This little OS is really sweet even if dark in some ways, it's also hot *-* I figured I should tell you that in the characters you put Eren and Auruo instead of Eren and Rivaille, is it intended ? Because I don't see Auruo in there x) Fortunately, I read the summary and saw RivaillexEren so I knew what it was

I love it! This was a wonderful piece. Your characterisations and this little insight into their relationship is perfect. I'd really love to see more writing of this pairing from you. :) Sticking you on author alert!

This was really good. Short but got the point across. Loved how both seemed to be so into each other like that during their intimate time together. Would be nice if you can write another one-shot but from Eren' POV this time.