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Only one thing? As bad as the writing is I think by telling the story is some sort of order it would at least cut down on confusion and distractions. Even if DCS has some sort of goal by jumping all over the place he could finish an arc before jumping through time so that the reader could have a little understanding of what is going on with the bigger picture.

I can't see how a single change can fix the comic. Also, I find it nearly depressing to attempt listing ways to fix the comic.

I would just skip to getting Jeff in a fursuit from strip #1.

Anami and Anami are sitting around Anami says "GRR I AM ANGSTY LET'S EXPRESS ANGST" and so Anami says "ONE OF THE MODS ON DC IS A DICK I POSTED A PICTURE THAT WASN'T REALLY THAT INAPPROPRIATE AND THREE MODS SAW IT AND DID NOTHING THEN A FOURTH ONE SAW IT AND DELETED IT" and Anami says "OMG I HATE MODS >:("

Who sleeps shall awake, greeting the shadows from the sun
Who sleeps﻿ shall awake, looking through the window of our lives
Waiting for the moment to arrive...
Show us the silence in the rise,
So that we may someday understand...

oh yeah... basically: DC: "Well let's see... oh, first I explain the childhood.... no it would be boring... I got it... It will be somewhat be like Pulp Ficton... nah... I just draw some chapters... I can sort them later..."