Chapter 4 - 170

7th Sep 2006

Author's Comments:

I decided to try a different kind of layout on this page. I decided after I finished it that I don't like it. Sorry Will Eisner, but I need my bordered panels! ^__^;

Also, someone brought up a good point in the comments - I do colour Yuffie's "makofied" eyes purple, but officially I think her eyes are grey. I guess if I dressed her up in blue, I'd give her eyes a blue hue if I was being careful about it; I figure grey eyes look different depending on what clothes you wear. At least they do on Elizabeth Taylor. :-)

Also, a big thanks to Kirlaskia for the Y-V-C fanart, it's posted in the gift gallery. I love getting gift art, so thanks a whole bunch!

In a fit of emotion, Yuffie learns a new limit break: Flying Suplex Hug!

"Major Score!" XD
YAY! Love the tackle! XD Nah, I don't really think Yuffie's eyes are purple--nobody (human) has true purple eyes anyway (I read somewhere Liz Taylor's are supposedly violet--which is somewhere between blue and purple, which is more likely to naturally occur, and like hazel-coloured eyes, has the effect of looking slightly different under different conditions.) And IMHO Yuffie is most likely Japanese, which means her eye colour should be in the brown to black range. Grey or violet eyes are a caucasion trait after all. :)

"...if you will have me." GOSH! Is that a PROPOSAL, Vinnie?! *evil cackle*

He looks great in the first panel, btw. ^-^

Heya! I love your comic to bits but, just one thing...Vincent's Gauntlets on the wrong arm :o

"OOF"
lol. xD

Nice
well, ive been reading your comic a long a time ago, but this is my first comment.

your art is veryyyyyy beautiful! you deserve 1 place at TWC. I've got the idea to tell about your comic at orkut and ff foruns, so u can get lots of votes and readers. Ill do that as soon as i can. I hope that at least some more people come here at the site and enjoy this marvelous story

Of course, now Nanaki's wrong eye is scarred, and Yuffie has a scratch on the wrong shoulder.

aww, I knew I missed something. Time for a minor edit. XD

This sort of thing happens at work. A quick fix to patch one thing also breaks two other things. The programmer often knows in advance that this will happen, but management tells him to do it anyway, and then is upset with the programmer for having broken the two other things. Silly. And of course the two other things are also solved by quick fixes, which each break two other things. ;^) Sometimes this goes on for quite a while. The only real solution is the in-depth fix the programmer was originally told not to do, which would have taken less time than all the patches, all of which have to be reverted in order to do the real fix!

I'm not telling you to redraw the whole page, of course; I'm just telling a story. Personally I would have left the gauntlet on the wrong hand; it didn't bother me in the least.