Thesis statement (main idea of the essay + the three points you’re going to focus on)

Topic sentence (main idea of the paragraph)

Supporting details (examples of your topic sentence)

Concluding sentence (ties whole paragraph together)

Topic sentence

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Topic sentence

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Paraphrase thesis statement

Paraphrase your three topic sentences

Final thoughts

I am from a unique family that is different from most, my family were all born in different places, they were all raised from low income, and are very family oriented.

My grandmother and grandfather were both raised in similar ways.

they had low income families

worked at such a young age

were raised to work hard to earn what they wanted

In my family we have different kind of cultures and respect all, we have native american, Puerto Ricans, and hispanics.

its a tradition at each gatherings we have dances and music

at some gatherings we have a dance that my grandmother and grandfather do that tells a story

each and everyone of us has to bring a food dish to our gatherings out of respect for the house were going too.

My great-grandmother and great-grandfather from my grandmother side are very religious, they have strong beliefs in remedies, and in myths.

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