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This looks really nice until you break it down, then, you see it needs more work in some places.
These lines,[^347;419;1][^196;432;1]should go to match the rest of the skin. If you are going glamour, then all the face should be smooth.
The double catch light is bad. I would not have added these[^199;403;1][^331;396;1]but lightened the natural ones[^196;395;1][^331;388;1].
A little sloppy work on the BG, looks like you blurred the BG out and this[^109;548;1]is the effect from it.
When you softened the skin, you softened the hair too. I would not do that, it looks softened here[^224;108;1]. There should be more texture in the hair. Do not sharpen the hair either, just leave it natural.
Whitening the teeth and eyes would help, only a little, make it look natural. Also, these little highlights in the teeth[^272;530;1]might need to go to, that just something I do, not everyone takes that out.