I would like it better if you
1) included some non-European languages, or
2) did not cover the picture of the toilet but included it as a final option since it would work as a sort of universally understood version (though I admit toilets don't look the same worldwide)
3) both 1 and 2

That text layout angers the anal retentive graphic designer who lives inside me, rent-free, demanding booze every 3rd day, so he can jabber on about leading and tracking and kerning to people who don't give a damn. 2

Mezo, i experimented with alot of different tracking and kerning styles, and a ton of different text, and I decided to keep the line lengths the same, and vary the text size more than the kerning and leading. although, as you should be able to tell, the kerning and leading were both messed with.

Thanks to everyone who likes the design, and sorry for effing up the languages (and possibly offending people).

Is it just culturally correct (in france) to ask where a multitude of toilets are, rather than just the toilet? Because being in French 4, and having been to france this last summer, I wish I had known that.

Don't try to defend that typography, it's painful to look at. And not in that good, intentional kind of way. Maybe you did adjust the kerning, tracking, and leading. But you did not do it well. It's a mess, it's inconsistent, and it does not in any way help the look or legibility of your design.

The concept is kind of cute, but the execution leaves me grasping for a nice way to describe it.