Dear Everyone, I'm sad to say that Inkitt is discontinuing the Online Book Club. There will be no new book in February.

I would like to say a huge thank you to everyone for reading, for commenting, and for all the feedback you gave to our authors these past few months! A special thank you to Mark, who wrote this months gripping sci-fi/humour story Kev (OMGIAG),

To everyone who enjoyed the book club discussions, please keep making sure that your voice is being heard.
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Inkitt authors love hearing from you, so please keep reading and leaving reviews on the books that make you feel and think. It really does make a difference!

As for the Book Club... all good things must come to an end. I hope you had fun while it lasted :)

Lisa F
Yes you get to keep your badges :) Basically, book clubs take a lot of time and effort to moderate, and Inkitt is a small company with big ambitions. I had to be away all month working on a different initiative, and I'm afraid Chloe is in the same
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boat as me. Hopefully, we'll resurrect the Book Club some day, but in the meantime, I'm afraid we had to close it :(

Kayresia A. Bass
I think I figured out why we haven't gotten the new book. I went and joined the mailing list again so maybe I will get next months book, but, the link for the January book is: https://www.inkitt.com/bookclubs/perfect-IllusionSo perhaps the
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link from the group page didn't get changed? That is all I can figure out. So everyone head on over to the link above. We will not be destined to read Kev forever.

Well...his memory loss seems to be very selective. He doesn't remember his parents but remembers the house. Does he remember he's suposed to have parents like any other child. Cause if so he should remember he had parents and wonder what happened to them at least. And the voice in his head also has memory loss? Strange...

Newbie here. Anything new and/or old I needa know about??? What books would you recommend I read? I only have two that are in my library.. I'm reading one which is absolutely wonderful 💝 It's called The Immortal Dawn. I'm on page eighty-something, and I only just started reading it last night.

Final rating: 2/5 stars for being so damned confusing, repetitive, and not clearing up that much at the end

Final impressions:Run through Grammarly or something similarMake sure you consistently use contractions when characters are speaking unless they *never* use them, otherwise it makes reading confusingThe repetitions are just boring, need to make more differences or
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consolidate, a lotFinding out the rules is niceEnding clears up almost nothing of my confusion unfortunately

Chapter 16Starts to get interesting againI like the black SUV and commandos sporting the red maple leaf makes me giggleWhere’d Kev get 20K to pay for a car? Was it cash?

Chapter 17Well that’s an interesting twist at least, unsure of the purpose of the whole thing but interesting nonetheless

Chapter 18FINALLY inside the journal lolOK so Kev told himself he was God then told himself to forget. Why forget? Why does Kev having all the infinite knowledge put him in danger from Clive?Why 37 to teleport?Good question about whether the journal resets or notIf Kev IS God why is he looping in the first place?Great summary of the book, I actually read it all

Chapter 19So Clive wants to kill Kev bc of rules that everyone but Kev knows?If Kev is God in this universe, it could still be a VR simulation that Kev created and Clive could be a virus or someone else stuck in the simulation. Kev could also be the AI that’s somehow been corrupted in the simulation, and Clive is an actual person trapped in the VR world and ending the universe will allow him to escape if he can completely successfully end it without the AI recreating it, againI’d really like to know the rules by nowWhy would God feel guilt?The special wish is to go to Galthinon? What on that planet is supposed to make him remember?

Chapter 20OK…so its what, a mini copy of creation?Why make the game? Was God bored?Is God capable of boredom?Well that at least explains the memory thingUm…ok

Chapter 21So winning the game was making that declaration?Now I’m just more confused

Chapter 22Thou shalt for the rules? Really?I love the theories on what Kev stands forStill left really confused though

I'm pushing to finish, but I won't lie I'm really having to push. It's confusing but also boring with all the repetition

Chapter 11Confused by wording – is the man wearing the red leotard and the man carrying the pitchfork the same man?The girl dying is an interesting development, as is Clive saying he doesn’t know his own nameOk so Clive IS Satan – why wouldn’t he know who he is then?If Clive is Satan, then is Kev Jesus, being tempted and tormented by
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Satan?Why is the playground hell? Or is all of earth hell? Is Kev reliving everything part of a torment in hell? Is Kev dead?Kev’s time travel rules are still confusing, especially in relation to othersHow is Kev so sure of an afterlife?The list of questions is just confusingHAHAHAHAHA brilliant getting Clive to take the blue cube that made me laugh so hardB24ME seems more like Satan than Clive right nowSo there are two blue cubes? Both Clive and Kev are on the show simultaneously?The rehashing of the game and the rules etc I skimmedNice twist on an arcade gameCould probably cut down the really long description of over and over and overSo the girl resurrected?

Chapter 12OK so, is Kev just going to watch her killed over and over? Part of his torment?I assume Deevil is different from Devil/Satan?The Deevil is Kev? Like part of him? Part of his mind? Or part like the holy trinity in religion?If this is what Kev called the devil and how he thought he looked it supports the facet of Kev/Kev’s mind/VR Kev designedWhy does the Deevil care about the girl? Another ploy to torture Kev?The whole story just seems to be about torturing Kev in one way or another, and if that’s the main thing it could probably be condensed a bitOK so Kev feels what the Deevil does

Chapter 13Ok…back to square one pretty literallyI’m just going to skim this because it seems like a lot of this story is just a lot of repetition with very little changesHonestly most of the book could be condensed into this chapter. It covers a lot of it, and is way more succinct, with a few changes in this chapter (like Kev’s parents living)

Chapter 14And back to forgetting and vague references to rules…And back to repetition of things we’ve been through before…Skimming

Chapter 15Yay Canadians…againClive back to trying to end creation…I just feel like we’re running on a treadmill – getting nowhere fast with the story

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