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Midnight spark says:Hey, it's Midnight with your review!
First of all, SQUEAL!!! You are the first to submit, and you surely did a GREAT job! You passed, girl! If it's a song-fic or a one-shot written based on a song, I usually listen to that song while reading. Just to see if it matches. And I'm really happy to say that this matched perfectly with the song! I felt as if I was actually there with James and Megan. I usually don't prefer James II stories. Give me Al Potter or James Potter II, I ALMOST every time go for the Al. But after reading this story, I have a feeling I'm going to choose the James one quite often.

Don't mean to be a grammar nazi (seeing that I used to spell grammar wrong until class nine), but a slight problem was there. just a small pimple of a problem: you wrote 'disgustingly girl', but the correct grammar would be 'disgustingly GIRLY.' See, just a tiny pimple.

I know I promised favorite author and story for the prize winners, but this story just made me squeal like i was 13 again, so I'm going to do it anyway!

PS: My favorite part of this was the last lines.

SO SWEET!

Ahem.

That's all, I guess. Again, great job, loved it!

Author's Response: Hey there! :)

Awww, thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it and yeah, I wrote it whilst listening to the song so I could get it exactly like the song that it's based off! And I love this song of Taylor's so much, it's one of my favourites! Well, I'm happy that I managed to sway your opinion on James II already ;D These are the reason I love him too!

Oh my God! I saw that after it had been validated and then I uploaded a chapter to one of my other stories so now I have to wait until that's validated before I can go back and change! But thanks for pointing it out :)

Yay! Thank you so much! I'd really ecstatic that you enjoyed it so much :D

And yeah, that's my favourite part of it as well! I knew I had to incorporate a little of the song lyrics in there too. Thank you for a lovely review!
~Aimee xxx