Rated 0.5 / 5 stars2009-02-11 20:11:57

the only reason this has a one is because its your first flash. heres some tips. and if i were you and you were really trying to learn flash i would listen to them.

sound. sound is a necessity. you couldve done any song from the audio portal or anything. but you need sound. make a new layer after youve imported the song into the library. click the long keyframe, open properties and select the sound.

you tried fbf. cool. but are you using onion skin?

from my point of view it looks like you need a higher frame rate. or fps. may i suggest 24.

your drawings are very sloppily done. and it looks like some kind of spin-off of invader zim, in whos style i didnt like much in the first place.