THIS MONSTER is my contributation to the L/J exchange on livejournal which is here [link] and if you're bored or stuck for some good L/J fanfic have a look because the standard of stuff is aaammmmaaazzzinng.

anyway it's supposed to be raining in this. but I can't draw rain. fail.

I can't remember if I've commented on this yet, but this would deserve another one either way.

Your colours are so rich and vibrant, they bring this scene to life in a totally otherworldly way. Something this lushly gorgeous couldn't exist in real life, but I can wish. Yes, I'll admit that I thought the rain was sunshine or a firestorm for the first few panels, but it was evident by the final scene that it was something liquid. And OH that final panel! You use the curve of a body to such great effect - of expressing emotion and motion and the marvellousity of the situation (I MAKE UP WORDS AND IT'S OKAY).

The pacing between the panels is superb. If you ever published a graphic novel, I'd buy it.