This story was amazing! The characters behaviour was written so well that I could actually picture them acting like this in the real manga or anime!

Your language and spelling was also good and I truly enjoyed reading your story right through. It's up-side was that is was short and sweet and got right to the point whereas sometimes the story can get drawn out while the writer gets to the actual point of the story and by that time one could have lost interest. However, you started it off right in the middle of the action and made me immediately curious to read on.

Like I said before, this story is amazing and I really love it. I can't believe it didn't get more reviews! At any rate; excellent work.

Oh, my LORD! How... how did you not tell me about this story? I didn't beta it, did I? *searches memory frantically* No... No, I'm most certain I didn't! :O

This is amazing! I adored it! I LOVED how you described their kiss - it was so passionate, so... FEELING! It was very fast-paced and very quickly introduced, but hopefully that will nut itself out in the later chapters. :)

Also. Did you post the entire story in one go? Wakarimasen. How does it not have any reviews? Hasn't anyone seriously ever reviewed it in all the four chapters of you having posted? That's phenomenal. I can't comprehend it. This story is too... well-written, too encapturing and enthralling to go unnoticed.

Lovely description, excellent characterisation, good grammar/spelling. I find nothing to critiscise in this except for how quickly it happened. Perhaps a tad bit rushed, but, since I'm the biggest R/I fan out there - THE sucker for fluff, no matter the speed XD - that didn't bother me XD

I can't wait to read the next few chapters! I'll review as I go. This story deserves reviews :3