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Nicole's Midterm Review Summary

My review went pretty well. Most of the comments were on how I can fortify my concept, while not taking away from the main focus.

What I Did Differently This Timefrom the Review on 12.01.2008

With (almost) every questions I received, I would answer, and ask the the critic what they would do.

This time, I felt like i had more time to digest all the information in between critics, which I find very helpful. It allows me to filter out suggestions that are not as applicable to my project at this point

Evolution: I incorporated the suggestions I had received, and asked other critics for their take on it. This lead to very interesting combinations!

Areas for Improvement:

WEBSITE

Most people liked the design. 1 person said i looked boring and needs more "action" in the pictures (I agree)

Most people didn't see the need to mock up the entire website. 1 person disagreed (I am still debating. will find out after giving dreamweaver a try)

Start thinking about how the website can be translated into daily use.

Include a section that urges users to check back regularly (ie. News feed blog)

Start thinking about pricing and BRANDING: What is the total cost? who is your target market?