You write somewhere that Else Janssen has a Dutch accent but you wrote a line where she speaks German (Ach de lieber). And it doesn't make sense since Dutch people don't speak German. And I know since I come from Holland and I deffinetly don't speak German but Dutch.

Everything is good, very good, but I something I miss is the intro on every Relic Hunter serie. They always show what it all is about. You mention that very soon in the story (good), but as I said, I miss the intro.

keep up the good stuff.

Swallow chapter 7 . 5/17/2002

Well written, interesting names though...

Have you ever played Baldurs gate? there's a guy called Jan Jansen too...

Resolution? You've got to be kidding me! There's tons of things left to be answered! ;) But I have faith there's gonna be a sequel, cause really, you're too good not to do one. lol

Anyway, please, keep writing. Loving every chapter, every story.

Sylvy chapter 7 . 3/18/2002

AAAAARRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHH! O_O;;;;

Are you planning to give me a heart-attack? You can't just leave me here with such a cliffhanger, without promising to post a sequel IMMEDIATELY (lol)!

This story was truly great, and deserves to be continued: YOUR N.1 READER (me) IS WAITING, AND THE READER IS ALWAYS RIGHT, therefore: PLEASE COME BACK WITH A SEQUEL ASAP, OR I'LL START TO CRYYYYYYY ! (lol) ;)