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Jose Velasquez 5 years agofrom Lodi, New Jersey

It was a sad day for me. I was hurt, all choked up, and seeing anything that reminded me of happiness just made me want to die. Thankfully this was many years ago.

kjforce 5 years agofrom Florida

liked the poem..well written ..but so sad....

Dori Wheeler 5 years ago

Love the image and the scribe was great! I'll have to look further into surrealism, just so I don't make a fool of myself!

Thank you for sharing!

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Jose Velasquez 5 years agofrom Lodi, New Jersey

Thanks. I wanted to get a point across, but I tried to do it in an indirect manner. The images are actually layers upon layers of a very bad moment in time for me, and i tried to put them all together in a story that might sound a bit funny, but sad at the same time.

Brian Leekley 5 years agofrom Kalamazoo, Michigan, USA

Up and interesting. I think the surrealism worked well this time.

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Jose Velasquez 5 years agofrom Lodi, New Jersey

I know it was my first attempt at surrealism, but I'll do better next time.