Quite the interesting little story. I would have preferred a little more description to it, but as it is it’s still pretty good. The descriptions give just enough to see what’s going on, but also leave picturing the scene to the reader’s imagination. It’s hard to write super short things like this and still have a decent impact, so this’ll get a solid 7 or a possible 8 out of 10 from me~.

This is REALLY creepy for me to think about…. Why? Because I used to do that as a kid. I wouldn’t wanna wake my parents up after having a nightmare because of that EXACT thing and I just went into their room, sat on the floor, and cried xD