Plagiarism? That's no good. It's alright to be inspired by something, but blatantly copying it isn't right. Though I'm not sure how much Flaredrick copied...

I'm still thinking of the rap between Shadow and Dark Pit. Meanwhile, I need you guys to comment about my previous Sonic vs. Mario fight! Pretty much Axilus was the only person who gave me any actual critique or advice...

No need for the punishment, it's just more fun to read (And more satisfying for you) once you make one from scratch.

Tip: Since these rap battles are not in videos, try to make the rhymes obvious. Keep moments where a word must be mispronounced a certain way in order to flow and rhyme at a minimum. I use some, but it's rare because I know people don't read it that way by default.

There are some cool ideas out here, but nothing I can make rap about. One important thing in rap battles, at least for me, is to be able to connect the characters well enough to have them effectively insult each other.

Vezon: My name is vezon, cant you see? two masks on my head, soon to be three! Yea I'm too cool to even be sain, Cuz I got the ignika, and it's fused to my brain! Now you Toa inka, you don't stand a chance Cuz I have fen-rakk, fused to my hand! I am the best skakdi out of em all, cuz I'm a 10 out of 10, now fenfakk will take a bite of 'yall.

Inka: Now listen here vezon, you must be insain, if you think you can defeat us for your own personal gain! Now that big spider, he dont scare us! Even if he is four times bigger than us, Now we didn't turn all the paraka into worms, just so we could hear your lame little words! Now stand aside, so we can get by. so we can get that mask so mata nui wont die!

Vezon: Didn't you dummies hear what I said? I told you that it was fused to my head!

(inka kill vezon)

Inka: Take that you monsterous duo! Thank the GB's we dont need to smell your B-O!

(vezon rises... again)

Vezon: I'm indestructable

a colectable

and even un-detectable

respectable

look kardas there delectable

and this mask is unobtainable.

(CHOMP)

Vezon: look at me now! I'm bigger and badder! you inka are sadder than big bird or mad hatter!