This is how I see it, so don't hate on me.
Pheonix - I can tell you're a smart kid, but I think you're trying to be too witty with your verse and it's not pulling through. Half of these kids have no clue what 'torrent', 'errant' or 'acquisition deceleration' is. you're trying to do TOO much, and it's just hurting you in the end. Multi's : VERY FEW have the capabilities to pull off 9 syl multi's and have it flow/make sense, you can't. I applaud the effort, but please don't ever go higher than 5-6 syl multis in a battle again. Using bigger words forces your multi and if you don't pull it off, it'll kill the entire bar. Use more, smaller words rather than 1-2 large ones. It'll flow better, and chances are, whyme better. You had punches, but they came off lighter. Overall, not a BAD verse, because you do have talent, I just think you are capable of much more.
sWORDz - Solid verse with decent flow, good use of multi's throughout and the punches were thought out. I thought the whole gun/beat yo ass concept is basic, but it was executed well.
Fair Vote, no hate. Voted: Phoenix: 7 / sWORDz: 8
Posted on: 2012-07-01 13:29:26

SA_ANZBasic Member

both had decent drops both have a different style which is not a bad thing but my vote goes too.. Voted: Phoenix: 8 / sWORDz: 9
Posted on: 2012-07-01 22:08:51

Two Completely Different Styles, One Was Really Pushing Wit The Vocabs, The Other Was Str8 To The Point Wit Punches...Both Flow Was Quite Equal But Decision Was Based On The Harder Attack. Fair Vote In.
Propz To Both. Voted: Phoenix: 7 / sWORDz: 7
Posted on: 2012-07-01 23:28:59

CONCEALED VOTE... My choice brought some nice concepts and even though his multies were a little fucked he still delivered with some nice execution and his set-ups were cool but need to relate to his punch a little more... Also he had one of the best bars in the verse...... His opponents verse had a nice flow to it and 1 or 2 nice lines but was not consistent with good punches.. He provided a good amount of filler but had some nice multies... His set-ups and execution were lacking due to there not being to much creativity put into a lot of his lines.. Overall this was a very close battle and could have been better... Votes based off of consistency... Voted: Phoenix: 7 / sWORDz: 7
Posted on: 2012-07-02 09:07:26