Ooooookay.First of all, this story has an amazing potential. But...It's just too short, lacks proper development, and ends in a way that makes you keep flicking the pages because you're sure that can't be it.That said, the characters are likable, there's more than enough drama, and... it's predictable all the way.One (hot) ex-military guy, one (sexy as hell) tattooed mechanic, one hysterical ex (yep, a she)...All in all, it's one hell of a draft, and I'd really love to read a longer version of it.Sadly, that's so not gonna happen. :/