My personal feelings were that it was a little bit drag-y and you could hit your plot points harder and faster. The concept was interesting and you had some fun sets/costume loadouts, but as a whole it just didn't feel 'springy' on its feet. If you cut down what you have here into 2:30 and then with the remaining 2:30 show how the results of their actions somehow saved the business for the week.

On the whole. Congrats for making a channel 101 pilot! By just getting your crew together and making something, you're a whole hell of a lot farther along than many creative types I know and you should be proud of that. KEEP MAKING SHOWS!