amazing! i read it on a whim, and it was AMAZING! i LOVED IT! everyone's reaction was so perfect, and loved the 'monkey' aspect, and the way Rory told Logan, and what she was afraid of, just everything fits, and is right ) great job!

Definitly not something I would usually love because of the whole "let's forget about what really happens when people have lots of sex" but you wrote it so playfully and yet made it serious enough that I really enjoyed it. Now, on to the sequal!

Wow, this is the first "Rory gets pregnant" fic I've actually liked. You had a wonderfully quirky and yet believable situation and the friendship between Rory and Lane was amazing. There aren't enought fics focusing on them.