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The will to help her friends and those around her and the power to do so. Bad luck always seems to find those who need it the least, doesn't it? As does darkness, but darkness can be tamed, or can it? Can you tame your own darkness? ·DovahKaaz

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Ant Mill is a college student, stuck in a dead-end internship she took just to fulfill her requirements. All she does is wish she was somewhere else, but when she has a chance encounter with the Princess of Friendship herself, all that changes. ·GaPJaxie

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What if during the Summer Sun Celebration, Twilight didn't meet the rest of the main six? What if she met different ponies? What new things would she learn from these different ponies? ·The Fiery Joker

Hello everyone from FIMFiction. I'd would like say that i'm a bit new here and enjoying reading people's fan fictons. But that's the problem, i dont really know how to actually post a fan fiction. So it would be REALLY helpful if someone were to tell me how to and thanks for your time.

I just checked your page. You're Polish, huh? Your English is very good. I hardly would have guessed. (I don't know that much about your language, so I don't know what mistakes you're prone to making. Przepraszamy!) Keep pumping out good stuff, dude! :)

Firedon is smarter than me. I don't know what those number and letter sequences meant, but I'm guessing that will be explained for us poor dummies. Bravo, excellent work! I look forward to more, much more. This is exciting!

Okay, that would be great. I always send a new chapter to my two friends, but they're both Polish as well, so they mostly point out the obvious mistakes I make while typing. Having a solid pre-reader sounds fantastic.

I'm going to take a wild guess and say that it should be read something like this:

Batch/Clone Model Unknown Status

U453/11 nu A13 T83 subject deceased

U453/12 nu A13 T14 subject deceased

P454/01 nu K05 T10 subject deceased

Cont. MMSU4 E. 25.07.794 SE - Not sure on this, though the last bit looks like a date... maybe the experiment continued somewhere else on the 25th of the 7th of year 794 SE (second era?)

It's interesting how of the three we know, we have U453 for two of them and both of those are nu A13, I'm guessing they're Unicorn batch 453 and the model is nu A13 while P454 is a Pegasus batch using model nu K05. Not sure on the T##, maybe something to do with time?

I remember that you posted your story in ChowderHead's reviewthread over at ponychan. After three months of waiting I now found out that he just quit without saying a word. So, did you send your story to another reviewer or did you sent it directly to EQD? Also congrats for making it at EQD!