I choked on my own spit, I swear I did. I know I've read this before but it doesn't make it any less sad re-reading it. I still feel like screaming "no!" Which is quite a feat to accomplish when the story skims over details.

Good idea~ the only thing is... Truthfully, those 4 boys would forgive eachother, but really, I dont think with the girls it would be a kiss and makeup session... I kind of was hoping for a bit more drama, but, s'ok, I'm just a dramatic person. ;)

Author's Response: I'm still working on revising this story, so I will definitely take that into considerations with the new draft. Thank you so much for your feedback :)

I just thought I'd leave this little review at the end of this amazing story. I first read this story four years ago and I've kept coming back to it. I think I've read this particular story four or five times, all the way through. Of course I've read the sequels quite a few times as well. This really is one of my favorite stories. Its very hard to think that Brigid and Elle are not canon characters. I left reviews wayyy back when when you were still writing the stories. But, really, I don't think I'll ever forget this story or your characters.

ah i love this chapter! you're dialogue is so natural and your interactions between the marauders makes me laugh. i also love the fact that you haven't eradicated peter from the story, when people do that i'm like "peter is a marauder too!"

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Peter is definitely an important part in this series. Though this isn't really his part of the story, the sequel is his time to shine (in a manner of speaking). Thanks for reading :)

Author's Response: Woohoo! Thank you for the inspiration! It's nice to know that someone is reading the edits; I kind of thought I was just doing it for myself at this point, haha. But you've really kicked my rear in gear, so I'll get started as soon as possible! :)