This was so freakin' adorable! My guess is, Rinka, right? Though it is a funny concept that Chiba was intimidated when she was standing on her toes, seeing the height difference and all. Keep up the great work!

Definitely life what you've done with the characters. Their personalities are spot on. I would say that this was written from Rinka's POV, but for the comment at the beginning where the narrator says that they're not too good with kanji, which is about the only thing I'm sure that Rinka's awesome at.

It seemed pretty obvious to me that it was Himeji Rinka. But maybe I'm wrong...? '' Great story!

1337 chapter 1 . 6/9/2010

HEARTS, BECAUSE YOU WRITE THE MOST OBSCURE PAIRINGS FOR THE MOST OBSCURE FANDOMS AND YOU WRITE THEM SO WELL AND YOU MANAGE TO MAKE THEM WORK AND THANK YOU, PLEASE ACCEPT MY SOUL AS REPAYMENT, BECAUSE I'VE BEEN LOOKING EVERYHWERE FOR SOME YANKEE-KUN TOU MEGANE-CHAN FANFICTION FEATURING ADACHI AT THE CENTER (as she should be).

I can totally see this happening in the actual manga, so good job writing it all out. Is it Himeji (Hana's right hand man?). She's the only one I know that likes Shiangawa (so far!) and she also calls Adachi Hana-san, right?

The necessary (and long-overdue) Adachi-love was so suffocatingly sweet. And by that, I mean I love you

Seriously though, Chiba/Adachi deserves more love/attention.

I don't know about the POV. Maybe one of the guys that likes Adachi? I would almost, actually, bet Miyazaki (if only for the "adorable" comment on Kagawa. But then he doesn't like Shinagawa, right? ...Or does heZ xDD

OH WAIT, is it HIMEJI RINKA? *feels stupid*

Akkun chapter 1 . 6/9/2010

Love how you had the dialogue, and then the snarky remarks by the narrator. I think the narrator is Kumakasa? That girl in the beginning of the story? But does she like Shinagawa? Or does he just remind her of the guy she likes? Great job, I like your writing style!