Need another minority student's help reading my personal statement

I know that there are people here that do not agree with "using" ethnic minority status to get into law school. Personally, I am not "using" my minority status to get into law school, it is a basic make-up of who I am. I can't escape or avoid it.

So if there is anyone out there who is sincerely willing to read a personal statement that contains much reference to being a minority, an immigrant, first-gen college grad and aspiring law student...please send me your email. I just need some input, any input on grammar or sentence structure, and maybe some content.

DOWNY COOLEY

only white people are racist and create stereotypes. White people must have invented terms like "cracker," because only white people can be racist. If you're a minority you have no capacity to prejudge or stereotype others.