D**n it! You made me f***ing cry. This is the best story I've heard in a long,long time. Like I said it takes alot to make me cry. But you took it a step further, You made me want to surpress my tears and read on. WOW just Wow Finish the story please. I can make my own endings in my head but I want to see where you are going with YOUR story.

(Sorry for the cursing, emotions are hard to overcome. I didn't curse at you.)

I'll Never tell chapter 8 . 3/21/2011

Gaara? really? I guess it fits pretty well. Don't give up on Yu-Gi-Oh just yet. It might not be your (or my) favorite anime right now but you've shown how good you can write it. You can always come back to it once you've found more inspiration.

I'll Never tell chapter 5 . 3/21/2011

You just about had me in tears there. Do you know how hard that is to do? I may PRETEND to cry when it gets me some thing, but it takes really sad or well written animes/fanfics (which this story is both) to make me tear up for !

i'll Never tell chapter 3 . 3/21/2011

Oh my gosh. Wow. I'll never be able to look at Yu-Gi-Oh the same way. Just, just wow. I can't describe it. Keep up the good work.

wow

I'll Never tell chapter 2 . 3/21/2011

Ther's only one thing I can say, WOW! I can't even explain how good your righting is. Just...WOW.

i'll Never tell chapter 1 . 3/21/2011

NNNNIIIICCCEEE! Sinical even. Your story is so dark, but in a way it is believable. Very nice work.

That was like the greatest ygo story! It really sad, but its so great. u can really relate to the reader. I read all ur other ygo stories, and I think there great. I definitely think u should write more ygo.