I like the effects, apart from the white glowy line to the left of his face, that looks overcontrasted imo.
also, the lighting on the bottom seems a bit forced, i'd like to see a new version after cropping that out.
another thing: maybe the bubbles to the right take away from the focal a bit, maybe they could be blurred or something?
Overall, I like the tag, I just think it could be better

Flame123

12-28-2008, 10:49 AM

Look sweet :D
The flow is amazing ;)

.atwa

12-28-2008, 06:43 PM

Thanks for the comments.
Will try to fix some stuff when i get home...