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Australia's poor human rights record
Jim McIlroy, Brisbane
26 May 2007
BRISBANE — “Australia is the only Western democracy without human rights legislation”, James
Whelan from Amnesty International told a public forum attended by 50 people on May 23.
Labor state minister for education Dean Wells argued for a charter of human rights like those
adopted in Victoria and the ACT and that which has been operating for 17 years in New
Zealand. Such a charter requires a statement of compatibility with human rights to
accompany every bill that comes before parliament.
Jessica Moore, who faced police investigation in Wollongong last year under the so-called anti-
terror laws, pointed out that state Labor governments have been collaborating with the
federal Coalition to implement the draconian laws. Moore, an anti-war activist who has
helped organise demonstrations in support of Palestinians’ right to self-determination, was
accused of aiding Hamas in an anonymous complaint to the federal government’s anti-terror
hotline.
“My experience shows that police are political, ideological. These anti-terror laws are totally
against free speech”, Moore said. She urged people to collectively defy the laws and
mobilise against them. “We need to campaign for a bill of human rights to protect our
freedoms.”

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Australia's poor human rights
record
Jim McIlroy, Brisbane
26 May 2007
BRISBANE — “Australia is the only Western democracy without human rights legislation”, James Whelan from Amnesty
International told a public forum attended by 50 people on May 23.
Labor state minister for education Dean Wells argued for a charter of human rights like those adopted in Victoria and the
ACT and that which has been operating for 17 years in New Zealand. Such a charter requires a statement of
compatibility with human rights to accompany every bill that comes before parliament.
Jessica Moore, who faced police investigation in Wollongong last year under the so-called anti-terror laws, pointed out that
state Labor governments have been collaborating with the federal Coalition to implement the draconian laws. Moore, an
anti-war activist who has helped organise demonstrations in support of Palestinians’ right to self-determination, was
accused of aiding Hamas in an anonymous complaint to the federal government’s anti-terror hotline.
“My experience shows that police are political, ideological. These anti-terror laws are totally against free speech”, Moore
said. She urged people to collectively defy the laws and mobilise against them. “We need to campaign for a bill of
human rights to protect our freedoms.”

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the headline
Australia's poor human rights record
by Jim McIlroy
26 May 2007
BRISBANE — “Australia is the only Western democracy without human rights legislation”, James
Whelan from Amnesty International told a public forum attended by 50 people on May 23.
Labor state minister for education Dean Wells argued for a charter of human rights like those
adopted in Victoria and the ACT and that which has been operating for 17 years in New
Zealand. Such a charter requires a statement of compatibility with human rights to
accompany every bill that comes before parliament.
Jessica Moore, who faced police investigation in Wollongong last year under the so-called anti-
terror laws, pointed out that state Labor governments have been collaborating with the
federal Coalition to implement the draconian laws. Moore, an anti-war activist who has
helped organise demonstrations in support of Palestinians’ right to self-determination, was
accused of aiding Hamas in an anonymous complaint to the federal government’s anti-terror
hotline.
“My experience shows that police are political, ideological. These anti-terror laws are totally
against free speech”, Moore said. She urged people to collectively defy the laws and
mobilise against them. “We need to campaign for a bill of human rights to protect our
freedoms.”

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Australia's poor human rights record
Jim McIlroy, Brisbane
26 May 2007
BRISBANE — “Australia is the only Western democracy without human rights legislation”, James
Whelan from Amnesty International told a public forum attended by 50 people on
May 23.
Labor state minister for education Dean Wells argued for a charter of human rights like those
adopted in Victoria and the ACT and that which has been operating for 17 years in New
Zealand. Such a charter requires a statement of compatibility with human rights to
accompany every bill that comes before parliament.
Jessica Moore, who faced police investigation in Wollongong last year under the so-called anti-
terror laws, pointed out that state Labor governments have been collaborating with the
federal Coalition to implement the draconian laws. Moore, an anti-war activist who has
helped organise demonstrations in support of Palestinians’ right to self-determination, was
accused of aiding Hamas in an anonymous complaint to the federal government’s anti-terror
hotline.
“My experience shows that police are political, ideological. These anti-terror laws are totally
against free speech”, Moore said. She urged people to collectively defy the laws and
mobilise against them. “We need to campaign for a bill of human rights to protect our
freedoms.”

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Australia's poor human rights record
Jim McIlroy, Brisbane
26 May 2007
BRISBANE — “Australia is the only Western democracy without
human rights legislation”, James Whelan from Amnesty International told a public forum
attended by 50 people on May 23.
Labor state minister for education Dean Wells argued for a charter of human rights like those
adopted in Victoria and the ACT and that which has been operating for 17 years in New
Zealand. Such a charter requires a statement of compatibility with human rights to
accompany every bill that comes before parliament.
Jessica Moore, who faced police investigation in Wollongong last year under the so-called anti-
terror laws, pointed out that state Labor governments have been collaborating with the
federal Coalition to implement the draconian laws. Moore, an anti-war activist who has
helped organise demonstrations in support of Palestinians’ right to self-determination, was
accused of aiding Hamas in an anonymous complaint to the federal government’s anti-
terror hotline.
“My experience shows that police are political, ideological. These anti-terror laws are totally
against free speech”, Moore said. She urged people to collectively defy the laws and
mobilise against them. “We need to campaign for a bill of human rights to protect our
freedoms.”

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All names of people, companies,
countries etc. are spelt correctly.
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Australia's poor human rights record
Jim McIlroy, Brisbane
26 May 2007
BRISBANE — “Australia is the only Western democracy without human rights
legislation”, James Whelan from Amnesty International told a public forum attended
by 50 people on May 23.
Labor state minister for educationDean Wells argued for a charter of
human rights like those adopted in Victoria and the ACT and that which has been
operating for 17 years in New Zealand. Such a charter requires a statement of
compatibility with human rights to accompany every bill that comes before
parliament.
Jessica Moore, who faced police investigation in Wollongong last
year under the so-called anti-terror laws, pointed out that state Labor governments
have been collaborating with the federal Coalition to implement the draconian laws.
Moore, an anti-war activist who has helped organise demonstrations in support of
Palestinians’ right to self-determination, was accused of aiding Hamas in an
anonymous complaint to the federal government’s anti-terror hotline.
“My experience shows that police are political, ideological. These anti-terror laws are
totally against free speech”, Moore said. She urged people to collectively defy the
laws and mobilise against them. “We need to campaign for a bill of human rights to
protect our freedoms.”

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someone, who has both a first
and last name.
Australia's poor human rights record
Jim McIlroy, Brisbane
26 May 2007
“Australia is the only Western
BRISBANE —
democracy without human rights
legislation”, James Whelan from Amnesty
International told a public forum attended
by 50 people on May 23.
Labor state minister for education Dean Wells argued for a charter of human rights like those
adopted in Victoria and the ACT and that which has been operating for 17 years in New
Zealand. Such a charter requires a statement of compatibility with human rights to
accompany every bill that comes before parliament.
Jessica Moore, who faced police investigation in Wollongong last year under the so-called anti-
terror laws, pointed out that state Labor governments have been collaborating with the
federal Coalition to implement the draconian laws. Moore, an anti-war activist who has
helped organise demonstrations in support of Palestinians’ right to self-determination, was
accused of aiding Hamas in an anonymous complaint to the federal government’s anti-terror
hotline.
“My experience shows that police are political, ideological. These anti-terror laws are totally
against free speech”, Moore said. She urged people to collectively defy the laws and
mobilise against them. “We need to campaign for a bill of human rights to protect our
freedoms.”