Well another good fic. And that was just so much to take in. And that sucks that Chester's gay cuz I thought Tootie and him were gonna end up together. (Not saying I'm a homophobe or however you spell it. Cuz I do have gay and one by friends). Well for the situations I tought the charatcers charicters matched. But I do think you should make each characters way of speaking ( i think its called dialect or diction...?) a little different. Cuz everyone sounds kinda the same. And Timmy got run over, is he gonna die? I think he's going to and Tootie's gonna come to his funeral. Or mmaybe not I don't know. I hope the final story is centered mainly around Tootie cuz you ewrite her character very well.

Well post the final story soon, and I'm sure it'll be the best thing you write. Well later for now!

Romeo chapter 1 . 7/19/2006

This story is a lot better than Goodbye Forever. I like the way there weren't any flashbacks in this one, also it didn't seem to slightly repeat things as Goodbye Forever did... Not that I didn't like Goodbye Forever, but this was written so much more better. Can't wait to see what happens in the 3rd part.