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Review:

Maelody says:You have a real talent for having that creepy beauty skill down, you know that? Seriously! I think you've done such an amazing job with this! "Grown as gaunt as his last name and as bitter as his father." This gave me goosebumps! From boyhood to old man, and then dead and gone. Such a sad way to describe a fateless man. It really makes me wonder about the way his life would really go down in someone elses' (or JK's) view. Such a tragic story, really. :(

The way he interacts with the snakes, and admires his father, and sees what is right in his eyes is so scary, but brilliant. This really is your talent, and amazing it is! You've done such an incredible job on this piece, and it's such a great tribute to the Slytherin tales and Slytherin House! Great job! I'm totally favoriting this! :D

~Mae

Author's Response: Hi Mae! :)

Thank you! :) I love the term "creepy beauty" and that you applied it to this story. I'm glad it gave you goosebumps, and that you found the story sad as I did as well. He had such a miserable existence without any purpose, and I really wanted to capture that.

I'm glad you liked his character and how he saw the world! It was quite fun to get inside Morfin's head and how desolate the view from his head would be. I'm very honoured you thought it was a good tribute to Slytherin- yay! :D