Posted 6 Months Ago

Mercedes, this is a well-crafted poem that artfully conveys how we often feel after a loved one betrays us or leaves without explanation. You certainly convey a sense of pain the reader can feel in this piece. You write with so much sincerity and humility. I look forward to reading more of your work. Well done!

Posted 6 Months Ago

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Shelbyville, IN

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Normally, I'm not one for writing books, but I am a Singer/Song Writer, so poetry(in the form of lyrics) comes naturally. I do read sometimes, and my favorite book is either "The Bodies We Wear" by Je.. more..