Damn, this is so sad. But I - maybe I'm a sadist or something, but I /love/ parts like these, because it adds drama to the story, and I love that! :D But I hope they make up soon. What's next with Kieran and Nate?

Somehow I get all awkward when I'm about to review really good stories. They're just so utterly perfect, and despite how much I love them, I know I can never do them justice. I still wanted to let you know that I consider this one of those perfect, and just as perfectly written, stories that I love, and that I will be deliriously happy when we are given another chapter. Lots of appreciation and thanks!

Wow talk about major drama, but why does it seem like a lot of the submissive main characters seem too weak on their own? I'm like waiting for Nate to suddenly grow some confidence, freak out, and totally change himself just to spite everyone and drag Stephanie with him haha. By the way, I love her name. I don't get to see many stories use that name for girls and I start squealing everytime you use it (mostly because it is my real name and it makes me happy to see it instead of some crazy made up one).

raravis chapter 6 . 2/3/2011

I love this story so much. Kieran is such an interesting character and I can't wait to learn more about him and Nate. I really, really hope you update again because I am dying to find out where you take this story. It is just so good. Thanks for writing something this awesome!