As much as I love canon couples, FY is one of those series where it's possible to see lots of possible pairings. I always felt bad for the other guys who loved Miaka but had to let her to because she loved Tamahome. Totally loving this story. I want more!!!!

I couldn't stop laughing when Nuriko and Miaka ended up in such an awkward situation together! I seriously love NurikoxMiaka and i am looking forward to seeing what happens next no matter what! I know this story has not been updated in some time (3 years?) but I am hoping you see my review and other peoples' reviews and get inspired. :)

Ah! I'm hooked! You have drawn me into the world you've created of Nuriko and Miaka! Please write more or else I will be forced to stay curious! heh So thats a "Good story so far, please keep up the good work" sort of thing ^_^

First, this story seems incomplete, even though it says completed. It seems as though it stopped halfway through. Secondly, it's rated too high. An R would have been sufficiant. There's nothing that graphic about it to warrent an NC17 rating. Third, why didn't they just leave on their underclothes? I'm assuming they were wearing underclothes. Nuriko would be wearing a loincloth, at least. Getting completely naked seemed a bit on the extreme side. They could've figured out just as easily that they wanted each other with underwear still intact.

Anyway, it was a cute story, and pretty well-written, but honestly, I wasn't impressed with how it ended.

Author's Response:

Umm...I don't know where you got the idea that it was Completed, because it says Completed: No on the Fanfic. This Fanfic is not finished even remotely. And as for the rating, the higher content will come in later Chapters. Yes, it will be a lemon, and that’s why it has that rating.And lastly, it doesn't even say The End at the bottom so it's clear that it's not finished with. Thank you for the review and I’m happy you found it cute, but please pay closer attention to the status of the Fanfic before giving such a critical review. :)

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