I really liked it. It's such a nice change from the regular minded people or kidnappers. it opens my mind to a 'psychopath' and I realize they could have their pleasure too, no matter how deranged they were.

Your Wifey chapter 1 . 8/6/2010

So I read this a few times in order to give a good review.

This appealed to me because I have a love for dark and mad stories. Throwing love into the mix added more appeal. I liked the way you ordered it. You intoduced Emma as someone who craves companionship-just like any sane person would. She seems to be misunderstood on multiple levels. I also found Dosko's and Emma's first glomp to be amusing. Overall, I enjoyed the character interaction. The part where Emma craved her name into Dosko was brilliant. Even though the parts surrounding it were pretty hot and steamy, there was a reminder of Emma's childish ways. I also really liked the way you ended it. :)

I would lovee to see another chapter. I have no idea what it would be about but I'm sure that I would love it all the same.

This was excellent for a first time lemon. I know mine sucked pretty bad my first time around.

Utterly wicked. You got some dark sadistic work going on here, and I like it. Though, I've always been a kind of morbid person on the good side.

This was very appealing towards me because of the uniqueness. Plus, I've got a thing for asylums. But, the fact that you had 'likeness' or love thrown in there made it all the better. Very nicely written.

Dosko chapter 1 . 7/29/2010

Well, there are a lot of words that could describe this story. But I'll only use a few:

Deranged

Erotic

Morbid

Outstanding

Neurotic

Incredibly appealing in every way

Crazy

Anyways, I'm glad I read this at least five times before I finally reviewed it. it gave me a ton of perspective I would have otherwise not had. I do know that this story means more to me than it does to everybody else, but besides that, it's nice to see some things that have always made me smile, and that may make me smile in the future...

Besides that, it was well written. Damn near perfect. Oh hell, I'll say it. It's perfect. It's so delightfully insane that I can't help but smile and have an erection at the same time. That's probably not healthy, and it feels like I'm watching porn and Dora The Explorer at the same time when I read this: both of these things are viewed as good separately, but it's indecent to do them both at the same time. I almost feel guilty that this story has that kind of power over me, but I'll admit it; it does. And any story that can arouse me, AND still have an incredible plot line AND have meaning to it, is flawless in my book.

I really liked the reminder during the sex that it was still a story of insanity and pure love: namely referring to the carving of Emma's name. It might be wrong to say that that was sweet of her to do, but then again, who said I wanted to be right? And it was sweet...Emma's innocence is so adorable...it makes me want to punch a kitty until it bleeds, and rub it all over her.

While it maintains a slight level of child-like narration, I do suppose that with two child-like protagonists, that's kind of necessary, isn't it? I guess that was the only thing I may have found wrong with it, that two people like them could really be insane. But then I remembered the good old days when everybody was insane at the age of four, and I was thoroughly convinced that this truly is the workings of a mad genius.

If ever there was a greater OC couple than Emma and Dosko, I would ask to see their certification and proof that they are indeed better. While they were searching for their papers, I would push them off a cliff before they knew what hit them.

Through.The.Flame chapter 1 . 7/27/2010

Um...wow. That was REALLY amazing! I mean, at first, I was kind of like "idk if this is going to be good or not" but it totally was! I absolutely loved the whole phycological side to this, and the whole thing was really well written!

This one-shot was really...different(in a good way). Very dark and psychologically freaky. :D I found the "drawing pretty pictures" totally unexpected, so I liked it. Some of the word choices were really well chosen also. The only thing I noticed is that for Dosko, earlier you wrote that he had black hair, but later, he had brunette hair. But other than that, I wouldn't mind reading any continuation of this. :)

forestfairy chapter 1 . 7/24/2010

i really like this. it was interesting and dark... kind of wished it was more than a one shot. i like the whole psychological side to it.

chinadoll22 chapter 1 . 7/24/2010

wow, i really found this story interesting. it was really good, u did an amazing job writing this. :)