The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Oooooh that looks really cool!!! The girl reminds me of a dark/evil version of Esmeralda from The Hunchback of Notre Dame ..... yeah, I'm strange xP But that's kind of who she looks like, in a more realistic and, in my opinion, lovelier form

And I apologize: I would gladly critique your artwork, except I know nothing about the specifics and terms and such :/

......And I'm probably not the best person to ask, seeing as I only draw Disney-style cartoon animals like Clarice the Chipmunk x3