2. The Ortiz story includes details (offered on B1) that might be fine in another section, or somewhere else in City & Region, but feel wildly inappropriate here. To wit: "With her doe-eyes and smile, silk blouse, and fashionable jeans, Ortiz, 29, does not look like someone who routinely orders around dozens of the city's most hardened gang and drug investigators." Contrast that to the color from the story on the right (also on B1): "Linehan was taken by amublance to Boston Medical Center, where he remained in intensive care yesterday with a punctured and collapsed lung and a broken rib...."

3. Not only did the Ortiz story run in a bad spot, but a far more appropriate story was buried inside the section, on B6. Headline: "'It was a very bad night in the city': Two men slain, nine handguns are recovered."

The lesson seems to be this: when it comes to crime, light features and hard news really, really to be packaged separately.