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The Empress says:I'm intrigued by the idea of a superhero! Very creative :) I think it's interesting, the idea that a witch could use her powers to be a superhero to the muggles. And having to avoid being caught by the ministry!
Great idea.
If I would give one criticism, it's that it gets a bit hard to follow at one point toward the end. When your main character is reading the paperwork. I had to read it twice to get where her thought process was going. I guess, personally, I was confused how she went from not knowing about this 'superhero' to being them.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I was very enthusiastic about it when it first popped into my head :) Everything just seemed to fit really well, and my imagination sort of ran away with me.
Oh, does it? I'll have a read through now and see what I can tweak, hopefully make it clearer. She simply never made the connection between who her friend was talking about- a guy- and herself, but yeah, I'll definitely look at reworking it.
Thank you for the helpful criticism and lovely review! :)