Oh goodness, Dionne must be feeling quite guilty now - if it wasn't for what she said Sidney and Gerald would still be together although it's understandable that Sidney would want to escape to someone who was blameless of the actions her own brothers put her through. I wish Dionne would just tell her parents - they may be protective but surely they could see that her brothers have gone overboard.

I don't really know what to say... there are no glaring mistakes in this piece - but at the same time, there's nothing in this prologue that can catch my attention and make me want to continue reading. No interesting characters, no catchy dialogue.