Your poetry is beautiful. It conveys a meaning that for most is hard to understand , but is heartwarming in a way :) Your words flow so well , and it's an elegant poem to say the least. Fantastic work! *****

This is interesting in a good way. In my poetry, I've never done the whole repeating lines thing. In this, are you saying that a person can only truly relax in darkness where htey are not seen? that's what i got from it but i don't quite understand. Keep writing!