Reviews

Well, I can't complain about you rambling on, because even though you have taken... a while... you're still undoubtedly the best writer on here. I'd be thrilled if I could develop my stories even half as well as you can.

The chapter was brilliant. Of course, it's within my own preference that the Frerard would be here quicker, but that's my opinion. It would be a different story if it was shorter. You're a fantastic writer. Can't wait until the next chapter.

BleedingValentine xx

Author's response

Wow, thank you so much! I guess the speed of the frerard just depends on the characters and storyline- although I do tend to lean towards letting it go too slowly than too fast. Thank you very much, I'm so glad you like it and I promise I'll update as soon as I can! :D

Another stunning piece. You truly have a natural skill, a talent for writing that is evedent in every word.
Every chapter is worth the wait, however long that may be, and you never dissapoint. Keep doing what you're doing because you are amazing :D
Eagerly awaiting the next T xoxo

Author's response

Thank you very much, that means a lot to hear! :'D I'll update as soon as I can, and thank you so much for taking the time to review :D

Oh poop my review didn't go through.... i can't remember exactly what i said before but that fight scene made me cringe and this chapter was most excellent and worth the wait... just be quicker next time? C:

I actually prefer that it's moving slower - there are plenty of smutty frerard oneshots on this site, and it's nice to have a story where you actually learn about the characters and there's a proper storyline to it.
Anyway, this chapter is amazing as usual, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! You're a really talented writer.
xo

Wow! This is time I am out of words. Seriously,this chapter was so good. Though in some places,like when Danny came along it was a bit hard to read. I could feel the pain or how could you say it. You are the master of describing! It always seems so real,you can almost touch the atmosphere at the scenes.