### I'm always very toasty with my negative rated sleeping bags since the
temperature inside doesn't often stay at negative temperatures when there's
people in the tent. ###
EDIT: "negative" F or C? Please specify.
EDIT: there are people ["people" is plural]

### The floor doesn't flood, but can be a bit damp where the sleeping mats were when camping on snow or in heavy rain. ###
EDIT: Below you state that the tent has been waterproof. Please explain the issue here – collected water from snow brought in by people, seepage in the floor [if so, revise your conclusions], dripping from the walls, or what?

### Sometimes the guy lines proved to be a little short at times ###
EDIT: Another redundancy – delete "Sometimes" or "at times."

### when I leave base camp, so what's left is inadequate pegs that are meant for ground, not much help in 2 meters of snow. ###
EDIT: Add metric equivalent of "2 meters"

###- The fly can be a bit stiff to stretch/ put on (though this does give it a nice
tight slick line) ##
EDIT/Edit: Not sure I understand. "slack line"??

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