Not bad, unfortunately for us, your opening statement is painfully true. It is a rare pleasure to find a fic that has been written well and the plot not leaving me questioning what the writer was thinking. So far I like where this is going, and if I can offer some advice, make sure you take your time when writing. This chapter is fine but more often than not fics don't live up to their first chapter. #MR#

Oooooooh i like this soooo much!! It's great! James totally jealous of a MUGGLE? HA!!! Pureblood take that!:) although James is awfully sweet ofcourse it's just nice to tease.. i hope you're planning at least a couple of chapters with jealousy and not let Lily fall for him too fast cause that's just no fun. :) Anyway, keep up the great work and i hope you update VERY soon.