This is great! It's very unique. For once, it isn't Sauron they're fighting. And the humor had me rolling around laughing quite literally. You write the twins and everyone so well! Poor Auroa. I was feeling like Aragorn didn't really give a damn about her too. *smiles*

One of these days he'll do something and she'll just totally either lose it or say something like "Why? It's not like you care."

I'd love to see his guilt at that. Funny, he's my favorite character and I'm so evil. Haha!

Ah, I've no doubt whatever you have planned will be amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter. You're doing wonderfully. Keep on writing! You've got a story to tell!

This is great! It's very unique. For once, it isn't Sauron they're fighting. And the humor had me rolling around laughing quite literally. You write the twins and everyone so well! Poor Auroa. I was feeling like Aragorn didn't really give a damn about her too. *smiles*

One of these days he'll do something and she'll just totally either lose it or say something like "Why? It's not like you care."

I'd love to see his guilt at that. Funny, he's my favorite character and I'm so evil. Haha!

Ah, I've no doubt whatever you have planned will be amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter. You're doing wonderfully. Keep on writing! You've got a story to tell!

This is getting very interesting. But where is the rest of it. Don't leave us hanging. finish please. I would like to envision her quest, her training as she becomes Idril again so to defeat Kalinan. Waiting hopefully for next chapter.

Author's Response: I'll finish it don't worry. My computer broke and all the chapters i'd typed out have been lost so i've just had to redo a lot.

I guess she must be feeling pretty frustrated at the bits and pieces she is learning, it will be interesting I think to see how a reunion would go with her and her father. This was yet another good read, and I look forward tor reading the next chapter

Please don't threaten. It isn't nice. Of course, it isn't nice when we don't let you know how your story is coming along, either. I am enjoying it, please continue to write. You are doing a good job. I'm disappointed in Auroa, though, she isn't very grateful.

Author's Response: Sorry that she isn't very grateful, she will get better but she's kind of been through alot with her mother dying, and getting attacked and being landed with a buntch of people who she doesn't know. I am also sorry about the threatening. Thanks for your review.

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