Wow, this seems like a very interesting story. I was instantly pulled into the story from your summary and after reading the prologue I am even more intrigued. You seem to have an exciting plot.

I liked the whole way you set the scene in this chapter. It was quite dramatic and effective. Your descriptions in the beginning were very interesting too and I could visualise the scene easily. The little details you provided were also nicely done. I liked how you described the Seer, and the ending sentence was quite powerful. I am quite eager to see how things play out further and what happens.

Great job!
10/10

Moving on to the next chapter..

Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: hi! I'm glad that you found this prologue intriguing - that's kind of the whole point of a prologue, so that's definitely good! It also makes me happy that you like the plot and the descriptions! I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story, as the next chapters are quite different from this one.