I like it, a once great hero for justice now a shadowy warrior seeking revenge. And using a shield as the main weapon very nice touch. Would you please review my champion concepts as well? Dante the Witch HunterRoland the Spell Knight, I've been trying to put a new faction in the game to counter LeBlanc's Black Rose

He sounds like a good champion. I will point out that he is a support and has no abilities that do damage to more than one enemy unit. (besides his ult)
I understand that he does not major in crowd control, but it is important for a support to have at least one AOE.

I suggest making his Q a skill shot where any enemies units that are "run over" are dealt damage and that if he hits a champion then they will bounce away from each other.

He sounds like a good champion. I will point out that he is a support and has no abilities that do damage to more than one enemy unit. (besides his ult)
I understand that he does not major in crowd control, but it is important for a support to have at least one AOE.

I suggest making his Q a skill shot where any enemies units that are "run over" are dealt damage and that if he hits a champion then they will bounce away from each other.

I'm really interested in your idea for Cain's Q, though I'm a little bit confused on how, exactly, to define it. Are you saying that when the enemy target is selected, Cain would charge toward the target while at the same time dealing damage to enemies in his path like Maiphite's ult, or Sejuani's Q? That's actually how I had his Q originally, but a lot of my friends were complaining about it's unoriginality. If I'm wrong, please feel free to correct me, and I'll see to making the change if deemed necessary. Thank you!