In all honesty, it was fun to see how the kthers reacted to his presence. I think Malo should've waited until after the festival, realistically speaking, but it's good to see her character 's good traits shine through. The best intentions and all that.

Goten's such kid here. Can't control his urges for the life of him. Haha Still he pulled through for his girl, as any good man would. Even after seeing his ex. It shows his development here how he handles that. It's done in a way that's believable, at least to me.

Same goes for Rei. I tink you handled how she reactsd to Yuuichiro fine, if adding as well his character flaws. Still, it shows Rei did care for him, and still does to an extent. It's nice to see.

Something tells me this is not over yet... But whatever you do next, new chapter or not, I can't wait.

So, I cannot stress how damn funny Goten is when he takes things literally. How you make Goten so compliant with what he's doing, despite Trunks' serious warnings, is just so like his teen nature.

And then, we've got Rei being in an intervention to prevent her from being awwy frkm her friends while doing Goten. Though they don't know what is actually going on. I can only imagine that's how they actually do it in your other story, though the situation is obviously different.

I am ashamed to say I barely saw this now. This is just genius. I actually laughed from this chapter.

This seems to be an AU where Goten and Trunks went to the same school as Rei. Goten and Rei just broke up with their respective others, and end up hitting it off one night where they meet up.

I love Trunks here. I started cracking up when he found out about their arrangement. From the jaw drop, to the grabbing of his head. It's like he lost all sense of reality. And how he acts like a total troll at the end, he truly is Goten's best friend.

This is seriously funny, and can only wonder what the next chapter will bring.