They are not bad designs. I think they need some stronger graphical element though. I feel like they would make excellent sheets to hand out, but perhaps not flashy enough to compete with all the other ads in a magazine, if that makes sense...

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6 anos atrás

1. Terms and conditions is small print, and should be on bottom of ad.
2. No PURE SCIENCE CULTURE logo
3. Please integrate UTF/MN logos. No floating black squares.

Very hard to do a design sign with so much text, but I submitted an entry.

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6 anos atrás

1. References only go on page once, and should be small.
2. Terms & Conditions is "small print", and should be tiny and at very bottom of page
3. Bottle shots are going to need to be cleaned up/raw image very dark.
4. UTF logo needs to go on dark background
5. Ad needs a dark or flashy look/background
6. Main point of ad is to direct readers to SupplementRaffle.com. That should be prominent.