At 12/3/10 06:56 AM, Flowers10 wrote:
Hi im a 18 yo male from the Netherlands.
im studying graphic design, but im more into art.
so im going to fill this thread with my work.

Hey man welcome to the art forum, good to have another dutchman in here.

Please comment on what you like, and why.
and comment on what you dont like, and why.
That would help me a great deal.

imma start this thread with a piece i just finished!

I like the scetchiness of this, although its just a bit messy in some spots. Dont like that glow you put around the character, looks a bit fake. Really dont like that spear, it totally doesnt match the style of the rest of the drawing, feels out of place. Also think you should have placed it a bit lower on the canvas, or you should have drawn his legs, its a bit weird how they end now.

Great work on the face in the second one really well done, lot of emotion in it, although his right eye might be just a tiny bit too high. His arms look a bit short in this one, and his head looks quite large.

On all three of these the black areas could be filled a bit more neatly, they tend to be a bit scratchy..

I like the scetchiness of this, although its just a bit messy in some spots. Dont like that glow you put around the character, looks a bit fake. Really dont like that spear, it totally doesnt match the style of the rest of the drawing, feels out of place. Also think you should have placed it a bit lower on the canvas, or you should have drawn his legs, its a bit weird how they end now.

Great work on the face in the second one really well done, lot of emotion in it, although his right eye might be just a tiny bit too high. His arms look a bit short in this one, and his head looks quite large.

On all three of these the black areas could be filled a bit more neatly, they tend to be a bit scratchy..

Great work.

Thanks for your comment, now i see where i have gone wrong , im not happy with it. so imma clean the lines, sketch a new spear, and change the color scheme.

At 12/3/10 12:31 PM, Flowers10 wrote:
have you seen the original?
yes its napoleon

That pic reminds me of your old thread now, lol.
Idk if you want a mod to delete you old one or whatever, since this one has your nice "Flower's Art" title...
Nevertheless, you should try and keep your artwork all in one thread.

As for your art, its coming along okay, but, as QB said, the japanese family-pic-thing is clashing style-wise.