So far so gd. Style of the 70s American movie poster.Just need to improve more on the shading.Do you hv the colour version for this illustration?I believe it will look even better. Nice work! Keep up the good work!

Thank you so much for the comments :)I also notice that some shading and lighting still need to improve more after I submitted to the designer...too late to change :( It was a tough work cause I only got 2 days to work on it but after this job...I notice that I like to draw hair :)