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A Kinky Orgasm (Bottom’s Up Book 1) by Amanda Young

At the end of just another day working in the bar Briar owns, he gets the surprise of his life. Truman, the high school jock Briar used to crush on, walks in and orders a kinky orgasm. Innuendo flies between the two men before they finally get down to business; they both want each other. Briar expects this to be a one-night stand, but after all the fun and games, Truman admits he’s always admired Briar’s openness and he’d like to pursue the relationship since he’s moved back home for good.

A Kinky Orgasm is a short M/M erotic work. I enjoyed the plot of the high school jock being interested in the guy who used to be an outcast. It was nice to see Truman admit how he’s always admired Briar since Truman never felt he could be open about his sexuality. Because this was so short, there wasn’t any discussion about how Truman came to be open now. We got glimpses of the abuse Briar suffered in high school, but no information about how he’s treated currently.

The story did have some erotic appeal, but I didn’t love the author’s style. During the erotic scene, it felt like urban dictionary was used to search out every variation of the word cock. Words like tool, meat, stalk, prick, and steely flesh tend to take me out of the moment. There were also quite a few clichés used, and the come-ons were quite obvious.

If you’re looking for a quick, erotic read, this story is mildly enjoyable. Unfortunately, there really wasn’t enough time to explore much other than the erotic experience shared between the two men.