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In the 60's the Beatles were the big boy band!They topped all the charts with hit songs.They were basically the start of boy bands!They were well known around the world.Sadly they split in around the 70's.John Lennon (lead singer) died by being shot!Thats when they decided that they should split.One durection as we all now and love is the big boy band in this century!They won the x-factor and is now touring the country!!There hit song "What makes you beautiful" got them on the top of the charts followed by "One Thing".Rumors are spreading that that one of them will leave witch is totally NOT true!!There are also rumors that a movie will come out about them!!The rumors are TRUE!!There life is crazy with fans!We totally adore there cute looks and amazing voices!If you think they can or will top Justin Bieber be shure to comment!!Go to my page and read all about me!!

In the 60's the Beatles were the big boy band!They topped all the charts with hit songs.They were basically the start of boy bands!They were well known around the world.Sadly they split in around the 70's.John Lennon (lead singer) died by being shot!Thats when they decided that they should split.One durection as we all now and love is the big boy band in this century!They won the x-factor and is now touring the country!!There hit song "What makes you beautiful" got them on the top of the charts followed by "One Thing".Rumors are spreading that that one of them will leave witch is totally NOT true!!There are also rumors that a movie will come out about them!!The rumors are TRUE!!There life is crazy with fans!We totally adore there cute looks and amazing voices!If you think they can or will top Justin Bieber be shure to comment!!Go to my page and read all about me!!

I'm afraid these are your opinions, so don't mistake "I" for "we".
I've never heard of the rumours, but you don't know if either of them are true or not, so don't state whether they are or not.
Again, "we" should be "I"

This is what makes us girls,
We all look for heaven and we put our love first.
Somethin' that we'd die for, it's our curse,Don't cry about it, don't cry about it.

In the 60's the Beatles were the big boy band!They topped all the charts with hit songs.They were basically the start of boy bands!They were well known around the world.Sadly they split in around the 70's.John Lennon (lead singer) died by being shot!Thats when they decided that they should split.One durection as we all now and love is the big boy band in this century!They won the x-factor and is now touring the country!!There hit song "What makes you beautiful" got them on the top of the charts followed by "One Thing".Rumors are spreading that that one of them will leave witch is totally NOT true!!There are also rumors that a movie will come out about them!!The rumors are TRUE!!There life is crazy with fans!We totally adore there cute looks and amazing voices!If you think they can or will top Justin Bieber be shure to comment!!Go to my page and read all about me!!

I'm afraid these are your opinions, so don't mistake "I" for "we".

I've never heard of the rumours, but you don't know if either of them are true or not, so don't state whether they are or not.

I think they both are amazingly talented and One Direction gained loyal fans all around the world in such a short spam of time so u better #### ##. One Direction and The Beatles are respected and amazing.