Today I held a universe
Set there upon my hand
It glittered in the shining sun -
It was a grain of sand
...................Don't you think you're getting into bit of physics..........but no doubt this poem of yours will make physics even more interesting! .....
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Your poem belongs with others in a great tradition of the smallest piece of matter revealing - what? Well, some of these poems suggest all matter is compressed into each particle. Others offer the notion that the part symbolizes the whole. And still others that our minds can comprehend the Big Picture by thoroughly examining the small picture. Your poem gracefully and graciously joins this tradition. You give us a galaxy in a grain of sand.
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