There is something about this poem that is deeply thought provoking. It seems like a fantasy, but it seems like we've skipped ahead and are now at an action scene. I think it's a great piece though I am intrigued as to why the lies he/she has written down will have such grave effects. Though it is true, the past cannot be rewritten - ah! Maybe that's it, you can't rewrite the past with lies! Ah I'll be so happy if I worked that out. It seems to me, especially now I've worked that out, that this beautiful poem has a moral to it and a moral I hold very close to me. Brilliant piece, clever, intricate and fantastic imagery to say the least.