I would suggest that you not compare Chinese 'communism' to Soviet communism. They are two entirely different things. I've spent a lot of time in Russia and know very well that every Russian person I've met (which numbers in the hundreds) hated the Soviet era. To this day, they see it as the darkest period of their county's history. The fact is, the Russians never allowed economic capitalism into their system. It was doomed and destined to fail. Fortunately, China had one man who saved it from total economic collapse and turned it into massive economic prosperity. That great man was Deng. Without his opening up and reforms in 1976, China would have gone down the same path.

Your points are valid points regarding the West. However, they aren't strong points for judging an entire system of government in comparing it with another. As someone noted, it seems that a middle school student could present far more compelling points for not liking Western democracy. You have a great attention getting title, but you fall far short in proving or even arguing you thesis.