i spent days and nights with you.
we ate and laughed together,
i told you almost all my secrets
you trusted me with yours too.
you told me "you are the best friend i ever had"
but at the end all were lies
i ignored ALL that facts
i noticed earlier that all this are lies
but i couldn't face it
i just wanted it to last
i thought you might realize it at the end
that i would have never harmed you
or backstabbed you.
they say people think others are like them
but am not like you.
i was wrong i should have put an end to it.
i just wake up and realized .
sorry dosen't take the words that have been said back.
you thought i will always be by your side
and never leave.
but this time you are mistaken
i just wake up.
apologizing. do you know what are you sorry for?
i always say sorry cuz i know it will not change a thing.
guess what.? you picked the wrong words this time.

hello
really ur poem is great that it has the subject and the good title. its words are very good. really i like it but there are some mistakes regarding to grammar that u didn't make ur verbs concordant for instance: " i just wake up and realized " u used wake up (present )and realized (past). there are other mistakes for instance u said "i noticed earlier that all this are lies " u used noticed (past) ....are (present) this is mistake...this (singular) ....are (plural) u had to say " i noticed earlier that all these were lies" i think it better than ur say.....
u can ur-self revise the poem and discover the weak use of grammar and correct it.
any way ur poem is fantastic and u r great and i advise u to go ahead and try again and again to show us perfect work.
excuse me if i disturb u with my boring notes about grammar but we have to be loyal in our comments.
thnx in advance to accept my comments
c u and good luck