Wow, is all I can say - I just found this fic, and I'm completely mesmerized. Your Abby is flawless, as are the rest of the characters, the plot is intriguing, the tension between Gibbs and Abby is great - what a fabulous story. Now, I'm off to ignore all the things I should be doing so I can read the rest!

So when I read finished stories I tend to not review til the end but I absolutely had to here. I love the phoof thing, thats what makes an NCIS episode. Well and a good plot, but you get my point. Great job with the characterization.

At long last - a Gabby fic that is believable, well written and thoroughly enjoyable to read. [I was beginning to give up hope!] Your characterization was extremely good as was the story itself. Well done and thank you for proving that there is talent in the Gabby fandom :) x

Good story, I especially like the fact that there was actually a full crime/investigation story... The one chapter bout Abby and Gibbs was short though... ;) but perfectly fitting with the whole story...

Ashley chapter 11 . 11/13/2008

This story was amazing. It should be an episode [except for, y'know...the unsuitable for tv. stuff lol]. It had me worried and happy in all the right spots. You are a phenomenal writer!

Wow. That was an amazing story. And believe it or not, the phoofs actually made it more believable to me. They made it seem like a real episode. I quite enjoyed this though and didn't find any glaring errors to report to you. I hope to see more from you eventually! Thanks for the great read!

Oh my god. This is the best Gibbs/Abby fiction I have ever read! You captured the characters beautifully and the intimacy between Abby and Gibbs was excellently crafted. Thanks for posting such great work!