So while I wait for the next chapter to your other story I will definitely be reading this one because it is ALSO super awesome!! I love your stories, you write very well and I notice that you don't rush the characters and their feelings. I will continue reading this story and the other that I reviewed. Keep writing!

I read an awful lot of Potter fan fiction, some of it was very well done and touching as well. But I have to admit that this story was just one I devoured. I started it today and couldn't stop reading. After each chapter I felt excited when I saw the small red button saying "next chapter". As a huge Potter fan as well as an academic I have to compliment you on your writing. I think you did a very good job in sticking to the original Potter books (except obviously the epilogue) appreciating and including details of the original books we all love, without messing up the magical world Rowling created. Nevertheless, the story is so fascinating, because you added your personal signature. Your writing style is engrossing, you are able to convey feelings in a wonderful way. As well, you were able to develop the story perfectly, without being too slow or quick. Every chapter was absolutely worth reading and I never found myself scanning paragraphs (which I often do, a bad habit from my university days and work). I enjoyed every bit of the story totally forgetting that I'm still living in the real world not in the magical one ;) I also love the way you 'understand' or -let's say- interpret the characters and how you let them develop and find their ways of dealing with the war and their adulthood. The characters are absolutely believable and the story could as well have been written by JKR. You stuck to character traits one came across while reading the original HP books, you just transformed then. The way you transformed the characters is not far fetched, you just picked smaller character traits and let them evolve in a way one wouldn't expect them to do. For example take the evil and annoying Ron, who is busy hanging round showing off and enjoying being the centre of attention. He obviously craved that throughout the books as well - he just handled it differently.
And last but not least I am almost in love with your Draco myself ;) I like how he changes in your story. JKR dropped an awful lot of hints he already did during his last 2 years and I enjoy reading about it.
I cannot wait to read the next chapters! It's a fascinating story! Compliments!

P.s. I hope my text is understandable, english is not my first language ;)

Author's Response: Wow! :) Thank you so much. I cannot express how honored I am to have you write such a great review.
I have always loved writing and reading and this is almost therapy sometimes when I have a chance to take a break from school.
I am so honored that you like my story and my writing. This review made me feel amazing inside and I will do my best to keep updating when I can.
I am also beyond honored that you think that this writing could compare to JKR herself. :)

I love it! what gave you these ideas? I am a writer as well and would like to be enilghted hahaha

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I know its using HP for my writing at the moment but thats how it starts.
I can't really say exactly how I get my ideas. Sometimes I have it before I start writing and then tie everything together and other times it comes while I'm writing.
Thank you!