The fact that your story's length was mostly composed of your replies to reader's reviews was a bit misleading. Yet, still like how you kept things short and simple while still managing to keep up some plausible plot. Too bad it seems unfinished. But congratulations on your acceptance to Stanford! :)

SallieBear chapter 6 . 2/21/2014

The shortness really sucks, the story had a good plot but you completely ruined it with the storytelling, length and characterization

wow! i think its so cute. you portray quite a lot in your chapters. each chapter telling us something new. i really like both nico and hunter, but currently i feel really bad for nico since she's ignoring him, and the update is so slow...can't wait for the next update :)

Aww, our favorite little person got herself an admirer! So cute.
I always, always love your last sentences. They seem to define the ending of the chapter very well in a contemplative twist-y sort of way. Of course, I am a wee bit disappointed that it's only six sentences. But of course, I still find this style refreshing as always!

HE'S FRIGGIN' ITALLIAAANNNN
I think I'm in love with Fabio. No kidding.
I think I'm in love with M.
But I have a feeling those two are going to end up together...?
Anyway, I loved this chapter - the fact that M just said "he's friggin' Italian of course he's the one!" made me laugh. It was a very sweet chapter, felt a little filler-y, a little foreshadow-y but, I mean, he's friggin' Italian!

Ooh, Fabio Bianchetti. I sense a hot Italian
But regardless, I liked this chapter and how the main character turns him down because of a very small thing. How she's so intent on getting the perfect guy is so sweet.

I'm liking M already, haha!
I guess I'm liking your style. The fact that there are no quotation marks and everything seems to be almost like an observation on everything and the very simple chapter. It gets straight to the point and it's refreshing. Very, very refreshing!

I loved this list and just how the little things made me smile. I can relate to most, if not all, the choices. And the last one, "He loves me.", just gave me a nice warm feeling. A really nice start for the first chapter!