love, love, love this story... it's been ages of course, and who knows if you even continue to get these reviews? if you ever came back to finish Fred's part and follow up on the others, i'd love to read it :O)

Ok. So let me get this straight. You have attempted murderers in your school and you shave off 2 house points. You have a kidnapper and attempted assault with intent to do bodily harm and (as far as I know) nothing happens. You have a man who lies to authorities, kidnaps a mentally ill woman holding her hostage while never contacting her family and he gets a couple of hexes. Harry finally sees the love of his life come back from the dead and they share a brief hug and convo. Come on! *shakes head*

Your lucky I absolutely adored this Snape. Loved Hermione, too. Liked the different love story threads although Katie was a bit dramatic. Liked the original story of Charlie rescuing Rachel...that was super sweet. Most Slytherins should be boiled alive and chopped for parts.

As you can see, you got under my skin...which means your fic was good. Bravo!

maybe this is a good story and well written, I dont know...I read first chapter, but after what I read I have no desire to read more, not only I hate rape in fanfiction, its all too depressing to read... I dont know why stories where Hermione is raped are so favourite, there are so many of them...