The Manhunter

Whether it's slicing a swat team or crushing a crack fiend
Murdering has become just a part of my daily routine
Swinging swords, switchblades and shooting a shotgun
This verse is coming from the heart even though I ain't got one
Experiance with needles makes a Dr House look like a Dr Phil
Teach a chef a thing or two when their ribs are chopped'n'grilled
Stalk a helpless victim before making a neck incision with precision
As long as your in my vision blades are ready to get swishing
After throwing them to the floor start to rev up the chainsaw
Take off the head'n'legs like getting a bed through a door
Follow up the blood and slicing with a helping of gore
One moment there's one body plant explosives and you can C4
After the kill kidnap a nurse and perform something that's perverse
Give your girl forced multis like a generic underground rap verse
Dispose of the body under her lawn and six feet of wet dirt
Anybody who comes out their house at that point gets hurt

They call me the Manhunter killer in the mist
Moment I see red introduce a face to my fist
Torture techniques dominate my bucket list
If I ain't an expert in a weapon it must not exist

Blades are now rusted from how many times they've been thrusted
Write 'cus beats are like court apointed lawyers they can't do me justice
Beat on a heart until it's exploded and busted
Even Hannibal Lector left he was so damn disgusted
Don't bother with drag races just run down walkers during night
In a broken down pick-up truck with no working lights
Cocktail of choice is the classic molotov
Share it with the skinny girls I've kidnapped you won't believe the pounds they've burnt off
Drivin' insane locked in the trunk of a stolen car
Play with words 'cus all my game discs have been shapen into ninja stars
Listen to Heltah Skeltah while reading Catcher in the Rye
If victims are still alive can't give descriptions I'm a snatcher of their eyes
Have a monopoly on the market Voorhees and Kruger need government welfare
Cops want to give off a distress signal so I shoot them with a flare
If they can't catch a grenade soon won't be able to catch a breath
Give me one chance to kill you I'll soon snatch the rest

They call me the Manhunter killer in the mist
Moment I see red introduce a face to my fist
Torture techniques dominate my bucket list
If I ain't an expert in a weapon it must not exist

Good lines here and there. I like the second verse more....some lines I think I could have done without and those are the ones that didn't have good matching end rhymes...a lot of masculine rhyme and not enough feminine rhyme

However, the content of your lines were really thought out and you get an A for originallity and cleverness