Hi there! Well, after doing some research on the inner workings of Hasbro, I found out that an old, old friend of my patents' was the Senior Director of the company. They hadn't seem each other in years & wanted to hook up. I asked if I could send her a few premises I had written for MLP & she said, sure! A month went by & we didn't hear anything...then we were astonished when she gave us a call & said, you've got a shot! Looking back, 2 years ago, my writing wasn't amazing...Meghan helped me every step of the way. It was a wonderful experience & now, I'm focusing on a novel. I still watch the show & have no doubt that season 4 will be epic!

This is my only one. I have a bunch of premises that are much newer and well writen. Still nothing compared to something Meghan could do, but they are pretty good ones. I've tryed to get them read, but heard nothing. Since they are copywrited to me, I'll share them with you all soon.

Don't be jealous. I have been homeschooled my whole life and was able to spend countless hours working on my writing. You'll go places for sure with a degree in your hands. They did change a lot. The main thing was that in the original version, Discord was NOT trying to turn everypony against each other. But in my option, having him do that made what he truly was shine a lot more. I want to share more, but I fear I might get in trouble. So, not another word from me without Meghan's approval!

Here's the first page of the outline......the teaser was all Meghan and Celestia's letter was mine. The rest is pertty much a combination of both of our writing.

TEASER

RAINBOW DASH is flying through the sky when she looks down and notices FLUTTERSHY fretting over something in some tall grass. She swoops down to see what the trouble is and Fluttershy informs her that she is trying to remove a tick from a poor, innocent creature. Fluttershy steps back to reveal… the most HIDEOUS CREATURE that Rainbow Dash has ever seen. The creature gnashes its teeth as Fluttershy gingerly removes the tick. Rainbow Dash just shakes her head in disbelief as Fluttershy then apologizes to the tick for having to remove him from the creature.

Just then, a pair of PONIES approach carrying an enormous package addressed to Fluttershy. With Rainbow Dash’s help, she opens the crate and removes the bubble wrap covering the crate’s cargo to reveal DISCORD! Fluttershy lets out a SCREAM, and then realizes that it’s just the statue of Discord. “Who would’ve thought you’d want the statue of Discord?” Rainbow Dash asks. Fluttershy notices a letter attached to the statue and reads aloud: “To Fluttershy. From… Princess Celestia.” Off Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash’s confused expressions we END TEASER.

ACT I

Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are still standing in front of the statue of Discord. Fluttershy reads aloud from Princess Celestia’s letter: “Fluttershy, I’m aware of your amazing talent with magical creatures, so I have a bit of a challenge for you. I have decided to forgive Discord for his past crimes, but I want you to help reform him so that he can make a more positive contribution to the world around him. I believe that Discord can change and I think you are the pony who can help him do so.” Rainbow Dash poo-poos the idea, “Reform Discord? Yeah, right.” Reading further, Fluttershy learns that Princess Celestia has fashioned a necklace using shards of the elements of harmony that, when placed on Discord, will allow him to keep his magical powers, but punish him if uses them for evil. According to the instructions Celestia has provided, the necklace can only be removed when Discord is prepared to live an evil-free life.

“Oh my goodness, what should I do?” Fluttershy asks. “What should you do?! Send him back!” Rainbow Dash responds. “I don’t care if he is wearing some magic necklace, this guy’s bad news,” she adds. Fluttershy is nervous about