I admit - angst is not my usual genre. In fact I usually stay well away from it, preferring instead fluff and happiness, but oh my gosh was I glad to have ventured into this story. The feelings in this were amazing, and I could sense the tension and fear in him with every word. I was on the edge of my seat with every word. It was absolutely chilling the way you used such fabulous imagery to paint a scene. Even though the scene made me want to curl up in a ball and cry, haha. It was such a short chapter and yet I found myself fully immersed in it, and definitely wanted more by the end! I've never read the poem, but the way you phrased everything definitely was reminiscent of a panther, stalking around his cell.

Thank you so much for a wonderful read, I'm so glad to have clicked on your story!

I've never read the poem, but that was a really powerful one-shot. The image you painted of Sirius in his cell was so vivid and real. I could see him pacing in my mind.

The grammar and spelling seemed fine, I didn't notice anything odd.

The syntax was lovely. Everything was written and phrased just beautifully and added so much to the piece. I still can't get over the image of him pacing.

Great one-shot! I really loved it!

Author's Response: IÂ´m very glad you liked my one-shot.
The poem is originally in German. I recited it in school, and since then it became one of my favourite poems. I always had that immage in my mind, of someone in a cell. iÂ´m glad you could see it too ;).
thank you very much for reviewing.