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Review:

MajiKat says:gods marina. this is stunning. why haven't i read it before?
there is so much i love about this. it is so poetically tragic - i can't help but feel sympathy for poor rose - silly girl, to make such a silly mistake, to let lust and selfishness rule over her. i don't know if you wanted the reader to feel this for her or not, but i do. i cannot hate her.

I can almost hate scorpius however, but maybe that is because what he truly feels is not explored, and i kind of like that. i don't hate him - he had a moment of pure weakness.

the opening line of this made me gasp! how incredible and what an image! you truly are amazing! i loved the foreshadowing, i loved the two lines of dialogue - they were perfect and nothing more was needed. simple and real.

amazing work. i think i might favourite this ^_^
ILY

Kate xx

Author's Response: wow, thank you so much Kate! I can't believe I wrote this over a year ago, I'm still pretty pleased with it :D Teddy/Rose is my favourite ship so I enjoyed writing this immensely.