OMG...this is one of the greatest poems i've ever read on this site...i don't know what else to say...it's only slightly less than perfect...i don't even know what i'm talking about i'm so astounded...

Nice, I quiet like it. I took me a while to realise it was two points of views, but i got it, me slow :P That was really clever .
I picture like a little drug deal senareo thing. Like "I'll swap you some, eh, faith for your help" :) Anyways, great poem .