Ok, so holy shit that was deliciously hot. I do love me some Jeff and Annie and I absolutely adored the way you wrote both their romantic and sexual chemistry; it felt very canon to me. My only issue was Annie apologizing and trying to break up Jeff's relationship. I don't think she should try to reconcile with him; after all the torment he put her through she realistically has no choice but to turn him away, in fear of him saying it is all in her head yet again. Doing that to her would make her question her own sanity and have her denying her heart for fear of yet again being reduced to a silly love-struck teenager. He would really need to earn her trust, not push her into apologizing for being reasonably guarded. Also, I don't think Annie would ever be able to break up a couple that seemed genuinely happy; confess her feelings, maybe. But say point blank 'you need to leave her for me' that's just not her style.
Still a favorite fanfiction of mine. Also LOVED Abed; so in character I could practically see Danny Pudi winking to the audience.

I kid, there's definitely more that I have to say. I was just expressing my overall feeling toward this story. It was compelling, entertaining, in character, hot as hell, and super sweet all gift wrapped in a unique and funny premise. In other words, I freaking loved this.

Things I really adored:
-Jeff Winger. You write a great Jeff Winger. A lot of fics, I think, have a hard time balancing the desires of fangirls and the actual, reality of Jeff's character. Your depiction of his inner monologue was very true to the kind of character he is, and he never seemed too cheesy or off. I commend you for making that happen.

-Abed's involvement toward the end is stinking precious. Him punching Jeff for Annie and threatening to kill him, all very adorable in an Abed-like way.

-I always love a good Annie/Troy/Abed dynamic.

-And, of course, all the Jeff/Annie was delicious and delightful. My shipper heart swells and bursts. So thank you. Also, bravo!