So cute. :) I normally don't go for songfics because most of the time, people just stick chunks of lyrics into the story without really connecting it, but this story was different. You did a Fantastic job of letting the story combine with the song and give us something really wonderful as either a stand-alone fic for people who don't really know the song, or as a piece based upon a set of lyrics. Really, I can't thank you enough for doing this... I can't find many other authors who do...

And first person like this can be quite hard to pull off without sounding stilted, but you did a pretty good job with that as well.