Hello everybody
everywhere, I could be doing something else right now but this seems
fun. I'm writing a story to my favorite RPG of all time KOTOR. This
is a sequel but with an odd plot twist not to mention many other plot
twist. I dedicate the first few chapters to my friends. Okay here is
my first chapter to my KOTOR story Twilight Dreams,

The ending
continued, Space pirates

As the young Republic
hero stood facing all of his friends, everything was going well,
being Darth Revan and all. David Alister was high on life, surviving
the attack on the star forge, saving Jolee from Bastila, and he is
now the republic's hero. As he enjoyed the moment the leader of the
Jedi council directed them to look at the star forge. He pointed up
but all you could see was a little speck then a large green flash.
After many months of hardships, it was gone the Star Forge was
nothing but a pile of rubble in the sky. In about three seconds a
large white beam swooped down from the sky like lighting. It
swallowed Carth and David and they vanished up to the sky. His head
was spinning on his shoulders and Carth was no where to be found. He
stumbled out of his pod looked around and was stunned; the ship was
very advanced and was not made by any race he knew. Who wanted him,
why did they want him and where was he. He felt as if he was still
dreaming as if he was to wake up from it any second, but the sad
truth was he was not going to wake up. He did know that he was going
to get answers, and he was going to get them soon, he hoped. He
walked around the large ship trying to find some answers but all he
found were locked doors many looked doors. Whoever captured him did
not want him to leave anytime soon. The metal hall became his prison
and soon would be his grave if he didn't get out soon.

Once
the master of Sith Lords then went to an apprentice and back to the
lord of all Sith. As all bowed down to the young girl she withdrew
her red lightsaber and called out her new apprentice, Bastila for one
final fight to really see who really was the strongest female of the
Sith.

"If
that is what you want Dark Lord Revan." Bastila bowed to her. She
withdrew her yellow double-sided lightsaber. The two lightsabers
collided with a sharp screech that echoed through the Star Forge.
Darth Revan casted force storm and thousands of volts of electricity
ran through Bastiala's body and she fell over limp, dead, no life
force for Darth Revan to feed off of. The Star Forge was a weapon of
great power but was only so by draining the power of others and
turned them to the dark side. Arial Herly is a great example of the
taint of the dark side. Once the feared ruler of the universe called
Darth Revan, but on an attack of the Endier Spire she was captured
and brainwashed by the Jedi. After finding the power she once had she
now rules the world with the force and the name Darth Revan.

"HK,
get over here now." Arial yelled over to the robot.

"Commentary,
HK is ready to serve Meat… oh I mean master." HK bowed over to
his master.

"Would
you care to eliminate the unworthy ones here HK?" Revan asked in a
devilish voice.

"Reply,
Yes master I will eliminate the unworthy meatbags, I love to hear
them scream." HK said as he took out his dual blaster pistols and
gunned down eight of the standing Sith foot soldiers. Some tried to
resist but the robot had no compassion and killed them all. The only
ones left standing were dark Jedi and apprentices of the dark Jedi.
After the death of all the foot soldiers she realized what she did in
killing Bastila, she had set up the republic fleets up to destroy the
factory.

"HK,
follow me to the shipyard." Arial called over to the robot as she
ran down the stairwell and came to a few Jedis with red and yellow
lightsabers. They all apparently were waiting for her, a suicide
mission by these brave republic soldiers to insure that doesn't
escape the Star Forge. That was pretty stupid considering that she
was the strongest Jedi in the universe.

"Stop
there Revan, you will now die for your crimes against the republic
and Jedi kind alike." The leader of the pack threatened her.

"Funny
thing is, your going to die first, HK." She called over to the
robot as they began to charge the Jedi pack. Arial swung her red
lightsaber and struck down a Jedi cloaked in red robes. She then
looked over to her left and saw HK lying there motionless sparks
coming out of his chest. She turned fiercely to her left and impaled
the Jedi that killed HK in the heart. There was a faint scream of
pain then she looked over to the pack of the group, he was trembling
with his hand over his shoulder with what looked like a blaster shot
wound. She then lifted the Jedi with her mind and crushed him. Arial
then lifted HK and ran towards the Ebon Hawk but before she could
even enter there was a loud "Bang!" and a flash of light, It was
over, everything she worked for was now gone, or what she thought.

New
Tarris cantina, 6:05 P.M one hundred years after KOTOR,

"So, can you play
Pazzak?" A tall man asked the droid in front of him.

"Answer, affirmative,
unit HK 49 is fully capable of playing the game humans call
"Pazzak"." HK 49 answered his friend Brutes, a muscular man
that always is in the mood for a drink.

"would you care…"
Brutes tried to ask HK 49 but HK was already shuffling the deck. He
than spat two cards in front of them.

"One hundred credits
says I can defeat you in a match." Brutes challenged the droid.

"Response, sure why
not." They both drew their cards and examined each other.

"I will hold."
Brutes said with a smile.

"I will not draw
either." HK answered.

" Crap, how did you
know?" He flipped over his two cards, a ten and a twelve. HK then
flipped his over and had a seventeen. Then a tall woman with long
brown hair came in and yelled at them, "Did I tell you guys to play
Pazak as I dig in the desert looking for that stupid piece of gold?"
All the other people in the Cantina looked over to them and started
to talk among themselves.

"Sorry, we um…
forgot." Brutes said cowering at her furry.

"FORGOT!"
She screamed.

"Statement,
Negative, he fully left you on purpose, you told me to check up on
him so this is where I found him and he owes me one hundred credits I
do believe." HK informed his master. See Jessica isn't exactly
the nicest person in the galaxy, if there was space pirate that you
did not want to mess with it was Jessica. Slave driving maniac that
loves the chase of large ships and robbing them of their gold. She
was about to beat Brutes down when a young lady came in with very
ragged clothes and yelled, "Someone please save my mommy and daddy,
they were captured by the sand people, someone please help!"

"Boys we got
ourselves a job." Jessica smirked as she cracked her knuckles. They
all got up and exited the building holding blaster rifles and swords,
they knew that they were getting close to whatever was on this planet
and they weren't leaving until they found it. As they excited the
building something odd happened, Jessica's head hurt and she
blacked out.

"Follow us, we
shall rule everything, just give me the relic." An exiled old
man hooded in black held out his hand, but there was no reaction.
"Fine if it is that way." The sound of a lightsaber
colliding with another one veered in a large metal room with many
doors, many many doors. The room was practically was a maze. She then
woke up in a hospital bed.

"Where… where am
I?" She asked shaking as if were twelve degrees in the room. The
cryptic voice echoed through her mind and the large room with a lot
of doors still haunted her. HK 49 was there watching her in a scary
fashion, as if he knew she was thinking about the dream.

"Question, Master
are you okay?" The concerned droid asked.

"Fine, where is
Brutes?" Jessica asked in a little bit of nervous tone.

"Statement, He left
to fight the sand people for that little girl." HK replied.

"Yes, yes, very well
HK you may leave." Jessica replied.

"To where?" HK

"To the ship why?"
Asked Jessica.

"Very well."
Replied HK.

Jessica sat for along
time trying to analyze her dream, who was that, where was she, and
most importantly, who's eyes was she seeing through. She sat and
pondered on that subject for about thirty minutes until she realized
that this was a silly dream. She decided not to concern herself with
it and left.

Brutes sat there
behind the curtain waiting for some poor sand person to walk by. He
heard footsteps and he drew his sword and pounced. He slashed him
once in the back and he was dead. Brutes lifted him and switched his
armor to sand people's clothes. He told the girl to stay in the box
she was in until he came back. Some how brutes knew how to speak a
lot of alien tongues and sand person was his favorite. He walked into
the dimly light prison chamber were he told the guard to let these
two go for they didn't do anything wrong. Unforcently he once said
one wrong word and confused wrong with right. The guard then figured
out that he was a spy and attacked Brutes landed a swift kick to the
chin and knocked him out. I dragged his body to an unlighted corner
of the prison and freed the two parents. I told them to keep low as I
checked the way out. It was clear and we started on our path to
freedom but we ran into a little problem, twelve guards. Luckily He
had a plasma grenade and let it fly towards them. Before they could
draw their weapons he grandee exploded. They safely escaped out the
door and looked around happily but the mother.

"Where's my
daughter?" The mother asked.

"Holy…" A smoke
grandee erupted and the daughter emerged with a large sack of credits
and about sixty guards. Brutes chucked a CyBoragn grenade and froze
all the guards. They all ran back to town without a word, the hot
sand reflected the scorching sun and they all became weary by the
time they reached the town.

"Mommy, I want to
join." The girl begged her mother. She was short and was only
fifteen but showed exceptional stealth and leadership when it came to
crunch time.

"If that is what you
really want you will have to ask the pirates." The mother asked
with a tear in her eye. Jessica discussed the subject for about
thirteen seconds and looked over to her and echoed "No!" The girl
seemed to really want to join but they had a plan to have her do the
dirty work.

"If you really want
to be apart of our group, if you find a piece of gold in the east
desert you can join." Brutes said very happy that he wasn't doing
any work.

"You mean this
thing?" she pulled a piece of gold out of her pocket. They both
looked at each other and then told her to follow them. As the came
closer to their ship Jessica realized she had no clue who this girl
was. She turned around to the see the girl pick pocketing a citizen
and came back with a wallet full of credits.

"I'm already
starting to like this chick." Jessica said to Brutes.

"I forgot to mention
something." as they reached the shipping dock Brutes told Jessica.
"remember the guard that told us to pay later because we didn't
have enough?"

"You must be pretty
lousy pirates if you couldn't afford the docking fee, that's
pocket money for me." The girl added.

"First off it is not
to late for me to tell you to go home, what's your name, why do you
wear raggedy clothes, and why don't you SHUT UP?" Jessica
questioned the girl angrily, but it was true, they may be the worst
pirates to ever try to travel the galaxy.

"UMHM!" Brutes
coughed to get everyone's attention.

"What is it Brutes?"
Jessica asked still not yet regained composer.

"We don't have a
ship or any supplies." Brutes told everyone. There was a long
silence followed by the sound of a communicator.

"My name is Shara
Fablou of the Fabolu family, I stand 5'6 weigh one twenty, age
fifteen and I am white with red hair." Shara told them with a smirk
on her face.

"I really could care
less what you like, I just wanted to know your freaking name,"
Jessica said with her head in her hands, "Is that so much to ask
for, or are you always this ignorant?" Just then their ship landed
and the driver paid the fee and gave Shara the keys.

"See I told you that
I would be useful." Shara smiled. It was true no matter Jessica
wanted to hate her, she was just too important.

"Girls, where is
HK?" Brutes asked in a concerned voice.

"Crap that's why
he asked where to go when I told him to leave." Jessica kicked the
ground.

"You told him to
leave?" Brutes looked offended.

"No I meant for him
to leave my hospital wing." Jessica replied. "He must have gone
to the place where they impound the ships, where's that?" Jessica
asked.

"I know," Shara
sounded excited "It is past the desert swoop racing center and next
to the hunter's building."

"Well aren't we
the informed one." Brutes sounded impressed.

"Only one person can
get through the security system, and that's me." Shara announced.

"Good, because you
were going to do it anyway." Jessica smirked.

End of chapter one, did
you like it please tell me if you did, flames are welcomed. Also
please only G reviews. If you would like to be a character please
tell me in your review but you won't be a main character because I
already have them thought up and the main story is already written on
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Until next time, "May the force be with you and your Xbox."

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