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Hi guys. I made some music and I wanna share it with you (Sorry for that shitty quality. I dunno why on SC my stuff always sounds worse than on computer.)

I started producing dnb few weeks ago and this shit came out XD. I made it in 10 days and it's my first (in fact second but first own) dnb track. I compressed and tried to master it a bit (a bit too much i think, lol) but anyway, kick and snare are dubstep samples because when I was producing it, I didn't have any dnb samples which could satisfy me.

Could you tell me what's good/bad and give some advices? It would be nicee. I know that for example paino is a bit too quiet (and too compressed maybe).

That's really good for a first track! My first track was not as half as good As for critique, all the synths sound too loud. The sawish synth's melody doesn't really fit with the whole thing overall. Good luck on improving!