An Englishman's Home...

I wasn't going to crit this one, but I thought I might as well before I sub it - It works on any dark colour, and on any of the colours used in the design, but I wanted to go for a bold primary colours on black look.

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I wasn't going to crit this one, but I thought I might as well before I sub it - It works on any dark colour, and on any of the colours used in the design, but I wanted to go for a bold primary colours on black look.

Oh for goodness sake! Bouncy castles come in primary colours because they are for kids, little kids And it's a modern thing all plastic and shiny.A mans home is his castle is a much older concept. That's why it works...it's called juxtaposition! THINK people! One thing though, bouncing on plastic in heavy armoutris likely to puncture it so maybe you might want to have an impression of that and the thing deflating. That make it ironic!

fatheed - if this is still open to suggestions. It would be cool if you pictured their metal shoes on the ground outside the bouncy castle - like they had to take their shoes off before they could get on. You could also have a pile of pointy weapons on the ground next to the castle.