Okay, so 'The Better Gryffindor' is a really good story. Roxanne and James fighting about who got sorted faster and what nots was really cool and you even gave reasons to support the whole thing.

Description...okay so, normally on your stories they would be one of your strongest bits but here? they weren't the best ones but they weren't the worst ones either. I think it was just a little bit average since you made the stories flow really good and it was funny (I found it funny...I dunno with the other readers...) and I had a really really great time reading it.!

Go challenges!
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Yeah, I was a little afraid of that. When I get a chance, I think I'll go back through and flesh it out a bit more.