anyways this is a commission for , thank you so much for commissioning me!! <3I had alot of fun drawing them c:

things I learned: I fail at trees, I fail at wings, I fail at grass, I fail at EVERYTHING THAT HAS TO DO WITH BACKGROUNDS D:I need more practise -.-

oh and =Nightabsol , youŽll get a free sketch cuz,1. these characters are so much fun to draw2. I failed so hard on the background here3. youŽre the first person who bought a paypal commission from meand I can note you the same drawing but without the background, if you want <3

First of all, I'd like to say that the overall outcome of this picture is of a quite high quality! I love the ambiance of the background, and the position of the characters, the flower and the trees is very good! You also drew the two canines extremely well, and their face expressions are amazing!

I know backgrounds are pretty hard to make, for the leaves are a little bit odd. Nevertheless I really think this backgrounds suits the overall picture. One thing I'd like to remark though is the fact that the dark grass suddenly becomes lighter close to the river, if you get what I mean. Personally, I'd fade it a bit more c:

One last remark is that I love the way you did the river, but the shape of the mountain is a little bit too round. It also stops quite suddenly at the horizon.

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girrllll. this is absolutely freaking amazing.I think the background is VERY well done. its soft and calming, adding more of a romantic/loving effect apart from the characters.I think the wings are very original, i havnt seen wings drawn that way before, fair unique. =3And the canines look perfect (as usual)The ONLY thing that bugs me is the flower, if it was more detailed or even a tiny bit blurred. i think it would look better. (then again im not too great and foregrounds myself, so i dunno x__x)

all in all. This is a wonderful piece. And id love to see more just like this one.and sorry for the long comment XD

Nighty is awesome I've known her for a long time I LOVE the colors of the background! I also love the scene in general, it fits the mood perfectly! Their poses, expression, and fur...Gah, it's so wonderful! Amazing job!

omgomgomgI would totally commission you again ;3; this is GORGEOUSThis is so beautiful <3 I love how you did his gradient so firefox-y, he looks so warm and the little (fire specks?) heighten the fire qualityThe way you color is so shiny, it's a big part of why I commissioned you, with such rich tones...and my wings actually look like paper! Yesss!I personally despise backgrounds so I completely understand your pain, and $9 for six hours (and that's just on the bg) is severely underpaid imo D: and then you go and offer me a free sketch fsdksdlksdlkI would love having this file in its original format/size if you have it and without the bg if you want, I love it so much <333 I'll be advertising you <3 I can't believe how beautiful this is, I showed it to him too X3 thank yooooooou

I'm so sorry, hunn <3 . it can take a while to give you the drawing with a transparent background and to make you that sketch I promised. suddenly something happened, everything is explained here [link]