ZOMG! I can't believe it's over. What an epic! Best TT fic ever! I can't believe I've laughed AND cried out loud so many times during one fic. Oh, and my favorite line this chap: "I want to be better. I still love you, you stupid fucker." Leave it to me to roar with laughter during inappropriate, serious moments. The line:"“I thought about something,” Raven stated.“I’m very proud of you.”" Totally made my day. You should pursue a career as a novelist. :D Well, back to my editing. I'm hoping some of you can rub off on me.

Dude! I knew it was coming, but it was still so sudden. I think I almost cried twice these past 2 chapters. I can't believe he would leave. I gotta say I do love the extra attention you gave Robin lately.

Oh, and do they mention the name Koria in the series? I can't remember them calling Star that to save my life and it took a while for me to catch on. Cartoon network is playing this now on the weekends here. Yay!

OMG! The drama! The drama! Just when we think it's starting to get quiet you throw in something shocking. A pregnant Raven, I'm scared. I loved the Gotham bit. Alfred is awesome isn't he? At least she and Bruce patched things up a tinsy bit. The dad bit was so adorable. I wibbled.

There were a couple things I'm not quite clear on. You mentioned Robin laughing at the fact that Raven was wearing Star's pj's. I believe he could tell the shape of the clothing she was wearing, but it would be impossible for him to see details such as colors or teddy bears. Although if he was told she was borrowing the clothes he would absolutely die! HEE!

The other part thing was Star's reaction to the wedding ring. While it was my favorite part, she said it was a ring to ward off the disease yes? If Raven had the disease she wouldn't need to wear it. (Not that it's her culture anyway) But if she has the ring it's safe and Star doesn't need to scream yes? I think... It could be that I'm reading these wrong.

Wow, I can't believe how long it's taking me to read this. I just love it. Especially the little details in Star's scrapbook. (‘Robin isn’t the stalker of the Teen Titans. Starfire is.’) Poor Robin. It's not bad enough you have to blind him, but you just had to have him run into a wall. XD That's just twisted. *giggles*