I'm not generally a fan of description peices. Sure, description is nice in a story, but I normally prefer dialogue. This, however, changed my mind a bit.
Eloquent without being pretentious, contemplative without being unrealistic, this is one excellent peice.
The paragraph that begins "She was so many things..." was particularly exquisite.

OH MY GOD...
please tell me that there is more to this story, I wanna know so much more...who is this truly amazing girl, is she based off of you...and who is this guy who seems to have fallen in love with her?