Hey. I don't have much to say, I just wanted to let you know that I'm still reading this and I love it. I was really excited to see the new chapter and it certainly didn't disappoint. I wonder what's going to happen with delta's empthy now. Is luke going to get rid of it again?
I can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing this story with us.

you are seriously creeping me out... when i started reading this story, i thought i'd get romance and a little drama... now I'm reading a seriously creepy, amazingly well-composed story and i just can't find the will to stop reading. I just can't put the book down even for a minute.
I'm a little afraid of reaching chapter 30. what if there's a really creepy cliffhanger and then you take a while to update again... I probably won't be falling asleep easily for a couple of nights...

I think she sounds / talks a little different now. But she has still stayed within character. But it may be better to pace the story better. Suddenly, there is a lull, but not much has happened to justify the waiting around. But that is also okay if it was deliberate.

As a reader, I would of course love faster stories and quicker updates!!

Keep going!

Author's Response: I am so relieved to hear that - that she's stayed in character anyway. Whew :3

Ahh yes the lull. I agree that the lull is... odd, I suppose. I feel like the lull has been going for a bit too long. On the one hand, the lull is intentional - if there's too much going on for too long then it's just, well, too much! So there is a lull to kinda calm things down a bit. But I have to admit I'm still not the best at the whole rising & falling action thing. >_< I'm working on it though!

And I've been trying to update quicker! I just put chapter 29 into the queue so hopefully that'll be along soon! Dx

Well, as I said in the review I left like five minutes ago, I really like your story. It is really unique and interesting. Please, for the love of god, update soon!! I really want to know what happens!

And I am working on it... Here's a sneak preview since you were kind enough to review:

Merlin, I felt like I couldn't breathe. It was like my world was suddenly pressing in on me, closing in, squeezing the air from my lungs. I felt incredibly stupid... panicking wasn't going to help. It only made things worse.

/end preview

Delta's freaking out if you can't tell...
Anyway, thanks again for reviewing! See you next time!
-JB

So I just started reading your story and I really like it!! I was planning on waiting to do my review until the latest chapter but when I saw that there was a GOT reference in your AN I made it my mission to find it. Is is by chance Eddard Stark getting his head chopped off by the order of the beloved Joffery (*note the very, extremely heavy sarcasm there*)? Do I win the cookies??
Well anyway, I must continue reading. Ta ta!

Author's Response: Haha that's a VERY good guess but I actually had the beheading of the deserter by Eddard Stark in mind. You still get the cookies though, just for your sarcastic comment regarding Joffery lol :)

Oh my goodness this is so amazing I'm freaking out (and maybe crying a bit as well) but seriously I love that like and delta have become so close and I love how jealous al gets about! Omg basically just the entire story actually! Update soon please!!!

Author's Response: Oh my goodness I don't think you quite understand how excited reading your review has made me hahaha! I am SO happy you feel that way and THANK YOU SO SO MUCH for telling me! It means a lot!

Hello! I love your story! It's delightfully understated with an intriguing overarching plot. It's alot like jk's writing in the way that you mostly use show don't tell! I'm excited for the next chapters!!

Author's Response: Oh my gosh you compared my writing to Rowling's and I don't know how to comprehend that. Like, that just doesn't compute with my brain. :o

I wish I knew exactly what you were talking about though because I think it could be something to do with the whole Halloween attack or it could be the development between Al and Delta but I'm not really sure hahha. Dx

On a last note, THANK YOU SO MUCH for your kind words. They really do mean a lot!
Until next time,
-JB

I love this story and I hang out for every update BUT I have to†say†one thing...I feel like amongst the juicy plotline you kind of forget that Delta's an empath, which is like the premise of this story haha? I dunno. I could just be me getting muddled because I read too many fanfics for my own good! Either way this story's still definitely great to read! :)

Author's Response: This actually did occur to me shortly after I put 19 into the queue - that I've been a bit lazy when it comes to describing Delta's empathy. I guess that in my rush to fit everything into 19 I neglected it a bit (i think this also happened in 18, too, though). So I just wanted to say that I realize this has been happening and I'm going to work on it when writing chapter 20 (and every chapter after that). No worries - I'm not about to forget it completely! ;)

Anywho, I'm really really glad that you like it and I hope to hear from you again in the future! :D
-JB

Yeah! The chapter is up! I really liked it. Indeed it was quite eventful. The mystery around the forest attack is getting clearer and more interesting. I wonder why Al is acting like this...maybe he's jealous? Oh, and Delta is going to meet THE Harry Potter!! I'm definitely looking forward to this!!

So til next chapter,
See ya (~.^)

Author's Response: Well hello again! I'm really happy that you liked the new chapter :) And perhaps Al is a tiny bit jealous... which is just silly as we all know, but Al is rather silly (I mean, he loves zombies, so of course he's a bit silly). And I'm looking forward to Delta meeting Harry too! It'll be the second time I've written Harry as an adult, but this time it'll be a bit lengthier than the last time. ^.^

That's a really good story. I read it two hours straight and I must say that I really like it. I like the mystery and also the drama in it. So I hope that you'll update soon cuz I'm quite curious about why Al came to Delta's house.

so until next time,
~ kristyhes

Author's Response: Yay I'm really glad you like it - especially the drama and the mystery because I'm always questioning my ability to write both of those genres...

And you're in luck because I just put chapter 19 into the queue - it should be up pretty soon!

I just can't! It's so well written and Delta is such an interesting character! I also love Al, obviously, but I just can't get enough of this! It's fantastic and I don't mind at all that it ended in dialogue.

KEEP WRITING :D
Shay_Gryff

Author's Response: Yay! I feel like I end in dialogue a lot more than most people so I was kind of concerned about it lol.

Sounds like Al only asked out Hannah because he thought the girl he really wanted was tied up at the moment (so he thought) and he was looking for a distraction. Now he finds he is missing the girl he wants and feels regret now that he knows how she feels and the truth came out that she really wasn't seeing anyone. Enjoy your time alone Al.

Author's Response: You seem to be angry with Al lol, which is totally okay because I'm angry with him, too. I mean, writing the last half of this chapter was fun, but the whole time I was just like "Oh, Al, you're so stupid sometimes."

aaaw I love this chapter! it's really interesting and capturing an I can't get enough of it! please update soon! I'm really curious to see what it's all about with Albus and Hanna and with Deltas mother! update please :) :)

Author's Response: I am still writing the next chapter but it will be up as soon as I am certain it is finished. Thank you so much for the kind review - it made my day haha :)