Feasibility of political law enforcement

1. Summary of the Report
This report mainly discusses about the lacking proper regulation over the poplar vitamin, mineral, and supplement (VME) industry which poses a potential threat to the American society. The reasons behind this confliction are government and regulation failure. To solve this problem on the legislative level, both civil and criminal penalties for negligence of direct or indirect information provision on VMS are listed as the policy alternatives. Furthermore, economic efficiency, distributional consequences, and enforcement and political feasibility as well are taken as the criteria. When comes to applying each criteria to each alternative, the author proposes that no matter conducting civil penalties or criminal penalties, both of which must abide by the law. In this case, political feasibility is the priority to be taken into consideration.

2. Positive Attributes
This report quotes and analyzes sufficient data to support his statement which is convincing. An analysis through solid figures could make the report objective and unbiased.
In the first sentences of every paragraphs, he gives the topic sentences directly which is convenient for readers to grasp the main idea of the whole paragraph instantly.

3. Attributes need improving
To view this report as a whole, he does not clearly divide this report into different parts. There are no subtitles which make readers difficult to follow the framework of the author. Meanwhile, lacking of subtitles makes the report hard to read.
In the conclusion part, the limitation or the challenges the report faces are not explicitly stated, which makes readers confusing.

4. Conclusion
In general, this report gives a thorough and comprehensive view of the confliction between the popularity of VMS industry and the inadequacy of proper regulation. Robust figure analysis and organized in-paragraph description give readers an unbiased view on the issue discussed. However, the construct of the whole report still needs to be improved.