It's supposed to be one a day, not sure if that means you can't write more than one......but it's thirty minutes to midnight and I couldn't resist I'm pleased with this one. It was hard, and I used a different rhyming scheme. Anyways, I put quotes in, I wasn't sure if I needed them but since the narrator changes, I went ahead and just added it. This one is Death.

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Hazel, the pizza eating, hand walking, inconspicuous ninja, who secretly enjoys eating ice cream while singing at the top of her lungs and dancing around like a maniac, has mega cool superpowers in which she will one day save the world that always seems to be in peril. That is her purpose in life.

Ohhhh, I really like this one. c:Like... a lot. xDI like how you literally took death knocking on your door and then what he said. I don't have any critique for this. c:

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Holleh likes taking evil slumbers. (and stealing candy from babies.)She's PREGNANT. With a cow. How..?!Holleh speaks to herself. In dreams.HOLLEHS: Now come tree-size!Holleh talks hotter than the sun. ;oHolleh is an IN-SPURR-AY-SHUN. Believe it.She thinks an artichoke is a type of fish.She also gives lap-dances. To beds.Holleh can van like a man.

Thanks! I'm glad it's good It was hard to get in the groove of.I think it's because I tried Innocence first and failed....all I can think of are nursery rhymes lol.

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Hazel, the pizza eating, hand walking, inconspicuous ninja, who secretly enjoys eating ice cream while singing at the top of her lungs and dancing around like a maniac, has mega cool superpowers in which she will one day save the world that always seems to be in peril. That is her purpose in life.