Hoped that there would be an awesome summon fight. Oh well. I like the Orochi-Kisame fight. He would've won if not for Itachi. Though now I'm wondering what plans he has for Sasuke and wanting to increase his hate over him. I'm glad that Naruto's better. But now I'm wondering who that slave is at the end. Muta?

Nice chapter. I like how Tsunade spent all Shizune's winnings. That was sad hehe. I also like that Orochimaru challenged Tsunade in a game of chance. Hope that Naruto gets better soon, and I'm thinking the item Haku would get is Zabuza's sword.

In chapter 10, you accidentally changed Tazuna's name to Inari (his grandson). Just letting you know just I case you want to update it. Confused me for a second, I thought you skipped until they reached the Wave Country.

Muta is a coward for attacking from behind. The guy pisses me off. Sasuke's a way better rival than him. Now i'm wobdering what's going to happen next. Will it follow the canon with the search for tsunade arc? Hopefully naruto recovers. Anyways, i like the way you wrote the multiple battles taking place around konaha. It's awesome :)

Wow! That fight was really intense. My favorite part was when Naruto was about to give up, but then suddenly found strength in Tayuya's voice. I think out of all the six OCs here I like Yujo the most. The least I think is Keiji, Muta, and the guy Haku fought in the preliminaries. But anyways, really awesome chapter!

Awesome match! I especially like the last part where Tayuya threatened Temari. And about Naruto asking her out on a date, where did that come from? Even though I'm happy with that, I though you said Naruto wasn't imterested in those things yet as he's still 12.