>> >Render what text there is into something closer to English.
>> is it about s/ifmcstat/& utility/?
>Yes. It should either have been "Ifmcstat dumps..." or "The ifmcstat
>utility dumps...", not "The Ifmcstat dumps". I went for the longer
>version, since it avoids putting the name (which should really be
>all-lowercase) at the start of a sentence. It's also the same phrasing as
>in many other manual pages.
i believe there's some better way to express that than:
>> >Render what text there is into something closer to English.
as a group of non-native English speakers, the above comment sounds
a little bit discouraging.
itojun