Monday, 24 October 2016

OUR CHARACTERS - WHERE DO THEY COME FROM AND WHERE ARE THEY GOING?

One
of the joys of writing is that it gives us a chance to play God. It allows us to
shut ourselves up in our cosy little room with a cup of coffee and create a
world which we (almost) entirely control while the ‘real’ world spins alarmingly
out of control all around us. I say ‘almost’ because even our imaginary worlds
sometimes run amok.

One
of our most vital functions as God is to give birth to our characters.
Fortunately we are spared the mess and pain of actual childbirth, for our
characters just pop up fully formed and fully clothed (unless you’re E. L.
James) and going about the business of enacting our story. But where do they
come from?

Most writers will answer that they somehow emerge from the very fabric of the conception, like living organisms miraculously forming out of the primordial soup.
Speaking as one who prefers writing realist fiction set in the contemporary
world, the seeds of most of my novels and stories have come from events in my
own life or the lives of people I know. It is generally true to say, therefore,
that the characters have been loosely based on the protagonists in those
dramas, but only very loosely. For once he or she has been born, a character tends
to take on a life of their own and often ends up unrecognizable as the real-life
person who inspired them, their characteristics often redirecting the plot.

Authors
of science fiction, historical or fantasy novels may find their characters
emerge in a different way. Historical novels often contain real historical figures who
have been fictionalised – something which is possible since, however great the
body of learning surrounding them, it is usually contradictory and they can
thus be safely remodelled by the novelist. But whatever genre the author works
in, I’m sure they would find (if they’re honest with themselves) a person, or
people, they know - or a combination of people - at the root of their character. Scratch beneath the surface
of your witch or vampire and you’ll probably find your parents in law.

Then
comes the task of naming our babies. My wife’s cousin has two teenage boys
called James and Sam, whose names I always confuse (to everyone’s acute annoyance)
since, to me, Sam looks exactly like a James and James like a Sam. It is
bizarre how certain names seem to suit certain people, and I am not sure how
far this is subjective or objective. In our novels, of course, we are free to
call our characters what we like and if they look like a Sam we can call them
Sam or we might call them something entirely different to make them less
predictable and more memorable. Sometimes
the character seems to be born with a name attached and sometimes it’s right
and sometimes it isn’t. I certainly find that my characters acquire their names
very early on in the process – seemingly out of nowhere – and then I’m stuck
with them. To change a character’s name two months into writing a first draft seems
almost impossible. You’ve got to know them intimately by then and to change
their name would be like changing your child’s name when it’s five years old just
because you’ve got bored with it.

This
is also true of the character’s physical appearance, although I usually find
that the images I have in my head are rather vague and I like to keep my
descriptions equally vague – apart from some precise but sparing pointers. To
state that a male character has, for instance, ‘wide, hazel eyes with bushy
eyebrows, a long straight nose and full sensuous lips’ is, I think, a mistake, partly
because it’s hard for readers to retain all those details in their mind’s eye and
partly because those features may remind them of someone they dislike.

Which
brings us to another vital aspect of character-creation – the role of the reader. For a character is not wholly a creation of
the writer, after all, but a collaboration between the writer’s and the
reader’s imaginations. If the writer says nothing about a male character’s
height, for example, the reader will tend to supply a man of average height –
or a bit taller if they happen to like tall men. If the writer only mentions a
character’s eye or hair colour, the reader will tend to extrapolate physical
attractiveness since – let’s face it – most of us like our characters to be easy
on the mind’s eye. And it is the reader’s experience, after all, which ultimately
matters.

I
think this is why problems arise when books are made into films. It’s not
simply that the character the reader has formed and grown to love in their imagination may
not look anything like Angelina Jolie or Johnny Depp or Sir Ian McKellan but that these celluloid creations have a
different essence, a different constituency to literary characters. This is
also true when a writer introduces a ‘real’ person into the narrative as a
cameo (Tony Blair, the Queen for example) because the glaring reality of these
people in our minds eye throws the literary creation out of focus.

Any
writers who are kind enough to read this post will probably say I’m
just stating the obvious, but I thought I would state it anyway. The great characters
of literature – Jane Eyre, Mr Darcy, Tess of the d’Urbervilles, James Bond to
name just a few among thousands – have become so much part of our cultural
consciousness that we sometimes forget that they don’t exist, that they’re just
figments of someone’s imagination. Yet the workings of those imaginations – and
those of all writers – remains endlessly fascinating and one of the great
mysteries and miracles of human creativity.

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6 comments:

I agree with everything you've said, here, Pedro, and it's so true about films. It's so often a disappointment when the film characters son't look as we have imagined them. I also don't like too much physical description in a book. I much prefer to form my own image on just a few clues. A great post!

I often find that too, that characters arrive in my head with their name attached. I've just spent 25k words trying to make Vicky be called Freya, but it isn't working, so she's gone back to being Vicky. Totes agree with what you said about the descriptions, too.