Read a few pages ahead. Excellent art and interesting setup, but the narration really could stand to be toned down. With a comic, you've got the advantage of showing rather than having to describe everything with words, and the redundancy of events in both text and visuals is only distracting. Narration works better to clarify things not apparent from the visuals. Being sparing with it gives the words far more impact.

dude I had to read to the next page and next page before commenting
I usually come across web comics and say nice story or nice art but your comic goes well beyond that
It has both plus creativity and great composition ..
This I have to say is the best web comic out there and if there is any comic better than yours I cant find it! rate:5+