There are a whole bunch of grammatical errors in this update.Did anyone betaread on this one? Or did Bleedman write it such on purpose?Possible Corrections:"You humor me that you think this is over so simply.""Turmoil and despair make up much of my realm, and this battle was to be expected.""They breached my world on their own accord.""And I shall collect the toll for their trespassing."

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