That was sweet, though there were some continuity errors that I think you're aware of (Susan being alive). Keep writing!

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converseuniverse chapter 1 . 4/3/2010

This was fantastic! Highly enjoyable! I don't mean to be rude or anything, but the character is spelled with an H SaraH Jane Smith. Sorry! just a peeve of mine, being a fellow Sarah, I notice these things.