Re: +++ FreeSpace Card Game +++

1. "FreeSpace CG is a card game created and based on the universe of FreeSpace 1 and 2 computer game". First, 'created and based on' sounds a bit clumsy. I'd recommend just 'based on'. Second, 'the universe of FreeSpace 1 and 2 computer game' has a singular/plural mistake, I'd suggest 'the universe of the FreeSpace computer game series'.

2. "This box default content cards for GTA." I'm not even absolutely sure what you're getting at with it. Maybe 'This box contains the default cards for GTA', or something like that.

Re: +++ FreeSpace Card Game +++

That further supports the fact that my decision to quit was justified. My record dates back to 2005 or 2004: 1.07.something. Meh, I was never a big fan of the competition part. I just liked swimming and trying to keep in shape that way. Not to mention our group. Most of my best friends are from the collective we had in the swimming circles.

Re: +++ FreeSpace Card Game +++

1. "FreeSpace CG is a card game created and based on the universe of FreeSpace 1 and 2 computer game". First, 'created and based on' sounds a bit clumsy. I'd recommend just 'based on'. Second, 'the universe of FreeSpace 1 and 2 computer game' has a singular/plural mistake, I'd suggest 'the universe of the FreeSpace computer game series'.

2. "This box default content cards for GTA." I'm not even absolutely sure what you're getting at with it. Maybe 'This box contains the default cards for GTA', or something like that.

If you guys don't mind me aiming at jugulars, here are some corrections.

1. "FreeSpace CG is a card game based on the FreeSpace series of computer games created by Volition, Inc."

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