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Wednesday, January 22, 2014

Pitch Wars ALT: LL-1 ICE FLOWERS IN WINTER

MENTOR: Susan Spann

FIRST
ALTERNATE: Aimie Runyan

TITLE: ICE FLOWERS IN WINTER

CATEGORY/GENRE: Adult Women’s/Historical Fiction

WORD
COUNT: 81,000

PITCH: In
1667, an orphan, a baker, and a farmer’s daughter answer Louis XIV’s call for
“mail-order” brides to marry settlers in the Canadian colonies; upon their
arrival, the women must rely upon one another, and their unusual friendship, to
find the strength to survive--and blossom--on the frontier.

Rose
Barré scoured the floor on her hands and knees, her once fine hands now raw and
bleeding, as she tried to rid the small room of the stench. The battle was
futile. One clean cell would not mask the stink of filth and disease that
permeated the dozens of others surrounding it.

This was
one of Rose’s bad days where, no matter what she did, she could not stop
scrubbing, even though her officière had forbidden the endless scouring.
No matter how Rose reasoned with herself, she could never get the room clean
enough to sate the urge. She wiped her matted black curls from her forehead
with the back of her hand and moved the brush three inches to the right.

Officially,
the Salpêtrière was a charity hospital for women. It served the poor, the
homeless, the deranged, and—as in Rose's case--the orphaned and dispossessed.
In reality, the Salpêtrière was a prison whose inmates served life sentences. A
well-connected family member need only write a letter, and a daughter, niece,
wife, or sister could find herself imprisoned in the Salpêtrière for life.

Rose was
no exception. Her mother died in childbirth, and when her beloved father was
shot over a hand of vingt-et-un, twelve year-old Rose was sent to live on
her aunt and uncle’s estate outside of Paris, a place of crystal chandeliers,
gilded furniture, and gardenßs manicured to the point they no longer resembled
nature.