I'm either/or on this. Which is to say, pick the copy chunk you want, the left-hand one or the center one, and go with it. Having the two throws the ad out of balance.

In terms of content and message, this is an important ad, don't get me wrong. But it smells of classic client back-peddling and second-guessing, the crippling effect of committee-think and wanting to have it both ways.