Sunday, February 19, 2017

Lydia @ Tamaki Primary School: The Worst Spelling Test Ever!

Lydia this is a great recount, yes I know it was a boring topic, but you have made it interesting by using adjectives, similes and dialogue (talking).Next steps - don't use 'like' as a sentence starter, and maybe adding in who else was there (for example, my friend Hevani was sitting next to me, and I could tell she was bored too because of how she kept sighing).