Oddly enough, Anh, I noticed this today of all days, when Benevolen and Umia are in your script submitted to Comixtribe's TPG and to which I've provided the blue-fonted edits. Seeing how you've designed your characters and now knowing what your art style is like, I can honestly say your script hasn't done your art justice. Feel free to contact me at editors.eye.view@gmail.com after you've read my edits to your script.

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Wow, thanks for stopping by here Steve . This week's instalment of TPG doesn't appear to be out yet (Steven probably has his hands full moving into his new house) but I know that I still have a lot to learn about comic script writing so I'm expecting my script will get a good hammering this time around too. I will definitely email you once I've had a read - thanks for taking the time .

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