I think that this is a very nice deviation, and I will try to tell why :

First, the Vision is clear and we see what is important, nothing more, nothing less.Second, the deviation is really original, because I've never seen a deviation like this The colors are warm, and details (even in the background) are really worked, it's impressive !The background reminds me The Fifth Element, just say'in Also, facials expressions are nice and well-made One of your greatest deviations, I think, you're improving day after day !

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Is that a knife in Miranda's right hand? Or is that supposed to be a datapad?This looks cool, Jack and Miranda are very well done.The only criticism I have is that the pillow has some unnaturally straight lines and sharp angles.

This is a very sweet interpretation of a budding romance between these two characters. I like it! Liking that you also went to the effort of finding some kind of window view to do with it - it adds to the authentic feel of it.

On the off chance you say yes, I'm going to ask if it would be OK for me to upload this picture of yours into the albums of a Facebook page I admin called Mass Effect Female Shepard. It's a page run by Miranda (in my head) so that means lots of science (key topics are genetics, anti-agapics and all things space related), a bit of fashion (particularly Yvonne Strahovski), items relating to Mass Effect and Miranda of course and her accent's homeland of Australia. If I added your picture I'd include reference to you as artist and a link to your original here in the photo's caption. What say you?

Awesome image, only real critique I have is that gravity would have Jack headbutting Miranda at that point. She's leaning a bit too far forward, centre of gravity and all that.Other than that I love the pic, slide one of Jacks legs slightly forward to support her weight and the "problem" is solved.

I have to tell you that I'm not a big fan of "Jack x Miranda" deviations (You know that I prefer MaleShep x Miranda ),But I have to confess that this deviations, is one of the best "Jack x Miranda" I've ever seen Again, Great Job, I love it