Nice you did a great job for your first vector work :D
The colors are not too sharp and the outlines are just right,
I agree with crmc having more shadings in various parts like the smokes,
curtains and butterflies but for the dress you did a great job.
Overall nice job for your first vector! so +fav! ^^,

wow, first time in vectoring? This is wonderful! I like the detailed work on the frills. I agree that you should give
more shadings to some parts.. and probably some highlights on her hair would make it even more beautiful.. :)
Overall, great work! ^_^