Interesting piece. It reads like a poem explaining yourself, but you have such great images and analogies that it becomes so much more complex and meaningful.

I loved a lot of images in this, but I'll pick out a few. The title/first line was definitely catchy. " I am the pen not the paper/understand?" had a nice beat to it. "when I speak I am teeth to the sky."-interesting way to phrase that.

That being said, I wasn't particularly in love with the fourth stanza. It started off well-it had a lighthearted and refreshing feel. But other than possibly the first line, the images aren't as unique as the rest of the piece.

Flow, word choice, and line breaks are great. I can tell you put a lot of thought into them.

I think you may have meant to say "desert" mountains (as in the arid landscape), and not "dessert" (as in stuff like ice cream). However, read as it is written, I find the image of a "dessert girl" quite interesting.