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AlexFan says:I love Rose's humor. My favourite part definitely had to be near the beginning where Rose was thinking about writing 'Oh' instead of 'Miss'.

Clearly, as you can see, I am easily amused.

And the meeting with Scorpius was certainly exciting and entertaining to see. Rose and Scorpius don't get along from the get-go. They don't know each other, all they knew is what they've learned or been told about each other and just use that as all they need to know about each other.

And I like Rose's quick thinking about the dancing (although I suspect that Scorpius doesn't believe her in the least about the new dance being called the Hippogriff).

I have respect for Rose and the fact that she hasn't snapped at Lily. I would've lost it if I'd been in her place but Rose seems to have control over herself when it comes to relatives.

I look forward to seeing more of the interaction between Rose and Scorpius.

Author's Response: Haha, but I was hoping it would be a funny thing to have Rose think about, so there's nothing wrong with being easily amused by it. I'm glad to hear that it was funny, and that Rose's humour appealed to you. :D

You've mentioned the most important thing about Rose and Scorpius's understanding of one another - all of their knowledge comes second or third hand, so they make their "first impressions" based on prejudice, and it will be difficult for them to revise their opinions. It's just a slightly different way of approaching the Pride and Prejudice plot - Darcy and Elizabeth base their first impressions on their own observations, as well as their assumptions based on each other's class. But for Scorpius and Rose, there's a whole history that stands in the way too.

That's a good point about Rose's patience - thank you for noting that. It'll be a useful personality trait in future chapters. ;)

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this story! It's wonderful to hear from you! ^_^