Thank you for 122 Favorites befor this beatmap got loved. Also big thank you for playing, sharing and voting for it to be Loved.Only god may know if I really am going to finish it one day. Still big thanks for all the support. Also big thanks to the guest mappers!

hi ryo asked me to mod his diff but his internet kept exploding so hello

[Ryo's Another]

00:07:326 (1,2) - oops blanket mod

00:14:401 (3) - dont stack this right under (4) so soon after, since this is already faded in by the time (4) disappears so its bad to read and not very good to play :-(

00:19:213 (3) - in the interest of keeping consistent overlaps, why not move it so that it makes a structural triangle with 00:17:798 (2,4) - ? oops itd break the triangle after but well your choice!

00:45:533 (1,1) - ok these are like too cramped space them out a little bit more or lessen the curve on the kickslider so that you get a more visible gap

01:25:439 (1,2,3,4) - there's a sound increasing in pitch here which could be represented by either increasing the spacing between each slider progressively or increase SV progressively, although 0.8 -> 0.95 wont have that much effect for this... or you could go above it! if you like that

01:37:750 (1) - i think it'd look nicer if you reduced the curve on this cos the big difference in visual spacing throughout the slider and 01:37:892 (1) - is kinda ehhhh to me

01:46:807 (1,2) - hooly shit snap these

01:49:071 (1) - you should move this to like here so that you have the equal-ish visual spacing between all the objects around it MM thatd be nice

02:09:307 (1,3) - make parallel PLS

02:25:439 (1) - eh get this skystar slider OUTTA here it only really works well when objects around it make the circular flow stuff but just by itself its kinda weird

02:27:703 (1) - make the start of this clickable with a cute little circle on the center and then move spinner back 1/4 beat

02:40:439 (2) - just stack this underneath the start of 02:39:024 (1) - it looks kinda awkward and out of place right now

02:57:137 (1) - ok if you dont fix your snaps i am going to FLIP

03:09:873 (3) - move it more here-ish so that it has a comfier overlap (i hate those tiny little overlaps that look bad!)

03:23:741 (1,2,3,4,1) - so with this i found that the spacing that the cursor moves is too small for this many turns, its kinda hard to explain in words without playing it for yourself but i think that if you ctrl+g each slider to change the direction it plays a lot better, it especially works with how the sliders are curved, you get that cool kinda loopy flow if you know what i mean this is the point im most passionate about!

Cheesecake wrote:

00:14:401 (2) - Why not ctrl+g this to make this combo the same as 00:16:383 (1,2,3) - aesthetic style emphasizes the piano sounds together with 00:18:647 (1,2,3) -

00:24:024 (4,5,6,7,1) - I think this looks a bit awkward, being diagonal, maybe you could make it curve around (3) to make a blanket and restructure the sliders after I like how it looks, going straight through that gap and it wouldnt play or feel differently at all if I change it to blanket the slider and adjusting the patterns afterwards would be too much a bother for such a trivial thing

00:43:269 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why do you stack this quintet when every other one is spaced? changed

01:49:637 (3) - I appreciate you're making these sliders a bit more crooked to fit the sound, but you could do with removing that middle red node x) changed

02:11:925 (1) - You've clearly mapped this to that sustained sound, but personally I think it would be better to remove it to allow players more break time to recover If I remove the spinner it feels kinda empty to me and it serves as a great transition to the calm part of the song. The break isnt that short and its not like the really slow sliders cant serve as recoverytime as well