Very good, although I liked the first and third ones the best. It was nice to imagine the moonlight sonata playing while I read "My Humble Home". It brought back memories from when I've walked out of the house frustrated. Except your poem ended on a more positive note than any of my escapades did. Ack, I digress. Anyway. I also enjoyed "Missing Crimson" because again, I could empathize with the character. I think that's what I like about your poetry- the real-ness of the narrator/main character. Please keep writing, I've put you on my favorite author list and expect to see more from you soon!

referring to "my humble home": wow. you manage to express yourself smoothly, understandably, and artistically in iambic tetrameter, of all things. this paints a picture both gorgeous and sad. it must have taken you ages to write!