I lay me down open and bare
Giving my life into the Shepherd's care
As the sheep heeding His voice
To follow the Jesus is my choice...I love this part. It is my choice to follow Jesus in this wicked world. There are so many who do not believe on Him but I am so glad we heed his voice. Thanks for sharing Christ. You are such an anointed writer. A voice that needs to be heard through out the earth. I am blessed by your words. God bless and keep writing for His glory. HE IS SMILING EVERYTIME YOU WRITE.

Loved the poetic stlye and I read my life out loud through this poem. You are a vessel echoing the voice of His children. Please don't quit writing - He's perfecting you through this gift. Stay blessed.
Janice

Brother, I never understood why it is so difficult to vulnerably lay ourselves at His feet (though it IS difficult) when truly, truly, truly the Holy Spirit DOES guide our souls. He is Love and, therefore, is there anyone we can trust more with our lives, our souls, with everything about us? Like I said, I never understood why it's so hard for us when He IS who He IS. Being vulnerable to Him is only difficult for us because the Holy Spirit is at emnity with our flesh and our flesh itself doesn't want to let go of the reins. But praise God, our GOD is stronger than our flesh! And there are a multitude of blessings in store for us when we finally give up those reins... both now AND in the hereafter. Finally relinquishing control to Him is a blessing in itself!... as you have so graciously portrayed in this thought provoking piece. Bless you, dear Brother.