Journey From Heaven To Hell

Journey From Heaven to Hell
Written By: Adam Hazard

can you hear the death knell
this is my only bid farewell
my journey from heaven to hell
noone to save me, im gone forever
death took me to a new endeavor
two-step'd to the gates of heaven
cant get into gates, no lucky seven
living a fast life caught up in the end
a one way trip, now i have to fend
as I walk into the fiery depths of hell
minds locked up by these demons, cell
sold my soul to Lucifer, right price
my own choices, no need to entice
a race against time, doves verse crows
this is the outcome I have chose
maybe I am death I suppose
when my heart last froze

Re: Journey From Heaven To Hell

Yeah thats pretty ill and theres some pretty nice imagery here. I always wished I could be a better poet and every once in a while I'll try to put some work down. But I like this down to the structure. Appreciate the post.

Re: Journey From Heaven To Hell

like this man, great structure, the topic fits my style. good job man

"come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"

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