as i sip this bottle, i begin to ponder, ponder deeply
what am i searching for?
each drink brings more intoxication
each drink i get more satisfaction
that im close to the answer
but what answer
whats at the bottom of this bottle?
here i sit and write this poem
and here i sit drinking the 40 ounce
which is helping me more? - i dont know
problems can be solved-
as the alchol is desolved...
consumed and drank
i get drunk and i thank...
the makers at the brewery
are they foolin' me?
or are they savin' me?
i dont know but im payin' thee.
workin all day and makin money
only to spend it
never to lend it
im sick of people
all people who lie and mis-use trust
i tend not to give no fuck
i keep thinkin
as i keep drinkin
and i still i havent found an answer
so i finish one bottle
not to find anything
on to the next bottle
still- still searching
this is my mind drifting
this is my late night drinking
i drink to ease stress
and it works, so its not worthless
this is real, this is me
im an alcoholik
im whatever u wanna call it
im done writing, but not done sipping
well im still thinking
and this bottle im still drinking
hoping just hoping
i can find answers on the bottom.....
of the very next bottle......

interesting little study of a bottle. could have reached a further potential, in fact you may have just inspired me to write about a little drinking... but since writing comes for experience, i may have to just go out and get drunk tonight.

Yea there were some real nice questions asked, kind of an interesting perspective on drinking, kind of just reflecting on the goods and th bads. Question the whole purpose of drinking all together. Feeling this piece very nice concept.

Good piece man. I have a slight drinking problem myself, so I can pretty much see where you're coming from with this. Hard for alot of people to acknowledge that fact that they have a problem. You took it to the depth with this.

Dang that's nice J. You didn't flip flop to different things as I would have, and it stayed on point, always something different to think about when I was reading it. It's like the beginning was like the end, vice versa. Good job.
-Peace

beer is fine and dandy!! so is candy: but liquor is quicker!! haha
what is at the bottom of the bottle? that is really a question that will never be answered i believe its within someone strong enuff, to find out and not tell any motherfucking body!! jking good read dawg uppin fo ya

yeah, agree with lpoet here, cause this was quite motivating...I don't have a drinking problem fortunately, just like to act like I do, lol...Quick to say that I need a drink, but I don't drink all too often, only about 4 times a year, lol...But, this piece was dope, a few people that I know have issues with just the same thing...dope drop...