Ok, i love a good pop song and this is great. exellent intro with the bass. im thinking you have a piano play that gutair hit on 0:06. just piano and guitar playing together to make it more interesting with be amazing. love that riff man, im hearing plently of blues. great chords. omfg, this solo is so sweet (around 1:40). i cant really crit sections cause its only on midi. but seriously dude. you have written a winer. ten out of ten.

Holy happy! The song instantly put me in a good mood. This is a great little number you have going on. I would love to see a final recorded version if it. It sounds kind of like a softer, happier, early 90s Radiohead. But, Yeah, it was well written and everything flowed nicely

Holy **** I got a boner from joy when listening to this. This is like the acoustic version of a cliffs of dover if cliffs of dover wasn't cliche of course. 9/10 Title of this song = God give your ears sensual massage 5 dora?
Crit mine? its post hardcore I just added a new leadhttp://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1110635

Jesus, you never cease to amaze me. Chiclets was an audible orgasm, Boston Inspired and Pull Of were both almost as great, and this is... I believe the first acoustic thing I've heard from you, and I love it. Just like the other songs it makes me want to get up and do a backflip. Of course, I won't. The notation isn't good, but the listening, like someone up there said, is great.

10 outta freakin' 10.

Crit mine? Either What's With You or Duty Calls in the sig.

EDIT: I lied; I remember listening to Caustic Acoustic. But regardless.