why did you just end it there? i loved it and i cant wait til the sequel!!!

Author's Response: i ended it there because i felt i did what i needed to do in their first year. =D I'm glad you can't wait for the sequel! It's set in their sixth year. I just need to finish chap 1 and get the banner together!

now this is nice...I hope you continue it! although I have one question...all six of 'em are in gryffindor and in 1st year...so all of them should have similar timetables right?...yet you mentioned 4 of them having charms and 2 have transfiguration...how is that possibel?

Author's Response: lol thats just me taking more of real life and putting it with Hogwarts. Really, they SHOULD all be in the same class at the same time, but i made some go to different classes.

Woops, when i reviewed before i said there were mistakes in quotes, i meant to say the dialogue. Like, "blah blah blah" when it should be, "Blah blah blah," my mistake. I probably confused you lol. This is a neat story, keep it coming!

Author's Response: lol it's ok! confusion is a major part of my life XD

Thanks for the advice though! I'm editing majorlly so i can take all of the help i can get :)

Good chapter, but they seem so fast paced. You have some grammar mistakes, usually in the quotes. Some of the things arent capitalized and should be. Cant wait to see where this goes though!

Author's Response: thanks for your imput! yes, I do need to work on spanning things out and making more things happen in those areas. Mistakes in the quotes? I'll take a look. I will try to edit this whole story when i am finished completly. I understand the capitalization mistakes, i do tend to make those.
Hope you enjoy the rest!
Becca