I really like it so far. You put in a bit of suspence and the conversation between Cho and Harry was right on. I\'m looking forward to the next chapter. One thing; the chapters could be longer. I know it\'s hard to make long chapters, but if they\'re not longer than readers won\'t think it\'s worth their time.
Keep writing,
Mione M

This is pretty good! Sounds just like a conversation between Cho and Harry should be. I\'m thinking...erm...is the last paragraph Ginny? I don\'t think it could be Hermione...\'cause Harry saved Ginny\'s life. Am I right?