Rated 4 / 5 stars2009-10-14 21:24:49

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars2009-10-14 05:22:27

interesting needs work though

funny, this has potential, but too much black screen with writing in it. not enough animation or story development. work on the artwork and the character development. you use the music from rocky, this film is good not because of the fight at the end but because of the character development beforehand. do a similar thing with this. have your nerd trying to work out a way to beat the bully before running off to the teacher

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars2009-10-14 06:51:56

Rated 1 / 5 stars2009-10-14 05:19:22

Sliding pplz.

There was hardly any animation, using it in a loose sense. You just kind of drew them and made them slide around. Try and add more action, and movement to it. and the animation was fine, just clean it up a bit, not such bold outlines.