I
was inspired to redo my local library's page when using it myself.
It took me lots of experimenting to figure out why my search
for "turk" didn't find the book called "The Turk"
in the first five hits. It was a little bit of a game figuring
out what the difference was between Keyword and Browse. The
site also showed a few classic flaws like fonts, alignment,
wording, and so on that make it look less polished than mainstream
pages. The live web address: http://spica.mclinc.org/polpac/html_client/
Here's what it looks like before my suggestions:

Highlight the main function, the Search to give people immediate
guidance.

Explained the functions. Perhaps the Main Search and Browse
could include phrases like "...computer-style search
like Yahoo," and "like an old-fashioned card catalog..."
What do you think?

Made the library names more alphabetical.

Explained that they are home pages (not databases), and
left-aligned them.

Reviewing another page, the Home Page

I also reviewed the introductory page for the same site, web
address: http://www.mclinc.org
I didn't create a mockup of the results, but you can see the
"Before" image
(in case the actual web page changes). Here are my suggestions:

Make the tagline meaningful: "Online Resources for
Montgomery County, Pennsylvania Libraries... the Only Connection
You Need!"

Eliminate "Today I want to: "

Eliminate "Check" in Check Bookmobile Services.

Eliminate "Visit" in Visit MCLINC Member Library
Web Sites.

Change "Learn more about MCLINC" to "About
MCLINC".

Move Employment Opportunities and E-Mail the Webmaster to
the main list of links.

Eliminate the small links at the bottom. They're a remnant
of the days when text-only links were needed as an alterative
to various image links that dominated some pages. This site
is predominantly text links so these are redundant.