The only thing that I really have to say is that I don't think sex is wrong. It is a beautiful thing that God created. What I believe is wrong is that poeople do it when they are not married. That is because God says it is wrong OUTSIDE of being married. Wasn't he the one who said "Go now and populate the world"?

very well said. no one could have said it any better than you did. great job.

Kassia chapter 1 . 5/19/2006

You make a very good point here about how christians seem to think sex is so wrong. I say that if it were such a sin and so wrong why is it the only way our specis (I think that's how you spell it)can survive? Why is it the only way we can create life? People are stupid

So true! thanks for reviewing. and actually im having problems with my computer, i double spaced but i dont know why it came out like the thing about the cross is actually true. or at least in our beliefs it is. thats why i dont wear crosses though im deeply in love with them.

I used to be Pathetic Carousel, you submitted a review of one of my stories that was from a long time ago, I just stopped by to return the favor and let me just say that this poem is incredible, I've never seen anything like it. Be sure to keep up the good work.

My fears are justified in a somber poem such as this and fear is what we fear. Fear drives us and men are made this way. We never truly want any desire to constantly feel that way but it wasnt our damn fault. I want to get over this stage. I want to grow up but stay the same. Im scared and life isnt helping for life waits for no one...

There are people like that sure... It's a sad thing, people professing their belief in a God watching over them, warning them, with ultimate authority over them, yet they still do such things.

It is definitely human nature (lust), and sometimes, I feel, it's no longer anything to do with the religion, but more to do with the person's personal conviction.

In the blinking of an eye, all lessons about avoiding lust (regardless of the person's religion), are forgotten in such situations.

I found myself losing faith in religion before because I saw many such cases. In fact, I'm still coming to terms with myself...

Take the many cases of pastors, priests, or any figure of religious importance, being accused of molest, rape or outrage of modesty.

I've experienced something like that before from a pastor. Not any physical approach (thankfully), but he lied to me about a confession. I found out that the confession was passed on to many pastors in the church, and he even had the cheek to make fun of it in front of me.

Personally, I think some people just can't keep themselves in check, yet they want to show how holy they are.

It's one of the worst things people are capable of - hypocrisy.

manz chapter 1 . 10/16/2005

your peice is beautiful, and your reviews were not.

i am a Christain and i am completly chaste, i do not drink, do not masturbate, do not have any type of sex. of course we all think about it, but not everyone does do it. im sorry you got so many burns on this peice b/c even if they do not agree they should respect your talent. i stronly disagree but ill never stop reading your poety as long as you keep posting it. i pray for you too. i see you are struggling in your faith, and i dont even know you, yet i cry for you to find God and see He doesnt want to fuck you, He wants every child of His in His kingdom, and i will be really upset if i dont get to meet you up there. seek for God as He has already found you, and He loves you and your sins.