Ooh, I remember this one. Has it been updated? Either way, it impressed me as if I was readingit for the first time. Some of your smoothest imagery and storytelling in here 😊 Amazing execution, particularly at the end!

“she purrs in my ear, the language of felines
who wander with lust on their tongues”

Ryan, that was some hot hotness 🙂 My already hyperactive brain immediately went several notches higher on its imaginative scale. And the weird thing is I’m not much of a car person. In short, this was amazing.
Oh I couldn’t listen to the audio, some issue with my phone I guess. And I’m so pissed about it. But the text is damn good enough for me. 🙂

Oh no, I should be grateful to you. I imagined myself as the feline here. Lol. And that I guess is the mark of a really good writer, when the reader can relate to the work/or can become/see themselves as what the artist speaks of. It’s like,
“I write because you exist;
You write and I become”

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Ryan Stone writes after midnight. His short fiction and poetry have appeared in publications including Eunoia Review, The Drabble, Algebra of Owls and Silver Birch Press and won prizes in a number of competitions at venues including Grindstone, Writer Advice, Goodreads, Writers’ Forum Magazine and Poetry Nook. He lives in Melbourne, Australia.