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BlaineVeteran

Subject: The Tests Sat Jun 15, 2013 10:05 pm

Hello all, I will of course be supplying some things. The goal here is to tell me how you would mod it. As such you will have to go through just like you would with any other moderation of an application. I wish you all luck and remember trial mods, have fun and keep a sharp eye. Keep in mind some of these may have no problems with them.

Test One:

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Name: Sun WuKong, Monkey Sage, Monk of Hevean and EarthSpecies: MonkeyType: SupplementaryRank: S Elements: NoneRelation: He is the leader of the Monkey contract. Even the king of the realm falls to his rule. Hakai upon obtaining the other leaders of the realm finally requested to be able to summon the great sage. Physical Traits: 5'10" 300 lbs.

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Description: Sun Wukong is a genius, he has lived for over 300 years. He is one of the few enlightened being left in this world. It is rumored that he has complete knowledge †all ninja arts in the world. This allows him great power if he should ever be challenged †in battle. His knowledge and experience makes him †immune to all genjutsu, easily able to see through it and break with just his spiritual energy. †He has a complete understanding of all animals systems and specializes in healing them. His medical jutsu are truly his most powerful ability. There is no medical jutsu that involves healing he can not learn. Along with his amazing medical powers he is a student and master of the ancient monk teachings. His most powerful technique, Enlightened Approach: Divine Ten-Thousand Arm Nirvana. When ever accepts a battle call he will not move a single inch to use his abilities. Note: Can not be summoned or leave the monkey realm. Note; used for only IC growth, he is designed to be a god basically.

Jutsu

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Name: Sage Art: Enlightened Approach: Divine Ten-Thousand Arm NirvanaRank: SType: DefensiveElement: N/aRange: 50 meters to all sides of the user. Description: The user does not move a single hair on their body. They meditate as they reach another plane of existence. This can be reached by a master in a millisecond, simply by not moving. When they reach this moment a massive human figure of the first budda appears behind the user, the figures hand rising the user up to waist level. It stands three times as tall as a large summon and twice as wide. From its body appears ten thousand massive hands from all sides. The user shuts down all their senses as the massive figure surrounds their entire body in a heavenly aurora of light. The user can speak out of this mouth to boom their voice. They gain a new sense as well one that allows them to not see with their senses but with their mind. They can see into the soul of a person and judge their intentions. If they attack the statue will only defend. It cannot be used for offensive purposes in any way. It can attack and defend by using the arms that are able to easily each pulverize a man. It can send a biju flying and easily defend against a biju bomb. This technique is absolute in its defense and will not harm anyone who will not harm the user. †

Name: Monkey Art: heal palmRank: SType: medicalElement: N/aRange: touchDescription: A medical user that allows the user to flow their chakra into a target. The chakra will travel through their cells, healing any damage, illness or infliction. The technique also is able to bind flesh together to make a connection, including even the complex system of nerves. It can even be used for transplants of body parts. It is an ultimate healing art that Sun Wukong has perfected over 300 years of his life time. †This is done by the user reaching Enlighten ment with Sage Art: Enlightened Approach: Divine Ten-Thousand Arm Nirvana, while they have their hand on the users head. Both parties must remain still for an entire post.

Name: NirvanaRank: S Type: Genjutsu Element: N/aRange: Sight of the user or user's techniqueDescription: A genjutsu of godlike portion. When the user is perfectly still they can activate it, they will glow white, anyone who looks upon them will be cast into the genjutsu. This can be done in combination with Sage Art: Enlightened Approach: Divine Ten-Thousand Arm Nirvana, to cause it to glow as well. The genjutsu cause the user to think they are dead and as such they go their personal paradise. They will simply enjoy their time and for some people they have starved to death from never leaving the genjutsu. This genjutsu cause the user to lose physical feeling as it send chakra to block the brain stem, causing their body to go into a coma so long as the genjutsu is effecting them. Even after the user cancels the technique targets will remain under until someone is able to properly kai them out of it. This is possible because of how real the genjutsu really is and enlightens their mind to truly think its is dead and leaves them on an endless dream of their paradise.

Test Two:

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[b][b]Name:Kyofu(Translates roughly to "Fear")Appearance:The scythe is a 12ft weapon giving the scythe a larger range and can be adjusted by a twist to be shorter(down to 3ft). The scythe is attached to a long metal cable, wound around two spools on his left hip. The Scythe has long attack blade at the end and allows Qilin to further increase the scythe's range by swinging it through the air the blades can retract so the weapon can double as a staff.Rank:BRange:3ft min/ 12ft maximumSpecial Abilities:Despite it's length and appearance it is quite light and doesn't hamper movement. The scythes primary function is that whatever it strikes has an explosive seal appears on it besides it's natural damage. That seal can detonate whenever the user so chooses within the topic as long as the scythe is in his possession. The seal explodes in a 10ft square radius. Origin:It was Amatsu Qilins uncles weapon and also said to have belonged to his grandfather.

Name: Great evil - 偉大な悪 (Idai na aku)(Katana)Appearance:A grotesque looking blade with a Oni head on the hilt forged of a very strong and durable alloy. It is the width and size of a short sword and is of a hybrid katana look yet a bit lighter it is sharpened to perfection and very well taken care of. The hilt is laced in a red cloth and a black cross guard that give it an extremely menacing look.Rank:BRange: 5ftSpecial Abilities:Has the ability to form a Ominous black mist that continuously feed the flames for 3 posts that stretch out for 30 yards. Fire used by the wielder within this area cannot be extinguished for the 3 allotted posts within that area. After the ability is used it has a 6 post cool down before it can be used again. The blade gives off a mixture of Carbon and oxygen that is then placed constantly in focus on a readied flame that keeps it in ignition. The flame must be within the mist to benefit from its effects.Origin: Strange metal shards were picked up during a the destruction of one of the villages he had passed through. It was scraps from a smith and his young daughter. He forged the blade to remind him of the evil of humanity and the atrocities that they are capable of and that he always had something to strive for.

Name: Qilins ArmorAppearance: Scale armor is usually made of a leather backing with scales of a rigid material either sewn or riveted onto it. This rigid material can be boiled leather reinforced with horn. Scale armor is usually made in overlapping rows with the scales attached at the top of the row and hanging down. Qilins version resembles that of Red dragon scales and covers his body from the neck down.Rank: BRange: N/ASpecial Abilities: Full protection against all simple weapons and C-Rank Jutsu. Offers partial protection (50% of damage and effects) from B-rank jutsu/Weapons. It is breathable allowing his own flames to escape and light weight not to impede speed or movement. The sleeves are retractable being able to slide up and down at will.Origin:Armor designed by Akusai scientists for Qilin.

Name: Flying Seal TagsAppearance: A thin sheet of white blank paper about the size of a playing card.Rank: DRange: 30ftSpecial Abilities: When E-Rank chakra is applied to it, it becomes sturdy enough to be thrown like a projectile. Once thrown from the users hand the paper sticks to whatever it it touches like super glue. Seals are pre-placed on the paper.Origin:A small project made by Akusai scientists.

Name: Akusai Cloak and MaskAppearance:A thick black cloak made of a chakra sensitive material. It perfectly blends in with the darkness and ideal for night espionage. The mask is made of reinforced bone of an unknown creature. It's decorated with strange midnight blue markings.Rank: BRange:N/ASpecial Abilities: The cloak by itself has no abilities but when infused with a D-Rank amount of chakra it emits a barrier around the wearer that can block C-Rank and below attacks(Lasts 1 post per use/weaponry only). The mask has several seals placed on the inside of it if a D-Rank amount of chakra used the seals are branded on the user and their lungs are fed oxygen in one while the other stores carbon dioxide and they can go a day without breathing.Origin: Developed by the Imperial Scientists

Name: Incendiary BombsAppearance:They appear like red balls with a gruff exterior. The balls in their normal state will not detonate and are very durable.Rank: BRange:20 yardsSpecial Abilities: Golf ball sized red bombs that on impact releases a cloud of burning incendiary gas. This hot gas not only does C-ranked damages but also destroys all materials and weapons C-Ranked and below within the area of effect. As a safety mechanism the user must emit E-rank worth chakra into the hand where the bomb is peeling back its exterior shell that keeps it from exploding on impact. Cloud expands 20 ft.

Name: Flash Tag/NoteAppearance:Identical to explosive tags in every way except they are yellow. The Kanji on the tags represent light and they work in the same manor.Rank: BRange:10 feetSpecial Abilities: These notes work in a very similar fashion as explosive tags except they explode with a burst of light that blinds the opponent for 2 posts.

Name:Tracking BugAppearance:A small piece of plastic with prongs on it it resembles a cockroach.Rank: BRange:3 milesSpecial Abilities: These small bugs come in two's. When E ranked chakra is placed in one bug it becomes animated and is placed on the person intended to be tracked. The bug can move about on the persons body and hide within there clothing. The second bug is placed behind the users head where it latches on. There the user is able to track the second bug within range.

Name: Storage BombsAppearance:A round object the size of a baseball colored orange. It has a button on the side of it that is a bright red for easy location.Rank: BRange:20 yards/Can suck up to 25 yardsSpecial Abilities: The user must press the button and toss the bomb within a cloud of mist,fog,smog, or smoke of B rank or lower. The vacuums within the bombs will then suck in the cloud and store it within the bomb. The bomb can later be used in the same fashion except now releasing the contents.

Name: Fire opal Stud EarringsAppearance:2 sets of 3 fiery red opals that fit into are placed into each ear and contains a Kanji stating "Copy".Rank: BRange:N/ASpecial Abilities: If under the effects of a jutsu/Item or where he cannot make sound decisions on his own the earrings can for one post cast one jutsu for him out of his repertoire. The spirit within the fuinjutsu in the earrings can control his body for him and make any necessary hand signs needed. Each time the earrings are used a stud turns black and is unusable for the rest of the topic. However only one may be used per post.Origin: Developed by Ancient Amatsu Fuin

Name: Imperial CloakAppearance:A altering cloak made of chakra conductive silk that can take on many appearances. On the back in crimson and black is the Kanji Heaven and Hell.Rank: BRange: 20 YardsSpecial Abilities: The cloak has the ability to create a field around the user that filters sounds and smells, the field is constant and always up(yet chakra is not subtracted until it is effected by a Item/Jutsu). Sounds and smells that are intolerable or would do harm to the user(and B rank and below) are made tolerable and ineffective by nullifying the decibel levels of sounds that would damage the user and altering the chemical properties of smells that would hamper the user. This automatically drains c-rank chakra.Origin:Created by the Akusai scientists

Name: Chakram(1)Appearance:sometimes called a war quoit, is a throwing weapon from India. Its shape is of a flat metal hoop with a sharp outer edge about 7 inches. Unlike Chinese wind and fire wheels, which are larger and used as melee weapons only, the chakram was designed to be thrown but could also be used in-close. Because of its aerodynamic shape it is not easily deflected by wind. The word chakram comes from the Sanskrit term chakra, meaning circle or wheel.Rank:BRange:75 yardsSpecial Abilities:This chakram can gain the chakra signature of a single person in the topic. When thrown in the general direction of the said target the chakram will follow them until it finds it's target. The chakram will continue to follow the target for 3 posts or until the target is out of range. Then the chakram will return back to it's user. Weapon must be within atleast 5ft of the opponent alone to lock on to their chakra signature.Descriptions:Chakram are traditionally made from steel which is beaten into a circular shape against an anvil with an indentation for the curvature. Two ends are connected with a piece of brass and then heated, forming a complete circle before the brass is removed. Some chakram, even those used in combat, were ornately engraved, or inlaid with brass, silver or gold.Origin:A parting gift from the Tengarian forge masters.

Name: Chakram (2)Appearance:Sometimes called a war quoit, is a throwing weapon from India. Its shape is of a flat metal hoop with a sharp outer edge about 7 inches. Unlike Chinese wind and fire wheels, which are larger and used as melee weapons only, the chakram was designed to be thrown but could also be used in-close. Because of its aerodynamic shape it is not easily deflected by wind. The word chakram comes from the Sanskrit term chakra, meaning circle or wheel.Rank:BRange:75 YardsSpecial Abilities:This chakram has the ability to pass through one shadow to another it has contact with. The chakram can hide in the shadow of an item it's size or larger. While within the shadows it does nothing (a normal shadow). However when exiting the shadow the chakram becomes materialized to it's natural state at the continued velocity it was thrown. D rank chakra cost to jump from shadow to shadow from the user.Descriptions:Chakram are traditionally made from steel which is beaten into a circular shape against an anvil with an indentation for the curvature. Two ends are connected with a piece of brass and then heated, forming a complete circle before the brass is removed. Some chakram, even those used in combat, were ornately engraved, or inlaid with brass, silver or gold. It is the second piece to the twin chakram set (chakram 1) and hides in it's shadow.Origin:A parting gift from the Tengarian forge masters.

Name: Scroll of the ForbiddenAppearance:A scroll that is 12 inches long and 5 inches wide. Unlike a normal scroll made of paper this scroll is made of human bone and skin. Veins run through the skin and the blood flow is apparent.Rank:BRange:50 yardsSpecial Abilities:The scroll can generically seal weapons and items. Whatever is generically sealed within the scroll and summoned out can be manipulated by the person unsealing them for 3 posts.Descriptions:The scroll has the appearance of human skin and blood runs through the veins and arteries throughout. The skin appears as if it were freshly cut. The art of of creating such scrolls are often known as flesh crafting. A craft few know.Origin:Passed down through the flesh crafting arts.

Name: Uwan Kunai/ShurikanAppearance: Kunai and shurikan that have Dark purple seals placed upon them. They are marked with a red seal and are made of a non magnetic alloy.Rank: BRange:30 yardsSpecial Abilities: When thrown these projectiles appear and act like their counterparts. However they interact with the seal called Uwan that Qilin has as well. When this is used and Uwan the seal is activated, it send a highspeed technique into overdrive and acts as a guide of sorts. When using the jutsu that corresponds with this weapon the user's range of whatever high speed technique he is using is extended to where the kunai is thrown however he has to end up in that exact location so he cannot exceed nor shorten the range. Also he cannot derive from the most direct path of the weapon more than 5ft. Which makes it both predictable and dangerous if not used wisely.

Name: Oil TagsAppearance: A black tag with several seals written in red Kanji on both sides. They look like small notes of paper until thrown where they become apparently more dense.Rank: BRange:30 yards/ Effect area 5 yards per postSpecial Abilities: When thrown it becomes very hard and dense and sticks to solid objects. Upon impact the tag will begin to release a stream of black liquid that covers 5 yards per post. Though the name is called oil tags the liquid is not actually oil. It is a black flammable adhesive. The adhesive requires abnormal strength(above average for your rank)or a superior weapon to be freed. Furthermore it improves fire jutsu that come in contact with it by 50%. Origin: Developed by Akusai Scientists

Name: Chakra Soaking Conductive Kunai/ShurikanAppearance: Kunai and shurikan that have double spiked heads. They are marked with a red seal and are made of a non magnetic alloy.Rank: BRange:70 yards(manipulation range falls under the chakra soaking jutsu)Special Abilities: When thrown these projectiles appear and act like their counterparts. However when striking the double heads open making them very hard to pull out of whatever they hit without destroying the entire thing. Thus when the kunai or shurikan strikes an object the seals act as an antenna for the chakra soaking technique. This allows Nameless to not only control what he strikes with chakra soaking but also what the kunai/Shurikan have struck. (soaking from projectiles lasts 2 posts due to dilution of chakra)

Name: Sealing Reduction Tape/wrapsAppearance: It appears like normal wrapping tape with small astral symbols placed upon it in black. Rank: BRange: N/ASpecial Abilities: The tape is capable of partially sealing items that it covers up to 75%. This reduces size/mass and weight up to 75%. The tape does not effect human beings and has to completely wrap around an object once for the effect to take place. Only those with a great knowledge of Fuin(B rank or higher) can control the amount sealed. All others must have the generic 75% sealing.Origin: Developed by Akusai scientists and Qilin Fuin

Name:The flying Guillotine 血滴子 AKA "Blood-Dripper"Appearance:This weapon supposedly hails from the time of the Yongzheng Emperor during the Qing Dynasty. There are stories and crude drawings detailing their appearance but no clear instructions on their use or production are known to exist. The consensus is that they resembled a 11 inch hat with a bladed rim with an attached long chain.Rank: BRange:15 YardsSpecial Abilities:Very sharp exterior and interior blades. With a pull of the chain the interior and exterior blades rotate giving a sawing motion. The interior blades run in opposing directions inside as the inside portion of the hat is touched severing whatever is inside instantly(that is B-rank or below). For concealment it can be folded much like a small umbrella.Descriptions:One way of using it is that, upon enveloping one's head, the blades cleanly decapitate the victim with a pull of the chain. This gives the weapon its English name "The Flying Guillotine". However, there is also evidence that the weapon may have been used by being soaked with intense poison that is so powerful it could kill another person "at the sight of a drip of blood" from the exterior blades, giving it its Chinese name Blood Dripper. The poison on this particular one seeps into the pores if the weapon makes contact causing paralysis to that portion of the body(whole limbs and sectionsper post) and spreads to another each post after.Origin:Created by weapon smith using ancient weapon schematics[/b][/b]

Test Three:

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Name: Skilled Mist TechniqueRank: C-SType: NinjutsuElement: FuttonRange: 30ftClan: N/ADescription: The user creates a cloud of mist which she releases from her mouth. This mist has extremely corrosive properties, capable of melting even the bones of the Susanoo. The technique has an inherent disadvantage in that its effects are indiscriminate, limiting its usage to areas that do not contain allies. In the event that the mist escapes the containment area, the user can adjust the pH of the mist to safer levels.Though the mist is corrosive to all around it, the user seems to be immune to it. The technique is corossive and once it connects it does the initial damage of the amount of chakra placed into it. Every post thereafter it does one rank lower in damage to the integrity of whatever it touched. (I.E. At A rank the mist connects with a S-rank shield it subtracts A-rank upon the first making contact making the shield a A+A rank shield now. It then takes B rank from the hield every post thereafter.) The corrosive properties work on all solid objects even those made of chakra. No hand signs required. Mist lasts 2 posts per rank.

Name: Futton Perfection Rank: C-SType: NinjutsuElement: FuttonRange: range of the jutsu used +7ft per rankClan:N/ADescription: The user can combine this with another jutsu to give it an aura of corrosive mist that can melt through almost anything. The user must of course pay the price of the jutsu in addition to the Futton Perfection jutsu. Though the mist is corrosive to all around it, the user seems to be immune to it. The technique is corossive and once it connects it does the initial damage of the amount of chakra placed into it. Every post thereafter it does one rank lower in damage to the integrity of whatever it touched. (I.E. At A rank the mist connects with a S-rank shield it subtracts A-rank upon the first making contact making the shield a A+A rank shield now. It then takes B rank from the hield every post thereafter.) The corrosive properties work on all solid objects even those made of chakra. The user is immune to it's effects. Mist lasts as long as the jutsu is present.

Name: Hidden Mist of DestructionRank: BType: NinjutsuElement: FuttonRange: 30 yardsClan:N/ADescription: A hybrid of the displacement technique that is a speciality of the ninja from kirigakure. Instead of merely raising water from a preexisting source the user adjusts the PH balance of the water vapor in the air to create a thick corossive mist that covers a moderate area. This mist is concentrated and does B-rank damage continuously to whatever it touches. (I.E. At B rank the mist connects with a S-rank shield it subtracts B-rank upon the first making contact making the shield a A+A+BB rank shield now. It then takes B rank from the shield every post thereafter.) The corrosive properties work on all solid objects even those made of chakra. The user is immune to it's effects. Mist lasts 5 user posts.

Name: Futton CloneRank: BType: NinjutsuElement: FuttonRange: clone creation 10ft/Mist range 20ftClan:N/ADescription: The user creates a clone much in the manner of the shadow clone jutsu. Though this clone may only use basic and academy attacks. One this clone is dispersed it releases a corossive mist. This mist is concentrated and does B-rank damage continuously to whatever it touches. (I.E. At B rank the mist connects with a S-rank shield it subtracts B-rank upon the first making contact making the shield a A+A+BB rank shield now. It then takes B rank from the shield every post thereafter.) The corrosive properties work on all solid objects even those made of chakra. The user is immune to it's effects. Mist lasts 3 user posts.

Name: PH ShiftRank: C-SType: NinjutsuElement: FuttonRange: 30ftClan: N/ADescription: The user of this technique can shift the PH balance in water be it jutsu or natural. This is done via contact or by the user blowing a stream of mist into the said body of water. When this is done the water becomes corrosive taking on the properties of Futton. Though the mist is corrosive to all around it, the user seems to be immune to it. The technique is corossive and once it connects it does the initial damage of the amount of chakra placed into it. Every post thereafter it does one rank lower in damage to the integrity of whatever it touched. (I.E. At A rank the mist connects with a S-rank shield it subtracts A-rank upon the first making contact making the shield a A+A rank shield now. It then takes B rank from the hield every post thereafter.) The corrosive properties work on all solid objects even those made of chakra. The user is immune to it's effects.

Name: Rasengan BulletRank: A+?Type: NinjutsuElement: N/ARange: 30 yardsClan: N/ADescription: The user forms a gun with his hand placing his index and middle finger together. By force of will chakra will swiftly travel through the users arm and out the fingertips forming a rasengan that will launch itself at the opponent like a round from the gun. The rasengan acts as it's normal counterpart with the exception that it is now a high speed projectile. The user must pay A rank for the rasengan plus a given rank of chakra for the firing of the rasengan. The higher the user pays in the secondary cost the faster the bullet travels. This not only gives the rasengan added power but the defending opponent generally needs a high speed technique of at least the secondary cost to completely clear it. No hand signs required.

Name: Rasengan ExpansionRank: C-SType: NinjutsuElement: N/ARange: 25ft range/expands 15ft per rankClan:N/ADescription: The user can expand the size and add power to a rasengan making it harder to dodge and giving it more punch. When the user's rasengan is thin range at any time he can use this jutsu by performing the serpent hand seal. When this is done the rasengan will add the rank used to it's initial attack power and expand 15ft per rank. This technique can also be used on the bijuu ball technique given it is the same concept.

Name: Rasengan Mastery Level 1Rank: CType: NinjutsuElement: N/ARange: body part used+range of rasenganClan:N/ADescription: The user has such master over the Rasengan that they can virtually create it anywhere on their body. This may be used with any version of the rasengan on any part of the body. The rasengan is created almost instantly with very concentration the user being able to do so without the use of hand signs.

Name: Qilin's Double Body Clone SealRank: BType: FuuinjutsuElement: N/ARange: contactClan:N/A(Amatsu must teach)Description: The user has the ability to seal a clone within themselves or themselves within a clone. When sealing a clone within themselves the clone can separate completely or partially from the original at any given time. Thus the user can use the clones arms, legs, and other appendages as extras or instead of his own when they are disabled. When the clone is sealed within the original they have a empathetic and telepathic link and control may be shifted at any time. When the user is sealed within a clone the seal activates upon the clones destruction or by force of will. The unsealing is without hesitation providing great grounds for a secondary attack. Another variation of this technique is sealing a clone within a clone providing the same effects as given above. This can be done up to 3 times thus one can be sealed in a clone that is sealed in a clone confusing the enemy.

Test Four:

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Name: Danketsu: Sonic BoomRank: C-BType: TaijutsuElement: N/A/FuutonRange: 15 metersCombo Type:Can Chain From:Description: Using the advanced chakra control of the Sumashuu, the user will slice his hands through the air, one over top of the other while focusing chakra at the crossing point. The chakra will be forced forward when the hands push through it and cause it to be jettisoned at a target. The force itself will provide moderate concussive damage, enough to knock a person over and relieve them of their breath while it is capable of causing small cuts if not a direct hit. The B-rank version can be done with one hand and allows the Sonic Boom to cut deeper, potentially causing near-fatal wounds. If the practitioner does not have chakra control equivalent to a Sumashuu, Fuuton can be used to supplement.

Name: Danketsu: Angry ScarRank: S Type: TaijutsuElement: N/ARange: 5 Meter radius around userCombo Type:Can Chain From:Description: The Angry scar is one of the more pure projections of power in the world and requires an immensely high level of chakra to perform. First starting with basic taijutsu breathing techniques, the user will augment their breathing in such a way that causes their body to vibrate, the process causing their chakra to permeate around them in an imposing aura. The technique itself causes the user to project their fierce level of chakra strength out in to an area around themselves, generating a huge suppressive force. Any living things within the field will feel the immense pressure of the userís chakra. C-rank shinobi and all other normal creatures will be repressed and barely able to move in the userís presence, feeling as if the weight of the word was on their shoulders and any life forms or organic material that is smaller than a mouse will simply be obliterated by the pressure of the userís presence. Any shinobi above the rank of C will feel the pressure of the userís presence and their speed reduced by half. This technique lasts for five posts before needing to be reapplied.

Description: This technique requires four stocks of Super Meter in order to execute as an additional cost. This is a jutsu that implements a combination of attacks and finishing it off with a throw. First, the user will deliver a powerful blow to the targetís gut that forces all of the chakra accumulated in to that gut, stunning them and preventing them from acting for the remainder of the technique. The remainder of the attacks all come within a fraction of a second of each other, two blows to the solar plexus before a sharp kick to the rib cage followed by a rising palm to the victimís jaw followed by another strong round house kick to the victimís head. While reeling, the user will grab the victim by their wrist before throwing their stunned form in the air before jumping up at their prone and stunned body and grabbing their arm and shoulder before driving them back in to the ground, driving the userís shoulder in to their throat.

Description: This technique requires four stocks of Super Meter in order to execute as an additional cost. The user will leap forward or fly forward and strike the opponent on the top of the head with an overhead axe kick, the initial hit jarring the opponent and stunning them for the remainder of the sequence. The user will then strike the victim with two weaker overhead axe kick before driving a hard elbow in to the victimís gut which will push them in to the air. From there, the user will unleash a flurry of elbow strikes in to the victimís body, pushing them further in to the air before violently kneeing them in the jaw, most likely shattering said jaw and knocking the victim out.

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Name: [Super Art] Danketsu: Haru RanmanRank: BType: TaijutsuElement: N/A Range: 10 meter dash for the spinning kicksCombo Type:GroundCan Chain From:Ground or AirDescription: This technique requires four stocks of Super Meter in order to execute as an additional cost. The user will shoot forward low to the ground before delivering two sweeping strikes and forcing the accumulated chakra in to the victimís body and stunning them in the process. After the strikes, the user will deliver a frightening upward kick that will jettison the victim in to the air, in a similar mechanic to the Kage Buyou, the user will quickly move above the user and slam them back in to the ground before falling on them with their legs stretched and aiming to snap their spine.

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Name: [Super Art] Danketsu: Burning DanceRank: AType: TaijutsuElement: Katon and RaitonRange: 10 metersCombo Type: AerialCan Chain From:Launcher or AerialDescription: This technique requires four stocks of Super Meter in order to execute as an additional cost. While airborne, the user will generate Katon at their feet and use it to rocket them toward a target at speeds of 60 miles per hour. The foot will strike the victimís body and grind them in to the ground, stunning them in the process and grinding their bodies along the ground rather violently. The grinding will last for fifteen meters unless a wall is struck, the user will grind the victim against the wall and launch them airborne. In a similar function the Kage Buyou, the user will drive themselves upward and instantly in to a crossed arm strike to the victims jaw, if successful, the user will force Raiton chakra in to the victim and effectively fry their brain, killing them instantly.

BlaineVeteran

Subject: Re: The Tests Sun Jun 16, 2013 1:57 am

I should also note that all answers should be pm'd to me so people don't share them. I will then forward them to Steph, Iris, and Yuudai.

BlaineVeteran

Subject: Re: The Tests Tue Jun 18, 2013 3:39 am

Results

While not entirely complete for some of you, you each have shown me enough for me to make my assessment. So here we go I will list what I think you did well, and what I think you lacked for the first test, for the rest since they are all so long I will give you a number grade 1-10. 5 of course being average, 1 meaning you didn't catch anything at all, and 10 meaning you caught things even I did not.

If anyone wishes to see another's work simply tell me and I will pm it to you.

I still expect the first two to complete the rest...when you do I will add in my opinions of our two mystery test takers.

Serila

Test One

+ Great point about the King not bowing, it is quite ridiculous to think that any leader as a human would bow to a summon.†- NEVER allow full immunity. Even if he is only in a single realm he has loopholes littered through this app.+ Good catch on his Gen

Overall though you're too lenient on this application.

Drew

Test One

+Good catch on the immunity-Except he doesn't have medical so why would he be able to heal anyone?-More explanations as to why the jutsu should not be allowed+You caught those jutsu

Alex

Test One+Good job closing his loopholes by establishing he could only use this for personal growth.

Test Two7

Test Three5

Test Four2

Koto

Test One+Humor, make em laugh, make em laugh and really this was a laughable application.+Good job catching that he was a moderator who was abusing the rules.+Good catch on Immunity-Missed out that he did not have a medical spec.+Caught his loophole+Caught his sage mode, AND made a joke about him ripping something off+ This alone made my day 'Because I never would of thought you spoke from your mouth, to say words.'+Caught his other loophole+Oh hey look at that a genjutsu that catches you even after you get out of it. +Called out his abysmal lack of details on the last one

1

+Flat out denial

Keibetsu

Yeah the reply for this is so thorough I would be here all day reviewing it.

The last three were so detailed that I believe they would make good creation moderators as they made things have specifications and made the jutsus fair more often than straight denial.

I would also suggest Alex as a creation moderator as I think it is also something that he can do well.

The others did not finish their tests so I can't suggest anything there.

And overall I'm very glad you all caught the amount of bs in the first test, it was one of the worst applications I had ever seen and a very good test to see how you guys would handle it.

Last edited by Blaine on Thu Jun 20, 2013 4:24 pm; edited 2 times in total

BlaineVeteran

Subject: Re: The Tests Tue Jun 18, 2013 7:13 pm

For your next test I want you all to PAC this thread and send the results to me. I want you to comment on things you liked, things you disliked. Things that made no sense, spelling grammar errors and other things.