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Anthony 100WC – Week 31

I slowly slipped into my testing suit, moving towards the doors. they slid open as I heard over the loudspeaker “Testers for test 1670 please report to the chambers, testers for test 1670 please report to the chambers.” The chambers were cold and abandoned. I stepped in and the door shut behind me as some blue gas filled the air. I drifted off and soon, I found myself back first on the floor. I awoke to a giant dead bee next to me. In my hand was a pipe. I gripped it and poked the bee. The wings twitched, then…

5 thoughts on “Anthony 100WC – Week 31”

What a brilliant 100 word challenge! You have really gone into detail and used adjectives effectively to tell the reader what is happening in your story!
I really like how you have described the chambers as ‘cold’ and ‘abandoned’ because I really picture what they look like .
Well done and thank you for sharing

Well done great adjectives but there is one thing to work on the start of the second sentence, you need to add a capital letter. You need to use a different openers than I, the and they try to use a ed, ing or ly opener.

Thanks for all the feedback guys. I really enjoyed writing this 100WC. I will keep on writing 100 word challenges for fun and I will keep on improving. I read over my work 5 times and I still made that mistake? Wow 🙂
Have you ever been very proud of a piece of writing?