"guest" its not racist...in other wolf mate stories etc whayever their mates look like they are described as looking like angels or goddesses...angels as in looking petfect and fit well for them not as in the "pure, white etc" angel...i do t know where the heck you got the race thing from.

greywindowpanes chapter 5 . 10/25/2017

The story is good so far but I really cringed at the line, "Of course, I thought wryly, blue eyes, blonde hair, white skin. The other way to describe this beautiful creature was an angel." It's pretty racist. You probably didn't mean anything by it, but it implies that whiteness is the ideal. Not good.

Oh my god Sophie. First off i really want to know how they are going to reveal their secrets. I also want to know what the heck happened to Mattie? And I'm sorry to say this but COME ON PAUL! KISS HER ALREADY! !#%!%! $%! My god YOU TOO SOPH!

Wow. I just read the whole thing and...yeah, wow! The plot is really well thought out, not just random like some stories! You're also a really good author, especially at descriptions. Your cliffhangers are brilliant, if annoying and I love how you really draw the story out cos' Sophie is so used to putting up walls that it would be kinda stupid if she just told Paul everything about herself right away. And it's funny cos' Sophie likes him but is scared of rejection which is ridiculous cos' Paul is her IMPRINT and is crazy about her! You have to update soon, seriously, before I go crazy! Please? (sorry for babbling)

this is such a frickin' amazing story! i love it so much! please update soon, cos i really want to know what will happen. please, please please. you are an amazing writer! i don't really know how to say how much i enjoyed this story! Bye