So, yeah. I'm Jason, I like to draw, you can see that in my deviantART account. I am working on a comic called Kroh. Please read it if you have the time! Or don't, if you don't want to. I will not hold it against you.

I think I have advice for the speech bubble in the first panel. The line from the person speaking should be directly connected to the leftmost speech bubble by that person. For a second I read it like a right-to-left comic.

I think your comic is funny, but I notice that you cut and paste a lot. It isn't that bad, but I think it would be much more interesting for the eye to follow if each panel were drawn individually, or most panels anyway.