(xD yay fallen has come to the rescue! I really thought I had to bring in Mrs. Bad girl Ravenpaw )

Vengeancebreeze was bloody, tired and weak. He was loosing his lifes energy. Moving just in time to avoid Ferals paw, growling did he see the white pelt of Fallensnow. Relived did he try to give a front paw blow, sloppy with weak did it not send much of its impact.

(If Howlingstar isn't busy with Chipmuckstar, he can attack her if he wants. Lol. Or anybody else for that matter.)

Berrystripe turned away from Miserycloud, believing she wasn't a match for her and looked for another SombreClan cat to fight. She seen Feralclaw attacking her apprentice Ravenpaw but the she-cat was holding onto her own so Berrystripe didn't move from her spot.

MiseryCloud's vibrant green eyes blazed in anger as Berrystripe turned her back. The she-cat let out a loud, angered cry and dashed towards Berrystripe, her sharp thorn-like-claws aiming to rake down her backside.

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Berrystripe's backside got raked by the she-cat's sharp claws. Hissing, Berrystripe turned herself around to face Miserycloud. Berrystripe lifted her paw in the air, hoping to head Miserycloud on the top of her head.

MiseryCloud quickly leaped to the side, dodging the attack. The fluffy black-almost brown she-cat revealed her gleaming white teeth, forming a snarl. She sprang at BerryStripe, this time, aiming for her hind leg.

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MiseryCloud quickly tilt her head, helping to minimize some of the impact of the kick. She shook her head, blood dripping down her face. She began to growl, louder as she charged towards the she-cat, her sharp teeth aiming for Berry's shoulder

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MiseryCloud nimbly released the she-cat then stepped back, not wishing to get another attack to the face. The fluffy black she-cat shook her pelt out and smirked, "Ready to retreat, yet?" She narrowed her eyes, her eyes gleaming in determination.

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Marth, you characters is getting unrealistic in my eyes. He is barley hurt after a massive fight and is showing no signs of being tired. You need to fight realistically, If Vengence was so injured he had to retreat - your character should be pretty beat up too. You cat is also new to clans so his fighting skills wouldn't be so perfect and all that. Not being rude, just my opinion.

Dynamic actually does make a very valid point there. Marth, just tighten up the realism reins a bit, please.

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HowlingStar flicked his tail and narrowed his golden yellow eyes, waiting for an opponent to show himself. A fluffy, ginger tom - Preyjaw, leaped out at the silver-tabby, but, HowlingStar was quicker and side-stepped, dodging the attack. HowlingStar shook out his tabby pelt and revealed a sly smile. He then hurled his lean, muscular body at Preyjaw; the leader's claws struck the fluffy tom across the face, leaving large gashes. Preyjaw attempted to block the attack but failed miserably and stumbled backwards. He growled, shoving his head towards the tom in attempt to make him back away. Realizing, that Preyjaw's tactic was failing, he kicked his hind-legs up, aiming for HowlingStar's stomach. The leader winced at the hit but then brought down his large jaws on to Preyjaw's shoulder. Preyjaw felt dizzy, blood spilled out of his large shoulder wound. He stumbled backwards and fell into a heap on the ground. The silver-tabby smirked then dashed away to find a new opponent.

- I attacked and sorta auto-hitted by own characters beccaauuseee...I felt like it. xD

MiseryCloud yowled in annoyance and quickly lashed a paw out at Darkheart, her claws shining in the moonlight. The fluffy brown she-cat then leaped back and lashed her legs out towards Berrystripe, "You, again?" She hissed.

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(I think it's time that Berrystripe left because of her wounds, so she is going to leave now.)

Berrystripe was getting tired of the fight with Miserycloud. She wanted to continue but she was just to tired. "We will win the pines back." She spoke back to the older she-cat before retreating back to camp.

"PreyJaw!" The storm hued warrior growled and dashed down to the warrior's side. "PreyJaw!" The deputy shouted, "Come on, PreyJaw, you need to get to the medicine cat den," he said. The storm colored tom quickly jerked his head up and glanced around, checking to see how far any enemy warriors were, in case he would be attacked while trying to help a VC warrior.

(i have no clue whats going on but for a bit of sceaming so correct me on whut happened xD)

Ravenpaw seen her mentor getting beat she yowled in outrage and fear for her mentor. She was about to attack when getting hit in the head and being bowled over. She was dizzy and couldent foucas her green orbes on anything. Feeling another cat by her and the yell of Fallen did she finally foucas her eyes. Feeling the weight lift did she bounce up before hearing yowling. Her eyes failed as she spun around trying to locate the yowl. Stummbling around did she clear her head to see Prayjaw on the ground. So confused did she walk over to him and her deputy. "I'll take him... I think i need to see the medicaine cat too..." She tried to look at him while everything spun. Her head ached at was getting her sick to the stumache. Her green eyes were weired by one being slited and the other open. She knew she had a concushion so she didnt dare fight and more. "Ow.." she moaned as she fastned her teeth on Payjaws scruff. "You need to stay here to fight for our clan. Come on Preyjaw you gotta help me." She growled getting angry at her headache.

GrouseWarmth flexes her claws, her agile frame making it easy to dodge, yet she chooses not to. The she-cat waits for the tom to get close before leaping over his head and attempting to nimbly land on his back.

DropletSong races to the battle scene, looking for something to do. She instantly spots the deputy and new warrior and races over to them. "You carry on fighting!" She mews loudly to him, trying to be heard over the noise, "I will take PreyJaw back to camp!" The feline gently nudges PryJaw, trying to see if he is strong enough to get up.

She narrows her eyes, digging her claws into his back. When the tom-cat rolls, the she-cat hisses in pain, but uses her rage to kick up hard with all her limbs, attempting to send the other feline flying.

"SombreClan!" The leader boomed, "Retreat!" The silver-tabby howled his words, his eyes ran across his warriors- MiseryCloud, Grousewarmth, Feralclaw, having decided that losing his warriors lives were not worth it; they had collected enough prey from the Pines to survive much longer than they would. "Retreat, SombreClan! Retreat!"

CreekStorm cried out in agony as she sighted Preyjaw. She bounded up to Ravenpaw and Preyjaw and flattened her ears. "He can't be too hurt.." She said softly, her eyes wild. "Let's go to the medicine cat den," she said softly.

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ResoluteStep elevated his gaze, his golden eyes fastened on the SombreClan cats. "Get your fility paws off ValiantClan territory," he spat in annoyance, anger enraged him as he lowered his gaze to wounded Preyjaw. "Ravenpaw," he said, softly to the apprentice, "You need to get to the medicine cat den, too," he said, his ears flat in worry.

Current Weather: The season is Newleaf (Spring). The storm is over and the sun is currently out. It is warm, but, there is a very cold breeze.

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Current Plot: Three foxes have been sighted on three different clans grounds..Will the clans be able to fight them off without losing the lives of their warriors? While, in Washaki, a new celebration is about to take place. Ravinto, a festival for thanking the Gods for prey. Also, in other news, the two-legs have decided to build a Thunderpath running along ValiantClan territory and Two-leg territory. This acts as their new border.