I really like your revamp of the good guy '05. The designs are interesting, and I think that it's amazing how pose able you have made him while retaining his original appearance. Also, I followed you advice on toa revenance. He now has custom lower legs. If you can, please provide constructive criticism.
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/320022

Quoting Ben Cossy
Though I'm normally not a big fan of simple MOC's in comics, the great torso design he has, and just how poseable he is, is great! Lovely work man :) Come to think of it though, he could be a lot more simple couldn't he :P Who am I kidding :P

Thanks for the comment, it's good to see you back :)! And yeah, the simplicity is just the legs and arms, I'm still not that good to do good-looking designs there (apart from that I don't have enough connectors :S). But of course I'm trying :P

Though I'm normally not a big fan of simple MOC's in comics, the great torso design he has, and just how poseable he is, is great! Lovely work man :) Come to think of it though, he could be a lot more simple couldn't he :P Who am I kidding :P

Quoting The Texan Bionicle Builder
Could u make a how to on that body? I would love it so much if you did.

Would be possible. But I'm already working on a how-to for Vastaras old body design for sniperray, so it will take some time.

Quoting Andrew Mayfield
Great!!! But wasn't I going to be in your story?

You signed up very late and most of the story was already planned. But you will appear... but your self-MoC isn't one of the villagers. Also, please remember, this chapter with the simple builds is only the first of three big ones! @All: Some of the characters who are in can't be seen here, like Jacobi or Argin.

Thanks to everyone for the comments! Now to the questions. @Tavis: I don't think I'll make more of them in the next time, because I still have to build many creations for the story. @Archangel: It's Vored, not Deus. And sorry, but no, thats not Archangel in there (who do you thought he would be?). And who is Solons? @Jacobi: Where is a saloon? I must say, I haven't created one. But when you imagine one is there, then I've done a good job building the set, didn't I? @Gringat: The idea is fantastic... I'll look if it's possible with his back design. @RazorClaw: It wasn't that bad. Actually, only the box I used to take them outside has sand on it now :)

I see me!!! Thanks again for putting me in the story! The Moc looks pretty awesome, and I like the concept on which you based it off of. Great job and I'm very excited for the first chapter of the story.

I was unsure of this creation's epicness when I saw the thumbnail, but when I saw who it was built by I was reassured. Your story looks great! I have never seen someone put that much time into setting! Love the moc, love your stuff. Can't wait for the story!

Excellent recreation, even down to the missing left hand and the ripcrd for a sword. Putting a rhotuka spinner somewhere on his body would be cool though - maybe one that flicks up from his back like in the movies?