This is slightly horrifying. Oh, don't get me wrong- the poetry is good. But the sheer amount of anti-US poetry I find on this site... my, my. That aside, good symbolism, good imagery, and I see you're a Tolkien fan! You write fanfiction?

-Samantha

ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 4/30/2003

This is a powerful poem. It really conveys an image of what it describes. Nicely done.