Great chapter. You did an amazing job writing it. I didn't think it were possible to love icecream than I already did before I read this chapter but God was I wrong. I liked the way Bella was changed too. Looking forward to reading about vampire Bella. Please update soon.

Wow, just, wow. What an amazingly hot and yet emotional chapter! You had me in tears at the end. It was so tender, so sweet. I could feel Edward's hesitance, reluctance and desire all at the same time. It was so good, and I am dying (as usual) for the next chapter.

One small (tiny) complaint/comment though...What happened to Edward's promise to Bella that she could "drink him up" before she was changed?

I loved the new additions to the list, and the whole scene with the leather Edward had me whimpering along with Bella.

Everything tha Edward & his family did to make Bella's remaing human time memorable was well, perfect, truly. I really enjoyed Edward's time with Carlisle, Jazz & Emmett, I think it worked wonders to help take the edge off of things to come for Edward. Jazz & Carlisle were great, but what Emmett said was my favorite. The book that Bella made for Edward brought tears to my eyes & when Edward finally bit Bella I was in heaven, truly blissed-out!

I left a post on the forum, and I was all set to leave a funny, little smart-ass comment about how hot this chapter was, but the ending has just thrown me over board.

We have waited so long for this moment, and these two have come such a long way from the beginning of the story. i can't help but cry when I think about it. Thank you so much for making this moment everything that it shoud be...sweet, and sad, and beautifully filled with love.

Yikes! I didn't think he was going to change her that way--I thought it would be more clinical, with Carlisle to supervise. The one good idea Meyer had in Breaking Dawn was administering his venom by injection rather than bite. More efficient.

I know he's got to stop, or you'll wind up writing a completely different story. Are you going to handle her transformation as part of this story, or something separate?

Still, death by vampire, being bitten while in the throes of mutual orgasm....kind of gives a whole new meaning to the phrase "a good death."

wow! loved it! you leave us with such a cliffie though! i can't wait to read your next chapter! i'm looking forward to how edward deals with her change and him reading her present! please don't leave us hanging too long! ;)

Lord I LOVE this story! I love the leather Edward scene too..Bella tied over the barstool and being spanked was very similar to an awesome lemon in The Red Line by Winndsinger over on FF. (Chapter 9 if you care to compare, but that one was more of a role playing rape fantasy..definitely worth a read if you haven't though). Oh and speaking of nonconsensual fantasies, that might be cool to add to the list. I know he's dominated her, but nonconsent is a bit different and I know a lot of us pervs get off on that hehe

Also..tsk tsk..Edward forgot to get the morphine in her before he bit..not like it would've worked though. Can't wait for an update. If the sex is this good when she's human, it's gonna get crazytown when she's unbreakable!! Yay!!

OH MY GOSH! I Don't know waht to do with myself right now. I'm kind of a mess, waiting for an update...I was reading this on FF, and freaked out when I foiund it continued further here :D You are awesome! I'm pleased that Bella gets he way in terms of her transformation! And, she's either bald, brazillian, or has e. c. shaved out. I hope our golden boy isn't too angsy while he reads, and I'm anxious to know what is in the book Bella gives him. WHAT HAPPENED TO THE MORPHINE! lol I'm hoping that #26 is next. Update soon!

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