I enjoyed this! Brian's parting words were a nice touch. You don't know where he's going, but given how strongly he feels for his brother, I doubt he'll go too far away. The thought's part sinister and part sweet.

I like your use of the present tense. It adds a depth to the story and makes it flow all the better. Is it wrong that you sated my growing urge for this pairing and is it wrong that it has given my own "dark passenger of Dexter slash"?

Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2012

Aww... I can only wish something like this happened in the show... ahh well. Thank gods for book-version..
It's funny how from all the seasons I only miss Brian.. :/
The others were shit... -.- At least brian shows up in 6th(?) season again.. if only as Dexter's imaginary friend, but still.. Anyway, good work. :)