Ch. 1-40 Assertion

Chapter 1-40 “Assertion”

Tired, injured, taken very nearly to her limit, Kinslayer is under attack from another force seemingly from within. She must assert herself to have a chance of regaining dominance over her very own body.

** On a different note, I was driving today and the notion suddenly popped into my head that the reason suckers were called that was not necessarily because we’re meant to suck on them. It’s because they’re made of sugar, or sucre in French, zucker in German, azucar in Spanish, sukker in Norwegian, and so on. It’s just a chunk of sugar – a sucker. Why I was thinking about the origin of the word sucker is something I will likely never know.

** Also, I just got off working 8 straight days with overtime and I think I’m sick on top of it, so if the comic doesn’t make much sense I give you full apologies now. Mention any thoughts you have on it in the comments and I’ll fix it later on. Thanks!

…out of context, that is (and without any author’s commentary). I’m thinking that more will be explained later as well.

In addition, I foresee a slight problem when she takes back her body from the control of the highly skilled, feels-no-pain entity o.o but at least her opponent won’t be much of a problem, seeing as she just severed his tendon (and didn’t she stab him just a moment ago?).

I like your style: it’s suspenseful, but detached enough that I don’t go craz(y/ier) from the waiting XD

This is armor guy, Ntor the Black, though you can’t really see that much through her haze. The big lug who got stabbed is probably still recovering, though we saw earlier that these guys can take a spear through the gut and keep coming. Dang barbarians can’t take a hint!

I think you have a pretty good idea how things are going to be when she takes back control of her body.

Hmmm… Maybe I need to rewrite this page. This is supposed to seem really bad, like she’s getting forced out. Like a deal with the mob… or a lawyer; you start into it thinking it’s pretty cool, but then the bill comes and you realize you lost pretty much everything that mattered.

It’s times like this I kinda wish I had someone to bounce things off of. It might help me clear up my storytelling a bit. I already know what’s happening so I don’t have to pick up on nuance and hints. But I also don’t want to get anvilicious bonking people over the head with the facts of the story. I should have gone comedy! lol