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A fascinating take on pureblood customs, and the root cause of Slytherin's reputation as Voldemort followers, I doubt JK Rowling herself could determine something like that in such a short piece. There were no problems that I could detect, grammar was fine, spelling perfect.. As another review mentioned, POV may have been a problem, but it seemed deliberate to me. Fantastic job.

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