[We’ve taken to playing around more with the structure and word order of our exquisite corpses. While the method is still the same—each poet alternates turns of writing a line or lines, blind—we thought it would be a better exercise in creativity, if we played around with line breaks and word order. No additional words or lines are added, though in the case of this piece, some were omitted. The method for Unfinished was that each poet took two seperate turns writing a stanza of 4-5 lines, before the entire piece was revealed. We then proposed edits, until we felt the piece was complete, which took us through five edits to arrive at this piece. Thank you for reading!]