It is very nice poem to have and is very nicely written. I congratulate the person who wrote this poem, for her bright future.

Nov 12, 2012Rating

soul musicby: Tanya Kornakova

I seem that poem is sensuous and at that same time profound, thoughtful and at that same time decisive. Like two at one. Like quiet and calm music with vital chord. Like colorful painting with delicate brushstroke. Very amazingly!

Nov 06, 2012Rating

Moving forward through the dayby: charlene

I love this poem. The comparison with nature, the dawn and our emotional ability to cope with life's trials is both lovely and rings true to experience.

Nov 06, 2012Rating

Soft and Lovelyby: Jeanne

This poet "softly" takes the reader through the cold, numbing quality of grief, so nicely reflected in the winter sky, and brings us to the relief of hope, "white and gold".I love the repetition of "gold" in the next stanza, as well as the final line of that stanza—what so many grapple with at one time or another—"And will it matter if I cry or pray."The final line is truly "bold" with its unexpected rhyme, but because the speaker is still "trembling", the poem stays "soft" and honest to the sentiment that the journey to hope is a difficult daily process.Simply lovely.

Nov 04, 2012Rating

A movement from doubt to hopeby: Joan

I love the finale. You expect that the last line will end with a rhyme to the line before. But you startle us and that final word 'bold' jumps out at you, echoing the word 'hold' in the line before. It conveys a determination to 'seize the day.'

This poem swells with movement from doubt to hope.

Nov 04, 2012Rating

Amazingby: Sharona

Amazing and inspiring. Every beautiful word in this poem came from heart. I feel that I could relate to a lot of what you wrote.