This is perhaps the most beautifully written thing I have seen in a good long while. Your writing flows much in the same way real humanity shifts and alters itself, and such a marriage of style and form is rare. I look forward to seeing what else you have written.

I would feel bad for not giving you an constructive criticism, but as I stand after my first read I can find no fault in your work -at least, none that remained unhidden by the light of the surrounding content.

Um, um, um, so I'm kind of bouncing up and down with how awesome this was. It was so in character that it sucked me in, and then so adorable. Leonardo was so caring and oh man. I just loved every bit of this. You made it so believable. Absolutely lovely story, this. Doesn't get the credit it deserves, for sure.

My heart hurts. So sweet, tender and angst filled. Poor Leonardo. I love Ezio's reaction to Leonardo's straightforward confession of his love. I imagine a small part of Ezio wishes he did love Leonardo the way he deserves. As much as I adore a LeoxEzio pairing, this is how I imagine their relationship would play out if it were mentioned in canon. Maybe with time the idea of being with his best friend (whom, he's quoted saying he trusts the most) begins appeals to him. Now, that he's aware of Leo's feelings for him (how could he not have known prior? *snort*) he may do a little self discovery of how he really feels for Leo. My hopes anyway! Will you be continuing with this story? I always like a little angst with my pairings!

Oh my god. I'm reading your fanfic on . XD Wow does this bring back memories or what, girl? I love the characters in this, though I don't know anything about their canon. The talk of payments is somewhat dangerous in tone and very sexy.

I had already very badly wanted to play this, but those images you showed me, on top of this very promising chapter, make me want it MOAR!

As always, you have such a lovely style to your writing. You know I'm not the biggest bromance fan, but when you write it I find myself genuinely interested not only in the pure physical omgoodness of the relationship, but in the different internal aspects that you showcase so well. Really looking forward to more!