I’m curious now. What in the world in an antihaiku?Hello again. An antihaiku is the opposite of a haiku. Instead of stillness and contemplation like a pond, it represents motion, change, like a wave. If you push the tag above the poem, where it says ‘antihaiku’, you can see other examples and more about it.

I have to rethink my whole idea about music. No, not just music, but drawing, art. Can I improvise? I wish I could watch the tide and think about it some more. Will just have to imagine it. Beautiful poem, Paul.

I find the ocean speaks in rhythm much like this, especially early in the morning… I might be taking this a little bit more reflective than you intended, but for me, I picture a man walking on the beach, guitar on his back, sleepy-eyed, worn from giving himself the night before… but to whom?

footsteps leading away...

“The struggle of literature is in fact a struggle to escape from the confines of language; it stretches out from the utmost limits of what can be said; what stirs literature is the call and attraction of what is not in the dictionary.”
Italo Calvino.

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