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Review:

Trundlebug says:That's an excellent bit of Tom Riddle there, I liked the closet sociopath hidden inside the politician persona we all know and love. Very enjoyable to read.

Amaya is a good OC, with plenty of good qualities to go with her obvious Slytherin traits. The story makes me wonder whether she will get what she wants. But I think that if she does, she might find out that wants are sometimes dangerous after you finally acquire them.

You've a good voice and a way of making your characters engaging. You wrote this as a story you want people to read, and that's always attractive. To me, at least.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review! I;m glad you like the characters and story!