Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here we go guys just a demo for now but_still thinking about adding some smooth and catchy female vocal to it but you can hear the concept already

Darek

i kinda like it Darek, has a nice feel. Not sure about that saw-ish midbass, maybe something smoother would be better for the feel of the track?
i dont think the piano is necessary, theres kinda too many things going on then

The kick seems way too big/heavy for that kind of track, it eats up the rest of the track. Also it would make the bass a bit more prominent, which I think is needed for a warm, slow-groover type track.

Made a new track in the last few days, thoughts on the mix? It sounds nice and balanced to me but I don't have actual monitors

Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here we go guys just a demo for now but_still thinking about adding some smooth and catchy female vocal to it but you can hear the concept already

Darek

i like the idear and when the piano comes in it gives it a flowing feel BUT the percusion does not seem to drive the track infact i think that it drowns out some of the main elements.

cut back on ur perc and bring the piano up, less is more(yes im guilty of this )

Nov-19-2015 14:59

Oakenshieldtranceaddict

Registered: Oct 2012
Location: Blackpool

quote:

Originally posted by evo8
something deeper again

i love this reminds me so much of my daniel poole records the kick needs to have a top though you could add a short hat for the kick
so it tics like a clock and roll of a small amount of the sub.

this reminds me so much of my youth lol

Nov-19-2015 15:06

Oakenshieldtranceaddict

Registered: Oct 2012
Location: Blackpool

quote:

Originally posted by Richard Butler
Great calls.

I've changed the bass and the drop, is this more what you had in mind?
EDIT I just made the riser up to the drop less epic and it seems to really make the drop more impactful.

i like the bass on this when it drops but it could do with more growl and bringing up in level.

Nov-19-2015 15:40

evo8Virtual Wannabe

Registered: Aug 2004
Location:

quote:

Originally posted by Woony
The kick seems way too big/heavy for that kind of track, it eats up the rest of the track. Also it would make the bass a bit more prominent, which I think is needed for a warm, slow-groover type track.

Made a new track in the last few days, thoughts on the mix? It sounds nice and balanced to me but I don't have actual monitors

Originally posted by Oakenshield
i love this reminds me so much of my daniel poole records the kick needs to have a top though you could add a short hat for the kick
so it tics like a clock and roll of a small amount of the sub.

It sounds pretty good, but you're only using 3 patterns for the entire track, making it very repetitive rather quickly. It could work as a dj tool, but I'd try adding some more percussion and some more variation.

Nov-19-2015 22:33

Oakenshieldtranceaddict

Registered: Oct 2012
Location: Blackpool

not sure if im now making it worse haha

Nov-19-2015 22:40

TranceLover007DariusX

Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA

quote:

Originally posted by evo8
i kinda like it Darek, has a nice feel. Not sure about that saw-ish midbass, maybe something smoother would be better for the feel of the track?
i dont think the piano is necessary, theres kinda too many things going on then

Yeah, I'm going for progressive Chill-House vibe with emotional and catchy sub-melodic theme so this piano help me create this desired effect - as far as bass line, I will check if slight different take on it would properly coexist with everything around - thank man!!!

Darek

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