I really enjoyed the chapter! I thought that you did a great job with exploring things from Lily's POV. It was nice to see and to read. I usually don't read very much about her so this was fun.

I liked the way that you characterized her. It was exactly the way I would picture her in my mind. She is so determined to do anything and everything that she is just like her parents. I also thought that you did a great job with the use of subtle description to make the story flow and paint a picture in the readers minds.