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You handle this poem with sensitivty and a touch of gentle humour but underlying it you do not avoid the tragedy of what it is all about. It is well crafted and in touch with reality. A good work.
Thank you for this,
Keith

Consistent and constantly faithful in its depiction of the
various facets of a distressing condition. On a technical
side, I would prefer an alternative to the double use of
the word "take" in verse nine...but just maybe it fits with
the following line about being "repetitive"?