I've been working on this on and off the past few days, hopefully I will get time to finish it

First idea
http://www.pbase.com/r055/image/40222320.jpg

refined lines
http://www.pbase.com/r055/image/40222321.jpg

more work done to lines
http://www.pbase.com/r055/image/40222323.jpg

jamiehunter

02-27-2005, 08:47 PM

Looking good :thumbsup:
I hope she isnt staying bald...

-Ross-

02-28-2005, 01:31 PM

no im going at add the hair last, heres a little update, going to color after ive shaded it.

http://www.pbase.com/r055/image/40222324.jpg

krl

02-28-2005, 02:17 PM

Good work so far but man - these breast are huge, and you've put a strong accent on them; lets her look more ladylike, dont know if you want her to.

cgtalkmember

02-28-2005, 06:57 PM

wow i must say i like that shading :thumbsup:

InKraBid

02-28-2005, 08:31 PM

very nice metal look on the breasts there.. I like the pic, but have you considered a background..? I think it might look a bit lonely with just the girl..

andreasrocha

02-28-2005, 09:36 PM

Wow, wow, wow...this will be one hell of a great piece, I'm sure. Excellent!

Awoogamuffin?

02-28-2005, 10:11 PM

I like it, only the face bothers me...

it's too flat; there's no sense of volume in it. Her eyes look totally symetrical, and you loose all sense of volume. The same goes for the mouth, which I think is a little too high.

I think just a hint of asymetry in the face, with an emphasis on volume, would improve it considerably. But I don't know... seeing as she is facing the camera directly, I guess it's hard to get a sense of depth in her features...

Other than that, looking good. Keep up the good work.

Martin_B

02-28-2005, 11:02 PM

Very nice metall-texture.

(It's allways interesting to see peoples scetches. It's nice to just get some insight of their workflow.)

Groady

03-01-2005, 05:04 AM

Looks like you haven't got to the face and hands yet. I tend to agree about the face being symetrical. Maybe give her one slightly raised eyebrow or half-smile. I like the fact you're showing your progress I look forward to watching this progress. Keep it up :thumbsup:

ComaWhite

03-01-2005, 08:43 AM

wow, great shading and texture!

Kargokultti

03-01-2005, 11:34 AM

Her shoulders look like they're not the same size. Maybe it would help if the neck would be in the middle and a little inclined to the right.

Anurizm

03-01-2005, 11:45 AM

looking good man :) the shoulders do look a little bit different sized, but I would worry about it. it's not that noticable unless you eyeball it. A background should drown it out though, keep up the good work :)

-Ross-

03-01-2005, 08:14 PM

Thanks for the constructive criticism it helps alot !! this is still only my 2nd image made with photoshop so i need all the help i can get. i really feel ive learned alot just doing this one image, next time ill be doing the main lines 1/2 the thickness, i think they are a tad strong. i also am not happy with a few other things but its to late to change them now so heres i little update. thanks again

http://www.pbase.com/r055/image/40328116.jpg

andreasrocha

03-01-2005, 08:26 PM

Gorgeous! You rock man...and it's unbelievable that this is your 2nd Photoshop work. You really must have an extensive background with traditional media. Contratulations.

Her face looks great. My only suggestion would be to slide her navel a bit to her left.

I'll definitely keep a watch on your thread.

karlworks

03-03-2005, 01:57 AM

you rock dude!:buttrock:the sahding is amazing! for the work i give you a :thumbsup:.
can i have a tips on shading espcially on metallic details.
im curently working on a cyborg guy hope you can help me with it.thnx!:)

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