Ok a bit of constructive crit if I may? You're doing well. But as has been said you ought to concentrate on keeping time when you're playing against something else. This is imperitive for any drummer. You're going out of time on the fills, so lose those for the moment until you're ready to put them in without losing yourself. s for the solo section...well, I didn't bank on it going on quite that long...again when you're soloing in time, keep in that time as much as you can. Your flams are coming on nicely, and when you've practised the drum roll, sort of freetime based solo I'm sure that'll be good. Aim for a light touch with a smooth continuous feel to the drumroll. Just let it carry you away...if it's done well it should lull you to sleep... I think it's great that you're recording and practising like this, it'll really improve your playing no end if you keep at it.