I personally like what you wrote, and would seriously consider upvoting (a finished version of) it, but a teenager who can stop time is probably going to get downvoted straight to valhalla.
Just too cliche.

Also, be careful writing articles about containment breaches. I'm pretty new, but from what I can tell people aren't fond of "overpowered" SCPs.

I personally like what you wrote, and would seriously consider upvoting (a finished version of) it,

What did you like about this draft, if the concept isn't good?

but a teenager who can stop time is probably going to get downvoted straight to valhalla.
Just too cliche.

Can you give some suggestions on how to make it less cliche? If you're going to give feedback in the Writing Help forums, please try to provide some directions regarding how an author can improve their works.

Also, be careful writing articles about containment breaches. I'm pretty new, but from what I can tell people aren't fond of "overpowered" SCPs.

There are plenty of powerful SCP articles out there (most of the popular ones from 8-10 years ago) that people do like. What makes this one different from those that would be problematic?

Thanks for the help, Zyn.
The first two are intentional.
The concept is good, in my opinion, I was just stating that other people might not like it. I can understand the confusion, considering I literally said "bad concept" (woops).
The main issue is stated in the How to Write an SCP guide- Humanoid (or more specifically, actual human) SCPs with some sort of "power" generally aren't received well. A good first step would certainly be making the SCP an adult instead of a teenager.

I like it because the article is written very cleverly and shows a very clear story arc. I think with a slightly (or even largely) altered concept, this article could be excellent instead of just good.

As for being overpowered, the article doesn't show a single way of dealing with the SCP.
This works for the concept you're going for, but your character would just create too many problems in the SCP universe. He could single-handedly take control of the entire planet. For an example, SCP-173 only really works because he's a neutral entity. Your character clearly has ill intentions.

Easy fix: just make some way to defeat him. Maybe he can't freeze time in magnetic fields or something, I don't know.

Trying to disguise something extraordinary by making it superficially ugly, unlucky, painful, or whatever just doesn't work. Frankly, it's appallingly poor writing technique. If you write a character with a magic power, no matter how unfortunate you make them they're still a magical person.

Author, I personally recommend that you go back to the conceptualization stage for this. Humanoids are one of the most difficult kinds of articles to write on the site, and we tend to delete a bunch of those every week for falling too low in ratings.

I recommend getting the base idea polished up in the Ideas and Brainstorming forum before you try fixing the draft. Go to that forum, post a quick summary of the concept you want to write up (don't link the draft unless someone asks), and reviewers there can help you make the concept more draft-worthy.

The kid broke out of a SCP Foundation with nearly no trouble. He might not want to destroy the foundation now, but who knows what decisions he would make later in life.
But you are partly right. That isn't a very big issue, but it is there.

More importantly, a character that just gets whatever he wants isn't something most people want to read about. As Zyn suggested, it might be good to go back to the drawing board.

Generally, the more powerful a character is, the more difficult it is to write about it in a way that will keep the reader's attention.

Regardless, I'll let other people handle it from here. Keep in mind, I'm not a very experienced writer either, that's just my two cents.