that was so malefic and sexual, i love it. just a few things though, your grammar and capitalisation was inconsistant, i don't know if that was intentional or not. and the first sentence of the second paragraph; "I think the nurse was a dead one...hung around her", the "hung around her" part doesn't make sense. it might just be me, but i just thought i'd point it out.

but this is wonderful, you evoke the right amount of sexual images without it sounding trashy. oh yes, and kudos for the awesome title :)