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I don't think it's lame - just a suggestion: try thinking about how to express yourself in images rather than abstract words (eg 'forgetfulness' try something like 'the smudge in my brain when I try to recall ..' ) poetry is very much a learned art, & you are young. Don't give up.

I know what your saying, being lost is a lot funner when your found though looking back i done the most exciting things when i was lost but didnt really appreciate them, now i have responsibilities i miss it!

Flick, flick I hear the click
The horrid sound from the bic
The only one to make you sick
Your life runs out
The clock goes tick
The filter you lick
Your heart you kick.
Then it slows,
Your blood is thick,
Candles around
They light the wick
The life sucking tick...

im back in the groove. on the hunt on the move. ive been hiding in the dark. now im hungry like a shark. better look out cause im back. ive been so lonely ill attack. better take warning. im no longer mourning.ive come out of hiding and you look inviting.my desires have been...