Whoa. Twisty. But I still have hope that Lucca is still alive, somewhere...

And Harle...I'm wondering who she is now...Maybe she's part of Schala, too - or maybe part of Lucca somehow? Or someone else altogether? Sorry, I haven't played Chrono Cross for quite awhile and I've forgotten a lot so I hope I'm not missing something that the game revealed...

Since I don't particularly like Chrono Cross all that much (because they killed off Lucca and barely mention the characters from Chrono trigger) I wasn't expecting to care for this fic, but it's actually pretty good! It's well written with few errors that I noticed.

I'm wondering, if Lucca thought far enough ahead to send the letter to Porre for Kid, then why didn't she get the rest of the children out of there before Lynx came? Of course, then there wouldn't be anyone for Serge to rescue when he goes back in time...Anyway, I will wait and see what happens in the next chapter! I'm a Lucca/Magus fan so I hope that somehow he will save her, in spite of Chrono Cross events.

I love this fic. Lucca does seem a bit toned down, but otherwise, I love your style. The choice of words, coupled with the flowing-ness of it has sparked my interest. Watch I shall.

Aet chapter 3 . 4/25/2005

Lucca's POV doesn't seem very... well, Lucca-like. Less chipper, less bragging, less bravado. She's more realistic the way you've written her.

I love the way you've portrayed Magus. Instead of just furthering the notions of an arrogant, brooding and angsty character, you unearth the depths of his dark reasoning. He retains his shroud of mystery, and yet he is the most human rendition of Magus I've seen.

I really, really, really, REALLY want to know what Magus is talking about. And don't rush! This is wonderful. Just update when you can so that it will stay that way, even if it means a torturous wait for us readers. I look forward to reading more and finding out what is going to happen to everyone...darn you Magus and your prophetic-ness!

Lianndre chapter 2 . 4/2/2005

Wow. I really liked the way you wrote both chapters of this fic. You have an excellent way with words and you captured everyone very accurately. Thumbs up! I can't wait for more.