This is my first critique, so it'll probably suck. But anyways, I'll be honest. I hate Crowley, I love Dragonia. I hate Crowley mainly because, well, he looks EXACTLY like Valentine... Just in a slightly different outfit and another name. He seems very unoriginal to me. I feel you drew Valentine and slapped on a new name and pet. Dragonia, however, is adorable! I like how you did a garden dragon, and that her name is based on one of my favorite flowers, the snap-dragon. I do, though, dislike canon-characterXoc relationships, but that's just me. I hope to see more from you in the future.

Re: Crowley-Please do more Vampire-Deamon OCsRe: Dragonia-Please do more Garden Dragon OCsThe main points of this message is to do MORE awesome OCs and also MORE awesome MONSTER HIGH OCsThanks and have a great day!!

I don't see any kids on deviantART, specially on this fandom. And I guess you should make that question to my commissioner, in other words, ask the person that payed me to make this drawing that in no way represents my real point of view on this issue

Well, I guess you should see a lot of children on this fandom, including adults with a child's mental age... After all, we're talking about MH here. As far as I know, no one under 10 or 12 years old or so is allowed on DeviantART. And as far as I know, a kid about this age is grown enough to have its personal opinion about homosexual relationships, whatever it's is. Any kid about 6 years old knows what a gay person is, and if them have any kind of prejudice against them, that's none of my business.

If you think that's okay or not to show kids, that's none of my business too. I'm sure many children, small or not, have no prejudice against gay people - very differently from you, it seems... A grown adult, that should know that it's totally ok to show this kind of material to children.

Violence? That's okay. Racism? Even that, too. Marry someone you just met? Fine. CHEAT on your boyfriend/girlfriend? That's a plothole!... But two people who love each other but belong to the same sex? How can this be considered something to me ashameful of, and none of those much worse thing not? We live in a society that's pretty ok to commit crimes and act violently in broad daylight - but we have to hide in order to make love.

P.S.: In this very same fandom, there's a very famous deviantART OC that's infamous for being a jerk and a womanizer. But for some reason, I can't see someone like you complaining about that... I wonder why? Then again, I'm not buying this discussion with someone that has age enough to have sex, and should know better, but decides to pick on commissioned Monster High artwork requested by a 14 years old girl.

Then again, any other questions, please ask the commissioner. I have no need to defend myself for an idea that's not mine. Have a nice evening.

Nope. She's kinda like me. People look at her and how she acts and think she's all sweet and pure, but the truth is that she just hides her dirty mind for politeness's sake. I hope that clears it up a bit for you.

Why does Crowley have a crush on a boy?Here is a simple equation...👦+👦=💖= me 😳And why a cannon character? Other than that, I am not a big fan of Crowley, reminds me if valentine, but, I think gardenia was a 😃😃😃 idea!

The reason he's with Jackson is because, in my RP with Nanda, we genderbended the girls but kept the guys the same, then brought in our OCs. Hence Dragonia and Spectro.

I didn't really mean for Crowley to look like Valentine. It's just how I thought of him, really. He's basically modelled on the Vampire Boy CAM doll, which is how I came up with the idea for him in the process.

Thanks for you kind words on Gardenia, too! She seems to be a real hit.

I don't want to be rude, but, I'm kind in a bad mood now so please stop acting like this and making me wonder if people still use "yes" or "no" to awnser questions. If you wish to roleplay please send me a note or anything, I really dislike all this poppycock.

Many people have said he looks like Val. It's not intentional - if anything, he was actually based on the Vampire Boy CAM doll. I just created the character from there. Gave him life, you might say.

Good point. I think it would have been a little hard to explain, but I think he was okay with it in the end. It's a bit weird, because Crowley was actually friends with Holt before learning that Jackson was the other side of him. Or vice versa - whichever you see as Jackson/Holt's "true side".

I should have figured you might have by now. I kinda took some of the comments and questions as a networking opportunity. Seems that it worked - I got 16 feedback messages to day! Many of which were from this page.

actually the design looks exactly like how I would picture the Vampire Create-a-Monster Starter to look and the girl looks exactly like the dragon starter, nothing wrong with giving your starter pack creations names ... even if they do look like already existing characters or like somebody else's characters.

actually the design looks exactly like how I would picture the Vampire Create-a-Monster Starter to look and the girl looks exactly like the dragon starter, nothing wrong with giving your starter pack creations names ... even if they do look like already existing characters or like somebody else's characters.