Had this story recomended to me by a friend, who was very shy about the whole ordeal in accordance to your talent. This story really gets you there- to the point of loss and need, and the horibble beauty of hope. And I've been in a situation, different, but the feelings are still that potent, and you have conveyed they awsomely.

Wow. What a beautifully written, tasteful, romantic chapter. Definitely my favorite so far. Their love is so poetic, you managed to capture their feelings perfectly- it didn't seem rushed as other stories do. You did a really, really great job.

I definitely relate to this. This chapter sounds so much like me. Anyway, I like the way you're setting up this story, with chapters in no particular order. I like the characters of Amy and Lain...Lain is a wonderful name. Also wanted to mention the titles of the chapters are really interesting, having "Hidden" attached to all of them. Though I think instead of having the story titled Hidden rain, it should just be "Hidden". Great job, I'm going to go read more now.

YES! An update! I almost started crying. It was so well written. I felt so bad for Lain, I totally know where she's comin from man. I love how you've just brought these characters to life and how you kind of jump around time wise yet lain's feelings always remain the same. Now that's love man.

You finally update! I had to reread the whole thing to remember it, lol. Ouch, super ough, but ooh do we live on the angst...lol. And you write it SO well! YOu feed the beast, yay, lol. Anyway I would say great update but that sounds wrong, lol, meaning you wrote it so well I feel sad and angry, lol. SAd for Lain and angry at Amy. But anyway, you should keep up with it! Great work :)