Sans thought this was the end for him. However three unlikely characters will change the way Sans views of the world and fill him with the determination to keep going. So hold on to your seats Undertale/Mlp fans; its time to bring out DETERMINATION!!

After finding a weird, yellow, heart-shaped locket near the farm, Apple Bloom and her friends get to meet the next big hero of Ponyville, one they can depend on if the Elements aren't around... Ponyville... is getting... even weirder, now, everypony!

With a new life set for him, Sans gets a shot at redemption in finishing what he has started. Along the way, he made some unlikely friends and together, they face their greatest battle yet, where the fate of humans rest on both Sans and the Main 7.

The King of the Undead rises from his throne to seek out the flames to once more rekindle them and bring about a new era. But how will the ponies feel about a ancient warrior of great power coming to give them their due?

Rainbow Dash wakes up in a bed of flowers in a cave as a filly with amnesia. Lost and confused, she's taken in by a goat monster named Toriel. That's okay though, as long as she has DETERMINATION she can get through this.

Sans should be dead, he only has one HP after all, he felt the knife hit him, he saw himself turning to dust. Then why is he not dead?

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7652807 Many people believe that the Undertale community is toxic, this may be true, BUT I often times see people that hate it are just as toxic. Did you even read the story or did you just see Undertale and immediately hate on it?

7652858 In my experience, it's usually best to ignore people like that or, barring that, respond professionally like you just did. I had two people like that a while ago for my Evolve crossover, which is a Displaced and a damn good one too. They asked me how in my right mind could I ever produce something like it, and I responded honestly. Never heard from them again.

NO. NO. NO.Dear author. Never, and I mean NEVER put yourself down for writing something, anything, that you took the time to put some effort into. If you concede to the notion that your story will not measure up just because it's your first attempt, then you are already setting yourself and your story up for failure. Basically, you've lost the battle before it even began by saying this. I've seen it before. I've DONE it before. So please, dear author, do not sell yourself short just because you are "inexperienced". Who knows, someone might read this and think that it is the best damn thing that they have ever read.

Greetings dear author, I seem to have read your story far too early, but nevertheless it was quite an enjoyable story.I hope you continue on writing this as it is very interesting to say the least.But I do have some questions, but it's just what I think you don't have to answer them, okay?

Sans is a good Pers...Skeleton that I am sure of, but will they fight Chara together with all the ponies of Equestria? I would truly hate to see a massacre of these poor, innocent, and cute ponies.

Will the timeline be fixed or will Sans go on adventures with the mane six, acting like himself, but if the danger arises because of enemies like Discord, Sombra, or Changelings :They are going to have a bad time:

7665459 As much as I would like to do it, I can't. Remember, he just was brought here and he hasn't had time to get one, that and before the fight with Chara he dropped almost everything to increase how agile he was (excluding Papy's scarf of course).

7652891 Two things to help with that:You've got some action tags being treated as conversation attributions (including in the edited version). The writing guide has some pretty good examples of the basics of conversation grammar that should help with that, as well as some other handy tips.

Also, when it comes to conversation attributions, "said" and "asked" are your friends. They should be used unless there's a very good reason to use a different one. The reason why is because they're practically invisible to the reader, so they don't stand out, and the focus stays on the conversation. If you constantly switch between things like "murmured", "explained", and so on, well, those are words the reader will notice, and it will detract from the reading experience. Yeah, conversation attributions are a situation where using the same words over and over is actually a good thing.

7666655 Action tags can be used just as well as conversation attributes, as long as the quote is finished with a period instead of a comma, or it's a break in the middle of a quote elaborating on what the character is doing. As for the 'said' and 'asked' problem... That's probably my fault. I've always preferred knowing exactly how characters say something, so 'said' and 'asked' have always disinterested me. I'll try to cut down on the fancy words next time.

7670809 I'm not saying they can't be used in a paragraph that has conversation, just that, as you yourself say, they are different things, with a conversation attribution being considered part of the dialogue sentence, while an action tag isn't. And specifically, for chapter 1, this instance:

Celestia walked up to join her sister and glared at her, "I still think we should wait for a full investigation. Experience in combat does not make us professionals in the realm of forensics. I will call one of my detectives to make a full investigation of what happened here."

That's an action tag and so should have a period/full-stop. Considering that sort of thing happens a lot more in the second chapter than the first, most likely this one just slipped past you. It happens. And yup, action tags can be used in the middle of dialogue, but then they use dashes. But anyway, mostly just suggesting the author check out ENZ's writing guide, as any author should know the basics of conversation grammar. Editing takes time, and I'm of the mind that one shouldn't waste an editor's time repeatedly fixing the same type of basic mistake. So teach the author, and hopefully spare yourself the work in future chapters

Incidentally, the dialogue in the second paragraph lacks capitals, though that might a style choice for "ghost speech"?

I've always preferred knowing exactly how characters say something, so 'said' and 'asked' have always disinterested me. I'll try to cut down on the fancy words next time.

It is sort of weird how jarring the use of the various terms are, but they are, and so they are best used sparingly. Luckily, context can take care of it most of the time, be it through what is said, the situation, characterization, or an action tag. Make a pony hang his head, then say something, and the murmur happens automatically for your reader.