one suggestion, when you change characters try either using a different POV or something else too make the two different people's veiwpoints more distinct... It gets confusing when you are still using "I" but the character has switched.

So, I'm just going to keep reminding/nagging you about telling us where the POV changes. Every chapter it happens, expect me to give a review. And, of course, when you update a new chapter! I luv the story, honestly! It's just majorly confusing trying to figure out who's POV it is when it changes especially cuz it makes no sense when they're changing. Keep writing!