Oh my Bella! You have the characters down *pat*, as they say for some strange and exotic reason, and your plot is filled with perfectly secured twists and turns to bring out the adventure in yuor tale! I can't wait for more! I especially love your style of writing; exactly like Stephenie Meyer.

Update soon! I mean it! I will send cyber chocolate brownies if you do! No joke!

ok s i just lke love ur story! i started reading it and couldnt stop! i lve how edwards all possesive! and i almost cried wen jake pleaded with her to stay! i cant wait to find out wat happens. i really do hope they get out becuz u said u wuld brind jacob into the story...

and somethings tht iz majorly bugging me is all of the misspelled words...i looked at some of them and was wondering wat they even were! anyways tho i really hope i get to read more and sneak previews are always nice!

You are an awesome writer! I love this story so much! You are AWESOME! I think it would be cool if you like let Bella go crazy again like you did at the end of this chapter. It was good. Plus, I think your really good at giving really clear detaiils. That is what makes your story so awesome! I know this is kinda long but I really like your story and all of your stories.