credit:
teen titans by bonzai
mummy from metal slug by croix and soldiers by grim
base for cadaverous by Deekman
Naruto sprites by Deekman
Effects by Cloud TK and Sammy Studios

ok I'm starting to work everything out, you may notice some spelling mistakes....sorry about that, I'm going to check my spelling from now on, if you have some suggestions I'd like that, please no flames some advice might be good though

with comic five you'll notice some of the panels have small text, I messed up with photoshop so I just put in text from paint, but at least it's readable

Last edited by Cadaverous on Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:33 pm, edited 26 times in total.

They are pritty good did you make the characters yourself? or did you get some help?

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Cadaverous wrote:I din't make any of the sprites, the teen titans were made by banzai, the credit part has who the sprites belong to, and you said pretty good how can I make it better?

I can't see the last two because the imaging is so small, but that's beyond the point. I love funny comics more then anything and I like the idea, I'm not too sure how you can improve think about them and try to make them as funny as possible, I kinda liked the first one that introduces Naruto that was good! I laughed when he intoduced himself it's soo like him!

"I've got a firm policy on gun control. If there's a gun around, I want to be the one controlling it."
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-Guns don't kill people, husbands that come home early do
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"I've got a firm policy on gun control. If there's a gun around, I want to be the one controlling it."
-Guns don't kill people, Crazy a$$ motherf*****s do
-Guns don't kill people, husbands that come home early do
Check out some of my latest art:
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That one was good the onlything that that needs some fixing is the size of the talk bubbles should be a little bigger for longer frases, and I think you should change Cyborgs font to a darker blue, so it's not as harsh on our eyes.

"I've got a firm policy on gun control. If there's a gun around, I want to be the one controlling it."
-Guns don't kill people, Crazy a$$ motherf*****s do
-Guns don't kill people, husbands that come home early do
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