Again, lots of grammatical errors, but a really good story, so it's all forgiven. I feel so bad for Theresa, that's not fair at all. I also feel bad for Kristoff... I understand what TJ is going through and everything... but it pisses me off. Poor stupid boy, just dump the girl!

That was super good! I loved the emotion and the way that it's not an uncommon thing happening, but you still made it feel very original. I would, however, suggest that you get somebody to edit it because there were a lot of distracting grammatical errors that distracted from it.