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Review:

taylorj828 says:Cool last battle. Some good details. The lines of * sort of get bothersome, but other than that, it was all pretty good. I liked seeing all the different scenes of the battle. Seems crazy and chaotic. Cool spell with Harry's wand sucking up the AK curses from Voldemort. Like that Lupin was there to help. I'm not sure if I can see McGonagall leering at Voldemort, lol, but we can imagine it, heh.

Nice beginning. I'll try to come back and read some more as I have time. (o:

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reading! All that I was pretty much trying to convey you seem to have picked up on brilliantly! The leer seems out of character, but it was my first fanfic chapter ever. I wanted to 'stretch my wings' so to speak. I will try to update as fast as I can!