This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:

magnolia_magic says:Hi Jayde! I'm here from Hufflepuff review tag! I'd seen this story mentioned during Keckers season (congrats on the nominations and win, by the way!) and I knew I needed to come check it out. I'm so glad I read it!

See, normally I'm not a James/Lily shipper. I'm a Snily girl myself, and normally I'm just not a fan of James. But I really liked the way you write him in this story. He's still lighthearted, but it's obvious that he's matured and humbled himself a little. I really appreciated seeing that side of him :)

And I just love his speech to Lily, and how she keeps interjecting. The whole thing just made me smile so much! And I liked how you used the lyrics, especially at the beginning. James is clearly nervous (and Lily's lateness only makes it worse) so the line about fearing rejection is so perfect there.

I can definitely see why this won for best songfic! You did a great job, and I'm so glad I got a chance to review!

--Maggie

Author's Response: Hey there Maggie! I'm sorry it has taken me such a RIDICULOUS amount of time to respond to your lovely review!

Thank you for the congratulations! ♥ Haha! I know what you mean... I'm sort of on the fence between Jily and Snily! :P I'm glad you like the way James is written in this, though! I wanted to make him seem like typical James, but he needed to be a little more mature if he was going to convince Lily to marry him! :)

I'm so glad you liked the speech! I thought it might have been a little too cliche or corny, so I'm glad it wasn't! Thanks for your comment about the lyrics, too! I've wanted to do a NKOTB sonfic for a while now, and once I chose the song, I really felt that these two were perfect for it!