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When I sat down to write why I wanted to become a lawyer, I had about 20 pgs worth of reasons and things I've been doing to get there. I fianlly cut a lot out, but was left with a number of experiences and feelings that were hard to connect. I thought it would be creative to set my essay up like a diary entry with dates and what happened on those dates that made me want to pursue a legal education. I had it read by 2 people- neither who went to law school- who disagreed. One loved the format and the other said the admissions office would hate it. Anyone want to take a look and act as the tiebreaker before I re-write it?