IWill Never Stop Loving You

Hi! This is a sequel to my IOMG Part 2 speculation/fanfic (which you can find here!)Now, I'm an amateur fanfiction writer. So, if there's anything I can do to make it better, please tell me. Criticism is appreciated. :)

Carly and Freddie were sitting on the couch watching some weird show before they had to leave for school on a Monday morning. Carly looked over at Freddie. He seemed to have something on his mind.
"Freddie. What's wrong?" Carly asked.

And as if it were fate, Sam rushed through the door with a hurried look on her face. "You guys! We've got to hurry! School starts in 10 minutes and it's raining."

Carly looked over to the clock and noticed that they were indeed late.
Sam signaled them to follow and she ran down the hall. Freddie looked ticked off. He just lost his chance to ask her before school.

And he could tell Carly knew that too, because she was smirking, and she said in a deep voice, "Yeah, real smooth."