You've nailed the overall form and the hair seems to flow, though for a 3rl the lines look heavy, suggesting the needles penetrating too much. This injects too much ink and if it hits below the dermis it effectively flows / spreads.

The grey wash is a bit tentative and (I believe) if you went back in with a strong black, particularly in the hair you could really lift the whole piece. This is about achieving a wider tonal or value range - deep black to flesh / white. Identify the darkest areas and hit with black, creating more contrast.

Whippet wrote:You've nailed the overall form and the hair seems to flow, though for a 3rl the lines look heavy, suggesting the needles penetrating too much. This injects too much ink and if it hits below the dermis it effectively flows / spreads.