Right. So...I don't even know what to say. This is amazing. I'm one of those ppl bemoaning the lack of KH AU fantasies so finding this gem is like...heaven. Yes. Definitely heaven. Very well executed and so beautifully believable. I love how you've portrayed Sora's reaction to this situation because, yeah, I think that if I were dragged through a mirror and shoved into a war against living shadow, I'd have some similar responses.

I'm sure I could babble on about how awesome this thing is, but I'll leave it at this. My socks are rocked and I can't wait for more. Thanx!

I feel silly tpying this with you sittin in the corner. YOU'RE WATCHING ME AREN'T YOU. O.O (LMFAO)

*cough, fidget* Uhm, OK, LIKE I LOVED THIS. And I seriously got to the end and was like..." OWO HOW DID SHE WRITE THAT BATTLE SCENE. LIKE HOW DID SHE DOO IT? I don't even know. It was awesome. Like, multiple persons, all that fighting, and still I saw the whole thing, it was perfect, it FLOWED, and UGH. Wow. Probably the most epic fight in KH fanfics of all time. I cannot even comprehend it. I have written...um, two fights, I THINK, both one-on-one, and just THAT has given me a glimpse into the difficulty, just enough to be truly BLOWN AWAY by this battle.

I FUCKING LOVE AXEL. I just...everything he does, the way he talks. I LOVE HIM.

Sora kicked so much ass it was SCARY. And now I cannot WAIT to see where this is going, but I won't bug you because I have already come to realize that you are one of the most tight-lipped people I have met in this fandom. YOU ARE STONE COLD IN THE FACE OF MY ANGUISH, AND YOU DON'T EVEN CARE. I am getting myself a rommie who will truly endanger my sanity. O.o (Ahem...SANITY being used in the sense of...referring to my current state of mind. As it is. For what it's worth. XDD )

In short, you fucking rule, and I don't know why it took me so long to get around to reading this, because clearly whatever I was working on was not this awesome. *LOVE RAY BEAMM~! SHAZAMM!* XD XD XD XD

Oh that was friggin' /epic/! :glomp: You write a delicious battle scene, dear.

Sorry it took me so long to get to this. Now I wonder why I let things get in the way. :noms new vocabulary and imagery:

Thank you for Roxas's roundhouse kick, that was hot. XDD

Axel's a fun creature to watch. Always pushing a limit, that one. I get the feeling Roxas is the only one who does anything more than merely put up with him. XD It's amazing that something so ornery can be such a smooth-talker. Maybe I'm wrong, though - I've been a space cadet all week, barely know up from down. DX

You also, officially, write the best cliff-hangers EVER. :D Awesome chapter, dear! I hope this finds you well!

Why on earth did I wait so long to read this again? I forgot how good it was! This fic is super super super amazing awesomeness. You're so good with writing detail, but at the same time, it's not like you overdue it. Great job, and I can't wait till the next update!

Gotta say I just love your battle scene/chapter. I can feel the panic. Makes me want to reach for the PS2 controller and smash some buttons. :D Oh, and what do your chapter titles stand for? "eviF" kinda looks like "evil" but I'm probably way off. And I love your Roxas and Axel interactions. The dry humor is too funny. Do we get more Riku and Kairi? I was just curious to see if things were gonna pick back up on the islands or not. I'll stop rambling now. XD

Yeah, if that doesn't tell you how amazing this chapter was, I don't know what will. This was a beautifully detailed, intriguiing, enthralling, captivating chapter. The fighting was done so well-you're so good at describing fighting but making it sound like something intricate like a dance or something instead of, 'and he swung his blade forward, cutting through the thing. Whewt.' I have always loved your action scenes.

Describing the terror of watching this violence for the first time as Sora was wonderful, too. I found kind of in the game that he sort of fell into it and was like, 'Well, okay, let's see what happens, eh? D' I thought he'd be a bit more freaked out about the fact that little black imp things were crawling at him and he was expected to fight them. I know I'd be screaming.

I also love the fact that you added in Axel's disregard for basic morals and rules. That was ingenius and very much in character. I loved that.

Overall, I loved this entire chapter. There's nothing to guess, it was a very straight forward action chapter, excpet for the fact of, 'Hey look, that keychain thing was a Keyblade. Neat. Now what happens?' We shall see...

And I wouldn't worry about update speed. We don't mind waiting as long as you do continue writing. Writing takes time, especially when you don't have a set timeline. We're patient people I'd like to think.