I'm new to the site, but I've been reading up on SCP for quite some time. I've always wanted to create my own SCP, but I didn't exactly know how. So to that end, I've made my own SCP based off a concept from a game I love (Fire Emblem Fates) and decided to turn it into a political thriller. I want to see how people feel about this, and I want to be sure I'm not missing any grammatical errors before I post. Here it is:

I think there are some overarching problems. The biggest one is that it has basically the exact same plot as SCP-2137. That's gonna torpedo this for me right there.

Some of the other issues include a bit of reliance on the reader knowing about Fire Emblem, along with some clinical tone slips and excessive detail. Your image probably won't pass copyright rules. Also your description of the politician's crime didn't feel particularly tactful.