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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2007-07-21 04:13:29

Not bad, I guess....

As far as trailers go, it was "ok"..

Critique:

1. Try to make it faster..
2. Add more animating in it besides tweening..
3. Blood was okay, but it may look a lot better if you zoomed in on it more and then brush...Using only the mouse is "no" excuse. I make pretty good art with the mouse on the computer..I don't use graphix pens though...*Sigh*, but I wish I did...lol

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2007-03-28 21:04:36

K

^^Good Points^^
As far as trailers go, this looked pretty good. I thought the graphics were very well done, especially since drawn completely by mouse. The blood looked fairly realistic, and didn't look cheap. The storyline you portray in this seems to be very interesting to watch, hopefully you release the full version.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations could use a bit of work. Your animations seem to be mostly just tweens in this or simple MC's.