sorry if the colors are too bright ;_;this pic has has a lot of anatomy mistakes, thanks for everyone who helped me fix most of them during the livestream i can still see more @_@ but idk how to fix themso critiques are always welcome~

This is cute! I love their expressions, and the way that Yellow reaches out toward Ratty. Ratty's actually really adorable here. Good job!

Actually, I like the bright colors. I like the happy feel they give to the picture. You also did great work with your shading! And I love their hair, especially Yellow's ponytail and how shiny it is. I also like how Red is a little scratched up, because it reminds me of the scene this idea comes from

The background looks a little blank in comparison to the rest of the picture, but that's not a problem, just a preference.

I think Yellow's hands look a little weird, but no big deal. Her hand gestures are still really cute, and the whole picture has a wonderful effect!