good story really! not much my type as i like more a teen bella metting edward out of the volturi problem, I leave the story when they dont come because really that much i dont like them! but the story is good, interesting. If you do it I might read it and hope not to irritate with the volturi, really I can see how they could act as "family" to bella and raise her!

hehe sorry if I laugh for your mistake I dont know if you really dont know it or confuse... you put bvop and evop but it shouldnt be vop if not it shouod be P.O.V. which means "point if view" is english your first language? mine is not and before i didnt know the meaning but i do now and pass you the message

MORE MORE MORE! Hurry! More! :D You're great. This is the first of your stories that I've read, but I will definitely move on to the others for now. Keep up the great work. God, I can't believe you're still in school and write like this. Also, please check out my story and let me know what you think...