The novel thing sounds interesting! But I think your fans (including me) would love it if you brought out this version first, we review it/give you insight, THEN you produce the finished, polished human copy!

Great ending to chapter 5. Hopefully you'll get the next chapter up by next summer.

gamemanj chapter 5 . 10/17/2013

Going well so far,I'm wondering if you'll either "quit" with what I call a stub ending("Really far later with Lazyinium magically transporting the reader into the future,it was christmas,the kitten was 10...") now,or if this will continue...I'm rather unsure of what will happen,but if your Happy Endings policy has anything to do with it,the following chapters will involve the real parents being found again.
Also,1000 ways to die in a 1 hour show leaves 36 seconds per way to is without advert breaks.

FFFF- MadManMatt, yayleo, AND LuxUmbra?! That is literally the three best VG Cats writers here on I can name off! Now I'm REALLY looking forward to the future chapters!
Pity yayleo had to leave though...
Keep it up!

It's been a long time since I've read anything... but this feels like it was a good place to start.

As I'm sure my colleagues will have pointed out, Scarlet is - well I don't even need to say it really.

In truth I was expecting the cause of the mess to be much more... implausible, but this was surprisingly well founded in reality.
I'm still curious to see how Aeris will react, and I feel like we're teetering just on the edge of where thing will begin to get truly exciting.

It was nice to actually get an explanation of the mess, rather than Leo sputtering nonsense that even we might not have believed to an infuriated Aeris.

This was good. I wouldn't call it your best chapter ever, but it was good. Fluffy. And it ended in a nice place for the next chapter to begin.