1.NINJA AWAY!

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Not bad, but I think some solid blacks and ruled lines would really bring this one together (or at least make your ninja look more ninja-esque). I think you'd also need a background in that third panel, since it's a bit hard to tell what's going on. I think part of it might be the sudden simplifying of the character. It almost looks as though the camera suddenly pans to a picture of a white ninja floating above a bean bag more than the ninja walking casually away from his smoke bomb.