Nate, it feels much more complete now. The first was nice, but makes you think "where is that light coming from?" Although it's definitely not natural, the building allows you to believe it may be. I like it.

__________________Lord, I quit the drinkin', the smokin' an' the honky-tonk life.
The day that a ring an' a preacher made her my wife.
Yeah, an' I said: "I do," but I didn't have a clue,
How I'd miss all the whiskey an' women.
I tried to be true, but it's all I can do,
Keepin' up with the Jonesin'