First of all, I love it! Secondly, I like Aiden. There isn't much of him in this chapter, but he seems to be a nice guy. One thing that could help your story be slightly easier to read is if you had paragraphs and spaced the dialogue. Like,

"Pretty name," he said.

"Thanks," she replied.

It's just a suggestion. Other than that, it's an awesome story, and I can't wait until chapter three!