Well, damn! You are a very disturbed writer. I like it! I don't know where you got the inspiration for this very disturbed story, reminds me a lot of Yugi Oh. This is an amazing complex one-shot. Gods, it must have taken you forever to write this! I wonder if you'll ever explain things like where Dursley got the box and stuff. Ah, well I like it.

Amazing, just simply amazing. That was a breathtaking experience, one I'm glad I was able to enjoy. That was, by far, one of the best stories I've ever read. It had me unable to stop until I finished. Your development of Harry, from the frightened little boy, to the cold and calculating adult was superb, I applaud you. However I will say that the sudden pairing of Harry and Hermione was both sudden and seemed to be inserted merely spur of the moment. Still an extremely well done story though.