Yeah I'm solving the respacing problem by previewing it in a forum without html formatting (Gaia) and then copy/pasting it here again. n-n;; Ughugh. Sorry. D'8

LOL COFFEEThat's epic xDDD For some reason I'm imagining it as a weird little song with just one or two instruments and a man with a low gritty voice singing itidkAnd thanks! ovo I'm glad you like the imagery, it's the thing I focus on kinda xD;;

And this is what happens when you're running low on coffee and doze off woops

Quote :

Promenade

In the quiet place of slumberingwhere forgotten symbols layA world whose giant pendulumsfill the sky with their gentle sway

By a numbed will overcome,I walk forwards, promenade

I walk the peaceful hills of dreamI walk along rivers of dreamI walk between curtains of dream

There are gleaming birds behind green leavesWho swiftly take flight

I walk among figments of dreamI walk within gardens of dreamI walk with consciousness of dream

The first and second parts of that are really great, they have a nice beat to 'em that the rest of the poem doesn't? Especially "By a numbed will overcome\I walk forwards, promenade" That is my favorite part.

yess the coffee one is intended for that arrangement exactly C8

By formatting though I mean REALLY WEIRD SPACING, subscript/superscript and typography like that D% It's tough to translate some of my poems over without that, especially the Cybersadhu group.

Here's two that went with the piece I wrote about the nightmare in which the toothpuppies first appeared:

Quote :

Glory to be UnfinedA Riddle Waking in Your Mind

Ask the Question,Free the KeysStashed in ChachesHoarded in Waylines, Bylined by Roots Beneath the Earth

The Keys I Have SoughtJangle at my BeltA testament to doors not open (emotions never felt)

Quote :

There are things in the DarkThat Deign not to SleepCreatures Hunting and RunningScenting out our life-blood-heart-beatI cannot come to Hate itI only blame myself for to bait itAs its growls spell out:

I’m roaring, soaring forever to the song of destructionI’ll be the endTo this illusion

AND THEN POKEMON TIMELol this was for a little event I held where people had to write poems about the pokemon they get from randomizing their national dex number.

Quote :

Seel

Okay son what's this and why let it outNo, I don't want that, don't make me shoutLook kid just put it back in its ball NOWWhat do you mean you don't know howHey why are you letting it into the poolTell it to get out that's expensive you foolOh please tell me it's not using Horn AttackJust say return, just please get it backOh damn and now it's taking a dumpYou brat now it'll block up the pumpThat's it kid just go to your room you're groundedAs for you, Seel, you're getting poundedDo you have a problem with that huh what's with that frownOh god someone save me it's using Take Down