Remember that Hubs are meant to be the equivalent of stand alone quality magazine articles.

Some issues:

1. Time sensitive. News style articles can't compete with major sites - go ever green (as relevant in ten years as it is today.)2. The title isn't SEO or click friendly. Your title is the most important way to identify to viewers and search engines what your article is about. Will anyone be typing those words into Google?3. Way too many photos. I was halfway down, wondering if it was just a photo hub.4. Neaten up the formatting, including removing the big white spaces.

Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub I am not Sorry Baby Wasp (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Gift Inspiration - Themed with Doggie, Cat, Horse or Owl by Alex Clark (must be signed in to view). What...

Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Are we living in a hologram of a lie?. What can I do to improve? Thanks! This was the same article that...

Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Expectations from a Wife (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Could life exist beyond our planet? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Best Editors for WordPress (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!