Oh my goodness. This is such a beautifully written story. I loved how you went from third to first person and the way you organized it. You captured these depressed feelings so well, and you embodied them in Dominique and it just feels so real... Though such a depressing story (with a happy ending :]), you pulled this off wonderfully, and I love it so much. Amazing job, hon: 10/10.

Author's Response: Hai! Oh thank goodness the POVs seemed to work! I was spending ages trying to decide whether top change it all, but then it wouldn't have the effect that I wanted...

Oh I had to have a happy ending, or it would be TOO depressing and sad :]