I really like this one off, it is very moving. I have often felt this way about Death and I recommend you to read Mr. Death and the Red headed woman by Helen Eustis. It is a childens story. It reminds me of this story a wee bit and It reminds me of a most beloved potions master. Thanks

Author's Response: Sorry-- i'm only now seeing this. Thank you, and I'll keep the book recommendation in mind!

I'm a lover of Poe, and I always cringe when I see people making half-assed attempts with his poetry, because no one ever gets it right. I think you did a mesmerizing job with it, though, and captured the essence of the Raven so well. Very well done. And kudos for not explaining all the symbolism within the text-- gives the dedicated reader a gift to unwrap one b eautiful layer at a time.

Jen

Author's Response: High praise indeed! Thank you! I love using symbolism in my stories, so I'm very tickled you picked up on that.
Thanks again!

rambkowalczyk

2004.11.19 - 01:11PM

1: none - one shot short story

Anonymous

Thanks for the hanky alert. Good story.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you all for the positive feedback! It is much appreciated. I'm still amazed at the good response "Wagner Sky" received overall. I was initially afraid to publish it for fear that it was too cheesy!