When I say that we’re all working on it; we actually want you to help us too. If you’re into scriptwriting or stories in general, please download the script and let us know what you think. Likewise if you think of someone else who would be interested, please send them a link to this page. We’re after constructive criticism with creative suggestions on how to improve it. We’re particularly interested in ways to make it more visual, ways to make it funnier and ways to get the character development really tight. But we’re happy to have notes about anything you think would improve it to be honest! This is how wiki-scripting works.

What will you get in return? We’ll give all the suggestions a read and work towards a redraft. With any ideas we use we’ll give credit where credit is due: an IMDb credit for script editing and a digital copy of the shooting copy of the script. We’re working on the basis that by sending us your ideas you are acknowledging that you are happy for us to use them.

Here’s a contact form for sending your thoughts:

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All that remains is for us to wish you a Happy Christmas, and we’ll see you in the New Year!