It was a wonderful start to the story. I like how it started with a description of serious and his personality. It was good to be able to get a feel of him right away and my only concern is that you stay constant with his personality throughout the story. Sometimes, authors change up their characterizations half way.

It was a very intriguing chapter and a great start! It left a lot of room for the plot to develop and Sirius was amazing. I absolutely love his character. I think that it's very interesting the way you chose to portray him. Spelling, grammar and punctuation wise, you're golden. I didn't see anything that needs to be worked on.

Great work! I enjoyed reading this chapter very much & I wish you the best of luck in continuing this story. Thanks so much for requesting and I'd love to see more from you in the future! :)

-marissa lily potter

Author's Response: Thank you for this lovely review! :) You did it in no time, too. You must have super powers. I am quite pleased that you liked it, especially Sirius. You're a doll!
Thanks again!!
Hugs,
Lcuky