For your very first fic, I'm impressed =]
It was well written, I only picked up an few typos and by a few I mean one or two, so really nothing to worry about
Good idea and I think you expressed their emotions well.
Yeah, I enjoyed reading this
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For your first fic it's bellisima!! I really liked the way Draco's character was portrayed by you, the way he was using her but realised he missed her and needed her. And her pain was described really well, I could almost feel it myself. Which is good if you ask me. I think their confessions were well portrayed as they contained so much emotion and feeling:)
Very good for a first:D Can't wait to see what you could write next:)
-Emma x

Author's Response: First, thank you so much for reading my story! You are my first review!! I tried very hard to describe both of their emotions so that any reader would be able to relate to them.

Second, I already have a second story in progress. Chapter 1 is waiting for validation : )