esmer don't listen to those numb skulls { hay guys ever hear of angel and point of view?} to be frank I have seen a lot of fan art for mei-ling Zhou and this captuers her better then the horny teanage remakes

I think the lines could've been smoother, the colors and shading on the top looks a bit flat, and I agree with the guy before me when he says that one boob looks bigger than the other.
Despite all that, I think that this is a nice drawing and I look forward to seeing what you have in store for the future!