for me the bottom branch is a bit too long, it makes the tree appear lop sided and unbalanced. I think for the tree to be really good the branches on the biggest trunk could be bigger/longer than the branches coming from the little trunk, this would be the most convincing natural image for the tree.

I like what I see, and I consider these shubs to be one of the most stiff [ of trunk ] plants in nature's kingdom.My only comment would be, try softening the triangle of the outline, it's a little sharp.Best to you.Khaimraj

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