Larry i have also read that some ladies over dosed on copious cups of tea and suffered ill effects tremors and headaches, so much for calming down in the blitz and doodle bugs — unknown

Sensually might be better. I like this, the tight woman dying to break out into the wanton she is inside. — Isabelle5

I love beetroot lips. During the war, women did what they needed to do, with lack of petroleum to make lipstick! Beet juice did the tricks on lips and cheeks. — Isabelle5

Isabelle how can this poem be made more sensual ? Why would it need this treatment ? Clearly the writer is only recalling what he was aware of as a younger person. Adult fantasties are another league — unknown

She wasn't saying the poem should be more sensual. Read line 3 - that seems to be using sensual to define made-up. Are the girls sensual or are they sensually made-up? — unknown