Sunrise after the Storm

Below is the poem entitled Sunrise after the Storm which was written by poet
lena
empino. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Sunrise after the Storm

Storm had passed and new sun arise
Flower blooms in April morning
Sordid mind had been cleansed up
All doors that had been closed are now open
The silence has been break free
Love has been shielded me from pain
Stains has been washed out
Beautiful dreams awake me at night
Good things are coming like beautiful mornings
It visit me through all these days
Standing still to make anew of the past
Loving and learning is what I hold to last
A new sun appears to make a new beginning….
By: lena
Lie
10/9/07

I love the way you wrote this poem. The
sun always does rise after the storm. It
brings with it new hope. Here where I live
- we are having a bad storm. It is just
pouring. Have a great day.... Lucilla