I've done some English translations for the songs I like. I've tried to translate them as poems. Here they are, please give your opinions and corrections, I really appreciate them all. Thank you ^^

A winter day

Comes a day the sky's no longer blueComes a day the trees remain in silence Comes the wind of another winter Comes the leaves falling in the air

Gone the dews on green grassGone your footsteps on the stairGone wide flowers in the falls Here I'm standing still waiting for you

Now I realize I've lost you The rain's singing me an endless sorrow My broken heart keeps whispering of my love for you.

A moment of yesterday

Our last light of love was gone with the close of dayThe feelings I had now seems to quickly fadeThinking of last moment we met, here in regret I stayYou went away and never come back, babe

You took my world with your leave saying nothingEndless nights go by, in my heart the pain keeps bleeding Silently I reach out the all the memories we once madeThe ring you gave still reminds of your warm embrace

Together we sang our songs in golden sunsetsI closed my eyes to feel every kiss you gaveLooking at you, thousand times I wanted to say"Love me, love me forever babe"

Hello. Your English is very good. I'll just make a few corrections: When you say "comes" I would say "there comes" or "there is coming". I believe you can say "dews", but it sounds akward. I would say "dew".

Our last light of love was gone with the close of dayThe feelings I had now seems [it should be "seem", because the word "feelings" is plural]to quickly fade Thinking of [the] last moment we met, here in regret I stayYou went away and never come back, babe

You took my world with your leave saying nothingEndless nights go by, in my heart the pain keeps bleeding Silently I reach out [to] all the memories we once madeThe ring you gave still reminds [me] of your warm embrace

Together we sang our songs in golden sunsetsI closed my eyes to feel every kiss you gaveLooking at you, [a] thousand times I wanted to say"Love me, love me forever babe"

Come back to meBack to me Back to every sweetest moments [there can only be one "sweetest" moment--one more sweet than all others] we shared

Come back to meBack to me All memories about us have never ever faded

I think you do well with your translating. I'm trying to learn a second language right now. I just tried to translate some songs into English and found out it is much harder than it seems! However, you have made them sound very beautiful. I especially like the part about the rain "singing an endless sorrow". I am curious--what language were these songs originally?