Hi, Ashi! You’re welcome! But as you can see I forgot an important element, nature. You wrote that this kind of poem is “a handy form of poetry to capture the works of nature when noticed.” Guess I will have to try again. God bless you!

You have a point. I would add, however, that every thing we experience is nature, including your thought and feeling. We might talk of cars, planes, etc. as our invention. But actually they are also part of nature. Didn’t invent but only discovered how to make them. What we speak of as nature like flowers and birds, etc, are but part of nature in it totality.