100 word challenge / 5 sentence challenge

The noise was deafening

I ran through the gloomy forest chasing after my excited friend. It seemed like he disappeared. I could no longer hear him then I saw something as red as blood shimmering in sunlight. As I approached the object, it suddenly became dark. The red door no longer shimmered.I opened the door and walked in. The door slammed shut and at that exact moment I heard a loud scream. The noise was deafening. A ruby light shone on the stairs. It got brighter and brighter until a red ghostly hand came round the corner. Behind me, the door was gone.
By Jason in year 5