Randori wrote:Fuckin' love BL. Just how he looks makes him a total badass. And that sword? Pffftttt freakin' awesome, dude.

He's basically supposed to look like a God, doing as he pleases. Thanks for the compliment, always appreciated.

noxux wrote:Brax. You. Are. A. Genius. Hope you can do your comic.

A genius is going a bit far, but I thank you. As for the comic, I don't believe I've posted anybody from the comic I want to make. It's called Underland, not much to it besides the beginning, and the end, but even those have had about 20 edits to them.

Here's a bit of insight, the main character decides to kill himself after a series of unfortunate events, and winds up hanging himself. As the rope falls, he falls into the world of Underland. Forced to solve a puzzle of how to escape this purgatory, "WB" (The main character, well, his initials) sets off to find his way out.

Brax4 wrote:Here's a bit of insight, the main character decides to kill himself after a series of unfortunate events, and winds up hanging himself.

Killing off the protagonist in the first scene: nice. Just like in Yu Yu Hakusho!

Brax4 wrote:As the rope falls, he falls into the world of Underland.

That actually sounds awesome. You can show him dying and right when he's dead just show the rope snap, and right when the body falls on the floor the floor breaks and everything crumbles as he freefalls with him awake as he falls, letting him know that he's dead and falling into the abyss known as Underland.

Brax4 wrote:Forced to solve a puzzle of how to escape this purgatory, "WB" (The main character, well, his initials) sets off to find his way out.

What would be cool is you can show a pair of shadows watching WB solve the puzzle. This can be their conversation as they spectate WB's actions:Person 1: So, what of this one?Person 2: Committed suicide. Hung himself.Person 1: Ahhh yes, the noose: a common use of suicide. Let's see how this goes, I sense something interesting in that boyPerson 2: Do you? All the souls that come here you think are pathetic scum, solving an impossible puzzle that'll lead them to insanity and-Person 1: Yes, yes, I know. But this one... this one's different.Person 2: Well then, we'll see how this goes IF he survives...

O, I'm just trying not to reveal too much, but there's a twist at the end.

Also, he's bombarded by a group of "terrors". He meets the first one, named Suicide as soon as he enters Underland. There's also Temptation, Salvation, and Addiction. They are like a group of brothers pretty much. They're unable to touch "WB", but they can attempt to influence his actions. The only good one is Salvation.

I'm not sure how far they'll follow "WB", but they'll probably pop in from time to time.

Just a WIP. This character wasn't supposed to be a zombie, but I ended up making him one. More than likely I'm going to make both the original design concept, and this one. ALT costumes of course, so no real redrawing.

Yeah, I wish I had drawn those before I scanned it. I attempted to add rips and tears but it wasn't working out. Because he wasn't supposed to be a zombie, and I'm not very good at drawing unless I'm using my paper for the lines.

Here's a serious character of mine, and the first of The Temptors, meet Suicide :

Background (Underland Universe) : Suicide was always different. Once a creature that went by the name Crisium, he found himself in solitude with a sinking feeling. Spurting three entities from his heart, he became just one piece of Crisium, he became Suicide. The first of his brothers, Temptation squeezed his way out, then came Addiction, and finally Salvation. Suicide is unable to touch anyone, but he can heavily influence others. He sought out the exit to Underland, and eventually found it, making his way to the real world where he wasn't able to be seen, but rather felt. He chose his target, William Bradford, and forced him into his decision to hang himself. Then made his way back to Underland to meet his victim.

Thanks Orin, comments mean a lot, especially coming from an artist such as yourself.

Anyways, here's the second piece of Crisium, Temptation :

Background (Underland Universe) : After breaking free from Crisium, Temptation realized a higher calling. He became a doctor in Underland, publishing his studies of human temptation. Slowly losing his mind, Temptation decided he would use his newly learned skills for evil, tempting children and adults alike, luring them in to feed upon them. Unlike Suicide, Temptation has the ability to touch people, but only once they get close to him. He continued to torment the citizens of Underland, feeding his hunger. Once he found Bradford, he knew that that was the soul he wanted to eat.

Background (Underland Universe) : Once Addiction freed himself from Crisium, he realized he was much different from his brothers. He was handsome, young, charismatic, and much more like the citizens of Underland. He squandered his gift, giving into vice after vice. Dirty habits formed, swallowing pills, smoking, dipping, cutting, and drinking. His hair grayed, his skin paled, his nose grew red, and he lost weight. After seeing himself this way, there was no turning back, he had become a monster. Addiction grew very jealous of better looking people, and drove himself to kill them. After setting his sights upon Bradford, he knew he had to attack him and end his life.

Background (Underland Universe) : The final brother spewed forth from Crisium was Salvation. He instantly noticed that he was different from the rest, he wasn't pure evil like Suicide, easily corrupted like Temptation, or vain like Addiction. He just had the feelings to do good, and prevent evil. He couldn't stop his brothers though, outnumbered and outmatched, he chose to separate from them and form a disguise. At first, he wore a paper mask, dawned a scarf, and wielded a knife. That didn't last long, he needed something to better hide his identity, he found a hood, a cape, and a set of armor. After fully disguised, he began to train, to learn to beat his brothers. Though he was still unable to defeat them, he chose to warn the citizens of Underland and chose to deter them from giving into his brothers' influences. After he saw that they all had chosen to target Bradford, he made it his mission to help. Looking to guide Bradford, he vowed to follow him to the end, to see what would happen.

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