That is GREAT ........ ....... i love the colour you used , just right i thought .

After i post lyrics i always wonder if other people get what i'm trying to convey , and also if people would sing it , the way i hear it in my head .

I think some lines / lyrics could be changed , or needed to be changed , to help with the flow , ?? after i hear someone else sing it , i can hear that the way i wrote it , makes it difficult to sing .

I think I could do it with a lot more dynamic and depth if my wife would just go shopping or something I changed a lot of it when I was practicing but I switched it back when I tracked it. If I do it again, it sounds like I have permission to alter it a bit

I gotta get a sound booth.

I'm seeing this as kind of a leering, lecherous inmate's perspective on the only tail he sees all day. Sex crazed degenerate, true....but who?

She likes the attention, right?
_________________I read Emerson on the can. A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds - true. But a consistent reading of Emerson has its uses, nevertheless.ZlurghMusic

of course it will be made longer, maybe the chorus longer, or whatever it calls for. Thinking a NIN feel for vox, and I cant sing my way out of a paper bag.

LIKE IT !!. Methinks Black female lead voice would be good a la Grace Jones.
Want some lyrics or have you already written ?
nice mix !! I'd rather can the distorted guitar slams - a bit dated I reckon - you don't need them. Flute might be nice instead.
I'd call this song " I told you so " the groove's kinda threatening - I like it - well done !!

of course it will be made longer, maybe the chorus longer, or whatever it calls for. Thinking a NIN feel for vox, and I cant sing my way out of a paper bag.

LIKE IT !!. Methinks Black female lead voice would be good a la Grace Jones.
Want some lyrics or have you already written ?
nice mix !! I'd rather can the distorted guitar slams - a bit dated I reckon - you don't need them. Flute might be nice instead.
I'd call this song " I told you so " the groove's kinda threatening - I like it - well done !!

of course it will be made longer, maybe the chorus longer, or whatever it calls for. Thinking a NIN feel for vox, and I cant sing my way out of a paper bag.

LIKE IT !!. Methinks Black female lead voice would be good a la Grace Jones.
Want some lyrics or have you already written ?
nice mix !! I'd rather can the distorted guitar slams - a bit dated I reckon - you don't need them. Flute might be nice instead.
I'd call this song " I told you so " the groove's kinda threatening - I like it - well done !!

bwhahahahaha

Well stuff you pdknokow. That's How you reply to my compliments on your mix ?. Hey it ain't that great anyway. You need to learn how to reply posts with a bit of courtesy. Grow up.

I think I could do it with a lot more dynamic and depth if my wife would just go shopping or something I changed a lot of it when I was practicing but I switched it back when I tracked it. If I do it again, it sounds like I have permission to alter it a bit

I gotta get a sound booth.

I'm seeing this as kind of a leering, lecherous inmate's perspective on the only tail he sees all day. Sex crazed degenerate, true....but who?

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