~~REVIEW~~
Ha well this was decent, it had a good story aswell, but also presented some really good characters allthough the could be more detailed i still like what you did with them, very nice work indeed, make more when you can...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and depth witin the characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Good flash with some really neat characters but also a decent story notbad work here...

I did genuinely like this piece but it still could use some work. Lipsync needs some major overhaul. If this were originally in another language I could understand but a mouth moving when noting is said just does not work.

The jokes and humor were pretty good; yet, the humor because of the elevator sex joke makes it a more Teen and not suitable for all people. Make sure you think about all the elements before rating it for everybody.