You fairly new to production mate? Personally I think you have a lot to learn in terms of sound design, your sounds all sound too undeveloped- the bass and the drums. Keep at it though mate, you have some good ideas for song structure etc, just look into creating meatier sounds with more movement. safe

I´ll spend more time making the instruments from now on.
I am making a new version of the track blackout. If I am able to make, what I have in mind, you will maybe like it
Thanks for the good criticism