Heavy/Scratch: My version of the "Dark Doc" WIP

Hey guys!
Maaaan, it´s the first time I can post something in the "Heavy mods" section.
And I´m very proud of it, because this project took a long time mostly because of trying different mods and such things

Yeah.. like you can see, he´s based on the movie Ratchet mold.
I´ve done SMOG´s easy-MP-Ratchet-mod (Check it out here:http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/radicons-customs/208740-easy-mp-ratchet.html ) and then I put some magnets under his hood so his head can be easily attached to his body.
Also I gave him Ironhides arms for a better articulation and overall look.
At least I made some minor changes like cutting of the flashlights and such stuff.

It´s still work in progress so I may add some weapons to him and/or a cuttingblade.

Not to be rude , my friend , but this is one of your bad customs.
You are an awesome Customizer , as long as you stay at your great Repaints!
I know you and your custom style over an year now , and i dont think that Heavy mods like this fits for you.
Look at your Landmine , this was really awesome , and you did not need more mods.
For this , It definitaly needs some more work , cuz now it looks like a Truck front on a little Steel stripe D:
Dont missunderstand me , my pal , i only want to say that you can maybe do it better with some more practise ^^

Not to be rude , my friend , but this is one of your bad customs.
You are an awesome Customizer , as long as you stay at your great Repaints!
I know you and your custom style over an year now , and i dont think that Heavy mods like this fits for you.
Look at your Landmine , this was really awesome , and you did not need more mods.
For this , It definitaly needs some more work , cuz now it looks like a Truck front on a little Steel stripe D:
Dont missunderstand me , my pal , i only want to say that you can maybe do it better with some more practise ^^

Not to be rude , my friend , but this is one of your bad customs.
You are an awesome Customizer , as long as you stay at your great Repaints!
I know you and your custom style over an year now , and i dont think that Heavy mods like this fits for you.
Look at your Landmine , this was really awesome , and you did not need more mods.
For this , It definitaly needs some more work , cuz now it looks like a Truck front on a little Steel stripe D:
Dont missunderstand me , my pal , i only want to say that you can maybe do it better with some more practise ^^

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I'd suggest reviewing this before you post again and after you edit your original post:

Radicons Guidelines and Etiquette said:

2. Constructive Criticism is not only welcomed, but encouraged. That being said, replying to a project thread with a simple negative like “that sucks” will not be tolerated, as it is out-right flaming and will not be allowed here. As defined by the Merriam-Webster dictionary, Constructive means “promoting improvement or development <constructive criticism>”1 Constructive criticism would be along the lines of “I think you did a good job of ___, however, I think that your custom would benefit from trying to ___”. Constructive criticism allows all of us to grow as artists, to push our envelopes and become better at what we do, and also does not needlessly, or pointlessly insult each other. Likewise, please accept the fact that your customs might not always meet everybody's aesthetic taste. Be a sport.

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While you did offer some encouragement to him as an artist, you've failed to mention anywhere in your post what you think isn't working so far in his project as well as how to fix those things. I think this is something to keep in mind:

Not to be rude , my friend , but this is one of your bad customs.
You are an awesome Customizer , as long as you stay at your great Repaints!
I know you and your custom style over an year now , and i dont think that Heavy mods like this fits for you.
Look at your Landmine , this was really awesome , and you did not need more mods.
For this , It definitaly needs some more work , cuz now it looks like a Truck front on a little Steel stripe D:
Dont missunderstand me , my pal , i only want to say that you can maybe do it better with some more practise ^^

That mod makes all the difference with this toy! He reminds me of a digibashed concept I did for a Decepticon Medic back when the first Bay movie was out.
Yours is looking good. I may go back and do one of my own!

That mod makes all the difference with this toy! He reminds me of a digibashed concept I did for a Decepticon Medic back when the first Bay movie was out.
Yours is looking good. I may go back and do one of my own!

Yaaay! A little update here!
I´ve done not much to him but now he´s got his missing stomach (well...kind of XD ), some new weapons and some better armored legs
For the weapons I used this tiny minigun-blade-thingy from movie 1 Deluxe Brawl and for his biiig cutting blade I used an armclaw from leaderclass Brawl. I simply enlarged a little pin-with-hole on his arm, put the claw on it and screw it down with a screw from...I think Blackout XD
Also the big claw can rotate, so it fits perfectly within the altmode, same for the little claws
Currently I´m priming him and then... Damn I need some ideas for him XD
I will come up with something later
Enjoy the pics!
C&C´s are welcome