Organization Repair Shop

(The Story Thus Far from organization-xiiiplus old website on webs.com ...)

RoixukXXIIMemberPosts: 22 "Phew. Finally!"As I wiped the sweat off my brow in relief, I took a look at the finish product of my hard work. The new Organization Repair Shop. The shop reminded me a lot of my dad's basement, but a lot bigger.

As you came in through the entrance of the Castle That Never Was to the right was a steel door that led to the shop. As you enter in you can get a full view of the shop. Four huge metal garage doors lined together. There you are able to bring in any Gummi Ships that needed any repairs.

Towards the shop door, were stairs to both the right and the left. The stairs to the left led towards the weapon and parts of the shop where you can buy replacement weapons and drop off broken weapons for repairs. The stairs on the right lead up to the second floor that I made as both a spare bedroom and office for late nights.

There was also a ramp near the left hand stairs that led towards the welding area where I fix the actual weapons. Close to there, there is an oven with a stovetop, a large sink, a cabinet, and a couple of automatic grinders. There are two cages in the shop. One towards the welding area and one towards the shopping area. The one in the back has all the supplies for fixing the weapons. The one towards the front has stuff for more of crafting. Eeeep!!! So proud of myself! --Eyes Pealed...

September 29, 2011 at 12:15 PM Flag Quote & Reply

ReixalXVIIMemberPosts: 29 Reixal walks in the enormous shop. She looks around in awe, then quickly snaps her head in front of her attempting to cover up her childish looking reaction to the intriguing atmosphere.Not cool... Reixal walks up to the weapons repair area and waits for Roixuk. --Thump, thump, thump... that's the sound a heart makes... right?

September 29, 2011 at 12:26 PM Flag Quote & Reply

RoixukXXIIMemberPosts: 22 "REXIAL!!!"I scream as I ran up to her in my black overalls that had the organization symbol on it and a red shirt. In utter excitement, I did a Tigger pounce on top of her. "I am so happy you came!" I beamed a big bright smile at her that was filled with joy.--Eyes Pealed...

September 29, 2011 at 12:44 PM Flag Quote & Reply

ReixalXVIIMemberPosts: 29 "Ack!" Reixal was caught off guard by the hug and had the air knocked out of her for a second. She was wide-eyed as she looked down at the girl hanging on like a leech to her. She was surprised at first, then she smiled a little. Embarrassed, she suddenly pulled away and cleared her throat. "Ahem... umm yeah, its nice to see you too..." Reixal's face was a little red since she wasn't used to gregarious people. She took out a knife that looked like it had been crushed by a giant fist. "Haxon and I were sparring... I need it fixed... or a new one." It was at one point a stainless steel kunai knife but now it had indents in it made by Haxon's fingers. Reixal looked at the knife with a tinge of sadness.--Thump, thump, thump... that's the sound a heart makes... right?

September 29, 2011 at 12:57 PM Flag Quote & Reply

RoixukXXIIMemberPosts: 22 "Okey Dokey!" I replied eagerly as I took the knife. "Hmmm....Haxon has pretty strong hands doesn't he?"I examined the knife even closer to take into consideration the depth of the indent. "Hmmm...yup, you're going to need a new one," I examined the knife again."Would you rather have the knife made of Titanium? It can resist deformation more than steel. I can make a mold of one of the knives I have. The cost for custom made weapons are 500 munny." I took out a stainless steel kunai knife from the glass case. "Or you can just buy a new one for 150 munny."--Eyes Pealed...

September 29, 2011 at 1:16 PM Flag Quote & Reply

ReixalXVIIMemberPosts: 29 Well I did make some munny from the shop... "Yeah, I'll get the titanium one." Reixal took out 500 munny frm her cloak and held it out for Roixuk. This should help me with battles against warrior types... Reixal's face looked like that of one who was in deep thought. Her eyes looked far off.

--Thump, thump, thump... that's the sound a heart makes... right?

September 29, 2011 at 1:21 PM Flag Quote & Reply

RoixukXXIIMemberPosts: 22 "Kay, one moment please,"I replied as I hopped over the counter."HEY COSMOG, FWEEEE!"I whistled as I looked into the far distance to see a tiny creature with purple bat wings, skin like cream, and a giant red nose. I directed my attention towards Rexial as Cosmog, the Moogle, flew around me."You like him? Cosmog here is my little helper. I found him lying near the Entrance. Poor thing is mute though." I smiled at him,"But he's so cute, aren't you Cossy!"I said as we rubbed noses together.

I ran down the ramp towards the welding area. "Alright Cossy, this is what we've been waiting for. I need you to go get the Titanium from the Craft's Cage while I get out the mold." The tiny Moogle nodded as he went to go get the Titanium. As I took out the mold, I put on my gloves. When Cossy came back with the Titanium I told him to start pouring it in until I told him to stop. "Alright Cosmog, give it your all!"I exclaimed as Cosmog took in a deep breath and blew out Icy air around the mold to harden the Titanium. Once the Titanium was cooled I took off the top part of the mold to see the finished product. "Ain't it just pretty Cossy?" I said as I admired our work."We actually did it!"I wrapped up the knife in a cloth and brought it to Rexial."Here ya are. Isn't it beautiful?" I said as I unwrapped the knife for Rexial to see.--Eyes Pealed...

September 29, 2011 at 1:57 PM Flag Quote & Reply

ReixalXVIIMemberPosts: 29 Reixal watched as the adorable moogle flew around the shop helping roixuk put together Reixal's knife. She couldn't help but stare at its red nose. On the outside, she was simply looking on; on the inside, Reixal was wishing she too had one.So cute...

In a matter of minutes, Reixal had a brand new knife. She smiled at it. The colour was a bit darker than her other knives but it shined just like any new thing should. "A paper... I need a piece of paper." Reixal said without saying what it was for.--Thump, thump, thump... that's the sound a heart makes... right?

September 29, 2011 at 2:08 PM Flag Quote & Reply

RoixukXXIIMemberPosts: 22 "Oh,"I replied in confusion seeing that wasn't what I was expecting. I went through the drawer of one of the counters and got a piece of paper and a pen."Umm, here you go."--Eyes Pealed...

September 29, 2011 at 2:11 PM Flag Quote & Reply

ReixalXVIIMemberPosts: 29 Reixal ignored the pen and simply took the paper, leaving Roixuk confused. She held out the paper in front of her in the air. Then, using her brand new knife, sliced through the paper with ease. Reixal's eyes became bright and she smiled furtively. For a few seconds she looked rather evil, then she turned to Roixuk with a nicer looking expression. She had a small smile on her face. "I approve."she said simply before putting the knife in her cloak with her other knives."Thank you." Reixal bowed her head slightly and left the shop.--Thump, thump, thump... that's the sound a heart makes... right?

September 29, 2011 at 2:20 PM Flag Quote & Reply

RoixukXXIIMemberPosts: 22 I watched as Rexial left the shop, as Cosmog flew next following my actions. "I will never understand how her mind works...." I stated as I turned my head to Cossy who was nodding his head in agreement.--Eyes Pealed...

September 29, 2011 at 2:25 PM Flag Quote & Reply

NuxoarXXXAdministratorPosts: 46 "Hello."

Nuxoar's voice emanated from behind Roixuk. His arriving footsteps had never even been heard. He stood there, Zanbatou in hand at his side, his cloak's hood down, staring at the shop owner. He slowly lifted his weapon and pointed it forward.

"I've got a few nicks in my blade. Kexan's 'training' mission made sure of that. What do you think you can do for me?"

With his free hand, Nuxoar pulled down his glasses a bit, revealing his tired and dull eyes.--xXNoXx

October 10, 2011 at 10:29 PM Flag Quote & Reply

RoixukXXIIMemberPosts: 22 Wow was all I could say as I looked into the dreary eyes of Nuxoar. I never really had a formal introduction with him when I first joined the Organization. He was just there, like a wallflower. Seeing him now up-close and personal-"ish", made me feel kind of..................... uncomfortable.

Cosmog flew behind me in fear of Nuxoar's big appearance.I guess I'm not the only scared one.... "Hehe. Don't mind him. He just---not used to strangers." I tooked the Zanbato and examined it. "Hmmm...just a quick sharpen should do the trick." I said as I tried to avoid his eyes. I took out a hand-held sharpener from behind the counter and started to sharpen Nuxoar's Zanbato. A awkward silence fell upon the room....--Eyes Pealed...

"Seriously Muramura-san?" I sighed as I rubbed my temples to concentrate. "Yes I have Whetstone," I walked towards the back cage to grab the Whetstone, "but what I want to know," I said as I wrapped the Whetstone, "is why do YOU need a Sonic Bomb...?"

Before he could answer however, I heard a faint hello come from the metal door Muraxami fixed. "Ah, Neli-san (My new nickname for Nelixah) I'm so glad you could make..." I stopped in my tracks as I stared at the broken bow in Neli-san hand in astonishment as it was almost broken in half. A little tear escaped from my eyes. So sad...

"Pfft.." I tried to stifle in my laugh. "Wow..um," I held it in my hands as the two pieces that was binded by the small piece left of Oak Wood, bended to form a curvy "V" shape. "Darling, I don't think this can be salvaged, I mean look at this." I held it up to her for dramatic effect. "You would need some molecular structure to fix this, unless..."

Suddenly, I had an epiphany. I hurried towards the cage and started rummaging through. "AHA!" Having found what I was looking for I placed what would look like a small chunk of Iron Ore, down on the floor with a loud thud in front of the counter. "This, THIS might just save your bow."

I look at her with my head cocked to the side. I really don't unserstand anything. My mind went blank after she said my bow, my precious, my BABY, couldn't be save. I feel my eyes go almost moss green.

Reixal walks up to the repair shop after being summoned to do so. She walks up to the missing door to find Muraxami picking up the mess he made, Nelixah on the verge of tears, and Roixuk holding a piece of iron ore and a broken bow. Just a normal day in the repair shop ey?Reixal looked at Muraxami for a second, shook her head, then looked at Nelixah's bow."Cool, a bow; I dabbled with archery for a bit before I joined the organization." Shifting her eyes to Roixuk, who was holding a bit of iron. "What're you doin' with that?"Reixal moved to Muraxami, a tall man with purple hair and offered to hold the door in place while he mended the hinges.

"Why do i need a sonic bomb? To F**k up Kexan's nerves when i spare with him of course! XD a Sonic Bomb can F**k up anyone's nerves ._."Muraxami puts in the hinges while looking at Reixal and raises his eyebrow and sighs."Don't gimme that look T_T i "accidently" tripped >.> anyway nice to see you here xD"Mura fixes the door and goes to the counter and stares at Roix with a perplexed look..."OKAY, i got all the munni i need for the Whetstone n Sonic Bomb... AND who the hell came up with Mramura-san!? XD!"Puts the bag of munni on the table and looks at Reix smiling.

______________________________________________________________________________________________"The Beast has been awakened. .."

OOC: (ARGH!!! Sorry I have been away for like a millennium. AP Art sucks. Totally crammed with HW. WIll try to keep up to date with posting replies!!! )

"1st thing: I came up with Muramura-san. It fits you. 2: Whetstone is 200 munny, and lastly, if you want a sonic bomb I'll have to make it for you."

I then turn to Nelixah again. "Now back to your bow. This here is something I just harvested from a meteorite while I was cruising in my Gummi Ship. It's very peculiar. It looks like Iron but is malleable like lead. But here is the coolest thing, this thing has awesome 'fusing properties' as I call them, and can practically fuse with any type of material including wood. SO if I finish breaking your bow in half like this," I say as I un-shamefully break the rest of the bow, "then make a semicircle indent all the way through on both halves, once I melt this metal I will then be able to pour the liquid into that mold so that not only will you have the outer appearance of your old bow BUT it will be strengthened and enhanced to the core once the metal is set, fused and frozen solid by Cossy." I took a deep breath after that.

What a long explanation. "Oh and one more thing! Cossy!!!!" All of a sudden Cossy comes out with Sea Salt Ice-Cream for everyone in the shop."Thank you toots!" I say as I eskimo-kiss Cossy.

Noticing Nelixah's smiling fading at Kexan's entrance, I plan a date for when she can come pick up her bow so she could leave seeing as Kexan's presence seemed to make her uncomfortable. "You can come pick it up on Monday. If I get it done earlier I'll let you know so you can come by." Patting her on the shoulder I turn our back from the others and whisper, "If you ever need to talk I'm here."

Letting her go, I walk over to Clerxha with a big smile as I give her a big hug. "I'm so glad you came. Sorry the shop is so busy; There's usually not a lot of people that come by." Hearing Kexan call for me, I look back at Clerxha. "Being called again, but please make yourself at home, Cossy is giving out Sea Salt Ice Cream." I take three ice creams from Cossy and hand one to Clerxha.

"Hmmm...." I flipped through the pages of the book becoming very intrigued with this project. "Oh my. Hrmm...go into my office upstairs where we can talk about this privately. There are too many people down here and I'm not sure if you want everyone hearing about this."

"Okay let me just get the people out of here." I turn to face the people who were still in the shop. "Okay guys I gotta close now, so to all of you who have unanswered questions or concerns message me, otherwise amscray." I watched as everyone else left out the door. I placed a closed sign over the door knob and locked so no one would come in. I saw Cossy had fallen asleep already on the couch. I put a blanket over him and kissed his forehead.

I led Kexan to the office/bedroom space and closed the door behind us. "Sorry for the mess." There were blueprints thrown about the place. I threw them on the drafting table. I hopped onto my bed and started flipping through the book again. I sighed to myself in a tad bit of grief. I looked up from the book and noticed Kexan was still standing so I motioned for him to sit on the bed. "You do realize how ridiculously complex this is right?"

"Oh it'll be big alright," I looked at the blueprint again amazed with the concept. "There's just something I don't understand: how would it be powered? This isn't some toy you can just stick batteries in, though it is possible."

Reixal, who was upset she'd been pushed out, immediately pressed her face against the window and watched as Kexan and Roixuk went upstairs.

Well then, I wonder just what could be going on... She looks around in a suspicious manner and cancels out the sound around her as she kicks the already weakened door down. Good thing Muraxami broke this thing... Reixal slowly walks into the shop, making sure she continues to cancel out all of the noise she makes. Slowly walking up the stairs, she listens for Roixuk and Kexan's voices.

"You do realize how ridiculously complex this is right?" Reixal hears Roixuk say. Unable to actually see the blueprints, she simply continues listening to the conversation, dying of curiosity.

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Rules and Regs (Must Read)

Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:11 pm by Kexan XV

Rules and Regs of Org.+ Forums

Well hi there, Nobodies. This here, if you haven’t already figured out, is the Forum for the Org.+ Site. Yea, sure, a regular forum would just have sections for different topics like School, Life, Video Games, etc. etc., but around here, we do things a tad bit differently.

I’m introducing you all to an art form known as Roleplay; Otherwise known as Rp or “Arpee”. Don’t be scared now. Think of it as a type of game you play with words. You don’t have to be a great writer (though it helps), you just need basic grammar skills and a good imagination. What you’ll be doing is controlling your character with your words. His actions, thoughts, words, emotions…you will take on the Role of the character and Play as him. Get it? Rather simple, no? Well see, there has to be rules installed now, doesn’t there? Since we’re in the world of words, we need not only physical rules like gravity and strength, but social rules of bad language and vulgarity, as well as rules installed to make sure no character can be too powerful. So, let the rules commence:

1. Stay Thy Tongue.

Watch the foul language, kiddies. There are no age limits on this forum, and we don’t want to be responsible for some 6 year old reading the Eff word out loud so his parents overhear and get him in trouble. Be presentable with your text. Of course, the occasional “hell”, “damn”, and “ditch” can be slipped in for good measure, but do not overuse or abuse this privilege; and I hereby ban F-bombs.

2. Adorn Thy Speech

This can be summed up in two sentences: Use varied words, and no one-liners. Don’t be starting every sentence with “he” or “I”, and don’t put a sentence as a post. When you post your action, use some descriptive, creative, and imaginative language (for bad writers I recommend a thesaurus )and the minimum post rule will be 5 sentences; the more the better, of course, but make sure you don’t use run-on sentences or three page long essays, either.

3. Bunny Not Thy Neighbor

No Bunnying. Bunnying means controlling another player's actions. When you’re fighting, if the other person has not posted an action, you may not post it for them. Now, there’s a kind of exception to this rule. It’s one thing to say “I punch you in the gut, and as you keel over, I knee you in the face.” Keeling over is a natural reaction that is more than likely to happen, but of course, if the other character has enough time/space/reflex ability, he can simply dodge the first punch. But it’s a completely other thing to say “You punch me, and I grab your fist” If the person never punched. Don’t worry kids, I’ll be monitoring all posting and I’ll help you realize the lines to draw. You’ll get the hang of it soon enough.

4. Thou Art Not God

No Godmodding. Your character is not a god, he is a nobody. He does not have omnipotent power/speed/strength/magic/prana/energy or whatever else you can think of. There are limits. You cannot jump twenty stories, you cannot move faster than the speed of sound, you cannot dodge every attack, and you cannot land every hit. The basic rules of physics (as far as Kingdom Hearts goes) will apply strictly and I will be sure to monitor your actions. This is pretty much a common sense thing. Except for noobs, who have no common sense. They suck. I hate those. We should kill them.

5. Know Thy Place

Follow the rules, respect mods, and accept the consequences for breaking the rules. Now of course I’ll be lenient for people who don’t know how to Arpee yet, and I’ll just tell them when they make a mistake and ask them to correct it, but c’mon guys you’re not babies. No obsessive swearing, be grammatical and lengthy, don’t control other ppl’s posts and don’t play like you can’t lose. Any violation of the rules will result in:

A) A strict and direct warning

B) A suspension of Posting Privileges

C) A suspension of your account

D) Account Deletion

Any deleted accounts will go up in a Hall of Shame where we can all laugh and point fingers at the nooblets who thought they could stand up to mods. Hehehe.

Sorry but we’re only half way done now. We still need to worry about the Regs:

1. Posteth Twice Not

No Double-Posting. If you make a post, you are not allowed to make another one until someone else does. And if there are a lot of people involved in the thread, be nice and let everyone post at least once before you post a second time.

2. Thou Art Not Omnipresent

You can’t be in two places at once. If your character is currently practicing in the Training Room of the HQ, he can’t suddenly appear where a bad guy pops up to attack. He has to first find out about whatever else is going on, then you have write him leaving wherever he’s at, and then write him arriving at the new place. Now, traveling between worlds isn’t too much of an issue, we kinda teleport with the black stuff. (Which, by the way, you aren’t allowed to do in battle.)

3. Thou Mightst Not Maketh Thine Own Plots

No sub-plots. This means that if you don’t have permission to, you cannot start doing your own thing, making your own bad guys, having your own problems, or going to worlds all on your own etc. WE make the storyline, not you. Unless we ask you to.

4. Know Thy Place Part Two

Again, listen to the mods and obey the rules. The diff between a rule and a reg is that rules are set up to be followed for the betterment of the forum/site. Regs are set up to regulate, or keep under control, the on goings of the forum/site. Something that’s the same, however, is that breaking a reg constitutes the same penalties as breaking a rule.

Now that the painful dose of authority is dealt with…

HAVE FUN!! ^-^

(But obey the stinkin rules >.>)

∞. Additional Rules

1. Characters with under 100 posts within 6 months will be deleted. This means their posts will be kept on site and replaced by guest.

2. Number assignments for the Numbered will be assigned by admins/mods in order that we may fill in the ranks accordingly.

3. Character sheets are going to be reviewed and approved/edited. Failure to comply with changes will result in either a ban or deletion.

4. If your posts do not follow the requirements, you will get warning PMs. If you continue to not follow the rules, you will be banned for a period of time based upon the severity.

5. Continuing to not follow rules after being banned will result in your character being deleted/permanently banned.

6. Changing your character sheet, mid-fight, is considered cheating and will not be allowed.