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Why do i get the feeling we once sat across from one another in a game of Black Jack Tennessee, its a fun game. Every card dealt, you take a shot, every chip, another shot. But there is always one clear mind. And Miss Keely Jane, i think you just hit Black Jack.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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KeelyJ, I like this but, to be honest with you, even after several reads and ponderings, I really cannot say that I get it. You win this round. I understand the title; it is the poem that throws be a-kilter!

Posted 2 Years Ago

I really like this piece. seems like instead of trying to prove a point with your words, you are showing the oddities of the world as you see it. showing that life isn't this clear defined goal so much as blurred mixing of grey, red, and crude lines... only thing id like to see you do is maybe take a prose and write longer in this style on that chosen prose... maybe write some scarlette stories like I do where you are writing in this way about a character or story

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Why do i get the feeling we once sat across from one another in a game of Black Jack Tennessee, its a fun game. Every card dealt, you take a shot, every chip, another shot. But there is always one clear mind. And Miss Keely Jane, i think you just hit Black Jack.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Albuquerque, NM

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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions.
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