I don't understand why Jake had to overreact that much. There was no Edward there, he didn't see Bella hugging him. Ok, she was being friendly with his enemies, but he knew her history! He could have at least asked for an explanation. It's so unlike Jake (your Jake in particular) to just give up without trying first and then sitting around whining "My future is empty without Bella". LOL

I don't mean to criticize the story - it's superb as ever - just don't like Jake's decision. Does it mean you're giving Bella and Edward a chance? (probably not *sighs*)

My poor Jacob. I think thats all I can say at the moment. i just want to give him a great big hug and tell him everything is going to be ok, please tell me everthing is going to be ok, (ok meaning he ends up with Bella)

REVIEW OR JAKE DIES - THATS FUNNY - I AM TEAM EDWARD - SO IF YOU KILL JAKES I WILL BE OKAY!

I NEW IT WOULD BE ALICE - I AM SURE EDWARD NOT BACK - JAKE IS OVER REACTING AGAIN!!!!!!!! EVERYTHING WILL BE OKAY THIS IS A JAKE/BELLA FIC!

CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!

TAMMY

Author's Response:

well, damn. i was hoping to terrify all my reviewers with that one :) and thanks for reading. team jake has a special place in my heart, loyal followers that they are, but there's a little something extra special about an edward girl giving the fic a chance!

LOVE IT!!!! Ok, so I thought it was Edward coming back. I am very happy to see that it's Alice. I am so Torn between Edward and Jacob, it's just so hard to choose. Loved this, I felt so bad for Jake in this chapter, so sad. Goood Work.

Author's Response:

confession: i'm torn too, and i've been torturing myself for god knows how long because i know how it will end. writing it's gonna kill me. perhaps bella's okay with polygamy?

Happy Birthday to Breathe Again. I saw that you first sent it in a year ago today. Wow! And now it's like the flagship for Team Jacob, which makes you ADMIRAL YSAR.

Scary, no? ;-)

So. I agree with the one reviewer that said Jacob has to learn to quit jumping to conclusions. He's buff enough already without the exercise.

Author's Response:

unbelievable is what it is! seriously, i only stumbled upon fanfiction, and after reading a few i decided to write one, just so i could have a fully developed story the way i wanted it to go. i never expected to post it, and i certainly never expected it to become so popular! i'm still kind of wondering how i got here!

Awwww poor Jacob :( *pouts bottom lip and then sighs* I just want to go and give him a big cuddle..... I only started reading this 2 days ago..infact up until 2 days ago I had no idea fan fic existed! I knew it would be Alice with Emmett but it still didn't stop me from checking my computer every hour on the hour to see if you'd updated! Lol I may or may not be slightly obssessed with ur lil story :P

But since I've read my Twilight books a million times over and still need MORE this satisfied my reading needs...well that and I am hopelessly in love with Jacob (Shhhh don't tell my husband lol) Ok what the hell it's no secret! My husband is well aware but since he only exist in story books doesn't feel threatended haha!

Can't wait for the next installment..poor Jake please don't break his poor little heart, he hasn't even made it to 2nd base yet... :P hahaha

:D am so glad Alice and Emmet are back :D just aint a story without them :) only better thing would be for Bella o fall in love with a love lost Emmmet :D see how my mind works?? LoL Update ASAP Please

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