Ok plz update soon, I know what you mean by lack of inspiration so I'll send in some ideas, I hope you got private messaging. Anyways great job and plz don't bail on us with this story, I swore I wouldn't do it with mine cause it tortures me when people do that :/
Later ;)

Oh my goodness this is great! You got Derek really well and you almost have Chloe. But in my opinion you made her too meek and wimpy. In the book she was able to hold back tears and do things for herself am not break down so easily. Please make her tougher! Derek is always comforting her and carrying her and I don't like how that is lol!
But it's still your story I'm not forgetting that! Please update soon!