Xenophilius wrote:

00:14:245 (14245|1,14245|3) - Move 00:14:245 (14245|1) - to |0|. You jacked 00:13:998 (13998|0,14080|0,14163|0) - and it's ok, but finish the jack by moving this note. The sound here is the same 4 times, so a jack composed by 4 notes is perfec. i agree with it but..since it's 4 jack note...it makes player feel uncomfortable...so i make that pattern to make it balanced

00:22:405 (22405|0) - 00:23:723 (23723|1) - Ok, good LNs but I don't understad why you don't used same LNs on 00:25:042 - to 00:25:536 - and 00:26:361 - to 00:26:855 - . I know you don't have space to put these LNs but in my opinion is not really sensed to map 2 times a sound with LNs and then stop mapping it. 00:25:042 - Here for example you should add a note for the sound you layered with LNs before. So I suggest to remove these 3/2 LNs and put normal notes. I know the song is long and perfect for LN but you should use LNs every time you ear that sound and not mapping it 2 times and stop for 2 times, then remapping it for 3 times. sorry...but i map this for player...if i map this for song..i already do what u say...if i do that all pattern became unstable,out of flow and ruined the map

00:34:438 (34438|0) - This is for strings? Not right. 00:33:119 (33119|3) - end 00:34:602 - 00:34:438 (34438|0) - Delete00:34:602 - and 00:34:685 - 1/4 notes or LNs for string no LN...i just use note..that was piano

00:34:767 - You need to add here, there's a crash sound. it will be jacked an makes player uncomfortable...unless that part i add kiai

00:35:262 - Also here, why only LN for strings? You need to map crash why?? there has no loud beat

00:39:712 (39712|0) - Same as 00:34:438 (34438|0) - since there has no LN so i added 3 note...and that beat was loud

01:27:844 - 01:28:339 - 01:28:833 - Crash sounds, add note, Ln is for string, note is for the 1/4 stream, you need another note for crash. since there has LN i added 2 note...i not fully follow the music so please

01:46:471 (106471|1) - Ok, this is for piano but are yu sere the sound end in 01:47:624 - ? It seems to finish 01:48:119 - Or you can end it here 01:47:460 - Since the new piano note make harder to ear this. Or maybe you can remove this LN and make it normal note since 01:47:624 - here the piano start to fading so i end there

Now, let's spend some time about LNs from here 00:32:130 - to 00:40:042 - . These LNs layer the string, and it's ok. But the string melody start 00:32:130 - and finish 00:42:679 - . You have LNs from 00:32:130 - to 00:40:042 - . From 00:40:042 - to 00:42:679 - You stopped to layer string and this is bad in my opinion because you layered string before. Here you suddently stopped following strings (I think cause you don't have space for LNs anymore) and it's not good since you've followed strings before. The thing I suggest you is to re-check your map splitting it into sensed sections with Bookmarks (an example of section: from 00:32:130 - to 00:42:679 - ) and for each section choose instruments to map and map them for the entire section. Another thing I suggest you is to think about your LNs, this is 4k and in most cases you don't have room to use LN + 1/4 stream + Drum Notes: you will fell out of space and find yourself jacking things you shoudn's jack because you want to keep LNs. LNs are not the best pattern for low-keys, trust me, I tryed a lot of times to map 4k using LNs in this way, but all times I failed. since 00:40:042 - here the sound starting to loud so i stopped the LN...also making LN+note spam kinda hard for 4k so this is one of the reason i stopped the LN

Thanks For ModIm sorry cause almost all of it i reject...i making this map are not follow the music..if i follow i pretty sure this map are ruinedBeatmap Updated

00:21:910 (21910|3) - Remove? until this section 00:30:482 Accord to 00:33:778 (33778|0) not so different00:31:223 (31223|2) - Hmm. I suggest to remove this. unnecessary, I guess. feel like not comfortable00:45:811 until 00:46:306 - Considering re-pattern to be stairs formation as melodies According to 00:47:624 (47624|0,47734|1,47844|2,47954|1,48064|2,48174|3) 01:02:130 (62130|2) - Move to | 1 | ? But may reducing hands balance. for reason? => 01:13:833 (73833|3,73916|2,73998|3) Just my opinion if you want :3This diff. patterns most are snappy. But so fun x3

[Hyper]

01:22:569 - Add a note to => | 4 | ? also => 01:23:064 and last one 01:23:558 Interesting point (My opinion too common for this section)01:23:394 until 01:23:888 - Can be broken stairs?01:24:877 - Add a note? According to 01:27:844 01:31:800 - Re-pattern? also 01:23:888 Accord => 01:13:339 I can't understand in some points. But not really bad so. still love <3

[Another]

01:01:471 - I think, you miss this sound ( I don't know how it call x3) . Accord to => 01:01:965 (61965|0) 00:15:646 until 00:16:223 - Can be double? According to 01:17:954 to 01:18:531 01:44:328 to 01:44:905 - umm... Re-pattern to random stairs?Seems fine

[Shiki's White Another]

Hi Shikinohollow <3 <3 <3 Long time no seeI will especially this diff. mod at the best as possible <3 <3 <3 using easy word OK? :300:05:921 (5921|2) - Can you move to | 2 | ? Just a bit hands balance00:25:042 (25042|2,25124|1,25207|3,25289|2,25372|1) - I love thiss <3 Oh sorry 01:13:339 - Can be triple? As this 00:32:130 Just re-arrange them :301:35:591 (95591|3) - Can you cut and place here? 01:35:756 simply like this 01:36:251 (96251|0) :3Sorry if my mod can't help in any of points. I can't notice issues. Most of your styles i agreeAs i expected. Great patterns. You are still ET and Pro mapper <3 Respect

- [ S o r a ] - wrote:

[NlHIL's Normal]

00:21:910 (21910|3) - Remove? until this section 00:30:482 Accord to 00:33:778 (33778|0) not so different You are right. but keep it because I'm shit. here is drum main section (drum for 1 or 2 notes) and not LN main section (drum for one note or no but LN)00:31:223 (31223|2) - Hmm. I suggest to remove this. unnecessary, I guess. feel like not comfortable I agree.00:45:811 until 00:46:306 - Considering re-pattern to be stairs formation as melodies According to 00:47:624 (47624|0,47734|1,47844|2,47954|1,48064|2,48174|3) Sorry, I like this pattern01:02:130 (62130|2) - Move to | 1 | ? But may reducing hands balance. for reason? => 01:13:833 (73833|3,73916|2,73998|3) Just my opinion if you want :3 YES! moved!This diff. patterns most are snappy. for newbieBut so fun x3 for ACC playersthx

Nice song anyways x3 cool vocal!Hope this help... if at least a little. Good luck! :3 kill

- [ S o r a ] - wrote:

01:22:569 - Add a note to => | 4 | ? also => 01:23:064 and last one 01:23:558 Interesting point (My opinion too common for this section)01:23:394 until 01:23:888 - Can be broken stairs? re-patterned01:24:877 - Add a note? According to 01:27:844 01:31:800 - Re-pattern? also 01:23:888 Accord => 01:13:339 i think it's ok to keep itI can't understand in some points. But not really bad so. still love <3

[Another]

01:01:471 - I think, you miss this sound ( I don't know how it call x3) . Accord to => 01:01:965 (61965|0) nice :300:15:646 until 00:16:223 - Can be double? According to 01:17:954 to 01:18:531 ok01:44:328 to 01:44:905 - umm... Re-pattern to random stairs? okSeems fine

[Shiki's White Another]

Hi Shikinohollow <3 <3 <3 Long time no seeI will especially this diff. mod at the best as possible <3 <3 <3 using easy word OK? :300:05:921 (5921|2) - Can you move to | 2 | ? Just a bit hands balance00:25:042 (25042|2,25124|1,25207|3,25289|2,25372|1) - I love thiss <3 Oh sorry 01:13:339 - Can be triple? As this 00:32:130 Just re-arrange them :301:35:591 (95591|3) - Can you cut and place here? 01:35:756 simply like this 01:36:251 (96251|0) :3Sorry if my mod can't help in any of points. I can't notice issues. Most of your styles i agreeAs i expected. Great patterns. You are still ET and Pro mapper <3 Respect

[Black Another]

00:53:888 (53888|0) - What is this sound? I noticed some sounds such as slightly SFX here => 00:53:558 i think 00:53:888 (53888|0) - are at the right place..and that sound was well sounds like electricity01:11:196 - Start rapidly tap from here nice01:40:317 (100317|0,100317|1) - Wrong snap? or Why 1/6? hear correcty..that drum sound are at 1/6

Sorry for lateNice song anyways x3Hope this help... if at least a little. Good luck! :3

Thank You Very Much For Mod Beatmap Updated

NlHIL wrote:

- [ S o r a ] - wrote:

[NlHIL's Normal]

00:21:910 (21910|3) - Remove? until this section 00:30:482 Accord to 00:33:778 (33778|0) not so different You are right. but keep it because I'm shit. here is drum main section (drum for 1 or 2 notes) and not LN main section (drum for one note or no but LN)00:31:223 (31223|2) - Hmm. I suggest to remove this. unnecessary, I guess. feel like not comfortable I agree.00:45:811 until 00:46:306 - Considering re-pattern to be stairs formation as melodies According to 00:47:624 (47624|0,47734|1,47844|2,47954|1,48064|2,48174|3) Sorry, I like this pattern01:02:130 (62130|2) - Move to | 1 | ? But may reducing hands balance. for reason? => 01:13:833 (73833|3,73916|2,73998|3) Just my opinion if you want :3 YES! moved!This diff. patterns most are snappy. for newbieBut so fun x3 for ACC playersthx

Nice song anyways x3 cool vocal!Hope this help... if at least a little. Good luck! :3 kill

another01:01:965 (61965|2,61965|0,62047|1,62130|2) - better change like this http://puu.sh/mkbv6/a3b0ffc7da.jpg01:01:965 (61965|2,62130|2) - since this two has a same sound so it's better to make like this..no change01:15:399 (75399|1) - didnt hear anything, ghost there has drum lol..hear carefully(drum sound kinda low)01:29:905 (89905|2,89987|1,90069|2,90152|1,90234|2,90317|1,90399|2,90482|1) - this pitch is different than 01:30:564 (90564|2,90646|1,90729|2,90811|1,90894|2,90976|1,91058|2) - nice

General: The patterns in the black another difficulty seem rather rough and challenging to acc but if thats what was intended then my mod wont be extremely helpful but may have some ideas worth looking into c:Offset: GoodTiming Points: Good including SVsHP/OD: Good

now onto the actual mod.

- Black Another -

to start i noticed a heavy use of the [13][24] pattern eg. 00:12:350 (12350|3,12350|1,12432|2,12432|0,12514|3,12514|1,12597|0,12597|2,12679|1,12679|3,12679|2) - 00:14:163 (14163|2,14163|0,14245|3,14245|1) - and many other places so i may suggest altering some of them to make the patterns more diverse.

00:15:646 (15646|1,15646|3) - is the same as 00:15:482 (15482|0) - but one is double and one isnt change to match each other

00:15:646 (15646|3,15646|1,15729|0,15729|2,15811|1,15811|3,15894|0,15894|2,15976|1,15976|3,16058|0,16058|2,16141|1,16141|3,16223|2,16223|0) - same as beginning of mod maybe change a few of these to different patterns eg: [12] [34] or [14] [23]

01:11:196 - this trill is rather long to be just a 12 trill but i kinda of like it

01:14:163 - maybe add note lane 1 for drum

01:18:036 (78036|3,78036|1,78119|2,78119|0,78201|3,78201|1,78284|0,78284|2,78366|3,78366|1,78449|0,78449|2,78531|3,78531|1) - same as the other [13][24] could change some of these into other pattern

01:19:438 - same as 01:14:163 -

01:22:569 - 01:23:064 - 01:23:558 - are all same sound but different chords up to you if you change them to all 2 or 3 or but leaving it isnt too bad since the 3rd one is in the stream and would make it a hard pattern

01:29:987 (89987|0,89987|2,90069|3,90069|1,90152|2,90152|0,90234|1,90234|3,90317|0,90317|2,90399|1,90399|3,90482|0,90482|2,90564|3,90564|1,90646|2,90646|0,90729|1,90729|3,90811|0,90811|2,90894|3,90894|1,90976|0,90976|2) - same as the rest of them very long stream could be better

01:31:141 - This would be pitch relevant pattern:could be made as a 1/6th stream other then this just not a staircase maybe 1 2 4 3 2 1 3 4 1 2 pattern to avoid minijacks on 2 and 3

01:32:212 (92212|0,92295|0) - dont add 1/4 shields move to lane 2

OR change:01:32:295 (92295|1,92295|2,92789|2,92789|3,93284|0,93284|3,93778|1,93778|0,94108|2,94108|1) - Into single notes because this sound: 01:31:800 (91800|0,91800|1,91800|3) - is louder then the sounds above ^This would be the better option in my opinion.

01:34:767 - maybe add another note here for emphasis of crash

01:37:652 - could add a 1/4 LN on lane 2

01:37:844 - add note here maybe lane 3?

01:38:998 - add note lane 3

01:40:482 - add note lane 1

01:44:273 - beat here could add note lane 1 but may interupt flow of stream so up to you

01:48:284 - maybe add note lane 4 for drum beat too

01:48:613 (108613|0,108613|2) - add note lane 2 to make 3 chord

01:49:108 (109108|3) - add note to lane 1 to emphasise louder chord

WELL... that just took a long time to mod i hope this helps you ! ive never done a mod this big before so hope you enjoy

Comment: Nice music, nice diff-- just to work a few things out.My2cents: LN usage is inconsistent compared to all the other difficulties-- where other difficulties have only 1 LN, Normal diff might have two. This should be solved. There are a couple of sounds that sound the same but have different number of notes placed. Some streams are overly hard for a normal diff. Please keep those patterns to Hyper and above.

00:10:372 (10372|1) - There's no need to put this LN. Furthermore, this is the only diff that uses this shorter LN so I recommend removing it to improve consistency across all diffs.00:42:350 (42350|1) - Remove this one as well for the same reasoning.01:10:536 (70536|2,70536|0) - Consider removing one as well.01:22:405 (82405|2,83229|1) - Shorten 01:22:405 (82405|2) to end at 01:23:229 .

Mat wrote:

M4M Request

I refer to lanes as: |1|2|3|4|

General: The patterns in the black another difficulty seem rather rough and challenging to acc but if thats what was intended then my mod wont be extremely helpful but may have some ideas worth looking into c:Offset: GoodTiming Points: Good including SVsHP/OD: Good

now onto the actual mod.

- Black Another -

to start i noticed a heavy use of the [13][24] pattern eg. 00:12:350 (12350|3,12350|1,12432|2,12432|0,12514|3,12514|1,12597|0,12597|2,12679|1,12679|3,12679|2) - 00:14:163 (14163|2,14163|0,14245|3,14245|1) - and many other places so i may suggest altering some of them to make the patterns more diverse. i think those jack wasnt heavy at all so i keep it

00:13:998 (13998|0,14080|0,14163|0) - i would avoid adding triple jack on lane one from the get go so:

Move 00:13:833 (13833|2) - to lane 1change 00:13:998 (13998|3,13998|0) - to [34] this avoids the tripple jack whilst keeping a jack pattern in this jacks is fine..since i already make it balance

00:15:646 (15646|1,15646|3) - is the same as 00:15:482 (15482|0) - but one is double and one isnt change to match each other my mistake..nice catch

00:15:646 (15646|3,15646|1,15729|0,15729|2,15811|1,15811|3,15894|0,15894|2,15976|1,15976|3,16058|0,16058|2,16141|1,16141|3,16223|2,16223|0) - same as beginning of mod maybe change a few of these to different patterns eg: [12] [34] or [14] [23] that pattern already good

01:11:196 - this trill is rather long to be just a 12 trill but i kinda of like it

01:14:163 - maybe add note lane 1 for drum

01:18:036 (78036|3,78036|1,78119|2,78119|0,78201|3,78201|1,78284|0,78284|2,78366|3,78366|1,78449|0,78449|2,78531|3,78531|1) - same as the other [13][24] could change some of these into other pattern prefer this one so no

01:19:438 - same as 01:14:163 -

01:22:569 - 01:23:064 - 01:23:558 - are all same sound but different chords up to you if you change them to all 2 or 3 or but leaving it isnt too bad since the 3rd one is in the stream and would make it a hard pattern i agree with you but since the single note stream kinda easy so better i add triple note to increase the star

01:29:987 (89987|0,89987|2,90069|3,90069|1,90152|2,90152|0,90234|1,90234|3,90317|0,90317|2,90399|1,90399|3,90482|0,90482|2,90564|3,90564|1,90646|2,90646|0,90729|1,90729|3,90811|0,90811|2,90894|3,90894|1,90976|0,90976|2) - same as the rest of them very long stream could be better

01:31:141 - This would be pitch relevant pattern:could be made as a 1/6th stream other then this just not a staircase maybe 1 2 4 3 2 1 3 4 1 2 pattern to avoid minijacks on 2 and 3 doest really agree with 12,43 pattern cause it kinda out of flow

01:32:212 (92212|0,92295|0) - dont add 1/4 shields move to lane 2

OR change:01:32:295 (92295|1,92295|2,92789|2,92789|3,93284|0,93284|3,93778|1,93778|0,94108|2,94108|1) - Into single notes because this sound: 01:31:800 (91800|0,91800|1,91800|3) - is louder then the sounds above ^This would be the better option in my opinion.

FrenzyLi wrote:

Comment: Nice music, nice diff-- just to work a few things out.My2cents: LN usage is inconsistent compared to all the other difficulties-- where other difficulties have only 1 LN, Normal diff might have two. This should be solved. There are a couple of sounds that sound the same but have different number of notes placed. Some streams are overly hard for a normal diff. Please keep those patterns to Hyper and above.

00:10:372 (10372|1) - There's no need to put this LN. Furthermore, this is the only diff that uses this shorter LN so I recommend removing it to improve consistency across all diffs.00:42:350 (42350|1) - Remove this one as well for the same reasoning.01:10:536 (70536|2,70536|0) - Consider removing one as well.01:22:405 (82405|2,83229|1) - Shorten 01:22:405 (82405|2) to end at 01:23:229 .