Liked this one a lot. There are too few Allen/Hitomi fics on this site it's a pain sometimes. Yours was sweet and I was like "OMGoodness! She's NOT killed them has she?" when I read the chapter before this one. But you made me happiful to read this and it was lovely and well... GREAT JOB! -

Hi again, srry about the other review, I should have looked a bit farther... Anyway, I THOUGHT IT WAS AWESOME! I loved it! But I did cry for a little bit (or a whole lot!) The ending is so sad in chap 7. *Sniff* But for some reason, I bet that you couldn't let the main characters die! (or could you o.O) Anyway, again, you made the best fic ever! And don't stop!

i loved it i thought the story was ruined because of the way you ended it in the 7th chapter but you came back wiath an awsom 8th chapter not to mushy and not to actioney either im a little disaponted that van think hitomi is dead i think it would have been beter to give him some hope that she is alive but hey loved it any way hope to read more of your work