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A very dark, interesting and thoughtful piece. Well thought out and good structure and word choice. It also has a really good rhythm to it and lures the reader deep into the poem. You may like some of my writing also. Keep up the top work!

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Mon, July 9th, 2012 12:27pm

Thank you so much, it means a lot! I will check you out when I have the time!