the DARK POET -contest-

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the DARK POET -contest-

A little tale about the real me
twisted all inside as can be
the visions of the end
is all i see
F.T.W. setting my self free
waking up with the thought
i survived.
"SURVIVED!" another dream
holding my head under water
no one can hear my screams
cursing each and everyone
for this demon has won
taking over my soul
ripping out all my sanity
reliving over and over
the day i took my own life
my own hell is more than an element of a dream
slicing my most deepest vain, with the dullest knife
a fear so dark lashing out a terrorized scream
reality, to sanity, losing my main brain
a deep dark fear lurking, red blood stain
creeping up a MOSH caught in the way
F.T.W. we are all to blame
inside I dread the day of my rebirth
shout my guts into space for I have faced
to slow down the beast with a potent power of radiation
a frame out demon skinning the philosophy you once new
an evil more than vile, a poison worst than sin
motivating his way in to my voyage of my on tormented life
a DEMON dust from Neptune possessing me its rings
never to think in my wildest observation
I would encounter my own depths of a zero pointless energy
giving to my by the lighted gravity of humane
restricted on the eyes, for the ones who do not wish to see
a trance faster than the speed of light
ending myself to a forever night
fighting with them who reject to see a demon so twisted
dropped from the cosmos of realistic
no one wanting to acknowledge the relativistic way
that time travel out*** and Demons travel in***
lost forever in this rotten being
making me shout out loud to he
who knows my name
dealing with the devils Darkest Poet
in a Dark Poets game
-contest-
just a dream soupppppers lol. : )

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quite nice the way you did this,,, made me think of a few movies and my poem Fireflies ;} And the dream I had last night about my daughter disappearing down a dark street. Thank you for making me one of your fav poets,xx

P.D., Nikko said to pass my stanzas to her first? Well I sent them off. I don't know why I had writer's block? Never had it before! I was getting worried, but I came through it the end....only took me a few minutes lol. My stanzas aren't as cool as yours, but I tried. So glad that I did them though~Chris

Pfffft@Comment about true identity. Win what round? I didn't Slam you? I didn't give any info at all my little Darkwing Duck. You can Slam me how you wish, it will always feel good to me no matter what. And as for being a crybaby, I have seen and survived too many true dark times around this planet to worry about some words. P.D, you can say what you want, I will always enjoy having you around. Chris.

Hey since I am here, I have a question for you. How do you stay in the top of the Community Builders Top Commenters? I just took a look, and you are way up there. That must really burn you out sometimes, making so many comments, no? Peace out P.Diddy.