I saw this story recommended several times on the H/Hr subreddit and am surrised that I've never revied it before now.

I think your dialogue and narration are generally far better than what one usually finds in fanfic. The conflict feels appropriate to the story, but at times I found myself wondering how long your characters could continue without sorting everything out in a single, tense conversation.

Would you consider adding an 'Angst' tag to your story? The purposefully oblique miscommunication (Gabrielle's introduction) and lack of communication between protagonist and her love interest until the very end is - for me at least - the textbook definition of angst.

Oh my my
This was amazingly cute...
I loved it
Ron and Gabrielle is an idea I haven't seen before, and I really like it
I love the setting, their houses
The fact that they are living together and are now a quartet
Great one
Honestly
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Guest chapter 8 . 8/7/2017

Amazing...i cried so much!i recommend listening to something lie stay(rihanna) or stolen dance to really get those tears flowing.

After all these years, this is still the best H/Hr fic I've read. I spent the last two nights up till 3am to go through it again, and it was just as, if not more, enjoyable as the first time I went through it.

Spot on characterisation, great emtion, excellent writing and the perfect angst to fluff ratio. I could go on. I just wanted to let you know that this work is greatly appreciated. I only wish there were more like it.