Chronicles of Barusak: Riku the right wing and Rook of the silverwhite

Riku Barusak is a character that was originally supposed to become a harem member of the main character in the world of a certain harem game. But ten years before the start of the game, instead of following the course of events that was meant to happen, despite her innate superious physical strength, she ended up thrown away by her family because of her lack of talent as an spiritualist. At that moment, destiny strayed from its defined path; the gears of fate had broken.

Abandoned, the only ones that extended a hand to her were the demons, the greatest enemies of the human race. Serving under them as a disciplined guard dog, she became a weapon of human slaughter, becoming the fiend that shouldn´t have ever existed.

It have but they’re diverging a lot from the WN. The protagonist become both Riku AND Luke(or “Rook” by starry’s transliteration), so in the LN there will be a lot point of view from Luke too. And they changed Luke from older brother become Riku’s twin brother.

Damn, it looks like the first 31 chapters were removed from syosetsu…
I tried looking through the footnotes for the digests with some shoddy machine translators, but does this look like right breakdown for the arcs?

wow , nice story you picked up to translate GJ, thx for good work , i got here by another wnovel translator (pizzasandcoke.wordpress.com) and to be honest i’m glad it met my expectations , dont worry too much about a grammar thing, it’s easy to understand if you don’t have an editor, it is a one man army project but it does not matter i willl say it again good job

Your translations are good enough that I didn’t find anything that was mistranslated too badly (if any) but I advise you to get an editor to look through your grammar and spellings. I found tons of them by the first chapter alone.

It´s reassuring to be confirmed that I´m doing a good job. Well, at the translations at least… Even though I thought I was doing ok at grammar… When you said there was a ton, I even went to check it again, but didn´t find much. I guess I´m just semi-blind.(A blind person translating seems like the type of thing that is added to the guinness book.-.)

I caught what catacountent meant, I think, the mistakes noticeable in the first chapter where mainly the use of tenses and conjunctions (which admittedly a lot of translators mess up, for example this instead of that or an instead of a or at instead of in / on, or like make more OF AN effort instead of just I will make more effort). It may just be little things like that, but when reading, no matter the pace, they can throw off the reader. I hope this helps you as I do not mean any disrespect and would like to see you improve your work. I will say I can’t wait to read more as this seems very interesting and makes me think of a female version of some thing like “Epic of the Forsaken Hero” , which was very enjoyable until the author decided to redo a whole volume or “Arifureta” which seems to have been dropped ….