Its heartbfreaking and its good, and yet I fell like she shouldnt be so harsh with him. Its not his fault if in her head scenario he doesnt reciprocate her feelings.. of course we know thats not true..

And he should be more agressive, take the hints and heart rate and face flush and looks that she gives him and go for it. Shes not a mind reader so he must show and tell her how deep and strong and passionate his feelings are.

Please, please, I really like how you write Lois, please get them together soon.

good writing there - i hate seeing lois feel vulnerable about her feelings for clark, cos it just reminds me of how i would deal with my feelings to. you wrote lois's thoughts really well and it was very moving at the end when she had to run away from him.

i always want to yell at her "you stupid woman you're running the wrong way - he's back that way! you don't know what you're doing" but at the same time i can understand why she's running

After that nightmare i'm surprised lois restrained herself to a phone conversation! i'd have been round his place trying to break into the kent farm to make sure he was still alive!

lol

that dream was pretty intense - i suppose cos it took him so long to pick up it gave her a chance to catch her breath just so she didn't blurt out "I love you clark, always have, always will" - bridget Jones style lol

I really like this story so far. I was happy to see a story from you, seeing as you've popped up to review my stories more than once. Now I can return the favor! I'm really interested to see where you're taking this.

I like your writing style too. As much as descriptive imagery is nice, it's also nice to read lighter lines as well that focus more on the person's feelings/actions and further the dialogue. It's a lighter form of writing that has a nice pace to it but still conveys the emotions and intended stuff. Lol, I'm tired so this may be a bit convoluted, but that's me complimenting you, I swear ;)

can i just say that you wrote this chapter really well. especially concerning the thoughts on lana. It felt really true to what i think clark would be going through in his head so really big well done on that!