You should do a MakoHaru fic about Makoto getting injured or sick. ive seen/read so many the other way around and I think it would be really fun (and cute) to see Haru trying to do comforting things but end up just being really awkward and silly

...Not my absolute most favorite thing in the world, I'll have to admit, but definitely favorited. And not because "KYA IT WAS SO CUTE." but because you captured the essence of their relationship so well. Like... I could picture all of this happening. Well, the Haruka and Makoto interactions; I don't know that Makoto could ever actually get into an argument with someone, you know? But anyway, good plot, great story, good writing...

Ahh, I loved this! I really like whenever Makoto has to take care of Haruka. I really hope his cold is acknoledged in the episodes in some way, maybe worsen I hope XD(Im a dork for hurt/comfort) Ahh, for a prompt you could do if you want to, maybe Haru going for a swim in the sea and almost drowns and Makoto saves him, having to give him cpr? If ypu want you could make them end up in the hospital too. I just love hurt/comfort haha

Anyways, great job! hope you write more soon!

Bishieholic chapter 1 . 7/19/2013

*ovaries explode, regenerate and explode again* *nosebleeds* AWWW I shouldn't imagine alll this... even though RinXHaru is my OTP. The fanart is amazing! this was a nice read!