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its obvious you've borrowed a lot from some existing logos- for instance the shield is that of the Metrostars in MLS, as well as the ball and shield pattern. The B, while not exactly it, closely resembles the B from the Baltimore Ravens. I would suggest doing something original with your concept, try a whole new shield design, and maybe incorporating a "raider" somehow, rather than just text and the copied ball. it has potential, tho, once you start creating something unique of your own.

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its obvious you've borrowed a lot from some existing logos- for instance the shield is that of the Metrostars in MLS, as well as the ball and shield pattern. The B, while not exactly it, closely resembles the B from the Baltimore Ravens. I would suggest doing something original with your concept, try a whole new shield design, and maybe incorporating a "raider" somehow, rather than just text and the copied ball. it has potential, tho, once you start creating something unique of your own.

So you're saying it has potential if he scrubs everything and starts again?

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That's not Baltimore Ravens "B" - but I notice you did use another teams crest.

However you did you manage to capture a nice idea. I do however like the simplicity of it, using the Raiders text is a good idea - you don't need a logo.

However, I'd find a different font - it's too, blah. Also use the same font for the 'B' but enlarge the 'B' .

Good start - I don't think you have to scrap the whole thing - Gordie has a good point about 'creating' your own concept. But that's how I started - using others works and then got into creating my own.

Good luck

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I pretty much copied every thing because every year we have a logo to go on our t-shirts at the end of the year and it always is a logo from another team. We have used AC Milan, Celtic, and now I thought I could turn the Metrostars logo into a good one.