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Review:

NaidatheRavenclaw says:That was a really well written one shot! I was a bit surprised at first, seeing Sirius's name, because I was wondering how you were going to keep that in accordance with canon, but you turned it around really well. The actual wedding part was written beautifully, and I think you captured it well. You had some beautiful descriptions in there as well.

I have to say, I got a bit confused at the end. The time jump was strange and unexpected, and I had to read it twice before I realized what you were talking about. I liked the idea, but maybe a sentence in there to show that they're now in the Department of Mysteries may have helped? Other than that, this was flawless. Excellent job, 10/10!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad I was able to keep in canon to a large degree.

On an edit I think I'll add a sentence or something letting y'all know we're back in the Department of Mysteries.