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| | "Antonio Gallardo|
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| Subject: [jira] Commented: (EXLBR-23) Typo - "is a simple put powerful concept."
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Antonio Gallardo commented on EXLBR-23:
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> On the Front Page under "What is excalibur?", second paragraph first
sentence reads:
> " Inversion of control, also known as the hollywood principle ("don't
call us, we'll call you") is a simple put powerful concept."
> I suspect this should read:
> "Inversion of control, also known as the hollywood principle ("don't call
us, we'll call you"), is simply put a powerful concept."
Perhaps they meant "is a simple but powerful concept"
> In the folowing paragraph (What is excalibur? pg. 3) there is another
trivial typo, it currently reads:
> "It is lightweight, by which we mean that it doesn't need a lot of
resources, take a lot of disk or memory, or impose all sorts of demans on
its environment."
> 'demans' should read 'demands'.
> Both trivial I know, but two typos in the first Section of the main page
don't make a good impression.
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