Comments for 'Zanzibar-Part 5'

SPARTAN 043
3:25 am | June 6, 2004
KICK ASS STORY, I like it alot keep on writing them. I actually think that the Forunner are some type of extinct human race.

*10/10* :P

FOrunnER
4:55 pm | June 4, 2004
Very good, again, liked the action sequences, and the descriptions were very detailed. I'm not really a big fan of the theory that the Forerunners had installations on Earth, but hey, its your story.