Treeckomaster is now Flareon!
Umbreon started the fight by aggresivly pouncing on the leading Piggeot while bitting it fiuriessly. I wonder what Leafeeons doing, probably suffering from pecks! DAAAHHH!" He destracted himself to long and the Piggeot managed to peck him in the face. But Umbreon managed to recover and attack with toxic before it hit him with another peck. Weakend by the poison, the piggeot flew away to find a pecha berry before the poison killed it. "Gotta savor this rest before the second one comes." thought Umbreon while waiting for the other piggeot came.

Leafeon used Swords Dance to increase his strenght, but while doing this, one of the pidgeots used peck on his head. He suffered minor damage and after completing the S-dance technique, he used Quick attack to wipe the first one out.
"Bleeed!!!" screamed Leafeon, but suffered a wing attack hit from the other pidgeot. Thanks to the Sunny Day, he recovered a big amount of energy by using Synthesis. "Now FEEL NATURES WRATH!!" and send the other pidgeot flying with a leaf blade.

"here's the last one, are you ready?" Said Umbreon while evily stairing at the Piggeot. Umbreon started making a cry as if he was hurt, and the Piggeot aproched him while droping its guard, and just as it was close enough Umbreon quickly pounced on it before it could get away. Weakend by the attack and scared by the sudden surprize faint attack had, it flew away scared what would happen next. Umbreon fell to the groud from being exposed to pure sunlight. "We have to get out off here before the sun weaken's me greatfully. We need to find Glaceon. Speaking of that, what direction did Jolteon go again?"

["Wow, good job bro! " said Leafeon "I really don't know where he is, i think he {probably} got lost in the mointains that separate mine and glaceon's territory. Let's head that way. We can rast in the shadow of the mountain, if you like. "

"Good, since I can't use moonlight here with all these grass pokemon, just like I hate morning sun and sunny day." said Umbreon as they ran towards Glaceons territory. "HELP!" "Who just yelled help? Jolteon? Yup, Jolteon." They saw Jolteon running in circles with a playful trapinch chasing him. "Jolteon! I'm never going to let you live through this!" said Umbreon while trying to resist the urge to rip the Trapinch to sheds. "It isn't going to eat you, it just wants to play!"

"are you sure?" asked jolteon "im scared of ground pokemon. they'll eat me! speaking of witch, why are you covered in scraches? did the bugs get you two?" that lead jolteon into a laughing fest. "well, we aren't going to find glaceon sitting here! I'll race ya to him!" and then, like before, he took of in a cloud of dust. But wall he went, he felt...weird. "what the heck? im NEVER this slow! arg...can't take...the...cold!" jolteon said, as he slowly fell to the snow.

jolteon awoke, but his strength could not hold out very long. "I...I have to find...leafeon and...umbreon..." said jolteon. as searched, he could feel is strength draining away. "great...this might be the end...of me. I can't hold out much longer...I...I think...im going to die, like the electrike pokemon that couldn't get away from the tornado..." but then he saw leafeon and umbreon. but jolteon couldn't stand it anymore. he released a cry, loud enough for them to hear, then colapsed. "goodbye...cruel world..." but he knew that if leafeon and umbreon heared the cry, he just, JUST might have a chance at surviving.

Umbreon heard a cry from Jolteon while he was using moonlight. "Jolteon! I told you that you'd kill yourself!" said Umbreon while running towards him. "Here, take this Aspear berry before you turn into a shocking popsicle!" said Umbreon while giving him the berry. "Where is Glaceon? If he doesn't show up show I'll....."[PLEASE POST R-CUBED!!!]

"Why have we come? Have you even noticed all the natural disasters that are happening?!? Storms, earthquakes and tornato's, I left my territory because I have no food there, Leafeon because the rest of his territory was destroyed by the tornado and then piggeots attacked us, and I have no idea why Jolteon did!" replied Umbreon.

Species: Espeon
Weight: 58.4 lbs
Personality: Likes to play games but gets serious when in battle. Also likes to eat and sleep. But excerecises daily
Gender: Male
Territory description: On a Plain that psychic energy protects which helps him, brothers and sisters to live in comfort
History/backround: Was born By an Espeon and Umbreon In 1993.

Species: Espeon
Weight: 58.4 lbs
Personality: Likes to play games but gets serious when in battle. Also likes to eat and sleep. But excerecises daily
Gender: Male
Territory description: Lives in a cave that is mainly purple rocks that give Espeon power when needed.
History/backround: Was born By an Espeon and Umbreon In 1993.

Quick! change his history! he said: all the forms are brothers and sisters! change it before he see's it! He'll decline if you don't! [i know, he's my brother]

"Um... can we go inside your cave, glaceon? I almost died from the cold! but these torrentale rains... they must be blizzards to you because this frostbite land! but leafeon, isn't it bad for you here? with the extremely cold weather, you know." said jolteon, shivering from the cold. "and before a become a joltcicle".

Species: Espeon
Weight: 58.4 lbs
Personality: Likes to play games but gets serious when in battle. Also likes to eat and sleep. But excerecises daily
Gender: Male
Territory description: Lives in a cave that is mainly purple rocks that give Espeon power when needed.
History/backround: Was born By an Espeon and Umbreon In 1993.

Accepted, BUT I won't let you post yet, if you read the plot all of the forms are brothers, so replace his history with something else and I'll let you post!

It wasn't the territory, it was the history being devoid of the fact that the eevee forms are brothers/sisters. Just edit the history and start posting! PS: Sorry if I was demanding and was being mean.
EDIT: I just looked at it again and I see your mistake, you're making Espeon having brothers in his territory. All the forms that the other people are using in this role play are brothers. What you need to do is change his Territory discription so he has no brothers in his territory, Umbreon [me] and Leafeon [felix] and flareon [treeckomaster] and jolteon [treeckoluv] and glaceon [r-cubed] and vaporeon [nobody, yet] are your espeon's brothers, now that I've cleard that up, change the history and write away! [Sorry if I was a little mean again...]

Species: Espeon
Weight: 58.4 lbs
Personality: Likes to play games but gets serious when in battle. Also likes to eat and sleep. But excerecises daily
Gender: Male
Territory description: In a cave which purple rocks help give espeon power when needed
History/backround: Was shadow punched by a Dusknoir and left there until a nurse came and helped him.

Species: Espeon
Weight: 58.4 lbs
Personality: Likes to play games but gets serious when in battle. Also likes to eat and sleep. But excerecises daily
Gender: Male
Territory description: In a cave which purple rocks help give espeon power when needed
History/backround: Was shadow punched by a Dusknoir and left there until a nurse came and helped him.

Ok I edited it in my Quote. Tell me if that is right?

Yup! Start posting anytime now! :D
"I bet Espeon's enjoying heat from his cave while were out here in the middle of the blizzard! How to you stand this Glaceon?!? My rings froze so I can't signify my attack to pokemon!"

"You think thats bad?" grumbled jolteon "If I try to attack, I might miss, and it will hit the snow and creat a large explosion because snow is made of water!". Jolteon looked at the sky "It looks like a huge storm is coming. We should really go inside your cave, glaceon.".

Can I join. I can take the spot of Vaporeon .
Pokemon: Vaporeon
Species: Bubble Jet
Gender: Male
Height: 3ft 3in=1m
Weight: 63.9 lbs=29kg
Personality: Graceful, kind but very defensive in battle. Loves water(obviously) and hates electric pokemon.
Territory Description: An underwater haven for water pokemon filled with bubbles and coral to sleep and live in.
History/Backgound: The most defensive of the family. Was struck by lightning and thunder when he went on land to get an Oran Berry for his ill friend.

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