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--S.B., Orinda, CA, novelist

“The endeavor of writing can be long and lonely. Mary Carroll Moore, master writing instructor, to the rescue! Moore packs How to Plan, Write, and Develop a Book with years of gritty good sense and big-picture perspective. Her techniques for drafting, organizing, and polishing a book are practical and time-tested. Here is a first-time book-writer’s best companion.”

--Elizabeth Jarrett Andrew,author of Writing the Sacred Journey: The Art and Practice of Spiritual Memoir

If I could implement all I've learned from you, I'd have a best-seller!

Pretend you’re a reporter for the New York Times. You’re going to interview your book idea.

List some questions you’d love to ask your book about its form, content, goals. You can start with something nonthreatening, as you would if you were a real reporter.

Ask your book some very good questions. Some ideas from my class are below, or you can make up your own:

What do you want to tell me about yourself?What form suits you best?Who is your readership and how will theyaccess you?What are you most eager to say?What are you most afraid to say?What genre are you?

When it runs out of things to say (or you getnervous about the answers) ask a different question.

The goal of this book-writing exercise is to surprise yourself. You’ll tap the hidden parts of yourself as a writer, the parts we often censor. You can strike gold--if you maintain the attitude of no-assumptions and anything can happen.

Books for the Blocked--These'll Get You Moving Again!

Escaping into the Open by Elizabeth Berg

Listen to Me by Lynn Lauber

Marry Your Muse by Jan Phillips

Pencil Dancing by Mari Messer

The Art of Slow Writing by Louise DeSalvo

Thinking about Memoir by Abigail Thomas

Write Your Heart Out by Rebecca McClanahan

A person’s life purpose is nothing more than to rediscover, through the detours of art, or love, or passionate work, those one or two images in the presence of which his heart first opened.Albert Camus

Friday, February 1, 2013

This week I am finishing yet another round of edits on my revision of Breathing Room,
my next novel. My wonderful editor, a flight expert, and a
screenwriter friend have given me their feedback, and I have a pile of
notes to think about, incorporate, and make changes from.

The solution to manuscript problems isn't always easy to see. That's why I turn to other authors.

For
instance, my screenwriter--who has a wonderful eye for the
cinematic--recommended I boost the character visuals: She couldn't
always see the characters in each scene. We writers internalize our
characters easily, so we sometimes forget that readers outside our heads
can't do this.

Clues are needed--a quirk, a way of moving, a
physical characteristic. Not too much, but enough to be able to set the
person onstage in front of us.

This is especially important, my friend said, in the opening pages.

I agree--but I also hate when the opening scene is loaded with too much description. It slows things way down.

Two Steps to Study and Research
First I began with a
list of visual and character traits I could use for each of the seven
or eight main players. Of these, I chose the three most interesting
characteristics for each person.

Then I went to some of my
favorite books to see how these authors presented their characters in
opening chapters. How did we get to know someone, how they looked or
moved?

It was a fascinating study.

I am reading a variety of books at the moment, all by authors very different in style. One is Italian Shoes,
a novel by Swedish writer Henning Markell. Studying his first five
pages, I saw that he mostly let us visualize the first-person narrator
through his profession (a physician), the postman who visits his island,
and his cramped living quarters.

Michael Crummey, author of the novel River Thieves, introduced his characters through another character's eyes. He is writing in third person limited, so this worked well.

B.A. Shapiro, author of the mystery The Art Forger, has a
narrator in first person, so we get to know her through her
self-conscious observations of herself. She's young; this works.

I went back to my first chapters and saw how sparsely my characters were
depicted, compared to these writers. And I began layering in the
details. Sometimes I used Markell's method--character defined by
space. Sometimes, Crummey's method--character defined by those around
her. And Shapiro's method worked well for my youngest character who is
definitely self-conscious.

Your writing exercise this week is to
take a writing problem in your own manuscript and find three authors who
have already solved it. What can they teach you?

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Encouraging Words--Well-Known Writers with Large Number of Rejections--But Published!

Because of Winn-Dixie by Kate DiCamillo--397 rejections (and it became a movie)A Wrinkle in Timeby Madeleine L'Engle--97 rejections (and it won the Newbery Medal for best children's book of 1963; it's now in its 69th printing)Cinder Edna by Ellen Jackson--40 rejections (and it has won multiple awards and sold 150,000 hard copies). Judy Blume says she received "nothing but rejections" for 2 years.Princess Diaries by Meg Cabot--17 rejectionsHarry Potter novels by J.K. Rowling--rejected by 9 publishersThe Diary of Anne Frank--16 rejections (and now more than 30 million copies are in print)Dr. Seuss books--more than 15 rejectionsJonathan Livingston Seagullby Richard Bach--140 rejectionsGone with the Wind by Margaret Mitchell--38 rejectionsWatership Down by Richard Adams--26 rejectionsDune by Frank Herbert--nearly 20 rejections

To all book writers: Believe in your story. Keep trying. The right home for your book is out there, waiting for you to discover it.

Want to get the creative brain going?

Book writers (and any writers) need to know how to engage the creative right brain that "writes" in images. Think of any wonderful book that's left you swimming in a setting or characters--the writer has successfully used the image-creating part of the brain. But our normal workaday lives short-circuit this part. Check out this cool video of Dr. Jill Bolte Taylor, a brain scientist at Harvard Medical School, recounting her personal experience of a left-brain stroke and her awakening to right-brain reality. Pretty amazing fusion of brain science with what it feels like to a brain scientist having a stroke:http://www.ted.com/talks/view/id/229

Flying Squirrels Bring Creative Jolt to Novelist

Flying squirrel gets into house--disrupts routine, gets novelist thinking differently. This happened to me! For two days, as I chased the squirrel (actually, it was all night since they are nocturnal), I slept very little. And got many new ideas for my novel-in-progress.Go figure!Maybe...book writers need creative jolts? Routine dulls our imaginations? How has an unexpected interruption actually been a gift for your creativity this week?

At the Loft Literary Center, I can always tell which students in my classes have taken Mary Carroll Moore’s class on book-writing. They talk about writing their book in "islands" and using storyboards to figure out how those sections relate to each other. When another student confesses to feeling overwhelmed by the material her memoir might include, they readily advise, “You should try Mary Carroll Moore’s method.” I second that.--Cheri Register, author of Packinghouse Daughter and American Book Award winner

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