«Pretty nice camerawork here, and I liked the music choices, really gave it a kinda epic feel. The voices sounded ok but they were far far too low in volume, I couldn't hear them most of the time. And yeah, like Chris says, there was no story here. This just seemed for the most part to be a load of random scenes thrown together. I'm not entirely sure why you say in the description that you only want good comments, not bad comments. You uploaded it on the internet, so you really have to be prepared to receive any kind of comment, good or bad. What, do you want everyone to say the movie was perfect and wonderful, even if it wasn't? Every movie has points for improvement and this is no different. Your brother definitely has promise as a filmmaker but there are a few things he needs to work on. Story is the main thing, and sound levels need fixed as well. Otherwise this wasn't bad, I'd like to see more from your brother. Tell him from me "keep on filming"