An old man standing next to him. (Profile, full body camera shot)
Filthy white
hair matted on one side, wearing a tux and a bow tie ((or long))
but no belt,
and one of his belt loops had snapped. (Short close up shot of
snapped belt
loop) He had a pinched, old, wrinkled face. (Very quick, about 1
second long
profile shot of old mans face)

He's waiting for the busway too. The same one? Maybe. Maybe
it matters. Jonas
looks straight up at harsh light above him, accusingly.

Jonas frowned and looked at his watch, it didn't have a band, it
was held to his
wrist floppily by a rubber band. (close up of watch) It had
stopped at 3:29AM.
(Close up of Jonas face looking off) I thought it would be
4:00AM by now. Maybe my
watch hasn't stopped. Maybe the seconds' hand just broke. He
looked to the
old man,

(Profile shot of Jonas, odd angle so old man is also in shot)
"Does the busway twenty
four stop here again?"

The old man acted like he didn't hear but looked away a little,
shifting his stance as
if annoyed. Jonas' scowl deepened. He doesn't ask again though.
Old man makes a
tall, hard stomp with one foot (Audio gunshot) but says nothing.
After a
moment's pause the old man barks, "Bus twenty four is
dirty!" he looked up when he said it, as if to a bird on
a tree
branch or the harsh light.

That's not what I asked, old man.
(Accusingly)

Jonas pulled at his own tie, loosening it. I don't work for
another four hours. Or,
rather, four hours and thirty one minutes, if my watch is right.
I don't know.
The old man never looked at him. Not once.

Jonas looks to the clock on the wall. It was black and white.
(Zoom in on wall
clock) It also read 3:29. Still? Jonas thought. (Close
on Jonas
face) He looked from the wall back into the nothing down the
busway, then up
the other way then back to his watch (Another close up of his
watch still at
3:29).

(Same picture as the opening scene((same footage as before
maybe)) ) (Change scene to close frontal of Jonas, pan
camera left to see a woman standing a little ways behind Jonas,
hands folded in
front of her. Her face is heavily powdered with dark red
lipstick, almost
sloppily put on, more hurriedly done, and she is baring her
teeth, she is
looking at him but camera arrives on her already baring her
teeth, face
strained.

(Cam full body frontal close up of woman baring teeth, static
audio)

(Cam full body of Jonas looking over his shoulder at her,
cut static at scene change)

"Dirty?" Jonas asks the old man. Old man does not reply so
instead Jonas asks the time.

(Cam same) Old man deliberately looks away but says deliberately,
as if obvious, "Three
Thirty perfectly in the AM".

(Frontal shot of Jonas) Jonas looks at his watch

(Close up of watch) Watch reads 3:29.

Liar Jonas thinks.

"Liar" Jonas says. Old man doesn't reply.

I don't think that my watch and the clock on the wall stopped
working at the exact same time. Maybe it's supposed to be
four
in the AM. But time probably stopped. That makes more sense.
Maybe.

"I said be quiet!" (Camera swivel and change to another
young
man, maybe teenage, obviously distressed from look on face and
the way he's standing. Was not
present in previous shots. Dressed in a business suit.)

Jonas frowns at new young man, (Odd angle profile shot of both,
old man now gone).
Young man still in distressed pose and facial. Jonas gives
quizzical look and
then slowly looks away. The young man then moves quickly passed
woman

(Close up profile shot of young man walking by woman who is
still turned around)

(Close up passing by Jonas, same style)

(Close up passing the old man same cam style).

(Original opening cam shot, all characters present and standing
(woman backwards) as
distressed young man walks down the busway off camera at hurried
brisk pace)

(Bus arrives at the busway, original cam shot, bus obscures
view of all characters. ((Can't help if people actually get off
the bus or
not)) bus leaves, all three characters present in their same
positions)