This is the first, and only story I've read by you, so far. Your writing style delights me as much as the premise of this fic, which is very much. The clean grammar is also aesthetically pleasing, so your betas do not require stoning.

Looks like this will be the first story I read where ANBU, clan heads, and the Hokage, are proactive, competent, and have souls. Dare I hope that some of them are good with children? The display all of those traits at the same time is shocking.

Great story so far and interesting! Although an unkillable Naruto would be a bit much as he needs to develop get stronger and such plus in the Shinobi world most kill by beheading... But its still a interesting idea too contemplate...-Grey

This story really caught my eye. There is a load of potential for this story. You could have it going so many ways that I can't wait to see what happens next. Here are some suggestions if you need any.

1. Han (5 tailed Jinchuuriki) was Gen'en old student and after hearing what happen to his master and his master's clan leaves Iwa

could go to Konoha or if you want have him go to Kiri(since he is a Jinchuuriki, he probably would not like the whole bloodline civil war thing)

3. Could lead to a future alliance between Kiri and Konoha

I know that this idea is a little far out but after I got done with the two chapter so far, I often find myself trying to thing how I would write the story and that is where my mind took me.

Any way good luck and hope to see an update on this story and the Laughing Fox soon.