Go ahead and give it a read. Feel free to pan it, like it, hate it, offer suggestions, what have you. I just did this to help make me feel better.

Edit: By the way everybody, I apologize for the blinding assault of yellow that is default skin of that website up there... I've been trying to get them to change it to something a little more mild... They refuse and tell me to "Use a different skin." Which I do. But guests can't. So again, my apologies.

Edit 3/13: I've updated the endings a little bit. I added some example epilogues, as well as a new ending.