Can't help but point out there were some timeline issues (most notably that Hisao's lock-in scene with Emi comes on the second run) I did notice the timeline issue, but frankly I understand why the change was made, and I think the story works better with it. I originally wanted to keep all the even...

Literally, the day after I get done reading Cup and Saucer , but before I get to post about it, Oddball throws up a new fic. Then S9 gets into full swing, and, well... anyways. Cup and Saucer Every story starts out with a few unknowns. Not all exposition can be given up front. However, it's possible...

Well, I've finally posted mine, and it was a doozy. Profallister was my victim - I assumed they knew this, what with being the one to make the selections and all, so I had to think long and hard about how to subvert their expectations. I ended up with this absolute unit of a fic (posted in my one-sh...

8 - Reparations I should get up. I kinda need to use the bathroom. I’ll have to go eventually. But, at the same time, I really don’t want to get up. Hisao is so warm. His chest, with an old scar running across it, rises and falls slowly in slumber - and I can’t blame him for being so tired. I’m pre...

7 - Revelations Well, you know, it could be worse. Am I gonna miss Hisao? Yeah. But I’ll still be here, right? And Mom, she’ll be around too. You know, I bet that in a few years, I’ll look back at this and laugh. I landed an acting job, then got a crush with the guy my character was dating - that’s...

6 - Ballast I don’t even know what tune I’m humming, but as I wash my hands, I find myself unable to stop. Looking into the mirror in front of me, a huge smile is stuck to my face, and I just shrug and let it be, still humming to myself. Today was my first date with Hisao. I was nervous this mornin...

5 - Internal I can’t believe I’ve been sitting here for the past four hours. It’s the day of the festival, and I was told last night that I’d be walking around with Hisao today. That makes sense, since he’s been eating lunch on the roof with me and Rin most days, so we’ve gotten to know each other ...

4 - Follow Despite my best efforts to get to sleep early last night, I still feel tired this morning. To be fair, I’m not used to waking up this early. It’s unnatural. Besides, I got to sleep in so late yesterday that my body simply wasn’t ready to go to bed early, regardless of my scheduling. But ...

3 - Pleasantries They weren’t lying about changing the whole gym uniform. There must be ten exact copies of my outfit in the cardboard box I was given, right down to the color and styling. If it were an actual school uniform, that wouldn’t be too strange, but it’s just a light pink shirt and a pair...

2 - Aftermath This wouldn’t be so bad if I didn’t have to sit here and wait. I mean, on the plus side, I have plenty of time to think about what sort of job I should get next. Maybe I was onto something earlier with the lingerie idea. I’m sure someone would pay big bucks for lewd pictures of a doub...

Project Blue Curtain 1 - Timeliness I’m late. That’s why I’m desperately sprinting across campus in my pajamas: because I’m late. To be fair, since it’s warm out, my nightwear consists of shorts and a t-shirt, so it’s not like I’m running around in a onesie. Or lingerie. When I started here, they s...

It’s the 25th of December, and you know what that means! It’s time for my contribution to the S9 - and boy, was it a difficult one this year. My prompt was KS between takes - all the characters are actors; this is a chance to see them when the camera's not rolling , for ProfAllister - not a particul...

Akira's Surprise I've never read your previous fic, but I still realized what was gonna happen pretty quickly. You telegraphed it rather heavily. Not a big deal, just saying that you definitely could've gone for the element of surprise - I mean, this plot seems like a surprising one, so I was kind ...

My oh my. I was waiting for the letter to come up, but that got cleared up pretty quickly. I figured we were out of the woods, what with that out of the way. But here we are. I'm not entirely sure what I'm rooting for. I know roughly what I want to happen, but how is a bit more fluid. I see many pos...

We will now look at what I consider the most kosherbacon of all the kosherbacon stories. I definitely can't argue with this assessment. That was insane and ridiculous and hilarious the whole way through. It's an enjoyable read, because it's just so unpredictable, yet well-done; you never know what'...