When the latest cider season rolls around, Rainbow Dash once again finds herself missing out. But Berry Punch offers Rainbow Dash a taste of her bar's newest drink, made from Apple Family Cider. Rainbow Dash has never been drunk. Shenanigans ens

Berry Punch has always been known for her expertise in the areas of wine-making and Alcohol consumption. However, things have gotten out of hand. Little does she know she is about to cause much trouble for some friends who just want to help.

Berry Punch is an alcoholic. No question about it. The magenta mare loves her alcohol and can almost always be found at the bar. But when an old friend gets a job at her favorite dive, her feelings are amplified more and more with each drink. Will her old friend remember her? Or has Raindrop's memory been just as clouded by the drink as Berry Punch's?Written as a request for ImJustAnotherBronyTeen for alcohol, some suggestive themes. Like a smokin' hot kiss.

Very good, i think I caught 1 spelling error, you typed "know instead of "now. But really the story was very well written and I felt the emotions from Berry.I give you a thumbs up and a rating of 7.5 out of 10. I will recommended this one.

Wow, excellent job there. This was an amazing build up, and I was sad to see it end so soon. I can see soooo much happening with this fic, so much potential drama and excitement. Carrot Top realizing feelings for Berry, trying to sabotage her friend's new relationship and so on. Berry and Raindrops' relationship has so mane levels of depth that could be potentially explored. These things I'm pointing out here are far from criticisms, but rather a testament to how well you've developed this short little story. Just know my expectations were greatly exceeded, and I did have high hopes.

There were very few errors. Other than some paragraph spacing issues and a few random typos, there wasn't anything wrong with the writing. Errors happen, and I easily read over them as no to allow them to take away from the flow of the story, which flowed very well I might add.

You're an excellent author and I thank you for this job well done. I appreciate you taking the time to write this, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. The first kiss was flawlessly described in perfect detail. I easily pictured it and it was definitely the climax of this fic. A couple parts made me laugh, and the romance was hnnng inducing.

One issue I had was that you used "Rain Drop" instead of "Raindrops". Very minor, and it didn't take away from the story, just a little irking at worst.

So I come here, despite the fact that this is a Mare/Mare ship, since I know how good of a writer you are as I really enjoyed "A Different Kind of Love." Thing is, I didn't think I would enjoy it as much as I did. It could be because this is brief and covers the whole situation of Raindrop and BP's relationship in one chapter, or because it kept me enthralled, slightly forgetting what this story was actually about. It doesn't really matter; all that's important is that you made a captivating story that would attract anyone's attention, and with little to no grammar errors.

god why is this so god damn sad ? (you should rate it as SAD to ...)i thought after the first chapter that something like a happy end is in sign ... but noooo, somehow i can understand the disapointment of raindrop ... but not what else happend ... did Carrot Top love Berry Punch but don't want to say it, because she knows that Berry loves Raindrop ? triangle relationships - something i'm used to from manga ... but its some kind of rare here, so very good work0

in the middel i lost track of time... just like berry. i'm looking forward for the next chapter

900881Sad tag added! Woo!I'm writing and shtuff!At this time, I'm VERY friggin tired and waiting for Spore to finish downloading... Hence why I am not writing a damn thing right now. Because it will end up being utter crap.

yeah great chapter ! just noticed some double quote issues @.@oh and why didn't you used ctrl+f as search for the word on the page ? should work fine if you search for "Grape Juice" or "Grape Vine" with the space between.

I am loving this way too much. No wait, that's not possible, is it? In any case, Raindrops is acting like a total jerk. I want Berry to go with Carrot Top. I'm sure you can change my mind though, author. Or at least confuse me. Do your worst.

This has given me an idea for a new drink... I'll let you know how it turns out in the morning, once my brain starts working again. >Implying that my brain works at any point in time.

On topic, chapter one (The original, one-shot) seemed to move fast in the relationship department and slow in the setup. Raindrops is a bitch, and Carrot Punch is where it's at. All this being said, I do enjoy this, and I'm waiting for more.

Tastes fine. The Curacao and Powerade are enough to take the edge off of the spicy taste of the Gin and make the drink feel refreshing. The vermouth is probably not necessary and is probably overpowered by the other flavors, but hell, vermouth is good.

yeah ... so saaad v.v poor Berry Punch, i wonder what Lush will tell her ... or if Raindrop and Carrot Top go for him ... and try to get him lie for them >__<in a schoolgirl manga this topic would be just funny, but with drunken ponies, i don't know, but it feels much deeper and sadder/heart touching

974887 I would suggest as new fan of your work of having different story for Carrot Top, maybe a couple month after this events of her truly reconciling with Berry and finding that special somepony (a stallion or mare).

I have thoroughly enjoyed this read. I love the way you've portrayed your characters. However, I feel like it ended too soon, especially for Carrot Top. I kind of want to hear more about what happened to her. So, if you ever find nothing better to do, maybe you could write another story about Carrot Top? Please?

979664I just ran into the same problem with The Royal Equestrian Family, sadly... Too many ideas, too many fans, not enough time, and not enough motivation. I know I could very easily write a separate Carrot Top fic, about her own personal struggles, but I'm afraid I've got too much work piling up with my other stories. I feel comfortable about how the story ended, and while I may come back to it in the distant future, I doubt it'll happen anytime soon.