It can be such a challenge to tell a story in a small number of words, without it slipping into becoming poetry. I really like this piece, each line seemed to sum up the feeling of the season in question. Optimism, contentment, depression and despair.

Have you ever had a look at http://fiftywordstories.com/ I’ve written a few. The strict 50 word limit really forces you to analyse every word you use.

Whoa, I love the punch at the end, and the imagery! The second sentence/paragraph bugs me, though; it’s a little too Yoda for me. Then again, I am anal.

Honestly, I always wondered what it would feel like to be dead and have no one find your body; there are always so many unsolved missing persons cases. I think this flash piece captures that feeling exactly.

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