This is written quite well however it is not my cup of tea. Why? Because it is about someone putting themselves down and that doesn't sit well with me.

Everyone has something that is beautiful about them and beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Besides there is the media who likes to say that people should look a certain way. This world puts too much emphasis on vanity instead the quality of one's personal traits.

Yes, technically we all want to be beautiful. However does society really have to say that it is the be all and end all of life.

How many lives of children are saved because someone has outer beauty? How many animals are saved because someone has outer beauty? Does outer beauty stop war from occuring? Does outer beauty stop people from dying?