Comments about A Never Ending by hasmukh amathalal

Life seems to me as no problem at all
I take it as challenge and useful call
What is use of crying over split milk?
When there is no water even to drink
A well deserved poem of the day, congratulations, A lovely isometric view of life has been painted with beautiful colors.
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Congrats on having this poem as poem of the day...This poem has a very positive message but it seems to just ramble on and on...it would sound so much better if it could be constructed in a more orderly manner...but this is just a personal opinion which I hope would be taken positively...
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A very, very positive and uplifting poem that embraces The essence of reality! In life, there are those who choose to travel through thorny paths and time will prove them wrong when there is not left to go back to the past for amendments! This is only one life to live and the rest remain a sad illusion! A very well penned and poignant poerm110+++ Keep inspiring the World my fellow poet! Love and Peace for always! ...
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You are sharing treasure by your writing, thank you again. You seem to want to share kindness always, we should be gratefull. I believe poets live forever, its not just a cliche. Transcending thought will help your spirit to escape the physical, materialism never brings happiness only bitterness. I can say in a moment you can be gone but your words will be read a million times.
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'I wish I have some treasure to share
I searched all over but found no where'
Well, sir, I can see your treasure
It feeds me, I'll have a tiny slice
if you dont mind
Your poems, I can't measure
nor explain how good it feels
to have a bit of share.
Thank you
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hey friend i.tink you have wrong tink, about this poem.LIFE NEVER ENDING, in the world not eternely just temporary, i.tink life ending if some poeple died, but your poem realy great, God luck.
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