It is About Me Now

Below is the poem entitled It is About Me Now which was written by poet
Shining
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It is About Me Now

clouds are pouring none stop,
bearing their all,
emotions suppressed,
after a very long time,
giving her the chance to do the same..
walking in the energetic train,
of love so deep,
now lost,
tears of joy,
being grateful for all elements,
humbled by adversity
trying force me to grow up at age 26,
i know my fate,
the destiny i create,
painted canvas reflect my soul,
with open wings
waiting to embrace my heart
i am roshan from the blue skies,
excellent and thorough in what i do,
the hand that points a finger at me,
has four fingers pointing
right back at you
now that I have said my say
let me be to live my life

I love your poem. I have had people try to hang clouds over me. I was 26 when I graduated from community college back in 2007. That said I have one more year to finish my BA in English and Writing at the age of 33 I'm successful despite the odds that were/are set against me. I understood your poem because I related to most of the themes and motifs. Good job!