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you've made a good start on it, and got most of the notes in place - now's time to slow it down and work on the phrasing, the key to making any melody work. The huge difficulty with this piece is that you're playing bassline and tune, and often the ideal phrasing for each of them is going to be different (hey, it's why I've stuck with looping!), so that's what's going to take the time...

but you've made a good start, and with a little work, will have the whole thing down...

Nice job. The harmonics ring especially clearly. One thing to consider is that Vic's version is only one possibility for an arrangement of this tune (a great one, BTW). In my upcoming Mel Bay book, I take a totally different approach to arranging and performing this tune. You might want to consider making this your own
Mike

I agree that you rush things a little, Some of the harmonics in the beginning got squelched a bit, lay back and really feel it, ya know? and don't be afraid to improvise and figure out your own arrangement of it.

When I learn a tune like this, I like to learn it in as many ways possible, so in this instance, this version is in harmonics, well if I learn to play it in harmonics, and standard plucking, slap maybe, tapping, figure out some chords to go with it...etc.

well, then it gives me a lot more to work with than just reciting one version of the song over and over again. ya know?