I love it! I'm left wanting more! Just from this chapter i can tell that the whole story will be quite a hoot! you also did a great job of really nailing uncle veron and dudley's characters! you might wanna go over the story again though cuz i found a couple grammer errors, just saying ;)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it. I'll go ahead and fix those grammar errors right away. I'm glad you thought Vernon and Dudley were characterized well, as I was a little bit unsure of how to write Dudley in particlar. Stay tuned for the next chapter soon!