I feel death
Surrounding me
While I yet live
Constantly showing yesterday
And all its blackness
Dismal
Subtil
Whispering suicide
Whispering homicide
Shouting at the life within me
I feel death
Touching me
While I yet live
Making me aware of today
Watching people
Drown in the depth of shallow
Killing themselves
With unseen weapons
Corrupting others
Ingesting poison
Reeking of rigor mortis....
I feel death
Taunting me
While I yet live
Forcing me into isolation
Looking for peace
A place of rest
Somewhere to hide from a dying world
Clothing itself in shame
Sucking the dying breasts of selfishness
Longing for life
Yet dying
Dying still
*sigh*
I feel death
I see death
I was death
Until.......

This one leaves me sittin down. Funny, twision, cause I been in the same space lately. Seein and feelin all the pain around me in others and marveling that it's so hidden most of the time. We all look the same on the outside but there's a galaxy of difference in the mind and body. Crazy, huh? This flow is off the chain.

Intelligent is one who can see and reconize 'DEATH' at it's core...we see and live "DEATH" on a daily basic that...unknowing to the most of us we...go to sleep with death, wake up with death, and plan and live our "death" ...to the fullest. You're a very bright and ALERT person...I totally feel you and it's a fact that...YOU can make a difference how you live ...LIFE or how you live DEATH.

Gempis- So true. Death lurks! Same exterior, very different interior. Wow you feel me...that's cool. One love

Quenntswana- Thank you for the compliment. Also thank you for sharing your take on this. It amazes me how perceptive you are. Peace and blessings

j'hiah- I learned from the best!!!!! (fellow town drunk)

Obscure- Like your name. Fitting. The format is basic, the read is easy. Decent....yeah. This one is subtil. It's just like a poet to inject depth into simple sentences! I am such a poet. Thanks for the read!