Posted 2 Years Ago

Posted 2 Years Ago

"I swoon for you like wilted grass", wow! Your use of imagery is beautiful, this flows so well and gives off such a strong emotion. Really vibed with me. Great piece! Now I want to go through all your writing, haha. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago

Posted 2 Years Ago

Posted 2 Years Ago

First of all, I love the way you rhymed it had a really nice flow to it that didn't end. I also really liked how you started out each stanza with a single word. It described the rest of the stanza, I really enjoyed that. I also was captivated by the incredible emotion that was behind your words. You showed each and every aspect of love and how it isn't always happy, sunshine, rainbows. Love is hard. Love can be cruel. And you showed the trueness of this. I really enjoyed this poem, and your sensory detail was right on par. Amazing job. Thank you for sharing.