Not bad... there are quite a lot of characters on the cover, but you laid them out in a way that made it possible to tell who the main character was... and I assume those with smaller roles are the ones in the back or slightly obscured?

Overall, I'd say not bad at all. You've been publishing a lot for your story!

Just out of curiosity (I'm currently a few chapters behind in your story), is the man on the horse without a face on purpose? Not sure what kind of history/background he might have, or if that's just an error...

Knight Templar n. pl. Knights Templars or Knights Templar1.A member of an order of knights founded about 1118 to protect pilgrims in the Holy Land during the Second Crusade.

ottoatm wrote:Not bad... there are quite a lot of characters on the cover, but you laid them out in a way that made it possible to tell who the main character was... and I assume those with smaller roles are the ones in the back or slightly obscured?

Overall, I'd say not bad at all. You've been publishing a lot for your story!

Just out of curiosity (I'm currently a few chapters behind in your story), is the man on the horse without a face on purpose? Not sure what kind of history/background he might have, or if that's just an error...

I am not entirely sure which one you mean. Is this in the book cover or in a Chapter? All the chapters have valid characters (I hope) and maybe you are talking about The Ostiten Paladin?

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ottoatm wrote:Not bad... there are quite a lot of characters on the cover, but you laid them out in a way that made it possible to tell who the main character was... and I assume those with smaller roles are the ones in the back or slightly obscured?

Overall, I'd say not bad at all. You've been publishing a lot for your story!

Just out of curiosity (I'm currently a few chapters behind in your story), is the man on the horse without a face on purpose? Not sure what kind of history/background he might have, or if that's just an error...

I am not entirely sure which one you mean. Is this in the book cover or in a Chapter? All the chapters have valid characters (I hope) and maybe you are talking about The Ostiten Paladin?