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I know, it gets confusing so, let's stick to just Pmel, when I'm here at conceptart.org shall we? Sweet!

I love to illustrate and seek to improve myself. I've been waiting for constructive criticisms and have waited for it in vain at deviant art so I came here with the hopes that someone could tear down my pieces till they look professionally acceptable!

So, without further ado, attached is one of my many art works, Prince of the Monarch! Hope you guys like it!

It's hard to see exactly what's going on. I see the maids cowering in the corner, but why? What's behind us that the Prince is looking at?
The yellow band in the middle is a carpet, I'm assuming. Two problems here:
1. It's not in perspective and
2. There's nothing in front of it.
I don't see a reason why it can't be extended all the way to the bottom of the illustration.
The winged thing that the Prince is standing on is also messed up perspective wise. It doesn't look like he's standing on it, because the lines of the top suggest a chair-like structure, not a ball with the top cut off. What I mean to say is that the top of the ball is not a circle in perspective, as I assume you were trying to draw. Actually, I don't see what's wrong with the Prince just standing on the carpet. The platform has a sense of motion that the Prince doesn't echo, which makes it look uneasy.
Everyone's looking at someting different. Use the characters' focal points to give the viewer one. Are they all looking at the Prince? Perhaps the guards (who are obviously the same image) are staring straight ahead, in character. This wouldn't help the focal point, but it would be a lot less suspect than them looking to their right.