This is so sad. I feel sorry for Thalia more than Luke, though. I don't like him either. You're one of my favorite authors, even out of REAL books, so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE WITH CHERRIES ON TOP WRITE MORE STORIES! :)

I feel terrible that I haven't reviewed this story since chapter ONE! I'm sorry. This was a really really really really (couple hundred reallys later) good story. You wrote Thalia so well and so in character. I really felt her emotions throughout the entire story. Keep writing, you have immense amounts of talent. I'll be looking for more stories from you in the future:)

PS: I'm disappointed to see the lack of reviews your story got (which I understand is partially my fault). It seems as though the really good, well written stories never receive any reviews, while the terribly written stories have a hundred or more. So, I hope that this review counts for like ten in your mind. You really deserved more reviews than you got for this amazing fanfic.

Ohmigods I feel like the worst reviewer ever! I'm not sure how, but the last alert from your story somehow got deleted from my email in the world of Yahoo Mail :( And unfortunately I've had about 89,0,0 things going on that have greatly hindered my fanfiction time.

Anyways, now to the actual review. I really liked how you were able to tie in how Thalia was on the boat and ran in to Beckendorf. It's those small things woven into the plot that make it so much more interesting. It was a very good last 2 chapters.

Also, I must acknowledge your excellent proofreading skills. I honestly don't think I've found more than 2 major typos in any of your chapters. You must have an eye for that kind of thing, seeing as I proofread many times and still can't seem to catch all the mistakes.

An excellent job as always, and I look forward to the next chapter!

- Sarra

P.S. I know that you will one day make it big. Apollo came to me in a dream and told me so :)

I'm suprised that you were able to find a song that fit Thalia and Luke so well. Their relationship is one-of-a-kind. I thought you did a very good job writing this chapter. That little creep will not back off Thalia, will he? Update soon!

This was really sad. :( But it was really good too. And I absolutely LOVE the line:

"Annabeth and Percy seemed to live in their own world. Best friend at heart, they would fight about the stupidest things and then still have the heart to apologize for it."

That line successfully describes Percy and Annabeth's entire relationship, and I love it. I actually copy and pasted it into a document so I could remember it, because I loved it so much. It's perfect:) And sorry for that whole rant about the quote, I'm just a BIG Percabeth fan.

Like I said, this was really good and really sad. It makes me sad:'( I always wondered if Thalia actually wanted to be a hunter or if it was just the only way for her to avoid the prophecy