Life Passes By

Below is the poem entitled Life Passes By which was written by poet
Tahera
Mannan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Tahera,awonderful haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season.
I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

green lotus leaves/
the throne of an old bullfrog/
time passes///
I think I would link line 1 and 2 and change your line 3 which is a mental construct, rather than a sensory perception. Excellant observation.