Like this blend of Techno/Industrial elements in this short WIP - as far as whats next? - I would say you can add some more melodic parts sweeping through your track or add more Industrial FX to emphasize Techno/Industrial riff/groove.

Darek

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That was a nice journey. I don't mind the kick it's kinda quirky, if u like it, keep it.

Jan-10-2014 20:02

Richard ButlerSupreme tranceaddict

Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

quote:

Originally posted by evo8
any opinions (good or bad) on this one?

Bad ass and sounds like hot toffee would, no crits.

Jan-10-2014 20:04

ConstantinSenior tranceaddict

Registered: Jun 2011
Location: Varde, Denmark

Re: Re: Re: Astral Projection - Dancing Galaxy remix

quote:

Originally posted by martinleblanc
I really like your track - if you EQ it correct, and use a compressor better you would have a really great track. Did you do it in Logic Pro? Would you be interested in letting me remix it?

Oh sorry I don't use logic and TY all for the feedback, very helpful. Will try come back with an improved mix of my song ^^

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Jan-11-2014 14:03

Richard ButlerSupreme tranceaddict

Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

Here's a hard club WIP, I think I'm done with it bar mixing, do you think remove the vocals?

EDIT - I'm re-doing this, it's crap.

Last edited by Richard Butler on Jan-12-2014 at 12:40

Jan-12-2014 00:54

theterranSupreme tranceaddict

Registered: Mar 2010
Location: Texass

Haven't been on here in ages...Thought I'd drop by and throw up something new I've been workin' on. Gettin' into that darker vibe lately.

Jan-12-2014 02:39

Richard ButlerSupreme tranceaddict

Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

quote:

Originally posted by theterran
Haven't been on here in ages...Thought I'd drop by and throw up something new I've been workin' on. Gettin' into that darker vibe lately.

A good piece for me, quite evocative.

The offset main bass is a little woody, I'd maybe scoop out some of the low resonant woody area.

Jan-12-2014 12:43

theterranSupreme tranceaddict

Registered: Mar 2010
Location: Texass

Not sure what "woody" means I'm afraid. :S

A guess though is that it's modeled off a deep Moog Square bass, and you're hearing the "Squareness". It's nothing frequency dipping or gouging would get rid of and the bass would need changing entirely. Do kinda like the hint of square for the punch, and it translates quite well onto a sub-woofer.

Cheers for the listen and feedback <3.

Last edited by theterran on Jan-12-2014 at 18:08

Jan-12-2014 18:00

Richard ButlerSupreme tranceaddict

Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

So I re did my 'hard' club track, it's just about finished for once. I quite like the simplicity but as it's still a WIP I'm open eared if any changes needed.