This week we’ll start the fourth and final chapter in this great idea gone bad. I’m still trying to figure out why the author went to the trouble of writing this when she really didn’t discuss or utilize Harry’s alternative childhood. If I had written this, I would have focused on Harry’s childhood at the Sanctuary and how it would change the type of person he would be once he got to Hogwarts. And I just can’t figure out why this author didn’t do that. So, anyway, here’s the first part of chapter four.

I was hoping that a week vacation might help me be a bit more in the mood to attack this story. Sadly, I think I need another vacation. Oh well. Here is the next section of chapter 3 and it’s mostly just filler. There’s only one more chapter and it’s pretty apparent that the author never really had any idea where she wanted to go with this thing.

Today we’ll start chapter three and see what other changes have been made to the timeline without any real valid reason. Also, it really pisses me off when an author has a really great plot and then just shits all over it. I recently read a book that had a great plot, but then a gay pride parade drove all over it. I’m totally fine and happy with gay characters, but it had nothing to do with the story. I kept wondering why pages upon pages were devoted to discussing PFLAG and gay marriage when those things had nothing to do with the plot (which concerned a really neat mystery with a haunted house). So, anyway, on to chapter three.

This week we’re going to look at the exciting chapter two. The author included a note at the beginning of this chapter and it really needs to be addressed.

AN: FINALLY managed to update! Sorry for the long wait. I’m not covering Harry’s whole life, so I’m going to skip forward every so often. Additionally, lthere are two important things to keep in mind: First is that I had to mess with the timeline to unify these two series, so Harry’s adventures all take place in the 21st century because technology doesn’t matter in those stories, but the Sanctuary needs their state-of-the-art stuff. Secondly, I started writing this before season 3 of Sanctuary began, so I’m probably not going to be keeping with anything beyond Kali part III and Magnus’ reinstatement. Also, please imagine Harry as speaking with an American/Canandian accent.

So, it was super important to the story that the Sanctuary team is able to have their high tech gadgets and that is why we are left with a timeline that makes no sense.

Late May, 2008:

Yes, if you’ll recall, Harry was a baby in 1981 and so if it’s 2008, he should be 27 years old.

This week we’re going to finish chapter one. Exciting, I know. And even more exciting, I have finally left Office 2000 behind and upgraded to Office 2007. So, hopefully I’ll be able to figure out where they’ve moved everything.