I loved that chapter! And no, you didn't go OOC at all, you just took the characters to a place they haven't yet been on the show, and adapted them to this while remaining true to them! That was a brilliant follow-up to the previous chapters, and well worth reading! Please write more stories/expand on this soon!

Short but sweet; hope the next had some Ria and Eli in it! Good job, please update soon! (:

Eun-mi chapter 3 . 10/20/2010

Aww Cal and Gillian are so cute together! Lol at the bit about Cal's bad boy image; once again you portrayed the characters exactly as they appear on the show, and the whole story is totally believable! It would be nice to see more of how Ria is holding up in the next chapter though... pretty please?

Eun-mi xx

Eun-mi chapter 2 . 10/17/2010

Another fantastic chapter, full of emotion and, once again, completely true to the characters! Your story is a delight to read, and please, please, please write more soon, I can't wait to find out what will happen next! I love the way your story isn't predictable like so many others on here are too!

This story is fantastic! No really, the way you have captured the emotions in the story is amazing, and you have remained true to the characters throughout! And THANK YOU for writing a fic about Ria, she is my favorite character but no one seems to write about her! Please write more for Lie to Me (and Ria) soon!