Wonderful, just wonderful! I'm not just trying to shower you with compliments, but I have to say that this was amazing and that MANY people can relate to this. ...And yes, the "You" is great because, like you said, it can relate to different people in different situations.

wow i wouldnt percieve u as a shy person at all, if this poem is about u. just the way the poem is written, the words, they give off a sense of stability and confidence that is rarely found in a shy person:) loved it!