loved chapter 7 (the one with the shakespeare,... not the only reason that i loved it, although it definately did add something) but it was extremely well written, almost poetic in sections. its funny to say that about a fanfic, haha.

anyway, good job. it was cool reading something that wasnt too over the top with character exaggeration.

i thought that at parts (chapt 6?) crane seemed a little stiff when he was telling the story (?), but it still worked...

have you seen disco pigs? i mean, i assume your a cillian murphy fan, and besided being a brilliant performance, its probably one of my favorite scripts...