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27 thoughts on “Delusionally Yours.”

Strong verse. I know this feeling. I use to tell my ex husband that his chastising of himself before I could vent my anger at his actions was stealing my right to be angry, therefore, the stanza that goes

Unless that guy won’t “move on” in the inside, his love would remain the best you could possibly get in a lifetime. though many things add to the entity of true love, by what your poem says, his love is kind of that..

maybe instead you should ask him to “let you move on..” as u are apologizing too with kindness, he will understand that. if u ask “you move on”. that may hit him like a poisoned arrow to the heart.

I would be interested to know about that guy, coz I see and understand so much from my daily life. I kind of form theories on humans, especially boys,men..coz of the constant intervention of “love”…many men fake it.. later accuse the woman for the breakup..and they move on.. if love is true, then moving on is as much impossible.

Just felt something after reading the post, no offense please. sorry for that anyway..

Don’t say sorry for expressing your views ! None taken, Shankar ! Let me tell you something about the guy I wrote this for. He, indeed is one of a kind. Our relationship did not last more than a month or so, but he always approached me in his own subtle way. Boyfriends came and went, but THIS guy was ALWAYS by my side. A shoulder to cry on, a hand to hold. Believe it or not, it’s almost been a year since we broke up but he says he still loves me. Now am I not a lucky girl to have someone like that in my life ? After he read the poem I expected a remark but instead he praised my writing abilities. He’s a wonderful guy. And someone I’d never forget. :)
And of course, I’d love to see more of your work.
Keep writing.