helloi think its sth new and i interested in reading it really its fantastic and i won't praise the poem or the poetess who wrote the poem koz we all know the poetess and her ability to write great poems and we know that she has imagination full of images and fantasies. here i wanna suggest changing some words and making some changes to make the poem seem perfect: line 4: dressed instead of dressline 6: how instead of wholine 7 :seem instead of look to remove ambiguity....look after= treatline 9 :sit instead of set i think its stronger than setline 10: omit looking to and start with : watching every .......second but she still wait......line 12 : ......but she still sit and wait.....line17- among instead of between19- how is lovely to say how20- how is........

now i complete my comment and suggestion and hope u admire my changes but initially and finally all the matter is up to uthnx 4 ur patience c u and good luck

Many thanx to ur comment coz u like my odd much and you are right about the odde snice it talks about me and my feelings towards situation in that time. but time can cure cure such feelings and let memorries about that