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it sure changes us doesnt it ,the day we decide to be good and selfless? So the friends we once called home no longer hang with us and leave uis to our fate. I see this same cultural phenominon on drug addicts. One who was once a addict then goes strait and the people he once called friends disapear like roaches in the light . Such is the path and the way of the straight and narrow. i might try it myself oneday .When i feel the copld hand of the end upon me .

Posted 5 Years Ago

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I am back to review this again as I feel there is a twist in the end that I failed to pick up as having left previous comments, there is something about the last line that indicates he was not intending to return to good - you do not say he entered the church, you only say he began, and then turned around. He would not "salute" that which he did not respect. We respect an officer, one who is of higher status than we with a salute, not one whom we are passing off. So, my former review is modified.....the man still acknowledged how evil of our life has a tight grip on us. Yes, the Devil's Underground had their work to do, and they got his attention! Now, did he proceed and enter the church, or do so with the meaning of his life still intact?

Posted 5 Years Ago

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This is absolutely wonderful and one that zings me in the spirit, as I know well the wiles of the evil one and the legions of Hell!! The more we try to do good, to go about God's work, the harder they will work, and when we have been out of the grace of our Lord Jesus Christ, and are returning to seek Him, the demons attack us even more! Not to get in a sermon here for certain, but I certainly can see and understand how this poor soul who was seeking the forgiveness of his Holy Father, was so cleverly attacked by "The Angel of Light"!! We too become weary with the battle, and are at times as damaged as this poor gentlemen as he acknowledged them, but did not join them. We have to be aware of them! A tip of his hat was his chosen way!
Another inspiring and wonderful write my friend!!

Posted 5 Years Ago

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This is so true!
The moment you resolve to do good
then all the demons in hell stir
and set out their sly little traps
to trip us up.
I liked this poem very much
especially for the slyness of the attacks!

Posted 5 Years Ago

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it sure changes us doesnt it ,the day we decide to be good and selfless? So the friends we once called home no longer hang with us and leave uis to our fate. I see this same cultural phenominon on drug addicts. One who was once a addict then goes strait and the people he once called friends disapear like roaches in the light . Such is the path and the way of the straight and narrow. i might try it myself oneday .When i feel the copld hand of the end upon me .