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Topic: RE#19 - TRIBULATION (Read 6448 times)

Great work as always! It's good that you have these quiet, plot/character driven episodes and not just worry abut getting to the next blaster fight like so many other interpretations of the Star Wars Universe

The lighting on the shots was great, from the dungeon to the scene with the officers and Mace to the scene of R.E.'s loved ones reflecting on his fate. The sets were all perfect (as we've come to expect of your work).

I really liked Dooku's somewhat ham-fisted stab at snaring Shundi with his "you can save your friend with the Dark Side" thing. I got the feeling Dooku himself didn't really think he had much hope of turning another Jedi, but figured he'd give it a try for the heck of it. I also liked the military courtesy Dooku showed; seemed very fitting. Polishing it off with A.V. and Q.Vos chipping in their $.02 was a nice touch. I also sense we might see a little Shundi fighting with those two before too long, and that shows incredible promise.

I'm dying to see Shundi's dueling technique.

The BC thug customs were great, and showed the appropriate level of interest given their roles as goons. Judiss was well-played, and you foreshadowed his seeds of doubt well.

Wow, great photonovel! I like that its gritty and dark, just like a real war is. Not everything is fair in life and sometimes bad things happen to good people. The Rykrof custom reminds me a lot of Reservior Dogs. Definitely one of my favorites so far!