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silverashes says:I KNEW IT. I would just like you to know that as soon as Dom came to the conclusion that she was set up I connected the dots. I suspected bloody Delilah Jones right away. What a bitch. I bet you she just wanted to have a phenomenal article on werewolves, so she set this up because she's a self-riteous *insert insulting adjective here*. I was nearly spitting fire at the end of this chapter. Dom better get her revenge.

Ah, back to the beginning of the chapter (excuse my rant about You-Know-Who). I'm sad that Dom had to get the procedure. I was silently hoping that she would be able to have children in some miraculous instance, but I guess not everything is rainbows and butterflies in life, huh.

P.S. I hope these reviews are continuing to help you! They've gotten a little less structured as I continue reading, so let me know if you want me to change that. At this point I'm just letting your story evoke emotions, and then those emotions make it onto the page!

Author's Response: Hello again! Loving your reviews =)

Haha I am glad you were able to connect the dots. Delilah Jones definitely has her reasons for doing this to Dom and they'll be revealed soon. Of course, nothing can justify her actions, but still. She is indeed a horrific woman. As for what Dom does, you'll have to wait and watch xP

Yeah, it would be too unrealistic if everything was rainbows and butterflies and she got to have children miraculously. Part of what this story is about is Dom dealing with all the "worsts" of becoming a werewolf, so yeah.

Hahaha you're absolutely hilarious. Thank you so much for your lovely reviews. I don't mind the unstructured-ness, in fact I am loving these emotion packed reviews, they make me really happy. Thank you!