quote: “What’s happening to our society?”
That’s what I’m asking myself every day .. and I’m not even as long on this earth as you, I guess.
I’m convinced that I was raised in the wrong generation .. but can’t do anything about it, you know. Just have to say: I enjoy your poems, they’re really well written. Goes straigt to my poet`s heart 🙂
greetings maxithinks

This was very honest and beautiful! I loved it! You captured so many flaws of humanity stripping it naked and exposing it for what it really is and that they need only seek one true place, comfort and knowledge for peace.

Some powerful, hard-hitting lines in this one. The comparisons you draw are interesting and thought provoking. We certainly live in a very confused world, in which many values (moral or otherwise) seem to have been turned topsy-turvy. Well written poem.

Yaz, so much I’d like to say, but another minute is gone, and the sky falling….
You are the second man here on WordPress, that at some point in time, realized the hurried scribbled letters and numbers of homework so long ago, actually moved with your thoughts; but no, they didn’t. Then again, and you knew the truth, it was the WAY you wrote the words.
After that (I am only guessing, for each it is different), homework wasn’t so bad.
Soon, your words became an old man that smiled, as he baited a young boy’s hook, then smiled proudly as you caught your first fish.
One day, your words became a Happy Santa Claus, HO-HO-HO, as the young man stepped out into the cold; hoping he’d get the job, his mood brightened, as he watched the first flakes of the Canadian snow.
My Friend, never let anyone steal your rank;
few can train the recruits, the words that line-up and are your warriors.
Robert