Listen its very artistic i can see where your coming from but obviously this isnt deviant art where those things are cherished and valued...
THIS IS NEWGROUNDS!!! WOOHOO!!
and WE like to ANIMATION!!! as to that all u did was add stuff to pictures which gave it a cool effect but otherwise left me bored to pieces... Forgive me or this review but keep at it u prob know more about animation than me but hey i liked it ^^ i'm in to this kinda of stuff...kinda ^^;;