This review is long overdue. The FF Alert has been sitting in my inbox for a while and I finally got to it! Sorry for the delay...

It was perfect in the way that it enveloped a realistic sense of this oddball couple. Yes, the ending was cheesy, but I think that you neutralized the cheesiness with the other parts of the story.

Some parts were predictable like: teddy chasing after lily, the gazillion messages on her answering machine, lily going out ot find another guy, etc. You balanaced that beautifully with the unpredictable parts: When Teddy kissed Lily, she actually realized she had stole him away and immediately pushed him away; Andy actually left Lily instead of banging her [and I thought the fact that lily grabbed teddy shirt right afterwards was odd], victoire coming to take care of lily, and teddy sleeping on the doorstep of lily.

Of course, your grammar was not perfect, but as with all of your stories, you do that for a specific reason and for a specific effect, so I think that it was fitting.

Mistake I saw:

"A kid, probably about seven, walks by and gives me a look. I stick my tongue out at them and watch them run away, crying hysterically as though I gave them a death threat."

Who is "them"? I think you mean "him". Just a small error.

I enjoyed this immensely; it was one of your better stories in my opinion.

Charlotte, oh my goodness. That was magnificent. I cannot even tell you how much I adored every single sentence in this fic. It's all so short, so witty and quick and perfect. Lily's personality just shines from the page (screen, whatever) with every thought, and I love-love-love how you've characterized her. And Teddy, oh, Teddy. I cringed in the wedding scene, I was so anxious for whatever Lily was going to say, and how everyone was going to react. I love how this isn't /just/ about Teddy and Lily, but how it's also about the Potter-Weasley family and how well they all know each other. I also love that Victoire is not demonized at all in this fic, which is something that I do all too frequently in mine, and that even she was there for Lily after the wedding fiasco.

This whole fic is amazing, but your Lily definitely drives the plot, and I think that the first person narration defines this story. I can't even...I think I'm just going to go back and reread this once a day until I've memorized it, basically.