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Level 23

Ace Trainer

Umbreon (A)
Shining in the night (bee)
It's body is it's only light (bee)
When it uses Shadow Claw (C)
It gives the foe in the fight (bee)
A very, very bad fright (bee)
Whilst Shining in the night (bee)
Umbreon (C)

Side note: I had to put Bee because when you do B and then parentheses (B + ) = )
Whatever admins/mods read this, can you change that to this? B-) Because people who also put the rhyme scheme afterwards will probably have that problem

Made by ID Zeta
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