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Why not name these writings as narrative haiku? they have the minimalistic aproach of haiku, and a narrative to focus on. I do like this one, as others you write with the same dramatic flair of everyday lore. Hemmingway, Kerouac, Cactus...

I think you are right… political propaganda was done best by Mayakovski and his comrades… but I do believe though, that politics do have a chair in the poetic dinning table. But yes, the aftertaste of humanity is definitely hard to beat.