Ah, really lovely story. Drake, you're amazing. The story is very cute and colorful. It's just very good to see Cloud, Areith and the other characters reactions. I kept giggling through most of the story -Aerith definition for date :D, the stage scene, the chocobos. Their interactions felt so normal and vivid. It's almost like seeing it in everyday's life. Your expressions for Aerith and Cloud love felt so pure and serene. It's just why they're a perfect couple. Aerith was able to see through the wall that Cloud built around himself, loving what she found and even trying to make him better. Cloud deep loved her with all he got. If this not true love, I don't know what it is.

Emm, just nitpicking. After they leave the arcade, you say " wrapped an arm around her wait ". I think you mean "waist". Also, I felt that using "yeah" multiple times in the end was a bit awkward. Sorry for saying that.

*sigh* I hope that someday when they make a remake of FF VII that they write the scene like you did. Thank you very much for writing this.

Moonlit Rose chapter 1 . 11/9/2009

AW! I loved the ending! So much fluffiness! I really like Cloud and Aerith together and I love how you changed around the date scene with them. You did great with keeping everyone in character! Anyway, great little one-shot! I loved reading every bit of it!

This was a great feel good fluffy story that I so wished happened in the game. I loved every bit about Final Fantasy seven except for Aeris dieing. To this day that scene still makes me cry like a little child and I wished the game went like this to allow them to be happy together. But I digress great story keep up the great work.

Icedragon2k chapter 1 . 11/5/2008

I loved it! Adorable story. If only this actually happened in the game, I would be satisfied for life.

Beeria chapter 1 . 11/2/2008

*sighs* Would it have killed Square to make a super-sweet date scene like this? I mean they let Yuffie kiss him of all people...Damn you Square! xD

This made me happy! You have no idea~ I had been working on a fic like this a while ago but I lost it when my compy crashed, so it was fantastic to read this. I must say, it was also seven BAJILLION times better than mine. It was all very good. I think you captured Cloud and Aeris both very well. The only thing that kind of urked me was the kiss. I was curious as to your view on Cloud's thoughts at the time, and it seemed to lack that.