The ending is fine. Aang did something what I expected from him. Many people would make him rush to defeat Azula, because she is too dangerous and they lack of empathy. Aang's desperation to aboid killing Ozai have't teached them anything.

Soon I will start Path of Fire.

Story: 8/10
Characters: 8/10
Universum: 7/10

Azula Ozai chapter 20 . 9/10/2016

Arrest him? Just like that? Maybe she is Fire Lord now, but in fact Azun is authority here. He has a true power and Azula is just a figure even if she is royal and powerful bender. Soldiers will follow him rather then Azula. Giving such a order for soldiers means rather that Azula is crazy. They would be full of doubts. Perhaps Azun is a threat to Azula or she just need to get rid of him but thats not the way.

Can't wait to see how you solved it.

Azula Ozai chapter 18 . 9/9/2016

Nooooo. How could you do this to perfect organic-machine created to succeed? You can show mercy to your enemy in a day of his weakness, but you can't expect his mercy in a day of yours. Kindness is for low-people to behave and don't cause trouble either expect deception and manipulation. I belive from this moment you changed story to mak Azula Zuko 2.0 and here will be al ot of no from my sides. But wel... I'm still interested what happens next.

Azula Ozai chapter 17 . 9/9/2016

Very nice retospection here. But personally I think Azula didn't care that her mother disappeared. In that day Azula's emotions towards her mother were very shallow. I remember how she used this situation to torment Zuko. She was already corrupted. Perhaps she was realizing that she is missing something. Maybe she was trying to gain it form her mother but never succeed. So instead of feeling pain because of her failures she rejected her mother and that feelings.

Anyway, fascinating work.

Azula Ozai chapter 15 . 9/9/2016

Ok. I've changed my mind. There is action. gz

Azula Ozai chapter 14 . 9/9/2016

You know what is the problem of the story to this moment? There were no long action/fight scene yet. Maybe I'm wrong because you write lightly and don't make long digressions or don't focus much on details (which is good if someone wants easy-read just like me now) but apart from short/quick sequence of attacks there is no intense moments like that. Your whole work looks like 'standard' adventure story for teens.

Azula Ozai chapter 2 . 9/8/2016

This is great work! Especially that you have finished it! I'm so proud of you.

RG chapter 23 . 6/12/2016

Great story overall.
But I have to repeat this - your comments are super-long. They could be a story in themselves.

RG chapter 10 . 6/12/2016

Actually, I really like this chapter.
It shows that Azun's true strength - his intellect. He's a bit like Batman in the sense that he outmaneuvers his enemies rather than trying to brute-force them.

This is a very good story so far, although a little less humorous than what I normally read. Can Azula control fire but still not generate it, or is she almost back to normal? Just as a minor quibble, Ozai said you're a couple of times when he meant your.