Rated 4.5 / 5 stars2010-10-07 21:21:47

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars2010-10-07 21:08:17

Hah. You have the patience...

This makes your other submission worthless, really. Your drawings are crude, you aren't cleaning them up after you scan them, (or you are taking digital pictures and then uploading them to use... which I recommend right now if you prefer pen and pencil, please invest in a scanner).

While this was ... pretty awful, your mind is in the right place, and you have the patience to even put this together, which is a start in the right direction. Clean your stuff up, use the right tools, and try to put stuff together that doesn't look like a 5 year old drew it, then come back.