this is so good...a lot better composition and a really unique idea for this contest. i also like that you took your original and had it similar and so vastly different at the same time - and you took a lot of the suggestions in mind. 5$, definitely.

its great, but is the girl supposed to be wearing the dress? because her right arm is kind of not in the sleeve. its kind of weird because the rest of her body is in the dress, and then theres an arm sticking out. just a thought. i really love it.

if you look closely, the elbow of the other arm is sticking out slightly as well. something that could be easily fixed, but i'm not sure it needs to be. it's not so much supposed to be the same dress, but more of a similar outfit, offering a faint memory of what had happened even though everyone had forgotten.

very clever! a bit creepy too. Not sure if I would buy it, but im gonna give it a $ anyway. I just wish it was more clearer on the shirt when the light is on. It doesn't hafta be obvious, just more clear.