This was really good! I really like fics with Loki and pre-serum Steve, and they are rare. I like how you're characterizing Loki as well. Also, you write Steve beautifully, which I find for a lot of writers (myself included) is difficult. But you do it very well. I hope you continue this!

One who knows chapter 3 . 10/1/2013

wow wow wow, where did this story come from? i never fancy steve/Loki pairing. But this story will make me believe that these two can make a pair. Waiting for more

Appletea chapter 2 . 9/18/2013

! YES! Yes to everything please continue I'm excited to see what will happen