easy00:07:589 (3) - even though this blankets, its shape is really ugly imo Just make it like this https://puu.sh/vOCip.png ~ applies to all other shapes like this00:16:317 (3) - https://puu.sh/vOCjN.png like this for variousity? 00:16:317 (3,1) - would stack nice00:19:589 (3) - since youre really trying to blanket all that stuff why not this one?00:20:680 (1) - why isnt this one a reversal? its the exact same sound owo00:22:498 (3) - this really fits as a reversal.. idk but that circle thingy could be a bit to hard for newbies 00:43:953 (1) - rip stack00:35:226 (1) - could be a bit too hard to read - try it like this https://puu.sh/vOCr7.png00:41:044 (1) - fix that blanket here00:59:226 (2) - hard to read01:00:680 (4) - could be circular too since 00:59:226 (2) - is also like that. would represent the "stream" sound more imo

normal00:01:771 (1,2,3) - you always represented that sould with a reversal slider.. why not here too? 00:23:044 (3) - move to for a perfect blanket00:43:589 - this sound is so stronggg.. you need a circle here imo00:16:498 (1) - would look better if you CTRL+J 00:15:771 (4) - 00:09:771 (3) - same shape as 00:56:317 (3) - ? for at least some similarity.. they both.. somehow dont fit in the map .. uwu00:44:498 - idk but a circle would fit well in here

insanenot really a mod here since it looks pretty fine00:57:044 (1) - this shape here looks meh.. messy. hard had a nice shape, make it similar like that one00:59:589 (5) - idk but.. isnt this a bit too overdone? it looks good and all.. but i think that is too intense for an insane at this sr01:02:498 (5) - same here.. but this is really toooooooo intense 00:16:226 (6) - same ds as 00:11:862 (4) - please, its too much ;;;; and u didnt even do that before so.. that should really be fixed

00:00:498 (2,4,2) - End on white tick and repeat, it sounds better.00:03:953 (4) - Move this under the slider overlapping it.00:04:498 (6,7,1) - Could be a small stream.00:05:589 (1) - Move this. It looks weird stacked this way.00:06:135 (1) - Circle after this please for tiny stream that looks better.00:06:862 (4) - Blanket this with 00:06:498 (3) - .00:08:317 (4) - End this at red tick before repeat then make a new smaller slider that carries on to where the old one did that's on where the repeat was. Then pretty much do the same thing but no smaller slider.00:09:953 (4) - Repeat halfway in.00:13:044 (2) - Unstack this.00:14:862 (1,2,3) - If you're gonna make a triangle, make it right atleast.00:18:498 (3,4) - Stream please, it bugs me.00:19:226 (1,2,3) - Same triangle issue.00:19:771 (4) - Put slider end on white tick and circle on current slider end. It doesn't sync to the music much this way.00:21:407 (4,5,6) - THIS ISENT PURFICT!!!11!11111111 DCFBDJFHASDJHFJDSHFJKDHSFJDSAHLFHH00:21:953 (1) - End this on white tick and repeat it.00:23:771 (4) - Move this pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease00:24:317 (2) - Same slider end and circle problem that doesn't sync.00:25:771 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this a square and then make the leftover circle a stream on the one before it.00:28:498 (4) - Same end halfway and repeat thing00:30:135 (3) - ^00:30:862 (1,2,3) - Halfway in between these, copy and paste them and put them up higher.00:32:407 (1) - End on red tick before end then put a slow slider there to the second blue tick before 00:35:226 (1) - .00:36:498 (1) - End halfway in and repeat. Doesn't change sync, but it makes more aesthetics00:37:771 (1,2,3,4,1) - Continue this stream to 00:38:317 (2) - .00:39:589 (1) - Halfway in. I'm not saying the rest of what I mean.00:41:044 (1) - more aesthetics please(repeat it halfway in)00:43:953 (1,2) - Circle in between these sliders.00:46:135 (1,2,1,2) - Circles in 1/4 gaps as streams. aesthetics00:48:680 (2,3,1,2) - ^ and space out the jumps so they don't look weird.00:49:407 (1,2,3,4,1) - Extra circle that doesn't connect to stream for a jump.00:51:044 (1) - End halfway in like I've said before, then make a tiny stream to the current slider end.00:56:317 (1) - Turn into a slider with no repeats then make the stream after it longer.00:58:862 (2) - Move this and rotate it by 150 or so.00:59:771 (1) - If you don't care too much about aesthetics this time, do the halfway in thing01:00:317 (2) - At red tick after this place a circle for a jump before the stream.01:01:044 (1) - End this like 01:01:407 (1) - . FYI that means make it 1 half beat long.01:02:862 (1) - End this on white tick right before the end of this spinner and put a circle where the current end of it is.

No offense, but for a one minute map this is a lot of modding (took like 40 minutes) so I don't feel like modding every difficulty. This means I only modded the top difficulty. Although that may be because I'm a new modder trying the thing out.

@QiiXshinez : ehh im really sorry.i know you are newbie and tried to give your opinion about this map but its too much (it looks like you want changing these whole diff) so all rejected *im really sorry about this ;w;

nyu - wrote:

yainsanenot really a mod here since it looks pretty fine00:57:044 (1) - this shape here looks meh.. messy. hard had a nice shape, make it similar like that one00:59:589 (5) - idk but.. isnt this a bit too overdone? it looks good and all.. but i think that is too intense for an insane at this sr01:02:498 (5) - same here.. but this is really toooooooo intense 00:16:226 (6) - same ds as 00:11:862 (4) - please, its too much ;;;; and u didnt even do that before so.. that should really be fixed You're right, fixed.

Thanks for modding

QiiXshinez wrote:

00:00:498 (2,4,2) - End on white tick and repeat, it sounds better. Nope, there're guitars active on the red ticks. That's why I ended it there.00:03:953 (4) - Move this under the slider overlapping it. No, that's to mark that the guitars are repeating themselves.00:04:498 (6,7,1) - Could be a small stream. No, I want this to be a stacked triplet, not a stream.00:05:589 (1) - Move this. It looks weird stacked this way. Why? It doesn't feel weird.00:06:135 (1) - Circle after this please for tiny stream that looks better. Can't understand this point.00:06:862 (4) - Blanket this with 00:06:498 (3) - . No, I don't want a blanket there. 00:08:317 (4) - End this at red tick before repeat then make a new smaller slider that carries on to where the old one did that's on where the repeat was. Then pretty much do the same thing but no smaller slider. At first, I thought that way. But at second thought it's like "This's just an Intro so this should be relaxing. And moreover a jump is there.00:09:953 (4) - Repeat halfway in. Why? There's no sound halfway of it.00:13:044 (2) - Unstack this. No, emphasis there. And I don't want to put some space there.00:14:862 (1,2,3) - If you're gonna make a triangle, make it right atleast. It's not actually a triangle but it's a trapezium. A pattern with 00:14:862 (1,2,3,4) - 00:36:498 (1) - End halfway in and repeat. Doesn't change sync, but it makes more aestheticsNo, the aesthetics are fine imo. And also I'm aiming for an emphasis to the vocals. And there isn't any sound halfway of it. Making a repeat slider would be questionable.00:37:771 (1,2,3,4,1) - Continue this stream to 00:38:317 (2) - .No. There's no sound at the blue tick. It's just overmapping.00:39:589 (1) - Halfway in. I'm not saying the rest of what I mean. No, I'm taking vocals as the priority.00:41:044 (1) - more aesthetics please(repeat it halfway in) As I said, I'm following the vocals. And aesthetics are fine.00:43:953 (1,2) - Circle in between these sliders. Can't understand what you mean.00:46:135 (1,2,1,2) - Circles in 1/4 gaps as streams. aestheticsNo. This should be consecutive 1/2s.

No offense, but for a one minute map this is a lot of modding (took like 40 minutes) so I don't feel like modding every difficulty. This means I only modded the top difficulty. Although that may be because I'm a new modder trying the thing out.

Thanks for modding. Just please understand mapper's intention before pointing out things. And always provide some suggestions, (and with some pictures, maybe) to make mappers understand easier. Good Luck

00:16:498 - I think spinner here ok, but for beginners at the end of this it's disoriented and they are wondering where their cursor is. So it should be corrected, because this spinner disoriented me... and what to say for begginers? I think if you delete spinner here it will be ok, and add 00:17:953 - circle here. In the other way you can 00:16:680 - add circle here, 00:17:044 - begins of slider, 00:17:771 - end of slider. But it's up to you^^00:15:589 (2,3) - overlap it's bad in easy diff, very bad, and not beauty00:22:498 - this part confuse me, so maybe if you 00:22:498 - add circle, 00:22:862 - begin of slider, 00:23:589 - end of slider, it will be more understandably for beginners. I want that you do such slider because more strong quick sounds, that beginners can't click, because of it's quickness, will be involve into this slider. And rhythm is understandably)00:27:953 - delete circle and begin here slider, 00:28:680 - end of slider. Also it will more understandably)00:31:589 - here end of slider and 00:31:953 - here circle, 00:32:135 - delete circle. It fits the structure of the song00:32:135 (1) - begin of spinner00:58:498 (1,2) - overlap,00:35:226 (1,2) - also01:04:317 - end of spinner, if you listen the song in 25% of speed, you will notice that end here

Normal

00:03:953 (3,4) - i don't think that overlap is best idea...00:01:044 (3,4) - ctrl g will better, as 00:06:135 - here00:03:953 - i think here will be better if you add circle, 00:04:135 - begin of slider, 00:04:498 - end of slider. And do stack these circle and slider. And here 00:09:771 - also circle stack slider. And i don't think that 00:09:771 - this slider so good, and blanket is bad, so just do usual slider 1/1 as i told00:11:953 (2) - NC, 00:12:317 (1) - delete NC00:15:953 - bigin of slider, 00:16:680 - begin of second sliderCheck all overlaps, it's bad, and check all blankets, because i see that it's not perfect^^

You do such amazing chorus, I like it especially in Normal.So i think everythink is good, but if it's begining of the song it's not understandably. You always jump from vocal to drums, and it's confusingSo good luck

elena2705 wrote:

Hi~You asked to mod this^^

Easy

00:16:498 - I think spinner here ok, but for beginners at the end of this it's disoriented and they are wondering where their cursor is. So it should be corrected, because this spinner disoriented me... and what to say for begginers? I think if you delete spinner here it will be ok, and add 00:17:953 - circle here. In the other way you can 00:16:680 - add circle here, 00:17:044 - begins of slider, 00:17:771 - end of slider. But it's up to you^^ - keep the current for playability (i knew it but i make the rhythm more simply so beginner can catch up the rhtyhm) 00:15:589 (2,3) - overlap it's bad in easy diff, very bad, and not beauty - ??00:22:498 - this part confuse me, so maybe if you 00:22:498 - add circle, 00:22:862 - begin of slider, 00:23:589 - end of slider, it will be more understandably for beginners. I want that you do such slider because more strong quick sounds, that beginners can't click, because of it's quickness, will be involve into this slider. And rhythm is understandably) - same as before00:27:953 - delete circle and begin here slider, 00:28:680 - end of slider. Also it will more understandably) - ^00:31:589 - here end of slider and 00:31:953 - here circle, 00:32:135 - delete circle. It fits the structure of the song - keep for emphatize the drum at 00:31:771 -00:32:135 (1) - begin of spinner - i think the drum sound should be clickable..00:58:498 (1,2) - overlap,00:35:226 (1,2) - also - it doesnt matter (theres a lot of map that used this kind of overlap so i think its fine)01:04:317 - end of spinner, if you listen the song in 25% of speed, you will notice that end here - considering

Normal

00:03:953 (3,4) - i don't think that overlap is best idea... - but for me yeah00:01:044 (3,4) - ctrl g will better, as 00:06:135 - here - looks messed up imo00:03:953 - i think here will be better if you add circle, 00:04:135 - begin of slider, 00:04:498 - end of slider. And do stack these circle and slider. And here 00:09:771 - also circle stack slider. And i don't think that 00:09:771 - this slider so good, and blanket is bad, so just do usual slider 1/1 as i told - ehh idk what are you talking about but the rhtyhm aiready as is it00:11:953 (2) - NC, 00:12:317 (1) - delete NC 00:15:953 - bigin of slider, 00:16:680 - begin of second slider - vocalCheck all overlaps, it's bad, and check all blankets, because i see that it's not perfect^^ - all blanket/overlap its aiready great imo

You do such amazing chorus, I like it especially in Normal.So i think everythink is good, but if it's begining of the song it's not understandably. You always jump from vocal to drums, and it's confusingSo good luck

00:13:771 (2,4) - Blanket between the first half of 00:14:317 (4) - and end of 00:13:771 (2) - is off.

00:14:317 (4,1) - ^

00:23:953 (1,2) - Blanket here is off.

00:23:771 (6,1) - Switch NC (Reference: 00:17:953 (1,2) - )

00:32:135 (1) - Unnecessary NC imo

[Normal]

00:03:953 (3,4) - Overlap between the two could be avoided.

00:31:771 (2,3) - imo a reverse slider works best in this part.

00:35:226 (1) - I find it weird how the sound at 00:35:589 (2) - receives the slider and not the prolonged vocal at 00:35:589 (2) - . Consider doing the same as 00:46:862 (1) - . Consistency might also benefit by doing so.

-Harpuia- wrote:

00:29:044 (5,1) - I feel like the spacing here should be greater than the previous; as 00:29:226 (1) - seems to have the strongest sound.

00:31:589 (3,1) - Switch NC. The sound here is connected to the ones after.- hmm i dont think so.the drum at 00:31:771 (1) - is strong and the intesnity of myusic is really different.so i think it have to nc-ed

00:48:680 (2,3) - Looks weird without an NC on 00:48:680 (2) - , but that's probably for the better so nvm I guess lol

00:56:317 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Curve with the stream could be improved.

00:58:862 (2) - Unsnapped slider end

@William K - I won't be able to mod the marathon map you posted on my queue so I'm just gonna shoot some stars there, sorry ;w;

[Hard]

00:00:317 (1,2) - is basically parallel to 00:01:044 (3,4) - , music-wise, and kinda with 00:03:226 (1,2) - too, so I think it would be better if the first two were unstacked. - at 00:01:044 (3) - theres a clap at 00:01:044 (3) .thats the reason why im make the pattern different

00:03:953 (3,4) - Overlap between the two could be avoided. - meh i like kind of overlap

00:31:771 (2,3) - imo a reverse slider works best in this part. - i dont think so.the drum at circle (3) is strong so yeah

00:35:226 (1) - I find it weird how the sound at 00:35:589 (2) - receives the slider and not the prolonged vocal at 00:35:589 (2) - . Consider doing the same as 00:46:862 (1) - . Consistency might also benefit by doing so. - i dont understand

Kyousukee wrote:

Ai Mod is your best friend in mapping . check it out . Your kiai time should end at 00:57:044 (1) - every diff .

00:38:135 (1) - i dont see why nc this . nc should at 00:38:317 (2) - It's a downbeat while (2) isn't. There's no reason for NC-ing 2. I NC every downbeats.

00:03:953 (4) - this is tricky circle . this is just insane diff . player doesn't have time to figure it out No, this's allowed in Insanes. And even maybe in Hards. This's not really a high leveled one.

00:04:862 (1) - nc this No, like I said not a downbeat.

00:40:317 (1,2,3,4) - fix this jump . maybe u can follow this 00:48:680 (1,2,1,2) - if u want . it's up to you Nope, there's a difference in intensity of music there. It's filled with drums. A higher jump is needed there.

Being perfectly honest here, I'm not a great modder like them . I'm just want to help . Goodluck with the set ><

00:27:407 (3,1) - Increase spacing between these two. the spacing is not there to emphasize 00:27:771 (1) - properly

00:30:862 (1,2) - Not sure about this spacing. I mean, yeah the guitar has 2 snares that justifies the high spacing. But I think it's not that appropriate since the section is literally the same (in terms of intensity)

00:32:317 (1,1) - I'm not sure ignoring the guitar that you left unmapped is a good idea. Maybe you can add another spinner?

01:02:862 (1) - End it at 01:04:226 -

00:02:317 (2) - welp. this one ignores the clap as well

00:06:862 (4,1) - not sure if the current overlap is ok. Then again I've seen worse. But maybe I'll mention this overlap, just in case

01:02:862 (1) - ya like i said end the spinner on the same place as hard

Winter Story wrote:

one ok rock is besto

00:02:317 (2) - welp. this one ignores the clap as well Yes it ignores the clap. I'm only following the guitars considering it's calm enough.

00:06:862 (4,1) - not sure if the current overlap is ok. Then again I've seen worse. But maybe I'll mention this overlap, just in case The overlap's pretty much similar to 00:15:407 (4,5) - actually but it's a reversed one.

01:02:862 (1) - ya like i said end the spinner on the same place as hard