To the wiseguy under me: You are one piece of work, you are! Read the site terms; you can't swear. And just because English isn't her first language doesn't mean she's holding back on her writing! Everyone improves, so maybe some polite critiquing would be useful here.

Hindu isn't a language, it's a religion, so have some respect, why don't you? Kimya's southern indian, she speaks Thelegu, not Hindi. And don't say she's ruining the English language for you, especially after writing that review! I happen to know she worked hard to understand the language because she loves writing and worked through all barriers just so she could write!

She's been through a lot coming here to America getting used to new culture and customs, and I for one think it's amazing how far she's come.

Author's Response: *sniff* Ash *sniff*, you are the best of the best! I knew that if Kyle hadn't jumped in that day and punched those guys, you totally would have!

But then again, don't discourage KSV. I think he/she is kinda funny. I also think it's kinda funny how we have the same initials. XD

Bloody fuckin hell this was one of the worst stories I have ever read christ if english is not your first language then dont bother writing AT ALL cos you suck you should find some site where they let you write in hindu insted so please dont ruin the english language for us all, k?

This is really good! I liked the first story, but this is better written, I think.

And just wondering, what exactly is engagement chicken?

Author's Response: My family is vegetarian, so I'm not sure how to make it. As it turns out, when a woman cooks the engagement chicken for her boyfriend, he proposes to her. How it takes for an engagement ring to appear is beyond me.

Great review, I thought I was the only one who didn't know what the hell Engagement Chicken was.

Oh, there better be a new chapter coming! I really want to know what happens! Do not hold me in suspense too long please!!! :)

Author's Response: Actually, I'll be on the other side of the country until the 30th of August, sorry! But trust me, when I've been away from my laptop for so long, my hands just itch for pen and paper. And what better way to get inspiration than from Washington DC?

Great as ever!
I read "I Love You" and was very happy to see this. :)
I hope to see more updates soon!
Grammar is superb.
I'm also a sucker for stories that have spaced-out paragraphs from the left side (I have no idea what it's called, though).
It makes it look...
I dunno...
Professional.
:D
Keep writing, you're fantastic!

Author's Response: Wow, I was not expecting this! Thanks so much. I sent chapter two in nine days ago, so it should be up soon. And thanks for the grammar comment, it really boosted up my ego (anymore reviews from you and I'd turn conceited).

Hey! Wassup? Do you know us? It's Ashley, Alex, Kelsey, Emma, Oliver, Monroe, Duncan, Lexi, Lucinda, Tess, and Rochelle! How come you missed Libby's party the other day? Were you hanging out with your other friends?

Author's Response: Do this again and I'll delete it. Did you even READ the story? C'mon, guys!

Cute! Update soon, please, though I always assumed Ron and Hermione would get married before Harry and Ginny.
-ronhermione4evr

Author's Response: Really? I thought it was the other way around. Of course, if you've read the first story, "I Love You", you could see how Ron's a little slow. Thanks for your review, I'll update as soon as I can.