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Lily123Evans says:heya! Ok. First things first. I LOVE the plot line so far. The pov changes are pretty cool too... you really get into the character's head! One thing that bothered me: the dialogue. Some of it sounds kind of awkward. Idk if thats just me but I just thought I'd tell you! But anywho. Great Job! :O)

Author's Response: hey. . . yay! i have worked on the plot alot and u have no idea how long it took me to get it to where it is today. . glad you like the pov changes i thought it would help the readers get to know the characters. . . . okay about the dialog be more specific. . . i would love to fix it cuz more than likely ur not the only one who feels that way. . . thanks for the information. . . glad you like it. . . keep reviewing!
~Ginny