Wow, now that's an improvement! If nothing else changes, at least it's more exciting to look at than the first couple attempts were. There's not much story to talk about yet so I can't comment on that yet, but that'll come with time, I imagine. Also, your poses and dialogue are a touch stiff, but again, I think it's a time and experience thing more than any inability at this point. Keep at it!

Davidizer13 wrote:Wow, now that's an improvement! If nothing else changes, at least it's more exciting to look at than the first couple attempts were. There's not much story to talk about yet so I can't comment on that yet, but that'll come with time, I imagine. Also, your poses and dialogue are a touch stiff, but again, I think it's a time and experience thing more than any inability at this point. Keep at it!

Davidizer13 wrote:Wow, now that's an improvement! If nothing else changes, at least it's more exciting to look at than the first couple attempts were. There's not much story to talk about yet so I can't comment on that yet, but that'll come with time, I imagine. Also, your poses and dialogue are a touch stiff, but again, I think it's a time and experience thing more than any inability at this point. Keep at it!