[GP5, MIDI] First song, No 1

This is my first song nearing completion, though there's a few parts I'd like to change, such as the drums, just don't know how yet :P I have no lyrics either, just a simple melody. I'm working on it though, not so good with writing those yet :P Would be glad if I got some crits.

ctb

12-29-2006, 09:53 AM

The intro, not too keen on that. The part with the acoustic in is really nice :D The leads sound really great too, really fit in with the whole song.

Oasis-fanatic

12-29-2006, 09:53 AM

kinda metallica/slayer touch about it xD

maybe if it was sped up but its not bad 7/10 for your first song

South-of-Heaven

12-29-2006, 09:54 AM

That's quite a good track. I would only change the bass a little bit and the transition from acoustic to distortion. Rock on.