6 thoughts on “Pieces of Love”

What effect were you attempting to create by placing the stanza “Feeling crushed to the touch” twice in succession? I noticed in the second you capitalized the “C” in crush. I figured it was to drive home that point. Perhaps I am wrong though…

Yes you are right I wanted to emphasize the line “Feeling crushed to the touch” again these poems are quite personal and words can weave their own way into a stanza the word crushed is very poignant when we are faced with different experiences and it says it all in this poem.