That was an excellent battle Cory, you wrote it perfectly! My apologies it took me so long to review, but these past few nights I have just went to bed and instantly slept haha xD anyway!

I'm glad that Valentina won on her first try, that's a great start for her! It was quite funny to see Adam being put through such discomfort hehe, but like I said, what I really liked was the battle - you always write fight scenes so well haha! I can't wait to read chapter six now!

I laughed way too much during this chapter hehe xD poor sewaddle at the end... I don't think a Pokemon has ever been captured due to being stunned by nudity before hehe, but there's a first time for everything I guess!

How smutty are things going to be though? I'm just curious, since it seems that Adam will be that guy who gets an erection just by seeing a woman near to him xD anyway, I enjoyed this chapter a lot hehe! Poor narcissa at the end though xD

Rosa-May seems interesting enough xD I'm glad she's so friendly though, and I'm glad that the people of Viridian City seem much more welcoming of Valentina hehe! Interesting nickname she came up with for her Spearow, how original it is of her haha xD great chapter though, I'm really looking forward to the gym battle now!

This was a good start so far hehe! Quite interesting how oblivious Valentina seemed to the feelings of everyone around her, but at least their reactions were realistic xD still, it's just a naked body, it's not like she's going around killing people or something...

Tracey's reaction just seemed really funny as well though hehe, but it was good to see that Professor Oak wasn't too bothered by it. I felt sorry for the Pokemon she didn't pick though, but I guess we can't all be lucky!

I look forward to seeing what she has in mind regarding the gym leaders though. That should be quite interesting as well, I must say!