Robert Nickson - Spiral [Ben Parker Remix]

I've produced my first proper track on FL Studio 7 (XXL Edition). I decided to make a remix of one of my favourite tracks ever, Spiral by Robert Nickson. I just love the melody so I thought i'd download the MIDI from MIDI2K and go from there. And I produced this, and I got 8/10 from Tom Colontonio, so hopefully you may think it's OK.