hi ...i think u start good rhyme and i made some modifications..i hope u don't mind...but i think u have ability to write poems if u try it hard....thnx 4 every thing...best wishes....plz read my modifications:

“When you are on my frontlinei imagine you'll be mineso i run, to get you,for a mileand my lips will just show a smile -------Laughing or crying for me, is the same every thing in this world is mere famewithout meanings, so what is the name?your love turned me lame-----are you a lover, love to me, send?or an enemy or a loyal friend?or a bad omen came from the hellor a soft balm will make me well?--------are you a deer or a crocodile?can i trust your tears for a while??we all will be kicked outsideso tell me please the truth don't hide----......

Thanks for your modifications. You are great I’ve tried to go on. I know I have to practice a lot, anyway it is really funny.It’s very useful to learn and remember new words, too.Best wishes, thanks to read it.