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The sound of a battering ram shattering a door, screams, gunshots and sirens woke me up three hours before my alarm clock was supposed to. I rolled out of bed, then under it and put my hands over my head.

Great. This was the fifth OS raid this month.

Corp-cops were thudding around a floor overhead, shooting and throwing flashbangs in rooms. They weren’t aiming for anyone in particular, but someone started shirking with pain as they caught a bullet. Computers and darkcasters were getting smashed to bits and I kept my head down until an officer stepped into my room.

He looked like everyone backed by a corp: Fat and tall. His uniform was buglike, and his gun was an old MP5. He didn’t have night vision, but he was a corp-cop, and that meant there was enough magic in his helmet to heat my apartment for a week. He saw me.

I got about 514 words, a little distracted by some of my surroundings.

Fave part.

“Fine!” Callie said, wanting desperately to physically harm the woman in front of her. She couldn't shake the image of her own fingernails sinking into Nina's face and ripping fresh flesh onto the blood red floor below. The pulsing was relentless.

Okay, I'm adding to the description that we'll rep our comments. I realized that it's different than YAWN because our snips are shorter, so it's easier to rep everyone, which was the point of FWS - reading short snips.