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Thursday, July 14, 2016

Attacks anyone and everyone

FOUND ONLINE:But this is the same Trump that spent weeks yelling at a Latino judge,
complaining about the Pope, and attacks anyone and everyone thatlooks
at him cross-eyed.If you were using parallel construction, you'd change attacks anyone to attacking anyone. Also, I'd change that to who in the sentence; the writer is talking about people. Finally, I'd change looks to looked because we're not talking in present tense here.But this is the same Trump who spent weeks yelling at a Latino judge,
complaining about the Pope, and attacking anyone and everyone wholooked
at him cross-eyed.