How long do I have to wait?To torture my self and blame?I couldn't ignore you or hateFire inside my heart does flameYou are my love, my soul mate All things to you seems the same*******************************All women, like me, are weakYou don't care for my bad fireWe always search love and seekAnd we try to hide our ireCome touch my skin, it's so sleekI have lust, I have desire*******************************My life will not last foreverSo come relax my mindWith you I feel in feverKilling eyes, I'm like a hindShow me your lust, don't coverLike my charm, where will you find?You will still my sweet loverI loved, really love is blind*******************************You got your wish and you wentI dream with you, spend the nightsOur days will soon end, they're lentSo come dear and burn the lightsYour home is my heart, you rentWith me you'll get touching sights*******************************Did the bird find another nest?So why does the dove coo alone?For years, she looks towards the westAnd hopes him stop her hard moanShe waits and waits, she does her bestNone's on skyline, she won't leave groan*******************************

shakespear wrote:You got your wish and you wentI dream with you, spend the nightsOur days will soon end, they're lentSo come dear and burn the lightsYour home is my heart, you rentWith me you'll get touching sights*******************************Did the bird find another nest?So why does the dove coo alone?For years, she looks towards the westAnd hopes him stop her hard moanShe waits and waits, she does her bestNone's on skyline, she won't leave groan*******************************

Hi Shakespear!!! It's a wOnderful poem...well in the poem u r waiting for her, but it has been a long time, now u tells her what's happening, althoug u has spent much time you still have hope she responds...So i tell u that hope is the last thing we lose...so dont give up.I loved this phrase : "Did the bird find another nest?" C U friend

oops...yes im sorry for that..well in this case maybe she made a mistake...she gave all for him, and he just wanned pleasure, maybe he doesnt come back to her...and she will stay waiting and waiting, and i think all women realize when anyone wont come back, in this case this love is blind.

hiin the beginning u reversed the meaning but now u r talking very well.....but i meant by "love is blind " koz we love and don't know if our lovers good or bad and if they r bad we can hate them or ignore them and we still love them in spite of their hurt...thnx

hmm that's right...but when we really love and realize our love is bad the best thing we could do is to let him go and not to hate him..because if we continue with him it will be worst, and then the wound would be deeper

hiit's the first time that you are talking in figure of woman it's so goood ,well as a respons for that i answered this poem with a poem in man's figure as an answer to ur lady i hope to read and enjoy with.........................................My dear lady I'm here Just look well You only didn't me watch well

I'm here and there I'm in everywhere You are only what I see ..i hear and talk about How you could not note that ????

How you could not note my eyes saving you from others How you couldn't touch my warmth in cold days ??

Your bird did not leave your nest till now But with your careless ..sure it'll do thatInstead of waiting look at here forget westI'm not expecting ur best

hello congratulationsu come back and we, ur friends all of us, r happy for ur coming back and we hope u show us lovely and new poems which always u used to show us...in this poem u took a figure of man as i did in the my poem and i think we exchanged the roles ...i don't know but i think i'm feel pleased to play the role of woman and feel how the woman feels ...

you needn;t do that and u can easily put the aux b4 the subjectanother thing: u put preposition b4 adjective and this is wrong koz "careless" not noun its adjective...u have to use "carelessness" read the following:

sweets wrote:But with your careless ..sure it'll do that

any way ur poem is a reply to my poem and u inspired me to write another one in the same style ..u encouraged me ur poem is full of valuable words which have deep meanings and i hope i read anothre poem like this lovely poemcongratulations twice for ur coming back and for this poemhave nice moments

hi sweetsreally i regreted correcting ur mistakes koz i thought u would be angry and i had to make private msg and informed u about ur mistakes...anyway i hope u r not angry for this fault and plz accept my apology my friend...i ask u to issue it in saparated topic ..i meant new topic after correct it ....plz examine it and correct then issue it in new topichave nice moments

why shall i do that ???????????? you know my opinon about corrections and so on and we disscused that more than one time .......anyway next poem i promise to be more carefull but if i post this as new post i'll post as it's without any simple correction is it fine ??so shall i wait a reply to my reply or u'll write new thing ???????????????????