Talon Aran (Retired)

I edited it a little, adding the PED to the powersuit(Why I didn't think of that before, I don't know, considering how Phazon-based he is.) and his other pistol he recently started using.Also, would I be allowed to make it another transforming blade? I didn't do this initially because it seemed overpowered, but I thought about it and now I want to do it.

I'm thinking of revising a part of his backstory to explain just why his body bonded with Phazon so easily, with inspiration from the "conduits" from inFamous. Namely that he was born with a gene that made him able to get abilities from Phazon without harmful effects.

Instead of outright removing the beam sword, I'll nerf it a bit. And remove the "lightsaber like" description, so really it's more of an emergency weapon/quick melee attack. I'm still adding the HF Blade because I feel he'd use that more.Done editing for now.

I decided after some thought to remove his telekinesis ability, replacing it with a modified grapple beam. I figure I don't have him use it enough anyway, so I figured I'd give him something I consider cooler(inspired by the Leash from Bulletstorm). Now his abilities are mostly physical except for the telepathy.Also removed his redundant energy blast power.

Was thinking of either making it a teleporting device...Or a device that speeds him up to a point where it looks like he's teleporting, but I gotta think of a drawback because that sounds really overpowered.

Was thinking of either making it a teleporting device...Or a device that speeds him up to a point where it looks like he's teleporting, but I gotta think of a drawback because that sounds really overpowered.

Make it work only over short distances and give it a cool down. Suddenly you have what is pretty much a 'Blink' ability rather then something like a teleport.

Added a frigate to his ships in the profile. I figured it was kinda silly that he was a rather high ranking Space Pirate but didn't have command of his own SP Frigate.And figured I'd add an assault rifle considering he's wielding a rifle in the picture.