Thanks for sharing. I agree with the person who said your style was poetic.

Reviewer: Don'tCallMeCoward

Date: 2007-10-23

Reviewid: 149704

Chapter: 1

Wow. Amazing. Best fanfic I've ever read. I mean that in the most honest way; these stories blew me away. You are a gifted writer.

Reviewer: PrincipallyHuman

Date: 2006-03-14

Reviewid: 140935

Chapter: 1

This snapefic was truely, darkly beautiful. The descriptive style was almost poetry, the way you kept Severus so perfectly in character, and the depth you took the characters too was astonising. Margaret was simply perfect for Severus or more the only perfection fitting, the only type who could live through all that and still love him (sorry to sound cliche). I niether have the intelligence nor vocabulary to decribe the finer sublties of this awe-insipering story so I shall leave it there.

Reviewer: june luttrell

Date: 2005-10-10

Reviewid: 134187

Chapter: 1

Your story is a delight please keep it coming.

Reviewer: snagglepuss

Date: 2005-06-09

Reviewid: 123507

Chapter: 1

DUDE. you are freakin awesome! You are my favorite fanfic author. I cannot get over your snape love fics. they are so cute and sweet.

Reviewer: catb

Date: 2005-05-23

Reviewid: 122621

Chapter: 1

Brilliant.

Reviewer: Daroga

Date: 2004-11-07

Reviewid: 103758

Chapter: 1

For angsty Snape, surprisingly good writing and plot-wise - usually they are terrible and improbable, but this is nice and refreshing. Your Snape is quality; he reminds me of all my favorite characters. Extra points for quoting from both Austen and le Guin.

Reviewer: Liza

Date: 2004-07-01

Reviewid: 89912

Chapter: 1

It's so beautiful! Somehow it reminds me of my favourite book beside Harry Potter, Jane Eyre... The way Margaret is described as a tiny little woman and not really beyutiful.. And someone said you have made Snape more handsome, but I see it as in Jane Eyre: in her eyes that ugly mr Rochester was the most beautiful man in the world because she loved him.And I love this story! Go on writing!

Reviewer: amanda

Date: 2004-04-04

Reviewid: 77197

Chapter: 1

WOW i sooo loved this story!! It was great, i was so enthrawled to see what was going to happen!! Really brilliant..

Reviewer: Michelle Tanner

Date: 2004-03-23

Reviewid: 75695

Chapter: 1

Oh my gosh...Snape is so hot..he is so good..he killed Margaret?? Aww..and I thought he would never fall in love..very touching keep it up...

Reviewer: Patricia CV

Date: 2004-02-21

Reviewid: 71638

Chapter: 1

I was captivated by your story. It's one of the few romances that I've hung around to read to the end.

Reviewer: Rose

Date: 2004-02-06

Reviewid: 69758

Chapter: 1

That was really good. Short and sweet. Concise and beeautiful. Well Done.

Reviewer: Erin

Date: 2003-11-18

Reviewid: 60491

Chapter: 1

oh, man! I love your story. It is VERY well written and obviously thought through till the end. No loose threads or anything. I also like the fact that it's complete, (no waiting!)

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: kitzamaeve

Date: 2003-10-23

Reviewid: 57570

Chapter: 1

*sigh* usually I'm not much of a romantic, but I guess like most girls i'm a sucker for a "bad" boy :) you're a very good writer btw :) usually when I read anything (or watch movies even) I always make up a character of my own to daydream/interact. when I was a kid I never pretended to be Cinderella for example... I was always Cinderella's daughter or a maid in her new palace with Prince Charming :P but I must admit when I read this story I was very definantly Margaret in my head :P shhh.

Reviewer: harpinred01

Date: 2003-09-05

Reviewid: 50890

Chapter: 1

Oh, that was wonderful! I'm so happy that I found this, and I truly love they way you write Snape as well as your OC.<SIGH> Okay, I'm a happy girl now :)

Monique

Reviewer: uremia

Date: 2003-09-05

Reviewid: 50838

Chapter: 1

i really liked this story. you have a way with words that fill them with emotion without going too sappy about it. i wish this was longer or at least this had a sequel.

great work!!!!!

Reviewer: Leonie

Date: 2003-08-15

Reviewid: 47264

Chapter: 1

This was good. I must say that, truthfully, I do not generally care much for fanfiction. I've read some rather amusing though unrealistic stories in which the bad guy turns out to be good after all. This wasn't unconvincing at all, I love the way you don't rule out all evil and nastiness and make your story less sugarsweet by writing it like this. You've got great potential. Please make up your own characters and start writing a novel,I'd be delighted to read it.

Reviewer: DJG

Date: 2003-08-06

Reviewid: 45841

Chapter: 1

I think this was a great story! It was very long but one of the best stories I've read. It was very different from all the others and very, very interesting. I think you could think of writing other great stories. ; )

Reviewer: Sarah

Date: 2003-08-06

Reviewid: 45839

Chapter: 1

I loved it! It was sooooo good.

Reviewer: Mary Jorgensen

Date: 2003-07-26

Reviewid: 44007

Chapter: 1

Ok, so I'm not the only one who appreciates Snape's unique charm and his irresistible draw. You said the lyrics are from Metallica. I've never listened to them. What songs? I want to hear the rest of these songs.

Reviewer: juana

Date: 2003-07-25

Reviewid: 43761

Chapter: 1

WOW!That definately one of the best Snapefics I have EVER read (mind u i'm a huge snape-redeemed-who-finds-love-fic fan)Amazing!

Reviewer: Margaret

Date: 2003-07-20

Reviewid: 42933

Chapter: 1

Snape is my favorite character out of all the books. I absolutely LOVED it! It was good to see these kind of feeling brought out in a character who is mostly mean. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: AmishVomitCake

Date: 2003-07-19

Reviewid: 42873

Chapter: 1

I have recently come to the comclusion that Snape is one of my favorite character, regardless of how mean he is (go figure), and I must say that I think you did a splendid job of capturing Snape's personality (hmm) in this story...Kudos to you.

Reviewer: ashes

Date: 2003-07-19

Reviewid: 42856

Chapter: 1

Hey, I liked this a lot, but (not a big but... a small one)I think you should spend some more time on the story line. Maybe give them more of a backstory and make the ending a little clearer. Its still really good! Just a little constructive critisim.

Reviewer: carrie

Date: 2003-07-17

Reviewid: 42498

Chapter: 1

I think that this is a sweet and touching story. To think that Snape could Love and be Loved. It's wonderful. Very Well wrriten.

Reviewer: Jacquelyn

Date: 2003-07-17

Reviewid: 42428

Chapter: 1

I have found the character of Severus Snape fascinating from Book 1, and it is hard to find others who share it! Your fanfic was fantastic, mere words cannot explain adequately. Your writing technique is amazing...I felt like I was there.

Thank you for this wonderful Snape piece!

Reviewer: Mulciber

Date: 2003-07-17

Reviewid: 42404

Chapter: 1

Lovely. I invest a lot of time in finding Snapefics. The decent ones are few and far between. Yours was not just decent, it was excellent.

Reviewer: evil girl

Date: 2003-07-16

Reviewid: 42338

Chapter: 1

this was so good i know it may spoil it but i think you should write another, carrying on from this. yo are such a talented writer. you should write profetionaly

Reviewer: Jessanndi

Date: 2003-07-16

Reviewid: 42332

Chapter: 1

You have the marks of a great writer. I have been utterly and totally drawn into Margaret's and Snape's minds. I have felt the cold, endured the heat and lost my way in the darkness. I lay breathless with the emotion.And this is all down to you.

That was very good! I liked in this story how Snape can be so caring and loving! I really really loved that story!!! Keep up your lovely work!!

~Arlene W.~ bluemoon52292@netscape.net~

Reviewer: Heather

Date: 2003-07-15

Reviewid: 42206

Chapter: 1

Well. That was absolutely wonderful! It was eloquent and believable. I love it! Margaret's name was just lovely as well. Great job!

Reviewer: moonstone_mystyk

Date: 2003-07-15

Reviewid: 42190

Chapter: 1

A great fic. I love to see Snape finally get someone.

Reviewer: Larzdinn

Date: 2003-07-15

Reviewid: 42168

Chapter: 1

Words escape me - I LOVE IT.

Reviewer: Sally

Date: 2003-07-15

Reviewid: 42136

Chapter: 1

There are too few GOOD Snape-fics out there. Congratulations on writing one of the BEST.

Reviewer: Jayne

Date: 2003-07-15

Reviewid: 42101

Chapter: 1

Very few things bring tears to my eyes, and yet they stream down my face. This compelled me to move from word to word, moment to moment with hope, despair, and utter pain for both of them. How so beautifully written!"The light...was you."

Reviewer: kayjal

Date: 2003-07-15

Reviewid: 42100

Chapter: 1

beautiful. poetic. you may have made snape a little bit more good-looking and i think you may have romanticised him a little but i found the story a beautiful one. one of the best snape-fic's so far. im off to read your other stories. it really was lovely. graceful, flowing..just amazing..

Reviewer: Alia

Date: 2003-07-15

Reviewid: 42085

Chapter: 1

That was amaziing and sweet. I loved it and treasure it. It left me in a awed state. 'Mazing, Amazing.

Reviewer: Elliott

Date: 2003-07-15

Reviewid: 42074

Chapter: 1

Nice. Same woman at different ages, right? A very interesting story. Good technical work on it, good job with the Snapeness.

Now to the nitpicking.

Hermione Mode: "Perhaps some day you'll read Hogwarts, a History, and you'll remember that you can't Apparate or Disapparate on school grounds!"