I love this story!! I could have sworn there were more chapters up... hmmm, i could have sworn there was a part with dudley and hermione in the cupboard under the stairs.. oh well! I still love the story :D

Mm - strange turn there at the end with Ron's sudden change - looking forward to an explanation as it seems quite out of character. But your writing overall is quite good and I'm really enjoying this story!

Author's Response: Again, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you'll like the reason behind it, I feel it's rather in character for him :) But then, I know his motivation :p

Awesome!!! Very awesome. The Dursley's and Dudley are very in character. That was so cute how Ron was trying to tell Hermione that he loved her! I also liked how she put clothes on the girls in Dudley's posters.

So, overall, I think that this story is a great one. Even better, its 12+!

Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you felt the Dursleys were in char. I spent quite some time on this chapter, and felt it turned out quite well.