Photo-Shoot Two (Pete Ross Improvement)

The purpose of this shoot of re-editing the initial images is to identify how to correctly edit images; and also to improve the images using the critique comments. I have chosen to use the second photograph of Shoot One as I feel it has the most faults.

Critique: I think that you have used the previous critique comments constructively and you have shown that you can correctly edit an image to the requirements of your shoot plans. This image is an improvement on the originally edited one.

This is the original, un-edited image.

I cropped the image and changed it to monochrome so it was more in the style of Pete Ross.

Next, I sharpened the image, upped the brightness and contrast; taking care not to over or under expose the photograph. I think this image is an improvement on the last time I attempted to edit this one and I am happy with the outcome.