Wow!! What a great premise for a fic!! I love that the 2 couples to almost end, and then end, the curse were the Potters! That was so sweet, having both of the Potters propose on Halloween!I did think that the dialogue was a little...corny. James and Harry both sounded way too eloquent. You sort of used the same type of dialogue throughout the fic, and while it was sort of stinted-sounding for the Potters, it worked very well for Nicholas and his crew.

Reviewer: Sam

Date: 2003-07-01

Reviewid: 39211

Chapter: 1

this was the best (and most beautiful) fanfic i ever read!!this reminds me a lot of the Patrick Swayze movie, Ghost.