This story is amazing while, at times, I don't really understand Alex's motivations and mood swings the way you capture his thoughts and emotions, the suspense, the dread, the anger. They're perfect. I've been rereading your story for the past two hours just to FEEL those again because you wrote them so well I could physically feel the emotions myself. This story is amazing. The interactions are superb and really capture the motivations and past experiences of the characters. Wow. Just...wow. I can't even describe how powerful this fic is. Great job. I can't wait to read more!

WOW. English isn't your first language? You write better than half the people on fanfiction. (myself included). Some of the the people on fanfiction are not that good, and there are others that are worthy of publication.