Monday, August 11, 2008

New Toy - It Works

Well sort of, I wrote about a dozen pages of the book yesterday, but, I had read through the 135 pages of the first re-write I had done and then decided to ditch about 30 pages so overall I have less novel than I started with.

I am happier with the new section though, the barbarians have gone, the weird nun powered spaceship thingy has gone, in their place come the Var, plant creatures who lay eggs into underground Birthing Gourds, and the tappers that come to unwittingly steal their amniotic fluid.