Yeaaah man, the energy is great! You get a good recording of just you with that guitar and I'd listen to that.
The chord progression is unique and your strange voice kind of gives it this surreal vibe. As for the vocals
When it comes to lyrics I'm not a go to person....really if it rhymes it'll make me happy...
however I can say that the vocals have flow, and that it works. The song was written very well.
Nice job! In fact, I think I'm going to go ahead and Hear It Again