Loved the bondage but I don't find snuff in any way erotic, but I knew what was coming by the tags and still read on so I can't complain about that.For me it would have been better had she escaped to progress further with even more stringent bondage, or maybe been rescued by a friend who could then keep her bound permanently. But then it'd be a completely different story and not what the author was trying for. All in all it was very well written and the bondage very inventive.. (8/10)