Oh wow, it was good. Like really good. Made me feel really, uh, breathless I guess to be safe. I love how it's intensifies through each break. And it gets to the point you don't want anyone else involved in their intimacy. And right at the end, it was like, wow. My feelings for the pairing and the story has increased by a lot. Thank you so much for writing it, and second person makes it more interesting, if not allowing the reader to be a part of it, somewhat, like a third person viewing, yet sensing how Wally feels. Yeah, this was an excellent job Val!