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Enjoying your submissions keep um coming... Yer work deserves wider appeal at MJ. It's a funny little town. The production suits the material as per usual on yer stuff. The additional pathos in the vocal, especially that second verse, works well for me personally. The area of pop music yer working in supports a focus that is appealing, a warm character folks can relate to if you will... The story line presented needs to have a believable characterization to work and you did that well. Keep pushing!