So, I also read chapter 2, but I wanted to review on this one, because I really liked where this one had gone. It was a most excellent chapter! I not only liked Yuya's reaction, but Kyo's possessive thoughts as well - those were excellent! Keep up the good work!

eamy chapter 2 . 3/11/2012

whoa! i like your writing style and how the each chapters' story developed, especially the first chapter. Loved Kyo there...nyeheheXD

Please add another chapter. I'm new in this site and there are only very few fics that follow the real story line. You're one of those few so, please...

Ooh I like it, kyo was being very tricky. Hehe I think you did amazing for someone to write a chapter to full in for the MANGA. I could never do that, so props to you. :) I think it could have fit in perfectly anyways

Ooh I like it, kyo was being very tricky. Hehe I think you did amazing for someone to write a chapter to full in for the MANGA. I could never do that, so props to you. :) I think it could have fit in perfectly anyways

I was just randomly going around picking my favorite pairs in other anime/manga and stumbled upon this and I am glad I did! I loved this! Kyo/Yuya is one of my all time favorite pairs! I hope you still are writing, I really like it.

Oh my... Very well written and I loved the way you kept to their personalities so well! So great! As for the initial chapter, I wouldn't have seen that scene going any other way... And chapter two wasn't half bad either. P