Not the best recording, I wanted it to be messy but I definitely overdid it. Just wondering, does anyone think this riff is worth the investment to fix, improve, and refine? Or just throw it out and try something else?

Weird upbeat rock shit ahoy. Bass and Drums are midi garbage for now, please try to ignore as best as possible.

My ambient psychedelic-jazz freeform arrangement of Fade to Black. Has nothing to do with me not being able to handle a guitar properly.

I'm going to say the buzzing and missed notes stand out far too much. When it works, it's actually quite wonderful but you simply must get the hand strength up so they're all ringing out clearly. Would love to see this perfected.

After almost a year of having Logic Pro and not doing shit with it, I actually just came up with something that satisfies my perfectionism. Pretty much unmixed at this point, but I like the way it's turning out (VERY VERY WIP)

Not the best recording, I wanted it to be messy but I definitely overdid it. Just wondering, does anyone think this riff is worth the investment to fix, improve, and refine? Or just throw it out and try something else?Weird upbeat rock shit ahoy. Bass and Drums are midi garbage for now, please try to ignore as best as possible.

Agree= Keep working at it Disagree= sounds like shit not worth the time Optimistic= u are fagget kill urself Any specific criticism would be awesome. Mostly just wondering if it's a good enough idea though.EDIT:oh shit bass was not that pronounced on other computer fuck, and it's really quiet. probably going to have to redo this dammit

it sounds like a kinda gay pop punk song. the main riff is cool and could be 80s hair metal but the harmonies in the "verse" styled riff pretty cheesy.ie: very cool idea but the 2nd guitar part during the verse part is uber gay.

it sounds like a kinda gay pop punk song. the main riff is cool and could be 80s hair metal but the harmonies in the "verse" styled riff pretty cheesy.ie: very cool idea but the 2nd guitar part during the verse part is uber gay.

There aren't any harmonies in the verse, it's just one guitar doing chords. And no ur faget homo bro and trust me iv'e seen lots hin my time ff

After almost a year of having Logic Pro and not doing shit with it, I actually just came up with something that satisfies my perfectionism. Pretty much unmixed at this point, but I like the way it's turning out (VERY VERY WIP)

I think having strong drums and a funky bassline to kick in at around 0:46 or so can make this landscape of sound really cool with noise in background popping in every now and then! Right now I think the bass and drums at 1:26 are sort of lackluster without someone popping a few lines over it all you know?

New track. Subject to change, and probably will. May add vocals on this one. I like the imperfections in this. Imperfections in the playing are due to most of the non-sequenced instruments being performance based rather than polished. The imperfections give it character when playing a piece out of mood. It gives a more human element to otherwise electronic music

Been busy with something new: I'm not sure if I have too much or too little stuff (synthesizers/bass/drums/whatev) in it.
Agree for too much
Disagree for too little
Artistic for it's good as is.
Usefull for delete it : I'm thinking of doing this; I'm not getting the feeling I'm going somewhere with this track.