OMG, I have always wanted fred and george to do something like that. I can't believe i ddn't guess that! I was thinking 'omg ron would never do that' and I was right he he he

Reviewer: Drew

Date: 2005-09-24

Reviewid: 133163

Chapter: 1

I just read this for a second time...

Seriously, excellent job. I can really relate to Hermione's character, as I am sure hundreds of thousands of other girls can. You've given we smart girls hope for the future, that we may someday find our own Rons. Well done.

wow this was really really cute. and i Realllly hope this happens in the next book if you lnow what i mean :)

Reviewer: Emilie

Date: 2005-09-13

Reviewid: 132460

Chapter: 1

I just adore your stories! Another great one!

Reviewer: Astrid

Date: 2005-08-31

Reviewid: 131420

Chapter: 1

Haha, of course she's pleased at being right! Very cute way for them to get together.

Reviewer: Veronica

Date: 2005-08-31

Reviewid: 131404

Chapter: 1

Aww that was cute! Good job, one of the few realistic - and really, really good - Ron/Hermione stories I've read.

And that IS exactly something Fred and George would do, isn't it? :)

Reviewer: Deadly_Secrets

Date: 2005-08-31

Reviewid: 131385

Chapter: 1

Ooo that was so nice! Great work! I love the idea of Fred and George writing that letter - firstly, because it sounded a tad bit OOC for Ron, and second because it's *so* like the twins to do that! And the last two lines of the letter is so cute =D.

Wonderful job.

~ DS.

Reviewer: Talking Purple Rabbits

Date: 2005-08-30

Reviewid: 131329

Chapter: 1

Ohhhh... ::sighs:: I'm not much for R/H fluff anymore, but I love your writing and so I had to read this. I blame Ginny for the letter, which was inspired and just like Ron, yet you can see how a sibling might smirk while writing the exact same words and thinking totally different things.

The best line, however, was without question: "They had spent much, much too long talking. She was tired of talking." :D

Reviewer: Erkis

Date: 2005-08-29

Reviewid: 131235

Chapter: 1

WOW. amazing.

at first i was like "that letter seems a little out of character, would ron really right that?"

::sigh::

great job

Reviewer: Victoria

Date: 2005-08-29

Reviewid: 131217

Chapter: 1

I loved this one! At first I was like "I doubt Ron would ever write that..." but I kept reading, it made me laugh! :p You rock!

Reviewer: Sam

Date: 2005-08-24

Reviewid: 130778

Chapter: 1

I love this fanfic! it was really really good! You should be really proud of yourself!

Reviewer: Kiwi

Date: 2005-08-24

Reviewid: 130768

Chapter: 1

Wonderful little ficlet. Not run-of-the mill, yet it works. Entertained me for, like, an entire 15 minutes which is wonderful because I've been bored all day long. Kudos!

Reviewer: Shina Laris

Date: 2005-08-21

Reviewid: 130481

Chapter: 1

It's very sweet ficlet. I love the way you've managed to keep both Ron and Hermione in character and yet weave up such a nice story. I love it a lot. &#9829;

Reviewer: Violet Azure

Date: 2005-08-21

Reviewid: 130473

Chapter: 1

[I want to kiss you. I've been thinking about it ever since we left school. I mean, I've been thinking about other stuff too. But when I'm thinking about good things, I'm thinking about you.]

Oh, that's so sweet! And it's so Ron, especially the "I've been thinking about other stuff too."

I love the chaos at the Burrow. You really paint the scene vividly in justa few sentences. It must be hard for all those men to be involved in something so girly! I'm sure they're probably more interested in the bachelor party!

[Hermione realized that she knew exactly what to do, and she had never been one for procrastination. She stepped forward, tiptoed, and kissed him soundly.]

Yea!!!! I'm whooping with joy as I read this! Sooooo perfect!

[Having kissed him at last, she found that it was like reading a great book or solving a complicated riddle in Ancient Runes: she wouldn’t stop until she was done.]

Woo-hoo! Go Hermione!!! I love how you're making this incredibly romantic moment hilarious as well as incredibly sweet. You're one of the best R/H writers out there!

Nice twist about the Quill. Great invention, BTW. Awesome ficlet. It just made my night seem so much brighter and more cheerful!

Reviewer: Kel

Date: 2005-08-19

Reviewid: 130420

Chapter: 1

awwww.....cute. and hoorah for gred and feorge!!! =D

Reviewer: beck

Date: 2005-08-18

Reviewid: 130307

Chapter: 1

that was really really cute =)

Reviewer: Katy

Date: 2005-08-18

Reviewid: 130262

Chapter: 1

I think that you should make a sequel where Ron and Hermione get back at Fred and George. It would be hysterical! Update it!

Reviewer: Zsenya

Date: 2005-08-17

Reviewid: 130245

Chapter: 1

Thank you for coming up with this delightful future scene. I love it when Fred and George use their brains for true goodness... :)

Reviewer: Shannon

Date: 2005-08-17

Reviewid: 130196

Chapter: 1

Though I've come to expect excellence from DeeDee, this writing has become one of my favorite "ficlets."

Reviewer: Crystal

Date: 2005-08-17

Reviewid: 130169

Chapter: 1

Cute! It made me giggle like a teenager in love again! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Kristine

Date: 2005-08-16

Reviewid: 130133

Chapter: 1

Awesome one shot! I could totally see Fred and George doing something like that...or maybe it was Ginny. Either way it was long overdue. I wish that the story would just continue. great job.

Reviewer: Chocolate Frog Card

Date: 2005-08-16

Reviewid: 130071

Chapter: 1

Great story! Nothing like some great fluff! Write some more!

Reviewer: sara

Date: 2005-08-15

Reviewid: 130038

Chapter: 1

nice going - actually, in the beginning I couldn't imagine Ron writing a letter like that :-)

Reviewer: stefanie

Date: 2005-08-15

Reviewid: 130036

Chapter: 1

had to read it twice over since it was so sweet. it was wonderful!

Reviewer: igo2hogwarts

Date: 2005-08-15

Reviewid: 129983

Chapter: 1

I LOVED this! Fantastic story, you are a great writer. This is exactly how I hope it will happen. Fred and George... ha ha. Great one there, it's such a thing they would do.

Reviewer: Tash

Date: 2005-08-14

Reviewid: 129932

Chapter: 1

Fab...impossibly fluffy.

Reviewer: Delleve

Date: 2005-08-14

Reviewid: 129910

Chapter: 1

I love this so, so much. I kind of guessed that it had been a set up to get them together, but it was so sweet. Lovely job!

Reviewer: Hope

Date: 2005-08-14

Reviewid: 129909

Chapter: 1

That was amazing. Good ole Gred and Forge. xo, H

Reviewer: Lady

Date: 2005-08-14

Reviewid: 129890

Chapter: 1

Oh, that was so adorable! Will it be continued? I hope so...it was simply lovely. Wonderful fluff and all. Excellent job on this chapter, I think I will see what else you've written, if you have written other fics.

Reviewer: Geena Waters

Date: 2005-08-14

Reviewid: 129885

Chapter: 1

Oh, I hope you continue this! I love it. I love stories about Ron and Hermione......Harry and Ginny ones are the next best thing, but if I could only read one type of fanfiction for the rest of my life, I'd be satisfied with Ron/Hermione fanfiction!!!! Ooooo...please write more!!!!!!

~GW

Reviewer: Don

Date: 2005-08-14

Reviewid: 129877

Chapter: 1

Very nice!! I can see the day of the wedding unfolding like this. The way you write Hermione is very solid. But the way you write Ron is always spot on.

Keep up the great work! I always enjoy seeing your name on the update list!

Reviewer: shiningstar

Date: 2005-08-13

Reviewid: 129852

Chapter: 1

That was such a cute story. I really loved it.

Reviewer: Adele

Date: 2005-08-13

Reviewid: 129850

Chapter: 1

Ah! My stomach flipped at the catch in the story. It was adorable, great interpretation of the soon-to-come hookup! OH AND I LOVE THE TITLE!! Haha. 'Sean Connery' would be proud.

Reviewer: Ambereen

Date: 2005-08-13

Reviewid: 129840

Chapter: 1

I love this! It's so sweet. Well done!

Reviewer: Margeau

Date: 2005-08-13

Reviewid: 129823

Chapter: 1

Oh Fred and George... Or was it Ginny? lol, I liek this fic a lot!

Reviewer: Kirameki

Date: 2005-08-13

Reviewid: 129809

Chapter: 1

... Oh, my...

I -love- it! Wonderful, brilliant twist!! I practically almost screamed. Oh, but how absolutely perfect. Ron must've been thinking, 'Mental... absolutely mental. Oh, but that thing she does with her tongue...' XD! Sorry! Couldn't help myself!

Kudos!

Reviewer: Brittney

Date: 2005-08-13

Reviewid: 129805

Chapter: 1

Oh, wow, the cuteness! I love the little twist at the end. You're so good with fluff, and I've been searching for LOTS of it since HBP. I've been reading all your fics. :D Great job!

Ahhh! This is sooo cute! Gred and Forge forgery ha, ha!!! Thanks for the great fic, and for the good laugh!

Reviewer: imation23

Date: 2005-08-13

Reviewid: 129772

Chapter: 1

This was absolutely wonderful. As usual, you've captured Ron and Hermione, and their relationship, perfectly.

Reviewer: Alphie

Date: 2005-08-12

Reviewid: 129743

Chapter: 1

You've put a nice big smile on my face! Let's hope the ending of HBP leads to a scene like this in book seven.

Reviewer: Drew

Date: 2005-08-12

Reviewid: 129739

Chapter: 1

Oh my god. This is sheer brilliance! Smart girls everywhere are cheering because this fic exists. You portrayed Hermione with perfect accuracy. It was romantic, but not not unrealistic! Bravo!

Reviewer: steph

Date: 2005-08-12

Reviewid: 129734

Chapter: 1

absolutely brilliant!! i love your Hermione in this!!

Reviewer: Miss Gypsy

Date: 2005-08-12

Reviewid: 129718

Chapter: 1

*sigh* Poor Hermione! How terribly embarassing that would have been. But what a marvelously fluffy and sweet story.

Nice to see the Weasley family in complete chaos, like usual. Some things just never change!

Reviewer: Akele

Date: 2005-08-12

Reviewid: 129715

Chapter: 1

HAHAHA!!! You totally got me there. I loved it! (And man do I want one of those quills to get me out of class...)You're a really great writer, DeeDee. I've most of your stories and I think they're all convincing and so enjoyable to read. I esp. appreciate the HBP moments.

Keep it up!

Reviewer: Fionnuala

Date: 2005-08-12

Reviewid: 129714

Chapter: 1

Oh my God! This was so cute! I can't imagine how Hermione must have felt when he said he didn't write it! It must have been borrible, but of course he was THINKING it all along anyway and she knows that now, so it's okay! Fred and George know their brother really well, because they way it was written was so Ron-ish! I loved this!

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