or zakei. i have to tell you this: zakei, although used in shattered, is not a copyright name. much as you may have spent time thinking over it and stuff, (which i admire since i cant think names for nuts) is an Indian name. i learnt that from a classmate. she was like 'you know thats a guys name?' then i was 'yeah?' then she said 'thats my cousins name' (and her cousin is old and working. in india.) SO. its quite a rare name though, but it still comes from india. so its not exactly YOUR name. but if you really feel offended and stuff, i'll change it. :)

wow, poor duncan. not only does he have such non-understanding parents, he has no one to make him feel special.

lspeakl chapter 4 . 11/9/2005

hehx. okay fine its a better than average chapter. i dunno. just leaves that kinda feeling. but colin was like super angst. o_0 and duncan was well.. very split personality. haha. and i STILL havent updated. nia

lspeakl chapter 3 . 11/3/2005

oh you dont know what (R)a means huh... erms.. How do i explain? o_0 Its like movie ratings? say the most suitable for kids and everyone would be G (general), then PG (parental guidiance) then PG13 (for the age barrier) then NC16 (no children under 16) M18 (mature audiences of 18 years) then finally (R)a (Restricted to adults) in other words, it just means you're explicit and the likes. happy? :3

that was long..

and i think i reviewed this chapter before? ill go check..

SO! THE REVIEW! *claps*

i dont like cyrus. i dont like cyrus. i dont like cyrus. *shakes head fervently* : hes like so.. sleazy. and is 'asstard' a typo or something lame and cheesy? ;

But Ophelia is cool! And brave too. :D? The way she spoke to Kirk. xD But i don't really get corina. haha. dosent really matter right?

The ending was kinda lame also but humorous. :)

dont get mad at me k? its constructive critiscism. ;D and besides i was ill (still am but fair bit better) and before that was post exam weeks and i was too hyped to sit and type and even before that was exams SO. nevermind. lol