[On the top of the first panel it says "The Staring Contest", bastard scanner cut it off -_-]

mares and Gentlecolts, I present to you my very first Pony related Comic! XD, I could think of no better pony for this than Derpy ^^, Her face gets more strained and contorted with every minute that passes, Desperately trying to keep her eyes open in order to win the staring contest........with a mirror

ALSO FIC WRITERS GET YOUR PENS OUT, THIS IS A STORY SO FUCKIN DEPRESSINGLY SAD IT WIPES IT'S ASS ON "MY LITTLE DASHIE", "SAYING GOODBYE" AND ALL THE REST!!!!!AND IT'S GOING ON RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU!!!! [This stories ass is literally shitting so much feeling and sentiment!!!!]Its a story called "The painting of the muffin family in derpy's house that is haunted for some reason", The gist of it goes like this [Get your kleenex out] :

While Derpy was competing against the mirror, She had no clue what was going on in the painting on the wall behind her, the painting of the muffin family, Mr Cinnamon muffin, Mrs Regular muffin, And baby blueberry Muffin.....

Baby Blueberry muffin asked her mother "Why am I a blueberry muffin?", Mrs Regular muffin replied "I had an affair, Mr cinnamon muffin is not your father, The news was all too much for Mr Cinnamon Muffin, so he jumped out of the painting and died!!!!

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Derpy in the second last panel looks absolutely terrifying. Move over, FnAF animatronics!Also, I didn't think I could feel sad for a muffin. I mean, she just admitted the news right in front of him with no regard for his feelings! That's heartless.Definitely love the detail and design of Derpy here, and it makes me wonder what would happen if I put a camera on her for those nine minutes to see the event play out in all it's strained face glory.Good work for your first Pomic (registered trademark, use and I sue)!

When I read this I thought you were kidding.....Then I checked, I know people get upset by different things, but what's the point in making a fool of yourself and crying over the internet about it?, It's just a cheesy story!, I also hear they're gonna do a movie on it ....

hahaha ^^ After basking in the really crazyass looking face in panel 5 I wondered what the pun would be. I did not see it coming xD

But that touching story though Q______________________________________QI thought I had been hardened after seeing this tragic cake story: [link] but thanks to it my floodgates just opened up even wider and smeared my tearfilled sympathy all over the room. Then the flood spread uncontrollably over to the livingroom and drenched our unsuspecting dinnerguests. That was the last time I saw that dessertcake alive and not in a huge creamy puddle all over the floor. My dad tried to save it but it was too late - Just glimpsing the horrible scene portrayed infront of me made our dessertcake utterly depressed. It didn't even want to be saved anymore, and my father realized that as he dropped his hold over the tray on which the crying chocolate-tarté rested, for the very first and last time.....

With that said - I'm glad you explained wtf was happening in the back cause I was utterly confused XD Though I noticed that Mrs Regular Muffin had some vicious teeths in the second panel xD

It took all my heartfelt sadness when I thought up the story "The painting of the muffin family in derpy's house that is haunted for some reason", I'm so happy that Imade someone feel ^^, Annnnnnd those are not teeth XD, it's the frilly edge from Mrs Regular Muffin's apron ,

Thanks mate! ^^ I actually posted up comic strips when I first joined the site, [They were crappily drawn stupid strips of me brutaly murdering disney stars, I was 15 mind you XD...., I only spent like 2 hours on each page, This one is just more than 10], But for as long as I can remember I've been drawing up stupid little comics,

It would be cool to get back to it now I've developed a style ;], I now take my work more seriously than I used to

Well. Sounds like they need more than marriage counseling. I know a guy who may be able to help... but he's more on the down low than anything. ~shifty stare back and forth~ They call him, the Muffin Man.