Hey, good work. I would recommend, as many others have said, to take the pace down a few notches. Also, maybe make it more personal. I want to know why YOU would choose this camera. Why YOU like it. I didn't watch the entire thing but sounds to me mostly like a guide and run through of what functions/options the camera has. Almost sounds you're reading off a script. Make it personal :)﻿

I enjoyed this summary probably the detail you gave would only be picked up by people who knew what you were talking about for beginners you need to slow down. The features you are talking about are really advanced and we need to understand how they affect our use of this wonderful camera thank you I learnt a bit more.﻿