nevertheless. This is very good. It's sparse and stark all at once. It reminds me of kardiac.
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I liked this, but I stil can't decide if I like how the title tells more than the poem actually does, or not? — youbrokeme

I really like this. It is so.....gray. Are you understanding this? Well anyway great poem. Like a single tree on a frozen hard tundra. I like. — Charlie

I like this quite a bit. I dont think it should be a haiku, but it would work very well as a tanka (5-7-5-7-7) I assume that the title refers to the Chaos Theory, as it is quite similar to the basic law of Chaos Theory. It feels a bit jumbled and quick to me, I almost think that it could use more detail to get the idea across. Just my opinion though. Good luck on this, and Ill check back in a day or two. 8 — ShelbyS

more of a word-sound rhythm poem than the meaning of the words--reminds me of Salvador Dali. It took me a few times to find this impression. Reminds me of a picture in Gray's Anatomy, heart- and roots. I don't understand the title, and I think that's the point- part of the entrainment. (C) — unknown