I should have written reviews for the other chapters, but I couldn't stop reading until chapter 8. First off, WOW! You have a way of writing emotion that I could only dream about. The exchanges between Harry and Hermione were amazing, I felt that I was experiencing those feelings as were having them. Even the anger that Draco showed was very well written, kudos. But there still one thing you need to do, update quickly because I NEED more.

This is one of the best fanfics I'd ever read, and believe me, I'm a hard-done perfectionist, and very difficult to please.
I love your use of words and that excellent plot of yours - you really know how to express the inner essence of the characters. All in all, well done!

Reviewer: grindelwaldDate: 01/18/05 15:15 Chapter: The Pain of Moving On

Man where are you...This is truly amazing...plzplzpzlpzlpzlzplzplzplzpzlzplzpzl UPdate ssoooon

Nice chapter! Poor Hermione! Haha Hermy, that's cute! I can't wait till Harry kicks Draco's ass. He really is the bad guy here. I always thought him as a pest but not this bad!
This chapter was sweet at the end. Very nicely written, please continue soon!

um...................would you like um take less time making the chapters because you took like forever what was it like two months and it be much better if you didn't take that much time

Author's Response: Sorry about the delays, what can I say, I'm a perfectionnist!
I just posted chapter 6 on www.portkey.org, since Mugglenet.com is shutting down for the holidays.
Those are the two sites where I update the story. Portkey is often faster, because they don't moderate every chapter once you're registered as an author.
Good reading!
DS
P.S. I will try to update faster, though!