Okay, this fic was just so unique and amazing on so many levels. I don't think I've read anything in second person on hpff, and you did it so well. I loved that this was also written in the perspective of the fwooper itself- that added a unique twist that made this story even better than it already was.

Though the plot of this story was a simple one, the wonderful writing and interesting choice of perspective makes up for that completely. I loved Roxanne's interaction with the Fwooper, (ahh she's just so cute!) and that ending line was so powerful.

All in all, great job on this story- I'm definitely going to check out more of your work soon!