And this is why your the best Insane He has a point how am I suppose to improve if you just say 5/10. The person who said they didn't like all the slow mo and fast mo. Well that's been changed in my latest one.

I said 5/10 because there's too many slow-mo parts
And because of the lack of effects

You did but the others didn't. And your feedback helped me. In this latest edit I just finished which is uploading now I feel it is the best one and it doesn't have the slow-mo parts and lack of effects.