Inside OuT Vol 2 Page 041

May 14th, 2012, 7:08 pm

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May 14th, 2012, 7:08 pm

A Thanks
Thanks Rumiel on Smack Jeeves for helping me figure out how to finish this page. While Rumiel didn't really help out with the page directly it came about when she commented to someone else about the possibility of Hitomi being on the Rebound. It was the way she phrased it that made me realize what it was that I wanted Yui to say. If it wasn't for that I don't know if I would have got this page done today... funny how the simplest of things can suddenly trigger the writer in me.

Just so you know I do read every comment and while I won't change the story to please people I do take into consideration things people say to help fill out more character development and story flow. I mean I won't have gone into as much detail about Meloday and Yui's relationship if it weren't for so many of you wanting to hear more back story and the like.

That being said. I may not comment entirely on some of your speculations about the direction of the story, but I do listen that is for certain.

May 24th, 2018, 2:48 pm

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May 16th, 2012, 12:46 am

I was actually speaking from experience. I've been on both ends of rebound on two separate occasions, so I know how it works. And neither of those times did the relationship work... In fact, being the one USED in rebound where my ex still had serious feelings for her ex was really hard.

I mainly just speak from my own personal experiences. And now that I'm 26 and doing essentially nothing with my life, words are all I have. I'm single. No prospect for romance anywhere. To be honest, I've just given up. I don't care if I die a lonely old lady or not. I at least have my words and experiences that I can pass on to at least one person in the world. That's about all I can really ask for. I hate seeing people repeat mistakes, more so if they're mistakes that *I* have made in the past.

May 16th, 2012, 1:34 pm

@Rumiel: Pretty much everything in my stories is based on experience. I was just having troubles phrasing Yui's thoughts without having her bluntly say, "She's on the rebound." LOL Which is how your comment came in handy.

I've been through a hell of a lot over the years. I was in your place for a while, until I was 29, when I met my sweetie. I'd just given up and she popped onto my LJ at the time. Things just caught on and a year later we ended up married, that was over 7 years ago now. One never knows what the future has in hold for them.

May 16th, 2012, 2:18 pm

@Shinigami_Shimai: *chuckles and smiles* I'm glad things worked out for you... I also have a story of my own going, but lack in art skills to make a decent looking comic about it. But it's loosely based on my own experiences.

And while I understand your words and such, I just really can't FEEL like having any hope. I'm just.... I don't know how to really explain it... BTW, have you seen my message? I think I sent you one on DA or something... it was a while back or maybe it was me leaving a comment here, I donno... O_O;