Holy cow, i wish this wasn't so short because it really impressed me. Just thinking about how long it must have taken to write in a way that their two viepoints moved in and out of each other makes me dizzy, but the fact you managed to pull it off gives the fic this great feel. I almost wish it continued. But nontheless, very awesome.

Very good and well written stuff! Nice to see someone else appreciate this pairing! The highlighting of key words added to the story's depth. They really connected the characters, especially the heels. Good job!

Meepscrawler chapter 1 . 7/5/2010

Wow. I really liked this. My favorite part was the writing style, the switch from character to character on certain key words. It makes me want to write something similar.