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MissMoneypenny says:Ha ha hilarity!
Yes, I am strange!
Ginger, I have a plea. An honest, honest plea. Though I'm not sure that's the right word. A plea from the bottom of my heart- that's better!
Please, please PLEASE PLEAAASSSEEE make Ellie better. I know things like this happen and I'm pretty terrified it will happen to me or one of my loved ones someday. It's just Lily seems a bit mis. Her life seems pretty terrible (the only good thing in her life is Jack, who I love by the way. Yes I'M IN A LOVE WITH A FICTIONAL CHARACTER, SUE ME) you know- exams, work, Head Girl, no free time, no friends, McFarland the maniac, James and Al: everything's terrible! Please just make Ellie an ickle wickle little bit better, to show her SOME THINGS IN LIFE ARE OKAY.
But I really love the story, keep updating!

Author's Response: ...whatcha laughing at? The McFarland creepy thing?
Can't decide if I'm ashamed or proud of my own filth, on that one. *shrugs*
You can plea, but I will not change my plan in any way- what is done is done. It may, or may not, be what you've asked. Sorry I can't be more specific. Honestly? I'm terrified of it too. It's genetic in my family for dementia in girls- me. So, Ellie is actually my way of coping with that fear. And yeah... Lily is pretty miserable. (I love him too) Yes, she is suffering. BUT. Don't you think she has an element of choice over a lot, if not all, of those things? Don't you think that, maybe, on some level, the issues are not actually other people inflicting them on her... but her inflicting them on herself?
Just food for thought.
Sorry, but I've already decided what character is going to show her that, so... it may, or may not, be Ellie. :)
I am! I'm writing when I should be doing coursework! :D