On Mon, 15 May 2006 01:54:02 +0200, Ian Hickson <ian@hixie.ch> wrote:
>> If the <code><term>readyState</term></code> attribute has a value
>> other than 3 (Receiving) or 4 (Loaded), it MUST be the empty string.
>
> "it" here refers to readyState, which is wrong.
Fixed.
>> Otherwise, it MUST be the fragment of the entity body received so
>> far (when <code>readyState</code> is 3 (Receiving)) or the entity
>> body when <code>readyState</code> is 4 (Loaded)), interpreted as a
>> stream of characters.
>
> "or the complete entity body", or "or the entire body returned" or some
> such would make more sense.
Used "complete."
>> If the response includes a <code>Content-Type</code> understood by
>> the UA, with the exception that the rule in the final paragraph of
>> section 3.7.1 of [RFC2616], and the rules in section 4.1.2 of
>> [RFC2046] MUST be treated as if they specified the default character
>> encoding as being UTF-8.
>
> That makes no sense at all. There's a missing verb as far as I can tell.
That part now reads:
If the response includes a <code>Content-Type</code> understood by
the UA the characters are encoded following the relevant media type
specification, with the exception that the ...
>> [...]
>
> Doesn't really matter, IMHO. References are important when the reader
> might not know what was being referenced, but for this kind of thing...
Fine by me. Thanks for your comments.
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