hallo
Your story is really good! I think it gets more and more interesting as the story continues. :) At first I didn't like Clara or Tom that much, but they do get more likeable. :D Willa is sweet. :)
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
krapfm

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for reviewing. I like to think that a good story develops to become an even better story with time/character development, so I'm glad that's happening! Clara and Tom, as I mentioned in another response, are far from likable people, but I'm glad they and the others are growing on you. Again, thanks for stopping by and I hope you continue to enjoy!

hi!
I still have to read this chapter, but THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT! you write really wonderful stories and Morocco was great. and very realistic. :D I'm so looking forward to reading "the long night".

Alice and James have been very likeable in Morocco and it is amazing to hear, that they now get an own story :D

off to read. :P

Author's Response: thank you so much. i am really pleased you're enjoying this so far and i hope i can continue to hold your interest! morocco has a lot to live up to, in my own head especially!

Hello
:D I really love your characters and the story and your writing.
and Ron, he was shocking! But really cool at the same time :)
I think you get their personalities right and they do feel like real people. :) The only person I can't find myself able to like is poor Brian and I don't even have a reason for it. :(
Is Narcissa going to make an appearance soon? Her thoughts were awesome!! :D
and how far is Harry with learning how to read auras?
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
krapfm

Author's Response: I LOVE your name ;)

How'd you come up with it? Thanks for the nice, long review, hun. I am so glad the characterisations feel real to you... i spend DAYS trying to get those right!
Narcissa was really Dixie's creation in 'Mother Dearest', and though i portray once or twice thereafter, I haven't shown her too much. But maybe, as i wind up the story, i'll feature her a bit more, since you asked :)

O.o
ookkkayyy
I want to know what is going to happen in the next chapter!!! :(

So, Lysander wrote tons of letters to Dom since he started traveling, but never sent them to her? Will we (readers) get to read a few more or only that one? ...do I remember it correctly that Lysander is right now in France?
I'm curious how Scorpius found out everything, but it might be good that he did, because he might be able to help Dom...or at least she wouldn't be the only one with the knowledge.
Looking forward :)
krapfm

Author's Response: O.o
Hello krapfm!

Well, I'm writing as we speak, but I'm not going to let anything slip! You're going to have to wait and see!

Yes, Lysander wrote a lot of letters to Dom since two years before the story began. Whether you are going to see anymore letters, it depends on Dom. She obviously hates Lysander because of the whole murdering Lorcan thing, so moments for her pulling out his love letters to read are going to be few and far between. And, as you can tell from the end of the chapter, things are picking up now so she's going to be a little busy!

Scorpius is now working on the Copperfield case... remember. He could pick anything up... or is it even Scorpius who wrote the letter? It's true what you say about the two of them sharing the burden.

hello
this story is really good. :) but I wish you would write more about the magic that Rose and Scorpius are performing in order to get the artefacts free.
:) we got more information on William!!! I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.
krapfm

Author's Response: oh there will be more magic. its not an easy task - i'm making it up as i go, lol, as the usual stuff doesn't work.
thanks for the review and glad you're enjoying it!

very interesting :)
Favorite people: The Illegals and Lily!!! (oh and Fred, but only when in a pink tutu :P) and that phrase:
"Exploding toilet."Eric said.
"Wasn't our fault, really," Danny explained. "The toilet got in the way"
:D
krapfm

omg another update!! you really update fast O.o
in this chapter happened so much... I need a little time to process all of the information ;)
so... where is Lucy? and what?! a letter from her mum?!, wow that's quite shocking. I have this inkling that her mum does some explaining in the letter... :)
Looking forward to the next update :D
krapfm

Author's Response: hahaha i do update fast! and yeah this chapter's a bit mental really. lucy lucy, she's disappeared for a bit but she'll be making a return!! well you'll have to read the next chapter to see what keegan's mum wants ;) thanks for reviewing! xx

Hey :)
after reading all four chapters without stop, hmm I think my favorite characters are Seamus and Miranda and of course Keegan! :D
Even if she just appeared now, Barbie or Amanda seemed really cool :P
I hope Keegan is going on a date with the Weasley twins, because that sounds like real fun :)
Thanks for writing this story :)
krapfm

Author's Response: Wow! All 4 chapters without stop? You're awesome!! I'm so glad you did!
Haha Amanda will make plenty more appearances.. for the worst anyways. Well bad for Keegan. Keegan will be going on those dates, but you'll have to wait and see to find out! Hope you keep reading!! thanks so much for reviewing!! xx

Hey
Hopefully you are already better now :)
Please continue with this story! Honestly the Illegals are awesome. Even if they do a lot of wrong things.but I don't know, they still are very likeable.
I'm very much looking forward to an update :D
krapfm

Author's Response: Aw. Thanks. I'm better. The chapter 3 is already written for some time now. I'm just waiting for it to be beta'ed :) And I love Illegals too.