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Friday, May 11, 2018

Lunacorns!!! 🦄

This week in rimu we have been learning to write Non chronological reports. We had to write about a made up animal.This is one of mine, it is about Lunacorns. I found it hard writing a conclusion, so I just wrote some fun facts. I hope you enjoy reading. And please leave a comment on what I did well and what I could improve on. 😀

Lunacorns 🦄

Lunacorns, Also known as “ Unicorns of the moon” are mythical creatures of Luna ( The moon). Some say that every Blue moon, they enter the Earth's atmosphere. To drink from the firefalls, which is located in the Northern Hemisphere. There are many Tales of these mythical creatures that still roam today.

Appearance

A Lunacorn can easily be mistaken for your regular unicorn. But a Lunacorn has many more features such as:

Wings

Hair that changes color according to its mood

But otherwise they wood look like your average unicorn.

Habitat

Once every Blue moon a troop of Lunacorns enter the earth's atmosphere, and ride the aurora polaris to the drink from the fire falls. That is located in the northern hemisphere. At the crack of dawn the prepare to leave. Leaving the eldest (the leader) behind, for he is to weak to fly back.

Luna corns mostly live in craters. Foals, are snuggled into several other holes, that are dug into craters,

Eating habits

Lunacorns mainly live on the tropical fruit located on the Firefall island.

Counting:

Mangos

Watermelons

Guava

And Pineapple.

Did you know? 🤔

A male lunacorn can lift something ten times his weight

And a Lunacorn can weigh up to 5 tonnes!

A luna foal’s poop is pink and smells like cherries!

A lunacorns wingspan can be up to three meters long!

I hope you enjoyed my Non chronological report🤩

3 comments:

Hello,My name is Bella and I am a year 6 student at Papakura Central School. I found it quite funny and interesting and defiantly learnt something about Lunacorns. I really liked your description about them and now I really want to meet one! Maybe next time you go back and re-check your work. Overall good job!Kind regards, Bella.

Hello,My name is Chimay and i am a year 5 student at Waikowhai Primary school.You're so lucky that you got to make unreal animals. Our class never writes poems about unreal animals! Maybe i'll ask, Maybe next time you should write more about the lunacorn appearance.Overall great job!If you want to check out my blog go to https://wpschimayj.blogspot.co.nz/ Bye for now.

Hello Jedi, I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I really like your blog post describing a Lunacorn. Also it's cool how you added a "Did you know" in your writing. You could maybe not space the lines apart that much because it makes it hard to read.Thanks,Ben

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