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14 thoughts on “The Future Prospects”

This line, ‘Aye, aye, that’s the way to be the superhero.’, brought a smile to my face. Your piece has such a lively tone that I can actually hear a loud voice reciting it in my head. Your chiasmi flowed well with the rhyme scheme too. Well written!

I liked the build up … the anticipation in this poem. From starting out, to wondering what the future will be, to hopefully nice surprises. I’ve enjoyed your poetry, and wish you all the best in your writing projects!