Sorry for my lack of clarity– I was trying to emphasize how well you inverted the natural order by making it day (and dawn) that are cluttering up the night, and dusk the first signs of cleaning. How often I think of it in opposite terms! I really love this haiku! 🙂

My Word,
You were clear. I just thought perhaps that was an actual “form” of haiku. I’m rather haiku-less when it comes to form & function.
And thank you so much for the “love”! Coming from you that’s a real compliment.

Haha, wonderful pun there! Hmm…I think perhaps a “reverse-engineered haiku” (if it really WAS a form) would perhaps be three lines of 7-5-7 syllables? Or maybe would be written backwards? Hmm…might have to try one of those out. You’re quite welcome–your haiku are consistently great, but this one is one of my favorites! And thank you for your kind words in return–they mean a lot to me. 😀

Peggy Arndt

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Welcome to my curious world! (in both senses of the word - eager to learn AND the strange & unusual)

You never know what you might find here because I never know what will amuse, inform or interest me about this weird and wonderful world we live in.

Sometimes I share my own creative stuff - drawing, writing, painting and puttering. (Warning! - these are often the most curious posts on the blog).

Sometimes I share my journey with multiple heart arrhythmias & fibromyalgia. Having lived with these life altering contions has curiously turned out to be blessings (not that I ever asked to be blessed in these ways . . .).

These conditions continuously teach me life's lessons about my physical body, my emotional mind and my spiritual being (not that I originally THOUGHT I needed these kind of lessons).