I love this story! I'm so mad at Jacob, if anything happens to Bella... I read again cuz even tho this was in my faves, the summary wasn't what I rerembered, (i kept remembering Ms. Hot pants, lol) and there is another story with the same name. So glad I took the time to go through chapter by chapter to find it!

I found you! I started reading this story and because i was using my phone that died, i kept thinking about it but couldn't remember the name. i did add to my faves, but kept thinking this story was a different one. i kept searching for hot pants, ha ha. so glad i found and i'm gonna basically re-read. just wanted to let you know that i'd been thinking of you and your story. Great writing, and compelling. must be for me to search for over a month. Thanks again for sharing your fiction. i'll comment again after i reacquaint myself with the story..

OMG... just as I get them back, the chapter is over. Waaaah! And where the hell is she? I love the way you wrote the ending and switched into EPOV for the last few lines. It was very dramatic. I especially liked how the I love you was said and she disappears! So intriguing and worthy of the movies!

Uh, HOT. By the way. :) I mean, quick little excerpts, but still hot!

I am so glad he took the key back and she is going to stay with him! If he can find her! OH NO! :)

I agree, I also love these two...I love the way you managed to still make Bella fragile and innocent, but not so silly and naive. Cool version of her! Also, I love fics that switch from BPOV to EPOV like this.