I made an index for my retelling of The Horse and His Boy, and almost everything I have to share this week is part of that retelling.

First I had another fic fragment that goes along with what Ana Mardoll’s The Horse and His Boy deconstruction is currently covering. In it Shasta asks Corin where Susan is and finds most of what Corin says incomprehensible (for good reason.)

Then I went back to the beginning and wrote the start of my story with no gaps between fragments: