I really love this story! The pace is good, the characterisation is great too :) I know its been more than a while since you updated but even if you don't continue (i really wish you would) I've enjoyed reading its lovely :)

I liked this and points for referencing Death Cab for Cutie (they're amazing live) and I'm likely reaching but is J.D. named after JD Salinger or the character from Scrubs? (I rarely if ever watch that show, but I like the theme song so I don't know if that's his actual name) but it was cute and I think you capture her desire to escape and how she's really in her head. Its good that she's trying to hold onto something (Cameron) and seems hopeful, I just have a feeling she's going to crash and depression is going to settle in.

the pan within chapter 1 . 3/22/2009

I really loved the update and I must admit that my first thought was that Thirteen was calling Cameron to cancel their date. It would have been very Thirteen-like considering her health situation but I'm glad she didn't.

Very nice, love that you are continuing this series. It is well written, of course I would love longer chpts, but then I always do. I think you have captured Thirteen and Cameron's voices very well, and House extremely well,

“Can I be your adopted Asian Baby’s godfather?” LOL, I can so see House actually saying that on the show.

For a moment I thought Thirteen was calling Cameron to cancel, but was glad she didn't ... looking fwd to the next chpt. Cheers!