Looks really good, but...the eyes look a little weird on the girl on the second to last panel. Maybe it's my own personal perception, but it sort of looks like she suddenly came across a case of lazy eye.

Final Fantasy Forever!!!Scarlet Spider: You know, before I joined, I thought Cybella was the most intelligent person on the board.Narutodesu: Are you man enough to watch Clannad?!Kathleen: if guys were made of chocolate i would be straight.Scarlet Spider: I grew up watching porn.Stricken: Everyone wants my cock.Xagan: Do-it-yourself sodomy kits are not good ideas. Don't let your friends talk you into it.

Update: I should be starting to get back to things again this next weekend. Had zero time over the holidays between family and work (in our family there's more then xmas and new years, there's also about 5 birthdays)

woot something to post!something I made for a friend with characters by some other friends. She was having problems with her boyfriend's mother being a bitch so we wanted to cheer her up (only part one of it, the other 2 verses of the song were done by the other friends) original song here http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N-lzcMEc ... -fresh+div

mostly cause this was done as a quick doodle being a spur of the moment gift I fit between actual major works so I didn't really bother with the details like finger count. Besides, most of where they have fewer fingers it's in panels zoomed out so some of the fewer and larger fingers could be considered out of focus multiple fingers together, or you could just toss it up to quirky stylizations and chibi versions which most often have fewer then actual number of fingers

ok so updating the status of the magician baker.......I'm restarting it. Basically I took a second look at the storyline and art and decided I can do better. To start with, I'm shifting the focus of the storyline to the title character rather then heather, giving tobias more of a complex character and a history and putting the story from his perspective. The story overall will also be getting a shift, making it more a general fantasy world rather then the 'fairy' bit I originally planned. It's also going to be a touch darker, with a rather twisted monster (who I'll describe in a bit) as the antagonist. And finally changing the overall art style.....something a bit less 'chibi' ish.

To give a bit of a view what this new look might be like, I present you with an early concept sketch of the villain in his 'monster' form.....

The magician baker villain is a creature known as a Peryton. They were creatures from medieval folklore that resembled a cross between a stag and a bird. They were believed to be the spirits of murderers trapped in beastial form. Despite their shape their shadows appear as human, which helps them when stalking their favorite prey......humans. In tradition, a peryton could only kill a human once, and once it did its shadow would return to it's physical shape. For the sake of plot the villain in our story will only face such limitations in a smaller extent. Plus he will have some additional features; enough to make him more of an imposing antagonist.