Great story... I'm a huge Dramione fan, so I couldn't resisit when I saw this one. I loved the line "But there is a difference between being the school bully and being a criminal. " But the ending... *sniffle* A little ironic though don't you think. If I understand the ending correctly, he was aiming to kill his pursuer and hit Hermione instead. He would have lost her either way because if he had hit is intended target he would have lost Hermione anyway because she could never love a murderer, and he knew that.

I really enjoyed this story and can't think of anything even remotly critical to say.