Time marches ever onward, heedless of two ponies it left to sift through the fragments of their shattered lives for a reason to spread their wings and soar. Only darker skies await them, but above the clouds, the sun still shines.

Great start so far. The detail on the signals used to maintain formation while doing tricks was really cool, and I enjoyed being a part of the team by proxy. Now, I wonder how things go from here . . .

6393856 Honestly I can't bring myself to care in the slightest what Rainbows side of the story is. What she pulled in Transcendence is (in my opinion) inexcusable behavior for the Element of Loyalty. I wouldn't be surprised if she unknowingly wound up unable to call on her Element after what she did to Scoots.

This one and one other story I have read wind up casting Rainbow in a very bad light. At least I can look at them as alternate universes.