The descriptions and the colours... You paint such a wonderful picture.

This is from the point of the basilisk, right? It really works. It's so... I want to say in character, although obviously the basilisk didn't have much character in the first place, but what I'm trying to say is that it really makes you *feel* for the snake.

It's short, but sometimes the best things are short. And it's wonderful.

My apologies, I'm not a fan of slash / Also, this caught my eye as I was scrolling down your profile! What an intriguing subject to write about! I think you captured the basilisk's feelings very well considering the fact that it's, well, a /basilisk/ XD For something so short, you managed to portray a lot of emotion!

I've never read a story from the point of view of the basilisk before, but I liked it. I like how it was almost excited at the appearance of Tom Riddle (Voldemort) even though most would dread that. Also the writing was good, and it was very descriptive.