I really like this story, but I can understand the need for a rewrite. I don't know if it'll affect any of it, but I thought I'd say I'm happy with at least to chapter six. After that, the accident, seems a bit extreme. I can understand something happening but maybe not to that degree. And maybe slow down the pace a bit. But other than that, I love it. Can't wait to see the changes and how it turns out.