Once again, well written to say the least. I enjoyed the multiple perspective.

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As far as deaths were concerned, I commend you for giving Kurumi a realistic death. It's just a shame it all happened so quickly, timewise. As for Davey... Yes, his death was inevitable, but as for continuity of the story, I think more should be written. Also for the sake of how the hell Mitsune eats it.

All death and dismemberment aside, the story as a whole, every chapter came together very well. Each character, background or otherwise, were portrayed very well, even if they had one-liners. I liked that you gave each one personality. The action and violence was pretty good, it didn't come off as unrealistic. Good writing.But there needs to be an epilogue. I understand it's very lengthy story, but it ended so abruptly.

It's been a long time since I've read this story, but I do vaguely remember Kurumi's character, and seeing her killed off like that really, really sucked, because I'm pretty sure I liked her.

I'm not given any good options, really, because there's no "redo", but if I have to pick between the two, I'd say continue. If I said "stop" and this was the final chapter, it would be a pretty anticlimactic one, so the best option is to give it a proper conclusion. Even if I don't like it.

I...really don't remember where this story was going or anything, to be honest. But I was asked to read it, and I did... so here we go...

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Sorry, I have to get the critiques out of the way first.

1.) At the start of the story you're constantly forgetting whether you were going with 'Dom' or 'Don', probably because said character is a paper-thin clone of a certain someone who shall totally remain nameless and anonymous like Michael Knight. Yeah. Of course, this isn't helped by the fact that you introduce F&F characters later on, leading to a situation with two Doms. One more Dom and you could have a Jet Stream Attack!

2.) I was so glad that you asked for advice on guns before posting this...then I read it and find out that you didn't actually take it to heart. As a gun owner and WWII firearms enthusiast I can't respect you if you try to tell me that an Uzi has a clip. It does not. My Mauser K98k has a clip. An Uzi has a magazine.

3.) Speaking of guns, I love how no one's surprised that the crew after Han is wielding Uzis but Davey flips his shit at his passenger having a piss-poor police-issue Nambu M60. Uzis in Japan? Aw no worries mate that's common stuff! BUT HEAVEN FORBID SOMEONE GETS THEIR HANDS ON A .38 CALIBER REVOLVER THAT THE POLICE USE!

4.) Bullets don't set off airbags. Seriously, no joke. There've been people who've shot up 'Vette airbags with 12-gauge shotguns to no effect.

5.) It is not physically possible for a lorry to be driving the wrong direction on C1. Likewise, Google has a complete reference of all the roads in metro Tokyo. Had you put a little effort in you could have actually put real road names in instead of using 'real' names for the Expressway but then creating obvious American names for the surface streets.

6.) "The Z driver was killed – killed so hard, he died to death."

If you've got something written up, feel free to keep going... but personally I'm just confused. That's what happens when there's that huge a gap between chapters I guess.

The epilogue is great, it's the perfect ending to this story. The story as a whole was one amazing ride, I enjoyed it the whole way through. As for the epilogue, it was great, and it leads to us wanting more. Let's get cracking on those other stories, we love being entertained

Done reading this whole fic from start to finish. Sorry for being so late with the review.

(How do I type this as quickly as possible so I can get this review done before I have to go out of town again?)

Well, I can tell you that your prose is still pretty damn good. These last two chapters weren't boring. Character interactions were good as always, the writing made for a nice read, the chase scene didn't fail at being exciting, and this overall wasn't too bad an ending to the fic.It did feel a little too sudden though, but at least the last chapter allows for the possibility of a continuation. That'll keep things in this story from just staying unresolved.As for things to criticize, I have to admit the truck "accidentally" going the wrong way on the C1 came across as just a little too convenient. And I guess what N1 said regarding road names and firearms too. American police code being used by Japanese officers in Tokyo was also a little odd, but I guess those scenes just wouldn't have looked right without some sort of police code being used, so maybe it was just unavoidable considering none of us here could possibly be expected to know Japanese police code.The representation of Karie's accent was also hilariously overdone; I just couldn't take it seriously. You could've really just written that bit of dialogue like normal and just let the reader's imagination fill in the gaps, since you already described the accent she had beforehand. It'd have honestly worked just fine that way.

Also, that bonus scene was just pointless.

So, anyway, maybe this fic could've gone on longer, but it ended decently and it'll tie into other stories nicely. Keep up the good work. Sorry I couldn't go more in-depth.

(Status in the list updated, btw.)

I'll try to edit this review to be more in-depth later if possible. Sorry again for taking so long, and sorry to everyone else waiting for me to review their stuff.