If that's the case then, COOL! You actually thought of such great story idea. Once, long ago(About a year back...i think) I also thought of a robbot-like-human with emotions too! Except the story is different from yours.

hi im new here my name is misa-chan and i am a friend of Bara_Hime.
Here is my idea:
A girl named Misato Kiba. she is age 19. and she has long black hair, and dark brown eyes. she is tall and thin. Personality: quiet, insecure, shy, and angry alot.

The story is about Misato who is starting to go to college at a small university..and she is new there and she is made fun of alot by other girls there..she doesnt know why..maybe theyre jealous or maybe something is wrong with her? she starts to suffer panic attacks and starts to think extremely negatively about herself... one day she is about to go home and commit suicide ..but she is saved by an angel..but she doesnt know he is an angel..he looks human...and he convinces her to spare her life and he teaches her love and respect for herself...thats what i have so far..sorry if it is too dark..tell me if it would work?

ok, there are two ways you can do it;
1) post a topic with your stories first chapter or whatever, and let people give you feedback
OR
2) post a topic with your story/s in it and put a note at the end of your frist post, saying to people that they can continue this on.

sorry for the late reply, the internet wasn't working for me! hehe Have fun!

Smile...The verb I've never done ever since that day. Laugh... The verb I never wanted to do ever since that day. Frown... The verb I've always done ever since that day. Cry... The verb I always want to do ever since that day... No... I don't want to live a life full of sorrow! I want happiness! But how!? That day is what made my life very miserable!

Summary:

Kazuki Emi, the girl whom never felt happiness ever since a happening. She never had anyone to take care of her. She was always independent, but how can her independence make her last? Will someone even try to take her out of the darkness she has always lived ever since that happening?

The story is about a boy and a girl who both have the same birthday and have been best friends since birth. They got along most of the time and fought the rest. They were always neighbors for their whole lives. Their lives living as twins that lived in different households that were next to each other had almost come to an end. The boy was going to an all-boys high school. And she decides to follow him. And instead of disguising as a boy in his high school, she goes to an all-girls high school that is right across his school. About two months after she transfers, the boy falls off a tree and loses his memories, including the memories of her, leading the girl into tears. After the incident, she is determined to get his memories returned. And he slowly regains his memories during the story because of their strong bond.