Re: Nocturne in A minor - 02/08/1303:31 PM

Awesome composition! Nice and calm, beautiful. You are on your way to becoming the next David Lanz. My only reaction is that it would be even better if you had a contrasting 2nd theme in the middle sort of as a development section after the introduction of the first theme and reprise at the end. The development at 1:30 is cool, too, so maybe after that throw in a 2nd theme. Anyway, great job! Please share more of your work.

Re: Nocturne in A minor - 02/08/1303:45 PM

Originally Posted By: 4evrBeginR

Awesome composition! Nice and calm, beautiful. You are on your way to becoming the next David Lanz. My only reaction is that it would be even better if you had a contrasting 2nd theme in the middle sort of as a development section after the introduction of the first theme and reprise at the end. The development at 1:30 is cool, too, so maybe after that throw in a 2nd theme. Anyway, great job! Please share more of your work.

Thank you! I didn't know David Lanz I will search something of him. And thank you for the suggestion, I will take it in consideration in my next composition. All my work (except my first piano etudes) are in my youtube channel.