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marauderfan says:Aww, you dedicated the chapter to me?! You're sweet. Anyway, it was really exciting to see another chapter of this!

I really liked Petunia's POV here. Especially the part about how Petunia took care of their mother while Lily was away at Hogwarts... I could really sympathise with her there - she's trying so hard, and feeling that all her help and love go unnoticed. It must have been so hard for her living in Lily's shadow. (And these are things that normally don't come to mind when thinking about the Petunia of the books, because she's so easy to dislike, so props to you on writing Petunia so well!) She is a very complicated character and you did her justice - everything from her obvious jealousy, to the girl who tries so hard to be brave/magical/pretty like Lily, to that hidden part of her that loves Lily and still keeps that old photograph, to the vengeful side of her that wants to get back at Lily over Christmas (and hints at the future Petunia who gets back at Lily by mistreating Lily's son!) Anyway, that's my really rambly way of saying I like your Petunia :p

I adored the depictions of Lily and Petunia as children, playing hide and seek! And how they both cheat but they never call each other out on it - typical kid behaviour but they're such nice sisters :)

Lovely job here, and I'm really looking forward to more of this story!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you for another lovely review. I'm glad you liked it, especially since it was dedicated to you K (That's my new nickname for you btw. I've recently become too lazy to write names, so I just write the first letter).

I glad you liked my Petunia. I found her a challenge to write, but I tried to keep it as close to cannon as possible. At the same time, I wanted to add something of my own. And I'm just really glad you liked it.