wow. thats ...overwelmingly amazing. the amount of heartfelt emotion it holds is just incredible. also i can relate a painful amount, you put it all so beautiful & bitter. i love: "unplug you're halo" fantastic images. really deep, touching and wonderfully written poem- great piece.

Stunning poem. I loved the feelings conveyed, the title was gorgeous (Gossamer is one of my favorite words),and everything just...flowed. I espeicially liked the "I unplug your halo" 're in my favorites!
Yours in awe,
jalisco-psyche

This is just so sad. *sniff sniff* I can relate to it too. Wonderful work here. Only mistake I saw was this:
"hiding the truth beneath the gilt"
Other than that the emotion and everything meant to be in a poem is here. Keep it up!
~Hawke