It doesn't take a lot to at least put some commas here and there on your posts, to at least make a little bit more understandable.

There is one Portuguese writer, that has the most horrible writing I have seen (he uses mainly commas, you have a really hard time figuring out if someone is talking or if it's just text), yet, he won a Nobel Prize...

sei wrote:There is one Portuguese writer, that has the most horrible writing I have seen (he uses mainly commas, you have a really hard time figuring out if someone is talking or if it's just text), yet, he won a Nobel Prize...

I guess you're talking about José Saramago. I've read two books by him (Spanish translations, but his writing style was preserved) and I love how he writes. I never really had much trouble figuring out if there was conversation or narration going on. I actually found his books very easy to read.

Even if you don't like his writing style, this is apples and oranges; he has literary license but the OP doesn't.

tanuki wrote:I guess you're talking about José Saramago. I've read two books by him (Spanish translations, but his writing style was preserved) and I love how he writes. I never really had much trouble figuring out if there was conversation or narration going on. I actually found his books very easy to read.

Even if you don't like his writing style, this is apples and oranges; he has literary license but the OP doesn't.

Yes, I am referring to José Saramago. I've also read one of his books this year for school and even though I like his writing, the story and such, I think the writing itself is sometimes very confusing. For example, you know a character is talking when there is a comma and then a big letter (?), so that is easy. But when does the speech end?

Sometimes it is complicated, as he ends it and continues the narration, but still seems like the character is talking, and even though my teacher told me some of those times it was narration and not speech, I still think it is speech.

Other than that, I don't really have many complains, except maybe the too long paragraphs, in which I found myself lost, not knowing what the line of thought was supposed to be anymore.

And I didn't understand your comment about the OP and literary license...

The new member that nobody really seems to like, Yuuki, looks like this:

This is the first picture I've seen, but he looks American to me. xD

Either that, or he's DJ Ozma.

An American DJ Ozma? ^_^''

Edit: By the way, what's their newest song? The last thing I heard was their 2nd cd, I think. (Which sucked, BTW, which is why I stopped listening to them.) Have they done anything new recently/going to do anything new?

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Ahhhhs! I love them so much! Miku and Kanon were, and always will be, my favorites! And Bou was incredible! I miss him SO much! They had to get 2 members to replace him...and I don't like it. But I may change my mind when new songs are released...

And I'm trying to be nice to Yuuki since I don't know much about him yet. I just want to know...why the hair? I think it's a wig. I guess he needed a trademark besides the glasses or something lol.

lol! he's cosplaying as a guy named DJ Ozma.
I didn't really like him at first..but now I've changed my mind.
He's not my favorite,but I don't dislike him...

I think everyone kinda hates him because of the loss of Bou
..and his cosplaying didn't really fit in to the "visual/oshare kei" look
But I think everybody really needs to give him a break
and we should wait till their next album comes out
then we should actually judge if we like him or not.
It must be really hard for him because he's been
getting hate mail since they first introduced him.

and he's actually been there for a while
..kinda doing behind the scenes work,I guess.

lol!you probably are the only one that didn't like Bou I'd have to say you're probably the only the...
hmm, maybe 2nd or 3rd person I've heard say that

huzzah for 'maple gunman' Music video's weird...but the guitar from B-O-U san kicks butt. The vocalist can be a little annoying, but when he does the finger pointing in the music video it makes me laff.

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