Your previous rendition of this was far, FAR better. If you're doing another album, please, for the love of god, don't put this on it.At about 1:35, what ever you were doing there sounded horrible, and made me want to vomit TBTH. Section after that you tried far to hard to make it 'heavy', when it really didn't need it. Wasn't too keen on the clean-ish tone closer to the end, but it wasn't any thing too major.