Interesting story. I'm not used to reading a story with relationship problems that occur after the romantic relationship has already been well established. And I surprisingly liked it. I thought it was believe how Audrey manipulated Rae because she often just asked questions that led Rae to skewed conclusions. I knew that Audrey's true colors had to be revealed sometime, but was surprised that she went totally psychotic. The woman that she is having dinner with at the end of the story should watch out, stalkers don't stop stalking, they just change their target.

Altogether, I quite enjoyed this story. As always, thank you for writing and I look forward to your future works.

Congrats on a well written story. There aren't many stories out there that depict relationships post marriage or even post the initial stages of 'coupledom', and im happy to say that yours was refreshingly mature and fair in its depiction of the problems that Rae and Donnie encountered.

I would have liked to see inside the mind of Audrey, because I think it would have been interesting to see what led to her obsession. I dont think people are off balance without a reason.

Wow. What an ending. It didn't feel weak or anything so don't worry about it. It's just the eventual conclusion to the issues that they were dealing with. I'm hoping for Audrey's sake and for the sake of her date that she's gotten over her issues and is seeking out treatment for her issues. I know several people who have similar problems and I know that without professional intervention, they don't change.

Thank you again for posting this story! I really liked and am looking forward to the next story you post!