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Review:

fauxthefox says:Hey, this is Faux from the forums again! I really only found one thing to comment on:

I mentioned in my last review that you could use some work on description, and again, that's definitely true. I still don't have a really good idea of what Cassandra's like - from what you've given us so far, she doesn't seem to have much of a personality beyond her wit. I'd suggest you start out by telling us what the kitchen's like, what Regulus actually looks like, that kind of junk.

Faux

Author's Response: GAH! WHY IS DESCRIPTION SO DIFFICULT?!?!?!

Anyways, thank you SO MUCH! I really do need to work much, much harder than I am on my description!

Unfortunately, I'll probably be knocking on your proverbial door again, for another review, just because I'm so terrible at the whole description thing, and you give really good advice!