Oh I love this! Only two chapters in and I'm hooked. I think the characterisation of the witch is really good, especially in the first chapter. I really hope you update soon because I so want to read more!

Amazing, captivating and suspenseful,
you better update soon!
The personalities of the characters are well portrait-ed, as are their feelings and musings. I especially like the way you write Edmund. The idea is brilliant as well as the plot.
I really hope that this won't be abandoned and that you'll update soon, since I honestly can't wait to read more!

Guest chapter 2 . 1/12/2013

Amazing story:)
I wish this was what really happened in the movie, because I absoloutley love the idea!
Please update as soon as possible

Guest chapter 2 . 12/17/2012

pleaes huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyy yyyyyy.
I expect one by jan.2

I absolutely love this story! At first I wasn't completely sure where you were going with this story, but this chapter was absolutely amazing and I can't wait for the next update! And I love how you relayed Edmund's thoughts about the White Witch...very real and I could really feel how all of this is for him. Keep up the excellent work! D