drifting on a melody

Below is the poem entitled drifting on a melody which was written by poet
Joseph
May. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

drifting on a melody

The music got into his soul
As he slid across the dance floor
and the DJ he did implore
For a chance to do that soulful stroll once more
Then he drifted on a soulful melody
To a place above the clouds
Like a rhythmic traveler in time
To a musical refrain so fine
He lingered there awhile
Floating above cloud nine
To a syncopated beat he quickly descended
As he plunged into the depths of the sea
To a beautiful watery world
in an oyster shell, he found a pearl
With a melody all of its own
Then he ascended with this soulful tune
And landed on the dance floor soon
Round and round he twirled his girl
Before he presented her with the pearl
For Craig's Pearl contest
3- 7- 2013

An excellent write my dear friend, Joseph May! I love it and I have enjoyed reading it this evening! Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest! Thank you so much for your congratulatory comments as well! love/hugs, Leonora