Okay...so I'm reviewing a story several years after it was written...and the show has been cancelled...but, thank to Human Target and Mark Valley this Keen Eddie forum has come back to life.

There is a group of us writers in the Human Target forum that has been keeping that show alive and it's kind of spilled into here...and well, new KE stories and new reviews.

So, to your story...Wow, did you ever capture those two perfectly! I loved how you described them and their suroundings. It was simply beautiful...left me longing for more!

dhampir65 chapter 1 . 3/3/2011

oh how i wish they continued this show! im one of the many that discovered this show way after its demise. and i really was hoping that eddie/fiona would get together but i guess they were never given the chance! :(

So good. I like how you captured them, and enjoyed reading the part about her wanting to rebel, "She wanted this to happen. She wanted to taste something she had never experienced before. She wanted to just down the whole chalice of forbidden wine, no matter the consequences." Neat read.