I thought I had commented on this? Maybe just in the chatroom.I'm glad you pulled through with your comic! It's so much work, and I must say you really improved from last time you battled. It's even in color! I enjoyed reading it, it has a good flow. The only thing I would avoid in the future is blue/purple text on blue background. I'm really looking forwad to your battles and I'm glad you came back and are so active.

Yeah, I liked this too and I forget to comment on stuff I like, and also forget what a important part crits and comments play on a site like this... if no one tells you what they think it feels like they don't care or aren't reading and kinda kills your desire and drive to spend a lot of time working and creating more comics for people to read, at least I know it does for me. This really IS an improvement from your past work and your practice is obviously paying off, toning and a splash of color really helped in fleshing it out and making it feel less empty also, which I think was a problem with your older stuff (mine as well) and after the beginning with all the black backgrounds you really let loose and filled it out with actual backgrounds for every panel. Keep it up! and as someone that has many of the same things to work on as you, I really felt an inspiration from your effort here to not have empty space, people floating in blank panels, ect. Thanks and keep it up.