Hi, Valerie. I got your email, and was going to copy/paste the part of the chapter that was done and get it out to you tomorrow. I just started back at work today, having been in the hospital since last Wednesday. I had my laptop with me, but didn't have the energy to do much... Show more

Hi, Valerie. I got your email, and was going to copy/paste the part of the chapter that was done and get it out to you tomorrow. I just started back at work today, having been in the hospital since last Wednesday. I had my laptop with me, but didn't have the energy to do much more than leave a quick comment now and again,

However, your chapter is coming along nicely. There are, as I suspected, some bigger challenges than I had to deal with in the earlier chapters, but nothing that can't eventually be smoothed out. I'll get that to you probably tomorrow afternoon or evening. Since this is the apex of the story, I want to do it justice, so please bear with me. I've put in some notes for you so you can both understand the issues and come up with your own way of rewriting the things that need to be changed, along with a few suggestions on some of them.

Thank you for your response. I hope by this time your feeling well now. Is it because of the weather that you become sick? Does your place have lots of snow? Here in my place, there is no snow, but it's colder now than before. Also, I was sick last week with... Show more

Hi, Miss Judy! :)

Thank you for your response. I hope by this time your feeling well now. Is it because of the weather that you become sick? Does your place have lots of snow? Here in my place, there is no snow, but it's colder now than before. Also, I was sick last week with fever, cold, sore throat and muscle pain in my body. My mom said it was flu. Maybe because of the cold weather here. Glad now, I felt better than before, but still my throat is hurting.

I will wait for your notes and what changes I should make. I'm also looking forward to read your edits and know whatever changes and suggestions you'll tell me, it will make my story the best version it would be.

Just wondering if you would critique more of my work....Your thoughtful "insights" have "elevated" the quality of my work...I can never "properly" thank you enough for allowing me to receive your "precious" time..Have an awesome Monday, Danny....

Just wanted to thank you for the kindness over the years...My "muse" is truly in your debt & I consider our friendship life changing...People try to change this world but you have made an impact through your "gracious" spirit and brilliant literary skills...Semper Fi....Danny

Just getting ready for bed after being up all night....After the last 5 years the "muse" is still "hungry" ….I was wondering if you had any time to check out any of my "in Progress" books....It really doesn't matter which book/books that are chosen...I really value your "keen" eye for language and grammar...The insightful critiques have really shaped my poetry during the last few years...

Just getting ready for bed after being up all night....After the last 5 years the "muse" is still "hungry" ….I was wondering if you had any time to check out any of my "in Progress" books....It really doesn't matter which book/books that are chosen...I really value your "keen" eye for language and grammar...The insightful critiques have really shaped my poetry during the last few years...

BookRix is blessed to have you as a "valued" member and "wise" steward of linguistics.....Have a great day, Danny.....

How are you? Happy New Year! Hope you had a wonderful holiday!You mentioned before you already finished editing a chapter, and you wanted to send it to me once you are done editing two chapters. Please send me the one chapter you finished editing so that I could read your edits.It's okay with me even if you haven't finished editing two chapters. I'm excited to read them.

Thank you judycolella but that's not my only problem its mainy the book covers. I can't make good book covers because I'm not that all artisty but I'm trying my hardest. Whenever I try to get someone who can make a good book cover they can't. I don't know what I am going to do.

But could you give me advace on how to make some quick cash because I really need the money to pay the artiests and 'other things' I'm 14 and I can't get a job or take a baby sisting class because its 50 dollars and I don't know what to do Judy!

Other than babysitting, opening a lemonade stand, or delivering newspapers, I have no idea how you could make quick money. I think everyone would like the answer to that one, lol. And to be honest, there really is no such thing as "quick" money. You have to earn it, and that... Show more

Other than babysitting, opening a lemonade stand, or delivering newspapers, I have no idea how you could make quick money. I think everyone would like the answer to that one, lol. And to be honest, there really is no such thing as "quick" money. You have to earn it, and that takes time. A friend of mine would go to garage sales and find new or almost new books that were in great condition, and then sell them on eBay for a few dollars more than she paid for them. The income was slow, but she did make money. At first, though, she had to use most of her profits to pay for shipping. Once she'd built up a good amount for that, she only had to put aside a little of the income, and started making a decent profit.

I suppose another way is that you could ask your family for a loan, and then pay them back by doing chores, or yard work. But if you don't pay the loan back, they'll never lend you money again. You can't be lazy or expect people to just hand you money for nothing. So go on line and see if there are legal jobs for your age group. Just don't expect to get paid the day after you sign up. Even older people who get regular jobs have to wait a couple of weeks for their first paycheck.