Great article! I tweaked your headline, separated some paragraphs, and edited for style. I noticed that the article was originally published somewhere else, so only keep the changes you want—I don't want it to mess up what you have written somewhere else. Keep up the awesome work!

Couldn't help but notice that you are a fellow State fan. Since we've been through the rough times together, mind looking at some of the stuff I've written to cover our Dawgs? Let me know what you think, cause I'm always up for some critiquing.