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Review:

The_Marionettes_Mask says:This is such a hauntingly beautiful piece. The writing is flawless and it drew me in from the first sentence. The song is so eerie and you did a good job fitting the story to it. Lorcan's obsession with coffins... oh my. I have to admit that when Lily left her bed in desperation I almost thought that she would trip and fall and die or something so that it would be ironic in that, in running from the coffin, she would actually end up needing it sooner >_

Author's Response: Baha! That would be one whole heap of irony if she actually popped her clogs while trying to smash up her coffin. Lorcan would probably be torn between celebration and grief; he'd probably lay her in it going 'do you like it? Is it comfortable?'

No, that's too weird, even for him. Aaanyway...

Thank you very much for the review! Yeah, the song is pretty eerie. Florence before the machine actually used to sing at funerals for a living, apparently, so, er, symbolism for you there!