Wow. this was good. And it was different and original. It was sad too (probably cause i was listening to a sad song) Anyway,hoping i don't sound stupid, but just to make sure, is the woman Kagome's mother and Kagome never came back home? Well, thats how i took it. Nice job.

At the risk of sounding silly... huh? I'm not sure I understand the situation, especially Sesshoumaru's line here-“The girl in the fuku survived the battle for the jewel. There were no offspring. He buried her under the tree by the shrine. This Sesshou- I believe that they were… happy.”-namely, the "he" of which he speaks. My first inclination is to think Inuyasha, but I'm not sure [although, that was probably your intention :D]. The part about "I think that we need to meet again" also made me doubt the Inuyasha theory.

That said, I think some of the colour imagery and phrasing is absolutely lovely, and the "Wasn't that his line?" line just made me smile. _