Minus The Bear-Fine tab

Hi, this is my attempt of the intro/main riff. The tuning is either standard or drop D,
don't really care because the intro doesn't play the low e string. Anyways, there is
sort harmony with another guitar but I only have one of them. This is my first
tab so... PLEASE RATEEE!!!!
e---------------------------------------------|
B---------------------------------------------|
G----7h9-------7h9-11~------------------------|
D-9-9---9-9-9-9---9---------------------------|
A---------------------------------------------|
E---------------------------------------------|
e---------------------------------------------|
B---------------------------------------------|
G----7h9-------7h9-11-11~---------------------|
D-9-9---9-9-9-9---9--9------------------------|
A---------------------------------------------|
E---------------------------------------------|