Finding Freedom

Heather Baine is a young rebellious princess, determined to do what she wants and not what she is told. Her wish is to escape from the castle she is brought up in, but once she does, will she really find freedom?

A good beginning! (: I like your writing style, and most of it flows smoothly as well as the dialogue. Only a few grammar errors here and there. I like the story line, it sounds interesting! Great job, keep it up!