The Feedback Game

Author

Message

LeandraOwnerMotto : Say what you mean. Diamonds : 207

••

Okay we are gonna try something fun since I see forums for tips and feedback in the forums. I'm going to make an official one with prizes so here's how it'll work. You can all submit a design for feedback from members and then Sunday who ever have the highest ratings overall will get some extra points. Also some of the members who give the most helpful advice will get a little something as well. How to give feedback: Make sure to mention the member and then any comments you have and a rating from 1 to 10 (10 being the best). If you'd like you can also name a price that you think is reasonable to sell their design for. This is just for fun and to give constructive criticism to help members, so nothing cruel and no fighting.

Last edited by Leandra on Fri Feb 21, 2014 1:24 am; edited 3 times in total

Tammy I love your chair makes me want to sit in it and curl up with a blanket and some hot coco and a book. I give it a 10 it's so cute and I love the details u put into it and the soft colors. It just puts a smile on my face lol had to say that because of the smile on it. lol

Angelinamc: 10/10 Such upscale innovative designs as always I love that entire outfit and really can't think of much improvements! For the whole outfit I'd give about 500-700 points :)

Flora: 8/10 Beautiful and I love the color, the shading is good but maybe add some light shading to it. Also I'd say to work on the edges to smooth them out with the eraser or polygonal lasso tool. I'd give 100 for your couch :)

Tammy: 10/10 Wonderful I love the look it's very realistic and clean lined. I would give 250 for your chair!

Thanna: 8/10I really like this outfit! The colors are great and I love the top's pattern. The shading is good in general but the edges are kinda sharp and jagged? You could probably the eraser tool on full opacity and flow and just erase away until the edges look nice and smooth.

Thanna: 8/10 Lovely gown it looks so glamorous with the hat. I really love the color combinations and textures. My feedback would be to watch the edges seeming to harsh, make sure they are smoothed a bit. I'd give 400 points for your outfit :)

Conclusion: Everyone gave very helpful tips sooooo I'll give you each 100 points for helping out others. As for the highest rated fashions, it goes to Angelinamc and Tammy who will each get an extra 100 points!

Ok I'll give this a try Only the outfit is done by me, the Betty page model and wig is by Angelinamc. As you can see I'm into steampunk. I cheated on the blouse ok got lazy and used the top of a dress I made while back. But really worked hard the the corset and skirt and boots.

10/10 It is after the part where Id usually give points but your design is stunning. I love the details and textures that you have in this outfit! I would actually love to buy this if you are willing to say it just name your price :)

1st Design: Great work on this coat. I love the belt. However the buttons kind of stand out too much from the coat's shading. Also, instead of making the ends of the sleeves/collar/bottom of coat completely straight lines, curve them to make it look more realistic. I'd also suggest adding a few wrinkles.

2nd Design: Wow, this design looks great! The shading is fantastic and the curves don't have any sharp edges. However, I would be careful when using pure black on any fashion, because dark shading does not appear on pure black, and makes it look flat.

3rd Design: You have a great cut on this design too, but the bottom of the shirt is very flat, and makes it look unrealistic. There also isn't much shading on this one, and the dark shading is very light and hard to notice.

Overall: The designs are a bit bland, don't be afraid to add in some color! The ends of the designs (like the end of the sleeves and the collar, etc.) are straight and would look a bit better curved. But you have definitely improved a lot and the designs are great. I would give you a 7/10. :)