danm I comploment you on something and it goes to your head like al of as sudden you know everything and can tell some one if they are using paint even f they are not (by the way stop being so bitchy all the time)

The first one was too blurry so I'll give it a 6. Try using SHARPEN in Filters after you have your final outcome. Gives it more depth and awesomeness. The second one is too lightened. Try lowering the gamma and adjusting the color levels a bit ^_^