Sweet, sweet Vanilla is always a welcome sight! That slight Tsundere/sulking bit just made is so much better(And sweeter).
I really like that ending, though. Happy endings like that are great, and I'm happy for them...Any chance of a sequel, though? Because that ending looks ripe for continuation...

Now I really wanna see this turned into a two part book, if a not a short series. The way I imagine it, is that the stories goes on that the two keep making love over a few months, but as time goes on, the father and mother find out about the baby, and instead of sexualizing them, make them the antagonists, like forcing the daughter to get an abortion. After which, the daughter main male character run away together and try and raise the baby as their relationship goes on over a couple of weeks. Perhaps even do it that the male character goes ahead and does something which leads to his arrest, and as he is in jail over a petty crime, the daughter gets taken back by the family and return to home country. End the book there, and maybe make it where the second book or sequel is the male character having found where she is and going to get his love back after a few years, only to return and maybe find something wrong or something interesting atleast. The story has so much potential and I would love to work with your team in possibly writing out some dialogue and all between the two.

It was the mother, sister, and the hulking giant behind them was the father, so I feel there may be a getting caught scene perhaps followed by a royal ass kicking and some romantical struggles. If anything, I'd love to see this turn into a book and have the second book come out following said sequence.