crazy_son: Thx for vthe chapter i know you can't just change the story but can you please not make the pheonix and the force a barrier to the mc itvjust feels bad when a thing to make the mc powerful is used to limit him and tell him he can't do any thing. I am not saying you have to do it i will still continue reading this even if you dont do it, it just gets frustrating sometimes. Anyway thanks for the chspter again.

Don_Dokhmesy: So you just want me to write that Jon met the Greybeards and they got along, now to action? I mean, a profound conversation with the Greybeards about the Way of the Voice is the least you can expect from me.

davidharms: Don has don it again. seriously the best part of this novel is the times Don takes an element of the story of the elder scrolls universe fleshes them out into what they deserve to be. instead of the cardboard cut outs they originally were