Ohhh I just love Steve...lol I'm glad you name the cars in this story...it's GREAT! My sister and I also name our cars...she has a red van named Rosie Applebottom and my lil white car is Bianca Blanca (Bianca White) Our two girls definatly have character...lol

I just read through all 20 chaps this week and have to say I love this story! Wish I'd started it sooner. Love the banter between B/E and b's changing feelings for him as he morphs from SWCID to Edward. Can't wait to read more!

This is kinda hard to read cuz the story is being told as its happening right now. all of the rest are like Theyre passed tense . . . Like instead of '' I tell jake'' or '' she looks at me and says'' usually its ''i told jake'' or she looked at me and said. its kinda distracting. just hope i can read the whole thing w out getting frustated.

See, I always thought that was something a little too perfect about the Cullens attending school and whatnot. Sure, they've got Alice to warn them about sunny days, but exactly HOW MANY overcast days can there be where the sun's *never* out? And there they'd be, all trapped in their classrooms with windows. You're the first person to bring that up in a fic that I've seen.

Assuming your Cullens are vampires, of course. I'm only on the first chapter :)

Your writing is fantastic--seriously! Your writing is funny, clever, your phrasing is unique, direct, and interesting, and your characters are alive and dynamic! Soooooooooo much better than S. Meyer. Congratulations! I hope you have tried/will try writing more and writing your own storylines and characters-- not just for fanfiction (as great as it is, still). : ) Anyway, it's not helpful reading for when I'm having insomnia-- it just makes me want to stay awake!

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