Rin 'chan' is rather... a very typical crude girl...If u don't mind me saying so...XD But asie from that, I find your fic very interesting and well played, since you had to tell it from Hanabusa's POV. I have quite the hard time trying to put myself in character's shoes, but this, in my personal opinion, was well done! XD

Another thing, in the anime, Ichigo calls Satsuki by his last name, Hanabusa-kun. I'm not sure if that's different in the manga..

I see a lot of mistakes like these in fanfiction, and that's a shame. In Japan, you can see how close people are by looking at how they adress them. Changing this seems like the characters have gotten closer or the other way around.

good story..you had captured Hanabusa-kun's way of thinking..though i think the names were quite in a mess.. Asano Ichigo should be Amano Ichigo... and I think the K_ is Kashino though I am not sure...

hope there would be a second chapter~

ANIMELOVER chapter 1 . 3/21/2010

GREAT STORY! U MUST HAVE LOVED EPISODE 24 SINCE IT CONSISTED SOME SATSUKIXICHIGO SCENES. I KNOW I DID!

OMG! I love the ichigoxsatsuki pairing! Plz hurry on ur next fanfic! I can't wait! I'm a HUGE fan of yumeiro patissiere! This one kinda ended abruptly tho, o well hoo cares? It still rocked! I 3 SATSUKIxICHIGO!