Interesting and different. Bella finally realized she had the best thing in life right in front of her and waiting for her all along. The lookalike idea was intriguing.

Lauren chapter 1 . 11/23/2012

This. Was. Brilliant. I LOVE that you focused on how fucking stupid Bella is and how she totally doesn't deserve Jake and all of his perfection. Like. No words. Really just good. Will definitely recommend.

WOW! I liked how you get Bella to understand how mentally and emotionally damaged she is, by making her live through the death of the person she loves but doesn't appreciate. Like the saying goes "you don't know what you have until it's lost" I am glad you allowed her a chance to fix her mistake. I'm a sucker for happy endings.

...I don't get it. What was the Lookalike's motivation? What exactly were his powers (Could he know about your personal history just by looking? Could he turn back time? Could he shoot a werewolf so that he dies but shoot a human so that she survives?)? Or was he just a plot tool to learn Bella a lesson in a very weird way?