anonymous

3 years ago

the song i'm working on... more added..
Boy you got just what I’ve been looking for, everything I need, everything a girl could want.
You have no clue, the things I’d do for you, baby.
You smile at me, and I just turn away, before my face turns fifty shades or, red (laugh).
Looking at you is like looking at perfection, I find it hard to tell, if you’re there or if I’m dreaming.
Oh darling, can we just take the chance and runaway forever?
Cause’ form east to west, no doubt we’d shine the best.
If you asked for my love, in a heartbeat I’d say yes.
You are perfect from head to toe,

You are perfect from head to toe, ear to ear, I’m not just saying what you want to hear.
There are so many stars in the sky, but darling there’s no chance that any two shine like your eyes.
There’s no doubt you have my heart, now please don’t tear it apart boy.
Oh darling, can we just take the chance and runaway forever?
Cause’ from east to west, no doubt we’d shine the best.
If you asked for my love, in a heartbeat I’d say yes.
Our love would be timeless like a black and white movie, and before we’d fade to black, we’d kiss then look back.

Ok, from the looks of the lyrics its a love song obviously what I think this is 100% because I know music very well. I think you should make it into a ballet probably a 4/4 measure or 3/4 measure I can also give you a link for a tool called Finale Notepad which you can download and write it from there and add music to it :) But I think it would be nice as a ballet.

That's what you want her to do let her do it the way she wants and trust me snuggie Ive been in music for 5 years now there does not HAVE to be a bridge it would sound nice with one but its not required and it doesn't have to go verse chorus verse chorus either she could go verse chorus verse verse chorus or verse chorus verse instrumental solo chorus Its what ever the writer wants to do the writer has to figure that out. :)

@EvonHowell ... For real...Drop it. I did not say one word to you. I have been doing music since i was in the third grade I am now in 11th. I know there is no need for a bridge but like you said...it would be nice. I was a sax player then i finished sax and went to tuba and piano...That gave me a large musical span.
Now notice i said FOR EXAMPLE. There is no need to do it exactly like that but that was just an EXAMPLE that she can use to get an idea. I know you know music too. But there are times you need to let someone else teach. People have different teaching styles. I have the style of throwing you into the fire so next time you realize how easy it is. You have a much more layed back style. Now, There is no need to get into which is better. Yours or mine. It doesn't really matter. We are all working for the same cause and fighting for the same team.
Now that all being said. Never correct a peer. Especially one older than you. If need be you can pm them and explain your point. they will take it much better. Never tell them that the way they teach is wrong.

Evon, Snuggie. Drop the arguments. Both of you don't need to talk to each other, nor do you need to give advice to each other, or argue on someone's post. Next time someone has an Altercation, it will be brought to Preetha's attention.
@brookie5150 This is a very nice song you have there, keep up the good work. Keep the music the way you want it, put it to the tempo you think fits the music/lyrics. Keep in mind that this isn't the communities, this is YOUR work. Not OpenStudy's. You can choose to take in the critiques, or you can ignore them, and just look at the complements, but still, keep up the very good work.

@KeganMoore what? You're not making any sense. I think you're just frustrated because you know I'm right. I'm simply stating that until I see or hear music, this is not music and therefore unnecessarily occupies space that could've been used for music

Enough Both of you. @tanner23456 drop it. Preetha will be notified about this post and your arguing this has been enough brookie close the question Please now thx and untill she posts with the music to the song no one should post on this link.
Thank You.
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