I used to write a lot of poems. Many many poems short long sweet dark.... everything. The words would just flow onto my paper.... I have forgotten this feeling ever since i began to be more busy and busy.... worrying about financial problems, love, family.... Reading this poem really struck a chord with me. Thanks. It felt like I was 15 again

ar.colton 4 years ago from Vancouver, B.C.

What a beautiful poem. I don't usually enjoy reading free verse poetry but this was lyrical and well metered. Very nice. I got a little chill too. I'm bookmarking this one so I can read it again!

B. A. Williams 4 years ago from USA Author

Ar

Thanks so much for the compliment and glad you enjoyed it. I will be checking your site out as well.