very lovely! Frankly, I think a romance between these two would provide for some good and awkward fun in Series 2 but alas...great chapter, I think the hot lovin' between these two is really well done. Sherlock always thinks he's so immune to attachment...guess again, sir, guess again. Keep up the good work!

This is really so good! I was really thinking while watching the show that there is something between them that needs to be explored. And I totally adore the way you do it. You get his character very well and I like the way you write Molly. I hope for more soon.