I notice you use a lot of hyphens... Just so you know, a single hyphen ( - ) is meant to connect compound words, whereas a double hyphen ( - ) is what you use to pause between parts of a sentence (but don't want to use commas, parentheses, brackets, colons, semicolos, etc.)

Not trying to be nitpicky, just wanting to help you with those pesky pointless grammar rules. _

See, stories like this are the reason you're on my (admittedly short) favorite authors list. Adorable, in-character, pushing boundaries but not breaking them... How I wish I had your talent! Ah, but this is just the rant of a fan. Needless to say, I loved the story. Beautiful.

Beautiful. Though I am surprised at the convenient lack of bandages adorning either demon. Since it took Toguro so long to carry in the new battle stage (long enough for Hiei to wake up from hibernation), wouldn't Kurama have bandaged himself up in that time?