I’ve written a few trilogies and a couple of series. I’ve stumbled and struggled and made mistakes and learned from them. During book one, I’ve worried how to create the world AND focus on a smooth storyline, and during book two, I’ve stood in front of my planning board and worried about how to overcome that bad sequel rep. You know the reputation I’m talking about. Book two must be better than book one, but it cannot outshine book three. In fact, book three is supposed to outshine book one and book two combined. I have bitten my nails over this…and then I realized how silly that was.

Here’s the deal: Book two gets a BAD rep. It is often the most hated book in any trilogy—by writers and readers—because it’s seen as a transitional book, a book that takes the readers from the brand-new world in book one to the mighty explosive ending in book three.

Book two is boring. But it doesn’t have to be.

I honestly believe we are looking at book two in all the wrong ways, so here are some writing tips to consider.

1. Give Book 2 CREDIT

You’ve built a world in book one. You’ve created characters and described a setting and started a story and set up the tension. Book one is the adventure…and then there is book three, the explosive ending. It’s the climax of the series. It’s the ultimate tension and resolution. Book one gets credit for being creative, and book three gets credit for being explosive, so where is book two’s credit? It’s called a transitional book like that’s a bad thing, but I see it as a great opportunity. This is the book where you can focus on the story without worry. You have already built your world and your characters, and while everything is still going to grow, you have much more room to focus on the storyline. Give book two credit for all the wonderful, crazy, and brave elements you’ll finally get to explore in-depth. Let it be important. For me, book two is where my characters are often the bravest, because book two is where my characters DECIDE book three will happen. For me, this is the book I love writing the most. In fact, book three is the hardest for me, because I have to let everyone go. So enjoy book two while you’re there.

2. Consider Your Subgenre

This is completely different scenario, but I’ve spoken with a lot of writers who were absolutely enamored with book one but simply don’t feel the same spark going into book two. Well, maybe it isn’t a trilogy or series. That’s always a possibility. But if you’re sure this is a trilogy and you’re unsure how to continue your trilogy, consider sub-genres. What is a subgenre? Exactly how it sounds. It is a genre that pushes your main genre forward. Think of it like a subplot. In a story, we have a main plot, but then we have subplots or character arcs that push the entire plot forward. In a genre’s case, this subgenre could help tone the novel. Example? So you have a sci-fi book. Analyze your book by stripping out the sci-fi and consider what the plot would be without it. Maybe it’s a thriller. Now look at book two and consider changing it up. Maybe book two will be a sci-fi mystery instead of a sci-fi thriller. It will force your characters into a new situation and mindset, and it might just be the element you are missing to have each book stand on its own. The podcast Writing Excuses is covering the elemental genre right now, so they dance on the topic of subgenres a lot. Definitely recommended!

3. NEVER Hold Back

I’m writing a sequel right now, and I had to change gears 45,000 words in. Embrace it. Pull out those Sticky Notes and map out that madness.

Since there’s this expectation that book three MUST be better than book two, I’m terrified when I read articles suggesting authors hold themselves back during the sequel, so that book three will be the most exciting. Bullshit. Absolute bullshit. As I tweeted out during my research of this topic, NEVER hold yourself back. Always write the best book that you can, and worry about “overcoming” book three later. Even if you’re writing book two and it seems extremely explosive, write it. Even if you have no idea what you’ll do in book three, write it. I am an author who believes in trusting your characters. If your story is asking for it, listen to it. Let book two be great. Let book two break the stigma. Let it be the best book in the series as you’re writing it. Write it in the best way that you can. That is the only thing you should be worried about. Everything else can happen later. As an example, I worked with a client who kept worrying about their protagonist. He insisted on killing the villain in the second book. But what will I do in book three? I couldn’t answer that, but I could advise them to try it. They did, and it turned out book three gained a new villain. The protagonist himself. Trust your characters. Trust your work. Give book two its dues. I played with this concept myself in The Timely Death Trilogy. The trilogy revolves around the idea of a “prophecy” and everyone automatically assumed it would happen in book three. Of course readers were quite thrown off when it happened in book two. I wish I could say I planned that from the beginning, but I didn’t. I did, however, listen to my gut. I listened to book two’s heart, and I let it live.

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Since today’s post was about book 2 in a trilogy, here’s an excerpt from Seconds Before Sunrise, book 2 in The Timely Death Trilogy:

The lights were a collection of creatures I couldn’t have imagined on my own. Some had three arms. Others had weapons that looked impossible to carry. Their fingernails outstretched like blades, and their flushed faces suggested they were waiting longer than I thought.

15 Responses to “#WW Writing Tips for Book 2 in the Trilogy”

“Book two is where my characters DECIDE book three will happen” is so true. Never really thought of it that way, but that does increase the importance of the book that I always called ‘a bridge’. I’ve never really understood the hate on Book 2 because you need it to bring events of Book 1 into events of Book 3. Otherwise, things just fold in on itself. Honestly, I can’t think of this topic without remembering ‘Empire Strikes Back’. That’s really the epitome of great Part 2 writing.

Shannon, this is GREAT advice! Especially the one about never holding back. I am just finishing up Book 2, but fortunately, it never occurred to me to hold back. And Book 2 DID decide whether there will be a Book 3, plus gave me a lot of additional direction for the final book.

As you know I’ve never fancied myself a writer, so I had five books and half of two written before I knew that I was a writer. For that reason I wrote without knowing ANYTHING about writing a novel, reading what was going on in the community, or for what purpose I was writing. I just had stories to tell. I wrote my first sequel thinking it would be the last, but the characters kept talking, so I kept writing and ended up with three books in that series. Since I had no clue about the above “rules” of sequels I just went for it with the characters. To me the sequel is more satisfying just beacuse the world is built, and the characters can grow. (It’s unsatisfying in that I changed so much in the first story beacuse of excellent advice that I have to almost rewrite the first part to fit in the changes, but oh well) But as I was reading this great article I realized that in some ways I had followed the rules, only for the third book. In it I pushed my characters to such a point that I’m sure I’ll get a lot of “whats”, but that’s where the characters wanted to go. Now that I’ve read the “rules” I’m anxious! Great article.

You being up an excellent point! I think sometimes it’s best to be unaware of those rules, because you’re just writing, rather than worrying about a standard or expectation. It really allows someone to be true to the work and only write what they feel is right. It’s funny too, because, like you said, I think writers naturally meet those expectations. It’s forcing it that causes issues. Great comment! Thank you for reading.
~SAT

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