Follow Author CHECK... Follow story CHECK... Not that I'm expecting an update (but I wouldn't be complaining by any stretch of the means!) My review is long, maybe, possibly, a little teeny bit complicated and perhaps rambling... so I'll send that privately. Until then: LOVE IT! Wonderful and well done!

I really liked how u ended that. I'm glad Alice and Leah didn't fight cuz they are going to be part of the same family and Leah would never have went back if she thought Alice was hurt or didn't accept the fact that Jasper loved Leah. I hope there is a sequel. I would love to know what's life like for Leah and Jasper!

Guest chapter 23 . 8/4/2012

if you do a sequel, they should learn how to have a healthy relationship not the craziness they had going on in the beginning.
great story

The story's ending is kind of short. I would love to see a sequel. Did you write the one where Leah got killed by her people just before running away with him?
This is a much better story. By the way, if you were not the author of that story, they were quite different. Jasper just leaves Alice in that one although I
liked it.