Saturday, July 25, 2009

UPDATE: I forgot this recipe is from an old Julia Child's cookbook! I'm going to film for my Julie & Julia post for Monday. Stay tuned!UPDATE TO THE UPDATE: I did film the peach tartlet, but I decided not to use it for theJulie & Julia post for Monday. Instead I decided to film my favorite Julia Child recipe, a delicious roasted chicken with watercress. Stay tuned!

IMHO, the previous intro was too casual, but was meant well in keeping with the general tone of your blog. The black shirt and freeze frame body language (hand gesturing down)was forming a bad first impression. The newer intro is better with your chef whites, but a little too manic in the delivery.

Manic? Too fast; too much movement, perhaps, but manic? Ouch! I see someone who's "high" on the subject of his blog. All is good, though, as these comments about his short clip introducing the site can really help him prepare for his next big step.