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Urgent! Please help me correct the following letter.

Please help me correct the following letter

Ask for re-arrangement of date of interview

My name is ABC, canadidate number: 123456. I am delighted to have received your invitation to attend an interview held on 08:30 a.m., 4 April 2013. However, I am sorry to inform you that as I have originally been scheduled to attend an examination at the same time, I am afraid that I am unable to attend your arranged interview. As such, I would like to ask for your assistance in re-arranging the date of interview, desirably later than 4 April 2013, so that I can have an opportunity to talk with you all. If you have any queries, please feel free to contact me at 1234-5678. Thank you for your assistance.

Re: Urgent! Please help me correct the following letter.

Originally Posted by chowbarry

Please help me correct the following letter

Request for re-arrangement of interview dateof interview

My name is ABC, and my canadidate number is 123456.

I amwas delighted to havereceivedreceive your invitation to attend an interview held on 08:30 a.m., 4 April 2013 at 8.30 a.m. However, I am sorry to inform you that asUnfortunately, I have originallyalready been scheduled to attendsit an examination at the same timeon the same morning, I am afraid thatso I am unable to attend your arrangedthe interview. As such, I would like to ask for your assistance in re-arrangingbe very grateful if you would re-arrange the date of the interview, desirablypreferably later thanafter 4 April 2013.so that I can have an opportunity to talk with you all.If you have any queries, Please feel free to contact me aton 1234-5678 if you need to discuss the matter.

I look forward to hearing from you with a revised interview date. Thank you for your assistance.

See above for my suggested amendments.

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