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Review:

Peevesie says:I really liked this, you seem to get the emotions exactly how I'd expected them to be when thinking of Ginny leaving her Mum - which was really nice to read.

I did notice some typos, but honestly I can't point them out because I got so drawn in by the way in which you'd written it, I've forgotten where they were.

I loved the way you brought Colin and Dennis to life, it was really nice to see them with a little more to do - I've always had a soft spot for Colin's character for some reason and I think you did him a great justice in the way you've written him.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love getting a response. I hate sitting back and biting my nails while the views climb. Chapter 2 is coming as soon as it gets validated.