PLEASE WRITE MORE ABOUT THEIR FAMILY! I WOULD LOVE TO SEE THEM TOGETHER BEFORE AND AFTER THE CURSE! THIS WAS ADORABLE AND PERFECT! I THINK YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER AND I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE ABOUT THEIR FAMILY AS HOW YOU PICTURE IT! PLEASE SHOW US MORE RUBY/GRAHAM AND THEIR SON ALEX!

I love it! It's such a sweet couple, I never thought about it before, but it just works out perfectly, doesn't it? Great job with this. I only wish you had written it more together, rather than a long page of single lines, although they're great for drawing attention to a specific part, it's lost when they're all written that way (with the exception of poetry). All in all, a really good job, though :) Keep up the good work!
God bless!