--- wikisrc/wiki/non-developer.mdwn 2010/07/04 03:36:07 1.1
+++ wikisrc/wiki/non-developer.mdwn 2010/07/04 03:39:58 1.2
@@ -16,12 +16,12 @@ its own.
### Why not full write privileges?
-Until now, NetBSD resources have been writable exclusively by
-developers. In a way, that's exactly what being a developer means.
-It's fundamental to our project infrastructure, and it's fundamental
-to why you're able to trust the software we publish. This wiki is
-the first exception to the rule. No way around it, we have to be
-careful.
+Until now, NetBSD project resources have been writable exclusively
+by developers. In a way, that's exactly what being a developer
+means. It's fundamental to our project infrastructure, and it's
+fundamental to why you're able to trust the software we publish.
+This wiki is the first exception to the rule. No way around it, we
+have to be careful.
At the same time, it's a wiki, and this is NetBSD -- we want to be
as inclusive as we responsibly can. Anyone with an OpenID can play.
@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ Instead of a simplistic comment system,
Discussions, each of which _is_ a wiki page. When you make an edit,
your change is committed to `wikisrc`. A commit message goes out
to `www-changes@`, attributed to you, the same as it would for a
-NetBSD developer.
+developer.
As a starting point, we feel pretty good about this. We hope you
do too, and we hope you feel welcome to contribute. Because you
-are!
+are.