Kotonoha turned psycho again. After she started talking to the narrator, I realized that she wasn't ever back to normal, and that she'll never be back to normal again. And oh crap, she fell in love again. We're all screwed. I'm actually not too surprised. She depends on people.

Question, is Asuka's suicide based off of the "Eternal" ending of the game? I'm guessing it is. :P

The only thing that bothered me about this chapter was the constent "my lover". Other than that very good. I can hardly ever find a decent fanfic on this site worth favoriting, but you sir, are one of the few exceptions.

When he went to the graveyard and saw the tombstone for Tenma Asuka I assumed it was his wife. When he said he wanted to see his daughter I thought he knew who Shinji was, and wanted to see Sakura. When he said Asuka was his daughter, I connected the pieces. Asuka was his daughter, she was Sakura's sister, Sakura's DEAD sister. Just out of that I somehow knew that these were the sisters the narrator was talking about. Funny how they're all connected. It will be interesting to see the final confrontation. I'm hoping for no violence, but then again, this is School Days.

Yay! Nice chapter. I've grown to love Sakura, personality and all! The narrator seems all mysterious now, I wonder if we'll ever get a name. Very sad about poor Saionji-san. I wonder how she'll take it when she finds out Sekai-chan was pregnant. That's probably why they haven't told the media. That and the fact that they want to find out who the father is.

About Otome, I'm actually glad you put her in this story, and I completely agree with how you explained her. I love her, even if she was mean at times. Poor girl deserves some happiness, seeing as no one else did. Good job! _

I enjoyed this chapter very much. Also, I would like to thank you for deciding Sekai-chan was pregnant. I've always thought the ending would be much more interesting and eventful if she had actually been pregnant. So far I like Kensuke the best. I'd love to see another, less slutty, girl come into the story. Quite interested in seeing what happens next. Wonderful job.

I always wondered what would happen next. I was hesitent about this at first, after reading about how the narrator also had a "mini-harem", and was going to stop reading, but I continue, and I'm glad I did. You did a lovely job, and the canon character all seemed normal and in chacter. Good job, and keep writing.

FatherGregori chapter 9 . 9/3/2011

Well done, well done!

not many fanfics regarding school days out there, and you've done an awesome job in continuing the story. and if you do put more chapters out, i'll be there to read them.

awesomeness story! I know it aint done but i gotta praise this story for being so epic and suspenseful. awesome job on this, bro. and Kira's his name, eh? nice. lol. can't wait for some of the alternate endings!

zed chapter 8 . 4/20/2011

make more must read more!

Anonymous chapter 8 . 3/22/2011

Well...the story...you're no gabriel blessing or Ozzallos, but your story stands strong for the sheer...originality, I guess, of the idea itself. Please update and may God bless you!

Thank you for the new chapters. Your writing skill is improving with each installment. I feel I know the characters much better now with the additional information and back stories you have been providing about them. Most of their motivations are now know with the biggest exception being Goro. For the multiple endings that you are doing at present, please don’t tell us up front if you intend it to be a good or bad ending. I want to be surprised as I read the story plus some readers may have a different opinion on what constitutes a good or bad ending for certain characters. I hope this won’t be the conclusion of the story since there is so much more that can be written about the events you have set in motion. Thanks for the tip on the fanfic "School Days: Refresh: New Girl in School”. It was a good read. Keep up the great work!