Update :added eyes :Thanks to KuroNeko for the eyesSheath's2LAZY 2 TAKE NEW SCREENSHOT3rd alo kirito on this forum -_-for celebrating i got newbie artist rank.... my birthday tho :'vnote : in screenshot some parts of the skin are not mine!trailalbum

Assassinated,You're one of my favorite artists. And i am not even in your league to criticize your work. But- Few little things that should probably get fixed - Kirito's hair isn't straight black,You could add some textures to it - You could add an actual jacket on him,Because the shirt model use for a jacket isn't very good to me. - In ALO kirito's sword is gigantic,So possibly make it thicker. Oh and one other thing,i would be happy to make the black spriggan wings cape for you aswell as gas that shoots the fairy dust when you "fly"That is all! Have a good time! It's still very good,Kinks aside.

Assassinated,You're one of my favorite artists. And i am not even in your league to criticize your work. But- Few little things that should probably get fixed - Kirito's hair isn't straight black,You could add some textures to it - You could add an actual jacket on him,Because the shirt model use for a jacket isn't very good to me. - In ALO kirito's sword is gigantic,So possibly make it thicker. Oh and one other thing,i would be happy to make the black spriggan wings cape for you aswell as gas that shoots the fairy dust when you "fly"That is all! Have a good time! It's still very good,Kinks aside.

aye i had the gas too >o> and the costume based on kirito from the pic looks like closed costume so i use no costume for it and for the hair im not giving the hair and the eyes are not mine ._.for the sword if i make it more bigger its not gonna be on uv maps then sorry ._.btw thanks for the criticize