5. Bow Before Griffin

Brief Plot:After killing his abusive family, 15 year old Griffin is murdered in turn. Nyoka (the devil basically) offers him the deal to come back and tie up his loose ends (he let his sister and some servants live) if he swears to serve Nyoka's whims. Griffin agree and is allowed a second chance. He hunts down those loose ends but in tying those up, forgets the children. They are taken away by another man and raised. It takes Griffin a long time to find them, but he does eventually. Slaughter and betrayal and scheming and the like ensue. The side plot involves a family of people who can use magic when magic isn't remotely common in this world and the persecution they feel before the hook up with the main people.

Reason for Change:I LOVE her name, but I need it too look like it sounds. I want it to say uh-ness

Character Description:Very feisty, strong, doesn't take the guys BS, but still loves the other main guy. She doesn't take Griffin's BS either. She's brown haired, brown eyed, has a little scar on her right cheek. I'd love a name that goes with her families if we can't find a spelling to sound like uh-ness.

Hmm, going to come back here. I have to hop in the shower so my hair will dry for my costume. Quick thought RE: uh-ness is you're going to have to be careful with spelling, because a lot of ANS names just look like anus, which is less than pleasant.