In the part where the Author Jean responds that no one else has a problem with the mistreatment of the slug. THe part where she types: Why are still reading my work if it is “immature” and “whiny”? Just add 'you' in-btw are ands still. That's about all i have. Keep up the good work. Here's a piece of advice from writer to writer:"never give up if you still wanna try when others try to bring you down."