Needs a reference. I know a lot of people know what Sailor Moon is, but there's probably still some who don't. It's really overdone, though so you should be a bit more creative with it, and the hair is a bit off, but it's pretty good still.

Yeah hair is off, you need the angelic lace for the V-effect, nice use of the bubble layers, could use arm mods or something, and yeah as I tell everyone who do popular anime character recreate a SCENE! Don't just cosplay and be done with it. Bring the avatar to life. So overall 2/5.

No Ref. The hair is wrong. Use Rejected Olympics shirt with the Angelic Lace bustier instead of the cheap unacurate look of the Serafuku. You can use the Lovely Genie vest for her collar or oine of the Serafuku collars, it layers under the Angelic Lace ;D