omgosh, this was ...SUCH a GREAT POEM
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the symbolism is just what TOTALLY did it for me! i just fell for this poem when you used the lines for the book.
omgosh excellent, please ,please PLEASE don't stop writing!
(really gives an outside/exiled feeling on the readers view. if i were the person who you say is "I" then I would feel so conused)
excellente.
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ml