Hook Your Reader

[ON HOLD] Nobody will ever know how incredible your book is if they don't read it.
And for that you need a hook. A unique opening line that touches the core of the story, that temptingly hints to what they'll find inside, that compels your reader to read on.
Here are ten tips to hook your reader and get more reads.

"I felt the icy cold grass against my feet as a ran faster, I took no time to stop and look at my surroundings, I just had one goal, run."
Is my first sentence, my book is very um.. yeah you get it :> You should read it when its done