Very nice. This could easily be a short play / animation. This reminds me of another quote from Jim Rohn, a motivational speaker. He said “Be careful who you become in pursuit of what you want.” In this particular case, once you get there, you should re-evaluate your life to see that you have not strayed from the person you began as. Anyway, once again, very nice. You’re very talented and I’m sure your success is imminent.