That was so sad. It was utterly tragic, and yet, there was something there, something that made it jut a littl bit lighter. Perhaps it was the way you wrote it, but I'll never really knw. The feelingly lased a mere moment. It's so powerful tha I can't think of anything else... I only really exprerience this kind of light, when reading your stories. It's absolutely magnificent.

Stuffed with emotional feelings and impractical thoughts, I definitely have a stupendous liking to this. A noteworthy favorite - you made me, as a reader, feel the pricking impression imposed by this dark yet beautiful oneshot.

life is always life. nothing will be able to change it. you wouldn't be able to deny that you once lived even though you commit suicide, right? like what many others will say, suicidal isn't the answer.

This is cute! And really, I love the song! Its like the ultimate love song for me since it's about devotion or something and accepting faults, so yeah.

But then again, it's so sad. Emo Kahoko is somehow nice to imagine (but not too much) because it gives you a chance to find a way to exploit different sides of a character or something. I don't really know what I'm saying, but that's it.

Angsty yet beautiful. (-: Kahoko actually planned on killing herself? Four letters for that: OMFG. But, I don't think killing yourself is the best solution to escape your problems, though. Life can be bitchy, but it's also FFUUNN! XD

Killing yourself is never the answer, no matter what you may face, no matter how desperate you may feel, no matter how alone...it is never, ever the answer. There is always a way out of every mess you believe to have dropped yourself into.

There is a reason why we are here. One chance, and it's all over. We live it to the fullest, because there is no opportunity gone like a chance missed.

Sheesh, gave too much advice. XD

Still, love the story. I think this is the first time you have attempted something this angsty. Am I right? Correct me if I am wrong, and yeah, lend me a bit of time, Aira, shall reply to your message soon. :)