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Anonymous says:This is amazing! I love Johnny Lupin, but I would hate to have to deal with the little snot in person. Also, I noticed one thing, that I'm not sure if it is an error in calculation, or just Johnny being an unreliable narrator. Liam is described as being nearly 7, but Ramses is described as being 7, but wasn't Liam born before Ramses in Next Midnight? It's just a minor detail though, and this story is so good. I was nearly laughing out loud the entire time. I love how Johnny brags about defeating the serial killer in Midnight Run, and nobody believes him. I'm not sure if I could handle reading more than a one-shot in Johnny's point of view. He's just too... Johnny like. Anyway, this review has gotten really long, so I'll just say once more- awesome story!

Author's Response: It's probably an error in calculation, because you're right, Liam is about 6-7 months older than Ramses. I don't always have firm timelines for the Rose stories. I'll go back and fix it :)

I don't know that I could handle writing a longer story in Johnny's point of view! He's a bit exhausting, to be in his head. He's a stinker. Thank you so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it :)