Yoda wrote:Cool Idea. Infact you should just right a novel.!!! I would love it!.

That's actually what this story's supposed to be. So far, what you've read has only been the first part of the larger story.

Mara-Jade781 wrote:well, I know some good publishers (maul passed through a phase where he wrote a book and sent it to publishers) if you need a list, majority will want the finished product and a go ahead from Lucas.

I'll take you up on that offer one day, thank you Mara. I'll want to finish the story first though. But, I'll come straight to you once it is.

______________________________________________________________________________________________"I am the leader of the most powerful droid army the galaxy has ever seen!"-General Grievous

Ok, I redid the last section of Chapter six. If you want me to post it, just let me know, but for right now I won't unless you want me to. It's nothing major, just a few sentences here and there, or minus a few bad ones.

______________________________________________________________________________________________"I am the leader of the most powerful droid army the galaxy has ever seen!"-General Grievous

Actually, only one bounty hunter will be in it-Cad Bane. I just couldn't resist putting him in my story. In fact, his part is rather vital in it too, so he's not like Bossk was in the Bobe Fett arc, with almost nothing to do except say a good line here or there. He's gonna get some action!

______________________________________________________________________________________________"I am the leader of the most powerful droid army the galaxy has ever seen!"-General Grievous