terça-feira, 16 de dezembro de 2014

Austen day 2014

Happy birthday Jane Austen!Today is Ms Austen's birthday, three days to mine and I have to admit that, although I have my head swimming in the closing acts of my new sotry, I cheated on Austen today. Peeta & Katniss are the culprits. I'll get to that in another post.

Today, it's all about Jane.

In these last months, I wanted to post bits of my new story several times but always resisted. It's not wrapped up yet, only a (aleady sketched) chapter to go but big work on revising it. At least one thing I already decided: I'll post the whole story here on my blog before publishing.Today I considered posting Jane's view of the story but the beginning is kind of gloomy and Jane deserves better than that. It's the first time I felt the urge to talk about Jane Bennett and I feel I owe her a revised and complete story - so that means February...That leaves me with... *drum roll*

Chapter
Three

(exerpt)

Royal affairs

"*Eight o'clock in the morning and things
don't look good from up here, pals. A minor accident near the Ville Mall is
taking two of the four lanes and a kilometer ahead, there’s the usual traffic
jam caused by the Olympics improvement works. My advice is do not take the
Yellow Expressway today. If you did, relax and listen to the City Vibe Radio
Station. You're looking into two hours jammed. At least!"

Elizabeth
sighed and looked up through her windshield to watch the radio station
helicopter noisily pass her by. Another morning stuck in traffic... Each day
she had to leave the house earlier just to continue arriving at the office late.

She could
see the Federal Health Institute’s Palace seating majestically up on the
mountain ahead, the Concrete Christ behind it in the distance, and calculated
fifteen, twenty minutes to reach its gates. But if the radio station’s traffic
report was right – and it always was, she would be facing at least hours of
traffic jam; scorching sun over the roof of her car. She sighed again.

Olympics
couldn't arrive soon enough. Rio needed to get rid of all these construction
sites!

Elizabeth
took her phone, loaded Google maps and tried to find an alternative route
crossing neighborhoods. Before the Olympics’ road works there was an exit and
she could take a long ride around the mountain and-

Her phone
rang cutting the image of the map on her screen.

‘Unknown caller’

She twisted
her lips. Jane and her weird little things. Why did her older sister need to
block her cell phone number? It drove Elizabeth crazy.

"Alô?"

"Please
hold for His Royal Highness, the King of Pemberley." A rich sexy deep male
voice asked striking a chord in her memory.

"What?"
Elizabeth answered surprised by the greeting in English. Without noticing, she had
switched from Portuguese and needed to concentrate to understand the strong
British accent.

"Please
hold for His Royal Highness, the King of Pemberley." The rich voice
insisted.

Elizabeth
frowned deeply, her mind rolling in high speed. What kind of silly joke is-
then it hit her.

It could
not be!

She kept
silent for ten seconds and laughed aloud.

The rich
male voice at the other end of the call chuckled.

Elizabeth
felt her cheeks blaze, her heart speed, her skin tingle.

Could it
be?

“Oh my God!”
She said laughing. “Is this a royal phone call?”

“Yes,
ma’am!” Darcy said ditching his long forgotten radio DJ voice, his smile clearly
audible in his tone of voice. His heart was threatening to escape his body
through his mouth and it surprised him. He excitedly anticipated this call but
not this involuntary reaction from his body.

He had
arrived early at the office and went straight to his Security Department’s
floor. Hurst was already having his second cup of coffee and extended him a
thin folder and a reassuring nod of his fat head.

Darcy
nodded back and ran to his office to reacquaint himself to his longtime friend.
Married, kids, address, employment, social networks accounts, phone number…
Phone number! Of course, instead of replying her e-mail, he would call her!

But time
zones killed him! He had to wait five hours. By eight in the morning she must
be up, she had young children… right?

“I can’t
believe it!” Elizabeth was still laughing. “The Poor King is broke! He can't even
afford a secretary!”

Darcy
laughed loud and she marveled at its richness.

“Have you
wasted your fortune in polo matches and expensive horses, my King?” Elizabeth
asked, a smile so stretched on her face that it hurt.

“Your
namesake doesn’t like competition. She has been ruthless with taxes here!”
Darcy answered.

“I cannot
believe it!...” Elizabeth said.

“I couldn’t
believe when I got your e-mail.” Darcy answered.

“Is it
really you, friend?” She insisted.

“Your Little Prince of Pemberley, the most
presumptuous guy in all England. That’s me!” He said.

“The one
who didn’t show up for my graduation, didn’t send a word, cut me off rudely?”
Elizabeth raised one eyebrow.

“Errr… About
that… I’m sorry, Lizzy. Close to your graduation, things got really messy here.
I understood when you didn’t answer my last letters, although it hurt me.”

Elizabeth’s
ears were ringing very low, lost in a time travel so fierce that she could
almost feel it physically, like a Star
Wars’ hyperspace jump. She hadn’t heard anything he said after ‘Lizzy’.
Since her father died, no one used that nickname anymore. Lizzy…

Overwhelmed,
she took the phone off her ear to look at its screen. The facetime button was alight so she clicked it without wasting a
second thought. The screen went blank for a second and she could see a
blackened image.

“Let me see
you.” She asked seriously.

“Huh?”
Darcy asked stupidly.

“Look at
your phone.” She ordered.

He took his
phone from his ear to frown at it and…

“Hi!” She
said blinking and smiling.

“Bloody
hell!” He said surprised. “I wasn’t expecting that!” He ran his free hand on
his hair.

“Hi,
friend!” Elizabeth repeated.

Darcy
smiled back at her and they stared at each other’s face for long seconds.

In their
heads, it played a fast forward movie showing the images of letters, paper
clippings, cassette tapes, old photos, dreams and hopes long lost or forgotten;
all passing through their eyes in a quick succession while they studied the
other’s aged face.

“You are
gorgeous, Lizzy.” Darcy whispered.

“Thanks.”
She felt her cheeks warm up. “I can’t believe it! It’s the first time we see
each other live!”

“It is.” He
nodded smiling with closed lips, both his cheekbones protruding in his charming
face.

“I missed our
friendship.” Elizabeth answered.

“Me too.”
He said and frowned back when she suddenly united her designed brows. “What is
it?”

“I’m sure I
didn’t send you my phone number on the note…” She squinted. “How did you find
out?”

Darcy
tilted his head to the side awkwardly holding his phone in front of his face,
self-conscious by his image in the tiny square under Elizabeth’s beautiful face
in his screen. “A King has his ways…”

“Mmm.” She
made a non-committal sound.

“Secret
service worked over the weekend.” He admitted in a half smile.

“Excuse
me?” She raised her brows.

“Last year
we had an incident here. A hacker got into our system and caused a lot of
damage. After some investigation, we discovered it was one of our own employees
who sold us out. Since then, our IT people have been doubling the security
protocols and our Security department is boarding paranoia.” He smiled
incapable of resisting. It was absolutely fantastic to see his longtime friend
face to face like this, this easy, this simple. “When your note reached me, my
Head of Security checked you out to make sure you weren’t a threat to the
company.”

“Mmm.” She
twisted her lips. “I’m a little disappointed I’m not a threat…”

He
chuckled.

“Are you
allowed to invade my privacy like this?” Elizabeth asked.

“I’m sure
we didn’t do anything illegal. Social network profiles, cybernetic tracks…” He
shrugged. “You left me a trail of bread crumbs, Lizzy.”

“I did?”
She asked worried.

He nodded.
“I can only thank you. It’s great to have finally found you again.”

“Not that
you had been looking for me… After all, you ditched me in the past.” She
accused him.

“I’m to
blame, I have no excuse. But can I explain myself?” He asked.

“Please do.
Not that I have anything better to do than hear whatever story you have for
having broken my heart…”

Darcy touched
his fist to his heart and sighed. Elizabeth giggled and attached her phone to
the dashboard holder.

“Where are
you? In a car?” Darcy squinted.

She nodded.
“Traffic jam. Another… Rio is impossible these days. Between World Cup and
Olympics, what we have left of the city is either a huge traffic jam or a work
site.” She took the phone from the stand and showed him her windshield.

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I´m a 30+ years old Brazilian architect who has found a soft spot for Pride and Prejudice's Mr Darcy. After years reading lovely stories about him and Lizzy I decided to try my hand writing and loved it. Now I just can´t stop.