Hey, nice story! I'm not an obsessive Naruto fan, but I do enjoy the sasuke/sakura pairing. It was so cute! Not much criticism from me, just reviewed because as an author myself, I'm very aware that we authors LIVE off of reviews. So, here you go! 5 stars!

Wow. Not many begginers have the skill you have. I'm duely impressed. This story was very original and not full of insane amouts of mush like most fanfics are. I personally can't find anything I should critic but someone else might. Congradulations.