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Pokémon Eclipse, This Game is made with RMXP (Rpg Maker XP) and i am using one of the worlds best starter kits made by poccil'sPokémon Essentials.I am the Creator and the Manager of this Game, I am the Mapper, a Semi Battle Spriter, a Semi Graphic Maker.Pokémon Eclipse is based in a new region called Vastine (Name of Region may change.) Vastine has the old 493 Pokémon and 1 new pokémon. The game currently has Whack a hack's DP Tiles and the Gym Tiles I'm making myself.

Legend of Vastine

Long ago during the creation of the Pokémon World 8 Pokémon created Vastinethese pokémon had diffrent types.

The story starts with a Battling lesson with a pokemon. When you finish, you are asked for choosing one pokemon from the three Johto starter.

Then the main part in each game you have to defeat gym leaders, collect badges BUT that is not all, You will meet a Team Known as Team DarkLight. a team that Are on a quest to obtain the Eclipse Pokémon. But to collect it, they need the Eight secret orbs, (8 what a magic number... I wonder?)

A Wonderful Adventure with many diffrent parts to a massive story known as the Pokémon World.

You’ll have to face challenges, defeat trainers and save the world.

The Game now has a brand new Battle Frontier and there is also the Battle Dojo.

well you should maybe had spent some time in the plot and story idea space but whatever. Here is what I think from another game developers point of view. first of all it would seem you have already shosen the name you like best "Eclipse" but it is ok to see what others like. The OW's of eevee and its evolutions arent good at all its a problem I had once and has been dealt with but yes those look horrible especially with the D/P graphis(not to fond of them). But anyway yeah. I also think that the player in the room is the best screen. The others look as if they are not part of the story yet and you just set them up just for the screen. Have you completed any eventing yet?

The gym tileset's palette needs some work, as those colors are too bold (is that the word I'm looking for?) You have a few forgotten punctuation marks, and what is that behind the hero in the eighth screen?

what do you mean whats wrong with the plot? you just said a few posts ago that you couldn't think of a good plot.and that it would come.If you dont have your story together then it should be in the plot and story idea space.

I have edited the Plot or Story but all i need to know is what you think.

Pokemono i is right this should be in the plot and story idea spac e. You are still editing your story and want people to tell their ideas.this section is for showcasing your game not developing a story.

To everyone that posted ere, sorry if i have made half your posts really stupid, i deleted my previouse posts because im going to make all the posts from now on make more sense XD

anyway

Here are the updaes of the game,

The game will contain 1 maybe 2 or 3 diffrent regions,Will have many sidequests,Many minigames (Digging, Questionaire, Waterslide)Every Pokemon will be obtainable,Special characters are going to return,Maybe one new pokemon

Well, at least this is currently in production. Unlike XD002: Shadow of Dragons.

However, with that, it's mainly because neither of us have got round to work on it. But hopefully within the next week, I'll be able to start working on it again.

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From the Colosseum, to the Seventh Pokemon, Orre has always had to worry about Shadow Pokemon. But never before did any other region had to worry about them... until now.
Called into action for the second time, the Seventh Pokemon is now on a quest that spans more than just his home region - a quest that will change the fate of the world forever...

The plot seems somewhat... I'm not sure how to express it. Bland? Cliché? It really lacks much needed depth (even the original games have some kind of depth in the plot, albeit not much) and really, just sounds like most other fan games out there. Apart from that, the grammar and Pokémon overworlds need work, but so far it isn't too bad.

The grammer and the sprites are from the Old Version so im not going to do anything about that, but in the newer version if there are any mistakes i will sort them out, and about the plot promise that after the 1st demo i will give you a good plot

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