The name drop was entirely unwarranted and almost assuredly not a coincidence.

Retarded in the extreme.

Anonyfag chapter 18 . 10/16/2008

So are you a creationist, author, is it just characterization at work?

Also magitechnology relies on the mana emitted by the tree of life, and as such is a localized phenomena which could not exist outside a planet's field of influence.

Unless of course you believe the ancients used mana batteries or some device of a similar basis. Not an impossible theory, but I really wish you would stop stapling your own original bullshit onto the canon.

Anonyfag chapter 15 . 10/16/2008

Writer's Note: OCs are bad things. They never turn out for the better and are ultimately a tool used in an attempt to conceal poor writing.

Your writing isn't so poor as to warrant OCs. Finish off the OC plot lines and pretend they NEVER HAPPENED, yeah?

I don't know why you are sorry about the Colloyd moment in the previous chapter (AKA 17). I really liked it: they were "in character" and the disappointment was only for Lloyd... or Collete if you say so abot she being a... slut? Oh well!certainly you're right about that: the justification in the upper AN.

Oh! And the rest of the story is great, of course. It's good to see that checking stories from two years or more pays :)

BTW, I owe you much more than this creepy, dated review, so I'll add my thanks for writing a very good ... the name's fem-slash right? see ya around.