WALT write a timed recount about a time
when we did something special with our whanau or family.

Write about:

·when and where you did something special

·who was with you

·what you did (think about the order you did things)

·how you felt and why you felt this way.

By Claudia
Fairbrass

The Really Great Holiday.

On the last school
holidays I went to Queenstown. I went with my mum and dad and my sister. We
stayed in a hotel. Me and Lillian got big beds. We got a fridge in our bedroom
and in the fridge there was a bottle of milk and some other drinks but you had
to pay for them. Me and Lillian got a toy each from a shop. I got a lamb.
Lillian got a monkey and a lamb. We got heaps more toys and stuff. It took a
long time to get there but we bought a party pack to have in the car and we had
toys in the back of the car. The last night in Queenstown, we went to a park
late at night. We met some friends. After that we walked across the beach
because the park was next to the beach.

Next
steps

Try to use some descriptive words to create
a picture in the mind of the reader When listing people, put yourself last e.g.
Lillian and I…