Poem : Lost Childhood

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..-..Riya..-..IF-Dazzler

I have never posted in this section before. Just saw it now! So thought of posting my favourite creation of mine till date! Hope u all like it.

LOST CHILDHOOD

There was a time whenI slept on my mother's shoulderAnd peed on my father's lapThere was a time whenMother bathed meAnd Dad stood watching from afarThere was a time whenMom scolded meAn Dad would come cuddling at meThere was a time whenMom dropped me to schoolAnd Dad brought me backThere was a time when Mom, Dad and I chatted,talked,laughed and cried togetherBut now, Mom's far away from usAnd Dad, though with me, is not the same anymoreAll the shades of childhood faded with my lost motherNow, I am only left with memories to cherishWith blessings of Childhood!

_.serendipity._Senior Member

Very sweet poem! I really liked the concept behind it all.. it's so sad that childhood can't last forever and we can't all be Peter Pans. It is difficult to cope with change. Your poem captures that very nicely, and I like the fact that it ends on a positive note .. "blessings of Childhood!" All is not entirely lost after all.

..-..Riya..-..IF-Dazzler

Very sweet poem! I really liked the concept behind it all.. it's so sad that childhood can't last forever and we can't all be Peter Pans. It is difficult to cope with change. Your poem captures that very nicely, and I like the fact that it ends on a positive note .. "blessings of Childhood!" All is not entirely lost after all.

Very nice work!!

Hope to see more of your writings on this forum

- Hema

Hi Hema, Thanks for commenting! Really nice of you. And I'll be surely posting more of my writings. Take care.-Riya

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