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I find myself actually waiting for updates on your webcomic at times which is good, i really don’t do that often. So thanks HAHA i really do enjoy reading your comic on multiple levels.

Your artwork is very solid both the shading and linework is really quite good, and you seem to work quite well with the style you chosen to make the comic in. In addition to that your proportions are extremely good on the characters, which aside from shading/coloring is one of the hardest things to do.

Next i have to say i really like the story, it’s extremely engaging. It always leaves questions but also still explains some things at the same time. Additionally the characters are wonderfully written, you get quite attached to them.

Overall i say you have done a great job ^^ i look forward to seeing more.

Chapters 1.5 and 2.5 are wrapped into their respective primary chapters here, so 1.5 is the epilogue at the end of chapter 1 (here presented as part of 1), and same for 2.5 and 2. Don’t worry, nothing’s missing, it’s just put together a little differently 🙂

I have an idea for a vision she might have while sleeping: it would be about her mother caring her in her arms and leving her in front of an orphinege, then awaken to a vision of her companions badly ingered by a dragon in a human shape, with a red eye and a scar across the other, with skin as black as space, and average muscular body, dressed in ragged paints, missing a horn, and a big rip in the middle of his left wing.

1: That’s awfully specific..
2: Fen’s mom died in labor. :p
3: Thanks for the input, but I have an entire skyscraper of ideas to work with on my own, and I prefer doing my own writing. Critiques are welcome, character interjection and trying to feed me unsolicited ideas is not. I’m not upset about it, I’m just letting you know 🙂 I’m not the greatest writer in the world, but I DO know how to write my own comic with my own characters.