Zulu I'm not feeling Clutch. I love the file card but he looks more like Rollbar to me than Lance Steinberg. I think he needs the full beard and dark hair. I like the Jumpsuit, but not necessarily the color. He has the tan version I know, but the green seems more combat ready even if it was a mechanic's jumpsuit. Plus the shoulder pad thing and holster, make him seem combat ready.

Just my opinion. Your Lift-Ticket is perfect of course. Both Filecards are excellent. I never want to say anythinig negative about your work in any way and I 've never had to. Of course you don't have to listen to me either. I feel he deviates too much.

Zulu I'm not feeling Clutch. I love the file card but he looks more like Rollbar to me than Lance Steinberg. I think he needs the full beard and dark hair. I like the Jumpsuit, but not necessarily the color. He has the tan version I know, but the green seems more combat ready even if it was a mechanic's jumpsuit. Plus the shoulder pad thing and holster, make him seem combat ready.

I agree that he looks a bit more like Rollbar than Clutch. I think longer hair and a more prominent five o'clock shadow would do wonders, along with possibly a compromise similar to the one you did with Hawk's first and second looks. A green t-shirt or sweater under an unbuttoned version of the shirt that you have now (Clutch doesn't seem like the type to button his shirts more than halfway, and certainly not to the neck). I do like the jumpsuit, his gear, the look on his face and the TOOTHPICK.

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Originally Posted by Loose Cannon

Just my opinion. Your Lift-Ticket is perfect of course. Both Filecards are excellent.

Agreed.

I didn't get to comment on Keel Haul, but he is AWESOME. Love everything about him, from the Robotech nod, to the look. One question: Why Danish? I know the Dutch allowed keelhauling as a legal punishment in their Navy for some time, but I completely missed the Denmark reference.

You are quickly turning so many characters into necessary components in my universe, lol.