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After returning from another venture and setting into the new castle, Twilight and friends learn of the next step in the Princess of Friendship quests. Where will this new map lead? A My Little Mages retelling of The Cutie Map

After returning from another venture and setting into the new castle, Twilight and friends learn of the next step in the Princess of Friendship quests. Where will this new map lead? A My Little Mages retelling of The Cutie Map

With Tirek bested, another group of enemies make their debut. But it will take a different approach to best the Sirens, and maybe an other hand? It's time to go back to Midnight Castle. A My Little Mages AU retelling of Rainbow Rocks

As Cadance's due date arrived, Twilight has what she think is the prefect plan for Starlight's first lesson in friendship. Yet not everything goes according to plan. A My Little Mages retelling of The Crystaling

Starlight has made her move and has set to enact her revenge, but Time is something not even beings like Discord messes with. It's up to Twilight to set everything right. But can she? A My Little Mages retelling of The Cutie Remarking

Twilight has recently been crowned a princes of Mystica, however not all wish her well, namely a former pupil of Celestia, Sunset Shimmer a 'My Little Mages' take on the 'Equestria Girls' series, using parts from the first and third movie and shorts

One of Princess Celestia's earliest foes had broken free from his prison, and is out to rain a little... Chaos and a little glass of water, please? A 'My Little Mages' retelling of 'The Return of Harmony'

After returning from another venture and setting into the new castle, Twilight and friends learn of the next step in the Princess of Friendship quests. Where will this new map lead? A My Little Mages retelling of The Cutie Map

Twilight believes her day was going to be flawless, especially after almost a year of adventures big and small. But why is Rarity managing the weather? A My Little Mages retelling of Magical Mystery Cure

With Tirek bested, another group of enemies make their debut. But it will take a different approach to best the Sirens, and maybe an other hand? It's time to go back to Midnight Castle. A My Little Mages AU retelling of Rainbow Rocks

How was the Tree of Harmony created? Did humans ever come to Equestria? Are the two questions connected? Twilight dreams of fire and blood, and a chained woman who sings the same mournful song that she now hears from her Element.

An ancient city had returned and with it another ancient foe. Can Twilight and company save this city and all of Mystica from this long forgotten shadow? A 'My Little Mages' retelling of The Crystal Empire.

One of Princess Celestia's earliest foes had broken free from his prison, and is out to rain a little... Chaos and a little glass of water, please? A 'My Little Mages' retelling of 'The Return of Harmony'

A moment of calm has come for Twilight et al, and how best to celebrate, then the long awaited Grand Gala. No matter what happens, it will be a night to remember. A 'My Little Mages' retelling of 'The Best Night Ever'.

Twilight believes her day was going to be flawless, especially after almost a year of adventures big and small. But why is Rarity managing the weather? A My Little Mages retelling of Magical Mystery Cure

There's a party in Chantalot! Twilight's brother, Shining Armor, is getting married. But something seems off with the bride, Princess Mi Amore Cadenza. A My Little Mages retelling of A Canterlot Wedding

An ancient city had returned and with it another ancient foe. Can Twilight and company save this city and all of Mystica from this long forgotten shadow? A 'My Little Mages' retelling of The Crystal Empire.

Following her lack of involvement greeting of the Magetonian duke and duchess for the Mystica Games, on top of so many things since her coronation and the return of the Elements of Harmony to the Tree of Harmony, Twilight finds herself in doubt about herself and her role as a princess.

However, a mistake from a year ago has come to haunt her as another old foe Celestia and Luna faced has escaped Tartarus, Lord Tirek, the Spell Thief.

In the meantime, the box the Tree of Harmony gave her remains unopened.

Can Twilight solve the riddle of the box?Can she and her friends defeat Tirek?Or will Tirek leave Mystica as little more than dust in the wind?

A retelling of Twilight's Kingdom in this My Little Mages AU.Cover art by Didj and used with permission

Hey there. Thanks very much for getting the story started. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Again, very good job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places; as well as on the recaps. I particularly liked the (VERY understandable) reluctance on the Princesses' part to send Discord unsupervised. That is a very good detail.

Unfortunately, Blueblood couldn't have played into Tirek's hands better if he were actually on Tirek's payroll (then again, for all we know, he IS). . Sorry about that (sheepish grin) I just couldn't resist a morbid joke for some reason.

Of course, I WILL be looking forward to more of this, but will also be more than willing to respect that real world concerns have to come first.

Not much I can say beyond very good job on the latest chapter. The exchanges were quite well done (particularly the one between Tirek and Discord and the one between the former element bearers) as were all the characterizations. And, yeah, the points you made in the author's notes were quite well done.

Of course, it wouldn't take much intelligence for the demigods to realize that no matter WHO got the power, they would HAVE TO fight Tirek eventually (anybody even moderately Genre Savvy would realize THAT), so it would make the most sense for the most experienced demigod to hold on to the power (in this case, this would be Celestia) - giving the power to the LEAST experienced just makes the others look like cowards.

After all, it would make a lot more sense for Twilight and her friends to get the final key later on by helping out the people of Our Town learn about REAL friendship (assuming there was a way for them to find out about the town's existence that didn't require the special map).

Then again, while it would make a lot more sense, it wouldn't be anywhere near as climatic.

But I digress.

At any rate, I will very definitely be looking forward to more of this, but will also respect the fact that real world concerns have to come first.

8443277Well, I thought this chapter was pretty good, but, I feel like there could've been a little more conflict from Discord in regards to his betrayal. I'm also curious to see how you connect the G1 characters in this storyline.

8443283You have to remember, Discord is used to being the puppeteer, he's used to be the one messing around with other's psyches, he's not used to being on the other end and has been a puppeteer for so long, he didn't think he could ever be the puppet. Also, tricksters are often victims of their own pranks.

8443292Hmm, you make a good point. I've recently seen a crash course episode on trickster stories, and some of them do end up the victims of their own schemes. Carry on, and I look forward to your next update.

8443324Furthermore, there's something oddly humorous about the two sisters getting into a shouting match with each other and Blueblood attempting to be useful and possibly developing feelings for Rarity.

Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. I really liked the explanations you provided for pretty much every detail and how well you combine episode faithfulness with added information. The action, characterizations, exchanges and climax set-up are all well done in all the right places. I'll very certainly be looking forward to more of this, but will also be willing to be patient. After all, real world concerns have to come first and inspiration is not always easy to come by. I get both of those.

Tirek could not help but have a good laugh at Discord’s antics and he started to walk the hallway again, “Amusing. But we have no time for such things. Even without their magic, with the princesses out of the way, there is noth–” Tirek paused as he looked at a window showing Twilight’s ascension into her demigod state. Turning to Discord, assuming it was some sort of joke on the Erisadies’ part, “ is this meant to be humorous ?!” there looked to be a vein or an artery along his forehead that looked like it was about to burst.Discord turned to Tirek and waving his paw and talon to the sides like someone denying and action, “Oh, no, I haven't touched that one yet,” the embodiment of chaos lied, he knew Tirek was a bigger threat than anyone or anything else, he too knew better than to trust his partner fully at all other points.

Wait. This part confused me a bit. So, Twilight destroyed her window, and then, Discord used the broken glass to create a different image, right? So, did Discord restore the window after he was done playing with it or what? I think I might have missed something.

Pinkie’s hair seemed to fizzle and fuzz, “What do you know? I had some leftover magic after all.” Pinkie’s hair then deflated like a popped balloon as all of the items in Pinkie’s hair fell out of it and her pockets burst to empty themselves of their contents too. “Well, it looks like that’s the last bit of magic I have.” No one pressed the matter, having long ago realized that to do so would compromise their sanity.

Ah, the magic of plot convenience. Of course.

"You mean Firefly's pipedream actually got off the ground?" Surprise asked in turn. Pinkie nodded. "Tell me more, tell me more! Did I have children and grandchildren, I always wanted to name a son or grandson Holder Colbalstone and or Tanzanite Thrower," Surprise couldn't contain herself, neither could Pinkie.

Oh my gosh! Speaking of which, when is you-know-who going to be reborn?

Once more, you did an excellent job on the final chapter. Again, the action, exchanges, characterizations, general wrap-up and future adventure set-up are all well done in all the right places. I particularly liked the added G1 references particularly the spirit forms of Twilight 1, Applejack 1, Sparkler, Firefly, Posey and Surprise and, in general, the added details concerning the chest and the detail of the acorns .

All in all, this was a very good story and I will definitely be looking forward to more of your work. However, I will also be quite willing to be patient since I know real world concerns have to come first.