I appreciate the creative ideas of the story, however you change from first to third person character and "facts" of the story contradict themselves. Try reading the story outloud so you can hear the descrepencies.

Author's Response: I do have an excellent beta reader, who is (incidentally) a moderator, so I trust that any discrepancies at this point are merely my personal style which she may have tried to beat out of me and could not. I hope you excuse them. The change in POV was important for the two characters, and I apologize that it is crazy headache inducing in the last chapter; couldn't be helped. Thank you, though.

Ruddy amazing! All so weird - the potion and such, and yet it was so, what's the word... I wish to give you a word but I can't... just can't think of a word... let that be your plausage! You rendered me wordless!

Author's Response: Speechless is at least one of the words you're looking for, I think. :-)
Thanks for reading!

OMG I loved this every last bit of it, I think my cuz almost killed me for staying up till five in the morning reading this one, I can't wait to go back and read Come Hell and then High water.....-smiles!- By far one of my Fav Snape/Hermione ones! if i donn't stop soon this will turn into a rant. Ciao!

Even thou chapt. four is through i thought i would guess for the fun of it. before moving on to the next capt. "Of course. Ten points from Slytherin for their offensive Head of House" Thats my guess. Ciao!

Author's Response: Actually, it's the line about Ron and pronouns, if I remember correctly, but thanks for reading and guessing anyway!

I really liked this. You're a really good writer, and I say that not just because I loved this story, but because not everyone knows how to deal with the topic of rape. A lot of people will just be very blunt and offensive with it but you were fairly delicate, you let us know that what happened to her was horrible and wrong but you didn't make us cringe with disgust. And also a lot of writers would have had her jump into the sex without the nightmares or the freaking out, but you didn't. And I liked that. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of the reviews!
I did hope that no one would be offended by the story and my approach to it and I think that it's only logical for her not to jump into sex afterwards. I think I would have squicked myself if I had described it in detail, but this felt like giving just as much informtaion as the story needed, and not too much.
Thanks again!