Unwritten Soul

Above From The Deep - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Above from the deepTaller than the sky wallWe shall pluck the sunEmbracing all shines in our armBring it back into the groundBrightening dark deep downA Light for our dreams to growAbove from the deep

Let the shine in their eyes staringUpon me holding somethingIn my hand without a thingBecause only my eyes knowingThe existence of what i am holdingThe invisible dream that i dream

Own my heart as wholeForever it will be placed in my handCoated with my every strengthWith all trust i lay in this palmFor invisible dream to survive

Just like a farmer without a landOnly in my heart for seeds to growWaiting for wake up from long sleepIn a while we witnessing the flowing wind Moving with the time, roll the clock wheelsThen we watching days changing to yearsObserving the hopeless grass grow taller

The shine in their eyes intriguingOf my invisible seed surfaced by the dustLayers of ashes bury it deeper from aboveIn my hand, i still holding, i still believingThe strength and trust i keep holdingFor a small wish one day will growing

Above from the deepFertilizing with trial and errorUsual watering without surrenderAbove from the deepRaising hand from belowThe green hopes finally crawling outIn ambient of different calling to wake upAbove from the deepThe sun still waiting for this new bornTouch them up to reach higher as they can goHigher and taller aboveAbove from this deep

I just like a farmer without a landBut seeding dreams without discriminatingOf which seeds I should choose and growingTo pick only the best one to grow, No oh NoAs my heart says grow all, their potential we don't holdSo i will grow all without discriminatingEven I am only a farmer without a land

One sweet day i smell something sweetFrom a garden of my soulThe growing plant i seed oncewith tears and hardness i witnessedHarvest from sweet sacrificeTurn for joy and happinessFor reality now in same line Side by side walk with me

Above from this deepSweat and tears dropp to my feetI smell the existence of my ripen dream fruitYet if i grow all dreams i shall have manyOf diverse tastes and colorful flowersSo i told the seed and land, my heart of no land farmerBelieve your self to go above, get brighterEven you cant, don't go deeper, it's darker

So take care of what you dreamJust matter of time to tell you whenFor one day it will go aboveHigher, reaching from this deepAbove from this deep

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : About this poem: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : This is a poem that i write for one of my friend here, that finallyfound the strength after many times feel down for uncertainty timeI'm so proud to see how great smile can bounce back to that innocent heart.I know we dream many things in our life, sometimes we can reach sometimes we cant but never abandon what we have start, seed them with try...maybe for others our dream is a small but in our eyes that is what we wanted for, so chase what you want to do...we may not have it now, seed takes years to grow as a strong tree, some even to sprout takes years to get favorable condition....I never agreefor whom said, pick the best seed or seedling...sometimes the weaker one could be stronger and better, it changes through time, like our life we become better..we learn to survive, so give any chance to anyone and dream to grow and proves as what they really are...and for a dream we dream we will enjoy a fruit imagine if we dream of different, we may have many types of fruits/flower just if we seed and care them....but dream without try and care it is hopeless...It's a dream in a dream...For my friend who knows that this is for you, you have fallen many times, cry deeply and now i am glad you find a shineSo go my dear friend, for everyone Go above from the deep...you will smile, For all..LOve_Unwritten Soul

Comments about Above From The Deep by Unwritten Soul

Above from the deep
Fertilizing with trial and error
Usual watering without surrender
Above from the deep
Raising hand from below
The green hopes finally crawling out
In ambient of different calling to wake up
Above from the deep
The sun still waiting for this new born
Touch them up to reach higher as they can go- - - a beautiful poem written for your friend asking your friend to be determined to achieve the goal come what may with so many examples and a wonderful way of introducing your theme...... let this poem give life to so many.. thank you dear poetess. tony(Report)Reply

Arise from the deep where there is nothing but darkness. No light can
penetrate its gloom. Rise to the top and sow the seeds that will draw
from the light its life giving power. Just like a dream thats been planted
in the mind will take sometime to grow and be fruitful when it takes root.
So poignantly written. Reaches to the depth of the Soul.(Report)Reply

Above from the deep
Fertilizing with trial and error
Usual watering without surrender
Above from the deep
Raising hand from below
The green hopes finally crawling out
In ambient of different calling to wake up
Above from the deep
The sun still waiting for this new born
Touch them up to reach higher as they can go
Higher and taller above
Above from this deep

This poem is really touching, moving, and affecting the deepest our soul. The images of a farmer without land letting anyhow all seeds grow and enjoying sometimes the fruits of weakest of seeds is so fantastic. Very, very nice. The image of holding ths invisible dream in your hand, so wonderful. Keep it in your hands, keep it in your soul and keep writing many many more poems.(Report)Reply