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Re: please help edit my personal statement.

Focus: why u want to study overseas, why u wish to obtain the qualification and ur chosen research area, and ·********Hw u think u’ll benefit in terms of ur career n personal development from obtaining this scholarship and the resulting qualification once uhave returned to ur home country.

I do not believe for one second that the scholarship paperwork used the words as you have typed them above as the focus. I have marked in red the non-standard English. If that is how the institution you are applying to writes, then I suggest you steer well clear of them and get a scholarship somewhere where they speak good English.

Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.