I don't like this story much. It seems like you've picked a potentially contentious subject matter, and then tried to write about it in the safest way possible.

Things with this story don't really flow as well as a lot of your other stories, and the character deveopment is nowhere near as good as normal.

I found myself sat here pretty bored, really not caring about anyone involved in the tale enough to properly hold my attention.

Definately not your best work in my opinion, and I'm personally glad I've read so many of your stories to be able to consider this as probably nothing more than a blip, and something that was perhaps written on an off day.