I read over Chapter 6 first four pages and have decide to include them in Chapter 5. It sounds better since it completes the action of Chapter 5 Scene 3. I need to start putting the corrections in the chapter. I plan to work on "Forever Broken". Yesterday, I run out time. Hopefully not today. Keep writing. :)

I move on to page 3 of Chapter 5 and it's good however I'm making some changes. The great thing is I've got a chance to work on my short story "Forever Broken" and I'll try to post another part on Wattpad. Keep writing. :)

I've looked over Chapter 5 yesterday. I've written two additional scenes for the chapter and need to merge them with the chapter. I'll work on that today and the timeline. I need to find an agent or a publisher for the book. I trying to figure where I can start. My book is an urban thriller.Keep writing. :)

I'm on page 4 adding the corrections in the story. It's taking a long time since I've got a lot of them. Looking over One Death at a Time's time line tonight to work on filling in dates with the plot. I've got to review my character sketches make sure the timeline is correct on their ages and events that happen in their lives too. Keep writing. :)

Frelisa Walker

The novel One Death At A Time (work in progress) conveys a hopeful message that Detroit can overcome it's problems.​​This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.