30 August 2009

I'm an alien to myself,
Because, I often improvise my doings
I don't feel satisfied,
for whatever I have achieved
I don't stop at any point,
no matter how much resistance perceived

I'm an alien to my family,
Because, I am often misunderstood
I don't want to lead my life,
like a traditional business
I don't care about the definition of success,
that doesn't bring happiness

I'm an alien to the society,
Because, I often disapprove its norms
I don't discriminate people,
in the name of ideology, physique or possession
I don't love or hate people,
on the ground of color, language or religion

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They all stand still and stare at me,
as if I am from a different galaxy
But if I'm an alien,
don't we need more aliens in the society?

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Alok
said...

What a write! cleverly master minded poem. yes we do need a lot of rebels like you who believe in equality. good work once again. cheers, mate!

I'm an alien to the society,Because, I often disapprove its normsI don't discriminate people,in the name of ideology, physique or possessionI don't love or hate people,on the ground of color, language or religion

Simple,heart touching and yet very revolutionary. Once again you have proved that “Simplicity is the glory of expression”. Great composition.

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what an expression ! simply great and awesome ... pls dont mind you also sounded like autistic peoples who also doesnt care to world and do what they feel like to do without any risk, with no harm to anyone either they hate or love to people.. nothing does matter just they love and enjoy being in thier own world peacefully without any complain to none ..

AP
said...

The last stanza is indeed thought provoking:

They all stand still and stare at me,as if I am from a different galaxyBut if I'm an alien,don't we need more aliens in the society?

I agree with you. we do need people like you who believe in the Utopian concept of unity. great write.

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