OMG! I love this so much! Please, tell me that you are going to write more. I really want to be able to read more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Don't worry--I've already written the next two chapters, but I need to find a beta, and I've been so busy this summer I haven't had time to update. I will once school gets in, though.

I noticed something when reading the chapter. You've described Sarah's appearance a lot like Harry's. Why is that?

I really like this chapter. Keep up the good work.

~ Parchment and Quill

Author's Response: Wow, I totally didn't notice that she sounded like Harry. I just came up with her based off of, well, a very, very ragged-looking version of what I used to wish I looked like. I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Very cute! I'm glad that Tonks let him in! It was nice with Remus telling Tonks he loved her, even if she was asleep.Interesting thing with Annabeth...something tells me that's not going to be good...Great chapter! Please, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! This was my favorite chapter to write, too. I'm really getting nervous about the upcoming chapters, because they talk a bit more about...stuff that might make this story need a higher rating. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, plus, some good news is I applied to be a PI accredited beta, so maybe I could beta stuff for you so it'll get in and everyone can praise you and that sort of thing.
~Remora

You keep comparing Sara to Tonks, it's driving me mad trying to figure out--is she...no, she can't be...but maybe...agh. But she's Greyback's daughter? He'd know--Remus would know--or maybe...I don't know. I'm completely incoherent, and definitely curious. In a very bizarre way, that's a compliment of sorts. Update soon, (or whenever they figure out the database thing) and have a good weekend!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's my birthday tomorrow (today? I think it's past midnight already. I'm typing this while on my sleeping bag watching Order of the Phoneix) and I hope for my one day out of the year when I actually have luck, they'll get it up. Is Sara--what? She's not Tonks' sister or anything if that's what you mean. I guess this may be kind of a spoiler but anyone who cares to read her page on the Forums knows her Mum's a Muggle so I guess it really isn't a spoiler. So yeah. She's not related to Tonks. Thanks for reviewing!

Interesting. I'm not entirely sure I like Sara as a character, or how open she and Remus are with each other so soon, but at least you acknowledged with Remus being 'taken aback' how easily they confide in each other. I'm curious about Sara's background as well...there are some stories there, you suggest?

Author's Response: There are many stories in Sara's past. They're part of the reason she's so...dark and mysterious and all that. Thanks for reviewing! (If you want to know about Sara, I have a page about her on the Forums. It's under the Character Clinic thing)

That last line made me shiver! You'd think Remus would be more careful than to carry around a photograph in a werewolf camp, but it was kind of a prickly, foreboding way to start the story. You do a good Greyback, by the way. All right, next chapter...

Author's Response: Thanks! I had no idea how to do Greyback so I decided to act like...uh, I think it was an evil substitute I once had, but I can't remember for sure. I'm glad you think it's good!

Yay!! An awesome first chapter!! It was so cool! This was my favorite part:
“What do you know about it?” snapped Remus. “You’re only thirteen.”

“Remus, listen to me,” Sara said gently. “Love is all that matters. As for how I know this…well, I don’t want to talk about it just yet.” She bowed her head, hiding her face behind a veil of sable hair.