Very nicely written...I especially love this stanza..
Hovering on the ceiling of the world
Among the clouds
A little lower than the angels
But higher than the dirt.
I love the way that you phrased that..

I love the way this is almost ike a story, and not just a poem. A complete sotry that is. You should be rpoud of this. I love the line about 'our Eden'. And while, honestly, the title is cliche (as are most of my titles) your poem is anything but. It takes a standard idea and expands it, making it unique. Well done.

Wow Claire. The best part about your writing is the incredible imagery that you use. I think though the poem itself is a little confusing-huh? Why doesn't he really love her? or-what's up? But then..confusing poetry is good ;)