Considering the background music as well, your voice and the music combonation makes you sound upbeat. The pacing of your voice is fine.

Soundtrack: Describe the soundtrack. Was it appropriate for the story? Do you have other recommendations?

Yes, they're appropriate. I recommend adjusting the soundtrack volumes; around the beginning, the soundtrack can be louder since you're loud and clear, but towards the end, the soundtrack became a little too loud for me to hear your voice without the music getting in the way.

Economy: Describe the images that you saw. Was anything missing? Does anything need to be added (consider the assignment guidelines here as well)?

Nothing seems to be missing. I liked the variety of pictures you used; from pictures of you to the U.

Pacing: Describe the pacing of the story; does it work in this instance? Do you think some sections need to breathe?

I think your pacing is good.

Additional comments:

I hope you continue to keep the positivity no matter what obstacles you faced. I look forward to your final video.

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