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Mon, 20 Oct 2014 05:44:15 +0000hourly1http://global2.vic.edu.au/?v=4.8.2Comment on Procedual Text/ How to make ice-cream by Samanthahttp://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/2014/08/15/procedual-text-how-to-make-ice-cream/comment-page-1/#comment-41
Mon, 20 Oct 2014 05:44:15 +0000http://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/?p=465#comment-41Hi Juz,
Ice cream is yummy.
What flavour is it?
I tried to send an email to you but it is an unknown address.
Help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sammi
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Thu, 04 Sep 2014 09:28:30 +0000http://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/?p=465#comment-40Hey Juz,
It was fun making it.
Thanks for sharing.
Rob.
]]>Comment on 100WC Week 25 by Steve Harper-Travers 100WC New Zealandhttp://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/2014/03/12/100wc-week-25/comment-page-1/#comment-39
Sun, 16 Mar 2014 02:06:12 +0000http://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/?p=400#comment-39Justyn,
I thought you used some great descriptive sentences her. I loved the part where you knew you could not act scared. I am not sure where this week’s prompt fits in though.
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Sun, 09 Mar 2014 18:17:35 +0000http://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/?p=390#comment-38Justyn,
Well done on your 100 WC. I especially liked how you described the beanstalk as ‘massive’. That’s a great description word. Perhaps next time you can work on using conjunctions in your sentences so you have a variety of longer and shorter sentences.
Keep up the great writing!

]]>Comment on 100WC Week 24 by Avahttp://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/2014/03/02/100wc-week-24/comment-page-1/#comment-37
Thu, 06 Mar 2014 19:14:33 +0000http://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/?p=388#comment-37*good use of punctuation
*good use of paragraphs
#could use better describing words
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Wed, 05 Mar 2014 21:01:55 +0000http://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/?p=390#comment-36Justyn, it’s great that you re-read the prompt and wrote this too. I wonder what they expected from the beans? Well done.

Team 100 wc (United Kingdom)

]]>Comment on 100WC Week 24 by theschoolgovernor (Team 100)http://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/2014/03/02/100wc-week-24/comment-page-1/#comment-35
Wed, 05 Mar 2014 20:57:10 +0000http://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/?p=388#comment-35Justyn, thank you for your reply. I will add a comment to Jack and the beanstalk.
]]>Comment on 100WC Week 24 by justynhttp://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/2014/03/02/100wc-week-24/comment-page-1/#comment-34
Wed, 05 Mar 2014 08:56:38 +0000http://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/?p=388#comment-34Sorry, your’e actually right and wrong because it isn’t wrong if I say window twice. But it sounds a bit better if it is like this.

]]>Comment on 100WC Week 24 by justynhttp://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/2014/03/02/100wc-week-24/comment-page-1/#comment-33
Wed, 05 Mar 2014 08:53:08 +0000http://justyn2013.global2.vic.edu.au/?p=388#comment-33I sort of had to say window twice in the sentence because if I only said window once it would of came out like this.

I herd a voice from outside my window.,

Because I have to say where he goes and what he does and I have to say window twice.