Dragon Wars has received its first review on the Web Fiction Guide. While it’s not a full review (WFG editors are unpaid and overworked – they can’t read more than the first part while vetting) it’s fair, and it raised some points which other readers have raised on Twitter and similar.

Most importantly that the quads’ age isn’t obvious.

Anyway I’ve made a couple of edits to chapter 1 part 1 which should address this. Have a look and tell me what you think.