it is one of the best dramione fanfics ive read :) but harry and ron are just...too violent you know? it is hard for me to adjust to harry being so cold, and i was very shocked when ron hit hermione, but the story is just fabulous :)

Author's Response: I'm actually not that tallented! I have no idea how to make amazing things like that, I just signed up to The Dark Arts (link on the right column of the page) and sent in a request to get a banner. It's pretty simple but be sure to be specific.

pretty good :) but i dont really like the fact that you've added new charaters :(

Author's Response: Ahh yeah. Most of it revolves around Hermione and Draco and the canon characters. The newer characters play a small role overall. Hopefully this doesn't stop you from wanting to read more of it.

hello, i cant help but notice that this story is quite similar to mine. im sure you didnt copy anything, but i just wanted point that out :) its a good start, and your writing style is pretty good. great for your first fanfiction.

Author's Response: oh thank you and I'm so sorry. I didn't know that it was like yours. :