Hey everyone, this is my first attempt at any sort of RP character creation. I like to think in lists so this outline format might be a little odd.

Identity:-Name: Carter “Lucky” Abbot. The name “Lucky” is his K-9 unit nickname. Contrary to popular belief, he is far from lucky.-Age: Approximately 25 in dog years. His birthday is July 12th.-Gender: male-Breed: Shetland Sheep dog/Malamute Mix-Neighborhood: Blue Peak Shore (Tourist)

Physical Apperance:-Height: A little over average height for a Shetland Sheepdog, not quite as tall as a Malamute-Weight/body build: Stocky thick build thanks to sled dog genetics. Prone to putting on weight and tries to keep it off as hard as he can, though it still creeps on occasionally.-Fur: Black with white belly

General Personality Traits: -Cynical and enjoys self depreciating humor, especially when it comes to his disabilities.-Intuitive thinker and is fairly book smart.-His most important possession is his dad's lucky dog tag, to which he attributes what little luck he has in any situation. Has almost religious devotion to the trinket and is incredibly superstitious about his luck.

Background:Lucky was born in Juneau Alaska and moved with his owner's to their hometown in Dupont, Louisiana. Unlike a good amount of dogs he grew up with most of his extended family. His owners kept his parents and a few dogs from each of their litters. His mother is a Shetland Sheepdog from Georgia named Mary Abbot and his father is a native born Alaskan Malamute Husky named Keitl “Kei” Abbot. He is the eldest of his siblings, of which he has four brothers and two younger sisters. Among his friends he is infamous for his incredibly bad luck, if something can go wrong it usually does when he is involved. For example, when he was younger he permanently damaged his knee in a bizarre trampoline incident, he doesn't speak of it beyond that. He joined K-9 when he was fairly young, had to work past his bad knee at the academy and developed extreme perseverance as a result. On the downside he will push himself until he can't push any more.

Within his local K-9 unit he is a qualified “Sniffer” and “urban patrol dog." Sniffers are dogs used for the ability to track a scent and Urban Patrol basically keeps an eye on criminal hot spots out on the street.

Other info:-odd Habits include: paces when waiting, likes to hold things when he's stressed, chews on something when he thinks.-Walks with a slight limp due to his leg.-Always needs to be where the action is and can't get enough of social settings. -Enjoys Green color motifs. Not big on yellow however-A big eater, not afraid to try any kind of food.-A classic literature buff, when push comes to shove, however, he prefers nonfiction.-Enjoys all sorts of out doors type activities, used to camp often until an incident involving a bear, a canoe, and a model airplane.

Strengths: Over all a very open and friendly dog with a firm control on his temper. Physically he is quite athletic and strong. Hard to keep back when he sets his mind on something.

Weaknesses: Knows no such thing as personal space, due in part to his large family, might come off as nosy and too up front when talking to some people. Quite clumsy and a bit of a walking hazard due to size and weight. Will work until he physically is incapable of doing anything.

Strength: 9 “If there is one thing I am blessed with in this big sled dog body, it is that I can throw my weight around with relative ease.”Perception: 6 “Being on the Urban Patrol squad teaches a guy a thing or two about keeping track of his surroundings, lest the bad guy gets away.” Endurance: 7 “My leg makes things unbearable after a few hours of activity, any time after and I have to grit my teeth to the end.”Charisma: 6 “The fastest way to rid myself of strangers in life is to talk to everyone I meet.” Intelligence: 7 “There are plenty of people out there smarter than me, but you don't have to be a genius if you can remember everything you read. And boy do I love to read.” Agility: 4 "The size and bad leg kind of end up a hindrance for that whole running thing." Luck: 3 “Yup, and that's with my Dad's lucky tag. I once visited Waterproof Texas and it was hit with a hurricane the day I showed up.”

If there are any questions or if I need to change anything feel free to to tell me so.

Here's his color

Thank you!

_________________At the end of the day I often think about what I have done for the world. What I have changed, perhaps made better or worse. I then sit at a computer for hours and look at pictures of cats.

The main color of Allison's coat is very pale grey, almost white. From the very bottom of her neck and down is brown, and her tail is long, sleek, and dark brown. Her legs are brown, except for her paws, which are white. Her hind paws are white. The area on her muzzle, cheeks, and around her eyes are brown, with a patch of black underneath her eyes. On the right side of her muzzle, it is black. Her ears are dark brown, and one of them has a chunk missing. A small patch of pink is underneath her nose. Her eyes are wide and hazel. Her collar is dark green, and the tag is the British flag.

-Background-Allison was born in London, England. Her parents worked at a coffee shop in England, but it was shut down after 2 years since Allison's parents put an illegal brand of sugar in their coffee. They moved to Blue Peak Shore for a fresh new start. Her parents struggle to maintain their new jobs- selling houses - and to keep their pet, Allison, happy. Allison misses England dearly, since she had tons of friends there, and loved their coffee. Her parents gave her American coffee, and Allison immediately fell in love with it. Allison, now living in Blue Peak Shore, has forgotten all about England, since the only thing she has to worry about now is making new friends, and if her parents take away her coffee maker.

-Personality-Allison, despite her small size, acts very big and large. She is brave and loud-spoken, and isn't afraid to speak her mind. When you first meet her, she may seem pushy and annoying, but when you get to know her she is very sweet and caring. Allison cares for all, and will jump in to save her friends.

Other Notes:-She is from London, England and has a strong British accent.-She loves coffee.-She has a fear of heights.-Allison loves the rain, and when it is storming she is likely to sit outside and play in the puddles and rain.-Allison has a scar on her ear from trying to reach the cookie jar when she was only a kit. The jar fell, and glass flew everywhere, including slicing off some of her ear. Allison views the scar as a sign, and has a strong fear of glass things.-She hates mirrors and the dark.

SPECIALSTR-3PER-6END-5CHA-9INT-6AGI-4LUC-5

I think I'm supposed to post it here. This is her color.

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Sat Dec 01, 2012 3:22 am

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Re: PF - Blue Peak Shore OOC

Nice character, but there are some thing that need to be fixed:1. 54 points on her SPECIAL. Lower them to 422. no background3.

Fuzz Wrote:

Allison views the scar as a sigh, and has a strong fear of glass things.

you mean that the scar is a sign, right?

EDIT: everything is fixed now.

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Her paws are brown, except for her paws, which are white. Her hind paws are white.

...Wut?

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Sat Dec 01, 2012 1:07 pm

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Re: PF - Blue Peak Shore OOC

RockstarRaccoon Wrote:

Fuzz Wrote:

Her paws are brown, except for her paws, which are white. Her hind paws are white.

...Wut?

Ah, sorry. That made no sense whatesoever. <.<

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Sat Dec 01, 2012 8:42 pm

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Re: PF - Blue Peak Shore OOC

Derp GM is derp.Guys I don't know how I'd do without you.

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Sun Dec 02, 2012 1:38 am

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Re: PF - Blue Peak Shore OOC

Just a quick question. Am I allowed to post on the roleplay topic?

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Tue Dec 04, 2012 8:32 am

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Re: PF - Blue Peak Shore OOC

well, the OOC is made to post any technical question and various observations. Occasionally, a player can post ((OOC: bla bla bla) inside the RPG thread to make sure his post was correct or for some quick note game-related. This is not to be abused or the OOC and the game start mingling.

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Tue Dec 04, 2012 2:00 pm

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Re: PF - Blue Peak Shore OOC

I think he means he wants to know if his character has been accepted.

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Tue Dec 04, 2012 3:14 pm

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Re: PF - Blue Peak Shore OOC

in this case, yes.Thanks Rock!

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Tue Dec 04, 2012 4:06 pm

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Re: PF - Blue Peak Shore OOC

RockstarRaccoon Wrote:

I think he means he wants to know if his character has been accepted.

she :c

valerio Wrote:

in this case, yes.Thanks Rock!

okay :3

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Thu Dec 06, 2012 9:58 am

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Re: PF - Blue Peak Shore OOC

This story is so complicated... So many weird things going on at once, lawl...

You two having the Dragon-Ball-Z-proportioned fight, you're doing ok on keeping the violence down to a forum-appropriate level, but be carful not to go much further with it...How much longer do you expect it to last anyway?

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Sat Dec 22, 2012 4:33 pm

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Re: PF - Blue Peak Shore OOC

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Spencers nodded. He started unbuttoning his shirt, and removed it. Like this, with his naked torso, he turned and knelt down in front of the Ambassador, surrounded by the pack, just like a harmless prey.The human then lowered his head and spread his arms. "I stand bare in front of you, wolves." he said, flawlessly, in their own language! "I offer my neck, my throat, my flesh and blood. I offer myself as chieftain, as representative of those who caused you countless years of sufferance. I offer myself with regret in my heart, with apologies from the very depth of my soul, and with the promise that I will work to bring new blood to your kin. This I can do, just trust me, for I declare that from now on my kin and yours, on Tricana, will work as one. If you trust me not, then take my life. Now."

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Gender: MaleColor: #0080FFSpcies: German Shepard"Just, don't make fun of my tail, okay, please?"Age: 6Residence: About a block away from the park, on the corner at the edge of a feild.Appearance: Slightly dark brown main coat. Classic saddle pattern on the back that's black in color. His ears are pointy and straight, though colored a rusty, pale red on the edges. His eyes have dark fur lines streaked above them like a foot ball player would. His muzzle is straight and pointy with a dark patch in the center. His chest is a fluffly pale tan, along with the fur under his neck. There are also dark patches on his elbows and knees, giving the appearance of the protective pads. His paws and feet a also similarly decorated. His hands look like he's wearing small black gloves, and his feet look like he's wearing dark socks. His tail is a little more longer then he likes and has a stripe going down it's center colored the same red as his ears. His eyes are are a vivid, brightly striking green.

Accessories: Khun likes to carry his laptop with him everywhere. Which means his laptopcase is almost always with him. He likes to wear sunglasses and usually has a pair on orperched on his forehead. His collar is a bright green and his tag is an icon of a classic two button computer mouse. He also wears a small hip pack. It contains various little instruments such as his DS, a swiss army knife, flashlight, a bottle of hand sanitizer, and an extra pair of sunglasses. He also owns a small, yellow, electric motorcycle that he is proud of. He also tucks a notebook in with his laptop, just in case he gets an idea or two.

Background/Personality: Khun has been in Sunset Platuea for about a week now. He doesn't know that many people yet though. Khun has big dreams. He has just started looking at game development and has started playing with a few tools. He's also a writer. Even though he hasn't published anything yet, he puts little ideas and thoughts down into a wordpad document. He and his parents are Christian, though he doesn't talk about it much for fear of being made fun of. While single, Khun does hope to be with someone someday. Still, his shyness around girls has an effect on this, even though he's been more outgoing the last few months. His human dad is a software engineer and his human mother works as a nurse. While they admire his aspirations, they often try to encourage him to pursue other ventures, like nursing or software programming. He has been lucky enough to land himself in a position to be an odd-jobs person around the neighborhood to earn himself some extra cash. He has also recently started to show an interest in metal working. Often times, when the pressure really builds, Khun can't handle teasing very well. Sometimes he just needs to get away for a while to calm down.

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Strength - 5"Here, let me help you with that! Ooof. No, no, I'm okay."Perception - 7"Wait, wait what? Ohhhhhhh. I see what you did there."Endurance - 4"Phew, okay, one more game! No really, I can phew, okay, lemme sit down a minute."Charisma - 5"Oh, hi there! I hope we can get along! So um, um, yeah. You were saying?"Intelligence - 7"No really, I'm not that smart. I just use wikipedia a lot. No, no, it's 42! Get it right!"Agility - 5"Ha! Try and back me up into a tree again! Ooof! Okay, so it was a swing set pole but

still!"Luck – 9"My mother always said I've been lucky. I guess you can say that being the only litter survivor AND the runt."

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New KhunAppearance: SameAccessories: Full eye sunglasses. Tag is the same. Collar has changed to black. Other accessories are gone.

Background/Personality: The family is iving in New York. They had to leave Zimbabwe due to a failed business venture due to concerns about violence. He's started abusing anise. He's deteriorated some and become dispondent. Only responding to sharp words and harshness. Also, Nimh has been transferred temporarily to the zoo for protection. Khun has almost developed double personalities. One is the carefree, happy go lucky Khun. The other is a smart aleck, rough, back talking jerk. His stats also change with his personality. Also, with a number of scars he's been getting, and reports of a stray with a bag on his head going around, his mother has started to suspect him of vigilantism. He has been forced to Blue Peak Shore against his will as a recovery method. Khun lost his girlfriend (dog) to the violence. He also appears to be developing latent psychic abilities. (The old story of being married to a cat is still there.)

There we go. Hopefully I can take this new iteration some other places that I couldn't with the old one. I wanted to lower all the stats to keep in line with the detoriation aspect. But decided to keep it in the 42 range.

I like the guy! being a GSD, he's more than welcome to live at Lancaster Village, the old community inhabited by fishermen, retired old people and german Shepherd breeders. In fact, 99% of the pet population consists of dogs, all of that very breed. So Kuhn could be there to recover between peers rather than sulking at a corner of the place.Internet connection at Lancaster is possible only via wi-fi. Cell phones are allowed, but as long as they are not used in broad daylight. The level of technology is definitely low, while the social bonds of the community are very strong.Anything else you need to know, just ask away!

Thanks for the welcome back. And also, I can't think of anything to say... already. Lol

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Sat Dec 29, 2012 7:27 am

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Re: PF - Blue Peak Shore OOC

give hunter the time to interact with your character. Something will come up. Or I'll intervene.

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Sat Dec 29, 2012 9:58 am

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Re: PF - Blue Peak Shore OOC

Hey, Uh..

May I join?

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Name: Rook 'Rookie' WhiteBreed: Tuxedo catGender: MaleAge: 12 (Pet Years)Height: 3.2"Appearance: Deep dark grey/Black fur all over exept for; Chest, belly, tip of the tail, paws andmuzzle, which are pure White. A tan patch of fur around his left Eye. Eyes are a pure light-blue.short, pointy ears and regular build. Wears a thick collar, which is mint-green. The tagon the collar is an ivory chesspeice, the 'Rook'(or 'Castle'). Sometimes carries a pet-pack the colour of his collar.

Personality: A solitary and heartfelt cat, will stand by family and friends in hard times yetfinds it hard to empathise. Tends to stay indoors yet has a love of nature and the outdoors. Is always full of energy, enthusiasm and will try to cheer you up, butwill sometimes get his words mixed up.

Strengths/weaknesses/notes:-He tends to prefer logical persuits such as reading, boardgames and writing.-Will NEVER take his collar off unless he's sure no on else can see. Basicly, Shy.-Always shows his happy side, yet when downhearted, finds it hard to gain confidence again.-Never had a British accent, more of an american tone due to watching too many american action movies.

Background: Born in England, in a small town named Stevenege, known as 'Stevie' to the residents. Lost his mother very young and has no recolection of her. After an almost fatal accident at home, Rook's family decide on getting away from it all for a bit, and Rook decides to take a good friend along with him..

S.P.E.C.I.A.L:S: 4 "What? I'm not a dog y'know!"P: 6 "Cats can see in the dark as if it was day, right?"E: 5 "I also conserve energy as well use it!"C: 7 "..Well, do you how to spell 'Intercontinental' off by heart?"I: 8 "I know a lot of things, exept who my mum was.."A: 5 "All I can say is 'I blame my genetics'.."L: 4 "Whoops! That was unlucky.."

Color: This Please.

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Name: Maxine FlorrellBreed: Persian/Siamese mix (Himalayan)Gender: FemaleAge: 11 (pet years)Height: 2.9"Appearance: Very Light brown/cream fur which she keeps neatly groomed. Longer than usual ears,which the tips are a motled brown like her face, paws and tip of her long, fluffy tail. She'squite athletic and bodily fit, for a cat her size. Her collar is highly styled light leatherwith pink stitching, The tag is a plastic cut-diamond with'Maxine' enscribed into the material.

Personality: An independant, headstrong girl, yet very prone to drama. Will gossip & chat withalmost anyone exept dogs. Loves shopping, clothes, gossiping and teen romantic films. Tries toact older than she is, and hates being called 'lass' by anyone but her father. Is firm and hardto reason with when in one of her moods.

Strengths/Weaknesses/Notes:-Was brought up wealthy, so slightly power-hungry and spoiled.-Loves clothing and will try to change the subject to that to evade confrontation.-Finds solace in doing what she loves, shopping!

Background: Was born into a rich household in Italy. Spent her very few younger years in the lap of luxury, yet a bad investment with a sinking buisnessled the Florrells to move to England, which led into Maxine meeting Rook. They grew a lasting friendship and Rook invited her to go on holiday with him..

I almost forgot. But that comes with not role playing a character for a while.

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Khun accessories: Khun has a wedding ring on his right hand he keeps hidden under his fur. It can be spotted by characters with high perception. Even though he doesn't like it when that occurs and is very dodgy about it unless he gets to know the character.

I almost forgot. But that comes with not role playing a character for a while.

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Khun accessories: Khun has a wedding ring on his right hand he keeps hidden under his fur. It can be spotted by characters with high perception. Even though he doesn't like it when that occurs and is very dodgy about it unless he gets to know the character.

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