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Nice writing Eddie! This is a very serious issue that needs to be addressed. I'm sure that being a police officer is a very hard job, but if you can't handle it, you shouldn't be one. You can't just shoot innocent people. I believe that they should not shoot unless there life is in danger. You can't shoot because you thought he was reaching for a weapon. They need to be 100 % sure and it is terrible that it is mostly young blacks! Something has to change! Thank you for writing that!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for being the first person to review this poem. I find it to be a very important subject... read moreThank you for being the first person to review this poem. I find it to be a very important subject. All life is precious and we need to try and stem the loss of it for superfluous reasons.

2 Weeks Ago

You are very welcome! Yes, all life is precious!

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I love how you make people think as they figure out that what they already assumed to be true, his race, and then let them think hey, “What if it was someone of my race how would I feel about it?” Gives the reader perspective! Nice work!

Posted 6 Days Ago

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6 Days Ago

Thank you. I tried really hard to get this poem right. I am happy you got it and understand how mu.. read moreThank you. I tried really hard to get this poem right. I am happy you got it and understand how much of a problem this issue is to everyone. Thanks again for reading.

Nice writing Eddie! This is a very serious issue that needs to be addressed. I'm sure that being a police officer is a very hard job, but if you can't handle it, you shouldn't be one. You can't just shoot innocent people. I believe that they should not shoot unless there life is in danger. You can't shoot because you thought he was reaching for a weapon. They need to be 100 % sure and it is terrible that it is mostly young blacks! Something has to change! Thank you for writing that!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for being the first person to review this poem. I find it to be a very important subject... read moreThank you for being the first person to review this poem. I find it to be a very important subject. All life is precious and we need to try and stem the loss of it for superfluous reasons.

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I write everything. Whatever is on my heart comes through my pen. I do not limit myself to only write what I think. I write what I feel. I write a lot .. more..