Great work so far. I may be one of the few that actually understand what you are talking about due to studying theoretical physics/time/dimensions. However, you do explain it fairly well. Please keep the story going and if you need any help, feel free to message me.

It looks interesting and all but the question on why is Haru in SAO still lingers. If his a spectator that doesn't even known by Kirito then what is your motive for sending him in the past? I still don't get it unless you want him to do other stuff but he promise Kayaba to be a spectator... hmmm _

Henbog chapter 1 . 7/2/2013

really the black swordsman kirito this is a rip off of sword art online u do not own the character and its just a cruddy copy u should be ashamed using anothers idea.

you have great effort to make this fanfic. really, i wouldnt dare to write this complicated stuff becase affraid to make a dump information inside story. anyway, i love the thats wrong anime part. and honestly, i feel your three prolog is didnt sincron with this chapter. i dunno what is it though.