Personally I'm a big fan of vampires, i find them intriguing so what ever you do with the story will b interesting to me.

I really liked this wording "she put the two slices of toast into the toaster and depressed the button" Depressed that is awesome so much better than pushing the button

Guest chapter 7 . 1/30/2006

Okay, a little bit of criticality before the gushing praise..

I dun' think she would give in that easily. I mean, even an open-minded person wouldn't write a letter like that to a complete stranger, no matter if they remembered them. That didn't quite work as fluidly as could have been hoped, you needed to elaborate on the relationship a wee bit further.

That out of the way, OMG! *huggles good writer* Very sweet so far, and lovely too.