Oh, definitely sappy! Nothing wrong with a bit of sap... and congrats on completing. You'd only have told me off if I'd been singing Happy Birthday on the 18th of next month. Great story, finally ended with the team not being mad - of course!

No it was a great ending to the story. Glad that Tony was alright and with Gibbs help ready to talk about his mothers death and what his father did to them. I can understand his fear but it took a lot of strength for him to talk about what his father did. But at least now there is evidence to put Tony's father away. Excellent ending!

Sarah

somebody chapter 20 . 4/27/2011

hi,love the story and please update soon!

somebody's sister chapter 20 . 4/26/2011

Hey! So I'm a new reader to your story and I LOVE it! This is awesome but soooooooo very sad! I think you should kill Dinozzo Senoir. Your write it is a little OOC but in a good way. Personally I think that Gibbs would be all protective of his team esp., Tony 'cause Tony's been there the longest so I liked it. I also liked how you didn't just stop after Tony killed James like most people do. If you had I would've been so mad, leaving like that! Then there's all of the cliffie's you had it didn't really bug me when I wasn't caught up but now I am you really need to downsize on them! (jk) So I guess this is goodbye for now (until your next chapter which better be soon or else) One (or two) question(s) first: How long are you making this? Can Tony even sign himself out? How did you think of this storyline? How did you come up with some of the names you used? And last(but not least) When will you update again?

Enjoying the story so far, it looks to be pretty interesting. :-) You've got Abby down pretty good...I smiled while reading her response when Gibb's called her...very nicely done!

Ahhh...nice Gibb's! That Tony would need help to get to the car shows just how bad off he really is...he usually doesn't accept help unless he's seriously injured, and this would point to some serious skeletons in his closet...unresolved issues that need to be delt with. Looking forward to seeing Tony actually opening up with Gibb's...from what I've seen so far...he is in a position where he pretty much has to talk now. :-)