Although this is probably the recording quality's fault - you could try and improve the dynamic shift from start to finish by making the beginning quieter and the loudest bit louder. You've got a really nice circular chord pattern there though thats suited to the repetition.

are a gem ;] yeah we recorded with one microphone so it was always not going to have great quality to the recording. we are in the studio now and i promise it will be ace. anyway, thanks for the reply x

sounds like a mix of band of horses and animal collective or something (?!?!!) i think if you got the drums (snare) sounding more lively it would be even better. awesome stuff, im glad you didnt make me listen to crap :P