Thanks for your comments..............it was a gathering of images that flashed into my head. As you can imagine, i don't adhere to conventions but go on emotions and feelings at a moment in time. The language as Guest pointed out is as conventional as cohen's writings.
Georges

thanks for pointing it out, guest. I always thought LC was never shy of using the 'fuck' word so what was the fuss about. Anyway, that word has existed in one form or other (verbal, chemical, whatever)since the first jelly -like creatures appeared. A very beautiful word.

I have thought about this short and soft and have unanimously agreed amongst myself that the haiku above is definitely probably the cleverest contribution for ever and longer since before. This objective biased view is supported by the lack of response and applause. All of you, if not more, are so awded that you can’t even whisper your worship. It’s ok, I will addyoulate some to the end of something inconvenient. That Winter verse was just fucking brilliant and Hugo and Geoff know it both ers.

I have thought about this short and soft and have unanimously agreed amongst myself that the haiku above is definitely probably the cleverest contribution for ever and longer since before. This objective biased view is supported by the lack of response and applause. All of you, if not more, are so awded that you can’t even whisper your worship. It’s ok, I will addyoulate some to the end of something inconvenient. That Winter verse was just fucking brilliant and Hugo and Geoff know it both ers.

I hope that's enough applause as my hands are getting tired now!

Should not smoke at night
Unless the sound of the pipe
Whispers your worship

'Being ‘normal’ is not necessarily a virtue; it rather denotes a lack of courage!'

I have thought about this short and soft and have unanimously agreed amongst myself that the haiku above is definitely probably the cleverest contribution for ever and longer since before. This objective biased view is supported by the lack of response and applause. All of you, if not more, are so awded that you can’t even whisper your worship. It’s ok, I will addyoulate some to the end of something inconvenient. That Winter verse was just fucking brilliant and Hugo and Geoff know it both ers.

I hope that's enough applause as my hands are getting tired now!

Should not smoke at night
Unless the sound of the pipe
Whispers your worship