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This brought a little moisture to my green peepers!
You set the mood, wonderfully.

"your arms wrap around me like a python
your hug
is like a choke-hold

of our burning bliss

that is this scene

that is us"

That is easily my favorite part. It's so comfortable and safe, I started to remember
what that feeling was like. I can't thank you enough for that!

Posted 2 Years Ago

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, Van Mark!
A fragment from a different time, still a morsel of good.. read moreThanks for checking it out, Van Mark!
A fragment from a different time, still a morsel of goodness? ;)
I won't spam you anymore lol

10 Months Ago

10 Months Ago

This brought a little moisture to my green peepers!
You set the mood, wonderfully.

"your arms wrap around me like a python
your hug
is like a choke-hold

of our burning bliss

that is this scene

that is us"

That is easily my favorite part. It's so comfortable and safe, I started to remember
what that feeling was like. I can't thank you enough for that!

Posted 2 Years Ago

Rating /100

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

2 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, Van Mark!
A fragment from a different time, still a morsel of good.. read moreThanks for checking it out, Van Mark!
A fragment from a different time, still a morsel of goodness? ;)
I won't spam you anymore lol

Posted 3 Years Ago

OMG! I CAN'T RESIST TO WRITE MY REVIEW IN ALL CAPS LOCK. THIS IS VERY BEAUTIFUL. EVERY WORD PASSES THROUGH MY VEINS LIKE I AM REALLY AMAZED. THIS IS BREATH-TAKING. LOVE- THE CONCEPT, WAS PERFECTLY ILLUSTRATED BY THOSE WORDS. THE FORMAT AND THE FLOW...WOW! NO DOUBT WHY THIS WAS VIEWED AND REVIEWED MANY TIMES.

EXCELENTE!

Posted 4 Years Ago

There's a lot here to explore = a mood and feeling that slips through the piece.

As a little note - one thing that stood out as odd.... pixel x pixel - It draws in the whole co-ordinate thing - all the x,y pixel stuff - makes me thing of Jpeg artifacts and bitmap rendering - screen sizes and things like that - to me it jumps out of the rest of the poem as anachronistic and strange.

I really like the break and return near the end with two steams - that's lovely - not to mention the myriad of beautiful turns of phrase - the surf struggles and collapses - pallid skeletal light. And the immediate, close nature of the wet panties - it's a touch - both mundane and brave - in the midst of the more abstract nature of the poem as a whole that stands out as physical and sexual - I really like it.

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I read you ... in my head I hear "Yup! a true LA Poet!" Why this is I cannot say. Nothing here is pretty or shimmers, or is sad or wistful, glittering or glamorous or even remotely pretty. Rather it is all raw and harsh and painful - but I am drawn to it all, and find myself loving it. Not a real reviewer, or even a poet myself. Just wander around writing my impressions. For what they are worth. Thanks for these.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your work is indeed poignant. Everything is so palpable, so real. You have a masterful diction, and an abundance of creativity. You paint pictures with your words so effectively, it makes me tingle! You, good sir, remind me of Pablo Neruda. You take "Sex" "love" and "lust" and turn into something unfathomably exquisite.
Encore!