Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Caribou

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This is my first article and I want to know if its good, is in the style of Uncyclopedia and other such n00b-like questions Thanks!--Michaelandjimi 08:56, 19 August 2007 (UTC)

Humour:

6

Not bad for a first article. To make this better, I would use stronger terms (not swearing, mind you) and focus on more cleverness instead of dwelling on how dangerous they are. The dangerousness-ness of the Caribous is well done, but you need to use a bit more variety in your writing. Talk about what Caribous do on the weekend, when one last one Wimbledon, those kinds of things.

Concept:

6

Again, the concept of dangerous Caribous is ironic and funny, but more diversity is required.

Prose and formatting:

7

Now I have done an extremely quick editing spell it is better. Remember to use less commers and that the plural of Caribou (accoding to our good friends and Wiktionary is Caribous.

Images:

7

Like the first couple. Try and avoid using text captions within the picture.

Miscellaneous:

8

Very good.

Final Score:

34

As I said, this is a superb first article. Hold it to your breast (or, if you want more fun, someone else's) with pride. More variety will make this as strong and immortal as a Caribou. Any questions, see me.