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Topic: My Fisrt Fan Fic.

It was Black Sun Vigo Sheissenicks birthday.He held it in a great banquetting hall,surrounded by security and he had a great table of guests.Favoured followers,local dignitaries,police chiefs and other gangsters, all came at his invitation.The 60 year old Vigo probably wished he was born a Hutt.He copied many of their habits and nobody dared joke that he was trying to be fat as one.Especially if you look into his eyes,which glinted like a snake.The party rolled on for two hours as varius courses came and went and every glass was filled with the finest appropriate vintages.Then came the highlight of the party as the great birthday cake was rolled in.The Vigo smiled warmly at his first leutenant.Gnarl Pinchal harboured plans to replace the Vigo ,but when he drank his coffee he would provide the highlight of the party.All the guests arose and sang the traditional birthday song and raised their glasses."Vigo Sheissenick,your Health!"Boba Fett exploded out of the cake.Fett leveled his blaster and blew the Vigos head apart in two quick shots.Then he activated his jump pack and fired at the skylight in the ceiling as he shot upwards.The guests all just stood in shock as Boba Fett dissapeard up into the sky.There was a very long silence.Gnarl Pinchal got up and tipped the old bastard out of the chair and with great delibratation he sat in it.

Re: My Fisrt Fan Fic.

The story was cute. However, it could've had a bit more detail and a couple of words were spelled wrong. Overlooking nitpicking details like that though, the mental image of Boba jumping out of a cake is rather funny.

"Did I ever tell you how much I like ants huh? Especially fried in a subtle blend of mech fluid and grated gears?"-Rampage, Beast Wars

Re: My Fisrt Fan Fic.

i think it might be a fruit cake with alot of almond and hazelnuts in it and nutmeg for flavouring.with butter icing in the middle and topped with marzypan and icing sugar.but you can decide what sort of cake you want it to be.