i find that when i mess up, people take a simple apology better than something self-deprecating or manipulative. just a simple, "hey, i feel like you're ignoring me. did i do something that upset you?"

you're a good writer, but if you did something fucked up, you should be focused on learning from your mistake, not sounding eloquent.

Punslinger chapter 1 . 6/15/2010

This is a very nice letter attempting reconcilliation. If it was addressed to me, I would forgive you and want to be your friend.