uhhhh... hi. I'm not new here, but I seem to be little more then a random. Which, unfortunately for you, is what I'm all about. Force yourself to look at the hideous script, and try to enjoy. ]>:D

Twisted Star presents

SUPER RANDOM

*Prologue*
Once upon a time, there was an Anime God.

Anime God: Hmmmmm... I think I should make a tv show. I'll call it "POKEY-MAN"!!!

The show was an instant hit amongst 30 yr-old fanboys and the like.

Fanboys: WHOAMG IT'S ANIMAL ABUSE

Unfortunately, they pronounced the name wrong and called it "Pokemon". The show was spectacular, though, and it made small fanchildren govern the remote every saturday. That is, until...The god died.

Anime God: *shot*

This happened around the island series. The show plummeted.

...But what if it hadn't?

No humour here. Yet. Chapter One: When n00b attack will be up painfully shortly.

LordSesshomaru

15th August 2006, 6:14 AM

Erm, it's interesting, origional, and weird. I like it so far.

Adrexus

15th August 2006, 8:10 AM

um i hate to be mean but, this fic is way way to short this isin't even long enough to be a prolouge and what excactly is going on where's the description or the characters for that matter, i strongly advise you to read the advice for aspiring authors thread or the rules for that matter before you attempt a fic again

Jetx

15th August 2006, 2:55 PM

It's still way too short to be obeying the rules.

!!! - is not correct grammar. One maximum. So you can call me a hypocrite because of my usertitle, but who cares, it's three words. Not that this is an awful lot longer.

WHOAMG IT'S ANIMAL ABUSE
Have you ever seen a script WHOAMG in it? Type out your words.

Anime God: *shot*
By who, where, what? This is a script, not a bunch of forumers chatting.

30 yr-old
Thirty year old. Type out your words. This isn't going to stay open so you might as well try doing it better next time.

Twisted Star

16th August 2006, 3:01 AM

To answer critisisms: It's supposed to be critisized. It's freakin' script-format, silly! And now for chappy one!

So you say this is a script. You do know that a script is somthing that is read by actors and producers and tells them what they need to know about the part? Like facial expressions, setting, and the like. I advise you to take a peek at poketalk at some point... Don't give up, just work at it a little more.

Oh, and WHOAMG! Is, in my honest opinion, something that those people would say. And quite funny. XD Just turn it into how they would say it, like Wohmagawd! XD

chester

16th August 2006, 9:49 AM

wow! This should be closed quick-smart. What are you on?

henzy

16th August 2006, 9:54 AM

Oh god, your lucky you have not come apon Yami Ryu's uber scrutiny yet!
Beware...
>_> <_<
I suggest you delete this, I mean, its short, and its not even in the fanfiction format, and its just gonna get a whole bunch of people to flame ya.
Just a word of warning before the FanFic titans come and destroy your brain.

Zephyr Flare

16th August 2006, 10:16 AM

And having fun has ANYTHING over rules since when exactly? If you can't be bothered to follow the rules then don't post trash that breaks the majority of them.

Humour things are even mentioned in the rules regarding them, I made absolutely sure but clearly it was too much for you to even bother with. Read the things, read the Advice for Aspiring Author's thread and quit wasting people's time.