You should have really research when writing this not that it isn't nicely written but Ino's birthday is September 23 which means she's would be 15 like Naruto too on September 13 when the Matsuri no Otsuki took place

Just... why sakura at the end? You literally built up a romantically perfect setup between Ino and Naruto, then just shit the whole thing away. I assume you ended this where you did because you had no idea how to explain Ino just not being in the picture anymore. Bad form good sir, bad form.

It was fantastic! The story was really interesting and got me hooked for its entirety. Keep in writing and be happy and prosperous, writer sama :D

Anon chapter 1 . 5/18/2017

SomeGuyFawkes

Wew lad. In a series about a child soldier with the spirit of a rabid demon sealed inside him, with a mission to "rescue" a teammate who can bend time and space with his pupils, the biggest critique you have is that breaking into a wedding is unrealistic?

Cmon. There are useful reviews, and there are reviews you write to fellate yourself and your """literary critique.""" Yours fell under the second category.

Better than average for a "chic fic", but I just couldn't read all the way through without falling asleep.

Also, the idea that Naruto could crash that wedding is beyond ludicrous.
1) The Fire Lord and his men deal with imposters, infiltrators, and assassins every day, and twice on Sundays.
2) In addition to the security he would have, Konoha would also have discretely placed many guards. It would a MAJOR incident if anything happened to the Daimyō while he was in their village!
3) There is absolutely no way anyone is getting into that wedding party without an invitation.
4) Naruto is already a ninja of note, for his skills, his passenger, and his parentage. Naruto would be known to: the Daimyō, his security men, and every Konoha nin Naruto's age on up. There is no way that an undisguised Naruto is not recognized.