I love the minimalist percussion here, how it's very 'last' in the mix. Adds the tempo but still keeps the focus where it should be. I'd love to add a little bit of tom work very low in the mix, lots of reverb and echo.

2. Your shots starting at 1:45 really add to this song. I like the subtlety throughout the tune (adding the electric; that vocal jump I commented earlier on; the harmonies toward the end of the song). 3. The build isn't hugely dynamic, but it's still intense; using those shots again, added with the harmony is well-executed. Overall, it's just a very "professional" song: It's not "too creative" to the point where you're just trying to do something drastically different. I think this style just very much suits you.