Eclair's Nightmare

Here is an e-novel thing I've put together. It's got a few options along the way, so I guess I could call it a a game.

No idea why I took this long to make ryona material on Kidd Grade's Eclair. I think she's one of the hottest anime heroines out there. Better late than never, I guess.

Please do check it out and let me know what you think of it. Any suggestions on improving the game etc would be great. I'd like to know how much interest there is for this sort of work. It's relatively easy to develop and actually finish, unlike many other projects that I just scrap halfway. If this is something you guys are into, please let me know I can see if I can put more of these together.

It wasn't that bad at all. I'd prefer a totally different submission move honestly, and I could of gone without the vomiting part, but those are just personal preferences, so you did a fine job nonetheless in my opinion.

I was hoping to see another type of submissions and moves suffocation but see such a girl who vomits ... I find it very unexciting.
The basic idea is really great, just should vary with the submission wrestling moves and add suffocating or asleep, but this is just my opinion dictated by my personal taste.

Thanks for the reply unknown. Yeah, that's cool. Of course as you already know, putting her in different moves will increase the development time by a lot. I always just aim to finish these before I lose motivation, which happens really quickly sometimes!