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Hi, I have been urged in attempting to write a fanfic although i haven't done so before...after a while i decide what the heck and share it. it might not be good but i would love to hear everyone's feedback if they dont mind and have time. idk if i should continue or not. thank you

Intro:

Shraddha and Kunal has
been married for the past two and a half years. Together they are raising Dhruv while
balancing their individual careers. Their relationship at one point was nothing
but smooth sailing and filled with affection and love until a misunderstanding
creates tension and a rift in their relationship. Things cannot go back to
being the same when one day, their world is turned upside down. There is only
one chance to make things right and its up to Shraddha to put two-to-two
together in order to save her family.

Prologue

My
heart was racing, it wouldn't stop, it wouldn't stop...

The
pain was slashing across my brain; the vessel in my temple was throbbing
nonstop.

I
tried moving but I couldn't, I tried breathing, but it was coming out in
painful, sharp breaths.

Something
was pressing on my rib-cage and I wasn't sure if it was whiplash from the impact
or if it was the death grip the seatbelt had across my upper body.

I
tried moving my hands, my arm, but it felt so numb almost as if it wasn't connected to my body.

A
terrifying thought arose, what if my hands weren't attached...

But
it was stifled once I was able to move my pinky, slightly and then was able to
move an index finger and slowly was able to move all my fingers.

I
tried to move my hand, but it ran across glass and I could feel as pieces of
glass easily sliced through my skin, causing blood to form and instantly
causing pain to ripple through my arm.

I
tried searching around, trying to figure out where I was and what I was doing
there but nothing was forming in my mind and nothing was coming to mind.

I
continued to swim in confusion for a few minutes or so until his face...no their
faces pierced before my eyes.

KUNAL...DHRUV...

I
opened my eyes and tried to twist my head but pain greeted me as it shot down
to my spine and causing my body to protest.

I
tried to move even more, but it was difficult as I was trying to gain
orientation of my surroundings.

After
a few brief unsuccessful movements and my vision starting to clear, it was
becoming obvious that that I was upside down...

No...WE
was upside down.

My
mind started to slowly kick into action but my body was having a hard time in
catching up.

I
tried to get my hands to grip the seat-belt as I twisted my body once again
despite my body's protest.

I
needed to see if he was okay.

Please
let him be okay.

It's
my fault, my fault all my fault...

Don't
let him...

As
soon as I turned around and I caught his face, my heart stopped knocking the
breath out of my chest.

My
blood seemed to burn as it squeezed painfully through my veins and tears wanted
to make its way forward but I had to maintain it, I had to...

Kunal...

There was a small stream of light coming from
one of the light posts that was on the street

His
eyes were open and glazed over; staring listlessly in the dark night.

His
lips were cut and split from the glass; his face a swollen pulped mess.

His
dark brown hair was matted around his forehead due to his sweat and something
else I couldn't clearly make out.

His
blue dress shirt was covered with blood and glass...HIS blood that was pooling
slowly down from his head and his chest.

I
wanted to cry, I wanted to grab and touch him, but if I did...if I knew that he
really was...

I
forced the thought down immediately and then I whipped my head around

Meeting
with a nice sharp pain down my neck and spine and nausea to boil from my
stomach

Fear
took over in my bosom and with little strength, I grappled my seat-beltfighting
to claw it off but the belt wouldn't come off.

I
continued, in hysterical motions.

"Dhruv."

I
continued my movements until I was able to come loose and a quick "dud" was
heard when I hit the roof top of the car.

Pain
went through my body, my vision blurred, but I wasn't going to stop. I couldn't
stop.

"DHRUV"
I called, trying to maneuver, to see, to reach the back seat

My
heart dropped, the breath was stumped out of me.

I wanted to grab my hair and rip it out, this wasn't real, this wasn't happening.

His
body was slumped and blood was slowly flowing down his neck, where a large
piece of glass was lodged in.

His
small hands were still holding on tight to his favorite Superman toy that Kunal
brought for his ninth birthday

His
skin was taking on a dangerous bluish-purple discoloration but his chest was
still rising, slightly, struggling for breath.

I
tried to move to the seat but couldn't get through. My stomach was preventing
me from it, but I couldn't stop and I couldn't think as I tried to get to
Dhruv.

But
I never made it as a hand ripped open the door, while another hand grabbed my
leg and pulled me out away from the car

away
from Dhruv ...

away from Kunal...

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Like i said earlier what do you think, should i continue or not? Is it good or not? Idk but everyone's feedback would be nice. thank you

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I want to thank everyone for their responses and i wasn't sure if this was good or not but due to everyone's responses i think i might just continue. thank you everyone for reading and ur responses. u guys are awesome

GurtianluvSenior Member

Hi, I have been urged in attempting to write a fanfic although i haven't done so before...after a while i decide what the heck and share it. it might not be good but i would love to hear everyone's feedback if they dont mind and have time. idk if i should continue or not. thank you

~Crashed~

We can't alter our future, without changing our past

Intro:

Shraddha and Kunal has
been married for the past two and a half years. Together they are raising Dhruv while
balancing their individual careers. Their relationship at one point was nothing
but smooth sailing and filled with affection and love until a misunderstanding
creates tension and a rift in their relationship. Things cannot go back to
being the same when one day, their world is turned upside down. There is only
one chance to make things right and its up to Shraddha to put two-to-two
together in order to save her family.

Prologue

My
heart was racing, it wouldn't stop, it wouldn't stop...

The
pain was slashing across my brain; the vessel in my temple was throbbing
nonstop.

I
tried moving but I couldn't, I tried breathing, but it was coming out in
painful, sharp breaths.

Something
was pressing on my rib-cage and I wasn't sure if it was whiplash from the impact
or if it was the death grip the seatbelt had across my upper body.

I
tried moving my hands, my arm, but it felt so numb almost as if it wasn't connected to my body.

A
terrifying thought arose, what if my hands weren't attached...

But
it was stifled once I was able to move my pinky, slightly and then was able to
move an index finger and slowly was able to move all my fingers.

I
tried to move my hand, but it ran across glass and I could feel as pieces of
glass easily sliced through my skin, causing blood to form and instantly
causing pain to ripple through my arm.

I
tried searching around, trying to figure out where I was and what I was doing
there but nothing was forming in my mind and nothing was coming to mind.

I
continued to swim in confusion for a few minutes or so until his face...no their
faces pierced before my eyes.

KUNAL...DHRUV...

I
opened my eyes and tried to twist my head but pain greeted me as it shot down
to my spine and causing my body to protest.

I
tried to move even more, but it was difficult as I was trying to gain
orientation of my surroundings.

After
a few brief unsuccessful movements and my vision starting to clear, it was
becoming obvious that that I was upside down...

No...WE
was upside down.

My
mind started to slowly kick into action but my body was having a hard time in
catching up.

I
tried to get my hands to grip the seat-belt as I twisted my body once again
despite my body's protest.

I
needed to see if he was okay.

Please
let him be okay.

It's
my fault, my fault all my fault...

Don't
let him...

As
soon as I turned around and I caught his face, my heart stopped knocking the
breath out of my chest.

My
blood seemed to burn as it squeezed painfully through my veins and tears wanted
to make its way forward but I had to maintain it, I had to...

Kunal...

There was a small stream of light coming from
one of the light posts that was on the street

His
eyes were open and glazed over; staring listlessly in the dark night.

His
lips were cut and split from the glass; his face a swollen pulped mess.

His
dark brown hair was matted around his forehead due to his sweat and something
else I couldn't clearly make out.

His
blue dress shirt was covered with blood and glass...HIS blood that was pooling
slowly down from his head and his chest.

I
wanted to cry, I wanted to grab and touch him, but if I did...if I knew that he
really was...

I
forced the thought down immediately and then I whipped my head around

Meeting
with a nice sharp pain down my neck and spine and nausea to boil from my
stomach

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