Wow. What an interesting story. I really hope that you plan to write about Ashley's further adventures at Hogwarts, and I can't wait to see her reaction when she finds out about her birth family!
Good job! :)

I enjoyed this story very much. I like her friendship with Neville. I would like to read more of the story, so I hope you still plan to write it. Would like to read about how she finds out about who she is, and how others feel about that. You have hooked me.

I really liked your story, but to be honest I was expecting it to be a bit longer. How does Ashley like wand lore and her summer with Oliander? Does she find out who she really is, and how do her and Harry react to that? I would love it if you wrote another fanfic continuing Ashley's story.

Other than the ending I think you're an amazing author and really enjoyed the twist!

I loved Lily's Daughter?! This was the first fanfiction story I read, and this story made me get obsessed with harry potter fanfiction! Many people will be disappointed if you don't create a sequel, myself included!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Reviews really help me keep writing. And I'll have you know I'm writing the first chapter as soon as I finish this review!

Loved it! I wonder when she'll find out about her birth parents... And is there any thing going on between her and Neville? Any way, I'm really looking forward to the sequel! I really love your story! But in my oppinion Ashley is a bit too perfect... :/ That kinda destroys a scene sometimes... But thats just my oppinion. Im still happy I found this story and I like the idea.
>3 schiwi

Author's Response: As to your first question, wouldn't want to ruin the story now would I? Same goes for her and Neville. I'm glad you enjoy my story! I've actually had to same issue with Ashley being too perfect raised before, I've been trying to slowly correct it. In my head Ashley had a perfect life before she turned 11, parents who loved her and friends but now it is starting to both unravel and weave back together at the same time...sorry I know that doesn't make very much sense...

Hermione was muggle-born as well therefore it doesnt make sense that she would be excited to learn about muggles, if she was one. lol. on another note i do enjoy reading your version of the story, its interesting. good work! =]

Author's Response: Whoops sorry that wasn't clear. I didn't mean Ashley was teaching her about muggles, I meant like muggle school subjects since Ashley has finished high school. And I'm glad you like it, reviews mean a lot to me!

Nice to see some more chapters from you, i was starting to think you'd stopped :( however it seems you've stuck to your word about not stopping so that's good :) anyway i'm still enjoying your story despite the long horrible wait ;) i actually completely forgot about the quidditch match that occurred when Harry was in the hospital wing so this chapter was a nice reminder, i can definitely picture Ashley drifting around causing trouble while looking for the snitch, and of course Gryffindor winning is always good :P anyway like i said before keep writing and chances are i'll be reading as i like the story :)

Author's Response: Glad to hear you don't hate me and didn't abandon my story! I'll be doing my best to get chapters up reguraly, but with my life that may not always be possible. And I loved writing the Quidditch match chapter, glad you liked Ashley's mischief :D

Hasn't Harry realized anything about Ashley being his sister,even after seeing his mother in the mirror of erised.she resembles her mother so much

Author's Response: Its the fidelus charm Dumdledore used, even if James and Lily were alive and looked at her they would know they have a daughter but the wouldn't know she was standing right in front of them. Just remember the spells weaken over time ;)

This is freaking amazing.
Will there be more? Please insert lots of English slang. That shiz be chillin me.
I wish I was a gangsta. Or really smart. I would even settle for moderately unaverage. But, no. Sadly the only awesome thing about me is that I can read. And I waste my 'talent' on fanfiction.
But this time, it's not being wasted. IT'S BEING CHOCOLATE WASTED!
Sorry. I watched Grown Ups last night.
I LOVE THAT MOVIE!
At first I was all, meh. Adam Sandler is okay. The pregnant lady is normal. And then suddenly... Things got weird.
I love weird things! Do you love weird things? There should be more weird things in Lily's Daughter. Converse are just not enougth.
I hate converse.
Jokes they are brilliam. I have two pairs of them except they're not high-tops because I'm an idiot and I keep getting the wrong ones.
Maybe, after finding out her true identity, she can go on an adventure where high-tops do not exist, and magic must be used to save the day?
I would so read that.
Okay bye.
And I love this. It's epic.
Seriously, bye.
Wait are you going to say something?
I'm hanging up now.
Okay.
Have you hung up?
No.
Okay on the count of three...
1...
2...
3...
Dammit. You still there?
Yeah. I'm worried that you have something else to say.
Whatever. I'm out.
*hangs up*
OMG WAIT I MEANT TO TELL YOU THIS AMAZINGLY IMPORTANT THING THAT MAY MEAN THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LIFE AND DEATH!
*silence*
Oh...
(basically the ending of me and my best friend forever FOREVER's conversation. Every freaking time.)
Bye.
*just want to say, I'm not retarded. Probably. But my parents thought my brother was because he didn't say anything non-pokemon related until he was four. What a messed up mofo, I know.*

OMR this is just such a supermegafoxyawesomehot book!!! I loved reading what you have up so far!!!M(BTW so so so sorry for not reviewing earlier, just joined and had no clue where to review :L) but excellent work and I loved loved loved every letter of it!!! :D How can you tell when a new chapter comes out? :/
Loved it and please (if you have the time and patience!!!) write it for all the books? Pwetty pwease??? :) Thanks for letting me read this 9.5 out of 10!!! :D

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it, and I believe you can subscribe to story alerts but I'm not positive. And at the moment I am planning on writing for all of the books and even beyond because I have all these crazy plot bunnies.

hey,
i have been following your story interestedly. i would love to give you some constructive advice, but i can only think of this; maybe the whole saving the philosophers stonr thing could have lasted a bit longer with a bit more detail.. otherwise, i can find no other critisism cuz it is too good!! keep on writing and keep up the great writing of the great fanfics!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I love constructive criticism because as the writer I'm more than a touch biased about the quality of my work. I'm glad you like it, and the stories not quite over yet ;) but unfortunately it will be a bit of wait since I'm heading into the black hole of no internet access.