And I'm still trying to decide on their fears. Segno doesn't really fear much; his loved ones are dead, he's emo so he doesn't fear death... I guess just reliving his parents' deaths or them being dissapointed in who he has become...

BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH! I already read, I'm just not sure what to say. And I don't know how much Segno likes Kapira. I mean, she doesn't like kids? That's like the complete opposite of him. Also, I think she's a little too mood-swingish. You should try to make at least SOME parts of her personality constant. Just a suggestion.