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Heartbreak sucks, and being pulled into someones love only to be used and mistreated really sucks.
You take the readers on a journey here, its kind of like a poem that tells a story.
I love poetry like this because it keeps us readers interested, and wanting to know what happens next.
Great little write once again.

Posted 3 Years Ago

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3 Years Ago

Like I said in another comment, I have a few poems that are dark. I tend to like the dark poetry bet.. read moreLike I said in another comment, I have a few poems that are dark. I tend to like the dark poetry better than beauty. What I love most about this one is the fact that something that was once beautiful turns into something that is very dark. I think that is a very, very important role in this poem, it illustrates and gives the illusion of two opposite emotions.

3 Years Ago

I like the fact that this poem states that not only things, but people are not always who they seem... read moreI like the fact that this poem states that not only things, but people are not always who they seem. It shows a lesson not to fall so fast or trust to easily.Although unfortunately for me I have a bad habit of doing both of those things :P

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West Frankfort, IL

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I believe that everyone should share their writings. When someone writes, it shows more and more about the true person he or she is. We should share ourselves and be open to one another. That is a tru.. more..