Zoey Minsky's life is over. Her Best Freind in the entire universe moved 3 states away, her Mom is dating a guy who should have his own sitcom, and her job at the Super Burger sucks. Or maybe she just has a case of the summer blues. I review back!

This poem will make you think. This is the first poem I wrote in a while. I wrote it today, so it might not be as good as my other ones, but I hope you still critique it because I'm an aspiring writer in need of some contructive criticism. So please R&R!

Five high school kids, Brendan, Cassie, Thor, Shayla, and me, Madeline. Yeah, I like Brendan who likes Cassie who likes Thor who likes Shayla who hates me... Got it? I hope so because I'm not repeating it!

It was a short story that I wrote for school. It ended up being like eighteen pages long and my teacher was... unhappy. But when I got up there to read it, everyone fell in love with my story. That's what I'm hoping you guys do too. Enjoy!