I know, I know, it's a big jump from liquid helium to a thermonuclear warhead. But I was running out of good ideas for termination methods, so if you have any suggestions for that it would be much appreciated.

CadeUnit27, please don't bump your thread like this. It's unfair to people who are waiting to receive their own feedback in a timely manner, and it actually reduces the chance of you receiving yours (since people tend to prioritize threads with no responses.) Please be more patient in the future.

You can add additional information to your original post without bumping the thread by using the Edit button under Options.

Typically, if a reviewer tells you that your concept is not solid enough to write up as a full SCP, it's good to figure out how to improve the concept before attempting to fix the draft without knowing what the audience wants to see.