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Wednesday, July 15, 2015

Grave Beginnings Review

Here's a review I did awhile back. The author was looking for feedback on his cover, and I liked it and his blurb so much I immediately went out and bought it. You should head out to Amazon and read a few more of the reviews for this book. You'll see all kinds to give you an idea of some fairly good and creative reviews.

Meet Vincent Graves. Who is he? He’s not 100% sure himself. All he
knows is he died under “strange and mysterious circumstances” awhile
back. Now, his soul is bounced back into newly deceased bodies whose
previous owners also died under “strange and mysterious circumstances.”
He learned real quick that meant the same as “supernatural.” He has
bounced in and out of so many people, he’s not even sure who he was
anymore, however, he at least gets to retain some of the memories and
skills of the people he’s inhabited.

His job is to figure out what killed the person whose body he is now
occupying and put an end to it. To aid him in this, he keeps a journal
of each thing he encounters. Since he can’t take it with him when he
switches bodies, he hands it off to his caretaker. At the beginning of
every job, he enters the nearest church, grabs his journal and receives a
snazzy countdown tattoo. He has yet to fail in his job, but there’s
always a first time for everything.

This go-around, Vincent ends up in the body of Norman Smith, who was
once the curator of the American Museum of Natural History. As he goes
around trying to figure out what killed Norman, he has a run in with the
FBI and meets Special Agent Camilla Ortiz. She turns out to be a rather
interesting woman.

Honestly, I don’t want to give anything away. Virdi has a fun style
of writing and the entire book was enjoyable from beginning to end. The
idea is a great one and he obviously had fun writing Vincent Graves. It
has a definite feel of Jim Butcher, reminiscent of the Dresden Files. I
will admit I enjoyed this more than the Dresden Files books. Okay, that
might be blasphemy to some, but hey! A girl has the right to her
opinion.
There might have been a few sneaky bits tucked in from a few TV shows,
but I can’t prove that. I found the sense of humor that ran through the
entire book great.

Virdi uses some harsh language here and there, but considering what
Vincent goes through? It’s understandable. He also has a thing for
ellipses (…) and periodically using periods in odd places to emphasize
something. For example, “Stop. Moving. Right. Now.” That kind of thing.
So if that drives you insane, you’ve been warned. There are a few
editing issues here and there, but those can be fixed over time.
Personally? I can’t wait for the next book to come out.