Version 2: I reduced the saturation on the side of the neck and shoulder some more.
The hair behind the arm appears as a black outline along the arm so I moved the arm sideways to cover the hair.
(Yeah, I obsess over details. LOL)

DS4 (well, 4.5 Release Candidate technically) - Only postwork is the signature
Almost forgot to submit this though the forum wasn't giving me updates. Made small changes but the details are probably far too subtle to notice.