Quoting X ~
First off, nice self-moc!
Secondly, the torso does look a bit untidy and messy.
It doesn't look bad, but it could be improved.
I'm also really digging the look of the right leg.
The pieces flow nicely there.
Nice job, but there is always room for improvement to reach his potential.
:)

Thanks for the feedback, I agree about it being messy. I'll clean it up in the future. Thanks again!

Quoting Stormjay Rider
The overall build, with all the connectors, looks sorta messy... I would go for larger armor plates, especially over his torso. Also, if you need a story for him, you can ask me (preferably on one of my MOCs). I've already been writing stories for some of the pages' more popular BIO-MOCs.

I agree about it being messy, in the future, I'll clean it up a bit. Thanks for the offer to do a story, but I think I will probably write one. Thanks for the feedback!

First off, nice self-moc!
Secondly, the torso does look a bit untidy and messy.
It doesn't look bad, but it could be improved.
I'm also really digging the look of the right leg.
The pieces flow nicely there.
Nice job, but there is always room for improvement to reach his potential.
:)

The overall build, with all the connectors, looks sorta messy... I would go for larger armor plates, especially over his torso. Also, if you need a story for him, you can ask me (preferably on one of my MOCs). I've already been writing stories for some of the pages' more popular BIO-MOCs.