Heya peeps, just putting this here for further notice. I'll be going back and forth in the comic, making changes to a few of the worse-off pages, mainly in the beginnning prologue, and a few of the chapter one pages. Basically, I'm going in and rewriting the diaglogue and maybe adding more shadows, and, to be redundant, more dialogue that will, hopefully, clarify the story's beginnings. Keep an eye out for new pages, I'll post here when they appear.
As of this writing, pages that I have updated are:
20050326
20050327
20050805
20050814
20051103
20051106
Keep frosty,
Kilre

i re-updated the comics with the dates:
20050327, and
20050814.
i decided that the present page on date 20051113 just plain sucked, and changed that as well. so, a three-fer this update!
whoo, i need to study for my finals now...
cheers, Kilre

whoo, big load of updates! i hope that the city destruction page looks a hell of a lot better than it did before. thanks go to faub for pointing out to me that i should "make it beautiful". i tried. if it's not up to par, i'll go back in at a later date, but now i'm happy with it.
cheers, Kilre