I've been reading your stuff for a long time -- almost a year, I think -- but wow, from the terms of moving psychology this has got to be your best fic yet, and you've had several good ones. Real tear jerker, especially when you know that in about four episodes she's going to die, with no vengence, just a sad death, hiding in Al's armor as Pride's sword plunges into her body. (Or do you base your fics on the manga, which I have yet to get a hold of?)

Really moving, great job. I give you kudos, and hope you continue doing your FMA fanfics (they seem to be more interesting than the FFVII fic that you do).