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The Deal is Done (A fanfic)

Got board decided to write a little fanfiction. I did post this on fanfic.net too so if आप see it there, just know it wasn't stolen from me nor did I steal it from someone else. This fanfic takes place sometime after Regina, Emma, and the others arrive in Neverland. It starts out after they managed to locate Peter Pan.

“Do आप want him back that badly? So badly enough that you’d be willing to do anything for to get him back?” Peter asked motioning to very displeased looking Henry. “Yes. I’ll do anything आप ask exchange for my son’s सुरक्षित return.” Regina nodded. “Anything at all?” Peter smirked. “Yes.” Regina stared the boy straight in the eyes. “Anything.” “Deliver the boy back to his real mother.” Peter ordered the लॉस्ट Boys, rendering a scowl from Regina at the use of ‘real’. He turned to the woman. “As for आप my dear…” ******************************************************** “Go on get outta here.” One of the लॉस्ट Boys कहा in a hush as he gave Henry a shove. With a final glance back—earning him an “I कहा go”—Henry made his way out of the underbrush. “Mom.” Henry cried out and flung himself into Emma’s arms. “Henry…kid, how did आप get here?” Emma asked. “Regina. She made some sort of deal with Peter.” Henry huffed “Well that wasn’t a good idea.” Mr. सोना murmured from some feet away. “What’s that supposed to mean, Gold?” Emma questioned. “Could mean a great many things.” The imp answered before returning to his novel. “Well we can’t just leave her with him. She did save Henry.” Mary Margret pointed out. “We came here for Henry, not her.” Mr. सोना remarked. “And we owe Regina nothing.” David added. “But she’s my mom.” Henry protested. There was a moment of silence. “We’ll find her Henry, just like we did the last time.” Emma put a hand on his shoulder. “We can break off into groups.” Mary Margret suggested. “I’ll go with Charming and Emma…” “I’m not going anywhere with the crocodile” Hook stated matter-of-factly. “And who do आप propose will watch the Jolly Roger?” Mary Margret remained silent for a moment before responding “Charming and Mr. सोना will partner up and आप may go with Emma. I’ll watch Henry and the Jolly Roger while आप are away.” Reluctantly Hook agreed to this plan and with much hesitation he and Emma set off into the jungle. “Come on Henry, I’ll दिखाना आप around the Jolly Roger.” Mary Margret offered. “But I wanted to go with Emma.” Henry pouted. “We already लॉस्ट आप once, we’re not going to do it again.” Mary Margret declared. With a sigh Henry took a सीट on shore. “Aren’t आप going to come aboard?” Mary Margret asked. “Maybe later.” Henry rested his head on his knees. He remained this way for several hours, waiting for Mary Margret to remove her watchful eyes from him. But the fact that he was sitting in one place only seemed to make Mary Margret और watchful of him. “Can we at least go for a walk?” Henry asked finally growing board. “A short one.” Mary Margret compromised. ****************************************************** It was along the way घर that Mary Margret and Henry and run into Charming and Gold—and eventually Hook and Emma. The six walked back to the ship, discussing their findings; nothing at all. Not even a sign of Regina. It was already dark when they arrived back at the Jolly Roger. No sooner had they walked into the ship had Hook practically screamed “WHO DREW ALL OVER MY SHIP!?” Emma looked up to see about ten childish doodles colored all over the walls. And a brief glance to the left revealed the culprit; a little girl—no older than six—staring at Hook with big brown eyes, blue crayon still in hand (and still pressed to the दीवार at that). “Who are आप and how did आप get on my ship?” Hook bellowed. “I’m captain Regina Mills and I found it, and no one was in it, so it’s mine!” Regina declared with a childish grin.

That's pretty good, I liked the idea of Regina returning to a child, it's funny at the same time sad for poor Regina.
And I actually have been searching for a good OUAT fan fiction to read, because I have nothing to do these days and I'm so bored, so I ran straight away to fanfiction.net and I was like "Thank Goodness !" when I saw that you've already written 16 chapters

It's actually about Regina, and a girl that I've created who is Regina and Daniel's daughter, I named her Wilma (The same name that Regina picked for herself in the episode "The Evil Queen") because it's a name that Daniel loved
And I have some ideas like Cora had taken Wilma from Regina when she was a baby, she takes her to Wonderland, and somehow Cora then sends Wilma to our world .. and Wilma grows up and starts to look for her mother .. and she meets August and finds out about Storybrooke and I also have the idea that Wilma has a necklace that Regina had put around her neck when she was born and enchanted it that no one could take it from Wilma's neck, and that's how Regina recognizes her daughter when she comes to her in Storybrooke .... and I dunno, I still haven't gathered all my thoughts :P

That's cute. If you get around to typing it let me know. Perhaps you could start at her birth or at Cora sending her to our world (and then do that __ years later thing) or start at the ___ years later point.