Here: He rarely knew what to say when the words were apparent. But somehow, he managed a response to the broken little girl. No of course she isn't mad. And it's not your fault. She's probably been out trying to find work. She'll be back pretty soon and then you can spend the evening with her. But right now, your job is to have fun."

Should there be another " after "broken little girl." and before "No of course she isn't mad."

I recently watched Dr. Horrible's Sing-Along Blog again after not watching it for ages and id forgotten how much i loved it XD Ive read quite a few FFs in the last few days and i must say that this is the best one ive read! Im so glad it ended how it did, with a perfect happy ending! It made me cry XD

Youre very talented! The fic is written so well that i was hooked and couldnt stop reading! Thank you for keeping me entertained the whole way through!