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Pie's Determinayshon

Here is the place where I show you guys what I've been doing for everyday. I thought it will be fun to recieve your critiques from here. And I would like to show my process so far right from the day I said I will be on hiatus (of manga). If you guys like and support it I will post my daily training like this.Day1

Day2

Day3

Day4

Day5 special self assignment: kimono with a newly created model.

chibigunsouNewbie

Posts : 84Join date : 2013-01-16Age : 22Location : from space

Subject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon Sat Jan 07, 2017 12:19 pm

http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=10216435 yes pie has a pixiv. Play with pei.

Bob za rokkuDay 6: nothing special, i picked random reference then tried to percieve the colour and slapped them in. I did with only colour capturing, no scaling or sort of. I also do time limit while doing it the most precise as possible. Really fun with this kind of exercise.

reference:

MaelstromHis smile and optimism : gone.

Posts : 4840Join date : 2014-10-14Age : 25Location : Brazil

Subject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon Sun Jan 08, 2017 11:59 am

I should learn how to draw BGs too...

chibigunsouNewbie

Posts : 84Join date : 2013-01-16Age : 22Location : from space

Subject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon Sun Jan 08, 2017 12:05 pm

I suggest you learn the very basic principles of design. In that the composition is really really important.

I suggest you learn the very basic principles of design. In that the composition is really really important.

and what are these principles?

chibigunsouNewbie

Posts : 84Join date : 2013-01-16Age : 22Location : from space

Subject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon Sun Jan 08, 2017 12:17 pm

It is another term for composition basics, consist of :scale and propotion, repetition, emphasis, balance, movement, and unity.A good drawing isnt just about drawing technique if the drawing...has no intention of the artist atleast. Or just too confusing to see. Though the best option is to mix in between the technique and composition.There still anatomy and perspective. Trust me it is a pain in the ass subject, the only way is to study it properly from reliable tutorial books.

KuzuhaMaster Poster

Posts : 2426Join date : 2011-10-03Location : Philippines

Subject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon Sun Jan 08, 2017 2:09 pm

I still suck at drawing backgrounds.

chibigunsouNewbie

Posts : 84Join date : 2013-01-16Age : 22Location : from space

Subject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon Mon Jan 09, 2017 11:37 am

Day 7: in this I will also demostrate the way how artists communicate to each other, the critique Hamburger_good _bad_goodThe one below has good composition, as you can see there is a flow of balance so it wont feel odd in some way. But as I tried to make the bunny further than the cactus by manipulating the colour, i also made a big fukt up move by make the rocks relatively close to the bunny- confusing . However, you can still feel the sense of movement (yes nothing is moving) towards the cactus which is what i wanted you guys to focus to.

Liking or hating a drawing is not a good constructive critique if you want to be better everytime. But it will feel like a direct insult if the opinion is too harsh. So, what the drawing has achieved + what it hasnt and need recommendation + what the drawing has achieved. Of couse you can do it to yourself by take a look back what you did to your drawing.

EDIT: refined with more heat. you guys can try the critique hamburger on this one! Critiques are welcome (say you liek it is also welcome lol)

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Day 9Small fun perspective exercise. All i had to do was drawing the wobby rectangles in logical way! If anyone wants to do this exercise download the JPG from this link https://static1.squarespace.com/static/50a3c190e4b0d12fc9231429/t/511960a5e4b06e250bbf72bf/1360617637329/ctrlPaint_ws_perspective101.jpg

KuzuhaMaster Poster

Posts : 2426Join date : 2011-10-03Location : Philippines

Subject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon Wed Jan 11, 2017 3:33 pm

I think I better try those perspective stuff. Also, some mangakas hire assistants who are mostly in the technical courses and such.

chibigunsouNewbie

Posts : 84Join date : 2013-01-16Age : 22Location : from space

Subject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon Thu Jan 12, 2017 12:08 pm

Day 10:

GuestGuest

Subject: Re: Pie's Determinayshon Thu Jan 12, 2017 4:36 pm

Awesome pics. Great size. Look thick. Solid. Tight. Keep us all posted on your continued progress with any new progress pics or vid clips. Show us what you got man. Wanna see how freakin' huge, solid, thick and tight you can get. Thanks for the motivation.