... You keep making these fics that simply REQUIRE back-stories and yet refuse to give them! Do you understand how frustrating that is? ... You're evil. Genius. But evil. And I want to know what his reasons were, damnit!

This was very interesting, touching, sad, but then again I suppose that angst stuff usually is. Your writing style absolutly amazing. Do you write Neji Tenten stuff? I was just wondering if you fancied the pairing. Update more stories and chapters soon.

if you got a lot of chapters... one in the morning and one in the afternoon will get most people to review 2x unless they have work that spans both those times... :-) This was pretty good.

dobyuk princess chapter 1 . 12/5/2004

o don't get down from lack of reviews! it's probably because there's school and stuff...( we can't lose your talent!

on with the review...

good as usual yet may i suggest, when you write longer ficts to maybe shorten your descriptions? sometimes it's good but it's nice to keep things simple. just a suggestion is all, so don't let it rub ya the wrong wayP