One Death at a Time Chapter 1 has a new beginning and I know where I'm going with the story line. I plan on revealing Brice more and show enough to explain why he is there and what does he plan to do. Hopefully, I can rewrite this chapter by Saturday. Keep writing. :)

To Do ListComplete typing up the fourth rewrite on Chapter 1. (09/26/2015)Proofread Food War short story. (09/28/2015)Revise with Confidence: Self-Editing for the Serious Creative WriterWeek One Lessons (Complete all One Lessons by 10/01/15))Week Two Lessons

I've got a lot of projects on my mind I want to write down. I try to stay on one story finish that and give it time to rest and return back to it later. The feedback comes back that the story interesting but it seems I'm not writing in complete thought for the reader to understand. I'll have to take each paragraph apart and go what I am I trying to show the read and what is the plot. The problem with me I write the story that comes right out of my head. All of my stories come from dreams or daydreams I write down. The story is either from me as an active participant or looking down on the characters as the story unfolds. Often times I come in the middle of the story where the action has started and the problem has already happened. It's so good I write it down as is. I realize I can't start there. I've got to build a story and explain what's going. The big culprits are One Death at a Time novel series, Forever Broken, Money for Carlos, and Woman with Authority they are part nightmare and action dreams. This is why I love writing so much. I have so much fun figuring the dreams or thoughts out and writing them into a story. I just have to create a complete story and it may take a while (longer than a night sleep).

To Do ListComplete typing up the fourth rewrite on Chapter 1. (10/23/2015)Proofread Food War short story. (10/23/2015)Revise with Confidence: Self-Editing for the Serious Creative WriterWeek One Lessons (Complete all One Lessons by 10/01/15))Week Two Lessons

I've been trying to finish the short story Food War. I need to type and proofread it before sending it off for feedback. The goal for the next two days is to rewrite Chapter 1 Part 1 and the synopsis. I'll work on vocabulary and workshop lessons.

To Do ListFinish typing what I wrote for the Food War short story.Revise with Confidence: Self-Editing for the Serious Creative WriterWeek One Lessons (Complete all One Lessons by 09/20/15))Week Two Lessons

The feedback I've got back so far is to center on one character to have the reader care and that I have too many characters in the first chapter. I believe for a longtime something is missing from the chapter. However, I couldn't figure it out. There isn't reader connections to the main character. I decide to establish the connection with Brice in later chapters. I'll rework Chapter 1.To Do ListRead Chapters 9-16 of One Death at a TimeFinish typing what I wrote for the Food War short story.Revise with Confidence: Self-Editing for the Serious Creative WriterWeek One Lessons (Complete all One Lessons by 09/07/15))Week Two Lessons

Frelisa Walker

The novel One Death At A Time (work in progress) conveys a hopeful message that Detroit can overcome it's problems.​​This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.