HEY! This is actually me writing myself and everyone to let you all know I'm now under a different name and writing again! So for any new stuff check this profile instead...when I actually get new stuff!

Ha! that was awesome. Just enough description and eye catching imagery (I can totally see Hell spitting out its miscreants). For a prologue it was pretty intriguing. I think for your mature style of writing (what I could see exhibited in this chapter) you're going to find it harder to find readers. I have a feeling your work is thought provoking and while fun, it's something that would appeal to someone who wants to read a novel, not something on here, do you know what I mean? Your writing style, I believe, is something I can definitely bury myself in and I wish you the best of luck. I hope you don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews (it's easy to do) and continue to write. I'll definitely be looking for more of this one.