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Rated 5 / 5 stars2010-08-01 18:05:11

Great!

This is definitley the best in the series and a great example of how talented you are. I love how you use the same characters for a goofy series and a scary one! The animation was unfathomably brilliant. I just loved how the characters themselves seemed to have TV lines or something on their skin to contrast to everything else. It worked great at being creepy with those cool monster designs. It is great that everyone is meeting each other so we can really get the story started.

Rated 5 / 5 stars2010-08-01 15:46:11

Rated 4 / 5 stars2010-08-01 03:18:35

meh.

The character design takes away from the story almost completely, the contrast between the realistic and detailed backgrounds and sound effects make it seem fake. Try making more detailed characters and less anime-looking characters. Other than that, the backgrounds, sound effects and plot were all done really well.

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars2010-08-01 02:22:53

grade A

"holy fucking shit" ~3D animation
"fucking damit.. you ended it there!!!" ~ending
RAWR
that was some grade A stuff right there boys and girls. oh... i cant wait for the conclusion to this one, but at the same time i can see you having like 4 episodes leading up to the conclusion.
nice work scoot

Rated 4 / 5 stars2010-08-01 00:57:45

really great but...

This series is scary, you got the buildings which look really good along with the backgrounds and the monsters and the scary atmosphere
The monsters are good too

Just...the humans. Oh my god. The humans....their anatomy flaws, and the way they look just...takes away from all the fear and horror of the film.
Try practicing on drawing humans and mastering them a bit more before doing the next film. The style of the eyes the size of half the person face just...takes away from the horror. Also is everyone's eyes supposed to be atomic green? I am sure you will improve over time! You can do it I believe in you!