A comical tale of what of what not to do on your first day of the job. I wrote this fairly recently as a somewhat whimsical tale but was pleasantly surprised at how it turned out. Not quite as silly as I planned it.

After reading mist if your stories this one is still my fav and would love to see a sequel. My only real critique is that you need more description of the people, you give things like height, and eye/hair color, but those are not stated in all of your stories, these are key details that allow us to get a feel for the characters. The more physical details you give of them, the better it is for us to imagine how they look. Other then that great job.