In The Eyes Of The Devil - Owned By Jeff Richard Jacobson Plot,

a kind of plot for a film, or a script i am working on just collecting Notes ;)

Submitted:Jan 31, 2012
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so its based in the year 2078 during the post apocolypitc war
during the traverse its kind of a post Inspired story of films by
Scott, with Alien and James Cameron's Terminator film, i want
this story to be set apart from those kinds of films but also
keep a truthful approach to the world of Sci-Fi i really like the
idea's of Androids and Space Creatures, but also the under-lying
dark and gritty world too. i think a great Sci-Fi Story has to
make the viewer aware and also keen to the intense situation of
building up suspence and ultimately making a story great and
aggressive, but anyways i have always been facinated with the
film Alien and i think the factors of creating a alien that
surfaces in the stomach of a human carrier its so amazing and so
creepy! at the same time.. anyways i want my story to be much
different in retrospect it needs to be fresh and original but
also new.. and inventive hell this story may just sit on the dust
and never go anywhere but it would be amazing for my creative
idea's to make something out.. so i have this set of charecters,
and basically they are soldiers for a futuristic company called
"Element" so they are sent on a mission to retrieve personal data
information for a ship home base... and they basically find a
civilization of beings that were wiped out ultimately and unknown
to the factor of how it happened, so as they explore and see that
something obviously " Went WRONG! " they begin to find out more
about what is going on.. so as they are each killed and wiped
out, by these creatures i want them to look really scary but also
interesting creatures, that can channel into different forms and
kind of become that person, so in a sense its somewhat kind of a
":Thing" Vibe.. but i think one of the most scariest factors is
not knowing who or what, is infected.. know how the infection got
there is Unknown.. but obviously these creatures ,and this
building, so you have that underlying mission of getting this
data for world peace so it has a very emotional introspect but
also being weapon less i thought would add more suspence too it
and using puzzle's. and inventive way's to build to the chareter
and use human strength and so that add's alot to it, i want 3
female charecters and 3 males, so a team of six.. Karl, Joseph,
and Jacob, as well as zAngel and Katie so i want a dog aboard the
craft and this kind of medium size ship.. i dont want no big
mother ship landing on a small planet, at this facility so it
leads into this facility where they begin to realize these people
have been dead for months, and these creatures have adapted into
senting messages over the board, to have Human-Hosts come and
rescue the data, so i want smart creatures, as to what they look
like i have no clue... i want them to be really creepy but also i
think the ultimate Formula is DNA is mixing hosts.. so i always
thought making the Ending First, and then doing the begining
last.. was interesting, so it kind of forwards and rewinds, so
basicaly the last remaining survivor is Karl, and Kate but its
always fun to make the least suspected charecter is infected
which thus, would be the "Dog, " ;) so then you have a sequel..
concept, thus taking the infection back home.. * hehe heheh
anyway's just throwing idea's but i want there to be alot of
exploration and adventure too, films like Jurrasic park, so many
inventive.. stories, but also im inspired by the jock kind of
Quentin Taraintino film, so i want this to be more of a R-Rated
Film!!! ( PROPERTY OF JEFF RICHARD JACOBSON)

so here's what i thought id have for the story, basically its
a worm like parasite that lives in the planet they are harrbinged
on, and it infects many of the crew member's.The Team
Element, a Galactic Police sense of Denfense for the World's Post
At War,so Karl, first conratcs the Bio-Parasite and
begins to spread the infectious disease, basically the eco system
on the planet wont allow a sustained defense mechanisim for Human
Life on board it, so as they begin to realize that a couple of
crew members are infected, and are slowly changing into these
human/alien type of creatures,. ,and are each being wiped out,
you look at the survival instinct of wanting to return home, but
not realizing your gonna be going back home with the disease. and
giving it to others, and other's.. cbut also to look at
the possibilites of what kind of Hell< we Human's could
create? and how we are constantly ignoring the safety precautions
of our own Gods, and Anecestor's.

Karl Begins to search around a dark and empty room, searching
for the data. he begins to realize there isnt nothing but lost
human contact and whatever had happened to the humans, before..
they were finished sooner then laterthe dark room begins
to shed a bight of fear within him he senses that he isnt alone,
and as he realizes that a creature of some sort is behind him. he
draw's his weapon fast enough to catch a glance but ultimately
the creature spew's a toxic salivia at his face, as he begins to
go blind.. his body is still functional and is dragged down to
the lower part of the cargo bay of the ship

the creature begins to eat and harvest on his body. tearing
limbs apart

a couple of hour's later, contact with karl is no longer
intact. the creature begins to malfunction and starts to throw a
somewhat "Seizure" like, fit.and begins to metamorph
slowly into a human. the blood from the human didnt fit well with
the creatures aligned DNA Coding

as it isnt fully aware of the situation and is confused even
for its self being, it begins to slowly suffer and metamorph into
a hybrid of some sort! a mix between a human physical attribute
and a alien of some sort ofit begins to attack the rest
of the human crew, aboard the ship, -- a work in
progress, _