My Muses-02-06

My Muses-02-06
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There is only a moment born;
The one that has gone is reborn;
Me the dunce am numbering in vain;
The wheel is wheeling smooth an’ fine!
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Britney Steed

More than 1 year ago

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haiku artist

More than 1 year ago

though my muse left me
long ago, her memory
never ceased to glow

Larry Stallings

More than 1 year ago

humor abounds in verse

Britney Steed

More than 1 year ago

great work awesome message

drkgbalakrishna

More than 1 year ago

good

drkgbalakrishna

More than 1 year ago

good

Suzanne Feldschmied

More than 1 year ago

My takeaway is a simple poem about the cycle of life / death and reincarnation whether it is spiritual or natural (it can be read on both levels). So it is complete and multifaceted. A lovely read. Please review my poem 'UNCOMMITTED COMMITMENT' I would welcome your comments / suggestions. Thank you!

drkgbalakrishna

More than 1 year ago

Sure.

Subrata Ray

More than 1 year ago

Nice .

drkgbalakrishna

More than 1 year ago

good

drkgbalakrishna

More than 1 year ago

good

Ruth Courtney

More than 1 year ago

I like the short ones best

drkgbalakrishna

More than 1 year ago

good

Barbara Cadogan

More than 1 year ago

Liked it.

drkgbalakrishna

More than 1 year ago

good

drkgbalakrishna

More than 1 year ago

good

Dustin Twiggs

More than 1 year ago

what more can I say?

drkgbalakrishna

More than 1 year ago

good

Nick

More than 1 year ago

No clue!

Teresa Rosko

More than 1 year ago

I agree, it really had no direction and was confusing.

Monica Harley

More than 1 year ago

It is okay.

Rose Greedy

More than 1 year ago

It stimulates thought in a spinning way

drkgbalakrishna

More than 1 year ago

good

Wilder Moncada

More than 1 year ago

I feel it is not complete

drkgbalakrishna

More than 1 year ago

good

Nick

More than 1 year ago

good

Emily Converse

More than 1 year ago

I think you should add more to your poem..... to me it feels like its a starting, but other that very good..

drkgbalakrishna

More than 1 year ago

good

Nick

More than 1 year ago

Talk about suppression of freedom of speech.
Welcome to this forum.
Everything I post awaits moderation.
Poetry is not about that, dudes, learn it and get back with me!

Alexander Lim

More than 1 year ago

No beginning and no end - simply a play of words.

Teresa Rosko

More than 1 year ago

Sorry, I dont want to be dishonest, I personally just did not understand the first and the second sentence. I get the point of (if it is the point ) a second chance, perhaps not every first chance is the only first chance? Really not sure. Sorry if I have offended in any way.

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