I've been playing piano for a while but want to spend more time composing my own music rather than spend too much time learning music by other composers, here's some music I wrote since I started composing, I haven't recorded a version of me physically playing it yet as you can tell its a midi file I wrote into software, I can play some parts physically, but I find it hard to overlap the 2 main melodies, of course there are bass notes on top of that, with regards to feedback, is the music too simple? too convoluted? parts that need improving? I originally wrote the melody on a guitar but prefer to play it on the piano
https://soundcloud.com/brodown45/chestnut-piano

This sounds like more of a song you would play with a rock band than a composition that can be critiqued. And since there's no musicality because of the MIDI recording, I don't think there is much to say about it.