There are a bazillion people out there trying to do this kind of thing -- plaintive folky chick with a guitar -- and most of them are terrible -- and quite a few who've had some kind of success that aren't as good.

Hard to put my finger on it, but you've managed to avoid the cliches you usually get with this type of music -- especially the contrived "indie girl" voice -- although when you sing "disorder" it sounds affected in that way, especially at the end.

The simplicity of the guitar works well with the song -- there's a good rhythm and it's deliberate -- not like some of delicate scratching you often hear on your typical YouTube solo effort.

This is just beautiful. Really beautiful. Reminds me of a woman I once knew in Los Angeles. The way you phrase and the complicated rhythm that sounds simple, but isnít. Very, very nice. It almost sounds like itís in a funky time signature, but itís not.

Did you write and play guitar as well?

My only criticism is to ditch the doubled vocal. It detracts from the intimacy you have in your voice. Harmony maybe. Donít know if you can sing harmony, but if not, there are lots of people who can. You probably know some of them.

This is just beautiful. Really beautiful. Reminds me of a woman I once knew in Los Angeles. The way you phrase and the complicated rhythm that sounds simple, but isn’t. Very, very nice. It almost sounds like it’s in a funky time signature, but it’s not.

Did you write and play guitar as well?

My only criticism is to ditch the doubled vocal. It detracts from the intimacy you have in your voice. Harmony maybe. Don’t know if you can sing harmony, but if not, there are lots of people who can. You probably know some of them.

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I could see leaving the double vocal on the disorder/peace sign lines -- but I'd rather hear a harmony. Also, if you mix back one of the vocals it fattens it up without being so obvious. Probably doesn't need either.

I used to double track all my vocals when I was less confident about my voice -- I still do on some choruses -- but usually along with a harmony.