Interesting pairing (Hermione and Percy). I did like your story overall but there have been a few things that were just a little too easy (like the Slytherins just suddenly becoming Hermiones friends, Percy is way too tolerant about losing her twice, the teachers approving of a teacher/student relationship amongst some others). I also suspect that you are American - not that it is a bad thing. It is just that you incorporate a few words and some things in your story that are clearly not British.

Hi, I loved it, but this last chapter you had Fred married to Katie, and then to Alicia, and it's a mess. But overall, très bon

guest chapter 28 . 8/31/2015

Really beautiful story, had me in tears too. I rarely cry in stories so well done

May chapter 28 . 9/6/2014

Yay!
I actually enjoyed that.
Most SS-HG stories I don't usually enjoy but this one was quite good.
So far it's this one and that other story The Closet.
Cute ending and I'm quite glad that Hermione ended up with Sev!

I really like this smoothly flowing, gentle story.
Hmmm.. have noticed a few times, that you write 'anyways' for Severus.
It grates in my ears , because he is an Englishman, not American; it is a youthful expression, and he is highly cultured, mature, and takes pride in his hard-won accomplishments.
His wit is urbane, not callow or green. so , it just feels as if it doesn't belong in the outline...
sorry, but... had to write this tiny, little cough...
Otherwise , I adore the soft complexity. Write on...do...'S so enjoyable.
I like the shall/shall not between Percy and Severus. She is young and new to love,, of course she would want to sample different delights.

if anyone wanted to see Hermione's gown at the halloween party I think the link is www . malabar rentalgal / Historical % 20couples / slides / Turn % 20 of % 20 the % 20 Century . html don't forget to take out the spaces