Reworked panels from Vampire Masquerade.* Too awkward to be menacing. Replaced it with a full-body frame.* First panel in Ragnild's room. Replaced with a wider establishing shot.* Too joke-y for a somber moment.* This whole strip had the vampires showing . . . let's say . . . uncharacteristic respect for physical autonomy. Redid it so Imri picks Iona up. Besides, she looks braver when you can tell that she's not protected by any self-imposed boundaries on the vampires' part.

Reworked panel from Fish Story. * I drew this for the Holly-and-Ivy side of the day, then drew the Leif-and-Thorn side and realized their positions should be different at this point. You can find the exact replacement panel -- it's the one that's the same in both Fish Story and An Incredibly Platonic Storyline.