Set Comments<p>Gets really fast after a single Nitro Charge, helping it sweep and making its job easier. Aside from the recoil Flare Blitz is a major threat to most Pokémon and is highly effective. Wild Bolt is for the water type threats that Pokabu faces and will hit them hard with this move. Head Smash uses Pokabu's attack stat to its advantage and is useful in several situations. </p>

Additional Comments

<p> Life Orb is for that extra attacking power, whereas Berry Juice is useful to restore that recoil damage from Flare Blitz. The EVs help it get maximum speed and attack. Entry hazard support is helpful to assist Pokabu in its sweep. </p>

[Team Options]
<p> A Rapid Spinner is useful since it can get rid of major threats such as Stealth Rock that will surely take a toll on Pokabu. A Rock type counter such as a Steel type will be useful to Pokabu.</p>

[Optional Changes]
<p>A Choice Scarf set can be used or a Choice Banded one, to increase Pokabu's speed or attack respectively. Though these are not very effective due to the fact that their defenses are still low and they can't play the same role the sweeper does. It also gets outclassed by other Pokémon such as Meraruba. Will-o-Wisp is an option but it isn't effective due to Pokabu's low defenses. </p>

[Counters]

<p>If Pokabu is not set up, faster Pokemon such as Staryu, Diglett, and Buizel can easily defeat it, even if a Nitro Charge is used, most scarfers still outspeed it. Rock types usually wreck Pokabu due to it being a major weakness to Pokabu. </p>

I would suggest rewriting sentences like "Highly prone to revenge kills though." and "Gets really fast after a single Nitro Charge." It lacks and subject and doesn't have the formality that analysis's on site have.

Other than that I believe Nitro Charge should be the first move, but I might be mistaken on that.

Other people have mentioned it in this thread before but this analysis is nowhere near being up to quality standards. Read some examples of analyses on site to get an idea of the kind of quality that we're looking for out of contributors.

Other people have mentioned it in this thread before but this analysis is nowhere near being up to quality standards. Read some examples of analyses on site to get an idea of the kind of quality that we're looking for out of contributors.

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I know.
I did this one in a rush, its not complete. I'll get working on it soon.

Set Comments<p>Tepig gets really fast (how fast?) after a single Nitro Charge, helping it sweep and making its job easier. Aside from the recoil, Flare Blitz is a major threat to most Pokémon and is highly effective. Wild Bolt is for the Water-type threats (name some) that Tepig faces and will hit them hard with this move. Head Smash uses Tepig's attack stat to its advantage and is useful in several situations(like when).</p>

Additional Comments

<p>Life Orb is for that extra attacking power, whereas Berry Juice is useful to restore that recoil damage from Flare Blitz (BJ is banned). The EVs help it get maximum speed and attack. Entry hazard support is helpful to assist Pokabu in its sweep.</p>

[Team Options]<p>A Rapid Spinner is useful since it can get rid of major threats such as Stealth Rock that will surely take a toll on Pokabu. A Rock-type counter (like?) such as a Steel-type(like?) will be useful to Tepig.</p>

[Optional Changes]
<p>A Choice Scarf set can be used or a Choice Band one, to increase Tepig's Speed or Attack respectively. Though these are not very effective due to the fact that their defenses are still low and they can't play the same role the sweeper does. It also gets outclassed by other Pokémon such as Meraruba. Will-o-Wisp is an option but it isn't effective due to Tepig's low defenses.</p>

[Counters]

<p>If Tepig is not set up, faster Pokemon such as Staryu, Diglett, and Buizel can easily defeat it, even if a Nitro Charge is used, most scarfers still outspeed it. Rock-types usually wreck Pokabu due to it being a major weakness to Pokabu. </p>

[Dream World]

<p>Thick fat is useless. (why?)</p> ​

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comments in pink. You don't mention Tepig's ability anywhere so you should probably add that.

Just remember there is no space in between the <p> tags and the next word and its <type>-type like Fire-type

I have to say, I think Thick Fat is actually Tepig's better option here, as Overgrow/Blaze/Torrent have little usefulness in LC due to how short everything's life span is + the abundance of priority. Having some extra resistances to switch in on (x4 Fire and Ice due to typing) is much better than a low-HP Fire boost on a Pokemon that's basically a suicide bomber.

I think the idea was to have him be a suicide bomber of sorts, causing big damage to himself, but much bigger damage to whatever he's hitting. :0 Kind of a flawed logic, though, considering his less-than-fantastic speed and how fragile everything in LC is. Set like this might be better with a Choice Scarf if Tepig can hit that 14 Speed.