Thank you sooooo much for writing this! I HATED the way the actual book ended so this story was like my birthday had come for a little while! Such a good story, you captured Ariels' feelings perfectly!

~Shiara Daydream

Scrimshaw chapter 1 . 1/12/2012

really good. i like ariel better than nate too. i didn't like how he disappeared. nice story. we need more in this archive.