Please - I know its a "longshot" but take a look at my Visual Novel and give me feedback - after a DISASTOROUS premiere on Steam Greenlight ( 8 Yes 38 No) I decided to go back to work on this one.....any Feedback would be awesome and appreciated for the next 2 year gap between Jams when I can really get good at this Engine (Ive been at it for 2 weeks).