I LOVE THIS STORY!
please update soon! i've noticed you haven't update in ages! i really hope i won't have to wait long!
i love how you portray all the characters you are really an amzing writer.
please please please update soon...
forever wating...
elisalinguine_x

WOW!!! YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON OR I WILL FIND YOU AND BEAT YOU TO DEATH.jajajajajjajajajajajjajajaa NAH just kidding .anyways I LOVE THIS STORY and i REALLY want to know what happens next sO UPDATE! =D
P.S. GREAT WRITING, DUDE!!!

i liked this chapter alot :] and your graphic is gorgeous! gaspard ulliul ughhh ♥ love him xD this whole convo really reminds me of twilight when edward approaches bella and tells her it's better to not be friends. but don't think that's cliche! if anything, i think it's an endearing quality in your story ^_^

I like this story so far :) Do you read Twilight, by any chance? I sense some similarities... But that's a good thing, of course ;)
I just wasn't sure what was going on with Regulus - you said that people were laughing and staring at him, but you didn't say why.. Or maybe I'm just mentally incompetent and missed it :P Anyways, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: ohhh, lol, the girls were laughing because it's strange for a Slytherin to take any sort of interest in a Gryffindor, and because he's almost as good looking as his brother.
And yes, i do read Twilight, and i was in a very twilight-y mood when i wrote these first few chapters, which is why there are so many noticable similarities... they do tone down much more as the story continues. (is that unfortunate?) :)
i'm glad you're enjoying the story so far though, i hope you continue to!
thanks for your review!

Well, that was certainly an unexpected ending and it has me thinking something more is up then just being overwhelmed. Very good start you have laid the groundwork for what looks like to be a very interesting story.

Author's Response: its good to hear that you're enjoying it already!
hope you continue to :)
thanks for your review!

Brilliant, love the conflicting feelings that are going on! Keep writing, I'm really excited to see where things go! xx

Author's Response: ohhh, i'm so so happy that you're still enjoying it so much, sooo good to hear!
i'll be posting again within the next few days so chapter 4 wont be too far away either!
thanks for your review :)

Oooh! I love it! I didn't expect to either, I don't normally read fics in this era but it's brilliant! I didn't read it last time either which makes the suspense even more pronounced! :-) Update soon please I can't wait!xx

Author's Response: haha, well i'm glad you did like it after all :)
i hope that you'll keep on enjoying it as much as i've enjoyed writing...
thanks for your review!

This is good!
i didn't read the first time, but i think i saw the story.
i do like it but its a bit too much like Twilight cept harry potterized.

thats fine, but i don't think u should use so many examples from the book. some r ok, but you know?

"Not really, actually, but I had been repeating this same phrase for the last half-hour that it had begun to sound like reality."
"They're very ... goodlooking"
and the whole tanned thing r straight out of twilight.

sorry bout all the critisism -
ur a really good writer and this flows really well.

update soon!

Author's Response: no, constructive criticism is always welcome- i'm glad you were very honest, but not cruel :)
i realise that there is alot of twilight-esque stuff in this chapter but it does tone down until it eventually dissappears in later chapters. it just so happened that when i first wrote this, i was in a very twilight-y mood and this all came out on the chapter, and most of it is pretty crucial to my own storyline so i've kept it; but i am aware of what you're saying.
thanks for your review, i hope you enjoy it more when things blend more into my own story. :)