I loved this oneshot! Not only was this one of my favorite moments, it also shows Yami BEFORE he gained a conscience. I love the idea of initial fear in their relationship for some reason. Anyways, love it :)

This is a really good oneshot. I loved it. It is short and very moving. It goes straight to the point and you somehow managed to make Yami's feelings stand out from the scene even though you did not really change anything from the anime. I think you've underlined all the complexity of Yami's character in those few words and the deep yet complex relationship he has with Yugi. I've always imagined him a bit unsure of himself in the inside (although he would never show it to anyone). He's searching for answers and he needs someone to know he exists. And your story shows this very well. _