Rated 3 / 5 stars2009-02-10 09:21:33

Very good work. There were some issues I want to mention, but I want to start off by complementing the obvious punch that came when Santa swore and cat face was startled. That was funny.

Now, to the issues. I noticed that the cartoon seemed to jump from a summertime environment to Christmas without warning. Which is fine, it's your cartoon, I just want to note that since to many inconsistencies can really call viewers attention away from how funny it is, and towards it's flaws. I also noticed that it never really finished on the idea of him getting a blanket for the old Lady, or on refusing to do so. He doesn't have to get her a blanket, but he shouldn't be on his way to get her one and just forget and no one ever mentions it again. Also, in the scene where their hanging up stockings, and the camera turns towards Cat Face from the mantle, you can see a coffin labeled "Old Lady" in the background. While you may have simply been implying that there was a coffin there, showing the coffin and not the old lady implies that the old lady has died, and is in the coffin. People then think perhaps she died because the cat never got her a blanket, but then in the next scene, there she is, playing what appears to be an X-Box without a television. No explanation as to the coffin, no explanation as to the lack of blanket. The idea that he was getting her a blanket might have been ignored if this was a feature length film, but in a cartoon where each episode is between 30-45 seconds tops, every second counts, and if you mention cat face is going to get her a blanket, it should explain as to why he did or did not, or if it's not important, then just leave out the blanket altogether. And if you really want to show that Cat Face expects the old lady to stay there until she dies, it would be better in my opinion to show her in the frame with the coffin, questioning it's existence. As I mentioned, showing it alone makes everyone assume that she's in it.