I stopped midway throughhchapter twelve. I originally liked this story. But, after the point where the offscreen Ishizu conversation happened, I didn't. I found everything to be jumbled and choppy. So many things were left unfinished for too long and I have no idea why everyone feels the need to lie about everything. As well, I found the inner "thoughts" of serenity to be highly annoying and would prefer not to be talked to mid-story by the author. I hope, that if I were to continue reading I would find answers to my questions, but I am out of patience.

darkmagicianfan 100 chapter 15 . 7/1/2008

WOW! Did Kaiba ask her to marry him or was it to pretend to be his wife? That was some brilliant thinking either way! Are you gonna explain why Yugi and Tea kidnapped Serenity? Was it to protect her because the spirit of Kisara resides in her? This is getting good! Please update soon!

darkmagicianfan 100 chapter 7 . 7/1/2008

I love this fanfic so far! I loved it when Joey called the sensitive Yugi motou unsensitive! It's really funney for some twisted reason when so one calls yugi unsensitive or not innocent.

WOW, this is such a brilliantly amazingly cool fic. It's definately the best fic I've read all week. Be proud of yourself- not many people culd write something like this. The suspense is killing me! I wanna find out what happens! This has a absaloutly brilliant plot and while being original it is totaly uniuque. Keep up the good work! Hope you update VERY soon!

Are you coming back to Hamtaro? I know that you've been hurt over the human ham hams and crepes and all the fakies who made "MFF" rip-offs, but it usually takes a short time for people to recover from the hurt. And you were a real good authoress.

I know this has nothing to do with your story, but its been what, 3, 4 years?

Please?

Satu-Suzu

p.s. you can email me or neomail me at my username, unigator, or send a review to my story w/ your response. Not trying to look like a n00b or anything.