Posted 4 Years Ago

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem....there is something in the choice of words and the pattern and the message that causes me to read and reread it. Short and to the point like a samurai battle; small and delicate like Japanese art. What more can be asked of words on a page? Well done, dear poet.

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Posted 4 Years Ago

It is oft said that one is worth their weight in gold - so does the part that is lost and makes one feel less of a person, one who is more vulnerable actually heal and possess more self worth when repaired with gold? I would think so.........and your words help me ponder this soul searching question.
Beautiful, and wise!

Posted 4 Years Ago

I like how you've taken that custom and weaved it into a poem about character. It's a brilliant idea for a poem. I like the essay style nature of your poem, question, question and then well what do you think? My conclusion - those golden lines are the light from which the character shines.