Your modelling is OK, but I can't say the same about your compositing. I mean, the title is "lost toy", right? Well, it doesn't look like one! You should probably cover it in mud as Rotamus sais. Also, the butterfly doesnt have the right feel to it. At this height, it's probably just sitting on one spot, that would be nicer to show. Also, the lighting is not suitable for an outdoor scene. It should be harder, not soft shadows and everything. When I saw the title, I was thinking something like a lost toy, a dark scene under the bed, with a streak of light. faintly lighting up a toy, forgotten there for some time. Try to add some sentiment to the toy. I mean, as kids, we played with our toys, making them sad, happy, drinking tea or anything. I think a lost toy, would be a sad one as well.

Duffman

06 June 2003, 11:47 PM

moc mi se to libi! Je to moc pekny.

Good stuff :thumbsup:

magic6435

06 June 2003, 12:09 AM

OMG i rember that show !!!!!!

muki

06 June 2003, 12:40 AM

man that little dude is so cute. Great work. The depth focus really makes it come alive.

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