help with grammer and spelling appreacted greatly its a spoken word peice but i felt the need to share anyway

its almost impossible to know anything about wine the paper fire engine the how can i best cheapen the human heart the beauty industrys for tarting up bitches the places that reek of putrefaction is were you go to findsatisfation to poison is your only avalible reaction a sign of your manufature to saturate and dissipate all that is clean not a man but a spleen pumping out bilea style in the eye of what ever is left the bloated bulbus swetty body of lies and half truths able only to speak of value in terms of exploitation a language of condemnation your means of spitting hate your lifes work the content of an ash tray you seek to make punish nothing sacrosanct all lines can be smuged with the rotting blood that is what you call good and wholesome your truth long ago discarded inlue of convinceyou are as sterile and devoid of life as the moon and i love you and i had such high hopes for youwhen i was i child i looked up to you but you were just to dam cheap and vicious to do anything but succeed and in doing so utterly failed

Edited by firebird (12/08/1207:50 PM)

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