I cried a cry of a weeping sound

Below is the poem entitled I cried a cry of a weeping sound which was written by poet
christy
sandlin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

I cried a cry of a weeping sound

I CRIED A CRY OF A WEEPING SOUND NOT JUST FROM THE OUTSIDE BUT A DEEP PAIN
FROM WITHIN WANTING OUT LETTING GO THE HURT PAIN IM FEELING
THIS FEEL I HAVE IS STRONG NO ONE KNOWS WHAT IM THINKING I HIDE IT FOR REASONS
BUT THE PAIN WONT GO AWAY NO ONE KNOWS THE FACTS PEOPLE JUST PICTURE HOW IT
SHOULD BE. NOT WHAT IT IS ALREADY IN REALITY . I CRIED A CRY OF A WEEPING SOUND
NOT JUST FROM THE OUTSIDE BUT A DEEP PAIN FROM WITHIN WANTING OUT LETTING THE
PAIN IM FEELING THE PAIN IS SO STRONG IT FEELS LIKE MY HEAD IS ABOUT TO EXPLODE.
TRYING TO ESCAPE ANXIETY EVEN THOUGH I KNOW IT HAS NO WERE TO GO IT STAYS
TRAPED INSIDE. I CRIED A CRY OF A WEEPING SOUND NOT JUST FROM THE OUTSIDE BUT
A DEEP PAIN FROM WITHIN. WANTING OUT LETTING THE HURT AND PAIN IM FEELING THIS
FEELING IS SO STRONG NO ONE KNOWS WHAT IM THINKING. I CRIED A CRY OF A
WEEPING SOUND

Christy this is an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and how the theme of the poem is reinforced by repetition. The imagery is one showing a reflection of pain and the desire for instilling of inner peace and happiness. I pray for the same. My visit to Israel was a wonderful one. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup!
~Joseph