So...you...are continuing this story...right? Loved it, you really know how to connect with your readers! I could actually feel the distress from Wyatt and see that moving wasn't just a problem for Emmy but for him as well. This was short but well written. Hope you continue, I would like to read about their talk. Lol you know you're a good writer when people actually want to read about a father and daughter discussing about moving. I think what makes it so great is how descriptive you are at writing your scenes. Can't wait for more!
Till next time, bye!