Wait is all about love and lust, regrets and longing, sex and joy, too. While there is not a clear narrative arc for the book, there is a consistent speaker revealing the age-old journey from innocence to experience. Formally, I find the book interesting because Stine moves easily between the single stanza, left aligned block of text and the more airy, multi-stanza, multi-indented lines of text. Being more drawn to the latter in my own work, I read the former with extra attention to see how Stine made them work.

Luminescence, each of the poems in this book glows with intense images and powerful feeling that never crosses into sentimentality. It was almost as if each poem was pulsing with energy and I found myself tearing through the book on my first read. However, I'm having a hard time summarizing what made me feel that urge to turn the pages so quickly, given there was no mystery or plot pulling me toward the end.

Here is an excerpt from one of the first poems in the book, "Child Bride."

It's different every night. Your sister

has two days before her wedding,

but she has been sewing since she was five.

Your cousin is nineteen, but her groom

is sixty. You risk salvation by squeezing

your eyes. Now your prophet is wheat

in a rain field. Now your prophet is acid

and orange. Love ends in the pocket, a rope

belt untying.

This poem has one of the most haunting last lines ever, but I'll let you discover it on your own, Dear Readers.

"Salt" has the same intensity but with the added white space I mentioned earlier. Here is the beginning.

You were the lover for which I bled. Comfort me

.....with salt: tears, their silken twin. Understand

..........I have made my arms doors for you. Listen:

I love that "listen" followed by the colon that keeps us breathless and urgent at the end of the line.

One of the most heart-breaking poems in the book has the speaker detailing a miscarriage. Again, what stands out here is not only the powerful language but the ability to avoid the overly dramatic sentimentality that the subject matter could easily cause. Here is an excerpt from "The Red Thread," and for clarity, the speaker is in the shower.

A red snake coils at the bottom of the drain: our child,

......phrased like a question. The plum tree in back

...........ruptured in blight. Still, I could say nothing.

My favorite poem of the whole collection may just be the very first poem, "Wife." In it, the speaker recounts a childhood filled with the urge to rush into adulthood, into sex really. She states, "I got in a car / for a strawberry cream" and later "I wanted / to be dancing." By the way, that line break on "wanted" is brilliant as it sums up that restless urge of the teen years. However, the speaker then admits her regret for rushing into it all as she addresses her husband and wishes she had waited. She states:

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Enjoyed this close read, the excerpted poems themselves, and your thoughts on the shape of a book. I have certainly enjoyed books of poems that do have a narrative arc and books that don't. Is the prevailing trend or hope now that they do?