This was perfect in every way possible. The best yugioh fanfic I've ever read, by far. Congratulations. I don't know who you are, or if you will even read this, but thank you for the amazing experience.

I have no words to describe the emotion inflated in here. I am literally about to cry. No one, and I mean no one, has ever been able to write this sincere and keep it consistent. You made me feel so engrossed in the story, that no words can describe this. When I read this, I got more then a story. I got true emotion. This, is what writing should be like. Thank you for the beyond heavenly story. -Koobre

Anya chapter 21 . 8/16/2014

This was, without a doubt, the best yugioh fanfic I have ever read. Your writing style is very unique, and it lends itself well to this story. It seems you haven't been on FF for a long time now, so I doubt you'll see this, but the hours I spent reading this story today were definitely not wasted. Keep being awesome.

jj chapter 20 . 5/7/2014

nice my fav part is the end of chapter 16 lol to cute and all your crazy long names nicly done but a little confusing at times but i like it

Not a proper review, but since my plan to finish this story today has been thwarted, I thought I ought to tell you that this chapter has sign language I don't understand and does a remarkable job at being a mood killer. It might be intentionally so, but if it's not, please correct it. I didn't check the story's rating as I read on phone, but raise it if you feel apparent sex scenes need it. Don't cut scenes out because of it. Send me a reply, please, or otherwise I will be unsure whether I ought to continue if it's intended.

Misty "Um... The last line was more funny than it should have been saying, I was tense and didn't expect it.."
Kira "I enjoyed the court scene, it was very tense, but in the end Yuugi showed his strength and got through it with of course the help of his other me, and his hilarious I'm bored comments that just stuck to me somehow."
Angel "Beloved has a point, but I like how Yuugi isn't afraid to admit he's the one that is always and will always be the one pointed to as the girl, unless it is like one of Misty's crazy ideas of making Atemu a girl then I think we are all safe, don't you agree manservant?"
Chase "I wasn't here long enough, but do we really have to do a serious review?..."
Kira "Of course not, this is not even a serious review my serious reviews is a few paragraphs of nonsense. Anyway, great story, and I know we probably spoiled this chapter but I tried to keep all the information on the story out of it and only pointing out funny scenes in one chapter. Anyway, a little spoilers never hurt anyone right?"
Chase "If it was me it would have killed me and I would have raged on you at the beginning of the review."
Angel "But sadly we're not trying to talk to you manservant."
Chase "Whatever you jerk."
Angel "You know it."

Misty "Oh my..."
Kira "This is like a soap opera made all over again, to actually become interesting..."
Angel "Whoa... I rather just read MANSERVANT END THE REVIEW!"
Chase "Whatever... Great story, and... Great cliff hanger you gave us..."
Misty "Okay, okay now read Kira!"
Kira "You people are crazy..."

Misty "Aha? Wait what the heck?"
Kira "Ahem let me explain in your language. Yugi got a bang in a part that won't cause your death, and now Yami got his lovable protective bear mode activated now."
Misty "Oooh!"
Angel "...Is she an idiot?"
Chase "*Whispers "Says the one that calls everyone his slaves... or manservants..."
Angel "Did you say something manservant?!"
Kira "Hey have you ever noticed that me and Angel are dating, but Kira sounds more of a boyish name and Angel is a girly name... So would that count me as the boy in this relationship?"
Angel "Um... Wow... I just noticed that... HEY SLAVE WHO CREATED US YOUR A FREAKING JERK!"
Chase "Aha! Black mail material thank Ra!"
Angel "Wait... What?...

It was *sniff* so sad at the end! What happened? did they die or did they go home and live happily ever after WHAT HAPPENED *sniff* This stroy was amazing! in the end I was crying so mutch! Great job!

-Skitty

NoToLogins chapter 21 . 4/15/2013

Well, that's one f*****g amazing and romantic story! I am very glad that I've sumbled upon it! And with such sweet end too. Thank you so much for writting this!
PS: Names of everything - games, shops, etc were hilarious! I wish there were more -all- titles like that in real life. Of course great plot and puzzleshipping made me appreciate story even more, but yeah - long titles are the way to go!

welp, this was just about the greatest ygo fanfic i've ever read. or at least in the top 2. save for my disappointment in the censored sex scene, i really don't know know how else to express my shock and awe on what i just read. i do have some assumptions, but i'm too tired to actually think them all out. although i think sasori wanted to die to be with his daughters, that's all i could think off of the top of my head. just...just fucking WOW. thank you so much for this story, it was an absolute pleasure to read.

this story is awesome but u need to actually TYPE THE FREAKING LEMON SCENES ! I AM BEGGING YOU!

avidreader chapter 21 . 12/23/2012

well... that was... kick a** awesome

i really enjoyed your story and have declared it to be added to my "favorite all-time stories list" its a personal list, in a notebook i own but its a very picky list and yours is in the top 5. I doubt you care for all of this rambling, but it really is a "made me laugh, made me cry" story .

went though a HUGE range of emotions with this. loved it! hated it! just freaking loved it! one of best Puzzleshipping i've read. i'm hoping and assuming they made it back out to their body? or did they just go to Yugi's heart room and live there forever? great job!