LOL! Wonderful updates! My stomach churned for them when they almost kissed; I could definitely feel the emotion. And I LOVED the way you ended this most recent chapter! Very cute. They're both relatively in character (Ron is too, for that matter) which is great. I do like how they've yet to get together. I hate rushed stories. It's important to get your readers emotionally invested in your characters, and I think you're doing a fantastic job of that. I'm eagerly awaiting the next update!

KirstiR u r teasing us they were sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo close DARN U RONALD WEASLEY!!!!!lol
anyway great fic u r a great wroter u shud consider being an author