Dragon Tide Chronicles: Dawn Rising (Book 1) Editing In Progress!!!

The adventures of Danica Crown,who is a fariy, as well as a princess. No, not the cute little tiny things you often think about, but fariys that are as tall as people, if alittle shorter. In this first installment, Danica descovers a person from her past. Someone whose name she can't remember... someone from a race long assumed dead.
Co Author: Kamari

More than six eons ago, the universe began. No one is clear on how it came to be, but theories range from a mere cosmic coincidence, to divine power. The most commonly accepted theory is that the
simple act of Time and Space meeting at one point is enough to instantly create 'reality' where ever it intersects. Whatever the case, as Ancient Aladorian legends go, it is clear that where ever
the universe came from, something... might have followed it.

The gods began shaping the unstructured, unorganized universe into something more. They created galaxies, planets, stars, moons, all of the things that exist in the night sky and more. They wrote
all of the laws of magic and science, laying the foundations for order. At the height of their creation, they created a world, one unique from the rest of the worlds, they endowed it with the
strength of their will, this one planet became a garden of paradise which to create mortal races one day. The gods placed it near the center of the universe, and gave it the name, Aladoria. Its
star was given the name 'Galthedrial', meaning, "The Lady". At the end of their labors, the gods finally stopped their work and admired their creation... while they could. For while they came out
of the void to give shape to the universe, as the instruments of Order and Creation, something else began to creep after them, from the void, born from the void, to return all to the void.

The Demon emerged. Born from the void, for one terrible purpose, that being the end of all things, its forgotten name is rumored to literally mean, "The One Chosen to Destroy". Simply known as The
Demon of Apocalypse, its terror and might far surpassed the limits of the gods, it knew no equal, no master. It was said to be the representation of all that is evil, hatred, lust, greed, malice,
every last cruel and wicked thing was its power, and so began the Battle of Creation.

For thousands of years, the gods and the Demon waged war, the demonic armies of the One Demon clashed violently with the mighty celestial armies of the gods, while the two leaders of the gods, the
Goddess of Light Irintis, and the Goddess of Darkness, Luminta, faced off with the demon itself. After thousands of more years fighting, Luminta was spent, her power drained, unable to continue.
The Demon then sent her aside, she traveled so far she was lost forever; the gods could find no trace of her. The Demon soon turned its attention to the lone Goddess of Light, Irintis. Irintis
bravely fought, but could no longer hold it back. With a might blow, the Demon cast her aside and marched to Aladoria, left almost completely unprotected.

The only defender left was the younger sister of Irintis, Aladimia. She would become known later for the creation of several Mortal races, such as the Fairies. She gazed on the crumpled form of her
sister Irinitis, and knew she had to do something, lest the whole Universe fall. Gathering all of her strength, she split it, soul and body apart. Its soul was trapped in Aladoria's core, while the
body was thrown to Limbo, the world beyond time and space. Weak, Aladimia barely managed to seal away the dark demon's powers, and saved the entire Universe... so goes the legend. However, the
story of this legend has been lost to time... and none now live who know of its dark toll.

Millions of years later, the Dragons were born. Dragons, were created by Irintis, and infused with the power of the elements by the Elemental Gods, their lifespan and strength boosted by the gift
of the god of magic. The first of the mighty dragons to evolve were the Primal Dragons, Hurricane, Vulcan, and Arcane. These three lone dragons would reform the damaged worlds, and reshaped all of
Aladoria, whose surface was damaged by the ancient War of Creation. These dragons were immortal, and only served to restore balance to Aladoria. But in time, new dragons emerged. These dragons were
by far the strongest. They were called Grandfather Dragons, but their long deceased remains are referred to as 'Dawn Dragons' today. From the Grandfather Dragons, three types of weaker but more
diverse dragons were born, Chromatic, Gem, and Metallic. Under the leadership of the Grandfather Dragons, Aladoria lived in quiet peace for millions of years, thus dawned the Age of Dragons.

But, it was not to last. At the end of their reign, the Grandfathers were betrayed by a young Grandfather Dragon named Ramok, who had become corrupt by the powers of Darkness, and mercilessly
slaughter his own kind. No one knows what became of the black monster, but no trace or whisper exists of this age, all myths and legends of it, like the ages before it, vanished.

Despite the odds, the three lesser species of dragons survived and created their own empires, though they would not last. During this brief primitive era, the first humanoids appeared, some very
much in draconic nature, though many disappeared. After thousands of years, humanity and the elven kind appeared, and fairies would soon follow after. As the Dwarves and Vampires came into
existence, Aladoria would once again be thrown into upheaval. A mighty race called the Drackin descended on Aladoria, only three thousand years after the fall of the Grandfathers. They quickly
enslaved the humanoids, and made five great empires, the North, West, South, East, and Sky Legions. For millions of years, they would rule all of Aladoria, unopposed.

About 5 million years after the foundation of their global dominion, three Drackin noble children rebelled from their father, then ruler of the West. Their names were Darksi, Torik, and Orvanous.
The Goddess Irintis looked on the three with favor, and granted them each an aspect of her power. Darksi shed his name and became the Dragonling Alexandi, the first of his kind. Torik and Orvanous
soon joined him, and they founded the mightiest race to walk Aladoria, the Chromatic, Gem, and Metallic Dragonlings. In the terrible fighting, Orvanous was slain; ending his line forever, but in
the end, Alexandi and Torik prevailed and defeated all of the Drackin Legions, banishing them to the heavens once more.

The Dragonlings freed the slaves of the Drackin, Fairies, Humans, all of them. Once uplifting them and allowing them to create their own nations, the Dragonlings departed further south, where two
great kingdoms were born, the Gem and Chromatic Dragonling Kingdoms. There, they would enjoy a thousand years of peace, before the inevitable began. The bloodiest war of history began.

After a mysterious surprise attack on the Fariywoodlands's ruler, the fairies quickly launched a violent assault on the Dragonling Nations, splitting them apart, in two. Though it was barbaric
savage dragonlings responsible for the attack, the fairy king, Quin Crown cast the Dragonlings as devils and savage peoples who only cared for the slaughter of other peoples, and so were a direct
threat. For mysterious reasons, the king of the Chromatic Kingdom, Alexandi, once savior of the people now at war with him, pleaded for peace for many years, but his pleas were never heard. After
countless years of Torik's urging and the growing death toll, Alexandi finally gave up his faint dream for peace and prosperity and began a co-operated counterstrike against the fairies. Their luck
had finally ended, and the dragonlings unleashed hell on the much smaller Fairywoodlands.

For every murdered child, for every wife taken from them, the dragonlings did double, even triple. No longer a people of peace and kindness, saviors of a whole world, the Dragonling's pain and
suffering turned into blind rage, and their massive army threatened to completely annihilate all fairy kind. But, by a mere miracle, the tide turned, and the fairies routed Alexandi and Torik's
armies back into their homeland, and then into the Chromatic Peninsula, where the final battle took place at Alexandi Hall, Alexandi's capital city. There, Alexandi made his last stand against
Elizabeth Crown, daughter of Quin Crown, the king. Alexandi gave his life to buy time for Torik and the rest of his people to flee, the ruins of his own castle fell and crushed him. Elizabeth
attempted to give chase, but the Dragonlings in their last hour, worked a spell that would never be cast ever again, for some magics are beyond replication. They literally shattered the whole
peninsula, much of it fell into the ocean, including Alexandi Hall, and the Dragonlings were not seen since.

During the fighting in the war, Dameus Crown perished at the hands of several Dragonling Soldiers, but his twin, Danica Crown survived. After the war, one last terrible incident struck the whole
war-stricken continent. A mighty hurricane, a thousand times stronger than any natural hurricane before or since, called the Year of Storms, stuck with violent fury, decimating the whole of the
coast. Although devastating, many people survived the incident, though the nation was completely leveled. The Year of Storms had literally lasted a whole year.

But just as the people began to celebrate their very lives, one last terrible incident doomed the King's career as King. A mysterious figure attacked without warning almost immediately after the
storm had abated, battling with Quin and Elizabeth fiercely, before critically wounding Quin with a deadly stab to the heart with a poisoned blade. In the end, the being was sent over the tall
Feltatus Bay cliffs, and was never seen again. Due to the terrible incident, Quin was forced to resign; the people's opinion about him was already deadly low.

Elizabeth Crown and her husband, Thomas McCarthy became king and queen in Quin's stead, and their surviving children, Danica, Ore, and Abigail Crown became the royal heirs to the throne.

Fourteen years have now past since the war, now called the Great Aladorian Blood War, and Danica has become commander of the nation's armed forces. Her tale begins, as well as the fate of the
world.

Thanks SmileValentine. I enjoyed the Curse of Cronos book very much. Keep up the great work! Although, Percy Jackson confused me on how it's pronunced and spelt, Kronos and Cronos are constantly confusing me, XD Someone make the madness stop!!

Wow, I wish this was real lol That would be epic. XD Very good way to start the story off, can't wait to see whats happening in the other chapters please keep me updated. I'm going to keep reading now tehe

I love the detail in this. I would have never thought up something so in depth. It's great!

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Mon, January 9th, 2012 4:10pm

Thank you so much. But to be honest, I probably couldn't come up with stories like you write anyway, espcially vampire/werewolf styled novels. They're not my area of expertise, you could say. XD I'd screw up so bad! Lol.

I enjoy feedback from the audience, because I'm here to make entertaining content, so tell me what you think of a chapter. **Feltatus Madhour, if you ever get to that, I'm redoing at the request of a commenter, because I rushed through it acciedentally** So if you want, you can skip it untill I get around to finishing the remake.

Very nice, and catches any reader's eye. I'm hooked, I love the story.

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Wed, February 1st, 2012 1:38pm

Thanks alot! Me and my freind worked hard on this book, which shall be in a series.
If you are interested, please check out my other books, which I'm also working on, but are not my main focus at the moment, but will be worked on later.
I appreciate any feedback you might have for me!

o_O I see you named a chapter battle at sunset. I named one of my chapters battle at sunrise a long time ago. I guess great minds think alike.

Okay, now it is time to get serious. This is pretty good for a prologue. It reminds of a past user. Are you in any way, shape, or form related to a user called Zorbo123? Your writing style is somewhat similiar to his. Take that as a high compliment.

I would ignore Pon an Zi's comment. If there is any problem with your length, it's too short. Personally, I think it is a great size for a prologue. 3 out of 6! I would consider that an insult. I would say a 5 or at least a 4 fits you better.

I didn't find any quick glance errors. It is basically you like it or don't like it. I can't really complain too much about anything. Remind me in a week to read some more of this. Sometimes I forget when I have time to.

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Wed, February 29th, 2012 1:39pm

I am not related to a user named Zorbo123. This is my only writing website account. Thanks for your opinion! I will have to take a look at your writing some time.

I have been meaning to get started on this, but I been writing and other things. I have a lot of catching up to do. I will get started as soon as possible.
Onto the story. So far I like how it starts. I love fantasy becasue so many things are possible. Looking forward to get into thsi further. ^_^

Usually, or sometimes, I don't read stories like this because they make me feel really dumb because I don't have a British accent and/or my imagination hasn't taken me as far as finding a dragon in a mythical place. But this is so freaking EPIC!!! And I know this comment is kinda useless now, since everyone who reads this book automatically falls in love with it anyway. :)

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Sat, April 7th, 2012 2:13pm

Thanks alot for taking the time to read this! Hope to see more of Aquatic!

Hey there^^ mmm Dragon Tide Chronicles :) I love how you begin this story with history, it really helps one to get the whole picture in mind. I do believe its a good start and seems well thought through so I won't mind reading on^^. 44 chapters? How did u get this far I mean wow its a lot your mind must blowing with ideas^^ anyway great start, love it!

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Tue, May 15th, 2012 1:15pm

Heh, I've been working on this with another booksie member, Kamari for a while, I think since 2007... We've had a long time to think about this book. *somewhat because I kept forgeting to write chapters early on, I finally got my act together when I posted Dragon Tide to Booksie.*

This entire book series has been thought out, from book 1 to the very last. Still, the history seen here is only a small part, there are many more events not covered in great detail, that will be addressed in 'short stories'. DT Aladorian Blood War: Noble Team covers the war between the dragonlings and fairys, at least one part of it, anyway.