Soft-hitnormal.wav unused-5 offset? sounds abit better with the whistles and this on top diff 01:28:051 (3) - mainlycould lower the volume for the intro and outro a bit since they don't have keysounds and are weaker in general, makes the keysounded parts a bit stronger since there lies the focus of the map

02:29:205 (5) - missing NC? 8 combo seems long here and you kinda seperated a similar music section in the intro by an NC in the middle

also you go for a denser NC pattern from 00:34:397 (1) - to 01:26:897 (3) - compared the rest (1ish every downbeat/semi musical sentence vs 2 downbeats/full sentence) dunno if its intentional but I don't really see a reason for it tbh

normal

00:10:166 (6) - 00:24:301 (6) - and reoccuring, could consider keysounding these since the piano is quite audible while playing on these notes

01:39:873 (5,6) - and similar in kiai, first the circle then the slider? makes you have the keysounds clickable since thats your main feedback and goes well with the vocals aswell. oh just noticed you did it in last kiai so yeah dunno if you want diversity between them but having both clickable sounds better to me but can leave it I suppose since it seems intentional then

02:24:873 (5,6,7) - 02:31:796 (5,6,7) - since its the weaker end of the song you could consider making these a returnslider so you have a less dense rythm then the kiai since its considerably weaker

seems about it only other thing I wanna mention is these rythms 00:16:796 (5,6,7) - , 00:44:488 (5,6,7) - since the keysounding is the main feedback you get while playing, it makes 00:45:065 (7) - kinda awkward to play since its clickable aswell without the feedback so could consider changeing 6-7 into a slider for these like you did in kiai for similar keysound patterns if it gets brought up again

Cool song and really nice you took the time keysounding, gl with the map!

Soft-hitnormal.wav unused deleted-5 offset? sounds abit better with the whistles and this on top diff 01:28:051 (3) - mainly yeacould lower the volume for the intro and outro a bit since they don't have keysounds and are weaker in general, makes the keysounded parts a bit stronger since there lies the focus of the map yea sure

02:29:205 (5) - missing NC? 8 combo seems long here and you kinda seperated a similar music section in the intro by an NC in the middle

also you go for a denser NC pattern from 00:34:397 (1) - to 01:26:897 (3) - compared the rest (1ish every downbeat/semi musical sentence vs 2 downbeats/full sentence) dunno if its intentional but I don't really see a reason for it tbh

fixed all

normal

00:10:166 (6) - 00:24:301 (6) - and reoccuring, could consider keysounding these since the piano is quite audible while playing on these notes I'm keysounding the vocals only

01:39:873 (5,6) - and similar in kiai, first the circle then the slider? makes you have the keysounds clickable since thats your main feedback and goes well with the vocals aswell. oh just noticed you did it in last kiai so yeah dunno if you want diversity between them but having both clickable sounds better to me but can leave it I suppose since it seems intentional then I changed everything into circle - slider

01:53:719 (5) - higher pitch on tail keysound? I think it's the right one

02:24:873 (5,6,7) - 02:31:796 (5,6,7) - since its the weaker end of the song you could consider making these a returnslider so you have a less dense rythm then the kiai since its considerably weaker yes

seems about it only other thing I wanna mention is these rythms 00:16:796 (5,6,7) - , 00:44:488 (5,6,7) - since the keysounding is the main feedback you get while playing, it makes 00:45:065 (7) - kinda awkward to play since its clickable aswell without the feedback so could consider changeing 6-7 into a slider for these like you did in kiai for similar keysound patterns if it gets brought up again I agree, I'm taking ur suggestion

Cool song and really nice you took the time keysounding, gl with the map! Thank you for modding and ur support !

~Hello! Still new to modding. So please excuse me if I make mistakes. ^^

Simple.

00:31:796 (1) - I think the hitsound whistle work great here as it gives some dynamic before the pause.

Voiceless.

00:33:238 (3) - Same as what I typed for [bold]Simple.[/bold] difficulty.01:28:046 (3) - Maybe change this slider to circles instead as I think it emphasizes more than just merely a slider.02:24:873 (5) - Not sure if this slider is supposed to be a blanket, but if it is, I think you should fix it.

Honestly, I don't see many things that need fixing. Hoping to see this rank soon!Also thanks for sort off introducing me to this movie. Had a great time watching it.

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