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Onora says:Surprisingly ('cause not many people are) I'm a fan of cho/cedric. It's one of those lil fluffy 'ships that I love.
- Lovely ending. Slightly dramatic, and the use of repitition is good. Maybe try using this for future one-shots?
- The Princess Bride? Hmm, a book. I like books. Who is it by? :P
- Her imaginings relating to her mother are a good way of comparing situations and adding depth to your story. Or somrthing. I'm not really sure what I'm on about really. ^~^
- Anyways, if you write anymore cho/cedrics, I'd sure as hell read them. Keep writing, you get better every fic! :D

Author's Response: I don't know. I've never really gotten into their pairing. But I just saw this banner and almost DROOLED, so I thought up a story for it :)
-I think I like using repitition, too, so I'll definitely take up your advice on that.
-Hold the phone. You've never heard of "The Princess Bride"?! It's a legendary romance movie now. It's by William Goldman, and it's absolutely hilarious. I recommend it, even though I read it years and years ago.
-Ahh, thank you! Sometimes I'm afraid that I get too far off-topic when I go on my little tangents.
-I might have to just for you! I'll let you know if any inspiration hits. :D