I just started reading your story today and its really good! i love how theres always more drama going on all the time! rose and scorp are my favorite couple! i cant wait 2 read more so you must update soon! until next time

~Jacklyn~

Author's Response: THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! its so great to know ppl like my writing, you have no idea! im so glad you like it, and I'm going to update pretty regularly after the vacation period (possibly before then if my second chapter for Lemondrops and Lilys is validated in time) its' pretty short, but again, I'm really glad you like it :)

Author's Response: thanks so much! sry i havnt been on i a while (but u knew that) so i havnt been to r/r but i did take ur advice on that little situation thats comming up in my story and made some editations so yeah...

i think that your story has some good concepts, but being honest, you really need to expand EVERYTHING. chapters need to be longer, characters further developed. also, your sex confusion pregnancy plot is approaching (i know this is harsh) soap opera territory. which isn't always bad. but really, just keep it somewhat in the realm of reality.
that being said, you have a good writing style with a lot of potential and the humor in the story is really great.
good luck, i really do like the story and want you to do well.