Damn Whit... You started this story in what 2001? Its about to be 2004. Do you ever plan on finishing this story? You waste too much time playin around. You should have finished this like this year... Or the year before that...

They walked up the stairs cautiously. Wondering what was waiting for them. When they reached the last floor it was just like the previous one: perfectly normal.

“Ok.” Evan said slowly.

“Well everything’s fine here.” Whit replied.

“Wait Whit. No its not.” Parsonsr stated.

“What do you mean by that?” Whit asked.

“Remember, there’s no light shining here.” Parsonsr reminded. “And you guys do know where the light comes from right?”

“Doesn’t it come from an Ampharos?” Dan guessed.

“Precisely.” Parsonsr answered. “So the question is where’s the Ampharos?”

“And where did all that blood come from?” Whit asked.

“I wish you would have forgotten about that.” Grassman frowned.

“I guess there’s nothing left to do expect go back. Right?” Evan questioned, waiting for the others to answer.

“Right.” The teenagers agreed.

They all turned around and started to walk. But suddenly a bright light started to flash from behind them. Casting a large shadow on the wall that resembled a dragon! Once again fear struck the gang when they saw the mysterious shadow. Dan slowly turned around to see what the figure was. Every second growing more frightened. When he finally stopped turning he saw what looked like a Charizard that had to be 6’1. With dark red skin, a skeleton tail, and intimidating dark evil demon blue eyes. Dan attempted to say something to the others but he felt as if he had lost his voice. So he poked their backs to get their attention. The others slowly turned around to see the mutant Charizard staring at them with unblinking eyes. The teenagers were all terrified. They stood there trembling as the monster continued to stare. Finally Evan broke the silence: “Where the hell did he come from?”

hey pokemon hunter who r u callin a n00b. Whit and myself regestered in 2001, lets see, you regestered in 2003, who's the damn n00b now. I am one of the few oldies who still posts here. and i barly post herecause of the damn n00b invasion friggin n00bs thinking they're better then the vets. shut your trap opke hunter untill your a friggin vet,

axmaniac2000 Its about time you came back I thought you'd never come back. Yeah I pretty much rewrote the entire story. Ashpokemaster2 I'll take a look at your FF. I'm glad you find my story scary. That what I was tryin to make it at first. Originally the story was supposed to end when The Creature died. But I wanted it to be a long story, so I continued with it. And I also started wanting more action than horror in it. But I plan on goin back to the horror stuff probably.

Man he looks just as scary as the creature. Grassman thought. The Charizard’s face expression turned even more evil.

“I don’t like that look in his eyes…” Parsonsr gasped.

“We could use your help right about now!” Evan said, looking at the evolutional Eevee.

“Yeah help us out!” Whit insisted.

“Its your fight.” The Eevee replied.

“WHAT?!” Everyone shouted.

“Stupid punk.” Dan responded, getting a pokeball out of his pocket. “Go Poliwrath!” Dan shouted as he threw the pokeball. Poliwrath was released from the pokeball.

“Ok Poliwrath Hydro Pump!” Dan commanded.

Poliwrath fired a stream of water from his belly. The mutant Charizard opened his mouth and blue fire came out! “What the--? Poliwrath watch out!” Dan yelled. The blue fire canceled out the hydro pump attack and kept going until it hit Poliwrath! The water-type pokemon was engulfed in flames! Everyone gasped.

“Poliwrath no!” Dan shouted.

When the fire died down Poliwrath was frozen solid.

"What? Where did he get a move like that from?!” Grassman asked in a horrified voice.

“Poliwrath return!” Dan said, as Poliwrath was returned to his pokeball.

“Ok if it wants to go then here we go! Espeon go!” Grassman replied, tossing down one of his pokeballs. When the pokeball opened Espeon came out. “Espeon psybeam!” Grassman ordered. As soon as Espeon fired his attack, the Charizard opened its mouth again but instead of returning an attack the Charizard absorbed the psybeam in its mouth!

“No way!” Grassman shouted.

The mutant fire-type suddenly flew at Espeon with lighting fast speed and slashed it with its sharp claws. Espeon was sent soaring backwards until it hit the wall causing part of the wall to crumble. The psychic-type then hit the ground senseless.

“What the hell happened?” Grassman questioned. “Espeon are you ok?!”

Espeon didn’t respond. He was clearly knocked out.

“Wow he’s so fast I couldn’t even follow his movement!” Parsonsr gasped.

Grassman returned Espeon to his pokeball and stared at the Charizard.

“Let's send out all our pokemon!” Whit replied.

“Yeah let’s do it!” Evan said.

Whit set out Meowth and Umbreon. He was going to send out Nancy: Meowth’s daughter. But he rethought about it and didn’t. Parsonsr set out Pidgeot, and Arcanine. Grassman set out Primeape and Gengar. And Evan set out his two Voltorbs.

But it was too late Parsonsr attacked the Charizard, but the mutant pushed Parsonsr into the wall on the left making a loud thud when he crashed into it.

“PARSONSR!” Whit yelled.

Grassman, Evan, and Dan gasped.

“What strength”! Evan said in fear.

“We’re no match for this thing we got to get out of here!” Dan said.

"Parsonsr are you ok?” Grassman asked.

“Evan go over there and check on Parsonsr.” Whit said.

“Ok.” Evan replied.

The Charizard watched Evan as he ran over to check on Parsonsr, he was out cold. Suddenly the fire-type flew over and stomped on Parsonsr’s chest! Evan quickly jumped back. “Parsonsr!”

"No!!! Get off of him!” Dan shouted. Whit looked at the evolutional Eevee. It had no motion.

“My turn now!” Whit yelled. Whit attacked the Charizard. He punched it in the face but the Charizard countered by hitting Whit in the leg with its skeleton tail! It then rammed him! The hit was so strong that Whit fell out the window!

“Whit, No!!!!” Grassman shouted in horror. “He…he must be dead, he fell out the window… That’s a long drop!”

“Oh my god!” Dan replied.

The mutant dragon immediately attacked Grassman when he was looking in the direction of where Whit fell. The Charizard grabbed Grassman’s left arm and twisted it! Grassman wailed in pain as the fire-type processed to twist his arm.

“No!” Dan and Evan yelled.

Suddenly the Charizard let go of Grassman’s arm and then slashed his back! Causing him to bleed in the back. Grassman fell to the ground holding his back. The evil dragon turned away from Grassman and glared at Evan.

“Looks like I’m next!” Evan gulped. The Charizard attacked Evan. It set Evan's shirt on fire by using a fire attack from his mouth!

“Ah, crap!” Evan shouted. Evan ripped the shirt from the back off just in time, but then he was bashed into the wall by Charizard's skeleton tail! Once he hit the wall he fell down senseless. The people left standing now were Dan and the evolutional Eevee! Dan backed away from the Charizard as it slowly walked up to him. Soon Dan was leaning against the wall. The mutant fire-type towered over Dan. The Charizard used the same attack on Dan that it used on Poliwrath. Dan became frozen solid, but then the Charizard opened its mouth and this time green fire came out! The fire melted the ice off Dan.

“I don't feel good...” Dan murmured, as he hit the floor senseless. The Charizard nodded his head, and then flew out the window without even looking at the evolutional Eevee. The evolutional Eevee didn't say anything.

Now if everyone who was in the story here, it would really be like old times. We're missin so many people right now. Evan, Grassman, Fredrick, Parsonsr, Chae, DBZfan (Bill or whatever his name was) Wonder if they'll come back...

The evolutional Eevee looked at the gang and it looked like they were all dead.

“How sad they should have tried harder.” The Eevee said in a calm tone. “I wonder if there are any people in this lighthouse.” The evolutional Eevee put Parsonsr, Grassman, Dan, and Evan on his back and teleported to the first floor. When he got there he saw the Olivine City gym leader standing at the corner an Ampharos. She flinched when she saw him.

“You humans have a hospital?” The Eevee asked.

The gym leader looked afraid of the evolutional Eevee

"Ye… Ye… Yes we do.” Jasmine answered in a shakily voice.

"Well then call the hospital for these humans. Understand?” The evolutional Eevee asked.

"Ok, I’ll use my cell phone.” The gym leader replied. As she dug into her pocket her hand was shaking.

“You shouldn't be afraid of me.” The evolutional Eevee said.

"But you’re a Eevee with all the elements of the Eevee forms!” Jasmine said in shock.

"Yes I know what I am. Now hurry up and call them.” The Eevee rushed. Jasmine called the hospital. The evolutional Eevee went outside and put Evan, Grassman, Dan, Evan down on the ground. He then started to search for Whit. It took him a couple of minutes to locate Whit, but he finally found him floating in the ocean. He grabbed Whit and put him by his friends. Soon an ambulance came and picked up the gang. Hmmm. I doubt they’re still alive. But if they are they need more training… The Eevee said in his mind.
"I hate to bother you, but what just happened here?” Jasmine asked. “Why were those boys hurt?”

“Tell me… Do you people have something that will help us get through Mt. Mortar?” The evolutional Eevee asked, ignoring Jasmine’s own question.

“Well we did have something that would withstand the wind in Mt. Mortar but it mysteriously disappeared.” Jasmine answered.

That dragon must have taken it. The evolutional Eevee thought. The evolutional Eevee teleported back to the lighthouse’s top floor. Jasmine and the Ampharos rubbed their eyes.

“Did that Eevee just disappear into thin air?” She asked.

The Ampharos nodded his head.

The evolutional Eevee looked at the eight pokemon still knocked out. “I guess I should take them to the pokemon center.” The Eevee replied.

The evolutional Eevee gathered the eight pokemon around him and then once again teleported. He ended up in the pokemon center. Nurse Joy was startled when she saw him and the eight injured pokemon. As soon as the evolutional Eevee looked at her she ducked behind the counter. “Excuse me miss, could you please heal these pokemon?” The Eevee asked politely. Nurse Joy slowly rose back up.

“Um, sure.” Nurse Joy nervously said. “Just give me the pokemon.”

The evolutional Eevee picked up the pokemon one by one and put them on the counter. “Chansey.” Nurse Joy called out. Chansey came out from the back with a tray cart. Chansey put the pokemon on the tray cart and went into the back with it. “This will take a few minutes.” Nurse said, walking into the back. The Eevee waited quietly for the gang’s pokemon to heal. The mysterious pokemon started to have flashbacks of the mutant Charizard. After 5 minutes went by Nurse Joy and Chansey came back with the gang’s pokemon fully recovered. They jumped off the counter and looked around. The pokemon looked confused.

“You’re trainers aren’t here.” The evolutional Eevee replied.

Meowth and the rest of the pokemon looked at the Eevee. Still confused. “Come, I’ll explain everything to you.” The Eevee said, walking out the pokemon center. The pokemon quickly followed behind. The evolutional Eevee led them to an alley. The Eevee then told the pokemon what happened to their trainers and where they went. He then told that they would go visit them early tomorrow. The first pokemon to fall asleep was Arcanine, then Primeape, Next was Pidgeot. And that was in the first 40 minutes. After 2 hours pasted by only Meowth and the evolutional Eevee were awake. When another 40 minutes pasted by Meowth fell asleep too. The evolutional Eevee was restless through the whole night. He looked at the sky for hours. Eventually 5 more hours pasted and the sun was starting to come back up. “Its time to go to the hospital and see those humans.” The evolutional Eevee woke up the eight pokemon and they headed for the hospital. People stared at them but the pokemon didn’t pay any attention to them. The same thing happened when they got into the hospital. They walked right passed the person at the counter and looked for the room that the teenagers were in. “Being a pokemon sure has its benefits.” The evolutional Eevee said to the pokemon.

The nine pokemon made their way through the hospital looking for the teenagers. They looked in ten rooms and still didn’t find him. But after looking through another five rooms, they finally found them. Everything in the room was white. Expect for the three beds and the two small counters. The three beds were light blue and the two counters were brown. The person in the bed in the middle was Evan. And the person in the bed on the right was Grassman. They couldn’t tell who the person on the left was because he was still sleeping. Evan and Grassman had on the same clothes; they were wearing blue hospital scrubs. Grassman had bandages wrapped around his left arm. They were talking to each other.

“How’s your arm and back?” Evan asked.

“My back is ok” Grassman answered. “The doctors said I didn’t lose too much blood. But my arm is killing me.”

The evolutional Eevee was the first to walk into the room. “Hello humans.” The evolutional Eevee greeted.

“Oh great it’s you again.” Evan said bitterly.

“Why didn't you help us?” Grassman asked.

“Like I said before, it was your fight.” The Eevee replied.

Just then the gang’s pokemon walked into the room.

“Hey you got our pokemon!” Evan said with a smile.

“Of course I did.” The evolutional Eevee continued. “You didn’t think I would leave them in the lighthouse did you?”

Evan’s two Voltorbs came over to see him and he picked them up. Primeape and Gengar walked over to Grassman to greet him. “Give me a hug!” Grassman said, as he started to hug his two pokemon.

“Who’s the human in the bed on the left?” The evolutional Eevee asked.

“That’s Parsonsr.” Evan confirmed. “He’s still asleep.” Evan leaned over and started poking at Parsonsr’s back. “Parsonsr wake up.” Evan started poking at his head.

"What do you want?! I'm trying to sleep.” Parsonsr shouted as he turned around to see Arcanine and Pidgeot approaching him.

“Oh, look who’s here.” Parsonsr said in a cheerily tone, as he hugged his two pokemon.

“How did you humans live?” The evolutional Eevee questioned.

"We just got lucky I guess.” Grassman replied.

“Where are the other two humans?” The Eevee said.

“They’re one room down from us.” Parsonsr responded.

"Well let's go and see if Whit and Dan are ok.” Evan insisted.

“I don’t think Whit is going to be ok.” Parsonsr said with a frown.

“Don’t say that.” Grassman replied. “Whit’s got to be alive!”

“Yeah but Josh… This was like 10 feet above ground.” Parsonsr stated.

“Yeah well… I still won’t believe it!” Grassman doubted, as he jumped out of the hospital bed. “Let’s go see them now!”

“Oh yeah I forgot we weren’t wearing our clothes!” Grassman replied. “Our clothes are in that basket over there.” He pointed to the basket at the right. The teenagers quickly got their clothes back on. Parsonsr returned Arcanine and Pidgeot to their pokeballs and let his Scyther out. Then they all headed out the door. Evan, Grassman, Parsonsr, the evolutional Eevee, and their pokemon started to walk to the next room. Parsonsr was slightly limping as they walked. Making his pokemon worry about him.

“You going to be ok Pars?” Evan asked.

“I’ll be alright.” Parsonsr said.

They made it to the next room. Grassman slowly opened the door to see two light blue beds. The bed on the left had Whit sleeping in it. And the bed on the right had Dan sleeping in it. Whit and Dan also had blue hospital scrubs on too. Unlike Dan, Whit was hooked up to a respirator by the nose. The line on the screen was still beeping so that meant that Whit was still alive! As for Dan he was… snoring loudly which obviously meant he was alive too!

“They’re alive!” Evan said. “Man, Dan sure can snore.”

“I knew they’d be alive!” Grassman replied.

“I shouldn’t have doubted Whit.” Parsonsr smiled.

“Time to wake these sleepy heads up.” Evan said, as he walked over to Dan. Grassman walked over to Whit and stared at him. Evan and Grassman started poking at them repeatedly, until they started waking up.

“Ouch. Ow, my head!” Whit yelled.

Suddenly Meowth and Umbreon jumped at Whit. “Hey guys!” He smiled as he caught them both.

“Mommy is that you?” Dan said dreamingly with his eyes still closed.

“No it’s me Evan!”

Dan shot up from the bed. “What happened?” He asked. “What am I doing here? Where are we?”

“Whoa, whoa, whoa, Dan.” Evan responded. “One question at a time.”

“We’re in the hospital.” Parsonsr enlighten.

"Hey Whit how did you survive?” Grassman asked.

"You remember that armor Ash gave us?” Whit asked.

“Yeah.” Grassman said.

“I was wearing it under my clothes!” Whit revealed, pointing to the broken armor on the left side of the bed. “It also helped that I fell in water.”

“Well, I guess I have to at least see the Pokemon Master before I beat him.” Whit boosted.

“You’re not going to be the Pokemon Master while I’m around!” Grassman said.

“Can we talk about future plans later?” Evan asked. “Let’s just get out of here.”

Evan and Grassman got their friends clothes out of the basket on the left. Dan got out of the bed and put his clothes on. Whit on the other hand stayed in bed and put his clothes on.

“Now can we go?” Evan asked.

“Wait! We have to pay the bill!” Whit said with a grim look on his face.

“That’s all right I’m sure I can pay for it.” Parsonsr replied.

“You sure you have the money?” Grassman worried.

“Sure, I’m sure.” Parsonsr said back to Grassman.

“Then let’s go!” Whit shouted, as he detached the respirator’s line out of his nose.

“You think its alright for you to just do that?” Dan asked.

“What’s the worst that could happen?” Whit asked. Meowth and Umbreon jumped off the bed so Whit could get out of it. Whit leaped out of the bed and landed on his feet. But just as soon as he did his legs give away and he fell flat on his face. Everyone gasped.

“Oh my god! Whit are you ok?” Grassman asked in a concerned tone.

Everyone expect for the evolutional Eevee ran over to see Whit.

“Are you ok?” Evan asked.

“Whit what happened?” Parsonsr asked. “Are your legs broken?”

Whit lifted his head up and looked at everyone. “No its not.” He answered.

“Then what’s the problem?” Parsonsr questioned.

“My… My…” Whit slowly tried to talk.

“What?” Dan asked.

“My… My leg fell asleep!” Whit laughed loudly.

Everyone including the pokemon fell down with their legs up in a cartoonish way.

“Man I thought you were really hurt!” Grassman sighed.

“That’s Whit for you.” Parsonsr said.

The gang walked out of the room, and started to walk to nurse at the counter.

“Excuse me miss. How much do I have to pay to get me and my friends out of the hospital?” Parsonsr asked.

“Its $300.99.” The nurse said.

The gang panicked.

“$300.99! Good lord that’s a lot of money!” Whit yelled.

“Do you have to add on the cents?” Grassman asked.

“I don’t have that kind of money!!!!” Parsonsr cried.

Parsonsr looked back at his friends and saw that they were all staring at him with angry faces.

Kathkat's right. Your description is kinda light... But its still a great story. Dunno if you wanna but heavy description like Kathkat does. But either way, it will still be great. Just as long as you still have fighting in there, and funny characters.

Evan shook Ash’s hand. “Its nice to meet you too.” He said with a grin on his face.

"Thanks for the armor. It saved Whit" thanked Parsonsr as he lightly punched Ash in the shoulder.

“Anytime.” Ash said, as he responded in the same way to Parsonsr.

Ash then faced the rest of the gang, he added, "I see you guys got jumped.”

"Are you going to help us?!" Evan asked as a smile appeared on his face. Evan haven’t been this cheery for a long time…

"Yeah I should. After all I am the Pokémon Master, and that’s what I do best, being the savior of the world!" Ash said as his ego continued to expand.

"Don't forget we saved the world from Wrake, or to you The Creature." Parsonsr said with some sweat dropping from the back of his head.

"Hey how’s Prof.Elm, Mr. Pokémon, Nurse Joy and John?" Whit asked.

"Man I must have missed a lot!" Evan shouted, as he was lost in confusion, wishing that he could understand them.

"They are still trying to fix the stone Pokéball, but it looks impossible to fix!" Ash stated.

Ash scanned his eyes over everyone's pokemon that were out of their Pokéball. There was a flash of green and white. Ash could tell it was Scyther training himself. Dust afloat from the ground. The other Pokémon were in an argument and eventually turned into an all-out brawl.

"I see your pokemon have gotten a bit stronger!" Ash exclaimed with, as sweat started appearing from his forehead.

"OWW!! My leg!" Dan cried out in pain.

"What’s wrong with your leg?" Ash questioned, it was clear he was the same numbskull as he ever was.

Grassman watched the people walk by them.

"I see not everyone knows us yet." Grassman said, raising his eyebrow.

Dan checked his back, arms and his legs, but there was not a single burn, scratch, bruise, scar, or a smear of blood anywhere. Whit walked up to Dan and gently brushed away his friend’s hair covering his ear, as he whispered into Dan’s ear.

"Hey Dan stomp your other leg that is not hurting." Whit snickered.

Dan stomped his left leg, and a sickening, cracking sound seemed to have come out of nowhere. Dan felt major pain rising through his foot, up his legs, and throughout his body.

"OUCH! Damn it!! That hurts!" Dan cried out in pain, as he held his foot and hopped on his other foot gently.

"It’s just as I thought." Whit said.

"What’s the heck is wrong with him?" Ash asked as question marks appeared on his troubled face.

"His bones have gone soft!" Whit said as he put his hand on his chin.

"Man that’s not good.” Grassman replied. “You could really use some milk right now.”

“Yeah Dan.” Whit agreed. “Got milk?” He taunted.

"Don't worry I can dig it…” Dan calmly spoke.

"Ash, why are you dressed like that?" Parsonsr asked. “It makes you look like you’re 20.”

“If I were to show my true self every girl in town would flock over here!” Ash chuckled.

Whit, Grassman, Dan, and Parsonsr sighed, as a large sweat drop dropped down their foreheads.

"I’m just joking.” Ash nervously said. “I'm known all around the world. Duh!” Ash reminded.

"Hey humans the device to get through Mt. Mortar has been destroyed!” The evolutional Eevee said.

“Then what the hell are we supposed to do?” Whit asked.

“Yeah I tried getting through that cave too.” Ash replied. “But every time I tried I was blown back out by some strong wind.”

“I’ll bet that damn Charizard destroyed it!” Grassman exclaimed.

“I still wonder why that Charizard left the lighthouse.” Evan said.

“It must have thought it killed us.” Parsonsr replied.

“A Charizard?” Ash repeated.

“Yes. It was a mutant Charizard.” Parsonsr said. “That’s how we got beat up.”

“Wow.” Ash said.

“Why don’t we just hang out at the pokemon center for now?” Dan asked.

“Ok.” Everyone answered at the same time.

The gang walked into the pokemon center and continued their conversation there.

“If the device is destroyed then that means that there’s no way into Mt. Mortar.” Grassman stated.

“We shouldn’t give up that easily.” Ash responded. “There has to be a way through the cave.”

As they continued to talk, Evan was devising a plan to get through Mt. Mortar.

“Maybe we can just find those scientist who built the thing and just ask them to build another one.” Dan planned.

“But then how would we find them?” Parsonsr questioned.

“Yeah, we don’t even know who they are.” Whit said.

“No we don’t have to go through all that trouble!” Evan spoke. “All we need is something very heavy.”

“Something heavy?” Ash repeated.

“Well none of us are heavy.” Grassman said. “And none of our pokemon are heavy so…”

“Pika, Pika.” The electric-type pokemon said, in a disappointed tone.

Evan returned his two Voltorbs to their pokeballs.

“I’m going to search Olivine City for something useful.” Evan explained. “You guys just stay here and wait for me.”

w00t, first reply. *grins* I like that you have all the Eevees around, they are some of my favorite Pokes. =) You still focus really heavily on dialogue, but I'm not sure that's a bad thing. Sometimes it's the best way to develop a character, neh?