Sunday, July 07, 2013

IELTS General Writing: 'new business' letter

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Hi Simon,

I would like to thank you for this website,I got my results today Speaking:8 ,Reading and Listening 7.5 but Writing is 6.5 .That was extremely frustrating because i did excellent job in my writing in the last exam and i am really wondering what was wrong that is why i will go for re-mark. My question is will it be a good step.I know it might be tricky to go for it but i will try. Without your e-book and website i would not be able to get such high scores .

July 6 2013 General Writing in Australia Task 1 Question You have seen an advertisement for a position to look after a house when the owner is away, write a letter to the own-
-Introduce your self
-Tell them why you are interested in this job
-Ask some questions about the job
Task 2- Youngsters claim that mobile phones are very useful for them.
Use of mobile phone is good or bad. Discuss and give examples from you own experience.

hi...
I am writing here for the first time. I am a doctor, a kidney specialist. I had written my IELTS last month. My score is
L-8.5
R-7.5
W-6.5
S-6.5 Overall 7.5

But I need a score of 7 in each to get fellowship in UK. I am happy with my result except in speaking where I was expecting atleast 8, but I dont know why I got 6.5.
Kindly guide me for speaking and writing.

Hi Simon, if GT writing task 1 is about writing a complain letter to an airline company about the trip you took. should I make up a ticket reference at the beginning of the letter, as I do that in real life, but I saw many ielts sample answers don't. Thanks Simon!

Dear Friend,
I am writing this letter in regards to the business idea that you have come up with. I like the idea of starting a Italian Restaurent in Melbourne.

I am happy to say that I am willing to accept your request for me to join as a partner. I have always wanted to start a business on my own because I am not sure how long will I be able to work in my current job.

Also I like the financial projections that you have told me the other day. It's good that we will be buying a property rather than rent it because, as time goes on the value of the property will rise. So even though our business is not as successfull as we expect to, we can balance that with the financial gain that we get from the value of the property.

I am really glad that you asked me to be your partner. Looking forward to start our new business.