--- wikisrc/guide/raidframe.mdwn 2013/03/02 13:20:56 1.6
+++ wikisrc/guide/raidframe.mdwn 2013/03/02 13:23:44 1.7
@@ -73,9 +73,7 @@ obtaining help.
search the list for the NetBSD platform on which you are using RAIDframe:
port-*`${ARCH}`*@NetBSD.org.
- ### Caution
-
- Because RAIDframe is constantly undergoing development, some information in
+ *Caution*: Because RAIDframe is constantly undergoing development, some information in
mailing list archives has the potential of being dated and inaccurate.
3. Search the [Problem Report
@@ -164,7 +162,7 @@ the RAID and:
be able to quickly reconfigure the system to boot from the remaining
component (platform dependent).
-![RAID-1 Disk Logical Layout](/guide/images/raidframe_raidL1-diskdia.png)
+![RAID-1 Disk Logical Layout](/guide/images/raidframe_raidl1-diskdia.png)
**RAID-1 Disk Logical Layout**
Because RAID-1 provides both redundancy and performance improvements, its most
@@ -198,7 +196,7 @@ has become the de facto standard for set
2. Use the installed system on Disk0/wd0 to setup a RAID Set composed of
Disk1/wd1 only.
- ![Setup RAID Set](raidframe_r1r-pp2.png)
+ ![Setup RAID Set](/guide/images/raidframe_r1r-pp2.png)
**Setup RAID Set**
3. Reboot the system off the Disk1/wd1 with the newly created RAID volume.
@@ -208,7 +206,7 @@ has become the de facto standard for set
**Reboot using Disk1/wd1 of RAID**
- 4. Add / re-sync Disk0/wd0 back into the RAID set.
+ 4. Add/re-sync Disk0/wd0 back into the RAID set.
![Mirror Disk1/wd1 back to Disk0/wd0](/guide/images/raidframe_r1r-pp4.png)
**Mirror Disk1/wd1 back to Disk0/wd0**
@@ -221,9 +219,9 @@ RAID level. Booting from a RAID set is a
boot loader to understand both 4.2BSD/FFS and RAID partitions. The 1st boot
block code only needs to know enough about the disk partitions and file systems
to be able to read the 2nd stage boot blocks. Therefore, at any time, the
-system's BIOS / firmware must be able to read a drive with 1st stage boot blocks
+system's BIOS/firmware must be able to read a drive with 1st stage boot blocks
installed. On the i386 platform, configuring this is entirely dependent on the
-vendor of the controller card / host bus adapter to which your disks are
+vendor of the controller card/host bus adapter to which your disks are
connected. On sparc64 this is controlled by the IEEE 1275 Sun OpenBoot Firmware.
This article assumes two identical IDE disks (`/dev/wd{0,1}`) which we are going
@@ -534,7 +532,7 @@ value).
### Initializing the RAID Device
-Next we create the configuration file for the RAID set / volume. Traditionally,
+Next we create the configuration file for the RAID set/volume. Traditionally,
RAIDframe configuration files belong in `/etc` and would be read and initialized
at boot time, however, because we are creating a bootable RAID volume, the
configuration data will actually be written into the RAID volume using the
@@ -773,9 +771,7 @@ rebooted. After the reboot everything is
[...snip...]
# shutdown -r now
-### Warning
-
-Always use
+*Warning*: Always use
[shutdown(8)](http://netbsd.gw.com/cgi-bin/man-cgi?shutdown+8+NetBSD-5.0.1+i386)
when shutting down. Never simply use
[reboot(8)](http://netbsd.gw.com/cgi-bin/man-cgi?reboot+8+NetBSD-5.0.1+i386).