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This story has a really good plot, but is it supposed to be "After the Fall"? Because the previous issue was still "Before the Fall" and you didn't say what happened to the main character in that issue.

Zepher is becoming a hollywood writer. I love this story and how you dropped us in the middle of nowhere to eventually tie up both sides together and make us say OOOOHHHHH! I understand now. I love movies like that.

eclipsegrafx wrote:Zepher is becoming a hollywood writer. I love this story and how you dropped us in the middle of nowhere to eventually tie up both sides together and make us say OOOOHHHHH! I understand now. I love movies like that.

Keep em coming.

Exactly. The Fall is the center of the story, but I'm skipping around it. This story is told in majorly not chronological order, but I think it will make sense to everyone. The great thing about planning way ahead is that I don't have to have "Oh S***, will this actually work and piece together" moments, since I have planned out how it will work!

Have always loved your stories. You need some more pieces, or time, or another builder to create more detailed scenes however. Things I really liked from the comic was the idea that people had built enough to survive. Usually don't hear/see that in apoc stories. I also liked the idea of O.H. Looking forward to more as usual!

legorevolution wrote:Have always loved your stories. You need some more pieces, or time, or another builder to create more detailed scenes however. Things I really liked from the comic was the idea that people had built enough to survive. Usually don't hear/see that in apoc stories. I also liked the idea of O.H. Looking forward to more as usual!

When I'm less pressed for time and featuring scene, I'll build scenes. Since this was mostly a narration comic, scenes take the back seat. When it is an action comic, scenes matter more. It was just snippets of his view here and there, so it was meant to be small scenes. I promise, I have more in store when we get to more interesting places and battles.