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please correct my cover letter

Dear Mrs. xxx,

I would like to apply for an opportunity to study at University College xxxxxxx. The first information and impulse I got at my University: xxxxxx in Prague where I am studying. Please see the attached CV.

I have been studying Hotel Management for 6 years (in various forms) and I have had quite extensive work experience in Hotels and Restaurants. However I would like to study abroad. When I noticed the possibility to study in Denmark , I knew immediately that I would like to try it. The most useful information source I found on web-side and in a brochure.

To studying at xxxxxx in English language is for me unique oportunity to improve my skills. I find this opportunity as the most important step in my career. International Hospitality Management is aiming which I would like to follow in my future career.

At xxxxxxx I like kind of teaching which is project-oriented and I am missing this way at my school.

I would appreciate the opportunity to study at xxxxxxx and compare differences between culturals and ways of studying. Thank you for considering me for the position and for your time.

Re: please correct my cover letter

Dear Mrs. xxx,

I am applying for an opportunity to study at University College xxxxxxx. Please see the attached CV.

I have been studying Hotel Management for 6 years (in various forms) and have extensive work experience in Hotels and Restaurants. However I would like to study abroad. When I saw the possibility of studying in Denmark , I knew immediately that I would like to try it.

Studying at xxxxxx in English would be a unique opportunity to improve my skills and a very important step in my career. International Hospitality Management is the path I would like to follow in my future career.

I like project-oriented teaching and my present school does not use this method.

I would appreciate the opportunity to study at xxxxxxx. Thank you for considering me for a position and for your time.

Yours sincerely,

Thank's for correct. David

Last edited by telaviv1; 14-Apr-2010 at 10:36.
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