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yes,it is. i like the flow and rhyme scheme. the repetetions work well. the comparison was done very nicely....i found one small mistake though...should'nt it be ' ..she wears a torn tunic, more of a sheet'? ..but on the whole :good job and keep writing :D!.....oh and if you could check out a few of my pieces , it would be great . thanks :D