This was utterly fantastic!
Minor errors but most marvelous!
I hope she'll be alright.
I await the next chapter with much anticipation.

50/10

Author's Response: I'm going to take a small break from this story and i will take that time to edit part 1-part 3. I never got a chance to get my editor to see them so errors will be fixed! Thank you for reading.

Oh-oh! They're in trouble or so it seems. I really enjoyed this chapter. Awesome descriptions. It's nice to see Sirius from Kasey's perspective
Quote: "Compliments were invented for leggy blondes not normal brunettes such as myself." SO TRUE! And the worst part is that, like Sirius said, they don't need it 'cos they already know they're gorgeous and sexy and blah, blah, blah...
I hope you're not blond. Or I'm dead! LOL
Honestly, it was really amazing the whole thing. Loved Sirius' boyfriend-grilfriend proposal. And I think it's charming the fact that he finds it so difficult to express himself around her. It's sweet and gives Sirius' charcater a whole new turn.
I would like to know in future chapters about Kasey's story. What is she blamed for? And why doesn't she keep in touch with her family? Ok, we know why she isn't that close to her brother, the whole deatheater stuff... but her dad? Please, please, please update soon! I can't wait to read what comes next.
Totally adore it. 10/10, duh!
And well... cheers!

Author's Response: Lol! I always enjoy your reviews! I am a dark haired blonde naturally but I'm a rebel so i died it dark brown. A kind of fight-the-hair-color movement if you will! So you're safe! Kasey's story will be revealed very soon. Oh and remember we aren't supposed to know about her brother really. In the summary I give that away but she doesn't know that yet nor does anyone else for that matter. I'm trying to update currently because I want to finish this three day saga soon! Thanks as always for the wonderful review!

OH, THIS CHAPTER IS REALLY SHORT!
LOL. JUST KIDDING... I COMPLETELY AND UTTERLY ADORED IT. THIS CHAPTER IS WHOA!
SIRIUS THE SERIOUS GUY! (NO PUN INTENDED) THAT'S A NEW ONE. BUT I LIKE HOW YOU MANANGE TO MAKE IT LOOK, SO REAL, AND YET SO AMAZINGLY FICTIONAL AND DREAMY AT THE SAME TIME.
I'M IN LOVE WITH THE NEW SIRIUS AND I REALLY FEEL THIS CONNECTION WITH KASEY, PARTLY BECAUSE I'M A LOT LIKE HER BUT MAINLY BECAUSE YOU MAKE HER LOVEABLE. EVEN HER FLAWS SEEM BEAUTIFUL.
I SERIOUSLY WANT TO KNOW ABOUT HER PAST. THINK IT WILL BE QUITE INTERESTING.
AND ALSO CONGRATS ON THE BEGINNING, IT WAS REALLY CATCHING! MAYBE IT'S THE FACT THAT I'M FOND OF ENDINGS AT THE BEGINNINGS OR AS FAR AS ENDING THAT CAN BE CALLED. I USUALLY READ THE FIRST PAGES OF A BOOK AND THEN GO TO THE LAST ONES... I NEED TO KNOW HOW IT ENDS. REALLY, I'M OBSESSED WITH IT!
SO, TO SUMMARISE IT... AWESOME! 10/10 duh!
CHEERS!

FLOREN

P.S. I WOULD REALLY LIKE YOUR OPINION ON MY STORY. I HAVE TWO. BUT CURRENTLY I'M REALLY INTO "STUCK IN A ROLLER COASTER". SO IF YOU'D JUST TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK, OH MASTER OF THE FANFICS! LOL... I WOULD BE REALLY GLAD.
GOOD SONGS SELECTION, BY THE WAY!

Author's Response: Okay first of all. I LOVE THE EXCITEMENT! I am going to try and update soonish...I don't by when though because after writing so much I'm trying to not push it. Otherwise I might write too much and then I will get a writers block from the over usage of my brain! So! I really really really appreciate the review! That is has down the most spirited review i have ever recieved! I love Sirius too! If I were a man I would so be him! Oh and Kasey is me. Her whole character is based apon me. Her past is coming up REALLY soon. Like wait for it! I will read and review your story. THANK YOU SO MUCH! Oh and Ps: Flattery will get you everywhere dear!