Ah the Waltz, a perfect name. You're not merely describing the action, but you've truly captured that something we've all felt in a relationship. We dance the dance. I enjoyed this piece immensely.

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Mon, July 20th, 2009 6:36pm

thanks. i never thought of it that way, im not writing about a relationship here but now that you mention it i think some of those elements did find their way in there, i never thought about relationships with it before

i loved it. thats all i can really say without going on and on about the sheer excellence of the wording and the imagery of this poem. pulling you in and yet having a satisfying conclusion that lets you sit back and take in what you have read without making you feel like you have missed something. Beautiful!

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Tue, July 28th, 2009 10:50am

thanks for the nice comment and the useful observations, glad you liked it.