First I would like to inform you that a slash means graphic vilence, lemon is sex, and yaoi is specificly boy boy. I would like to know when Logan removed (or even unzipped) his pants as you failed to mention that. Also, it would hurt like a bitch for Kurt to have lost his virginity (probably) anyway so he wouldn't have immediately wanted more but to go dry and without preperation THAT would HURT. Why did you write seperate stories insted of just chapters?

phew! is it hot in here or is it just me? amazing story! i hope you plan on writing more like this one. i love this pairng and there are just too few of them. you are an amazing writer! i wish you good luk with future writing and no writer's block. good luk!

this was a good story, and you stayed in character pretty well. it was kind of annoying to read kurt's accent-i recommend just writing "will" instead of "vill" in the future. there were several typos, but not enough to make me scream. the sex was a little short and not as detailed as i would have liked, but other than that, the story was VERY good. i think with some practice and editing, you could be a really great writer!

*giggles* You know, I have a very strong love for Kurt. I really do. It's a motherly love, but it's love all the same. Now, Logan? Never a favorite of mine. I'll be honest, he kinda annoyed me. But after reading this, I have to say that you've changed my mind. _ Great lemon! Really, I'm in the library right now and people keep looking at me every time I giggle! _ Anywho, can't wait to read the sequals you put up!

i love how you made it seem like Logan had fur too (Kurt isn't alone!) and i also liked how Kurt was the first to make a move because he rarely is in the other fics i've read and dude for your first X-Men fic, i say DAMN!