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224 kil. [Hi Please Read All] This is a small, small movie about Trevor Jr. It's a tribute to Magical Trevor, by weebl. This is my first "serouis" flash and when I say that I meen like not a movie about stick figures fighting at 5 fps and running for 2 seconds. Im sorry about the 3 sound effects, I couldnt get any more they kept falling out of sync. Anyway please constructive critiscm, tips would be great. Thanks for watching.

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Rated 3 / 5 stars2008-12-29 02:08:39

I would've liked it better if it wasn't giving the impression that it was going to be a Son of Magical Trevor's parody

It was interesting that you only used only sound effects instead of traditionally choreographing the movements to a song.

Good for a first flash, when using sound effects assign them to a separate layer and in the music properties, make it stream.

Also, when using tweens to shrink movie clips please don't use movie clips that change while they shrink/grow (the eyes blinking while they were getting smaller) it doesn't look right. (however this is apposed to the movie clip changing colors, now that is cool while it shrinks/grows).

It would've been all-around better too if the artwork were a little more better until the "paper world" came around. (like the environments weeble-stuff use)

I hope that criticism is constructive enough. 4/5 (not gonna be offensive, yet gonna give you something to aim for)