Dispute Among the Stars

Another short story that I wrote in my Spring 2013 Fiction Writing Class. We were watching a video called "The Power of 10" and we have to write a story some-what based on this video.

Here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U04_1iKKC2c

SUMMARY: God finally created Adam and Eve but after the humans ate the forbidden fruit of knowledge, God and the Big Bang altercate the fate of the human race.

Submitted:Jun 9, 2013
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There was nothing, not
a crumb, not a sound, and not even an atom that occupied the
lonely space. That is, until half of it was filled with stars,
asteroids, and galaxies while the other half was overflowed with
grass and beautiful blue atmosphere with birds chirping in the
background. A black mist made up of many planets, galaxies,
gases, and stars advanced to the middle where two oppos­­ite
worlds collided. Then a bright and shining figure wearing a white
cloth that molded each movement approached the middle as well.
Both of them glared at each other.

"You." The
Black Mist sneered.

"Peace, brethren," the
Light in white spoke. "Let's not cause war because of this
situation."

"I am
NOT a male," it corrected. "I am neither. But what you
have created has put everything at risk." The mist folded its
arms, which were made up of stars and comets. "I don't mind
sharing existence with you and your brother-or whatever." It
paused. "Speaking of the Devil, where is that
mischievous immortal? They're part of this issue as
well."

"Elsewhere," The Light
crisply answered. "Said there are better things to do than
discussing the situation with us."

"Probably seducing and
tempting your so-called perfect little creations. Going back to
the problem, what you have made had crossed the line. Now those
things will know everything all because they ate your
stupid fruit."

"I did not want to
live on my own while sharing everything with you. I
created a world with wonderful creatures such as these," the
light looked up two sparrows flew around the Light and then away.
"And then I made these beings, which they only serve to
love each other so they can become one while serving only
me."

"Well, Alpha
and Omega, what kind of idiot would create a tree that
produces apples that gives the wisdom of both good, evil, and
everything else?!" Many planets within the Black Mist started to
go into supernova, creating mini bright lights from each
explosion and especially at its hands-like while the Black Mist
clinched tightly. "It sounds like a perfect manipulative setup
between you and the Wicked!"

"Do not question my
authority. They chose to disobey me and this
happens."

The Black Mist
grumbled and quickly calmed down, "We cannot allow them to
explore. Look what is happening, they know what they're
made out of, who they are, their purpose in life, and worst of
all," the Black Mist leaned forward, "very soon they're going to
explore OUTSIDE of their galaxy! They're going to seek other life
forms from different planets and galaxies that they don't belong!
Put them in their place! Punish them! Destroy them! Do whatever
to stop them! They are not ready nor capable to meet the other
entities!"

The two stood there in
frustration and silence while their sides of the fields were
engaged by sounds they've created. Both of them knew the
potential of these creations and they knew the knowledge they'd
gained would lead to more trouble in the future. They continued
to stay in silence until one of them came up with a
solution.

"Mortality." The Light
commended. "They were supposed to have immortality for serving me
but since they disobeyed me because of my Opposite. If they want
to know death, then they will feel death. Pain, suffering,
confusion, and loneliness."

"My, my. Who would've
thought the Good would have any vicious
punishments."

"It's the only way
that they can come to me and see me as their
Savior."

"And here we go again
with the superiority thing." The Black Mist rolled its two
planets. "Mind if I add the punishment as well? After all, we
have to work together if we want to share. And besides, I need to
protect the other life forms as well." The Light nodded at the
Black Mist. The Black Mist gathered gases, planets, stars, dust
clouds and created a new galaxy in front of the Light. It pulled
out a tiny blue-green marble and showed it to the Light. "I
called it Earth. This planet will be affected by their actions.
If they pollute the Earth or kill their own planet, they will die
with it. They will not be given any of the advance resources that
I gave to the other life forms; they are stuck on their own
planet and cannot successfully live nor get out of their galaxy
themselves. I know for a fact that they can create things that
will explore for them but they cannot leave. Their
curiosity will cost them and will forever haunt their minds for
wanting to know the unknown that I have made."

"I'll allow the Wicked
play with them, but that will be more work for me." The Light
sighed, "Split good and evil down the middle on planet Earth. On
top of that, they will be separated from their true loves and
thus they must find their true love on their journey. My
followers and the Wicked's followers will not be seen by these
creations. They have to serve me and prove me their loyalty to
come back to my world, if not, they will go to the unpleasant
world that the Wicked has created."

"Works for me, now put
it here." The Black Mist blew the Earth towards the Light. The
Light took out two mortals, one man and one woman, and placed
them into the new world that they'd agreed on.

"Where will you place
this galaxy?" The Light asked.

"Right in the middle
of the both of us, my Lord." The Black Mist quickly spat
out asteroids and meteoroids in disgust. The Earth was placed
back into the new galaxy and floated in the middle of the two
worlds. "Never make that same mistake again." It said
before turning away from the Light.

"Peace be onto you,"
The Light turned away before fading into its own world,
"brethren."

In a distance but
never seen again, the Black Mist's shout of annoyance and
irritation echoed into the endless dark space while several more
planets and stars went into supernova.