Author Comments

I made this quick for Valentines, god i hate this holiday. I guess the audio isnt working but i'll keep the audio credit on just because its an awesome song. Animations will be improved in the future... with colour!

Reviews

Rated 3 / 5 stars2011-02-11 19:41:23

Not bad

It's really not bad... but you should practice drawing in Flash because it appears that those are just pictures of drawings of paper, and in Flash it would be more smooth with less jerkiness and movement of focal point. Altogether my vote was 3/5. Keep on going and you will be a great someday.

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2011-02-11 17:03:49

A bit morbid

I like the frame by frame rough draft look. The heart break scene is certainly the most detailed. The dude who reviewed first summed up everything that needed to be said. I will add this: Take your time and don't rush practice is everything.