hi, this is after ch 4 as well, but it only allows 1 review per chapter, and i wanted to leave a more detailed review, so...
this is a good start! i'm looking forward to seeing exactly what J's injected w/, and how he comes out later. More! Please. :-)

Hey, are you ever going to finish this? This happens to be one of the only articulate stories about Jarod getting captured. You were doing so well! What happened? What made you stop? When you pick it up again, please e-mail me. You can find it under this ID.

Jen chapter 4 . 5/2/2003

Sounds great! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it coming!

black blade chapter 4 . 12/29/2002

i really like your story, its getting very interesting. please keep writting. i really want to know what is going to happen.