First let me say good story, I really liked how it played out. I think the manner you portrayed the characters was great.

On the other hand as I was reading it I was hoping that it was creating backstory for future chapters. Imagine my dismay to see the words "the end"

Xoni Newcomer chapter 1 . 11/5/2004

One of the cutest, most tender vignettes I've ever read. I could perfectly see this happening in the narutoverse.

Jiri-chan chapter 1 . 11/5/2004

Waii~ another cute oneshot ehehe... well I guess Sakura-chan would only teach Naruto the opposite of what he is now / but Sakura at the age of nine was semi-shy at that time wasn't she? Or was it when she was seven? Waii got the ages mixed up. Eheh~ Hinata's apologizing even more than I do!