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What I mean the mushy-mushy shoujo-type romance, serious & matured romance is not that impossible to attain even by men (I look at you, Old man), romantiic comedy also not that uncommon in shonen (I.S. in fact, was one of them, so did most of the harem)

As for Eratas, why shoujo? You said it's very sweet type romance, and was took from the harmettes' POV. Therefore, you HAVE to THINK like a GIRL.

I still can help you however since I have some Shoujo manga in my disposal (As I stated in one chapter of Sacred Twins, I never limit myself in tems of genre if it comes to manga/anime, and absolutely hate long formulaic story).

If it comes to the worst, we still have Yachiyo-chan.

@ Blitz

I'll use that, but first...we need to insert a first kiss between our couple (IchiMado) to improve her mood

here's the sample:

Spoiler for Char is a pervert:

"YOU'RE TOO SLOW!"

We just got to the second arena successfully. Ahh, the devil's folding her arms and waiting for me... speaking of which, I want to have something like that attendance book too, that book sure harder than diamond, and might be a good weapon for improvised fighting.

"Since you have time to think about such useless things, hurry up and get in line!"

Could it be that it was Chifuyu-nee who manipulate my mind than reading it?
"You really took your time."

Oh, what coincidence. Cecilia's standing beside me. Ever since the representative battle in April, she would say some stuff to me--I'm sorry, but my sisters already took up that space.

"I got it, I got it. Ichika-san's really popular with girls’ right? Or else you wouldn't have gotten hit twice within 2 months."

She replied with extra emphasis, apparently challenged me for a response… hmm… must create a snide comment… must create a snide comment…

“Because being the only male, I must be very popular…” I coughed and grinned “As punching bag”

“I-I see…mou“

Cecilia backed off and pouted, grudgingly admitting her defeat.

“That was cruel, Ichika” Charles mumbles.

I shrugged; I can’t let myself pressed down all the time like that, can I?

"First, we'll be watching a practical battle that involves close range and shooting."

Chifuyu-nee smirked and told the two girls about…something, oh; apparently she’s using softer approach than usual. It’s either a big scolding or physical punishment…

"This is the stage for me, the representative candidate for England, Cecilia Alcott!"

"That's right. It's a great chance to show everyone the difference in ability as a personal IS pilot!"

Suddenly, Cecilia and Rin was on fire, they said that a good general is a master of persuasion; Guan Yu is not an exception.

I wonder what exactly Chifuyu-nee told them, but I’m still more worried about Madoka…

“Ngaaah!” I groaned and pulled my hair angrily, pulled the attention of the girls, this is embarrassing, but I don’t care anymore!

*PANG* the legendary book flew to my head.

“Ichika, are you alright?!” Charles approached me, but there’s second book! And-
*PANG!* Charles also down.

"Then who's my opponent? I'm alright even if it's against Rin-san."

"Fufu, that's my line. I'll slaughter you."

"No need to rush, idiots. Your opponent will be--"

*wheeeeEEEEEEEE!*

Now what’s that sound again? When the girls scattered and running, I know something is wrong, but I’m down on the ground and just have enough time to stand up and…

“CHARLES!”

*BLARGH* *PA* *TUMP* *DING*

Solely on reflex I managed to summon ByakuShiki, though I messed up the booster wings. It’s still gave me enough time to evade…

Charles on the other hand…

"That, that, Dunois-kun…kya!"

Umm, to see this scene is embarrassing. Anyway, I’ll describe it.

Right now, Charles is on top of Yamada-sensei, with his small hands landed on the soft, well developed bosom of her.

"Th-That, you see, in this situation, I'm really troubled...no, this isn't the only problem. No matter what, I still have a teacher-student relationship with Dunois-kun...but if it continues like this, I might have to change my citizenship to France, that's very tempting somehow--"

“Whoa? What do you mean with that, sensei?!” Charles wailed like a girl and quickly jumped back, definitely embarrassed by the experience.

*wheeeEEEE*

My feelings are bad, and I knew it, Kurogane roared in the sky, but since it was very unstable unless it floats, I knew where this going…

Instinctively, I kicked the boost and caught her before she’s crashed like Yamada-sensei; we managed to land rather smoothly, though we have ANOTHER trench as result.

“I-Ichika-nii…”

“What are you thinking replacing stabilizer module with booster module?”

She looked aside and her cheek is flushed “E-even though KuroGane is Land-based I.S., that doesn’t mean it can’t fly right?”

“But adding more boosters without adding more stabilizer in process is suicidal, what we’re you thinking?!”

Madoka bit her lips; she’s in the verge of crying. Looking at her expression like that, my tone mellowed at the very instant.

“Listen Madoka, I’ll do everything you want, I’ll listen whatever you wanted to share, but please, don’t hide your problem” I told her “Looking at you like this made me sad”

“…really?”

“I’ll eat cluster bomb if I’m lying, please”

“Kiss me”

Eh?
“Kiss. Me. Now.”

…this is wrong, this is so wrong, even then, why I felt like tempted? What’s wrong with me? Could it be that separated form Madoka from a month changed us that much?

Anyway, she's unmoving, and closing her eyes in anticipation. So, this is a game of punishment huh?

Puberty feels really-really suck.

*CHU*

“Uhmm…” Madoka’s eyes widened in response, face as red as tomato “What are you doing, Ichika-nii?”

“That’s what you want right?”

“I mean… in the che-” she quickly jumped as beam barrages missed her face by INCHES away, which was dangerous, obviously!

“WHAT THE HELL, CECILIA!” I roared.

“That was too close to comfort nee? Too bad I missed” the blonde lady smugly laughed.

“ICHIKA!”

Not Rin too, pretty please? I quickly unleashed Yukihira Sanshiki in anticipation, especially that Ling already thrown her combined Souten Gagetsu, the blade flew fast like a whirlwind, at near supersonic speed…

I can dodge, but what about Madoka?! I had to strike right in the center…but too risky

*BANG!* *BANG!*

A pair of bullets destabilized its path, made me able to see them, the double-bladed scimitar separated and slammed to the ground just behind me as I cut the connecting handles…

I turned around to look, and found that the sniper who helped me shooting the giant scimitar is Yamada-sensei.

Anchored sturdily in her hands is a 51 caliber assault rifle 'red bullet', the firearm and its ammunition made by an American company called Claus. As its practical and extremely reliable, it became a main essential model that many countries have come to use.

“Please do not use I.S. to hurt each other, nee?” She smiled at us cheerfully; I swore for a moment, her expression is stiff and cold.

Yeah, Madoka just want him to kiss her in the cheek (which she did to him quite a lot), but due to hormone and arousal problem, Ichika mistook her request for a real kiss...

I still can help you however since I have some Shoujo manga in my disposal (As I stated in one chapter of Sacred Twins, I never limit myself in tems of genre if it comes to manga/anime, and absolutely hate long formulaic story).

If it comes to the worst, we still have Yachiyo-chan.

@ Blitz

I'll use that, but first...we need to insert a first kiss between our couple (IchiMado) to improve her mood

here's the sample:

Spoiler for Char is a pervert:

"YOU'RE TOO SLOW!"

We just got to the second arena successfully. Ahh, the devil's folding her arms and waiting for me... speaking of which, I want to have something like that attendance book too, that book sure harder than diamond, and might be a good weapon for improvised fighting.

"Since you have time to think about such useless things, hurry up and get in line!"

Could it be that it was Chifuyu-nee who manipulate my mind than reading it?
"You really took your time."

Oh, what coincidence. Cecilia's standing beside me. Ever since the representative battle in April, she would say some stuff to me--I'm sorry, but my sisters already took up that space.

"I got it, I got it. Ichika-san's really popular with girls’ right? Or else you wouldn't have gotten hit twice within 2 months."

She replied with extra emphasis, apparently challenged me for a response… hmm… must create a snide comment… must create a snide comment…

“Because being the only male, I must be very popular…” I coughed and grinned “As punching bag”

“I-I see…mou“

Cecilia backed off and pouted, grudgingly admitting her defeat.

“That was cruel, Ichika” Charles mumbles.

I shrugged; I can’t let myself pressed down all the time like that, can I?

"First, we'll be watching a practical battle that involves close range and shooting."

Chifuyu-nee smirked and told the two girls about…something, oh; apparently she’s using softer approach than usual. It’s either a big scolding or physical punishment…

"This is the stage for me, the representative candidate for England, Cecilia Alcott!"

"That's right. It's a great chance to show everyone the difference in ability as a personal IS pilot!"

Suddenly, Cecilia and Rin was on fire, they said that a good general is a master of persuasion; Guan Yu is not an exception.

I wonder what exactly Chifuyu-nee told them, but I’m still more worried about Madoka…

“Ngaaah!” I groaned and pulled my hair angrily, pulled the attention of the girls, this is embarrassing, but I don’t care anymore!

*PANG* the legendary book flew to my head.

“Ichika, are you alright?!” Charles approached me, but there’s second book! And-
*PANG!* Charles also down.

"Then who's my opponent? I'm alright even if it's against Rin-san."

"Fufu, that's my line. I'll slaughter you."

"No need to rush, idiots. Your opponent will be--"

*wheeeeEEEEEEEE!*

Now what’s that sound again? When the girls scattered and running, I know something is wrong, but I’m down on the ground and just have enough time to stand up and…

“CHARLES!”

*BLARGH* *PA* *TUMP* *DING*

Solely on reflex I managed to summon ByakuShiki, though I messed up the booster wings. It’s still gave me enough time to evade…

Charles on the other hand…

"That, that, Dunois-kun…kya!"

Umm, to see this scene is embarrassing. Anyway, I’ll describe it.

Right now, Charles is on top of Yamada-sensei, with his small hands landed on the soft, well developed bosom of her.

"Th-That, you see, in this situation, I'm really troubled...no, this isn't the only problem. No matter what, I still have a teacher-student relationship with Dunois-kun...but if it continues like this, I might have to change my citizenship to France, that's very tempting somehow--"

“Whoa? What do you mean with that, sensei?!” Charles wailed like a girl and quickly jumped back, definitely embarrassed by the experience.

*wheeeEEEE*

My feelings are bad, and I knew it, Kurogane roared in the sky, but since it was very unstable unless it floats, I knew where this going…

Instinctively, I kicked the boost and caught her before she’s crashed like Yamada-sensei; we managed to land rather smoothly, though we have ANOTHER trench as result.

“I-Ichika-nii…”

“What are you thinking replacing stabilizer module with booster module?”

She looked aside and her cheek is flushed “E-even though KuroGane is Land-based I.S., that doesn’t mean it can’t fly right?”

“But adding more boosters without adding more stabilizer in process is suicidal, what we’re you thinking?!”

Madoka bit her lips; she’s in the verge of crying. Looking at her expression like that, my tone mellowed at the very instant.

“Listen Madoka, I’ll do everything you want, I’ll listen whatever you wanted to share, but please, don’t hide your problem” I told her “Looking at you like this made me sad”

“…really?”

“I’ll eat cluster bomb if I’m lying, please”

“Kiss me”

Eh?
“Kiss. Me. Now.”

…this is wrong, this is so wrong, even then, why I felt like tempted? What’s wrong with me? Could it be that separated form Madoka from a month changed us that much?

Anyway, she's unmoving, and closing her eyes in anticipation. So, this is a game of punishment huh?

Puberty feels really-really suck.

*CHU*

“Uhmm…” Madoka’s eyes widened in response, face as red as tomato “What are you doing, Ichika-nii?”

“That’s what you want right?”

“I mean… in the che-” she quickly jumped as beam barrages missed her face by INCHES away, which was dangerous, obviously!

“WHAT THE HELL, CECILIA!” I roared.

“That was too close to comfort nee? Too bad I missed” the blonde lady smugly laughed.

“ICHIKA!”

Not Rin too, pretty please? I quickly unleashed Yukihira Sanshiki in anticipation, especially that Ling already thrown her combined Souten Gagetsu, the blade flew fast like a whirlwind, at near supersonic speed…

I can dodge, but what about Madoka?! I had to strike right in the center…but too risky

*BANG!* *BANG!*

A pair of bullets destabilized its path, made me able to see them, the double-bladed scimitar separated and slammed to the ground just behind me as I cut the connecting handles…

I turned around to look, and found that the sniper who helped me shooting the giant scimitar is Yamada-sensei.

Anchored sturdily in her hands is a 51 caliber assault rifle 'red bullet', the firearm and its ammunition made by an American company called Claus. As its practical and extremely reliable, it became a main essential model that many countries have come to use.

“Please do not use I.S. to hurt each other, nee?” She smiled at us cheerfully; I swore for a moment, her expression is stiff and cold.

Yeah, Madoka just want him to kiss her in the cheek (which she did to him quite a lot), but due to hormone and arousal problem, Ichika mistook her request for a real kiss...

BEST SUNDAY EVAR!

1.Ichika kissed his sister! Hormones really are a bitch yamada-sensei inpires fear to all All hail Megane!

2. Irish wasn't acting he's gonna get screwed later since Tatenashi and Maya took a video of what he was doing.

Irish:...What happened?

Tatenashi: Are you sure you wanna know?

Irish: Just tell me!

Tatenashi: All right (Hands Irish the video)

Irish: Wh-Wh-What the Hell is this!

Tatenashi: Isn't it great! I even sent a copy to the journalism club.

Irish: You WHAT! (Tries to leave the room but gets stopped by a crowd of girls)

One girl from outside: MOE IRISH-KUN! LETS PLAY DRESS UP!

Another girl: LET US DRAW YOU FOR OUR NEW EDITION OF "BOYS LOVE IN CAMPUS"!

I forgot who asked, posting from phone now, but Karon detests people who kill other people in order to push their own agendas through, be it religion or intervention of warfare. She believes in that as long as people can properly communicate with one another, there'd be no need for war. Ie, Setsunaism. XD

Zero, you're doing the Tabane Schenberg fic are you? Can I borrow the concept for IS: Shooting Star? I'm also fleshing out a crew, ship and IS to go with it, so I might borrow some from your's? Do you have others made?

I forgot who asked, posting from phone now, but Karon detests people who kill other people in order to push their own agendas through, be it religion or intervention of warfare. She believes in that as long as people can properly communicate with one another, there'd be no need for war. Ie, Setsunaism. XD

Zero, you're doing the Tabane Schenberg fic are you? Can I borrow the concept for IS: Shooting Star? I'm also fleshing out a crew, ship and IS to go with it, so I might borrow some from your's? Do you have others made?

Umm, Gundam 00 cameo is ditched pretty early, because Blitz doesn't like it and when I think about it, he was right, the idea sticking out too much like a sore thumb.

I forgot who asked, posting from phone now, but Karon detests people who kill other people in order to push their own agendas through, be it religion or intervention of warfare. She believes in that as long as people can properly communicate with one another, there'd be no need for war. Ie, Setsunaism. XD

Zero, you're doing the Tabane Schenberg fic are you? Can I borrow the concept for IS: Shooting Star? I'm also fleshing out a crew, ship and IS to go with it, so I might borrow some from your's? Do you have others made?

Somehow I don't think you can talk the nations of the world to getting rid of the Infinite Stratos This is the main reason why they're destroying IS facilities all over the world but trying to avoid civilian casualties.

What's left from the concept is that someone filled Aeolia Schenberg's place (with personality of Shikamaru Nara) and that ByakuShiki already have Yuki no Nanatou, largely based on Exia Avalance & Gundam Seven Sword.

What's left from the concept is that someone filled Aeolia Schenberg's place (with personality of Shikamaru Nara) and that ByakuShiki already have Yuki no Nanatou, largely based on Exia Avalance & Gundam Seven Sword.

By the time Ichika is able to summon Kick motor, he'll able to use Quick Boost

Confused beyond belief

Making progress with "maidens in love" but my brain is being put to the limit trying to think of mushy fluff romance It feels like my creativity is being ripped out! need to hold on till I get back on the deconstructor train!

Maya didn't join Tatenashi She took the video with her since she wanted to remember Irish actually acting like a kid rather than some kind of suicidal cynic, she had no idea Tatenashi would leak the video to the journalism club

By the way, he wasn't crying because he snapped he was crying because

Spoiler:

He got amnesia again and reverted to a child like state, he latched on to Maya since she was the first person there

he'll get back to normal later which explains why he doesn't remember anything that happened.

I would also love your help in writing the shoujo romance scene since I have no Idea how to do purple prose.

Maya didn't join Tatenashi She took the video with her since she wanted to remember Irish actually acting like a kid rather than some kind of suicidal cynic, she had no idea Tatenashi would leak the video to the journalism club

By the way, he wasn't crying because he snapped he was crying because

Spoiler:

He got amnesia again and reverted to a child like state, he latched on to Maya since she was the first person there

he'll get back to normal later which explains why he doesn't remember anything that happened.

I could also lose your help in writing the shoujo romance scene since I have no Idea how to do purple prose.

Umm....
As for Purple prose? It's easy to do, but HARD TO DO RIGHT!

For example

1. Ichika is handsome, he has short jet black hair. Aside form that his figure is incredible when I saw him shirtless.
2. Ichika is attractive, no, Ichika is very handsome. His sharp eyes, bright smile. His neck-length jet black hair fits him, giving me the impression of a charmer. Aside from those, despite his apparent slim figure, his muscles are well toned, beneath that shirt of him, he shown me those formed abs, giving me the vibe of 'real man' instead of 'pretty boy'.

(now you know while fics written by female author are damn long and only 10% of them is composed of dialog)

Excuse me while I'm going to shower tormenting myself for giving you a homoerotic example, but that's what you get if you writing from the girls' POV. Then again, my vocabularies is strictly male, therefore I sounded like gay fanboy than a perfectly straight fangirl.

I think you missed the end of the first sentence It ends with "sometimes eve"

Anyway, Tatenashi does the same thing in volume 5 to Ichika by telling the harem they're having an affair or putting him in compromising positions.

The only difference being that she tends to bail him out afterwards She'd bail out Irish too but he outright refuses to accept her help outside of missions which just makes his life harder .

This is also Tatenashi's way of trying to get him to open up since he's the only protagonist who doesn't really talk much outside of mission briefings. She doesn't know about his gynophobia so she doesn't realize that she's just alienating him even further, its to show that she's not perfect.

It's a good plot element, that sometimes even Tatenashi cannot escape being hated for her rampant lulz action.

Remember, Irish is amnesiac at the time, and Tatenashi giving the Newspaper Club the video of AMNESIAC, TRAUMATIZED CHILD SOLDIER doesn't seems funny at all. I would be surprised if Tatenashi can escape reprimand, and will scream in disbelief if she's got some praise from her rampant fanboys.

I knew it sound's like a bashing, but I knew you knew better. Why? Tatenashi does not even look at Ichika's feeling tormented for being THE ACADEMY's boytoy or Kanzashi's inferiority complex until V6 or V7.

She moved in her own pace (which equals to selfishness), in metaphorical sense, some people she dragged is hurt by the pavement of her road.

Umm, Gundam 00 cameo is ditched pretty early, because Blitz doesn't like it and when I think about it, he was right, the idea sticking out too much like a sore thumb.

You can use it all you want, in fact, I'll felt flattered.

Well you started it, might as well finish it.

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

Somehow I don't think you can talk the nations of the world to getting rid of the Infinite Stratos This is the main reason why they're destroying IS facilities all over the world but trying to avoid civilian casualties.

Which will confound her even more: IS is a means to explore space. Her country depends on the revenue generated by producing Equalizers, and the spacenoids need IS to continue building their lunar colonies.

Not to mention the IS sensors interact with her own mental capacities creating a One Off Ability that is unique to people like her (IS Perception, or ISper). If everyone were ISpers, everyone would be able to communicate perfectly, and there won't be conflict.

To Karon, there is a lot of promise in IS. Just that some countries prefer to use it as a weapon doesn't make it bad.

Lol I can totally see the argument happening when she snaps!

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

@MeisterBabylon

What's left from the concept is that someone filled Aeolia Schenberg's place (with personality of Shikamaru Nara) and that ByakuShiki already have Yuki no Nanatou, largely based on Exia Avalance & Gundam Seven Sword.

@ZeroXSEED- The fault doesn't lie completely on Tatenashi. Irish was supposed to trust his partner but instead he chose to keep the fact that he's gynophobic and that he's a DRUG ADDICT! If he told her she most likely wouldn't have pulled as much shit as she did, he also never makes an attempt to get to know her better either so their teamwork is lacking in their missions even if their abilities complement one another.

@MeisterBabylon-I know the IS has a lot of potential but Irish's entire life has been destroyed by them. He lost all memory of his past due to being caught in an IS blast radius, he was enslaved and forced to work like a dog to build new IS units even as a child and his older brother figure was killed by one when Irish made a simple mistake and he chose to take the blame for it. Karon makes a point that the IS has good uses but she can't ignore the lives that've been destroyed because of that one machine.

I love philosophical arguements especially when both sides have a point