This is a great piece of work, gripping and detailed. Your style is fantastic, and you have have a great sense of tone. This is not easy material you have chosen, and you have trod the line very well to keep it real and serious as well as dramatic. You have put us into Hermione's head, and I will definitely be following this story to is conclusion.

Another great chapter! Glad you're taking the time to explore their internal reactions and thoughts; it makes for fascinating reading. Wonder what the response of the student body will be to Hermione's situation? I'll stay tuned!

::starts skipping rounds in circles while singing "Hermione's having a baby" in annoying singsong voice::

Sorry, but I'm hopeless at giving advice and stuff, so I'm just gonna say: Update! ;~D

~Kaïra

Josy chapter 1 . 10/23/2002

This really has potential to be one of the real true classics - like Pawn to Queen or any of those big ones... so handle it with care, my friend. You're on to something.

Regards,

Josy

Hermia LaFaye chapter 3 . 10/23/2002

why on earth did Snape not react to that news and why has he gone into a state of absolute and utter depresion. Gordon bennet the mind boggles! Oh well I still love your story keep it up,

Hermia

vicki chapter 3 . 10/23/2002

i do hope you are going to continue this it is extremely good and i have read ar too many stories that were just dropped after awhil you are doing a very good job on this and i cant wait for your next update

Gah! Why do people feel it necessary to leave stories hanging like that? I can't wait to read more so hurry! )

ladyrawhide chapter 3 . 10/23/2002

I'm so glad Hermione is going to keep the baby. I really enjoy the way that the story is progressing and hope to see more...:)

angel chapter 3 . 10/23/2002

ooooooooooo. i just got on here and was hoping i would find this story updated. waahoooo! so she kept the baby...great. cant wait for more chaps. keep up the great work. i like this story. its original and has not been done in this manner before. i like a good ss/hg story but i like there to be an actual story to it and not them just all of a sudden falling in love...if that happens in this story. so i'll be lookin for more updates later. P.s. malfoy's a dick...:)