Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2009-12-14 15:40:55

meh

nto a bad concept, and sort of heartwarming, but the ending totally killed it. never write it if its not proper english. but work on it though. you need to work on animations, and start passing english.

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2009-12-14 15:30:30

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2009-12-14 15:29:56

not bad at all!

The message is nice, and the music is a good selection(credit the author of the audio).
The animation was a bit choppy and needs a little bit of improvement.Anyway the flash is good for being your first post on here, so keep it up! ^_^