Way too much reverb there, it sounds like you guys are singing in a bathroom. Vocals are also too loud. I get a breathy feeling from the vocals, that might be because of the reverb or because the high frequencies around where your breath exists in the vocals (changes from person to person a bit, can be anywhere around 7kto12k hertz) are boosted too much.

Also the vocals need to be balanced, your vocals sound stronger on bass and Pie's vocals are heavier on mids.

I haven't listened to the original song but from what I can tell, I think you both need a bit of tuning here and there.

Last edited by Aerlith on Sun Mar 01, 2015 8:10 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : +2 for unrequested intermediate feedback.)

hartless726 wrote:Ohhhh thanks so much for listening, but yeah the song is super low 8DDD;;; but yeah we like our reverb a bit sorry about that ;; w;)?

I actually dont really have bass in my voice ;;;; but thank you so much for the critique desu!

Sorry, my wording there was wrong actually. I shouldn't have called it bass range since it isn't actually bass range. What I meant is your vocals are stronger at low midrange to midrange which covers the area between 250-2k Hz. Pie's vocals are stronger around upper midrange which is 2k-4k Hz. That makes her vocals have more presence in the song while yours are kinda drowned and hard to hear at solo parts.