Re: Dragonflybsd Presentation

> Slide two, last bullet. Replace "which" with "who" so that the bullet
> reads: Brainchild of Matt Dillon who started ...
>
> Same bullet: Could probably also lose the "to" in front of "work". It
> sounds better without the to, but it may not be correct formal English.
You're right
>
> Slides 3, 5, 11: you really should put a space in front of the opening
> paranthese, makes it a lot easier to read.
Hmm didn't notice that
>
> Those are the only nits I could find to pick. :) Very nicely done.
>
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Thanks for the suggestions
I'll work on it later
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