So sad... The Fifth Element is one of my favorite movies. I never really thought about Korben dying and Leeloo continuing on; I'd wondered if she would follow him. Very true to the character, and so bittersweet. Made me tear up a little. Wonderful little story :,)

Crimson chapter 1 . 2/13/2010

I have read thousands of fan fictions, but this is the first to make me cry. It's simle, but beautiful, happy, but sad. I look forward to reading more of your works.

*sniffs* ver well written, and I LOVED IT, but also... YOUR A BAD BAD PERSON! *evil glares* HOW COULD YOU! (in all seriousness, I'm jokeing, kinda, I see your point in how she HAS been around for that freakin long, and that this is what would most likely happen, but I STILL hate you for writing it into exsistance, well, not really hate, so much as... feel sad for them... also, if you must know, I'm running on nearly no sleep, so if I make no sense or appear to be rambaling... sleep deprevation D)

I thought your fanfic was lovely and deep, especially considering the length. Yes, Leeloo was designed immortal, and a weapon. There's also no reason that she'd necessarily have been created capable of having kids. And considering her DNA sequence, it'd be darn near impossible that she and Korben would be compatible. It reminds me a lot about the book Stardust. Good story. Poor Leeloo. Perhaps that's why she was put into that sarcophagus for so long.

This is sad, poignant, beautiful. And the first fanfic I've read for this movie and a wonderful way to start off :) I love the image of the melancholy smile you've evoked here, and I like that you don't sugarcoat what life for Leelo is like. And the part where she's listing off "T" words is really spot-on characterization.

Her people, her creators, are equally powerless.

Lovely line. And so true.

Sometimes she paces, weaving her hands through her bright hair. Often she simply sits, staring down.

Such simple actions, but they tell so much about how she's feeling, the resignation and thread of hope... love this part.

Beautifully done! Glad you decided to give ficcing this film a shot :)

This is so sad. With my reviews, I'm trying to do that constructive criticism thing where I tell people how to improve on their fanfic's, but I siriously can't find anything to complain about. Short and sweet, it's rare to have good angst on here, but you've gone and pulled it off.