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Review:

Severusismylife says:Please don't use americanisms such as 'jerk'in your writing or even American spellings of things such as 'Colors' because the wonderful thing about Harry potter is that it is fabulously British and America has absolutely nothing to do with it. I appreciate that it is hard if you speak like that but don't put it in your work because if makes it so unauthentic.
Apart from that I really enjoyed your chapter.

Author's Response: Please don't phrase requests as though they are actually orders for me to do something.

I understand that it must be frustrating for you, but I'm not really sure what I can do about it. I do my best to write as British as possible, but I am totally and completely American. As unfortunate as that is, it is the truth, and if I do something wrong it means that I am not actually aware that I am doing it wrong.

Besides, I don't want to have to focus on phrasing things "British" when I'm trying to learn how to be a better writer. I will do my best, but I just want to let the words flow from me, and besides, I get very few complaints about this.

I think most people, like me, just want to get lost in the story. But, as I said, I do my best. If that isn't good enough, I apologize. Or apologise, if that makes you feel better. ~writergirl8