I absolutely LOVED this. Gosh, I can't tell you how much!
I really liked the interaction between Pietro and Charles, I mean like, SO FREAKING MUCH. Specially how tactile you portrayed Charles, I kind of imagine him like that n_n
And sadly, it is kind of true, consciously or not Charles is the best at manipulating people :/
I can't seriously wait fro the other ones of this, they're gonna be awesome feucgnfes.
I'm all in for stories of Pietro and Charles (I'd write a heart but I know the three is the only thing that's going to apear... hmm, don't really know why.
Anyway, really lovely, thumbs up!

Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2015

I found this very entertaining and would love to read more of your work!

That was amazing. I'm very impressed by your characterization of Peter, your writing style, and your imagination. The only parts that felt off: Charles' personality here was closer to Old!Charles than to Young!Charles, and there was more hand-holding going on than I imagine these guys would do. The rest of it was great, though. I was thrilled to find out it was so long. You took time to explore not just one event in Peter's life, but several, and to flesh him out as a person instead of a punchline while still making excellent use of humor. This was a treat to read.