It takes place after Twilight forgives Trixie for what she did in the episode "Magic Duel", and Spike doesn't buy it. Twilight learns from her friends how Spike really feels for her and now she has to fix it.

Ever since they got back from the Crystal Empire, Spike has been having nonstop nightmares about Twilight actually sending him away and it soon begins to haunt him. Luna sees this and decides to pay him a visit.

A stand alone story. Celestia chooses a successor and gives the position of Princess of the Sun to her and losing her immortal life. The New Princess sends word to Twilight and Spike who visit the Celestia. one last time.

After sending reports to Celestia, Spike falls into a coma. Fearing it's her own fault, Twilight goes to the Princesses and eventually ends up before an Elder dragon and realises she may have failed as a caretaker, a friend and as an older siste

Spike, now out of college, moves in with his adoptive sister Twilight at Manehattan to start on his first book. While he stays there however, Twilight and her friends become quite attached to him... AU Humanized SpikexManeSix Harem

Despite using a fresh concept you rushed through this and the whole Twilight is immortal has been disproven. Sorry but this story was just another cheap attempt at producing tears courtesy of Alicorn Twilight.

Feel free to rewrite this and make it better. Maybe make it a multi parter. Then we'll see just how good this could be.

Meh. Not exactly the most creative piece on FiMFiction. I'd say the scenes that are not directly pulled from the show take place in about two or three minutes total, and are not very original. Any potential conflict this could have had is resolved instantly before they can even become an issue. That does't make for a compelling story, and it's not something most people want to read, regardless of what they say in the comments. Even the worst stories have people who compliment them.

Aw, man. Don't tell me you got suckered into that whole Twilight immortality nonsense. Do you know how many bronies took that seriously? ...Or did you just want to write this story? Forgive me, but fanfiction has been known to be taken seriously. For one, it was never stated directly that any alicorn is immortal. Still, nice story anyway.

3297163 Sorry but the whole Twilight is Immortal because she's an Alicorn is a very cliched trope by this point and Meghan has stated that "Twilight will not outlive her friends". It's become an idea that like Fluttermac has been done to death and rarely gets any sort of fresh take.

3297955 Yeah, Black Kyurem knows that the whole immortality thing was merely made up by bronies and was never stated at any point in the show. Ah, so that shipping is as persistent as Scootaloo chicken, is it? It never ends... What to do, what to do...