Model Essay - Body paragraph 1 (Poor)

Model Essay

What follows is the sample essay analysing the use of setting in
the short story "The Cask of Amontillado." Both "good" and "poor"
examples of the essay's first and second body paragraphs are
included. As you read each paragraph of the essay, beginning with
its introduction, clicking on the "continue" arrow at the bottom of
the paragraph will permit you to see commentary on particular
features of the essay-writing process.