The Imperials are advancing quickly upon Luke Skywalker and his friends

About this creation

After a small rebel outpost is lost to the Imperials, Luke Skywalker retreats to one of the rebels' main bases. Unfortuantely, the Imperials know the location of the base, and are planning an assualt on it. However, the base has a shield that would deflect and long range blasts. So Elite Commander Martin and Boba Fett are to infiltrate the base and destroy the shield...

Luke discusses the situation with his commander

Luke "What is the progress of the Imperial armor?"

Commander "They seemed to have halted, bu they may pose a threat. I recommend that the princess leaves immediately"

Luke "Rogue leader, I want you to take your best fighter wing along with the falcon"
Rogue leader "Very well, commander"

(rogue leader leaves with one of his fellow pilots. Leia comes up to Luke)

Leia "Goodbye Luke, I hope I get to see you again"
Luke "Don't worry about me, I can look out for myself"

(They kiss)

(Leia and company leaves)
Luke "No R2 you're staying with me"

(Luke watches the Millennium Falcon leave with it's fighter escorts)

Luke "I want you guys to take down those TIEs"
rebel pilot "very well Luke"

(Elite Commander Martin has mounted his blaster cannon on an AT-AT)
Kayno "Take out that spotter. It gives the rebels a superior vantage point"
Martin "As you wish, my lord"

(Martin carefully takes aim and fires his cannon)

The rebel spotter is eliminated
Martin "Right on target sir"

Luke "Status report commander"
Commander "it seems we have lost out spotter"
Luke "The Imperials are becoming more and more of a threat"

Martin "This bounty hunter and I will take care of the shield generator. When you get the transmission, I want you to order your men to charge. You're in commander now Neo"

(Martin and Boba Fett walk to their speeders)

(The speeders take off)

(While all the attention was directed to the TIEs, the speeders were able to easily escape notice)

The speeders land outside the rebel base

Martin "Come on bounty hunter"

They peek around the corner and see Luke walking into another corridor
Martin "Now Boba"

Love your commander Neo. Great comic. P.S. I started up my Caching up with the storm again. I'm up to pt 13 now.

I like it

commander sidewinder

July 30, 2010

Excellent, but I, am also today very, "Heavy critic-ish" today. First off, I used to do the same thing too, make a base and then take pictures of the inside for comics. A word of advice, make some of the walls removable, or just make the sets by themselves. Second, I didn't know that we have carpet planets, seriously, try to make a background, even a simple sheet like what Jason Corlett does goes a long way to make things seem, "more professional". The Colors! My EYES!!!!! Oh my god! It looked like someone puked up a rainbow! dude, you have to try to make the colors match better, or do some color combinations that look good, some useful combinations are Grey- and any other color, Black- and any other color, White-Yellow, Green-Yellow. Your dialogue could be helped too, whenever you use a different character to speak, start a new paragraph, and use quote marks, " ", ( ), - _ , and check your spelling and punctuation , !, ., ?, . Follow these tips, and your comics will improve 3000% (results may vary).
P.S. The tips were made to help you, so please don't take these in a bad way, thanks, be back for more soon! ( 5/5)

Very nice comic here- nice to see imperial era-stuff for a while- but i am so critic today (sorry) that i have to give only 4 - i spotted two probs with a plot-
first one is that There seems to be Character named 'Darth Kayno'- is this taking place still when the Emperor lives? (rebels being rebels not a New Republic hints that way)- so if he is a dark jedi or assassin working for the empire- he shouldn't use the Darth-prefix- "Only two of them there are" so only two Darths but their apprentices and hands and assassins whatever are not allowed to use Darth- before they became a true sith (Like Starkiller or Ventress- no Darth's there)
So if he is working with the empire he cannot be selfproclaimed Dark lord- is there a back story for him?
and another prob: Why Luke has delta7?- where he have get that in movies he do have X-wing and delta-7 is so old model-
Here is a possible explanation for that though:
in a game Rebel Strike -Wedge finds one delta-7 from Geonosis and takes it back to Home one- so maybe he borrowed it to Luke- he is "the jedi" after all XD... so only one prob- well good anyway

Great comic! Lots of action, along with some interfamilial kissing... Also, It's nice to see the imperials winning a battle for once, although I'm guessing this is why it's called the Empire Strikes Back =)