Kingdom of thieves

Saynts is a country where the classes are segregated. Two young women, compete opposites in every way, find themselves doing the impossible as they strive to bring about change.
Ayssa, future queen and Narla, ghetto thief, create an unlikely friendship that may prove to change the face of history.

The beginning was going wonderfully, but then it sort of began to...in the lightest sense here, suck. I think if you just fix up the typos, re-read it, remove some things, add others, and maybe sleep for about twelve days in a row, it'll be good to go! :D