I'm Done!

I try to help But do you take it Of course not Because you're a man. I know a man can't stand to ask for help. They're not supposed to Well I don't care. I'm done caring. Life isn't fair One day you're fine then the next you're not. I may be yuoung but this much is true. You need HELP! I'm here for you But do you care Of course not. You have your bottle of Vodka. That's all you need It helps to fill that empty void in your life Which I call emotions. You feel no pain You feel no love Just because when you were younger you weren't shown the love that you deserved. Doesn't mean that you're kids feel the same as you. We feel We love We hurt. And when I see you drink like you do. Hammered as a dog. That's when I hurt most of all. Everyday we loose those dear to us and you will be with them someday soon at the rate you're going I don't want to loose you just yet Dad I love you with all my heart You're the pop to my tart. So listen to me Stop what you're doing and get some help. Don't you see how much I care? How much I cry over you? My pillows and clothes probably have stains from where my tears have fallen at night If walls could feel they would feel hatred towards you love and compassion for me sorrow for my family. And I'd bet you didn't know everytime I see you drink I cry myself to sleep. I wish you'd stop and look around to see all of us who care. Would you stop if I asked? Or would you take in more? Do you see how you hurt me so? You drink as though you don't care. There's probably thousands of liters just from today. If you don't care how long you live If you don't care to never to see your grandchildren Walk me your own daughter down the isle Or even see me graduate. Is it worth having everyone around you suffer? If so, then go ahead keep drinking just don't ask me to watch!

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