Hi Simon,Sorry to bother your holiday. I am so confusing about on writing task.
The topic is ‘Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government actions can solve this problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?’ I read a sample which focuses on how the government to solve this problem, and what they can do. But when I was writing, I focused on why it is the government that can solve this problem and what they can do. I am wondering which structure is better or both are ok.

In my opinion, it is oke as long as you mention agree with that view. Then, you can describe fully the reasons why only government that can tackle this problem and you have to add examples to support your reasons by showing the way government tackle this issue and migh be compared to another parties

I think I fail to compare with why other parties cannot do it. And do you think it is all right if the essay just focuses on the way that governments do without mentioning the reasons why it is governments' responsibilities.

Sorry to bother you in Holidays. But I need your help,
I have Given general exam 3 times.. every time i got 6 in writing but my ielts requitement is 7.. In my last exam i have almost did everything which was taught to me by my Trainer bt again i got 6. I am totally confused now nd I Dn't know what to do so could you please help me.. Mine exam is on september 9th..