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its simply impossible to erase/demolish her thoughts or we would sayâ¦ memories from his heart if xx or xy or even he himself wants to do so.

Rams

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Posted:
Tue May 30, 2006 11:03 am

Excellent. What else can I say? Period.

But Ram, when its too non-detailed, don't you think that a haiku/poem becomes less enjoyable? Well, maybe we shouldn't stretch our minds too much where the innate meaning of the verses in itself becomes obscure although they were conceived at a higher plane of thinking.

Your opinion please.

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Posted:
Tue May 30, 2006 11:44 am

SaKKaNNu

Iru aGulu makkava kaathu
oDalellaa muLLu

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Posted:
Tue May 30, 2006 10:21 pm

Hari its really touching one.

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Posted:
Wed May 31, 2006 4:21 am

Yes Hari, u r right. I can realize that it would be quite difficult for all kinds of people to understand the exact meaning if we write a set of words/sentences in a poetic fashion (in tamilâ¦the so calledâ¦uvamai ani/ uruvaga ani) to describe a concept. For ur kind info, I used to write verses/poems with perfect grammar in tamil during my school and college days and, that continues here as well to some extent although the language is different. Well, taking ur point of general interest into accountâ¦Iâll try to write as simple as possible .

By the way, âSaKKaNNuââ¦U might have written as simple haiku/riddle â¦.if Iâm not wrong. But my focus is bit different.

It is quite vivid from your poems that you are a master in the craft, no doubts about that! I wish your good work continues!

I was just sharing my point of view with you. I have this feeling that when we keep things simple and play to the gallery, that gives scope for more people to enjoy. Nevertheless, one can always write in their own way, no strings attached. Afterall, this section of the forum was meant to nurture those talents.

When I wrote "SaKKaNNu", on one side I had the image of an unselfish Mother and on the other side, a Jackfruit. An unselfish mother braves through pain and agony to protect her wards at any cost, come what may. On the way, she might have a few bruises, physical and mental, but that doesn't deter her.

A Jack fruit with a thick spiny skin, protects the fruits inside (children) through sun and rain, storm and extremities in weather.

When correlated , the spiny skin of the jackfruit reminded me of an unselfish mother.

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Posted:
Wed May 31, 2006 9:34 pm

Hari..what youâve said was correct and I didnât take it in a different way. Pls donât mistake me. In general, sharing an opinion about a thing whether x or y is one of the essential things to improve the quality of the sameâ¦ I believe.

The theme behind your description about the title SaKKaNNu is simply fantastic.

Rams

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Posted:
Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:21 pm

Ram, Thankyou.

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Posted:
Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:26 pm

Sivarathiri

BaaLLonDhu Jenavu Sivarathiri ;
Ninna unippuna naa

PS: BaaLLonDhu - BaaLLu+OnDhu - Each day in Life

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Posted:
Mon Jun 05, 2006 5:56 am

"soGa raaGa ennDhu soaGaTha"..right? Nice one.
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