Excellent job, Main, you did real well on this one. I found Neville's message particularly interesting. Was there a reference to J.D.'s fic in there (the title at least)? The part with the probe had me a little confused, was it manned or unmanned? A little shorter than the last one, but that worked out well for me this week. Nothing wrong with it that I noticed, wonderful job. 10/10_________________Randomly invading your fanfiction since 2006.

Short, but nice. Like all the pieces of this series, Mainevent, I quite enjoyed it. If it needed further proving, this chapter demonstrated that this story is a work entirely of your own creation. This new development has great potential - this new fellow seems interesting. Morally ambiguous to say the least - a very creepy ending, by the way. I am very eager to see where you take it.