Can you give me advice for my squeeze page?

Hello,
Below I've attached my squeeze page for you to give me advice how to make it better if it is possible. I'm getting very very low opt-ins. I'm using traffic from expired domains redirecting them to my squeeze page. Is this a good way to get traffic to it as the user might be looking for the old site?

Theres a thread on the sales subreddit discussing persistence even after several "no's" when making cold calls. Some industries instruct their reps to continue pressing until the prospect either buys ...
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