"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?

Ultra Peanut

07-27-2006, 12:09 PM

goCE

Hammock Parties

07-27-2006, 12:11 PM

"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?

Looks like they need an editor, too...

KingPriest2

07-27-2006, 12:12 PM

Do you have firsthand knowledge that it is a concern?

Moooo

07-27-2006, 12:14 PM

"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?

Although usually I am anti-grammar police, if you're actually publishing work, whether internet-based or not, perhaps you should have someone edit it for you.

Other than that, kudos!

Moooo

Donger

07-27-2006, 12:14 PM

Looks like they need an editor, too...

Nice article, BTW.

the Talking Can

07-27-2006, 12:14 PM

congrats....

the Talking Can

07-27-2006, 12:15 PM

nice pop-ups...old school

HemiEd

07-27-2006, 12:16 PM

Nice job for the most part. However, I do not remember Grbac being run out of town. It was quite different, Chiefs were counting on him and he signed with Baltimore.

Rain Man

07-27-2006, 12:17 PM

Wait a minute. That was lifted straight from "The Old Man and the Sea."

Hammock Parties

07-27-2006, 12:19 PM

Wait a minute. That was lifted straight from "The Old Man and the Sea."

My next piece is plagiarised from "War and Peace."

Hammock Parties

07-27-2006, 12:20 PM

Although usually I am anti-grammar police, if you're actually publishing work, whether internet-based or not, perhaps you should have someone edit it for you.

Other than that, kudos!

Moooo

They have an editor. I guess he missed that error.

Eleazar

07-27-2006, 12:20 PM

How are you going to type for that other site with Nick Athan's crank still embedded in your mouf?

Halfcan

07-27-2006, 12:21 PM

Nice one-you might be the next Bob Gretz!

Hammock Parties

07-27-2006, 12:23 PM

How are you going to type for that other site with Nick Athan's crank still embedded in your mouf?

It's only once a week. I'm sure I can find some time somewhere during my busy fellatio schedule.

the Talking Can

07-27-2006, 12:24 PM

Nice one-you might be the next Bob Gretz!

if he becomes fluent with the ubiquitous use of the word "ubiquity" he can be that fairy English fellow who writes for the Chiefs...Ubiquitous Dawes.....

Pitt Gorilla

07-27-2006, 12:28 PM

"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?I'm more concerned with the statement. I haven't seen enough of Herm in KC to have any clue about his "steering." I like the guy a lot, but what has he done?

Hammock Parties

07-27-2006, 12:30 PM

I've been pretty impressed with the off-season thus far. I think he's doing a good job. That's all I meant to say.

Pitt Gorilla

07-27-2006, 12:31 PM

I've been pretty impressed with the off-season thus far. I think he's doing a good job. That's all I meant to say.I think that's fine, and I believe you; I have no idea what he's done in terms of being a head coach.

The Bad Guy

07-27-2006, 12:40 PM

Since I can't see the first few posts, what was Go's typo?

Hammock Parties

07-27-2006, 12:43 PM

Since I can't see the first few posts, what was Go's typo?

"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?

dirk digler

07-27-2006, 12:43 PM

Nice article gochiefs and congrats.

The Bad Guy

07-27-2006, 12:44 PM

What is the problem with that?

Keep in mind, my brain is fried from interviewing and sending out resumes the last week so I'm not on the top of my grammar game.

Moooo

07-27-2006, 12:47 PM

What is the problem with that?

Keep in mind, my brain is fried from interviewing and sending out resumes the last week so I'm not on the top of my grammar game.

A head coach is not a "that," he is a "who."

Moooo

The Bad Guy

07-27-2006, 12:49 PM

A head coach is not a "that," he is a "who."

Moooo

And that's why I'm not applying for editor jobs.

StcChief

07-27-2006, 12:52 PM

Nice short/sweet.

Printers in the equation?

tk13

07-27-2006, 12:53 PM

A head coach is not a "that," he is a "who."

Moooo
Herm's a thin, oddly shaped creature that is terrorized by the Grinch?

Halfcan

07-27-2006, 12:56 PM

You should have checked with me-I would have gave you the Hali signing scoop for your article.

Hammock Parties

07-27-2006, 12:56 PM

That would have been a boring article.

Moooo

07-27-2006, 12:57 PM

Herm's a thin, oddly shaped creature that is terrorized by the Grinch?

Yes...

Moooo

Rain Man

07-27-2006, 01:01 PM

A head coach is not a "that," he is a "who."

Moooo

Exception: Shanahan is a 'that'.

Donger

07-27-2006, 01:04 PM

Exception: Shanahan is a 'that'.

ROFL

One just knew that was coming.

CupidStunt

07-27-2006, 02:14 PM

Where can I find the "original Chiefs content" as stated in the footnote?