I think it's a talented piece of work

This is garbage

Maybe if you traced the patterns without care
The runes of your lust would shine, a little more dull
Raise down your hands to the sky
Bring the fire up from heaven
Fatten the sheep for the keeping
Execute the faithful for their loyalty
Are you blinded from opening your eyes?
With every chanted word
You hypertrophy
Open up your soul a little wider
Its not enough for your spirit to seep out
Take the hunger in at the same time
Feed off the void of your bursting mind
Partake of the arcane
Dont you grasp that the slave bidden will deny you?
Etch the misery of your ecstasy into the stars themselves
When the dawn ascends again
Youll have it all
Power exchanged for your smiles and tears

No, I haven't read much modern poetry at all. Besides a few occasional visits to a poetry site over half a year ago and what I've had to read in english, I haven't read any modern poetry(unless you count lyrics...)