wow You've done AN INCREDIBLE JOB! You're an awesome writer believe me! I'd read Arabesque, boy how much I loved it and wanted more from you. I came across no novels but then I came across this, I was merely fascinated by the title cos I'm a huge Evanescence fan but while reading it and the song playing in my mind, it just seemed incredible.

What's amazing about this is that Ron, in the 7th book, really does have some serious issues with those feelings of being second best and there they finally come to light - but here, you address them before then. Now, I don't think Ron would ever ever every betray the trio, but this is still a great piece. Good job!

I have never felt more sorry for Ron. He's my favourite character and although I can hardly see him working for the Dark Side, I think you did a great job with this one-shot, CelticKisses. It touched my heart. Keep writing great stuff! :)

i definitely had to read this when i saw the title because "Everybody's Fool" is one of the best songs ever. this was an amazingly fantastical story xD i absolutely loved it. it's definitely one of my top 5 favorite stories. (:

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!! I really appreciate your support!!!

I cannot find the words to describe the emotions this story brings forth. I can only say that I love the song you chose, I get this story 100% and now I need a tissue. Good work, going onto my favourites list.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much my darling! I am so glad to hear you were moved by this!

wow. have u seriously ever considered writing a real book, or something, with the articulation and passion and thought-evoking arousal of the senses that just sort of seems to flow across my screen (and my mind!)???. you should...lol, i would read read it. seriously. omg make your own characters and write a random short story and publish it and instead of your name put CelticKisses and it would be great. i love your work and i love your style and i cheer for your talent; there is no better way to hone it than what you are doing. lol. 10/10!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, my dear! It is true; I am in fact working on an original piece of fiction and once it is complete and I find a publisher (which I am determined to do) I will be announcing the name it is published under and it will mention CelticKisses so all my readers know its me and where it came from and how wonderful this site is ^_-

=[ so sad! that was really really good! when Ron was walking down to the forest and he was talking about there being nothing left for him I thought he was going to kill himself! I was like "don't do it!" so I was shocked when he joined the Death Eaters
loved this soo much but it was really sad