tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4200743392455395094.post1865924496863024147..comments2017-09-26T09:12:22.819-07:00Comments on Reremoana Room 5 2017: Greg The Not So Slow SlothMrs Notleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13538209419052433949noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4200743392455395094.post-62372239734977142022017-09-12T17:37:42.468-07:002017-09-12T17:37:42.468-07:00Hi Michael! It&#39;s a cool story with an amazing ...Hi Michael! It&#39;s a cool story with an amazing morale, but just please focus on your punctuation; commas, full stops, SUPER LONG SENTENCES, and spelling... Thanks! TBNRCampbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14450359893254704787noreply@blogger.com