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Oh my goodness, I completely forgot that Fade died! *wails* I'm so sorry, Fade!
Um, just a little thing that bugs me because I am a grammar freak... The question mark comes before the exclamation mark in "?!" I'm not sure if there's actually a rule for that or not, but that's how I usually see it, so... yeah.
I like Chia. She kind of reminds me of one of my close friends. Not with breaking windows, but with stubborn-ness and general idiocy.
I once broke a window.
*clears throat* BUT THAT IS A STORY FOR ANOTHER TIME AND PLACE, SO FOR NOW I WILL BID YOU ADIU!