Bout time I write one of these for your art. Time to critique I guess.

VISION: There are parts of this that feel pretty ambitious. In particular, her armor, as well all the chains. However, I'll be honest and say the lack of major detailing on her mane is noticeable, but doesn't come to close to ruining of course. Very well done on the whole.

ORIGINALITY: I have seen ponies in Chaos armor floating around, but I haven't really seen any of Fluttershy paired with Khorne (what an odd mix, rofl). This takes an existing idea an puts a new spin on it, and I very much like that. Very awesome.

TECHNIQUE: Your technique on this is very good. There doesn't seem to be any stray lines, the shading is good, and the outlines are nice and crisp for the most part (if there are any lines that aren't, they don't immediately pop out. Very nice.

IMPACT: I think this leaves a pretty good impact for those that view it (especially for Bronies familiar with WH40K and the lore for Chaos). I can't get the image of Fluttershy gliding around slaughtering hundreds with Lightning Claws out of my head, for some reason.

Overall, very well done! Can't wait to see what other Chaos mash ups you have planned in the future!

Maybe that's because people are tired of how she somehow manages to never learn a damn thing even though few of the episodes were centered about her and her need to grow a backbone. She always ignores it.

Her "lack of growth" is actually rather realistic. It's not that she hasn't learned anything, she has, or hasn't grown at all, she has, it's just that, well, her being what she is part of who she is. It's not easy to simply "grow a backbone".

Her "lack of growth" is actually rather realistic. It's not that she hasn't learned anything, she has, or hasn't grown at all, she has, it's just that, well, her being what she is part of who she is. It's not easy to simply "grow a backbone".

Nice, Fluttershy makes a pretty good spoof of Kharn the Betrayer, and considering it's always the quiet ones who have pent up rage, it's not surprising she'd become a Berserker of Khorne. I can see it now...

Flutter-Kharn: BRING KHORNE HIS FILL!!! OR I'LL RING WHAT I NEED FROM YOUR BROKEN BODIES!!!.....(whispers) if that's ok with you.

Do you take requests, perhaps Rarity as Lucius the Eternal or perhaps even a pre Heresy Fulgrim? or Pinkie Pie or Applejack as a Dark Apostle of the Word Bearers? Just some suggestions. Keep up the great work and kudos to you.

Behind these gates is the enemy you have never faced before. For these traitors - these butchers - they follow no patterns one could unravell and exploit. No patterns, no plans, not even simple schemes. All they do is fight, they kill for the sake of killing, and they are skilled in the art of death beyond limits. Ask not where the berserker strides, but who is his next victim.

She's better being corrupted by Nurgle than Khorne. Really, what is it with everyone associating her with rage just basing on one aspect of her wider personality? It's ridiculous. Rainbow Dash is a better candidate as a champion of the Blood God.