Rated 5 / 5 stars2010-05-16 13:00:59

Rated 1 / 5 stars2010-03-04 18:19:00

Keep trying.

Needs work. Keep practicing with coding, because that's one of the main issues I had. I was being blocked from moving by objects that weren't even in my way. Also, the graphics need some work -- not to sound rude, but it almost looks like you drew them in MS Paint. Also, maybe try to find a little better of a storyline. Unless you were going for whimsy, in which case the storyline was alright.

I guess I can sum this up as "Keep trying". I can see some potential, but you're going to have to work at it.