captaindrewi, looks much better. The perspective's a bit off though because it wasn't originally rendered at the same distance or whatever, but I think it looks close enough to matching the others

Indian8or, nice scene there, did you make those models from scratch for the challenge itself? I do have to comment on the dimensions of the hallway...I don't think they match the original. I hope it wouldn't be too much trouble to ask if you could try adjusting it a little more closer to what it should be?

I'm slowly working on my hallway, fleshing out the basic stuff and some of the lighting. Interior of a house. It'll be a...obscure birthday party...

Thanks for the feedback guys. I should've checked back here before working. Made a real quick tree and leaves. (College work is killer and deadlines so close to each other.)

Raxx, that would actually solve my problem right now. XD Might design something flat for the left hand side. I've been thinking of a gate but I didn't want a canopy. For some reason the design I am currently trying to achieve is somewhat more on the tribal/medieval village side, hence the wooden pike fence. Must sound strange I suppose. I can't really find the term I'm looking for.

Attached is a quick render of a workaround for the 'roof' A canopy of leaves from trees behind. The only way I can get it to actually pop out would be through lighting I suppose. That'd take some thinking.

Will get back to work on this after BackGroundDesign plate. What a coincidence my plate is a repeat panning background with dimensions which are similar to this challenge.

Indian8or, I think you might have moved the camera or something, it seems to need some adjusting. Look at the attached image to see what I'm talking about, the boundary is in red and you can see that nothing's matching up.

Janro, looks like it's gonna be hard unless you use something man-made, eh. If you can preserve the 8 corners then I think you'll be set. It'll take some creative thinking so good luck

Alright, I'm still working it, but I had an unexpected weekend visit from my mother-in-law, which means other family coming and going and and and.... So, I doubt I will get this quite done... Then again, my fault for not joining until a couple of days back, as an afterthought...

Anyway, attached a small bit of render of what I have been putting together.

Looks good Jaw Jaw, reminds me of the ol' retro games, probably due to the HUD's design (which is good). Another interesting way to interpret the "hallway" theme.

Arik_the_Red, it's a start Green radioactive sludge?

I won't be finishing mine in time, too much stuff came up over the week. I had started to enjoy designing the hallway interior, so I might keep working on it anyway. Not to mention my idea's too quirky to really pass up