Candy-floss Ferwois: 15 years old has long pink hair down to her waist big green eyes , very pretty , likes art and camping but is very timid and good natured. I wouldn't mind if she died in the first 5 minutes I'm just happy to help! Keep it up its well good I'm 14 and I can't write half as good as you!

Your story is awesome! I like that Rue is coming back. Just some advice, not criticism, don't put too many characters in the story. It gets really difficult to follow along, and you will probably have trouble making sure each character gets his or her ending. Unless you are superman or something.