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What a beautiful poem. This was a smooth read, with great meaning in it's depth.
Your last two lines really finished it nicely, and I think, it was my favorite line.
Emotional, sad, and chilling, this was a marvelous piece of work you have penned... great job!!

Posted 5 Years Ago

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

5 Years Ago

Hearing that you can sympathize with the depths I relayed in this poem, means alot especially becaus.. read moreHearing that you can sympathize with the depths I relayed in this poem, means alot especially because so many of your pieces do everything but skirt the superficial, I love the intuitive depth you communicate :)

5 Years Ago

Your welcome... and I really loved this poem, it was deep. And thank you so much for your good will .. read moreYour welcome... and I really loved this poem, it was deep. And thank you so much for your good will toward my poetry, it means a lot. I appreciate it :)

5 Years Ago

lol i just read my comment.. and realized how pompous i sounded, just one of those defense mechanism.. read morelol i just read my comment.. and realized how pompous i sounded, just one of those defense mechanisms when someone likes something that dear to you and you dont know how to hide the hurt so act tough, thanks again

5 Years Ago

Oh, psh, don't be silly. You did not sound pompous.

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Amazing poem, it flows together really well and has a good rhythm. It's also passionate, original, and I like how you extenuated some of the words by making them darker or lighter. It's both visually pleasing and a beautiful poem to read.

Posted 5 Months Ago

Rating /100

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful poem. This was a smooth read, with great meaning in it's depth.
Your last two lines really finished it nicely, and I think, it was my favorite line.
Emotional, sad, and chilling, this was a marvelous piece of work you have penned... great job!!

Posted 5 Years Ago

Rating /100

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

5 Years Ago

Hearing that you can sympathize with the depths I relayed in this poem, means alot especially becaus.. read moreHearing that you can sympathize with the depths I relayed in this poem, means alot especially because so many of your pieces do everything but skirt the superficial, I love the intuitive depth you communicate :)

5 Years Ago

Your welcome... and I really loved this poem, it was deep. And thank you so much for your good will .. read moreYour welcome... and I really loved this poem, it was deep. And thank you so much for your good will toward my poetry, it means a lot. I appreciate it :)

5 Years Ago

lol i just read my comment.. and realized how pompous i sounded, just one of those defense mechanism.. read morelol i just read my comment.. and realized how pompous i sounded, just one of those defense mechanisms when someone likes something that dear to you and you dont know how to hide the hurt so act tough, thanks again