yeah you can do that. and then the real writers in your area will cross you out and call you toy and everyone who is important that writes in your area will make a mockery of you.
your choice man, thats how graff is.
they were just tryin to help, you dont have to be a stuck up and ignorant person.

ShIfTeD

07-15-2006, 03:48 AM

no one else writes in my area....ill improve over time, im just getting used to spraying instead of using the pencil B)

beefgerky

07-15-2006, 05:42 AM

hopeless...

Rane *DF* *HM*

07-15-2006, 03:42 PM

Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Jul 15 2006, 03:48 AM
no one else writes in my area....ill improve over time, im just getting used to spraying instead of using the pencil B)

bad idea...and i can guarantee you that someone else DOES write in your area, and when that someone sees your shit...they WILL cross you out, and you will probably try and be a tough guy and cross them back out with your wack letters, and then they WILL stomp you.

yeah minez
yeah like this 1...i will listen to everyone, just tell me whats wrong

not evry1 of those are mine

Rane *DF* *HM*

07-15-2006, 03:58 PM

If no1 else writes in your area, why is there other graff in your pics?

and what the hell does that shit even say? I can&#39;t read it.

p.s. good job posting your face on the internet.

ShIfTeD

07-15-2006, 04:02 PM

cuz thats out of the area..i bomb in my area, but that was when i went to a friends house

it doesnt say anything&#33; thats the thing, i cant have bad letter structure if it doesnt say anything :D

i can see how you thought the ones with words had bad letter structure though, they wernt mine..just that ones where you cant read it are mine :P

im saving letterstructure until i get good :D

Rane *DF* *HM*

07-15-2006, 04:23 PM

i thought the purple and blue one mightve said something-3d, because in the top right hand corner it looks like the blue says 3D...but i guess it is just a bunch of nothing...

ok...moving on...

ShIfTeD

07-15-2006, 04:49 PM

yeah, i can see how you see that....but whatever....the important thing is that im not using words yet lol

uhhh

07-15-2006, 05:03 PM

then why are you showing it off on a graff site?

ShIfTeD

07-15-2006, 09:35 PM

BECAUSE ITS UNDER THE FUCKING TOYS SECTION

uhhh

07-15-2006, 10:06 PM

the difference between a good writer and a toy is not writing letters and painting random crap. it&#39;s theyre skill level with they&#39;re letters

ShIfTeD

07-15-2006, 10:09 PM

mk its not random

and if that were the case when you have bad can control and bad fill tecnique

everyone would love it

minesweep

07-15-2006, 10:34 PM

Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Jul 15 2006, 04:02 PM
cuz thats out of the area..i bomb in my area, but that was when i went to a friends house

it doesnt say anything&#33; thats the thing, i cant have bad letter structure if it doesnt say anything :D

i can see how you thought the ones with words had bad letter structure though, they wernt mine..just that ones where you cant read it are mine :P

im saving letterstructure until i get good :D
plaese tell me this is a joke

uhhh

07-15-2006, 11:10 PM

Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Jul 15 2006, 10:09 PM
mk its not random

and if that were the case when you have bad can control and bad fill tecnique

everyone would love it
no comprende

C3ZR ONE

07-15-2006, 11:28 PM

This argument is getting old.

#1- If he just wants to do "Graff like" abstract paintings in the middle of farmtown USA then more power to him. It&#39;s obviously the best stuff they got, and I kinda liked a couple of them.

#2- (advice for Shifted)- You have got excellent can control and some fresh ideas of shape and flow but trying to emulate graff letters without actually making letters is kinda fakin&#39; tha funk if you get me... you show potential, but to get any recognition in a graffiti forum, you&#39;ll most likely have to start using what the artform was based on.... letters. But whatever, do what makes you happy, it looks like you&#39;re having fun out there. ;)

uhhh

07-15-2006, 11:37 PM

yay farmtown&#33;

i like how c3zr comes into any arugment and just settles it in one post. :lol:

ShIfTeD

07-15-2006, 11:40 PM

yes&#33; i will take your advice lol, im not quite up to par with letters if you know what i mean

thanx c3zr, ill shut up now :P

elcs

07-16-2006, 12:44 AM

wait...so does it say mk or is it nothing. I still dont get it

ShIfTeD

07-16-2006, 12:45 AM

no the blue one i did doesnt say anything, i just did it to show flow :unsure:

peace, ONE&#33;
i looove big ass roller things. the s is a liittle bit iffy and the k is baaad. but as far as a big roller the v isn;t horrible. but the whole thing could be a lot beter

to the dumbass who hit the frieght- what is your problem? i mean i guessi understnad being eager to learn to paint. but your gonna have a real fun time when you ARE good and theres shit like that rdin around the country. think before you paint. ;)

ShIfTeD

07-16-2006, 11:04 PM

its his damn decision&#33; everyone starts somewhere..at one time we all hit a freight, in this case it was his..do you have 1 post where you DONT give someone shit?

to the kid that did the freight.....work on your letter structure

go without the green in the middle

go without the big space in the middle

and otherwise its pretty good, id outline it a lil better too ;) :D

pace1

07-16-2006, 11:26 PM

no actually i dont think ive ever hit a frieght becuase i know along with alot of people on here that patients is a virture dont paint anything that moves till you know your good and can burn it. stick to chill walls that you can practice and rollover instead of painting and embarrasing yourself.
p.s. shifted gotta think befor you speak ;)

KNOWthisX

07-16-2006, 11:34 PM

just bomb the shit out of everything. It&#39;ll get better as you go.

enorganik

07-16-2006, 11:36 PM

I know its bad but I did just wing that one.

leaks

07-16-2006, 11:57 PM

Originally posted by pace1@Jul 16 2006, 11:26 PM
no actually i dont think ive ever hit a frieght becuase i know along with alot of people on here that patients is a virture dont paint anything that moves till you know your good and can burn it. stick to chill walls that you can practice and rollover instead of painting and embarrasing yourself.
p.s. shifted gotta think befor you speak ;)
a very wise man. i know of a couple frieght yards but rarely ever go down until i got a name people know or alot of skill a shitty throw up will just be another peice of crap rollin by to other people and a waste of paint
i posted this is the man thread but figured i throw it up here cause it doesnt work to nice
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/2676/8hp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

pace1

07-17-2006, 12:24 AM

clean shit not feeling the cloud though.

ShIfTeD

07-17-2006, 12:59 AM

the clouds fresh, but it would be interesting to see it without the cloud :unsure: :blink:

thats not lookin bad, quite nice
i think the bubbles would look better if hey alternated height throughout the piece though

elcs

07-17-2006, 12:45 PM

Originally posted by weldo@Jul 17 2006, 06:43 AM
aha my first ever piece loks like shit but who cares almost died taking flick gotta hate fukin trains
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/6950/phto0036yy2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
for your first "piece" thats not that bad really, it looks pretty original. Does it say SIC? thats what im getting out of it

:unsure: Practice on paper for now... If you had a nice colour scheme/letters/3d etc... then when it comes to paint people wont notice your can control, which should build up pretty quick if you do a good amount of sketching.

But yeh basically just stick to the books instead of running out there and puttin that stuff up.

krysnum1

07-17-2006, 06:14 PM

Originally posted by some guy from NCI...@Jul 17 2006, 05:55 PM
:unsure: Practice on paper for now... If you had a nice colour scheme/letters/3d etc... then when it comes to paint people wont notice your can control, which should build up pretty quick if you do a good amount of sketching.

But yeh basically just stick to the books instead of running out there and puttin that stuff up.
Well, the color scheme isnt my falt. those are the only colors I got at my crib.

The Stig

07-17-2006, 06:20 PM

keep painting and sketching if you dont paint you wont develop can control. Just find one chill spot and paint only there till ut good, just keep going over your old shit and uuuhhhh dont go over anyone

some guy from NCI...

07-17-2006, 06:20 PM

Yeh thats fine, but still keep sketching. I&#39;ll give you a couple of quick crits for the last one.

lose the arrow on the K. If you look at the bottom left of the K it&#39;s well thin compared to the rest of the letter, try and keep your letter width the same throughout your piece... To be true that crit goes for all the other letters, if you can do that for now then there should be a slight improvement.

lost_for_evex

07-17-2006, 06:51 PM

if ur guna give it a force field....give it a force field...wtf is that

klipa

07-17-2006, 06:56 PM

[/QUOTE]if ur guna give it a force field....give it a force field...wtf is that[/QUOTE]

the outist of all outlines

ICER

07-17-2006, 07:06 PM

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e391/bashjew/16.jpg

here is another painted piece

uhhh

07-17-2006, 09:26 PM

it&#39;s too dark. i can tell it ends with a k but not much else.v looks like its probably pretty good. that piece in your sig is amazinggggggg :o

its all dope cept that e looka a little wierd especialy the bottom horizontal line i think if you made it straight across like the top 2 it would look alot better

tint1

07-18-2006, 01:09 AM

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f84/CPG697/oipunce.jpg
i dont have a whole lot of letture structure yet but i still throw shit up cause theres barely any graff and any other graff is as toy as mine :P

ShIfTeD

07-18-2006, 01:20 AM

its tooooo small

make it like bigger lol

area52crew

07-18-2006, 01:24 AM

All older pics,,i&#39;ll try to get some new flicks soon ;) (sorry about size btw,, I havn&#39;t figured out how to resize yet

first thing painted:http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c181/sensrule90/zgraff007.jpg

first attemp at character lmfao:http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c181/sensrule90/zgraff016.jpg

first throwup:http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c181/sensrule90/P3250550.jpg

any crits?? those are from a while ago but whatever it&#39;s always good to see what you did right/wrong :) i have a couple diff throws now too i&#39;ll try to get flicks of next time i go out :D

doomsayer

07-18-2006, 01:32 AM

crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/3c4a86c0.jpg

Code

07-18-2006, 09:26 AM

Originally posted by doomsayer@Jul 18 2006, 01:32 AM
crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/3c4a86c0.jpg
I like the throwy but the shadow on the first letter seems a little to big to me, bt over all the letter structure could be a little clearer but its all good

TECHNICOLOR

07-18-2006, 05:28 PM

http://myspace-484.vo.llnwd.net/00948/48/42/948712484_l.jpg

Crits?

beefgerky

07-18-2006, 05:36 PM

stop jocking ANSR from the regular painted thread?

TECHNICOLOR

07-18-2006, 05:38 PM

? that shits mine dude..

TECHNICOLOR

07-18-2006, 05:40 PM

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a294/ANS_1988/fuckitbw.jpg

ahh, I see what you mean, the a&#39;s are similar..

I guess I wont rock that a anymore.

beefgerky

07-18-2006, 06:01 PM

his older shit, im too lazy to find the flick..

TECHNICOLOR

07-18-2006, 06:09 PM

hmmm...well, i can assure you I didnt bite this dude...

his stuff is gnarley though..

Gerk, your thows are soo dope.

elcs

07-18-2006, 06:21 PM

yea, the A looks alot alike.

krysnum1

07-18-2006, 07:48 PM

Just trying to help out... This is what I found wrong, overall pretty good.. How long have you bin painting?

http://i2.tinypic.com/20f9rp4.jpg

minesweep

07-18-2006, 08:35 PM

sloppy and very bad picture of a legal on my friend&#39;s ramp or whatever
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/699/0718062028tp8.th.jpg (http://img146.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0718062028tp8.jpg)

peace, ONE&#33;
i looove big ass roller things. the s is a liittle bit iffy and the k is baaad. but as far as a big roller the v isn;t horrible. but the whole thing could be a lot beter
[/b][/quote]
Actually, it wasn&#39;t done by roller but with 10 cans of paint.

thanks thou

TECHNICOLOR

07-18-2006, 09:40 PM

yeah well, i dont think im gonna bother changing that A....I love it.

Yeah, and I did fill the spade on the bottem of the I- Just flicked it before I did.

My 3d is soo messed, and thanks for pointing that out.

oh, and you cant really see it in the flick, but the fill is a fade from cream to white.

don&#39;t paint yet, i feel like a fuckin broken record but sorry, sketch your letters out some more, and scope out some styles you like for influence, just look at lots of pics so you get the idea of letters and such

i already know things that were unnecasary or should be changed. the Y needs to be farther out from behind the B and a lil bigger. let me know what you think.
Its not bad...the lines are clean. i just dont like the fill, it reminds me of olive loaf. Gross...

BoRe-719-

07-19-2006, 04:23 PM

ya know whats worse.....liver loaf

area52crew

07-19-2006, 04:43 PM

Originally posted by area52crew@Jul 18 2006, 01:24 AM
All older pics,,i&#39;ll try to get some new flicks soon ;) (sorry about size btw,, I havn&#39;t figured out how to resize yet

first thing painted:http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c181/sensrule90/zgraff007.jpg

first attemp at character lmfao:http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c181/sensrule90/zgraff016.jpg

first throwup:http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c181/sensrule90/P3250550.jpg

any crits?? those are from a while ago but whatever it&#39;s always good to see what you did right/wrong :) i have a couple diff throws now too i&#39;ll try to get flicks of next time i go out :D
crits??..

pace1

07-19-2006, 08:46 PM

I can see wat your going for but sketch more. the last one has good can cantrol but the letter structure is off. I beleive with alot of dedicated effort you could get some style. peace

doom its a deffinet yet slow improvement. dont waste paint until you can get a solid sketch or style down. im sure painting is very fun and the best part but it gets better with your skills. i know thats ur backyard and ts chill but still wait

STOL*

07-19-2006, 10:23 PM

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a19/skyline3116/IMG_5034.jpg

i know the s doesnt match the other letters. 4th time paintin. Its a light to dark red fade juss so u know.

i already know things that were unnecasary or should be changed. the Y needs to be farther out from behind the B and a lil bigger. let me know what you think.
Its not bad...the lines are clean. i just dont like the fill, it reminds me of olive loaf. Gross... [/b][/quote]
hahaha olive loaf?? aklright well i guess ill take that into consideration nex time.

i already know things that were unnecasary or should be changed. the Y needs to be farther out from behind the B and a lil bigger. let me know what you think.
im not trying to offend you or nothing but why do so many kids (im not an old timer looking down on u all, im 14 myself) paint in there garage these days, theres nothing wrong with it, its just not the same. i was just wondering

-task-

07-20-2006, 01:50 PM

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/AIso009resize.jpg

tame_187

07-20-2006, 02:04 PM

Originally posted by &#045;task&#045;@Jul 20 2006, 01:50 PM
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/AIso009resize.jpg
the i and the S are over both lapping over etch other
im no expert so im not going to say anything

beefgerky

07-20-2006, 02:40 PM

nothing wrong with overlapping, and i say thats about the stage u need to be in yourself tame..throwups and simples.

and dont shade and design fills for throwups, it ruins the concept..

lost_for_evex

07-20-2006, 02:43 PM

Originally posted by tame_187@Jul 20 2006, 01:38 PM
can you tell me how i can improve
(i havnt posted pictures before so im not sure if they will work)

i know the s doesnt match the other letters. 4th time paintin. Its a light to dark red fade juss so u know.
the fade is nice and the black force is sick with those colors just get rid of that damn s but its nice for how big it is

leaks

07-20-2006, 03:12 PM

and tame im sure if u had a blank backround that didnt throw off all ur colors it would look alot better but take time and clean ur shit up u can do a lot of things with spray paint if it drips wait a couple of minutes and clean it up with the other colors

tame_187

07-20-2006, 03:16 PM

Originally posted by leaks@Jul 20 2006, 03:12 PM
and tame im sure if u had a blank backround that didnt throw off all ur colors it would look alot better but take time and clean ur shit up u can do a lot of things with spray paint if it drips wait a couple of minutes and clean it up with the other colors
thanks, i might try pryming my wall next time

leaks

07-20-2006, 03:57 PM

yea shit would look alot better

lost_for_evex

07-20-2006, 05:48 PM

love how tame ignored my post...

fuckin look up tames history u ( CENSORED- EVEX - cool the fuck out on the new kid, jesus. No need for a fucking tangent like that with only 5 posts under the poor bastards belt. I&#39;m gonna go look him up too. For the amount of screaming you&#39;re doing about him, he better be a fuckin legend...)- Love, CEEZAH

i already know things that were unnecasary or should be changed. the Y needs to be farther out from behind the B and a lil bigger. let me know what you think.
im not trying to offend you or nothing but why do so many kids (im not an old timer looking down on u all, im 14 myself) paint in there garage these days, theres nothing wrong with it, its just not the same. i was just wondering [/b][/quote]
thats not my garage.... its the skatepark i work at.

Kayone707

07-20-2006, 05:54 PM

Originally posted by tame_187+Jul 20 2006, 01:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (tame_187 @ Jul 20 2006, 01:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-leaks@Jul 20 2006, 03:12 PM
and tame im sure if u had a blank backround that didnt throw off all ur colors it would look alot better but take time and clean ur shit up u can do a lot of things with spray paint if it drips wait a couple of minutes and clean it up with the other colors
thanks, i might try pryming my wall next time [/b][/quote]
i wouldnt prime it just yet. first work on cutting lines and can control. when you get thoes down then you can prime the wall an actually make a backround. theres no use in waste&#39;n paint

That second building is quite nice looking. The throws are quite bad tho. They&#39;re really bad..... You two should either stick to your sketchbook till you get some skill, or paint in places no one will see for practice. Those are obviosly noticeable spots. You really made a mess out of them, and that in turn gives graff a worse name. Take it to heart...

GOB

07-22-2006, 01:02 AM

it&#39;s called a throwie for a reason, both gob throwies were done in less than 2 minutes.

elcs

07-22-2006, 01:05 AM

He wasnt being a dick at all and was giving constructive criticism. Your throws are bad man, dont put them up yet. Sketch.

GOB

07-22-2006, 01:07 AM

it&#39;s all chill, ill get some pictures of actual pieces instead of from when i was bombing roofs.

C3ZR ONE

07-22-2006, 01:07 AM

I&#39;m aware of what a throwie is and I know what one should look like. Skuf One XTC&#39;s throwies are 2 minute throwies. Yours shouldn&#39;t be up in profile spots yet, period. I&#39;m not tryin to beef. I&#39;m jsut telling you cold hard fact. You got ahead of yourself.

BluegrassBomber

07-22-2006, 01:08 AM

Agreed.

GOB

07-22-2006, 01:10 AM

these are pictures that other people have snagged and sent to me, so its not like i can put my best ones up, only the ones that are in the better locations. ill get some pictures of pieces up soon.

3rd time painting... EVER&#33;&#33;. im pretty fukn happy with it. i tried to have the vanishing point in the middle of the peice and i think thats the only thing i could of improved/should of done differently.

i dont have any crits to help u get it better, but i dont think the letters reall flow, they could do with a bit of work. but ahh if u seen my stuff i shudnt really be talkin lol. just tryin to help

---CRoR---

07-22-2006, 04:01 AM

wurd man its cool... atleast the toy forum gives u crits n the real fourms tell u to fuck off n shit but ya i havent painted much cuz i been busted twice n on probation n under house arrest n all this shit so im careful now

but ya man thnx ill try to fix my shit up
peace

minesweep

07-22-2006, 04:17 AM

don&#39;t leave your "e" with out and line or dot b/c without that it looks like an f, but on the over all throw i like it

it looks more like a animal sitting waiting to like pounce on its prey, the "ears" would be too pointy to be a bunny&#39;s

alive

07-22-2006, 12:28 PM

the point is that the letter has style. its like its leaning back, chill, looking out at the rest of the letters, getting ready to jump. think of SYN, skuff says "the letters move, like my K, its like a leg, kicking." a good artist brings life to the letters. for those of you working on ur throws, this is something u need to remember. myself included.

the rest of ur letters need some work tho, they dont have nearly the same motion and style. remember to try to keep everything the same size. i know how hard it is firsthand, but ull figure it out with practice.

prank

07-22-2006, 01:57 PM

Originally posted by Skeam@Jul 22 2006, 01:48 AM
3rd time painting... EVER&#33;&#33;. im pretty fukn happy with it. i tried to have the vanishing point in the middle of the peice and i think thats the only thing i could of improved/should of done differently.

crtis would be greatly appreciated.

cheers
matt

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/8890/hpim1992tw7.jpg
this is the proof that uve sketched

yea, we paint at the skatepark and we usually post pics when we make somthin, thats prolly why it looks familiar, stuff in the backround has been posted maybe..
thanks for the crits, more would be nice

-d

doomsayer

07-22-2006, 05:38 PM

waht were you painting on? it looks like its inside a building, was it a legal>

seems familure tho [/b][/quote]
i think it looks familiar because the g and e are a direct gerk bite

prank

07-22-2006, 08:21 PM

work on your lines and can control but mostly change that K its the ugliest ive ever seen and take the extra shit on the A off

prank

07-22-2006, 08:24 PM

i meant for the pink one

pace1

07-22-2006, 11:30 PM

Originally posted by GOB@Jul 22 2006, 01:10 AM
these are pictures that other people have snagged and sent to me, so its not like i can put my best ones up, only the ones that are in the better locations. ill get some pictures of pieces up soon.
your a fucking punk ass bezzy. Your shit is worse becuase u get up in thuse spots and ruin them for people who know what there doing. You should take some advice from everybody and get better instead of coming on here with a huge e-dick. your shit blows and should not be painted. hit the books for awhile.
P.s. if you thnk your hot shit battle me.

hey, didnt mean to &#39;bite&#39; ur shit man, i was just tryin to do a bubble E, for real tho, my bad man... done wit that shit for sure(ges) peace

-d

pace1

07-23-2006, 12:23 AM

yeah u bit that hardcore bro. but i can see why.

flclnaruto1213

07-23-2006, 01:13 AM

word, first thing i thought when i saw the e on that ges was that its pesks.
people are biting way too much these days...

---CRoR---

07-23-2006, 02:22 AM

ive used that E and ur G looks like my C but keep changin ur style&#33;

---CRoR---

07-23-2006, 02:32 AM

thnx for the crits guys... this thread is actually chillin cuz theres no beef no assholes tellin u to stop n shit like that hah... but ya my S is my fave letter for sure... tell me wat u think of this... first CROR bomb in over a year

gatta work on my C i no that but kinda likein my Rs but iunno i think im gunna fix it up still for sure tho any crits guys?
peace ill check back tomorrow

Rane *DF* *HM*

07-23-2006, 09:01 AM

good can control...

Rane *DF* *HM*

07-23-2006, 09:03 AM

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j42/Manchgraff603/Picture052.jpg

just some ugly 1 A.M. bullshit...

sorry for the bad flick...
although i must say...i love the colors.

2KoS

07-23-2006, 09:49 AM

Oh my days, you lot can be a real shower of fucktards sometimes.

Did he bite that E?

No.

Has that E been invented by Gerk?

No.

Did gerk get that influencial E from many other writers who have also rocked it coz it&#39;s a good E to flow with?

Yes.

The only thing I can say is that your G does rep a C a little, and without a handstyle to go with Gess (instead you write dope), people might get confused.

uhhh

07-23-2006, 10:18 AM

i see what your saying. but its the exact same thing. you should at least change it a little bit. or make the proportions different or something.

cror- good can control. the letters newed some work though

-task-

07-23-2006, 10:58 AM

Originally posted by &#045;&#045;&#045;CRoR&#045;&#045;&#045;@Jul 23 2006, 02:32 AM
thnx for the crits guys... this thread is actually chillin cuz theres no beef no assholes tellin u to stop n shit like that hah... but ya my S is my fave letter for sure... tell me wat u think of this... first CROR bomb in over a year

gatta work on my C i no that but kinda likein my Rs but iunno i think im gunna fix it up still for sure tho any crits guys?
peace ill check back tomorrow
im reallly feelin your style and uv got good can control the only thing that bothers me about it are the R&#39;s. they look like P&#39;s or maybe even A&#39;s. just move the second leg a little bit more towars the first one. more under the round part i guess. or maybe make it a tad bigger, but anyways good work bro

oh yeah cror how about on ur r&#39;s makin the lines non seperate if u get me so the bit on the left like the structure pole kinda dnt put a line all the way down so it links with the curls of the r just a thought i dno if it wud look better bt u no jus try sum ish

unknown...

07-23-2006, 02:39 PM

Cror imo dont disconnect the leg of the r...wen i looked at it it seemed like
cp.op.

---CRoR---

07-23-2006, 04:55 PM

yeeh i get wat u guys mean..... but ya ill draw sumthin up n then post it somewhere n see wat u guys think if i shuld paint it or not.. but thnx for the help&#33;

first thing painted:http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c181/sensrule90/zgraff007.jpg

first attemp at character lmfao:http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c181/sensrule90/zgraff016.jpg

first throwup:http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c181/sensrule90/P3250550.jpg

any crits?? those are from a while ago but whatever it&#39;s always good to see what you did right/wrong :) i have a couple diff throws now too i&#39;ll try to get flicks of next time i go out :D
crits??.. [/b][/quote]
nothing?........

ion-i

07-24-2006, 01:30 AM

you want crits?

ok fine. please dont bump that.
start sketching. you dont have any letter structure, or any can control to paint something clean or show a style off.
you put a fucking crown on that flourescent orange/white/black "thing" also. dont put a crown on your shit, your not a king. that orange looks like you just found it at a construction site and decided to use it.
the karak.. well.. if it were sketched out cleanly, I&#39;m sure it would look okay.. maybe.. but its all wobbly looking and painted up like a little kid drew it with crayon. I dont want to sound hard, but it looks more like you just painted shit without knowing what the fuck your doing. is that a school you painted on? sketch sketch sketch. practice drawing letters and karaks before you paint.
and about that last "throw" well.. its a bit better. I like the E. but the last letter looks a bit sloppy although I can see you tried to make it the similar shape of the E. props for that tho. but DONT PAINT for a while.
SKETCH. do your city a favor for a while.. sketch a bunch of shit before you give graffiti and yourself a bad name. if you think im being a dick and bashing on your stuff, think again, leave the real bashing and fucking up to the streets. the real writers in yor city can cross you out, call you out, write toy over everything you do after this, or if they saw you theyd start shit. you never know how people are. im just sayin tho, some writers love beefin with toys.
but anyways.. show some respect for graffiti and practice a bit on paper before you pick up a can. it helps a lot.
I can see with LOTS of practice on sketching AND practicing painting on plywood at home, you could develop some good style. you just have to commit. start simple with simple letter structure. sketch every day, fuck around with letters, you&#39;ll get the hang of it and develop your own style in no time with a lot of commitment.
fuck i wrote too much.

Skeam

07-24-2006, 05:27 AM

Originally posted by gm_wise@Jul 23 2006, 07:08 PM
Kinda new to the whole graff scene, been writin for bout a month. so here&#39;s some stuff i&#39;ve been messin about with.

Crits Welcome
the E on that second one is a pretty confident graffiticreator bite i reacon.... i really couldnt care though. just thought id point it out

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/4752/bitemyeoe4.jpg

uhhh

07-24-2006, 09:02 AM

holy shiiieet. my parents friends want me to do a piece on their fence. since i haven&#39;t painted much my paretns are going to BUY ME paint to practice with fro "as long as i need" god damn. i musta done somethin goood :D

AoAssis

07-24-2006, 09:04 AM

How hardcore of you.

alive

07-24-2006, 09:15 AM

haha lucky break uhhh,
and damn&#33; nice call skeam, i never woulda noticed that but there it is. undeniable. gm_wise, start apologizing, you should be feeling pretty fucking dumb right now.

Rane *DF* *HM*

07-24-2006, 12:10 PM

ahahahahahahahahahaha...

fucking graffiti creator...

what a punk.

boo that man.

YOP

07-24-2006, 01:07 PM

graffiti creater = gay

pace1

07-24-2006, 01:09 PM

the fact he bumped over Jaze was the most mentaly chalenged thing ever. kid could have atleast given some respect.

magic nyc

07-24-2006, 03:34 PM

Originally posted by uhhh@Jul 24 2006, 10:02 AM
holy shiiieet. my parents friends want me to do a piece on their fence. since i haven&#39;t painted much my paretns are going to BUY ME paint to practice with fro "as long as i need" god damn. i musta done somethin goood :D
Lie. Pic = proof. Respons = no camera. Conclusion = lie.

uhhh

07-24-2006, 03:48 PM

well i do have a cmera. but i haven&#39;t painted it yet so i can&#39;t get flicks. understand?

Ao- i know it&#39;s not hardcore. at all. but i get to paint. and not only do my parents not care.. they WANT me too.

WolfBurrns

07-24-2006, 05:21 PM

A bomb and a throwie.
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/freight.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/freight2.jpg

CRITS?

The Stig

07-24-2006, 05:24 PM

dont hit up freights it will just embarass yourself...Bomb under bridges for practice

C3ZR ONE

07-24-2006, 05:26 PM

Agreed with stig. That&#39;ll get nice pieces buffed quick...

fukbuff124

07-24-2006, 05:50 PM

yeah freights are for those who can put up some niice peices thats just a throw put that up else where find a abandon warehouse thats wat i did and then you can just paint all you want and not emabarras ur self

N:Craze

07-24-2006, 10:45 PM

stick to paper and get off the steel ..... as my granny would say... "for heavens sake"

thanks agian for postin that flick man did u paint anything down at that spot today

pace1

07-25-2006, 12:10 AM

i just went were they put my real name and buffed it back.

but nemo is down for tomorow maybe we could call KA for a ride. if you still wanna go.

leaks

07-25-2006, 12:14 AM

yea im down

pace1

07-25-2006, 12:16 AM

ok you have some place mind thats super chill for us four?dont say it here.
you got KA&#39;s number?

Rane *DF* *HM*

07-25-2006, 01:13 AM

that simple is ill.

AoAssis

07-25-2006, 03:54 AM

Originally posted by uhhh@Jul 24 2006, 03:48 PM

Ao- i know it&#39;s not hardcore. at all. but i get to paint. and not only do my parents not care.. they WANT me too.
It was a joke, but i guess no one found it the least bit funny. Im losing my edge.
I should write a book and throw it over a bridge.

the first ones fucked up cuz of the line on the R... but the second one is nice... as you said just fix up your shadow a bit but i like it...

NOMX

07-26-2006, 02:35 AM

ur better than a lot of people on here, i like ur throw and ur right the shadow is messed up. lower it few inches from the actual throw. the first 1 is just kind of ugly but not horrible, and work on ur can control. so just practice practice practice, dont forget to work in ur blackbook too. then u will be doing some cool shit. oh yea... dont be stupid when ur doing it and be safe.

contraband

07-26-2006, 03:50 PM

alright cool thx for the feedback guys.

legoman what line do you mean in the R like the inside line?

nomex do you mean the colors are ugly or just the whole dub? becuse i thought that color scheme was nice but i did rush it cause it was kinda of a heat spot so its not really clean.

next time i go painting i think ill do it sober or just puff some blunts and i havent painted anything from my blackbook yet im still sketching alot, but i got my hands on some free paint and had to use em :D

nomex do you mean the colors are ugly or just the whole dub? becuse i thought that color scheme was nice but i did rush it cause it was kinda of a heat spot so its not really clean.

next time i go painting i think ill do it sober or just puff some blunts and i havent painted anything from my blackbook yet im still sketching alot, but i got my hands on some free paint and had to use em :D
its kinda sloppy and small. make it bigger take ur time with it and add some 3-d shit and it would look nice
btw i would lose the face in ur throw.

nomex do you mean the colors are ugly or just the whole dub? becuse i thought that color scheme was nice but i did rush it cause it was kinda of a heat spot so its not really clean.

next time i go painting i think ill do it sober or just puff some blunts and i havent painted anything from my blackbook yet im still sketching alot, but i got my hands on some free paint and had to use em :D
its kinda sloppy and small. make it bigger take ur time with it and add some 3-d shit and it would look nice
btw i would lose the face in ur throw. [/b][/quote]
yeah i see what your saying, i was hammered when i did the the face thing and freestyled it in lol.

extirpate

07-27-2006, 03:33 AM

messed up here and there but im generally happy with it. crits?
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/6828/nonamejy7.jpg

ShIfTeD

07-27-2006, 03:36 AM

yeah i like that...go w/o the fill inside of the D and the O

rats

07-27-2006, 11:13 AM

The &#39;d&#39; and &#39;e&#39; are fine, I just don&#39;t know about the letter structure on the &#39;m&#39; or the varying thicknesses of the &#39;o&#39;.

Like it was said above, lose the white fill in the letters.

Give it some sort of background, even if it just a solid colour square.

area52crew

07-27-2006, 11:37 AM

fix 3-d,letter stucture of "M",like said above the fill in the "D"&"O",and to me the "e" looks like a "P.,,other than that pretty clean & i like your "O",,i cxan never think of anythigng to do with O&#39;s besides make a circle aha

scoot

07-27-2006, 04:52 PM

i thought it said dr mo

whoarethereal evil

07-27-2006, 05:41 PM

yeah where is this e?? bt i like ur d thts pretty sick

Kept1

07-27-2006, 06:43 PM

Originally posted by extirpate@Jul 27 2006, 03:33 AM
messed up here and there but im generally happy with it. crits?
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/6828/nonamejy7.jpg
I woulda went with a fatter or softer outline to fill it out, it loks a little unfinished to me. Other then that, try to stay cleaner on your lines (I know eaisier said then done).
Peas.
edit.
edit again to ask if thats dookie on the wall.
thanx.
one.

elcs

07-27-2006, 06:43 PM

Originally posted by extirpate@Jul 27 2006, 03:33 AM
messed up here and there but im generally happy with it. crits?
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/6828/nonamejy7.jpg
I like the D alot, the E looks like a P tho...or maybe an R. The M needs some work but I think the O is ok. But yea, dont do fills in those. Keep workin on it

beefgerky

07-27-2006, 08:03 PM

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap211.jpg
fucked my E up. first time painting in a while.

minesweep

07-27-2006, 09:08 PM

your r kinda looks like an a

alive

07-27-2006, 09:25 PM

Originally posted by beefgerky@Jul 27 2006, 08:03 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap211.jpg
fucked my E up. first time painting in a while.
i love it. it drifts down slightly but no worries. the letters are a bit too uneven to, some size variance is ok, but then i should be in a pattern or soemthing. just enlarge the E a bit id say. good shit tho. exchange?

beone

07-27-2006, 11:10 PM

gerk shit is tight how long u been doing throws

beefgerky

07-28-2006, 12:34 AM

almost a year. i realllly fucked the E, the R is a little to big, and yea its sorta looks like an A. but theres tons of little fuck ups in it, oh well, itl get cleaner.