I'd like feedback on my article: Easy Ways to Lower Cholesterol at Home

I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!Here is my article: Easy Ways to Lower Cholesterol at Home (must be signed in to view)

You are mixing together medical advice and myths. Cite your sources and use copyright free images. More importantly, choose topics where you have special experience or expertise. This topic is covered by high authority sites like WebMD and they will get the traffic.

Hi, Jinky. There are several aspects of your article that could be improved, but I'd like to concentrate on some of your health claims.

First, since you've written a health hub, you need to add authoritative references for your facts and recommendations.

Next, you say that beer has a high cholesterol level. Beer is made from a fermented grain (as I'm sure you know). Cholesterol is present in foods and drinks from animal sources, not plants.

Another point I'd like to raise is you say that people should jog for one to three hours every morning. The average exerciser couldn't do this without a lot a training, even if they had the time. It could be dangerous for someone who is out shape to try exercising for this long. It's important that you check how much jogging is actually required to lower the cholesterol level and to state safety precautions for people who want to start jogging.

Having said that, you shouldn't even be offering medical advice if you are not suitably qualified. If you do have relevant qualifications, then make sure you add them to the article bio.

What is this bit, "High cholesterol as been said by oldies and doctors can be inherited..."? Oldies?

As the other reviewers say, you need to include proof and references for your claims for the beneficial effects of your recommendations. Writing about health topics is a minefield unless you work in that area. Just regurgitating 'facts' you find on the internet is not the way to do it.

Have you ever had a squash shake? What was it like? And have you got permission to use that image?

Good morning miss jinky Manalo. I like your information about the cholesterol level. Please add the average weight on a person to have those numbers on the cholesterol chart. How much weight a person is to be less than 150 Or no more than 200. Exercising reduce the cholesterol leve. Some people need pills to reduce it. Diet is the most important habit to get healthy again. I like your article. You need to Organize the words in each capsule. The title and subtitles need to be change into capital letters. The grammar need to be change. You need to read the hub pages learning center to read the rules to write a hub. The punctuation is limited in the hubs. I like the pictures. If you paid or are free pictures you can used any pictures related to your hub. Good like. See you around in the site.

Related Discussions

Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article My Unbelievable, Sometimes Horrifying, Ever-Perplexing but Entirely True Adventures in the Film and TV Biz: A Key Turns. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article MBA VS PGDM :Which is the better one? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Does Your Dressing at the Airport Really Matter? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article The bad effects of the internet (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article What is your favourite movies in 2017 and why? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

This website uses cookies

As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, hubpages.com uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

This is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)

Google AdSense Host API

This service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)

This is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)

Facebook Login

You can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)

Maven

This supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)

We may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.

Conversion Tracking Pixels

We may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.

Statistics

Author Google Analytics

This is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)

Comscore

ComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)

Amazon Tracking Pixel

Some articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)