Looks beautiful.Lines and hatching are superb as always.However, on the "Paul is Dead" thing, there are some posing issues.His feet and legs could technically be in that position,but it would be terribly uncomfortable,and his upper body would have to be twisted much more.However the expressions in that character study are absolutely fantastic.

akuma616 wrote:Looks beautiful.Lines and hatching are superb as always.However, on the "Paul is Dead" thing, there are some posing issues.His feet and legs could technically be in that position,but it would be terribly uncomfortable,and his upper body would have to be twisted much more.However the expressions in that character study are absolutely fantastic.

I love constructive criticism. Thank you luv! Yes… the legs are a bit of a failed experiment. I’ve gotten pretty good at anatomy, but not foreshortened or motion based anatomy so…yha…I’ll work on that.

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'Paul is Dead' Cover 2James Kite (aka- John)- Newest member of the L.H.C.B

*giggles* thank you. I’ve been overhauling my figure study and body development style so it’s nice to think it might be paying off.

And in a way I suppose I am- depends on what you mean by ‘aspiring’. In this context, I’m really more of an aspiring illustrator/ comic book artisan. My art is a bit of an animal of its own and I make a point not to crossbreed the two anymore.

BrokenLine wrote:Great character interaction! both in an artistic and story telling sense.

Well good- to be honest the figures still feel a bit stilted to me. Maybe it’s the angle (or the lack there off). But hell I’ll take a story development complement any day of the week *huggles for chu*

As I have come to expect, more excellent work Gigi.Your lines are clean and sharp as always. The oneproblem which stands out to me is that, in the last picture, the back leg of the crouching man looks like an afterthought. Beyond that the posing is very nice. Character interaction looks natural.And as with your other work, You render the Figures beautifully through shading.

akuma616 wrote:As I have come to expect, more excellent work Gigi.Your lines are clean and sharp as always. The oneproblem which stands out to me is that, in the last picture, the back leg of the crouching man looks like an afterthought. Beyond that the posing is very nice. Character interaction looks natural.And as with your other work, You render the Figures beautifully through shading.

Yha- that’s a good point. It’s a hold over ‘shadowing perspective’ effect held over from a previous style of mine. But you’re right, the more I look at it, the more it just doesn’t seem to work. thank you dear- I love you’re comments!

BrokenLine wrote:cry? no, but i listen to that song and it does start me laughing. ^^ you know all the lonely people? i loves that one to... so many to loves.

Yha…well, the song is a bit sad if you know who it’s about... and as for me crying...well its a long story. Still one of my favorite songs though. their FIRST that was not about love. And do you mean Eleanor Rigby? That’s a classic- but I’m more of a ‘Walrus’ and ‘Lucy in the Sky’ fan. Its so true- there are SOOO many to love!