I can't believe she did that. Well, I can believe she did that, because it's just the sort of thing she'd do. But telling Victoire that she seduced Teddy? Aw, man, poor Dominique. The poor thing. Seriously, that's so awful for her - yeah, so Teddy's in the clear, but she's probably ruined any chance of reconciliation in the near future with her sister.

I'm really not liking Victoire at the moment. Yeah, so she's in a horrible situation, and it can be argued that she's the victim, but it seems like everyone's taking her side and she's not even making an effort to fix things. Even Fleur's on her side, which I think is horrible of her as a mother, even if she doesn't know everything about the circumstances.

Teddy should get more blame. He was the instigator of the "incident", even if Dominique went along with it, but they were both drunk and now Dominique's the pregnant one, and he's not exactly trying to be responsible. *frowns at Teddy* At the moment I don't think he's really mature enough to have full parental rights. And I definitely don't think Victoire should be let anywhere near the baby what with her current attitude... but whatever, I guess it's up to Dominique right? :)

Hayes is adorable. Hayes is MADE of adorable adorableness. I want a Hayes. :D

Awesome chapter!

Author's Response: haha aww thank you so much! i'm really glad you like my story. i love long reviews :D