Sheena & Stina's Fan Fiction of the Week: 'His... At Long Last'

Welcome to Sheena and Stina's Fan Fiction of the Week. Each week we'll review a piece of Twilight fan fiction, giving you our opinions and rating it on a scale of one to 10 fangs with one fang being a dud and 10 being absolutely dazzling. If you'd like us to review a piece of fan fiction, please send it to us by posting the link here as a comment, and by all means tell us what you think of the stories, too. Enjoy!!

This week's story:His... At Long Last by Alyssa CullenRating: NC-17
Summary: For all of those who read "Breaking Dawn," closed the back cover and said; "Yeah...not what I expected..." This is another version, another ending of the Twilight Saga. Bella and Edward are now married, with certian promises that are expected to be kept. Having met Bella's need and desire for a wedding night, how will Edward deal with issues that pop up along the way? Her transforation? Worse, her newborn state?.

STINA SAYS: This fic was mentioned in the Twi Fans After Dark group by Zhaan, and I am so glad I saw the post. There is a lot of drama in this one though, so if you like sugary sweet and strictly lust-filled stories this might not be for you. But I kind of like the drama in this story; it adds some depth to the characters. Plus, like always, the smut is very good and very in character.
Stina's racing: 8.5 fangs

SHEENA SAYS: This is a good one that I can't stop reading. The smut is great -- not gonna lie -- and very, very descriptive. And, as Stina says, there's a lot of drama. There's almost too much drama, and at times Bella is a little too whiney and cries too much. However, it's still sweet and steamy, so check it out.
Sheena's rating: 8 fangs