Hey, your writing and everything was really good. But you story was so sad for so long, it drove me nuts, only a half a chapter of them being happy, i started reading last night and couldn't sleep because of it. But I also couldn't stop reading it so i guess you did your job. It was very compeling but was so so sad, until right at the end.

Author's Response: Yeah...I've just been realizing lately that stories are more enjoyable (though maybe still sad) if the characters reconcile before the very end of the story...so if I ever have some real time I might restructure this story..though I do like the ending it has now. But thanks for your honesty and even more so for reading it, it means a lot :)

This story was... interesting. You have some errors, including continuity. In a couple of the chapters, one being where she has her first date with Zach, you throw in a completely different name. I believe you called Darden Jenni. In the chapter with the break up, Zach is called David. Maybe these were done on purpose, but to me, they made no sense. One last tip: The phase is seeing as, not seen as. Sorry if this isn't a favorite review, I'm just offering helpful hints for future writings.

Author's Response: Ah! I changed Jenni's name to Darden when I edited the story...my fault, and I appreciate you letting me know. Thank you.

aaarrggh! what happened to the gorgeous old banner???!!!
not to say that this one isn't gorgeous either... i just got accustomed to seeing the old one cuz the amount of times i go to read this story is tremendous...

Author's Response: Ah! Well first I have to say thanks because the fact that you've read this story more than once is amazing and makes me feel great! haha. And second...I'd had the old one for a while and the person who made it offered to make me a new one, and I think I like this one a bit better. But yes, they are both gorgeous.

I loved this story, you brought me near tears at some of the sadder times and I could not finish it until Hermione and Ron were officially together and happy. Perfect Ending. The flashbacks were also a nice touch.

"Yes I ran outside of my own residence, I have no idea what was going through my head." love it love it love it! this was a REALLY good ending. i loved it. a lot. loved it loved it. ;). youre a really talented writer and i really enjoyed this. LOVED IT!
~windy
p.s. 10/10, AGAIN.

Author's Response: Wow thank you soooo much for ALL of these reviews. They were all so nice and it was incredibly cool of you to review every chapter!