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I'll have to take your word for it - that "my soul is hidden in my elbow and beneath my knee" - unique way of portraying a soul, but I liked it. Poem flowed nicely and kept the reader's interest. Nice job.

It seems to me that you lost your flow with the last two verses. Nevertheless I particularly liked the verse about the truth I speak, the character I show. How easily the faith can be confused with the peripheral when it is that which is within that truly counts.

I'm dipping into the archives a bit. :) This is such a charming poem! I love the simplicity of voice and the unique take on 'soul' here. Welcome to the challenge! I'm looking forward to reading more of yours.