A man describes what happened when he saw his best friend naked at a party.

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Submitted: July 07, 2015

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There he stood. But not how I had expected. He was standing totally naked in the dining room with a hand on a chair, his dong sticking out and both eyes fixed on the door. And just as I was about
to walk right up to Steve, tap on his naked shoulder and ask him about what the fucking hell was going on, the door opened and this guy who looked like he had raided Doug Henning's closet one too
many times took two steps into the room before he turned around, raised his hand and said, "Come! The one who wishes to mate with you awaits!" And like she was in a trance, this beautiful brunette
wearing only a black satin robe walked slowly into the room and slipped off that robe to expose her naked body to everyone in there.

And after the hypnotist waved his hand in front of Steve's face and said a few words to him, my own best friend had done exactly what he was commanded to do and laid his naked ass on the table with
his stiff cock sticking up towards the ceiling. That was before the hypnotist placed his hands on the brunette's bare shoulders and whispered something into her ear before allowing her to join
Steve on that table. And while he was banging that brunette with his hands on her buttocks, the hypnotist who had put that trance on Steve had suddenly noticed that I was getting a hard-on which
made that guy snap his fingers and make an entranced blonde beauty walk into the room and towards me. Then, after she had done this little dance in her red sheer babydoll sleep dress and pulled
down her matching g-string, I found myself being compelled to get myself as naked as Steve, grab hold of that blonde's dress and start giving her one hell of a hard fuck in the ass. And while I was
doing that, I looked at the brunette that Steve was fucking and saw that she was smiling at me even with his hands on her huge boobs.

And when I also noticed the applauding audience standing around in the exact same room and getting pleasure out of watching two couples having hot and steamy sex before their eyes, I looked at the
hypnotist and asked, "Are you still able to put other people in the same trance?" Of course, the answer to that question came in the form of the guy snapping his fingers in front of a sexy babe
wearing a sleeveless black and white dress and making her take off that dress and finger herself in front of me before she came in and allowed the blonde to kiss me on the lips while sliding my
enlarged dick inbetween those fantastic tits of hers. Then suddenly, while the sex in that room became so hot and heavy that some of the members of the audience had started to join in on our little
orgy, I saw everything around me spinning around and around until I had no other choice but to drop to the floor and go right to sleep. That was before I woke up the next morning and found myself
in a hospital bed with a nurse standing next to me and saying, "I really am sorry that our party got carried away. And I want to let you know that it will never happen again." And when my vision
became clear enough, I was surprised to discover that the nurse who was taking good care of me during my stay in that hospital was none other than the one babe who wore the sleeveless black and
white number to that very party.

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Generally, I liked this. It starts right in the action and prepares the reader for what is to come. You don't hold back in getting active, which is good and the twist at the end is pretty smart. A couple of your sentences are slightly too long and you use the same word a bit too much (sometimes even in the same sentence), but I think you could do more with this.

The short style of it is perfect, but I feel it is missing some description. Instead of simply saying you fucked, why not describe it? In a trance-like state, is it any different to normal? Is the protagonist someone who is interested in Steve at all or is he a concerned friend? The more you start to show and not tell, the better quality your writing will adopt. But generally, very well done.