Was worried this was a generic romance Poem. I'm not sure of your intentions, though, with that said. Personally, I'd like to perceive it as something about the loss of a family member or close friend. If that's the case, then that would be a very emotional piece.

If you did write something that's about a loving relationship, that's fine, it's just not my cup of tea. Solid writing to boot, and I like how it can be interpreted in various ways.