Good. If you have an Imgur Acc, you can delete anyone anytime. Otherwise, you can delete only once.

I thought Cesar was like a grumpy grandfather or something, with less sense of humor at all. Weird.

He captures children to make comments and then make himself look funny and cool.I know because he...he...d-did it to me...

W-what?! I can't let you both say this kind of stuff...first of all, I am not a grumpy old man, I actually act around 15 despite being so old...besides, I don't kidnap children to make posts, I kidnap all sort of people for all sorts of purposes. And I only kidnapped you because you where going to tell the government about you-know-what...you had to be stopped somehow.

...ok I'll stop now before this gets any more off-topic...anyone remembers what this thread is about?

I'm in love with this series right now. Listening to music while reading these sprite comics are hell good.It's funny that Batman makes a cameo in the sprite comics. That's very creative.

Thanks I'm really glad you're having some fun with them! They're pretty fun to make. Ever since I was a kid, I've always wanted to write mystery stories and this gives me a platform to deliver some mystery to people.

I'm working on case 3 as case 2 is released. I'm only about a fifth of the way through it, but it might be read for when its time to start.

It's Friday over there? Heh...I know what you were doing on the night of the crime which is updating the comic later than usual...(Up to this point I've been bluffing...But now I can crack out that one piece of evidence conjecture!)You had to have been...>Playing Soccer>Going to a petting zoo>PartyingClearly you were partying!

It's Friday over there? Heh...I know what you were doing on the night of the crime which is updating the comic later than usual...(Up to this point I've been bluffing...But now I can crack out that one piece of evidence conjecture!)You had to have been...>Playing Soccer>Going to a petting zoo>PartyingClearly you were partying!

Alright, this one had some problems. First of all, a grammaritical error at the third strip of the comic. It should've been "part and parcel of this case". Sorry, my inner Grammar Nazi couldn't stop.

Next is the 15th strip of this comic. "We ran his fingerprints"? Is it even possible for one to run in a fingerprint? That's extremely impossible. Again, another Grammar Mistake. You really should perform a spell check or revise the comic once after you finished making.

It would've been better if the sentence was like "We ran through his fingerprints." Yes, that's better. AAI references lol.

Sorry. I wasn't completely amused. Today had errors. Two, actually. Pardon me for suddenly 'judging' your comic. I meant to write a review of today's comic. And I did...

It's not judging, it's simply criticism. And you will get a suitable punishment for it.*readies fire*Anywho, I suppose I may as well join in on criticizing today's issue.It would sound better if you said "Because he didn't appear in our database, we can assume he's an illegal immigrant" instead of "He didn't appear on any of our databases, so we can presume he's an illegal immigrant"And I think it'd sound better if you said "The defendant killed him" instead of "The suspect killed him"And the part about the victim having no identification might sound better if it were, "We were unable to find anything to identify the victim"

Alright, this one had some problems. First of all, a grammaritical error at the third strip of the comic. It should've been "part and parcel of this case". Sorry, my inner Grammar Nazi couldn't stop.

Next is the 15th strip of this comic. "We ran his fingerprints"? Is it even possible for one to run in a fingerprint? That's extremely impossible. Again, another Grammar Mistake. You really should perform a spell check or revise the comic once after you finished making.

It would've been better if the sentence was like "We ran through his fingerprints." Yes, that's better. AAI references lol.

Sorry. I wasn't completely amused. Today had errors. Two, actually. Pardon me for suddenly 'judging' your comic. I meant to write a review of today's comic. And I did...

-Patchy

Oliver wrote:

It's not judging, it's simply criticism. And you will get a suitable punishment for it.*readies fire*Anywho, I suppose I may as well join in on criticizing today's issue.It would sound better if you said "Because he didn't appear in our database, we can assume he's an illegal immigrant" instead of "He didn't appear on any of our databases, so we can presume he's an illegal immigrant"And I think it'd sound better if you said "The defendant killed him" instead of "The suspect killed him"And the part about the victim having no identification might sound better if it were, "We were unable to find anything to identify the victim"

Oliver, I am NOT going on trial again! *whispers* Franny, grab the whip. I have a court case coming up next month...

I've fixed it and put a new version up. There was another grammatical error in terms of a misplaced 'that' and some other things which didn't feel right as well.

I appreciate you guys pointing the bits and pieces out, as I'm only human at the end of the day. Sometimes the comic will be lazily put together to meet the daily update, especially if I am exhausted, but I'll always strive to do my best.

I guess the rest of you guys have Patch and Oliver to thank for picking up my slack today

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