I loved this story but I must say I am so very disappointed - I really thought that they would have got together - have you a sequel to this story because if you have you must tell me what it is so I can read it! PLEASE?

I am sitting here thinking that this is simply just a re-write of Persuasion but indeed I am wrong in making such an assumption and I am sorry for doing so! Your writing is exceptional and no matter if it resembles the original story in any shape or form I love it and love to read any version and believe it or not I get excited thinking what the ending might be despite the fact that I already know it! It is safe to say that I am a Persuasion Addict! I am glad that Capt Wentworth is coming to the realisation now that Anne still loves him! I hope I am not wrong!

An excellent story so far - my fav paragraph in this first chapter is the third last one where he realises that Anne's youth has gone to be replaced by pain and sadness. I am really looking forward to reading the next few chapters, I love Persuasion!