Thanks***

For sharing.

by
Anonymous04/08/13

No hint of arousal

The idea was good but the story was non stimulating and dull. It contained numerous errors, which if you had taken the time to re-read you should have caught. I suggest
you get The Synonym Finder by Jo Rodale if you intend to go further with your
writing endeavors.

by
Anonymous04/17/13

suck her back

Liked it a lot - but would like a little longer story next time sweety! This wasn't long enough to get my rocks off as I masturbated while reading it! You're on the right track though. Maybe I could help guide you through the intricacies of sucking and fucking. I love both fucking, sucking and being sucked so much and it sounds like you do too! You might like my eight inches of rigid cock.