Deramok wrote:

00:24:283 (2,4) - as you're not mapping on guitar in this part with it being skipped on 00:24:440 (3) - , you probably shouldn't map these the same way with one being supported by vocals and the other not since it's just light insane, i don't want make it harder in this part

00:30:377 (2) - ctrl g for the distinction between it and the following two slider, that are supported by additional vocals thanks! but i'll change it with different way

00:52:096 (4) - 01:02:096 (4) - maybe stack this on 3 or keep it at low spacing for better contrast with the following note compared to previous beats that had a more even intensity distribution.keep it

hard looks solid from what i can tell

00:24:908 (3) - not supported by the vocals. better to put it between 4 and 5 or 1 and 2 instead you're right, but i choose to follow the guitar here

01:19:283 (2) - probably better to just omit this. you're mostly going on the drums anyway, so this one stands out in a negative way. especially with the gaps in 01:16:315 (1,2) - and 01:21:315 (1,2) - which cover more vital guitar plucks i think that part have more guitar plucks

00:50:065 (3) - would suggest flipping this around to assimilate it to 00:50:690 (4,1) - nope, i'll break the pattern

01:01:315 (1) - not sure why you would suddenly go with a curve rathen than a red node hereBecause NC here, note only that, the instrument start changed here

Nevo wrote:

from my queueSo I am doing these full NM's and want these to be really thourough checks. So here we go

General

So first backgrounds

-they are all pretty low quality so you might want to upscale or find a higher res version-If you do want to keep BG-2 then make sure to convert it to .jpg for a smaller file size- BG-3 has the wrong resolution scale, it's 1280x800

audio and video file seem fine

very minor kiai timing inconsistency in KittyAdventure's Insane, as kiai time should be off at timing point 01:08:815 (1) - (68815,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1)and 01:16:315 (1) - (76315,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1)

Also feel that the gap between the insane and extra is a bit too large for a nice spread but I am not 100% if that influences ranking capabilities

Easy

rip easy icon on forum

00:48:190 (4) - would make this a slightly different shape to 00:47:565 (3) - beacause this one reflected intrumentals while 00:48:190 (4) - only follows vocals

00:06:002 (5) - This note doesn't fit as you have been exclusively following vocals up to this point and then switching to instruments on a pretty minor sound doesn't fit

00:14:440 (2) - as you don't really mind using 1/2 gaps in this diff I would pull this back to 00:14:283 as I have a feeling you want to emphasize the guitar more from parts like 00:11:783 (2,3) - and 00:16:783 (2,3) - which focus the guitar as they have their heavy drum beats in the middle of the slider

00:18:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this feels off beacause you follow the vocals here but only sometimes do you actually try and catch the vocal on the red tick like at 00:19:440 (2,3,4) - and 00:20:690 (5,6,1) - while the other times you just don't map anything on top of it like at 00:18:815 (1,2) - 00:20:065 (4,5) -

00:22:877 (4) - this slider follows the guitar (obviously) but it feels too sudden beacause up to now you are basically going all-in on vocals, you like almost change the focus to the guitar with 00:21:315 (1,2) - but 00:22:408 (3) - emphasizes the held sound of the vocals and not the guitar beacause it's a slider.If you want to focus the guitar more I recommend changing 00:22:408 (3) - into a circle. Focussing vocals would be a bit weirder as they fall away after this

00:23:815 (1) - i don't think you want to switch back to following vocals here by emphasizing the held vocal sound with a slider, and if you do want to switch back to vocals then you are missing the vocals between 00:23:815 (1,2) - and 00:25:065 (4,5) -

00:27:408 (3) - not a fan of this circle, would actually just delete it and fix ds as it really lowers the emphasis the drums get at 00:27:565 (1,2) -

00:31:315 (1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm feels off again beacause you have this pretty large emphasis on 00:32:252 (3,4) - imo but the slider right before that 00:31:783 (2) - doesn't even have a frum sound on it's sliderhead

00:36:315 (1,2) - I feel like this is a better way to switch your focus from vocals to intruments as here you get this 1/1 gap after the last vocal slider, would try to implemant something like this at 00:22:408 (3,4) - if u want to focus vocals up to the last possible note

00:41:158 (1,2) - 1/2 doesn't work as the sliderend is way louder for the vocal and the instrument, possibly 2 circles would work better like you did at 00:43:658 (5,1) -

00:46:940 (2) - don't see the use of this slider as the only noticeable drumbeat in this section is on the red anchor. So maybe extend 00:46:315 (1) - to a 5/2 and 00:47:252 (2) - to a 1/2 if u still want to sliders. But just 1 very long slider would work even better.

rhythm in kiai seems better

after that only some more minor thing like, if you are going to focus the drums then make sure the loud sound is actually clickable which is not the case for slider 01:19:440 (3) - as this one has a louder tail than head

overall it just seems that the rhythm has no clear focus on what it wants to map

Hard

00:06:002 (5) - owo, whats this doing here. Is this mapping the breathing? don't feel like its needed imo

00:13:815 (1,2) - You have the speedy intro and then for these similar sounds you slow the map down, it feels like 00:08:815 (1,2,3) - but is mapped differently

00:23:190 (2) - ds this to make the gap clearer, as it doesn't look enough like a 1/1 gap

00:23:658 (3) - would delete this note for more emphasis on the vocals

00:24:908 (4) - If u map vocals I feel that you have to commit to it, and not map like these guitar sounds whenever a gap large enough comes around. So just delete the note

00:31:783 (2) - would make this slider focus more on the drums as it has this pretty weak vocal on the head but vocal+drum on the tail which feels odd

00:37:877 (2,3) - Why no circle between these slider, it would fit

00:48:190 (1,2) - I don't think you need these circles as 00:46:315 (1,2,3,1,2) - fully focusses on the drums, as does 00:48:815 (1,2) -. Between these there are no drum sounds so the emptyness would fit

00:58:815 (1,2) - space these more similar to 00:48:815 (1,2) - as you really want to show that they are similar

01:08:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - some diversity here would be good as it feels pretty boring atm

01:13:815 (1) - how about a 1/2 reverse here to keep the focus on the on the drums

Light Insane

00:06:002 (3) - Still not sure on mapping this breathing, I just don't feel it's loud enough to warrant a slider

The stacking seems without reasoning often, like you stack 2 notes with different sounds ex:00:11:783 (2,3) -Or at spots like this 00:14:596 (4,5,1) - where you stacked 00:14:596 (4,5) - but not 00:14:752 (5,1) - although they follow up immediatly after eachother, givning 2 consecutive 1/2 gaps different spacing. If you have some reasoning for it then there is no problem though

00:24:440 (3,4) - You gave the guitar sound nothing of importance when it was in the sliderbody of 00:24:440 (3) - but right after it get a clickable object for the same sound 00:24:908 (4) -

stack 00:35:846 (3,3) - and 00:36:002 (4,4) -

this diff is also pretty good

KittyAdventure's Insane

00:02:565 (1) - feels out of place as all the other objects seem to be following vocals and this one is on a rather weak instruemntal sound

00:05:846 (5,6) - I can kinda agree mapping 00:06:002 (6) - on an insane and up but really think 00:05:846 (5) - shouldn't be there

00:02:565 (5) - doesn't fit as all the other objects follow vocals closely, would just remove this one and extend 00:02:408 (4) - to a 1/2 slider.Also some seriously bad flow with the wide angle usage

00:04:283 (4) - ^, this one also feels bit weird

00:12:252 (5,1) - not really a fan of this supershort spacing but whatever

00:37:252 (5,3,4,5) - overlap that doesn't look that nice/intended

00:38:346 (6,7) - Were these supposed to be stacked?

00:38:815 (1,2,3,4,5) - You mapped 00:39:752 (5) - there but not on the white tick at 00:39:127. Also by using a slider like this you are mapping the vocal on a sliderend here 00:39:752 (5) - which you don't want to do as that seems to be the main rhythm you are following

00:58:111 (5,1) - I don't see how anyone should be able to read that that is a 1/4 gap

00:58:736 (5,1) - ^

01:14:908 (1,2,3) - not a fan of stacking this twice if you have 2 different timing gaps

01:24:596 (4,5,1) - uncomfortable flow and you were trying to always use sharp angles so this is unexpected

Thats about it, would appreciate any feedback about the mod and if you have questions you can always pm meGl with the map

Edit: lol, I totally did not miss the Light Insane only to spot it later and mod it then

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gottagof4ast wrote:

from my queueSo I am doing these full NM's and want these to be really thourough checks. So here we go thanks!

General

So first backgrounds

-they are all pretty low quality so you might want to upscale or find a higher res version finaly i found it :') , fixed-If you do want to keep BG-2 then make sure to convert it to .jpg for a smaller file size fixed- BG-3 has the wrong resolution scale, it's 1280x800 i change it with new BG, fixed

audio and video file seem fine

very minor kiai timing inconsistency in KittyAdventure's Insane, as kiai time should be off at timing point 01:08:815 (1) - (68815,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1)and 01:16:315 (1) - (76315,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1) about this kiai time, i leave this to Kitty

Also feel that the gap between the insane and extra is a bit too large for a nice spread but I am not 100% if that influences ranking capabilities i think it's okay, you are first person who critic about this

Easy

rip easy icon on forum too much easy diff with normal icon get ranked right now, so it's okay

00:48:190 (4) - would make this a slightly different shape to 00:47:565 (3) - beacause this one reflected intrumentals while 00:48:190 (4) - only follows vocals change it with two circles

00:06:002 (5) - This note doesn't fit as you have been exclusively following vocals up to this point and then switching to instruments on a pretty minor sound doesn't fit just keep it right now

00:14:440 (2) - as you don't really mind using 1/2 gaps in this diff I would pull this back to 00:14:283 as I have a feeling you want to emphasize the guitar more from parts like 00:11:783 (2,3) - and 00:16:783 (2,3) - which focus the guitar as they have their heavy drum beats in the middle of the slider it's a nice idea, but i will keep it because i won't use to much 1/2 gaps in this part

00:18:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this feels off beacause you follow the vocals here but only sometimes do you actually try and catch the vocal on the red tick like at 00:19:440 (2,3,4) - and 00:20:690 (5,6,1) - while the other times you just don't map anything on top of it like at 00:18:815 (1,2) - 00:20:065 (4,5) -just like i said before, but if the other suggest about this i'll add circles

00:22:877 (4) - this slider follows the guitar (obviously) but it feels too sudden beacause up to now you are basically going all-in on vocals, you like almost change the focus to the guitar with 00:21:315 (1,2) - but 00:22:408 (3) - emphasizes the held sound of the vocals and not the guitar beacause it's a slider.If you want to focus the guitar more I recommend changing 00:22:408 (3) - into a circle. Focussing vocals would be a bit weirder as they fall away after this it'll better to use slider than circle even it's changed too sudden

00:23:815 (1) - i don't think you want to switch back to following vocals here by emphasizing the held vocal sound with a slider, and if you do want to switch back to vocals then you are missing the vocals between 00:23:815 (1,2) - and 00:25:065 (4,5) - i feel doubt about it, i want add circles but i won't use 1/2 gaps too much in this diff

00:27:408 (3) - not a fan of this circle, would actually just delete it and fix ds as it really lowers the emphasis the drums get at 00:27:565 (1,2) - the vocals started say "u" in this part, so i'll keep it right now

00:31:315 (1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm feels off again beacause you have this pretty large emphasis on 00:32:252 (3,4) - imo but the slider right before that in this part the vocals change his voice's volume sudden, it'll better to keep it

00:31:783 (2) - doesn't even have a frum sound on it's sliderhead

00:36:315 (1,2) - I feel like this is a better way to switch your focus from vocals to intruments as here you get this 1/1 gap after the last vocal slider, would try to implemant something like this at 00:22:408 (3,4) - if u want to focus vocals up to the last possible note nope, because there are nothing on the red tick

00:41:158 (1,2) - 1/2 doesn't work as the sliderend is way louder for the vocal and the instrument, possibly 2 circles would work better like you did at 00:43:658 (5,1) - fixed

00:46:940 (2) - don't see the use of this slider as the only noticeable drumbeat in this section is on the red anchor. So maybe extend 00:46:315 (1) - to a 5/2 and 00:47:252 (2) - to a 1/2 if u still want to sliders. But just 1 very long slider would work even better. change it with sliders

rhythm in kiai seems better

after that only some more minor thing like, if you are going to focus the drums then make sure the loud sound is actually clickable which is not the case for slider 01:19:440 (3) - as this one has a louder tail than head i followed the guitar

overall it just seems that the rhythm has no clear focus on what it wants to map i'm suck at normal :')

Hard

00:06:002 (5) - owo, whats this doing here. Is this mapping the breathing? don't feel like its needed imo it's not about breathing :'

00:13:815 (1,2) - You have the speedy intro and then for these similar sounds you slow the map down, it feels like 00:08:815 (1,2,3) - but is mapped differently but i think the guitars more have emphasis here 00:13:815

00:23:190 (2) - ds this to make the gap clearer, as it doesn't look enough like a 1/1 gap fixed

00:23:658 (3) - would delete this note for more emphasis on the vocals i think it'll better to keep it

00:24:908 (4) - If u map vocals I feel that you have to commit to it, and not map like these guitar sounds whenever a gap large enough comes around. So just delete the note i followed vocals & guitar

00:31:783 (2) - would make this slider focus more on the drums as it has this pretty weak vocal on the head but vocal+drum on the tail which feels odd i think no

00:37:877 (2,3) - Why no circle between these slider, it would fit yes it would fit, but i won't use 1/4 rhytm in this diff

00:48:190 (1,2) - I don't think you need these circles as 00:46:315 (1,2,3,1,2) - fully focusses on the drums, as does 00:48:815 (1,2) -. Between these there are no drum sounds so the emptyness would fit i need this because this part is going to kiai time

00:58:815 (1,2) - space these more similar to 00:48:815 (1,2) - as you really want to show that they are similar fixed

01:08:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - some diversity here would be good as it feels pretty boring atm will keep it right now

01:13:815 (1) - how about a 1/2 reverse here to keep the focus on the on the drums nope, i focus to the vocal here

Light Insane

00:06:002 (3) - Still not sure on mapping this breathing, I just don't feel it's loud enough to warrant a slider same like before

The stacking seems without reasoning often, like you stack 2 notes with different sounds ex:00:11:783 (2,3) -Or at spots like this 00:14:596 (4,5,1) - where you stacked 00:14:596 (4,5) - but not 00:14:752 (5,1) - although they follow up immediatly after eachother, givning 2 consecutive 1/2 gaps different spacing. If you have some reasoning for it then there is no problem though i make jump here, if i make (5) and (1) stacked, it'll break the emphasis

00:24:440 (3,4) - You gave the guitar sound nothing of importance when it was in the sliderbody of 00:24:440 (3) - but right after it get a clickable object for the same sound 00:24:908 (4) - i got it. fixed

stack 00:35:846 (3,3) - and 00:36:002 (4,4) - fixed

this diff is also pretty good

Thats about it, would appreciate any feedback about the mod and if you have questions you can always pm meGl with the map thank you very much

Edit: lol, I totally did not miss the Light Insane only to spot it later and mod it then that's okay

Thanks for the mod!

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00:01:002 (1) - Circle is not important because skipping the vocal the beginn is okay i guess...

00:09:440 (2) - the reverse is following nothing if it's for consistency then it wouldn't make much sense because the music slightly changes here end the rever se on the white tick so the reverse would follow the instrumentals better

00:13:815 (4) - dosen't make much sense here again because with this reverse you are skipping a new measure of music which should be clickable

00:27:565 (3) - following instrumentals would be better imo

00:34:127 (2,3) - change the rhythm here because the skip potenzial vocals here if you disagree with this one make them at least straight that would easier to play

00:54:440 (2,3) - Blanket is off

00:29:596 (2,3) - ^

01:04:440 (2,3) - here is nothing special but this pattern is inconsistent with the rest from your map

okay Gl with map <insert a "here is a star" emoji> (and sorry for only 1 diff)

crystalinfusion wrote:

01:27:408 (1) - is this intended to be where it is or is it supposed to be in the center? pls clarify umm... okay put it in the center

My Angel Kanan wrote:

K

00:01:002 (1) - Circle is not important because skipping the vocal the beginn is okay i guess... i want to follow it

00:09:440 (2) - the reverse is following nothing if it's for consistency then it wouldn't make much sense because the music slightly changes here end the rever se on the white tick so the reverse would follow the instrumentals better because the music slightly changed i put the reverse on the red tick, and it have more emphasis than white thick

00:13:815 (4) - dosen't make much sense here again because with this reverse you are skipping a new measure of music which should be clickable since it's an easy diff, that's okay to keep it

00:27:565 (3) - following instrumentals would be better imo i think vocal is better

00:34:127 (2,3) - change the rhythm here because the skip potenzial vocals here if you disagree with this one make them at least straight that would easier to play it'll better to keep it

00:54:440 (2,3) - Blanket is off fixed

00:29:596 (2,3) - ^ fixed

01:04:440 (2,3) - here is nothing special but this pattern is inconsistent with the rest from your map oh, you're right, only this one. but it's okay to keep it

okay Gl with map <insert a "here is a star" emoji> thanks for the star! (and sorry for only 1 diff) that's okay~