I really thought this was an interesting to start to your story! I loved Aurora's characterization, and I think you introduced her character very well. The only thing that bothered me a lot in this story was the spacing. Remember to use the "Plain text" button when you're copying and pasting your chapter from a word processor-it gets rid of the huge spaces. Anyway, I think you have great potential as a writer, and I think I'll keep reading! :)

~Rosie

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I had to figure the spacing thing out. I didn't quite read the directions very carefully. :3 In the other chapters i fixed it, though! (: Thank you, very much, for reading and reviewing. :D I hope you continue reading my story!

WOW.I so wasn't expecting all that to happen! Let's just say my jaw is hanging open slightly. It was just the Al thing which made me shocked, I so wasn't expecting it haha! :}
Anyway you have a great story so far and I can't wait to see what happens :}

~BlameItOnTheNargles

Author's Response: I'm so happy you like it! I will definitely be continuing the story. I hope you keep reading and reviewing what I write. :3 It means tons to meee! :D
Love,
Bailey!

Hey, this is a great start to the story so far!! :} I'm so glad it's a Scorpius/OC one, as he is always paired with Rose, Lily, or one of the other female cousins and its a nice change away from that XD
Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens in the story as I have no idea really apart from her probably ending up with Scorpius at one point or maybe James haha ;}
Onto the next chapter XD