Uninvited

'Like anyone worthy, I am flattered by your fascination with me...' Hiro purred in her ear, brushing a strand of her golden hair behind one delicately pointed ear. 'Like any hot blooded woman I absently wanted an object to crave ... but you, you're not allowed, you're uninvited...' Fiona tried to object, but was swept away by his touch, his whispers... (Dialog lyrics copyright Alanis Morrisette, 'Uninvited') This is a scene from a story I'm thinking about starting. The girl is a princess, and the man (oh so sexy) is a halfbreed bastard. They'd both been warned not to see each other, and that's why Hiro has that devilish grin on his face - he just gone against the Royale Sky family's strict rules, and he's loving it. I was also was experimenting with a different body pose than simply standing upright. I need to practice massively. And don't comment on her hand, hehe, I know it majorly sucks. Other than that, leave any constructive critisism (or praise!)you'd like. This is my favorite piece, so far. Mediums: Ebony pencil, hand-inked, coloured pencils, and a bit of digital help to clean it up.