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Topic: I could use some help. (Read 2119 times)

I have a friend who sometimes likes to draw body control stuffs. He really likes Katrice and most of the things she gets herself into. He's even made a few fan drawings of her.

Anyways, earlier this year he asked if I could write a little story for him starring Katrice and his bunny-witch character Zamantha, based on the Disney cartoon "Trick or Treat for Halloween". I'm sure you've all seen that, right? The one where Witch Hazel takes control of Donald's feet with a "magic shower"? LOL

Well, for the past several months I've been trying and failing to get this story done right. Everything I've come up with so far has been, well... not right. Like, I can't get it to gel. It's supposed to be silly and funny but everything I've tried so far has just fallen flat. It's very frustrating.

I was hoping to get a little outside inspiration if any of you could throw some ideas at me. I wouldn't care how dumb they might sound. Just post 'em here if you got some? Please please pleeeeease?

The requirements for this story aren't too much, but they are necessary. These are:1. It has to stay as close to the plot of the cartoon as possible, with regards to Katrice and Zamantha's roles. (no plucky nephews!)2. At the same time, Katrice and Zamantha should keep true to their character as much as possible.3. The story must occur on Halloween night (dur).3. BONUS: If a reason can be found to have Katrice in a ridiculous sailor's costume then that would be icing on the cake (particularly if it's bottomless )

Deviation from the original story is OK if it would make things more interesting, engaging and/or funny. A heavier focus on the body control aspects of it are fine too! I'd like to avoid cartoon logic tho, in favor of a more whimsical Alice in Wonderland style.

I'm determined to get this thing done for him even if it kills me. Since no actual faeries has ever approached me to waft some inspiration into my mind, I'm left with asking all of you. No pressure tho. Nope! But as an incentive, I promise to post the resulting story here once I've finished it, so that you might also get to enjoy it. <3

I might be judging that clip too harshly. It said right there when I got it that it was a special commission that someone asked for. So rightly it's tailored for whatever tastes they had so for that person I'm quite sure it was pretty awesome, lol.

From what I know about her, she's a bit nuts and not very formal at all. And she is short. She wears sneakers. As far a demeanor goes, I always got a kind of a Witchie-Poo vibe from her, ROTFL. In another drawing you can't see, it kind of insinuates that among the shenanigans she likes to get into, one of them is to cast spells on people's legs and feet. To make them dance or follow her around. Or make someone march around in public while naked.

That second picture here though. You can see that at some point she did something like that to Katrice. And now Katrice is very nervously admitting that she kinda liked it and asking if Zamantha could do it again. lol

My fetish orentation is Body control in particular "feet control fetish", this short of Disney represent for me the beginning and the center of my fetish.

I wanted to write a similar story inspired on this Disney short, but unlike you based on human character like a bratty girl. However my lack in English do not allowed me to write it fast and furthermore I'm so busy.

About the inspiration thath you need, you should focus on your personal aspects. for example: I love the humor style of that cartoonish humor behind thi short, especially when Witch Hazel makes donald's feet dance ridicolously by using a square dance song plays with banjo. I like Her magic shower sprayed several time on his feet or I like how Donald's feet bouncing and move to music.

most important things: cartoonish humor and description movement of the bewitched feet.

elements that shouldn't miss for me: music song in rhyme, magic elements, espression face description.

About the inspiration thath you need, you should focus on your personal aspects. for example: I love the humor style of that cartoonish humor behind thi short, especially when Witch Hazel makes donald's feet dance ridicolously by using a square dance song plays with banjo. I like Her magic shower sprayed several time on his feet or I like how Donald's feet bouncing and move to music.

most important things: cartoonish humor and description movement of the bewitched feet.

elements that shouldn't miss for me: music song in rhyme, magic elements, espression face description.

let me know if I can help you.

My deviantart profile name: Escudo850

This does help quite a bit. I'd been vacillating between Zamantha doing the banjo bit or not. But you're right, that would totally be in character for her. Calling out the dance and then Katrice's feet doing that dance entirely without her. That alone is quite humiliating!

I'm just... I can't figure out just what sorta thing Katrice would actually do that would bring down Zamantha's whimsical wrath upon her. And Katrice actually gets excited and aroused when she loses control of herself. It's just that she really really never wants to admit that! But that cat might be out of the proverbial bag as far as Zamantha goes. I've kinda imagined then that Zamantha would be verbally teasing Katrice the entire time she was making her do silly things.