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Comments on MetaFilter post Daft beat poemsMon, 07 Nov 2011 04:04:56 -0800Mon, 07 Nov 2011 04:04:56 -0800en-ushttp://blogs.law.harvard.edu/tech/rss60Daft beat poemshttp://www.metafilter.com/109193/Daft-beat-poems
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xFPE1n4aiKs">Four heroically daft beat poems</a>. Part <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TAChMGAhfmA">II</a>. (Via <a href="http://www.soundopinions.org/shownotes/2011/110411/shownotes.html">Brian Eno's latest interview.</a><a href="http://audio.soundopinions.org/podcasts/sooppodshow310.mp3"><sup>Direct 10:25</sup> </a>)post:www.metafilter.com,2011:site.109193Mon, 07 Nov 2011 03:09:20 -0800twoleftfeetEnomusicpoemsdaftbeatpoetrypablonerudajazzBy: twoleftfeethttp://www.metafilter.com/109193/Daft-beat-poems#4015386
It's better with the jazz. But anyway:
<i>Lithe girl, brown girl
Sun that makes apples, stiffens the wheat
Made your body a joy
Tongue like a red bird dancing on ivory
To stretch your arm
Sun grabs at your hair
Like water was falling
Tantalize the sun if you dare
It will leave shadows that match you
Everywhere
Lithe girl, brown girl
Nothing draws me towards you
The heat within you beats me home
Like the sun at high noon
Knowing these things
Perhaps through
Knowing these things
I seek you out
Listening for your voice
For the brush of your arms against wheat
For your step among poppies grown underwater
Lithe girl, brown girl
2.
Steep gloom among pine trees
Waves' surge breaking
Slow lights that interweave
A single bell
As the day's end falls into your eyes
The earth starts singing in your body
As the waves sing in a white shell
And the rivers sing within you
And I grow outwards on them
As you direct them
Whither you make them run
I follow for you like a hare
Running reared upright to the hunter's drum
You turn about me like a belt of clouds
the silence, though it is stupid
Mocks the hours I lay
Troubled by...... nothing
Your arms – translucent stones wherein I lie
Exhausted
And future kisses
Die
Lust
Your mysterious voice
Folds close echoes
That shift throughout the night
Much as the wind
Which moves darkly over the profitable fields
Folds down the wheat
From all its height</i>
There are a few drunken lines, then it switches to Pablo Neruda:
<i>
Drunk as drunk on turpentine
From your open kisses,
Your wet body wedged
Between my wet body and the strake
Of our boat that is made of flowers,
Feasted, we guide it - our fingers
Like tallows adorned with yellow metal -
Over the sky's hot rim,
The day's last breath in our sails.
Pinned by the sun between solstice
And equinox, drowsy and tangled together
We drifted for months and woke
With the bitter taste of land on our lips,
Eyelids all sticky, and we longed for lime
And the sound of a rope
Lowering a bucket down its well. Then,
We came by night to the Fortunate Isles,
And lay like fish
Under the net of our kisses.</i>comment:www.metafilter.com,2011:site.109193-4015386Mon, 07 Nov 2011 04:04:56 -0800twoleftfeetBy: tommaszhttp://www.metafilter.com/109193/Daft-beat-poems#4015418
Daft perhaps, but I've seen worse, much worse.comment:www.metafilter.com,2011:site.109193-4015418Mon, 07 Nov 2011 05:32:32 -0800tommaszBy: SPUTNIKhttp://www.metafilter.com/109193/Daft-beat-poems#4015431
Well, the music was nice.comment:www.metafilter.com,2011:site.109193-4015431Mon, 07 Nov 2011 05:48:06 -0800SPUTNIKBy: pracowityhttp://www.metafilter.com/109193/Daft-beat-poems#4015440
It's good, but it needs more <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8DUEAG5eO6c">intro and outro</a>.comment:www.metafilter.com,2011:site.109193-4015440Mon, 07 Nov 2011 06:17:23 -0800pracowityBy: spartacusroosevelthttp://www.metafilter.com/109193/Daft-beat-poems#4017027
I thought this was going to be Moody Blues songs.comment:www.metafilter.com,2011:site.109193-4017027Mon, 07 Nov 2011 21:47:12 -0800spartacusroosevelt