Thank you Greg.
El- Thank you for the tip! If I did that would'nt it change my lighting? If I put the catch light higher in the 2 o'clock, it would spill on to her hair right? Scrim/snoot? What are thinking here? How would you have lit her?
I know we always try for the 11 or 1 o'clock.
What do you think? And why?
Thanks for the critique I respect your work.

11 or 1 highlight was just too much for pose. Thus 2 oclock.
You could keep the key to the left add spot to right for the eye hightlight
and maybe fill at camera plane. Or just fill with light from it in eyes.
Left key raised for hair would eliminate the under horizon eye hightlight.
Seen some "weird" eye catchlights on GG (ESP 2 or differ shapes).
Maybe the people here only see TPA.
Yours is kool and its nice just suggest more attention to the eye catchlight.
Nice Model.
EL

RIGHT On!!!! Now Thats a CRITIQUE!!! Its easy to give your opinion, but to tell why....Now I see where you are coming from. (RESPECT)
First time she has ever, ever posed. She was a wallflower at a shoot this weekend.
Thanks EL,
David