Very telling (showing too) in the way time is divided. Eternity on her wrists along with yesterday marked, with past getting under the skin of the future. Really cool how you compose that it in various line lengths that do not exceed 4 words! Seeing the sunset change in her eyes before that final “leap” produces a lovely effect.

whoever she is, the poem describes her in a way I personally wanted to adopt something from her.
The secrets- when to dance and where to run, the smile wrapped in shadows and truth/ that’s appealing/,
the eyes changing colors with the set of the sun … she is lucky to have you write about …