I have decided to start off on a new dream novel series, this time basing it on Hino Matsuri's Vampire Knight. Well, it is actually an original story, so not much is connected with the original story excapt I used the character names as well as the idea of vampires and vampire hunters xD(So yeah, if you havent read Vampire Knight, you can still read this story on its own)

Things to note that are different from original:

1. This is set in 19th century2. Ichiru is actually a healthy guy3. Zero is not a vampire4. The heroine is an original character5. Kaname and Zero does not know each other in my story5. They dont study in Cross Gakuen

As the daughter of the famous vampire hunter Yagari clan, the heroine (you) took on your first mission and realised, maybe hunting a vampire was not exactly like what you have read from books or have been taught in theory. 'He' was a vampire that was different to all, and while not knowing what was the right thing to do, those that are around you may not really be who you thought they were.

Didn't find this thread before because I still get lost here ^^;;;Anyway, continuing from what I write on your LJ.. (yay for spoiler tags!)

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Yes you did kinda make Ichiru look ebil, especially with the horse stabbing and all XD But you know me, the more ebil the character, the more I like him (call it a bizzare uke trait of mine, lol). But I like it that he's the more teasing, straight-forward type (tsundere twins are a big no-no) and that you still kept the rich sibling complex intact in this story. Nice~!!

What I don't quite understand is how that horse event synchronized with the vampire attack (the way you describe the garr vampires makes me think of those in Blood+, but that's just me.. ^^). You said that Zero isn't a vampire right? Hmm hmmm, could it be that Ichiru's a vampire? Haha, but that's just some random guess. It would be a nice twist though to see a different twin be vampire. And considering Zero is part of the love triangle, I know you won't kill him shame though *cough, joking* But what I do like about your Zero is that he's not emo!!!! Waiiii!!!!! That's a plus point on its own~ Maybe I will like your Zero better than the original, hohoho..

As for Kira = sexy and Kaname = beautiful, lolololz, I guess it's already a part of you to subconsciously write that XD

you mean you didnt understand why all of a sudden they were attacked by vampires? o_O

and damm...maybe I will just let Zero die and never come back alive and it will just be Ichiru vs Kaname instead xD;;yes, I am VERY tempted to do so

and hahaha, yes, I didnt make Zero very emo because he seriously has got no reason to be emo now that he is no longer a vampire. But I keep having tsundeLen popping up in my head too when I write him xD

and forbidden love is :"D

avvy and siggy featuring Gackt Kamui, the hawt 40 year old =w=thank you yori for making the set for me :"D

I understand about them being attacked ^^;; What confused me for a bit is how Ichiru somehow(?) predicted that it was going to happen by saying things like "He will lay his life for you". Or maybe it was all just a coincidence and I'm confusing you right now V.VSorry for my complicated way of thinking, lol.

Kekekeke, I know how you're very tempted to do that XD Don't resist the temptation *bricked by Zero shippers* And lolol, yes Zero does remind me a lot of tsundeLen. I guess tsunderes will always hunt you on your dream novel career XDDD

If you want to find more random blabbings of otome games you can look at my livejournal if you want~I moved...it's called Peaceful Grace.I've started a new blog at wordpress it's called Reaching Towards You since my LJ is full of my tweets. If you want to look at pictures you can look at my tumblr nothing special...

I now have a new reason for admiring you since I suck at writing action sequences, lol. Oh my, Zero disappeared for the whole chapter XD But thank you for the Kaname and Ichiru love~ You totally got me with Rido! Never expected that out of the possible scenarios I thought. So he's like the last boss of this story? 8DI love the mysteries surrounding every character. You bet I'm most curious on Kaname and Kelpie Rido's relationship. When they were fighting, it sounded like a married couple's fight XD

It's official that I like your miko heroine better than Yuuki~ X3 She's vulnerable yet strong at the same time. I have to admit though, when Byakko popped out I was going "EEEEEeeeeeehhhhhHHHH???" X infinity and was hoping Tomomasa would show 8D

If you want to find more random blabbings of otome games you can look at my livejournal if you want~I moved...it's called Peaceful Grace.I've started a new blog at wordpress it's called Reaching Towards You since my LJ is full of my tweets. If you want to look at pictures you can look at my tumblr nothing special...

If you want to find more random blabbings of otome games you can look at my livejournal if you want~I moved...it's called Peaceful Grace.I've started a new blog at wordpress it's called Reaching Towards You since my LJ is full of my tweets. If you want to look at pictures you can look at my tumblr nothing special...

I agree that out of the four beings, Byakko is the most elegant. I'm now imagining how Yagari would look with Seiryuu.. 8D

Hoho, perhaps it is you who is the culprit for the Zero-is-ded rumor XD *kidding*I think it's both a good and a bad thing that fans sometimes can't separate truth from fanfics. It's good for the authors since it means the author portrayed the characters perfectly to the point that their stories are considered real. But fans really should get some facts right before jumping to stupid conclusions... ==;;

I know you won't kill Zero. Where's the fun in that when you can torture him more if he lives? >Dmaybe Sara took him

Who I fangirl over:I can't choose anymore since otome games are getting more popular LOL

Posted 03 December 2008 - 04:35 AM

midorihimesama:

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Well...I would think Shizuka would kidnap him instead...like she did with Ichiru in canon.

kaho:

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I think I interpreted it wrong since a whole bunch of code errors were in my way...I'm using firefox...I'll go read it again in explorer. I can see Touga-nii having Seiryuu... so I guess Yagari papa and mama have Genbu and Suzaku~

If you want to find more random blabbings of otome games you can look at my livejournal if you want~I moved...it's called Peaceful Grace.I've started a new blog at wordpress it's called Reaching Towards You since my LJ is full of my tweets. If you want to look at pictures you can look at my tumblr nothing special...

Who I fangirl over:Seems I reached the point where they are too many ...

Posted 03 December 2008 - 10:16 AM

Disclaimer: I do not read/watch/whatever Vampire Knight and know almost nothing about the story, just random spoilers here and there.

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I feel bad for Zero...NOT > Bring moar Kaname-sama on kaho!!! >w<

Also, this whole gods thing...can't help but think of the Haruka counterparts 8D So Hinoe/Benkei married Liz/Atsumori *bricked and runs for life*Will we be seeing Kirin too? 8D

Oh, and I spotted a couple of minor typos if you want to fix them~

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Ch1Wasn’t she just smiling, or even fighting with Zero an while ago?Ch2 p1A week ago, your had a few broken ribs and now, it appears they have healed and only your legs are still broken.”“Both Duke and Duchess of Seiran had no children (missing end ")

Who I fangirl over:Seems I reached the point where they are too many ...

Posted 03 December 2008 - 10:27 AM

I wanted to make that clear because I won't be able to speculate on the story basing myself on the original, so yes, I'm seeing this as an original story ^^

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Like seriously, why should I like tsundelen's long lost brother? XD I did go deredere when he brought the flower during the date, then I remembered his tsun acts and forgot about him XDWhile Kaname-sama is hawt, is kewl, and is sweet >w< and he's not the heroine's long lost brother I HOPE BECAUSE I'D KILL YOU IF YOU PUT INCEST IN IT

Who I fangirl over:Seems I reached the point where they are too many ...

Posted 03 December 2008 - 10:59 AM

Yes Yes Yes bring the Shishin in XD
Then you can set up one of those poll you like so much, and we can pick our favourite Ten no/Chi no out of the four games and have a whole new set 8D
*runs away before getting skinned alive*