3175 is a placeholder. I recognize this item number has already been claimed.

Graphics have not been incorporated yet. This is blatantly apparent with the first tab, the "ACCESS GRANTED" message on the second tab, and the formatting of the last tab. Please forgive the lack of pictures/style for now.

All five tabs are involved for the purpose of this draft. Start with the first one (COORDINATOR TERMINAL ACCESS), and switch to the next tab when you reach text that looks like a link (marked with red).

NOTICE: This article currently sits at 3609 words. BY READING THIS DRAFT, YOU ACKNOWLEDGE THE RISKS OF READING LENGTHY SCP WORKS, INCLUDING BUT NOT LIMITED TO: HEADACHES, SLEEPLESSNESS, SENSORY DEPRIVATION, HUNGER, PHYSICAL FATIGUE,1 RAGE, EXTREME BOREDOM, AND/OR DEATH. BY READING THIS DRAFT, YOU ALSO WAIVE THE LIABILITY OF ENSOPHOS, THE FOUNDATION, AND THE POPE IN THE EVENT THE SHEER VOLUME OF THIS ARTICLE GETS TO YOUR HEAD. This notice is not legally binding.

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I feel like this might be a little overlong for what it is. However, if I'm honest I can't tell exactly what that is myself; it seems like a very beautiful, ultimately very confusing and somewhat overwrought tribute to Hawking, but it also might be a genuine attempt to portray what kinds of effects non-linear travel might have on a psyche - human or otherwise.

I think a potential improvement that could be made is including the table with the chart of events for Earthbound Hawk along with the various interviews. Emphasis on think, because what I think is supposed to be the process is the reader going back and checking each individual timestamp to match it up with the interview. This seems like it's going to be even more unwieldy if this is supposed to be multiple pages.

Pacing really seemed fine. The bulk of the article seems to be in the intervieiws and those really speed by quickly enough. The simplicity of the dialogue helps with that - besides the stage direction bits where I still really don't understand the exactitude of it all - hands moving centimeters and such.

I can't really speak to the scientific bits, but your table formatting was generally easy to read and for an article of such size there were few spag errors. I believe there was just a bolding error of SCP-3175-B, at the bottom of log one.

Overall - it's a really interesting piece. It's nice to see Hawking finally get his day but, if that's the intended sole emotional core of the article, I'm having a really hard time - getting behind that overly. Even if it is the dynamic between Helm, Will and Song is so alien it was enough to keep me hooked.