I really liked this story. There was one thing that I wanted to see, that didn't happen, and that being a bonding time between Shane and Maggie. I mean, they are brother and sister, it would have been nice to see Shane become more protective of her or something. To me there wasn't much interaction between the two and there was a little coldness between them...or something like that. I know Maggie didn't trust him much, I would have thought that Shane would have been someone who tried toget people to trust him. But that could be my interpretation of him and not yours. After the whole scenario of him thinking he could do it all himself, I think he learned that he needed people's trust.