This story was very sweet. :) I thought House and Wilson were a little out of character but for the most part they were good. I liked how you wrote their take on their relationship, it seemed realistic and how they would actually handle it. But you might want to change the rating, because this is certainly not an M-rated story; maybe a T at most. You would also get more readers that way since M-rated stories don't automatically show up.

detective reivil chapter 4 . 11/5/2010

so freaking adorable! wanted more action butttt it was really cute!

Detective reivil chapter 3 . 11/5/2010

OMGGGGGG! DAMN THIS CHAPTER WAS HOT, good job!

DETECTIVE REIVIL chapter 1 . 11/5/2010

XD poooor house he is dying, curiosity is killing him or perphaps he is jealous lol