I really liked this story, I think the only negative isn't really your fault since I was just confused when exactly this is set since obviously I discovered this quite far down the line (I gathered it was at some point during Season 2 given the context). What's interesting about this fic is since you've written this we've had episodes giving us insights into Sam and Dean's high school experience and there's a lot of similarities with what you've written. Bravo.

Holy cow. This. This is so brilliant. Wow, I just love how you got into their heads here and understood where both Sam and Dean were coming from and the day at the fair was so good in flashback and then both of them coming at it in hindsight and seeing different things and the idea that Dean really wasn't popular in high school and only was to Sam but he needed to be for Sam and Sam gets that now and fghjkijuygfghjk.

Whoa. Nicely done with the doc. And the ghosts. and Every kind of face off you can imagine. The dynamics were great between everyone and this played out exactly how it would have. So in character that I could HEAR Sam arguing for Drew and Dean grumbling about everything.

OH. Forgot to mention but in the last chapter when Dean was yelling at Drew? Totally got shivers. That was so well done and Dean's older brother persona had never shone so clearly.

oooooooh very nice. Really good confrontation here with Danny. You did a great job making that conversation really convincing as you went through his entire range of emotions as he began figuring things out and understanding what he wanted. Sam's always going to win a tug of war over Dean, though.

I don't normally write reviews when I like a story, even though I should, but I REALLY liked this story. It had all the mushy brotherly stuff I wish I could see and hear on the actual show. How I wish Sam and Dean could have these necessary dialogues. I super love it :)