I added some background guitars. And the song was intended to have at least 2-3 more instruments. Nothing too fancy.

But I got tangled in life, and didn't had much time at all. Left it alone, and now 3 months later, I realized I had this song there. So, I sent a copy to Mark, who seemed to like it a lot. And after listening to it a bit, I think it's ok. It still sounds stale to me, but I don't think I'll be able to add any more lines, anywhere in the near future. So here it is.

And if you like, feel free to jam along and write a couple lines, I personally feel this song could use at least 1 more (instrument) voice.