Comment by StOlafPhotographer: The image seems a bit pixelated and without a focus. I like the idea of the image but the camera technicals need to be improved a bit. If there is anything I can clarify or help with don't hesitate to PM me

Comment by jjstager2: I wish the fence weren't in the way of the view behind the models. The shadows cast by the fence are a bit distracting. I'd love a tighter composition to get more of the expressions on their faces.