CHALLENGE: Mansel in Distress

Show a helpless male (human) character that needs rescuing from a perilous situation. This could be anything from a prince being held captive in a castle to your uncle having a flat tire on a freeway.

Disclaimer: Before anyone cries foul, I just want to point out that this challenge is in no way intended to be sexist or discriminatory; the purpose here is to provide a new spin on a well-worn trope (that is, of course, the familiar 'damsel in distress' scenario).

The problem is that you don't insist enough on his hair. He just look like he's scary by something above him, your concept isn't obvious. Why don't you emphasize the hair mess ? It would be more understandable imo.

Getting closer to finishing. I'm going to work more on the box, it's pretty lame right now. Also, let me get your opinion on something: should I keep the background transparent, or put in a background? I'm not sure if it would make it too busy or not.

ok...the old lady's face is over dithered; more unnecessary dithering on both the guy and girl's arms; reverse AA on their arms; also, if you are not using a background, the AA on the outlines will look weird on darker backgrounds.

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