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Ricky, If this poem is an indication of what comes next, I am certainly willing to wait (no poetic-pun intended). You have a nice, fluid writing style (at least in this write...you can change that style with every piece) that shows a lot of promise. Your flow is good, your wordplay even better..."a puzzle doesn't come in the box already solved..." is a captivating and quotable line. Very nice write, sir! Keep it up. take care...dan

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Posted 1 Year Ago

Well I believe mind is fastest moving thing in the world if one could learn how to control it they would be known as god... The restless mind leads to innovate create and even destroy. Your words explained exactly how it feels to have a restless mind .enjoyed reading it...keep smiling :)

Posted 2 Years Ago

It's always tough to be patient sometimes. Even the most patient get impatient sometimes. Life can quickly and easily push us past our breaking points. "All I want to do is know", what a struggle...waiting for an answer from within or the outside.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Posted 2 Years Ago

Ricky, this poem made me realize that I'm impatient. Then again I already knew that lol. Anyway, I love the flow of this poem and the way I connected with the words as I read it. You have a bright future ahead of you! I do have a question for you though, message me please.

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Portage, MI

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I am a 16 year old teen from a calm, quiet city. I have aspirations of publishing a book of poetry before I graduate high school, and would appreciate any feed back and tips! Also, if you would like m.. more..