Since I have the entire campaign unlocked and noticed some errors I figured I would list them all here for you guys to look at. Whoever wrote the story definitely loved their commas

Description errors:

Capture Dex's Tank Factories --> This should be capture DAX'S Tank Factories. Also it says you cannot place units but you can... fighters and helis can actually help in this one.Boot Hill --> Needs a period.Death's Ravine --> Needs a period.Hold the Line --> Needs a period.Work with the Gardestians --> Needs a period.Biscutian Alliance --> Needs a period. Also should say "Form an alliance with the Biscutians" NOT Gardestians.Revenge and Retribution --> Needs a period. Also NOT Russians, instead should say Gardestians.

Beginning Text errors:

Boot Hillpg 2 --> no comma after Unfortunately. no comma after Heavy Tank Division. pg 3 --> no comma after currently. no comma after in reality.pg 4--> reengaged is one word, no need to use a hyphen.

Retake the Airfieldthere is an inconsistency between the title in the menu and the beginning text. One says the airfield and one says an airfield.pg 1 --> no comma needed after Dax's army.

I just unlocked the campaign, but now that it's v2, there are no page titles. So this may or may not already have been in your post, but just in case:In the picture below, there are 2 errors:1. soo -> so (first few words of 2nd paragraph)2. How -> Now (middle of 2nd paragraph)

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