At the first look really pretty and amazing. It's look really shiny. The background make Lumen face to look more bright ,also the combination of colors match with Lumen's colours.The shading is really soft. A little advice ,the tone of shading ,not everywhere , should be a little bit bigger than now. The lighting in some parts is more glow than others. You have to be more careful. The "crystal" he has in the middle of his head should glow more , to justify the light rays. About the body anatomy look nice.Keep up the great work! QwQbBlue Out

First I just want to say WHOA! This is absolutely jaw-dropping. I love the linework you've done right here. It's the slightest bit fuzzy but I'm blaming my laptop on this one. I really can't describe how much this piece really jumps out at me. It's perfectly coloured and well worked out. p.s His expression here is so adorable. I need to see more adorable Lumen!!!

I can't begin to say how proud I am of this. You inspire me more everyday when I see your wonderful works. This is one of my personal favourites. Keep doing what you do, you talent filled luck charm <3 Your moon is proud indeed.

I don't know what to say improve on because I love it all! This is my first critique so I'm honestly sure I've made a idiot of myself by babbling.

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I think shades and highlights on him looks very nice, and kinda different from what you did before which is always interesting. And in general I like the look on him here. Pity you were lazy with the bg, it;s not super-hard to do a stars like that with a tutorial, just try and you can do that.