Finished reading it. I loved all the references, and how you divided Dahlia and Cheryl's Mom into two separate characters like that.

I kind of liked how you seemed to treat this as a what-if scenario where Cheryl's reunion with Alessa is delayed by like over a decade. That was pretty neat, along with the implication of Doctor Kauffman using his medical authority to sabotage Dahlia in totally legal means through counseling Cheryl.

Lisa's scene could've been handled better. Cheryl seemed to know things she shouldn't for the sake of quoting a certain scene, and Lisa herself had no dialog. It was like you just threw in the model for the reference.

Cheryl finding Harry was....beautiful.

I'm a bit disappointed by the ending I got. Is there only one? It didn't feel like my choices changed anything.

EDIT: Nevermind, the changes are just unintuitive, but they're there. Cool.