Cookie Cutter Medicine – The Future of PAs and The Future of Medicine

One of the most popular books ever written on building a business is called the E-Myth Revisited, and here's what the author, Michael E. Gerber says about the perfect business model:

The model will be operated by people with the lowest possible level of skill

Because if your model depends on highly skilled people, it's going to be impossible to replicate. Such people are at a premium in the marketplace. They're also expensive, thus raising the price you will have to charge for a product.

The business model should be such that the employees needed possess the lowest possible level of skill necessary to fulfill the functions for which each is intended.

A medical firm should hire doctors, but you don't need the most brilliant doctors, what you need is to create the best system through which good doctors can be leveraged to produce excellent results.

You want to make a "cookie cutter business" that you can scale fast, without regard to finding, nurturing, and retaining linchpin talent.

The Rule of Ordinary People

If you make your business possible to replicate, you're not going to be the one to replicated it, others will.

If you build a business filled with rules and procedures that are designed to allow you to hire cheap people, you will have to produce a product without humanity or personalization or connection.

Which means that you'll have to lower your prices to compete. Which lead to a race to the bottom.

Or, in the case of healthcare, the level of individualized care and quality of medical providers is on a race to the bottom while the cost to the consumer goes up. It relies essentially on the same business model.

Where do PAs fit into all of this?

PAs are in some sense part of this rule whether we like it or not:

The business model should be such that the employees needed possess the lowest possible level of skill necessary to fulfill the functions for which each is intended.

Our skill is built upon a shortened and greatly compressed medical school training model that provides a skill level meant to create very good diagnosticians with the ability to do a wide range of medical procedures. Is this the minimum? I certainly don't think so, but I think we have found a sweet spot.

Our function is to diagnose and treat patients or work alongside doctors in various surgical specialties to treat patients.

What we need to do to move forward: Avoiding "Cookie Cutter Medicine"

God knows I have felt this at times at my job, especially when it comes time for an annual review. Regardless of the institution a lot of what you do will come down to "numbers". How much you can produce relative to the cost to keep you producing.

Patient satisfaction can also use the same model. As a hospital, clinic or medical organization only need find a certain level of consumer satisfaction that will continue to feed the machine.

I don't blame the health care system as organizations themselves are being forced to turn employees into replaceable cogs in a vast machine. We are easier to replace and therefore, need to be paid less.

The massive embrace of the "follow these instructions and you don't have to think", "Do your job and you don't have to be responsible for decisions" has convinced us to leave our genius at home. And it is a shame because it is this very genius that holds the potential to revolutionize the way we do medicine.

Moving Forward

I believe PAs may hold the keys to developing a successful healthcare model both here in the United States and abroad where medical need is the greatest. We have less time in school which means much less in student loan debt, we have a vast bed of working and growing knowledge, we have diverse backgrounds that allow us to see outside the box and we can work for less.

Combined with government programs that help pay for PA school education it is going to be PA ran clinics and overseas organizations that may change the world.

Supervision will always be necessary, it is what defines us a PA-C. If we change this we lose the model. But I challenge you (if you haven't already) to start thinking about how you can help us avoid a cookie cutter society, with cookie cutter patients.

In the words of Seth Godin:

Our society is struggling because, during times of change, the very last people you need on your team are well-paid bureaucrats, note takers, literalists, manual readers, TGIF laborers, map followers and fearful employees. The compliant masses don't help much when you don't know what to do next.

What we want, what we need, what we must have are indispensable human beings. We need original thinkers, provocateurs, and people who care.

Some organizations haven't realized this yet, haven't articulated it yet, but we need artists.

Artists are people with a genius for finding a new answer, a new connection or a new way of getting things done.

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Sabrina L. Pre-PA

Hi Ms. Edmondson,

I hope this email finds you well. I would like to thank you for your help with my PA school personal statement. I’m glad to share that I did get into my top choice – Drexel!

Ashley, Pre-PA

I worked with Duke to edit and complete my essay. It was a terrific experience that I would recommend to everyone! Duke has an amazing ability to help you move things around and change it a little, while still making it feel like 100% your own work. We talked out every change we made, and we both conceded to each other in different places. He made extra time for me when I got stressed out about the deadline, and worked with me for a while each time we sat down. I paid $199 for this service, and I think that was the best bargain I ever got! I have been invited back to submit supplemental applications to some schools, and I will keep the team updated about my interviews. Thanks Duke!!!

Carly Bransky, Pre-PA

I must say, I originally thought I had a fairly strong statement. But after reading Sue’s comments/revision. The quality, structure, and overall flow of my statement was in fact leaps and bounds better than my original.

George, Pre-PA

Susan did a fantastic job of editing my essay! She guided me and gave me suggestions for strengthening certain sections and equally took out weak parts. After I followed her recommendations, I really felt like I had an essay where every sentence mattered and reflected who I was. Thank you so much Susan for your help. I feel that I have a stronger essay because of your honest feedback and your help!

Patrick, Pre-PA

Sue was great! She edited my essay in a short time frame and the comments and feedback were very informative. She helped link all of my main ideas and gave great advice regarding appropriate information for the essay. I highly recommend this service.

Michelle, Pre-PA

I felt our mock interview was an absolute necessity to prepare for the Academic and Personal interviews from Yale School of Medicine PA Program Online. I felt the calibre of questions you had asked me, in addition to the coaching and post-question feedback, really helped me understand what an ideal response looks like and gave me time to reflect and prepare my responses for the formal interview just two days later.

During my interviews I was asked plenty of questions I didn’t have a prepared response to (and I had combed through tons especially in the days following our mock interview!) I can say that I answered each question genuinely, authentically, and showed both interviewers the best version of myself. I didn’t stammer or lose my place, and I felt confident in my words and expressions. I don’t think I would have been as comfortable, calm, or confident without having accepted your guidance and feedback and learned from our time together.

Gratitude for your words, encouragement, and support is an understatement. Thank you, Sarah!

Best Regards,
Jacob

Jacob, PRE-PA

The service provided was excellent. I really appreciate Duke taking the time and reviewing my essay multiple times and at that same time, making sure I am comfortable with the wording. Thank you for all your help!

Foram Patel, Pre-PA

I absolutely love the way my essay sounds! I truly appreciate all of your help. I will definitely recommend prospective PA students your way! It’s been a pleasure.

Natalie, Pre-PA

I just wanted to let you know I was accepted to Mercy College’s PA Program last night! To say I’m ecstatic is an understatement! I wanted to thank you once again for all of your help with my essays and my interview. You helped me so much with everything and I couldn’t have done it without you! Thank you for everything.

Anna Mantikas, PA-S

This service was invaluable – I felt decent about my essay, but it’s remarkably better. I appreciate the level of detail and courtesy even with my discounted rate. You guys are too great!

Duke was so kind and helpful in helping me understand what admissions committees look for in a strong essay. Our phone conversations were so thorough, as we read through and discussed every word in my essay. Sue’s guidance helped me cut out the fluff to reach the character limit.

Melissa T. Pre-PA

I really needed help with my personal statement. I wrote many copies and finally sent my favorite to the PA life to get some assistance editing. I thought I would have a hard time with the constructive criticism because I spent so much time already on my writing, but the editors were great in suggesting edits and why as well as complimenting appropriately. I’m very proud of my end product and am excited to send it to PA schools. I haven’t finalized my application yet but will definitely let the PA life know if and when I get an interview (or hopefully 2)! 🙂

Bailey B. Pre-PA

I loved this service!!

Madeleine Zeichner, Pre-PA

Susan did a fantastic job of editing my essay! She guided me and gave me suggestions for strengthening certain sections and equally took out weak parts. After I followed her recommendations, I really felt like I had an essay where every sentence mattered and reflected who I was. Thank you so much Susan for your help. I feel that I have a stronger essay because of your honest feedback and your help!

Amanda, Pre-PA

This company is THE BEST! Carly did such an awesome job of not only revising my personal statement but also explaining every step she made. It helped me understand why certain things fit better in different places and helped improve my writing. I am able to submit my applications confidently, knowing that I have a strong personal statement. I HIGHLY recommend this service!

Tiffany M, Pre-PA

Carly was excellent! Not only did she make my essay much more compelling, but she understood the deadlines I wanted to reach and helped me do that! 10/10!!

Jesse Cordova, Pre-PA

This was the most amazing experience! I felt so confident about my topic and essay after our meeting. Duke got back to me quickly and worked around my crazy schedule. The editing of the essay was professional and gave me insight I could not have received any other way. I only applied to one school because it is really the one I would like to go to the most and I got an interview!!! Thank you so much for all of your help!

Kathryn R, PA-S

Sarah Schultz is such a gifted and talented writer. She is super sweet and is a joy to work with. I could not have asked for a better editor. She was able to articulate all of my ideas and thoughts seamlessly and effortlessly. Although challenging at times, her suggestions and edits were very insightful and necessary into creating a spectacular essay. I am extremely pleased with the outcome. It is now a true work of art. I am so grateful to Sarah for offering her time to helping individuals like myself to write the best possible personal statement. I would not have been able to write such a cohesive and smooth flowing essay without her help. Thank you so much!! I would unhesitatingly recommend The PA Life Essay Collaborative and Sarah Schultz.