gardens made of stone

Below is the poem entitled gardens made of stone which was written by poet
gary
bechter. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

gardens made of stone

been save-en pocket change
to catch a train
a ride to the world
of milk an honey
pockets ran empty
not un-like
the lies of hope
so i cast
with empty eyes
upon a garden
made of stone
the wishfulness
of hope
the hopefulness
of a wish ?
so i sit in ponder
within a garden
made of stone