I'm sorry I don't have any constructive criticism for you. I'd like to think that this challenge was easy for you, because you used characters that don't need much characterization. You say "jock" and the audience gets it. But you still described them in such a way that gave them character along with their stereotypes, so there's nothing I can say about that.

Thus, I'll just voice the first thought that came to my head when I finished reading your work: Thank you.

This is really cute and I like how Hannah handles all everything and especially how the romantic stereotypes are averted- at least to a certain degree. This story was unbelievably cute and I like how she stayed herself and got with a guy that accepted that.