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Sunday, May 18, 2014

Chapter 9, Pt. 9

This time Edo didn’t flinch when he
touched the seal. As he held his right hand against the collar, gold figures
appeared on the glove on his left hand. He watched the developing shapes
intently, muttering to himself. Silay held her breath, afraid to make a noise
and ruin the reveal spell.

“Damn!” Edo tore the gloves off his
hands and threw them across the room.

1 comment:

He’s right about mine not knowing much about magic.” (I never know what to do about these kinds of phrases, but "mine" seems off. Maybe "my not knowing" ? or "me not knowing"? Guess it depends on what kind of participle you want it to be...)before we go Sojan. ("to")