somecrazyguy09 00:01 - 00:26I really like this one. It's well-structured and captures the Hammet spirit quite nicely.The sound is a muffled and unclear at times perhaps. But all in all, a nice little solo

Siggum 00:27 - 00:52The first half is good! But after that little pause halfway in it sounds like your unsure of what to play next.Maybe a little practice on bending would do good. They sound a tiny bit out of synch and tune at times.

Tjchep 01:18 - 01:43I like it! It's got a good structure, and your vibrato is great!But i'm not so sure about the sound. Sometimes these "clunking" noises are louder than your notes, which takes away some of the coolness of the solo.I suspect it's got more to do with your preset/sound than your playing though.

UncleSkillet 01:44 - 02:09This was really cool Sounded very Hammetish.There's one note i didnt agree with though, the note right before the key goes back E. Sounded a bit strange to me There's some noise here and there though, but nothing major. Good stuff

leedbreak 02:09 - 02:34Some great ideas in this solo! And i like the structure.There is some timing problems though, and the fast picked notes sound a bit cluttered together.Some precision and timing practices could help with that.Maybe less echo on your sound would be good too, it added to the cluttered sound.

OorganisedConfusion 02:35 - 03:00Good ideas to be found here aswell. I like the double-guitar effect Your solos would be greatly enhanced by some more work on timing and vibrato.

USAMAN 03:01 - 03:26Nice Wah-ing I like the sound of this. You tried hard to get Hammet-style solo going on.There's a few notes i would like to have heard better timed, but all in all.. good stuff

bladzerok 03:26 - 03:51You got good ideas and you made a good layed out solo But your playing sounds a little stiff.Adding some vibrato and working on playing more freely could really spice your playing up a bit.

Enucleation 03:52 - 04:17Good and fast solo! I like the double-guitars that come in on the 2nd half.It does sound a little bit messy and uncontrolled at times though, and there's some background noise.But by all means, keep it up! If you had nailed your solo ideas here perfectly, it would have sounded killer!Just keep practicing precision and timing

Oh, and another thing: You should try to get higher bitrates on your recordings. Your take was 64kbits, which wont sound very good recompressed to mp3 when i export the final mixdown. 128kbit should be minimum.And the volume level started of low to high, which made it a bit tricky to get into the mix. The ending clips.

coffeeman 04:18 - 04:42I like it! Nice construction The section that starts at the keychange is good, but it sounds a bit messy. Some timing and hammeron/pulloffs practice would be good to fix that.

audiopaal 05:08 - 05:33I like your melodic-approach, and i really like those little pinches you put in there But you keep yourself in a safe zone by only sticking to 8th notes. Try to experiment a bit more.I know you can do alot more with a solo!

Myself 05:34 - 06:00I like the first half, but the last section sounds a bit unprecise and sloppy.I need to work on that!

I know I was "safing" it, but I'm still learning the way of Hammet I practice a little soloing every now and then so it should be better in the future, but thanks for the nice words Glad you liked the pinhes, I do too

Everyone did a fantastic job. Trond, thanks for putting this together and you comments.

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"Think of a guitar solo as a paragraph. You need a clear beginning, a middle, and an end. Look at musical phrases like sentences, and make sure you break them up using punctuation—or space. You pause naturally when conversing, right? If you don't, you'll bore the listener. The same thing will happen with your audience if your solo is one dimensional. You'll wear them out and lose their attention." —Tom Principato

But i hope no one took any of the comments the wrong way.. There was tons of positive things about each take, but i thought it would be better to keep it short and precise

Cheers for my comments Trond. I do need to work on a lot of things and I know it. The timing problem I should have fixed now. For all the collabs up to now I didn't use a metronome as I didn't know how to get the metronome to sound through the toneport as you plug the speakers into the toneport but I have figured it out now and will record all future collabs with a metronome. I really want to get quicker Well quicker AND smoother. Maybe I should get smoother at this tempo before moving up tempo?

Great collab anyway and great job everyone and Nemanja that is a big compliment it means you throw everything into your singing. You haven't a little whiny voice you have a really powerful voice.