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Rated 0 / 5 stars2010-05-19 18:34:33

Awful, for a hentai quiz.

I'll start by saying a few good things about this quiz.

1. The preloader was very nice and I was able to play the game in a timely manner.
2. ...

Now for the things I didn't like.
1 There is no quiz. Every button you push takes you to the next question.
2 There were only 3 questions and they suck.
3 Most of the hentai is Neon Genesis Evangelion themed. Which isn't bad if you make a Neon Genesis Evangelion quiz.

This game is just a horrible waste of time and I can't imagine the twisted soul that will find even the slightest bit of joy in playing it.

If you want to make a decent quiz, you need to spend a lot of time learning how to make one, and make a decent one.

Rated 0 / 5 stars2010-05-19 18:47:47

No.

Dear sir, let me just say that this submission is a piss-poor excuse at making a "hentai" quiz game. The questions were laughably easy and the overall structure of the Flash was rather lacking. The drawings were nice I suppose (zomg, EVA AND Lucky Star?!?!), but I feel it proper to advise you (and anyone in particular who or will make a similar game) to use proper citation of your sources in the future. Not doing so is akin to plagiarism and stealing, which is a very serious matter.

It would appear that you mentioned there was a previous iteration of this game. This "improvement" needs substantial improvement before the audience shall deem it a worthy addition to our growing collection of "hentai quiz games".

Here are a few of my suggestions to all aspiring H-quiz authors:
1) Make your questions tricky (but not impossible!)
2) Cite your sources (for further "research", of course...)
3) Include music/sounds (compressed for a low file size, please)
4) Use a nice-looking interface for your quizzes.
5) A gallery shouldn't feel like it's lacking, but keep it modest.
6) Quiz games are old, boring, and tedious to play - make an actual game around it instead!

Good luck in future subs. Please take some of my advice if you make any stabs at this later on - with the sheer amount of these kinds of games, you really have to try harder to stand apart from the crowd. If this passes judgment, I will honestly weep IRL for the sake of Newgrounds' Flash Portal.

Rated 0 / 5 stars2010-05-19 22:09:29

I would have to agree

Mainly there are just too many quizzes out there that lack outstanding qualities. Those ones that make you feel like you wasted your time with it. Short little pointless things being created because boredom was to blame. What I see here is one of those things, but something else could be done to make it stand out from all the others.

I did notice that you put effort in it, only it does need more time to be worked on before being submitted to NG. Do your research a little more then add more questions to give it length. Fix the bugs so it doesn't annoy the player doing the quiz or feel that it's too easy hence making it boring.

Try animating a few characters that would interact while you play the quiz. Also give out multiple ending results due to the amount of misses the player gets.

When you think you've finished, instead of posting right away try to test it out to some of your friends. Getting feed back earlier ahead would result in fixing problems and adding new ideas before the big finale.