I would like to say that I really enjoyed this tale because to gave this really heavy topic and gave it a almost happy spin on it. I like how you didn't spend this tale focusing on something very literal (i.e. a containment breach, average life of a worker) you spent your time talking about a very symbolic topic witch covers a very important moral problem when it comes to the foundation. Keep up the good work I really enjoyed this story.

I think you misread the use of the word "funny" in the piece? It doesn't really seem happy at all, especially since the repetition of "it should be funny" ends with "it's sad". Furthermore, the events referenced, as in the line "a breach, a break-in, a shootout or another million things that can happen, do happen. And that's where it all ends, with a bang, a blast, a boom or a thousand other horrors" don't particularly seem to be intended to convey happiness.

you spent your time talking about a very symbolic topic witch covers a very important moral problem

Furthermore, there are some errors, like the lack of punctuation after the phrase "It should be funny". Unless the author is intended this to be a poem, there needs to be a period at the end of those. Also, at the very end, the capitalization of "We Secure / We contain / We protect" is inconsistent.

(plus, you don't need to sign your name at the end of your posts, since we can already see your username at the top of every forum comment you make.)