I am writing a fan fic that involes Bo on FIMfiction. i know that many here might not care for FIM, but i though it would be nice to sure this since many Bleedman fans have already said that it is interesting.

LewaBolt wrote:why do people think i'm a bot, i was just thinking i could share what i was writing...even if it ends up not being a great story.

you're not a bot, don't worry. You do seem fairly young, though, so let's make this your welcome thread as well as your introduction to your fic, because if you read the rules and investigate the forums, we actually have an entire forum for posting fanfics. :) It's not your fault, though, so I'm going to shadow-topic this thread to literature so that people can see the topic in this forum to welcome you, while still being able to have this thread in our fanfic section.

BTW I am one of the moderators. I'm BR. Hi!

and I mean. R U SRS. Most of us love My Little Pony, you little nutter. Have fun in the forums, read the rules, enjoy your stay.

And then People like me exist. It's not so much the show itself that burns my ass, it's the community, especially the Fan-fiction community. I actually tried dabbling in their company once, didn't go so well.

Hopefully yours will go smoother, Lewa.

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"It's such a fine line between clever and stupid."

The Chronometal Wars, a fan-fiction taking place in the PPGD Universe. Catastrophe is the only certainty.

well, i kinda have to make up much of Bo's personality in my story...she hasn't had enough screen time to show her full personality. i do know that she is noble, but a touch childish when it come to some things.

LewaBolt wrote:well, i kinda have to make up much of Bo's personality in my story...she hasn't had enough screen time to show her full personality. i do know that she is noble, but a touch childish when it come to some things.

When I was writing my story about PPGD, I had to take into account the same exact thing. A lot of characters there didn't have much screen time.

So I essentially just examined every line they ever had in the story and magnified it by like 5X, and judged from their words and stances how they were as people.

My best example would probably be Otto, he didn't get very many pages, but you could tell he was all business. Whenever something didn't go exactly right, he turned into a Warrior... for lack of a better word.

Bo has a lot of the same qualities, she started off really nice and fluffy, but once they got into that Zone she turned really violent. Probably pent up anger. You might want to focus on that aspect of her, the side she tries not to show to her friends.

"It's such a fine line between clever and stupid."

The Chronometal Wars, a fan-fiction taking place in the PPGD Universe. Catastrophe is the only certainty.