5 comments:

I think Lois worked the best and created a good robot, because she hasn't been here all week and shes missed some learning about adverts. She used her imagination and included lots of colour, bold writing and good description. If I did it again I would add a bit more colour, make the robot more bigger and mention the name more so people can remember it.

I think Michaela should have won because even though I won the big write star she did absolutely brilliant. I would keep the dist description down the sides. I would change the tittle and make it bolder