Freespirit Juneja

Lets Dance To The Tune Of Lust

Lets Dance To The Tune Of Lust

The world says hushIt's not the time to rushForget the things which are mustLet's dance to the tune of lust

Common man may feel disgustedTheir manhood has got rustedSo ladies tighten your bustBlow away the society's curseJust forget the things which are mustLet's dance to the tune of lustBlast the society, Blast the rulesWe aren't 21st century foolsBlow out cynical and old fashioned dustJust forget the things which are mustLet's dance to the tune of lust

Fill environment with moans and groansFlush out every booming droneEntice the world with booty and curvesBurst now every man's crustForget the things which are mustLets dance to the tune of lust

Personally I just like the title....It's eye catching and paints a very erotic picture - it evokes in my mind the Dance of the Seven Veils by Salome. If you like this poem you may like my poem, 'Leslie'. If you are not too timid please feel free to read it an comment as it may not be for the faint hearted?
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I couldn't say it better than Rishi Kaashyap. But I will add my thanks for allowing me to read brillance over and over again. You are a poet worthy of recognition. Not just from other members, but the world over, keep it up
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Amazing lines... very well Put down... The Rhymes cover up for even the peculiar syntax.. This is what everyone must learn - to enjoy every minute of their living... Come on Sir! Forget those things which are must - write to the thought of YOUR lust
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At first I struggled with the phrase 'the things which are must', but, as I read on and began to enjoy the poem and it's message for it's own sake, the strange sentence construction took on a wonderful meaning of it's own. I now would not change it for the world.
I will be honest, I rarely read very many poems of those who ask me to, unsolicited, as they tend to be of dubious grammatical value.

Also, I never comment unless I feel the poem is worthy of praise - I do not like to criticise for fear of causing offence or dampening the enthusiasm of a budding poet.