An excellent piece. I like the use of short sentences and the continual use of first person pronouns. I also like the order in which he thinks about "Caroline. My son. And Gina.". A powerful piece and a fine addition to the MV section of . Well done.

Litany Riddle chapter 1 . 10/28/2009

Voilà la review ! J'espère que ça marchera...

The Sheriff chapter 1 . 10/27/2009

Wonderful! look forward as usual to reading more as again w/ detail it is as if I am you. Regards The Sheriff.