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Water Spirit, that was BEAUTIFUL! Well worth the wait. And yowch, three posts for one chapter? Quite an eyefull, but I'm glad you went the extra mile and didn't break it up. I'd have gone nuts if at the end of the chapter Misty was still out and alone. I won't lie, I got a little scared when I saw that line at the end of your post for Part 1. Then I scrolled down. *sweat drop*

Just looked back to page 1, it's been 17 months since this thread started. Just....wow. Your dedication to this is an inspiration to us all. You have nothing short of a masterpiece on your hands. Even though it's not quite over yet, I still feel the need to say, congrats on an epic well done (almost).

And a sequel? Who WOULDN'T like a sequel? If we had our way you'd do nothing but write for us, and it'd never end! *laughs maniacly*

Okay, maybe not. Gotta respect your right to a life and all. Seriously, though, unless you REALLY run out of ideas, we'll probably still be begging for more when we're old and grey. =P

I have a feeling that when you place this fic in the completed fics forum, I’m sure that a bunch more people will be reading this, pokemon fan or not, AAML fan or not, for years to come.

Indeed, I've never been a fan of shipping, however I can't help but eagerly anticipate this Fan Fiction, It is too good to ignore, and indeed, what is one factor to put someone off a story as good as this? It is beautifully written after all.

Water Spirit, What can I say that hasn't already been said? This chapter was worth that wait, and I place great emphasis on that sentence. Indeed, I think the wait was a factor in what made it so amazingly good. Anticipation, anxiety and speculation played a large role, and of course made this chapter all the more enjoyable.

The battle scenes were incredible, they're probably my favourite part, and the latest chapter certainly delivers. Amazing descriptions made it all the more easy to picture in your mind as you read it, the way the emotions of Ash were portrayed as the fight went on, and all the time staying within character.

The sense of mystery surrounding the voice was kept under-wraps rather well, indeed, it was perhaps clear that Ash and/or Misty would confront the Lapras at some point when it was first mentioned, yet even with that possibility burned into our minds it was still a surprise to see Misty confronting it, and indeed a surprise to learn of Wallace and his connection in the entire story.

I can't think of anything else to say really, indeed I suppose you would like some critisism, but alas I seriously cannot think of any bar some minor grammatical and spelling errors, which can and should be overlooked.

Kudos once more WS, and, I am certainly looking forward to the final chapter, I hope it is a triumphant finish to a fantastic storyline.

OH wow wow wow! This chapter was so easy to get glued to tha I forgot if I already reviewed! Well maybe I didn't but I feel like I didn't.

Ah the chapter was so great I'm not myself. I don't even know what I'm typing.

Or maybe I do!

Another wel done chapter, WS. You know, when I first say your name it was on the award for best Shippy fic, and I decided to check it out. I got more than I expected, but I never regretted looking at the list of awards for SPPf fanfictions. You've come a long way, and I'll never stop complimenting your work! (Unless you switch to Advanceshipping. *is shot* I'm sure that won't happen!)

I think that british spell centre instead of center.
SInce i&#180;m here &#236;&#180;ll praise your story. I haven&#180;t read the last chapters yet, but i liked what i&#180;ve read so far. Make that last chapter for history books!

WS I have been in love with this fic for over a year now, Your fic is awesome and real. I can watch it all happen in my head as I read it, you should go into writing as a profession(sp? I know mine sucks)

Hello my friend, we meet again
It's been awhile, where should we begin?
Feels like forever
Within my heart a memory
A perfect love that you gave to me
Oh, I remember

When you are with me I'm free
I'm careless, I believe
Above all the others we'll fly
This brings tears to my eyes
My Sacrifice

We've seen our share of ups and downs
Oh how quickly life can turn around
In an instant
It feels so good to realize
What's in yourself and within your mind
Let's find peace there

When you are with me I'm free
I'm careless, I believe
Above all the others we'll fly
This brings tears to my eyes
My Sacrifice

I just want to say hello again
I just want to say hello again

When you are with me I'm free
I'm careless, I believe
Above all the others we'll fly
This brings tears to my eyes
Cause when you are with me I am free
I'm careless, I believe
Above all the others we'll fly
This brings tears to my eyes
My Sacrifice, My Sacrifice

I just want to say hello again
I just want to say hello again

My Sacrifice

I hope you like it. See u l8er. ^^

Formerly known as Brian Powell

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Thanks for the card, SkiksPokemon Impact (PG13):
Series: 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 (Cancelled)
Starring Black Jack, a veteran pokemon trainer who saves the lives of others while breaking necks of his enemies in cold blood. You want action? You got action!(Continue or Reboot? That is the question.)

I finally read those long chapters! Best ones yet!
Can't wait for the last one!

In pokemon R/B/Y, there was a graveyard called pokemon tower where dead pokemon were laid to rest. In G/S/C the spot that was known as pokemon tower is now a radio station. So basically, they were like, "Screw the graveyard, we're gonna destroy it and put a radio tower there instead! Nobody's gonna miss the pokemon anyway; they're dead, right?" that's just cruel...

Congrats too!! Though I reckon you seriously deserve more. ^^;;
But winning Best Chaptered Romance/Shipping Fic...you've done a great thing for Pokeshipper! lol
Congratulations and Thankyou! Over these holidays, I'll be reading it all over again.