I like this one much better then the first, with regards to one small point... that darn "e" I made sure to read the other comments so I didn't sound mean (constructive criticism, lol) But it looks like someone else also pointed that out... Then again, this is a "Deviant" shirt, so the buyers will already know what it says, and if anyone asks, I'm sure they'd tell them gladly.

You got mass branding skills, your style is unique. I wish you the very best.

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