Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2012-03-19 18:10:38

Rated 1 / 5 stars2012-03-19 15:07:57

Your main problem here is that you do not havea Play or an End screen, which causes the video to loop over and voer on itself. Not the worst thing ever, right? Only thing is, this means the music loops over itself, so on every subsiquent play you have that same song (which was far too loud and was clipping like crazy) stacking on top of itself. It becomes unbearable after only five seconds of the second play, and I can only imagine will become horrific from there.

Besides that I'm not really sure what the premise is, exactly. We have no idea who the dude is that the (I assume) G-Man is following, or why he has a huge problem with it in the first place. Yes, we can assume and fill in a lot of the holes ourselves, but we shouldn't have to.

And of course, the end is incredibly anti-climactic and sudden. I think more time spent on who these people are and what's going on would help you with that problem immensely.