So, here is my first submission to CG network.
I hope I'm not gonna be too rediculous :)

Story:
In a fanatic religious world, womens are being captured by mens in order to prevent themselves from tempation.
One day, one of those captured ladies managed to escape from her prison.
For the first time in her life she sees her face in the water.

That's a fact, I defenetly have not enough skills for this contest, but competing here is so exciting, I have to finish that piece !!!

MDN67

03-27-2005, 04:08 PM

good concept and the begin of coloring is nice, i wait the suite:thumbsup::thumbsup:

OrO

03-27-2005, 04:14 PM

:thumbsup: thumbs up!!! it's very nice.i'm a first timer so i wouldn't know to much about the contest but i'm willing to experiment...good luck :buttrock:

ArtisticVisions

03-27-2005, 05:52 PM

Interesting concept, but where's the Master? (maybe have several men be off in the distance chasing after her). Also, don't forget that at least one of the individuals (either the master or the servant) has to be human.

R-K

03-27-2005, 06:09 PM

you might want to revise your color scheme a bit - start from 2 colors and build a harmony around them if you find multicolorous image difficult to keep in balance.

Also, avoid pure black and greys with color

Freiyer

03-27-2005, 07:04 PM

Thanks for the advices everyone, I really need it. I think, I will do what you've said concerning the color scheme it would be more simple for a beginner like me.
In fact I've started coloring with Photoshop since only 2 month and that's really difficult for me.

Interesting concept, but where's the Master? (maybe have several men be off in the distance chasing after her). Also, don't forget that at least one of the individuals (either the master or the servant) has to be human.

In fact I entended to detailed more my concept with the final image but I think I'll do it now.
Actually the master and the servant are the same person.
A girl which was jailed for religious religion in a strange world find a way to escape, now she's free and she is looking for the first time at her face in the water.
For the first time she realized that she will be able to everything she wants, she becomes her own master. But at the same time she's lost in a world where every women are jailed, whatever she'll do, she will always be trapped in this world and forced to hide herself and to respect some kind of rediculous religious rules. To this point, she's still a servant.

That's why I intend to make here disapearing wings, to symbolyse the fact that she's just gain freedom but she is realizing that she'll be always a prisonner.

I hope that will feet with the instructions of the contest.
Anyway, I'm not gonna win so... :P

So I was thinking about my concept for a while and I thought it was stupid to not catch benefit from the possibility to draw several characters, so I totally change my concept. Hope I could finish this in time.
Here is a first concept.

So... After a lot of mind changing I've finally found what I wanna do, here is my new concept (and final one this time):
In some kind of medieval human world wedding has been replace by body fusion, every couples are mixted in one body, but the main body is still the man's one. He re is the story of a couple where the man is trying to keep his wife with him although she wants to go.

Hey you have some great ideas :) I really like the girl and stuffed animals concept. Your last few updates are interesting as well. I'll check back to see how you progress with these. Keep up the great work :)

Freiyer

04-25-2005, 04:45 PM

Thanks for your comment, I really apreciate :)

choptider

04-26-2005, 02:22 AM

i don't know where your going, but i'm with you!

Tranchefeux

04-27-2005, 01:02 PM

Hi, your drawing of characters of beginning I liked well Hi why them
have given up, go, go for the continuation.

FIDUCIOSE

04-30-2005, 07:20 PM

Still can't say any thing about ya works for now. But the concept is interesting. CHEERS!!

Still working !! I have to finish it >_<
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Eye of the tiger mode engaged !!!

E.T

05-13-2005, 07:14 AM

gogogogogogo!!! looking nice!

Belhaven

05-13-2005, 07:52 AM

youve done a lot of sketches, but im curious to see how it fits in the final image. right now, i think your best bet is to seperate the foreground middleground and background. it looks a bit too jumbled as is. i would be really interested to see this one done.

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