Of course I had to read this too. I really like it! I'm not sure what Nara's mutation is yet-did I miss it, because I thought you said it wasn't her empath power. Maybe I misread. Anyway, I like how this is written and am wondering where it goes from here. If you are still writing it, I'd love to see more. Thanks!

kelso chapter 5 . 5/19/2006

I would really like to know where your going with this so update soon please.

Another good chapter bravo! But...where the heck is the solar plexus? You are very detailed, something that is hard to put in a story for a lot of people. But when you say things that detailed it becomes over kill. So if Narra: "drives a blow deep into his sternum" you can say she stabbed the soldier in the chest, and will get the point.

This is really good. But when dose it take place? Before X2 or is it X3and Jean's back? Try to tell the reader. Also tell how Prof. X knows Narra's dad, unless it'll give something important away. Please update soon.