I thought this was a very interesting story. I am sort of sad this is a one shot because there were a lot of questions in my mind as to why the figure in the coat is young, but his voice is rough. Why does he kill? Is there a specific reason as to the ankh that he wears?

This story is good to get into the mind of the character, but it holds more questions than answers. That is good-and bad at the same time.