Do you have a topic that is an immediate deal breaker if a manga series you were already reading suddenly featured that topic, such that you would stop reading the series (even if it was "tastefully" done)? For example: religion, rape, etc.

The downside to this one is that it was a bit confusing at the beginning. (I honestly went back and reread the first 3 pages 3 times because of the two characters in the first panel. I - 1. thought they were the main characters when they were young - 2. thought they were the two guys' girlfriends - and finally 3. realized they were their boyfriends. It really needed to be more clear when introducing basically two of four important characters.

Anyways, the way the story was told, it was mostly thoughts and actions (a little less showing and a lot more telling) and the translation wasn't as smooth as it needed to be for that type of story (though I like NoDeadline and I appreciate the work they've done!).

But I will say that overall I enjoyed the story and would love to see a continuation of it. I really would love to see the main characters develop from their bickering ways (and possibly why on earth they're so against each other and how that came to be). I even liked the little old lady who was always secretly keeping an eye on the boys (at least I believe that)

This manga was so funny, it made me laugh a lot. I wish there was a continuation to this story but oh well. The characters didn't have much story or depth to them but that's expected of a one-shot. But it had a lot of funny scenes and seeing how they "get toghether" was interesting and definatly made up for the lack of story. I'm giving this story a good review since it kept me very inertained and left me wanting more.

I have to say, it took me a while to stop laughing when i read this. First of all, the art is pretty good. I felt sometimes the pages were a little crowded but otherwise top marks. As for the story, its a one shot, so i didn't have high hopes, but i was pleasantly surprised. The story is short, sweet and straight forward but it keeps you interested thanks to the chemistry (and bickering) between the two main characters. I can promise you that you will laugh yourself breathless if you read this manga. Its possibly the funniest yaoi i've read xD