If I were painting this: in the second doorway (the one with bushes) I'd decrease contrast and brighten a bit (or a lot); the doorway/screen has lots of light but very little is hitting the floor... drop contrast/brighten would push the contrast closer to the viewer (where it belongs), ie. the closest screen and the figure.

If I were painting this: in the second doorway (the one with bushes) I'd decrease contrast and brighten a bit (or a lot); the doorway/screen has lots of light but very little is hitting the floor... drop contrast/brighten would push the contrast closer to the viewer (where it belongs), ie. the closest screen and the figure.

My (amateur) thoughts.

HI thanks a lot...Ur advice is very valuable to me. I even tried fixing the perspective and found that most of it was wrong.
I ll upload a corrected version for further help
thanks a lot <3

back again with the painting.. I have decided that I will repaint the entire image. right now I am trying to get the lighting right. I am scared of getting black blotchy spots due to excessive shadows.