That was so sweet! Andrew seems like a nice guy, and I really like Is. Great job. :)

anon chapter 1 . 7/19/2008

I love this, because the ending was different. Usually it's "OMG is that what happened? I totally forgive you now! I love you again." I like how she didn't jump into his arms, but the issue was still resolved.

well, i really liked this little piece. it's kinda really good actually. i'm surprised you don't have more reviews because i think this is great. it's not cliche, but not depressing and the language is nice as well. you may have a few words missing here and there, but aside from that, you did an amazing job

From the ones I've read so far, I guess this was the best writing you did. I like how the ending is still left a bit open, even if they have sort of talked it out. Nice work! A few errors, true, but nothing that would make most readers cringe.

This is very different, and very well-written! Such an original plot (with some many seen things, but that's excusable). I really like this one because it's not typical "girl gets guy" or "guy gets girl." But it's still sweet, and I'm very glad artistic dreamer suggested this to me, which is why I'm adding it to my c2. (: