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12th Sep 2014, 9:53 PM

// side comments //
Do any of you ever get embarrassed reading old scripts??? maaaaaannnn. i do. not this page necessarily but occasionally I read one line in the odd speech bubble and ---- i wish i could rewrite it - or at least alter the pacing slightly.

But I did say I would not make any major changes so. Next story, next story I'll pace/research/write/understand concepts even better.