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The Fertility Clinic

Great start

I love the way this story is starting. I have found few stories of this type. I will be waiting for the continuation of this story.

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Anonymous07/07/05

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Great story, as usual. I think this is my equivilant to a woman's rape fantasy -- it's a tremendous turn-on conceptually, but I would never actually want to experience it.

At any rate, you mentioned in your opening rant that you had submitted this story to other sites and it was well received. Would you mind sharing the names of those sites? I figure if it is well received there, it will attract more stories like this.

BTW, my absolute all time favorite story is one called "My Neighbor's Sex Slave, My Wife", by Al the Penman. I especially like the idea that even though the wife loves her husband, and has no desire to be cruel to him, she is so under the neighbors control that she denies her husband, but, as ordered, constantly teases him with what he can't have.

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Anonymous07/08/05

Good start!

Please continue, plenty of us here like femdom stories and this one has a very promising start.

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keep up the good work

I read your note about the responses you've been getting. When I submitted stories (slutslave201) I got several negative responses. My reply to them was, "Why are you reading this?".

I think the very nature of literotica leaves us open to this type of reply because it caters to so many different facets of human sexuality. Posted on other sites that cater to Female Domination, I'm sure your stories are very well recieved. I do think it would be great if Literotica created a separate Female Domination section.

Keep up the good work though. You have plenty of readers out here!

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Anonymous08/22/09

Need address of this clinic!!!

Need the address of the clinic in your story. I'm not ready for kids...but perhaps I should get checked out ;D