A True Angel

This is in response to mystory's challenge. :) My words were enlighten, smile, angel, reflection, and floating. This is dedicated to one of my closest friends; she always pulls me up when I'm down. I hope you like it. :)

Submitted: June 17, 2008

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As I walk along and see my reflection in the cold, crystal-clear lake,

I really like this. It really does enlighten the soul. You have a great gift in writing. I think we all need to know that we have an angel looking over us. You truly paint a picture in the mind that can never be forgotten. Great Job. :)

The imagery here is done extremely well findingmyway! My favorite line: For my sanity has begun to seem like a string that barely dangles...Beautiful! I really look forward to looking at your other stuff :)