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The boy is wondering around the street, falling into someone’s dream

“What the hell?!” the boy says “Am I dreaming? Get me out of this mess!” the boy demands

He tries to pull out the dream but is failing hard. The dream is some women falling in love with a handsome man. The boy almost pukes in amazement, which is surprising to him. He observes the love couple and thinks of his girlfriend. “Ah, that’s how it was with me and my girlfriend.” He says. The dream ends, “Huh? Where am I?!?!” he says. “You’re in the hospital.” The nurse says. “How the hell did I get in the hospital?” he says calmly. “You were unconscious on the side of a street.” The nurse replies. He remembers how he got knocked out cold; it was that guy before dream. “Leave me alone.” He says calmly. “I’m afraid I can’t do that.” says the nurse. He reaches for her neck and strangles it until she can barely breathe. “I said, LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!” And throws her to the floor, he can’t believe what happen to his arm. It looks like he got some sort of power of some sort. “This ability could be useful.” He says whispering. He lies down, and finds himself in someone else’s dream again. “Which dream is it now?” he wonders. He sees a girl going through agony because of her heart has been broken. He isn’t observing he’s part of the dream somehow. He walks up to the girl and asks “What’s wrong?” she looks at him, but in pain “What do you want?”She says. “I want to help you.” He says. “Well, do you know how to fix a broken heart?” she replies. “With love. Do you want me to give you love?” he says. She giggles a bit then stops and looks at him, touches his skin. “Yes, what’s your name?” she says “My name? Is Sorlessio. What’s yours? ” He says. “Cool name. My name is Liz” she says. “Liz? Hm. That’s a cool name.” he replies. He touches her face, and gives her a smile. Then the dream fades away. He wonders if the nurse is the girl he saw in his dream. “Hey, I’m sorry I did what I did earlier. I must ask you something, are you Liz?” he says. “Liz? Yes. Is your name Sorlessio?” She replies. “Indeed it is. Are you the girl I was dreaming? Named Liz?” he says. “Yes I ‘am.” She replies. “You look beautiful in that nurse outfit.” He says. She giggles in the comment and says “You’re quite good looking yourself.” He smiles, and starts to get up and touches her hair. She likes it. A lot actually, “When can I get out of the hospital?” he says, quite curious and being a little clever. “By tomorrow.” She thinks he knows what he’s planning to do when he gets out of the hospital. He starts to sit back down and lie there, she sits right beside him, making him feel comfortable. “Don’t leave my side” he says. She doesn’t respond and he falls asleep. It’s almost morning and he’s still sleeping then he starts to shiver to death, the nurse tries to calm his nerves with her hand and he calms. He wakes up. Liz’s shift is almost over and he’s feeling a lot of pain all of a sudden and screams in agony “Aggggghhhhh!!!!” he’s screaming in agony for some odd reason, Liz tries to calm him but she is failing. He can’t control this pain at all and his hands start turning into like sharp, dinosaur-like claws. He goes insane! He can’t control his movement. He tears everything to shreds except Liz. He manages to get to somewhere where no one is around and his hands go back to normal. “What’s happening to me?” he says. “How the f*ck did I just do that?!” he says. He heads back home trying to be unseen. Liz follows him to his house and tries to catch up. She knocks on the door and he says “Who’s there?” he asks. “It’s me, Liz” she answers, wanting to discuss his act at the hospital. He lets her in and talks with her. “Why are you here Liz?” he asks her. “I followed you to your house.” She replies. “How did you turn your hands into razor sharp claws?” she asks. “I’ve no fucking idea.” He replies, trying to think how exactly he did it. “That was some crazy shit” she says. “You got that right.” he says. “How exactly did it start?”She asks him curiously. “Well, it started when I was in pain then my hands just turn into razor sharp claws and I couldn’t control myself at all during all this.” He’s still wondering how the f*ck he manages to do it in the first place. “I’ll try to control my ‘powers’ to the best to my ability. But I may have a solution to handle my powers.” He says. She’s pondering inside her brain, how he has a solution already to solve his little power problem. “Really? Then what is your solution then?” She asks ponderingly. “It only happened when I was mad. So, if I can find a way to control my anger from jetting up I might be able to hide my powers.” He replies. “So, if you can find a way to control yourself then your powers will rest?”She asks. “Yes.” He says. “So, after a few days or weeks we can go on a date okay. Deal?” he says. “Deal. We’ll go on a date once you update me when your powers are calming down okay?” she says, looking determine to go on their “date” in a few days after school. “See ya at school, Liz.” He says. He’s touching her again, but she loves that. “Yeah, see you in school. Later Sorlessio.” She says and tells him goodbye.

After a few days…

At school…

Liz has Math, Biology, PE, Chemistry and Study Hall. In the morning she sees Sorlessio with his schedule in hand. She can see he’s coming to sit with her during breakfast.

“Hey Liz.” He says, trying to act cool. “Hey Sorlessio. What’s your schedule?” she asks with a smile. “Well, I’ve Math, Biology, PE, Chemistry and Study Hall. What about you Liz?” His schedule matches Liz’s schedule which is a coincidence. “Wow! You’ve the same schedule as I do.” Liz says. “Really? Well isn’t that a coincidence eh?” Having no idea how, he just lets the coincidence slide and so does she. Later in study hall, Sorlessio starts to fall asleep. And he dreams of Liz and himself together. After school near the parking lot, Sorlessio is waiting near Liz’s car. “Hey, why are you standing near my car?” she asks. “To spend some time with you, and probably go on our first date. Don’t worry about my powers; they’ve calm down immensely since that day.” He replies, kisses her on the cheek. “Alrighty then. Get in, or we aren’t going on the date.” She says. Sorlessio is a little paralyzed, but nothing major and he gets in. “So, where shall we go Liz? Or what should we do?” says Sorlessio. Liz lays her eye on him the entire way to her house. She giggles as Sorlessio and she enter her house. “What’s so funny Liz?” he asks curiously. “It’s nothing. Say, why you didn’t look at me during the drive to my house?” she asks out of the blue. “Huh? That’s an odd question. It’s nothing to get worked over about Liz.” He replies calmly. He kisses her on the cheek. “You look beautiful today Liz.” Sorlessio says.

“Thank you, Sorlessio. And you look quite good yourself.” She giggles a little. “Do you have anything I can drink? Like some water?” Sorlessio asks with a shy look. “Sure, I got some water you can thirst on.” He waits for her to return while he fiddles with her stuff, just snoopin around her apartment. Then she returns with some water. “Here you go Sorlessio. Were you snoopin around my house?” she says with a questionable look on her face then a smile. “Thank you and yes I was snoopin. Does that bother you?” he says and looking a little puzzled in her question. “It doesn’t bother me. What were you snoopin for anyway?” she asks. “Look into my eyes, what do you see?” he asks her with a sly look. “I see an honest man, with the potential to protect me from danger.” She giggles with delight.”I do? Oh, yeah! My claws! I totally forgot I had those. But I only use them to protect you. Is that understood Liz? I will not be a show off! And could you keep this a secret?” he says. “You have my word. I won’t tell anyone about your secret about your claws and other powers you may have.” She says, looking inside his eyes with delight. She gives him a cool smile and starts giggling “Thank you Liz.” He says. He rests on her neck and she’s about to faint. “Whoa there Liz, I got you.” Sorlessio says. It’s getting a little late. “I guess I’ll see you tomorrow Liz.” He says and starts to head to her door but he’s interrupted by Liz. “Please stay.” She asks him to stay with her. “Huh? Oh wait a minute; you want a goodbye kiss before I go is that It. Remember, I’m always with you inside. When you are in danger I’ll be there by your side. Just call for me and I’ll be there.” he kisses her and heads for home. “See you at school!” but he’s already gone. Sorlessio heads home and finds his mother sleeping in her room and he sneaks inside his room and starts to dreams about Liz.

The following morning…At Sorlessio’s house

He continues to dream about Liz. But he fears some kind of monster inside of him, raging through him, haunting him. He finally wakes up from his dream, he wonders if these ‘powers’ can help protect Liz from danger. He breathes heavily and slowly as time passes by.

At school…PE class

Their teacher Mr. Gutzi lets the boys & girls have a little fun this time around.

Sorlessio searches for Liz, trying to find her but is interrupted by Melissa Walker. “Hey there Sorlessio, have I ever told you, you look handsome?” she says trying to keep her cool with him. “Oh! Hey Melissa, do you know where Liz might be?” he says wanting to see Liz super badly. Instead of answering him she tries to kiss him but he pushes her away from him. “Answer me Melissa. Where is Liz?” he demands. “Why are you so obsessed with that girl?” she asks with a glare of suspicious. He doesn’t answer her, just keeps moving along. “Why not spend some time with me instead?” she grabs him and forces him to kiss her. Liz is witnessing her boyfriend kissing Melissa. “Liz, this isn’t what it looks like.” He tries to persuade her to believe him. She fleas from PE and heads home, crying her heart out in her room. Sorlessio, he heads Liz’s house and explains what he was doing with Melissa. “Liz, open up. Please.” He shouts with embarrassment. “No! Go away you heart breaker!!” she shouts with all her might. “Why should I let you in anyway?!” she says. He heads inside her house and sleeps and gets into her dream and tries to express his feelings to her in her dream. In the dream, “Look at me! You save me from my monster inside of me! I cared for you, I never like Melissa! She forced me into kissing her. Please forgive me.” He says in her dream. “That’s why it looked like I was kissing her when I wasn’t even trying to hurt your feelings.” He says to her, hoping she’ll forgive him. “I forgive you. But I don’t want to see you kissing other girls right in front of me okay.” She says. He’s happy she forgives him for Melissa forcing him to kiss her. “Let’s make up in the real world.” They both wake up and Liz comes down from her room. “If another girl forces me to kiss them, I’ll just…” he can’t say the gore in front of her, it’s too much pain. “You must try your hardest to force them away from you, and not let me catch you kissing them okay?” She wants him to understand, if she sees him kissing in front of her. “Is this understood Sorlessio?” She says.

“It’s crystal clear Liz. I don’t want to go out with any other girl than you!” he looks at her, with a sly smile and hugs her. “That’s thoughtful of you, my lord.” Liz says with a big smile. “Now, can we still be boyfriend, girlfriend Liz?” He touches her chest in the slyest way possible. “You’re worried about our relationship aren’t you Sorlessio?” She replies with a sight of a smile. “Yes. I’m quite worry about our relationship.” He says. And he kisses her. “I’ll see you sometime Liz.” He says while heading to her door. “Yeah, see you later. My love.” She whispers.

After School…Near the parking lot

Liz is heading to her car and about to work her shift now, and does that stupid lecture stuff.

Sorlessio on the other hand has some “girl” problems. Every girl has been drooling all over him since that accident with Melissa. No matter which girl approaches him he denies them. The only one he loves is Liz. “Sorry girls, I’m not in love with none of you.” Says Sorlessio. “Then who???” the girls ask. “There is only one girl I’m in love with. And her name is Liz.” Sorlessio says, the girls are in shock to hear his words. “Liz? What’s so special about her??? What does she have that we don’t?” Still the girls are confused to no end. “She saved me from a nightmare. A nightmare you girls wouldn’t understand.” He says with a smile. “What you mean we couldn’t understand?” the girls ask cautiously

“I’ll demonstrate to you girls what I mean. Now I’ll get angry and I want you girls to just watch my hand.” Sorlessio MAKES them watch his little “act” I guess you could say. He demonstrates what he means. “Now, do you see why now?” he asks as he cools his anger. The girls for a moment don’t say a word then. “You’re…A monster!” one of the girls shriek with fear. “None can understand this ‘power’ I possess. Except Liz. Who she understands my power. Unlike you girls could.” The girls don’t back away from him for an unknown reason. “Well. This went unexpected.” The girls start touching him and kissing him. Sorlessio is feeling uncomfortable and thinks Liz is right around the corner. He pushes the girls away and starts to run to his car and get to Liz’s house and away from those girls. A moment later the girls start chasing after him. Sorlessio gets to Liz’s house and parks in the back.

Liz is almost done with her shift. And she’s heading home. She notices a familiar car in her backyard and thinks it’s her boyfriends. Sorlessio is hiding in her house in her room, while the other girls are following him to Liz’s house. Liz opens the door and shouts

“Sorlessio are you in here?” Liz finds Sorlessio in her room. “What you doing here Sorlessio?” she asks. “The reason I’m in your room is some other girls are chasing me and I flee here.” He answers with a little frown than turns into a smile. “Why are they chasing you?” Liz asks. “Because I showed them my power.” He says defeated. “What were you thinking?!” she says. “I thought they would leave and wouldn’t want to be with me. That’s what I thought. But they are even more attracted to me than before. Then they started to touch and kiss me, then I drove my car to here and hide in your room.” He says. “What? They were even more attracted to you than before???” Liz sounds a bit confuse now. “Yeah, it confuse me like hell. Well I’ve the entire freakin cheerleader squad chasing me do you have anywhere I can hide Liz?” She is still a little paralyzed. “Uh, you showed the entire cheerleader squad?!?!” Liz is shouting on top of her voice. “Sorry. I was being a little bit of a show off.” The cheerleader squad are at Liz’s door knocking like crazy. “That must be them right Sorlessio?” Liz asks. “Yep that’s them alright. I’ll go hide now. Can you lure them away for me please Liz?” He kisses her on the head. “Sure. I’ll try to get them away…Boyfriend” He’s already hiding in her room. Liz heads to the door before the cheerleader squad breaks it in half. “Hey guys, what’s going on?” Liz asks the cheerleaders. “By any chance is Sorlessio in here?” One of the cheerleaders ask. “I think you’re at the wrong house.” Liz replies. “But, his car his in your backyard.” Liz thinks you’re kidding me here? “That’s not his car. That’s one of my family members’ cars that looks a lot like Sorlessio’s car.” Liz tries to lie and hopes they buy it. “No, you’re lying!” says one of the cheerleaders. Liz thinks Dammit! “Oh, look he’s making an escape to the football field. If you girls hurry he might make out with one of you girls.” Then girls are gone in a flash. “Okay, their gone.” She tells him. “Thank you Liz. But, they are going to find me at school and be all over me.” Sorlessio says with a slight fear. “They won’t be with I’m with you.” Liz is smiling with x10 of delight. “Well, I guess you can do that for awhile. Until things start to calm down a bit with them.” He says smiling. They both agree on this and become more than just friends.

At school…

Sorlessio starts to feel immense pain. “Aggggghhhhh!!!” Some girls try to calm him down with them touching him. But they can’t calm him and neither can he control it. He screams more “AGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!” now his teeth are growing sharper and stronger. In fact his teeth are so strong they can break through anything. He roars in pain, he falls to the ground and is unconscious. The girls try to wake him up but he shows no signs of awake, they think he fainted and just lets him lie there. The girls leave him be, Liz comes along the corner and notices he’s on the ground and kisses him then he rises. “Sorlessio, what happened?” she asks with care. “Ugh. I don’t know. All I felt was a lot of pain then my teeth start growing and becoming immensely strong. As strong as the toughest metal known to mankind.” She helps him on his feet. “Another power?” She asks. “I think so. But I don’t think this one is as ‘dangerous’ as my claw power is.” He responds. He touches her hair making her feel like a rose.

Well what do you guys think?

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Subject: Re: Love Stories 20/2/2010, 14:07

It would be much better and funnier if you do a story about the ctr players. That is what we love to read