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This write is so tenderly beautiful it screams of love and desire and many of loves happy hours. Sharing a love no I have none but once in love I know I had won. Families all raised now and I all alone but I'm at peace with my self and have peace of mind I am not even depressed at some times Some say its lonely to live alone But my Six Siblings done mind when I call they always have time for me to say a few kind words Like I love your are you having a nice day I laugh and I smile as I sent them on there way to talk with their spouse who lives around the house. excellent Poem My Friend.

Posted 11 Months Ago

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11 Months Ago

You have written many kind & caring reviews for me, but this one tops the list! Always love it when .. read moreYou have written many kind & caring reviews for me, but this one tops the list! Always love it when my message resonates as you've showed me with your interesting share! Thanks a million times over for your kind reading attention & abundant sharing (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

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This write is so tenderly beautiful it screams of love and desire and many of loves happy hours. Sharing a love no I have none but once in love I know I had won. Families all raised now and I all alone but I'm at peace with my self and have peace of mind I am not even depressed at some times Some say its lonely to live alone But my Six Siblings done mind when I call they always have time for me to say a few kind words Like I love your are you having a nice day I laugh and I smile as I sent them on there way to talk with their spouse who lives around the house. excellent Poem My Friend.

Posted 11 Months Ago

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11 Months Ago

You have written many kind & caring reviews for me, but this one tops the list! Always love it when .. read moreYou have written many kind & caring reviews for me, but this one tops the list! Always love it when my message resonates as you've showed me with your interesting share! Thanks a million times over for your kind reading attention & abundant sharing (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

Some memories cannot never leave us.
"Echoes of his voice ever gentle on my mind
with past and present only loosely entwined
lyrical squiggles lure me into romance
as hungering harmony spurs spirits to dance."
I loved the above lines. When we have found perfect place and perfect people. Will be tattoos upon our heart and mind. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

11 Months Ago

If your sycamore starts to travel you might want to put that cork back in the wine bottle. (laughing) But I suppose your attention can travel to all the adventures coalescing there. I enjoyed the visit to your backyard. Hmm...that didn't sound right. Oh well....it's a reviewer's risk.

Posted 11 Months Ago

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11 Months Ago

The first line of your review would be a good opening line for a poem. That's the true heart of a po.. read moreThe first line of your review would be a good opening line for a poem. That's the true heart of a poet, when your everyday conversation goes lyrical & imaginative! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Impressively metaphorical and amazingly lovely. You bring all the senses to bear and enjoy. No cut and dry in your passions for all.

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11 Months Ago

Thank you most of all for saying "no cut & dry" -- this is the supreme compliment! (((HUGS))) Fondly.. read moreThank you most of all for saying "no cut & dry" -- this is the supreme compliment! (((HUGS))) Fondly Margie

11 Months Ago

Your words paint such a lovely picture. Not just of the sights, but the sounds that accompany them.
Thank you so much for sharing this beauty with us.

Take care - Dave

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11 Months Ago

I used to forget about sensory observations until I started on this website about 2 years ago . . . .. read moreI used to forget about sensory observations until I started on this website about 2 years ago . . . then I started learning to emulate the best writers here, who weave sensory ideas thru a message & I'm honored to have you mention this! *smile* (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

11 Months Ago

You are very deserving of whatever compliments that are given you. I always find it a pleasure to r.. read moreYou are very deserving of whatever compliments that are given you. I always find it a pleasure to read your rights.

I was just about to mention 'those autumn leaves' when I saw that Norman beat me to it. One of my favourite songs (which I play on my alto sax!). As you have shown so well nature is a rich vein for poets to mine and 'spark our imagination'. I suppose the seasons are a particularly strong metaphor for our human condition and I guess autumn may resonate with poets of our 'maturity'. This is a cracking poem you have written with lots of subtle and (to me) slightly opaque references - for example 'sycamore troubadour'. Great work!
All the best,
Alan

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11 Months Ago

Yes, I do like that song a lot & I'm impressed that you can play it on a sax! You have many hidden t.. read moreYes, I do like that song a lot & I'm impressed that you can play it on a sax! You have many hidden talents & I envy you! (((HUGS))) Thanks for your kind words & for slogging thru my subtleties (being old & feeble in mind, my fall fantasies are a little fumbled nowadays!) The sound of the breeze reminds me of a now-deceased best friend who had a telephone voice that made me laugh out loud with joy. Fondly, Margie

About your poems they are really perfect for me. I don't see any weak points. Very clear precise form. Also reader can develop own meaning there is some free stream in your words. For me very great style.

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11 Months Ago

Thank you very much for your kind words. I've been writing for 30+ years, so keep on practicing your.. read moreThank you very much for your kind words. I've been writing for 30+ years, so keep on practicing yourself, becuz you will get better & better too! *smile* Fondly, Margie

11 Months Ago

I writing about 20 years and on writers caffee i am about 5 years. I can see some progress on my poe.. read moreI writing about 20 years and on writers caffee i am about 5 years. I can see some progress on my poems during those 5 years. Yes you are right if we doing something quiet often we will became better. Thank you for hopeful words.

Here we have autumn personified for sure. Truly beautiful.
Oh' and by the way, it would seem yours are far bigger and more beautiful than mine Margie.....Neville

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11 Months Ago

Thanks so much for your kind comments (((HUGS))) . . . I'm just glad I'm not the guy living below th.. read moreThanks so much for your kind comments (((HUGS))) . . . I'm just glad I'm not the guy living below that tree, cuz he gets buried in leaves. I'm up on the bluff where I can just look across at tree-top level & enjoy the view without the fall-out! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

"The falling leaves drift by my window. Those falling leaves of red and gold"
Your poem, Margie, graphically brought the words of this old song back to me, as I watched our garden being virtually covered in Lime, Apple and Oak leaves as autumn is giving way to winter. With the lack of rain, the crackle underfoot creates its own autumn symphony, soon to be replaced by the rake's coda.

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11 Months Ago

If I had a citrus tree, I would be feeding those leaves to my bunnies, who enjoy them like crackers... read moreIf I had a citrus tree, I would be feeding those leaves to my bunnies, who enjoy them like crackers. I would love to have a Meyer Lemon, but I'm not always attentive to the constant battle of staving off the munching creatures of the wild . . . I don't want to spend a lot of time & money on a nice tree, just to have it be ravaged half the time. I've spend a fair number of months caring for my neighbor's fruit & nut trees, properly fenced in, but the critters still get the best of everything out here! *wink! wink!* Thanks for sharing the musical remembrance . . . I often write from some song that I've heard lately, so my words & music are entwined. Here's wishing you & I both some plentiful winter rains this year! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

11 Months Ago

I forgot to mention . . . the song you mention has always been a favorite & reminds me of days gone .. read moreI forgot to mention . . . the song you mention has always been a favorite & reminds me of days gone by when I romped the lonely hills by myself with my little dog *smile*