Your story is absolutely firetruckingly hilarious! I love it. If you don't continue you this I don't know what acts of complete and utter sorrow I will commit. Thank you for writing. You wonder of comedy and hilarity!

This story is quite interesting. Poor Juliet though, her dad is so embarrassing!

The "H-O-T-T-T-T-T-T-T" was quite unnecessary. Just saying he's hot will suffice. I understand that you wanted to emphasize the point though (: Also, I'd suggest adding some more description in. Otherwise, good job, and I'm looking forward to reading some more! (: