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Document: draft-ietf-emu-crypto-bind-04.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20130722
IETF LC End Date: 20130724
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- headers page 2: the keyword section is in the headers (vs the body).
This is not the usual place... (BTW it is not the first time I do
this comment so either the policy is different than I believe or
there is a draft skeleton with this in it?)
- Toc page 3 and 7 page 22: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
- 3.2.4 page 14: IMHO it should be fine to have an informational
reference about EMSK (my idea is to help people to add it in design
from the beginning).
- 4.2 page 17: edition problem? in:
should require mutual authentication be present in the session.
to accomplish this, implementations including channel binding or
- 5.2 page 19 (at the end of the line) EAp- -> EAP-
- 5.2 page 19: my spell checker has a concern with "interoperably"
Thanks
Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr