OMGOODNESS I KNOW THE MOVIE YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT! I can't remember the name but there was a girl who's mom always moved and they lived in New York and she didn't want to move but she did and she met that boy who liked her and he did the same thing and oh my goodness it had Hilary Duff in it and I know it I know it I know it!

yea the movie is the "Perfect Man" I watched it when I was really little. I only remember parts of it including parts you included in your story. I really like how you used a movie idea and put it into your story. Great job!!! On to chapter 2. 8/10

This was a huge ride from beginning to end...I liked how you ended it differently than what is expected, but it's still pleasing. This is such a sweet short story, and I thank you for writing it. FAVORITED. 10/10.

Ummm...shouldn't hermione have recognised Ron? Otherwise it sounds good though. I probably would've liked it better if there was this deep seeded history between Ron and Hermione and when Hermione got the letter all the feelings came back and she realised she did love Ron and then she went to go see him and he was kissing the blonde chick and is heartbroken all over again..etc,etc.

Author's Response: sounds like a good story! maybe you can write it? lol

Are you serious? The Perfect Man, duh! ;) I mean, Hermione, bake cakes? Uhm...no. It's a cool idea though. But I just don't REALLY like the way you kind of copied the movie sort of completely. Then again, this is just the first chapter. I'll probably like it better next time ;)
Good luck ;)