i like the spot on the first one " terror has evolved" sounds liek a bad ass thing to have under a tag, but the tag itself is kinda ugly. theres no real style to it. clean it up and get some flow to it

haha old book, and any sujestions on how to add more flow to it , was told to go simple

Sizzuurp

02-17-2009, 03:17 PM

try to make ur letters more pronounced and aligned. make em even and all the same size. length and width wise so it has flow

Demon42

02-17-2009, 03:21 PM

k il post some later tonight thanks, you think i should go with the concept from the first one or just simply caps letters

Sizzuurp

02-17-2009, 03:25 PM

the first one is better

Ink me

02-17-2009, 05:01 PM

http://i39.tinypic.com/30d9lsm.jpg

Fuck T's

STR-WHO

02-17-2009, 05:06 PM

change your name its gay

STR-WHO

02-17-2009, 05:07 PM

and if you insist on sticking with the name change the e and the t, you don't need the extension at the end your handstlyes iight as it is

Ink me

02-17-2009, 05:52 PM

and if you insist on sticking with the name change the e and the t, you don't need the extension at the end your handstlyes iight as it is

I dont take advice from 10 year olds unless its good advice. So you can officially suck cock. Any real crits...I was told to change up my T.

provinT13

02-17-2009, 06:06 PM

I agree with him, in my opinion poet isn't the greatest name, but if you like it keep it I guess. Loose the first p, 3rd, 4th, and 5th are all nice.

Ink me

02-17-2009, 06:15 PM

You do your thing and I will do mine.........any crits on letter structure maybe?

provinT13

02-17-2009, 07:30 PM

I'm not totally sure on letter structure since i'm not too great myself, but someone will chime in. Maby change the position or the size of the o, it seems strange sitting up with the P, just play with it see what you can do.

ThatguywhodrinksTea

02-17-2009, 07:59 PM

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/posek.jpg

skull-e

02-17-2009, 08:05 PM

you wrote posek now?

nine one

02-17-2009, 08:17 PM

lmao skull-e nice avatar, epicfailguy ftw
you 4chan?

and nicee thatguywhodrinkstea

ive seen that shit before so nice keep it up

Ex50one

02-17-2009, 08:32 PM

Homemade tools.

Ex50one

02-17-2009, 08:34 PM

Elevator Murder Bomb

ErrorOner...

02-17-2009, 08:37 PM

I dont take advice from 10 year olds unless its good advice. So you can officially suck cock. Any real crits...I was told to change up my T.

your name is gay...there...and i'm 19, now take that fuckin' advice! next time take it the first time so a million people dont have to say you suck before you listen...just humiliating yourself...

ex50 - not a great tag but HOLY FUCK those drips are beautiful! what surface is that on, i gots to try!?

Ex50one

02-17-2009, 08:38 PM

I started out taggin dry erase boards for lunch money. Throw me some props.

provinT13

02-17-2009, 08:39 PM

Elevator Murder Bomb

dam those drips are crazy

*edit* hey man kill the huge font lol

mekosbc

02-17-2009, 08:43 PM

i need to up load my new tags and handstyles.... but funking computer is being a welfare baby and wont work

Ex50one

02-17-2009, 08:43 PM

Huge.....that's how to get noticed mang. Check out this second picture....Looks like some poor fool got slayed for my ink supply....

Ink me

02-17-2009, 08:46 PM

your name is gay...there...and i'm 19, now take that fuckin' advice! next time take it the first time so a million people dont have to say you suck before you listen...just humiliating yourself...

ex50 - not a great tag but HOLY FUCK those drips are beautiful! what surface is that on, i gots to try!?

WTF is with this name shit.......I can pick whatever name I want......and due to my writing being published I figured it would be appropriate...get the fuck off my nuts I can write whatever I want. Sorry its more itellectual than some "straight up hood name".......fags. At least I know none of you fuckers will jack my name. Look at the name "Earsnot" its original.....unlike all the same shit you guys write constantly. Same shit just adding another ending to it. Lame. The best part is though I dont have to give a fuck what you think.....if its good.......if its a dumb name....I could throw dogshit on the wall and write a word in it and it would get more looks than a plain old name.

nine one

02-17-2009, 08:46 PM

I started out taggin dry erase boards for lunch money. Throw me some props.

x501: some of the best drips i've seen but the E at the end needs work

Ex50one

02-17-2009, 09:02 PM

Thanks man. I'll fix that ish.
Stay up

ErrorOner...

02-17-2009, 09:02 PM

WTF is with this name shit.......I can pick whatever name I want......and due to my writing being published I figured it would be appropriate...get the fuck off my nuts I can write whatever I want. Sorry its more itellectual than some "straight up hood name".......fags. At least I know none of you fuckers will jack my name. Look at the name "Earsnot" its original.....unlike all the same shit you guys write constantly. Same shit just adding another ending to it. Lame. The best part is though I dont have to give a fuck what you think.....if its good.......if its a dumb name....I could throw dogshit on the wall and write a word in it and it would get more looks than a plain old name.

so you think your name is intellectual? how long did it take you to think that one up...a minute or two? unless you're actually a poet then that name has no relevance to you and therefore should not be your name...pick some shit that has a little bit of personality in it not just some "smart" sounding name. unless you're a homosexual or something cuz then it's the perfect name...

Ink me

02-17-2009, 09:05 PM

so you think your name is intellectual? how long did it take you to think that one up...a minute or two? unless you're actually a poet then that name has no relevance to you and therefore should not be your name...pick some shit that has a little bit of personality in it not just some "smart" sounding name. unless you're a homosexual or something cuz then it's the perfect name...

Did you miss the part in my rant where I mentioned I have numerous published works.......aka poems...

skull-e

02-17-2009, 09:10 PM

pics or it never happened

Ink me

02-17-2009, 09:24 PM

pics or it never happened

I dont know why Im even trying to convince you guys.......so without digi pics and fucking around with others.........Message from Editor that contacted my college.........upcoming literary magazine submission.

http://i40.tinypic.com/nzptf6.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea

02-17-2009, 09:24 PM

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/posek.jpg
bump.

ErrorOner...

02-17-2009, 10:13 PM

haha do you think that getting your poem published in a university magazine is hard?? a bunch of GIRLS i knew had their poems published in my university's magazine.. the editors are just students like you and me so they need material every week or so. and they usually take what they can get. also the fact that they're sending you a message on Facebook says a lot too...

Ink me

02-17-2009, 10:19 PM

haha do you think that getting your poem published in a university magazine is hard?? a bunch of GIRLS i knew had their poems published in my university's magazine.. the editors are just students like you and me so they need material every week or so. and they usually take what they can get. also the fact that they're sending you a message on Facebook says a lot too...

Its a yearly magazine.........with minimal student entries....what are they going to do send me a letter of inquiry. Shut up man......your tags gay anyways. Im done bitching about this....once you lose those gay stars and shit on your tag you can crit some others. Ive said all Im going to say.

tassajara17272

02-17-2009, 11:24 PM

i think i put the s too close to the a
other than that how's it look?
http://i34.tinypic.com/2niwj9t.jpg

I dont take advice from 10 year olds unless its good advice. So you can officially suck cock. Any real crits...I was told to change up my T.

hey toy chill the fuck out, when i give you advice, you say "thanks" with a big smile on your face, and if i take a 10 foot metal pole and shove it up your ass you say "thanks" with a big smile on your face, "Poet". Hahahahahhaa

WTF is with this name shit.......I can pick whatever name I want......and due to my writing being published I figured it would be appropriate...get the fuck off my nuts I can write whatever I want. Sorry its more itellectual than some "straight up hood name".......fags. At least I know none of you fuckers will jack my name. Look at the name "Earsnot" its original.....unlike all the same shit you guys write constantly. Same shit just adding another ending to it. Lame. The best part is though I dont have to give a fuck what you think.....if its good.......if its a dumb name....I could throw dogshit on the wall and write a word in it and it would get more looks than a plain old name.

poet is gay name just get with it.

Scheme*119

02-18-2009, 11:14 AM

it really is, no beef to you and all but dude, youre talking about people being unoriginal

http://i42.tinypic.com/168cyex.jpg

that aint you, homie

Scheme*119

02-18-2009, 11:18 AM

http://i41.tinypic.com/33c6kia.jpg
crits

and a double post bump

graffdabusup

02-18-2009, 11:21 AM

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture92.jpg

91: I like your hand, your E is real dope, but your V needs work.

x501: some of the best drips i've seen but the E at the end needs work

that circular hand is amazing....

Ink me

02-18-2009, 11:57 AM

You cant please any of you faggots on these forums anyways. So I will put a 2 at the end of my name like everyone else in graff........why can he rock it and I cant.........because hes dope? So what if I suck......you guys suck too thats why your posting all your shit on the internet instead of out writing......along with myself.....except I feel bad for you Bink because you actually are putting your shit on stuff........and wtf is a Teper and Im pretty sure it was "Scrap" that was putting his shit on little kiddie slides. You all reside here because you got shunned off of 12oz prophet. And Str-who started a thread about what do do because he mommy searches his bedroom. Fuck you dicks.

Scheme*119

02-18-2009, 12:04 PM

You cant please any of you faggots on these forums anyways. So I will put a 2 at the end of my name like everyone else in graff........why can he rock it and I cant.........because hes dope? So what if I suck......you guys suck too thats why your posting all your shit on the internet instead of out writing......along with myself.....except I feel bad for you Bink because you actually are putting your shit on stuff........and wtf is a Teper and Im pretty sure it was "Scrap" that was putting his shit on little kiddie slides. You all reside here because you got shunned off of 12oz prophet. And Str-who started a thread about what do do because he mommy searches his bedroom. Fuck you dicks.

looks pretty simple which is good but you should try to really make that "a" a bit more defined

Mr yarbles

02-18-2009, 05:10 PM

You cant please any of you faggots on these forums anyways. So I will put a 2 at the end of my name like everyone else in graff........why can he rock it and I cant.........because hes dope? So what if I suck......you guys suck too thats why your posting all your shit on the internet instead of out writing......along with myself.....except I feel bad for you Bink because you actually are putting your shit on stuff........and wtf is a Teper and Im pretty sure it was "Scrap" that was putting his shit on little kiddie slides. You all reside here because you got shunned off of 12oz prophet. And Str-who started a thread about what do do because he mommy searches his bedroom. Fuck you dicks.

Are you a fucking idiot
Oh you don't post on the internet your're not cool
SHut the fuck up.
What the fuck has graffiti gotten to
Its the cats that arn't postin shit you should be worried about cus they're not in it to get some fake ass internet fame
Come back with some fucking knowledge next time you fag

MikeTyson- pretty sweet tag, the bubble with the "ill" looks a little whack, but the actual tag is pretty dope

Scheme- i dont know, something about it bugs me, but its probably just me.

provinT13

02-18-2009, 05:52 PM

WHAT?? ^^^ perfect, it's nice and simple

WHAT??

02-18-2009, 05:54 PM

mine? or someone else's?

provinT13

02-18-2009, 06:01 PM

yea, don't ya see the arrows. I'll put your name up there I guess.

WHAT??

02-18-2009, 06:10 PM

ohh. haha. thanks.

ErrorOner...

02-18-2009, 07:11 PM

You cant please any of you faggots on these forums anyways. So I will put a 2 at the end of my name like everyone else in graff........why can he rock it and I cant.........because hes dope? So what if I suck......you guys suck too thats why your posting all your shit on the internet instead of out writing......along with myself.....except I feel bad for you Bink because you actually are putting your shit on stuff........and wtf is a Teper and Im pretty sure it was "Scrap" that was putting his shit on little kiddie slides. You all reside here because you got shunned off of 12oz prophet. And Str-who started a thread about what do do because he mommy searches his bedroom. Fuck you dicks.

hahaha its funny because all he has on me is that i write on kids playgrounds...so fucking what? i destroy EVERYTHING and playgrounds are included...and btw i never even heard of 12oz prophet before i came here.
everyone hates you so maybe you should just channel your depression, go sit in a corner, and write a poem you faggot....:)

oxiclean

02-18-2009, 07:17 PM

Abor, i like it other than the lines above the tag.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w206/seam11/IMG_1930.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea

02-18-2009, 07:29 PM

love it abor, maybe a little less stuff happening around it but still good :P
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/0218091821.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/0218091813.jpg

.HATESONE.

02-18-2009, 07:31 PM

shek the first one is nice.,well all of them are nice except for the second one.the k and s are sucky on that one.no offense.

oxiclean

02-18-2009, 07:36 PM

shek the first one is nice.,well all of them are nice except for the second one.the k and s are sucky on that one.no offense.

Haha Its cool, I agree. The K and s are pretty ugly.

Mr yarbles

02-18-2009, 07:36 PM

hahaha its funny because all he has on me is that i write on kids playgrounds...so fucking what? i destroy EVERYTHING and playgrounds are included...and btw i never even heard of 12oz prophet before i came here.
everyone hates you so maybe you should just channel your depression, go sit in a corner, and write a poem you faggot....:)

I AGREE WITH THIS MAN.

To be honest tea I like your old tag better. :/

Shek the third one down is fire I just think you should use the s from the second one or at least have the ending of the s like te second one

Matik it's alright make your a the same size as the rest of the letters.

practicing my throw and tag and dont worry crimson flow will come as you experiment with new letters and crap trust me itll come, just takes time.

ErrorOner...

02-18-2009, 09:50 PM

hahah thanks for that yarbs.. definitely sigged!
crimson only YOU can help you with your flow...write your name a million times(literally) and it'll start to flow like water out a tap!
abor i think your tag is a little flashy...i could've sworn there was more letters than that when i first saw it...not a good thing...
shek that shit is hot...like fire even... don't change a thing
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0058.jpg
another new style...

Tea- Looks really clean. Like it better than on paper.
Scrap- C could be taken an "a" because of the two letter combo. Honestly not digging swirl or dots but do your thing.
Ghozt- Nice hand.
What- Much smoother. Good job.

and i rlly like the resps style , coz its crazy as shit \: , and doing it in bus and taking a photo of it later is hc for meh , i can get some slaps on , but i dont have the courage to get my marker out :p:p

*Edit Abor its ill , im rlly diggin that R :D

Scheme*119

02-19-2009, 01:46 PM

keepin it simple, i can dig it

oxiclean

02-19-2009, 01:56 PM

Resp- I really like the e and s but dont care for the r or p
Tep-I like it, simple.
Abor-I like it other than the tail on the r.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w206/seam11/IMG_1936.jpg

Merge

02-19-2009, 02:41 PM

I need your opinion, which one do you think is the best? (Not a specific one but like, which of the three tags) Crits are always welcome.

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q280/EckoEvolution/graff002.jpg
Bump.
Shek-The only think buggin' me is your 'k', seems a tad wack to me, cept' for the one at the very bottom.
Teper-Looks nice and simple, diggin' the blue too.

ghozt

02-19-2009, 02:46 PM

ghozt-D:....can i touch you inappropriatley?
error-i like it sept the S....it's a bit played
my gayness:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/17-02-09_1021.jpg

haha i guess you can :rolleyes:

what do you write i feel like working on other letters..

i'll do anyones name if they want me to. :D

ghozt

02-19-2009, 02:48 PM

http://i42.tinypic.com/11095c4.jpg

practicing my throw and tag and dont worry crimson flow will come as you experiment with new letters and crap trust me itll come, just takes time.

dinggggggg any constructive critism? yeah my k's look like m's :/ i forgot who told me that on here but hes right haha

Bink1

02-19-2009, 02:58 PM

Bump.
Shek-The only think buggin' me is your 'k', seems a tad wack to me, cept' for the one at the very bottom.
Teper-Looks nice and simple, diggin' the blue too.

rlly ? i think his K's are some dope stuff :D

DO MY NAME IN YOUR CRZY STYLE RESP! :rolleyes:

Merge

02-19-2009, 03:06 PM

rlly ? i think his K's are some dope stuff :D

DO MY NAME IN YOUR CRZY STYLE RESP! :rolleyes:Ehhh... maybe it's just me, I dunno when I read it in m'head it goes s-h-e-k

provinT13

02-19-2009, 03:15 PM

ghozt-D:....can i touch you inappropriatley?
error-i like it sept the S....it's a bit played
my gayness:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/17-02-09_1021.jpg

dude you need to hit the books. Not tryin to be an ass, but it looks like you were shakin really bad or something or it was on a moving bus and you went over a speed bump. Did you go over the r a few times? It just doesn't look good. Take the crits from everyone else about the r and the p and don't hit anything up that anyone will see. No offense but if you wanna get good pratice on a wall no one will see. Once again not trying to be an ass just giving you some advice.

klic

02-19-2009, 04:38 PM

found a sharpie fine tip in my ski pants at the hill so i decided to put up a couple quick tags

shek - fresh dude, might just be the colors lol, watch out for that dead space

teper - getting kind of tired seeing it for the 50th time haha but keep your letters closer together like in the first one, and im not really feeling how the bottom right leg of the R is coming up at the end

abor - letters are pretty good but im not really feeling it, try giving some more flow to it

resp - your R = wack, try doing something simple on paper like tepers and post it on here, just take your time with it, looks to rushed

BigBlueViolence

02-19-2009, 05:46 PM

haha i guess you can :rolleyes:

what do you write i feel like working on other letters..

i'll do anyones name if they want me to. :D
I write Earn if you're still down for an exchange

MikeTyson- pretty sweet tag, the bubble with the "ill" looks a little whack, but the actual tag is pretty dope

Scheme- i dont know, something about it bugs me, but its probably just me.

bumpin' for crits

BigBlueViolence

02-19-2009, 05:55 PM

ghozt-D:....can i touch you inappropriatley?
error-i like it sept the S....it's a bit played
my gayness:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/17-02-09_1021.jpg
Resp my nigira, I can't tell you any more times,
you gotta wait for that bus to stop before you do your thing.
Your R and P look like their skulls got crushed

expozay

02-19-2009, 06:12 PM

http://i41.tinypic.com/fwpy5i.jpg

expozay

02-19-2009, 06:13 PM

http://i41.tinypic.com/209htm0.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea

02-19-2009, 07:36 PM

tep- nice
shpel- nice and simple maybe add some style?
shek- i duno the k is good just not with ur tag
abor- nice
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/0219091830.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/0219091825.jpg

klic

02-19-2009, 08:01 PM

nice stuff posek, anoe wasnt a gear name no offence.. nicest handy i think ive seen from you, i like how youve attached the E to the K

everybody else needs to start giving crits if they expect to get any

joker954

02-19-2009, 09:29 PM

raw shit posek

bak

02-19-2009, 09:32 PM

some homemade
]

wat kinda nib did u use/make?

provinT13

02-19-2009, 11:35 PM

Finally brought it close together

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0789.jpg

and yes that's a baking pan haha

seia

02-20-2009, 03:07 AM

wat kinda nib did u use/make?

its a mo-hair
they last a good while

Scheme*119

02-20-2009, 09:13 AM

Finally brought it close together

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0789.jpg

and yes that's a baking pan haha

i like it except the k. try just doing a regular k but have leg of it come out of the arm of it, keep it close to the body but dont have the leg actually come out of the spine of the k

provinT13

02-20-2009, 10:52 AM

^^ I think I know what you're sayin, let me go try it.

Like this? The K dripped weird because I set the pan down

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0809.jpg

If the big glob 'o drip wasn't there i'd be undecided between the 2, what does everyone else think?

Scheme*119

02-20-2009, 11:01 AM

yeah man you got it, but dont arch the arm up so much, give it a little bit of a slant but very slightly

provinT13

02-20-2009, 11:03 AM

so the arm is pointing up too high?

Scheme*119

02-20-2009, 11:05 AM

yeah, i mean, itd look fine if the arm didnt drip the way it did and made it look kinda sloppy, but try bringing it down, but on the real, its all about what YOU think looks good so just go with whatever you like bro.

provinT13

02-20-2009, 11:06 AM

definatly. Hey thanks for the tip. Agreed on the crappy drip, maby it'll come out better on some metal. I'm going bombin tonight so i'll get some pics, thanks for the ideas.

Scheme*119

02-20-2009, 11:07 AM

its no problem, always glad to help, stay safe

calculating infinity

02-20-2009, 11:09 AM

i think your mom is going to kill you when she sees her cookie sheet
also your E's look weird

Scheme*119

02-20-2009, 11:12 AM

i really like his e's i havnt seen them done like that

provinT13

02-20-2009, 12:28 PM

Lol I wiped off the sheet real fast, and it's not her's, it was in the garage under some buckets. I like my e's too, but I need to get the slats even on both. Look at the triangle in the e's, see how one is a bit more obtuse (o shit geometry terms) then the other.

Bink1

02-20-2009, 01:05 PM

lmfao what ink u usin if u wiped it off so ''fast''

Scheme*119

02-20-2009, 02:18 PM

from the looks of it hes just using straight kiwi shoe polish(sp) not home made ink, i could be wrong though

provinT13

02-20-2009, 03:18 PM

Lol no it's homemade. It's 2/3 black rusto and 1/3 thinner and some brake fluid. But I think just because it was so wet and thick it came off easy. It's not totally clean, there are some black smudges, but it came off fast. It's also prety cold here too so that could be a factor.

Mr yarbles

02-20-2009, 04:50 PM

whoever made the comment about ti wiping off is an idiot
It takes time to stain shit
YOu can wipe anything off the second after your write it

Bink1

02-20-2009, 05:13 PM

there is a nice vid in youtube wheres they guy wiping the ink off with acetone and polisher , second after he tagged . and it werent comin off.

expozay

02-20-2009, 05:54 PM

etek shit looks tight.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3642/3295410933_c3af3f9144_m.jpg
fucked up the spacing. need help with my x? i hate it.

thinking of maybe changing to perk...

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3313/3295410869_8677e0f165_m.jpg

ErrorOner...

02-20-2009, 06:41 PM

by all means, stay with expo...lovin the name..just keep it up and try to not connect your quotations. and what is the thing before your e...whatever it is, lose it... do all that and it'll instantly be a decent tag! keep it up.

Stussy

02-20-2009, 10:22 PM

http://i41.tinypic.com/jtbdw3.jpg
still workin on my tags...

bak

02-20-2009, 11:16 PM

its a mo-hair
they last a good while

i thought so..did u order/buy it?

provinT13

02-21-2009, 12:26 AM

etek shit looks tight.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3642/3295410933_c3af3f9144_m.jpg
fucked up the spacing. need help with my x? i hate it.

thinking of maybe changing to perk...

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3313/3295410869_8677e0f165_m.jpg

Thanks man, stay with expo

ErrorOner...

02-21-2009, 03:19 AM

On the way home from my new crib...word to -->sarto and lyras
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0078.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0082.jpg

Fat4l_ONE

02-21-2009, 02:34 PM

A few of my tags i threw up last night.
these were done with one of these....http://www.idealtruevalue.com/servlet/the-139746/Detail

Ok, so I've been trying to develop some kind of handstyle because my current one is horrible.
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/968/f02221540wf6.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/416/f02221541fx0.jpg
advice? which ones are better?

dont write kasm, theres another one, he burns you, and hes on this site.

Scheme*119

02-22-2009, 02:18 PM

http://i43.tinypic.com/2921xzs.jpg

crits

modeswang77

02-22-2009, 04:58 PM

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k304/Enjoi_The_End/resktag.jpg
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k304/Enjoi_The_End/resk2.jpg
Haven't been on this site in months, crits please, I've improved alot, don't even know if anyone will remember my username

Azule- it looks as though you're spending too much time drawing the tag, instead of just writing it and letting it flow. try some simps, and post them
Fat4l- let your letters breath a little, some of the letters seem a bit crammed together
Thatguywhodrinkstea- I think I remembr your username from way back, correct me if I'm wrong but I think you were the one who wrote oene. Anyway, that posek looks clean as fuck. get more flicks and post!

iPwnF00lz

02-22-2009, 06:09 PM

The R is too slanted, straighten out the first leg of the R and it will look a lot nicer.

I know the first resk tag has way too much shit, I was just trying to experiment with add ons. My normal tag doesn't have any add ons

Azul

02-22-2009, 08:00 PM

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/4933/dsc00456tf7.jpg
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/2208/dsc00458lm5.jpg
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/756/dsc00457oo8.jpg
I don't know if these are simple enough.. but whatever crits please

iPwnF00lz

02-22-2009, 08:34 PM

Either the very last one or the second one.

W.A.T.S.R.

02-22-2009, 08:52 PM

just started and what to know what you think

feel free to hate...

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk9/zackzappone/DCAM0018.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk9/zackzappone/DCAM0019.jpg

modeswang77

02-22-2009, 09:17 PM

WATSR- really really tone it down, you don't need all the extras. You're no king, so remove the crown, although it's fun to add crap like that, that's doesn't come til later. I do like the simplicity of the WA and the oneline flow of it. but the rest, tone it down

AZULE- I like the last one best. try writing them a bit faster now. give them some flow

another way home from my new crib...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0090.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0091.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0092.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0093.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0096.jpg

'TieR'

02-23-2009, 08:18 AM

WATSR- really really tone it down, you don't need all the extras. You're no king, so remove the crown, although it's fun to add crap like that, that's doesn't come til later. I do like the simplicity of the WA and the oneline flow of it. but the rest, tone it down

AZULE- I like the last one best. try writing them a bit faster now. give them some flow

yeh erm
if im not mistaken thats a crown on the last one. practise what u preach.

and error
the second one is nice
but loose the halo.

Bink1

02-23-2009, 09:44 AM

resk second one is tight work on K tho

octp- lmfao too many addons :D

scrap and sarto - your from one area?

modeswang77

02-23-2009, 04:37 PM

TIER- yes I do realize that dumb ass, I said ignore the add ons, I'm barely starting to work on add ons, I've been writing over a half year now. I shouldn't even have crowns and gay shit like that yet, but I'm trying to figure out new shit to throw on it.

Bink1- thanks, the k looks alot better but it definitely doesn't show in those pics. I'll post more soon

Here are my tags
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/8704/f02232154yb8.jpg
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/8130/f0223215402wn8.jpg
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5999/f02232158yo6.jpg
any advice on the letters? cursive ones just for sprayin

iPwnF00lz

02-23-2009, 08:36 PM

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/downsized_0223091945.jpg
Practiced a little bit today to try to get down my letters more.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/downsized_0223091959.jpg
klic- I like the second one a lot, maybe if it wasn't as sloppy after the h it would look better but none the less it's still fresh. sanek looks like it could flow nicely, try it out and post flicks after you get the hang of writing it so that we can give you crits to help you decide.

tassajara17272

02-23-2009, 09:01 PM

i think i put the s too close to the a
other than that how's it look?
http://i34.tinypic.com/2niwj9t.jpg

bump for crits

iPwnF00lz

02-23-2009, 09:09 PM

Does it say coast? What is after the t?

skull-e

02-23-2009, 09:10 PM

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00085.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture80.jpg
Tassa: loose the quotation marks and make the bar in the "A" a bit straighter

klic

02-23-2009, 09:14 PM

alright thanks rype, ill do that... that looks a lot better than the one on the electrical box or whatever, id try a lowercase e if i were you though, and it might look better if your Y wasnt bent (so it just looks like "y")

iPwnF00lz

02-23-2009, 09:25 PM

Thanks man, I will try out the lower case e, I figured the curved y flowed a little better because its a pretty curvy style but I will try out different shit to try to see how it looks straight.

W.A.T.S.R.

02-23-2009, 09:38 PM

question for you Klic, why is it a bad name to begin with?

just wondering

klic

02-23-2009, 10:12 PM

question for you Klic, why is it a bad name to begin with?

just wondering

in my opinion, it doesnt sound that great to say, the letters arnt very good, i dont really like how theirs 3 consanants in a row at the end there.. but its up to you, if you like it i dont see any reason why you should stop writing it

W.A.T.S.R.

02-23-2009, 11:37 PM

I get what your saying but i think im going to stick with it till i can come up with something better

i agree with klic
but i think it looks pretty good
make it simpler though, all the extra stuff takes away from the actual letters

bak

02-24-2009, 12:07 AM

cesure try going a lil more simple for crits

new name trying out new stuff
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/02-23-09_2036.jpg

Azul

02-24-2009, 12:47 AM

Here are my tags
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/8704/f02232154yb8.jpg
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/8130/f0223215402wn8.jpg
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5999/f02232158yo6.jpg
any advice on the letters? cursive ones just for sprayin

Advice...... |Please??|

Facedorateur

02-24-2009, 09:53 AM

Just keep writing it over and ove3r again, look at RYPE's post, do what hes doing

peacebomb

02-24-2009, 04:25 PM

Im trying out a new name. I can work with it more then my previous one.

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z123/xyxzxk/freshhandie001.jpg

The E kind of just seems out of place.

Cesure- Dont connect all the letters like you did on your first one.
Azule- I like the a on the first one but i dont know about connecting all the letters.

klic

02-24-2009, 05:38 PM

^dude, dont write fresh lol

azule - give crits if you expect to get them

cram/gram - i like your m, not feeling your C/G

watsr - just make it one colour, it takes away from your letters.. dont make everything so loopy as well, and like you said, lose the add ons

peacebomb

02-24-2009, 07:20 PM

yea Im gonna change it to fres lol wanted to see if anybody would say something

Dessik

02-24-2009, 07:53 PM

Peacebomb, maybe you should try a lower case E
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/63/l_a8dfbd2c42514c9fa22297dc991cc936.jpg

peacebomb

02-24-2009, 08:04 PM

Ahhh hmm im gonna try that.

Aesik- the a,e and s are curvy and your I and k are straight so maybe curvr the k a little.

iPwnF00lz

02-24-2009, 09:33 PM

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/0224091510.jpg
From a while ago.
Desik - get the letters to go together better, curving the letters or making them more simple could help, and dropping the halo, arrow and upside down exclamation mark would help it out too.

bak

02-24-2009, 10:12 PM

^dude, dont write fresh lol

azule - give crits if you expect to get them

cram/gram - i like your m, not feeling your C/G

watsr - just make it one colour, it takes away from your letters.. dont make everything so loopy as well, and like you said, lose the add ons

haha thanks its a g but yeah its not good

"RYPE" its a good start now give it some flavor

iPwnF00lz

02-24-2009, 10:34 PM

Thanks, and will do, I sort of added some sense then but I still need something more to add for style. I like the G you went for, just make it so it doesn't go through itself, but at the same time add the line in so we don't think its a c either, and making the m straight would help alot in my opinion.. Oh and why the #7?

klic

02-24-2009, 10:44 PM

Do it up

***Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle #1***
Word: Pineapple Express
Deadline: Sunday, March 1, 2008
Rules: One entry per person. Send your entry with the word of the battle in the title.

Send your entries to me (klic). PM me if you have any questions, or suggestions for next weeks word

old...
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/6-1.jpg

klic- I like the second one a lot, maybe if it wasn't as sloppy after the h it would look better but none the less it's still fresh. sanek looks like it could flow nicely, try it out and post flicks after you get the hang of writing it so that we can give you crits to help you decide.

shitty phone flicks
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/2-12.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/2-11.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/3-7.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/4-7.jpg
just playing around with different names, thinking about switing to sanek

crits...

rype - work on your can control, if i were you id lose the quotation marks and have an underline or something else

aesik - lose the arrow, quotation marks and make all your letters the same size

cesure - give crits from now on if you want to get them, make your letters all the same size and round them out more and dont make them so jagged

Fube

02-24-2009, 10:47 PM

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture80.jpg

bump this. i love circle tactics.

iPwnF00lz

02-24-2009, 11:40 PM

Do it up

***Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle #1***
Word: Pineapple Express
Deadline: Sunday, March 1, 2008
Rules: One entry per person. Send your entry with the word of the battle in the title.

Send your entries to me (klic). PM me if you have any questions, or suggestions for next weeks word

old...
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/6-1.jpg

shitty phone flicks
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/2-12.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/2-11.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/3-7.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/4-7.jpg
just playing around with different names, thinking about switing to sanek

crits...

rype - work on your can control, if i were you id lose the quotation marks and have an underline or something else

I agree and will do next time out and post flicks, Sanek looks ill, stick with it for sure.

And sanek is good
Finally you're doin a name you can work with
You been stuck going no where with shpel too long bro I know you can do better with sanek

iPwnF00lz

02-25-2009, 03:53 PM

$1LENCR- I don't really know what crits to give, what you were going for isn't the style of my liking
big blue violence- I like it, the i,a and last n could be better but I do like it.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/0225091516.jpg

peacebomb

02-25-2009, 04:23 PM

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z123/xyxzxk/FRZ011.jpg

Crits please

Big Blue - really not feelin your hand style. But everyone else likes is so... idk.
Rype- looks good except the e is getting away and the R is a little muffed up
Sanek- Sanek is the better name i would say

what4joke...

02-25-2009, 04:46 PM

05? jesus lol

peacebomb

02-25-2009, 04:54 PM

Lol just havent changed the date on my camera.

klic

02-25-2009, 05:20 PM

Hot.
Except for the a

And sanek is good
Finally you're doin a name you can work with
You been stuck going no where with shpel too long bro I know you can do better with sanek

thanks homie, haha i was gonna pm you asking what you thought about it

BigBlueViolence

02-25-2009, 06:12 PM

Rype- make all of your letters the same size,
and if you're going to be using quotations, at least make them controlled.
those are way too big for the tag they are surrounding.

Peace- I don't even know what that says, dude.
all the extra loops and dots and curves really make a handstyle look like shit.
It isn't a piece, don't add extensions to your letters.

Eack

02-25-2009, 06:49 PM

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8390/img0187.jpg

skull-e

02-25-2009, 09:01 PM

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture89.jpg
Bump for crits >.>
Rype: Fix the R, and you're good to go

ThatguywhodrinksTea

02-25-2009, 09:05 PM

tasr- love it not feeling the arrow tho lol...
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/0225091822.jpg

skull-e

02-25-2009, 09:08 PM

fuck yeah, reppin lpa

goober

02-25-2009, 09:38 PM

trying something new

http://i41.tinypic.com/2mq3lfr.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/oizwpw.jpg

WoeInfinite

02-25-2009, 10:17 PM

^^^
no
no
no
no
no
no
no
no
no
no
no
no
no!

Ink me

02-26-2009, 12:26 AM

New Tag.......Any good?
http://i39.tinypic.com/2qc2hbl.jpg

Klic- Really looks sick. Like it better than your other tag.
Silencer- Nice style
Goober- Eh
Skull.e- Liking the tag. The others you have posted too.
Posek looks ill.
Rype- Looks shaky. Is it a small small tag? Maybe thats why it looks so shaky. I find it gets a better flow the bigger the tag. Quotes are a little uneven.....

Thanks for the crits guys I'll work on making them the same size, probably drop the quotes, and I did mess up the r I agree.

Ink me

02-26-2009, 09:28 AM

New Tag.......Any good?
http://i39.tinypic.com/2qc2hbl.jpg

Klic- Really looks sick. Like it better than your other tag.
Silencer- Nice style
Goober- Eh
Skull.e- Liking the tag. The others you have posted too.
Posek looks ill.
Rype- Looks shaky. Is it a small small tag? Maybe thats why it looks so shaky. I find it gets a better flow the bigger the tag. Quotes are a little uneven.....

Bump

Eack

02-26-2009, 09:31 AM

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8390/img0187.jpg

poet n sike = keep in simple, those extensions arent all that
goober = i think woe replied for all of us
ThatguywhodrinksTea = rly phat

Syke1FTP

02-26-2009, 09:42 AM

haha i was fucked up when i did that
but still i aint changing shit i didnt ask for crits....my tag is how i like it
i dont care what you guys think of it....i like it and thats all i care about
=]
and eack thats dope whats that last letter though?
[edit] forgot about you ink....its alright but the o's a lil odd and whats that thing above the t?
haha ditch that an itll be dope oh and maybe bring the t up jus a lil

[edit] forgot about you ink....its alright but the o's a lil odd and whats that thing above the t?
haha ditch that an itll be dope oh and maybe bring the t up jus a lil

The dot was just me trying to get some paint on the nib. And yeah I know my O is fucked. I am trying to do my P and O without lifting my pen and thats how it turns out. Thanks though.

Not sure if I like the extensions quite that long on your tag. Do your thing though.

Zase

02-26-2009, 10:45 AM

http://i42.tinypic.com/1z5rnvb.jpg
simple is good

i also pop 1 liners but those i use with markers and mops not with a can

expozay

02-26-2009, 11:41 AM

zase looks good.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3662/3312001274_fa45002a9c_m.jpg

Eack

02-26-2009, 12:04 PM

and eack thats dope whats that last letter though?

last letter is a O
ERASO

Zase

02-26-2009, 12:16 PM

expo ex is sharp po is curved fix that its the only crit i can give u

modeswang77

02-26-2009, 03:26 PM

goober- please please stick to paper, that looks like a terrible mess, I'm sorry
Zase- sick, clean ass shit man, stay up...
Expo- keep it simpler, don't make it so sharp lol try a smoother version of your normal handwriting and post one up, I wanna see that

sorry for gettin pissy the other day tier, havin a bad week :/

t3hquietkid

02-26-2009, 04:59 PM

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i247/roughrider504/DSCF1009.jpg

A simple tag.

comments welcome :)

dogowar

02-26-2009, 05:32 PM

quietkid try and keep your letters more the same size and style for now and lose the arrow underneath. Try and make the t and i look like the C and E

denaaa

02-26-2009, 06:26 PM

some drunkk shitt ill get back with my newer stuff soon
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/denasst.jpg