Hey dear!
I'm from Brazil and I have to say : I LOVED THIS!
I was wondering if I can translate this story to Portuguese and post on my account with credits to you! What you think about?
I will wait your reply!
xoxo.

I haven't decided if I like how fast the story went. I usually read fast cause I want to find out what's going to happen, but with the shorter chapters it didn't take long to get through the story. In any case it was an excellent story. I can't wait to read the sequel. I have a feeling that the look Jane gave at the end of her visit might be explained a little more. The angst-less story is certainly no problem for me. I love the fluff and happily ever after stories.

A lovely fic. Even if I'm a bit sad with the lack of Renesmee around here, and keep having a bit of trouble wraping my mind around the powers some people like you give Bella (I read Breaking Dawn before any fics, so I'm more used to the one in cannon). But still, this fic was deffinitely great, enough romance to last me for a while (I'm romantic to the extreme); though that, of course, doesn't mean I won't be reading the sequel right away, it sounds pretty interesting.

I liked that Jacob got his happy ending too, and the way Charlie got to see Bella again, even if he doesn't understand everything, it's still pretty good.