hey well good job on the story but i think you should continue the story.
its really good and it have me the shivers at the end. The red eyes staring at them wooo scary... To know about me i am obessed with james/lily stories i love them so much and they are all on my favorite list sooo i really love your story!!! GOOD JOB but i would really like it if u contine with the story.! :D

Very OOC, Lily and James were nothing like they "really" are, but I guess you weren't aming for a canon story so much? Other than that it was very adorable, the red eyes confuse me, but it's a nice way to end it, because its so different to the rest of the story. And i think it's really good that you have your grammar etc. right. Nice job, shall read your other stuff in search for more cuteness!

Author's Response: yeah, this story was written way before OotP came out, so that explains how not like Lily and James they are... I should prolly make an Author's Note of that in the first chapter or something, huh? ;)

Hey guys, this is the author! Thanks for your reviews, I lurv you all! I don\'t think I\'m going to write much for what happens directly after \"First Kiss\", not soon anyway, but I\'m working on a new story that chronicles what happens during Lily and James\' 7th year, after they graduate, when the get married... etc. Please read that, it\'s called \"Lily and James: Star Cross\'d\", or something of that nature. ::grinage:: thank you! Love, Emlyn