so this is a fun, simple, thrashy kinda song. i don't like to spend time trying to nail down exact genres, so forgive me if thats not 100% accurate.

at the moment my only worry is that the first part isn't very catchy the first time around, and that i should write some kind of intro. it seems pretty rocking the second time though :peace:

drop me a link if you want me to give a listen to something (provided i haven't already :p:)

swashbuckle50

10-04-2010, 04:13 PM

the dotted notes on bar 6 sounded sweet, same with the fast bass part starting at bar 23. The rest was fairly lack luster.. some sort of melody over those chords and some serious drums would help a great deal.