I loved the breakup scene. It was really well written, even though I actually like Duncan and all... still, it was believable and full of raw emotions. I love that he actually blames Veronica for the bus crash because no one even wants to blame himself. Great job!

I love it! It's awesome. I wished you included the fact that Meg had asked Veronica to help during the fight though. But other then that this is extremely good. I hope Veronica and Duncan break up soon. They make the worst couple! Cause Veronica is now different.

i read this on veronicamarsfic and didn't even know you were the author. i really like this, prominently because i could really see it happening, or something near to it. i wonder if you're going to continue this story...?