Rumpelstiltskin is (obviously) my favorite story ever! I could hug you! No, I WILL hug you *hugs*! I am positively beside myself with elation!

The idea of a Deal-Maker is perfect. It fits with the type of creature you are portraying.

I am assuming from the line "I'm the only one this world has" that you are introducing the idea of multiple/alternate worlds. The idea alone made my skin crawl with excitement. It also served as a one-line proclamation of just how lonely the life of a Deal-Maker must be.

I think you did a fantastic job overall. The narrative is lovely and reveals the Deal-Maker's personality. Even the minor mentions of what it is supposed to be and do provide the readers with plenty of detail.

I thought this was going to be a one-shot until I got to your AN. You are going to make this, if only a bit, longer!? I'm on board! So, I will be waiting for an update! n.n

I'M SO HAPPY!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: It's one of my favorites, too. I was so happy to get it. :D *hugs*

The idea is that he believes there could be other things out there. With everything he's seen and done and knows about, it wouldn't be a surprise to him. And yes, it's a very lonely life, being the only Deal-Maker... that he knows of. ;)

There will be more, four chapters maybe. I just have to finish planning it, then I can add it to my writing list. Thank you so much for leaving a review!