GOE,Audio quality could be better. Electric bass would help. Drums could be a lot more elaborate. I recommend double tracking the rhythm guitar and panning one track to the left and the other to the right. Have the lead guitar panned in the center. Guitar playing is good. Please review my music at this link:

GOE,Audio quality could be better. Electric bass would help. Drums could be a lot more elaborate. I recommend double tracking the rhythm guitar and panning one track to the left and the other to the right. Have the lead guitar panned in the center. Guitar playing is good. Please review my music at this link:

Regarding the production aspect, this just went out of my amp/speaker sim into my loop pedal, where it was recorded according to whatever built in recording algorithm it uses. so I had so control over any of the panning etc.

Hey man. Nice playing on this one. It would be interesting to hear what it sounds like when mixed as the tones on their own are a nice starting point. I felt that the timing on the rhythm guitars was off in a few places. You clearly have decent technical abilities in your leads- there are some nice runs in there! Note selection could be better in places but unsurprising given how long you were improvising for! Overall nice job. As I say I would like to hear a polished version.