Omg, that was so funny. My favorite line had to be the second, when voldemort was like "well that's not good" I started laughing. This was a good story, very amusing. Kinda an odd twist cause it's sad that Lily and James die but at the same time it's still a funny fic. Great job with this

lots of love

Kris

Alohamora chapter 1 . 7/20/2004

Well,it certainly was, um, entertaining...you don't get many comedy fics about this particular scene. Good job, but try to stick to the facts a bit more...