Hey, I realize you're really busy with college and stuff (frankly, so am I, lol), so this isn't a prod to try to get you to write beyond what you want and can do while maintaining your GPA.

That said, your writing is witty, intriguing, well-planned, and (hell, I'll say it again) witty. It's funny enough to keep the reader going through the otherwise "boring" parts of the plot. In two days, I've read three of your stories (ORE, TBH, and SoAS) and I love them all. If I had more time, I'd volunteer to see if I could wrtie up possible plot ideas for where you've hit a block just to see if that could spark any fresh ideas. Anyway, fantastic stories. Great writing style. I love how you twist certain parts of canon, but stick to the rest of it (like going through the Genin exams in SoAS and the Zabuza arc in TBH). It's a fun twist for the reader, yet it still gives us something familar to watch.

Super chapter! The scenes with Naruto and Hinata are great...just as in the manga this couple does seem natural together. The battle scenes are also super...Naruto is so strong and cool as he pounds the enemy ninja.

I am very surprised at the teams you put Hinata and Naruto on. I will read on for a while to see where you go with this but ...I really don't like the idea at this time...I'm going to give it some time.