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Edit: I changed the previously terrible looking icon.

Please don't rate or review this until you have seen the whole thing! Anyway, this cartoon shows a man's attempts to actually shoot an arrow at a target without having said arrow injure him in some crazy, horrible way... It took me a few weeks to make and is about two and a half minutes long! Reviews will be appreciated.
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Reviews

Rated 2 / 5 stars2009-01-09 09:56:05

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2008-05-09 23:54:31

That was retarted...but so retarted it was funny

Its not for all r 10s but it was funny. You could do better though. One very specific thing about the animation that you could fix, the bow string is going to come back at the point the arrow contacts it, not evenly over the whole string. Good luck, I look forward to seeing more from you.

Rated 4 / 5 stars2008-03-25 03:15:11

Pretty good :]

Nothing bad I can say about it
Cept for Epilogue wasn'nt too good
What was the bomb doing there?
Make a sign or something behind him saying l[Archery Club]l
Then it could be better :D
And show someone from the club putting the bomb there or something
Graphics weren't too bad either. Keep practicing and making flash :D

Rated 5 / 5 stars2008-03-25 00:47:33

Rated 4 / 5 stars2007-10-29 23:14:07

pretty funny

its not a bad movie and the animation isnt bad. defenetly something to work on. one thing you should keep is the movie references. I would not say the back to the future reference was the best, but movie or video game referances help with humor, alot

Thanks for an honest opinion. I would have done some other reference, but there are few to no other references possible to use that would fit in anywhere into that particular kind of flash. Could you immagine how silly it would look if out of know where the archer went, "This is Sparta!"?.!,. Lol, that would be weird. :D