Ok cool startrekfan001, here is the script for the first scene for the first episode.Episode One (Unexpected Voyage): Opening CreditsScene 1(Deep Space)A massive flash erupts for a second, then two ships come into view the U.R.S Andromeda and the U.R.S Saviour (The ships go past the camera, as the camera slowly watches the ships).

(U.R.S Saviours Bridge)The crew is hard at work on their consoles. Captain Matthews is sat on his chair in the centre of the Bridge browsing his staff at workCaptain Matthews: How soon Lieutenant Clarke?Lieutenant Clarke: Less than 5 minutes, sirCaptain Matthews: (Curious) Good, is the U.R.S Andromeda keeping up?Lieutenant Clarke: It appears so sirCaptain Matthews: Good! The last time they was with another ship their engines cut off and it was a week until they were fixed! Lieutenant Clarke: It's an old ship sir. My mother served on that ship. I am surprised it hasn't been decommissioned yet (Speaks sad). Sir, the Andromeda is hailing usCaptain Matthews: On Viewer.The viewer turns on and Captain Jackson (Captain of the U.R.S Andromeda) appears on the screen.Captain Jackson (On viewer): Captain, the President has given us orders to patrol Alar V and this means leaving you to approach Earth by your self. Captain Matthews: Don't worry Captain Jackson, the U.R.S Saviour is more than capable of approaching Earth by its self. Safe journeys. Matthews outThe viewer turns off and resumes to looking into space. The U.R.S Andromeda opens a Jump Point and enters it Lieutenant Clarke stares at his consoleLieutenant Clarke: Sir, we are approaching Earth. On viewerEarth zaps up onto the screenCaptain Matthews: Is the Prometheus there? Well Lieutenant is it? I want a good look of it and a tactical analysisThen Earth fades on the viewer and the U.R.S Prometheus shows up on the screenLieutenant Clarke: Type 6 Battle Cannons, 4 Nuclear Powered Gun Turrets, Alpha 3 Type Engines and Compact Titanium Hull. That is one shipCaptain Matthews stares at the screenCaptain Matthews (Two seconds later): That is one warship. In fact its the best in the fleet, Lieutenant Clarke dock with Space Dock Safari and then meet me on the Prometheus's Bridge, we have work to do. Captain Matthews leaves sceneLieutenant Clarke: Docking in 5, 4 ,3 ,2 1. Dock!(Outside View of the U.R.S Saviour)The U.R.S Saviour docks with the Space Dock Safari

heh, first episode released hea? wait another year and a half mate :-)

edit: i just tought of something. how about if we would wait with the human characters (modelling and anim8ing and stuff) until makehuman releases? it will have clothing and hair in it. its indeed not going anywhere fast, but are we?

i'd say we now just focuse on objects. bridge, ships, space animation etc.

No it wasn't a secret, I said earlier that we was going to use MakeHuman and the ONLY raeson I am using it is to make results more faster and effienct thats all. And hihoslilver I understand what your saying and I have modelled my first hand (Ages ago), but I am still going to use MakeHuman. So then what do we think to the script? No one except wolven anim8or has commented on it.

The script looks fine.The only issue I saw was where you wrote, "Captain Matthews: Good! The last time they was with another ship their engines cut off and it was a week until they were fixed!"The "was" here should be "were" for proper grammar.

O yeah I just noticed that, thanks guys! And it's only the beggining part of the script and does not contain any important parts of the story line, meaning its not an important scene its more like an introduction scene

regarding the text: i have the idea that spicy is not native english or american, since the text overall is a bit filled with errors. maybe you should assign someone native english to correct all grammar mistakes?

(not wanting to be picky, but if you hear bad grammar in the movie or so, it looks kind of clumpsy)