I've been through and made some further changes. See the above video, and the image below.

I edited the timings at the beginning so they start with the voice-over (this had a knock-on effect on some of the following timings, but by [18-20] they are back on track). I also tweaked a few of the timings in the middle, so they can stay on screen a bit longer.

I also had to change "Underlord" and "war for the overworld" back to their originally-translated terms, so they are consistent with the terms used in other parts of the game (see green rows in the image).

I saw you commented that the timing is still broken. Which parts are you referring to?

which subtitle format are you able to play and view?
You can see it on what im prepared, video file and subtitles can be opened normally in MPC.
In addition, I upload the MPL2,MDVD,SRT formats.
And I changed the text to the one you sent me.
Normal TXT format destroys timing.

Thanks for you new subtitle timings. I have used them as a guide, and added them to the game. These will go out in the upcoming patch.

I couldn't reproduce the timings exactly because the game's subtitle system only supports 1-second granularity. However, I believe these are now close enough to the voice-over timings. Combined with the longer format lines, this should make them easier to read.