This was beautiful! Pain and feeling resounded through your verses…
The imagery was so vivid, that it brought some really gruesome and saddening pictures into my head… so powerful were your words here! I loved it!!
We sit and pity those who suffer… but can never really “understand” what they go through..day in day out! Even this helplessness was brought out in your poem..and I really liked that!
A lovely read!

True what those who suffer go through only they know and reveal less..they hide their pain inside and put on a smile..we see it all around us everyday..A prayer to them all!
Glad you liked it!
best regards
suja