I like the way this poem ends. It is open ended and invites the reader to ponder all the possible meanings for the word err, in context to what this poem is saying. Humanoids always err. to err is human. err 10/10(Report)Reply

DearPersian Nightingale,
Its a nice tribute with good lmageries, short and sweet.Nice rhyming.I liked the portrayal A10 from me Rajkumar

I'm still in Singapore but can find time to respond to poet-pals request for comments. Today I posted about 3/4 poems from here. Please find time to read, comment and rate. If possible tell others that I'm back, --Rajkumar(Report)Reply

It is very Important to read everybody in the present situation around us, especially your great country, I am unable to blame anybody but the sufferring huge community`s faith is too bad, praying for her soul to see the almighty, thanks dear,10++(Report)Reply