SuperMoutarde wrote:

Hey, from PM request. These are all suggestions, so feel free to disagree with my comments ^^

Easy and Normal look good, imo, I would only add finish on all the spinners, but other than that no comment. The only spinner in easy has a finish on it. Done at Normal

[Hard]

Did you map this diff using 1/2 snap divisor? I feel like this map could/should fit the music much better using 1/4 snap divisor, now it feels kinda wrong imo. ok For instance let's look at the first combo:

00:13:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This doesn't follow the music. There should be a note at 00:14:186 and one at 00:14:829. I would end slider 1 on 00:14:186 and add a circle at 00:14:829. Then there should be a note 00:15:686 and one on 00:16:543. I think these are notes that are strong in the music, and it's a serious lack. I know that would keep me from playing the map it follows the drums. maybe i willö change it when another modders want to have this fixed

This is hard diff, just putting notes on the measure and 1/2 measures is boring, so follow the music to make map more fun!

02:15:579 (5) - I would change this for a slider half shorter with more repeats for more fun (and follow music better) yea

[Insane]

Same comment as for hard for the intro. Then, in the song, you begin to do sometimes as I think you should always do.

Example:01:53:293 (1,2,3,4,5) - is closer to what the map should look like imo. Except that slider 3 should end 1/4 measure earlier on 01:54:258 and circle 4 should be placed 1/4 measure earlier at 01:54:472 nope

Other example:02:08:722 (1,2,3) feel right but 02:09:579 (4,5,6,7) not so much fixed

02:27:793 (2) - replace by shorter slider with repeat would destroy the pattern , so no

Overall I like this diff much better than the hard one, still.

Hope it will help, I think hard diff really needs to be fixed but this is only my opinion. Good luck! Thx

neonat wrote:

Deni's Normal

00:37:865 (1) - let the slider repeat 2 more times until 00:39:36500:39:151 (1) - move the spinner so it starts at 00:39:579, end at 00:40:865No changes here, I want to end that spinner at 00:40:436 - , and if I let the slider repeat 2 more times, the spinner would end too fast for a Normal.

[General]If you ask me, countdown doesn't fit here at all. I strongly recommend to deactivate it.Also, didn't quite check what AIMod said, but there were some aspects that sounded serious. Better check that out.

[Easy]Nice job here. Nothing serious to point out. Nevertheless, there's something that bothers me a little:02:07:008 (1,2,1) - I don't quite like how the next combo starts on the previous combo's (1), it looks just...... a little monotonous... well, to me.

[Deni's Normal]00:37:865 (1,1) - It's not very appealing how the slider ends here all of a sudden and a spinner appears. Doesn't fit rhythm-based and can be confusing somehow.00:56:722 (5) - I think that clap hitsound on the slider end isn't that suitable for the rhythm. You could replace it with a whistle though and if you do, don't forget to erase the whistle on the slider end.00:58:436 (1) - ^01:01:865 (1) - ^01:03:151 (2) - ^01:07:008 (3) - Here, you could do the same and then, put a clap on 01:07:865 (1) 's start in order to make that pattern sound the best possible. I must admit though, that this is just my opinion. If you don't want to, it's not that grave.02:13:865 (1,1) - Same about slider and spinner. Besides, a clap doesn't really fit, either.

Nice diff, too, but hitsounding is a bit extraordinary. Not bad, not bad *bow*

[Hard]00:12:151 (1) - I suggest silencing this spinner because that Normal hitsound doesn't fit, as well as all other samplesets.00:40:865 (10) - You should also silence this note, because...... yeah, doesn't fit. Just the way you did it with 02:17:079 (2) .01:43:008 (1) - Strongly, strongly, STROOONGLY recommend a new combo here.

Great diff! Only disliked some imperfect blankets like 00:20:936 (2,3) . But the rest is awesome!

[Insane]01:32:722 (1) - I prefer perfect arcs, so that means, I don't like this slider shape. Just my opinion, though.01:34:436 (4) - ^

02:16:865 - I always get this acoustically wrong what Pewds says there xD UHUHUUM *COUGH*

Quiz-chan wrote:

[General]If you ask me, countdown doesn't fit here at all. I strongly recommend to deactivate it. indeedAlso, didn't quite check what AIMod said, but there were some aspects that sounded serious. Better check that out.

[Easy]Nice job here. Nothing serious to point out. Nevertheless, there's something that bothers me a little:02:07:008 (1,2,1) - I don't quite like how the next combo starts on the previous combo's (1), it looks just...... a little monotonous... well, to me.fixed

[Hard]00:12:151 (1) - I suggest silencing this spinner because that Normal hitsound doesn't fit, as well as all other samplesets. fixed in all diffs00:40:865 (10) - You should also silence this note, because...... yeah, doesn't fit. Just the way you did it with 02:17:079 (2) . ok01:43:008 (1) - Strongly, strongly, STROOONGLY recommend a new combo here. Ok

Great diff! Only disliked some imperfect blankets like 00:20:936 (2,3) . But the rest is awesome!old map is old and don't need to be perfect

[Insane]01:32:722 (1) - I prefer perfect arcs, so that means, I don't like this slider shape. Just my opinion, though. fixed, I mapped this before the new slider sysem was released01:34:436 (4) - ^ fixed

02:16:865 - I always get this acoustically wrong what Pewds says there xD UHUHUUM *COUGH*

Gabe wrote:

Quiz-chan wrote:

[Deni's Normal]00:37:865 (1,1) - It's not very appealing how the slider ends here all of a sudden and a spinner appears. Doesn't fit rhythm-based and can be confusing somehow. I don't think it's that bad, and what about a suggestion how to change it...? No change . . .

00:56:722 (5) - I think that clap hitsound on the slider end isn't that suitable for the rhythm. You could replace it with a whistle though and if you do, don't forget to erase the whistle on the slider end. 00:58:436 (1) - ^01:01:865 (1) - ^01:03:151 (2) - ^

It fits pretty good as it is now. No need to change here. If an other modder mentions this I might think about it.

01:07:008 (3) - Here, you could do the same and then, put a clap on 01:07:865 (1) 's start in order to make that pattern sound the best possible. I must admit though, that this is just my opinion. If you don't want to, it's not that grave. Same as above.

02:13:865 (1,1) - Same about slider and spinner. Besides, a clap doesn't really fit, either. Oh it doesn't fit? You might turn up your volume to hear that there's even a clap in the song itself.