No, just stress. My mom's throwing a Tupperware party ( ), and I have to clean most of the house myself since my mom broke her foot, my sister had surgery, and my stepdad hurt his back at work (safety engineer for Ford). Sweeping, picking up bits of trash, vacuming... It's just - GRRR!

I think you spilt it up way too much. It didn't flow to good. The stanza's were VERY short as well. It would have been easier, so you didn't have to split it up so much. Did you want to make it look long? There's a poem by Carl Sandburg.

"CHOOSE
THE single clenched fist lifted and ready,
Or the open asking hand held out and waiting.
Choose:
For we meet by one or the other."

Look how short that is! A poem doesn't have to be long to be good. Look at Carl Sandburg's poem AGAIN, "Fog". He wrote some very short poems. There was one that was only two lines!

If you want a poem to be big, make it big. But don't split up a small poem to make it big.

Well, as for you my author friend. Detail lacked a bit, use the thesaurus to your advantage. You can get the perfect mood and setting for your poem. Improve as much as you possibly can before posting, it will help you on the long run. if you need any help PM me.