Is Love A Choice,Or A Mercy

Below is the poem entitled Is Love A Choice,Or A Mercy which was written by poet
Mehnaz
Veetil. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

I am so pleased to see you try out my Questionku. Great job, the last line should be six sylables.
suggestion:
First stanza remove "why" from line 3. Stanza 2
perhaps try " do we not have a Choice?"
This is one of the best 1st attempts I have seen for this new form, you are a natural.