Dayum! It's not often that someone can do a threesome that doesn't crazy focus on too much yaoi (not a huge fan of yaoi). But you managed to give this JUST the right amount of angst to make the lemony goodness that much uhm... sweeter? Wait, my metaphor fell on its face...

Whatever. It was hawt delicious goodness that is getting faved. Hell yeah, write more on this story, or more like this story, or whatever! ;)

so great I just love narusasusaku its my all time favorite! such a great story.. definetly adding to my favorites! luvved that sumone besides me realizes.. theres no freakin way sasuke can go back to konoha.. _ so the three can start their own livess! ahh i luvved it

klv chapter 1 . 10/19/2008

Love it. Most authors want more than two words in review though, so what to say... Oh, quite different from any other slightly similar fics to this one, with a slightly dark tone, but still somewhat light and open. I don't know, hard to explain. but your language flows nicely, so much so that I didn't even think of it until just now (btw, one of the best structure and grammar complements I can give). Thanks so much! Worth browsing through five pages of fics to find!