tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2379251804913017590.post29026822826423952..comments2009-02-16T11:27:34.785-08:00Comments on 4in1blog: the performanceLisaDJenkinshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15278850917908178708noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2379251804913017590.post-68238036680089966302009-02-16T11:26:00.000-08:002009-02-16T11:26:00.000-08:00You just need a little work on commas, quotes and ...You just need a little work on commas, quotes and continuity with verb tense. a little hint of the instrument being played would be helpful too. Nice work, though!ldjenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15278850917908178708noreply@blogger.com