It's great to see another installment to this wonderful side story. I absolutely love the way you incorporate the pain of loneliness as well as the comfort and joy of friendship. Both are polar opposites of each other, and yet you've managed to portray both of these emotions together. Friendship isn't a very common theme these days, so it's nice to see it used.

Again, I commend you on your characterization. Arianna is as well developed a character as Kira is. You do a great job inserting your original characters into Katsura Hoshino's universe. They blend in well and give readers the feel that they belong, as opposed to just being thrown in. From experience, I can say that this is very difficult to do, and I must say that you've pulled it off well.

Oh, I really enjoyed this story! Finally there is a sorry that doesn't follow the timeline or focus on the main characters, and yet seems really logical. I do hope you'll be able to update soon, because I can't wait to hear more about this three cute little kids! :D

... xDDDD Oh, I can't stop laughing... I read all five chapters today and just... *on the ground dying of laughter* Arianna's nickname for Neah fits him perfectly. And I'm not talking about Silver Eyes. xD *brick'd*

... I can't write a decent review so I'll just say good job. :) You're writing is amazing. Keep up the good work.