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July 05, 2013

PUGS Pointers #23

Hi! I'm Kathy
Ide. In addition to being a published author, I'm a full-time
professional freelance editor. For CAN, I'm blogging about
"PUGS"--Punctuation, Usage, Grammar, and Spelling...tips for writers
based on the most common mistakes I see in the manuscripts I edit. Each blog
post will have one tip for each of the four categories. (For more PUGS tips,
check out my website, or get a copy of my book Polishing the PUGS (available
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PUNCTUATION TIP

For . . . sake Expressions

“For . . . sake”
expressions usually leave off the s when the noun ends in an s or an s sound.
Examples:

for righteousness’ sake

for goodness’ sake

for heaven’s sake

USAGE TIP

altar/alter

altar (noun): a
table or platform used in a church service

“The new bride and groom prayed together at
the altar.”

alter (verb): to
change

“Roxanne hoped his outburst wouldn’t alter
their friendship in any way.”

GRAMMAR TIP

Make sure the
pronoun and its antecedent agree in number.

“Trevor’s two sons are sloppy.” (plural)

“Neither one of them combs his hair.”
(singular)

“Portia’s two daughters are neat; they both
clean up after themselves.” (plural)

NOTE: In an
effort to avoid gender bias (using he to refer to both sexes) and the annoying
repetition of him/her, he or she, and the like, some writers use “they” as a
singular pronoun when referring to someone whose gender is unknown or irrelevant.
Example:

“If an editor (singular) likes your query, they
(plural) will request a proposal.”

However, using
the plural pronoun they to refer to a singular antecedent presents a problem in
agreement. This style is acceptable in verbal speech, but not in writing.

There are many ways you could reword
the above sentence to make it grammatically correct. Here are two examples: