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Black_Tigerlily says:Oh my gosh, this is fabulous! I'm hooked, literally. I will look at this every day until there is a new chapter. This is really great, keep it up. I only have one complaint. In one of the previous chapters, I think it was Gill's POV, you had the whole paragraph jammed together. It's really hard to keep track of what you're reading if there aren't spaces every paragraph. Like, 5 sentences(or however many, I wouldn't recommend more than 7) and then you press enter, so it can start a new paragraph. I don't mean to lecture because it might not be your fault, but I thought you should know. Other than that, its amazing!!

Author's Response: I've had other people complain about too much spacing lol but i will kerp that in mind. I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)