The Vampires Slave

He was right behind me. He closed the door and locked it. I turn toward him And pull my hair back and tilt my neck. He laughs. "Actually we are gonna do things a little different." He says. He grabs my arm and flings me onto the bed like a rag doll. I gasp as he climbs over me. He sits on me, chuckling softly. "Oh, Reagan. You'll like this a lot." He says.
He grips the front of my shirt and literally rips it off. I gasp as the fabric rips like tissue in his hands. His cold hands ran over my stomach tracing soft lines. He leans in and smiles...

This chapter was good. I recommend that for your future books you add spacing between the characters. Like this,
"Who is it?!", Aaron snaps.
"Your 9-oh-clock sir".
That would be very helpful in the future. Thanks!