Losielette And the Boy With The Mechanical Heart

Losielette is a quiet girl living in 1924, whose life is comfortable, yet dull. That is, until she's kidnapped by a rogue time traveller on the night of her wedding.
Her captor is a dark-haired, wild looking boy with eyes like ice, and a personality to match. He's ruthless, stubborn, does what ever he pleases, and will stop at nothing to try and break Losielette's spirits.
The only thing she knows about him? He's on the run from the law and faces a possible death sentence if he's caught. He refuses to tell her even what his real name is.
When she finds herself pulled into his life of crime, her life becomes chaotically action packed. Accompanied by a pink-haired girl, and a boy so handsome he can hypnotize people with his looks, the four of them travel through the plains of time, running from whoever wants her kidnapper dead.
But how can she see cope with travelling hundreds of years in the future which she should have never lived to see?

Agree with Katrin on this one, it's really not flowery at all. It was a great start - slap bang right into the action and already encouraging some sympathy for your main character and sneakily getting everyone to root for her