Wow your storytelling skills and art are some of the most professional and exciting "indie manga" work I've seen! I can't wait to see what level you take this to. Please don't let this drop! experience and practice are the best teachers.

I was wondering if something was going to happen, but not like completely stoping the plot....then again I did about 15 comics before I actually thought of any kind of plot that was suitable. Up until then I was just winging it...
The new title sounds a lot more suggestive, can't wait to see the result!

i don't think i should you my space to the max
it'd look distracted if i do that
but i guess i could add in a few more things as bgs
& i dont draw a rough sketch (only layouts)
cus usually, people's 1st time drawing something is better than drawing the 2nd time of the same thing
& i also dont use 10x15 in
i use 5.25x7 in
my scanner's not big,
so i cant draw on big paper
thanks for the compliment
and thank you for being honest
seriously, thank you for being honest
i like ppl who're straigh-forward (on some things)
now i know what to do to improve lol ^ ^

Not so bad. You need to work on your use of layout, camera angle, and pacing. On top of that you need to use your space to it maximun, there were a lot of empty and dead space.
I recommend you do at least 2 or 3 thumbnail rough before you get into actual size. And work your actual size at 10X15 inches. When you shrink it down, your inking will look sharper.
You have a good since of contrast and story telling. Keep up the good work and work hard.