branden

I wish there was a little more definition between the beard and the shirt. The shirt blends into the background, but that's more about style than anything else. Unfortunately, the losing the beard means losing features and expression on the face, in an otherwise very expressive pose and style

JerryBruck

K3nt, I think you'll get even more of a WHAM! if you crop a slice off the left, just to our right of what appears to be a step-ladder in the background. This will remove a secondary, dead-end focus to our left of your subject and concentrate everything to the right. I don't think that shoulder will be missed.