(Not really, but it's the best Benvolio quote I could come up with...)

Welcome to the forums, Bud. Like the twit-fic.

Btw, you'll get a better shot at winning the weekly contest if you post your twit-fics on the main thread. Single postings on a new thread while allowed, don't get as much attention by the people that scroll through the main, multi-page General Content twit-fic thread...

ROU Killing Time wrote:Time keeps on slippin, slippin, slippin, into the future. Ever since Chronos dropped the soap in the shower, that is...

Mmm unfortunately, my teenage mind took this one straight to the prison kind of dropping the soap and not just the normal, slippery variety of dropping the soap. It took me a good three minutes to figure this twabble out.

dreamrock wrote: Methinks it needs a naming, Stil. I'd go with Girl with the Cthulhu Tattoo.

Ha! That adds a lot! You can never have too many Lovecraft references although putting a title on a twabble just feels like cheating to me . How about adjusting it to read:She was ecstatic about her new Cthulhu tattoo, displaying it proudly; until it began to whisper insidiously in her ear.

dreamrock wrote: Methinks it needs a naming, Stil. I'd go with Girl with the Cthulhu Tattoo.

Ha! That adds a lot! You can never have too many Lovecraft references although putting a title on a twabble just feels like cheating to me . How about adjusting it to read:She was ecstatic about her new Cthulhu tattoo, displaying it proudly; until it began to whisper insidiously in her ear.

Titles aren't cheating per se, but my suggested title was a little long. I think I remember something about trying to limit titles to fifteen characters with the same exceptions used to count characters for twabbles. But that might have been a dream.

EDIT: Oh, yes, and the change works quite well. *smacks own head for forgetfulness*