I think you should lift up your body a bit more and fix your posture. The last two dances have really nice music, try to feel the music a little bit more and dont look down enjoy every move you do. You have great potential keep up the good work.

Try and turn out ur feet more. Ur leg is too low in ur retire positions and on ur fouettes.Pull up so u can sustain at the end of ur jumps instead of falling before u finish the turn. Pointe ur feet and work on them using a theraband to strengthen them.In ur attitude derriere ur leg is not crossed behind you. Try jumping higher in ur temp leves. Work on ur supporting leg and u have an arched back in many situations. Ur arms r too tense and ur shoulders r up. PLace ur arms more accurately.