I think it works well. If you look closely on the letters, you can see they have a bit of a shine on them which I love. My first thought was "basic" but it's good. Obviously take our opinions into account, but don't change your style of work because of what we say. I would recommend choosing a background or a text overlay that doesn't blend in with the other so much (or give it a small glow to make it stand out a little).