The wind blew through the protodermis Beaches as the Dermisgulls flew away. There standing on the beach was Deku. Elder of Orgo-Hul. He came from Pyros-Hul. All his life he made Kanoki Launchers and Lambada Swords. But he wanted to take charge in Orgo-Hul. He wanted it to be heavily armed. And ready to fight the Dark Hearted, Hynaks.

The wind blew through the protodermis Beaches as the Dermisgulls flew away. There standing on the beach was Deku. Elder of Orgo-Hul. He came from Pyros-Hul. All his life he made Kanoki Launchers and Lambada Swords. But he wanted to take charge in Orgo-Hul. He wanted it to be heavily armed. And ready to fight the Dark Hearted, Hynaks.

(( Continue the story. The prologue ends here))

((What are hynaks like? Not too similar to Cyronoids and makuta I hope... How about them being beast-like, brutal and cunning - like wolves or hyenas?))Permalink

The akonians had know idea what they are a Tokia was thrown out of the water.

((Akonians are the villagers. And Tokias are the protectors like glatorian and toa))

Another tokia followed in the same fashion, then another. The three of them ended up in a pile, giggling. Blue and crystal armour shone in the pleasant, warm light of the sun.
One stepped forward, the screen over her face removing itself and showing her happy features to him. She was smirking, and loking rather embarrased as to having been caught.Permalink

Another tokia followed in the same fashion, then another. The three of them ended up in a pile, giggling. Blue and crystal armour shone in the pleasant, warm light of the sun.
One stepped forward, the screen over her face removing itself and showing her happy features to him. She was smirking, and loking rather embarrased as to having been caught.

((i`ll be the girl))
"and what are you looking at?" she said as she towled off from the bath housePermalink

Another tokia followed in the same fashion, then another. The three of them ended up in a pile, giggling. Blue and crystal armour shone in the pleasant, warm light of the sun.
One stepped forward, the screen over her face removing itself and showing her happy features to him. She was smirking, and loking rather embarrased as to having been caught.

"Sorry for the inonvienence. You should get back to your doings and get ready for the Orgo Harvest" said the Tokia.

"Harren, you know that when you blasted the Yukkah dragon, it shot us in the sky with impact?!" said a red armored Tokia. Permalink

Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
she tore off her towel and trew it at the one who had been eyeing her she turned to walk away and glanced back as she did so, bradishing a cute and flirtatous smile...

"Heyy! Stop flirting with my brother!" She giggled, watching him blush. "One of these days he might just give in, and THEN what are you gonna do?"Permalink

I woke up in pain. A lot of it. Once the pain stopped, I took an assessment of my surroundings. There was a large crater where I was, so I must have impacted violently with the ground. I don't remember anything, except who I was, whose armor I was wearing, and that I was me. I saw my skull-shaped helm on the ground, and put it on. Right now, the most secure feeling was being in a familiar suit of armor. I saw buildings in the distance, and decided to go there, to see where I was.Permalink

Quoting Elite Commander Rogue
"You Tokia should be more careful next time. Infact, if you don't be careful, there will NEVER be a next time" Deku said.

"Deku! Deku! DEKU!" a little Security Guard said.

"Hmph. Yes?" Deku said.

"Our Guard watch at the edge of Orgo-Hul has spotted something terrible and interesting!" The guard said.

"What! Tell me more" Deku replied in shock.

"We spotted several Hynacks fishing up massive creatures and putting them into battle training!" the guard said.

"This is outragous! Fire the Hakasad Cannon!" Deku said.

The girl named Harren brought out her swords - morphic weapons that could change shape. A lot of DIY builders used something similar, but it was unusual for a Tokia to not train his or herself in a specific weapon. The silver glimmered unnaturally bright in the light.

The girl named Harren brought out her swords - morphic weapons that could change shape. A lot of DIY builders used something similar, but it was unusual for a Tokia to not train his or herself in a specific weapon. The silver glimmered unnaturally bright in the light.

"Hynacks? Bring 'em on!" She hopped from foot to foot eagerly.

Meanwhile at Dagger-Hul...

"You lazy, mud dragging BEASTS! Get a move on!" A Hynack General yelled.

The slaves pulled a wagon filled with weapons.

"Knomad, do you have that Johlk Knife with you?" one slave whispered.

"Yes. Its right here. Be careful, don't let the Hynacks see you with it Lukeu." Knomad said.

Lukeu took the knife and stopped.

"Sir, I need a drink." Lukeu said.

"How long ao did you have a drink little pest?" the General said.

"At least 7 hours ago" Lukeu replied.

"fine. Give me a second." the General said.

The Hynack turned around and then Lukeu jumped out at him stabbing him in the the back.

"Aaaaaah!" the Hynack cried!

Lukeu unchained the others and ran for their life. They took a few weapons along the way as well. They high-jacked a friendly Sampadactyl and flew off.

They soon landed on Orgo-Hul. Thusands of guards surrounded them.

"Hands up" one Elite said.

"We aren't enemies! We were slaves for the Hynacks! We escaped!" Knomad yelled.

after she clothed her self in the dorm she snuk out the back.making way across the tall grassy plains she spotted the general, Arenus.
she made her way to the camp.
the guards came charing at her"who dares aproach the hynacks?!!RAWR" she spun and twisted her double bladed Kirusian knives in one hand.when they came near she simply extended her arm.for a second the two gaurds wondered what happend then a single drop of blood apeared ontheir necks and slid to one side slowly makeing its way to their chests.they fell to the ground dieing the silent death.
she made her way to Arenus and placed herself in his lap"why hello there, Tezra .have you come to join me in our final strike?"...Permalink

I eventually made it to the village entrance. The guards took one look at my outlandish appearance and barred the way. "Who are you?" they said. "I am Hulio, and that is all I remember." "Amnesia?" they said, "Fat chance that would work. You, go get one of the Tokia." "Yes sir." And he hurried off.Permalink

Quoting Aaron Tran
Meanwhile.....
Out of nowhere, 100 archers in armor comes trying to shoot Harren with arrows. Then, the guards seem to get magnetized together. A toa of magnetism named toa Akara then comes and asks, "Were you hurt Harren?"
Harren replies "No, but did you magnetize the guards?"
"Yes" says Akara

((that is completely unreletive.if you dont mind i will delete it read what this world is before posting))Permalink

I eventually made it to the village entrance. The guards took one look at my outlandish appearance and barred the way. "Who are you?" they said. "I am Hulio, and that is all I remember." "Amnesia?" they said, "Fat chance that would work. You, go get one of the Tokia." "Yes sir." And he hurried off.

"Tahuunu. We have a outlander who wants to come in. What do you want us to do with him?" The guard said.

"Let him in. Make him comfortable and then we'll question him" Tahuunu said.

"Tahuunu. We have a outlander who wants to come in. What do you want us to do with him?" The guard said.

"Let him in. Make him comfortable and then we'll question him" Tahuunu said.

"Yes sir" the guard said.

Julio

The guard returned and beckoned for me to follow. Assuming this was for the best, I did. I was led to a rather comfortable room, with a person in the shadows, watching me. I removed my helmet and rolled my jaw around. I just now noticed something loose. I reached in and pulled out a tooth. That must have been some impact. I threw it out on the floor and crushed it beneath my boot. "You in the shadows, what do you want?"Permalink

The guard returned and beckoned for me to follow. Assuming this was for the best, I did. I was led to a rather comfortable room, with a person in the shadows, watching me. I removed my helmet and rolled my jaw around. I just now noticed something loose. I reached in and pulled out a tooth. That must have been some impact. I threw it out on the floor and crushed it beneath my boot. "You in the shadows, what do you want?"

"I am Tahuunu. Leader of the Tokia and former protecetor pf Orgo-Hul. Why have you come? ARE YOU SOME HYNACK SPY!?!" Tahuunu said.Permalink

"I am Tahuunu. Leader of the Tokia and former protecetor pf Orgo-Hul. Why have you come? ARE YOU SOME HYNACK SPY!?!" Tahuunu said.

Julio

"Hynack? What are those. I came here to see if anyone can help me, for I don't remember anything except my name, how I am, and that this armor I wear belongs to me. Nothing else. I could show you where I woke up if you like." It felt strange, being devoid of memories.Permalink

"Hynack? What are those. I came here to see if anyone can help me, for I don't remember anything except my name, how I am, and that this armor I wear belongs to me. Nothing else. I could show you where I woke up if you like." It felt strange, being devoid of memories.

" I'll give you a little story of the Hynack." Tahuunu said.

"Along time ago, the Hynack lived with us in peace. They helped us all and we helped them. Then one day, the Hynack turned on us. They started to become savage make us slaves! Then a brave Elite called, Vakamam started the Tokia. We drove them to the Dagger-Hul. There is were they are. They have tried to come back for revenge. But it was not possible." Tahuunu said.

"Well. I believe what you say though. Take a time to think, then tell me what happened to you. Wait. You bear the symbol of the Broken Cross? They were only legend from other worlds that I heard? Were you a part of them?" Tahuunu said.Permalink

"Along time ago, the Hynack lived with us in peace. They helped us all and we helped them. Then one day, the Hynack turned on us. They started to become savage make us slaves! Then a brave Elite called, Vakamam started the Tokia. We drove them to the Dagger-Hul. There is were they are. They have tried to come back for revenge. But it was not possible." Tahuunu said.

"Well. I believe what you say though. Take a time to think, then tell me what happened to you. Wait. You bear the symbol of the Broken Cross? They were only legend from other worlds that I heard? Were you a part of them?" Tahuunu said.

Julio

"I am? I..don't remember anything at all since my arrival. Not even how I got here."Permalink

"Oh, and good helm. You can spook the Hynacks off with that on. Oh here. Have this Kanoki Launcher. Consider it as a gift." Tahuunu said.

Julio

"No thanks, I wear this armor for a reason. I'm a close combat fighter by style. When you said Broken Cross, some of the memories returned, mainly the many battles I fought. In close combat I fight, nowhere else."Permalink

Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((OK I'm confused. could some one give me a full run down of everything that is going on and a better description of what everyone looks like. and what these creatures look like.))

"No thanks, I wear this armor for a reason. I'm a close combat fighter by style. When you said Broken Cross, some of the memories returned, mainly the many battles I fought. In close combat I fight, nowhere else."

"Aliright then. And Here, we are in Vapor-Orgo. The water village." Tahuunu said.

((They walk to diffrent parts of Orgo-Hul))

"Well, since you know the land, lets get to the site you woke up from. You ready?" Tahuunu asked.Permalink

Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((I did but no one has described there character in detail. And not a soul has described the Hynaks just that they are like werewolves.))

he led her to his chambers the claws on his animal legs clanked as they hit he floor. her own plan was falling in place . she would do ANYTHING to get what she wanted...even if it ment shaming herself...
((like toa but have actual 'liqud' matel faces is how i see it:)))Permalink

Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
he led her to his chambers the claws on his animal legs clanked as they hit he floor. her own plan was falling in place . she would do ANYTHING to get what she wanted...even if it ment shaming herself...
((like toa but have actual 'liqud' matel faces is how i see it:)))

Harren twirled her blades in boredom. "Uhh... Okay then. Just go off without me. Fine. No Hynacks for me today then..." She sighed, and the luminescent patches on her armour dimmed. She headed back to Orgo-Hul, and her home, and probably a whole pile of chores she'd left undone for far too long...

((Okay. The way I see then, they're like Toa but less robotic in the normal bionicle-ish way. Look at the most state of the art modern technology nowadays, with all the white panels and chrome and blue and electric gel and stuff, and replace the old bionicle-y gearpunkish sort of style with it.

Harren is the other Tokia's brother [name please?] and friends with the other female one. She's short compared to other Tokia, wears light blue armour with luminous/gel patches and a diving visor, and is quite chubby also - unlike more conventional bioonicles, these ones can vary in body shape a little. Just like so much synthetic stuff nowadays is all flexible and stuff. If you;ve played Mass Effect, they're a bit like the stuff in there.
And hmm... I think the liquid metal face idea is pretty good. Like the original Transformers cartoons.... But they'll have circuitry across their faces sometimes, perhaps.))Permalink

Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
((Okay. The way I see then, they're like Toa but less robotic in the normal bionicle-ish way. Look at the most state of the art modern technology nowadays, with all the white panels and chrome and blue and electric gel and stuff, and replace the old bionicle-y gearpunkish sort of style with it.

Harren is the other Tokia's brother [name please?] and friends with the other female one. She's short compared to other Tokia, wears light blue armour with luminous/gel patches and a diving visor, and is quite chubby also - unlike more conventional bioonicles, these ones can vary in body shape a little. Just like so much synthetic stuff nowadays is all flexible and stuff. If you;ve played Mass Effect, they're a bit like the stuff in there.
And hmm... I think the liquid metal face idea is pretty good. Like the original Transformers cartoons.... But they'll have circuitry across their faces sometimes, perhaps.))

((nah. i thot more like her design but highly advanced tech with transluesient parts and circutry all over and mostly made with an electricly activated liquid metal all together forming the curves of the human body i.e. like my girl has a trans-bra thats part of her mechanicle body[btw this is how i thot of all the tokia untill now unles you will state your color:)]oh and yeah no spikes or tendrils:) ))Permalink

Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((nah. i thot more like her design but highly advanced tech with transluesient parts and circutry all over and mostly made with an electricly activated liquid metal all together forming the curves of the human body i.e. like my girl[btw this is how i thot of all the tokia untill now unles you will state your color:)]oh and yeah no spikes or tendrils:) ))

((Yeah. I did say FULLY ARMOURED. Normally, under the armour, I agree. That's what they should look like, having a sort of mirrorish, magnetised metal skin rather than the bare muscle showing that they have in the other Magnas. And having translucent/gel patches on the armour just looks plain cool ! ^^))Permalink

((Yeah. I did say FULLY ARMOURED. Normally, under the armour, I agree. That's what they should look like, having a sort of mirrorish, magnetised metal skin rather than the bare muscle showing that they have in the other Magnas. And having translucent/gel patches on the armour just looks plain cool ! ^^))

((yep[gel]. think of what i said and re-read the first part with my girl;) ))Permalink

((Yeah. I did say FULLY ARMOURED. Normally, under the armour, I agree. That's what they should look like, having a sort of mirrorish, magnetised metal skin rather than the bare muscle showing that they have in the other Magnas. And having translucent/gel patches on the armour just looks plain cool ! ^^))

(( Thats nice and all but im not interested in your good guys im interested in the bad guys and how i can make a good guy out of him.))Permalink

I sat in a tree on the shore of Orgo-Hull watching the wild life and the Akonians run and play. I could not wrap my mind around why my brothers would want destroy such a beautiful place. Leaning against the tree i took my brush and began to paint the scene that lay before me my claws had difficulty staying out of the paint, but the product was coming along well. I set the brush down and lounged in the tree my tail wagging slowly as a cool breeze passed through the tree limbs allowing sun to shine upon my glistening gold armor. My shield was slung on a branch above me and the eject able blade in my gauntlet slid forward as I activated the mechanism. I closed my eyes and lay my head against the tree. The day was beautiful and my mind was far from the destruction that my brothers would bring if they were able to gain a foot hold here. Permalink

Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
(( Thats nice and all but im not interested in your good guys im interested in the bad guys and how i can make a good guy out of him.))

((I think like werewolfy creatures with gold armour and all, and also, with hair? Made from metallic fibres? That shows through their armour in places - like the Brutes from Halo2 and 3 ^^, only more wolf-like...))Permalink

Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
((I think like werewolfy creatures with gold armour and all, and also, with hair? Made from metallic fibres? That shows through their armour in places - like the Brutes from Halo2 and 3 ^^, only more wolf-like...))

((i think more humanoid but with dog legs. for hair fiber optics that way they glow O_O))Permalink

Harren sighed.
Her kitchen was a mess... as was her bedroom, and the generator needed refuelling unless she wanted to have to eat cold meals from now on. She folded her arms, surveying the carnage wreaked by a month's habitation, converted her protodermic weapon into a broom, and started sweeping.Permalink

Turning to her brother's bedroom, the mess and smell of it assaulted her nose. She left it be, knowing what Mez would be like if she touched anything... but she wished he'd tidy himself up once in a while at least!
She opened the door. It smelt as if something had died in here!

Her broom clattered to the floor and her hands rose to her mouth as she felt sick.

I opened my eyes and yawned. It was now dark but my eyes cut through the night, making it seem clear as day. Looking about,I saw one of the villagers sitting on a branch next to me, apparently asleep. I nudged it a few times until it woke up. The villager yawned and stretched. She looked at me without the fear and hatred so many others of her kind showed, and smiled. 'Well your awake. That means we can talk."Permalink

Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
I opened my eyes and yawned. It was now dark but my eyes cut through the night, making it seem clear as day. Looking about,I saw one of the villagers sitting on a branch next to me, apparently asleep. I nudged it a few times until it woke up. The villager yawned and stretched. She looked at me without the fear and hatred so many others of her kind showed, and smiled. 'Well your awake. That means we can talk."

((Okay. Go ahead. Can you make it so he/she brings Zhak to Harren? Harren is in her home not far away, and she's the one meant to defend this particular village. The villagers would know to get her involved with anything like this...
...Plus Harren's friends with pretty much everybody there anyway ^^ ))Permalink

she emerged from his tent unclothed and spat on the ground.blue transluesient gel ogmenting and covering all of her curves
((its like skin;sensetive to touch
when aroused, saddend or terifide it will tingle.itch and give a sharp electric shoc[if you have a mucsle zapper you`ll know what i`m talking about:P]))she then left the camp forgeting to cover up.
she arrived at a tree with a villager sleeping in it and decided to have some fun!Permalink

Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((sorry i was trying to be as discrete as posible:)whats wrong with harren shes just phat...Oohh.i thot it was Tezra yes so thats why i did that:)
go ahead i just updated them[rules]it is easy to do so even with the sites restrictions isn`t it?:))))

((Get back in character then. ^^

And I edited the rules too. I corrected all the spellings :P

Can I stay Admin? I seem to be doing most of the MOCing/comment moderation/philosophising on here anyway ^^ It would make my job easier ))Permalink

Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((sorry i was trying to be as discrete as posible:)whats wrong with harren shes just phat...Oohh.i thot it was Tezra yes so thats why i did that:)
go ahead i just updated them[rules]it is easy to do so even with the sites restrictions isn`t it?:))))

((And yeah, Harren is. Quite an tricky thing to build into her MOC, considering how sharp and spindly ost bionicles look. It was a toughie.))Permalink

Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((thats what i was gonna do:)))
"what do you want wrech!"

((Gideon isn't here to control him >.>))

Across the way, the door to Harren's house opened, and she stumbled out, rather disgusted. She needed to track Mez down about this - it was a whole new level of slobbiness - and usually Harren beat Mez hands down at that.
She needed a drink. Perhaps a game, or she could even go to the elders and sit through another one of their boring sermons. ANYTHING.
She hitched up her robe, and padded across the beach. It was longer to go across the beach, but she needed the sea air - and besides, there was that tree she liked. She was sure she'd stashed something under there about a week ago...

Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
she jumped off the tree and began to leave when she saw some treats underneath it she took them and began munching when she met up with her friend Harren..

Harren approached, scuffing drifts of fine sand in front of her when she moved. She had her robe drawn tight around herself to ward off the cold sea air. She approached the tree that grew straight out of the beach - there was someone there. ((Let's Ignore Gideon's character for now. Hes not here to play as Zhak, and we'd overcomplicate matters for him.)) She looked up, and saw a familiar face.
"Tezra?" She saw what her friend was holding too "Ohh.... wait a second..." She took a step back, and then covered her eyes. "What the xxxx Tezra. Put something on will you??" She looked away wincing, as she threw her robe to Tezra. She was wearing a small skirt and armour underneath. She always did - just in case something randomly attacked the village when she was in the middle of something else. Permalink

Harren approached, scuffing drifts of fine sand in front of her when she moved. She had her robe drawn tight around herself to ward off the cold sea air. She approached the tree that grew straight out of the beach - there was someone there. ((Let's Ignore Gideon's character for now. Hes not here to play as Zhak, and we'd overcomplicate matters for him.)) She looked up, and saw a familiar face.
"Tezra?" She saw what her friend was holding too "Ohh.... wait a second..." She took a step back, and then covered her eyes. "What the xxxx Tezra. Put something on will you??" She looked away wincing, as she threw her robe to Tezra. She was wearing a small skirt and armour underneath. She always did - just in case something randomly attacked the village when she was in the middle of something else.

((I FORGOT!!!!XD))
"she put it on "come on you know i like to be natural!" then she mumbled"its nothing you haven`t seen before"Permalink

Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((I FORGOT!!!!XD))
"she put it on "come on you know i like to be natural!" then she mumbled"its nothing you haven`t seen before"

"Yeah. I wish I hadn't." She risked looking, and Tezra was indeed fully clothed now. Harren shivered. She also noted the fact that she'd managed to find and consume the stash of cakes she'd hidden from her brother. Dxxmit.
"What brings you here anyway, Tez? Where did you go since this morning...?"Permalink

"Yeah. I wish I hadn't." She risked looking, and Tezra was indeed fully clothed now. Harren shivered. She also noted the fact that she'd managed to find and consume the stash of cakes she'd hidden from her brother. Dxxmit.
"What brings you here anyway, Tez? Where did you go since this morning...?"

Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
((Okay. Go ahead. Can you make it so he/she brings Zhak to Harren? Harren is in her home not far away, and she's the one meant to defend this particular village. The villagers would know to get her involved with anything like this...
...Plus Harren's friends with pretty much everybody there anyway ^^ ))

"Ugh... whatever." She rubbed her eyes, and then fell back in shock as something else caught her eye. Somethiung else was in the tree. "Tez! Look out behind you!" She drew her weapon, which morphed into a sword. She stood defensively, waiting for it to make any sudden moves. The Hynak was asleep, but with there creatures you couldn't be too sure.Permalink

"Ugh... whatever." She rubbed her eyes, and then fell back in shock as something else caught her eye. Somethiung else was in the tree. "Tez! Look out behind you!" She drew her weapon, which morphed into a sword. She stood defensively, waiting for it to make any sudden moves. The Hynak was asleep, but with there creatures you couldn't be too sure.

(annoid)"agc never mind him lets go."she scratched her shoulderPermalink

"Ugh... whatever." She rubbed her eyes, and then fell back in shock as something else caught her eye. Somethiung else was in the tree. "Tez! Look out behind you!" She drew her weapon, which morphed into a sword. She stood defensively, waiting for it to make any sudden moves. The Hynak was asleep, but with there creatures you couldn't be too sure.

Zhar

I heard the two little ones below me talking and then Their voices stopped suddenly. I heard a sword be drawn. I sat bolt upright. Grabbing my shield and pack I leaped from the tree landing on my feet in a graceful cat like manor. I ejected booth wrist blades and crouched defensively, backing away slowly swords crossed in front of me."What do you want? I have no quarrel with you." I said in a voice that was as calm as a threatened animal could sound.Permalink

I heard the two little ones below me talking and then Their voices stopped suddenly. I heard a sword be drawn. I sat bolt upright. Grabbing my shield and pack I leaped from the tree landing on my feet in a graceful cat like manor. I ejected booth wrist blades and crouched defensively, backing away slowly swords crossed in front of me."What do you want? I have no quarrel with you." I said in a voice that was as calm as a threatened animal could sound.

((ok somthing happend to our comments and i dont know what hopefuly this wont happen in story.how tall is he compared to us 8ft-7ft or 15-7ft<cuz that would be rediculas))Permalink

Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((ok somthing happend to our comments and i dont know what hopefuly this wont happen in story.how tall is he compared to us 8ft-7ft or 15-7ft<cuz that would be rediculas))

Well a toa mata is about 6 ft, a toa metru is around 7ft and this guy is taller than both im placing him fully erect back straight at around 9 and a half feet.Permalink

Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((Well a toa mata is about 6 ft, a toa metru is around 7ft and this guy is taller than both im placing him fully erect back straight at around 9 and a half feet.))

I heard the two little ones below me talking and then Their voices stopped suddenly. I heard a sword be drawn. I sat bolt upright. Grabbing my shield and pack I leaped from the tree landing on my feet in a graceful cat like manor. I ejected booth wrist blades and crouched defensively, backing away slowly swords crossed in front of me."What do you want? I have no quarrel with you." I said in a voice that was as calm as a threatened animal could sound.

Harren looked between Tezra and the Hynack, unsire what to do with the way-too-large sword in her hands "..."

I withdrew the blades and held the brush out to the Tokia while taking the painting from my pack. I held the painting out in front of me. It depicted the landscape around the tree with birds and other creatures all across the beach. "See I paint, I do not destroy." I looked at Tezra "You on the other hand have been very naughty."Permalink

Harren looked between Tezra and the Hynack, unsire what to do with the way-too-large sword in her hands "..."

I withdrew the blades and held the brush out to the Tokia while taking the painting from my pack. I held the painting out in front of me. It depicted the landscape around the tree with birds and other creatures all across the beach. "See I paint, I do not destroy." I looked at Tezra "You on the other hand have been very naughty."

she looked him up and down-mostly down.((i dont know if this is ok or not ill edit if nesesary:)))"oh really?"she smirkedPermalink

We returned after going to the crash site. There seemed to be a bit of a commotion, so I went along ahead. I put my helm on. I arrived, only to find two of the tall ones facing a beast of some kind.Permalink

"Don't worry, I'm not looking for a fight, just my memories. They seemed to have gotten away from me." I removed my helm.

"'kay. Well, welcome to Relo-Minoa, I guess. All three streets of it." Harren gestured around herself, indicating the buildings lying further inland. The sea ebbed up to her feet now, as the tide came in. "What's your name, stranger?"Permalink

"'kay. Well, welcome to Relo-Minoa, I guess. All three streets of it." Harren gestured around herself, indicating the buildings lying further inland. The sea ebbed up to her feet now, as the tide came in. "What's your name, stranger?"

"Harren." She nodded. "I'm the Tokia for this village. That other girl that just left, her village is a couple miles over to the east." She pointed. "Anyways, now you're here, what were you planning on doing? Nothing much happens here."Permalink

"Harren." She nodded. "I'm the Tokia for this village. That other girl that just left, her village is a couple miles over to the east." She pointed. "Anyways, now you're here, what were you planning on doing? Nothing much happens here."

Julio

"I really don't know. I awoke in this land with zero memories of my past, except for my name, this is my armor, and these are my swords."Permalink

"I really don't know. I awoke in this land with zero memories of my past, except for my name, this is my armor, and these are my swords."

"So... you don't know where you're from? You don't look like a native. Maybe you're from another of the Moons, or Planetside?" She looked up. The great storms of Tempesta Magna swirled in space directly above their heads. The Planet almost completely filled the night sky. In the distance, a blue-grey moon was visible.
"Hey! Maybe your shuttle crached or something, and you got amnesia! Where did you land?"Permalink

"So... you don't know where you're from? You don't look like a native. Maybe you're from another of the Moons, or Planetside?" She looked up. The great storms of Tempesta Magna swirled in space directly above their heads. The Planet almost completely filled the night sky. In the distance, a blue-grey moon was visible.
"Hey! Maybe your shuttle crached or something, and you got amnesia! Where did you land?"

Julio

"I woke up in a crater in the middle of nowhere. With a very large clearing made of blown down or blown up trees."Permalink

She shrugged. "I think I was asleep, probably."
((Bear in mind that her house would have been right in the way of the shockwave. Harren can sleep through ANYTHING :P ))

((Like a guy I know from church. During a camping trip, he slept through the thunderclap of a lightning bolt hitting the river next to us. The only thing he can't sleep through is being poked in the eye.))Permalink

((seemes that you forgot Zhar is standing right behind you.))
Zhar I listened to the little ones converse and wondered if i would have to fight. I began to back away more slowly waiting for some one to try to kill me."This is were I take my leave." I jumped back up the tree.Permalink

Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((seemes that you forgot Zhar is standing right behind you.))
Zhar I listened to the little ones converse and wondered if i would have to fight. I began to back away more slowly waiting for some one to try to kill me."This is were I take my leave." I jumped back up the tree.

"Uh, kay. Bye." Harren gave Zhar a slight wave, and then turned back to Julio. Permalink

((What window? We're in the middle of a beach. At night. With a whopping great tree right next to us.))
"You know... I THINK I remember seeing some people wearing similar stuff to you passing through here about... a year ago?"Permalink

((What window? We're in the middle of a beach. At night. With a whopping great tree right next to us.))
"You know... I THINK I remember seeing some people wearing similar stuff to you passing through here about... a year ago?"

((I thought we were in a building. My bad, so lets say he's staring up at the sky.))

((I thought we were in a building. My bad, so lets say he's staring up at the sky.))

Julio

"Really?"

"You get all kinds coming to Sampa Magna." She shrugged. "Tourists. Sampa Magna is great. Paradise. It's REALLY boring if you have to live here though." She smiled. "I mean, just a week ago I had a couple Pyro's staying in my village. Pyros Magna is... that moon there, by the way." She pointed up to an orange point of light in the sky.Permalink

"You get all kinds coming to Sampa Magna." She shrugged. "Tourists. Sampa Magna is great. Paradise. It's REALLY boring if you have to live here though." She smiled. "I mean, just a week ago I had a couple Pyro's staying in my village. Pyros Magna is... that moon there, by the way." She pointed up to an orange point of light in the sky.

Julio

"I see. So you said you had some of my kind come through here. These Knights of the Broken Cross?"Permalink

"I see. So you said you had some of my kind come through here. These Knights of the Broken Cross?"

She shrugged. "I'unno." She shivered. "Do you want to come into the Village? It's cold out here, and tonight's a feast night and everything." Over the dunes, in the village, streams of coloured lights were up, and there was the sound of festivity going on.Permalink

She shrugged. "I'unno." She shivered. "Do you want to come into the Village? It's cold out here, and tonight's a feast night and everything." Over the dunes, in the village, streams of coloured lights were up, and there was the sound of festivity going on.

Harren took Julio up a tree-lined path into the village. Sweet, honey-smelling blossom showered around them, filling Julio's head with scent. The village was built of pale wood, and white, shining stone, capturing the light coming from Tempesta Magna above. The night was bright, and there was the sound of chirping sand-rahi from all around. Small bird like creatures flitted through the air, rainbow plumage streaming out behind them like kite tails.

The village square was packed with villagers, and a few taller characters. Other Tokia. They towered over the matoran, and seemed to be quite the centre of attention. Various stalls and workshops were open, and handful of tourists were entertained by elders and shopkeepers from the village. The whole square was strung with beautiful paper lanterns which gave off multicoloured lights. A couple of small matoran children rushed between Julio's legs, calling after each other and running. An elder laughed at their merriment, smoking on a pipe of some description. Sweet smoke billowed from him.

Music played merrily across the square. A band of musicians on a podium near the centre of the village playing out a tune on pipe, drum and various strange, complex looking instruments Julio couldn't fathom. The music seemed quite haunting. Even above the babble of gossiping voices, it pervaded. A few couples were dancing to its bouncy tune, twirling and pirhouetting.

The air was filled with the smells of cooking - Julio's mouth began to water as the aromas of cooking meats, spices, vegetables filled the air. The centre of the village was full of trestle tables, each one bowed down with food. A shimmering blue shield shimmered around it though - for now, it was forbidden. Harren stared longingly at the tables, and Julio heard her stomach gurgle.

"Well, here we are. Home sweet home." She grinned. "We usually get a lot of tourists here for the Festivals."Permalink

Harren took Julio up a tree-lined path into the village. Sweet, honey-smelling blossom showered around them, filling Julio's head with scent. The village was built of pale wood, and white, shining stone, capturing the light coming from Tempesta Magna above. The night was bright, and there was the sound of chirping sand-rahi from all around. Small bird like creatures flitted through the air, rainbow plumage streaming out behind them like kite tails.

The village square was packed with villagers, and a few taller characters. Other Tokia. They towered over the matoran, and seemed to be quite the centre of attention. Various stalls and workshops were open, and handful of tourists were entertained by elders and shopkeepers from the village. The whole square was strung with beautiful paper lanterns which gave off multicoloured lights. A couple of small matoran children rushed between Julio's legs, calling after each other and running. An elder laughed at their merriment, smoking on a pipe of some description. Sweet smoke billowed from him.

Music played merrily across the square. A band of musicians on a podium near the centre of the village playing out a tune on pipe, drum and various strange, complex looking instruments Julio couldn't fathom. The music seemed quite haunting. Even above the babble of gossiping voices, it pervaded. A few couples were dancing to its bouncy tune, twirling and pirhouetting.

The air was filled with the smells of cooking - Julio's mouth began to water as the aromas of cooking meats, spices, vegetables filled the air. The centre of the village was full of trestle tables, each one bowed down with food. A shimmering blue shield shimmered around it though - for now, it was forbidden. Harren stared longingly at the tables, and Julio heard her stomach gurgle.

"Well, here we are. Home sweet home." She grinned. "We usually get a lot of tourists here for the Festivals."

Julio

I saw a few children staring at my swords. I walked over to a table. I picked up a goblet and threw it upwards. I rapidly placed my blade out in a way that it landed perfectly on the tip. I did some rapid sword strokes, including switching blades. The goblet didn't even move once. ((Just like this-http://www.onemanga.com/Black_Cat/57/13/ and this:http://www.onemanga.com/Black_Cat/57/14/)) I saw the looks of amazement in their faces and smiles. I drained the goblet and handed it to a small girl. They ran away laughing. I laughed. This brought back memories..."Harren! I remember something now! The festivals I went to as a child, this one triggered a resurfacing of them!"Permalink

I saw a few children staring at my swords. I walked over to a table. I picked up a goblet and threw it upwards. I rapidly placed my blade out in a way that it landed perfectly on the tip. I did some rapid sword strokes, including switching blades. The goblet didn't even move once. ((Just like this-http://www.onemanga.com/Black_Cat/57/13/ and this:http://www.onemanga.com/Black_Cat/57/14/)) I saw the looks of amazement in their faces and smiles. I drained the goblet and handed it to a small girl. They ran away laughing. I laughed. This brought back memories..."Harren! I remember something now! The festivals I went to as a child, this one triggered a resurfacing of them!"

Harren had her own goblet now. It was warm, and fragrant steam rose from the spiced liquid inside. She took a sip, feeling the warmth spread through her circuits in a way that only Festival Wine could ever do.

Harren had her own goblet now. It was warm, and fragrant steam rose from the spiced liquid inside. She took a sip, feeling the warmth spread through her circuits in a way that only Festival Wine could ever do.

"Can you remember how you learned that!?" She said.

Fenrir

"It just suddenly resurfaced, like this was the trigger to the resurfacing of the memories. I think that certain places and events will work as a trigger to bring the memories back."Permalink

"Well, maybe if you enjoy yourself here, you'll remember more. Ooh!" Harren was immediately distracted by a stall. It was built in a different style to the local ones, and displayed a dizzying array of seemingly random objects. She immediately ended up lost in barter with the stalltender, leaving Julio unaccompanied for the time being. A figure in red armour walked up to Harren.

"Well, maybe if you enjoy yourself here, you'll remember more. Ooh!" Harren was immediately distracted by a stall. It was built in a different style to the local ones, and displayed a dizzying array of seemingly random objects. She immediately ended up lost in barter with the stalltender, leaving Julio unaccompanied for the time being. A figure in red armour walked up to Harren.

"Hello Mezzinus. Enjoying yourself?" I drew my blades and started to juggle them, attracting a small crowd. Out of nowhere I produced several daggers and a hatchet. I juggled these as well. "I am."Permalink

"Hello Mezzinus. Enjoying yourself?" I drew my blades and started to juggle them, attracting a small crowd. Out of nowhere I produced several daggers and a hatchet. I juggled these as well. "I am."

Mezzinus.

"Oh, yes. Well... no. I'm on guard duty. Mean's I can't drink yet." He frowned, and Harren gave him a big cheesy grin. "In any case, the festival seems to be going well. Is that all you can do, Julio?" he yawned, and suddenly fire erupted on the blade of each weapon Julio was juggling. Mez smirked.Permalink

"Oh, yes. Well... no. I'm on guard duty. Mean's I can't drink yet." He frowned, and Harren gave him a big cheesy grin. "In any case, the festival seems to be going well. Is that all you can do, Julio?" he yawned, and suddenly fire erupted on the blade of each weapon Julio was juggling. Mez smirked.

Julio

"Nope. I still have more where those came from." I moved the blade juggling to just one hand and from various places on and around me, I produced multiple goblets, flasks, coins, fruit, trinkets, and toys. And juggled them on one hand. "There's still more where this came from."Permalink

"Nope. I still have more where those came from." I moved the blade juggling to just one hand and from various places on and around me, I produced multiple goblets, flasks, coins, fruit, trinkets, and toys. And juggled them on one hand. "There's still more where this came from."

"Wow. Dimensional Pockets." Harren's brows raised. "I wish I had some of those..."Permalink

If only I could go down there without some one trying to run me through I thought as I watched the festivities. my mouth watered as the sweet smell of meats being cured reached my nose. I reached in my pack but found only my paints.Another empty night night. I forced my self out of the tree and walked to the town. Maybe this town won't try to kill me. Maybe.Permalink

If only I could go down there without some one trying to run me through I thought as I watched the festivities. my mouth watered as the sweet smell of meats being cured reached my nose. I reached in my pack but found only my paints.Another empty night night. I forced my self out of the tree and walked to the town. Maybe this town won't try to kill me. Maybe.

Mez made his way across the dunes, drawing his trident mainly for the look of the thing, and started to pace around the village. The end of the trident lit, giving him torchlight to see by, although in truth the light reflected from Tempesta Magna during summer nights stopped the nights from ever being anything darker than twilight.
A figure strode towards the village, and immediately Mez jogged up to him. "Halt. Who goes there?" He said. Then he saw Zhar's face, and immediately drew up his trident defensively.Permalink

Mez made his way across the dunes, drawing his trident mainly for the look of the thing, and started to pace around the village. The end of the trident lit, giving him torchlight to see by, although in truth the light reflected from Tempesta Magna during summer nights stopped the nights from ever being anything darker than twilight.
A figure strode towards the village, and immediately Mez jogged up to him. "Halt. Who goes there?" He said. Then he saw Zhar's face, and immediately drew up his trident defensively.

Zhar

"Again you people with your weapons always trying to kill me. It never ends." I remove the shield from my back and attach it to my arm blade flipping the blade into attack position. Reaching in to my pack I pulled out my painting and showed it to the Guard."What do you people have against me? Honestly I have done nothing to deserve such hostility."Permalink

"Again you people with your weapons always trying to kill me. It never ends." I remove the shield from my back and attach it to my arm blade flipping the blade into attack position. Reaching in to my pack I pulled out my painting and showed it to the Guard."What do you people have against me? Honestly I have done nothing to deserve such hostility."

"OK little man. You want a fight than a fight you shall have." I Flipped my blade forward and dropped into a fighting stance."This is your last chance to back off." I roared and activated another mechanism. The edges of my sword began to glow a bright yellow.Permalink

"OK little man. You want a fight than a fight you shall have." I Flipped my blade forward and dropped into a fighting stance."This is your last chance to back off." I roared and activated another mechanism. The edges of my sword began to glow a bright yellow.

Julio

I heard the sounds of weapons being drawn and rushed to the entrance. Both my swords were out and at both throats. "Stop it now. This is a night of festivities is it not? We don't need-" I felt as if a shock went through my head.Permalink

she woke up and got dresed "Ugh these acuresd laws!"((what happend to the seige?))and snuck out the back way((i`ve now made a reason:)))making her way down the beach. she was headed for the Hynacks camp.Permalink

I heard the sounds of weapons being drawn and rushed to the entrance. Both my swords were out and at both throats. "Stop it now. This is a night of festivities is it not? We don't need-" I felt as if a shock went through my head.

((You can't hear my weapons they flip forward. They are not drawn. Very silent, very sharp, always lethall.)) I knocked the new comer's blade away from my throat and then cut the weapon in half knocking the red one aside with my shield, I ran for the village slinging my shield across my back and pulling the blades back I transformed into a wolf in mid stride running through one side of the village and out the other grabbing a piece of smoked meat as I went. I hated stealing but it was... necessary. I was not welcome in my home land and I was not welcome here because of what i was and my preferred craft. I ran until i found a suitable hiding place and then devoured the meat.I curled up and went to sleep, Dreaming of a place were nothing mattered people liked me for who i was, not what i was.Permalink

Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
she woke up and got dresed "Ugh these acuresd laws!"((what happend to the seige?))and snuck out the back way((i`ve now made a reason:)))making her way down the beach. she was headed for the Hynacks camp.

Zhar

I woke to the sound of some one walking through the sand out side of my hiding place which turned out to be a cave along the beach. I peaked out from behind a rock to see a lone Female Tokia walking along the beach. I jumped out and grabbed her keeping my hand over her mouth to silence her."Keep quiet. I won't hurt. I promise You'll be safe here."Permalink

Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((You can't hear my weapons they flip forward. They are not drawn. Very silent, very sharp, always lethall.)) I knocked the new comer's blade away from my throat and then cut the weapon in half knocking the red one aside with my shield, I ran for the village slinging my shield across my back and pulling the blades back I transformed into a wolf in mid stride running through one side of the village and out the other grabbing a piece of smoked meat as I went. I hated stealing but it was... necessary. I was not welcome in my home land and I was not welcome here because of what i was and my preferred craft. I ran until i found a suitable hiding place and then devoured the meat.I curled up and went to sleep, Dreaming of a place were nothing mattered people liked me for who i was, not what i was.

((You can't cut Julio's blades. He's very proud of their hardness. Trying to cut them is like trying to cut solid rock with a toothpick regardless of any increase in strength of you or your weapons.))

Julio

More memories washed through my mind like unexpected guests The sudden burst hurt like hxxx nearly knocked me out, but I remembered more.Permalink

((You can't cut Julio's blades. He's very proud of their hardness. Trying to cut them is like trying to cut solid rock with a toothpick regardless of any increase in strength of you or your weapons.))

Julio

More memories washed through my mind like unexpected guests The sudden burst hurt like hxxx nearly knocked me out, but I remembered more.

((Even if your guy's blade is strong it cant take being super heated(remember the glowing edges of my sword) I made my blades to slice through any metal because they are as hot as a plasma cutter. They will slice through your sword with the ease a plasma cutter has cutting 1/2 inch steel. Whats done is done,mister i have to be better than everyone.))Permalink

((You can't cut Julio's blades. He's very proud of their hardness. Trying to cut them is like trying to cut solid rock with a toothpick regardless of any increase in strength of you or your weapons.))

Julio

More memories washed through my mind like unexpected guests The sudden burst hurt like hxxx nearly knocked me out, but I remembered more.

((Even if your guy's blade is strong it cant take being super heated(remember the glowing edges of my sword) I made my blades to slice through any metal because they are as hot as a plasma cutter. They will slice through your sword with the ease a plasma cutter has cutting 1/2 inch steel. Whats done is done,mister i have to be better than everyone.))

((Meh. The blades are made of a unique metal with an insanely high melting point. A 2-hour dip in molten lava is required just to be able to shape it.))Permalink

((You can't cut Julio's blades. He's very proud of their hardness. Trying to cut them is like trying to cut solid rock with a toothpick regardless of any increase in strength of you or your weapons.))

Julio

More memories washed through my mind like unexpected guests The sudden burst hurt like hxxx nearly knocked me out, but I remembered more.

Harren looked over Julio worriedly. "You okay there?" A crowd of akonians was gathered around them. "You look like you've just seen a-" BONG! BONG! The great white church in the centre of the rang out a peal of bells, drowning out Harren's speech. The Festive music turned to solemn chanting.

Warm, golden lights glowed up around the square, and the people fell silent. As one they looked to the temple expectantly, and a figure dressed in a white frobe stepped out. He raised his crabbed ivory hands to the sky.
"Friends." It said in a cracked, ancient voice, heavy with the weight of faith and authority. "Today marks the 2302nd year since our Akonian and Tokian ancestors defeated the Cyclonoids of this planet. The battle was long, dark, blXXdy, and many died for our own benefit. May we soon raise our goblets and enjoy the bounteous providence their blood hath provited for us!" There was a murmuring from the crowd. "But first, a moment of silence, for those who have gone, both in the war, and in the Hynak wars that so followed - So recently the Tokia Empershia. May we mourn their passing." The elder clasped his hands together and bowed his head. Members of the crowd fell silent, and most made the sign of the three virtues across their chests. The air was solemn for what seemed to Julio like an age - and Harren wouldn not speak to her. She looked close to crying.

Eventually, the silence ended. The elder rose his head to the quiet air. "Let us remember their sacrifice that we may live in such a paradise, and may Drothmarr and the Great Beings watch over them evermore." The elder coughed. "And now for the feasting! I can tell you're eager!" he chuckled, and there was a blue flash. The festive music started up again, and there was a rush of akonians towards the great trestles in the centre of the square. The smell of food was more overpowering than ever, and sounds of merriment resounded from the buildings and cobbles around them.

Harren looked up to Julio, and tugged his arm. "Hah! Now the fun starts!" Permalink

Harren looked over Julio worriedly. "You okay there?" A crowd of akonians was gathered around them. "You look like you've just seen a-" BONG! BONG! The great white church in the centre of the rang out a peal of bells, drowning out Harren's speech. The Festive music turned to solemn chanting.

Warm, golden lights glowed up around the square, and the people fell silent. As one they looked to the temple expectantly, and a figure dressed in a white frobe stepped out. He raised his crabbed ivory hands to the sky.
"Friends." It said in a cracked, ancient voice, heavy with the weight of faith and authority. "Today marks the 2302nd year since our Akonian and Tokian ancestors defeated the Cyclonoids of this planet. The battle was long, dark, blXXdy, and many died for our own benefit. May we soon raise our goblets and enjoy the bounteous providence their blood hath provited for us!" There was a murmuring from the crowd. "But first, a moment of silence, for those who have gone, both in the war, and in the Hynak wars that so followed - So recently the Tokia Empershia. May we mourn their passing." The elder clasped his hands together and bowed his head. Members of the crowd fell silent, and most made the sign of the three virtues across their chests. The air was solemn for what seemed to Julio like an age - and Harren wouldn not speak to her. She looked close to crying.

Eventually, the silence ended. The elder rose his head to the quiet air. "Let us remember their sacrifice that we may live in such a paradise, and may Drothmarr and the Great Beings watch over them evermore." The elder coughed. "And now for the feasting! I can tell you're eager!" he chuckled, and there was a blue flash. The festive music started up again, and there was a rush of akonians towards the great trestles in the centre of the square. The smell of food was more overpowering than ever, and sounds of merriment resounded from the buildings and cobbles around them.

Harren looked up to Julio, and tugged his arm. "Hah! Now the fun starts!"

Julio

"I remembered more. I remembered the numerous brawls and disputes I participated in and broke up. Eh? The fun starts now? Fine with me. Though if that beast shows up again, I'm putting a knife through its throat."Permalink

"I remembered more. I remembered the numerous brawls and disputes I participated in and broke up. Eh? The fun starts now? Fine with me. Though if that beast shows up again, I'm putting a knife through its throat."

I marched on my dark brothers campsite, anger burning in my eyes. A guard halted me and began to look me over. I flipped my blades out and stabbed him in his open maw. Another guard reached for his sword but was to late as I impaled him on both blades lifting him into the air. I ripped one blade out and cut his legs off with a single slash. As I ripped my other blade out I decapitated him. putting him out of his misery. As I stalked towards another guard he turned into a full wolf and ran his tail tucked between his legs. I leaped into the air and landed on one of the tents, bringing it crashing down on its occupants. As they tried to rip out of the collapsed tents I killed the male letting the female go. She was not a threat to this land, she was no soldier. I searched for the generals tent hoping to kill him while he slept. I knew the general and his sub commanders slept in separate tents from the grunts,Who all slept in one long tent filled with bunk beds. Permalink

I marched on my dark brothers campsite, anger burning in my eyes. A guard halted me and began to look me over. I flipped my blades out and stabbed him in his open maw. Another guard reached for his sword but was to late as I impaled him on both blades lifting him into the air. I ripped one blade out and cut his legs off with a single slash. As I ripped my other blade out I decapitated him. putting him out of his misery. As I stalked towards another guard he turned into a full wolf and ran his tail tucked between his legs. I leaped into the air and landed on one of the tents, bringing it crashing down on its occupants. As they tried to rip out of the collapsed tents I killed the male letting the female go. She was not a threat to this land, she was no soldier. I searched for the generals tent hoping to kill him while he slept. I knew the general and his sub commanders slept in separate tents from the grunts,Who all slept in one long tent filled with bunk beds.

((He'll want to stay clear of Julio or else he'll end up with a knife in his neck.))

((Julio better keep his temper in check other wise he'll have his throat torn out.You threatened Zhar he reacted as per training and instinct. You never put something to an animals throat;some thing i learned the hard way. Zhar is half animal so he would react the same way a dog or wolf would. in their world you were trying to prove dominance.)) Permalink

Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((Julio better keep his temper in check other wise he'll have his throat torn out.You threatened Zhar he reacted as per training and instinct. You never put something to an animals throat;some thing i learned the hard way. Zhar is half animal so he would react the same way a dog or wolf would. in their world you were trying to prove dominance.))

((Meh. Julio took as a declaration of war. Julio is skilled with practically every weapon known. Everything from swords to knives to rods to hammers to knuckles to spears. He is skilled in them all.))Permalink

((Meh. Julio took as a declaration of war. Julio is skilled with practically every weapon known. Everything from swords to knives to rods to hammers to knuckles to spears. He is skilled in them all.))

((Zhar is skilled with bare knuckle brawling, Chains, piano wire, swords, and teeth. He can also swing an axe head on the end of a chain and hit only his intended target.(that is something i can do in real life as well as throwing axes and i can thank my grandpa for that.)))Permalink

Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((Zhar is skilled with bare knuckle brawling, Chains, piano wire, swords, and teeth. He can also swing an axe head on the end of a chain and hit only his intended target.(that is something i can do in real life as well as throwing axes and i can thank my grandpa for that.)))

((If can be used as a weapon, Julio can use it to its fullest potential. That includes pillows.))Permalink

((If can be used as a weapon, Julio can use it to its fullest potential. That includes pillows.))

((mess with Zhar and its your funeral.))

Zhar

I Ripped through another tent killing another commander. That was three but the general was missing. Moving to the next tent I killed yet another Guard an a soldier trying to get his armor on. The area between tents was littered with bodies. A few tents were on fire while others were full of holes. The main tent was on fire as well as the barracks I would have my revenge and no soldier would stop me.Many had fled believing that a large number of Tokia had attacked while they slept. Now only a few of them were left trying to find the weapons cache witch was now on fire. The General was still here I could feel it. After an hour or so of searching the general was nowhere to be found and all the soldiers that had stayed behind were dead. I mounted there heads on spikes and placed them on the beach as a warning for their comrades. I burned the bodies and the rest of the camp to the ground. I heard leaves rustle behind me and looked to see an akonian running back to the village. I did not peruse him, hoping that he had seen the whole thing down to the last gruesome detail.Permalink

I Ripped through another tent killing another commander. That was three but the general was missing. Moving to the next tent I killed yet another Guard an a soldier trying to get his armor on. The area between tents was littered with bodies. A few tents were on fire while others were full of holes. The main tent was on fire as well as the barracks I would have my revenge and no soldier would stop me.Many had fled believing that a large number of Tokia had attacked while they slept. Now only a few of them were left trying to find the weapons cache witch was now on fire. The General was still here I could feel it. After an hour or so of searching the general was nowhere to be found and all the soldiers that had stayed behind were dead. I mounted there heads on spikes and placed them on the beach as a warning for their comrades. I burned the bodies and the rest of the camp to the ground. I heard leaves rustle behind me and looked to see an akonian running back to the village. I did not peruse him, hoping that he had seen the whole thing down to the last gruesome detail.

((Mess with Julio and there won't be enough left of you for a funeral.))Permalink

I woke up, tears flowing along my face. I had dreamed of the death of my mate who had been murdered while I was away. I had held her as she took her final breath,watched the light fade from her eyes. The memory still haunted me, even after four years of hiding from those that had intended to kill me. I could not return home for their was a price on my head. I could not stay here because the native inhabitants hated my kind. Maybe the destruction I had wrought upon my brothers camp would prove me as trust worthy. I did not know but my hopes were high. Permalink

((Meh, just wait until he's in a battle and you'll see why I said that.))

((I think Harren will probably keep Julio in check. You can't have TWO characters who'll go into insatiable rages - he has to be different to Fenrir. I'm trying to make Harren as different from Telzira as poss, myself.

Now, I think in the Rp, the night is over, so Harren and Julio are suffering the aftermath of large amounts of feasting, and, most notably, drinking.))

Harren rose up on her knees, wincing in pain. Small, hot lights danced in front of her eyes, and the joints in her kneck crackled like buring paper. Something disgusting coated the inside of her mouth, and every sound in her room echoed a thousand times inside her skull, torturing her ears to breaking point.

SOME night...

She struggled to her feet, clasping onto a shelf for balance. Well, at least she'd got home okay, and the sounds of drunken snoring emanated from the guest room, so Julio was probably alright too. There were clatters and cursewords from the kitchen where Mezzinus was probably trying to remember how to eat breakfast.

((I think Harren will probably keep Julio in check. You can't have TWO characters who'll go into insatiable rages - he has to be different to Fenrir. I'm trying to make Harren as different from Telzira as poss, myself.

Now, I think in the Rp, the night is over, so Harren and Julio are suffering the aftermath of large amounts of feasting, and, most notably, drinking.))

Harren rose up on her knees, wincing in pain. Small, hot lights danced in front of her eyes, and the joints in her kneck crackled like buring paper. Something disgusting coated the inside of her mouth, and every sound in her room echoed a thousand times inside her skull, torturing her ears to breaking point.

SOME night...

She struggled to her feet, clasping onto a shelf for balance. Well, at least she'd got home okay, and the sounds of drunken snoring emanated from the guest room, so Julio was probably alright too. There were clatters and cursewords from the kitchen where Mezzinus was probably trying to remember how to eat breakfast.

Harren jumped. "Tezra!? What the h*ll are you doing in my... Were you in there all night?" She grimaced.

"man i think iwas. that was some heavy shxxx we got in to, eh" he then recieved a fleshback of the both of them lounging on the floor, down to their underwear, watching a clown jump on the bed while playing guitar and very little beings danced on the furnichurPermalink

Harren jumped. "Tezra!? What the h*ll are you doing in my... Were you in there all night?" She grimaced.

"man i think iwas. that was some heavy shxxx we got in to, eh" he then recieved a fleshback of the both of them lounging on the floor, down to their underwear, watching a clown jump on the bed while playing guitar and very little beings danced on the furnichur

Harren jumped. "Tezra!? What the h*ll are you doing in my... Were you in there all night?" She grimaced.

"man i think iwas. that was some heavy shxxx we got in to, eh" he then recieved a fleshback of the both of them lounging on the floor, down to their underwear, watching a clown jump on the bed while playing guitar and very little beings danced on the furnichur

Harren jumped. "Tezra!? What the h*ll are you doing in my... Were you in there all night?" She grimaced.

"man i think iwas. that was some heavy shxxx we got in to, eh" he then recieved a fleshback of the both of them lounging on the floor, down to their underwear, watching a clown jump on the bed while playing guitar and very little beings danced on the furnichur

((Does anyone know What the hxll happened to gringat.))

((Well, some ppl have to sleep, ya know?))

Harren rubbed her temples. ((The rivetty bits on the sides of the Iron man head)) "Ohh yeah..." She looked down, jumped slightly, and rushed for her robe, instinctively trying to hide her tubby gut. "SOME night, huh? I never knew Mez was that good at the mandolin..." She adjusted the robe, tightening the cord around her midriff. "Where did you come from anyway? I thought you were celebrating in your own village."

Harren rubbed her temples. ((The rivetty bits on the sides of the Iron man head)) "Ohh yeah..." She looked down, jumped slightly, and rushed for her robe, instinctively trying to hide her tubby gut. "SOME night, huh? I never knew Mez was that good at the mandolin..." She adjusted the robe, tightening the cord around her midriff. "Where did you come from anyway? I thought you were celebrating in your own village."

Harren rubbed her temples. ((The rivetty bits on the sides of the Iron man head)) "Ohh yeah..." She looked down, jumped slightly, and rushed for her robe, instinctively trying to hide her tubby gut. "SOME night, huh? I never knew Mez was that good at the mandolin..." She adjusted the robe, tightening the cord around her midriff. "Where did you come from anyway? I thought you were celebrating in your own village."

((Hooray for random drunken sleepovers :P ))

((It was 3Pm when i asked and there is someone at Harren's door. He saw the destrructin of the Hynak camp And Saw Zhar chase most off and killed the others.))Permalink

Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
True but stating the time at which i asked explains why I was wondering I know there is a time difference I have a friend in Scotland Who is waking up when I'm gettin ready to sleep.

Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
Me-Mez, You wont believe what happened last night. I-I have to tell Harren. It was horrifying and spectacular. He He killen Them and drove the others off. S-s-so much blood...

((Speech marks))

"You can tell me. What happened? Was there a fight in the village?"Permalink

"A-a-a Lone H-hynak in g-g-golden armor at-ttacked the hynak's Camp and kill-led all of the Guards and some soldiers and all of the commanders but he never found the general. I-i-i think that he fled with the rest of his men but The Gold one was calling him out to a duel. Then when the gold hynak killed the last of the stragglers and mounted their heads on spikes along the beach a-and burned the bodies and the rest of the camp. When I looked back for a second he must have seen me but he looked right at me smiled and winked. I was so scared that I ran straight here to get you."Permalink

Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
"A-a-a Lone H-hynak in g-g-golden armor at-ttacked the hynak's Camp and kill-led all of the Guards and some soldiers and all of the commanders but he never found the general. I-i-i think that he fled with the rest of his men but The Gold one was calling him out to a duel. Then when the gold hynak killed the last of the stragglers and mounted their heads on spikes along the beach a-and burned the bodies and the rest of the camp. When I looked back for a second he must have seen me but he looked right at me smiled and winked. I was so scared that I ran straight here to get you."

"Why are you so scared? This is GREAT news! Perhaps we have an ally." Mezzinus scratched his chin. "You know, I think it might even be the same Hynak I encountered yesterday. I don't think he's a threat to us, akonian." He crouched down, to the akonian's height. "Don't be scared anymore, you hear? Go over to the elders' hall. Tell them what's happened as well. I'd invite you in but... it's a complete tip to be completely honest... Actually, I'll come with you. Come on." he got up, and took the akonian by the hand, heading off to the elders' hall. "Sorry about this Julio. Just stay with the girls, hm?"

"Why are you so scared? This is GREAT news! Perhaps we have an ally." Mezzinus scratched his chin. "You know, I think it might even be the same Hynak I encountered yesterday. I don't think he's a threat to us, akonian." He crouched down, to the akonian's height. "Don't be scared anymore, you hear? Go over to the elders' hall. Tell them what's happened as well. I'd invite you in but... it's a complete tip to be completely honest... Actually, I'll come with you. Come on." he got up, and took the akonian by the hand, heading off to the elders' hall. "Sorry about this Julio. Just stay with the girls, hm?"

Harren giggled. "Yeah. And the feasting. I still feel stuffed even after all night." She folded her arms as best she could. "Ahh... so you don't remember doing that air-guitar thing with Mez, then?" She grinned.Permalink

Harren giggled. "Yeah. And the feasting. I still feel stuffed even after all night." She folded her arms as best she could. "Ahh... so you don't remember doing that air-guitar thing with Mez, then?" She grinned.

I rose and stretched felling pain through out my body. It had been a long night and I had strained my muscles close to their limit during the fight the previous night. I was covered in scratches and cuts but most were shallow and did not require bandages. I moved back to the giant tree I had been painting in earlier. Maybe the town would Investigate the destruction maybe they would think I had gone mad and was A threat to every one. Only time would tell so I waited in the tree.Permalink

I rose and stretched felling pain through out my body. It had been a long night and I had strained my muscles close to their limit during the fight the previous night. I was covered in scratches and cuts but most were shallow and did not require bandages. I moved back to the giant tree I had been painting in earlier. Maybe the town would Investigate the destruction maybe they would think I had gone mad and was A threat to every one. Only time would tell so I waited in the tree.

Mezzinus

"What's your name, son?" He said, as they wandered through the street up towards the elders' hall. The are was strewn with litter and various other things after the nights celebrations, but teams of akonians in orange jackets were already cleaning it up. Come tomorrow, the village would be as good as new.Permalink