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100 wc but where would we hide it all

Ding, Ding, Ding rang the school bell as Josh and John wearily trudged up to the school gates. Their teacher was waiting right outside their classroom door waiting for them. “Where have you been” Mrs Jones demanded, “I don’t know they mumbled as they pushed past their teacher into the classroom. Finally, after Mrs Jones explained algebra for the 100th time thy were finally allowed out for lunch. The boys raced down the stairs and away to their favourite

Place where they found a whole stash of lollies, “wow, said John but where would we hide it all?”

One Response

Ethan,
I like how you started with the sound effects for the school bell. Additionally, your vocabulary was strong such as your verb choices: trudged, mumbled, demanded and raced.
Keep writing.
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA