Rated 4 / 5 stars2009-06-11 09:15:52

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2009-05-30 02:26:14

..Well

This was a pretty good tutorial... specially because it was really good for a first flash-tutorial-submission..

I've learn something at least... cause, for example I didn't know how to draw hair that good.. and eyes were interesting too..
I noticed some things that maybe you didn't make because you didn't learn that yet on flash or whatever...

But it would be awesome if your next tutorial submission had:
-A preloader.
-A fordward and BACKward button :)
-Slow down the animation.. the onlyone you made was like too fast.. (when showing the face drawing)
-Also write on Author Comments, What's the tutorial about, or in the same title.
-And which style you're going to show 'how-to' draw.
-Just remember that details are important too. (for example: thick lines, scratchy/fast-made drawings don't help)

And on details, people also like to know stadistics of what you made and how much time it took you to make the video/tutorial.. etc..

Hey.. this was pretty f*good for a 13 yo guy, so keep on working on this kind of tutorial! there's people who don't know how to draw and don't understand those complicated tutorials that expert people make.. this was simple and easy to understand and it helped me a lot! seriously!
thanks man!

P.S. I'll be waiting next tutorials! I just hope they have body parts, clothes, and stuff like that ^_^ (just to give you some ideas..)

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars2009-05-29 22:37:33

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars2009-05-29 22:15:44

practice first. then come back to this

the music was a good choice but other than that you need to work on your art for longer before making a tut.
-practice anatomy: the "congrats image" illustrates my point.
-polish your style: maybe choose colors more carefully and possibly cell shade the characters.