Friday, October 7, 2011

Alicia Group Compo

I work as a taxi driver. It was a busy day for me. That day, I was driving a fashionably couple to a birthday party that was held at a long and beautiful terrace house. After they have paid the taxi fare, they alighted and left, unconsciously leaving behind a nicely wrapped box.
The honest taxi driver, which is me, decided to return the nicely wrapped parcel that just got out from the back seat. As fast as a F1 racer, I quickly drove back and got out from my seat. Then, I quickly drove back and got out from my seat. Then, I rang the couple's door bell. Meow! I was shocked to know that someone would want a doorbell like that! As I was still thinking about it, the couple heard the sound of the bell ringing and opened the brown wooden door. They felt surprised to see me holding on to their parcel. So, they asked me why is it with me. And I answered "You left the parcel in the taxi." and they took the parcel back.
The couple opened the parcel and saw glittering gold necklaces, ring and more accessories and precious jewelers. Since they were glad that I didn't steal parcel, they gave me a reward of ten million bucks. Even through I said no, they still put the money in my shirt pocket and shut the doors. Bang! So, I had no choice but to accept the money. Yahoo! I spent the money wisely on a mercedes benz car and a new bungalow with shimmering new furniture. I'm so proud of myself. BUT......now I'm bankrupt.
Written By:
Shayn, Alicia, Jesslynn & Xavier

your story is very creative to have a doorbell that meows and the taxi driver accepting the money to spend on a mercedes benz & new bungalow with shimmering furniture. I dont think any other group was as creative as yours!

Dear Alicia, even though your compo is good, there is a mistake in the sentence when the taxi driver bought things with the money the couple gave him. You don't need to put the word 'wisely' in because it don make sense.