I'm picking through the ones in this collection that I really like, including this one!

I like this one because of the metaphor here. It's really creative and powerful. It also helps me get an image of how tightly they're using their toes. The only thing is it should be grip because it's toes which is plural.

I really liked this piece. It was a really beautiful description. It's a wonderful metaphor. I like how "tangle shadows" are kind of negatives and then "comb" and "stars" are kind of positives. It was an interesting change.

I like this because it creates a really great image in my head. I can see the dancer actually doing this. The phrasing seemed a bit odd to me. I think it was the present tense I kind of expected at least some of it to be -ing. Anyway still a nice piece.

I like this piece a lot. It doesn't seem like a haiku in the sense that it seems complete and not at all affected by the need for syllable counts and what have you. Which is something I love in haikus.

Other than that it's a really beautiful piece especially that last line. "Glass bones" is a beautiful image.

The only thing is the fp title says Glass Pieces but the internal title says Rubric which kind of threw me off.