Chapter 1 and ridiculousness already. Ginny - no name character who barely exists in the first 5 books, suddenly here - strong character who thinks she has the right to tell Harry what to do because apparently its perfectly okay for pushy bitchy redheads to tell other people whats best for them. And apparently its a psycho chick with an incestuous focus on Harry being part of her family but oh so shaggable. She has the nerve to tell someone else how he thinks, and lay guilt trip all over someone who has had the only family he has left die. 'It doesn't matter what you're feeling - all that's important is how that death affecting you AFFECTS US!'.

In one chapter the character is more unlikeable and less believable than anything JKR wrote. I'll pass on whatever else is planned...

Stumbled across this story today and have read it compulsively to finish it and now to my dismay I see it's not finished. I love where this is going please update soon and finish this. All though I admit that the length of time since the last update gives me little hope that you will, still its worth a try this story is too good to leave hangining

So you think the best way to help someone who is grieving over the loss of his last family member is to through physical violence? Why is it okay for Ginny to slap Harry? What if it had been Harry who slapped Ginny? Would that be okay? Pain doesn't need additional violence!