I really liked this chapter! It's very different to what I've ever read in fanfic. There aren't really any names with which we're familiar, but the wizarding world will be the wizarding world, I suppose.

I'm interested to see where you take the story in this particular era. It's so unexplored in the books, so there's heaps of room for creativity, and going by the first chapter, I think you have a fair idea of where you want to take your story.

I like the main character so far. One chapter is hardly enough time to get to know her, but she appears to be a young girl on the brink of growing up, and I'd be interested to see where she goes as a character, and how Hogwarts will treat her.

Awesome chapter one, once again!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I chose this era precisely because there hadn't been much written about it. There is a world of difference between the chosen time and when Harry attends Hogwarts.