I loved this one! Not surprising since I love all of your stories haha. But I love these characters especially and they mix so well together. Reading it was so entertaining and i hope you write a sequel. I wouldn't mind reading about these characters some more!

I am so excited to see where this story is going!
And I am so jealous of your amazing writing style! I seem to be a little rusty, just getting back into the game after a seven year break.
Can't wait for your next update!

So, you said this story wasn't getting as much love as it should and I am here to fix that.

First of all, I love the way this is written. There's something believable about Dani's sassiness and bitchiness in every snide comment or remark she makes-and she has a whole lot of personality, which is awesome. I now more fully understand what you meant when you said that you write the way your characters think, as there is definitely few, if any, parallels between the sound of this and, say, Clean Up on Aisle 7. I like the cursing because, as you well know, I'm a goddamn potty mouth myself. And, of course, there are elements in this that I find fucking hilarious (i.e., I now feel the need to acquire a mug that is so brilliantly labeled "FUCKER," among other things).

I love boylove as much as the next person, but I am quite interested to see where this goes. Even if not for the story, I'd still want to continue reading it because I like the prose. I'll put this on alert just as I did GAMBIT, because I think I might just find a similar level of fondness for it.

So, I know that there will be irregular updates, but once the story gets going, expect me to bug and nag and prod and poke you about it.