Awesome!

Nice writing style

You did a good job of showing attitude and personality, and building excitement. I think stories are much more erotic when you have some sense of the characters, and you managed to do that without a bunch of dry exposition. Great first effort!

Hot story with a very different voice

The writing has a lovely rhythm, the story evolves with a just right combination of reality and surreality.

Funny that the coward/hater/anonymous/self-loather found the one paragraph that set him off. One cannot help but wonder why those pitiful trolls don't stop reading these stories.

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Anonymous01/29/13

Wow!

Enjoyed this a lot. A brazen and promiscuous slut just asking to be used by guys like me. Unmarried and rapidly making herself unmarriagable too so no complications. I'll bring the oh-so-necessary condoms. Where can I find parties like this one?

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Anonymous01/30/13

Hey Anonymous

WTF. I'll marry her. We'll have more fun in 1 hour than you will in a year .

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From 1969 uptto and well into 1971 I was often the prize to be played for at my boyfriends card school and on several occasions involved in similar type parties...
Your description is so real is it based on fact?

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Anonymous07/14/15

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