Ths was very interesting but somewhat sad.I hope you write a sequel to 's amazing.I was not bored for a moment. This held my attention throughout the entire story. One of my it cuz i love itasaku if you have time write a sequel to a really good you decide to write a sequel please make it excellent !

Thank you for your service. I hope you and your comrades come home safely and as intact as possible. I am really enjoying this story. I hope you are able and willing to continue it. If you do decide to continue it, I wouldn't mind beta reading it for you.

I really like the idea of this story so far. It reminds me of one that I read before called The Virus. Itachi was evil in that one like he is in this one. It's a nice change from the stories that cast Itachi and the rest of the Akatsuki as normal people who happen to be doing less than good things. So yeah I like the dark stuff. On another note, I know you said, in your prologue I believe, not to point out grammatical errors and whatnot. But please, get a beta reader or read it over yourself, you'll be surprised at what you pick out. The story, while it has a good plot, doesn't flow well and so makes it hard to read.

I'm glad you haven't given up on this story. I really enjoy reading it since it's just so delightfully sick. Please update as soon as you can I'm desperately wainting for more of evil ItachiXD Believe me I'll definitely read the next chapters!

his freakin story was amazing, it was so dark, and raw, I loved it, evry aching brutal minute. I think this Itachi is so fitting, he is different yet he is the same emotionally as u would expect the real itachi to be. Poor sakura in this story, it has to be the bad boy eh, (I feel her pain on that matter..sighs), she goes through hell. Anyway you put alot of effort and back stories into this story especially the one bout anko and orochimaru, I always figured that story was never elaborated in the manga, but your version rocked, and the kakashi scene, oh boy that was hot. Hardly any Naruto in this story, but hey it works. Keep up the equolently dangerous writing and please UPDATE SOON!