You know the notes very well..my only advice is this..work on adding some vibrato..its a huge part to Slash's playing..in the beginning bends really put a nice vibrato on there..and work out the smoothness of the whole thing..and a few of the bends could use some work.

i was trying but i had to play it so many times to get it recorded somewhat cleanly, my fingers were a little sore.. i never realized there were so many damn bends in that, when i first learned it i played differently but it sounds a lot better with bends..

In the solo, use pull offs and hammer ons rather than picking every note. Vibrato more. You're playing is fine, just use these tips and it'll sound a lot more fluent.Tone is too trebly if you're trying to sound like Slash.

I wouldnt go so far as to say it sucked, I mean you got the notes right. However, Chex hits the mark with the fact that it lacks any emotion, which makes it kind of dull. Im sure you know the solo, now make it your own.