Friday, July 29, 2016

I have to confess I’ve never
gone to sleep and dreamt about any of my characters, but I do day-dream about them. Especially my
heroes! I live the heroine’s part as I write which is why writing romance has
to be the best job in the world. In talks I used to give I’d begin by saying
how many love affairs I’d had! It always got a gasp, and then a laugh.

Characters come alive when
you write about them, they become real people. I meet this handsome man who
initially can irritate me but I know all will change. While at other times I
fall instantly in love and dream about a life we could spend together.

Does this sound silly? Not if
you’re a writer.

The fact that I’d read
romance long before I began writing helped, and how enjoyable it is being able
to make up my own stories. I’m sometimes asked if I ever run out of ideas.
Occasionally I think I have, but then without warning something will pop into
my head and I’m off again.

What I would like to dream is
a whole story, something made up for me so that all I had to do was write it
down. Wishful thinking.

According to my Collins New
English Dictionary there is also something called a dream-hole – which has
nothing to do with dreaming or even writing but it spiked my interest. It is in
fact a hole left in a church steeple to let in the light, and also let out the
sound of the bells. I’d always thought these slatted holes were for ventilation
purposes!

At the moment I’m creating a
new story. It’s at its very early stages so I wonder whether I’ll be lucky
enough to actually dream some life into it. Only time will tell.

Thursday, July 28, 2016

By the time I introduced Dan as a VERY minor (as in he's mentioned once and has no speaking part) character in This Feels Like Home as a bull riding buddy of Jake's, I already had plans for my spin off series of holiday stories. I was kind of 'hedging my bets' and throwing in some characters I might want to use in a future story. Other than the fact he was a bull rider, I didn't know a thing about him.

When it came time to write the Halloween story for my series, I decided it was Dan's turn to be the hero. The first thing I did was give him a last name. Jenkins popped into my head so I went with it.

Then, of course, I had to flesh out his character. In the back of my head I had this idea of using the Halloween theme of costumes that hide who you really are. So, Dan became a man of many 'faces'. As a bull rider, and a damn good one at that, he is somewhat of a celebrity in his hometown. He has legions of adoring fans, mostly women, but he never is sure if they like him for himself or for his fame. If they'd get to know him, they'd learn he is a down-to-earth guy, despite the fact that he comes from a wealthy family. And although he's considered somewhat of the black sheep of this snobby family, he still loves them and is willing to don a suit to go have brunch at his parents' house because it makes his mom happy. Before 'running off' to join the rodeo, he was a premed major at a prestigious college.

Because of these many 'faces', Dan isn't really sure 'who' he is.

And neither is Kelly Harper. At first, she thinks he's a good ol' boy with an ego the size of Texas, and she wants absolutely nothing to do with him. Been there done that and learned her lesson in the past with an ex-fiance. But as she gets to know Dan, she discovers layers to him that she never dreamed existed. Layers she really likes. If she could figure out who the 'real' Dan Jenkins is, maybe she'll be brave enough to trust him with her heart.

The cover, which I've shared before, turned out so absolutely perfect for this story, I am in awe each and every time I look at it.

Here's the opening paragraph.

Great. An impromptu meeting of the Dan Jenkins Fan Club gathered a few feet away. The combination of floral perfume, hairspray, and cosmetics made Kelly Harper want to gag. As did the simpering, coquettish smiles on the faces of the groupies clustered around this little corner of Texas's hometown celebrity.

Wednesday, July 27, 2016

Dublin has featured in all my Irish novels, even though the
main part of the story takes place in Clifden and Connemara on the opposite
side of Ireland.

In Irish Inheritance, Jenna and Guy first meet at Dublin
Airport, and again at the lawyer’s office on St. Stephen’s Green. I imagined
the office to be in one of the beautiful Georgian houses that border the large
park in the centre of Dublin.

They visit the Book of Kells exhibition at
Trinity College, and spend the evening together in the Temple Bar area of the
city, which is full of bars and restaurants (and tourists!). Later in the story
they return to Dublin, or rather to Dalkey, which was originally a separate
town, but is now classed as a suburb of Dublin. However, it retains its ‘small
town’ atmosphere, with a medieval castle, as well as a wonderful view of
Killiney Bay, one of my favourite views in Ireland.

In Irish Intrigue, Charley goes to Dublin with Jenna for a
weekend. They stay at a 5 star hotel overlooking St. Stephen’s Green – and
every Dubliner will know which hotel I mean even though I didn’t actually name
it! They also attend a film premiere at a cinema on Upper O’Connell Street. I
gave it a different name, but based it on a real cinema that does host Hollywood-style premieres!

In Irish Secrets, Kara and Ryan stay at that same hotel on
St. Stephen’s Green. One day, if my Irish books continue to sell well, I might just treat myself to a night there – it's only about £450 (about $600) per night!

Dublin’s Glasnevin Cemetery features in
this story. It is an amazing place, the final resting place of many of
Ireland’s patriots or, as someone has said, everyone who was anyone in Irish
history. I wrote about Glasnevin before I actually managed to go there, so I
based my description on photos and videos, and a fascinating DVD called ‘One
Million Dubliners’ – because there are over a million graves in the cemetery,
going back to the mid-19th century. I was quite relieved, when I finally
visited Glasnevin earlier this year, that my descriptions of the cemetery, the
visitor centre, and the pub next to cemetery were fairly accurate!

In my current ‘work in progress’, Irish Deceptions, the heroine, Ellie, will
be going to watch a ballet at the Gaiety Theatre in Dublin. I saw a play there a
few years ago, so at least I’ll be able to draw on my own memories for that. I
haven’t yet decided what else Ellie will visit while in Dublin, but there’s
plenty to choose from!

Tuesday, July 26, 2016

They say timing is everything, and that’s especially true
with dialogue. Different people have different ways of speaking—some speak fast
or slow, some are funny on purpose and some are funny unintentionally. Some
have particular ways of speaking that immediately clue the reader in and
identify the speaker.

I typically try to incorporate humor into my characters. How
successful I am, well, I can’t say, because humor is subjective. But at least I
try. Witty banter is hard. There is a timing to it and a delivery and when it
works it’s awesome. When it doesn’t, oh boy. But whether or not my dialog is
funny, it gives a hint as to what the characters are like.

“Because there will be a lot of guys in
one room, obviously, and you didn’t like the date I set you up with last
night.”

Aviva sighed. “Erica, I really
appreciate your efforts, but I think I’d like to take a break for a little
while.”

“Avs, you’re not in mourning, and you
didn’t just break up with the love of your life. You’re alone, and you need a
man. There is no ‘take a break for a little while.’”

Aviva cleared her throat and looked
around the room. What she needed was a new coffee table and a new window shade
and potentially a new roommate. “I don’t ‘need a man.’ I’m perfectly fine on my
own.”

Erica laughed, and Aviva cringed until
the raspy noise stopped.

“I didn’t mean it that way. I meant for
sex,” Erica said.

Aviva spluttered.

“Please tell me you know what sex is,”
Erica said with a look of horror.

Her other roommate was out, if the
darkened bedroom with a wide open door was any indication, but still Aviva
lowered her voice. “Of course I know what sex is. I just don’t see why you’re
concerned with whether or not I get it.”

“Well, if you don’t know, it’s even
more of a necessity. Girl, you’re coming with me and that’s that.” Erica
grabbed Aviva’s hand and dragged her over to the sofa. Right in the middle of
the beat-up, faux-wood coffee table was a printout from a speed dating website.
Erica shoved it at Aviva, and Aviva took it with the tips of her fingers.

The characters are young New Yorkers, which means their
dialogue is supposed to be snappy. The reader is supposed to have fun while
reading.

As he leaned
against the wall in well-fitting jeans and a T-shirt that left nothing to the
imagination, Valerie’s mind said, “Sleep with me.” Heat crept up her neck, over
her cheeks and continued to the roots of her hair. A thin sheen of sweat
dampened the space between her breasts. She felt the sudden urge to fan
herself, like a damsel in distress in an old B-movie. Instead, she ignored her
traitorous thoughts. Her balled fist pressed into her tight stomach.

“Tonight, not
even chocolate will change my mind.”

She didn’t
exactly lie. She had no intention of going to the bar, or of sleeping with him,
no matter how her thoughts might try to sabotage her good intentions. She’d
been fooled by surface finery before, and it had almost killed her. She
wouldn’t let it happen again.

“I will remember
that,” he promised. “But next time you will not get off so easy.” His eyes
bored into hers for a moment, and then he turned on his heel and left.

****

True to his
word, John arrived the following day prepared for battle. With a cursory knock
on the door, he dangled a bag of M&Ms inside the trailer, but snatched it
back before she could grab them. “We are going out for pizza. I will pick you
up in ten minutes.” Before she could answer, he walked out.

John, the hero in this story, is very awkward around people,
very hesitant to show himself to others. Consequently, he speaks more formally
and doesn’t use contractions. I wanted the reader to wonder about him from the
moment he opened his mouth. I also want the reader to see how he relaxes around the heroine as he gets to know her, because his speech changes.

Monday, July 25, 2016

Ana muses about the idea of keeping a diary.During one pre-teen summer, schmancy, floral cloth-covered diaries with "locks" and teeny tiny keys didn't appeal to me. Diaries were for recording successes, and I wasn't the kind of girl who knew the cute boys in school were standing in line to pair up with me.

The how-do-I WIP of my life needed bigger pages, room to cross out mis-written lines. I needed spiral notebooks, narrow lined and narrow margined, so I could get words on a page.

I wrote about serious things. Like where I would live when I grew up, and what I would do. How I would immediately say the right things in casual conversations. How I would be skinny and pretty, know how to make up my eyes to look like deep pools of mystery. How I would be in charge of my life. Be certain about everything.

I ripped out page after page. By the end of that summer, all I had were the yellow cover, hard back, and the wire spiral. School started, and I was tossed back into the pool of social awkwardness without a plan.

Friday, July 22, 2016

A story without conflict is about as interesting as watching paint dry,
and I’m not talking about pointless arguments. I’m talking about meaningful
conflict. Something that matters very much to our protagonists. Something that
is almost a life and death situation. Something that will break their hearts if
it is not resolved.

Generally in a romance the whole story revolves around two people who
either meet for the first time or have met previously in less than happy
circumstances. There has perhaps been trouble between them in the past, or
there is something in the present that has thrown a spanner in the works.

Very often there is more than one thing causing this dissent and the
author has to slowly peel back the layers until the fundamental reason is
discovered and dealt with. While some conflicts can be dealt with quite
quickly, others are far more deep-rooted.

Maybe they had been friends once but had fallen out over something that
now seems trivial. Therefore when they meet again they will need to work very
hard to get over it.

Or maybe they’re pushed together through work and she falls in love
with him, only to discover he already has a girlfriend. But then she sees this
woman out with another man and debates whether to tell him or not.

These are only a couple of instances but the possibilities are infinite.
The secret is to keep the reader’s interest engaged, to take them through the
many ups and downs until the inevitable happy ending.

Thursday, July 21, 2016

She's ready, he's not; it's a battle of the sexes with a twist. reads the tag line for this story.

"I want you to be my sex tutor." is the opening line.

In the story, Chloe creates quite the bucket list for herself, with this show-stopper as the number one item. She's almost thirty and feels like she's never experienced real passion. On the outside she seems wild and carefree and totally sure of herself. On the inside, she's vulnerable and insecure. Here's a peek inside her head at the beginning of the story:

She shrugged in what she hoped was a nonchalant manner. “I don’t know. I mean, everyone always talks about how great sex is, but to be honest, I don’t know what the fuss is all about.” Maybe it was her. Maybe she
was doing it wrong. “So.” She toyed with the napkin under her drink. “It’s kind of on my bucket list. To have a night of really great sex.”. . .“Well, there are other things on my list, too. I want to get this one out of the way.” To silence the everpresent whispers of self-doubt plaguing every relationship she’d ever had.

I couldn't just pair her with any old guy who would take advantage of her crazy plan. Jason, who sees through the sassy exterior to the hidden uncertainty beneath thinks of her like this:

Yep. T-R-O-U-B-L-E.
One, because he hadn’t been lying earlier when he told her he’d never had a one-night stand. And he wasn’t about to start with his best friend’s baby sister. Second, and more importantly, even his body’s instinctual reaction to her sexy flirting couldn’t make him forget the flash of vulnerability in her eyes earlier. Would she ever tell him why she was so insistent on going through with her crazy plan? There was more to it than bragging rights with girlfriends. If she told him, would it explain why she played the vamp and tease to hide that vulnerability?

And throughout most of the story, even though she's never quite sure of herself, her faith in Jason is one thing that never waivers.

He clicked off the set with the remote. “Nope. We have more important things to do.”
“Like checking something off my list?”
“Yep.”
Chloe’s heart pounded. Was it finally time? She licked dry lips. “Well it’s about time, Williams.” Then she paused. “Wait. You said we were going for a drive.”
“We are.”
Was he planning on taking her to a hotel somewhere? Wasn’t that kind of sordid? “Why can’t we just...um...do it”—she gulped—“here?”
“Here won’t work for what I have planned.” The low drawl made her knees weak.
She swallowed. “Remember, I’m pretty much a beginner. I think here is fine. Unless you want to go to your place?”
“We can go wherever you want.” He threaded his fingers through the loose hair at her temples and tilted her face up. “You’re in the driver’s seat.” The deep blue of his eyes scrambled her brain.
She lost herself in the depths for long drawn out moments. “Then I want to stay here.”
He smiled, but shook his head. “Not an option for what I have in mind.”
Yikes. She was in over her head. Like she’d always known. Better to be in familiar, comfortable surroundings. “Really, my bedroom’s right down the hall about ten feet away.” She gestured. “Won’t that be easier?”
“Nope.” He brushed a kiss across her forehead.
“Come on.” He tugged her hand.
“Jason, really, I—”
“Trust me.”
Calm settled over her, stilling the twist of nerves. She did. Enough to follow him to the ends of the earth if he asked.

Chloe and Jason's story was definitely a fun one to write. I was thrilled when it won the honor of Best Contemporary Short in the 2015 IDA Contest. :)

Wednesday, July 20, 2016

Paula’s secondary character re-invented herself as the main
character in the next novel.

While I was writing the first chapter of Irish Inheritance, the heroine, Jenna,
makes a brief reference to Charley on the second page. Maybe Charley would lend her the money for a quick trip to Dublin. When
I wrote that line, even I didn’t know whether Charley was male or female! By
the time I got to the second chapter I’d decided that Charley was female – short for Charlotte, but only my grandmother
calls me that – as she explains later. During the story, Charley developed
her own personality, often giving Jenna advice in a straightforward
matter-of-fact manner. She also met assistant hotel manager Steve, and at the
end, she and Steve joined Jenna and Guy in Ireland, ready to establish a Living
History group at Mist Na Mara house.

As far as I was concerned, that was the end of it, as I had
no plans to write a sequel or series. By the time Irish Inheritance was published, I’d already started another novel,
set in England’s Lake District. Then I had an email from Rebecca, my publisher,
saying, ‘You have an opportunity here for a spin-off story about Charley.’

My first reaction was, ‘Okay, I’ll think about that once
I’ve sorted out the story I’m writing at present.’ In fact, I’d been having
problems with that story, having got to Chapter 12 or 13 twice, deciding it
wasn’t working, and going back to start it again.

The day after Rebecca’s email, I suddenly thought, ‘What if
I move this story to Ireland?’

I thought about it for a few more days. Changing the
location to Clifden in Connemara involved far more than renaming places or giving the heroine a different name. It meant
changing the original heroine’s backstory, and her personality too. The heroine
in the original story had been less assertive than Charley, so I needed to
change her whole approach. I soon found that this was easier than I had
anticipated, as Charley was already a ‘real person’ to me. In that sense, I
didn’t have to wait to get to know her as I wrote her story.

I also found that the new story that developed didn't give me the same problems as the original story had done! Maybe Charley knew all along that this was her story, and not that other heroine's!

Irish Intrigue

Charley Hunter returns unwillingly to Ireland to complete
the filming of a TV drama series. She still hasn't come to terms with the
tragic loss of her husband there two years previously, and the last thing she
expects is an instant attraction to an Irish veterinary surgeon.

Luke Sullivan's life is full as he tries to balance caring
for his two young children with his busy rural veterinary practice. After the
break-up of his marriage, he vowed to leave women well alone, but finds himself
drawn to Charley.

While Charley struggles with the re-awakening of her
emotions, Luke faces a series of unexplained crises at his clinic, as well as
an impending custody battle with his ex-wife.

How can an English actress and an Irish vet reconcile their
different worlds? And will their relationship survive when Luke believes
Charley has endangered his children's lives – and then betrayed him?

Tuesday, July 19, 2016

They can be instigators. In A Heart of Little Faith, my
heroine has to work late and she needs someone to watch her daughter, Claire.
The neighbor steps up and the neighbor’s brother, the hero, entertains her with
a board game until my heroine arrives:

Even before she entered, Lily could
hear Claire’s giggle, and the telltale popping sound of “Trouble.” Wondering
who Samantha had subjected to her mercenary daughter, Lily frowned and walked
into the living room. The sight stopped her dead in her tracks. Gideon.

“Claire,” she whispered, but
neither Claire nor Gideon heard her. Claire was too busy giggling
uncontrollably. Her brown curly hair bobbed as she bounced around in
excitement. Lily observed with wonder Claire’s ease around Gideon. Since her
father died, Claire’s contact with men had been limited. Lily rarely dated and
Claire tended to be shy around strange men. Not so with this man.

He turned around and nodded at
Lily. “Hello.”

The sound of his voice, even that
one little word, made Lily’s stomach go all jiggly inside and she swallowed as
she watched his eyes rove from her wet, raggedy hair to her water-sloshed
shoes.

Oftentimes, I use them as a way to explain things to
readers. Because young children, especially, don’t know about certain things,
they can ask questions that a main character can answer, thus providing the reader
with information they wouldn’t otherwise necessarily know. For example, in TheSeduction of Esther, I needed to explain a few Jewish terms to non-Jewish
readers:

“Hi, I’m seven and I go to school
downstairs. Why did you say Shabbat Shalom?”

Dave smiled. “It means peaceful
Sabbath and we say it to each other on Shabbat. Why don’t you and your dad go
inside and sit down. Join us at the oneg
afterwards for snacks. We have cookies,” he said, with a wink at Zoe.

Children also provide a way to demonstrate a main
character’s traits. For example, in Skin Deep, I used Valerie’s niece to show
the type of person Valerie is:

Back at the house, John disappeared
upstairs, while Valerie searched for Sarah. She followed the noise of children
laughing into the basement. Her nieces and nephews played board games, and
their laughter, whining and arguing filtered up the stairs and through the rest
of the house. Valerie stood on the bottom step and waited for Sarah to see her.
When Sarah looked up, Valerie caught her eye, and Sarah ran over.

“Will you do my makeup now?” Sarah
asked as she bounced up and down.

Valerie smiled at the endless
energy. After her own hike, and the tension caused by dealing with John, she
just wanted to crawl into bed and sleep. But she’d made a promise to her niece.
And, as John had said, she was a good aunt.

Children are funny. They see things differently than adults.
They’re often much more literal. At the same time, their imaginations are
usually bigger and they’re more open to new things. So putting them into a
situation and watching them handle it is often amusing.

Monday, July 18, 2016

Ana goes back for gems of advice for introducing characters in "Self-Editing for Fiction Writers"
"Once you understand a character well enough to bring him or her to life, we don't have to know where the character came from."

"When you defined your characters the minute you introduce them. you may be setting boundary lines that your readers will use to interpret your characters' actions through the rest of the book. But if you allow your readers to get to know your characters gradually, each reader will interpret them in his or her own way, thus getting a deeper sense of who your characters are than you could ever convey in a summary.

"Sketching out your characters for your readers is just plain intrusive. It's a form of telling that is almost certain to make your readers aware that you the writer are hard at work."

"It's often a good idea to introduce a new character with enough physical description for your readers to picture him or her. As with describing your settings, all you need are a few concrete, idiomatic details to jump-start your readers' imaginations."

Friday, July 15, 2016

Back story is an essential in almost all novels, something that happened
weeks or months or even years before the story begins. Something that tells the
reader a little bit about the hero/heroine’s character, but not too much all at
once. To be effective it needs to be fed in gradually, usually through dialogue
or each character’s thoughts.

I develop complete back stories for my two
main characters before I begin to write, then add and improve as I go. It’s
amazing how their identities begin to emerge - until they eventually become real
people in my mind. Real live people whose story I’m telling!

I don’t use every tiny detail that I’ve written down. Back story is
simply an aid, put in where necessary as a flashback in the character’s mind, or
in dialogue. Of the two options I find dialogue works better because the reader becomes
more involved.

And of course everything needs to be woven in seamlessly so that the
reader doesn’t see it as pure back story, simply an interesting and necessary
part of the book. I actually find it equally as interesting delving in to what’s gone on
before I ‘met’ my characters as I do writing about them.

Thursday, July 14, 2016

Secondary characters are hugely important in a story. Most of the time, unless we're talking stranded in the wilderness or snowed in by a storm type of scenarios, our characters are interacting with other people throughout the course of their stories. Secondary characters often help us provide depth to our characters. They can act as a sounding board or a shoulder to cry on. They might be part of the back story. We don't want our background characters to take over the story, but more often than not, they are vital to it.

Ben O'Connor is the grandfather of Jessica Hart, the heroine in This Can't Be Love. Ben only has about eight total pages (if that) of face to face interaction with Jessica or Zach, but his role is vitally important. It's his absence in the story that sets up two conflicts between Zach and Jessica.

Jessica arrives at her grandfather's secluded cabin needing to get away from the emotional fallout of a failed relationship. She craves the peace she'll find there, but also knows spending time with Pops (as she calls Ben) will help her regain some equilibrium and put things into perspective. Instead, she finds Zach has taken up residence because Pops has gone on a month-long trip to trace his roots in Ireland. Jessica quickly lets Zach know in no uncertain terms that his service as a house-sitter is no longer required and the door shouldn't hit him on the way out. Zach, however has made a promise to Ben to take care of the place while he's gone, and he doesn't take that likely. Not to mention that he's sublet his apartment for the duration and doesn't have any place else to go. Jessica also comes to quickly realize that she wouldn't be able to handle everything that Zach is able to in Ben's absence. So, although neither is really comfortable with the idea, they wind up calling an uneasy truce and decide both will stay at the cabin.

As they get to know one another, an attraction grows. Zach is reluctant to act on it, however, because he doesn't want to betray Ben's trust in him by hooking up with his granddaughter. For her part, and for very personal, emotional reasons, Jessica is desperate to hook up with Zach before Pops gets home.

Ben doesn't make a physical appearance until page 188 in the book, but his specter 'haunts' both characters for most of the story. When he finally does make an appearance on his arrival back from Ireland, we still don't hear much from him, aside from now its his presence back home that's now keeping Jessica and Zach apart since they're no longer living in the same place, until almost the end of the story, where he provides the much needed shoulder to cry on and some sage advice that helps Jessica put her feelings for Zach in perspective.

I never knew either of my grandfathers, so it was fun to create and live vicariously through this imaginary character. And for a guy who wasn't around a lot in the story, he certainly played a huge role in it.

Wednesday, July 13, 2016

Write what you know, “they” say. So sometimes I despair of
myself. I’ve had heroes who are archaeologists, veterinarians, undercover cops,
and even a volcano expert. All of which required lengthy research (especially
about volcanoes!). Each time I’ve wondered why I didn’t choose occupations for
my characters that I already knew something about.

In IRISH DECEPTIONS, my current ‘work in progress’, my heroine is a ballet
dancer. What do I know about ballet? In a word, nothing. I never had ballet
lessons as a child (or indeed any dancing lessons), and I’ve never even watched
a ballet on the stage, apart from a few scenes in musical shows.

So why did I choose this occupation for my heroine?

The answer to that is for a purely practical reason. I
needed my heroine’s career to be cut short by a car accident that badly injured
her knee. Not enough to disable her seriously, but enough to end her
professional career. Okay, so she could have been an athlete of
some kind e.g. a gymnast, or swimmer, or tennis player – but at the same time,
I needed her occupation to be something that would bring her to the Mist Na
Mara Arts Centre in Ireland (which has featured in all my Irish novels), so
dancing seemed to be the obvious choice.

Could she still teach dancing even if she was unable to
perform? Preliminary research showed that this was a career transition made by
many dancers, even after injury may have halted their performing careers. So
far, so good.

Then came the finer details. Yes, I know the names of the
famous ballets, I even know what ‘up to 5th’ means (not sure how I know that!)
– but the more complex movements in ballet? Not a clue! Google and YouTube
proved useful, of course, but I needed some reassurance that I had got things
right. And in this situation, it was not a case of ‘write what you know’ but rather
‘find someone who knows about what you want to write’. Fortunately I didn’t
have to look very far, as I remembered a friend’s daughter has been a dance
teacher for about 20 years. As a result, she and I have had several phone
conversations, and even more email conversations. She is so excited about my
heroine being a ballet dancer, and hopefully, with her help, I will get my
facts and ballet terminology right.

Tuesday, July 12, 2016

Beginning a story is not as simple as it sounds. You don’t
just sit down and write. Well, maybe you do, depending on whether or not you
like to plot ahead of time, but ultimately, some amount of editing is required
in order to make sure you are beginning your story in the right place.

Surprisingly, at least to me, is that one of the ways agents
and editors can easily spot an inexperienced writer is because they start their
story in the wrong place. Just because the story in your head starts at a
particular point doesn’t mean the story should actually begin there.

Oftentimes, the place you originally start the story is
actually backstory, information that should be sprinkled through the rest of
the story that tells the reader what happened prior to their meeting your
characters. That part isn’t essential to the progression of the story.

Additionally, you want the beginning of your story to hook
the reader enough so that they want to continue reading. While scenery is
pretty and sets the stage, it doesn’t convince the reader that she should spend
her valuable time reading your book.

I’ll admit to having a difficult time with this, and
whenever I go back to my books, I always think I could have done it better.
But, here’s the beginning of my book, Miriam’s Surrender. What do you think?

The line from Casablanca flitted through Josh’s head. “Of all the
gin joints in all the towns in all the world...” He fisted his hands at his
side and closed his eyes.

This morning, he’d hurried to work for a meeting with a new
client. He’d worked on the presentation for weeks—a structural redesign of an Alumni
Club for a local private school. It was different from most of the projects he
had worked on before, and it sparked his creativity. They’d been awarded the
contract and this morning’s purpose was to meet the client’s daily contact, the
person Josh would work with throughout the span of the project.

He’d walked into the red and black conference room of his
architectural firm and froze. Sleek, black, flawless coiffed hair.