Like the concept, fanfic writers would go wild after seeing something like this.. my only complaint aside from the lack of a background are the breasts. I understand that when people think of females and femininity, they thing hourglass figure and breasts. That's okay, I guess, to have a bump or something in the armor, but the big, round balloons distract from the overall picture (even the creepy sexiness of Pridak's body *drools*), and it just doesn't do it for me. Perhaps next time you could replace the boobs with a bump or a corner or something... but overall, I liked this very much.