Such an amazing story with so much depth and meaning. Loving the little insights you have of the characters especially with regards to competing against a memory and all the Kuu references you have incorporated from the film.

Grappling with her demons and all the ironic feelings Silvia has is very in character and the happy ending you give her here is just beautiful! Brilliant writing ]

"Those are the times she opens the worn bag, reaches past the (pain misery suffering anguish anger hurt blood death) notebooks and pulls out a well worn business card, fingers the name gently, tries to remember falling asleep on the phone and You can’t say stuff like that with blood on your face, arms gently holding."

You're very good with words and your writing style works well with this kind of one-shot where we really 'delve' into the sometimes chaotic minds of characters. Excellent job on Sylvia's thoughts; I really liked how there was a real flow from the beginning to the end. And I ESPECIALLY like the fact that Tobin comes to her in Africa... so sweet!