Look, I didn't bother to read your story, firstly because I don't know the book, secondly because your paragraph spacing is appalling and thirdly because this is in the entirely wrong category. If the category for the book you have written about doesn't exist then I would class it under "misc." short for miscellaneous (meaning "a variety" or "random").

If you could implement these suggestions I'm sure people who are looking for a fanfic about the book you wrote about would have a better chance of finding it.