Ha, I loved this one! I agree with you about Beyal/Jinja (Dax/Jinja and Beyal/Chase all the way!) but they do have a really cute friendship, and I thought this fic portrayed that close friendship really well! As I've said before, I love the way you write and once again the characterisation is brilliant - you've also managed to get Beyal's way of talking right, which a lot of people don't manage very well; a lot of the time it ends up sounding either ridiculous or pretentious, but you've got it really well here.

Very adorable and well written. Beyal's sweet innocence and love for his friends is touching.
I support both the Dax and Beyal shippings with Jinja. Even Bren because Brenny Bren needs a bit of love too.