Steroid User

Doc Jon wrote:Just realized that I haven't posted anything in a bit. Most of the stuff that I'm doing can't be shown, which sucks. Here's a part of a little story I was doing. It was a warm up for some of the other stuff I'm doing.

I like the clean lines. The texture creates by the line of the damaged background kind of paint a target on the page which attract the eye. Woukd love to see this colored.

Steroid User

Doc Jon wrote:Just realized that I haven't posted anything in a bit. Most of the stuff that I'm doing can't be shown, which sucks. Here's a part of a little story I was doing. It was a warm up for some of the other stuff I'm doing.

I like the clean lines. The texture creates by the line of the damaged background kind of paint a target on the page which attract the eye. Woukd love to see this colored.

Steroid User

Great rendering and amazing background. O love this page. The only thing that really jumped at me is a feeling that the rubble under wolverine wasn't on the same level as the buildings and Fing Fang Foom.Still amazing.

Steroid User

Great rendering and amazing background. O love this page. The only thing that really jumped at me is a feeling that the rubble under wolverine wasn't on the same level as the buildings and Fing Fang Foom.Still amazing.

Mad Hatter

The Method wrote: Great rendering and amazing background. O love this page. The only thing that really jumped at me is a feeling that the rubble under wolverine wasn't on the same level as the buildings and Fing Fang Foom.Still amazing.

You are right. They are not on the same level as the buildings. In the story, Fin Fang Foom makes a hole in the street...I know, a cover idea that ACTUALLY has some of the story plots in it? So we are actually looking at them from inside a hole in the street. I "hinted" at street level with the lines at FFF's right forearm and buttocks. I didnt want to get real detailed because its in the smoke. But it would be wise for me to note something like that for a colorist if this were actually going to print. Good eye.

Mad Hatter

The Method wrote: Great rendering and amazing background. O love this page. The only thing that really jumped at me is a feeling that the rubble under wolverine wasn't on the same level as the buildings and Fing Fang Foom.Still amazing.

You are right. They are not on the same level as the buildings. In the story, Fin Fang Foom makes a hole in the street...I know, a cover idea that ACTUALLY has some of the story plots in it? So we are actually looking at them from inside a hole in the street. I "hinted" at street level with the lines at FFF's right forearm and buttocks. I didnt want to get real detailed because its in the smoke. But it would be wise for me to note something like that for a colorist if this were actually going to print. Good eye.