Okay. This was my breaking point. I'm sorry but I just can't keep reading this. I officially hate Bella in this story. I understand that what Edward did in New Moon was wrong, but at the same time I can appreciate why he did it. I personally think this was blown WAY out of poportion. And it kind of pisses me of that Edward is blamed for what happened to Brady. In my eyes it can never be his fault. Victoria and Laurent are the only ones to blame. Edward killed James to protect Bella and that is the reason for Victoria's actions. Edward wasn't really to blame for James trying to kill B. So how can he be to blame for Victoria coming after Bella? James, Victoria and Laurent are obviously totally evil and psycho. Don't see how that could be anyone's fault but their own... Jacob and the rest of the pack didn't have to protect Bella. They chose to. Again there is no way that Edward can be blamed... Sorry but that's just how I feel. I can't put myself in Bella's shoes, and maybe that's the problem for me. I would never be continually pissed of and sad that the guy I loved wanted what was best for me. Even if he was wrong. He did it out of love, and honestly, he sees himself as a soulless monster so it is so totally understandable to me why he did what he did. Bella was hell bent on getting changed, and Edward didn't want to take away her soul, her friends and her family. Is that really so wrong? I just don't understand how he deserves so much hatred for such actions...

Your fanfic is obviously very loved, and that's great. But it just wasn't me. I'm sorry if any of this comes off in a really bad way. Hang on to all of the love you get! And thanks for sharing your story. I just had to get my thoughts out...