Again, like your last poem, I get what the point is, but poetically, there's nothing really there. I'm not getting any passion or feeling in these words.
As for the politics, while I respect your opinion, you must realize that Al-Qaeda etc want to kill you, me, and everyone else in the world who isn't Muslim. No lie, they even say it themselves. So while things like the WMD situation are questionable, the only way to deal with violence is to confront it. This is exactly what Bush has done and I think he should be commended for it, even though he has made his fair share of mistakes down the road.