hey this poem is good until the end you say “she is my best friend we will never let go and we will always link” hunny your trying to fit every think into that little line and you cannot always do that sometimes you can and it fits and sounds rite but hunny that don’t sound as well as the other but its good so hunny keep up the good work and keep trying!

Dude That was really bad I mean atleast ask someone in your familyor something so you can see that its decent atleats to post up on a website.You should find a new hobbie!! Who ever said you have a way with words?? Or a good mind for poetry?? If it was your mom I understand she doesn't want to hurt you but, ask for the truth before you post it up i'll give you a 2/10(for trying) Work Harder!! Much harder!! – Anonie Moose

look “vanessa” if you want to post a messagewrite your surname or something next to it causei don’t want people thinking i wrote that comment.btw you shouldnt give up on poetry just…….ask for help next time kk

I’ve 2 questions. First, are you a girl or a boy, And second what were you thinking about writing a poem like this. I mean seriously when i read this poem i thought all you trying to do is rhyme words together. Girl, boy, whatever you are.. give UP!!! you STINK!