Nice attempt at rhyming! I caught a couple in there! And also great poem. It shows no matter how you hate someone, you could always find something in your heart to care for them. After all, we all are God's own

really good poem.. I like it a lot. it has a good rhyming scheme.. rhymes make me happy. Also, the rhythm of the lines is nice, it flows well :)

I also really like the emotion behind it.. the grumbling and whining about how people are so mean sometimes, and God's gentle reminder to love others, and for those of us who have no sin to cast the first stone.