The 7th day

Author Comments

the transitions are not done yet and i still have to make a chorus but this what i have. i know you zero bombers are gonna have a hay day but i would like some helpful comments from some decent NG members.

would appreciate it alot. thnks

Reviews

your dirty linen version was ok for me, but, i love this more, lol, it sounds alot like another classical song at the beggining... im no expert, lol. if it is from another song i would love to know what it is, but, this is great

need some more to your bass line.... and spred it out a bit... sounds a bit bunched up. Skipped alot.... i dunno if thats what u intended... but mabie not do that. ;) good tune for your background. im feelin it... just build a lil more structure around it, get a bit more organized and it'll be a sick hit. Aight then (always a pleasure) PEace!!!