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Keira7794 says:I remember really liking this chapter when I first read it, (I just realised that sounds like I don't anymore, I still do!) because I love the casual wayyou introduce Ray. He gets no more mention then his grandfather but you somehow know he has a bigger part to play.

I really like how you portray Henn and her insecurities of feeling left out - because lets face it, that happens when you leave school and everyone goes in their own directions :(. I really like the James/Lily conversation - you could almost hear him yearning for more interaction, yet Lily remains indifferent as always. I really liked Sirius' part - it showed his loyalty and also protective side of James.

Another great chapter - how is it possible to enjoy this story more everytime I read it? 10/10 Keira :)