Just gonna insert this into a spoiler tag:I was actually getting a weird itch on the back of my neck while reading this, which was fun. However, when I read “human” I just chilled and didn’t really go with the flow anymore. The pasta is great but, just to my preference in order to get a human character to spook me out it either requires a very shocking event (for short pastas) or a very well built character (for a longer pasta).

Anyway it’s good, although it reminds me of a couple of pastas with “turn arround” themes.

I write stories on this one website, and I always am blasting music into my ears with mt door closed, hoping no one gets in. I’m always turning around, hoping I don’t find anyone; or thing; behind me. This really got to me.

God dang it! I freaking looked behind me. A fake plant was behind me so yeah. I might get a cut and suddenly develop the disease where your blood won’t clot so I will slowly bleed out. Way to go. 5/5 since It made me look behind me. LOL