God, I loved grading school newspapers. Sometimes I'll just take up the whole lunch period marking all the mistakes the editors made and return it to the idiots selling them and telling them, "Everyone in this room is now dumber for having read this." Ah, High School memories.

Actually Onel, if someone were to write like this in - say, college. They would fail outright.
The corrections I added were an attempt to make some sort of an advanced sentence structure that is beyond a 7 year old writing level.

It's sad that there really are a majority of people who still think this way. Not that I think the guy should rely entirely on a financially supporting wife, but rather that both the man and woman (or whoever) could financially support their family together.

Actually all those edits were correct.
I got an A in english 210 because I don't type like this: "becuase people do stuff and things people need to do i cun do what I wat cuz my parents were divorced and im a dum latchey kid who was raised on money with no ethics hurrah!"
That bitch is a gonna get knocked up by a n*gg*r. LAWL.