It seems a little small for me, but maybe I'm just dumb. Small both in terms of the size of the images (hard to make out squiggles), and in terms of your explanations. I think the number of steps are fine, but I think you're relatively brief in your comments.

However, you're awesome - and this tutorial is awesome. Just for my taste, I'd like it slightly more involved.

Thanks!
Jezebel, no don't!
Ian - the whiteboard markers on the screen, that's an old old advice I wrote, like back in -97 or so - but that was for 3d, not 2d. Sometimes in modeling I wanted to quickly have a 'help-line' without having to model it, so I drew on the screen. Very handy, I still use it. I should explain that on that page...

Jeez, Steven!! That's just amazing. I feel lucky somehow to have battled with clouds in my own crappy, weird and messy way BEFORE finding this brilliant tutorial. It's all so clear now. Yet I have had fights of my own prior to this awakening.
You know?