Easylol @ the storyboard00:23:07 (2) - Shorten by a white tick, then add a beat two white ticks after00:25:74 (2) - ^00:28:41 (2) - Doesn't sound good, extend it so each repeat is 2 white ticks long00:31:07 (2) - ^01:25:73 (1) - Could you make this not overlap 2? I don't really care, but some people do w/e ignore this lol

Normal00:59:45 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - *suggestion* h-flip this? Right now you have 3 combos in a row that start at almost the exact same spot01:25:73 (1) - same as easy (i'll stop mentioning it now) what

Hard00:24:411 (and similar areas) Can you add some notes in these parts? (this goes for Insane as well)01:08:62 (6) - Technically if you follow the lyrics this should start on the next white tick

Insane00:18:41 (1,1,1,1) - Meh, I prefer this as one combo01:08:28 (8) - Extend to white tick

With all the fixes here, I'm S'ing everything except Insane, which I'm not even nearly skilled enough to pass.

Oddly enough, looking at it through edit, the only map I have a problem with is insane.

Insane:06, 1-6 - Right off the bat, I was 100'ing through these sliders because with the overlap, I was expecting to hit the next slider immediately after the first one, like on a 1/16 after the slider ended, but looking at the timing, it's an 1/8th step. It fits, but here's something I would suggest.

You have the sliders staggered like this:\/\etc.

Maybe you could try:\_ \__ \ while showing the numbers so they could recognize the (slight) pause between those sliders. It may just be me.

:23, 4-8 and all of it's similarly placed brethren: The spacing on this, to me, is flat out mean. It may be that you want it that way, but damn that killed me fast.

N0mad wrote:

With all the fixes here, I'm S'ing everything except Insane, which I'm not even nearly skilled enough to pass.

Oddly enough, looking at it through edit, the only map I have a problem with is insane.

Insane:06, 1-6 - Right off the bat, I was 100'ing through these sliders because with the overlap, I was expecting to hit the next slider immediately after the first one, like on a 1/16 after the slider ended, but looking at the timing, it's an 1/8th step. It fits, but here's something I would suggest. :S They're 1/2 steps, and they follow along with the music. I see no problem with them, but thanks! =)

You have the sliders staggered like this:\/\etc.

Maybe you could try:\_ \__ \ while showing the numbers so they could recognize the (slight) pause between those sliders. It may just be me. It's you. <3

:23, 4-8 and all of it's similarly placed brethren: The spacing on this, to me, is flat out mean. It may be that you want it that way, but damn that killed me fast. This is why it's insane. XD Also, a lot of maps are waaay harder, so I was nice and put the streams in a straight and close-together line.

Either way, I would play this map as is if it were ranked. Star'd. Thank you very much

Hard00:00:91 (1) - It doesn't start in the same spot as Easy and Normal01:16:11 (2) - Add a Clap.01:16:78 (4) - Add a Clap.01:18:76 (2) - Add a Clap.01:19:43 (4) - Add a Clap.01:21:08 (1) - Add a Calp and the end of the slider.01:21:75 (2) - Same as ^.You get the point....

Insane00:18:41 (1,1,1,1) - make this part of the combo beforehand.Same Clap suggestions in those spots.

Metroid wrote:

Hard00:00:91 (1) - It doesn't start in the same spot as Easy and Normal Bleh, I'll just keep it on what I had before. (Starting on a blue tick because that's when the music starts and I don't want to have to make another offset point unless it's needed.)01:16:11 (2) - Add a Clap. (And ones below) Added.01:16:78 (4) - Add a Clap.01:18:76 (2) - Add a Clap.01:19:43 (4) - Add a Clap.01:21:08 (1) - Add a Clap and the end of the slider.01:21:75 (2) - Same as ^.You get the point....

Insane00:18:41 (1,1,1,1) - make this part of the combo beforehand. ARGH FINE.Same Clap suggestions in those spots. Kay. Not gonna add more than suggested because I'll clap spam >_>

Derekku Chan, i'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.

Overall:

The timing is fine.I personally think that the offset is 770 .. Try it (on the Hard diff)

Easy:

00:28:44 (2) - Change the slider, so that the end and beginning are vertically even.00:30:44 (1) - Align horizontal with end of (2) (previous combo)00:31:10 (2) - Change the slider, so that the end and beginning are horizontally even.00:35:77 (5) - 2 (lvl 3 grid) right and 1 (lvl 3 grid) down.

Normal:

00:19:77 (1) - Align horizontal with (2) (previous combo). (align the rest of the next combos if you change this)00:29:10 (4) - Align vertical with end of slider (3) (same combo)01:06:78 (1) - Align vertical with end of slider (2) (previous combo). (align the rest of the next combos if you change this)

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want toOrange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing itRed = major issues. you need to change these