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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2009-09-07 14:00:37

iz okay i guess

well everything could be improved, but for now try working on the voices, they don't really sound voice-actor-ish(?) also try drawing a background or something,
keep trying i can see you have potential

Rated 3 / 5 stars2009-09-07 13:19:35

Wow i'm surprised...

Here i expected an awful animation with no heart put into the drawing and a bunch of cock jokes to suck off tom fulp for a front page.

Wow was i wrong.

Lets take it from the top.
Humor: The way you used random faces that went from normal to abnormal to just freaking crazy hilarious is brilliant, i always loved that kind of humor. Using just that to make me laugh was a great start. proves to me you have a great idea of how to be random and make people laugh without the need for saying crazy things. mario at the end made me freaking LAWL. That was so random and unexpected. As far as humor goes, You've got it. Keep working at it. You could be a great comedy flash maker someday.(You're humor reminds me of egoraptor, not that it's as good as him but you have the style)

The artwork: Sadly You and i both know you gave the animation zero effort. Whether it was for the sake of it looking so horrid that it made people laugh or not. It just seemed like you didn't care nearly as much as you could have for animating this. I'd love it if you went back through this animation and fully animated it kept all the funny faces. Gave it a background. Draw the basketball hoop fully. Put some freaking detail into man! You posted what could be a great flash in the form of a slackers animation. Like many artists who just slack off and throw something together for luls and don't really care about there work. This stuff will get lost in other crappy submissions :\

Voice acting: Well at least here you didn't just scream into a mic and blow my ears off. The voice acting could use a little work but overall its pretty good.(Mostly its the lack of voices, You and then you trying to sound deeper toned. Maybe have some other artists do some voice acting for you. or friends :P.

I think that's pretty much it.
Work on this flash and repost it with some detail. It could be great. Love to see it when you put some work into it.