I hate to say this, but it really has more to do with the quality of the art. If it were better drawn, it might work better for the song, but as it is, it feels juvenile and isn't helping to represent the song at all.

I like the melody on this one. My main problem with this module is its lack of substance. You only use 4 channels at a time, when you have 6 available in total. You have many options for how you can use these extra channels, and you should try experimenting with what you can do with them, especially...

You shouldn't worry. There have only been 2 plagiarism incidents in the history of the FT forums, and neither of them would've been stopped if people didn't post their modules. Withholding your module goes against the collaborative spirit of the tracker community.

Interesting story... Unless the song was made with non-FT tools (but why would you have posted it here, then?), you're generally supposed to include the module file you made the song with in your post. This makes it much easier for listeners to critique you, since they can isolate and change section...