Thesis statement (main idea of the essay + the three points you’re going to focus on)

Topic sentence (main idea of the paragraph)

Supporting details (examples of your topic sentence)

Concluding sentence (ties whole paragraph together)

Topic sentence

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Topic sentence

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Paraphrase thesis statement

Paraphrase your three topic sentences

End with final thoughts (what do you want your reader to do/remember?)

Not everybody has the patience and the determination to learn something new.

I am very fortunate because I can play guitar, draw, and I am good at mathematics.

Everyday I practice playing the guitar at my house.

I can play guitar

I can play the guitar while singing

Whenever I have the chance, or I have nothing to do I pull out some paper and draw anything that comes to mind.

I know how to draw

I know how to shade

Every time I am doing mathematics I do not have any problem.

I can solve a equation with an example.

I can remember how to implement that equation.

I am very fortunate because i can play guitar, draw, and I am good at mathematics.

I practice guitar everyday at my house, but when I have the chance, or I have nothing to do I pull out some paper and draw anything that comes to mind. Everyday at mathematics I do my work with ought a problem.

If you want to learn something new, sitting down and waiting for it to come to you wont make it happen.

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