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Hello everyone! It's time for another critique! *crowd cheers*
Don't forget to read the critiquing guidelines and just post your thoughts in the comments!
Now, it begins ;)
Dream Man
After fumbling with the lock, I was finally able to enter the room. The wall was outlined with bullet holes as if it were connect the dots and read: We Had a Deal
My heart froze as I reeled backwards. “Not yet!” I shouted, but it was too late.
Gravity was no more. I felt like I was floating but being crushed ...

Hello everyone! Welcome to my first ever book review! Hope you enjoy :)
Summary:
Drew Farthering loves a good mystery, although he generally expects to find it in the pages of a novel, not on the grounds of his country estate. When a weekend party at Farthering Place is ruined by murder and the police seem flummoxed, Drew decides to look into the crime himself. With the help of his best friend, Nick Dennison, an avid mystery reader, and Madeline Parker, a beautiful and whip-smart American ...

Welcome to the first critique on We Learn as We Write! I am very excited to introduce this piece of poetry written by Amelia.
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Let's get to critiquing!
Garden of Tears
Eve’s Lament
My grace was unmatched
My mind, so flawless
My heart was perfect
O why did I succumb to darkness?
I walked in peace
My thoughts never waning
When Sin wasn’t a ...