There's good stuff here but I'd say your biggest problem is choice of timbre, not a fan of piano or really any of the synths. Percussion sounds okay but yeah bit constant/predictable. Some parts of the track seem to move along nicely but some just pain in my ears. Composition seems a bit slow/uninteresting but keep working on it, you have to read a lot, production is understanding composition/music theory/software/hardware/etc/etc/etc/etc

But yeah definitely let me know what I sound like I'm still just learning too.