I Remember...

I wrote this poem for my mom who passed away the summer of 2010. I Miss her and love her very much.

I remember the long talks we had, and even how meaningless they were. How much we laughed during them.

I can’t help laughing as I remember our words. But I also can’t help crying, as I think how much I miss them. I remember when we used to sing along to our favorite songs together. when you’d embarrass me in front of my friends. when you’d called my shoes “sneaks” . when you’d smile.

You will never know how special you were, and still are, to me.

I remember when you took me out into the waves at the beach and how you told me not to be afraid, and I wasn’t.

You have taught me so much, and have inspired me in a such a huge way. I will miss you forever.

I love you Mom, oodles and gaboodles.

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When I read your author's note and then read your poem which overflowed with emotion I couldn't help think of my mom and how much it would hurt to loose her...Tink I'm sorry for your lose, I know nothing I say will make you stop hurting any less. So moving on, I love the pic you choose and your words flowed together effortlessly. You had no grammatical errors. During the entire poem I could feel so much emotions that it brought tears to my eyes. Great work, Tink.

so it is true when they say one becomes a real poet only after feeling the bitterness of a tragedy... please take my condolences, I'm very sorry for your suffering but just think it will make you stronger! keep going!

Awww. I want to give you a virtual hug! You really put emotion into this. I'm sure your mother is proud of you for writing this. It's perfect the way it is, like CarrieAnn13. I love the image you portrayed. It's amazing! :)

Aw, this is so sad. I know nothing will bring your mother back, but you have my condolences. I have absolutely no criticism for this poem. The grammar is excellent and you wrote so emotionally I had tears in my eyes. Good job, Tink1350!