Let me just start by saying what a lovely piece this is. The simple, dreamy atmosphere is greatly appealing.

My grievance, though, is that it's hard for me to know what precisely to focus on. There's a lot going on, all compressed into a relatively small space. If the juice glass and hanging oranges had more negative space between them, I'd have an easier time devoting my attention to specific elements individually, which would allow me to take it all in more easily.

A greater amount of contrast would also allow more attention to go to the glass and oranges, rather than having that attention swallowed up by the background. The table is a distractingly similar color to the subject, and the greenery outside seems to have a yellow-brown tint. If it were lit differently, or if the contrast/colors were adjusted, then more focus would be brought to the subject.

In short: with wider spacing of the subjects and more contrast in the lighting, the piece would be extremely striking.