The golden sun as a river of lightBefore he walked away I said: Don't forget about me!Then he disappeared in the darknessTo fight eternally against time.

Death is always by my sideDoes not touch me yetDoes not lead me to light.So I'm waiting forever in the forest's greenWill I ever see him again?

Ask me for tomorrow - I only see the night.Stars dancing with immortality.On the horizon the brightness of sun awakes.But I am blind and searchingJust like a lonely child.

(refrain again Death is...)

Seeing me standing on the glade one dayI might vanish away foreverWaiting for death - Waiting for luck.As death is bringing back my love.What is life without death?As a drink of water without bread.So give me your hand.Lead me to the light.But do not touch him right now.

Language differences can, indeed, kill some of the magic of poetry. Because of its speciffic needs, poetry tends to work better in the language that it is tough in. Thats part of the reason why so many bands work in english. A lot of things sound better in english. And thats why one is advised to read poets in their original language. The magic of words, as someone said.

But, having said that, I think your translation is not bad. And it let me see your poetry, in a way.

Interestingly, you're a little like my younger brother. You do have similar styles, in how you construct verses and symbology. Its actually pretty how people who can do poetry create feelings and word and symbol plays in such subtle ways.

Yes, some languages fit better to one text than others. But I'm glad that many originals can be translated pretty good in other languages, as it would be difficult to learn every language. But you're right. Particulary in Poetry the language and her ryhthm you write in is the one you invented the writing with.

So the writing-addiction belomgs to your family as your brother is writing, too?

Indeed. Specially because he does some impressive poetry. Maybe someday I may convince him to make a book out of it.

Ah, sorry about that. I still have to finish the second season, and it might get a while to do. Now my brother is in vacations, which means that we get a lot of stuff to do and a lot of visits from family and friends. Add that to my priority works, and I end up with very little time. But I would like to restart the thing in the middle of this month, anf even add a new short story to my gallery while at it.

And sorry for taking so long to reply. Did had that mush free time lately.

Ah, there are authors who can make a story a month, and still publish them: [link]

I'm actually thinking in following that idea. Why couldnt you also do it, if you can think and write stories that fast? In German you can reach a good bunch of people. In Portuguese, unfortunately, I dont have the same luck. But I can write in English, still

I hope you will really follow that idea. As you can write in English, you can reach a lot of people with your writings. For me it's actually no option. Not only because I still can't write but also because if I will publish my writings one day... I want to be able to touch it, leaf through it and put it as a book on my shelf. I'm old fashionaded in that case.

I don't have that much stuff, that would give me the chance to decide to publish some on paper and some on the internet. And what I've written until now is not really the best writing to publish, I guess.

xD The only published work from me that can be touched right now is the little story I wrote at primary school. But I'll try one day to get something written and published. (Oh, and someone to translate it xD )Thank you