This is really great :) I wasn't 100 percent sure about it when I first started reading it... the opening wasn't all that gripping for me, but the interactions between Jared and Agni are really quite fun to read. It's grown on me.

I found myself 'aw'ing out loud numerous times and your description of their emotions really hit home for me in some parts. Now I'm even more curious to what they had a fallout over. I'm willing to wait forever for your next chapter (doesn't mean you should take forever xD) and I can honestly say you're a really good writer.

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