FBI_B1TCH: Ikr. Usually, I have no problem about the MC being lowkey in cultivation novels and such because it could attract a lot of unwanted attention if their true capabilities were known, but this is f*cking cooking were talking about, not cultivation lol. I don't see a good reason for him being so lowkey (don't give me that doesn't want to be famous bullsh*t, he is planning to build a 100 floor skyscraper),

GGMissFortune: trash "translation".... you give MC full Thor (odinforce) and Superman powers + several centuries of absorbing sunlight in alternate world but plot is still exactly the same...
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Democratis: Ok, so apparently it gets better later on in the novel, but the amount of tainted chromosomes leaking out of the MC at the beginning is too much, like first of all, he is saying "oh, I gotta be sneaky and quiet to protect my identity", then he makes a big commotion right at his home and beats the $hit out of one of his neighbors (who is much bigger and stronger then him) with pure force right in front of his other neighbors who came to watch the fight. Not sure how else that scene was supposed to be quiet, he just flagged to the world where he lives. Then he goes out and spends a large portion of his savings on new clothes to better hide his identity, before he goes out and just kills someone flat out, then he wimps out after that, and conpletely expises his identity, abilities, and even where he fuking lives to the first person he saved, because he is horny and she is hot. Supposedly it gets better, but to get to the "good part" you are going to have to dive deep through the garbage dump this novel calls a beginning to get there. The chapters have been edited which makes it readible (tho the humor is so forced its ridiculous, and there are still quite a few jokes and other comments that dont really make sense), and the updates come out often. The ideas behind this story are good, and with the world-building from the marvel universe, this novel HAD a lot of potential. The trashy beginning has ruined it. A good representation of this novel is that game no mans sky. Worst beginning possible, but then slowly gets better (still quite bad, but not horrible). Author bro, if you fixed the intro/beginning, you would have a golden story on your hands.

price_michel: The creation of this character has been one of the worst that I have had the misfortune of reading it is a shame that the author thought this was acceptable and I'm not being rude here but author I think you should go research asthma

AlmightyLord5th: This story is nearly below average in everything. The grammar is abysmal, the characters aren't fleshed out ( but theirs only 25 as im currently writing this review, so it may change), and everything else seems *******ish. And listen guy, it's okay if you want to include dark themes like r@pe into your story but it has to make sense. Why after only 30 minutes of an apocalypse is rape already happening? Literally everyone would be trying to procure a safe haven and some supplies, nobody would even have the feckin time.

The character interactions are cringy and the MC is already acting like an edge boi. Slow your roll man, take a deep breath and replan your story.

It’s not lacking chapters. It’s not the decent grammar or the general narrative style.

It’s the overuse of clichés, emphasis of “plans,” and useless characters. Also, the dreadful POV shifts.

For clichés, we got MC Mark, a “badass” anti-hero/hero mix. We got a random mother and daughter burden for escort. Then there’s the strong and uncooperative love interest with her friend. Oh, and I almost forgot! There’s the unnamed male employee as the servant.

Some bus is in an accident and then zombies come out from it. It’s the apocalypse and somehow, the zombies have hacks that allow them to bypass crowds and kill any good guy with a gun. No police or guards! No phone service, so you can’t call for help!

That means everyone is getting slaughtered! MC steps in to lead everyone to safety! Oh no! Someone needs help, so he goes to save them with his badass one-handed shotgunning skills! He got it from a zombie guard that happened to attack him!

But he can’t just save them without showing how all other guys are trash! A mom gets grabbed by dying man! How she is still alive when running from zombies with her daughter? Who cares! Love interest shows she can fight, but MC saves her because he must be better!

Oh? A rich fatty goes crazy and holds everyone hostage in his base? He locks out MC and kills someone with a gun? Guess it’s detour time for MC to go save them because they’re helpless without him! No need to try and reason with the fatty.

Don’t worry! It’s all according to “plan!” MC loots a place and makes the path secure. Oh, a detour to the detour? Oh, it’s time to save a new love interest? Oh, we have to get the hero a heroic entrance instead of assassinating the gangsters. We’ll have the MC talk to the Boss as he r*pes the girl because this is the “plan!”

What!? The Boss has a gun? No worries! MC knew and wanted to make sure by talking to the gangsters! He just wanted to get a better shot. What? He only shot off the Boss’s arm and kicked a gangster’s balls? What “plan” is this?

How will he survive now? Oh? It was instant KO? As expected of MC, the other gangsters run away since they luckily don’t have guns. Now the MC is the hero. Let’s have TWO chapters of FLASHBACKS to show this pampered and beautiful love interest having a hard time with her family, friends, and fiancé.

Don’t worry! Literally disarming the Boss was part of the plan! He’s bleeding out, but don’t worry! MC must have a moment with his love interest! Oh, the Boss died? Time for a new “plan!” The fleeing gangsters attracted the zombies away? As expected of the “plan!” They never could have lured them back! Even if they did, MC had “plans” for it!

Ignore that his people had to kill zombies attracted by his gunshot! Hey, that mom can come over here and clean up the love interest. That gangster Boss r*ped her all over just by himself! She’s coated in his slimy seed!

Great! We’re ready to move on! Ignore how the daughter keeps up. Man-servant has been carrying the injured mother the whole time!

Do you understand how tedious and discomforting that is? It’s a droll format. It relies on cliché encounters to build up a harem team because the author doesn’t want to have MC alone. We go back and forth between characters only so the MC is no longer the focus of the story.

It’s fractured but whole, like a fractured butt hole. Incomplete, but complete; empty, but full.

gundamNora: ya I don't understand how shiro isn't at least lvl 42+ even with exp sharing with yin because this literally makes no sense when she leveled so much in soloing a lvl 40 dungeon but now that's its in a lvl 50 dungeon she barely level while the yin does???????????????????

BrabbitX: There is no way shiro only got 1 lvl while killing armies for 5 days. they were lvl 50 monsters. even if she is lvl 38... thats still 12lvl difference and she should get huge amounts of exp because she pretty much solo them. compared to her party members who got 4-5 levels (even if they were lower leveled) they still got help from the whole group and were only killing the strugglers. it just doesn't add up.
If you really don't want shiro to be way higher level than her party members (which is clear by how bs the EXP seems to work) have it so shiro needs like 5x the exp of humans or something like that, i just hate the BS and aritifical level restriction. Btw love the novel and keep up the good work.

cultivating_neet: makes sense to me that the author has an actual reason for polygamy in this anime world because since when have you seen an anime filled with beautiful women have an equal amount of men lol

ErozothDraeor: This test was not very thought out by the author, just some stupid made up test with no logic. He an earth realm fighting thousands of emperor level enemies. No one, and I mean NO ONE in that universe is capable of that in the same level and situation and you try to make us believe the white tiger made the test with expectation someone will pass it? By no one I also mean the white tiger itself, why take an inheritance of someone that is not as strong as you in potential??? Just to make it "hard" (like he could actually fail) you made it a ludicrous test.
(personally i dont really see why you even introduced the white tiger. It's a change completely not related to the original and at best it will be at the same level as the dragons which Tatsuya looked down on but for some reason he wants the White Tiger??? This seems more like a case of the author thinking its cooler so it was made up).

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