Billie Holiday Workshop 1: You could be my lover

I remember seeing her punch holes in the pillow,
Shouting, ‘Fuck me, that’s pretty’
‘Fuck me, that’s a kick in the teeth’You could be my loverMy scrubbing brush baby
Sit down and look at the hills
Tender as only rain can make the sky
It didn’t take long to empty our bed
Or for my body to be back in sync with my head

Exercises:

Billie Holiday frequently wrote about the blues; write your own poem referring to the blues, you can do a humorous take on this to contrast with the melancholic blues. If you get stuck for something deep you could write the ‘’doing the washing up blues’’ anything that is personal to you and makes you blue.

Free write for five minutes from the line:
‘one day a whole damn song fell into place in my head’

‘He wears high-draped pants
Stripes are really yellow
He wears high-draped pants
Stripes are really yellow
But when he starts in to love me
He’s so fine and mellow…

Love will make you drink and gamble
Make you stay out all night long
Love will make you drink and gamble
Make you stay out all night long
Love will make you do things that you know is wrong’

Write a short poem with an upbeat title and then contrast it using ‘Fine and Mellow’ for a model. Include one line that refers to the upbeat title-could be a loose sonnet form, 14 liner, with the one line as a volta.