Ok now where to start. I might not have much to say BUT this is what came to mind.

Rie is in a whole lot of trouble so far when I was reading this and she finally met the kingpin Takuya. Wow he sure sounds scary.

I am trying to get past the fact that Toma is a goody or a baddy (I'm kind of confusing myself haha). So many things that I tried to keep pinpointing about Toma and Rie. Now that I know she was bait and he was in love with Christine. Wonder why shes leaving? Maybe she knows or thinks that something is going on between him and Rie!! aarrgh well I just hope that Toma gets to see her before she *coughs* leaves.

I don't like Takuya seriously when I started reading it just made me think this is like a movie.....just knowing that hes evil makes me wish that Rie had kicked his ass *winks*.

Now Talia hmm psycho or what?? one minute shes nasty and the next she seems a little friendly to Toma even thou shes engaged to him I don't know Toma just needs to kick her ass to haha.

Jun I definitely don't like him here (but *swoon* my OTP together) I mean hes flirting with Rie and Mao knows but doesn't care well as far as I can tell she doesn't care one bit about her father being a Yakuza. She seems so different to Talia's character but I wished she had been abit more tougher and that Jun is making me want to reach in and shake the living daylights out of him haha. Hopefully I get to read more about Mao in the next upcoming chapters *whistles*.

Plus curious as to why Jun wanted to drop Rie off somewhere. I still don't trust him at all.

Phew got that off my chest but looks like I am missing out on the rest of the characters and my most anticipated of all is Mukai.

Your preview is making me anxious and I want to know who said "I can't do it anymore........." oh the suspense of this story is killing me and I come back just to see if you've updated.

I am so glad you updated, and I am going to tell you straight up I WANT MORE lol

ok so Toma...he is seriously scaring me...I mean...I don't know what the fuck is happening to him?

Also Rie...she is in such deep shit man...I mean emotionally she is fucked up and she doesnt even know it.She is going to feel so bad when she realises that she likes...no she loves him...Also dude I feel so bad when you write all these things like...Toma and Christine loved each other...Lol and it's also kind of funny how you write Yamashita Tomohisa and the others just their name hehehe sorry im dumb like that XD

Ok Jun needs to get a fucking life I don't like him

Mao...I feel so freaking bad for Mao but somehow I think that towards the end she is going to end up shooting Jun...that's what I think :P

Talia...omfg she is such a powerful character...I mean I love how you write her seriously...first she is a cold hearted insane bitch and then she gives one look and one gesture that means she actually cares for Toma? Does she have any sort of feelings towards him? I think she does...but she also has something to hide by wanting to marry him....

And yeah when Toma asked her if she was looking out for Christine's wellbeing that she wouldnt marry him I was like YEAH WHY ARE YOU?

Dammit she didnt reply truthfully though...just like a true Yakuza!!!

Takuya...he is a fucking insane and like so scary and and SO HOT! Dude you are writing Yakuza perfectly I love this I seriously do...like all their emotionless killing...aaaaaahhh awesome lilly!!!

"Toma-" Mao blinked as she looked at her future brother-in-law. "She hasn't left yet you know? They're picking her up later tonight. She’s waiting to say goodbye.”

DUDE THIS IS SO SAD!!!PLEASE WRITE THEIR GOOD BYE SCENE FOR MEEEEEE DON'T INCLUDE IT IN THE STORY BECAUSE ITS NOT FROM RIE'S POV BUT I WANNA READ IT AND I KNOW YOU WILL WRITE IT BEAUTIFULLY AND AND AND

Ok I'm done...sorry I had to say it XD

Jun....fuck is he going to do something to her? I seriously hope not...oh oh or maybe he will try to do something to Rie and Toma comes and saves her and it's so cool and romantic and yeah im high

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