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forsakenphoenix says:I love that Gary Jules' song, by the way. This wasn't a very eventful chapter, sure, but IT'S SCORPIUS! I didn't even know he would be in this (you can tell I pay attention to the character list). Though I had an inkling when you said resident healer that it would be a guy or someone she knew (and wouldn't you know it? it was both!) Interesting, though, that she isn't embarrassed to see him considering how nervous she was about sharing her secrets with someone.

Also - I love the idea of the paper cranes and how excited they are about the prospect of doing that and oh, the wish of getting better. My heart. It was exactly what I imagined Agatha's wish to be before I read it.

I know you say you haven't abandoned this yet, and I really hope you don't. This is so unique for a Next Gen fic, or at least I've never read one like this before, so it's really refreshing to read. Now I really have reviewed everything you've written. Get to writing, girl, so I have more to read and review!

Thank you for reviewing this though ♥ Also, I am equally guilty of ignoring the character list - I just skim over it, haha. But congratulations on getting that right! ;)

I can't remember how why I ended up having them make the cranes - but I must confess that I still do like it. Paper cranes are lovely! I remember reading a story when I was younger about a girl who was sick and the 1000 paper cranes (that would be my guess for why I ended up writing that in, haha) and it did always stick with me.

Someday I really will return to this - once I stomach the courage. :P Thanks for reviewing - and I'm both thoroughly impressed and honored at the amount of reviews. You're wonderful ♥