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My Little Pony:Friendship is Magic OC RP

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Dipping her quill into ink, the young unicorn noble started scribbling beneath the application.

A bit brief with the personality, and history is very choppy with all the short sentences. The rp segment is absolutely starved of actual description, making the reader feel like the characters are floating in some blank void.

Elegance paused, and scratched her nose. She stared before her for a second to think before writing again.

However, if I kick you out because of those reasons, I am undoubtedly going to be called an uptight noble that cares too much about these things. It is clear that there is a severe difference of standards. Your application is approved, but I would hope to see more description of both world outside and feelings inside.

Regards,

Elegance Design

_________________The maiden, the mother, and the other one.

Spoiler:

If Paradise Blossom speaks in red, she is speaking Neighponese.

I do my best now and am preparing. Please wait warmly until it is finished.