This is a great story but please refrain from using americanisms such as "Mom" they are from England

Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback! I actually use Americanisms on purpose, given that I am not from England. I know I'd inevitably miss some of their vernacular, and I'd hate to miss the ball half of the time, so I decided to cut my losses. :) Thanks for the review, though!

I really like how James didn't question Lily in her pronouncement of affection for him. In other stories I've read, he scrutinizes her and doesn't believe her and it is so annoying. But yours was much better.

I'd mention where Sirius was going to stay, maybe Remus's 'cause you said the others were going home, but since Sirius lives with James by now he'd need to visit with someone else. just a thought. Otherwise really fun idea!! :D

this was just amazing to read...probably after harry potter ended ..all i could wish for was that the magic should continue..and the marauders and lily-James romance was the only thing that caught my mind!!!.whatever you have written here is amazing.imagining even this much is a wonderful talent..i hope u complete this story and write more..
looking forward to reading more of your works!!!

So yeah. I love this story more by the minute. I kind of wish there was a little Sirius somewhere. Idk letter from him maybe just because I love their bromance and I know you'd write it really well!! Oooo Lily likes James. Heehee, yeah don't we all?

Xoxoxoxo,

Pp123

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your reviews! I just wanted to let you know that Sirius will be showing up next chapter, so not to worry! Thanks again for the feedback--I'm so glad you've enjoyed it thusfar!

Aaah! More chapters please... Just read this in one sitting... Now about to read your other stories...yay. I love how youve developed Lily into super smart and kind of awkward and James is curious and charming.

Aww, the ending to this chapter was so sweet :) I think you've done really well to keep to the characters, it's really realistic. The story line is also really believable-like, this could have really happened in the books. I also think the characterisation of Petunia was done well too, I'm actually quite sad that there are only going to be two more chapters but I suppose you can't really have any more because of the plot. Well done though, I've enjoyed reading it so far

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Characterization is something I do fret about, and so I'm glad they've come across as realistic. I appreciate the feedback greatly, and I'm so pleased you've enjoyed it so far!