if i said little angel can it just be his personality with the adults around or something and then make him a troubled child when he's with the crusaders and other kids when alone? and then for where to live i guess applejack

I'm torn between Kid Genius and Little Angel. I think it would be good to use Little Angel IF this story involves Evil Human Myths. If not putting a Kid Genius with Applejack would be hilarious. Twilight dirves her crazy enough, but I just keep thinking that she'll go "Sweet Celestia's Fanny there's TWO of 'em!"

I think so, good, if (or when) this gets featured comments will probably fly almost as fast as rainbow... almost.

as for voting I think I will go with a bit "all of thee above+", after all baby sitters will probably be needed every now and again.

But as for his primary care giver... as much as I would love to stick Rarity with diaper duty and as much as I love the idea of Fluttershy as a parent I think its best if he gets to be near his big sis, the first one to bond with him, aka Applebloom!

I just hope he won't be upset when his big sis and her two best buds finely get there cutie marks and he... well can't....

as for personality...

Normal?... yick, besides the only people who think there is such a thing as normal are the ones who are either oblivious enough to not notice everybody has there little secret side just under the skin or just plan nuts themselves.

little angle? hmmm, interesting, maybe, would be nice to see a little timid sweetie out and about, though the sweetness would have its "limits" after all, like I said we all have that other side just under our skins

But I think I would have to go with kid genius, be an interesting mix to have with Applejack as she prefers to keep things simple, plus since we know round about what apple blooms talent is (crafts and such) they would make a nice pair indeed!

So, I say a genius child living with the Apple family.... though I hope he will remember to keep out of the everfree...

Fluttershy doesnt have a stutter, rarity should sound more elegent, rainbow would not let others think she was scared, applejack should probably be written in more of an accent and tbe ponies dont hate eachother. Thier all good enogh to be friends without rarity hating on em and there are alot of mistakes in the writing. Dont let me get u down. Just kee trying and get sumone to proof read it for u

I think I should explain my reasoning behind the hate. I see no way for Rarity to be close friends with Dash and AJ without Twilight being the one that ties them together. Rarity has openly bashed on both of them in the show for being "uncouth" or unladylike, so why wouldn't she do it behind their backs. The only way I can see Rarity even talking to those two before Nightmare Moon is because Fluttershy is friends with Dash. They just seem to different to be close friends without something tying them together and I don't think Fluttershy could be that something. Anyway just my thought process on that, just so you know I did think about it first.

Also the Fluttershy stutter... yep your right, don't really know what I was thinking for that... I'll just go fix that.

Scared Rainbow... like I said in the AN, there will be close to no fun times in later chapters. So if she has to be OOC for a few cheap laughs then I'll have to bite the bullet and make a few people mad.

AJ's accent... I hate writing her, I try to do the accent but then the red line is under the word and then I spend like 10 minutes on google to find out how it's spelled only to find nothing. So I ended playing it safe with the proper spelling of the word.

Rarity's elegants... I got nothing, I'll work on it.

And thank you the criticism, someone had to do it and I'm glad that you weren't rude about, so thanks again.

Don't forget about all the minute biological differences they will have to deal with. For example; as far as I know, ponies don't lose their baby teeth. At least not in the same way. Of course, I could be horrifically wrong. Lol.

I mean come on, dont you guys want a Fabulous mothefucker who solves problems like Twilight ? HE WILL BE GLORIOUSLY FABULOUS AND AWESOME, MARK MY WORDS.

All in all awesome story and awesome idea, im actually digging for a continuation.

Edit : Also dont make Rainbow go OOC, there are even BETTER ways to use her Tomboyish attitude to make even better jokes, i mean her personality is a joke goldmine if you know how to use it. If you make her go OOC then you´ll only be wasting good potential. I mean you can make the reader go MAD by just making her like she is