um, so I read the doujin all the way here and... there's a tiny little detail I noticed. In the chapter six prologue Naruto is in a prison cell together with Kiba and Sai, but a few pages ago Sai was turned back into a paper and torn into pieces... Something good happened between then and the prison cell right? (please! )

hia year has gone by since i got to watch this doujinshi and now, i'm really disappointed.not only sasunaru relationship didn't progress, i think it's going backwards...i don't know what you really plan to do but i hope it's heading somewhere in near future.( sasuke haven't believed naruto yet, and you go make him forget every thing...pointlesss..)i'm sorry if i offended you. just saying my opinion.