This was an interesting exercise but it didn’t do much for me. No real story to speak of – things just happened. A) It should have been much shorter. B) There could have been some kind of story about the girl battling her dreadlocks. Instead, things happened. She seemed to be enjoying herself, then cut her hair.

I thought the Klezmer track didn’t work at all. From a technical standpoint, there were a hundred places where the action could have synched with the music beats to produce a stronger effect.