For Our Veterans

With Veterans day approaching, I decided I should submit this one. Not that good, I think, but at least it is something for the vet who are alive- unlike my grandfather. Hopefully it will get accepted in time.

They gave it, their all for us So we can still say this and thus About what we deserve But we didn’t serve Like when they fought and died for us

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Really good. Ijust feel like the top line should be be broken in to two parts or had an extra coma so it read something like. They gave it, their all, for us.....That's just my thoughts on it. Anyways I think you did the Vets proud.

I love it, it doesn't matter how good it is in anybody's mind, it's the thought that counts. Especially to me when I have many relatives and friends who have fought for our freedom in any war throughout history. I'm sorry about your grandpa, I know what it is like to not have a grandparent growing up. Thanks again, and remember, don't worry what other people think, be yourself in everything you do.