I am writing a non-porn story for other forum, and I thought it would be interesting to explore naughtier and darker sides of my imagination. I have read quite a few stories about monsters and girls and I saw one staple: Girl is usually either somewhat tame, or chaste for a long time. I realise the fact of breaking such inhibitions and giving in to pleasure is a powerful message, but lets consider the alternative.

The girl, who is more than willing to experiment, fun loving and have more than healthy sexual appetite. And lets place a tentacle monster somewhere in her world. What is it to her? Wouldn't it feel tempting to just try out such a creature? After all she wouldn't bulk from trying a new boy or a girl, or toy. Or preferably all three at once.

Plus there is the whole aura of confidence and passion once she finally decides to throw caution to the wind and give in to fun. Of course until she notices that she got way more than she bargained for, or perhaps just discovers that her tricks do not work like they worked on boys.

The creature just want tire victims out before it has them for a snack?
or
She gets lost in a labyrinth full of wanton tentacles
or
she gets all messy and slippery and slides back every time she tries to get out?

So, do you think the idea is attractive? workable?
Any twists, tips or scenarios? Or perhaps somebody wants to write something like that. Or she/he did, but I didn't find it?

It's a shy and lonely tentacle monster, hiding in the laundry room, ready to slither down a drain at a moment's fright. Which is why it takes our sexually aggressive heroine to initiate the fun times. And it takes several laundry nights to seduce the monster, which is not at all what she is used to since if she's horny, she can easily find a guy at the market, on the subway, at a bar. The challenge turns her on though...

That is the point. I feel that temptation and seduction might be more powerful source of tension.

Nice scenario btw. I think that introducing one more character would thicken the plot. Perhaps girl's boyfriend (of husband) would introduce her to such creature to spice up the relationship, and something would go avry
or...
she seduces a wrong man for a one night stand and goes with a keeper of such creature. (i imagine it as a version of this scene: just with more foreplay

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Originally Posted by sirhugs

It's a shy and lonely tentacle monster, hiding in the laundry room, ready to slither down a drain at a moment's fright. Which is why it takes our sexually aggressive heroine to initiate the fun times. And it takes several laundry nights to seduce the monster, which is not at all what she is used to since if she's horny, she can easily find a guy at the market, on the subway, at a bar. The challenge turns her on though...

- "Oh no! A tentacle monster! What should I do? It would ravish me!"
<<pins it under her>>
- "I said, "it would ravish me"!"

That is the point. I feel that temptation and seduction might be more powerful source of tension.

Nice scenario btw. I think that introducing one more character would thicken the plot. Perhaps girl's boyfriend (of husband) would introduce her to such creature to spice up the relationship, and something would go avry
or...
she seduces a wrong man for a one night stand and goes with a keeper of such creature. (i imagine it as a version of this scene: just with more foreplay

- "Oh no! A tentacle monster! What should I do? It would ravish me!"
<<pins it under her>>
- "I said, "it would ravish me"!"

and ravish her it does... the suction, and the multiple arms, ruins her for mere men... but at least her laundry is always clean.

Maybe the tentacle monster is shy. He's ashamed that he doesn't look like a normal human. In order to get his tentacles sucked, he goes to an adult book store and uses the glory hole stalls. Our heroine, looking for an anonymous dick to suck, is in the opposite stall. Imagine her surprise when a tentacle, rather than a cock, slides through the hole. But she does her best to suck it, and eventually the two bond and become lovers.