I've been hearing that phrase "What can I do ya for?" for a long time now. I was wondering if anyone was ever gonna take it seriously, and here we are. Shipping like this is something that's common, but sparking it from a phrase is something I've never seen before. Great job!Vision- The artwork quite clearly shows what is intended.

Originality- I believe I've made my point on originality.

Technique- It's a great piece, but some things such as the eyes and expressions need just a little bit of work.

Holy- Hahahahahahahaha! That is honestly an extreme way to go, Red! I honestly see NO problems with this at all! Since it's a 100 word minimum and that was all I really can say, let me tell you a story about me reading this story.

At first it looked like a simple comic that would be cheesy and not very funny, but going and reading it was a very good decision. All I can really say at this point is, Red, keep going with these comics. You're giving us fantastic art and are entertaining us at the most highest possible level.

i will explain it to you xDThe offer Twilight makes is normally one a woman gives when you ask here to have fun and she is working in this buisness You know? Prostitution and that stuff? Laugh. And she is going down with the price for Apple

I know I probably said this already, but the fic's awesome. Especially hilarious in that the misunderstanding leads to Twilight becoming a certified, paid and insured, on-the-books official occupation, whore.

EDIT: Wow. Not only did I already say this, I said it THIS YEAR and it's still on page 1 of the comments. Both of those things are immensely shocking.

Don't know if I've said this, but the fanfic is surprisingly good. It was a very entertaining read, and things got a lot more out of proportion than some might expect. I would highly recommend you give it a look.