I have a few suggestions. You misspelled 'connected' and maybe you could consider using all lowercase letters for the sub title, like in the official videos: [link] . You could also go for a different line than the standard one and choose one of the others the game devs have come up with. For instance, 'connection is power' as in [link] or 'turn out the lights'.

Those are just a few ideas of mine (and the devs) though. You still did a great job and I really like what you've done with the visuals.

what a nice suggestions thanks you for the tips, right now I will correct the orthography and change it to "connection is power" suits better with the wallpaper, thanks again. re-fresh in a few minutes