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patronus_charm says:Ah there’s going to be a party how exciting. I liked the sound of the Hufflepuff party because if there’s free food going around no one’s ever go to turn it down, are they? The Gryffindor one sounded fun too, and I have feeling that something may happen between Flora and a certain Potter boy at this one. I’m getting far too excited about them going to Gryffindor and it’s not even that amazing cough unlike Ravenclaw cough.

Aw Scorpius is so adorable. I really felt for him with this line ‘Okay, maybe not because it’s Scorpius, but the principle still applies.’ Even though it’s nice to see him not being portrayed as the playboy who everyone loves it does make me pity him to see him as such a tragic figure. At least he has a supported in me :D

Oh god the tension at this point ‘‘It’s okay,’ Albus said, giving Scorpius a dead funny look. ‘It’s a nice surprise.’‘ I’ve never seen so much hate between the two before and I really wonder why there is so much. There was part mention of the title at this point ‘’ Uh…just…blundering about.’’ I get far too excited when things like that happen.

Ok I have a theory that Scorpius likes Flora and that’s why he’s over protective of her when she comes back late and why he dislikes Albus so much and sort of flinches at a mention of him. Another amazing chapter :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: I'd never turn down a party with free food. I have also been known to turn up late to parties either because I am eating food or watching Doctor Who, sometimes both.

And no house, /no house/ is as amazing as Ravenclaw. Fact.

I love my woobie Scorpiuses (or Scorpii). I feel like I can't write him any other way now. He's got to be this ~tragic~ mope with a big fringe. Sorry, Malfoys.

All will become clear in the future! (Alternatively, one can consult the orb).