flutist140Your piece was very nice, but the ending needs to have more of an effect on people. Make it like it would be a fianle!! Great job!

8 years ago

DolceBlondeIt's cute but the ending isn't as big as the middle.
two things I would try - moving sections around or make the ending more blended and add complexities.
Maybe a scale?
just a thought.
-caiti