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Stubby, you have a good idea here. It just needs to be edited to fit with what we already have.

Edit the drabble so that Rose is the one who drops the Quaffle. Have Hugo, who has Ron flying next to him, catch the Quaffle. Show Hugo being very excited. Have Ron fly back to the ground as Hugo flys towards the goal. Hugo should score. Don't include the dead people - you might not have enough words to do that. If you need filler, include Hermione asking Harry if Hugo is going to all right. Please try to edit it ASAP.

As for the ending, I'm thinking of leaving the game a tie. Wtih Hugo scoring another goal for the boys, we just need to give the girls another goal. Then you could bring Bill and Fleur into it by having one of them announce it is time for lunch or something. It can end with the dead people having some kind of conversation about it.

“C’mon, Rose!” cried Celestia. But the sudden cry startled Rose, and she dropped the Quaffle.

Hugo, flying underneath her, caught the Quaffle with surprising ease and turned around. He soared towards the goal, faked a pass to James, and tossed the Quaffle straight through the girl’s middle hoop.

“Wow, Hugo, good job,” said Rose, looking surprised. “I didn’t know you could do that.”

“Neither did I,” he replied.

Victoire threw the Quaffle to Celestia, who headed down the pitch. She passed to Alice, who hurled it way across the pitch to Rose, who still looked dumbstruck over her brother’s success.

2-1 boys. Girls scoring and then lunch ending the game sounds like a good way to go to me. Write fast! Yay QWC! /craziness

Come on, someone - now we just need an ending! (Or one that's better than mine, anyway...)

Rose managed to get over her shock and caught the Quaffle. She quickly flew forward and sunk it through Teddy’s unguarded right hoop.

“It’s a tie now, boys!” Lily shouted, not trying to contain her enthusiasm.

“Eet iz time for lunch!” Fleur called.

“Yeah, everyone, time for lunch,” Bill said, echoing his wife.

There was a slight outbreak of grumbling at this, but everyone got off their brooms and headed indoors; tired, but happy. Bringing up the rear were Teddy and Victoire, who were holding hands. Bill saw this and smiled slightly.