The problem is that my filename did not match the filename in the MW. I have trying to upload again with the correct name, but Australia seems to be temporarily disconnected from the Internet tonight (or perhaps it's just my house). As a work round could you PL from the link below? I'll correct the filename later, once I have your corrections or PL OK.

Chapter 1 Dog-Bite PL Notes:
0:19 missing the final line of the intro: Say: "The Old Adam, by Arnold Bennett. [Chapter]" as well as the roman numeral I from the chapter title.
13:57 said "sixty (or sixteen) thousand", when it should be only "six thousand"
31:40 missing roman numeral IV - I only point this out (as well as roman numeral I) because you say II, III, and V
33:23 repeat "...to give up her barbaric, her barbaric..."
Otherwise, you are good to go (except the file name, of course, which you said you'd fix when you got my notes)

mbudinski42 wrote:Chapter 1 Dog-Bite PL Notes:
0:19 missing the final line of the intro: Say: "The Old Adam, by Arnold Bennett. [Chapter]" as well as the roman numeral I from the chapter title.
13:57 said "sixty (or sixteen) thousand", when it should be only "six thousand"
31:40 missing roman numeral IV - I only point this out (as well as roman numeral I) because you say II, III, and V
33:23 repeat "...to give up her barbaric, her barbaric..."
Otherwise, you are good to go (except the file name, of course, which you said you'd fix when you got my notes)

Thanks, Anna! Yes, I am about to remove 'short' from my initial post! The reason I wrote that is that I initially thought that the chapters were the sections within the chapters (should have checked more carefully!) and I only found out my mistake when I read my own chapter. The sections are short but the chapters turn out to be quite long.

lezer wrote:

eggs4ears wrote:
10 short chapters. If you'd like to grab one or PL, please post here. Either choose a chapter number from 1-10, or I can allocate for you.

Hi Anna,
Chapter 8 is very well done and I only have one PL note for you
0:11 the end of your intro (from 'recording by' to the end) is very glitchy. I don't know how else to describe it but when you hear it, you'll know what I mean.