Rated 4.5 / 5 stars2012-05-16 14:37:05

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars2012-05-08 18:18:07

This is a great idea and is a funny idea, but needed to be executed just a little better to get the best score, your design and character skills are really good, so there is nothing wrong with your drawing skills. The animation is mostly good as well, what I personally didn't like was the thought bubble scenario, this could have been done with little lip syncing instead or showing it in full screen, obviously we already get the idea, its just a suggestion anyway. Music was really good as well. Enjoyed it.

Rated 4 / 5 stars2012-05-16 20:17:10

Great animation. The musical tone excruciatingly well with the motion set in the initial plot and the character emotions were fantastic. I also enjoyed the rather subtle and brief flashback to the making of the device, gives rather more depth and understanding to what a character goes through to get to where they are today... or rather tomorrow in this instance. And of course showing these sorts of flashbacks for plot drive is very vital in stories of time travel. The creation of the device used to manipulate time is necessary to any plot.

His reaction was something to be expected, but oddly enough I never did suspect it. They way the facial expressions and body gestures flowed I assumed something different from all of this like reviewing the process of making the device and then beginning an interesting excursion through time and space....

My expectations made your ending so much more fun. I honestly didn't think he'd just send himself backwards in time to steal from himself. That was hilarious and a fun notion, I think I'll just have to try that out one day, perhaps.