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I made the first of some halloween series comics i will make this month. Dont worry ash and jared themselfs are in the next one.
They will be super spooky and you might not want to show them to your gramma or she might have a hart attack and die.

~~POKEMON FOREVER~~

99% of teens like 1 directon... put this in ur sig if you dont (started by blazeing man)
Click this banner please t read my GREAT COMIC Ash and Jared's Adventures

This issue really shocked me. Not due to the extremely terrifying zombies, you may be surprised to hear. In fact, it was the use of bad language. I had to delete my history straight away; I don't want my parents finding out that I'm reading such an adult comic. Please be more careful with your choice of expletives next time, Blazeing Man.

I don't use uber Pokemon , I don't calculate stat values, I don't use cheating devices, I don't breed my way to perfection, and I don't care about natures. I catch my Pokemon the way they are, and treat them like individuals instead of brainless drones. If you use this philosophy, copy & paste this into your signature. (Started by Tyranitar)

Am I to understand that this is a form of satire, aimed at exposing and emphasizing all of the deepest flaws in Sprite Comic design? If so, I would suggest emphasizing heavily on the presence of author-stand ins and cheap custom villains.

Truth be told, however, you should never, ever, listen to me. I have experience in this field ranging roughly seven to eight years. I'm more than likely just over examining something you made in MSPaint and GIMP out of Spriter's Resource cutouts (Which I use too, don't worry about that - ripping is for TRUE PROS and also not cool) and thought was neat.

As far as the actual thing goes, I like what you did with the art. It reminds me a lot of what happens in Macromedia Fireworks if you waver the cursor too close to the Bitmap tabs and drag the image to the void and back... Only more pixelly. You should work on the spelling and grammar for sure, as those are integral to the presentation of your work. My advice is to obtain a spellcheck program if you don't already have one - MS Word will do the trick. If that fails, buy a Mac. Those usually have spellchecks built into the system that giga-integrate into everything, including your browsers. If you're not a Mac person (Which is evident, as you're using MSPaint or something) Have your folks check it for you.

Funny? What part? All I've seen is suspense, action, and more recently, some horror (please don't do that again Blazeing Man, my sister had nightmares). The Ash & Jared teacher short was flat-out hilarious though, I have to admit.