Woohoo, finished my first draft! Any willing readers?

Wow, that feels good. Tthis still needs a lot of work, but I would love to first get some feedback about the content, structure, etc. so I know if I should start over completely or just tweak tweak tweak. Any takers?Thanks, you all are the best! (Seriously, I'm so glad I found this site! Thanks to whoever posted this on del.icio.us.)