It's slow, feels like a slow motion animation, espetially as the board flips in the air. Also, I noticed his right foot slides a bit after he lands and pushes off the ground with his left foot. The poses are nice, but I'd suggest exaggerating the push in the end.

GuzzaBee

08-21-2006, 09:54 AM

Just to add to Antons comments I'd say try and look at the balance in the poses too, the last push is off balance - the weight needs to be over the right foot. It may help to hide the upper torso and concentrate on the legs & hips, the jump at the start could benefit from being higher, he has the right force with his upper body but his hips don't go high enough. I'd repeat Antons comments with the speed - avoid seperating/offsetting the keys at this stage - it will help to alter the timing if this is cleaner

Max100

08-21-2006, 01:36 PM

It's slow, feels like a slow motion animation, espetially as the board flips in the air. Also, I noticed his right foot slides a bit after he lands and pushes off the ground with his left foot. The poses are nice, but I'd suggest exaggerating the push in the end.

i with u opinion but for first animation that's nice try

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