The original working script for JP was actually going to be set in a KFC restaurant, with the story involving recreating giant extinct chickens to make really big chicken meals at a cheap price, unfortunately there was conflict because the giant chickens would be too big for the restaurant to hold them in, so they moved them to the islands... That would happen to explain why John Hammond wore white clothes everywhere he went...

IMO it would be better if you somehow photoshopped them to be black. You had good edits so far, but I was just confused when it was KFC. http://difficultchoices.ytmnd.com/ is a good example of KFC usage.

This is pretty good, but I'm still mystified by the recent "white people spellbound by KFC" fad. It's like the "black people spellbound by KFC" fad has caught on with YTMNDers who've never heard of the black-people/fried-chicken stereotype.