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this was the first time trying a combination of fantasy/Young Adult. don't hurt me, i'm new at this

update DD 8-9-14It's a complete shock that an unedited story in a genre I've never written before got a Daily. I'm speechless. I am quite fond of this story, I think it's one of the "cutest" pieces I've written. I want to dedicate it to those who fear and avoid writing outside what they know. It can work if you make it work.

reminds me of an another version of "GOD" growing up alternative version of "Earth"?Co-creators and harmonizers of life in the universe the description could be more detailed like explaining more about the environment the Godlet is inhabiting.so on so forthKeep it up and thanks for showing the haters i feel what you say.Brill story keep it up and carry on with the exploring into different tangets of interest:+)

Congratulations on the DD, it made me very happy to see your work out front and center where it belongs. This is clever, subtle, and warm. I'm not going to say it's not what I would expect from you, as I never know what to expect from you, but you keep proving that you can write pretty much anything you like extremely well!

i was almost expecting him to say earth... but kayos makes much more sense for someone who's still in their "name everything after yourself because it's yours" stage. either way, adorable work! i'd never seen this perspective on deities before, and i really liked it. c:

A perfect name for a planet (that sounds like this one) and will see plenty of "Kayos" in its 'life-time.' You've got the attitudes down like you lived with teens for the past nine years or more...lol. boring -- unfair -- mine -- I could do this.I wuv this story.

Yeah, I don't know what's up with that. I think the Greeks may have actually called it Gaia? But I'm not totally sure, and the root word for 'from the earth' is completely different so what's up with that.

yeah, I came across Gaia in my research. Still not Jupiter or Neptune. The way I figure, for butthurt Pluto, that planet was still named after a God even though its status was taken away... always chase that silver lining.