RED MOONS

This is a wee script i wrote for a short for the ABC's of death comp. Basically the short has to start and end on something red and be based on some-thing beginning with T. Oh and it has to have a death in it. As you can see i chose tampons. its pretty gruesome little piece and the first thing like this that I've written.

ED MOONS: SCENE 1

INT. Bathroom. Close up of a girls fingers covered in blood

as an ear piercing scream fills the air.

Medium shot of a young girl still screaming stood with her

nightie on blood patch at crotch level holding her hand up

in disgust.

Her Mother runs in then stops at the door frame and looks at

the little girl in front of her. She looks worried

initially. The Father approaches behind the mother also

worried. He grabs her shoulders as worried expressions turn

to pride. The stand with the father behind the mother in the

door frame as the mother puts her hand up to her shoulder

where its met by the fathers hand as the look at one another

and then at the little girl.

MUM

Our little girl has finally become

a woman.

SCENE 2

Close up on a box of tampons as the camera pulls out and we

see that the mother is carrying the box into the wee girls

room. She wakens the little girl by pulling the curtains

open.

MUM

A little welcome pack on your first

day of becoming a woman.

Her older brother Derek comes in.

BROTHER

Annie's had her period. Euwwwwww!

You've left your rotting blood mess

all over the bathroom bin. Its a

crimson mass in there, it looks

like a bloody abattoir.

MUM

Derek shut up this is a very trying

time for your sister. She's going

through puberty very early. The

journey to womanhood is never easy.

BROTHER

Dirty girls bleeding for a week and

not dying.

MUM

Oh shush you

Closes door over as she shoves Derek out.

SCENE 3

WIDE: ext. Brother comes by with his friends and sees his

sister sitting on the grass with her doll playing. He grabs

it off her and him and his friends toss it to one another.

BROTHER

I thought now you're a big girl you

didn't need dolls any more. I

thought you'd have plenty of boys

to play with. Every Tom, Dick and

Harry will be around here trying to

get into you.

Him and his friends laugh as they eventually drop the doll

into a nearby oil can. The girl fishes it out and it's

covered in red oil.

SCENE 4

CLOSE UP: girls mouth open and shouting

GIRL

Mum! Muuuuum! Muum! It's happening

again!

The mum rushes into the bathroom the cupboards are open the

girl is obviously distressed. Her nightie soaked in red

again.

MUM

Where are your tampons?

The brother comes in and sees the blood. He's sick over the

sister. She begins crying.

BROTHER

I'm, I'm sorry it's just so

disgusting. She's

just...so...disgusting

MUM

Just get out of here...you're not

helping

WIDE: of the bathroom door as the brother leaves and the mum

slams it shut.

SCENE 5

MEDIUM: son lying on his bed with his mother sat in it

taking to him earnestly. We can hear the Girl crying In her

room.

MUM

Go and tell you sister you're sorry and that it's OK. You

two were so close before all this business started.

BROTHER

It was here started it. Next her

dirty pillows will start to show.

My friends have already started

talking about...

CLOSE UP: the brothers face a little shocked as she appears

in the doorway with a pair of scissors dangling from her

fingers and I teddy in the other hand.

BROTHER

he points at her in the doorway

...her

GIRL

Apologise Derek. I've had enough of

all this. You're just being

nasty.its not my fault.

BROTHER

I'll not say sorry. She's a filthy

little whore now.

GIRL

you will be sorry Derek. I'll make

you sorry...

The mother gets up sighs and escorts the girl from the room

as the little girl looks over her shoulder and snips the

scissors in her hands.

SCENE 6

The Parents are dressed up and on their way out the door.

MUM

Talking to Derek.

OK Derek, you've got our mobile

numbers if anything happens and

I've left £20 on the kitchen table

for take-away. we'll be home no

later than 11:30. Oh and Derek...

BROTHER

Yes

MUM

Be nice to your sister. It's a hard

enough time for any young lady

without all the extra stress you've

been putting on her. She's up in

her bed so just let here sleep and

check on her every hour or so.

The parents leave out the front door. Derek picks up his

mobile and pushes a button then puts it to his ear.

BROTHER

Yo Hammy...

The mum opens the door again and shouts:

MUM

...and no friends over while we're

away!

Derek looks startled as the door slams shut and he says into

the phone:

BROTHER

Right they're away! tell everyone

to be here in 15 minutes.

The little girl wakes up and low thudding music is heard in

the back ground. She gets up and takes her teddy and the

scissors with her as she heads down stairs. The camera

follows her as she enters the kitchen. Derek and his friends

are there having a party. As she enters Derek turns around

and shouts:

BROTHER

NOW EVERYBODY!

As she looks round him and all his friends are dipping her

tampons into their red coloured drinks and sucking the booze

off the soaking tampons.

BROTHER

These Tampons are only for dirty

little girls anyway. Plus you've

got plenty left

Derek points over to a wall of Tampon boxes on the table top

as some-one throws her red soaked teddy through the boxes,

knocking them all over. The teddy lands on the ground. The

little girl rushes over and picks it up.

CLOSE UP:the little girls hands holding the red soaked teddy

The little girl covers her ears and screams.

WIDE:ext of the house. The brother is seeing all his friends

out as they laugh and joke. Derek can be heard saying:

BROTHER

sorry she won't stop whining but my

Mum and dad will be back soon

anyway so you guys had to leave.

SCENE 7

A car pulls into the drive. The parents get out.

The camera follows the parents as they enter the darkened

house. The mother enters first and goes ahead to the kitchen

that's along the hall and on the left. While the father

stays in the hall taking his coat off and hanging it up

along with the car keys. The camera stays with the Dad. He

hears a scream from the kitchen and rushes to it as his wife

passes him coming back out and throws up on the hall carpet.

DAD

what the...

The dad covers his mouth as he looks down and sees his son

spread out on the kitchen floor with the little girl kneeled

beside him facing the father. The sons crotch is bloodied

and his severed cock lies on the lino floor. 10's of

discarded Tampon boxes litter the floor also and the blood

on his crotch area is being soaked up by hundreds of matted

tampons. The little girl looks up at her disgusted father

with the teddy in one hand and the scissors in the other all

covered in blood and says;

GIRL

look Daddy now both of us have to

use tampons!

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