Oooh, this was lovely. You have a very interesting, distinct writing style. I felt so badly for Isaac in this and I'm glad he was finally able to overcome his insecurities and realize that he was a valuable member of the pack.

Lolita chapter 1 . 12/9/2013

This was awesome- well-written and interesting. I loved how you portrayed Isaac and Derek and the others. Being inside Isaac's head was heartbreaking, but it was okay because it was realistic. I loved all the pack feelings especially. These kinds of fics are my favorites, and this one was especially well done.

Thanks for the story.

-Lolita

Sarah chapter 1 . 11/27/2013

That was really well written, realistic for all the characters. Story wise, it was well structured. Pretty awesome all round.