Snort. Sakura agreeing that "guys don't work right until we knock some sense into them" is pretty funny, seeing how she was the one who needed knocking sense into with her fangirlish ways before the Lifestream thing, not Naruto. Then when they met she was the one who was rude and went all berserk.. She's always using Naruto as a punching bag too, whereas Naruto isn't using Sakura as a punching bag, so there too Naruto is the one who has his head screwed on straight (it's actually pretty disturbing how in anime canon and anime fanfics nobody sees anything wrong with abuse..).

Shane chapter 32 . 9/11/2014

I hope i get to read an update soon, you're a fantastic writer. This is definetly one of the best stories i've ever read on this site!

Shane chapter 30 . 9/11/2014

It's about time! I mean damn, why is it in every love story everyone's like "He's gotta figure out The girl likes him by himself," is NO ONE practical enough to just tell the dude? Would it really ruin the romance cause he found out from someone else? Would the chick be like " oh, don't love you cause someone else said so"? Of course not!

Sorry, the rant just kinda happened

Shane chapter 18 . 9/11/2014

How is it one moment Kyuubi's Naruto's best friend then next moment he tears into her and Sakura? It seems completely out of character.

Shane chapter 11 . 9/10/2014

I hope Jiro dies soon, he's so idiotic and irritating. Honestly he makes canon Naruto look like a genius.

Good story so far. I was kind of wondering when Sasuke kills Naruto. You are kind of unclear. I have seen you say the retrieval arc, but the events show it happening during a mission in Shippuden. Other than that and a few grammatical errors here and there the story is excellent.

Yo. thanks for updating and congrats at the job. Even if it sounds like the job that a computer nerd in a macho action movie would have.
BURN!
Yup, I just burned you. Deal with it.
Either way, I really like your story and am quite impressed with how you did the Jashinist arc.

You kidding me of course this is worth my time :D
Most stories that caught my eyes were mostly not updated or will never be updated if you consider the date and some kind of important excuse which kind a made me lose hope but seeing this fic be updated is like a gift for me ;D
Im not much of a reviewer but reading this chapter made me think your writing is still interesting as ever even if it has been awhile