Style Guide Correspondence

THE ONTARIO PUBLIC SERVICE
Correspondence Council of Ontario
Correspondence
Style Guide
Third Edition, 2006
Table of Contents
INTRODU CTION
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3. LEGISLATIVE AND
LEGAL R EFERE NC ES
15
Acts and statutes
16
1. THE SHAPE
OF THE LETTE R
1
Bills
16
The address block (Canadian)
2
Second references to acts and bills
16
The address block (foreign)
2
Regulations, bylaws and legal citations
16
Street names
3
Honorifics
3
4.
Salutations
4
EXPRE SS I ONS
17
Multiple correspondents
5
Numbers less than 10
17
Organizations and official names
6
Numbers greater than 10
17
Organizations and familiar names
6
Numbers and sentence formatting
18
Organization titles
7
Numbers and sentence position
18
Ministerial titles
7
Telephone numbers
18
Spacing between sentences
8
Measures
19
Italics
8
Metric system
19
Copies and enclosures
8
Money
20
Percentages
20
Time
21
2.
CAPITALIZATI ON
9
NUMERICAL
Organization names
10
Dates
21
Informal references
10
Years (fiscal)
21
Capitalizing articles
10
Numbered or bulleted lists
22
Government terms
11
Geographic areas
12
5.
23
Groups of people
12
Vertical lists
23
Aboriginal peoples
12
The comma
24
Acronyms
13
The colon
25
Initialisms
13
The semicolon
25
Acronyms and articles
13
The hyphen
26
First references to acronyms
14
The (non) hyphen in compound words
27
Abbreviations
14
The apostrophe and possessive forms
27
Other apostrophe dos and don’ts
27
Quotation marks
28
Em dashes
28
PUNCTUATION
6.
STYLE
AND
USAGE
29
Keep it simple
29
Choose the active voice
30
Emphasize the positive
30
You or your?
30
Avoid biased language
31
Use plain words and phrases
32
Delete unnecessary words
33
Use The Canadian Oxford Dictionary
33
APPENDI X
A,
E-Words
43
APPENDI X
B,
References
47
Use preferred terms for disability issues 34
7.
STYLE S
OF
AD DRESS
35
The monarch
36
Federal dignitaries
36
Provincial/Territorial dignitaries
37
Aboriginal leaders
37
Diplomatic dignitaries
38
Municipal dignitaries
38
Judiciary
39
Religious dignitaries (Protestant)
40
Religious dignitaries (Anglican)
40
Religious dignitaries (Roman Catholic)
41
Religious dignitaries (Jewish)
41
Religious dignitaries (Muslim)
41
Canadian Forces
42
Police officers
42
Medical doctors
42
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The Ontario Public Service Correspondence Style Guide is the property
of the Correspondence Council of Ontario. It may not be duplicated,
excerpted, edited or modified in any way without the
written approval of the council.
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Section
Introduction
The Ontario Public Service Correspondence Style Guide
enters its third edition with a new look and new information.
T
he development of the third edition of the Ontario Public Service
Correspondence Style Guide is a reflection of the discussion about
correspondence style that has taken place since the second edition was
published in 2001.
This updated and expanded third edition seeks to address many of the
questions that arose out of that exchange of ideas within the correspondence
community. It builds on the accomplishments of the first and second editions,
and strives to further encourage consistency in the way correspondence is
written throughout the Ontario Public Service (OPS).
Producing a style guide that will be used across the OPS is very much a
collaborative effort. The project was managed by Anthony Gullone, managing
editor of the Correspondence Services Unit (CSU), Cabinet Office, and chair
of the Correspondence Council of Ontario Style Guide Subcommittee.
Steven Baker from CSU served as subcommittee vice chair and had primary
responsibility for drafting the guide and redesigning its layout and format.
Special thanks go to Steven for his invaluable work and creativity.
For more information — or to order more copies of this
guide — please contact Áine Scully, chair of the
Correspondence Council of Ontario. She can be
reached at 416-325-3736 and at
[email protected]
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Style Guide Subcommittee
The nine people below comprised the Correspondence Style Guide subcommittee.
These individuals gave generously of their time to the project and were
instrumental in the preparation of this edition.
Anthony Gullone, Cabinet
Office (chair)
Sarah Fudge, Ministry of the
Environment
Steven Baker, Cabinet
Office (vice-chair)
Rosanne Green, Ministry of
Community and Social
Services
Jennifer Aitkens, Ministry of
Agriculture, Food and Rural
Affairs
Nancy Copeland, Ministry of
Public Infrastructure
Renewal
Janet Francis, Ministry of
Natural Resources
Timothy Humphries, Ministry
of Community Safety and
Correctional Services
Lidy Jarolimek, Ministry of
Training, Colleges and
Universities.
Acknowledgements
The style guide subcommittee would like to
thank the following people for their technical
advice and support.
Lorna Hawrysh (proofreading)
Richard Horenblas (proofreading)
Paul Amo (PDFs)
Phil Brideaux (photo page 31)
Keith Berry (poster)
Wayne Berry (poster)
Many people showed their
style producing the guide
Kate Kalcevich (cover design)
Nikki Benton (photo library)
Melanie Robert (photo library)
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Section
The Shape of the Letter
You only get one chance to make a first impression: A properly
formatted letter helps ensure it will be a good one.
S
ection one covers formatting fundamentals. The guidelines we provide
will help you produce letters that have a consistent and polished look.
See the sample letter below for where in this section to find the various
letter elements.
Honorifics: pg. 3
letterhead
Address blocks: pg. 2
October 22, 2005
Titles: pg. 7
Organization names: pg. 6
Ms. Jane LeClair
Chief Executive Officer
Oration (Ontario) Ltd.
40–123 Standard Street
Toronto, Ontario
M1M 1M1
Street names: pg. 3
Dear Ms. LeClair:
Sentence spacing: pg. 8
Thank you for your recent letter and for the copy of the article from
The Windsor Star. I appreciated receiving this news about your company.
Salutations: pg. 4
Italics: pg. 8
Copies & enclosures: pg. 8
As your correspondence would also interest the Honourable Abe Ontario,
Minister of Economic Development and Trade, I have forwarded a copy
of it to his office.
Thank you again for writing.
Sincerely,
Helena Ontario
Minister
Enclosure
c: The Honourable Abe Ontario
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Ministerial titles: pg. 7
T H E
S H A P E
O F
T H E
L E T T E R
The address block (Canadian)
Appearing at the top of the letter and below the date, the inside address block
consists of the name, title (if applicable), company (if applicable) and address
of the correspondent.
Mr. John Ontario
Director
ABC Company
40–123 Anywhere Street
Toronto, Ontario
M1M 1M1
Envelope address blocks — which must conform to Canada Post standards —
differ from inside addresses. On the envelope the postal code appears on the
same line as the (abbreviated) province. Two spaces separate the province and
the postal code.
Ms. Helena Ontario
40–123 Anywhere Street
Toronto ON M1M 1M1
For more information on formatting Canadian address blocks
— both on letters and envelopes — consult the Canadian
Postal Guide or the Postal Standards guides published by
Canada Post. They can be found at www.canadapost.ca.
The address block (foreign)
Many foreign address blocks differ from Canadian ones in how information is
formatted. If foreign correspondents have provided addresses, then follow the
format they use in the incoming letter.
Below is an example of a typical American address block. Two spaces separate
the state name and the zip code. The acronym of the country (USA) is used
without periods separating the letters.
Ms. Joan Reed
Director
ABC Company
40–123 Anywhere Street
Chicago, Illinois 60309
USA
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T H E
S H A P E
O F
T H E
L E T T E R
Street names
Do not abbreviate street names or other address elements (highway,
expressway, crescent, place, square, block, building). These address elements
should be spelled in full in both the address block and in the body of the letter.
Algonquin Avenue
Essa Road
Highway 588
Third Street
Langevin Block
Frost Building South
Wellington Square
Colonel By Drive
For rural routes or postal boxes, write RR or PO Box with no punctuation or
numerical sign (#).
PO Box 63
RR 6
Honorifics
Use the following abbreviations for honorifics with personal names:
Mr.
Ms.
Mrs.
Other honorifics may follow the name:
Jr.
Sr.
Follow the preference of the author of the incoming correspondence in the
use of a comma preceding Jr. and Sr.
Dr., an abbreviation for doctor, is used only for licensed practitioners of
medicine, including veterinarians, dentists and chiropractors.
Correspondents with doctorates (PhDs) may indicate that they wish to be
addressed as Dr. If that is the case, then use the Dr. honorific.
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S H A P E
O F
T H E
L E T T E R
How do I address VIPs?
Unique titles are used by a range of VIPs — from Cabinet
ministers to clergy, judges to generals, senators to sovereigns.
See Section 7, “Styles of Address,” for help with titles.
Salutations
In the salutation, use Dear, followed by the honorific, the name and a colon.
Dear Ms. Stellato:
Thank you for your letter regarding Highway 69.
Unsure of the gender of the person to whom you are writing? Use the full
name in the address block and in the salutation.
Dear Lee Stubbs:
Thank you for your letter regarding Highway 69.
When replying to a child aged 13 or under, use the child’s first name in the
salutation, followed by a comma (or colon).
Dear Sally,
Thanks for writing to tell me about what you’ve been
doing in your class. I really liked the story behind the
pictures you drew.
This practice of addressing children by their first names should be used unless
children indicate in their letters that they wish to be addressed as Miss, Ms. or
Mr. Never address children with antiquated forms of address, such as Master.
As can be seen in the examples above, colons complete the salutation.
Dear Ms. Chin:
When using a first name — whether writing to a child or to an adult — a
comma is preferable.
Dear Florian,
Thank you for your thoughtful card.
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S H A P E
O F
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Children may write on their own initiative or as part of a class project
Multiple correspondents
Writers have several salutation options when addressing multiple
correspondents. Use the following table as a guideline.
Men
Women
Groups
Messrs.
Mesdames
Colleagues
Associates
Friends
Family
When writing to multiple correspondents, address the letter to the first sender,
adding and Colleagues, Friends, Family, etc.
Ms. Maria Ontario
Mr. Giles Ontario
Address
Mesdames Doe and Stubbs
Address
Mr. Terry Chin and Colleagues
Address
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S H A P E
O F
T H E
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Organizations and official names
Write an organization’s name as it appears in the incoming letter.
Oration Corporation
Oration Canada Ltd.
Oration (Ontario) Ltd.
Oration Union Local 42
Oration First Grace Church
Oration Cubs 1st Fort Group
Exceptions to this rule are noted below.
Organizations and familiar names
Many organizations, such as multinational companies, are referred to by
familiar corporate names.
Unless referring to an organization as a legal entity, it is best to choose the
familiar, rather than the official, name.
5
The minister met with Ford executives, plant workers and the
community.
4
The minister met with Ford Motor Company of Canada Limited
executives, plant workers and the community.
Referring to municipalities
Cities, towns, townships and municipalities are usually written using their
familiar, rather than their legal, name.
5
I was pleased to read the submission that was prepared by
council for the City of Guelph.
4
I was pleased to read the submission that was prepared by
council for the Corporation of the City of Guelph.
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S H A P E
O F
T H E
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Organization titles
In the line following the name in the address block, spell out titles such as
President, Executive Director or Chief Executive Officer.
If addressing two or more people, write the name and title of each person.
Follow the names and titles with the name of the organization.
Ms. Maria Stellato
President
Mr. Giles LeClair
Chief Executive Officer
Oration (Ontario) Ltd.
Ministerial titles
When referring for the first time to a Cabinet minister, the minister’s name
should be preceded by the Honourable.
I see that you have sent a copy of your letter regarding jury duty
to the Honourable Ina Ontario, Attorney General.
However, when referring to a Cabinet minister in his or her capacity as an
MPP, do not use the Honourable.
Your MPP, Ina Ontario, sent me a copy of your letter regarding
school boards in your region.
Note that restrictive appositives that fall between a name and a title (or other
restricting information) are not separated from the title by a comma. In the
following example my colleague is a restrictive appositive. It specifies (restricts)
one particular person (the Attorney General) in a group of many (colleagues).
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I see that you have sent a copy of your letter regarding jury duty
to my colleague the Honourable Ina Ontario, Attorney General.
4
I see that you have sent a copy of your letter regarding jury duty
to my colleague, the Honourable Ina Ontario, Attorney General.
Multi-portfolio ministers
Referring to ministers who have more than one portfolio?
Then choose their most relevant ministry as determined by
the subject of the incoming letter.
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O F
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Spacing between sentences
Today’s word processing software automatically inserts the necessary spacing
after periods. Therefore, it is not necessary to double space between sentences.
The practice of single spacing between sentences is common.
Italics
Italicize the titles of publications — books, magazines and newspapers — as
well as plays, movies, paintings and songs. If a definite or indefinite article is
part of the title, remember to italicize it as well.
A national newspaper, The Globe and Mail is widely read.
The AGO owns Tom Thomson’s painting The West Wind.
The Premier quoted from Dickens’ A Tale of Two Cities.
Copies and enclosures
When sending copies of a letter, leave one blank line between the signature
block and the copy indicator [c:]. Also leave one blank line between the copy
[c:] and blind copy [bc:] indicators.
If the full title of the person being copied has been specified in the body of the
letter, it need not be repeated in the copy line. In the example below, we are
copying the Honourable Sasha Ontario, Minister of X, whose full title appeared in
the body of the letter.
c:
The Honourable Sasha Ontario
Iris Ontario, MPP, Lower Lakes
To ensure that the blind copy indication is only included on the copies sent to
the people whose names appear after [bc:], we recommend that you list the
names of blind copy recipients on a separate page.
When sending enclosures, follow the format below, with one space between
the signature and Enclosure, and one space between Enclosure and [c:].
Name
Enclosure
c:
The Honourable Rudy Ontario
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Section
Capitalization
Writers throughout the OPS are capitalizing fewer words than in
previous years.
A
s The Communications Style
Guide (2004) of the OPS
puts it, “Government
writing often contains
excessive capitalization.” Chances
are that you see such excessive
capitalization daily — in job titles,
program names, business
terminology or departmental
jargon.
We agree with our colleagues who
prepared The Communications Style
Guide, as well as with the authors of
The Canadian Press Stylebook and
Caps and Spelling, that writers should
choose the lower case over the
upper case where a reasonable
choice exists.
Still an elementary matter?
Finally, you may want to keep these
three principles in mind:
1. Excessive capitalization can
affect the flow of a letter.
This section discusses this subject
in greater detail.
2. Less capitalization means
less formality.
It also gives examples of
government terms that are written
in lower case letters if used as
common nouns.
3. The trend throughout the
OPS is less capitalization.
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Organization names
Capitalize all proper names, including those of organizations.
Ombudsman Ontario
Belleville Chamber of Commerce
TD Bank Financial Group
Rotary Club of Timmins
Sarnia Sting Hockey Club
Informal references
Many organization names can be put in lower case when used as a general
reference — or when using a shortened version of the name of an
organization.
5
The bank credited its record profits to the hard work of the
board.
4
The Bank credited its record profits to the hard work of the
Board.
Capitalizing articles
Articles (a, the) are usually not part of an organization’s proper name; therefore,
they are not capitalized.
If you are sure that an article is part of an organization’s proper name, then
capitalize the article. If in doubt about the organization’s preference in this
regard, consult the group’s letterhead or website.
Thank you for your letter about The Hospital for Sick Children.
Many organizations, including The Change Foundation, are
working to help improve health care delivery in our province.
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Government terms
Capitalize official names (proper names) of all levels of governments and their
departments, agencies, commissions, boards, acts, bills and the like.
Do not capitalize when using a shortened version of the name or when making
an informal reference (common nouns).
Proper name
Common noun
The Government of Ontario
The Ontario government
The Legislative Assembly of Ontario
The Ontario legislature
The Ontario Labour Relations Board
The board
The Standing Committee on Estimates
The committee
The council of the City of Sarnia
The members of city council
The Minister of Finance
The minister
The Highway Traffic Act
The act
Legislative terms are proper names and are therefore capitalized.
Premier
Cabinet
Executive Council
Royal Assent
First Reading
Second Reading
Third Reading
The Smoke-Free Ontario Act received Third Reading in June
2005 . . . upon receiving Royal Assent, the act will ban smoking
in all enclosed public places and workplaces.
Lower case descriptive or generic names
5
The ministers of Education and Transportation met with the
premiers of Ontario and Alberta.
4
The Ministers of Education and Transportation met with the
Premiers of Ontario and Alberta.
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Geographic areas
In general, use capitals to refer to specific geographic place names or regions.
Sault Ste. Marie
National Capital Region
Georgian Bay
South America
Lanark County
British Isles
Use lower case for adjectives, such as eastern or western, when they do not refer
to a specific geographic region.
eastern Canada
southwestern Ontario
If in doubt about the spelling of geographic areas or place names, please
consult The Canadian Oxford Dictionary or visit the website of the Secretariat of
the Canadian Permanent Committee on Geographical Names,
www.geonames.nrcan.gc.ca/info/gnbc_e.php.
Northern Ontario or northern Ontario
The trend throughout the OPS is to write northern Ontario
with a lower case n.
Groups of people
Use capitals to refer to a group of people (even if used idiomatically).
Ontarians
Maritimers
Melanesians
Aboriginal peoples
When referring to Canada’s Aboriginal peoples, use discretion and be sensitive
to current usage. For instance, the Canadian Constitution Act, 1982 indicated
three groups as the original peoples of Canada: Indians, Inuit and Métis.
Although the term First Nations has displaced Indians, we still use the latter
word when referring to the Indian Act, Status Indians, Non-Status Indians,
Treaty Indians and Registered Indians.
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On the other hand, the current trend for collective noun usage suggests that
the terms natives and native people are being displaced by Aboriginals and
Aboriginal peoples. Not all Aboriginal groups across Canada agree with this
trend, however. For correspondence purposes, use the term indicated in the
incoming letter.
Acronyms
An acronym is “a word usu[ally] pronounced as such, formed from the initial
letters of other words” (The Canadian Oxford Dictionary). Acronyms are
common and are capitalized without periods between the letters.
DART (Drug and Alcohol Registry of Treatment)
FRO (Family Responsibility Office)
OSAP (Ontario Student Assistance Program)
WIN (Workforce Information Network)
Initialisms
An initialism is formed in the same manner as an acronym. It differs from an
acronym, however, in that it is not usually pronounced as a word. Rather, a
reader pronounces each letter in the initialism. Initialisms are also capitalized
and written without periods.
OPS (Ontario Public Service)
ODSP (Ontario Disability Support Program)
FOI (Freedom of Information)
Acronyms and articles
An acronym is typically preceded by the definite article only when the acronym
is used adjectivally.
The OSAP-related announcement got wide media coverage.
When used as proper nouns, initialisms are usually preceded by the definite
article the.
To apply for the ODSP, the following guides are available.
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When an abbreviation or acronym is preceded by an indefinite article (a or an),
base your choice of article on the way the abbreviation or acronym is read
aloud.
To register for an RST vendor permit, contact your local office.
You can take a GO train to Union Station.
First references to acronyms
Your reader may not know the meaning of an initialism or acronym, so spell or
define it the first time it is used and follow with the short form in brackets.
Keep in mind that many of the terms commonly used in government are not
known to an average reader.
The Family Responsibility Office (FRO) receives every support
order made by a court in Ontario.
Further references to the term in the letter can use the acronym already cited.
The FRO works under the authority of the Family Responsibility
and Support Arrears Enforcement Act, 1996 (FRSAEA).
Some acronyms or initialisms are widely understood. Below are examples you
can use without a first reference or definition.
MP
MPP
CBC
TVO
LCBO
GST
Abbreviations
Abbreviations are shortened forms of words or phrases. They are used with
periods.
Mr. (abbreviation of mister)
Mrs. (abbreviation of mistress)
reg. (abbreviation of regulation)
mgmt. (abbreviation of management)
With the exception of their use in salutations (e.g., Mr.), abbreviations rarely
appear in correspondence.
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Section
Legislative and Legal References
Ignorance of the law is no excuse — nor is ignorance of correct legal
and legislative style.
R
eferences to federal and provincial legislation and regulations,
municipal bylaws and legal citations are subject to strict style
guidelines. Keep in mind that the style changes as a bill receives Royal
Assent and becomes law. When making reference to a bill or an act, it is always
a good idea to check its correct name and, in the case of a bill, current status
on the website of the Legislative Assembly of Ontario, www.ontla.on.ca.
Also see page 11 of this guide for capitalization of government terms.
A good bookmark
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A N D
L E G A L
R E F E R E N C E S
Acts and statutes
Italicize names of acts but not the article preceding them. Bear in mind that, in
most cases, the date of the legislation is included as part of the act’s name.
The Education Quality and Accountability Office Act, 1996
Certain statutes should be treated as acts and cited accordingly.
The Criminal Code of Canada
Bills
Names of bills are not italicized.
Bill 3, Safe Drinking Water Act
But italicize the name of an act within the name of a bill.
Bill 352, An Act to Amend the Highway Traffic Act
Second references to acts and bills
While the first reference to an act or bill must use its name in full, a second
reference can use the common, lower case reference to the legislation.
Thank you for writing regarding the Public Service Act. I was
pleased to hear your thoughts about the act [not Act].
Regulations, bylaws and legal citations
To ensure clarity, refer to regulations as follows:
O. Reg. [number] of [legislation]
For municipal bylaws, provide the full title, including the bylaw number.
City of Toronto, Bylaw No. 5156, Bylaw on Amusement Machines
and Halls
For legal citations, italicize the name of the case.
As cited in Smith v. Smith . . .
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Section
Numerical Expressions
A careful letter writer knows how to present numbers and measures
clearly — and when to use numerals and not words.
T
ypographical appearance, ease of reading and stylistic convention have
all had an influence on the way we style numbers in OPS
correspondence. While people generally comprehend numerals more
readily than the words and phrases that represent numbers, there are instances
where numbers should be written out in words.
Numbers less than 10
Use words for cardinal and ordinal numbers less than 10.
There will be seven members on the commission.
On the second day, the minister spoke first.
Numbers greater than 10
Use numerals for cardinal and ordinal numbers greater than or equal to 10.
The annex, signed in 2001 by the same 10 parties, reinforced the
principles of the Great Lakes Charter.
The minister remarked that this was the 11th time she had
spoken in support of the legislation.
When starting a sentence with a number, hyphenate numbers 21 through 99.
Twenty-five community colleges and 10 universities in the region
provide opportunities for career development.
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Numbers and sentence formatting
When using an expression consisting of both numbers and measures, the
whole expression should appear on the same line.
5
The Government of Ontario will invest $520 million
in a new fund to boost ethanol production.
4
The Government of Ontario will invest $520
million in a new fund to boost ethanol production.
Numbers and sentence position
Avoid starting sentences with numerals. If you need to start a sentence with a
number, spell it out in full.
Three hundred stakeholder groups were consulted.
Fifteen million dollars were saved by the new policy.
Never begin a sentence with a year. Instead, rewrite the sentence so that the
year reference appears in a different location.
5
Ontario’s municipalities will receive more than $223 million in
2005–06, the first year of the five-year agreement.
4
2005–06, the first year of the five-year agreement, will see
Ontario’s municipalities receiving more than $223 million.
Telephone numbers
Telephone area codes may be expressed in brackets; however, for areas with
mandatory 10-digit dialing, the brackets are omitted.
Note that telephone numbers — as well as street numbers and names in
addresses — should also appear on one line.
416-535-8501
(519) 622-7543
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E X P R E S S I O N S
Measures
For the first reference in a letter, spell the unit of measure in full, followed by
its abbreviated form in brackets.
The speed limit is 100 kilometres per hour (km/h).
In subsequent references, you can use the abbreviated form.
You could receive a ticket for travelling faster than 100 km/h.
Metric system
The metric system is
Canada’s official
system of
measurement. Use
metric measures
unless they pose a
barrier to
communication, as
they may with a
person who was
taught imperial
measurement, or
with a correspondent
from the USA.
In these instances,
you will prove
yourself to be a
helpful and
Not everyone has gone metric
courteous writer by
offering the numeric
information in metric, followed by the imperial measurement.
The imperial equivalent can be included in brackets, or offset with an em dash.
Thanks for asking about the price of peaches in southern
Ontario. A recent market survey found the fruit averaged $2.20
per kilogram — or $1.49 per pound.
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E X P R E S S I O N S
Money
References to sums of money should be expressed in numerals to ensure
clarity.
$500 million
$1.6 billion
Hyphenate sums of money when used as a compound modifier before a noun.
A $500-million fund was announced by the minister.
For monetary units preceded by a symbol, a decimal point and zeros are not
required.
5
$2
4
$2.00
For monetary units that require a reference to the country of origin, use the
following guidelines:
The government spent $2 billion Cdn on the program.
The government spent $2 billion US on the program.
The government spent €2 billion on the program.
Percentages
Per cent (not percent) is usually spelled out. The “one to nine” and “10 and
higher” rule applies to numbers preceding per cent. Use the following format:
Reports indicate that four per cent of Ontarians believe . . .
Over 55 per cent of Ontarians polled believe . . .
Use the percentage symbol (%) sparingly, as when presenting statistical data.
Ontario Economy Grows in 2004
2004
2003
Ontario’s real GDP growth
2.4%
1.6%
Final domestic demand
3.2%
3.9%
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E X P R E S S I O N S
Time
On the hour, times are written — without zeros and with numerals — as
follows:
The meeting began at 8 a.m.
Times not on the hour are written with numerals and with colons separating
the hour indicators from the minute indicators:
The meeting scheduled for 8 a.m. will now begin at 8:30 a.m.
Dates
Do not use ordinal numbers in the date. And when the date is listed as month,
day, year, separate the day from the year by a comma and the year from the
text by a comma.
5
Thank you for your letter of June 30, 2005, regarding tuition.
4
Thank you for your letter of June 30th, 2005 regarding tuition.
Years (fiscal)
References to a fiscal year are written in the form yyyy–yy. The year ranges are
separated by an en dash. To insert an en dash in Microsoft Word, type Ctrl + –
(the minus sign on the numeric keypad).
This year’s budget, which contains no new taxes, forecasts
program expenditures to the 2008–09 fiscal year.
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E X P R E S S I O N S
Numbered or bulleted lists
Want to start a healthy debate among writers? Ask them how to format
numbered and bulleted lists. Since one of the aims of the Correspondence Style
Guide is to settle such issues, we offer the following guidelines on punctuating
and formatting vertical lists.
Start vertical lists with a statement and a colon
Lists are introduced with a statement followed by a colon. Typically, the
statement is a full sentence. However, the statement can also be a sentence
fragment — particularly if the items in the list complete the thought or
instruction of the sentence.
The things most frequently requested by people visiting
Government Information Centres are:
1. answers to questions about government services
2. referrals to government staff
3. access to free government publications.
Punctuate and capitalize vertical lists consistently
How writers punctuate or capitalize items after the colon depends on a
number of factors in the vertical list.
If the items in the numbered or bulleted list are not sentences (as in the
example above), then do not capitalize each item that begins a list or close each
item with a period. A period is necessary only in the final item.
If the items in the numbered or bulleted list are complete sentences, then
capitalize each item that begins a list and complete each item with a period.
Have you visited a Government Information Centre lately? You
will be pleased to find the following:
•
Centre staff can provide you with a range of government
information.
•
Centre staff can offer a workstation with access to the
Internet to search government programs and services.
•
Centre staff can locate the free government publications
you need.
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5
Section
Punctuation
Just as a facial expression or gesture adds emphasis to the spoken
word, a well-placed punctuation mark can aid in communicating
your message.
P
unctuation has evolved
over the years into a fairly
standard set of rules that
tend to make the written language
more readily understandable. We
use terminal marks such as the
period, the question mark and the
exclamation mark to end sentences;
we use commas, semicolons and
dashes to separate elements within
a sentence; and we insert pairs of
commas, dashes, quotation marks
and brackets to enclose parts of a
sentence. For consistency across
the OPS and to ensure that your
intended meaning is conveyed by
Punctuation gets your reader’s attention
your writing, use the following rules
of punctuation in your
correspondence.
Vertical lists
Vertical lists — i.e., numbered or bulleted lists — can be punctuated in a
number of ways. We recommend letter writers use punctuation such as periods
at the end of items in vertical lists only when the items are full sentences.
Otherwise, listed items should begin with lower case letters and have no
punctuation at the end of the item. See the previous page for more
information on such lists.
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P U N C T U A T I O N
The comma
Commas usually travel in pairs.
Minister Ina Ontario, joined by Minister Seth Ontario, today
announced funding for the new program.
Do not insert a comma before the final and or or in a sequence unless the
sequence is complex and a comma would provide clarity.
The summit included speakers from Canada, the United States,
England, Wales, Ireland and South Africa.
Use a comma preceding and following a parenthetical phrase.
The commission, having met with community groups across the
province, will submit its report later this year.
To separate two independent clauses, use a comma before and.
The task force completed the report, and then the committee
began its work.
Use a comma to separate an introductory dependent clause from the
independent clause that follows.
As you stated in your letter, the minister is reviewing the
recommendations.
Commas are used to offset the year when the format of a date is
month/day/year.
The minister announced on February 17, 2005, that our
government would introduce the bill.
If only the month and year are used, commas are not necessary.
The government announced in May 2004 that it would start
receiving applications.
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P U N C T U A T I O N
The colon
As noted in Section 1, the primary use of the colon in letters is to complete the
salutation. Colons can also serve other purposes, however, such as introducing
vertical lists.
In order to effectively convey government messaging, each news
release should do the following:
•
state the action
•
identify the priority
•
give the motive
•
note the difference
•
include a tag line.
Colons can also be used to stress the main point of a statement: in other
words, for effect.
“Education has failed in a very serious way to convey the most important
lesson science can teach: scepticism.”
— David Suzuki
In addition, colons can be used to precede the restatement of an idea or a
thought, or to introduce an extended explanation.
The minister mentioned several things Ontarians could do to help their
province succeed: from reading to their kids, to conserving energy, to
volunteering in the community.
The semicolon
Often associated with formal writing, the semicolon is principally used to join
two closely related independent clauses.
“A cautious people learns from its past; a sensible people can
face its future. Canadians, on the whole, are both.”
— Desmond Morton
Care should be exercised to ensure the semicolon is used properly in
correspondence. For more information about its usage, we refer you to the
semicolon sections of The Canadian Press Stylebook and The Chicago Manual of
Style.
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P U N C T U A T I O N
The hyphen
Do not hyphenate a compound adjective if its meaning is clear and commonly
understood. But use a hyphen when it is necessary to group words or to join
adjectives to ensure the sentence’s meaning is clear.
5
The government-financed programs were well received by
Ontarians.
4
The government financed programs were well received by
Ontarians.
Hyphenate compound words that precede a noun.
The school’s third-grade teachers approved the curriculum.
Do not hyphenate compound words that follow a noun.
The school’s teachers of the third grade approved the curriculum.
Do not hyphenate adverbs ending in ly that modify adjectives or participles.
5
The hastily assembled news conference started late.
4
The hastily-assembled news conference started late.
Use a hyphen to attach prefixes to nouns when there are two possible
meanings.
re-cover
recover
A hyphen should be used if the combination of prefix and noun results in a
double vowel.
re-elect
re-examine
Avoid hyphenating titles (unless so indicated in the incoming letter).
The Governor General met with Ontario’s Lieutenant Governor.
Co-ordinate or coordinate?
Co-operate or cooperate?
We recommend retaining the hyphen in co-ordinate and
co-operate. The Canadian Press supports these spellings.
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P U N C T U A T I O N
The (non) hyphen in compound words
Certain compound words used throughout the OPS are commonly written as
one word without a hyphen.
interministerial
postsecondary
intergovernmental
provincewide
The apostrophe and possessive forms
Particular attention must be paid to the use of an apostrophe to indicate the
possessive case when a noun ends in s. For example, the possessive of plural
nouns ending in s is formed by adding an apostrophe.
the boys’ school
The possessive of singular nouns ending in an s or a z sound is usually
formed by adding an apostrophe and an s. This extra ’s, as can be seen in the
examples below, indicates a sis or siz sound that also occurs when saying the
word.
The press’s reaction to the announcement was enthusiastic.
The Premier quoted from Keats’s “Ode on a Grecian Urn.”
Marge Simpson once worked in Lionel Hutz's realty office.
As The Canadian Press Stylebook explains, however, there are times when adding
the extra s will make a word “hard to say or grate on the ear.” We concur with
CP and provide these examples to illustrate when not to add the ’s. Again, the
punctuation reflects pronunciation.
Minister Jones’ announcement surprised the press.
The Premier quoted from Dickens’ A Tale of Two Cities.
Homer Simpson once landed a boat on top of Ned Flanders’ car.
Other apostrophe dos and don’ts
Remember to use an apostrophe in such nouns as the following:
arm’s-length agency
Hudson’s Bay Co.
driver’s licence
New Year’s Day
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P U N C T U A T I O N
Do not use the apostrophe to indicate a plural.
5
Several MPPs attended the news conference.
4
Several MPP’s attended the news conference.
Do not use apostrophes to indicate the possessive case of pronouns. And
never confuse its (possessive pronoun) with it’s (contraction of it is).
“It’s no longer Bay Street’s worst-kept secret,” said one analyst
after the company confirmed it is buying back all of its shares.
Quotation marks
Use quotation marks when quoting from legislation or speeches. Avoid using
quotation marks when highlighting words or phrases from incoming
correspondence.
4
Thank you for letting me know about the “parliament” that you
and your friends are staging next month.
Em dashes
Em dashes are used to precede and follow parenthetical information in a
sentence (often in place of commas or parentheses). Like commas, em dashes
typically come in pairs — unless the parenthetical information comes at the
end of a sentence. While an em dash can be used without spacing, the most
common practice is to space before and after it.
Many writers find stylistic advantages to using em dashes. They can add a
conversational touch to a sentence — or reinforce key information. Other
writers — and readers — may be distracted by the halting rhythms — and the
abrupt stylistic shift — forced upon them by this form of punctuation.
How do I insert an em dash?
In Microsoft Word, an em dash can be inserted into your
document by typing Ctrl + Alt + - (the minus sign on the
numeric keypad).
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Section
Style and Usage
Writers must use clear and concise language when communicating
with those who write to the provincial government.
T
he Government of Ontario receives letters from people with wide
differences in their ability to read and write. Many do not speak
English as a first language. That is why it is important for responses to
contain plain language.
In some cases it may be difficult to write plainly — as when discussing legal
information. Always keep your audience in mind. Judge your readers’
knowledge about an issue. Provide information that will benefit
correspondents and that they will understand, or refer them to resources
(e.g., a 1-800 number) where additional explanations can be given.
In this section we offer some other general suggestions and ideas that will help
you to successfully — and simply — connect with your reader.
Keep it simple
Use short, concise sentences and paragraphs. Be direct and to the point. Avoid
bureaucratic terms, jargon and “buzz phrases” such as going forward. Delete
unnecessary adjectives, adverbs and intensifiers.
5
Thank you for sending me resolutions from the 6/70 Area
Economic Diversification Committee.
4
I appreciate your providing me with copies of the official
resolution from the 6/70 Area Economic Diversification
Committee clarifying the intent of its suggested amendments.
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S T Y L E
A N D
U S A G E
Choose the active voice
Whenever possible, write in the active voice rather than the passive voice. In
the active voice, the word order is subject–verb–object.
5
The committee will review all applications for new licences in
early April.
4
In early April, all applications for new licences will be reviewed
by the committee.
Emphasize the positive
People are generally more receptive to positive messages.
5
You must pass the examination to qualify for admission.
4
If you fail to pass the examination, you will not qualify for
admission.
Avoid restating negative comments that may be contained in an incoming
letter.
5
Thank you for your letter about funding.
4
Thank you for your letter about funding cuts.
You or your?
Possessive pronouns are used with a gerund — a word ending in ing that
functions as a noun — to indicate ownership.
5
4
I appreciate your bringing this matter to my attention.
I appreciate you bringing this matter to my attention.
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S T Y L E
A N D
U S A G E
Style agreement keeps letters consistent
Avoid biased language
In today’s workplace, few jobs or professions are the exclusive domain of men
or women. To reflect this reality, the language we use to describe someone’s
profession should be gender neutral.
The examples below illustrate this point.
Instead of
Use
businessman, businesswoman
business person, executive
chairman
chair
fireman
firefighter
fisherman
angler, commercial fisher
layman
layperson
manpower
workforce, staff, personnel
middle man
intermediary
policeman
police officer
spokesman
spokesperson, representative
workman
worker, employee
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S T Y L E
A N D
U S A G E
Use plain words and phrases
The table below is a selection of common words that can replace more
complex ones. For a more wide-ranging list, see the “Plain Words” section of
Caps and Spelling.
Instead of
Try
accomplish
do
activate
begin
allocate
give
approximately
about
ascertain
find out
attempt
try
disseminate
send out, distribute
endeavour
try
facilitate
ease, help, make easier
going forward
from now on, in the future (or delete)
hopefully
I am hopeful
impact (verb)
have an effect
(have an) impact on
affect, influence
in lieu of
instead of
indicate
show, suggest, hint, imply
input/feedback
advice, ideas, comments, suggestions
inquire
ask
linkages
links
objective
goal
obtain
get, gain, come by
optimum
best, greatest, most
necessitate
need, require
regarding
about
request
ask
strategize
plan
sufficient
enough, plenty
utilize
use
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S T Y L E
A N D
U S A G E
Delete unnecessary words
You can cut out many words and phrases without any loss to your intended
meaning. The table below illustrates how such words or phrases can be
replaced with simple words. For a more extensive list of plain language terms,
refer to the “Plain Words” section of Caps and Spelling.
Instead of
Try
adequate number of
enough
at the present time
now
by means of
by
during such time
when
has the capacity
can, is able
in respect of
for
in the absence of
without
in the event that
if
in order to
to
in view of the fact
because
on the part of
by
subsequent to
after
until such time
until
with a view to
to
with reference to
about
with respect to
on, for, from, about, as for
with the exception of
except
Use The Canadian Oxford Dictionary
Writers throughout the OPS use The Canadian Oxford Dictionary, Oxford
University Press, as their authority for spelling Canadian English. The editors
of Caps and Spelling also cite this dictionary as their primary reference.
You may want to compile a list of words frequently misspelled in your ministry
— or preferred spellings that are exceptions to those noted in The Canadian
Oxford Dictionary or Caps and Spelling. The table on the next page includes
examples of both categories.
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A N D
U S A G E
Instead of
Use
ageing
aging
benefitted
benefited
centered
centred
defense
defence
enquiry
inquiry
fulfill
fulfil
honourary
honorary
license (noun)
licence (noun)
licence (verb)
license (verb)
judgement
judgment
Medicare (US program)
medicare (Canadian system)
practise (noun)
practice (noun)
practice (verb)
practise (verb)
Use preferred terms for disability issues
The lexicon of words and phrases that the Accessibility Directorate of Ontario
includes on the “Word Choices” page of its website1 is designed to help writers
choose language “that is neither demeaning nor hurtful, and terms that are
preferred by people with disabilities.”
We have included some of this lexicon in the table below.
1
Instead of
Use
Aged / elderly
Seniors, older adults
Differently abled
Person with a disability
Disabled (the)
People with disabilities
Physically challenged
Person with a physical disability
www.mcss.gov.on.ca/accessibility/en/main/preferredterms.htm
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Section
Styles of Address
Correct titles are more than a matter of courtesy; they are a part of
protocol and must be used.
Formal occasions demand formal titles
F
question to a protocol co-ordinator
there by calling 416-325-8535.
inding the right style of
address is something you
may do every day — or
once a year. Fortunately, there are
experts within the OPS to help you
sort out VIPs.
You can also check the online
advice of the federal Department
of Canadian Heritage at its “Styles
of address” website (see page 48
for the link). Much of the
information in this section is
courtesy of that site.
Start with the Office of
International Relations and
Protocol. You can put your
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S T Y L E S
O F
A D D R E S S
The monarch
Dignitary
Address reference
Salutation
The Queen
Her Majesty The2 Queen
Your Majesty:
Federal dignitaries
Dignitary
Address reference
Salutation
The Governor General of
Canada
His/Her Excellency the Right
Honourable <name>3
Excellency:
Former Governor
General
The Right Honourable <name>
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
Prime Minister of Canada
The Right Honourable <name>4
Dear Prime Minister:5
Former Prime Minister
The Right Honourable <name>
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
Speaker of the House of
Commons
The Honourable <name>
Dear Mr. Speaker:
Dear Madam Speaker:
Cabinet minister
(House of Commons)
The Honourable <name>6
Minister of <department]
Dear Minister:
Former Cabinet minister
The Honourable <name>7
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
Senator
The Honourable <name>
Senator
Dear Senator:
Senator the Honourable <name>
(if also a federal Cabinet member)
Former Senator
The Honourable <name>8
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
MP (not a minister)
Mr./Ms. <name>, MP
<name of riding>
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
Articles are always capitalized in titles used with The Royal Family.
The Governor General may have other titles, such as CC, CMM, COM, CD, PC, QC.
4 The Prime Minister may have other titles, such as MP, PC, QC.
5 Never write Mr. Prime Minister or Madam Prime Minister.
6 The minister may have other titles, such as MP, PC, QC.
7 Federal Cabinet ministers retain the title “Honourable” for life. As members of the Privy Council, they may
also take the postnominal title PC.
8 Senators retain the title “Honourable” for life.
2
3
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S T Y L E S
O F
A D D R E S S
Provincial / Territorial dignitaries
Dignitary
Address reference
Salutation
Lieutenant Governor
His/Her Honour the Honourable
<name>
Lieutenant Governor of < >
Your Honour:
Former Lieutenant
Governor
The Honourable <name>9
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
Premier of a province or
territory
The Honourable10 <name>
Premier of < >
Dear Premier:
Speaker of a provincial /
territorial legislature
The Honourable <name>
Speaker <legislative body>11
Dear Mr. Speaker:
Dear Madam Speaker:
Provincial / territorial
Cabinet minister
The Honourable10 <name>
Minister of <ministry>
Dear Minister:
Leader of the Official
Opposition
Mr./Ms. <name>, MPP12
Leader, Official Opposition
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
Leader, opposition party,
(not Official Opposition)
Mr./Ms. <name>, MPP12
Leader, ________ Party
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
Parliamentary Assistant
Mr./Ms. <name>
Parliamentary Assistant to . . .
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
Member of a provincial /
territorial legislature
Mr./Ms. <name>, MPP12
<riding>
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
Aboriginal leaders
Leader
Address reference
Salutation
Grand Chief
Grand Chief <name>
Dear Grand Chief <surname>:
Chief
Chief <name>
Dear Chief <surname>:
Lieutenant governors retain the title Honourable for life.
A premier or provincial Cabinet minister retains the Honourable for life only if a member of the Privy Council.
11 In Ontario the Speaker’s title is: Speaker of the Legislative Assembly. The Speaker has the title the Honourable
only while in office.
12 or MNA, MHA, MLA.
9
10
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S T Y L E S
O F
A D D R E S S
Diplomatic dignitaries
Dignitary
Address reference
Salutation
Ambassador to Canada
His/Her Excellency <name>
Ambassador of < >
Dear Ambassador:
High Commissioner of a
country to Canada
His/Her Excellency <name> High
Commissioner for < > to Canada
Dear High
Commissioner:
Canadian ambassador
abroad
Mr./Ms. <name>
Ambassador of Canada to < >
Dear Ambassador:
Canadian high
commissioner abroad
Mr./Ms. <name>
High Commissioner for Canada to < >
Dear High
Commissioner:
Consul General
Mr./Ms. <name>
Consul General
Dear Consul General:
Municipal dignitaries
Dignitary
Address reference
Salutation
Mayor
His/Her Worship <name>
Mayor
<city/town name>
Dear Mayor <surname>:
Reeve or Warden
Mr./Ms. <name>:
Reeve/Warden
Dear Reeve <surname>:
Dear Warden <surname>:
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S T Y L E S
O F
A D D R E S S
Judiciary
Ontario Court of Justice
Judiciary
Address reference
Salutation
Chief Justice
The Honourable <name>
Chief Justice
Ontario Court of Justice
Dear Chief Justice
<surname>:
Regional senior judges
The Honourable <name>
Regional Senior Judge for the
Region
Ontario Court of Justice
Dear Regional Senior
Judge <surname>:
Provincially appointed judges
The Honourable Mr./Madam
Justice <name>
Ontario Court of Justice
Your Honour:
His/Her Worship <name>
Justice of the Peace
Ontario Court of Justice
Your Worship:
Justices of the peace
Dear Mr./Madam
Justice <surname>:
Superior Court of Justice or Court of Appeal for Ontario13
Judiciary
Address reference
Salutation
Chief Justice
The Honourable <name>
Chief Justice of the Superior
Court of Justice
Dear Chief Justice
<surname> :
The Honourable <name>
Chief Justice of Ontario
Regional senior judges
The Honourable Mr./Madam
Justice <name>
Regional Senior Judge for the
Region
Superior Court of Justice
Dear Regional Senior Judge
<surname>:
Federally appointed judges
(Superior Court of Justice)
The Honourable Mr./Madam
Justice <name>
Superior Court of Justice
Your Honour
or
Dear Mr./Madam Justice
<surname>:
Federally appointed judges
(Court of Appeal for Ontario)
The Honourable Justice
<name>
Court of Appeal for Ontario
Dear Justice <surname>:
13 Upon retirement, judges from the Superior Court of Justice and the Court of Appeal for Ontario take the
honorific The Honourable [name]
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S T Y L E S
O F
A D D R E S S
Religious dignitaries (Protestant)
Dignitary
Address reference
Salutation
Present Moderator
(United Church of
Canada and
Presbyterian Church
in Canada)
The Right Reverend <name>
Moderator of <church>
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
Past Moderator
(United Church of
Canada and
Presbyterian Church
in Canada)
The Very Reverend <name>
Moderator of <church>
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
Minister
The Reverend <name>
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
Religious dignitaries (Anglican)
Dignitary
Address reference
Salutation
Archbishop
The Most Reverend <name>
Archbishop of <diocese>
Dear Archbishop <surname>:
Bishop
The Right Reverend <name>
Bishop of <diocese>
Dear Bishop <surname>:
Archdeacon
The Venerable <name>
Archdeacon
Dear Archdeacon <surname>:
Canon
The Reverend Canon <name>
Dear Canon <surname>:
Minister
The Reverend <name>
Dear Father <surname>:
Dear Mr./Ms. <surname>:
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S T Y L E S
O F
A D D R E S S
Religious dignitaries (Roman Catholic)
Dignitary
Address reference
Salutation
The Pope
His Holiness Pope <name>
Your Holiness:
Cardinal
His Eminence <name>
Your Eminence:
Archbishop
The Most Reverend <name>
Archbishop of <diocese>
Your Grace:
Bishop
The Most Reverend <name>
Bishop of <diocese>
Dear Bishop <surname>:
Priest
The Reverend <name>
Dear Father <surname>:
Nun
The Reverend Sister <name>
Dear Sister <surname>:
Religious dignitaries (Jewish)
Dignitary
Address reference
Salutation
Rabbi
Rabbi <name>
Dear Rabbi <surname>:
Religious dignitaries (Muslim)
Dignitary
Address reference
Salutation
Imam
Imam <name>
Dear Imam <surname>:
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S T Y L E S
O F
A D D R E S S
Canadian Forces
Officer
Address reference
Salutation
General
General <name>
Dear General:
Captain
Captain <name>
Dear Captain:
Colonel
Colonel <name>
Dear Colonel:
Sergeant
Sergeant <name>
Dear Sergeant <surname>:
Private
Private <name>
Dear Private <surname>:
Police officers
Officer
Address reference
Salutation
Chief
Chief <name>
<name of police service>
Dear Chief <surname>:
Staff Superintendent
Staff Superintendent <name>
Dear Staff
Superintendent
<surname>:
Constable
Constable <name>
Dear Constable
<surname>:
Medical doctors
Occupation
Address reference
Salutation
Licensed practitioners of medicine,
including veterinarians and dentists
Dr. <name>
Dear Dr. <surname>:
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A
Appendix
E-Words
The computer lexicon is filled with jargon and technical terms.
Over the next several pages we provide some consistency for the use
of terms used in information technology and technical
communications.
@
browser
blog
CD-ROM
bookmark
check box
A symbol pronounced at sign or at.
Separates the user name from the
domain name in e-mail addresses.
n. A program that downloads and
views webpages, e.g., Microsoft
Explorer, Netscape Navigator.
n. & v. •n. Slang term for weblog. •v.
The act of writing or maintaining a
weblog.
n. Acronym for Compact Disc –
Read-Only Memory. CD-ROM disc is
redundant.
n. & v. • n. A saved website
address. •v. Method of saving
useful website addresses in a
browser.
n. A type of interface that displays a
selection choice with a check mark.
Possible actions are select and clear.
click
browse
v. An action using the buttons of
the computer mouse or other input
device. Do not use click in or click
on.
v. Manual activity of finding
websites. When using a search
engine, use terms find or search.
Avoid using the term surf.
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compact disc
file name
n. An optical disc for digitally
encoding data. Acronym is CD.
n. & adj. File name can be used as an
adjective or a noun.
database
firewall
n. Hardware, software or
combination of the two that
provides security against
unauthorized access to a computer
network.
n. A collection of data arranged for
search and retrieval.
double-click
v. An action using the buttons of
the computer mouse or other input
device.
hard copy
n. A paper version of an electronic
file. Avoid using as an adjective.
download
v. The process of transferring data,
a file or a program to a local
computer.
hardware
n. The physical equipment of the
computer and network.
drop-down menu
home page
n. Type of menu that appears when
a pointer is placed on it.
n. The main page of any website.
Do not use start page.
e-
HTML
adj. Prefix abbreviation for electronic.
Hyphenate all e-words (e-form,
e-government, e-mail, e-etc.)
n. Acronym for Hypertext Markup
Language. Used to structure text and
multimedia images and to set up
links between documents.
e-mail
n. A message sent over a computer
network. Singular is e-mail; plural is
e-mail messages (not e-mails). Do not
use as a verb (e.g., thanks for
e-mailing me). Proper use: Thank
you for your e-mail (one e-mail).
Thank you for your e-mail
messages (more than one e-mail).
incoming
adj. Refers to e-mail messages that
are being downloaded.
Internet
n. The system of networks that
connect computers around the
world using the TCP/IP
(Transmission Control
Protocol/Internet Protocol).
field
n. Location in a window reserved
for a specified piece of information.
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Correspondence technology helps process incoming and outgoing mail
online / offline
intranet
n. A privately maintained computer
network that can be accessed by
authorized people.
adv. Connected to/not connected
to a system or network.
plug-in
keyword
n. Software that adds features or
functions to another piece of
software, e.g., Shockwave,
RealAudio, etc.
n. Word used as reference point for
finding information.
link
program
n. A text or graphic users click to
go to an Internet/intranet site, page
or file.
n. & v. •n. A sequence of coded
instructions that enables a
computer to perform particular
actions. Do not use the term
application unless referring to
software development.
•v. Creating such instructions.
log on / log off
v. To create or end a session.
Preferable to log in/log out.
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www.gov.ca.). Keep the entire URL
on one line. If a URL is too long to
fit on one line, provide the home
page address along with direction
on how to locate the desired page
or location. Use plain text. Do not
underline, bold or italicize the
URL. Begin the string with www (no
need to start with http).
pull-down menu
n. Similar to drop-down menu but
requires user to click before
information in menu is revealed.
scroll
v. To cause displayed text or
graphics to move up, down or
across a window.
user-friendly
search
adj. Designed to make the user’s
task as easy as possible.
v. Use search as a verb, not a noun.
Avoid search your document; use search
through your document instead.
user name
n. Name used to obtain access to a
computer system.
(the) Web
n. Shortened form for the World
Wide Web.
webmaster
n. Person responsible for the
maintenance of a website.
scroll bar
n. The interface tool to scroll within
a window frame.
webpage
n. A document on the World Wide
Web, often hyperlinked to other
documents.
tab
n. Do not use as a verb. Avoid Tab
through the dialog box; write Use the
TAB key to move through a dialog box.
website
n. Collection or grouping of
webpages (e.g., Government of
Ontario website).
text box
n. Box where text may be added.
World Wide Web (WWW)
URL
n. The complete set of documents
residing on all Internet servers that
use the HTTP protocol.
n. Acronym for Uniform Resource
Locator, or website address (e.g.,
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Appendix
References
Dictionaries
The Canadian Oxford Dictionary. 1st and 2nd eds. Oxford
University Press, 1998 and 2004.
The Paperback Oxford Canadian Dictionary. Oxford University
Press, 2004.
The one to own
Style and usage
The Canadian Press Stylebook. 13th ed. The Canadian Press, 2004.
The Canadian Press Caps and Spelling. 17th ed. The Canadian Press, 1999–2005.
The Canadian Style. Rev. ed. Dundurn Press Limited in co-operation with Public
Works and Government Services Canada Translation Bureau, 1997.
The Chicago Manual of Style. 15th ed. The University of Chicago Press, 2003.
The Communications Style Guide of the Ontario Public Service, 2004.
Strunk, William Jr. and E.B. White. The Elements of Style. Various eds. and
publishers.
Word Choices: A Lexicon Of Preferred Terms For Disability Issues. The Accessibility
Directorate of Ontario.
www.mcss.gov.on.ca/accessibility/en/main/preferredterms.htm
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Postal standards
Canada Postal Guide. Canada Post. See:
www.canadapost.ca/tools/pg/manual/default-e.asp
Legislative and legal references
Canadian Guide to Uniform Legal Citation, 5th ed. Carswell, 2002.
Styles of address
“Styles of address” of the Protocol section of the Department of Canadian
Heritage website. www.pch.gc.ca/progs/cpsc-ccsp/pe/address1_e.cfm
E-Words
Microsoft Manual of Style for Technical Publications, Third Edition. Microsoft
Press, 2004.
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