Equal in God's Eye

Below is the poem entitled Equal in God's Eye which was written by poet
Debbie
Guzzi. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Equal in God's Eye

REFRAIN
What does sets us above the pack;
the throng, the herd the mob?
And, do all these most righteous things
bring us nearer to our God?
Does walking upright, head held high
give clear sight from aloft
thus showing those who walk on four
as merely God's cast offs?
What does sets us above the pack;
the throng, the herd the mob?
And, do all these most righteous things
bring us nearer to our God?
Do denizens of air and sea
fall farther from God's grace,
And, are the golden buzzing bees
so damned to be erased?
What does sets us above the pack;
the throng, the herd the mob?
And, do all these most righteous things
bring us nearer to our God?
Or, will we find on judgment day
bound to, entombed surprised
when we realize all God's creations
are equal in His eyes.

Wish you could get the opportunity to show this to David Foster...WOW would be a National Hit Classic...
Try sending it to him....Just Google David Foster....everyone has heard his music through the years...

It is God's grace upon our face that answers all these questions. When little lambs and puppy dogs beguile us with their charm. How could we think of doing them the slightest bit of harm. I know this got a little off the track, but all God's creatures deserve concideration and respect. Even rats. :) I guess. :) Great poem Debbie, wonderful reminder to be kind.

There is no contest, I'm trying to compose hymns for our church services..this could be for Earth Day? If anyone knows of a sound track which the meter of the words would work for let me know please. It's 8/6/8/6..mostly ;)

An outstanding ballad you've composed my dear friend Deb! I love it very much and i feel like singing with praise while reading it! A winning piece for me! Thank you so much for sharing and God bless you always! love and hugs, Leonora

Its SIN-dee. Hi! I especially like the last stanza. Ends just as it should, strong. I finished my short story for the paper and hope to get back into writing and reading tomorrow. We had a lovely day out- preschool, library, restaurant, and a free outdoor concert, Santa in a sleigh and dancing around the tree. PLUS my girl is having no. 2 potty success FINALLY. We are having a potty party tomorrow. (Yeah. I'm weird. A loving weirdo mother. LOL) I'll go back to Dee in a day or two. :) xox