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Yay! Another chapter! I was so glad to see it was updated! I noticed the shorter author's notes. I know it's hard to keep them short sometimes, but it does make you seem more organized! The story itself keeps me hanging in there, wondering what will happen next, and rooting for Red to get his man back. It also makes me wonder what had happened between them before, and why Blue is being such a butthead all of a sudden. Something must have happened! But what? I guess I will have to keep reading to find out!

Yay! Any time a new slash shows up, I gotta read it. I like it so far. Mostly, I think it's a little disconcerting that the author's notes are as long as the chapters, but if shorter chapters means more updates, more power to you! I am intrigued as to why "Blue" is such a meanie head, and is it just me, or is the doctor a little too friendly with the protagonist? Haha.

Melissa Norvell chapter 2 . 1/18/2008

Sorry for my spazziness...I'm really fatigued from working today and coming home to read this made my day. This story is getting interesting.

You're story is good so far, written well and descriptive, but..with all due respect, you could've started it off a bit more intrestingly. It's just, I had to struggle to finish the end of the chapter because of how little was happening, so I'm afraid I can't become a fan of this just yet. But I'll be sure to keep an eye out for this story and see if it gets a bit more intresting along the way.