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Hi Maggie. A creative way to portray such a nice message. My favorite part is the beginning. Your descriptions are vivid and captivated me immediately. This is my favorite writing by you so far. Keep it up!

A very enjoyable read, Maggie. I was reminded of "The Secret Garden" as I read, but only in the context of seeing the disused garden through the arch and the door. Everyone should have an adventure like this one if only to give one a sense of wonder at what can be if one tries. ~Tom

Hi, Maggie! I like how Marie looks at the garden, how she wants to make it beautiful. I also like how they imagine the door might lead somewhere into a fairy world! Well done, Maggie! Thanks for sharing and keep me updated

Such an inspirational poem! I love how you showed that the friends saw this garden differently, but both stayed to fix it anyway. It was a rather sweet touch for the daughters to meet up in this place near the end. Great job!

I love how inspirational this was. It had an amazing message behind it. I also live how you told it as a story, even though it was written as a poem. I don't know why, but I always thought that was a hard thing to whenever I tried it, and you really did it well.

this was cute and I liked how it all came together in the end but have you ever read the secret garden? or the curious garden? it was too much like those stories or me and this was more o a short story than a poem but overall it was good

First off, sorry I'm so late getting to this. This was really creative, and I just loved your descriptions when it came to how the girls saw the garden. This had sort of an "Alice and Wonderland" feel to it :). Good poem. ~Poetic