Sound:
The backing track needs to drop more when you start narrating, it conflicts with the speech right from the start. Don't make the audience strain to hear what's going on. The narration kicks in far too soon, let people get a feel for the scene being set before charging in with information. Slow the speech down, it's far too busy.
The 'juggler's' comments are monotonous, he's clearly reading from a script, mutter mutter! Extend that voice and round those vowels out, it's real yawn material, I can't even remember what he was saying.
Leave some dead sound space between the narrator and the subject speaking, all this stuff just makes you feel as a viewer like you need to take a breath!

Lighting:
Some needed . Using ambient light indoors is fine, but this ambient light is simply not suitable, it's dull, loosing saturation generating a flat image let alone losing the aim of drawing the eye to the subject.

Camera:
It's just so unlikely that in some scenes the camera would be on a tripod, like the hugging scene, a documentary film maker would have been right in there, moving around the subjects to get the best angle, an static trpod mounted camera just gives the impression of a setup. Animate the cameras more generally, change the angles every now and then, if you've only one camera, shoot it from differing positions and cut them together whilst keeping an eye on continuity.
Drop the camera height a little on the sofa scene, gives the guy a sense of drive and confidence.

Titles:
Do not use fancy fonts. Have you ever seen a film with fancy font credits? Stick to Arial, Swiss light, that sort of thing, the one used for 'Harry now has 10 members...' looks good. Confident looking credits generate a sense of assertiveness, and never ever use red text!

Spend some time and make yourself a logo, I guess it's J L Productions (difficult to read), so I've knocked up this as an example:

I'm not suggesting that's an usable one, but if you can come up with something it'll be a feather in your cap for your course assessment, the fact you thought about it may help.

The logo was made in Corel Draw, a 'vector graphics' type program, It's fairly economical to buy and very versatile. the industry standard Vector based graphics program is Adobe 'Illustrator', but it's cumbersome, you kind of have to be an expert to be able to understand it, and costly, like all Adobe stuff really.

You could get away with a 'bitmap' based program, like Paintshop Pro (my preference), or Adobe Photoshop, but to be honest with care you could even use the simple tools in Microsoft 'Word', or even an 'Excel' spreadsheet, just use text frames to introduce movable elements, and set the frame parameters to allow overlapping etc. Once you have a suitable logo, zoom into it as much as possible, use 'print scrn' to copy the screen to the clipboard, open a simple bitmap editor, hit 'File', 'Paste' and it will dump the whole captured screenshot as a bitmap image, then just use a cropping tool to cut out the logo. Try and cut it slightly larger than your captured video frame size, or use image re-sizing to achieve the same, then you can adjust the zoom setting in your video editor to get a nice fit. Keeping it big to start with keeps the resolution nice when screen 'dumps' like this.

Btw, for speed, rather than exporting the Corel Draw image as a bitmap, I used this screen dump process to generate the jpg file you see above.