Princess Twilight Sparkle mess up a spell that's nothing new but when it makes her transported to zootopia she will retrace Starswirl's steps to get home but does she want to or stay? Find out. (second zootopia story on here.)

Devoid of memories and found in the Everfree Forest, little Raichu is nursed back to health by Twilight and her friends. Little do they know about the importance of her past and how far she’ll go to repay their kindness.

Princess Twilight Sparkle mess up a spell that's nothing new but when it makes her transported to zootopia she will retrace Starswirl's steps to get home but does she want to or stay? Find out. (second zootopia story on here.)

After Tirek was defeated by Twilight and her friends, harmony was once again restored in Equestria. However, Equestria's greatest challenge was just around the corner... They are not prepared when two strangers from another dimension arrive.

Discord accidentally transports Fluttershy and Angel to the Pokémon universe, where they turn into human and Pokémon. A rookie trainer finds a pink-haired girl with a Buneary lost in the Ilex Forest. He soon decides to help her find her way home.

Torch has a small reunion after his retirement as Dragonlord. Unfortunately, this small reunion isn't so small. Afterall, underneath his tough exterior, Celestia knows he's still the softie he was when she was just a filly.

The newest police duo, Officer Judy Hopps and Rookie Nick Wilde, are on another case that's all too familiar to the Nighthowler incidents.

Meanwhile, an accident in Twilight's castle accidentally causes Fluttershy to wind up in the city of Zootopia, a city bustling with mammals, where she stumbles upon the police duo.

Though loving the city at first, Fluttershy wants to go home... but after a series of events, she must team up with the Duo to find out where more of the Nighthowler is coming from, explore the different parts of Zootopia, and hopefully, find a way back home... and stop her urge to cuddle with Judy along the way.

Mostly made because everyone says 'why isn't there a Zootopia crossover?' And this is an unofficial sequel to the movie that loosely follows a certain TheoryZootopia and it's character all belong to Disney, so please, support the official release, and spoilers abound if you haven't seen the movie... go on, do it! It's a good film.Cover by Heir of RickEdited and cowritten by SudokuBrony

Interesting concept. I like it so far. Some nitpicks though. You should put in better scene transitions. Switching between scenes can be confusing to the readers if there isn't a clear line break. I never saw Zootopia, but I feel that you did a good job of summarizing the movie. I'm interested to see where you take this story.

Okay, don't wanna be harsh, but try not to use the "&" mark. Second, don't use more than one exclamation mark!!!!! Is that clear???!!! Other than that ...*enters fanboy mood* OH MY GOSH THAT WAS INCREDIBLE! The comedy in this chapter made my day! The characters are all spot on, the humor is great, the concept is nice, and this is a FRIGGING CROSSOVER WITH ZOOTOPIA! Please, don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!

I'm so sorry that I couldn't write the story with you, I just never had t he time for it, a lot of issues in my life were happening right then, I kept checking for u ou though, on the doc. I'm very sorry.

7425593 sorry, my humour is more of the kind that either occurs randomly, or just something done on accident. Just saying I have a really bad sense of humour.

It just depends on who you are.

Oh well. Just make the story better than mine.Please do better. My story doesn't really have any point in being on the site other t Han to appease the need to have the feeling I actually did something.Oh well, see ya around!Bye.

First, that scene with the portal has too many exclamation points. I got a good idea of what was going on, but I think a more toned-down approach would work better.

Second, the exposition dump about Zootopia is a bit disruptive. Make it more natural by, for example, following Judy Hopps through her daily routine, adding a sentence of explanation or two whenever something crosses her path. A picture of her family to show her past, a chat with the cheetah cop to explain her struggles with the ZPD, witty banter with Nick to introduce her partner, a glance at the holding cells and Nighthowler news to introduce the plot of the movie, that sort of thing. A little integration goes a long way.

Do it right, and no one will even notice. It's shorter as it is, true, but anyone who's familiar will the information will find it unnecessary, and anyone who's not might find it obtrusive.

Now, what I liked. I've been hoping for a crossover for a while, so that's a plus. Also, the character interactions towards the beginning and especially the end are quite good. Try to do more of that. Although you should identify who's speaking at any given moment, especially in a conversation with more than two people.

“I’m gonna win this game!” The Kudu yelled.“Like you are!” The Oryx yelled back.“Is that a challenge!?”“You bet it is!”“Fine! Let’s go!!!” The door slammed on Fluttershy, but only silence came. She took a calming sigh of relief and walked back into Judy’s apartment. Tired, she rolled onto the floor, closed her eyes, and fell asleep.“Job well done, Fluttershy.” She thought to herself.