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Name: Sempris (i.e. Blue Moon Wolf, Flight of lost hope,...)Age: 15Strong points: My characters and sometimes my plots. (Some need the extra push, if you know what I mean)Weak point:Err, Description! I need a decent thesarus in this house! My vocab bank is on empty... Type of writing:Angst/disturbing/random Fics. Types of characters: Characters that are sarcastic, stubborn, and mentally disturbed. (Wait... That sounds like me...)Current Story: None as of the moment. Though I am working on a few. Future Stories: A story called Axis, and one more which I have yet to name. Writing Tips:Go with what you think. If a reviewer says he/she doesn't like something, tell them to deal because it's your story and not theirs. And when writing characters, keep them down to Earth and not crazily hacking somebody in half for no reason.

Strong Areas: I make attention catching, vivid, and detailed openings. I also (usually) have an unlimited suply of inspiration and cache of plot twists to keep people guessing. I also have an enormous vocabulary. Much originality too.

Weak Areas: If I don't write on something for a few days, I loose interest and the story dies. I also get bad writer's block >.<

Type Of Writing: Fantasy, action, adventure, I want to improve my horror, I'm so-so at humor, but I really get into the dark writing and violence at times.

Type Of Characters: Solemn and/or troubled characters that do or don't find the light, mostly with traumatic pasts, or amnesia. Vicious and outgoing personalities. Hey, sounds like me! <3

Current Stories: The Legacy of Darkfire - A young woman's soul is tainted by darkness. Will she find the light before it's too late for her... and the world?

Writing Tips: Make yourself write throuh writer's block, it goes away so much faster. Even if it's not on the story. Or if it's a fanfiction, watch the show/play the game/read the book and ideas will come much easier.

I've decided to re-do mine as if I editted my last one no-one would notice, I've learnt since then.

Name: Jetx or Jet

Age: 11

Strong Areas: I can be good with description and suspence.

Weak Areas: I'm not the greatest with grammer!

Type Of Writing: I write disaster fics, always something bad happens and the main character is there to clear things up.

Type Of Characters: Characters with imagination. Haunted by their emotions and thoughts, troubled.

Current Stories:

The legend's betrayal. (PG-13)
I've only done one chapter and people are saying its my best fic ever.
A remoraid is enjoying the new truce between groudon, kyogre and rayquaza. The weather is permantly nice, remoraid swims off and finds kyogre. Kyogre gets to know the remoraid when there is an earthquake! The sky is washed over by clouds and it rains fire, blasts lightning and rips up giant waves. Around kyogre and remoraid everything is dieing, Kyogre swims off to see who the traitor is. But when kyogre returns to remoraid, something is different, kyogre will never be friendly again!
I got some good reviews for it too. look at one Polirick made on my website: Polirick's review.
Here's a small bit of it:

Ok... that was possibly the best pokemon fiction I've ever read!

Here's a bit of blingin G's

But still I think this has a very good plot. Very descriptive. Very effective. Very interesting. It's a good length, not too long, not too short, just right.

Shroomy's adventures
I'll do this thing soon. :X

Future Stories: I have some in mind!

Writing Tips: Let your imagination do all the work, push your imagination to its limit. And write on word!

Strong Areas: Creating good characters. I just find that it comes naturally to me to create and develop original characters without making them Mary-Sue's.

Weak Areas: I am not the greatest at description.

Type Of Writing: Action/Adventure... Pokemon type stories.

Type Of Characters: I find it easy to write many different types of characters. I find that it helps if you write down on paper what you want your characters to be like.

Current Stories:Kanto Journeys:
The tale of three teenagers, Charlie, Danny and Ray, who travel around Kanto. Their enemies, Team Rocket, now have more common sense than in the anime, and romance may begin to blossom... But one thing's for sure; there is plenty of battles and adventures to be had. Let the Kanto Journies begin...

Umbreon Eyes
A short fic through the eyes of 'Star' the Umbreon. How he was captured from the wild, and his thoughts on his new trainer, Miriam Bold.

[OPTIONAL]Future Stories:Johto Journeys
A sequel to Kanto Journeys.

Hoenn Journeys
A sequel to Johto Journeys. (I doubt I'll ever get 'round to actually doing this one for quite a while...)

Northern Lights
I'm still not sure about this one, but it takes the group from Kanto Journeys to a region in the Arctic... Haven't actually thought this one through much at all, so I don't even know whether it'll actually happen.

Writing Tips: Wow! Already mentioned this! I find that it helps if you write down on paper what you want your characters to be like.
Anyway, some more... write on Word so you can use Spell Check.
If you make grammer mistakes, correct them.
Read through your fic before you post it. If possible, get someone else to check it through, too.
If you are going to write an original trainer fic like I do, don't make the characters all have a similar personality and don't make them Mary-Sue's. (Characters who don't really have weaknesses.)

Strong Areas: My strong areas are plot ideas and cliff hangers for each chapter also humor. I'm also getting pretty good with romance and mystery writing as well.

Type Of Writing: Well I'm sort of all over the place, I like to write humor but I LOVE to write drama as well! Now, all I've been wriritng lately is romance one-shots.

Type Of Characters: I like to write about people with problems or who are very sarcastic.

Current Stories:

The Diary of an Invisible Trainer: A stroy about a girl named Jadie who ran away from home due to her anger towards her parents. She hopes to break away from her "Invisisblity" and become a well known trainer just like her brother along with respect from her parents!

I also have a little collection of one-shots (pokeshipping and contestshipping).

Future Stories: A story about Pike Queen Lucy's Journey to the top!! It starts out about her wishing she was a queen when she was little then her struggles until she makes it as Pike Queen! I would also like to keep practicing with my romantic one-shots and eventually make a chaptered fic one day.

Writing Tips: Try to make it descriptive so we know what you're talking about! Also, even if you're not the best at grammer, try your best and try to improve. That shows that you are relly are dedicated to your writing.

Strong Areas: Suspensful writing, I can make a whole lotta suspense out of one scene. I create a mood that is pretty intense, if I can get it right. I mostly do action stories about Zelda though I have sold out and I work on a shipping fic now. So, I'm an even on all areas.

Stories: These are all on my sig, should anyone reading this actually care enough to look at them.

The Legend of Zelda: The Shattered Sword~

After the Wind Waker, the Master Sword was shattered into pieces. Ten years later, on New Hyrule, Link must gather together the Elemental Medallions of the Madra and revive it before its spell on Ganon stops and he is released again into the world. Includes the introduction of two new races: The Madra and the Shana.

A Forgotten Legend: The Tears of Salvation~

Have you ever wondered how the Great Sea of the Wind Waker came into being? Follow the adventures of Jarred the Bombchu appentice and the Resistance as they fight to free their land from the evil Ganon for good.

The Stylish Adventures of the Ruggedly Good-Looking Andrew~

The NaNoWriMo fic with laughs, the true story of my summer vacations in Greece. Note: Some things have been changed to make me look cooler!

After Hoenn: The Journey of Faith~

A story about Ash and May set ten years after the anime is long over. Ash is dead to the world, living under the name of Keean in Orre, trying to forget about May, who married Drew. When Ash visits his mother and May leaves home with Max and Brock searching for him, will a chance encounter bring Ash back to May?

Other Notes From Me: Review please. I know that sounds lame, but I'm trying to get some serious reviews on what I need to work on, because I want to be a real writer one day.

Future Plans:

Shattered Memories: The First Saga of Chronos~

In Ledian_X's Starbolts, heroes are not only the ones that wear the blue suit. Now, in the city of Zepther of the Great Lakes, a new type of hero will emerge. Inspired by greats like Wolverine and Daredevil, a hero made of metal, unable to touch or feel will transform the city of Zepther into a safe home as Chronos searches for the truth about himself, about the past he can no longer remember.

Zepther is not a perfect city, filled with crime and evil. Through its dark alleys and narrows streets, a silent watcher protects the people, calling forth the darkness of metal to defend them. Cloaked in black, shrouded in the mysteries of his past, his cold heart is true as steel. His name is Chronos. He is the Dark Eye.

Strong Areas: Uhum... According to my English teacher, interesting use of language O.o Personally I'd say my strongest point is in the conceptulising stage, and thinking up plots.

Type Of Writing: Fantasy and Original Trainer, mainly, but Horror is a favourite too. I'll have a go at pretty much any genre, really.

Type Of Characters: Cynical and sarcastic, or cold and withdrawn are the ones I find easiest. Obviously those are only the surface attrivutes oof the characters, but I can't answer the question in any way than with them XD

Current Stories: Into The Fire: Rise Of The Red Star
In the exotic land of Houenn, two freinds, Adam and George, set out on the journey of their lives, to explore Houenn and defeat all eight gym leaders to gain entrance to the revered Ever Grande tournament. But when Adam's Charmander, Cinder, gets strange visions of a blinding light and groping shadows, does the answer lie with the mysterious April? And what does it all have to do with the dissapearance of her old home, Scerra Isle?

All answers come with a price.

Future Stories: PREVIEW: Avatar
A terrible blight rises from the ancient Twisted Wood. The demons of old are reborn stronger than everin their path with the massive power of the enslaved elements. This time, will the divine intervention of the Godess be enough to stop the hordes that enroach on her lands, or will the heathen Gods triumph?

With her old champion fallen, time is running out.

Writing Tips: Where vocabulary is concerned, try and use as varied word usage as possible. Use whatever words fit best with image you're trying to convey; don't worry if they are counted as high vocabulary or not.

On another topic, learn how to use the common apostrophe. It's abused enough already.

Strong Areas: Parts in a story really rich with description, like a battle, links to past chapters leading to the denouement and ways of setting up my plot (I'm not sure if that's the same as above). I've also developed a new flair for random comedy a la Breezy/Saber.

Type Of Writing: Journeys, good vs. evils, secret organisations and some that are close to the original source. Even though I like to tweak it a bit.

Years ago, Giovanni had a showdown with Ethan Cameron to the death. Ethan promised that his child would bring down Giovanni once and for all...now his twins Jack and Laura tour the Kanto region, Gym Battles and Contests galore await. With it lies a greater fate... *This is connected to my fic on FF.net, Battle Frontier, NOT to The Hoennian Dream.* (Banner by Bay)

Neo Genesis

It's been two years since the Mewtwo incident and slowly life is returning to normal. In the region of Johto, Taylor Butler is starting his journey. But what comes next involves a lone trainer named Kamon, the resuurection of Team Rocket, his friend Crys, five legendary Birds, three legendary Beasts and a secret organisation....just what is The Trinity? (Banner by Saffire Persian)

Irons In The Fire

Ten years ago, Daniel Char Sr. dazzled audiences with his film debut, Pokemon Kanto. Now, however, his son shall take the rein. Shortly after gaining critical success with the remake of his father's debut, FireRed and LeafGreen, Danny Jr. is set to gain his first lead role in the upcoming Mystery Dungeon, along side his father's old friend Ethan J. Pikachu and his female co-star, Chelsea Torchic. What follows next, however, is a palava of events involving a flirty Smoochum, a goth Mr. Mime, a penny-pinching Meowth, a shoplifting Clefairy...and a washed-up Psyduck. But hey, whoever said making movies was easy?

Kingdom Hearts Trinity

A few months after the fall of the Organization XIII... Ryu Tajiri is a cadet for the Arcadia City Military and is taking his Advanced Cadet Studies. Shortly after the first session, however, his world is attacked by a race of dark creatures and his mentor Garu is wielding what looks like a large black key..."A Keyblade?"

Writing Tips: Include a rough plan for your next chapter. Go through any ideas you have until you find the one that fits.
Read the Advice for Aspiring Authors and the Fanfiction Rules threads. The majority of fan fictions are closed because the authors have failed to follow the guidelines set.
Take criticism with grace. Start insulting your fellow forum-goers and you will face a ban as well as a closed thread.

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Reason: Updating Profile

Your image was too big. Read the rules before you add anything new to your sig.

Strong Areas:Spelling and Grammar...my absolute best strong point. I will usually only have one or two spelling errors per chapter at the very most.Planning. I will have the ENTIRE story planned out before I start writing chapter 1, and I will deviate from the plan only rarely once the fic is underway.Battle Scenes. The transition from the RPGlike turn-based battle script to the actual fight in the fic is almost seamless. That is my secret to writing battle scenes. My battle description is where my best description is.Use of Music. To my knowledge, I was the first SPPF fanfic author to make the use of music in a fanfiction, and at least two other authors here (Billy5772 and FlamingRuby) have done the same thing. I always have an appropriate music track for a scene.

Weak Areas: Pacing. Since I suck at writing scenes of comic relief, like classroom scenes, etc., my fics tend to be faster-paced than they should be.Character Development. Making round characters is something I have a lot of difficulty with simply because my filler scene writing sucks. Also, in the original version of The Johto Saga, my three main characters turned out to become quite Gary Stu. A certain reviewer said they still were a little bit so when I posted my latest version...Lack of Inspiration. Ever since I started writing my Pokémon Origins series, I haven't been able to move away from it. Every fic idea I have had (I've had one involving the legendary birds, one involving just one of the legendary Beasts, and a few others) have seemed to merely rehash the plot of my first series.Lack of Complexity. I have not been able to work in a significant side plot alongside the main plot of a fic, making it lack depth.

Type Of Writing: Adventures are all I write.

Type Of Characters: I like to write characters that are laid-back for the most part but can critically think when necessary.

Current Stories:Pokémon Origins - Volume I: The Johto SagaAdventureThree college students of Ecruteak's premier university have their dreams of three legendary Pokémon of the Burned Tower come true, but at what cost? Rated PG for mild language. Rated 4.82 out of 11 votes.

Pokémon Origins Volume II - Return of the BeastsAdventureThe Ecruteak historical documents speak only of one side of the legend of the Beasts. Explore the other side of the legend with characters from The Johto Saga in addition to new, unforgettable faces. Rated PG for mild language and mild to moderate violence. Rated 5.00 out of 2 votes.
Future Stories:Pokémon Origins Volume III (working title)AdventureTwo years after awakening the trios of mystical Beasts, the balance of power among the legendary Pokémon is upset, and the battleground is the Sinnoh region. The Beast Riders are the world's only hope against the conflict among the noble Pokémon. Can they rid the world of the power-hungry, legend-hunting masterminds who seek to conquer the world?

Writing Tips: Don't try to force the story--let the words come from your heart and the story should write itself. And if you get the highly annoying condition known as Writer's Block (actually when is a more accurate word), just put the fic away and do something completely unrelated.

Once you get a good inspiration for a fic, write a detailed synopsis of EVERY chapter in the fic. Two to four paragraphs per chapter should suffice. If you cannot write that much for a chapter without going into great detail, either you need to think about the fic in deeper detail or completely scrap it. The key to finishing fics is to know almost exactly what will be going on in every chapter.

Strong/Weak Areas: Personally, I believe my strong points are the characters - I love to delve into character relationships, simple or complex. My weak areas are probably proof-reading (I dunno, maybe I'm a bit impatient?) and battle scenes. No matter how much I like them, I never seem to be able to do it quite right.

Type Of Writing: Fantasy/Adventure/Drama... all types, actually. My favorite, however, is by far Fantasy. Although my type of writing also ends up being very character oriented no matter what I do. POV-wise, I've generally kept to 3rd person, however, I still love first person, and oddly enough.. 2nd person, to me, is quite fascinating and really fun to do... So, yeah. And I'm now in an obsession with second.. because I really, really like it for some odd reason. *shruggs*

Type Of Characters: No specific type for me! I love writing all kinds of characters with a variety of personalities.. I suppose you could say I like to stray into the darker sort, but meh, I like them all.

Current Fanfics

[Pokémon POV/Adventure/Drama/]
[PG-13]
[Current Chapter Up: 2]

Harrowed by perplexing visions, Castor the Absol's endless search for their meaning sends him into a journey that will disprove everything he once believed.

[OT Short Story/2nd Person]
[PG-PG-13]
[Current Chapter: Changing Skies Pt. II] Change.
It is the inevitable constant that governs each passing moment.
Children Grow Up. Friendships Fade. Dreams Die.
Or so we think...

Current One-Shots

[Original Trainer/2nd Person/Drama]
[PG]
[Complete]

You should've noticed it before. (But you didn't.)

Come, and relive the memories. (Don't worry. Time will freeze, Eternity will wait, and Death will stop its inevitable course for these few precious moments. For they are yours, and forever will be.)

After years of searching, Joel finally believes he has the key to, perhaps, transcend the destiny that has been laid before him.

[Comedy/Romance/2nd Person]
[PG]
[Complete]

[/b]

The war is on! The bugles are blazing, the bells are ringing, and the drums are sounding! Ready, steady, go!

Future One-Shots

[Horror]
[PG-13]
[Spring/Summer 2006]

Come play - you will, won't you?

[OT/Drama/1st Person]
[PG]
[Spring/Summer 2006]

When Daniel finally returns home, he finds a stack of letters in his sister's room - letters that he sent her during his Pokémon journey.

[Mystery/Drama]
[PG-13]
[April/May]

What does it truly mean, to be human?

[Drama]
[PG-13]
[Spring 2006]

"I always wondered why he'd go back, time and time again. But now, I do -- even if it took me dying to realize it."

[Horror]
[PG-13]
[Summer 2006]

They say that bells are always ringing at the top of Mt. Pyre... but why? Katherine is about to find out.

[Comedy?/General]
[PG]
[Spring 2006]

For humans, Multiple Personality Disorder can be a bad thing - but for a Dodrio, Singular Personality disorder is all the more deadly.

Future Stories

[Original Trainer Fanfic]
[PG-13]
[Summer 2006]

What was supposed to be a routine trip to Agate Village for Luna Altaira, turns into a journey she never would have imagined.

Writing Tips: I dunno if I can give anything of value, but when it comes down to it, some of the simplest things I can give are, for one thing, use a spellchecker! If you don't have MS word, download Open Office for free. Also, don't make your characters flat and boring, make them dynamic - don't make them over the top, but make them interesting enough other people can connect to them. Also, have fun when you're writing your stories! Write what you want to write, don't write what others want you to. If you don't have fun writing your stories, you won't go anywhere with them.

Strong Areas:writing humor, I can never ever stray off the path of writing humor. Probably a suspense moment might be included in my fics, but rarely. Writing humor may be one thing, but I also have a strong like to evil things.

Weak areas: Unable to write what I want because it's unlike me, things like; sadness, romance, and good quality mystery. Maybe a bit of it. ;.; Loss of inspration, no reason to write the fics anymore.

I used to be junk at vocabulary, but I have discovered the theasarus! I might start writing new words and the definition whenever I read a book. And now I have discovered...THEASARUS. COM!!! It's really helpful...^_^ yup.

Sometimes my description doesn't make sense...Of course I like writing evil things, so don't sue me if I kill someone in the fic, it goes as I plan. I might even kill my favorite character. But who knows...*BUM BUM BUM*...they might be raised from the dead. o_O

Though, chapters of my stories...usually come out after one day, I always have the story in my head...in blocks...I already know how to end sad ones. ^_^

Mostly, I like shaping evil characters, that's fun. Smug people might be my favorite. Giddy because I'm modeling them after a certain annoying friend IRL. Of course my favorite one is naughty charcters, I could finally shine my evil self onto paper. ^_^

Though, sometimes I sorta like to model them after myself, because I'm emo! -_____- Or not...

I have many mysteries, and I like mysterious characters. So, what I hate writing is thier descriptions and names. So, the character wouldn't be too much of anything in the genre except mysterious. Thus, making it more easier for me to note flex out thier personalities, but, for me, it's hard to keep the person a mysterious character. You know me, I explode with secrets that I'm dying to share, and I will.

Current Stories: None yet, I'm still working on ALL of them. I don't think it is worthy of being posted.

Summary: A boy embarks on a aimless journey, undecided where he'll go. He wanders into many lands, and faces many foes. He used to be an imcompetant ninja in his dojo. He finally noticed his purpose, within a girl that he is equaled with. A breakout of a demon woman, Haya, whom he trapped with the help of the other ninjas, caused him to leave.
He searches for Haya, wanting to kill her, for a reason unknown, but he has a strong will to become stronger.

On the Sly

Comedy/Serious/Drama PG 11 for minor swearing.

CO-WRITING it with Literate

[A bit serious, and a bit dramatic, but mostly comedy. It's not a parody...either...]

Summary: Naruto and his squad has been sent on a mission to Tokyo, Japan, by the Hokage, Jounins, and Chunins. They are to destroy a traitor's documents of their Hidden Villages, and to go to school.

They find that living a normal life, is harder than they suspected. Squad Seven were forbidden to use their ninja skills in the public or the midst of others, and not share any information of the Villages with any body.

Yet, when things are going roughly in school. Kakashi reports that there are other ninjas who wants to kill them.

Current Area in Serebii: Chapter One
Current Area in Modifying: Chapter Three
Current Area in Writing: Chapter Thirteen (All in one week...)

Stories on HOLD:

Not much...Okay so there are, but it's at a low go...here are the list of fics that might fortunately make it onto Serebii forums:

Troublesome Trio
Humor PG 10+
A Journey of three troublemakers who went through a lot before becoming important people. <Note> I overwrited it with a commercial. T^T I'll have to start from the middle.<Note> (Ha, it's going into the trash heap.)

Through Crimson Eyes
Humor/Suspense PG 10+
It's glum to travel with a rival. Journey of a Champion, who has to become a new person. (Out the window, *get outta here!*)

Through Azure Eyes
Humor/suspense PG 12+
An eevee looking for a cure out of pokemon form. Formally Champion of Hoenn, now pokemon. Against her wishes, she gets captured, would this new life corrupt her search for a cure? (Might be buried under my minds.)

Arise of a Dark Lugia
Humor/Suspense PG 12+
A very peculiar journey, with a task hard to keep, and unbelievable teams. (I might pick it up after a year...maybe...)

WBS: Writer's Block Show
Humor PG 10+
Uh...Just a random story used to beat out my hyperness. If you are a fan of certain pokemon or gymleaders, I advise you to not read it when it comes out. Otherwise you may read it for your own amusement. I would post some of the contents to warn you before the episode. (I have writer's block for a Writer's Block Show. Ain't that exciting. And YES, people, I know 'ain't' isn't a word.)

It was a regular day at the Hidden Leaf Village. *sees people running away* T^T Guys it isn't anything about the story on the plot! It's sort of another dimension, and it doesn't have anything to do with the main Naruto plot. And don't worry, it won't be crappy.

Summary:
A major massacre had happened in Hidden Leaf village. Certain ninjas from squads have been murdered one-by-one. Though, authorities don't know who did it. Readers would know. (It's open murder...so what? ) After the village have obtained peace and something called the golden time, an unlikely person...betrayed those who knew the person as a friend. It wasn't the assasin's fault, it was the other side that thirsts for power and free will. The part that was holding him/her back from killing and wreaking havoc, as been over powered.

Tips: Sometimes people who give harsh crits can be judge to be a flamer. Well, not all people out there is nice, they give harsh crits to help you improve, if you take it the wrong way, then you will not be able to continue writing. Take harsh crits the positive way and you'll be able to overcome harsh insults and such. And keep writing.

If you are persistent, please improve your writing before posting another story. Who knows? Maybe that story might be better than the last one. And people would see major improvement.

Gender: Girl (Although, my actions and thoughts are of male. I think.)

Strong Points: Plots, ideas, characters. But mostly plots and characters. And grammar....And dialogue. For some reason I can always make the characters realistic. o.O

Ideas: I can get them after seeing/reading anything. I try not to get them sometimes, but I just do. I dump most ideas I get, though.

Plots: After one or two days after the idea. Or after I find that I need to put some more action into these things. I can change it during the actual writing too.

Characters: I can make any kind, anytime. They're just so easy to do. Most are self-inserts and since my personality ranges from cold-hard depression to overly enthusiastic to mysteriously silent, I can make any character.

Weakness: Lack of attention. I never seem to finish long stories. Maybe I'll write a one-shot. And spelling, though I usually catch myself on that. Description, lack of attention, I just get a bit bored doing this, I'd rather a psychlogical stories with no background no nothing. Length.... I never can make it long. The only near-completed story I wrote was only five chapters.

Type of Writing: Serious-kind humor. Serious and solemn and things. I can easily come up with agnst-type stories. At least that's what my friend says. Mystery, mystery, mystery is my recent obsession. ;p

Type of Character: Pretty smart like me. Sane, at least. Then the varities just go on and on....

Stories Up Now:

Through Emerald Eyes
-Chaptered-
-PG-OT/Journey-
Through Emerald Eyes is a first person narrative by Celadon Viridian, the current champ of Kanto. She has been enjoying her peace and quiet until, out of the blue, strange weather patterns appeared. Now it was up to her and Cyan Indigo, her companion, to investigate the problem in Johto, for now.
Chapters: 4
Currently: Being left to die. I'll come back to this idea later.

Me first one-shot:

Time Will Tell
-One-Shot-
-PG-Suspence-
'Hook...Line...And Sinker...'
Think you know what it's like to have deja vu? Think again.

From Me, Myself...and Nothing
-One-Shot-
-PG-Psychological-
'Congratulations Literate, you have now broken the second wall...'
-Note: This is extremely short.-
Seven walls...to break...the seven barriers...can crack... When all are gone...broken into shards...madness and insanity will come... The second is gone...

Assassins
-Chaptered-
-PG-13 or R-Mystery-
For death, gore, and adult concepts.
'Is there a meaning in life?'
Travel back to ancient China, when the dynasties still rule. Step into the lives of four young assassins, staking their own lives for nothing. Experience the pain and sorrow of their past, ones that can't be related with. And find out what they truly wish for. Life or death.
At Ch. 6: Mirrored Memories

Back to the Past
-Chaptered-
-PG-13 or R-Drama/Mystery-
For something...
'What really happened before?'
Before they were assassins...before they threw their lives away...something happened...
It tells the stories, every single word...what they experienced, every single moment... It tells the hopes, every single sound...what they originally wanted, every single wish... It tells the dreams, every single thought...what they would want to have gained with their life, every single thing... And it told the times, every single second...when their futures were crushed... It told everything...
Coming in 2007 or 2008

Following Footsteps
-Chaptered-
-PG-13 or R-Mystery-
For something...
'The assassins left a huge mark in history...'
She was raised in a prominent family, with everything she wanted and wished for. She was taught the manners of a princess, showing respect to everyone she met. She was told the story of the Ning's fall, everything from the start to the finish. She was the only daughter of the last Ning Empress of the Middle Kingdom. She was YiJing, and now...the second Ice Heron...
Coming in 2007 or 2008

On the Other Side of the River
-One-Shot-
-G-Comedy-
For simply mild read.
'What's is on the other side of the river?'
Ever wonder what insanity has to offer?
Coming in Fall 2006
(Note: I know it's a one-shot; I just don't have time to write it.)

After Dark
-One-Shot-
-PG-Horror-
For mild horror unsuitable for young audiences who read at night.
'There are dreams... and there are nightmares...'
From creaky floors to howling winds, see what paranoia does to some people...
Coming in Fall 2006

Future Fanfiction:

Diverse Existence
-Chaptered-
-PG-13-Comedy/Fantasy-
-Co-written by-darcstars-litestars
For craziness and magic.
'...hell's angel...heaven's devil...'
--Summary not available--
Note: Darcstars and I wanted to co-write something. I suggested this to her a few weeks ago but she denied it then. Just now she said she wanted to do it. -_-
Coming in Summer 2006

Eternity
-Chaptered-
-Not Yet Rated-Fantasy/Mystery-
'Have you ever wished eternity would end?'
-Quote-
"Find him. And tell him to stop this disaster."
-Cosmos, Keeper of Order
-Summary-
Look out the window, the day is passing, ever quickly or ever slowly. Stare into the sky, the light is moving, steady darkening or steady lightening. Glimpse the ball of flames, view the sphere of white, what a sight to be seen. Now what if someone thinks past all the facts of space, all the times and places, all things real and imaginary... No one can, can they?
Note: Started it.

Chaptered fics tend to take longer to come out. ^_^'

Tips: If you first want to post a fanfic, check the basics. See if the grammar is near understanding, and check the spelling of each word. So you'll have a decent fanfiction when people look at it. Okay?

so I'm doing a repost--so sue me! the old one is deleted, and this has most of the same content (with a LOT of added content). :P

My Pokefiction resume

Name: Ash_Junior

Age: 18, STILL never been kissed, and VERY proud of it!

Strong Areas: I'm pretty good at writing long fics. I'm mediocrely strong in the areas of plot, and people have told me that I have good characters. I feel that I can draw people into my fics more than most, simply because of the amount of countries and their original cultures, sheer numbers of Pokemon I have made, and enormous backstory for all of it. Another of my strong areas is my ability to churn out work (when I'm in the mood). Recently I made a fic that was nine pages long in Open office (available for download at openoffice.org) in, are you ready for this, an hour and a half. that's probably about my average speed of writing, but I have a lot of RL distractions, so I don't write as much as I could.

However, I definitely consider my strongest area the fact that I can write faster than most people can read. I write a lot and I write often.

Weak Areas: If I had to pick one major weakness in my writing, it's that I generally can't stick to what I planned for the fic. Just ask Elemental Charizam about the Hell Hath no Fury plans that I sent him. Partway through, I switched tacks completely.

Type Of Writing: Oddly, even though I generally dislike romance in my own personal life, I've found myself drawn to it when I write more often than not. I consider myself a pretty good romance author, as well as a good action/adventure author, with, of course, a little bit of subtle humor as well. But I don't limit myself to any one particular type. I can do anything, I'm sure, I just choose not to do certain stuff.

Type Of Characters: that's easy. The gung-ho take-no-prisoners, we-will destroy you girls; relatively silent, yet admirable male heroes; antagonists; and Ash and Misty. For the most part....I've made some memorable stupid characters (ask Saffire Persian about my original Retribution. Just....try not to look puzzled when she jumps up and down and yells about sticks and stones).

On an otherwise uneventful night, Ash becomes poisoned by Beedrill. Things that have been hidden are brought to light, feelings are brought forward, all while everyone is desperately trying to save his life. Will they succeed?

Read What If...and find out.

Originally Posted by What If...

The Clone of Ketchum (aka Ash_Junior) Presents:

Now available to read on a forum near you....

an Ash_Junior production...

Narrator: Ash Ketchum and Misty Waterflower were the best of friends...

Scenes of their life fly by.

Written by Ash_Junior

Narrator: He wrecked her bike...

A picture of a mangled bike flashes across the screen

Directed by Ash_Junior

Narrator: She wrecked his life on his Pokemon Journey...

Scenes of Misty arguing with Ash and hitting him with her mallet flash by

Anything and Everything done by Ash_Junior

James is sitting at a table, and glances at someone out of camera view. "I don't like it." he says.

"What don't you like?" Jessie demands.

"He only put one card down!" James complained.

Narrator: but they would never be more than that, until-

A scene of Ash sleeping, when suddenly he is jolted awake by Misty's scream

A flash-by scene of Misty cornered by two Beedrills

A flash-by scene of Ash throwing a rock at one of the beedrills

flash-by scene of Ash lying on the ground, blood pouring out of his chest

A scene of Misty crying near a campfire, "I never got to tell him," she sobs, "And now he'll die thinking that I hated him all this time!"

A scene of Brock and Gary in the woods, next to Ash, with two unconscious beedrill in the background, "I'm going to lay it on the line," Brock says, "Unless he gets medical attention in the next two hours, he WILL die four hours after that."

Narrator: Ash Ketchum is injured to nearly the point of death...and secrets that have waited for years will have to surface...

a scene of an EMT, shouting to a helicopter pilot, "Red line it to the max or we'll lose him, now go as fast as this bucket of bolts can possibly go!"

Ash looked up at Misty and asked, "Misty, do you really love me?"

Misty looked up from where she had been crying, "Yes, Ash, I do. You know that better than anyone else."

"Then get rid of that stupid mallet!" Ash said, grinning

Narrator: Now a small band of Ash's friends must band together to find the people behind this attack, and find an antidote...before time runs out...

A rather odd AAMRN (Ash And Misty Romance Novel, for those who don't know. It's not a novel, but that's what I always call AAMR) that was written towards the beginning of my Pokefiction career. It's still somewhat good, if a bit Dependant on capital letters (I was terrible back then, remember). If you're looking for a few cheap laughs, take a look.

It's been several years since Ash Ketchum retired from training Pokemon and took a professorship at Pokemon Tch. Now there's only one more thing that he needs to make his life complete....A sweet AAMRN centered around Christmas, this is definitely better than Some Things Never Change

My original May/Misty jealousy parody, I was reading a lot about how people were annoyed with the cliched May/Misty finding out Ash was seeing the other, and swore to break them up/make Ash like her/get rid of the other, and eating the brains of anyone who got in their path (okay, so I made that last part up). This was my solution, and eventually led into The Battle of the “M”s

A parody of the many May and Misty jealousy fan-fics, this is just the first chapter. I've got the rest lying around somewhere, but none are as good as this one. I suppose it could work as a one-shot, but it was meant to be done as a chaptered fic.

Ash and Misty are participating in the Blackthorne City Fishing Contest on the Lake of Rage, when they come in for the day. A storm during the night forces them to remain in Misty's personal Johto retreat. What in the world do they have to talk about?

A trainer comes to Oak's lab to recieve the starter Pokemon that has been dreamed of for years. However, there has been a break-in, and the Pokemon have all been stolen! Will our intrepid hero apprehend the bandit? And, more importantly, will the hero ever get his starter?

An askance look at what has become a badly cliched beginning for journey fics...the theft of a Pokemon, a la GSC.

WARNING: this fic contains extremely good plot twists and is written in the 2nd Person.

What would happen if a Porygon were to regain consciousness without being controlled in laboratory conditions? What conclusions would it reach? This chilling one-shot provides one clue to these questions.

Six years before a young man named Ash Ketchum wakes up late on a very fateful day, future Indigo League Elite Lorelei Belle Winters runs away from home to begin her journey...only to be swept up into a conflict far greater than anything she had ever imagined possible. In the icy wastelands of Nuschantz, among a deadly civil war, she has a mission to complete, and won't let anything stand in her way.

Spin-offs of HHNF (Hell Hath no Fury: An Ice Queen's Saga

Bugsy: The Johto Reconquista

Currently hosted on my geocities site (but not connected to the library), Bugsy: The Johto Reconquista tells of what happens when Bugsy leaves HHNF mid-fic and returns to Johto to fight against all the different teams that had taken it over.

Someday, probably after Time of The Titans (see below), I may come back to this. Once I get a working title page and stuff up for it, I'll post a link to it.

Johto: A New Beginning

Sarah Gilchrist, a former Loyalist Blizzard, is recruited by Gym Leader Steven of Blackthorne City to be one of his Gym Trainers. Two years later, however, after a short trip to Azalea Town with Lorelei Bell Winters, Sarah is inspired to embark on the Johto League challenge. Every one of her five foot six inches an anti-hero, Sarah often makes choices radically different than one would expect from an average Johto trainer. When Team Rocket steals one of her Pokemon, this is self-evident. Has Team Rocket met its match in this woman and her crusade to bring it down?

Like the Bugsy fic, this is also on hiatus. I definitely want to get back to this one, but I've got to continue with my momentum and finish work on the Engaran Trilogy before coming back to this. By the way, this is the only trainer fic of mine that has survived (I accidentally deleted my other one, which had a talking Meowth, a pair of Rockets, and a Pichu kicking their collective derričres. Be glad that it is no more).

Book 1 of the Engaran Wars Trilogy; Operation: Celebi
(Links to the chapters won't be there until ~3 PM 2/3/06

use this one until then:

eight years after the events in Hell Hath no Fury: An Ice Queen's Saga, Lorelei Belle Winters is back, this time as part of the Kanto Elite Four, along with Karen, Bruno, Agatha, and the Champion, Lance. Giovanni is captured during a crack-down on Team Rocket in both Kanto and Johto. That capture sets in motion a series of events that is impossible to stop. Before long, the unbelievable has happened--Kanto has been invaded.

Originally Posted by Operation: Celebi

for proper mood, turn on the Imperial March (Star Wars, John Williams) or the Evil Saroman/Mordor music from LOTR....

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Ash_Junior Laboratories Inc. presents…

An anchorwoman sits behind a desk. You recognize it as JNN, or the Johto News Network. This announcement interrupted your favorite program, but it said it was breaking news, so it should be good. The anchorwoman looks up, a jubilant grin on her face, “We are pleased to announce that Giovanni, former head of Team Rocket before the Global Police’s recent crackdown on crime, was caught yesterday afternoon by Tintian Border authorities as he attempted to flee the country.”

Imagine a world where you thought evil was destroyed forever in one shining moment. Pokemon forever free to live their lives, with the occasional trainer coming along and trying to capture one or two….without Rockets to harass them.

A man in a simple black uniform sits behind a simple wooden desk, and looks at a girl with dark red hair, “I want this to be clear, Peters. We can have no mistakes.”

The woman nods, “I understand. There will be none. Giovanni will be dead within seventy-two hours.”

Imagine a world, full of peace, and warm feelings. A peace where evil has no foothold.

Indigo League’s Champion, Lance, stands before a group of reporters in a press conference. His face looks haggard, his hair rumpled, his suit untidy, as if he had been in a fight and hadn’t gotten any sleep the night before. “Ladies and Gentlemen, I have an announcement to make. I regret to inform you that Giovanni will not stand trial.” He holds a hand up before the press can shout, “I assure you, were he still alive, he would indeed stand trial, but I regret that he died in his sleep last night.”

If you still have that image in your head, bash it to pieces, and imagine a world of exactly the opposite.

A press conference where a man of distinctly Asian nationality stands next to a woman who looks like she came from a tropical climate. The woman speaks, “We, The leaders of Team Magma, Jiang Fernandez,” she motions to the man beside her, “And myself, Joan Paula Jones, leader of Team Aqua, both hereby accuse Champion Lance of murdering Giovanni in his sleep, with his own form of cowboy justice. We give him twelve hours to produce information to prove his innocence.”

What if all your worst nightmares about the world….

The two leaders of Magma and Aqua look into the camera once again. “The twelve hours have passed, and proof of Lance’s innocence has not been brought forward. Therefore, we are announcing that Team Aqua and Magma will be merging into one team, Team Maqua, to remove the blight of the Indigo League from the face of the earth, and avenge Giovanni’s death.”

Came true….

Cassidy, at a video phone, speaking to the man in the black suit behind the desk, “Engaran Central command? This is Cassidy. Things are on schedule, and are going smoothly. Operation: Celebi, should be pulled off without a hitch.”

In one month?

The man in the Black suit is speaking to the girl with the red hair again, “The invasion of Kanto must take place in exactly one month, or all our plans will be for naught.”

The girl looks him in the eye, “Everything will be ready by then, sir. I stake my life on it.”

The man in the black suit smiles faintly, “Oh, you are, Peters, make no mistake of that. You most certainly are.”

Operation: Celebi

The camera is focused on Butch and Cassidy, standing together on a naval vessel. The camera zooms out to reveal an aircraft carrier, then zooms out further to reveal an entire armada of a HUGE number of ships, two thirds of which are separating from the main group, and heading off in another direction. If you had timeto count them, they would number 2,250 ships total, consisting of aircraft carriers, submarines, destoryers, cruisers, frigates, and troop ships. The sky is nearly black, and at first you can’t see why, but then as the camera zooms out further still, you begin to see thousands of planes, flying Pokemon, and dragons flying in patrol patterns above the massive fleet.

Coming soon to Serebii.net.

A jet roars towards the camera, and just at the point of impact, the screen goes black.

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Operation: Celebi...

Current Stories: Book 2 of the Engaran Wars Trilogy; Retribution

Kanto is in ruins, a shadow of its former self. Engara has total control of the country, and has handed the reins over to what is left of Team Rocket. But there are some that still resist, in the face of overwhelming opposition and death if they are caught. They are the brave men and women of Rocket-Bane. And they will not rest until Kanto is once again free.

Retribution was another of my earliest pieces that survived an accidental mass delete. Basically, I started the story with the idea of an underground bunker and a bunch of Kanto starters defending it. Throw in some safari zone stuff (ask Saffire about the sticks and stones), and you've got a crappy start to a crappy fic. As I went on, I explained to myself that TR had control of the surface, and the people of Rocket-Bane wanted to free Kanto. This link is to the old version, and is more of a teaser to the upcoming version than anything else. It gives a basic lay-out of Rocket-Bane and its inhabitants and their customs. Don't worry—the real thing will be WAY better.

Future Stories:

Engaran Wars Trilogy Book 3; Time of the Titans

I don't want to give much away, but here's a teaser trailer for you all...

[leaves blow across the other-wise black screen, and a voice that sounds like it belongs to an old person speaks]

Long ago, When The Titans ruled the Earth, there was man, and there were Pokemon.

The Humans were content to let the Pokemon have their space, and had petty squabbles among themselves.

[sounds of swords clashing, heavy things smashing into each other, and screams begin to be heard]

Before the Colleon of that time, the ultimate of any of the Pokemon Titans, who ruled far above even the legendaries, changed everything.

[screen flashes a brilliant silver, when it fades, it is of a giant battle around the tower, that shines a bright silver, and humans and Pokemon are fighting against each other. Sounds of many different attacks, beating of wings, beating of hooves, and other sounds of war can now be heard]

Colleon knew his time was fading, but he knew that in the heart of the Tower of the Titans, there was a jewel that would extend his life...indefinitely.

[suddenly, the scene is inside the tower, and a silvery being with eight tails approaches a jewel that is laid in the center of a table. The screen flashes silver, when it fades back in, it is of a map of the Pokemon world, and it moves towards an island chain northwest of Kanto]

The humans were defeated, and most were driven off to an island chain that would be known in later millenia as the Engaran archipelago. Colleon was free to take the jewel, but he held off, unsure of the consequences of his act.

[Colleon looks at the jewel, and paces back and forth in front of it, then leaves the room]

Then, as his two thousand years as a Titan were almost up, he took the one chance he had to remain alive.

[Colleon hobbling forward and taking the jewel out of its place, screen turns black, then, suddenly, human screams can be heard, but the screen remains black]

The jewel extended his life, and gave him even greater powers, but it also turned him into a creature of Darkness. Into a thing of ultimate evil. Into Lokrye.

[ the sound of thunder, but no more screams, and the screen flashes silver, and the black outline of a dog-like creature with two tails can be seen. Its head seems to turn towards the light, and the screen turns completely dark]

He ravaged the country-side in his search for humans, not resting until he found every one.

[picture of humans fleeing with whatever they had]

But there were some that joined with Pokemon, legendary, Titan, and the rest, to put this being down...forever. They were led by a man known only as Gerahid.

[picture of the back of a human shouting at Pokemon and a few humans, then the screen goes black]

They took the battle to Lokrye's very tower he had stolen from the human Titans, and there, they imprisoned him, unable to actually kill him, where they thought he would be safe for all time.

[picture of the silver tower, and the dead bodies of many humans and Pokemon]

After this, Gerahid dissapeared, never to return to history's light. Time passed, and Gerahid became a name that parents named their children. More time passed, and Gerahid became a man of legend. More time passed, and history saw another Gerahid rise up and lead his people to victory before he was struck down, and Lokrye briefly escaped before being imprisoned once again in his dark tower. Time passed...and Lokrye drew strength in the passage of time, biding his time...he vowed the nexttime he was released, he would either die, or be victorious...no more going half-way.

[silver screen, outline of the dark figure from before, but lying down, resting.]

And he won't stop until everything and everyone that ever opposed him is dead and gone. He will not stop, until the entire human race is completely, and utterly destroyed, and the few remaining Titans along with them.

[Thunder again, black screen]

Time of the Titans

This is the fic that I'm working up towards. The ultimate battle. absolutely powerful Pokemon pitted against each other, with mankind, caught in the middle, taking sides as well. It will be like a version of World War III, about thirty years from now. With Pokemon. And Legendaries. And super-powerful Pokemon even more powerful than that (the afore-mentioned Titans. And no, they aren't captured. They don't even come to our dimension that often. Only in times of great emergency).

Maybe a fic with the Samurai that Ash met in Viridian Forest way back when he first started. About how he catches up with Ash, and battles him again...

Maybe a sequel to What If...as I have had several demands to do so. At one point I was going to, but then I got interest back in finishing HHNF/O:C

*grins*

have I piqued your interest?

I hope so.

As you can see, I have a lot of experience writing. All in all, I've probably written around three hundred pages MS Word. I'm proud of that achievement. And that's all in the last four or five years (not sure on the exact date I started writing). Some people are lucky to get to fifty pages MS word. For me, that's only five chapters.

I'm in the process (have been for over a year) of getting a personal website up and running. If you're interested in taking a look around, click on the banner below:

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Writing Tips:

1. Listen to people with more experience than you do.

2. ignore flames that say to give up. writing is a skill. The more you practice, the better you'll be.

3. try creating a Pokemon or two. If you're having trouble starting, try blending two established Pokemon into your own, or try *shudders* an Eeveelution. Whatever you make, put it into your fic, and make it better because of it.

3b.for an example of a Pokemon I made when I was starting out, I have a Poke named Vulithe. nope, not an Eevee. it's a Vulpix/Growlithe cross, made when Ninetails breed with Arcanine. The evolved form of Vulithe (who evolves with a Fire Stone) is Arnine. I was gonna do Nine something, but since both Pokes have "nine" in their names, I couldn't really do it.

Disclaimer: I have only done the Johto: A New Beginning Banner. The other banners were done by Scrap (HHNF), Saffire Persian (Retribution), and Tezza/Topaz of WoC fame (Operation: Celebi/Ash_Junior Laboratories).

Last edited by Ash_Junior; 3rd February 2006 at 8:35 AM.

Following in His Footsteps--Rising from the ashes of defeat, a young girl must rise up to fill her father's shoes, and face his legacy.

Name: Look aboveAge: 18Strong Areas:
Well I don't want to decide for myself so based on other's views, I nail description and paint pictures clearly. Sometimes I've been critisized for painting them so clearly it leaves nothing for the imagination.

Which brings me to my weak areas. I don't draw the line right. I either go overboard or not far enough with pretty much everything in my life.

One of the hardest problems right now is character developement vs plot speed. You know how those intros to books develope characters but take away from from how fast the story progresses. In my blessed-creativity-inducing-ADD-opinion, I'm all for speed, "let's define them in the action scenes",(that my veiw) but one of my friends thinks I need more growing up time in my story. ...but then again he reads BATTLE history books that are so big&boring I'd have a stroke looking at them, that's why I'm posting it here for some other opinion.

Type Of Writing: My writing is always loved fanticy or science fiction. Personally I like to make the unreal have a dull sence of realism to it.

Type Of Characters: Anyone with a particular stuborness or lack of something that makes them odd. Usually I like to make hard core people that laugh arrogantly in the face of death, or overly determined characters.

Current Stories:The Fall of Nawkamea
An intense sequel of events shrouded in mystery. Something is about to errupt from an acient phrophecy and its up to a very odd conjuntion of characters to find out not only that they're in threat but to figure out what they must do or what they are actually up against. The plot doesn't show it's true shape for a long time nor do some of the best characters show up until its almost a third of the way over.

It is immensly violent and hardcore in some of the later chapters. I'm suprised no one decided to tell me anything about it. I really need reviews from a larger audiance. What's wrong? What's right?

Also as a almost joke, I put up Adjel the Ruthless.
I don't expect much to come from this but I decided there must be alot of uncreative people out there so I did a pokemon one portraying the view of a villain.

Future Stories: I might put up a story about space fleets and a certain universal connection that's descovered between them and a twist of aliances.

Writing Tips:

When writing dialogue:
Remember to include any physical descriptions of the speaker and listener, like them turning their head down or twittering their thumbs.

Remember that you don't forget to include all the senses.
There's more than sound and light in this world.

And last of all and by far most important...
When it comes to making a story your story, that means there should be something that is overall different and completely orginal about it, giving it meaning.

Over the year, I have developed new skills, strengths, weaknesses, as well as better attitude.

Username: Ratiasu, although I'm considering a change.

Name: Cynthia. Isn't that nice?

Age: 11, turning 12 on May 17th

Strengths: Illustrating emotions, grammar and spelling, vocabulary

Weaknesses: I tend to confuse my readers, and there's the occasional attack of the typo, and I catch WB too easily. I get it every month. Just deadly.

I'm writing You're Not Alone, filled with action and adventure and all that, and I recently started Sayuri, an original trainer fic that has more to it than just collecting badges.

My characters vary. I guess that's it.

Advice: Always use the criticism you get. You will improve greatly. I have learned this through experience.

I started out like this:

Ash walked up the hill. The wind stirred his black hair. A yellow mouse perched on his shoulder. They were starting a new journey.

Now I'm like this:

A teenage boy, perhaps around fourteen years of age, treked up a slope and reached the peak. The wind swirled around him, marking his triumphant steps. A yellow mouse stared into the horizon with his human friend. A journey, a quest of some sort was waiting up ahead.

Strong Areas: Well, if I have to brag about myself, I'd say my plot and my vocabulary. For a while, the only salvation to my horrible writing was my storyline. Now, I have discovered the thesaurus!

Type Of Writing: Fantasy stories, all the way. It's the only thing I've ever typed and probably ever will. My father is a writer for a living, and I have learned much from him. When I write, my chapters are short and sweet, but I must remind myself not to rush the information out. I'm getting better though...

Type Of Characters: I absolutely love writeing klutsy, sweet and smart but immature. I also enjoy writing the exact opposite for contrast.

Current Stories: Currently, I'm working on a Pokemon fan fic titled The Price of Freedom, which is now on revision 2.
I'm not going to do much of a reveiw, seeing as that I would give away too much, but here's a bit... New trainer Miyah discovers she has a much higher calling than she ever imagined as her suspicious new powers take her and her Pokemon on a journey to separate right from wrong.
At the moment, my rating is at four star.

I also have written a short story trilogy, which is known as the Charidian Trilogy. Only the first third is posted, Change of Fate, and it could really use some reviews. The next two parts will be posted as soon as Change of Fate gets more readers.

Future Stories: A Pokemon fanfic titled Sagacia... I've started on it already, I'm just waiting to post it.

Writing Tips: Don't ever take criticism the wrong way. That's the worst thing you could do. I know from firsthand experience that your pride at your new story can be smashed into anger quite quickly. Be patient, and explain yourself if your readers are wrong. If they aren't, then listen to their advice! They have the editing advantage of not knowing what's going to happen.

Future Stories: Still in its conceptual stages: Team Rocket: Scientific Exploits (working title). To be done in a journal-esqe style. This will outline the backgrounds of the Mewtwo and Armageddon Projects, as outlined in the Pokemorph MUSH's timeline. Permission pending. The story will be written if I am allowed to write it.

Writing Tips: Read a lot of books. Make sure you read some of the great authors, like Camus, or Faulkner. Extend your vocabulary that way, and delve into a greater understanding of the English language by using professional examples. Try to use a thesaurus as little as possible. It can make your work sound less genuine, especially if you tend to air the side of simplicity.

Name: Sandra or Hikari_Blaze.
Age: 12
Strong Areas: I'm good in writing humor and insanity stories. That's my specialty. My other good points is romance.
Type Of Writing: Romance and humor.
Type Of Characters: I use my Pokemon team from Sapphire and anime/manga characters like Sakura and Syaoran from Cardcaptor Sakura.
Current Stories:

New Story: Fusion Fantasies - A girl who seeks revenge on Cipher. A boy cursed by the spirit of an unusual Mightyena. Cipher's back and when the path of these two cross, they'll do anything to stop Cipher. For themselves and the region of Zondia.
Up coming chapter: Battle of the White Fox and the Red Wolf
Rated PG-13 for violence and language.
Action/Adventure/Supernatural/Romance

I wrote a lot of other stories but too lazy to list. Look at fanfics in the link in my sig.

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Name: Mackenzie or CelestialTime93
Age: 12 (turning 13 this Spring)
Strong Areas: Descriptions, clothing designs for characters, detail, and fantasy series.
Type of Writing: Romance, Drama, Fantasy, and Action/Adventure, and the occasional funny love stories (Just Like Heaven, A Lot Like Love, etc.).
Type of Characters: I try to stay within the same ranges, and the only crossover I've ever done is Kim Possible/Pokemon series called "Pokemon Generation." I had to transfer the Kim Possible characters from Disney cartoons to TV Tokyo Anime. It was pretty hard, but I finally got it. The first book is finished, and I'm editing the second one.
Rating: G to PG-13 (rarely any higher for Pokemon fics)

Current Stories:

Old: Pokemon Generation #1: A Forgotten Relative: Ash doesn't know that he has a 20 year old cousin. That is, until now. Meet 20 year old Kim Possible, a girl who could do anything, including saving the world. When these two reunite after 10 years, adventure immediatly follows, as Giovanni is out for revenge on the two half-cousins. Now, only the powers of Pokemon Generation that is joined together with the two half-cousins and their friends (the elements of Pokemon) can save them, and help the team find Ash's missing father. Book one of 12.

New: Hidden Legends of Mysteria: 10 years after the series, Ash and Misty, now married, are 20 years old, and their adopted son's godfather, Brock, is 26. When Sean comes home for the holidays, these three soon learn that their son is not home for the holidays at all. He's after Misty's pendant, the one that Ash gave to Misty on Christmas! But what happens when Misty gets hurt and ends up in the hospital, and Sean is still after her pendant. Ash, Brock, Pikachu, and some old friends, are gonna have to do whatever it takes to stop Sean before anybody else gets hurt. But, what secrets does the Pendant of Mysteria hold?

The Butterfly: Featuring Mairead Nesbitt's "The Butterfly" from her CD, "Raining Up." The dopplegangers of Lugia and Ho-Oh attack Ash during a normal day in Pallet Town. Now, Ash, his baby cousin, Matt, and his friends, must travel to the Crystal Caves to find the real Lugia and Ho-Oh, and reunite the two sides as one. Can they make it back to Pallet Town for the Spring Festival?

Dreamer: Inspired By A True Story: Ash just turned 9 years old, and his father, Daniel, takes him to the Pokemon Ranch, where he meets Dreamer, a racing Rapidash, the fastest of his friends. But when Dreamer falls during a race, Daniel recieves news from Nurse Joy that Dreamer must be put down. Heartbroken by the trauma, Ash is determined to get Dreamer back on his four feet and start racing again. Inspired by the incredible true story, and the movie from Walt Disney Pictures, "Dreamer".

Upcoming: Pokemon Generation #2: Hidden Legends: The adventures of Pokemon Generation continue, as the two half-cousins, Ash and Kim, along with their friends and family, set out to the Orange Islands, where Team Rocket is out to capture the Pokemon Generation Guardians. But what happens when they are caught, and their forced to confess the secrets of Pokemon Generation and the Legendary Pokemon? This is the fiercest battle yet! Book 2 of 12.

The Pikachu Star (Korean Character Names): Pallet Town and Cerulean City was under attack, leaving behind scars that would never heal of the people, and a lover is taken away from Jee-Yoo (Ash), as Yee-Sul (Misty) is forced to marry the evil Lord Yae-Hyeong, the one who had caused all of this destruction, including the cause of Jee-Yoo's death, with one of his soldiers shooting him while he was protecting Yee-Sul. But when Jee-Yoo miraculously comes back to life, after Yee-Sul's capture, he soon realises that the only way he's going to stay alive, is if he could find and rescue Yee-Sul before Lord Yae-Hyeong marries her in seven days. Meanwhile, Yee-Sul weeps over what she thinks is Jee-Yoo's death. But when she overhears one of the soldiers that Jee-Yoo is still alive and he's coming to get Yee-Sul, her hopes are much too high to be let down. And so, the magical journey on the seven nights of The Pikachu Star begin. Will Jee-Yoo make it in time?

Ho-Oh and Articuno: Out there, in the Pokemon World, there are a total of eight legendary Pokemon, known as Articuno, Zapdos, Moltres, Entei, Suicune, Raikou, and of course, the two leaders, Lugia, and the extremely legendary Ho-Oh, whom can only be seen through the eyes of one boy.......

Meet 16 year old Ash Ketchum, a now great Pokemon Master, and his friends, 23 year old Brock Harrison, 12 year old Max and his 16 year old sister, May, and Ash's long time friend, 16 year old Misty Waterflower and his Pikachu.

When the group meet a mysterious woman that looks like a woman version of Misty, things begin to get strange. Giovanni is after Ash, as bait for the legendary Ho-Oh. Heard of the news that Giovanni and Team Rocket are after Ho-Oh, the woman springs into action and searches for Ash, who had ran off mysteriously into the woods, after a strange psychic occurance. But what danger has Ash gotten himself into? And who is the strange woman, who looks so much like Misty? Coming March 2006.

Weaknesses: Tragedy/Angst, explict adult fics, little kid fics, anything over the rating of PG-13 is out of my bounds of strength.

"You can't turn back time and change the past, so don't do anything you're gonna regret!!"

-CelestialTime93

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Strong Areas: Worldbuilding. ^^ I absolutely love taking worlds and giving them my own twists. I also have a major fondness for description (very helpful for aformentioned worldbuilding, let me tell you) and I consider battles and to some degree action scenes to be my forte' otherwise.

Weak Areas: FILLER. I can have major plot points set up but the filler between them can get me stuck for bloody decades. ^^;

Type Of Writing: Well, I usually write strange Fantasy/Sci-Fi hybrids - usually serious, but more often than not with their moments of comedy. I also like writing one-shots from the perspective of characters that have little background to them, trying to give them some kind of a back story where the games or series didn't (this includes some PokeMon POV fics.) I do quite a bit of original writing, too, but I'm yet to actually post any of it here, so... Eh. ^^;

Type Of Characters: I have a fondness for characters with more than a dash of mystery about them, scholarly, intelligent characters, or just about anything that comes to my mind, really. I don't really limit myself to specific kinds of characters. They just burst in my mind and kinda write themselves. ^^;

Tritoch, the frozen Esper, reflects on the world and the passage of time.

Writing Tips: What can I say here that hasn’t been said before? Just keep your fics readable, don't jump between tenses like a crazed Spoink, mind your punctuation, grammar and spelling and always remember. When the clock strikes seventeen, remember the magical feathered walrus! ^^

Name: SigCMugenAge: 17Strong Areas: Description, plot and character development. I find these areas the easiest to right about because I think of it as just writing down my exact thoughts, and that's what makes it easier for me. I also find it fun to describe vivid scenery using similies and metaphors. Oh, and I LOVE contradictions, or oxymorons. Things like:

His appearance symbolized the beginning of life anew, his long flowing brown hair gently cascading along his back, his white trench coat trailing inches above the dirt and gravel road beneath him. His wingspan reached several yards, tip to tip, his black ominous feathers neatly aligned one atop the other, the pattern representing the pureness and order of the Stairway to Heaven. The Angel of Life, the Dove of Resurrection...Lucifer.

These kinds of descriptions are my favorite to write, because to me it seems easier to visualize within my own mind. It sets the boundaries of the character's appearance without having to say, 'It's kinda like this, but not too much like this.'Type Of Writing: I love to write Fantasies and Sci-Fi. However, I still try to retain a sense of believablity in the plot and overall story. So I'll never be the one to write a story about zombies created through alien abduction (weird example, I know). That's just not me. I like to read stories that seem plausible, even possible to happen, and that's visible in my writing style and preferences.Type Of Characters: Emotionally hardened characters, characters who blame themselves for the most out-of-your-hands reasons...I like to write and develop these kinds of characters, because I feel that if I were created into a character, that that's the type I would be.Current Stories:

Invisible Silhouette
Welcome to Fuego, a land of strength and ferocity, a land of honor and determination...a land in fear. Welcome to a land veiled in darkness, a land afraid of its own shadow...
Welcome to a land ripe with natural talent, a land with new faces and breeds of pokemon.
In this land, a new evil calls all the shots. An evil that is forever present, yet never visible. An evil that's unique, yet generic.
Welcome to Fuego.

[OPTIONAL]Future Stories:

Fullmetal Alchemist: Equivalency
Set in the world of the popular anime series Fullmetal Alchemist, this tale begins with a recap of the incident within Laboratory Five. The truth of the Philosopher's Stone has been revealed; now the Elrics have been backed into a corner, from which there is no right way out. On one hand, they can abandon their quest for the Stone's power, and accept the bodies that they created for themselves. But on the another, they abandon their very beliefs as alchemists to forge themselves a tool with which they hope to regain everything.
Feeling lost and unsure, Edward Elric leaves behind his younger brother Al to conduct some dangerous research...but what returns isn't the 'Fullmetal Alchemist'...

Writing Tips: Obtain as much criticism as you can, and add it to your own. Remember though: no amount of constructive criticism in the world outweighs your own thoughts and feelings. Take what other people say, and run with it, but make sure that at the end of the night, your result is something that you're willing to back with all of your soul. Even the slightest doubt within yourself can damage everything you've worked for, as well as your hopes of gaining anything in the future. And never compare yourself to anyone but you, because otherwise you'll get nowhere fast. One thing that you need to realize, is that there will always be someone out there who is better than you, period. So it's a fools errand to try and best any and everyone with whom you cross paths. In the end, you should only compete with yourself.Interesting Fact About Me: I love fence hopping! And just jumping in general. I also love using my feet; so I love things like 'dribbling' a soccer ball, or playing hackey sack. Without my legs and feet, I'd die...