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10 thoughts on “secret lover”

Hey AnnMarie I hate The Winter. I miss Halloween. I have been watching wrestling to keep me distracted. I feel any time now I could start a new horror book but I may just make the break longer and just watch wrestling.

I’m a Christmas kid! so looking forward to these holidays – I try to focus on joyful things as simple as looking out the window or lighting an aromatic candle
be happy Dan – Halloween comes every year😁

This is fascinating, AM. I love the lush language, the nouns heavy with meaning, anchored with intent and intensity. I’m not sure what all’s going on here (and it’s not necessary that I do), but it doesn’t matter because the voice is so in command, so mesmerizing that I read along trance-like. I think that’s the mark of a fine poet. I do understand the Virginia Woolf reference 😉 Stunning work here, AM. Really, so good, so fine. I like this direction.

Hey there DS
I was experimenting with in/out/in and not sure if I was successful. I wanted to setup the typical seedy motel and then have readers place 2 lovers within then ultimately place themselves in the bed albeit thru fantasy – I may go back and retool a bit – a tad of desire in escapism
I’m so glad you got the Woolf reference – and the Chicago Sun ‘Yes Virginia’ response😁
thanks so very much for your kind words on this

I really have a good old time writing these type of pieces – creating a character and imposing flesh on top
you absolutely know what your doing
if you don’t know, then I’ve no hope of knowing anything 😉🌹

HI there Ray
in just about every place I’ve ever lived there has been “a no-tell motel” – as kids we giggled driving by these establishments, somehow the reaction changes once into adulthood then it stays the same…no more humor in it…