Hey gals ~ Please have pity, it hurts us to see e/b apart! You know how when you get scared and your adrenaline runs through your body and makes it feel cool? that's how i feel right now. your discription is so heartfelt that it make me feel the hurt & angst as well. YOu are da bomb! Please post the next one quickly. I HATE TANYA (she's always a b...ch) Sorry, KimiD

he cheated on her this one time but it was this one time nd he felt horrible nd the realtionship was already going bad. but they went through it. she told mhim she needed time which they did take from eachothter and three months later he was engaged to her and they went to couples counciling which i got to go to one of the sesions it was so swet. she took it very well. if it was me i wouldve totally thrown everything all over the place she was calm and said ill talk to you in a few weeks and we'll see how it goes. it was realle good ending for once real life had a happy eneding

how could edward cheat on her? he is a jerk in this story but variety from the perfect edward is nice. please update soon bik. please.

could i ask a favour of either or both of you? could you read my new fanfiction. it is my first and i would like some constructive critism, and don't worry about being too harsh but bear in mind i'm only 15. after all how will my writing improve unless i know what is bad about it? thanks