On Saturday I will have a oral class, and my teacher taught us to take a side of the view "Women enjoy equal status as men do in Chinese society".

On Saturday I will have an oral class, and my teacher taught us to take aperspective on the topic "Women enjoy equal status as men do in Chinese society".

I've written a text but don't know whether there are some wrong, so I need your help~ :)

I've written a text but there might be some spelling or grammatical mistakes, so I need your help~ :)

Use "spelling or grammar mistake" don't use "wrong" when writing literature... proverb " there is no right or wrong answer in literature" =)

Please point my mistakes out, thanks!

Please point out my mistakes , thanks!

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Good morning everyone, today my topic is women didn't enjoy equal status as men do in Chinese society.

Good morning everyone, today my topic is "women does not enjoy equal status as men do in Chinese society".

The five-thousand-year Chinese history and culture have run through a concept that women are inferior to men.

The five thousand-year Chinese history and culture have run through a concept that women are inferior to men. The concept of which women is inferior to men has carried on in Chinese history and culture over the last five thousand years.

We can see that every emperor of Chinese dynasty is man, except empress Wu, she is the only woman who ever rule the whole country in history.

We can see that every emperor in Chinese dynasty is male, except empress Wu, she is the only woman in history who has ever ruled the whole country.

wow ... chinese history..

The viewpoint that males are supposed to be worth more than the other sex can be powerful proved by this phenomenon.

The viewpoint that males are more superior than the other sex has been proven by this phenomenon.

Since Reformation and Opening, there is an obviously improve in the status which women situated.

Since Reformation and Opening?, there is an obvious change in the status between women and men today.

Women can get rid of housework for they have fewer time to do that after they earn a profession in society, and men also take on the responsibility to take care of their children.

Women can get rid of housework for they have fewer time to do that after they earn a profession in society, and men also take on the responsibility to take care of their children. Women has less time for housework after they have a profession (or employment) in society, and men can take responsibility of doing house chores.

There is a real example happened on two of my friends.

There is a real life example based on two of my friends.

Lisa and Tom are both the English major graduates from Tianjin Foreign Studies University, and Lisa got a higher GPA than Tom in the 4 year school life.

Lisa and Tom are both English major graduates from Tianjin Foreign Studies University, and Lisa got a higher GPA than Tom in the 4 year school life.

They applying for a same position in a primary school.

They both applied for a position in a primary school.

While after all, the school decided to employ Tom only because he is a man.

At the end, the school decided to employ Tom only because he is a man.

We can't deny that the status of women in Chinese society has risen these years, while we still can't say it is a equal status between men and women.

We can not deny that the status of women has grownoverthe years. Unfortunately, we still, as of today, can not say men and women are of equal status in Chinese society.

It is a fact we can't ignore that women still in a lower position in modern Chinese society.

It is a fact that we can't ignore that women is still in a lower position in modern Chinese society.

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On Saturday I will have a oral class, and my teacher taught us to take a side of the view "Women enjoy equal status as men do in Chinese society".
I've written a text but don't know whether there are some wrong, so I need your help~ :)
Please point my mistakes out, thanks! O(∩_∩)O
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