the dick's bar consistency is shit, work on your one bar... should be easy, think of it like an I
you gotta watch your drop shadows... keep em all going in the same direction
the pubes look weird. try making the lines flow a bit better. that creature's face and body are absolutely disproportional. also, ugly as fuck
don't add too many piercing just yet, practice a bit more until you gain better experience, and then u can start expanding your add-ons like piercings, halos, and quotes blablabla.
you also abused the amount and complexity level of veins in that dick. overkill. same thing applies to her fingernails...

hope my crits were helpful

oh and try not to go THAT much into details when drawing dicks... you don't want your drawings to show that you sat there and spent some time thinking of, focusing on, and visualising cock.

the dick's bar consistency is shit, work on your one bar... should be easy, think of it like an I
you gotta watch your drop shadows... keep em all going in the same direction
the pubes look weird. try making the lines flow a bit better. that creature's face and body are absolutely disproportional. also, ugly as fuck
don't add too many piercing just yet, practice a bit more until you gain better experience, and then u can start expanding your add-ons like piercings, halos, and quotes blablabla.
you also abused the amount and complexity level of veins in that dick. overkill. same thing applies to her fingernails...

hope my crits were helpful

oh and try not to go THAT much into details when drawing dicks... you don't want your drawings to show that you sat there and spent some time thinking of, focusing on, and visualising cock.

......THE WAY YOU JUST WENT ABOUT SAYING EVERY SINGLE WORD IN THAT CRIT WAS FUCKING HALARIOUS!!!!!!!! sorry i was crying a little bit at the end there.. it took me longer to upload the pictures off my camera then to draw that.. i was in a dick drawing contest my grad year and thats how i won was with the vains so i went all out in this one hehe