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korigierung einer englischen eröterung (essay)
Bitte lest euch folgendes durch und gebt mir feedback und sagt mir was ihr davon haltet , ich habe leider keine zeit es meiner englisch lehrerin zu zeigen Lg :) Topic : Are teenagers too young to have a baby ? Essay In my Neibourhood there is a pretty muchyoung pregnant girl who decides to hold her baby , nevertheless the father of it won't be there for the little kid . Most of my other neibours hink negative about that , advise her to abort the baby and insult (beleidigen) her as an idiot , so i asked myself "is shre really to young to have a baby ? Are teenagers in generell to young to have a baby ?" First of all we should look at the point , that every guy in this world should be able to decide on their own , don't matter how old their are . And to abort a baby is a very hard thing , that no people can demand (fordern) from each other . Futhermore we allready know , that you can't say "every teenager is .... " , because their are all different far in their own development and so they all would handle in different ways. Nevertheless they can't give that much attention from their parents and haven't got the time or money for it , because they still must go to school and lern for school and wanted to meet their friends or do other thinks , which make a lot of fun , but where you can't take the baby with . Futhermore the teenagers first should grow up on there own before they can educate a baby and they also shouldn't underestimate (unterschätzen) the responsibility of having a baby . so you see it's not so easy for a teenager mother and you should think about this points really thoroughly (gründlich) and look at both site bevore you had sex or you go to the gynalcologist and inform yourself about some contraceptions

Habe morgen ein Englisch Referat und hab auf die schnelle nur das hinbekommen. Kann das bitte jmd, der gut in Englisch ist, durchlesen und verbessern?
Today I tell you sth about the industrial revolution and the most important steps in history. Without any doubt the industrial revolution is and was one of the most important parts of human history. It began in England in 18th century and it changed the life of nearly every human world-wide because machines were invented. While in England was the industrialization in full swing, about 75% of people were employed in the agricultural sector in Germany around 1800. The textiles were produced with old spinning wheels and looms for own use. The industrial revolution could begin in Germany first in 1830 because there were still many tariff barriers which were eliminated by the German Customs Union. Until that time Germany also started to create machines. However this brought not only good things but rather bad things, too. Bad things are for example that the people were replaced by machines and in the end of the 19th century nearly one third of the people worked in factories. But the most of them were very poor and they had not good apartments. In the 18th and in the 19th century thousand of day-workers and farmers came to the cities as wage workers. There they tried to set up a new existence: They searched for apartments and a new work for their family. In the end of the 19th century worked nearly 1/3 of people in factories. But most of them lived very poor, they had not good homes and had great social insecurity. The only thing they had was the work force that they could offer the factory owners to pay. This, however, was very low, as there were too many workers. In the factories, it was common for a working day of normal people around 12 until 16 hours. There were no regular work breaks. Previously the humans had not safety arrangements that´s why there were many accidents or they were ill. For the German workers there were no social safeguards until the end of the 19th century. There was no health insurance and no support for the people who did not work. The people also had bad conditions at home. For the really poor workers there were rent apartments. They were mostly dark, small, damp and had a very bad sanitary organization. In such small apartments often lived families with 5 to 10 people. After all rents for such apartments had been very high. The kitchen was the only room that could be warmed. At such life together of people under such poor hygiene very often illness or even epidemics. Children often died in this period. 2 of 5 children were over 6 years. These children had to work with in the mines at the age of 6 years as adults in day and night shifts. Their working time was between 12 and 15 hours but they earned less money. The children worked as hard as the adults because they knew that the family needed every penny. The women had also not easy. They had to work hard also in homework or as factory workers. Further they had to do housework and children. This double stress of a married worker was working between 16 and 18 hours a day....

bald ist mein mündlicher Prüfung auf englisch aber ich weis nicht ob das gut oder richtig so ist :/
Now I tell you about my main topic, it’s about fashion Frederick Worth (1825-1895) was the first fashion had invented and he is the founder of haute couture. Before he founded his fashion house ("maison couture") in Paris, it was nameless and designed costumes. Few made it. Except of Rose Bertin, the milliner of the French queen (Marie Antoinette), but found himself more as an artist. Frederick Worth saw that customers combine a certain style with a fashion designer and created the first fashion collections which was presented by (Mannequins). After Worth it was Paul Poiret, who went on with this concept and the everyday fashion influenced by his Haute Couture. Paul Poiret also started to remove the corset of women's fashion. German fashion is known for its elegant lines, but also for their different styles. Berlin is a young and creative center in the European fashion world. The 2 times taking place in the year. Berlin Fashion Week has to be in a short time become one of the most important fashion events in the world. Of the most important model agencies are Vivienne model management (Munich, New York) and Louisa Models (Munich, Hamburg).The training of fashion designers in Germany takes place at various universities and ESMOD-schools (Art School) in Berlin and Munich. About Models:If the women want to Modeling, they must be high 1.72 meters to 1.84 meters. And the men must to be about 1.80 m to 1.88 m tall to can modeling. The male Models can Modeling with the age 14 and the Female Models with 13 years. they also must have a special clothes sizes, Female Models: 34 to 38 size and the Male Models: of 48 to 50 size. And the Fashion schools: in the fashion training you can’t earn money, because you have to pay monthly from 320.00€ to 350.00€ . And every half-year you must have to pay for the exam 250,00€. And for the final exam about 480, - €. Students who don’t come from Europe, they must have to pay 420.00€ per month. The training takes for 3 years and it costs the training more than 11,000€ You need a Realschulabschluss for training as a fashion designer but someone they need you with hauptschulabschluss. NOW THE COLORS IN THE FASHION So the colors in fashion, are very important for me, because you can mean a lot of thinks about yourselves. for example adds character, color gives image and a self-respect The important thing is to find a color where we feel good. So for me.. I like the color black in clothes, because I think it shows slim and in the summer I find the colors green and brown very nice. We also can divide our clothing color in neutral, warm and cold colors: Warm colors are red, yellow, and some brown colors. Yellows-green and red-violet colors are also warm too. NOW THE COLORS IN THE FASHION So the colors in fashion, are very important for me, because you can mean a lot of thinks about yourselves. for example: adds character, color gives image and a self-respect -stimmt das bis hier hin?

Ist das gramatisch richtig
Alex is desperate ... The next day he went to Chloe's old apartment (he had a spare key) Then he looked for the diary of Chloe's great-grandmother, and read it through. Suddenly he discovered that some pages were missing from the diary. As Alex looked after everywhere: under the bed, on the floor and then into the closet. Suddenly he found in the cupboard 1 crumpled paper. He read it through. It said "the Chloe will die only IF YOU ONLY be traveling together to Spain." Since Alex Chloe tried to call but the number was closed. He went home and packed his suitcase, took a picture of Chloe, a little money and he drove to the airport. He got a ticket to Manchester and then flew by plane. When he arrived in Manchester he took out the picture of Chloe and asked single from the people if the people Chloe have ever seen. Ask for about 2 hours he had seen the woman had asked Chloe before. Alex wondered exactly where the woman had seen Chloe. The woman replied: "A hotel named Manchester`s pearl. With the run would be about 10 minutes away from here. And the hotel is in the city of Manchester. Alex thanked the woman, and went to where the woman had described him. After 10 minutes he had reached the hotel. Alex went to the front desk and asked for the name Chloe. Then the woman was at the front desk the room by Chloe. Alex knocked on the door. Since Chloe was on the door. She was shocked only times where she had seen Alex at the door but somehow happy. Alex asked if he could have a word with her, Chloe replied, "Well ok, but only briefly." Alex went in and showed Chloe what he had found. Chloe read it through and asked: "Did you really there yet?" Alex replied, "Yes I've found." And as Alex and Chloe embraced with joy and Chloe asked, "So we can still be together?" Alex replied, "Yes, if you like," Chloe replied, "Yes I will." And since the day that they are still a couple and they live in LONDON <3 Ich würde mich wirklich sehr freuen wenn ihr mir antwortet :) und jetzt schon mal dankee

Suche fashion grosshandel shop
Hello, Hope there are some people out there, and can help me. I am looking for these gross handel shop with young fashion, please see the picture? I am also interested in other german young fashion wholesale shops?

englisch Hausaufgabe text Hilfe kontrolle
Hey an alle die gut in egnlsich sind :) habt ihr verbesserungsvorschläge ? :D I imagine the two families are very different. Tony was born when her mother was still at Highschool. Tony´s father, Troy, was captain of the basketball team. After the young couple graduated, Anthea was still pregnant, Troy moved to the USA to study at Duke University, because of his basketball career he was offered a scholarship. Anthea lived at her parent´s and her whole family helped her a lot with the baby. Anthea always wanted to work at a fashion magazine so when she got a job she left Tony at home most of the time and Tony´s grandmother took care of her. Unfortunately Anthea´s parents died at a car-accident so Tony and her mother had to live on their own. Because of the job Anthea didn´t have time to spend with her daughter. They lived in a small apartment in London, very small because at this time Anthea wasn´t paid much. After Anthea got a promotion she had to work even more often so Tony, who was 8 years old had to be on her one almost all the time. Anthea and Tony weren´t able to form a close relationship, but Anthea was very happy with her job and because of some other promotions she earned a lot money, they could move to a great apartment, Tony is now 12, still a lot on her own. Margaret´s social background is very different. Her mom is also a single mother but they have a very close relationship. Her family used to live in lovely neighborhood with small, but really pretty houses. They never had plenty of money but they were still very happy. Six years ago Margaret´s father was diagnosed with cancer and two years later he died. Margaret, her brother Sam and her mother had to move out of the house and in a small apartment, they had a difficult time. Her mother had to find a new job but she didn´t earn that much money. She still works there, the family isn´t poor but they have to consider about every penny they spend. All the problems they had made them to an even better family, they don´t care about money, as long as they are together they are fine with it.

Kann man das so schreiben, Englisch comment?
Thirdly, I think it is important for young people to decide themselves how much time they spend with the internet. Teenagers should be allowed to make their own decisions. Furthermore the teenagers will learn about responsibility. All in all, it cannot be dennied that the internet limitation for teenagers is unworkable and so it does not make sense. instead of using power to restrict something good they politican should discussed about how to help people who already adicted or have other problems with the internet.

Englisch ( Text Hilfe )
Hallo ihr lieben :) ich wollte mal fragen wie ihr den Text findet. Und was ich eventuell verbessern kann. Ich bin in der 9. klasse. A young mayor? I want to talk about the cons and the pros of a young mayor. An advantage is, that he is an energetic person who knows the interests of young People. Another point is that maybe more young persons would get interest in politics, because of the young mayor. But on the other side he would not have so much experience. Much free time is really important for a young person. But a young mayor would not have time for studies and for free time activities. Thereby he might lose friend. It would be very difficult, because he has to do more than one job, because a mayor is not paid very well. Another problem is, that he would be too young to understand older people. And maybe the older people in the city do not accept him as 'boss'. To my mind a young mayor is a bad idea, because he can not represent the 'whole' city. The responsibility is too high for a young person. And he would not has enought experience to deal with money. Würde mich über ein Feedback freuen :) Danke im voraus.

Englisch Vortrag Korrektur (Vortrag)?
graduation job where to live travel family think which will be chanche friends future plans/most future plans are Today i want to talk about future plans, especially my plans for the future Here you can see my structure, i will start with graduations 1. - – as you know this year, we will have our BLF exam and this is an important step in our future - and i think everyone here wants to do an A-Level graduation, and then want to study, - but i only want that A-Level graduation because - after finishing school, i will not study, preferably, i will do a year abroad - i think i want to spend this year in a big city in America to improve my english skills, and learn how to take care of myself 2. - When i do my year abroad i have to earn money to buy food or to pay bills - to earn money i want to do there something with fashion or i will work in a bar or something like that - maybe i will study after my year abroad, or i will just stay there, i will see - and the reason why America, because ist far away from enought fromm y parents and it´s a interesting country i think 3. - in my future, i want to live in a big city - because you have all there what you need, and it´s maybe more interessting then a tall city or a village - i know it will be expensive -thats why i have to live in a shared flat or alone in a small apartment, -but i think a shared flat is better because it´s cheaper and you also have a better social contact, because you dont live alone 4.i do like travalling very much, because you can make new experienses, you can broad your horizon and i like it to fly – but it´s expensive and complicated with your job thats why: i will look for a job where i have to travel every week or month in a other countrie or city 5. – until now I dont want to have kids or be married, because im too young yet maybe i want some when im over thirty 6. i do now play in a football club for like over 10 years, but i think i have to quit this when i do finish my school, because i will not anymore here, and i do not have the time to play there i will have a other home and i will have other friends, and also i will have a other way to life 7. – i have ask some of my friends, and one of them want to do an A-Level grauduation, then he wants to study, to get a good job before he want to have a famaly in a village. and most of them want to graduation, study or do a apprenticeship first and keep living with their parents, before getting married and having own kids - that´s maybe the „standart“ way to live a life Hey :) Könnt ihr mal bitte auf Grammatik und Rechtschreibung prüfen? Und bitte noch ein paar Ergänzungen, damit der Vortrag etwas länger geht. Danke :))

Wie kann ich meine Geschichte in englisch weiterschreiben?
ich muss für die schule ne Geschichte auf englisch schreiben über einen jungen der mit seiner neuen Freundin ins Kino geht er hat aber sein Geld vergessen... Das ist mein Anfang: It was the first time that Adam went to the cinema with is new girlfriend grace. "It's tsotsi, " said Adam. "It's a great film. You'll like it. " They walked to the cinema where they found that the film wasn't tsotsi - it was a film for young children! And Adam found that he had left all his money at home. He felt really stupid. Wie könnte ich weiterschreiben? Und passt die Geschichte bis hierher?

famousness
Habe bald Englisch Schularbeit und wollte fragen ob sich jemand meinen Text ansehen könnte. Nearly everyone wants to be well-known and famous. Nowadays, you do no really need a talent for becoming famous. The most important thing is to attract attention. In the following text I want to declare the pros and cons of being popular and what talents can help you to become famous. On the one hand, the knowledge that a lot of people are admiring and emulating you, can be a very good feeling. You also noramly do not have any problems with money if you are famous, because popularity and money often belongs together. The stars get a huge amount of money for entertaining the audience. But on the other hand it can also make you mental ill because if you are famous you also have a lot of responsibilities and interviewer are always trying to find something you have done bad to get a good story. For example, the popstar Britney Spears get well-known with the age of 16 and earned a lot of money with her songs. There was a time, in which a lot of young girls admired her. But the fact, that she lost a part of her childhood and had to do what some unkown person told her made she mental ill. She was not able to resist the pressure and the interviewer showed each scandal in TV. You see, famousness has his pros and cons. Stars have not always talents, for which she would deserve to be famous. A big part of famous persons are from TV shows like Still Standing or something like this. I am also convinced, celebreties sometimes even do not want to be famous. Easily to be free and that they do not must have the fear, if they are doing something stupid that it is showed at the next day in a newspaper or television. Danke im Voraus:)

Was bedeutet in diesem Zusammenhang "Double Standard"?
-" But people are worried about future projects. You are starting a dangerous trend." -"I really admire you. You care about environment," Mya told. -"Your people have created national parks; but it's not enough. Just think of all the ugly highways,shopping malls, and huge suburbs.Your people have been developing the land since the day they arrived from Europe.Noe hundrets of years later, you don't like what you see. sad, isn't it? But that's your problem. It's the double Standard that isn't fair: when YOU develop the land, it's ok. But when Native Amerikans do something with their own reservation, it's suddenly NOT OK. You spend lots of money there. We've become very good buisness people. We reinvest in the environment and spend a lot of OUR mony on nature." -"well, why do you care what a journalist writes about the Skywalk then ?"

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Kann mir bitte jemand diesen Text durchschauen ob noch Fehler drinn sind. danke :) Today I present a paper about Charley Sheen. Charlie Sheen is a half American and a half Irish actor. His real name is Carlos Irwin Estavez. He was born on September 3, 1965 in New York. Sheen played roles in more than 59 films. His most successful project was the TV series “Two and a half men”. At last he earned two million dollars per episode. For him was - as he mentioned in an interview - the most important thing that he won so many young fans. For many boys he is an idol because he looks smart is cool and got very rich. But he also has his dark sides. Sometimes he has problems with drugs and that is why he had lost his job in the TV series “Two and a half men”. Meanwhile the Jonas-Brothers contracted him and his new project is a new series by FX Networks. Now he has also many Fan-sites. For lot of people it does not matter what Charlie Sheen does, the people love him as he is. When I could spend a day with Shenn I would watch together with him the new “Two and a half men" episode with Aston Kutscher to see how he reacts. Furthermore I would ask him what he thinks about Kutscher in this role

Wie findet ihr mein Comment Englisch?
Hallo ich wollte euch mal fragen wie ihr mein Kommentar findet habe die nr 9 gemacht die habe ich als anhang gemacht hier mein Kommentar : first, good interview. The reason for my letter is that im really interested in this topic and i want to tell you my expericene with young people drinking alcohol . In my opinion i think its a good idea to make alcohol produkts more expensive and non alcohol produkts cheaper. Of course it doenst solve the problem . The addiciton will not stop , but cost the young people even more of their money. Furthermore alcohol is very bad for your heatly so its a better choice not to consume it . I know a lot of young people drinking alcohol but many of them dont know the consequenzes and their limit of alcohol . One of the biggest is that youdamage your body . Thank you for reading my comment!

Englisch Tagebucheintrag kontrolieren ?
Hier die Geschichte: Dear Diary, When I first saw the big buildings and the huge statue from the boat my heart began to beat faster and faster.I have never seen such an beatiful statue in my life.when I looked into my mothers face I saw happines.Finally we are in America,the country of of possibilities.My father lives and works in New York since 1903.He left Ireland,because the high unemployment.We had to remain in Ireland,because my father had not enogh money to take u all to the United States.So he collected some money to take us all to America. We came to Island with big and long buildings.I could read a big sign on the roof of the building:Ellis Island. As our boat with over 500 people stopped a men with a long bearttold us to come out.We had to walk up a 50-stage stair to the register-room.Two men came to us to look at us.I thought it was a doctor.The next 4 hours were so terriblefor me and my mother.We had to wait.All the time!In a (Übersetzung von Warteschlange benötige ich)!Then when we were at the time a old black guy asked us some questions: Where are you from? How old are you? Have you got any relatives here in America? After my mum answered thequestions he said:"OK,go to the doctors room at the end of the flur,right door.We walked to the door and opened it.A doctor came to us again and checked our skins,our hands and our hair.I found it a little bit strange,but then he said with an american accent:"Alright,Family O´Neil you are all OK,he directed to a boat with a big sign on it: "PUSH TO NEW YORK".The eyes of my mother began to sparkle and she smiled.Soon we can see our father! -Ryan O´Neil 1908
Könnt ihr Verbesserungstipps schreiben,und auf Rechtschreibfehler und Zeitfehler hinweisen. Und mir eine Note geben? Vielen Dank!

Englisch newspaper, Summery schreiben?
Ich schreibe am Montag die englisch klausur und habe schwierigkeiten damit summery zu schreiben um das zu üben hab ich mir ein Zeitungsartikel rausgesucht hier der Link dazu:http://m.newsinlevels.com/products/new-app-helps-buskers-level-3/ es wäre echt nett wenn jemand meine summery mal durchlesen könnte denn ich hab echt irgendwie schwierigkeiten damit bitte nicht nur auf rechtschreibfehler und grammitikalisce fehler achten, denn ich hab auch probleme mit dem inhaltlichen. Hier meine summery: The Author of the newspaper article is not given. The headline of the newspaper is:"new app kepps buskers" it was published in 18.12.15 and is from the welbsite of ondemandnovs. The text is about a app, that make it able to spend virtual money for people, who make music of the street. The name of the app is:"busk" you can spend money with this app to artists who does art in the street to make money. This app could help peole, who are not carrying any cash. People see a solution in the app. The app should make people like Dawson a thing of the past. People say that this app is a very good idea, but that the idea of actually passing over real, proper money because there is a real kind of exchange of something physical rather than something virtual.

Englisch Kurzgeschichte auf Fehler überarbeiten?
Since long time we wanted to spend a day together or rather I wanted it. I was able to persuade Martin, my husband, to go shopping with me. We were standing at the cash register when I saw him suddenly: Giovanni. Giovanni and I were friends in the past, put Martin was in my eyes smarter than Giovanni so I left him. I almost did not recognize him. But then I watched him in his ice-blue eyes and everything was clear. He had lost weight - at least 10 kilos. He had his usual short stubble grow as a full beard. Earlier Martin also had a beard, which I always found irresistible . Today he shaved daily. Six years had now passed and there was still some between Giovanni and me. I could literally feel like my mouth was open. "Hello Sandra," he said in his deep and dangerous voice which I’ve always found great. Martin wanted to prefer to go back , but I was as firmly rooted and stared at Giovanni. I felt that Martin was unsure. "Hello Giovanni ," Martin finally replied in a dry and bored tone . "Long time ago. Great you have become . " It did not surprise me that Martin gave him a spell . That was among the reasons why I decided for Martin when I had the choice . I liked his common sayings , but at this moment I cursed them. But what he said was true. Giovanni had lost not only 10 kilograms he also grown by half the weight. Now he was even bigger than Martin . "Oh Martin ," groaned Giovanni and smiled at me , so his dimples again came to light. Martin had no dimples and inexplicably, I felt the need to touch them . "Still porter as a profession ?" Martin asked as he sneered . The situation was more than unpleasant. I knew how much Giovanni was ashamed of his job as a porter while Martin did carreer with his father as a businessman of LM Real Estate. That was another reason why I chose Martin. "No , I am now a owner of several bars ," Giovanni replied proudly and I found myself , as I was happy for him inside. "How great," Martin said ironically . "You 're welcome to come over time." "No thanks." "Sandra. I said Sandra , " Giovanni added and smiled at me. That was his typical Italian charm , for whom I have always had a weakness . It is this charm it had not then made it easy for me to decide . Giovanni has always been the romantics , while Martin could not even spell the word . And suddenly I was not sure who was the Smarter by both. Before, I was absolutely convinced of Martin, but I just panicked to have chosen me wrong. "Sandra has as well not want it," Martin said to me. But I was too focused on the girl next to Giovanni contrast to say something. The young woman turned to us and patterned us - just like them I. She had perfect Ashy colored short hair and beaming of merriment. "Do you want me not to imagine?" She asked him with her tender voice. "Sandra, this is my wife. Isabell, that's my ex-girlfriend Sandra, "he said, whereupon she looked disgusted at me. "Oh." Giovanni looked at me tortured and suffering, which I almost broke the heart. I did not

Sind diese Sätze richtig (Englisch)?
- Because of that Columbus had a plan: It must be possible to sailing with the boat to the West, until he would arrived in India. At the time, the people thought that the Earth was a disc. But the travel to India wasn’t easy and it cots lot of money, because high tariffs were required. Sind diese Sätze grammatikalisch richtig? Würde mich freuen, wenn ihr mich korrigiert. Danke im Voraus! LG mileena588