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Review:

snoopygonewilder says:Okay so I’m reviewing for the whole story on this chapter, even though I've read up to 21 already. I kind of reviewed at 2am on every other chapter, not very eloquent at that time, not that I am any other time.

Out of all the H.P. FanFics I've read, this one has to be one of the most original ones out there. I can almost forget I'm actually reading an H.P. FanFic; I have to tell you I really enjoy the character's names, especially as you mentioned in one of the reviews around here, that the pure-bloods have strange names.

I like Lottie, although at the beginning I had a hard time not laughing at her name, but it grew on me (it only took me two days to read all 21 chapters) My favorite secondary character is Stanley. He’s great, he’s funny and I totally see myself at that age in him, except the whole him being a guy thing.

As someone commented in chapter 21, I also had a hard time believing the amount of time the spell took. -I wont say what spell incase anyone reading this hasn’t made it to chapter 21- to get where it was going – I wont say were either.

I’m really looking forward to chapter 21. This is going to be one of the great ones. With a little tweaking, you could be a great writer, keep on the amazing work. Don’t worry, no matter how short my reviews may get, due to the fact I do read them at 2am between school and work, I’ll never due a “PLZ UPDATE” on you….hahaha….

Yours truly, a new fan…. Brenda G.

Author's Response: Oh wow thanks so much! I loved all of your reviews!

I like their names too. I guess I do get a bit creative with them sometimes. Haha. You thought Lottie's name was funny? That's funny. I guess it is sort of an odd name. I was just familiar with from A Little Princess.

Haha, yeah. I've gotten a lot of comments on that, and you guys are totally right. I should change that when I get the time.

Oh I appreciate that. I like all of my reviews, but the ones with substance are generally more helpful, as I'm sure you know.