Really one of the most disturbing stories I read in my life.
Interesting, that he sees Rodney as different from the other (colourless) people. The "naive" thought from the description at the beginning boomeranged with the ongoing events.
Well written and emotionally draining upon reading.

A moment out of time. I found this to be extremely well written and yet I wasn't sure what I thought or felt about the concept. I found it strange, moving, sad, even hurtful both to the participants and the reader; a body blow to the senses. I wanted it to stop and yet even so I wanted to know more about such a relationship. Thank you for the experience.

A moment out of time. I found this extremely well written. I wasn't sure what I thought or felt about the whole concept and had to read it more than once. I found it strange, moving, sad even hurtful not only to the participants but also to the reader and the senses. I wanted it to stop, and yet even so I wanted to know more about such a relationship. Thank you for the experience.

Oh. Hm. I don't usually read noncon or BDSM, and I'm really not sure why I read this one. It was good, in the sense that it was well-written. I didn't like it, but mostly because it gave me an uneasy feeling, for which I applaud you as a writer - that's something I strive for in my own writing... it's easy enough to make people laugh or smile at an aw, fluffy, moment, but it's very difficult to write hard, dirty, unhappy, all-too-human scenes that are realistic and emotion-provoking without resorting to less-than-great writing. good work.

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