General- Yes, goku was right. BPM is 72, not 144. So I suggest you to change it. Better be safe- Noticed many 1/2's on the Lowest diff. So I think you'll need an Easy diff??? Maybe???- Check your map folder, is this map supposed to have 3 osb files?

Lunna's Normal- 00:56:216 (1) - I think this spinner is too short. If you want to, you can change it into something like this http://puu.sh/mBenM/c8b3ebea7b.jpg- 01:09:133 (4) - I don't understand what this notes follow, there's neither vocal, drums or piano in this part. Try this instead http://puu.sh/mBeqV/2009f8f5f1.jpg- 01:20:800 (1) - Hmmmm, I concern about this slider's readability since its path is barely visible. I you could make a "hole" inside this "curly" slider that would be great http://puu.sh/mBeJC/1897213806.jpg

GudbaiOooo, U stick with DS all the time- 00:08:925 (4,1) - 00:13:091 (2,3) - These two are the only time you stack a circle in a slider head. While I'm actually pretty okay with that, stacking them as such doesn't really represent the song. As you can hear, they both have really strong piano sound which will be better complemented with a movement- 00:47:466 (1,2) - To be honest, I dislike this overlap ._.- 01:18:091 - Maybe add a circle here? I don't really know why you left this part empty http://puu.sh/mBfib/2ab8c5adcc.jpg- 01:19:758 - same ^ http://puu.sh/mBfkb/79378f75f0.jpg

00:50:800 (1) - Dont't do this, this is a normal difficulty and the slider shouldn't be so weird in shape, try a different shape00:58:925 (2,3) - Unstack this and make it flow down or diagonally 01:05:591 (3,4) - ^01:20:800 (1) - Inexperienced players won't be able to read this

i hate pp wrote:

Hey

Nice map

Normal

00:50:800 (1) - Dont't do this, this is a normal difficulty and the slider shouldn't be so weird in shape, try a different shape00:58:925 (2,3) - Unstack this and make it flow down or diagonally 01:05:591 (3,4) - ^01:20:800 (1) - Inexperienced players won't be able to read this

I mean other than that its a great map. Cool SB.

Good luck with rank

Ouch this is the second time yiu modded this... I shouldnt havê kudo'ed you sorrh...

Promise00:34:133 (1) - i feel this should be in a different shape, it doesn't look right to me just going straight up and down, and maybe lower the slider velocity because idk if newbies will be able to follow so well00:52:883 (2) - this should be placed a little higher above the other note to look better in my opinion, makes it easier to read01:23:300 (2) - 01:23:716 (3) - ^ i feel these two should be less spaced, even maybe just a little, from the note that follows, and maybe place all three a little higher up, but not too much, x256 y320 seems right

overall its pretty good, but one last thing that might be of consideration is to make the circles size a little bit bigger, 3.5 seems good to me.

Mjenk5150 wrote:

Promise00:34:133 (1) - i feel this should be in a different shape, it doesn't look right to me just going straight up and down, and maybe lower the slider velocity because idk if newbies will be able to follow so well Hmm I like the current one, I think it express the emptyness of the piano.00:52:883 (2) - this should be placed a little higher above the other note to look better in my opinion, makes it easier to read I guess it's probably fine, the low BPM doesn't make it a problem to me.01:23:300 (2) - 01:23:716 (3) - ^ i feel these two should be less spaced, even maybe just a little, from the note that follows, and maybe place all three a little higher up, but not too much, x256 y320 seems right I can't make anything about those since I'm follow the DS through the entire map

overall its pretty good, but one last thing that might be of consideration is to make the circles size a little bit bigger, 3.5 seems good to me. But it is CS 4 already :3

[Promise]00:55:800 (1) - Same as Normal. I don't see a problem here, they are different, in the normal it was indeed out of place but the spinner here is following the drums, so I don't need to make it too heavy for an advanced like this01:18:091 Add a note here01:18:925 ^ i'll keep a break here01:19:758 ^01:23:300 (2,3,1) - Try this pattern: https://puu.sh/sZxpV/8397144bd7.png