THE SUNKEN CATHEDRAL

Below is the poem entitled THE SUNKEN CATHEDRAL which was written by poet
daver
austin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Thought I would let you know, this one is your number three on your "best poems" list. I am sure I have read this one before too!! thanks for visiting me today. I hope you are feeling on top of the world this week!!

Daver, how does this "first round" thing work? I know I have three poems in the big Soup contest but when do I find out if any of them have passed into the semi finals? When will they be judged? did you ever win in this Soup contest? Like in a top ten or something?
this poem creates great atmosphere! An eerie one. about the terza rima, I just made that stuff up. In my dreams, they would be a happily married couple by now! Luv, andrea

Well, as I said in January this is a beautiful write and I still wonder if you have actually visited this Cathedral. Now that it has become a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest!

Daver, such a lovely poem, Visual and Audible.
Jaded light of day. We get tired sometimes..not only us who are jaded. Algaed bells? I go to hear them at Bosque Bello Cemetery today to sit with my father, my husband, my two brothers. Be with them on this Holy Saturday - Be with my thoughts.
Love, love

Amazingly well done, Daver! Spellbinding as though part of the ruins of Atlantis. Congratulations for placing in this contest, and gracing us with the outstanding poem! Blessings to you and yours...Mikki

Really enjoy this one, Daver. I like the way you've spaced it out and the subject matter is very original ... have you seen such a place?
Very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week here at the Soup. Congratulations!

Date:
1/7/2009 4:41:00 PM

Creative piece with an interesting format. Congratulations on being chosen as one of the contest winners. I wish you continued success with your writing.
Karen