once again I am brought to my knees
there are tears swelling in my eye
I think IM about to cry
why are things not right between us
and we cant even try
all you said was
GOODBYE
I try not to think
but all I get is your house
and the floor in the basement
we used to roll around on
but now I guess that’s all gone
and the memories will soon fade
is that what we really want
is that what you wanted?
So I pour my heart through my pencil
and this is what I get
I messed up
I brought you down
your couldn’t get back up
blame me
not you
you say there is nothing more we can do
I said I love you
and still we come to goodbye
so here ill sit in my bed and cry
for another heart broken
few words spoken
and all good-byes said

General Comment"I said I love you
and still we come to goodbye
so here ill sit in my bed and cry"

Is that a joke? Man... If I hear the word 'cry' one mroe time, I'm going to invent a time machiene and kill Indian Summer, Rites of Spring, and Moss Icon for being somewhat of an inspiration to this crap... but then some really great bands wouldn't exist. Read my comment on your first song to see what you need to do to improve.