On the woman i use sketchbook on phone hha tnx walter yo And on there the white god i use sai Its the temple manga hes one of the character there ill post the pages that ive finished and drafts about that temple mangaBtw guys good to see you two hha

I'm not sure what's happening in the last page, but otherwise this is so cool Killer B!!! Hahaha man finally I get to see you drawing comics. How the hell is your 3d vision so good!? I can never manage to do that. And you're using a mouse right? What software? Guuuh I want to be able to draw like this.

Remember if you need any corrections with text just ask me. otherwise I'll just post some here

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1 - What does he say on the 2nd Page, 1st panel? It's empty.2 - Maybe it's just my imagination (it's instead of its) 3- Who's that guy in a hood? He's strange.4 - I've never seen anyone go below the Spirit World. I have to report these circumstances immediately. 5- It's been a long time since I was here 6 - I'm not really sure if it's him (I'm instead of im, it's instead of its) 7 - Guys! Did you see that? Someone fell from the sky! 8 - What, there's something that fell from above?

That's all I caught. I've got to say though your English has improved, and damn I really wish I could draw like this. Love to have seen this man haha. Keep it up!

heres what i did yesterday 2 pages draft of GAME manga ill make it more good now not only in anatomy as u can see i constructed shapes and stuff hha after yesterday ive been looking on conceptart.org and ive see that what im lacking is imagination or observation of shapes,body so i checked the quick poses so ive draw many quick poses yesterday and heres the result haha im just started so look forward to more haha

I have to agree with Lego and co. Your 3D vision is amazing, especially with how you got those buildings to align in perspective with what looks like single strokes.

As for coloring, I'd recommend looking at a few videos and tutorials from people who use your program for specifics. I don't see anything particularly "wrong" or "weird" that stands out to me in what you're doing right now, and that might be due in large part to your understanding of the 3D on a 2D surface already--you know where light hits because you understand how the form is working.

Keep on truckin on, man, and good work on the comic. I've said many times and I'll say it again: anyone who can keep focus on drawing a comic for more than five pages has my utmost respect.