Graphics in the game are okay, they are nothing special, but they are do the job effectively

There's a unnecessary "are" in there.

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Like in the beginning of the game, the color of your wallet was hard to make out as the interface was in black and so was your wallet.

Odd change of tense. Simple present would make more sense here. (The following sentence has simple past as well.)

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Note near the end of the game I finally noticed that each action has a small little tiny white pixel.

Looks like there's a colon missing after "note".

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That is what the key to interacting with an object properly, glad to find it but still may be frustrating for gamers at times, especially with the time limit going on.

I think somebody was rewriting this sentence a bit too often and accidentally got rid of the subject.

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Still though the game does an effective job of putting you into the role of a detective as you try to save your daughter and foil the terrorists, all the while picking up the clues and doing it in under 10 minutes, which made the experience much more real.

Very long sentence. I'd suggest at least throwing in a couple of commas (before and after "though" and one more after "detective") and changing that "made" to "makes".

Hehe it's alright Raffles, thanks for correcting my poor grammar , yes I admit it, my grammar is not up to par, my english profs have been saying that for years, but what do they know. Content is the key I say in papers, not looking where I missed a comma and docking me marks bad experiences let's just say I've had with that sort of thing. *end rant*