OMG this was so good i read it over and over again for like 20 minutes.
The thing is- I don't even read anything other than dramione usually but this story pulled me in and than i couldn't stop reading! This is actually really, really good and the plot of this is fantastic.
Good job, this was seriously really really good- i could feel all the emotions in this. 10/10 definitely.
-Shelli

Author's Response: Oh my gosh thank you so much! You totally made my week! I am so glad you liked it and thank you so much for the lovely review!!

Hey there! I really liked your story. I thought that you portrayed Lily's thoughts really well! I thought it was really great to show how Sirius would beg for James's sake, whereas most fics only show the cocky, arrogant side of him. What caught my attention most was the sentence: "He had made her fall...eventually...but he had been there to catch her." I thought that was really sweet and touching. It showed how James was there for Lily when she thought he wouldn’t be, that his love had lasted throughout their school years.

One thing, the sentence: "He had nearly knocked her over as he rushed past, James having mysteriously disappeared from most classes, and then stopped to help her pick up the pile of homework he had caused her to drop." it didn't make sense how having James mysteriously disappear from classes went with Sirius running into Lily and helping her with her books.

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Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I am so glad you thought so! And yes, Sirius is always shown to be only cocky and arrogant so I didn't really want him to be so shallow when I wrote it. I am happy you thought it worked well :)

That would be because it was their last school day so he knew James was going to be a bit depressed. Sirius actually realized that Lily having dropped her books was a good excuse to talk to her, if that makes sense.

Aw! This story is so cute, it makes me want to cry! Lily/James is one of my favourite pairings and you did a really good job with this. I think it was really well written and I enjoyed it very much.

I liked how Sirius would only beg for James' sake, that showed how deep and true their friendship was. I also liked how James had loved Lily after everything she'd put him through, and how she was just coming to realise this. And the kiss, my favourite part of the whole story. It seemed so wonderful! The ending was brilliant, and I really liked it. It was perfect.

10/10! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Ohmygosh, you rock! Thanks so much for the encouraging review! I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Lily/James is also one of my favourite pairings :)

Ya, I believe Sirius and James were like the best of friends, and I try to show that when I write about them, so I'm glad you liked that.