fanfiction

okay so my friends urged me into writing fanfiction. But im currently in the phase of writers block. But i have this cool plot and I want your opinions. Here's a part of the story.
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"my daughter, my girl. all the lies i have suffered, the heartbreak i went through, the depression. but my daughter was alive. this was living flesh in front of me. i am her mother. and he took away my right."
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okay, what would you feel if your husband lied to you, telling you your daughter is dead. he says it was for your protection. can you mend what you broke?
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sooooo?