your writing style is truely so beautiful. your take on the ship was really diverse and unique compared to all the other fan fics that I've come across. In all honesty I really felt in tune with the characters and it made me REALLY irritated to see inuyasha suffering sm. I also appreciate how you didn't necessarily make him out to be the "villain" like so many sesskag writers do. (I like how I'm talking abt the fandom like I'm an expert when in actuality I'm new to it hehe (- c -; ))

I cried. Wow. That was really powerful. I feel so much pity for Inuyasha, which is a first, since I always wanted Sesshoumaru to be with Kagome. Yet, here, while reading your story, I can feel Inuyasha's pain. It's so unnerving.

I was a little ocnfused at first, and what i thought was maybe that inuyasha had wished on the jewel and split himself into his halves, like one inuyasha is human and the other demon. and therefore kagome had chosen the demon inuyasha. it made sense at first lol.