1. The translation to english is good but not great, there are few words that i would modify as they are surely not the direct/correct translation.

2. The song original singer isn't -Ofra Haza-!!
It was written and composed by -Neomi Shemer- and the original singer was -Shuli Natan-.
Since it was introduced in 1967 there have been dozens of versions and -Ofra Haza- was just one of the artists that performed it, she isn't known for this particular song, and her version wasn't a popular one at all!!!
So i would change the name of the performer.

p.s. Later on it was discovered that the composition is actually partly based on an old Basque folk song.

I have the original lyrics of this classic song in a collection by Naomi Shemer published in 1967 as Kol HaShirim - All the Songs (which she modifies with the word "kim'at" - almost). The stanzas of the first part of the original song (orignal because it was composed before the 6 Day War for the Festival of Song in May 1967) are actually a lament for the old city, lonely and bereft. After the reunification of Yerushalayim, Naomi Shemer added new happier stanzas harkening back to her original lyrics but now the sun is shining and the shofar is blowing at the Kotel. These happier lyrics are now used - but they are not the original lyrics. You can obtain this book which contains music and guitar instructions as well as (untranslated) lyrics for 40-odd early Shemer songs on Amazon.

Thanks so much for this. I am studying Hebrew, and this was a great help!!!
2 questions why "Behold I am a violin for all your songs"? If I read the Hebrew right it is, "for all your songs I am a violin" and I couldn't find "hi'neh" "behold" just trying to understand only 5yrs study..but love this song, love Israel and Jerusalem!!! And really appreciate finding this!!!
"SHA'AH'LOU SHALOM YI'RU'SHA'LA'YIM" Psalm 122:6