KAWAI! umm, sorry bout that. Somehow in the middle of the chapter I suddenly thought how cute those two are. I really hope they make an official BMWW, both in cartoon and comic book, I mean come on, all the hints are there!

anyway, this chapter is very good I really like it. and are you sure this will end in just 4 chapter? I think you ought to put more SMLL. I like BMWW (a lot) but this story center on SMLL right?

Nice chapter! Poor Clark Lois gets on my last nerve but you know that. I hope she smartens up and learns to love Clark not just Superman or maybe a building could get dropped on her? :) I jest,I jest (well not really)!

Smiles :)

d chapter 2 . 9/7/2008

That last scene had made me melt into a pile of goo. Yay more BMWW goodness! I'm glad you made them a couple already so you could focus on the SM/LL situation. keep going!

I swear to God I fell _out_of_my_chair_ TWICE while reading this! My tiny concrete dorm room here was built to withstand rockets and mortars but not the amount of fangirl love that just exploded in here

Because I

LOVE

THIS

STORY

!

I promise I'll leave a more coherent review in the next chapter. Just please know that you are doing EVERYTHING right and it's SO PERFECT IT'S KILLING ME AND I MUST HAVE MORE! *melts*

Clark IS the nice guy and NO! ! ! ! ! ! ! LOIS! WHY! AGH! *runs in circles* why do you do this to Clark it's not fair he loves you and you have to love him back *sobs*