Other than what’s been pointed out by PPs: “We are so excited to visit with all our friends and family, we just couldn’t fit it all into one day!” doesn’t read elegantly to me – I’m confused as to what you’re visitng and what you’re trying to fit in. If it were me I’d write something like “We are so excited to visit Georgetown with all our friends and family, we just couldn’t fit all the celebrations into one day!”.

Also, maybe you need a comma after ‘so’ in “So we invite you etc etc etc”.

We hope you can join usfor a celebrationof love, laughter,friendship, and family.

Sunday, September 1st, 5:00 PM

101 Kelsie Court, Georgetown, KY

Ceremony on the back lawnfollowed by dinner, dancing, and merriment!

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1) Don’t capitalize the beginning of each line break2) Exclude “and our families” because it’s redundant with “family”3) Include PM after the time4) Consider changing some of the line breaks for ease of reading

1) Consider removing “http://” from the URL for neater appearance2) Suggested slightly different wording and line breaks3) Exclude “Georgetown, KY” from event details; guests will know which city4) Perhaps put the event titles in bold in the bottom two blocks of text

1) Maybe try “Please let us know which events you are able to attend no later than July 26th”2) Event titles in bold?3) If possible, allign “Saturday” “Sunday” and “Monday” horizontally4) Instead of “Coming” and “Not Coming” I’d suggest Attending and Not Attending5) Farewell Breakfast is not centered over the third column6) I’d insert a space between the “[]” and the response