3 things. One, I'm not an idiot. The first footnote is copied and pasted word for word from one of the wiki's introductory pages. The second paragraph of the Containment Procedures is directly ripped from SCP-296. At least paraphrase when you do this, man.

Two, is English your first language? It's hard to talk about your writing when you fail to grasp basic English punctuation and grammar conventions like plural forms and capitalisations.

Three, this idea is boring. It is boring because it presents an item that does a thing that is supposed to be scary, except that many more SCP articles describe more scary things already. This is no scarier than a description of a firearm.

I recommend reading more. Read more good English books, maybe even read newspapers to get that partial reporting tone down. Read more SCP articles, especially the highly-rated ones, or the ones written by good authors. Hell, read the guides if you want. Get a feel of language, tone, and what makes a good idea, before sitting down and writing something for the site.