All doors and windows leading inside SCP-XXXX are to be blocked off. All possible escape routes are to be checked for damage daily.

1. These two can be combined. 2. The tone could be better, “All doors and windows leading into SCP-XXXXX are to be blocked off and checked for damage daily.”

Staff members are not permitted to enter SCP-XXXX unless conducting an experiment. Approval from at least two level three personal are required to conduct an experiment.

1. To conduct an experiment is a phrase used twice in a quick succession; This causes the reader to be removed from immersion. Be careful of these phrases/words in quick succession, as it happens other places within the draft. 2. The second sentence is off tone-wise and has a couple grammatical errors. Here is a suggested rewording, “All testing involving SCP-XXXX is to be approved by two Level 3 personnel,”

Instances of SCP-XXXX-1 are not permitted to come outside of SCP-XXXX under any circumstances. Any escape attempts are to be met with lethal force.

These two statements can be combined, “Instances of SCP-XXXX-1 are not allowed to exit SCP-XXXX under any circumstances, all instances attempting to exit SCP-XXXX are to be terminated on sight,”

This should have a hook, for example, something like, “Following Incident-XXXX-A, all testing involving SCP-XXX has been suspended until further notice,”

Description

SCP-XXXX-1 are humans in every way possible other than height. SCP-XXXX-1 are abnormally tall at a height of four meters.

1. Could be combined. 2. Poorly worded. “SCP-XXXX-1 are humanoid figures that are approximately four meters in height”

They also wear robes like those found to be worn by Catholic monks.

“Instances of SCP-XXXX appear to wear robes similar to that worn by present day Catholic monks”

The time between these instances can be as little as ███████ or as long as ███████.

“The time between the instances spawning has been recorded to be between ███ and ███.” So a personal thing here, don’t feel obligated to but, I really dislike black boxes in drafts. Unless what is beneath them will cause the entity to breach containment or a breach of privacy they serve no purpose.

As soon as one of them is killed another one climbs out of the hole within the next hour.

Poor tone, “About an hour after an instance of SCP-XXXX perishes, another one will spawn,”