I loved this story! I read it straight through two days just because I couldn't stop! I think it's sad that Russell never finds someone though. I am happy with the way Winry and Al ended up and of course Roy and Ed. I just wished Russell had found his someone while Ed was gone or something. Overall though I really loved everything about this story.

Guest chapter 15 . 1/17/2014

Hello! I must say I totally love this fic. I just have one question: why on earth did you change your writing style? Before this chapter it was very easy to read and like flew on. Now it sticks in place at some points. I surely hope this is only temporary.

But seriously though, good plot. I wouldn't even dream stopping half way )

Honestly, I'm being skipping over this story for years now. Though I thoroughly enjoyed many of your other works, this was a plot I was iffy on. I remember reading the first paragraph maybe a year or two ago and (unfortunately) closing the window. However, I kept coming across this title as I was browsing through , so I finally decided to give it another shot. And I'm so glad I did! I've been hooked on it the past two days and it has been such an enjoyable read! As of 12:25 AM tonight I've finally reached the moving end and I have to say this is a masterpiece! I loved how you pulled off both relationships with Russell and Roy (which is hard to come by in a single fiction without it sounding repetitive) and there are just so many little details that you've grasped perfectly in this piece. I love the little quirks you put in for each character and I have to say I even love the OC's! Unlike many other 100,000 word stories, I never felt the need to force myself to keep reading. Something was always there to keep me interested. I don't want to keep rambling, but I just have to THANK you for writing such an amazing AU fiction. Goodnight!

I think I am pretty much hating everyone right now, especially winry...she acts like a bitch, gets one of the kindest men as her husband, and then acts like the superhero...yup..hate her right now. So now she takes the company and no one ever thanked roy for all that he missed in his life in order to work hard for his family. Sigh...anyway, I'm glad he's going afer ed :)