9 comments on “NaPoWriMo, Day 21 or so (Day 29 for Everyone Else)”

This is really nice, almost haikuish in the the feel if one can look beyond the length. I love the play on syllables exchanging consonants in the first and second stanza. besides alliteration, does that play have a technical name in poetry? Water color clouds, and green fingered hands works magically. — Beautiful

Thank you, Reno. Interesting question you ask about sounds–and after thinking about it pretty hard, I suppose the term we’re looking for is “rhyme”! That doesn’t occur to me naturally since I don’t use exact rhyme very often at all, so the term as well as the use of it, is pretty unfamiliar to me. Thanks for your thought-provoking comment.