"Love can be a delicate thing, If opened it can be forsaken, If closed it can be forgotten, If nurtured it can awaken, If forgotten it can corrupt, If sought it can confuse, If inhibited it can obstruct" ~Cherry Blossom

Glad you caught some quirks. The female character seemed a little off to me too. I think the eyes were raised up too much this may be the reason the face is proportioned wrong. I had trouble with the flow of the hair; I'm guessing it's the bangs?

Glad you caught some quirks. The female character seemed a little off to me too. I think the eyes were raised up too much this may be the reason the face is proportioned wrong. I had trouble with the flow of the hair; I'm guessing it's the bangs?

No prob!

hmmm... it could be the bangs. They make the top of her head look flat.

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I Timothy 4:16 says, "Watch your life and doctrine closely. Persevere in them, because if you do, you will save both yourself and your hearers."

"Love can be a delicate thing, If opened it can be forsaken, If closed it can be forgotten, If nurtured it can awaken, If forgotten it can corrupt, If sought it can confuse, If inhibited it can obstruct" ~Cherry Blossom

@Comet Thanks. Looking at that fist again; the two back fingers weren't supposed to be seen at that angle. And the thumb was shaped wrong.

I had to revisit some art tips and it's helping me. First is using a light color other than black when sketching. Second is to not worry about completing the lines of the shape; when you have the semi-silhouette on paper, your mind will fill in the blanks.

"Love can be a delicate thing, If opened it can be forsaken, If closed it can be forgotten, If nurtured it can awaken, If forgotten it can corrupt, If sought it can confuse, If inhibited it can obstruct" ~Cherry Blossom

@Cherry When I was a wee little lad, my only options were sheets of paper, a mechanical pencil and a lot of refills. The practices with physical medium helped me to get where I'm now. You can transfer back and forth from physical to digital. It'll feel weird at first, but give it time and you'll adapt.