Sabtu, 09 Maret 2013

Narrative Teks :" Arrogant Queen" , for story telling

Arrogant
Queen

By
: Putri Sulistia Rini

One upon a time there is Queen, named Angelia. She was very beautiful and she
had a beautiful voice. But she was very ..very arrogant. One day she was
singing her favourite song. But suddenly..... what happened ?

Queen : “ Will you remember me the
way i remember you, you’re the sweetest every moment with you is
the sweettest one.......hek hek ..hek. What hapend with my voice. I can’t sing
high sound. What happend ? I have to consultation to a shaman.... ah ah ah .... Soldier, soldier come here..... come here !

Then a soldier came
and ask to her

Souldier
: (He gave admiration ) What’s up your majesty ! what can i do for you ?

Queen : There is a provlem with mya voice
now call a shaman to come here. Don’t take long time !!!! Right Nowww

Souldier : Okayy okay , of course .( He ran quickly )

Then the siouldier
looked for a shaman. And he bring the shaman to Queen Angelia.

Soldier :
Hey you must be carefull with Queen Angelia she is very cruel

Queen
: i think, It is no problem . But a can’t go because if i go it can make my voice bad turn ( she gave false pretenses)

Shaman : Okay i will order a rabbit to find it for you !

Queen: Oh good idea .....!

Then The shaman ask
to the rabbit to look for the egg. Acctualy the rabbit refuse it but the queen
said that se want to kill him if he refuse it. Then with perfoce he did it. The
rabbit arrive him family to look for the crocodile egg . And He went to the
forest to look for big crocodile and to take the egg. He walked and walked and
in the way he always sang a song.

Rabbit :
Tra la la laa.....

And after he arrived
in the forest he found a big river. And he looked around. Sudennly he
found a big crocidile with some egg under the crocodile. And the rabbit
approaching it and said to her.

Rabbit : Excuse me !

Buaya :
Emmm whow a rabbit

Rabbit :
I’ m sorry for disturb you , i really sorry about that !

Buaya :
No problem,, do you need any help ? Are you lost ?, or a snake disturb you ?

Rabbit
: “ No , but i have to look for crocodile egg .emm you know angelia Queen
?

Buaya
: Ha who is it ?

Rabbit
: She is a queen in a castle she is beautiful adn have a beatiful voice

Buaya
: Ohhhh i see. She is an arrogant queen

Rabbit :
Aaaaa... acctually she have a problem with her voice soo she order me to take crocodile egg to cure her voice. So can you give me an egg for Angelina Queen please ?“

Buaya
: Haaaaa.... are you crazy it is my first child and you want to take it
i don’t permit you, now go from here

Rabbit :
Please slow down , ...just one just one please help me
Buaya : No

Rabbit
: if i not brig it for her, Queen angelina will kill me . Please hep me ? ( he
cry )

Then the
crocodile thought it seriously , and suddenly she got an idea

Buaya : Oh
i have an idea. Actually i have an broken egg . If you want it you can take it

Rabbit
: But , are you sure it can cure Queen Anggelina

Buaya
: No, but i think it is better for us. You can live again and i can keep
my egg

Rabbit
: Okay Deal

Buaya
: Here is it !

Rabbit :
Thank you

Than the
rabbit came to the castle and gave it to Queen Angelina. And the queen cook it
and ate it gredily . After she ate it she sang her fafourite song

But sudenly
her voice became husky and husky and her face became ugly . Then other people
not identified her, and she was driven from the castle. And she became poor.
Ohhh how poor she is !!

:) Thank’s . that is
my story if there are many mistakes in my story please forgive me okay. No how
do you think about my story ! do you want tell it to your friens or your child
? ithink it is exsact for all of people. 100 % i made it by my self, i
just junior high school student so i just know a little about english language.
Than if there are many mistakes i say again, I’m sorry !