Wow, what a good point you made right at the end there! Yeah, guilty until proven innocent alright! lol Yeesh, that's freaky! :( :( :0 lol Very nice poem, I liked it! Yeah, you really can't judge a book by its cover... if that's kinda what this is speaking about, lol! _

Hey I really like this because most of my friends say I'm not innocent but so far it hasn't been proven either lol. Plus your book you're reading. I was actually gonna read that but i got caught up in another book call Mortal Allies which I'm gonna hunt down to read again. LOL Bye,The Yaoi boy next door

Cool. It reminded me of a song - a bit jarring rhythm, syncopated, offbeat. The last lines were interesting, although I thought they were a tad cliche - maybe some clever wording could have kept them in line with the poem. But the previous stanzas were gold. The idea of guilty until proven innocent is intriguing in this poem - sometimes I wonder, if you're guilty, does that take into account your motives?

That really hit me. It really did. If someone least suspects someone of doing something, they will treat you as if you truly are guilty, even if you're more innocent than the most innocent child. But people can be so ignorant sometimes and they always think they're right.