I think this is a very well written story and to be honest, I've never seen a plot like this before. I absolutely love Genesis and Cloud interactions of any kind for I always wondered what would have happened if they did meet after all these years. I enjoy your writing style and I hope to see you update soon!

D chapter 1 . 8/10/2010

Hey, this has definite potential! By all means continue, if you're so inclined.