I like it when people like Jin are helpless. Especially at the hands of someone as wild as Mugen. It's just the icing on the cake, and you really delivered that goddamned treat. I'm not even sure if you'll read this review-I normally don't review anything that hasn't been updated for at least four months, let alone a different year-but I really did like your story, and I hope you write a lot more like it.

I really liked this; the story flowed smoothly, the smut was hot, and in all it was well written. That said I must offer some constructive criticism and point out a flaw. After the scene at the river, when they were back at the inn, you write that Mugen first removes all of his clothes before stripping Jin, but in the next paragraph Jin takes Mugen's shirt off. This doesn't really detract from the overall effect of the story, it was just enough to distract me while I was reading, so I thought I should point it out. Other then that, WOW! Great job!

Lol, yay! FINALLY some Mugen/Jin! Have you noticed that there's hardly ANY? It's injustice I tell you! I actually liked this story, it had it's cute moments and the lemons were, in my opinion, totally drool worthy. Great job!