I do love the way both Bakuras talk in this chapter. XD Like "You just swept in, did your funky little thing, prayed to Ma'at, and hey presto, I've skewered another host and am disappearing off the face of the earth for another few centuries" and Ryou's line about "carking it." XD But you did manage to keep a really tense and serious tone.

Wow...just...none of the OCs seemed like OCs. You wrote them so incredibly well (despite the comments Zane was less OC than ten billion other stories), and...I'm kind of speechless. I love this story to bits, excuse the late review, but...yeah. Argh. I'm going to read the sequel now...thankyou for being such an incredible author.

Woah, that was psycho. She was completely sadistic- a pretty good match for him, actually, except for that she didn't love him. Or at least she didn't show him love. Neither did Zane in a way. He showed him passion. Ryou showed gentleness... Ah, I love this story!