Invisible

A 16-year-old girl walks alone in the school halls, sits alone at lunch. No one sees her no one listens to her, even her own parents. She wears black all the time. She loves to draw and loves math, though no one notices. At home she locks her self in her room to block out the yelling and screaming. Her parents stop yelling at each other only to yell at her

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Well, Re-wording could be necessary and maybe sprinkle with a few more adjectives to spice it up with some description. Maybe add how the girl feels or how people perceive her behavior? Just some ideas :) Stop by and looks at my poetry sometime? Id love some feed back! Have a good day!