Heey Courtney.
Poor Lorrie! Eating disorder is terrible.. But I like her, and her personality. I don't like James.. He's just..ugh. Loved the way you portrayed Al. Most people don't make him like this, and it was refreshing to read.
Hope you'll update soon :)
-christine

Author's Response: Heey Christine :3
Haha thanks! this idea for this story wouldn't go away, so I had to post it, and I'm glad you like it. :3