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@Vanny - thanks dear. This part was dicey - very critical for character development, but not too much story progression. I am glad it still came through as relevant to you. And yes, our "Mouni baba' finally had to open up. I wonder what all he said to Arti...had to be pretty special for her to recall them through her coma-haze.

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Yes, character development is critical for me to understand the story because when I read stories based primarily on characters(like yours) I need to know about the characters to get the full feel of the emotions being portrayed!

So true, it makes me wonder what exactly Yash has revealed to Aarti during her subconsciousness!

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@Kat: This has been such a beautiful read. Gosh, you are such a flowy writer...smooth, yet intriguing. Not once do the senses shift from the direction the writing takes the reader. I love the characterization of Aman...he is so genuine and so open with his own emotions. Superb!! I really loved it.

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