I was charmed by your lips sounds just a little odd. What about
The way your lips would fascinate me, each and every time

Click to expand...

I knew there was something wrong about it.thanks. the thing is that I'd like to put the object (the lips) in a second verse.
the way I was charmed each and every time by
your lips that ...........................................

that's the structure.

so we can do something like
the way i would have been fascinated each and every time by
the lips ........................