the note your holding

Below is the poem entitled the note your holding which was written by poet
John
Loving III. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

the note your holding

dear friend,
i am someone you know.
as a matter of fact someone real close.
and i'm sending this note to let you know
that as a christian i have this hope.
i see you around and i think your cool.
not like other guys that act like fools.
i see that in your heart that there is
something good, a smile and hands that would.
and i wonder is there Christ in your life. if
there is not; then i would like to invite. YOU!!!
it would be my delight. to give someone i like
the gift of eternal life.
love,
your friend

Hi John..Which female poet are you writing this to?..If it's Andrea, she'll be delighted! It blesses me to read a note of someone who sincerely wants to be evenly yoked..just think of all the problems that are potentially created when 2 of differing faiths become as one...complete and utter chaos. Great theme in this contest write, John. :) Gwendolen