re: LOL WHUT.
*dies from laughter* actually, this could add another paragraph to the fanfic! There was a restart button that everyone jumped on... and now the characters are drawn in MS paint and speak improper german/l33t! hmmhaw! haw-haw!

The battlefield was dark and bloody. There was silhouette of a man with long hair and a katana. As he came into light, he was soaked in blood. He flicked his hair. Then he licked blood off of the back of his hand. Krimsen Rayvenbloode was the strongest Knight under Adeodatus. He stared at his five-foot long golden katana. "Crimson, what a perfect color for my katana." he said aloud as he turned to his blood-drenched captain.
(Golden katana, silver hair, misspelled name. We've got our Sue.)

He looked at his golden katana again and flipped his silver hair. He noticed some blood on the enemy and decided to lick it up. The captain didn't notice though.
(Let's drive the knife a little deeper. He's got a GOLDEN KATANA and SILVER HAIR and he LOEVS BLOOD. Got it?)

Adeodatus' once-shining armor became soaked in the blood of enemies. "And your colors are perfect for me." Krimsen thought to himself.
(Is... is that some blood? C-can I have some!?)