Any feedback at all would be highly appreciated, and if you think anything needs to be changed or there is a more advanced phrase I could have used please just say, also any ideas for questions would be great!

Any feedback at all would be highly appreciated, and if you think anything needs to be changed or there is a more advanced phrase I could have used please just say, also any ideas for questions would be great!

thank you

Wow! This sounds great! I got an A in National 5 French last year, so if you want any help, just let me know.
Your speaking presentation looks very similar to what I wrote so make sure you know it fluently and ensure your pronunciation is good! Also make sure you know your questions well - my teacher changed the order of them in the speaking exam. I'm sure you'll do great so be confident!

Do not get upset by what seems like a lonnnng list. You have done a really good job here!
Some of these are minor corrections you may not even need.
In bold are important ones.

Quick note: words like étaient, you don't pronounce the ent.

Ask your teacher to talk through your speaking when it is written down and you can record it. This means you can really hit all the right pronunciations. You can do this with your questions as well.

...j'habite enEcosse... Dans isn't what you use for countries.
...avec ma famille, y compris mon... this means 'this includes'. You don't have to change that, it just introduces it better.
make sure when you say words like mère and père, you really roll your r's. The language guy does a good video on this : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o9W8qchd6xAL'éte dernière. Make sure you pronounce the r here too. Also it's feminine because éteis feminine that's why it will change the pronunciation a bit.
...je suis allée... You may not know this as its nat. 5, but when we use past tense and its an action verb (like aller, to go) you have to use être, and that means that the verb has to agree in number and gender, so we add an e for you because you are female.
..nous allons y parce que... ici means here, wheras y refers to Ibiza. the parce part was probably just a typo, but still.
...parce quenous aimons... That didn't make much sense, the literal translation was 'we have to enjoy'. Nous aimons means we like.
...Nous avons voyagéenavion, le vol a duré trois heures. We say en for travel, I went there by bus = J'y suis allé(e) en bus. This is only really different for going by foot, which uses à. Take out the que. It adds an extra 'that' which is unnecessary.
...c'est confortable et j'aime la vue... Avoid the profiter verb. It seems that you are using it in the past tense which is difficult to use at nat. 5. Using I like can be dull at times so you can also change it up by using j'apprécie or even saying the sentence and adding je pense/crois que c'est bien (I think/believe that it's good.) at the end.
...nous avons passé nos journéesen Ibiza. Nos is our for plural. Again en for countries.
...dans un hôtel de luxe. Using the five star part if you want, (although it is unnecessary) would mean saying: un hôtel de luxe de cinqs etoiles. Five becomes plural because the stars are plural, though it isn't pronounced and it goes after the noun as it acts as an adjective. It's kind of like colours, they come afterwards.
...À mon avis, dix jours est un moment idéal. this avoids saying the r sound as I know they can be tricky.
...Je pense que la ville où nous sommes restes était magnifique, les plages étaient excellents. So où is just where, it makes it simpler. The étaient is the conjugation for plurals. Again, past tense is tricky. If you're studying Higher, try buying this: https://www.amazon.co.uk/Bescherelle.../dp/2218951983 In hardback (it won't work with kindle, it's like a dictionary) It helps you to pick it up.
...soeur et moi avons adore ça. As you're using and me it should be et moi, because you can get confused with the je like you did there. You use the we conjugation for past tense here as a result. The ça refers back to the park.
'Dans l'ensemble Ibiza e'tait d'excellents vacances'. Not really sure what you're trying to say here. I'm assuming it was 'Overall, Ibiza was a great holiday'. You can change this to, 'tout ma famille pense que Ibiza était une bonne éxperience'. Which is: all of my family think that Ibiza was a good experience. It gives an opinion and clarifies who thought it was good.
...pendant l'éte je voudrais... L'année prochaine is future tense, so now you have to speak in future tense too. Je voudrais is I would like.
...et rester... we don't need the extra 'je voudrais' here.'Las Americas' Not sure what this is either. Las isn't what we use in french. If you mean USA, you would say dans la centre d'états-unis which is United states. Because of the hyphen, make sure you say it like 'zuni' (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gm_Lh_lZXFs). If you mean America, then you would say l'Amérique. Its feminine but we drop the a in La because of the vowels.Je voudrais aller... Again, would like for future tense. 'Je suis heureux d'aller l'annee prochaine car ce sera tres chaud' Doesn't make sense logically. It implies that as the years increase temperature rises exponentially. It should be 'Je suis heureux d'aller l'éte prochaine parce qu'elle sera plus chaud que maintenant'. This means: I am happy to go next summer because it will be hotter than it is now. We use elle after the que because America is feminine. If you use the united states make sure to write elles.
...La vacance de mes rêves est... We use this because it means: the holiday of my dreams is... What you said before didn't make any sense, but I got what you meant.Aussi je voudrais aller a Rovaniemi, en Finlande car je voudrais faire du ski quand j'y suis. This means: I would like to go to Rovaniemi in Finland (I didn't know what that was so its best to explain it in the exam.) because I would like to go skiing while I am there. ...ça serait genial d'aller en Finlande dans le futur! This avoids saying ici again, which means here.

Now for possible questions.

They may ask:
As-tu déjà visité la France? - Have you ever visited France. It may even be Avez-vous visité la France?

(Original post by MedTalksWithJoy)
Wow! This sounds great! I got an A in National 5 French last year, so if you want any help, just let me know.
Your speaking presentation looks very similar to what I wrote so make sure you know it fluently and ensure your pronunciation is good! Also make sure you know your questions well - my teacher changed the order of them in the speaking exam. I'm sure you'll do great so be confident!

Thank you so much!! How did you revise for french to achieve an A? I got a B in my speaking and an A in my writing assignment so both of these greats contribute 40% to my overall grade which should be a good boost, any tips would be appreciated

(Original post by Freya Jackson)
Do not get upset by what seems like a lonnnng list. You have done a really good job here!
Some of these are minor corrections you may not even need.
In bold are important ones.

Quick note: words like étaient, you don't pronounce the ent.

Ask your teacher to talk through your speaking when it is written down and you can record it. This means you can really hit all the right pronunciations. You can do this with your questions as well.

...j'habite enEcosse... Dans isn't what you use for countries.
...avec ma famille, y compris mon... this means 'this includes'. You don't have to change that, it just introduces it better.
make sure when you say words like mère and père, you really roll your r's. The language guy does a good video on this : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o9W8qchd6xAL'éte dernière. Make sure you pronounce the r here too. Also it's feminine because éteis feminine that's why it will change the pronunciation a bit.
...je suis allée... You may not know this as its nat. 5, but when we use past tense and its an action verb (like aller, to go) you have to use être, and that means that the verb has to agree in number and gender, so we add an e for you because you are female.
..nous allons y parce que... ici means here, wheras y refers to Ibiza. the parce part was probably just a typo, but still.
...parce quenous aimons... That didn't make much sense, the literal translation was 'we have to enjoy'. Nous aimons means we like.
...Nous avons voyagéenavion, le vol a duré trois heures. We say en for travel, I went there by bus = J'y suis allé(e) en bus. This is only really different for going by foot, which uses à. Take out the que. It adds an extra 'that' which is unnecessary.
...c'est confortable et j'aime la vue... Avoid the profiter verb. It seems that you are using it in the past tense which is difficult to use at nat. 5. Using I like can be dull at times so you can also change it up by using j'apprécie or even saying the sentence and adding je pense/crois que c'est bien (I think/believe that it's good.) at the end.
...nous avons passé nos journéesen Ibiza. Nos is our for plural. Again en for countries.
...dans un hôtel de luxe. Using the five star part if you want, (although it is unnecessary) would mean saying: un hôtel de luxe de cinqs etoiles. Five becomes plural because the stars are plural, though it isn't pronounced and it goes after the noun as it acts as an adjective. It's kind of like colours, they come afterwards.
...À mon avis, dix jours est un moment idéal. this avoids saying the r sound as I know they can be tricky.
...Je pense que la ville où nous sommes restes était magnifique, les plages étaient excellents. So où is just where, it makes it simpler. The étaient is the conjugation for plurals. Again, past tense is tricky. If you're studying Higher, try buying this: https://www.amazon.co.uk/Bescherelle.../dp/2218951983 In hardback (it won't work with kindle, it's like a dictionary) It helps you to pick it up.
...soeur et moi avons adore ça. As you're using and me it should be et moi, because you can get confused with the je like you did there. You use the we conjugation for past tense here as a result. The ça refers back to the park.
'Dans l'ensemble Ibiza e'tait d'excellents vacances'. Not really sure what you're trying to say here. I'm assuming it was 'Overall, Ibiza was a great holiday'. You can change this to, 'tout ma famille pense que Ibiza était une bonne éxperience'. Which is: all of my family think that Ibiza was a good experience. It gives an opinion and clarifies who thought it was good.
...pendant l'éte je voudrais... L'année prochaine is future tense, so now you have to speak in future tense too. Je voudrais is I would like.
...et rester... we don't need the extra 'je voudrais' here.'Las Americas' Not sure what this is either. Las isn't what we use in french. If you mean USA, you would say dans la centre d'états-unis which is United states. Because of the hyphen, make sure you say it like 'zuni' (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gm_Lh_lZXFs). If you mean America, then you would say l'Amérique. Its feminine but we drop the a in La because of the vowels.Je voudrais aller... Again, would like for future tense. 'Je suis heureux d'aller l'annee prochaine car ce sera tres chaud' Doesn't make sense logically. It implies that as the years increase temperature rises exponentially. It should be 'Je suis heureux d'aller l'éte prochaine parce qu'elle sera plus chaud que maintenant'. This means: I am happy to go next summer because it will be hotter than it is now. We use elle after the que because America is feminine. If you use the united states make sure to write elles.
...La vacance de mes rêves est... We use this because it means: the holiday of my dreams is... What you said before didn't make any sense, but I got what you meant.Aussi je voudrais aller a Rovaniemi, en Finlande car je voudrais faire du ski quand j'y suis. This means: I would like to go to Rovaniemi in Finland (I didn't know what that was so its best to explain it in the exam.) because I would like to go skiing while I am there....ça serait genial d'aller en Finlande dans le futur! This avoids saying ici again, which means here.

Now for possible questions.

They may ask:
As-tu déjà visité la France? - Have you ever visited France. It may even be Avez-vous visité la France?