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Jchrissy says:Accio Dragon. Accio Dragon? Oh. My. Gosh. This had so many really, really funny parts. You have a wonderful and sense of humor, the kind that involves witty humor as opposed to pointless.

You did such a great job with imagery, this entire story felt very real because of it. And the way you incorporated the prompts, THANK YOU! You made them part of the story, instead of just sticking them where they'd fit. It was perfect.

I don't think I'll ever be able to get the image of Neville raising a massive dragon into the air. And the fact that he surprised himself with nearly everything he did, was perfect!

You are a wonderful writer, and I am so happy that I finally was able to read your entry!

PS: The ending. ahahhah! Poor Ron. I couldn't figure out if Neville was just trying to tease him, or decided if he set him up to believe it was his worst fear, maybe a dragon wouldn't seem so bad?

Great writing, darling! I really need to get started on one of your novels. If you want to pressure me into it with some review requests, I wouldn't mind ;)! Otherwise, I will make it over here soon, I promise!

Jami (PS: Go Gryffindor!)

Author's Response: Hi, Jami!

Aww yay, I'm so glad you enjoyed this. :) I had a lot of fun writing it.

I think that one of the best things about Neville is that once he discovered he could be as defiant as Harry, and a leader and a revolutionary, there was no stopping him. He really came into his own. It was fun for me to portray him after the war died down a bit and his bravery wasn't fueled by adrenaline/battle anymore. It has to come from somewhere else now - memories and willpower and all that. Therefore it's a challenge for him, but he gets there in the end. :)

Haha, at the time of writing this I figured that it was just Neville teasing Ron about the spiders, but it would be very Neville-ish if he'd just said it to make Ron prepare for the worst, and that way he'd end up doing better than expected.

Oooh, that would be awesome if you read one of my novels! But no rush - they're not going anywhere. ^ ^