Through an unknown portal the guardians get into Verona, Middle Ages. Cornelia is thought to be Juliet Capulet and Caleb as Romeo Montague. What will be the feelings between them in the epoch of Shakespear's characters? Chapter 11 is up & lyrics

Hey guys! That's
me again. So, my story is finished and I hope you like it. His is the
last chance you can review. As you noticed I used some song lyrics in
my story which made even more brilliant. I used French lyrics from my
favorite musical 'Romeo & Juliette', cause French is the
language of love. But if you don't speak French, I put the
translations here for you to understand the beauty of the epithets.
So, here go

Lyrics'
translations

I
start from chapter one. In the beginning of it I put the first French
lyrics. It's 'Ouverture' ('Overture') (form 'Romeo &
Juliette) (well, all French lyrics are from this
musical) and it introduces the story. As Caleb and
Cornelia's story is very similar to Romeo and Juliet's, these
lyrics suit greatly. So, here are the translations

All
stories, similar beginning,

Nothing new under the
moon

When
a star goes out,

Another one starts to
shine

Of course, the rain and
the chance,

The night and the
guitars

One
can believe it inEach one its words, and its glancesAll the
stories have their own history

Do not listen to what
you are toldLove, it can't be counted

And
will love forever,Will love so strongly,And then, gently,
without wanting itIt passes from the heart, with the memory

All
the stories, similar beginningNothing new under the moonHere
is one, of Romeo and Juliet.

Very beautiful,
isn't it?

And
now we skip to the romantic chapter 4, to the ball at the Capulets.
Remember first Caleb's feeling when he saw Cornelia at the ball? I
used lyrics form 'L'amour heureux' ('Happy love') and here
are the translations:

'…At
that time Caleb had a strange feeling in his soul. He started to look
around the ball room and his sight stopped at a bright figure beside
the window.

She wears a light
dress,

A
little silk, for whom?

She is beautiful,
beautiful to die,

Beautiful to choose

One
day to die for her'

And here's the
first feeling of Cornelia when she saw Caleb on the ball. It is also
from 'L'amour heureux'

'…At
that moment Cornelia's heart gave her a strange feeling which she
never had before. She didn't know what it was and what it was
caused by, she only turned around and saw him…

Those
are the eyes of the menBut when his eyes he look at me,

And he is shining like
an angel in hell,Like an angel on Earth,

Like
an angel of light he is shining'

And
now chapter 5, when Cornelia is in Juliet's bedroom before meeting
with the girls, dreaming. It's 'Le poète' ('The poet')
and here how this sounds in English:

'…Cornelia
was totally in dreams. Now all her fears seemed unimportant for her,
she wasn't afraid of the situation she was in, she even forgot that
they all could easily stay in Verona for ever, that she could be
forced married on Paris and that Phoboes will rule the world. She was
so glad to see her only love again, talk to him, know that he is al
right, that she didn't care of anything happening in the world.

I
don't care of the universeBecause this evening, I love a manTo
speak about the world and its mysteries,To speak about all is to
speak too much,Tell me poet, why do I needOne day more
without Romeo?I don't care of the evils of the worldBecause
this evening I love a man…'

Yeah,
that evening Cornelia had the same feeling as Juliet after the ball.
And here are the next lyrics of chap 5. That's when Cornelia takes
the Heart of the Ocean and again falls in romantic thoughts. It's
the most romantic song of the whole musical 'Aimer' ('To love')
(well, just a piece of it) and here it is:

'…But
it was about midnight and the girls must have already come. Cornelia
stood up and put on her light pink dress. She was going to the
balcony to give the other guardians a sign. When she was passing by
the small table she noticed the Heart of the Ocean shining and took
it in her hands. Every moment of that evening got alive in her memory
in details.

Love, that means to
steal the time,

Love that means stay
alive

And burn in the heart
of the volcano,

Love,
this is the greatest thing ever.'

And
here comes the most romantic moment of the chapter, when Cornelia and
Caleb sing in French together. They sing 'Le balcon' ('The
balcony') and here it is:

'...«If
only he knew about my feelings! » Cornelia thought. Her heart
was full of feelings and she couldn't keep them inside and to let
them out she sang:

What
star, what god,I owe this love in his eyes,Who wished up
thereThat Juliette loves RomeoWhich star, Which GodI owe
this love in his eyes,Even if I must pay the priceOf a
forbidden loveWhy our fathers hate each other,And the
daughter loves the son,That must make someone laugh, there, high
aboveThat Juliet loves Romeo.

Caleb
was also surprised. When he heard Cornelia's sweet voice he also
couldn't keep everything in and when Cornelia finished he came from
behind the wall and sang:

What
star, what godI owe this love in her eyes,Let it be their
will,Because Romeo loves Juliet

The
guardians opened their mouths. Cornelia heard Caleb and her heart
bet. She looked down and saw him, their eyes met. Caleb continued:

If
it is necessary to pray, I will prayIf it is necessary to fight,
I will fight,But why do I have to payFor the right to love
each other?

Then they were
singing in duet:

And
let our fathers torn each other in parts,Their children want each
otherIt is invisible to change the history,But ours will
begin this evening

Caleb
started to climb up the wall. Cornelia:

And
so much the worse to those, who is disturbed by

Caleb
climbed on the balcony. Caleb:

That
an innocent virgin loves an angel

They
stood on the balcony together, looking at each other. (Singing in
duet: )

(And
I had changed the last lines in order to make this song more suitable
for my story. That's what turned out of it: )

What
star, what godI owe this love in her eyes

Does
the shining lily knowThat Caleb loves Cornelia

He
took gently her arms in his… (Singing in duet: )

What
star, what godI owe this love in his eyes,Does the sun, the
phoeb knowThat Cornelia loves Caleb

So
romantic that I nearly cry. Anyway, here goes chapter 7 and the part
when Cornelia tells the Nurse about her feelings. Nurse's feelings.
That's 'Et voila qu'elle aime' ('And here she's in love')
and the translations:

«Oh,
ma fille, you grew up, you love» the tears we visible in the
woman's kind eyes

And
now she's in love, and here she dancesShe says to me 'I love
him', she leaves childhoodAnd me, nothing more than her nurse,
her pillow,But she is similar to meAnd I am the only one
who trembles for her.And now she's in love, and here she
dances,And now she's in love…

And
that's again chap 7, the end of it, when Caleb and Cornelia suffer
from unknowing if their feelings were true or just a lie for the
Nurse. I couldn't put in the end of such a romantic chapter
something unromantic, so here goes again a piece of 'Aimer' and a
very romantic translation:

Love,
this is stronger than anything,It gives best usLove, that
means to feel your heart,Love, to have less fears

So
that how it looks like. And now we're off to chapter 8 and in the
beginning I had put a piece from 'Par amour' ('Because of
love'). That's also very romantic:

Because
of love people have so much sufferings,But it is the only
starWhich guides us in the nightWithout love, our lives are
empty,Without love…

Those are all
French lyrics for now.

Also
used English lyrics:

'My
heart will go on' from 'Titanic' (chapter 4)

'A
time for us' from 'Romeo & Juliet' (movie) (chapter 5)

'These
are my rivers' from 'Romeo & Juliet' (musical, English
version (English version of 'Aimer')) (chapter
11)

So,
now I'm totally finished with this story. I'm so glad that you
guys like it so much! I'll definitely write new stories and you can
send me your ideas, I'll be glad to use them in my further
creations. So, please review, tell me your opinion.

See ya in the
next stories!

By for now,

with love

Chelsea.

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