This reminds me of one I wrote a couple of years ago about starting again anew. The chance eing forever means that no matter what happens we can begin again anew. You have a strange way of breaking up stanzas in your work. This can be refreshing at times, but in others extemporaineous. I'm not sure which of these ths particular one falls under. You seem to be fond of writing stanzas that have one single line in them. These lines would (I think) tie up the poem in one line and than you're finished or if at the beginning they state a starting point that doesn't necessarily need to be there. They act as a second title to your first one. This seems to me excessive to have a stanza that says something and than another one that says that same thing.

Yes, I know, you specifically requested that people read your more recent works, as you believe your writing style has changed significantly with time (as I'm sure all writers believe as well). Well, don't worry, I'll read them too. But I have a severe dislike of reviewing poems that already have 20 reviews. (Actually, it's closer to about 10, but the loweset you had was 12). So, I'm reviewing this one, because I have a most-likely-ridiculous notion that a review on a sparsely-reviewed poem is more appreciated in the long run. Ack, I'm going on forever, and I hate people who do , on to the poem. Very unique, original, interesting. Definitely your own point of view. Or so I think. But what do I know? I'm just a novice. Thank you for the review, and I swear not all my reviews are this long and tedious.