I liked how for the most part, it was almost all dialogue which is something I've never seen before, but it was enough to tell the entire story. It was short and sweet, but told an amazing story.

Author's Response: I just kind of wrote it all at once, four year olds don't really put that much thought behind words, you know? But I got stuck like that when they were adults too. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for your review