wow, this was completely unexpected!! I really appreciate it. :) I wasn't exactly sure how people would respond to this because of all the confusion in the first chapter, but I'm really glad you liked it. THANKS so much! ILY!

Hello RINNN! I'm sorry it has taken me so long to make it over to review, but I'm here now!

HOLY CRAP. Dude, that was hot. That was hot. Action and adventure? No, hot and hotter! I love the absolution confusion seed you have planted in the readers' brains. I only know that Hugo killed a girl/woman and that Rose has killed Hugo. I like it. No, no. I LOVE it. The wanted? Yes, I want it, want a lot more!

You have no idea how awesome this epicness is. LOVE IT!

10/10

Shelby

Author's Response: OMIGOD Shelby, you have no idea how much this means to me! I mean... GAH! Thank you so much!!! :) I'm, like, glowing. :)

You're right. They should make a new category that is titled "Hot/Hotter." That would be awesome.

You've made Rose into an interesting character. One of which we've never really seen a side of her before. Which is good. You always see these stories which she's the exact duplicate of Hermione. It's nice to see something new and refreshing, like this.

Ellie. Dear, dear Ellie. She's being dragged into this mess and doesn't want to be.

I'm very much looking forward to reading your third chapter! Update soon!

ILY!

xx

Author's Response: Haha, you're welcome!! :)

I know, I feel really bad for Ellie too. She's just so... innocent... and now Rose is dragging her along.

Gah, Rose is hard to write, because I don't want her to be cliche, but I don't want her to be over the top, either. I'm glad to hear you like her so far!