um...that altering of memory thing with Karin...very plausible...it would be a good idea...just wished kishimoto would elaborate...anyways...it would be cool to make a small sequel or something...i would certainly look forward to it

I aprove of you making this a two-shot. In fact I'll be waiting for it!

I just really want to know what sasuke and sakura were talking about XP

Akira Matakure chapter 1 . 8/20/2007

Yo! Um... I think this is more of a Sui/Ka than a Sasu/Saku... But other than that... it's really good. You are a good writer, but maybe plan in your head how the story's gonna end, and think more about the pairings. Other than that, Exellent story. Holy crap, I sounded like a teacher. o.o