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I've just started a new character and i need some advices. Specially about how i can make him looks less silly:p

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Software: Maya

PaulG21

07 July 2003, 10:48 AM

Don't know what u mean by 'less silly'. its looking fine at the moment. but maybe its too early to tell. u should work on it some more so we can get a better idea of what you're trying to achieve.

augustus

07 July 2003, 02:49 PM

You both right. Anyway, i think i've found the problem, the mouth area was too monkeyish. I've tweaked the mouth and nose a little bit.

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augustus

07 July 2003, 11:09 AM

Head almost done. But I'm not happy with front part of neck, it's too dense here. I'm planning to merge a few poins under the chin. Does it generate smoothing troubles when animate?

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augustus

07 July 2003, 10:27 AM

The fist human ear i've ever made, ladies and gentlemen. Modelling ear was more easier than i've expected, but connecting it to the head was a nightmare. And still needs some work. :annoyed:

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Edit : And i've just seen the bottom part is connected to wrong place :banghead:

augustus

07 July 2003, 08:20 AM

I'm done with head for now. No critique? Am i that good:D

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Kev3D

07 July 2003, 10:18 AM

The only thing better that I can see in the second [gray] picture is that his nose is better defined.

I reckon, however, that the first [blue] one has potential for a lot more character then the second as he has a certain look to him whereas the second one looks a lot like an average guy.

Kev3D

07 July 2003, 10:19 AM

oh yeh, by the way, the modelling is great, can't spot flaws

Are you going to texture it?

augustus

07 July 2003, 04:56 PM

Please forget whay i said at last post, it seems head not finished yet. I've put a temporary texture to eyes, and saw eyes are too wide.

Morlankey: Thanks. I think you're right, but 2nd is more handsome :p Maybe i do something between these two versions. And yes, i will give him a body, i will texture and skin him.

davidSingha: Yes, i use Maya subd.

augustus

07 July 2003, 08:40 PM

Tweak tweak tweak...

http://august.f2o.org/resimler/fa/fa-face05.jpg

Electrofirma

07 July 2003, 05:58 AM

He's definately looking better than he did.

I'm curious about the area behind his ear. It could just be shadows, but it looks like there is a depression behind his ear that shouldn't be there.

Anyhow, nice model, keep :wip:

prrr!

07 July 2003, 12:05 AM

he its getting better and better:thumbsup:

augustus

07 July 2003, 12:36 PM

Thanks people.

Electrofirma: Yes, there is a depression :annoyed: The area around ear still needs more work.

I've started to the body by the way. Well, I need more reference images, but fineart.sk is not online yet.

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3thumbs

07 July 2003, 10:28 PM

maybe give him a smaller noze
keep it up though man i like it:applause:

augustus

07 July 2003, 11:39 AM

Smaller nose? I was thinking it's too small:D

Body building :p

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rasmusW

07 July 2003, 01:30 PM

unfortunately i can't see your pics:annoyed:

augustus

08 August 2003, 09:01 AM

Tweak tweak tweak...

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abyss103: Strange. Can you see these:

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thOrNes

08 August 2003, 09:05 AM

nice muscle definition you have there on his back !

augustus

08 August 2003, 02:40 PM

With arms

http://august.f2o.org/resimler/fa/fa-bodyrender05.jpg

http://august.f2o.org/resimler/fa/fa-bodywire05.gif

AroundTheFur

08 August 2003, 02:48 PM

its looking good, few things i notice:

the pelvic area on the back looks like its coming out too much with a line where the pelvis is. in the middle it actually goes in. also right above that noticing two bumps that dont look right. and the elbow also is looking wrong. would also like to see a little more definition in the tricep area. :buttrock:

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