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Rated 5 / 5 stars2016-08-07 03:01:41

I got the bad ending for Valen and there's no escape. I had to get the password for the good ending. And I just had to do the same things. At first I was totally devastated and kept yelling out "DID VALEN NOT LOVE ME ENOUGH??" but I went to see what actually happens in the good ending. And I'm satisfied could have hoped for a longer ending. But I'm cool with it.

Rated 5 / 5 stars2014-11-30 07:31:13

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2014-08-18 21:24:30

Okay here's my reivew... the game had potential but you fucked it up. The fucking arrows didn't follow any sort of logic which was a pain the entire game where sometimes the route worked sometimes it didn't. The art was interesting, but it seemed like the artists couldn't make up their mind as to what style they wanted to use.
The branching paths might have been interesting if you had a system like all visual novels do of actually tracking them, I have a strong feeling that the choices that altered the path were quite minor and didn't necessarily follow any sort of logic. Then of course the bad ends... wtf I mean seriously you should give a retry option rather than force someone to fucking click through all the dialogue again. And then you had the nerve to fucking make it so there weren't any good ends?! No matter what you did, you died. That is not how visual novels work. and so I am afraid I must give this series a 2.5, it could have been good, but you fucked up, and I can say that since you submitted the game on newgrounds.