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FAR FROM HOME
An excerpt
The young girl, Hamida Khatun, dropped out of the bus like an elf, flung
the ball of clothes wrapped in a large bed sheet over her shoulder and
looked at the city. The city danced in front of her like a forest
fire. Cars, trucks, scooters, rickshaws, all in an incestuous orgy,
zipping by like scrambling insects, blaring mad shrieks out of metal
domes and rickety handlebars capped with tingling bells, thumbs
breaking cartilage just to push the rusted lever down and up to make a
sound of presence. Bulging eyes, genitals pronging out of them ogled
Hamidaís lithe figure under a hot August sun, the bus pulled away the
faces carrying the eyes, Hamida blissfully clueless about the thousand
volts of blood her form has sent to the loins of the backed up
passengers that didnít dare talk to her during the trip, for her lovely
autumnal face was besmirched in a frown that could prologue the dashing
out of a suckling babyís brains, they stayed away from her, and fondled
her with their drooling eyes when the distance was safe.
The thrashbang conundrum of the city was different from the sound of her
motherís lifeless body, the echo of it still fresh in her ears but not
near strong enough to pull out a tear. Her father was back there in
the village where people died every night after toiling only to stalk
back home with broken backs and empty stomachs, burn energy the only
way accessible to them, humping illiterately, and shedding foolish
tears when nature kicked them in the gut with another stomach to
starve.
Her father would make it much better now. Alone. Solitude around him
like a blanket and he grinning ecstatically, embracing it with the
power of love. He didnít like the city, never wanted to relocate no
matter how many opportunities may have shown promise. He didnít stand
in his daughterís way when she upped and left. He was through with
people, through with living with them, through with having his solitude
cut in mid-stream each time someone opened her mouth, wife, daughter,
so he bid goodbye to both with the laugh of a vaudeville spectator, and
looked forward to the rest of his days and to greet the end without
distractions, concentrated, alone.
Hamida pushed all that to the back of her thoughts and began taking in
Dhaka not in slow and measured inhales, but in large gasping, devouring
breaths as if it was evading her and threatening to run away.
Rejuvenation had birthed within her and it needed evolution, it needed
all of her spirit behind it, every ounce, none of it could be shared,
wasted, forsaken on trivialities. The city had beckoned her and she
answered the call. Now her own self had had the urge passed on to it
and it was courting her attention with all its might and it needed her
to run to it without a glance elsewhere without blinking without
thinking without contemplating with nothing but emancipation, of which
she now had plenty, like her father.
The bus eyes had left. New ones filled their void. They filled the
world around her, their bodies sliding into invisible capsules like
pawns, and yes eyes, eyes enlarging in their faces like tumors and
devouring her like unfed sharks. She had never been so devoid of her
surrounding as she was at that moment. The village with its contagion
of reputation kept her parents on their toes, and subsequently her, no
matter how cavalier was her attitude, and in spite of all vehemence she
feigned responsibility. Looking into her fatherís face helped. He
seldom gave her orders and never expected her to change. It was the
cantankerous venomous disposition of her mother that made the old man
raise his voice at Hamida when she was younger. When he did, Hamida
heard the reluctance in his voice, saw the pain in his eyes, felt the
disgust he had of his own existence.
Dhaka had the promise of change. To change that. Pull her out of the
stagnant cesspool of village etiquette and false pride. She saw none
of the equilibrium she had already upset with her appearance. Her
unconventionally hazel eyes stalwart against their white backdrop like
precious stones, her grandmotherís sari snaking up her body like vines
around a Roman column, long undulating tresses falling down her back
like a stroke of black paint with a wide brush. Her arms came out of
her shoulders like marble sculptures, the feet protruded out form under
the helm of the sari like little white mice caught in the straps of her
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