I used to really like this, but it seems like your intention now is to make Stevie completely heartless. I mean, is Stevie jealous of Zander and Lucy? Does Gravity Five actually want Stevie back in the least? Do they think that things are really different now? The way that Stevie is acting needs some character development, honestly, and I would like to have these questions answered. I think that you could still make this a great story, but I feel like it's all action. No feelings. Stevie might feel like the band doesn't care, but there must be some other feelings still lingering.

Though this is kinda short, I really think it has potential. The plot is creative and I really love when Stevie gets jealous of Lucy and Zander, though I'm not sure if that was exactly your intention. I'm just a Zevie shipper and it's fine if your not, but, all the same, great work.