This is quite a marvolous pic we have here and since this is my first Critique I hope this will be fair. Personally I think this is a great pic the shading here is quite impressive. But I know a few things that can be fixed if you don't mind. The legs on the chair could be a bit bigger to hold it up since they look so skinny. If her cutie mark could be visable that would be great because it looks like she has a black flank lol. xD There could be some lines on the tail so it won't look like she has one full hair for a tail. The lighting is just right as it looks it was shot by a camera. The details on Rarity is nearly perfect and it reminds me so much of the episode. Thank you for reading and I hope this was a fair and neat Critique for you. ^^

So this is my first critique. I am going to try to make this as fair as possible so please bare with me. First off I would like to say that the shading is excellent. Shading is really hard to do and you pulled that off really well, making this piece stand out and seem more life like. You were also able to pull off Rarity's curls well and I am impressed with that. Now the hoof above her body is a little bit too thin, it should be slightly wider. Rarity's back legs are too short and should be longer because her legs look like the size of a filly's legs. Also her flank is blank. I think you could have fit a tad bit of her cutie mark there. Otherwise, great piece! I think you did a really good job.