Wow, this is really elegant and well written. I don't understand why anyone hasn't reviewed! I love Luna's characterization, and she is on spot. I cannot think of anything about her I don't like, or anything about this story. The flow was brilliant and this is overall a sweet little one shot. Cute and pleasing to read, I think you did this amazingly.

-Emmy

Author's Response: Thanks for the validation. I've read and re-read it and wondered why not a single review.

I'm so glad to know that I got Luna right and that it rings true to you. I like the word 'elegant,' thank you for using it. With this and 'Ashes,' elegant and poetic was what I was going for.

I'm nreally glad that you enjoyed it and that there's not some big problem with it that I hadn't noticed.