I began writing my first SCP after years of reading them myself. It is nowhere near finished, but has a decent amount done and I would simply like to know how it sounds and whether I seem to be on the right track or not. I have many plans for this SCP once the main article has been finished.

Please disregard the "notes" section at the bottom, it is for me to reference. As I said, it is still in development.

I moved your thread description to the first post and trimmed it above, OP, since it was taking up a lot of space on the forum listing. Try to keep thread descriptions under 7 lines so you don't visually crowd out other people's threads. ~Zyn

It's uh… kind of vague and generic, to be honest. You've got a lot of elements that are pretty commonly-seen in drafts on the site:

Road to [somewhere]

Creepy feelings caused by anomaly. Take a look at the articles tagged with "compulsion" to get a feel for the sheer number of different SCPs that include as effects the victims being forced to feel/see/do something. (You can also check for "hallucination")

Victims see things. (Again, check the hallucination tag)

Mysterious hostile predator SCP-XXXX-1 entity (Maybe read over this guide to get an idea of what elements to avoid putting in an SCP article.)

At this point, it's sort of a mishmash of standard horror tropes. What's the story here? What makes this different from other articles that use the same recipe?

Thank you for the feedback! Like I said, it's more of me trying to get my ideas down onto the site in its current form, so it isn't very extensive. I will definitely take these things into consideration as I continue writing.