I'm not very great at making SCPs, nor can I type like a real professional. I just want some useful tips on how to properly make an SCP. My idea of my SCP is gonna be Keter Classed. (By the way, I am just gonna make a basic outline on what it is) it appears to be a whale skull, with a long neck, a human skeleton, an abnormally long tail bone and white eyes. The skin covering the bones appear to have a dark blue rust appearance. The thing generates noises similar to the sound whale makes, but far more high pitched and louder. It's approximately 10 Meters tall and usually stands on all fours. It does not have an eating method, but more rather, has a telekinetic pull on a human brain. When any human subject is near this SCP, the certain human will have depressing thoughts of a human baby being mutilated. After 10 seconds of exposure to this SCP, the human subject will try to kill itself with any means necessary. The method of how this SCP can do this is still very much unknown. Any physical contact with this SCP can cause every organ in the human subject's body to stop working, except for the brain, with the thoughts of a burning baby. The reason why this SCP has a connection with human babies is unknown, and is unlikely it will ever be solved. This SCP was found on the beach of [DATA REDACTED] where it appeared to be dead, it was thought to be a mutation of some sort, according to Dr ███████. It wasn't until 2 minutes and 47 seconds after it's transportation to the SCP Research Facility that it started moving, it moved similar to a ████, but way more strange. It acted aggressively towards any human that came near it. D class personnel were forced to enter this room to see what happens whenever a human ever came near this SCP. It seemed to have an undiscovered muscle keeping the bones together, it is incredibly strong and strange. Any attempts to injure it seemed to be futile, it cannot seem to be killed with any conventional methods either, resulting in it being angered. Even thought it doesn't seem to make any human sounds, it has talked before, saying something like "Y-You. S-Species. M-Made. M-Mistake." sounding very low and distorted, many of the Doctors still don't know what it meant by that, and kept the creature as a secret from society.

Thanks for reading! Please tell me how I can improve, I am a newbie at this website. I'm just a really big fan of SCP in general and I wanted to make my own.

I agree with Leveritas structure wise, but like to add to the creatures motivations. The reader does not need to know the exact why it does what it does directly, they should be encourage through the read to speculate to what it is. As the creator/writer you should be mostly fled in to the why.

The only other point I would like to share is that your SCP sound very close to another established SCP-682… So your going to need to show your SCP may seem similar, it certainly is not.

In any case, if the idea is received well enough, you might want to let someone proofread your articles. Your spelling and grammar need to improve before contributing to the SCP articles. Luckily, there are plenty of people here doing that.

Alright GojiraGaming, I'm going to point you in a few directions if that's ok. You don't have to read every single one of them, but trust me, it helped me a lot.

First things first: You're asking us before posting, that's great! Too many times people just dump their half-finished draft on the main site. You're respecting the platform enough to ask about a concept first. Keep that attitude up.

Now on the idea: I'd like you to read through your post, and then read this quote from the guide on common SCP pitfalls.

Simply making something gruesome is easy to do but ultimately not very effective on its own: body horror may get a quick reaction out of your reader, but if that is your only hook then they aren't liable to stay interested for long. Put another way, horror movies that consist entirely of jump-scares and scary monsters tend not to be as interesting or successful as suspense-thrillers that play on the audience's deep fears and phobias.

Now read your idea again. Do you see any similarities?

Just like magic items, monsters are entities that simply exist to cause pain and suffering with no rhyme or reason. This doesn't mean that we have to understand where all of our creatures come from, it simply means that you either have to describe it beyond simply what it looks like and what it does.

This is very important: The SCP has to be more than 'a thing that kills you'. The most successful (modern) articles don't revolve around the SCP. It tells a story through it.

Here's a thought experiment: Do you think SCP-096 would be half as good without everything surrounding it? The incident reports, the interviews?

That's what the focus of your article (in my humble opinion) should be.