MATT· Scene 11 takes up some of scene 10 (talk to Jack, make sure this works with his scene)· Sc.5 too short· On your first Death scene, when Death says “Defying!!” this is when his arm should come out for the first time.· Talk to Haine about the hook-up with the TV (Death’s TV vs. ES’s)· Death dialogue scene too short

SIYEUNSq.2 sc.1 just a fraction too short (maybe just 1 frame!)Sq.2 sc. 14 too long (watch timing)We might need to shorten the chandelier scene, check the leica for the new timingI readjusted your ending on the Viagra scene, it’s all good, but ES needs to appear sooner so he reads betterWatch hookup with sq.3 sc.10 & 11 (Veronika’s scene) talk to each other!Watch hook-up with sq.3 sc. 9 (Kayla’s scene) to 10, talk to Kayla

JACK· Talk to Matt about his scene 10 (it takes up some of your scene 11 time)· Talk to Tracy about hook-up sq.3 sc5 to 6 (Tracy’s scene). Your scene is taking up some of Tracy’s time.

TRACYTalk to Jack about hook-up sq.3 sc5 (Jack’s scene) to 6. His scene is taking up some of your time.Scythe scene too shortLook to Igor’s “death monolog” scene (sq. 1), gestures should be visually similar

VIVIANSq.1 sc.36 too short, watch your timingSq.2 sc.34 way too short, watch your timingBecause Jack’s sq.1 sc. 35 shoots out of frame, maybe apply this to the very beginning of your sc. 36 (like he shoots into yours or has the after effects, squash and stretch)

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Labeling Reminder

1. design2.character3.environment4.storybeats : pretty much all concept art relating to beats are here.5.notes : notes from class6.assignments: if we do divide tasks, it'll be labeled as it is.7.name8.storyboard9.research10.reference : is is diff than research...includes inspirational work as well.