this is my 1st female moc REVAMPED FINALLY :D
she is now a lot more sexy 4 my self moc Raymond ^^
heres da link 4 the drawing version of her
http://sniperray213.deviantart.com/favourites/?offset=24#/d46xxe0

About this creation

THIS IS MY CUSTOM VERSION OF Helrixsian and if u want a how2 on her then ill make a vid of it

GIVE CREDIT IF U USE ANY OF MY DESIGNES
IF U STEAL ANY OF MY DESIGNES W/OUT GIVIN CREDIT THEN UR SELF MOC WILL BE TORN APART 4 OTHER MOCS

Quoting Jacob Manahan
Your getting better, like stove top said female mocs are hard to pull off. But she still looks a tad blocky, and I think the shoulders and breasts are a tad out of proportion. But overall nice job!

Thanks :). and i was thinking that her upper body will need some work but overall shes trulyly finished.

Quoting StoveTop Creator
I see much improvement in your building. Females are very difficult to build. But, as others have said also, you need to work on her hip structure, giving it a more curvey/womanly nature. Bionicle shoulder pieces help in this department. :)

Quoting StoveTop Creator
I see much improvement in your building. Females are very difficult to build. But, as others have said also, you need to work on her hip structure, giving it a more curvey/womanly nature. Bionicle shoulder pieces help in this department. :)

I see much improvement in your building. Females are very difficult to build. But, as others have said also, you need to work on her hip structure, giving it a more curvey/womanly nature. Bionicle shoulder pieces help in this department. :)

Sorry, but I really can't give this a rating. Like Someone even less popular said, the proportians don't look good at all (very manly shoulders) and the chest is very awkward. You are 17? I can't believe that (and something on your YT page isn't a proof, you could have given false data). It looks like how very young children imagine a female person. Still, one good thing is the customess of the upper arm, but ther would fit on a male character more well. I hope that this helps you with future MoCs.

Quoting Toa Venom
Hey! First, nice Moc (But I've already said that on Youtube I think XD). Second of all, I was wondering if you could help and make Bionicle Nation become more active? It's been really dead lately. You don't have to if you don't want to, though.

Hey! First, nice Moc (But I've already said that on Youtube I think XD). Second of all, I was wondering if you could help and make Bionicle Nation become more active? It's been really dead lately. You don't have to if you don't want to, though.

Quoting Shadow Falcon
Wow er...eh.....What is with the chest? Don't go for over kill. I mean the body looks good then....yeah. The yellow is out of place I suggest you remove it. The colors could be cleaned up too. 2/5 ,Shadow

i know about the neck
its tht she was wounded there and had 2 get it replace(after battling a makuta) so she was given a yellow (also armor) neck part 2 replace her old 1

Wow er...eh.....What is with the chest? Don't go for over kill. I mean the body looks good then....yeah. The yellow is out of place I suggest you remove it. The colors could be cleaned up too. 2/5 ,Shadow

Quoting Someone even less popular
Whoa, whoa, no need to get angry, this is what the comments are for. Breasts can be big without being OTT like you did there,I mean you've got metru blue, classic blue and trans blue there,Well why is it yellow? Why do you need a second nokama set?I'm sorry but this is what the comments are for. Look, how old are you? If you tell me then I'll tell you if it's good for your age. I'm twelve and most people here are thirteen.

Quoting Someone even less popular
Whoa, whoa, no need to get angry, this is what the comments are for. Breasts can be big without being OTT like you did there,I mean you've got metru blue, classic blue and trans blue there,Well why is it yellow? Why do you need a second nokama set?I'm sorry but this is what the comments are for. Look, how old are you? If you tell me then I'll tell you if it's good for your age. I'm twelve and most people here are thirteen.

Whoa, whoa, no need to get angry, this is what the comments are for. Breasts can be big without being OTT like you did there,I mean you've got metru blue, classic blue and trans blue there,Well why is it yellow? Why do you need a second nokama set?I'm sorry but this is what the comments are for. Look, how old are you? If you tell me then I'll tell you if it's good for your age. I'm twelve and most people here are thirteen.

Quoting Someone even less popular
I'm sorry, but there are several things wrong with this moc. #1: Breasts are not simply basketballs strapped to a woman's chest, those need work. #2: proportions. A woman's hips should be the same with as their shoulders and their feet are small relative to the rest. #3: coulors. You've combined three different tipes of blue here, in addition to black, grey and silver quite messily. Try to make a pattern with your coulors, like I do. And what's that yellow peice doing there? I'm not trying to sound mean, but it does need work. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/282984

1 shes suppose 2 look like the pic on DA
2the only 2 blues shes suppose 2 have is the Guraak Rahski hands and Takadox tanslusint blue(see through blue) not Thok blue
3 the yellow piece is the replacement of her old neck cuz she was almost killed by a makuta when she was a matoran.
4 i didnt have a 2ST NOKAMA SET DUH
5 if u cant say nothin nice about this revamp then keep it 2 ur self and dont say a word of it >:3. I WORKED HARD 2 GET THIS RIGHT GOD AT LEAST GIVE ME CREDIT 4 MAKIN IT

I'm sorry, but there are several things wrong with this moc. #1: Breasts are not simply basketballs strapped to a woman's chest, those need work. #2: proportions. A woman's hips should be the same with as their shoulders and their feet are small relative to the rest. #3: coulors. You've combined three different tipes of blue here, in addition to black, grey and silver quite messily. Try to make a pattern with your coulors, like I do. And what's that yellow peice doing there? I'm not trying to sound mean, but it does need work. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/282984