Comic 458 - Blue vs. Green, Page 20

Author Notes:

Gaaaah, my brain's doing like a zillion things at once right now, lemme see what I can say about this.

I was really annoyed when I realized the team hasn't been running yet, they've just been standing in place. The idea for this whole "rush" is that they're keeping moving so really, really pissed it took this long to get the group barreling on forward. Love that kind of dynamic.

Hm. Crap, the page isn't exactly laid out well enough to show there are two birds. Just sorta looks like that bird changes in form between.... Oh, screw it, fixing this.

.....

There. Added the approaching bird-shapes in the first panel and re-colored the owl so the pair aren't both red. That oughta do it.

Was also getting annoyed at this point how the cyborgs were mostly bailing out the kids. Wasn't how I was trying to make it look but how it was starting to come off, so had Val helping Autumns and getting her costume torn up for it.

Funny thing about that is I really wasn't clear myself on if it was two birds or not. Initially I colored it that way... then decided it was probably just supposed to be one and so made them both red. This color scheme wound up not far off from the originally used one, though.

Really the main thing that stands out to me immediately with this page, though kind of distracted presently. Just kind of funny though, yeah.

I the only one who thinks that bird in the second panel looks kind of No Face-ish? Maybe it's the angle, there's just something about him.