I absolutely LOVED it! I really like the way you wrote about the baby, and your repitition of the world "little".

You're rhythm was really really good, except on a couple of lines:

a from that little blanket: i'm guessing the "a" is and. i think u should cut a/and out, and just have from that little blanket, so that the number of syllables in that line fits with the rest of the poem.

Other than that TEENIE TINY little thing, the poem is pretty much pe... (more »)