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melian says:Oh, I loved the drugged up Severus, from whatever that purple potion was (that tasted so much better than the yellow one). :D You captured the dream-like state so well, complete with him being unsure of both whether he still had his arm, and whether Dorcas was turning purple. (Connected with the purple vial, perhaps?) And then she's so matter of fact, which is a beautiful juxtaposition - "We had an arrangement", and "try not to vomit until I get you over the sink". Such a great contrast. :D

I love the DE discussion after the explosion, too. HAving so much fun (or otherwise) apportioning blame for what happened that they didn't even notice that no one got Snape out. They really are dunderheads, aren't they?

I can understand Dorcas' apprehension about having a marked Death Eater staying in her spare room, and frankly if someone had done that to my kitchen I probably would have gone spare. I applaud her for her patience. And healing skills,f or that matter. :)

melian (gryffindor)

Author's Response: Dorcas is pretty competent in a pinch, isn't she? And how else was I going to unbalance Severus? It's not like he actually shows up to those character relationship therapy sessions we've scheduled on his behalf. ;P