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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

Rolly so good to see you my friend

Rolly A Chabot 5 years agofrom Alberta Canada

Hi Deb... great poem, soft and quiet and takes the reader to days past.

Hugs and Blessings

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

DDE thank you dear one

Devika Primić 5 years agofrom Dubrovnik, Croatia

Most lovable and romantic

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

Wayne.. thank you..

Rasma.. thank you for sharing my friend

James.. yes this happens to women all the time.. and it hurts .. but we either forgive.. or stay in pain

thank you for being so loyal..

Debbie

Tijani Achamlal 5 years agofrom Morocco

This poem.... is so close to my heart.... I love it and I know exactly how you feel in this poem.... it made me cry a little..It really speaks my heart..My world.That is awesome and so beautiful.These verses honestly has teared me apart :

As the king left her at the door

Sir she pleaded let me in….

Strong expression.I can relate.. sigh . ..Really can t stop the flood gates of my tears ..my life stopped at that door ..The slam still ringing in my ears..May 7th is the day when my heart broke... dont worry I will be fine.

anyway,thanks so much for this beautiful story

Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years agofrom Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Magically wonderful Debbie. Great music. Passing this on.

Wayne Barrett 5 years agofrom Clearwater Florida

Beautiful poetry Dear Deb!

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

Christina good to see you my friend

Kasman nice to see you..

Dreamnseeker.. blessings my friend

Sue. wow It is wonderful to see you too

blessings to you all and thank you so much for visiting

Debbie

Sueswan 5 years ago

Hi Debbie,

Beautiful my friend. I love fairy tales.

Voted up, beautiful and sharing

dreamseeker2 5 years ago

I really liked the photo of the girl in pink with bling on her eyes, along with the pink roses. : ) Your poem was sad but beautiful. I especially liked these lines:

'To excitement that twists like never before

With tears in his eyes she left his heart

Vibrations of words to never form again

Romantic love and romance she would yearn

Through pen and paper the lines would form

As she saw him in the fading light'

Beautifully put! Voted up!!!!!!

Kas 5 years agofrom Bartlett, Tennessee

Beautiful imagery in your words and I love the pictures you displayed as well. This reminds me of Psalm 45, the imagery of the King looking for his bride. Voting this up, sharing this. Beautiful Great job.

Christina M. Castro 5 years agofrom Baltimore,MD USA

Again you have developed a beautiful portrait of love with words. Your talent inspires me and I am so glad you are my mentor in the poetic world!

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

Vellur thank you

Nithya Venkat 5 years agofrom Dubai

Beautiful poem, as I read this I was transported to a world of dreams and fairy tales. Voted up.

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

Thank you. Faith...good to see you

Deb

Faith Reaper 5 years agofrom southern USA

Wooo girlfriend, I love, love this one! What a beautiful tale of love and fantasy!

Excellent write! Voted up ++ and sharing

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

thank you Pickles,, you are so cute

deb

picklesandrufus 5 years agofrom Virginia Beach, Va

I felt as though I was possibly in a fairytale, but not sure. Really enjoyed your poem:)

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

Colin so good to see you. I am so sorry to hear about your illness. and we are all so glad you are back and writing.. you are always missed

May God Bless you

Debbie

epigramman 5 years ago

Well I 'haven't' lost the sweetheart of my dreams - you are still here my divine Miss D.

Love the title, it's to die for, and I've been away for about 2 weeks myself due to mental and physical stress but it's so grand to be back and in my favorite poetic lair of Deborah's always heartfelt writing.

Sending to you my warmest wishes on this Monday morning at lake erie time 11:17am from Colin and his cats

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

Hey Gina bina girlfriend where are you? my washer is waiting for you..lol

glad you like.. see you soon.. oh you want to go walking?

lol

deb

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

Hello shining pretty eyes.. hey girlfriend so good to see you you are so very special so glad you are feeling better

blessings to you

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

Billy thank you dear heart.. so good to see you.. I know how busy you are.. blessings to you

Deb

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

Leslie you are good at keeping up with me and tracking my moods.. these moods keep me awake.. lol

always good to see my best girlfriend

Deb

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

Ms Dora.. hello always so good to see you .. blessings to you

deb

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Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years agofrom Brownsville,TX

Frank nice to see you so glad you liked it

blessings

Gina 5 years agofrom West Tennessee

Very beautiful, heartfelt poem. I felt longing and love in this one, very good, something we can all relate to in our lives.

Shining Irish Eyes 5 years agofrom Upstate, New York

Debbie - Such writing style while telling a heart-tugging journey. Whims of touching beauty throughout the entire creation.

Bill Holland 5 years agofrom Olympia, WA

I have very little time this morning, Debbie, but I did want to read your poem and I was not disappointed. Magical whimsy? Optimism reigns supreme. Beauty abounds? All of these and more in this lovely work.

blessings,

bill

Karen Silverman 5 years ago

I love the optimism and lightness here, Deb! I don't know if it's true, but - i feel as if i can almost track your moods and thoughts through your poetry!

Feeling better i see?

lol

love you!

up/sharing/awesome!

Dora Weithers 5 years agofrom The Caribbean

Good job! Your poem left me with a vision too. Cheers to our imagination.

Frank Atanacio 5 years agofrom Shelton

The magic and the charm of this poem covinces us that fairy tales do exist.. it was fantastic and those utterly captivating photos just marked the spot toward perfection.. yeah Our ms Brooks..

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