Nice write up, one thing that HAS to be reinforced is the scoring of the outer jacket. If you even so much as nick the insulation on an inner conductor cut it off and start over. The internal insulation is VERY sensitive to heat and a hole will develop in the insulation when soldering, this will allow contact with the foil and cause reliability issues.

I get these from a local electronics supply for $.80. The shield terminal isn't as nice as the one pictured above, but they come with a coiled strain relief that was unfortunately too small to fit over the fat wire I have here.