Nice shot with nice bokeh but I think you can do something more perfect ..It's so good since you choose the natural light and your main light source because I believe that there's no light source like sun , but you may either choose the wrong time or wrong place to shot .. The direct light is undesirable , you can see some areas with overexposure and the shadow on the floor is a little bit dispersed, for still life shot and especially the perfumes the overall photo need to be smooth and soft .*Try different places where you can find only green soft bokeh while I see a lot of colors in this background .*Shot in the shadow or get the light through the window or door so it'll be soft and beautiful , or try shooting in early morning or afternoon , third choice is to change the camera sitting like increase the shutter speed up to 200 or 250 . *It's better to use plain papers for the floor , and fix the line of sight "it's really annoying" :$

That's all ,, wish you good luck and I'm waiting your new pretty shots in the future

The Liquid in the perfume bottle was almost totally clear, yet it seemed to shimmer a soft purple at times. The inscription on the bottle gave little clue as to what the potion might do, but you were intensely curious. You thought about spraying it on yourself, but that seemed unwise at best, terminal at worst. Instead you spray it at a nearby bird, who had been watching you in case you dropped some food. A purple glow surrounded it for a moment before it flew straight for you. You raised you hands in surprise and fear, but it merely landed on one and gazed at you adoringly. You try to shoo it away, but it merely flies to your shoulder. You now have a bird, but it has given you a small clue at least to the purpose of the potion.

Wow!! Very interesting! That was so amazingly written and full of creativity! I really love the part about the bird, waiting for some food! I thought that was especially cute and sweet! xD I've never been particularly good with birds so if that response were to happen I would be surprised at the display of magic and what a truly magical thing it would be indeed! Thank you so much for commenting!