its cool n all.but i think it should have been longer n should have gotten to a part where draco does try to kill ron n hermione n someone comes n saves them.or even better ron would save hermione from draco n hermione would save ron from draco.thats cool lovers that fight for each other,lovers that defend each other,lovers that stand by each other,lovers that surpport each other n lovers that trust in each other n care for each other.