Something I forgot to mention last time: I freaking love your summary. It's short and simple, yet deeper than the goddamned ocean. Anyway, the only disappointment about this chapter would be the length, but I'm pleased that other people appreciate Moro and how awesomely badass she is. I look forward to the next update :)

Beautiful, just beautiful. I love how you portrayed Moro, keeping her tastefully in character, and San' s parents. The history behind San' s markings was also a nice touch. Can't wait to read the next chapter in about 2seconds _

I liked your explanation of the red marks on San's forehead and cheeks. I always wondered if that was war paint or something else. These two chapters were interesting and I thought you kept Moro in-character. :) Great job.