An OK, if incredible, take on the tired male-kidnaps-girl-who-becomes-his-obedient-sex-slave genre. The only twist is his patiently becoming a friend of the family so he can keep tabs on the fruit he intends to pluck.I say incredible because, while he has all the patience in the world in the abduction, he impatiently 'breaks' her -- and she becomes compliant (if not entirely willing) -- after only *one* torture session. I don't accept that that level of obedience happens that fast.What's the hurry anyway? It's not as if she's going anywhere. Why not leave her alone in the dungeon with nothing but electric pain to occupy her for hours at a time, while he spends his time ignoring her, consoling her grieving family (he's a friend of the family, right?)? She can lose all sense of time and love the Master who relieves her pain -- and rewards her with fucks and the opportunity to degrade and humiliate herself for his friends' entertainment -- for weeks and months on end.Again, it's an OK, if ordinary, kidnap-and-rape tale, *way* above average with respect to technical merit (spelling, grammar, and punctuation) compared to most works here on BDSM Library. Only the incredible aspect of the tale prevented a higher rating. (7/10)