honestly, throughout the whole story, she pulled her knees to her chest too much, but apart from that, the story was adorable, cool, thrilling, (i wish Kiyo and Damien had kissed more than only once, though) and real awesome. loved it. :)

p.s. did u know that the main character's name of one of my story is also Damien? hehe...

Strange first chapter, why does she seemed surprised when she is kidnapped? Kind of reminds me of the chick in high school who flirts around with a bunch of guys, then gets tagged as a tramp. Otherwise it seems promising.