Theme rejected, learning typography, spacing.

Hi everyone, i have made theme, and it was rejected. So i decided not to sell it, but give it free for download. Next, I decided to make second – new theme, after read some post on this forums, check top rated themes i decided to write own dedicated slider and after many hours of work new theme called alice raised. But bad thing happend – it was rejected (hard rejected). I know, i’m not best designer and I need some help, any sugestions will be helpful for me. Now I’m reading about typography, spacing. I need to improve it in my template. Would You give me some advice about it?

Hi everyone,
Just to let you all know that unfortunately the theme above is copied and that the self-coded, custom slider that was written by this guy is unfortunately not original and was copied from humaan.com.au.
I’m all for people trying to create themes to sell on TF but when it’s basically copying someone else’s hard work and claiming it as your own it’s going a bit far.
Cheers all.