I thought this was a beautiful story, I love Ronon as a character and I think you really captured him here.
The story is so bittersweet, I mean he survived, the encounter made him turn the tide on the Wraith and hunt them back but no one knows about the attack.
Beautiful job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback! I was beginning to think this might have been too dark.
This story was inspired by the episode Michael and written before Sateda. I was really interested in the deep hatred Ronon has for the wraith. I mean, there just seemed so much more untold.
I'm really happy you thought the story was "bittersweet." That's what I was going for...I wanted to frame Ronon's desolation and despair in the context of the "family" he has now.
Thank you again for the feedback! It means a lot!
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