Also feel free to make fanart. I post any and all fanart I recieve on my wall, FOREVER.

**Cues lighting strikes.**

-- On a side note. The reason the Noche Comic Series is coming out a year from now is because. I'm in art school at the moment, so if you like/hate the artwork as it is now. I have a year to improve. So wish me luck.

Yes the Noche Comic Series DOES have a plot. A rather solid one at that. Though it is my first run at doing a comic more so professionally so again.

I think some other peeps have covered some points I wanted to make. Overall it's good :> I like your pacing with the tic tocs, I think that patient sound effect added some more flavour to the mood. When it comes to the ruuuuumble I think it would be best to keep to the flow of the eyes, meaning that the 'r' should be at the top and the rest of the word slides downwards from that. It's not something drastically pulling back the story but it was just something I observed When the clock explodes I think the boooom can afford to be a bit bigger, more eye-catching etc.

When the guy with the black thing on his head says 'Hurry ... up', I think the pause between the words contradicts the point he's trying to make, and personally I think it would be better if it was just in one speech bubble. The script is cool though. I would point out though that the speech bubbles could also afford to be bigger; let the letters have more room to sit in. Right now they're looking kinda cramped.

Anything else... nope that's all I can think of to point out. Brownie points for you though for focusing so much on backgrounds. Being able to draw the scenery and establishing a clear setting is something that so many people overlook, so yeah, good on you for the effort :> Naturally as you work longer and study more at your art school you'll be better at body proportions and perspectives so I guess I'll just leave it there :> Good luck with this webcomic!

lol XD your welcome! and yeah...I know what you mean -.- some people it takes a few monthes.....some people *ahem, me* takes a year! 8D but your anatomy isn't actually that far off! you'll probably improve within 3 months if you practice at it! ^^