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Rose_Weasley123 says:I was stalking your author page yesterday, and I was just thinking how much I miss your writing -is not creepy and stalkerish-. And then, I log onto TGS, and I see that you have a new story. Not only that, but it is a Ted/Rose :D. You have no idea how happy this makes me.

Shall try to keep it short, as it is nearing midnight now. The description was GORGEOUS, as is usual for all your work. It makes me jealous, how wonderful it is :P.

The characterisation was the thing that intrigued me the most though. I've never seen Teddy or Rose done quite like this. Teddy more than Rose, as he's often paired with Dominique or Victoire as a cheating partner. Rose was more chilling than I've ever seen her before (excpet perhaps in Rin's 'The Hunted'.) I thought you described her relationship (if you can even call it that) with Teddy tp PERFECTION. It had such an interesting dynamic- Rose clearly held power over him. She was an absorbing character- completely unlikeable but at the same time something drew me to her.

I loved your idea of Teddy as being a weak character. It's an interpretation that works really well for this- again, he is intriguing rather than endearing.

The plot was short, yes, but clear and powerful. Nothing felt wasted- it had a lovely clarity to it, and it flowed really well. I think you did wonders with the plot and the ship- I know it is not a popular one, so there are no cliches, but you've really taken it in a new direction.

I shall not attempt to tease any hidden meanings from it, not because I don't want to but because I am tired.

Anyway, this was lovely, and I am once again astounded by your writing skills.

Author's Response: um... wow! I dont know what to say (as always), I'm just blushing like crazy. First of all, I can't believe anyone would bother stalking my author page :P That's a novelty in itself. Ted/Rose is a pairing I've been wanting to tackle for months but never got around to doing it. But here it is, and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. thank you so much for reviewing, my dear!