I lie the way you begin w/ word collector and end w/ meaning maker. The pairings that work best for me are the ones that alliterate or incorporate another sound device, such as assonance or consonance. I also like the rhythm of this collection.

Love. Love. Love. Absolutely brilliant. It makes sense that a poem about a word collector would be full of delicious words. It also made me think about the possibility of getting young poems to play with describing something in so many ways in a poem. It isn’t an easy task. I loved the two word lines, each ending with an -er noun.