Luckily, Nigel didn't press the matter further. Staring at the ceiling, he said quietly, "You'd think it's not that dangerous to be a Foundation psychiatrist, as supposed to an MTF agent or a researcher.

Supposed should be opposed.

2. You can't end something like that! Dammit MissMercurial!

In all seriousness though, that was the only thing I noticed that was even remotely wrong with it. I really liked it and would upvote if it were posted.