yeah nice old skool vibes on the intro, nice clean break... nice bass sound.. way too loud in the mix! Nice vocals coming in at 2:40... start to get a little repetitive after a while. Really needed some new elements added at 4:01... there's not alot to say about this tune really cos it's quite simple. I think this tune suffers from the same thing that most of your tunes do... in that the structure is a little rigid... things only ever change after 16 bars etc... i think you need to add things in other places.... build-ups and one off noises.. things that only last a couple of seconds and then are never heard again.