Considering most of us read left to right, it would have been better if lenny and bo switched places so that "Hey bo, if the future..." is the first thing you see instead of "I'd rather sleep with your wife...".

I read the zinger before the setup because of the placement of the bubbles.

Yeah, good point. I am new to this, so still figuring out how to lay this stuff out. I have been trying to read top-to-bottom on these so the higher the text the earlier it is read. But certainly this does not jive with what people would expect. I will play around with some layouts.

@David,

a waste of pixels..... sounds like someone is suffering from pixel-envy :)