These minor changes can help better your press release:* Headline - could be more interesting by stating your creative concept into it?* Body copy - more details about your collection will be better, and not focus only the African caftan? It's a collection, right?* Conclusion - more specifics should be written about the local fashion shows, names of the VIPs, local celebrities and hononary? That way, the press release will attract the attention of the press to publish because it sounds more reputable.

Good press release writing, spot on the requirements of the homework given. And a wonderful student. Overall, good effort.

Noted.I will make it better with your tips.Could you give me an example on how can I write the headline that includes the creative concepts of the collections?Thank you for the advices and compliments,really much appreciated:)Thank you.Hanif