The comma removed by the patch below implies that users working from a
Subversion checkout should not use EasyInstall to periodically fetch the
latest version. That's not what you intended to say, I assume?
http://peak.telecommunity.com/DevCenter/setuptools
You should also inform your users of the need to run this command, if they
-are working from a Subversion checkout, rather than using EasyInstall to
+are working from a Subversion checkout rather than using EasyInstall to
periodically fetch the latest version.
Hmm, probably much better than the patch above:
-You should also inform your users of the need to run this command, if they
-are working from a Subversion checkout, rather than using EasyInstall to
-periodically fetch the latest version.
+If your users are working from a Subversion checkout rather than using
+EasyInstall, you should also inform them of the need to run this command
+to periodically fetch the latest version.
John