your presentation is unique and untouched, though the theme is eternal"love thyself".one more remakable thing is your minute obsevation.When a female gets wet water refracts through it as coming through a prism by making spectrum of colored lights.This is a marvelous description I have ever come accross.In deed you meet here with your self to gratify and eventually to satisfy your inner feelings.This way a virgin girl quenches her thirst.Its, of course, a great literary work.

Nice work on this poetic love and romantic tale...your words show the view of one who finds a lovely maiden and takes upon the approach of a new romantic love...very nice...one thing is your last line missing a small word or did you leave it or write it that way...even still a most enjoyable view of thought...nice...