2018年2月22日 星期四

﻿托福寫作真題題目為：It is better for
children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or
disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

托福寫作範文參考一:

With the development of the transportation system and some residence
institution， the world is
getting smaller and smaller， and people are not
restricted in only one area. In addition to the convenient condition， because there are different places with different cultures， living standards， education environment and
other disparity， they are inclined to transfer from one
place to the other. Is it better to move around than stay in one place? I
believe there are no uniform answers，but in my opinion， I do agree with the claim that to move around is better than to
stay in one place.

Most people's growth comes with the transfers in their
life. As for me， when I was young I lived in a small
county. Because the school in there was not suitable to me， I transferred from my little county to a city to get a better
education. As soon as I got to the city， I was amazed
that the world here was so different here as my hometown .If I still lived in
my hometown， it was impossible for me to make the
wildest guess at what the real world looked like. The first transfer has made
me to imagine my own life and spur on me to go further. With the confidence， I went into a university which I would never think of it before.
The university is located in a different city so that I have to come into
another world. Compared with my living city， the one is
more complicated in which there are different people，
more convenient transportation， more competitive
environment. I love all of this very much. Communicating with different
students and teachers， I have learned much from them
which will benefit me throughout my life and my lifestyle. Now I am in a
graduate school also so beautiful that I will never regret my selection of
leaving my hometown because the transfer has given me a splendid life.

Also， like we students， there are many adults transferring their work place in order to
grasp better opportunities. No matter in industry， in
agriculture or in service， workers have rights to
choose their work companies which leads them to work from place to place and
then they accumulate precious experience and skills to get priorities to
others.

People not only transfer in their own country， but also go abroad to get education， work
or live through the rest of their life in appropriate countries. We can see
that many students including me want to go to the foreign countries to study
further and forge ourselves， and that many parents send
their little sons or daughters to foreign countries to study. After all， diverse circumstances give persons new experience and broaden their
narrow sight， even help them get more comprehensive
understanding of the world， the society and our life
itself.

However， some people may say
that if people move around， they will pay for much such
as money， time and energy. It is right to say that it
takes one person some time to get used to his or her new environment， new personal relationship which indeed influences the growth of
children， the efficiency of our work and the stability
of our society and family. And I have to admit that people should make
considerate plans before changing their places and may not transfer aimlessly
and frequently. But I think sometimes it is just all the friction that has made
the world wealthier and more beautiful. Therefore， I
still think it is better to travel around than to live in one place.