Wow this is getting really interesting! I like the story very much!
I giggled at "The king Magolor" *giggle*
Update soon n.n

Deinonychus chapter 3 . 12/10/2012

"He was still wearing his pants, so all he had to put on after the shirt was his boots." Ah, thank NOVA- I was worried there for a second!

I think having the characters be human really brings out this story in a way you wouldn't be able to do having them in puffball form-I don't know why people have a problem with it. I love how well this writing flows, with the perfect amount of thought and description, and the characters are all brought out beautifully. Please keep updating! :)

So I'm finally bringing myself to review here and not just on Tumblr and - hnnngh all your chapters are great *clings to them* Nice and descriptive and you do thoughts and I love these characterizations of the characters too. 83
...I am not good at reviewing let's just say this is awesome so far and that is all.
Also I may or may not have let out happy noises at "the Great King Magolor" but shhhh.