2 comments:

I like the beginning of this, I didn't get a chance to see this picture there but it was a very good choice. I like how all the clutter had a deeper meaning that related to artist. I'm not wild about the ending though, I kinda remember you using it for something else..I'm not sure though. I also think this would work better as a poem. Good job though.

Me too I'd like to see how you'd adapt this too a poem. It sounds almost like the long meandering quotes that people will use at the tops of chapters. And that isn't an insult. I like long meandering quotes.