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Review:

maskedmuggle says:Wow! Sophia, for a first fan fic this is really good! I wish my first one was as good as yours! (: I'm aware this story is AU, so all I'm going to say about the characterisation is that it was really great how you kept their main personality traits and characteristics, and made it work with the AU plot!

Quite a simple plot, but I thought you wrote it really well. All the dialogue was actually written so well as well, and really enhanced the story. The ending just makes me go awww. Just an enjoyable read!
- charlotte :)

Author's Response: Lol, this really isn't good. I can see that now, even if I thought it was a year ago. :P Thanks for the nice comments despite all that!