This story was amazing! I usually don't read stories where most of the main characters are OC's but I loved this. The way you tied in the Enchantress and Chip was perfect and I am glad you ended thee story with ChipXAdele and TyroneXBabette. xoxo- Livy

I have loved every word of this! I've been obsessed with it for like 3 days and I'm so happy you ended it here in case you don't continue, though I really hope you do because this was beautiful your amazing!

Guest chapter 25 . 12/3/2015

I have loved every minute of this story! I've been obsessed with it for days! I'm so glad you ended it there! I really hope you continue but in case you don't THANKYOU for ending it on such a good note!

Guest chapter 14 . 12/2/2015

Sorry I'm only reviewing this chapter so far, I'm positively in love with this story! I love Adam and how you brought the beast back I was biting my nails off then the beast came and I was soooo happy that was perfect! I love Adam and his mommy issues and daddy issues those chapters were so elegant and beautiful! I love their children and I'm so happy you wrote this its perfect!

Wow... I just spent the past two days reading this as fast as I could. It is so amazingly written, and I could definitely tell that you improved from the beginning to the end. The storyline was so intricate, I don't know how you managed to think it all up. All in all I just want to say that I love this story to death, and if I'm ever bored and have tons of time on my hands, I can definitely see myself rereading this wonderful story.

I just found this story and have been reading it all day! I love it, so amazingly written! I especially love this chapter, which is why I'm leaving this review before continuing to read. This chapter was just amazing, there were so many things I loved about it.

Hello, All. I would like to thank each and every one of you for your wonderful insight. It helps when I have encouragement and advice lent to help me complete my writings. I do still plan on continuing this story. For now, I am more focused on my schoolwork and on my original writings (not to mention my 'Kuroshitsuji'/'Gone With the Wind' crossover-whether it gets any attention or not, it is a story I do wish, for personal reasons, to complete).

I want to take this time to impart some advice that was given to me by a great writer. His name is Alex Espinosa, and you may know him as the author of 'The Five Acts of Diego Leon', a piece set largely in the 1920s. As you can tell, the novel required some research on Espinosa's part. However, he told me something that I have never known any other author to say, as much sense as it makes. He said that research is important when writing a period piece, but research should not get in the way of you writing the story you wish to write. In fact, barring the limits of your story with the walls of historical facts may prevent you from writing a truly original and great story. I think that this is advice that should be followed especially when writing something like fanfiction. The reason we write fanfiction is because we wish to take the stories we love to places they have never before been. Yes, use your brain. But always remember to use your heart, soul, and-most importantly-your imagination. Unleash it for all the world to know.

Keep reading and writing the stories you would love to personally read.

Just a few things that really brought me out of the story you were creating:

Adam as both a noble and a man from at least the 1800s (possible the 1700s) would never use the word "yeah". To brush up on the language of the time you might want to read some Jane Austen (very romantic and a good illustration of the way things were in those times in regards to class and gender relations)

Also I do believe you mean the maid to be called Fifi. Reading it as spelled reads as Fii-Feh

Again, like the story, like the emotion you just need to make sure everything flows in a way that doesn't have anything pull you out or have the story move along so we don't really notice it.