Please do not make new posts every time: see "Options" and hit "Edit" and say the new things in the original post. Do not make a new post each time. Not only does it make it spammy and unfair to others who are following the rules, but it makes people think upon first glance that you have had a critique already.

Sorry if I came off as a little mean, I see that you are new and might now know that, but please don't make new posts for every change.

Oh, okay. I'd seen other people who had done that, and I'd just assumed it was okay. Thank you for letting me know! I'm really nervous because, well, only one person has actually given me any critique, and that was in chat on day 6, and it's been two weeks since then on the forum and thrown into the chat and no one else has even looked at it as far as I know.

But that's no excuse, so thank you again for calling me out on that. I'll stop bumping it.

Please do not make new posts every time: see "Options" and hit "Edit" and say the new things in the original post. Do not make a new post each time.

DarkStuff, it's fine for authors to make "update" posts on their draft threads if they'd like to notify reviewers that the draft has changed, so long as the edits made were substantial.

That said, SpectralDragon:

I'm really nervous because, well, only one person has actually given me any critique, and that was in chat on day 6, and it's been two weeks since then on the forum

Likely because you double-posted. Reviewers on the forum target posts with no replies first, so if your thread already has a reply (even if its from yourself) the visibility goes down.

If you're having trouble getting further replies on a thread and chat isn't working out for you, you can message a staff member and ask them for feedback, or if they can direct chat attention to the thread.