OMG! Your story is really interesting! You reaaaalllllyyyy need to update! I see you haven't updated your story in a few months and I don't know if you stopped writing it, but you should keep going! So please update!

Ohh, Amelia! I like that in the first chapter you kind of set her up to be "the sidekick... the one inserted in the story for comic relief." and I'm sure that no one would have even questioned that, you know? So I really like that she sort of broke out of that in this chapter- I hadn't expected it at all. Also, I forgot to mention in my last review, I like how Alex can't tell lies and the school's name is Abe Lincoln High :)