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Disturbing impressions, indeed, Frank. The first poem was eerily familiar of the feel when visiting a graveyard. Here I am whistling as I visit.

The second poem had a distinctively different feel, yet, disturbing on a whole 'nother level - the way I feel when speaking in front of a crowd giving a presentation. Stage fright.

Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton Author

wow i put this hub out three years ago and you're my first and only comment

Besarien 2 years ago

It seems like almost no one reads poetry around here. I love these two poems together- a study of two different kinds of fear. You are very good at evoking emotion in your reader. In my head I hear Alan Rickman reading them, which doesn't hurt a bit. I like your rhyme schemes which remind me a bit of Poe. I look forward to reading more.

Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton Author

thank Besarien these are much earlier work when I first joined hub pages.. but a following came through LOL It go much better an thank you for bringing back these old memories LOL