http://ietf.cse.ucsc.edu:8080/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=181
------- Additional Comments From lisa@osafoundation.org 2005-12-30 16:10 -------
I can't follow the reasons for all the changes in that document, so it's hard
for me to tell what your (Julian's) intent is with the changes. I don't like
having all the normative text in section 8.1.5 -- that section was intended to
be an introduction to the topic and has gotten out of hand. I'd like to leave
that as an introduction because section 8.1 is already a large enough digression
from the actual methods we discuss in the rest of section 8. Other comments:
- This text proposed is inconsistent with issues you've raised before, with
regards to making 403 and 409 the only allowed error codes.
- the last paragraph in your proposal for section 8.1.5 is redundant with
earlier text
- Some of the changes (e.g. in section 8.2) are unrelated to this issue
- The guidance on creating one's own error codes was seemingly removed
- Some of the error code sections (from 8.2 to 8.12) were reorganized but
others remained organized differently. I haven't adopted these changes, is
there some reason for them?
- I don't agree that we should list the preconditions/postconditions without
suggesting what status code to use with. I find the formatting I've been using
clearer than that of the proposed change.
I'm making a number of modifications to the draft based on these proposals but
I'm sure we'll have to iterate.
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