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Bored. Made Casual Pheo. You know, when I have to wash the big black overcoat.

quote Kanon

I can't quite single out where, but I'm pretty sure SOMETHING there is proportioned whack.

I'm pretty sure it's the shoulders/upper torso to the head and neck, which makes the rest of the body look unaturally thin. I'd also suggest making the hip a bit more pronounced. Furthermore, take some notes from your original sprite; Elbows won't naturally point out like that much when placed in pockets. They would be way more relaxed. In general, I'd line it up against the original and try and spot the differences that make it look off.

The sash looks too flat. You should add a slight curve to it's shading, to give a sense of depth. Maybe even curve the whole thing.

Also I'm pretty sure the bottom parts of the talk sprites don't have black outlines.

Nitpick, her arm is sort of resting unaturally. You wouldn't hold your arm out that straight if you were just standing around.

I suggest shading the yellow line on the sash with orange instead of just darker yellow, it will look better. Maybe desaturate the reds a bit, it looks kinds ms. paintish. Try moving the darker red shade a bit towards blue, it will make the colours prettier.

You! Hi.Yep, NeoGatito was the sequel to Gatito. And now, Another Gatito is the sequel to NeoGatito. I'm not sure what I'll do after Another Gatito finishes though. Maybe do the same as what I did for Another Gatito, ie take an idea Capa told me and warp the idea into something completely different.Oh, and you can find the Gatito archives here.

I have basically written scrips for a good six or so issues by the way

1) You can edit your posts, you don't have to make a new one everytime you have something new or make a mistake.

2) Your comic is not good. Content aside, there's just so many errors... The most glaring being the text. When using paint, do not copy and paste your text. Write it where it is supposed to go from the get go.

3) I am not sure how intentional this was, but your comic shows some rather ugly prejudice. Kindly re-evaluate how funny homophobia actually is. Hopefully, you will arrive at the only real answer; It is not.