Pure Love (short-story) Part 1

Hello friends,IKRS fans this is my first ff so plz support me ….. In my ff it is the story from when viplav has confessed his love to Dhanni..
Viplav is following dhanni as she walks towards the temple, she feels strange and turns back a few times but later ignores. viplav thinks to himself as to why he does not have courage to go forward and speak to her.Dhanni is unable to digest the fact that viplav has proposed her and unknowingly dashes phool chand. he comments on her saying come a bit more closer and hearing this viplav takes a heroic entry,and tells why don’t i take my hand closer to ur cheeks and goes to slap him, dhanni stops him and tells him to leave him as she can handle matters viplav shouts saying by keeping quiet or ignoring it the pain will not lessen. She starts to walk away and viplav tells that he loves her and cannot see her in pain. dhanni looks at him and they have an eye-lock dhanni ells him to forget her as she does not want to love any body, and wants hi to leave as he is the reason of all her pains. viplav is very hurt and silently leaves .

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