I absolutely adore how defined her facial features are and how you drew her hair was just beautiful. I especially liked how you drew her lips and eyes. I think the elasticity of her neck looks a bit weird and the headband could be a little bit more crisper but that's just my opinion. You did a great job with this!

Negatives: I don't see a lot of mistakes, but you could have blended the highlights a bit more. Also, at some points I miss a few tufts of hair. I see that one that around her ear, and around her neck that you see a few tufts of hair, but there also should be a few tufts at her forehead. Her eye should be a bit more straight.

Positives: The hair is really nice drawn and coloured! I really like the shadings of her headband a lot. I recognized immediately that it was Cinderella, so you did a good job drawing her!

Well, I hope this critique was useful, even though I didn't see a lot of mistakes.Thank you for submitting here!