HolyJose
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Azrael
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Anyways, read the first 3 quarters of the show. I love the location, very creative. With a high flying show, in an airplane hanger, it fits perfectly. Although for someone that doesn't read the shows often, I don't know who Stanley and Ricky are, and it doesn't seem to say that. Although I know that my Havoc episode I wrote recently, I (for the first time ever) jumped right into commentary instead of giving a description of the arena and commentators, but I still gave their last names in the first speaking lines.

I loved the Jman promo at the beginning too.

I think the format is a little hard to read though, with actions being bolded, and speaking being italicized. It seems like it's making the unimportant stuff stand out, and the important stuff skipped over.

Right just read OCTANE. Great stuff, I liked the little hidden highlight of using the AWF music for the guys, even the Jabe guys.

The colours make it easier to read, and it flowed well in my opinion.

It was well written, and when I did the Brandon promo I did not realise there were other Pokemon references lol

Lol true story I could NOT find Harry Richard's theme anywhere and said "Fuck it he's getting the Pokemon theme song" Roba when you read it hope you found it funny.

HolyJose
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First Dual Champion in JBW History
Alpha Revolution North American Heavyweight Champion-1 time
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Azrael
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Thanks man that was a fun one to write. I LOVE the hanger idea (well mainly cuz it was mine but whatevs lol) seriously though you can do so much with the SuperFlys. Expect A LOT of stunts I hope it made it feel like how ROH has their ring so close to the barricade that both the ring and barricade can be used such as that DDT Avidico did. (that came to me I was day dreaming I was going against Kevin Steen for the ROH world title and thought of that backflip DDT onto the barricade and thought shit that's awesome)

HolyJose
JBW WARFare World Television Champion-1 time
JBW WARFare World Tag Team Champion-1 Time
First Dual Champion in JBW History
Alpha Revolution North American Heavyweight Champion-1 time
EWNCW Blacklist Champions-1 Time
JBW Champion-1 Time

Azrael
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