I wouldnt exactly consider that a 'poem' technically, it seems to have sentence like structure..
Anyway, as for the poem's theme, oh I do get the feeling.. That is what Christmas really is SUPPOSED to be about but nowadys it has really been so largely commercialised I think many of us have forgotten..
Lovely little piece, I think it will act as a reminder to many Christians as well as non-Christians out there..
Great job on it..
It was a pleasure to read..

A beautiful piece. Well-written, and I liked the format. Christmas seems to be so much about commercialism now, so it was really refreshing to read about the true meaning of Christmas and why we celebrate it in the first place. Even if Christmas is now over ;) Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

You go girl! I would love if we could chat but my mom still hasn't got up my screen name. I really want to tell you about some of the reviews I've been getting. *hint hint*. You've been on a roll! Keep up the terific work!
QR

THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKIN' ABOUT! lol. im a Christian too and it is very nice to hear someone finally come out with the true meaning of Christmas. well, i say im christian, but i know im a bit on the backslidden tip. please review me if and when you can. i like the poem!
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As nice as it would be if those who accepted Christ weren't hypocrites, all you've really proved with this poem is that C is for Condescending. That said, the format is interesting, and the poem isn't terrible. Certainly a cut above much of what's posted here.