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Re: Fallen Angel

I would say that maybe the haphazard apocalyptic feeling would've been better transmitted if the red clouds were random...the lines of the clouds sort of converge towards the character, so if those line were random(like the white clouds), then maybe...

Re: Fallen Angel

so in other words the placement of the clouds should have been more chaotic and not so neat? I have the stupid habit of making them neater and neater as I reach the end of the page
Though I think the reason is because when I add in the details I start from the lower part and as I gradually advance I get lazier and lazier XD and always end up rushing to the end xDDD
but yea I was too tired to understand back when I read the english part xD plus the V thing made sense xD

Re: Fallen Angel

Originally Posted by sakura-aneki

so in other words the placement of the clouds should have been more chaotic and not so neat? I have the stupid habit of making them neater and neater as I reach the end of the page
Though I think the reason is because when I add in the details I start from the lower part and as I gradually advance I get lazier and lazier XD and always end up rushing to the end xDDD
but yea I was too tired to understand back when I read the english part xD plus the V thing made sense xD

I see...so only the V thing made sense...and here I was trying to sound complicated and smart...

I dunno...I might be reading into it too much, but the V thing option makes sense as well...it's just a matter of taste I suppose

Re: Fallen Angel

I wish I could have such art talent! I just came on here to post some stuff (Crappy stuff might I add.(I am not an amazing artist.)) I love to look at other people's talent too. I just wanted to say it looks beautiful and I hope that you can sometime draw some manga for my stories. I am a better writer than artist unfortunetly. I would love to do my own art but alas I lack the skill. Maybe we can chat sometime about making some manga.