i love it, and have loved it for a long time. you capture the atmosphere and relationship between them in the way i imagine it myself, and it makes me really wish that you would write more fanfic about these two.

Very cute! I can really picture this! Them knocking down magazines, getting thrown out of the market, and Betty's 'trick' to get him to take her home (not that she needed one), all help to set us up. I lived in England and come to think of it, I don't believe there were Cheetos, you're right! Good thing for Daniel & Betty!