I love your story! Its funny and cute. And thank you for reviewing my story too and i added the finishes too it and srry for the late reply since i don't know how to PM yet and I like to know if I should write another story to it. and keep up the good work :D

Guest chapter 2 . 4/21/2008

the story's really freaking awesome! :-D

but i'm also really wondering about what happens next. what happens to Dade, what happens to the case Kate and Date were working on, what happens to this guy that just calls up Kate to threaten her and her family, all that stuff. everything that hasn't been written yet.

Dude, that ending is not in the character of kate. She would not have let things go just that easly, scared by a single phone call. Anyway if you want a nice long story out of it, you could continue it and have her rescue her family. Also it would be easy to add Dade into the pic.

I can see huge potential for your story if you would continue it. I liked what I saw in chapter one, I would love to see more.

WAT? KATE LIBBY (ANGELINA jOLIE) WOULD NEVER GIVE UP, ESPECIALLY NOT WITHOUT A FITE! wow, DIDI U MAKE A BIG TURN IN THIS STORY! & SHE WOULD NEVER B A LESBIAN! SHE LOVES DADE! ANGELINA JOLIE MARRIED THE GUY WHO PLAYED HIM IN THE MOVIE CUZ THEY'RE SO IN LOVE! ANYWAYZ, IT WASN'T 2 BAD. IT WAS ACTUALLY PRETTY GOOD TILL THE SECOND CHAPPIE. U SHOULD MAKE A 3RD WERE SHE FINDS THE GUY & KICKS HIS A$$! BUT, IF U DON'T WANNA, YUR GONNA HAVE SOME VERY UPSET FANS!