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[Explanation3]:Typographical error: The incorrect spelling has been corrected.

[Explanation4]:Language: Since this sentence is a general definition, it has been restructured for readability.

[Explanation5]:Language: The objective nature of the definition has been implemented by changing the voice of the sentence.

[Explanation6]:Style: Mathematical operators take spaces before and after. These have been added.

[Explanation7]:Attention to detail: The word has been capitalized to maintain consistency.

[Explanation8]:Attention to detail: A colon has been appropriately to use here.

[Explanation9]:Language: “Also” has been added to enhance sentence flow of ideas.

[Explanation10]:Language: The missing verb has been added.

[Explanation11]:Word Choice: A better word has been used here, thereby eliminating wordiness.

[Explanation12]:Language: This sentence has been edited to ensure that information is clear and readable. The word choice has been improved (takes considers) and a correct grammatical word (like such as) has been used. Redundancy has been removed (process).

[Explanation13]:Language: The missing phrase has been added here for flow and readability.

[Explanation14]:Style: Serial comma used (American English)

[Explanation15]:Language correctness: The sentence has been enhanced with appropriate word choices and transition.

[Explanation16]:Word Choice: A formal word has replaced the informal expression.

[Explanation17]:Attention to detail: Unnecessary hyphens have been deleted from this term.

[Explanation18]:Language: The phrase has been corrected for grammar (comprised of comprise) and “that” has been added for clarity and flow.

[Explanation19]:Typographical error and Language: The typographical error has been corrected and the word “pulley” been added for clarity.

[Explanation20]:Word Choice: An accurate, concise expression has been used here.

[Explanation21]:Language: The awkward sentences have been made readable and formal.