*claps* Bravo, bravo, bravo. This was honestly one of the best pieces of fiction I've read in a long time. The entire thing was... stunning. From the characterizations to the locale descriptions to, of course, the entire usage of the 'Six'. Well done, I commend you. Gorgeous and creepy at the same time, with enough chaos-magic thrown in to make it believable. (Also, you used three of my favourite characters, so that might've helped .)

And if that wasn't enough, you kinda made me want to draw fanart of their blue outfits with fishing poles (or at least the way I saw them). Perhaps I will sometime soon... (If I get a moment)

Again, bravo, an amazing job well done~!

Luv,

~Essy

(...this also made my own story seem slightly less farfetched (though how I don't know, it's completely in the opposite direction from this)... It'll still probably never see the light of day, but it gives me something to think about at least...)

Wow. Where to even start? This is, by far, one of the best stories I've ever read, fanfic or no, Xenosaga or no. What initially impressed me was your -excellent- sense of pacing. This truly reads like published fiction.

Allen's one of my favorite characters, and it's refreshing to see him getting some well-deserved attention! The "friendly ghost" bit intrigued me when the TALK TO ME guy first mentioned it, and it's great to see someone with such talent expanding upon that idea. chaos and Jin were written very well, too. This fic actually made me appreciate Jin more than the game itself managed to, heh. I absolutely adore the setup of Allen's subconscious domain (it reminded me of Nowhere from Silent Hill 1, actually), and the vivid, intense portraits you paint of his six aspects/personalities. The sort-of conspiracy regarding his parents was really...just really fucking cool. XD

Absolutely beautiful work, Princess. The story held my attention from the beginning, and the last chapter had me spellbound. I loved your attention to detail in describing the settings, especially the scenes taking place in the Encephalon, which were vividly imagined. The character development was excellent as well, not only in your insight into the characters' individual personalities but also in the way you had them interacting. I liked your portrayals of Jin and Allen, and the way you explored their friendship.

I could say more, but in the interest of not rambling, I'll just say this is an awesome fic, and it's definitely one of the most original concepts I've seen in a while.