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Review:

adluvshp says:Hello! Here for your requested review from the forums. Apologies for the delay.

I quite liked this one-shot. It was interesting how you followed Rose and Scorpius' relationship all through first to seventh year. The ending also somewhat made sense the way Scorpius had behaved with her throughout. I also liked how this was written in an almost matter-of-fact narrative and yet managed to convey Rose's thoughts and feelings so well.

I liked your descriptions as they helped me connect with Rose. I think you characterised her very well. I also liked your characterisation of Scorpius. It is rare that we see him as the not-so-good guy so it was refreshing to read your portrayal of him. The plot over all was good and this made for a good read, especially considering it was written so quickly for the challenge.

The only CC I have for you is to give this a thorough re-read. There are a few typos and grammar errors here and there which can easily be fixed. Apart from that, this was good and I enjoyed it =)