Instrumentations were cool, though it lacks a cool bass line imo. Also, the vocals would be better if there was a bit more punch in the delivery i think. Lyrics were a bit repetitive also.
The volume...

As itamar100 said, you need to work on your voice. Also i found it lacked a bit a "power" compared to the guitar. As for the guitar, there's some clipping/fuzzing noise that kinda take away from it a...

I started this piece a while ago, and finished it last week. The more i completed it the more it became an exercise on eq-ing and mixing and stuff. There might be a liittle bit too much reverb... but...

Thanks for the feedback. :) Yea i get what you by the "dull" parts. I still have a long way to learn about dynamics and whatever it's called, plus in arranging and interchanges between the different...