I guess in some circles its a good poem, but really, all I see is alot of crap.

Now, if im getting the meaning completely wrong, feel free to correct me. However, from what i can gather, its one of htose lost and hopless love poems where the speaker is so obsessed with someone they could care less about what that persons does to them or with others. And if you really are like that, well have a nice fucking life cus your pretty much a lost cause.

Thats real cool. I right those kind of poems too, but I don't know if they are any good or not. I made my friend cry with one .

Shockro wrote:Theme song Lord and Master, he's such a bastard but when a girl's in trouble he'll be there on the double.Lord and Master, he's the one! Who will be shunned in the great land of fun. Repeat** Lord and Master, he's such a bastard but when a girl's in trouble he will be there on the double

well thank you all for your good reviews ill add another poem but i must tell that these are created without meaning the come with the wind and vanish with it and it adapts to the mind of the one who reads it so u read what u feel hehe here is another:

everything was beautifuleverything was neweverything was normalwhen i first met you

everything was pleasanteverything was funi thought there was no more sorrowmy pain had just begun

i marred myself when i was angrywhen i was upset or downi mar myself when i was dying insidei cry without any sound