Wow. This is really good. I love the way you wrote the whole poem as if she was an impenatrable fortress, and then you end it in such a contradictory way... Just... wow. Just wow. :P LoL Good job and keep it up.

I really loved this, especially the first four lines and the last line... though, when you say impregnable... I think you might mean inpenatratable. Inprgnable means able to get pregnant...but all in all, this was a wonderful poem.

Kudos... i added this to my favs.

-pieces

Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2006

Although this poem doesn't seem like something I would usually like, it works really well. Keep writing!