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Secret Santa :) says:Oh, I really enjoyed this! It's very unique, and written really well. I LOVED how you characterised Lily, so different from what everyone else does - where she's happy, though still angry at Potter. I loved it, like this line: "I had the worst life ever, a miserable half existence where I could never be who I truly was." That conveys so much about her character, and how different you've characterised her!

I like how she went to the Owlery to escape - I can see this Lily doing that! And then that mysterious object - I hope you enlighten us soon about what it is! And I really loved that scene - the way you wrote that was perfect. You kept the suspense going right up till the end, and then the bomb drops - it's Petunia! So now you've definitely got the intrigue there - I just hope you update soon so I can find out more! So far, a great chapter, very unique, and I feel like it's got the potential to be a really wonderful and original story!

♥ secret santa

Author's Response: Hi! Wow, what a gold mine of reviews you have spoilt me with! I am FILTHY rich! :P

I do love this chapter. I'm SO glad you think it was original, because that's what I'm so desperately aiming to be recognised for. Having very DIFFERENT stories. I think this is the one that I have succeeded the most successfully with so far, but Marlene is still my baby :)
Thank you so, so much! x