I absolutely loved how all the characters acted intelligently and in control about all this. Sure, they were all crazy and they were doing dangerous stuff, but they had good reasons and dealt with it in a smart way.

I'm not personally a fan of the dumb bimbo thing. I wanted my characters to retain their intelligence and do what they were doing primarily because of personal desire.

I also liked how you increased the scope of the story gradually, without unloading too much on the reader at the same time. You started small and kept growing it, always adding small elements until it was a completely different story. That made the whole work easy to understand and also gave you the option (in my opinion) to stop at any time, preventing a hanging end should anything go wrong.

Originally I hadn't intended to go anywhere near so far. I was probably going to stop about episode 9-12 originally, when Jess was fully in her 'bimbo' form, but as I kept thinking of new things ended up going a lot further!

Again, please keep the scope tight. I loved the intimacy and the way the story progressed.

If anything, maybe differentiate some of the characters a bit more clearly. Since they change a lot, they can get hard to connect to their former looks. Maybe give each one a color scheme or a unique speech bubble. That might reinforce the power of the transformation.

When it comes to the plot, I love transformation stories, especially about characters taking control of their bodies and turning them into their dreams. The artificiality is part of the process of freeing themselves.

In no particular order, here are some more transformation elements that could come up:

Piercings all over

Muscles and bodybuilding (even with steroids)

Leg lengthening

Pussy and clit pumping

Tongue splitting

Tongue lengthening (Is that even possible?)

Gaining weight for a Brazilian Butt Lift

Bigger thighs

Yoga and flexibility training

Lots of interesting ones on there, but unfortunately a lot of boxes that aren't hugely exciting to me. I prefer the 'skinny bimbo look. Tit's on a stick kind of affair, so thicker thighs and muscles are unlikely to be prevalent. I may through in a supporting character like that though.

I'd like to play further with enchancements though. Leg lengthening is possible as well as tendon shortening and maybe some things I've not thought about...

I'd also love some short glimpses into the characters' day to day lives, how normal people react to them and how their modifications impact their routines. (Bumping into things with newly enlarged boobs or butts, spent some time getting ready for the day or just pandering themselves.)

This is something I should have done and if I have time I will do this in the future. Its just about how much time and effort those scenes require. But yes, I should add more!

Finally, I am a sucker for latex outfits, including bodysuits and masks and I enjoy the idea of dressing down in public but knowing the full sexiness underneath - The lady in the streets/freak in the sheets thing.

Not against either of those things, so definitely thoughts for the future.

Thanks for the feedback, it's really useful to know what people liked or didn't like. I appreciate that.R

Here are some plot ideas that I've been thinking about recently. If any of them inspire you, feel free to take them.

Two college girls somehow come up with the idea that the rather slobby nerd male student is the next Bill Gates or Jeff Bezos and decide to seduce him to get him before he strikes it rich. They figure out his fetishes (guess which ones) and go ahead. Competing, they enhance themselves more and more, doing their best to win him over. However, the guy is actually just a normal dude. He's mostly confused by what is happening, but rolls with it. Once they figure out what is going on, they have to figure out how to solve this, after all, they've been racking up bills for their looks.

A recently laid-off woman inherits a nightclub/bar/stripclub from her aunt which the family ostracized because of her lifestyle choices. Faced with bankruptcy, she takes her chances and tries running the club. She adapts to the new setting, both physically and mentally. After a while, it turns out that her aunt disappeared for very specific reasons which involve the mob. Also, it is unclear whether she's really dead. The main character does get useful advice from a senior stripper who is certainly not her.

A female plastic surgeon and her investor friend take up a Pygmalion-style arrangement and plan to transform a willing woman into his dream lover. As in the play, things escalate in all kinds of ways.

A girl from a very conservative religious environment ends up in a more open and !sinful! environment. She likes it and starts to change. Then, her family shows up and wants to take her back home. Hiding her transformation is a little difficult and hijinx ensue.

A young woman who is rather ugly and feels unsexy gets together with an equally unimpressive partner and they decide to change their lives, fulfilling their dreams of being sexy, rich and awesome.

Here are some plot ideas that I've been thinking about recently. If any of them inspire you, feel free to take them.

Two college girls somehow come up with the idea that the rather slobby nerd male student is the next Bill Gates or Jeff Bezos and decide to seduce him to get him before he strikes it rich. They figure out his fetishes (guess which ones) and go ahead. Competing, they enhance themselves more and more, doing their best to win him over. However, the guy is actually just a normal dude. He's mostly confused by what is happening, but rolls with it. Once they figure out what is going on, they have to figure out how to solve this, after all, they've been racking up bills for their looks.

A recently laid-off woman inherits a nightclub/bar/stripclub from her aunt which the family ostracized because of her lifestyle choices. Faced with bankruptcy, she takes her chances and tries running the club. She adapts to the new setting, both physically and mentally. After a while, it turns out that her aunt disappeared for very specific reasons which involve the mob. Also, it is unclear whether she's really dead. The main character does get useful advice from a senior stripper who is certainly not her.

A female plastic surgeon and her investor friend take up a Pygmalion-style arrangement and plan to transform a willing woman into his dream lover. As in the play, things escalate in all kinds of ways.

A girl from a very conservative religious environment ends up in a more open and !sinful! environment. She likes it and starts to change. Then, her family shows up and wants to take her back home. Hiding her transformation is a little difficult and hijinx ensue.

A young woman who is rather ugly and feels unsexy gets together with an equally unimpressive partner and they decide to change their lives, fulfilling their dreams of being sexy, rich and awesome.

I particularly like the last two. Both of those would be interesting...

A young woman who is rather ugly and feels unsexy gets together with an equally unimpressive partner and they decide to change their lives, fulfilling their dreams of being sexy, rich and awesome.

these ideas are promising. The last one could be very interesting, it could a brother/sister duo or a young couple who just inherits a good chunk of money. They could start to hit the gym, get surgery or try some very expensive experimental hormones. When the money start to ran out, they realized they're hooked to their expensive lifestyle and the body modifications so they could turn their instagram accounts into something more dirty like the models who post nudes and sexy vids on onlyfans.

Eventually they met other camgirls and pornstars who encourage them to post dirtier pics and vids, could start with light lesbian teasing but turn into full hardcore vids since they got more money with them. They could also have a more open relationships, going into swingers party...

Unfortunately not. I will probably be retiring this 'software' when this project is done as its pretty old and useless. Hopefully now I have a more powerful rig I will be able to learn some better stuff and really push some extremes. What for that will take and how long it will be till I can do anything is anyone's guess however.

Thank you! It's quite the ride.

I have to ask, what sort of mods were you thinking? What other changes would you like to see for future projects.

Given I'm probably only a single chapter until this is done, I'm already thinking of the next story, so any suggestion on what people would like more, or less, of, would be great.

Also any ideas for future stories, or angles that I might not have considered, would be well received. Improvements that I can make etc?

I, for one, would like to see a little more focus on partying. For some reason a slow-burn on alcohol and drug corruption appeals to me almost as much as surgically enhanced 'tits-on-a-stick' stories do all by themselves. Put those two together and forget it! You'd be a legend in my book... though, you're unforgettable already. Thank you for sharing all your hard work!