Commendation: These are aspects of the presentation you really liked! Record at least TWO.

Recommendations: These are aspects of the presentation you would like to see improved! Record ONE.

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2

10/20/2015 12:56:57

sydney schultheis

Madeline, Brandon, Justin

Mt.Denali

Rookie

Rookie

Rookie

Your presentation helped me realize what Mt.Denali is and some interesting facts. I really think it is cool how it was one of the tallest volcanoes.

I think that maybe you could have been more of more prepared for the whole thing, you can maybe write not a script but guidelines for speaking.

schultheiss2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 12:57:03

Alexia Francisco

Madeline, Brandon, & Justin

Mt. Denali

Rookie

Rookie

Rookie

I liked how you explained that president Obama named it back to Mt. Denali. I also like how you knew the plates off the top of your head.

I would like if you added more information instead of just waiting for the slide to change.

franciscoa2026@oakgrovesd.net

4

10/20/2015 12:59:20

Frank

Justin, Madeline, Brandon

Mt. Denali

Rookie

Rookie

Rookie

This presenation was helpful because they all listed down the websites they used to find information for their presentation.

They can improve on having an answer fro each slide.

fpfeilsticker0504@oakgrovesd.net

5

10/20/2015 12:59:22

Mathilda Zumwalt

Madline, Brandon, and Justin

Delaie

Rookie

Rookie

Rookie

it sounded really interesting because I might want to vist it one day and the park that might be there.

I wish you had made nore eye contact

zumwaltm2026@oakgrovesd.net

6

10/20/2015 12:59:23

Lorenzo

brandon,justin and madeline

Mount Denali

Rookie

Rookie

Skillful

I like how they made a model out of really cheap materials instead of spending $20.

ggg

lcelentano0504@oakgrovesd.net

7

10/20/2015 12:59:35

Jakob Samson

Madeline

Mt. Denali

Rookie

Rookie

Novice

I really like how they put all their people talking. They were fast

not looking on the screen

jsamson0604@oakgrovesd.net

8

10/20/2015 12:59:40

Ishita Patel

Madeline, Brandon, Justin

Mount Denali

Rookie

Rookie

Rookie

We liked your model and how you explained to us most of the info.

The presentation could have benefited if you all were a little more confident. It would have made the presentation more enjoyable, and also would have helped us understand your information more.

cstauffer0504@oakgrovesd.net

9

10/20/2015 13:06:55

kaden

brandon

mount donaily

Skillful

Rookie

Skillful

faster

i like it but the bonderies need to be found

melinek2026@oakgrovesd.net

10

10/20/2015 13:07:00

Juliana Redclift

Miles R, Alexia, and Enya/Anh

Mt. Galopis

Master

Skillful

Master

Your presentation helped me realize that models don't always have to be made of clay.

I was cinfused when you started to talk faster, so I would suggest that you slow down if you are feeling nervous.

jredclift0204@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:07:22

Jakob Samson

Enya, miles R, Alexia

Fernindina

Skillful

Skillful

Master

They new what they were going to say. Also they did it in time.

Mentioning that it's made out of candy because people went crazy.

jsamson0604@oakgrovesd.net

12

10/20/2015 13:07:45

Jayden Freidt

Enya, Alexia, and Miles R

Fernandina Island

Master

Master

Master

I really like the audience awareness. I love their model.

I think they should talk slower.

freidtj2026@oakgrovesd.net

13

10/20/2015 13:08:03

Jewel Vijay

Enya. Miles R., and Alexia

f

Skillful

Rookie

Rookie

Your presentation helped me realize to know a lot about your place

You could e put some more interesting facts.

vijayj2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:08:09

Jewel Vijay

Enya. Miles R., and Alexia

f

Skillful

Rookie

Rookie

Your presentation helped me realize to know a lot about your place

You could e put some more interesting facts.

vijayj2026@oakgrovesd.net

15

10/20/2015 13:08:19

Ishita, Tiffany, Catherine, Amelie

Alexia, Enya, Miles R.

Fernandina Island

Skillful

Master

Skillful

I liked how you answered questions without hesitation. We also liked how you clearly said everything.

You could have looked at the audience a little more.

cstauffer0504@oakgrovesd.net

16

10/20/2015 13:08:38

Sienna Neff

Enya, Miles, and alexia

Ferinanda Island

Skillful

Skillful

Skillful

I really liked the modelI liked the info

I think they should have stayed more with the slides,

neffs2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:12:00

kaden

miles r

fernindina island

Skillful

Skillful

Skillful

nice

good

melinek2026@oakgrovesd.net

18

10/20/2015 13:13:20

kaden

jayden

3 sisters

Master

Master

Skillful

like the facts

let jayden talk

melinek2026@oakgrovesd.net

19

10/20/2015 13:13:39

Madeline

Sydney, Alexandra, and Jayden

The three sisters

Skillful

Skillful

Skillful

They spoke clearly and they didn't pause during sentences.

They are good and I didn't see anything that needed to be improved.

chanmad2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:14:31

Miles Thompson

Jayden Freidt, Alexandra Rozmarin, and Sydney Shultheis

3 Sisters

Skillful

Skillful

Master

Your presentation helped me realize more about The 3 Sisters. Your idea about The 3 Sisters sounded really interesting to me because there are 3 people although Jayden isn't a girl.

The presentation could have benefited from letting Jayden talk a little more, so your audience could easily understand Jayden.

thompsonm2026@oakgrovesd.net

21

10/20/2015 13:14:41

Daniela Rios

Jayden,Sydney,Alexandra

The Three Sisters

Master

Master

Master

Your reashearch helped me find out that the three sisters are not one whole volcano.And what was very intresting was that its a transform boundary.

I was confused because the timing was a bit off so i was like "um the slide just change and i have no idea what its about."

riosd2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:14:51

Tiffany, Ishita, Catherine, Amelie

Alexandra, Sydney, Jayden

Three Sisters

Skillful

Skillful

Skillful

I like how you guys included lots of information. I also like how you guys kept a calm and a good voice.

Maybe next time you guys could include everyone equally while the presentation

cstauffer0504@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:15:07

Kai oliva

Alexandra,Sydney,Jayden

The Three Sisters

Skillful

Skillful

Skillful

I realized that you spoke clear and loud so the audience can hear you.

I did not like how you did not share your slides and time equally

koliva0704@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:15:39

Enya/Anh Do

Alexandra Rozmarin Syn

The Three Sisters

Skillful

Skillful

Skillful

I really liked how you didn't hesitate, mumble, or say umm while presenting. I also thought it was interesting how the glaciers were able to erode the volcano.

I recommend you to use more eye contact as well as have ALL the presenters speak.

doa2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:16:28

Nicole Jacobsen

Alexandra, Jayden, and Sidney

The Three Sisters

Master

Master

Skillful

I loved Your slides and your model.

I loved the pressentation but I think you should have not had two simmimilar slides .

jacobsenn2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:20:46

Justin

Sean

Mt. Chasta

Rookie

Skillful

Rookie

Your work let me see what it is made of. It also lets me see how it was formed.

It would've been better if you stopped looking at the paper. And made more eye contact with the audience.

nguyenjus2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:21:33

JoshuaSantos

Sean, Riccardo, and Kaden

Mt. Shasta

Rookie

Skillful

Rookie

The model looks like the image. The images were good

The timing on the slides and speaking

jsantos0104@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:21:36

Joseph

Sean, Riccardo, and Kaden.

Mt. Shasta

Master

Skillful

Master

I like your topic.

I like to see you talk more about the land.

melinek2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:21:49

Jessica Stroud

Riccardo, Sean, Kaden

Mt Shasta

Skillful

Rookie

Rookie

I wonder what other interesting facts you could've put in the slides.

You could of kept better time.

stroudj2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:22:00

Miles Rivers

Sean, Riccardo, Kaden

Mr. Shasta

Rookie

Skillful

Rookie

I like how you guys got to the point. I also liked how you went fast.

Maybe Sean could talk more.

riversm2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:22:15

Alexandra Rozmarin

Riccardo, Sean, and Kaden

Mt. Shasta

Rookie

Master

Master

The key idea I am taking away from your presentation is that Mount Shasta is a really interesting volcano. I found that the volcano only erupted 800 years ago very interesting because that isn't a long time ago.

I recommend that you memorize a little bit more of the script.

rozmarina2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:22:16

Frank 6B

Riccardo, Sean, Kaden

Mt. Shasta

Skillful

Skillful

Master

I like how the presentation had the citations of where they got their information.

I like the pictures that were used.

Try to have more eye conatct...

fpfeilsticker0504@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:27:22

Sydney Schulteis

Ishita, Tiffany

Kilmanjaro

Skillful

Master

Skillful

I loved how much information you got out you, I really learned a lot. I also love the legend you put in there that was really cool.

One thing that you could improve on is how talk you fast because at some points I could not understand.

schultheiss2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:28:51

Alexia Francisco

Ishita & Tiffany

Mt. Kiilimanjaro

Skillful

Master

Master

I liked how you added in the legend. I also like how you described everything, you added a lot in that time.

I wish you had talked slower, especially in the legend part because it was difficult for me to understand you.

franciscoa2026@oakgrovesd.net

35

10/20/2015 13:29:07

Brandon

Tiffany

mount kilimanjaro

Master

Master

Master

The thing i liked was that Tiffany didn't look at the presentation.The thing i liked was that Ishita looked at the people and didn't take quiet she talked luoud

I think it will be better to tell us a little more information on the mountains.

juarezb2026@oakgrovesd.net

36

10/20/2015 13:30:38

Mathilda Zumwalt

Tiffany and Ishta

Mt. Kilimanjaro

Skillful

Skillful

Skillful

Your story about how one of the volcano's stole the other one's cole was very interesting and I loved it!

Overall your Presatation was great and I loved it! There is no need to change it!

zumwaltm2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:30:42

Sienna Neff

Tiffany,Ishita

Mt. Kibo

Skillful

Master

Skillful

I loved the legendI think they did great at presenting

I think they should have said the name more. I did not remember

neffs2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:31:59

Riccardo

Ishita and Tiffany

Kilimanjaro

Master

Master

Skillful

I found the legend interesting because it explained a reason why the volcano is like that

Every thing was good

gavardonir2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/20/2015 13:32:51

Jakob Samson

Ishita and Tiffany

Mt. Kilamanjaro

Skillful

Skillful

Rookie

Were fast enough. Talked clearly.

Nothing.

samsonj2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:17:44

Jakob Samson

Nichole and Sienna

Syberian

Skillful

Skillful

Skillful

They did not look back at the slides. They were fast.

They did not make eye contact with anyone, she just looked down

samsonj2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:18:20

sydney schultheis

Nicole, Sienna, Frank

The Siberian Traps

Master

Skillful

Skillful

I loved the facts you used it was very interesting. Also your model is really cool, great job.

Next time maybe you can be a little more prepared and more energetic.

schultheiss2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:21:45

Brandon

Frank

Siberian Traps

Skillful

Master

Master

I liked how the information was detailed and gave a lot of facts.

I wish the mountain could have more ice at the top

juarezb2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:21:48

Jessica Stroud

Nicole, Frank, Sienna

Siberian Traps

Skillful

Master

Skillful

How you explained everything helped me really understand what it is.

Overall, your work was outstanding. I liked how you were not nervous about the presentation.

stroudj2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:22:15

Enya Do

Sienna Neff, Nicole Jacobsen, Frank P.

The Siberian Traps

Rookie

Master

Skillful

I really liked how you explained lots of information about the topic informing everyone. I also liked how you made your model. It was creative and it looked very nice.

It would be better if you used eye contact. Instead, you just read off the paper.

doa2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:22:15

Mathilda Zumwalt

Nicole, Sienna And Frank

Siberian Traps

Skillful

Skillful

Rookie

I found that how flat the top of your volcano was very interesting, But I wonder how it got that way.

II would have liked if you had told us how the top of your volcano got so flat!

zumwaltm2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:22:30

Joseph

Sennia, nicole and Frank

Siberian Traps

Master

Master

Master

I like the topic that you choose to do this project.

I think if you can talk more about this topic.

nguyenjos2026@oakgrovesd.net

47

10/21/2015 10:23:14

Arjun Vyavaharkar

Catherine Stauffer/Amelie Liamon

Mt. Fuji

Skillful

Master

Skillful

I liked that the presentation was precise. I also liked how the presenters were clear.

I think that the presenters shouldn't repeat themselves often. Otherwise, I understood.

vyavaharkararj2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:23:35

Juliana Redclift

Amelie & Catherine

Mt. Fuji

Skillful

Master

Master

Your presentation helped me realize how much interesting information there is on Mt. Fuji.

You might consider talking a little louder just so it is a little easier to hear you.

jredclift0204@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:23:37

Miles Thompson

Amelie and Catherine

Mt. Fuji

Skillful

Skillful

Rookie

Your presentation helped me realize more about Mt. Fuji. Your idea about Mt. Fuji sounded really interesting to me because Mt. Fuji was cool that it was in Japan

I was confused when you were saying listening with your eyes and ears.

thompsonm2026@oakgrovesd.net

50

10/21/2015 10:23:39

Tiffany

Nicole, Sienna, Frank

Siberian Traps

Novice

Skillful

Skillful

I liked how you guys spoke clearly, I also liked how you guys explained it very clearly.

Maybe you guys could look at the audience a bit more!

thoang0504@oakgrovesd.net

51

10/21/2015 10:23:51

Sienna Neff

Catherine and Amelie

Mt. Fuji

Master

Skillful

Skillful

I loved how they keep with the slides.I reallly like how they had the legend.

I think they should have talked about there model.

neffs2026@oakgrovesd.net

52

10/21/2015 10:23:55

Kai Oliva

Amelie L. Catherine S.

Mt.Fuji

Skillful

Master

Master

I like how you showed how amazing the mountain can be

Mentioning, you guys nervously laughed through some of the parts of the presentation

olivak2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:24:46

Jewel Vijay

Amile and catiren

Mt. Fugi

Skillful

Rookie

Skillful

I liked how there model was and how they put pictures that explained the tittle.

They could have put a little bit more detail in there model with a little bit more snow and a little more real life.

vijayj2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:25:05

Lorenzo

Frank, nicole and sienna

siberian traps.

Skillful

Master

Skillful

They almost never stopped looking at the croud, there model was good

that they could even out the people talking.

celentanol2026@oakgrovesd.net

55

10/21/2015 10:30:02

Nicole Jacobsen

Joesph

Iceland

Skillful

Skillful

Master

I loved your presentation and your model. You did a great job!!!

I think that you should have had a little longer sentences.

jacobsenn2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:30:13

kaden

joseph

iceland

Master

Skillful

Skillful

I like the jifs and pictures, and good eye contact.

find out what the plates were

melinek2026@oakgrovesd.net

57

10/21/2015 10:30:17

Frank

Catherine and Amelie

Mt.Fuji

Master

Skillful

Master

The presentation had great images displayed

The facts were very detailed and had great explanations

I think this presentation can be improved if there could be more eye contact with the audience...

fpfeilsticker0504@oakgrovesd.net

58

10/21/2015 10:30:19

Riccardo

Amelie and catherenie

Mt. Fuji

Skillful

Master

Skillful

Your presentation helped me relize that mount fuji is an enormous mountain and is a very beauifull tplace for people to go visit.

If you could look at the audience a little bit more.

gavardonir2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:30:39

Alexia Francisco

Joseph Nguyen

Iceland

Rookie

Rookie

Rookie

I liked how you arrange your presentation. I also liked how you kept the words short and simple.

I wish that you didn't add the text on the presentation because you don't have enough time to read it, it would look better if you added more pictures.

franciscoa2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:30:45

Juliana Redclift

Joseph Nguyen

Iceland

Skillful

Rookie

Rookie

Your work enabled me to see that Iceland is really cool!

I was confused when you talked a little quieter, so I would suggest that you try to talk clearer.

jredclift0204@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:31:02

Miles Rivers

Amelie, Catherine

Mt. Fuji

Rookie

Master

Master

I like how you didn't have to stop as much as the other presenters. I also like how you guys didn't need to answer any questions because it has a lot of information.

I kind of wish that you could of made eye contact with the audience.

riversm2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:31:54

Justin

Joseph

Iceland

Skillful

Skillful

Master

Your presentation helped me see that over 150 volcanos formed Iceland! It also helped me see it it is the only place where you can stand in between 2 plates.

It would be better if you could speak up louder and if you could look at the audience more.

nguyenjus2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:33:24

Ishita Patel

Amelie, Catherine

Mount Fuji

Rookie

Master

Skillful

I liked how you spoke clearly through out the whole presentation. I also liked the amount of information and the type of information you provided

Try to look at the audience more and look at the notes less.

pateli2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:33:52

Jayden Freidt

Joseph

Iceland

Skillful

Skillful

Skillful

I really liked the model. I loved the image you used to make your model.

I recommend that you speak up a little.

freidtj2026@oakgrovesd.net

65

10/21/2015 10:37:12

Jessica Stroud

Catherine and Amelie

Mt Fuji

Skillful

Rookie

Skillful

Your idea to say that it is one of the main symbols of Japan was cool. I don't think anyone else thought of saying that.

I would improve you speed and timing. It was a little fast.

stroudj2026@oakgrovesd.net

66

10/21/2015 10:38:31

Arjun Vyavaharkar

Jakob Samson, Kai Oliva, And Joshua Santos

The Cascade Mountains/Range

Skillful

Master

Skillful

I liked that the presenters were firm. I also liked that the presenters shared most information.

I would recommend that they spend more time presenting more information.

vyavaharkararj2026@oakgrovesd.net

67

10/21/2015 10:40:00

Alexandra Rozmarin

Jacob, Joshua, and Kai

The Cascade Range

Rookie

Skillful

Master

The fact that the cascade has so many volcanoes is very interesting. I really liked all the pictures you chose to represent the information you were saying.

I recommend that you practice the script with the presentation running. You were having a little trouble with that.

rozmarina2026@oakgrovesd.net

68

10/21/2015 10:40:16

Ishita Patel

Jakob, Kai, Josh

Cascade mountains

Rookie

Master

Skillful

I liked how you used gifs to explain the tectonic plate movements. I also liked how you provided all of the mandatory information, and also explained some of the things you said.

You could have tried to time your information so you wouldn't need to wait that much.

pateli2026@oakgrovesd.net

69

10/21/2015 10:41:32

Jewel Vijay

Kia, jacob. jshua

Rookie

Skillful

Rookie

I liked your model that you made

Could have spoke more louder.

vijayj2026@oakgrovesd.net

70

10/21/2015 10:42:00

Sydney Schultheis

Juliana, Mathilda

Tambora

Master

Skillful

Skillful

I really liked your model it was very cool. Also you presentation was AWESOME, it was very interesting, nice puns.

Next time maybe you can tell more of basic information like where it is and stuff like that.

schultheiss2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:42:32

Joshua Santos

Joseph N.

Iceland

Rookie

Skillful

Rookie

I really like e content that you presented. I also like the model that you showed us.

One thing that you can do better is the delivery on the presentation because on some parts, I couldn't understand it completely.

jsantos0104@oakgrovesd.net

72

10/21/2015 10:42:43

Enya Do

Jakob Samson, Kai Olivia, Joshua Santos

The Cascade Mountains

Rookie

Skillful

Skillful

I liked how your model was very nice and it looked like it was built carefully. I also liked how you didn't use any words and you only used pictures on your presentation.

I recommend that you don't wait for the slide to change and to be more prepared to read.

doa2026@oakgrovesd.net

73

10/21/2015 10:42:55

kaden

mathilda, juliana

tambora

Master

Skillful

Master

lots of facts

thicker area for your model

melinek2026@oakgrovesd.net

74

10/21/2015 10:43:12

Sienna Neff

Juliana and Mathilda

Mt. Timbora

Master

Master

Master

I love there enturiasumI love how they made it fun for us

I think they could have talked about there model.

neffs2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:43:17

Jakob Samson

Juliana and Matilda

Mt. Tambora

Master

Master

Master

They were funny as well as telling the right info. They did not.look at the screen behind them/

I did not understand a lot because they talked fast so it was all rushed

samsonj2026@oakgrovesd.net

76

10/21/2015 10:43:40

Alexia Francisco

Juliana Redcliff, Matilida Z.

Mt. Tambora

Master

Skillful

Master

I liked how you made it cheesy, it makes people laugh and keep interest. I also liked how it was very positive and enthusiastic.

I wish that you talked about your model.

franciscoa2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:43:40

Frank

Kai, Joshua, and Jakob

The Cascade Mountains

Rookie

Skillful

Rookie

The presentation had great imagesPresenters held lots of info

having more eye contact with the audience

fpfeilsticker0504@oakgrovesd.net

78

10/21/2015 10:44:11

Amelie Laimon

Juliana and Mathilda

Mt. Tambora

Master

Master

Master

I really liked the exitement in your presentation. I also enjoyed the facts and the way you phrased them.

I would like to see improved more eye contact. But overall I liked it a lot.

alaimon0404@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:44:16

Riccardo

Julianna and Matiltha

Mt Tambora

Master

Skillful

Master

I really liked your enthusiasum for the presentation and how you made it funny,informative and entertaining.

Maybe a little bit less cheesy lines

gavardonir2026@oakgrovesd.net

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10/21/2015 10:44:21

Daniela Rios

Kai,JAcob,Joshua

Cascade mountain

Skillful

Skillful

Skillful

Your reashearch helped me understand the 6 forms in the cascade moutain.And I also learned that they are part of the ring of fire.