So an SCP that is basically what is left of the crew of a ship, SCP-XXXX-1. The ship has only two surviving crew. and the entirety of the inside of the ship is coated in tuberculosis bacterium (SCP-XXXX-4) that refuses to leave the ship. The only exception however try to make it's way to SCP-XXXX-2 and SCP-XXXX-3. The ship is from a different point in time. Hence the Tuberculosis Bacterium is far more advanced then modern TB, "very similar to TB and is theorized to have evolved from it" , hence extremely deadly. I was thinking Euclid . I still don't know if i am staying with it being TB consider it a place holder

The Crew claimed to be from the future or alternate Earth where colonization is under it's first test, A draft is done and if anyone wants I will give big link-y GF. The engineer screwed up the FTL programming and the TB bacteria had something happen to them, making them go specifically after 2 & 3. they also gained intelligence and several other till things.

*I'm new to the site, so take everything I say with a grain of salt.
EDIT: I replied instead of posting. Sorry Mods :(

Your idea sounds more like an episode of Star Trek than an SCP, but only at first glance. Keep that in mind when you try to flesh out this story and make it into something the Foundation can attempt to contain.

I like the idea of a sentient bacteria that turned an old vessel into its abode, but (as a story based SCP) there are some important aspects you need to flesh out.

What kind of ship are we talking about? Is it yacht? an English galley? a freighter? or a Starship?

Why does the disease not spread outside the vessel?

Why is the disease infatuated with the two surviving crew members?

How did these two survive? is this related to the previous question?

What will the bacterium do if it reaches the two survivors? Do we even want to know?

Do these two survivors need to remain on the ship to keep the bacterium contained?

Hi Thank you for the feed back, most of you're questions are answered in the Sandbox draft I wrote, it is nowhere's near completion but does answer 90% of your questions, however to save you time I will just posted them here.

What kind of ship are we talking about? Is it yacht? an English galley? a freighter? or a Starship?

It is a star ship with the words Pioneers of the Sol written on the side. (just a heads up, Sol is the Name of our Sun and Solar system, I didn't know till I looked it up :D )

Why does the disease not spread outside the vessel?

The environment is too different, the TB Bacterium cannot survive outside of the ship, nor does it want to (hence the modicum of intelligence, it wants to win the long game.)

Why is the disease infatuated with the two surviving crew members?

Their biology is strong enough to hold up the TB Bacterium's reproduction, where as present Homo Sapiens, their cells would be too weak to help the TB Bacterium to grow and it would have to "down evolve" to be able to use their biology.

How did these two survive? is this related to the previous question?

SCP-XXXX-2 Just got lucky and was one of the last to get infected. SCP-XXXX-3 Came back in from a space walk and noticed someone was infected, so she just kinda kept her E.V.A suit on.

What will the bacterium do if it reaches the two survivors? Do we even want to know?

Since SCP-XXXX-4 has reached SCP-XXXX-2, it did end up killing him eventually. The TB Bacterium now rapidly growing in his body at an alarming rate.

Becoming stronger and smarter then the TB Bacterium in the ship To the point Site Administrator does not want the two to come in contact and being able to develop complex plans such as waiting a long period of time and change the color of its cells to blend into the environment. It also can survive the environment out side the body. Any attempts to completely Burn away the infection has made 0 Progress. They are too afraid to use SCP-500 on it in fear it will not work.

Do these two survivors need to remain on the ship to keep the bacterium contained?

The two Survivors were originally placed in standard humanoid holding Cells until It was discovered that one of them had died, they were then transferred to side 19, but SCP-049 went into a frenzy the second '3 was brought on grounds. '3 was then transferred to Site-19.

Origins; though this probably wont be in the actual article.

The TB was used as a bio attack by an "Anti-Colonization" group to stop colonization, however by the time it was discovered the crew was already at Proxima Centauri, the crew attempted to turn back around before they received a message form Earth, giving detailed instructions how to make a quicker Jump back to the planet, however the Ship Engineer screwed up the instructions and they ended up in the past, so not only did the end up in the past, but the TB got anomalous properties such as sentience, sienteience, AUGH KNOWING WHAT IS SELF IS, DAMN YOU GOOGLE.

You are gonna need to go into better detail before we can help you out here. So are you saying the anomaly is some crew members in a ship with a deadly virus? Because I don't really understand you from the way you have put things. Explain your idea a little more coherently and I will try to help you out.

The Ship would be designated SCP-XXXX-1, the sole two survivors would be designated SCP-XXXX-2 and 3 respectfully, and the Bacterium would be designated SCP-XXXX-4. '4 doesnt not spread out side the environment of the ship. the only exception to this, is that '4 will consistently attempt to break containment to try to get to '2 and '3 (each attempt will be more and more elaborate. Possibly showing '4 has a modicum of intelligence). It has already gotten to '2 and is using his body to germinate more Bacterium before it was destroyed. '3 now resides in a different facility.

Alright, so overall the idea feels fairly interesting. Having a disease that specifically targets a few select people sounds like an interesting concept. I think that you going into why the bacteria decides to go after these people is important. Adding some context here would add a lot to the overall idea. After that, I would look at what narrative-elements you want in the idea.

TwitchSniper, please do not bump threads. It is spammy and unfair to other users who are patiently awaiting criticism. If you make major edits to your idea or draft, then you may bump the thread by announcing these changes, but posts like this are discouraged as per the Forum Guidelines.

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