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Rated 2 / 5 stars2012-09-19 01:40:12

Don't we all have those days? That was an interesting piece yet it lacked two essential parts to it. Audio and a tad bit of a slower pace (Except for the big reveal as you've shown where that gentleman's shoulder is embedded in on a certain part to that obese man's body). Style was unique in a dreamy like sequence yet as mentioned in prior I didn't have too much time to enjoy or intake the style since it feels fast paced and flat out rushed. I enjoy as an observer to take everything in account and detail (for better or worse) and to never miss a single solitary fraction or pigment on what I am witnessing. But in great respect you've done and good job in creating something and showcasing it with great valiant pride! I'm going to bestow you a 2/5 and a 2/5 in voting power. Again try and pace yourself with your works in the future, you might get some surprising and unique results if you do! I hope you keep creating, practicing and contributing here. I also hoped you've enjoyed this review. Good day.