I loved this story and I (kinda) feel bad for Havoc. One spelling error that I noticed and it's that you spelled Colonel wrong. Colonel as is Colonel Mustang. It's spelled different then it sounds but there's no R in it. :3

never mind the female outfit, but yay for Ed do to his stuff up on stage. yay last act of the show even better. well done win Ed is dancing on a pole and Roy doesn't have a clue. lol poor Havoc. well played Ed on the dancing making everyone go crazy.

ah i love bets when Ed loses and Roy does something awesome to him. yay Al got his body back. uh Al likes Winry. talent shows are is awesome on the plan she is and i bet she is making or maybe dressing Ed in a female sexy outfit.

I love this story! You mentioned Vic in ch3 and it just reminded me. Did you go to A-Kon 23 in Dallas last weekend? Cux he was there. I got to see him but didn't get to meet him.:/ but he'll be there again next year if to want to try to get an autograph but he only signs for about an hour. I only got one cuz a friend was closer to him in the line then I was

Random MAJOR yaoi fangurl chapter 9 . 11/4/2011

Nyuuuuuuu! Ed's limbs were broken! How tragic! TT

Random MAJOR yaoi fangurl chapter 4 . 11/4/2011

Ofcourse! Shane is Ed! It's so obvious! (not that that's a bad thing) it makes the fanfic all the more exciting. I wonder what will happen next...

EdXOXOXO33333 chapter 10 . 12/29/2010

Omg i stayed upjust to finish reading it! XD "You're right Ed, it's fun to mess with Havoc." LOL Best line ever! haha i still have trouble picturing Mustang with blue hair but it sounds damn right sexy! awesome story, keep it up