Forsaken ll

Below is the poem entitled Forsaken ll which was written by poet
john aaron
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Forsaken ll

I am restored,
nothing more to break.
Even through my division,
nothing more to move.
As I rise, through the ashes,
this whole world must fade.
For these are the words i cry.
I will take back,
all that is mine.
My passion will be my bond,
no more will I live in flesh.
I will be forever faithful,
with no more fear.
No more wasted days,
and I will not be
forsaken.

It is wonderful when I can see the deeper meaning in someone's poem and what you touch on speaks to me in that deeper sense. You always prod lightly with strong message and that is a gift John - have a wonder filled Christmas and inspiration filled New Year dear friend. Love, Elizabeth

Dear John, first i must ask how are you? Good I hope.... about your poem: I love the powerful thought, and WILL of words. You have a very graceful way to precept life and its future... Forsaken is for the weak... had to read this one 5 times.... truly enjoyed,..p.d.

Howdy, JA....I like the spirit of resolution at the beginning of your poem...then you narrow your focus to reclaim your prize...tunnel vision is a powerful weapon in battle..so many get distracted and lose their focus only to be weakened for the fight. No more wasted days....YOU will NOT be FORSAKEN! I say Roses and Sparking grape juice for her tonite!! lol. Much enjoyed this victorious write!

I enjoyed reading your poetry today John Aaron. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I am going to see if I can write something for a couple contests this weekend. Hope you find the inspiration to do the same. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol

Won't it be wonderful when the flesh with all its weakness is done away with. The spirit body will indeed, never waste days. So beautifully you bring these truths in such gentle ways. I alway feel like I'm being led by your words instead of pushed. Hugs to you John and I'm so grateful for your encouragement. Love, Elizabeth