Oh my gosh I totally LOVE your story! You are so the greatest writer ever! And this story reminds me of this one called "Harry Potter and the Muggle-Born Princess." I think it's by SydandLiz. You should totally read that, I know you'll love it. But anyways, great chapter! Keep up the great work!

great story i love it but one complaint.you said they lost 40 points. but it only added up to 30. 5 each for talking, 10 for talking about her and 10 for talking about snape. just thought i would let you know. ok bye.