I may or may not actually use this character, but she was my first try at drawing manga with tips from the book Mastering Manga by *markcrilley I didn't go through any specific walk through, but I flipped through the pages for help with face's layout. The eyes actually are green, but the scan didn't work out so well. Haha, anyway, please give me tips and help, since I'm still learning. ^^

Very nice! I like her expression, and you did a pretty good job on the anatomy of the face. The way you colored her hair looks cool, too. One thing that looks a little off is that the left ear and the right eye are too big. A trick to help make sure your drawing is symmetrical is to look at your sketch reversed in a mirror before you color it to check if anything looks off. Also, I like how you colored her bangs, but toward the middle of her hair where her part is it should get darker. Her jaw looks a tiny bit strange, too. I thing it's a little too high up and pointy. Other than that, this looks very good. Keep up the great work!