What a lovely face shinning with youthWhat sensitive depths of charming smileWhat a holy beauty, I live in its truthAn angel brought me to a burning pileI loved her since I met her in the boothMy love increased after I read her file………………………………………………..(1)"Mention me" she said "if you like me a lot""And say a lovely poem on our story""Let me feel your love, do you care or not?""Add me to the high state of the glory""Keep me close, no water the rose will rot"I've mentioned you and I won't be sorry………………………………………………………….(2)Wake or sleep I say your name every timeYou coddle me and call me with alias name"Sweetie" and other names, all have that chimeAnd I coddle you, I always do the sameAngel You took me back to my past primeYour love gave me happiness, and gave me fame…………………………………………………………….(3)A mole on a rosy cheek stole my mindAnd put me in a puzzlement, that faint moleRed berry on lips and neck of a hindYour Eyes are as pearls, they relax my tired soulOn your cheeks I read holy words and findWhen can I reach my desire and my goal?………………………………………………………….(4)You asked me to say your name in my poemCan't you find out your name? I've just said itFor your sake, I'm ready to leave my homeAnd follow you, to enjoy your soft witTo Lima of Peru or even to RomeSave you to me, and all things can not fit………………………………………………………………(5)

you are in love no doubt about that you know i'm so happy for you do you know why ????? because this love made a strong transition form sadness and glomy ideas to sun to shine and let open your arms to life again as if your alive again . how i know that ?? just compare bwtween old and new poems and see the differance

"Mention me" she said "if you like me a lot""And say a lovely poem on our story""Let me feel your love, do you care or not?""Add me to the high state of the glory""Keep me close, no water the rose will rot"I've mentioned you and I won't be sorry

Hi again Shakespear!!!hmmm....I think as she said "no water the rose will rot", she depends on u, perhaps u have in ur hands her heart, it depends on u, she depends on u. Also she said :"Let me feel your love, do you care or not?" here, i think she also wanna have ur heart, but that is up to you.Am i right? C U

listen she asked to mention her ..this is in the first line..."Mention me" she said "if you like me a lot"in the last line i said...I've mentioned you and I won't be sorrysorry wt means that??????????????????

humm i thing i didnt get what u meant, but i'll try again... Well in this case she wanned a proof, she needed a proof that you love her, that's why she asked that, and this is a nice proof of love that anyone can do for his/her beloved. But i think it's not neccesary that anyone asks his/her beloved to write a poem, because if his/her beloved loves her/him so much, it's his duty to write one, without asking it.