First of all, subject matter aside, this poem has such a natural rhythm to it that I didn’t even realize until I was finished, that I was tapping my toe to it as I read. I love it. It just flows. A little music, and you’ll need a band to play it. 🙂 As for the content, that unfortunately, is a dead on perfect description of my own family when I was a youngster (which is a very long time ago) 😉 Hmph, some things just never change I guess.

db, (ironically enough my partners initials), I l always look forward to your responses. You always give me such a great insight, descriptive insight as to how you perceive the poems. I almost hold my breath when I see one come in! It is like getting your test handed back from the teacher and hoping you passed! Thank you!!!!! Hugs, H.

I like commenting on your poetry because your poetry appeals to me, but I’m not really any kind of critic or anything, in fact, I don’t think I believe in critics. Lol. Mainly, I’m just trying to tell you what I like about the wonderful work you do. Keep on writing. 🙂