. . The amount of likeness in this story to my own real life. Well, the characters, that is. I have a friend named Melody and since we're close, our music teacher addressed me as "Harmony" and sometimes I call myself Jade. People also mistake us for sisters. This is so weird. Haha.

Anways, back to your story. Its so cute! I love your writing and I really wonder what's the 1% those twins are hiding. Overall, a great story!

... what does that mean! I know you've been hearing a lot from me today. _ I feel like some creepy stalker, I apologize. Cute story though! Great way to use a cliche and yet still steer away from it. :) Although I thought Steven was gay at first. XD

Hahaha. Great job. You mentioned that you thought it was choppy, but to me it flowed along fine.. just Steven's confession came really unexpectedly.. but were you trying to do that? Anyway, I rather enjoyed it. :). It ended way too quickly though.. it was like all the non-romantic drama led up to that suddenly romantic, unexpected confession.. then it all fell into place sort of BECAUSE they confessed. Just felt a little weird. But all in all, good work!