Just tonight, I've started working on a little project. Well, I guess it's really a rather big one.

As you know, due to the nature of roleplaying, sometimes the story can get a bit mixed up and spread out all over the place, and it's hard to tell what's happening when. What I'm doing is copying and everything from the second chapter of the Disruption into a word document, and editing everything so as to form a coherent and ordered storyline. I may post it later in the history section (in chapters), if there's no objection. As well as figuring out what to stick where, cleaning up grammar, and whatnot, I'm going to be eliminating certain ideas, like the Mondarian attempt to listen in to the one Confederacy meeting, that didn't go anywhere, and I will certainly alter some of my own parts (and possibly other people's) to make them fit better with each other. I'll certainly be trying to improve on what I myself did; I have to admit that some of my stuff was rather mediocre and could have been better.

1.Character Name: Diesel 2. Character Decription: Strong, green skin, about the size of an adult, from the top ofhis nose to the top of his head is machine( which allows him to tolerate much pain) 3. Character History: Diesel's past was forgotten due to his crash. All he can remember is his name and his mission, to rebuild his kind with a sample of his blood. What he forgot is that his kind was a savage, war hungry, murderous race that could not be trusted. 4. Other: he not much different than his race, but that was before the crash. Now, he is sort of the opposite: honorable, trust worthy, and a little crazy.

Tony, if there's anything I can recommend, it's that we add in Krathunians fighting during Vathoris. I can write it all up and you can adjust it as necessary, but I think it's just a hole in the plot due to my absence at the time.

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By the way, a while back, if anyone remembers, we were all talking about who we would like to play the voices of our characters. For Admiral Marr, I originally said I wanted Vincent Price (an impossibility, since he's no longer alive). However, I've changed my mind. I would like Admiral Marr to be played by Mark Hamill doing his Joker/Hobgoblin voice. You just can't beat that evil laugh. Whenever I imagine Marr laughing, this is almost exactly how he sounds:

Whatever happens, I don't really know. I haven't been able to post also because I've had an important project to keep track of, and it's consumed a huge amount of my time. I'll have more free time this afternoon, though.

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