The music I was listening to while drawing -> [link] (Look up meaning of lyrics if you want to)

(( This is a headcanon of a moment just between sister-brother. You may assume that she had a husband/partner that prefers her hair to be shorter or she simply has the intentions to do so because of what he said being there with her if she cuts her hair.))

I am aware that Jack doesn't know anything but his name after he is reborn, but Jack's sister yells his name; so Jack assumes he kept some kind of promise before he died and simply said out of nowhere " Believe me, I was telling the truth. "

No. I think when he said that, he meant that he was being truthful about wanting to take whatever guy that pressured her to cut her hair. But yeah, since he became a guardian, he wasn't unable to do so. And I'm guessing his sister just missed him, so she was calling him a Liar for not helping her, and leaving her side.

HEY GURL YOU BETTER READ THIS!>:IWell hey there darlin'.Something I always notice about your comics-While the drawings are facking adorable and awesome, the language is a wee bit iffy. You've got some pretty weird grammar going on, and it's kind of stilted and it doesn't really flow well.I always correct this stuff automatically in my head, but this time I decided to write it out.You're certainly not obligated to use this, and I know this comic was a quick sketchy one so I understand if adding in fixes takes effort you just don't wanna put into it, BUT. I feel like it deserves better. The drawings just have so much emotion in them, and it looked like you were going for some pretty meaningful feels in that last panel, and I just really want the type to reflect that, know what I mean?

SOOOO I figured I might as well give my revisions to you. JUST IN CASE you felt like using them. : DSO HERE.

Pippa: "Hey, Jack?" "Do you think I should cut my hair? There’s this…boy, that I know…and he likes girls with short hair."Jack: "What? No!"Pippa: "But Whyyyyy?"Jack: "Look, if you really wanna change your hair, go ahead. But don’t let some random guy be the reason for it! I'M your brother, and I say you look fine just the way you are."Pippa: "So… do you think I’m pretty?"Jack: "Of course! I think you’re beautiful, and no matter what, to me, you always will be."Pippa: "Haha! Thanks, Jack. I love you."Jack: "Love you too, kiddo." "You know, if a guy ever pressures you into changing who you are," "Don’t worry about it. I’ll deal with him! I’ll always be there for you little sis. I promise!"Pippa: "Jack!""JACK! Where are you? You…you…" "YOU LIAR!"Jack: (Thought bubble) "She’s calling my name?"

(And then I would say you should put this next line in where you have the picture of her just crying with jack hiding behind a tree while he thinks the above thought bubble.)Pippa: ”You said you’d be here!!”

Jack: "But…I am here. I’ve /always/ been here."

YaaaaaaaaaySorry for being annoying.u_uAnd I feel like that last line fits better with him not having a clue about what the hell is going on.So I'm gonna sit here and hope with all my heart that you use this.But it's okay if you don't~*looks up*GODDAMN this thing got long.O_O

Yeaahh xDThanks anyways. I knew someone is gonna correct my crappy dialogues sooner or later. It happens often XD I don't really focus on proper use of grammar since after all, just like you said; the comic was a quick sketchy one. In addition, it's the internet xD