One Evening year 2009 DWIGHT KING Jr. is on his way to a Dark alley in the inner streets of Summerfields to do his Nightly routine. "Selling Cocaine" As he arrive in his spothe saw three gangsters who invaded his spot. And questioned them and told them toget out or they won't like what actions he will do. Suddenly the other gangster drew his gun towards Dwight, with Dwight's best talent "His Inner Instinct that he is in trouble" hehurriedly grab the gun away from the man and pointed it to them. Making the three run for their car and grab for their shotguns and pistols, and a shooting will begin..Until the other two will get away leaving the injured one behind. Get his body and dump itin the trunk of the car(Get away with a vehicle park nearby and throw it away in the bay together with the injured gangster)Head back home for a rest take a sleep (SAVED GAME)As he wake up Getting in to his car head towards a Crackhouse to buy some coke for Tonight's routine. Then after that you will be called by your boss that you arealready late for your work. So head to the location indicated on the map(ENTERING THE BUILDING)(A short Cutscene DK Jr. Doing some of his chores)It was 5pm the 26 year old DWIGHT KING Jr. a native of Summerfield a town nearby Los Santos is on his wayfor a date with his girlfriend after a long day of Hardwork sweeping floors and emptying trash cans. As he pass by the Intersectionhe suddenly heard police sirens and several gunshots. In his initiative he ran as fast as he can to get out of the situation..As a speeding car skid near Dwight's position, the passenger of the car threw away a pistol on the roadside. When thepolice arrived in the area they noticed the pistol and Dwight running fast. The police assumed that Dwight is one of the passengerof the suspects car and that he threw away the gun and get out while the other is running the car to confuse the police.The police cruiser push the pedal forward to block Dwight's way, making Dwight to bump into the hood and stumble intothe ground giving the cops the opportunity to hold him down and put handcuffs.(cutscene)COP: Nice try Asshole! you should have run down to hell!D'K: Hey men! What the f*ck is wrong? What the f*ck did I do sh*t! Let me go men! Let me go!COP2: Yeah sh*t too! im charging you with Illegal possession of firearm, roberry, theft and assaulting and injuringan officer! (searching his body) aha! you f*cking Crackhead! And im charging you with this crack.. You sure get high in a prison cell for good!D'K: This is a mistake Sir! I just came from work! waht the f*ck. Whom did i shoot! ok the Crack is mine! But sh*t hellnever shot no one! Dont even have a f*ckin gun..This is Bullsh*t! This is a mistakeCOP: It is a mistake! Mistake of you going to the State penitentiary. Lemme see how tough you gon be inside the cage(DWIGHT KING Jr. Being dump into the back of the police cruiser)

PRISON LIFE

(A scene DWIGHT KING jr. stepping down from a bus in orange prison suit and handcuffs... Looking around.This place.... is where my father died of Riot)Then a cop shouted: Welcome to Flamingo Bay Sate Penitentiary. All of you cats out here, hope you all make it to the endcareful inside that junge. So many wild lions out there.

As you walk into your prison cell a latino and black guy approaches you and ask if what you have something forthem. (cutscene: This is what i have for you "flashing the F.U sign")Latino: What the f*ck Holmes you don't know who you bangin with!Black guy: We be gon watchin ovah your newbie ass..you wanna f*ck with the Rydahz and the Vagos

One time you are in a line waiting for your food.. suddenly 3 latinos and 2 black men attack you in all direction(defend yourself with your bare hands and take them all down)After taking all the attackers down A big man age between 45 to 50 arrived with dozen of men around him and said to you"your one good soldier, come and join our family and be part of this Kingdom"D'K: sh*t.. I ain't riding with you after all this mess homeboyAged Man:Homeboy??!!!! do you know who i am? Nobody calls me Homeboy! Im f*cking RIFLE! i founded theRYDERZ gang.. and nobody says NO to me! All will die whoever f*cking says NO to me!

And this will start your connection with BABY CLIIPS a Hoodster O.G from Ganton. Do Prison Missions likeDrug dealing, sending secret messages and letters, smuggling drugs and cigarettes from the outside world by bribing officers, Theftof goods and merchandise, beating down enemies. here you will also meet PAPA CHOLO a senior leader of the AZTECAS gangalligned with the HOODSTER. Do couple of odd jobs for him.As the story goes by.. DWIGHT KING Jr. Found out that "RIFLE" the founder of the RYDERZ gang is the oneresponsible for the death of DWIGHT KING Senior. Making him hate all RYDERZ gang.. In a Planned Prison riot, D'K planned for stabbing RIFLE to death in the middle of the war. (as the war is occurring find a way to getnear RIFLE, Beat him down)( Cutscene: As D'K pointed a Knife into RIFLE he ask him)D'K: Do you know who i am?!! im DWIGHT KING Jr.!!RIFLE: Dwight King?! That f*cking snitch! I treated his like a brother. But look waht he did..he place my sh*t to 50years!Your father is a co-founder of the RYDERZ! But he sold me out! f*ck you all KINGS!!!!D'K: I don't f*cking care if he co-founded or sh*t! the thing is you killed him! This is for DWIGHT SENIOR!(Stabbing RIFLE's ribs)After the Scene.. A full red Alert is ImplementedGo back to your respected Cell with BABY CLIIPS and PAPA CHOLO as fast as you can, avoid jailguardsto get away from trouble and another Prison year.BABY CLIIPS and PAPA CHOLO will soon be released.. Cliips told you taht you are now welcome to their Setthe "GANTON HOODSTER CLIQUE" and gave you his address. Telling you that you need them because all RYDERZ and VAGOS eyes are all Red Hot against you due to RIFLE's Death Inside Prison or even in the Street.SOON the state prison calls for you in their Office and Said that your name is already Cleared and chargesare already been pullout. Because the real suspects in the incident are already in their Custody.At last its time to GO HOME.

LIFE OUTSIDE

Riding in a TAXI to Summerfield.. you noticed your House full of Vandalism, Windows broken and Graffiti writingslabeled "RYDERZ 187" and some Homies in White shirts and White bandanas sprawled in and out of your home.The RYDERZ are already on the search for DWIGHT jr. Knowing he was already been released from FLAMINGO BAY.You don't have any choice but to go to BABY CLIIPS..The taxi did not drive you all the way toCliips house due to the reputation of the place. You will find yourself walking into the Jungle"WELCOME TO GANTON"As you walk through the city Gangsters in Black attire noticed you and caught their attention and approached you asking questions like"who the hell are you?, where ya from? what set you bangin?? you snithcin or what"Then a Black "Impala looking car" arrived with the Hydraulics.. it was BABY CLIIPS and said to the homies who you are and D'K is with him. He approaches you and gave you the Keys of his Whip. HE told you to drive for him so that you will be familiarize with the Hood and introduce you with other HOODSTER set in Los Santos.. In this you will go to a meetingof O.G's of all Hoodster Gang sets.

You will do couple of missions and Jobs for BABY CLIIPS together with the assistance of PAPA CHOLO and the Aztecas.In GANTON you will meet your future business partner "BIG BEAR" a HOODSTER O.G and CEO of "INMATE RECORDS"Do some missions and jobs for him.Get caught Between GANGBANGIN Action with the RYDERZ, VAGOS and TRECE'S conquer Turf and merchandise.

Find yourself Working with "DON JUAREZ" of Juarez mexican drug cartel go and fight for street supremacy, Territory toexpand the Drug Empire of JUAREZ for a big slice of the Pie against "MIGUEL RODRIGO" and his connections with your sworn enemies the RYDERZ and VAGOS and TRECE NORTE.Go and cross the Borders for Drug trafficking and Gun running.. Deal problems with White Supremacist and Racist Groups.As you progress...You will see the concept of RAGZ to RICHES, from a Poor Thug to a Big time Hustler.Building both your Empire in the Street and Business at the same time.Rebuild "INMATE RECORDS" with Drug money and become the newly Signed Artist of the Label at the same time Co-OwnerAfter earning some cash.. You decided to go back to Summerfield to re-unite with your Girlfriend and Brother RAY KINGafter a year or two of seperation. Work your way out again to regain her trust after all the dramas and Bad happeningsuntil she decided to go with you and get her a descent Condo in Los Santos.

Deal with Crooked Cops, go street Racing, Work with Yakuza Smugglers, Helping some Southeast Asian Gangster and Dealwith Rival "DRIVE-BY PRODUCTIONS" a label owned by RYDERZ gang. Sabotage their concerts and Club performanceby starting a fight and Rumble. Destroy their Factory that manufacture their CD's to stop their production and sales.Go to some Radio stations for Radio Play.. Altercate DJ's who refust to play your labels Music. Scare them to DeathAND THE REST IS HISTORY. (wait for some Continuation)

AFTER COMPLETING 100% MISSIONS, THE GOAL DOESN'T STOP THERE

-Gain as much money as you can on your recordings and businesses to expand more.-purchase all establishments left in the map like Bars, clubs, cafe's, clothing Line, security agency, Office buildings, Hotels and casinos, resortsand factories( after acquiring the Security Agency.. an option to place 1 to 7 security personnel on each properties you have to defend them from enemies)-purchase all Real Estate properties like Mansions, houses, yacht harbor, Condominiums, penthouses, farms)-purchase all Exotic CARS that can't be found anywhere on the map including cars, sports cars, suv's, armored suv's-purchase yachts with functional Interior, Chopper with an option for Auto Pilot and manual flight-purchase the MOST EXPENSIVE THING on the Map which is the Private Island (about $300'000'000)with a lot of fun stuff to do inside the island like Boating, bowling, basketball, swimming, target shooting off road Biking and Trekking.-defend Turfs and territories, conquer more blocks provoke gang wars, Do Drive-by's as much as you can

CHARACTERS (i am going to use some pics of personalities just to have an idea, i won't get sued right?)

The Game. (less tatoo)-DWIGHT KING Jr. a.k.a D'KING: a 26 years old protagonist from the town of summerfield. Works as a Janitor in a fastfood chainand a part time DJ. A dropout of college due to minor drug issues. Works sideline as a part time crack dealer. Never been a gang member until the time he went to prison. He is one tough Man who see's himself as a one man gangand deals stuff with his bare hands. Have passion in making rap music and production.

-RAY KING: Younger Brother of DWIGH. Have nothing special to do with him except to come back for him.

Ice Cube-BABY CLIIPS: Hoodster O.G a very powerful and influential figure in the streets of ganton. He organizethe operation of streetgangs in Ganton. Waiting for his Parole in he met D'K in FLAMINGO BAY

W.CRUDE: O.G of Park Avenue Hoodster, A verry funny man and jolly personvery far away from his name Rude.

Suge Knight of DeathRow R.-BIG BEAR: A Uptown Hoodster O.G a cousin of Baby Cliips. CEO of the top selling gangsta rap label "INMATE RECORDS" which is now in decline due to death of some of his artist and mainstream takeover of rival "drive-by prductions of the Ryderz gang. Depressed and desperate to regain and rebuild his empire.

Mack 10UZI MANE: The last Inmate Records artist. Member of Uptown Hoodster. Having problems withRyderz gang roaming around his crib in palomina.

from Ms13 gang-FUEGO: A TRECE senior leader in state Prison

-DON JUAREZ: The Father of " JUAREZ CARTEL" a mexican drug cartel operating parts of Idlewood, east Ganton. Havingalliance with The HOODSTER and AZTECAS to gain street control of LS. Having battle with the RODRIGO ELENA CARTEL

-MIGUEL RODRIGO: Leader of "RODRIGO ELENA CARTEL" a mexican drug cartel the sworn enemies of Don Juarez.Operations in Idlewood,west Ganton full control of Lone beach, granada, carmons, Chico del bay and San Gaspar.

l.a base Filipino rapper Roscoe Umali-PABLO CRUZ: A Filipino O.G of the AZIAN TRIBE GANGSTA as southeast Asian gang compose of Filipinos, vietnamese, burmese, laosthat band together to defend their pride against the Imperial manners of the Chinese street gang ORIENTAL CREW and Koreanstreet gang the SUNNY SIDE BOYS. D'K will meet Pablo after acquiring a safe house in his Apartment and help him deal with his problems.

-AKUTAROU(badboy in english): A leader of the young generation Yakuza. Moving to Los Santos to operate smugglingof cars, electronics. Have heavy competition with the Triads.

-JOHHNY WAIST: O.G of the Original GANTON Ryderz. Sworn enemy of baby Cliips once a childhood playmate. Son ofRIFLE and will do anything just to beat the crap out of D'K

-RIFLE: The Founder of RYDERZ gang. Have been killed by D'K in FLAMINGO bay resulting to massive street wars

-DECISIVE: Member of the RYDERZ gang. Aspiring gangsta rapper. Founded "DRIVE-BY PRODUCTIONS" rivalingInmate Records. His song are a Big hit in Mainstream due to unstoppable DISS against Inmate and Hoodster.

-GRANADA LOCO: Member of the VAGOS. Part of Drive-BY productions. Aspiring Latino Rapper.

-HOMBRE FUERTE: The Senior Leader of all VAGOS in Los Santos. A very dangerous man.

-OSCAR CHAVEZ: Leader of the Sur Trece's

GANGS IN LOS SANTOS AND NEARBY AREAS.

-CHINESE TRIADSoperates/reside in Central Los Santos and Verona. Major interest are smuggling of goods, electronics, drugs

-When homies die or get busted there is an option to heal or bail them out in exchange of a pretty amount of money-Option to call 3,7,11,15 Homies on the phone going to your location with theirassigned vehicle.-Assigned vehicles to homies are part of your purchased vehicle collection-Homies Drive behind you and convoys you wherever you go.they automatically shoot rival gangs.[/color]

Welcome to Los SantosWelcome to Los SantosIn the city where the street is hot!Welcome to the city where you can get popShot!...And baby where the party don't stop!(2x)

It's been two thousand and Nine Since the day i first held my hand on a Tec-9Now that I'm on my prime, its my time to get shinefor the westside I represent my rhymewhat i spit is what i live i ain't blindas i spit my 16bars on the microphonerepresenting my second home, represent the Gantonso put your lights on and get your blunts onwelcome to the city of the Hoodsters the vagosthe trece's,aztecas and the RyderzWe all ain't friends but we represent the LSAs I remove my trousers you can see gunshots into mah chest That's what ya get coming from the projects Walking by night is a survivalComing from the hood is my tool to outcome the strugglebaby this is the wild westCoz baby em comin from LS!

Welcome to Los SantosWelcome to Los SantosIn the city where the street is hot!Welcome to the city where you can get popShot!...And baby where the party don't stop!(2x)

Here in the city of LS where the stars are bornTo ghetto superstars of Idlewood, Lone Beach and GantonTo the projects of Granada and CarmonsTo high class bitches of Vinewood Now you wanna piece of it and to be a Well knownI can answer that to my mothaf*ckin Smith and WessonChampagne on my poolsideLets get in mg garage and check out mah RidesCavalcades to CogoscentiHaving a max speed on Turismo, Infernus and Super GTNo one knows how to ride better than meLos Santos yeah baby that's my cityBut don't forget the Lowriders I've been ridin with ma homiesbouncin in the culdesac to stay fly all dayRippon on the chopperz yeah that's my AKyeah HOODSTERS represent Black is what i wearall day!

Welcome to Los SantosWelcome to Los SantosIn the city where the street is hot!Welcome to the city where you can get popShot!...And baby where the party don't stop!(2x)

yeah..baby. You ain't Bangin with us homies! we the real G'z!Los Santos represent n***aall the Cats out there who wanna bang with! Come and get us Mothaf*cka!f*ck all who hate us! f*ck Drive-By!f*ck decisive n***hahaha!INMATE RECORDS mothaf*cka!

nerner

Yeah, maybe your brother is in prison, and you have to bust him out using lots of dynamite, and a hefty amount of armour and ammo. Then you meet the antagonist, and have to dispatch him, then the storyline missions end, pretty kickass in my opinion.

Omnia sunt Communia

I agree with nerner though. The futuristic setting is a little unneeded. The gang culture of Los Angeles was most popular during the 1990s. If you're going to include present/futuristic gangs based on Los Angeles gangs then you might want to remove the gang colours; since most gangs these days don't wear them because the cops are cracking down on people wearing them.

Pr0xy_fl00d3r

Remeber the science books at school? remember the vagina diagrams? well thats what the shape of the map looks like to me Its a decent, well thought out map though. Maybe you need to sort the presentation of all your text out, everything is bold and it doesent seem to split different parts of the post into groups. Other than that, good job.

jplip

Remeber the science books at school? remember the vagina diagrams? well thats what the shape of the map looks like to me Look at CIUDAD ARGUELLA.. it looks like a Dick with balls.Its a decent, well thought out map though. Maybe you need to sort the presentation of all your text out, everything is bold and it doesent seem to split different parts of the post into groups. Other than that, good job.

SUMMERFIELD is BAkersfield. I've been in that town. its quite peaceful and pretty clean.

I intended the map too look like a Vaigina. Good thing you noticed. and if you look atCiudad de Arguella it looks like a dick with Balls

And if i'll do it in the 90's again its like another SA.So i made it in 2008. Gangs still use the colors though. IF they wear ordinary clothingit wouldn't be fun anymore coz they will look so oredinary.

Omnia sunt Communia

And if i'll do it in the 90's again its like another SA.So i made it in 2008. Gangs still use the colors though. IF they wear ordinary clothingit wouldn't be fun anymore coz they will look so oredinary.

Not really. I could say that by setting it in Los Santos you're creating another San Andreas. It's not the setting that defines the game - it's the story and game play.

Having gangs still use their colours wouldn't reflect Los Angeles as it is today. The Police are really cracking down on gang colours is L.A. and very few people still do it. They use gang signs instead, since they're a lot easier to hide.

Mafioso86

Having gangs still use their colours wouldn't reflect Los Angeles as it is today. The Police are really cracking down on gang colours is L.A. and very few people still do it. They use gang signs instead, since they're a lot easier to hide.

But whenever you want to set it is fine, it's your game.

Most of them still use it... just not as over the top as it once was. I'll use the bloods as an example... I mean people aren't walking around as much with red shoelaces, a red flag out their back pocket, and a red rag on the head... but they might be wearing maybe a red Boston (the B is on it) hat and a red shirt or something; you can get a way with that because current hip-hop culture has gotten kinda overly fashionable where everyone is obsessed with matching crap and looking nice.

jplip

I mean to expose or showcase PRison system in America.Actually i got inspired on what i have Watch in DISCOVERY CHANNEL about a Prisonerfrom Pelican bay or i Think its in San Quentin another prison in California. He was ayoung Good African american Boy who got caught between a mess and got locked down.He have no choice but to join with African American gangs inside the prison even if its against hiswill and virtue.. So at the End. He gound himself trap in Gangsta life outside prison to survive life.Because he cannot go on with a normal life. No Jobs can accept him or hire him due to his record in prison. So That's it...

And SORRY for the Bold letters. Im in a hurry to Type this out. Im still in the middle of editing it. Coz i made this Storyline in the middle of my work in my Construction Site.Im talking with my Clients pretending im making a sketch of the project where they do not knowI already prepared one at the bottom of my paper.LOLS

Wait for the Edited one. Sorry for the Inconvenience. Business as usal.

streetthug

I love the map. It looks so L.A men. Unlike the LS of SA. It was not really well represented.Even the Gang culture in S.A is too much Corny.I can Feel it.

@JACKY your wrong. They still use Gang Colors here. Come and see for yourself.It doesn't mean your a blood you gon wear red from top to bottom including your underwear.Most members only incorporate a certain piece of their clothes like a red cap, shoes, shirt onlyor even jewelry. OR only a piece of bandana. But not all the way red like what people see onmedia.

This is relevant today to L.A because during the 90's gangsters population onprison is not that high unlike today. maybe after the year of 1998 or 2000prison gangs emerges. They have the street knowledge of operationg their gang outside even if theyare lock up. But there are no blood or crip or flats ms13 or 18th street gang in prsion.they are divided into Races.-BLACKS-WHITES-NORTENOS-SURENOS-HISPANICS-OTHERSBut still this one is fun! I really love to see something like this in GTA.Focusing on real L.A gang culture. No more Triads or quarry jobs or parachute or corny stuffs a gangbanger would never do.

You're right, gang still wear colours, but not in the way we're use to seeing in the 1990s. They were alot more expressive about their gang affiliation now they have to be careful about who they show off too. I think that could make a quite an interesting part of the game; maybe if you start flashing your colours or signs around police officers they get a little suspicious?

The only problem I can see with a game focusing on prison gangs is how are you going to show their activity outside of prison? If the game is set in prison then it's going to severely dampen the "freeroaming" aspect of the game.

jplip

The Prison mission is only about 8 to 10 missions before you get out in the Real world.It tends to excite the gamer to see what thing are waiting for him outside.It won't really dampen freeroaming. The story continues after PRison life.The things Dwight King Jr. will encounter is an aftermath on what he did in prison, at firstbut on the succeeding missions and chaptersits about building your own empire. Its more of Working for your own self after working anddoing works for others.

Im thinking of that concept. Like in the end of the Chapter you already have less works forother people. But you do works to benefit more for your own ass. Maybe some coop orassistance from other characters. Or asking help from them instead of them asking help from you.Like i scratch your back yesterday, scratch my back now coz its my turn. Something like that

"Wait"I have to EDIT the map. West Ganton and East Ganton are at the wrong place. Silly me

jplip

First it focuses on the Prison System and prison Life in America especially in California.Then the Gang comes in. Yeah Dwight King Jr. is just one ordinary hardworking tough guy froma town based from Bakersfield then got caught in a mess like a huge huge mistake committed by Law Enforcerstaking him as a suspect in a crime. you know "WRONG PLACE AT THE WRONG TIME" momentThen the main characters world will get narrowed due to what he have done in prison giving him noChoice but to get in with the Set. Blood in and Blood Out.Then as the game progresses a Huge part will focus on the Mexican Drug Cartels. Another thing that gives California Feds a headache. After that the "RISE TO POWER" and "EMPIRE BUILDING" occurs.Working your way to the Top of the game.

jplip

Gangsta Rap is only a derived from hip-hop. Without Hip-hop, rap would not exist

I know Rap is just one of the 9 Elements of Hihpop by KRS ONE..

Anyways.. Im thinking About making a Gang Map. But I still need to allot sometime for it. Im too busy right now.

What can you say about the story?

I also have thought of like Blowing up the prison with RPG or Dynamite thing.. but i thinkit wouldn't fit the story. My Protagonist is just an ordinary Guy from the streets of a little town.Not a "Terrorist".

jplip

The beginning is a bit like San Andreas cuz' DK is wrongly accused, he's a victim!

hehe.. I can't find any other reason for him to get to Prison.At least the difference between SA and this one is that CJ is a gangster for a long time and he's an O.Gand D'K jr is just one ordinary dude who works for minimum wages everyday and he livesalone with his brother with no parents. And that taught him to be tough on the real world.

streetthug

The beginning is a bit like San Andreas cuz' DK is wrongly accused, he's a victim!

hehe.. I can't find any other reason for him to get to Prison.At least the difference between SA and this one is that CJ is a gangster for a long time and he's an O.Gand D'K jr is just one ordinary dude who works for minimum wages everyday and he livesalone with his brother with no parents. And that taught him to be tough on the real world.

No its just right. Its kinda okay. The RPG thing story would seem to be a lil unreal? Even though its not about realism as some people say. But c'mon. Where the hell would that ordinary guy get RPG's and Dynamites

jplip

uh huh. Definitely. Im Thinking about like..An original Song just for GTA Los Santos that is performed by the Voice ofDwight King Jr's voice. This would be perfect for the game coz it's alsoabout rebuidling a rap label.Original lyrics about Los Santos and its gang life