Excellent story so far! I love Hatter's "mad" ramblings to himself while he's taking care of Alice. It was great how you segewayed into his POV from the Queen's in the first chapter with the "BANG". Great start there.

Can't wait to see what else the evil Queen has cooked up for our two heroes! :)

Loved the chapter, I thought it was a perfect way to move Alice and Hatters characters into something else. They needed something to unstick them from their current juxtapositions. I very much look forward to the next chapter.

I was hoping you would let Alice get her hearing back when Hatter was in the middle of a rant. Lovely fluff! That last line was great. Hoping for more!

Geminii524 chapter 2 . 5/31/2010

Thank you for writing such a wonderful alternate ending! I could so totally see that happening. I loved their conversation, you were right on. I could definitly read more chapters if you were up for it ;) !

This is good, I like your Queen. Alice's deaf situation haven't seen that before so I'm very interested in your story. Since this is original and clever, I can't wait to see what you do to other characters.