I started writing a story which seems to be running away with me but has the makings of a novella or assignment to the bin.

It's working title is "My Turkish Women", is about 11,000 words and could become over 20k if I follow the ongoing outline. It's in MSWord format. The spelling and grammar is ok I think using English English spell check.

Is anyone out there willing to read and comment please. I'd be happy to email/upload it

Hi,
It's located in Turkey from my POV owning a country villa and big gardens, it's run as an upmarket B&B. It involves the cleaner, her daughter's 18th birthday followed by assorted ladies from the area needing a place out of view of the locals. I guess you could say it's about unlocking inhibitions and conventions.... My fantasy also!!!