What a great start to a story. I was intrigued from the first sentence. The description painted a vivid scene in my head so great job with that. Im anxious to see where this is going. I'm gonna add this to my favs when i sign in.

Please update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Sorry I didn't respond earlier. I want to set up a regular update schedule with this story but this is the busiest time of year for me so I don't know how well that'll go, unfortunately. I do plan to post something again soon, though. I hope you continue enjoying the story!