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HappyMollyWeasley says:Thank you for re-requesting! I am sorry that this review is so belated. I know it is ages since you asked me for this review...

I like the feeling I got from reading this chapter. I remember how it felt to be a teenager and to meet up with my friends after the summer holidays. New beginnings, wishes, hopes... You have captured that well!

It is a good thing that you fully include Peter in the story. He was their friend, just as much as any else. Sometimes he is skipped out in fanfiction, but if one doesn't include him from the beginning, you somehow reduce his betrayal.

Your chapter is easy to read, it captures my interest as a reader, and you write humourously. Over all a good start! :-)

Author's Response: No worries about the "late" review, I don't mind at all!
I totally agree about Peter, so I'm so glad you are noticing his inclusion! I am planning on giving him more one-on-one scenes with Rora to help flesh out his characterization and presence in the story too.
Thank you so much for the feedback! :)