Melanie Bishop

Melanie Bishop writes fiction, nonfiction, and screenplays and taught writing for 22 years at Prescott College. In Carmel, she offers retreats, classes, editing and coaching through Lexi Services, and reviews books for Huffington Post, New York Journal of Books and Carmel Magazine. Her young adult novel, My So-Called Ruined Life, (Torrey House Press, 2014) was a finalist last May for both the John Gardner Award in Fiction, and CLMP’s Firecracker Awards. The Savior of Me, Book Two of the series, is due out next year.

The Writing Practice: Methodology and Camaraderie

A friend and I went to a cabin in Montana for a writing retreat. The house is called Moosewillow, and before we'd even finished unloading the rental car, we saw our first moose. Large and ungainly, way out in a field by the house, like he'd been dropped in by crane. A cardboard cut-out, till he moved and came to life. We took him as a welcome. We took him as a sign.

As we hauled our luggage from the trunk, it started to snow. Mid-May, but Montana is unpredictable like that. A moose on arrival? A wash of summer snow? A claw-foot tub? We'd been at our retreat mere minutes, and already had more than we'd asked for.

Finding ways to get words on the page is not complicated. You can write for hours without stopping, or you can write with breaks. (Guess which one I like.) Some writers hold strong opinions on the timing and spacing of those breaks. Ellen Sussman, in a Poets & Writers article, recommends for each hour you aim to be productive, 45 minutes of writing, followed by 15 of doing something else. The something else should not be word-related, should not involve the internet or checking your email, for instance. It should be something mindless, a task you can do while having the page with which you just parted ways, still present in your head.

A short walk around the block is a good use of the 15 minutes. One thing I like to do is make a snack and take it outside to eat it, feeling the sun on my face. Folding laundry: perfect. Pestering your cat (Wake up!) can be fun. Doing some yoga or taking a nap: all fine, as long as you limit it to the prescribed 15 minutes. One friend of mine likes to spend his 15 minutes per hour doing focused cleaning of one section of his apartment in Brooklyn.

He might tackle a part of the bathroom during his first 15 minute break, finish the bathroom during the next break, and then, in his third break, scrub the kitchen counters and stove. He gets in a 4 hour writing session, and, when he's done, the apartment is clean, or cleaner than it had been. Every hour yields 45 minutes of actual time generating sentences, and 15 minutes of consciously stepping away from it. Sussman's theory is that your mind continues to work on the story or poem or essay, and that the actual time away from the act of writing is productive. It's refreshing.

She says even when you feel you're on a roll, and don't want a break, when that timer rings you must force yourself to stop. She says good things always come after the break. And besides, it's not good to sit stagnant in one position for hours on end. Don't do anything that requires your full concentration; keep your mind available for working on story problems or running lines through your head or hearing an echo of what you just wrote.

This same writer friend who cleans his apartment during the Sussman method—he and I got our MFAs together about 25 years ago. Now, even though he is on the East coast and I'm out West, we often set up writing days together. For a while there, after he'd read a biography on Joyce Carol Oates, we tried to mimic her method. She writes without stopping, often without eating; she purportedly writes anywhere between five and eight hours a day, even when she has house guests! We call these JCO sessions. My friend is better at these than I am. Other days we aim to mimic Ellen Sussman and we call this "Sussing." "I'll be sussing in the morning from 9a.m. to noon; you want to join me?" I'm a huge advocate of the Sussman method, and have proselytized on its behalf. The reason it works for me is it takes away the dread. If I'm faced with four or five or six hours of the JCO method, it's too hard, too long, merciless. But setting my timer for 45 minutes—any day, any time—is so very doable. The 15 minutes off for every 45 minutes dedicated, makes it completely tolerable to do three or four or five hours of this.

But comrades! You have to have them. These are your co-workers. Knowing someone else is working, even on the other side of the country, makes writing less lonely. Nobody gets you the way you get each other. The very questions you would dread coming from a random audience member after a reading—Do you write better in the morning or evening? Better by hand or on computer? So pedestrian!—you will happily discuss at length with a writer friend. How this new pen you bought (Signo Uniball 207) has seriously changed your writing life. You can talk about the minutiae of every new method employed, paragraph edited, page gained, because talking about writing is always easier than writing.

Our first night at Moosewillow, my friend and I wrote down our goals and intentions for the ten-day retreat. After reading them aloud to each other, I looked for some way to display them so we’d be constantly reminded. We found this thing in the house—a metal stand, with several rods sticking out at different heights. I found tape and we adhered our goals to this gangly, tree-like apparatus. I was looking for the best place to park the tree, prominent in the living room, when my friend started to crack up. "What are we doing?" she said. I said, "We're hanging up our goals." And then it struck me, too. The absurdity, this unwieldy contraption, our torn-out notebook paper stuck to its appendages like some ill-conceived grade school project. We laughed to the point of incapacitation. If a moose had looked in our window right then, he might've thought we were two women folded over from food poisoning.

Clearly, you had to be there. Fortunately for us, we were.

Postscript: The above blog post was achieved through the Sussman method, in three sessions of Sussing. It was read and reviewed by the writer friend of the cleaner apartment in Brooklyn. The biography mentioned is Invisible Writer: A Biography of Joyce Carol Oates by Greg Johnson.