WOW that was cool i see you havent updated in a while... lol I just wanted to tell you that i think this story is great and i love it. The whole chase and krista thing is awsome, you are really doing a good job with the plot.

Hi, I am Moongazer. Well, I haven't really watched this, but since you want a review this what I think. I think it's well writen just a little caught with the she thing. You definitely need a stronger summary, explain the story please. the part where you talk, put a-n or author's note. Well, the story is kinda of short too. so yeah, that's only the general stuff, please take those in concerdation.