i really like where this is going! muahaha your so evil making yago and 2face be trapped together ilove it!

Charmed Ravenclaw chapter 1 . 3/26/2010

I'm glad to see that someone is writing a Remnants fanfiction after going so long without activity, although I must admit it's not particularly well-written. I think you really rushed into the action here. You didn't really set the scene as to which part of the novel this takes place - I initially though it was one of those fanfictions that toke place after the whole series ended, so I was a tad confused. I was also a bit confused as to why Tamara would have such extensive knowledge. And the part of the three-headed dog was really random - how would she know that?

However, don't take these criticisms too unkindly. I mention them merely if you'd like to improve it a bit and I'm curious to see the direction this fiction would go.