i liked the whole "retro" feeling of the movie. many people are bad at replicating this, but you did this perfectly. the audio (sorry) sucked.you couldve made your voice narraration a little better, there was a low humming noise whenever i heard it.humor, was pretty good, i mean, who doesnt like toilet humor. overall, i think you did a great job on this, you just need to fix up those few little things. looking forward to your next flash, Darktrinity