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Sunday, August 18, 2013

POPULAR (chapter fifteen: Shop till you drop)

Chapter Fifteen

Shop Till You Drop

The next day, we were all due to meet Flynn at the mall to go shopping.

Hilary and I got to our
meeting place (a busy café) early, because I wanted to stress the importance of
table manners to Hilary who looked a bit stressed out. I couldn’t blame her,
really, with so many guys after her. Ty and Jess arrived also and we all talked
about TV, shops, Dance Fangdango, who
we’d take (I announced that being head of the committee made it perfectly
acceptable for me to attend alone – since I was in charge of being social).
Other peeps who turned up without a partner, well, I couldn’t be responsible
for the way high school society would judge them. Jess gawked at me and even
kicked me slightly under the table when I expressed that sentiment.

The Sunrise Mall is a bit like
a mix between Farmer’s Markets and Century City. It’s way exclusive and new and
only locals like us congregate there.

Daddy doesn’t go shopping, of
course. I do. I have a list with all sorts of healthy food stuffs on it. I
intend to purchase the food at the organic market before it closes. I make a
mental note then put my ring on the wrong finger to remind me. That’s what I
always do to remind myself of stuff I might forget.

My ring is a small pink stone
that Ethan picked out for me when I was turning eleven and he was turning
twelve. It’s so cute but I happen to know Mark helped him choose it.

I remember saying, “it’s
totally inappropriate to give a girl a ring unless you’re getting married to
her,” and he just said, “well, I didn’t choose it and I wasn’t going to get you
anything so take it up with my cousin.” Mark just laughed at our childish
‘spat’ as he put it and said, “take it up with the shop assistant, she thought
it was a good choice.”

Of course, I didn’t believe the
ring had no meaning. Even then, I wanted him to divulge his true intentions but
he wouldn’t. I guess it’s hard to have true intentions at almost twelve.

At the mall, Hilary was doing
so well socially, holding fort and talking to the older Princesses. I was very
proud of her.

After drinking our milkshakes,
we all went our separate ways to go shopping.

We had arranged to meet Flynn
outside my fave fashion store Girls Zen
Now which Mrs Teegan co-owns. She used to model for Teen Vogue. We get an awesome discount and there are so many items
to choose from that we never double up on the same styles. Mrs Tory (co-owner) keeps
a record of who in our group bought what, where and how they are going to wear a
particular item. I double up on my laptop just to be safe and add it to my
matchmaking file. Mrs Teegan and Mrs Tory (those are actually their first names,
I just add the Mrs to be polite) often shake their heads at my behavior. I have
no idea why.

I nudged Hilly when Flynn
arrived. He was wearing hot jeans and cool sunglasses. He could teach Ethan and
Rafe a thing or two about style, I thought. He was so excited to see Hilly he
was all, ‘hi ya babe,’ n’ all that. He was very busy on his phone though, as we
went about trying on dresses but way attentive when we modeled them. His eyes
lit up when I said I was trying on Hilly’s dress as an alternate because I’d
already chosen mine. It was as if just the mention of Hilary’s name turned on a
light bulb inside him.

Then, when Hilary was in the
changing room, he gestured to me to come closer.

“Hey babe, gotta show you
something.”

I knew he was going to show me
the image of the framed photo of Hilly, so I walked close. Flynn was all smiles
and charm as he pecked me on the cheek and said, “check this out.”

The photo looked amazing.

“Wow,” I said. “You should
surprise Hilly, she looks amazing.”

“I didn’t have it framed for Hilary.
You took the photograph. You’re an amazing photographer, Honey. You shouldn’t
underestimate yourself so much.”

“Oh, sure. Thanks.”

Was he kidding? No one had ever
accused me of underestimating myself. Of course it was true that my photo was
aces even if someone’s hand was slightly cropped, but what about the image of
Hilly?

To be honest, I was a little
bothered that he hadn’t asked my advice about how best to ask Hilary to Dance
Fangdango, but I reasoned that he was just a seasoned expert and probably
didn’t need my advice with women. These things are hard to admit but occasionally
true.

Then it occurred to me as Hilary
struggled with her fashion choices in the change room, that Flynn was staring…
at me. Actually, he was staring at my chest. Doesn’t it annoy you when boys do
that?

“My eyes are up here,” I
reminded him.

He averted his gaze and smiled.

Then I realized.

Flynn liked… me! Of course. How
stupid could I have been? I froze as he took my hand.

“I got the photo framed ‘cos
you took it, not because Hilary is in it.”

“But that’s impossible, you’re
supposed to like Hilary not… me.”

Flynn laughed.

“I do like Hilary, totally,
she’s your… project and you’ve done… amazing work with her. I mean, I think I
could probs just snap my fingers and bam… she’d be in my bed yesterday but
babe, you are totally the one for me.”

Uh, how gross! Yet another
egotist. How could I have been so dense? He continued, “I mean, I told everyone
we are going to the vamp dance together. You should smile. You are one lucky girl.”
He actually touched the dimple on my cheek in that moment. I was not smiling
when I spoke.

I brushed his hand away.

“Uh, how could you? You know
I’m practically in charge of prom and matchmaking is my hobby and…I can’t take
anyone. Besides, you seemed so into Hilary.”

Flynn laughed. “Only to impress
you. You and me – that’s hot. Me and Hilary? That’s not. Have you seen where
she lives? The car her dad drives?” Flynn shrugged and changed the subject, “So,
you coming to the Fangdango Dance Party with me or what?”

Fixing a serious social gaffe
is never impossible, is it?

“Flynn,” I whispered, trying to
see in him the man I’d thought he was just ten minutes ago, “I’m going with
myself – I’m in charge, remember?”

“Oh, yeah, right. So, change
the rules.”

“I can’t. You should totally
take Hills… she’s expecting you to ask her.”

“Are you crazy? Socially, Hilary
is a zero. Without you, babe, she’d be nobody. ”

I was taken aback.

I had no idea Flynn was such an
elitist person. Mr I think so Highly of
Myself I Make all Girls swoon. Arghh!
Flynn Elton was a snob, plain and simple. Anyone with real class would
never be a snob. Did my association with him make me the same?

Exasperated, I stomped my foot
and headed back to the changing rooms. After I got out of my clothes and into
my jeans, I dragged an unsuspecting Hilary out of there. We made quick
purchases of our chosen dresses (Hilary’s was pink and mine was blue) with
Daddy’s credit card – it was the least I could offer, and left the store. Flynn was still talking on speaker phone like
he was the most important person in the world.

Turns out he was talking to his
Dad.

“Hey,” he called out to me as I
was walking out the door, “I only asked you out because my Dad wants to do
business with your Dad – he told me to make friends with you so don’t think
you’re so special Miss Fancy Pants! I already have Keesha on direct dial… and
she’s way hotter than you. Plus, she puts out.”

Don’t you hate it when boys
who don’t get what they want feel the need to put you down and try to make you
feel worthless?

Miss Fancy Pants? He had to be kidding as well as insulting. It occurred
to me how wrong was I? Flynn might be
hot but he was not chivalrous in any way. He was not polite or even funny. He
was not respectful and he was definitely not kind. Suddenly he didn’t seem anything
like the man I thought I knew.

“What is he talking about?” Hilary
asked me as we walked along the pavement.

I had to hold back tears. I was
so frustrated, so stupidly socially inept. So… wrong. The only thing left to do
was to come clean.

I stopped walking and turned to
her on the pavement, “I’m so sorry Hilary.”

“What do you mean?”

“I’ve been so… misled.”

“Huh?”

“Did you send the letter to
Rafe?”

“I did what you told me to do.”

I shook my head and told her
the story.

“Flynn Elton is not who I
thought he was.”

I elaborated and Hilly sniffed
a little and wiped her eyes at the end.

Then, she did something
unexpected. Hilary smiled and gave me a hug. She was a true friend. A better
friend than I had been, even if I’d meant well.

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I write stories like movies. Legally Blonde inspired me to finish law school. I dream of caramel lattes in the morning and amazing locations in the afternoon:) My blog is filled with modern teen versions of classic novels (Jane Eyre, Wuthering Heights and Pride&Prejudice). I have some true originals in my top drawer.