Now, I hate to be nitpicky and all, since your stuff is fantastic, but I did kinda get lost on the first panel in terms of lightning on this page. Kinda loses the sense of night with a single fire light source. Some rim lights could help sell the scene a bit better. Just doesn’t match the intensity of the light on the other panels in that first one.

Plus, a bit of rim lighting on Nastajia will emphasize her good looks that the panel is talking about…give her that hollywood actress glow

Sorry, not a lighting expert, but I’ve been staring at (and fixing) light rigs in renders a lot recently and can’t help but notice these things nowadays

Googled for “Dreamland” trying to find something related to Dale Brown’s novels. Pleasantly surprised. Love anime and your Chronicles are fantastic. Started from your home page and read every panel…it is now 5am. Thanks! Looking forward to see how this finishes.

AW…. if I wans’t on vacation right now I’d plan on dropping by… we’re only an hour and a half from Charlotte. Want to drop in on us instead (sniff sniff…. and hubby and kids would have loved meeting up)

I can’t help but think of the movie Hook, where the adult Peter Pan has to think of a happy thought that will help him remember how to fly. Shame that’s not the way it works in Dreamland, or Alex would literally be walking on air here too.

Ok I know you have been focusing on Nastaja but I can’t help but wonder about Felisity. Is there an update on how she is coming up soon. Also, ALEX DON’T WAKE UP. Scott hope you have fun wish my hubby and i could join you but we are stuck in the middle of the country.

Excellent recovery, Alex finds his smooth! As glib as he usually is I was hopeful. Great look throughout.

I don’t think that’s regular plate. Magical armor is often no heavier than normal clothes’ and some even have the feel of cloth or leather. Alex’s armor seems to be “Plate Armor of Elf Maiden and Trouble Attracting”. Troublesome sure, but high ac, stylish and hey, attracts elf maidens. Good stuff.

I love your comic and love how she looks in the new clothes with her hair down, its well worth the effort and money you’ve used. But um.. is it me or is her chest in the first panel a little odd looking? I don’t know if its the lighting making her chest look weird or not.