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I just have to say something. I hadn't read this because I didn't think that it was going to be very good, I've had experience with fan fictions on forums not being so good, so I haven't read any on here. But you have FLOORED me. It is amazing so far. I read it all in a day... I couldn't stop! I can't wait for you to get more up!

I just wanna see things work out and it be Dawn/Drew... and May could get with Gary. Which, by the way, when I watched your trailer I squealed everywhere when I saw Gary. I was excited, LAWLZ.
But add me to the PM list and I can't wait for you to get more up!

Oh and take this all as a compliment, I don't read much fanfiction unless it is Amazing. I'm a hard judge. =]

yay! Am so happy to get a review from you hun and...trust me, no one knew it was rushed better than I! But...it was either going to be rushed, or be posted four months from now. I am so stressed all of the time with the workload I am having to cope with (am even on mild happy pills to help me get through it), so taking time out to write Pokemon fan fics is a bit of a struggle for me xD

but even so, your review made me smile and I am sorry if the quality deteriorates, but it is so hard for me to carry on with an internet-life, not that my real life is so bloody hectic -_-.

thankies for your review sweetie! xxxx

You're very welcome~! Okay, when I said it wasn't as good as the others, I meant that the others were like 100%, and this was 95%! Still an interesting read Which reminds me now, when you left off, the part at the end of the fanfic, I was just like "OMG!" I can't wait until you update!

Not it all, not a dissapointment, I actually enjoyed this one because we're building hype for something big that's going to happen !

But on a side note, I hope I'll get to talk to you soon on msn dear...you know I don't like it when you're stressed beyond belief :/ I'll be on later tonight...

Until then, your writing has not lost a hint of it's class, and I hope you'll get rewarded with an oscar or two
Take care dear !

Mark

Sweetie, I don't have time to comment on every part of your review but know this: every part of it made me smile. I am on Easter break now so hopefully i will have a teeny bit more time than i usually do to fan-fic-write, but me does have a credit card and a social life...and I plan on getting the most out of it with this break. I am not off the hook though, the teachers have been kind enough to send us a gazillion projects and essays for us to do over these two weeks.

I am currently working on a huge Gangs of London video. but since I have zilch, nata and no pokemon clips left on my computer; I am making it with clips from the American Drama One Tree Hill. It is working out pretty well and I think it will give readers a sense of some of the relationship traingles and scenarios that will happen in the future ^^. spoiler video tis

Originally Posted by YunaDances

I just have to say something. I hadn't read this because I didn't think that it was going to be very good, I've had experience with fan fictions on forums not being so good, so I haven't read any on here. But you have FLOORED me. It is amazing so far. I read it all in a day... I couldn't stop! I can't wait for you to get more up!

I just wanna see things work out and it be Dawn/Drew... and May could get with Gary. Which, by the way, when I watched your trailer I squealed everywhere when I saw Gary. I was excited, LAWLZ.
But add me to the PM list and I can't wait for you to get more up!

Oh and take this all as a compliment, I don't read much fanfiction unless it is Amazing. I'm a hard judge. =]

wow, since you have explained how hard you are to please, then I am extremely flattered that you have enjoyed Gangs of London so much. I am trying to make the story flow okay but I don't have a lot of time to write it anymore, so your review has boosted my confidence! I will add you to the PM list hun

Originally Posted by ~**nicole**~

Hi Sammy!.. still remember me? friend if mia ring a bell? anyways i really like the story and i can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh and can you please and me to the PM list (whatever that is hehe..)

Yes I remember you i'm very different now to the girl you used to know, but that doesn't matter. I will add you to the PM list hun

Hey Sam, I just started reading another of your fics AND ITS AS GREAT AS EVER!! Sorry about that.... Anyway like i said it's great I love the story although it is completely different from Hot Chocolate. And don't take this the wrong way, the only reason I can really understand how they talk sometimes in this story is because I have a Best friend at my school from England. Even so Id probably still read if i didn't understand. Wow this is incredibly long for my 'review', so can you add me to the PM list please. Greatly apprieciated. Is that spelling right I don't know anywayz cant wait for the next chapter! ~Lexie-t~

Hey. Boredom took over me so I went to the ship forum. I love this fic of yours. It has most of my favorite ships. [ DawnxPaul + MayxDrew/Gary ] ^^;

It's absolutely amazing. I love the way you write. With different PoV's and such. I love how you made May into something innocent, very unlike of what I think of her. Heh, I love Drew's bad boy act. <3 And I love Gary's cute, stupid like ways. <3 <3 If Paul wasn't that abusive to Dawn, I'd give him a <3 too, but no. ): Dawn and May were just perfect. <3 Do you despise Misty? You made her a slut [ sorry for the swear ] and a bitch [sorry again. ): ]. D: She's a fave of mine you know. But she seems so innocent too. Plus, I love how you made Ash's attitude. cute yet stupid. In a lower value than Gary of course. <3 I seriously love your fic.

I don't know if you'll ever continue this as I understand you have a life like we all do XD But I would just like to say, for what you did write, I loved it <3 the whole story is amazingly written in my opinion and very prose/emotive-descriptive, It is a darker toned story from most pokemon stories I've read but I love that, because you executed it perfectly >w< I cannot really count how many times I've re-read this story over the years XD (I read it the first time in 2009 and I've come back and re-read many times up 'till date - which is near the end of 2012)
Many of the pairings I hadn't thought to much about before but as I read this story I started to like a few of the ones you hinted so that was pretty kewl XD
I'm not sure what much to say just that this story is AWESOME and I loved it <3 and although you might never see this comment or may never continue the story, I just wanted to comment to say thank you regardless, for such an awesome story.
(finally made an account to post a comment wooh! \o/)