i read part of it on the other sight, and im sorry, i just cant keep reading... i hate to be mean, but i feel like ur not building the plot at all... its just them doing it in too much detail, i have to stop reading im sorry

I am on my knees, thanking the gods for their mercy, granting me the link to the rest of the story! THANK YOU! It was amazing, really one of my favorites! I am a sucker for drama-triangles! I must bow for this one, it was amazing! AMAZING!