I will leave this world a wonderful place
Try to touch the stars in outer space
Reveal to me your true desires
Let me help put out those inner fires
Do you see the stars? They glow so bright
So close to me, yet so far out of sight
Do you feel the same way I feel about you?
Let me tell you this: We will make through

Tonight, this world, is ours
Let's make the most of it
And I'm yours, for life
My dear I can't resist
This life's so good
With you by my side
Will you be my star?
'Coz together we can fly

Do you feel the sadness as it slips away?
Do you feel her light, as it brightens my day?
She glows beautifully, just like a star
Her passion shines right through my heart
Do you know what it feels like to scream with pain?
'Coz inside I know, she'll never look my way
Why can't you feel the way I feel about you?
Let me tell you this: I wanna make it through

Tonight, this world, is ours
Let's make the most of it
And I'm yours, for life
My dear I can't resist
This life's so good
With you by my side
Will you be my star?
'Coz together we can fly

prankster69
A bit of an epic this one. A sonic picture full of colour and energy. Love the changes flows very well. Vocals are fine do not worry. Have you thought about adding some vocoder effects to the she's a star at the end.

thank you for the great comment :D
I've thought about playing around with it a bit, but I'm still quite a beginner when it comes to effects and mixing. Not a bad idea though, I might play around with it a bit until I get something interesting.

Really liking this
...although I felt that it took a bit too long to get going. Nice song and lyrics. The vocal is good, but I feel you are hiding a bit too much behind the reverb and effects, could certainly be more prominent in the mix.
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Cheers
Len

that's true
I tend to do that a lot with the effects on my voice. I love effects units, and I guess knowing I'm not really a singer just drives me to play around with effects on my voice. I'll keep your advice in mind next time I record a song. I'll try to give my voice a bit more of a clean mix.

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