I wonder if Seto ever sleeps... well he must... maybe two or three times per week for just a couple of hours XD such a workaholic he is :) The ending was very cute. I bet Seto has a Blue Eyes White Dragon plushie of his own to sleep with, he just won't admit it :P

legsieluva chapter 2 . 1/4/2005

*sque!* HOLY COW I LOVE IT! IT'S SO SO SO SO AWESOME! E! XD GREAT JOB!

Aw! Cuteness! I really liked this. It was...KAWAII! So cute. But...the end? Well...okay. I guess that's sufficient. Well my friend, time is getting late or else I would comment about how wonderful your writing is. Good luck. And cheerio. _

That's really cute! I love your stories, they are so authentic! Please keep on writing!

Greetings,

Kuraiko

Kaze Thorn not logged in chapter 2 . 6/12/2004

*claps* Very good! Please continue.

Kira chapter 2 . 6/10/2004

This was really cute. The only problem I have was that the characters' feelings, especially Seto's, seemed a little disconnected between the first and second chapter. What I mean is, in the first chapter Seto is working and doesn't really expect the phone call. He's annoyed when it happens and during at least the first part of the conversation with Mokuba. He then leaves angry, but during the second chapter his feelings seem to change. It seems as though he looks forward to the phone call and would have been disappointed had it been late or not happened at all. His feelings have just softened a bit too much and too quickly. Still, I really liked this fan fic, especially the second chapter. The two brothers are wonderful together, and you're one of the best writers when it comes to their relationship.

Anyways, like I said, cute. it was sweet and brotherly and probably just how Seto and Mokuba interact when they're alone together. Mokuba having to stay up for his brother was really sweet, made me go 'aw'. Another job well done.

It's just so sweet! They have such an amazing relationship, to know each other so well. I think out of the show that they really have one of the best partnerships going. I mean, they depend on each other so much and they share such a bond, it's really touching. I mean, I don't think I would be quite as giving to my little brother to give up my childhood to protect his quite like how Seto does for Mokuba. I love how you write them together though, it's just so loving! *grins* *glomps author* *waves*