RSTL Tribune : Dickin it Right

Intro
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Alright people, the Mag is back for this week. Of course it’s a small one.
I’m going to ask now, that if anyone out there can write up an article
And send it to me, then I will put it in the Tribune. I don’t care
Who writes it or how many there are, they will all get put in. Just
Write on whatever you want to write about, long as its RSTL related in
some way. The league itself will resume at the end of this week.
So those of you still in the tourney who are in the league will be
required to write two verses for the league. People I would like to see this
Mag grow a little more in size, and I need your help with it. I’ll do
what I can in the spare time I have, but any help you all can offer
is greatly appreciated. Anyways, lets get on with this. G’Luck to
all competitors in the tourney.

The Dic Report
By: Dicenyaeye
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Wassup and welcome to the dic report. After a long break with a month
of recycling verses, I'm finally over the flu so I can write some shit
again in comfort.

We had way too many no shows, even though it's expected in the 1st
round. The people that seemed to be favors to win are the main ones
that didn't show I.e. Infinite, 4site, Mac, Dmetrius (Although Athiest
is dope too), Noib and Illweezy so that automatically slimmed the
competition down. Then some of our seasoned writers just didn't put
forth a true effort so this round was a disappointing one to say the
least, but there were a few rays of light in this abysmal week for the
tourney.

Maybe it's the flu season taking effect though because it surely had me
fucked up and overdosing on Theraflu, hot tottys and chicken soup for
hella long. But without any further delays...... Here's your top 3
Matches of the Week. If more people showed up, I would of did a top 5,
but not enough effort was put forth this round and that even includes
from me and Talent.

3. Tekneek -vs- Omega

A very interesting match of graphic events that shifted the lives of
both main characters. Some nice reads on both. But lets analyze our
writers first.

Omega, I've seen you in the previous weeks before the tournament started
and you have some skills that I would like to see elevate in this
league. As for this week, I wasn't feeling the fucking my daughter
content.... It's been done here be4 a few times, but at least ur focus
wasn't placed there too long. As it moved on, I was able to follow ur
content a little closer. It was a lot of self examination in it as u
reflected on what a horrible person u are, but not enough on the other
deadly sins u said uv done at the end. But ur persona did seem very
controlling as well as demented and that was nicely expressed in the
narration.

Tek has been an editor of both league's mags and has recently gotten his
2nd rstl title so he's on a comeback trail. He just quit modding the
rbl, but I guess this gives him more time to write. His focus seems to
be in solid story telling still as he shows his ability to give some
nicely structured verses this week. The hooker thing has been done to
death with more angles than an octagon, but still his portrayal was
cool. With the hooker being a teen that's seemably a nymphomaniac and
runs through some nba players, but the interesting twist at the end made
this one a lil more special. The girl is the bitch that kobe fucked
anally and tried to sue him. That shit had me dieing.

Peepers, I've some nice things about you and have read a few nice pieces
with clear vision and nice wording. Although I don't feel that this
represented your highest qualities, I did like this piece more than my
vote would indicate. The introduction was nice and I liked it, but as I
stated in my vote, your verse didn't open up enough in the body of it's
content. Some nice metaphors and cool imagery though. The first stanza
didn't seem to follow the intro at all though. Starting with 'savage
baggage' then just saying what he was hadn't done. Too many lines
wasted there although I thought some of the metaphors throughout and
that added a lot of color and creative vision. It picked up nicely
after the first stanza and became a much smoother piece to read. The
start was just to important to waste.

Yassa Arabfat, you have proven to be a great writer whenever you choose
to be and I'm happy you're choosing to be right now. Too many people
are unaware of your true skills because your effortless in most of
verses and even then, you can write some good shit. When you put your
time in a piece it's nicely executed. This was one of those moments and
it's nice to see someone else get a little perverted with details into a
sexual affair of a wife, a maid and the gardener. Flow was on point
with multies and that's a plus, but what opened this up was the nice
details and the personality of a video camera protecting his
master/owner. The little surprises of sexual perversions kept it
interesting throughout as well and the ending was dope. She died like
she lived; getting fucked at the finish. Great read man.

Cereal is a very polished writer with some twisted visions. His imagery
is usually painted nicely within his descriptive wording and strong
writer's voice. This week he came with these elements as a blind man
who is finally allowed to see just to catch his wife cheating on him.
Well told with some nice sporadic flows as well to follow a little
easier. Some of the scene details you used were dictated nicely.
Specifically I liked the way you had the blind guy describing seeing his
wife for the first time as she's fucking this other guy. Your word
choice in this sequence was very elegant, which struck me as odd because
it's not an elegant subject matter, but I liked that about it as well.
I did want to hear more descriptions of him murdering the wife, but even
without that, this was a dope read.

Choppa aka Trapazoidal took a brief leave of absence after stating his
boredom of text leagues and giving his old name with several points and
over 20k posts to Demik of people, who has the most aliases on this site
already. His modded for the rbl and written some great mags there as
well as modding the rstl and assisting this league so needless to say
his participation in the leagues were missed. He returns with fury
though and is probably the most worthy champion caliber writer without a
title yet with Yo Momma and Formal falling right behind him. This week
he let CK pick the topic he used and still flourished in his writing
with great flow and excellent narration as he's also blind, but begging
on the street before he's killed and that's how he gets to see the
light. Nice ending man and welcome back.