BrikWars Forum

The Magic SOB forum is for posts of story sequences that are frequently vignette-based. Put those here while actual battle reports can go in Reports From the Field.You must talk like James T. Kirk in this forum at all times. Leonard Nimoy is fine too.

PHOTOGRAPHY: 5/5. Very clear and I could understand everything that was going on like Bonn-o-Tron.MINIFIGS: 4.5/5. I liked the Traedorian troops. WRITING: 3.5/5. I liked that it didn't rely on the writing to convey action, but the dialogue could have been better done.TITLE: 5/5.OVERALL APPEAL: 4/5.

Photography: 4.5/5The pictures themselves were of decent quality, as were the effects, but I got annoyed by all the debris in the pictures.Minifigs: 4.5/5I had to take a half-point off because the main character (the diplomat) is a stock minifigure. Other than that the others were creative and nicely designed. Writing: 3.5The writing wasn’t anything spectacular, and if anything seemed a bit choppy being one line per picture. However, it seemed to me that you tried to convey the action more through pictures than the words, so I took that into consideration. There were also some typos and grammatical/stylistic errors (“meeting’s beginning [is awkward]”, “assimilat”, “climbin”, etc.). Title: 4.5/5This is pretty pass/fail for me, although the phrase “when diplomacy fails” seems very common and could have been chosen better. It is very germane to the report, though.Overall Appeal: 4.5/5This SOB entry generally left a good taste in my mouth. It was nicely done and on a professional level with a good storyline.

Photography: 4, The random crap at the edge of each photo was a little distracting and you porbably could have used better lighting, but other than that it was pretty good.Minifigs: 5, Those Tredorians and Luchardsko guards have really nice uniforms.Writing: 4Title: 3Overall Appeal: 4