This is so cute! I like the grown up Ginny. Poor Lily! I like the fact that you deviated from the norm, and wrote a Teddy/Lily. Yours works very well! And the 'tangled' quote at the beginning is just perfect!

Wow I never thought that hair could be so significant to show a child's inner turmoil but this did just that and it was great! I enjoyed it and how Lily still let her mother brush her and hair and her mother never gave in. This showed their relationship so perfectly. Good job!

That was really clever. I liked how easily you summed up how hard it is for young teenagers to work through life. How they handle heartbreaks and changing. The way you used Tangled was very original especially when you compared it to Ginny's hair. Well done.