Wishing for Amnesia

By Mona Daniella H., New York, NY

Memories marred by the attempts to delete them, She doesn’t know what really happened anymore. The Incident becomes incidents become “it happens all the time.” Now all she knows Is that it happens all the time.

Very good. Good title. Consider removing the line "Is that it happens all the time" it is a repeat of what is already been said and the repetition doesn't add much and isn't a theme throughout so it is not necessary. I love the flow of this and the format of each stanza.

So relatable you did amazing with this piece I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff. this is really touching and just all around I loved it. If you can, take a look at some of my work please:)