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Rumpelstiltskin says:Gah! I am so supposed to be working on Everto, but I can't help myself.

That's an interesting and very poetic way to describe a feeling (like a 'mark left on a table by a cold glass'). The descriptions are also very fantastic...all of them (Imogen's feelings, the physical surroundings of the cave, etc.)

They are completely out of their minds for venturing into a dragon's den. I almost want to cover my eyes because...well...dragon! Oh my, and it doesn't sleep, it's cunning, and it's powerful? That is terrifying and I am standing by my "they are completely out of their minds" statement.

Ah! I always love how artistic your writing is! "Alive, hungry and monstrous" as a description of the water in the crevice below was positively beautiful.

I absolutely love the premise that Tribus can look into people's hearts to see what they most desire! That's really awesome.

Split up to cover more ground? Er...I agree with Draco. Hooray, so does Imogen. His plan had much more...survival chance.

The entire, "part of me is made of glass" is really lovely. I am truly in love with the way you write (and very jealous of your descriptors), if you hadn't drawn that conclusion yet.

Oh, the scene between Draco and Imogen was fabulous. I have no idea what is happening to Imogen, but it is quite intense. She stabbed him? Wow, things became a bit scary there.

This chapter seemed to fly by with all of the action and everything that happened. I had to go check and see how long it was! It certainly didn't feel like nearly 6k words. This was awesome! AND they killed the dragon! :D

I can't wait for the next one!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Ahh I love your reviews so I am so sorry for the late response!

I'm so so happy that you liked the chapter because I felt like it moved way way way to fast, just like you said about the word count. It felt like to me that the description was left out of it and that not showing them actually kill Tribus made the chapter slightly flawed but hey, I can always go back and edit ;p