This is really good! The way you write for each of the characters is perfectly suited. You are such a good writer. Update really soon please I'm desperate for another one of your chapters to read as soon as possible :)

Author's Response: ahhh i miss this fic so much! i never have time to write anymore!! i wanna update all my fics so i'm really gonna try to update as soon as i can but i know it's not much to go on because i say that all the time but don't give up hope!

I don't know how you make out your stories to be so original. But I know that I will never stop loving them :)

By the way, I love the story summary and the story title... ORIGINAL is the only word for it ;)

xxx sofia :)

Author's Response: Awe :3 that's so sweet! Thank you! I heard the song so long ago and I just wrote the first chapter on a whim late one night and I was like, oh, maybe I should post this! :P thanks for all the reviews you are so sweet!

I'm sorry, but nothing in this chapter is believable. Everyone seems out of character and James is acting like an annoying girl. (I'm guessing you've read twilight?) I think you're kind of overdoing everything.

Author's Response: Seems out of character in what sense? This is a comedy,the point of fan fiction is the FICTION part. I don't always follow the character traits 'in the books' and this fic is more of a new age take on the marauders. James is supposed to be annoying on purpose. that's the whole point of the plot. To get him to shut up by having his friends help him out.

i really enjoyed this chapter. it was very well written and it was interesting to have it from Remus' point of view rather than just james'
i can't wait to hear more :)

Author's Response: Oh, you're in for a bumpy ride... every chapter will have a different point of view ;) hahaha. I'm glad you liked Remus Lupins POV! I think I did a good job, I'm quite proud of myself :D thanks for the great review!

I've fallen in love with your version of Remus Lupin. It's official.
On a less crazy note, I really like this story and the idea you have here. :) I like how James and Lily are friends, instead of here hating him in other stories! And Sirius makes me laugh.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like this version of the Lily/James friendship! And I always imagined Remus to be unnerving but still very humorous ;) thanks for the review! I'm so happy you like my story!

Ok, I cant type that long Of a review because I happen to be on my iPod touch reading this. Just wanted to say that I absolutely Love how you portray the Marauders. James's thoughts are absolutely hilarious, especially the part about lily bearing his 48 children and being his "baby mama " :) Also, the conversations between the four Is entertaining and it really seems to fit Their chaacters. I also wanted to say that I think it's great that you didn't make Peter into a watery eyed, shy guy as some stories do. Others just completely leave him out. I mean, he turned out to be bad, but he wasn't always that way, so I like how you portray him. Anyway:

10/10

Jackie

Author's Response: Hahaha, when people mention Peter as some sort of lab experiment with awkward tear ducts it just makes me not want to read about it.

I actually really, REALLY enjoyed that chapter. I appericiate the originality of the Maruders and the chapter on Remus. His humanity was original and his thoughts were very humorous. Best of luck on the writing for the rest of this story.
LMW

Author's Response: Thank you! I really wanted to make it seem as if Remus was telling this story; I'm so glad you liked it!