i just noticed that you get a whole assload of reviews for each poem, so i looked at them actually this time and noticed that most dont actually go over two lines, rarely there's three, and a lot of times people are advertising thier own poetry...i dont know, i find that odd...random observation...ok, so i just filled up this review with something you probably already know and dont care about...WAH

anywayz, THE POEMi love the ending to this one, definitely makes a statement and i love the tone of voice this one takes, i dont know, struck me really strong, again, very well written, muchly enjoyed, nicely done

Adore the "so stop chewing on your tongue line." Your use of colour descriptions is lovely, very nice work, tho the ending has been done before and could have packed a bigger punch, in my opinion.-jess

All of your work is so BEAUTIFUL. I'm in awe of you. I know, it's kind of weird reading someone gushing about you; but boy, it's true. You have some t-a-l-e-n-t for poetry. I look foward to your other works in great anticipation!

This is so sad, but beautifully written, and haunting as well. I don't think that there's much to say about this poem, because it's just wonderfully done, and I think that it has effectively left it's mark on me and several of your readers. Well done as always, and I'm glad to see that you've done lots of updates while I've been delaying. This is simply wonderful, and don't ever stop writing.