Character Develpomental Stage #1

So, I've decided to write a futuristic story with and elf who is strangly attached to Yuki even though they have never formally met(Akiko), a 17 year old girl, daughter of a killer (Yuki), and a Snake/Neko biochemical experiment who is hunting both of them down.(Meiko) This story takes place in future Kyoto and involves lots of martial arts^_~ I don't really know much more about what I'll write but Akiko smokes (shown in the piccy 'Akiko-Full Front') and that weird thingy which I tried to draw on Meiko's face was supposedly a communications thingy because she, well, is hunting people down, of course. Enough about the story which will most likely never be completed. I know there is quite a bit of technical errors in this and the coloring really bites but whatever, I enjoyed drawing it. The chars are based off of my little sisters and I. (akiko-kristin, yuki-caitlin, me-meiko)Summer of 2003