AxiomGoldie

Amazing first part! Love how you displayed Purvi's will power and determination. Hopefully Arjun comes back saying he didn't go through with the marriage. I don't think any other guy could fill the void in Purvi's heart that he left. I hope the real PR story does not leave the seperated for three months like this.

Thank you for the feedback.

I will always try to do justice to these two. After all they are the reason I started watching this show.

AxiomGoldie

Laurie, amazing, could feel Purvi's emotions, the floodgates are about to break open. Who is the Director of the new company, Arjun himself? He has not left for Canada with Ovi, has he? He couldn't bring himself to, told Ovi at the last minute before she boarded the plane perhaps and he stayed back? What a dumbo!

Thanks Janhvi Your feedback means alot

This fan fiction writing makes me nervous but its a story I've been toying with for a bit. I hope it turns out the way I see it in my head.

You've got a mother's instinct

As for the rest, what does your dhamad say again? Oh yes, wait and watch

AxiomGoldie

Congratulations! You have a real flair for fiction, and not just for wicked humour. I truly like your writing style, it is spare and yet both evocative and gripping. I am waiting eagerly for Part 2 and then 3. Don't take too long!

I am NOT going to speculate about who is what; to reveal all that when you choose and how you choose is your privilege. But do hurry up!

Shyamala

Thank you Shyamala Coming from you, that really means alot too

I am writng this story with a weather eye on the horizon so I hope I can do justice to ARVI before the storm breaks.

I appreciate your feedback and look forward to entertaining you again soon

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