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You described so nicely about you and Todd in this piece.
Love the following stanza:
"We always thought we

were rich, beyond words

with the most beautiful light in the world."
Yea,you were really rich and you still are quite rich.
Wonderful write.

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Zainul... he was like a brother to me growing up. I tried to recapture that in this. Than.. read moreThank you, Zainul... he was like a brother to me growing up. I tried to recapture that in this. Thanks for taking the time to stop by.

5 Years Ago

I feel that he is my brother too.
You perfectly offered your love to him through this piece.read moreI feel that he is my brother too.
You perfectly offered your love to him through this piece.
Thanks again for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You described so nicely about you and Todd in this piece.
Love the following stanza:
"We always thought we

were rich, beyond words

with the most beautiful light in the world."
Yea,you were really rich and you still are quite rich.
Wonderful write.

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Zainul... he was like a brother to me growing up. I tried to recapture that in this. Than.. read moreThank you, Zainul... he was like a brother to me growing up. I tried to recapture that in this. Thanks for taking the time to stop by.

5 Years Ago

I feel that he is my brother too.
You perfectly offered your love to him through this piece.read moreI feel that he is my brother too.
You perfectly offered your love to him through this piece.
Thanks again for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

This is stunning and beautiful. It is hopeful and only hints at sadness. It makes me feel like I slowly drifting watching the scenes unfold

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Poetic. I do not know a form harder to write than the eulogy- and yes, you are right. I w.. read moreThank you, Poetic. I do not know a form harder to write than the eulogy- and yes, you are right. I was trying to honor the lingering sadness over someone taken way too young (my age) with, hopefully, a sense of higher purpose and of the eternal in life.

5 Years Ago

you did that very well. IT is one of the most beautiful passing pieces I have read.

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Xela, Quetzaltenango, Guatemala

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Bilingual poet, essayist, novelist, and technical writer working in Central America.
"A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, .. more..