The mix isn't terrible but it could use some work. The track as a whole definitely needs a bit more filling to make it more interesting... I only counted about 4 or 5 different sounds - thats not gunna interest people for long. Think about what sounds would complement the tune.. dont be afraid to root around for samples if you're having trouble using synths!

your drums sound clean maybe some more percussion/loops to fill it out, some shuffles inbetween the kicks and snares
the bass needs work..... try splitting the fequencies of ur bass or using sends to add some grit, maybe chorus, etc., also i think u could bring it up in volume!

what u might find is when u beef up the bass ur drums might get drowned out a bit... easy to fix!

your drums sound clean maybe some more percussion/loops to fill it out, some shuffles inbetween the kicks and snares
the bass needs work..... try splitting the fequencies of ur bass or using sends to add some grit, maybe chorus, etc., also i think u could bring it up in volume!

what u might find is when u beef up the bass ur drums might get drowned out a bit... easy to fix!

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As such, I agree that I could maximize it more but I don't want to choke its life out of it.