Comments about this poem (...with smile by Manonton Dalan )

yes... i heard
your crispy voice
enough to give beats
to my resting senses
it feels so good
you couldn’t imagine
the joy you have given me
hope you do the same.lovely poem i can't resisting adding something to it... i liked it....

I am here
you are there
still i bear
continously hear
your foot steps
it creates some sense
m not at all tense
it is unique
i too seek
your company
there are not many
you are one and only one
come to me as only one--