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free feedback! (:

@KnitsandPurls: Well, I DO believe the title of this thread says FREE feedback. *nudges* YOu don't have to, but I'd appreciate it if you checked out my new poem All They Laugh At. I'd like healthy feedback. Thank you!!

Wow! This is very interesting... I've never read a poem with that subject/topic before. VERY interesting! Make sure to keep your rhyme scheme consistent, and stuff more poetic elements in the piece!! I cannot wait to see what you come up with next!

@Confuzzled: I love your name, BTW. That's my Mii's name on my Wii. (: Your poem is really captivating, and if I may, I'd like to suggest adding some metaphors and similes into your poem. THey will make it deeper and something that people will think about for hours, not just while they're reading it. Great job, thoug!