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Whistles!!! Gosh, Gillena I am absolutely floored :D Loved both the poems. Soulmates is such a beautifully romantic write :D especially adore the lines 'You became the cliche, the end to my sentences, you became the dew for fresh new mornings." When I read Chickened out I recalled a quotation by Sir Walter Scott 'Fortune may raise up or abuse the ordinary mortal, but the sage and the soldier should have minds beyond her control.' Beautifully executed!

Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support :D :D

How well you described that comfortable feeling of loving another to such a degree that are but one. In your second poem I too would chicken out not having the faith to trust a seer (and also thinking I'll make my own way!).

You became the cliche, the end to my sentencesYou became the dew for fresh new morningsSo after all this time we left the queue

How wonderful to be having the one where both are meant for each other. You nailed it with the beautiful lines. For the second one, it is often a concern to be told of what's coming that one just don't want to hear it!

I love the depth of Soulmates and the change of pace to Chickened Out! Love is a process and a risk at times and yet 'We etched the sunset into our empty recognition..We etched the horizon out for changed landscape'..seems to suggest it is very much worth the work :)

Enjoyed these both so much,,,some serious, sensual romance and a bit of wasted time in that queue :-) the chicken is perfect for the poem! I also love the lines "You became the cliche, the end to my sentencesYou became the dew for fresh new mornings" It would be so nice to have such feelings for someone.