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xxstaindrosesxx says:Oh dang. I've never actually read an Astoria/Draco fic before! I have to say, I really enjoyed this.

First of all, I like your concept on Astoria with her being a very strong woman. I picture Draco needing a strong woman after everything he has been through at Hogwarts and after the war. I think that's part of the reason people like Dramione so much, besides the whole bad guy good girl theme. I just really liked your take on her, that she would turn heads because I doubt Draco would ever go for anyone who didn't meet high standards.

Second, your writing was very detailed, and I think you did a good job of summing up some of the reasons why Astoria would want to break up with Draco. The way he was kind of controlling. The way he didn't like her smoking cigarettes and was jealous of guys she talked to, even if she did kind of do that all on her own. He was suffocating her. Then you added the twist near the end about him loving her sister first, how he would always love Daphne and never be capable of loving Astoria the way he loved Daphne. I thought that was a very neat twist to the story.

Overall, this is a very good one-shot, and good luck in the challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I am so happy you liked it, I'm rather fond of this one myself :)!

Yes, poor Astoria couldn't survive knowing he would always love Daphne more. She couldn't even hate him for it, because she misses and loved her sister just as much.

Astoria wanted to make sure and push every button on Draco before she delivered that final reasoning, it's so much easier to get into a fight and end things that way then by all the painful emotions coming out.

Okay, I'm rambling, thank you so much :)! I'm so happy you liked it!!! :)!!