oo sounds great. It's kinda similar to mine, the whole U.S. and those 4 together thing. Its a great combo ^^ My story sucks so much, i dont see how people can cut straight to the action in theirs. I just arrived at the school :K I'd like to think my story is the kind where U have to read farther on to get interested rather than think its boring :K Anyway, update soon! *yes, i realise i still have 7 chapters to read.. but still*

Don't worry you'll get reviews, give it time. For a couple weeks or so I had like two reviews then out of nowhere I get a rush of reads one day, I'm serious they were coming in like five or six reads every ten minutes. Then like everyday after that I've been getting one or two reviews and while it's nowhere near as many reads as I have at least it's something right? Anyways that was another great chapter. Udate ASAP. Thanks and don't forget to drop me a review.