Even though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work!

This was a really sweet chapter, I loved it. This was original and unique and very good.

"Sure, if Jason, Marie and I survived this, who would be next? Would I have enough strength to go through the same sequence repeatedly; over and over again?"

This part is kind of in Eclipse too. I know I'm stressing the whole Twilight undertones things but they're there. There is an easy approach to this though. Maybe put in an author's note and the top of the Prologue stating that this story is similar to Twilight, based on Twilight, or written in the same mindset on Twilight but is not at all a fanfiction and that most elements are completely your own.

"Holding open the door of his Porsche"

You never really mentioned the fact that Jason had money, and obviously he does because he has a Porsche...is it yellow?

"Silence came, leaving me incredibly infatuated with Jason."

Jason can read minds right, especially hers, so doesn't he know that she just said that. I mean she's sitting there and thinking it so he must know right?...or...is it that she just mentioned it after everything has already been said and done?

Anyways, I really liked this chapter and I want to know what happens next.

This time I'm reviewing different because nothing too shocking happened.

"The sweet scent of his breath was on my face, and the urge to kiss him grew."

That's a lot like Edward...I'm pretty sure Stephenie Myer has used "The sweet scent of his breath" before in one of the books.

"Taking my face in his hand, he closed his eyes and leaned in, kissing me delicately; like he was afraid to break me."

Now I know this could be used for many different scenarios but again, it's very Edwardish.

"There was Aaron: charming, and smart; Jason: beautiful, gentle, and sensitive. The pieces of my heart twisted together without merge, but almost like they were forced to meet. It was me forcing them together, and I couldn’t help but feel helpless in the situation. How could I still love Aaron after what was happening? Aaron was tearing apart my heart, and then there was Jason trying to put it back together."

This part is a lot like the Bella Edward Jake love traingle

Bella actually said this same thing in Eclipse, "It was me forcing them together"...and then in the end she realizes it was the two different parts of her that belonged to each of them, one of them just had the bigger part.

“Erin?” the familiar velvety voice whispered in my ear."

There's nothing I really need to say about that part, you can understand why I added it