RE: User Submissions

Man this bitch wanna play
I won't play this game, you don't know my name.
But when i come out swinging you'll be ashamed.
Throw dirt on my name
Man, you're all the same.

Hatin' and debatin' ya ego inflatin'
You think you on that tough stuff
oh, yo, you so rough
I'm the real deal
Now how you feel?
Your faits set,
No, fuckin' appeal.

I use to take the shit but not anymore
Not from another loud mouth nigga or a loose pussied whore
If you cant take shit make your way to the door.
My rawness is something to adore.
I've got the anger, i've got the passion and i've got the edge
Real bitch nation, and this the pledge.

Seeing through a damaged iris
Society is sick and you are the virus.
I'm the healer
the deal sealer

I'll never be done
i've already won, this is just for fun
Beat you down you won't rise again
Oh you'll do what? where? when?
I'd advise you to stop you're not hot
Compete with me you cannot?

Good flow real nice,
Good flow real iced
I do this shit was ease
You'd think that it is hard, but i swear its just a breeze.

Dissing good is what I do
You know its true
Brough out the devil
Now get on my level.

[[Feedback please, i cant negative criticism, in fact this is the first place I've ever shared anything I've written...]]

My Music.

So my friends know me as Teddy. I am a 19 year old girl that loves music with every fiber of her being. Having grown up in Philly my music tastes is strongly hip hop but soft rock and certain music calls for me. I'm not a fame seeker or anything I just want to learn more about music and get helpful advice from everyone who is willing. I have recorded 3 videos on youtube of my songs but only one of them sounds good because the laptop's mic is somewhat decent. The other two well they laptop was horrible. I don't own a laptop so they were borrowed ones, just like the one I am using now. Anyways the point is that I want you all to listen to this preview of one of my songs and tell me what you think and what I can do to better it. For the record I don't know how to read music, I learned to play instruments by sound. If anyone out there knows how to read music it would be an honor if you would give me some pointers. Thank you so much.This is my song "Don't Walk Away"Mucho Amor

Lyrics:
Last name Banks, but yo bank account is bankrupt
Lookin' like a mermaid, you obviously a washed cu*t
Your so called fans say the QUEEN ain't even go plat
You're so talented your music comes out your ass
AFAILia was never magic
I mean, from the begging you hoe, you was tragic
You a tragedy
You a parody
Last name banks, first name Azealiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaa
You stupid bitch you're searching promo from the wrong Team
We Team Minaj, put up with nothing we a family B!Tch