this story was both sweet and hard to read all at once...not sure how...maybe it seemed too familiar to me...but the ending was nice. i wish that could be real life.

Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2014

Sorry about this negative review, and it's been a few years since you posted this but... You know the hymen doesn't exactly exist, right? At least, it's not some kind of membrane you have to pierce, because how would your period come through if that was the case? XD Also this doesn't seem like Jim Kirk as a female, but somebody else entirely who's taken his place. I also don't like the fact that you seem to have turned him female /just/ to criticise her sexuality, which are never judged in the same way when Jim is a man, and seeing that this is supposed to be the future (here's hoping for equality!), that is rather sexist writing to be honest. I realise it's been a few years, but this has /so/ many reviews that I felt that I had to say something, if only as a reminder, you feel me? Anyways, I like most of your other portrayals of Jim/Spock, so it's not all bad. I just felt that this was a bit cringe worthy, and not exactly well informed of female sexuality. We have far to many myths about that as it is.

I love this fic. This is the millionth time I've reread this and I still love it! The part where Spock said he couldn't live without Jamie was just so perfect! I hope someday a man will treat me like that!

I like that's it's not the whole virginity thing that bothered Spock (because when guys get all huffy about that I just want to smack them), but the fact that he didn't think she was interested in monogamy. Also: what the hell happened to Jamie?!