Working on a Ghost in the Shell project

I'm currently working on a Ghost in the Shell project, which I started a few years ago. Pretty much, it started when I first watched the 1995 anime film and evolved from there. I created a character, whom my project kind of revolves around because there is so much stuff happening to her. I started by drawing 3 pictures, scanning them into photoshop, and coloring them. It then evolved into me writing a long paper filled with just information, such as a backstory, her life, events that are important that happened to her, ect. I am now actually writing my own GitS SAC season script, which my character is pretty much the center of. I've decided to go with 24 or 25 episodes and I've just finished writing Episode 6. When I finish my work and have it all protected for legal purposes, I'll upload it onto my profile so you guys can take a look and give me some feedback.

You know what I think I cant draw it because of the mood and the way she's drawn no emotion in her face which makes it hard for me to draw with nothing to work on The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

Ah, I see what you're saying. The reason I drew her like that is because she really doesn't show much emotion. The reason for this is the life that she's had. She's been militarized since she was like 12 due to the fact that she is a member of a military dictated family. If you would like me to, I can give her some kind of emotion in my next drawing."After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

Gotcha. I'll give her some more emotion in my next drawing. I'm thinking more along the lines of absolute sorrow. And there's a reason for this as well. I should have it done by Monday. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

sorry I just never saw hatsumi smile it just looks wierd to me the drawing at hand is good but i dont think I can draw that Night lover is better at it ask her sorry if I offended your work I cant even draw that The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

Ah, I see what you're saying. Yeah, it's kind of awkward to see her smile. I thought you were putting down my drawings. Sorry for accusing you of that. I'll see if Night lover wants to draw her. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

Sure, if you want to. I've already posted a new topic on the What's on Your Mind thread. But if you want to ask her, that would be much appreciated since I don't know her that well. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

I have a question to propose to you guys: Can cyborgs with full prosthetic bodies cry? I know that Kusanagi had tears fall from her eyes when she dove into that movie director's cyberbrain in the first season of Stand Alone Complex, but that wasn't really her prosthetic body. The reason I'm asking is because I really want Hatsumi to cry at an emotional part of my season that's coming up, but I don't know if full prosthetic bodies have the ability to generate tears. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

but she dowsnt have reflexes in her eyes right then she only needs to blink cause af dirt or something in her eye and it just brushes it off with no wet or tears The Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

ok everytime they drink what ever the H2O from it is syphened out and added natraul salt to it and it is there tears.... there just go with thatThe Greatest Clan In Death and Universe... The Zombaukto Clan

Yeah. It's going to be one hell of a ride when you guys read this, which I am now finished with Episode 17. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

It varies. Some are fairly short while others are quite long. It's nigh impossible for me to judge how long 30 minutes would be when typing up a script. Like the first episode is pretty short and straightfoward, its pupose is to introduce Hatsumi and Yoshimura. Whereas Episode 8 or 9 is the longest so far because its purpose is to introduce an important plot twist. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

Maybe. I've gotten the story figured out, but the thing that I occassionally have trouble with is how to portray a plot twist. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

Ah, it's not that simple. Some times, plot twists are tragic, like when Akira Kawashima was killed. There's still after effects from that that the characters are still dealing with. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

Well, that's actually some of my plot lol. Yoshimura is a bad guy who is the one who shuts down the Kaneren A.I. at the end, saving Hatsumi and Kusanagi's life. Hatsumi's brother is a bad guy being controlled by the A.I. Masahiro Takeda is a good guy turned terrorist turned back to good guy, and dies. "After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)

All right, I just have to tell you this badass part in Episode 10. Basically Masahiro Takeda and 6 hired mercenaries steal Hatsumi's personal Arm Suit. Like Takeda uses a .50 caliber sniper rifle to shoot the fuel line on Section 9's tilt rotor, forcing it to prematurely land. Section 9 then finds Takeda's armored van abandoned. Well, one of Takeda's mercenaries gives away the ambush that they were planning by cocking his assault rifle too loudly. Then a firefight erupts between Section 9 and Takeda and his men. Takeda uses a SAW machine gun with high velocity bullets and totally shoots the hell out of the boulders that Section 9 is using for cover. Fortunately, Takeda's gun jams and he has to abandon it for the assault rifle on his dead comrades body. Kusanagi tells him that's it's over and he should come peacefully, but it's not! One of Takeda's men pilots Hatsumi's Arm Suit and uses an anti-tank minigun against Section 9. You'll find out what happens when you read the script."After a thousand battles, one only sees death!" -Chaos Space Marine Predator (Warhammer 40,000)