"Vafildra grew on top of the mighty bridge the dalakians built on the river Man. Once a thriving outpost, it went in decline as the power of the Empire dwindled, and it was sacked by the hordes of Ubria-Lom in 532. A decade later, part of the structure collapsed on a great flood. The city remained as a broken shadow of it former self, but was never abandoned."

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dasneviano

11-27-2012, 11:41 AM

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Lyandra

11-29-2012, 07:12 AM

Interesting project. I really liked the reflection on the first map though. Are you going to add it again?

timallen

11-29-2012, 03:16 PM

I thought the same thing; the reflection was great.

dasneviano

11-29-2012, 06:25 PM

Thanks guys! :D
Yeah, I'll definitely add the reflection again once I'm done drawing everything!
Right now I'm struggling with perspective. I wanted to make the arches have depth (like they did on the sketch), but it's not really working, specially since the bridge is quite wide. Any ideas?

anomiecoalition

11-29-2012, 08:02 PM

For whats its worth, I actually like the sketch a little better. Maybe its cause I can't draw without computer assistance to save my life, but I just really like the feel of it and would love to see you build off that one.

Hope that is taken as more of compliment on the sketch than a criticism of the 2nd version.

dasneviano

12-03-2012, 07:32 PM

So, I decided to go for a completely different, more medieval look. And the top-view didn't suit that, so I got rid of it.
I quite like it. What do you guys think?

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arsheesh

12-06-2012, 06:08 PM

I really like this! The medieval look was a good choice. The text work is very nice, and is well suited to the piece. Great job!

Cheers,
-Arsheesh

Jaxilon

12-07-2012, 01:09 AM

Good direction there. You might tone down the reflection some and see if that looks any better to your eyes but I like it so far.