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Mute (MrRe1gn)

Mute

Weapon

Agenor:A sword made of the lightest steel. This ancient sword hard is to break apart, and because of the lightest steel, this sword is one of the lightest sword ever made. This ancient sword made it possible for Mute to use it while he's speeding/charging. Mute found it on top of one of an Ancient abandoned mountain, made him a lucky person who've found the perfect weapon for him.

Red Glowing Part:This effect made the cuts caused by this weapon will not trigger the target's pain receptors, meaning they won't feel the pain of the cut. This effect lasts for 5 seconds after the initial cut. This effect can be activated if Mute's in speed. This effect will NOT work on hard material such as sword, steel, rock etc.

Strengths

Fighting experience:Because of he's always alone, he got the chance to learn and master some of the fighting techniques.

Speed:He is fast, but not so fast, he's fast enough that he can charge to you easily. His speed gives him great flexibility on the battle field.

Close-ranged combat:Since Mute is a swordwrath, close-range combat is an advantage to him, other than that, he's already a master in close-range combat.

Weaknesses

Sword requirement:Without his sword, he's not that strong. even though he got speed and mastered some fighting techniques, that's not enough for him.

Long-ranged combat:Because of he's a swordwrath, long-ranged enemy is kinda challenging, he do can deflect bullets but he can only deflect some of them. A repeated attack will cause him in trouble, and he'll have to charge the enemy until close-range combat.

Strong Enemy:Mute only depends on his speed and sword. However, strong enemies can overpower him and will be a challenging opponents to him.

Personality:Serious, lonely, mute, no friends. No one dare to be friend with him, and no one will..

Story:From a far village, Mute was born, his parents wanted a perfect child, but then, they found out that he's mute, which made them felt sad. So they left him at an orphanage house. For plenty of years he live there, he still didn't know that his parents left him. Since a kid, he dreamed about being the Greatest Swordman, so he trained since he's a kid, but, because of his problem, he trained alone. Training and training, he never skipped even 1 day without training. No one dare to bully him, no one knows his name, so he was called Mute.Until one day, an old man Rudy, told him that his parents left him at the orphanage, knowing that, he was shocked. He left the Orphanage House and live on his own, travelling around his village, hoping to find his parents, never talk to anyone. Although that you saw him around, his status is still unknown.

Would you look at that? Another fast guy with a sword! The RHG community never ceases to surprise me.

My one, big question would have to be: What purpose does his sword's ability serve? Like, what kind of benefits could come from delaying the pain that someone feels?

I lied... I have more, smaller questions to ask. Like, how did he teach himself how to use a sword all by himself while he was at an orphanage? Does the orphanage just have sword training equipment lying around or did he run around the court while swinging a meter stick? I assume he wouldn't have been able to look up sword techniques on the computer.

I think I should tell you about the Cier Orphanage....
you see, Cier is a place for Hyun's Dojo, I mean, a place where all fighters called Duelist compete, just like RHG but bit different, and yeah, Cier is a place full with magical fighters and legends of fighting, and ya know, he lived in "Cier Orphanage" .....

Re1gn, Cierite doesn’t exist in the RHG universe. And nether would the Cier orphanage, since Coer doesn’t exist in the RHG universe. You should really omit those parts of your backstory, or re-write it so that it doesn’t mention things that exist only in the Dojo duels universe.

Also, pain is essential to identifying and correctly measuring how much damage you’ve taken. Not being able to do these things would probably dampen your ability to fight. Although this is a moot point seeing as how it only stops pain for 5 seconds.

I would suggest either making the effect of his sword permanent, or extending the duration. You should also define how fast he can go more clearly.

Spoiler for my favorite quote on this entire website.:

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Originally Posted by Mark XD

no no no meng, thats not tru, God wants you to eat vegetables, so you will live, satan wants you to examine it forever, so you will never get an answer and die of starvation and go to hell
forgive me, but i'm question your intelligence nish

Re1gn, Cierite doesn’t exist in the RHG universe. And nether would the Cier orphanage, since Coer doesn’t exist in the RHG universe. You should really omit those parts of your backstory, or re-write it so that it doesn’t mention things that exist only in the Dojo duels universe.

lol who cares? RHG has a million undefined things that just happen to exist for the sake of backstory. Like for example the 40 thousand “sons of gods” there are. It’s stuff that means basically nothing mate.

In your demo you might want to make the text way brighter in the black and white bit, couldn’t read it.

Last edited by Charry; 10-15-2017 at 02:48 AM.

Originally Posted by Arch-Angel

You'll never make it with an SP social career if you don't know who Charry is by now.

lol who cares? RHG has a million undefined things that just happen to exist for the sake of backstory. Like for example the 40 thousand “sons of gods” there are. It’s stuff that means basically nothing mate.

In your demo you might want to make the text way brighter in the black and white bit, couldn’t read it.

Those who actually care about plot would care.

He could at least explain in his RHG profile what the hell Cier is for those people, like me, who have never even heard of it.

He could at least explain in his RHG profile what the hell Cier is for those people, like me, who have never even heard of it.

This is why I said he should probably remove/re-write those things, and Charry, the sons of gods things could all be easily explained as every god just co-exisitng.

Cier is basically the setting of Dojo duels, Hyun's dojo's equivalent of RHG. It actually has it's own defined setting and backstory.

Spoiler for my favorite quote on this entire website.:

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Originally Posted by Mark XD

no no no meng, thats not tru, God wants you to eat vegetables, so you will live, satan wants you to examine it forever, so you will never get an answer and die of starvation and go to hell
forgive me, but i'm question your intelligence nish