You have so much grammer mistakes that it's ridiculous. This is only the first chapter. It's "again" not "agian". It's "since" not "scince". It's "volunteered" not "voulenteered". Seriously there is something called Spellcheck. Or if you don't have it, get a beta-reader.

That was a very well put together story, and just mushy enough to make it romantic. Although, I have to admit, I hurled at the whole whore scene...oy...yup, scarred for life, but it had a definitely sweet ending. Loved it. Keep it up.