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patronus_charm says:Hello there, I’ve been meaning to check out this story for ages, but as it’s been nominated in the ship off it’s an incentive for me to finally read it! And I can just quickly say I love The Supremes and that song, and it seems to perfectly fit what I imagine Arthur and Molly’s relationship to be like!

I rather liked Molly being adventurous as it’s a nice change from the housewife we usually see her as, and it was funny to see that she had other romantic interests other than Arthur! And the fact that she wants to make a love potion must show that she’s a clever, a thing people often ignore and assume she’s not as she’s just a homemaker.

Poor old Arthur having to be a lackey of someone else, he’s always mistreated isn’t he and he doesn’t deserve to as he is a lovely person! And poor old Molly getting herself into a ‘wobble’ as both of them took the potion!

I thought it was a great start to the story and I can’t wait to read on!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry it took me so long to respond to your reviews! I've been inexcusably lazy about getting to these.

I really enjoyed reading your reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing every chapter! It's really made me smile to hear what you think about the story as it progresses.

Molly has a lot more spunk than she generally gets credit for in fanfic, which I think is primarily because in the books we only see her as a 40-something mother, and the majority of fanfic writers are (it seems) teenagers. So I approach her a bit differently. :)

Arthur isn't a lackey exactly, Molly just doesn't view him as the important person in this exchange because she's focused on Thad.