I absolutely love this poem of “expanding awareness”!! So of course you have the perfect title! You have managed to say so much; give so much vision and evoke so much thought; in so few words it is amazing! I particularly like our awareness in Heaven summoned up as “Enveloped in Awe” & “Enveloped in God” — such enormous comfort and contemplation wrapped up in those short phrases! Just an AWESOME job on this!