I really like the the first one. The second one.. If its on a shirt its leaning, its not going to have a nice balance. Maybe you could play around with the crazy jaw. Try a few versions of the first one. That would be my opinion.

Shit I'm bad for not thinking things through and leaving live five hundred comments in a row but. I'd also like to mention the anticipation of the first pose is better than having the actual actual of the second. (Like he's ABOUT to take the belt off, versus he's already snapping it off. Which would be funnier in a cartoon but not in a single shot)

I like the second sketch the best. It has movement and a more intense emotion. I'd like to see a version of the shirt with no words (same with the Donald Bastard shirt), and an option to have the picture smaller and over the left chest. I think that would look sharp on a polo. Do they charge you to upload new designs? If not, I think a variety of layout options for each design would do wonders for sales.

The first was definitely too weird. The second is more recognizable. Nobody is going to stand there and question whether he should be taking his belt off yet or not, and with it already snapped, the image is immediately related to the words.

The second design looks much stronger, although I miss the bulge from the first one.

I think the second design will really work once you've got the letters arranged in a dynamic design around George. Punching the flying button into the foreground by having it overlap something would be killer.

Actually I just realized that there is a certain amount of volume in the jaw. What I meant is that the opposite edge of his mouth seems to have no relationship to the jaw. It should really stretch IN THE DIRECTION of the end of the jaw. I hope that makes sense.