Talk about beauty written in words, this work of yours lives up to its theme and its content...it's nothing but love...its depth is immeasurable...for me a good poem is when i felt it...and with this, i didn't only felt it, i lived it...

Wow, this is beautiful. You're really good at the style that you do (I couldn't manage it) and the imagery of him scribbling down lines between kisses is very nice. You're a really talented writer-don't stop!