I have a mouth directly linked to my thoughts which sometime doesn't make me very popular. I don't sugar coat my comments or reviews because if I'm not helping you then i'm wasting both our times.Sarcasm is my second language, or first depending how you look at it. I'm currently six ft under because you can get better wifi, who would've known?

I've completed one book and that is called Removing the Mask.

Ladies and Gentlemen, skinny and stout,I'll tell you a tale I know nothing about; The Admission is free, so pay at the door, Now pull up a chair and sit on the floor. One bright day in the middle of the night, Two dead boys got up to fight; Back to back they faced each other, Drew their swords and shot each other. A blind man came to watch fair play, A mute man came to shout 'Horray! ' A deaf policeman heard the noise and Came to stop those two dead boys.He lived on the corner in the middle of the block,In a two-story house on a vacant lot; A man with no legs came walking by, and kicked the lawman in his thigh. He crashed through a wall without making a sound, into a dry creek bed and suddenly drowned; The long black hearse came to cart him away, But he ran for his life and is still gone today. I watched from the corner of the big round table, The only eyewitness to facts of my fable; But if you doubt my lies are true, Just ask the blind man, he saw it too - I did not write this poem, I thought some might enjoy it. I certainly do.

mumbled "Writing partner? "

I haven't been on Movellas in who knows how long and the reason i have come back on it because i have started writing again, but I'd love to have a partner of sorts to write with and i don't mean a co-author i just mean someone to read it and tell me what they think and of course i would do the same for them 100%. You guys should remember that i don't do half hearted critiques.

I've just skimmed it and i'm getting a very good vibe from this, though you do really need to reword some bit and meat it up just a little. The description needs a bit of tweaking too, but the idea is really good i would definitely pick this up off the shelve in a book store and buy it. KEEP WORKING ON IT! :D

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Based on real events, all characters are fictional. Except the Springbok Rugby players.
It's 1981, the Springbok Tour of New Zealand is happening. Despite many protests against it. Seen through the...