Haha! Lol, that ending was great! Vegeta and Marron are too cute! I've always had a big old softspot in my heart for Marron-she's just too great of a character and sadly underdeveloped in my opinion. I love what you are doing here with her.

Its great, this is one of my favorite stories I've read in years! I can't believe that I over looked this, but then again I wasn't reading/writing fanfic for a while there and it looks like this story was published during my hiatus! I sure hope that you have more in the pipes! This is really awesome!
I have always wanted to write Fanfic featuring the Kame crew but my attempts fell flat. I also love Androids 16, 17 and 18. I have a story about the twins thats highly unfinished. Its on my goal list to finish it this year!

OMG! I loved this chapter! Poor Marron, Poor 18, Poor, poor Marron! I am totally in love with Marron right now! You write her so amazingly well! Please, please, please, I beg of you! I will review every chapter of every DBZ fanfic you have if you will only write more Marron-centric fics! This is amazing!

Looks good. A little sad that it is over but I'm hoping for a sequel. To be honest, it might have been better to leave it at the end of chapter 4. The last line just seemed to complete the story if you don't do the sequel. Anyways, nicely done!

You can't be serious about this being the end it was so disappointing nothing happened. This story had so much potential and you end it like that. You must do a sequel or continue it because that was disappointing. Besides the ending it was shaping up to be a real good story and I liked the idea