I feel in complete sync with Gail. All I wanted, all my life, was to have children of my own. i'm 59 now and never did have my own kids. For years, while I was still fertile maybe, I envied those who were pregnant or had kids. I got pregnant once and had a miscarriage and it never happened again. when I went through menopause, I cried for weeks because I knew I could never have children. so, I really understand her in this chapter. very well done. For me, I have good friends with kids and siblings with kids. Gail has Sophie and the greys. It's not the same, but it does help.

I know I have read in other Fifty Shades stories it was said Gail was too old to have kids or just could not have kids. Wouldn't it be wonderful if she can and her and Jason try to get pregnant or try to adopt. I know I read stories where she had a child or they did adopt. Loved the update and love this story! :)

I loved that chapter so much. Yay! Miss Phoebe Grey has been created. I love how you handled their reactions after what happened with Ted. Can't wait for everyone else to find out. Thanks for the update and the entertainment :-)