Wow Phoenix nice drawing, that's exactly how i wanted it to be. The only complaint I have is the colors, it would've looked better if it had a dark purple head and a dark red body. Overall great job and I like the name too.

Story:
For years, humans have been destroying the planet, through wars, pollution, etc. The world is ending, but people are too caught up their own lives to realize it. .. except for you. Dravapure, lord of order, Dravageddon, lord of chaos, have been told to give humanity one last chance:YOU!(THEY DIDN'T CREATE YOU, no no no, nothing like that...) A mysterious egg came from the sky one night on your 14th birthday. As humanity's last chance, make good or bad decisions to determine the fate of humanity on your journey to become the ULTIMATE DREXLE TRAINER. (good=saved planet, bad=demise of planet) WHAT HATCHES FROM THE EGG, only you decide. CHOOSE FRIENDS WISELY!

See, man, I have a worm that'll eat your face, and mimic your screams. You need some ideas, man.
Tips:
-I don't know how Uncle Fred called your drawings proportionate. That horse is not able to support that weight on those tiny legs.
-Is that a penguin? I don't know.
-Try not to have all your drexies using attacks, it detracts from the picture. I remember that you have this top thing that is shooting like 3 different attacks, and it hurts my eyes to even think about it.
-Don't try to make all your drexles turn into ferocious beasts. It's quite repetitive.
-Why is that penguin things right wing (The one that's facing "toward" us) way smaller than the other?
-That pumpkin needs ram horns.
-Get a method. I have one, but it's a seeeeeeeecretttttt.....
-Don't be sexist and try to make the males better than the females. You do that with your monsters and pokemon. You're like, "ugghhhh, good nature, but it's a female." SO? I HAVE AN EPIC HOUNDOOM. Do I care? No. So don't try to make the males better.
-Think about what you're doing. Like, why does that pegasus have flames under its wings? what purpose does that serve? You don't need to fill empty spaces with random designs, unless absolutely necessary.

And last...
-Upload all your drexles that you haven;t already during winter break. You have some great ones, but aren't showing them.

1.ARTICROC!!! FEMALE, stronger than TROPICROC!!!
2. IT's A FEMALE CRANe, the kind that delivers baby's to people wrapped in cloth...now used as a slingshot. yes the wing is smaller
3. STARTERS ARENT USING ATTACKS!!! EXCEPT FOR THE ANTS
4. ideas..yes
5. forgot about ram horns
Last: uploadin soon

yeah it does
OH I'M SEXIST?! LAVUGMA WAS ALL FEMALE UNTIL U SAID NO!
AND FEROCIOUs!??! HAVE U SEEN dewadle, otter-thing, and like eight birds and eggs?!AND STINGRAY?! AND PURPLE MANATEE?! AND METEORITE?! AND CLOUD?! AND ICEDRAGON?! AND GHOST?! AND:

(12-22-2012, 12:11 AM)night phoenix Wrote: yeah it does
OH I'M SEXIST?! LAVUGMA WAS ALL FEMALE UNTIL U SAID NO!
AND FEROCIOUs!??! HAVE U SEEN dewadle, otter-thing, and like eight birds and eggs?!AND STINGRAY?! AND PURPLE MANATEE?! AND METEORITE?! AND CLOUD?! AND ICEDRAGON?! AND GHOST?! AND: