EDIT 5/21/07: I changed it so that you can have more than four moves for pokemon [trainers].
EDIT 5/21/07: I made a new rule: You can't be in this RP if you haven't been in at least ONE RP before.
EDIT 5/23/07: I (Arceus) am choosing which world your character will start off in, based on what world would go best with your character.
EDIT 5/25/07: You must provide a LINK to one of the RPs you've been in before.
EDIT 6/02/07: The legendaries are being split up between the worlds:

Plot: Palkia and Dialga are at war. Behind Arceus’ back, they rounded up the majority of legendaries from the pokemon world for their armies, and are now fighting. With their fighting, they’re tearing holes up in the space-time continuum, causing portals from the Pokemon Universe, to the Sonic Universe, to the Mario Universe opening up and causing havoc. And to make matters worse, unique radiation from the portals is distorting everything.

Now, some of you might not know this, but Arceus doesn’t control EVERYTHING. He’s only responsible for the pokemon universe, and that’s it. Arceus assembles a little “army” of his own to help fix this problem. He gets top trainers, normal people, and pokemon to go to the other two worlds and try to fix the problems. They are currently looking for ways to manipulate the time-space continuum themselves, to get into this new dimension and stop Dialga and Palkia. But they also have to fix the problems inside the universes, correcting the problems that have been caused by open portals and such.

So these groups have been split up and scattered throughout the three worlds. Throughout their adventures, they will acquire allies who are willing to help them on their quest (the people in the other universes know what’s going on, yet they don’t know the reason). The war is only just beginning however, and more and more rips will appear, and possibly, later in the RP, there will be more universes brought into this mess.

Now, back to the radiation from the portals. Besides the fact that legendary pokemon are getting very badly hurt/killed in the war in another dimension, this is the WORST problem that has been caused by this mess. People get distorted, changing ages, sizes, shape, and new creations are made altogether! Anthropomorphic shinxes are running at the speed of sound, goombas are evolving into bibarells using the power of the chaos drives, Chao are being trapped inside little red and white tennis balls, blastoises are taking female hedgehogs hostage and breathing fire, etc. This is BAD. But this won’t happen until a little later in the RP, so don’t get TOO excited.

Additional Rules:

GENERAL RULES:
-Basic rules
-At first, only pokemon trainers and pokemon
-If I sense Mary-Sueness or Powerplaying, you get a warning. If I sense it again, you get KICKED
-You can't take vehicles on your adventure, sorry. -If you want to play as a Sonic or Mario character, you have to send me a PM with your profile

RULES FOR THE MARIO UNIVERSE:
-You cannot play as a Mario character until I give you the okay
-If you want to play as a Mario character, you must send me a PM with your profile
-You cannot be any canon characters (Mario, Luigi, Toadsworth). You can however, be a member of a canon species/race (Random Koopa, Random Goomba, Random Piranha Plant, Random Pianta)
-Nobody has the power of the stars on-hand
-You don't have an endless supply of items on hand. In fact, you can only have two Mario items on hand, and they can't be invincible stars
-Fanmade E. Gadd inventions are a-okay. Canon ones are not. Have a good story behind how you got it, too. -My Mario memory isn't that great, so if you apply for something that isn't outlawed here, and I see it and ban it, suck it up.
-Major relationships with canon characters are NOT COOL (working in the palace for Peach or something isn't major)

RULES FOR THE SONIC UNIVERSE:
-You cannot play as a Sonic character until I give you the okay
-If you want to play as a Sonic character, you must send me a PM with your profile
-You cannot be any canon Characters (Sonic, Tails, Big). You can however, be an anthropomorphic animal. No anthropormhic pokemon or made up animals until really late in the RP, however. Click here to learn how to make a decent Sonic Fancharacter.
-Nobody can have a Chaos Emerald
- Character making rules:
1. All your skills have to even out. I know that Sonic characters are known for their athletic abilities, but don't put a crapload of uber abilities on your character
2. Nobody can be faster than Sonic/Shadow. They are the fastest in their world, suck it up. You can come close, but not by a whole lot.
3. Major relationships with canon characters are NOT COOL
4. You cannot be smarter than Eggman. He is the smartest, 'nuff said.
5. You cannot be an echidna. They are extinct, except for Knuckles. (But later in the RP, when more problems arouse because of the problems, echidnas will come back. :O )

Profiles are required to be in this format, because this is an RP for detailed characters. :p

Name: Steve
Profession: He's a pokemon! A pokemon of a trainer, however.

Appearance: (Pictures work, too) If he were human.
Species: Vibrava Age: 28
Gender: M
Body type: He's an average, adult vibrava.
Hair and eye colours: Do vibravas have hair? He has greyish-gold eyes, however.
Face type: See photo.
Other physical features: Has very aerodynamic wings, to make him a better flier. Frail and weak legs, can't walk very well. Average sized tail, rather short antennae, and his...rolls(?) are very tight.
Clothing style: Nekkid, silly. :p
Speech style: "Whoa-ho-ho! Repeat that, please?"

Personality:General demeanor: To put it simply, he's a very curious person, and everything else just sprouts from there. He has an evergrowing and thirst for knowledge. He always listens, and is slightly more aware than the average person because of this curiosity. He sometimes drifts off from his pack however, and loses track of what he's doing due to this thirst for knowledge. He loses himself and his pack constantly, but can't handle being away once he realizes he's gone. He's a good guy, but not extremely nice; I'm not trying to say he's mean, but he isn't known for his kindness. And although this curiosity has made him very knowledgable over the years, his thinking skills are strictly average.
How he/she sees himself: "Who am I, where am I, and how did I get here? And thank God I can fly, because my legs SUCK."
Best qualities: Curious, good listener.
Worst qualities: Needy of others, not very focused, narrow-minded.

Background:Parents: Both, they alternate being a part of the flock and going off on their own every few months.
Siblings: EVERYONE in the flock is his sibling/aunt/uncle. But biologically, one older sister (by five years).
Hometown and Universe: Orre Desert, Pokemon.
Childhood history: Would always pay attention in class, but otherwise, he'd always be trying to get together a group of friends to explore with him. He was always quiet, ready for someone else to talk so that he could learn. He only evolved two years ago, but nobody ever made fun of him for it, since they all knew battlign wasn't his favorite thing. He loves his pack, and when he tried to run away to the big city to learn more, he frantically flew back in fear. Always wanted to evolve not for power, but to know what his new anatomy would be like.
Recent history: He was caught by a skilled trainer named Andy. He looks forward to his experiences, but misses his flock with a fiery passion. He's eager to evolve to find out what it's like to be a flygon.
Plans for the future: To evolve, to learn, to live. Very simple.

Pokemon: (Use your brain, if your character is a pokemon or from another universe, you don't need this last section)
Pokemon 1: Pokemon Name (Nickname)
Item Holding:
Gender: M or F
Attacks:
Appearance: (Use only if Pokemon has any special features)
Personality:
Chemistry w/ Trainer:

Unfortunately, I don't know what my character will be yet ( D: ), so I'll be playing as Arceus and only Arceus until I can think of one.
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Arceus used its divine powers to call forth pokemon and people alike of his own universe into the world above, where he would meet with them and tell them their situation, and their duty. Before them, they each lay asleep and spread out. Soon, they would awake, and soon, all universes would be saved.

"These people, these pokemon...they are our last hope..." he said to himself.

((You guys can start waking up any time you wish :O ))

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Personality:
General demeanor: Kind and caring, but also a bit paranoid and reserved. She has problems meeting new people, and would rather do things herself than with others.
How he/she sees himself: Some kid.
Best qualities: Her loyalty.
Worst qualities: She jumps to conclusions a lot.

Background: Xalia had a rough few first years of life, with her parents both vanishing while on vacation. When she was 6 years old, she was informed that her parents had been killed by an aggressive Hippowdon while canoing in a lake that was labeled as extremely dangerous afterwards. She had been staying with her family's friends in the Pokemon Mansion while they were away, and continued to live there, miserably, for the next 4 years.

When Xalia turned 10, she was excited to be officially permitted to be a Pokemon trainer. She had started with a bad-tempered Chikorita, and found it hard to gain badges. Upon receiving an Eevee from a pawn shop owner in Celedon City, she raised it to the Chikorita's level then released the latter. Poor Xalia found the Eevee to be mentally unstable and overactive, and rather disobedient, wanting to show that it could do things itself. Though most of the time the Eevee was able to prove itself, it took over a year and a half to earn her first 8 badges.

It wasn't until Xalia arrived in Johto that she named her Eevee. She named it Demnoss, her made-up word for "crazy" she created a few years back, around the time she was 8. Demnoss was beginning to bond to her, but it still had the same low intelligence as before and was still constantly disobeying. It took about 6 months to defeat all 8 gym leaders there.

While In Johto, Xalia learned a lot about her surroundings and how to do things like swim, climb, fit into small places, dodge, and fish. She also learned how to read maps, guide small children and even adults (which she did when she and Demnoss had a long way to go to the next gym), and such. She became reigon-famous for a few months until she left for Hoenn.

Before leaving to go to the next reigon, Xalia explored a certain tower and met her best friend. She had found and captured Suicune, the legendary beast of the sea. But instead of using her new friend in so many competitions, she simply rode around on her and used her in battles only if Demnoss lost. Xalia and the Suicune had a special bond, which was why she had named the Suicune Ciikii, yet another made-up word, this time for "friend". Xalia, Ciikii and Demnoss defeated the Hoenn league with ease.

Unfortunately, after she was selected by Aruseusu, Xalia had to leave Ciikii and Demnoss at her new home in Twinleaf Town. Even though she no longer has her friends to help her, she is ready for anything.

Parents: Reported dead 2 years after they went missing.
Siblings: Only child
Hometown: Cinnabar Island
Childhood history: Stayed in the Pokemon Mansion for quite some time until it burned down. She was away at the time, and didn't return until a few years later to find her "orphanage" destroyed.
Recent history:
Plans for the future: None
Pokemon team: none at the moment, but she'll obtain some soon enough.

Skills: Survival, guidance
Physical skills/abilities: Flexible, and has much knowledge about the reigons from traveling
Intelligence: A bit higher than average

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Last edited by Valentine on Fri May 25, 2007 6:47 pm, edited 3 times in total.

1. You did not use my divine format
2. Your character is an outrageous Mary-Sue: WTF friendliness being a WORST quality?

And stuff that you didn't get kicked for, but has made me lose faith in your roleplaying abilities:

1. It doesn't look like you put very much thought into this
2. lolShiny
3. lolBeing SHUNNED because of being shiny
4. Your profile doesn't go into very much detail
5. What the hell does "Says odd things sometimes" mean?
6. Dark and outcast? lolemo, maybe? If you're going to be emo, you have to do it right, sorry.

Personality: General demeanour: Spence is both brave and very ignorant, but over all, he’s just a nice guy. Spence has a good sense of right and wrong, and fights only for justice
Best qualities: Friendly, talented, experienced, brave, strong, relaxed
Worst qualities: Gets himself into trouble, sometimes reacts without thinking, never quite relaxed, sometimes doubts himself

Background: Parents: His father
Siblings: None
Hometown and Universe: Motown, Pokemon
Childhood history: Spence has had a rough time throughout life, but to start, the Motown Incident, which seemed to had taken everything he loved, including his dad. But, with his newly-found pokemon by his side, he tried to carry on alongside a girl who called herself by Kikyo, ex-member of Team Magma, leader of Team Midnight at the time.

Oddly, Spence’s best friend Shiny got involved with Team Magma after the incident, but joined Spence in his quest after a heated battle. Shiny disappeared later after Spence and his pokemon were mind-controlled by Magma’s new weapon, forced to fight against Kikyo.

Snapping out of it, Spence and Kikyo then visited Team Magma’s base after learning of their plans from Shiny. There, they met a strange loner named Diseh, who was working undercover for an unknown community called Team Solaris. He was second in charge next to his wife-to-be. With the new support of the prisoner, all three of them destroyed the weapon and wiped Team Magma’s first headquarters off the map, awhile confronting the evil leader, and meeting up with the young monk character, Ki. The Magma Leader escaped as they rescued and said their goodbyes to many.

After these events, Spence needed some time to think, and ended up flying to the old ruins that was his home. Stumbling upon an underground spring, he encountered the pokemon that was used to wipe out his home into oblivion. The pokemon, Mewtwo, was controlled by the very same weapon Team Magma wielded and used against Spence and his friends before. Him and Mewtwo being almost alike, Spence welcomed Mewtwo onto his party and called up his friends to tackle the Team once again.

Kikyo being nowhere to be found, Spence was now officially leader of Team Midnight, and took this job very seriously.

Surprisingly, Spence met up with both Diseh and Ki to find out they were actually cooperating with a rival of Magma’s, Team Aqua, for they knew of the second Magma base. Disgusted with this, Spence and Diseh left Ki and Team Aqua to find themselves on a lovely beach. This is where they met a strange and interesting girl called Xaliaphous. Spence had some fun and some pokemon issues, but that was all sorted by a final battle between Spence and Diseh, where Spence forfeited.

Diseh parting the group, Spence and Xalia followed Ki with Team Aqua to destroy and finally put an end to Team Magma once and for all. Before they had worked out Aqua was actually using them for their own benefit, they had already drilled through the volcano into the Magma’s headquarters. There, they carefully placed the bombs inside and made a break for it. But, Spence foolishly decided to stay and make sure the Magma Leader was dead for sure this time, telling Ki and Xalia to leave him there and escape from the base without him.

After the explosion, Spence came in contact with a ghost, Shiny’s ghost, almost as if it was haunting him. Spence then knew Shiny was dead, but the cause was still unknown to him.

Spence later woke up at the ruins to take his father’s blade, venturing once again to obtain some answers to his long awaited questions.

Meeting back up with Xalia, Ki and Diseh in a pokemon tournament, they encountered a man who was set on stealing Xalia’s pokemon, he called himself by the name Chase, and he knew Spence. Spence knew him too because they were actually friends way back before the terrible incident happened in Motown. Chase, backing off, left the party for the time being, leaving the others time to themselves for the short while.

In that time, Spence found out that Ki and Xalia had actually developed feelings for each other when he was away, which made Spence quite jealous.

Leaving them alone, Spence stayed at Diseh’s place to find out more about the teams, and found out that Chase was really connected to Team Psyche all along, one of the richest and most powerful of the teams out there.

So, they both followed the hotspot, and left to take the next train to Sinnoh. But before that, Spence ran into Xalia and gave a teary final farewell to her.

Finally there, Spence and Diseh made it to a beach, where Chase appeared and gave Spence some sickly news. The news was that Spence and everyone who survived the Motown incident would die of what was described as an incurable disease. Mental breakdowns were only signs of this, and Spence had them quite recently.

Teaming up to defeat his own team, Chase followed Spence and Diseh to gather up Xalia and Ki for what looked like the final battle.

Everything from there is a blur.

Recent history: Spence rests in a coma. Mewtwo and all the other pokemon he had were stolen.
Plans for the future: Waking up.

Skills: Physical skills/abilities: Pretty quick on his feet, athletic, good at swinging his sword around, a quite good pokemon trainer.
Intelligence: Knows what’s going on, takes the best option always, not too good at school stuff because of the lack of it.
Qualities that made Arceus choose you: It’d be his spirit.

General demeanor: Goofball
How he sees himself: Goofball, but smart enough to make up for it
Best qualities: Intelligent, has had to be in a fatherly role lately (see below)
Worst qualities: Doesn’t know when to shut up
Qualities that made Arceus choose you: See Best Qualities

Parents: Hasn’t seen them in 3 years
Siblings: None
Hometown and Universe: Oldale Town
Childhood history: Lived a regular life <s>until the mafia attacked</s>
Recent history: Been a wanderer
Plans for the future: None at the moment

Quirks: Goofy
Favorite food: Pizza
Favorite pokemon: All the Pokemon on his team
Favorite place: None
Favorite music: None
Pet peeve(s): People who ask too many stupid questions, and people who say that there are no stupid questions
Least favorite season: Spring
Worst memory: Almost failing a Math Final in 9th grade

Pokemon: (Use your brain, if your character is a pokemon or from another universe, you don't need this last section)  ORLY?!?
Pokemon 1: Dodrio (Dorio)
Item Holding: Leftovers
Gender: Male
Attacks: Drill Peck, Tri-Attack, Agility, Pursuit.
Appearance: Its left leg is shorter than its right one.
Personality: The Left head is always cheerful, the Right head is always ticked off at something, and the Center head is always upset
Chemistry w/ Trainer: Depends on the head

Pokemon 3: Spheal (Squee)
Item Holding: Too excited to keep a grip on something for more than 5 seconds
Gender: Male
Attacks: Rollout, Ice Ball, Defense Curl, Hail
Appearance: Its cry sounds more like “Squeal”, rather than “Spheal”, thus the nickname
Personality: Cheerful almost to a fault, favorite hobbies are noisily waking everyone up in the morning and rolling down hills, squealing. It can be a bit of a baby though.
Chemistry w/ Trainer: The first Pokemon Jeff met, Squee breaks down crying if Jeff goes too far away for an extended period of time

Pokemon 4: Octillery (Tilly)
Item Holding: Sitrus Berry
Gender: Female
Attacks: Surf, Octazooka, Calm Mind, Flamethrower
Appearance: One of the tentacles got cut half off in a fight with a Scyther
Personality: Reclusive, prefers to be alone rather than spend time with the rest of the group.
Chemistry w/ Trainer: They don’t really know each other well

Pokemon 5: Vileplume (Pluma)
Item Holding: Black Sludge
Gender: Female
Attacks: Aromatherapy, Sludge Bomb, Sunny Day, Solarbeam
Appearance: Has the flower color of a shiny, but all other markings are the same
Personality: Was sort of wild as an Oddish and Gloom, has had to take a motherly role when Bono hatched
Chemistry w/ Trainer: They can almost always tell what the other is thinking

Having enough of the weirdness of the place, Spence turned to run away from the others. It was like running at the spot, but as Spence looked back, the figures seemed to be becoming smaller and smaller.

A good distance away, Spence screamed as hard as he could into the nothingness, "HELLO! IS ANYBODY OUT THERE!!!" he waited to only hear his echo answer back.

Spence huffed as he squatted down, "Geez...where the hell am I...and, how did I even get here...?" he asked himself, becoming confused and annoyed.

The only thing he could remember was Xalia at the train station, rejecting him to join their cause, and then they teleported back to Sinnoh with the help of Chase's Alakazam. But later on, they were captured by Team Psyche, and were taken to their cells. One by one, they were taken from the cells, and never seen again. First there was Chase, and then Diseh was taken soon after that. Spence couldn't remember anything else.

Spence fell to sit and think. He wondered how Xalia and Ki were doing, and then he just wondered about this place, wondering if Psyche was connected to any of this. But in his heart, he knew something about this was greater than anything he could've dreamed of.

Spence took the remaining pokeballs from his bag to notice straight away, "Aw no...Mewtwo and the others are gone... Probably stolen..." he sighed sadly, "Well, at least I still have you guys..." he smiled a little.

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Tue May 22, 2007 10:25 pm

EvilPenguin

Gym Leader

Joined: Wed Aug 09, 2006 9:46 amPosts: 1552

((Pelli told me on the chats that I was accepted, so yeah))

Jeff groaned as he sat up. He had a massive headache. Shaking his head, he released each of his pokemon from thier balls.

"Dorio, Gonzie, Pluma, Bono, Tilly, Squee, good. You're all here. No one's hurt?" The pokemon shook their heads. "Good. I think you lot should stay in your balls for now, until I figure out where we are. Dorio, I'd like you to take a quick run around this place, see what you find." Two of the heads nodded, while one started crying. It gave in after a couple of pecks from the oher heads, and the bird sprinted away.

Jeff started looking around as well. He saw a bunc of bodies around him, not only trainers, but pokemon as well. He couldn't tell whether they were dead, or just asleep

Just then, Dorio came running into view. "Is there someone here?" asked Jff. Dorio nodded. It pointed a foot inthe direction it had just come from. "Thanks, Dorio, I dont know what I would do without you," Jeff said. He set off to wher Dorio had shown

Spence remained motionless. This Jeff character didn't look too threatening, so Spence could take him, but decided on not to.

"Jeff, huh? Cool name," he replied, loosening up, "Well, I'm Spence: never been much of a sleeper. As for where we are: no idea."

Spence took one last look around, but still, nothing changed. It could've turned a guy crazy, but Spence had been in even worse situations before.

"So..." Spence turned back to Jeff, "You're a Pokemon Trainer?"

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Thu May 24, 2007 4:25 pm

EvilPenguin

Gym Leader

Joined: Wed Aug 09, 2006 9:46 amPosts: 1552

Jeff looked around as well. All he could see was white. Nothing else. It was almost like he was floating in whipped cream.

He nodded to Spence. "Yeah, I got a few pokemon." He released Pluma, Tilly, and Gonzie. "These four, Ive known for ages; since they were a Doduo, an Oddish, a Remoraid, and a Porygon." Jeff nodded again. "What pokemon do you have?" he asked.

Spence smirked as he saw Jeff's pokemon, he liked the Vileplume the best.

"Oh, me? I don't have many pokemon, well, not anymore..." he trailed off, pulling out his three pokeballs, "I've got three: a Scizor, a Snorlax, and a Dragonite. All three have helped me out over the years more than anybody could imagine."

Personality:
A calm non-risktaker.
How he/she sees himself:A kind-hearted pokemon.
Best qualities:Smart and always full of ideas.
Worst qualities:Thinks the world is completly fair.

Background:
Parents:A Sceptile and an Altaria.
Siblings:None.
Hometown and Universe:Littleroot Town,Hoenn.
Childhood history:Got into trouble from that 5-year-old curiosity when he got stung by 1 Combee 1 Vespiqueen and 1 Beedrill
Recent history:He was born and Arceus chose him.
Plans for the future: To evolve, to learn, to live and to prove himself.

Skills:
Physical skills/abilities: Can use the moves: Dragonbreath, Pursuit,absorb,Mega Drain.
Intelligence:Smart
Quality/ies that made Arceus choose you:He chose me because he needs someone who can easily make the world worth living when all seems to be lost.

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Fri May 25, 2007 12:30 pm

pelligargetic

Gym Leader

Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2005 6:16 pmPosts: 1012

((Treeckomaster, can I have a link to one of your past RPs please?

And furthermore, here are the problems with your application:

1. Just because your character doesn't know why he was chosen, YOU still need to know
2. "lolololololol I suck" is a very MarySuish attitude. Especially when you have no reason to feel that way. Change his personality to a sucktastic one, or change his opinions on himself.
3. This isn't a reason for why it's beign declined, but how old is he exactly in human years?
4. If you stutter the WHOLE RP, it'd get annoying. If you didn't, that go against your profile, which is bad.
5. Average in every way? Then why should Arceus have picked him?
6. lol"Destroys those who aren't [believing in him]" what kind of 5 year old does that? Five-year-olds are happy-go-lucky. :/
7. "Loyal to those who believe in him." Aren't most people?
8. He still has a childhood history, seeing as he's been alive for 5 years. Because he's a child, that just means his story is still being written, not that it hasn't been started. He has been BORN, y'know.
9. How exactly did his parents die?
10. Dead parents are a sign of MarySueness, too
11. He has OTHER physical abilities besides just his moves. And aren't they a bit strong besides
12. You can think of SOMETHING for favorite music. Even if your treecko hasn't, you have. What IF your treecko knew what it was?

Xalia yawned, as she was woken up by a sudden, sharp gust of wind. She rose from her lying position, and stretched a little. She had figured wherever she had fallen asleep in was all locked up, letting in no light, which was why it was pitch black. She felt some kind of pressure on her eyes, and rubbed them.

She realized they were closed shut.

Bewildered, Xalia tried to open them.

No luck.

Now, frightened, the short girl sauntered to the left, hoping she wouldn't bump into or trip on anything. She quickly discovered the whole room was empty, and decided to walk to what something inside her said was the exit.

But the room was actually full of people, all crammed in the middle of the room. Why hadn't she noticed?

Not thinking clearly, Xalia turned what she was told was a doorknob and pushed herself against the door, going outside.

But it was still colorless.

Xalia started to sweat in anxiety, and she breathed heavily and somewhat coldly. She started off in a trot, but by the time she stopped she was practically sprinting.

She had stopped because she had ran into something.

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Sat May 26, 2007 4:22 pm

EvilPenguin

Gym Leader

Joined: Wed Aug 09, 2006 9:46 amPosts: 1552

((MY POST EXPLODERAFIED THREE TIMES ;_; So heres the basic gist of it.))

Jeff turned back to where he had come from, and squinted. He thought he could see something moving around. He pointed it out to Spence.

"See that? Wonder what that is. I'm going to have a look-see, come on!" Jeff started jogging towards it, wondring what it was and what to do.

(( It was originally three times longer than this, but I didn't want to type it out AGAIN

D: ))

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Sat May 26, 2007 7:37 pm

pelligargetic

Gym Leader

Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2005 6:16 pmPosts: 1012

((Treecko, sorry, but it's STILL a no. Lemme see what your problems are this time...

1. Okay, maybe I should just plain state it for you instead of just implying it: THIS ROLEPLAY IS NOT FOR FIVE-YEAR-OLDS. I'm sorry, but I doubt you have the roleplaying skills to accurately portray a five-year-old that has the ability to handle a situation of this magnitude.
2. How can your silly little treecko "easily make the world worth living when all seems to be lost"? What can a five-year-old do besides be cute/annoying/curious?
3. Being naive isn't really a flaw, because all really young kids are naive.
4. How smart is smart? Is your silly little five-year-old smarter than an English major?
5. A little more detail into your background, please. What is the significance of Grassel getting stung? I've been stung by a wasp before, but if someone asked me for a brief history of my life, I wouldn't even THINK of saying that. Why? Because it didn't matter that much. And even if I would, I'd say more than "I got stung". Details details details!
6. lawlRecent history: He was born? Wtf? You said he's five years old, five years is NOT recently being born. Try again, please?
7. What kind of name is Grassel?

BackgroundParents: David and Mia Märcid
Siblings: Trevor Märcid (older brother), Mai Faroe (older sister), Alex Faroe (brother-in-law), Dash Märcid (younger brother)
Hometown: Saffron City
Childhood history: Trained a lot during youth and adolescence at the Fighting Dojo in Saffron. Competed in many double battle tournaments with his older brother Trevor.
Recent history: Returned from the Naval Service 7 months ago, and has been accepted as the new Gym Leader of Celadon City(Erika has retired)
Plans for the future: Stay as a regular Gym Leader for more than 2 seasons of Leader exams
Worst memory: Seeing his first Pokemon, Mankey, get pummeled by a vicious Psychic attack from a Kadabra

Pokemon 4: Irukai (Gallade)
Gender: Male
Moves: Psycho Cut, Close Combat, Leaf Blade, Night Slash
Personality: Chivalrous, Semi-clumsy
Chemistry: New to the team, Gallade is anxious and a not quite in sync with Dom just yet.

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Dominic grunted as he rubbed his head and rose from a prone position. Must've fallen asleep......but Dart and I were training, so he would've punched me if I had zonked out... Dom opened his eyes to see blankness of space. "What in the......Dart? Where are you buddy?"

From behind him, Dom heard the shuffling of feet. In no time flat, Dart was hopping around him with joy on his face. "Glad to see you're well, buddy. But where are we?"

Dart began jumping up and down excitingly. He was pointing his gloved fist to the left. Dom turned to see some people in the distance. Other people? I suppose that's as good a sign as any.

Dom began running in the direction the people were in and waved his hands in the air. "Hey, over here!" he yelled out. Dart mimicked Dom by grunting loudly and waving his fists wildly as well.

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Sat May 26, 2007 9:44 pm

pelligargetic

Gym Leader

Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2005 6:16 pmPosts: 1012

It seems they've begun to awaken... thought Arceus to himself. Good...for we have no time to be wasted.

And with that, Arceus let out a bellowing cry for all ears in his dimension. Then, he used his divine <s>format</s> powers to draw out a magnetic force; everything in the realm would be drawn closer to the creation pokemon.

Spence nodded to Jeff as he stepped forward to follow, but then he felt something. He turned around as he heard someone yell, the muscular man and his Primeape who were once asleep had finally awaken.

As Spence waved back, he suddenly heard an echoing loud cry that gave him the shivers. Like that of a pokemon's, the mysterious cry came bellowing from all directions. Spence darted around for any signs of whom it came from, but there were none at all.

Turning for Jeff, he attempted walking towards him, but he couldn't, almost as if something was pulling him back. Struggling, he then tried loosening up, but ended up falling backwards instead, now steadily sliding backwards. The force pulling him was getting stronger, so strong that it picked him up and hurtled him spinning through the air. Spence could only summarise that Jeff and the others were in the same situation as he was, thrown disappearing into the nothingness.

For what seemed like quite awhile, Spence landed with a tumble and a roll back onto the misty surface. Motionless for at least a minute, he groaned as he got up, deciding to sit cross-legged as to get over his illness, head lowered with eyes shut. Spence could feel himself about to throw up, but managed to shallow it down alright without a fuss.

Taking in a deep breath, he then looked up in awe to witness a mysterious, oddly-shaped pokemon just floating there above him, all shrouded in mist. Spence couldn't explain it. It was like nothing he had ever seen before.

Lost for words, Spence slowly shuffled back, just glaring at it.

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Sun May 27, 2007 6:01 am

EvilPenguin

Gym Leader

Joined: Wed Aug 09, 2006 9:46 amPosts: 1552

Jeff felt himself smash into something and keep goimg. It felt as though he were in a giant vacumn, being sucked along like this. He hit something again and stopped, groaning. Looking up, he could see Spence sitting not too far away. He called out to him,

"Spence, are you alright? What happened to... to us..." Jeff trailed off as he saw what Spence was staring at. He was lost for words

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