I didn’t get that Felicity was directing him, instead more just giving him a look. Nevertheless, I think it worked, and it’s so funny. One of my favorite pages in a long time; it made me seriously laugh.

i thought she was just tilting her head in diff. directions pretending that she’s giving him hints while smirking… and he would adjust his pointing depending on which way she was tilting… close enough i guess… except it was head tilt instead of head shake =3

I thought it was rather plain that that’s what was happening. Besides, the three Felicity panels stacked on top of each other, with her facing one way, then the next, does a pretty good job of implying a shaking ‘no’ movement. That whole scene worked fine for me.

Of course, having eliminated three directions, Alex could have worked out the real one, but I guess his dignity was already shattered, by then…

I get the effect you were going for when I look at each column (Alex and Felicity) separately, just looking at the drawings top to bottom and ignoring the words. I find most comics take a few read-throughs to fully appreciate, so this is no different.

I got it right away! That really made me laugh at the way poor Alex was trying to make it look like he knew where he was going when he so clearly had no clue! XD I hope Felicity will teach him how to tell directions in Dreamland sometime. 🙂

At first I thought it was a bit like an expectant tilt of the head, sort of a mockingly waiting for a correct answer.. Buuut I am happy You didn’t use the blur-shake effect, it usually makes a picture look too busy, especially when there are sooo many details around.

Don’t change it. Felicity is starting to flesh-out nicely as a character. And to those that are afraid that Felicity is “hitting” on Alex: I don’t think so. My BFF does the same “mock-flirting to me, and she’s been married for years. She basically sees me as the big, goofy brother she never had. Same goes for Felicity, me thinks. She just loves him to bits, especially because Alex was the one to get her out of her coma and connect her with her youth-friend again (I still tear-up a bit looking at those famous pages.)

I think there’s more than one way to get the essence of this page across. You could have also had her giving him that all knowing feline stare with arms crossed each time he spoke. In any event, the way you chose works great so that’s all that matters. Good work, Scott!

I got a similar impression as JurgenS. I didn’t notice the head-shake, but between her expression and the position of her head, it’s still pretty clear that she’s going ‘Nooope, try again!’ to me.

On the note of the ‘kids comics,’ well… it’s hard to read them because the pages seem to be shrunk, quite a bit. In my opinion, that makes it hard to really ‘taste the free sample’ and see if I like it because it’s harder to tell what’s going on. :/

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LOL! It worked really well, Scott. Although, I followed his arm and didn’t even notice felicity shaking her head =P I was too busy laughing. (p.s. this is the same megan with the sabrielofvagabond@hotmail.com e-mail except I stopped using hotmail =x )

I had no problem interpreting the situation. Although it occurred to me that the art (awesome as it is) leaves it open to interpretation.

I figured she was shaking her head at him… But then I thought it would be even funnier if she was just trying to help him out in the ego department by hinting at the actual direction by turning her head every so slightly…in that “hot” or “cold” manner until he found the direction by himself. LOL

Also… It’s kind of odd to say this… I’m not one of those freaks who likes animals or anything but…

Felicity is HOT in this scene. THAT THERE is the kind of playful demeanor that can definitely get a guy going…if he wasn’t an idiot. LOL

(P.S. I’m married. NO I wasn’t turned on by a cartoon character! Just thought I should clarify before the trolls come out to eat me. LOL!)