Okay, I really hope that this one doesn’t violate any forum rules, but I’m looking for a little bit of help, so bear with me.

About a year ago, I wrote a Story about a 24 hour race for national novel writing month. I’m now trying to revisit it to turn it into an E-book, but I could really do with some second opinions from some Motosport fans on the way it reads. It’s not trying to be overly technical, but I could really do with some feedback on it from a motorsport fans perspective – most of the writers I know get snooty over the concept of sports, never mind racing.

anyone want a read, with a view to giving me your opinions? its currently 110 pages in its first draft.

as I said, I’m sorry if this violates any forum rules – couldn’t think of anywhere else to put it!