Oh dear GOD. THE FLUFF! OOC of course, but personally love these author creativity, not enough of it, I say! Cant help but think of a young Zack Fair instead of Sasuke Uchiha though.

Please review chapter 2 . 9/11/2011

Please review! :):):)

anonymous chapter 1 . 5/28/2011

While I do find the story nice, I kinda object to the comment made about Singapore. Even with the vigorous scheldue, Singaporean students do not have many sleepless nights. I say this because I am a Singaporean student studying for her o-levels this year.

This is AMAZING. I love how you construct personalities and definitely think you view or way of writing their actions and personalities is perfect. I can't wait to see more of you work, and I have to say you are one of the few writers that make me grin like crazy when I read this piece, because I love Hinata's confident yet-not so much personality and Hanabi's outgoing one. I especially like when people make Hiashi something other than "I'm going to disown you, you failure of a heir". Overall, I like the character developement and will be looking forward to more chapters!