Originally written by Cloudy Skies in August-September 2011, ''Within And Without'' portrays the Mane Six confronting these and other issues in an lengthy, emotionally-driven quest that spans all of Equestria. It was among the first WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFics to blend well-written adventure narratives, character exploration and development, and shipping. It was recently revamped with new scenes and additional edits, all of which can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/18270/Within-and-Without here:]]

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Originally written by Cloudy Skies in August-September 2011, ''Within And and Without'' portrays the Mane Six confronting these and other issues in an lengthy, emotionally-driven quest that spans all of Equestria. It was among the first WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFics to blend well-written adventure narratives, character exploration and development, and shipping. It was recently revamped with new scenes and additional edits, all of which can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/18270/Within-and-Without here:]]

Originally written by Cloudy Skies in August-September 2011, ''Within And Without'' portrays the Mane Six confronting these and other issues in an lengthy, emotionally-driven quest that spans all of Equestria. It was among the first MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFics to blend well-written adventure narratives, character exploration and development, and shipping. It was recently revamped with new scenes and additional edits, all of which can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/18270/Within-and-Without here:]]

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Originally written by Cloudy Skies in August-September 2011, ''Within And Without'' portrays the Mane Six confronting these and other issues in an lengthy, emotionally-driven quest that spans all of Equestria. It was among the first MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFics to blend well-written adventure narratives, character exploration and development, and shipping. It was recently revamped with new scenes and additional edits, all of which can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/18270/Within-and-Without here:]]

* StandardHeroReward: Played with. Before leaving, Rainbow Dash asks if they're going to get something for going on the adventure. Amused, Luna promises to give her anything she wants, as long as it is within reason. [[spoiler: Luna agrees to make Dash and Pinkie's marriage official.]]

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* StandardHeroReward: Played with. Before leaving, Rainbow Dash asks if they're going to get something for going on the adventure. Amused, Luna promises to give her anything she wants, as long as it is within reason. [[spoiler: Luna agrees to make Dash and Pinkie's marriage official.]] ]]* StaringDownCthulhu: Twilight's friends physically protect her from [[spoiler: Luna]], despite knowing they could be killed.* StopHelpingMe: Fluttershy has the [[spoiler: confrontation with a suicidal Trixie]] almost under control, but Dash's loud mouth ruins it.

''Did you ever stop to wonder what became of Trixie, Gilda and Blueblood after your encounters?''''What did these episodes truly mean to you?''''What role will they yet play in the lives of the Elements of Harmony?''

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''Did you ever stop to wonder what became of Trixie, Gilda and Blueblood after your encounters?''''What encounters?'' '' What did these episodes truly mean to you?''''What you?'' '' What role will they yet play in the lives of the Elements of Harmony?''

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