"Normal, what is normal anymore?" On this day, Jackson Terry will realize that the word normal will never be as it once was. In this suspenseful zombie horror, you will get a first person view into just another "Normal" morning.

OK give me a moment to catch my breath and calm my quick beating heart. That was intense!!! I didn't really see any grammatical issues but I will leave the grammar to those better than I. I will just give a review based on how, I, the reader enjoyed your storytelling. Personally, I loved how this chapter opened with a sweet moment between Jackson and Beth--it reminds me how my husband and I act together. After that it was nonstop action that pulled me in and wouldn't let go. I need MORE! While I am a fan of the Walking Dead, I am actually not a fan of horror either in books or in movies/tv shows. Still this intrigued me and I want to know what happens next...soooooooo let me know when the next chapter is up. :)

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Wed, September 14th, 2016 10:14am

First let me thank you for taking the time out to read my story. It means a lot to hear that it pulled you in. Zombies are flavor that not everyone has the taste for and I appreciate you going out of your comfort zone to read it.

And second, the next chapter will be released on 10/7/16. My plan was to release one chapter every month for 12 months and then compile it all into a full book and release it. I wish I could get it all written faster but piece by piece the puzzle will all come together.

I started to just skim through, planning to read it thoroughly later.
but before I new it I was at the bottom and read every word. It pulled me in and didn't let go.
Just as 'UnicornMom' said, i'm not a big fan of horror or 'zombie' stories.
But the way you described the the setting felt real. Very well done!

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Wed, September 14th, 2016 10:16am

Thank you for checking it out. I absolutely understand not being zombie fans. I can't stand the hack and slash mentality a lot of zombie related books/tv/film/art take so I wanted to take more of a "real" approach what would happen if you woke up and the world was different.

Intense! You really know how to set the stage. Man, here I was still reading the love and sweetness, then you plunge me into a rollercoaster of holy crap, lol! I like everything, from the build up to the inevitable chaos that has to come. Let's just hope he gets to them before something happens!! Excellent Chapter!