THIS WAS DRAWN ON MY IPOD TOUCH. i put it in caps cause some ppl dont read the description. well i finally drew something. gosh it has been a while since i submitted anything here. i am going to try to draw more, i had gotten into a funk, but i think i did pretty good on this one.

Wow. This is just amazing. Especially that you did this on your iPod touch.I am just so mesmerized by the detail and everything about this photo.The moon shining details are phenomenal! Even how you drew the stars is just beautiful.The shading is just perfect. You just knew exactly where the shading belonged, it's just amazing!Her mane is beautifully drawn and colored. I adore the effect that you did with her mane along with the kinda clear part and the sparkles.Her eyes are wonderful just, there are no eyelashes; it almost makes her look like a guy. But, I understand why you were to do that on an iPod.Other than that, this is amazing!Keep up the good work!

Nice job. This is quite cute and I'm impressed you can draw so well on one of those touch devices.

I like that you are quite consistent on your lighting. I like your background the blurring of the moon and her dancing on the waters. I like her eye and how it feels like she might cry. It lends the piece sad yet lovely.

Though it may just be a matter of style on this, you should start to see her forelegs a little bit even if it is just shadows. It will make it more clear as to what it is. I thought at first it was Luna as a Lapras (silly me).

Now a much bigger issue is the brightness of that moon. Yes the moon is bright and yes it is pretty white, but it feels too bright especially for this piece. It actually huts my eyes a bit. While I love that you included the moon and the reflection off the water I suggest turning down the brightness to a light to medium grey. Especially with the effects you have on it it is extremely bright and makes me feel like I'm looking at Sirius more than the Moon. Turning it down would make it easier on the eyes.