I don't like the way Harry killed someone. He wouldn't do that. Not unless it was Voldemort. He's too noble to do that. Sorry if it's a bit harsh i'm just telling you what i think. Any way, oh could Voldemort get Ginny? Men can't go up into the girl's dorms. My rating is 6/10. It came down because of the killing part. This is 6/10 for the whole story btw.

I love this different reality it was inspiring even if you feel it was not your best,if that is so i hope my worst is this good!It was a great plot , iv'e been looking for storys that have the dead of the books comentary so it was perfect for me
10/10

ok, i'm sooooooooooo glad he's not gonna go to azkaban, that kinda scared me for a minute, though harry potter cannot go to prison it's just uncalled for, under any curcumstances. magnificant job by the way.