Paper Hearts: Some Writing Advice

THANK YOU EVERYONE for reading this sample of Paper Hearts! Due to popular demand, I've turned this into an actual book, which you can buy from all major online retailers. AND it's actually three books: a volume on writing, one on publishing, and another on marketing.
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I wrote mine in kindergarten and kept writing different books... You can tell it was shitty but as I got older it was making little progress slowly.... Though I still have the feeling that my writing is not good enough and it isn't