It looks way over sharpened and blown out. The eyes look way over processed. I can see a lot of artifacts (spelling) below the eyes and around the eyebrows. I would also have moved the model away from the background. Very pretty model!
Hope this helps!

I agree with with steve, over sharppend in some spots, move away from the backdrop some to help blur it out. Go with a strapless top as well next time, the straps add nothing to the photo. Other than that when are you comming to South Carolina for a shoot? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

Here is what I notice that could be improved upon. There are creases and what looks like a fold in the material behind you, plus it would appear that the shot was done with a camera flash. Try the same shot with a better background and some type of studio lights to help create some shape with light and shading.