It's in the story notes. If you don't think that's important, let me tell you that I'm not the only person who will ditch a story because of awful story notes. That typo was particularly unlucky and dangerous!

I like the palindromic rhyme scheme. That is very cool and, of course, twin-like.The idea f fire being your essence, but that you - for want of a better word - strive for the moon, is also very nice. I thought you could have brought it out a little more in the last line, but it's not a big issue.

The thing with a spellchecker is that it's not in a rush, so it notices when you mistype 'catches' as 'catched' and make it look like you can't even use past participles properly ;)

I see the site lumps favourite stories and authors into one, so I hope it emails me when you update. It's not letting me favourite things at the moment, for some reason.

Happy writing,Charli

Author's Response: I understand about caught but I don't know what you're talking about. I'm looking at my copy of Twins right now and I never wrote catched. Excuse me if I'm wrong. Could you tell me where you see it?
Hope you figure things out alright:))

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