I love the first part so much. To me, it wasn't a sword fight, but more a battle of wills between the two. Harry and Ginny have always been very convicted in their beliefs and feelings, and I'd imagine would clash beautifully in some situations. That's how I saw them being surrounded by water and fire. I don't know if you meant for that to happen, but I think it was beautiful.

The change of tone had me smiling like a school girl. It was just so cute. And so fitting of their characters.

"Everyone else had abandoned the game." - so true. Harry, Ginny and their peers all had to abandon their childhood, that I can absolutely imagine the two of them clinging to something like this.

Good job!
Del<3

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much.

I'm glad you liked it, and thank you or going all detailed on me, that was actually really cool to see your thoughts on this.