More Reflections

I was listening to Hounds of Love by Kate Bush–one of my favorite singers, anyway I always wanted to write a capture scene like the video. I wrote a chase scene for Tiger Lily Part Two, but it came across as too aggressive and didn’t fit Jonas, so it was scrapped. I also wrote an angry sex scene between Adrian and Tala after he got her back, but that was scrapped too. I still would love a hunted/ capture story, but I assume readers won’t like it. Or maybe I’m wrong?