Again stunning! The first stanza with it's vivid imagery made me think of the song "We Will Rock You" by Queen because the imagery of the poem made me think of the imagery in the song. I do like the idea of keep getting up and fighting because that's what people have to do when they go through a rough patch, as they say 'there's always a light at the end of the tunnel'. And as for the 2 lines at the end...pure genius. Stunning piece.

I really like the last two lines of this piece, and the idea of hell as clouded. It's an interesting shift from the cliche images usually associated with it. I think the first stanza might flow better without "all" before "your plans", but overall the flow to the poem is really strong.

Thank you so much for your review, sorry it took me a while to get back to you! This week has been ridiculously busy.