Having read 'Babysitting Grandma' this is all the more poignant. You have really captured the frustration, the love, the loss, pain and helplessness in the speaker. You have made me feel those emotions in myself, one of your aims I believe, so congratulations.

xx

sassyk100 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012

this one was beautiful. you know when you're talking to someone about something they are really passionate about and they just seem to have all the right words to say and just the right way to say them to make you understand how much that particular subject means to them? (forgive me if that sounded rambley) well that's how this poem sounded to me. It rang true in the way only someone whom has experienced it can make it sound. It was descriptive and beautiful.