Mmm… the desaturation now feels a bit odd, as the difference between the colour of the berry in the bird’s bill and other berries on roughly the same plane is too noticeable to be convincing. And it’s the riot of colour in your first version that makes the picture so vibrant and dynamic. I think this may be a no-win: do you want a beautiful photograph or a competition shot? (I know which I’d prefer! 😉 )