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I suspect that the Merchant was the one who squealed on the Crimson Merchant/Demon Queen.

I seriously hope not, especially when he was actually becoming likable. Didn't he say he still planned on pursing a relationship with DQ after learning her identity? I don't see how this would benefit him business-wise either.

I like that part, it's at the same time :
- funny
- a way of showing that it's their roles that matters the most to the world
- that the story could be universal
- how the author is breaking down a video game story

I like that part, it's at the same time :
- funny
- a way of showing that it's their roles that matters the most to the world
- that the story could be universal
- how the author is breaking down a video game story

This is definitely my guess, also what church order is this that is showing up? It's not Female Knight's order is it? So they might be annoyed that some other order has basically started spreading and gaining power.

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I don't think so, not anymore so than using names like "Luffy", "Naruto", or "Ichigo". I mean technically every time we say Ichigo's name we're saying strawberry in English. In comparison we could reverse it and use "Yuusha" (I think?) for the MC's name here and it'd achieve the same thing.

I honestly like it, and find it to integrate the characters into the story extremely well. It makes it seem like they're fulfilling roles necessary to make a story like this operate well, yet at the same time adding a fresh new perspective to the classic roles we've familiarized ourselves with throughout the years (whether it be video games, stories, or other media).

I don't find it irritable how the characters name are being called. The story is amazing and the Demon Queen is so adorable and full of win.

They can call her Booby Lady for all I care and I would still read it.

Right on! That is certainly one good way to put it. But I wonder how this'll effect the relationship of all the cast thus far, the accusations that is. Wonder to if there will be someone to counter the claims against them.

So, I'm going to avoid talking about the nitwit maniacs causing all the trouble for our crew. Since that would only result in endless pages of derogatory terms. As usual, so much happened in this chapter!

As usual, everyone else besides the guys in the most power appreciate and understand everything our favourite Demon Queen is doing. To avoid dissecting the chapter, I'm just going to leave it at that I'm psyched to see what the merchant intends to do. It tugged at the heart strings when I saw the two maid sisters though, I felt so bad for them. The moment between Female Knight and Hero was awesome.

Lastly, I still absolutely love how strong our Hero is. They literally said, "You know, you could pretty much take them all out.". Even though we know he would never do that, just the fact he has that much power makes him top tier MC material. Though honestly (even though it would create a ton of problems), I wish he would just stomp their faces in. That one guy looks half way there already anyways.

Crap just when things were starting to get better too. I really hope the Hero has a plan to protect the Demon Queen, his friends, and at the same time uncover what's happening. I guess this is what they call a hero's trial.

Not really sure if was best for Holy Knight to pledge herself to Hero despite knowing she can't ever have him.

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Originally Posted by FRS

I think it's more likely White Night king revenge.

Looks like you were right. Guess we should have seen this coming after he was snubbed out of Union of the Southern Kingdoms. You don't do things like that to monarch of country and not expect retribution. In hindsight it would have probably been better to placate him a bit. At least until you could trap him politically, to prevent things like this.

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Originally Posted by Deikan

Crap just when things were starting to get better too. I really hope the Hero has a plan to protect the Demon Queen, his friends, and at the same time uncover what's happening. I guess this is what they call a hero's trial.

I think that's problem, things were going a little too well with our protagonists since there was lack of antagonist and a conflict. Now they hit pretty complex situation that's not simply going to rollover without smart tactics.