I've seen this story around, and I've read it several times. But now, I think it's time I left a proper review.

I like what you've done with this. It's a nice little scene because these two, and I wonder if he would be thinking about all this, even though he's going to marry her. I mean, he's still a man, and I bet he'd be wondering if he's not so different from the other men whistling.

I could just envision the part where Esmeralda steps up to him. Even though it wasn't part of it, I bet the onlookers would all be thinking, "lucky guy" or something like that.

I really liked this story. It's a nice little scene between these two.