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I have so many questions at the end that I want you to write another story, as soon as you can, to let me know what happens to all these wonderful characters! Your writing is so finely tuned, I could not stop reading. This is a wonderful story, and I wish there was another chapter. I like the title, too.

I think you handled the daze of her being in and out of her trauma wonderfully. The images you wrote were very visual and I was rivited through out the story. I was surprised by the ending because I thought just her surviving would be surprising enough for all involved. Great job.