Have i returned your reviews? I probably haven't because i'm a massive slutface with no knowledge of ettiquitte or spelling ABILITY.

Alright - nice work! This was cool. A very sensual poem (by that i mean, one for the sense, i'm not *that* utterly drrty...), and i could really feel it. Very free, relaxed, calm atmosphere. Well done, kudos!

not random, just beautiful. i see you have trouble formatting this; do what i do: download Firefox for free, and the Quickedit will work fine in that browser. Yeah. good poem, and see some of my stuff too. Oksana