Wow, that was some powerful stuff. It tells of hope for life , with the only freedom in the next life. This is only my take one it.
I created my first poem today, in a way like I saw you do. but in my own words. I can say from the heart and original. But it was written both by ego mind and soul in accord. Sending you a virtual hug from Missouri.
Peace be with you, friend
:)E