The writing was great but i agree with a previous reviewer, Legolas feels safe not with Aragorn but with Glorfindel, he is the the first that treated him with respect after all these years, he is the one he seeks when he is afraid. There is a sequel but it's been almost a decade since the last update so i assume this story will remain unfinished.

I must admit, I was going to put it into my favorites because you write so wonderfully and your Aragorn and Legolas are such characters to be loved - but I felt that, while you ended the story with my one-true-pairing, it felt more of a Glorfindel/Legolas fic than a Aragorn/Legolas fic. It wasn't Aragorn who held Legolas through the nightmares, wasn't him who nursed him back to health. It is painful to read this because it didn't make me feel so much for my favorite pairing.

Somehow, your summary has become misleading. I was so excited because I wanted to read about a protective Aragorn doting on Legolas - as these are my favorite things - but sadly, it wasn't Aragorn who was hope to Legolas. Sure, he saved him, but he wasn't there in the healing process. I just want to ask 'Why?;

As much as you made them kiss, their love just simply wasn't believable, because you didn't build on it like you did for Glorfindel and Legolas. And I must admit I do feel disappointedly so for the couple.

That being said, I must commend you for such amazing writing, and will look into your other fics in the hope that the others would satisfy my thirst for Aragorn/Legolas that this fic has not.

This new feature of being able to sort stories out as to whether they're completed is great, because that's how I found this story. Very well done. I enjoyed it very much.

you lame emma chapter 1 . 5/9/2005

this story sucks, but anyway, anyone got any sick stories?

one of my favorites is a kiddie I know who went to a party and got chucked out for being a bit rowdy. before he left he went to the toilet shat in a bowl, then bunged it in the microwave, put it on for 10 minutes and left!