- I believe Batman's two way communicator piece is like, in his cowl or something right?

- Superman wasn't weary of a trap.

- Superman also doesn't back check on what happened after Batman confronts The Flash's killer.

- Death of Wonder Woman = New God?

It's way late (a year, damn), but I just saw this going through my old blogs (because it's 4 AM and I can't sleep.)

Yeah, you got me there. That's really all I can say. I was working with a partial knowledge of DC and just assumed the whole "Death is backing him up" would cover any suspension-of-belief issues. So if that wasn't satisfactory, my bad.

But on the bright side, it's on the internet for everyone to see. So it motivates me to do better in the future.

Really did capitalize on old Deadpool there for a second. Having the serious moments. I feel as though you should have cut it off when Deadpool hit him with the van though.

To have Deadpool just walk over, face to face, no masks with Deathstroke and put a gun inside his mouth, not letting him reply. Would really capitalisze on the grittier part of Deadpool..

(Still really late to reply, but f**k it. While I'm here, right?)

Thanks a bunch for reading. I'm glad to have someone else who wants to write comics think it's cool (aside from the dude who I got to edit this, ColonelRunAway.) And someone who appreciates serious Deadpool moments to boot.

That is a cool idea. I'm trying to write original stuff now, but if I did Deadpool again (fan-fic, obviously, not tooting my own horn here), I'd make him a bit more serious than here.

Really, thanks a lot for reading. It sucks that CV's PM system is broken as hell for me, but it's nice to see fresh comments I didn't expect.