I've never read a Teddy/Rose fic before, and this was refreshing. You did pretty well for a writer who is not used to writing fluff. I'm very impressed!

Your grammar is impeccable, and I enjoyed this first chapter a lot! Great job! Heh, this review's going to be short..I need to read the next chapter right away! 10/10

~foundriapenguin

Author's Response: hello foundria! interesting name!

There are some amazing Teddroses, far better than this - check out Eridanus and Violet Gryfindor, they are both goddesses. My beta was a star in ironing out the kinks of this chapter, but I am glad you liked it! You're much too kind!