To be honest what I liked most about this story is your portrayal of Pete he's far from a perfect parent but at the same time not an irredeemable monster who just tortures his son for kicks.

Tesha chapter 3 . 1/9/2014

awesome :)

This is a good story, I'm so glad you have the whole fanfic is insync with 'A Goofy Movie'. The story has a nice flow of the moments as if your watching the movie. It's cool that you made your own lyrics for Pete and PJ for the song scenes; the story really comes alive when you listen to "After Today", "On the Open Road", "Lester's Possum Park", & "Nobody Else But You" from the movie as you read/sing the songs in the fanfiction.

I would to see how this look if it were a real movie. You did a great job on Pete and PJ's characterization. I'm glad that you didn't make the story too dark, especially when you have a fun villain like Pete, who's a lovable bastard that's also huge contrast to his son who is mopey but at the same time a much nicer character. At the same the scenes that centered between the two of them also gave more depth to Pete's character. Not only do we see him as just a villain, we see him as a father figure. The scenes that stuck with me the most was Pete protecting PJ from Bigfoot and the one where PJ metions his mother during lunchtime in which Pete avoids talking about her. You managed to balance the silliness and seriousness throughout the story. Even the songs you wrote were also very in tune with the Disney style. Just imagining Jim Cummings(Pete) and Rob Paulsen( PJ) singing together sounds like a match made in heaven.
Overall, I enjoyed reading this story!

That was a wonderful ride! I'm especially grateful you posted it after it's finished. Still wish you'd post it in DA. I've always thought the relationship between Pete and PJ is so rich and complicated and deserves its own movie. You did a wonderful job here mirroring your fanfic to A Goofy Movie. I especially love the songs you wrote which are similar in theme with the ones from A Goofy Movie but different in content.