Ok, so on the last chapter I said that I really like this story, and I've gotta say, I completely concur with myself! Dude, this is seriously so good! I can't believe you don't have like millions of votes! You're an amazing writer, never stop! :)

You actually have a good talent at detail. You should continue writing just revise it afterwards so you wont have any mistakes. Btw i love how you put severus in the story because people tend to not write about how they were best friends. Keep up the good work!