I may be in love with your writing. Possibly. Hell, yes I am xD. Ozai forgetting his inner fire and wondering at how the avatar could be so cruel and being amazed at how torturous it is AND you presented him with emotion . KEEP WRITING !

L-O-V-E. The angst and the idea of this is brilliant. I feel like a regretful Ozai is a bit OC but then again these are his inner thoughts and I personally always love humanity over omnipresence. Keep writing!

I like that. A lot of people have something against parents in Avatar-verse. I think some writers need lessons in Airbender philosophy. Everyone can change, everyone deserves a chance, even if they have to spend their lives imprisoned, they CAN change for the better, show a little remorse.

wow. That was haunting, but in a good way. I like it! :) It flowed nicely, the words and everything. There wasn't a moment when I didn't know what was going on. Very nice, almost makes you feel a little sorry for ozai even though he was such a ruthless jerk.