Posted 4 Years Ago

4 Years Ago

4 Years Ago

Whoa, this is an awesome piece! Loved the opening lines, then it got deep on me and reminded me of nearly half the people (mostly young) I meet here. But your ending made it beautiful and unexpected,

Thanks for the share! Reeeally enjoyed it.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Antonyo. I am so glad you enjoyed this. Being long out of the category of "young".. read moreThank you so much, Antonyo. I am so glad you enjoyed this. Being long out of the category of "young", I can climb out of the gloom a bit more readily... :)

4 Years Ago

Oh, no, you appear much too wise...but I mean it's a good read for the young here to read ;-) read moreOh, no, you appear much too wise...but I mean it's a good read for the young here to read ;-)
I'm a fan of the necessary ones!
You're very welcome!

Posted 4 Years Ago

4 Years Ago

4 Years Ago

This beautifully structured rhyme evokes guiding intuitions that lie beyond the limits of my empirical objectivity. I'd be the last person on Earth to say that I wasn't also guided by these mysterious intuitions. Perhaps it's our mystical intuitions that make us truly human. Reality is greater than the sum of its components, an angelic addendum, a magical touch.

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