the top half of the C is looking a little awkward and its the only letter with a true kink. The S kinda has kink just by nature, so to balance it out you shoulda bent the vertical bar of the R like the vertical bar of the C ya dig?

But to make it easiar to only change one letter, you could make the C look like the top half of your S

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Thanks for the crits bra
Im diggin both of those but on that aply piece im not really feeling the ly connection or much of the y. The A and P has alot more movement and the Y is that rigid style you were doin before.
The broke piece is kinda the same, i like the BR but the leg of the R to the E looks too rigid for what you had first.