Hey everyone, I was hoping I could get some feedback on my entry for this months 11 Second Club. The folks who participate on their sites forum seem to be less inclined to help the competition, so I thought maybe I'd have better luck getting some responses here.

I apologize for not being able to simply embed the video here but it seems CG Talk doesn't support Youtube and it's kind of pointless to wait for Vimeo to post when I'm just dealing with a work-in-progress post. Please visit the link below,

Hi Zack!
Where is the main guy looking? because at times it is not very clear especially with his tiny sunken eyes.
Also if you have time maybe you could do something different with the 2nd guy, as the dropping the shoulders and looking at the ground is a very cliche' move and i think there would be lots of versions of happening in this months competition.

Good luck with the competition and I look forward to seeing it finished.

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