I loved the way you showed how much Snape cared for Lily, as it was really sweet and showed how much he really did care and loved her. Especially the part when he broke his bones saving her from Avery and his gang.

I thought dorcas was a really interesting character, and I really liked her quirks, like how she noticed Snape I would have perhaps liked more of a reason as to why she was still with Edgar.

Overall I thought it was really good, sorry that this review is shorter than usual I'm on my phone where its really hard to type! Kiana :)

Author's Response: Hello!

I suppose I could have clarified her situation a bit more, but I didn't want to go too angsty with it. I guess the point of Dorcas was to show that she had the same kind of hopeless situation as Severus, but was only willing to point fingers at other people. It probably seemed to make sense that Severus could walk away from situation to her, since she didn't know what made him so obsessed as he was.