Great job! I loved how House sat with Wilson throughout the whole night, just waiting for him to wake up. Can't ever get enough of seeing House's concern about his friend when it seems that he doesn't.

Fanfiction of the House/Wilson variety generally focuses on Wilson's attachment to House, and not vice versa. It makes me very glad to see someone looking at their relationship from the other side. Great job.

holadios chapter 1 . 7/8/2008

Aww. I don't even read House/Wilson slash usually (or pre-slash), but I read this and really enjoyed it. You wrote both characters perfectly. I have one nitpick for you though - when people get ventilator tubes pulled out of their throats, they are given ice cubes to suck on for water - they are not able to drink liquid water. I just wanted to point that out - don't worry; that one detail didn't really distract from the story as a whole. Great work!

Great story. :) You really managed to get inside House's head - I love the way how he tries to talk himself into going the way he always had, but just can't. It's hard to find a pre-slash Hilson fic that's not too sugary, and even harder to find one where they stay in-character, but this is one of them. LOVED the final line: "Feeling oddly sentimental and wanting rather badly to slap himself, House thought that really, he’d like to be there every time Wilson woke up." It's just so... House-ish and sweet at the same time, which shouldn't be possible, because House doesn't do sweet. Somehow, you pulled that off. Great job! :)