Renesmee Cullen diary-my teenage life the continuation of breaking dawn

This is Reneesme's carlie cullen diary, the daughter of Edward and Bella, it's my point of view to the life after" breaking dawn". It describes her teenage life, her first love and everything a usuall teen goes through, even better ;)

I love the story line and every thing, I think its great but sorry to say but the grammar can be quite terrible at times, I'm not trying to be mean I still love the story its just the sentences don't make sense because of the grammar.

Hey guys, I really like this story, I was also wondering if you could maybe check out mine? Titles "running against the wind" it's a fanfiction about Renesemee and Jacob and the hardships they face, I know it's a long shot but it you have some time please stop by, thanks so much, Alexa