ho-lay fuh...crap! (i was SO not gonna swear there...~innocent looks~)hmm...i gotta stop crying now...me be getting weird looks...XD well you know what? the can just go shove it up their -- right. moving on. i have to say that this was a very beautiful one shot that you have written there...i'm in love with this one...i guess we're all masochists at heart. ~sardonic grin~

yeah, it did seem just a little rushed...but not to the point where its like...wait! wait! WTF? how did we get here? it was just fine. and...did not detract from my great waterworks...XD ~sniffle~

the emotion that you practically wove into the story (whoo! metaphor! hiss...its my english class coming back to haunt me...~shudder~ lolz) makes you, as the reader, feel like you were there...or were a character...it makes it so much easier to connect with the story...

on a slight 180, i love that song...have you heard the acoustic version of it? its pretty...and matt's voice can pull off both screaming and singing wonderfully...right...i'm rambling...and WAY off topic...i'll shut up now...lolz