Pfft, seriously? From all the comments, they seem to be enjoying the comic (ups, I'm sorry. Maybe I am wrong because I said they, I should say "yourself"). Like, everyone (or maybe you) doesn't give a shit with the others except the story. Your language, your art, even the layout are very messy. Try to fix it all, you can make a better comic than this, maybe better than the others instead of boasting the story you made yourself. This is a comic, not a novel, you need to make a great art too, or at least the layout.