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I need helpp with my first squeeze page

Hey warriors, i have just started up my FIRST squeeze page that is promoting a CLICKBANK product.As you guys might understand i'm a complete noob when it comes to this so i would love if anyone could help me and give some constructive advice on the content and layout of the site.

Nice product video. It is long with some typos but all in all it is still good. Your title is a bit long, is that your target keyword? My suggestion would be to go through the video and pull some of the content from there as well as the testimonials. I would definitely try to come up with some sort of logo or image of ghostbuster symbol over a syringe. The product owner emphasises on the no needles idea several times within the video. So, I would stick with text that focuses around the benefits of being diabetes free.

I hope this helps.

Thank you for taking your time to help me out, yeah i kindof intented for that title to be my main keyphrase, but i could very well change it to something more "click friendly".

About adding content from the video, should i realy add more content to my site, i've heard that squeeze pages should be clean and have little text.

And my last question is, what do you think about the website layout, do you think it encourages people to click through to the affiliate link or could i make some changes to optimize it more?