If you were my love I might say
I would stop the time, and make you stay.

But I think of you and I cry
For I know you never will be mine.

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Kevin Walker

More than 1 year ago

90% of what i read on this site are love poems
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this is the box your mind is trapped in [_]

Samantha Small

More than 1 year ago

Love is hard to describe. But you made it simple.

miguel aldaco

More than 1 year ago

I can relate to the sentiment, but I might have a better time doing so if there were less abstract emotional descriptors and more time paid to how this person makes you feel this way... Specific things... like maybe describe a day and the things that happened that got you to this place. none-the-less, thanks for sharing!

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