ONElia AVElar

Aloud - Poem by ONElia AVElar

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Candy words melting in your mouth. Too proudto say them aloud? Yet you sigh, you moan out loud. Still they find a way to leave, though you did not mean to dropp them out.And you hope, all will vaporize unheard - lapses of an eager heart...

Moving and as someone else has said, a little anguished. You describe so well the disturbing sense that a lover is holding back the very words that would make you trust, and so making you mistrust, perhaps because they don't trust themselves.(Report)Reply

These candy words are a little told a little untold. As regards the usual, the style is a little different: dry, mature, anguished. How the first poems are far! However how the past returns in these dynamics! PH is changing, many things are vanishing, Mrs. Avelar always deserves our regard and our affection(Report)Reply

Very pretty presentation of how an ordinary occurrence can somehow become illuminated in our minds. The final 3 lines are blinding, the imagery of vapourising is superb! Love it Onelia. HG: -) xx(Report)Reply

Lovely ONe.. tis like chewing watermelon flavoured bubblegum... you can't help but work your tongue to seek the formation of the biggest bubble.. out.. then POP... loud and clear.. you do it over.. aroha xx(Report)Reply