That was incredible, Everything. It took me so long to read it because I had to look closely at all the little details you put in every page. Like... The backgrounds! You've improved so much it was really something while reading through this. Especially in 14- 16. It explains so much also. Finding out how Eve lost her leg, why zigzag hates humans so much...I can't believe they killed Marty! aghhh. That was so sad )':And anatomy. I love the way you drew Evelyn every single time I saw her. The different poses you chose, especially around 41-45. FEET. You've improved so much on drawing those. omg as weird as it sounds I love how you drew them XD THEY'RE BEAUTIFULI know how hard they are to draw. I loved the story line...Gaaah you have no idea how epic this is. So much freakin effort went into this. You're a really good writer. Did not disappoint

As for critiquing... Hmm, I guess if I had to be honest I would say one thing. The bg song by metallica. As awesome as a song it was to choose, I noticed it had lyrics. Nothing wrong with that, it's just since it was for bg audio, I kinda thought it was a bit distracting when reading. But y'know that's just me.

D'awwww Brigde Thank you for taking time to write such a comment! It made my day again! X3 It's so awesome that you think I improved, thanks 8DDD And yesss, feet. xD I hated to draw them, but I put a bit more effort in it and start to like it. X3333 I'm so happy that people like the storyline, I worked on it a lot.

Oooh, yes, I know what you mean. I was really tempted to use that song without singing, but I wasn't able to find an instrumental version of it. :c I tried to cut it and mix the beginning without sound up, but it sounded wrong. It's really hard to find instrumental versions. But thanks for the critique! X3