First off, Fuck @riffic and his English degree
Syllable and still a fool rhyme perfectly
Now for sucka I brought some ammo since he wants to war wit' me
The strap feels like a torrent how I got clips for Free
I know how I quit the league is an angle he'll be using
But now I'm motivated for a body like a New Years resolution
He's gon' put his dumbass on camera, and call that shit brave
But thats just let's me know who I'm puttin' in the grave
There is no comparison, I will embarrass him
Ill let him see the light first like he's Edison
Cuz when I'm on my game n in the mood ta hurt shit
No trick shot, but they say that Dude Perfect
See you write them soft raps how you the type ta blaze a noodle
That's why I never click your shit, like the second page of Google
But if I only whip his ass he's gonna wanna bicker more
So I'll put the heat to Cashier like I'm knocking off the Liqour store
You say you got that nine, well this a big rocket
Bump me n get the steel(steal), call that a pickpocket
Hes gon' talk about that gunplay so his rappin tight
But LeBrons the only one that be clappin' white
You ain't banging shit, that whole act is strange
Cashiers don't keep it one hundred, it's their job to change
He talks about them shooters but this geek lies
I'm street wise, it's not basic science when this heat rise
He wear a name tag he dont know them soldiers
If Cashier working with the K he just clocked in at Krogers
Now I coulda used that blade n gave him big knife slices
But I'd rather let that 40 change him like a mid life crisis

You are not in my league, but speakin of leagues…
He’d quit by week two, but by week two I was lookin for a bye week too
Even try me dude n this a end worse than hisrhyme schemes do
Fuck and intro this is the match he killed for
So imma skip to a swing like Happy Gilmore
I don’t care about bucks in ya raps n the slugs you gon clap
I’d rather count on my hands like I struggle with math
You told trey he couldn’t kick it in dallas if he was Dan Bailey
Well I’m here to push your whole corner back like Champ Bailey
Ya plan failin, I’ve got em one by one, they cascading
Everybody who wants it’ll have a run in with the devil – that’s Van Halen
And I got OCD, so hopefully you’ll get set straight
When that tech spray itta leave bones exposed like an x ray
You best wait cuz we warrin G, this how I regulate
When I make em mmmm, youd think they tryin a meditate
I can feel ya breakin cuz you are really basic
When my punches hit em - it’s like a realization
For that steal ya sprayin is only a part of your “simile contests”
That’s whack bitch you lack grit to assimilate concepts
Rap is about more than just punches, even if all of em strong
Can you imagine blanc at a live battle? You think this doll would belong?
I can see him passin out lyrics to the crowd “try and follow along”
N then ditch out after a couple a bars screamin ALL OF YA WRONG
If we met in real life something would happen? You’d be fuckin attackin?
Nah, all your fighting happens up here – that’s dungeons and dragons
And when sucka is rappin, I can see it in his eyes
That he’s speakin in disguise so this beating is your prize
When I see to his demise like the treaty of Versailles
After fourteen points, a peace a rise from each of my allies
Or I got a switchblade that a switch back, ribs cracked, pull his wig back
Look like a Picasso painting, even a skin graft won’t fix that
Switch that, if this clown got deadly rhymes he’ll get dismantled quick
I’ll be pullin arms like pennywise, he can’t handle IT
I’m King of the rappin shit, there’s no savin now
I brought something to pop on white head if he breakin out
I take it out, I’m fucked in the head, you best be ready for the box
Break it down, buck to his head, can I get a penny for his thoughts
It’s done, It’s over, finishing combo
If it acts like a bitch and it acts like a bitch and it quacks like a bitch, it’s probably blanco

Sucka had way better lines in this battle (pulling arms like Pennywise). I liked that he clowned Blanco as well. Ran out of breath a bit in lines and went too fast, but still, pretty solid writing and I liked trying to add some performance into it.

Blanco's voice, maybe just do to the recording, was a lot crisper, but his cadence was off. Felt like the punches were never getting accentuated and that modifying your inflexion a bit would make a big difference.

So, bar wise, Sucka clearly, and rapping wise I'd consider it even. Would've liked if Blanco did a video as well; feels weird only seeing one of you perform.

Will break down more material later. For now, vote: Sucka.

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Originally Posted by pityposter

Its called battle rap, not battle skin.

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Hell yeah, about to smoke some weed from my special gandalf replica pipe and watch this

Well I do like Sucka's closer line better. Voted for Sucka. If he did a video battle then why did Blanco only do an audio? Most of us on here wouldn't be afraid to show our faces no matter what we look like.

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Ain't no real rappers that want to step to me Son! Theses rappers are more softer than a sesame seed bun. Speaking of seeds Star Almighty's Mom is digesting these nuts and up next to roast you guys is ekelon nope forget it he sucks!

first off i feel this is another step in up in quality (after you came with your best audio outing against me) addition of more mulits defiantly helped. the flow on the first 4 bars sounded a little robotic but after that it was all pretty nice. despite your relativly slow flow shit didnt get boring. bar wise, opener was decent. torrent was ok. new years res was wild.

the talking about him being on camera did nothing for me. it is far more enjoyable to see the person and hear the shit, i cant see why you wont do a video battle....if you cant jump on cam and out swag sucka in his xmas jumper, what are you doing with your life.

edison bar really lacked a multi, with the comparison/embarrass him lead in it needed a multi to really hit. bar was meh anyway but would have worked better. dude perfect was solid, i dont know what blazing a noodle is but as a set up it was bad. liqour store bar was ok, but i liked the delivery and rhyme a lot so that made it hit hard. pickpocket was cool.

lebron line was a solid punch again slightly spoiled by the set up. the its their job to change bar was a real good concept. heat rise was nice. krogers was ok and the closer was probably my favourite bar of your verse.

performance wise i thought this was a step back from our battle. shit was rushed and your breath cdontrol was off in a few places, slowing shit down a pinch would probably help that. with that being said the whole rhyme scheme that lead up to the treaty of Versailles bar was bonkers and probably the best delivery ive seen from you. also it kinda sounds like your trying to be a bit quite, like there could be other people in the house? a bit more aggression or conviction defo wouldnt go amiss

solid opener, happy gilmore bar was fire, struggle with math was nice. football bars i dont get. van halen was dope. next two were both nice little jabs. and the warrin g and meditate bars are both fire but the rushed delivery took away from their impact. realization was cool. rhymes on the next two were nice, live event shit was funny. dungeons and drageons was ok.

next four was bonkers and its just a shame you didnt get the rest of the verse out as smooth. nie rhymes on the next two. cant handle it was a fuckin bar!white head breaking out was ok, the "im the king of rapping" in the set up was cringy though, writing on the next two was real nice, punch was solid. and yeah the closer was funny as fuck.

overall- i thought blanco was more consistant flow wise, but the small point where sucka was on showed he can be the better rapper. punches were pretty even, not a lot of misses from either side. suckas writing more cleaner though, and blancos slow flow just leads to him not having as many bars as the people hes facing. sucka fit in like 10 more bars in a video that was only 15 or so seconds longer. that shit adds up. so in a close battle i got sucka taking it

edit - oh yeah, theres a rough version of a song i rcorded the other day up in the song contest thread in the yard, feedback would be apprciated

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After battling a professional rapper like Dank and btw he's the only real professional I ever battled, I'm not going back to battling trash like this wack troll weirdo.

found your flow a bit slow and robotic in some parts. you didn't convince me with that opening rhyme and worse yet english degree /perfectly was a very awkward rhyme. between the opener and the very basic brave/grave lines it took a bit to get into that verse. that bein said once you got rollin you did have some great punches in here - the ones that stood out were the cashiers dont keep in 100 and the new years resolution bar. most of the rest of the material I fucked with too.

sucka- somethin was a bit off about the delivery, hard to tell if it was bad audio or some slurring, or maybe a bit of both, but it definitely could have been better or at least clearer. As far as writing - there was some very intricate shit in this. there were not an overwhelming number of heavy punches, but they were there.

overall i would edge delivery slightly to blanco (but both could have been better) punches is tough, I think sucka had more, but blanco's were more memorable. as far as overall writing sucka was better - just shit like the treaty of Versailles multi sound slick in comparison to the brave/grave rhymes. In text I would gives this to sucka pretty clearly, but in audio it was much closer. Luck for sucka Im someone who prefers that writing style, otherwise it might have been different. but I see this as a narrow victory for sucka.

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someone explain to me how having your little sister's kiddiepictures is an insult?