**You guys voted for me to upload this page-by-page, and in doing so, I would like constructive criticism on what to do for the rest of the pages! Like do I need SFX, more screen tones- less screen tones?? Better panels to progress the story, etc. Greatly appreciated!! Keep in mind this is also my first EVER manga page- so be nice!!

So I know this will probably be confusing for people at first because nobody has any idea what this one-shot is about, but I guess that's the great test of my drawing skills! Whether or not you can decipher what's happening ;D

So this is 's one-shot that she won for getting second in my Manga Idea Contest last year!! She won a 4-page one-shot out of her original story idea, and this is the scene she chose I don't know if I should give you all a preface as to what's happening...all you really need to know is that a little girl just died and a priest is praying over her. Death (the black-haired boy in the lower panels) suddenly got all glowy and trance-like and he knows why it's happening...but he can't control it in this particular state! Now he is being drawn to this dead girl in a village he was previously chased out of (on account of being a demon-child).

Yeah. Soooo wait for the next page to see what happens next! ;D(Or you could go to *PwnedByPineapple's account and read the actual written version she's working on! Really great story and you get a lot moe background to what is supposed to be happening here xD [link])

THIS is page 1!Page 2!Page 3!*But go here to get more background on the story!READ RIGHT TO LEFT LIKE NORMAL MANGA!