Well, you've gone and done it again. Two chapters in, and I'm officially hooked on this story! Which is great considering that "Unlocking the Gatekeeper" is winding down. I feel like you have another fantastic original story planned, so I'm just going to say that I'll be here to R&R!

Amazing! This is truly a great story with an original plot and good characterisation. I'm amazed at what your creative mind can conjure up. I hope you continue this fan fiction. There are a lot of things in this story that I would like to know and I'm curious on how you're going to explain all the things that need to be clarified. You've got an exceptional talent and I'm sincerely grateful for sharing your talent to us, your readers. I hope you write more and know that we will support you!

Looovvvveee it! (Weezie from dragon tales voice) The first chapter was rather depressing but you completely cheered me up with the second. Kudos on making two different chapters with such different emotions run so smoothly together, that takes talent! I hope you add on to it a bit, maybe show some flashbacks of the war or maybe having Lucy telling stories about it to Levy. Great story! ginger

No matter how much I try, I just can't imagine Natsu with long hair and a beard. It's just close to impossible for me without him looking like Gildarts in one way or another...

I ALMOST CRIED WHEN I READ HOW MANY HAD DIED TTTTATTTT YOU SHOULD MAKE A SHORT CHAPTER OR AT LEAST A SLIGHT FLASHBACK TO THE WAR. By the way, how come Natsu never heard of the war? I mean if multiple guilds were in it he must've at least heard rumors. Oh, did Blue Pegasus, Lamia Scale and the other guilds fair better than Fairy Tail? I'm curious. Also at least preview Erza and Jellal once :D I'd love to see how they're doing :D