Comments:

While the man with the moustache is mostly static, I like his lip sync as well as that on the man with the cigarette and most of the subtle movements.

Derek Stewart:

Cool characters. Some nice poses. Lip sync feels off and staging is a little weird. I'd love to see how this turns out, so keep at it!

Craig P. Smith:

Nice timing and character choice on the flicking of the cigarette. I think you need to do a little more with the expression and eyebrows on the lines "I'm fuzzy...". He lifts his eyebrows, but I don't think that's enough by themselves. I think you need to change the face.