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So I've been making a comic series that explores some of my fetishes. The thing is, its a bit shit...I've been looking at getting some proper software to do it properly, but I don't have the time, skill or money for things like DAZ 3D.

That said, this site might just appreciate what I've tried to do, so what the hell, here is the first in a series of Bimbofication comics. (The bimbofication is pretty gradual) Here is a sample page...

Note that part 1 is a much smaller file because I uploaded it at a lower quality. I'm not sure if the difference is very noticable, but I can upload smaller lower quality files or larger high quality files depending whats preferred.

The next part may take a little longer, as most of these were already nearly finished, where as Chapter 7 isn't and may need to be split into two. I expect it to pretty much reach some kind of natural conclusion about chapter 12? We will see.

So I had more done for this chapter than I thought, so didn't take me as long as I though, but meant I had to split this in two. Chapter 8 will probably be a short one, but 9 is big...I will probably try to put them both up at the same time as 9 has been finished for a long long time. Should all be up soon.

Ryuman, I can tell a lot of thought went into the preparation of this graphic novel (can we say that? rather than "comic"?). I look forward as to how you are going to resolve the crisis of what happens. Keep up the good work.

I probably have two parts that won't take long to finish, but after that I'm running out of ideas to be honest and the software I use start to struggle with the things I'd like to do. That said I'm open to suggestions at that point if there is specific stuff anyone would really like to see?

I'll probably work on some screens just showing the main characters changes over time as well.

I checked the file and it seemed ok to me, so I've removed and re-upped part 2. Try that and let me know if it works ok now?

Also, regarding chapter 11. I have still some older content ready to go, but I need to create some new stuff to fill the gaps and I've hit a bit of a wall narratively. I realise there is not exactly much narrative involved (Girl next door becomes a plastic *WOMAN*) but I'd like it to have some degree of story to it and I'm aware the last part wasn't so well received.

Basically, feedback is appreciated, as I would still like to do some more of this before I call it...

Great, I will do that same with the other chapters you said weren't working as well. It may take a while as I have crap internet here and takes me a while to upload stuff. Hopefully will be done later today.

Regarding part 10...I'm working on it. Its taking some shape but not sure how happy I am with it. I might throw it up half finished and see what people think... Part 11 is done, I just don't want to skip ahead yet...

I've been kinda busy lately with work and personal stuff, so haven't had time to work on things, so this has taken me a while, but here it is. This part is mostly story progression stuff, trying to give me somewhere to go. Chapter 12 will be following very soon, but that is more of a 'standalone' kind of chapter. Just needs some editing.

Anyway, feedback is appreciated, so let me know what you think and where you'd like to see stuff progressing?

This is a bit of a 'side story' chapter, so don't expect any progression or real story here, its just a scene that I had in my head that I wanted to do...it's somewhat hardcore...Its also using some older stuff that I had made, so it may look a little different, but not much.

This is a bit of a 'side story' chapter, so don't expect any progression or real story here, its just a scene that I had in my head that I wanted to do...it's somewhat hardcore...Its also using some older stuff that I had made, so it may look a little different, but not much.

Regarding Jess's current size, I'm planning on making some images of her various stages along with some stats for each one, so that should answer that!

There will probably be a couple more chapters, but to be honest, I'm starting to run out of steam on this, so more suggestions would be welcome!

Thanks!

The new chapters are excellent. The biggest loose threads right now are Karen and Lilly. What would happen if Jess kept pushing her sister's career to the point that she starts to resemble Jess when last Karen saw her? And Karen, either in rivalry or something else, ends up running into Lilly back at the strip club, and either seduces or is seduced by the younger sister?

Or maybe Karen, by some misguided idea of revenge ends up trapped with Leon, and the rest need to get her head straight and rescue her from such a dull existence?

magnificent... totally outstanding and a lot of work, much appreciated!

would love to see lilly go even further than her sister, maximum fakeness, botox even though she is so young, plastic tits, ass and lips, tats, ribs, cheeks, nose, piercings..you name the whole works.. become the ultimate sex toy and all totally by her won choice, no tricks etc.. purely because she is totally addicted to fakeness and being plastic..

I suggest 7-10 inch high heels, lita boots, pumps. Also situation where she go to 4000cc, than 6000cc and way bigger tits. Make her workout on legs and ass, so she will have them bigger than ultimae barrbie from instagram. You could also pump her lips and vagina. Also story, that average man gets lucky and have all the joy of fucking her.

Yeah really enjoyed this story so far! Maybe the sister could start to love this life even more than Jess, start to transform her body faster than Jess and become even faker, there could be sibling rivalry between them, whoever becomes most extreme, fake and has the biggest boobs wins all, club, guys etc...

Thanks for all the feedback guys, really appreciated. I originally made this just for me, but really glad that others are actually enjoying it too!

I have a few more ideas of where to take this and a few scenes I want to do, though to be honest, I'm coming to the limit of what I can do with the software without causing ugly distortions and making things look worse.

I'd really love to move on to proper 3D art, maybe something like DAZ 3D, but the cost in time and money is a bit of a wall.

great comic huge thanks for doing that for us. Few suggestions from me for next episodes:

1. involve some different body enhancements also, like face, booty, botox, rib removal or anything else that comes to your mind.2. Mental bimbofication as well like intelligence drop, becoming silly, becoming blunderer.3. Make her more dependent on her man not only sexually (like in movie Stepford Wives if you know that and I don't mean becoming an android).4. show us some everyday activities she is no longer able to perform on her own due to body modifications or being silly.

great comic huge thanks for doing that for us. Few suggestions from me for next episodes:

1. involve some different body enhancements also, like face, booty, botox, rib removal or anything else that comes to your mind.2. Mental bimbofication as well like intelligence drop, becoming silly, becoming blunderer.3. Make her more dependent on her man not only sexually (like in movie Stepford Wives if you know that and I don't mean becoming an android).4. show us some everyday activities she is no longer able to perform on her own due to body modifications or being silly.

I disagree with that, why you guys love so much idea of stupid bimbo? My thoughts are, because normal/intelligent woman wouldn't date/fuck with you all?

great comic huge thanks for doing that for us. Few suggestions from me for next episodes:

1. involve some different body enhancements also, like face, booty, botox, rib removal or anything else that comes to your mind.2. Mental bimbofication as well like intelligence drop, becoming silly, becoming blunderer.3. Make her more dependent on her man not only sexually (like in movie Stepford Wives if you know that and I don't mean becoming an android).4. show us some everyday activities she is no longer able to perform on her own due to body modifications or being silly.

I disagree with that, why you guys love so much idea of stupid bimbo? My thoughts are, because normal/intelligent woman wouldn't date/fuck with you all?

You are assuming something you can not prove. Infact you must be intelligent to roleplay a stupid Bimbo. Thats all there is..it´s a role some choosed to play and these women seek for attention and date people depending on their taste and liking.

I would love to do more extreme and varied body modifications, but at present I am limited by the software I'm using and my own lack of knowledge. I'm slowly attempting to move to new, better software, but for now, this is by far the quickest (cheapest) way of me making stuff that I enjoy and can share.

The main characters personality has and will continue to change, as that is a large part of the 'story' here, however she isn't going to become a dumb airheaded bimbo. Personally that route doesn't appeal to me and I prefer her to keep her intelligence and independance. She is however becoming more an more *WOMAN*ty and a total nymphomaniac.

I have the next chapter half done I'd say, but after that...well we will see I guess.

Please continue with your story, Ryuman; I certainly enjoy where this story is going. I agree with you that turning the main character into an airhead is not the way to go for this story (there are many stories like that on this forum). Making her more enhanced, *WOMAN*tier, more manipulative and independent seem more appealing. One can try to bring back her old loser boyfriend into her life. Have her dominate him (e.g. sexually in the sense that he can't contain himself at the sight of her and she can make him cum at will; some cuckold; financial domination etc. to bring out the aspect that she has outgrown him completely). You can also try to work on her appearance, physique (more high heels, make her more fit etc.).

While I, like many others on this board, am anxiously awaiting the next chapter, please heed some advice: take your time and do it right. It's better to take a little extra time and make sure you are satisfied with the end product. We'll all be happier for it.

Just as a heads up, while this is a longer chapter, don't expect lots of 'upgrades' or extreme changes to the characters. This is more of a set up for the future to allow me to do a few more chapters than I had originally thought I would.

Hopefully no-one will mind too much with the direction things are going, but good news is that Chapter 15 is well underway and I now expect to be able to do a few more chapters than expected. I'd really like to push for 20 chapters, but that might not be possible. Should be at least 18 however!

Link to the chapter is belowhttps://mega.nz/#!97IBiRqC!Jva3xawlbQUsv8nbFN8mlg1gboBbN-kyHZCBVW6Mfxg

As always, feedback and ideas always welcome! It really helps with making new content!

Next chapter is nearly done as its a shorter one, but after that I'm tempted to do a 'spin-off' episode that won't be focused around the main characters point of view. I may in fact do one focused around the sister, but haven't decided 100% yet.

What a great story! One of the best in this genre really. A few things that are exciting me for the next installments. What more can she possibly do to compete with Kandi? She's already done so much. What will her sister do next? Change her hair? Did she really get into college or did her sister make it up just to have an excuse to buy her a "present"? So many possibilities.

Glad you are still enjoying it! I realise I'm not putting stuff out so quickly now, but Chapter 16 is well underway! Hopefully I have a few more that I can do, but with regards to Jess's 'modification' I'm reaching the limits of what I can do with such crude software...She can still go a bit further though!

I have some things I want to do with the sister, Lilly, as well, though I'm unsure if she will undergo the same kinds of changes as Jess. I like to keep a contrast between them with their looks, so I think Lilly will probably keep her hair dark, no tattoos (maybe something small?) and generally be a bit less '*WOMAN*ty'.

With regards to Jess's size. I haven't kept a perfect mental track of it, but I figure she's about 2000cc now and looking for more!

At some point I plan to go back over the whole thing and tidy it up a bit, as I realise the (admittedly clunky) dialogue has some typos and poor editing and in a few places character names and details get mixed up and don't track...I know no-one actually cares about any of that stuff, but it bugs me!

If anyone has suggestions for future scenes or character development please let me know! I love hearing the ideas and it helps!

Not far off completing the next part, just some tidying up to do and its good to go. Though its more of a 'part 1' than an actual chapter, so it might end somewhat abruptly. If I put it all as one part though I think it would end up being way too big...

So I had some Problems whit Opening the Downloads too Part 15 and 16, but all in all I read all of the other Chapters. Did I like it? It was need. Some Parts of the Writing was very good. But I want too be honest as an Artist and Hobbywriter. I dont know how Professional you are, but I had many Poblems whit the Visuals. The Point of fiew is very unexiting. Every szene is just a continue of the Story, but its not intense, its just what happend in the Moment.If you Zoom on some Points, ore choose another Angle it would be much more beautiful and hotter. And sometimes its OK too use the same Picture just a little different too pace the thing out. -Sorry if my English isnt the Best.Yeah, In addition, the light is often out of place. It looks like the girl already has cum in her face. It's still only my taste, but the main character is a bit too skinny.Too the good Stuff. I by the Transformation. In the first two Chapters you characterized her as a Person who realy enjoy sex, who is not necressary prejudice about plastic Surgery and thought the other Womans in the Pub are good looking. Also, she did not see the offer to work in a strip club as insulting and you could tell she was paying close attention to her weight. Its a surprising belivalbe Transformation.

Also my favorit Part of all in the Projekt so far was, the Moment she find out, what shes been manipulated too become this, and realized what this wasnt a bad thing for her at all. So she wasnt angry and willing too offer her sister too him for the same Mindgame. I think i would do the same thing, but im not a Girl so I better try too find a girl who would do the same thing.

All in all I wish you are become successful and that you will improve yourself with time.If I can, I read the rest later.

Hey all, sorry for being so quiet lately, been taking a bit of a break from this at the moment as I've been a bit burnt out as it comes toward the end.

I've basically done the next chapter, but I'm trying to get multiple chapters done so I can release the last 2-4 in one or two blocks, but honestly it will be a little while, so sorry for the wait.

Thanks for the feedback, its all been noted. I should point out though that this is totally unprofessional work...its just a casual thing I did cos I wanted to and thought I'd share as people here might appreciate the fetish. I'm not an artist or a writer, so it will of course be a bit rough and ready. I will however do what I can to try and improve as we get to a closing point. I'm hoping to one day be able to work on some proper 3D software and do another story in a similar style, but that will have to wait until I have the spare time and the money (Need a much better PC and I'm certainly not in a position to spend the kind of money required for Daz3d for example)

I've attached a sample image for now just to show that there is some progress...even if very slow!

Hey all, sorry for being so quiet lately, been taking a bit of a break from this at the moment as I've been a bit burnt out as it comes toward the end.

I've basically done the next chapter, but I'm trying to get multiple chapters done so I can release the last 2-4 in one or two blocks, but honestly it will be a little while, so sorry for the wait.

Thanks for the feedback, its all been noted. I should point out though that this is totally unprofessional work...its just a casual thing I did cos I wanted to and thought I'd share as people here might appreciate the fetish. I'm not an artist or a writer, so it will of course be a bit rough and ready. I will however do what I can to try and improve as we get to a closing point. I'm hoping to one day be able to work on some proper 3D software and do another story in a similar style, but that will have to wait until I have the spare time and the money (Need a much better PC and I'm certainly not in a position to spend the kind of money required for Daz3d for example)

I've attached a sample image for now just to show that there is some progress...even if very slow!

Please note that this is meant to set up stuff for later, but given I don't know how long it will be until I can finish that...I just figure its time I gave you something, so sorry, but for now this will have to do!

Feedback and suggestions welcome as always! (Though I can't promise I will be able to change much to reflect them, but maybe...)

(P.S. Axis, she's not bigger, this is from the latest expansion in chapter 16, but I am using some different mods that may change the characters look a little. Hopefully the boobs will all look a little more round and fake now! :) )

Just come across this comic, burned through it all as fast as I could. Really one of the best Bimbofication stories I've read. The only thing I'd like to see a bit more of is the drug usage. I loved the chapter where she started to take coke, would love to see you incorporate more of that but it depends on where the story is going I guess. I like to see these stories lead to the main character getting addicted to both drugs and "improving" their bodies to the point where their lives crumble around them, might just be me though! :D

Just come across this comic, burned through it all as fast as I could. Really one of the best Bimbofication stories I've read. The only thing I'd like to see a bit more of is the drug usage. I loved the chapter where she started to take coke, would love to see you incorporate more of that but it depends on where the story is going I guess. I like to see these stories lead to the main character getting addicted to both drugs and "improving" their bodies to the point where their lives crumble around them, might just be me though! :D

Either way, keep up the great work Ryuman!

I second this but still love this comic and always have respect for an artists vision. Awesome new chapter and am looking forward to more!

Just come across this comic, burned through it all as fast as I could. Really one of the best Bimbofication stories I've read. The only thing I'd like to see a bit more of is the drug usage. I loved the chapter where she started to take coke, would love to see you incorporate more of that but it depends on where the story is going I guess. I like to see these stories lead to the main character getting addicted to both drugs and "improving" their bodies to the point where their lives crumble around them, might just be me though! :D

I may show a little more drug use, but its not a major part of this. She's still 'in control' but I could perhaps step this up a bit...

Thanks for the feedback, it will be a while till I have more, but it's not dead, I fully intend to finish it...though I had originally expected that to be in about 10 chapters...its not looking likely to be over 20...

Ah I see, 17 was the last. Had some nice forshadowing in it and was nice too look at. I fear the Boyriend got replaced. His own failure. If you dont want too share, make at least sure, what you are the one whit the biggest Cock.

Just discovered this comic and, I like it very much. I really do. The rendering is a bit harsh, but the story is here, so yep, your comic is great!

Thank you, and please, don't stop, because there is so much more possibilties that it would be a shame to not continue; and if you lack ideas, I have a few which could please you. I won’t write them here: this thread is not a wishlist, and after all this is you're story! Anyway, if you are interested, I'll gladly send them by PM.

Thanks all! I realise that with the 'program' (for lack of better description) I am using, things are a bit crude, but it does allow me to get more done in the time I have to spend on this.

Had to do a little modding for the lips in Part 18 and they are perhaps a bit much...I could attempt to go bigger here, but the shape is lost even more and I think it may just look awful, so unfortunately probably at the limit there...

Planning the next part at the moment, but hoping to have something in a reasonable timeframe this time. I find it odd looking back that I was thinking I'd be done in about 12 parts...now there are 20 (18 main and 2 side chapters) and I think I could probably do at least 2 or 3, maybe 4 more before finishing. Depends if I can find the story or and further 'improvements' so any ideas or feed back would be appreciated!

Thanks all! I realise that with the 'program' (for lack of better description) I am using, things are a bit crude, but it does allow me to get more done in the time I have to spend on this.

Had to do a little modding for the lips in Part 18 and they are perhaps a bit much...I could attempt to go bigger here, but the shape is lost even more and I think it may just look awful, so unfortunately probably at the limit there...

Planning the next part at the moment, but hoping to have something in a reasonable timeframe this time. I find it odd looking back that I was thinking I'd be done in about 12 parts...now there are 20 (18 main and 2 side chapters) and I think I could probably do at least 2 or 3, maybe 4 more before finishing. Depends if I can find the story or and further 'improvements' so any ideas or feed back would be appreciated!

If I may suggest, as far as changes go:1)Make the older sister more muscular through training, with bigger tits (around 6000cc) and have her get butt implants like aletta ocean's. Turn her into a super- powered, muscular bimbo (much like the transition blondie bennet is making right now).2) Make the little sister vent her frustration through sports, and have her get bigger tits and lips too. She will exact revenge on the mean girls by sleeping with all of their boyfriends, and she will breeze through college cause all the professors will want a piece of that ass.To sum it up, further improvements i would implement are:-ribs removal (just one of the sisters)-XXXL breast implants (both)-Butt implants (one of them)-Muscle growth (both of them, the older sister at physique/bodyfitness level, the younger sister at bikini level of muscular definition)What do you think?

Thanks all! I realise that with the 'program' (for lack of better description) I am using, things are a bit crude, but it does allow me to get more done in the time I have to spend on this.

Had to do a little modding for the lips in Part 18 and they are perhaps a bit much...I could attempt to go bigger here, but the shape is lost even more and I think it may just look awful, so unfortunately probably at the limit there...

Planning the next part at the moment, but hoping to have something in a reasonable timeframe this time. I find it odd looking back that I was thinking I'd be done in about 12 parts...now there are 20 (18 main and 2 side chapters) and I think I could probably do at least 2 or 3, maybe 4 more before finishing. Depends if I can find the story or and further 'improvements' so any ideas or feed back would be appreciated!

If I may suggest, as far as changes go:1)Make the older sister more muscular through training, with bigger tits (around 6000cc) and have her get butt implants like aletta ocean's. Turn her into a super- powered, muscular bimbo (much like the transition blondie bennet is making right now).2) Make the little sister vent her frustration through sports, and have her get bigger tits and lips too. She will exact revenge on the mean girls by sleeping with all of their boyfriends, and she will breeze through college cause all the professors will want a piece of that ass.To sum it up, further improvements i would implement are:-ribs removal (just one of the sisters)-XXXL breast implants (both)-Butt implants (one of them)-Muscle growth (both of them, the older sister at physique/bodyfitness level, the younger sister at bikini level of muscular definition)What do you think?

Nice suggestions here, thanks.

I'd be open to the idea of one of the girls getting butt implants, but not sure I can make it look good to be honest. I won't go down the muscle route as that's not of interest to me as I prefer the skinny look.

As for the story ideas, I like them. Lily may have to use her new powers for evil!

agree, this was the same suggestion i dared to give the author who's doing a really great job. I would see the story like if Jess eagerness to grow was finally dampened by the doctor who says it's too risky for her tissue already maxed out, while Lily can gradually better hold the surgeries. For me Lily is the most exciting character of the whole story and i m eagerly awaiting for every new installment. Since her appearance the plot became more intriguing and Ryuman is a master to blend the younger sister physical enhancement with character flexibility, while keeping the sisters different types. Alongside and as a personal twist i made Lily smoking in most of her pics as in my view it's one of her selling points

I've updated the previous link finally, to fix a few very minor details.

Glad people are enjoying things so far. Though I'm a little unsure on the future of some of the characters. I've been working on some mods to make things even more extreme, but worried it may be taking things a bit too far...

Glad people are liking Lily's story, though I would like to get focus back on Jess, as she is still the main character...she needs a route for progression...

So I've been working on something to make the characters lips even more extreme, but concerned it may be taking things a little too far...I quite like it, but it I could see that it may be too much, so I've put up a poll to get peoples opinions. Let me know!

Appreciate the fact you put this to vote, but if there is any way to limit the big-lippedness of your characters, I hope you can. It would be cool to have one sister enhance all around, and the other maintain her original looks except implants of course. :)

Your new minor characters are great too btw, maybe have them respectively go overboard in the boob and lip categories for comparison and drama purposes. :)

So I've been working on something to make the characters lips even more extreme, but concerned it may be taking things a little too far...I quite like it, but it I could see that it may be too much, so I've put up a poll to get peoples opinions. Let me know!

Maybe you can post test images of these, so we can see if it's really gonna be too big

I closed the vote and have taken notice of it and some of the comments before proceeding, but I'm nearly done now. I don't expect it to please everyone, but I'm fairly pleased with the results.

I've said it's near the end several times now and ended up doing way more than I expected (I thought I was going to finish it in about 10 parts originally!) but I really think it nearly there. 3 more and it's probably finished. Then I will have a think about what to do next...

Next part is very close to done. Give me maybe a week and I'll post it up!

I realise that not everyone will love the direction some of the characters are going, but I've made some choices and will be sticking to them now. This will basically be Jess in her 'final form', with only a couple of chapters to go, though other characters still have a little way to go yet...

Thanks for posting your latest installment of your comic. It was worth the extended pause you needed to execute a high-quality presentation. When you can, please continue. It is distinctly your vision.

with permission of the great Ryuman i would post a modded version of the last chapter with just the pics of Lily smokingI do this routinely for personal view at every installment since Lily appeared in the story as i find her even sexier with a cigarette,although being just a mod there's no expectation.Hopefully somebody else will enjoy

Amazing story. As far as I can tell, this could be an "And they lived happily ever after"-ending, with the sisters owning an ever larger porn and prostitution empire after destroying their rivals. They could also leave all the stress behind them and just be very plastic, very wealthy on their own luxurious island.You could also add a final dramatic spin to it, with their rivals challenging them again, but flying too close to the sun. Or Lily decides to go for a new direction to cover her own brand of fetish.

Thanks for the great work.Maybe you could add some extreme form of bimbofication competition. Due to their mutual envy they keep pumping their bodies up to the point where their lips are so full that they have troubles with talking and are no longer able to eat or drink properly (therefore sucking on sth 24 h a day) and their boobs are so big that cannot anything besides fucking or other bimbo activities...Just some fantasy of mine

I've had a lot going on lately, but in part it's because the models I'm using are now so warped out of all proportion that it's making things difficult...I'm really looking forward to getting my new PC and hopefully giving Daz 3D a try (though that shits expensive!).

I've had a lot going on lately, but in part it's because the models I'm using are now so warped out of all proportion that it's making things difficult...I'm really looking forward to getting my new PC and hopefully giving Daz 3D a try (though that shits expensive!).

I've had a lot going on lately, but in part it's because the models I'm using are now so warped out of all proportion that it's making things difficult...I'm really looking forward to getting my new PC and hopefully giving Daz 3D a try (though that shits expensive!).

maybe need any help, mate?

Going to be a while before I can get onto this, but when I do, definately! Big fan of your work, so any tips you can give would be really appreciated!

I've given up trying to work out how many more I'll do, as I never seem to get that right (was originally planned to be 10 chapters long!) but there is still a little more to go. This is building to the close however.

Unfortunately, due to some personal issues at the moment I have been unable to work on this. It is currently on hold for the time being. I will finish it, but can't put a timetable on things right now.

Unfortunately, due to some personal issues at the moment I have been unable to work on this. It is currently on hold for the time being. I will finish it, but can't put a timetable on things right now.

Unfortunately not. I will probably be retiring this 'software' when this project is done as its pretty old and useless. Hopefully now I have a more powerful rig I will be able to learn some better stuff and really push some extremes. What for that will take and how long it will be till I can do anything is anyone's guess however.

Unfortunately not. I will probably be retiring this 'software' when this project is done as its pretty old and useless. Hopefully now I have a more powerful rig I will be able to learn some better stuff and really push some extremes. What for that will take and how long it will be till I can do anything is anyone's guess however.

Unfortunately not. I will probably be retiring this 'software' when this project is done as its pretty old and useless. Hopefully now I have a more powerful rig I will be able to learn some better stuff and really push some extremes. What for that will take and how long it will be till I can do anything is anyone's guess however.

Thank you! It's quite the ride.

I have to ask, what sort of mods were you thinking? What other changes would you like to see for future projects.

Given I'm probably only a single chapter until this is done, I'm already thinking of the next story, so any suggestion on what people would like more, or less, of, would be great.

Also any ideas for future stories, or angles that I might not have considered, would be well received. Improvements that I can make etc?

I absolutely loved how all the characters acted intelligently and in control about all this. Sure, they were all crazy and they were doing dangerous stuff, but they had good reasons and dealt with it in a smart way.

I also liked how you increased the scope of the story gradually, without unloading too much on the reader at the same time. You started small and kept growing it, always adding small elements until it was a completely different story. That made the whole work easy to understand and also gave you the option (in my opinion) to stop at any time, preventing a hanging end should anything go wrong.

Also, thank you very, very much for giving it away for free. That is a lot of work and I can only appreciate that you provided a massive turn on free of charge. That is very generous.

As to a new story, just some thoughts I had:

Again, please keep the scope tight. I loved the intimacy and the way the story progressed.

If anything, maybe differentiate some of the characters a bit more clearly. Since they change a lot, they can get hard to connect to their former looks. Maybe give each one a color scheme or a unique speech bubble. That might reinforce the power of the transformation.

When it comes to the plot, I love transformation stories, especially about characters taking control of their bodies and turning them into their dreams. The artificiality is part of the process of freeing themselves.

In no particular order, here are some more transformation elements that could come up:

Piercings all over

Muscles and bodybuilding (even with steroids)

Leg lengthening

Pussy and clit pumping

Tongue splitting

Tongue lengthening (Is that even possible?)

Gaining weight for a Brazilian Butt Lift

Bigger thighs

Yoga and flexibility training

I'd also love some short glimpses into the characters' day to day lives, how normal people react to them and how their modifications impact their routines. (Bumping into things with newly enlarged boobs or butts, spent some time getting ready for the day or just pandering themselves.)

Finally, I am a sucker for latex outfits, including bodysuits and masks and I enjoy the idea of dressing down in public but knowing the full sexiness underneath - The lady in the streets/freak in the sheets thing.

I absolutely loved how all the characters acted intelligently and in control about all this. Sure, they were all crazy and they were doing dangerous stuff, but they had good reasons and dealt with it in a smart way.

I'm not personally a fan of the dumb bimbo thing. I wanted my characters to retain their intelligence and do what they were doing primarily because of personal desire.

I also liked how you increased the scope of the story gradually, without unloading too much on the reader at the same time. You started small and kept growing it, always adding small elements until it was a completely different story. That made the whole work easy to understand and also gave you the option (in my opinion) to stop at any time, preventing a hanging end should anything go wrong.

Originally I hadn't intended to go anywhere near so far. I was probably going to stop about episode 9-12 originally, when Jess was fully in her 'bimbo' form, but as I kept thinking of new things ended up going a lot further!

Again, please keep the scope tight. I loved the intimacy and the way the story progressed.

If anything, maybe differentiate some of the characters a bit more clearly. Since they change a lot, they can get hard to connect to their former looks. Maybe give each one a color scheme or a unique speech bubble. That might reinforce the power of the transformation.

When it comes to the plot, I love transformation stories, especially about characters taking control of their bodies and turning them into their dreams. The artificiality is part of the process of freeing themselves.

In no particular order, here are some more transformation elements that could come up:

Piercings all over

Muscles and bodybuilding (even with steroids)

Leg lengthening

Pussy and clit pumping

Tongue splitting

Tongue lengthening (Is that even possible?)

Gaining weight for a Brazilian Butt Lift

Bigger thighs

Yoga and flexibility training

Lots of interesting ones on there, but unfortunately a lot of boxes that aren't hugely exciting to me. I prefer the 'skinny bimbo look. Tit's on a stick kind of affair, so thicker thighs and muscles are unlikely to be prevalent. I may through in a supporting character like that though.

I'd like to play further with enchancements though. Leg lengthening is possible as well as tendon shortening and maybe some things I've not thought about...

I'd also love some short glimpses into the characters' day to day lives, how normal people react to them and how their modifications impact their routines. (Bumping into things with newly enlarged boobs or butts, spent some time getting ready for the day or just pandering themselves.)

This is something I should have done and if I have time I will do this in the future. Its just about how much time and effort those scenes require. But yes, I should add more!

Finally, I am a sucker for latex outfits, including bodysuits and masks and I enjoy the idea of dressing down in public but knowing the full sexiness underneath - The lady in the streets/freak in the sheets thing.

Not against either of those things, so definitely thoughts for the future.

Thanks for the feedback, it's really useful to know what people liked or didn't like. I appreciate that.R

Here are some plot ideas that I've been thinking about recently. If any of them inspire you, feel free to take them.

Two college girls somehow come up with the idea that the rather slobby nerd male student is the next Bill Gates or Jeff Bezos and decide to seduce him to get him before he strikes it rich. They figure out his fetishes (guess which ones) and go ahead. Competing, they enhance themselves more and more, doing their best to win him over. However, the guy is actually just a normal dude. He's mostly confused by what is happening, but rolls with it. Once they figure out what is going on, they have to figure out how to solve this, after all, they've been racking up bills for their looks.

A recently laid-off woman inherits a nightclub/bar/stripclub from her aunt which the family ostracized because of her lifestyle choices. Faced with bankruptcy, she takes her chances and tries running the club. She adapts to the new setting, both physically and mentally. After a while, it turns out that her aunt disappeared for very specific reasons which involve the mob. Also, it is unclear whether she's really dead. The main character does get useful advice from a senior stripper who is certainly not her.

A female plastic surgeon and her investor friend take up a Pygmalion-style arrangement and plan to transform a willing woman into his dream lover. As in the play, things escalate in all kinds of ways.

A girl from a very conservative religious environment ends up in a more open and !sinful! environment. She likes it and starts to change. Then, her family shows up and wants to take her back home. Hiding her transformation is a little difficult and hijinx ensue.

A young woman who is rather ugly and feels unsexy gets together with an equally unimpressive partner and they decide to change their lives, fulfilling their dreams of being sexy, rich and awesome.

Here are some plot ideas that I've been thinking about recently. If any of them inspire you, feel free to take them.

Two college girls somehow come up with the idea that the rather slobby nerd male student is the next Bill Gates or Jeff Bezos and decide to seduce him to get him before he strikes it rich. They figure out his fetishes (guess which ones) and go ahead. Competing, they enhance themselves more and more, doing their best to win him over. However, the guy is actually just a normal dude. He's mostly confused by what is happening, but rolls with it. Once they figure out what is going on, they have to figure out how to solve this, after all, they've been racking up bills for their looks.

A recently laid-off woman inherits a nightclub/bar/stripclub from her aunt which the family ostracized because of her lifestyle choices. Faced with bankruptcy, she takes her chances and tries running the club. She adapts to the new setting, both physically and mentally. After a while, it turns out that her aunt disappeared for very specific reasons which involve the mob. Also, it is unclear whether she's really dead. The main character does get useful advice from a senior stripper who is certainly not her.

A female plastic surgeon and her investor friend take up a Pygmalion-style arrangement and plan to transform a willing woman into his dream lover. As in the play, things escalate in all kinds of ways.

A girl from a very conservative religious environment ends up in a more open and !sinful! environment. She likes it and starts to change. Then, her family shows up and wants to take her back home. Hiding her transformation is a little difficult and hijinx ensue.

A young woman who is rather ugly and feels unsexy gets together with an equally unimpressive partner and they decide to change their lives, fulfilling their dreams of being sexy, rich and awesome.

I particularly like the last two. Both of those would be interesting...

A young woman who is rather ugly and feels unsexy gets together with an equally unimpressive partner and they decide to change their lives, fulfilling their dreams of being sexy, rich and awesome.

these ideas are promising. The last one could be very interesting, it could a brother/sister duo or a young couple who just inherits a good chunk of money. They could start to hit the gym, get surgery or try some very expensive experimental hormones. When the money start to ran out, they realized they're hooked to their expensive lifestyle and the body modifications so they could turn their instagram accounts into something more dirty like the models who post nudes and sexy vids on onlyfans.

Eventually they met other camgirls and pornstars who encourage them to post dirtier pics and vids, could start with light lesbian teasing but turn into full hardcore vids since they got more money with them. They could also have a more open relationships, going into swingers party...

Unfortunately not. I will probably be retiring this 'software' when this project is done as its pretty old and useless. Hopefully now I have a more powerful rig I will be able to learn some better stuff and really push some extremes. What for that will take and how long it will be till I can do anything is anyone's guess however.

Thank you! It's quite the ride.

I have to ask, what sort of mods were you thinking? What other changes would you like to see for future projects.

Given I'm probably only a single chapter until this is done, I'm already thinking of the next story, so any suggestion on what people would like more, or less, of, would be great.

Also any ideas for future stories, or angles that I might not have considered, would be well received. Improvements that I can make etc?

I, for one, would like to see a little more focus on partying. For some reason a slow-burn on alcohol and drug corruption appeals to me almost as much as surgically enhanced 'tits-on-a-stick' stories do all by themselves. Put those two together and forget it! You'd be a legend in my book... though, you're unforgettable already. Thank you for sharing all your hard work!