I like it! What I like is that in the beginning, it seems that the story is based on the loss of Wes, but what you realize is that Aiden and Lacee are also trying to maintain a relationship. After that realization, you then discover that there are two factors that are affecting their relationship: the loss of Wes and Aiden's behavior, which I really like how you planned this out.

What I love the most is that even though Wes died, he still helps Lacee, because you used his journal. That was very clever.