A brewery of thought

Restructuring

I knew a first draft was just that, but going back and rereading my first draft is like pulling out teeth. Everything is out of order, everything is a mess. I didn’t want to go chronologically through the story because Chapter One is kind of rad, but it looks like I really have to restructure everything. How would a reader follow my psychotic pattern of narrative!? Creating is hard work.

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I like to make. I like to learn.

I'm an artist, educator, writer and technologist. I'm into Open Web, freedom, education and a million other things. At the moment, I'm working for the Mozilla Foundation on the Mentor Community Team. We're creating a Generation of Webmakers, and it's a whole lot of fun.

I am a passionate open webist (open web + activist) who believes that openness is intensely important. I'm a person that believes that sharing and collaboration without restrictive limitations on knowledge are the best ways to innovate, create and improve, not only software, but our world.

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Da Vinci said "Art is never finished, only abandoned," – that applies to the book I wrote and self-published. You can buy it at Lulu by clicking the cover image below.