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Bon Bon has been not entirely truthful over the years with her "Best Friend" Lyra, who finally she demands she come completely clean. Some of the secrets aired are mundane at best. But others? Well, you'll just have to read the story, won't you? ·Super Trampoline

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Emerald moved from New Colt City less than two weeks ago and she's brought her love of tabletop games with her. After answering an and making friends with Lyra and Bon-Bon, Emerald is really enjoying how simple her life is now. ·TheGentlemanCreeper

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As with any couple, Lyra and Bon Bon experience problems and have disagreements. Be it past marefriends or financial distress, the pair must confide within one another to save both each other, and themselves. Theoretically, love conquers all, but love alone doesn't put bits on the table.

Alright, now this is where things get real. I WANT to be mad at Octavia for pretty much destroying Lyra's relationship, but I honestly can't. Yes what she did was wrong, but I still can't be mad at her as I DO genuinely feel sorry for her. She thinks her relationship is unstable and with Vinyl that IS a possibility and just got caught up in her emotions from being around Lyra. It's really sad and I HOPE you have Octavia be able to sort these things out and maybe even help Lyra with Bon Bon.

...wow. Lyra really puts up with a lot of shit in her relationship. This story is amazing in the way it describes the rough moments the two of them have and all the things Lyra thinks about. There's no doubt in my mind from what you show us here that Lyra loves Bon Bon with all her heart, which makes it all he more painful that Bon Bon doesn't see it herself.

“Just talking? Just talking?! I suppose this is ‘just talking’.” Her confusion only furthering, Lyra suddenly felt her lips attacked by Bon Bon’s. It wasn’t a loving kiss. It was an angry, loathing kiss; she could feel the pony’s rage resonating from her mouth.”

I'm not sure, but I'm pretty sure the quote on the end of this sentence really isn't supposed to be there.

Also, the period at the end of the 'just talking'." should be moved to before the other quotes. I think. Don't quote me on that.