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IloveNeville says:Haha, I didn't like the way Maia was treating James at the beginning of this chapter. Unlike Sirius, he was actually trying help and was being really pleasant to her. When they took her to Godric's Hollow I was preparing myself for Maia to be just as rude to Lily, but they seemed to get on wonderfully. I really liked Lily, too. She was very welcoming and nice. It was also interesting the way Sirius reacted when he thought that Maia was genuinely under threat from the figures across the street. He stepped up and did his job. It was good to see a little bit more of why Maia acts that way, and I liked Sirius' little speech at the end about how Maia is important. This attack is intriguing! Please update soon. I want to know what happens!

Author's Response: It pained me to write Maia treating James that way, to be honest! I was like, "NO, BE NICE TO JAMES" but I couldn't :( Haha! I really love Lily as a character in general. In my mind she's just very, very nice and genuine and I couldn't stray from that portrayal of her.

And yes, Sirius :P He hates the girl but he's willing to do whatever it takes to help with the Order because that really is where his allegiance lies!

There's a lot more to Maia and why she's acting the way she there'll be a lot more of these little displays of her inner troubles :)

Again, THANKS FOR REVIEWING! I woke up to these and i was just awwing all morning :P i'll be working on your reviews too, by the way!