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Review:

Elysium says:Hi there!! Sorry I'm so dreadfully late with the promised reviews, I've been plague-ridden with the flu which is my best excuse. In any case, this was a gorgeous first piece to read... and since I've never encountered your work before I was totally delighted by your deft touch with the descriptive writing. The imagery is evocative and quite delicate, so that I felt like I was there with her, amidst the barley and the breeze.

I've very little experience in reading this ship, despite its popularity, but the thing that I loved about the way you portrayed them here is that whilst it is clearly capturing the last moments of James & Lily... there's a universal sort of quality to the depiction... like it could be any two people coming together in that moment.

I love that sort of ambiguity in writing. This was both wistful and bittersweet, and above all else, lovely.