aw you're back with a new story! love this intro ... but i can't believe you let him give her some coded message without her showing the least bit of desire/curiosity to uncode it! anyway happy new year, and here's to lots more new chapters and ideas :P :P

This is great! And I have to say that you being busy really sucks for the rest of the reading world, since you haven't posted anything for a while... but I totally understand. Plus one can hardly hold it against you when you create a Jordon to make us laugh!

I really loved Jordon and Peyton's interactions they were awesome, and the whole coconut bra, guy cheerleader thing was a nice touch... it provided a wealth of hilarious images for my overactive imagination! Great job as usual, update soon!

My parents have been kinda blehh and fighting lots and I've been fervently looking for some young-adult-ish fiction that can confirm my hope that love can exist in some plane of reality, even if that plane of reality is a made-up story. Thank you tons. Anyway, in keeping up with your fantastic mind, this story looks really promising and interesting. Thank you also for updating despite being supersuper busy. I can't wait for the update. (: Have a lovely new year.