I was kind of disapointed by a lack of emotional relation and contrast in that first bit there. There could have been a whole lot more of a conflict presented there. All I saw was the surface of something that ran deep - but wished I had been given a look that covered more than that.
Also, switching back from both of their PoVs kind of made things glitchy. Stick to one character or the other, you can't follow both in the same scene with just a single sentense telling us about each one.
Now, on the upside, you did make your dialogue sound like something a person would say. Conversationally, it could have been smoother, but it was, for the most part, realistic. Still, do work on what I pointed out. Emotion in these types of cases is what you want to portrey. Details are key in this.

However, that whole blast-from-the-past took a while to relate to the present. Make sure you let us know that you are getting to something. Alude to present things or something that jazzes things up. If you just tell a story from a PoV, things may get tiresome until the climax or point is reached. You have to make us believe it is worth reaching that purposeful ending.

Overall, a fair progression, but one that introduced a lot of material. Slow things down a bit. It'll help you, hopefully, to add more material in there to make one of many sections into the whole story. Remember that; and keep it up._________________-MCC