wow, i love how she watched the people next door because they were normal! i don't know if i like that petunia wanted lily's life at the end, but i thought this was fabulous! i LOVED the part were she promises to hate lily, and she always keeps her promises.

Author's Response: thanks for the comments! i tried to tie in some stuff from the books, like how she watches the neighbours!

sav??? is that the end??? i don't know how the rest is going to go ( is there a rest??) but what you have written here is good!! just figure out some way that you can start at the beginning again maybe with a new chapter and start from the beginning and put more detail!!! not start the story over just add way more detail!!!

kk

Author's Response: Gracias kk amiga!!! your ideas are really good and i think that's what i'm going to work on instead of adding some more right now. im going to edit both the stories! ya that's the end of of HaFFaS! it's only a one shot so it's supposed to be short, but i think im gonna add some more to that one as well.