Not many people here Well,it is a pretty big archive with a storyline,so it would be really hard to comment if we hadn't read decent amount of it (I admire you guys for that)I wasn't too fond of the both artstyles.Both could use shading,backgrounds and better anatomy.It looks very flat at times,even most rudimental shading would be drastic improvement.

But it is indeed confusing to read,maybe a pacing issues,or the art should get a better crasp at motion scenes.I didn't really find it interesting,but there wasn't anything bad about it,guess it's just not my thing.