A containment site that had something anomalous happen to it, and so now has a humanoid population inside of it acting out rudimentary versions of Foundation protocols? That's interesting.

Special Containment Procedures written in a rambling, grammatically fragmented style that is overtly goofy? Less so.

I think you have a good idea, but the documentation goes against the mood you set up with the descriptions before it. When I opened that collapsible, I was expecting something serious, and was disappointed to find it wasn't.

I found the documentation fit well with the rest of the article. Like you said, they carry out rudimentary versions of Foundation protocols, so would it not also make sense that their documentation was also rudimentary?