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Review:

Ravenclaw333 says:This is an intriguing story, and you've made a really good start here. You've done exactly what the genre demands - surrounded everything with mystery and suspense,and I have to admit I'm fascinated (and really, really curious) to find out who the killer is. The first part was incredibly dark, and you've captured it very well - it almost gave me chills, particularly the Imperius Curse. Given that you're writing this for the darkness challenge, you've certainly made an excellent start, and the way you've described the killer - twisted, cold, dangerous - is perfect. Really good scene-setting here too - Harry and Ginny as young parents, Ron and Harry as junior Aurors - I'm interested to see how they handle this case, especially given their own personal feelings against Umbridge. Nicely done and I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Lisaa. Sorry for the late response!

I love writing dark stuff. I find it easier than light stuff. So it's great to know that it made an impact!

Umbridge is just the beginning here. And they're professional enough to not let their feelings get in the way. I really hope you read on. Thank you so much for the review!