I am very much impressed by your first foray into the pixel art area! its actually pretty damned good. I think perhaps the colors are a little to stark in contrast to one another and the shading is a bit underdone, but those are easily explain for this is your first time. Also, your line work could stand to be a mite sharper, but again, practice makes perfect. I think several of my friends would do well to learn from you if you continue on this path. Your skills always seem to grow. Good luck with further attempts in this field!

I'm not much into pixel art myself really, but I must admit, this is one of the very few that had me staring for more than a minute thinking, "Wow... she's beautimost!" Like the last user said, the lines should be a bit sharper. The only thing I think should be adjusted is the lighting effect on Lully's hair. You struck it right with her front hair, the same way you did the white lighting there should be applied on her longer hair as well rather than having stroke lines. Also, work on her left hand. I understand this is your first pixel art and what not but nonetheless, it looks great!

I like it. ^_^I usually like everything Lully. Also, that pic of Lully I mentioned yesterday... forgot to scan it. But now instead of just a pencil drawing, I starting inking it. Should have it up somewhere later today.