I absolutely love this, and I agree- society is so stupid nowadays. I love...just they way that you put your words, they way they're sequenced, how they flow. Their meaning is so deep, and how you executed your vision was excellent and beautiful.

I really like how you repeat "unborn child" with two adjectives. I think the way you did that really adds to the poem.

Recently, I've thought about society today, and i want to say that this is the best way anyone could ever put this. And I'm not just saying that. I really do love it!

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Without a shadow of doubt one of the most if not one of the best poems I've read on this site in a long time which has a meaningful message to convey. I'd easily read this to my own kids, if I have any that is. Sound advice in such eloquently written lines.