Just a warning- those two bottom rows of panels have a weird tangent effect going on. Ash's arm lines up with the drawing board on the other side of the panel gutter, making it look like he has a bionic arm and that the two are standing next to each other on opposite sides of how they actually are. It's one of those situations where I'd recommend you switch up the perspective in some of those panels or even just tweak the board's placement a little bit to prevent said illusion

Just a warning- those two bottom rows of panels have a weird tangent effect going on. Ash's arm lines up with the drawing board on the other side of the panel gutter, making it look like he has a bionic arm and that the two are standing next to each other on opposite sides of how they actually are. It's one of those situations where I'd recommend you switch up the perspective in some of those panels or even just tweak the board's placement a little bit to prevent said illusion

Noted, I'll try not to do that again.

I guess this was a case of me not thinking how the script translated to the page...and rushing, that always leads to things like this.

EDIT:Forgot to say thanks, sorry.

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