You know, I don't think I've *ever* read a Naruto fic where Mikoto isn't idealized in some form. The blame for the Uchiha treason and resulting massacre is almost invariably laid at the feet of Fugaku, with a bit of Danzo and Madara thrown in. The rare fic that actually bothers to make Mikoto a character at all seem to make her a 'best friend forever' with Kushina. I haven't read the originals closely enough to know if this is canon, but I like your portrayal a *lot* better. It just fits, to give such traits to the mother of both Itachi and Sasuke. Immensely talented, yes, but dedicated first and foremost to advancing the status of her clan above that of the rest of the village. Excellent chapter, and a great fic overall.

This story is a tad bit dated, but of course, you know that. Shisui isn't quite as oblivious (far from) as he seems, although five years ago he may as well have been. If only we knew everything, right?