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Re: My remix of Sinners

Overall I like.

In my opinion the part at 2:55 is an important improvement compared to your first prototype. I like how you play with the main melody and let it "rise" with this part. I encourage you to create more progression like that at the later parts of the remix (e.g. second break down). Currently the part starting at 5:14 sounds like a copy of the first break. Adding effects / instruments at this part and/or varying the melody (at 5:28?) might be an improvement.

What I dont't like is the instrument with a high tone which starts at 1:13, 2:25 and 3:38. First, I think it is too dominant. So reducing its loudness might be better. Second, I think it sounds a bit too natural.