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Review:

Aiedail says:hi there! sorry it took me so long to get the review in--my parents were hollering for me to come eat dinner (they do this when i come home :P )!

firstly, your style of writing is really refreshing. you have a certain way with sentences that i can't really label, but you make them powerful while still encouraging me to take them seriously. i have a bad, bad habit of wanting to roll my eyes at snape/lily fics, but i actually (*gasp*) felt sympathy for snape here! i think because you showed that he actually knew what a jerk he'd been, too...that helped me :)
songfics are admittedly another pet peeve but you did your song justice! i like the weight that you gave to her name; that snape was thoughtful, not so full of malice, etc. he was human, not just snape.
that being said, no glaring grammatical/spelling/diction issues either! yayy!
really well done, i congratulate you!
--lily

Author's Response: Don't worry a bit about it! ^^

Your review was lovely, thank you so much for it. ^^ I'm glad you felt bad for Snape, I was hoping to get that emotion! I'm not usually a huge songfc person either, but I love Maroon 5 and so had to enter the challenge. ^^