Just re-read this and it's still amazing! I saw on your profile that you are trying to publish a real live book. Congrats and good luck! That's so awesome; you certainly have the talent. If it gets to the bookstores please let us readers know the title and where to find it! I hope you'll revisit your fics someday and update this beauty though. In my opinion, this is probably the best BowserxPeach fic out there (and I've read quite a few).