A very insightful and endearing short story. You brought true depth of feeling and honesty to delicate character. Yes I did enjoy this light spirited tale. thank you. Your writing and form throughout was free flowing and communicated the two characters feelings in a way to make one feel they were there.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story.

This is beautiful, both as a story, and also as a character exploration of Luna Lovegood. She has always been my favourite female character of Harry Potter, mostly because of the depths of her personality that, disappointingly, J.K. Rowling did not give much attention to focusing on. I think that Rowling focused a lot more on Hermione, however in my opinion - as great as Hermione is - Luna made a much more interesting, intriguing character. Your description of her background and your delve into the inner workings of her mind was a brilliant idea to work with - as opposed to the more fluffy one-shots that the Harry/Luna pairing (a favourite of mine) usually pose - and I would say that how you analysed her is parallel exactly to how I have.
Well done, this is a fic I'll cherish for a long time.

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I agree with you that Luna is by far the most interesting character, but as Hermione was much more central to Harry & the story it was her character that was more detailed which makes sense for the books.

Well written but a little dull. To capture the interest of the reader you might want to make the first chapter a bit more interesting. Having said that I will read the next chapter now so you did capture me.

Author's Response: A lot of people have read this story so I don't plan on changing the first chapter at all. It's not an exciting chapter but it sets the tone for the rest of the fic.

Opinions always welcome though, thanks for taking the time to leave urs.

I really liked this story! It was very sweet and it showed a completely believable side of Luna that I had never thought about. (This will be one one of those stories that I confuse with canon) Thanks for a lovely read!

Author's Response: Well I thought I'd try something different with Luna, and have a look at why she could be the way she is. I love her and would never want her to change lol, but I thought it might make a nice little short story.

This is such a sweet little fic, that I hope it would become longer.
Like when comes the time when school finds out that Luna is dating Harry (she is dating him right?), and that Luna is somehow changed, and not so dreamy any more, although I hope she still keeps part of her Loony personality.
Or when Luna tells her father about things she feel?
I would enjoy to see a sequel.

Author's Response: I hadn't thought about a sequel really, I'm not sure I would like to write Luna as different to the one we know.

This plot idea just popped up so I went with it, but I love Luna as she is & wouldn't really want her to change lol.

Strangely enough, I had just listened to Abba's "Take a chance on me" just before finishing out this story. I always, always thought that Luna was a better choice for Harry and stories like this help show that. Your Luna is wonderful: tormented and afraid, but willing to work with Harry to try to find something good in life together.

Harry as you describe him is very empathetic toward Luna, just as I thought he would have been had he not been wrapped up so much in his quest to get rid of Voldie-baby. This is just the sort of sweet story that you are so good at. It always brings a smile to my face to read your stories, even after the crappiest days at work.

Wonderfully sweet and seemingly true. 10/10

Author's Response: Hey you,

I like Abba! That's not my fav song but I do have a good sing along lol. You know I totally agree with Harry/Luna it would much have prefered them to H/G & I thought that something was going to happen after OOTP.

I'm so thrilled I manage to make you smile, if your crappy days are anything like mine that's a big acomplishment for me!! lol.