Looks very cool to me.
But i don't think they have sneakers there... (so maybe sandals or low boots)
And he looks mighty complicated, are you sure you can draw him like that? I mean if u can, all the better. But that is a lot of little designs to draw 40 times in a row, and all.
The belt looks really good, maybe show a bit more belly to accent his youth. Face and hair is perfect for me.
Is he wearing bracelets or am i seeing it wrong? If he is, then fine. If it is armor then he shouldn't be wearing any yet.
Oh hey, have you thought about tattoos yet? I can't come up with any :shy:

Well, i wouldn't re-sketch already. I'm just little old me, have no real authority or anything. Wait till the rest sees it, then see what they say. But i'm pretty sure it's final character design. You did a really great job girl, i certainly think you kick some major drawing touchas! :thumbup::thumbup::thumbup:

I have absolutely no idea, Arctic came up with the character.
All i know is at some point he will be lancer extraordinaire and a generallooking hoipolloity type.
But when he's 13 or 14, i do not know.
He has no parents, plays soccer and has a french sounding name...
I'd say gangly. 14 year old football players are generally gangly. Long trousers and shirt, but unclean and krooked (no parents). An old cerimonial spear. Black or brown hair, no facial hair yet (maybe little ugly frenchstyle teenage moustache hehe), dark complexion (still caucasian), maybe a little dirt on his face or something. A know-it-all, so quite a linear face. Short hair i think, nothing too fancy. Or maybe sleek hair.

Phoenix needs a grandfather in the first chapter.
So very old version of phoenix (is it me that's wrong or is it you guys?) but with scars and gray hair, with a balding spot. A grandfatherly beard (but not long) and a very very friendly face. Twinkly eyes and all that. Wearing a simple cloak. He can be quite muscular if you want. Driving a coach.
Not a permanent character so no need to get into it too deeply.

Also Talon needs to be finalised i think. Or did i mis an earlier post?