Ok, so I've now read this entire story and decided to wait until the end to review it.

First off, I like the idea/whole plot behind this. Interesting, things keep moving.

There -are- a couple of negative points that I thought I'd...well...point out, just for future edification an' all. You might wanna invest in a beta, someone to proofread your stuff... I caught more than a couple cute bloopers that can be pretty easily avoided. If you decide to go that route, feel free to e-mail anything to me that you'd want imput on. Secondly, your characters came off a bit over-done. Spike was -extremely- low-class British, tending to use a lot of the same phrases more than once in a row, the Scoobies were just ridiculously concerned in a one dimensional sorta way, and Angelus was just kinda humorously "evil."

Please don't take this as an affront, because I know I'm not a very tactful person, but I -do- love your fics (don't believe me? go read some other praises on your other works. Swear they're there...) and I wanna see you write the best you possibly can. I'm still looking forward to checking out what else I haven't read yet and anything new you're contemplating.

;P

"The King of Cups expects a picnic... But it is not his birthday..." "...Good point."

Anna chapter 6 . 5/5/2002

nicely told...very realistic (in the Buffyverse, at east) i was hanging on every word...

Nifty story. You did a nice job of making it plausible that he would be willing to work with her. We've seen him do that before, for similar reasons. Loved the uninvite and the gangs reaction when he wzs back. Made me laugh. Oh, and you said you couldn't tell Angel and Angelus apart - Angelus is the one in the leather pants. ;-)

tequila sunrise chapter 6 . 4/15/2002

Wow. This whole story has been incredibly clever and well written. (throws a mini-party, complete w/ hats and pinatas) Angel's deaaaaaad... An-gel's deaaaaaaa-dddddd... Lalalala... :) It's a good day for the white hats, hmmm?

angelannie chapter 5 . 4/2/2002

hey, nice work. I really like the evil Angelus. So much more interesting than tormented soul angel. I like how Spike is acting, more big bad, less willing slave. Cool