It took me three days to finish this! BUT I LOVED IT! Valgarv and Slyphiel was an odd, yet interesting pair. I loved it! XD Did you make a sequel? If not, I hope you all do. But you don't have to if you don't want to, considering it could take a really long time to write. Ah, no matter. This story is going in my favorites! Happy writing!

Hey guys you can made a continue please? And ai have something to ask, Air Jay is a real person?I like his personality, I love yours fic, maybe I don't understand all but i understand 90/100 and i like it very much and i spear you made a continue to it. It took my two days to read but it doesn't was a waste of time, okay guys good luck

Hate to disappoint, but Nii-san means big brother. Ne-san doesn't mean anything. Unless you mean Nee-san which means big sister. You're grammar is atrocious and very distracting as well. But I like where you are taking this story and I'm eager to see how you develop it. So I'm going to continue reading.

Fan of anime chapter 7 . 12/29/2010

ok this is awsome but you have a lot of spelling and grammer mistakes its driving me crazy

Hi! It's me...don't worry hadn't give up on this story, just slowed down a bit...very busy week, but in this chapter Alandra was right. I loved this chapter! sorry if the review is short...I'm eager to go on with the story,

OMG WA ITS NOT FAR I MEAN I KNOW BUT SNIF WA THAT THE WAY TO END A STORY COULD HAVE LEFT OUT THE HOTEL PART BUT GOD WA EXLLENT WA how it feel to finsh it youv been working on this since 2005 4 years really by the way mis me

I thoroughly enjoyed your series. :D. Besides grammar errors,( which i just ignore anyway, no ones perfect right!) I thought the overall idea was quite brilliant. Awesome job, I hope to read more of your work. Although I'm not sure how eager u are to start a new series so soon ;p.