It bothers me that Hinata isn't even showing any signs of acknowledgement of her daughter. It just seems highly unlike her character. I think the whole "mystery" behind her mother is kind of played out at this point. I just want them all to meet and know.

Just started this story today and i'll i have to say is...Damn, the story you created is amazing and i can't wait for more. the fact that you had hinata and naruto hook up after a night of drinking is close to me, and i'm glad that they found each other. keep up the good work and i'm looking forward to more.

I like this. I wish you made the secret of Hana mother last a little longer, but it's all good in the end. I enjoy how this story is going so far, however i would like to ask if you could extend it a little more. Like a few stories in between before the wedding on. That way we can see everyone reactions to the news and see how their love grows even more. It would be awesome if you could show more of naruto's moves if there's anymore battle scenes in the future. the only thing i ask is that you continue make this more "fluff" and make naruto and hinata appear more mature/parentlike as we go on. Good luck and i'll be following this fic.