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In war-torn Equestria, two pegasi's love blossoms. While the rest of their country is at war, they flee to the Arctic north, and soon find that what they were looking for will take far more than will power to retrieve. ·moonblossom131

And suddenly she was falling. Her mind was blank with shock, and she watched as the thick clouds of fog succumb her. Her pale blue wings hit against the nearly solid fog clouds. She saw a lightning streak head for the finish line and she knew that she had lost. An image of the turquoise mare in a bright Wonderbolts outfit drained into her mind, another with her in the back, a look of defeat etched on her tired face. Yellow eyes met magenta ones. "You will never be a Wonderbolt." it snapped.

No. Her wings unfurled and beat quickly through the thick air. I will be a Wonderbolt.

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I changed the genre because it didn't feel like much of a "slice-of-life"

Oh my gosh. I am now dying to read more of this story. I am partially in love with you for writing this. No homo. I really look forward to reading more of this already epic story as it comes out. Keep up the great writing!

>>25030812503081 Wow! Thanks! I did not expect to get many likes for this story, as I never wrote slice of life before. I really appreciate the feedback you guys are giving me! Especially the positive feedback, lol.

Though I must say I want to keep the Romance as a side story. This fic mainly focuses on Dash being a Wonderbolt, and challenges she has to face as a Wonderbolt. Sorta like a "Your dream isn't what it's cut out to be" fic.

Well that's dumb.... The Wonderbolts should be everything it is cut out to be. They are the best! The most amazing! The truest form of leadership, comradery, and inspiration! This story is very good and I won't dislike or unfavorite this because it messes with my head canon, but I am kinda sad because I wanted this to be a great fic for me.. :/ oh we'll... maybe I will come back and really like it in a while.

>>25088362508836 No, you don't understand! I'm not saying the Wonderbolts are bad, of course they're not. I'm saying that RD and the Bolts are going to face something that the Bolts have never faced before.

Sorry, for the quick update. I was looking forward to update this chapter for a while now. It was written very quickly, so excuse me if I have some errors in there... Anyways, my DW fic is still in progress for those who are wondering. It's going to be a long, long, long chapter.

>>29833512983351 Your welcome. : I'll leave a link here for you, I'm not sure when'll get to your reading, since he has over 200 stories back logged. But I think he said he might actually do yours tomorrow, at least the first few chapters.

You can check out some of his other readings there, to get a sense of how yours will be done. Though he has different styles depending on how much the story draws him in. Like "Why Am I Crying?" is more serious.