Plus, I love the characters, people often forget that the main draw of a romance story is the characters, and not the dialogue or drama or jealousy. They only spice it up, not the essentials. So the minute I read it, i was hooked by Jace's determinate and Aylee's prejudice and apprehension with love.

But, perhaps what you did best was by giving it an uncertain ending. Sire, i am hungry gave him hope, but what happens after that...well...up to the imagination. And when we have to imagine, it's practically us imagining a happy ending for ten seconds before finding ways to kill the author for she did not write an epilogue where they grow old and are still married XD.

It's good that the writing is more straight forward and Aylee's dialogues involving cats and such, lovely.

I think you can do better (Trans: Make an epilogue or I will curse you XD) But, this is a nice story that i can grow to love. Not the best, but a warm nice and hopeful story.