Hey X!! I've been waiting for more ever since i firstcame onto this site which was practically a century ago! now are u gonna write more or am I destined to a damned life of twiddling my thumbs and staring at the monitor??the key board for cryin out aloud .NOW!NOW!NOW!

Reviewer: narcissa

Date: 2003-05-27

Reviewid: 33921

Chapter: 1

aww,,,,so sad!! poor ginny, but i kno she will make friends soon. loved the r/h, especially since its not so fluffy anf gushy. great!

Reviewer: Laqueta

Date: 2003-02-07

Reviewid: 19400

Chapter: 1

I thought that this was a very good piece, with Ginny very nicely in character. This [roved to be a very interesting read, and parts of it were especially touchin, for instance, Ron letting Hermione win. I also thought the part where the friends were celebrating was very well-written as it was very poignant. The ending was good as you started it off in a somewhat dark way, but ended it with hope.

Excellent!

Reviewer: Marsha

Date: 2003-02-02

Reviewid: 18734

Chapter: 1

Ok, I wasn't going to review this because I really have to pee, but I just had to tell you how much of a heart-wrenchingly emotionally fantastically great story this is. I was tearing up at the end. It's amazingly in-character, and I hope you can take this review seriously after that first sentence... :)-Marsha

Reviewer: Lilac

Date: 2002-12-28

Reviewid: 14214

Chapter: 1

Very good! What a touching moment to witness. Glad to see Ron is cottoning on!

I liked the part where Ginny was imagining sitting by the fire. Very discriptive!

Keep up the excellent writing!

Reviewer: Sunsethill

Date: 2002-12-27

Reviewid: 14123

Chapter: 1

I liked how you started this somewhat pensive, but ended on a more hopeful note. I loved how Ginny assumed Ron would never catch on and learn to woo Hermione, and then she watches as he actually does what she was thinking. I also enjoyed the little peak at how Harry's feelings may be changing.

My main area of concern is that your style is a little involved. I think your story would be more forceful if the prose were simplified some. Also, it seems to me that a few times you slightly missed the exact word you wanted. For example, in your story blurb, you said that Ginny makes some important "revelations." I think what you meant, from the sentence structure, is "realizations." Ginny doesn't really "reveal" anything to anyone in her internal monologue.

Keep up the good work. Hope you have more where this came from.

Reviewer: Jennifer

Date: 2002-12-27

Reviewid: 14108

Chapter: 1

I didnt get a chance to read through this hole story. But i did skim it all the way to the end. I wanted to let you know, you are a fantastic writer and i hope to see more stories come from ypou.

Reviewer: Lourdes

Date: 2002-12-27

Reviewid: 14097

Chapter: 1

Fantastic monologue. Well written. Thought provoking. WELL done.

Reviewer: Becky

Date: 2002-12-27

Reviewid: 14079

Chapter: 1

What a great moment in Ginny's head. (Though I think Harry will see her, eventually.)

Her perception of Ron and Hermione is great - and it was so wonderful when he let her win...

I really think you've captured Ginny, here.

Reviewer: Catherine

Date: 2002-12-27

Reviewid: 14074

Chapter: 1

Ah! I love the part: “I let her win, mate,” he whispers with his eyes full of Ron-Weasley-genuine-honesty.How cute! I'm crying with joy here!

Reviewer: boo_the_hamster

Date: 2002-12-27

Reviewid: 14071

Chapter: 1

Interesting take on the whole situation - happier than one expects for a 'dark' vignette, more black than a typical 'happy' story. Well done Ginny internal monologue, too.

Be delighted to see you write more!

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