lunes, 29 de octubre de 2007

These are your mistakes in the last composition.Let's correct them to learn together.

01. My hobbies are to cook and watching TV.My hobbies are cooking and watching TV.02. My dog is called Linda, she's small.My dog is called Linda, it's small.03. I hate reptile.I hate reptiles.04. My surname is Ramírez Rodríguez.My surnames are Ramírez Rodríguez.05. I live in village the Seville.I live in a village in Seville.06. I like listen music, meeting friends, etc.I like listening to music and meeting friends.07. I have got a dog but I don't like.I have got a dog, but I don't like it.08. I like very much music.I like music very much.09. I am tall and with the brown hair and eyes.I am tall and I have brown hair and brown eyes.10. I like going with mys friends a the mountains for do scale.I like going with my friends to do practice climbing.11. I like wearing clothes sports with jeans.I like wearing sport clothes and jeans.12. I listen music of much type (rap, pop, etc...)I listen to music of many types, such as rap and pop.13. I favourite hobbies is the WWE.My favourite hobby is the WWE.14. I haven't got brother and sister.I haven't got any brothers or sisters.15. My pather he likes the animals and my mother don't like.My father likes animals and my mother doesn't.16. My dogs it names are Nuca, Lucera, Nerón.My dogs' names are Nuca, Lucera and Nerón.17. My hobby is playing voleibol.My hobby is playing voleyball.18. My name is Rocío and I'm Seville.My name is Rocío and I'm from Seville.19. I am large.I am tall.20. My name is Manoli and I'm Gerena.My name is Manoli and I'm from Gerena.21. My favourites hobbies are listening to music and going out.My favourite hobbies are listening to music and going out.22. I don't like see the futbol.I don't like watching football.23. I want to be big is a professor of education.When I grow old, I would like to be a sports teacher.