Sense of vertigo for me, I'm curious how a slightly darkened vignette might work? Is there room to move the porch floor off mid-frame?

Nit: the numbers appear to me, and you know I'm anal about these things, out of sync with the door frame - too clear, too vertical (almost is if on a vertical plane by themselves) as the frame recedes to the back - perhaps an artifact of the spherical nature of a Lensbaby (never having used one myself)?

Sense of vertigo for me, I'm curious how a slightly darkened vignette might work? Is there room to move the porch floor off mid-frame?

Nit: the numbers appear to me, and you know I'm anal about these things, out of sync with the door frame - too clear, too vertical (almost is if on a vertical plane by themselves) as the frame recedes to the back - perhaps an artifact of the spherical nature of a Lensbaby (never having used one myself)?

That all said, a very nice image - evokes an eerie atmosphere.

Bob
Bob
Thanks for the suggestions. I am torn about the mid-frame floor. And I think your comment about the numbers is a good one. I could selectively blur the numbers for more mood.
Scott

Hi Scott. I didn't mean put it in a photo show. I was talking specifically to look at a print, sometimes it can give you a different perspective than what you see on the computer screen. I print most of my own photos, so I sometimes just print out a 8 x 12 just to have a look at them.