0:12: You're missing "The Day before Yesterday, by Richard Middleton. Stage Children" here.
1:25-1:43: "There was something almost humorously impertinent about that twisted figure with one foot bowing and hopping for pennies in front of a terrible back-cloth of dreamy grey." said twice

The only problem is that the ending silence is too long. It should be about 5 seconds, and yours is 6.6 seconds.

Dear Jordan and Carolin,

Thank you for the feedback! Jordan, you were right about the ending silence which was too long. I have actually shortened the recording, I have uploaded the shortened version (it's 09:16 now) and I wrote a note about that but I don't know why the note does not appear in the forum...probably I had got disconnected and did not notice before I posted it.
Thank you again for all the support!
Best regards,
Simona

0:12: You're missing "The Day before Yesterday, by Richard Middleton. Stage Children" here.
1:25-1:43: "There was something almost humorously impertinent about that twisted figure with one foot bowing and hopping for pennies in front of a terrible back-cloth of dreamy grey." said twice

Hi Jordan,

Thanks for your feedback! I've updated the recording as per your notes: