I don't really read this type of story normally, but after reading Chapter One, I was itching to read Chapter Two.

+ Here's the review. Well... the useful part.

I liked the way in which you managed to capture the part of Draco's personality that we barely see - his insecurities. I love that this isn't following the books, because you've shown a part of Draco's characters that is rarely explored. :D

A civil conversation between the two of them?! You managed to make it work as well, they seemed an equal match for each other.

One thing that confused me slightly was the mention of Umbridge... Did this idea just come to her? To me, that was one section which slightly confused me...