click the pic it gets bigger. I see what you are talking about but to me thats still not a bad looking fly really in my opinion. I have made alot worse! all I really notice on your fly is the underside of the body is not perfectly smooth. I am not a salmon fly person myself so I can't name it

man thats not a bad looking fly at all, it may not be perfect, but i've bought flies that didnt look that good. Besides as long as balance is right and it isnt all jacked up looking it'll catch fish.
Bear