I think you have the beginnings of what could be a good story here. Keep it up!

~GW

Reviewer: lil_munchkin

Date: 2006-04-28

Reviewid: 142318

Chapter: 1

omg!!! i luv this fic so far!!! i am VERY supportive of the hole Harry/Ginny relationship!!! plz plz plz plz upd8 soon!!!

Reviewer: eleonor potter

Date: 2005-08-29

Reviewid: 131108

Chapter: 1

Where are the other chapters? I want to read more about it, please...

Reviewer: Sara

Date: 2005-05-28

Reviewid: 122957

Chapter: 1

Ok, this is good but I really think you need to finish it like write the sequel or sumthin'

Reviewer: Cybčle

Date: 2005-03-12

Reviewid: 116252

Chapter: 1

Hi!This is a very interesting prologue and I really would like to know what will happen next!

Reviewer: Ria_Stahl

Date: 2005-01-02

Reviewid: 109504

Chapter: 1

Oooooooh!! I know..............Ginny LOVES Tom Riddle, and the only thing she can't give Harry is her 'Love'.................................Uh...sorry, but the 'kid' theory doesn't fit. Ahem...Update? please!

Reviewer: hailey

Date: 2004-09-24

Reviewid: 99279

Chapter: 1

i really really liked this sory but i hope your making a sequel

Reviewer: Valerie

Date: 2004-09-23

Reviewid: 99106

Chapter: 1

Wow, this is so good. It's so well-written; the characters just jump off the page (or screen, I guess). The physcial and emotional description was done really well. Gah, I'm hanging on wondering why Ginny left. I'm looking forward to the next installment :)

Reviewer: Artemis

Date: 2004-09-23

Reviewid: 99078

Chapter: 1

I like this story! It's got serious potential.

Reviewer: Laura

Date: 2004-09-22

Reviewid: 99051

Chapter: 1

Like the beginning and hope to see more. It's coming along really well. And unless I'm mistaken, the line 'fortune's fool' comes from Romeo and Juliet when Romeo learns that Juliet has "died" from Balthazar. Can't wait for more to read! :-)

Wait... that's it! there has to be more. Don't they get back together?! Please write more! This is a really promising start to something, and I hope ull finish.

Reviewer: beck

Date: 2004-08-06

Reviewid: 96080

Chapter: 1

Do hope you write more this is very good =)

Reviewer: Sydney

Date: 2004-08-04

Reviewid: 95829

Chapter: 1

All right, spill!!!! Why did Harry and Ginny split??? I want to know!

Now that you know that, this fic is starting out very well. I enjoy your style, just not the part where you neglect to tell me why in h*ll Ginny and Harry split. Update soon!

Reviewer: Frankie Beeblebrox

Date: 2004-08-04

Reviewid: 95828

Chapter: 1

Interesting beginning. You have a nice flow with words and the dialogue reads quite easily. Can't wait to see where you are going with the plot!

Reviewer: p0tterfan

Date: 2004-08-04

Reviewid: 95612

Chapter: 1

As other people have suggested, she probably can't have kids. Which shouldn't be because she was fine after CoS. But hey, interesting concept nonetheless.

Reviewer: L

Date: 2004-08-04

Reviewid: 95571

Chapter: 1

there's going to be more of this right? interesting concept!

Reviewer: Katja

Date: 2004-08-03

Reviewid: 95518

Chapter: 1

ooh... mysterious and well-written! My bet is that Ginny can't have kids b/c of something to do with the CoS... but I'm probably way off.

Reviewer: emma moon

Date: 2004-08-03

Reviewid: 95475

Chapter: 1

Whoa! Ginny left Harry because they wanted to start a family! I bet she can't have kids because of the Chamber, or something else happened. Argh! Need to know please update soon!

Reviewer: Pineapple Queen

Date: 2004-08-03

Reviewid: 95431

Chapter: 1

Sounds interesting, Carissa! Can't wait for the next update!

-PQ

Reviewer: Agatha Jane

Date: 2004-08-03

Reviewid: 95421

Chapter: 1

Ooh! I hope you post again soon. I really want to know what's going on here! By the way, I think the term 'fortune's fool' is from "Romeo and Juliet". I seem to remember Romeo saying something like 'Oh, I am fortune's fool' or something dramatic like that after he kills Tybalt or gets banished or something. I recently saw a production of that play and I think I heard that in there. Not sure though. Anyway enough rambling---update!

Reviewer: Mary

Date: 2004-08-03

Reviewid: 95385

Chapter: 1

Very intrigued. Keep writing please!

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