Section 3 is very nicely read. I have only one small item for you to consider.
23:40 I heard "club man" but expected "clubable man". I'm leaving it to your discretion as to whether you want to make this change. I'm mentioning it only because I'd like to keep Dr. Johnson's play on words.

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Thanks for the response. I will go ahead and do that in the next few days when I get my equipment squared away. Once I do, I would like to back out of my previous request; I did a few test runs and there were too many words I couldn't pronounce; I'll look for something simpler.
Thanks,
Jason

jasonlohr wrote:Thanks for the response. I will go ahead and do that in the next few days when I get my equipment squared away. Once I do, I would like to back out of my previous request; I did a few test runs and there were too many words I couldn't pronounce; I'll look for something simpler.
Thanks,
Jason

No problem.
You can pick whatever you wish, but as a first reading, you might want to look at children's works (the language tends to be simpler, so even if that's not the way you want to go eventually, you'll get the technical side sorted out); and also around 1000 - 1500 words is a nice length for a first effort.
I've entered you in the catalog, so you don't need your next MC to do that for you.
Lynne