Zomg! Orihime's face. Uh, I give up. Originally, I had her looking all terrified with Ichi backlit. Okay, it looked like the future sight of a rape scene. Srsly. I creeped myself out with it. So I change it to this... Now she looks too stupid to be afraid....

Wow, this is really good. From what I can see, with the choice of words, style of drawing and whole feel of the piece, in my opinion, it looks like something Kubo could actually draw in Bleach.

Obviously, Hollow Ichigo's face shows the most emotion, but I also like how you didn't show us Ichigo's face so how he is feeling right now is left up to the viewer's interpretation. Is he frightened? Is he furious? Is he stunned? We don't know, but we can have some pretty good guesses.

As for Orihime, her face intrigues me as well since she is not showing much of a reaction. She doesn't seem really surprised, stunned, curious but kind of a mixture of all of those emotions. The only emotions that I can clearly say are not being represented are happiness or fear. It's not quite a blank look, but it's really hard to read.

Wow, I am stunned! The picture tell the story it's self to the viewers! It is beautifully done by the way!

For my guess I would say that Hichigo (Shiro?) came back to have a little fun with his King.

You can't really tell what Ichigo is feeling right now, since you decided to not draw his face and I love it! And Inoue may look a tad bit stupid, but I think it makes the picture even more magical and playing in the characters! Mysterious you could call it, maybe? :>

So Orihime was originally looking more terrified? Hmm that would've been nice to see. I think it would've added more impact to this lovely art despite the darkness. But I love this little comic!! *favs* Good job!

ZOMG I LOVE THIS!!! IM SOOO PUTTING YOU ON MY FAVOURITES!!!! It doesn't matter about her face! Don't worry about it! Althoughhhh ya should make another one with the terrified expression *contemplative look* yeah it would be interesting to see your first drawing. But overall it's amazing. I love it! GOOD JOB!!!!

I must say i love what you did here, Hollows are represent the "Darkness" in the human heart, which no one can truely be rid off, while one may Delude him or herself that they are free from their shadow they are only setting themselves up to be swallowed by it, the basest of instincts, feral and destructive, as is in ichigo's case, he may have thought he was permanently rid of Hichigo, but this is showing him otherwise, simply stunning

I'm Analytical about details, and as a person who used to deal with anger control problems, i understand the concept of the eternal struggles of Light and dark within ones self, but it is this struggle that drives us to overcome our problems, but to believe that you are free of that darkness cuz you have overcome a serious problem is wrong, one can never be truly free from ones shadow

she makes it look like hichi is just a ghost, which for some reason she can't see, only ichigo can. e_e like those horror movies, i dont remember which ones, the character goes around haunted and it gets in their daily life, they can't even get a cup of coffee you get, like, a jump scare.