Is this really a problem for you? I'll do it, I just find the wiki format difficult to work with and wait until submitting. It hasn't been a problem for anyone else.

Edit: I still can't see what could possibly cause you to decide that once you'd already opened it up, it would be easier to close it and come back later rather than just spend the 30 seconds reading it, but I've sandboxed it for you. Looking forward to your feedback.

This is rather short, your image is clearly computer generated and Google Docs is a really odd format to keep a draft. Your idea also isn't very interesting or novel, being that it's just an animate object that murders people. Sorry, but it's well trodden ground.

I hear what your saying, thanks. The shortness is intentional, since many SCPs have used short and blunt explanations to create horror, but I can try and add in a few more ideas. I take it from your answer that this isn't worth submitting either way, though.

Edit: I thought the "don't talk about it" mechanism was pretty original, that didn't do anything for you?

Edit2: Gave the picture its original background back, should solve the cg-look problem.

Short and blunt doesn't always work unless you're using a very unusual, powerful concept, which you aren't. (And even then, it's something of a toss-up.) Your article will need to stand on the strength of your ability to tell a story.

Regarding the "don't talk about it mechanism"… I'm sorry, but that's actually so common that it has its own tag: infohazard. That's not to say it's a bad idea; you just can't rely on the idea alone to scare your readers.

It's too short. The beginning has potential — I had assumed the image was that of an ordinary diving suit until the description mentioned its head, at which point I saw it and the picture went way up in creep factor for me — but overall, it's pretty "meh". It's just a vampire in a diving suit. Try making it do something other than just drink your blood, and/or write interview or experiment logs to give us a better feel of how scary it must be on the receiving end of its attack.

Also, Google Docs won't help you when the time comes to make the real page. Learning to wiki format is important. See How to Write an SCP.

I do understand and can use the wiki format perfectly well, I just find it awkward and distracting to write an entire article in it. For the sake of a quick review, leaving it alone saves me a fair bit of time without inconveniencing you at all, although Ihpkmn seems to disagree.

I addressed the reason for shortness above, but thanks for seconding and giving suggestions. I'll think of some more to add in. Good that the picture is helping and it creeped you out a bit, anyway.