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Keith (great name by the way)
Your images look pretty good, there are a few suggestions I would suggest looking at. First make sure your images represent roughly the ratio of the types of work you stated you do on your application (i.e. 50% wedding, 50% portrait).
Second look at consistancy in quality.
Third variety - don't have several similar images

As I looked at your images I saw:
1 - good
2 - good
3 - good
4 - weak - child a little over exposed, faces too far apart
5 - good
6 - weak but passable - Hands crossed in the fig leaf position, Nice lighting but compositionally I don't understand the position for an executive.
7 - good
8 - weak - Blown highlights = missed exposure, flat light that looks like on camera flash combined with her eyes and expression lend to a snapshot type feel.
9 - weak - Blown highlights - while this gives light direction will be a strong problem, the dark dress against the boat ramp is mixing keys and again these issues leave me with a bit of a snapshot feeling image.
10- good
11- OK but a little weak - subject is a little too close to the background and projecting a soft shadow onto the background.
12- OK close to good.- I would like to see a little more room above thier heads (feels a bit cramped). Also the lighting is a bit flat.
13- OK - Needs a bit more room above the brides head, I understand the crop because of the veil but it leaves the print feeling top heavy. I know it is natural light but the eyes a bit pocketed. Might be able to be helped with a bit of art work.
14- good
15- good - print darker
16- good - print darker
17- good - print a little darker
18- weak - lost the brides face, green skintones on her. Good story but Leaves me feeling like it's a miss
19- excellant control of depth of field and light.
20- good - could use just a bit more room around the hands, the spot color is ok but almost draws the attention away from the baby.

I don't mean to be too hard on you or to discourage you but I feel this set as is would probably not pass but with a few changes would pass with out a problem.