Writing a story!

Writing a story!
This is a story about a girl called Kiko Suzuki, she is an angel that came from heaven to restore peace to the world.
She can only do so by reuniting the angels of all colors. They all have musical insturments to defeat the bad guys, and
Have expressions.
If you wish to make a chraracter...
please write
Nameex. May Imai)
Ageex:1
color: (ex:brown)
expression(ex: Love)
Siblingsex:yes, with Kiko.She is her older sister)
musical insturment: (ex.tambourine)
When she/he comes into the story ex. Kiko meets her at a park)
Yes, there can be twins, or sisters.
If you don't like the picture selected on your chosen color, please submit the new picture and I will post it.
Please no boy angels, but there will be boy characters.
Please no more other color-angels, except for the ones I made, plz.
Remember to read the story, once the first chpter comes out in September!
And a hyper girly-girl angel.
Name:Kiko Hirugata
Age:14
color: lavender
expression:peace
Siblings:yes, with Naumi.
musical insturment: Microphone
When she/he comes into the story: Dude, she is the main character!
as human:
Name: Ren Tsuki
Age:14
color:indigo
expression:kindness
siblings:none
musical insturment:guitar
personality:quiet but tough
When she/he comes into the story: At Kiko's school.
human:
Name: Emma
Age:14
color:orange
expression:happiness
siblings:none
musical insturment:flute
personality:always positive and happy, careing, and a bit childish
When she/he comes into the story: At Kiko's school.
personality:always positive and happy, careing, and a bit childish
Name: Naumi Hirugata
Age:17
color:green
expression:
siblings:none
musical insturment:violin(she uses it like an arrow or if she plays a chord
the sound waves r so strong its like a sword peircing through u)
personality:she is loyal to her duties but will follow her heart every chance posible without
hesitation. in her human form she teaches kenjutsu (kendo+jui-jitsu) to young kids.
she is always sweet to her students and friends but can get serious in an instant
when a challenge pops up that she has to take. very competitive and will jump into
anything recklessly which will probably be her biggest weakness.
Pink
purple
red
yellow
light blue
yes, she is an angel, but dark. She used to be the white angel.
Yuuri Saito angel of darkness and anger
18
dark, on the dark side. eventually becomes good. u will have to read the story... mua ha ha.
this is when she turns good.
white

This is a very cliche story idea. Magical instruments to defeat "bad guys"? How
un-interesting. Try to make a more interesting way of defeating the enemies such as:
One "colored angel" could have a lion/deer or something of that sort to fight with.
And what's up with that "she came down from heaven to restore peace"? It should be
something like, "Athena the goddess of wisdom has sent you too root out the
mulitcolored angels. And protect the world from the evil that shadows it." I kind of
makes it more interesting and takes from the cliche side to it.
Just saying, to make your story more interesting and getting more views try some of
my ideas.