Would...

The magic hands are a bit too quick...

My advice inform the readers by always putting: 'Chapter one' next to the title of the story. It kind of puts every thing in the right context... The good quality of writing is still here, together with the tendency to write overly short mini chapters. Is anyone chasing you? You know you can do better.

CHEATER AND LEAVERS

What?

Not feeling this.

Normally I am a reconciliation person, but this is not a reconciliation situation. Your wife comes to get a few things so that she can be with the guy that she ruined your 20 marriage for, she cheats with you on the guy that she was with, and now you feel like you guys can make it work? If there were ever a BTB situation, this would definitely warrant it.

Rent a storage unit

Shoulda rented a storage unit in her name. Put all her shit in it, and email her the details, or have your lawyer call her!

If she is THAT incapable of sticking by her decisions, why the fuck would anyone have kept her (for 20 years, no less)? I am seeing nothing by the author which establishes that Hubby is any 15 year old who stands in line for a gangbang on a stranger! Yeah, hormones are a tough taskmaster, but an adult is supposed to be able to over-rule them with the Big Head! Neither Sweetie nor Hubby are depicted as having any other guidance models!