i LOVE this story. so neat! i'm wondering who the father is! please update SOON! great work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on chapter five right now but it might be a while. I promise I'll work as hard as I can. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment! I appreciate the support!

I really like the idea for this story, though there are a few inconsistencies. First, when you mentioned that Holly/Hollie(?) was an American witch, so I thought the story was taking place in America. I was very confused to discover that she already attended Hogwarts. Also, you first mentioned that Ellie was Holly's father's mother, but later she spoke of Holly's mother as an infant when she had been born. Is she her paternal grandmother, or maternal grandmother? Other than that, I like how the story is progressing. I'm very interested to find out what happened with Jeremy.

Author's Response: I'm actually kinda relieved that someone caught onto that! Thank you! I noticed that as well and starting slapping myeslf for it. :D No, it's not set in America. If I ever rewrite it, I'll make sure to correct those mistakes. Ellie is actually her father's mother. :P I'll make that clear next time. Thank you for reading and commenting!

OMG you really really need to update it is so awsome
this probaly one of my favorite stories and I have read really good stories
this such an awsome idea and you are an amazing writer I mean i allways have really good story ideas but I am a terrible writer so it does not work out
but most times itell my sister my ideas and she writes the stories
she is also visits HPFF but never as much as me :)
and i all most all the time only read the mauruader era and i dont think iv ever finished a story that was not in their time
ANYWAYS your story is awsome
100/10

Wow, this is amazing!
Please update soon, I really wanna find out who the father is! Any hints...?
10/10

Author's Response: Haha! :P No hints! I haven\\\'t touched this story in a while. I shall update as soon as I can. Actually, I\\\'m working on another story. I\\\'ll try to juggle these two so no one expires of curiosity. ;) Thank you so much for reading!