I really like the idea for this! It's dark, creepy and amazing. I love the detailing of feelings and characters. I thought Pyro was the creepiest one but, Heavy was very sweet :) Also, it's great how you stayed true to the characters personalities; This is a great Fanfic.

Very creative and very fitting ways for all of the characters to kill Sherry. I think Pyro was the one that really made me cringe, especially at the end. Damn, that was awesome in a horribly disturbing way. o.o

Dude, this is awesome. Heavy is the only person who actually cares, no big surprise though...but at least you made it sweet and a good job with the Christian Brutal Sniper reference, loved those videos

Anonymous chapter 4 . 12/27/2010

Read the whole thing and loved it.

I especially loved how Heavy acted. He was very sweet. And the only one who didn't brutally kill the girl! It made me like him more. :)

Actually...That's a good death in my book. You see Pyro's face! WOO! Then again, maybe I'm just crazy, because I'm not afraid of torture or death...that is...except for a medical death, like what Medic did. That...that scares me. Everything else not so scary, but Pyro's...that's just awesome, you see their face before death. This was a really good chapter, really. I'm going to shut up now before I make a bigger fool of myself but really, amazing work.