00:04:403 (2) - maybe you could move this to x:248 y:100? to me the small space it makes between 00:03:953 (1) - and 00:04:403 (2) - feels nice

00:08:453 (7) - just a suggestion, but maybe you could do something like this? http://puu.sh/hlvV5/2f117aeac6.jpg it plays nicely imo think it takes a bit of the emphasis off the slider following those, so going to leave

00:20:303 (2) - ctrl - g? it feels less awkward to play

00:21:203 (2) - ^

00:24:803 (1,2) - fix the blanket here? its slightly off

00:43:253 (2,3) - fix blanket

01:00:503 (2,4) - you should ctrl - g these separately. it plays so much better like that

01:03:353 (1,3) - ^

01:17:303 (6,7) - to me, this pattern is a bit meh to play. even when i was testplaying it it felt awkward. maybe come up with something else to do? will see