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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

TarkaTarquol wrote:

My guess is the laws of physics still apply in the underworld but not to ethereal blobs of goo. They are in Lake "Vertical." Ship must have started descending quickly, losing the two solid beings their footholds and effectively putting them into a free fall. It's how to make an artificial zero gravity simulation... is that a redundant statement?

Redundant?! That might be the most well aplied statement this week!

_________________20th century fox? Given that this is the year 2014, that fox must be dead by now. Sadface! : (

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Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:11 pm

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Kind of redundant, but not.... artificial and simulation share the same meaning here, but they are not synonymous.

Wow, at first I thought the spirits threw them somehow.... I was thinking how mean they were, then remembered this is Hell, and it made sense until the last panel made me realize that they fell onto a wall of the ship.

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Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:45 pm

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

TarkaTarquol wrote:

My guess is the laws of physics still apply in the underworld but not to ethereal blobs of goo. They are in Lake "Vertical." Ship must have started descending quickly, losing the two solid beings their footholds and effectively putting them into a free fall. It's how to make an artificial zero gravity simulation... is that a redundant statement?

You made Monday's page almost useless *giggles* almost tough...

GeckoZY wrote:

Don't cats land on their feet? XD

No need to land on feet when someone is ready to stop the free fall xD

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Fri Apr 05, 2013 7:48 pm

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

_Stu_ wrote:

You made Monday's page almost useless *giggles* almost tough...

Ooh, I'm curious now as to how close I was. I did actually come back and catch that what Copper said... about them being on the wall. Laws of physics ain't got an excuse for that! (Unless the ship is somehow spinning at an extremely high speed... with the blobs of goo still unaffected by it... But that's not too likely as I actually still don't grasp how to make that kind of artificial gravity)

Sat Apr 06, 2013 2:23 am

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Mon Apr 08, 2013 2:07 am

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Aw isn't him adorable

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Mon Apr 08, 2013 2:07 am

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Is there any of the denizens of hell who isn't an anthropomorphic animal character?!

_________________20th century fox? Given that this is the year 2014, that fox must be dead by now. Sadface! : (

I'm telling you, hyenas ARE canines too! Many biologists died to bring us this information! Why won't you honor their deaths?! What I did to their families?!

I just read through the whole archive and I have to say I LOVE YOUR COMIC SO MUCH! You certainly have truly awesome characters here (specially that white haired Albert Wesker named Winter as Silly Zealot said XD). I felt touched several times as also laughed out loud and almost fell of my chair too many times. Excellent plot, you are a really talented writer, can't wait to see how this story will continue X3. By the way, I don't know why but a lot of the backgrounds reminded me the old Resident evil's games for no reason (maybe was the blur? XD)

I have also some questions if you don't mind:

-Why you have locked Max and Grape in the character's section of the webpage? Are you planning to change their appearance or something? (yeah I can read through that shadows XD)

-I know this is a comic of silly animals and not everything have to make sense, but how it works Max's ability? It's something about Magic or Science? It have something to do with having Pete's mana? And what about Eyesight?

-Since Fido developed powers for having Pete's mana that means everyone who have it would do the same? Or maybe only those who Pete considered potential avatars like Peanut and Grape (besides Fido) will do it?

-When Pete said he wanted Spike to be his knight, he meant he wanted him to be his avatar or his follower? Or maybe none of this?

-And the last one, Horus, the power of Fido, have something to do with that fire-bird spirit trapped by Tarot and then entrusted to Sabrina? (I think his name is Xin)

Now changing subjects, I suppose you have your reasons, but I thought Peanut and Sabrina would be a best support to Spike since they have more experience with all of this supernatural stuff (you know, like passing through dimentions, time traveling, fighting with gargoyles, etc). Or maybe you just wanted to do this in Rambo style (pure brute force) or giving them a moment ALONE (*gasp* what are you planning? Poor Grape, she's always the target of the shippers XD)

I know it's a bit out of character, but I love Tarot's attitude. She certainly hates Spike, and most likely be the same with King (who I suppose will be part of this story somehow since Pete is involved in this).

Now please take this as a constructive criticism, but I think the weakest part of this story was Max's backstory. Don't get me wrong, I love Max, he's one of my favorites characters and is so awesome seeing him having an epic story, but it's just I found it too many flaws. For example: how could be him a mercenary if he never killed a person? In what moment he feigns cowardice when he's always trying to show-off his bravery? How could be him called “earcut” when his ear hadn't been bite when Jeff adopted him? Why he left the organization when the only family he had was in there?

You don't need to answer this, but I was wondering since Max is now in a dog body will be victim of the same effects suffered by King of “being attracted to the members of his current species”. And since Primo have a pretty good amount of fangirls, well, that problem will fit pretty well XD (maybe having a crush on Vanessa? That would be priceless).

And Peanut, being so oblivious as always, he will sure do a big mess taking the role of Spike. I wouldn't surprise if he found the personal stuff of Spike and then goes directly to knock Winter's (or Slash) door with the purpose of finding some answer or solutions for Spike's problem. If he wasn't surprised at all with all the magic and cosmic stuff, then I suppose this crazy scientist stuff will have the same effect on him.

And for last, I give a prediction: We will see Eyesight again in this arc. Taking the last words he said before die, it's for sure he went to the hell. I'll say he will appear in the Ice Lake (since he is a penguin duh)

P.S.: I'm REALLY sorry for the long post. Keep doing this great work, pal.

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Wed Apr 10, 2013 11:10 am

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

"Ding! Exactly!" Cartoony spirits are so formal. XDWait, Spike, what are you doing? Are you leaving the ship? No! Don't do it, vada a bordo, cazzo! (Webcomic by italian authors, characters sailing on a boat: I HAD to say that!)

kavviyenta wrote:

In another note, if Pete intend to make Spike his knight, and Joel is King and Volant is Rook, who is the Queen and Bishop?

Good call, man. I theorize that the queen is Sarah Kerrigan, and the bishop is confessor Cromwell from Fallout 3.

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Wed Apr 10, 2013 1:05 pm

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Gren wrote:

I just read through the whole archive and I have to say I LOVE YOUR COMIC SO MUCH! You certainly have truly awesome characters here (specially that white haired Albert Wesker named Winter as Silly Zealot said XD). I felt touched several times as also laughed out loud and almost fell of my chair too many times. Excellent plot, you are a really talented writer, can't wait to see how this story will continue X3.

By the way, I don't know why but a lot of the backgrounds reminded me the old Resident evil's games for no reason (maybe was the blur? XD)

Uhm, no idea actually :7 probably because they're horrible

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I have also some questions if you don't mind:

-Why you have locked Max and Grape in the character's section of the webpage? Are you planning to change their appearance or something? (yeah I can read through that shadows XD)

Secret... some characters are not so hidden, but their appearance (or characteristics) must remain unknown for now.

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-I know this is a comic of silly animals and not everything have to make sense, but how it works Max's ability? It's something about Magic or Science? It have something to do with having Pete's mana? And what about Eyesight?

It's funny because i never thought about it. It's one of the various things i decided to put without thinking properly about. I actually don't know how to justify it... and it's double funny, because i always try to justify everything here :/

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-Since Fido developed powers for having Pete's mana that means everyone who have it would do the same? Or maybe only those who Pete considered potential avatars like Peanut and Grape (besides Fido) will do it?

Potentially, everyone. This way if i need a character with a particular ability i can take one and give him that ability. But it's something i won't need to do probably

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-When Pete said he wanted Spike to be his knight, he meant he wanted him to be his avatar or his follower? Or maybe none of this?

Teorically follower, as Volant, at least here (in Valerio's fic Volant should be Pete's new avatar). They still deserve a slice of power

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-And the last one, Horus, the power of Fido, have something to do with that fire-bird spirit trapped by Tarot and then entrusted to Sabrina? (I think his name is Xin)

No, Xin won't probably come back. Or maybe he'll appear again somehow, but his role in the story is over

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Now changing subjects, I suppose you have your reasons, but I thought Peanut and Sabrina would be a best support to Spike since they have more experience with all of this supernatural stuff (you know, like passing through dimentions, time traveling, fighting with gargoyles, etc). Or maybe you just wanted to do this in Rambo style (pure brute force) or giving them a moment ALONE (*gasp* what are you planning? Poor Grape, she's always the target of the shippers XD)

It's a long time that Grape is supposed to be there with Spike in the script i prepared, at first with a particular reason, now with, uh, the same reason... plus another one

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I know it's a bit out of character, but I love Tarot's attitude. She certainly hates Spike, and most likely be the same with King (who I suppose will be part of this story somehow since Pete is involved in this).

I wanted Tarot to be this way to give her a more interesting role in dialogues

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Now please take this as a constructive criticism, but I think the weakest part of this story was Max's backstory. Don't get me wrong, I love Max, he's one of my favorites characters and is so awesome seeing him having an epic story, but it's just I found it too many flaws. For example: how could be him a mercenary if he never killed a person? In what moment he feigns cowardice when he's always trying to show-off his bravery? How could be him called “earcut” when his ear hadn't been bite when Jeff adopted him? Why he left the organization when the only family he had was in there?

I know... it's something i've ripped from here to put it in the Eyesight's comic i stopped (but i wanted to take it again someday), i had an explaination for almost everything you asked... someway. One day i'll explain everything, because "Eyesight" has a story i truly love, and i'd love to tell you about it someday

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You don't need to answer this, but I was wondering since Max is now in a dog body will be victim of the same effects suffered by King of “being attracted to the members of his current species”. And since Primo have a pretty good amount of fangirls, well, that problem will fit pretty well XD (maybe having a crush on Vanessa? That would be priceless).

I didn't think about it... maybe...

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And Peanut, being so oblivious as always, he will sure do a big mess taking the role of Spike. I wouldn't surprise if he found the personal stuff of Spike and then goes directly to knock Winter's (or Slash) door with the purpose of finding some answer or solutions for Spike's problem. If he wasn't surprised at all with all the magic and cosmic stuff, then I suppose this crazy scientist stuff will have the same effect on him.

...this will probably never happen. For two reasons basically: the chapter's really long the way it is, and Winter/Slash' new plot part return is scheduled very soon.

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And for last, I give a prediction: We will see Eyesight again in this arc. Taking the last words he said before die, it's for sure he went to the hell. I'll say he will appear in the Ice Lake (since he is a penguin duh)

Eyesight? Here? In hell? Neh.

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P.S.: I'm REALLY sorry for the long post. Keep doing this great work, pal.

No reason to be sorry if i can answer i'd be happy to!

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Wait, Spike, what are you doing? Are you leaving the ship? No! Don't do it, vada a bordo, cazzo! (Webcomic by italian authors, characters sailing on a boat: I HAD to say that!)

Lol Schettino. One of our numerous worldwide shame.

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Wed Apr 10, 2013 1:27 pm

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Uhm, no idea actually :7 probably because they're horrible

Quite the opposite, I am a huge fan of old RE games, so I think they are fantastic!

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Secret... some characters are not so hidden, but their appearance (or characteristics) must remain unknown for now.

As I supposed. You're making it really clear who are your favorites characters of the cast don't ya? Or maybe because they're the most suitable for kicking some butts.

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It's funny because i never thought about it. It's one of the various things i decided to put without thinking properly about. I actually don't know how to justify it... and it's double funny, because i always try to justify everything here :/

Well, in the case of Eyesight could be a mutation, since he was experiment Nº2. And with Max, huh, steroids?

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Potentially, everyone. This way if i need a character with a particular ability i can take one and give him that ability. But it's something i won't need to do probably

A bit weird explanation. Basically it was unnecessary except if you need to use them as a escape route at some tricky situation.

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No, Xin won't probably come back. Or maybe he'll appear again somehow, but his role in the story is over

Though you're implying that Horus does have something to do with the plot of the story, right?

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It's a long time that Grape is supposed to be there with Spike in the script i prepared, at first with a particular reason, now with, uh, the same reason... plus another one

I hope the reason won't be another weird backstory

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I know... it's something i've ripped from here to put it in the Eyesight's comic i stopped (but i wanted to take it again someday), i had an explaination for almost everything you asked... someway. One day i'll explain everything, because "Eyesight" has a story i truly love, and i'd love to tell you about it someday

And I would be delighted to hear it. I didn't want him to die though at least his death was epic.

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...this will probably never happen. For two reasons basically: the chapter's really long the way it is, and Winter/Slash' new plot part return is scheduled very soon.

Yeah, I suppose I should have imagined it for (also) two reason: First, he didn't appears between the characters, and second, it certainly would be too weird seen a character in the body of another one for so long. A bit disappointing because who doesn't like to see Peanut in some heroic scene? But at least it's good to see that the rest of my favs (Sabrina, Grape, Fido and Maxwell) have a good role in the story.

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Eyesight? Here? In hell? Neh.

“About me at last... I'm sorry. I'm sorry for the path I have chosen. I'm sorry because we will see each other from the distance. I'm sorry because this is and will always be... a goodbye.”Yup, he definitely went to inferno. :3

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Wed Apr 10, 2013 5:23 pm

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I've got a question, Stu. Have you read Egoitz Pinto's (A.K.A. Darius Crane) comics? He uses the word "grab" as an onomatopoeia as well, which has become a running gag on his comics and a motive of joy for his fans every time it appears.

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Wed Apr 10, 2013 5:35 pm

copper

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

And so the reaper meets the scythe...

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Wed Apr 10, 2013 10:44 pm

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Gren wrote:

As I supposed. You're making it really clear who are your favorites characters of the cast don't ya? Or maybe because they're the most suitable for kicking some butts

Both reasons essentially

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Well, in the case of Eyesight could be a mutation, since he was experiment Nº2. And with Max, huh, steroids?

Well there's a reason behind Eyesight's eye since is exp.II, the one i don't know how to justify is Max. Probably Ki, or the excuse that aways works for everything... nanomachines :3

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A bit weird explanation. Basically it was unnecessary except if you need to use them as a escape route at some tricky situation.

Every author has an escape route somewhere, is kind of a convenient rule. But since i've thought about the whole story properly i properly won't need any of them, except for a few ones

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Though you're implying that Horus does have something to do with the plot of the story, right?

Probably. But probably not Horus itself

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I hope the reason won't be another weird backstory

Nah, Max should be the only one who received this treatment

Silly Zealot wrote:

I've got a question, Stu. Have you read Egoitz Pinto's (A.K.A. Darius Crane) comics? He uses the word "grab" as an onomatopoeia as well, which has become a running gag on his comics and a motive of joy for his fans every time it appears.

Mh, nope, never heard about it. But i'm quicksearching to see

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Thu Apr 11, 2013 3:30 am

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Fri Apr 12, 2013 2:08 am

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I don't know why i always feel so bad for the lizard guards

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Man, are you sure you're not basing this on Bleach? Come on, Spike totally looks like Ikaku or Zaraki now

If I were that demons, I wouldn't be that worried, at least they are the only ones who are immortals there. XD

And for Grape, she certainly have a problems with da boys X3 . Honestly, sometimes I wonder how is possible that the same character may be the most tomboy and yet the most feminine girl of the entire cast, she must be going through a severe identity crisis

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Fri Apr 12, 2013 7:35 am

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From the creators of Grammar Nazi: Syntax Zealot to the rescuuuuuue!!!!I don't think the demon is "praying", more like he/she/it is begging for his/her/it's life. That is, unless he/she/it views Steve/Spike as a deity, or something like that.

_________________20th century fox? Given that this is the year 2014, that fox must be dead by now. Sadface! : (

I'm telling you, hyenas ARE canines too! Many biologists died to bring us this information! Why won't you honor their deaths?! What I did to their families?!

Not Bleach, but Anime in general, honestly. You can take my word for it. References to the underworld is just something Bleach has a stand-out for, but I could say that about a hundred of other shows and comics that referenced hell the same way you did. I just think the fans here are more familiar with Bleach =P

Not Bleach, but Anime in general, honestly. You can take my word for it. References to the underworld is just something Bleach has a stand-out for, but I could say that about a hundred of other shows and comics that referenced hell the same way you did. I just think the fans here are more familiar with Bleach =P

To be honest, it's not the "underworld stuff" what reminds me to Bleach (in fact, the hell is barely mentioned in that manga series), there are references very clear, and not just scenes, like character's personalities and even the plot itself. Think about it: two mortals infiltrate and then goes against the Spirit World to rescue one of their friends (ohh Primo and Orihime both are red haired ohh, and Grape and Rukia are tomboy and feminine at the same time ohh). Even the main villains are similar (Winter and Aizen) both physically and psychologically (even both are scientist who experimented with the protagonist somehow and are proving them). That's just the basic, but if you analyze this thoroughly sure you will find more similarities. Sorry Stu, but you're slowly becoming a Tite Troll Kubo XD

My predictions:-Winter shall become a super-powerful butterfly-man combining all his cards.-After Spike defeat Winter he'll lose all his powers and then will come a new arc in which he is gonna get new ones from nowhere.

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