Comments about this poem (A premature death by Kumud Ranjan )

first word that comes to mind is wow. what a great poem that covers the life of a man from innocence to childhood to young adult to young man to ->
A premature, unwanted striven death
Is waiting for him at the age of thirty merely
With a smile in disguise he takes his last breath

what a deep and insightful poem full of rights of passage to cruel truths. captivating poem my friend. an excellent work well worded and obviously well thought out. this poem deserves nothing less than 10's all the way!
Jen
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