tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2364924652472608580.comments2015-11-28T16:24:54.815+07:00Wings of The Ravensmr benzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12995638865772239904noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2364924652472608580.post-57732339581023533202015-11-28T16:24:54.815+07:002015-11-28T16:24:54.815+07:00Thanks for the comment :D
To be honest, reading a...Thanks for the comment :D<br /><br />To be honest, reading a Japanese fantasy in Indonesian bothers felt awkward for me, so I guess it just different from people to people.<br /><br />As for the &#39;English&#39; part, I guess it&#39;s not really clear from the story so far, but the setting is on our own world with slight modification (superpower, demon, etc). Sure, the city is fictional, but there&#39;s America, Japan, and also Indonesia in this story. Therefore, English does exist in the world.<br /><br />And I really like the suggestion to put chapter navigation. I don&#39;t know why but that never occurred to me before. Will add menu navigation before the next chapter release. Thanks for the great suggestion.mr benzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12995638865772239904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2364924652472608580.post-51637381830710888912015-11-28T15:33:50.647+07:002015-11-28T15:33:50.647+07:00A certain gentleman from Light Novel Indonesia gro...A certain gentleman from Light Novel Indonesia group sent me. I&#39;ve read up until this point and this is my impression:<br /><br />So far so good. To be honest your storytelling style wasn&#39;t very much different than mine, and I like it. Although, reading Japanese influenced fantasy in English felt awkward to me. :S<br /><br />Nothing I will say on your storytelling, although there is one thing that bugs me out in the world building. So in chapter 4, it was stated that they used the world English, this is a problem in every fantasy world; mentioning a type of language that isn&#39;t supposed to exist in said world. It&#39;s not really a mistake, but I suggest to edit this.<br /><br />Apart from that, I believe you should put a menu for chapter navigation in your site. Don&#39;t use the blog archive widget as navigation, it&#39;s demeaning, and 2008 was ages ago.<br /><br />Well that&#39;s it, I&#39;ll continue reading later. :))fschttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00417890588205353761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2364924652472608580.post-2294067846405806322015-10-31T00:41:24.275+07:002015-10-31T00:41:24.275+07:00New update XDNew update XDIrvan_NavriXhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582443019542629911noreply@blogger.com