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TrueImmortalDevil: Yeah ... he should abduct ahem i mean arrest Hancock and go look for luffy ... and show that he found luffy to hancock :) and say "He dies or you become my slave" then when she accept and they leave he should kill luffy and take his head :) then use hancock as a breeding sow hehehe😈 and when shes about to give birth ... show her the rotting head of luffy or frozen head ... either one is fine ... couse either one would break her mind

FallenCat: Mc who go to another world just for opening restaurant? I will recommend you to read gourmet in another world Mc who go to another world to be a teacher?I will recommend you to read Library of Heaven PathMc who go to another world and become a student?Seriously there is a lot of cultivation novel here, even i will recommend you to read all of them.Mc who doing romance all the day?I will recommend you to read female protagonists book

This is my book, and you know nothing about my plan, you didn't even know how i will progress, really, i was not naive enough to use your unreasonable demands for this and that in story i write, and i didn't have responsibility to make a satisfying novel for you.

You need to delete my book because it will make your superior English getting worse.

ArcumVitus: "Message from God : 0.0001 of my power is enough to make you 1,000,000x stronger right now so don't think it's not a lot" If we assume that God's 0.0001% soul is 1,000,000 times stronger than Mc's soul, 100% of God's soul is 1,000,000,000,000 times Mc soul, or 10^12. Spiritual Lock needs a 10x stronger soul, so to effect god Mc would need to multiply his soul by 10^13. Booster Pill can double Mc's soul every 10 seconds. Doing math, Mc would need to double his soul 44 times (2^44) to be able to Spiritual Lock God. Doubling 44 times would take 7 minutes 20 seconds. Giving Mc the benefit of the doubt, he could successfully use Spiritual Lock on God in 2 minutes 40 seconds after having the appropriate soul power. This would mean a 10 minute Booster Pill. Moral of the Story, Mc needs to use 3 specific wishes. Wish 1 is a 10 minute Booster Pill. Wish 2 is for Mc to have his body handle infinite soul strength for 10 minutes. Wish 3 is for Mc to devour any soul he can spiritual lock. Obviously, MC will have to split the 3 wishes over time so God doesn't realize. And this is totally pointless because most likely MC's dad will stop him. Just wanted to do the math though with the 3 factors obvious (Boost pill, Spiritual Lock, and Comparison of God's soul). **-Even if God has a more powerful soul, there most likely will be an hour boost pill in the system.

True_Equality: I am happy you addressed the fact he said he didn't want to join the revolutionary army because 'politics', but then go and changes a whole country's political climate and system. Also, the fact you said something about the marksmanship training and how he hasn't even used a gun since(not 100% sure) was also nice. Most Author's would just say '**** it' and not care what was said earlier in a story for convenience. Good job.

Better fast pace then slow where it would take a few chapters to finish a flight for example.
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Supreme_Leader: That escalated quickly.Thta was too fast even for me. And I like fast paced stories.

Your writing is not bad and is understandable but it could improve.

I would suggest adding more descriptions to things like.How someone reacts to something happeninghow their facial expressions areHow they feelTheir surroundings if necessary.Although you don't have to go into details.

Supreme_Leader: That escalated quickly.Thta was too fast even for me. And I like fast paced stories.

Your writing is not bad and is understandable but it could improve.

I would suggest adding more descriptions to things like.How someone reacts to something happeninghow their facial expressions areHow they feelTheir surroundings if necessary.Although you don't have to go into details.

Supreme_Leader: Instead of starting from before 1 year he should have started from when the MC was still a kid like 5 year old or something.

That way there would been no sudden personality shift that would make people suspect him (like his parents)And more time to train.

I think his wishes are good. Besides there there too many fictions and too many powers to choose from.I don't think I would have done better than him since not everyone can remember every fiction they have watched or read at a moment's notice.

Although one of my choices would have been a cross between 'The Gamer' system and the system from 'The strongest system' plus a Shop or lottery system with points like from 'I am really a superstar'

The Gamer has -Stat points which effect the body and mindGamer mindGamer bodyInstant dungeonsItems drops from enemies

The strongest system allows the skills and techniques to evolve unlimited times

Prashant_Limbu: Ha HaHaHa HAHAHAHAHA I was so engrossed imagining two 3 yrs olds fighting and time space breaking, when in reality finding that they are rolling in the sandpit my belly ached as ****..Naturally I'm keeping my voice down its 12:28 AM.

MonkeySage: "Their fists broke space, time itself was bent, fists of the immortal emperor, the 500 Phoenix YIn-Yang, the thousand fists of the angry Buddha....." LOL, hands down this is the funniest fight in history of novels

TheFluffyMan: If I was Dragon,I dare said that I definitely spawn some pokemon just for the sake of confusing my dear son.....Like,"WTF is wrong with that rabbit,or mouse???!!!!Its yellow????!!!!!And it throw out lightin??!!!Darn,my dad is some crazy guy....

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