Fantastic concept...but shouldn't the "actions" part of the sub not be in a word bubble, but rather written more like a Batman biff! bam! pow!!!! kinda way. Redone and with a possibly different kind of art style or maybe just smaller would warrant a huge score from me. As is, a 2-3.

this reminds me of this talk my class got into.. my friend went past a pasture or farm or something and said "moo" at all the cows and we were wondering what they would say about us.. would they say "words" or would they say "people"?
Thanks for bringing back memories. ^^ $5

This concept is ace! The drawing style isn't working with the concept very well though. It's too corny and zany. Same with the colors. Tone the colors down and try a different drawing style and I would say You're Going to Hollywood. But not just yet.