I forgot to tell you before, but in the chapter where Harry was first penetreted by Innadrue you forgot to let him fully penetrete him. You said he put only a quartar of it in and - puff! - the next paragrah you stated he was deep within Harry.

I mean I just assumed he went full in somewhere in-between the quarter and the "deep within", but well, you never said he did. It's kind of like you left a part out.

I just thought remembered, you mentioned Umbridge before...so, how is it that Innadrue never saw the writing on the back of Harry's hand? After all the words "I shall not lie." are something, that shouldn't have gone unnoticed in his naked state.

Please tell me he finds it out later! I mean about Harry being in 'detention' with Umbridge. Oh and why didn't dumbledore ask Harry to come to his office for privat lessons? And what with Snape and Occlumency?

Oh wow I'm loving this story and I was wondering if you were ever going to finish it. I'm desperately wanting to know what happened to Ron and what Innadrue has to say about those dreams and explanation he's going to give Harry. Please finish or direct me to a site as to where you have already finished this and just haven't updated it on