Alright so pretty interesting story idea but I have one problem, when tsutsume is first introduced I'm pretty sure it's stated it has two tails then you repeatedly call it a sanbi then one time during his fight with orochimaru you say all four tails and then barely two paragraphs down its back to three so what is it? Pick a number and stick with it

While I'll admit I was a smidge upset when I saw the chapter name, I'm happy you at least finished it in a backwards way. A detailed outline is way better than just a straight up abandoning. I truly wish more people would do that. Thank you for a great story and for not leaving us hanging with a million questions.
-Samm

The intro of this chapter needs specific praise. I normally don't like reading descriptions, but you are very literate. The way you describe the forest makes my nose tingle, remembering my trips to the center of my island - where the air is fresh and the trees the most beautiful shade of green. I just can't; no words can explain how much I loved reading that intro.

I should also mention that I like how you're shaping up Naruto's character. At first he seemed very mature and detached, but I'm glad to know that there is still that sweet part of him here.