The Boy I Love (Rewritten Version)

Christopher "Leo" Daniels hasn't had much luck.
After his father confessed his love for another woman and his mother's depression landed her in a deep coma, Leo decides to start a new life with a new home and a new school. He promised himself that he would take advantage of this once in a lifetime opportunity by not letting his promiscuous reputation follow him to suburbia Minnesota.
But this quickly becomes a challenge when he falls in love with Tyler, the hot football jock with the hot cheerleader girlfriend.
**cover made by kikibuscus2259**

I feel the need to tell you that i love the way you write and that you know how to keep your characters alive an— 'what did you say ,Mike ? This is only the first chapter ?' Oh well ,then ,author ... I must make my way (not downtown) to the next chapter

I honestly think this is one of my most favorite introductions. You made the character seem so relatable through descriptions of emotion and effective dialogue. I also like how you got to the point and made sure the reader was fully informed about what was going on.
Keep up yhd great work!
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