Could you maybe make your chapters a bit shorter because so much reading stops me to take a very long break and tend to forget to come back. I like the fight sequences you describe nice work.

LonelyMoonAngel chapter 15 . 3/27/2013

I was reading your power levels for everyone and I was wondering where Sailor moons was. Will she not have a power level? You put the other sailors but not her was all and I thought it was a little unfair.

Damn they are at a worse future than Trunks had originally it's so tragic.

You now I planned in the future to make Trunks Jr myself as the son of Chibiusa and Gohan as well make him a twin brother. Amazingly you made Darien a Godfather I was going to make Helios a godfather as well for my pair. You and I have so much in common.

You have a repeating section in this fic you may need to reread this chapter and get rid of it and you still need to improve abit on your spelling. Good job though I like where this story is going.

Um... I know the two of them are evil now, BUT didn't Titan and Black Lady stop and THINK about what could happen before they decided to kill Serena AND Trunks when he got in the way of B. Lady's attack to save her? Seeing how B. Lady's not even born yet, killing her mom NOW might still wipe her out of existence no matter what since no baby her around yet to keep her in the timestream, and then also killing TRUNKS would DEFINITELY wipe TITAN out of existence, if his younger, uncorrupted self dies. *lol*

Wait, I'm confused. Seeing how this is FUTURE Trunks we're talking about here who gets with Serena, and not CHIBI Trunks, what the heck is GOTEN doing there? Goten doesn't exist in FUTURE Trunks timeline since he was never born there. If anything, if this is really future Trunks, Goten should be a little kid or a baby, if he's back in the timeline he helped save. *lol*

I see you are making your own version of the android saga. Aliens are comming and trouble will happen.

I'm gonna be a bit of a beta reader. Improve on your spelling that's all you need.

Even if you don't improve you still are making a nice story keep up the good work.

sunwukongoku chapter 14 . 6/21/2011

Thanks for advertising my fics. So serena is finally going to give birth cool can't wait and Broly and Galaxia I smell a couple in the uture. Update soon things are getting more interesting and it's nice to see Pan is in this fic )