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(Verse 1)Beware, i gave ya fair warnin, i'm comin with heatgot people runnin thru streets sreamin as i'm hummin on beatsi'm becoming a beast, sounds of thunder drummin to rumble your seatsget to sendin hundreds of tweets, tell em Atone's a Gunmanhe summoned Big Pun and he's huntin the weakso get to jumpin and pumpin ya cleat'scuz i'm stuntin, you can't stomach cuz i'm comin with somethin so sweetyou can lable me an M.V.Pi'm the V.I.P when it comes to bein a sick emceecan't stop me when i drop these hot sixteensi got sick dreams, came to make the streets talksay my name like i hit the sweet spotas soon as the beat drops, i got you in deep shocklike "oh my god, Atone got that heat locked"and homie I warned you, now all people can do is mourn youI'm born with this skill to kill, yo I put it on you

(Hook)I gave you fair warning, beware...beware...beware... [2x]

(Verse 2)Fuck a magazine i'm a rappin fiend ready to attack the scenedon't need internet blogs to help my passion gleami'm after dreams to make my tracks crack the seamthese other emcee's rap with schemes and lack the preento back their themes that their tracks will screamSo walk with me as i talk with glee and rock with Easei get to poppin so watch me drop with steesecan't stop my breeze, you get dropped to your kneesjust give up, cop a plea, i'm pure milk, the rest of you is cottage cheesei can't help the way i flow it's like i got a diseaseto spit hotter sixteens than alot of supremesIt's Open season when i 'm on the mic like i wrote a thesisso take notes as i spit dope cohesive hopeful meaningsand you can quote my peices to haters who hope i'm leavinbut nope, i'm breathin, and my lyrical attacks are a stroke of genius

(Hook)

(Verse 3)yeah the kid is back so just give me the mic, i don't need hype, i got skilli will just kill and get ill and spillsomethin real when i spit to hit yai get ya spinnin when i rip thrulike a hurricane storm, ah, i warned yayou get torn up, i'm just doin what i was born toSo for me this is normal, i was sworn to just swarm yawhen i spit it visious so listen and invisionwhen i'm kickin these visuals like a ritualto hit ya with somethin to make ya condition criticalmy missions habitual, your becoming the recipricalof somethin original with syllabuls to fit the moldjust call me a criminal the way i slip thru holesand steal the show, just here me go, as i kick it like a dojoso for those that don't know, i'm no ordianary joe shmothe names Atone, and i just let the flow go

Eedee wrote:This was noticeably better than your usual stuff. Especially with the rhyme schemes. They were consistent as hell.

I had a 4th verse written as well, i'm workin on Takeover 2, so i was gonna use this piecce, and the 4tf verse i wrote, for a remake of "Forever" by Drake/Wayne/Kanye and Em, but, didn't save the 4tf verse and last night my computer shut itself down, sooo, guess i won't be doin that