well it is very much a rant, and you are pretty angry in it. personally im more of a logic type of girl. You hate this person you write about and wish to hurt him as he hurt you, but if you did, then how would you be any better of a person than he is? my morals are getting away with me again. I like the peice though! keep up the strength in your work!

Very emotive! I liked this a lot, but when you put in the ...years... it kinda made it sound like you lost what to say, overall it was a good poem and I hope you keep on writing! I enjoy reading them =p

Let me be the first to comment on this! Seems like this one could be the last in a chapter of your poetry collection. It's nice to see this is all coming to an end! What will you write about now? lol. I absolutely love the ending of this one! First bit of control I've seen you write about. Everything else seems to center around a complete lack of control. (See 60 other submissions....) There are a few spelling and usage errors that may confuse some people, but I'll talk to you about that later... Believe me, I can't wait to see the look on his face either.