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MMLP2 11.5.13#teamEncore #teamEllenPage"Enough rhymes to maybe try to help get some people through tough timesBut I gotta keep a few punchlines just in case cause even you unsignedRappers are hungry looking at me like it's lunch time"

- Flow on point- Rhymes/structure on point- Coherency (you make sense most of the time)

Cons:

- Delivery/mixing (as you said, only a demo though)- Confidence (I know you probably love what you wrote but let it shine in your voice, homie!)- Adlibs/layers (they're not properly mixed/aligned and it kinda jumbles the main rapping layer)

This is good for a 13 year old. Keep at it, you already got the basics down. Just gotta work on the upper level shit now (mixing, delivery, making sure everything is aesthetically pleasing).

Eedee wrote:This is good for a 13 year old. Keep at it, you already got the basics down. Just gotta work on the upper level shit now (mixing, delivery, making sure everything is aesthetically pleasing).

Definitely this.

I genuinely think you have a gift with this bro. To have that good of a flow at 13 is something you should be proud of.

M8 i just heard a demo of roms new shit n it might top yours eedee daaaym.

MMLP2 11.5.13#teamEncore #teamEllenPage"Enough rhymes to maybe try to help get some people through tough timesBut I gotta keep a few punchlines just in case cause even you unsignedRappers are hungry looking at me like it's lunch time"

Eedee wrote:This is good for a 13 year old. Keep at it, you already got the basics down. Just gotta work on the upper level shit now (mixing, delivery, making sure everything is aesthetically pleasing).

Definitely this.

I genuinely think you have a gift with this bro. To have that good of a flow at 13 is something you should be proud of.

Thanks a lot both of you. Will improve on those areas

Eminem wrote:Sarking Major is 11/10 signing him to Shady records in 2015

True Wiz wrote:Damn, SarkingMajor can out rap half of you TR rappers :whew:

I'd work on your delivery a little though. Your flow was amazing in some parts man

not bad man, pretty much agree with what everyones said. flow is decent seems to be on point. delivery is a little lackluster. sometimes your a little hard to understand, may be the accent but whatevs. just work on your track presence and enunciate. also some of the overlays were off. keep it up doe

Spyder wrote:not bad man, pretty much agree with what everyones said. flow is decent seems to be on point. delivery is a little lackluster. sometimes your a little hard to understand, may be the accent but whatevs. just work on your track presence and enunciate. also some of the overlays were off. keep it up doe

Cheers, and yeah I know what you mean. Will improve

Eminem wrote:Sarking Major is 11/10 signing him to Shady records in 2015

True Wiz wrote:Damn, SarkingMajor can out rap half of you TR rappers :whew:

I'd work on your delivery a little though. Your flow was amazing in some parts man