Oh my goodness, in the beginning I was confused because of the sex changes... It boggled my mind for a couple minutes, then I realized everyone was changed, which made it a lot easier... It's interesting so far, and the plot seems to be quite different. I hope you have/had fun writing this, and I hope you will continue... Please?

Oh i can't wait for the next so great, and i can't wait to see the girls fighting for Hinata. Go man Hinata i would date you too *squel*

Casey D. Langner chapter 1 . 6/19/2009

I recomend that if you plan to continue this story that you change the charecters name's to something more feminene/ mascualn. It would get confusing to a new reader. some examples could be, Hinata/hinta, Sai/saiuki