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6.11.2012

#amediting - Wake Me Up and Pour Me a Cup of Coffee

I have a
confession to make. Editing puts me to sleep. Seriously. Sometimes I’m in the
middle of self-editing my manuscript—my baby—when boom! My head hits the
keyboard. It’s embarrassing, but you know, I’ve read the story sooo many times
is it any wonder my mind is wandering?

One day the
nodding off scared me. My mind hyperventilated—started popping out questions
about my writing prowess. Like…Why am I falling asleep? What if my book is THAT
boring? What’s wrong with the plot? Is it not fast-paced enough? Are the plot
devices trite and overused? Are the characters unrealistic?

When my heart
rate finally slowed, I realized the plot didn’t bore me. No! My muse and I
created the story with loving care, blood, sweat, and tears. Okay, maybe no
blood, but there were a few tears. It had to be editing. Yeah, I’ll blame it on
editing.

Writing a fresh
story is fun. The characters practically create themselves. The conflict forms
out of their personalities and their choices. The dialogue flows as I hear in
my head what someone would say and how they would say it. The plot thickens at
just the right time. I love writing.

I don’t love
self-editing. I work with a wonderful editor, but my goal is to have my
manuscript as shiny as possible before I submit it to my publisher. I want my
editor to buff and polish, not do major surgery on the heart of the book.

Here are a few
things I’ve learned about self-editing. No worries, this isn’t going to get
technical with a dry list of the Unbendable Unbreakable Rules For Aspiring Writers.

No matter how many times I’ve edited a
manuscript, I can always find something else to “fix”.

I’ve obsessed
over passive voice, verb tense, POV head hops, filtering, showing vs. telling,
and the bane of my existence, comma placement. But no matter how many times
I’ve gone over my story, I can always find an omitted word. And homonyms? Argh.
Similarly spelled or similar sounding words will do me in. Their and they’re.
Here and hear. Even now and know. Did you know the spelling and grammar check on
Word won’t alert me when I use the word “his” instead of “he”? Or “form”
instead of “from”? Or when I’ve used the word “look” five thousand times? (That
seems to be my favorite word.) The first draft is a very rough draft. Every
time I learn a new concept, the added knowledge requires another review of my
manuscripts.

Self-editing is a structured, and
therefore, a highly redundant process.

I find it
overwhelming to tackle the abundance of concepts I should remember when I’m
editing a manuscript, so I have to have a plan. I’ve started going through my
stories in several passes. In the first pass, I check for grammar and
punctuation. I let the manuscript “rest” for a while and then in the second
pass, I check for consistency and plot continuity. In the third pass, I look
for redundancy, filtering, head pops, and telling. On my next but not
necessarily my last pass, I read the story aloud to someone, checking for flow,
credibility, and glaring inconsistencies.

This creates a
lot of repetition. By the time I work through it this often, I know my story so
well I can quote it in my sleep.

Edits should never be attempted at the
time of day when I’m most susceptible to falling asleep.

No, it isn’t
midnight. I don’t know what it is about editing in the afternoon that makes my
eyelids droop and my mouth stretch into a wide yawn. The same thing will happen
if I try to read in the afternoon, so it’s not just my stories. Thank goodness.

My most
productive time of day is…well, right now. It’s 10:44 pm CDT and I’m churning
out this blog post without a single yawn or drooping eyelid. Editing at three
in the afternoon? I should know better. The middle of a Saturday or Sunday
afternoon is usually when I beg my wonderful hubby to brew me a fresh pot of
coffee so I can try to stay awake. I’ve learned to give it up and watch another
episode of Law and Order on Netflix. At just about nineish, either my editing
conscience will kick in or my muse will jump up and down in front of my face
and I’ll grab my Mac and tear up the keyboard.

I should always start the process with a
fresh attitude and a fresh pot of coffee.

Tackling the
tremendously time-consuming job of editing a 55k+ manuscript is something that
should never be approached when I’m in a foul mood. I give myself down time
between editorial passes so I can refresh my attitude. A strong pot of fresh
coffee always helps my sensibilities and I can tackle the job with renewed
enthusiasm.

When I discover a new concept in
generally accepted writing style, I shouldn’t knee-jerk and start editing every
unsubmitted manuscript on my hard drive.

When I first
discovered the concept of POV and head hopping, I dusted off all fifteen of my
unpublished manuscripts and went to work. It was painful, because after that I
discovered the concept of showing vs. telling and the process started again.
Then I heard the term filtering for the first time…

Well, you get
the idea. Now I work one manuscript at a time. After all, I can only submit one
at a time. Right? Two at the most. If both stories were contracted at the same
time, then there would be all those edits at the same time and then…

I truly believe the
editing phase of a WIP is where most writers give up. I don’t love editing and
I don’t love falling asleep in the midst of it. Self-editing is a necessary
process and one a writer should embrace with determination and persistence. As
a writer I want my finished product to be the best it can be, but I can’t do
what I need to do effectively if I’m half-asleep. So…If I start dozing,
somebody wake me up and pour me a cup of coffee.

5 comments:

Good post, Denise! I have a hard time editing no matter what time of day it is :-) I agree with the fact that you will ALWAYS find something to fix with each pass. It's hard, but at some point you have to stop and let the editor do her job...and then we writers will still see things that could be worded better, less telly, etc. Good luck!

Lol, we all go through that phase when editing is no longer fun. Why, of course, writing first drafts and playing with new ideas is exciting. Putting away the first draft and fixing it can also be a lot of fun. But, yes, when it comes to the last few rounds, especially when you have to approve the final version from your publisher, it becomes tiresome, and worrying too. What if something's been missed, overlooked? What if readers don't like?Good luck with it, enjoy the coffee.

Editing , edit, edited, editor, it just means redo-ing to me :) every time I tell myself I am just looking for specific's no changing story lines etc.. i screw it up and have to edit/redo something it is exhausting so I too fall asleep whatever time of day or night. I love the dog doo-doo comment above :}Glad to know now I am not alone on the now know thing! Happy Nap!

Self editing! wow, I am impressed. I can't spell to save my life and I totally disrespect the comma. I hired someone to edit my manuscript (72K) and I am making her changes now and rewriting. It isn't putting me to sleep but it is so less rewarding than the actual writing because it is so much slower...

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Some stuff about me...

Denise wrote her
first story when she was in high school—seventeen hand-written pages on
school-ruled paper and an obvious rip-off of the last romance novel she read.
She earned a degree in accounting, giving her some nice skills to earn a little
money, but her passion has always been writing. She has written numerous short
stories and more than a few full-length novels. Her favorite pastimes when
she’s not writing are spending time with her family, traveling, reading, and
scrapbooking. She lives in Louisiana with the most wonderful husband and the two best children in the whole wide world.