Even though I credit Jim Krusoe for opening up this new draft/revision for me, there are other friends and mentors who have helped me see this particular project in a fresh light. To keep the video from getting too long, I didn’t mention any of these other people. I’m sorry about that. Here are some of the fabulous people (in alphabetic order, to avoid having to think of a less arbitrary order): Alistair McCartney, Cheryl Strayed, Ellen Urbani, Jason Sandefur, Joanna Rose, Kate Maruyama, Leonard Chang, Liz Prato, Merilee Karr, Sheri Blue, Stevan Allred, Tracy Burkholder.