I always felt bad for all the characters in this situation, however, this version makes me feel especially sorry for Jacob. I'm not sure why it's so much more powerful in Edwards PoV, maybe because the enemy feels bad for him too.

I don't think that I could say that I enjoyed the heartbreak very much. It was interesting and captivating so I give you that. Your AN made you sound evil "enjoy the heartbreak!" (cue evil laugh). I know your not evil but thats the way I read it. Love you and I can't wait until you write more!