Ooh, cute ^-^
But... Aren't there humans in the woods? unless they don't dare go into the woods... If they can't, does it mean the elves have a camp there? It would give them an advantege.
And Dak seems to be in a pretty good mood considering he just got out of a bloody battle field, isn't he?

Yes, Dak is a selfish little buggar. But...he's so sexay! I am very thrilled that my readers are getting turned on to Jaye's character more after this nice little backstory, which isn't quite over. Next, its on to the present. Finally get to see Nym again!

Chica, ALL your characters are likable. I mean, look at creepy cape guy and his bitch (Yes, I know their names). I LOVE that couple. They are so cute together and I wanna see more of their grudging relationship.

Jaye I like because he's so angst-ridden that you know there has to be SOMETHING more you haven't told us. And it has to do with the fact that he's not running around like a prince anymore. But he's really sweet under all that bitterness and those walls.

Dak is just adorable. You want to punch him and cuddle him and make him your sex toy all at the same time. He's so incredibly oblivious to some things, and it's fun to watch him get it (Ie. when he gets punched by Jaye).

Nym.... Hehehe.... Nym can be my pimp anytime he wants. He's a badass. That's always fun to play with. He's kind of like Lilo's Stitch in that you know there's good in him. You saw it in his childhood flashback thing. And Jaye is just the cutie to bring it out of him.

But I wouldn't be opposed to a lurve triangle.

And this is how it started with 'Mila. I will NOT build you a shrine, missy. So don't even ask. I'm too busy working on my page. Besides, I'll never update.