Really Brilliant. I love this whole emotion universe! Brilliant. I can't wait to read some more! Maybe a sad mood one, at the Funeral. I'm always curious as to what Ginny's real reaction was to all that.

Like both the others in this series, this was wonderful. I'm not sure whether Ginny would regret the technique comment, but then, I don't know. And I loved Ginny's comments on the R/Hr fight. You write beautifully, keep it up!

critmoSaturday 22nd October 2005 00:20

Not a Good Mood 2 (Author Response)

That comment isn't very nice, I think Ginny comes across as quite hard in the fibre there. So she might regret it in a softer moment.

I like it. The honest truth is, I'm dying to get just a few moments in the HP books out of JKR that are not solely focused on Harry. So, when something well written comes along that gives me insight into Ron, Hermione or Ginny, it is just great. And given that Ginny really is the only girl for Harry, this is really cool to read about. Eventually, you'll have to to a "Not in a Good Mood" that shows the breakup and how she gets him to come to his senses. Please??

critmoWednesday 31st August 2005 00:17

Not a Good Mood 2 (Author Response)

I plan something about the breakup, but I'm not sure about her making him come to his senses. (Although I've just had a devilish idea writing the sentence above.) - Knowing JKR, I don't think that they will be back together soon after the events in HBP. It will take time to sort things out and apart from that: Harry's priorities are clearly elsewhere. It's also a question of the trajectory. Anyway, at the moment, I find it hard to write something that's very unlikely to happen.

Poor Ginny, life's hard at times isn't it? Luckily we know what
comes to pass not too many months from now, but before that victorious
kiss.. it must have been agony. And you captured it well.
I'm quite happy I'm not in her position.

i really like this. im not sure if i reviewed your first one after i read it, so ill go back and check and be sure to leave one if i didnt.

im not sure if i 100% agree with what you think Ginny thought in the book, but it certainly does make sense. personally, i dont think she would have pined so much over Harry, even if she did still like him...:\

but in any case, this is a great story, and i enjoyed it immensely. hope to see another one soon!! :D

critmoTuesday 30th August 2005 00:01

Not a Good Mood 2 (Author Response)

Does it sound like pining? - Not good, then. I rather had the idea that Harry just keeps occupying her thoughts, even if Ginny has decided to give up on him. And I'm fairly convinced that it matters to her what he thinks of her. - I would never assume that this is the only explanation for Ginny's behaviour in HBP, it's just what I came up with for myself and I wanted to see if it makes sense to others at well.

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