Wow, I was really amazed by this, no kidding. Its hauntingly good, immersive in the best way. It was the clear winner for the challenge, and was unlike anything I've ever read, really.

Also, I applaud your use of second person. It takes guts to do that, because its so hard to pull off, but you nailed it, which helped with the overall immersion.

So once again, great job with this,

BoredOneNight

Author's Response: Ah thank you so much!
It's strange, because I didn't feel this story was particuarly good, so it's great to hear that you like it.
I thought the second person would add a bit of uniqueness to it, as I didn't want my story to be the same as everybody else's, so once again, thank you.