My Sweet, Lovelady (Need Crits: Good, Bad, and or Ugly…Hehe.)

Apr 27, 2012, 09:31 AM

Verse 1
I’m really needing you, for the rest of my life, now. Where have you been?
Tell me, who should have known it? You were there for me all along.
The pride and joy of this mine heart’s arisen!
So deep with inside you, do I belong.

Lovelady, oh precious, Lovelady,
I love you so, how well you know.
Never let me go, my sweet, Lovelady.

Verse 2
Your eyes they brightly shine, within the depths of my soul. Darkness runs and hides.
Your name, so high have I given, above all women of all kinds.
I cherish you more than diamonds, besides,
Nothing compares to your sweetness, divine.

Tony I think it’s hard to understand express it more in words for everyone, more of a story, don’t make it sound to much like a poem. Remember that is just my opinion. I hope this makes since to you. I thought this might help you a little. Don’t ever change you style that’s not what I mean.
God Bless

Verse 1
I’m really needing you, for the rest of my life, now.
Where have you been?
I should have always known it’
You were there for me all along.
The joy of my heart is ever rising!
When you say you love me in your song.

Dollbaby, yeah sweet, Dollbaby
I love you so, oh, how well you know.
Never let me go, darling, Dollbaby.

Verse 2
Those blue eyes shine so bright, beaming through my soul.
Dark times runs and hides.
Your name, so specially given,
Above all women of all kinds.
I want you more than life and besides,
Nothing compares to knowing you’re only mine.