Good detail in the image, though going by the title and your description iam not too sure if the end intent is achieved here . Like you said you may need to find him.... on a more serious note maybe it would have worked with a more profile type point of view with the Plane in the background with the boy up in front would probably have achieved the contrast of big and small.

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The cut away rear cockpit tels me that it's a Hind which was an updated version of the Hart and otherwise pretty much identical externally.
The greatest difference, apart from some invisible structural changes was the introduction of a new powerplant. A variant, I believe, of the " Rolls-Royce Kestrel."

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The idea is good, but the result is a good plane shot, not what you had in mind. The only way I can see this working for you is to crop square, losing most of the plane, and removing the person standing behind the boy, who is a distraction. I tried to do this in the mod as an example.

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Willie

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I would lose the person on the left too, but not necessarily crop any more.
The main problem with aviation museums is not being able to get a clear shot of anything indoors. Fine for looking, not so good for shooting!

Nick

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