congratulations my friend really u deserve itits a good poem koz it is full of senses and soft wordsi don't want to spoil ur happiness but i found one mistake that u used 2 negatives in one sentence and i think this made weakness in the line:

sweets wrote:Because I do not care no more

i think u can say: Because I care no more ...or ...Because I do not care any moreforgive me plz koz i can't prevent my self with these thingsthnx and go ahead congratulations again

we are the passing clouds may be it has hide the moon(Sweets) for sometimebut it cant keep within itbut the sky(Baskar) has the moon(sweets) every seconds, microseconds, mintues, anhour, everyday, and every moment.

Both sky and moon can't seperate from each other

we are so glad lookafter then your poem

Because you are starting to hate us,

thats what we expect from you

that's enough for us. because you are ready to start to find a new and bright life.

Go ahead. Baskar will not coming back for you and for us.

Don't look back, Go ahead

Our blessings with you

Muruganji

One more thing,Mr. Kannan (hard Person) is return back from cairo last month during his visit for business he suffered a lot.