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This one is a real thinker. I will have to return and re-read this one. I think you have actually written a poem about 360 directions,thus,a circle, that takes the reader around the circle with you. See I am having trouble explaining exactly how it moved me…but, in my head I know it did. It is very thought provoking…Excellent piece of poetry!!

Clay
I keep coming back to this one. It’s like the counter point to “when ravens cry”.
That one killed me with the paths seen but not taken. The risks not taken. The dreams not realized.
This one is almost worse.
So many paths to choose from with NONE of them taken.
The fear that the “wrong” one will be chosen. So to do NOTHING. Spinning.
Pick one. Please. Any of them. Act.

In the work that I do, I come across a lot of people who opt for the do nothing option. They hang their hopes on the mythical “someday” when they have all the resources in the world and a written guarantee that they will not fail, only then will they act.