Overall, it felt like a giant body pillow of a story. Cozy, warm and comforting. Well paced in introducing characters and their development, but it also seems a bit idyllic in it's resolution and feels like it should be the prequel to a fleshed out story than a stand alone oneshot. Also, the heroine was a bit of a wanton nymph with some of her expression and reactions *snicker*

It is only 32 pages, and only a few hours worth of time elapsed in the story, but thanks to the creative and original way it was set up, the relationship the two built was believable without being rushed.

It was especially pleasing to me because I am more of a fan of "relationships" than just romance.