Oohh - so well done, and nice job at writing it realistically in that he didn't kill her - as per canon. Now I can really imagine it as it had happened. Your writing is very good. I especially loved the poem that Spike spoke, and the moon metaphor that extended down to the end. Very nice.

- Jessica

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