Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2006-10-15 15:59:06

Still Needs work (yep I'm back)

Better then yesterday at least.. You still need work and a bit of a longer plot.. your animation style has potential but you dont seem to be useing it to your advantage very well by giveing it a bad plot.

Oh BTW you can be Sued for useing real video gameing icons/parfila/insigma ext. so you might wanna change some things or not do that anymore if this becomes worth while ever.

Your tring to make a series, youve probly already got some fan's. heres a few tip's I think you might find helpful:

1.Give your chareters names
2.Add a longer plot
3.Add a starter setting (such as the house in this episode, make that the place where they start in every episode and then have them somehow wind up in other places if thats where the particular episode takes them).
4.i was being sarcastic yesterday, dont classify people and dont take Opiouns on things (such as likeing a particuler movie/video games system/T.V. show ext. Over another becuse it will make people hate you.

Rated 3 / 5 stars2006-10-15 15:33:31

Was a little funny

I liked the style a lot though. The simple shapes without borders looked really clean and nice. However, I'm a PSP fan over the DS. Lol.

Funny how my "loyalties" go... I'm an xbox 360 fan over the others, I hate intel processors (AMD FTW), I'm PSP over DS (Personally I think they should make an XBP (xbox portable :D), but I loved N64 back in the day!