Recent Activity

this is from an anime that has “vanadis” in the name. its a neat medieval fantasy sorta like spice and wolf in the sense that the writer apparently has a degree in medieval politics. it focuses on international politics more than merchantry however.

one last note
i like the snake theme this guy has even though i don’t like the reptilian faunis thing.maybe give him a snakes color pallet, like a coral snakes stripes. or name him after a snake known for being a particular color. get creative, do research, wiki some things etc. you’d be amazed how happy you can make yourself with an original theme like that.
also, i just realized I’ve been spelling “faunis” wrong. my bad.

5 make the coat shorter or ditch it entirely. a vest may suit him better, or a dress shirt. maybe keep the swords in the coat.
6 ditch the reptilian faunus thing. the worst OC’s are the ones that stray too far from canon, as odd as that sounds. if a reptilian faunus is added later, feel free to use the concept.
7 dont make up places. have him come from an area in the established world. the world of RWBY is very detailed, I’m sure you can find something
8 you should put this on deviantart. KYM is not quite the place for it.

finally, I’m not going to make you do any of these. you can keep making them this way if you want, its your pen. i just want to help you make something you yourself will like,so if you don’t want to do some of these things, don’t do them. just have fun, that’s what life is for.

i have some tips to make this better
this gets a little long, sorry about that.
1 don’t make a color scheme too flamboyant. its hard to take anything that screams “gay pimp” seriously. also, avoid using colors that clash and ditch the yellow eyes.
2 all characters in RWBY are named after the dominant color in their palette. these can be in different languages (weiss, yang) archaic terms (blake) flowers (pyrrha) tons of things. if you must keep the teal or purple, find a good name based on that. btw, never have his clothes match his hair almost exactly.
3 ditch the hat. we’re supposed to hate the only guy in RWBY who wears a hat. hats just make you look like an ass, unless its either A. really sunny out B. a cowboy movie
4 the weapons in RWBY are all very intricate. they fold, get bigger or smaller, and can attack in more than one way at once(IE ruby using the scythes gun as a propellant) your hook swords look like someone glued blades onto a pair of Glocks. make them fold, make the tips of the blades double as grappling hooks, have them combine, have one a shotgun the other a sniper, something. the most boring weapons in RWBY (jaunes) still fold. these don’t.

I’m pretty certain this goes against KYM’s policy against using the site to launch your own content. The poster states in the description that he made it, and it has very little to do with RWBY.
Also, on an unrelated note, his power of changing friction is stolen straight from the latest scanlated chapter of To Aru Kagaku no Rail gun.

that’s not too far from what would actually happen. helicopter blades are usually foam or plastic plated with metal, so while lethal if you get hit dead-on with one, they would break pretty easily on a car like that.

Its considered illegal in America too. i worked as a Parker for a fair and on a few occasions people have had to be called over the loudspeakers to leave the fair and not come back due to leaving animals in their cars. There were police around in case they didn’t come fast enough to smash out the windows, but i don’t think they have had to do it for a while. I think when it comes to children, people don’t get charged much because we want to believe that parents wouldn’t do this.