Ezio Auditore Da Firenze's character form

Name: Ezio AuditoreAge/Birthday: 13 (01/02/97)Gender: MaleGod Parent: Ares Claimed: Yes Mortal Parent: Ellie AuditoreYears in Camp:0Brief History: I had a tough school time but found a way to survive. My mum struggled to get a decent house and job until we struck oil in the favelas of Rio de Janeiro. We know live in a beach resort but i still cause trouble ran to the local vineyard as it was easy to find food. Then one day I stumbled across a man (Mr D) and he told me to find everything precious to me and travel with him to camp half blood. Physical Appearance: I have brown eyes and dark brown hair long enough so i can flick it. I am five foot eight and muscular build. Skin colour is light brown and I have pearl white teeth. Personality: I am very stylish and funny can get girls easily. However I know my limits and when to stay mature.Fatal Flaw: I can control nature/animals and elements.Pets: Shadow wolf which can teleport and has wingsTalents: Can play piano and football(soccer) with tremendous skill.Weapons: A flame sword and shamans staffYear-Round or Summer: Year roundOther:

Okay, I'm not a mod, which is probably clear, but I have a few suggestions. First, he needs one more sentence for his physical appearance and two for his personality. Second of all, the "Fatal Flaw" is something that could lead to your character's death, not something that could kill someone. Either way, it's an irrelevant power considering his father is Ares. Finally, you can't have a magical pet for your character unless you purchase it with your 'drachma' which you will earn through posting. I apologize if I appear rude or a know-it-all, I'm just trying to help. Anyways, welcome to camp half-blood and I hope you enjoy the site!