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Review:

-BookDinosaur- says:-BookDinosaur- here again! Second chapter in a row, let's see if I can make it to three, huh?

Ginny died?! What? NO! She's one of my favourite characters! I guess it had to happen to move the story along, but...boohoo.

I feel that you wrote George very well, especially when he found Ginny. I could really see him doing the exact same thing in the books if this had happened.

I liked Gawain as well, you wrote him very well and I feel you characterised him well as well. You might want to show us a fault of his though, because at the moment he seems like a bit of a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu.

All in all, a great chapter that left me wanting to read more (so that is what I'm going to do now.)

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Writing Ginny's death and George's reaction was a difficult bit to write and needed many tissues. :(

I've added a note to give Gawain a flaw or two to keep him from being too perfect. :)