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Review:

ollieb says:I loved this- it was beautifully written and the story was exquisite as well. You tend to use pathetic fallacy a lot and its always very effective, but i'd like to see other kinds of metaphors as well in future - i'm keeping an eye out for more of your stories!

Author's Response: It's funny because when I was writing this, I asked myself why I was using pathetic fallacy again. Now that readers have noticed it too, I am going to have to use another poetic technique to create atmosphere. Thank you for pointing that out - it's very helpful for future things I write. :)

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! It's wonderful to hear that you loved this story. ^_^