Hi all.
I am working with the idea of an organization or organizations that predate the Foundation and had similar roles to the Foundation. One of these orgonisation's storage sites got out of hand and now the site is designated as an SCP.

Nitpicks: Well, first your formatting is off. The section headers (Item number, Object Class, etc. nood to be bolded, accomplished by placing two asterisks (*) before and after whe word(s) you want to bold.

**Object Class:**

Additionally, you don't need to start a new paragraph right after the section titles, just hit the space bar and start typing.

Object Class: "Keter" Why is this Keter? an MTF and an airlock contained this thing just fine. I recommend Euclid, because the current procedures ought to be enough to stop a breach, unless something unexpected happens.

Special Containment Procedures:

Only one entrance to SCP-XXX shall be allowed to be accessible at one time.

Should be:

Only one entrance to SCP-XXX is to be accessible at any one time.

An important part of clinical tone is to avoid being too wordy.

This entrance is to be secured with no less than 2 sets of steel blast doors no less than 1.5m thick each. Any movement of personnel into and out of SCP-XXXX shall be done through these doors. At no point should both sets of blast doors be open at one time, personnel entering SCP-XXXX should wait for the exterior doors to close before opening the interior doors and proceeding into SCP-XXXX. The reverse procedure shall be used to exit SCP-XXXX

Y'know, you could just say the entrance has been fitted with an airlock.

So for, the containment procedures give me the impression that they are trying to explore a dangerous area, removing anomalies for study, "dungeon-crawling", if you will, (I'm a sucker for those kinds of games) while blocking the area off as best they can.

Description: The data expunged at the end kinda ruins it. I like the idea of them finding an abandoned site, but redacting what happened to RAPSA and the other pre-SCPF groups just doesn't sit well with me. This is rather interesting lore, and it just gets [DATA EXPUNGED]. I recommend you try to come up with something,

Addendum: This could be neatened up significantly, by placing each paragraph in a quote block (> each time you hit enter), and bolding the section headers (see above)

Bright

Man, that dude gets around. Or at least his family does. I suggest keeping this here. This isn't a callback to lolFoundation, or Series I, this is LORE. and LORE = A narrative, that supports your article and provides a backstory, and is frequently expected from Series IV articles (or any article, for that matter).

Final Thoughts: I love this concept. Several authors, Blibby_Blobfish, for example, are working on SCPs and other stuff from pre-Foundation organizations, so I recommend talking to them about this stuff. The history of the in-universe Foundation is not something that has been explored in much detail, so I enjoyed helping look over this draft.