Please don't take offense from my previous haikus. In no way am I intending to offend anyone. I just find it a bit weird that you guys are relieving your boredom by writing haikus. But again, everyone has their own interests.

Here's my shot at a haiku:

The wind breeze lightly,
and the moon shines on my face,
as people die and cry.

Please don't take offense from my previous haikus. In no way am I intending to offend anyone. I just find it a bit weird that you guys are relieving your boredom by writing haikus. But again, everyone has their own interests.

Here's my shot at a haiku:

The wind breeze lightly,
and the moon shines on my face,
as people die and cry.

Well, it's interest and enthusiasm for Haiku, not so much on just relieving boredom. Just like any other creative writings. =) I think you can comprehend since you have enthusiasm on fanfic writing. And, there's a slight challenge for Haiku, that is the rule of 575, which makes it interesting.

Nice shot of Haiku and welcome.

What can I say? I'm still standing! No weapon against me shall prosper! I am more than a conqueror!!!

I don't care to sit by the window on an airplane. If I can't control it, why look?

Lun pal, actually... my early attempts were all screwed up. When I finally figured out how it works...I cheated by editing them lmao (my honesty) And there, you see my perfect posts (after multiple times of screw-ups)

Wow, Bella, BFF? Now, the wabbit is curious. But, your rights are expressly reserved. Excellent poem, young lady. Beautifully worded and very catchy for the heart

The curious Wabbit
In this total restless mood
Not for bad, but good.

(Must be the overdose of caffeine)

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What can I say? I'm still standing! No weapon against me shall prosper! I am more than a conqueror!!!

I don't care to sit by the window on an airplane. If I can't control it, why look?

I'm counting the day
As the clock is ticking by
Loneliness is a torturous way to live
A torturous way to live is waiting in loneliness
Trying to make sense of everything
When everything doesn't make sense

Maybe one day it'll be forgotten
Feeling so numb is not so bad after all

But I want to savor sweet life
Even if it may turn sour
If my years are meant for this
I'll be here waiting
Counting the day as the clock is ticking by
Welcoming you into my real existence

Goodbye is the hardest word to say
If only there are other ways
Maybe on a different day
When doubts set aside and my heart may be swayed
To accept your love and stay
But to everyone's dismayed
It’s time to walk away
Heartless as it is, you won't hear the news on your birthday
The inevitable can wait, until the 1st of May