I am a Year 5 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Miss Ashley.

Wednesday, 7 June 2017

Should fidget spinner be allowed in school

Title:should fidget spinner be allowed in school __________________________________________

Introduction:

I think that fidget spinner should not be allowed in school because they can be dangerous and it could causes chokes.fidget spinner can be less money because they can break very fast that why it is less money.fidget spinner can make kids just focus on that it can be not that loud but it can be bad for others because that don’t get work done too.

First paragraph:

O

I think that fidget spinner should not be allowed in school because they can be dangerous and it could causes chokes.

R

I think when because play with it can be bad causes there are dangerous parts that you can choke on because it can pop out of the fidget spinner.

E

When a girl was playing with her fidget spinner she fought it was not clean so she fought she can clean as she put the tiny bit out she started to clean as she was cleaning it got stuck in her throat and she almost died.

O

I think that fidget spinner should not be allowed in school because they can be dangerous and it could causes chokes.

Second paragraph:

O

fidget spinner can be less money because they can break very fast that why it is less money.

R

I think it just a waste of money also if you buy 4 and it break it just of waste of money and yo buy another and then it breaks again.

E

It when my friend she decided to get a fidget spinner because she fought it was cool so she went to the shop and bought one as she was playing it broke so she decided not to buy one again.

O

fidget spinner can be less money because they can break very fast that why it is less money

Third paragraph:

O

.fidget spinner can make kids just focus on that it can be not that loud but it can be bad for others because that don’t get work done too.

R

I think that it just not let kids focus on their work and then they have to stay in and just finish and they just get bored and play with it and then they just don’t care about work.

E

When amon and saia was working with their group i think they decided to play with their fidget spinner as there were doing it they were not helping his group as he knew that miss ashley was looking he stop and started to do work.

O

fidget spinner can make kids just focus on that it can be not that loud but it can be bad for others because that don’t get work done too.

Conclusion:

Summarise the 3 ideas

It think it is dangerous for others they could choke,they also can not focus on their work and just play with the fidget spinner and they just broke ever seconds and it is a waste of money.