i loved this one as well looking forward to the 3rd part wondering if prehaps sakura will show off her strength like she has in the naruto series or prehaps she meets other dark demons with itachi like his parnter or runs into other light ones like her old family prehaps the snake sanin or sasake see her and what her as well but i really like the idea of sakura being pregant which could prehaps be a very special thing that never usually happens the birth of a baby demon prehaps their is a fight over her and the child love to see her have twins a boy & a girl i cant decide which i like better

just some random thougths hope you dont mind but whatever you do please keep writting kay i really love this paring in this kind or story enjoy the rest of your day

Hmm, a very good plotline, but I feel like you could have made the action move along faster. You spent a lot of time on the exploded moments, and that made the story hard to understand in parts. The characters were a little off, mostly Sakura, considering that she's such a headstrong, capable woman. It was really really hard to think of her in the submissive way you had her in this story. Other than those small things, overall it was very enjoyable to read and I definatly encourage you to keep up the good work!