the story was griping from the first chapter this is my favorite story on deviant because of how it make the story expand and also adds a back story i like the way the story as it adds a touch of realism into something mythical by the addition of real life ideals.your a really talented writer and the fact that you are so committed to your work and how much you do you are an inspiration to me through your content and commitment never forget that and i hope to see more of this work in the future.