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Guardian Style 2013 - English Proofreading

Guardian Style Guide 2013.
The Guardian Style Guide is an invaluable source of information about
word usage, grammar and punctuation.
A
a or an before H?
Use an before a silent H: an heir, an hour, an honest politician, an honorary consul; use a
before an aspirated H: a hero, a hotel, a historian (but don't change a direct quote if the
speaker says, for example, "an historic"). With abbreviations, be guided by pronunciation:
eg an LSE student
A*
(A-level and GCSE) not A-star
A&E
accident and emergency
abattoir
abbeys
take initial cap, eg Westminster Abbey
Abbottabad
city in Pakistan where Osama bin Laden lived and died
abbreviations and acronyms
Do not use full points in abbreviations, or spaces between initials, including those in proper
names: IMF, mph, eg, 4am, M&S, No 10, AN Wilson, WH Smith, etc.
Use all capitals if an abbreviation is pronounced as the individual letters (an initialism):
BBC, CEO, US, VAT, etc; if it is an acronym (pronounced as a word) spell out with initial
capital, eg Nasa, Nato, Unicef, unless it can be considered to have entered the language
as an everyday word, such as awol, laser and, more recently, asbo, pin number and sim
card. Note that pdf and plc are lowercase.
If an abbreviation or acronym is to be used more than once in a piece, put it in brackets at
first mention: so Association of Chief Police Officers (Acpo), seasonal affective disorder
(Sad); alternatively, use the abbreviation with a brief description, eg the conservation
charity the RSPB. Remember that our international online readership will not necessarily
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be aware of even well-known UK abbreviations. If an organisation is mentioned only once,
it is not necessary to give its abbreviation or acronym.
Cap up single letters in such expressions as C-list, F-word, "the word assassin contains
four Ss", etc
See contractions
abdicate
renounce high office; abnegate renounce privileges, deny oneself; abrogate repeal,
abolish
abjure
renounce; adjure urge
Aborigines, Aboriginal
uc when referring to native Australians
aborigines, aboriginal
lc when referring to indigenous populations
abscess
absorb
but absorption
abysmal
abyss
a cappella
Italian for "in the style of the church", ie unaccompanied singing
Acas
the Advisory, Conciliation and Arbitration Service, at first mention; thereafter just Acas
accents
Use on French, German, Portuguese, Spanish and Irish Gaelic words (but not anglicised
French words such as cafe, apart from exposé, lamé, résumé, roué).
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People's names, in whatever language, should also be given appropriate accents where
known. Thus: "Arsène Wenger was on holiday in Bogotá with Rafa Benítez"
Accenture
formerly Andersen Consulting; the new name was devised by an employee from "accent
on the future"
access
has been known as contact since the 1989 Children Act
accommodate, accommodation
accordion
not accordian
achilles heel, achilles tendon
acknowledgment
not acknowledgement
acres
Use hectares, with acres in brackets, rounded up: eg the field measured 25 hectares (62
acres).
You multiply hectares by 2.47 to convert to acres, or acres by 0.4 to convert to hectares
acronyms
See abbreviations and acronyms
act
uc when using full name, eg Criminal Justice Act 1998, Official Secrets Act; but lc on
second reference, eg "the act", and when speaking in more general terms, eg "we need a
radical freedom of information act"; bills remain lc until passed into law
Action on Hearing Loss
formerly known as the Royal National Institute for Deaf People (RNID)
actor
Use for both male and female actors; do not use actress except when in name of award,
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eg Oscar for best actress. The Guardian's view is that actress comes into the same
category as authoress, comedienne, manageress, "lady doctor", "male nurse" and similar
obsolete terms that date from a time when professions were largely the preserve of one
sex (usually men). As Whoopi Goldberg put it in an interview with the paper: "An actress
can only play a woman. I'm an actor – I can play anything."
There is normally no need to differentiate between the sexes – and if there is, the words
male and female are perfectly adequate: Lady Gaga won a Brit in 2010 for best
international female artist, not artiste, chanteuse, or songstress.
As always, use common sense: a piece about the late film director Carlo Ponti was edited
to say that in his early career he was "already a man with a good eye for pretty actors ... "
As the readers' editor pointed out in the subsequent clarification: "This was one of those
occasions when the word 'actresses' might have been used"
AD, BC
AD goes before the date (AD64), BC goes after (300BC); both go after the century, eg
second century AD, fourth century BC
adaptation
not adaption
adapter
someone who adapts; adaptor plug
addendum
plural addendums
Latinate -um neuter endings that are a part of the language (eg stadium) take an -s plural.
Exceptions: bacteria, which retain the Latin plural and take a plural verb, as do media, but
note that spiritualists are mediums
addresses
like this: 90 York Way, London N1 9GU
Adidas
initial cap, although adidas is lc in the company logo
administration
the Obama administration, etc
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admissible, inadmissible
not -able
admit
Take care – as a reader put it when we referred to Tory MPs who "admitted" being gay:
"Admit in modern English is almost exclusively used when conceding or confessing
something negative and/or of which one is or should be ashamed. Please be more careful.
Language can offend." Quite.
The former Washington Post editor Ben Bradlee urged reporters not to "hide their biases
and emotions behind subtly pejorative words" such as admit
adoption
Mention that children are adopted only when relevant to the story: a reader points out that
"explicitly calling attention to adoptions in this way suggests that adoption is not as good,
and not as real a relationship, as having a child normally".
So say biological father, biological family rather than "real father", "real family", etc
Adrenalin
TM; a brand of adrenaline
adrenaline
hormone that increases heart rate and blood pressure, extracted from animals or
synthesised for medical uses
advance bookings
rather than "advanced bookings". Or you could just say "bookings"
adverbs
Do not use hyphens after adverbs ending in -ly, eg a hotly disputed penalty, a constantly
evolving newspaper, genetically modified food, etc; but hyphens are needed with short and
common adverbs, eg ever-forgiving family, ill-prepared report, much-loved character, wellfounded suspicion
adviser
not advisor
advocate
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member of the Scottish bar (not a barrister)
aeroplane
affect/effect
exhortations in the style guide had no effect (noun) on the number of mistakes; the level of
mistakes was not affected (verb) by exhortations in the style guide; we hope to effect
(verb) a change in this
affidavit
a written declaration made on oath, so "sworn affidavit" is tautologous
affinity
with or between, not to or for
afghan
hound
Afghans
people
afghani
currency of Afghanistan
aficionado
plural aficionados
African American
African-Caribbean
not Afro-Caribbean
Afrikaans
language
Afrikaner
person
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Afrikander
cattle breed
afro
hairstyle
afterlife, aftermath
ageing
ages
David Cameron, 45 (not "aged 45"); little Lucy, four; the woman was in her 20s (but
twentysomething, thirtysomething, etc)
Age UK
charity formed by the merger of Age Concern and Help the Aged in 2009
aggravate
widely used both in the sense of to make worse and to annoy; the former dates from the
1590s, the latter from the 1610s
aggro
abbreviation of aggravation, and spelt thus despite the once popular terrace chant "A, G,
A-G-R, A-G-R-O: agro!"
AGM
a-ha
band from Norway; A-ha! Alan Partridge catchphrase, quoting Abba's Knowing Me,
Knowing You
ahead of
overused, and often jars ("Why else would they hurriedly concoct their own 'Confucius
peace prize', a day ahead of the ceremony in Oslo?" appeared in a leading article); before
(which should have been used in this case) or in advance ofare among the alternatives
aide-de-camp
plural aides-de-camp (aide is a noun)
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aide-memoire
plural aide-memoires (aide is a verb)
Aids
acquired immune deficiency syndrome, but normally no need to spell out.
Do not use such terms as "Aids victims" or someone "suffering from Aids", language that in
the words of one reader is "crass, inaccurate and reinforces stigma", implying
helplessness and inviting pity; "people with Aids" or "living with Aids" are preferable.
Do not use the term "full-blown Aids". Unesco guidelines state: "This term implies that
there are varying stages of Aids ... People have Aids only when they present with an Aidsdefining illness"
airbase, aircrew, airdrop, airfield, airlift, airmail, airspace, airstrip, airtime
aircraft
designations usually take hyphens after initials, e.g. B-52, MiG-23
aircraft carrier
air fares, air force, air raid, air show, air strike
Air Force One
US president's jet
air hostess
cabin attendant or flight attendant, please
airports
Heathrow, Gatwick, Stansted (normally no need to say airport); Liverpool John Lennon
airport, Schiphol airport, etc
air vice-marshal
AKA
also known as
akimbo
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See arms akimbo
al(note lc and hyphen) before an Arabic name means "the" so try to avoid writing "the al- ..."
where possible
See Arabic names
al-Aqsa Martyrs Brigade
Alastair or Alistair?
Alastair Campbell (spin doctor)
Alastair Cook (cricketer)
Alastair Hetherington (late Guardian editor)
Alastair Stewart (broadcaster)
Alistair Cooke (late BBC and Guardian journalist)
Alistair Darling (politician)
Alistair MacLean (late novelist)
Alistair McGowan (impressionist)
Aleister Crowley (late satanist)
Albright, Madeleine
former US secretary of state
Alcott, Louisa May
(1832-88) American author of Little Women
A-levels
Al Fayed, Mohamed
owner of Harrods (Fayed after first mention; Mr Fayed if honorific is needed); the son who
died in Paris in 1997 was Dodi Fayed
Alfonsín, Raúl
(1927-2009) president of Argentina from 1983-89
alfresco
algae
plural of alga
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Ali, Muhammad
was Cassius Clay until 1964
alibi
being somewhere else; not synonymous with excuse
alice band
as worn by Alice in Lewis Carroll's Through the Looking-Glass, and What Alice Found
There (1871) and more recently David Beckham
Alice books
Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, by Lewis Carroll (Charles Lutwidge Dodgson), was
published in 1865; its sequel, which followed six years later, is called Through the LookingGlass, and What Alice Found There.
Note that they are not called "Alice in Wonderland" and "Alice Through the Looking-Glass"
A-list
etc, but to refer to "C-list celebrities" and its variations has become tedious. An edition of
G2 referred to "D-list celebrities" and, less than hilariously, in a separate piece about the
same reality TV show, "Z-list celebrities"
al-Jazeera
Allah
Arabic for "the God". Both words refer to the same concept: there is no major difference
between God in the Old Testament and Allah in Islam. Therefore it makes sense to talk
about "God" in an Islamic context and to use "Allah" in quotations or for literary effect
Allahu Akbar
"God is greatest"
Allawi, Ayad
Iraqi politician
Allende, Isabel
Chilean author; her father was a cousin of Salvador Allende
Allende, Salvador
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Chilean president, overthrown and killed in 1973
allies
second world war allies, the allied invasion, etc
all mouth and trousers
not "all mouth and no trousers"
all right
is right; alright is not all right (but note the Who song, much loved by generations of
headline writers, was The Kids are Alright)
All Souls College
Oxford, no apostrophe
al-Maliki, Nouri
(not Nuri) became prime minister of Iraq in 2006
Almo
arm's-length management organisation
Almodóvar, Pedro
Spanish film-maker
alpha male
al-Qaida
it means "the base"
al-Sadr, Moqtada
creator of the Mahdi army, or as the magazine Red Pepper described it: "Moqtada alSadr's not-so-barmy army"
alsatian
dog
Alsatian
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person from Alsace
al-Shabaab
Islamist insurgency group in Somalia; it means "the youth". Singular not plural.
also
often redundant
Alta Vista
alter ego
not "altar ego", as we have been known to spell it
alternative
normally a choice between two courses of action; if there are more than two, option or
choice may be preferred; beware the trend to use "alternate" instead of alternative: in a
piece about French politics we wrote "in this juddering alternate reality …"
alumnus
plural alumni; although in the UK graduate is preferable
al-Zaidi, Muntazer
Iraqi journalist who served a jail sentence for throwing his shoes at the then US president,
George Bush
Alzheimer's disease
AM (assembly member)
member of the Welsh assembly
Amazon
normally no need for com or co.uk
ambassador
lc, eg the British ambassador to Washington; "ambassador, you are spoiling us" has
become a headline cliche
ambience
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not ambiance
amendments
to the US constitution like this: fifth amendment, 18th amendment, etc
America, Americans
the country is generally the United States or US, although its citizens are Americans; we
should remember that America includes all of North and South America
American English
We follow British English spellings: secretary of defence, Labour Day, World Trade Centre,
etc; exceptions are placenames such as Ann Arbor, Pearl Harbor
American Civil Liberties Union
not American Civil Rights Union
American universities
Take care: "University of X" is not the same as "X University"; most states have two large
public universities, eg University of Kentucky and Kentucky State University, University of
Illinois and Illinois State University, etc.
Do not call Johns Hopkins University "John Hopkins" or Stanford University "Stamford"
America's Cup
sailing trophy named after the schooner America, its first winner
Amhrán na bhFiann
Irish national anthem
Amicus
trade union formed by a merger between the AEEU and MSF, now part of Unite after a
further merger with the TGWU
amid
not amidst
amok
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not amuck
among
not amongst
among or between?
Whatever you may have been told, between is not limited to two parties. It is appropriate
when the relationship is essentially reciprocal: fighting between the many peoples of
Yugoslavia, treaties between European countries, etc; among belongs to distributive
relationships: shared among, etc
amount or number?
amount refers to a quantity, number to something that can be counted, eg an enormous
amount of energy was exerted by a small number of people
ampersand
Use in company names when the company does: Johnson & Johnson, Marks & Spencer,
P&O, etc
anaesthetic
analysis
plural analyses
ancestors
precede descendants; we frequently manage to get them the wrong way round
Andalusia
Anderson shelter
not Andersen
anglicise, anglophile, anglophone
animals
pronoun "it" unless gender established
annex
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verb; annexe noun; I am going to annex the annexe for the afternoon
anorexic
is not a superlative of thin. Anorexia is an illness. Like schizophrenia, it should not be used
as a cheap and lazy metaphor. Anyone who thinks of using a phrase such as "positively
anorexic" should think again
Ansaphone
TM; use answering machine or answerphone
antenna
(insect) plural antennae; (radio) plural antennas
anti-ballistic missile treaty
antichrist
anticipate
take action in expectation of; not synonymous with expect
anticlimax
antidepressants
antidisestablishmentarianism
position adopted by those opposed to the disestablishment of the Church of England.
Not recommended for use in headlines
antihero
antipodean, antipodes
antisemitic, antisemitism
no hyphen: it does not mean "anti-Semitic"
antisocial
anti-war
any more
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Please do not say "anymore" any more
apex
plural apexes
apostrofly
"an insect that lands at random on the printed page, depositing an apostrophe wherever it
lands" according to the Guardian's former readers' editor
apostrophes
used to indicate a missing letter or letters (can't, we'd) or a possessive (David's book).
Don't let anyone tell you that apostrophes don't matter and we would be better off without
them. Consider these four phrases, each of which means something different:
my sister's friend's books (refers to one sister and her friend).
my sister's friends' books (one sister with lots of friends).
my sisters' friend's books (more than one sister, and their friend).
my sisters' friends' books (more than one sister, and their friends).
The possessive in words and names ending in S normally takes an apostrophe followed by
a second S (Jones's, James's), but be guided by pronunciation and use the plural
apostrophe where it helps: Mephistopheles', Waters', Hedges' rather than
Mephistopheles's, Waters's, Hedges's.
Plural nouns that do not end in S take an apostrophe and S in the possessive: children's
games, old folk's home, people's republic, etc.
Phrases such as butcher's knife, collector's item, cow's milk, goat's cheese, pig's blood,
hangman's noose, writer's cramp, etc are treated as singular.
Use apostrophes in phrases such as two days' time, 12 years' imprisonment and six
weeks' holiday, where the time period (two days) modifies a noun (time), but not in nine
months pregnant or three weeks old, where the time period is adverbial (modifying an
adjective such as pregnant or old) – if in doubt, test with a singular such as one day's time,
one month pregnant.
Some shops use an apostrophe, wrongly, to indicate a plural ("pea's"), but will generally
omit the apostrophe when one is actually required ("new seasons asparagus"), a
phenomenon sometimes referred to as the greengrocer's (or grocer's) apostrophe. Try to
avoid this
app
an application for, typically, a mobile phone
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appal
but as the Prince of Wales might say, it really is appalling
apparatchik
appeal
In British English you appeal against a decision, verdict, etc, you do not "appeal the
verdict". After we reported on 9 June 2010 that a convicted murderer "successfully
appealed the sentence", a despairing reader wrote: "This usage seems to be occurring
more and more, sometimes even in headlines. Do Guardian journalists not read the style
guide?" Not all of them, evidently
appendix
plural appendices
Apple
no longer Apple Computer
apples
lc: cox's orange pippin, golden delicious, granny smith, etc
appraise
to evaluate
apprise
to inform
April Fools' Day
also known, less commonly nowadays, as All Fools' Day; an individual prank, or the victim
of one, is an April fool, so you might say "one of the greatest April fools was the Guardian's
San Serriffe issue of 1977 – it made April fools of all who were taken in"
aquarium
plural aquariums
Arab
Both a noun and an adjective, and the preferred adjective when referring to Arab things in
general, eg Arab history, Arab traditions. Arabic usually refers to the language and
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literature: "the Arabic press" means newspapers written in Arabic, while "the Arab press"
would include newspapers produced by Arabs in other languages.
There is no simple definition of an Arab. At an international level, the 22 members of the
Arab League can safely be described as Arab countries: Algeria, Bahrain, Comoros,
Djibouti, Egypt, Iraq, Jordan, Kuwait, Lebanon, Libya, Mauritania, Morocco, Oman,
Palestine, Qatar, Saudi Arabia, Somalia, Sudan, Syria, Tunisia, United Arab Emirates, and
Yemen. At a human level, there are substantial groups within those countries – the
Berbers of north Africa and the Kurds, for example – who do not regard themselves as
Arabs
Arabic names
Though Arabic has only three vowels – a, i and u – it has several consonants that have no
equivalent in the Roman alphabet. For instance, there are two kinds of s, d and t. There
are also two glottal sounds. This means there are dozens of ways of writing the former
Libyan leader Muammar Gaddafi's name in English, and a reasonable argument can be
made for adopting almost any of them. With no standard approach to transliteration agreed
by the western media, we must try to balance consistency, comprehensibility and
familiarity – which often puts a strain on all three.
Typically, Arabs have at least three names. In some cases the first or second name may
be the one that is most used, and this does not imply familiarity (Arabs often address
foreigners politely as "Mr John" or "Dr David"). Often Arabs also have familiar names that
have no connection with the names on their identity cards: a man might become known
after the birth of his first son as "Abu Ahmad", and a woman as "Umm Ahmad", the father
or mother of Ahmad (eg the Palestinian leader Ahmed Qureia is commonly known as Abu
Ala).
Where a particular spelling has become widely accepted through usage we should retain
it. Where an individual with links to the west has clearly adopted a particular spelling of his
or her own name, we should respect that. For breaking news and stories using names for
which we have no established style, we take the lead given by Reuters wire copy.
Note also that names in some parts of the Arab world have become gallicised, while others
have become anglicised, eg the leading Egyptian film director Youssef Chahine uses a
French spelling instead of the English transliteration, Shaheen.
Some guidelines (for use particularly where there is no established transliteration):
al- Means "the". In names it is not capitalised, eg Ahmad al-Saqqaf, and can be dropped
after the first mention (Mr Saqqaf). For placenames we drop it altogether. Sometimes it
appears as as- or ash- or ad- or ul-: these should be ignored and can be safely rewritten
as al-. But some Arabs, including Syrians and Egyptians, prefer to use el- in place of al-.
Exceptions: by convention, Allah (al-Lah, literally "the God") is written as one word and
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capitalised; and in Saudi royal names, Al Saud is correct (in this case, "al" is actually "aal"
and does not mean "the").
abdul, abu and bin These are not self-contained names, but are connected to the name
that follows: abdul means "slave of … " and so cannot correctly be used on its own. There
are standard combinations, "slave of the merciful one", "slave of the generous one", etc,
which all indicate that the person is a servant of God. In transliteration, "abd" (slave) is
lowercase, eg Ahmad abd al-Rahman al-Saqqaf, except when used at the start of a name.
abu (father of) and bin (son of) are similar. When they appear in the middle of a name they
should be lower case and are used in combination with the following part of the name:
Faisal abu Ahmad al-Saqqaf, Faisal bin Ahmad al-Saqqaf. Despite the above, some
people are actually known as "Abdul". This is more common among non-Arab Muslims.
And some Arabs run "abd" or "abu" into the following word, eg the writer Abdelrahman
Munif.
Muhammad
Our style for the prophet's name and for most Muhammads living in Arab countries, though
where someone's preferred spelling is known we respect it, eg Mohamed Al Fayed,
Mohamed ElBaradei. The spelling Mohammed (or variants) is considered archaic by most
British Muslims, and disrespectful by many of them.
Muhandis/Mohandes, Qadi
Be wary of names where the first word is Muhandis or Qadi: these are honorary titles,
meaning engineer and judge respectively
Arab spring
Aran Island
is off Co Donegal and the Aran Islands off Co Galway in western Ireland; the Isle of
Arran is the largest island in the Firth of Clyde in Scotland. Aran sweaters, whether Irish
or Scottish, come in lowercase with an initial cap A
arcane
esoteric; archaic antiquated (yes, we got them the wrong way round)
archbishops
It is not normally necessary to use their formal title, which for both Anglicans and Catholics
is Most Rev: so Rowan Williams, the archbishop of Canterbury, at first mention, thereafter
Williams or the archbishop (except in leading articles, where he is Dr Williams); Vincent
Nichols, the archbishop of Westminster, on first mention, subsequently Nichols or the
archbishop
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archdeacon
the Ven Paul Olive, archdeacon of Farringdon, at first mention; thereafter Olive, or the
archdeacon
archery
arrows are shot, rather than fired; and if they hit the centre of the target, it is a gold rather
than a bullseye
archipelago
plural archipelagos
arch-rival
an arch rival would mean something different
Ardoyne
(Belfast), not "the Ardoyne"
Argentina, Argentinian
arguably
unarguably one of the most overused words in the language
Armageddon
armed forces, armed services
the army, the British army, the navy, but Royal Navy, Royal Air Force or RAF
arms akimbo
hands on hips, elbows out; it is surprising how often the phrase "legs akimbo" turns up in
the paper, "suggesting that such a posture exists, but lacks a word to define it", as David
McKie wrote.
The radical theatre group in the BBC TV comedy series The League of Gentlemen was
called Legz Akimbo
around
about or approximately are better, eg "about £1m" or "approximately 2,000 people"
around or round?
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We were driving around aimlessly all weekend; it nearly drove me round the bend
arranged marriages
are a traditional and perfectly acceptable form of wedlock across southern Asia and within
the Asian community in Britain; they should not be confused with forced marriages, which
are arranged without the consent of one or both partners, and have been widely criticised
arse
British English; ass American English
art movements
are generally lowercase, eg art deco, art nouveau, cubism, dadaism, expressionism,
gothic, impressionism, pop art, surrealism, etc, but note Bauhaus, Modern (in the sense of
Modern British, to distinguish it from "modern art", pre-Raphaelite, Romantic (to
differentiate between a romantic painting and a Romantic painting)
artefact
artist
not artiste (except, possibly, in a historical context)
Arts and Crafts movement
Arts Council England, Arts Council of Wales, Creative Scotland
as or since?
"as" is causal: I cannot check the online style guide as the connection is down; "since" is
temporal: Luckily, I have had the latest edition of Guardian Style on my desk since it was
published
asbo
antisocial behaviour order
ascendancy, ascendant
Asean
Association of Southeast (sic) Asian Nations
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Ash
Action on Smoking and Health
Ashura
a day of voluntary fasting for Muslims; Shia Muslims also commemorate the martyrdom of
Hussein, a grandson of the prophet, so for them it is not a festival but a day of mourning
Asperger's syndrome
aspirin
al-Assad, Bashar
became president of Syria in 2000 after the death of his father, Hafez al-Assad
assassin, assassination
the murder of prominent political figures rather than, say, celebrities
assisted dying
is preferable to "assisted suicide"
astrologer, astrology
horoscopes
astronomer, astronomy
telescopes
astronomer royal
currently Lord Rees
Asunción
capital of Paraguay
asylum seeker
Someone seeking refugee status or humanitarian protection; there is no such thing as an
"illegal asylum seeker", a term the Press Complaints Commission ruled in breach of its
code of practice.
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Refugees are people who have fled their home countries in fear for their lives, and may
have been granted asylum under the 1951 refugee convention or qualify for humanitarian
protection or discretionary leave, or have been granted exceptional leave to remain in
Britain.
Someone who is refused asylum should be referred to as a refused asylum seeker, not a
"failed asylum seeker".
An asylum seeker can become an illegal immigrant only if he or she remains in Britain
after having failed to respond to a removal notice
ATCU
Associated Train Crew Union; not to be confused with ACTU, the Australian Council of
Trade Unions
athletics
1500m but 5,000m (the former is the "fifteen hundred" not "one thousand five hundred"
metres)
Atlantic Ocean
or just the Atlantic
attache
no accent
attention deficit hyperactivity disorder
ADHD after first mention
Attlee, Clement
(1883-1967) Labour prime minister 1945-51, often misspelt as Atlee
attorney general
lc, no hyphen; plural attorney generals (there will be those who tell you it should be
"attorneys general" – See berks and wankers)
auger
used to make holes
augur
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predict or presage
Aum Shinrikyo
means Supreme Truth sect, but note that the "aum" means sect, so to talk about the "Aum
sect" or "Aum cult" is tautologous
Aung San Suu Kyi
Use her full name (as with other Burmese names), even on second and subsequent
mentions, in copy; if absolutely necessary, Suu Kyi is permissible in headlines
Auntie
not Aunty if you must refer to the BBC in this way
au pair
Australasia
Oceania is preferable See Oceania
Australian Labor party
not Labour
autism
neurological disorder, to be used only when referring to the condition, not as a term of
abuse, or in producing such witticisms as "mindless moral autism" and "Star Wars is a
form of male autism", both of which have appeared
autistic
someone with autism, not someone with poor social skills
Autocue
TM; teleprompter is a generic alternative
Auto-Tune
TM; also Auto-Tuned, etc
autumn
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AV
the alternative vote electoral system
avant garde
no hyphen
average, mean and median
Although we loosely refer to the "average" in many contexts (eg pay), there are two useful
averages worth distinguishing.
What is commonly known as the average is the mean: everyone's wages are added up
and divided by the number of wage earners. The median is described as "the value below
which 50% of employees fall", ie it is the wage earned by the middle person when
everyone's wages are lined up from smallest to largest. (For even numbers there are two
middle people, but you calculate the mean average of their two wages.)
The median is often a more useful guide than the mean, which can be distorted by figures
at one extreme or the other
awards and prizes
are generally lc, eg Guardian first book award, Nobel peace prize (but note Academy
Awards)
lc for categories, eg Colin Firth won the best actor Oscar, Chipmunk was voted best
newcomer at the 2008 Mobos, etc
awol
stands for "absent without leave" but, having been around since at least the 1920s, has
established itself as a word in its own right
awopbopaloobop alopbamboom
from Little Richard's Tutti Frutti (1955), a recording that has been described as "the sound
of the birth of rock'n'roll"
axing
not axeing, but cutting jobs is less cliched than axing them
axis
plural axes
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Ayers Rock
now known as Uluru
Azerbaijan
noun, Azerbaijani adjective; note that there are ethnic Azeris living in, for example,
Armenia
Aznar, José María
former prime minister of Spain
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B
bit or binary digit; B byte, usually made up of 8 bits
See byte
BAA
formerly the British Airports Authority
Ba'ath party
it means renaissance or resurrection
Babybel
cheese
baby Bells
US regional telephone companies formed after the breakup of AT&T in 1984
baby boomer
Babygro
TM; a generic alternative is babygrow
Baby P
Peter Connelly, who died in Haringey in 2007, was known as Baby P or Baby Peter
babysit, babysitter
the noun "baby-sitter" came first (in 1937), and the verb "to baby-sit" was derived from it a
decade later, an interesting example of back-formation
baccalaureate
abbreviation bac, but the new English baccalaureate is abbreviated to Ebacc
bacchanalia
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originally wild festivals dedicated to the god Bacchus; now drunken revelry as found in
most British towns on a Saturday night, lowercase with singular verb: the bacchanalia is
likely to continue until we all pass out
Bacharach, Burt
US songwriter, born 1928
bachelor
now has a slightly old-fashioned ring to it, so probably better to say (if relevant) unmarried
man; "confirmed bachelor" should definitely be avoided, as should "bachelor girl" (unless
writing about swinging 60s movies)
backbench
newspaper or politics; backbenches, backbenchers
back catalogue
back-scratching
backstory, backstreet, backyard
bacteria
plural of bacterium, so don't write "the bacteria is"; even more important, don't confuse
with viruses
BAE Systems
formerly British Aerospace
Bafta
British Academy of Film and Television Arts
bagel
not baigel or beigel
Baghdad
Bahá'í faith
bailout
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noun
bail out
a prisoner, a company or person in financial difficulty; but bale out a boat or from an
aircraft
baker's dozen
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bakewell tart
balk
obstruct, pull up, stop short; baulk area of a snooker table
ballboy, ballgirl, ballgame, ballgown, ballpark
ballot, balloted
Band-Aid
TM; say plaster or sticking plaster
B&B
abbreviation for bed and breakfast
band names
lc the: the Beatles, the Killers, the The; but uc equivalents in other languages, eg Les
Négresses Vertes, Los Lobos. Bands that do not take the definite article (although they are
often erroneously given it) include Arctic Monkeys, Pet Shop Boys and Ramones; for most
bands, this can be easily checked online.
Bands take a plural verb: Snow Patrol are overrated, Iron Butterfly were the loudest band
of the 60s, etc.
Try to include diacritical marks if bands use them in their name, no matter how absurd:
Maxïmo Park, Mötley Crüe, Motörhead, etc; for a comprehensive list see the excellent
"metal umlaut" entry on Wikipedia
Bangalore
is now known as Bengaluru
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bank holiday
bank holiday Monday, etc
Ban Ki-moon
UN secretary general; Ban on second mention
banknote
Bank of England
the Bank on subsequent mentions
Bank of Scotland
BoS on second mention
banlieue
French for suburbia, not suburb: strictly singular, but a French reader points out that the
Petit Robert dictionary listed "les banlieues" among its "nouveaux mots" in 2006; the
French for suburb is faubourg (literally, "false town")
bar
(legal) she was called to the bar; (political) of the House of Commons
barbecue
Barclays Bank
barcode
barmitzvah, batmitzvah
Barnardo's
children's charity, formerly Dr Barnardo's; it no longer runs orphanages
barolo
wine
Baron Cohen, Sacha
the man behind Ali G and Borat
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Baron-Cohen, Simon
a professor of developmental psychopathology at Cambridge University and cousin of
Sacha
barons, baronesses
are lords and ladies in our publications, even at first mention: Lord Adonis, Lady Warsi,
etc; do not use first names with title ("Lady Patricia Scotland"), even if you claim to be on
good terms with the peer in question
Barons Court
baroque
barracks
the army has barracks, the RAF has airfields
Barroso, José Manuel
former prime minister of Portugal, subsequently president of the European commission
Barts
abbreviation for St Bartholomew's hospital, London
Base jumping
extreme sport; the acronym stands for four categories of object from which you can jump,
if so inclined: building, antenna, span and earth
basically
this word is unnecessary, basically
Basel
not Basle
basket case
originally referred to quadriplegics who had suffered catastrophic wounds in the first world
war; now a cliche used mainly to describe currencies or countries of which a newspaper
disapproves. Either way, the phrase is best avoided
Basque country
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bas-relief
bated breath
not baited
Battenberg
(not Battenburg) German family name that became Mountbatten; battenberg cake lc
Battersea Dogs & Cats Home
no apostrophes
battlebus
Bauhaus
BBC1, BBC2, BBC3, BBC4
no spaces
BBC News
is no longer BBC News 24
BBC Radio 1, 2, 3, 4, 4 Extra, 5 Live, 6 Music
BC
1000BC but AD1066
be-all and end-all
beau
plural beaux
Beaufort scale
measure of wind speed created in 1806 by Sir Francis Beaufort.
There are 13 classes, as follows: 0 calm, 1 light air, 2 light breeze, 3 gentle breeze, 4
moderate breeze, 5 fresh breeze, 6 strong breeze, 7 near gale, 8 gale, 9 strong gale, 10
storm, 11 violent storm, 12 hurricane.
Forces 13 to 17, used in China and Taiwan, cover cyclones and typhoons
beaujolais, beaujolais nouveau
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wine; Beaujolais region where it is produced
Beaver scouts
for boys (and now girls) aged six to eight, when they are eligible to become Cub scouts
bebop, hard bop, post-bop
jazz genres
Be-Bop-A-Lula
Gene Vincent song
because
can be ambiguous: "I didn't go to the party because Mary was there" may mean that
Mary's presence dissuaded me from going or that I went to sample the canapés
Becket, Thomas (1118-70)
murdered archbishop of Canterbury, not "Thomas à Becket"
becquerel
the activity of a quantity of radioactive material in which one nucleus decays in a second;
the time measurement is included, so it is wrong to say "becquerels per hour"
bed blocking
Bedouin
beef wellington
Beeton, Mrs
(Isabella Mary Beeton, 1836-65) author of The Book of Household Management
begs the question
This phrase is almost invariably misused: it means assuming a proposition that, in reality,
involves the conclusion. An example would be to say that parallel lines will never meet,
because they are parallel.
The concept can be traced as far back as Aristotle, but HW Fowler, whose entry on
begging the question is listed under the Latin petitio principii (assumption of the basis),
defines it as "the fallacy of founding a conclusion on a basis that as much needs to be
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proved as the conclusion itself", giving as an example "foxhunting is not cruel, since the
fox enjoys the fun".
Now used widely to mean "raises the question", its traditional sense is being lost, which
seems a sad fate for a phrase that might be useful or even – in a logical or philosophical
context – essential
Beijing
Belarus
adjective Belarusian
beleaguered
overused, even when we spell it correctly
believable
Belisha beacons
flashing orange lamps on black and white poles at zebra crossings, named after Leslie
Hore-Belisha, the minister of transport who introduced them in 1934; have given way in
many cases to pelican crossings (little red and green men)
bellringing, bellringers
no hyphens
Bell's whisky
bellwether
sheep that leads the herd; customarily misspelt, misused, or both
benefactor, beneficiary
are sometimes confused: the former gives something; the latter gets it
benefited, benefiting
Benetton
Bengaluru
formerly Bangalore
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Berchtesgaden
berks and wankers
Kingsley Amis identified two principal groups in debates over use of language: "Berks are
careless, coarse, crass, gross and of what anybody would agree is a lower social class
than one's own; wankers are prissy, fussy, priggish, prim and of what they would probably
misrepresent as a higher social class than one's own"
Berliner
newspaper format, narrower and shorter than a broadsheet, taller and wider than a tabloid;
the Guardian switched to Berliner format on 12 September 2005
Berlin Wall
Bermuda
the adjective is Bermudian (not Bermudan) and its citizens are Bermudians
Bernabéu stadium
the home of Real Madrid
Berne
not Bern
berserk
not beserk
Berwick-upon-Tweed
is in England, although Berwick Rangers play football in the Scottish League
bestseller, bestselling
Betaferon
TM; the generic term for the drug is interferon-beta 1b
bete noire
no accents
betting odds
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We frequently get this wrong. A brief explanation: long odds (eg 100-1 against, normally
expressed as 100-1) mean something unlikely; shorter odds (eg 10-1) still mean it's
unlikely, but less unlikely; odds on (eg 2-1 on, sometimes expressed as 1-2) means it is
likely, so if you were betting £2 you would win only £1 plus the stake.
Take care using the phrase "odds on": if Labour is quoted by bookmakers at 3-1 to win a
byelection, and the odds are cut to 2-1, it is wrong to say "the odds on Labour to win were
cut last night" – in fact, the odds against Labour to win have been cut (the shorter the
price, the more likely something is expected to happen).
It gets more complicated when something is genuinely odds-on, ie bookmakers quote a
price of "2-1 on": in this case, if the Labour candidate is quoted at 2-1 on and becomes an
even hotter favourite, at 3-1 on, the odds have shortened; if Labour loses popularity, and
2-1 on becomes, say, 7-4 on or evens, the odds have lengthened
between 15 and 20
not "between 15 to 20" or "between 15-20"
Bevan, Aneurin
(1897-1960) Labour health minister from 1945 to 1951 and architect of the NHS. Also
known as Nye Bevan. In a 1948 speech he described Tories as "lower than vermin"
Beverly Hills
Bevin, Ernest
(1881-1951) Labour foreign secretary between 1945 and 1951 who helped to create Nato.
Not to be confused with Nye Bevan
Beyoncé
beyond the pale
not pail; this pale is derived from the Latin palus, a stake as used to support a fence (cf
palisade); hence the figurative meaning of beyond the pale as being outside the boundary,
unacceptable
biannual
twice a year; biennial every two years; biannual is almost always misused, so to avoid
confusion stick with the alternative twice-yearly; an alternative to biennial istwo-yearly
bias, biased
Bible
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cap up if referring to Old or New Testament, lc in such sentences as "the stylebook
is my bible"; the adjective biblical is always lc
Bible belt
biblical quotations
Use a modern translation, not the Authorised Version. From a reader: "Peradventure the
editor hath no copy of Holy Writ in the office, save the King James Version only. Howbeit
the great multitude of believers knoweth this translation not. And he (or she) who quoteth
the words of Jesus in ancient form, sheweth plainly that he (or she) considereth them to be
out of date. Wherefore let them be quoted in such manner that the people may
understand"
biblical references
like this: Genesis 1:1; II Corinthians 2:13; Revelation 3:16 (anyone calling it "Revelations"
will burn in hell for eternity)
bicentenary
a 200th anniversary; bicentennial its adjective
biceps
singular and plural (there is no such thing as a bicep)
bid
Use only in a financial or sporting sense, eg Royal Bank of Scotland's disastrous bid for
ABN Amro, Barcelona have put in a bid for Rooney, etc; or when writing about an auction.
Say in an attempt to, in an effort to, rather than "in a bid to"; in headlines, move is a useful
alternative
big
usually preferable to major, massive, giant, mammoth, behemoth, etc
big bang
lowercase, whether you are talking about the origin of the universe, around 14 billion years
ago, or deregulation of the City of London in 1986
'big society'
described by Simon Hoggart as "surely the vaguest slogan ever coined by a political
leader. Nobody knows what it means." Until they do, keep it in quotation marks at first
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mention
bill
lc, even when giving full name; cap up only if it becomes an act
billion
one thousand million: in copy use bn for sums of money, quantities or inanimate objects:
£10bn, 1bn litres of water; otherwise billion: 6 billion people, etc; use bn in headlines
bin Laden, Osama
Bin Laden on second reference. He has been stripped of his Saudi citizenship, so can be
described as Saudi-born but not as a Saudi
biodegradable, bioengineering, bioethics, biofuel
but bio-based economy, bio-products
Birds Eye
TM; two words, no apostrophe, named after the frozen food pioneer Clarence Frank
Birdseye II (1886-1956)
birdwatchers
also known as birders, not "twitchers"; they go birdwatching or birding, not "twitching"
Biro
TM; say ballpoint pen
birthdays
are for people. Institutions, events etc have anniversaries
birthplace, birthrate, birthright
Birtwistle, Sir Harrison
British composer, born 1934 (not Birtwhistle)
bishops
the Right Rev Clifford Richard, bishop of Wimbledon, at first mention; thereafter just
Richard or the bishop
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bismillah
means "in the name of God" in Arabic
bite-size
not bite-sized; very few things are the same size as a bite
bitterest
use of this word by the Guardian in 2006 provoked a bitter controversy among readers,
many of whom (rightly) pointed out that there is nothing wrong with it
black
should be used only as an adjective when referring to race, ie not "blacks" but "black
people" or whatever noun is appropriate
blackberry
fruit; plural blackberries
BlackBerry
handheld wireless email device; plural BlackBerrys
black cab-driver
a black person who drives a cab
black-cab driver
a person who drives a black cab
Black Country
black economy
hidden or parallel economy are preferable
black-on-black violence
is banned, unless in a quote, but even then treat with scepticism (imagine the police
saying they were "investigating an incident of white-on-white violence between Millwall and
West Ham supporters")
blackout
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Blackpool Pleasure Beach
a giant funfair, not a beach, so do not illustrate with a picture of donkeys on the sand
Blade Runner
not Bladerunner
Blair/Booth, Cherie
is Cherie Blair when we are referring to her in her capacity as the wife of the former prime
minister; if she is appearing in court or at a function related to her work as a lawyer, she is
Cherie Booth QC (Booth on second mention)
Blanchett, Cate
blase
no accent
blastfurnace
bleeper
pager; not to be confused with beeper, a thing that goes "beep" (eg on a microwave)
blitz
as in the London blitz of 1940-41, and various other blitzes (eg Liverpool,
Sheffield);blitzkrieg
blog
(noun) collection of online articles, blogpost single article; (verb) action of publishing a
blogpost: "I just blogged about that"
blokeish
rather than blokish
blond
adjective and male noun; blonde female noun: the woman is a blonde, because she has
blond hair; the man has blond hair and is, if you insist, a blond
Bloodsports
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bloody mary
vodka and tomato juice
Bloody Sunday
Take care when writing about the death toll: 13 died in Derry on 30 January 1972, but a
14th victim died from a brain tumour several months later, so we should use a phrase such
as "which led to 14 deaths"
Bluffer's Guide
TM; beware of using phrases such as "a bluffer's guide to crimewriting", a headline that led
to a legal complaint
blunder
one (of many) mentions of this word led to the following comment from a reader: "The term
'blunder' is used most frequently when referring to mistakes made in public services and
this only serves to fuel the view commonly propagated by rightwing newspapers that the
role of the public sector should be diminished and its functions handed over to private
companies. I'm sure the Guardian does not endorse this view, but its use of language may
imply that it does"
Blu-ray
TM; full name is Blu-ray Disc (not Disk), abbreviation BD
Blu-Tack
TM
Boat Race
Oxford v Cambridge
Boddingtons
popularly known as Boddies, it remains the cream of Manchester, despite the closure of
the Strangeways brewery
bodybuilder, bodybuilding
boffin
tabloid word for scientist
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Bogarde, Dirk
(1921-99) British actor
Bogart, Humphrey
(1899-1957) American actor
bogey
golf, ghost, so bogeyman
bogie
trolley, truck
Bogotá
capital of Colombia
Bolívar, Simón
(1783-1830) Venezuelan-born Latin American revolutionary hero; not Simon Bolivar,
Simón Bolivar, Simon Bolívar, or Simón Bólivar - all of which appeared in the paper in the
space of a year
bolognese
sauce, not the French spelling bolognaise
bolshie
rather than bolshy
Bombay
is now known as Mumbai
bombay duck
not a duck, but a fish
Bombe
(not Bomb) machine created by Alan Turing at Bletchley Park to break the Enigma code
bona fide, bona fides
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Bonfire night
also known as Guy Fawkes night
Bonham Carter, Helena
bon vivant
not bon viveur
boo-boo
mistake; Boo Boo cartoon bear who lived with Yogi in Jellystone Park
bookcase, bookkeeper, bookseller, bookshelf
book titles
are not italicised, except in the Guardian's Review section and the Observer; lc for a, an,
and, at, for, from, in, of, the, to (unless they are the first word of the title): Pride and
Prejudice, The Mill on the Floss, etc
bordeaux
wine from Bordeaux
bored with, bored by
are preferable to bored of, although usage seems to be changing, particularly among
younger people.
The distinction can, however, be useful: compare "bored with Tunbridge Wells" (a person
who finds Tunbridge Wells boring) and "bored of Tunbridge Wells" (a bored person who
happens to live there, perhaps a neighbour of "disgusted of Tunbridge Wells")
born out
of necessity
borne out
by the facts
borstals
named after a village in Kent, these institutions were replaced by youth custody centres in
1982, four years after being immortalised by the Sham 69 single Borstal Breakout
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borscht
Bosnia-Herzegovina
for the former Yugoslav republic, not Hercegovina
Bosphorus
not Bosporus
Boston Strangler
both
unnecessary in most phrases that contain "and"; "both men and women" says no more
than "men and women", takes longer, and can also be ambiguous
Botox
TM
Botswana
country; Batswana plural of people (singular: Motswana); Setswana language
bottleneck
Boudicca
not Boadicea
bougainvillaea
bouncebackability
invaluable word coined by the football manager Iain Dowie and since, thanks to the
wonders of Twitter, translated by Guardian Style followers into French (la rebondissabilité)
and German (die Rücksprungsfähigkeit)
Boundary Commission
bourgeois
adjective; bourgeoisie noun
Boutros Boutros-Ghali
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former UN secretary general
bow tie
Boxing Day
a public holiday on or soon after 26 December in many countries; in the Irish Republic it is
known as St Stephen's Day, and in South Africa as the Day of Goodwill
box office, box set
boy
male under 18
boyband, boyfriend
Boy's Own
brackets
If the sentence is logically and grammatically complete without the information contained
within the parentheses (round brackets), the punctuation stays outside the brackets. (A
complete sentence that stands alone in parentheses starts with a capital letter and ends
with a stop.)
"Square brackets," the grammarian said, "are used in direct quotes when an interpolation
[a note from the writer or editor, not uttered by the speaker] is added to provide essential
information."
Use brackets sparingly, particularly square ones: it's not necessary to add [David] in a
football story when an interviewee refers to "Beckham"
braggadocio
braille
Bramall Lane
famous old football (and former cricket) ground, the home of Sheffield United FC
brand
"Wenger brands Ferguson a liar" and similar tabloidese should be avoided
Brands Hatch
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no apostrophe
Brasilia
capital of Brazil
breastfed, breastfeeding
Bremner, Ewen
actor, not Ewan
briar
bush, pipe
bric-a-brac
brickbat
is permissible only if you know what a brickbat is
bridges
lc, eg Golden Gate bridge, Waterloo bridge
Bridgnorth
Shropshire
Bridgwater
Somerset
Brighton and Hove
a city and unitary council since 2000, and no longer in East Sussex
brilliant
"a word applied indiscriminately by the Guardian to anything new, no matter how
ordinary" (2010 tweet from a reader)
brinkmanship
rather than brinksmanship
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Brink's-Mat
Britain, UK
These terms are synonymous: Britain is the official short form of United Kingdom of Great
Britain and Northern Ireland. Used as adjectives, therefore, British and UK mean the
same. Great Britain, however, refers only to England, Wales and Scotland. Take care not
to write Britain when you might mean England and Wales, or just England – for example
when referring to the education system See Scotland
Britart
British and Irish Lions
(rugby union); not "British Lions"
British Council
British empire
but British Empire Medal
British Film Institute
BFI on second mention
British Isles
A geographical term taken to mean Great Britain, Ireland and some or all of the adjacent
islands such as Orkney, Shetland and the Isle of Man. The phrase is best avoided, given
its (understandable) unpopularity in the Irish Republic. Alternatives adopted by some
publications are British and Irish Isles or simply Britain and Ireland
British Library
British Medical Association
(doctors' trade union), BMA on second mention
British Museum
British Sign Language
abbreviate to BSL after first mention
Britpop
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Britvic
TM
Broadmoor
a secure psychiatric hospital, not a prison
Brontë
Charlotte, Emily, Anne and their brother Branwell; they grew up at Haworth (not Howarth)
in what is now West Yorkshire
bronze age, ice age, iron age, stone age
brownie points
Brownies
for girls aged seven to 10, at which point they may join the Guides
Brueghel
family of Flemish painters, including Pieter Bruegel the Elder (c1525-69) and his sons
Pieter Brueghel the Younger (1564 or 1565-1636) and Jan Brueghel the Elder
(1568-1625); Pieter Bruegel the Elder dropped the H from his surname in 1559
Brum, Brummie
brussels sprouts
brutalise
render brutal, not treat brutally; so soldiers may be brutalised by the experience of war
Brylcreem
TM
BSE
bovine spongiform encephalopathy; no need to spell out
BST
bovine somatrophin (bovine growth hormone)
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BST
British summer time
BTec
Buckingham Palace
the palace on second mention
buckminsterfullerene
a form of carbon, named after the US engineer Buckminster Fuller (1895-1983)
budget, the
lc noun and adj, eg budget talks, budget measures, mini-budget, pre-budget report, etc
buffaloes
for the plural; not buffalo or buffalos
buffet
finger food, not to be confused with ...
Buffett, Warren
investor known as the Sage of Omaha
buildup
(noun) no hyphen
Bulger, James
not Jamie
bullet points
take a full stop after each one, ie:
• This is the first bullet point.
• This is the second.
• And this is the third.
bullseye
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bumblebee
bumf
not bumph
Buñuel, Luis
(1900-83) Spanish film director
buoyed up by
not buoyed by
Burberry
TM
bureau
plural bureaus (furniture) or bureaux (organisations)
burgeon
means to bud or sprout, so you can have someone with burgeoning talent; often misused
to describe anything that is growing or expanding, especially population
burgher
citizen, not to be confused with burger (although we have contrived to do so more than
once)
burgomaster
not burgomeister
Burma
not Myanmar
burned/burnt
burned is the past tense form (he burned the cakes); burnt is the participle, an "adjectival"
form of the verb ("the cakes are burnt")
Burns Night
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25 January
burqa
not burka
Burton upon Trent
buses, bussed, bussing
Bush, George W
son of George Bush Sr
businesslike
businessman, businesswoman
for individuals, but say business people or the business community rather than
"businessmen"
Bussell, Darcey
Royal Ballet dancer who retired in 2007
but, however
often redundant, and increasingly wrongly used to connect two compatible statements
Butlins
butterflies and moths
are usually lc: adonis blue, orange-tip, purple emperor, silver-washed fritillary, death'shead hawk moth, etc; but note the following: Duke of Burgundy, Queen of Spain fritillary,
Essex skipper, Lulworth skipper, Scotch argus
buyout
but buy-in
buzzword
but buzz phrase
byelection, bylaw, byline, bypass, bystander
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byte
unit of measurement of computer information storage, eg 320GB hard drive (320
gigabytes)
Byzantine
empire; byzantine complexity
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C
cabby
not cabbie, but the plural is cabbies
cabin attendant, crew, staff
not air hostesses
cabinet, shadow cabinet
but Cabinet Office
caddie
tee; caddy tea
Cádiz
Caernarfon
place; Lord Carnarvon person (he lives at Highclere Castle in West Berkshire)
caesarean section
Julius Caesar is not thought to have been born by C-section (because his mother survived
his birth)
caesar salad
attributed to the restaurateur Caesar Cardini
Caesars Palace
hotel and casino in Las Vegas; this one really is named after Julius Caesar
Cafcass
Children and Family Court Advisory and Support Service
cafe
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no accent
Calcutta
now Kolkata
calf leather
but calf's liver
Californian
a person; the adjective is California, which is why Brian Wilson did not write a song called
Californian Girls; the same rule applies to other US states, so a "Texan drilling for Texas
tea" is an oilman
call girl
like "vice girl", an old-fashioned term encountered only in the tabloids, where it is always
the 1950s
callous
adjective, meaning hardened, metaphorically or literally; callus (plural calluses) noun,
meaning hard area of skin.
The correct word to use to mean "covered in calluses" is in fact calloused, from the
medical verb, to callous; although callused is often seen
Calor
TM
cameraphone
Campaign for Better Transport
formerly Transport 2000
Campari
TM
can not, cannot
are not the same: note the difference between "you can not eat if you don't want to" and
"you cannot eat porridge with a knife"
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Canal+
French TV channel, formerly Canal Plus
canal boats
A narrowboat is the popular type of British canal boat, 7ft wide and up to 72ft long – do not
call it a barge; a wider version (typically 10-14ft wide) is a broadbeam narrowboat. A barge
is a broader (10-14ft wide) cargo-carrying boat - normally towed but sometimes selfpowered. The version with accommodation is usually a Dutch barge. A cruiser is the whitehulled GRP (glass-reinforced plastic) style of boat, more commonly seen on rivers; smaller
versions are cabin cruisers.
The difference between narrowboat and barge is important, particularly if you don't want to
get stuck in a narrow lock somewhere outside Birmingham
Canary Wharf
the whole development, not the main tower, which is 1 Canada Square
Cancún
city in Mexico
cannabis
people smoke cannabis rather than "experiment" with it, despite what politicians and
young members of the royal family might claim
canon
cleric, decree, principle, body of writings, type of music; cannon something you fire (plural:
cannon, not cannons)
Canute
(c994-1035) Danish king of England, Denmark and Norway who commanded the tide to
turn back, so the legend says – not in a vain attempt to exercise power over nature, but to
prove to his toadying courtiers that he was not all-powerful
canvas
tent, painting
canvass
solicit votes
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CAP
common agricultural policy
capitals
"I am a poet: I distrust anything that starts with a capital letter and ends with a full
stop" (Antjie Krog)
Times have changed since the days of medieval manuscripts with elaborate handilluminated capital letters, or Victorian documents in which not just proper names, but
virtually all nouns, were given initial caps (a Tradition valiantly maintained to this day by
Estate Agents).
A look through newspaper archives would show greater use of capitals the further back
you went. The tendency towards lowercase, which in part reflects a less formal, less
deferential society, has been accelerated by the explosion of the internet: some web
companies, and many email users, have dispensed with capitals altogether.
Our style reflects these developments. We aim for coherence and consistency, but not at
the expense of clarity. As with any aspect of style, it is impossible to be wholly consistent –
there are almost always exceptions, so if you are unsure check for an individual entry in
this guide. But here are the main principles:
jobs all lc, eg prime minister, US secretary of state, chief rabbi, editor of the Guardian.
titles cap up titles, but not job description, eg President Barack Obama (but the US
president, Barack Obama, and Obama on subsequent mention); the Duke of Westminster
(the duke at second mention); Pope Benedict XVI but the pope.
British government departments of state initial caps, eg Home Office, Foreign Office,
Ministry of Justice.
See departments of state for a full list
other countries' departments of state lc, eg US state department, Russian foreign
ministry.
government agencies, public bodies, quangos initial caps, eg Crown Prosecution
Service, Equality and Human Rights Commission, Heritage Lottery Fund, Revenue &
Customs.
acts of parliament initial caps (but bills lc), eg Official Secrets Act, Child Poverty Act 2010,
local government bill.
parliamentary committees, reports and inquiries all lc, eg trade and industry select
committee, royal commission on long-term care for the elderly, Jenkins report.
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artistic and cultural names of institutions, etc, get initial caps, eg British Museum,
National Gallery, Royal Albert Hall, Tate Modern. Books, films, music, works of art, etc
have initial caps except a, an, and, at, for, from, in, of, the, to (except in initial positions or
after a colon), eg There is a Light That Never Goes Out.
churches, hospitals and schools cap up the proper or placename, lc the rest, eg St
Peter's church, Pembury, Great Ormond Street children's hospital, Ripon grammar school,
Vernon county primary school.
universities and colleges of further and higher education caps for institution, lc for
departments, eg Sheffield University department of medieval and modern history, Oregon
State University, Free University of Berlin, University of Queensland school of journalism,
London College of Communication.
airports cap the name but lc the generic part (if necessary at all), eg Heathrow, Gatwick
(no need for "airport"), Liverpool John Lennon airport.
geographical features lc, eg river Thames, Sydney harbour, Monterey peninsula, Bondi
beach, Solsbury hill (but Mount Everest).
words and phrases based on proper names that have lost connection with their origins
(alsatian dog, cardigan, cheddar cheese, french windows, swiss roll, wellington boots,
yorkshire pudding and many others) are lc.
Those that retain a strong link, which may be legally recognised, include Cornish pasty,
Melton Mowbray pork pies, Parma ham and Worcestershire sauce, and take initial cap.
Although champagne and scotch are legally required to come from Champagne and
Scotland, they are almost universally regarded as lc
cappuccino
car bomb, car park
but carmaker
carcass
plural carcasses
cards
scratchcard, smartcard, swipecard but credit card, debit card, sim card
careen
to sway or keel over to one side; often confused with career, to rush along
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career girl, career woman
We don't use these sexist labels
carer
an unpaid family member, partner or friend who helps a disabled or frail person with the
activities of daily living; not someone who works in a caring job or profession. The term is
important because carers are entitled to a range of benefits and services that depend on
them recognising themselves as carers
Caribbean
Carlos the Jackal
real name Ilich Ramírez Sánchez
cartel
It is dangerous to call a group of companies a cartel unless you want to hear from ...
Carter-Ruck
You might think that, given this law firm's close relationship with newspapers, everyone
would know that it's hyphenated. You would, sadly, be wrong
Casanova
cap up, whether you are talking about the original (Giacomo Girolamo Casanova de
Seingalt, 1725-98), or any latterday womaniser ("he is the Casanova of the Observer")
casbah
rather than kasbah
cash for honours
noun but cash-for-honours should, like similar phrases, be hyphenated when used
adjectivally (the cash-for-honours scandal)
cashmere
fabric
caster
sugar, wheels on a sofa; castor oil; Caster Semenya South African runner
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castoff
one word (noun, adjective); cast off two words (verb)
casual
(workers) freelance is often preferable
casualties
includes dead and injured, so not a synonym for deaths; casualty lc, as in she's been
taken to casualty (though normally called A&E)
Cat scan
or CT scan; it stands for computerised (axial) tomography
Catalonia
adjective Catalan
catch-22
lc unless specifically referring to Joseph Heller's 1961 novel Catch-22, which explained
the dilemma thus: "Orr would be crazy to fly more missions and sane if he didn't, but if he
were sane he had to fly them. If he flew them he was crazy and didn't have to; but if he
didn't want to he was sane and had to"
catchphrase
catchup TV
not catch-up or catch up
cathedrals
cap up, eg eg Béziers Cathedral (its full name is Cathédrale Saint-Nazaire-et-Saint-Celse
de Béziers)
catherine wheel
Catholic church
but if you mean Roman Catholic, say so
caviar
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not caviare
CBeebies
CD, CDs, CD-Rom
a CD is a disc, not a disk
CE, BCE
some people prefer CE (common era, current era or Christian era) and BCE (before
common era, etc) to AD and BC, which, however, remain our style
ceasefire
Ceausescu, Nicolae
former president of Romania, deposed and executed in 1989, and dug up again in 2010
ceilidh
celibate, celibacy
strictly refer to being unmarried (especially for religious reasons), but it is now acceptable
to use them to mean abstaining from sexual intercourse
cellphone
mobile phone in British English
celsius
without degree symbol and with fahrenheit equivalent in brackets: 23C (73F), -3C (27F),
etc; to convert celsius to fahrenheit, multiply by 9, divide by 5, then add 32; to convert
fahrenheit to celsius, subtract 32, divide the answer by 9, then multiply by 5 (or use one of
the many online calculators)
Celtic
not Glasgow Celtic
cement or concrete?
not interchangeable terms: cement is an ingredient of concrete, which is a mix of
aggregates (sand and gravel or crushed stone) and paste (water and portland cement); so
a "cement mixer" should always be referred to as a concrete mixer
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censer
container in which incense is burnt; censor prevent publication; censure criticise severely
census
lc, eg the next UK census is due on 27 March 2011
Center Parcs
centimetres
abbreviation cm, not cms
Central America
comprises Mexico, Belize, Guatemala, Honduras, El Salvador, Nicaragua, Costa Rica, and
Panama
central belt
the swath across Scotland, containing Glasgow and Edinburgh, where population density
is highest. It is in the south, not the centre of the country
centre on
or centre in, but revolve around
Centre Court
Wimbledon
Centres for Disease Control
not singular, and not the American spelling
century
sixth century, 21st century, etc; but sixth-century remains, 21st-century boy, etc
Cephalonia
eschew the variations
Cern
the Geneva-based European laboratory for particle physics
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Cézanne. Paul
(1839-1906) French artist
CFC
chlorofluorocarbon
chablis
wines from Chablis
cha-cha-cha
the dance, not cha-cha
chair
acceptable in place of chairman or chairwoman, being nowadays widely used in the public
sector and by organisations such as the Labour party and trade unions (though not the
Conservative party, which had a "chairman" in kitten heels); if it seems inappropriate for a
particular body, use a different construction ("the meeting was chaired by Ian" or "Kath was
in the chair")
Chakrabarti, Shami
director of Liberty
champ at the bit
not chomp
champagne
Champions League
Champs Elysées
chancellor of the duchy of Lancaster, chancellor of the exchequer
changeable
Channel, the
not the English Channel
Channel 4, Channel 5
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Channel Islands
Channel tunnel
not Chunnel
chaos theory
is not a synonym for chaos. It describes the behaviour of dynamic systems that are
sensitively dependent on their initial conditions. An example is the weather: under the
"butterfly effect", the flap of a butterfly's wing in Brazil can in principle result in a tornado in
Texas
chapters
like this: chapter 6, chapter 16, etc, whether of books or the UN charter
chardonnay
lc, like other wines, whether named after a grape (as in this case) or a region
chargé, chargée d'affaires
Charity Commission
Charter of the United Nations
but UN charter is normally sufficient; chapter 1, etc (not roman numerals)
Chartered Institute of Public Finance and Accountancy
Cipfa or the institute after first mention
chassis
singular and plural
chateau, chateaux
no accent
Chatham House rule
often mistakenly called "rules". There is just one, namely: "When a meeting, or part
thereof, is held under the Chatham House rule, participants are free to use the information
received, but neither the identity nor the affiliation of the speaker(s), nor that of any other
participant, may be revealed." Chatham House is more formally known as the Royal
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Institute of International Affairs, based at Chatham House in London
chatroom, chatshow
Chávez, Hugo
elected president of Venezuela in 1998, and re-elected in 2000, 2006 and 2012; died in
2013
Chavismo, Chavistas
chavs
a term best avoided
Chechnya
inhabited by Chechens
check-in, checkout
noun, adjective
check in, check out
verb: so you might check in at the check-in after checking out the checkout desk
cheese
normally lc, even if named after a place: brie, camembert, cheddar, cheshire, double
gloucester, lancashire, parmesan, stilton, wensleydale, etc
Chekhov
Chek Lap Kok
Hong Kong international airport, designed by Sir Norman Foster, opened in 1998
Chennai
formerly Madras
chequebook
cherrypick, cherrypicker
cherubim
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plural of cherub
Cheshire cat
but cheshire cheese
chickenpox
one word
chicken tikka masala
Britain's favourite dish until chicken jalfrezi displaced it (according to a 2011 poll); note that
there is also an Italian dish called chicken marsala
chief
("planning chiefs", etc): try to use proper titles; officers or officials may be preferable
chief constable
a job, not a title – John Smith, chief constable of Greater Manchester; Smith at second
mention
chief rabbi
lc, a style consistent with that followed by Haaretz and the Jerusalem Post
chief secretary to the Treasury, chief whip
child abuse images
rather than "child pornography", "child porn" and especially the tabloid "kiddy porn".
The NSPCC says that such terms give "a misleading and potentially trivialising impression
of what is a very serious crime", and favours the term "child abuse images".
The Internet Watch Foundation says: "The IWF uses the term 'child sexual abuse content'
to accurately reflect the gravity of the images we deal with. Please note that child
pornography, child porn and kiddy porn are not acceptable terms"
childcare, childminder
ChildLine
child trust fund
colloquially known as baby bonds, abolished by the new progressive government in
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2010
chilli
with two Ls but note Red Hot Chili Peppers
Chinese names
Mainland China: in two parts, eg Mao Zedong, Zhou Enlai, Jiang Zemin. Hong Kong,
Taiwan: in two parts with hyphen, eg Tung Chee-hwa, Chiang Kai-shek (exception: when a
building, park or the like is named after a person it becomes three parts, eg Chiang Kai
Shek Cultural Centre); note also that Korean names are written the same way, eg Kim Ilsung. Singapore, Malaysia: in three parts, eg Lee Kuan Yew.
For people with Chinese names elsewhere in the world, follow their preference – but make
sure you know which is the surname
Chloé
(fashion) note accent
chock-a-block
chocoholic
not chocaholic
Chomsky, Noam
US linguist and political activist
choose
for some mysterious reason this often appears in the paper as "chose", its past tense
chords
musical; cords vocal
Christ Church
Oxford (not Christ Church College)
christened, christening
only when referring to a Christian baptism: don't talk about a boat being christened or a
football club christening a new stadium; named is fine
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Christian, Christianity
but unchristian
Christian name
use first name, forename or given name (which in many cultures comes after the family
name)
Christian Union
an evangelical Christian organisation
Christie's
the auction house; Christies the holding company has no apostrophe
Christmas Day, Christmas Eve
chronic
means lasting for a long time or constantly recurring, too often misused when acute (short
but severe) is meant
Chumbawamba
(not Chumbawumba) band whose guitarist, Danbert Nobacon, threw a bucket of iced
water over John Prescott, the then deputy prime minister, at the 1998 Brit awards
church
lc for the established church, eg "the church is no longer relevant today"; Anglican church,
etc, but Church of England (abbreviation: C of E)
cineaste
someone who enjoys films; but note that, in France, a cinéaste is someone who makes
them
cinemagoer
cinéma vérité
Cites
convention on international trade in endangered species of wild fauna and flora
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Citizens Advice
what the organisation likes to be called, although it still runs bureaux
Citroën
city
in Britain a town that has been granted a charter by the crown; it usually has a cathedral;
City capped when used as shorthand for the City of London
City of London Corporation
the corporation after first mention
civil partnership
rather than gay marriage, but gay wedding is fine and does not need quotation marks
civil servant, civil service
Civvy Street
CJD
Creutzfeldt-Jakob disease, not normally necessary to spell it out; it is acceptable to refer to
variant CJD as the human form of BSE, but not "the human form of mad cow disease"
Clapham Junction
and Clapham are two distinct, separate areas of south London.
Clapham Junction should be called just that: it is not only a railway station but an area in
its own right with its own shopping street. It is part of Battersea and comes under
Wandsworth council.
Clapham is about a mile and a half away, also has its own high street, and is part of
Lambeth council
classical music
Mozart's 41st Symphony (or Symphony No 41) in C, K551; Rachmaninov's Piano
Concerto No 2; Schubert's Sonata in A minor for Piano, D845
clause IV
of the Labour manifesto, rewritten in 1995; also by extension to "clause IV moment" as in
"will the Tories experience their own clause IV moment?" (not so far)
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clearcut
cliches
Overused words and phrases to be avoided, some of which merit their own ignominious
entry in this guide, include: ahead of, back burner, boost (massive or otherwise), bouquets
and brickbats, but hey ... , controversial, count 'em, drop-dead gorgeous, elephant in the
room, famous, fit for purpose, flagship, landmark, key, major, massive, meanwhile,
ongoing, politically correct, raft of measures, special, stepchange, to die for, upcoming,
upsurge; verbs overused or misused in headlines include: bid, boost, downplay, fuel, hike,
insist, probe, quiz, set to, signal, spiral, target, unveil.
A survey by the Plain English Campaign found that the most irritating phrase in the
language was "at the end of the day", followed by (in order of annoyance): at this moment
in time, like (as in, like, this), with all due respect, to be perfectly honest with you, touch
base, I hear what you're saying, going forward, absolutely, and blue sky thinking; other
words and phrases that upset people included 24/7, ballpark figure, bottom line, diamond
geezer, it's not rocket science, ongoing, prioritise, pushing the envelope, singing from the
same hymn sheet, and thinking outside the box
cliffhanger
one word
Climate Camp
disbanded in March 2011; its full name was Camp for Climate Action
climate change terminology
A sensitive area. The editor of the Guardian's environment website says: "Climate change
deniers has nasty connotations with Holocaust denial and tends to polarise debate. On the
other hand there are some who are literally in denial about the evidence."
Our guidelines are:
Rather than opening itself to the charge of denigrating people for their beliefs, a fair
newspaper should always try to address what it is that people are sceptical about or deny.
The term sceptics covers those who argue that climate change is exaggerated, or not
caused by human activity.
If someone really does claim that climate change is not happening – that the world is not
warming – then it seems fair enough to call them a denier
climbdown
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noun; climb down verb
clingfilm
Close, Glenn
two Ns (as in bunny boiler)
cloud cuckoo land
CO2
coalfield, coalmine, coalminer
Coalite
TM
coalition government
Con-Lib if you are being polite; Lib-Con if you are a sceptic; Con-Dem if you want to be
rude
coarse fishing
we have been known to spell it "course"
coastguards
HM Coastguard (UK), but US Coast Guard
Coca-Cola, Coke
TM; the generic term is cola; coke for smokeless fuel and cocaine
cockney
coconut
cohabitant
not cohabitee
cold war
Coliseum
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London theatre; Colosseum Roman amphitheatre
collectible
collective nouns
Nouns such as committee, family, government, jury, squad and team take a singular verb
or pronoun when thought of as a single unit, but a plural verb or pronoun when thought of
as a collection of individuals:
The committee gave its unanimous approval to the plans;
The committee enjoyed biscuits with their tea.
The family can trace its history back to the middle ages;
The family were sitting down, scratching their heads.
The squad is looking stronger than for several seasons;
The squad are all very confident that they will win promotion this season
collector's item
College of Arms
colleges
take initial caps, eg West Kent College; but not when college forms part of the name of a
school, eg Bash Street sixth-form college, Eton college
Colombia
South American country that we frequently misspell as "Columbia"
colon
Use between two sentences, or parts of sentences, where the first introduces a proposition
that is resolved by the second, eg Fowler put it like this: to deliver the goods invoiced in
the preceding words.
A colon, rather than a comma, should be used to introduce a quotation: "He was an expert
on punctuation," or to precede a list – "He was an expert on the following: the colon, the
comma and the full stop."
Use before quotes when the quote could stand on its own as a sentence. He said: "You'll
never take me alive."
When a colon is used in a headline, the next word is lowercase, eg Osborne: there is no
plan B.
This 2010 example from the Guardian is an awful (but by no means isolated) example of
the tendency to use a semicolon where only a colon will do (all the more unfortunate for
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distracting the reader from a funny sentence): "Here's a task for the new coalition
government; set up a Drumming Taskforce today, and appoint a Snare Tsar."
We are in danger of losing the distinction between colon and semicolon; many writers
seem to think they are interchangeable but to make it clear: they are not.
See semicolon
colonel
Colonel Napoleon Bogey, subsequently Bogey (Col Bogey in leading articles)
Columbia
as in District of Columbia (Washington DC) and Columbia University (New York),
Columbus Day (12 October, marking the date Christopher Columbus landed in the West
Indies in 1492); Columbus is also the state capital of Ohio
comedian
male and female; do not use comedienne
commando
plural commandos
commas
Use a comma to help the reader by inserting breathing space into a sentence: "When the
Dutch reflect on their performance in the World Cup final, they will not find it hard to see
why their aggressive tactics lost them many friends in 2010."
"The editor, Alan Rusbridger, is a man of great vision" – commas if there is only one editor.
"The subeditor Amelia Hodsdon is all style and no substance" – no commas if there is
more than one subeditor.
A misplaced comma can sabotage a sentence, as in this example from the paper: "Neocon
economists often claim a large, black economy turbo-powers growth ..." (the writer was
talking about a big black economy, not a big and black one, which is not the same at all).
A comma is also crucial to avoid ambiguity in examples such as this: "Part of the report will
heavily criticise a so-called power culture among the Dublin bishops who have been
accused of not taking the allegations seriously." We should have inserted a comma after
"bishops" to make clear that all the Dublin bishops have been accused; as published, the
sentence implies that only some of the bishops have.
See Oxford comma
commented
"said" is normally adequate
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common agricultural policy
lc but the abbreviation is CAP
Commons, House of Commons
but the house, not the House
Commons committees
lc, home affairs select committee, public accounts committee, etc
common sense
noun; commonsense adjective: "William Hague's 'commonsense revolution' showed little
common sense"
Commonwealth, the; Commonwealth War Graves Commission
communique
no accent
communism, communist
lc, except in name of party, eg Communist party of Great Britain (Marxist-Leninist)
community
the subediting community is encouraged to weed out examples of this shockingly
overused word
community charge
what no one, apart from a handful of Conservative ministers, called the poll tax
company names
A difficult area, as so many companies have adopted unconventional typography and other
devices that, in some cases, turn their names into logos. In general, we use the names
that companies use themselves: c2c, Capgemini, easyJet, eBay, ebookers, iSoft Group,
etc. Some of these look odd, particularly when used as the first word in a headline,
although some are becoming more familiar with time.<br
Exceptions include Adidas (not adidas), ABN Amro (not ABN AMRO), BAE Systems (not
BAE SYSTEMS), BhS (no italicised H), Toys R Us (do not attempt to turn the R
backwards), Yahoo (no exclamation mark).
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Company names are always singular
compare to or with?
The former means liken to, the latter means make a comparison: so unless you are
specifically likening someone or something to someone or something else, use compare
with.
A former lord chancellor compared himself to Cardinal Wolsey because he believed he
was like Wolsey; I might compare him with Wolsey to assess their relative merits.
As so often, we are indebted to Prince for the grammatically immaculate Nothing
Compares 2U
compass points
lc for regions: eg the north, the south of England, the south-west, north-east Scotland,
south Wales.
The same applies to geopolitical areas: the west, western Europe, the far east, south-east
Asia, etc.
Cap up, however, when part of the name of a county (eg West Sussex, East Riding of
Yorkshire) or province (East Java, North Sulawesi, etc).
Note the following: East End, West End (London), Middle East, Central America, North
America, South America, Latin America
Competition Commission
formerly the Monopolies and Mergers Commission and yes, there is only one
complement, compliment, complimentary
to complement is to make complete: the two strikers complemented each other; to
compliment is to praise; a complimentary copy is free
complicit
you can be complicit in a crime, for example, if you know about it but fail to report it
comprise
to consist of; "comprise of" is wrong
Concord
town in Massachusetts; Concorde plane
confidant
male; confidante female
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congestion charge
Congo
acceptable on second mention for the Democratic Republic of the Congo (or DRC,
formerly Zaire); we call its neighbour Congo-Brazzaville; the Congo is the river
Congregational
uc when referring to the Congregational Union of England and Wales, formed in 1832,
which joined the Presbyterian Church of England in 1972 to form the United Reformed
Church (please, not "Reform")
Congress
comprises the House of Representatives (the House) and Senate; but lc congressman,
congresswoman, congressional
conjoined twins
not Siamese twins
conman
connection
not connexion
Conservative central office, Conservative party
consortium
plural consortiums not consortia
constitution
lc as in the US constitution
Consuelo
not Consuela; from a reader: "I really have had enough of show-off ignoramuses messing
up my name. Consuelo is a Spanish abstract noun, masculine, invariable. Pilar and
Mercedes are also Spanish female names derived, like Consuelo, from titles of the Virgin
Mary"
consult
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not consult with
consumer prices index
forms the basis for the government's inflation target and other inflation-linked tools; CPI
after first mention
Consumers' Association
now known as Which?, after its magazine
contemporary
of the same period, though often wrongly used to mean modern; a performance of
Shakespeare in contemporary dress would involve Elizabethan costume, not 21st-century
clothes
continent, the
but mainland Europe is preferable
continual
refers to things that happen repeatedly but not constantly; continuous indicates an
unbroken sequence
contractions
Do not overuse contractions such as aren't, can't, couldn't, hasn't, don't, I'm, it's, there's
and what's (even the horrific "there've" has appeared); while they might make a piece
more colloquial or easier to read, they can be an irritant and a distraction, and make a
serious article sound frivolous. They also look horrible
controversial
overused, typically to show that the writer disapproves of something ("the government's
controversial free schools scheme"); like "famous", it can normally be safely removed from
copy to allow readers to make up their own minds
convener
not convenor
conversions
We give metric measures and convert on first mention only to imperial in brackets
(exceptions: miles and pints); if a rough figure is given in metric, do not convert it into an
exact figure in imperial, and vice versa, eg if someone says the towns are about 50km
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apart, convert to 30 miles, not "31.07 miles"; the same goes for rough amounts of
currencies, though don't round up £3.6bn to £4bn
convertible
not -able
convince or persuade?
having convinced someone of the facts, you might persuade them to do something
co-operate, co-operation, co-operative
Co-operative Bank, Group, party
but you might shop at your local Co-op
co-opt, co-ordinate
cop-out
copy editor
what subeditors are known as in the United States and Canada, where they copy-edit
copyright
but copywriter
Corbusier, Le
(1887-1965) Swiss architect and city planner, born Charles-Edouard Jeanneret
Córdoba
cords
vocal; chords musical
cornflakes
in general but Kellogg's Corn Flakes
Cornish pasty
coronavirus
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coroner's court
corporation of London
corps de ballet
cortege
no accent
coruscating
means sparkling, or emitting flashes of light; people seem to think, wrongly, that it means
the same as excoriating, censuring severely, eg "a coruscating attack on Clegg's advisers"
cosmetic surgery
is not the same as plastic surgery, which should be reserved for people treated for
deformity or illness
councils
lc apart from placename: Lancaster city council, London borough of Southwark, Kent
county council, etc; it is normally sufficient to say Lancaster council, Southwark council, etc
count 'em
cliche often seen in parenthesis after a number is mentioned. For example, an article
referred to "the seminal Andrex puppy advent calendar with 25 – count 'em – puppy
pictures ... "
counteract, counterattack, countermeasures
but counter-terrorism
coupe
no accent
courts
all lc, eg court of appeal, court of session, high court, magistrates court (no apostrophe),
supreme court, European court of human rights, international criminal court
court martial
plural courts martial
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court of St James's
couscous
CPRE
Campaign to Protect Rural England (formerly the Council for the Protection of Rural
England)
CPS
Crown Prosecution Service
Cradock, Fanny
(1909-94) TV chef, often misspelt as "Craddock"
creche
no accent
credible
capable of being believed, hence credibility; credulous gullible, hence credulity; we
sometimes mix the two up
creme fraiche
crescendo
a gradual increase in loudness or intensity; musically or figuratively, it is the buildup to a
climax, not the climax itself (we frequently get this wrong)
cretinism
a medical condition, not a term of abuse
cricket
leg-side, leg-spinner, off-spin, off-stump, silly mid-on, mid-off, etc, all hyphenated
cripple, crippled
offensive and outdated
crisscross
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criterion
plural criteria
critique
a noun meaning review, rather than a verb meaning criticise
Crombie
TM; the company's wool coats have been popular with, among others, the Confederate
army in the 1860s and mods in the 1960s
crowdsourcing
Crowley, Aleister
dead satanist
crown, the; crown estate, crown jewels
crucifix
not synonymous with cross: a crucifix depicts the body of Christ on the cross
crucifixion, the
Crufts
cruise missile
Crusades, the
Cruz, Penélope
cubism, cubist
Cub scouts
boys (and now girls) aged from eight to 10, organised in packs but no longer known as
"Wolf Cubs"; avoid dated "Dyb Dyb Dyb, Dob Dob Dob" jokes but if relevant, it is spelt thus
(it stands for "do your best" and we will "do our best"), and not "Dib"
cull
means pick or choose as in "culled from the best authors". It doesn't mean killed, axed or
massacred (though you cull sheep in order to kill them). So a jobs cull does not mean the
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same as mass sackings
CULV
consumer ultra-low voltage
cum
Latin for "with", seen in such placenames as Chorlton-cum-Hardy, and phrases such as
cookbook-cum-autobiography (unfortunately, we wrote "cookbook-come-autobiography")
cumberland sausage
Cummings, EE
US poet (1894-1962) who, despite what many people think, used capitals in his signature
– so don't call him "ee cummings"
Cup, FA
after first mention it is the Cup; but other cups are lc on second mention
curate's egg
Used nowadays to mean good in parts ("this was a curate's egg of a match"), the
expression originally, and more subtly, meant to deliberately gloss over the truth – the
curate was trying to spare his bishop's feelings, or perhaps his own embarrassment, when
served a bad egg, by saying: "Oh no, My Lord, I assure you! Parts of it are
excellent!" (cartoon in Punch, 9 November 1895)
curb
restrain; kerb pavement
currencies
When the whole word is used it is lc: euro, pound, sterling, dong, etc. Abbreviate dollars
like this: $50 (US dollars); A$50 (Australian dollars); HK$50 (Hong Kong dollars).
Convert all foreign amounts to sterling in brackets at first mention, but use common sense
– there is no need to put £500,000 in brackets after the phrase "I feel like a million dollars."
Take care when converting old money to new: some of our attempts have been
meaningless, in that they have ignored the relative value of sums involved. We said in an
obituary, for example, that Ronnie Barker was paid £1 9s (£1.45) a week for his first job in
1947 – a comparison of average earnings would convert that to around £113 today.
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Similarly, in converting the price of a "four shilling dish of rice and vegetables" in 1967 to
20p in today's money we forgot to allow for its relative value; taking into account changes
in the retail price index it would now be worth £2.23.
There are some excellent websites to assist with such conversions
currently
"now" is usually preferable, if needed at all
cusp
a place where two points meet (eg "on the cusp of Manchester and Salford", "on the cusp
of Taurus and Gemini"), which may be extended metaphorically to a place or time where
two things or groups of things come into contact, as in this elegant example from the
Review: "It was a world caught on the cusp between postwar recession, stasis and a dying
moral code, and the colour, mobility and licence of the 60s."
Writers who use cusp under the impression that it is a clever way to say on the brink of or
about to ("on the cusp of adolescence", "on the cusp of the final", "tanker drivers are on
the cusp of striking over a coming supermarket-led cut in their wages", "the garlic was on
the cusp of bursting into a constellation of white stars") are, sadly, mistaken
custody
since the 1989 Children Act the correct term for what used to be known as custody in
cases involving care of children is residence
Customs, Revenue & Customs
(singular) but customs officers
cutbacks
avoid; cuts will suffice
cyberbully, cybercafe, cybercrime, cyberlocker, cybernetics, cyberpunk, cybersex,
cyberspace, cyberterrorism, cyberwar
cyber-attack
Cyprus
Cyprus, properly known as the Republic of Cyprus, joined the EU in 2004, 30 years after
Turkey invaded the northern part of the island, which should be referred to as "Turkishoccupied northern Cyprus" (the self-styled "Turkish Republic of Northern Cyprus" is
recognised only by Turkey)
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Czech Republic
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D
dachshund
Dad or dad?
I'll have to ask Dad, then you can check with your dad
dadaism, dadaist
Dáil Éireann
lower house of parliament in the Irish Republic, normally just the Dáil
DaimlerChrysler
Dalai Lama
no abbreviation: he is always the Dalai Lama
Dalek
takes initial cap, whether used literally (as in referring to Doctor Who), or figuratively (as in
describing, say, your boss)
Dalí, Salvador
(1904-89) Spanish surrealist
dancefloor
one word (thanks to Arctic Monkeys for this one)
dangling participles
(also known as hanging participles)
Avoid constructions such as "having died, they buried him"; the pitfalls are nicely
highlighted in Mark Lawson's novel Going Out Live, in which a TV critic writes: "Dreary,
repetitive and well past the sell-by date, I switched off the new series of Fleming Faces."
Another example, from a leading article: "Due out in January as a white paper, Ms Kelly
may be unable to overcome Mr Blair's apparent determination to stick with A-levels ... "
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And this particularly exotic dangling participle somehow found its way into the paper:
"Though long-legged and possessing a lovely smile, gentleman journalists aren't looking
up her skirt and wouldn't even if she weren't gay ... "
DA notices
issued by the Defence, Press and Broadcasting Advisory Committee, "advising" that the
media do not publish sensitive information; formerly D notices
dark ages
dashes
Beware sentences – such as this one – that dash about all over the place – commas (or
even, very occasionally, brackets) are often better; semicolons also have their uses.
Dashes should be n-dashes rather than m-dashes or hyphens
data
takes a singular verb (like agenda), though strictly a plural; no one ever uses "agendum" or
"datum"
datacentre, dataset
dates
Guardian, Observer and guardian.co.uk style is 21 July 2011 (day month year; no
commas).
In the 21st century but 21st-century boy; fourth century BC; AD2007, 2500BC, 10,000BC.
Use figures for decades: the 1960s, the swinging 60s, etc.
Should you have occasion to say 2011 out loud, for example in a podcast, pronounce it
"twenty eleven", not "two thousand and eleven"
daughter of, son of
Think twice before referring to people in these terms. Often only the person's father is
described and such descriptions can smack of snobbery as well as sexism.
Simplistic labels may also be misleading: we published a clarification after calling Captain
James Cook the son of a Scottish farm labourer. True enough, but Cook's mother was a
Yorkshire woman and he is a famous son of Yorkshire
Davison, Emily
suffragette who died four days after stepping in front of George V's horse at the 1913
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Derby
daybreak, daydream
Day-Glo
TM
Day Kundi
province in Afghanistan
daylong, daytime
but month-long, year-long, night-time
day trip
two words, eg Day Trip to Bangor by (trivia question) ... Fiddler's Dram
D-day
6 June 1944, or used figuratively ("Monday is D-day for the Blades' promotion hopes")
deaf ears
Avoid or say "closed ears": the phrase is not just a rather lazy cliche but offensive to many
deaf people; for the same reason, do not use "dialogue of the deaf": most deaf people are
perfectly capable of conducting a dialogue using BSL and other sign languages.
Note that a hearing aid is not a "deaf aid" (although we contrived to use the phrase in a
crossword in August 2012)
deathbed
but death row
debacle
no accents; like farce and fiasco, to be used sparingly in news reporting
debatable
decades
1950s, etc; use figures if you abbreviate: roaring 20s, swinging 60s, a woman in her 70s,
the first reader's email of the 00s (pronounced, unfortunately, "noughties")
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deceptively
ambiguous (in one survey, half the respondents thought "deceptively easy" meant easy,
and half thought it meant hard), and therefore best avoided – advice unlikely to be heeded,
sadly, by estate agents
decimate
nowadays used to mean destroy (yes, we know it originally meant to kill one in 10)
See Latin
declarations
lc, eg Laeken declaration on the future of Europe
decorations
no need normally to put OBE, KCMG, etc after people's names
deep south
of the US
defensible
defriend
or unfriend (Facebook)
defuse
render harmless; diffuse spread about
Degas, Edgar
(1834-1917) French artist
de Gaulle, Charles
(1890-1970) French military leader and statesman; De Gaulle on second mention
degrees
like this: my sons all got firsts, but I only got a second – although it was a 2:1 – and I did
go on to a master's
deja vu
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no accents
Delhi
unless specifically referring to the small area of the city that is New Delhi
delivery
the arrival of a baby, letter or parcel; also widely found in such gruesome examples of
marketing-speak as "delivering care" or "delivering quality and value"
Deloitte
not Deloittes, Deloitte Consulting, or Deloitte & Touche
delphic
deltas
are, like other geographical features, lc: Nile delta, Okavango delta, etc
delusion or illusion?
"That the sun moves round the Earth was once a delusion, and is still an illusion" (Fowler)
DeMille, Cecil B
(1881-1959) Hollywood producer and director; the B stood for Blount
Democratic party
not "Democrat party", despite attempts by some Republicans to call it this
Dench, Dame Judi
not Judy
Deng Xiaoping
denier
one who denies, as in "Holocaust denier"; there is no such word as "denialist".
denier is also a unit of weight for fibre, eg 10-denier tights
De Niro, Robert
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denouement
no accent
departments of state
British government ministries (but not ministers) take initial caps, as follows:
Cabinet Office (but the cabinet)
Home Office
Foreign Office (abbreviate to FCO – for Foreign and Commonwealth Office – after first
mention)
Treasury
Department for Business, Innovation and Skills (BIS)
Department for Communities and Local Government (DCLG)
Department for Culture, Media and Sport (DCMS)
Department for Education (DfE)
Department of Energy and Climate Change (Decc)
Department for Environment, Food and Rural Affairs (Defra)
Department for International Development (DfID)
Department for Transport (DfT)
Department for Work and Pensions (DWP)
Department of Health (DH)
Ministry of Defence (MoD)
Ministry of Justice (MoJ)
Office of the Leader of the House of Commons
Northern Ireland Office
Scotland Office not Scottish Office
Wales Office not Welsh Office
Use the abbreviations in brackets sparingly, especially the clumsy ones: business
department, culture and sport department, and so on are fine, or just the department, the
ministry, etc.
Departments and ministries of other countries are lc, eg French ministry of the interior,
Iraqi foreign ministry
dependant
noun; dependent adjective; dependence
depositary
person; depository place
deprecate
express disapproval; depreciate reduce in value. Hence self-deprecating, not "self89
depreciating"
de rigueur
the two Us are de rigueur
derring-do
not daring-do
Derry, Co Derry
(County Derry at first mention) not Londonderry, Co Londonderry
descendants
come after ancestors; you wouldn't think we would get this simple thing wrong as often as
we do
deselect
desiccated
not dessicated
despoil
but despoliation
dessert
pudding, but just deserts
Dettol
TM
developing countries
rather than third world
devil, the
de Villepin, Dominique
Villepin on second mention
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DeVito, Danny
Diabetes UK
formerly known as the British Diabetic Association
Diaghilev, Sergei
(1872-1929) Russian impresario; founder of the Ballets Russes
dialects
cockney, estuary English, geordie, scouse
diamond jubilee
diaspora
DiCaprio, Leonardo
Dictaphone
TM
diehard
although the film series is Die Hard
dietitian
must be trained and qualified in dietetics, and registered with the Health Professionals
Council; not the same as a nutritionist, a less precise term (although some nutritionists are
also registered dietitians)
different from
is traditionally the correct form; different to is widely accepted nowadays, but note the
difference between:
She looked very different to those who came before (to the people who came before, she
looked very different).
She looked very different from those who came before (she did not look like the people
who came before).
Different than is wrong, at least in British English; and it's always differs from, not differs to
digital rights management
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can be abbreviated to DRM after first mention
digitalise
administer digitoxin (extracted from foxglove leaves) to treat heart conditions;
digitisetranscribe data into digital format
dignitary, dignitaries
dilapidated
not delapidated
dilemma
means two difficult choices, not any general problem
dilettante
dim sum
Dinky Toys
TM
diphtheria
diplomatic service
director general
direct speech
People we write about are allowed to speak in their own, not necessarily our, style, but be
sensitive: do not, for example, expose someone to ridicule for dialect or grammatical
errors.
Do not attempt facetious phonetic renditions such as "oop north", "fooking" and "booger"
when interviewing someone from the north, or "dahn sarf" when writing about south
London
dire straits
not straights
disabled people
not "the disabled"
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We aim to use positive language about disability, avoiding outdated terms that stereotype
or stigmatise.
Terms to avoid, with acceptable alternatives in brackets, include victim of, suffering from,
afflicted by, crippled by (prefer person who has, person with); wheelchair-bound, in a
wheelchair (uses a wheelchair); invalid (disabled person); mentally handicapped,
backward, retarded, slow (person with learning difficulties or disabilities); the disabled, the
handicapped, the blind, the deaf (disabled people, blind people, deaf people); deaf and
dumb (deaf and speech-impaired, hearing and speech-impaired)
disc
rotating optical disc: CD, CD-Rom, DVD, etc; disk rotating magnetic disc: disk drive, floppy
disk
discernible
not discernable
discharged
a patient is discharged, not released, from hospital; a prisoner is released from jail
discolour
but discoloration
discomfit
(verb) to make uncomfortable or uneasy (its older meaning, to thwart or frustrate, has
largely fallen into disuse); discomfort (noun) inconvenience, distress or mild pain
discreet
circumspect; discrete separate
disfranchise
not disenfranchise
disinterested
means free from bias, objective (the negative form of interested as in "interested party");
often used incorrectly instead of uninterested, not taking an interest (the negative form of
interested as in "interested in football").
So disinterest is impartiality, not a lack of interest
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Disneyland
(California)
Disneyland Paris
(formerly Euro Disney)
Disney World
(Florida)
disoriented
not disorientated
dispatch, dispatch box
(Commons), dispatched; not despatch, despatched
Disprin
TM; call it aspirin
dissociate, dissociation
not disassociate, disassociation
distributor
not distributer
ditching
not a synonym for crashing: if you ditch a helicopter, you make a controlled landing on the
water after an emergency – we have got this wrong several times
divorcee
a divorced person, male or female
D notices
see DA notices
Doctor Who
the title of the series – do not abbreviate to Dr Who; the character's name is the Doctor,
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and he is a Time Lord
docudrama, docusoap
dogs
normally lc, eg alsatian, doberman, jack russell, labrador, rottweiler, yorkshire terrier; but
note German shepherd, Irish setter, old English sheepdog
D'oh!
as Homer Simpson would say (note the apostrophe)
Dolby
TM
Dolittle, Dr
character who talked to the animals, created by Hugh Lofting; Doolittle, Elizacharacter
created by George Bernard Shaw in Pygmalion; also a British singer-songwriter (born
1988)
doll's house
dome, the
Millennium Dome at first mention, thereafter the dome; now the O2
Domesday Book
but doomsday scenario
Dominica
former British colony in the Windward Islands, south-east of the Dominican Republic
Dominican Republic
independent Spanish-speaking country that shares the island of Hispaniola with Haiti
doner
kebab
See kebabs
donor
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gives money
doppelganger
no accent
dos and don'ts
Dostoevsky, Fyodor Mikhailovich
(1821-81) Russian novelist, author of Crime and Punishment and The Idiot
dotcom
Double, the
as in Chelsea won the Double in 2010 (FA Cup and Premier League)
doubledecker
bus; Double Decker chocolate bar
doughnuts
despite Dunkin' Donuts
dove
a bird, not the past tense of dive, which is dived
dover sole
Dow Jones industrial average
downmarket
downplay
play down is preferable
downriver, downstream
Down's syndrome
say (if relevant) a baby with Down's syndrome, not "a Down's syndrome baby" – we
wouldn't say "a cerebral palsy baby". The diagnosis is not the person
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downtown
down under
Do not use to refer to Australia or New Zealand
dozen
precisely, not approximately, 12
Dr
at first mention for medical and scientific doctors and doctors of divinity (not, for example,
a politician who happens to have a PhD in history); thereafter, just use surname except in
leading articles
draconian
draft
document; draught current of air
draftsman, draftswoman
of documents; draughtsman, draughtswoman of drawings
dreamed
not dreamt
DreamWorks
dressing room
two words
drier, dryer
this shirt will only get drier after an hour in the tumble dryer (while I use the hairdryer)
drily
not dryly
drink
past tense drank, past participle drunk: he drinks too much – last night he drank 10 pints,
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the least he has drunk on any night this week
drink-driver, drink-driving, drunk-driving
The limits are breath: 35 micrograms per 100 millilitres; blood: 80 milligrams per 100
millilitres; urine: 107 milligrams per 100 millilitres.
If a breath test is positive, but less than 50 micrograms per 100 millilitres, then a blood or
urine test is needed before a prosecution can be brought; above 50, a breath test alone is
strong enough to be used as evidence
driving licence
not driver's licence in British English
drone
honeybee whose function is to mate with the queen, and by extension therefore someone
who lives off the work of others (the worker bees); however, it seems to be used
increasingly to mean something like an obedient, unimaginative worker ("office drone")
drug companies, drug dealer, drug raid, drug squad, drug tsar
not drugs raid, etc
drug use
a more accurate and less judgmental term than "drug abuse" or "misuse" (often all three
terms have been scattered randomly through the same reports)
druid
drum'n'bass
drunkenness
DSG International
the former Dixons; owns Currys and PC World. DSG stands for Dixons Store Group, but in
June 2010 the company, belatedly realising that no one in the world was aware of this,
decided to change back to Dixons
dub
avoid such tabloidese as "he has been dubbed the nation's leading expert on style" (even
if true)
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duct tape
not duck tape
due to or owing to?
Traditionalists argue that just as rent is due to the landlord, "due to" should only be used
when it is the complement of the verb "to be"; otherwise, use "owing to" or "because of":
The train's late arrival was due to [caused by] leaves on the line; the train was late owing
to [because of] leaves on the line.
The distinction, once routinely taught in primary schools but now assailed on all sides,
especially by train and tube announcers, is being lost
dugout
Duke and Duchess of Cambridge
(or wherever), first mention; thereafter the duke and duchess.
Variations on "Prince William and Kate" or "Kate and William" are fine for headlines.
"Princess Kate" is wrong
Duke of York
first mention; thereafter Prince Andrew or the prince
dumb
do not use when you mean speech-impaired
du Pré, Jacqueline
(1945-87) English cellist, Du Pré at second mention
Dupré, Marcel
(1886-1971) French organist and composer
Dürer, Albrecht
(1471-1528) German painter
dutch auction, dutch courage, dutch treat
but double Dutch
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DVD
stands for digital versatile disc
dwarves
plural of dwarf (not dwarfs); but the verb is to dwarf, eg Kings Place dwarfs the
surrounding buildings
dyke
not dike
dynamo
plural dynamos
Dynamo
football teams from the former Soviet Union are Dynamo; teams from Romania
areDinamo
dyslexia
write "Paul has dyslexia" rather than labelling him "a dyslexic" or saying he "suffers from"
dyslexia
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E
each other
of two only (Iniesta and Xavi hugged each other); otherwise one another (all 11 Spanish
players hugged one another)
EADS
European Aeronautic Defence and Space Company; the group includes the aircraft
manufacturer Airbus and is the major partner in the Eurofighter consortium
earlier
often redundant: "they met this week" or "it happened this month" are preferable to "they
met earlier this week" or "it happened earlier this month" and will save space
Earl's Court
station and district; Earls Court exhibition centre
earn
rather than learn that a banker or footballer earns, say, £15m a year, readers have
indicated that they would prefer us to say "is paid £15m a year" or "receives £15m a year"
earned
not earnt
earring, earshot
no hyphen
Earth
but moon, sun
east Africa
East Anglia
east Asia
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or south-east Asia rather than far east
east coast mainline
but the train operating company set up by the government in 2009 is East Coast
East End
inner east London north of the river; the equivalent district south of the Thames is southeast London
EastEnders
TV soap; in real life, people from the East End are East Enders
Easter Day
not Easter Sunday
eastern Europe
East Jerusalem
east Midlands
but East Midlands airport
East Riding of Yorkshire council
easyCouncil
approach to local government favoured by some Conservative authorities, modelled on the
no-frills approach of budget airlines such as easyJet
Easy Street
Ebacc
English baccalaureate
eBay
but Ebay if you cannot avoid starting a sentence or headline with it
Ebola
a virus and a disease, Ebola haemorrhagic fever (EHF)
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ebook, email
but e-commerce, e-learning, e-petition, e-reader
ebookers
online travel company
eccles cake
ecclesiastical titles
Most Rev (archbishop), Right Rev (bishop), Very Rev (dean or provost), the Ven
(archdeacon), the Rev John (or Joan) Smith – not "Rev John Smith", "Rev Smith", "the
Revs Smith and Jones". Surname only on subsequent mentions, except in leading articles
Eccleston, Christopher
actor; Ecclestone, Bernie Formula One boss
E coli
It is not normally necessary to use the full name, Escherichia coli. As with other taxonomic
names, italicise in copy but use roman in headlines and standfirsts; no full point.
Note that E coli is a bacterium, not a virus
eco-friendly
but ecohome, ecosystem, ecotown, ecowarrior
ecstasy
state and drug
ecu
European currency unit, superseded by the euro
Edinburgh festival
comprises the following:
Edinburgh international festival
Edinburgh festival fringe (not fringe festival, but the fringe is OK)
Edinburgh international book festival
editor
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lc: editor of the Observer, editor of the Bromley, Bexley and Eltham Leader series, etc
editors
An editor is to newspaper or website as a captain is to ship.
"Editors are craftsmen, ghosts, psychiatrists, bullies, sparring partners, experts, enablers,
ignoramuses, translators, writers, goalies, friends, firemen, wimps, ditch diggers,
mindreaders, coaches, bomb throwers, muses and spittoon – sometimes all while working
on the same piece" (Gary Kamiya, Salon.com).
"Trust your editor, and you'll sleep on straw" (John Cheever)
educationist
not educationalist
-ee endings
-ee means something happens to you; -er means you do something: so employee, invitee
(if you must), refugee but attender, escaper, etc, rather than attendee, escapee, etc
eerie
weird; Erie North American lake; eyrie of eagles
effect or affect?
See affect
effectively
is not a synonym for in effect: "the Balls campaign was launched effectively after Brown
resigned" means the launch was official and its intended effect was achieved; "the Balls
campaign had in effect been launched before Brown resigned" means this was not the
official launch, but events at the time described did have the effect of launching it, whether
intended or not.
Effectively is almost invariably misused, and can often be omitted
effete
does not mean effeminate or foppish, but "weak, ineffectual or decadent as a result of
over-refinement ... exhausted, worn out, spent" (Collins)
efit
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(electronic facial identification technique) program used to create police drawings
eg
no full points
EGM
extraordinary general meeting
Eid al-Adha
(Festival of Sacrifice) Muslim festival laid down in Islamic law, celebrates the end of the
hajj. Note that eid means festival, so it is tautologous to describe it as the "Eid festival"
Eid al-Fitr
Muslim festival of thanksgiving laid down in Islamic law, celebrates the end of Ramadan
(al-fitr means the breaking of the fast)
eid mubarak
not a festival but a greeting (mubarak means "may it be blessed")
Eire
no: say Republic of Ireland or Irish Republic
elan
no accent
ElBaradei, Mohamed
former director general of the International Atomic Energy Agency, ElBaradei after first
mention
elderly people
or older people, not "the elderly"; do not use to describe anyone under 75
El Dorado
fabled city of gold
Eldorado
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fabled flop of a TV soap
electra complex
the female equivalent of oedipal complex
electrocution
death by electric shock, so don't say survivors of torture were "electrocuted" during their
ordeal - rather that they were given electric shocks
elegiac
elephant in the room
Like governments and reality TV series, metaphors that we once welcomed into our lives
as refreshing can become all too familiar, to the point of tedium – and this cliche is a fine
example.
At its height, elephants were not only in the room, but had taken over the whole house:
"elephants in the room" included trade figures, policy, lack of policy, climate change, Iraq,
the US, Europe, anti-Americanism, men, women, single women, a new French football
league, race, religion, Islam, Catholicism, Tessa Jowell, Andrew Neil, Jimmy Greaves,
fatness, thinness, Stalinism, Hitler and Tony Blair's departure from office.
The phrase seemed destined for the elephants' graveyard but there is evidence that, used
imaginatively, it may still be effective: "There's only so long they can ignore this elephant in
the room [the Iraq war] before it takes a dump on the carpet" (Gary Younge, 5 July 2010);
and, from the same writer: "Money in American politics was already an elephant in the
room. Now the supreme court has given it a laxative, taken away the shovel, and asked us
to ignore both the sight and the stench" (30 January 2012)
11-plus
elision
means omission, not the conflation of one or more things
elite
ellipsis
Use a space before and after ellipses, and three dots (with no spaces between them), in
copy and headlines, eg "She didn't want to go there ... "; there is no need for a full point
email
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emanate
is intransitive; use exude if you need a transitive verb
Embankment, the
in London; the tube station is just Embankment
embargo
plural embargos
embarrass, embarrassment
embassy
lc, eg British embassy; not necessarily an excuse to use the Ferrero Rocher joke yet again
emigrate
leave a country; immigrate arrive in one
émigré
Emin, Tracey
not Tracy
empathic
not empathetic
Empire State Building
empires
lc British empire (but British Empire Medal), Roman empire, etc
employment tribunal
not industrial tribunal
EMS
European monetary system
Emu
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economic and monetary union
enamoured of
not by or with
encyclopedia
not encyclopaedia
endgame
enervate
to deprive of strength or vitality
enforce, enforceable
England, English
should not be used when you mean Britain or British, unless you are seeking to offend
readers from other parts of the UK (we published a map of England's best beaches, with
the headline "Britain's best beaches")
See Scotland
English Nature
is now Natural England
Enlightenment, the
en masse
enormity
refers to something monstrous or wicked, not big
enquiry
use inquiry
enrol, enrolling, enrolment
en route
not on route
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en suite
two words, whatever estate agents might claim
ensure
make certain; insure against risk; assure life
enthral, enthralling
entr'acte
E.ON
epicentre
point on the Earth's surface directly above the focus of an earthquake or underground
explosion; frequently misused to mean the centre or focus itself and is also not a synonym
for "dead centre".
After one of our misuses in 2010 a reader (for more than 60 years) wrote: "How is it that so
many highly educated people, whose business is words and communication, do not
understand that a prefix such as epi is there for a purpose: it changes the meaning of the
root word"
epilepsy
seizures are epileptic, people are not – we do not define people by their medical condition;
so say (if relevant) "Joe Bloggs, who has epilepsy" not "Joe Bloggs, an epileptic"
EPO
erythropoietin, a performance-enhancing drug
equable
unvarying; equitable fair
Equality and Human Rights Commission
body created in 2007 to bring together the work of the Commission for Racial Equality, the
Disability Rights Commission, and the Equal Opportunities Commission; may be called
EHRC, or simply the commission, after first mention
equator, the
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Equatorial Guinea
formerly Spanish Guinea, a country in central Africa that became independent in 1974; do
not confuse with Guinea or Guinea-Bissau, other African former colonies
Erdogan, Recep Tayyip
Turkish politician, elected prime minister in 2003
ere long
not e'er long
Eriksson, Sven-Göran
ERM
exchange rate mechanism
Ernie
electronic random number indicator equipment: the machine that picks winning premium
bond numbers
escapers
not escapees, despite the apparently unstoppable advance of the -ee suffix (can it be long
before readers become "readees"?)
Eskimo
is a language spoken in Greenland, Canada, Alaska and Siberia. Note that it has no more
words for snow than English does for rain. The people are Inuit (singular Inuk), not
"Eskimos"
espresso
not expresso
establishment, the
estuary English
Eta
Basque separatists; ETA estimated time of arrival
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etc
no full point
ethnic
never say ethnic when you mean ethnic minority, which leads to such nonsense as "the
constituency has a small ethnic population"
ethnic cleansing
should not be used as a euphemism for genocide unless quoting someone
EU
European Union (no need to spell out at first mention); formerly EC (European
Community); before that EEC (European Economic Community)
EU presidents
There are three, so don't say "EU president" or "president of the union" without making
clear which you mean: president of the European commission, president of the European
parliament, or holder of the rotating presidency (technically "president in office of the
council of the European Union"), which rotates among the member states every six
months
euro
currency; plural euros and cents
Euro
should not be used as a prefix to everything European, but Euro-MP is an acceptable
alternative to MEP
Euro Disney
runs what is now called Disneyland Paris
euroland, eurozone
Europe
includes Britain, so don't say, for example, something is common "in Europe" unless it is
common in Britain as well; to distinguish between Britain and the rest of Europe the
phrases "continental Europe" or "elsewhere in Europe" may be useful
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central Europe, eastern Europe, western Europe
European commission
the commission after first mention; do not abbreviate to EC
European convention on human rights
European council
EU institution; not to be confused with the Council of Europe
European court of human rights
nothing to do with the EU: it is a Council of Europe body; sits in Strasbourg. To avoid
confusion, call it the "Strasbourg court" or the "human rights court" after first mention
rather than the "European court"
European court of justice
the highest court in the European Union in matters of EU law; sits in Luxembourg
European stability mechanism
ESM for short
Eurosceptic
sceptical about Europe, not just the euro
Eurovision song contest
evangelical
fundamentalist wing of Christianity
evangelist
someone who spreads the gospel
eventually
often unnecessary, as in "the FTSE 100 drifted back, eventually closing 33.9 points lower
at 5244.2"; the stock market always closes eventually
every day
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adverb meaning often: it happens every day
everyday
adjective meaning ordinary: an everyday mistake
every parent's nightmare
avoid this cliche
exchequer, the
exclamation marks
Do not use! (As Scott Fitzgerald said, it is like laughing at your own jokes)
exclusive
term used by tabloid newspapers to denote a story that is in all of them
execution
the carrying out of a death sentence by lawful authority, so a terrorist, for example, does
not "execute" someone
ex officio
by right of position or office; ex parte on behalf of one party only
exorcised
having had evil spirits removed; often used erroneously for exercised having one's
passions inflamed by something
expat, expatriate
not ex-pat or expatriot; this is "ex" meaning "out of" (as in export, extract), not "ex-"
meaning "former" (as in ex-husband)
explained
"said" is normally sufficient
exploitative
rather than exploitive
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Export Credits Guarantee Department
ECGD at second mention
exposé
extracurricular, extramarital, extraterrestrial, extraterritorial
"extrajudicial killing"
should be used only when quoting someone
extrovert
not extravert
eye level
no hyphen
eyes
is being used increasingly for "considers", but it doesn't mean that. You might get away
with "BoS eyes up Abbey" meaning considers it as a takeover target, but not "BoS eyes
online insurance" meaning BoS is considering setting up an online sales operation
eye-watering
The pace at which a fresh metaphor becomes a tired cliche seems to have increased in
recent years; this one saw a huge increase in 2009 – although curiously, while "eyewatering" is only ever applied to money ("eye-watering sums"), its adverbial near relative is
more versatile ("an eye-wateringly beautiful woman", "an eye-wateringly sharp sauvignon"
and so on). The danger, as ever, is that the expression loses its force from overuse
eyewitness
one word, but witness is preferable, except in the Guardian's Eyewitness picture spread
Eyjafjallajökull
Icelandic volcano that brought peace to the skies for a short time in 2010
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F
facade
no cedilla
Fàbregas, Cesc
a Catalan, not Spanish, name; note the accent
Facebook
no need to call it "the social networking site" every time – we know what it is
facelift
factchecker, factchecking
factoid
not a trivial fact, but a mistaken assumption repeated so often that it is believed to be true
(a word coined by Norman Mailer, who defined it as "something that everyone knows is
true, except it ain't!")
FA Cup
the Cup (the cap C is hallowed by convention); all other cups lc at second mention
fahrenheit
use in brackets, without degree symbol, after celsius figure, eg 37C (98.6F); to convert,
multiply the celsius temperature by 1.8, then add 32; alternatively, double the celsius
figure, subtract one-tenth of that figure, and add 32; or you could save yourself the bother
by using a conversion website
Fáilte Ireland
Ireland's tourism authority
Fairtrade
The Fairtrade mark is a certification system run by the Fairtrade Foundation; products are
entitled to be called Fairtrade (cap F) if they meet the following criteria: a price that covers
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producers' costs, a premium for producers to invest in their communities, and long-term
and more direct trading relations; fair trade refers to the movement as a whole, eg only
fair trade will enable farmers in developing countries to become self-sufficient
fairytale
noun and adjective; but fairy story
faith schools
may be called religious schools without fear of divine retribution
falafel
fallopian tubes
fallout
Falluja
families
word favoured by politicians to make them sound caring and concerned ("hard-working
families"), which doesn't mean we have to do so, as in this 2010 Guardian splash
headline: "Families face nuclear tax on power bills".
As a reader pointed out: "So don't older people, single people, etc, face the same tax? ...
the implicit attitude [is] that those not part of families are of secondary significance." Quite
family-size, fun-size
not family-sized, fun-sized
famous, famously
If someone or something actually is famous, there is no need to say so.
From a reader: "Please can you rein in the many writers who insist on dropping the word
famously into their copy ... as in famously overused, famously redundant or famously not
really famous at all. It strikes me that it has become an easy way of indicating that
'everybody knows this fact but I'm going to include it anyway'."
fanbase, fanbelt, fanclub, fanmail
far, farther, farthest
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of distances; otherwise further, furthest
far away
adverb; faraway adjective: she moved to a faraway place, and now lives far away
Farc, the
it stands for the Revolutionary Armed Forces of Colombia; note the definite article
far east
but east Asia or south-east Asia is preferable
farm worker
not farm labourer
Faroe Isles
or just Faroes
farrago
a hotchpotch or jumbled mixture; not synonymous with fiasco (a humiliating failure)
Farsi
language spoken by the majority of Iranians (not Persian)
fascism, fascist
not facism, facist, a careless but common error
fashion weeks
lc, eg London fashion week
fatality
a fatality is worse than death, and like most euphemisms best avoided
fat cats
should be used sparingly, even if writing about overweight moggies
father of two, mother of two
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etc (no hyphens); only describe people in this way if relevant
Father's Day
fatwa
an edict, not necessarily a death sentence
fayre
say fair
fazed
overwhelmed; phased staged
FBI
Federal Bureau of Investigation; no need to spell out
FDA
what the former First Division Association now calls itself; you will need to say it is the
senior civil servants' union or no one will know who you are talking about; note that FDA
also stands for the US food and drug administration
fedayeen
Arab fighters (the word means those who risk their lives for a cause); can be capped up
when referring to a specific force, eg the Saddam Fedayeen militia, which fought coalition
forces in the 2003 Iraq war
Federal Reserve
at first reference, the Fed thereafter
fed up with
not fed up of
feelgood factor
fellow
lc, eg a fellow of All Souls, fellow artist, fellow members, etc (and do not hyphenate)
female
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not "woman" or "women" in such phrases as female home secretary, female voters
female genital mutilation
not "female circumcision"
ferris wheel
no need for a cap F, although the first was built by George Washington Gale Ferris Jr for
the World's Fair in Chicago in 1893
festivals
lc, whether artistic or sporting: Cannes film festival, Cheltenham festival, Edinburgh festival
fringe, London jazz festival, etc
fete
no accent
fetid
not foetid
fewer or less?
fewer means smaller in number, eg fewer coins; less means smaller in quantity, eg less
money
Ffestiniog
fiance
male, fiancee female; but note divorcee is both male and female
Fianna Fáil
Irish political party
fiasco
like debacle and farce, overused in news stories: who says it's a fiasco?
fibula
lower leg bone, plural fibulas; also Latin for brooch or clasp, plural fibulae
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field marshal
50/50
figures
spell out from one to nine; numerals from 10 to 999,999; thereafter 1m, 3.2bn (except for
people and animals, eg two million viewers, eight billion cattle); spell out ordinals from first
to ninth, thereafter 10th, 31st, etc
filesharing
fillip
not filip
film-maker
but film star
Filofax
TM; use personal organiser unless you are sure
finalise, finalised
avoid; use complete, completed or finish, finished
Financial Services Authority
FSA on second mention
financial years
2011-12, etc
Fine Gael
Irish political party
fine-tooth comb
Finnegans Wake
firebomb
fire brigade, fire service
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lc, eg Cheshire fire brigade
firefight
do not use to describe a military skirmish
firefighter
not fireman
firewall
firing line
the people who do the firing; if they are aiming at you, you are in the line of fire not in the
firing line
firm
strictly a partnership without limited liability, such as solicitors or accountants, but may be
used in place of company in headlines
first, second, third
rather than firstly, secondly, thirdly, etc; spell out up to ninth, then 10th, 21st, millionth
first aid
first floor, second floor
the first floor you come to when you go upstairs is the first floor (the clue is in the name);
the second floor is the one above that
first-hand
first lady
first minister
(Scottish parliament, Welsh assembly, Northern Ireland assembly)
first name, forename, given name
not Christian name. Use them first time, but not subsequently (except for peers, who never
use their first names).
Avoid just initials, unless that is how a person is known – TS Eliot, DBC Pierre. In stories
about more than one member of a family, first names can be used to distinguish between
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them. Occasionally, we will use first names in interviews for emotional impact
first world war, second world war
fit for purpose
a recent cliche that quickly proved itself unfit for the purpose of good writing
fit the bill
not fill the bill
flagship
a flagship is a ship, a "flagship store" would be a store where one bought flagships, and a
"flagship local authority" is a cliche
flak
not flack
flammable
rather than inflammable (although, curiously, they mean the same thing); the negative is
non-flammable
flash memory
computer memory that can be erased and reprogrammed, used for example in mobile
phones, digital cameras and MP3 players
flashmob
Flat
racing
flatmate
flaunt or flout?
to flaunt is to make a display of something, as in flaunting wealth; to flout is to show
disregard for something, as in flouting the seatbelt law
fledgling
not fledgeling
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flexitime
flip-flops
floor
If, say, a policeman knocks you over, you fall on to the ground, not the floor, although you
might say you have been floored
Florence + the Machine
not "and" or "&"
flotation
whether in a tank, or on the stock market
flounder or founder?
to flounder is to perform a task badly, like someone stuck in mud; to founder is to fail: a
business might be foundering because its bosses are floundering
flu
fluky
not flukey
flyer
not flier
flying squad
flypast
noun
fo'c'sle
abbreviation of forecastle, and a surviving entry from the 1928 "Style-book of the
Manchester Guardian"
focus, focused, focusing
foetus
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not fetus
fogey
not fogy
folklore, folksong
following
prefer after, eg Wednesday went to pieces after their latest relegation
foment
unrest; ferment alcohol
font
(not fount) receptacle for baptism; digital file (originally a foundry) that contains a typeface
foodie
foolproof
foot-and-mouth disease
footie
abbreviation for football, but note that in Australia (particularly Victoria), footy is what they
call Australian rules football
for all its worth
but for what it's worth
forbear
abstain
forebear
ancestor
foreign accents
Use accents on French, German, Portuguese, Spanish and Irish Gaelic words – and, if at
all possible, on people's names in any language, eg Sven-Göran Eriksson (Swedish), Béla
Bartók (Hungarian). This may be tricky in the case of some languages but we have had
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complaints from readers that it is disrespectful to foreign readers to, in effect, misspell their
names
foreign names
The French (or French origin) de or le and the Dutch van are normally lowercase when the
name is full out: eg Charles de Gaulle, Graeme le Saux, Giovanni van Bronckhorst; but De
Gaulle, Le Saux, Van Bronckhorst when written without forenames.
Note that the Belgian president of the European council is Herman Van Rompuy
(uppercase V).
The Italian De or Di is normally uppercase, eg Antonio Di Natale
Foreign Office
abbreviated to FCO not FO, as its official name is Foreign and Commonwealth Office
foreign placenames
Style for foreign placenames evolves with common usage. Leghorn has become Livorno,
and maybe one day München will supplant Munich, but not yet. Remember that many
names have become part of the English language: Geneva is the English name for the city
that Switzerland's French speakers refer to as Genève and its German speakers call Genf.
Accordingly, we opt for locally used names, with these main exceptions (the list is not
exhaustive, apply common sense): Andalusia, Archangel, Basel, Berne, Brittany,
Catalonia, Cologne, Dunkirk, Florence, Fribourg, Genoa, Gothenburg, Hanover, Kiev,
Lombardy, Milan, Munich, Naples, Normandy, Nuremberg, Padua, Piedmont, Rome,
Sardinia, Seville, Sicily, Syracuse, Turin, Tuscany, Venice, Zurich.
And the next time someone says we should call Burma "Myanmar" because that's what it
calls itself, they should bear in mind that Colonel Gaddafi renamed Libya "The Great
Socialist People's Libyan Arab Jamahiriyya"
foreign secretary
foreign words and phrases
Italicise, with roman translation in brackets, if it really is a foreign word or phrase and not
an anglicised one, in which case it is roman with no accents (exceptions: exposé, lamé,
pâté, résumé, roué). Remember Orwell: do not use a foreign word where a suitable
English equivalent exists
forensic
is not a synonym for scientific: it derives from forum (Latin for court) and that is what it
means – all evidence in court is forensic; forensic scientist means a scientist whose work
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is done for legal purposes (so a page 1 headline in which we referred to "new forensic
evidence" should have said "new scientific evidence" which is what was meant)
foresee, foreseeable
forever
continually: he is forever changing his mind
for ever
for always: I will love you for ever
for free
avoid: we said police recruits might be forced to work "for free"; it would have been more
elegant to say "for nothing"
forgo
go without; past tense forwent, past participle forgone
forego
go before; forego, past tense forewent, past participle foregone (as in "foregone
conclusion")
forklift truck
former Soviet republics
These are:
Armenia adjective Armenian
Azerbaijan adjective Azerbaijani (though there are ethnic Azeris in, eg, Armenia)
Belarus adjective Belarussian
Estonia adjective Estonian (Estonia did not join the Commonwealth of Independent
States)
Georgia adjective Georgian
Kazakhstan adjective Kazakh
Kyrgyzstan adjective Kyrgyz
Latvia adjective Latvian (not in the commonwealth)
Lithuania adjective Lithuanian (not in the commonwealth)
Moldova adjective Moldovan
Russia adjective Russian
Tajikistan adjective Tajik
Turkmenistan adjective Turkmen (its citizens are Turkmen, singular Turkman)
Ukraine adjective Ukrainian (not "the Ukraine")
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Uzbekistan adjective Uzbek
Formica
TM
formula
plural formulas, but formulae in a scientific context
Formula One
in copy; F1 is fine in headlines and standfirsts
fortuitous
by chance, not (as most people seem to think) by good fortune; if we manage to use the
word correctly, it is entirely fortuitous
fosbury flop
fount
(not font) of knowledge
Fourth of July
foxhunting
FPA
Family Planning Association at first mention, thereafter the FPA, although the organisation
has decided to style itself "fpa" (lc, no definite article) in its literature and on its website
FRA
fellow of the Royal Academy; FRS fellow of the Royal Society
fractions
two-thirds, three-quarters, etc, but two and a half, but use 1⁄3, 3⁄4 in tables, recipes, etc;
avoid mixing fractions and percentages in the same story
Frankenstein
the monster's creator, not the monster
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Frankenstein food
has become a cliche to describe GM food; do not use
Frappuccino
TM
fraud squad
freefall
free rein
as in giving free rein to one's ideas – the expression comes from holding a horse's reins
loosely
french fries, french horn, french kiss, french letter, french polish, french toast,
french window
French Guiana
an overseas département of France on the Caribbean coast of South America; do not
confuse with Equatorial Guinea, Guinea, or Guinea-Bissau, which are all in Africa, or
Guyana, which is also in South America
fresco
plural frescoes
freshers' week
Freud, Lucian
British artist, not Lucien
Freudian slip
friendlily
curious adverb defined by the OED as "in a friendly manner, like a friend"
friendly fire
no quotation marks necessary
Friends of the Earth
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abbreviated to FoE after first mention
Friends Provident
no apostrophe
Frisbee
TM; if in doubt, call it a flying disc
frontbench, frontline, frontman, frontrunner
frostbite, frostbitten
FTSE 100
fuchsia
a word frequently misspelt (in the Guardian and elsewhere) as "fuschia"; it may help to
note that it is named after a botanist called Fuchs
fuck
not "a good, honest old-fashioned Anglo-Saxon word" (as it is often described) because
there is no such thing as an Anglo-Saxon word (they spoke Old English) and, more
important, its first recorded use dates from 1278
See swearwords
fuel
overused as a verb, although handy in headlines
Fulbright scholarship
not Fullbright
fulfil, fulfilling, fulfilment
full-time
fulsome
another example of a word that is almost never used correctly, it means "cloying,
excessive, disgusting by excess" (and is not, as some appear to believe, a clever word for
full); so "fulsome praise" should not be used in a complimentary sense
fundraiser, fundraising
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fungus
plural fungi
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G
G8
Canada, France, Germany, Italy, Japan, the United Kingdom, the United States and the
newest member, Russia
Gaddafi, Muammar
former Libyan leader rather than president (he held no government office and was
generally known in Libya as "leader of the revolution"); Gaddafi on second mention
gaff
hook or spar, also slang for house; blow the gaff give away a secret
gaffe
blunder
gaffer tape
Galápagos
Gallagher
Oasis brothers (Noel and Liam)
Gallaher
cigarette company
Gambia, the
not Gambia
gambit
an opening strategy that involves some sacrifice or concession; so to talk of an opening
gambit is tautologous - an opening ploy might be better
Game Boy
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gameplan, gameshow
Gandhi
not Ghandi
García Lorca, Federico
(1898-1936) Spanish writer
García Márquez, Gabriel
Colombian novelist
Garda Síochána
Irish police force; garda (plural gardaí) police officer
garotte
not garrotte or garrote
garryowen
up-and-under (rugby union)
Garryowen
Irish rugby club that gave the garryowen its name
gases
plural of gas, but the verb is gasses
gatecrash
Gategate
The hapless quintet who broke into Democratic headquarters at the Watergate building in
Washington DC in 1972 can have had no idea of the forces they were unleashing – forces
that in due course led to the resignation of President Richard Nixon, and began a proud
tradition of inane journalism that shows no sign of diminishing 40 years later.
Examples range from the mildly droll – Gatecrashergate, Henry Gatesgate (also known as
Stupidgate) – to the utterly feeble (Sexy Photo Gate).
Among numerous other instances are Bertiegate, Betsygate, Billygate, Camillagate (not to
be confused with Dianagate, also known as Squidgygate), Cheriegate, Closetgate,
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Contragate, Fajitagate, Flakegate, at least two Grannygates, Hobnobgate, Irangate,
Iraqgate, Irisgate (it is compulsory for stories about this to be headlined "And here's to you,
Mrs Robinson... "), Katrinagate, Koreagate, Monicagate, at least two cases of Nannygate,
Nipplegate, Smeargate, various Strippergates, Toiletgate, three different outbreaks of
Troopergate, and Whitewatergate.
Sporting gates include Beachballgate, Bloodgate, Buttongate, Chicanegate, Crashgate,
Handgate/Henrygate/Thierrygate, Liargate, Pizzagate, Tevezgate and, of course,
Tigergate.
Occasionally, as with Climategate, such an ephithet may be useful as a way to pull
together a lot of material on the same subject, but most gates are lazy and more likely to
put readers off than engage them
Gatt
general agreement on tariffs and trade
Gaudí, Antoni
(1852-1926) Catalan architect
Gauguin, Paul
(1848-1903) French painter
gay
should be used as an adjective rather than a noun: a gay man, gay people, gay men and
lesbians not "gays and lesbians"
Gaza Strip
Gb
gigabits; GB gigabytes
G'day
Australian greeting
gender issues
Our use of language reflects our values, as well as changes in society. Phrases such as
career girl or career woman, for example, are outdated (more women have careers than
men) and patronising (there is no male equivalent).
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So we use actor or comedian for women as well as men, not actress or comedienne (but
waiter and waitress are acceptable – at least for the moment); firefighter, not fireman; PC,
not WPC (police forces have abandoned the distinction), postal workers, not postmen, etc.
Avoid terms such as businessmen, housewives, male nurse, woman driver, woman (lady!)
doctor, etc, which reinforce outdated stereotypes. If you need to use an adjective, it is
female and not "woman" in such phrases as female bishops, female MPs, female
president.
Do not gratuitously describe a woman as a "mother-of-three": family details and marital
status are only relevant in stories about families or marriage.
Use humankind or humanity rather than mankind, a word that, as one of our readers points
out, "alienates half the population from their own history".
Never say "his" to cover men and women: use his or her, or a different construction; in
sentences such as "a teacher who beats his/her pupils is not fit to do the job", there is
usually a way round the problem – in this case, "teachers who beat their pupils ... "
Men (rarely women – funny, that) who occasionally question our policy and accuse us of
"political correctness" may care to reflect on the fact that Fowler's used to list such
"established feminine titles" as adventuress, authoress, editress, executrix, giantess,
huntress, inspectress, Jewess, poetess, procuress, quakeress, songstress, tailoress,
wardress; it also proposed new ones such as danceress and doctress ("everyone knows
the inconvenience of being uncertain whether a doctor is a man or a woman")
general
General David Petraeus at first mention, then Petraeus
general election
General Medical Council
(GMC), doctors' disciplinary body
General Strike
of 1926
General Synod
but synod after first mention
Geneva conventions
(not convention); four treaties, last revised and ratified in 1949, which with three more
recently adopted protocols set out international standards for the humanitarian treatment
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of prisoners of war and civilians caught up in war
geoengineering
geography
distinct areas are capped up: Black Country, East Anglia, Lake District, Midlands, Peak
District, Potteries, West Country, etc; but areas defined by compass points are lc: the
north, the south-east, the south-west, etc
geordie
noun and adjective; refers to people from Tyneside, and their accent
geriatrics
branch of medicine dealing with elderly people, not an amusing way to describe them in an
attempt to make yourself sound cool
german measles
but rubella is preferable
gerund
Nothing to be frightened of. Think of it as a verb used as a noun: I like running, smoking is
bad for your health, etc. You are supposed to use a possessive: I was worried by his
smoking, rather than I was worried by him smoking. In practice, many people – yes, even
journalists – don't bother
ghetto
plural ghettoes
ghoti
alternative spelling of the word "fish" (gh as in trough, o as in women, ti as in nation)
sometimes attributed to George Bernard Shaw, although there is no evidence that he ever
said or wrote it
giant
We know that BP and Vodafone are big companies, so don't need to be told that they are
"the telecoms giant" or "the oil giant"
giantkiller, giantkilling
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no hyphen
Gibraltar
overseas territory or dependency, not a British colony; its inhabitants areGibraltarians
gift
not a verb (unless, perhaps, directly quoting a football manager or player: "We gifted
Barnsley their fifth goal")
girl
female under 18
girlfriend
girlie
noun (only when quoting someone); girly adjective (eg girly clothes);
girlish
behaviour
giro
banking; gyro navigation aid
Giscard d'Estaing, Valéry
former French president, Giscard on second mention
Giuliani, Rudolph
or Rudy (not Rudi) former New York mayor
Giuseppe
regularly misspelt as Guiseppe; this is sloppy
GLA
does not stand for "Greater London assembly": there is no such thing. The Greater London
authority comprises the mayor, who runs it, and the London assembly, which holds the
mayor to account
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glamorous
not glamourous
Glasgow kiss
a head-butt
glasnost
GlaxoSmithKline
GSK on second mention and in headlines
globish
a form of simple English used by non-native English speakers
GM crops, GM food
normally no need to write genetically modified in full
GMT
Greenwich mean time: the ship ran aground at 8am local time (0700 GMT)
goalline, goalpost
goat's cheese
gobbledegook
not gobbledygook
gobsmacked
is best used only if directly quoting someone
God
but he, him etc rather than He, Him
godchild, godfather, godmother, godparents, godson, goddaughter
God particle, Higgs boson, Large Hadron Collider
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going forward
unappealing jargon when employed as an alternative to "in the future"
Goldsmiths College
no apostrophe
golf holes
are given as numbers: 1st, 2nd, 18th, etc
González Durántez, Miriam
González Durántez after first mention; do not call her Miriam Clegg or Mrs Clegg
Good Friday agreement
goodness, for goodness sake
goodnight
goody bag, goody-goody, oh goody!
but goodies
Google
takes initial cap, even when used as a verb ("I Googled myself"); named after googol, the
number 1 followed by 100 zeros
Gorbachev, Mikhail
Gormley, Antony
go-slow
noun; go slow verb
Goths
(uc) Germanic tribe that invaded the Roman empire
goths
(lc) Sisters of Mercy fans who invaded the Shepherd's Bush Empire
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government
lc in all contexts and all countries; resist the awful trend to say such things as "Lord
Browne fended off accusations of being too close to government" – it should be the
government
government departments
See departments of state
graffiti
are plural; the singular is graffito
grammar
"It will be proved to thy face that thou hast men about thee that usually talk of a noun and
a verb, and such abominable words as no Christian ear can endure to hear"
(William Shakespeare, Henry VI Part 2)
Ambrose Bierce defined grammar as "a system of pitfalls thoughtfully prepared for the feet
of the self-made man". He had a point. Generations of schoolchildren were taught
grammar as an arbitrary set of dos and don'ts laid down by people who knew, or thought
they knew, best.
Nowadays, grammar might be more helpfully defined as the set of rules followed by
speakers of a language: for example, why in English we say "I went out" and not "I out
went". Using correct grammar is a way to communicate effectively, not to feel superior to
other people because you know what a conjunction is.
Don't feel too downhearted if you were taught grammar badly, or not at all; as the linguist
Steven Pinker says: "A preschooler's tacit knowledge of grammar is more sophisticated
than the thickest style manual"
Grammer, Kelsey
actor fondly remembered as Dr Frasier Crane
grandad
but granddaughter
grandparent
Mention this status only when relevant: leave "battling grannies" and similar examples of
ageism and sexism to the tabloids; in particular we should avoid such patronising drivel as
"How this 55-year-old granny came to earn $25m a year" (page 1 blurb) – just in case
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anyone still didn't get the message, the front of G2 said: "She's five foot two, she's a
grandmother and she earns $25m a year".
Our policy on this matter prompted the Spectator columnist Rod Liddle to ask: "Why Has
The Word 'Grandmother' Been Banned By The Guardian?" It hasn't
grand prix
plural grands prix; cap up individual races, eg British Grand Prix
grand slam
(lc) a term originating in contract bridge, now used in various sports, notably golf and
tennis – in both of which it refers to winning all four major tournaments in the same year –
and rugby union, where it involves beating all five opponents in the Six Nations
championship
grassroots
one word
gravadlax
great-aunt, great-grandfather, great-great-grandmother, etc
Great Britain
England, Wales and Scotland; if you want to include Northern Ireland, use Britain or the
UK
Great Leap Forward
Mao Zedong's ill-fated attempt to modernise Chinese agriculture and industry from
1958-61
Great Train Robbers, Great Train Robbery
of 1963
Greek placenames
We normally use generally accepted anglicised names:
Andros, Cephalonia, Corfu (not Kerkira), Ithaca, Kos, Paxos, Rhodes, Santorini(not
Thira), Symi (with a Y); but note Lefkada (not Lefkas), Peloponnese (not
Peloponnessus), Thessaloniki (not Salonika)
green
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a green activist, the green movement, but uc when referring to so-named political parties,
eg the Green party
green belt
designated areas around cities subject to strict planning controls, not open countryside in
general
greenfield site
one that has not been built on before, in contrast to a brownfield site
greengrocer's apostrophe
See apostrophes
greenhouse effect
Energy from the Earth's surface is trapped in the lower atmosphere by gases that prevent
it leaking into space, a natural phenomenon that makes life possible, whose enhancement
by natural or artificial means may make life impossible. Not the result of the hole in the
ozone layer, whose thinning in the upper atmosphere is due to CFCs;the connection is that
CFCs are also greenhouse gases
green paper
grisly
gruesome
grizzly
bear
Grossman, Loyd
TV presenter and chef with his own brand of pasta sauces, singer with Jet Bronx and the
Forbidden (reunited in 2009 as the New Forbidden)
Ground Zero
initial caps for the former site of the World Trade Centre in New York; lc when referring to
the exact location of explosions, eg ground zero at Hiroshima in 1945
grow
flowers may grow but companies don't "grow profits" and governments don't "grow
economies"; horrors such as "grow the business" should only be used when quoting
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someone
grownup, grown up
You become a grownup when you have grown up
Grub Street
G-spot
Guantánamo Bay
guerrilla
Guevara, Che
(1928-67) Argentine-born revolutionary
Guggenheim Museum
cap M if you use the word, although it is not normally necessary. Frank Lloyd Wright
designed the Guggenheim in New York, Frank Gehry the one in Bilbao (and another
proposed for Abu Dhabi). We have sometimes confused the two
Guides
not "Girl Guides"; the organisation is Girlguiding UK
Guildhall
(City of London), not "the Guildhall"
Guinea
formerly French Guinea, a republic in north-west Africa that became independent in 1958;
do not confuse with Equatorial Guinea, French Guiana, Guinea-Bissau, or Guyana
Guinea-Bissau
formerly Portuguese Guinea, independent since 1974, lying on the coast to the north-west
of Guinea
guinea pig
guineas
Younger readers may not be aware that a guinea was worth £1 1s (£1.05) unless they buy
or sell racehorses (the buyer still pays the auction house in guineas, and the auction
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house then gives the vendor the same number of pounds, thus netting the auctioneer their
5% commission)
Guinness World Records
formerly the Guinness Book of Records
Gulf, the
not the Persian or Arabian Gulf
Gulf war
the first Gulf war is now known as the Iran-Iraq war (1980-88); 1991 was the Gulf war:
2003 was the Iraq war
gun battle
not gunbattle or firefight
Guns N' Roses
may be abbreviated to GNR after first mention
Gurkha
GUS
the former Great Universal Stores split into the credit rating agency Experian and Home
Retail Group in 2006
guttural
not gutteral
Guyana
formerly British Guiana, a nation in South America that gained its independence in 1966;
not to be confused with French Guiana or the three African states of Equatorial Guinea,
Guinea, and Guinea-Bissau; its inhabitants are Guyanese (noun and adjective), not
Guyanan
gymnasium
plural gymnasiums
Gypsies
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are recognised as an ethnic group under the Race Relations Act, as are Irish Travellers,
hence capped up
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H
Häagen-Dazs
American ice-cream; despite appearances, the name was made up to give a European
cachet to a product emanating from the Bronx in New York City
Haaretz
Israeli newspaper; no longer has an apostrophe
Haarlem
the Netherlands; Harlem New York City
habeas corpus
Haberdashers' Aske's school
Habsburg
not Hapsburg
haemorrhaging
is best avoided, even if you manage to spell it correctly, as it has become a cliche – in
expressions such as "haemorrhaging cash" – and completely wrong as an adjective
meaning big, eg "in the face of haemorrhaging financial losses"
haemorrhoids
Hague, The
always cap up the The
ha ha
laughter; ha-ha concealed ditch in a garden or park; Minnehaha Hiawatha's wife in the
Longfellow poem The Song of Hiawatha
hairbrush, haircut, hairdresser, hairdryer, hairstyle
all one word
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Haiti
is not an island: Haiti and the Dominican Republic make up the Caribbean island of
Hispaniola
hajj
pilgrimage to Mecca; haji Muslim who has made such a pilgrimage
haka
as performed by the New Zealand All Blacks rugby team, it is a welcome or challenge,
rather than a Maori war dance (although routinely described as such)
Hale-Bopp comet
its appearance in 1997 prompted mass suicide in the Heaven's Gate cult
half
No hyphen when used adverbially: you look half dead; half wine, half water; his trousers
were at half mast; the scores were level at half time.
Hyphen when used adjectivally: a half-eaten sandwich; a half-cut subeditor; half-time
oranges.
The boy is six and a half but a six-and-a-half-year-old boy
half a dozen, half past six
half-life
(radioactivity)
half-term
known as mid-term in Scotland
halfway, halfwit
hallelujah
Hallé orchestra
founded in Manchester by Karl Hallé in 1857
Halley's comet
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Halloween
no apostrophe
halo
plural haloes
Hambros
former British bank, now SG Hambros Bank, the private banking division of Société
Générale
Hamed, Prince Naseem
former boxer; Hamed at second mention
Hamilton Academical
not Academicals; nickname the Accies
Hamleys
toyshop
handbill, handbook, handbuilt, handheld, handmade, handout
no hyphens
handicapped
should not be used to refer to people with disabilities or learning difficulties
hangar
aircraft; hanger clothes
hanged, hung
the woman was found hanged; the sheet was hung out to dry
hanging participles
An unfortunate example from a leading article in the paper: "Due out in January as a white
paper, Ms Kelly may be unable to overcome Mr Blair's apparent determination to stick with
A-levels ... "
see dangling participles
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hangover, hungover
Hanover
Hanukah
happy-clappy
avoid
hara-kiri
known less vulgarly in Japan as seppuku
harass, harassment
hardcore
one word, whether noun or adjective and whether you are talking about music, rubble, a
hardcore of rebels or hardcore pornography
hardline
adjective, hard line, hardliner nouns
harebrained
not hairbrained
hare lip
never use: say cleft lip or cleft palate
Haringey
north London borough, one ward of which is Harringay
Hariri, Rafik
former prime minister of Lebanon, assassinated in Beirut in 2005
Harley-Davidson
HarperCollins
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Harper's Bazaar
US fashion magazine marketed as Harper's Bazaar UK in Britain, where it was known as
Harpers & Queen from 1970 to 2006
Harpers Bizarre
60s US harmony group and exponents of "cotton candy rock", named after the magazine
Harris tweed
Harrods
Hassidic
hat-trick
haven
a haven is by definition a place of safety, so you really do not need to call it a "safe haven"
haver
widely used to mean hesitate, but in some places (notably Scotland) means to talk
nonsense
Haverfordwest
in south-west Wales, not "Haverford West" as we managed to say
Havisham, Miss
(not Haversham) in Dickens' Great Expectations
Hawaiian
Hawk-Eye
(not Hawkeye) tracks the ball in cricket and tennis
Hay festival
the former Guardian Hay festival, which takes place at Hay-on-Wye, is now sponsored by
the Daily Telegraph
hay fever
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hazard or risk?
Scientists use hazard to mean a potential for harm and risk to mean the actual probability
of harm occurring; though headline writers may feel more at home with risk than hazard,
the distinction is worth bearing in mind
HBOS
(not HBoS) created in 2001 by the merger of Halifax and Bank of Scotland
HDTV, HD DVD
head-butt
but butt should normally suffice
headdress, headhunter, headroom
but head-on
headlines
What makes a great,or at least memorable, headline? They can be historic ("Man walks on
Moon"), campaigning ("He lied and lied and lied"), classical ("Between Cilla and
Charybdis"), subtle ("Flo quiets the Dons"), funny ("Super Caley go ballistic – Celtic are
atrocious"), notorious ("Gotcha!"), scurrilous ("Zip me up before you go-go"), or downright
absurd ("Freddie Starr ate my hamster"). There is no magic formula but here are a few
guidelines.
Use active verbs where possible, particularly in news headlines: "Editor updates style
guidelines" is much better than "Style guidelines updated".
Avoid tabloid cliches such as bid, brand, dub and slam, and their broadsheet counterparts
such as insist, signal and target. Imagining that you are describing an event, in words, to
real people, is a good antidote to journalese: no one in a pub says "Did you see that
Brown slammed Blair in a dramatic power bid?"
Just as we would in copy, we need to take care with words such as debacle, farce and
fiasco, especially when combined, which we contrived to do in the headline "Hips fiasco
descends into farce"– the fact that "Hips farce descends into fiasco" would work just as
well tells you something is probably wrong here.
Strive to be fresh: tired plays on the phrase "Mind the gap", heard only occasionally these
days by passengers on the London underground, have become tedious, as well as either
baffling or infuriating to readers who do not happen to live in the capital.
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Take care over ambiguity:" Landmine claims dog UK arms firm", which appeared in the
paper, contains so many successive nouns, some of which may or may not be verbs, that
you have to read it several times to work out what it means.
Exclamation marks – look, I've written something funny! – should never be used. Question
marks are also to be avoided, as are quotation marks, unless essential to signify a quote
or for legal reasons. And we should resist the temptation to save space by replacing "and"
with a comma: "Blair and Brown agree euro deal" not "Blair, Brown agree euro deal".
Puns are fine – "Where there's muck there's bras", about a farmer's wife who started a
lingerie business from a barn, was voted headline of the year by our staff – but do not
overuse, or resort to tired puns such as "flushed with success"(this story has got a plumber
in it).It is possible to try just a little too hard ("To baldly grow where no mane's grown
before"). In the 1970s and 80s the Guardian suffered from a reputation for excruciating
puns; today, we want to be known for clever, original and witty headlines.
Unexpected twists, or subtle plays on words and phrases, show the subeditor's craft at its
best: a power failure in a theatre became, in the Guardian, "Bad lights stop play". A light
touch can work beautifully: "Drop dead, gorgeous", on a story about office jealousy, added
one comma to a well-known film title to create the perfect headline. When Tate Modern
exhibited a giant sun, to create its own indoor climate, the beautiful headline written by the
Guardian's Steve Chamberlain – "But is it weather?" (a rare example of a question mark
being required) – deserved to be framed and exhibited in a gallery in its own right.
Be careful when making references to popular culture: "Mrs Culpepper's lonely hearts club
banned" works, because most people are familiar with the Beatles' Sgt Pepper album, but
allusions to your favourite obscure prog-rock LP are likely to pass over most readers'
heads. Long after most people had forgotten the 1960s movie Charlie Bubbles, tabloid
sports subeditors continued to mystify their readers by using the headline "Charlie
bubbles" whenever anyone called Charlie scored a goal. "Book lack in Ongar", about a
shortage of resources in Essex libraries, remains one of the all-time great headlines, but it
only works if you get the reference to John Osborne's 1956 play Look Back in Anger (or at
least it did until Oasis helpfully recorded a song called Don't Look Back in Anger).
It's time for some formulaic headlines to be given a decent burial, or at least a long rest.
"The kids are alright"(based on a song by the Who, and subsequently a film) crops up, with
minor variations, on a weekly and sometimes daily basis in British newspapers: "The kids
are alright online", "The kids are all right (and left)","The kids are all right, left and centre",
and so on.
Even more ubiquitous are "Size isn't everything" and its close relative "Size doesn't
matter", used to refer to a car (in two different newspapers), school uniforms, the actor
Simon Callow's height, a hotel in Turkey, new houses, national economies, motorbikes, a
footballer, the gallery following a golf tournament, and – once – penis size.
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The ever-popular "Brighton rocks" and its variations are an allusion, still common, to the
Graham Greene novel and subsequent film, both more than 50 years old. How many
people still understand the reference? "So lucky, lucky, lucky", a recent headline we used
above a photograph of Kylie Minogue, quoted lyrics from a hit she had in nearly 20 years
ago. How many of our readers would be aware of this? You have to use your judgment.
If you are quoting, be sure to get it right. "Talkin' about their generation", from a classic
1960s song by the Who, fails as a headline because it literally lacks rhythm (it should be
"Talkin' 'bout"). We claimed that Millwall fans sing "No one likes us and we don't care"; they
don't sing that, and the mistake made it look as if we don't care.
As always, the most important thing is to think of the readers and remember that we are
writing headlines for their benefit, not for our own amusement or to show how clever we
are.
headquarters
can be used as a singular ("a large headquarters") or plural ("our headquarters are in
London"); HQ, however, takes the singular
headteacher
one word, not headmaster, headmistress; but National Association of Head Teachers
Health and Safety Executive
HSE on second mention
healthcare
hear, hear
exclamation of approval that we have misspelt as "here, here" on more than one occasion
heartbroken, heartfelt, heartsearching, heartwarming
but heart-rending, heart-throb
Heart of Midlothian
Edinburgh football club commonly known as Hearts; said to be named after a dancehall
that in turn took its name from Sir Walter Scott's 1818 novel The Heart of Midlothian
Heathrow airport
or simply Heathrow; not "London's Heathrow"
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heatwave
heaven
hectares
should be converted to acres in brackets at first mention by multiplying by 2.47, so 10
hectares is 24.7 acres; to convert acres to hectares, multiply by 0.4, so 10 acres is 4
hectares (we get this the wrong way round embarrassingly often)
height
in metres with imperial conversion, eg 1.68 metres (5ft 7in)
heir apparent
someone certain to inherit from a deceased unless he or she dies first or is taken out of
the will; don't use to mean likely successor
hell, hades
hello
not hallo (and certainly not "hullo", unless quoting the Rev ARP Blair)
Hells Angels
no apostrophe
help
help to decide or help decide, not "help and decide"
helpline
hemisphere
northern hemisphere, southern hemisphere
herculean
here
generally avoid if what you mean is in Britain (your readers might not be)
Hergé
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pen name of Georges Remi (1907-83), Belgian creator of Tintin
Heritage Lottery Fund
Hermès
scarves and shawls; Hermes Group stocks and shares
hero, heroine
heterogeneous
composed of unrelated elements, the opposite of homogeneous; heterogenous(biology)
originating outside the body; the latter is often misused for the former
Hewlett-Packard
or HP
Hezbollah
means "party of God"
Hibernian
Edinburgh football club commonly known as Hibs
hiccup
not hiccough
Hi-de-Hi!
1980s sitcom set in a holiday camp
hi-fi
short for high fidelity; how we listened to music in the days before iPods
highchair
high commissioner
sent from one Commonwealth country to another (rather than an ambassador)
high court
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highfalutin
high flyer
noun; high-flying adjective
highland fling
Highlands, the
(Scotland)
Higgs boson
high street
lc in retail spending stories: "the recession is making an impact in the high street"; capped
only in proper name: "I went shopping in Godalming High Street"
high-water mark
hijab
covering for the head and face worn by some Muslim women
hijack
of movable objects only, not of schools, embassies, etc
hike
a walk, not an increase in interest rates; "Motorists face new petrol hike" (not one of our
better headlines) suggested a long walk to a garage
Hindi
language; Hindu religion
Hips
home information packs, scrapped by the new government in 2010
hip-hop
hippopotamus
plural hippopotamuses not hippopotami
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hippy
plural hippies
Hirst, Damien
His Master's Voice
TM (picture of Nipper the dog with gramophone)
historian, historic
use a not an, unless in a direct quote
HIT Entertainment
hitchhiker, hitchhiking
no hyphens
hi-tech
HIV
a virus, not a disease, but do not call HIV "the Aids virus" or an HIV test an "Aids test"; an
HIV-positive man (hyphen) is HIV positive (no hyphen)
HM
or Her Majesty for the Queen, not HRH
HMS
Her Majesty's Ship: does not need the definite article, so it is "HMS Pinafore" rather than
"the HMS Pinafore"
hoard or horde?
a hoard of treasure; a horde (or hordes) of tourists
hobnob
as in "she likes to hobnob with the rich and powerful"; Hobnobs biscuits
Hobson's choice
a "choice" between taking what is offered and nothing at all
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Ho Chi Minh City
formerly Saigon
hockey mom
We "translated" this to describe Sarah Palin as a "hockey mum", which sounds daft
hoi polloi
common people, the masses; "the hoi polloi" is acceptable, even for speakers of ancient
Greek
holidaymaker
Holland
should not be used to mean the Netherlands (of which it is a region), with the exception of
the Dutch football team, who are conventionally known as Holland
Holocaust
Do not trivialise by comparing piles of cattle during a foot-and-mouth outbreak to the
Holocaust, or through phrases such as "Belsen-skinny" which, incredibly, found its way
one into of our stories about Kate Winslet
holy communion, holy grail
but Holy Land
Holyrood
home of Scotland's parliament, in Edinburgh
Holyroodhouse
the Queen's official residence in Scotland
homebuyers, homeowners
home counties
home in on
not hone in on, which suggests you need to hone your writing skills
homeland
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but home town
homemade
Home Office
but home secretary (although the official title is "Secretary of State for the Home
Department")
homeopathy
homepage
homogeneous
uniform, of the same kind; homogenous (biology) having a common descent; the latter is
often misused for the former
homosexual rape
is rape (or male rape if necessary)
honeybee
Hong Kong names
like Taiwanese and Korean names, Hong Kong names are written in two parts with a
hyphen, eg Tung Chee-hwa (Tung after first mention)
hon members
of parliament
honorarium
plural honorariums
honorary knights
are not given titles, so it is still plain Geldof rather than Sir Bob
honorifics
Use just surname after first mention, except in leader columns.
So: David Cameron at first mention, thereafter Cameron; Harriet Harman at first mention,
subsequently Harman; Sir Richard Branson at first mention, thereafter Branson; Lady
Warsi at first mention, subsequently Warsi; Prof John Wells at first mention, thereafter
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Wells; Dr Bill Bailey (and all other medical and scientific doctors and doctors of divinity) at
first mention, subsequently Bailey; the Rev George Herbert at first mention, thereafter
Herbert, etc.
As always, use common sense: in a story where two people have the same name (eg a
court case about a husband and wife or brothers), it may be necessary to use Mr and Mrs
or Ms, or forenames. In news stories particularly we should use an honorific if it sounds
jarring or insensitive not to do so – for example, a woman whose son has been killed on
active duty in Iraq should be "Mrs Smith" and not "Smith". We need to use our judgment
and be guided by the tone of the piece.
Follow traditional Guardian style in leading articles (but not other comment pieces and
columns on leader pages): use honorifics after first mention, unless writing about an artist,
author, journalist, musician, criminal or dead person; use Ms for women on second
mention unless they have expressed a preference for Miss or Mrs.
So: at first mention David Cameron, Harriet Harman, Sir Richard Branson, Lady Warsi,
Prof John Wells, Dr Bill Bailey, the Rev George Herbert; thereafter Mr Cameron, Ms
Harman, Sir Richard, Lady Warsi, Prof Wells, Dr Bailey, Mr Herbert, etc.
Under-18s should normally be referred to by their first names
"honour" killings
always in quotes; as a reader says: "There is no honour involved in these murders and
calling them honour killings belittles the victims and plays down the crime"
hoodie
a hooded top, as well as someone who wears one
Hoover
TM; say vacuum cleaner unless you are sure it is a Hoover (uc); but lc for
figurativehoovering up (eg "the Guardian website hoovered up all the awards")
hopefully
Like many other adverbs, such as frankly, happily, honestly and sadly, hopefully can be
used as a "sentence adverb" indicating the writer's view of events – "hopefully, we will
reach the summit" – or as a "manner adverb" modifying a verb – "we set off hopefully for
the summit". Why some people are upset by "hopefully we will win" and not "sadly we lost"
is a mystery
horrendous
sounds like a rather ugly combination of horrific and tremendous, but is in fact from the
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Latin for fearful; horrific is generally preferable
horticulturist
not horticulturalist
hospitalised
do not use; say someone was taken (never "rushed") to hospital
hospitals
lc for the generic part, eg Derby district general hospital, Great Ormond Street children's
hospital, Royal London hospital
hotdog, hotpot
hotels
a hotel not "an"; do not cap up "hotel": the Dorchester, the Ritz, the Grand hotel, Brighton,
etc (but don't be silly and lowercase Hotel California)
hotline, hotspot
hot-water bottle
houseboat, housebreaker, housebuyer, householder, housekeeper
housebuilding
househusband, housewife
should be used with care; avoid sexist stereotyping such as lower food prices being "good
news for housewives" (it's good news for shoppers)
House Un-American Activities Committee (Huac)
anti-communist investigating body of the House of Representatives, often associated with
"McCarthyism", although Joseph McCarthy was in fact head of the Senate permanent
subcommittee on investigations
hove
past tense and past participle of heave used in a nautical context, literally or
metaphorically (they hove into view, hove up the anchor and hove alongside); so do not
write, for example, "Woods and Mickelson had only to hove into view" (should be heave)
or "Sweeney Todd now hoves into view" (should be heaves).
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In other contexts, use heaved: she heaved a sigh of relief as he heaved the weapon away
hovercraft
Howards End
by EM Forster: no apostrophe; Howards' Way (vintage BBC TV series) had one
Hubble space telescope
Hudson Bay
but Hudson's Bay Company
Human Genome Project
humanity, humankind
not man, mankind
See gender issues
hummus
you eat it; humus you put it on the garden
humour, humorist, humorous
hundred years war
hunky dory
Huntington's disease
formerly known as Huntington's chorea
huntsman
a paid servant of the hunt, rather than a hunter or hunt follower
hurricane
lc, eg hurricane Katrina
Hutchison Telecommunications International
(not Hutchinson) part of Hutchison Whampoa; Hutchison Essar in India, known as Hutch
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hydroelectric
hyperbole
what used to be known in newspapers as "flamming up" a story – which, on the whole, we
aim to avoid
See sexing up
hyperthermia
hot; hypothermia cold
hyphens
Our style is to use one word wherever possible. Hyphens tend to clutter up text
(particularly when the computer breaks already hyphenated words at the end of lines).
This is a widespread trend in the language: "The transition from space to hyphen to close
juxtaposition reflects the progressive institutionalisation of the compound," as Rodney
Huddleston puts it, in his inimitable pithy style, in his Introduction to the Grammar of
English.
Inventions, ideas and new concepts often begin life as two words, then become
hyphenated, before finally becoming accepted as one word. Why wait? "Wire-less" and
"down-stairs" were once hyphenated, and some old-fashioned souls still hyphenate e-mail.
Words such as chatroom, frontbench, gameplan, housebuyer and standup are all one
word in our publications, as are thinktank (not a tank that thinks), longlist (not necessarily a
long list) and shortlist (which need not be short).
There is no need to use hyphens with most compound adjectives, where the meaning is
clear and unambiguous without: civil rights movement, financial services sector, work
inspection powers, etc. Hyphens should, however, be used to form short compound
adjectives, eg two-tonne vessel, three-year deal, 19th-century artist. Also use hyphens
where not using one would be ambiguous, eg to distinguish "black-cab drivers come under
attack" from "black cab-drivers come under attack". A missing hyphen in a review of
Chekhov's Three Sisters led us to refer to "the servant abusing Natasha", rather than "the
servant-abusing Natasha".
Do not use hyphens after adverbs ending in -ly, eg a hotly disputed penalty, a constantly
evolving newspaper, genetically modified food, etc, but hyphens are needed with short and
common adverbs, eg ever-forgiving family, much-loved character, well-established
principle of style (note, however, that in the construction "the principles of style are well
established" there is no need to hyphenate).
When an adverb can also be an adjective (eg hard), the hyphen is required to avoid
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ambiguity – it's not a hard, pressed person, but a hard-pressed one; an ill-prepared report,
rather than an ill, prepared one.
Use a hyphen in verbs where necessary to stop this kind of thing happening:
Motorists
told: don't
panic buy
petrol
(While not panicking may well have been advisable, they had actually been told not to
panic-buy.)
Prefixes such as macro, mega, micro, mini, multi, over, super and under rarely need
hyphens: examples are listed separately. Follow Collins when a word or phrase is not
listed
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I
Iannucci, Armando
ice age
ice-cream
iconic
in danger of losing all meaning after an average three appearances a day in the Guardian
and Observer, employed to describe anything vaguely memorable or well-known – from
hairdressers, storm drains in Los Angeles and the Ferrero Rocher TV ads to Weetabix, the
red kite and the cut above the eye David Beckham sustained after being hit by a flying
boot kicked by Sir Alex Ferguson. Our advice, even if our own writers rarely follow it, is to
show a little more thought, and restraint, in using this term
icons
A selection of the things described in the Guardian as "iconic" in a heady fortnight in 2010:
Archaeopteryx
bluefin tuna
Castro's cigar
David Beckham wearing an anti-Glazer scarf
Grace Kelly in casual wear
Imperial War Museum North
Liberty prints
limestone stacks in Thailand
Nigel Slater
Mad Men
Variety
the John Hughes films Breakfast Club, Ferris Bueller's Day Off and Weird Science
postboxes
prints of the Che Guevara image
Stephen Fairey's Obama Hope design
the parliamentary constituency of Hove
Brandenburg Gate
Bach's St Matthew Passion
a community-owned wind turbine
Kraft cheese slices
salmon farming
the blue and white stripes of Cornishware pottery
Penarth Pavilion, Cardiff
the Norwegian church and Pierhead Building in Cardiff Bay
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a multimillion-pound arena in Leeds
a "rock-built engine house at Bottalack near St Just"
the Royal Albert Hall
wind turbines ("iconic renewable energy technology")
Wembley Arena
the video for Kylie Minogue's Can't Get You Out of My Head
ID cards
now "consigned to history", at least in the UK
ie
no full points or commas, ie like this
if not
can be ambiguous: does "it is the most beautiful castle in France, if not the whole of
Europe" mean "and maybe in the whole of Europe" or "but not in the whole of Europe"?
IJ
If a Dutch word starts with IJ then both letters are always capped (there is a waterway
called the IJ so a lot of places have IJ in their name, eg IJsselmeer, IJmuiden, etc)
illegitimate
should not be used to refer to children born outside marriage (unless in a historical
context, eg "the illegitimate son of Charles the Good")
iMac, iPad, iPhone, iPod, iTunes
The trend for sticking an "i" in front of new products to make them seem whizzy began in
1997, when Ken Seagall, a creative director at Apple, came up with the iMac name when
the computer was in development. "The i meant internet," Segall says. "But it also meant
individual, imaginative and all the other things it came to stand for." Apple's founder, Steve
Jobs, initially pooh-poohed the name
Imax
cinemas, so named in 1968
immaculate conception
has nothing to do with the birth of Jesus: it is the doctrine that Mary herself was conceived
by her mother (St Anne) without the stain of original sin. The virgin birth is the doctrine of
Christ's birth without a human father. This is one of our most frequent errors
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immigrate
to arrive in a country; emigrate to leave one
Immigration and Nationality Directorate
may be called "the immigration service"
immune to
not immune from
impact
a noun, not a verb: say "affected" rather than the awful jargon phrase "impacted on". Only
a tooth can be impacted
Imperial College London
(no commas) is no longer part of the University of London
impinge, impinging
impostor
not imposter
impracticable
impossible, it cannot be done
impractical
possible in theory but not workable at the moment
impressionism, impressionist
painting
in
can lead to ambiguous headline constructions such as "Marconi chief in board clearout" –
is the chief clearing out the board or being cleared out with them?
in or on?
in the team not the US version "on the team"
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in Oxford Street etc not "on Oxford Street"
inadmissible
not -able
inchoate
means just beginning or undeveloped, not chaotic or disorderly
incidence
amount, eg a high incidence of incidents
incident
has political connotations, so attack or clash is often preferable; within a couple of years of
the massacre in Tiananmen Square the Chinese government was referring to it as an
"incident" or even "alleged incident"
income support, income tax
lowercase
Independent Police Complaints Commission
replaced the Police Complaints Authority
index
plural indexes, except for scientific and economic indices
Indian ink
in the UK; India ink in the US
india rubber
Indian placenames
the former Bombay is now known as Mumbai, Madras is now Chennai, Calcutta is now
Kolkata and Bangalore is now Bengaluru
indie
music, films, etc
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Indy
abbreviation for the Indy 500 car race and the Independent, a newspaper
indispensable
not indispensible
Industrial Revolution
industrial tribunals
have not existed since 1998, when they became employment tribunals; they still appear in
the pages of the paper with embarrassing frequency despite regular corrections from the
readers' editor
infer or imply?
to infer is to deduce something from evidence; to imply is to hint at something (and wait for
someone to infer it)
infinite
means without limit, not just "very big"
infinitives
See split infinitives
inflammable
means the same as flammable, which we prefer; the negative is non-flammable
inflammatory
speeches, etc
information commissioner
but Information Commissioner's Office
initials
no spaces or points, whether businesses or individuals, eg WH Smith, AJ Strauss
injunction
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the verb is enjoin, not "injunct"
Inland Revenue
see Revenue & Customs
inner city
noun two words, adjective hyphenated: inner-city blues made Marvin Gaye wanna holler
innocent civilians
the adjective is superfluous
innocuous
innuendo
plural innuendoes
inoculate
not innoculate
inpatient
but in-tray
inquiry
not enquiry
inshallah
means "God willing" in Arabic
insidious
subtly or gradually harmful ("an insidious disease"); easily confused with invidious, likely
to arouse resentment ("she put herself in an invidious position")
insignia
are plural
insisted
overused, especially in political reporting, perhaps to imply that you don't believe the
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speaker; "said" should normally suffice
install, instalment
instil, instilled, instilling
Institute for Fiscal Studies
Institute for Government
not "Institute of Government"
Institute for Public Policy Research
insure
against risk; assure life; ensure make certain
insurgents, insurgency
see terrorism/terrorists
Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change
International Atomic Energy Agency
not Authority; abbreviate to IAEA after first mention
international date line
International Institute for Strategic Studies
International Union for Conservation of Nature
IUCN after first mention; formerly the World Conservation Union
interned
imprisoned; interred buried (yes, we have got them confused)
internet
net, web, world wide web
See websites
Interpol
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International Criminal Police Organisation (and a New York band)
interpreter
works with the spoken word; often confused with translator, who works with the written
word
InterRail
intifada
into
or in to? one word if you go into a room or look into something, but two words in such
sentences as I called in to complain, I listened in to their conversation and I went in to see
my friend; on to two words
See on to
introducing people
Never use the following construction to introduce a speaker or a subject: "Foreign
secretary William Hague said ... " Use the definite article and commas to separate the job
from the name, like this: "William Hague, the foreign secretary ... " (there is only one
person with this specific post).
Commas are not used if the description is more general and could apply to more than one
person, like this: "The health minister Paul Burstow said ... " (there are several health
ministers); or like this: "The Liberal Democrat MP Paul Burstow said ... " (after the 2010
election, there were 57).
Another example: "Jonathan Glancey, the Guardian's architecture critic, gave his verdict ...
" is correct; "The architecture critic Jonathan Glancey gave his verdict ... " is fine as well
introductory words
at the start of a sentence such as "However", "Nonetheless", "Instead", should be followed
by a comma
Inuit
not Eskimos; an individual is an Inuk
invalid
means not valid or of no worth; do not use to refer to disabled or ill people
invariable, invariably
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unchanging; often used wrongly to mean hardly ever changing
invitation
noun
invite
verb; so you do not send someone an "invite"
iPad, iPhone
IPCC
may refer to the Independent Police Complaints Commission or the Intergovernmental
Panel on Climate Change
iPod
only when you are sure it is an Apple iPod; the generic term is MP3 player or digital audio
player
Iraqi placenames
Use these spellings for Iraq's biggest cities and towns: Amara, Baiji, Baghdad, Baquba,
Basra, Diwaniya, Dohuk, Falluja, Haditha, Hilla, Irbil, Kerbala, Kirkuk, Kut, Mosul, Najaf,
Nassiriya, Ramadi, Rutba, Samarra, Samawa, Sulaimaniya, Tikrit (note that these
transliterations do away with al- prefixes and the final H)
Ireland, Irish Republic
not Éire or "Southern Ireland"
iridescent
one R
Irish Travellers
initial caps, as they are recognised as a distinct ethnic group under race relations
legislation
iron age, iron curtain
ironmonger, ironworks
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ironic, ironically
Do not use when what you mean is strange, coincidental, paradoxical or amusing (if you
mean them say so, or leave it up to the reader to decide). There are times when ironic is
right but too often it is misused, as in this typical example from the paper: "Santini's
Tottenham won 2-0 at Nottingham Forest, ironic really with the north London club having a
big interest in Forest's Republic of Ireland midfielder Andy Reid ... " (not that sport are the
only, or biggest, offenders).
As Kingsley Amis put it: "The slightest and most banal coincidence or point of
resemblance, or even just- perceptible absence of one, unworthy of a single grunt of
interest, gets called 'ironical'." The idiotic "post-ironic", which Amis would be glad he did
not live to see, is banned
Is
as in dotting the Is and crossing the Ts
Isa
individual savings account, but no need to spell it out
-ise
not -ize at end of word, eg maximise, synthesise (exception: capsize)
Islam
means "submission to the will of God".
Muslims should never be referred to as "Mohammedans", as 19th-century writers did. It
causes serious offence because they worship God, not the prophet Muhammad.
"Allah" is Arabic for "God". Both words refer to the same concept: there is no major
difference between God in the Old Testament and Allah in Islam. Therefore it makes sense
to talk about "God" in an Islamic context and to use "Allah" in quotations or for literary
effect.
The holy book of Islam is the Qur'an (not Koran)
Islamist
an advocate or supporter of Islamic fundamentalism; the likes of Osama bin Laden and his
followers should be described as Islamist terrorists
Islamophobia
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Isles of Scilly
an alternative is Scilly but not Scilly Isles
isotopes
Do not abbreviate, eg carbon-14, uranium-235 (not U235, U-235, etc)
issue
not a synonym for problem ("she has stylebook issues")
italics
Use roman for titles of books, films, etc; the only exceptions are the Review and the
Observer, which by special dispensation are allowed to ignore the generally sound advice
of George Bernard Shaw:
"1 I was reading The Merchant of Venice.
2 I was reading 'The Merchant of Venice'.
3 I was reading The Merchant of Venice.
The man who cannot see that No 1 is the best-looking, as well as the sufficient and
sensible form, should print or write nothing but advertisements for lost dogs or
ironmongers' catalogues: literature is not for him to meddle with."
Use italics for foreign words and phrases (with roman translation in brackets); poetry and
scientific names.
Never use italics in headlines or standfirsts
it's
shortened form of it is or has: it's a big dog, it's been ages since I saw her
its
possessive form of it: the dog is eating its bone
ITV1, ITV2, ITV3, ITV4
Ivory Coast
not "the Ivory Coast" or Côte d'Ivoire; its nationals are Ivorians
Ivy League universities
Brown, Columbia, Cornell, Dartmouth College, Harvard, Princeton, University of
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Pennsylvania, Yale
Izz ad-Din al-Qassam
military wing of Hamas
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J
J
joules; kJ kilojoules
Jack Daniel's
note apostrophe; technically it is a Tennessee whiskey, not a bourbon
jack-in-the-box
but jack of all trades
jack russell
terrier first bred by the Rev John Russell in the early 19th century
Jacuzzi
TM; named after its US inventors, Roy and Candido Jacuzzi; call it a whirlpool
bathunless you're sure it really is a Jacuzzi
jail
not gaol (inexplicably, the Guardian persisted with this style well into the 1980s, long after
everyone else had changed)
Jalalabad
city in Afghanistan; Jalal-Abad is in Kyrgyzstan
Janjaweed
Sudanese militia; it means "man with a gun on a horse"
jargon
"The practice of never calling a spade a spade when you might instead call it a manual
earth-restructuring implement" (Bill Bryson)
JCDecaux
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sells outdoor advertising space, but has no spaces in its name
Jeep
TM
Jehovah's Witness
jejune
naive, unsophisticated (not necessarily anything to do with being young)
jellaba
loose cloak with a hood, worn especially in north Africa and the Middle East
Jerez
jerry-builder
Jerusalem
should not be referred to as the capital of Israel: it is not recognised as such by the
international community. While the Knesset has designated the city as the country's
capital, a UN resolution of 1980 declared this status "null and void". Jerusalem is the seat
of government and Tel Aviv is the country's diplomatic and financial centre
jerusalem artichoke
nothing to do with Jerusalem: this jerusalem comes from the Italian for sunflower
jetski
jewellery
in British English, not jewelry
jib
triangular sail or arm of a crane; "I don't like the cut of his jib" means you don't like the look
or manner of someone
jibe
(not gibe) taunt
jihad
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used by Muslims to describe three different kinds of struggle: an individual's internal
struggle to live out the Muslim faith as well as possible; the struggle to build a good Muslim
society; and the struggle to defend Islam, with force if necessary (holy war)
jobcentres
are run by Jobcentre Plus
jobseeker's allowance
job titles
are all lc: editor of guardian.co.uk, governor of the Bank of England, prime minister, etc
jodhpurs
Joe Public, John Doe
john dory
fish
Johns Hopkins University
not John Hopkins
jokey
not joky
Joneses
as in keeping up with the Joneses; also note the Joneses' house (not the Jones' house)
Jonsson, Ulrika
jubilee
diamond jubilee, etc
judgment
Try to resist the temptation to add the word "call"
7 July 2005
the London suicide bombings may be referred to as 7/7 in headlines; the bombers were
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Hasib Hussain, Mohammad Sidique Khan, Germaine Lindsay and Shehzad Tanweer
jumbo jet
but jump-jet
junior
abbreviate to Jr not Jun or Jnr, eg Sammy Davis Jr
just deserts
not just desserts, unless you are saying you only want pudding
juvenile
the Criminal Justice Act 1991 replaced this term with "youth", and raised the age at which
you cease to be one from 17 to 18
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K
Ka'bah
cube-shaped shrine in the centre of the great mosque in Mecca towards which all Muslims
face in prayer; the shrine is not worshipped but used as the focal point of the worship of
God
Kabbalah
Kaiser Chiefs
band from Leeds (no "the"); Kaizer Chiefs football club from Soweto
Kaiser Wilhelm II
last German emperor and king of Prussia
Kajagoogoo
80s band best known for their silly haircuts and No 1 hit Too Shy. The never-ending story
resumed in 2009 when they reformed for a tour
Kaká
Brazilian footballer
kapok
Kara Suu
(not Korasuv) town in Uzbekistan
Kashmir
adjective Kashmiri; but cashmere fabric
Kasparov, Garry
former world chess champion, born in Azerbaijan in 1963
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Kathmandu
capital of Nepal
Kazakhstan
adjective Kazakh
kebabs
a doner kebab is made using meat from a rotating spit; shish kebabs are made from
skewered cubes of meat
Keir Hardie, James
(1856-1915) first leader of the Labour party
Kellogg's Corn Flakes
but cornflakes in general
Kentish man, Kentish maid
born west of the river Medway; man of Kent, maid of Kent born east of the river Medway
key
a useful headline word, but overused
keyring
key stage 1, 2
etc (education)
keywords
used when searching for a specific item on the web: for example, putting the keywords
"guardian" and "styleguide" into Google will help a user find the Guardian style guide
online
KFC
not Kentucky Fried Chicken
K-For
stands for Kosovo Force, the Nato peacekeepers who entered Kosovo in June 1999 (and
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were still there 10 years later)
Khachaturian, Aram
(1903-78) Armenian composer
Khartoum
khaki
Khrushchev, Nikita
(1894-1971) Soviet leader
Khyber Pakhtunkhwa
one of the four provinces of Pakistan, formerly known as North-West Frontier province
kibbutz
plural kibbutzim
kibosh
kick-off
noun; kick off verb
kickstart
noun or verb
Kilimanjaro
not Mount Kilimanjaro
kilogrammes, kilojoules, kilometres, kilowatts
abbreviate as kg, kJ, km, kW
King Edward
potatoes
King's College, Cambridge
comma
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King's College London
no comma
King's Cross
King's Lynn
Kings Place
home of the Guardian, Observer and guardian.co.uk; a building in King's Cross, north
London (it wasn't our idea to leave out the apostrophe)
Kings Road
a road in Chelsea, west London; try not to call it "the Kings Road"; no apostrophe,
although until 1830 it was a private royal road
Kingston upon Hull
normally just Hull
Kingston upon Thames
Kirchner
Argentina's president is Cristina Fernández de Kirchner on first mention, Fernández
thereafter. Her husband and predecessor, Néstor Kirchner, died in 2010
Kirkcaldy
not Kirkaldy, a town in Fife, not Fyfe
kir royal
kiss'n'tell
kissogram
Kitemark
TM on items approved by the British Standards Institution
Kit Kat
chocolate; there is a KitKatClub in Berlin, named after the fictional Kit Kat Klub in the
musical Cabaret
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kiwi fruit
km/h
kilometres an hour (not kph)
kneejerk
reaction
Knightley, Keira
knockout
noun; knock out verb
knots
measure of nautical miles per hour; do not say knots per hour
knowhow
knowledgable
koala
not koala bear
Koh-i-noor
diamond
koi
not "koi carp"
Kolkata
formerly Calcutta
Korean names
like Hong Kong and Taiwanese names, Korean names are written in two parts with a
hyphen, eg Kim Jong-il, Kim Dae-jung; on second mention they become Kim, etc (except
in leading articles: Mr Kim, etc)
Kosovo, Kosovans
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the adjective is Kosovan, not Kosovar
kowtow
Krajina
not the Krajina
Krakatoa, East of Java
Despite this 1969 film title, note that Krakatoa is, in fact, west of Java. (Unless you go
round the – very – long way)
krona
plural kronor (Sweden); krona plural kronur (Iceland); krone plural kroner(Denmark);
krone plural kroner (Norway)
krugerrands
Ku Klux Klan
kukri
Gurkha knife
kung fu
KwaZulu-Natal
Kwik Fit
Kyrgyzstan
adjective Kyrgyz
Kyrie Eleison
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L
laager
South African encampment; lager beer
La Coruña
Spanish port
Lady Gaga
remains Lady Gaga on second and subsequent mentions
Lady Macbeth of Mtsensk
Shostakovich opera, usually misspelt in the Guardian as Mtensk, with occasional
variations such as Mtsenk
Lady Thatcher
(and other ladies) not Baroness
lag
pipes are lagged; other things lag behind
LaGuardia
New York airport
Lailat al-Miraj
Islamic holy day;
Lailat al-Qadr Islamic holy day, time for study and prayer
laissez-faire
not laisser
Lake District
or the Lakes or Lakeland. Note that, with the exception of Bassenthwaite Lake, bodies of
water in the Lake District do not have "lake" in their names (eg Buttermere, Derwent
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Water, Ullswater, Windermere)
lambast
lamb's lettuce, lamb's wool
lamp-post
lance corporal
Land
state of Federal German Republic: use state, eg Hesse, the German state
landmark
overused as an adjective, randomly strewn through stories, perhaps as an alternative to
flagship
landmine
Land Registry
government department that registers title to land in England and Wales; the Scottish
equivalent is Register of Scotland
Land Rover
Land's End
but the clothing firm is Lands' End
lang, kd
Canadian singer, lc
Laos
officially the Lao People's Democratic Republic; the language is Lao
laptop
Large Hadron Collider
largesse
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larva
(plural larvae) insects; lava volcanic magma; laverbread cooked seaweed
La's, the
defunct Liverpool rock band; keep apostrophe (abbreviation for Lads)
lasagne
laser
word dating from 1960 formed from the phrase "light amplification by stimulated emission
of radiation", and an example of why not all acronyms need to be capped up
lasso
noun (plural lassos) and verb: you lasso a horse with a lasso
Last Night of the Proms
last post
last rites
are given, not "read" (although someone might read you your rights if you were being
arrested)
later
often redundant as context will inform the reader: "They will meet this month" rather than
"They will meet later this month"
Latin
"Away with him! Away with him! He speaks Latin" (Shakespeare, Henry VI Part 2)
Some people object to, say, the use of "decimate" to mean destroy on the grounds that in
ancient Rome it meant to kill every 10th man; some of them are also likely to complain
about so-called split infinitives, a prejudice that goes back to 19th-century Latin teachers
who argued that as you can't split infinitives in Latin (they are one word) you shouldn't
separate "to" from the verb in English. Others might even get upset about our alleged
misuse of grammatical "case" (including cases such as dative and genitive that no longer
exist in English).
As our publications are written in English, rather than Latin, do not worry about any of this
even slightly
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latitude
like this: 21 deg 14 min S
launderette
but Stephen Frears' 1985 film was My Beautiful Laundrette
law lords
officially "lords of appeal in ordinary", they became justices of the supreme court when it
was established in 2009
lawsuit
lay bare
(revealed) past tense laid, not lay: so "almost a decade after the human genome project
lay bare ..." should have read "laid bare"
layby
plural laybys
lay off
does not mean to sack or make redundant, but to send workers home on part pay
because of a temporary lack of demand for their product
lay waste
a hurricane can lay waste an island, or lay an island waste, but it does not lay it to waste or
lay waste to it (the word comes from the same root as devastate)
lbw
leg before wicket
lc
abbreviation for lowercase
Lea or Lee?
the river Lea flows to the Thames; the Lee Navigation canal incorporates part of it; the Lee
Valley park is the site for much of the 2012 Olympic development
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Lead Belly
(1888-1949) US musician, real name Huddie Ledbetter
Learjet
learned
not learnt, unless you are writing old-fashioned poetry (he learned his tables, a message
well learned, etc)
Lebanon
no definite article
le Carré, John
Le Corbusier
Swiss-French architect (1887-1955), real name Charles-Édouard Jeanneret-Gris
led
past tense of the verb "lead"; it is surprising how often such sentences as "he lead them to
the scene of the crime" find their way into the paper
left, the, left wing, leftwinger
nouns; leftwing adjective; hard left, old left
lefty
plural lefties
legal highs
no need for quotation marks
Legal Services Commission
responsible for legal aid in England and Wales; in Scotland it is the Scottish Legal Aid
Board
legal terms
In England and Wales, in camera is now known as in secret and in chambers in private; a
writ is a claim form and a plaintiff a claimant; leave to appeal is permission to appeal.
Since the Children Act 1989, access has been known as contact and custody is known as
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residence; do not use the older terms
legionnaires' disease
named after an outbreak at a conference of American Legionnaires
Leibovitz, Annie
US photographer
lent
past tense of lend; we sometimes misspell it as "leant" as in "a gritty drama, leant added
authenticity by Jean Tournier's monochrome photography ... "
Leonardo da Vinci
Leonardo on second mention; "da Vinci" refers to the Vinci district near Florence – it is not
his surname
lepers
a term now regarded as inappropriate and stigmatising; say people with leprosy or, if they
are being treated, leprosy patients
lese-majesty
less or fewer?
less means smaller in quantity, eg less money; fewer means smaller in number, eg fewer
coins.
Note the difference between "do you have less able children in your class?" (children who
are less able) and "do you have fewer able children in your class?" (not so many able
ones)
letdown, letup
nouns; let down, let up verbs
level crossing
Levi's
jeans; the company is Levi Strauss
Lévi-Strauss, Claude
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structural anthropologist
LGBT
abbreviation for lesbian, gay, bisexual and transgender; spell out in full at first mention
liaise, liaison
Lib Dems
for Liberal Democrats after first mention and in headlines
libretto
plural librettos
licence
noun; license verb; you might enjoy your drinks in a licensed premises or take them home
from an off-licence
Liechtenstein
lie
(tell an untruth), past tense lied.
lie (down), past tense lay: he lay there for an hour.
lay (a table, an egg, put something down), past tense laid
lied
German musical setting for a poem, plural lieder
Liège
but the adjective is Liégeois
lieutenant colonel, lieutenant general
eg Lieutenant Colonel Christopher Mackay at first mention, subsequently Mackay (except
in leading articles where it would be Col Mackay)
lifelong, lifesize
lightbulb
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Lighthearted
lightsaber
as in the official Jedi spelling
light year
a measure of distance, not time; Buzz Lightyear
likable
not likeable
like/as if
never use the former to mean the latter: "it looks as if he's finished" not "it looks like he's
finished"
like/such as
like excludes; such as includes: "Cities like Manchester are wonderful" suggests the writer
has in mind, say, Sheffield or Birmingham; she actually means "cities such as
Manchester".
Do not, however, automatically change "like" to "such as" - the following appeared in the
paper: "He is not a celebrity, such as Jesse Ventura, the former wrestler ... "
likely
takes the infinitive (he is likely to win) or a qualifier (he will very likely win), not "he will
likely win" – if you want to use that form, say "he will probably win"
lilliputian
lilo
something you take to the beach to lie or float on; LiLo Lindsay Lohan
limpid
means clear or transparent, not limp
linchpin
not lynchpin
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lineup, lineout
(as nouns)
link
(noun) takes the reader to a related reference on guardian.co.uk or the web; (verb) to
insert such a reference into an article or blog
LinkedIn
social networking site aimed at business people
lip-synch, lip-synching
liquefy
not liquify
liquorice
not licorice
listed buildings
In England and Wales, Grade I-listed (note cap G, roman numeral I) buildings are of
exceptional interest; Grade II* are particularly important buildings of more than special
interest; Grade II are of special interest, warranting every effort to preserve them.
In Scotland and Northern Ireland these categories are replaced by the more logical Grade
A, Grade B and Grade C
literally
a term used, particularly by sports commentators, to denote an event that is not literally
true, as in "Manchester City literally came back from the dead"
See ironic, ironically
Liu Xiaobo
Chinese winner of the 2010 Nobel peace prize
live blog
noun; liveblog verb
Liverpool John Lennon
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airport
Lloret de Mar
not del Mar
Lloyd's of London
Lloyd's names are lc; Lloyds TSB bank
Lloyd-Webber, Lord
but Andrew Lloyd Webber
loan
noun; the verb is lend
loathe
(rhymes with clothe) detest; loth (rhymes with oath) reluctant
lobby
requires great care: unless you are writing about, say, the parliamentary lobby or US lobby
system, it will at best sound vague and patronising, and at worst pejorative or offensive
("the Jewish lobby"). If you are talking about specific pressure groups, say who they are
local
a pub, not a person: talk about local people rather than "locals"
loch
Scottish; lough Irish
Lockerbie bombing
in December 1988 killed 270 people; the two Libyans eventually put on trial for murder
were Abdelbaset al-Megrahi and Al-Amin Khalifah Fhimah. Megrahi was convicted in 2001
and jailed for 27 years, but was released in 2009; his co-accused was acquitted
lock-in, lockout
nouns; lock in, lock out verbs
logbook, logjam
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log in, log on, log out, log off
verbs
login, logon
nouns ("I've forgotten my login/logon")
London
Surprising as it may be to some London-based journalists, most of our readers do not work
or live in the capital (or, indeed, the UK). So give location, not just name: ie King's Cross,
north London, not just King's Cross; there is a Victoria station in Manchester as well as in
London, so make clear which one you mean
London assembly
elected body of 25 members whose role is to hold the mayor of London to account.
Together, assembly and mayor constitute the Greater London authority (GLA); note there
is no such organisation as the "Greater London assembly"
London boroughs and counties
Parts of the traditional counties of Essex, Middlesex, Kent and Surrey that are close to
London retain the county link in their postal address (eg Bromley, Kent), even when they
are administratively part of a London borough (eg the London borough of Bromley), and
represented in the London assembly.
This leads to inconsistencies, as when we refer to "Chingford, Essex" in one story and
"Chingford, east London" in another.
It is hard to be totally consistent - the preferences even of people who live in such places
may vary (according to how long they have lived there, for example).
In general, use London rather than the traditional counties - Ilford, east London; Bexley,
south-east London, etc - unless a group or organisation specifically includes a county
designation in its title
Londonderry
use Derry and County Derry (first mention, thereafter Co Derry)
London Eye
official name of the millennium wheel
London's
do not say "London's Covent Garden" (or London's anything else); it is Covent Garden,
London, etc
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London School of Economics
abbreviated to LSE after first mention
London Stock Exchange
is also abbreviated to LSE, and there is no real way round this (especially for headlines);
the context should make clear which we are talking about
London Transport Users Committee
Long Island iced tea
longitude
like this: 149 deg 18 min E
longlist, shortlist
longsighted, shortsighted
longtime
adjective, as in longtime companion
look to
is used too often in place of hope to or expect to
looking-glass
lord chancellor
post was abolished in 2003, then reprieved; but the Lord Chancellor's Department was
replaced by the Department for Constitutional Affairs, which in 2007 was absorbed into the
new Ministry of Justice, at which point the lord chancellor also became secretary of state
for justice
lord chief justice
lord lieutenant
no hyphen, plural lords lieutenant
Lords, House of Lords
but the house, not the House; their lordships
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Lord's
cricket ground
lottery, national lottery
but Lotto and National Lottery Commission
lovable
not loveable
Love's Labour's Lost
lowlife
plural lowlifes, not lowlives (for an eloquent explanation, see Steven Pinker's Words and
Rules)
loyalists
(Northern Ireland)
luddite
Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva
president of Brazil 2003-10; normally known simply as Lula
lumpenproletariat
Lundy
not Lundy Island
luvvies
a silly cliche, best avoided
Luxembourgers
live in Luxembourg
LVMH
the luxury goods firm is, in full, Moët Hennessy Louis Vuitton
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Lycra
TM; the briefly fashionable term "lycra louts" led to complaints from the Lycra lawyers
lying in state
no hyphens
Lynyrd Skynyrd
late US rock band (named after a man called Leonard Skinner)
Lyon
not Lyons
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M
Mac or Mc?
Andie MacDowell (actor), Sue MacGregor (broadcaster), Kelvin MacKenzie (ex-editor),
Shirley MacLaine (actor), Murdo MacLeod (photographer).
Sir Cameron Mackintosh (impresario), Elle Macpherson (model).
Sir Paul McCartney (composed song about frogs), Steve McClaren (football manager), Sir
Trevor McDonald (ex-newsreader), Ian McEwan (novelist), Ewan McGregor, Sir Ian
McKellen (actors), Malcolm McLaren (late impresario)
MacDonald, James Ramsay
(1866-1937) first Labour prime minister, known as Ramsay MacDonald
mace, the
parliament; Mace riot control spray
machiavellian
after Niccolò Machiavelli (1469-1527)
machine gun
noun; machine-gun verb; submachine gun
Machu Picchu
Peruvian "lost city of the Incas"
mackem
refers both to a person from Sunderland and their accent
Macmillan, Harold
(1894-1986) Tory prime minister
MacMillan, Kenneth
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(1929-92) choreographer
MacNeice, Louis
(1907-63) Belfast-born poet
Madagascar
geographical; Malagasy Republic political; Malagasy inhabitant or inhabitants of
Madagascar and the name of their language; the adjective for the country isMadagascan
Madama Butterfly
is the correct title of Puccini's 1904 opera; Madame Butterfly and Madam Butterfly are the
French and English versions
Madame Tussauds
no apostrophe, even though there was a Mme (Marie) Tussaud
madeira
wine and cake
Madejski stadium
home of Reading FC
Madison Square Garden
(not Gardens) in New York City
Madras
now known as Chennai
madrasa
normally used to mean Islamic school, although in both Arabic and Urdu the word is used
to refer to any kind of school
mafia
Mafikeng
now spelt thus, though it was Mafeking when it was relieved
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Magdalen College, Oxford
Magdalene College, Cambridge
magistrates court
no apostrophe
maglev
high-speed trains (it is short for magnetic levitation)
Magnum
a .44 Magnum is a cartridge, not a gun (although Dirty Harry used a .44 Magnum revolver)
maharajah
Mahathir Mohamad
prime minister of Malaysia from 1981 to 2003; Mahathir on second mention (except in
leading articles, where he is Mr, not Dr, Mahathir)
mailbag, mailvan
mail train
mainland
should not be used to refer to Great Britain in reports about Northern Ireland
mainmast, mainsail
mai tai
cocktail; muay thai contact sport
major
a major case of overuse; avoid except in military context: big, main and leading are among
the alternatives
major general
in leading articles, abbreviate on second mention to Gen: Major General Ben Summers,
subsequently Gen Summers; otherwise just Summers
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makeover, makeup
(nouns) one word; (verbs) two words: making up is hard to do
makrut lime
not "kaffir lime"; note that it is makrut and not, as Wikipedia has it, makrud. Used in southeast Asian cooking and to flavour drinks
Málaga
Malaysian names
generally the given name comes first, and Muslim Malays tend not to use surnames, so
Mahathir Mohamad (Mahathir the son of Mohamad) becomes Mahathir on second
reference. Chinese Malaysian names, like Singaporean names, are in three parts: eg Ling
Liong Sik (Ling after first mention)
Mall, the
in London
Malloch-Brown, Lord
a former deputy secretary general of the UN, Mark Malloch Brown acquired a peerage and
a hyphen when he became a Labour minister
Mallorca
not Majorca
Malmö
Mamma Mia!
musical show and film featuring Abba songs
mammon
Man Booker prize
at first mention; thereafter the Booker prize or just Booker
mañana
mangetout
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one word
manifesto
plural manifestos
mankind
humankind or humanity are preferable
manmade
synthetic is a non-gender-specific alternative
manoeuvre, manoeuvring
mantis
plural mantids
Maori
singular and plural
Mao Zedong
Mao on second mention
margarita
cocktail
margherita
pizza
Mariinsky theatre
St Petersburg home of the Mariinsky Ballet, known as the Kirov Ballet when touring
outside Russia
marines
Royal Marines, but US marines
Marks & Spencer
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at first mention, then M&S
marquis
not marquess, except where it is the correct formal title, eg Marquess of Blandford
Marrakech
Mars bar
Marseille
not Marseilles
marshal
(military rank) not marshall, a very frequent error; a reader sent in this mnemonic: "Air
Chief Marshal Marshall presided at the court martial of the martial arts instructor"
Marshall plan
US aid to help rebuild Europe after the second world war
marshmallow
not marshmellow, munchmallow, munchmellow
Martí, José
(1853-95) writer and leader of Cuba's war of independence against Spain
martial
arts, law
martini
cocktail made with gin or vodka and vermouth; note that Martini & Rossi makes Martini, a
brand of vermouth – so you might make a martini with Martini
Marxism, Marxist
Mary Celeste
not Marie Celeste
Mas, Artur
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(not Arturo) president of Catalonia
mass
lc; mass is celebrated or said, not read
massacre
the savage killing of large numbers of people, not Macclesfield Town beating Stockport
County 6-0 in the big Cheshire derby
massive
massively overused
MasterCard
masterful
imperious; masterly skilful
master's
as in "I did my master's at UCL"
mat
floor covering; matt non-shiny, as in matt finish; matte used to combine images in films
match-fixing
matchplay
(golf) lc, one word but World Match Play Championship
Mathews, Meg
former model and ex-wife of Noel Gallagher; they have a daughter, Anais
matinee
no accent
matins
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maxidress
may or might?
The subtle distinctions between these (and between other so-called modal verbs) are
gradually disappearing, but they still matter to many of our readers and can be useful.
may implies that the possibility remains open: "The Mies van der Rohe tower may have
changed the face of British architecture for ever" (it has been built); mightsuggests that
the possibility remains open no longer: "The Mies tower might have changed the face of
architecture for ever" (if only they had built it). Similarly, "they may have played tennis, or
they may have gone boating" suggests I don't know what they did; "they might have
played tennis if the weather had been dry" means they didn't, because it wasn't.
may also has the meaning of "having permission", so be careful: does "Megawatt Corp
may bid for TransElectric Inc" mean that it is considering a bid, or that the competition
authorities have allowed it to bid?
mayday
distress signal (from the French "m'aidez!")
May Day
1 May
mayor of London
or anywhere else: lowercase
MB
megabytes (storage capacity)
Mbps
megabits per second (communication speed); take care to get such terms right: we
referred to a "2mbps internet connection" which, at two millibits a second, is about the
speed of smoke signals
McAlpine
note the "Sir" in the building and civil engineering company Sir Robert McAlpine(named
after the baronet who founded it); not to be confused with Alfred McAlpineconstruction
and support services
MCC, the
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founded in 1787 as Marylebone Cricket Club
McDonald's
hamburgers; the possessive is the same word, eg "McDonald's new vegan-friendly image"
McJob
defined by the OED as "an unstimulating, low-paid job with few prospects, esp one created
by the expansion of the service sector"
McLuhan, Marshall
(1911-80) Canadian author who coined the phrase "the medium is the message"
meanwhile
usually means "here's a slight change of subject"
Meat Loaf
sings
meatloaf
doesn't sing.
To quote "the Loaf" himself:
"When I see my name spelt with one word, I want to slap and choke people. If you do that,
you got to be a moron. It's on every poster, every album and every ticket as two words. If
you spell it as one, you're an idiot. Bottom line"
Mecca
holy city in Saudi Arabia; mecca as in "Ashton-under-Lyne is a mecca for tripe-eaters"
medals
military medals uc: British Empire Medal, George Cross, Victoria Cross, etc; non-military
medals like this: Fields medal, etc
Médecins sans Frontières
international medical aid charity (don't describe it as French)
Medellín
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Colombia's second-largest city
media
plural of medium: the media are sex-obsessed, etc, but a convention of spiritualists would
be attended by mediums
Medicaid, Medicare
are both US federal health insurance programmes, but Medicare primarily covers people
over 65 and has no financial requirements for eligibility; Medicaid is targeted at those on
low incomes
medieval
not mediaeval
Medvedev, Dmitry
(not Dmitri) became president of Russia in 2008
meet, met
a person rather than meet with, met with a person; although you might meet with disaster,
say, or be met with lukewarm applause
mega
fine for megabits, megabytes and megawatts, not as an adjective meaning big
memento
plural mementoes
memorandum
plural memorandums, not memoranda
menage
no accent
Menorca
not Minorca
menswear
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mental handicap, mentally handicapped, mentally retarded
do not use: say person with learning difficulties
mental health
Take care using language about mental health issues. In addition to such clearly offensive
and unacceptable expressions as loony, maniac, nutter, psycho and schizo, terms to avoid
- because they stereotype and stigmatise - include victim of, suffering from, and afflicted
by; "a person with" is clear, accurate and preferable to "a person suffering from".
Terms such as schizophrenic and psychotic should be used only in a medical context: for
example never use schizophrenic to mean "in two minds".
Avoid writing "the mentally ill" - say mentally ill people, mental health patients or people
with mental health problems
merchant navy
Meridian
ITV region; Meridien hotels
Messiaen, Olivier
(1908-92) French composer
metaphor
traditionally defined as the application to one thing of a name belonging to another, eg
bowling blitz, economic meltdown, "every language is a temple in which the soul of those
who speak it is enshrined" (Oliver Wendell Holmes)
meteor
a piece of space rock, usually from a comet or asteroid, that enters the Earth's
atmosphere; if it hits the ground before it burns up, it is a meteorite
method acting
techniques associated with the Russian Constantin Stanislavski (1865-1938) and the
American Lee Strasberg (1901-82)
Met Office
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metres
should be written out in full, to avoid confusion with million (an obvious exception would be
athletics, eg she won the 400m)
metric system
We use the metric system for weights and measures; exceptions are the mile and the pint.
As understanding of the two systems is a matter of generations, conversions (in brackets)
to imperial units should be provided wherever this seems useful, though usually one
conversion – the first – will suffice. Imperial units in quoted matter should be retained, and
converted to metric [in square brackets] if it doesn't ruin the flow of the quote.
It is not necessary to convert moderate distances between metres and yards, which are
close enough for rough and ready purposes (though it is preferable to use metres), or
small domestic quantities: two litres of wine, a kilogramme of sugar, a couple of pounds of
apples, a few inches of string. Small units should be converted when precision is required:
44mm (1.7in) of rain fell in two hours. But be sensible: don't convert a metric estimate into
a precise imperial figure (round the conversion up or down). Tons and tonnes are close
enough for most purposes to do without conversion; use tonnes (except in shipping
tonnage).
Body weights and heights should always be converted in brackets: metres to feet and
inches, kilogrammes to stones/pounds. Geographical heights and depths, of people,
buildings, monuments, etc, should be converted, metres to feet. In square measurement,
land is given in sq metres, hectares and sq km, with sq yards, acres or sq miles in
brackets where there is space to provide a conversion. The floor areas of buildings are
conventionally expressed in sq metres (or sq ft). Take great care in conversions of square
and cubic measures: 2 metres is about 6.5 feet, but 2 sq metres is about 21.5 sq feet
Metropolitan police
the Met at second mention; commissioner of the Metropolitan police, Met commissioner is
acceptable; but note Metropolitan Police Authority (MPA).
The Metropolitan police are plural, like other forces, but the Met is singular, so: the
Metropolitan police are investigating, but the Met is investigating, etc
mexican wave
meze
not mezze
Miami Beach
US city
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miaow
noise made by cats
mic
abbreviation for microphone, but you are miked up
microblogging
is what people do on Twitter
mid-60s, mid-90s, etc
mid-Atlantic
but transatlantic
midday
middle ages
middle America, middle England
Middle-earth
(Tolkien) not Middle Earth
Middle East
never Mid, even in headlines
Middlesbrough, Teesside
not Middlesborough, Teeside
midget
considered by some to be offensive, certainly more so than dwarf; best to ask the people
you are writing about how they prefer to describe themselves
Midlands, east Midlands
but West Midlands
Midsummer Day
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24 June
midterm, midweek, midwest
no hyphens
Migration Watch UK
also sometimes styling itself Migrationwatch (randomly using both spellings in the same
document); calls itself "an independent think tank" but is a rightwing anti-immigration
pressure group and should be described as such
MiG-21
Soviet Union-built fighter plane, still in use in some countries
Milad al-Nabi
Islamic festival celebrating the birth of the prophet; many Muslims disapprove of
celebrating this event
mileage
Militant tendency
militate or mitigate?
to militate against something is to influence it (his record militated against his early
release); to mitigate means to lessen an offence (in mitigation, her counsel argued that
she came from a broken home)
millenary
but millennium, plural millennia
millennium development goals
abbreviation MDGs
Millennium Dome
(now historical) at first mention, then just the dome; reopened in 2007 as the O2
millennium wheel
its official name is London Eye
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million
in copy use m for sums of money, units or inanimate objects: £10m, 45m tonnes of coal,
30m doses of vaccine; but million for people or animals: 1 million people, 23 million
rabbits, etc; use m in headlines
millisieverts
measure of radiation dose; abbreviation mSv
mimic, mimicked, mimicking
min
contraction of minute/minutes
minibus, minicab, miniskirt, minivan
MiniDisc
TM
ministers
are all lc: prime minister, etc
Minnelli, Liza
"Liza with a Zee, not Lisa with an Ess", and Minnelli with two Ns; her father was the film
director Vincente Minnelli (1903-86)
minority ethnic
(adjective) rather than ethnic minority
minuscule
not miniscule
mis-hit, mis-sell
but misspell, misspent
mishmash
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mistakable, unmistakable
mistress
best reserved for historical contexts; girlfriend or lover is less judgmental and sexist
misuse, misused
MLA
member of the Northern Ireland assembly (it stands for member of the legislative
assembly)
MLitt
master of letters, not master of literature
Mobo awards
it stands for Music of Black Origin
Moby-Dick
Herman Melville's classic is, believe it or not, hyphenated
Modern
in the sense of Modern British, to distinguish it from modern art
Moët & Chandon
champagne
molotov cocktail
moment magnitude scale
measures earthquakes; superseded the Richter scale in 1979
Mönchengladbach
money laundering
noun; money-laundering adjective
moneyed
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eg moneyed classes; moneys not monies
Mongol
one of the peoples of Mongolia
mongooses
(not mongeese) plural of mongoose
moniker
not monicker
Monk, Thelonious
(1917-82) American jazz pianist and composer, generally but erroneously referred to in the
Guardian and elsewhere as "Thelonius"; a pleasing mnemonic is that he made a
melodious thunk
Montenegro
inhabited by Montenegrins
moon
lc for the Earth's moon
moon walk
what Neil Armstrong did; moonwalk what Michael Jackson did
Moors murders
committed in the 1960s by Ian Brady and Myra Hindley
moot
a moot point, in British English, is debatable, open to discussion; in American English, it is
irrelevant
morbidity
can mean the state of being morbid (taking an unusual interest in death or unpleasant
events); but morbidity, also known as the morbidity rate, also means the relative incidence
of a disease in a specific locality
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more than
generally preferable to over: there were more than 20,000 people at the game, it will cost
more than £100 to get it fixed; but she is over 18
More Than
not MORE TH>N, which is how the insurance arm of Royal & Sun Alliance styles itself
Morissette, Alanis
Mormons
are members of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, which should be used
once (unabbreviated) and thereafter referred to as the Mormon church
morning-after pill
morris dancing
often seen with a capital M, for no apparent reason
Morrisons
for the stores (not Morrison or Morrison's), Morrisons Supermarket plc is the name of the
company (formerly Wm Morrison); just to make it more confusing, Morrison is a support
services company owned by AWG plc (Anglian Water)
morse code
mortgage borrower, lender
the person borrowing the money is the mortgagor, the lender is both the mortgagee and
the mortgage holder; to avoid confusion, call the mortgagor the mortgage borrower and
the mortgagee the mortgage lender
mortise lock
not mortice
mosquito
plural mosquitoes
Mosquito
"youth dispersal device" that emits a piercing noise inaudible to over-25s
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Mossad, the
Israeli secret service; note definite article
MOT
test cars must undergo when they are three years old or more; not MoT, although this was
the abbreviation for the former Ministry of Transport
mother of parliaments
the great 19th-century Liberal politician and Manchester Guardian reader John Bright
described England, the country (not Westminster, the institution), as the mother of
parliaments
mother of three
etc, not mother-of-three; but do not use unless relevant to the story
Mother's Day
or Mothering Sunday
Mötley Crüe, Motörhead
include "metal umlauts"
motorbike, motorcar, motorcycle
motor neurone disease
may be abbreviated to MND after first mention
motorways
junction 4 of the M4, etc
mottoes
moustache
not mustache
movable
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mph
MP, MPs
if spelling out, lowercase: member of parliament
MP3, MP3 player
not mp3
Mr, Ms, Mrs, Miss
In leading articles: use the appropriate honorific after first mention (unless you are writing
about an artist, author, journalist, musician, sportsman or woman, criminal or dead person,
who take surname only); use Ms for women subsequently unless they have expressed a
preference for Miss or Mrs.
Everywhere apart from leading articles: generally use first name and surname on first
mention, and thereafter just surname. Use an honorific, however, if this strikes the wrong
tone, or to identify different members of the same family
See honorifics
MSP
member of the Scottish parliament
Muhammad
Muslims consider Muhammad to be the last of God's prophets, who delivered God's final
message. They recognise Moses and Jesus as prophets also.
The above transliteration is our style for the prophet's name and for most Muhammads
living in Arab countries, though where someone's preferred spelling is known we respect it,
eg Mohamed Al Fayed, Mohamed ElBaradei. The spelling Mohammed (or variants) is
considered archaic by most British Muslims today
Muhammad Ali
mujahideen
collective noun for people fighting a jihad; the singular is mujahid
mukhabarat
secret police in the Arab world (it means "informers")
multicultural, multimedia, multimillion
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but multi-ethnic
mum or Mum?
How is your mum? I don't know, I've not spoken to Mum for two years
Mumbai
formerly Bombay, but no need to say so
Murphy's law
"If there are two or more ways to do something, and one of those ways can result in a
catastrophe, then someone will do it"; also known as sod's law.
Not to be confused with Muphry's law – "the editorial application of the better-known
Murphy's law" – which states: "If you write anything criticising editing or proofreading, there
will be a fault of some kind in what you have written"
museums
initial caps, eg British Museum, Natural History Museum, Victoria and Albert Museum
(V&A on second reference), Metropolitan Museum of Art, etc
Muslim
not Moslem
Muzak
TM; better to call it easy listening, loungecore, or a similar variant
MW
megawatts
mW
milliwatts
myriad
a large, unspecified number; use as an adjective (there are myriad people outside) or a
noun (there is a myriad of people outside), but not "myriads of"
Myspace
No longer MySpace
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myxomatosis
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N
Nabokov, Vladimir
(1899-1977) Russian-born author of Lolita; not Nabakov
nailbomb
naive, naively, naivety
no accent
Nakba
the Palestinian "catastrophe"
names
Prominent figures can just be named in stories, with their function at second mention:
"George Osborne said last night ... " (first mention); "the chancellor added ... " (subsequent
mentions)
Where it is thought necessary to explain who someone is, write "Danny Wilson, the
Sheffield United manager, said" or "the Sheffield United manager, Danny Wilson, said",
etc.
In such cases the commas around the name indicate there is only one person in the
position, so write "the Tory leader, David Cameron, said" (only one person in the job), but
"the former Tory leader Michael Howard said" (there have been many).
Do not leave out the definite article in such constructions as "style guru David Marsh
said ... " It should be "The style guru David Marsh" (if there are other style gurus) or "David
Marsh, the style guru, ... " (if you feel only one person merits such a description)
Nanjing
not Nanking
narrowboat
the popular type of British canal boat, 7ft wide and up to 70ft long – do not call it a barge.
A wider version (typically 10-14ft wide) is a broadbeam narrowboat
Nasa
National Aeronautics and Space Administration, but no need to spell out
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nation
should not be used to mean country or state, but reserved to describe people united by
language, culture and history so as to form a distinct group within a larger territory.
Beware of attributing the actions of a government or a military force to a national
population ("the Israelis have killed 400 children during the intifada"). Official actions
always have opponents within a population; if we don't acknowledge this, we oversimplify
the situation and shortchange the opponents
national anthem
National Archives
the former Public Record Office, now merged with the Historical Manuscripts Commission
National Association of Schoolmasters Union of Women Teachers
(NASUWT) call it "the union" after first mention if you want to avoid using these unlovely
initials; note that an "and" seems to have gone missing somewhere
National Audit Office
NAO or audit office after first mention
national curriculum
National Endowment for Science, Technology and the Arts
Nesta after first mention
National Grid
transmits gas as well as electricity
National Health Service
but NHS or health service is normally sufficient
National Hunt
horseracing over fences and hurdles
National Institute for Health and Clinical Excellence
Nice after first mention
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national insurance
lc; abbreviate national insurance contributions to NICs after first mention
nationalists
(Northern Ireland)
national lottery
National Offender Management Service
formed in 2004 from a merger between the prison and probation services, it moved from
the Home Office to the Ministry of Justice in 2007; Noms after first mention (but note that
in the US, Noms stands for national outcomes measurement system)
national parks
lc, eg Peak District national park, Yellowstone national park
National Savings & Investments
may be abbreviated to NS&I
national service
peacetime conscription in the UK lasted from 1949 until 1960
Native Americans
Geronimo was a Native American (not an American Indian or Red Indian); George Bush is
a native American
Nato
North Atlantic Treaty Organisation, but no need to spell out
Natural England
formerly English Nature
naught
nothing; nought the figure 0
navy
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but Royal Navy
naysayer
a "neighsayer", as we have been known to spell it, would be a horse
Nazi, neo-Nazi
but nazism
'Ndrangheta
Calabrian version of the mafia
Neanderthal man
scientific name and style is Homo neanderthalensis. While it may be tempting to describe
certain attitudes or, say, politicians as neanderthal, we should bear in mind that
archaeologists have known for many years that Neanderthal man was not stupid. British
Archaeology magazine has complained about the media's use of neanderthal as a term of
abuse
nearby
one word, whether adjective or adverb: the pub nearby; the nearby pub
nearsighted
nemesis
an agent of retribution and vengeance, not a synonym for enemy
neocon, neoconservative, neoliberal
neophilia
Even if you have always wanted to appear in Private Eye, resist the temptation to write
such nonsense as "grey is the new black", "billiards is the new snooker", "Barnsley is the
new Tuscany", etc
Nepalese
not Nepali
nerve-racking
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Nestlé
Netanyahu, Binyamin
not Benjamin
Netherlands, the
not Holland, which is only part of the country; use Dutch as the adjective. Exception: the
Dutch football team is generally known as Holland
Never Never Land
or simply Neverland (JM Barrie used both in his Peter Pan works)
nevertheless
new
often redundant, as in "a new report said yesterday"
new age travellers
Newbie
Newcastle-under-Lyme
hyphens
Newcastle upon Tyne
no hyphens
New Deal
capped up, whether you are talking about Franklin D Roosevelt's job creation policies in
the 1930s or Gordon Brown's 1990s version
newfound
New Labour
but old Labour
news agency
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newsagent, newsprint, newsreel
newspaper titles
the Guardian, the Observer, the New York Times, etc, do not write "the Sun newspaper",
etc: people know what you mean
New Testament
Newtownards
Northern Irish town pronounced, and frequently misspelt, as Newtonards
New Wave
initial caps for the film movement known in French as the Nouvelle Vague
new wave
lowercase for music of the late 70s and early 80s (the likes of Talking Heads); also for any
other new wave (eg the Moroccan new wave in cinema)
new year
lc; but New Year's Day, New Year's Eve
New Year honours list
New York City
but New York state
New Zealand
People live in (not "on") the South Island or in the North Island; note definite article
next door
she lives next door (adverb); nextdoor she's my nextdoor neighbour (adjective)
NHS
National Health Service, but not normally necessary to spell out; health service is also OK
Nichpa
National Infection Control and Health Protection Agency
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Nietzsche, Friedrich
(1844-1900) German philosopher; occasionally misspelt, even in the Guardian
Nigerian names
surnames do not exist in the north of Nigeria: a typical name would be Isa Sani Sokoto (Isa
the son of Sani who comes from the town of Sokoto); so best to write in full
nightcap, nightdress, nightfall, nightgown, nightshirt
but night-time
Nile delta, Nile valley, river Nile
nimby, nimbys, nimbyism
it stands for "not in my back yard"
Nineteen Eighty-Four
not 1984 for Orwell's novel
Niño, El
niqab
veil that covers the face apart from the eyes
Nissan
cars
Nissen
hut
No 1
in the charts, the world tennis No 1, etc
No 10
(Downing Street)
no
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plural noes
Nobel prize
Nobel peace prize, Nobel prize for literature, etc
no-brainer
means something along the lines of "this is so obvious, you don't need a brain to know it"
not "only someone with no brain would think this"
no campaign, yes campaign
not No campaign, "no" campaign or any other variant
no doubt that, no question that
are opposites: "There was no doubt that he was lying" means he was lying; "There was no
question that he was lying" means he wasn't; the two are routinely confused
Noel
no accent on Noel as in Christmas (The First Noel, not Nowell); use an accent if that's how
the person spells his or her name: Noël Coward had one, Noel Edmonds doesn't
no-fly zone
no man's land
no hyphens
noncommissioned officer
nonconformist
none
It is a (very persistent) myth that "none" has to take a singular verb: plural is acceptable
and often sounds more natural, eg "none of the current squad are good enough to play in
the Premier League", "none of the issues have been resolved"
nonetheless
no one
not no-one
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Nordic countries
Denmark, Norway, Sweden, Finland and Iceland
north
north London, north Wales, north-west England, the north-west, etc
North America
north-east England
Tyneside (Newcastle), Wearside (Sunderland), Teesside (Middlesbrough); we often
confuse these or get them wrong in some way that makes it look as if the farthest northeast Guardian journalists have ventured is Stoke Newington
northern hemisphere
northern lights
also known as aurora borealis; the southern hemisphere counterpart is aurora australis
north of the border
avoid this expression: we work on national newspapers
north pole
Northumbria
an ancient Anglo-Saxon kingdom, a university and a police authority; the county, however,
is Northumberland
North-West Frontier province
one of the four provinces of Pakistan, now known as Khyber Pakhtunkhwa
North York Moors
national park; but North Yorkshire Moors railway, 18-mile heritage line between
Pickering and Grosmont
nosy
not nosey
notebook, notepaper
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noticeboard
Nottingham Forest, Notts County
the former should never be abbreviated to "Notts Forest"
Notting Hill carnival
now
occasionally useful for emphasis, but is now used far too often
npower
retail arm of RWE npower; nothing to do with nuclear power
numbers
Spell out from one to nine; numerals from 10 to 999,999; thereafter use m, bn or tn for
sums of money, quantities or inanimate objects in copy, eg 5m tonnes of coal, 30bn doses
of vaccine, £50tn; but million or billion for people or animals, eg 1 million people, 25 million
rabbits, the world population is 7 billion, etc; in headlines always use m, bn or tn
Numbskull
numeracy
Numbers have always contained power, and many a journalist will tremble at the very sight
of them. But most often the only maths we need to make sense of them is simple
arithmetic. Far more important are our critical faculties, all too often switched off at the first
sniff of a figure.
It's easy to be hoodwinked by big numbers in particular. But are they really so big?
Compared with what? And what is being assumed? A government announcement of an
extra £Xm a year will look far less impressive if divided by 60 million (the British
population) and/or 52 (weeks in the year). That's quite apart from the fact that it was
probably trumpeted last week already, as part of another, bigger number.
Never invent a big figure when a small one will do. Totting jail sentences together ("the six
men were jailed for a total of 87 years") is meaningless as well as irritating. Similarly,
saying that something has an area the size of 150 football pitches, or is "eight times the
size of Wales", is cliched and may not be helpful.
Here is an easy three-point guide to sidestepping common "mythematics" traps:
1 Be careful in conversions, don't muddle metric and imperial, or linear, square and cubic
measures. Square miles and miles square are constantly confused: an area 10 miles
square is 10 miles by 10 miles, which equals 100 square miles.
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2 Be extremely wary of (or don't bother) converting changes in temperature; you run the
risk of confusing absolute and relative temperatures, eg while a temperature of 2C is about
the same as 36F, a temperature change of 2C corresponds to a change of about 4F.
3 When calculating percentages, beware the "rose by/fell by X%" construction: an increase
from 3% to 5% is a 2 percentage point increase or a 2-point increase, not a 2% increase
Nuremberg
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O
OAPs, old age pensioners
Do not use: they are pensioners or old people; do not use old or elderly to describe
someone under 75 (the editors reserve the right to increase this upper limit, as
appropriate)
obbligato
not obligato
Obiang
Teodoro Obiang Nguema Mbasogo, president of Equatorial Guinea since 1979; Obiang on
second mention
obliged
not "obligated"
O'Brian, Patrick
author of Master and Commander
obtuse
means "mentally slow or emotionally insensitive" (Collins); often confused with abstruse
(hard to understand) or obscure
Occam's razor
philosophical principle, attributed to the 14th-century English friar William of Ockham, that
broadly means prefer the simplest explanation, adopting the one that makes the fewest
assumptions and "shaving away" the rest
occupied territories
Gaza and the West Bank
occurred
two Rs
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Oceania
a preferable term to Australasia, it is sometimes divided into Near Oceania and Remote
Oceania, and comprises, according to the UN:
Australia/New Zealand
Melanesia (Fiji, New Caledonia, Papua New Guinea, Solomon Islands, Vanuatu)
Micronesia (Guam, Kiribati, Marshall Islands, Federated States of Micronesia, Nauru,
Northern Mariana Islands, Palau)
Polynesia (American Samoa, Cook Islands, French Polynesia, Niue, Pitcairn, Samoa,
Tokelau, Tonga, Tuvalu, Wallis and Futuna Islands)
oceans, seas
capped up, eg Atlantic Ocean, Red Sea
octopus, platypus
plural octopuses, platypuses, not the cod Latin octopi, platypi
OECD
Organisation for Economic Co-operation and Development at first mention
oedipal complex
the female equivalent is electra complex
Ofcom
Office of Communications – the broadcasting and telecommunications regulator
Offa
eighth-century king of Mercia, best known for Offa's Dyke, a giant earthwork that
separated the kingdom from Powys
Offa
Office for Fair Access (to higher education)
offbeat, offhand, offside
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Office for National Statistics
ONS on second mention
Office of Fair Trading
OFT on second mention
Office of the Deputy Prime Minister
replaced in May 2006 by the Department for Communities and Local Government, which
dropped the "Department for" a year later
See departments of state
off-licence
Ofgem
regulates the gas and electricity markets in Britain
Ofsted
Office for Standards in Education, but normally no need to spell out
Ofwat
regulates the water and sewerage industry in England and Wales
Oh
not O except in phrases of invocation or hymn titles, eg O God, Our Help in Ages Past
oilfield, oilwell
oil painting
oil production platform
for production of oil
oil rig
for exploration and drilling
oilseed rape
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OK
is OK; okay is not
Old Etonian
old Labour
but New Labour
old master
lowercase for paintings as well as ageing schoolteachers
Old Testament
olé!
needs the accent to stop it reading like "ole"
O-levels
GCE O-levels and CSEs were combined in 1986 to become GCSEs
Olympic Games
or just Olympics, or the Games
omelette
not omelet
omertà
code of silence; note accent
on board
rather than aboard, except in the phrase "All aboard!"
one
one should find an alternative, preferably you (unless one is making fun of one's royal
family)
one another
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if more than two; each other two only
one in six, one in 10
etc should be treated as plural. There are good grammatical and logical reasons for this.
Compare "more than one in six Japanese is 65 or older … " with "more than one in six
Japanese are 65 or older … "
Grammatically, we are talking not about the noun "one" but the noun phrase "one in six",
signifying a group of people. Logically, the phrase represents a proportion – just like "17%"
or "one-sixth", both of which take plural verbs. "Two out of every seven" and "three out of
10" take plurals too, functioning identically.
"One in six is … " is also unnecessarily (and possibly misleadingly) specific, implying that
of any six people from the group you take, exactly one will be as described. "One in six"
means one-sixth on average over the whole group, and a plural verb better reflects this.
We wouldn't say "Only 1% of Republican voters is able to point to Iraq on a map" just
because there's a "one" in there
one nation Tory
Onetel
UK telecom company, not One.Tel, which is Australian
ongoing
jargon word that can normally be removed without making any difference to the story; if
you need to, replace with continuous or continuing
online
only
can be ambiguous if not placed next to the word or phrase modified: "I have only one
ambition" is clearer than "I only have one ambition"; however, be sensible: do not change
the song title to I Have Eyes Only for You.
Say "the only" or "one of the few" rather than "one of the only", which has found its way
into the paper
on side or onside?
The referee kept the home crowd on side by ruling the goal onside
on to
not onto
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Kingsley Amis, perhaps slightly overstating the case for this, argued: "I have found by
experience that no one persistently using onto writes anything much worth reading"
See into
Op 58, No 2
for classical music
Opec
Organisation of the Petroleum Exporting Countries, but not necessary to spell out
opencast mine
ophthalmic
opossum
opposition, the
or
need not be used when explaining or amplifying – rather than "the NUT, or National Union
of Teachers" say "the NUT (National Union of Teachers)" or, even better, "the National
Union of Teachers" at first mention and then just "the NUT" or "the union"
orangutan
one word
ordinance
decree
Ordnance Survey
Britain's national mapping agency (ordnance because such work was originally undertaken
by the army)
oriented, disoriented
not orientated, disorientated
Orkney
not "the Orkney Isles" or "the Orkneys"
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Ottakar's
bookshop taken over by Waterstones
O2, the
(cap O, not the number 0) is the name of the former Millennium Dome
Ötzi the Iceman
Europe's oldest natural human mummy (dated to about 3300BC), found in the Alps in 1991
Ouija
TM; the generic name most commonly used, though not very satisfactory, is "talking
board"
outback
(Australia)
outed, outing
take care with these terms: if we say, for example, that a paedophile was outed, we are
equating that with a gay person being outed; use exposed or revealed instead
outgrow, outgun, outmanoeuvre
outpatient
St Thomas' hospital in south London boasts the following styles, all on signs within a few
yards of each other: Out Patients, Out-Patients, Outpatients, and outpatients. Across
London, Barts adds Out-patients and OUTPATIENTS to the eclectic mix.
In a further development, the NHS has all but eradicated the apostrophe
outre
no accent
outside
not "outside of"
outward bound
outdoor adventure or adventure training are safer terms: we have been sued twice for
reporting that people have died on "outward bound" courses that were nothing to do with
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the Outward Bound Trust
over
not overly
overestimate, overstate
are frequently confused with underestimate or understate
overreact, override, overrule
and most other words with the prefix "over" do not need a hyphen
oxen
not oxes is the plural of ox
Oxford comma
a comma before the final "and" in lists: straightforward ones (he ate ham, eggs and chips)
do not need one, but sometimes it can help the reader (he ate cereal, kippers, bacon,
eggs, toast and marmalade, and tea), and sometimes it is essential:
compare
I dedicate this book to my parents, Martin Amis, and JK Rowling
with
I dedicate this book to my parents, Martin Amis and JK Rowling
oxymoron
does not just vaguely mean self-contradictory; an oxymoron is a figure of speech in which
apparently contradictory terms are used in conjunction, such as bittersweet,
compassionate conservatism, "darkness visible" (Paradise Lost), "the living dead" (The
Waste Land); one of Margaret Atwood's characters thought "interesting Canadian" was an
oxymoron
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P
pace
Latin tag meaning "by the leave of", as a courteous nod to the views of a dissenting author,
or "even acknowledging the existence of", not a clever way to say "such as"
Pacific Ocean
PacifiCorp
part of ScottishPower
Pac-Man
paean
song of praise; paeon metrical foot of one long and three short syllables; peonpeasant
page 1
etc but Page 3 girl
El País
Spanish newspaper
palate
roof of the mouth, sense of taste; palette used by an artist to mix paint; pallet hard bed,
wooden frame moved by forklift truck
palazzo
plural palazzos
Palestine
is best used for the occupied territories (the West Bank and Gaza); if referring to the whole
area, including Israel, use "historic Palestine" (but Palestine for historical references to the
area prior to 1948)
Palestinian Authority
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the authority, rather than PA, on second reference
palindrome
A man, a plan, a canal. Panama!
Palme d'Or
at the Cannes film festival
Palme, Olof
(1927-86) Swedish prime minister who was assassinated in a Stockholm street (not Olaf)
panacea
a remedy for all ills; so it's a misuse of the word to say (as we did) that "exercise is no
panacea for depression"
panama hat
Pandora's box
panelled, panelling, panellist
two Ls
panjandrum
a pretentious or self-important person in authority
Panjshir valley
of Afghanistan
pantyhose
not pantihose, normally tights in the UK; despite comprising one garment, they are plural,
unlike pantywaist insult favoured by rightwing politicians and talkshow hosts in the US
paparazzo
plural paparazzi; named after a character in Fellini's 1960 film La Dolce Vita
paperboy, papergirl
but paper round
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papier-mache
no accents
paraffin
rather than kerosene
parallel, paralleled
Paralympic Games
or just Paralympics, or the Games
paraphernalia
takes a singular verb: I save all the paraphernalia that accompanies every box set
parent-teacher association
abbreviation PTA
parentheses
If the sentence is logically and grammatically complete without the information contained
within the parentheses (round brackets), the punctuation stays outside the brackets.
(A complete sentence that stands alone in parentheses starts with a capital letter and ends
with a stop.)
"Square brackets," the grammarian said, "are used in direct quotes when an interpolation
[a note from the writer or editor, not uttered by the speaker] is added to provide essential
information"
Parker Bowles, Camilla
no hyphen
Parkinson's disease
Parkinson's law
"Work expands so as to fill the time available for its completion"
parliament, parliamentary
but cap up those parliaments referred to by their name in the relevant language, eg
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Bundestag, Duma, Folketing, Knesset
Parma ham
but parmesan cheese
Parthenon marbles
official name, recognised by both Britain and Greece, for the Elgin marbles
part-time
partwork
one in a series of regularly published supplements or magazines
party
lc in name of organisation, eg Conservative party, Monster Raving Loony party
Pashtuns
(singular Pashtun; they speak Pashtu) make up about 40% of the Afghan population
(called Pathans during the British Raj); a significant proportion of Pakistan's population is
also Pashtun
passerby
plural passersby
passive voice
active verbs are much more effective, especially in headlines: compare "my hamster was
eaten by Freddie Starr" with "Freddie Starr ate my hamster"
Passport Agency
now part of the Identity and Passport Service
password
past
in phrases such as the past few weeks, the past year
pâté
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with accents
Patent Office
now the Intellectual Property Office, responsible for copyright, designs, patents and
trademarks
patients
are discharged from hospital, not released
payback, payday, payoff, payout, paywall
pdf
peacekeeper, peacetime
Peak District
Pearl Harbor
US placenames (but not buildings or organisations) take American English spellings
peccadillo
plural peccadilloes
pedaller
pedals (eg a bicycle); pedlar peddles (eg drugs)
pedalo
plural pedalos
pedro giménez
white grape grown in South America; pedro ximénez white grape grown in Spain (and
type of sherry)
peers
in historical pieces should be given their titles only if they had received them at the time, ie
Herbert Asquith's Liberal government and Margaret Thatcher's Tory government (not Lord
Asquith's, Lady Thatcher's) – they had not yet been given peerages.
Avoid the construction "Lady Helena Kennedy": in this case we would write Lady Kennedy
or Helena Kennedy, or – if you really think people will not recognise her from the title alone
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– Lady (Helena) Kennedy
peewit
peking duck
pendant
noun; pendent adjective
peninsula
noun; peninsular adjective
penknife
pensioners
not "old age pensioners" or "OAPs"; older people is preferable to "elderly people" or (even
worse) "the elderly".
While this term is useful in headlines, it should be avoided in text as a description of an
individual. As one of our readers notes: "This usage defines older people by their nonparticipation in the workforce and immediately typifies them as dependents or drains on
the public purse. Rupert Murdoch and Michael Caine are never described as 'pensioners'
because they are perceived as still contributing to the economy, so does the term only
apply to the little people?" Reporters should ask what job people used to do and then
describe them as a retired banker/powerboat racer or former whatever (including
homemaker)
peony
flower
Pepsi-Cola
TM; a brand of cola; the company is PepsiCo
per
avoid; use English: "She earns £30,000 a year" is better than "per year". If you must use it,
the Latin preposition is followed by another Latin word, eg per capita, not per head.
Exception: miles per hour, which we write mph
per cent
% in headlines and copy
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percentage rises
seem to give us a lot of problems: an increase from 3% to 5% is a 2 percentage point
increase or a 2-point increase, not a 2% increase; any sentence saying "such and such
rose or fell by X%" should be considered and checked carefully
Pérez de Cuéllar, Javier
Peruvian diplomat and former UN secretary general
perfect storm
a perfect cliche, best avoided
performance-related pay
Performing Right Society
not Rights
permissible
Peronists
supporters of the nationalist/populist ideology of the late Argentinian president Juan
Domingo Perón
personal equity plans
were known as Peps
persons
No! They are people, even if they are the luckiest persons in the world
Perspex
TM
peshmerga
Kurdish armed fighters (it means "those who face death")
PETN
pentaerythritol tetranitrate, a powerful explosive favoured by terrorists because its
colourless crystals are hard to detect in a sealed container
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phenomenon
plural phenomena
Philippines
inhabited by Filipinos (male) and Filipinas (female); adjective Filipino for both sexes, but
Philippine for, say, a Philippine island or the Philippine president
Philips
electronics company; Phillips auctioneers, screwdriver
philistine
lc unless you are talking about the Old Testament Philistines
Phnom Penh
phone hacking
no hyphen for the noun, but hyphenated when used adjectivally, eg the PCC responded
with its customary vigour to the phone-hacking scandal
phoney
not phony
phosphorus
not phosphorous
photocall, photocopy, photofit, photojournalism, photoshoot
photo-finish
photo opportunity
pi
the ratio of the circumference of a circle to its diameter, as every schoolgirl knows
picket
noun (one who pickets), not picketer; picketed, picketing
piecework
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pigeonhole
verb or noun: I will not be pigeonholed as someone who puts everyone in a pigeonhole
Pigs
should not be used as an acronym for Portugal, Ireland (or Italy), Greece and Spain in
stories about eurozone countries whose economies are deemed more embattled than
others
pigsty
plural pigsties
Pilates
fitness exercises
pill, the
(contraceptive)
pillbox
Pimm's
the most popular version is Pimm's No 1 cup, which has gin as its base (the others are or
were No 2, whisky; No 3, brandy; No 4, rum; No 5, rye; and No 6, vodka)
pin
or pin number (we realise pin stands for personal identification number), not Pin or PIN
number
Pinocchio
pinstripe
suit, not pinstriped
Pipa
Protect Intellectual Property Act
pipebomb, pipeline
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Pissarro, Camille
(1830-1903) French impressionist painter; his son Lucien (1863-1944) was also an artist
pixelated
an image divided into pixels, the basic unit of representation on a television or computer
screen, or to display a person or object in pixels to disguise their identity
pixilated
drunk
PKK
Kurdistan Workers' party
placename
plainclothes
detectives
plane
a higher plane, not a higher plain (unless literally)
planets
take initial cap: Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune (note that
Pluto is now classified as a dwarf planet, along with Ceres and Eris); the sun and the
Earth's moon are lc, but named moons are capped up,: Europa, Io, etc
planning
not "forward planning"
Planning Inspectorate
handles planning inquiries and appeals in England and Wales
plaster of paris
plateau
plural plateaux
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plateglass
platypus
plural platypuses
playwright
although they write
Play-Doh
TM but you can say play-dough
play down
rather than "downplay"
playing the race card
an overused phrase
play-off
PlayStation
plc
not PLC
plea, pledge
words used all the time by journalists (particularly when writing headlines), but only rarely
by normal people
pleaded
not pled
plebeian
not plebian
P&O
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pocketbook, pocketknife
but pocket money
poet laureate
Carol Ann Duffy took over from Andrew Motion in 2009
poetry
A suggested method is to separate the lines with spaces and a slash; italics are
acceptable, though not essential:
I struck the board and cry'd, 'No more; / I will abroad.' / What, shall I ever sigh and pine? /
My lines and life are free; free as the rode, / Loose as the winde, as large as store.
point-to-point
pointe
(ballet); on pointe, not on point or en pointe
Pokémon
Polari
A form of language used mostly by gay men and lesbians, derived in part from slang used
by sailors, actors and prostitutes and popularised in the 1960s BBC radio comedy Round
the Horne by the characters Julian and Sandy. Example: "Vada the dolly eke on the bona
omee ajax" (Look at the gorgeous face on that nice man over there); "naff" is an example
of Polari that has passed into more general use, as are "butch", "camp" and "dizzy"
Polaroid
pole position
The fastest qualifier in a motor race starts from pole position or on pole, alongside one
other driver (on occasion, two or more others) on the front row of the grid.
Take care if using metaphorically, and do not spell it "poll position", even in election stories,
as we have been known to do
police forces
Metropolitan police (the Met after first mention), West Midlands police, New York police
department (NYPD at second mention), etc.
Police forces are normally plural: Kent police are investigating, etc, but note that while the
Metropolitan police are plural, the Met is singular, as is the Police Service of Northern
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Ireland (PSNI at second mention)
police ranks
Use abbreviation at first mention, then just surname, eg DCI Jane Tennison, thereafter
Tennison.
Other abbreviations: PC (for both male and female police constables), Sgt, DS, Insp, DI,
Ch Insp, DCI, Supt, Ch Supt, DCS.
Do not abbreviate commissioner, commander, etc
police units
lc: anti-terrorist branch, flying squad, fraud squad, special branch, vice squad, etc
policymaker, policymaking
"Polish death camps"
and similar phrases confusing location with perpetrator should not be used when referring
to countries occupied by Nazi Germany during the second world war; the appropriate
phrase here would be "Nazi death camps in occupied Poland" or similar
politburo
political correctness
a term to be avoided on the grounds that it is, in Polly Toynbee's words, "an empty
rightwing smear designed only to elevate its user"
political language
Use quotation marks around partisan or questionable phrases such as "big society" (at first
mention), "broken Britain" and "death tax"
political parties
lc for word "party"; abbreviate if necessary (for example in parliamentary reporting) as C,
Lab, Lib Dem (two words), SNP (Scottish National party, not "Scottish Nationalist party"),
Plaid Cymru, SDLP (Social Democratic and Labour party), SF (Sinn Féin), UUP (Ulster
Unionist party), DUP (Democratic Unionist party), Ukip (UK Independence party)
pollack
(not pollock) fish
poncey
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not poncy
pond
not a terribly witty way to refer to the Atlantic ("on the other side of the pond") which, in the
words of one Guardian writer, is "smug, hackneyed, old-fashioned, inaccurate and
generally crap"
Pontins
poo
what George W Bush's dog did on the White House lawn, but you might pooh-pooh
someone's ideas
pop art
pope, the
and papacy, pontiff; not always necessary to give his name in full
poppadom
Portakabin, Portaloo
TM; say portable building, portable toilets, or you are certain to receive a letter from the
Portakabin lawyers pointing out the error of your ways
Porthmadog
not Portmadoc
portland cement, portland stone
Port of London authority
PLA on second mention
portuguese man o'war
not strictly a jellyfish, although jelly-like; lowercase P unless you are writing about the 15thcentury Portuguese navy
postal workers
not postmen
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postcode
Postcomm
UK postal services regulator; its full name (which you do not need to use) is Postal
Services Commission
postgraduate
Post-it
TM
postmodern, postmodernist
postmortem
one word, as adjective or noun
Post Office
cap up the organisation, but you buy stamps in a post office or sub-post office
postwar
but make it clear if you are referring to the second world war
potentially
rarely necessary: verbs such as could and might already convey potentiality, so "could
potentially" and "might potentially" are tautologous, as well as clumsy
pound
in text, symbol £ only when figures are used (Britain saves the pound; Oliver saved £1;
pound (weight) abbreviates to lb, eg 2lb
POV
abbreviation for point of view
Pov
term coined by a Guardian journalist to depict laboured attempts to produce synonyms by
writers seeking what Fowler called "elegant variation" (and Orwell "inelegant variation"),
often descending into cliche or absurdity. Thus Dalí becomes "the moustachioed
surrealist" and Ireland "the cockatoo-shaped landmass". Pov, incidentally, stands for
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"popular orange vegetable"
PoW
abbreviation for prisoner of war
Powergen
powerpop
one word; musical genre defined by nostalgia for the 60s, in the form of chiming electric
guitars and vocal harmonies. Its proponents often profess to being inspired by the Beatles
and the Byrds, but are never as good as either
practice
noun; practise verb
practising homosexual
Do not use this expression, or the equally grotesque "active homosexual"; where it is
necessary to discuss someone's sex life, for example a story about gay clergy, it is
possible to use other expressions, eg the Anglican church demands celibacy from gay
clergy but permits the laity to have sexually active relationships
preredundant in such newly fashionable words as pre-booked, pre-reserved, pre-ordered, and
even pre-rehearsed
precis
singular and plural
predilection
not predeliction
pre-eminent
prefab, prefabricated
premier
should be used only when constitutionally correct (eg leaders of Australian states or
Canadian provinces), therefore not for Britain – do not use in headlines for British prime
minister.
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The Chinese traditionally give their prime minister the title of premier, eg Premier Wen
Jiabao. Bermuda also has a premier rather than a prime minister
premiere
no accent
Premier League
(no longer FA Premier League or Premiership) in England; in Scotland it was briefly the
Premierleague, now the Scottish Premier League or more commonly SPL
premises
of buildings and logic
premium bonds
prenuptial
or (if you must) prenup
prepositions
appeal against, protest against, over or at, not "appealed the sentence", "protested the
verdict", etc.
Schoolchildren used to be told (by English teachers unduly influenced by Latin) that it was
ungrammatical to end sentences with a preposition, a fallacy satirised by Churchill's "this is
the sort of English up with which I will not put" and HW Fowler's "What did you bring me
that book to be read to out of for?"
Take care after phrases following "to": the subheading "to we Conservatives, Labour looks
as if it's heading back to the old horrors of the winter of discontent" drew numerous
protests from readers pointing out that it should have been "to us Conservatives … " (The
mistake was ours, not the shadow cabinet minister who wrote the piece)
prepubescent
pre-Raphaelite
presently
means soon, not at present
president
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lc except in title: President Obama, but Barack Obama, the US president
press, the
singular: eg the British press is a shining example to the rest of the world
Press Complaints Commission
PCC on second mention
Press Gazette
formerly UK Press Gazette
pressure
Use put pressure on or pressed to mean apply pressure, ie not "the Baggies pressured [or
pressurised] the Wolves defence"
prestigious
having prestige: nothing wrong with this, despite what wise old subeditors used to tell us
Pret a Manger
food
prêt-à-porter
fashion
preteen
pretext
by its nature false, so while it may or may not be true that Tony Blair went to war on a
pretext, it is tautologous to say he did so on a false one
prevaricate
"to speak or act falsely with intent to deceive" (Collins); often confused withprocrastinate,
to put something off
preventive
rather than preventative
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prewar
but make clear which war you are talking about
PricewaterhouseCoopers
PwC after first mention; PwC Consulting, which for some reason was widely ridiculed for
changing its name to Monday, was bought by IBM
prima donna
plural prima donnas
prima facie
not italicised
primary care trusts
lc, eg Southwark primary care trust; they are to be abolished as part of the latest NHS
shakeup
primate
another word for archbishop; primate of All England: archbishop of Canterbury; primate of
England: archbishop of York; but "the primate" on second reference
primates
higher members of the order Primates, essentially apes and humans
prime minister
David Cameron, the prime minister; not prime minister David Cameron or the American
English "prime minister Cameron"
primitive
should not be used to describe tribal people
See stone age
Prince Charles
or the Prince of Wales at first mention; thereafter the prince
Prince's Trust
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principal
first in importance; principle standard of conduct
principality
should not be used to describe Wales
prior to
the word you want is "before"
prise
apart, open (not prize)
prisoners
not inmates
prison officer
not warder, a term that the Prison Officers' Association regards as "degrading, insulting
and historically inaccurate" (the Home Office changed it from warder in 1922)
Prison Service
but immigration service lc (it is properly called the Immigration and Nationality
Directorate)
private finance initiative
PFI on second mention
private member's bill
plural: private members' bills
privy council
but privy counsellor
prize
Booker prize, Nobel prize, Whitbread prize, etc
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prizefighter, prizewinner
but prize money
proactive
hideous jargon word – do not use with a hyphen. Or without one
probe
a dental implement, not an inquiry or investigation
pro-choice
not pro-abortion
procrastinate
to delay or defer; often confused with prevaricate
Procter & Gamble
not Proctor & Gamble
procurator fiscal
Scottish public prosecutor; the Crown Office and Procurator Fiscal Service (COPFS), in
Scotland, more wide-ranging than the Crown Prosecution Service in England and Wales,
is responsible for the prosecution of crime, investigation of sudden or suspicious deaths,
and investigation of complaints against the police
prodigal
means wasteful or extravagant, not a returned wanderer; the confusion arises from the
biblical parable of the prodigal son. A very common mistake, often used for example to
describe a footballer who has re-signed for a former club
profile
a noun, not a verb
program
(computer); otherwise programme
prohibition
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lc for US prohibition (1920-33), a result of the 18th Amendment
pro-life
should not be used to mean anti-abortion
Proms
concerts
proms
seafronts
prone
face down; supine face up
proofreader, proofreading
propeller
prophecy
noun; prophesy verb
pros and cons
protagonist
means principal character, so to say "main protagonists" is tautologous
protege
male and female, no accents
protest
against, over or about – not, for example, "protest the election result", which has
appeared on our front page
Protestant
protester
not protestor
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proven
proved is the past tense of prove; beware the creeping "proven", a term in Scottish law
("not proven") and in certain English idioms, eg "proven record"
province
should not be used to describe Northern Ireland. Ulster is one of the four provinces of
Ireland, comprising nine counties – six in Northern Ireland, and three in the Republic of
Ireland (Cavan, Donegal and Monaghan)
proviso
plural provisos
Ps and Qs
publicly
not publically
public-private partnership
PPP on second mention
Public Record Office
merged with the Historical Manuscripts Commission in 2003 to form the National
Archives
public schools
are actually private schools, so that is what we should call them
Puffa
TM; say padded or quilted jacket
pundit
self-appointed expert
Punjabi
for the language, rather than Panjabi
purchase
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as a noun, perhaps, but the verb is buy
puree
no accent
purler
as in "an absolute purler" (not pearler)
put
athletics; putt golf
Pwllheli
pygmy
plural pygmies, lc except for members of Equatorial African ethnic group
pyjamas
not pajamas
pyrrhic victory
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Q
Qantas
Australian airline
qat
not kat or khat
QC
without comma, eg Cherie Booth QC
QE2, QM2
liners
QinetiQ
arms company
Qom
city in Iran; it is not compulsory to call it "the holy city of Qom"
quaaludes
Qualifications and Curriculum Authority
QCA after first mention
quango
plural quangos; short for quasi-autonomous non-governmental organisation, but no need
to spell out
quantum jump, quantum leap
cliches best avoided in any area other than physics (unless you are referring to the cult
70s band Quantum Jump or the cult 90s TV series Quantum Leap)
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quarterdeck, quartermaster
Québécois
not Quebeckers
Queen, the
if it is necessary to say so, she is Her Majesty or HM, never HRH
Queen's birthday honours list
Queen's Club
in London
Queens' College, Cambridge
Queen's College, Oxford
its official name is The Queen's College (named in honour of Queen Philippa in 1341)
Queen's Park
the London tube station has an apostrophe
Queen's Park
Scotland's oldest football club, winners of the Scottish Cup 10 times in the 19th century
and twice runners-up in the FA Cup
Queens Park Rangers
(no apostrophe) English football club
Queen's speech
Queen's University Belfast
queueing
not queuing
quiche lorraine
quicklime, quicksand, quicksilver
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quixotic
quiz
a suspect is questioned, not quizzed (however tempting for headline purposes)
quizshow
Quorn
TM
quotation marks
Use double quotes at the start and end of a quoted section, with single quotes for quoted
words within that section. Place full points and commas inside the quotes for a complete
quoted sentence; otherwise the point comes outside – "Anna said: 'Your style guide needs
updating,' and I said: 'I agree.' " but: "Anna said updating the guide was 'a difficult and
time-consuming task'."
When beginning a quote with a sentence fragment that is followed by a full sentence,
punctuate according to the final part of the quote, eg The minister called the allegations
"blatant lies. But in a position such as mine, it is only to be expected."
Headlines and standfirsts (sparingly), captions and display quotes all take single quote
marks. For parentheses in direct quotes, use square brackets
quotes
From the editor:
If a reader reads something in direct quotation marks in the Guardian he/she is entitled to
believe that the reporter can vouch directly for the accuracy of the quote.
Copying quotes out of other newspapers without any form of attribution is simply bad
journalism, never mind legally risky. If, where there are no libel issues, you're going to
repeat quotes, then always say where they came from. It won't be much help in a legal
action, but at least the reader can evaluate the reliability of the source. A quote in the
Sunday Sport may – who knows – count for less than one from the Wall Street Journal.
If we're taking quotes from the radio or television it is our general policy to include an
attribution. This matters less if it is a pooled interview or news conference that happens to
be covered by, say, the BBC or Sky. If the quote comes from an exclusive interview on a
radio or TV programme (eg, Today, Channel 4 News or Newsnight) we should always
include an attribution.
Some further guidelines:
• Take care with direct speech: our readers should be confident that words appearing in
quotation marks accurately represent the actual words uttered by the speaker, although
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ums and ahems can be removed and bad grammar improved. If you aren't sure of the
exact wording, use indirect speech.
Where a lot of material has been left out, start off a new quote with: "He added: ... ", or
signify this with an ellipsis.
Take particular care when extracting from printed material, for example a minister's
resignation letter.
• Avoid "that" quotes, ie The prosecutors maintained that "this was not a trial about
freedom of the internet. Instead, a serious issue has been raised about the rights of the
individual." There is no reason to introduce a complete direct quote of this kind with "that".
It should be The prosecutors maintained: "This was not a trial ... " etc.
...
• Colons, rather than commas, should be used to introduce quotes, ie Guardian Style
says: "Please use colons, not commas;" not Guardian Style says, "Please use ... " etc. We
are writing a newspaper, not a novel.
• Think about where the attribution goes, and avoid this kind of thing:
"Gordon Brown is a bully and a liar. I have had numerous complaints about his aggressive
behaviour," said Mrs Pratt.
"The prime minister is completely out of control, and everyone inside No 10 knows it,"
added Andrew Rawnsley.
It's extremely annoying to get to the end of the second par and find out it is a different
speaker, because it reads as a continuation of the words of Mrs Pratt.
As a general rule, and particularly with lengthy quotations, it is better to start with the
attribution, so the reader does not have to engage in a series of mental double-takes trying
to find out who is supposed to be saying what. It should be:
Mrs Pratt said: "Gordon Brown is a bully and a liar. I have had numerous complaints about
his aggressive behaviour."
Andrew Rawnsley added: "The prime minister is completely out of control, and everyone
inside No 10 knows it."
• Avoid quoting words when it is unnecessary to do so, like this: Benítez said he was
"angry" that Liverpool were being written out of the title race. Yes, maybe, quotation marks
if he was "incandescent", or "spitting with rage" – but it is completely unnecessary to use
quotation marks for mundane words and unexceptional quotes. They are even finding their
way into headlines, which looks awful.
Similarly: MPs said they had not seen any evidence that Andy Coulson "knew that phone
hacking was taking place". There is no need for the quotation marks, which are splattered
like confetti across the paper and website every day but should be used only when it is
necessary, in both copy and headlines
Qur'an
holy book of Islam (not Koran); regarded as the word of God, having been recited by the
prophet Muhammad, so in the eyes of Muslims it is wrong to suggest that the prophet
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"wrote" the Qur'an
Qureia, Ahmed
Palestinian politician, popularly known as Abu Ala (which means "father of Ala" – it is not a
nom de guerre); he was prime minister of the Palestinian Authority until Fatah was
defeated by Hamas in the parliamentary elections
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R
race card
as in "play the race card"; has become a cliche, especially at election times when
someone is certain to be accused of it
racecard
lists racehorses at a racetrack
race-fixing
RAC Foundation
should be described on first mention as a pro-motoring thinktank
racial terminology
A person's race should only be included if relevant to the story. The words black and Asian
should not be used as nouns, but as adjectives: black people rather than "blacks", an
Asian woman rather than "an Asian", etc.
Say African-Caribbean rather than Afro-Caribbean.
Use the word "immigrant" with great care, not only because it is often incorrectly used to
describe people who were born in Britain, but also because it has been used negatively for
so many years. If relevant, say people are "children of immigrants", not "secondgeneration immigrants"
rack
one's brains for something
rack and ruin
racked
by guilt, with pain, not wracked
rackets
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not racquets, except in club titles
Rada
Royal Academy of Dramatic Art
Radio 1, 2, 3, 4, 4 Extra, 5 Live, 6 Music
radiographer
takes x-rays
radiologist
reads them
Raidió Teilifís Éireann
Irish public broadcasting corporation
radius
plural radii
raft
something Huck Finn and Jim were on when they floated down the river; do not say "a raft
of measures", which has very rapidly become a cliche (particularly in political reporting)
Raid
redundant array of independent disks (data storage)
railway station
train station is acceptable, indeed more widely used nowadays, although it still sounds
wrong to some readers (and writers)
Rainbows
for girls from five (four in Northern Ireland) to seven, at which point they may become
Brownies
raincoat, rainfall, rainproof
but rain check
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Ramadan
month of fasting for Muslims
Ramblers, the
formerly known as the Ramblers' Association
Ramsay, Gordon
ex-footballing chef; note that England's World Cup-winning manager in 1966 was Alf
Ramsey
Ramsey Street
where Neighbours become good friends
R&B
whether you are listening to Bo Diddley or Beyoncé; although only the former style should
be referred to as rhythm and blues
Range Rover
no hyphen
Rangers
not Glasgow Rangers
rarefy, rarefied
rateable
rating agency
not ratings
Rawlplug
TM
Ray-Ban
TM; it's OK to call them Ray-Bans
razzmatazz
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re/reUse re- (with hyphen) when followed by the vowels e or u (not pronounced as "yu"): eg reentry, re-examine, re-urge.
Use re (no hyphen) when followed by the vowels a, i, o or u (pronounced as "yu"), or any
consonant: eg rearm, rearrange, reassemble, reiterate, reorder, reread, reuse, rebuild,
reconsider, retweet.
Exceptions (where confusion with another word would arise): re-cover/recover, re-creation/
recreation, re-form/reform, re-sent/resent, re-sign/resign
realpolitik
rear admiral
Rear Admiral Horatio Hornblower at first mention, thereafter Adm Hornblower in leading
articles, otherwise just Hornblower
received pronunciation (RP)
a traditionally prestigious accent, associated with public schools and used by an estimated
3% of the population of England, also known as BBC English, Oxford English or the
Queen's English; nothing to do with Standard English, which includes written as well as
spoken language and can be (indeed, normally is) spoken with a regional accent
recent
avoid: if the date is relevant, use it
recur
not reoccur
Red Crescent, Red Cross
redbrick
university; the original six were Birmingham, Bristol, Leeds, Liverpool, Manchester and
Sheffield
redshirts
formally known as the United Front for Democracy Against Dictatorship (UDD), they were
at the forefront of protests against the Thai government in 2010; their opponents, loyal to
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the Bangkok regime, were the yellowshirts
referendum
plural referendums, not referenda
reforestation
not reafforestation
re-form
to form again
reform
to change for the better. We should not take the initiators' use of the word at its face value,
particularly in cases where we believe no improvement is likely. The latest set of changes
to education or the health service may, or may not, be reforms
refugee
According to the Refugee Council, a refugee is defined as "a person who, owing to a wellfounded fear of being persecuted for reasons of race, religion, nationality, membership of a
particular social group or political opinion, is outside the country of his nationality and is
unable or, owing to such fear, is unwilling to avail himself of the protection of that country"
refute
this much abused word should be used only when an argument is disproved; otherwise
contest, deny, rebut
regalia
plural, of royalty; "royal regalia" is tautologous
regard
with regard to, not with regards to (but of course you give your regards to Broadway)
Regent's Park
in London
regime
no accent
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regional assemblies
abolition of the eight bodies representing English regions outside London, along with the
regional development agencies, was announced in 2010
register office
not registry office – the first thing reporters used to be taught on local newspapers,
although you still see the mistake
registrar general
regrettable
rein in
not reign in
reinstate
religious right
Renaissance, the
reopen
repellant
noun, repellent adjective: you fight repellent insects with an insect repellant
repertoire
an individual's range of skills or roles
repertory
a selection of works that a theatre or dance company might perform
replaceable
report
the Lawrence report, etc; use report on or inquiry into but not report into, ie not "a report
into health problems"
reported speech
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When a comment in the present tense is reported, use past tense: "She said: 'I
likechocolate'" (present tense) becomes in reported speech "she said she likedchocolate".
When a comment in the past tense is reported, use "had" (past perfect tense): "She said: 'I
ate too much chocolate'" (past tense) becomes in reported speech "she said she had
eaten too much chocolate" (not "she said she ate too much chocolate").
Once it has been established who is speaking, there is no need to keep attributing, so long
as you stick to the past tense: "Alex said he would vote Labour. There was no alternative.
It was the only truly progressive party," etc
republicans
lc (except for US and other political parties)
residents
has a rather old-fashioned feel to it, especially in the deadly form "local residents"; on the
whole, better to call them people
resistance, resistance fighters
See terrorism, terrorists
restaurateur
not restauranteur
résumé
retail prices index (RPI)
prices not price, but normally no need to spell it out. No longer the official measure of
inflation (that is the consumer price index), but still used for uprating pensions and other
state benefits
Rethink
formerly the National Schizophrenia Fellowship
reticent
unwilling to speak; do not confuse with reluctant, as in this example from the paper: "Like
most graduates of limited financial means, Louise Clark was reticent about handing over a
huge wad of dosh"
Reuters
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the Rev
at first mention, thereafter use courtesy title: eg the Rev Joan Smith, subsequently Ms
Smith if honorific is needed; never say "Reverend Smith", "the Reverend Smith" or "Rev
Smith"
reveille
Revelation
last book in the New Testament: not Revelations, a very common error; its full name is The
Revelation of St John the Divine
Revenue & Customs
acceptable shorthand for HM Revenue and Customs, formed in 2005 from a merger of the
Inland Revenue and HM Customs and Excise
Revolutionary Guards
(plural) in Iran. The official name is Army of the Guardians of the Islamic Revolution;
"Revolutionary Guard" is meaningless in Iran.
In Libya, however, Muammar Gaddafi had his very own Revolutionary Guard (singular),
now disbanded. In Iraq, Saddam Hussein also had one
Rheims
rheumatoid arthritis
not rheumatism or arthritis, but can be abbreviated to RA after first mention
Rhodes scholar
RIBA, the
the Royal Institute of British Architects
Rice, Condoleezza
rice paddies
tautologous, as padi is the Malay word for rice; so it should be paddy fields or simply
paddies
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Richter scale
expresses the magnitude of an earthquake, but scientists no longer use Richter's
methodology as it does not work for large quakes or ones where the epicentre is farther
than 600km away.
It was superseded in 1979 by the more uniformly applicable moment magnitude scale. So
we talk about "an earthquake of magnitude 7.2" or whatever it is
rickety
ricochet, ricocheted, ricocheting
ridden, riddled or raddled?
crime-ridden, disease-ridden; riddled with errors, riddled with bullets; a raddled
appearance
riffle
to flick through a book, newspaper or magazine; often confused with rifle, to search or
ransack and steal from, eg rifle goods from a shop
right now
adds nothing, and should normally be deleted.
We asked: "Who are the most powerful people in the UK media right now?"
"Who are the most powerful people in the UK media?" would have had just as much
impact, and been much less annoying
right wing, the right, rightwinger
nouns
rightwing
adjective
RIM
abbreviation for Research In Motion, the BlackBerry company
ringfence, ringtone
riot grrrl
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rivers
lc, eg river Thames, Amazon river or just Thames, Amazon
riveted, riveting
RNIB
Royal National Institute of Blind People (no longer "the Blind")
RNID
the Royal National Institute for Deaf People changed its name to Action on Hearing Loss in
June 2011
roadmap
has become a cliche unless you are literally talking about a map
roadside
rob
you rob a person or a bank, using force or the threat of violence; but you steal a car or a
bag of money
Rock
cap if referring to Gibraltar
rock'n'roll
one word
role
no accent
Rollerblade
TM; say inline skates
rollercoaster
one word
rollover
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noun (as in lottery rollover)
Rolls-Royce
Roman Catholic
The archbishop of Birmingham, Cardiff, Glasgow, Liverpool, St Andrew's, Southwark and
Westminster: it is not normally necessary to say Roman Catholic (as there is no Anglican
equivalent).
The Roman Catholic bishop of Aberdeen, Argyll, Lancaster, Plymouth, Portsmouth,
Shrewsbury (for all of which there are Anglican bishops).
Unless obviously Roman Catholic from the context, say the Roman Catholic bishop of
Brentwood, Clifton, Dunkeld, Galloway, Hexham and Newcastle, Leeds, Menevia,
Middlesbrough, Motherwell, Northampton, Nottingham, Paisley and Salford.
In a UK setting use Roman Catholic in describing Roman Catholic organisations and
individuals and wherever an Anglican could argue ambiguity (eg "the Catholic church").
But Catholic is enough in most overseas contexts, eg Ireland, France, Italy, Latin America
Romania
Romany
noun, adjective; Roma plural
Romeo
cap up, whether referring to Juliet's boyfriend or using generically ("he's the office Romeo")
roofs
plural of roof (not rooves, which has appeared in the paper)
Rooney, Coleen
not Colleen
ro-ro
roll-on, roll-off ferry
Rorschach test
psychological test based on the interpretation of inkblots
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rottweiler
roughshod
routeing or routing?
They are routeing buses through the city centre after the routing of the protesters
Rovers Return, the
(no apostrophe) Coronation Street's pub; it sells Newton & Ridley beer
Royal Academy of Arts
usually known simply as the Royal Academy
Royal Air Force
or RAF
Royal Ballet
Royal Botanic Garden
(Edinburgh)
Royal Botanic Gardens
(London), also known as Kew Gardens or simply Kew
Royal College of Surgeons
the college or the royal college is preferable to the RCS on subsequent mention
royal commission
Royal Courts of Justice
royal family
Royal Institute of International Affairs
also known as Chatham House
Royal Logistic Corps
not Logistics
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Royal London hospital
Royal Mail
for the company, not "the Royal Mail"
Royal Marines
marines after first mention
Royal Navy
or the navy
Royal Opera, Royal Opera House
royal parks
Royal Society of Arts
RSA after first mention; its full name is Royal Society for the Encouragement of Arts,
Manufactures and Commerce
RSPB, RSPCA
do not normally need to be spelt out, but our readers outside the UK deserve a brief
explanation of what they are
rubber
strictly, a series of card games or sporting encounters, not an individual match; so if (say)
Great Britain's tennis team lost the first three matches of a five-match Davis Cup tie, you
would have a dead rubber (but it would be wrong to call the fourth or fifth matches "dead
rubbers")
Rubens, Peter Paul
(1577-1640) Flemish painter
Rubicon
as in Clegg crossed his personal Rubicon
rugby league, rugby union
rulebook
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Rule, Britannia!
runoff, runup
(nouns) no hyphen
rupee
Indian currency
rupiah
Indonesian currency
russian roulette
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S
Saatchi brothers
Maurice (now Lord Saatchi) and Charles (the one with the gallery) founded M&C Saatchi
in 1994 after leaving Saatchi & Saatchi, the advertising agency best known for the slogan
"Labour isn't working" in the 1979 general election campaign
saccharin
noun; saccharine adjective
sacrilegious
not sacreligious
Sad
seasonal affective disorder
Sadler's Wells
Safeway
Sahara
no need to add "desert"
said
normally preferable to added, commented, declared, pointed out, ejaculated, etc; you can
avoid too many "saids", whether quoting someone or in reported speech, quite easily
See reported speech
Sainsbury, Lord
Lord Sainsbury of Turville (David Sainsbury) is a Labour peer.
Lord Sainsbury of Preston Candover (John Sainsbury) is a Tory peer.
We have been known to mix them up, so take care
Sainsbury's
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for the stores; the company's name is J Sainsbury plc
Saint
in running text should be spelt in full: Saint John, Saint Paul. For names of towns,
churches, etc, abbreviate St (no point) eg St Mirren, St Stephen's church. In French
placenames a hyphen is needed, eg St-Nazaire, Ste-Suzanne, Stes-Maries-de-la-Mer
Saint Petersburg
Russian city founded by Peter the Great in 1703. It was known as Petrograd from 1914 to
1924, and Leningrad from 1924 to 1991
St Andrews
no apostrophe for golf or university
St Catharine's College, Cambridge
St Catherine's College, Oxford
St James Park
home of Exeter City
St James' Park
home of Newcastle United
St James's Park
royal park in London
Saint John
New Brunswick; St John's Newfoundland
St John Ambulance
not St John's and no longer "Brigade"
St Katharine Docks
London
St Martin-in-the-Fields
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London
St Paul's Cathedral
Saint-Saëns, Camille
(1835-1921) French composer
St Thomas' hospital
in London; not St Thomas's
sake
Japanese rice wine
Saki
pen name of the British writer HH Munro (1870-1916), known mainly for his short stories
saleable
Salvation Army
not the Sally Army
salvo
plural salvoes
Samaritans
the organisation has dropped "the" from its name
sambuca
Samoa
formerly known as Western Samoa; do not confuse with American Samoa
Sana'a
capital of Yemen
sanatorium
(not sanitarium or sanitorium) plural sanatoriums
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Sane
mental illness charity
San Sebastián
San Serriffe
island nation profiled in the Guardian on 1 April 1977
sans serif
typeface
San Siro stadium
Milan
São Paulo
Brazilian city, not Sao Paolo
Sarkozy, Nicolas
note that the French name is Nicolas, not Nicholas
Sars
severe acute respiratory syndrome
SAS
Special Air Service, but not normally necessary to spell it out; its naval equivalent is the
SBS
Satan
but satanist, satanism
satnav
Sats
standard assessment tasks
SATs
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scholastic aptitude tests (in the US, where they are pronounced as individual letters)
Saumarez Smith, Charles
secretary and chief executive of the Royal Society of Arts
Savile, Jimmy
Savile Club, Savile Row
in London
Saville theatre
in London, once owned by the Beatles' manager Brian Epstein and used for concerts in
the 60s (Jimi Hendrix played there), is now the Odeon Covent Garden cinema
Scalextric
often erroneously called "Scalectrix"
Scandinavia
Denmark, Norway and Sweden; with the addition of Finland and Iceland, they constitute
the Nordic countries
schadenfreude
scherzo
plural scherzos
schizophrenia, schizophrenic
should be used only in a medical context, never to mean in two minds, contradictory, or
erratic, which is wrong, as well as offensive to people diagnosed with this illness;
schizophrenic is an adjective, not a noun. After many years we have largely eradicated
misuse of this term, although as recently as 2010 a columnist contrived to accuse the
Conservatives of "untreatable ideological schizophrenia"
Schoenberg, Arnold
(1874-1951) Austrian-born composer
schoolboy, schoolchildren, schoolgirl, schoolroom, schoolteacher
schools
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if in full, like this: Alfred Salter primary school, Rotherhithe; King's school,
Macclesfield, Eton college, etc; often the generic part will not be necessary, so:
Alfred Salter primary; King's, Macclesfield; Eton, etc
school years
year 2, year 10, key stage 1, etc
Schröder, Gerhard
former German chancellor
Schwarzenegger, Arnold
Arnie is acceptable in headlines
scientific measurements
Take care: m in scientific terms stands for milli (1mW is 1,000th of a watt), while M denotes
mega (1MW is a million watts); in such circumstances it is wise not to bung in another m
when you mean million, so write out, for example, 10 million C.
amps A, volts V, watts W, kilowatts kW, megawatts MW, milliwatts mW, joules J, kilojoules
kJ
scientific names
in italics, with the first name (denoting the genus) capped, the second (denoting the
species) lc: Escherichia coli, Canis lupus, Quercus robur. The name can be shortened by
using the first initial: E coli, C lupus, Q robur (but we do not use a full point after the initial)
scientific terms
some silly cliches to avoid: you might find it difficult to hesitate for a nanosecond (the
shortest measurable human hesitation is probably about 250 million nanoseconds, a
quarter of a second); "astronomical sums" when talking about large sums of money is
rather dated (the national debt surpassed the standard astronomical unit of 93 million
[miles] 100 years ago)
Scilly
an alternative is Isles of Scilly but not Scilly Isles
ScotchTape
TM; say sticky tape
scotch broth, scotch egg, scotch mist, scotch whisky
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but Scotch argus butterfly
scot-free
the scot was a kind of medieval council tax, so you got off "scot-free" if you avoided
payment
Scotland
The following was written by a Scot who works for the Guardian and lives in London.
Letters expressing similar sentiments come from across Britain (and, indeed, from around
the world):
We don't carry much coverage of events in Scotland and to be honest, even as an expat,
that suits me fine. But I do care very much that we acknowledge that Scotland is a
separate nation and in many ways a separate country. It has different laws, education
system (primary, higher and further), local government, national government, sport, school
terms, weather, property market and selling system, bank holidays, right to roam, banks
and money, churches, etc.
If we really want to be a national newspaper then we need to consider whether our stories
apply only to England (and Wales) or Britain, or Scotland only. When we write about
teachers' pay deals, we should point out that we mean teachers in England and Wales;
Scottish teachers have separate pay and management structures and union. When we
write about it being half-term, we should remember that it's known as mid-term in
Scotland. When we write about bank holiday sunshine/rain, we should remember that in
Scotland the weather was probably different and it possibly wasn't even a bank holiday.
When we write about the English cricket team, we should be careful not to refer to it as
"we" and "us". When the Scottish Cup final is played, we should perhaps consider
devoting more than a few paragraphs at the foot of a page to Rangers winning their 100th
major trophy (if it had been Manchester United we'd have had pages and pages with
Bobby Charlton's all-time fantasy first XI and a dissertation on why English clubs are the
best in Europe). Andy Murray is Scottish, as well as British, rather than Scottish when he
loses and British when he wins.
These daily oversights come across to a Scot as arrogance. They also undermine
confidence in what the paper is telling the reader
Scotland Office
not Scottish Office
Scott, Charles Prestwich
(1846-1932) editor of the Manchester Guardian for 57 years and its owner from 1907 until
his death (his uncle, John Edward Taylor, had founded the paper in 1821). Scott, who was
editor when the first "Style-book of the Manchester Guardian" – forerunner of this guide –
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appeared in 1928, is most famous for his statement "comment is free, but facts are
sacred".
WP Crozier recalled of Scott: "Once, when an article in type was shown to him because a
certain sentence expressed a doubtful judgment, he noticed that the English was slovenly,
amended it, and then, being drawn on from sentence to sentence and becoming more and
more dissatisfied, he made innumerable minute corrections until at last, having made a
complete mess of the proof, he looked up and said gently: 'Dear X; of course, he's not a
trained subeditor.' "
Scott Trust
created in 1936 to safeguard the journalistic freedom and liberal values of the Manchester
Guardian. The sole shareholder in Guardian Media Group, its core purpose is to secure
the financial and editorial independence of the Guardian "in perpetuity". In 2008 it became
a limited company, with the same protections for the Guardian enshrined in its constitution
Scott, Sir George Gilbert
(1811-78) architect who designed the Albert Memorial and Midland Grand hotel at St
Pancras station
Scott, Sir Giles Gilbert
(1880-1960) grandson of the above, responsible for red telephone boxes, Bankside power
station (now Tate Modern), Waterloo bridge, and the Anglican cathedral in Liverpool
Scottish Enterprise
Scottish government
although its legal name remains Scottish executive
Scottish parliament
its members are MSPs
scottish terrier
not scotch or Scots; once known as Aberdeen terrier
scouse, scouser
Scouts
not "Boy Scouts" (in the UK, at least); the organisation is the Scout Association
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Scoville scale
system that measures the heat level of chillies
Scrabble
TM
Scram
secure continuous remote alcohol monitor, as sported in 2010 by Lindsay Lohan
scratchcard, smartcard, swipecard
SCSI
capped up even though generally pronounced "scuzzy"; it stands for small computer
system interface
sea change, sea level, sea sickness
but seaplane, seaport, seashore, seaside, seaweed
seal pups
not "baby seals" for the same reason we don't call lambs "baby sheep"
Sea of Japan
as generally known; but South Korea calls it the East Sea and North Korea the East Sea
of Korea
Séamus, Seán
note accents in Irish Gaelic; sean without a fada means old
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seas, oceans
capped up, eg Black Sea, Caspian Sea, Pacific Ocean
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seasons
spring, summer, autumn, winter are lowercase
seatbelt
second hand
on a watch; but secondhand goods
secretary general
Secret Intelligence Service
official name of MI6; may also be abbreviated to SIS after first mention
section 28
1988 law, widely regarded as homophobic, that said local authorities "shall not intentionally
promote homosexuality or publish material with the intention of promoting homosexuality"
or "promote the teaching in any maintained school of the acceptability of homosexuality as
a pretended family relationship"; it was repealed in Scotland in 2000 and the rest of the UK
in 2003
Security Service
better known as MI5
seize
not sieze
self-control, self-defence, self-esteem, self-respect
Selfridges
no apostrophe
sell-off
noun; sell off verb
Sellotape
TM; say sticky tape
semicolon
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Used correctly (which occasionally we do), the semicolon is a very elegant compromise
between a full stop (too much) and a comma (not enough). This sentence, from a column
by David McKie, illustrates beautifully how it's done: "Some reporters were brilliant; others
were less so."
The late Beryl Bainbridge said in the Guardian: "Not many people use it much any more,
do they? Should it be used more? I think so, yes. A semicolon is a partial pause, a different
way of pausing, without using a full stop. I use it all the time" and George Bernard Shaw
told TE Lawrence that not using semicolons was "a symptom of mental defectiveness,
probably induced by camp life".
Orwell, on the other hand, thought they were unnecessary and Kurt Vonnegut advised:
"Do not use semicolons. They are transvestite hermaphrodites, standing for absolutely
nothing. All they do is show you've been to college."
semtex
no longer necessary to cap this
Senate
(US)
senior
abbreviate to Sr not Sen or Snr, eg George Bush Sr
September 11
Use September 11 (ie contrary to our usual date style) when it is being evoked as a
particular event, rather than just a date, eg:
How September 11 changed the world for ever
But "how the events of 11 September 2001 changed the world for ever" would follow our
normal date style.
9/11 may be substituted for either, as necessary, particularly in tight headlines, eg:
How 9/11
changed
the world
for ever
The official death toll of the victims of the Islamist terrorists who hijacked four aircraft on 11
September 2001 is 2,976. The figure does not include the 19 hijackers. Of this total, 2,605
died in the twin towers of the World Trade Centre or on the ground in New York City (of
whom approximately 1,600 have been identified), 246 died on the four aeroplanes, and
125 were killed in the attack on the Pentagon.
The hijackers were: Fayez Ahmed, Mohamed Atta, Ahmed al-Ghamdi, Hamza al-Ghamdi,
Saeed al-Ghamdi, Hani Hanjour, Nawaf al-Hazmi, Salem al-Hazmi, Ahmed al-Haznawi,
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Khalid al-Mihdhar, Majed Moqed, Ahmed al-Nami, Abdulaziz al-Omari, Marwan al-Shehhi,
Mohannad al-Shehri, Wael al-Shehri, Waleed al-Shehri, Satam al-Suqami, Ziad Jarrah
(though dozens of permutations of their names have appeared in the paper, we follow
Reuters style as for most Arabic transliterations)
sequined
not sequinned
Serb
noun; Serbian adjective: the Serbs ousted the Serbian dictator Milosevic
sergeant major
Sgt Maj (not RSM or CSM) Trevor Prescott, subsequently Sgt Maj Prescott in leading
articles; elsewhere just surname
Serious Fraud Office
SFO on second mention
Serious Organised Crime Agency
Soca after first mention
serjeant at arms
serves to
adds nothing to a phrase such as "serves to underline"; replace with "underlines"
services, the
(armed forces)
settler
should be confined to those Israeli Jews living in settlements across the 1967 green line, ie
in the occupied territories
set to
It is very tempting to use this, especially in headlines, when we think something is going to
happen, but aren't all that sure; try to resist this temptation. It is even less excusable when
we do know that something is going to happen: one of our readers counted no fewer than
16 uses of the phrase in the paper in two days; in almost every case, the words could have
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been replaced with "will", or by simply leaving out the "set", eg "the packs are set to come
into force as part of the house-selling process".
The first readers' editor of the Guardian put it like this: "The expression 'set to', to mean
about to, seems likely to ... is often used to refer to something that, though expected, is not
absolutely certain to happen. It is a rascally expression which one of the readers who have
learned to groan at the sight of it describes as an all-purpose term removing any precision
of meaning from the sentence containing it"
Seven
not "Se7en" for the 1995 film starring Morgan Freeman, Brad Pitt and Gwyneth Paltrow
sexing up
is what happens in dodgy dossiers and not, we hope, our publications.
From the editor:
Guardian readers would rather we did give them the unvarnished truth – or our best stab
at it. It seems obvious enough. But inside many journalists – this goes for desk editors as
much as reporters – there is a little demon prompting us to make the story as strong and
interesting as possible, if not more so. We drop a few excitable adjectives around the
place. We overegg. We may even sex it up.
Strong stories are good. So are interesting stories. But straight, accurate stories are even
better. Readers who stick with us over any length of time would far rather judge what we
write by our own Richter scale of news judgments and values than feel that we're
measuring ourselves against the competition. Every time we flam a story up we disappoint
somebody – usually a reader who thought the Guardian was different.
We should be different. Of course we compete fiercely in the most competitive newspaper
market in the world. Of course we want to sell as many copies as possible. We've all
experienced peer pressure to write something as strongly as possible, if not more so. But
our Scott Trust ownership relieves us of the necessity to drive remorselessly for circulation
to the exclusion of all else. In other words, we don't need to sex things up, and we
shouldn't
sex offenders register
no apostrophe
sexuality
From a reader:
"Can I suggest your style guide should state that homosexual, gay, bisexual and
heterosexual are primarily adjectives and that use of them as nouns should be avoided. It
seems to me that this is both grammatically and politically preferable (politically because
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using them as nouns really does seem to define people by their sexuality). I would like to
read that someone is 'homosexual', not 'a homosexual', or about 'gay people', not 'gays'.
Lesbian is different as it is a noun which later began to be used adjectivally, not the other
way round. As an example from Wednesday, the opening line 'Documents which showed
that Lord Byron … was a bisexual' rather than 'was bisexual' sounds both Daily Mail-esque
and stylistically poor."
Sgt Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band
1967 album by a popular beat combo of the day; not Sergeant Pepper's Lonely Hearts
Club Band
Shaanxi
(capital Xi'an) and Shanxi (capital Taiyuan) are adjacent provinces in northern China
Shabiha
Syrian pro-government militia
shakedown, shakeout, shakeup
(nouns)
Shakespearean
not Shakespearian
Shankill Road
Belfast, not Shankhill
shantytown
shareholder
sharia law
sheepdog
sheikh
Shepherd Market
Mayfair; Shepherd's Bush west London
Shetland
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rather than Shetland Isles or Shetlands, but note that the local authority is Shetland
Islands council
Shia, Sunni
two branches of Islam (note: not Shi'ite); plural Shia Muslims and Sunni Muslims, though
Shias and Sunnis are fine if you are pushed for space
shiatsu
massage; shih-tzu dog; shiitake mushrooms
ships
are not feminine: it ran aground, not she ran aground; no quotes, no italics; you sail in, not
on, ships
shipbuilding, shipmate, shipowner, shipyard
shoo-in
not shoe-in
shootout
noun; not "shoot-out"
shopkeeper
Shoreham-by-Sea
not Shoreham on Sea
shortlist, longlist
Short money
payment to opposition parties to help them carry out their parliamentary functions, named
after Ted Short, the Labour leader of the house who introduced it in 1975
shortsighted, longsighted, nearsighted
shrank, shrunk
shrank, not shrunk, is the past tense of shrink, except in the film title Honey, I Shrunk the
Kids (and perhaps the occasional piece of wordplay based on it); shrunk is the past
participle (the kids had shrunk) or what is sometimes known as the present perfect form
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(Honey, I've shrunk the kids)
Siamese twins
conjoined twins, please
sickbed, sicknote, sickroom
but sick pay
sickie
side-effects
sidestreet
siege
not seige
Siena
Tuscan city; sienna pigment; Sienna Miller
silicon
computer chips; silicone breast implants – we have been known to confuse the two, as in
"Silicone Valley"
Silkin, Jon
(1930-97) English poet, not to be confused with his cousin John Silkin (1923-87), a Labour
cabinet minister, as was John's brother Sam Silkin (1918-88)
sim card
(it stands for subscriber identity module)
since
See as or since
Singaporean names
in three parts, eg Lee Kuan Yew
Singin' in the Rain
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not Singing
single quotes
in headlines (but sparingly), standfirsts and captions
singles chart
singular or plural?
Corporate entities take the singular: eg The BBC has decided (not "have"). In subsequent
references make sure the pronoun is singular: "It [not "they"] will press for an increase in
the licence fee."
Sports teams and rock bands are the exception – "England have an uphill task" is OK, as
is "Nirvana were overrated"
sink
past tense sank, past participle sunk: he sinks, he sank, he has sunk
Sinn Féin
siphon
not syphon
sisyphean
a futile or interminable task (Sisyphus had to spend eternity rolling a boulder up a hill)
sit
I sat down at the back but he was sitting near the front (the horrible "I was sat" is, sadly, a
very frequent error)
six-day war
between Israel and its neighbours in June 1967
size
Attempts to express the size of objects and places in terms of their relationship to doubledecker buses, Olympic swimming pools, football pitches, the Isle of Wight, Wales and
Belgium are cliched and unhelpful, which does not stop journalists engaging in them. The
same applies to measuring quantities of, say, hotdogs served at the Cup final in terms of
how far they would stretch to the moon and back
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ski, skis, skier, skied, skiing
skilful
not skillful
skimmed milk
not skim
skipper
usually only of a trawler
Sky+
skyrocket
No!
slavery
was not abolished in 1807, as we sometimes say: slavery in Britain became illegal in 1772,
the slave trade in the British empire was abolished in 1807, but slavery remained in the
colonies until the Slavery Abolition Act 1833
sleight of hand
although it is pronounced "slight"
slither
slide; sliver small piece
Slovene
is a language; Slovenian describes the people. Similarly Slovak, Slovakian
smartphone
Smith & Wesson
handguns
Smithsonian Institution
not Institute
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smooth
(verb) not smoothe (you may be thinking of "soothe"), smooth down, smoothen
smörgåsbord
snowclone
A type of cliched phrase defined by the linguist Geoffrey Pullum as "a multi-use,
customisable, instantly recognisable, timeworn, quoted or misquoted phrase or sentence
that can be used in an entirely open array of different variants". The name is derived from
the cliche about how many words "Eskimos" are mistakenly said to have for snow.
Examples of snowclones include "xxx [eg comedy] is the new yyy [eg rock'n'roll]", "you
wait ages for a xxx [eg gold medal] and then yyy [eg three] come along at once", and so
on. Such phrases are very popular with journalists searching for what Pullum calls "quickfix ways of writing stuff without actually having to think out new descriptive vocabulary or
construct new phrases and sentences"
snowplough
so-called
overused: as a reader pointed out when we used the term "so-called friendly fire", the
expression is "obviously ironic and really doesn't need such ham-fisted pointing out"
social grades
The NRS social grades (not classes), originally developed by the National Readership
Survey and still widely used in stories about market research, are the familiar A (upper
middle class), B (middle), C1 (lower middle), C2 (skilled working), D (semi- and unskilled)
and E (at the lowest levels of subsidence); they are based on the occupation of the chief
income earner of a household and are sometimes grouped into ABC1 (middle) and C2DE
(working class).
Since the 2001 census, the main UK social classification has been the National Statistics
socio-economic classification (NS-SEC), grouping occupations by employment conditions
and relations rather than skills, and has 17 categories, which can be broken down into
eight (from higher managerial and professional occupations to never worked and long-term
unemployed), or just three (higher, intermediate and lower occupations)
socialism, socialist
lc unless name of a party, eg Socialist Workers party
social media
are plural
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social security benefits
all lc, income support, working tax credit, etc
sod's law
See Murphy's law
Sofía
queen of Spain
soi-disant
means self-styled, not so-called; both phrases should be used sparingly
soiree
no accent
solar system
See planets
solicitor general
Solzhenitsyn, Aleksandr
(1918-2008) Russian novelist
Somalia
adjective Somali; the people are Somalis, not Somalians
some
should not be used before a figure: if you are not sure, about or approximately are better,
and if you are, it sounds daft: "some 12 people have died from wasp stings this year alone"
was a particularly silly example that found its way into the paper
Sopa
Stop Online Piracy Act
Sotheby's
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soundbite
sources
Anonymous sources should be used sparingly. We should – except in exceptional
circumstances – avoid anonymous pejorative quotes. We should avoid misrepresenting
the nature and number of sources, and we should do our best to give readers some clue
as to the authority with which they speak. We should never, ever, betray a source
South America
Southbank Centre
on the South Bank in London
South Bank University
south
south London, south-west England, the south-east, south Wales, etc
southern hemisphere
Southern Ocean
not Antarctic Ocean
south pole
Southport Visiter
newspaper, not to be confused with the Visitor, Morecambe
soy sauce
soya beans
not soybeans or soy beans
space hopper
spaghetti western
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span of years
2010-12 or from 2010-12; but between 2010 and 2012, not "between 2010-12"
Spanish names and accents
Take care over use of the tilde, which can change the meaning: Los Años Dorados (the
Spanish version of the sitcom The Golden Girls) means The Golden Years; leave out the
tilde and Los Anos Dorados becomes The Golden Anuses.
The surname is normally the second last name, not the last, which is the mother's maiden
name, eg the writer Federico García Lorca – known as García in Spain rather than Lorca –
should be García Lorca on second mention. Note also that the female name Consuelo
ends with an "o" not an "a".
In Spanish the natural stress of a word generally occurs on the second to last syllable.
Words that deviate from this norm must carry a written accent mark, known as the acento
ortográfico, to indicate where the stress falls. A guide to accents follows. If in doubt do an
internet search (try the word with and without an accent) and look for reputable Spanish
language sites, eg big newspapers.
Surnames ending -ez take an accent over the penultimate vowel, eg Benítez, Fernández,
Giménez, Gómez, González, Gutiérrez, Hernández, Jiménez, López, Márquez, Martínez,
Núñez, Ordóñez, Pérez, Quiñónez, Ramírez, Rodríguez, Sáez, Vásquez, Vázquez,
Velázquez. Exception: Alvarez; note also that names ending -es do not take the accent, eg
Martines, Rodrigues.
Other surnames Aristízabal, Beltrán, Cáceres, Calderón, Cañizares, Chevantón,
Couñago, Cúper, Dalí, De la Peña, Díaz, Forlán, García, Gaudí, Miró, Muñoz, Olazábal,
Pavón, Sáenz, Sáinz, Valdés, Valerón, Verón.
Forenames Adán, Alán, Andrés, César, Darío, Elías, Fabián, Ginés, Héctor, Hernán, Iñaki,
Iñés, Iván, Jesús, Joaquín, José, Lucía, María, Martín, Matías, Máximo, Míchel, Raúl,
Ramón, Róger, Rubén, Sebastián, Víctor. The forenames Ana, Angel, Alfredo, Alvaro,
Cristina, Diego, Domingo, Emilio, Ernesto, Federico, Fernando, Ignacio, Jorge, Juan, Julio,
Luis, Marta, Mario, Miguel, Pablo and Pedro do not usually take accents.
Placenames Asunción, Bogotá, Cádiz, Catalonia, Córdoba, La Coruña, Guantánamo Bay,
Guipúzcoa, Jaén, Jérez, León, Medellín, Potosí, San Sebastián, Valparaíso.
Sports teams, etc América, Atlético, El Barça (FC Barcelona), Bernabéu, Bolívar, Cerro
Porteño, Deportivo La Coruña, Huracán, Málaga, Peñarol.
Note: Spanish is an official language in Argentina, Bolivia, Chile, Colombia, Costa Rica,
Cuba, Dominican Republic, Ecuador, El Salvador, Equatorial Guinea, Guatemala,
Honduras, Mexico, Nicaragua, Panama, Paraguay, Peru, Puerto Rico, Spain, Uruguay and
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Venezuela
Spanish practices, Spanish customs
If you are talking about questionable trade union activities, restrictive practices might be a
less offensive way to put it
spare-part surgery
avoid this term
spark
overused in headlines of the "rates rise sparks fury" variety
spastic
the Spastics Society, which supports disabled people and in particular those with cerebral
palsy, changed its name to Scope in 1994
Speaker, the
(Commons) but deputy speaker (of whom there are several); Lord Speaker (Lords)
special
often redundant
special branch
Special Immigration Appeals Commission
Siac or "the commission" on second mention
spellchecker
if you use one, read through your work afterwards: a graphic on our front page was
rendered nonsensical when a spellcheck turned the species Aquila adalberti into "alleyway
adalberti", while Prunella modularis became "pronely modularise"; also note that most use
American English spellings
spelled or spelt?
spelled is the past tense, spelt is the past participle; she spelled it out for him: "the word is
spelt like this"
Spice Girls
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Victoria Beckham was Posh Spice; Melanie Brown was Scary Spice; Emma Bunton was
Baby Spice; Melanie Chisholm was Sporty Spice; Geri Halliwell was Ginger Spice
spicy
not spicey
Spider-Man
for the cartoon and film character, but Spiderman (no hyphen) is the nickname of Alain
Robert, a Frenchman who specialises in climbing skyscrapers without a safety net
spilled or spilt?
spilled is the past tense, spilt is the past participle; she spilled the beans: the beans were
all spilt
spin doctor
spin-off
noun, spin off verb
spinster
avoid this old-fashioned term, which has acquired a pejorative tone; say, if relevant, that
someone is an unmarried woman
spiral, spiralling
prices (and other things) can spiral down as well as up; try a less cliched word that doesn't
suggest a circular movement
split infinitives
"The English-speaking world may be divided into (1) those who neither know nor care
what a split infinitive is; (2) those who do not know, but care very much; (3) those who
know and condemn; (4) those who know and distinguish. Those who neither know nor
care are the vast majority, and are happy folk, to be envied." (HW Fowler, Modern English
Usage, 1926)
It is perfectly acceptable, and often desirable, to sensibly split infinitives – "to boldly go" is
an elegant and effective phrase – and stubbornly to resist doing so can sound pompous
and awkward ("the economic precipice on which they claim perpetually to be poised") or
ambiguous: "He even offered personally to guarantee the loan that the Clintons needed to
buy their house" raises the question of whether the offer, or the guarantee, was personal.
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Raymond Chandler wrote to his publisher: "Would you convey my compliments to the
purist who reads your proofs and tell him or her that I write in a sort of broken-down patois
which is something like the way a Swiss waiter talks, and that when I split an infinitive, God
damn it, I split it so it will stay split." And after an editor tinkered with his infinitives, George
Bernard Shaw said: "I don't care if he is made to go quickly, or to quickly go – but go he
must!"
spoiled or spoilt?
spoiled is the past tense, spoilt is the past participle; she spoiled her son: in fact he was a
spoilt brat
spokesman, spokeswoman
a quote may be attributed to the organisation, eg "The AA said … ", but if necessary say
spokesman or spokeswoman rather than spokesperson (assuming they have actually
spoken to you)
sponsorship
We are under no obligation to carry sponsors' names. So London Marathon, not Virgin
London Marathon, etc. When a competition is named after a sponsor, it is unavoidable:
Friends Provident t20, etc
spoonful
plural spoonfuls, not spoonsful
spree
shopping or spending, not shooting: describing a series of murders as a "killing spree"
sounds flippant
spring
square brackets
are used for interpolated words in quotations, eg David Cameron said: "Theresa [May] has
my full support"
square metres
not the same as metres squared: eg 300m squared is 90,000 sq m which is very different
from 300 sq m; we often get this wrong
Square Mile
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rather old-fashioned term for City of London
squaw
is regarded as offensive and should be avoided
SSSI
site of special scientific interest
stadium
plural stadiums, not stadia
staff
are plural
stalactites
cling from the ceiling; stalagmites grow from the ground
stalemate
in chess, a stalemate is the end of the game, and cannot be broken or resolved;deadlock
or impasse are more suitable for metaphorical use in such cases as "Zawiyah – 30 miles
from the capital – is a metaphor for Libya's current stalemate, which could itself end at any
moment"
Stalin, Joseph
not Josef
stamp
not stomp
staunch
(verb) to stop the flow of something, eg blood or confidence; (adjective) steadfast, eg a
staunch defender of human rights
standoff
standup
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adjective, as in a standup comedian performing standup comedy; and noun: a standup
performing standup
Stansted
Starck, Philippe
French designer
Starkey, Zak
(not Zac) son of Ringo Starr; plays drums for the Who
start up
verb; startup noun (as in business startup); star tup top-performing ram
state
lc in all uses
statehouse
office of the state governor in the US, one word except in New Jersey where it is the state
house
state of the union address
stationary
motionless; also used by some stationery shops to mean stationery;
stationerywriting materials; also used by some signwriters to mean stationary
STD or STI?
STI (sexually transmitted infection) is a broader term than STD (sexually transmitted
disease): you can have the infection without feeling ill or displaying any symptoms
steamboat, steamhammer, steamship
steam engine
Stelios
Sir Stelios Haji-Ioannou, founder of easyJet; Haji-Ioannou after first mention, although
Stelios is acceptable in headlines
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sten gun
stentorian
loud, sometimes confused with stertorous, a snoring sound
step change
avoid, unless you are quoting someone; change is perfectly adequate
stepfamily, stepfather, stepmother
etc, but step-parents. Don't confuse, say, a stepsister and half-sister, as we did when
writing about Barack Obama's family
Stephen or Steven?
Stephen Baldwin, Stephen Chow (actors), Stephen Colbert (satirist), Stephen Crane
(wrote The Red Badge of Courage), Stephen Foster (wrote Oh! Susanna), Stephen Fry
(national treasure), Stephen Jay Gould (biologist), Stephen Hawking (physicist), Stephen
King (novelist), Stephen Merchant (Ricky Gervais collaborator).
Steven Gerrard (footballer), Steven Moffat (Doctor Who writer and producer), Steven
Spielberg (film director)
sterling
the pound; also sterling qualities
Stetson
TM; hat
sticky-back plastic
stiletto
plural stilettos (not stilettoes)
still life
plural still lifes (not lives)
stilton
cheese
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stimulus
plural stimuli
Stirling prize
awarded annually by the Royal Institute of British Architects
Stock Exchange
caps when referring to the London Stock Exchange; but lc in other countries, eg Hong
Kong stock exchange
stock in trade
stock market
stolen generations
Australian Aboriginal children forcibly removed from their families
stone age
The charity Survival says: " 'Stone age' and 'primitive' have been used to describe tribal
people since the colonial era, reinforcing the idea that they have not changed over time
and that they are backward. This idea is both incorrect and very dangerous: incorrect
because all societies adapt and change, and dangerous because it is often used to justify
the persecution or forced 'development' of tribal people"
stony broke, stony-hearted
not stoney
stopgap
storey
plural storeys (buildings); story plural stories (tales)
straightforward, home straight, final straight
straitjacket, strait-laced, Dire Straits
strait of Dover, strait of Gibraltar, strait of Hormuz
not Strait, Straits or straits
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straitened circumstances, straitened times
not "straightened", one of our most frequent errors
Strategic Rail Authority
SRA on second mention
Stratford-on-Avon
district council and parliamentary seat, although most other local organisations, such as
the Royal Shakespeare Company, call this Warwickshire town Stratford-upon-Avon
stratum
plural strata
Street-Porter, Janet
streetwise
stretchered off
has a slight ring of Charles Buchan's Football Monthly; say carried off
strippergram
stumbling block
stumm
as in "keep stumm", not schtum
Sturm und Drang
German literary movement
STV
single transferable vote
stylebook
but style guide
Subbuteo
table football game in which players "flick to kick", named after the bird of prey Falco
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subbuteo (the hobby) and immortalised in the Undertones' My Perfect Cousin
subcommittee, subcontinent, sublet, subplot, subsection
subeditors, subs
Journalists who traditionally edit, check and cut copy, write headlines and other page
furniture, and design pages; to which can be added, in the digital age, an ever-widening
range of multimedia and technical skills. In some countries, eg the US and Canada, they
are known as copy editors.
WP Crozier said of CP Scott: "As a subeditor he got rid of the redundant and the turgid
with the conscientiousness of a machine that presses the superfluous moisture out of yarn.
The man who passed 'seaward journey to the great metropolis', and when the copy came
back to him found written in firm blue pencil 'voyage to London', knew what sort of English
'CP' liked"
subjunctive
Fowler noted that the subjunctive was "seldom obligatory" and Somerset Maugham
declared half a century ago: "The subjunctive mood is in its death throes, and the best
thing to do is put it out of its misery as soon as possible." Would that that were so.
Most commonly, the subjunctive is a third person singular form of the verb expressing
hypothesis, typically something demanded, proposed, imagined: he demanded that she
resign at once, I propose that she be sacked, she insisted Jane sit down.
It is particularly common in American English and in formal or poetic contexts: If I were a
rich man, etc, and you have to admit the song sounds better than "If I was a rich man ..."
We get this wrong at least as often as we get it right. Two examples from the same issue
in April 2010 in which "was" should be "were":
"If every election or ballot in which there are cases of bad practice was to be invalidated,
democracy would soon become a laughing stock ..." (leading article); "If this was the
centred Conservative party that Cameron claims, its strategists wouldn't be half as worried
as they are ..." (column)
Nobody died and no great harm was done, but as professional writers we should be aware
of the distinction. Used properly, the subjunctive can add elegance to your writing; an
object lesson was provided in a Gary Younge column of 5 July 2010: "It was as though
Charlie Brown's teacher were standing for leader of the opposition ... " (one of three
examples of the subjunctive in the piece).
As with the hyper-corrective misuse of whom instead of who, however, using the
subjunctive wrongly is worse than not using it at all, and will make you look pompous and
silly
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submachine gun
submarines
are boats, not ships
subpoena, subpoenaed
sub-prime, sub-Saharan
Suchlike
Sudan
not "the Sudan"
sudoku
sue, sued, suing
(not sueing)
suffer little children
nothing to do with suffering, this frequently misquoted or misunderstood phrase was used
by Christ (Luke 18:16) to mean "allow the little children to come to me"; it is also the title of
a song about the Moors murders on the first Smiths album
suicide
Say that someone killed him or herself rather than "committed suicide"; suicide has not
been a crime in the UK for many years and this old-fashioned term can cause
unnecessary further distress to families who have been bereaved in this way.
Journalists should exercise particular care in reporting suicide or issues involving suicide,
bearing in mind the risk of encouraging others. This applies to presentation, including the
use of pictures, and to describing the method of suicide. Any substances should be
referred to in general rather than specific terms. When appropriate, a helpline number (eg
Samaritans) should be given. The feelings of relatives should also be carefully considered
summer
summer solstice
the longest day of the year, but not the same as Midsummer Day (although we often seem
to assume it is)
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sun, moon
Sunday Sun
long-established newspaper covering the north-east of England, not to be confused with
the Sunday edition of the Sun
Super Bowl
supercasino, superinjunction
supermarkets
Marks & Spencer or M&S, Morrisons, Safeway, Sainsbury's, Tesco (no wonder people get
confused about apostrophes)
supermodel
model is normally sufficient
supernova
plural supernovae
Super Pac
an "independent-expenditure only" political action committee that can raise unlimited sums
from corporations, unions and other groups, as well as individuals, in support of a US
political candidate or party
supersede
not supercede
supine
face up; prone face down
supply days
(parliament)
supreme court
Sure Start
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surge
prefer rise or increase, if that is the meaning; but surge is preferable to "upsurge"
Suriname
(not Surinam); formerly Dutch Guiana
surrealism
Sutcliff, Rosemary
British historical novelist (1920-92) whose works include The Eagle of the Ninth
svengali
(lc) although named after the sinister Svengali in George du Maurier's 1894 novel Trilby
swap
not swop
swat
flies
swot
books
swath, swaths
broad strip, eg cut a wide swath
swathe, swathes
baby clothes, bandage, wrappings
swearwords
We are more liberal than any other newspapers, using language that most of our
competitors would not. The statistics tell their own story: the word "fuck" (and its variants)
appeared 705 times in the Guardian in the 12 months to April 2010, with a further 269
mentions in the Observer. (The figures for other national newspapers were as follows:
Independent 279, Independent on Sunday 74, Times 3, Sunday Times 2, all other papers
0.) The figures for the C-word, still regarded by many people as taboo, were: Guardian 49,
Observer 20, Independent 8, Independent on Sunday 5, everyone else 0.
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Even some readers who agree with Lenny Bruce that "take away the right to say fuck and
you take away the right to say fuck the government" might feel that we sometimes use
such words unnecessarily, although comments in response to Guardian Style's blogpost
on the subject were overwhelmingly in support of our policy.
The editor's guidelines are as follows:
First, remember the reader, and respect demands that we should not casually use words
that are likely to offend.
Second, use such words only when absolutely necessary to the facts of a piece, or to
portray a character in an article; there is almost never a case in which we need to use a
swearword outside direct quotes.
Third, the stronger the swearword, the harder we ought to think about using it.
Finally, never use asterisks, or such silliness as b------, which are just a cop-out, as
Charlotte Brontë recognised: "The practice of hinting by single letters those expletives with
which profane and violent people are wont to garnish their discourse, strikes me as a
proceeding which, however well meant, is weak and futile. I cannot tell what good it does –
what feeling it spares – what horror it conceals"
Swingeing
swinging 60s
sync
not synch
synopsis
plural synopses
syntax
Beware of ambiguous or incongruous sentence structure – the following appeared in a
column in the paper: "This argument, says a middle-aged lady in a business suit called
Marion, is just more London stuff ... " (What were her other outfits called?)
synthesis, synthesise, synthesiser
systematic
methodical; systemic relating to a system
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T
-t
ending for past participle: the cakes were burnt, the word was misspelt. But earned, not
earnt
T
(not tee) as in it suited her to a T, he had it down to a T
tableau
plural tableaux
table d'hote
tabloid
refers to longstanding redtops such as the Sun and Daily Mirror, rather than the
more recent breed of shrunken broadsheets; they are sometimes accused of writing
in tabloidese
tabloid journalists
defined by Charlie Brooker as "people who waste their lives actively making the world
worse"
tad
is a tad overused
Taiwanese names
like Hong Kong and Korean names, these are in two parts with a hyphen, eg Lee Teng-hui
(Lee after first mention)
Tajikistan
adjective Tajik
takeoff
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noun; take off verb
Takeover Panel
Taliban
plural (it means students); the singular is Talib
talisman
plural talismans, not "talismen"
talkshow
mainly American English; the British English version is chatshow
TalkSport
although the radio station's brand is talkSPORT
Tamiflu
trade name of oseltamivir, an antiviral drug that slows the spread of the influenza virus
between cells in the body. Do not call it a vaccine – it treats, but does not pre-empt
tam o'shanter
woollen cap
Tampax
TM; say tampon
Tangier
not Tangiers
Tannoy
TM; say public address system or just PA
taoiseach
the Irish prime minister
Taoism
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rather than Daoism
Tardis
the Doctor's time machine in Doctor Who; the acronym stands for time and relative
dimension in space
targeted, targeting
tariff
Tarmac
a company; tarmac formerly used to make pavements, roads and runways (we now walk
and drive on asphalt)
tarot cards
Taser
TM; the generic term is stun gun
taskforce
Tate
the original London gallery in Millbank, now known as Tate Britain, houses British art from
the 16th century; Tate Modern, at Southwark, south London, Tate Liverpool and Tate St
Ives, in Cornwall, all house modern art
Tavener, Sir John
English composer (born 1944) of such works as The Protecting Veil; Taverner,
JohnEnglish composer (c1490-1545) of masses and other vocal works
tax avoidance
is legal; tax evasion is illegal
taxi, taxiing
of aircraft
taxpayer
TaxPayers' Alliance
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"non-partisan" organisation that opposes all tax increases
Tbilisi
capital of Georgia
Tchaikovsky
teabag, teacup, teapot, teaspoon
all one word
team-mate
teams
sports teams take plural verbs: Wednesday were relegated again, Australia have won by
an innings, etc; but note that in a business context, they are singular like other companies,
eg Manchester United reported its biggest loss to date
Tea Party movement
named after the Boston Tea Party protest of 1773
teargas
Teasmade
TM; say teamaker
Technicolor
TM
teddy boys
(1950s) took their name from their Edwardian style of clothing
Teesside
teetotaller
Teflon
TM; say non-stick pan
telephone numbers
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should be hyphenated after three or four-figure area codes, but not five-figure area codes:
020-3353 2000, 0161-832 7200; 01892 456789, 01635 123456; treat mobile phone
numbers as having five-figure area codes: 07911 654321
Teletubbies
Tinky Winky (purple); Laa-Laa (yellow); Dipsy (green); and Po (red)
television shows
chatshow, gameshow, quizshow, talkshow
temazepam
temperatures
thus: 30C (85F) – ie celsius, with fahrenheit in brackets on first mention; but be extremely
wary (or don't bother) converting temperature changes, eg an average temperature
change of 2C was wrongly converted to 36F in an article about a heatwave (although a
temperature of 2C is about the same as 36F, a temperature change of 2C corresponds to
a change of about 4F)
Ten Commandments
not 10 Commandments
tending
one's flock, etc (not "tending to")
tendinitis
not tendonitis
tenpin bowling
tenses
We've Only Just Begun was playing on the radio. He began to drink; in fact he drankso
much, he was drunk in no time at all. He sank into depression, knowing that all his hopes
had been sunk. Finally, he sneaked away. Or perhaps snuck (according to Steven
Pinker, the most recent irregular verb to enter the language)
See burned, dreamed, learned, spelled, spoiled
Terfel, Bryn
Welsh opera singer; for some reason we often describe him as a tenor, but he is a bass
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baritone
Terminal 5
at Heathrow may be abbreviated to T5 after first mention
terrace houses
not terraced
terracotta
terra firma
Terrence Higgins Trust
terrorism, terrorists
A terrorist act is directed against victims chosen either randomly or as symbols of what is
being opposed (eg workers in the World Trade Centre, tourists in Bali, Spanish
commuters). It is designed to create a state of terror in the minds of a particular group of
people or the public as a whole for political or social ends. Although most terrorist acts are
violent, you can be a terrorist without being overtly violent (eg poisoning a water supply or
gassing people on the underground).
Does having a good cause make a difference? The UN says no: "Criminal acts calculated
to provoke a state of terror in the general public are in any circumstances unjustifiable,
whatever the considerations of a political, philosophical, ideological, racial, ethnic, religious
or other nature that may be invoked to justify them."
Whatever one's political sympathies, suicide bombers, the 9/11 attackers and most
paramilitary groups can all reasonably be regarded as terrorists (or at least groups some
of whose members perpetrate terrorist acts).
Nonetheless we need to be very careful about using the term: it is still a subjective
judgment – one person's terrorist may be another person's freedom fighter, and there are
former "terrorists" holding elected office in many parts of the world. Some critics suggest
that, for the Guardian, all terrorists are militants – unless their victims are British. Others
may point to what they regard as "state terrorism".
Often, alternatives such as militants, radicals, separatists, etc, may be more appropriate
and less controversial, but this is a difficult area: references to the "resistance", for
example, imply more sympathy to a cause than calling such fighters "insurgents". The
most important thing is that, in news reporting, we are not seen – because of the language
we use – to be taking sides.
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Note that the phrase "war on terror" should always appear in quotes, whether used by us
or (more likely) quoting someone else
Tesco
not Tesco's
Tessa
tax-exempt special savings account, replaced by Isas
Test
(cricket and rugby) the third Test, etc
Tetra Pak
TM
Texan
a person; the adjective is Texas: Texas Ranger, Texas oilwells, Texas tea etc
textbook
Thaksin Shinawatra
former prime minister of Thailand; Thaksin on second mention
thalidomide
that
Do not use automatically after the word "said", but it can be useful: you tend to read a
sentence such as "he said nothing by way of an explanation would be forthcoming" as "he
said nothing by way of an explanation" and then realise that it does not say that at all; "he
said that nothing by way of an explanation would be forthcoming" is much clearer.
A similar problem arises with verbs such as argue and warn. "He argued the case for war
had not been made" and "he warned the case for war had not been made" both become
much clearer if yoiu insert "that" after the verb
that or which?
This is quite easy, really: "that" defines, "which" gives extra information (often in a clause
enclosed by commas):
This is the house that Jack built; but this house, which John built, is falling down.
The Guardian, which I read every day, is the paper that I admire above all others.
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I am very proud of the sunflowers that I grew from seed (some of the sunflowers);
I am very proud of the sunflowers, which I grew from seed (all the sunflowers).
Note that in such examples the sentence remains grammatical without "that" (the house
Jack built, the paper I admire, the sunflowers I grew), but not without "which"
the
Leaving "the" out often reads like jargon: say the conference agreed to do something, not
"conference agreed"; the government has to do, not "government has to"; the Super
League (rugby), not "Super League".
Avoid the "prime minister David Cameron" syndrome: do not use constructions such as
"prime minister David Cameron said". Prominent figures can just be named, with their
function at second mention: "David Cameron said last night" (first mention); "the prime
minister said" (subsequent mentions). If it is thought necessary to explain who someone is,
write "Danny Wilson, the Sheffield United manager, said" or "the Sheffield United manager,
Danny Wilson, said". In such cases the commas around the name indicate there is only
one person in the position, so write "the Tory prime minister, David Cameron, said" (only
one person in the job), but "the former Tory prime minister John Major said" (there have
been many).
lc for newspapers (the Guardian), magazines (the New Statesman), pubs (the Coach and
Horses), bands (the Black Eyed Peas, the Not Sensibles, the The), nicknames (the Hulk,
the Red Baron), and sports grounds (the Oval).
uc for books (The Lord of the Rings), films (The Matrix), poems (The Waste Land),
television shows (The West Wing), and placenames (The Hague)
theatre
normally lc in name, eg Adelphi theatre, Crucible theatre (or just Adelphi, Crucible); initial
cap if "Theatre" comes first, eg Theatre Royal, Stratford East
theatregoer
theirs
no apostrophe
then
the then prime minister, etc (no hyphen)
thermonuclear
one word
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Thermos
TM; say vacuum flask
Thessaloniki
not Salonica or Salonika
thinktank
one word
Third Reich
third way
third world
meaning not the west (first) or the Soviet Union (second), so today an outdated (as well as
objectionable) term; use developing countries or developing nations
this and that
that was then, but this is now; this looks forward, that looks back: so the man showing his
son and heir the lands lying in front of them says: "One day, son, all this will be yours."
Then he points behind him to the house and says: "But that remains mine"
thoroughbred, thoroughgoing
threefold, threescore
3G
third generation mobile telephony
three-line whip
throw, throes
You might make a last throw of the dice, but if you are in your last throes, your situation is
considerably more serious
thunderstorm
one word
Tiananmen Square
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Beijing
Tianjin
not Tientsin
tikka masala
till
rather than til or 'til
timebomb, timescale, timeshare
times
1am, 6.30pm, etc; 10 o'clock last night but 10pm yesterday; half past two, a quarter to
three, 10 to 11, etc; 2hr 5min 6sec, etc; for 24-hour clock, 00.47, 23.59; noon, midnight
(not 12 noon, 12 midnight or 12am, 12pm).
The week starts on Mondays, but stories published on Sunday refer to the following week
as "this week" and the six days preceding that Sunday as "last week".
Writers must put the date in brackets when there might be ambiguity
Timor-Leste
formerly East Timor
tinfoil
Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy
John le Carré novel adapted for television by the BBC in 1979 (starring Alec Guinness as
George Smiley) and, in September 2011, released as a feature film with Gary Oldman as
Smiley
tipoff
one word as a noun
Tipp-Ex
TM; use correction fluid (not that many people do any more)
tipping point
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another example of jargon that has quickly become hackneyed through overuse
Tirol
not Tyrol
titbit
not tidbit
titles
Do not italicise or put in quotes titles of books, films, TV programmes, paintings, songs,
albums or anything else.
Words in titles take initial caps except for a, and, at, for, from, in, of, on, the, to, with
(except in initial position or after a colon): A Tale of Two Cities, Happy End of the World,
Shakespeare in Love, Superman: The Early Years, I'm in Love with the Girl on a Certain
Manchester Megastore Checkout Desk, etc.
Exception: the Review and the Observer, which still italicise titles
T-junction
toby jug
inexplicably capped up in the paper at least twice
to-do
as in "what a to-do!"
to-ing and fro-ing
You need the hyphens to stop it looking like "toyng and froyng"
told the Guardian
is used far too often: it should normally be replaced by "said" and reserved for occasions
when it genuinely adds interest or authority to a story (if someone got an exclusive
interview with, say, Lord Lucan)
Tolkien, JRR
(1892-1973) British author and philologist, notable for writing The Lord of the Rings and
not spelling his name "Tolkein"
tomato
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plural tomatoes
tomb of the Unknown Warrior
tonnage
is measured in tons (units of volume), not tonnes (units of mass) – derived from the
number of tuns (large barrels) a vessel could hold; registered tonnage is the total internal
capacity of a vessel, displacement tonnage is its actual weight, equal to the weight of
water it displaces
tonne
not ton (but note the above): the metric tonne is 1,000kg (2,204.62lb), the British ton is
2,240lb, and the US ton is 2,000lb; usually there is no need to convert.
For figurative use, write tons (I've had tons of birthday cards, etc)
top 10, top 40, etc
Topman, Topshop
Torah, the
tornado
plural tornadoes (storm); Tornado plural Tornados (aircraft)
torpid
apathetic or sluggish; turbid muddy, thick or cloudy (of liquid or fog); turgid swollen,
congested, or (when used of language) pompous or bombastic
tortuous
a tortuous road is one that winds or twists
torturous
a torturous experience is one that involves pain or suffering
Tory party
total
Avoid starting court stories with variations on the formula "three men were jailed for a total
of 19 years", a statistic that conveys no meaningful information (in this case, they had
been given sentences of nine, six and four years).
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The only time this might be justified is when one person is given a series of life sentences,
and "he was jailed for a total of 650 years" at least conveys how serious the crimes were
totalled
two Ls
tote, the
Tourette syndrome
Toussaint, Allen
US blues musician
Toussaint, Jean
US jazz musician
Toussaint L'Ouverture, Pierre Dominique
(1743-1803) leader of Haiti's slave revolt of 1791 and subsequent fight for independence,
which was granted in 1801
town councillor, town hall
townie
not townee
Townshend, Pete
one of the two members of the Who who didn't die before he got old (the other is Roger
Daltrey)
track record
record should normally be sufficient
trademarks (TM)
Take care: use a generic alternative unless there is a very good reason not to, eg ballpoint
pen, not biro (unless it really is a Biro, in which case it takes a cap B); say photocopy
rather than Xerox, etc; you will save our lawyers, and those of Portakabin and various
other companies, a lot of time and trouble
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trade union
but Trades Union Congress (TUC)
tragic
People do not need to be told that an accident is "tragic"
train
a number of things in a string – such as animals, railway carriages or wagons. In railway
terms it is hauled by a locomotive or engine, with which it is not synonymous
transatlantic
translator
works with the written word; often confused with interpreter, who works with the spoken
word
Transnistria
separatist region that declared its independence from Moldova in 1990, but has not been
recognised by the international community; also known as Trans-Dniester
Transport for London
TfL on second mention
Trans-Siberian railway
Travellers
capped: they are recognised as an ethnic group under the Race Relations Act; notenew
age travellers (l/c)
treasure trove
the noun comprises both words – there is no such thing as a "trove"; if you don't want to
call it a treasure trove, the word hoard may be useful
Treasury, the
(officially HM Treasury)
treaties
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lc, eg peace of Westphalia (1648), treaty of Versailles (1919)
Trekkers
how to refer to Star Trek fans unless you want to make fun of them, in which case they are
Trekkies
trenchcoat
T rex
dinosaur; full name Tyrannosaurus rex
T Rex
band
tricolour
French and Irish
trillion
a thousand billion (1 followed by 12 noughts), abbreviate like this: $25tn
Trinity College, Cambridge
not to be confused with Trinity Hall, Cambridge
Trinity College Dublin
trip-hop
Trips
trade-related intellectual property rights
Trojan horse
trolley
plural trolleys, not trollies
trooper
soldier in a cavalry regiment; trouper member of a troupe, or dependable worker ("the
night team are real troupers")
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trooping the colour
(no "of")
tropic of cancer, tropic of capricorn
the Troubles
(Northern Ireland)
try to
never "try and". As Bart Simpson put it: "I can't promise I'll try, but I'll try to try"
Ts
as in dotting the Is and crossing the Ts
tsar
not czar
tsetse fly
T-shirt
not tee-shirt
tsunami
wave caused by an undersea earthquake; not the same thing as a tidal wave
Tuareg
the Berber people of Saharan north Africa, and their language
tube, the
lc (London Underground is the name of the company); individual lines thus: Jubilee line,
Northern line, etc; the underground
TUC
Trades Union Congress, so TUC Congress is tautological: the reference should be to the
TUC conference
Tupperware
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TM
turkish delight
Turkmenistan
adjective Turkmen; its citizens are Turkmen, singular Turkman
Turkomans
(singular noun and adjective is Turkoman) are a formerly nomadic central Asian people
who now form a minority in Iraq; they speak Turkmen
turned
the subeditor turned stylebook guru Amelia Hodsdon said … (no hyphens)
turnover
in business
turn over
in bed
Tutankhamun
21st century
but hyphenate if adjectival: newspapers of the 21st century, 21st-century newspapers
Twenty20
cricket, abbreviated to T20 or t20
twitchers
birdwatchers or birders are preferable terms
Twitter
users, also known as tweeters (and sometimes twitterers, but not tweeps, please), spend
much of their time sending tweets, also known as tweeting or twittering; the editors of
Guardian Style tweet @guardianstyle.
When quoting tweets, where the aim is normally to capture the flavour and convey the
immediate impact of an event, do not correct the grammar, spelling or style
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Twofold
tying
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U
uber
no accent if you are saying something like uber-hip (although uber in this sense is uberused); use the umlaut if you are quoting German
U-boat
uc
abbreviation for UPPERCASE but often used to mean initial capital letters
Ucas
Universities and Colleges Admissions Service
Uighur, Uighurs
the Uighur people, particularly of the Xinjiang region in China
UK or Britain
in copy and headlines for the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland (but
note Great Britain comprises just England, Scotland and Wales)
Ukraine
no "the"; adjective Ukrainian
ukulele
not ukelele
Ulan Bator
capital of Mongolia
Ulster
Avoid if possible but acceptable in headlines to mean Northern Ireland, which in fact
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comprises six of the nine counties of the province of Ulster
Uluru
formerly known as Ayers Rock
Umist
the former University of Manchester Institute of Science and Technology merged with the
University of Manchester in 2004
umlaut
In German placenames, ae, oe and ue should almost always be rendered ä, ö, ü. Family
names, however, for the most part became petrified many years ago and there is no way
of working out whether the -e form or the umlaut should be used; you just have to find out
for each individual
umm-ed and ahh-ed
UN
United Nations, but it is not normally necessary to spell it out
UNAids
Unesco
United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organisation
UN general assembly
UNHCR
United Nations high commissioner for refugees; not commission (although the name
stands for both the high commissioner and the refugee agency s/he fronts)
Unicef
United Nations Children's Fund
UN secretary general
UN security council
unbiased
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uncharted
not unchartered
unchristian
underprefixes are normally one word, eg underachieve, underact, underage, undercover,
underdeveloped, undermanned, underprivileged, undersea, undersecretary, undersigned,
undervalue, underweight
underestimate, understate
Take care that you don't mean overestimate or overstate. We often get this wrong – a
typical example from the paper: "Qian's contribution to China's space and missile
programme cannot be underestimated" (the writer meant the opposite)
underground, the
but London Underground for name of company
under way
not underway
uneducated
"with no formal education" may be more accurate
unfollow, unfriend
is what you do to people you don't like on, respectively, Twitter and Facebook
uninterested
means not taking an interest; not synonymous with disinterested, which means unbiased,
objective
union
lc when debating the future of "the union" (England and Scotland)
union flag
not "union jack" and not capitalised
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unionists
(Northern Ireland) lc except in the name of a party, eg Democratic Unionist party
unique
one of a kind, so cannot be qualified as "absolutely unique", "very unique", etc
Unite
the UK's biggest trade union, formed in 2007 by the merger between Amicus and the
Transport and General Workers' Union
United Kingdom
England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland; no need to write in full: say Britain or the
UK
United Reformed Church
not United Reform Church, as pointed out on a wearisomely regular basis in the
corrections column
Universal Declaration of Human Rights
article 1, article 30, etc
universities
take initial cap, eg Sheffield University, Johns Hopkins University, Free University of Berlin
University College London
no comma; UCL after first mention
University of the Arts London
comprises Camberwell College of Arts, Central Saint Martins College of Art and Design,
Chelsea College of Art and Design, London College of Communication, London College of
Fashion, and Wimbledon College of Art
Unknown Soldier, tomb of the
unmistakable
until
not "up until"
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unveiled
pictures are, as are cars sometimes, but these days almost everything seems to be – so
the government "unveiled a raft of new policies" (two cliches and a redundant "new" in six
words) or a company "unveiled record profits". There is nothing wrong with announcing,
reporting, presenting or publishing
upbeat, upfront, upgrade, upstage, uptight
but upside down
upcoming
the coining and, even worse, use of such jargon words is likely to make many otherwise
liberal, enlightened readers (and editors) wonder if there is not after all a case to bring
back capital, or at least corporal, punishment for crimes against the English language; an
editor once told his staff: "If I read upcoming in the Wall Street Journal again, I shall be
downcoming and somebody will be outgoing"
upmarket
rather than the American English upscale
upriver, upstream
up to date
but in an up-to-date fashion
US
for United States, not USA: no need to spell out, even at first mention; do not call it
America, although its people are Americans
See America
usable
not useable
USAid
used
he used to do something, not he did use to do something and certainly not he did used to
do something (double imperfect); a column said "high street shops did, it's true, used to be
more varied" – something like "high street shops certainly used to be more varied" would
have been better
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user-generated content
utopian
U-turn
Uzbekistan
adjective Uzbek
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V
v
for versus, not vs: England v Australia, Rochdale v Sheffield Wednesday, etc
vInspired
for the young people's volunteering organisation formerly just v
V&A
abbreviation for Victoria and Albert Museum
Vajpayee, Atal Bihari
former prime minister of India
Val d'Isère
Valentine's Day
valley
lc, eg Thames valley, Ruhr valley, the Welsh valleys, valley girl (California)
Valium
TM; a brand of diazepam
Valparaíso
Valuation Office Agency
(VOA after first mention) an executive agency of HM Revenue & Customs, it compiles
business rating and council tax valuation lists for England and Wales but not Scotland,
where the job is done by the Scottish Assessors
ValuJet
Atlanta-based budget airline now called AirTran
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Vanessa-Mae
violinist
Van Gogh, Vincent
(1853-90) Dutch artist; note that as with most Dutch names it is Van Gogh when just the
surname is used (a Van Gogh masterpiece) but van Gogh with the forename (a
masterpiece by Vincent van Gogh)
Van Rompuy, Herman
Belgian president of the European council; an exception to the above rule in that the Van is
capped up when the forename is used, ie Herman Van Rompuy
Vanuatu
formerly New Hebrides
vapour
but vaporise
Vargas Llosa, Mario
Peruvian writer and politician, born 1936; his son Álvaro is also a writer
Vaseline
TM; call it petroleum jelly
VAT
value added tax; no need to spell it out
Vaughan or Vaughn?
Frankie Vaughan (late singer), Johnny Vaughan (broadcaster), Michael Vaughan
(cricketer), Sarah Vaughan (late singer).
Matthew Vaughn (film producer), Robert Vaughn, Vince Vaughn (actors)
VE Day
8 May 1945; VJ Day 15 August 1945
Vehicle Inspectorate
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Velázquez, Diego
(1599-1660) Spanish painter
Velcro
TM
veld
not veldt
venal
open to bribery
venial
easily forgiven
venerable
worthy of reverence, not just old
venetian blind
veranda
not verandah
verdicts
recorded by coroners, returned by inquest juries
Verkhovna Rada
(supreme council) Ukraine's parliament
vermilion
verruca
not verucca
very
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usually very redundant. Mark Twain wrote: "Substitute 'damn' every time you're inclined to
write 'very'. Your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be"
Vespa
scooters
Vesta
curries
veterinary
veto, vetoes, vetoed, vetoing
Viagra
TM; the generic is sildenafil citrate
vicar
a cleric of the Anglican church (which also has rectors and curates, etc), not of any other
denomination.
A priest writes: "A vicar is a person who is the incumbent of a parish, and the term is a job
description in the same way that editor is a job description. All editors are journalists but
not all journalists are editors. In the same way, all vicars are priests, but not all priests are
vicars. Some priests are chaplains; some (like me) are forensic social workers; some are
retired; some are shopworkers; some are police officers"
vice-chair, vice-chancellor, vice-president
vice versa
vichyssoise
If you are not sure how to spell it, simply warm it up and you've got a nice bowl of leek and
potato soup
video game
two words
videotape
noun and verb, although normally shorten to video or tape (the two are interchangeable Did you video that programme? No, I taped something else)
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vie, vying
Vientiane
capital of Laos
Villa-Lobos, Heitor
(1887-1959) Brazilian composer
virtuoso
plural virtuosos
virus
not the same as a bacterium, but we often confuse the two; if in doubt, consult the science
desk
vis-a-vis
no accent
vocal cords
not chords
Vodafone
voiceover
volcano
plural volcanoes
volcanology
not vulcanology
Volgograd
Russian city known as Tsaritsyn until 1925 and Stalingrad from 1925 to 61
vortex
plural vortices
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voting systems
lc, but may be abbreviated after first mention, eg first past the post (FPTP), alternative vote
(AV), single transferable vote (STV)
vuvuzela
not vuvuzuela
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W
wacky
not whacky
wagon
not waggon
Wags
wives and girlfriends (generally of footballers: the term was popularised during the 2006
World Cup, although Fabio Capello initially banned them from joining the 2010 team in
South Africa); the singular is Wag. Regarded by many as sexist, although variations
include Habs (husbands and boyfriends)
Wahhabism
branch of Islam practised by followers of the teachings of Muhammad ibn Abd-al-Wahhab
(1703-92)
wah-wah pedal
waive, waiver
the relinquishing of a claim or right; waver to hesitate (or someone waving)
wake
"in the wake of" is overused; nothing wrong with "as a result of" or simply "after"
Wales
avoid the word "principality", and do not use as a unit of measurement ("50 times the size
of Wales")
Wales Office
not Welsh Office
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walking stick
Walkman
TM; plural Walkmans not Walkmen
Wallpaper*
magazine (note asterisk)
Wall's
ice-cream, sausages
Walmart
owner of Asda; (previously Wal-Mart)
Wap
(wireless application protocol) phones
war crime, war dance, war game, war zone
but warhead, warhorse, warlord, warpath, warship, wartime
ward, wards
used as an adjective a word such as upward, downward, backward or forward should not
end in s, but used as an adverb it should, eg downward slope, forward planning,
homeward bound; but move forwards, peer downwards, spread outwards
"war on drugs", "war on terror"
always in quotes
wars
first world war, second world war (do not say "before the war" or "after the war" when you
mean the second world war)
hundred years war (it actually lasted 116 years, from 1337 to 1453)
war of Jenkins' Ear (1739-48)
civil war (England), American civil war, Spanish civil war
Crimean/Boer/Korean/Vietnam war
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six-day war
Gulf war (1991), Iraq war (2003)
Was (Not Was)
US rock band fronted by Don Was and David Was (no relation)
Waste Land, The
poem by TS Eliot (not The Wasteland)
washing-up liquid
washout
noun; wash out verb
Wastwater
in the Lake District, not Wast Water and definitely not, as we had it, "Wastewater"
watchdog, watchmaker, watchword
watercolour, watercourse, watermark, waterproof, waterskiing, waterwork
Waterford Wedgwood
glass and china (not Wedgewood)
water polo
Waterstones
bookseller
Watford Gap
service area on the M1 in Northamptonshire, near the village of Watford, 80 miles north of
London; nothing to do with the Hertfordshire town of Watford, 60 miles away, with which it
is sometimes confused by lazy writers who think such phrases as "anyone north of the
Watford Gap" a witty way to depict the unwashed northern hordes
wayzgoose
traditional term for a printer's works outing
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weave (fabric)
past tense wove, past participle woven. This also applies when used metaphorically, as in
"Obama's speech was woven throughout with the language of the US constitution" (we
actually printed "weaved", which was wrong)
weave (from side to side)
past tense weaved, past participle weaved, as in "Cameron dodged and weaved"
web, webpage, website, world wide web
web 2.0, web 3.0
websites
addresses can be broken at a sensible point within the name if you need to turn a line
Weee directive
(note three Es) EU scheme to encourage recycling of waste electrical and electronic
equipment
weight
in kilogrammes with imperial conversion, eg 65kg (10st 2lb)
Weight Watchers
TM
welch
(not welsh) to fail to honour an obligation
Welch Regiment, Royal Welch Fusiliers
welfare state
Wellbeing
well-known
as with famous, if someone or something is well-known, it should not be necessary to say
so
wellnigh
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Welsh assembly
comprises the National Assembly for Wales (the representative body with 60 assembly
members – AMs – meeting in the Senedd) and the Welsh Assembly government (led by
the first minister, and a distinct body from the National Assembly since 2006)
welsh dresser, welsh rarebit
Welsh, Irvine
Scottish author
Welsh spellings
(eg F for the V sound in English): prefer Welsh spellings such as Caernarfon and Conwy to
old-fashioned anglicised versions (Caernarvon, Conway) – although there are exceptions,
such as Cardiff not Caerdydd
wendy house
Wen Jiabao
succeeded Zhu Rongji as Chinese premier (prime minister) in 2003; Wen at second
mention (except in leading articles, where he is Mr Wen)
west, western, the west, western Europe
western
(cowboy film)
West Bank
West Bank barrier
should always be called a barrier when referred to in its totality, as it is in places a steel
and barbed-wire fence and in others an eight-metre-high concrete wall; if referring to a
particular section of it then calling it a fence or a wall may be appropriate. It can also be
described as a "separation barrier/fence/wall" or "security barrier/fence/wall", according to
the nature of the article
west coast mainline
West Country
West End
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of London, rather than the tabloid "London's West End"
Western Isles
West Lothian question
asks why MPs from Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland are able to vote on policies that
will apply in England but, because of devolution, will not apply in their own constituencies
West Midlands
Westminster Abbey
West Nile virus
Weyerhaeuser
US pulp and paper company
what is
a phrase that, while occasionally helpful to add emphasis, has become overused to the
point of tedium; examples from the paper include:
"Beckham repaid the committed public support with what was a man-of-the-match
performance ... "
"Principal among Schofield's 19 recommendations in what is a wide-ranging report ... "
What is clear is that these would be improved by what would be the simple step of
removing the offending phrase
wheelchair
Say (if relevant) that someone uses a wheelchair, not that they are "in a wheelchair" or
"wheelchair-bound" – stigmatising and offensive, as well as inaccurate
whence
means "where from", so don't write "from whence"
whereabouts
singular: her whereabouts is not known
which or that?
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This is quite easy, really: "that" defines, "which" gives extra information (often in a clause
enclosed by commas):
This is the house that Jack built; but this house, which John built, is falling down.
The Guardian, which I read every day, is the paper that I admire above all others.
I am very proud of the sunflowers that I grew from seed (some of the sunflowers);
I am very proud of the sunflowers, which I grew from seed (all the sunflowers).
Note that in such examples the sentence remains grammatical without "that" (the house
Jack built, the paper I admire, the sunflowers I grew), but not without "which"
Which?
the magazine, and the organisation that publishes it (formerly the Consumers' Association)
while
not whilst
whisky
but Irish and US whiskey and plural whiskies for both
whistleblower
white
lc in racial context
white paper
white-van man
Whitsuntide, Whit Sunday
not Whitsun
whiz, whiz-kid
not whizz or wiz
whodunnit
who or whom?
This is how to do it: "When it comes to sci-fi villains, few have endured as well as the
Martians, whom HG Wells depicted wielding a weapon called the Heat-Ray in The War of
the Worlds, back in 1898."
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And this is how not to do it: "A nation's weeping turned to tears of joy with the news that
Louie – for who media commentators had to commission new words for camp ... – is to
star in his own 10-part series."
Only those with a tin ear for language could be unaware that "who" sounds wrong in the
second example, but it is not always so obvious.
If in doubt, ask yourself how the clause beginning who/whom would read in the form of a
sentence giving he, him, she, her, they or them instead: if the who/whom person turns into
he/she/they, then "who" is right; if it becomes him/her/them, then it should be "whom".
In this example: "Straw was criticised for attacking Clegg, whom he despised" – "whom" is
correct because he despised "him".
But in "Straw attacked Clegg, who he thought was wrong" – "who" is correct, because it is
"he" not "him" who is considered wrong.
Use of "whom" has all but disappeared from spoken English, and seems to be going the
same way in most forms of written English too. If you are not sure, it is much better to use
"who" when "whom" would traditionally have been required than to use "whom" incorrectly
for "who", something even great writers have been guilty of: "There was a big man whom I
think was an hôtelier from Phnom Penh and a French girl I'd never seen before ..." (The
Quiet American, Graham Greene – who as a former subeditor should have known better).
wicketkeeper
Widdecombe, Ann
former Tory cabinet minister who, briefly, became a Guardian agony aunt
wide awake
Wiesel, Elie
Holocaust survivor and author; he was awarded the Nobel peace prize in 1986, and
female status in a particularly crass Guardian error
Wi-Fi
TM; the generic term is wireless computer network
Wii
Nintendo games machine
wiki
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website that allows multiple users to edit its content, hence WikiLeaks, Wikipedia
wild west
Willans, Geoffrey
(not Williams or Willians, as have appeared in the paper) author of the Molesworth books,
illustrated by Ronald Searle, as any fule kno
will.i.am
real name William James Adams, Jr
Wimpey
houses; Wimpy burgers
Windermere
not Lake Windermere; note that Windermere is also the name of the town
windfarm
one word
Windows Phone 7
not Windows 7 Phone
wines
normally lc, whether taking their name from a region (eg beaujolais, bordeaux, burgundy,
chablis, champagne) or a grape variety (eg cabernet sauvignon, chardonnay, merlot,
muscadet).
The regions themselves are capped up – so one might drink a burgundy from Burgundy, or
a muscadet from the Loire valley – as are wines of individual chateaux, eg I enjoyed a
glass of Cos d'Estournel 1970
wing commander
in leading articles, abbreviate on second mention to Wing Co; Wing Commander Barry
Johnson, subsequently Wing Co Johnson; otherwise just Johnson
Winnie-the-Pooh
in the original AA Milne books, although the "bear of little brain" has lost the hyphens in his
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Disney incarnation
winter
winter of discontent
overused
wipeout
noun; wipe out verb
Wirral
not "the Wirral", unless referring specifically to the Wirral peninsula
wishlist
wisteria
not wistaria
witchcraft
but witch-doctor, witch-hunt
with
(not "together with")
withhold
witness
not eyewitness, except for the Eyewitness picture spread in the Guardian
wits' end
woeful
Wolfram Alpha
woman, women
are nouns, not adjectives, so say female president, female MPs etc rather than "woman
president", "women MPs"
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womenswear
but the magazine is Women's Wear Daily
Woolies
the defunct shopping chain more formally known as Woolworths
woollies
jumpers
Worcestershire sauce
not Worcester
Work Programme
the coalition government scheme that, it was revealed in November 2012, found long-term
jobs for 3.5% of the unemployed people it was designed to help
working class
noun; working-class adjective
working tax credit
replaced the working families tax credit
World Bank
world championship
World Cup, World Cup final
football, cricket or rugby
World Food Programme
may be abbreviated to WFP after first mention
World Health Organisation
WHO on second mention
world heritage site
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World Series
It is a myth that this baseball event got its name from the New York World: originally known
as the World's Championship Series, it had nothing to do with the newspaper.
It has become tedious every time the World Series comes round to see its name cited as
an example of American arrogance
World Trade Centre, Ground Zero
but the twin towers
worldview
worldwide
often redundant, eg "it has automotive plants in 30 countries worldwide" (as opposed to
galaxy-wide?)
world wide web
wounds
combatants in battle are wounded, not injured
wrack
seaweed; racked with guilt and shame, not wracked; rack and ruin
wrest
as in wresting back, rather than wrestling back, your title
wriggle room
not wiggle room
wrinklies
patronising, unfunny way to refer to elderly people; do not use
wrongfoot
(verb) as in I was wrongfooted by the question
wryly
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not wrily
wuss
WWE
World Wrestling Entertainment, formerly the World Wrestling Federation
WWF
formerly the World Wide Fund for Nature (or, in the US, World Wildlife Fund)
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X
Xbox
xenophobe, xenophobia, xenophobic
Xerox
TM; say photocopy
Xfm
radio station
Xhosa
South African ethnic group and language
Xi'an
city in China where the Terracotta Warriors are located
Xmas
Christmas is preferable unless you are writing a headline, up against a deadline, and
desperate (or quoting Slade's Merry Xmas Everybody)
x-ray
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Y
y or ie?
As a general rule: -y is an English suffix, whose function is to create an adjective (usually
from a noun, eg creamy); -ie was originally a Scottish suffix, whose function is to add the
meaning of "diminutive" (usually from a noun, eg beastie).
So in most cases, where there is dispute over whether a noun takes a -y or an -ie ending,
the correct answer is -ie: she's a girly girl, but she's no helpless girlie. Think also
scrunchie, beanie, nightie, meanie ... There are exceptions (a hippy, an indie band), but
where specific examples are not given, use -ie for nouns and -y for adjectives
Yahoo
(the company) no exclamation mark
Yangtze
river; not Yangtse
Yar'Adua, Umaru
president of Nigeria from 2007, when he succeeded Olusegun Obasanjo, to his death in
2010
year
write 2012, not "the year 2012"; for a span of years use hyphen thus: 2011-12, not
2011/12. If you need to say it aloud – for example, in a podcast – say "twenty-twelve" not
"two thousand and twelve"
year 1, year 10
etc (schools)
yearbook
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Yekaterinburg
Yellow Pages
TM
Yemen
not "the Yemen"
yes campaign, no campaign
not Yes or "yes" campaign
yesses and noes
yesterday
Give some thought to where you place the time element in a story: do not automatically
put it at the start ("David Cameron yesterday insisted ... "), a style satirised by the
subeditor turned bestselling author Bill Bryson, who wrote: "Anyone not acquainted with
journalists could be forgiven for assuming that they must talk something like this: I last
night went to bed early because I this morning had to catch an early flight."
Constructions such as "the two sides were today to consider", as we have been known to
say, sound ugly and artificial. As with headlines, try reading out loud to find the most
natural arrangement.
Remember that we have millions of readers in different time zones around the world, for
whom yesterday, today and tomorrow will not necessarily mean the same thing. Terms
such as yesterday, today, tonight and tomorrow should not be used on the website: if you
need to specify, say "on Wednesday", etc.
"Yesterday" remains appropriate for some newspaper stories, which are most likely to be
read in the UK first thing in the morning, but not for the website, which may be read at any
time, anywhere in the world
yoghurt
yo-yo
Yo-Yo Ma
cellist
York Minster
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Yorkshire
North Yorkshire, South Yorkshire, West Yorkshire but east Yorkshire
Yorkshire dales
but North York Moors national park
yorkshire pudding, yorkshire terrier
Yorkshire Ripper
Young, Lady
Lady Young of Hornsey, a former actor (she appeared in the TV series Metal Mickey),
artist and academic.
Lady Young of Old Scone, former chief executive of the Environment Agency and the
Care Quality Commission, appointed chancellor of Cranfield University in 2010.
Lady Young of Farnworth, a former Tory leader of the Lords and staunch defender of
section 28, died in 2002
young offender institution
young turks
The Young Visiters
(not Visitors) novel by the Victorian child author Daisy Ashford, filmed by the BBC in 2003
yours
no apostrophe
YouTube
yuan
Chinese currency; we don't call it renminbi
Yu-Gi-Oh!
trading card game
yuletide
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Z
Zanu-PF
Zimbabwean political party led by Robert Mugabe, the country's president, which in 2008
reached a power-sharing agreement with the opposition Movement for Democratic
Change (MDC), led by Morgan Tsvangirai, who became prime minister
Zapatero, José Luis Rodríguez
Spanish politician, elected prime minister in 2004, and re-elected four years later
-ze
endings: use -se, even if this upsets your (American) spellchecker, eg emphasise, realise;
but capsize, synthesizer
zeitgeist
Zellweger, Renée
Zephaniah, Benjamin
zero
plural zeros; but zeroes in on
Zeta-Jones, Catherine
zeugma
A figure of speech in which, typically, a single verb is used to yoke together two or more
parts of a sentence with different meanings. Some examples:
"The queen takes counsel and tea" (Pope).
"Mr Pickwick took his hat and his leave" (Dickens).
And more recently:
"The following year, in Sing Your Worries Away, she played a stripper, taking off her
clothes and her sister."
(Ronald Bergan, in a 2010 Guardian obituary of June Havoc, Gypsy Rose Lee's sister)
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an example of gay slang (see Polari), used in the fashion industry and on US television
shows such as Will and Grace and Queer Eye for the Straight Guy, it has various shades
of meaning: (noun) clothing, ornamentation; (verb) zhoosh your hair, zhoosh yourself up;
zhooshy (adjective) showy
Zhu Rongji
Chinese premier (prime minister) from 1998 to 2003, when he was succeeded by Wen
Jiabao
zig-a-zig-ah
in the Spice Girls' song Wannabe
zigzag
no hyphen
Zimmer
TM; if it's not a Zimmer frame, call it a walking frame
Zine al-Abidine Ben Ali
president of Tunisia from 1987 to 2011; Ben Ali after first mention
Zionist
refers to someone who believes in the right for a Jewish national home to exist within
historic Palestine; someone who wants the borders of that entity to be expanded is not an
"ultra-Zionist" but might be described as a hardliner, hawk or rightwinger.
You can be a leftwing Zionist, a rightwing Zionist, a secular Zionist or a religious Zionist –
the word should, therefore, be used with great care.
This headline, which appeared in the paper, was misleading and inaccurate: "Mutiny fear
in Israeli army as Zionists gain influence". The online version was much better: "Mutiny
fear in Israeli army as religious Zionists gain influence"
zloty
Polish unit of currency
zoos
lc: London zoo, San Diego zoo, etc
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Zynga
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