Sitting here with a coffee aftertaste, I really enjoy that you could capture that within the first sentence and draw me in. I like how you play with renewal because the bathroom is dark but the mirrors are newly washed, is it morning or is it still a late night? I like that a lot because it also adds an interesting spin to a place not usually associated with renewal. You can find it in the oddest of places...

I like how you can describe a bathroom in a take-away joint and on the other side of the globe I can picture it perfectly. This was great, I really got a strong image from it. And a yearning for coffee all of a sudden. Hmm.