Twilight Sparkle is called away to tend to Luna when she falls ill. As Luna grows sicker and Twilight more determined to help the younger princess, she begins to uncover dark secrets about the elements, the alicorns, and her own past.

The Elements of Harmony are defeated and Nightmare Moon stands on Equestria's throne as their new Queen. Is Equestria doomed to suffer through night time eternal or will they be... perfectly fine? Twilight finds her new job as slave or "personal assistant" to her new ruler to be a bit maddening. But is this evil sarcastic queen really as bad as she originally believed? And just how many others are diabolical enough to cash in on the change in staff? Can Nightmare truly run a peaceful Equestria? Let me just answer all these questions right here in the description...

Very interesting development, I must say that I like the concept of this story ( especially like the fact that it's lighthearted and not dark). My only real recommendation is to get a proof reader. I noticed a number of punctuation errors as well as one or two spelling errors. It's not a very big issue, but I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi so I just notice these things. KEEP IT UP!

5674that's ridiculous, you're ridiculous, how would that even happen, cakes are filled with cake, there wouldn't even be any room!5676well I got about 2000 more words or so to go, so probably this weekend.... although I still haven't come up with a name for the antagonist yet :T

Nightmare moon is actually likable, in a strange, half-villainous way,Sunny is adorable in a cute-kid-trying-way-too-hard kind of way,Twilight is adorkable,Twi x NMM is well on its way to become another otp of mine (on top of twixy, twiluna, twishy ...),and I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Its sad if its true that Celestia cant be returned.Twilight had many years with Celestia as a mother figure/mentor for her.So she surely cant just give up on that,but i wont rule out this all being a giant prank of Trolestia and Troluna

NNM is still there like we saw in chapter 2, but Luna is mostly in control obviously,and i take it that besides wanting to be loved she wants fun since she missed a 1000 years of fun ,and progress.

The Antagonist could be Trixie- shes boastful and likes to prove herself to be the greatest unicorn who ever lived,so why not to take on NNM and gain eternal glory and thanks from the peasant ponies?

I can just imagine Nightmare Moon acting like it's zero-g and just floating over the cake. She's being all nice and the icing says "It's a trap!". Then everyone bursts out and sees NMM and Twilight laughing their asses (flanks?) off.

5911like I said it was taken directly from one of crappyunicorn's designs, with extremely minor differenceshis art is most definitely the inspiration for this storyhttp://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/23805and he has like 7 other slave Twilight pics as wellalso I couldn't come up with a better design, his was too god damn perfect :[

oh by the way readersif you think a certain scene is particularly good, just say so and I might turn it into a pic like the bed sceneI might do NMM's "Ravage" face first off though :>

6047tonight!!!!!it is done already I just need to proof read it6053I feel like it's sort of an obligation to ravage anything that presents itself to meI mean something/someone is presenting themselves to youit would be rather rude not to