~O~ vs. ICES (something or other)

I really wanted to battle........but now I'm not in the mood//
got only 16 lines to do this............but all I'm thinking about is food//

~Ok~

I'm sick of rapping 'gainst net faggots whose real low on rap gabbage//
this cat thinking she cool...like a foot in her ass ain't that tragic//
your average - I manage to kill these rabbits - a predator//
always mentioned this cat is an afterthought - like ECETERA!!//
when I spit?.........it's dosed with a touch of the nice-ness//
but this bitches flow is cold so she calls herself ICES//
that's funny shit - bitch ass newbie....pm'ing me like she knew me//
asking to do a topical with yours truely//

~I got what 6 lines left???~

Let's get it started my ryhming is heartless//
expose sunlight to mangle cartilage painting picures of bloody garbage//
showing my next target//
ICES? she ain't shit but a bitch so i ain't stressing//
when she's only rich on calcium from her latest cum-drinking session//(hahaha)

this is supposed to be a freestyle battle, and your ass drops pre-written shit/
the only way your verse would be hotter than mine is if you pre-heated it/
fuck a battle, we can fight, hit you upside yo head, and leave you leakin bitch/
you tryna be like Ben Steeler "i never bleed my own blood", but your bleedin it/

6 lines left...fuck that gay shit, you got 6 seconds to take your last breath/
cause im bout to put you 6 feet deep, put your punk ass to rest/
but you wont be restin in peace, cause i aint puttin you in a casket/
people gonna say you resemble a letterman jacket/
cause when i get done, yo body gonna be full of patches/
im bout to close this out, and this QUEEN ICESIKill, you wont be beatin/
cause the only flow you got is when you jack-off to my verse, cause your like seamen/
!O! no, you aint nothin but a bitch to me, so i must be battlin a she-man/
im bout to put an end to my verse, as well as you breathin/

um...these battles are supposed to be freestyles right? even if you claimin that wasnt pre-written and you just placed her name in there it still seems like it was prewritten....pre-written or not Queen took this one by FAR...
better wordplay, better flow, better overall verse IMO