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Karou_Marauder says:Hi there! I thought I'd come over and check your story out after you left me all those lovely reviews :)

I noticed a few spelling mistakes, nothing that can't be fixed with a read-over.

Wouldn't those trophies be in the Trophy Room? I guess Gryffindor would want to keep their achievements in one place, but if they don't put trophies in the Trophy Room it kinda has no purpose :P Maybe you could have a special Gryffindor section within the Trophy Room?

Haha, I wondered if there would be a house-elf appearance. I think Albus was a bit quick to shout - Wally said he didn't know and Albus would probably drop it there and say, 'Why are you sitting on my bed?' or something like that.

(These are all just my opinions and suggestions by the way, I think your story is fine as it is!)

I'll be keeping up with this *adds to reading list*

-Karou

Author's Response: Hello! Cool!

Oh, Spelling mistakes, I probably just missed keys when I was typing. Sorry about that. :D. The trophies? I never thought about that, I thought that maybe because Gryffindor were proud of Harry, they's keep them in the commoun roon so everyone could look at them. When Albus started shouting at Wally, I thought maybe he would just get annoyed easily because he was already bothered about Scorpius and where he had gone off tooo. No problem! I love a bit of constructive critisism and I'm always editing bits here and there on that story because its completed. I look forwards to hearing from you again!
HEG