The look in Arato's eyes was feral and reminded Glenn too much of the Alpha for his liking. Which is when he remembered that while Glenn was weaker, he was no doubt just as possessive and controlling as the other infected.

"...which is when he (who? i suppose arato) remembered that while Glenn was weaker, he (Glenn? arato himself? vito?) was no doubt..."

I think this is rather interesting story. I dont think I have ever read somethink like this and I like it. Just try to find a beta, she will correct your errors if you are not natural english speaker, but for now, I really appreciate your story. Keep going:)

I just read the note you sent me. :) The mistakes aren't enough for me to stop reading, though you have a ways to go with editing. It's alright, everything needs editing. :)

So, this chapter was the claiming. I must admit I am more interested in their culture and society than anything else. While I have been reading I keep thinking it would be interesting to read about the alpha before he became infected, maybe in a short story or something. But that might just be me. :)

Hmmm... I am still interested in this story, but it is rather trying to get through. The quality from chapter one to two is quite drastic. I suggest some editing or even a beta to help you out. Thanks for sharing. I will continue on and see what happens next.