Hummer Tabs (ver.2)

how bout this in stead for "Hummer" Track No. 4 on the dream?
Drop D tuning
First Riff
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7-8-7---------------7-8-7---7-8-----------------------
------8-7-------7-7-------8---------------------------
----------10-10---------------------------------------
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Second (less distorted) riff
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11/\11---11~~~---11/\11---12~~~-11/\11---11~--11/\11---12----
-------------------------------------------------------9-----
9-/\9----9~~~~---9-/\9----10~~~-9-/\9----9~~--9-/\9----10----
-------0----------------0--------------0------------0--------
solo then
verse:
--0----0----|--0---0---|---
--3----3----|--3---1---|---
--2----2----|--0---0---|---
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next part
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2-2-2-2-2-5-5-5-0/7-7-7--5-5-5--2-2-2--7-7--------------
2-2-2-2-2-5-5-5-0/7-7-7--5-5-5--2-2-2--7-7--------------
2-2-2-2-2-5-5-5-0/7-7-7--5-5-5--2-2-2--7-7--------------
verse again but in the last measure, the last time you play it,
play(distorted):
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2/~10-10-10----
2/~10-10-10----
2/~10-10-10----
then
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0-0-0-0-0-2-2-10-10-10-10-10-0-0-0-2-2-2-5-5-5-5-----
0-0-0-0-0-2-2-10-10-10-10-10-0-0-0-2-2-2-5-5-5-5-----
0-0-0-0-0-2-2-10-10-10-10-10-0-0-0-2-2-2-5-5-5-5-----
play this^^^ twice then
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11-12-12-11-12-11-12-12-7-7-7-7-7-7------------------
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9--10-10-9--10-9--10-10-5-5-5-5-5-5------------------
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three times
solo:
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7/~\7-5--4/\4-------5-7---7/-7-5--7--7/\7---5-4------
---------------5/~7-----5------------------------5---
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----------------8-7----------------------------------
------------7------9-7--7-----9////~~~~~```------<--Slow bend
----5---7-9------------------------------------------
5-7-------------------9------------------------------
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i dont know this next part but i think it goes D-C-G
but it doesnt sound quite right
later do the first soft riff again
then the next solo:
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2-2-2-2-2-2-2/6-6-6-6-6-6-6\0---0---0-0---0---0-----
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more later :)
Striker X