I take it english isn't your first language? The people here, including myself, can be very mean sometimes, because of the frequent unrealistic requests from people new to Japanese.

I can't help with your sentences, and neither can anyone else because your english doesn't make sense. Not actually trying to be mean here, but it doesn't.

As richvh says, "And did I remind you of..." doesn't fit. Do you mean "And did I tell you...."

In any case, these are strange sentences, pulled out of context so it makes it hard to translate. Partly because we can't understand why you'd want such a wierd excerpt from something that's apparently an incomplete conversation.

"And did I remind you of"(as in "The voice acting can be bad. And did I remind you of the controls in this game? It get's horrorble all of the sudden.")

Iwark wrote:Konnichiwa, minna-san. Ogenki desu ka? I have something to tell you.. I'm intrested in seeing sentences translated from American English to Japanese..I'm wondering of the translation, and I can't think of it.. That's why I need you help.. I want a direct translation. To translate, you must translate it's feelings, just it's sentence. If you don't, the translation will be poor. I want someone who can translate. Today's sentences:"It's camera angles are poor. And did I remind you of the voice acting? It gets cheezy all of the sudden.." If someone can translate it, I will be thankful.

As I've tried to tell you in the chat, present your own translation, and people are more likely to help you improve it, than if you just present sentences and demand (yes, this looks more like a demand than a request) that they do all the work for you. You also haven't presented any context (Is this the director talking to a cast member? Two fans talking together?), you are asking contradictory things (Do you want a direct (literal) translation, or one that preserves the feelings?) and your original is ungrammatical.

Translation into American English:"Its camera angles are poor. And did I tell you about the voice acting? It gets cheesy all of a sudden..."

"And did I remind you of"(as in "The voice acting can be bad. And did I remind you of the controls in this game? It get's horrorble all of the sudden.") Wakatta?
I want I literal translation.

At first, I thought he was talking about a movie. Then I couldn't tell whether or not he was talking about the movie as someone who has seen it, or if it was supposed to be dialogue of someone making the movie.

The game controls thing comes out of nowhere.

Also, is this a game that the person being spoken to has already played? If so, why is the speaker telling someone about a game they already know about, and if not, how is he "reminding" him of anything?

The conversation is confusing. I don't know what's going on, so I sure as heck can't even try a translation. If you know what he's trying to say and what the situation is, I'd love to know.