The Magic SOB forum is for posts of story sequences that are frequently vignette-based. Put those here while actual battle reports can go in Reports From the Field.You must talk like James T. Kirk in this forum at all times. Leonard Nimoy is fine too.

...And that's all that the Justice was able to transmit before it was, we're assuming, destroyed.

Well, at least they transmitted that before then.

Glad we were at least able to retrace the transmission.

Yes. They were for some reason way off course...

Yeah. Glad they were still within ESF boundaries. But it did take a bit of time convincing Alphafalcon to let us bring in 3 warships into their territory.

Chancellor Khaar and Captain Jacobon, your presence is requested on the bridge.

After you Captain.

Kal, could you call General Kip up to the bridge as well... I have a feeling he'll be, needed.

No Problem sir.

On board the bridge, the quite hum of computers and general serenity are a stark difference to Khaar from the loud and annoying rable of the senate building. He wishes he could be on his ship, fighting in the war, but, ever since he was elected as Chancellor of the New Coruscant Republic, his duties are more verbal based then beam-saber. He takes a moment to appreciate the calm, but it is quickly broken by Kal..

General Kip is on his way sir.

Good, now then, what's the status Engineers?

Well sirs...

We've found it.

Good.. no sign of the Destiny... we'll have to worry about that later... begin scanning fo..(BOOM)

...What was that..?

Sir, the Irks been hit!

SIRS! The Irk is down

Oh shi..

Right! Men, turn hard to port! Prep all weaponry! set to Red Ale...(BOOM)

Photography: 3/5Some photos were blurry or unfocused, especially the ship pictures. I know photographing black is hard, but a little more light could have helped.Minifigs: 4/5A lot of stock minifigures and clones, which don’t lend themselves to creativity well. Points for Khaar and maybe for that colored clone, although I personally hate minifig modification so not really.Writing: 4/5There was nothing really striking about the writing, and there was this one long awkward passage describing Khaar that I felt should have been in imperfect tense. Since it’s mostly dialogue I can’t be as picky as usual though. Title: 5/5What can I say.Overall Appeal: 4.5/5They say that the the sum is worth more than its parts. Holistically I liked this SOB, but there is some room for improvement.

Photography: 4/5. Some blurriness but for the most part I could follow the action.Minifigs: 3.5/5 Most of them were stock clones, but I liked the ones that weren't, especially Khaar. Writing: 2.5/5. The pacing was off (the ship spent *how much* time just turning around?) and spamming exclamation points rarely works well. (my last soap opera was guilty of this) Title: 4/5. Generic, but apt.Overall appeal: 3/5.Total score: 17/25.