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Hi I'm Wyrn. It had lots of lessons and brought back memory. I'm a man of few words and don't usually like wright this much in reviews but here goes. We have all done things or have secrets that we would like to remain barred in the rubble of our past and your poem digs through the rubble and brings out the secrets barred their.

Posted 9 Months Ago

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Hi I'm Wyrn. It had lots of lessons and brought back memory. I'm a man of few words and don't usually like wright this much in reviews but here goes. We have all done things or have secrets that we would like to remain barred in the rubble of our past and your poem digs through the rubble and brings out the secrets barred their.

Posted 9 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is one of the best poems of heartbreak I've read in a while. Many such poems sound too whiny to me, but this one sounds well-crafted for good sound & meaning. Love the haphazard rhymes & the simple but well-stated descriptions of how it can feel when one's heart cannot let go of a painful thing. Even tho the sentiments are about hopelessness, I also get the tone of courage & strength running quietly underneath your words (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 10 Months Ago

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10 Months Ago

Thank-you so much, I always love the reviews that you give, and I hope that you continue to review m.. read moreThank-you so much, I always love the reviews that you give, and I hope that you continue to review my writings.

Posted 10 Months Ago

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10 Months Ago

This is a really good poem, It has strength as well as darkness, strength comes csue you know what is causing you to feel this way and you can describe it. that takes strength as well as courage... I like that.

Posted 10 Months Ago

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The below lines are true.
"My heart needs a permanent cast.
My guardian angel played the wrong card."
I do understand the above lines. When life is going to s**t. Hard to stop. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote