Isn't that the same plot outline from supershadow? Seems I've read that before. A couple of your plot points seem a little outdated; but time will tell.

During the battle, a group of Jedi invades a droid control ship, and learns that a trap has been set, and that the steaks are much larger than anyone ever expected.

Would those be T-Bone steaks or Ribeye? And do they come with potatoes?:D

Sorry.:( Just a little friendly jab, I think the word you were looking for was "stakes."

garethvk

04-06-2002, 09:10 PM

No, Unlike that twit I am a legit and syndicated journalist. I wrote this myself and It is accurate.

Lord Tenebrous

04-06-2002, 09:56 PM

There's a big difference between being a writer and being a journalist. It's not the amount of publication, it's the mindset you have.

It's an okay summary. It start off well, and then becomes more inaccurate as it progresses. But not wrong inaccurate, per say, just perspective inaccurate. In a way, it leaves some surprises. The arena duel is a little too complex to summarize, actually. It's just... :cool:

Rollo Tomassi

04-07-2002, 10:51 AM

No, Unlike that twit I am a legit and syndicated journalist. I wrote this myself and It is accurate.

"accurate" being a relative term. Where's Obi Wans chat with Yoda and the Mighty Bear Clan?

And Padme tells Anakin she's going to rescue Obi Wan "With or without him" so there's no nefarious kidnapping plot going on. She ends up on Geonosis of her own accord.