Not bad. Improve overall commentating skills. Everything should be clear and precise, and well thought out. You have to know what you want to say before you say it. This prevents stuttering, pauses, and GAY ANALOGIES from occurring. Improve vid quality (if possible). Improve game play. Mix it up a little, camp, rush, flank, etc.

Also, why do you sound black?

I like my gay analogies
/ how to improve gameplay, that the way i play. I patrol, get kills. And no one wants to watch a camp fest.