I really do like this, and IF you were to continue it, I would read it. I like the form and expressions of each character and it gives you a vibe of what type of character they are in their characteristics. Even the most simple mistakes or not perfect anatomy makes the comic look fun. The font you used looks like it belongs there and not out of place. You spelled the word 'Finally' wrong though, sorry, it was bothering me xD Other than that, it looks great and very individual. I have yet to see a comic, or story with the plot of "Patrolling and rescuing Pokemon". It's similar to the Pokemon Rescue Team series, but as far as we know, there are no guilds. (: Hope this helped. Love your art!

Third panel, where it appears to be that the bottom left bubble is read before the upper right bubble is awkward bubble placement. If that makes sense. Like, I naturally read the "Hey! I can totally have --" bubble before the "Like you know how to have fun, Tiny" bubble and it didn't make sense that way. Then I realized I was supposed to read it the other way around. The first-read bubble should be top left and the second should be lower, and on the right of it. Does that make sense? Idk if that makes sense. You could look up how to make comics easily readable. That could help.

Also, bottom panel is huge for no good reason. The entire left side of it is blank.

Other than that, seems good. The art is nice and emotions are conveyed well. I wouldn't know about plot since this is just the first page, but it seems like it could go places. Personality is shown. It's good.