Lifecycle of a Mushroom: Fourth Draft

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Congrats, Tom - the various timings are spot on now - you've wrangled them all into submission - the only thing that jars for me - and I can't quite tell you why, is the exclamation mark on 'The End' - and also maybe, the fact that The End is written in capital letters - this may be entirely irrational on my part (but the exclamation mark - lose it) - but the timings on that ending, with the introduction of your logo, it's all very satisfying. Well done, mate. It's rather wonderful actually! :)