This is a great story! But when you put in the depression and suicidal part, well... you kinda ruined it. Depression and suicidal thoughts are really serious and many people can be affected by just the mentioning of it, as I am. And also the fact that you put in the self-harming. I'm saying this so that you understand that putting those parts in can affect many people in depressing ways. So I ask you to please not put parts like that in any other stories, also the part where Kaname thinks he's sick and that no one would want him because of what he did. That can make a big affect on someone that did self-harm. Otherwise I love all you stories! :)

Velius chapter 8 . 12/23/2013

I found it funny how you put at the end where "Scarlet eyes traced every inch of Zero's flushed face before staring into his blue eyes. "Zero..." Loki breathed"
Isn't Zero eyes is amethyst? and shouldn't it be Kaname? o.o but i love it anyway :) good job!