Yep, you start out a piece thinking it's going to be terrific, and you get halfway through and it slumps a little, so you change it up,and then you get a little farther and realize it was a lame idea from the start. Sounds like real life, all right.

Good work. :)

newsoulpoetreplied...Mar. 31, 2011 at 5:34 pm

No kidding! I have started writing so many books and poems thinking it will be amazing, just to have it turn out to be mediocre.

At first I was confused, and, to be honest, a little annoyed. But then when I got to the second stanza (or I guess it isn't a stanza, since "This is Not a Poem, please excuse the lameness of that joke) I thought it was really funny. And I read it again, and it was even better. :D