Much depth in this, even though it is short. I love the way that you show that Narcissa is not evil, but simply a normal woman who is perhaps a little proud and just wants to speak to her sister again, though the path she has chosen is blocking her from doing so.

Reviewer: Vega black

Date: 2007-12-13

Reviewid: 150143

Chapter: 1

I liked your depiction of Narcissa's desire to reach out to the sister of her memory the one who grew up with her even when she despises the sister who ran off with the Muggle-born.

I liked the link between Narcissa and Andromeda as attentive mothers as both provide milk and comfort to their children in the night. Narcissa's comment on Andromeda naming her daughter Nymphadora was another touch emphasizing that they are sisters.

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