Kann mir jemand bei meinem Englisch-Monolog helfen?
Hallo ich habe Morgen meine Englisch Monolog Prüfung und würde mich freuen wenn sich jemand die Zeit nähme, sich den text kurz durch zu lesen und mich auf Fehler aufmerksam machen würde! Danke für jede Hilfe Hello, My name is Desi and I’m 14 years old. I was born in ~~~~~~~, and now, I live in a House in ~~~~~~ with my Family. ~~~~~~ is a small Village in Baden-Württemberg, where you can do a lot of things. I have one older Brother, and one older Sister called Renè and Linda. They work as a Painter and an old people’s nurse. Actress would be the job of my dreams. My favourite actors are Robert Pattinson and Sandra Bullock. I like their films. I’ve never met them before, but if I have a Chance to meet them, I wouldn’t say no. I think it’s an Honor to meet such Prominent People. But I think they’re unattainable, because they have Private Bodyguards. For sure I now that my dream is really hard to reach, but first I wanted to do anyway with the School further. In my Free time I like to meet my Friends or some Stuff. And I often walk with an Foster dog. I walk with him, because his owner has a damaged Knee. The dog’s name is Bobby. His fur is white and he has black round button eyes. He is an Russian Breed of Dog. Now he is 3 years old and the owner adopted him with 4 weeks. When I walk with him we often go out on field. For me it’s like a little Pocket money enhance. But I do it with pleasure. And the owner is also very nice to me. And about Animals, I have one dog called Sunny his fur are Black and on his legs he is brown, and one cat called Beverly her fur is complete Black, just a part of her neck is white. Her breed is Main coon. Normal Housecats are much smaller than Main Coons. This Cat species is one of the oldest natural breeds in North America. The fur colors can be very different. From complete Black to complete white or mixed with all colors. Months ago I had a second Main Coon cat but he unfortunately died. In my free time I also like to hear Music. I don’t like rap but I like charts music from Taylor Swift or other popular Singers. At the Moment my favourite Song is Hello from Adele. She is so famous. After under one week her Song was the first in the Charts. And My hobbies are Painting. I like to Paint without a any Photos. But if it looks in the end as well as I want is another question. Often I try to draw Animes or Mangas, but they look so bad. I see lots of photos on Instagram, where People draw Animes characters in the Film. The Pictures look so easy to draw, and when I start drawing, I figure out that I can’t really draw. But I Still paint no matter if it’s look bad. Because I try to learn it. So just learning by doing. I like the Pictures from Bob Ross. I often saw him on TV, where he painted Landscape Pictures that looked so real. But now he’s not longer alive. What I also like, are Manga or Anime Pictures. I can’t draw the characters but just watching at pretty Pictures is also satisfying. Thank you for your attention

Kennt einer das Lied?ß
Hi ich suche ein Lied es geht in die richtung Rock... ich kann mich noch an folgende liedstelle erinnern ,,I can say your name again but it will never be the same like it does before,, Danke schonmal :)

Kritische Meinung (Hausübung, Englisch)?
Erstmals, ich will nicht, dass ich Hilfe bei meiner Hausaufgabe kriege. Ich will nur wissen, ob meine Meinung zu einer Schullektüre zu harsch ist. Ich habe dieses Buch abgöttisch gehasst. Es war wie ein schlechtes Kinderbuch geschrieben und war einfach voller Klischees. Unsere neue Englisch Lehrerin ist insgesamt sehr schlecht. Der Stoff ist wie aus der Unterstufe und wir machen NIE etwas richtiges. Ich habe früher Englisch geliebt, da ich meine Liebe zum Schreiben ausleben konnte. Das ist meine Meinung zu der erwähnten Lektüre: “Girl Online” is a story about a young girl, Penny, who is your average teenage girl. Her life changes when she starts her own blog, “Girl Online”. I did not thoroughly enjoy reading this book. In my opinion the story is very cliché, girl-meets-boy to begin with. Also the writing style is not really diverse and it sounds like an adult was trying to sound like a teen. Maybe it’s supposed to appeal to 10-to-12-year-olds rather than to 15-and 16-year-olds and above. There’s also a weak plot and stereotypical characters, like the gay best friend or the bad boy. It also seems to me that Penny’s panic attacks are just an attempt to add quirks to her personality, which I find to be despicable. Panic disorder is a very real mental disorder and should not be seen as a cutesy character trait. After all the criticizing I have to give to book props for portraying today’s social media and the world online somewhat accurately. All in all, I probably wouldn’t have read this book if it weren’t to be my school lecture. To be fair, I just feel like I don’t fit in the aimed age category, which may be the reason for my disliking. Ist das zu harsch ausgedrückt?

Wie heißt dieses Lied, das ich vorhin bei Hollister gehört habe?
Hallo, wie heißt dieses Lied? Ich hab im Laden einfach mal den ganzen Songtext mitgeschrieben, hab aber nichts mit Google gefunden. Wäre schön, wenn jemand den Namen kennt. Falls Fehler im Text sind, dann sorryyy, weil ich habs ja nur schnell mit dem Handy mitgeschrieben: I don't like it, I love it, love it, love it, uh oh So good it hurts I don't want it, I gotta, gotta have it, uh oh When I can finds the words I just go I don't like it, no, I love it I don't like it, no, I love it All out, turn the beat up Hey now I'm glad to meet ya Turn up girl, blow the speaker Yeah up, think about it now, blow the speaker I'll speak louder, let's get wild tonight Billionaire bottles, we just down em like Ain't no problem, all my roads are right All right, all right I don't like it, I love it I got another comin' in my budget I got a anaconda in my truck fit Don't push it, don't push it Cause I'ma hit it til I jackpot, that's right Wax on baby wax off, act right You can put it on the black card, all night And I'll spend it, I'll spend it cause I don't like it, I love it, love it, love it, uh oh So good it hurts I don't want it, I gotta, gotta have it, uh oh When I can finds the words I just go I don't like it, no, I love it I don't like it, no, I love it All night, let me group ya Dance with me, turn down for who girl Another runner help us step the moves up Yeah, bet that round need a measure or ruler Celebrate life and I'll pay for it That Cavalli nice next to my Tom Ford Yeah party all night, let's all aboard Let's all aboard, all aboard I don't like it, I love it And them other girl they can't touch it Competition, that's a whole nother subject I wanna walk it out in public You a star baby, just know, let's go To the mansion or the condo, let's go Perfect time gotta let it flow, you know I'm watching, I'm watching, cause I don't like it, I love it, love it, love it, uh oh So good it hurts I don't want it, I gotta, gotta have it, uh oh When I can finds the words I just go I don't like it, no, I love it I don't like it, no, I love it Meet me at the studio Bangarang just like Ruffio Feel the base, let ya booty go I wanna get inside it Run away for a few days Tied up like a shoe lace I don't like it, I don't like it I don't like it, no, I love it I don't like it, no, I love it I don't like it, no, I love it I don't like it, no, I love it

Habe einen Songtext geschrieben - Wie findet ihr ihn?
Strophe: I know you like it, this feeling of Freedom! You would falling but you need them. This feeling which you ever need. Now you are in the deep. And you like it. Refrain: Girl you know you like it. This feeling of Freedom. Now you are Free. You need them - I know. This Tree - This Feeling - This Freedom! Now you have Freedom! Strophe: The Airplanes write your Name. You are Free!. What you need is this - Freedom. Do you ever ask why you so perfect. I can say that I need that. Just I - I look behind and said:"She's perfect!". Refrain: Girl you know you like it. This feeling of Freedom. Now you are Free, You need them - I know. This Tree - This Feeling - This Freedom! Now you have Freedom! Strophe: But why you don't be happy? I thought you want to be free? This feeling have you not more again. But I know I fight for you. Strophe: Girl you know I like it. I wanne be another men - I fight for you. It's like the Way down in Africa. What the other said don't care - I fight for you. Refrain: Girl you know you like it. This feeling of Freedom. Now you are Free, You need them - I know. This Tree - This Feeling - This Freedom! Now you have Freedom! Strophe: The night gets over and you look at me. Yeah I'm Free! This Feeling is true. And you know I fight for you. Leider kann man es hier nicht so schreiben mit Zeile für Zeile... Weil es gleich alles hier zusammenfasst. Naja bitte schreibt eure Meinungen drunter. Danke :)

Verbesserungsvorschläge zu meinem Englisch-Referat?
Am Mittwoch habe ich meine Eurokom-Prüfung, die ich über Rihanna halte. Da ich gerade niemanden habe der mir mein Referat verbessern könnte, würde ich mich freuen wenn mir hier jemand Verbesserungsvorschläge gibt. About Rihanna Rihanna is a american singer. She was born on the 20th February 1988 in Saint Michael, a town in Barbados . Her full name is Robyn Rihanna Fenty. She is grew up in Bridgetown, the capital city of Barbados. Rihanna has two younger brothers and three half-siblings. Today she lives in New York. Music career The first album from Rihanna was „Music of the sun“. It was released in 2005. The song ''Pon de replay'' from the album, reached number one on the US-Charts. The album that had Rihanna made famous was „Good Girl Gone Bad“. That album was released in June 2007. Two songs were number one in the charts, others have high chart placings. Rihanna released her fifth album before she recorded „Love The Way you Lie“ with Eminem and ''Who's That Chick?'' with David Guetta, which were number one hits in Germany. 2010 she released the album ''Loud'' . In this album are more dance -and clubsongs than in „Good Girls Gone Bad“. This album reached number one in the UK- and the Swisscharts and was international in many Top-10 lists represent. Only Girl, What's My Name? and S&M were top one hits in the USA. In June Rihanna started her fourth world tour, with the name „Loud Tour“. Her last album was „Talk That Talk“. It was released in 2011. The song from the album „We found love“ could reach the place one in the charts of Germany, Switzerland, the UK and the USA. The song is one of the successful songs in the year 2011. Image Rihanna began her career as a reggea musican. She had an embossed imade of lightness and exotic. During her first two albums, she was often compared with Beyonce Knowles, but that she did not like. With the publication of ''Good Girl Gone Bad'' she changed her image. Her clothstyle was daring. With her new style Rihanna came to the list of the „50 Most Glamorous Women“. Moreover Rihanna is known for her tattoos. She has over 13 tattoos on her body.

Wie findet ihr die Einleitung ( Summary )?
The Story "Bend it like Beckham" was written bei "Autor" in "Jahr".The Story is about a india girl by the name of Jess who plays football against the will of her parents.Bend it like beckham Illustrates the difficult life of girls who grow up in a conservative parents house. Das ist meine Einleitung, wie findet ihr sie ? Danke für jede Unterstützung.

Englisch Grammatik Hilfe Text
Hallo, könnte mal jemand über diesen Text schauen und nach der Grammatik gucken, ob da alles passt? Das wäre toll (; The role oft he movie industry in the ‘Greyhound Tragedy’ story Who does not dream to be a star in Hollywood? The girl in the story doing it, she has a big dream. She wants to be a famous personality, like the people in her magazines. Her father has a different opinion, he wants his daughter to deal with real things and marry a young Ford salesman. Her father is he manager of a Penny’s, he knows how the hard, real life goes, therefore he dislike the plan of the girl, also because she is at home for just about 3 years, since she is out of Highshool. From 1929 to 1948 the Great Depression dominate the United States. It began in August 1929, when the United States economy first went into an economic recession. During this time, the desire to become famous in Los Angeles gave many people emotional foodhold. L.A. ist he biggest town in California and the heart oft he movie industry, because of that, this town is so legendary. The girl with the dream only sees the glory, positive site of the famous life. But many stars struggling with depressions, because they are always in public and they have to act perfectly. Every false face, every wrong step, every stupid comment…the press speculate about everything and they publish, what the majority want to read. They tear up their mouths about everything. The girl is oblivious, she wants this wants to be a star and she wants to die like a star - beautiful. Mostly, this are the dreams of the younger generation. The movie industry dizzle them with glitter and glory. There are 3 possibilities how this ends: you become a star, you don’t become a star, or you do not even dare to go to Hollywood and end like the girl in the story, with a great life you don’t want.

Kann jemand mein English Vortrag kontrollieren und korrigieren?
Guten Tag Da ich Legastheniker bin, würde ich es begrüssen, wenn jemand mein Text korrigieren könnte. Das Niveau ist B1. Das English sollte einfach und korrekt sein. Vielen Dank für die Hilfe. Anschliessend mein Text: Good morning Today I’m going to tell you about the song Blowin’in the Wind. Bob Dylan wrote this song in a New York pub. The song appeared 1963 and was in the charts on place two. A lot of other singers covered his song, as example Elvis Presley. The song is very famous. First of all, I talk to you about Bob Dylan. He is an American singer-songwriter and an artist. Since he was 10, his dream was, to be a singer or an guitarist. Furthermore he was interested in literature. In a district in New York he met other artist and he found his first big love. He wrote a lot of songs for her. That is so beautiful. In the biography about him he wrote a lot of privat stuff. He had an motorbike accident and so he stopped his carer for two years. An other interesting thing is that his dream was to have a easier job with normal hours of work. Funny is, Bob have an child and now he make also music. Unfortunately the marriage with his big love broke up. But he found a other girl and produce an girl with her. The album „the times they are a-changing“ brought him the breakthrough. Secondly, as the title of the album told, Bob Dylan (stellt?) a lot of rhetorical question and this is also the topic of the song. As example for an question is: How many roads must a man walk down. Before you call him a man? And he (stellt) a lot of other questions about war. The song applied as an national rock song. My opinion about this topic is positiv. I like rhetorical questions, because there are activate people to the thinking (weil diese Menschen anregen zum denken). Thirdly, i choose blowin’in in the wind, because i like the melody. It is slow, beautiful and i was very relaxed when i heard this song for the first time. For me is this not e typical rock song, it sounds more than a love song. But we now that is not the truth. I read in the Internet about the song and i believe i found the reason because the song is so relaxing. The melody have just two instruments, a guitar and a harmonica (Mundharmonika). And the guitar just needs the (Griffen) G, C and D. So, it easy, to covered this song. Many people play this song with friends, in Workshops and in demonstrations. Finally, I don’t agree with the ranking of the Rolling Stones Magazine, because there are just old songs. I prefer new pop and house songs. Thank you for your attention