Note: I correct the given mistake only once. If you do not use the metric system, I will only make a single comment about it, even if it appears again in the rest of the article. If the draft has many language problems, I will only correct the most glaring ones.

Agent Torres: I did, actually. The footage, at least. I don't really know how you were able to pull a basking shark out of a ten-foot wide estuary channel.

I think it would be sort of a funny addition of this guy manages to haul something out of a public fountain or a swimming pool, but I'll leave you to make that decision.

So you'll note the barren wasteland that is the line-by-line (no pun intended), because I honestly can't find a fault in this. The dialogue is great, it's an interesting idea with a fantastic punchline. I always recommending the okay of more than one person, but I would definitely upvote this. Fantastic work so far.