Someone requested me to post that comic I made which I have not posted here yet, "Shadow The hedgehog: Bedtime", since I made it only for the video, but I thought what the heck and decided to upload it here, just so u can get a closer look on the pictures.

I also noticed someone mentioned that the panels in the video were kinda squeezed, but I don't blame the maker of the video, because the panels were too big to be fitted in the video, which I was not aware of ^^'

I made this comic in Paint tool SAI(A very handy program if I do so say myself XP) and I used textures that I have installed from someone who I don't the remember name of^^'.

Also I would like to know your opinion about this comic , come with any critiques if you like, because I will be very pleased to look at your critiques*and I know there's a lot to critic here XD*My next "project" will be about Sonic generations, so I gotta start working on it, and hopefully I'll get it finished tomorrow XS

If you want to see the dialouge of this comic, go and watch the video here by clicking on this link( Btw, what do you guys think about the new look on the Youtube cause I pretty much dislike it ?)Anyways, I wanna thank you guys for watching this silly comic in the video : P. [link]

I love how everything fits together perfectly- like a puzzle. The shading is perfect, the tones make this look professional, and Maria looks absolutely stunning. As I am unable to see the video at the moment, I have absolutely no clue what is going on, but you'll post text later, right? The first few panels look like the ones from your earlier comic where Shadow asks were babies come from. I love how a great number of your comics are about life on the ARK before GUN had to come in and screw things up... Overall, great work, and I am happy to have you on my watch list.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Visual Appeal: 5 of 5 - The art style you used - though simple - is incredibly nice to look at. Each and every character looks incredibly well-done, especially Maria.

Originality: 5 of 5 - C'mon, do I REALLY need to explain this one??

Story And/Or Characters: 4.5 of 5 - The way that the characters are portrayed is absolutely brilliant, dare I say that in Maria's case, you went BEYOND what SEGA themselves have given us. You took a character who has been relatively static in all of her appearances, and injected so much more life into her than what she is usually given. The same goes for Shadow, though admittedly his sudden attitude swing was a LITTLE strange to me, but meh...

Overall Rating: 5 of 5 - Amazingly easy-to-look-at visuals, combined with a truly original story, and a cast of incredibly well-portrayed characters makes this a gem amongst most fanfiction of today.

If there are such things, I think Black Doom just needs to let Shadow have Maria and settle down with a female face-hugger. Oh, I also find it cute and funny that Shadow and Maria sleep with dolls of each other.

So the only way to know the dialogue now is to watch the video? Well that sucks. Now people have no other choice but to watch the video to understand the comic. Which is a shame to the people who simply want to read the comic, Like me.

I don't like the voice-acting video's, because the voices don't fit the character's IMO. But at least i was able to ignore them.

I realize that this comic was made for the sole purpose of the video itself, but would it have killed you to add dialogue here? Consider this as my critique on this. I dunno if come off as rude, but that's how usually critiques go anyway, their harsh, but honest. and mostly based on opinions, like mine.

Oh no, Shadow's without Maria-NOT. ;D...I actually like how YouTube doesn't have the Bar on the Bottom of the Video taking up the Visual Space like it used to, so I'm not bothered by the New Look, Yet.

I love this comic, it just looks so good! I think you did a fantastic job! (Oh, and Shadow saying "I need friends" itīs just...Amazing XD)But what i especially like about this is all the expressions you gave Maria (and also how fun it is X3).