tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3274189269160476600.post5479774364131198304..comments2012-04-11T13:43:37.709-05:00Comments on my voice as translated to words: Part two of Therese and the hanted housebutterfly womanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09252796466842620135noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3274189269160476600.post-55623315628051204372008-11-30T10:45:00.000-06:002008-11-30T10:45:00.000-06:00Love how you end each part or chapter. Makes me ...Love how you end each part or chapter. Makes me want to read more. Keep going. You are on a roll. And the magic, the sorcery I see in this story, adds a touch of fantasy and otherworldlyness. So I enjoy the mix of fantasy, love, evil, spirituality even, that you continue to place in the story. I'm used to your humerous side though and kind of miss it in the story? Would you consider humor, even just a few words?<BR/>Bevbutterfly womanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252796466842620135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3274189269160476600.post-3217090891724895372008-11-26T08:16:00.000-06:002008-11-26T08:16:00.000-06:00This is very compelling and well-written. I can't...This is very compelling and well-written. I can't wait to read more! Keep writing. And have a happy Thanksgiving!Soulsearcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01594638230147775665noreply@blogger.com