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I hate to post this on a public forum, but I tried to set up a new account on the forums and kept failing the security check. I have no idea what I’m doing wrong, I don’t know what the “security check” is actually checking…

ANYWAY.

Panel 5 appears to have missed some editing. The spelling there is… …pretty bad. The other panels appear to be fine.

PLEASE feel free to delete this comment once you read it– you probably don’t want it here. If I could have PMed you in any way I would have done so, sorry.

Seconded. Hope my corrections don’t sound too obnoxious:
“This flimsy [noun missing] is highly entertaining, you monkeys have come a long way…. what is that? Why does Loki have such hugely ridiculous horns on his helmet? Even during his stupid headwear phase, the trickster [or Trickster] was never so… garish!”
“While this is highly entertaining and I wish to read more of these… comical books,
“I fail to see the relevance with Loki framing a misunderstood beast of great power…”

Obviously capitalisation isn’t important in all caps. Also, missing quotation mark is intentional, as the next line starts with a quotation mark from the same person. But those are all about my grammar. The spelling should be accurate.

I would say you could be right, but think of this as someone speaking vs what we know now. She is of old Norse mythology and not from our present. By definition of Head-ware she could be referencing about the ‘make’ of his headgear and not that it is actual head-wear.

Also she is calling him a Tricker vs Trickster. She is conveying his as a tricker of sorts. This is after all dialect from someone ‘not’ of our timeframe. That may be the intent of the writer and how people ‘butcher’ the language.

Some of you might be wondering why Jason keeps large piles of sand in his mind, next to his comic books.
The obvious answer is to discourage fallen Jedi from poking around in there. They find it’s coarse, irritating, and gets everywhere.

Looking forward to this storyline getting over. Hopefully if the comic continues after it, we’ll get back to furthering the main overall plot and some much better writing, or at least something on par with the older comics.

No offense to the artist, but I just wish Anne would come back or Ian would take money to draw it again. The current art is not awful, it just hasn’t felt like the old comic.