wow...great chapter. So easily we all make choices we regret later, but that's life. Thanks for making this story even more believable, even though its an unbelievable story. Or rather, its fantasy, so it can't be found in real life. But it's awesome all the same. I can't wait to see what happens. Keep updating!

wow...so sad! love the history though. it's really cool to learn more about the characters, and especially Peri's deductions from them. Like the ending about sorrow and death. It shows us more about how she is beginning to see more about this strange place she's in. nice job!

cheyenne chapter 20 . 4/25/2009

this is one of the best internet storys i have ever had the pleasure to read. and a tip DON'T STOP WRITING THE STORY! please:)