i don't know that i've reviewed this story yet, but i've been reading faithfully from ch.1, and i have to say that i adore it.

the character depth, the emotion. the sheer intimacy these kids/ teenagers share, which most people never feel in their lifetimes, let alone with more than one person. it's beautiful and i applaud you both for it.

i'm always very excited when i see a new chapter, and often it has been on my cell phone (with a crappy keyboard, which is why i haven't reviewed yet), and i simply can't wait until i have my laptop to read it.

i'm so excited to see what developes between these three. dare i hope for a polyamorous relationship here? i think the way you've been crafting this tale that could be lovely.

And four becomes five? I just want to hug them all. And I wish I could take some of the pain from Sarah. And Omg- that spin on the locker room kiss. Wow! Didn't see that coming. I might've expected Dave to kiss him bit for him to kiss Dave! Awesome. Looking forward to more!

I love this. And two of my favourite authors on this site. I'm loving this so far. I always want to hug Dave and that's because I see myself in him. I was that bully that was lashing out. Uncontrolled anger can destroy a person. I have a soft spot for all of these kids. There are many ways to lose a parent and all of them are painful. I hope they dont go through too much pain. Will review every chapter as always.