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Great. =D Haven't been online for about one week or so, and I've got lots of things to copy and read in my leisure time at college 8D You see, the internet connection can only be found at the campus, so while I was in the college, I haven't had internet access. And I'm too lazy to read all the things you posted, zan, chapters and whatnot, because it's freezing cold in the library so as usual I'll copy them first and read later XD

*still haven't had time to watch/read the latest episode/chapter*

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

was no one to kill, by the way.on the way here well i uh..*shows broken wooden piece of a 4* Eh. hehe...*runs from arc*,

You..

Next time I ever catch you unguarded, sleeping or whatever, I'll be sure to dissect you. I'll turn you into a hermaphrodite. That's a promise. I'll have Fran helping me, so she would turn you into something gross at the very least, even if not a hermaphrodite. Watch it. This is a warning.

I need to plan to register for a wireless in my room with my friends. Taking the bus just to get to the college for internet access sucks. You can't have privacy, it's freezing cold, and the download... I might have to stop watching Bleach for now. Until we register the wireless. There's a computer room back in the college though, but so far it's still closed. I heard it's being opened next week. *hopefully waits* but next week would be around the time when my classes start. >.< But my seniors say that the Fall Semester is the least busy semester for us, so I should be fine.. XD The busy one starts next year, the Spring Semester.

And oh, of course, the library computer doesn't have WLM, that's one more reason why it sucks. XD

*brrrr* MC, come and heat this place up. Remind me to bring a sweater next time. >.<

I wanna see Unohana dammit. Kubo better give her a fight as promised in the next arc/whenever, I just want to see her~~~

ok, this is the second time i've had to write this chapter because when i did it on thursday serebii deleted the post. this week as promised VB and Zam will be the major part of this chapter but NL, Dac and MC all make their major debut. there is also a VB backstory in this chapter. And next week we return to ILP's fight and visit Arc vs. Vello. and Dac i need a profile for you cause you get to fight next week.

Also, i couldn't think of a relevent title for this chapter so, i'm taking the bleach way out and using a title that makes no sense what so ever.

Spoiler:- chapter 7: White Sky Dreams:

"Um Kida, not to be a buzzkill or anything but why do you need my Garganta?" Dauc asked. Dauc, the former twelfth captain, was the only one in the soul society, besides the captain commader, who was authorized to open a Garganta. The story of how he lost his position was only known to a select few, mainly captains and lieutenants.

When he was asked by Golde to maximize soul reaper powers, he was the highly respected captain of squad twelve. His plan was to fuse reapers with animals to make hightened senses and abilities. Soon after beginning trainees began to fear they would be taken and experimented on. The final straw was when one of his experiments, trying to fuse a young girl with a wolf, caused a huge explosion in his lab. After the incident Golde repealed his position.

"Hayashi was kidnapped and in a way I feel responsible." She was looking at the ground and her voice had fallen to a whisper.

"So. That doesn't mean they'll be near you to help you. I need to come with you."

"No I won't let you." Her voice had raised to a yell. "I've already got one person hurt and I won't let it happen again." She had dropped back to a whisper.

"Ok," Dauc sighed. "Be careful." He embraced her.

"Dauc, just do one thing for me."

"What is it?" Their eyes were locked.

"Please at least act like your gonna see me again."

"And how does that look?" He chuckled and kissed her forehead. Kida stepped through the black gate and disappeared.

"What was that all about?" Dauc turned to see captain Michishige leaning in the doorway.

"It doesn't concern you captain."

"I think it does."

"I'm pretty sure it doesn't. Now get out or I'll call the stealth force."

"Fine I'll get out and tell Golde about your private session here."

"Wait. What do you want?"

"I want in."

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"Gouge out his heart, Rinoceronte!" A red light burst from around Jenk. His shoulders, chest and upper back became encased in bone. "Here I come." He charged forward.

"****!" Zam yelled. He took off running in the opposite direction. He could find no way out. No side halls. No indents. Nothing.

"C'mon it's no fun unless you fight me head on."

Gotta slow him down. He motioned his hand upward causing blades to rise from the floor. Zam stopped for a moment waiting to see if his plan would work. The next sight he saw was Jenk smashing through the blades.

"Double ****!" He clenched a fist causing all the space between he and Jenk was filled with blades, some from the floors, some from the ceilings and some from the walls.

*CRASH*CRASH*CRASH*! Zameric could hear Jenk smashing through the blades. He spun on his heels and began to sprint. Looking ahead the captain could see light at the end of the hall. He kept running not noticing the crashing behind him had stopped.

Reaching the end Zam entered a large, bright room. Circular in shape, there were three open doors. "Oh salvation." He sighed.

"Not quite." In the center path a purple haired hollow stood grinning. "Hello. I am Lakir, gatekeeper of The Compound. I rule over all doors in this building."

"Triple ****. Do I have to fight you too?"

"No. I'm just here to seal these doors so Jenk doesn't have to chase you anymore."

"What!?"

"Bye bye." Lakir gave a mocking wave and the doors slammed closed.

"Hey hey. I see Lakir locked you in here."

"No," Zam smirked. "Just me." He waved his hand down causing a giant blade to descend from the ceiling towards Jenk. The blade struck him on the shoulders, instantly snapping. "Quadruple ****."

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"Ave, Akra let's go. We're breaking orders." Raya said.

"Yes mistress." Ave, a girl with short blonde hair, responded.

"Yes, mistress." Akra, a girl with long black hair, answered.

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Kida stepped out onto the white sand desert. In the distance she could see a white building. From what she could make out a small ball of light being swallowed up by two black hands.

"Well, well, well. What do we have here?" Now standing in front of Kida was Ave, Akra and Raya. "It's the little girl Claw and Fang crushed. I don't believe we've ever had a formal introduction. I'm Raya Anntera, Espada number 4."

"So your the one who took him."

"Guilty as charged. I'm sorry I didn't catch your name."

"I'm Kida Ookami, captain of squad three." Her ears were stiff and her fangs were barred.

"This is Ave and this is Akra. The three of us are going to kill you." All three hollows drew their swords and lunged at Kida.

Two voices chanted in unison: "Servant of the underlands and lone standing swordsman, make way for the wind.
Enter the domain of the thunder lord, rising to meet the sun.
Shuffle through the field of dying heroes.
Release the fury from your corroding soul and destroy the imperial fortress.
Harvest the power of man's primal instinct.
Step through the barrier into the dreaming sky!

Hado #88: Hiryugekizokushintenraiho!" At their command an enormous blast of blue electrical energy loosed and exploded against the hollows.

"What the..." Kida's jaw dropped as the hollows fell to the ground.

"Heh heh. It took the both of us to pull that off but we did it." Both Dauc and Jordan were breathing heavily.

Raya stood up dusting herself off. "Now I'm ******. Girls get up."

Ave and Akra did the same as their mistress. "Orders mistress?" Ave asked.

"You two handle these assholes and I'll beat this girl to a bloody pulp." Ave dove and tackled Dauc, pushing him away from the others. Akra did the same to Jordan.

"That leaves you and me, Raya." Kida smirked. "I've been wanting to do this for a while now."
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The ball of light exploded causing the hands to disperse.

"What the..." Blue yelled.

Out of the flash a beast had appeared. It was pitch black and had almost no definate shape. The body was a bulbous mass. The most distunguishing features were the arms, which ended in five large bone claws; the head which was almost completly hidden by black hair and white bandages; and two tentacle like appendages coming out of the back, both ended in a large pair of bone fangs.

"Gavnt kavna hifsegd." The beast grumbled.

"What the..." Blue muttered again. "Well now's a good of time as any. BAN..."

Ashido put his hand across Cameron's chest. "Wait kid. Let me handle this." Blue stood motionless. It wasn't normally his style to sit back and watch, but he felt that if he moved it would screw up all of existance.

Ashido gripped the his hammer tightly. "Bankai." The word was uttered in a hushed tone. "Shirosora Kurodaichi." The hammer disappeared and became two black sleeves, covering his arms. "Bring it you ugly mother."

The left fanged tentacle shot towards him. Without looking he swatted and smashed it.

"Whoa." A smile spread across Cameron's face.

The monster let out a hellish roar. Ashido didn't flinch, he simply reached to the fur on his shoulder and pulled off a gazelle-like hollow mask. The left horn was broken off. He placed it over his face and began to turn to face the hollow. As he did Cameron could have sworn he saw Ashido's eyes flash golden.

The right fangs came quicker, swaying left and right trying to confuse the veteren reaper. Ashido wasn't phased, he stood still as a statue. As the fangs approched the red-haired reaper simply stuck out his left arm, letting the hand bite it.

"Ashido!" Blue yelled.

"Cero." A crimson blast fired from the mastocated hand, blowing the appendage to pieces.

"UUUUUUUUUUUUIIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOORRRRRRRRR!!!!!"" The monster that was once Claw and Fang dove with both claws out. The arms made impact, though only with sand. Ashido was in the air above, he shook his arms twice and fell like a ton of lead. The body began to deteriorate. The bankai returned to its sealed state and was resheated by its master.

"How did you do that?" Blue asked in awe.

"Its my bankai ability." Ashido said removing the mask. "With the sleeves on I can continually increase the weight of my arms. Please Cameron, sit aganst the wall and rest."

The lieutenant did as suggested. Ashido quickly followed and did the same. "Ashido if you don't mind me asking, what was with the mask?"

"I've been here killing hollows for centuries. Around 175 years ago I found that when I killed a hollow their energy flowed into me and around 36 years ago I learned to harness this power to my advantage, though it only works with the mask on."

"That's amazing."

"Now Cameron if you don't mind me asking, why did you come here?"

"Well it wasn't just me there are five of us here and we came..." He was cut off.

"Not your squad. You personally."

"I came because..." He paused for moment, "...my friend was kidnapped."

"He must be a very important person for you to risk your life coming here."

"Yeah. When I was young a hollow killed both my parents. My father was the seventh seat in squad seven and my mother was the fifth seat in squad thirteen. After they died I vowed to become a soul reaper and avenge them."

"Yes, carry on."

"I entered the academy and became the target of bullies very quickly. I'm short and have blue hair. I was an easy target. On a mission to the World of the Living, I was paired with three of the bullies. Every one of the squads that day consisted of three first years and a sixth year student.

My group was the exception, we got a third year student. He was one of those rare cases where by the second year, squads were looking to draft Him. The only reason He hadn't joined a squad yet was His work ethic. He slept all the time and when woken up He got really pissy. Most people said He only woke up after sensing danger.

The mission that day was a time when He was wide awake. During one of the fights we were ambushed, all but He and I were unconcious. He defeated all the hollows, about ten in all, and when the bullies finally came to He gave me all the credit. Only the supervising officers knew of what actually went down. The next day Ms. Kida offered Him a position as her lieutenant. He took it but came back to check up on me every once in a while.

When it came time for me to join a squad, He put in a good word and I was put into squad seven. Soon I worked my way up and became a lieutenant surpassing my father. I wanted to eventually become captain of squad thirteen and surpass my mother as well, but two weeks ago He was offered the postion and took it. Though I didn't get it I'm happy He did. But two days ago they kidnapped Him and brought him here."

"That's an interesting story. But one thing is troubling me."

"What is it?"

"You never mention this person by name you just say he, his or him. So what is his name?"

"Yasushi Hayashi."

while we're on the subject i'd like to put in a request to change my bankai.

Spoiler:- bankai:

Name: Shinku Kojaku Kokuo (Crimson Sparrow King)

Look: an eight foot long blade, with one foot diameter holes at the tip, in the middle and above the guard. the hilt is in the same placement as zangetsu's. i also don't have the wings anymore.

Techniques:

Umi no Hinoko (Sea of Sparks): the swords is stabbed into the ground leaving only the hole closest to the hilt and the hilt sticking out. then the ground, in a 25 foot square area, catches fire.

Nensho Enko (Burning Halo): the inner rims of the holes catch fire, take off into the air. each is three feet in diameter. the rings fall around the opponent, one at the waist, one at the chest and one at eye level. the lower two move at the same speed and stop two inches in and contiue burning. the eye level only starts after the others are finished so the opponent feels every painful second. the opponent cannot die of blood loss because the fire burns the veins closed. this attack is only used as a last resort or execution.

PRETEND THERE IS A SIGNATURE HERE FULL OF WITTY JOKES AND CLAIMS TO FAME AND UNDESERVED BRAVADO AND SELF PROMOTION

Great. =D Haven't been online for about one week or so, and I've got lots of things to copy and read in my leisure time at college 8D You see, the internet connection can only be found at the campus, so while I was in the college, I haven't had internet access. And I'm too lazy to read all the things you posted, zan, chapters and whatnot, because it's freezing cold in the library so as usual I'll copy them first and read later XD

D8. Stupid school.

Originally Posted by arceus03

You..

Next time I ever catch you unguarded, sleeping or whatever, I'll be sure to dissect you. I'll turn you into a hermaphrodite. That's a promise. I'll have Fran helping me, so she would turn you into something gross at the very least, even if not a hermaphrodite. Watch it. This is a warning.

I... I'm genuinely now afraid of you Arc.

Originally Posted by arceus03

And oh, of course, the library computer doesn't have WLM, that's one more reason why it sucks. XD

You could always use eBuddy

Originally Posted by kusari

Also, i couldn't think of a relevent title for this chapter so, i'm taking the bleach way out and using a title that makes no sense what so ever.

It sounds very cool though And at least you didn't use Deicide

Spoiler:- chapter 7: White Sky Dreams:

Originally Posted by kusari

When he was asked by Golde to maximize soul reaper powers, he was the highly respected captain of squad twelve. His plan was to fuse reapers with animals to make hightened senses and abilities. Soon after beginning trainees began to fear they would be taken and experimented on. The final straw was when one of his experiments, trying to fuse a young girl with a wolf, caused a huge explosion in his lab. After the incident Golde repealed his position.

That's a good way to implement NL being wolf-like.

Originally Posted by kusari

"No I won't let you." Her voice had raised to a yell. "I've already got one person hurt and I won't let it happen again." She had dropped back to a whisper.

"Ok," Dauc sighed. "Be careful." He embraced her.

Hah, even from this point I guessed that Da.c would have gone through, too.

Originally Posted by kusari

"What was that all about?" Dauc turned to see captain Michishige leaning in the doorway.

Who?

Originally Posted by kusari

Reaching the end Zam entered a large, bright room. Circular in shape, there were three open doors. "Oh salvation." He sighed.

"Not quite." In the center path a purple haired hollow stood grinning. "Hello. I am Lakir, gatekeeper of The Compound. I rule over all doors in this building."

"Triple ****. Do I have to fight you too?"

"No. I'm just here to seal these doors so Jenk doesn't have to chase you anymore."

"What!?"

"Bye bye." Lakir gave a mocking wave and the doors slammed closed.

XD Poor Zam.

Originally Posted by kusari

"No," Zam smirked. "Just me." He waved his hand down causing a giant blade to descend from the ceiling towards Jenk. The blade struck him on the shoulders, instantly snapping. "Quadruple ****."

I'm not quite sure what happened here. Zam used an attack that snapped Jenk's shoulders? Then why did he say Quadruple ****?

Originally Posted by kusari

"Heh heh. It took the both of us to pull that off but we did it." Both Dauc and Jordan were breathing heavily.

OH It was MC.
Wait, how many Captains are in Hueco Mundo, now?

Originally Posted by kusari

Ashido gripped the his hammer tightly. "Bankai." The word was uttered in a hushed tone. "Shirosora Kurodaichi." The hammer disappeared and became two black sleeves, covering his arms. "Bring it you ugly mother."

Definitely an odd Bankai. And ugly mother? LOL

Originally Posted by kusari

The monster let out a hellish roar. Ashido didn't flinch, he simply reached to the fur on his shoulder and pulled off a gazelle-like hollow mask. The left horn was broken off. He placed it over his face and began to turn to face the hollow. As he did Cameron could have sworn he saw Ashido's eyes flash golden.

So he used a Hollow mask from his coat? That's odd...

Originally Posted by kusari

"UUUUUUUUUUUUIIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOORRRRRRRRR!!!!!""

The only thing I thought was "that is so bleach."

Originally Posted by kusari

My group was the exception, we got a third year student. He was one of those rare cases where by the second year, squads were looking to draft Him. The only reason He hadn't joined a squad yet was His work ethic. He slept all the time and when woken up He got really pissy. Most people said He only woke up after sensing danger.

The mission that day was a time when He was wide awake. During one of the fights we were ambushed, all but He and I were unconcious. He defeated all the hollows, about ten in all, and when the bullies finally came to He gave me all the credit. Only the supervising officers knew of what actually went down. The next day Ms. Kida offered Him a position as her lieutenant. He took it but came back to check up on me every once in a while.

When it came time for me to join a squad, He put in a good word and I was put into squad seven. Soon I worked my way up and became a lieutenant surpassing my father. I wanted to eventually become captain of squad thirteen and surpass my mother as well, but two weeks ago He was offered the postion and took it. Though I didn't get it I'm happy He did. But two days ago they kidnapped Him and brought him here."

So it seems Yasushi and Blue were close friends when in the academy[/understatement]
Also, you don't use a capital H in he/him/her/his unless it's a title of sorts.

Originally Posted by kusari

Spoiler:- bankai:

Name: Shinku Kojaku Kokuo (Crimson Sparrow King)

Look: an eight foot long blade, with one foot diameter holes at the tip, in the middle and above the guard. the hilt is in the same placement as zangetsu's. i also don't have the wings anymore.

Techniques:

Umi no Hinoko (Sea of Sparks): the swords is stabbed into the ground leaving only the hole closest to the hilt and the hilt sticking out. then the ground, in a 25 foot square area, catches fire.

Nensho Enko (Burning Halo): the inner rims of the holes catch fire, take off into the air. each is three feet in diameter. the rings fall around the opponent, one at the waist, one at the chest and one at eye level. the lower two move at the same speed and stop two inches in and contiue burning. the eye level only starts after the others are finished so the opponent feels every painful second. the opponent cannot die of blood loss because the fire burns the veins closed. this attack is only used as a last resort or execution.

What is your normal Bankai, anyway? I'm looking at the first page, and it just says "withheld".
And another fire Zanpakutou? Personally, I think 2 is already enough, but I can't stop you from keeping it.
I have to say, your Bankai is very "finish-y off-y" (if that makes any sense to anyone, you deserve cookies). I'm assuming that you also keep your Shikai's powers? Because it will be difficult to fight without using a technique that creates a large fire, or an executing technique.

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

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I... I'm genuinely now afraid of you Arc.
[FONT=Candara] Same here.

It sounds very cool though And at least you didn't use Deicide

I was gonna use 'Don't wake the sleeping sky', but i figured with the title i did use i could use that next and have it somewhat make sense.

Spoiler:- chapter 7: White Sky Dreams:

That's a good way to implement NL being wolf-like.

I know right.

Hah, even from this point I guessed that Da.c would have gone through, too.

Yeah. He said i better have a place for him. Here it is.

XD Poor Zam.

It's always the same with you, interesting or Poor [insert unfortunate person here]. also i didn't write it in there but as the door closed Lakir bent down and waved. paying homage to gin's infamous 'bye bye' scene from early in the series.

I'm not quite sure what happened here. Zam used an attack that snapped Jenk's shoulders? Then why did he say Quadruple ****?

No Jenk's shoulders didn't snap. The blade snapped. Jenk is the Nnoitor this time (in terms of strenght of Hierro). and if you notice the line Zam says before dropping the blade makes no sense what so ever. i don't even know why i wrote him saying that.

Oh. It was MC.
Wait, how many Captains are in Hueco Mundo, now?

Well altogether: the first five went in and of them four were captains, then non captain Ashido came out, and last NL, MC and Dac all came in and they're all captains. so seven.

Definitely an odd Bankai. And ugly mother? LOL

Its odd but so is everything else in the bleach universe.

So he used a Hollow mask from his coat? That's odd...

Ashido is just that badass. also see above.

So it seems Yasushi and Blue were close friends when in the academy[/understatement]
Also, you don't use a capital H in he/him/her/his unless it's a title of sorts.

Yes to the first part. for the second part, i know english grammer. This fall i'll be entering my last year of high school in an american public school (that helps my case a lot). i'm well aware of the title capitalization. I've read a couple stories where someone was talked about in vague pronouns, but they were capitalized for reasons only known to the author. i used that here.

What is your normal Bankai, anyway? I'm looking at the first page, and it just says "withheld".
And another fire Zanpakutou? Personally, I think 2 is already enough, but I can't stop you from keeping it.
I have to say, your Bankai is very "finish-y off-y" (if that makes any sense to anyone, you deserve cookies). I'm assuming that you also keep your Shikai's powers? Because it will be difficult to fight without using a technique that creates a large fire, or an executing technique.

it was a giant pair of silver gloves which weren't really suited for combat. for the rest of the info look at squad three. the link is still there. and i do keep the abilities from the shikai form. oh and the fire zanpakuto was how i got excepted into the squads in the first place.

so yeah. there it is.

PRETEND THERE IS A SIGNATURE HERE FULL OF WITTY JOKES AND CLAIMS TO FAME AND UNDESERVED BRAVADO AND SELF PROMOTION

@Master Charizard: Fanservice? Does that have anything to do with Rangiku?

@Arceus03: Sucks for you man! I have summer vacations which will end on 7th September. The first days of school will be half days because of Ramadan and every student in my country will get an additional one week holiday after that because of Eid... So technically, my holidays will end on 12th of September.

So, as I was saying, am I allowed to keep my Zanpaktou's sealed form or what? If not, please state why.

It's always the same with you, interesting or Poor [insert unfortunate person here].

's that a bad thing? If I'm intrigued by something, I'll mention that by saying "that's interesting" or if I feel sorry for someone, I'll say "poor [person]".

Originally Posted by kusari

No Jenk's shoulders didn't snap. The blade snapped. Jenk is the Nnoitor this time (in terms of strenght of Hierro). and if you notice the line Zam says before dropping the blade makes no sense what so ever. i don't even know why i wrote him saying that.

Ah, I see. Well, sucks to be Zam.

Originally Posted by kusari

Well altogether: the first five went in and of them four were captains, then non captain Ashido came out, and last NL, MC and Dac all came in and they're all captains. so seven.

That's, I think, a bit too much to bring one person back.

Originally Posted by kusari

Yes to the first part. for the second part, i know english grammer. This fall i'll be entering my last year of high school in an american public school (that helps my case a lot). i'm well aware of the title capitalization. I've read a couple stories where someone was talked about in vague pronouns, but they were capitalized for reasons only known to the author. i used that here.

*Shrug* [/QUOTE]

Originally Posted by kusari

it was a giant pair of silver gloves which weren't really suited for combat. for the rest of the info look at squad three. the link is still there. and i do keep the abilities from the shikai form. oh and the fire zanpakuto was how i got excepted into the squads in the first place.

Ah, right. I'm looking at that now.
Ah, I see. And boy do I feel like an idiot for not knowing your Zanpakutou was already fire type XD

Originally Posted by Emperor Giratina

@Arceus03: Sucks for you man! I have summer vacations which will end on 7th September. The first days of school will be half days because of Ramadan and every student in my country will get an additional one week holiday after that because of Eid... So technically, my holidays will end on 12th of September.

Oh yeah, I forgot. You're from Pakistan, right? I'm sort of lucky that school won't start again till, I think, just after Eid (or just before Eid).

Originally Posted by Emperor Giratina

So, as I was saying, am I allowed to keep my Zanpaktou's sealed form or what? If not, please state why.

I'm not sure who actually decides XD Perhaps we should take votes, or Golde decides on his own, or something?

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

No, I had no objections about it being based around lightning or electricity. Not that it was similar to mine. I DON'T want it similar to mine.

Spoiler:- Chapter 31 - Shining Through The Darkness:

~~~

Last time in Golde's fanfic! (You're welcome, Anternero)

Jin and Dre were barely holding out as they were going crazy under the influence of Pazzo's warped reality.

Golde was still searching for the Shinigami Slayer's Leader, Noza.

Mizuhashi, having healed all he could, set off to try to figure out the cause of this chaos.

And now we're back!

~~~

Jin was keeping back, trying to make sense of this mysterious illusion technique. He had noticed a few things…the most notable being that everything seemed to move at a constant speed. I.e., there was no increase or decrease of an objects speed if a force was applied to it, unless there was another, direct force. Somehow, factors such as gravity, wind resistance, and so on were made irrelevant.

He watched as Dre was knocked backwards into a wall, which almost immediately crumbled. It also seemed that whatever bond was holding the molecules together was fading, because everything that received any force started break faster, the longer this area was up. Jin was then the focus of attack, and he blocked, sending him back just a bit. As he stepped back, the ground beneath him moved, as if he was stepping on hot tar. He was just glad that their bodies and swords were holding out...probably because of the high concentration of spirit energy.

It was then that Pazzo moved from bludgeoning to what seemed to be another bonus from being in this area. He loosed a massive bolt of lightning from the end of his staff. Jin noted that the color and style was similar to a massive Byakurai. He concluded that the area must suck reitsu from the surrounding area to amplify his own Kido-esque moves. Jin shunpoed away.

He appeared beside Dre, and saw again the illusionary aspect of the area once again. Jin assumed that by showing you a fake image of something you have complete knowledge of, such as a person or place’s image, it allowed the mind to be open to fear and madness.

Jin smiled. Dre looked confused. “What?”

“Galaxy of Insanity.” He scoffed. “Hardly so.”

~~~

Mizuhashi watched as his body began to be altered slowly as he walked. He knew what he looked like…so what was this foreign arm that was in front of him? He looked down…this body too…what was this madness?

He heard an explosion.

It doesn’t matter, he thought to himself. I came here for a purpose.
He headed off toward the three souls he could feel…three souls engaged in heavy battle.

~~~

Bars Gees stepped outwards from the black orb…his body reverted to normal, and he sighed in relief.

“That sick *******…” he mumbled…he rubbed his temples.

“You’re one too talk…”

Bars turned and gripped his schmitar. Before him stood a woman…a woman he had once admired, and would’ve followed anywhere.

Before him stood Medusa.

She stood there, her sword released, the silver blade glittering in the sun, the five gold rings around it shimmering as well. However, she seemed out of it…and from her head, blood trickled slowly…the same wound Bars had inflicted earlier.

“You.” Bars looked solemn. “What are you here for?”

“I can’t let you continue to do this…” she said. “These people…we were wrong, Bars. They’re…”

Before she could finish, a wave of black slashed past her…if she hadn’t have sidestepped, it would’ve killed her.

“…I see…” She resumed her original position…”I will stop you, Bars…” a tear fell down her cheek, unseen by him…”At ANY cost…”

~~~

Golde had been trailing this man for what seemed like hours…and it probably was. He could never get a good enough read on his spiritual pressure...

But this was it.

Golde stepped through the trees, and before him stood what seemed like an ocean…the sun glistened the water’s surface…setting the perfect scene atop the cliff he now stood.

Noza merely laughed, his sword held in his hand. He leaned his way off the wall and walked towards him. Noza held his sword in front of him, almost horizontally.

Golde knew of this gesture…something that stuck from a past he didn’t care to remember. He held his sword up, mimicking the gesture.

They tapped their swords gently.

“Well…” Noza smiled behind his pure white mask, “To a great fight.”

“Yes…” Golde breathed slowly. “Let the fight begin.”

~~~

Mizuhashi had arrived to the fight. He hid behind a wall, watching as Dre and Jin sent wave after wave of their attacks at the old man…

He knew he could be of some help here. The man wasn’t being injured hardly at all, but he was moving steadily backwards towards Mizuhashi. He…maybe…

Mizuhashi pulled his sword out and silently released it, letting the water pour out and surround him. He watched…the man was almost there…

Just as the man stepped back past the wall, Mizuhashi locked eyes with him. The surprise on his face reflected just how much trouble the man was in, because at that moment, all of Mizuhashi’s water was forced upon Pazzo, sending him traveling sideways, crashing him through a wall, which all but disintegrated upon the collision.

The water became more organized, and gripped around the man’s torso and arms, securing him, and pulling him either way. He looked at Mizuhashi, and then to Jin and Dre as they arrived.

Jin and Dre looked at Mizuhashi, smiling, then back to each other. They all nodded in agreement.

Pazzo began to grunt in pain as the water swirled and pulled his arms harder, nearly tearing them from their sockets…

Jin and Dre held their swords up and in one, swift motion, cleanly removed the old man’s arms. Pazzo cried out in pain with a bloodcurdling howl.

“Send him upwards, Mizuhashi.” Jin called, and Mizuhashi nodded. He swirled his water viciously, making what seemed to be a miniature whirlpool. The water suddenly rose fast, forming a waterspout now, sending the man high upwards.

As the man spun upwards uncontrollably, with no time to use his spiritual pressure to stop and right himself, Dre and Jin appeared before him in midair. The each held their swords at their sides, and in unison, used a final combination attack. The red flames and the vacuum slash formed an X in the sky, disintegrating Pazzo in midair, and rapidly dispersing the barrier around all of them.

As the top of the orb began to fade, the sun shone through, ridding the trio of the illusion. They stood, their bodies reverted to normal, staring at the sun lit sky.

They met again with Mizuhashi, and thanked him. As the final traces of the black orb faded into nothingness, they stood in the sun once more, appreciative of the wondrous sky.

~~~

Bars was easily beating Medusa…she was woozy and slow to react, the wound to the head being apparently more serious than originally thought.
She blocked as fast as she could, parrying, only to be blocked herself. She struck, only to have her sword struck out of the way, forcing her to dive out of the way or be hit.

She looked up at him…the man she once knew wasn’t in those eyes. Those eyes were full of coldness…losing one of his friends had hurt him so much…and she realized it felt the same way when she had tried to stop him.

She stood…she knew she could stop him, but she couldn’t guarantee her own life would be spared.

She lunged at him, he blocked, and she altered her swing, striking upwards, sending both blades skyward.

Bars’ attention was diverted slightly, as Medusa’s sword’s effect activated. A small gold ring formed around his blade, the bright metal sound capturing his curiosity long enough for Medusa to lunge forward.

“A distraction!?” He called, as she lightly cut his legs, a gold stream forming around his legs, forming into a metal ring, like the one on his blade. He struggled and fell as it shrunk.

Shock and instinct took over Bars. as he fell, he swung at her. Unfortunately, the blade connected, and made a long gash down her chest…

Bars stared up at his old friend, a wave of blood erupting from her torso. Her sword moved to his neck, and he knew what would happen…the constriction of a third ring on his neck would choke him to death.

It was only then that something clicked in his head…if these people were as bad as he thought, how was he any better? What had he done!? Had he killed…his true best friend? She had always been there for him…And…she had tried to help him…to save him…

He watched her eyes as they began to mist over. She lowered and dropped her sword. The rings disappeared as she fell to her knees, then across Bars’ chest.

Panicked, he sat up and cradled her in his arms…”No…” he cried…"No, no, no…”

“Bars…” she mumbled…

“Yes?” he called, hoping desperately his friend would survive.

She smiled, and moved the palm of her hand to his cheek…”Stay true to yourself…”

He knew the meaning of these words…he knew he was wrong for everything he had done…under Noza.

“Of course…” he mumbled, tears forming in his eyes.

She smiled once more, and her eyes closed.

~~~

Like, two more Chapters for season 1.

Fyi, Medusa's power is that the five gold rings on her silver blade materialize around whatever she cuts. The rings shrink and shrink until they become orbs, then dissolve and return to the original blade.

Bar's power is essentially at this point, black waves of energy. It's based around Darkness instead of say, Ichigo's black spiritual energy or whatever. There's a lot more, just not yet to be revealed.

so no body thought to inform me of the cloning ability?
-_-
i am very disappointed in you Golde, you forgot to look out for my interests, which are very important if i do say so myself -_-
i DISAPPROVE!!!!!
well, not really.

but limitations should be placed on it. unending cloning is godmodding and against the rules when it comes to making a zan.

Did all of you get DA accounts or something? Because I noticed VizardBlue, and Ant are both on it o.O

Anyway, I s'pose I might as well make a topic...

I think we had a topic like this, but I think everyone picked funny things <.< >.>
So this one'll be dramatic scenes only.

What is your favorite dramatic scene in Bleach?

It's gotta be when Momo went all crazy and was like "IT WAS YOU!!!!!".
Her Japanese and English VA's both did that scene AMAZINGLY, imo, and the fact that her expression went from "T_T" to "RAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!" in about 0.5 seconds was quite cool.
And then it was just her expression. It was all like frightening and grief-ridden and stuff.

Did all of you get DA accounts or something? Because I noticed VizardBlue, and Ant are both on it o.O

XD We've had ours for a while, I guess (mine more so I think). But I really like some of your stuff.

What is your favorite dramatic scene in Bleach?

I can't immediately think of one. [spoiler]But it could range from Aizen's revelation as the big bad, to Ulquiorra dying, to Soifon having her arm rotting off, to Aizen transforming, or even Tensa/HIchigo reappearing/them fusing.[/spoiler] It's hard for me to say.

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

ok before i start commenting i just want to say, later today i'll be posting and archive page for all my chapters.

ILP: yes it is a bit too much to bring one person back but when we get to the last three chapters you'll see why we need this many people. that big group is an important plot point. i don't have anything against you saying that, it's just alway the same.

VB: yeah. *returns high five*. so that's what two high fives from two people in two pages.

GalladeX: i have one too but i'm not an artist. i'm an art conniseur. awesome Ulquiorra by the way.

Golde: i'll remember to remind you next time.

What is your favorite dramatic scene in Bleach?

remember way back when Byakuya cut Ichigo's soul chain after Renji beat him. my favorite scene was right after that when Ichigo was laying in the rain remembering his days with Rukia.

PRETEND THERE IS A SIGNATURE HERE FULL OF WITTY JOKES AND CLAIMS TO FAME AND UNDESERVED BRAVADO AND SELF PROMOTION

Shirosaki has always been a fan term, some people choose to use it, some don't (it changes the Kuro [which means black] from Kurosaki and turns it into Shiro [meaning white] in Shirosaki, since Ichigo and HIchigo are as opposite as Black and White). Other fan names are Ogihci (since it Ichigo's name appeared mirrored on a title-page).

Byakuya: Who are you?!HIchigo: I'm nobody!You ask me who I am but... I don't have a name!
Officially, he has no name. A politically correct name would be "The Hollow within Ichigo's conscience" though that's too long. Often used names are Ogihci (like mentioned before, it is the reverse of Ichigo which appeared as a mirror image on a title-page); Hollow Ichigo (shortened to H.Ichigo, HIchigo, Hichigo, etc.) because he is Ichigo's Hollow; White Ichigo because he is a white Ichigo, and Shirosaki which, as mentioned before, is like White Ichigo, but using the pun in his surname.
Soyeah. Feel free to call him anything you want (I'm trying out Chuck, it seems to be catching on in another forum). Just don't say "*** is his name".

Spoiler:

Oh, I see where they got that now. Interesting.

Hmm...Then lets call him Nanashi! xD

Originally Posted by arceus03

Wooo. All this time I never knew about the name Shirosaki. Might have heard somewhere before though. And idk about the HIchigo being an Arrancar or not. I mean, Spoiler:

Arrancars have Resurreccion, right? So if you want to say that HIchigo is just a manifestation of Ichigo's Hollow powers, what about Tousen? His mask, was that a manifestation or a real Hollow? If you wanna put it as manifestation, why did it have a Resurreccion like an Arrancar? But on the other hand, if you want to say that it is an Arrancar on itself, Tousen was a Shinigami, not a Hollow. Of course, Tousen has been tampered with the Hogyoku, so his case might be a bit different.

Spoiler:

Oh jeez...maybe that's a can worms we should just leave to Kubo to explain, if he wants to... xD

Originally Posted by Emperor Giratina

Zanpaktou Name: Scorponok

Type: Poison

Zanpaktou Spirit: A Giant Purple Scorpion

Release Command: Impale

Shikai Details: In its Shikai state it becomes a Gatling Gun and fires much stronger poison bullets, these bullets are strong enough to tear off limbs (What do you expect? It's a Gatling Gun!... But there is a 10% chance, nonetheless). If the bullet remains, or atleast comes into contact with living matter. It will react with flesh and spirit energy by releasing its poison. It will release poison continuously until the bullet is not extracted, though it will stop when it dissolves fully into the wound. THE BULLET MUST DISSOLVE FOR THE REACTION TO OCCUR. The first symptoms of the poison are, that the victim's vision will start to blur, then he/she will hallucinate, then it will lead to paralysis of certain body parts. Then, if the antidote is not administered, it will lead to a painful death. These chain of events depend on the hit the victim has taken. If it is anything from a cut to a slightly deep wound, it's effects won't be as adverse. It will only blur the victims vision a little, but... if the bullet has penetrated the body, THEN the following will happen.

Bankai Name: *Please suggest an awesome name*

Bankai Details: Upon releasing, the Gatling Gun becomes an RPG-7. The RPG it fires has moderate homing capabilities as is fast, but not that fast. I can charge my spirit energy into the RPG to make it stronger, faster and more mobile (and therefore make its homing capabilities better.) When it explodes, it releases a Purple gas that has the same effects as what the poison bullets do in my Shikai. The RPG contains phosphorus, when it explodes, so does the phosphorus and releases white flames that will cause extricating pain to anybody who touches it and will give him/her large third-degree burns. The downside, it has a long reloading time (about 1 minute). I construct another RPG using spirit energy.

Anything Else: In its sealed state, the Zanpaktou is a Scorpion sub-machine gun with a bayonet. It's 1.5x stronger than the one in real life and it's bullets poison the target and causes the wound to become soar. Its effects aren't as adverse as my shikai's or my Bankai's

... Well, boys. Say hello to my little friend! I thought I'd ditch the tommy gun, physics and all 'a that. This should be acceptable, you can't say no to it's bad assery!

Eh, I'm not much of a fan of gun design zanpakuto's, but this is alright I guess. I think the shikai seems too much like a bankai. But it's Ant and/or Golde's word that really matters, not mine.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

Spoiler:- thanx to Zam:

is it me or does aizen look sexy now that he no longer looks like a condom?

Spoiler:

I think most of us can agree on that.

Originally Posted by GalladeX

HE'S BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK.
*Hugs everyone*
I MISSED YOU ALL.
My computer was down. T_T
Then I got it fixed!
Then I got obsessed with doing stuff for my deviantART account x_xFILLING IN BASES IZ FUN.

EDIT: I forgot to share this with you guys!
El Que Llorra= He who cries
Now who does that phrase remind you of?

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Yay, more Bleach/DBZ fan references!

Lol, I like your little phrase you did there. ;p

Originally Posted by Golde

Rather overdue, in my opinion. Golde's bankai~

Bankai Name; Destructive Stormcloud Zachiru.

Bankai Details;

Appearance- The most common form it takes is as a long claymore, that dips in and curves out into a rounded sort of half moon at the end. It's pure gold, with a sliver of silver running down the middle, about halfway down to the end. The silver sliver is actually all the blade is. The gold part will be mentioned more later.

Also, the red rope is now tied in knots and hung from the end. It's really long, about 4 or so feet, and has Japanese coins tied around it, every half foot or so. The guard is gold, and has several crystals decorating it...after all, Zachiru is a sucker for pretty objects. The entire blade is supposed to reflect beauty and elegance.

Attacks & Stuff- Zachiru's main ability is the ability to create a mysterious Golden Material. It is extremely soft and malleable (Especially compared to other metals; someone not even in Shikai can cut it if they swing their sword hard enough), but can be created indefinitely. So, if someone were to hit my sword and cut through the Golden Material, it would instantly begin to heal itself.

This Golden Material can be created almost anywhere, at anytime, as long as I have energy. It could form a shield around myself, or it could form around my opponents feet, or in any form I wish, basically. The only problem is that I can only really create it close to me, or close to another piece of the material.

I also have control over the material, allowing me to move it at will. Meaning I can use it as projectiles as well, or another weapon, or even a contraption, if I so wish. However, the larger the piece of material, teh slower it moves.
I also still have control over electricity. Just sayin.

As a final last resort, (This leaves me wiped) the guard snaps into 4 pieces, releasing all my spiritual energy at once. This forms a giant mass of electrical energy that hovers around me. Its huge.

AT this point, I am usually too wiped to physically fight back, and remain this way until my energy is resealed, but, luckily, this electrical storm is controlled by Zachiru herself, and she usually forms the electricity into the guise of a bird. The bird has a crown/beak (they're connected) of the golden armor as well feathers on the wings. It is fast, and can last quite a while, but burns energy fast. Also, I am encased by this electricity, making me hard to physically hit.

If I waste all my energy in this form...well...yeah

I think that's all there. Pictures sometime soon.

Hmm, this seems familiar... xD
Cool bankai, Golde.

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

Spoiler:

Pfft you severely underestimate the power of the fanbase. They were shipped the moment they say spoilers of Tensa Zangetsu.

Yes, there are two great forces on the internetz..the imaginations/creativity of fans and the speed of pr0n.

Originally Posted by arceus03

You..

Next time I ever catch you unguarded, sleeping or whatever, I'll be sure to dissect you. I'll turn you into a hermaphrodite. That's a promise. I'll have Fran helping me, so she would turn you into something gross at the very least, even if not a hermaphrodite. Watch it. This is a warning.

o.0 ....
You better run far and fast, VizardBlue. Fran Madaraki is one of the last people you ever want experimenting on you, trust me...

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

PWNSOME is an insane understatement.

I figure'd you give a similar reaction to that. xDToo bad he's not in your squad. ;p

I think I might need to start reading Kusari's fanfic...
And woo for more chapters of Golde's fic.

ILP: yes it is a bit too much to bring one person back but when we get to the last three chapters you'll see why we need this many people. that big group is an important plot point. i don't have anything against you saying that, it's just alway the same.

Well then, I'll have a big plot point to look forward to.
Eh, maybe I'll try and spruce up my vocab a bit.

Originally Posted by Zameric

Spoiler:

Oh jeez...maybe that's a can worms we should just leave to Kubo to explain, if he wants to... xD

Spoiler:

Pffft I doubt he is. Perhaps I can make something up XD.

Originally Posted by Zameric

Spoiler:

I think Ichigo and Hichgo would count as one mullet. ;p

XDD

Originally Posted by Zameric

Spoiler:

Yay, more Bleach/DBZ fan references!

Spoiler:

Someone should make a list 8O

Originally Posted by Zameric

Yes, there are two great forces on the internetz..the imaginations/creativity of fans and the speed of pr0n.

Don't they kind of count as the same thing?

Originally Posted by Zameric

I figure'd you give a similar reaction to that. xD

XD Of course, I'm rather predictable.

Originally Posted by Zameric

Too bad he's not in your squad. ;p

*Emo corner*

Originally Posted by Zameric

I think I might need to start reading Kusari's fanfic...

You should, it's good Even if I might make it seem like I don't like it.

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

Next time I ever catch you unguarded, sleeping or whatever, I'll be sure to dissect you. I'll turn you into a hermaphrodite. That's a promise. I'll have Fran helping me, so she would turn you into something gross at the very least, even if not a hermaphrodite. Watch it. This is a warning.

*pulls out zanpaktou* BRING IT ON! *goes Bankai and starts creating havoc with materliazed shadows* And besides, if you DO WIN THIS, and you do expirement on me, ATLEAST go all the way and turn me into a girl. Hermaphrodites are a no no. do it all the way man, don't halfass it. xp.

Next time I ever catch you unguarded, sleeping or whatever, I'll be sure to dissect you. I'll turn you into a hermaphrodite. That's a promise. I'll have Fran helping me, so she would turn you into something gross at the very least, even if not a hermaphrodite. Watch it. This is a warning.

*pulls out zanpaktou* BRING IT ON! *goes Bankai and starts creating havoc with materliazed shadows* And besides, if you DO WIN THIS, and you do expirement on me, ATLEAST go all the way and turn me into a girl. Hermaphrodites are a no no. do it all the way man, don't halfass it. xp.

Now say sorry or I-(Censored Paragraph) and Have Ant make it happen in slow motion!

o.o I'm not that cruel, MC. Ohwait, yes I am 8D

Originally Posted by kusari

WOW Those look good.

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

*pulls out zanpaktou* BRING IT ON! *goes Bankai and starts creating havoc with materliazed shadows* And besides, if you DO WIN THIS, and you do expirement on me, ATLEAST go all the way and turn me into a girl. Hermaphrodites are a no no. do it all the way man, don't halfass it. xp.

*Shakes head* You clearly don't know who to fear.

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

*pulls out zanpaktou* BRING IT ON! *goes Bankai and starts creating havoc with materliazed shadows* And besides, if you DO WIN THIS, and you do expirement on me, ATLEAST go all the way and turn me into a girl. Hermaphrodites are a no no. do it all the way man, don't halfass it. xp.

The fact that you failed to realize it the first time I said it is already the proof: you're too ignorant. I could sneak up on you any time. By the time you went bankai, I'm already done. And if I turn you into a girl, I wouldn't get the satisfaction. That's why I wanted a hermaphrodite. Hopefully you'll undergo asexual reproduction, then give birth to a child just like you, so in the end you'll end up killing one another. At least my barracks wouldn't be in trouble anymore.

Of course, unless you want to repair all the damage you've done. Even if you don't, I'll take it up to your Captain after I dissected you, so you'll still have to repair it anyway. It's just a matter of time: before or after.

Oh. You double posted.

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

*Shakes head* You clearly don't know who to fear.

You know, weird people are weirder than the weirdest of the weirdest weirdo of all time, that's probably why.

Oh, yeah, chapter. It wasn't very good. =\ I mean, yeah, plot development and all, but it's just... not good. And Spoiler:

Don Kanonji, what the heck? If he turns out to be a royal guard (just like how Isshin turned out to be a shinigami after acting dumb halfway of the episode) I'm seriously gonna... gonna... whatever.

But though- Spoiler:

The episode was rather good, I must say. The Vizards are finally here 8D We'll get to see some masks next episode, I guess. Woooo~

*waits patiently for Hachi vs Barragan*

Then UNOHANA coming back from HM 8D

Dramatic scene?
Depends on how you look at it, I guess. Since it said "sensational in appearance or thrilling in effect" on Google, any scenes involving Kido is good enough for me 8D Especially linked Kido. Woooo 8D And also, any moment when Rukia goes shikai or Byakuya goes bankai. XD

The fact that you failed to realize it the first time I said it is already the proof: you're too ignorant. I could sneak up on you any time. By the time you went bankai, I'm already done. And if I turn you into a girl, I wouldn't get the satisfaction. That's why I wanted a hermaphrodite. Hopefully you'll undergo asexual reproduction, then give birth to a child just like you, so in the end you'll end up killing one another. At least my barracks wouldn't be in trouble anymore.

Of course, unless you want to repair all the damage you've done. Even if you don't, I'll take it up to your Captain after I dissected you, so you'll still have to repair it anyway. It's just a matter of time: before or after.

Oh. You double posted.

You know, weird people are weirder than the weirdest of the weirdest weirdo of all time, that's probably why.

Oh, yeah, chapter. It wasn't very good. =\ I mean, yeah, plot development and all, but it's just... not good. And Spoiler:

Don Kanonji, what the heck? If he turns out to be a royal guard (just like how Isshin turned out to be a shinigami after acting dumb halfway of the episode) I'm seriously gonna... gonna... whatever.

But though- Spoiler:

The episode was rather good, I must say. The Vizards are finally here 8D We'll get to see some masks next episode, I guess. Woooo~

*waits patiently for Hachi vs Barragan*

Then UNOHANA coming back from HM 8D

Dramatic scene?
Depends on how you look at it, I guess. Since it said "sensational in appearance or thrilling in effect" on Google, any scenes involving Kido is good enough for me 8D Especially linked Kido. Woooo 8D And also, any moment when Rukia goes shikai or Byakuya goes bankai. XD