Frame 4 Let Keroshi look over his left schoulder like he is looking back at her. In frames 2, 4 , 6 and 8 the kids look a bit stiff. acompany the with some hand gestures to emphasize the emotions...like (it's not there) elbows backwards hands open. and frame 8 hand on the cheecks... I'm missing the water in frame 7... also frame 7 let Keroshi follow mina with his head... ^^