I see that you haven't updated in a while, but I just found this story and I have to say that is incredibly, wickedly sexy. The idea that the mage-Warden would be afraid of losing control is an interesting idea in itself, one that I hadn't thought of before, and the place you have taken it is really fun- and plausible for both of them.

Very interesting story, I was a bit skepical about a dragon age fanfic but man this story is really good. Your writing is so fluid and organic and you don't let the world get put on hold because the characters are getting more involved. Also, just a sidenote, great attention to detail with the game's lore, I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.

Okay, now that I have that out of the way, I would like to mention a couple things. I really appreciate how you believable you made your characters BDSM emotional build up. I feel like I actually truly understand what makes them find this release with each other. Often when reading BDSM erotica I just have to suspend disbelief on how the characters actually place themselves into their respective roles. You build tension very well, which has me wishing/begging for more. Your story, so far, has me feeling very bottom right now.