not too bad, very pretty girl. I would recommend two things. 1. some pretty obvious post process work on her complexion. Almost has too much of a plastic look. There are a couple of awesome tutorials on youtube of touch ups. 2. Avoid cutting off limbs at the joints. I think its the first one were there is an appearance she has her arms cut off from how you framed the shot. I try to avoid chopping off from elbows, kneecaps and ankles.

Really like this lens with d800. I have the 1.8 85mm but I'm thinking of returning and adding this to my bag!