A nice ending for the characters 3 I enjoyed it. But, and I know this is a comedy, the mention of America bothered me a bit. Just a bit, lol.

Para Dise chapter 1 . 2/10/2008

LOL go Isis! If only it were that simple...

Missus Immy chapter 1 . 8/22/2006

One thing before I review, the goddess of love and fertility is supposed to be Amon. I'm not saying there's anything wrong with the fanfic, I found it extremely funny how Isis is bossing King Seti I around. I especially loved the last part when she said something about Nefertiri and America(even if there were no Americas, back then, yet). Yeah, I know, I'm a history and facts freak. But love your story nonetheless ]

Wow, I read this, my own fanfiction, and realized that I don't like it at all. The emotion feels false and I've written Anck-su-namun a little whiny. It needs work, but I am no longer interested in this genre. *sigh* Oh well, I'll just leave it up here anyway. My only excuse is that I wrote the whole thing in one hour and I meant it to be funny but it accidentally turned out semi-serious. *is embarrassed*