We are going to break with the ultra realism for a moment, an have the pets have an UFO encounter in the strange dense fog. While the others are going to go back to playing video games that they were playing the night before.

This is probably horrible, but all I can imagine now is Blood (with his bad luck) in that movie Fire In The Sky, with this plot X/

Also, this goes to TensaZangetsu as well. Slow down a little so Keeshah doesn't get left behind

Kee is waiting for Blood to post!

An also QuartzOrren, let the others in the group respond before you post. one large quality post is better than a doz. short rapid fire posts.

Also where are you, an which group are you trying to join? One post your coming up to the group surrounded by the strange lights. Next post your running up to Dimitri's house, which is nowhere near the park.Then next post your back with the aliens.Then you jump into the middle of the alien group without ever mentioning the strange goings on.

Is the character a pet that has gone feral? If he has, why would he just run up to normal pets??

Appearance: Kyle looks like your average Husky. His back, sides, and most of his tail are black with a gray undercoat that gives him a charcoal-like appearance. This color extends over the top of his head and ends at the top his snout, where the color shifts abruptly to pure white for the rest of his face. His underside, legs, and underside of tail are white. His eyes are ice blue.

Personality: Kyle is generally laid back, but can be hot-headed if he is incredibly annoyed or if he sees something going on that he doesn't think should be.

He is a bit of an introvert, and can seem withdrawn or anti-social to those that do not know him. He often enjoys playing video games or working with computers, but can sometimes be found taking a walk on a quiet path or in the middle of a wooded area completely isolated from technology.

Kyle is a very independent dog and would rather spend hours trying to figure something out for himself than ask someone for help.

Skills: Kyle's owner is a freelance programmer, and has taught him much about how computers think and work as well as how to get them to do what he wants.

If I recall correctly Dmitri's house isn't near the pet park.so as tempting as it is I'll have to pass.

I wouldn't be too sure of that, just how far are they from the park? Blood has a cry loud enough to make ears ring, surely someone would have heard him. Or is he really that unlucky?

Good pointwhat say you fearless leader?

Well, if they aren't doing anything keeping them that preoccupied, then maybe they heard some blood-curdling screaming coming from outside, followed by some distant distress calls upon leaving to investigate.

Hey, what fun is alien abduction if there aren't individuals to see the aftermath and furiously debate about it?

edit.. Waiting for a response from Quartz on if he understands how RV works.. An also does anyone else want to venture into the fog an get pet napped before we move on??

Okay, now I'm tempted to revise my post a bit so that Carlito would be able to hear Blood. I want to be involved! Oh, and I'm somewhat of a visuals person, so I'm just wondering if there was a map, or a layout of the neighborhood, just for reference. I recall that I saw something of the sort in the past, but I'm not so certain. ....Could've been from another Pet-Friendly neighborhood... I'm not sure. x3x;;

ALRIGHT! I'm reaaally prone to critisism[Did I spell that right?],so I get it. I'm not sure what is where,so SORRY. Yes the red fur thing was expression.

"Criticism"

That's fine, but just make sure details like that are clear to be purely for expression and aren't literal. I know that's pretty much just asking for you to 'type better' but it can really save some later confusion.

QuartzOrren wrote:

Terrelius was running on building sides,following saucers.

“GOD DANGIT!” he yelled as he got the lasso. Surprisingly, he chanelled rage into power,taking a piece of metal from his pocket,and reflecting the lasso into the ship.It blew up.

I've already PMed you concerning this post, but I just realized something else. "taking a piece of metal from his pocket" Pockets? On a dog wearing only a collar? Where? Is he wearing pants or something else he's carrying stuff in, or is it just a really big bulky collar with extra space like the one my character has?

How is he running on the sides of buildings like spiderman? How is he channeling Rage into power?

Did you not see my post about, there are No super-powers, PSI powers, or magical powers allowed in RV?

Lets see how i can express RV works an it's limitations better. Take the Real Life town that you live in, an replace the towns cats an dogs with normal average run of the mill, housepets an you have RV! altho it is set in northern CA, near Reno.Ultra realistic setting.

Not to mention, the whole point of this Rp subplot is that, we all WANT to be captured an abused by the aliens!!

You really just need to pay a more attention to details and be more descriptive when you post, on top of simply following the rules, settings, and genera of the Rpg.

You’re going to have to clarify ‘ability’. If by that you mean some unique skill (that fits in the RP’s realm of reality), then it’s not likely to extend beyond traits such as those your stats are made up of. Once again, something like being able to channel rage into power would not count here.

I'm probably not “wanted”here or mean't to be here either,but I'll try to show Terrelius' ability in another more realistic way.

Criticism does not mean you're not wanted. If we provide constructive criticism, like Keeshah and D-Singer have done, then it means we're trying to help you so the experience is more enjoyable for everyone. It means we want you, so we're going to help you get better.

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