Monday, November 13, 2017

Why I Enjoy Writing Fiction

Image used courtesy of National Novel Writing Month

November is National Novel Writing Month, aka NaNoWriMo. This year, hundreds of thousands of people from around the world are toiling at their computers trying to write a 50,000 word novel in the month of November. That works out to writing an average of 1,667 words a day every day for thirty days.

I am one of them. Last year I participated in NaNoWriMo as well. I started a new novel, a post-apocalyptic tale about a group of women who have survived in an underground shelter for eighteen years after the global collapse of society. I continued working on it throughout last December and January. Then I set it aside, and did some other things, like renovations, selling a house, buying a house, retiring, and moving. This November, I decided to pick up on writing the novel from where I left off, 50,000 words and 13 chapters into it.

I have been spending hours on it every day. (That is why I have been neglecting my blog.) I am a slow writer. I do not write the way the NaNo website suggests — just flinging words onto the page without worrying about sentence structure, cohesion, or flow. I write carefully, rereading and editing as I go. I build the story brick by brick. That way, when it comes time to go back and revise the first draft, I will have something solid to work with, rather than a mess that seems overwhelming.

I am really enjoying writing this novel. I spend my days in a fog, preoccupied by thinking about my characters and their trials and tribulations. Then when I sit down at the computer, the story just spools out of me.

Why do I love writing fiction so much? It is a good question in this era of the self-narrative, when autobiographical writing, or memoir, or autoethnography is so popular. After all, in memoir, the plot has already happened; you don’t have to make anything up. You have a ready-made story. “This is what happened to me.”

Well, autobiographical writing has a couple of big challenges. Although autobiographical writing, such as memoir, is about the self, every person is embedded in a social context. Therefore, when you write about yourself, you are also writing about people close to you. It is easy to offend, or to disrespect others' privacy. That can be hard, especially when you are in an ongoing relationship with those others that you would like to maintain, or when the things you are saying are negative.

If you write innocuous things about other people, perhaps this issue of privacy is less of a problem, but bland accounts of past experiences do not tend to make very interesting reading. People like to read about conflicts, where there is a villain and a hero, and challenges are faced and overcome. There can be a real temptation to spice up the truth a bit, to add a bit of drama. But in memoir, as Mary Karr says, writing the truth is the fundamental rule that you must not break.

So this is one of the reasons that I love to write fiction. I can make my fictional characters as nasty or as foolish as can be, without the risk of alienating someone in my real life. In fiction, I don’t have to leave out the embarrassing bits to spare someone’s feelings. Really, those juicy details are what make the story.

Another thing about fiction is that you can make the plot do whatever you want. You are not constrained by the history of events as they actually happened, and therein is the true joy of fiction. You get to use your imagination to invent whatever strange world your creative self can envision. You can work out the complexities of your protagonist’s personality, and toss one crazy challenge after another at them, just to see how they behave.

When you write fiction, you pose the question “What if?” What if a group of women lived in a shelter in tunnels and basement rooms under the ruins of a shattered university while lawless gangs roamed through the destroyed city scavenging for material goods? How would this character behave if she was spurned by her lover? What ethical choices would that character face when torn between following the rules of the collective or helping an outsider?

Ultimately, that is the great value of fiction. You can put yourself into someone's circumstances and try to understand how they might think, feel, and act in that situation. Through fiction, you can acquire a deeper empathy for someone unlike yourself. Through fiction, you might just get a little closer to uncovering a truth of human experience. And, most of all, writing fiction is fun!

Where I Write

By the way, if you are a NaNoWriMo participant and you would like to find me, I write under the pen name AnnaHarvey, and my current novel is called The Age of Grandchildren.

Thank-you Donna. I find it interesting that although I didn’t look at the manuscript for 9 months, once I picked it up again, the story was still there waiting for me. Perhaps I’ll post another excerpt. Super busy next couple of weeks coming up though!

Your novel sounds fascinating, Jude. I have not attempted any fiction yet, but crave all of the benefits that you've described so well in this post. I especially want that "lost in a fog" feeling when the characters and their challenges are so alive to you, the writer. I hope that someday I'll get the opportunity to read The Age of Grandchildren (interesting title).

Thank you so much, Karen. Writing fiction is so much fun. It took me a long time commit to writing a book length story; the size of such a project just seemed intimidating. I don’t know why, though. I have always been a long winded writer, ha ha.

You should try it. You are a great writer and I think you’d like it. Also, one thing about fiction that I have discovered is that the story comes together better when I let go of control a bit. The characters really do take over. So I think it is a great way to stretch as a writer.

Thanks Anabel. It really is too much to complete in a month and still hope for quality. The good thing is that I find myself being totally immersed, so the story almost seems to write itself. The bad part is that everything else in my life gets neglected for a month.

Wow! I'm not sure if I could write that much each day. It would be a great challenge though! I'll have to make a note in my calendar for next August to start giving it some thoughts. I think I'd really struggle writing fiction (but I've never tried either!)

If November does not work for you, or if you are working on some other kind of writing project besides a novel, NaNoWriMo hosts some other writing events in other months as well, like Camp NaNo. I haven’t participated in them though. Also, lots of people use the November event for printing projects other than novels and just adapt it to their purposes. I seldom hit the daily word target!

Aw, thanks Janis. I hope that someday I will have a finished project. I don’t think that I will get a great deal of writing done during the rest of this November for reasons that I will reveal in an upcoming post.