Daawww explosion round 2! Hehehe let's have another tug at your emotions. Oh and muffin...it's suppose to be there but oh well....find it.

So yeah this one has been in the works for about a week now. Just got to it and man I literally threw the kitchen sink at this and basically have almost all the buildings I've ever done in this as well as like 4 new ones. Fluttershy I have possibly being a jerk to Derpy somewhere after she left on the taxi. So....

I'll keep this short....have things to do for the rest of...well...now. But yeah hope you guys like this. Comments are appreciate and the critique here and there. Onto the next one.

Time spent: 25 hours over 5 daysHow I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5

PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.

this is your best so far i mean the last ones won't that good as this and from what i've seen that saying a lot.the art is the normal standard from toxic-mario.the story is nice not too much toying with the episode but rather as a side story of are two characters having a moment as friend this is a much better side story from what i've seen so far and i love it.it a very good comic and i think your heading in the right direction in how to make a good comic.i give my derpy best 10 out of 10very good work keep it up.

This piece is a true example of taking a canon event and using the imagination to foresee what happened -beyond- the episode. Once again you have taken a simple "I'm sorry" message and constructed a setting which tugs at everypony's heartstrings.

Your use of backgrounds is once again inspired, I know for a fact you spend a stupidly amount of time on them and it really does show. It is the little things you notice, such as Panel 4, you can see the tip of the roof of one house, and as you zoom out in the next panel, you can see an expanded rooftop as the viewer's perspective changes.

Obviously there are a lot of contributors to the whole "Fluttershy made them cry" bucket so in terms of originality it does take a knock, but the quality of this piece sets it so that even though it is the next in a long list, it is hardly worth overlooking.

One criticism i have is in your technique for the Eyes. You aim to follow the style of the show and you succeed in most ways, however Fluttershy's eyes are one of the few characters who have a unique style. I always think something is weird when i look at her with the default eye style you find on background ponies (Take a look! She really does have a unique eye style)But this is a niggling concern, one belonging to someone with OCD and an eye for small details.

The impact is what truly matters and it most certainly succeeds. The simple dialogue conveys emotions far beyond what you would expect and it is hard not to just go D'aww to the hug at the end with the subtle easy-to-miss tears of our dearest yellow pony.

Hey! This is just absolutely adorable! Uhm, so I was wondering if you'd mind if someone else and I had permission to voice this and put it on youtube? I've been told I have an absolutely adorable Derpy voice and if you want to hear it yourself I already have one comic I've voiced on youtube, and I have to say that my companion has an absolutely adorable Fluttershy voice so we'd love to make a bit of a collab and do this together if we could. Though, I don't want to do anything like that without your permission.

d'aaaaaaaaw. it's all i have to say. Including two of my three fav ponies, and getting the real idea of the show. I agree with ~PrincessPeachCat, and hope you'll have a job at Hasbro. Good graphs, and good understanding of the show.