>>546894Anon, I think your main problem is that you probably aren't seeing all the posts. If you are just viewing [s4s] through the /s4s/ board, you don't see the green posts, the posts with letters in their ids, or anything numberless. Together, those make up about 40-70 percent of [s4s], depending on the day. So conversation will appear disjointed and spastic, because you won't be getting the full picture.

I actually just flipped over to the /s4s/ interface to make this post, and it's pretty funny how unintelligible [s4s] is like this.

>>562805Well the first thing you're gonna want to do is go to /ic/ since that's for real critique. Since you're already here, though, I'll point out some basic stuff that I though was off. I'm not going to pretend like I know what I'm doing, I'm just trying to help.The nose and lips are out of line. Drafting first would help, and you'd benefit a lot from the classic + or t shape over the head to get your features arranged properly. Just don't shoot for perfect symmetry because that's unnatural.The presence of the philtrum is very strong. Yours is a )( shape instead of columnar like most are.Lips don't stop as abruptly as those do. Just look at a bunch of mouths to get a general idea.Is there a reason you've put a crease above one eye and not the other? Also, the eyes are at different angles, and there's a whole damn masonry brush worth of eyelashes on each eye. Is she supposed to have no eyebrows and a pencil neck? The neck also sticks out hard to the right.The face has a slight skew, and the hair looks like a block that frames a face with no cheekbones at all, or she has a very wide face.Your mouth shows no teeth on the bottom and is positioned low on the face, which makes me thing her lower jaw is very thin.