It was more sad than scary, though, imagining Peach- or anyone, really- in that situation. And... poor Mario. That's probably the worst thing anyone could ever have to witness. Or up on the top five list, at least.

Hey, this was awesome! 2 things, though... Th title should be 'Ils' not 'Il', but it looks like a typo, and so does the "...maid vous n'avez pas ècoutè...but you didn’t listen..." part. I think you were aiming for mais, not maid...

O_O Wow. I never found that scary, but I thought that story was beautifully written.
O_o This seriously has got to be the only Mario story I have run into that has had me hooked on it. I started reading this today at school this morning, and then I had to get off before I could finish reading it XD And it wasn't until around 8:30pm tonight that I just HAD to find it and read the rest! ) And believe me, I am a VERY hard person to please when it comes to "good writing"
So, needless to say, this is on my favourites list, and so are you -