Why hasn't anyone reviewed this? This is an enjoyable little one-shot, especially well done from how you haven't played the game in such a long time. I really like how you portrayed Cecil and him getting his Paladin armor.

The quote: "And if she saw the armor, perhaps if she saw the blood… well let her wonder." was a great way to wrap it up. The first part and the last part of stories are the most important parts, and you seem to do them wonderfully.

Soo... Even if you don't write any more FFIV fics, I hope you continue to just... write in general. :3