White Hat [WIP]

So one of the problems with bein me is there aint too many people to run my ideas by what with them all proclaimin drum and bass to be satans work. Anyways this worth workin on more or is it gash incarnate?

Sub is way too low for even my subwoofer. Need to sort the lowsmids out to beefier. Might go all massline on this sucker if it sounds good.
Try and vary the bass sound a bit if possible.
Maybe fill the break in a lil.
FX, Rises and incidentals. Maybe whole new intro.
What else?

"FX, Rises and incidentals. Maybe whole new intro." <--- this.
The sub gets lost, look at the sound wave image.
That kick is way too high in the mix. It's pretty interesting to listen even thought is jump up, has changes worth the listen.

Nice ideas, but lacks of too many hi hats!

I like the style your trying to achieve (Original Sin, Clipzy... etc) what's your DAW and let's see if we can get out a collab from this?