HowTo talk:Crash Your Dad's New Corvette

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Umm...wow. The last two sentences remind me of an alternate ending to Ethan Frome. Unnecessary. The rest of it? Very clever, but the sections need to be expanded upon. There's a lot of territoy that you can cover with this article that you haven't, but you can do so easily.

Concept:

9

I'm sure that this runs through the mind of every teen in such a situation at least once.

Prose and formatting:

7

The main dividers need more meaty sections, like "About YOur Dad" and "About the Corvette".

Images:

7

Picture of the totalled Vette? Yes? No? Maybe?

Miscellaneous:

10

Sure, why not?

Final Score:

39

It's a good article, essentially. The dark humor works, to a point, just try not to push it too far. Expand on what you have and I think you could have an excellent article on your hands.