You had me crying at Tony's eulogy. this was an excellent story and having Gibbs die had me in tears. And again that eulogy, when Tony spoke of Gibbs being like a father to him was heartbreaking. and then saying he didn't know how the team would go on but would go on with Gibbs spirit...Bravo, to one heck of a story! Sue

-It took me a while to get that Gibbs had been shot. It could have been a little bit clearer.

-A funeral for an Los Angeles Police Officer brings over a thousand, so a funeral of someone with Gibbs stature and accomplishment would likely be at least that. Just thought you should know. It's a common misconception. :)

-Was the redheaded woman important? Was she the second person who died?

Aside from those couple things though, it was pretty good. Keep up the good work!