Thank you so much for taking the time to comment Amy-Jay! I've had a backlog of English coursework to tackle and i have only just finished it all. So when I saw your message it encouraged me to write more :) therefore I made the new chapter longer for you ;) heheheI hope that you enjoy it! And please give me any constructive criticisms, I despise rereading my work even though I know you have to bla bla bla.... lol x

Afternoon At The...

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I, Audrey Hilson, lead an uninteresting life up until my bedroom door was shoved open by an old uniformed man who proceeded to look down his massive nose at the orphanage matron who was my life's terror...

mumbled "Getting There"

Hey there! Im a new author and I really need feed back on my movellas. Please check them out and give me any constructive criticism to help me develop my writing further! :) Im also really interested in reading other people's works xxxx

A very original plot, you wrote it really well and kept my interest throughout. weldone! x :)

Falling for the...

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This is a short Novel about a girl named Julia who thinks she's safe with the decisions she's making, however, she's unaware of what the truth may have in store for her when meets her 'lover' via interent...

Thanks Jadieee_xo! Please like/ favourite the story if you think its worthy :)I'm going to check out your work and do the same xxx

Of Rags and Riches

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Agnes' sixteenth birthday fell on the Reaping Day, so naturally no one paid the orphan any notice... Until she got chosen as tribute for District 13 along side Kevin Nadima the son of the districts mayor....

Loved it, you kept her character intact and built up on her more. But the pace moved too quickly after the scene of her old best friend, I am curious about it the pony thing seemed too dismissive. That tiny detail is the only thing in a flawless chapter. I cant wait for what you have coming! x

The confessions...

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Description: Mila is what you call average. Nothing more, nothing less. She tends to hide out in her room or as she calls it, her sanctuary. She doesn't expect anything from anyone, not even her parents,...