I actually really enjoy the short chapters, maybe its because I have a short attention span and I am trying to get back into fan fic . But I really love the short chapters its like a quick little bite and then moving on :) its great :D

This is a pretty creative storyline. I like it. I can't imagine writing a 2,000 word essay on "who [I] think [I am]" for 8 hours locked in detention, though. That seemed slightly unrealistic to me. But there must be a reason that you know of (obviously) and I can't wait to see it in the next chapter(s)! Also, this seemed a bit short, but I can understand for an intro chapter. Please make the others longer! Thank you!