So. Your descriptions are lovely, especially for the gold vine, and I'm interested by how different Sin is to Hermione, even though they both (god, I'm talking about them like they're different people!) are intellectual. Nature versus nurture, and all that.

I really like that sense of security you get us into until BAM! Random guys turn up who know who she is. It's fun. I'd honestly thought this was going to be a nice fluffy chapter. XD
It's all very interesting and suspenseful now.

Anyway. I'll admit this isn't the longest review in the world, sadly, but good luck with this and happy writing, it's got potential. :)

Author's Response: While brainstorming Sin ( originally she wasn't Hermione, but the first draft she fit the role better than the other notion I had...) I kept thinking of if Hermione were to grow up different, or have all of her past erased how would she be? It turned out far more interesting than I thought it would lol. Thank you so very much, I hope you come back to read the next chapter. :3