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Review:

ginnypotter242 says:This story was incredible! Hugo a Anslee's relationship was perfect, and I loved every minute of this one-shot. It was incredibly well-written, and the emotions were great. I wasn't entirely sure what had happened when I first started reading, but I had an inkling. (one of those-no, please don't let me be right about this feelings). I love how their whole story is laid out through pictures- it's so beautiful, yet so painful. I love they they were a relaxed couple. It truly made the story about their entire relationship, not just their romantic relationship.

The emotions in this story were great. You changed the mood with each flashback flawlessly. I didn't find any spelling or grammar issues. I like how Anslee relates to Colin- it's a nice connection with the camera. Great job with this entire story.

~Sara

Author's Response: I'm glad you like this! It definitely had a fair bit of foreshadowing. The picture-flashbacks were so much fun to write, in that it was a style nothing like what I usually write. Their relationship was great to write as well, because it wasn't just romance, but it still had some cute romantic elements.

I'm glad you thought I wrote this well - thanks so much for the review and making me smile like an idiot!