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... your English is bizarre in places and clumsy in many more. Please, please, please get in a good editor/copywriter in on contract for a day or two.

Some examples from both sites to show you the necessity. This is not, by any means, an exhaustive list.

First site

"Advertisement is one thing a company relies on to get recognition"

"Advertising" would make the sentence grammatically correct but it still sounds clumsy. List what you can do and then inform potential clients how your services will benefit them. What is it about the way you do business cards, flyers etc that will benefit your clients.

"... is capable of coming up with as well as carrying out..."

Perhaps I'm missing something but what is the difference between these two tasks? Regardless "coming up with" and "carrying out" are not exactly promotional language.

"This plan includes..." in a paragraph that makes mention only of planning, not a plan.

"...software designed to tailor the needs of our clients..." (BTW I'm mainly avoiding company and product names to minimse the chance of potential clients finding this thread on a search after you alter the text.)

Is the software "designed according to the needs of your clients" or "tailored to the needs of your clients"?

"With this program users are capable of ..."

What is wrong with the word "can"?

"...another feature that is possible through..."

Again, what is wrong with the word "of". Quite apart from the simpler terms being easier to read, using a plethora of polysyllabic agglomerates where a solitary utterance would usually suffice is going to ruin your keyword density.

"A couple people selected to..."

What is the term for an unreasonable fear of the word "of"?

"Having a question?"

"Have a question?" if you must contract it that much.

"Use our easy to use contact form, provide"

"Using our..." would be better although "using" and "use" that close together is still a little clumsy and a better sentence could be constructed with a little thought.

"Provide enough detail so we can better help you."

Clumsy, but more than that you need to be specific. You may be dealing with people who have never done this before and do not know what information you need.

Second Site

The hosting site is better but could still do with a once over by a professional. (BTW the "Contact" and "support" links were a bit of a shock)

"...just cant help.."

At the very least this should be "just can't help", and generally contractions are used less in "print" than in speech i.e "cannot". Same paragraph "its" => "it's" or "it is"

"...enjoy making people happy, success..."

"successful".

Both sites also tend to suffer from excessive first letter capitalisation.

Sorry if that sounds a bit harsh but I really think you need to bring in somebody external on contract to fix this rather than attempting it yourself. Hope you found the review useful anyway.

You're featured sections - Products / Portfolio and Services & Shared Hosting / Reseller and Combo - Need to be linked.
More and more designers are using these Big images/ descriptions as linked sections of the page - it's becoming quite a norm for the web 2.0 style sites.

The news box looks a little odd because it's the only element on your site with square corners - but the design is great.

Real nice WEB 2 design. Seen many like it, but they still look cool. I like the darker theme, which really makes the graphics and buttons stand out well.
Everything is cool, except for some grammatical errors that maybe, like mentioned, a publisher can fix or write something up for you real quick. No matter how good your service is, when users read about, you have to sound professional.

I haven't read the other people's comments here, but in my view this really is a nice looking site. I don't think there's much that could be improved further, but if, you might want to consider adding more constrast to the $9.95 image. The price may stand out more if you use a stronger, more saturated blue.