I dunno, now it looks really strange.There is a lot of movement for an standing still animation, and boobs dont go up and down when breathing.Not that i could do it better.

why dont you make the char 2d (face to the right) and work from there?Maplestory got some nice characters, but they are deformed.

Yeah, my wife pointed out that the breathing looked off... It's not that the boobs don't move, it's that the shoulders are moving too much ( she proved it to me... ). I'll post a cleaned up copy later and add clothing so Riven doesn't get mad at me

Doesn't that prove his point?The legs seem too long because the torso is too short (by half a head height).

Yeah... I wasn't saying he was wrong I guess the question is... are the legs bad enough to spend the time? I was hoping to move onto the next animation soon, but if it's noticeable (like the previous idle animation sketch), I'll spend more time on it to get them to a better point.

Doesn't that prove his point?The legs seem too long because the torso is too short (by half a head height).

Yeah... I wasn't saying he was wrong I guess the question is... are the legs bad enough to spend the time? I was hoping to move onto the next animation soon, but if it's noticeable (like the previous idle animation sketch), I'll spend more time on it to get them to a better point.

What are your guys thoughts?

-Pickle

The legs aren't bad. They look too long because the torso is too short and she is standing on her toes instead of flat-footed. Fix those two things and see how it looks. Better to perfect your base drawing now than to change your mind later and have to redraw everything (including non-character designs.)

Doesn't that prove his point?The legs seem too long because the torso is too short (by half a head height).

Yeah... I wasn't saying he was wrong I guess the question is... are the legs bad enough to spend the time? I was hoping to move onto the next animation soon, but if it's noticeable (like the previous idle animation sketch), I'll spend more time on it to get them to a better point.

What are your guys thoughts?

-Pickle

The legs aren't bad. They look too long because the torso is too short and she is standing on her toes instead of flat-footed. Fix those two things and see how it looks. Better to perfect your base drawing now than to change your mind later and have to redraw everything (including non-character designs.)

Well... I tried making the torso longer, and the legs shorter... I don't think it looks right though lol.

I do agree that the feet needed to change... It's especially evident when she's standing on the tiles.

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