Precheur: "he also hated the blatant murder the MC committed against innocent people because they were related to the target of the MC. Sometimes he wished he would be one of those isekai heroes and go to another world and become an OP character that would have a harem of the most beautiful women and become an unstoppable warrior." i dropped here, knew how trash it would become

So like, I'm still confused... is the novel back on track or is someone hacking in and posting chapters they wrote... .. which i should say fit into place, but confusing me even more.Why would you do this to me?I mean, I've waited and kept this novel in my library for along time.
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EveryDayWaster: Now, when I started reading this novel, I tried so hard not to complain. It's just feels so rushed. Like the first 5 chaps are like wh-what so he dea- but now he's in the hospi- and eait hes killing people no- and it's yyyyyy. But cough cough, here's how I feel on the novel. MC : it's a better then average MC, like 4 star range. World backgrounds average, but it'd a bit early to say that. But as I know my back, I know NOTHING interesting, or well explained. (Maybe thats my fault as I was confused for info dumps.) STORY : Is again but still to early for reader to get thr juicy bits.

And thats a very bad and basic review of mine. (Probably the former)

So all I'll say untill a 100 chaps later is, slow down and explain ur stuff, add ways to show the viewers transitions, or just dont make ne miss somebody dead in a line. I look foward to what Mr.Author will bring.

I seem to be a little pissed that I have to wait till this site catches up to the other translation site to read new chapters. I've been nitpicking alot of the translation on this site, starting from ch 14 or so... probably when it hit me on how long i have to wait till chapter 150+...
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I get it, i reread the other translation after reading here and see the difference. Well, for me atleast. The atmosphere or feeling i get while reading the other one, has a slightly more japanese / anime feel while reading here has a.... "I'm reading a cultivation novel"... best was i can put it. The wording and the way the sentences are structured in both are different. Grammar as well, which words are the some what correct to what would go there to make the sentence translate better. Now only if i could get that system to give me a erotic dancing quest, ofcourse when baby girl ain't around.
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YaoYao: Well, a new way to reincarnate/travel to another world.But still, truck-sama are you really that bored to make another human not to die and suffer when you "gently" touch them or because now your job of transporting people to another worlds is decreasing that you want to make others suffer ? The next time you do your job please make them die.

First: I am not 100% sure but I am confident that they would inject him with something to help him feel no pain or to speed the presses, even if he has brain damage.

Second: the bad **** that happened in his life doesn’t make sense.
Sure the bullying can pass since kids do really said **** sometimes.

But his uncle is unlikely to cut his tongue out and he would probably die before help came. I would change it to something else. Like accidentally drinking some acid or a chemical that ****ed his tongue.

For the hearing you can change it to a robbery or something more likely to happen.

As for the teacher hitting him that would not happen. He is both blind and deaf so he would need very specialised care to be able to learn and anyone that is specialised for that would not be prone to violence.
I recommend changing it to just cancer or something other illnesses because getting punched will not make you lose your sense of smell.

As for the last one it’s possible to happen though I don’t know why someone like that would possibly be out on the street alone, so maybe falling down and hitting his head or something falling on him would be more appropriate

It would not change anything for the future of the story but it would improve the quality of it if you edit it that way or something similar.

BlueSkies: There's hardly a story worth reading about 12 chapters in and there's no character or world development just horrendous word dumps on character gameplay elements that aren't even introduced well; the typical game breaking VR template with a kid who finds a magical ring that lets him hack into the game that his daddy wouldn't buy him and equip things IRL to flex in front of his classmates about how strong he is and not to judge a book by its cover. Combat is essentially my attributes were better> (system log exp rewards)
Maybe next life you rabbits will see Mt Tai!

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