You have a real talent for writing. This chapter has been very enjoyable. I have but one suggestion. Hermione seems to lose her wand every 30 seconds or so. She is actually saved by Draco here. I think she is a much better fighter and far more practical than this. She just seems so inept. Maybe that is why the bad guys got here so easily in the first place?

Author's Response: thank you. im really glad that you like it and yes, i do admit that hermione loses her wand quite a bit. it's not truly a reflection of the character rather than im not much of an "action-adventure" writer, so that type of fault is what comes to mind most ^_^

I love that Draco was remorseful when seeing the Aurors killed by his hand. So sad, really... I was hoping Hermione would've held his hand for a second... but I understand... there were probably too many witness and all... ;}

I love that Draco had plans... and they worked... and you know I love a good fight... Fight! Fight! Fight! LOL!

Bring on as many chaps as you want...!

Thanks so much for such a 'different' and suspenseful story!

Go Dramione!

Dark Whisper

P.S. I've got a few posted now...

Author's Response: thank you!!!

lol, oh yes, the witness! can't have it all blown that hermione's..daresay..grown /fond/ of him *shifty eyes* lol

hahaa, bring on the fights! draco will have no problems taking them all on of course!

lol, well, i'm pretty sure the fic will end either the next chap or chap 12, but the sequel is awaiting! 5, almost 6 chaps done already :)

glad that you like it, and i saw the fics that you have up. havent had time to read yet unfortunately. life as a college student = GAH!!! BUT im going home this weekend so guess who gets to read things ^_^

until next time :) hopefully i'll be able to get some reading done this weekend as well :)

Ron's so cool !! Yep you should write a fanfiction about Ron lol ! Just please not a Ron/Hermione, I'm allergic lol !!
Poor Atkins, you're cruel ^^. It was a difficult choice he had to make, I hope his familly will be freed.

Anyway...Draco's just so awesome! It's good that he's staying to help instead of just running away. He can run away later ;). Would Hermione go with him or be the one looking for him? (Trying to guess the sequel lol)

I'm not as sad that it's ending as I would be if there wasn't a sequel, but still pretty sad :(.

10/10

P.S. How are you going to guess the ending to my story if you only know I based it on Hide and Seek? You don't know characters or anything ;) lol.

Author's Response: lol i posted it pretty late. by the time i did you would've been asleep already. so, you woke up to a surprise, yey!

isnt he great?! oh draco, how we luv thee :) as for how the sequel shall play out, you're asking great questions! i'll say that you're..a little bit off. keep guessing, won't tell if you're right or wrong or not, but if you're hot or cold ^_^

I absolutely LOVEDD this chapter! I know I say that for almost every review but the chapters just keep getting better and better! I'm so glad they got the wristbands off in time :).
Please update soon!
xoxo

Author's Response: thank you!! im so glad that you like it! and yey for not dying by electrocution! ^_^