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Michelle Vidotto said on October 9, 2016

Great job, Sara! You did a fantastic job adding descriptive adjectives your mystery fill in the blank story, such as, “sunny, morning bike ride, and running in the cattails.” By using descriptive adjectives this makes your story more interesting. Your story followed a logical sequence of events to solve the mystery of the missing dog, Lexie to be located under the porch. Creative name for the dog as well. You read your story clearly and with expression. Terrific job using the Book Creator App for the first time as well. Your font colour was easy to read and your pictures related well to your story. Excellent job and keep working hard! 🙂