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"Are we the priest who didn't care?" is a very good line. We are the priesthood of all believers and so few understand that. Your poem is touching. I cannot say more as I'm not talented enough to write a poem...and probably not able to critique one, either, but I know a good phrase when I read one! Keep it up!