hey hon :) lovely chapter. (: ahh. i was looking through titles and your story title and user got me interested D am i glad i read your story :) good luck with the rest of the story. this is a thumbs up !

hey, i hope you make long and new chapters! it seems like a good story line and is a good and interseting subject (lots of stuff to write about that is)the only thing i might sugest is that you astablish the ages...i would assume around 17? well, so far so good! ill be waiting for the next chapter!