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Rated 4 / 5 stars2012-04-03 09:25:41

I really shouldn't have laughed at that last part. But you can bet your ass I did anyway.

Nice little flash with a few good jokes, and lots of bad ones. But the bad ones are like Adult Swim Shows, it's really terrible but you can't stop watching. They get better each time, keep up the good work.

Rated 4 / 5 stars2012-04-06 05:15:26

Rated 4 / 5 stars2012-04-05 02:37:05

These shorts are really funny, but you need to tie them together. Pun after pun or joke can only take you so far. Make a short story that ties a few clips together, then make another short story that ties a few more together. You might find that you have a lot more material you can use in the filler you use to tie scenes together.