This is great! I feel so bad for poor Logan, he goes through so much for Blue :'( I'm glad the two of them have this little moment to enjoy though
Lita is adorable! I love how spunky and sweet she is with Blue! I can't wait to read more about their little adventures and stories they make up!
Wayne...I don't like you. Go away- or make yourself useful (somehow) and get rid of Derek.

Wow, love this chapter, great insights into the way Blue's mind works, and what a jerk Wayne is. Love Blue's figuring out the locking mechanism and the birth of the idea cloud. Also really love the parallel he draws between himself and Mowgli.

LOL Cute! Their playtime together is sweet, great that they let them out in the yard. Oh, and you have another formatting thing, right when Blue asks Lita "Am I your friend?" the rest of the story is all italics.

How sweet, I love the interactions between Blue and Lita and Logan watching it all. Sad that the most contact he got was tossling her hair. The whole unicorn octopus fantasy is great, foreshadowing the Equestrinator! LOL

This is well done, I liked how Blue immediately deduced the intended psychological effects of the interrogation room. One thing though, I think the formatting got stuck partway through, right around when the warden says "And you are a murderer Logan, sometimes I think you forget that." The italics continue for the rest of the story, obviously unintended. Figured you may want the opportunity to fix it.

Poor Blue! It sucks when your brain won't shut off and let you sleep. Minion is great here, truly a fantastic fish! How sweet that Blue is willing to take the blame, even though it really isn't his fault.