Hey guys. I would like some feedback on my story. And I’m willing to read yours for reading mine. But I’m only going to read them after you read mine.
Here’s my story:
Title: H & V: UnMasked
Author: Courtnaylol
Genre: Action/romance
Description: You either die a hero, or live long enough to see yourself become the villain. Or so they say. Can you change your fate?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5275990590357504

Thank you. I appreciate everyone in this community being supportive of each other and our stories.

I read The curses on me. I Think it has an interesting storyline. In chapter 1. I couldn’t see the characters, and I’m not sure if that was meant to be on purpose or not. It was a little sporadic, everything was happening fast. But overall I enjoyed the story. I think it’ll get a lot more enticing once more chapter comes out and I understand the characters more. Keep up the good work.

I’m sorry that happened did you try closing the app and re-opening? The reason it happens so fast is because this story contains magic. Maybe, restart episode one and tell me if you see the characters, if not tell me.

It was interesting! I like how they are all superheroes, but you could add some more periods and add some more details! Like, how did people react when spitfire burned down the room? Did anyone survive? Why was that girl randomly naked? Maybe a flashback to Celestial’s and Mason’s relationship? Other than than I loved your story, can’t wait for new episodes!