I must say, I like where this story ended up! XD My kind of ending there. Poor Edward; he is so abused. He's quite pleased that you allowed him to even things out in the end. I would never have been so nice.

Wow that was a real fun story! I wasn't really expecting that ending, but I saw it coming as soon as Ed stopped tickling her. The story was fairly short but the ending was sugary sweet and the beginning was very funny, so that's really all that matters. Keep up the great work!

Excellent! That would so happen and your description is fantastic! Though i'm thinking reading funny fics like this during your lunch break at work isn't the best thing to do as you tend to get some weird looks as you laugh you're head off :P