Dx you left me hanging on decisions and war in you "Lion's Pride" story. I have to say, I love how you approached this story and I find that a lot of it is very plausible. I practically did that dramatic "no" when I can to the last updated chapter. I hope you choose to continue this story at some point so I can see where your imagination decided to take this story.

OMG! your back - am so happy. I just love your story. Max is pregnant and she still wants to fight even in her condition. I feel bad for Rosie, she must feel sad about the whole situation and angry for Max's reaction of not caring. I hope you update soon. You rock. -

yeah, talk about stupid... so here I am again, realizing that there's even more for me to read. but I don't mind discovering that sort of stupidity on my behalf. lol

again without the quotation marks and stuff, but I liked this chapter and how everyone stood up against Max-though I kinda doubt she'd really behave like that, like, that "bundle of tissues" comment? hm, can't see that, really, but I'll go with it for the sake of the story. also, it was a good foil to Rosie's and Alec's experiences in that department and their reactions.

good to see you back. :)(yeah, talk about personal stuff keeping you from writing a story-I so know where you're coming from there...)

hm, was it that botched up your update, leaving it without any apostrophes'n quotation marks? it made reading this a bit difficult, but I still enjoyed this chapter. I liked the Max-Logan bit and how Rosie and Alec were debating about confronting the two. nice chapter and I'm glad you're already working on the next one :)

Wow the last two update were amazing I wish that they were longer becasue then I could read more about what is going to happen. But I cant wait for your next update and I hope that it will be really son because I cant wait to find out what happens. I haope that max will stay and not fight and that rosie and alec beat the $#!* out of white some how using what ever method that they want.

I lov ethis story and I hope that you will update soon because I cant wait to read more about it. Please let me know when you update next please.

Dreamer chapter 22 . 3/22/2009

hi just dropping by hope you update soon I really love your story -

Laney Tate chapter 22 . 3/19/2009

Hope you update soon!

Zoe-eoZ chapter 22 . 3/15/2009

I really like it that for once the focus is actually on Otto instead of White, I'm sure I've never read anything like that before. real smart move! and I like it. it allows for a whole new level of development, totally different than the usual "the transgenics versus White" dealio-I mean the things Otto-as opposed to White-could do. beccause everyone already KNOWS White is a Familiar and evil and whatever the hell else. but Otto... oh, the potential. also glad that things are finally starting to look up for Rose and Alec. and, sheesh, does that girl kick a*s! she's awesome. and just in case I shouldn't have said so before: really great job on writing a story with a thick plot AND still managing to develop the relationships between people along the way. most people either manage one, or the other. not so you. sweet :D