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Trixie arranges for Octavia to help Fluttershy prepare for a concert, but when the two don't get along, the showmare must use everything she knows about friendship to save their relationship as well as the show. ·GrassAndClouds2

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Neigh Orleans, the city on the bayou, and the most haunted city in Equestria. Or so the legends say. When Trixie finds that the bodies of her relatives have been stolen, she and her friends must brave the city to get them back. A Lunaverse story. ·GreyGuardPony

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Trixie is very bored. In an effort to relieve said boredom, she is reading her textbooks on magic. This is a very bad idea. The result? A spell goes wrong and Ponyville ends up with two Trixies, or at least two pieces of Trixie. A Lunaverse Story. ·Zeroxion564

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A dalek appears in Equestria - not just any dalek, but the one that had been corrupted by Rose Tyler's DNA. It has a choice of life as a pony, or dying, and finds that it cannot bear to die a second time. Thus begins a strange adventure... ·RainbowDoubleDash

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Trixie appears once more in Ponyville, babbling about how she is supposed to be the Element of Magic and how Celestia is the evil Tyrant Sun. Has she gone insane? Or is something larger happening? ·RainbowDoubleDash

A long, long time ago, the necromancer Grogar conquered the city of Tambelon for his own nefarious purposes. Working together, the princesses Celestia and Luna were able to banish Grogar and the fallen city into the realm of Shadow, never to be seen again...or so they thought.

Two thousand years later, Tambelon and Grogar return - and the world may never be the same...

Wow wow very nice start to this. A bit disappointed that you didn't finish Crisis first though as I think Twilight would be an interesting character to have along for this party as part of her community service. Still this looks like it'll be an awesome read can't wait to read more. Thanks very much for sharing.

That was fantastic; I loved the changes you've brought about in Corona, she's still clearly similar to her "zedd" incarnation, but we can see/feel how she's managed to clam down and regain control, which makes her significantly more interesting and practical, I liked her treatment of Zecora and her other minions here and her thoughts regarding the prophecy, it does actually seem a reasonable conclusion to make.

I wonder who/what Grogar did make a pact with? Some fool outside seeking power and helping summon him back into the world... Bray? The build up and background for Grogar was epic and terrifying as well, can't wait to see him in the flesh. Interesting idea with Luna wanting to punish him by sending him to the shadows, it works well. (Though hardcore sounds a bit odd form the Salamanders) Interesting with Corona viewing Cadence as a false Alicorn, why is that? She has lived for 1000 years.

Good idea with Tambelon having a large number of Donkey's as well, the scenery descriptions for this chapter were fantastic! I really liked the ending as well, reaffirming that Celestia has no intention of killing her little sister, I knew she wouldn't but it's nice to see it demonstrated and her desire to protect her subjects and those under her aegis.

Will it be a three-way battle, with Corona make a temporary alliance with Luna, I don't know! Overall this was an awesome chapter, I can't wait for more.

"Imposter alicorn" as in Corona mostly just remembers her as the upstart alicorn that claimed she was Celestia, not as in she doubts whether or not Cadance is an alicorn (alicorns can identify each other on sight, unless they're actively taking steps to hide their nature).

As for the ZALGO moment up there...I think what it says is something like...

Ok, Grogar seems to be this universes' equivalent of Nekron and Black Hand. This makes me worry (with good reason I might add) that Tirek is the Darkseid equivalent and the rainbow of darkness is his version of the Anti-Life equation (and somehow that makes him worse than DarkSeid for some reason). Don't ask how I came to those conclusions, I have weird Head-Cannon about strange things

I really enjoyed this. It was a good opening chapter. Not only did it set the stage for what we could expect but it also showed us what Corona was up to which was really good.

I also thought that having Corona give Grogars back story was a very nice touch. Not only does it give the reader much needed back story but it also gives us a bit more time to delve in to Corona's state of affairs as well as the state of her mind. And by the looks of it things are going to get a lot worse before they get better

Well, she might yet be cured of her insanity and might, as the centuries progress, be welcomed into Equestria Proper (I suspect that she'll be a houseguest of a certain imposter for a decade or five) but it's going to be a rocky road for her. As for the Sun's Glory being dimmed bit, I think that we're looking at it right now....she don't get her glory back until she's sane again.

This is very interesting. Although I would have preferred to see the thrilling conclusion of Crisis first. And I really would like to see post-Crisis Twilight and what she'd be up to, seeing as how she's essentially had her world view turned inside out.

Don't take this as unpleasable criticism. This story is bound to be good, just like all your other stories, and having it carefully planned out beforehand is a very good idea. I don't know Grogar from Adam, but I assume I'll find out the part he plays in this universe.

It's here it's here it's here!!!! So excited!!! Loved the first chapter and the ton and mood it sets. Very heavy Corona focused chapter, wasn't expecting that, but it worked very well. Can't wait to see what Tambelon will be like and what Luna really has planned

>>29028772902877 Yeah, that was my exact prediction, but I put it more vaguely to hedge my bets a little. But yes, I expect Corona to "release him early" so that she can kill him "before he can bargain with Luna".

>>29010032901003 What are they talking about, it says two thousand...oh wait the short description. *clicky clicky* Oh. Oooh. Oooohhhhhhhhh. Ohhhhhhhh. This is gonna hurt, isn't it?