As far as the song itself goes, it's not the worst song I've ever heard but the singing is definitely the weak point. There's a part around two minutes in where the singer just sorta moans and it's really off-putting.

If you cut the song at 3:23, it would be a better song. Not sure why you left all that extra stuff in.

Forever Low Man wrote:I dunno man. Kinda weird for you to show up out of nowhere and start talking about this band no one else knows.

If this is your band, fuck you. If not, you need to learn how to make better first impressions.

Sorry if you didn't like the approach I made. But I didn't get the animosity. It's a new project. What's wrong with that? If you don't like, that's ok.

Yes, I'm involved in it.

Regarding your second reply:

Thanks for listening to it.

We're aware of the singing. There was only one guy who could do it by the time it was recorded and he did the best he could. We have more songs on the way to be recorded and it will sound a lot better. The vocal department is our priority.

The length of the song I knew from the get go it was going to be a ''problem''. But that's the way we felt the song. It's hard to explain. We felt the song was asking for a diferent ending and it led to what you heard.