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starryskies55 says:OMG THAT WAS A KISS AND IT WAS ON THE EIFFEL TOWER AND THAT WAS ADORABLE, SAM!

I'm so proud of you, how did you make that so effortlessly amazing? It was so cliche fluffy- and yet it didn't seem cliche fluffy because you wrote it really well! EEE! Wonderful!

I'm glad Ciaran meeting Louis' grandparents went kind of well- apart from that weird french bit which is most definitely not going to come up later ;). I'm sad to see that although we had the beautiful first kiss, we also had another moment when Ciaran is super sad about his blindness. I'm really sad for him, and i wish it could get better!

And, YOU USED MY LINE, YOU USED THE KEY TO MY HEART LINE OH MY GOSH. EEE! exciting stuff, and Louis can never take the mickey out of Ciaran being romantic now, after he said that!

fantastic chapter sammy girl! oh the feels!

Author's Response: That was not a kiss, Jenny, THAT WAS THE KISS! THE VISION I HAD IN MY HEAD THAT STARTED THIS ENTIRE STORY!!! :D