I really liked your story. I had to laugh at the end thinking about what had happened between Harry and Draco. Wow. That was something else.

I thought you did a great job characterizing the two of them really well. I also liked how you described everything. There was a lot going on and it really helped in order to picture it while I read along. I didn't really know what to expect at first, but wow! Was this action packed.

On a side note: if you are worried about spelling errors you can always go back and correct them later on. Just a suggestion.

Keep up the great writing! =)

-SR17

Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Responses like this make me want to keep writing!