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My first flash submission! Featuring the talented DruoxtheShredder as Giraffe and Lion.

I was browsing through the audio portal looking for a skit to practice my animation with and chose to use DruoxtheShredder's "Giraffe Attack."Since it came out so cute looking I decided to post it here. :3 This was drawn using my mouse which was a little difficult and time consuming but I think it came out pretty cute.

Reviews

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars2011-09-01 15:38:06

Rated 5 / 5 stars2011-09-01 08:45:06

Oh boy!

My idea came to life! I think that you've got great potential to make some great animations, you can draw pretty well. A lot better than me, that's for sure, and with more practice I think you can have a very stylized style for your animations!

I think it was a good recreation of the audio, not bad for just having my audio to work from too!

Thanks for making this.

And Mirak is wrong, annoying characters aren't over-rated. They're a stand-by that will be used for all time. It's a form of comedic writing for an ending like the one I wrote. Every production has them, and you just have to live with it. What more is there to a production if there isn't a character you don't like? There's no involvement of the viewer, no "man, I hope the lion kicks his ass." factor. It's an important part of the writing process for comedies. Especially shorts.

Regardless, it was pretty good! I hopw to see more work from you soon!

Thank you, yes I made them look 'cute' on purpose so the lion could change and look more fierce at the end. This was actually animated to a very short voice skit made by DruoxtheShredder which is why it is so short. Thanks for the feedback.

Thank you for the feedback. I actually drew this using my mouse which made it a little more difficult but I think it came out cute. I agree that annoying characters are used often but I don't think they are overated. Like Druox said, it makes you WANT the lion to kick giraffe's butt.

Rated 3 / 5 stars2011-09-01 01:21:02

Very enjoyable!

It didn't have much of a story, but it what did happen was hilarious. The animation was also great, reminds me of older animations from over a decade ago. But it flowed well and everything was very recognizable.