Megandible (Mega + Mandible)Stag Beetle PokémonType: Bug/DarkAbility: Hyper Cutter/Mold BreakerEvolves From: Pinsir (Level up during night while holding Pincer Maximizer)Evolves Into: NoneDex Entry (thanks to *tormentile ): Megandible are widely known as one of the most ferocious Pokémon. It will wait on the sides of roads at night, and ambush prey, crushing their bones and shredding their flesh with its multiple pincers as it draws the struggling victim slowly into its gaping maw.

i like the idea of this fanmon but i also got to criticize the dex entry seeing as it is a fan pokemon it shouldnt have such a gruesome entry since pokemon is ment to be kid friendly but still very good.

Um no theirs disturbing ones but nothing like crushing your bones and shredding your flesh, while intentionally waiting, sure theirs Pokédex entries that say like Taillow prey upon Wurmple because that's like animals food chain and it says PREYS upon not mangling you ripping your flesh and drinking your blood, and even then that's a HUMAN your talking about, it basically goes to the side of the road to INTENTIONALY murder people. That sir/Madame is the difference between disturbing and scaring to gruesome and horrifying. I now bid you adieu and wish you the best of luck in life, arrivederci Carbadonia.

Omg I have seen this a bunch of times on your dex, my mate just said ooo I really like that one and I looked closer at the fact it's next to evos on the dex, check it's deviation here and the hell it's actually a Pinsir evo, this is an absolutely brilliant and unique way to do it bravo man

I think you request a critique on this one, it would be great! Also i have to tell my opinion, but please don't take it as a bad thing. Okay, sa i've seen in your other works, you could have done this one better, because i think it doesn't fit a pinsir evo, not all because of the design, but in my mind there is something off; maybe you should keep the same concept but draw a little different, as it is too extravagant(in my opinion), you could make it a bipedal, by making those back legs longer and make it look like pinsir a bit more, because i dind't relate it to pinsir the first time i saw.

Anyway, i'm doing the same as ~luckybaka, just showing my opinion, not trying to start an argument. Keep up with the good work!

i hope you don't mind a little constructive criticism. while this is an awesome looking fakemon, i'm finding it hard to see it as an evolution to Pinsir. for Pinsir, a bipedal pokemon, to evolve into a quadrupedal pokemon just doesn't fit the pattern of pokemon evolving. most of the time, it's the other way around. maybe if the design for Megandible were simplified, it could be seen as a pre-evo for pinsir. but the other thing that seems a little off is the color scheme used. while Pinsir has 2 main colors, Megandible here has 6. usually, when a pokemon evolves, the number of colors used doesn't change much from one form to the next. the colors might change, but it's still close to the same number. Scyther, for example, has 3 colors and Scizor, while being totally different in color, has 4. it's still not as big a leap as your 2 to 6. if it were up to me, i would drop the tan and red (and maybe the light brown) and try to work with the remaining colors.

that said, please do not get upset with my advise. i only mean to try to help and you can take or leave my words as is. i'm not trying to start an arguement, just giving my two cents.

I'm actually really glad you posted this comment, cause criticism can help a person grow as an artist in more than one way. I understand your arguments and i think that you elaborated every single one of them. Thank you