In chapter 2, I forgot to mention how I loved that he screamed at none other than Pansy's face looking down at him. HILARIOUS!

And this one... his comments about "don't you do background checks or something..." I thought I was going to fall off my chair laughing!

I love how you have expertly penned his sarcasm!

This is wonderful... can't wait to read more!

Mine should be coming up again soon... I made a stupid error in using a line of asterisks instead of inserting a line... and they rejected it. It caused it to start in the queue all over again. Lesson learned. I expect it to be up later today or tomorrow.

And one last thing... You ALWAYS have the most beautiful banners! WOW! Do you pay for them?

Yours,
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the humour and that I got his sarcasm right, it just wouldn't be the same without Draco's sarcasm lol!

More shall be up after my challenge pieces have been validated :)

I can't wait to read the next chapter of yours! I was going to wait till it had been validated, but I wanna say that I was so not disappointed in the last chapter, I loved it. It just made me sad and I hope it has a happy ending :) I'm sorry if you thought that I was :(

No, I don't pay for them :). There's a link on the right of HPFF that says the dark arts. You make an account there and request one lol. The banners people there make are amazing! I'm glad you like mine :)

So far it's good however I keep on thinking of the movie of: Ghost of Girlfriends Past. It's SO Draco/Hermione. Check it out if you want too. :).

Anyway 10/10.

Alonia187.

Author's Response: Sorry for the error, I must have missed it when I read through it :(. After my challenge pieces have been validated, I will go back and edit it.

OMG, I love Ghosts of Girlfriends Past and I agree with you; it is SO Draco/Hermione! I wanted to write a fic based on it so much but I already had Draco's Christmas Carol (wrote this in like 2009 lol). I may write one in the future, maybe a different pairing (Rose/Scorpius Maybe :))

*nods* yup. Still loving it :D. and that is soo sweet of Draco! :). 10/10.

Okay onto the next chapter but could you pass this along to anyone?

just so you know, around 1 of 11 readers review. for you other 10 out there who plan on just leaving this story without reviewing, just take a moment to write atleast one word. if you think that my fanfic is good than help other people think it might be good too and stop at my crappy summary and think 'hey, this has a lot of reviews, maybe i'll give it a chacnce.'

if more people reviewed then fanfiction would be a better place becouse of it and more writers would feel inspired to continue incomplete stories. as a reader, do your part and as a writer, help others out cuz you know how good it feel to get a review, be it praise or even flames. its just nice to know how many people are really reading my story.

Thank you,
Alonia187.

Author's Response: Thank you! and I will copy your message onto the end author's note on my one-shot, Regret :)