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I love the connection of the first three words to the phrases on the bottom! What an interesting idea for form! :P

This poem...I had to read it several times for it to fully sink in. It has a lot of meaning to it, a lot of depth; it really makes you think, and I enjoyed that. Even the delivery--while short and to the point, it was very precise. This is really wonderful, great work :D

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Fri, March 15th, 2013 9:15pm

Thank you so much! It really means a lot coming from a talented writer like you.