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Its pretty good! Just a few things I noticed, probably more down to my personal opinion,
I quite like the audio being there, it lets people know straight away. The "You dont have to waste money" headline right at the top in the blue box doesnt stand out to me. I had no idea what the photo is, I assume cleansing wipes showing greae wiped off? I dont know?

Testimonials are great, so is everything else up until your story, although contents good, its in too big a block of writing, I myslef and many others like reading a few lines at a time, you see a block of writing with 6+ lines and just skip it because its too much.

The rest is really good! Good content, good testimonials. Again, my personal opinion, but thats what i would change or alter.

I agree, it's a really well-designed page. If it was a video that played automatically, I'd definitely suggest not to do that. With audio - I am not sure what to suggest. Part of me wants to say mute it, but then I begin to realize that nobody is going to ever try to listen to it on their own... unless, you make sure that something draws visitors' attention to that audio. One of those arrows, you know:

If you could somehow draw visitors' attention to it, then I'd say mute it.

This is a pretty good page. About this part though: "But Who Am I To Know? My Story..." I think you could make that less dense and more readable. Remember people don't have all day to read your sales page, your story, etc. You did a good job in many places highlighting the important parts. I think that one section is the part that needs the most help. Good job though.