Painting pictures with words.
Opening a part of the soul.
Emotion flowing with the lines.
Tapestry skillfully woven.
Reflecting thoughts artfully.
Yearning to make a difference.
--Karen O'Leary--Whispers' Editor

12 comments:

Hi Eiza and Arthur, you have created and shared an original idea with us. I like the way the poem moves along, its pace. It reflects and portrays good images. Thank you for sharing this. Good job! BW Annie

Thank you Eliza & Artur, I must tell you, I felt instantly comforted by this incredible poem...we see deep blue skies behind billowing clouds here in Minnesota also, there is a wildness to it, I believe our Native American ancestors felt as you do...am going to gather nettles in the forest in coming days, allowing leaves to brush my knees, the gentle sting relieves my stiff knees & dried roots boiled in tea soothe my mind, I will remember your beautiful poem as I look to the sky with gratitude! thank you! james marshall goff