Monday, April 13, 2009

This is a song that I wrote while my house was flooded last year. It's one that could probably be finished without too much added to it... But I would like feedback on re-wording it or such to make it flow better. Does anything in this song sound stupid to you?

Verse 1The rain keeps falling down and the flood keeps coming upI feel dark and gloomy like It’s never going to stopAnd I am feeling stuck here ‘cause there’s nowhere else to goI’ve kept it all inside but now its gonna flow

ChorusCome and Dry my flood Will you take it all way?Yeah, dry my flood ‘Cus is just too much to take(Yeah) Dry my flood Let it all go down the drainI got to get this off my back and clear it from my brain

Verse 2It’s been more than 40 days and been more than 40 nightsIt seems a minor problem but It’s my major plightI can not over come it, and I can not win this fightI am not defeated, but I am not alright

(Chorus)Instrumental (over chorus?)

BridgeAnd I know that there’s light at the end of the tunnelThis story will come to an endWhen the flood is gone, I’ll be grateful for what I gaveAnd I’ll start to build againIf every thing I have is all takenAnd I am just left with my lifeI’ll be grateful for the air that I breatheFor my health, my family, my wife

Instrumental II (Bridge?)

Verse 3The rain keeps falling down and the flood keeps coming upI feel dark and gloomy like it’s never going to stopI know I shouldn’t worry if the problem’s only thingsBut this feeling tears my heart out and it makes me want to sing

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I love music. Esspecially Rock music, but I have an appreciation for a wide variety of styles. I am interested in growing my musical skills on the guitar and writing music. I also love to play video games and mess with computers and technology. :)