DaAdAl
My name is Twilight_Sparkle. I don’t question this “life” bar floating over my head, or my “EXP” gauge, or why everypony in my life seems to worship higher beings known as the Developers. It’s all normal. But why d ·ketpony5

DaAdAl
Twilight's compulsions as the Element of Magic are beginning to get out of control. She finds herself almost ravenously seeking more and more spells if for nothing else than to maintain her sanity. ·Ebonysdagger

DaAdAl
In the aftermath of the wedding, Twilight has found that her friends have grown... distant, and to make matters worse, she cannot rest for fear of a dream that she cannot remember. When it all comes crashing down, the night will fall. ·Thespurgin

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Twilight has been living in a fantasy world; one with Discord in stone, one where everything appears to be peaceful. But fantasies can't last forever, and Twilight has to get accustomed to the new, twisted reality—even if it doesn't seem so real.

But there's no time to adapt when the clock is ticking. And when time runs out, everything that was real will never come back.

Your wording is a bit awkward in places, but I like where the story is going. I'm currently writing a similar story (with Chrysalis instead of Discord), so I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who enjoys exploring this kind of "what if".

The narration is pretty straigthforward along with the dialogue, making me at least read faster and concentrate less on the plot. This is a feature shared by quite many new writers (me included), though. Foreshadowing, even in short stories, offers a handy tool for author to build up tension for the critical parts and make some twists and turns to the plot.

All and all I liked it, the main idea offering some intriguing options and possibilities for later chapters and even though I myself fancy more fics that try not to be like an authentic episode from the series itself, I get that it is a good way of building a fanfic. And this is a solid example of one - a good fanfic.

>>37101343710134 I continuously have the need and then the lack of need to revilatize this by writing more and fixing up what's there. This will continue at some point, and I have resolutions for the new year to write more--expect more soon or months from now, all by lady chance's hand.

>>40839104083910 I should change that. I am on an extended hiatus from that account, but I'm just checking in—I originally thought I was quitting the site, so I marked it cancelled. Thanks for noticing that so I can correct it.