wow, i really like your series! it is way better then mine! I write on quizilla, under the user name volleyballprincess323. its really badin my opinoin, but who cares what my opinon is anyway! I really think you should continue your series, so dont ever stop, get it? jk, bye!

I really need to stop reading stories that the author last wrote in 2003....cuz this is pretty good, got bit of a big ego, lol, but that's okay, If you still check this site out, you should def. finish this story.

Author's Response: hey, thanks for reviewing...I stopped writing this story because I got no response on the story....I've actually been considering rewritting the entire thing so that it's not from Trista's point of view...but we'll see how that goes...anyways, thanks for your support!

Since this is your first fan fic, I just thought it would be helpful to point out that this would be *tons* easier to read if you put it in paragraphs. And conversation should be considered it\'s own paragraph... with each person\'s lines being separated. That way you always know who\'s saying what and nothing gets confused.
Grammatical errors aside, I thought this was a great start and I can\'t wait to read more. :)