This is not meant as a personal attack, but I think you need to scrap this whole topic. It was painful to read and I personally found very little in terms of redeemability.

I would give more specific critiques, but honestly your time would be better spent going back to the drawing board here than trying to massage this into a workable PS.

As one note to keep in mind when you write a PS: this needs to be centered on you. It needs to reveal something about you as a person and how you want the admissions committee to see you. You're bordering on that here, but you could do a much better job at painting an thoughtful, robust image of yourself and your outlook on the world.

matthewsean85 wrote:This is not meant as a personal attack, but I think you need to scrap this whole topic. It was painful to read and I personally found very little in terms of redeemability.

I would give more specific critiques, but honestly your time would be better spent going back to the drawing board here than trying to massage this into a workable PS.

As one note to keep in mind when you write a PS: this needs to be centered on you. It needs to reveal something about you as a person and how you want the admissions committee to see you. You're bordering on that here, but you could do a much better job at painting an thoughtful, robust image of yourself and your outlook on the world.