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First off, I'd just like to say, this is just some random thing I put together in order to test FBF and coloring and sound (sound was not working too well though), there is no story line to this or anything of the sort, so don't look for that, this is quite random though lol.
All I'm pretty much going for on this one is some practice in Flash, and some critical reviews saying what I'm doing right and wrong, I don't mind if this gets blammed for reasons that are quite obvious.
It'd be a big help for any one that know what they're talking about (and by that I mean no whiny people that think they know what they're talking about) to P.M. me.
I'm quite new to Flash, as you can see in watching the video, so all I'm looking for is some critical help. I unfortunately have not taken a class in this but I'm looking forward to it in the following school year.
P.S. you might find it not up to par per say in the beginning so bear with it, I guarantee you it gets a whole lot more interesting...
Yours truly,
Dylan Chambers

lol, interestingly enough my friends thought the same thing lol, I questioned them when they started laughing though... lol but in all seriousness, thanks for your review, glad you enjoyed the video :)

Rated 4 / 5 stars2012-07-21 01:43:19

Honestly ... I'm not a flash expert or anything ... and you put up one more video than I ever did but ... for a test flash it was pretty good in my opinion ... just wish it was longer so, I can't tell you want you need to be changing or anything you just need to keep practicing and learning new things and you will be a great creator no doubt

Thanks man for your input, I was thinking of making it longer but I was in fear that people would find it too repetitious and hate it because of that. I know what your saying with the more practice, I'm currently working on a lot more serious project that will have a plot and will be a lot better than this.
I'd just like to thank you for being the lone wolf out here with reviewing this... horrific... video lol.