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God damn I saw the other cypher a while back and I still can't get over your voice haha. Totally not what you think your voice would sound like coming out of that face. I mean that in the most harmless way possible

Nice rhymes and syllables and shit. This definitely sounded like a rap battle verse in the way you delivered it. You kinda ran out of breath (to be expected) at times and it fucked with your delivery and your flow a bit. But it was dope though, man.

FriedSchizoprenic wrote:I know the thread is a little bit old but i dont like it.

...you resurrected this just to tell me you don't like it?

FriedSchizoprenic wrote:Your flow is good but you are like a lot of underground lyrical myracle rhyming for the sake of rhyming. In my opinion, weak. Sorry

it's no secret that's what i like doing and listening-to more than anything else. i just enjoy rhyming with cool flows. is that why you say it's weak though?

Um, yeah. Because one thing is the rhyming and other thing is rap. Rap is more complex than just multis. Got other aspects like puns (Which for me is harder putting puns than rhyming words), wordplay general, subject matter, storytelling, humor, flow changes, variety, atsmophere, etc.

But i didnt know you was conscious of that, because i see a lot of lyrical myracle rappers doing that and saying "LOOK BRO I AM BETTER THAN LIL WAYNE LOOK HOW MANY WORDS I RHYMEE!!!1111".

If i see it on that perspective, i guess it's cool. But you have the flow man. You can do actually good tracks.

hi bro i have a question do you got a problem like a problem i can resolve what you mean you are going to punch me bro i just want to see aaaah aaaah stop stop is a prank is a praaaaaaaaank

But i didnt know you was conscious of that, because i see a lot of lyrical myracle rappers doing that and saying "LOOK BRO I AM BETTER THAN LIL WAYNE LOOK HOW MANY WORDS I RHYMEE!!!1111".

oh haha nah man i'm totally aware of what i'm doing here, it's just what i prefer. i'm capable of almost any type of rap. that said there were a ton of flow changes here. humor as well. keep in mind Master Chief made the same point last time i posted here. i appreciate the honest feedback regardless.

But i didnt know you was conscious of that, because i see a lot of lyrical myracle rappers doing that and saying "LOOK BRO I AM BETTER THAN LIL WAYNE LOOK HOW MANY WORDS I RHYMEE!!!1111".

oh haha nah man i'm totally aware of what i'm doing here, it's just what i prefer. i'm capable of almost any type of rap. that said there were a ton of flow changes here. humor as well. keep in mind Master Chief made the same point last time i posted here. i appreciate the honest feedback regardless.

Yeah i know, in the flow aspect you are great doe

hi bro i have a question do you got a problem like a problem i can resolve what you mean you are going to punch me bro i just want to see aaaah aaaah stop stop is a prank is a praaaaaaaaank