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JamesandLily4ever says:Awesomely written! I can't wait for the next chapter! (I don't have any complaints here, you seem to have everything built up to here)

A Mary-Sue is a girl character (while the boy character is Gary-Sue) that has everything and is perfect (really really perfect - having the coolest powers, being two weird things at once or whatever). I'm starting to notice that Jaci is cool.

I'm hispanic, so reading the Spanish isn't such a big deal to me. ;] Keep up the great work anyways, Laivine!

~Meli
P/s: I'm keeping an eye on this fic... over all my rating is: 10/10!

Author's Response: OMG, ok, first of all, I'm flattered, a 10/10 is really great! Thanks! Second of all, so that's what a Mary Sue is, someone told my cousin that a character she'd written was a mary sue, but we didnt know what that was.

Finally:NO WAY YOU'RE HISPANIC! SO AM I!!! Ok, anyway, I'm working on the next chapter, just a warning, I'm skipping much of the summer. I"m going to try and get into the school year.
Thanks for the review!!