This is the first piece of your writing that I have gotten the opportunity to read. I am very impressed. Thank you for sharing.
This creation of yours is dark, powerful, intense.....all of the perfect ingredients for a fantastic piece of dark writing.
Clap Clap to you!
Take care and I look forward to seeing more in the future, Timmie

Hey Thunder, this is an interesting poem, sharp and talented. Enjoyed the vocabulary and free style of this write very much. "Virgin of the lake your tears are pearls", sweet line. Thanks for all your kind comments on my essays, its nice to know some people can still handle the truth. You are wise, Plato