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Rated 4 / 5 stars2009-10-11 23:56:47

Needs less

this is a great strong piece, but i think you would benefit with even less line work for the figure. One of the strengths of this piece is that you are showing so much with so little, and yet at its current state their is still to much. Remove a few of the blue lines and it will still read as a figure, but now the viewer will be more engaged and fill in the gaps unconciously in their minds, which makes the piece so much more powerful and elegant.

An example of this is the figures right arm, its done with just enough line and weight to not feel over done, and leaves just enough suggestion of what is going on to read perfectly.