HI! XD
Long time no...erm...read...? Yeah O.o...
Its good to see a new poem from you . And this here is wonderful stuff!
This work is very poetic in every sense of the word. The first line just captures me, "Shall I compare thee to a winter's day?" Yes, I believe you shall! Hehe.
The darker, sader tone comes through well in a romantic sort of way. I could kind of sense the Shakespeare in it but I also understand how it would not "exactly serve its purpose." It works perfectly on its own.
Really great to see you haven't lost your flair for the written word .
Keep it up!
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-