--Macho man: If you join our club, you will be able to become like us.[Skinny  Macho] sfx: flexing muscles

--

Hayasaka: Seriously!?

Sfx: heart beats

Text: His brief hesitation is a secret.

P102

Bon Jour, Ichigo Love-sama // It’s been a while since we last spoke. / Sorry for the delay in my response. Hehe. // I was pretty busy with moving but I’m finally getting used to things. // I’ve been swept up in a storm of love everyday at my new school! // Just the other day, I was in a "doki doki" love battle over the school’s heartthrob!

--

If only… // In reality it was a battle to take down the banchou…

Be a man!!

[Heh heh… // But I won’t write that…]

Anyway, everyday is thrilling! // I will let you know when prince charming enters my life!

P103

Letter: P.S.I may be cute, but that just makes it 100 times easier to hate me.* Snow*Proverb that is not TLed correctly…but it’s the jist!

Mafuyu: Hm? P.S? // What does this stand for again? // [Playstation?]

--

Sfx: appears out of nowhere

Takaomi: It’s Post Script.

Mafuyu: WAH!

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Mafuyu: [Ta-] Takaomi-kun!? [What are you doing here!?]

Takaomi: Your door was open.

Mafuyu: [So what?] It doesn’t mean you can come in!!

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Takaomi: So, what is this? A diary full of fantasies? // [This is painful to read…]

Sfx: shocked

Mafuyu: [How rude!!] // [Fantasies…?] It’s clearly a very girly letter to a pen pal no matter how you look at it!

Takaomi: Pen pal…?

P104

Takaomi: There’s someone who has to read this brutal writing…? [Poor kid…]

Mafuyu: How mean!!

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Mafuyu: Ichigo-san writes to me in the same style!!

Takaomi: Show me / is this it?

Sfx: rustle

Mafuyu: No wait!!

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Letter: I bought a new kind of tea today. It’s orange pekoe; doesn’t it make you think of an orange that’s bowing to you*? *Laugh* Pekopekori-na Pokopokopi-! The end.*Pun on pekoe as “peko” which is a sfx that indicates someone bowing.

Takaomi: What the hell!!?

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Takaomi: Where the hell is this person from…? [I really want to know.]

Mafuyu: Huh? [Uhhhm…]

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Mafuyu: Japan // I think.

--

Takaomi: You don’t even know that for sure…!!?

P105

Takaomi: You don’t have their address?

Mafuyu: Nope.

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Takaomi: Is it an imaginary pen pal…!!? // [She’s that desperate…!?]

Mafuyu: Oh // Here he is. // Look Takaomi-kun!

Takaomi: Huh? // What’s here…

Sfx: opens window

Mafuyu: Welcome! // This is Josephine. / She is the messenger!

Sfx: bird cries

Takaomi: A pigeon!!!!

P106

Mafuyu: I haven’t seen him for so long, / since I was so busy with moving! [kya // kya]

Takaomi: I don’t know how to say it… // but you really changed…

Mafuyu: [Really!?] You mean I got prettier!!?

Takaomi: I’m going to drown you.

--

Takaomi: Why are you pen pals with someone anyway?

Mafuyu: It’s a long story but…

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It was a year ago. // I was taking a walk // when I saw a drowning pigeon // so I saved it.

Okegawa: [Tsk!] No!!! That wasn’t cute, it was manly!!! // That movie focuses on how manly that main character is!!

Sfx: squeezing

Mafuyu: Sorry…!

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Okegawa: [Tsk] As long as you understand…

<Mafuyu’s hair got messed up>

Mafuyu: Oh // look an arcade! [Wow![

Okegawa: [Oh] You wanna fight? [Let’s play a fighting game]

Sfx: game sounds

Mafuyu: Banchou…

P118

Mafuyu: Weren’t we going to fight…?

Okegawa: Wait!!! / I found Nekomata-san!! Nekomata-san!!!

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Banchou… // the impression I have of you is changing drastically over the course of the day…

Mafuyu: How was he banchou for so long…?

Okegawa: GO! // AAH! // NO!!

--

But…

Okegawa: [Get out of the way!]

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Mafuyu: Which one do you want?

P119

Sfx: click

Instead of being bossed around by you…

Sfx: machine sound

--

Sfx: opens

Mafuyu: I’m actually pretty good at these games.

--

Mafuyu: Here you go!

You make me want to help you.

P120

Sfx: heart beats a little

Okegawa: Oh… / uh…thanks…

Sfx: pulls

Bully: Just a second there… // I can’t believe the all mighty banchou of Midorigaoka High // likes something like this!

Mafuyu: He’s been found out!!!

P121

Bully: Haha! Look at this lame doll! Hahaha!

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Bullies: We heard you’re suspended! // If you fight again, you’ll probably be expelled! / Even the lenient Midorigaoka probably won’t let you off the hook! [It’ll be bad for you if they find out!] // It’s decided, banchou! You’ll be a human punching bag!

These guys… // I won’t let them // do such a thing!

P122

Sfx: punch flies

Mafuyu: …!

Sfx: punch!

--

Sfx: falls

[aah!]

Okegawa: Hey you! / Don’t be touchin’ people’s stuff like that! // But it’s pointless talking to idiots like you… // and there’s no way I’ll be expelled…

P123

Okegawa: Since you guys won’t be able to speak up! // RAAAAAH!! [DIE!!]

Sfx: punching

Dear mother…

Mafuyu: [Aaaaahhh…]

Sfx: whimpers

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I hadn’t seen such a one-way battle in so long. // The difference in strength was like a wolf VS rabbits.

<The image is too gory so we will not show it.>

Sfx: screaming

The floor was covered in a sea of blood. // I wondered if this was hell.

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Staff: Hey, should we call the police? // This is pretty bad…

P124

Sfx: opens eyes

Police!!?

Sfx: grabs

Bullies: HEY! // WAIT!!

Sfx: runs

Okegawa: Heym what are you doing! Let go! // I can’t do something as wimpy as running away!

P125

Okegawa: Hey are you listening to me!>

Mafuyu-san!

Sfx: something flies

P126

Sfx: hits

Mafuyu: YOU FOOL!! // If you get arrested, you’ll be expelled for sure! / Then you really won’t be able to see your friends anymore! // Like me! // We became friends, / and I don’t want to say goodbye already! / That’s sad!

Okegawa: So… / sorry…

Mafuyu: It’s… / fine, if you get it… // And…

P127

Mafuyu: You know what they say, the true winners are the ones that run!

--

Sfx: smiles

Okegawa: This reminds me / of a movie I once saw…was it a hegira of love? // But that would mean you’re the prince… // but I guess that’s not so bad.

P128

Banchou… you just said that monologue out loud… [I heard it all!] // Why am I the prince…?

I guess you’re a bit of a romantic…

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Okegawa: Sorry about this…

Mafuyu: No… // uh… // do you always get caught up in fights?

P129

Okegawa: I guess. // A banchou is the face of a school. // So our school is in a risky situation without a banchou… // But we’re okay for a little while because people still think I’m it. // But it’s only a matter of time until they find out the truth…

Sfx: blood freezes

Mafuyu: [seriously…?]

--

Okegawa: But… / I’ll fight anyone that wants to for the time being. [It’s not like I have anything else to do.] // So

P130

Okegawa: Hang out with me again sometime.

Mafuyu: Okay…

Wow… // He’s a real man…

Sfx: raises arm

P131

Sfx: wings flutter

Okegawa: Oh, Torikichi // I was looking for you. // Hm? // This is… / a letter from Snow!! I have to hurry up and write a response!!

Okegawa Kyoutarou, pen name: Ichigo Love. // Writing letters and morse code are his hobbies and he is a romantic at heart.

p.102: Just the other day, I was in a heart-beating love fight over the school’s heartthrob idol!>> sounds a bit weird-- "heart-beating love fight"? "heartthrob idol" O.o I'm not really sure what a heart-beating love fight is... and "heartthrob" is a noun so you could leave it just as a heartthrob or just 'idol'

p.103: Letter: P.S. I may be cute but it makes also makes me 100 times easier to hate*>> Maybe change it to: I may be cute, but that just makes it 100 times easier to hate me.

p.103: didn't TL スノウ from the P.S.

p.108: Letter: P.S. I may be cute but it makes also makes me 100 times easier to hate>> change to suggestion from p.103? :D

p.108: This person is equally as stupid as Mafuyu!!!>> no need for 'equally' (drop)

p.110: He’s got 4 days of suspension.>> He's -> He

p.110: Okegawa: Oh… // morse-girl…>> It'd make more sense if it was 'morse code girl' :P

p.115: might be counterproductive in making him feel better…>> in -> to