The use of color is very nice here and you rendered well too, it makes the piece very dynamic and fun to look at. I'm not sure if it's just the pose though, but it looks like the gals head is a bit too far right, like its been kinda lopped off of her body and shes using her hand to hold it up right. Her proportions are just slightly odd, but it adds kind of a doll-like horror/mystery feel.

The waist and clothing there does appear to be twisting nearly enough for this image to look natural. This forces the female's head to appear out of position, but It's just her waist's fault. The legs also looked oversized compared to the upper body, though it [i]might[/i] work in some art styles. Ether there is too much blur going on or it isn't consistent enough on the draping clothing, I can't make up my mind.

Character concept is nicely done. They have features that make me more interested in who they are, and I'm wondering just what is happening in the scene. If you were looking to make this an action piece it has enough movement to fulfill that look. Nice variety of colors and shading is also well done on both clothing and the characters themselves. Nice art.

My wife and I both love it very much. It looks beautiful and you did a fantastic job with the whole "Dream" feel of the image in my mind. We both love the leaner look to him and as well as the outfit you put on Dahlia (the girl). Thanks for doing this for us!

I like this. I also hope she enjoys it. I like watching how your technique changes and seeing the (seemingly) little differences in the way you approach an artwork. The effects and colors in this one are amazing.

I agree, there are also fatal issues with her spine, as her upper torso doesn't seem to be attached to it from anywhere but the neck, she has a floating head snd her other knee is 2d, smaller than the other, and disjointed. I just... I mean, I'm no expert but... ehh.