I Am so glad you did this story. I'm so glad you have embraced writing and not just helping everyone else.

What great little story you have given us. So true to the internal battle Fiona and Eddie have towards each other. Very well written and captured.

When are Fiona and Eddie going to stop be so stubborn and admit to themselves they are crazy about each other and their fighting is just their way of not facing their true feelings. : )

If they weren't wildly attracted to each other they would be indifferent and complacent towards each other, no need to fight...their fights are smoke and mirrors.

Really great story. I can see Eddie having this dream...he felt destroyed over potentially causing harm to Fiona...it's very believable. Love your word choice too, your skilled background shines through when you write.