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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Thanks, ps! We'll see what I can get into this sunny day upcoming...

Patricia Scott 2 years agofrom sunny Florida

So sweet and so true...time has a way to slipping by toooooo fast, does it not?

Beautifully expressed.

Have a lovely Sunday.

Angels are again headed your way ps

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Thanks, Audrey. So glad that you enjoyed it.

Audrey Howitt 2 years agofrom California

Beautifully tender and wistful write Deb!

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Thanks, Gypsy Rose Lee. I think you might have missed a few of these. I just keep going where my mind takes me. But is that a good thing?(grin)

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Thanks, Vellur. Time goes faster than we think it ever well, and we always seem to put off more today than tomorrow. Once we heed the call, we'll be all right.

Nithya Venkat 2 years agofrom Dubai

Beautifully expressed poem, tender as tender love. Enjoyed reading.

Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years agofrom Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Such lovely poetry. Two souls bound by eternal love. Passing this on.

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Hey, Anna! Thanks so much for reading, and I am glad that you liked the piece.

Anna Haven 2 years agofrom Scotland

You certainly used your time well before work. I am lucky to just get out the door on time. :)

Passionate, flowing words and I really did love that last line. Tis so true.

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Thank YOU, ChitrangadaSharan. It came to me one day, and I was in front of the computer. It's so funny, sometimes things will at work, and I must jot these things down quickly before I forget them, like titles to stories in back of my mind, etc. Do you get that, too?

Chitrangada Sharan 2 years agofrom New Delhi, India

Lovely poem, truly touching and heartfelt!

Tender--that's what love is! You expressed it so beautifully.

Thanks and voted up!

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Hey, Peg! So glad that you liked this and saw the value in it. Thanks for being so encouraging.

Peg Cole 2 years agofrom Dallas, Texas

Sweet and tender, Deb, awesome. I loved the line, "My pen has written what I navigate". So true.

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Hey, John! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. It's usually a bit different than what I do, but it's what struck at the time.

John Hansen 2 years agofrom Queensland Australia

What an beautifully written poem Deb. A true pleasure to read.

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

(grinning) Yes, you do have that right, but I also run, so catch me if'n you can!

deergha 2 years agofrom ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

I know, Deb . We all are part of this wonderful nature. Tender like dew drops and wild like wild horses and its in all of us but what matters most is that, who enjoy being amidst wild ...who nurture wilderness!!! You really do care about nature and I appreciate that. Many just talk and don go beyond the spheres of words. But to act on words, you do that my friend.

Love your tenderness and the wilderness in your soul ...so real which is so apparent in your words.

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Deergha, it is part of my nature to be part of the wild.

deergha 2 years agofrom ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Enjoy being wild dear Deb,

You sound best when wild to be honest. Hope you trust me here friend:-)

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Deegha, thanks for your support after all this time. See what happens when you turn me loose? I just go wild!

deergha 2 years agofrom ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

My my...such a beautiful and romantic poem. very passionate indeed, friend. It shows what a tender heart you have!!

"....When the sun does brightly shine,

The earth and stars are intrinsically mine..."

Lovely words ...really.

Pressed all the buttons above...sharing sure.

Take care and let the good work flow.

Deergha

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

And thank YOU, Alicia, for reading them and commenting.

Linda Crampton 2 years agofrom British Columbia, Canada

You've written some beautiful thoughts about love, Deb. Thank you for sharing them.

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Hey, Nell, thanks so much for your continued support. I sure can't do it without you!

Nell Rose 2 years agofrom England

I loved this Deb, this shows what real love is, voted up and shared!

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Hey, Jackie, thanks so much. I appreciate you, and your comments over the years.

Jackie Lynnley 2 years agofrom The Beautiful South

Over the top Deb; very good.

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Thanks, perspy...I do believe I am getting better...

Demas W Jasper 2 years agofrom Today's America and The World Beyond

Got it. Good.

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Hey, Mary! I'm so lucky that it comes so easily.

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Hey, Dave. I guess you'll never know where I might turn up, eh?

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Thanks, Blossom...so good to see you, and hoping that all is well.

Mary Craig 2 years agofrom New York

Romantic poems like this one touch us deeply Deb. Your words seem to flow so easily and remind us to love while we cann.

Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

Dave 2 years agofrom Lancashire north west England

hi Deb your talent continues to shine through in all your work you never fail to impress. Beautiful.

Bronwen Scott-Branagan 2 years agofrom Victoria, Australia

Lovely poem. God bless.

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

manatita, thanks so much for your continued support.

manatita44 2 years agofrom london

A very tender and loving poem,, Deb. Beautiful!

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Thanks, Billy. I have had trouble with that, too. If I have to wait too long, I cut, copy, paste, then repeat. Wait a minute....isn't that like a shampoo? Thanks!

Bill Holland 2 years agofrom Olympia, WA

I had to fight the HP battle to get here. Three times yesterday I left a comment only to see it disappear...so I fear for this one...so, one word...beautiful.

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Hey, Faith Reaper! Thanks for everything, as always. Catch you on the flip side.

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Hey, Chris! It came to me in a blinding flash...

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Deb Hirt 2 years agofrom Stillwater, OK

Thanks, Sha! That was written before work this morning.

Faith Reaper 2 years agofrom southern USA

Lovely and passionate poem, yet sweet! Truly delighted in reading it.

Up +++ tweeting, G+ and sharing

Blessings

Chris Mills 2 years agofrom Maple City, Michigan

Deb, beautiful. Just how love should be. Thanks for sharing this.

Shauna L Bowling 2 years agofrom Central Florida

Lovely, Deb. I love the reference to the souls living on even after their short time on Earth. That's what you call Everlasting Love!