The first Haiku is great and the Tanka is very simple and pleasing. The biopoem was very well written. Good job. If you wanted to, you could put your limerick on here so that we have more to read.

On March 11, 2009 at 6:27 pm niliak mucoy said:

Try to use a more descriptive word than pink on your biopoem. Love the poem about Mrs. Follis’s husband!! haha. The tanka about peanut butter and jelly was really good! It made me want to be five years old again. LOVE IT!

On March 16, 2009 at 4:07 pm erin hargis said:

good haiku. the tanka is funny and very appealing to read.

On March 19, 2009 at 6:24 pm Patrick Star said:

Loved the tanka! My favorite that I’ve read so far. PBJ all the way. I like how the first haiku is thought provoking. The second one was amusing because it was about Mrs. Follis’s husband but I don’t think I liked it very much. That could also just be because it’s a really gross thing, and not the writing. I think it just doesn’t feel ‘poetic’ to me.

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