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I wrote this last weekend while in the throes of a brutal, oppressive loneliness. I love it and pretty much joined this site to share it, though I plan on sharing other poems eventually. Tell me what you think.
Ever-Lost
The wee hours wear my mind
But to darkness my eyes...

My mind may wander
or it just might remain
all the inevitable hates
i try to restrain
look at me now
in a mirror you will see
the remnants
of what used to be
no i will not cry
yes i will, I am weak
it feels to good
when negativity streaks
cant stop who I am
cant stop my looks...

UNSPOKEN WORDS
Over and over crap keeps piling on
wishing and praying I could be gone.
One thing after another it enters my life
dreaming it all ends with the slip of a knife.
Ruining relationships with people I love
stabbing my heart and giving off a shove.
Leaving me feeling...