26th Oct 2014, 9:12 AM

There is nothing wrong with slow-rolling the quest / title. It's a particular feature of your comic that we get no clue what's going on to begin with. Still, there is a sense of fulfillment here. Great work!

26th Oct 2014, 10:58 AM

The rain definitely adds to the ominous effect of the scene, along with adding to the visual appeal of this moment. Loving how this comic is going so far, definitely expecting one wild spiritual, philosophical journey up ahead.

27th Oct 2014, 10:13 AM

27th Oct 2014, 11:03 AM

The interesting thing about the Maya (to me) is that they didn't have this concept of a heaven. You lived, you died and after that, you belong to the lords of Xibalba for as long as it takes to fail their trials and quench their thirst.