SCP-XXXX is safely contained within a locked closet at site-06-3. SCP-XXXX can be safely left alone. A sign or label which reads ‘’Access restricted to personnel with level 2 clearance or higher. No commands are to be given to SCP-XXXX without permission from Dr. Anderson.’’ is to be situated on the outside of the closet.

This doesn't have to be on a sign. It could just be in the document itself.

If a containment breach is imminent, at least four (4) guards armed with tasers and stun batons are to be stationed outside of the containment cell.

The "number (#)" thing is kind of a relic of the past, and you can get rid of it.

Tasers and stun batons are used to prevent unnecessary damage to SCP-XXXX. Armed guards and mobile task force units are advised not to fire conventional metal projectiles such as bullets or rockets at SCP-XXXX, as it possesses a ''magnetic shield'' that it can use to catch and redirect projectiles.

"Due to the nature of its anomaly, SCP-X may only be engaged with non-metal weaponry such as tasers and stun batons."

SCP-XXXX seems to be constructed out of common materials such as steel, with an aluminum frame and a thin layer of graphene coating the heavily armored parts of SCP-XXXX, along with its joints.

The Foundation would 100% be capable of identifying the materials that make this thing up, and it kind of breaks the immersion that you have them assuming.

SCP-XXXX is after incident XXXX-07 no longer seemingly sentient, and now follows orders directly given to it.

That is a mighty hefty assumption to make. It's really easy to just follow orders and make someone think you're a mindless drone, I don't see why it's incapable for this android to do it. It seems like the Foundation is being way too relaxed about this.

SCP-XXXX-1 displays no anomalous properties.

Then it really shouldn't be classified as an SCP object.

So, the main issue with this draft is a lack of a story - modern day articles rely heavily on a narrative to keep the readers engaged and caring about what they read. At the moment, this is just a robot that has a cool gun. I have no reason to care about that, and it comes off as extremely generic and honestly, not even anomalous. AI isn't anomalous, and it's becoming more and more realistic in the real world, so this falls kind of flat.

Try and think about what emotion you want to evoke from your reader - is it humor, like SCP-3171 or SCP-3329? Horror/sad, like SCP-3449? Straight horror? I'd suggest reading some more Series IV skips, because it shows you just how to write a narrative into an article, and how to make them interesting.

I'd also suggest running your ideas through the Ideas and Brainstorming forums to make sure your ideas are solid and to nail down a way to write them. Good luck!

Thank you for the critique! I'll change the article up or come up with a new one now. As this was mainly inspired by series one scp files (like many other scp attempts also are), it came out as a little too series one-ish and lacking everything good with scp files that came after series one.