A very good one shot. I could picture everything happening in my head as the story unfolded. It's a pity that you stopped there, I think you could have done more. Anyway 10/10.

Author's Response: Glad that you enjoyed it - This was originally a dream scene from a novel length fic, but after I decided that I wasn't completely happy with the novel, I figured I may as well post it as a one-shot! I have a couple of fics in progress at the mo, but once they're finished and being posted, I might come back to this one and see if I can make a novel out of it! :)

God, this was so sad. I loved how it was so different to the book ending, and how inventive you were with the spells and curses. The fight scenes were described really well. My only criticism is that in some parts it seemed just a little bit corny; but I know how hard it is to write raw emotion like that and you did well. I read this oneshot without reading your other story, and I understood it all. The characters were also how I imagined them to be.

Anyway well done and 10/10!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you!! Apologies for the corny bits - I did try to work those bits out but my brain just wasn't cooperating! Glad that you enjoyed it anyway, and one of these days I will get round to posting again!