This short is so true to life it's heartbreaking, but I'm sure that you are aware of that. I am impressed with how you were able to create a clear atmosphere (and motivation) in so few words. Impressive. There is a lovely elegance about the way you write that I admire very much. It flows. Nicely done. I'm off to look over you page to see if you can hold it up for longer-works too. _ I sincerely suspect you can.