Given that I have never actually written a "normal" love poem, this one is no exception.
The perspective I was thinking of when I wrote this was an accepting relationship between a woman and a crossdresser (from the former's point of view). It probably is not representative (at all), it was merely an attempt.

Great choice with the perspective; "normal" love poems have a tendency to blow really hard, so I commend on your deviant ways. Excellent rhyme and excellent imagery as well... An all a round excellent poem.

I hope this does not turn into another everyone's favorite (I will yop myself to no end if that is the case). In all honesty, I am not sure about it, it seems like it was skimmed over hastily in adhering to form. However, I do love the quasi-lesbian feel it has. I woke up this morning and thought I should have written "traditional" in place of "normal," but its too late for that. But yeah, they are so much more fun to write and easier to relate to (at least for me).

Poem's fine; flows perfectly, and you're right, a great feel to it. You can always change 'normal' to 'traditional' - just a simple edit button. Of course, I will know what was originally there; our only hope is that I can keep that secret quiet.