Well I like it, I'd love to see the coloured version! I've been hoping to work for Insomniac as an artist or animator once I get through Uni (I'm starting next month, Digital Animation). Do you have any tips on what learn before I get to apply for IG? I'm just trying to really learn colour theory and anatomy and such right now.

I'd say the first step is find out what you really want to do, outside of the idea of where you want to work. Do you wan to be an animator? or an artist? Figuring out what you want to focus on at this point will be really helpful later on. Even in concept art I chose to specialize on environment/ prop design. This kind of focus will help you get really good at what you want to do, and not pretty good at a bunch of things. You're off to a good start and I think there's enough solid resources on the web for you to keep learning in the right direction!

Having said that before you go applying everywhere, compare your work to the work of the current employees, as that is the benchmark. No pressure now though, keep on learning!