I just wanted to say that you write really, really well. The flow and the pace was really good and it kept my attention throughout the entire piece. The way you wrote it, with the switching between the scenes was really interesting and I really enjoyed reading it like that.

Another point I really liked was the way you didn't write it from Peter's or Sirius' perspective but rather, the muggles'. It was a different take which is always refreshing to read! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's always fantastic to hear I write well -- it's one of the best compliments I could ever, ever receive, actually. :3 I'm happy to hear it held your attention, too, because I think that's vitally important in a story, and perhaps even more so in a one-shot.

My friend Sarah (Toujours Padfoot, who this story is for) requested a story specially from the Muggles' point of view, or from the point of view of at least one of them. I can't take credit for that! But I enjoyed writing this, and am happy that it interested you, too! Thank you so much for taking the time to review this for me!! ♥