I like the style but I think I like the expressions more in the original. This may just be because that was the original way I saw it. In the second one though she looks more confident about looking at porn. The uncertainty she had before was ... really amazing I thought to her character as she gained more confidence later on.

Hey sorry I'm a bit late on the reply. The different art styles have a weird way of working for Alice, showing how her life changes and modifies. Though the pupil thing freaked me out for a moment (I just didn't expect it). I think either which way you go will be good, even if it's just a touch up.

I don't think you should be so hard on yourself though, recognize the amazing thing you've already developed. And if you want to make that even better, than yay, but the only thing I'd advise, is try not to lose that central thing that attracted us all in the first place. We were seeing Alice grow and change and evolve...

Well I absolutely love your comic. It's your story that really captures me at first. To be honest, I wasn't sure about the art. But I think over time it developed into it's own, and it's the type of art that grows on you. Now... I don't know if it's because the art has improved (which it has) or if I've just grown fond of it, but I absolutely adore it now.

Out of all the comics online, even outside of smackjeeves,I always check yours first. It's my favorite comic right now :)

So bam, some good feedback there. I think it's mainly the way you progress and tell the story. It's very real and it feels like life lessons of growing up as a lesbian. It's so good.

Also I love the way you interact with your fans, just that question above shows that. And you always reply back to our comments.

This page seems a little odd on the pacing though. Mom asking question to bam dyke haircut. But maybe I'm the only one who saw that jump as rather swift.

Hehe I love this so much. I've been there though. When it's you, it's hard to see someone else liking you sometimes. Also dating profile, I'm guessing she got a lot of messages from men? Always seem to happen

I remember Sue, I also find her grown up interesting. She's grown a lot herself, but at the same time, very much herself. This is such a great moment and I'm glad to see they resolved their differences.

Though I guess I always felt like Sue did what she did before because she was jealous of someone "taking her friend". I'm not sure, but damn you do great characters/timelines.