Hey, this is so clever! i love the way you make Lily look - good girl on the outside, but the internal monologue doesn't stop. The LP thing is very original, and I love the way you characterized Sirius with his constant word play and name game thing. Keep it up, and I know you can't rush the creative process, but I cant wait for the next chap!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! <3<3 I'm glad you liked my little Sirius-going on moment hehe, oh and I'm writing the 3rd chap just now so I might just finish soon!