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ima spit it like this i fight with a fist made of bikes that i heist off of kidsin the night with the shiv pleasure delight with spice in the mix collisionsinstantly flippin a villan catchin feelins some assume mics mastered this fuckin skill with pleasue ill fuckin kill this wanna be judge, what a fucking thrill stillchill cold like a disgusting meal, just must be somethin that im good at mister cant seem able mentally too touch tracks, he just doo crap--- mud tracksfuck-- facts seem to over power might il just hack into this game cause its fuckin over priced-FACTlike, stay outta shit that youll never be nice at, roll the dice, crap, and maybe get your life backFACT thats, something he couldnt afford nothin better to him then woodgrain and fords, bentleysso i should slay this poor mc-FACT, but im being good today so ill just bang his whore plenty<FACT, some say i force many multis in your mind cause i got that ultimate designto clutch up on your dime from behind, gotta get this change like obama when he liedpennies, nickled knuckles ima try to find a way make these frantic bitches crumblewhat was it you mumbled, you like rollin e' so you think this wasnt troublesam you little bitch ill have you feelin more then humble quickly kickin, elbows kneesand the worst punches of your life have you numb till you know the definition of an MClike, krs told me it means to move the crowd be the mic controller hold it downbut sam seems more like a moody child wholl never have a "like diploma so shut up hoe your out"and to finish him off ill diminish the floss show this bitch whos the bossmany clinics shafted aman like that because i ripped in his skull, ill throw hands like grippin a saw

explanations: I also go by Mic so thats why i use the word so much im refering to myself

and the "" = Cheerleader voice

MCsam

"five years" failing to "fight fears" in real life so hope for "nightmares" ,dick in "high-gear" when you rode "by-queers" so cum "drive-here",and "quit-crying" that you lost to a "bitch-trying" her hands at some "quick-rhyming",better stick to "clit-riding" and "ditch-diving"to win votes instead of "shit-advicing" ,now "that's-odd" your still on "class's-balls" even after being labeled a "bad-troll""relax-dawg" i ain't claiming your "sac's-jock" just a dude on the internet "that's-all"you give me a "broke-sound" cuz most of your "post-count"says i'm "all-down",depressed and all "alone-now" like a "ghost-town" full of "lost-clowns""swallow-apples" when people feed your "hollow-babbles" shineless like a "borrowed-goggles",aimless love"arrows-struggles" but hits "marrow-angles" cuz it's a "barrow-puddle",your"mamma's-tits" ain't worth what "obama-gets" from "osama's-shit",but the "trauma-is" it's as big as "santasfeet" that only his "pyjama-fits",your such a "b-mayne" ,you let your "dick-shine" and let paris "hil-tan",and throw your "shit-stain" verse written "with-pain" and let the toilet "bin-dance",my "rap-flows" strong to "grab-hold" light and gravity outta "black-holes",so run faster and "lap-home" so you can "fap-poles" like how "cat's-do"i "scar-tigers" got my "bars-higher" enough to make you forfeit like "car-tires",your a "tar-nigger" my thoughts "far-bigger" in value that you can use it as a "bar-sticker",i bring "more-pressure" than a over"flowed-bladder" so get ready for a "total-slaughter ",keep your "hoe-treasured" from getting her "holes-devoured" so gift her a "gold-bolster"

1-he is here since 5 years4/5- his match vs tes5/6-http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=29&t=97984&p=1345416#p13454167-he write this "word perciate the feeed" there is no a and a for apple.8- has written lots of love songs and it dies and sinks in the piece itself.13-http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?p=329182#p329182 and paris hilton wordplay and name play.17-forfeit/four-fit wordplay18- tar is used to make roads[your down] ,bar code like hitman aka mr.47

Last edited by Enimee on Aug 10th, '11, 19:43, edited 2 times in total.

"five years" failing to "fight fears" in real life so hope for "nightmares" ,dick in "high-gear" when you rode "by-queers" so cum "drive-here",and "quit-crying" that you lost to a "bitch-trying" her hands at some "quick-rhyming",better stick to "clit-riding" and "ditch-diving"to win votes instead of "shit-advicing" ,now "that's-odd" your still on "class's-balls" even after being labeled a "bad-troll""relax-dawg" i ain't claiming your "sac's-jock" just a dude on the internet "that's-all"you give me a "broke-sound" cuz most of your "post-count"says i'm "all-down",depressed and all "alone-now" like a "ghost-town" full of "lost-clowns""swallow-apples" when people feed your "hollow-babbles" shineless like a "borrowed-goggles",aimless love"arrows-struggles" but hits "marrow-angles" cuz it's a "barrow-puddle",your"mamma's-tits" ain't worth what "obama-gets" from "osama's-shit",but the "trauma-is" it's as big as "santasfeet" that only his "pyjama-fits",your such a "b-mayne" ,you let your "dick-shine" and let paris "hil-tan",and throw your "shit-stain" verse written "with-pain" and let the toilet "bin-dance",my "rap-flows" strong to "grab-hold" light and gravity outta "black-holes",so run faster and "lap-home" so you can "fap-poles" like how "cat's-do"i "scar-tigers" got my "bars-higher" enough to make you forfeit like "car-tires",your a "tar-nigger" my thoughts "far-bigger" in value that you can use it as a "bar-sticker",i bring "more-pressure" than a over"flowed-bladder" so get ready for a "total-slaughter ",keep your "hoe-treasured" from getting her "holes-devoured" so gift her a "gold-bolster"

1-he is here since 5 years 4/5- his match vs tes5/6-http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=29&t=97984&p=1345416#p13454167-he write this "word perciate the feeed" there is no a and a for apple.8- has written lots of love songs and it dies and sinks in the piece itself.13-http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?p=329182#p329182 and paris hilton wordplay and name play. 17-forfeit/four-fit wordplay18- tar is used to make roads[your down] ,bar code like hitman aka mr.47

Punchlines = MCSamPersonals = MCSamMulti's = EnimeeFlow = TieStructure = MCSamVocab/Complex = TieOthers = MC Sam for being more consistent throughout his verse. Alot of fillers in there Enimee, the ''fist made of bikes''-line was corny.

6-3 - MC Sam.

Seriously.. If you need to explain your rhymes you are either; 1. Underestimating your readers wich ofc. is a baaaaaad look imho. Or 2. They aint worded well enough.. I aint going to check out links or anything like that, I wont even read your explenation cuz that shit is straight up dumb. I either get it, or I don't, it's your job to make me like the shit at first glance or make me want to read it again.. Not getting alot of explenations like you're desperate to get your readers to understand them..

I'm not telling you to dumb your ish down, neither of you, I understood mostly anything both of you guys said.. Keep it up