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Growing Invisible (poem)

I wrote this poem in the format of a song (I use repeating lines). Tell me what you think. I may add onto/change this poem in the future.

Everybody, look at me,don't you see,this child?

Doesn't know what its like,we don't even look alike.

Everybody, look at me,don't you see,this boy?

Not a dream or a care,nor a life of despair.

Faces, they wonder,past me, can't you see?My life is just different,no matter how I change.You always, it seemed,looked down on me.I look for the day,I can finally be free.

Everybody, eyes on me,can't you see,this young man?

Always sleeping and weeping,his soul, its seeping

Everybody, dont look at me,can you see,this monster?

Betrayal and denial,they took away his smile.

Faces, they wonder,past me, can't you see?My life is just different,no matter how I change.You always, it seemed,looked down on me.I look for the day,when I can finally be free.

I wrote this poem in the format of a song (I use repeating lines). Tell me what you think. I may add onto/change this poem in the future.\r\n\r\nEverybody, look at me,\r\ndon't you see,\r\nthis child?\r\n\r\nDoesn't know what its like,\r\nwe don't even look alike.\r\n\r\nEverybody, look at me,\r\ndon't you see,\r\nthis boy?\r\n\r\nNot a dream or a care,\r\nnor a life of despair.\r\n\r\nFaces, they wonder,\r\npast me, can't you see?\r\nMy life is just different,\r\nno matter how I change.\r\nYou always, it seemed,\r\nlooked down on me.\r\nI look for the day,\r\nI can finally be free.\r\n\r\nEverybody, eyes on me,\r\ncan't you see,\r\nthis young man?\r\n\r\nAlways sleeping and weeping,\r\nhis soul, its seeping\r\n\r\nEverybody, dont look at me,\r\ncan you see,\r\nthis monster?\r\n\r\nBetrayal and denial,\r\nthey took away his smile.\r\n\r\nFaces, they wonder,\r\npast me, can't you see?\r\nMy life is just different,\r\nno matter how I change.\r\nYou always, it seemed,\r\nlooked down on me.\r\nI look for the day,\r\nwhen I can finally be free.

Ok... well I guess I shall let you all know that I failed every single spelling test I had from 4th-8th grade. So please leave my spelling alone (I have no idea why, but I am fairly good at writing despite the spelling errors) >.<

Ok... well I guess I shall let you all know that I [b]failed[/b] every single spelling test I had from 4th-8th grade. So please leave my spelling alone (I have no idea why, but I am fairly good at writing despite the spelling errors) >.<

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