The really interesting detail is: Spike does NOT know them. So there is a chance we're talking rogues with their own crazy agenda, not lackeys of Steven's tormentors.(this may change if Spike remembers in a second occasion, aka next strip)

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Thu Oct 18, 2012 5:25 pm

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

good actors need to be...

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Fri Oct 19, 2012 1:09 am

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Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:02 am

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Work it, make it, do it, makes us

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Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:03 am

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

...which leads to a question: is Spike in danger for something he and Primo hadn't planned?After all someone else is keeping an eye on Spike, and rescue wouldn't be on the way if it wasn't for something of the 'uh-oh' kind.

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Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:53 am

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uhh...I have a few questions...1)If Primo planned everything with Spike why fake that he went out of home unnoticed.2)When Primo "betrayed" Spike, Spike THOUGHT, not SAID, and I quote: "You betrayed me".3)If Spike had said that line loud for the humans to hear, then I could believe it was some kind of plan.

...which leads to a question: is Spike in danger for something he and Primo hadn't planned?After all someone else is keeping an eye on Spike, and rescue wouldn't be on the way if it wasn't for something of the 'uh-oh' kind.

Spike can't be monitored, but the other guys with him... why not?

angelusbr wrote:

uhh...I have a few questions...1)If Primo planned everything with Spike why fake that he went out of home unnoticed.2)When Primo "betrayed" Spike, Spike THOUGHT, not SAID, and I quote: "You betrayed me".3)If Spike had said that line loud for the humans to hear, then I could believe it was some kind of plan.

I'm sorry, but this feels contrived and forced.

Ok, i think i owe this, even if everything will be explained by the next pages:1) I never said they planned all this from the very beginning2) You're right, but he also thought "heh, thanks my friend". The two lines were conflicting from the start, and there's a reason for both of them3) like point 2

There's a lot of stories that feels contrived and forced when nothing has been explained yet. It's normal.

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Fri Oct 19, 2012 7:24 am

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

_Stu_ wrote:

angelusbr wrote:

uhh...I have a few questions...1)If Primo planned everything with Spike why fake that he went out of home unnoticed.2)When Primo "betrayed" Spike, Spike THOUGHT, not SAID, and I quote: "You betrayed me".3)If Spike had said that line loud for the humans to hear, then I could believe it was some kind of plan.

I'm sorry, but this feels contrived and forced.

Ok, i think i owe this, even if everything will be explained by the next pages:1) I never said they planned all this from the very beginning2) You're right, but he also thought "heh, thanks my friend". The two lines were conflicting from the start, and there's a reason for both of them3) like point 2

There's a lot of stories that feels contrived and forced when nothing has been explained yet. It's normal.

Yeah, there are stories out there that have forced plot development (I'm also guilty of this as well in some fanfics), but it doesn't mean I'm that much happy about them either. But If you are going to give a good explanation, then it won't be forced anymore. As for the "Thanks, my friend" part. I thought that Spike was being sarcastic because of the "betrayal".

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Fri Oct 19, 2012 9:41 pm

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

You're not really going to kill off Joey, are you?

Sat Oct 20, 2012 3:24 am

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

angelusbr wrote:

Yeah, there are stories out there that have forced plot development (I'm also guilty of this as well in some fanfics), but it doesn't mean I'm that much happy about them either. But If you are going to give a good explanation, then it won't be forced anymore. As for the "Thanks, my friend" part. I thought that Spike was being sarcastic because of the "betrayal".

Mh, now that i think about it could've been sarcasm. Oh well, now you know it's not like that.Maybe the explainations won't be that "good", but i saw worst things. After all, even with the previous chapters, i changed a lot of things... in a hurry. So this is my punishment, i have to explain everything even to myself

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You're not really going to kill off Joey, are you?

What did i miss something?

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Sat Oct 20, 2012 1:59 pm

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Well, that's who I think they with the rook tag is, he appears to be talking to Pete, and at the beginning of the chapter Pete has to come to Spike's aid, and the are talking about Winter doing something bad to someone who was there. I just thought maybe it was Joey instead of Primo.

the dog with the rook tag looks nothing like Joey. The fur patterns are completely different. Joey doesn't have any black fur.

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Sat Oct 20, 2012 7:37 pm

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Big Fan wrote:

Well, that's who I think they with the rook tag is, he appears to be talking to Pete, and at the beginning of the chapter Pete has to come to Spike's aid, and the are talking about Winter doing something bad to someone who was there. I just thought maybe it was Joey instead of Primo.

Got it don't worry, i can assure Joey has nothing to do with this, he's not the "misterious guy"

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Sun Oct 21, 2012 2:36 am

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Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

I know i know, it's not Halloween yet. But hey, this is the 200th strip for 1X! Time goes by it seems... and there still is a lot to tell!

I decided to celebrate this Halloween with a mass cosplay party based on Ghost Trick, one of my favourite games ever. And yes, the fact it's all about Ghosts'n creepy stuff surely helps

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