its like taking banannas, pineapple, strawberry, oranges, and kiwi's sticking them in a blender on high and asking someone to tell which are the bannanas. Its a %$$$XOX%' mess.

Gee, thanks for the 'constructive critism' (100% Sarcasm). I'm not asking you to say something nice about my work or asking you to enjoy it, but there is a difference between politely critiquing one's work in a civilized way rather then trying to make it look as degrading as possible. You shouldn't have the right to critique something if you're not going to do it in a formal, literate way and I pitty the next author who has to hear what you've got to say.

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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 1:14 pm Post subject: Story

Hello again, Greek Elite, I printed your series, 1-7 at least, because I never get the time to read them only at school and at friends' houses. But I don't get the role of Betronus and Lib, I get Kasket, Kalno, Ralno, and Alei. (I hope you don't mind me using the short name, Hunter's names are long) But I just don't get them, Brutes hate Elites, ever since they were admitted into the Covenant they have been rivals, and the Jackals are just full of betrayal. Hopefully maybe I will begin to like Lib and Betronus, unless they turn on Alei and Baxter. (That would be awesome)
Until Then.

Hello again, Greek Elite, I printed your series, 1-7 at least, because I never get the time to read them only at school and at friends' houses. But I don't get the role of Betronus and Lib, I get Kasket, Kalno, Ralno, and Alei. (I hope you don't mind me using the short name, Hunter's names are long) But I just don't get them, Brutes hate Elites, ever since they were admitted into the Covenant they have been rivals, and the Jackals are just full of betrayal. Hopefully maybe I will begin to like Lib and Betronus, unless they turn on Alei and Baxter. (That would be awesome)
Until Then.

If your talking real-life-if-this-story-were-real purpose then there's a simple answer. Betronus is the pilot of this 'gang' or squad. Nobody else is such a good pilot at Betronus, besides, he's a brute, brute's pilot ships mostly. Betronus is also Alei's secondary back up for brute strength whenever it calls for it. It is clear that Brutes hate Elites but these two share a friendly rivalry where they constantly see who is the greater of the two in friendly competition. Lib, Lib is Betronus' assistant. Lib is a crafty Jackal who's expertise ranges from Sniping, Flanking, and Front Line. Lib is essential to the squad's wit and creative killing. Lib is the shadiest charecter of the squad I admit but Betronus and him are tight as you can tell and Alei accepts him. Now if your talking about a literacy purpose for the two charecters, it's to build plot and make the story more diverse. That's all i really have to say about the two. I hope this clarrifies some things