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Post Your Rhymes Here

Since the hiphop threads are gettin so many hits and we sometimes talk about our own writin i wanted to start this thread.

Let me start with my cover of "It Ain't Hard to tell"

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It Ain't Hard To Tell

There dreams are for real, i conceal
Not reveal, the hate i once had is so surreal
In the game it's life or death, rap till you out of breath
This world, so messed up with the brothas just inhalin the meth
Stay true like a promise, not feelin so obnoxious
I'm doin what i wanna cuz New York is my nirvana
Crack the plates like an earthquake, impact
Let my poetry take over now so you can lay down or sit back
Because of my poems i can express through song
My true love of life and dislike of tempted wrong
I used to dream of fame but now i dont care what i sell
From the street corners the young children dwell
It Ain't hard to tell

The mormon lives with many wives, religious beliefs
Inhale from the cold weed, smoked up by the beasts of the east
Yes the smell of success, not the hefty stress
This ain't a test, cause you're messin with the best of the best
The whole world may not be mine, but like a star i shine
With these words, flows, and freshness new and oh so refined
Plus classic, not extinct like jurassic
Opposed to fascists, keepin hopes alive unlike a loved one's ashes
So hate me, await me, but never suffocate me
You think you're me just cause you try to relate to me
My righteous steps in life might land me a wife
Fate's plan is well, It ain't hard to tell

This lyrical providin, in which your mind is now residin
I'll leave you lustin, yeah, i know you think im bluffin
Speak with urban slang, my word are ridiculous
Locked on, so meticulous, street laws like Leviticus
I dominate this rap game with one golden mic
The shinin' word sparks a strike, givin the fans euphoria
in your cornea, witness the story of a young kid
But God forbid, my life come to a skid
I'm a true fighter, in my book of rhymes im one love writer
Searchin like a mother for a lost child
So wise like the old owl, the haters riled
thought they need not fire
stop the hatin, just focus and aim higher
My art is one that excels,
It ain't hard to tell...

the gun in my hand gave me power
measuring grams, fingers numb from the white powder
I go to work like Dwight howard
step in my way and get devoured
I attack like an animal, I'll tear your face off
This aint hockey, yall dont wanna face off
Im skilled in the kitchen, we can have a bake off
Jazzy Jeff, im not cookin no food but im a chef
I go to work with pots and pans
Put a slug in my gun and i shots ya mans
I aint got no plan, except to fill my pockets
Your teams losing soldiers like the Houston Rockets
When will i stop it? never
Im clever and im still down for whatever
Whenever, ya girl can get whipped by leather
I got guns cuz times changed like the weather
When you see the clouds you know the rain has arrived
Ill let you die after hours of starvation and being deprived

Im about to take a trip down memory lane
coming out of CT, I aint got none for you like Im greedy
I enjoy smokin blunts and watchin the knicks on TV
Nasty Nas, Illmatic...My favorite CD
From the mind of someone whos philosophical
its not optional to act logical in my presence
Im the essence of hip hop
I used to shop at thrift shops
until i started to get gwap
now I got millions from dealings and i love watchin yall catch feelings
More blood spilling and thugs killing, it aint a joke where im from
Get smoked if you dont have a gun

The only beat I have covered was Nas' "streetdreams". I've been writing on and off since last september. But now that I'm back in NY I'ma go hard (no homo).

What about you? How long you been writing?

I want to cover so many songs, like mostly from Illmatic and It Was Written. Amazing Beats.
Streetdreams, how ironic.....

Let me give yall a little background....

I wrote my first poem in 7th grade as a homework assignment. It was actually like an emo-ish, dark poem. My teacher loved it, and then i realized i had a thing for it. But it was just one of those things i didn't care about. But i started writing in summer of 08. Like i said, I actually started just writing poetry. Just poetry. About love, mostly.... Anyway, hiphop music made a reentry into my life and i started listening to so many beats. Then i friend of mine actually got to recordin his own stuff, so i guess i started just placing beats on my poetry. I dont got much time to write, about half hour a day, im real busy. But whenever i'm free, yeah, this is what i do. Im working on about 4 songs at a time, and just finished that song above 2 days ago. Right now i'm mostly working on a cover of "Nas is Like" titled "Love is Like", like what love is to music, the body, the mind, etc etc.... i think i'm going to have like 6 or 7 verses when i'm done.

Im about to take a trip down memory lane
coming out of CT, I aint got none for you like Im greedy
I enjoy smokin blunts and watchin the knicks on TV
Nasty Nas, Illmatic...My favorite CD
From the mind of someone whos philosophical
its not optional to act logical in my presence
Im the essence of hip hop
I used to shop at thrift shops
until i started to get gwap
now I got millions from dealings and i love watchin yall catch feelings
More blood spilling and thugs killing, it aint a joke where im from
Get smoked if you dont have a gun

Nice MSG, the 2nd one is just iight, but the first one with all the bball references is real good. I like that. If you just write a song about bball it would totally kill. Good job on the gun references, impressed me on something i don't really are about unless i wrote a diss track lol

MSG those were come tight rhymes, and Streetdreams that was hot too, i wrote this poem that was published in a book way back when i was in 8th grade, i got 50 bucks for it loll, im trying to find it so i could post it, flat out poetry at it's finest loll

Nice MSG, the 2nd one is just iight, but the first one with all the bball references is real good. I like that. If you just write a song about bball it would totally kill. Good job on the gun references, impressed me on something i don't really are about unless i wrote a diss track lol

thanks...

aim for your top hat, f*** mgay and the bobcats
go to the corner store and cop that
aim and **** back, fire a shot...splat
you the best? homie top that
you wont get your watch back
ya girl said i give the hardest spanks
Im heartless and im the hardest..thanks
in my mouth i keep the sharpest shanks
have you stuck to the bench like marcus banks
Lets start this game
Ill depart your brains
I do it for the fame, prove it to you lames
even if i gotta be a bull like Luol Deng
I hang with the realest thugs
get out of bounds in your gonna feel these slugs
im hungry so i gotta deal these drugs
my dunns dont snitch, no one gets arrested
Ill hit your fans like ron artest did
Aim for the head so it dont matter if your protected
My style is perfected like Spike Lee directed it
Ill run up on you real slick like mrs. Buttersworth
I got game but im not jesus shuttlesworth
Leavin more then a couple murked

aim for your top hat, f*** mgay and the bobcats
go to the corner store and cop that
aim and **** back, fire a shot...splat
you the best? homie top that
you wont get your watch back
ya girl said i give the hardest spanks
Im heartless and im the hardest..thanks
in my mouth i keep the sharpest shanks
have you stuck to the bench like marcus banks
Lets start this game
Ill depart your brains
I do it for the fame, prove it to you lames
even if i gotta be a bull like Luol Deng
I hang with the realest thugs
get out of bounds in your gonna feel these slugs
im hungry so i gotta deal these drugs
my dunns dont snitch, no one gets arrested
Ill hit your fans like ron artest did
Aim for the head so it dont matter if your protected
My style is perfected like Spike Lee directed it
Ill run up on you real slick like mrs. Buttersworth
I got game but im not jesus shuttlesworth
Leavin more then a couple murked

MSG you killed it there man. Best one out of the three. I'm tellin ya, them bball references are freakin beast.

aim for your top hat, f*** mgay and the bobcats
go to the corner store and cop that
aim and **** back, fire a shot...splat
you the best? homie top that
you wont get your watch back
ya girl said i give the hardest spanks
Im heartless and im the hardest..thanks
in my mouth i keep the sharpest shanks
have you stuck to the bench like marcus banks
Lets start this game
Ill depart your brainsI do it for the fame, prove it to you lames
even if i gotta be a bull like Luol Deng
I hang with the realest thugs
get out of bounds in your gonna feel these slugs
im hungry so i gotta deal these drugs
my dunns dont snitch, no one gets arrested
Ill hit your fans like ron artest did
Aim for the head so it dont matter if your protected
My style is perfected like Spike Lee directed it
Ill run up on you real slick like mrs. Buttersworth
I got game but im not jesus shuttlesworth
Leavin more then a couple murked