http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/WD-WCAG20-20020822/
Checkpoint 1.2
* In item 1, "of all visual information" should be "for all visual
information".
* I feel that the single list item under item 1 is much too long
and, with all the parenthetical phrases, too complex.
* In item 2, is "time-insensitive" better than "not time-sensitive".
* Is the second "if" necessary?
* Should the exception for item 6 be part of item 6 like it is with
item 2?
* How about example broadcast accessibility guideline documents?
* Why is "Audio" capitalized in item 2 of Level 2?
* If something is live, are the captions and audio descriptions
supposed to be realtime? That does not seem very feasible. Also,
please define "professionally produced".
* In item 3, there should be a comma after "interactive".
* In item 3, how do "captions with the audio" and "both together"
differ?
* In item 1 of level 3, "script" should be avoided since it could be
confused with the <script> element and scripts in general.
Perhaps "transcript" is a better term to use in its place.
* What exactly are the difference between item 2 in level 2 and
level 3? They seem pretty similar to me.
* In the first definition, is it better to put "OR" in <strong> than
to capitalize it?
* Wouldn't the definitions make more sense as a definition list <dl>?
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