Driving under the summer sun, and the GPS is telling me to make a U-turn...

Wait, what would have happened if your opponent didn't stupidly Substitute against Infernape one last time? It'd kill Infernape. And Darmanitan won't be able to KO Latias at 100%, and he could just Recover scout the damage that you do do. You did your part, but you definitely had help from your opponent.

Nice presentation and format and commentary however, just go for a warstory of a competent opponent next time.

6.5/10 to 7.5/10. Pretty decent. The commentary wasn't stellar, but it worked well enough. The format was kind of played, but it was definitely readable. I think this story shows the potential to write a really good one under the right circumstances.

I liked this warstory. It's commentary was great, and the poke's you were using were interesting (It's strange how I never see dramatitan much anymore) the only thing was after you owned heatan I was wondering if you had gone insane by not spaming CB flareblitz.

Other than that I loved this warstory so I give this a 8.9/10 and a luvdisc

OK I forgot to account the leftovers recovery if the opponent Dragon Pulsed Infernape. So 71 + 6 = 77% health for Latias when Darmanitan enters.

However, Darmanitan is doing 72% to Latias on average, so it's not like Latias can stall it out with Roost. Latias is 2HKOed 96% of the time with Flare Blitz lol.

The best scenario, which is to Dragon Pulse rather than Roosting, would still not do enough damage to kill Darmanitan. Assuming that Darmanitan received recoil from hitting Latias 76% (just enough for her to survive) and from previous recoil from Skarmory (31% of Skarm's max health), Darmanitan would have lost 126 HP, which is only 35% of its max health. The most that Latias can do is with Dragon Pulse is 57%. That adds up to 92% of Darmanitan's health.

I would say this thread is going to follow it, but I'm not sure if the mod's will archive two stories in such a short time regardless of how amazing they are. Either way, great job and I love seeing what people are doing with sun.

I would say this thread is going to follow it, but I'm not sure if the mod's will archive two stories in such a short time regardless of how amazing they are. Either way, great job and I love seeing what people are doing with sun.

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No, he meant he deleted his first thread for this warstory yesterday. It was deleted in about 20 minutes as per his request, he said "Edit: Nevermind, I don't want to half-ass everything" in place of the original post.