Sorry, but way too much retouching for my tastes. It looks like all the texture of her skin is just simply gone. She doesn't even look human to me in this shot. The color seems a bit off to me as well.

I think it is a nice portrait! Her elbow looks a bit sharper than the eyes - maybe your camera/lens setup needs some AFMA? I could be wrong tough.It also looks like it is a bit blurry due to camera shake, maybe use a faster shutter speed?Despite of that I really like the picture - nice composition and the aperture used seems just right!

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