I... Don't quite know what to say. Except that this is so beautiful and that I'm close to tears. You have a beautiful way of describing everything, every single little thing, and I could just about imagine everything that went on and entered this story. Also, the way Sweden struggles to speak 'correctly'? I love it. I simply love it, it is so sweet and I think it really tells something about how Sweden is if you get to know him. And I am really amazed by what you made me realize through this - that words are only miserable and vague replicas of what we want to communicate. This also fits perfectly with those small quotes you have used to split up the scenes. That really made me think.
Also, as one of the other reviewers said, this feel so calm and non-rushed. There is just... a completely perfect flow that makes you calm and relaxed, even with tears stinging your eyes. And your characterization is equally precious and wonderful. I think you really nail Sweden and Finland, you write them so amazingly.
Can you feel yet that I am in love with this?

Your writing style is beautiful. I feel like I'm actually in Sweden's mind, seeing and hearing and experiencing everything. It's descriptive and the sentences flow naturally. I love it. Please continue writing because you have talent.

I love how non-rushed and /real/ this felt. Other fics I've read have Berwald stoic and Tino spastic and overly-happy. Not this. I really do believe that you got their personalities perfect. This made my stomach do flip-flops, and I was dissapointed when it ended.

This fic is so well written! you portrayed Sweden perfectly. It was by far one of the best SuFin fics ive ever read. I actually cried when i read it. (yes it know, im a wussy pussy) but still. you did a REALLY good job on this~!

This is just... Wow. So amazingly written. Very in-character. Also, whether it was your intentions or not, I like how Sweden got an erection from just Finland's beauty alone, rather than when he was moaning and such. I thought that was very sweet. .

But anyway. You cannot fathom the ammount of love I harbour for this. I first read it on my phone in bed, and I was squeeing into my pillow and doing those weird fangirl... wiggle things. Just like, little spasms. xD

Wow. Just, wow. That was beautiful. Your writing style captures the characters and their emotions so perfectly! This is the best Su/Fin fanfiction I have read. Thank you for sharing your writing talent. :)

I had to reread the last couple of sentences a couple of times because the first time I read it I thought that the whole incident had been a dream. And then I started yelling un-ladylike words at the computer. Such as 'cockblock'. It's ok. I'm cool now. Hahaha. My Fail!reading is just fail. So it just occurred to me that I've spent the whole day reading two of your fan fics, watching I Love You, Philip Morris, and writing fanfiction. That's a lot of gay for one day. Ah, well. When in Rome do as the Romans do. And we all know that includes lots of men. Naked. Doing sports and writing poetry. Yeah.

Gah, I love me some SuFin. It's such a fluff pairing :3 :3 :3 And your prose was delightful as usual. I like how you write such a wide range of pairings. You're just all over the place! And that's awesome.