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onetreehill1 says:im glad Ive finally found a story about Sirius Black. ive been looking for ages. Ive found a lot of grammar errors in here and it can be quite distracting so watch out but other than that its really good. I love Mary so far, and I think her and Sirius would make a gr8 pairing.Great start just watch out for grammar :D 7/10
onetreehill1

Author's Response: thanks so much for reading. I've had trouble with grammar for a long time, it hates me and it's evil :P i'll try harder in the future to sort it out and I will go back over and edit my first two chapters. Please carry on reading, it would mean so much :D