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You looking for an ass-whipping, I' m the providerBury this bitch deep in the dirt so you wont find herNo need for any pesticide all I need is a shoe for this spiderI'm gonna learn this dude a lessonU still wouldn't defeat me if I had you under my possessionThere is no venom in your spitI mean you have 8 legs but you still couldn't hitFather forgive me for what I did I just burned the soul of this lowly arachnid.

[b]I float like B.I.G.'s spirit in this bitch I'm ghostlyRush me, cause you aint gonna live to roast me/b]

Whew. Gonna skip the talley cause I'd give Spyder every category and don't really wanna copy that shit out. Idk, seemed pretty clear cut to me. Wasn't feeling the super sayan bar, the set up was a bit ehhh for me. The Recovery line was sick though, very nicely done. On the other hand, phantom didn't really bring much excitement. The rhymes were decent but there was very little in the way of wordplay and whatnot. Just focus on creating some punchlines man, that's the basis of this stuff. Against guys like Spyder you've gotta come hard with either personals or punches and since you don't know too much about him I think punchlines woulda been the best route.

Mr.DGAF wrote:Whew. Gonna skip the talley cause I'd give Spyder every category and don't really wanna copy that shit out. Idk, seemed pretty clear cut to me. Wasn't feeling the super sayan bar, the set up was a bit ehhh for me. The Recovery line was sick though, very nicely done. On the other hand, phantom didn't really bring much excitement. The rhymes were decent but there was very little in the way of wordplay and whatnot. Just focus on creating some punchlines man, that's the basis of this stuff. Against guys like Spyder you've gotta come hard with either personals or punches and since you don't know too much about him I think punchlines woulda been the best route.

1-0 Spyder.

Yeah I agree with everything you said.I gotta come with punchlines against a great battler like Spyder since I don't know that much about him personally. My lines were ok but lacked that sting. That Recovery line was an awesome personal cause I admitted in my introduction to TRSHADY that I became a fan after Recovery. I think the jack daniel and turn shady ghost was good as well cause it was a good play on my name and username.

Thanks @Spyder for the battle!

[b]I float like B.I.G.'s spirit in this bitch I'm ghostlyRush me, cause you aint gonna live to roast me/b]

@Phantom, i got a shit ton of personals out there, yes most have been used against me but just search through someones posts, view their other battles, and find new ways to work those angles. good shit though keep at it.