tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375684657483536810.post4653631649015387741..comments2017-09-26T13:03:16.671-05:00Comments on Live Your Poem...: ARTSPEAK! Portraits poem "Morning"Irene Lathamhttps://plus.google.com/116981499514131648484noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375684657483536810.post-124227610317173432017-04-17T05:35:27.370-05:002017-04-17T05:35:27.370-05:00Yes, to the waiting!
I&#39;m a little stuck on th...Yes, to the waiting!<br /><br />I&#39;m a little stuck on that line, &quot;I am not cold.&quot; She sounds like she is trying to convince herself, which gives the end of the poem, for me, a sense that she is trying to be something she&#39;s not. Maybe living into an expectation.Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375684657483536810.post-70112328146149267432017-04-16T18:08:20.311-05:002017-04-16T18:08:20.311-05:00Beautiful, Irene! I vote for the formatting on the...Beautiful, Irene! I vote for the formatting on the graphic. I especially enjoyed the back story on your word choice. I really like &quot;ancient&quot; for the boulder, especially if you think of a boulder as a rock smoothed by erosion. Amazing how word choice can open a poem, making it universal. Alice Ninehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05302512837699702430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375684657483536810.post-91120385345867844012017-04-16T07:22:06.654-05:002017-04-16T07:22:06.654-05:00Happy Easter, Irene! The format does look good, pe...Happy Easter, Irene! The format does look good, perhaps especially for this portrait. I enjoyed the word choice, and made a connection between this young girl and young girls everywhere, that waiting. Lovely!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.com