Verse 1Titanic eyes and low moon risingA tidal escapade rippled into nothingWe’re history with no architectureOnly your guilt will rememberIt takes a heart to send out tremorsA skilled head to avoid endeavors

Pre-ChorusWhat was unresolved in the first place?Just a feeling to still understateTruth unaware, dare to play?False hope is my only shame

ChorusConsciously I’m so devotedSlipping in a head case vortexDiscovering what is least importantAre all the fears I have avoided

"Titanic eyes" is a really creative image to paint, as is "low moon rising" in terms of the astrology.

Not sure about the "we're history with no architecture" line though, as it confuses me.

"only your guilt will remember" is a great line though.

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Pre-Chorus

What was unresolved in the first place?

Just a feeling to still understate

Truth unaware, dare to play?

False hope is my only shame

Chorus

Consciously I’m so devoted

Slipping in a head case vortex

Discovering what is least important

Are all the fears I have avoided

"what was unresolved in the first place?" feels like another great image for a song, I think you could go farther with this

as it captures the vague descriptions you often see in tarots. Leaving you wondering things such as this.

I also love the line "consciously i'm so devoted", because it leads you to the thought that maybe subconsciously you don't want

what you think you want. This is confirmed with the "discovering what is least important are all the fears i have avoided"

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Verse 2

I’m nostalgic to capture my magic

Miracles when my midnight's tragic

The hours take longer than fathomed

But what’s divine must always happen

Self-sabotage to strip real passion

I allow myself lifetimes of lavish

The first two lines feel like a very taylor-ish line, especially "miracles when my midnight's tragic." I like the verse here a lot, though the "lavish" feels

a bit stiff as a word choice to me randomly.

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Bridge

My intuition is suspicious

This is the twin I have envisioned

It was written in my soul will

I mated with the moment I came here

"my intuition is suspicious" is great, I feel like you could push this farther with another stanza of the bridge with slightly changed. (maybe "my intervention is subconscious. This is the twin I have envisioned." etc. '

OVERALL: The song is really strong and I like the imagery and it has a lot of standout lines. I think with some tightening it'd be very strong tied together.

Is there anything better than a natural disaster?

The panic, the people lost in the streets. It`s like picking fruit off the vine.