Wow, I really liked the last stanza, and especially the first 3 lines of it. So beautiful! The line "you can stay forever if you want to" is just so wistful and sad...

Stephanee :)

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Sat, May 17th, 2008 9:06am

Thanks! yeah this poem is about a girl who I used to go to school with and had a huge crush on for the longest time...but it's written to mix my story about her in with "a rose for emily" i'm glad you liked it :]