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lisapaulinee says:It was okk.. I think you should've made it more interesting. The song fits well, but at times it sounded like you should've added more to the fill-ins between the songs lyrics. Some of it flew by way to fast and made me wonder,"wow... they were missing something".

Good for your first fan-fic, and I'm terribly critical when it comes to this stuff.( not that I can say anything, because I've only written one story myself).

Author's Response: im sorry =( i tried to make it as interesting as possible but be sure to read my next fanfic its a lily/james
i promsie it will be MUCH better!!!
Thankyou so much for reading and reviewing