Awwww... I was waiting for this type of fanfic! So sweet! I really wanted Jimmy to stay with Cindy. Again, super sweet! This is my second fave couple. (#1: Butch and Buttercup!) do you think you could write a fanfic for B/BC based off of Stranded? It would be funny, starting with the argument, (about whether or not you can see the equator,) but end it with a happy ending. Like this story. (PS I'm a girl!) ;)

interesting idea. i was honestly looking for more of a romance/adventure type of story. i think there are a lot of unique ideas with plenty of potential, but the story is very limited at this point by the level of writing. all this fic is is a highly condensed, bare-bones outline of the characters' lives. i don't feel like i read a story at all, just a description... i don't want you to tell me what happened to the characters over their lives, i want to see it actually happening to them. what would have jimmy and cindy's day to day life actually looked like? when and how did things progress and change for them on the island? what obstacles did they face, how did they feel about them, what solutions did they reach and why did they choose to act the way they did? honestly, you should just take the first chapter and expand it over the course of about 50,000 words. that, dear author, would make the greatest jimmy neutron fanfic i'd ever read.