Re: Critique The Drawing Above :D

DrG M.E. wrote:

Everyone wants feedback, right? But why is everyone so afraid to give it?

Here's a thread where you critique the drawing above yours.

RUUUUUUULES-Be nice when critiquing.-Actually critique it, don't say "no improvement needed".-Be honest -It has to be one of YOUR drawings!

Okay, sooo I'll begin?

I think the lights wrapped around the arms of the tree could use a little shine to them and perhaps add a snowy scenery for the background. But other than that the shading and the tree itself is very nice.

Re: Critique The Drawing Above :D

Hmm,, the arm is a little too small...?? Her body parts are a little out of proportion... Eh I don't like criticizing people I feel guilty and I'm not a very good artist ;_; I find the neck a little too big.It's a nice drawing though, I like the eyes...

How do I do this...? I'm new eh dunno how to post a drawing.Did it work? Sorry if it didn't ;_;

Re: Critique The Drawing Above :D

the eyes are too far apart... one eye is too big and too far up the face from the other one.... her body is smaller than her head ( you need to make the shoulders bigger) the hair n the shadding is nice but it should stand out more or make the outline not stand out soo much ^-^... nice drawing by the way

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hmm... the left arm gets bigger in the middle then in the beginning and the right leg is a bit... eh in a interesting angle, looks abit forced othervice i gotta say that that draw is brilliant! expecialy since it got one of my fave colour combinations! black, yellow and red

Re: Critique The Drawing Above :D

rennpyt_girl wrote:

the eyes are too far apart... one eye is too big and too far up the face from the other one.... her body is smaller than her head ( you need to make the shoulders bigger) the hair n the shadding is nice but it should stand out more or make the outline not stand out soo much ^-^... nice drawing by the way

Thank you~ but she's pulling her shoulders up and that's why they're smaller... plus she's in chibi so her heads supposed to be big ^^"

Anyway criticizing genericusername's draw... it's good, but you should work on the details a little bit more, especially the hair and the clothes You want it to look real don't you?

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Hum, I think the shading is nice but you should try to blend it more (it makes her old when you can see all the lines), her lips are too small (well if they were like this in real sorry ^^'), the glasses arent symmetric (I know it's hard but still xD) and again you should blend more the lighting, her right eyebrow is higher than the other one and the hair doesnt look natural (unless she used gel..), her eyes arent symmetric either. One advice would be to use the airbrush or to blend the colors to make it look more natural..Well that's all I found

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I think it's supposed to come across as very sketchy, some more detail on the pencil to make it look more realistic would be nice and maybe some smudge marks on the paper where stuff as been erased and so on.. 8D