Umm yeah your profile message is weird. Naruto = just a anime. Pixelated characters....not fun to has pixels as a wife. :) So back to your song. I guess good piano playing. I think you put too much sustain on some of the notes. I hear someone talking in the background. LOL. Is that your sister or mom talking? Your mic kinda sucks. Lots of fuzz. You will need to buy a better one. Short song, and the composition doesn't seem that hard to me. So overall you get a 5/5 vote and a 9/10 review because this is your first song. I'm always nice on a 1st anything. Bye for now and enjoy making more music.