NOW in the sequel the have to get together...well not if she is a minor and his an adult...because then Tommy could go to jail. *wide eyed* I don't want Tommy in jail.

Ja ne

Serene

Sakari chapter 5 . 6/30/2004

okay, me? i think, cuz i luv death fics, that the goddess should appear and tri and kill cadence anyway, but the goddess is weak so it sucks the life force out of tommy and that makes him a dried up prune-mummy. then it would be stronger then have it like posess sum1, who i dont care. and tri to kil the others. then judson or sum1, cadence, has to break the idol or stab the goddess with the knife that was used to almost stabb her. lol i have fun doing this. lol

Amy chapter 5 . 6/6/2004

I say no. Then you can take the story in a whole Cadence/Tommy romance kinda direction.

Brittanysr...since I have already read this chapter over your shoulder and you discuss your ideas with me, I'm reviewing this story because your my friend.
Also since I know what you are planning: N0! DON'T DO THAT OR I WILL CAUSE YOU EXTREME INJURY!
Your friend and critquer,
Serene's Magick

I AM GRUMPY-BEAR chapter 4 . 5/15/2004

This is a good story. I like it. You should post more agian soon. It doesn't seem the AI site evry gets many posts so we're all happy when a new story (and author) pops up. Keep up the good.

Amy chapter 4 . 5/12/2004

Still lovin it. Don't get discouraged by lack of reviews, most AI fans only check by here once in a while because of lack of posts. But I'm still here! And i really like this story. And cliffhangers are extremely cliffhangerish. So update soon!

Hey, hey! You emailed AND reviewed my story so I thought I'd return the favor. It was a really great story, even though I don't watch tv shows that often and definately not the tv show expert. However, it was a good story even if I didn't know who everybody was. Keep up the good work!
-Pippin/Ashes
P.S. I loved it when that Cadence girl said 'you scared the crud outta me'. It's one of my many phrases! Lol, thought I'd share.

Amy chapter 2 . 3/31/2004

Cool story. This site needs more Adventure Inc. stories. Excellent plot. Good character depictions. Way to add an OFC that fits with the story. Keep up the good work.

Amy chapter 2 . 3/31/2004

Cool story. This site needs more Adventure Inc. stories. Excellent plot. Good character depictions. Way to add an OFC that fits with the story. Keep up the good work.