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Name: Toushiro's Technique chart Type: MixRank: Genin and upSpecial Items: His sword techniques will require the rain bladeDescription: These are Toushiro Inusoshi's jutsu that he and Gobi (Houkou) developed.

Kouuton: Jinkoukouu (Rain Release: Artificial Rain)Type:NinjutsuChakra: N/ADescription: Simply put, this jutsu makes it rain. The rain is normal and not increased in any way. Thus, it costs an unnoticeable portion of chakra. Rains for thirty minutes.

Kouu Bunshin no Jutsu (Rain Doppleganger Technique)Type:NinjutsuChakra: N/ADescription: Only usable while raining, this jutsu is a weaker version of the Mizu Bunshin. It can attack, but is far weaker than its creator and dissipates in one hit, or when the rain stops.

Kouuton: Kouudan (Rain Release: Rain Bomb)Type: NinjutsuChakra: 500Description: This is a dense, hard ball of collected humidity from around the air. It can be used as a makeshift shield to absorb kunai and shuriken, or utilized as an offensive weapon. Once it impacts upon a target, it explodes into many droplets of water charged with chakra. Therefore, the raindrops are akin to fragments of metal until the chakra is dispersed into the air. A lot of water is drawn out of the air

Kouuton: Kouu Buraindo (Rain Release: Rain Blind)Type:NinjutsuChakra: 750Description: Kouu Buraindo is a jutsu for a quick escape. Upon executing the hand seals for this technique, a flash rain appears, coming down in sheets, to blanket your getaway. Repeated users of this jutsu are fond of using Kawarimi to replace them with a splash of water. The flash rain may catch you off guard and daze you for a moment, even if you expect it.

Kouuton: Kouudangan (Rain Release: Rain Bullet)Type:NinjutsuChakra: 1,000Description: Only usable while raining, this jutsu causes the raindrops around it's user to shoot at a designated target at high speed. Stops after a short period of time

Ooki Kouu no Jutsu (Big Rain Skill)Type: NinjutsuChakra:1,500By sending subtle chakra waves into the clouds, the user is able to create unusually large nuclei for the water droplets to condense on. The end result is big rain drops that fall to the ground at a faster then normal rate. They aren't big or fast enough to cause any real damage, but they are quite distracting.

Gouu no Jutsu (Heavy Rain Skill)Type: NinjutsuChakra:1,750A jutsu that actually uses the victimís clothing as a medium to effect him or her. By filling the clothing with water-elemental chakra the user causes the clothing to fully retain all water it comes in contact with which will gradually cause the clothing to become heavier and heavier. Unfortunately, this jutsu that does not create water, so it is only useful in a rainy or otherwise wet environment.

Kouu no Yari (Rain Spear) Type: NinjutsuChakra:2,000By using chakra to condense a large amount of rain water into one place, the user creates a spear of water in the clouds. The spear can at any time be called down to strike an opponent with only one hand-seal. The water will stay in the form of spear for a short amount of time (three posts). If the spear is not used by that time it will fall uselessly as rain. The only warning this technique gives is a second pause in the rain when the water is gathered and condensed.

Kouuton: Satsukiyami (Rain Release: Dark Night in the Rainy Season)Type: Genjutsu/NinjutsuChakra: 2,500Description: Essentially this is the same as Kouuton: Jinkoukouu, with one major difference. This technique also envelopes the area in darkness with a genjutsu/ninjutsu. To the victim, the area becomes too dark to see properly, as if it were night. Added with the sound of the rain around, this effectively takes away three senses (sight, sound, smell). The victim cannot see well, cannot hear well, and the rain washes away odors, making smell useless for finding the enemy. Lasts for 5 posts if your chakra exceeds over 5,000 then it'll last for 12 if over 10,000 it'll last for 15 posts

Borudou (Bolt Shock )Type: KinjutsuChakra: 3,200Description: An advanced form of Raiton that uses chakra to increase the amount of bio-electricity in the brain and sends the excess down to the hands in order to form advanced Raiton techniques.

Borudou: Borutou (Bolt Shock: Bolt Sword)Type: KinjutsuChakra: 4,300Description: A technique utilizing an advanced for of Raiton. After drawing out the bio-electricity focused in his hands, the user can form swords of this electricity in front of his palm. The borutou, unlike the boruken, can be grasped by the user, and he will remain unaffected by the bio-electricity. The borutou do cause actual damage to a living opponent, and are strong enough to cut through steel. They have the side effect of causing one to become temporarily paralyzed. The paralysis lasts for 3 posts .

Borudou: Boruken (Bolt Shock: Bolt Dart )Type: KinjutsuChakra: 5,500Description: A technique utilizing an advanced form of Raiton. After drawing out the bio-electricity focused in his/her hands, the user can can form a dart made of electricity in front of his/her palm. It does not touch the user, but merely floats in front of his palm. It can be launched at any time, and moves at high speed. When it hits an opponent, it causes no physical damage to a living being, though non-living items will be physically affected. Instead, the dart temporarily paralyzes the opponent. The paralysis last for 10 posts. More than one dart can be made at a time.

Kuchiyose: Naraku no Ouja ( Spiritualism Technique: King of Hell )Type:FuuinjutsuChakra: 25,000Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows him to summon different size and skill levels of creature. Pein summons the King of Hell statue used by the Akatsuki.

Borudou: Daiboruken Odoroki (Bolt Shock: Great Bolt Dart Surprise)Type: KinjutsuChakra: 50,000Description: An advanced form of Raiton: Boruken. Instead of just forming a single dart before his/her palm, the user will move his hands in any direction, and a trail of boruken will be formed and remain stationary. When the user forms a single kata, the boruken will be launched in one of two directions; forward or backward. If the victim is hit with a large number of darts, the electricity will fry his brain, killing him. the user can can wait to use any boruken that have been formed.

Kou Tsume (Rain Claws)Type: TaijutsuChakra: 1,200 Description: This when the user holds the blade out and turns it into water. The water is like a light blue transparent metal that fuses with user's hands making claws (the user is unable to perform handseals with this active)

Mukizu-Tetsu no Jutsu (Flawless Edge)Chakra: 4000Type: NinjutsuDescription: A ninjutsu where the user takes one post to mold chakra into his/her hand. Once complete, the user willl run his/her fingers along the blade leaving it shimmering with chakra. The true purpose of the chakra is to make the blade of the sword feel absolutely weightless, and by molding chakra into the hand running up through the entire arm, handmovements with this hand are intensified. The next slash performed with this hand will be executed x2 the speed of the user.

Baisuu Kou no YaibaType: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu Chakra: 5,000Description: This is when the user duplicates the blade and levitates the duplicates and commands them to go in any direction he/she chooses chooses

Kou Tetsu (Rain Edge)Chakra: 7000Type: NinjutsuDescription: With an upslash of the user's sword strong winds blow to the opponent, strong enough to slowly push the opponent back and makes it impossible to look directly into the winds without some sort of eye protection. Next, glowing light blue blades that look like sharp pieces of rain that is harden by chakra, form in this wind cutting the opponent at wind speed.

Fukami: Tsuyaryuu Endan (Inner Depths: Shinning Dragon Blast)Chakra: 22.500Type: NinjutsuJutsu Requirements: Fukami: Goumon-Attou (Inner Depths: Overwhelming Torment)Description: The user stabs his or her blade into a surface (after a series of handseals), next a shinning white dragon erupts from the surface and at great speeds homes on the opponent trying to swallow them. Taking a direct hit from this will result in numerous amounts of cuts and slices in nearly every part of the body.

Fukami: Kangoku-Ken (Inner Depths: Sword Prison)Chakra: 26.000Type: NinjutsuDescription: The user stabs his or her blade into a surface (after a series of handseals) and with a 40-foot radius from that stab point, about 50 blades will quickly rise from around the opponent in a square like figure and impound the opponent in a thick layer of blades from all directions, sides and above. To get this prison inplace, the user must keep one hand on his/her sword that is stabbed into the gound.

Akuma-Utsuro no Meiro (Maze of Satanís Emptiness)Chakra:28.000Type: GenjutsuDescription: An extremely powerful genjutsu. This genjutsu can be activated by flicking the blade of the user's sword. The opponent will see the blade of the sword disappear before them along with the scenery. Everything will be black with only the opponent and the user holding a sword handle. Countless blades will rise from the dark surface to form a maze. The maze of swords will reflect false images that the user creates. The user will be in this maze as well, able to physically attack the enemy and able to see through the maze of swords as if they weren't there.

Aisu-Meiun no Yaiba (Blade of Icy Doom)Chakra: 30.000Type: NinjutsuDescription: The userís blade will be coated with a thin layer of ice that eventually consumes the blade entirely (after a series of handseals), extending up to 6 feet in length. Whatever touches this icy blade will begin to freeze over, extending its icy coating over whatever it touches. Being stabbed by this blade will result in frozen blood and organs, eventually disabling them, extremely deadly.

Gobi Tailed Beast Revival

Gobi's AwakeningDescription: This is when Toushiro starts to gain Houkou's physical features but doesnt receive any of the tails yet. Toushiro's eyes become more narrow and they turn dark blue, His hair grows a bit longer and becomes more stiff, He gains sharper nails on his hands and feet. His teeth grow longer and he gains fangs.

Gobi's Cloak Tail OneDescription: Toushiro's appearance is the same as it was during the gobi awakening, just now he gains an aura outline of white chakra around him and one tail that has flames on the top half of it. Toushiro gains a great amount of strength. He gets minor burns after this cloak wears off

Gobi's Cloak Tail twoDescription: Toushiro has the same appearance he has on tail one but he just gains his second tail, The tail of wind. This tail gives Toushiro a great amount of chakra and his chakra decreases slower then usual (The top half of his tail is wind)

Gobi's Cloak Tail threeDescription: This is when Toushiro starts really turning into Houkou. He stands about 20ft and has a whitish blue chakra aura that consumes his body, making you unable to see any part of his skin or body just chakra. Toushiro does not have control of himself in state and from this tail he gains great speed/Swiftness and acceleration. (The top half of his tail is lightning)

Gobi's Cloak Tail FourDescription: Toushiro has the same features as tail three but his chakra just becomes thicker and he gets bigger since he's on the way to releasing gobi to its true state. This is where Toushiro gains the ability to heal himself at a steady rate, making it almost impossible to beat him by force. (The top half of his tail is water)

Gobi's Cloak Final tailDescription: Toushiro hasnt fully transformed into Houkou yet and still has the same appearance as tail four and three. He just gains a great amount of defense making almost impossible for him to be harmed by mere taijutsu. ( the top half of his tail is earth)

Gobi TransformationDescription: Toushiro is no longer in control, it is now the gobi with all three five tails. He not only has strength, chakra, speed, Healing and Defense but all five chakra natures. (Fire, Wind, Water, Earth and lightning) This makes it easy for gobi to eraticate anything in its path, this great ability is what makes Gobi a great rival to all bijuus even the ones with more tails then himself.

Ok, this time I did notice some issues, for one the "dark night in a rainy season" jutsu seems a bit god mod like (due the the possible number of posts it can hold out,) i mean it leaves an opponent useless up to 20 posts? lets lower those numbers some.

and you have Katon level 3 listed twice, 55,000 also might be to high of a number for each of the elements.

But as for the rest of it, it looks good by me, lower those numbers and i'll check (or Ds will ) when you get that done

Alright. I'm diggin the revival thing, and don't worry, I'll correct where the level 3 is and since he gets harmed by tapping into the chakra its not to god-mod either so. I think this is good to go Captain!

and on the bright note, now that your chart is accepted that means your character is too

I apologize if I'm raining on a parade or two, but those chakra levels are waaay too low for some of those techs.

And also, I think that a bloodline like this should be able to either: A.) Give you all the techniques of someone half your chakra. Eg: You have 10k chakra and you can do elemental moves of any type of up to 5k chakra or B.)You can't use any listed techniques, but you can mould your elemental chakra to a preset extent based on your level.

At a very low level, this character would be nearly invincible. In fact, at any level, this character could thrash anyone of an equal level without much trouble. If you look at all the strong characters in Naruto, it's not that they have a better tech chart (except maybe Sasuke and Itachi later on in the manga) but it's that they either have higher chakra(naruto), they train harder(lee), or the one that I almost never see in this rp, they have some sort of story driven motivation to fight harder(Neji).