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Custom Jutsu Submission

-Each person has his/hers own fighting style or preferences and much like in Narutoverse, you sometimes feel the need for a certain ability or technique that better complements your fighting style or preferences. The solution? Custom Techniques. In Naruto Base's Role Play you have the ability to submit custom techniques here. To be able to properly submit those you need to follow these rules. Also, don't forget to check the previous Custom Jutsu Submission thread, ±±Here±±

±± How to submit a Custom Technique? ±±

1. Step One: Pick the Name and Japanese Translation. Use this Online Translator to help you. Be sure to name the techniques correctly by stating the skill/element/area to which the technique belongs. Don't use Japanese in Kanji form; use standard Romanji instead.

Note: In certain types of techniques, some of the fields (either Damage or Chakra) may not be required to fill, like with the damage of a defensive technique . If that is the case simply put N/A (Non-Aplicable).

6. Step Six: Describe the Jutsu.

Make a brief description of your jutsu and its effects. Don't forget to make it clear and understandable by using proper grammar. Keep it simple and clean. Also, you are required to make a logical explanation of how you achieve the effect of the jutsu. For example, if you have a technique that states "can detect enemy's location" you are required to explain how that is achieved.

7. Step Seven: Resctritions.

Add any restrictions that are deemed necessary for the rank of the technique and its correct use. Usage limit, duration limit, etc. Don't forget to make it logical and simply don't add restrictions in an attempt to make your technique more approvable. Restrictions won't change the fact that your technique may be OverPowered. In terms of logic, it pertains to the correct comprehension of the RP and its skills. For example, a high rank Lava technique would affect your use of Lava and to a minor extent, Fire and Earth but it wouldn't affect your use of Water.

Note: between the first bolded code, simply insert the name of the technique.

±±Formatting Restrictions±±

-No submission that uses font or formatting alterations such as underline, bold, allignement, color, size, spoilers, etc will be checked. The only exception is that you are allowed to Bold or underline the title of each technique you submitt and you can use spoilers for videos or images you need to post for references.

-An exception to the above rule is the requirement to bold the alterations on re-submissions. Its required that every altered or add part is bolded. If you simply take out something, write beneath the jutsu stating "I took out the part where...".

-In addition, please use proper English whenever describing your Custom Jutsu. Take note that if the context of your CJ is incomprehensible, then it will be automatically declined.

±±Resubmissions±±

-When resubmitting a custom that was previously declined, you need to quote the original submission and bold the parts you changed in your new submission.

±± Rank and Training Restrictions ±±

-You can submit techniques regardless of your ninja rank but you must obey the following table:

Code:

Genin -> up to E and D rank jutsu of the selected element
Chunin -> up to D and C rank jutsu of the known element (s)
Special Jounin -> up to C and B rank jutsu of the known elements
Jounin -> up to B and A rank jutsu of the known elements
S-Class Ninja -> up to A and S rank jutsu of the known elements
Sannin -> up to S and Forbidden rank jutsu of the known elements
Kage -> no limitations in rank regarding jutsu of the known elements
Sage -> no limitations in rank regarding jutsu of the known elements

-You are not allowed to submit customs without proper training for the area and rank you are posting.

Example:

User has training in Earth up to B-Rank (doesn't matter if its one technique or the whole B-Ranks) so he can only submit up to B-Rank earth techniques.

-This fact is regardless of user rank.

Example:

If user is Sage Rank but has training in Water only up to C-Rank he will only be able to submit up to C-Rank Water Techniques.

-Only exception are submitting D-Ranks of elemental ninjutsu. These can be submitted without training.

±±Declined, Do Not Resubmit±±

-When one of your techniques was declined with a "Do Not Resubmit" note, you can't resubmit that technique without the permission of the Staff member who checked that technique.

±±Animal Summons and Summoning Contracts±±

-When you reach Jounin rank you can make your own summoning contract with an animal. Use the search tool of the Custom Jutsu Thread both on this thread and in this to see if your contract was already submitted in the past. You can also check the Approved Summoning Contract List. And most importantly, don't forget to check the rules for Summoning Contracts posted here and here.

-To submit the contract please use this template:

PHP Code:

[B]Summoning Animal:[/B][B]Scroll Owner:[/B][B]Other Users who have signed contract: [/B][B]Summoning Boss if existing:[/B][B]Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:[/B][B]Description and Background:[/B]

-When submitting a summon you are required to post the link to the signing or owning of the contract.

-Techniques from custom fighting styles are still submitted in this thread but need a mandatory linking to the approved fighting style.

±±Weekly Submissions and Amount of Customs±±

-The custom jutsu thread works through weekly cycles of 7 days, marked by a post done by the staff, that contains the date of the beginning of the cycle and the date the cycle ends. In addition to that, the current cycle can always be checked here.

-You can submit 3 custom techniques per cycle. Remember that summoning contracts and weapons all count as techniques.

-You are allowed to have 35 Custom Techniques of your own. These don't include fighting styles, summoning contracts or custom elements and custom elements techniques.

-Each custom is property of only its submitter. If you add a note stating said custom can only be used by you, that custom can't be taught to anyone else. Your custom can't have co-creators.

-You are required to post every jutsu you made and all jutsu that others allow you to use.

-Each and everyone of your custom techniques posted in your thread needs to be numbered(from #1 to #35).

-When posting your technique, you are required to post the link to the techniques approval, by copying the link to the individual post in which the technique was approved.

-You are forbidden to use any custom technique that isn't posted in your own custom jutsu thread.

-The custom jutsu thread is your responsibility and its your duty to keep it up to date, clean and complete.

-Each custom technique can only be taught to 6 people (this excludes special cases such as Custom Summoning Contracts or Custom Element Jutsu which follow their own guidelines).

-A custom exchange/training cannot be revoked by any of the parties; its permanent.

±±Spam±±

-"Markers", or empty posts (with no actual custom jutsu being submitted) created for the sole purpose of being edited later on, are strictly forbidden and shall be considered as nothing more than spam.

-Any post that does not contain a custom technique submission is considered spam and thereby falls under the violation of the global rules of Narutobase.

-Posting a technique that has requirements such as bios or tests and that are pending approval or verification is considered posting a marker. When you post a technique you are required to make sure you fulfill all the conditions needed to do so. That includes training, bios, permissions, etc. Posting them ahead of having the requirements to do so to get your submission checked faster is considered posting a marker and is punishable.

±±Ripping and Copying±±

-You cannot copy or bluntly base your submissions in another members submission without his or hers permission. This is strictly forbidden and is a severe offense.

-If you find a submission that you feel is too much like yours or that is clearly and bluntly a copy of any of yours, please contact one of the RP mods with the link to your technique and the one that supposedly copies yours.

-The RP Mods may require you to prove you have traded a given jutsu. Be sure you can provide such proof if required.

±±Edits±±

-No one is allowed to edit his/her post after a moderator has already edited it. Resubmit if you feel that your technique needs to be altered in some way.

±±Alternate Accounts±±

-You are hereby forbidden to submit techniques from your alternate accounts in the same cycle you submit techniques with your main account.

-Failure to abide these rules may lead to infraction and in some cases, to a temporary/permanent ban of your alternate or main accounts from the RolePlay.

±±The Red Rule±±

-The red rule exists and you should check it if you don't know what it is. Bugging any RP mod regarding CJs that were declined and to which you weren't required to contact the given mod, is breaking said rule. The techniques are declined for a reason which is most of the times explained even if we are not required to do so. This is never respected but I urge you to start taking this seriously.

±±The Blue Rule±±

-You aren't allowed to direct us into how to check your customs or tell us to make edits on the submissions to make them approvable. Also, providing expressions like "I talked to X senior sensei and he said its possible" or any variation of such expressions is forbidden. Adding explanations outside the technique's description (or, by that matter, any expression or sentence directed at us) is also forbidden. Anything you wish to explain you need to do so in the technique itself, using the correct template, as it needs to be perfectly understandable by anyone if its to be approved. The necessity to explain or justify things outside of it renders such premise invalid and thus makes the technique unapprovable.

±±Disclaimer±±

-NB's moderators have every right to deny any move we wish without true explanation, because some techniques submitted do not reach a certain criteria that we feel should be accepted. Please do not complain, please do not argue, just take it as it is and please move on by creating something else. Most Jutsus however will state a reason why a technique or custom will not be accepted.

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These rules are based on Izuna's changes to Rei's original rules. Special thanks to Mina for the header!

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(jiton: sakin tsubasu) magnetism release: gold dust wingsType:SupplementaryRank:A-Rank(10*)Range:Short - Long RangeChakra: 30Damage:N/ADescription: The user creates wings made out of gold dust on their back. these wings can fly by creating a magnetic field on the ground and then manipulating the field so that the wings can grind on them, simulating flight
Note: only last five turns

±± Declined ±± Similar techniques exist already.

(go-ruden subaku washi) Golden Desert EagleType:WeaponRank:S-RankRange:Short RangeChakra:N/A(-20 per turn)Damage:N/ADescription:The Fourth kazekage used a great volume of gold dust and compressed it into the shape of an oversized elegant cleaver. This greatly increases the hardness, creating a gigantic steel-like weapon. The sword is as tall as Gaara, 166.1cm. The cloth on the hilt can also be used to swing the weapon like a flail and toss it at opponents for mid-range combat, but this is rarely done. go-ruden subaku wash wide blade can be used as a shield from incoming attacks. The blade as a thin layer of wind around it, increasing the sharpness of the blade, making it so sharp that if a butterfly were to land on the sharp end of the blade, it would be cut in two. After the death of the fourth kazekage, Gaara took the blade for his own. The Blade has no special ability other than being sharp and made out of gold dust.The user can reflect light off the blade which can be used to blind the opponent temporally.
Note: The gold dust on the blade is hardened as hard as possible, making it unable to be cut or be broken
Note: since the blade has a thin layer of wind surrounding it, lightning cannot be channeled into it.
Note: If the blade is wielded by anyone other than gaara or the foruth kazekage, the blade weighs itself down to where not even tsunade with her brute strength can pick it up
Note: Can't cut through enemy techniques or be used to defend against lightning projectiles
Note: Wind coating and the sharpness given is only usable against non special weapons or flesh

±± Approved ±±

(jikashu Ninpou:sakin parusu) magnet ninja art: gold dust pulseType:OffensiveRank:Forbidden-RankRange:Long RangeChakra:50Damage:100Description: The user preform's the Boar → Dog → Snake hand-seals and then claps their hands together. Once the hand-seals are finished, The user gathers a large volume of Gold Dust and compresses it into small sphere, and then rises it 20 feet in the air and drops to the ground then it explodes into a giant white light filled with electromagnetic energy that covers 20KM width and 10km in height.The abrupt pulse of electromagnetic energy causes changes to the electric fields and magnetic fields causes anyone within the blast to loose their magnetic fields and unable to use lightning type techniques for the next two turns.
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Must have mastered magnetism
Note: The magnitude of the technique causes the user to take damage because of chakra usage(30*)
Note: This uses all of the user's magnet chakra, causing them unable to use magnetism at all in the next turn
Note: No lightning above B in the following turn
Note: The user will not be able to preform more 3 hand-seals the next turn
Note: can only be used by Gaara NB member

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Raiton: Raikou teppou : Lightning style Lightning gun
Typeffensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 25
Damage:40
Description: The user will make the Tiger, Snake, Boar, Ox, Rat, Rooster, Tiger, snake, sheep, pig, dog and tiger and start to gather ligtning chakra in his hand then after that the user will shoot out a blast of lightning through his index finger.

Note
- Can only be used by Sage of Darkness and those he tought to.
- The user can not use any B rank Lightning that same turn
- The user hand will go numb for a bit~Declined~ Similar jutsu exists.

Buki: Seirei Gai: Weapon Spirit Scythe
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/a (i think)
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/a
Description: The spirit Scythe is a special scythe formed in Kumogakure. It was given to Sage of Darkness by his father when he was an academy student. The spirit scythe has the ability to cause tremoundous fear. It is said that its weilder has power over the dead but it hasn't been collaborated yet. The spirit scythe has blue color and a Light blue color with an iscription on it which no one has decifered.

Note
- This weapon is personal to the Sage of Darkness and can only be used by him~Declined~ Please explain the extent of the tremendous fear this scythe causes. Also explain to what extent it has the power to control the dead.

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Ninjutsu: Kemuritadai no Jutsu) | Ninja Arts: Heavy Smoke Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+10 to Smoke Techniques)
Description: When using a smoke technique the user forms two extra hand seals and focuses on creating more particulate matter for their smoke. The increased particulate matter causes the smoke to become thicker and heavier giving it a darker gray tone. Because of the increased weight it hits with more force and makes it even more difficult to breathe. It also gives the smoke resistance to being blown away giving the technique used resistance to A-rank and below wind techniques.
-Requires wrist launcher(s) for use.
-Cannot be used in conjunction with a technique that uses smoke bombs.
-Can be used four times per battle.

±± Declined ±± The resistance against A-Rank and below wind isn't possible. If you use this in a B-Rank Smoke jutsu, it will be a Strong B-Rank but a B-Rank smoke non the less which would make it weak against B-Rank and above wind. Be it a normal B-Rank Smoke and it would be weak against C-Rank wind and above.

(Ninjutsu: Kemuri Sekkan) | Ninja Art: Smoke Sarcophogus
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user forms three hand seals and releases a stream of smoke from their wrist launcher that rapidly envelopes a target and condenses around their body. This acts to restrict their movements while also suffocating them if they are caught in it for more than 2 turns. This can also be used to condense pre-existing smoke (created through smoke jutsu from the user) around them to bind the target.
-Can be used three times per battle.
-Must know the location of the target.

±± Approved ±±

(Ninjutsu: Tsuin Kemuri-ryu) | Ninja Art: Twins Smoke Dragons
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user forms three hand seals and then streams smoke out of a pair of wrist launchers. The smoke from each of the launchers forms into a dragon similar to the one produced by Kiho. The dragons race towards the target and can be controlled to change direction by the user.
-Can be used twice per battle.
-Requires two wrist launchers.
-Cannot use smoke techniques above S-rank the following turn.~Leaving for Another Moderator~

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(Doton: Chou Tengen Toppa)- Earth Release: Giga Drill Breaker
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will perform three hand seals, and then place one palm onto the ground. When they remove the palm, they will cover their hand with earth, and use shape manipulation to form a massive drill at begins at the wrist, and extends outward six feet. When desired, the user has the option to fire the drill from the wrist via chakra towards the opponent. The range of the fired drill can extend to long range. The incredible drilling and puncture impact of this technique allows it to pierce most walled/flat surface defenses.
Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: Due to the weight of the drill, the user must have had mastered Taijutsu

(Heron Geijutsu: Dākuburū no Bunsan)- Heron Technique: Dark Blue Dispersal
Type: Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will perform three hand seals, and then spread their arms out straight to the side of them. From both of their wide sleeves, a flock of small Herons will erupt, and fly outwards from the user. As the Herons fly away from the user, the user's body will disperse. The user can them reform from any Heron of his choosing, but can only move one range at a time. This technique can be used to avoid incoming attacks. The summoned Herons will disperse after the user reforms from one of them.
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Must have signed the Great Blue Heron contract
*Note: Usable two times per battle~Approved~ I limited it to two times, and note that the dispersion does not make you impervious to any form of damage.

(Bakuton: Cho-shin no Shinka Ju ni Tsubasa no Robu)- Explosion Release: Evolved Twelve Winged Robe of the Butterfly God
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: While Explosion Release: The Clay Cloak of the White Butterfly Lord is activated, the user will release a thread of clay onto themselves, further manipulating their clay armor. The already existing clay robe will sprout three large wings used for flying on the upper back, on each side. On each side of the lower back, three smaller wings used for quick aerial maneuvering and speed appear. The flying speed while in this armor can only be tracked by 1 Tomoe Sharingan or above or another doujutsu. The robe is even more effective at blocking attacks than the original, having the ability to fully block up to A-rank elemental ninjutsu attacks. This is done by folding the wings down in front of the chest, forming a cocoon around the user's body. Even the momentum from attacks is slowed, leaving almost no transfer of energy to the actual user's body. Being partly earth based, it it also very resistant to water, having the ability to defend against water S-rank and lower. However, due to its natural weakness to lightning, a direct A-rank lightning attack will destroy the cloak.
*Note: Must have a Deidara biography
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Can only be used while "Explosion Release: The Clay Cloak of the White Butterfly Lord" is activated
*Note: Usable once per battle; Lasts for 3 turns
*Note: Can block up to 2 techniques total, before it begins to crack and fall away; (Any mix of Suiton/Futon/Katon/Doton)

(Explosion Release: The Clay Cloak of the White Butterfly Lord is a previous jutsu you approved. If you need me to post it, please just put pending on this technique and ill send you the link so I dont have to resubmit next week)

~Declined~ The bolded is a bit silly, and there should be a continuous chakra cost for the duration. At the very least, get rid of the 1 Tomoe sharingan part, as anyone should be able to follow it if only a 1 Tomoe Sharingan is needed.

I am looking at the stars. They are so far away, all we ever see of stars is their old photographs.

Red flesh cloud's choking outthe morning sky, they saidit'd never come, we knew itwas a lie. All forms of lifedie now, the humans allsuccumb. Time to kiss your assgoodbye. the end has justbegun.

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(Suiton: Maruchi-Heica no Jutsu)- Water Release: Multi-Arms Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: the user concentrates chakra into his arms and sides and forms either 2 or 4 replica arms, 1 or 2 each side both below the original arms on the users sides. This allows the user to wield more weapons at once, hold short range enemies off while doing hand seals with another pair of arms or deliver taijutsu combinations in shorter times.
-Only lasts 4 turns.
- Can only be used by members of the Hozuki Clan.

Summoning Technique: Akainu
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood on their hand the user can summon Akainu, a middle aged hyena with red and black fur who had been trained by a member of Iwagakure that has mastered Lava release to perform Lava up to A rank.
-Once per battle
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Can only be used by those who have signed the Hyena contract.

Summoning Technique: Kuzan
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood on their hand the user can summon Kuzan, a young hyena with blue and white fur who had been trained by a member of Iwagakure that has mastered Ice release to perform Ice jutsu up to A rank.
-Once per battle
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Can only be used by those who have signed the Hyena contract.

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(Kunai Shikyo Genkaku) Kunai Death Illusion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: If the opponent throws a kunai at you, you essentially make 2 handseals placing the opponent under genjutsu and throw a kunai back, deflecting the kunai the opponent threw. However the opponent is set in a genjutsu as soon as the two seals were done. The genjutsu is that he sees you throw a kunai back, but his hits yours at a certain angle that makes him think it knocked yours away and killed you. Because he sees that happening in the genjutsu.

- Can only be used twice per match- Lasts two turns
- Must skip 2 turns before using
- Must be used in mid range only to allow enough time for the two handseals.~Declined~ Don't see the applicability of this and it seems really silly for the user to be supposedly killed by a single kunai that has been knocked away.

I got permission from Caliburn to make this

(Doton: Kabe-O Honsho No Jutsu) Wall Of Text No Jutsu
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will make 5 hand-signs and slam their hands to the ground. A giant hollow wall will rise from the ground with two giant doors, it is as tall as Gamahiro and 3x thicker than Gamabunta's Sword. The user makes another handseal causing the doors to open and letters will burst out from inside the wall into 4 chains made of text made from the earth of the wall that will attempt to wrap around the opponents limbs. If successful the user then makes one more handseal, causing the chains to tighten, crushing the opponents limbs as the chains retract, pulling the opponent into the wall where the doors then slam shut, trapping the opponent inside. The wall will then go back into the ground and close in on it'self, crushing the opponent.

Notes:
- Can only be used once per battle
- Must have mastered Earth
- Must be of at least Sannin Rank
- No A Rank Earth for the next turn
- Due to the walls Size, it takes 15 seconds for it to completely rise and 3 seconds for the doors to open.
- The chains take 2 seconds to get to the opponent per 5 meters. So, 2 seconds for short range, 4 seconds for mid range and 6 seconds for long range.

Kind of simple to counter as all you have to really do is avoid the chains. But if approved let's just leave that for the opponent to figure out since the only thing that attacks is the chains so it should be common sense.~Pending~ I'll leave this for Caliburn

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Raiton:Byakurai)-Pale LightningType:Attack|SupplementaryRank:ForbiddenRange:Short-LongChakra:50Damage:100Description:This technique is similar to Chidori Sharp Spear, but its power far exceeds it. The technique is performed by the user focuses their lightning chakra towards their index finger. They then begin to compress the stored chakra in their finger. Then, by releasing the chakra from their index finger, into a dense spherical shaped beam of lightning, roughly 3x the size of chidori sharp spear. It can reach up to long-range, wrecking and piercing through many objects, however, the user is unable to control the trajectory, the direction, like Chidori Sharp Spear. The beam simply goes in one direct manner, and thus, the lack of flexibility. The technique is forbidden due to the fact that because of the huge amount of chakra built in your puny index finger, and releasing it all at once, quickly, at the same time, it is lightning chakra, it would cause your index finger to be numb for one full turn, unable to move it, remaining limp. The finger will also look slightly burnt and black during this time, causing some stinging pain to the user. This makes it impossible to perform hand seals during this duration

-Can only be taught by Toshiro
-Only usable 2 times per battle
-Cooldown of 3 turns(including the turn the finger is numb)
-No S-rank Lightning and above in the cooldown period

~Approved~

~Resubmitting since I never finished editing my post in the previous thread~

(Raiton:Hiryū Gekizoku Shinten Raihō)-Flying Dragon Striking Heaven Shaking Thunder CannonType:AttackRank:S-RankRange:Short-Long RangeChakra:40Damage:80Description: The user raises their arm forward and outstretched, occasionally using their free hand to grip the firing arm for extra support, with the palm facing flat toward the target. They then fire a gigantic beam of electricity and chakra powerful enough to destroy anything that it comes into contact with. When the jutsu gets within short range from the target, it breaks into thousands of small senbons, which goes through the users body cutting off their chakra network due to the senbons being so tiny. This effect is a lot similar to Rasenshuriken, but the Senbons aren't fatal.

-Can only be taught|used by Toshiro
-Only usable 2 times per battle
-Three turn for cooling down
-No B-rank Lightning and above during the cooldown period

~Declined~ Anything that it comes into contact with? Also, how would the senbon not be fatal if they cut the chakra network at a microscopic level?

(Doton: Doro Souran)-Mud ControlType:SupplementaryRank:D-rankRange:n/aChakra:10Damage:n/aDescription:The user begins by focuses a small amount of Doton chakra towards both of their legs. Using the Earth Chakra the user can now travel ontop of a mud surface without sinking due to the earth chakra.

-Can only be used|taught by Toshiro
-While using this jutsu, the user cannot perform any earth techs

To be honest I think a D-rank shouldn't have many restrictions thus why I made only two.-.

FEEL free to edit what needs changing.-.~Declined~ Mud manipulation/control is a CE. Plus, it shouldn't need restrictions. I don't see why this needs to be a jutsu, regardless.

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(Logion no fukusūgata mōdo: Kaze no fōmu) Logia Mode: Wind

Type: Attack/Defense

Range: Supplementary

Chakra cost:40

Damage Points: -10 Damage points to the opponent

Description: This technique is one of a strange and unique yet odd background .Ancient shinobi who had affinity to wind decided shortly after the third ninja world war that they where going to attempt to accomplish a new feat and step up to their elemental affinity by attempting to turn their body temporarily to wind this as in order to give them a more and fast and powerful response lightning affinity ninja .The user focuses on his fuiton chakra and fuses it completely with his raw chakra up to the point were the fuiton chakra is seen leaking out of his body as if it were an armor or shield he then fuses his body with the fuiton chakra changing the cell structure and composition given the user a temporarily wind based body .While in this mode the user can travel at high speed due to the wind and also can dodge lightning attacks which much easiness .While using this jutsu the user body Takes a form of a ghostly like smoke made of wind but still Remains its bodily properties such as hands palms ans feet to do hand seals and thee ability for the body parts to take a similar appearance as if it were not using the jutsu.This jutsu and technique is only applied to the chest and upper part of the body which most offensive attacks are aimed at by the opponent.

神のサイレントアサシン。怒り Kami no sairentoasashin. Ikari:Silent Assassin .Wrath of the God
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range Mid-Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This sword has been rumored countless times to be a myth by Shinobi and samurai due it immense and un equaled strength and abilities however the sword true background comes from a time w the ninja world was barely existent and new villages such as Konoha were merely formed or just made. Ninja who had a single affinity to wind where looking for a way to create a weapon which will retain and withhold or the properties of wind and at last give them the upper edge against ninja who have ration as their main affinity. How ever the sword was evolved from having and being a weapon which was intended to merely be for wind affinity ninja to an elemental weapon capable of usage by an shinobi with another element this is because the sword also took it properties and acted as if it were mainly only used by that affinity. Ninja who were wind affinity as their main element were given the upper edge than other single element users this is because the sword was initially designed for the purpose of being for wind user. While wielding the sword any elemental user (In this case being wind)Infuses his wind chakra into the sword up to the point t were the wind chakra is seen leaking out of the sword and the sword is giving a glowing like look the user while wielding the sword can cut any s rank ration attacks in half or absorb it but this is only for ration ,due to the elemental weakness and the wind elemental strength over it. However this does not apply to other elements as the sword can only cut other elements such as doton,katon,suiton,mokuton,Jinton To A rank. It is an ornamentally decorated blade with a length of 7 feet it is made with titanium which makes it indestructible and a coating which called porcelain. Porcelain enamel is defined as a substantially vitreous or glassy inorganic coating bonded to metal by fusion at a temperature above 800°f. which is an inorganic coating attached to metals which serves as a shield or cover against high temperatures and degrees and also to resist against t heat such as fire lava etc. The sword physical strength and properties alone gives it the ability slice tiny rocks and overpower normal swords and Block kunai with ease merely by a single slash .

Fire: User which decide to use fire instead of wind. Must infuse their own elemental affinity into the sword .However this can cut s rank wind attacks due to it elemental strength and power over it but can only cut A rank techniques for the other elements .This excludes water which it can only cut or absorb the jutsu up to b rank due to the water elemental strength over it.

Water: If the user decide to use Water instead of wind. The user will then infuse his suiton chakra in the sword thus making it share or having the properties of water but still remaining it strength and original sword components such as its titanium and porcelain component structure .This will be able to slash and absorb S rank fire technique. It can slash and absorb other a rank Elemental techniques in half excluding earth which it can only absorb or slash b rank jutsu due to earth elemental strength over it.

Earth: If the user decide to use Earth instead of wind. The user will then infuse his Doton chakra in the sword thus making it share or having the properties of water but still remaining it strength and original sword components such as its titanium and porcelain component structure .This will be able to slash and absorb S rank Water technique. It can slash and absorb other a rank techniques elemental techniques in half excluding Lightning which it can only absorb or slash b rank jutsu due to lightning elemental strength over it.

Lightning : If the user decide to use Lightning instead of wind. The user will then infuse his Doton chakra in the sword thus making it share or having the properties of water but still remaining it strength and original sword components such as its titanium and porcelain component structure .This will be able to slash and absorb S rank Earth technique. It can slash and absorb other a rank techniques elemental techniques in half excluding Wind which it can only absorb or slash b rank jutsu due to Wind elemental strength over it.

Note:Must have mastered wind to use the wind version.

Note:The sword can only be used once in a battle.

Note:The weapon last for three turns.

Note:The user must decide which mode to use before the battle .

Note:The user can only change from one mode to another once in a battle

Description: The user channels his raw chakra around his body distributing it equally to all parts he then focuses his chakra on one region being his back some meters before his shoulder bones the user focuses. The jutsu user then uses his pure raw chakra and sprout at 4 arms which retain some physical properties of that of a real arm due to the chakra thickness and intangibility. The arms shaped appearance is gotten from chakra manipulation and shape manipulation arms are capable of performing jutsu which require hand seals and can be done through the hand such as rasengan and chidori .The arms are also capable of countering and shielding the opponent against small projectiles such as swords and explosive kunai by using their chakra to make a slim wall of chakra which can defend against c rank attacks and below. This jutsu is also useful in genjutsu as it can be used as a form of releasing it this can be done by the chakra arms landing or performing or shooting small jutsu such as small projectiles at the user.

Note:Can only be done once in a battle

Note:Last for 2 turns

Note:Must have mastered Ninjutsu

Note:Must have thunder bolt permission to use

~All Declined~ The first one has been made already. The Second One is Overpowered and essentially 5 swords in one. The last one is just a rip-off of Jinchurikki Chakra Arms. Do not Resubmit.

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Sakasa Hiraishin no Jutsu | Inverted Flying Thunder God Technique
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (if used with a kunai slash as the finisher)
Description: This is a space/time ninjutsu.This jutsu can only work if the user has placed a seal or has direct contact with the item/target. This jutsu has an inverse effect to Flying Thunder God Technique, as it does not instantly teleport the user, but the item/target he has direct contact or had previously been marked with the Seal of Flying Thunder God. The user can only teleport the item/target to another previously made seal.
- Only Yondaime/Fourth hokage can use this jutsu,And is unavoidable unless with space/time ninjutsu and can only be used 4 times per battle.
-Can only be used by Gin-San.

±± Declined ±± Hum...so you put the tag on something and teleport it to another tag. 4 times? Too much. Also, you need to make this a bit more restrict...not in terms of uses but in terms of its ability. The way it stands is quite OP albeit possible within the concept. Take out the damage also.

Jikūkan: Rasenrengan | Space-Time Double Spiral Sphere
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: All ranges
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After scattering FTG seals all over the field (By kunai or other means) Minato will teleport in random patterns to confuse the opponent. When reaching the opponent's blind spot, Minato will make a huge forward burst toward the enemy, and as he does it, he will slam two rasengan into him, sending him flying.
-Can only be used two times per battle
-Can only be used by Yondaime Hokage bios
-Cannot use any jutsu above S-rank in the next turn
-Can only be taught by Gin-San

±± Declined ±± Good idea but this has a flaw. Each teleportation of Minato counts as a move in our RP. If you teleport multiples times, its a mess in terms of approval as it makes you very difficult to counter. Make it 2 consecutive teleports within scattered kunais and take away the blind side part. Also, make it 1 rasengan.

Raijin no Gyakujou |Frenzy of the Thunder God
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: All Ranges
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This technique will only work if the target has been marked with the special shiki-jutsu(seal jutsu) or if a previously marked item is within close range of the opponent. Minato will instantly teleport to the nearest seal from the opponent, and will burst quickly toward the opponent (fast enough to look like a blur), slashing him. He then will redo the pattern for a total of six times, though all of them coming from different angles (this is, teleporting to the same kunai but in a different angle than the opponent, as FTG allows the user to teleport at any position within close range). After the final slash, Minato will kick the opponent in such way that will throw him upwards in the air.
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Can only be used by Yondaime Hokage bios
-Can not use any jutsu above S-rank next turn
-Can only be taught by Gin-San

±± Declined ±± Same problem as above with the multiple teleports. Only cannon combos for minato will be allowed to have more than 2 teleports in one move. Keep it at a level that a small sliver of hope for countering this still exists lol

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Genjutsu: Mazohisuto-Do (Illusionary Technique: Way of the Masochist)
Type:Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 40 (+15 for S-ranked)
Damage: +40 to user (+15 for S-ranked)
Description: This technique is a self inflicted genjutsu meant to ward off other genjutsu. When the shinobi realizes that they're trapped inside a powerful genjutsu, they shall use this neutralize the affects in order to render the jutsu ineffective. What this technique does is cast the simple illusion of pain onto the the victim, they layer this technique on top of the affects they already feel or notice from. The user of this technique will receive the sensation of breaking or dislocating an arm, being stabbed, etc. The affects of this technique cause the sensation of physical trauma enough to release them from their opponent's genjutsu.
~This jutsu causes the illusion of physical pain, which does hinder the user of this technique after this jutsu is released.
~Can be used 2 times in a match~For release of genjutsu of S-class, more pain and more chakra is required
~Using this technique to release S-class genjutsu will prevent use of genjutsu for the next turn and any technique above A-rank
~Can only be taught by Reborn

±± Declined ±± Excellent idea but it will only release up to A-Rank gen so you need to resubmit with proper restrictions and edits. But good job ^^

~Resubmitting~

Genjutsu: Mazohisuto-Do (Illusionary Technique: Way of the Masochist)
Type:Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 40 to user
Description: This technique is a self inflicted genjutsu meant to ward off other genjutsu. When the shinobi realizes that they're trapped inside a powerful genjutsu, they shall use this neutralize the affects in order to render the jutsu ineffective. What this technique does is cast the simple illusion of pain onto the user, they layer this technique on top of the affects they already feel or notice from. The user of this technique upon doing two hand seals will focus on his own chakra flow to forcefully alter it, receiving the sensation of breaking or dislocating an arm, being stabbed, etc. The affects of this technique cause the sensation of physical trauma enough to release them from their opponent's genjutsu.
~This jutsu causes the illusion of physical pain, which does hinder the user of this technique after this jutsu is released.
~Can be used 2 times in a match~Technique ends after user's phase is over
~Can only release genjutsu A-ranked and below
~Can only be taught by Reborn

±± Approved ±± Tweaked some things ^^

Bolded sections within the quote have been excluded. Bolded sections in the technique have been added...Since the old thread was closed I couldn't quote it properly so I copy and pasted it and wraped the quote BB code around it.

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Dropping this :

Kaji Katana : Fire Blade
Rank:S
Type: Weapon - Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra: (+20 for fire jutsus rank A and above deflected, +15 for any Earth jutsu cut)
Damage: N/A
Description: The Fire blade looks like an ordinary blade, with leather straps surrounding the area where the user holds it from, the leather is not ordinary leather as it is - for an unknown reason it is not able to burn. It has a sharp tip which is useful against opponents at close range. The blade also has the ability to deflect small fire jutsus ranked A and lower without difficulty. Furthermore due to its sharp tip the sword is able to cut through Earth jutsus ranked B and lower.
Note: Fire deflection counts as one of the users move.
Note: Fire deflection jutsu can be used 3 times.
Note: The blade can only be wielded by RockLeeGreenBeast.
Note: By Hard materials I mean Earth jutsus ranked B and lower.
Note: The cutting of Earth jutsus ranked B and lower counts as a move.
Note: Cutting Earth can only be done 3 times.

For this:

Hansou Katana:- (The Transporting blade)
Rank:S
Type: Weapon/ Supplementary
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Range:Short
Descrition: The ‘Transport blade’ is a blade which has a unique ability of being able to create a perfect clone of itself in the users other hand (depending on which hand he is holding it on) at any time the user requires her too. This enables the user to switch from a one sword fighting style to a dual sword fighting style and can also be used perform a surprise attack on his opponents. Note: Can only be wielded by Erzo and those he allows.Note: Creating a clone of the blade counts as one of the users move.Note: Creating a clone the of blade can only be used 4 times.

Took out
''Another abiltiy the blade has is to be transported from one hand to the other at extremely fast pace this means, the wielder can transport the blade whilst it’s moving, giving it the same momentum when it's is transported on to the other hand, making it harder to dodge attacks, however when this is done, the blade transports from one hand to the other instead of just cloning itself to give the user 2 katanas.''

±± Approved ±±

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(Raiton: Raiton Mari)-Lightning Style: Lightning Ball
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user concentrates his lightning chakra and uses shape manipulation to create a ball of lightning which gets created around him, making him/her protect from all angles, if necesasry the user can then perform 1 hand seal (Tiger) and make the lightning all around him suddenly get pushed away from him, with him being the epicenter and destroy anything/everything in its paths. (Within reason and within the laws of the basic 5- its strengths/weaknesses.)Note: Can only be used 3 times.

(Doton: Arata Daichi )- Earth Style: New Ground
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user concentrates his earth chakra on his feet and releases his earth chakra into the ground causing the ground to harden up, regardless of what is there already. This jutsu can be used to overcome things like Swamp of the underworld jutsu, by overcoming the amount of chakra that is already infused into it with your own chakra and hardening the mud making it into dried up mud enabling you to walk on it as if it was any other ground.Note: Can only be taught by Erzo.Note: can only be used twiceNote: Has no effect if the user is standing on water.

±± Declined ±± similar technique has already been made in both large and small scale.

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(Gyaku Reinforu) - Reverse Rain Fall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: 40
Description: This technique allows the user to manipulate a falling water source so that it forms rain drops that go up into the sky. This jutsu allows the user to form rain techniques that come from below the target as well as above the target. Since this jutsu seemingly produces rain from both below the opponent and above the target, they can't predict where a rain jutsu will come from.
-Can only be used twice per battle
-The rain lasts two turns going up and down. Depending on the size of the water source, the rain will be heavier or lighter.

±± Pending ±± Is this a rain technique or a water technique? Proper naming is essential. Also, this isn't a b-rank.

(Suiton: Kakusareta Mizun no Hari) - Water Release: Hidden Water Needles
Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user is able to release incredibly stealthy needles of water by from their mouth by utilizing their own saliva as ammunition. The water is incredibly small and difficult to see, either requiring adequate lighting or using one's doujutsu to see the needles. These needles can be used by a medical ninja to strike vital joints and disrupt the movement of their joints for a mere moment.

(Suiton: Mizu-Yaki-Ire) - Water Release: Water Hardening
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user is able to cause any small amount of water (C-rank and below) and harden the quality of the water. This only works on the user's water created water or manipulated water. This jutsu follows the same principle as the Water Sword of Draining in which it will harden the water so much so that it can match steel's hardness.

±± Both Declined ±± first one is more like a C-Rank and second one is definitely at least a B-Rank.

I can't post an exact quote as the thread has been closed.

(Suiton: Kakusareta Mizun no Hari) - Water Release: Hidden Water Needles
Type:Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user is able to release incredibly stealthy needles of water by from their mouth by utilizing their own saliva as ammunition. The water is incredibly small and difficult to see by normal ninjas but are still visible in most conditions. These needles can be used by a medical ninja to strike vital joints and disrupt the movement of their joints for a mere moment.

±± Approved ±±

(Suiton: Mizu-Yaki-Ire) - Water Release: Water Hardening
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25 (+10 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does 2 hand seals and is able to cause any small amount of water (C-rank and below) to harden temporarily. This only works on the user's water created water or manipulated water. This jutsu follows the same principle as the Water Sword of Draining in which it will harden the water so much so that it can match steel's hardness. However, it will only last a few moments, as chakra needs to be fueled into it to keep it harden.
Note: User can keep it harden for a maximum of 2 turns, as long as he keeps focusing chakra into it and doesn't perform other techniques.

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Summoning Animal: Starraptor ( akai-mukuhoku)Scroll Owner: Dead Bones BOther Users who have signed contract: N/ASummoning Boss if existing: N/AOther Summoning Animals tied to contract: Later to come...Description and Background:
The user cuts his thumb and covers his palm with his blood then does the needed hand-seals, then places his hand on the ground summoning Starraptor. This summoning calls upon Starraptor (Gender-Male) starraptor is a large bird. Is known for a large red hair covering his right eye. He can understand and speak the summoner's language. He can use B-Rank Earth Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is large enough to carry one person.

NOTE: Can only be summoned by Dead Bones B and those who may sign the contract.
~Each Jutsu counts as a move toward the three jutsu of the summoner
~This summoning can be summoned Once per battle.
~Once summoned, this summoning lasts for 3 turns.
~Can speak English, Japanese
Looks:

Please edit anything if needed ^^

±± Declined ±± You didn't change a single thing. Can you please read through contract and summoning submissions to understand how to properly submit?

Doton: Wall of shurikens (hei deba)Type: Offensive/AttackRank: CRange: Mid/LongChakra: 20 Chakra Damage: 30 DamageDescription:
After doing the necesary hand seals (Rat >snake >rat) and slaming his hands on the ground the user creates a wall of earth in front of him...and then by putting his hands on the wall, making his earth chakra flow through the wall creating and shooting many earth type shurikens at the opponent. However a B-rank lightning attack will make it fall/fail. Also this jutsu carries risks leaving the user unprotected and vunerable since his hands have to be on the wall in order to work.

Note: Can only be taught/used by Dead Bones B.
~ Can be used 3 times per battle.
~ Must wait 2 turns before using again.
~ the user can stop shooting shurikens at will by removing his hands from the wall.
~ the earth shurikens only go in a straight path.

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Katon: Katon Misairu(Fire: Fire Missiles)Type: OffensiveRank: ARange: Short-MidChakra: 30Damage: 60Description: The user focuses fire chakra to his finger tips. Once it is there he releases it forming ten blasts, the fire blasts come out like pillars of the fingers with a diameter of three centimeters. Each pillar will take its own path towards the opponent flying in a random patter taking up a massive area since each pillar can miss the opponent by at most five meters, meaning the range is five meters all around the opponent making these extremely difficult to dodge. The fire will usually take the easiest path where there is the most oxygen to feed its way towards the opponent.
~The user cannot use any water techniques the turn this is used
~Can only be taught by ZoroOP~Declined~ Do not resubmit, similar jutsu exists

Raiton: Koushoku Raiton(Yellow lightning)Type: SupplementaryRank: ARange: Short-LongChakra: 40Damage: N/A (+25 to lightning)Description: The user uses this technique and pumps extra chakra into all of his lightning techniques increasing their power drastically and having them change their color to yellow. The user has to use this technique before using his move to boost its power by forming one handseal. Once the handseal is made the user can unleash any lightning attack with a massive power boost and the lightning itself turns yellow.
~Once used the next attack must be a lightning attack
~Can't use any wind within the same turn
~Can only be taught by ZoroOP~Declined~ Similar jutsu exists (Lightning expansion, Pervy sage has one for each element)

Raiton: Raiton No (Lightning: Lightning field)Type: OffensiveRank: ForbiddenRange: Short-MidChakra: 50Damage: 100 (-20 to user)Description: The user forms a string of six handseals and then cups his hands placing his fingers together to one another. Focusing their Raiton chakra into that area they will severely damage their hand since its just unfocused lightning. The user will then proceed to raise his hand into the air and push out the lightning chakra will then create a massive dome somewhat smaller then the size of Kisame's water dome. This will create a massive electric field, when the user forms the Boar handseal which is extremely painful due to his burned hands lightning will all move towards the ground using anything as a conductor but the user, thus if his opponent has any kind of metal upon him (kunais, shurikens..ect) he will be used as a conductor for a massive amount of lightning. The lightning itself has enough watts to stop a human heartbeat for good.
~Once used the user cannot perform any handseals for the rest of the fight due to completely burned hands
~The burning on the users hands will cause him a great deal of pain
~Can only be used in an area where your opponent is amongst the tallest objects or near it, also the opponent must have lightning upon it.
~Can be used once
~Can only be taught by ZoroOP~Declined~ Kumogakure has that jutsu, except its not forbidden rank

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Pegasus Blade

Type: Attack Weapon (Sword)

Rank: S

Chakra Cost: N/A (40 when flowing Katon through it)

Damage Points: 60 (80 with Katon)

Description: Pegasus Blade: A Blade made of Steel. This blade has been passed down from users of the legendary Pegasus beyblade. This blade is mainly made of Steel, but this Steel is imbued with Fire Chakra, so you can combine Katon with this blade to increase the Swiftness and Strength, and also to make the cuts and slashes much hotter and sharper. The hilt is made of Pegasus feathers and more Steel covered with the feathers.

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(Doton: Doryuu Kekai) - Earth Style: Earth FissureRank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu splits the earth apart to make a fissure. The size of the fissure is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..

Side Note: We all remember this cannon technique that was removed and replaced with "Earth Flow Divide." It was removed because it wasnt the same as the one shown in the series so I thought Id remake it as a custom jutsu. ^^

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Buki: Seirei Gai: Weapon Spirit Scythe
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/a (i think)
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/a
Description: The spirit Scythe is a special scythe formed in Kumogakure. It was given to Sage of Darkness by his father when he was an academy student. The spirit scythe has the ability to cause tremoundous fear. It is said that its weilder has power over the dead but it hasn't been collaborated yet. The spirit scythe has blue color and a Light blue color with an iscription on it which no one has decifered.

Note
- This weapon is personal to the Sage of Darkness and can only be used by him~Declined~ Please explain the extent of the tremendous fear this scythe causes. Also explain to what extent it has the power to control the dead.

Buki: Seirei Gai: Weapon Spirit Scythe
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/a (i think)
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/a
Description: The spirit Scythe is a special scythe formed in Kumogakure. It was given to Sage of Darkness by his father when he was an academy student. The spirit scythe has the ability to cause tremoundous fear. The fear caused by this weapon is because of its control over dead spirits which it can summon to aid in battle. Now then these spirits can only help by binding the oponent only just a few seconds. It is said that its weilder has power over the dead but it hasn't been collaborated yet. The power over the dead this scythe posesses is the power to summon dead spirits and bind the oppnent only just a few seconds. The spirit sycthe has power over the dead by a jutsu cast into it by Kumogakure ninja while forming it.(something like samehada has the power to suck chakra and itachis swords traps them in a genjutsu world) The spirit scythe has blue color and a Light blue color with an iscription on it which no one has decifered.

-Note-

-The spirit scythe can only summon dead spirits once per battle and by doing so the dead spirits take 20 chakra from the weilder.
- Can only be used by Sage of Darkness
- Bold parts added

Feel free to remove or edit something it needed to be approved ^^

~Declined~ And how does one defend against dead spirits? Is it like a genjutsu, or like "Killing Intent"? And "a few seconds" is a lifetime when in a battle. Completely unrealistic.. "control over spirits" has never been shown in narutoverse

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Lightning Drilling Fang ( Raiton Kussaku Kiba)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Descriptions: A more heightened version of Fang over Fang. The user spins while releasing lightning chakra making him approach at a much faster speed than usual. The only thing that can keep up with it is at least a 2t sharingan, byakugan, or if the user is ranked below the opponent.
-only Blade Hyuga and anyone with permission can use it
-Must be in the Inuzuka clan
-No S ranked lightning jutsu for 4 turns
-Must have used Dynamic marking to effectively find the target, or have a scent of the opponent

±± Declined ±± Overpowered. The original technique is a C-Rank so this with added lightning would be a B-Rank. Also, can you do this with your dog? If so then nop...you'd kill your dog.

Flaming Drilling Fang (Honō kussaku kiba)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra cost:30
Damage:60
Descriptions: Another heightened version of Fang over Fang. As the user is spinning he/she spews fire out of their mouth which engulfs the users spin in flames burning everything in its path.
-Must be an Inuzuka
-Only me and anyone I allow can use this
-Even if the fire is put out during the spin via water the user is still able to continue the normal fang over fang
-No S ranked fire for 3 turns

±± Declined ±± The lightning one was iffy but its is simply impossible. You'd kill your dog with this one, burning him to a crisp. O_o And since you are basing this one in the C-Rank one that can be done with or without your dog, it needs to have that part explained. Also, again, with added elemental chakra this would be a B-rank...

Earth Drilling Fang ( Chikyū kussaku kiba)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra cost:40
Damage: 80
Description: The user begins spinning toward the target while gathering earth from the ground engulfing himself in stone due to the excessive weight the user is slowed down dramatically though increases his power in the process
-Must be an Inuzuka
-Only I can use this and anyone I allow
-No S classed earth for 3 turns