I wasn't thrilled that you seem to lay out so much for H/Hrs o easily, until I saw you were still making them work for every scrap of information they get about the mysteries they're working on. And while they have skills/knowledge, they still have to review their memories/practice, which balances it somewhat. So far, I like this well enough. It's certainly interesting, and Death not only is quite the character but is very important to the plot and does not give them answers right off the bat, which I like.

Oh be fair Harry, Death probably gets bored a lot, after all, how often could 'special circumstances' happen? This is like a new book for him, or a muti-hour long movie.

Elle chapter 4 . 6/11/2014

What a fucking joke of a chapter.

As with all shitfics out there Harry's too scared to hurt death eaters despite already getting Hermione and Neville killed. Absolute shite performance in his duel, and that's with backup, there's zero chance of this useless shite ever defeating Volemort.

Then of course girls can't fight, so they have to lose their fight with deatheaters. One would have thought pregnant Hermione and Lily who actually is capable of giving a shit about others would value the lives of their children over deatheaters, unlike Harry. But yeh, girls can't fight, need to make them completely useless in order to make Harry look semi-competent by comparison.

Oh yeh, then he ditches Hermione to go talk to Dumbledore, real nice guy there, forget about the pregnant wife in hospital. Thank fuck this shit is abandonded