AHH!
I've read pretty much all of your stuff, but this is the first one that's really scared me. Jeez. Especially the outro.
But the title is good. So is everything else. It's just the subject matter that seems a little... i don't know. I'm not one to talk. But jeez!
OK. I'll stop now. It is a good poem. Don't get me wrong.
~shea