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I loved this poem. Written with thrilling phrasing such as "buryiing the story in red tape". A joy to read from the opening line telling a compelling story in poetic form. I repeat... I loved this poem!

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Tue, January 13th, 2009 7:56am

Thank you. As I mentioned to Irwin, I had to do some researching. I wanted to bring out a "Truth" to this particular style. I didn't feel fabricating would work for this.