OVERVIEW: In this
world, sixteen-year-old Charlotte and her fellow refugees have scraped out an
existence on the edge of Britain’s industrial empire. Though they live by the
skin of their teeth, they have their health (at least when they can find enough
food and avoid the Imperial Labor Gatherers) and each other. When a new exile
with no memory of his escape or even his own name seeks shelter in their
camp he brings new dangers with him and secrets about the terrible future that
awaits all those who have struggled has to live free of the bonds of the
empire’s Machineworks.

The Inventor’s Secret is the
first book of a YA steampunk series set in an alternate nineteenth-century
North America where the Revolutionary War never took place and the British
Empire has expanded into a global juggernaut propelled by marvelous and
horrible machinery. Perfect for fans of Libba Bray's The Diviners, Cassandra Clare's Clockwork Angel, ScottWesterfeld's Leviathan and Phillip Reeve's Mortal Instruments.

FORMAT: Inventor's Secret is the first novel in a new series
by Andrea Cremer. It is a YA novel with steampunk, alternative history, and
romance elements. It stands at 368 pages and was published April 22, 2014 by
Philomel.

ANALYSIS: Inventor's
Secret sounds like an amazing premise for an alternate history YA novel.
Add in the fact that the author is experienced and already has popular YA
series under her belt, and this first book of a new series should have been a
hit. Unfortunately, a lack of world-building and frustrating characters makes Inventor's Secret an alright novel when it
had potential to be great.

Inventor's Secret
is supposed to take place in an alternative world where the US lost the
Revolutionary War. Even though America or the Patriots lost, some of them
continue to fight against the British Empire and all that it stands for. They
have setup a system that allows children of those fighting to hide underground
until they age out. When they age out, they too must join the front lines and fight.

Unfortunately, that is really all that readers are given
into the 'history' or background setup for the novel. There is no real explanation
of why the British Empire is bad, what the Patriots are fighting for (yes they
are fighting against what Britain stands for, but what is that), and how far
does Britain's power reach. It appears Britain has this floating city of sorts
which is located roughly where NYC is, but that couldn't possibly be the entire
area that made up Britain's rule.

Cremer does an amazing job of developing what life is like
on this floating city and some of its levels, but a lot is left to the
imagination. This makes readers – like myself – struggle to grasp the severity
of some situations. Why is the British Empire so bad? What are the Patriots
doing to stop it and what is their plan for the future?

In addition to the lack of development of the backstory, the
entire setup of the world that the novel takes place in is confusing. The
British Empire or the area that we are introduced to has this very confusing
mix of Greek mythology, Christian gods, and steampunk. It really felt like all
of a sudden the author went – 'I should throw some Greek mythology into the mix
just to spice things up'.

The Greek mythology just does not gel with the setting,
characters, or world that is created. It seemed forced and a bit random.

Most of Inventor's
Secret focused not on adventure and excitement or even world building, but
on a very forced, illogical romance between the main character Charlotte and
Jack. Charlotte and Jack have always hated each other and got on each other's
nerves. That is until Charlotte must dress up and pretend to be a high society
lady. The minute she puts a dress on Jack falls madly in love with her and she
too feels the same. This wasn't a developing romance. No, this was a madly in
love, professing love to each other and 'feeling it is right' romance.

While a few things – that I will not reveal as I do not wish
to spoil the book – prevented the romance from blossoming, it just really
seemed forced and not fully developed. I struggled to understand how Charlotte
felt the way she did and so strongly in such a short time. Maybe this was
because I really didn't care for Jack at all, as he did nothing to make him
likeable or maybe it was just how fast it was developed.

There are a few things good about Inventor's Secret. Once readers get passed the sluggish first set
of chapters, it moves at a rapid pace. There is a lot of dialogue between
characters and the steampunk setting is fun and fresh, but many readers might
struggle with the lack of world building and character development.

Overall, I thought the novel was alright. I think for a first
book in a series it could have been better. I feel the author tried to
accomplish too much in terms of creating a unique alternative history,
background, romance, and conflict. Unfortunately, in her effort to tackle all
of these things it led to most of them feeling forced and underdeveloped.

Inventor's Secret
will probably appeal to teens and fans of Cremer's previous books, but unless
dramatic changes are made I don't really see it appealing to a bigger audience.
I will probably try the second book in the series, but it isn't a priority.