What I can offer anybody looking for a review is an honest review, which might as well be harsh. I review pretty much anything except fan-fiction (Because I might lack related knowledge and that would affect the quality). When reviewing I focus more on the impression the story gives than the grammar, however, I do correct grammar and sentence build. So you might know better how I truly review, I'd like you to read at least one of my the most recent reviews.

I'm pretty much a critic, so if you can't stand honest criticism much, please don't ask - it might disgust you. If you're looking for an honest opinion and want to improve no matter the truth - I'm happy to help.

Best regards,~Kyousuke

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~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~-Formerly Shinda

I definitely need harsh and honest on this. That's a link to the story's page because it's easier to give one link than three and there's three chapters up at the moment, and if you could do all three I'd be supremely grateful, though if you don't have time, just one will be fine. ^_^

"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."

I would very much enjoy a review over my animal novel. The work is complete so whatever ch is fine, even just the first. If you'd prefer reviewing a short story instead my story The Charlie or The Yellow Sheets are among my better works I'm most interested in reviews from. Sheets is more storyline and Charlie is more dialogue and prose styled.

I'd be glad to return a favor to a work of your own, though I'm also honest as well

Hello ShinDa, . I think its time for some honest criticism. Will you please review my poem? Here is the link:viewtopic.php?t=88127 .

If you are a dreamer, come in, If you are a dreamer, a wisher, a liar, A hope-er, a pray-er, a magic bean buyer... If you're a pretender, come sit by my fire For we have some flax-golden tales to spin. Come in! Come in!- Shel Silverstein