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Red_headed_juliet says:I really love this. I was hoping there would be one last bit with them actually together at the end. I never really liked Draco, always thought he had the potential to make up for his mistakes but never did, but this got me liking him! It's very detailed. I love the way Rose described everything from the artists perspective. I knew I'd love that bit when she talks about charcoal and chalk. (They're my favorite medium!) And the line about her rubbing at the charcoal in his eyes and it not fading or staining her fingers really hit home for me. The imagery in all of this is beautiful, you did a wonderful job.

The contrast between the segments with Ron and Hermione and the happy parts was well done. I was emotionally invested throughout the whole thing, and was really disappointed when it didn't work out. +[ But! I love a tragedy!

Overall, very well done. I don't have any CC, so sorry if you were looking for some. Lol.

Thanks for the swap! Until next time! RHJ

Author's Response: Hi there! Sorry to crush your dreams, but I'm a sucker for angst so it probably wasn't going to have a happy ending. I'm glad that I perhaps change your views on Draco, as that's so great to hear! Ooh, you're an artist? I dabbled at it when I had to do it at school but it was never too much success so writing it here was a strange experience for me :P I'm so glad that you liked all of the imagery associated with it though!

I'm so glad that you liked how it fitted all together, and yay for tragedy! It's somehow satisfying in a twisted way :P Haha, don't worry about the CC, it's nice to know there isn't any! Thanks for a great review :D