Hey so I had this idea for a joke SCP that is basically an entity that tries to recruit personnel into a multi-level marketing scheme type thing. The entity would behave and speak exactly like the people you see shilling this stuff. Most of the humor would be through transcripts and testing logs with the products.

The fake companies would all be based on other SCPs, but ineffective. For example: Organic Panacea is supposedly a line of all-natural products infused with SCP-500 that the entity claims cured its "chronic" 008 infection. The products actually contain simple aspirin or some other basic medicine, or a concentration so low that it's useless.

Is there any promise in this concept? Or do you have any suggestions? Thank you for taking the time to read this!

So, unfortunately, -J SCPs are really hard to crit, because there's less guidelines about writing them, much less hard and fast rules.

Joke SCPs live and die on whether the readerbase finds them amusing. MLMs are definitely good fodder for SCPs, joke or not - but it's hard to judge the humor without seeing it executed.

Rather than testing logs, the best way to do this might be a sales pitch in SCP format, followed by an actual pitch in a transcript or something. But, take that with a grain of salt. -J runs on Rule of Funny - not much else matters in that category.