I'm loving the TSK.
What keeps bugging me even from the first arc...What did Michiru's coin represent?
She seemed to be the only one, we-the readers, was not shown.
Maybe you have something planned..idk..

But either way, can't wait for the next battles x3

Zelly

Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2013

Please I love your story I can't wait for the next chapter and the other arcs. Just Fabulous!

Another great story!
You really put up details to extreme and that's rare
I love how things turned out
And you put depth
And with that, you planted headache to my head :p
But I still love trying to understand
English is not my daily language, so your words are alien to me sometime, but it made sense to me after some thoughts
One thing though, if TSK is your baby, it's one hell of serious baby :p

I want to first say that this story has me on the edge of my seat waiting to see how everything will turn out. You've done a brilliant job creating this entire universe and I applaud you for conveying it all so well. I've read quite a few (more like tons) of Sailor Moon fanfiction and I have to say your story ranks right up at the top for me. It's amazing to me what you've done with the story line and just expanded it into your own creation.

I really really enjoy trying to figure out where you're leading the story before you reveal what is going on. The confusion you create that leaves everyone scratching their heads thinking what the heck is going on is awesome and it really makes the story that much better.

I also love how you've used the flashbacks and other such devices to help the plot move along while creating a whole new set of questions for the ones you just answered.

I can't wait for you to update, I've become thoroughly hooked on this story and look forward to reading all of the arcs. Keep up the amazing work, and hope all is well with you.

I really enjoy reading this series and I love the aspect with the children and the mixed powers, it is very unique in fact I find very little about this series unoriginal.

I would however love to see more Rei/Minako interaction. You introduced Yumi to the story before their relationship was even really confirmed and I find that as I read Rei has seemed very detached and unemotional in regards to Yumi, Minako, and Yuuki. My impression of Rei and Minako's relationship is very forced almost as if the are together because of necessity instead of genuine emotions.

In my opinion their relationship should be much more emotional. You refer to Rei as passion yet their is a distinct lack of it in regards to her relationship with Minako at least until this chapter. The epitome of a good story involving the Rei/Minako pairing would be an intensley passionate relationship full of understanding and embracing each other's faults and strengths.

I've always pictured Rei as the personfication of darkness, because like Rei darkness is often ill conceived and misunderstood. Rei can be seen as resentful and unforgiving in the same manner darkness can be seen as malicous in frightnening. But in all reality darkness can be manipulated to hide behind like Rei hides behind a mask of indifference and anger. Darkness is also feared because it lacks light in a similar way that Rei lacks light or more specifically hope and trust. I've always viewed Minako as Rei's light, they are different like night and day yet they have no distinction without the other no reason for existing. They belong together like the love and passion they embodied.

Yo! Welcome back... mmm.. shorter and somehow easyer to follow than the last one... thou i miss the monster chaps But its been a while since you have writen i take it everything is geting in order for you, and like you said you will bring the monster back in gear... XD Anyhow all in all good chap, KEEP IT UP!

I've been meaning to leave a review on this story. I read The Sailor Kids and loved it. I think you have continuously evolved in your writing. I can tell a slight difference in your writing now. It is more detailed at the least. I love reading this because it has all my favorite pairings plus the kids of those said pairings. I wonder which kid is going to end up with the other :) lol. Anyways...one of your reviewers made a point...you didn't mention anything about Michiru's coin. It makes me wonder if you have something planned with her. I'm excited to read more of your writings. I think you will make a great author. Hopefully soon!

WOW it took me 3 hours to finish reading it and that was doing all i have to do. VERY LONG chap but im understanding a bit more whats going on. lol 6 years is a lot and the babies... actually kids are so adorable!

and the Paradoxes here were just awesome which i may say i will borrow them not for a story but as an entry to my journal, that and what Cade told Hotaru at least the first paragraph. you have been able to express a lot of my own thoughts with those words and all. so i thank you for it, very deep.

Now what got me a bit out of sort here was that as you went by each of the girls to look for their coins in flashbacks you did not give the one of Michiru at all.

The longest Chap yet and i loved every bit of it, you know i will keep at it until the end... another thing you could do its send a short message to some of the ppl who read the first Arc at least the ones you think that matter the most. sometimes they don't put to know the authors alerts and all and trust me if it wasn't by shear coincidence i would not bee reading this story today.

YOUR BACK ... AND OMFG what has Setsuna done? i think she has lost it... i mean come on... Saeko was right puberty is hitting early damn... lot of thougts in my mind cant really get them still... be great chap and KEEP IT UP AND UPDATE SOON!

OF GUARD ? DUDE YOU HAVE CONFUSED ME MORE THAN EVER IN THIS ONE! i mean in one moment you mention Saria when she was not supposed to be there and then you show her with Setsuna. Then describing something you totally made it a mumbo-jumbo thing that i had to read it 7 times to actually get it, and the dream DON'T LET ME START WITH IT! oh GOD, the most confusing thing ever, all in one chap. girl you sure have a way to make my mind run every where. but all in all a lot of things were explained and that is a good thing. and WELCOME BACK