You're beautiful, this is beautiful.
I cried so much from laughing so hard. I thought my stomach was gonna leap out of my mouth like legit. All the characters interacted so wonderfully and the dialogue was very smooth and not one but stiff.
All the characters were OOC in the most true way to their respective characters lol
I love it!

Nour chapter 1 . 12/13/2010

Seriously Gaara singing along LinkinPark.. That I would love to see in the anime!

I really loved the level of details in some parts though, like I've never really noticed the absence of eyebrows on Gaara. Nice observation!

Oh and I couldnt help but think of the suggestion that Gaara could have asked a hidden rain village ninja do some jutsu and call out some rain for the sand village once in a while.. but thats not really a suggestion, the story was well weaved.

I like this line coming from Temari in particular, “Taught him a lesson he shouldn’t soon be forgetting,” Temari said, not looking at him but at her victim. “That’ll teach him to ‘accidentally’ fall asleep with his head placed oh-so-conveniently in my chest.” That was funny.

Basicaly, I like everything about this. The reference to Harry Potter, the fishnets, Sasuke attitude at the end ect. The plot is just good and so is the the entire story.

You have done a great job. Hope you'll write more about Naruto in the future.

Haha I like this line in particular, "Gaara froze. Ma’am? Curse his natural mascara and effeminate turquoise eyes!" That so funny. Furthermore, Sasuke might hate the references to Twilight but I like them very very much. Good chapter