I like the build honeslty but my comment directs to the end of your passage.
Aldrich is a male, not female. the figure he consumed is dark sun gwyndolin. efemin yet a male, you can pull up the gender identity. but sadly he is dead now and we cant ask him.
not trying to hate or make u angry, just wanted to say thart

You should be fine, there are a few bugs they fixed but it's highly unlikely you will encounter them or would lose save data over it, you may however get locked out of progress in some Covenants such as Rosaria's Fingers if you turn in too many at once (which is highly unlikely if you aren't going to play online.)

Everything is fine now, there has been intermittent issues all weekend for unknown reasons. If you need to get hold of a moderator just send me a message via members page, i will get back to you within 24-48 hours.

…unfortunately the only forum on this wiki with any activity left is for Dark Souls 3, and I don't know where else to go to point out the issue? Anyway the page for "Black World Tendency" events does not load properly. It's just a blank white page. Tried it on both Firefox and Chrome, same problem. There are also problems when looking up the page using the Internet Archives' Wayback Machine. The most recent page I can open is a capture listed in October 2014. I don't know if any changes have been made to the page since then, but if there had been I have no way of telling. Anytime I look up a page with a capture after that date I just get this message pop-up:

"wikidot.com security error:
Your authentication token in the request is not valid. Please enable cookies in your browser and try to repeat the action.
If you see this message on the page not associated with the wikidot.com wiki hosting it probably means an identity theft attempt or improper use of wikidot.com service."

So… what's going on? Is there anyone available anymore to fix this? Ever since the forums for the other games shut down there's been no way to report any issues with any of the wikis for the games here besides, its seems, Dark Souls 3. Someone needs to keep the Demon's Souls wiki preserved, it's the most if not only comprehensive wiki for Demon's Souls on the Internet as of yet and I doubt anyone else is even going to attempt to make another one anytime soon. Don't let it die out or get overrun by errors like this! Keep some forum open for feedback/errors/something along those lines open for the other games if nothing else.

Better balance, better plot, better atmosphere, more polished, more original, fewer useless gimmicky items, no cheap deaths, no backtracking, no fan service, better pacing, more viable character builds, better pvp(from what I hear. I never did much pvp), better implementation of risk/reward mechanic, better voice acting, better characters, cooler bosses/enemies, less faggy looking armor, less faggy looking weapons, and just all-around better in almost every imaginable way. The only things I would change about Demon's Souls are ladder slides and load times.

45 Vitality (without rings and weapons) to be able to wear the full Havel Set and stay under the fat-roll limit.

43 Vitality + RoF is the next break point. 36 if using only Havel's Ring.
34 if combined the rings.

42 Vitality + RoF1 is the next break point. 34 if using only Havel's Ring 1.
32 if combined the rings.

41 Vitality + RoF2 is the last break point. Still 34 if using only Havel's Ring 2.
31 if combined the rings.

Seems like the default rings are good enough for the set alone, the other rings usually save only 1 or 2 points in Vitality compared to base value of other rings, and have diminishing returns on their performance (the worst being Havel's Ring 2). They only catch up once you start pushing high end in the 80+ region Vitality.

If using all the gear (Shield and Tooth): Cannot medium roll with with pure vitality, or any of the RoF rings alone.

Need at least 96 Vitality and Havel's Ring. 92 if RoF combined.

Need at least 94 Vitaltiy and Havel's Ring 1. 88 if RoF1 combined

Need at least 93 Vitality and Havel's Ring 2. 86 if RoF2 combined.

Seems like the Rings in the +1 rating give the best performance, but since it's pushing the limit on SL as is (best starting Class would be Warrior for 125-150 cap), the +2 versions can be seen as pretty much core, regardless performance circumstances of the rings themselves, especially if the user wishes to 1 hand the Dragon Tooth.

Much better performance can be seen if instead the build is left at fat-rolling range (but under 100%), and using the Shield as it's main defensive tool with a large Endurance pool coupled with the +2 Rings family (and any other rings which benefit the defensive capabilities of the setup), with a Thrall Offhand Axe to closing the gap. At this point, only about 50 Vitality is needed and both the HP and Stamina pools can be capped at the 40 values instead of only 20-25 range.

I haven't been here for quite some time, for a few reasons. But I'm back now and will use this site instead of fextralife. Every time I'm on the fextralife website, I get warning messages about "script has stopped" and "cdn.optimatic.com is attempting to access the internet (adware). There's a ton of side-bar videos running that aren't game-related. I didn't go to that site to buy a salad spinner or a sock dryer. But there they are. I hate money and the entire concept of money. I view it as a product that the govt and federal reserve bank are trying to sell to the public (and quite successfully i might add)In other words, it's bull s***. Most people don't know that and most people don't know that the Federal Reserve isn't a govt entity but is in fact a privately owned bank.
Anyway, i'm getting off track. My point is that fextralife has become too revenue-motivated and is tainting my experience. There's nothing wrong with a site putting adds up. Nothing at all. But when by eyeballs are being slammed continuously and my computer is warning of viruses, it's gone too far.