Brax4 wrote:I do actually think it's looking a lot better.It's all about taking time and practice practice practice.

Yes. Practice and time are the two best things.

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That you simply draw something without drawing its base components first, without considering the underlying structure. Rather, you just plop down the lines. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong.

I think you're completely right. Although I don't really use too much of that in my style, I do use some, and I'm sure if he can get that down, his drawings will change significantly and hopefully for the better.

I thought his arm and hand were good in the newest picture though.

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Your both wrong if I were to rescan and highlight this picture the maximum you see the circle for the head the cross lines to tell me where place the eyes but instead of super highlighting everythingand showing all my eraser marks I went over my pencil marks with a black pen marker thingy and erased all traces of pencil. I will admit how ever that I don't do all that outlinning stuff with my bodies so I guess with them I do just draw.

Ah, no art is crap really in my opinion, the only thing I can see immediately is there seems to be no stomach to her.I just say that because I took a peek and that seemed to be the biggest problem, other than that, looks pretty good, keep up the good work.

They're decent. Everyone has to start somewhere and believe me I started in the "Very Horrible" section cause my first picture I made looked like crap compare to now. Just keep at it and learn from everything you do and you'll be fine. Take criticism for what they are criticism and it's up to YOU to listen to them or not.

Anyways here's an advice for you. Look up some human model and such on the web and try to draw your character in their poses. That might help you get a better feel for the proportions.

The Darkness in our Hearts....
Improving myself in every picture but I need critics so please comment.

Don't be so hard on yourself, your art is improving, everyone starts somewhere, trust me, my art suuuuuuucked. But people give advice, and you practice, and you get better, that's all there is to it. It's really important to NOT GIVE UP.

Draw in your spare time. You can even doodle random shapes. I do that a lot, and I get a little something out of it.

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