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Review:

inkscribble says:Wow. This was amazing. I'm not used to reading second-person neither have I ever really enjoyed with but you did very, very well with it. It caught my attention from the first sentence and held it to the last one and much longer too. It was a bit confusing, but I guess that's somewhat of the point? I loved the little descirptions you had of how she would just throw away the flowers anyway, but keep one.

I didn't exactly get what had happened, did Victoire and Teddy do something? Honestly, not knowing what was going on made it even better. It was really amazing.

Author's Response: Second person doesn't get nearly enough love in fanfic, which makes it all the better that you enjoyed it here. You are right in that this is meant to be confusing - well, okay, not confusing, but very vague. The clues as to what happened are scattered throughout, mostly in the second half, so it was up to the reader to decide what happened. Victoire poisoned Dominique. That's all that I can say that is concrete; the rest is up to you! But thank you so, so much for this review! :)