Went up my local Hill tonight, and decided to try some sunset shots, I have never done this before only sunrise. Love the last one myself. I think its not a bad effort for my 1st time doing a sunset. I can't remember last time I actually sat down and watched the sun go down

I find it difficult to get natural tones and colours when I push shadows in lightroom. The edited one strikes a good balance. Sometimes reducing vibrancy by 5-10 pips after adding fill light can make the colours less HDR-ish

That last one is pretty nice, I like the edited version a lot more though, there's a lot more detail and clarity, though I agree with kimchi, reducing the vibrancy a bit might give less of that HDR look, but personally I do like it the way it is, nice job