Hello, I've kind of been lurking/new here. I'll have to start trying to post more. I'm going around forums looking for crit or feedback on a comic project I did for uni. the end of the comic is over on smackjeeves. Thanks!

That was awesome! I really enjoyed the contrast between the normal style and the shojo manga style. Seeing him in bishounen style cracked me up.

The only thing is the pages you posted on here were the least interesting and don't show the charm of the comic, but hopefully people will click the link and read more. Also, the text was a little small and cramped for me.

waru wrote:That was awesome! I really enjoyed the contrast between the normal style and the shojo manga style. Seeing him in bishounen style cracked me up.

The only thing is the pages you posted on here were the least interesting and don't show the charm of the comic, but hopefully people will click the link and read more. Also, the text was a little small and cramped for me.

Was it just a one shot comic, or will there be other chapters?

Thank you very much! its a self contained story so there wont be any more chapters.

Here are some more pages encase anyone didn't click the link to read more -