What my father doesn't know is that I'm herding the Avatar to our weak spots, that I am giving away the secrets. What my father doesn't know is that I don't plan to capture my brother, my uncle, or the Avatar and his friends. I fight in my father's style so the Avatar will know how to defeat him. What no one knows is that every night I pray to Agni that the Avatar will win.

[Interesting]

Eerie and dark, but I didn’t quite agree with the characterization: Ozai seemed more like the person who mentally ‘made himself a god’ and lusted for a power that I don’t think would be gained by incest – it was being able to sit back and watch people scurry around him like ants. She also seemed too attached to his approval – she’d jump at the chance to see him fall if this story was a part of what made her character. Still, not bad.

Another perfect piece of work! You are quite the imagist. I adore your take on the young Azula and what really changed her. I can see this happening to her, seeing that her father was just a power-hungry man. The poor girl, I wish more people would pity her. Excellent work once again! :D

Its nice to know that I'm not the only one that doesn't think Azula a crazy pshyco bitch. I also see her as having to basically strive for her father's attention, because if she didn't have that she'd have no story.

BH:*blink* Whoa... new respect for Azula coming on... I'll probably never ben able to like her, but I like this depiction of her (kinda explains why she's psycho, at least.) Well-written, well-thought, and of course, interesting.