Man, Yos I feel bad for you. Your luck isn\'t so great lately. I hope it picks up for you, soon. (loved your half, by the way! It was hot. You should put it up as a BB).

Hiemie: Great job. Lots has been said already. My only gripe is that I would have liked to see more Lydon in it! Like everyone else, I loved the colors. I especially like the way you handled the backgrounds with the flat green.

okay let\'s see..another charming Pete battle!Colours, as mentioned, were nice, only nitpick about that is the unshaded whites. Panels, maybe a little straightening, and the word bubble thing isn\'t so great I have to agree. and I notice a lack of interesting shots, I know they\'re basically standing around talking BUT there are plenty of ways to spice that up. as for the actual figures, they\'re looking better but of course could use tightening, especially hands I think. other than that, just little nitpicks like maybe neater handwriting, or maybe upping contrast to make the blacks stand out more.

keep it up though, your battles are still among my favorites, and I always look forward to them!

Well I found this a rather entertaining lite read without having too much burden of a story to go on. The color selection in this was easy on the eyes and had decent depth. Humor is here with your classic slice of life occurences. For the time being; your entry with Mjolner is still the best one-

Style and anatomy is working in tandem with this one so continue with this direction. Easy read overall. Good job.

I know what spinoza was saying. On page 3, the open bubbles are on top of each other and I started to read them out of order. Like, there\'s panel 1 \"Whaha.. good joke\" and then below that is panel 4 \"It\'s Lydon..\" etc., which made my eyes want to go from panel 1 to panel 4.. and stuff. gods I know I can\'t talk but you know what I mean? So it would have been nice if there had been a line or something to let you know where the top panels end.. or the bubbles in panels 4, 5, and 6 could perhaps have been at the bottom of the panels instead of on top.But that was the only place I had a problem following the panels.Anyway...Heimie I enjoyed your comic. The dialogue felt natural and was very amusing. Plus I liked your inks and colors but that\'s already been said.

I really do hope the error with Yos\'s side is rectified it would be a real lack of responsability otherwise. In any case I\'m gonna do the same as most other people are (hopefully) doing and withhold my vote till the error is fixed.

Until I can be certain that Wei or someone will actually uploading Yosai\'s battle, I won\'t be voting, but man. They honestly should. If they have done that for two people already(?), then I won\'t see why they won\'t do that for you, Yosai. From what I\'ve heard, you\'ve done your best in your comic, and you\'ve actually submitted on time. The errors made by this website, or whatever, should not have to be your responsibility; it just won\'t be fair and damn it all, I REALLY wanted to see what Lydon\'s up to now.

As for Hiemie, I adored that coloring you did. It\'s really simple, which keeps the entire page flow and made things a lot more easier to see what\'s going on. I actually chuckled at the humor you\'ve shown, and you drew Lydon pretty well. The only problem I had were the speech \"bubbles\" though. It\'s a really neat idea to have them merge with the ....what are those called. \"outside of the panel box\", but I think it would be better if you could actually make them a lot neater. I\'m not saying it\'s confusing overall, but sometimes I did lose my place, in a way which..I can\'t explain hooow. [strokes mustache at such mystery]

Hiemie, this was a lovely pleasure to read. I admired the combination of oranges, greens and browns and the way you displayed them mended together quite well. Of course, I always chortle at your Twin Peaks/David Lynch references.

Yosai, dude I hope they grace you an exception for this. I know they did it for Pye for the Hiemie vs Doc Pye fight, so I don\'t see why they can\'t cut you a little slack either. Just have to wait and see I guess, but it still sucks that your entry didn\'t get uploaded on time.

Wow, pretty cool stuff. I like the two color scheme, it works well with this sort of tight shot panel work. Your character reminds me of a Muppet, and that is amusing in and of itself. I\'m impressed you can get a pretty wide range of expression out of him considering his design is rather simple.

Disappointed to see there\'s no pages up for Yosai but it sounds like there were some technical issues rather than missing a deadline...

Same. I know she put it in on time because she was going to have me check the grammar and last moment let me know she couldn\'t due to submitting it to be on time. Foul. It wouldn\'t be the first time the site has not gotten submitted pages, but if the person doesn\'t get an error, how do they know to email pages until they see this? :\\ It isn\'t like this kind of error is new, either. I know the site is going through some changes, as well, so I\'m not surprised something may have happened error-wise. But to say she didn\'t submit, when she had finished pages in on time, all because of a site error is low.

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