Wow, this is a very lovely story. Touching too. Nah, I don't think it's too long, the flow of the story is perfect. Lucky that you didn't cut it into different chapters. . I like the way you portrayed Tifa's thoughts and doubts in this story and I especially like the last part where Cloud hugged her and said "It's good to be home." This story is awesome! Keep writing more CloTi stories ya~! ()b