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You always manage to have such great lines, like:
"I cannot see my Master's face
With vision dim and blurred,
Or sing my praises to His name
With lyrics thick and slurred."

"How intrishting," replied the king,
This poem wasn't as clear and focused as your usual ones, and I think that's because you have two settings - one in the banqueting hall, and one in the scullery. It may have been more focused if you had started with the king finding the scullery maid and then contrasted his thoughts with hers.
Great job again, I always enjoy your poetic stories.

I love your poetry.I always feel as if I am in some kind of motion I can't get out of until I read to the end. They are kinda like a flowing river, yes that's it and I enjoy taking the journey. Blessings to you and your talent.

I wish that I could write poetry like that. The minute I read it, I knew it was your entry. There is something distinctive in your style. I could see everything that the characters saw in my mind's eye. You have an extroadinary gift, Kenn. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Kenn, writing works as AWEsome as this really pushes the bar high. I should through in my towel now. But I won't! Your are an inspiration & a true Master of Poety. May the Lord keep guiding your pen as you right for the glory of HIM!

Kenn, I have apsired to write poetry for years now. I have worked and played and prayed. Still, nothing I put on paper is comparable to what comes from you. Please, continue to bless us all with your boundless imagination and your playfullness with words. Thank you, Miss Andre.