Sunday, October 14, 2007

A Moment

Below is a poem I'm still playing around with but thought I'd go ahead and post. Still not sure on the title-I'll let this one sit for a while before I decide to keep or change.I'm wondering if a poem (or any writing) ever feels completely finished...

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October is one of my favorite months, everything seems to renew itself. Much different then in the spring months. I like the simplicity of this poem, the way you wrote it seems to emulate the feelings that can give you freedom from thought.