The placement of the image above the entire thing looks very strange when it should be placed more with the text on the right than above. It looks like an error in one's Internet connection or programming. The text "Artwork" somewhat overlaps a little on the image which makes it look even further like an error.

I think it is best for it to be beneath the title which many other pages have done. For example, like how the image in the Dread & Circuses hub is placed (also drawn by Zhange).

It's certainly different than the normal style but I think it helps get the reader's attention well and is generally cool looking. I get where you are coming from, but I can't see any issues with it myself.

Holy cow are you guys really gonna have twelve total articles?? I’m gonna need some popcorn.

Out of all of the entries thus far I really like this one the best-I didn’t realize until now just how terrifying immortality can be, especially with the insect populations growing immensely. *shudder* I can feel them crawling on my back just thinking about it.

Best of luck to you guys, can’t wait to read the full “plot” when it’s complete,

if you guys dig the whole "humans delaing with imortality" kinda deal without all the grimdarkness of the Foundation, check out "what will football look like in the future?" by SBNation.
just read a bit and then some HTML screwyness will kick in, the ensuing story is pretty nice.

Upvoted. People hates immortality so hard that Prometheus and MC&D gain money from people that desperately need want to die. I want to hear something from a religion leader regarding this "immortality" event, maybe from Catholic Pope or Islamic Imam. Very interesting.

This is one of the best thing I've read in months on this site. I'm shocked, impressed, and giddy that you made death — in this case 'not-death' — fucking terrifying. I was a little disappointed at the ending (More O5 development and tying up the loose ends would have made this more power) but goddamn, I will not deny this is some fine ass fucking writing.