NUS Business school

Introduction

The full-time MBA programat the National University of Singaporeis a relatively new and small experience that was founded in 1985. As you would expect, the vast majority of MBA students here are from outside Singapore. In the class entered in 2012, 91% of the students are deemed “international.” The diversity of nationalities in the class, from just 20 different countries, is much less than most top business schools in the U.S. And when students become graduates, they inevitably stay close to home: six of every ten graduates in the Class of 2012 landed jobs in Singapore.

The primary focus of the 17-month-long MBA program is predictably on Asian business, though students can spend a semester on exchange at one of 42 partner universities, including New York University’s Stern School of Business and Northwestern University’s Kellogg School of Management in the U.S., Fudan University in China, and IE Business School in Spain.

The school aims to be the leading business school in Asia, globally recognized for excellence in education and research. Its stated mission is to “advance knowledge and develop leaders so as to serve business and society.”

NUS Winning Sample Essays - 2

Please answer ONE of the following short essay prompts. (300 words – max 3500 characters) *

I am passionate about…

My greatest challenge has been…

My biggest failure was…

I am passionate about fostering positive social change and advocating for individuals who may need a voice within our society. With the belief that child development and women empowerment are key stratagems for overall societal development, I got connected to the two causes through community service. Over the past eight years, I have been actively engaged in imparting education to underprivileged women at Baliga Trust and raising funds to build a school. I have also been instrumental in providing marginalised children a platform develop new skills through workshops organised on NGO Days.

One of the most enriching experiences of this journey was my work in non-profit Goonj’s ‘Not Just a Piece of Cloth’ initiative. With a desire to make a significant contribution to community development, I undertook a sabbatical in late 2016 to work on the issue of menstruation. I, along with three other volunteers, visited a small village in Central India to work on demystifying menstruation taboos. With support of two self-help groups, our team conducted around 12 participatory communication meet-ups – ‘Chuppi Todo Baithaks (Break the Silence gatherings)’. We conducted workshops to break menstruation-related myths, explain the need for menstrual hygiene and educate women on making inexpensive, reusable cloth pads called ‘MY PADs’. Seeing women gradually participate and open up about menstruation challenges in group settings was a testament of a change in progress. Though we helped teach around 40 women to accept and adopt hygienic measures during menses, this initiative started a movement that today has spread to 10+ nearby villages.

Through these experiences, I have not only become more empathetic, but also grown as a person and developed an acute sense of thankfulness for everything I am blessed with. Now, I look forward to continue my passion for the cause and contribute in NUS’ Social Impact Club.

Briefly describe your immediate post-MBA career goal including your industry, function and country of choice and how have your prior experiences motivated and prepared you to pursue these goals? (300 words – 3500 characters)*

Post-MBA, I want to move up the value-chain in the finance sector and work as a Senior Consultant/Executive in a top-tier financial advisory firm/division in Singapore, with the likes of EY, KPMG, and Barclays. Long term, I aspire to grow up the ladder to a Partner/Director at a prestigious financial advisory company in the Asia-Pacific region.

In the last 4.5 years in financial advisory roles, I have worked with PE funds, financial services firms and Fortune 500 companies to craft and recommend financial and strategic solutions. This exposure has provided me insights on several industries and helped develop an understanding of global business through interactions with CXOs from over six countries. This experience, coupled with CFA knowledge, has sharpened my technical expertise, analytical skills and problem-solving ability.

However, at this point, I feel the need to enhance my management and leadership skills to move up the hierarchy. I believe that an NUS MBA will help bridge these gaps in required skill-sets. Through conversations with students and alumni, I understand that courses like ‘Management Communication’ can help me hone my management soft skills and a diverse class with 93 percent international students will enable me to indulge in personalised learning to gain a multicultural leadership experience.

Further, NUS’ brand value in Singapore, the financial hub of Asia, can open doors to pertinent opportunities in the country’s financial market, providing the perfect launch-pad for an international career in one of the Asia’s leading financial advisory market. Therefore, I believe that NUS’ sheer diversity, strong alumni network and location advantage, coupled with my CFA charter and relevant advisory experience, will provide commensurate impetus towards my overarching ambitions, marrying/blending my existing skill-sets with my future goals.

If there is anything else you would like to share with the Admissions Committee that was not covered in your application, please include here. (300 words – 3500 characters) *

I want to highlight three additional aspects of my candidature:

First, my ever-expanding interest for adventure sports. I got introduced to adventure travel at the age of ten during a summer camp in the Himalayas. Since then I have regularly engaged in adventure sports related activities. Adventure sports, apart from acting as a stress-buster, have helped immerse in experiential learning and tackle challenges fearlessly. Trekking and kayaking have taught me the importance of teamwork and collaboration in difficult situations, while rock climbing and scuba diving have aided in enhancing my on-the-feet decision making ability. I would like to share and enjoy more of such experiences with like-minded peers and continue my interest through NUS Students’ Sports Club (NUSSSC).

Second, in KPMG, I have worked with colleagues and clients from varied cultures across four continents—North America, Europe, Asia and Australia. Having learnt to adjust my working-style per the audience’s requirement, I have developed mental agility and confidence to operate in a multicultural setting. I have also become more aware of cultural nuances through my exposure to studies that required the understanding of local consumption-patterns by studying different cultures. I believe that these experiences will equip me to appreciate and understand the perspectives of my diverse peer-set, enabling me to thrive in the multicultural environment at NUS.

Third, I would like to make some unique contribution to the school and my peers’ learning by leveraging my professional network and experience. I would leverage my CFA membership and professional network (including KPMG and Goonj NGO) to get industry veterans for speaker sessions and bring companies on board to participate in the ‘Management Practicum’ projects.

Overall, I believe that my diverse interests in sports, social work and valuable industry network will enable me to add value to the NUS community.

Client Testimonial

I worked with Ameer for my ISB application and interview preparation. His clarity of thought and logical approach was something missing from my application. He helped me re-work and re-think my essays with an entirely new outlook, which enabled me to come up with the right strategy and pitch. This not only helped me with my ISB application but also helped me with my international application as well. One of the best thing working with him was the amount of time he spent with me on my application, answering all my queries at any time. His mock interviews gave me a full flavour of what a B school interview is like and highlighted my shortcomings, which with his feedback I was able to turn around within a couple of days and finally get the coveted ISB to admit.

Coming from a PSU background and having a moderate GMAT score seemed a bit challenging in the pre-application period. So I needed a trained eye and a mentor in the application process to guide me through the so called “chakravyuha”. One of my friends suggested to approach Ameer and I instantly followed. it was one of the best decisions I took in my life. He not only guided me through the process but also helped me realise my potentials, brought out the positives in my experience and aided me to throw away those PSU insecurities. I applied for two top 40 US B-Schools and two top 5 Canadian B-Schools and got into 3 of them. His straight forward approach and instant feedback would make you realise that you are heading in the right direction. His mock interview sessions were great and I strongly recommend taking them. Thanks Ameer for the great support and I am indebted to you my whole life.

I walked into the application process with an average GMAT score, a strong resume, and years of professional writing experience, but I quickly found that it takes a trained eye and unique skill set to turn those credentials into the perfect business school application. Though Ameer and I initially disagreed on a few points, he remained patient and understanding until I was fully comfortable with the content in my application while also remaining sensitive to the best way to tell my story to win the heart of the admissions board. As I was keen on pursuing a part time in-class MBA program, I had my heart set out on Boston University and that was the first college I applied to. Within a month of my application I was admitted with a partial scholarship and I couldn’t be happier. This school is the perfect fit for my career goals and I could not be more grateful to Ameer for helping me get into the school of my choice. Thank you once again.

Coming from India with a 620 in GMAT, I was not sure of applying to any of my dream colleges, but I was also not very keen to sit for another year to improve my GMAT score. I got in touch with Ameer, and he asked me to focus on my strength which was 7 years of Leadership experience in a Public Sector Organisation. I trusted his guidance throughout my application process and interview. His serious effort in the reiteration of my essays and the mock interviews was beneficial in securing an admit to Schulich School of Business, Canada.

Hu Shunfeng

HEC Paris

“Ameer helped me prepare the interview of HEC Paris, including a 10-min presentation and the question-answer session. I got much valuable advice and made great progress through 2 mock interviews, especially for the presentation, where he suggested me to adjust the structure of the content in order to better match the school’s requirements. Moreover, Ameer inspired me a lot when practicing some cross questions, which made me think further about my strengths and weaknesses. He did me a big favor not only for the interview but also for my future learning experience at HEC”.

“I got in touch with Ameer through Facebook group. I was just starting to think about applying but I was not clear in which school I would fit in and what I want to do after MBA with my 10 years of Entrepreneurial experience. Working with Ameer was a wonderful and fruitful experience. Ameer really guided with school selection and career goals I might be able to pursue. He put in serious efforts in my application, and made sure that I get the admit.”

Dharam Nain Singh

740, Deloitte, USC Marshall School of Business

“Applications are mostly about selling yourself in the best way possible. Ameer helped me in making a list of all the important events in my life, and used them to highlight what skills I have.I think I might not have been able to make the application so precise and to the point without Ameer’s help. I don’t think I would have been able to make so convincing applications without his help.”

NUS Winning Sample Essays - 1

1) Please answer ONE of the following short essay prompts. (300 words) *

I am passionate about…

My greatest challenge has been…

My biggest failure was ….

My biggest failure was when I let down my students in Pratigya (a student initiative dedicated to imparting education to underprivileged children) where I used to teach and lead the volunteers’ team.

My mother, a teacher, has always inspired me to impart the gift of education to underprivileged children. During my undergraduate, I joined Pratigya but was disheartened to see extremely irregular attendance and poor grades in all classes. I gathered a team of 15 volunteers and led multiple efforts to spread awareness among the children’s families regarding the importance of education. We also worked on children’s self-motivation to learn, through experiential learning programs. Attendance rose to 50 and grades improved gradually. Our initiatives were changing lives and as its convener, I was deeply gratified.

However, I had to leave Pratigya family after my graduation, passing the baton to my juniors. After 6 months, I found out that students had again stopped coming to class because the new team was not as enthusiastically engaged with the children as the previous team.

Sheryl Sandberg has said, “Leadership is about making others better as a result of your presence and making sure that impact lasts in your absence.” Deep-down, I felt, it was partly my responsibility and failure as a leader. It was a great learning moment, and I realized that while focusing on Pratigya’s outward impact, I should have also focused internally to create a self-sustaining chain of volunteers who could carry forward the good work.

Now, I always endeavour to mentor my subordinates such that they can always step up as leaders when required. Investing in others’ development has added to my own growth as an improvement-driven and compassionate leader. I aspire to employ all these learnings and someday establish a school to support underprivileged children.

Briefly describe your immediate post-MBA career goal including your industry, function and country of choice and how have your prior experiences motivated and prepared you to pursue these goals? (300 words)

I have 4 years of professional experience as a consultant in Deloitte. Post MBA, I would like to make a transition into product management roles in technology firms such as Microsoft or Google in Singapore.

During my 4 years at Deloitte, I have acquired excellent client-handling capabilities, technical expertise and leadership skills to design and deliver technical aspects of product applications.In due course, I have also developed a keen interest in market research and customer insights that form an integral part of any new product development. However, I lack the business knowledge and operational skills needed to implement and achieve these business objectives.

Since last US presidential elections and Brexit, the Indian IT services industry has been navigating troubled waters. With focus shifting from labour and salary arbitrage to developing niche product offerings, the whole services market is seeing a surge in reskilling. I would like to use this opportunity to align my skills with the future needs of the IT sector.

After discussing with a current student ‘Anjan Raina’, I believe NUS’s curriculum (with elective courses such as technology innovation, big data and strategic information technology) has a strong focus on technology sector which can help me acquire the necessary business acumen to bridge the knowledge gap.

Singapore has a thriving ecosystem for technology start-ups and giants such as Microsoft, and Google. NUS’s brand value in Singapore can open the doors to perfect opportunities for me to make a transition towards my post MBA goal.

I believe, my prior experience as a technical consultant coupled with the business knowledge acquired in MBA, can facilitate my successful transition to a product manager’s role in the short-term.In the long-term, I would like to return to India and contribute in developing my country with learnings from my experiences in Singapore.

If there is anything else you would like to share with the Admissions Committee that was not covered in your application, please include here. (300 words)

I would like to use this space and opportunity to highlight my deep-rooted interest and love for writing poems and scripts.

I wrote my first poem on a beautiful flower at the age of 10. My teachers really liked it and published it in the school magazine. It was eventually published in a national daily. My mother always encouraged me to pursue my hobby of poetry and story writing. As I grew up, writing became an integral part of my life because it liberated my thoughts and gave a constructive vent to my feelings, sentiments and observations.My work got published in reputed magazines and national dailies. I wrote for school and college magazines as chief editor, and won several awards for my work.

My natural talent for writing attracted many accolades and led to my association with the college dramatics clubs when they approached me to write a short play-script. I realized that my words had life and they could be enjoyed by a much larger audience. I explored my natural talent to the fullest extent in my undergraduate years by writing scripts for multiple short-plays and movies performed at college fests.

As time passed, career aspirations took the front seat in life. Still, I have tried to keep my passion alive and managed to get my book “Light in the Creek” published by a reputed publication in India. Getting it published was a rather spiritual journey and one of my life’s most satisfying achievements. I aspire to keep this flame burning by writing more and touching more lives. I try to use my writing to spread awareness on matters close to my heart such as child abuse and poor primary education in developing economies. Books shaped my life and I wish to do the same for others.