Reviewer: Jules_411SignedDate: 03/17/06
Title: Chapter 1: The One and Only

I think you did a nice job. You captured some of the intensity of the battle and you were very descriptive. Here are just a few things that stuck out to me:
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Voldemort bowed, shocked, recognizing for the first time ever that Harry was now his equal, or possibly even his superior. [/i]
I think it is a bit unlikely that Voldemort would think of Harry as his equal. Maybe he could have bowed with an amused look on his face, like he was just mocking Harry.
[i]Cho Chang lay next to a fallen Death Eater; as did Michael Corner, Seamus Finnegan, Dean Thomas, and even Luna Lovegood, the girl everyone made fun of was lying behind Neville, she had obviously died protecting Neville. Brave Neville, thankfully stood amongst them all, wand pointed at the now limp body of Bellatrix Lestrange. [/i]
This sentence was a bit of a run-on and maybe instead of using the name 'Neville' you could add a pronoun. Here is what I mean.
[i]and even Luna Lovegood, the girl everyone made fun of[b],[/B] was lying behind Neville[b].[/b] she had obviously died protecting [b]him[/b][/i]
Okay, I am hoping these codes will work and I don't look like a really stupid person who puts random codes in the middle of the sentence. So, what I did was I added a comma after the phrase 'made fun of', I placed a period after 'lying behind Neville', and I added a 'him' and took out 'Neville' during the last part.
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Ginny stared into the fire, unable to breathe, wondered if she would ever breathe again. Her chest was constricted with pain, her breathing harsh, when she felt it. She felt like she was being wrapped in the tightest hug of her life.
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I really liked this description. It captured Ginny's emotions very well.
I hope this sort of helped, and all in all, I really liked your fic! Nice job and I look forward to reading some of your other works.

Summary: 6th year. Harry and Ginny's friendship quickly turns into something more and they have to struggle through the Second War together. Trials and tribulations, drama, cuteness, excitement and a chunk of mystery. Now completed with over 6000 reads! Thank you!

Summary: Harry, Hermione, Luna and Snape have all been accidentally locked up in a dungeon at Hogwarts with know way of making communication with the outside world. Who will go mad first? When will Luna stop fingering her damned Butter beer necklace? How many fights will Harry and Snape endure before one discovers the use of a silencing charm? And, most importantly, what was that mysterious ball of light?
I’m crazy. This was a challenge submitted by Seren and can be viewed on MNFF forums at http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=14. Attempt it and you can be crazy too!

Summary: This a story about Harry and his friends in their 6th year. It take's place after JK's OOTP. THe charaters and concept belong to JK Rowling and I am just using her great works as an output for waiting for her next book.

I do think you will enjoy this story. I have gotten many positive reviews. Alot of reviewer says it reads like if JKR wrote it herself. I am not that good, but I do appreciate the kind review.

This is an action adventure, with a touch of romance. I have tried to stay true to JK' orginal works, but there could be inconsistancies. Forgive me, for I am merely a muggle.

Reviewer: Jules_411SignedDate: 08/09/05
Title: Harry Potter and the Balancers of Death: Book 6

I loved this story! It is one of my favorites! If you and JKRowling worked together for another book, it would be the best one yet!! Oh, and did you ever say what curse Sirius put on Harry and what blessing Minerva put as the countercurse?

Summary: Harry is looking forward to spending Christmas at The Burrow, but there's an unexpected present under the mistletoe which comes as a bit of a surprise... A lot of fluff, a little anger and copious amounts of happiness!
Set in the trio's 6th year, Ginny's 5th.

Summary: A shock comes at the end of Hermione's fifth year and it will forever change her life. As she and her friends enter their sixth year, amid the second war, a frightening prophecy is made. A prophecy which will alter the Wizarding World and bring about a Christmas no one will forget.

May I use your story O Holy Night to make a soundtrack for, for an assignment on the Forums. If you dont know what I;m talkin about, then go to the forums, go to the Great Hall, than click on Sticky: Quarterly Assignment- Fanfiction Soundtracks.
Thanks!

May I use your story O Holy Night to make a soundtrack for, for an assignment on the Forums. If you dont know what I;m talkin about, then go to the forums, go to the Great Hall, than click on Sticky: Quarterly Assignment- Fanfiction Soundtracks.
Thanks!

Summary: After Sirius' death Harry is in his own private world of misery, but with Ginny's love and a plan to bring together his best friends, he is brought back to reality with much more than he expected...

Summary: Mere weeks after OOTP's end, we find Harry in his room. He is unwilling to do anything but lie in bed, demoralized by the loss of Sirius. That is until he receives a letter. This is an AU fiction with some anghst and pairings of Hermione/Ron and Ginny/Harry. Humor is my primary focus however. Story complete. There is a sequel: "The Deepest, Most-Desired Wish." You can find it in the Dark/ Angsty section.

Summary: Voldemort attacks the Potters, James and Lily try to protect their beloved baby boy. Then suddenly they're in a house they do not know. Harry isn't with them and they don't know what happened. Where are they? And who are the redhead children running down the stairs? Why have they been sent?
The story is placed in the future, years after Voldemort's death, but danger is still lurking.
Features Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione.

Joint winner in the genfic category of the Multifaceted Fanfiction Awards

wow, that was so good! This story is awesome! Ok, who was Harry's friend who saved his life from Voldemort? Did I completely forget what happened in the books or are you going to get to that later? Just wondering because I thought I might have missed something. anyway, great story! i would read more now, but it is midnight, so i'll be back!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you think so. And no, you didn't miss something from the books. You'll find out more later...