Well, you can breathe easy - the first chapter is the worst (as far as graphic violence goes), although the story is still pretty dark. Thanks for taking the time to read and review, and thanks for the props.

That's horrible, and disgusting, and a whole bunch of other things but it was very well written and i can't wait to read the next chapter. Great job, I think you have captured the true nature of Voldmort beatifully. This will either break Draco or make him stronger. I only hope his strength will be for the good side and not the bad. Well done.

negasongThursday 21st June 2007 11:14

Chapter 1 (Author Response)

Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you like it so far. The Imperius curse ususally takes a back seat to AK and the Cruciatus. I really wanted to show how horrible (and disgusting) the Imperius curse could be.

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