First Draft to Proof: The Language of Bees (2)

We’re posting the actual first pages of The Language of Bees, as an illustration of the rewrite process. Yesterday’s first draft has become today’s final proof page (if you have trouble reading this image or yesterday’s, just try clicking on it):

Wonderful to hear that Russell voice again, even if faintly, from a distance; it is like the postcard announcing a beloved friend will be in town later in the spring, would you like to visit? Thanks, Laurie. May the heavens and all your loved ones be kind (or quiet, or sparkling, or mad, whatever you all need in the moment) as Noel’s absence becomes clearer and the futility of negotiation for his physical presence becomes more pronounced. May his spirit truly be at peace, and/or enjoying exploring what comes next.