This was really adorable. I love how you tapped into the theme of Neville's grandmother not being totally confident in his abilities, and how you used his aunt to draw a contrast to that. I can imagine his parents telling him stories about fighting dragons. I also liked Neville's reactions to the various elements in the story, like how confident he was and how excited he was to grow up into a really impressive young man. At least we know that he did end up being strong in the end :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for the review!! I tried to set everything up to explain all the future events so I'm glad it all seemed to work well! :)