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Sunday, October 26, 2003

An actual sentence in copy tonight:

A White House official, speaking on condition of anonymity, said Bush had good discussions on his recent trip to Asia on moving forward with multinational diplomacy to persuade the North to move forward to end its nuclear weapons program.

Even on my last night here, with heavy doses of sleep-inducing medication, I could tell that needed to be rewritten.