I like your writing mainly the poise with which you handle the characters. In this one shot, Malik is bold and unafraid, regardless of the Christmas conventions, to express his thoughts/views. Not many take that risk but you do and I think that’s why your one shot exemplify a life of their own. Brilliant work.

Daw, well, this one was sweet, too! I didn't think it was too OOC...I mean, he still hated Christmas and all XD I loved the ice-skating bit anyways, and the fact that Malik uses Kaiba as a shield from snowball fights!