Beware His Frozen Heart

Trapped in a kingdom of Isolation, Elsa was never accepted by the people in her kingdom. She never had a proper childhood. She never experienced love. After Elsa brought summer back to Arendelle everyone was happy, except for Elsa. She became sad and lonely seeing how everyone had someone except her. That is until she found a man under the ice. His name was Jack...

Adorable start to you story! Very good job with creating the character dialogue for each individual one. I was able to see how Anna was fast paced, how Elsa was tired and Olaf's cute innocent personality. Great start!:)