tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9077886005651684986.post8322073831771424483..comments2009-01-14T03:52:06.649-08:00Comments on Creative writing by Laine: Next part of storyLainey Lainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09627784067446003577noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9077886005651684986.post-67070664387236369482008-10-22T01:04:00.000-07:002008-10-22T01:04:00.000-07:00Ooh... I used to love getting ready to go out, wit...Ooh... I used to love getting ready to go out, with the music playing and the glass of vodka... Ally should have a glass of vodka. Something tells me that Edgar isn't going to make her happy, glass of vodka will :o)<BR/>xxxSarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11140801133536152720noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9077886005651684986.post-40079143440999175052008-10-21T16:26:00.000-07:002008-10-21T16:26:00.000-07:00this is coming along really goodthis is coming along really goodMelissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02759436853599948246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9077886005651684986.post-36753334558833169012008-10-21T13:11:00.000-07:002008-10-21T13:11:00.000-07:00I dont like Ally. With her tarty make-up and Ameri...I dont like Ally. With her tarty make-up and America loving ways.<BR/>I hope a bomb lands on her stupid big fat head.<BR/>:o)<BR/><BR/>Well done, keep up the good work.Mr Brainwhispershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10214414334384025156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9077886005651684986.post-63505117789823515982008-10-21T12:23:00.000-07:002008-10-21T12:23:00.000-07:00Well there is more to come and its still a little ...Well there is more to come and its still a little unclear as to where I go but that man at the beginning he will play a huge part, but not sure how yet. I might even change things.Lainey Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09627784067446003577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9077886005651684986.post-89148273209021734892008-10-21T11:20:00.000-07:002008-10-21T11:20:00.000-07:00Oh, Laine, I was not expecting something this dram...Oh, Laine, I was not expecting something this dramatic. It has taken me aback!!! My imagination went on in a different direction and now I'm back to square one. Thta's really nice how you have done it. Ciao. Antonellalunarossahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15231055955991137579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9077886005651684986.post-6145895439290990002008-10-21T11:14:00.000-07:002008-10-21T11:14:00.000-07:00I really love the next part it draws you in and yo...I really love the next part it draws you in and you can imagine bieng there at the time such good writing well done laney cant wait for the next installment keep me posted <BR/>love laura xxLaurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13509363993380306779noreply@blogger.com