I understand your intention was to show how Family Guy is "childish", but this isn't the way to do it.
You have to do something like "Peter, why aren't you at your new Job?" "I am Lois, like the time I was at my last new job..."

Right? Right. Just stupid stuff like that. And even crappy voice acting is better than captions.

The music wasn't necessary to part of the video, and I was wondering if my computer had loaded the video correctly because there was so little action in the video. Try including some examples of reused Family Guy jokes or something. I didn't choose to watch that video for the music.