A poem for my good friend
He's been dealing with stuff lately...and i felt sorry for him. So, i did a little poem for him, because i knew how he felt. He dosen't deserve to be treated like crap....i hope you feel better man. He's a real nice guy once you get to know him, though he's hella funny too whenever i talk to him on the phone XD.

I love the way the repetition seems to drive home the feelings in this poem. Or, perhaps I should "feeling". It does a wonderful job capturing the emotion that you seemed to conveying. Good job! ^)__(^q

Hey I have to do a photography assignment and I need a poem on which to base my photos ... and I was wondering if I could use your poem (I would give you full credit for it and everything)....
I like you your poem a lot by them way lol