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harrypotterluver123 says:OH MAH GAWD!!! So, I just came back from a week long vacation, and I just read the last three chapters in about 10 minutes. A. M. A. Z. I. N. G. Like, Merlin I'm not even exaggerating! The plot just keeps getting better and better, and more twists. MANY OF SAID TWISTS ARE EXTREMELY AGGRIVATING AND CAUSE MUCH FRUSTRATION, BUT WHAT CAN YOU DO?

Ya know, in all that discribing of Lily's room, I honestly could NOT tell what her favourite colour was! Just kidding. BLUE, RIGHT!? But wow. Lil Lily is very perceptive! I mean, I think that it's obvious to everyone EXCEPT Summer that she and James love each other, but she really picked that up, didn't she?

I think that it is safe to say that the tension (hopefully you will know the certain kind because I don't believe that it is 12+ and I don't wanna get in trouble!) between Summer and James is as thick as ever! They really need to talk about what the bloody H. E. DOUBLE TOOTHPICKS is going on with them.

Awww! Summer and James dancing! AND THEN ALBUS HAD TO GO AND STICK HIS *HANDS* IN THE MESS AND ALMOST RUINED THE PATCHY FRIENDSHIP THAT SUMMER AND JAMES HAD FOR A SHORT TIME. ONCE AGAIN, HE AND NATALIE NEED TO MOVE TO MARS, NEVER TO BE SEEN AGAIN. BUT I FEEL BAD FOR MAKING THE MARTIONS GO THROUGH THAT HORRIBLENESS! YOU GO SUMMER! KNEE HIM WHERE IT HURTS!

Louise. Please go jump off a cliff. That is all I have to say about you.

Wow. This review was one of the longest I've EVER posted. Might have to do with the fact that it's 2:30 in the morning and I'm rambling. Excuse me while I go leave 2 more reviews on your other chapters!

Till the next chapter,
~harrypotterluver123

P.S. Who in their right mind would reject this chapter twice?!?!?

Author's Response: oooh, get you, missy! jetting off on holiday when i am still in school for another week and a half! the plot gets more and more confusing for me to write, i'll tell you that one ;) i don't know why i have to make things so difficult for me to sort out in the end. YEAH, WHAT CAN YOU DO? I WRITE IT. MWAHAHA. YOU JUST HAVE TO READ IT & WEEP :P

UMM, HOW DID YOU KNOW? of course it's blue. it's quite obvious from her room... she's a regular tomboy. no pink or anything like that. ew. no. lily is very perceptive ~ she loves her brother enough to notice these things.

ahaha ~ yeah, i think i'm pretty sure what kind of tension you mean :P it's thick enough to cut it with a knife in this chapter. they really do need to talk about everything ~ but summer isn't a big fan of talking :P

james and summer dancing was one of the cutest things that i have ever written for them. i can just imagine that being absolutley adorable. YEAH, ALBUS HAD TO GO AND GET INTO THE MIDDLE OF WHAT WAS ALREADY A VERY DELICATE AND MESSED UP SITUATION. albus and natalie can't go to mars because there is no rocket ship that would be able to hold all their evilness.

louise is pretty horrible. albus vs louise... who would win?

awh, well don't i feel special! you're so lovely to me ~ thank you so much :D and sorry this reponse took me so long. i have had a very, very busy week.