I wish you'd right some storys of what else happened that day ....like say Neville and Trevors inter-actions.

Reviewer: Lord James

Date: 2005-08-10

Reviewid: 129494

Chapter: 3

Awesome ending..... the first time the epiloge made me wonder what happens next.

Reviewer: Qem

Date: 2005-05-29

Reviewid: 122989

Chapter: 3

What a fantasitic story!

Reviewer: spooky foxbabe

Date: 2004-11-28

Reviewid: 106217

Chapter: 3

this ROX ROX ROX :-D :-D :-D i luved the "when pigs fly" part!!!

Reviewer: Jolene_xx

Date: 2004-11-19

Reviewid: 105227

Chapter: 3

This is excellent, I would have never pictured Hedwig's human character like that but you did it well. Harry and Hedwig saying that they loved each other was a beautiful scene.I loved that Filch only knew it was christmas because Mrs Norris spoke to him, a nice touch.

Reviewer: Astrid

Date: 2004-08-01

Reviewid: 95075

Chapter: 3

What?! What!?!? Please tell me that "The Beginning" means you'll write a fic along this thread and continue with it because that would be too KEWL. This was awesome, I love how completely owlish Hedwig is even as a human and how she notices the little things. Please write more!

Reviewer: celestina black

Date: 2003-12-12

Reviewid: 63010

Chapter: 3

WOAH!! thats cool!oh, i need to check if theres a sequel here!i thought this was just a really great little story. it was cute, and fun, and really just great.

Reviewer: cel black

Date: 2003-12-12

Reviewid: 63007

Chapter: 2

"I mean you two obviously want to be each other's mate."hehheheheheh

Reviewer: cel black

Date: 2003-12-12

Reviewid: 63005

Chapter: 1

Hedwig ruffled metaphorical feathers. “Why? I’ve seen you change a dozen times. It’s not like I’ve never seen you bare before.”

Harry’s face turned beet red. Ron began to sniggerron? I sniggered!!

Reviewer: Zardi

Date: 2003-10-26

Reviewid: 57912

Chapter: 3

Wow! This started out a tad weird, but it's fantastic! My favorite part was that last scene between Hedwig and Harry. So cute! I'm off to see what else you've written. Are you planning a sequel to this (maybe you have one already)?

Reviewer: Nikki Weasley

Date: 2003-10-06

Reviewid: 55620

Chapter: 3

OoOoOo.... I loved it!! I loved how Hedwig was so innocent!! Now i want more!!!!! I loved the ebding to the 2nd part where ron was like 'when pigs fly' and then Pig lands on his shoulder!! How funny!! Graet writing, and i really want a sequel!!!! :)

Reviewer: Sam

Date: 2003-08-29

Reviewid: 49219

Chapter: 3

You're story was awesome. I enjoyed reading it alot! Hediwg turned human? You've got a great imagination! And same with the Humagus thing, too!

Reviewer: Vigie

Date: 2003-08-25

Reviewid: 48618

Chapter: 3

Wonderful story. Such a great idea! I've never read something like this. Great imagination, wonderfully written. I really like your Hedwig. Thank you for writing more. I would actually love to see something after the Epilogue.

Reviewer: dragontac

Date: 2003-08-23

Reviewid: 48359

Chapter: 3

aww that was really good. I'd of never imagined hedwig to look like that, but i'm happy you made her pretty. it's very fitting, and the entire story was quite funny, i look forward to reading your other stories!

Reviewer: Maegie

Date: 2003-08-23

Reviewid: 48341

Chapter: 3

How positively adorable! I had always wondered what Hedwig would say if she could talk.

Reviewer: Corvidae

Date: 2003-08-17

Reviewid: 47480

Chapter: 3

wow, that was a bloody brilliant idea! i don't know how you people come up with it but it was really splendid...im really inspired to do a story from after the epilogue some time. Have you ever read a well timed enchantment? it reminds me a bit of that. anyway really original idea i loved it. *-*

Reviewer: UnircornMaiden

Date: 2003-08-17

Reviewid: 47468

Chapter: 3

OOOO!!!!!! Interesting! Good job!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sarah

Date: 2003-08-17

Reviewid: 47462

Chapter: 3

That was really great! I wish you would continue it.

Reviewer: Alena

Date: 2003-08-15

Reviewid: 47292

Chapter: 3

this story made me cry. in a good way. fantastic job, I really loved it!

Reviewer: girmeister

Date: 2003-08-15

Reviewid: 47268

Chapter: 3

i loved this story! very creative! keep writing! (i also would like a sequel)

OOoooOOOOOooOOOH!!!!That was fun!!!I really liked that. You should follow up with something about Hedwig. I would definately read that!!

Reviewer: Clair

Date: 2003-05-29

Reviewid: 34297

Chapter: 3

omg.... wow, i love the way it finishes!! it's really good, i really liked this story :D..... you should make like a little series thing out of it... LOL!-Clair.

Reviewer: xxxMoonYxxx

Date: 2003-03-13

Reviewid: 23807

Chapter: 3

Lol! That was so cute!

Reviewer: theleprachaun8mysox

Date: 2003-01-23

Reviewid: 17526

Chapter: 3

Very nice fic about human nature. I loved the fact that she kissed Harry at the end. It was sweet the way you mentioned the different types of love. You are more insightful than many authors out there and I like that. Great story!

Reviewer: Calisian

Date: 2003-01-23

Reviewid: 17377

Chapter: 3

This was positively wonderful! So cute, and and very original! I enjoyed it emmensly. Now, I'm going to be a pest, but: Where is the sequel?? ;) ;)

Keep it up!Lizzy

Reviewer: LoreLai

Date: 2003-01-17

Reviewid: 16522

Chapter: 3

Oh..that was a great story!, i hope you are going to write another one about her humagus..that would be interesting to read about..a very unique plot line. I don't think i've seen this one around, lol, Great Job!

~LoreLai~

Reviewer: loonie

Date: 2003-01-13

Reviewid: 16047

Chapter: 3

That was amazing --- Please write more -----------SOON!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Michelle

Date: 2003-01-10

Reviewid: 15802

Chapter: 3

Wow! Fantabulous!! Extremely creative and funny! I'd love to hear even more- like what happens when Hedwig decides to become a Humagus. You could make a whole series out of that!

Reviewer: Medrillia

Date: 2003-01-10

Reviewid: 15781

Chapter: 3

This was one of the best HP fics I've ever read. Congratulations! I absolutely loved reading it.

Reviewer: Jessica

Date: 2002-12-24

Reviewid: 13825

Chapter: 3

Gear. The Beginning. I love that. Hedwig was so...perfect, and owl-like, and human-like. She reminds me so much of someone...I can't for the life of me think who...

Anyroad, I'd just like to spread the word that this is wonderful. I had a great time reading it.

I think I'll be back a few more times...just so you know...

Reviewer: Dellaran

Date: 2002-12-20

Reviewid: 13428

Chapter: 3

I love this concept... you've really made me wish I had thought of it. But I wouldn't expect I'd do such a good job. I really engoyed your characterization of Hedwig, the way she comes across as almost human but alien at the same time. Thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: Hermione's Hyper, Evil, Green-Eyed Clone

Date: 2002-12-09

Reviewid: 11936

Chapter: 3

Very cute story. My BETA happened to be reading this and told me about it, though they weren't to sure I'd like it at first. I happen to be a bit wary of Ron/Hermione's, mainly due to the fact I have unfortunetly come across a amazing Draco/Hermione where Ron isn't exactly seen in the best light. But this has changed my mind. ^_^ Great job! I hope to read more of your work soon.~Hermione's Hyper, Evil, Green-Eyed Clone

Reviewer: Adipodes Poe

Date: 2002-12-06

Reviewid: 11425

Chapter: 3

That was one of the most imaginative things I've ever read in the fanfic genre. It was original and thoughtful. You obviously know quite a bit about birds and our beloved trio was undoubtedly the most in character that I have come across. A truely great piece. Bravo!

Reviewer: Shadow Wasserson

Date: 2002-11-30

Reviewid: 10648

Chapter: 3

I loves it! I loves it alot! You have got to make a sequel. Unfortunately, you made one technical mistake. Owls do not have a very good sence of smell, infact, some can't smell at all. However, they are incredible at hearing and seeing. Thought you ought to know.

Reviewer: Ariel

Date: 2002-11-29

Reviewid: 10624

Chapter: 1

Hedwing is SO funny. I love it!!!! The 'when pigs fly' was faboulos. I hope u countiue writing!!!1

Reviewer: Hermione @ Heart

Date: 2002-10-26

Reviewid: 7078

Chapter: 3

Awww! That was fabulous! PLEASE write a sequel!

Reviewer: Anjerla

Date: 2002-09-19

Reviewid: 4318

Chapter: 3

COOOOOOL!! This story is awesome, I enjoyed every minute of it. Hedwig is awesome, and you did a great job making her seem real.

Reviewer: Eleuthera

Date: 2002-09-19

Reviewid: 4317

Chapter: 3

This was great! A very original premise, with lots of wonderfully funny bits. Hedwig makes a lovely human, and I love her uncannily accurate perceptions of the people around her. :DI loved the epilogue - it opens up a whole world of possibilities! One thing I thought you did really well was the kiss. It was so simple and straightforward, and very sweet. Let's hope Ron takes Harry's advice (and I'm sure he will, eventually)!

Reviewer: Absolutely Corking

Date: 2002-09-18

Reviewid: 4174

Chapter: 3

Wow, this story was really good...very sad in some parts...it made me feel feel sad anyway! I especially like your line about pigs flying, and then Pig lands on Ron's shoulder! All up, it was a brilliant story, and I really liked the character of Hedwig too.

Reviewer: Cassie M

Date: 2002-08-29

Reviewid: 3458

Chapter: 3

That was simply brilliant! The concept, the plot, the execution, the writing! Excellent and thanks for following this plot bunny -- absolutely LOVED Hedwig. Wish I had seen more of Pig and the conversation where Errol is chewing Ginny out would have made my evening!

Wonderful!Cassie M

Reviewer: GinnyDragon54

Date: 2002-08-28

Reviewid: 3435

Chapter: 3

I LOVE it! especialy the epilogue and the end of the 2nd part. "when pigs fly" was great!

Reviewer: Julie

Date: 2002-08-27

Reviewid: 3335

Chapter: 3

Fun story! Very original! Oddly enough, I think Hedwig is in character. If a human can be "in character" for an owl.

And the kiss at the end was sweet. I was a little scared at her jumping off the tower, but I suppose she knows when she'll change back.

This epilogue! I hope you plan to write more about Hedwig's adventures someday.

Reviewer: Madame Snuffles

Date: 2002-08-27

Reviewid: 3289

Chapter: 3

Oh! This was such an original idea!! I would have never thought of it. Very unique, and very delightful! I loved Hedwig's personality, you made it so believable that Harry's owl could be human.

Ouch, for Ron, tho! So glad Hedwig gave those gits a good kick :-D Loved all the R/H and H/G goodness of it, tho!

Very clever!Mdm. Snuffles

Reviewer: Hermione @ Heart

Date: 2002-08-26

Reviewid: 3279

Chapter: 1

Very good! I liked it alot, so creative! Keep working on it, pretty please with frog brains and licorice wands on top?

Reviewer: MrRobertsIII

Date: 2002-08-26

Reviewid: 3269

Chapter: 3

Loved that ending! My favorite line was:

"It has been quite a day, has it not? And to think, all this time I thought it was Harry's heroics that rescued them in the Chamber. When, in fact, you saved the day," said Albus, his tone humoring.

Excellent!

Reviewer: Michelle Ravel

Date: 2002-08-26

Reviewid: 3261

Chapter: 3

Wonderful! I love your carefree writing style--I laughed through this whole thing. There were so many hilarious lines, that I won't repeat them (you wrote them, after all...) but I do congratulate you on a story well written!

Reviewer: Sabre

Date: 2002-08-26

Reviewid: 3223

Chapter: 3

Cute epilogue, though I think human Hedwig may drive the trio mad in a short space of time ;-)

Reviewer: The Amazing Maurice

Date: 2002-08-26

Reviewid: 3211

Chapter: 3

Ooh! Okay, you absolutely cannot leave it there. More Hedwig-related adventures must be documented post-haste! Or I shall become grumpy, and get Sardines the rat to tapdance across your keyboard for all eternity. Such will be the extent of my wrath!

You, madam, are a sly, evil, cruel, MALICIOUS woman. And I suppose that you will now sit back and enjoy the even more profound wails of torment that this latest installment has caused. My deepest respects are thine.

Reviewer: Ara Kane

Date: 2002-08-26

Reviewid: 3202

Chapter: 3

LOL And I suppose you're going to leave everyone hanging onto this one! Bloody brilliant! :D (I can just imagine Hedwig as some Mata Hari type, seducing Death Eaters for the advancement of the Order of the Phoenix, in case you're interested in carrying this story further...)

Reviewer: J.N.Dingbaum

Date: 2002-08-20

Reviewid: 2622

Chapter: 2

Well done, as always. The last six sentences were excellent.

Reviewer: Ara Kane

Date: 2002-08-17

Reviewid: 2293

Chapter: 2

I'm not going to parrot (hehe...some bird humor in there) everyone and say that the part about pigs flying ROX'd (BUT IT DID!).Anyways, it was a great story. You used an interesting way to introduce a *new* character to interact with the Trio, and Hedwig's perspective is sorely ignored in fandom, so I found this very refreshing.Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: BookwormOwl~*~

Date: 2002-08-13

Reviewid: 1875

Chapter: 2

I read the story again and loved it even more than the first time!Guess what I cried again! I think everyone on the SugarQuill should read this story and give you a nice review. You are one of my favorite fanfic authors and keep on writing wonderful stories like this one. I just had to put a quote in, one of my fav's:'Ron seemed to cede something.He made a scoffing noise."Oh.Yes.When pig's fly." At that moment, with uncanny good timing,Pig alighted on Ron's shoulder.'That was so funny! Someone needs to tell someone here at the SugarQuill about that and all of your stories are great and everyone should read them.I mean it's their choice I'm just saying you are a very good author!Keep up the good work and keep writing! BookwormOwl~*~

Reviewer: sylvie grey

Date: 2002-08-11

Reviewid: 1640

Chapter: 2

what a lovely, sweet story. it makes a welcome change from all the angst and dark stories out there.

Reviewer: BookwormOwl~*~

Date: 2002-08-09

Reviewid: 1443

Chapter: 2

Don't think I'm weird or anything but I was sorta crying at the end.**wipes tear** You are an amazingauthor please make an epilouge or something because I think I'll cry more if you don't. Congrats on your wonderful story and keep on writing!

Reviewer: Manu

Date: 2002-08-09

Reviewid: 1426

Chapter: 2

I love this story SO much. I love the way that this story used Hedwig's turning into a human to go into the subject of love, and how stupid we are trying to hide it from the people we care about. I love Hedwig's human form. I love it how you made her funny and rational (even if it's in a twisted way) and simply way too cool for words without turning her into a Mary Sue.I love the R/H, but that's to be expected from me, so I won't dwell on it too much. =0)I love how you were able to turn Hedwig into a human in a believable way, and how you didn't turn this fic into a silly one, despite the plot being an invitation for silliness. Love how thought-provoking it is. I just love it. It's beautiful.

Reviewer: Giesbrecht

Date: 2002-08-06

Reviewid: 1137

Chapter: 2

"At that moment, with uncanny good timing, Pig alighted on Ron's shoulder."

LOL! This was a delightful little story. Thanks!

Reviewer: Golden Days

Date: 2002-08-05

Reviewid: 1074

Chapter: 1

Wonderful! Everyone was perfect, and the ending made me fall of my seat, I was laughing so hard! So funny, the way Hedwig had Ron and Hermione going in circles! And the end of the first chapter was written so well, I still can't convince myself that your not really JKR! So sad, though...

Perhaps another chapter is in order? An epilouge? Would you write it if I said 'please' one hundred times?

lovely story! you're very talented! thanks so much for a splendid read. i especially like harry in this one. can you write more? like, right now?

Reviewer: A.L. de Sauveterre

Date: 2002-08-05

Reviewid: 1025

Chapter: 2

Evelyn! What a truly wonderful story! I love how you've created such a witty, down-to-earth, fun-loving character in Hedwig! Gosh, your imagination astounds me. Her smug line about how animals see things humans don't--perfect! There are far too many delicious bits in this story to quote, but this one was one of my favourites:

<<"What?" It was Ron's turn now.

"Harry is just being an owl-pellet, that's all. I don't understand," she emphasized the words, which were directed at Harry, "what he's ruffled his feathers about. It's obvious you both are attracted to each other. What is the big deal?" she asked Harry pointedly, failing to notice with all her animal powers of observation the look of horror on his face.

"I mean you two obviously want to be each other's mate." She took a swig of butterbeer and snorted. "It tastes fine but the texture is disgusting, Ron. I don't know what the big whoop is. It doesn't taste at all like butter." The rest of the table was silent.

"You always seemed so sensible as an owl," muttered Harry.>>

LOL!! I could just see that! And a truly fabulous ending that packs a good cheeky wink! ;)

Thank you--very much--for sharing this with us! Brava!

Axelle :)

Reviewer: Valerie

Date: 2002-08-05

Reviewid: 1023

Chapter: 2

Ha! That was so cute! Loved it loved it loved it! hahaha, I loved the "when pigs fly thing" very cute. Hahaha, I'm giggling like a schoolgirl! Hedwig rocks!

Reviewer: Jaffacake

Date: 2002-08-05

Reviewid: 1021

Chapter: 2

Oh, so good! Loved the end especially. Pig's might fly... I never noticed that before. So smart! And I'm very happy Hedwig didn't come out all Mary Sue-ish, cuz that would have totally ruined a brilliant idea. =)

Reviewer: Silver Arrow

Date: 2002-08-05

Reviewid: 1015

Chapter: 2

What a cute story! I love how Ron and Hermione are "in denial" of each other, so to speak... ;) They're both perfectly in character. As for Hedwig/Harriet, she was perfect. ---Ron seemed to cede something. He made a scoffing noise. "Oh. Yes. When pigs fly."

At that moment, with uncanny good timing, Pig alighted on Ron's shoulder. ---That is so cute, and so perfect!

Great chapter. Keep it up.

Reviewer: Sabre

Date: 2002-08-05

Reviewid: 993

Chapter: 2

What an original idea! I just loved your characterisation of Hedwig, and the awkwardness between Ron and HErmione was nicely done too, I'm just sad she's an owl again ;-)

Reviewer: Darrel Doomvomit

Date: 2002-08-05

Reviewid: 955

Chapter: 2

sigh. love it.

lise

Reviewer: Madhuri

Date: 2002-08-03

Reviewid: 779

Chapter: 1

This is one of the most charming stories I've read lately. The concept is original and very quirky- I love it! Plus Hedwig, and teh Trio are very well-characterised. I really loved reading this first chapter, and I can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: Kat

Date: 2002-08-03

Reviewid: 773

Chapter: 1

Yay! Well written and totally original, and *so* bloody funny. And it has a basis in myth, just like the real books. And it's in character. And... *is gagged by people fed up of her talking* mmfffgggmle...

Reviewer: Werrf

Date: 2002-08-03

Reviewid: 757

Chapter: 1

Lovely :-) Please continue, I'd like to see what Hedwig makes of being a homonid.

What a creative idea! Hedwig being human... She's almost completely in character, too!

Oh, poor Harry at the end... *sniffs*

Reviewer: Sam

Date: 2002-08-02

Reviewid: 608

Chapter: 1

Very interesting... I could have never seen Hedwig becoming human though... If she was turned human wouldn't she had normal bones? Not hollow ones when in human... Well, I enjoyed the chapter... Hope another chapter comes... ^^

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