^_^ It might be an better idea the let the ogre appears with speedlines behind the redeyed figure. On the second frame more ogre with only speeldlines for the movement in and out of the arm. frame 4 the pulled back arm near the chest area with the pin maybe a few diection lines to guide us towards the needle.
The last frame can be a little more dramatic with a freeze frame in mid air while falling towards us and a stunned look. As for the layout frame 1 and frame 5 (