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Monday, March 24, 2014

Movies I Like: Ace in the Hole

I am unsure just how many posts of mine mention legendary
writer/director Billy Wilder, but here is another to add to the stack. The man
made a ton of good films and there is no reason not to mention each one. Very
few filmmakers can touch him when it comes to the number of classics he
produced. He crafted stories with the care, precision, and elegant simplicity
of a Shaker woodworker. His filmAce in the Hole is a great example of this.

Released in 1951, Ace in the Hole, starring Kirk Douglas, is the story ofdown-on-his-luck, former New York newspaper
reporter, Chuck Tatum, who takes a job on a small paper in Albuquerque, New
Mexico, while he waits for that big story that will put him back in the big
leagues—back on a big New York paper. And when the right story does come his
way, this unscrupulous reporter isn’t above manipulating the situation to make
sure it gets lots of attention from the New York papers—even if this means
putting a man’s life in jeopardy.

Wilder was a master storyteller and did many things well,
but one of the things he did exceptionally well was construct a first act. This
is now almost a lost art, but a great first act can make or break a story—it is
a story’s foundation. It is the bedrock upon which one builds a solid
structure. Ace in the Hole has an
amazing first act.

When we meet Chuck Tatum he is reading a newspaper while
sitting in the driver’s seat of his car, which is being towed: a very nice
opening image that tells us something about the character and his situation. It
already doesn’t look like this guy is living the good life.

Tatum has the truck pull over when he notices that they are
passing the office of the town newspaper. When Tatum enters the office he
addresses a very young man at a typewriter. His very first words to the young
man:

TATUM: I’d like to see the boss—what
did you say his name is?

YOUNG MAN:I didn’t say.

TATUM:Cagey, huh?

[For those of you that don’t know
the old slang, cagey means reluctant to give information.]

YOUNG MAN: Mister Boot is the owner
and publisher.

TATUM: Okay, tell Mister Boot that
Mister Tatum would like to see him. Charles Tatum from New York.

YOUNG MAN:What about?

[There is a line missing from Tatum
here, for the sake of brevity.]

YOUNG MAN: What did you say you
were selling? Insurance?

TATUM: I didn’t say.

YOUNG MAN: Cagey, huh?

This exchange matters. Why? Because this young man (Herbie)
becomes Tatum’s protégée. During the course of the story, that young man grows
to idolize Tatum. And, here, in this very first exchange you can see that
dynamic at work—the young man takes on aspects of Tatum’s personality right
away. This is a brilliant little exchange that sets up what is to come.

While waiting for Mister Boot, Tatum spies a piece of
embroidery framed on the wall. It reads, “Tell the Truth.”

We find out that is something Mister Booth says. He runs an
ethical, honest newspaper.

Shortly, in Booth’s office, where Mister Booth also has the
framed embroidery saying “Tell the Truth,” Tatum tries to talk himself into a
much-needed job on the paper. During his pitch to Booth, Tatum says:

TATUM: I can handle big news and
little news. And if there’s no news—I’ll go out and bite a dog.

This line matters. He is saying that if there is no news he
will make the news, which is just what he later does. His character is being
established here. None of this clever dialogue was written to be snappy patter
without a purpose. It all matters.

Tatum offers to cut his rate in order to work for Booth, and
Booth wants to know why.

Tatum decides not to lie because he has noticed what Mister
Booth is wearing:

TATUM: I’ve done a lot of lying in
my time. I’ve lied to men who wear belts. I’ve lied to men who wear suspenders.
But I’d never be so stupid as to lie to a man who wears both belt and
suspenders. You strike me as a conscientious man, a man who checks and double-checks.

Tatum then goes on to list all of his drinking and
philandering, as well as a libel suit, that got him fired from the big papers.

Tatum lands the job. But Booth tells him there is to be no
drinking on the premises.

The film then jumps in time to a year later and when we
first see Tatum we see he is wearing both a belt and suspenders. He has
conformed, so far, to Booth’s way of doing things. It is clear, however, that
Tatum is unhappy here. He paces the floor of the newsroom, ranting about the
boredom of this little town. This is not New York. Even the news is boring
here. His big story has not come and he is restless.

Then Tatum is sent out on an assailment to cover a
rattlesnake hunt in a neighboring county. Herbie is to go with him to take
pictures. Tatum is not excited about the assignment.

"Bad news sells best. Because good news is no news." -- Chuck Tatum

On the drive, Tatum fantasizes about what a great story it
would be to have fifty snakes loose in
Albuquerque, with the whole town in a panic, and how the story could go on day
after day as each snake is hunted down until there is only one left…somewhere. He
asks:

TATUM: Where’s the last rattler? In
a kindergarten? In a church? In a crowded elevator? Where?

HERBIE: I give up, where?

TATUM: In my desk drawer, fan.
Stashed away only nobody knows it, see. The story’s good for another three days,
and when I’m good and ready we come out with a big extra—Sun-Bulletin snags number fifty.

Herbie finds this distasteful.

TATUM: Me, I didn’t go to any
college, but I know what makes a good story. Because before I ever worked on a
paper I sold them on a street corner. You know the first thing I found out? Bad
news sells best. Because good news is no news.

Again, nothing is wasted Wilder tells us just who Tatum is.
He is a guy who will do whatever it takes to get a good story even if that
means not being completely honest.

When Tatum and Herbie pull into a gas station they discover
that there is a man trapped in a cave-in. The man was in the cave dwellings
looking for old Native American pottery when the cave collapsed, trapping him.

Because of the danger, no one will enter the cave to check
on the trapped man. And the Native Americans won’t enter because this is sacred
land to them—The Mountain of the Seven Vultures. They believe that the cave-in
was caused by their ancestors.

Tatum figures that this could be the break he’s been looking
for, and enters the cave with Herbie to
check on the man. It is made clear through what Tatum says to Herbie that Tatum
does not care about the man at all, this is just a means to an end—this is Tatum’s
change to get back on top.

Tatum wishes out loud that it will take a least a week to
get the man out of the cave, that way he could milk the story. Herbie, is again taken aback by Tatum’s callous
attitude.

TATUM: I’m not wishing for
anything. I don’t make things happen, I just write about them.

When Tatum emerges from the cave he knows he’s got his
story. And then comes Act Two, when we see how he finds ways to keep the man in
the cave longer while appearing to lead a rescue effort.

It is a flawless first act that sets up everything that is
to come. Tatum is also able to get others to help with his scheme: the man’s
wife, the crooked sheriff, and the drilling engineer. Herbie knows nothing
about the manipulation, but does like being part of a major news story. There
is also an insurance salesman and his wife, who start off as the spectators in
what becomes a media circus.

These people are all getting something from exploiting the
fact that a man is trapped in a cave. Tatum, the sheriff, the engineer, the
wife, Herbie, and the couple—that’s seven people. Seven vultures. Wilder does everything for a reason. Doing so helped him become one of the
most celebrated directors in the history of the movies.

There is a point in the film when Tatum has given over
completely to the dark side, so to speak, where he removes his belt and suspenders
and starts drinking again. He’s no longer Booth’s kind of reporter.

I won’t tell you what else happens in the film, but if you
like to see a master at work you should take a look at Billy Wilder’s Ace in
the Hole.

I've been meaning to watch this for years, it's pretty hard to get hold of. I really want to see it now!

There's a brilliant short animation called "The Big Story" that took a lot of inspiration from it. The script in that is just as tight (and now I've noticed they both wear belt and braces in that too). https://vimeo.com/52547638