This was my first attempt at this type of writing. I posted it last semester but think some of the new people may enjoy it. I am writing #2 now, different main character. As always comments and constructive crits welcome. Enjoy.

His sensitive nose told him what he needed to know. His head lowered and she gasped, feeling his hot wet tongue slither over her crotch. Barik seemed to respond to her little cries of pleasure, and licked again and again, using his broad tongue to lap at her...

"I stepped into the room," he wrote, "and there she was, completely bare-assed on the floor on hands and knees, and the dog was fucking her. I had never seen such a thing before, though she had told me that she did it...