bahahahahaha I loved this chapter! It really gave us more to make Heather seem like a flesh and blood person (even though you already do that very well). Filler chapters are good to give us readers a mental break. Too much information is never a good thing.

I'm kinda surprised that Oliver hasn't gotten too fed up with going so long and not making any moves on Heather. Well, any moves that she's okay with.

I'm really excited to see how all this plays out and if something big is going to happen (you made it seem like something might). Hurry up and write the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I was worried I was going off at a bit of a tangent with this chapter, but you've made me feel much better about it :)

I know, he does seem awfully patient, doesn't he? But you never know, his patience might just be running out ... ;)

I'm almost halfway there with the next chapter already, and I'd really like to have it done before I go back to university at the end of the month, so fingers crossed! Thanks again for the lovely review! :D

aw shit, so it begins. This is gonna get soo messy, but i'm excited to see how Hailey takes this new rumor. She seems to have quite a temper, i wont be surprised if someone gets hurt lol. Update soon!!

Author's Response: hahahah true I currently have a bit of writers block but I'll try to update as soon as it clears haha Thanks again for the review it means the world

This is really good!! I like how sirius and Hailey aren't telling their friends. What are they exactly? Friends with Benefits or something more? Hm. The plot thickens, can't wait for the next chapter!! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! To be fully honest with you I don't think a word exists for their relationship LOL I'm just waiting on a validation for the next chapter so it should be up soon :) thank you so much fro reading I hope you'll like the next chapter :)

Author's Response: OMG ! i have stopped writing this story a long time ago, thought no one was reading it. It's just a coincidence that i opened today to check :D but your review made me want to continue writing this story ^^ thank you so much !!

sooo, i dont really understand why it's dangerous for them to be together... From what you've written so far it doesn't sound like every night she has a panic attack from not drinking blood, or whatever. It seems to me that she lives a pretty normal life, for a vampire human thing.
I liked this chapter, just again with what i said before. i might be missing something with her vampire urges, i mean i am blonde so it happens sometimes. lol.

Author's Response: The main thing is that when they get passionate, she can't control her urges at all. It'll pop up later on. Once a vampire gets those feelings, they lose the human tendencies. That's when it gets a little dangerous. Does that make sense?

holy sh*t, i cant get over how good this is... i was gonna do a huge review at the end when i was done reading for tonight... but i just cant get over how good this is. your imagery is really good. don't stop writing, you have talent.

wow a bet, that makes things interesting. i think you should incorporate something else into the bet, not just money. that way its a bigger loss than just cash, especially since Draco's got tons of it. i'm really excited for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I was actually thinking of adding something later on...so keep reading! Right now, I'm just trying to decide what that is. I have one idea ... but I'm worried it might be a little too much. When you read those chapters, you can tell me what you think. Obviously, I talk too much :P so thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you liked them .

Author's Response: Yeah, that's how this story started for me actually. I have a thing for Draco and vampires. : ) I'm writing chapter five right now and I plan on submitting it tomorrow, so it should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing,you make me want to write faster : )

So sorry i couldn't review when this first came up! IT's really good, and someone's got a dirty little secret. :X hahaha this is really good! I'm excited to read the next couple of chapters.
BTW i'm loving the blondie nickname, its hilarious

You're a really good writer! Your story is off to a good start. It's funny, Blair seems so sarcastic for someone so invisible!
Try to give us a little more about Blair, where is she from? What's her family like? Right now I can't really imagine her as a person. Make her real and not just 2D.
Other than that this story is great!!!

Author's Response: Hey! Nearly a year later and I'm back writing again- about time! I took in what you said and I'm trying to flesh out Blair a little more, hopefully it's ok! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

Its a good start try giving us a little more background information. I like the idea of a magical beings orphanage, now expand! I'm excited for the next chapter

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! My first review, I'm so excited. Thanks so much for taking the time to review my chapter, I am working on the second chapter right now, and I will definitely work on putting more background into it. Let me know what you think of that one too please? I would really appreciate it.

Team Percy al the way. Oliver sounds like bad news, I never really liked him (even though his accent is incredible) but still. Really excited to see how Percy's gonna cope with all of this. O.o
Keep writing, you're really good! (don't let anyone tell you any different)

Author's Response: Yay for Team Percy! But I do love Oliver too. Thank you so, so, so much for your compliment about my writing; it's what I want to do with my life so I'm really flattered you like it. This was a lovely review!