'The Glowing Love'

Below is the poem entitled 'The Glowing Love' which was written by poet
Fatima
Nusairat. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

'The Glowing Love'

Flashed as a star;
Flooded as water and
Grew up as the forest,
The love inside me!
Approached,approached
Seven stars, River
and a thousand trees danced into chest.
Approached,approached
To whisper inside you:
You're the moon...
Without you I'm a rainy cloud
You're the ocean...
Without you I'm a wretch bird of sea
You're the essence - fragrance of flower
Without you I'm soulless jasmine
Approached,approached;
To whisper anthem love into thy spirit

love the double Approaching sound.. Fatima, i sure enjoyed the passion in this one.. I am enjoying the different changes in your write.. you do good in making the reader feel the emotions, whichever the moods are... enjoying your work this far... Your Newest Fan ----LINDA