Our Time♥[/color]Let’s enjoy our moment, don’t wait for a signalTime is our enemy; if we wait I’ll lose youTime is laughing at us, it’ll steal our happinessOur feelings will be erased from our minds[color=#008080]♥I don’t want to wait anymoreFollow me and don’t ask me why?Give me your hand, don’t be hesitatedDon’t think, just stay here with me♥Let’s take pleasure in our loveIf you feel love, then, don’t deny Don’t refuse me, don’t falterDo not doubt my love for you♥Time is against our love, do not delayTime doesn’t forgive, it won’t forgive usDo you have another choice? I don’tTime is going to take our love♥I am still here waiting for youDon’t let me go, I don’t wantTime comes and goes, ours is goingOur love story goes with it♥Sky is the witness of my loveIt is sad, because our time is gone My feelings and you went with itNow you're just a memory no more[/color]

Lara wrote:I am still here waiting for youDon’t let me go, I don’t wantTime comes and goes, ours is goingOur love story goes with it

woooooooow at last its the fantastic poem although it is sad but we have here some thing fantastic..it is piece of high style...the stanza above, my point of view, is the greatest one in the poem..in general, the poem expresses the sadness and melancholy and its regarded one of the greatest poems i've ever read....i hope in future u keep rhyme and try to poetize with rhyme if u like that and don't feel tired of that.....good luck and go ahead my friend.....

Well i think im thirsty and i need to drink water from that spring to not to be thirsty anymore.

i wanna show a quote which is written in the Bible and it's similar to what u said: "but whoever drinks the water I give them will never thirst. Indeed, the water I give them will become in them a spring of water welling up to eternal life.” John 4:14

Hello tandvictor nice to meet u, well i think u can, dont say no, u just have to use ur imagination and to be inspired by anything...also u can comments poems here. hope u enjoy this site, see you friend