Yellow Day Lily

Below is the poem entitled Yellow Day Lily which was written by poet
Sara
Kendrick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

You are enjoying these Gogyoka poems my friend! I know you like the Tanka-ish look without the syllable requirements! I enjoy the challenge of the syllable requirements myself, makes for an interesting write, but the Gogyoka form is very free! This is a fantastic write Sara, I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! Quite the special and enlightening poem, Great Work!!