I think hurtzDonut is right, I think this piece is missing the glare effect from eclipses, I definitely would like to see some glare added in there.

Also, was the frosted edges around the photo intentionally added? I am unclear (get it? unclear, frosted... ugh nevermind) as to why it is needed, but I think the frosted edges are better left out and instead replaced with the glare effect (as if looking into the sun)

Great start to this piece I will add!

Sat September 27, 2014 at 1:26 am

hurtzDonut

"something missing"

Can't put my finger on it but something seems to be missing from eclipse photos I've seen. As an artistic work it is very good!

Fri September 26, 2014 at 9:40 pm

Jenanne

"Great!"

Fantastic update of the 2005 version, one of my many favorites. The corona's colors are particularly spectacular. My only comment is that there seems to be an unintentional (I think) area of black at the lower right in the edge of the corona; no stars show through. It's not very noticeable. Other than that, terrific!