A fantastic one shot - I do hope you're going to write some more stories. You've captured their voices beautifully and the sensuous descriptions were perfect... very tender, erotic, touching and hot all at the same time.

I love your story! It's so awesome and beautifully written! You stuck to the characters really well! You should totally write more like this, hahah. I would favorite them all! I've written a few myself, care to check them out? You don't have to if you don't want to, haha. Seriously, your fanfic is awesome!