sori dawg, i made a mistake while typin ma shit up..here the verse, jus a couple of typos fixes

avage Silencer?pfff… imma show u how much of a savage I am.

ur whole rhyme scheme’s wack, u bout 2 get savagely silenced queeryou fucks talkin 2 much shit, but ‘below-average’ the ambience hereyou can only claim savage, when you battling these element kidsI shake ur nation, leave you residing in caves like early-men didin ur case early-women, this gay fuck thought H-H-E was S-H-Ecould go on bout how much his sex a glitch, but imma drop the analogies like S-A-T*yo N I aint never hurda ur site, maybe it’s cos I don’t see em lamesthe site full of lil pussies, SS probably shook when the pm came**dawg, u nun but anotha meal N d rest of ya site, I “save em for dessert”but im compassionate ,so word of advice, do yaself a favour N revert…Folks say devour the weak first, so we decided to pick double H Elementscos lyrically they lacking, all they excel at is to mumble fake sentimentsplain to see why hip-hop’s dead, cos the “elements” is nuthin but rookiesendangered species, this 24 lines’ll extinct em faster than writin it took-melemme get back 2 SS, yall eva seen a savage get so easily silenced?hidin behind the name, cos he know it’s so eerie, the violencehe know im a savage, aint trynna end up at the wrong end of a silencerwas poppin off for a minute, became silent wen I gave him my answernow yall gna watch me make this bitch against me spin like gymnistskeep yo distance, ma pants got pockets big enuff 2 let the beam fitplus the silencer fitted, silently put the beatin on this dimwittim foul, dirty to tha core, don’t be fooled cos I might seem neatthis bitch here wanna take shots like And1 but im so sick with ittimbs fitted, bout to step on the weak, beat ithere’s a dick, eat it, then zip up lips, acknowledge the greatnessknow at the end, all you gonna be sayin is apology statements..

*SAT exams recently dropped analogies from part of the questions…research if u aint understand…**I pm him wen I was done wid ma verse

aiight, impleased this happend, everyone else juss do the same it aint hard

I had 46. An ill routine, but Imma still come downhard on ya, like ah guillotine.....

Your an actor, our forum aint your stage, ya got me?!/you gettin old like Ali, that's why yo play met-a-pause/ya flicked the switch, caught me with yo bitch; I picked up ma draws,had that ho stretchin when she opened her jaws/then hit up the next house like Santa Clause/yo put that aside, I'm attackin yo pride/ your mothers a slut; sucked so many dicks, she talk like Jabba the Hutt/5 digits to yo face, an each one of em lands, well you can call me yo new surgen, "Dr.Edward Scissorhands"/each bar hit you harder than, cast iron pans/I'll fuckin kill myself the day you have fans, hah, nigga please; I saw your girlfriend kick you in the ovaries/I ship you ova seas, trapped inna casket with killa bees,then dump ya in a ceptic tank, yo brains will dissolve in there, taste yo thoughts when you sneeze/I'll cut you down to size, learn to walk on yo knees/all you spit is garbage "FoulMouf" you even said it yourself/didn't yo mother tell you trash ain't good for yo health?!/my fuckin mental's a temple of knowledge an wealth, now I'm holdin the belt/the pain of kinetic energy u'll be the last thing you felt/I demonstrate skill, I wear you around like Buffalo Bill, if you walk through the jail yard, be on the "pill"/your forum's got nothin ta lose like a thrift store, no one would steal ya'll rhymes if you got rid of the front door/your god damn site is depressin; why wern't ya'll ready?!... yo HHE we musta wanted ta battle when them nigga's undressin/listen I ain't messin around, even my spit that hit the ground is profound; we wanted war with RN2 one way or the otha, but we made a mistake....we shudda battled they're bigger brotha/ don't fuckin walk with me I'm ahead of ma time, you couldn't even talk yo insults, don't bother ta rhyme/an I'm yet to reveal my pressence, barring my lyrical essence, the spiritual passage reveal the imperial sessions for testin bacterial progressions on everyday peasants, that surprise em like presents; but now they leavin they blessins, cus they were where your standin now....I'm teachin you lessons/

Foulmouf:Foulmouf had a much better start, but calmed down for a bit, and i wasn't feeling the "HHE, SHE, SAT" line, but saw what he was trying to do. That was followed by a personal that should've really just been filler, but was his actual point of the line "shook when the pm came". Then it was kinda mediocre until this line "endangered species, this 24 lines’ll extinct em faster than writin it took-me". That shit hit hard and built it back up, but then he went back to the "savage gets silenced" tip, which is kinda ehh, especially considering he already said that in the first line. Then he came with the "popping off for a minute, silent when i gave him my answer" shit, which hit nicely.Then kinda a buncha talking until the last line, which ended pretty hard.

Savage Silencer:Really slow start. Nice flow though, so it kept me listening/reading even though he wasn't saying anything too damaging.After that, he got on a roll and didn't stop. Started building up, getting real descriptive into the "taste your thoughts when you sneeze" line. That was nice.Got on the name flippin tip for a minute, wasn't bad for leading up.Keeping it going, building it up to the "buffalo bill/jailyard...pill" line. Sick. Worded real smooth too.Then threw in one more jab, and kinda rode the end out with flow, nothing too substantial, but just let it finish.

This is really tough to call. Foulmouf was straight spittin. Savage Silencer was flowing with well placed hits. I got bored in parts of Foulmouf's were I didn't in Savage's. But Foulmouf was more concentrated with disses. Foulmouf had 2 lines that I really liked, the "endangered species" and "silencer lines", other than that, nothing really stood out, not bad, just not shining. Savage kept shining with his flow, and other than the beginning, it was a damn solid drop. Savage Silencer had me laughing more and headnodding.

I read eah of these 5 times. I'm going with Savage Silencer by an inch. The energy and flow made each diss hit harder, and they were worded beautifully. Foulmouf definitely dissed more, but both were pretty even on damage levels. If either would've had one more hard-hitting line, it would've been a no brainer.

yo foul mouf A.K.A dookie spitta......you were more focused on dissin this site than focusing on savage.you lack focus son!!!!!!!! you cant even call that a battle rap.you sound like you tryin to battle the whole site but that aint what the header said.

I'ma hafta disagree guys...I think in a "SITE BATTLE", its allowed to diss on another site cuz it aint about those two only, its about the sites they respresent....i mean, in war, u hear wat counteries are fightin, not that liutenant Joe had a good gun fight with colonel Josh... ull just hear that a German killed a British dude....so i think that dissing the site is a good move, cuz they dont even know each other.. they are respresenting each other's sites and there fore that is more than ok....

i think this battle was a good start for this event... unlike the dudes here, i found Savage using a cheap method, no offense.... i know that no one cares about the structure, but savage overdid it... he put two lines and stuffed em in one.... so he had still more lines.... if u dont feel me.. then check em out.... i dont think thats a fair procedure.... similar sounding words must be aranged in lines when reaching a certain lenght..... it realy seemed unfair arranging one whole rhyme scheme in one line and starting a whole new other in the next one..... yes, some lines do have the same rhyme scheme as the line above, but thats only cuz they mostly belong in four lines and are made into two lines....mostly wat im reffering to are those two liners that were squeezed to a one liner......

Here are some examples:"yo put that aside, I'm attackin yo pride/ your mothers a slut; sucked so many dicks, she talk like Jabba the Hutt/5 digits to yo face, an each one of em lands, well you can call me yo new surgen, "Dr.Edward Scissorhands"/"

"I demonstrate skill, I wear you around like Buffalo Bill, if you walk through the jail yard, be on the "pill"/your forum's got nothin ta lose like a thrift store, no one would steal ya'll rhymes if you got rid of the front door/your god damn site is depressin; why wern't ya'll ready?!... yo HHE we musta wanted ta battle when them nigga's undressin/listen I ain't messin around, even my spit that hit the ground is profound; we wanted war with RN2 one way or the otha, but we made a mistake....we shudda battled they're bigger brotha/ don't fuckin walk with me I'm ahead of ma time, you couldn't even talk yo insults, don't bother ta rhyme/"

anyway, both verses were straight fire.... and i aint dickriding, but ima have to go with Foul on this one....Foul was constant attacking, which made this verse aggressive, and thats wat u need in this kind of circumstance...... like some of yall said, "if i guy had multie and shit but the other dude brought straight heat to the field, then I'ma vote for the one that ripped up the other, not the technical one" and i think punches were important here.... if not punches, then enjoyment.... i really enjyed Foul's verse... i enjoyed savages too, but it sometime seemed to me like a random drop.... like a verse u can post against anyone from RN2... sure it had a couple of lines with Foul's name there, but nothin too special to stand out and show that it was meant only on Foul....although, Savage's flow was on point unlike Foul, which had an oftenly broken flow at some places.... also, i liked the vocabulary Savage used.. it was good... and really professional, but as i said.. i enjoyed reading Foul's verse more, and in my opinion, he bombed the battle field with his disses on the site and Savage....i hope yall dont hold a grudge, but i vote for FoulMouf....

this battle was lack lusteras much shit talkin from both sites this battle didnt back it up

psh anyways

fouls best lines:

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Folks say devour the weak first, so we decided to pick double H Elementscos lyrically they lacking, all they excel at is to mumble fake sentiments

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here’s a dick, eat it, then zip up lips, acknowledge the greatnessknow at the end, all you gonna be sayin is apology statements..

your verse seriously lackedyou tried playin wit his name too much, and it just sounded repetitive and took away from the initial name playand your going in and out of dissin hhe and ss was sorta confusing, and the way you did it took away from ya verseyou used good vocab, but the content seriously lacked

savages best lines:

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Your an actor, our forum aint your stage, ya got me?!/

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5 digits to yo face, an each one of em lands, well you can call me yo new surgen, "Dr.Edward Scissorhands"/each bar hit you harder than, cast iron pans/I'll fuckin kill myself the day you have fans, hah, nigga please; I saw your girlfriend kick you in the ovaries/I ship you ova seas, trapped inna casket with killa bees,then dump ya in a ceptic tank, yo brains will dissolve in there, taste yo thoughts when you sneeze/I'll cut you down to size, learn to walk on yo knees/all you spit is garbage "FoulMouf" you even said it yourself/

your verse lacked in vocab but your content was on pointyou did a better job dissin both him and rn2but your beginning and ending were so boring...if it wasnt 4 tha middle you'da got slaughtered

i was gonna vote draw, but after re-readin em both...

vote:savage silencer by a hair

no offense 2 either of yall, but i hope tha rest of tha battles are more exciting than this

_________________im a man n eva since i got rich, since i got cents i got tints on every bens n since i know tension cum out them like vents, i vent...and show no relent its money well spent...lil wayne

ur whole rhyme scheme’s wack, u bout 2 get savagely silenced queeryou fucks talkin 2 much shit, but ‘below-average’ the ambience hereweak opener, u basically forced the rhymeyou can only claim savage, when you battling these element kidsI shake ur nation, leave you residing in caves like early-men diddis bar was nice thoin ur case early-women, this gay fuck thought H-H-E was S-H-Ecould go on bout how much his sex a glitch, but imma drop the analogies like S-A-T*lmao..dat was ill, keep um cominyo N I aint never hurda ur site, maybe it’s cos I don’t see em lamesthe site full of lil pussies, SS probably shook when the pm came**too straight with dis, u didn't hit him hard enuffdawg, u nun but anotha meal N d rest of ya site, I “save em for dessert”but im compassionate ,so word of advice, do yaself a favour N revert…ehhh..it was decentFolks say devour the weak first, so we decided to pick double H Elementscos lyrically they lacking, all they excel at is to mumble fake sentimentsagian too straightforward..punch dis niggaplain to see why hip-hop’s dead, cos the “elements” is nuthin but rookiesendangered species, this 24 lines’ll extinct em faster than writin it took-menow dats how u do it..always hit, always punchlemme get back 2 SS, yall eva seen a savage get so easily silenced?hidin behind the name, cos he know it’s so eerie, the violencenah, u should've word dis betterhe know im a savage, aint trynna end up at the wrong end of a silencerwas poppin off for a minute, became silent wen I gave him my answersilencer/answer doesn't really rhyme dudenow yall gna watch me make this bitch against me spin like gymnastskeep yo distance, ma pants got pockets big enuff 2 let the beam fitgymnasts/beam fit..u're forcing shit nigga & dis would've been illplus the silencer fitted, silently put the beatin on this dimwitim foul, dirty to tha core, don’t be fooled cos I might seem neatweak, but YET AGAIN..it's dimwit, not dimwheat, therefore neat doesn't rhyme with it!this bitch here wanna take shots like And1 but im so sick with ittimbs fitted, bout to step on the weak, beat ithere’s a dick, eat it, then zip up lips, acknowledge the greatnessknow at the end, all you gonna be sayin is apology statements..lol, damn good way to close ur verse out tho

versus

SavageSilencer wrote:

I had 46. An ill routine, but Imma still come downhard on ya, like ah guillotine.....should've scratch'd dis if it's meant as an openerYour an actor, our forum aint your stage, ya got me?!/you gettin old like Ali, that's why yo play met-a-pause/lol, yeah I caught it..nice oneya flicked the switch, caught me with yo bitch; I picked up ma draws,had that ho stretchin when she opened her jaws/then hit up the next house like Santa Clause/dat shit was funny IMOyo put that aside, I'm attackin yo pride/ your mothers a slut; sucked so many dicks, she talk like Jabba the Hutt/it's redundant at dis point tho5 digits to yo face, an each one of em lands, well you can call me yo new surgen, "Dr.Edward Scissorhands"/each bar hit you harder than, cast iron pans/lol..u're stretchin lines, but dis was tightI'll fuckin kill myself the day you have fans, hah, nigga please; I saw your girlfriend kick you in the ovaries/I ship you ova seas, trapped inna casket with killa bees,I don't kno Sav, I really wasn't diggin dis too muchthen dump ya in a ceptic tank, yo brains will dissolve in there, taste yo thoughts when you sneeze/I'll cut you down to size, learn to walk on yo knees/yeah Sav..stunt dat savage shit, explain da namesakeall you spit is garbage "FoulMouf" you even said it yourself/didn't yo mother tell you trash ain't good for yo health?!/my fuckin mental's a temple of knowledge an wealth, now I'm holdin the belt/the pain of kinetic energy u'll be the last thing you felt/a very clever pair of bars hereI demonstrate skill, I wear you around like Buffalo Bill, if you walk through the jail yard, be on the "pill"/lol, more savagry nigga..keep it cominyour forum's got nothin ta lose like a thrift store, no one would steal ya'll rhymes if you got rid of the front door/lol..yepyour god damn site is depressin; why wern't ya'll ready?!... yo HHE we musta wanted ta battle when them nigga's undressin/nah, I didn't like dis at all, u didn't word or structure it rightlisten I ain't messin around, even my spit that hit the ground is profound; nicely stunt'dwe wanted war with RN2 one way or the otha, but we made a mistake....we shudda battled they're bigger brotha/ anotha decent punch..loldon't fuckin walk with me I'm ahead of ma time, you couldn't even talk yo insults, don't bother ta rhyme/whoa, dat was one of ur hardestan I'm yet to reveal my pressence, barring my lyrical essence, the spiritual passage reveal the imperial sessions for testin bacterial progressions on everyday peasants, that surprise em like presents; but now they leavin they blessins, cus they were where your standin now....I'm teachin you lessons/I luv'd dis entire closer, ya dropped knowledge on dudeson Sav..good

Overall:In all honesty, no hate or maybe I am bias, but Sav went hard on dis one, Foul was cool, had alotta hot lines with good concepts, but forced rhymes & too many straightforward lines didn't land hard, really cost u in the outcome. Eventhough Sav did somewhat cheat doubling a few of his lines I'd still..vote - SavageSilencer. Complain or whateva, but dats a realtalk view of the battle. Good shit from both ~2'z~

yo N I aint never hurda ur site, maybe it’s cos I don’t see em lamesthe site full of lil pussies, SS probably shook when the pm came**plain to see why hip-hop’s dead, cos the “elements” is nuthin but rookiesendangered species, this 24 lines’ll extinct em faster than writin it took-meFolks say devour the weak first, so we decided to pick double H elements cos lyrically they lacking, all they excel at is to mumble fake sentiments^foul mouf's best lines

I ship you ova seas, trapped inna casket with killa bees,then dump ya in a ceptic tank, yo brains will dissolve in there, taste yo thoughts when you sneeze/I demonstrate skill, I wear you around like Buffalo Bill, if you walk through the jail yard, be on the "pill"/your forum's got nothin ta lose like a thrift store, no one would steal ya'll rhymes if you got rid of the front dooryour god damn site is depressin; why wern't ya'll ready?!... yo HHE we musta wanted ta battle when them nigga's undressin/listen I ain't messin around, even my spit that hit the ground is profound; we wanted war with RN2 one way or the otha, but we made a mistake....we shudda battled they're bigger brotha/

^...savages best lines

good opener battle both showed some skill...

flow, multi's...savagewit and creativity...savageimagery...savage with that septic tank linepunches...foul i liked the extinct line the bestaggression...I thought savage took it by a little with the lines above...structure...foula closer battle than this shows^^^

foul I thought you could've flowed your lines better...atleast rhyme at the end of lines, you had one to many awkward ones...

savage some of your lines may have hit harder if they were shorter, I don't care for the girlfriend/mom lines unless it's really original or funny..

overall I thought savage had an edge with quality and interest...fouls verse was just kinda consistant through out...savages started slow but then picked up and started to hit harder...

vote savage

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Now you pushed me, to the edge like rapists, I don't respect you pussys
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