i must admit i got enticed by the pic of the leaf and the drop that looked like pearl...so i went to Man ke Manke first. Loved ur poetry there and everything about ur page made me feel joy and now coming here i have learnt something new today...Envelope Quintet. Thanks for providing that along with your well structured beautiful poetry about the essence of life. The lines, '' i discard painful emotions, take the ones that rhyme." ...will stay with me now along with Envelope Quintet.Thank you Vandana...for stopping by and thus bringing me here. That widget holding the flower...wow so cute...ur pages feel like garden to me...both ur pages. :)

Your repetition is most subtle, effortless it seems; the wind, the rhyme, the quintets (also new to me; thanks for sharing). Your piece feels both personal & spiritual. I like the lines /A few words hurt/a few sound wise/like oceanic tides they rise/.