Closely she whispered, her breath touched my earTime ago I didn't think of my past lifeNow suddenly I feel inside me fearIn My heart, you have hard fixed your blunt knife000000000000000000000000……1She begged me not to make her weak next timeShe used to be strict, hard as her father She can't bear lovely speech, she hate soft rhymeTry just once, than before you'll be smoother000000000000000000000000……2I made you of illusions, desires, and dreamsMy statue will fall at the bleeding endYou work hard to destroy all my hopes, beamsunseen sky, deep seas… me you like to send000000000000000000000000……3God created us all of water and soilOn the earth ,the sons of the sky can't livealways you make my blood in my veins boilwe're not angels holding branch of olive 000000000000000000000000……4 I don't listen to you, though you are wiseNo more I do open my heart's windowThat I believe in my fatal demiseAccepting my fate, I start feeling low 000000000000000000000000……5

I know you desire me more as I doSo don't say any more, "Don't make me weak"We are both alone, we can't find love in trueWe have no time to spend on check or seek000000000000000000000000……6The wheel of the world's law will still revolveWe are not stones, dry trees or blocks of iceHow can we convince our needs? can you solve?If the stone can breed, it will be very nice000000000000000000000000……7 I'm not satan and you are not angelI have virtues and you may have a viceYou have magic stick? convert the devil!We make it once, why don't we make it twice? 000000000000000000000000……8

Wooooooooow………. I finished it and hope you enjoy reading it……… I hope you forgive my rudeness and badness, its just a poem ….some of it true and the most are false, so please don't criticize the idea and I like you concentrat on the style and diction. Thnx, plz send me ur comments koz I in need to ….have happy times.

Shakespear tell me your secret to write as you do it! well i dont know what to say, I think every body has feelings, and not all people will show it in the same way, or maybe some of us are afraid to love, this because of bad experiences, etc that's why we dont wanna the same situation repeats again. :)

how bad u said about this poem but ur genius man u never lost ur talent or creativity well i like the idea so much how love can let us confused ....lost between mind & heart this conflict which can last forever as i can see how to combain between them just tell me how ??

we are not stones, angles , santa or devils we simply are human beings man !!!!!!!!!!

finally ur poem in general is an invitation to release from any bonds can kill any pure honset feelings in this world no matter mind & heart are aruging with

Yes; it's true, but some of us wanna overcome our weaknesses,and i belive in this phrase, and it's one of my goals: "Let the weakling say, "I am strong!"" Joel 3:10, and it encourages me to continue being as i am, so if we wanna be weak or strong it's our decison

hispecial ppl , distinguised ppl like us won't lose thier talent koz that means they die, so they keep thier gift till they reach to the grave...so try that u have sth inside u but it needs to motivate it and u'll find it b4 ur eyes , among ur fingers.....u'll find it marvelous poem as ur child moving and breathing...c u with new poem

hi my friend muruganjiits my pleasure to b ur friend and i wana say sorry koz i blamed u about this matter ....plz don't be sorry that i have to b sorry ...u r so kind and i hope we can be close friendsmy regards and best wisheshave nice moments