Rated 1.5 / 5 stars2008-01-06 11:05:25

Funkyjunky Review

Quickly I would like to point out - "Old Movies" - Tend to be black and white, whilst your movie was in color.

Ok Done.

The animation was good, but not in an original style. Although it was a silent movie, Silent movies tended to have a musical background - (it used to be played by a pianist in the cinema!) And the lack of sound made me loose my attention.

I would reccomend you spend a little more time learning how to make old silent movie effects! (There is a good example in one of David Firth's Burnt Face Man Episodes I believe! - The one where the narrator is destroyed)

Rated 2 / 5 stars2007-12-28 15:46:57

Attitude

I think the animation in the movie was pretty good.
However I think your comments in the "Author Comments" section are unneccersiry.

I think for me, I didnt really want to watch the movie after reading that.
It gave the impression that you have a bad attitude, which im sure you don't...
But that brought the score down here.
What could of been a 6/10 is now a 4/10.

Rated 4 / 5 stars2007-12-15 11:49:52

Rated 1 / 5 stars2007-10-22 07:33:40

Getting Noticed for all the wrong reasons.

You said: "Poject used simple tweens, and minimal actionscript.
Just a quick project to see whether I can manage to get noticed on Newgrounds"

The Problems:

"...simple tweens...minimal actionscript..." - You need to take some tutorials to leanr how to tween properly (please dont use shape tweens anymore!) and to learn actionscript. Not that you needed AS in this movie but it would have looked far better with a preloader, or a menu etc.

"too see if i can get noticed on Newgrounds..." - With that? The only way you are going to get noticed on Newgrounds is by making something great and original. Your half way there with original but maybe this about the plot a bit more. Find a subject people want to see. Unfortunalty this is usually porn or violence!

If you REALLY want to get noticed, Joing the BBS and make new friends, you will meet people that can help you and will want to help you.

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars2007-10-22 07:22:34

Slow, but you show some talent

For a change its not the art im going to criticse.
You arent so bad at the old drawing.
However the storyline was slow and boring.
Almost so bad i wanted to laugh nerviously becuase i didnt know what to think.