Thanks for writing this! I really thought it was fun to read, and believable. I can't say that about a lot of other James/Lily fanfics. I even found myself laughing out loud sometimes. You nailed some of the characters, which is really hard to do in my opinion. Keep up the good work!

I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT! And that's not just because I adore Lily/James, I promise you! It was soooo sweet! And even though it was completely fluffy, I didn't care, cos it was so sweet! Awesome story :)

Ha ha I thought it was almost unbelievably fluffy then I scrolled down to "In Reality!" Made my day! I think you captured the essence of all the characters really well. If people make a mistake in James/Lily fan fics it's that they make Lily too spiteful. I think this is exactly how she'd act after he realised she had feelings for James. Gemma reminds me of Angelina and Alicia, so you've done that well too. And of course Sirius is perfectly in character, as always. Well done :)

ABSOLUTELY TERRIFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!10 OUT OF 5 STARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was DEFINITELY the cutest fantasy so far! it seemed more realistic then the rest of them! i LOVE your fic so far!!! the idea is so creative and it's wonderful! i still can't wait for the end when the last plan falls apart. :D