it broke my heart when yu said this is the last chapter. sad face! amazing fic. cruel intentions is one of the best movies ever- perfect to base a story off of. keep writing i look forward to reading more from you (:

Author's Response: thank you!! it hurt my heart when i had to end this fic. i truly enjoyed writing it to the fullest extent :)

cruel intentions is SUCH a good movie. its definitely one of my favs, and to mix that with HP made my day.

so glad that you liked it and i look forward to seeing more of your reviews!

I liked it. You are very descriptive which makes your story sound really good. I insist that you continue writing- you know I will be willing to read.

Gx3

Author's Response: Wow, You're very kind! I have already written the next chapter, I'm just trying to find some time to type it up and make sure it's fit for purpose so I should be updating pretty soon. Thank you for your commitment to read my next chapter, I hope it delivers!
Thank you for reading and reviewing all that you've read, reviews really do motivate me to keep going... Thanks again xx

Wow. Very bold to start your first fic by writing in first person. I still can't do that! Cute how the relationships were all quick and direct :)

A bit of my ideas :)-

"probably she was thinking of Neville that she told she liked him and he likes her but they do not admit to each other"

This part is slighty too wordy in the sense that you can't decide if she had told him she liked him or that she was daydreaming about it. I found this a bit perplexing.

* a few minor fluency and spelling errors, but not enough to completely deter the reader from the story

-Overall-
I thought it was very good. I saw your review for my story "Second Time's the Charm" and couldn't resist reading your story. Update I'm interested in seeing what happens :)

Yours truly,
Gx3

Author's Response: Thanks 4 reading and reviewing and I want u to know that I'm editing the story again so probably next week you'll see an improved version of this story ok? I wish u a happy new year 2009.^_^