They both seem a *cough* little *cough* out of character, but otherwise good. I don't think Ginny really would have kept the secret, but ran off and told the whole train, but that's my opnion.
*Daniele*

if there was way more detail and a dffernet ending this could have been so much better. I really like the idea of your story. I love Draco/Hermione pairings =]. It just seems the endng was so rushed. I mean there could have been a chapter on Draco's father finding out and what he does,and also a chapter on their children going to hogwarts maybe. I don't know. But this story has a lot of possibility.