I really like this. It reminds me of my dad, he was always drunk too. And mostly in jail. The lines "But damn you Mom! I just can't hate you! I'm always going to love you!" really got to me. In a way this song shows that you, in some way or another you "dislike" your mom but not hate, and think that i should take that in question next time i say i hate my real dad. And again this is great.

SAD! :'( You make me cry! And I thought my mom was bad. If this isn't true you are so great at putting yourself in the other person's shoes, but if it is hang in there, and if you want I'll give you some phone numbers for child services. I love the verse that starts with "But damn you mom!/I just can't hate you!..." Really moving.
PS. Thanks for the reviews!

Interesting.
What I liked about it: The message. It has a very good expressiveness when it comes to anger, which is good when you're dealing with this sort of subject.
What I would change: Some of the verses are kind of choppy. Look over your word choice. There are also a few typos in with it.
Good job, keep up the good work.
R/R some of my stuuf if you have time. That would be appreciated.
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