Oh, I can't wait to read next chapter of this one!
Mrs.Figg seemed a little to snoopy to me- maybe Harry knocks a piece of furniture or a vase down and cries out, then Mrs.Figg comes to the door or some such senerio.
Other then that, I loved it.
I am a big fan of Harry/Snape fics but student/teacher slash is not my thing so this was perfect.