Loved it!! Hope you didn't think I'd forgotten about you;) I love the rationalization for keeping the Ramadan, that she's more of a threat in their enemies hands. Very clever! Thanks for adding to this:)

Ahhh, I cant believe it took me so long to get to this my friend! I had to go back and read a few chapters to get back in the flow…and I did! I totally forgot how much I loved this. I marveled when I first read it and went out and tried to create my own fantasy world, chock full of awesome characters. I wasn’t nearly as successful as you. You have a knack for this style of writing and you are good at it! I am so into these characters. I see them and know them. I realized as I went back and read about them that I missed them. I hope this continues at some point. I honestly feel you have the makings of a book here. Consider it. Think about where you could take this on a larger scale. You have created some memorable characters and a meaningful storyline. When you post a new chapter, drop me a comment on whatever my recent chapter is so I know! I don’t want to wait so long next time. I am so into Hosus! (and Im apparently a dork)