This chapter is such a fascinating character study of these men, and what Tony's confinement has done to each of them. I'm intrigued, to say the least, and am curious to see how intact Tony will be by the time you finish.

I..wow...ack...wow...as a thought, how long are you planning to make this story? Just so I can start begging for you to make it longer. Good stories never have an ending- and yours definitely makes the cut. Keep writing!

shebajcf chapter 3 . 2/21/2005

Wow. That was amazing. Very insightful and very real. don't stop writing cos its been an absolute pleasure to read.

Patty chapter 3 . 2/21/2005

I was about to protest when I first started reading this chapter that you had made Tony's recovery much too easy, but was I ever wrong!

I am so pleased and impressed with this story, Sunshine. Very, very glad you tried your hand at writing NCIS. Thank you, and more please.

This is so clever - an excellent exploration of Tony's state-of-mind during his recovery and now.

The scene with Kate and the apple sauce was clever. The whole story has been so brilliantly conceived. More soon please!

Jaron chapter 3 . 2/20/2005

What a magnificent story you have written! It has held me in thrall for all three chapters...I was on pins and needles awaiting each new update. Thanks for such a great read! More, soon, please?

Ally chapter 3 . 2/20/2005

Wow another great chapter, i really enjoyed the seemless way you moved from the past to the present weaving the relevant topics together. Keep up the great work and pleasue update soon! Its great to read an NCIS fic. that is actually well written. thanks.

Toni chapter 3 . 2/20/2005

Quite brilliant.

The end of this fic is coming too close to hand. I'll echo the others and hope you've another in the works.

Ugh...I have to wait another week for the next chapter don't I? Double ugh, you said this was going to be like 4 parts didn't you? Oh I'm not ready for the end...You have to promise another story soon...This is my favorite story out there.