Once again, a gorgeous and hilarious comic page from one of my favorite deviants. I do have a few suggestions for it this time.

The atmosphere of the first panel is lovely. The cloud rendering is gorgeous. However, i would have liked to see some more lighter tones. The panels in this page are quite dark. As for the second panel, the captain's pose really threw me off, as it is a bit unnatural-looking. He looks more like he's standing than hanging. Perhaps his shoulders could be a bit higher, and the material of his jacket bunched a bit more under his arms. And the third panel... is epic win.