That is about right, I'm glad it's mostly understandable ^^. I thought that the character in the scan looked a bit depressed, but using a darker theme would have probably been better :) You're not weird, I understand what you wanted to say.

Oh my gosh I knew it was Owl City the moment I read the words on this card~ I hope you love him as much as I do! I love the idea of having two different versions of a card. It's very innovative and different. I also love what you've done from the original scan. <3 Keep it up, I really love your works. c:

Hmm...this one seemed to me that Alice prefer adventure and imagination life , while the other one...I'm not sure, maybe if you used a dark theme scan, it would give a saracistuc meaning. I'm weird, I know.