New music video/short film

Hi guys. I just completed a new music video/short film and would like some honest feedback. I am planning to submit to several festivals and would like to hear what the filmmaking community has to say about my work.

This might just be the sort of thing some festivals might really go for. I found it intriguing in a strange way. I found I got hooked by watching the wobbly bits in slow mo, then found you have to watch it to the end to see what she was trying to tell people.

I was a bit disappointed that the end wasn't a little bit surreal like there was a giant fish or something.

yeah i agree with Tim. The characters were great and I thought it was really funny... Up until the end. Try looking into Andrew Kramer and Video Co-Pilot (they're the same thing). He does some great tutorials on creating a half decent explosion, smoke, sky replacement etc! Well done, cinematography was great!