This is from a story by
called The Colors of Life and Death: [link]
The story can also be found in her dA gallery :3
It's an adventure and romance-filled story,
and it's VERY good.
Recommended fanfic, guys ;D

What the hell is your problem? Colers of Life and Death is one of the best stories on fanfiction, and Songbird21-san is one of the best authors I've ever seen. So don't go around putting down stories just because you don't like em. Shut up baka before I have to go Kyuubi on ya!

I'm sorry, but I have to say STOP BEING SUCH A NARUTARD!!! Don't go around and say "baka" just because they say it in Naruto a lot. You sound like an idiot. Either write in all japanese, or stick to english.

There is no way that someone is a good fanfiction writer if they bring the canon characters out of character in the first chapter, and even BEFORE the events of the first chapter, in a flashback. I't just a quick-fix for not wanting to go find Sasuke, bring him back, and make him like his team again. Shortcuts are for losers and bad fanfiction writers. She may be able to make a good story, but she's definitely not a good fanfiction righter. She should stick to complete OC's.

*Sigh* How to explain this to someone with such a superiority complex... You see, this would be the point of Fanfiction, see what I said there FANFICTION, not CANNONFICTION, the reason he's OOC is because thats what the story is about. Oh, and by the way, I take Japanese lessons, I've only seen the Japanese version of Naruo about five times. *Holds up five fingers* Can you count that high? Ahou haisha.

I do not have a superiority complex. Good fanfictions keep the CANNON characters relatively in character. CANNON should STAY CANNON. End of story. IMO, there are only two kinds of good fanfictions: ones where Cannon characters stay IC and ones where they are so OOC it is hilarious. Got it?

No wonder. You are one of THOSE. Go watch your English Dubb on Cartoon Network. No, YOU shut up loser. And go ahead and write in actual Japanese. Romaji is pathetic.

Ah... you see I don't watch the english version either, I prefer to read the Manga, and you DO have a superiority complex because you think you know everthing. I really dislike close-minded people such as your self. Shatto za jigoku ue temae ijirashii hitobito! By the way, this is getting rather boring, so just stop being such a dumbass.

please, enlighten me. Why do you think that I think I know everything? Just because I choose to write in a sophisticated manner does not mean that I think that I know everything. Quite the contrary, you seem to think you know everything about ME. I am not close-minded. You do not know me. From this one instance of my being opposed to something you like, you should not make the completely wrong impression that I am close-minded. On many matters, I am very open-minded, and the only time when I am close-minded is when I have thoroughly explored all sides of an argument and have determined one to be far more sound, stable, and strong than all of the others, in reference to debates, although when new evidence presents itself, I reopen my evaluation.

I have tried to read OOC fanfics before, but I always find myself frustrated because I know that that character would NEVER do what they were made to do by the writer. There is no transition from the character we know and love to what the author made him/her into. It is simply not the same character. I believe I have made my point.

The petty insults are not appreciated, whether in Japanese or English. You are being rather immature about the whole thing. You shouldn't have gotten so offended for a simple opinion of a piece of literature I have, if I may remind you of how this started. I will have my opinions and you will have yours. There is no reason for you to get upset.

The reason he is upset is because although you write with sophistication you use is to be extremely condescending.

And if you had read further into the chapter you would've see that the whole thing in the hospital was only because of the situation. Honestly, how can you judge it after half of a chapter? Not that I'm upset about you having a negative opinion, but when you express that opinion in such a way that the criticism has absolutely no chance of being called anything close to constructive--that's when your review becomes nothing other than a rude attack.

Ah, I guess you are right, I apologize, I was acting a bit immature,sumimasen Sorry...It's just that I don't like people to insult ANYTHING they don't like just because it doesn't appeal to their tastes. *Yawn* (I'm rather tired, it's 7:05 bleh, early mornings. you know how it is ^^) But please, just stop insulting everything you don't like, ok?