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Author Comments

This is my second line ultimatum, and it was really fun to make. I took a lot of the comments I received from the first one, and attempted to implement them as best I could in this one. That includes trying to help it make sense, though it ended up not making much sense at all. Well, one can try!

I hope you like it, and if you could please recommend this for the experimental section, that would be great! THANK YOU!

Reviews

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2009-06-18 18:17:21

Alright

I was expecting some joke flash like maybe just a single frame or two of something happening, but I'm glad to say it was at least better than I thought it would be. While obviously it didn't take that long to make, at least everything moved pretty fluidly.

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2009-06-18 18:15:54

not terrible, i guess...

...but definitely not as good as your first one.
i thought i remembered your first one so i went and watched it and it`s a lot better than this one. LONGER, for one thing.

i liked some parts, like the first fast spiraling, when the music swelled. and the climbing black square-ish things on the right. you have talent, for sure...you just need to practice frame by frame more, and spend more time on your next one, so it`s longer.

Rated 2 / 5 stars2009-06-18 18:02:52

This makes sense?

It's a nifty idea, really, but it made no sense. Whatsoever. I mean.. The shapes you made were new, but they didn't require any sort of animation skill or time. Everything probably took like a few seconds to make. The music and the joke at the end were great, but without them it would've failed.

Ya, I think maybe I didn't really want it to make sense, and have a short of rushed view, because this is supposed to show life, and life is frantic, doesn't always make sense, and is brutally short. Thanks for the comments!