This is sweet and emotional. I liked the atmosphere of complete trust & acceptance between them, no judgement, no questions asked. I haven't read all the books, so I've no idea how close they all are in canon, but you've managed to create a loving, warm feeling here.

I liked this a lot...in Everworld it seems like they needed more than just themselves or one other person to lean on, and it actually seems fitting that they all support each other equally. I like how April was last and you addressed her qualms about her faith and principles. Actually, thinking back on all of them, they were all very IC: Chris with his stubborn denial at first, Jalil with his respect of David's courtesy towards him (with the..OCD thing, can't really remember the books now) and David. I liked this a lot!

Oh heck I really liked this. It's been ages since I read everworld, but this seems IC to me, in the "it gives the right feeling" way, and it makes me want to read the books again.

So yay for you!

I'm faving this.

Wraith chapter 1 . 5/5/2008

This is quite a beautiful story. Usually I'm not a fan of non-canon pairings, but this was well carried off and didn't bother me in the slightest. You captured the essence of the different characters well.

I'm sorry I don't have any useful criticism for you (I don't give the non-useful kind because I try not to be a dork). Its hard to edit a conceptual piece. I'm also a sucker for shorts like this.

I like how you really go for the themes of acceptance and support. This could have been a terrible or porn-y fic but now its just sweet. Saddly I don't remember the canon very well, but I likies muchly.