usually, i tend to not like those 'lovey-dovey songs' sometimes, but this one just made me smile. You're quite great at the whole 'rhyming' thing,so keep it up.(thinks of what to say...) I'm adding you to my list cause now you have the CHORUS of the song just stuck in my head. But that's a good thing.

What can I say? As a chick I find that song both endearing and rather sweet. Critically, I love the way you use rhyming. . .and you have a nice rhythm that really flows quite well. Wonderful job on this.
kat