nice. hmm... i mean you kindof actually attempted to explain the very strange concept of love and that was a good try. really mentionable. and NO spelling errors. and not much fluff. (highly ironical if you read my first fan fic.) like your writing style. keep it up

The mystery of yonnas chapter 1 . 5/15/2005

I don't get it. Who was the one who drew Anna? Who invited who? And Who said he loves Anna? Anyways gud stry. Me luv it!