There are plenty of flaws in the track which I am sure you notice, I didn't reach my technical goals with the production, but I did reach the artistic goal.

The original is very high energy, so I thought I'd take that energy and spread it out, try to make it more dramatic so you had an alternative version with a very different feel.

Anyway, thanks for posting back. Finishing and finalizing this track is the single best thing I've ever done for my music. Being forced to hit the deadline I had to solidify my choices, and once it's done you immediately know what you'd do different next time.