Yeah, yeah. I can't figure out the title yet. Maybe someone can give it something when I get around to writing the rest of them

Chapter 1The Paladin

The sun is already low on the horizons as the merchant ship Bright Daystar docks in the city of Drendar

This post has been edited by Phage on Jan 22 2007, 08:27 PM

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Veni, vidi, dormivi.- I came, I saw... I slept.-----------------------------Current writing project (on hold): The Hidden DepthsCheck out A Guide to Divine Asskickery - DN Cleric Guide!"Prestige classes are classes that every player would like their characters to have, but must first gain permission from Wizards of the Coast before their character can take one." - RPGA test

I always enjoy reading your stories Vic! You know one day you will have to compile them into one and get them published so I can have a hard copy (signed of course!!) for my library don't you? :-)

It's all well and good until you realize that with one exception, none of my multi-chapter works have ever been completed.

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Veni, vidi, dormivi.- I came, I saw... I slept.-----------------------------Current writing project (on hold): The Hidden DepthsCheck out A Guide to Divine Asskickery - DN Cleric Guide!"Prestige classes are classes that every player would like their characters to have, but must first gain permission from Wizards of the Coast before their character can take one." - RPGA test

Veni, vidi, dormivi.- I came, I saw... I slept.-----------------------------Current writing project (on hold): The Hidden DepthsCheck out A Guide to Divine Asskickery - DN Cleric Guide!"Prestige classes are classes that every player would like their characters to have, but must first gain permission from Wizards of the Coast before their character can take one." - RPGA test

Except for my work, I have never put this much effort into writing before. The constant editing, re-editing, revisions... sometimes it also took rewriting some sections of the previous chapters to make them flow better. Chapter 1 before has been reposted with several edits. Here is chapter 3.

Chapter 3The Patrons

Vanyra is already eating her breakfast by the fireplace when Master Westar emerges from the corridor that leads to his quarters, wearing his commander tunic and looking ready to take on the day. He raises his eyebrows upon seeing her.

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Veni, vidi, dormivi.- I came, I saw... I slept.-----------------------------Current writing project (on hold): The Hidden DepthsCheck out A Guide to Divine Asskickery - DN Cleric Guide!"Prestige classes are classes that every player would like their characters to have, but must first gain permission from Wizards of the Coast before their character can take one." - RPGA test