been workin on this for a few days.
i could just do with a bit of outside input as to getting a better overall sound. it only goes as far as the second drop and i intend to do more with it. just got mental blockage on atm so gonna concentrate on improving the sound that is already there.
usin fruity loops, i know my way around the program, just not the best way to improve the sound quality.
constructive criticism more than welcome.
peace.

That 'ding dong' is my text alert sound. I checked my phone twice during that tune.
Good sounds, no guts. That would be my over-all impression. Get some punch in your drums for the drops.
Could have been a bit nasty, but wasn't quite there. That's my feedback.