Uhh.. Yeah, I'm kinda stuck on what else I can add, and how far I've got to go. —Braydie07:46, 8 March 2007 (UTC)

Humour:

7.5

I like it

Concept:

7

Certainly onto something

Prose and formatting:

6

Nothing wrong here

Images:

7

Top two images are good, you could maybe add another larger one.

Miscellaneous:

6.814562

Your score on the Hemp-Zoodlebagger scale of Miscellaneosity

Final Score:

34.314562

A good article. I like the mix of humour with the terrorism reference introduced well. I don't know if the article is inspired by Worms (PC game) but it was the first thing I thought of when I read it so you could make more of this if you want to expand the article. Maybe a screen shot of a homing pigeon in action (if you don't have the game you could get one off the web I'm sure) or a reference to sheep/cows/concrete donkeys would work.

Hey, i made a page for the exact same thing after looking on the requests page. It said one had'nt been made since you hav'nt capatalised the p, so i donated my bits to you.Jollybaron 20:51, February 19, 2010 (UTC)