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Saturday, 4 October 2014

Essay (48) Moving Industries from Cities

In
some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move
to regional areas outside the big cities.Do the advantages of
this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

The presence of many businesses and factories in large
cities has created enormous problems for urban life.Although there may be minor inconveniences,
it would be greatly advantageous if governments would encourage the management to
shift or start their establishments in less crowded regions.

An obvious benefit of this strategy is that overcrowding of
cities can be reduced to a great extent.It is clear, that increasing number of commercial enterprises has
attracted a large number of professionals and workers to urban areas, which has
resulted in problems like traffic congestion, inefficient waste-management and
pollution.For instance, during the
morning and evening peak commuting time, the roads in a metropolis like Bangalore
in India are jam-packed and it is one the most polluted cities in India.The tax incentives offered by the state
government for companies that would establish labour intensive software facilities
in the satellite cities like Mysore and Hosur, attracted many companies.This initiative has helped the administration
to handle the growing urban problems and distribute the available resources
more efficiently in this fast growing city.

On the other hand, operating businesses and industries in
regional areas would be challenging for companies, in attracting skilled professionals,
servicing clients and dealing with poor infrastructural facilities.This would mean that many highly skilled engineers
and business professionals would hesitate to relocate to smaller towns or
regional areas, for lack of superior educational facilities and lifestyle opportunities.The inadequacy of efficient logistic and communication systems would also be a serious problem.

In conclusion, considering the enormity of problems
faced by huge cities, on account of increasing population growth, moving
businesses and factories to rural or less crowded areas would be a logical idea.The drawbacks would be less consequential,
and can be handled by effective management strategies and governmental support.

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