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This is really confusing... Maybe I just don't undestand the 'meaning' or 'reason' of this peice. It would really help if you added a different font as well, maybe even Times New Roman and centered would work, however both Macs and Windows have tons of fonts, and if you can't find one you like, you could easily down load one off of a site such as da.font.

It looks like the page was cut off, on the bottom line there is an 'y,' which makes it look like it was page cut off something.

Possibly next time try a gradient for the background... It helps to spice up the picture a lot.