Writing a poem is all about observing the world within you or around you. You can write about anything from love to the rusty gate at the old farm. As long as you are enjoying it or finding it releases something from inside you, you're on the right track!!!
so i welcome all of u 2 plz post ur comments and share ur innerworld!!!

Wednesday, July 30, 2008

Wishess Of a Wishfull heart.....

I wish the clouds had life...i would have chatted with it whole day and night...I wish d stars had a face....I could see them always above me whatsoever my situation may be. . .I wish this wind had voice that it could whisper me solacefull rhymes. .I wish the water had the sense of touch so that it could have hold my hand 4revr. . .I wish the trees could smile so i would remain smiling with them 4evr. . .Ironically their are millions of humans on dis earth but still...why i have no one to share. . Still i have many known persons but no one to understand.......

13 comments:

she is the best well m thanks to be god bcoz she is ma frn well m very happy to be ur frn n ya i m always wanna be ur gud frn well god kare ise kisi ki nazar na lage she have a gud se bhi jyada gud nature yaar god bless u ma dear frn

DEAR.....our spectrum of inner self expresses the colour of our inner space.It carries the beauty of our mind body and soul.We love the beauty of this world and this universe.We love to live in a beautiful world where we can worship the beauty and the beholder...............rajib........a beautiful mind.....with Soul Curry......

well ayushi keep it up uhve witten the lines beautifully......if u hve not copied.........hahaha just kiddin i knw u must hve not........i never knew u can write so well.........kk byeee hpe to see more frm u

Aapke doston aur jaan pehchan waalon ne to bohot taarif kar di aapki but seriously I am stranger to you and I also think its great ..I am myself a little bit of writer but I don't write poetry and I've been writing from past one year and I can say one thing out of experience that writing is a terrific hobby and after regular writing since a year I have become much better then what I was before .. So keep writing regularly ..and see yourself grow with time .