Baise you're lines are pretty shakey, and the A looks really tall and skinny compared to the S and E. i think you should spend a while just throwing this shit on paper over and over again. it's an alright start i guess but needs a ton of work.

cheers MTK, it's a little sloppy. i don't like the E either. been trying shit out with an upper case E that i think i can work with. i think the lower case one like in that pink one is a bit fat looking.