My main concern is, what happened to the white owl and snake with white eyes from the beginning of part one. I let it slide that you didn't bring them up but now they are just gone and he has a new white owl. And why change Nevils sword to a katana from a broadsword like it was in part one.

djie chapter 8 . 1/29/2015

Are you done yet? By the time of this writing, you should be in college and at least have had a huge start on your revisions. Please don't abandon this story.