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Review:

AIP Alexander says:I'm going to be brutally honest with you. The plot of the story is
extremely good, and you developed your characters nicely, but
other than that i can't say much about your story. It had SO much
potential, you could have carried the story on for several more
chapter, and made each of them longer. I feel like you grew bored
of the story and you started cutting the chapters shorter and
shorter. I mean you skipped 6 months in the story! You could have
showed us how the relationship carried on, the little fights, and how
the students reacted to their relationship. You can do so much
better!

Author's Response: Truthfully, I have a serious issue with commitment to my stories. It felt like no one really wanted it to carry on, and I didn't want to push it forwards and drag it out a lot. Also, with the carrying on bit, I just wouldn't know what to do, what the plot would be. HOWEVER, I will keep this in mind, and a very large editing of Bulldozer with extra plot and chapters may still be a possibility.