I have stories with LEXX of course but also Blade 2, Boondock Saints, Jerry Springer and Walking Dead. Please feel free to read and review anything that catches your fancy.

Jerry. Springer. Fan-fiction. You have my undivided attention for as long my infinitely malleable sense of good taste will allow it.

Blade 2 and Boondock Saints, you say? Please tell me that in both cases you chose to ignore the follow-up entries (which fall smack dab in the "How did you manage to screw THAT up?!" category)I think You will definitely like this http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8078016/1/Saints_and_Springer The Boondock Saints on the Jerry Springer show.

a. U solved a problem with his guilt brilliantly. Ur way is simple and elegant. The only moment is about Vlad. If I’m not mistaken Kai @died@ the last. So it means that she had already accommodated all her other victims and was waiting for him to finish her mission.

b. The idea of different casts is good, but it doesn’t go that well with: You are a warrior. A warrior faces both his triumphs and his shame with equal courage, anything less is an insult to those who have gone before…if there were so many stumbling blocks before entering the war, that means that first Brunnis were not much better than their children. And I was always under the impression that the first Brunnen civilization was a harmonically developed society. Where brevity went together with creativity. The society that managed to create an ideal balance between material and spiritual parts of life. And this very balance was forgotten when their children became immortal. But again, U offer me an elegant version of the events and my remark is more like a dialogue with the author. Where a reader shares his own views without having any intention to change the text itself. It’s just one of those themes that I’d like to discuss.

c. I wanted to continue but than…
U r talented or better to say –gifted. When I finished reading I decided to save Ur story. Something that I do extremely rarely.

From time to time I read some fan-stories in different languages. Some of them I like, some don’t. but Ur story is special. It’s special in many ways.
U organized the plot in the Danta’s way. We follow the character from one cycle into the other. Each time getting something new, something that is important for the whole picture. These pieces are well thought out and logically stated.
Ur language is good. U avoid wordy constructions and overused punctuation. Everything is precise and accurate.
U projected many real tendencies through this invented world.

It’s obvious that U r accustomed to the general world history and religions. And U introduces Ur knowledge in Ur own prospective.
I found so many thoughts that I have myself, it’s fascinating, coz usually people don’t spend that much time on thoughts.

Of course, there is a place to develop Ur talent and I wish U did it. I always wanted to read a book about the Lexx. But not just the story from different seasons. I mean a real book\books.

Thank U. I’m really impressed.

____________________There is no way to pretend.
Each person has his own path to his destiny.
All people-solo.
V. Rosanov

thank U, Abby1964, I'll read them. It'll be interesting to read Ur complete work and than re-watch the Lexx. I'm sure this will give me a unique prospective on something that I know almost by heart.
Good luck with Ur work.

P.S. I'm not sure that I want to regester there. So, hope it'll be ok if I post my thoughts here?

____________________There is no way to pretend.
Each person has his own path to his destiny.
All people-solo.
V. Rosanov

Ok (yes, I read fast)
a. A. U r gifted and U really spent lots of time on it. I’m sure that U have many drafts and background notes.
b. B. I like Ur conception.
c. C. It seems that we both share a kind of maternal instinct to Kai (am I right?)
d. D. The episode when U described his family was simply brilliant.
e. E. It’s obvious that U let Ur character progress and U are mastering Ur skills and literature method (still, there is some work to do, but I say it only because I feel that U understand my motivation- to buy a collection of Ur books one day)
f. F.There are many dialogues, which adds motion, but description of the character’s appearance and the places around are also necessary.When I was reading I was trying to depict everything in my imagination, but the lack of some “interior” didn’t let me imagine everything clearly.
g. G. It reminds me “Harry Porter” and I do like H.P. probably it won’t be a bad idea to read these books to grasp the gist of some methods .
Well, I don’t know the ABC (G is the last letter I can recollect from the memory)
8. There is one thing from Ur previous work:
Second cycle- when a cleric speaks to Kai _ I find it better to stop on this^ The choice is yours, be her weapon or turn your back on her. She bowed again and walked away. I simply shook my head and motioned my family back over.
In this case we (readers) have more space for ourselves. I do believe that a real master never pronounces everything leaving some buts and ifs. It’s like a hook for something that will follow next. And when U wrote how his free will may influence his destiny, we already know what he will choose.

9. U might express this dilemma during describing the moment when he faced the choice. The idea that such a brave man still has some background thoughts of staying alive will make his personality more real and stronger. This detail will make him closer to the reader, thus more understandable.
10. I will re-read it on a week to get pleasure again. And I’m waiting the next chapters.

Hope I didn’t offend U by any means. Remember that my English is far away from ideal and all my remarks might be a simple result of my poor language skills.

Thank U for Ur efforts!!!

____________________There is no way to pretend.
Each person has his own path to his destiny.
All people-solo.
V. Rosanov

Abby1964, I believe that this place is better for me. I have a certain inferioty complex about my language ability and somehow I feel better here. I'm good at my native language and it's so different from English, that most my reviews are not even close to those possible ones in my mothertongue.

My first question, of course, is about Ur motivation to start this huge and time-consuming work.

The second one is about Ur feelings to the character? I've already mentioned about maternal instinct and it seems as if U treat him as if he is a fragile substance. U know that it will be destroyed and U r trying to do everything to let it be happy before the end.

And I also have a question of innocence. I don't mean physically but in his spiritual organisation. U have this moment in Ur work. Are planning to keep him "a child" through all the cycles?

____________________There is no way to pretend.
Each person has his own path to his destiny.
All people-solo.
V. Rosanov