I don't like it. The background drone isn't going anywhere and doesn't take me anywhere either, it's just.. there, overall it doesn't sound like you've put much thought into progression, buildups and releases of tension and expectations as per my usual C&C.

The break sounds strange like it's full mono. IMO you should "expand" those hats. Also the vocals are hurting my ears, you could easily fix that with some good headphones and an EQ but be careful and don't turn the volume up too much