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Bewafa Bar Mein

I know its been a while since I posted something, but it hasn’t really bean a while that I wrote something. Infact, in the 10 years that I have been writing since, the max I’ve ever taken to write any poem has been about 45 minutes… but this one, this one has taken the most time I’ve ever spent on a single poem, almost about a month.

Why? I don’t know, may be what I felt was too complicated and may be what I felt, I never felt before! And even after I took all this time to write it I don’t know if I have accomplished what I aspired to! May be you can tell me, may be you understand it more than I do… May be, who knows?!

To read the poem, please click on the image, and then click once again to zoom into it… sorry for the trouble, but I could not find a better way to lay it out…

15 Responses to “Bewafa Bar Mein”

pranaysaid

good creativity… m talkin abt the whole blog in general .. nt only thiis post… u r one of my inspirations… trust me.. u make me thnk tht i shud start wirtin again… i do write these days but wt i do i very casual n random.. unlike u whch requires a lot of thought and imaginative input.. i used to write poems too.. n i still do… juss tht its less now… i wish i cud put up my poems too but u knw.. m toooo lazy to do tht… hehe… anyways good blog.. keep postin more… n i would suggest u one thng… change the color of ur blog… make it bright n lively… its too dark… kinda depressin.. lol… trust me colors make a lot of diff… i thnk we shall talk abt tht some othr day… but once again good work and keep it up..

Neeeeee – I hope to continue being your inspiration, if not to think, atleast to write! =) and if i cant be an inspiration, take me as a threat… lol, cuz if i dont get to read that thing u r writing, uska anjaam achcha nai hoga!!

and who else is a more poetic person than u, i know about that date of ur’s, u know which one i m talking about!! =)

i will change it soon, let me get some free time to do it in a better way, and i assure i will change the look of my blog, if not all – atleast the color, so that u feel more welcome!