Lots of imaginative language in this, working into a personal vision of the Huerta line as a door opening in the cosmos, and becoming the threshold of a waiting experience. Or so I read. Very effective mix of description and narrative.

Nobody is ever wrong in their interpretation of poetry, and I can agree with you on the basis of where you were coming from with a door opening to the cosmos. The lightning strike seems to be that flash of light into the great unknown. Thank you for reading a commenting on my poem Hedgewitch.