Welcome to the photography section! The lightning is awesome, however I think the composition is a bit off one the first one. The grain in focus is cut off at the right. I would have wanted all of the object in focus to be in the frame. It is also a bit over exposed.

The second picture is nice, some of the grain are in focus and you have better detail on them. The problem here is that there are too many things to focus on, which means there is no one focus point.

But I really like the mood in the pictures! You should post some more work!

PS.

These are some photos I took outside some dinner that I fell in love with.