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Thursday, February 19, 2015

Review of A Calculated Life by Anne Charnock

Dystopia
is such delicate material to work with.Done well, it quietly informs theme, emerges from the background at
opportune moments to interact with character, and does its part to influence
mood and atmosphere.Done poorly, it is
an in-your-face experience that detracts from the story in its exuberance of
imagination and/or proselytizing.Given such a large number of post-Y2K texts
use the motif, it has become increasingly difficult for a writer to not only do
dystopia well, but distinguish their world.In her debut novel A Calculated Life (2013), Anne Charnock accomplishes just this.

A
simple comparison: Kameron Hurley’s God’s War is DYS-TO-PIA. The author goes far out of her way to make the setting
as black as possible.The futuristic
Manchester, England Charnock portrays in A
Calculated Life is likewise grim.But there is a significant difference in presentation.Where Hurley takes every opportunity
(paragraph, even) to cram some visceral, grimy aspect of life down the reader’s
throat, Charnock’s manner of portraying a depressing world is rooted in more
subtle ideas.Teeny-tiny apartments,
unsatisfied people, limited freedoms, narrow employment opportunities in an
economically downcast period, drab building materials, the nuanced oppression
of the class system—her setting clings much closer to empathy and relevancy
than Hurley’s comic book sensationalism, resulting in a dystopia with potential
to comment upon reality.

And
it does.Jayna is a simulant recently
“awakened” and put to work as a research analyst for a corporation.Possessing superb analytical skills, she is
kept busy preparing market reports, social algorithms, and surveying corporate
media for patterns and trends.Collecting
stick insects as a hobby in the simulant dormitory, she attempts to be as
normal as her organic boss and colleagues are but within the bounds of simulant
protocol.But things are not as
straight-forward as they could be.One
of Jayna’s fellow simulants is recalled at the outset for having had sexual
relations with an organic.The behavior
considered abnormal, Jayna’s logical mind watches proceedings from the
sidelines.Unable to stop herself from
analyzing the situation, can she prevent the same fate for herself?

Working
through the soul-sucking aspects of corporate life, pressure to conform in such
an environment, the behind-the-scenes effort perceived to be needed by a
business woman, the social tip-toing, and the very personal aspects of existence
amidst a group of people automatically considered better due to status,
socially and biologically—these are just some of the ideas floating through A Calculated Life.Charnock addressing them from an insightful,
insider’s perspective, half the interest (and challenge to the reader) of the
novel is having what are common aspects of life in the West presented via
Jayna’s rational point of view.

Central
to the text is thus Jayna’s sense of self-perception and social
observation.Oscillating back and forth
between how she should act and does act, should look and does look, and how to
be human both idylly and practically, her thoughts bounce off how she sees
organics around her behaving, appearing, socializing, etc. compared to the
knowledge inbred into she and her fellow simulants.Charnock an astute observer herself, what
results is an inquiry into feminism and society that will make the reader truly
pause to compare their own experiences and perceptions.

Not
satisfied with this level of persona and social examination, Charnock takes A Calculated Life to the next,
universally human level.Floating within
Jayna is a continual battle between cold logic and the chaos of
unpredictability (i.e. how to be a human both ideally and practically).The former sometimes human and the latter
more human, inherent to the battle is the intersection of what we want versus
what we can have, and what we perceive compared to what we are.The simulants created with the idea of perfecting
the logical side of mankind while avoiding its chaotic tendencies, Jayna’s
designers have a hard time wiping out all of the human elements.The final sections of the novel drawing this
to a head, the conclusion, while not surprising, remains a fitting capstone to
plot while confirming Charnock’s humanist agenda.Aldous Huxley applauding in the background,
it is a nice touch, indeed.

Before
closing, I have read “reviews” of A
Calculated Life putting down the novel for its style, complaints being it’s
too cold and unnatural.Jayna a simulant
designed for research analysis, it’s only natural that the first-person
narrative likewise be somewhat dry and analytic, as the cover insinuates. But by choosing to write in a more rigid, angular mode, Charnock
achieves something beyond: an atypical narrative.With much of the market these days aiming for mediocrity, i.e. a
vanilla-ness that hits the lowest common denominator, Charnock’s rendering of
the logical mind is refreshing—and a point of recommendation, not a mark
against.

In
the end, A Calculated Life is an
atypical dystopian novel that balances a relatively conventional plot idea
(clone seeks individuality) with a social and cultural examination that strikes
more than one chord of relevancy in modern society, the feminine and corporate
side in particular.Simultaneously confirming the
human sentiment of Brave New World without
being imitative, it is a very good debut that does dystopia justice.

3 comments:

Thank you, Jesse, for this insightful review. It's a pleasure to read your interpretation and I agree with your assessment of Jayna's inner conflict - "a continual battle between cold logic and the chaos of unpredictability". I'm close to completing my second novel and it will be released later this year, all being well.