Monday, February 15, 2016

On the Shoulders of Giants Part III

My tribute to those writers who influence my writing.

My third author is James Fenimore Cooper. I didn't pick up Cooper until I was in my early 20's and boy what a find! He is the master of the cliffhanger in so many ways and while that is only one component of his gifts, that is the one I tend to 'borrow' the most. His sense of timing keeps me moving from chapter to chapter, and when anyone says to me, "I read your book, J. Lee, and it was a page turner!", I smile and say a very quiet, "Thank you, James Fenimore Cooper."

Cooper also invokes the Divine in Nature, seeing all things as holy. He fords the Native American Culture and the main hero in a powerful relationship that transcends the historical fiction where it is set. I could go on and on.

But his cliffhangers are the best. Hands down.
In my Middle Grade novel The Sculptured Rocks, it is 1971 and my protagonist, Dan Buchanan, is starting his summer after 6th grade playing shortstop, enjoying his paper route and helping his financially strapped mom give fake ghost tours in their "haunted" house in a small New Hampshire beach town famous for its ghosts. In the summer, the town floods with tourists, and Dan usually can avoid a local townie bully named Krenshaw.
In Chapter 11, Dan is biking around town.

At 3:00, I biked through the streets
seeing who was around and looked for some of the kids from my class. I biked
downtown, passing people on the sidewalks, many strangers, red now from a
sunburn that had surprised them. They were back in the stores buying
Moisturizers or Aloe or whatever else was supposed to ease their pain. I burned
easily too, but somehow, after one or two bouts, I was a brown tanned native
who just got darker throughout the summer. I watched the people walking and
laughing, some eating ice cream, many of them surprisingly not at the beach,
and I wondered who they were and what their lives were like and more often than
not, despite the smiles and the relaxed air, I saw that most of it was fake and
that inside, they were really quite unhappy.

I wanted a hotdog. Cape McAllister had
this famous silly hotdog stand called “Sal’s” that was on a side street, wedged
between a Bed and Breakfast and a cheesy sundries shop that sold stale candy
and tacky postcards. That shop always smelled of cigarette smoke and many
tourists went there in the morning to buy a paper. Across the street were the
dunes and the beach, so “Sal’s” was in a prime location. Most people went to
the beach first, lay down their towels and when the mood struck them, wandered
over in their bathing suits and bought a hotdog. “Sal’s” had no tables or
chairs; it was literally a stand with one window for ordering food and another
window for picking it up.

Sally, the owner, was close to sixty
years old, but boy, she loved selling hotdogs and mostly, I suspected, she
loved yakking to the tourists and the locals because she knew only one speed
and that was slow. She’d stand there wearing this hat that was in the shape of
a large hot dog in a bun and combined with her thick jowly face it was like an
English bulldog was taking your order. Her smile could light up the sky,
though, and she had the thick New England accent of someone who just stepped
off Monhegan Island. Luckily, she hired two college students every year to work
there as well. She took the orders and the other workers hustled around her.
“Sal’s” menu was enormous in that she didn’t just sell a plain hotdog. There
were Philadelphia Dogs, and Boston Dogs, and New Orleans Dogs, all variations
on the same theme. She put the dog in a roll and then it got topped with all
kinds of crazy combinations like hot peppers, or cream cheese, or baked beans
or corn chips. The myriad of combinations she concocted would have bamboozled a
mathematician. They were great hot dogs and as a result, there was always a
line.

I was number six, and I was predicting
how long it would take until I got to be number one when Curt Krenshaw biked
right down the street not more than two feet away. I crunched down to hide
behind a big man in front of me, but it didn’t work. He saw me. He braked to a
screechy stop, saw an opportunity, threw his bike against a telephone pole and
got in line right behind me.

“How ya doin’, cream puff?” he said just
under my ear. His voice was all chummy and sweet which sent chills up my back.
“Whaddya doin’ out here without your mommy?”

I ignored him. I stood straighter and
never looked behind me. I stared at the man in front of me, right at his back,
like he was my uncle and I was with some visiting relatives.

Krenshaw knew otherwise. His voice never
rose above a slightly warm murmur, but I heard every word. “C’mon cream puff,
talk to me. I haven’t seen you in awhile and I was getting worried. I thought
maybe you might have left to go somewhere on vacation. I’m glad to see you
haven’t gone anywhere, sissy boy, because I’m here to make your summer a living
hell.”

Then I got mad. My fists clenched at my
sides and my back stiffened. My breathing got heavier and I was seeing only one
color.

“That’s it, muffin,” Krenshaw coached, “get
mad. You want to deck me, I can see your little fists, well c’mon, you and me,
right here.” His voice never rose in volume, it stayed that same, awful,
chilling appeal that he delivered behind my right ear. It was almost demonic.
“You scared? You scared to be seen fighting in public like this, cream pie?”

Meanwhile the line had moved forward, and
I was number two. I didn’t know whether to step out of line and cause him to
make the first swing, or stay in line and pretend everything was fine. I chose
the latter thinking he might get tired of taunting me and just go away.

“Get lost,” I said, but my throat was dry
and my voice was shaking so it came out sounding, ‘et ost’.

“What did you say, sweetness?” he crooned
and I smelled his breath, foul with cigarette smoke and there was an odd smell
coming from his clothes, a mixture of rampant sweat and garbage. “I didn’t hear
you, do you mind repeating that, cupcake?”

“Hi, Danny!” Sal hollered out to me as
the man in front of me moved on. “What’ll you have?”

“Hi, Sal,” I said, trying to keep from
crying in anger or fear. I forced myself to smile and ordered a New England Dog
which came with ketchup, mustard, tartar sauce, and fried clams sprinkled on
top, with a small soda. My hands were shaking as I pulled out the cash from my
right pocket and there was no way to hide that when I handed over the money.
Sal looked at me with an odd expression, and if she could read my mind the way
Tom could, I would have confessed everything.

“You okay there, bucko?” she asked,
noticing my hands.

“Fine!” I said, a little too loudly, took
the change and moved to the other window. The college kids were fast and in
about forty-five seconds, I had the dog in one hand and my soda in another. I
tried my best to look relaxed, eating half of the dog in one gulp, and slurping
through a straw so I could swallow it and watched as Krenshaw bought a small
drink and moved toward me. Jeez, this kid didn’t quit.

“No, I’m not kidding, Dan,” he smirked,
“how’s your summer goin’? You like playing baseball again this year?”

I chewed and glared at him.

“Didn’t you hear me, cupcake?”

“Don’t call me that.”

“Call you what? Cupcake? Would you prefer
Creampuff? You should tell me these things, Dan, or else, how are we ever going
to be friends?”

His voice, that nauseating sweetness and
that look of pure evil in his eyes and the knowledge that at any moment, with
him standing so close to me, he could strike, like a scorpion, and not give a
rip about who saw him.

“Shut up,” I said, “and leave me alone.”

“And who’s going to make me, sissy boy,”
he smirked, “you?”

My stomach was in knots and I didn’t know
how to get out of this situation. Tourists were passing around us, nobody
noticed anything, nobody stopped mid-stride to ask, “Hey, is this kid bothering
you?” To everyone else, we were two small-town, dirty locals, maybe even
friends.

I had finished my hotdog and the drink
and I tossed the cup into a nearby garbage can, trying as always to look
casual, unaffected, but my knees were starting to shake and I didn’t know how
long I could pull this off. I walked away.

I got about five feet when Krenshaw
pulled up next to me and said, “Hey, now, not so fast, mama’s boy, that’s not
polite!” I was heading away from the beach and walking past the elegant B&B
with its beautiful white picket fence and the gardens full of roses and lupines
and daisies. Five guests were sitting on the large wrap around porch, in the
shade, feeling the sea breezes pass by and they were drinking lemonade. I
looked at them for help, not so much because of Krenshaw but because I thought
I was going to bust it in my pants. We made it past the picket fence and I
stopped in the tiny B&B driveway where a discreet sign said “For Guests
Only”. Something was brewing in me and I didn’t know how to control it.

“Next time I see you, sissy boy,”
Krenshaw promised, “I’m going to beat the living crap out of you. You’re the
kind of little creampuff I hate seeing around this town and you better believe-”

I grabbed Krenshaw hard around his left
arm and threw him down on the gravel driveway. His reflex was strong and he
clamped onto me like a dog. Together we hit the dirt and I fell on top of him
and it was then, in front of the five astonished guests standing up and peering
over the porch railing that I threw up all over his face.

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Passionate Writer of the Andy Mackpeace time travel series: IN THE NICK OF TIME, THE TIME OF HIS LIFE, and ALL THE TIME IN THE WORLD.
THE PROMISE OF LIVING is my first YA coming of age novel. My latest Middle Grade novel is THE SCULPTURED ROCKS.
I am an actor, playwright, and Astrologer.
www.mysticalisle.net is my Astrology website.