First Sexual Encounter

The first time I ever had sex was with my mother, it happened on my 16th birthday. My father had been killed in a logging accident when I was very young. I never got to know my father. My mother had dated a few guys but every time they found out she had a child they would split. The ones that did stay around were only there a couple days then would leave. My mother never did get into a serious relationship.My mother is about 5’6″ tall. Her tits are about a 32DD, and she keeps her pussy trimmed all the time. She is a gorgeous brunette with long legs. Why no man ever got serious with her is beyond me. I would have given anything to be with her.With it just being me and mom around the house she would often run around naked, but she always insisted that I wear clothes of some sort. So I seeing a naked woman was nothing new to me. I had also taken showers with my mother until I was about 5 or 6, then she started making me taking baths by myself saying it wasn’t proper for a mother and son to bathe together.When I was 13 I started taking an interest in girls. I knew what they had, but I didn’t know what to with the girls. One day I got up the nerve to ask my mother about sex. She tried to explain about sex, but I could tell that it was embarrassing for her to talk about sex to me.My friends had told me all about sex, and even brought an adult magazine to school. We got it out and look at the pictures in it. Some of the pictures were of men fucking women. Some of them were of women giving guys blowjobs. There were pictures of a man sticking his dick in a woman’s ass.One night I was sitting in the front room watching TV when mom came and sat down across from me. She was wearing a short skirt and a top that fit tight around her tits. I could tell she wasn’t wearing a bra. She must have been horny because her nipples were hard and poking out of her shirt. She crossed her legs a couple of times, and when she did I could see her pussy when she did.I could feel myself starting to get a hard on. I got up and went into the bathroom and jacked off thinking of my dick sliding in and out of her wet pussy. When I came back into the living room I heard mom in the kitchen. It was early evening so I figured she was making dinner.I went into the kitchen and asked her what we were having for dinner. She said that we were have macaroni and cheese with pork chops and peas.Then she turned and asked me if I was ok. I said that I was fine and wanted to know why she asked. She said that I was in the bathroom for awhile and thought that I might have gotten sick. I lied and said that I was a little constipated. I couldn’t think of anything else to say. I didn’t want to tell her that I was in jacking off thinking of her. After that if I felt the urge to jack off I would wait until she went to bed then I would jcakjack off in my bedroom.This went on for three years. I had many jack off sessions thinking of her. About a week before I turned sixteen I noticed mom started acting different towards me. She started wearing low cut and tight shirts that showed a lot of cleavage, and shorts that showed the outline of her pussy. I couldn’t help starring at her when I thought she wasn’t looking.My birthday falls in the middle of the school year so when I got home from school on my sixteenth birthday which happens to be a Friday, I asked mom what we were going to do for the night.She said since it was my birthday that I could choose to do what ever I wanted, but that we needed to be home around nine because she had a special present for me. I suggested we take in a movie and then dinner at a restaurant. She said ok and looked at the time, then said we better get going if we are going watch the movie and have dinner and still make it back in time for her present. I put my bag in my room and changed into some jeans and a t-shirt. When I walked into the front room my jaw almost hit the floor. Mom was wearing a skin tight shirt that showed off her tits and cleavage and a skirt that was almost totoo short to call a skirt. I had my learners permit and mom asked me to drive us to the movie theatre.When we got to the theatre we went in and I couldn’t help but notice the stares that mom was getting from the clerks behind the counter when we got our refreshments. We went in and mom suggested we sit in the back row where it would be quiet. The movie started and about halfway through it a sex scene came on with a blonde woman with tits almost as big as moms. I couldn’t help but get a hard on. I had the popcorn sitting between my legs. When mom went to grab the popcorn she missed and put her hand on my hard cock. She moved her hand and then looked down and apologized, then grabbed some popcorn. She never let on that she had felt my hard on. I couldn’t get the picture of the naked blonde out of my mind needless to say my dick stayed hard.After the movie was over we walked out to the car and mom told me to go ahead and drive since I still had the keys to the car. She walked up and hugged me close and said that she love me. Her pussy was pushing up against my hard on. I figured she had to know that I had a boner from hell going on but she acted as though nothing was wrong.I opened the door for her then got in on the drivers side of the car. I started the car and got ready to put it in drive. Mom looked at me and said she had a restaurant she wanted to try out. I said ok and she told me how to get to the restaurant. When I pulled up out front of the restaurant she leaned over and gave me a peck on the cheek and said I was so sweet.We went in and found a table in the back where it was kind of dark. The waitress came over and took our orders and then left. Mom slid over next to me and put her hand on my thigh. I jumped at first at the unexpected touch. Mom asked me why I was so jumpy. I told her that I hadn’t expected her to put her hand on my thigh.Then she did something that just about blew my mind away. She slid her hand up my thigh until it was resting on my cock. Then she leaned over close and whispered in my ear, “Your cock is so hard it needs to be released.” Then before I could object she unzipped my pants and pulled it out. My dick is about eight inches long when it’s hard. She started to lightly stroke it when the waitress walked up to the table with our orders. I couldn’t put it back in or anything so I just leaned forward. We sat there and ate our dinner with my hard on sticking straight up. We got the waitress’ attention and she came over to see what we wanted. We told her we wanted a couple drinks. She cleared the table and then went and got our drinks. After she left the table mom’s hand slid back down to my cock and started stroking it again.After a few minutes I was about to blow my load all over the underside of the table. Mom must have known what was coming because she looked around real quick to see if anyone was watching, and then she leaned over and said “I’m going to suck on your cock until you cum in my mouth.” She took one last glance then vanished under the table. I felt her lips go around my cock and it slide into her mouth. She only bobbed her head a couple of times and I started cumming like crazy. It was all I could do to keep from groaning out loud. Somehow I stifled the groan.She crawled out from under the table and sat next to me again. I got my dick back in my pants and got them zipped. She leaned over and told me that she was going to wait to do that to me when we got home but when she felt my hard on in the theatre and then again when she gave me a hug she couldn’t wait. We paid the bill and left.On the way home mom sat next to me as I drove home. She started to caress my cock through my pants and had me hard again in no time. When we pulled into the driveway to the house she grabbed my hand and stuck it on her pussy. She wasn’t wearing any panties and her pussy was warm and wet.We went into the house. She grabbed me and took me to the
couch. I sat down and she stripped right the
re in front of me. Then she sat down and told me to strip. I got up and did as I was told. My dick was sticking straight out. She leaned forward and stuck my dick in her mouth and started sucking on it again. Then she pulled away and leaned back. She spread her legs and told me that she was going to teach me how to please a woman. I had seen a porno so I had the general idea how to eat a pussy but this was the first time I got to do it for real.I got on my knees and put my mouth on her pussy. Her juices were sweet. I licked it up and down and then I started flicking her clit with my tongue. She started moaning and in a few minutes she was cumming like crazy. After her orgasm subsided she looked down and said, “Looks like you don’t need any coaching.”I got up and sat down next to her, my cock was standing straight up. She got up and said she had to go get something. When she came back she had a blindfold in her hand. I asked what it was for and she said that she wanted to have me blind fold. That she was getting the rest of her present and she didn’t want me to see it yet.She put the blindfold on and then I heard her walk out of the room. I could hear muffled sounds in the other room but wasn’t sure what they were. When she came back in she asked if I could see anything. I told her no, and then she told me to lie down on the floor. I did as I was told and laid down on the floor. I felt her hand start caressing my cock. Then she started sucking on it. Then she stopped and I could feel her straddle me, and then she guided my cock to her warm pussy.She started riding my cock up and down. Then she reached down and pulled off the blindfold when I looked up I was staring at a blond haired pussy directly above my head. I looked down and mom was riding my cock like a cowboy riding a horse. The blond above me sat down and started grinding her pussy into my mouth. In no time both women were cumming. I groaned loud and started to shoot my load deep into her pussy.She crawled off and the other woman got between her legs and started sucking my cum out of her pussy. Then we all lay on the floor snuggled together. We fell asleep that way.I found out the next morning that the blonde was the woman next door that had just moved in a week before and that her name was Betty. We spent the next day in bed exploring and having sex all day. I learned quite a lot that weekend. Since then we have continued our threesome. Usually mom and I have sex every night, but Betty joins us on the weekends.This is my first attempt at a story I would welcome any comments on the story, and how I might improve on my next one.

Not bad for a first story. Tell me: is it a true story, or all fiction? Work on the grammar a little bit. Make sure your tenses are correct, and try not to be so redundant with some of your nouns. Watch the flow. You worded the story well in some places, and skimped in others. Using first person in a story repuires that you put in your thoughts, and report on other people’s actions and statements. you did this quite well, and a little polishing will make it great.

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