Revised Tip

This was my previous tip that I made and now I'm going to pump it up. Juan - My last writing tip is to have your own personal voice. Express your personality and have a conversation with an authur and try not to make your story so boring that no one will like to read it. When I mean your own personal voice I mean showing expression on your writing and honoring your punctuation ,meaning to slow down on your writing. Don't let anyone judge you about your writing and be proud of what you wrote about.

This is my revised version,

My last writing tip is to have your ownpersonal voice. Express your personality and have a conversation with an authur and to try not to make the story you wrote boring so that no one will ever read your writing. When I'm talking about your personal voice I mean showing expression in your writing and don't forget to honor your punctuation, meaning to slow down and to stop and rest in your punctuation. Don't let nobody make fun or judge your writing. Be proud of what you write about and the only one who can be proud of it is you.