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Topic: Yu-Gi-Oh GM (Read 1071 times)

It is with great pleasure that I present courtesy of Fanfiction.net Part 1 of the first story in Book 1 of my Yu-Gi-Oh GM trilogy. Please feel free to take a look and enjoy. Constructive criticism is welcome but keep all comments nice. Here's the link:

Hello Kumoricon fans I need some help. My Beta Reader Rocket6923 hasn't been seen in several weeks and well I don't see him coming back anytime soon. I need a new beta reader, someone with a good grasp of spelling and puncutation. I do admit while I have spell check and punctutaion there are a lot of times where m grammar can be, espcially with commas, somewhat atrocious. I'm pretty good with plot lines. I've discovered through obersevation and exploration what works and what doesn't. But a little critique if something doesn't work and a suggestionm of what might work better could help. And while they can be critical can also be nice.