Seond verse for me is better, more energy, make try and take your voice a bit higher on emphasis words. Flow is good , vocal sounds clean and i like what you did with beat as well. Mostly the energy and intonation are the only thing i can give criticism on.

It's trill bro, your beats and flow are really nice. Its a lot different than most styles, just got to make it a bit more interesting to stand out, and if you could check this out plox https://soundcloud.com/abe-t-k-m

thanks for the reply i like your style its different nice. and here a track i released today be sure to subscribe to my sound cloud 'Pancake$ & Heartbreak$' https://soundcloud.com/iamtaylormace like share comment subscribe if you like the work peace .