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Wednesday, 6 September 2017

cross country

I was really excited for mr Burt to say go but when you get that feeling how your heart pumps really hard you get nervous or really happy well that's what happened to me And mr burt said go I was coming 11th and I did.

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Well done with you'r story about Cross Country and I hope you cam from 10th to 1st. It is a great story but make sure you add full stop's because if you keep on reading and reading than you will run out of breath. Bye. :)

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Hello! My name is TJ and I am a Year 5 at Pt England School. I am 9 years old and I live in Glen Innes in Auckland, New Zealand. My favourite TV show is Shortland Street and my favourite food is butter chicken. My favourite colour is blue. I enjoy reading books and I like learning in class.