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1, Advertisement is not so much to spoil our lives as to add color in them.

2, Right because of so much advertisement information that we can freely choose to buy things.

3, It is undeniably true that for celebrities, living in the spotlight and keeping awareness of behaviors all the time is not only uncomfortable but also disturbing, and sometimes that is probably equally dangerous.However, what would be like then if they lose their popularity?

4, Computer will eventually be able to translate all kind of foreign languages by Artificial Intelligence, and no child needs to be annoyed by learning foreign language by then.

5, Like the human gene can be decoded by scientists, eventually computer technicians are able to similarly found out the links with different languages and then the dream of AI translation will come true.

Re: Several sentences. Pls give me instruction.

1. 7.8% population growth in US outmatches 2.6 in UK.
==> The 7.8% population growth in the US outmatches the 2.6% growth in the UK.

2. When it comes to the comparison of the enrolment on school, the figure of UK still far outnumbers US.
==> When it comes to comparing school enrol(l)ment for the UK and the US, the UK figures outnumber the US figures.

3. America spends most of money on national defense, almost accounting for 45% (accounting for, accounted for? making up? made up? standing at? stood at?)
==> America spends most of its money, almost 45%, on national defense.

4. While these countries spend money on different aspects among defense, education and health, funds on these three items almost account for half of overall expenditure of every country.
==> While these countries allot money to different areas within defense, education, and health, funding for those three main areas accounts for almost half of each countries' overall expenditures.

5. it can be seen that the figure of patent application is far more in US and Japan than that in Kenya and Brazil in 1999.
==>The patent application figures for 1999 indicate greater numbers in the US and Japan than in Kenya and Brazil.

6. all 200 patent applications in Kenya belong to residents and in contrast, no residents in Brazil apply their patents.
==> All 200 patent applications in Kenya belong to residents, whereas all X patent applications registered in Brazil belong to non-residents.

7. A similar trend was shown in EU sales before 1994, after which, with a fluctuation between 2100 in 1994 and about 2400 in 1998, it began a sharp drop to 1000 in 2000.
==> A similar trend occurred in EU sales before 1994, after which time, X fluctuated between 2100 and 2400 until 1998 and then in 2000 dropped sharply to 1000.

8. In this time, females’ number had been almost 9 times more than males’.
==>During that time, female numbers were almost 9 times more X than male numbers.

9. the figure of females aged over 100 has been more than that of males over the year 1931-2001.
==> Between the years 1931 to 2001, the figures show that there were more females than males aged over 100 years.

10. people over 40 years old have an even percentage (50%) for the reason of studying.
==> ?

11. People during 40-49 enjoy the second highest figure of help from employer. The percentage reduces to 41% for people after 30 year-old and the least of 35% for people over 49.
==> 40 to 49 year olds enjoy the second highest figure (X%) with regards to gaining help from their employer. The percentage is not as high for employees aged over 30 (41%) and 49 (35%).

Compared to X, Y is better/worse.
In comparison to X, Y is better/worse.
In contrast, Y is unlike X.
By contrast, Y is better/worse.
In contrast with X, Y is better/worse.

1, Advertisement is not so much to spoil our lives as to add color in them.

Advertisements do not so much spoil our lives as add color to them.

2, Right because of so much advertisement information that we can freely choose to buy things.

Advertising helps us to learn what choices are available to us.

3, It is undeniably true that for celebrities, living in the spotlight and keeping awareness of behaviors all the time is not only uncomfortable but also disturbing, and sometimes that is probably equally dangerous.However, what would be like then if they lose their popularity?

It is undeniably true that for celebrities, living in the spotlight and having to be aware that they are in the public eye all the time is not only uncomfortable but also disturbing, and sometimes it is even dangerous. However, what would it be like if they lost their popularity?

4, Computer will eventually be able to translate all kind of foreign languages by Artificial Intelligence, and no child needs to be annoyed by learning foreign language by then.

Computers will eventually be able to translate all kinds of languages by means of Artificial Intelligence, and then no child will need to be annoyed by having to learn foreign languages. :wink:

5, Like the human gene can be decoded by scientists, eventually computer technicians are able to similarly found out the links with different languages and then the dream of AI translation will come true.

Similar to the way scientists decoded the human genome, eventually computer technicians will be able to discover the links between different languages and then the dream of AI translation will come true. :wink: