V. Pascoe Fiction

Monday, September 2, 2013

This is for Desi, who wanted to know what really happened. Otherwise, I
doubt I’d write this-reality-to-fiction synopsis of “A Scientist’s Conclusion.” I began this commentary back in May, but summer got in the way of finishing it. (The story begins here in case you want to read it through before reading this.) Anyway, here's the story of the story.

Many years
ago, when I was doing a post-doctoral stint (those two years were the nadir of
my life), I happened upon a newspaper story in the Philadelphia Inquirer about
a Chinese graduate student in the biomedical sciences who shot his advisor. I
no longer remember the details of the story, but I do remember thinking, “One
day I want to write a story about a graduate student who kills his advisor.”
That probably reflected the grimness of my life at the time. I thought I should be able to depict the
difficulty, the poverty, the isolation, the confusion, the demands, as well as the
indifference verging on contempt suffered by many graduate students in the
sciences, who endure a slave-like existence, living in fear that all their work may
be in vain, knowing that half the students in the program never obtain the sought-after
degree – flunking out or becoming too dispirited to continue.

I didn’t write
the story then, and I later moved, got a decent job in a good lab, worked
hard, published, and eventually became a graduate advisor in my own right. My
first graduate student was a hand-me-down (as in the story) who had not
performed well on his oral exam in another department and had been denied further
study there. However, he was rescued by a faculty member in my
department, who shortly thereafter took a job elsewhere and who begged me to
take on this student. And yes, he was Chinese and had language difficulties.

I worked very
hard with him. I mean, VERY hard. You have no idea how hard. And yes, we had
difficulty with communication and with the very idea of what it means to do
science. We did, indeed, have an issue once with the idea of experimental controls. We
were picking out photos for his dissertation, and we couldn’t find a good photo
to illustrate a particular cell type in control animals. He showed me a photo
that looked pretty good, but when I found out it had actually come from an
experimental animal, I exploded. [Of such actions is scientific fraud born (and
believe me, there’s enough of that out there already).] He somehow seemed
unable to understand why that was taboo or why I was so upset. He later told
a fellow student that I had "blown him up” (meaning, I had blown up at him).

When the time for his dissertation defense approached, as we were working on his
presentation, he happened to mention that one of his fellow countryman had
killed his advisor when he didn’t pass his defense. I viewed that
as something of a veiled threat. However, he did all right on the defense (as a
colleague said, “That was C…’s finest hour.”), and he obtained the Ph.D. Whew.

So I decided
to write the story from a faculty advisor's point of view, but I also wanted
to make the student seem sympathetic. The student in the story became Korean, which
was odd because later (after retirement), I spent two years in Korea. Of
course, in the story nobody wins. But I wanted to tell the story anyway.

About Me

Grew up in Michigan, lived in Syracuse, NY, Philadelphia, PA., and Charleston, SC. B.A., M.S., Ph.D. in biology, chemistry, anatomy. Taught, did research, and published in biomedical sciences. Professor at MUSC in Charleston, SC. Mother of three and grandmother of six.

Has lived in six countries on three continents, and has traveled in twenty five other countries around the globe, visiting every continent except Antarctica. Active in UU church. Phi Beta Kappa, Who's Who in America, the World. Has written two books--one on comparative religion and one on adventures in Korea.