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@ Age
No, I mean the I.S. core aren't working in the first place, but someone is using alternative code to bypass the damaged section.

Remember that I.S. being only pilotable by woman? Yeah, the bug (paraphrased because it's counted as mistake) is located in the same string as that.

Also, the repaired core is less than intelligent, they're the equivalent of Idiot savant. Hence they're much weaker if you compare the spec and perks, but is enough for I.S. Frame to operate normally at 60% Capacity.

They lack unlimited ammo and damage regeneration, and their data adjustment (i.e. evolution) speed is reduced to measly 33%, and worse, all the modification based on that adjustment is have to be done manually or by borrowing the required software form other I.S. (by connecting them)

Character's name Akira Fudo
Gender Male
Looks: 6'7" Very Stoic and Stern Face.
Alignment: Neutral. Hates IS.
Personality: Quiet, Reserved, Violent. Can be kind if approached correctly.
Powers: Uses a skin tight battle suit. It can withstand any IS weaponry (Even 4th generation weaponry) easily, and enhances strength to the point where a single punch can wipe out all of a IS's shield and potentially kill it's user. Also equipped with nanomachines, with the ability to hack into IS's and control it freely, or shut it off. The nanomachines can also be used to regenerate inhuman injuries, or materialize into weapons or objects.
Background: He is a causality conductor, somehow being transferred from a alternative universe. The alternative universe was a universe where Tabane had a vastly differently personality, resulting in IS's used in major global conflicts. Causalities were in the billions. As a result, war technology is vastly ahead then the Original Universe. Fudo is child prodigy, being both a genius and a veteran soldier. He has invented the anti-IS battle suit, and various anti-IS nanomachines. Hates IS's due to the fact that his city was literally killed by them. He was the only survivor due to his technology, and his superior physique.
Anything else you can think of: His personality is somewhat of the male counterpart of Laura, yet much more scary. Goes to the IS academy, just to reminisce about his old friends. Much of the original cast were drafted into the army in his world, and Ichika was one of his closest friends. They all died on the battlefield. Tabane and Chifuyu are the only ones who understands his real origins.

When he is first transferred to the academy, he is disgusted by how pathetic Ichika, Laura, Houki, Cecilia, Charlotte were so different from his original universe. He despises how they live so carefree, as in the original world they were all Soldiers who died fighting proud and strongly under their organizations. He cries in anger, realizing how much more this world was carefree. His anti-IS ideology starts a fight with Rin and Cecilia, which results in him nearly killing them despite them having their IS's deployed. Ichika barely manages to stop him, with Fudo stopping due to the close relationship he had with Ichika in his universe.
"You carefree mother fuckers, you may look the same, but you never will be the comrades I knew. The comrades I knew were proud, strong, and was not immature FUCKS LIKE YOU. They died proudly as soldiers, fighting for their organization. And look at you, living carefree lives in this so academy, you will never understand how I feel. Do you know what it feels like to lose all of your friends, your whole family, within minutes? Do you know the feeling of murder?"
When Chifuyu comes in to lecture him, he sheds some tears. This is due to Chifuyu being one of his military instructors since he was a child in his original universe, the one who shaped him into the person today. She was killed as a POW. Chifuyu is deeply confused to why he is crying. Fudo uses nanomachines to project the memory into Chifuyu, and show his original universe and where he was from. Chifuyu is one of the only people who maintained the same personality in his universe. Chifuyu is in shock and does not know what to say.

Note: I was bored so I mixed up a visual novel and a manga.
If you couldn't guess what is was.

That's why I said "to fall down properly", meaning that training your body so it won't be injured during a Judo fight (which involves a lot of grappling and throwing).

IIRC Rolling and Flipping, if done frequently will cause you to remember how to fall in a proper stance where your body receive very minimal damage (Remember the technique I said about rolling above a speedy car to avoid massive injury? yeah, that actually works IRL)

@ Temper

So a character from another dimension and suddenly stomping characters around before Chifuyu came and suddenly he came into his senses?

Okay then...

EDIT: Ah you forgot about Rin, who unlike Charlotte and Cecilia, is officially a military person...

Hm, another new character for the forums Second character so far to hate the IS. Where did you get the idea for him?

I mixed up several characters.
Akira Fudo from Devilman (This isn't a typical super hero manga. It's actually fairly sad, and the ending is just depressing. Exposes weakness of human nature)
Much of the characters dark, resenting side comes generally from Akira Fudo.

Takeru from Muv-Luv Alternative (Unlike it's name, this is a visual novel that ranks up with Fate/Stay night because it's so damn good)
His patriotic, friendly, soldier like personality and ideologies comes from him.

That's why I said "to fall down properly", meaning that training your body so it won't be injured during a Judo fight (which involves a lot of grappling and throwing).

IIRC Rolling and Flipping, if done frequently will cause you to remember how to fall in a proper stance where your body receive very minimal damage (Remember the technique I said about rolling above a speedy car to avoid massive injury? yeah, that actually works IRL)

@ Temper

So a character from another dimension and suddenly stomping characters around before Chifuyu came and suddenly he came into his senses?

Okay then...

EDIT: Ah you forgot about Rin, who unlike Charlotte and Cecilia, is officially a military person...

Come to his senses? Not really. He stops due to the shock of simply seeing Ichika. They were simply that close, as to the point of brothers. In his original world, Ichika wasn't such as dense idiot. He just feels a need for emotional support, as Chifuyu would be one of the only people to actually understand him. It means a lot to him that their personality stays much of the same.

It's more disturbing then you think when you see all your former comrades who were stern soldiers, now laid-back and cuddly students.

@ Senpai - Looks like I'm gonna have to go to description porn to do this

Side note - Asked a question about CPR earlier

@ gbatemper - Isn't a suit that can beat an IS like that kinda overpowered? There doesn't seem to be any weaknesses at all.

It is overpowered. After all, he comes from a different universe.
His weakness is simply his personality, and other small things.

Also, he doesn't always wear the suit. He materializes it when needed. Attack him when he doesn't react fast enough, and he's dead. The suit is also very straining on his body, multiplying his metabolism when in use. Prolonged use of the suit can result in dehydration, starvation, breakdown of muscle.

You need to remember, this is man who is smart as Tabane, but hates IS's and was born in the midst of war.

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

@ Temper

So the new OC is supposed to be unlikeable. Nice and fresh I'd say, not many people attempting to do so

Generally, yes. He is not understood by pretty much everyone, and as a child soldier much more mature then the other character. He is after all, used to death, and does not fear it.

Can someone take a bath on their own without help if they have something like a cast on them?

Side note - What about due to nearly drowning?

@ gbatemper - I work using similar concepts except the suit's generally very much weaker. Good luck with your fic, rhough.

I generally like characters with these type of personality to be strong. Otherwise it would be simply comedic to see death threats and glares from a man who cannot do it, he wouldn't be threatening or have that deathly aura.

I honestly don't whether I will expand on this. I've never done a fic before so I'm really not sure.