This is beautiful. How I wish your ending would be the ending on the show! I love that this starts with their practically perfect happy ending and finishes with him looking at a picture of her before it all begins. Adding to favs!

That was really really clever. I enjoyed it heaps. I loved the little twist (for want of a better word) at the end.

It's a unique story and just long enough to keep the reader hanging on, but not too long. It's very sweet.

You've captured the Michael we see on screen very well. It felt like i was just reading a script. :) I love how you described the kiss scene in The Key. That's sort of when we started to see Michael change his was of thought and you captured it beautifully. :)