Xanandra wrote:

Facil

00:27:620 (1) - I suggest to move it around x348|y276 to follow (4)'s movement and increase the flow.00:41:232 (1,2,3) - This kind of pattern on red ticks is very hard for beginners. I remember 2 years ago when I was a newbie, these kind of patterns were very difficult. I suggest to only start sliders on white ticks.00:49:843 (3,4,5) -You can maybe try to have some blankets here maybe ? It'll looks a bit cleaner.00:59:009 (1,2,3) - This pattern is also on red ticks, but you can make the sliders starts on white ticks, it's not a problem here since there's always a beat on these notes :

01:20:954 (1) - The curves at the start and the end of the slider are ugly, you need to decrease a bit these curves to makes them looks good :

01:25:398 (4) - If I follow your NC logics, this objects needs to be a new combo02:10:120 (2,3,4) - This pattern can be on white ticks, it's not a problem here (also the NC need to be on 02:10:120 (2))02:18:732 (3) - You need to add a NC here02:27:898 (2,3,4) - Same as above, you should move this on white ticks (and move the NC on 02:27:898 (2))02:37:620 (1) - This NC should be moved on 02:36:787 (4)02:44:565 (1) - There's a problem on this slider : the NC should be at 02:45:398. It's important to have something clickable when new combo should start, because it means there's a finish or/and an emphasized beat. I suggest this :

02:54:287 (4) - You should add a NC here.03:03:176 (4) - ^03:34:009 (1) - I guess a lot of people will fail here because it starts on a red tick. You should maybe map here 03:33:17603:56:509 (4) - You need to add a NC here

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00:29:287 (1) - This slider isn't placed at the best position since the NC should start at 00:29:843, so I suggest to use 2 circles instead and put the NC on the second one.00:31:509 (1) - Same problem for this slider.00:47:343 (3) - You should add a new combo on this slider to follow your NCs logics.00:56:509 (3,3) - ^01:18:454 (4) - You need to add a NC on this slider and delete the one at 01:19:565 (1) 01:25:676 (3) - You need to add a NC here too01:36:232 (4,1) - Same as above, you need to reverse the NC.01:43:454 (3) - Add another NC here.02:16:232 (3) - ^02:25:398 (3) - ^02:32:621 (1) - You should reverse this slider's curve in my opinion to make its movement goes to 02:33:732 (2), and then it'll increase the flow :

I'm sorry for all these NC suggestions... The combo are a not very logical in this difficulty, and that's the only problem here, that's why there's only suggestion about it ;w;

Dificil

00:23:732 (2,3) - You can maybe try to add a blanket here ?00:45:676 (2) - I don't really see why you added a hitsound here, there's no emphasized beat on the song so it's quite absurd to add a histound without any reason here00:55:954 (5) - Still the same problem in this slider : the NC should be on his tail. I suggest to make it a 1/2 slider and add a circle with a NC at 00:56:509.01:09:565 (3) - Same thing here (but the NC should be on 01:09:843, so maybe add a circle and a 1/2 slider at 01:09:843 with the NC ?)01:13:176 (4,5) - You can maybe try to make them blanket ?01:14:009 (5) - Same thing about the NC, it should be at 01:14:28701:18:454 (5) - Even if the NC should be on 01:18:732, I think it's justified to have this slider on red ticks. But you have to add a NC on it.01:25:676 (4) - You can also add another NC here 01:31:787 (5) - Here it's more problematic. You need to have the NC on 01:32:065 here.01:36:509 (4) - Add a new combo here please.01:43:454 (5) - ^02:15:120 (4,5,6) - If you look at (5)'s circleoverlay (see the picture below), you'll see the blanket isn't perfect, so try to move (5) or to change a bit the slider.

Kenterz wrote:

Hey, as requested :3

Facil

00:27:620 (1) - I suggest to move it around x348|y276 to follow (4)'s movement and increase the flow. I like how it flow, and looks better as it is in my opinion. That's why I'll keep it.00:41:232 (1,2,3) - This kind of pattern on red ticks is very hard for beginners. I remember 2 years ago when I was a newbie, these kind of patterns were very difficult. I suggest to only start sliders on white ticks. But I have changed the transition in the previous 1/2 slider, I did that to use all these over the red ticks. In addition the instrumental sounds higher than the vocals to me and I wanted to represent that.00:49:843 (3,4,5) -You can maybe try to have some blankets here maybe ? It'll looks a bit cleaner. Hmm.. naah.. I like how it looks xD00:59:009 (1,2,3) - This pattern is also on red ticks, but you can make the sliders starts on white ticks, it's not a problem here since there's always a beat on these notes : Same as before.

01:20:954 (1) - The curves at the start and the end of the slider are ugly, you need to decrease a bit these curves to makes them looks good : yeah.. I think you're right xD.. Fixed.

01:25:398 (4) - If I follow your NC logics, this objects needs to be a new combo Added.02:10:120 (2,3,4) - This pattern can be on white ticks, it's not a problem here (also the NC need to be on 02:10:120 (2)) Kept the pattern but fixed the comboing.02:18:732 (3) - You need to add a NC here Done.02:27:898 (2,3,4) - Same as above, you should move this on white ticks (and move the NC on 02:27:898 (2)) Same as before.02:37:620 (1) - This NC should be moved on 02:36:787 (4) Hmm.. k02:44:565 (1) - There's a problem on this slider : the NC should be at 02:45:398. It's important to have something clickable when new combo should start, because it means there's a finish or/and an emphasized beat. I suggest this : that's true but I wanted to simplify this pattern, is a slow part and I didn't find coherent having two 1/2 sliders in this section. I think I can keep this part as it is, even so I'll wait for some more opinions.

02:54:287 (4) - You should add a NC here. 03:03:176 (4) - ^ Both added.03:34:009 (1) - I guess a lot of people will fail here because it starts on a red tick. You should maybe map here 03:33:176 Hmm.. I don't think a people can fail after a looooong break, I mean the most important section starts over the red tick and I can't do anything with that :/. In addition I changed this off-beat quickly in the rest of this section.03:56:509 (4) - You need to add a NC here Done.

Dificil

00:23:732 (2,3) - You can maybe try to add a blanket here ? I think this flows better xD00:45:676 (2) - I don't really see why you added a hitsound here, there's no emphasized beat on the song so it's quite absurd to add a histound without any reason here If you listen to the music properly, you'll notice the sound in the guitar in (1) is the same one in (2) that's why I've used the double finish in there.00:55:954 (5) - Still the same problem in this slider : the NC should be on his tail. I suggest to make it a 1/2 slider and add a circle with a NC at 00:56:509. But it doesn't make sense to me.. I mean all the phrase that the singer made are long phrases.. In this case he said ''las de ooooovnis'' you can notice the ''o'' is longer than the rest, having a 1/2 here is not the solution in my opinion.01:09:565 (3) - Same thing here (but the NC should be on 01:09:843, so maybe add a circle and a 1/2 slider at 01:09:843 with the NC ?) Same explanation.. ''y el alcohoooool''01:13:176 (4,5) - You can maybe try to make them blanket ? naah.. as you can notice I'm not that exquisite with blankets xD01:14:009 (5) - Same thing about the NC, it should be at 01:14:287 Same.. don't focus in downbeats nor anything, check the way I'm following the music and I'm sure you'll notice what I'm doing.01:18:454 (5) - Even if the NC should be on 01:18:732, I think it's justified to have this slider on red ticks. But you have to add a NC on it. I'll have this one in consideration, because makes sense but I don't want a small combo xd.. I'll decide later.01:25:676 (4) - You can also add another NC here Same here.01:31:787 (5) - Here it's more problematic. You need to have the NC on 01:32:065 here. Same as before ''ya no es un hogaaaar'' a long ''a'' and I'm representing that.01:36:509 (4) - Add a new combo here please. Same as before.01:43:454 (5) - ^ ^02:15:120 (4,5,6) - If you look at (5)'s circleoverlay (see the picture below), you'll see the blanket isn't perfect, so try to move (5) or to change a bit the slider. Fixed!

02:16:232 (6) - Add a NC here to follow your NC logics please. 02:20:676 (4) - ^02:34:009 (6) - ^02:38:454 (5) - ^02:42:898 (6) - ^02:47:343 (6) - ^02:54:565 (3) - ^03:00:676 (6) - ^03:05:120 (4) - ^03:12:343 (5) - ^Many NCs here which doesn't follow your logics, and I think it's important to follow the same NC pattern on the whole diff.03:36:232 (5) - NC here03:40:676 (5) - ^03:45:398 (4) - ^03:49:009 (3) - ^03:54:009 (4) - ^03:58:454 (4) - ^04:03:176 (5) - ^04:06:787 (3) - ^ About the NCs I'll keep them for now, because if you see properly my combo'ing I tried to use long combos becuase I avoid some downbeats because I didn't find them really important and if you check them again they are consistent during the difficulty. Even so, this is the first mod, so I'll wait for others to see what they think.

Same as in the Normal, I noticed a lot of NC issues. The map is really good and polished, there's only the NCs you have to fix

Good luck for rank :3

Thanks for modding! It was helpful, even so I hope the denied stuff can help you to make your mods even better !Updated my diffs! (Waiting for Xanandra )

Kenterz wrote:

Hey, as requested :3

Intermedio

00:29:287 (1) - This slider isn't placed at the best position since the NC should start at 00:29:843, so I suggest to use 2 circles instead and put the NC on the second one.00:31:509 (1) - Same problem for this slider.What you say is true, but for this second "repetition'' of the intro, I wanted to follow the rhythm a bit differently, and as far as I kinow, when this kind of stuff happens, comboing them this way iks the way to go

00:47:343 (3) - You should add a new combo on this slider to follow your NCs logics.00:56:509 (3,3) - ^01:18:454 (4) - You need to add a NC on this slider and delete the one at 01:19:565 (1) 01:25:676 (3) - You need to add a NC here too01:36:232 (4,1) - Same as above, you need to reverse the NC.01:43:454 (3) - Add another NC here.02:16:232 (3) - ^02:25:398 (3) - ^All done

02:32:621 (1) - You should reverse this slider's curve in my opinion to make its movement goes to 02:33:732 (2), and then it'll increase the flow :

02:16:509 (2) - You can make the shape a bit cleaner. The curved part is uneven, making the corner have a bit of a weird bump. You can clean it up by moving the second point so it's equidistant from the first and third: http://puu.sh/d1fUB/24c1997714.jpg

03:09:843 (2) - Same suggestion as 00:47:620 (2)

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Why no kiai time? Add it to match the other diffs?

00:26:232 (2) - Try a more interesting shape for this slider? The electric guitar has a cool "growling" effect on this note, so it'd be cool to have a different slider shape to go with it.

00:34:009 (1) - This is difficult for the player to anticipate, as they will likely expect to play on the downbeat, whereas this is before the downbeat. I recommend either removing this circle or changing the rhythm like so: http://puu.sh/d1knW/180ba933d0.jpg as the slider will help show them where the downbeat really is.

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[Facil]

00:47:620 (2) - I feel like this will flow smoother between (1) and (3) if you turn the curves in the opposite way: http://puu.sh/d1eXv/f44bee43a0.jpgI didn't like that much this :/.. I'll wait for some more opinions.

01:38:732 (1) - Use some slider shape to add emphasis to the beat on the repeat? Maybe like http://puu.sh/d1fnQ/118e6915a7.jpg or any other shape that puts emphasis on the syncopated beat. Ok.. Made something here.

02:16:509 (2) - You can make the shape a bit cleaner. The curved part is uneven, making the corner have a bit of a weird bump. You can clean it up by moving the second point so it's equidistant from the first and third: http://puu.sh/d1fUB/24c1997714.jpgYeah.. Fixed a bit

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[Intermedio]

Why no kiai time? Add it to match the other diffs?Forgot to add.

00:26:232 (2) - Try a more interesting shape for this slider? The electric guitar has a cool "growling" effect on this note, so it'd be cool to have a different slider shape to go with it.Im not an slider artist, and Ill never be, and this will not change, so sorry

00:34:009 (1) - This is difficult for the player to anticipate, as they will likely expect to play on the downbeat, whereas this is before the downbeat. I recommend either removing this circle or changing the rhythm like so: http://puu.sh/d1knW/180ba933d0.jpg as the slider will help show them where the downbeat really is.Will wait for more opinions on this one