He was supposed to love me, with all of my flaws, all of my scars. He was destined to save me. But, he left me down here to die, how could I ever forgive him?

This book has amazing grammar and description, this is the first book with both of those qualities besides great details. Most books I have found just label people, whereas you actually form each person into their character, something I am really happy about

Another thing, you have an amazing vocabulary. Just the simple fact that you used the word "whom" instead of "who" proves this. I know for a fact that 19/20 authors here on wattpad will not use the word whom in their works at all where it is neeeded. Great work!
#HBC

#HBC I really liked the expressions you used here. I'd just like to point out that you should hint about some past experience under her brother's hands. Just to make it more clear that she's speaking from experience. :)