I was tempted not to review since you promised to sic Malcolm on me, but I liked the story too much to not review it. I thought it was awesome, so sad. I wrote a fic where Trip had a teenage sister and a bunch of disgruntled reviewers told me that it was improbable for him to be 30ish and have a teenage sis. Whatever. It is possible and I think it works fine. I really liked your story, mostly 'cause I'm an angst fan, but it was really well written too. Keep up the good work, I will definetly look for more stuff by you.

Tasha chapter 1 . 8/21/2002

This is a good story but it seems like you could do more with it.

artemis moonshine chapter 1 . 8/20/2002

set sweet malcolm on me would you? i don' t think that he could take on a human-vulcan hybrid... especially trip's daughter... t'pol's too now that i think of it... i liked it, but he's never mentioned a lily tucker.