haha, I have the exact same type of lunch schedule at my school. I'm in c lunch. I really enjoy this story. I saw that you were going to be on vacation and I was like, ok, so it might be awhile before you update, then I looked at the year and I was like "oh". Please Please Please continue this! I can't have started reading this only to have it never continue! I'll even help you if you need it, I am more than willing, as long as it keeps going.

great story! I luv it, Raven actually isn't quite the loner anymore now that she has freinds...but wouln't it make it more interesting if they like all made newer friends and she was all by herself or sumthing..hehe and a great evil rises ! MUAHAHHA...no ;; sorry get carried away sumtimes, well i luv the story and hope u update...just can't wait to see what happens! HAPPY FOURTH OF JULY!

I know ALL about the separate lunch periods. Oy. Anyway, I like it, you're building. Good, good. Starfire's in the mix, interesting. I wonder about Terra? If she's shows up, great. If not, no matter. Other than the shortness of the chapter length, and more than that the lack of dialogue, it was fine. Enjoy your trip and look forward to the next one.

I like this, I think it has real potential. Best friends romantic relationship make for GREAT drama. I hope you establish that. Also I wish you do another chapter like this but them a little older. Not quite high school but getting there. Build up and establishing tone here is critical in a piece like this. Just some thoughts. I'd like this to shine. Look forward to the next one.

shorty chapter 1 . 6/29/2004

the cutest fic i ever read! i think you did a pretty good job..i cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter when they're in high school..keep up the great work and update soon, please?