It's still hard to know what you look like with all the rest of the head missing.
The parts you drew are pretty solid work. Don't really know what else to say.
Maybe the lips look a little too flat, you might want to work on that.

.. I think the mouth could be titlted up a little bit.... but.ahh well . Anyway, great work, solid foundation. You might want to try improving on the eyes though... kind of looks wierd with the iris circular while the stuff around it looks flat.