First of all, you caught me completely by surprise with the last turn of events! Dom being killed was totally unexpected, and of course I keep asking myself: Who did it? Who killed the bride on the last evening before her wedding?!

Apart from the brilliant twist, it was beautifully written as well. I liked how you described Dom's feelings about herself and Liam, her opinion on her family and the wedding itsself.

This story doesn't have the classy happy ending, but I like that! It's different, and that makes it special. Congrats!