Comments about What Becomes Of Love That Falters by Valerie Dohren

a beautifully written piece of the loss of love,
but sure if we remain loyal and true
then love will come again..we must have faith,
maybe it will be not the love we expected
but it will be love nonetheless
a most fabulous write!
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Valerie, a critic said of Mark Danielewski that he had a songwriter's heart as attuned to heartache as he was to Derrida's theory onthe sign. -- you too have your heart tuned as a songwriter does. this is so beautiful. Kerouac said something like poets carry the tears of thousands of years... your words are like a lightning rod, summoning the feelings of humanity down into a single burst, with you as catalyst. a perfect 10.
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You have an uncanny ability to delve into the arcane nature of human behavior. And equally important, you are a master at staging the literary settings that present so beautifully. I consider you a mentor. Much appreciation.
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A fine poem of sadness that life will deliver, explored with great empathy and skill. Pain too is part of life and must and will be endured, but the rhythem and meter tell of life's pulse and its indefatigable propensity to prevail as does love if we are receptive. Thank you Val.
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had a great comment to this poem but my e-dog ate it.
So now dejectedly I can only say that this to me is one of your best.
Real pain and confusion here the bloody fingerprints all are pointing to you
as the mastermind of crime here.Evidence beyond any doubt you are guilty
of suffering here and must pay for your crime in time.
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Dying love...... What causes it to become so ill? It is one of the saddest deaths on Earth, and if it stays the test of time, from the first magical, shared realisation, you must surely count yourself lucky. Up to your usually standards. excellent
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