is my idea for a redeevlopment of an existing area at Alton Towers, Staffordshire, UK. this is for my graphics project in my last year at college (my previous year i designed a roler coaster for Alton Towers).

I twould benefit me greatly if you could please give me some consie and consturctive comments and opinions to help with my development ( and hopefully my grade!!)

If there are any proffesionals in the business who comment please tell me your job role and perhaps leave an e-mail address.