the observer (the depths of reality)

The observer is a novel which is in the very early stages of development. I have been thinking about it for some time now so I thought I would post a small segment onto this website in hope of recording some constructive criticism. It is written in a first person from the point of view of an intelligent individual. However this individual is suffering from schizophrenia and pschyosis. The novel is how he percieves the world around him and makes sense of is all. Overall it will be a gripping journey into the mind of this individual as he try's to find his purpose in life. Quite obviously I haven't began writing it but I have written a small segment which I would like some judgment on. Please do not comment about any spelling or gramatical error because as I have stated it is still in it's very early stages.

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The observer is a novel which is in the very early stages of development. I have been thinking about it for some time now so I thought I would post a small segment onto this website in hope of recording some constructive criticism. It is written in a first person from the point of view of an intelligent individual. However this individual is suffering from schizophrenia and pschyosis. The novel is how he percieves the world around him and makes sense of is all. Overall it will be a gripping journey into the mind of this individual as he try's to find his purpose in life. Quite obviously I haven't began writing it but I have written a small segment which I would like some judgment on. Please do not comment about any spelling or gramatical error because as I have stated it is still in it's very early stages. Read Chapter