I loved reading this. I thought that the plot was amazing and I love how you portrayed the characters. This story sucked me in and I believe it to be one of the best Sea Patrol fics I've read. Congratulations on doing such a fabulous job and thank you.

hope they stay happy and honest with each other! mikes parents are a bit controlling though - give them some privacy! you have got me intregued as too who the attacker is though thought it kates mum but know you usually got a twist planned!

MV16 chapter 15 . 12/11/2012

oww wooow ! i love this story I like ur writing style even though it's a bit OC. can't wait for the next chapters to come :)

GUEST chapter 13 . 12/10/2012

OH NO! What a dramatic pause. I hope this conversation will be finished soon.

I'm enjoying reading this story. It contains all the elements, a little bit of drame,sadness,humour plus a touch of mystery. I look forward to how it all comes together in future chapters. Thanks for the regular updates.

Karla chapter 8 . 12/7/2012

Well, but with an improving writing your style must change at least a little bit, it's like cars. version 2ist better than one, and looks a little bit diffrent, not much, but you can see it if you're looking. :D:D