memento27oasis

the white blast of light can become too overpowering, so I'd tone it down, however, the balance between white and blue should be kept, so I'd place more of those feather thingys on the blue side to balance it out. catch my drift?

I'd choose a text that's more elegant, to fit with the heavenly background.

Jack_Knife

Move the text back to where you originally had it, looks better there. But yeah, it'd look better white, with a little transparency maybe, and with a little less thick font. I like the background, though, it's quite nice.