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Eeveelution Co-ordinator's Performing for Sinnoh! is declined.
You could really develop your storyline a little more, perhaps go into more detail why the players are going into co-ordinators and perhaps go into more detail about about the evil organisation. Also, you have no rating.

Wild_Squirtle's Defenders of the Night is declined.
This is better, but you'll need just a little more. You've got the background all sweet, but I think you'll need a paragraph outlining what is happening between the groups right now.

StinkomanFan's Lime Light is declined.
Um... I really don't understand what this roleplay is... the storyline is really... a one person thing. It doesn't feel like something that needs more than one person.

StinkomanFan's Five Trainers on a Search for an Exit is declined.
The storyline sounds okay, but you really need a backstory to explain why scientists would build something like this. You also need a sign up sheet and a rules section!

darkhaven3's Machinations of Dementia: Descent into Madness and its OOC are declined.
You're mostly sorted story-wise and rating-wise, but your rules and sign-up form leave much to be desired. They're pretty vague and not formatted very well and just aren't very clear or helpful for RPers. Look at some other threads, spruce them up a wee bit, and you're grand.

Deathbot's Chicken Apocalypse is declined.
You've no real filling in your storyline telling us how we arrived at this, uh, apocalypse. You need to be building on that quite a bit. You've also no sign-up form and no rating. Go have a look around the section for examples of what's acceptable for a storyline and add a rating and an SU form.

Crimson0191's Pokemon City Life is declined.
You presently lack a rating and a rules section - these are the main problems. A bit more of a story would be nice too; right now it seems to be mostly people battling Pokémon in a school which is fine to start with but a wee bit of direction'd be grand, or just some ideas to work with really.

TheSiranna's Kingdom Wars: Fight of Shadows is declined.
The first thing I noticed is that you lack a rating. However, reading through your plot, there are a lot of loose ends. What were the evil wizards you mentioned looking for? Why did the kingdoms go to war? A lot more explanation's needed; right now it's a fair case of "this happened and then this happened and then..." which makes for a hard-to-follow storyline.

TheSiranna's Justified is declined.
You've got a potential plot right there, but you really need to explain just what Xe is. Not in specificity, but the history behind it. You make it seem like an old wives tale, so is that what it is? How known of a story would it be among characters? And why is it destroying the land? And who is this person that corrupted it? Is it common knowledge among the players? And just what exactly is it? An item? An imaginary power? You really have to let the players know what they are getting into in this roleplay.

PinkSapphire's Sword Art Online: Sanctuary is accepted!
I will need you to put either a black CSS background or change the colour of the text to automatic because it is unreadable for those with white background themes.

darkpokeball's PMD: Forbidden Ruins is declined.
You really need to describe what happened to these four, washed up Pokémon. Typically, PMD games are about humans who have turned into Pokémon. Is that the same instance here? Also, do try to describe your 'apocalypse' more.

Icefyr1928's Another Day in Equestria is declined.
You have nothing detailing on what the characters are doing now, only a back story. Also, please change your font colour so it is readable on all styles (change your background on the CSS to a dark colour perhaps?)

mistermewtwo's The last pokemon league is declined.
All roleplays need to include a rating and a sign up sheet. Also, your plot has no motive or real indicator on why a character would join this tournament. Give the bad guy a motive on why he would do this and say why the characters would join (not just any joe blow would join this kind of thing; it would need to be elitists). Really go into depth with the storyline!

IceFyr1928's Another Day in Equestria is declined.
It's now a whole lot more readable! Thanks! You 'current storyline' though like I spoke of last time still is lacking. It really doesn't give players direction or purpose. Go into a little more depth! Make it a little more exciting!

IceFyr1928's Pokemon: The Walking Dead is declined.
I noticed you wrote it was a revival, but your thread history doesn't say you ever posted one before. Are you reviving from someone else's idea? Because there is a rule stating that if reviving someone else's plot, you first must get permission, and if the person has been inactive for other a month and you cannot get permission, you can use the original concept but the plot must be different.

mistermewtwo's The last pokemon league is declined.
Your plot is fine, you just need to fix up your spelling, grammar and punctuation. All of those ellipses could easily be replaced by commas and full stops, you don't capitalise you starting of sentences, names of people or places, open with quotation marks... there is a lot you could fix.

TehFisharmahn's The Forgotten Smell of Freedom is declined.
Your plot is okay, you're just lacking a sign-up template, a rules section and a rating. Though, I would suggest some spacing between paragraphs, so it's easier to read. :)

Vexilum's Sinnoh's Mew is declined.
It's all swell! You just need a rating! You can PM or VM it to me if you like, or just submit again.

TwilightSparkleThePokemonTrainer's Canterlot Falling is declined.
Here, we do roleplays a little differently. If you read the rules, roleplays to be accepted needs a acceptable plot with proper direction and motivation, a rules, a rating and a sign up sheet to be accepted. If you still wish to post an RP, make sure you keep this in mind when you resubmit.

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