Sadly, I'm out of funny review-like comments tonight. All you get is the typo report. Here goes:

First, the big one. In the title, manor should be manner. The former is a large house.
"Que slapping Fred" While phonetically correct, the actual spelling is "cue."
"If you won't tel me about the Cruciatus curse, how about Avada Kedarva?" Tell and Kedavra are misspelled here.
And finally, there's a g missing from "Scribbling somethin "

Author's Response: That's alright, there is no endless supply of funny comments, after all.