-"Just get on and repent," he said dejectedly. "Do you have the faintest idea of the ramifications of your procrastination for your people?" he asked. The podgy king burped, broke wind, and took no notice of the doomsday prophet.
The intruder gaped in astonishment at the indifference displayed by the flatulent, arrogant regent, and before he could repeat his fateful warning, another odd character entered, stunning the assembled onlookers.
Through the open doors, a breathtakingly stupendous sight met their eyes: a sight never previously beheld by any of the myriad assembled manservants or the previous intruder. The

Andreas Nyström | 2004-06-02, 03:44:42
I meant "You sorry excuse for [noun phrase]". A prepositional problem on my behalf. I will do penance and better my ways. I am, as you know, more than greatful for any chance to improve my English. I think of you every time I say "causes of" and "make a mistake" :)

Fiona Mcintyre | 2004-06-02, 02:37:48
Before i add to this, and make you last entry immortal....do you perhaps mean "You sorry excuse FOR" ??..or perhaps .." YOUR sorry excuse??" or what exactly do you mean?

Andreas Nyström | 2004-05-31, 06:26:41
And now we get to hear him speak, I think...

Andreas Nyström | 2004-05-31, 06:23:05
As always with "stafettskrivning", it's difficult to tell where the story is headed. I would think that our fat ruler is the Man, though - I don't think the story is large enough for two fatsos :)

Fiona Mcintyre | 2004-05-31, 06:11:44
YUK!!... now i know why he is so VERY large. Or perhaps HE isn't the man?