That was great. I freaking love Dounle Fine (I know Grim Fandango is from Lucasarts, but it's the same crew and creator found in D.F.) and Zim, so this made me happy. I know it's been years, but you want to do a Psychonauts one? XD That was a joke! Haha! Fat chance!

NOOOoooOOOO! NOT GIR! *sob* *slaps self* ok i'm done! I love this it's just like a video game, and Zim's the one having to get the right iteams to the right people to go onward! more!

machiavelli chapter 6 . 6/4/2002

Damn intriguing story. Nice allegory, very good imagination and world-building. Keep it going - best of luck. My only suggestion - try and break up a few of those huge paragraphs you have in there. They can get hard to read.

I have played grim fandango and im a big fan of zim. I gotta say, This is one of the best and longest IZ fics ive seen. Well, besides that one with 57 chapters and 45,000 words... GREAT STORY. It's going to my favortes list.