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Mojo, Hoodoo, Voodoo, Hexes, Curses, Spells, or Magic; whatever the name, mystic forces tend to follow strict rules. Only when these forces mix, do they become unpredictable: something two brothers and many ponies learned the best way possible. ·Robomac

When "best friends" Matt and Pat find another cardboard box that sends them into a different universe, they are suddenly thrust into Equestria and must discover a way out without getting themselves killed in the process. Will Matt be more stupid than usual? Will Pat piss off everyone in Equestria? Will their friendship survive unscathed? Will the next episode of TBFT be uploaded in time? Will this gag ever end? Probably not!

Two Best Friends Play crossover with MLP. If you haven't seen these guys before, go watch them. Watch them all. Watch them or I'll eat you.

I mean, the punctuation fuck-ups are par for the course on the FimFic front page. That I get, and frankly I didn't expect anything more. No, the part that bothers me is when people write generic, shitty HiE fics and throw in the names of some moderately famous internet figures to increase their popularity. On top of that, the things that normally make Two Best Friends funny (banter between Matt and Pat) don't translate to text, so all the jokes here seem forced and, frankly, painful to read.

>>14998401499840 Yeah, you're right. I hardly took the time to brush up on either MLP or TBFT. This story was a rushed piece of crap that I had written off some emotional itch that for some reason I needed to fulfil. Hopefully next time I'll take the time to plan and write out a decent story. If there is a next time.

Eh, I didn't find it to be THAT bad (for example, I disagree with the "WALL OF TEXT" comment. It's just that, usually, here on fimfiction, it's normal for there to be smaller paragraphs, nothing else). It's certainly an interesting concept. I mean, it was only a matter of time before someone made a TBFP crossover with ponies.

To stray from the bland and generic HiE idea, I suggest adding some spice to the mix! Like, giving them both a special ability (hint: Pat has something to do with not being visible and Matt has something to do with a nation). AND, since their "friendship" is based upon a love of video games and not of each other, that will certainly clash with the ponies's ideals ("I wish you nothing but a fiery, painful and slow death." "Love ya too, Pat.").

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter (if there is a next chapter, that is)!