"He's a strong man, whose strength grows more from his hard wiry frame and experience than sheer bulk. His hair is cut short in a practical military style. This is not a man who spends time in front of mirrors."

What is great about the Pirates of the Carribean and accompanying pro examples is that they convey subjects moving through space. Words like "emerges", "comes", "continues", "carrying" show that some action is happening that some actors and a camera can go onto a set and reproduce.