Fluoroscope Eyes

Below is the poem entitled Fluoroscope Eyes which was written by poet
Christie
Moses. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Fluoroscope Eyes

Shimmer glowing
twinkling water
softly flowing
New moon casting shadows
Penumbras shifting
Lakeside silence
Silver dances
Placid....Tranquil
Liquid shine of peace
Why do I sit agitated?
Eyes drawn inward
Naked soul
stripped down
Barren like the winter trees
A skeleton of myself
Solitude surrounding me
Like a heavy snow
a January Shroud
A billion stars are upward
whispering your name
Chanting with their twinkles
of my eternal longing
Their brilliance mocking
Reminding me of distance
and my infernal sorrow
The moon casts an eerie glow
Across the rocky cliffs
taunting me with loneliness
The place beside me empty
I close my eyes
Lashes slightly damp
My hair falls forward
I take a deep breath in
and I conjure you
I see you there
in ghostly form
You wrap me in your arms
Suddenly the stars
cease taunting
the moon glows a sweet hue
and i feel warm seep in
you smile softly at me
you seem so very real
My aching heart is full
Your sexy smile stirs me
I feel such peace
you whisper words
that cause a laugh....
Is this happiness?
If I open my eyes
you will disappear
like a puff of smoke
Like the phantom you are
So I keep them
squeezed shut
tightly, heart pounding
and I smile
A Mona Lisa smile
all the mystery
of woman and love
and the infinite universe
resting on my face
How long can I sit here
I wonder.....
before my eyes must open?

This one brought tears to my eyes...it goes into my favs. I thought it was so beautiful & I can relate to this in my own life /past, deep things of the heart that aren't always talked about but are always felt. I loved the phrase "January Shroud" it got the emotions across perfectly! I hope you find happiness my sweet friend, I could see this so clearly like a picture or a movie, & to think of you sad makes me sad too. :( The ending lines are terrific. Love your lioness friend with teeny pincers

....so I would not worry about that "Precious Christie Moses!!!!"~For as they say, "patience and perseverence can be like gold...."~And well, I believe stongly within these qualities of character!!!~But if I could, I would love to sit upon those shores where "You" are at for awhile~just to laugh with "You," and see "Your Beautiful Mona Lisa Smile!!!!"~"Your Soul Is Soo Deep~And Soo Extremely Beautiful!!!!"~"Wonderful Write Christie!!!!"~"Love To 'You and Brianna,' John!!!!":)) On we go....

....and as far as Your precious thoughts and feelings go in regards to Your possible moment of life, as depicted within this profoundly deep and thus treasure filled write~I cannot tell You when to open "Your Beautiful Eyes," or how long to keep them closed!? But again, I would venture to believe~that either or, it is probably but a short while, until all of Your hopes and dreams shall be fulfilled!!!?....cont....

Well Mona Lisa~Smile~I wouldn't think that in Your case, that it would be that very long dear lady!!!?~Why are You soo amazing Christie!!!?~Why is it no surprise to myself, that 'anyone, whom truly knows even the half of "You," would not be completely drawn unto "You!!!!"~Personally, speaking for myself~its like I just want to put my head next to "Your Priceless Heart," just so I can hear its beautiful beating~Smile~"You Are Soo Beautiful, Inside~Completely!!!!"....cont....

You Know Beautiful Christie!!!!~I reread Your "ViValdi" before coming to this write~And there were just soo many expressions, images and spectacular verses within it~Smile~Yes, "It Is No Less Than 'A Treasure of A Gift To Know You!!!!'"~Here, let me send this to You now, before reading this write again....

Hi Christie.... I think I am going to have to go back to saying how awful your poetry is just so's I can take a break from words such as wonderful and awesome and amazing and excellent.. brilliant.. its either that or I will start making up words... like poetimanimus... yes there's a good one... Christie this was absolutely poetimanimus !.... thank you for your comment Christie... :)

Christie, this has so much apparant lonliness and yet so much wonderful passion. It's as if you speak directly to the reader, making in my case, me, feel like you are talking directly to me. That's a great effect my dear friend, the talent poet you are. Amazing! Michael

Well, wow, awesome write. Yeah, I agree with Stacey and definitely stay there as long as possible. Well, you should go back anyway, since I assume you are no longer there. The imagery, the emotions, the presentation - sigh - an absolutely beautiful, and simply outstanding write. Par excellence. Cannot say enough. Love, Shar