Tasty- those are both hella clean. I like the drips on the bottom, it'd be sick to see those painted

Trestoner- There's just to much going on in that for me. It looks like all the structure is good though

Wgone- that's ill. Im diggin' the middle and the last one. keep it up

Coen- if the bottom of the last three letters are flat, maybe make the bottom of the C flat too? or make the bottoms on the last three letters not flat? just keep working it. The throw is nice, work the handie

Bezr-Your Z is smaller than the rest of your letters. Try making all your letters like your Z and bring the leg of the R up

Murphy- the crink in his tail is the only thing I dont like, the rest of it is legit, I'd like to see stuff you do on a canvas no joke.

Shell- I'm not sure what that is soo um maybe make it look like letters?

blacktodafuture- make the top of the S more notice able, i could barely tell it was an S, also loose all connections you have, dont do those for awhile longer, or until you're bomb at simps. hopefully that helps

Originally Posted by Kaze

Fear reduces our ability to love,
when there is no fear people are at their potential,
and that is what most are afraid of..

Originally Posted by beers

ya man its pretty crazy people were goin nuts on the first day i saw some dude get hit by a car it was fuckin awsome

peg-looks like a good start, finish it and ill have more to say
predator- keep trying, you'll feel like its boring at first, but once you get it youll start getting more amused than you ever did.
blacktodafuture- i can't see yours.
sheltr- i dont like that kind of style, so i cant give any tips/crits
trest- your piece gets smaller as you go on, try making two straight lines on the page and keeping the piece inside those lines to help you.

skeez just clean it up a bit and make sure all the shadows go to the same focal point
your close, but no cigar. and the o could use some reworking and i like the background you did to it
the second is alright, but the r dosnt quite pop as much as the t or e do