Ok this isn't right at all if your gunna write about a culture at least do some research one the Romani don't have villages there's a reason there known as travelers because they don't settle down two if a rom married a gadjo she would have been disowned and their children as well and third the Romani didn't have royalty please just do a little research first instead of just inventing things it shows nothing but ignorance

Author's Response: Not everything is what it seems. And for the record. Its just a story of someone else's POV.

Just one thing gypsy is not actually the correct name for that race of people it actually can at times be taken as a racial slur hence the saying that person gypt me the correct name is either the rom or Romani which ever you prefer

Author's Response: I prefer sing Gypsy because that's what I liked the best out of everything.

If a character doesn't have flaws they become quite inaccessible. The point of writing fiction especially fan-fiction isn't to play out a world where you're perfect and everyone loves you, it's all about the journey.

If you make somebody untouchable it's pretty much like when you're 7 and you're playing make believe with a friend but the game is unbalanced and no longer fun because regardless of what you do they will magically make themselves better.

Okay, this for me felt really rushed..and im kinda confused right now..? wheres sirius? whats going on? why didnt she talk to him when he was convicted?
:L but i really loved the story and im delighted there's gonna be a sequel:D

Author's Response: Thanx. i have to type up the second one! I only got a few chaps but I'm working on my other story Stealing Cinderella.

I was so happy, to see the new chapter:D
Great as aways, i was a little disappointed that she pushed James away, i really want their strong relationship back again.
Please update as soon as possible.
A x

Author's Response: thanx and i submitted the next chap a day or two ago. it should be up soon. i need to write the next chap though.

OK, on this site I can rarely find any, and I mean rarely any, but I think your story is the best, by far of everything I've read on the site. Please keep adding on to this story, I really can't wait! Write on! :-)

Author's Response: LOL thanx Keri111 i am doing as much as i can right now with college work that needs to be done.

oh my gosh that is so sad ... you have to write more .. you are bloody brilliant for coming up with these ideas i mean how??? you should defiantly write more PLEASE PLEASE please ... you are brilliant so 1010

Author's Response: LOL thanx Vixen. i am in the middle of college work right now so it might take me a bit to get back to writing more for the story.

Reply:
Oh wow, thats so great, i've never seen an author update so fast:D Your such a talented writer, where did you get the inspiration to write this? Who is your favourite character out of all harry potter characters? Amy x

Author's Response: It would be Ginny and Harry. Sirius and Lily and James with Remus. Those are my basic favorite chars. I updated so fast because i already have most of my story written out. I am getting to that point were I am close to were I had stopped writing. I stopped because of College. But I am submitting another chap right now.