Holy crap! I did not see the burnt down school plot twist coming. That's awesome, I love it.

You're right, this is really fast-paced. However, despite your warning at the end of the first chapter, so far I don't think this is nearly as rushed as your other story I read. You're not skipping necessary details and the whole thing feels more fleshed out.

Anyway, her dad really seems to love her even though he's overprotective.

Lo0ol u have me hooked. I seriously like the idea of this story.. but can u do that? Go to two different schools for different classes? Cheer's personality sounds interesting. hehe ok on to chapter two!

ps. i think u said on ur profile u review ppl who review u, i'll tell u now dont bother with me. i have one chapter up, which isnt the real start of the story. lol i'll be putting up the prologue up in a few days though. Feel free to review then :P

Well, this just got a whole buttload more interesting. Also, that twist about Mav being gay, and Ravid only possibly being gay, that is all confusing, and just keeps me guessing. Well, you have a put in another great reason for the title here in this chapter. It has been a pleasure reading this story.

Hey, this was great to far, chapters 1 and 2. I will get to the rest. It got very interesting once Singer burned down over night. Anyway, nice move with the Barbie doll remark, hilarious. Your stories rock.

Ps. I noticed you like using the word Remarked. I think you should tone it down a bit, it gets just a bit annoying, but still a good story.