Sennin Jiraiya was the very first official game based custom character I made. (I'm saying game, because my very first custom character was Niksancheto (S)) He, however, due his old and pretty odd set, did not make it to my and Das' showcase. Now, two years later (yes, it's been nearly two years since I made him) I have finally gotten the ideas and inspiration to rework him. I really didn't want him to be as complex as his previous version, which had weird, yet really cool, code-able mechanics. I wanted this time to make him a straight-forward character, just like he acted in the series in this form of his. Enjoy!

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Not bad, and some pretty cool ideas, though he doesn't flow much, and I think the 2nd skill shouldn't have that random in the cost.10/12

The N-A community in a nutshell:2010: Luapman sucks! He only does character submissions 'cuz he's too lazy to do them himself! He nerfs everybody! We need a new admin!2013: Oreacharound sucks! He never does character submissions, and his characters are awful! He won't rework anybody! He nerfs all the metas! Bring back Luapman, he never nerfed anybody!2015: SiB and Kostas suck! They're reworking all the characters! Bring back Oreacharound, his characters were amazing!

Not bad, and some pretty cool ideas, though he doesn't flow much, and I think the 2nd skill shouldn't have that random in the cost.10/12

If it was regular damage I would have removed it, but given the fact it is affliction, and the skill cannot be stunned by all chakra, ranged, affliction, instant and unique affecting stuns, I'd rather keep it. Thanks. And, yea. Like I said above, it really wasn't meant for his skills to really flow with eachother. Just to do some BAM, BAM BAM!