1. Some of the Territory names such as Mosman, Manly, Woy Woy go over the outline. Remove the outline under the names for an easier read.2. The outer glow around the text in the legend and mini-map. I don't think it is really needed considering that the background is a light enough color. You can either remove the outer glow or tone it down a couple of notches.3. The out glow around the text in the landmark areas, I think you can remove the glow all together.4. The cross walks on the small look good, but on the large they are all messed up. Probably from enlarging them.5. There is what looks like a smudge here down by Jamison Valley:

isaiah40 wrote:A few things:1. Some of the Territory names such as Mosman, Manly, Woy Woy go over the outline. Remove the outline under the names for an easier read.

Done.

2. The outer glow around the text in the legend and mini-map. I don't think it is really needed considering that the background is a light enough color. You can either remove the outer glow or tone it down a couple of notches.

Removing it altogether around the outer names is not an option, otherwise it would be too(notice the spelling - not you, but others) dark to read. But i have reduced the opacity of the PS effect from 75% to 55%.Done.

3. The out glow around the text in the landmark areas, I think you can remove the glow all together.

Done.

4. The cross walks on the small look good, but on the large they are all messed up. Probably from enlarging them.

A couple of things:1 - The text size on the small, some of the names are a little hard to read. I believe for the most part that you have room to have a larger size, maybe an increase of one font size?2 - Some of the territory names need to have the kerning adjusted, i.e. Penrith, it looks like Pennth on the large and on the small it is even worse. The names that have a "ri" are really bad. They all look like an "n"3 - On the mini-map, can you place the bonus value beside the word City, and have the line going more to the center of that area?

Please update the color blind test in the OP, with both of the major tests.

3 - On the mini-map, can you place the bonus value beside the word City, and have the line going more to the center of that area?

i prefer it have it where it is as it fits better with the consistency of the others in the mini-map i.e. all on their territories where possible; the only reason northern beaches is off its territory is because it would be too close to the North Shore bonus number and there is very little room on northern beaches for it.

I've mucked around with that bonus area a bit more...moving the northern beaches bonus number onto it's region, and making it clearer.I've also changed the line indicators to white.

isaiah40 wrote:Getting there cairns!!A couple of things:1 - The text size on the small, some of the names are a little hard to read. I believe for the most part that you have room to have a larger size, maybe an increase of one font size?

Done

2 - Some of the territory names need to have the kerning adjusted, i.e. Penrith, it looks like Pennth on the large and on the small it is even worse. The names that have a "ri" are really bad. They all look like an "n"

Done

3 - On the mini-map, can you place the bonus value beside the word City, and have the line going more to the center of that area?Please update the color blind test in the OP, with both of the major tests.

I'm checking the xml, on the whole it seems good, it has passed the validation, the map looks really clean and I have just few minor suggestions:

Small mapI would move these a bit:- Horsley Park, a couple of pixels to left so the 888 doesn't cover the small red light- Austral, the same...- Pimble, again the same thing, but this time move the number down

Large mapSome 888 aren't placed in the best place possible, but maybe it's just me. e.g.Liverpool, austral

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Now, actually I can't think a way to change the next item on the list, but maybe you can.I absolutely dislike campbelltown, the name on the left side and the number on the right, yes I can understand it's the same region but it's very very unclear.In addition, if I try to find an explanation for that (since it's different than in any other palce on the map), i read into the legend Cross to opposite regionsBut it's not in that way. I understand the space is tight there but i don't understand why you need that road there. It's useless, it gives to you only less free space to fill with the other things (name, number). Personally i would get rid of the road.Same thing for katoomba, where you can move the road a bit.About that road, what about cut the road in katoomba within the "map border"? Did you tried? How it looks?

A final note: maybe it's worth to write somewhere that K regions are not part of any bonus/regions since while checking the xml, for few secs i thought you had forgot to include few regions into the file! Anyway it took just few secs to realize how they work, although I wouldn't be surprise if someone will come here to say that K regions look like they are part of the region bonus in which they are contained.

thenobodies80 wrote:A final note: maybe it's worth to write somewhere that K regions are not part of any bonus/regions since while checking the xml, for few secs i thought you had forgot to include few regions into the file! Anyway it took just few secs to realize how they work, although I wouldn't be surprise if someone will come here to say that K regions look like they are part of the region bonus in which they are contained.Nobodies

thenobodies80 wrote:Small mapI would move these a bit:- Horsley Park, a couple of pixels to left so the 888 doesn't cover the small red light- Austral, the same...- Pimble, again the same thing, but this time move the number down

Large mapSome 888 aren't placed in the best place possible, but maybe it's just me. e.g.Liverpool, austral

Done

Now, actually I can't think a way to change the next item on the list, but maybe you can.I absolutely dislike campbelltown, the name on the left side and the number on the right, yes I can understand it's the same region but it's very very unclear.In addition, if I try to find an explanation for that (since it's different than in any other palce on the map), i read into the legend Cross to opposite regionsBut it's not in that way. I understand the space is tight there but i don't understand why you need that road there. It's useless, it gives to you only less free space to fill with the other things (name, number). Personally i would get rid of the road.Same thing for katoomba, where you can move the road a bit.

Actually, i'm not intertest in changing Campbelltown or Katoomba...that would detract from the culture of the map showing that the highways go through those regions.

About that road, what about cut the road in katoomba within the "map border"? Did you tried? How it looks?