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This is a powerful and emotive piece Lalita. It could be very good indeed with a little work. I am a little concerned with your use of 'elope' which means run away and marry someone but I get the impression the girl is already tied or promised to someone else. Have I read this right?

Hello Lalita, I have commented once but that got lost! This is strong and emotive piece that needs a little extra work. I hope it isn't too personal. You have used the word elope which means running away to marry but isn't she already in a relationship?