age: WE ARE NOT IMMORTAL. She's a teen.
looks: slightly more descriptive?
power: okay, sweetheart, you just tried to make a Mary Sue here. There are no characters that powerful. You will never find them in any roleplay for a reason, and that is because they are no fun. Nobody likes playing with a character who is nearly all powerful. You may have one, maybe two powers, not including immortal. You may not be immortal. This is not a roleplay about immortals. This is about teens with powers. So severely limit down your powers, and then I'll see.

Alexandra Academy (A Place for the Supernatural) ~ ATJ

(( @samanthapandaw Lol. I was just about to say the same thing.
@ Johanna Cullen: If you need any help or need to get a feel for the RP and what it's about, you can go back and look at our charrie forms. And you might want to read the RP so you know what's going on. If you need any help, I can help you.))

Alexandra Academy (A Place for the Supernatural) ~ ATJ

Name: Cacey *CeCe* Weaber
Age: 14 turning 15
Looks:
Style: Skater Chick.
Personality: Rocker chick type. It takes a lot to convince her she can't do something. She's one of thos friends who'll do something for you if you're too scared too. And not afraid to let her opinion be heards
Dorm: 62
Power: Meister ~ she can read a person's soul and through this can tell their sould wavelengths (How strong they are mentally and physically, also if they're kind or evil at heart)
Other: Lives with her Aunt Sophia. Rae's her Weapon

Name: Raenonderon *Rae* Smith
Age: 16
Looks:
Style: He can be compared to a scene and/or emo person.
Personality: He's a loner. Not one to talk to many, but when he opens up to you, he's actually a pretty alright kinda guy
Dorm: 73
Power: He turns into a hachiwara - a type of knife-shaped weapon. (Basically a mini sword)
Other:Had it rough as a kid and both his parents died when he was 13, Cece brings out his inner child. Lives with Cacey and her aunt.

Is this good?

I do not like bad grammar, and there is a high chance of me correcting you.