can I say 2 things first? 1. very well written poem about the “mann” and 2. what an excellent assessment from basu. well spotted basu. now days u won’t be able to live happy with the “mann” which is not tough enough. i 100% agree that soft person suffers more in this world. its time ti be a “tough” person but not extremely tough though. we don want to lose our emotional aspects too! go for the balance. toughen up a bit. or else life is tough for u. iron cuts the iron.

well written poem. excellent words and rhymes quite well too. I guess in this world we must have a “mann” of at least 25% “patthar” and rest 75% normal. or else the “mann” might breakdown too often even with the slight hardship. so I will go for 1/4 “patthar” ko mann and 3/4 real “mann”. this i guess will be the best solution. what do u think about my idea. basically my idea is NOT to be machine fully but only partly so that life could be tackeled a little better. waiting for any comments.