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Are you kidding me? Honest to goodness, on...Bill? Are you kidding me? Honest to goodness, one of the best pieces I've ever read; really. Great writing. I hope you realize that.RzDrmsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-12520724884773450652009-03-14T21:32:00.000-04:002009-03-14T21:32:00.000-04:00That was great! Glad you're all ok too.That was great! Glad you're all ok too.Mainline Momhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01573900907169057680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-81091051126416357182009-03-14T07:07:00.000-04:002009-03-14T07:07:00.000-04:00I was thinking that Victor Borge would have had a ...I was thinking that Victor Borge would have had a sign for the finger link... I am not sure if you are aware of his quotation shtick??? LOL its to die for... LOL<BR/><BR/>GREAT STORY!!!Heidihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16327157455249207495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-10139426353680174062009-03-13T22:32:00.000-04:002009-03-13T22:32:00.000-04:00I love this post. So much so that I thought of it ...I love this post. So much so that I thought of it many times during the day and even came back to read it two more times. Whoever said you were "obviously not a writer" can suck it. That is all.Aprilhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10546710584372716343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-27708962296683386142009-03-13T10:53:00.000-04:002009-03-13T10:53:00.000-04:00I agree with the two previous commentors - out of ...I agree with the two previous commentors - out of the mouths of babes!<BR/><BR/>Macadam! Ha! When I used that word after moving to Texas, people looked at me funny. Must be a PA word. My sister still says it.Sherihttp://www.celebratingwomen.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-71042292147854482862009-03-13T08:49:00.000-04:002009-03-13T08:49:00.000-04:00Susie took my comments.Max finishes the piece perf...Susie took my comments.<BR/>Max finishes the piece perfectly!kcinnovahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16705613736966783261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-89429775190333924222009-03-13T03:04:00.000-04:002009-03-13T03:04:00.000-04:00That last sentence is what did it, perfect ending....That last sentence is what did it, perfect ending.<BR/><BR/>It's always the swears that the kids remember, isn't it?sarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16144333694009700155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-54887823951975667982009-03-13T01:29:00.000-04:002009-03-13T01:29:00.000-04:00I was holding my breath through the entire thing. ...I was holding my breath through the entire thing. Holy...glad you all are ok.tracihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10951176913462356992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-38410593346551208762009-03-12T20:37:00.000-04:002009-03-12T20:37:00.000-04:00I too felt like I was right there with ya! WOW! &a...I too felt like I was right there with ya! WOW! &amp; I loved every minute of it! <BR/>Love, Cathy &amp; the quads<BR/>itsaquadlife.blogspot.comFulton Quadshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16620256714924982520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-75810157380040108502009-03-12T20:00:00.000-04:002009-03-12T20:00:00.000-04:00Yeah, like what Susie said, I also like how you co...Yeah, like what Susie said, I also like how you connected the sensory stuff between your life flashes and the moment. Also some nice descriptions. And the ending was perfect.kalkihttp://imjustsaying.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-60659966482077769092009-03-12T19:24:00.000-04:002009-03-12T19:24:00.000-04:00Clearly you ARE a writer.Clearly you ARE a writer.Michellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13882448458180804503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-42694131048726110802009-03-12T18:56:00.000-04:002009-03-12T18:56:00.000-04:00I love this piece. Having been a passenger in a ca...I love this piece. Having been a passenger in a car that was involved in a significant car accident as a teen, I relate all too well to that life-flashes-before-your-eyes moment that you have between initial onset and conclusion of the event.<BR/><BR/>I hung on your every word. Absolutely brilliant.Carmihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00360045114379957605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-40034132313453100232009-03-12T18:49:00.000-04:002009-03-12T18:49:00.000-04:00Creative Writing project, or "Near Death Experienc...Creative Writing project, or "Near Death Experience"???? My God! What a ride! Nice job, but scary! You always know how to get peoples attention. Just what did that teacher say! Was she exhausted as I am now? the drama was a bit too much to handle. Glad it all turned out well. Good ole Max, putting his dad in his place.Don't ever take my grandkids in the car again!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-29050481822122659972009-03-12T18:35:00.000-04:002009-03-12T18:35:00.000-04:00As I am a math guy your writing prowess is lost on...As I am a math guy your writing prowess is lost on me. I'd give you a 4.00^2 overall with +/- .02 precision for grammar.JPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01468967573202811526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-47540380467566309862009-03-12T15:38:00.000-04:002009-03-12T15:38:00.000-04:00This was wonderful! I loved how each second fed in...This was wonderful! I loved how each second fed into the next second and each screech of the car fed into another screech in your life.<BR/><BR/>Incredible! Fun! Entertaining! You should tape yourself reading it aloud and post :) I bet you have a GREAT reading voice without that crazy beard in your mouth's way now, hah!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the great little insight into your life for a while.Little Miss English Teacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15502229874099798730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-85570438047937608972009-03-12T11:07:00.000-04:002009-03-12T11:07:00.000-04:00I could only read up to the part about your weddin...I could only read up to the part about your wedding when I started to tear up. Soooo good!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-36583583144199617012009-03-12T10:28:00.000-04:002009-03-12T10:28:00.000-04:00William, You have to let us know your teacher's ap...William, You have to let us know your teacher's appraisal of your first assignment. Question? I was so excited for my brother to read my blog. I was hoping for "Great job sis, it looks like you are really have fun with this." What I got was constructive criticism. UGGGH I'm not speaking to him until he appologizes! You began your post with "not looking for feedback", but did your heart hope for all of the kudos? By the way, I love that you used the word macadam - I'm all about nuts! Elizabethcreative breathinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10973995314752982177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-9390985382073975482009-03-12T09:53:00.000-04:002009-03-12T09:53:00.000-04:00I think macadam must be a Pennsylvania word becaus...I think macadam must be a Pennsylvania word because I never heard it before I moved here. Actually, isn't it a guy's name?<BR/><BR/>I'm curious about whether you ever submitted any of your blog posts as your assignments? I think this is good, and I can tell you spent some time on it. But I think some of your posts are just as good or better.<BR/><BR/>Like Susie, I thought the way you used the sensory experiences to connect the present and the past was really cool. Great job!Sharkeyhttp://sharkeymalarkey.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-92021965541238573142009-03-12T09:14:00.000-04:002009-03-12T09:14:00.000-04:00I think I also held my breath. Did you write that ...I think I also held my breath. Did you write that in one sitting, or do you revise your writing to turn out like that?Melissahttp://www.sophieanderson.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-37277418430935519192009-03-12T07:56:00.000-04:002009-03-12T07:56:00.000-04:00Great work, Bill.If I had one negative, it would b...Great work, Bill.<BR/><BR/>If I had one negative, it would be that the first paragraph felt like you were trying too hard... the rest of the narrative flowed nicely, but the first felt, I don't know... <I>off</I>.<BR/><BR/>(No offense meant; just trying to be honest.)SciFi Dadhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10479890087443823197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-20203521065907337072009-03-12T07:44:00.000-04:002009-03-12T07:44:00.000-04:00Anonymous took my comment -- Jesus, take the wheel...Anonymous took my comment -- Jesus, take the wheel, indeed.<BR/><BR/>Bad-word that person who said you're not a writer. Told ya so.<BR/><BR/>I love how you connected the sensory experiences in the moment to scenes from your life. Excellent device. <BR/><BR/>So thankful for the happy ending. Keep up the good work! (Uh, the writing, not the near-misses. Why do they call it "near-miss?" It's actually a total miss, but a near-hit, you know?)<BR/><BR/>(Oh, and I still have to go look up macadam.)Susiehttp://whatwasithinking.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-25660707916369953982009-03-12T04:13:00.000-04:002009-03-12T04:13:00.000-04:00A plus, from your writing critic in England.(had t...A plus, from your writing critic in England.<BR/>(had to look up macadam...never heard it before.)Melindahttp://www.pickworth.me.uk/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10922754.post-76794117916804070132009-03-12T03:33:00.000-04:002009-03-12T03:33:00.000-04:00I would give you an A+. I think I held my breath t...I would give you an A+. I think I held my breath til Max made me laugh! Great ending.mamabrownhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04201958002207739162noreply@blogger.com