Been a good minute since i have reviewed a story but I think I should give you some well deserved praise ;) This story is great, beautifully written and wonderful character development! I wish this was a game, cause i would be playing it right now! Keep up the good work :D

Well, let me start by saying I really like the story. You have minor errors: sentence structure, commonly misused words, spelling, but that's okay. Knowing that I've played all of the Swordcraft games, I believe you should put more into your descriptions. Well, that's pretty much all you have to do, and finish the story of course.

P.S. I am a programmer. I was wanting to turn this story into a PC game. I'll would have to modify your story a bit, but I don't intend on changing to much. If you wish to discuss this further, please contact me via email at . Your story in my opinion is the best summon night fanfic here. It shows loads of potential, and so does "The Theft of Time". Although I believe that story is dead, please ask the writer to pick up on it if you personally know him/her. Of course that is highly unlikely...

I just found this story and it is so awesome! I can't believe its been a year since your last update, though...*sigh* well, i guess i will just have to hope you get the inspiration to start writing this again.