Rated 4 / 5 stars2011-06-14 22:04:21

People need to remember...

These sections are for reviews, not complaints about the author moving away from their usual style, or whatever. Leave that for the forums.

That being said, this was a very good flash. This is the first of your works I've seen and can tell you're very talented. The voices were refreshing and it was entertaining to hear the accents. The humour was a bonus as well, and I really liked the facial expressions =3

Rated 4 / 5 stars2011-06-13 18:38:14

Awe-Forget it...lol

It's great to see you make another entry in the Awesome series of animations. I love your work and hope you do even more hilarious shorts like this. I just wish I could have appreciated this more, but I haven't played the game. Still, I found it funny. Great job, Arin!

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2011-06-16 17:46:08

Good Animation

Your style and animation skills are great, and this definitely made me chuckle. However, there was a lot of room for insightful jokes there though that you could have used to illustrate why you don't like L.A. Noire.

The sketchbook thing is certainly nice and I doubt many others would've thought to parody Cole's amazing on-the-spot sketching abilities. But there's a lot you could have done to make a good full-length flash. Such as the uncanny valley we get with the facial animations coupled with the robotic bodily movements, the ridiculous plot-twists that take away from the game's realism, and the incontinuity you see when you end a case one way but the story goes with its default plotline regardless of how you solved the previous case.

There's plenty more, a lot of room for humor to illustrate the ways in which this AMAZING REVOLUTIONARY GAME isn't so amazing. I was really hoping to see your talent in animation and insight into video gaming shine with your interpretation of L.A. Noire.

Though I suppose a short flash with a poop joke is certainly one way to say you don't care for a game.