I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up your great work.

Thank you,

Terri

Guest chapter 3 . 6/22/2014

YOU BUTT HEAD! HOW DARE YOU LEAVE A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT AND NOT UPDATE FOR TWO FLIPPIN' YEARS!? KKDJWOFJEIFGBNQKZOFNEKFNRJFNRJFNEIFN
*runs away to the farhest corner and starts uncharacterlly sobbing my guts out*

Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2014

Um... Shouldn't this be the prologue, not the epilogue?

Guest chapter 3 . 5/23/2014

It's mostly good, but they would react more to how Harry was treated at the Dursleys. They don't say anything about the cupboard.

Forgotmypassword chapter 3 . 4/20/2014

O_O Wait, I shouldn't be suprised. My sister is pregnant. And she's only seventeen! By the way, that should be a prolouge, not an epilouge.

Guest chapter 3 . 4/15/2014

You are in violation of the site rules.

You CANNOT have Rowling's words mixed in. Please remove this at once or risk being suspended. Do read the rules, otherwise I'll be considering you one of the world's biggest idiots.

You need more interrunpions. The fact that Harry slept in a cupboardis gone unnoticed, and Im sure, they didnt know that. Same is with the fact Harry is/was a Parselmouth. At least Bill and Charlie shouldnt know that...What I (kinda) like is the cliffhanger...its a good idea, but...wel, its a cliffhanger! I hate these things (except when I write it myself...)
Marvelgeek42

Wow. That was definately a suprise. I did NOT expect Ginny to be pregnant... anywasy Great job! I really like this book! its really well written, the charachters are accurate and the plot is great! i cant wait to see what happens next i really like the different spin on things i cant wait to read the next chapter PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Ok, so this is after the war, right? If that is so, than Fred is dead. It's impossible for him to be alive unless something different happened. You should really explain that more.
Everything else is fine, but the punctuation in the talking is a bit wrong. It goes like this:
"I'm pregnant," Ginny announced.
Or if it is an exclamation point or a question mark, you leave that there. Such as:
"What's up, Gin?" Bill asked her.
Other than that, it's great! Please continue!