It is the re-worked version of my song my freestyle was meant to be. So far i have 1 bar worth of lyrics this is the lyrics i have so far. I forgot to mention whoever helps get's song writing credit.

"I can do anything with my hip-hop and let it take me where i wanna go The heights,the lights on stage doin a show"

« Last Edit: September 09, 2011, 11:05:28 PM by DA-JYK »

In 1000 years no one will know the difference. When the idiots take over don't worry they are to stupid to find the red button. I'm not a blood,I'm not a crip,I'm a juggalo. We are the underground. No coffee,No workee

Lyrics are tough in a couple of ways. First you have to be familiar with the rhyming scheme of the song, then you have to know how many beats per line and break up the rhymes so each line ha the right number of beats. As an example from an unrelated genre:

15 beats - It's of a gentleman soldier as a sentry he did stand15 beats - He saluted a fair maiden by a waving of his hand15 beats - And then he boldly kissed her and he passed it off as a joke16 beats - He drilled her up in a sentry box wrapped up in a soldier's cloak

LOL then again, I have no real idea how a freestyle words for beats and scheme, so...

10 beats - Dear Sir, regarding your recent foray 12 beats - Into the rap business and the scene you portray,11 beats - See I don't normally approve of war games, 10 beats - But "He's biting you" is what they all say

So in this song its between 10-12 beats to keep the rhyming scheme tighter and have a faster flow.

So, to start I'd say lay out each line and get a feel for the beats/syllables. You can actually change the syllables just by how you pronounce words, so factor that into your scheme as well.

Lyrics are tough in a couple of ways. First you have to be familiar with the rhyming scheme of the song, then you have to know how many beats per line and break up the rhymes so each line ha the right number of beats. As an example from an unrelated genre:

15 beats - It's of a gentleman soldier as a sentry he did stand15 beats - He saluted a fair maiden by a waving of his hand15 beats - And then he boldly kissed her and he passed it off as a joke16 beats - He drilled her up in a sentry box wrapped up in a soldier's cloak

LOL then again, I have no real idea how a freestyle words for beats and scheme, so...

10 beats - Dear Sir, regarding your recent foray 12 beats - Into the rap business and the scene you portray,11 beats - See I don't normally approve of war games, 10 beats - But "He's biting you" is what they all say

So in this song its between 10-12 beats to keep the rhyming scheme tighter and have a faster flow.

So, to start I'd say lay out each line and get a feel for the beats/syllables. You can actually change the syllables just by how you pronounce words, so factor that into your scheme as well.

I still don't know what that means.

In 1000 years no one will know the difference. When the idiots take over don't worry they are to stupid to find the red button. I'm not a blood,I'm not a crip,I'm a juggalo. We are the underground. No coffee,No workee

That is your beat count per line. in order to make your rhymes flow smoothly each line should have roughly the same number of beats.

Look at the lyrics to some of your favorite songs and see how their rhyme scheme works and how they lay out their sentences.

13 beats - As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death 15 beats - I take a look at my life and realise there's nuthin' left 11 beats - 'Cuz I've been blasting and laughing so long, that 10 beats - Even my mama thinks that my mind is gone 14 beats - But I ain't never crossed a man that didn't deserve it 13 beats - Me be treated like a punk you know that's unheard of 13 beats - You better watch how you're talking, and where you're walking 11 beats - Or you and your homies might be lined in chalk 11 beats - I really hate to trip but i gotta loc 13 beats - As I Grow I see myself in the pistol smoke, fool 14 beats - I'm the kinda G the little homies wanna be like 13 beats - on my knees in the night, saying prayers in the streetlight. 16 beats - Been spending most their lives, living in the gangsta's paradise 16 beats - Been spending most their lives, living in the gangsta's paradise 16 beats - Keep spending most our lives, living in the gangsta's paradise 16 beats - Keep spending most our lives, living in the gangsta's paradise

That is your beat count per line. in order to make your rhymes flow smoothly each line should have roughly the same number of beats.

Look at the lyrics to some of your favorite songs and see how their rhyme scheme works and how they lay out their sentences.

13 beats - As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death 15 beats - I take a look at my life and realise there's nuthin' left 11 beats - 'Cuz I've been blasting and laughing so long, that 10 beats - Even my mama thinks that my mind is gone 14 beats - But I ain't never crossed a man that didn't deserve it 13 beats - Me be treated like a punk you know that's unheard of 13 beats - You better watch how you're talking, and where you're walking 11 beats - Or you and your homies might be lined in chalk 11 beats - I really hate to trip but i gotta loc 13 beats - As I Grow I see myself in the pistol smoke, fool 14 beats - I'm the kinda G the little homies wanna be like 13 beats - on my knees in the night, saying prayers in the streetlight. 16 beats - Been spending most their lives, living in the gangsta's paradise 16 beats - Been spending most their lives, living in the gangsta's paradise 16 beats - Keep spending most our lives, living in the gangsta's paradise 16 beats - Keep spending most our lives, living in the gangsta's paradise

So. I can do anything with my hip-hop= 7 beats ? And let it take me where i want to go= 10 beats ?The heights the lights on stage doin a show= 9 beats ?

« Last Edit: September 10, 2011, 04:29:31 PM by DA-JYK »

In 1000 years no one will know the difference. When the idiots take over don't worry they are to stupid to find the red button. I'm not a blood,I'm not a crip,I'm a juggalo. We are the underground. No coffee,No workee

I can do anything with my hip-hop= 7 beats ? And let it take me where i want to go= 10 beats ?The heights the lights on stage doin a show= 9 beats ?

Depends on how you pronounce the words, this is how I pronounce the words and the beats I get.

I can do an-y-thing with my hip-hop = 10 beatsAnd let it take me where i want to go= 10 beatsThe heights the lights on stage do-in a show = 10 beats

To make it go with the beat.

In 1000 years no one will know the difference. When the idiots take over don't worry they are to stupid to find the red button. I'm not a blood,I'm not a crip,I'm a juggalo. We are the underground. No coffee,No workee

So the answer would be to write the basic rhymes and then make the words and pronunciation fit the beat. Lay it out like the lyrics I showed above, a certain number of beats per line and then tweak the lines to match the beat.

So the answer would be to write the basic rhymes and then make the words and pronunciation fit the beat. Lay it out like the lyrics I showed above, a certain number of beats per line and then tweak the lines to match the beat.

I will write as much as i can then freestyle the rest.

In 1000 years no one will know the difference. When the idiots take over don't worry they are to stupid to find the red button. I'm not a blood,I'm not a crip,I'm a juggalo. We are the underground. No coffee,No workee

OK i am on the 3rd bar of the first verse. I decided to have 3 bars for the first verse.

In 1000 years no one will know the difference. When the idiots take over don't worry they are to stupid to find the red button. I'm not a blood,I'm not a crip,I'm a juggalo. We are the underground. No coffee,No workee

"I can do anything with my hip-hop and let it take me where i wanna go The heights,the lights on stage doin a show"

That's 1 bar.

In 1000 years no one will know the difference. When the idiots take over don't worry they are to stupid to find the red button. I'm not a blood,I'm not a crip,I'm a juggalo. We are the underground. No coffee,No workee

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