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Zoe Kirkman says:I must say, when I started this story I was unimpressed. I didn't really enjot the plot at first, and your grammar and spelling were very bad. But since you got your Beta, things have really improved and I'm starting to really enjoy the story. The plot is good now, and I do like the way you portray Malfoy. Also the clever little thing you did with his brother being called Scorpius, which of course is his sons name. I thought that was quite sweet of him to care so much.
I do hope you'll hurry with the next chapters, I would quite like to see how this ends.
I'll also be checking out your other stories soon :-)
Zoe x

Author's Response: i cringe when i read about the first 12 chapters, they need so much editing and re-doing, i'll probably ending up re-doing them all, but i want to put it up to standard of the newer chapters, as i think my writing has grown, and i dont actually think my Beta changes a lot, just mostly spelling mistakes really :p But im glad you enjoy it now :p i have the next one written, and im writing CH27 at the moment :p i hope you re-read all of the first lot of chapters when they are edited as they're going to be a lot better!
SlightObession xx