Yes,yes. This is quite interesting, and it can't be denied that you are a very, very talented person. I think that this may be one of the best ones you've written, even though if applied to a literal world I find it depressing. But hey, that's the point,when I read this poem, you controlled my emotions: told me to feel sad, told me to feel happy, etc. When you can do that as an author, ya know you're doing something right. J-fReAK