Why is it Lumina instead of Serah? You didn't even put her in, even when Lumina said to call her other sister. Oh and Vanille is just too amusing and interesting. I like how you make her like that. Very intriguing.

Judging by how it ended, i suppose there'll be another chapter for this? I hope so. I want to see how Fang's doing. Poor dragons xD i hope they don't lose their fire too.

YOU'RE BACK! you don't know how happy I am when i see this fic updated on my e-mail. as always, you're stories always put me on a happy mood again. so please! update you're other stories!, and welcome back! :)

I've read pretty much EVERYTHING yove posted and this chapter is what i keep coming back to. I'll admit it, i love it. To know that Avaria would give up so much for her sister...damn. just damn. But please...keep writing.