I was surprised and excited when I saw a new addition to the Vagrant Story archive, and I knew that I had to read it, beginning to end, and boy, am I in love with this! Your portrayal of Ashley is just so perfect, and though I already know how this part goes by heart, I absolutely love how you gave a look into his soul and emotions, something that seems almost impossible in-game when Riot constantly pulls his poker face. And at this point, Ashley was definitely feeling his emotions cave in, and I love how you portrayed him.

I really hope you'll do more Vagrant Story fanfiction! I'd love to read more and more!