The Alpha's Abused Mate

Addison malia was dropped on the door step of the dark sky pack a few weeks old with only a note and a necklace. She was passed to the omegas to be raised until she was fit and ready to take on her dutys. At age eleven she was beginning to get treated differently, she would be pushed around by pack members and ignored from others. A few weeks later the abuse started, she was no longer a omega she was down graded to the lowest of the low. The bottom of the food chain as you will, she was a camada. At nineteen she decided if they weren't gunna kill her she needs to leave.
What happens when she crosses the wrong territory line?

Awwh, it's sad how she was abused so much! But the chapter turned into something really cute towards the end. With a little bit of edit this could be an even more amazing story than it already it :). It's a good plot ^_^

Okay, let me say that you need to capitalize some words in a quotation, and there's a sentence:
I had shirts on that's it
That's it is not necessary. You also have run-on sentences. Overall your chapters need polishing up.