A long time since I visited, so no idea! The juxtaposition is a nice idea: but this feels rather cramped width-wise for reasons I can't quite articulate. I think subjects like this work best with extreme formality of perspective and composition, or else jarring asymmetry; this falls between the two.

A long time since I visited, so no idea! The juxtaposition is a nice idea: but this feels rather cramped width-wise for reasons I can't quite articulate. I think subjects like this work best with extreme formality of perspective and composition, or else jarring asymmetry; this falls between the two.[a href=\"index.php?act=findpost&pid=152364\"][{POST_SNAPBACK}][/a]

What you ´can´t quite articulate,´ I think, is that there´s no prime subject: simply part of a crane or other such construct and part of an old building. Per se, as in that manner, not a subject, hence not a picture.

I still don't find it that strong, but you may try photoshopping it a bit to lighten the snakes and to try to make them stand out more so there are a focal point. BUT it has to be subtle and keep their texture.

I guess the exercise is to get more impact out of the snakes and their response to the encroachment.