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So uh… author, I'll be completely honest, this is a very poorly-written article. This section alone:

but most of the humans SCP-4000 was seen by they described it as a Black Ball of antimatter, a Creature half Organic half Mechanic or a Dark Star in this case we assumed is the rarest form wich resembles SCP-4000's true form

is probably enough to merit an instant downvote from most people. Not only do you frequently mis-capitalize words, none of your phrasing is clinical and this just comes off as more of a preteen describing a video game character or an OC than a professional scientist documenting an empirical observation.

What grade are you in at school? Most successful SCP writers have college-level or above writing experience, and the writing you have here is definitely not up to standards.You will need to do a lot of self-study to sound like a scientist in your article.

For now though, I recommend getting the base idea polished up in the Ideas and Brainstorming forum before you try fixing the draft. Go to that forum, post a quick summary of the concept you want to write up (don't link the draft unless someone asks), and reviewers there can help you make the idea more interesting and give you some advice on structuring the eventual article for smoothness of reading and narrative.