Discussion (5) ¬

I realize that I forgot the scratches on her face once again in panel 3…well, I did and I didn’t. It’s actually a second version of that panel. I wasn’t happy with the figure in the first version (which had the scratches), so I redrew it.
Here’s a link to the first version for those who are interested:http://oddlyaroused.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/Underdressed_panel3.jpg

When a beautiful, underdressed girl accosts you and confiscates your eyepatch, about the only thing you can say is “That really becomes you.” 😉 😛

Thanks for the large original panel #3 for comparison; I’d missed that. The update really shows off those impressive tracts of … land. 😉

Panel #2 stands out more for me. Nice action going on there. I like her dynamic pose and the way her hair frames her face. I don’t know how much thought you’ve put into it yet, but you’re going to have to pay close attention to exactly how & where Trudy’s face is oriented to accommodate her mono-vision. I just spent several days relying on my left eye where I am naturally right-eye dominant. Weird experience having to turn my head and body much more than I am used to. If you haven’t tried it, I suggest you might spend a day or two with an eye patch to incorporate the experience into your poses.

That Orc looks suspiciously like Generally Fozzy from LoB. It also made me think of Jenny Breeden over at http://thedevilspanties.com/ … she apparently dresses up as an Orc at various RenFairs and pulls a few stops out. Not that I’ve seen actual video of it, but she has done a number of comics on it over the years and posted convincing commentary such that I believe it as gospel.