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I have so many questions for this poet, you sat at the end you would like to make your land a heaven like it was before; do you remember a time before war? or do you just dream of it often? Also you talk about wanting to bring peace to your land, would you leave to have peace somewhere else? or would you rather stay in your homeland and try to gain freedom there no matter how hard? thank you for sharing your poem.

Dear,Thanks for your nice comment…
I would stay Afgahnistan and as my idea , We , new generation are future of afgahnistan. I cant leave my beloved country and go somewhere else. I do want to go and have my education in outside of our country , but by hope of this to bring something back to my beloved country to help me and my people for changing our country . No , i cant remember times before war. it is just my immigination.

Zahra, thank you for sharing your poem. It is compelling, strong and moving. Also, thank you for staying determined and hopeful for all of us. I hope everyday that your dreams come true. Your writing is powerful and elegant. Great work.

This is such a strong, hopeful, beautiful poem that shines from your spirit. Thank you for your love and your sense of hope. Thank you for your light. You probably don’t remember, but I have worked with you before. I am happy to see your writing getting stronger and stronger. Take care.