Heya! This actually isn't the place to ask for reviews. That's Will Review for Food. However, even in that forum general requests like this aren't allowed. You have to ask only a few people to review at a time.

If you want to turn this into a thread where you get critique in the idea, plot, ect, let me know and I'll unlock this. But, for now, this is locked.

Formerly Rosey Unicorn

A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.