basically, make your role play character, you have until july. now seeeing as this is a comedy i want some running gags please such as; saying- ill explain later...or you could just say somethin and person 2 will say it again. (now running gags are optional but i just wanted to let you know i will apreciatte any running gags you put on.) i will not be participating, i will only be the sm. (referee) if you talk and it is not in rp than put a () around it otherwise people will think you are talking in rp... if you have any questions ask me...and have fun.

Comedy RP isn't gonna work. Mainly because funny isn't always the same for everyone, but also because RP usually fails to find a natural flow, which is important for comedy. Also, if you force comedy, more often then not it comes out wrong.

Running gags are the same; if you try to force a running gag the way you are doing now, it's not going to work. A running gag in a series is never planned; it just happens and if people like it, it gets reused, over and over again.

Last, your character layout doesn't point out those things that could make a character funny.