Please permit me to introduce myself, My name is Mrs. Anna Madison from France I am a 63 years old woman. I was married to late Mr. Madison who is my husband, and also one of the best contractors here in France, and also a seasoned contractor in Côte d'Ivoire.

My late husband and I were married for years without a child of our own and after his death I decided not to re-marry or get a child outside my matrimonial home. As I speak to you, I have been diagnosed with congested heart failure, of which the doctors have confirmed and told me that I would not live long. After my husband passed away last year, I realized he deposited a huge sum of money with one of Security Company in Côte d'Ivoire.

The money that was deposited in the Security company was a total of Six million Five Hundred Thousand USD. As I write to you, I feel that the money in the Security company would be a waste if I die and that is why I have come to a conclusion of donating the money out to the less privilege and also the motherless babies home.

Please, my dear friend I have come to you to help me carry out this last wish of mine on earth because I am too weak to move about and also have been confined to a wheel chair in my home in France due to the state of my health and so I can't travel all the way from here.

It is true that I don't know you, but I have been directed by God to do this. If you wish to help me, write back to me at your earliest convenience so that I would direct you on how to contact the Security Company for the transfer of the funds to you in whichever way you may wish to nominate for this purpose.

I learn the English from April and I would enjoy to practice with you. My qualification is chemical technician, I'm work by a german company (in Hungary) as quality assistant. The company produce parts to vehicles. I live in a little village (in Nyirbogdany) near of the city Nyiregyhaza. I'm married, have a son (24), he lives in Budapest. My wife haven't got a job now, she worked one year ago as shop assistant in a flower shop yet. (20 years). She is searching a new job. I speak german too, better as english. I knew a little english before April, but my knowledge was only cursory (not good). I have to learn the english now correct, the grammar too. It 's very difficult and my teacher is very hard :).Write me please something about you!Whitch part of Philippines are you from?How is the weather now by you? (I heard not so good).

So long:Imre

Stuart

17.09.2018, 16:06

Imre, hi!

I'll write the above text in proper English. I'll stay as close as possible to what you have written and the words you have used. If you examine what I write, you should be able to eliminate quite a few grammatical errors in the future. I hope it helps.

I have been learning English since April and I would enjoy practicing with you. My qualification is chemical technician. I'm working in a German company (in Hungary) as a quality assistant. The company produces parts for vehicles. I live in a little village (in Nyirbogdany) near the city of Nyiregyhaza. I'm married and have a son (24). He lives in Budapest. My wife hasn't got a job now. She worked until one year ago as a shop assistant in a flower shop (for 20 years). She is searching for a new job. I speak German too, better than English. I knew a little English before April, but my knowledge was only cursory (not good). I have to learn correct English now - the grammar too. It 's very difficult and my teacher is very hard :).Please write me something about you!Which part of the Philippines are you from?How is the weather now where you are? (I heard not so good).

All the best from Stuart.

Imre

18.09.2018, 00:10

Hi, Stuart!

Thank you the advices, it is a really help for me! I repaired my introducing mail according your suggestions. How can I send this to adressed? (Mareeyaah).

"I have been learning English since April and I would enjoy practicing with you. My qualification is chemical technician. I'm working in a German company (in Hungary) as a quality assistant. The company produces parts for vehicles. I live in a little village (in Nyirbogdany) near the city of Nyiregyhaza . I'm married and have a son (24). He lives in Budapest. My wife hasn't got a job now. She worked until one year ago as a shop assistant in a flower shop (for 20 years). She is searching for a new job. I speak German too, better than English. I knew a little English before April, but my knowledge was only cursory (not good). I have to learn correct English now - the grammar too. It 's very difficult and my teacher is very hard :).Please write me something about you!Whitch part of the Philippines are you from?How is the weather now where you are? (I heard not so good)."

Best regards from Imre

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