Steam name: DJ SUNN-3Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:25158839Age: 14How long have you been roleplaying?: About four years now overall.

20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/it A rainy downpour begins in the midst of the plaza, starting with only a few light trickles of rain but quickly picking up./me notices it after a moment, taking a few steps back and stepping under a low overhang to avoid the bad weather./it A single citizen jogs down the pathway, seemingly not paying much attention to anything, heading to the 45th Apartments./me glances at him but pays him no mind for now, continuing to stare around the plaza./it Suddenly, a gasp escapes from the citizen as he slams face-first into the pavement, having slipped forward on the wet path./me only continues to ignore him, directions for another unit squawking through her radio. She of course ignores that too, seeing as it wasn't directed to her./it The citizen slowly clambers to his knees, standing up and weakly dusting himself off. "D-damnit, that hurt..."/me stares over at the citizen, taking a few steps forward and looking down at him. "Citizen. Stop that. Do you want an audio violation?"/it He shakes his head, getting to his feet. "N-no sir, terribly sorry..."/me lets out a grumble, annoyed. "That's "ma'am", citizen."/it The citizen nods in understanding, keeping his head low. "M-ma'am, then. Sorry for..."/me interrupts him. "No apologies necessary, just remember in the future."/it The citizen nods weakly once again, rubbing a sore spot on the top of his head. "H-heh... okay..."/me looks off to the side, taking a few steps to the side to return to her previous position underneath the overhang./it The man who had slipped holds out a hand, saying, "Wait!"/me glances back at him over her shoulder. "What is it, citizen."/it The citizen hangs his head again. "I, uh, had quite a fall... may be bleeding... can I get some bandages...?"/me thinks it over for a moment, noticing a spot or two of dull crimson on the man's forehead, and nods after a few seconds. "Affirmative."/it The man sighs in relief, smiling. "Thank you, si-ma'am."/me ignores him, drawing a hand behind herself to a pouch on the back of her belt. She pulls a roll of bandage tape out from it and rips off a portion, handing it to the man. "Wrap it tightly around the wound. Wash it beforehand."/it The citizen smiles and takes it, nodding and turning away. "Y-yes ma'am, thank you ma'am, I'll be on my way now..." He sets off toward the 45th Apartments, walking instead of running this time./me chuckles to herself and walks back to under the overhang, continuing to stare around the plaza.

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Sunny Dodgerson was born in 1987, to a family of an unemployed father and a mother who had an occupation as a nurse. She would spend a lot of time with them, though mostly her mother, which was likely where a lot of her current personality and such came from. She had alright grades in school, and overall lived an average life until, obviously, the Seven Hour War. The same event that would undoubtedly change the lives of every person on Earth. Despite the event being, true to it's name, only seven hours, it had disastrous results. Both of her parents were killed due to refusing to obey the Combine. All in all, she was eventually relocated to City 18, only days or so ago from now.

mrloco100: Your /me's had no speech whatsoever, and at some parts the grammar made it make no sense. Your backstory seemed like the minimum, and didn't describe your childhood, etc. And when you say 'I was a metro police on another server' that's supposed to be IC, and you can't switch servers irl. Also I notice you not using capitals and puncuation in game, but fix your app, make it look shiny, and it should be good to go! DENIED

Sunnywings: I like the roleplay examples, and they were good, but your backstory wasn't too great. It really explained little about you, half of it doing with the seven hour war. The roleplay was good and the backstory wasn't that good. Just re-post with a few changes to the backstory and hopefully you'll be the new RCT! DENIED.

Steam name: CelticsSteam ID: Steam_0:0:52853344Age:12How long have you been roleplaying?: 8 months

20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)?:/me wakes up to the comfort of his apartment./it The room is silent./me hears a man and a women fighting.The man yells," Get out of my apartment you bitch!"The women yells," This is my apartment too!"/me opens his door and runs as fast as he can to find a combine as he know the man will beat the women./me runs up to an 0fc.I say," Sir, ofc, there are 2 people fighting in an apartment and i know the man is about to kill the women!"The ofc says," What room number?"I say," Room no7! We need to hurry, this is a very violent man were talking about!"/it As we rush to the room, you hear continuous yelling.The women yells," Help! auhghhh. Someone help me! He's trying to..."/it The women's voice drifts off into a dead silence./it The sound of bones snapping ends the silence.The ofc yells," Open up! Now!"/it There is still silenceThe ofc yells again," Open the fuck up, NOW! FINAL WARNING!"/it The ofc prepares a breaching charge./it He motions me to back up.He yells," Inject!"/It we rush into the room as he is attempting to drag the body into the bathroom.The ofc yells," Freeze! Citizen.. wall, NOW!"/it The man attempts to make a run for it pushing us aside.The ofc rolls a 85Jim rolls an 43/It the ofc trips the man, sending him tumbling to the floor./it He jumps on Jim's back and put a tight tie around his wrist.The ofc says," How can you explain this dead body?"Jim says," I'm sorry... i dont know."/It The combine laughs at the man.The ofc says," Thanks for reporting this, -8 points."I say," Thankyou sir."The combine radios in," Bringing a man in for an amputation, he murdered a women."

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Childhood-Marc Kurr was born on August 7th. When he was born, his parents didn't know if they would be able to keep him. His parents were only 18 at the time. His dad had to keep 3 jobs to afford to support his family while Marc's mom was away in college. When Marc turned 6, he wanted to start playing sports. Everyday after school he went over to his friend's house and played basketball on his hoop. When he came home one day he asked his parents if they could pay for him to play in a league. At the time they coulnd't afford to pay for him to play. When Marc turned 7, they said that they would pay for him to play in a league next time basketball season came around. From that day on, Marc practiced so hard every day to become the best player. He was so determined to become the best. One day his dad didn't have to work so he took him to the park. He then realised how much talent his boy actually had. Marc's parents were so busy so they weren't able to take him to games, so his uncle did. Teenage years- When Marc was 14, he joined his school's basketball team. The same day as that, they found out his dad had cancer. He had to quit his team and get a job to help pay for his treatment for his dad. His mom dropped out of college and got a job too also help pay for his medication. When Marc turned 15, his father passed away. He and his mom were so upset but Marc stayed strong. He had to be strong for his mother so they could get through it. Marc's mother went into a deep state of depression. One day after Marc came home from school, he found his mom crying in her bedroom. She said that she didn't know what she was going to do without her husband. Marc continued to stay strong. Everything eventually got a little better, and while it was, his mother was on some medication. One day when he came home from school, he yelled," Mom? Mom? Momm...." His mom was dead, laying there on the floor with about 6 different empty pill bottles laying there with her. He called 911, but it was too late, she was already gone. Marc eventually moved in with his grandparents. He always told himself, things could still be worse. Things again started to get better as he was on his JV basketball team. He was working hard, and he always told him self, im doing this for them, my parents, the ones who i know are up there right now looking down on me saying how proud they are. The invasion-Marc was only 18, about to move out to college, still living with his grandparents. He woke up one day and turned on the tv. There was man saying the same thing on every station," The invasion is starting. The invasion is starting. The invasion is starting" He didn't udnerstand what was going on. He then heard a lous noise come from downstairs. He rushed down stairs to see his grandparents laying dead, with two men standing above their bodys wearing weird uniforms. He tried to make a run for it but was tackled and then knocked out.Present day-Marc woke up in his apartment wearing a blue uniform that said," c18 property" on it.He then had realised what had gone on. He was walking down the streets and he noticed that there was a poster on the wall, it read, " Come down to the Civil Protection recruitment office for you FREE application." He then quickly walked down to the office asking what it was about. After hearing what it was about, he quickly grabbed an application and rushed back to his apartment room. He then spent many hours filling out the app and then sent it back in. He was so determined to join the cca because he wanted to become something more then just a citizen. Two days later he got a notification telling him he had been accepted. He rushed down to the office and prepared for training. He was going to be more then the a regular Citizen in a uniform, he was going to be the greatest Combine to ever live, and he was ready.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:A great technology wiz. Very strong and athletic. Knows his way around bussiness as he is a great salesmen. Knows a little about some medicines.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:Negative.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a wholeNo.

Steam name:febidoman10Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:18485879Age:23How long have you been roleplaying?:2 months ½ on different servers.

20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase):/me Patrols around corner./me Looks around the area checking for disturbance./it The air is silent and a few citizens walk past./me Spots a particular citizen./it He walks toward me.Citizen Says: Hey you combine Bitch.I say: What did you say?Citizen Says: You heard me./me Flicks on stunstick, Firmly holding the grip, turning it to high voltage.I say: Get on the wall.Citizen Says: Why?I say: Get... On the wall.Citizen Says: Fine you combine BitchI Say: ApplyCitizen Says: I'm not telling you crap.I Say: I said, Apply!Citizen Says: I did absolutely nothing.. I will kill you asshole!!I say: Hmm. Unfit for the civil community/me Attempts to knock out Citizen with Stunstick./I roll 51 out of 100./Citizen Rolls 49 out of 100./me Knocks out citizen and Ties him up./me Walks to nexus and tosses citizen in cell for 2 cycles of detainment./me locks Combine lock and walks off to patrol more.

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and shouldreflect your skills):(Child years)Mom? Mom, where are you? *He walked down the stairs...and his mother was killed by his maniac father. He moved to America shortly after.(Nothing left to tell here)(Teenage years)*At his house, he was adopted by a god awfully mean person who's name is Lionel Bartigastry*Uh... When can I eat? *Lionel*: Shut up! I won't feed you! *Lionel punches Kaile in the face* Agh!!! I'm gonna run away you mindless asshole! *Lionel*: Don't talk to me like that! *Kaile runs like the wind out the door, mindlessly cussing Lionel out.*I'll cut your throat, old little fucker! *A few hours later* *He gasps after running too long..* I'll fuck you up some day old man..*He gets some money from a few strangers, willing to help him out. He buys a burgerfrom McDonald's* *Once again, nothing left to tell here*

(Adulthood)

*He's watching TV when all the lights go out. The TV still works.*My god... It's a bloodbath between these... guys with gas masks and the US army...*He runs to look outside* Even more gas masked men are out here... patrolling the streets? God I'm confused.. CP: Get inside! The war is in progress!*7 hours later, Kaile is transfered to a place called... City 18* Hmm... these Civil Protection aren't half bad....

Me: Wow.... these guys are awesome...I think I'll apply later, but it's curfew!*He walks to his apartment, then goes to bed**He wakes up, and runs to a Civil Protection unit*

Sir, can I apply for Civil Protection? CP: Hmm... They are open right now.. Come on!*We walk into the nexus, and he gives me some Breen's water slowly forget about what the nexus looked like. The CP asks me a series of questions and gives me a paper with a format. He fills it out and gives it to him... and waits for approval or denial.

Steam name: mrloco87Steam ID: steam_0 : 0 :49381279Age:13 and a halfHow long have you been roleplaying?:about 11 months of serious roleplay on different servers.

20 lines of roleplay example:

/me I reach my arm up to grab an object up uon a high shelf./me I knock over object and notice it is just a small can./me I go outside to put the empty can in the trashcan./it The clouds start to become grey and rain starts to fall on my jumpsuit./me I run back into my apartment./me I Enter my room slumped over looking exausted./me I sit down to catch breath "Wow I'm exausted./me I get up and checks window ./me I sigh after I notice the rain is still pouring./me I hear talking downstairs./me I walk down the stairwell to investigate./me I see two men yelling at eachother./me I ask "Why are you yelling at eachother?"/it One of the men gives a depressing stare and I leave without saying anything else./me I yell "Whats going on?!"/it Alarms sound and everyone is startled by the combine rushing into the building./me I press against the wall ready for inspection./it The officer pats me down then announces that I am cleaned./it The citizens that were brought for inspection walk back into their apartments, relieved that the inspection is over./me I walk outside to the benches and sits down on an empty seat.

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): I was born in the city of New York with my parents and two brothers and three pets. I had many friends. I was a curious child and it usually got me into trouble. I lived in a nice middle class family.I did well in school but I never went to college. I spent my adult life working at a convenience store in New York. Hoping a better job, I was living alone in a small cluttered studio apartment. when I heard about the 7 hour war I headed to the nearest evacuation zone where the military would pick people up. I spent an entire day at a military camp until the combine captured and relocated us to city 45. I spent a few months there but I left to city 18 because I thought my life would be better there. when I got there I was suprised at the wreckage from the war. I started to walk around then I went to buy an apartment and I have been living here ever since. I decided to become a rebel and help stop the Combine but I ended up in detainment too much. So I deciced that I would become a loyalist and befriend the Combine.

Steam name: Chris10023Steam ID: 0:0:42596170Age: 11how long have you been roleplaying?: Since I got Garry's mod on 6-11-2012. I have been of this server for the few months and have been constantly getting better.

20 lines of role-play examples, using /it and /me. (E.g.: /it the citizen runs through the checkpoint /I give chase)

/me walks up to a citizen in the ApartmentsCCA-CORE-05.04214 says "Ha-ha Pick up that can."/it the citizen doesn't respondCCA-CORE-05.04214 says "Final warning."/it The citizen picks up the canCCA-CORE-05.04214 says "Put it in the trash can"/it The citizen puts it in the trash canCCA-CORE-05.04214 says " ha-ha"CCA-CORE-05.04214 says "Ok you can go"/me patrols down a street with a stun stick firmly in hand/it At the end of the street there is a man attempting to get into D6/me reports in to base on the citizen/me walks up to the citizen/it The citizen continues to try and open the gateCCA-CORE-05.04214 says "Move away"/it The citizen doesn't move/roll*CCA-CORE-05.04214 rolls 50 out of 100**Citizen rolls 40 out of 100*/me firmly hits citizen with stun stick/it the citizen falls to the ground unconscious/me drags citizen to a cell in the nexus/me walks back to courtyard and stands guard at the nexus gate/it a citizen walks up and gets in my faceCCA-Core-05.04214 says “Move back right now”/it the citizen moves back/it the citizen pulls a gun/me pulls mine and fires/it the citizen’s lifeless body falls to the ground

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc. and should reflect your skills):

I grew up in Minnesota without parents or any known relatives, so I was raised by neighbor who wasn’t very kind to me. I was always a gifted runner, because I was always running from bullies who wanted my lunch money because I had no parents. It was there that I became someone who wanted to uphold civil behavior; I beat up the bullies who were trying to take my lunch money and reported them to the teacher. I later was moved to the area that would become City 18 before the Seven Hour War with the Combine when I was an adult, which was a safer location than the slums where I was surviving previously. I then worked as a police officer for a short time, apprehending many criminals. When the Seven Hour War began, I did not participate in the fighting, so when the war ended I was now located in City 18. I have always looked up to the CP officers as role models, cause they were like part of a family I had never had. I have always had a sense for civil behavior because I was tired of seeing bad uncivilized people get away with things that they shouldn’t have, and always wanted to join the CCA since the occupation begun. My skills are pretty average, except for my speed, I am good with that. I am an obedient, trustworthy, and honorable man who follows orders to the letter, never disrespecting my superiors.

Steam name: mrloco87Steam ID: steam_0 : 0 :49381279Age:13 and a halfHow long have you been roleplaying?:about one year of serious roleplay on different servers.

20 lines of roleplay example:

/me I reach my arm up to grab an object up uon a high shelf./me I knock over object and notice it is just a small can./me I go outside to put the empty can in the trashcan./it The clouds start to become grey and rain starts to fall on my jumpsuit./me I run back into my apartment./it An overwatch unit patrols the streets looking for troublemakers./me I sit down in my house to catch breath "Wow I'm exausted./me I get up and checks window ./me I sigh after I notice the rain is still pouring./me I hear talking downstairs./me I walk down the stairwell to investigate./me I see two men yelling at eachother./me I try to break up the fight!"/roll Karl Stevens rolls a 35/it the man rolls a 56/it One of the men push me back./it Alarms sound and The Combine rush into the building for inspection./it I press against the wall while the officer pats me down then announces that I am cleaned./it The citizens that were brought for inspection walk back into their apartments, relieved that the inspection is over./me I walk outside to the benches and sits down on an empty seat.

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): I was born in the city of New York with my parents and two brothers and three pets. I had many friends. I was a curious child and it usually got me into trouble. I lived in a nice middle class family.I did well in school but I never went to college. I spent my adult life working at a convenience store in New York. Hoping a better job, I was living alone in a small cluttered studio apartment. when I heard about the 7 hour war I headed to the nearest evacuation zone where the military would pick people up. I spent an entire day at a military camp until the combine found us. Some people tried to run but they were killed. After they captured us I went to city 18 because I thought my life would be better there. when I got there I was suprised at the wreckage from the war. I started to walk around then I went to buy an apartment and I have been living here ever since. So then I deciced that I would become a loyalist and befriend the Combine. Ever since then i have been helping the combine and fellow my citizens.

Steam name: CelticsSteam ID: Steam_0:0:52853344Age:11 (By mistake in recent application I put 12)How long have you been roleplaying?: 8 months

20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)?: I role play as unit 04-26211 in this example

/me awakes to the sound of a bio-signal "Lost bio-signal for Protection Team unit"/me rolls out of bed and slides on his Kevlar and patrol boots/it The radio starts flooding with radio chatter from other units/radio Unit 26211 moving to hard point!/radio This is OfC 23156, necrotics are flooding the district 6 fence. All units report ASAP/it Gunfire and explosions increase in volume as you step outside the nexus/radio This unit 67235! 11-99 Officer needs help! *Bio Signal Lost*/me climbs onto the hard pointYou Say: Sir, Awaiting further instructions!OfC says: Unit! Move to the center of the plaza and assist the helix while he gets the wounded out!You say: Yes, Sir!/me runs to the center of plaza and flicks the safety off the 9mm/it Several zombies swarm the wounded and kill several/me opens fire on the zombies aiming for the headcrabs/me fires several rounds and many infected drop to the ground/it The radio is flooded with calls for overwatch to arrive/me hears the footsteps and equipment of a entire squad on OTA soldiers/it The overwatch open fire into the crowd of infected quickly dispatching all of them/radio Great work! All units RIPCORD and re-arm, we are going to do a entire sweep on district 6 to stop the outbreak/me runs to the nexus armory and restocks on ammo and supplies/me then makes haste to the hardpoint and regroups with his commanding officer/it The units make their way to the district 6 but a black headcrab leaps onto you/me falls over trying to remove it from his helmet/it The OfC kicks the headcrab off your mask and helps you upOfC says: Unit head to the helix bay and get the wounds checked!You say: Yes, Sir/me you sprint to the nexus once more holding onto your mask/it You make it to the helix bay and get patched up by the helix/it You wounds are treated and the remaining units returnOfC says: Good job units, head to the barracks get some rest.

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Childhood-Marc Kurr was born on August 7th. When he was born, his parents didn't know if they would be able to keep him. His parents were only 18 at the time. His dad had to keep 3 jobs to afford to support his family while Marc's mom was away in college. When Marc turned 6, he wanted to start playing sports. Everyday after school he went over to his friend's house and played basketball on his hoop. When he came home one day he asked his parents if they could pay for him to play in a league. At the time they coulnd't afford to pay for him to play. When Marc turned 7, they said that they would pay for him to play in a league next time basketball season came around. From that day on, Marc practiced so hard every day to become the best player. He was so determined to become the best. One day his dad didn't have to work so he took him to the park. He then realised how much talent his boy actually had. Marc's parents were so busy so they weren't able to take him to games, so his uncle did. Teenage years- When Marc was 14,he had a giant cat. He also joined his school's basketball team. The same day as that, they found out his dad also had a giant cat. He had to quit his team and get a job to help pay for his treatment for his dad. His mom dropped out of college and got a job too also help pay for his medication. When Marc turned 15, his father passed away. He and his mom were so upset but Marc stayed strong. He had to be strong for his mother so they could get through it. Marc's mother went into a deep state of depression. One day after Marc came home from school, he found his mom crying in her bedroom. She said that she didn't know what she was going to do without her husband. Marc continued to stay strong. Everything eventually got a little better, and while it was, his mother was on some medication. One day when he came home from school, he yelled," Mom? Mom? Momm...." His mom was dead, laying there on the floor with about 6 different empty pill bottles laying there with her. He called 911, but it was too late, she was already gone. Marc eventually moved in with his grandparents. He always told himself, things could still be worse. Things again started to get better as he was on his JV basketball team. He was working hard, and he always told him self, im doing this for them, my parents, the ones who i know are up there right now looking down on me saying how proud they are. The invasion-Marc was only 18, about to move out to college, still living with his grandparents. He woke up one day and turned on the tv. There was man saying the same thing on every station," The invasion is starting. The invasion is starting. The invasion is starting" He didn't udnerstand what was going on. He then heard a lous noise come from downstairs. He rushed down stairs to see his grandparents laying dead, with two men standing above their bodys wearing weird uniforms. He tried to make a run for it but was tackled and then knocked out.Present day-Marc woke up in his apartment wearing a blue uniform that said," c18 property" on it.He then had realised what had gone on. He was walking down the streets and he noticed that there was a poster on the wall, it read, " Come down to the Civil Protection recruitment office for you FREE application." He then quickly walked down to the office asking what it was about. After hearing what it was about, he quickly grabbed an application and rushed back to his apartment room. He then spent many hours filling out the app and then sent it back in. He was so determined to join the cca because he wanted to become something more then just a citizen. Two days later he got a notification telling him he had been accepted. He rushed down to the office and prepared for training. He was going to be more then the a regular Citizen in a uniform, he was going to be the greatest Combine to ever live, and he was ready.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:A great technology wiz. Very strong and athletic. Knows his way around bussiness as he is a great salesmen. Knows a little about some medicines.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:Negative.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a wholeNo.

DENIEDYour backstory says you were police. The combine attempted to kill all the police, if they found out they would kill you. It's not impossible to be a surviving cop, but you must explain how you lived? Did you hide? Did you abandon your uniform? Also, your RP examples hint at powergame and some aren't very descriptive. You do not NEED /rolls in the post, but they can be useful. "/it the citizen moves back/it the citizen pulls a gun/me pulls mine and fires/it the citizen’s lifeless body falls to the ground"Where do you fire? How did you fire before him? Did you dodge any of his bullets? Details mang. Try again with more description, and you'll be fine :3

Mrloco

ACCEPTED

Decent RP examples which show you can passive RP and not run around spamming weapons all the time. Very gud. Minor spelling mistakes, but *Francis Voice* Shit happens. Your RP backstory is ok as well, good enough details, without being TOO long. Ask for your whitelist from either me or D-lop.

Brandonice

ACCEPTED

Very good RP examples, and a VERY long detailed backstory. Shows me you put alot of effort into this, nice work Ask for an SA to whitelist you.

_________________Making fun of hitler, since I have nothing better to do since like...2003.

Steam name: Chris10023Steam ID: 0:0:42596170Age: 19how long have you been roleplaying?: Since I got Garry's mod on 6-11-2012. I have been of this server for the few months and have been constantly getting better.

20 lines of role-play examples, using /it and /me. (E.g.: /it the citizen runs through the checkpoint /I give chase)

/me walks up to a citizen in the ApartmentsCCA-CORE-05.04214 says "Ha-ha Pick up that can."/it the citizen doesn't respondCCA-CORE-05.04214 says "Pick up the can."/it The citizen picks up the can from the ground.CCA-CORE-05.04214 says "Put it in the trash can"/it The citizen puts the empty pop can in the trash can by the wallCCA-CORE-05.04214 says " ha-ha"CCA-CORE-05.04214 says "Ok you can go"/me leaves the apartments/me patrols down a street with a stun stick firmly in hand/it At the end of the street there is a man attempting to get into D6/me reports in to base on the unruly citizen/me walks up to the citizen/it The citizen continues to try and open the gateCCA-CORE-05.04214 says "Move away"/it The citizen doesn't moveCCA-CORE-05.04214 says "Move away right now."/it the citizen doesn't listenCCA-CORE-05.04214 says "final warning"/it the citizen continues to try and open the gate./roll*CCA-CORE-05.04214 rolls 50 out of 100**Citizen rolls 40 out of 100*/me firmly hits citizen with stun stick/it the citizen falls to the ground unconscious/me drags the unconscious citizen to a cell in the nexus/me walks back to courtyard and stands guard at the nexus gate/it a citizen walks up and gets in my faceCCA-Core-05.04214 says “Move back right now”/it the citizen moves back a few steps/it the citizen pulls a gun/it the citizen fires but misses and hits the wall behind me/me pulls mine and fires at his head/it the citizen’s lifeless body falls to the ground

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc. and should reflect your skills):

I grew up in Minnesota without parents or any known relatives, so I was raised by neighbor who wasn’t very kind to me. I was always a gifted runner, because I was always running from bullies who wanted my lunch money because I had no parents. It was there that I became someone who wanted to uphold civil behavior; I beat up the bullies who were trying to take my lunch money and reported them to the teacher. I later was moved to the area that would become City 18 before the Seven Hour War with the Combine when I was an adult, which was a safer location than the slums where I was surviving previously. When the Seven Hour War began, I did not participate in the fighting, so when the war ended I was now located in City 18. I have always looked up to the CP officers as role models, cause they were like part of a family I had never had. I have always had a sense for civil behavior because I was tired of seeing bad uncivilized people get away with things that they shouldn’t have, and always wanted to join the CCA since the occupation begun. My skills are pretty average, except for my speed, I am good with that. I am an obedient, trustworthy, and honorable man who follows orders to the letter, never disrespecting my superiors.

Steam name: {+Porchpiggie+} MicronekoSteam ID: STEAM_0:0:8407777Age: Seventeen. I would like to note that I am, indeed, a female. How long have you been roleplaying?: It's been a great five years. In serious roleplay in general, about 6 months total.

20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

NOTE: I would like to note that my character is the MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 to case an example of what a Civil Protection unit does to complete his standard directives. Here, this is a color coding for the /me's, /it's, and /event text. Event text isORANGE. /it text is CYAN. /me isGREEN.

** The night has an eerie silence to it. It's comforting, yet terrifying in the process.

** A single unit walks down the dirty pavement; a mess an enslaved Biotic should have cleaned.

** "<:: Copy that. Going to patrol in District One; Cycle One out of Three." The unit states into his handheld radio before clipping it back onto his Duty Belt.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989's footsteps on the pavement echo throughout the eerie silence, he begins to shudder at how silent District One is.

** Is the Resistance planning another raid against the Metropolice Force? The unit thinks. He chuckles at the thought.

** Footsteps other than his own are heard, as it echoes in unison with his very own.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 slowly begins to draw his 9x19 USP Match out of its protective leather holster, he perks up at the sudden sound.

** The footsteps are gentle, but can be heard loudly in the silence.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 stays on his alert, advancing to the location of the sound.

** The sound comes from a dark alleyway.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 turns the corner, expecting the worse.

** The sound was coming from a stray dog, who was whimpering, The dog looks up with dismay and sorrow in his eyes.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 chuckles at his own paranoia.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 crouches and pets the stray to give it some comfort before heading off to complete the rest of his standard directives.

** Four hours pass as the unit ripcords to the Nexus to update his daily logs.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 holds down the two side notches on his facemask and removes it.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 inhales deeply, getting some fresh air.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 begins to undress and put on his cotton night gown.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 updates his personal logs, and chuckles as he writes down his earlier experience with paranoia and a stray.

Character back-story (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Jordan Bourne looked up at the poster that had the words, "Help your City to drive out the malignant! Join the Universal Union, today!". He held a paper with several paragraphs of handwriting on it, the title labeled, "Combine Civil Authority Application". He walked into the Recruitment Office, a bright and contagious smile plastered his face as he walked towards the accountant and placed the paper on the counter.

Jordan always wanted to be a police officer when he was a young boy, but never was able to be accepted for reasons unknown. In his heart, he knows he can support and help the Universal Union in many ways- he wishes to be its grindstone, sharpening it's blade.

Although he fully supports the Universal Union as some-what of a Loyalist, he has a dull blade in a sense. His blade isn't used for supporting, but it rather attracts dust in his memories.

That's only one reason. The other is; He wants vengeance. He has had a rough childhood, living in poverty with a single mother. His father died in Afghanistan. He had to work two jobs as a teenager to support him and his mother; to put food on the table. His mother had to work as a prostitute, and worked late at night. His mother later died from an STD later in her prostitute career.

He wants to beat citizens who have never felt REAL pain in their life, show them what real pain is. He lived in harsh conditions, and is glad everybody feels his pain now. He wishes to be on top, ordering the citizens and let him shiver at his presence.

Before his father died and was enlisted into the Army, he was taught basic mechanics and first-aid. He was also taught to shoot a sidearm, but hasn't fully embraced the recoil of certain weapons- but has average accuracy.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowledge, knowledge of technology etc?:I was taught basic medical and simple mechanics, and I can handle a sidearm fairly well.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:If you're referring to Anti-Citizen actions or have committed any acts of decreasing the sociostability, then no. I have not made any Sociostability infringements- or any infringement in general when assigned a City.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:Negatory.

Extra Notes:I would like to note that my blood type is O+, granting that I am eligible for any blood donation or transfusion.

Im going to admit, your app was splended in everyway.But, the name of your CCA Unit does not match our own. You must use correct names. We dont have MPF, and the city name is not in the ID of the Unit.

About, four other people on this application thread had LOTS of infractions within their application, and I get denied for the mere fact that I put a certain name?

I ask a single question, what does being a Recruit or a basic unit in the CCA/MPF mean to you?

It's training.

Not only training ICly, for better role-play and such, but training OOCly. It teaches you how things work.

Getting denied for that mere factor, is.. Pointless?

I've seen, as said, four people make.. 'Below average' and get accepted without a second look. It's a rather filthy way of filtering the good from the bad. It's illogical, and it makes the community a real turn-off.

And trust me, I know what turns people on/off in a community, as I have Administrated a quite successful HL2RP, with an average of about 15 people per day. Sadly, the Owner didn't have the funds to keep it running, therefore terminating the HL2RP community within this Clan.

I respect everyone's opinion, but I don't respect some player's output- if that makes any sense at all.

Some may think it's not a big deal, but I look into things when in a community, see if it's worth it or not.

I assure you, I will re-apply in two days, but don't expect much to change. This community- no offense - is a big turn off for players such as me, and I will list one main factor that I have noticed.

1. Not serious enough.

Yeah, yeah. I'm a critic, pay me some slack. It's just not serious- at all. With the exception of players actually roleplaying- but it's not sentimental roleplay, it has no effort put into it. I can go join the server whenever I have time, and post the logs.

Obviously, that factor is a huge turn-off for serious roleplayers such as I. Some may be thinking, That's not the direction SoTA is going, you whore! We're just joking in OOC, calm your tits!

If you mean by 'the direction', the 'direction' in most Open-aura gamemodes IS serious roleplay, hinted with the occasional OOC joke from time-to-time. And joking in OOC, I'm perfectly fine, but you guys take it a tad too far and extend the time span in which an OOC joke takes place.

Believe me, this community has potential, but there is some obstacles along the way that this community hasn't taken care of, or just 'walked' around the opinions about the server in a sense.

I hope you understand what I mean, I don't concur any offense or ridicule of this community. I know I'm going to have a hot flame on my tail for stating my opinion, but what has been said has been said.

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The only thing I talked about related to my previous post was when I was injuryRPing and the unit that was supposed to heal me was aiming a shotgun at the City Administrator`s Assistant . Then, I discussed the topic and said for everyone to get IC.

Otherwise, I did not perform the apparent task in any way, shape, or form. And about my previous post, you shouldn't take it with offense , for it is only constructive criticism that I thought the Administrator team would take kindly to it, but I suppose I was wrong.

Plus, I have admin witnesses that I didn't perform such actions- ask Mahunik or Noobstrike.

Okay well Guys this was made a long time ago by me just waiting for cca apps to open and so If I need to change anything I will and I will take any advice or constructive criticism well so here it is.Steam name:Vigerus

Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:13404686

Age:13

How long have you been roleplaying?:Well for G-Mod maybe like since the 29 of June

20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)/me Sees a Citizen running away from another Combine/It The Combine man pulls out his stunstick and starts to yell at me to come and help/me Starts to follow the citizen and me too, pulls out my stunstick and goes through a dark alleyway./It Combine radios and says good thinking for trying to cut him off/me I ran around a corner and see the Citizen running towards him, I swing at the Citizen's leg and he falls to the ground, and I find that he had rations in his hand, more than one./It the citizen screams as I hit him and he tries to resist and punches me in the face/Me I dodge it and hits the citizen in the head and he goes unconscious/It the other combine drags him to a cell at the base and gives him a 2 cycle time in the cell*Rp Example ends*

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Russell was a policeman for a long time, and he had a K-9 dog that would help him with some problems with either drugs or a bomb, but bombs were not probable. He later joined the Army and he had his dog with him and this time his dog "would" sniff out bombs, But later he decided to quit and go help his mom because Russell's dad died recently. Russell later decided to go try another job as a Scientist. He had made some discovery's but not a lot. Then, later, before the combine attacked, his Mom died, from a cardiac arrest. After that the Combine showed up and he decided that joining the combine was probably the best way of making a living and so he joined the CCA.

Name:Russell Wein (W is V in German so its pronounced "Vine")CID:23886Age:25Country of origin:Born in Germany but raised in AmericaHair colour:Dirty Blonde HairEye colour:Blue Eyes

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:Went to College for Technology, Medical, and Mechanical uses, So he has some knowledge and skills

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:I helped a CCA track down a person that was went around hitting people but the person only killed one person

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:No I haven't have any Infactions with them

Steam name: {+Porchpiggie+} MicronekoSteam ID: STEAM_0:0:8407777Age: Seventeen. I would like to note that I am, indeed, a female. How long have you been roleplaying?: It's been a great five years. In serious roleplay in general, about 6 months total.

20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

NOTE: I would like to note that my character is the MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 to case an example of what a Civil Protection unit does to complete his standard directives. Here, this is a color coding for the /me's, /it's, and /event text. Event text isORANGE. /it text is CYAN. /me isGREEN.

** The night has an eerie silence to it. It's comforting, yet terrifying in the process.

** A single unit walks down the dirty pavement; a mess an enslaved Biotic should have cleaned.

** "<:: Copy that. Going to patrol in District One; Cycle One out of Three." The unit states into his handheld radio before clipping it back onto his Duty Belt.

** CCA-04.CORE.60989's footsteps on the pavement echo throughout the eerie silence, he begins to shudder at how silent District One is.

** Is the Resistance planning another raid against the Metropolice Force? The unit thinks. He chuckles at the thought.

** Footsteps other than his own are heard, as it echoes in unison with his very own.

** CCA-04.CORE.60989 slowly begins to draw his 9x19 USP Match out of its protective leather holster, he perks up at the sudden sound.

** The footsteps are gentle, but can be heard loudly in the silence.

** CCA-04.CORE.60989 stays on his alert, advancing to the location of the sound.

** The sound comes from a dark alleyway.

** CCA-04.CORE.60989 turns the corner, expecting the worse.

** The sound was coming from a stray dog, who was whimpering, The dog looks up with dismay and sorrow in his eyes.

** CCA-04.CORE.60989 chuckles at his own paranoia.

** CCA-04.CORE.60989 crouches and pets the stray to give it some comfort before heading off to complete the rest of his standard directives.

** Four hours pass as the unit ripcords to the Nexus to update his daily logs.

** CCA-04.CORE.60989 holds down the two side notches on his facemask and removes it.

** CCA-04.CORE.60989 inhales deeply, getting some fresh air.

** CCA-04.CORE.60989 begins to undress and put on his cotton night gown.

** CCA-04.CORE.60989 updates his personal logs, and chuckles as he writes down his earlier experience with paranoia and a stray.

** CCA-04.CORE.60989 lays down, getting the rest he surely deserved.

Character back-story (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Jordan Bourne looked up at the poster that had the words, "Help your City to drive out the malignant! Join the Universal Union, today!". He held a paper with several paragraphs of handwriting on it, the title labeled, "Combine Civil Authority Application". He walked into the Recruitment Office, a bright and contagious smile plastered his face as he walked towards the accountant and placed the paper on the counter.

Jordan always wanted to be a police officer when he was a young boy, but never was able to be accepted for reasons unknown. In his heart, he knows he can support and help the Universal Union in many ways- he wishes to be its grindstone, sharpening it's blade.

That's only one reason. The other is; He wants vengeance. He has had a rough childhood, living in poverty with a single mother. His father died in Afghanistan. He had to work two jobs as a teenager to support him and his mother; to put food on the table. His mother had to work as a prostitute, and worked late at night. His mother later died from an STD later in her prostitute career.

He wants to beat citizens who have never felt REAL pain in there life, show them what real pain is. He lived in harsh conditions, and is glad everybody feels his pain now. He wishes to be on top, ordering the citizens and let him shiver at his presence.

Before his father died and was enlisted into the Army, he was taught basic mechanics and first-aid. He was also taught to shoot a sidearm, but hasn't fully embraced the recoil of certain weapons- but has average accuracy.

Steam name: UnitBravo342Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:33563312Age: 17How long have you been roleplaying?: Since I got Gmod back in May

20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. /it The 05 patrols the central plaza./me Spots a citizen near the District 6 entrance./me Runs to the citizen./it The citizen turns, surprised at the CP's appearance.CCA-CORE-05-98373 says "Citizen. What are you doing here?"/it The citizen does not respond./me flicks on stunstick./it The citizen is visibly afraid.(Citizen)/me attempts to run/rollCitizen rolls 32 out of 100.CCA-CORE-05-98373 rolls 71 out of 100./me grabs the citizen before he can run.CCA-CORE-05-98373 says "Wall. NOW."/it The citizen goes to the wall./me ties citizen.CCA-CORE-05-98373 says "Apply."/it The citizen says nothing.CCA-CORE-05-98373 radios "I have a 10-107 refusing to apply here, please advise."CCA-CORE-OfC-22309 radios "Administer."CCA-CORE-05-98373 radios "Copy."/me prepares to beat citizen with stunstick./it AR2 and SMG fire erupts from District 6.CCA-CORE-05-98373 says "Shit!"/it The citizen runs away.CCA-CORE-05-98373 radios "Contact! Officer under heavy fire near District 6 entrance! Request immediate backup at my 10-20!"CCA-CORE-OfC-22309 radios "10-4. Reassigning local patrol."/it The firing stops./me hides behind a corner, loads 9mm pistol, and awaits backup./it The patrol is inbound but struck down by enemy fire. CCA-CORE-05-98373 radios "Multiple officers down! I need 10-154 at my 10-20!"CCA-CORE-OfC-22309 radios "Uh, negative, Overwatch units have been dispatched. ETA 20 seconds."/it 20 seconds pass./it An energy ball is fired./me comes out from behind corner and sees Overwatch units moving in./it Figures that look somewhat like rebels can be seen retreating into the slums.CCA-CORE-05-98373 radios "10-4, commencing 10-29 of housing."/me heads to housing./me locks the front door.CCA-CORE-05-98373 yells "All citizens report to the lobby immediately!"/it 4 citizens enter the lobby.CCA-CORE-05-98373 says "Face the wall!"/it 3 citizens do so, one does not./me walks over to them.CCA-CORE-05-98373 says "You want a non-compliance verdict?"/it citizen reluctantly turns./me ties all citizens./it None resist./me checks all citizens, but finds nothing illegal./me Unties them.CCA-CORE-05-98373 says "Alright, you can go."

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Nick grew up in suburban America. He had had a pretty average life, and was complacent until the side effects of the Resonance Cascade came to his doorstep. When the Portal Storms started, they hit Nick hard. He watched most of his friends and family be killed by the alien monsters. In the chaos that followed, Nick quickly learned how to shoot and survive under less than ideal conditions. Then the Combine came. Nick retreated to New York City, just outside of which, the military had been massing a counteroffensive on the second hour. When he arrived at a military checkpoint, they granted him access on the grounds that he left his weapons with them, unless he was joining the fight. Nick discarded his weapons. On what few media stations remained on the air, Nick watched the military get slaughtered and whole areas get leveled by the Combine forces. It was on the 7th hour, when Nick watched a strider destroy the Statue of Liberty, that he realized Earth was lost.

Nick was sent to City 18 after being processed and stripped of all his possesions. For a time, he absolutely hated the Combine, but knew better than to show it. But over time, he came to realize that the time to fight had past. Humanity would not endure if they wasted time thinking they can reclaim the past. Nick got the idea into his head that the only way humanity would be able to improve their own standing would be if they were to prove they deserved it. He decided everyone had to do their part, and when he found out the Combine Civil Authority was accepting applications, he headed to the local recruitment office to pick up a form.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:Knows first aid, proficient with handguns and SMGs, somewhat capable with old Earth technologies, but knows little about newer Universal Union systems.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:Loyalist Level 1, likes to turn in contraband and anticivil individuals at every possible opportunity.

Have you had any previous infractions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:1 instance of minor trespassing.

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