Hi there, Mizu no Kokoro. This is a lovely poem you're written. I love the black and silver images it lends to my mind as I read it. Beautiful and eloquent.

I quite appreciate you leaving a comment on my poem "Passive". However, it is with much regret that I must inform you that it has been half a year since I decided that I was no longer able to write at FictionPress due to unavoidable circumstances. But be sure to keep writing, because I will CERTAINLY continue reviewing!