Kidnapped Chapter One needs your love! =P There's two parts, as as you will notice I made the tremendous mistake of putting both parts in the same thread but in different posts. Never again. Feel free to comment on each part separately, or both at once (they're short. =P)

Thank you!

I'm like that song stuck in your head; I come and I go, but never truly dissapear.

*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*

I'm kind of confused by your names (it's late,) so I'll describe what I need.

No grammar/spelling - I can catch that myself. (I just have to stop looking at it for a few days, then come back.) An overall will be greatly appreciated, as well as lines that could be stronger/don't make any sense.

If you don't like the first part, try to stick it out. The second part is a little shorter, and everyone seems to like it more. (Which is strange - I had to force out the second part, while the first slid onto the page. And they've both recieved the same amount of editing. *Shrug*)

Hi Wolf, Felistia here.I would love if you could review the novel I am writing. I need reviews on all the chapters, but mostly on the ones past chapter 7. Feel free to dish out everything, grammar, punctuation, what would make the plot better, I would love all of that. Please review.

Spoiler! :

It is a story about dragons and is similar to the wings of fire, but has a completely different story. I like to leave a bit of mystery in the first and second chapter, but I explain everything as I go through the book.