Watching a Sunset 1

Below is the poem entitled Watching a Sunset 1 which was written by poet
S.Jagathsimhan
Nair. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Watching a Sunset 1

Watching a Sunset
Sunset in the sky, in colorful splendor
Sunset of life, a remembrance of blunders
Sunset of love, a matter of dejection
As love once was of unstinted affection.
A play of oranges, golds and reds in sky
As a posse of thoughts are passing me by.
Digressing to dream of a golden mountain
And a falling sun filtering through fountains
I flit back to view the spectacle in the sky
Now, a poetic play of hues as, home, birds fly.
For Skat's contest on 27/6/2013

This is the only poem that I will have time to read this weekend...working long hours...I will be savoring the intense images of colour and emotion...A new favorite for my collection! It is a beauty! I also notice that your rhyme does not sound forced or unnatural which is often hard for poets to do...Glad you shared this with your fellow poets, Jaggy! Awesome job! gwendolen