I would honestly change the typography. The ‘I am Jane Doe’ is fine, but I just don’t dig the rest.
Buttons design is outdated.
The contact form’s “send” button shouldn’t be centered? It just kinda bothers me when it’s on the side
That’s it from me. I hope someone else can say more. Also why the site isn’t ‘clickable’?

Maybe minor changes but you added some freshness to the design, looks much better.
I hope someone else will write in this topic to add other ideas and their point of view.
Other than that, browse through the market and get inspiration I learn new stuff everyday to improve myself and thanks to that (or luck) I had no rejections for 3 or so years. You can do that, too

With all due respect I think that there are too many small issues and design flaws, coupled with a lack of premium originality or unique features.

The second version is way better than the first but there’s still problems with typography, hierarchy, spacing etc. When a design has not s lot to it then it needs to be absolutely flawless.

The bigger problem is that as with the above - if there’s not much to a design then what there is needs to be stand out and unique. There’s tons on resume type files already for sale and the trend is for them to be becoming very creative and adding some quite advanced features.