Check your grammar and punctuation again. Also, MTFs are named [Greek letter]-[number], not just MTF [Greek letter]. Otherwise it looks fine apart from some conversational parts and referring to the SCP as "the SCP" instead of "the object" or something similar. A good rule of thumb for tone that I've observed after reading a bunch of good and bad articles is that if it looks like you'd say it when talking to a friend (unless you and your friend are scientists), or if it sounds colloquial, it's better to change it. The article makes me curious about Blue Tree, which is good IMO, but others' responses may vary.

Thanks. I think I've corrected some of the grosser errors in punctuation and grammar.

No reference to "the SCP" anywhere now. It should be either "the paper" or simply SCP-XXXX is/was/can etc.

I do seem to have issues with drifting into conversational tones, that said this came out better than most. Can I assume you're not referring to the note at the end, as that is meant to be conversational for what I hope are obvious reasons.