aww i hated eppie 100! and basically everything after that. i like season 6 a very small minute amount more than season 5... but i still dont like the situation. ill even admit to liking hannah, but not as much as i would love brennan dating booth. urg. but i like sweets, and i liked his role and presence in this story :)

Oh, I definitely agree! Sweets isn’t one to leave this subject alone. Just because we haven’t seen it, that doesn’t mean that he hasn’t been bugging Booth and/or Brennan.

Your characterizations are excellent and your writing is vivid. With that said, I think you could benefit from a beta reader. It’s really easy to miss grammatical errors that Word doesn’t necessarily pick up on, and mistakes distract the reader from your otherwise-wonderful story.

Overall, however, this is a very enjoyable read. You’ve really gotten Booth’s voice down… I can HEAR him saying those lines. And your ending to the fic is excellent. Thanks for sharing this with us!