I think being 'funny' is over-rated. Having fun is important, however. There is a lot of 'fun' in this piece. As mentioned in above comments, the lighting is so very good. And the lighting in your 'safe' illustration below is also excellent. Beautiful pieces.

Thanks for commenting on my blog! I love your work. Your colors are very delicate and the lighting is beautiful. I think you've done a good job with the children's expressions and gestures. Keep up the good work! :)