I was enjoying this little tidbit when the words ran out... Something must be done to repair the deficit. One of the really surprising things here is the use of small detail to bring the tale to full vibrant life. I was especially struck with by the description of the violinist, it seemed to perfectly placed and the tone was eloquent. Please consider writing more on this story.

bogus chapter 5 . 5/21/2005

Nice story! I have a character in simular prediment-sp- with Doc Ock... like how your is! Can't wait to read Chess Game... so will we see Ock be ock and show some anger? :) Nice story! God has given you much talent.

Please, please, please continue this story. Its one of the best fanfics I have read.

a fan chapter 5 . 1/8/2005

THIS IS GREAT! I LOV EIT! PLEASE CONTINUE! PLEASE?

Heather chapter 5 . 11/20/2004

Great story. I have to admit, I had no idea where you were going to take this from the first chapter, but I like how it's turned out. The growing interaction between Abbie and Otto is great. I hope that the arms begin to understand Abbie so that they become friends. Update soon please!