Build Up Your Gang

StefanBallas3rd story$42$288 + $42 = $320Nice chapter with a good balance of dialogue, description and plot. Although "as if it had been in the dirty hands of Mike Ashley." is a bit of an odd choice of simile, haha. How dirty are Mike Ashley's hands? Also, a bit of an odd plot with a street gang who have just emerged from turmoil a year previously to then go on and own more businesses than anyone else in the world. But good overall.

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And I'll edit in the previous ratings. Also, rackets and busineses are up! Wait, no they're not! The post is too long, we think. As soon as we paste the coding into the box and click 'Preview Post' it doesn't do anything, and clicking submit wipes it clean (just as well we had the old coding copied just before!)

Omnia sunt Communia

If that's the case, Mark, I suggest we make a new topic. This one has become quite crowded and contains a lot of pages filled with crap. If we make a new topic we can reserve the first three pages (like we did with BUYG IV) and set out the topic like this:

Build Up Your Gang

The sudden and irregular increase in wealth of the Varrio Los Aztecas has drawn the attention of the Los Santos Police Department. Following the deportation of a high ranking Varrio OG, known only as Gantons Most Wanted, the LSPD yesterday stormed the man's former residence, and have discovered a secret trapdoor that led to a large storage bunker well below the ground. LSPD officials were "shocked" at the "unimaginable" amount of stolen weapons and artillery hidden in the bunker. Sources leaked that the Varrio Los Aztecas stashed more than $50000 worth of cars, vans, guns, and boats, as well as a helicopter in the bunker. According to a police official, the LSPD will be sealing off the entrances to the bunker in the next few days. The official also called for the impounding of all the stolen vehicles as well as the confiscation of the unlicensed weapons, and the arrest of the high ranking Varrio OG's involved in the thefts. The gang will be expected to pay fines of around $49000 to compensate the rightful owners of the vehicles.

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They were simply too lucrative. All that was abused drug money anyway.