OK, wow. While this looks promising... 50 hefty posts of text blocks are gonna take awhile to wade through. Most people don't post novels in one go, they dribble them out chapter by chapter to let people read and comment in between. But if this is the approach you like to take, hey, no worries. It's just gonna take me a while to catch up

I got to writing and couldn't stop. Still didn't catch all my gaffes, so bear with me.

"Beware the Beast, Man, for he is the Devil's pawn. Alone amongst God's primates, he kills for sport, for lust, for greed. Yea, he will murder his brother to possess his brother's land. Let him not breed in great numbers, for he will make a desert of his home and yours. Shun him, drive him back into his jungle lair, for he is the harbinger of Death.."

—29th Scroll, 6th Verse of Ape Law

"Indelible in the hippocampus is the laughter. The uproarious laughter between the two, and their having fun at my expense.”

I made edits to warn people about the extreme views shown in this story.
I don't know if you did this as extreme parody, massive satire, or why, but the themes in this story are highly offensive to damn near everyone who isn't a highly-religious white male. Seriously, UP, this could be Incel porno.

Librium Arcana, Where Gamers Play!
Nitram, slightly high on cough syrup: Do you know you're beautiful?
Me: Nope, that's why I have you around to tell me.
Nitram: You -are- beautiful. Anyone tries to tell you otherwise kill them."A life is like a garden. Perfect moments can be had, but not preserved, except in memory. LLAP" -- Leonard Nimoy, last Tweet