starting from 00:48:705 - until 01:06:705 - all notes on the 1/1 beat (or the beat with double lines, idk how to explain but hopefully you understand) i don't hear sounds for them. remove maybe? (it's probably my earphones not being good enough or you have your own reason, so, you can follow or ignore because it still actually plays quite well.) same as with 01:46:305 - to 02:03:105 - and also for 02:39:541 - to 02:52:741 -

starting from 00:48:705 - until 01:06:705 - all notes on the 1/1 beat (or the beat with double lines, idk how to explain but hopefully you understand) i don't hear sounds for them. remove maybe? (it's probably my earphones not being good enough or you have your own reason, so, you can follow or ignore because it still actually plays quite well.) same as with 01:46:305 - to 02:03:105 - and also for 02:39:541 - to 02:52:741 - oh the 1/1 notes in kiai time? they're for the synth in the bg song and also because testplayers thinks my patterns on that part is quite underwhelming so I added more notes there

1|2|3|4[EZ]00:47:205 - could move to lane 1 to emphasize that it's a snare instead of a kick like all the other times before00:54:555 - the three notes in a row look kinda odd?00:56:655 - there's no voice or drum here (except hi hat)01:44:805 and 02:27:241 - maybe move to lane 3 (same reason as 00:47:205 -)03:06:541 - maybe end the LN here bc that's where the drumroll ends[NM]00:17:205 - the lack of drum here is pretty noticeable, so maybe you could delete this note to represent that00:19:605 - might work better on lane 3[HD]00:29:430 - should add note here00:33:855 - you have a chord on lanes 1 and 2 like four times in a row here P: ought to mix it up[HD+]01:13:080 - could move to 4 to keep the pattern going01:29:655 - I think you should add a note like you did at 01:32:055 - and all the other times

Gexigamma wrote:

In HD diff, 00:10:305 - isn't this part a bit easy for a HD player? imo 1/2 fits better?

/me hides under a rock again.

Nivrad00 wrote:

My first 4k mod, here goes nothing

1|2|3|4[EZ]00:47:205 - could move to lane 1 to emphasize that it's a snare instead of a kick like all the other times before00:54:555 - the three notes in a row look kinda odd?00:56:655 - there's no voice or drum here (except hi hat)01:44:805 and 02:27:241 - maybe move to lane 3 (same reason as 00:47:205 -)03:06:541 - maybe end the LN here bc that's where the drumroll ends[NM]00:17:205 - the lack of drum here is pretty noticeable, so maybe you could delete this note to represent that00:19:605 - might work better on lane 3[HD]00:29:430 - should add note here00:33:855 - you have a chord on lanes 1 and 2 like four times in a row here P: ought to mix it up[HD+]01:13:080 - could move to 4 to keep the pattern going01:29:655 - I think you should add a note like you did at 01:32:055 - and all the other times

[SC]- 00:17:205 - remove one, it's low noise- 01:07:905 - remove one, i see you use triplet for each cymbal sound but this one has no cymbal- 01:31:755 - change to another pattern plz to make it different with previous triplet, it has different sound- 01:34:005 (94005|3,94005|0,94080|1,94080|2,94155|3,94155|0) - why this one has different pattern with the rest part? like this 01:29:205 (89205|3,89205|0,89280|1,89355|0,89355|3,89355|2) - 01:31:155 (91155|0,91155|3,91230|2,91305|3,91305|1,91305|0) - 01:36:105 (96105|3,96105|0,96180|1,96255|0,96255|2,96255|3) - it has same snare and cymbal sound tho- 01:44:955 (104955|0,104955|1,104955|3,105405|3,105405|1,105405|0) - make it different- 02:22:741 - add note? you did it on here 02:17:941 - - 02:27:541 - ^- 02:26:791 - add note for kick- 02:47:266 - this should be deleted- 02:47:566 - where's note for drum lu naruh note kebalik njing atas bawah xDDDDD- 02:54:766 - add note for kick- 02:54:916 - ^- 02:55:741 (175741|1,176341|2) - make it one column, same hi hat tho

[EZ]00:38:055 (38055|3) - add note to 4 or 200:38:505 (38505|1) - move note to 1 to make pattern and avoid too much notes on the 2nd collumn00:59:205 (59205|3) - add note to 4 ( you followed vocal)01:07:455 (67455|2) - add note to 3 (drum sound here desu )01:55:305 (115305|0) - (optional) you can add a note here to 101:56:805 (116805|2) - You should add a note here for vocal02:03:255 (123255|2) - add note to 3 ( seems more intuitive to follow the vocal here , up to you ~ )02:04:471 (124471|1) - (optional) you can emphazise by adding a note here to 202:36:766 (156766|2,156991|3) - I suggest Ctrl+J cause the other pattern way might tend to be reading as direct following it (confuse explain lol , basically it would be probably read like a 1/4 stair and cause misses imo )02:42:841 (162841|0) - add note to 102:45:691 (165691|1) - you can add a note to 2 or 3 for drum02:53:641 (173641|2) - (optional) add note to 3 for vocal stuffs~ desu03:06:091 (186091|0) - I suggest add a note to 1 or 2 (or 3 ? XD)[NM]00:03:705 (3705|3) - add note to 4 (bassline sound)00:06:255 (6255|1) - add to 2 (bassline again)01:31:305 (91305|2) - you could change that note to LN for the extent of the sound ( just self taste lol )01:36:405 (96405|1) - there is a sound here aswell , you can add a note (or keep it how it is , not a big deal imo~)02:05:941 (125941|0) - move to 4 for hand balance ? just opinion here feel free03:06:541 (186541|2) - i like highly suggest to make this double and then move the last notes to get a pattern , this sound is definitely louder tham other notes~

Rido wrote:

hi pux[SC]- 00:17:205 - remove one, it's low noise pattern consitency- 01:07:905 - remove one, i see you use triplet for each cymbal sound but this one has no cymbal yea utsu-p forgot to add cymbal there- 01:31:755 - change to another pattern plz to make it different with previous triplet, it has different sound- 01:34:005 (94005|3,94005|0,94080|1,94080|2,94155|3,94155|0) - why this one has different pattern with the rest part? like this 01:29:205 (89205|3,89205|0,89280|1,89355|0,89355|3,89355|2) - 01:31:155 (91155|0,91155|3,91230|2,91305|3,91305|1,91305|0) - 01:36:105 (96105|3,96105|0,96180|1,96255|0,96255|2,96255|3) - it has same snare and cymbal sound tho- 01:44:955 (104955|0,104955|1,104955|3,105405|3,105405|1,105405|0) - make it different- 02:22:741 - add note? you did it on here 02:17:941 - - 02:27:541 - ^- 02:26:791 - add note for kick- 02:47:266 - this should be deleted- 02:47:566 - where's note for drum lu naruh note kebalik njing atas bawah xDDDDD- 02:54:766 - add note for kick- 02:54:916 - ^- 02:55:741 (175741|1,176341|2) - make it one column, same hi hat tho

Eternalie wrote:

Osu xup~hope it will help~collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4[EZ]00:38:055 (38055|3) - add note to 4 or 200:38:505 (38505|1) - move note to 1 to make pattern and avoid too much notes on the 2nd collumn00:59:205 (59205|3) - add note to 4 ( you followed vocal) 01:07:455 (67455|2) - add note to 3 (drum sound here desu ) can't add anymore, it's too dense;w;01:55:305 (115305|0) - (optional) you can add a note here to 101:56:805 (116805|2) - You should add a note here for vocal02:03:255 (123255|2) - add note to 3 ( seems more intuitive to follow the vocal here , up to you ~ )02:04:471 (124471|1) - (optional) you can emphazise by adding a note here to 2 the sr eter, the sr... ;w;02:36:766 (156766|2,156991|3) - I suggest Ctrl+J cause the other pattern way might tend to be reading as direct following it (confuse explain lol , basically it would be probably read like a 1/4 stair and cause misses imo )02:42:841 (162841|0) - add note to 102:45:691 (165691|1) - you can add a note to 2 or 3 for drum how about keep following the vocal ;w;02:53:641 (173641|2) - (optional) add note to 3 for vocal stuffs~ desu03:06:091 (186091|0) - I suggest add a note to 1 or 2 (or 3 ? XD) no vocal here ;w;[NM]00:03:705 (3705|3) - add note to 4 (bassline sound) vocal00:06:255 (6255|1) - add to 2 (bassline again)^01:31:305 (91305|2) - you could change that note to LN for the extent of the sound ( just self taste lol ) lol nah01:36:405 (96405|1) - there is a sound here aswell , you can add a note (or keep it how it is , not a big deal imo~) keep it how it is XD02:05:941 (125941|0) - move to 4 for hand balance ? just opinion here feel free03:06:541 (186541|2) - i like highly suggest to make this double and then move the last notes to get a pattern , this sound is definitely louder tham other notes~

[EZ]Tough words but, sometimes i look at this diff and think you just placed the notes on time, randomized them in some website and then moved the jacks around.I can't see a pattern going on in most of your map, and that's kinda bad. Sure, beginners won't really care about it, but you're going for some quality charts, am i right?I'm not going to say anything about the vocal parts because i'm absolutely horrible at following vocal pitch. But when you're going for something mechanical like drums you should have patterns that either repeat or remember each other. For example this. You made a pattern and then mirrored it later! Those are patterns that look like each other. Doesn't really need to be mirroring, you can use other things to make a pattern remember another, like making 1232 4121 or even 1234 2134.

So here goes: Rearrange these parts taking in consideration what I said above:00:10:305 - to 00:17:505 - 00:19:905 - to 00:38:955 - 02:17:341 - to 02:35:791 -

00:38:955 - This part also looks kinda random, but since you're kinda following the guitars here, I recommend you to make the LNs follow a 1234 pattern since the pitch goes up with time. For the rest of the notes you should do what I said above while still resembling pitch. I know you're following the drums but making a connection with pitch going up sounds like a good idea. Maybe make something like 2141, 3212, 4323, 3414, it's similar patterns but they change the most used column making it look like they're going to the right.

Do the same for the repetitions of the parts said above. (you can vary things ofc, but try to follow more or less the same thing)

00:16:305 (16305|1,16605|2,16905|1) - maybe you could make these notes LNs for the sake of expression :v01:18:405 - add a note on 401:19:605 - ^ 301:20:805 (80805|3) - move to 101:22:605 (82605|0) - ^ 301:24:405 - add a note on 1

[NM]NM also looks a bit random at some sections (mostly the same sections as EZ).It seems more forgivable in this diff though, so whether or not you should change things here too is up to you

00:07:005 - suddenly stopping to follow the bass here makes this a bit inconsistent, same mistake in the other diffs as well, fix in all of them02:09:691 (129691|0) - move to 2 (pitchu, know you're not really going for the relevance here, but jacking the end of each pattern with the start of the other would fit perfectly for this part)02:10:891 (130891|1) - move to 103:06:691 (186691|0,186691|2) - move to 2 and 4? fits well imo

[HD]00:45:255 - should probably be the same pattern as 00:44:055 - but mirrored for consistency with the last patterns.01:40:455 - should resemble 01:39:255 - change to triplets01:41:655 - should be rolls to resemble the pattern before itseems to be ok overall, the chords build some consistency between the patterns

[HD+]not much in this diffjust remember my wall of text about making patterns resemble each other for these sections:00:39:255 - 01:36:855 -

[MX]00:19:905 - this pattern man, instead of doing that long uncomfortable anchor try to make something like this where you change the position of the anchor every beat, and then every four beats you change the pattern to something like this (basically the same pattern with the columns switched). Change the repetitions too.keep what i told you in irc in mind for that other section alrightwink

[SC]alright i'm really lazy and it doesn't really sound like this diff needs modsi told i wouldn't really be able to find anything heremost of the suggestions in the easier diffs also apply to the harder ones, so make sure you take a look at everythingsorry for the lazy mod

Paulmrm wrote:

general look at some diffs

1|2|3|4

[EZ]Tough words but, sometimes i look at this diff and think you just placed the notes on time, randomized them in some website and then moved the jacks around.I can't see a pattern going on in most of your map, and that's kinda bad. Sure, beginners won't really care about it, but you're going for some quality charts, am i right?I'm not going to say anything about the vocal parts because i'm absolutely horrible at following vocal pitch. But when you're going for something mechanical like drums you should have patterns that either repeat or remember each other. For example this. You made a pattern and then mirrored it later! Those are patterns that look like each other. Doesn't really need to be mirroring, you can use other things to make a pattern remember another, like making 1232 4121 or even 1234 2134.

So here goes: Rearrange these parts taking in consideration what I said above:00:10:305 - to 00:17:505 - 00:19:905 - to 00:38:955 - 02:17:341 - to 02:35:791 -

00:38:955 - This part also looks kinda random, but since you're kinda following the guitars here, I recommend you to make the LNs follow a 1234 pattern since the pitch goes up with time. For the rest of the notes you should do what I said above while still resembling pitch. I know you're following the drums but making a connection with pitch going up sounds like a good idea. Maybe make something like 2141, 3212, 4323, 3414, it's similar patterns but they change the most used column making it look like they're going to the right.

Do the same for the repetitions of the parts said above. (you can vary things ofc, but try to follow more or less the same thing)

00:16:305 (16305|1,16605|2,16905|1) - maybe you could make these notes LNs for the sake of expression :v01:18:405 - add a note on 401:19:605 - ^ 301:20:805 (80805|3) - move to 101:22:605 (82605|0) - ^ 301:24:405 - add a note on 1

[NM]NM also looks a bit random at some sections (mostly the same sections as EZ).It seems more forgivable in this diff though, so whether or not you should change things here too is up to you

00:07:005 - suddenly stopping to follow the bass here makes this a bit inconsistent, same mistake in the other diffs as well, fix in all of them02:09:691 (129691|0) - move to 2 (pitchu, know you're not really going for the relevance here, but jacking the end of each pattern with the start of the other would fit perfectly for this part)02:10:891 (130891|1) - move to 103:06:691 (186691|0,186691|2) - move to 2 and 4? fits well imo

[HD]00:45:255 - should probably be the same pattern as 00:44:055 - but mirrored for consistency with the last patterns.01:40:455 - should resemble 01:39:255 - change to triplets01:41:655 - should be rolls to resemble the pattern before itseems to be ok overall, the chords build some consistency between the patterns

[HD+]not much in this diffjust remember my wall of text about making patterns resemble each other for these sections:00:39:255 - 01:36:855 -

[MX]00:19:905 - this pattern man, instead of doing that long uncomfortable anchor try to make something like this where you change the position of the anchor every beat, and then every four beats you change the pattern to something like this (basically the same pattern with the columns switched). Change the repetitions too.keep what i told you in irc in mind for that other section alrightwink

[SC]alright i'm really lazy and it doesn't really sound like this diff needs modsi told i wouldn't really be able to find anything heremost of the suggestions in the easier diffs also apply to the harder ones, so make sure you take a look at everythingsorry for the lazy mod

[SHD]HUGE improvement from the previous version of SHD, can't seem to find any noticeable errors. Patterns flow really well, and are nice to hit.

Suggestions?

00:38:955 (38955|0,38955|2,38955|1,38955|3) - good stuff, love how you use webs and brackets for these guitar chugs

01:16:905 (76905|3,76905|0,76905|1,77055|0,77055|2,77055|3,77205|3,77205|1,77205|0,77355|0,77355|2,77355|3) - http://puu.sh/jhvfd/a2bcf0c65d.jpg this placement matches the music IMO

01:17:505 (77505|1) - Starting from this note, the chords are bit bland, since this is SHD, you can make that more exciting by adding a triple chord on every marimba sound eg. 01:17:805 (77805|0) - , 01:19:005 (79005|1) - , 01:20:205 (80205|2) - etc.

-X Y Z- wrote:

[SHD]HUGE improvement from the previous version of SHD, can't seem to find any noticeable errors. Patterns flow really well, and are nice to hit. <3

Suggestions?

00:38:955 (38955|0,38955|2,38955|1,38955|3) - good stuff, love how you use webs and brackets for these guitar chugs <3

01:16:905 (76905|3,76905|0,76905|1,77055|0,77055|2,77055|3,77205|3,77205|1,77205|0,77355|0,77355|2,77355|3) - http://puu.sh/jhvfd/a2bcf0c65d.jpg this placement matches the music IMO </3 are you kidding me? single note for dat legit guitar sound?

01:17:505 (77505|1) - Starting from this note, the chords are bit bland, since this is SHD, you can make that more exciting by adding a triple chord on every marimba sound eg. 01:17:805 (77805|0) - , 01:19:005 (79005|1) - , 01:20:205 (80205|2) - etc. <3

01:07:605 (67605|0,67680|1,67755|2,67830|3) - intentional? I dunno but it is different to what you used in the beginning</3 If you listen carefully at this part there are some little drum sounds so if combined with that guitar sound, a stairs pattern will be fit

[MX]No obvious errors here, but there is a part that I dislike <3

01:17:805 (77805|0) - you mapped vocals instead of the music, which makes it kind of bland. </3 I think I'll keep layering that vocal sound because that sound is more dominant than the others sound. and this is on calm part so I'm not sure for having that much densityI suggest:

01:17:805 (77805|0) - place 1,2,3

01:18:105 (78105|2) - place 3

01:18:405 (78405|2) - place 3

01:18:555 (78555|1,78555|0,78855|3) - - leave it there (also gives a taste of the vocals if you want it there)

01:19:005 (79005|0) - place 1,2,4

01:19:305 (79305|2) - place 2

01:19:605 (79605|2) - place 2and so on... carrying on

02:15:391 (135391|0,135391|2,135391|3) - Long note here for emphasis? ok maybe just 1 ln is not a problem

02:47:041 (167041|0,167041|1,167041|3) - this part me gusta XD? don't you like the hammers lol

[HD+]O.o the streamy version of MX

01:17:805 (77805|3) - same concept with MX, I absolutely dislike that you only mapped the vocals, try incorporating the marimbas in the background if you can </3 vocals is love

02:46:891 (166891|1) - this is similar to that lovely part in MX, makes me wonder if these patterns are suitable for HD difficulty yeah it's fit for 3.38* diff