This was amazing, you did a really good job. Completely in character, realistic dialogue, great details added (especially sensory), great concept, and a really creatively written ending that made what happened clear enough without saying it directly in a really, well, creative way. Keep writing, you're talented and your fanfics are awesome :)

I really like this story. It's sweet and the the characters are in-character. Great description of the pain when kakashi puts sasuke's shoulder back in the socket. The sensory details are amazingly well written there.

I hope you write more stories like this!

I only review fanfics I really like, so yeah..I like your story a lot. :)