Hahahahahha really you try to pass this shitty story off as a good one. You say you want to write a novel lol please don't here it's free but you want people to read your shit and pay for it no just no

Omg. Love it. I'm not an every chapter reviewer in fact I hardly review unless it is knock your socks off and my apologies I'm not verbose. I'm not a writer but love the amazing stories that are available to me in the twilight fandom. Thank you so much for this story I'm loving it. Xx