God this story is just...it's so awesome and has me smiling like an idiot through every chapter. No only does it have a well portrayed Aomine, it also has a very loveable and adorable oc which is very rare, a male oc even more so. I love Ren, he is so adorable.
I like how when I'm reading this I feel almost like I'm reading a manga. I know this may sound strange but I love the phrasing in certain parts, it sounds almost like it was translated from japanese and it makes it feel like it feel like it's right out of an anime episode. I mostly watch subbed anime so I really love it when things like this happen :D
I love the cheesyness and the fluff of this story so much, it's really a pick-me-up for a bad day.
This story really deserves more attention then it gets.
-Birdy

Adorable! I've never seen someone do male characterXMale OC. It's odd but I was thinking about that earlier and here you are! Plus, you're writing is adorable. URGG. This storyline is also very touching, and I'm glad someone will get to Aomine's heart.