This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfictions I have ever read. I love the way you ended it. It was nice and added just enough information that that you would feel like your not missing a large part of the story, but not too much so that your bored and want it to just end. Nine out of ten.

I didn't like the you end it because you could at name the children and share there last two years of school in one or two chapters and then share what happen with their children a little.

Guest chapter 19 . 11/20/2014

Actually the 1st floor in a multi-level building in England is the same as the 2nd floor in a multi-level building here in the U.S. You see that in the Sherlock Holmes stories where Holmes and Watson's rooms are on the 1st floor but people have to climb a flight of stairs in order to reach their rooms.

Scribe1270 chapter 16 . 11/20/2014

You have the wrong word near the top where you say 'it alluded him.' e·lud·ed - to escape from, alluded - to suggest.

I believe you are running into an English language vs American language issues. Americans call the floor you enter the house the First Floor. In England that is called the ground floor and the floor above it the First Floor. Harry Potter was of course written using British nomenclature.