I wish you could favourite individual chapters. I'm sorry that my reviews are a tad dull and unhelpful. I'm not great at expressing how a poem affects me and why and what might possibly be improved (although, perhaps things are meant to be imperfect). Your writing amazes me. I like how they can tell a whole story in so few lines and yet leave so much mystery. I also like best when you turn well-known stories or concepts on their head and make me think about it with another perspective (like the Alice or Eve poem). Jealous of that ability. My poems are just straightforward "wah I'm miserable right now" poems I think xD

Anyway. I shall stop rambling now. And you should try and get some sleep sometime :D