This is real nice, the whole buildup is crazy! however, i feel once it drops, something more could happen with the lead... Maybe layer it up, or add a bit more distortion... Just something to make it slightly heavier than it is in the buildup!

Thank you guys, good stuff. I understand what you are saying with it not 'going as hard as expected'… I sort of struggle with getting that fullness if you know what I mean. Hopefully it will come with time and some more experimenting!