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this is my first story EVER that i've ever wrote out it's been 3 months since i came up with the plot but i've just started working on it today and my grammar isnt very good but i'll try anyways this story is called

THE LAST REQUEST Keichi a novel writer with a normal family. A sister , father and mother living happily together with a normal life. Keichi talks to his sister Naomi“Hey!! Sis do you think you can read this story and give me feed back ?”“sure why not”“Children dinner is ready”“We’re coming mom”After dinner Keichi came back to his room and slept. He had a dream of running through darkness and at the end of the tunnel he saw light as he quickly ran towards the light he notices that he isn’t getting tired when he got through the light he saw blood covering his body and the room filled with the corpses of his family. His sister, father and mother was mutilated on the floor. Looking down at his hand, he was holding a blood covered axe as he rethink of the situation he realized that he doesn’t know what happened as he tries to think harder his senses was starting to fade and again he saw darkness. When he woke up he was hand cuffed and in a police car, Keichi began to panic he asked the police about what happened.“Kid you killed your family, why did you do it?”“What!!! What are you talking about ?”“Kid don’t act crazy on me you killed your family in cold blood”“But!!!...”Keichi realized that he can’t argue to the police officer . Keichi sat quietly through the whole trip. When he reached the police station he was locked up and was told that he will be prosecuted tomorrow. He slept quietly through the night.On the day of the prosecution he was brought before the judge and was instantly deemed guilty and sentenced to death. Keichi was shocked. In his cell his began thinking through the events and coming up with nothing and suddenly he hears a voice of his sister Naomi he turns around and he saw her. Keichi began to speak“but….but I thought you were dead”“I am dead brother…..i was killed by you!!!!”“I didn’t kill anyone at all”“You did!!! You killed our family and now I have come as a shinigami to look at your last moments”“shinigami what are you talking about ?”“After you killed me, a shinigami came to grant me my last request which can only be granted to dying people. I wished for the highest punishment for you brother after that I signed up to become a shinigami”“…..”“before your execution brother I want you to see my work”“what ?”In an instant Keichi was transported to a unfamiliar neighborhood with Naomi.“what are we doing here Naomi?”“I’am a shinigami remember I am here to grant a last request to a women that has only 7 days to live”Then both of them continued walking “we’re here”Naomi knocked the door and the door opens after half an hour waiting “Um...Hello sorry you had to wait but I’m very sick and I can’t really move that well”Naomi catching her breath “Hello miss Yukari I’m a shinigami that was sent to grant you last request”“last….request ?”“a last request a wish that will be granted by a shinigami to a dying person that doesn’t have a long time to live”“ohhh”“you don’t seem surprise by it miss Yukari”“well I have a terminal heart disease and I already knew that I was going to die soon”Keichi was standing there silently“So what is your wish miss Yukari”“I wish for a healthy body”“I can grant you that wish but it will only be temporary because us shinigami can’tchange the fate of a person”“ok please grant me a healthy body I was sick for my whole life at least I want to know how it feels to be healthy”Naomi stated to chant a spell and a bright light was flashing in the room“ok it’s done”Yukari started to stand up and walk and run around her house like a healthy person totally different from when they first saw her.

this isnt the end of the chapter yet. more will come soon. Feed back is really appreciated

a young man last sight was of his sister holding a big knife splashed with the blood of their family and then a shinigami(reaper) came to take him but as a rule among the shinigami they must grant one last wish to the person who is going to die or was murdered so without hesitation he wishes that his sister received the highest punishment possible BUT did his sister Really killed their family

call me Ban i'm an amature in drawing (took a little bit of art in school) i like to draw manga when i'm bored

01. Male02. I found this website on google03. i'm just a super amature at drawing04. i'm 1605. i'm from chicago06. favorite Manga/Anime Shakugan No Shana07. i would like to post my drawings in the forum