First note.

Well, I'm writting here for the first time. I want to practice my English because in the future it would be necessary to know English language well. Also, I think, that it would be great to talk with foreign people and it will be nice, if you help me with it. :)

Corrections

First note.

Well, I'm writting here for the first time. I want to practice my English because in the future it would be necessary to know English language well. Also, I think, that it would be great to talk with foreign people and it will be nice, if you help me with it. :)

Well, I'm writing here for the first time. I want to practice my English because in the future it would be necessary to know the English language well. Also, I think, that it would be great to talk with foreign people and it will be nice, if you help me with it.

Well, I'm writing here for the first time. I would like to practice my English, because it will be necessary for me to know English well. Also, I think that it would be great to speak to foreigners and it would be nice, if you would help me with English. :)

Well, I'm writing here for the first time. I would like to practice my English, because in the future it would be necessary to know English language well (это предложение грамматически правильно, но естественее будет - because it will be necessary for me to know English well) . Also, I think (запятая не нужна перед "that") that it would be great to speak toforeign people (foreigners) and it would be nice, if you would help me with English (лучше не использовать местоимение "it", когда вы указывали на несколько существительных перед ним. Такую ошибку делают даже носители, поэтому ничего страшного вам).. :)

Well, I'm writting here for the first time. I want to practice my English because in the future it could (or will) be necessary to know English language well. Also, I think, that it would be great to talk with foreign people and it will be nice, if you help me with it. :)

Congrats! you speak very good, actually. And you are very pretty too (no offense)