Mission 5
Log:
I received a transmission from the Temple ordering me to got to Mustafar to investigate Sith Scientists working on there.
End Log
Extra Info
Rank: Padawan

About this creation

Crade: "Well, here we are."

Jensen Tridlyer: "You sure about this Crade?"

Crade: "Sure! What can go wrong......"

First Sith: "A lot can go wrong Jedi scum!"

(Both Sith pull out their Lightsabers)

The Sith light their Lightsabers. (One Black, one Gold)

Crade: "Ready?"
Jensen: "Sure am!"
Crade: "You take the one with the mask. i'll take the other one."
Jensen: "Roger that"

(Crade and Jensen light their Lightsabers)

(Both Sith attack the two Jedi)

Second Sith: "I will destroy you!" (Both Jedi fight the Sith near the building)

(Jensen uses the force to push the second Sith away, Crade falls) First Sith: "Now you shall die Jedi!"
(Crade ducks under the Lightsaber)
Crade: "Not today!"
First Sith: "Aaarrrrrggggg!!!!!"
(Scientist runs out of the building escaping while Jensen force jumps onto his attacker, Crade swings his lightsaber close to the Sith.)

(Crade cut's off the first Siths hand with his Lightsaber, Jensen Cuts the other Sith in half.)
First Sith: "Owwww!!!!!!!!!! The pain!"

(Then Crade swings low again while the fist Sith is caught off gaurd and slices him in half)

(Jensen turns his head and sees the Sith Scientist running away.)

(Jensen force throw's his Lightsaber at the Sith Scientist)

(The Lightsaber swings as it closes in to the Sith Scientist)

(The sith Scientist is cut in half and falls in to the lava)

(Jensen catches his Lightsaber as it returns to him. Jensen walks up to Crade)
Jensen: "Are you alright bud?"
Crade: "Yeah, I'm alright. Can you help me up please?"

Quoting Duncan L
I like the lava and the figs, but I don't like the COMIC! The ground needs more detail in my opinion (layering maybe?). and the building also needs a makeover. Your score: 4/10.
Also, please state your rank in the mission log somewhere, as it helps judging greatly.

Okay. By the way, I got no slopes. I would have done that if I had some. :(

I like the lava and the figs, but I don't like the COMIC! The ground needs more detail in my opinion (layering maybe?). and the building also needs a makeover. Your score: 4/10.
Also, please state your rank in the mission log somewhere, as it helps judging greatly.