Fantastic Xarina.. Indeed the depth of Gopi's emotions will one day come out.. If pushed to the right extent, it will be anger.. And I hope Ahem really supports her like he did in your OS.. I am glad.. She needs that support

BTW, loved Gopi's tantrum.. About time.. Can you make her give a nice well aimed reply to Rashi if possible. I really want to after all the smirks

Thank you Harini. I had written a part 2, didn't like the flow of it so deleted and started again. Please bear with me.

Originally posted by Vidishaa

Loved it...I like her tantrum..wish Rashi had entered while she was throwing things. I wanted her to be hit by a perfume bottle

Thank you Vidisha

Originally posted by -neela-

That was too good Xarina

I love this bold Gopi Ahemji, I think you've found your match

Thank you Neela.

Originally posted by suk19

this was fab plse dont leave it this another couple of chapters are called for well done

Aww. Thanks Suks. Will try.

Originally posted by Churri

perfect...I really want to Gopi to break, I mean she needs to let everything out and not keep everything inside.

Thank you Churri.

Originally posted by rsk16

amazing update.

loved it 2 bits.

Thank you.

Originally posted by navyab

Loved it Xarina...Gopi's tantrum & Ahem bearing it ...so far she bore Ahem's tantrum & now its his turn !!!

Thank you Navya. Me thinks I have cut the throwing things too soon but I could not see anything else to throw. His files! Can you imagine if Gopi threw his wonderful blue file, scattering all the papers within? He would be on his knees!

Originally posted by sbp1971

Well this is definitely a different take on the track, brilliant idea Xarina, now if only Gopi would do this on screen, the TRPs will sky rocket for sure. Stupid CVs only want to make her cry and Ahem expressionless making us guess as to what his real thoughts are.

Loved the OS. Thanks for the PM.

Thank you Shilpa.

Originally posted by vibz88

It was so much fun:-) btw the link in the pm opens a new topic :p

Ummm. I thought I was being clever. Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by aris22l

Wow . Could we see the day after too? I want to know what she does to Rashi and how is Ahemji next day? I know I am greedy.

Thank you Aris. Am trying for part 2.

Originally posted by Dhabu89

You have no idea how much I want to see this on screen. It is about time Gopi learned how to defend herself and to stand up to her sister...The way she came at Ahem was much deserving and the way she told Rashi to get lost was just perfect...I hope if and when we get to see this, we get the same ending that you gave us...

Xarina, that was one fantabulous OS and well worth the wait...I hope this is what you were talking about...Thank you

Thank you Rupal. I so want Gopi to lose it in MM as well. Maybe should take some time off and lecture her in how she should be. I have a very good badminton arm. Thwack!!

Originally posted by doc4ever

Loved the OS! CVs should take note of this!

Thank you Doc.

Originally posted by A2ZV

I was typing from my mobile earlier on, so could not write a lot. Loved your OS very very very much. Keep it up.

Thank you Varshu. Seeing some one like Gopi first hand I saw the damage that keeping things to yourself can do. She needs to vent big time.

Originally posted by angelirebelli

Fab OS Xarina.. It would be fab to see this happening onscreen.. Well Done..

Thank you Angel.

Originally posted by taniks

Oh wow that deserves a standong applause , incredible work xarina , loved the tantrum that was too good . Pls continue this piece I want rashie to be dealt with as well . I adore that fact that Gopi acted like an ordinary woman and not a sacrificial lamb as always. Can somebody send this to those blasted cvs if they want record breaking trps this will get it for them not a weepy Gopi . Can't wait for ur next part

Thank you Taniks. No longer the sacrificial lamb.

Originally posted by Scarlet28

Well done Xarina...wonderfully fantastic OS...

Thank you Scarlet

Originally posted by abbay

nice os xarina!!!!!!

Thank you abbay

Originally posted by Hetp

Wow...Xarina..indeed its an awesome OS...loved it alot

Thank you Hetal

Originally posted by snsaufan

Fabulous...fantastic..superb...splendid!!

Gopi indeed needs to give Ahem some thrashing :)))

Loved it

Thank you snsaufan

Originally posted by dhruti

if i would have been gopiii, i would for sure thrown rotten tomatoes on ahemjiii

Thank you dhruti. Trust me. I wanted Gopi to tip a pot of curry over him but thought that was too drastic and Gopi being much shorter than Ahem would not have been able to reach anyway.

Originally posted by Vinder90

wonderful, ... just hoped Gopi could keep the tantrum on full speed for another at least 10 chapters, i cant have enough of an angry Gopi, really want to see and read more of that

but foran OS< this was extremely wonderful and natural

Thank you Vinder.

Originally posted by Arnisha

res there are no words to say this is awesome fab os great on xarina...

Thank you Arnisha.

Originally posted by amalaziz

Amazing!!!! Loved it

Thank you.

Originally posted by tamzin43

Pyari zee'''' patani ku yeh kahani mere dil me lagaye hai [[ dont know why this story has touched my heart ]]]... i read lots of os ff and other stuff but this is the first one which i read over and over again ...the way you wrote was like wow...i like the way gopi reacted was wow... i wish the cvs to read this and implement this into there story wow wow wow shabash me bahut kush ho keep it up

Aww. Tamzin. Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by gohem_fan1

that was a great OS

Thank you.

Originally posted by sks21

brilliant os xarina ...

Thank you.

Originally posted by kamjal

That was fab Xarina and hope we will see her this vexed at Ahem

Thank you Kamjal

Originally posted by sandyuk

Loved the OS Xarina! Ahem deserved all that Gopi threw at him! Please continue, I want to see how Gopi deals with Rashi now

Thank you Sandy. Will give it a go.

Originally posted by llSerenityll

Perfect OS with all the perfect emotions behind the words. Just loved Gopi's tantrum to bits. Done to Perfection.

Thank you serenity. Got used to seeing your new user name. Typing it is, is another matter.

Originally posted by tangam

Hey Xarina,

Finally got to read it and it was as usual...wonderful

Thank you Tangs

Originally posted by svtsns

Loved gopis anger and that on ahem and would love to see it in sns. It will be great to read the next part.

Thank you.

Originally posted by tina_1234

awesome os..wish to see dis in show sum day

Thank you Tina.

Originally posted by swasthi

Superb OS Xarina.

I read it on the tube while going to work this morning.

Bold and angry Gopi is just what is needed at this time. Ahem was excellect with his restraint techniques.

I look forward to seeing a day like this on the show when Rashi is talked to in this manner.

Thank you Swasthi

Originally posted by NazmaJ

Finally got round to reading this!!!!!

Loved it!! Loved it!! Absolutely loved it!!!!

Gopi's anger was amazing and Ahem subduing his wife and then consoling her, waiting for her to calm down was just absolutely gorgeous!! I really did enjoy Gopi getting angry!! Still waters run deep!!!

Thank you Nazma. Yeah, I liked the way that Ahem subdued Gopi. Now I am looking for a man to subdue me in the same way as well.

Originally posted by Dhabu89

Xarina...waiting for an update...Please

Aww. Rupal. I deleted part two because it was not going well. Will post soon.

Originally posted by famzii05

Fantastic Xarina!! i loved it!! i loved gopis tantrum! and the way she said to rashi 'Get lost' fab as always!

Thank you Fahima. "Get lost" is one of my favourite phrases for certain persons.

Originally posted by Joicej

Do I see pigs flying??? Gopi mad?? lol that was a fun read.

I feel empowered! I don't know what came over me after reading this. A sudden confidence.

I loved the "Get Lost" bit. Loved Kokila. Loved how Ahem calmed her down.. So chhweet!!

Aww. Joicej thank you very much. It did me good to put it down on paper. Sort of like gave me a release as well.

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