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Rated 4 / 5 stars2013-05-13 20:55:02

I love the design and such smooth animation! This had such promise for being a showstopper. Next time use dialogue and better audio quality. The art style is catchy and welcoming for people so work on the audio aspect and you're golden ;D

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2013-05-11 03:46:22

Rated 0 / 5 stars2013-05-10 16:42:46

If you're going to upload something with one line of dialogue, it had better either be very funny or very meaningful.

What kind of state of mind would I have to be in to give you stars for 'animation quality', you could have just as easily uploaded this to the art portal as a fake comic book frame, although it would be just as unfunny there.

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars2013-05-10 13:04:58

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2013-05-10 12:49:50

Great idea and a wonderful sense of style! I think you have a fun little mini series that you can do with this character! As far as suggestions go, I think you might want to to spend some more time on fleshing out a script for your shorts. I see a lot of potential with your art and animation style, so I'm confident you can spend some more time in front of your keyboard. I'd suggest trying to focus on character dialogue! No man has this really cool design to him that really peaks my interest, but other than the punch-line to this scene where he yells at a child, there's not much to know about him. I really think you have a good sense in how to draw your characters, though. All of their poses were very easy to read and expressive! Can't wait to see what you'll come up with next!

Thanks for the kind words and constructive feedback! I will definetely keep this in mind when making ep 2. This kinda started out as a test to animate the character but i ended up making it into sort of a joke episode. Next time it will definetely have plot my friend. : )