Hello there! I'm here reviewing stories for the house cup which contain magical creatures within the grounds of Hogwarts!

I really enjoyed reading this chapter! I actually haven't read a lot of AU stories, especially ones when Harry goes back in time and ends up in the Marauders era - that would be very confusing for him and his parents! But I liked it and thought the idea was original as well, and well written. The only suggestions I'd make as CC would be to make the length of your chapter a bit shorter, perhaps splitting it up or cutting back on dialogue and sections, because it's a bit overwhelming to face.

I liked reading about the Care of Magical Creatures lesson and the animal - the Kerfloffle - in it! Is that a canon animal or is it one that you've made up yourself? Either way it's not one I've read about before so I enjoyed learning about it in the class, even though there was a mishap, as you called it in the chapter title!

kool whoah dis is 1 weird story lol harry bck in time well its a gd story so far keep writin coz i wanna kno wat happens and whoah bou da gay guyz lemme see there is remus.harry.sirius and serverus omg all gay lol well it fits da story must b weird being bck in time

i've just finished raeding everything up to here and its looking really good. i was a bit shocked when i found out that most people were gay, but i think i suits them now. cant wait to read the next chapter.

GREAT story! Please update soon! I love that he was sorted into Slytherin (it makes so much sense... and I'm really sick of them ALL being dark wizards). And Dumbledore words about "free will" got me thinking... he's changing the future, isn't he? Because that would be SO great. Time-travel stories are always centered on this 'not changing anything' thing, and I don't really understand why (I mean... it's not that Harry's present is so damn perfect that it wouldn't do change a few things, is it?). Let him stay and be happy! (and have Sirius... since I can't).