Strategic Writing Assignment

Though I was a little confused by some of the errors, the first thing I did was decrease the spacing between lines in the header. Next, I clarified some phrases used in the paper, such as “beverages” to “beverages from a machine”. I additionally stated HOW the system would make it easier for consumers to purchase their drinks. I then went on to change some grammatical mistakes, uses of commas and capitalization after a quote. Finally, I fixed a formatting issue at the very end of the paper.