I thought it was good, I just wished there was more, like what happens next. To be honest I wish they would have carried on the show. Fly and Heath were my favorite couple and I was hopping to see more of them in the other seasons. I think season one would make a good series of books. I just hope, there's more of this story.

c chapter 1 . 2/21/2012

you should totally continue with this don't know what the complication could be but i'm sure you'll think of something and i would love to read it if you do continue

Wow this story has such a good twist! :) It's brilliant! If you can, can you make this into a series it would be great. I love Haeth and Fly they're meant to be together!:)As for a complication maybe have Heath's ex-wife come back for custody of Fiona now that she realised what she had missed or else other secret motives? Sorry I'm no good at complications I'm sure you'l think of a great one. :)