I know it was my responsibility to give you feedback, and I apologize that I am so late. But, I need to do my duty!------I really do enjoy this piece for a number of reasons. It flows very well, and kinda stays in your mind for a while. I would love to see this arranged with music. Another reason, it can connect to so many people. I know it connects with me. I knew that by the end of the first two lines. Also, it's vague, but revealing. I love it.I don't see much I could really give criticism on. Keep up the fantastic work!

Of course, m'dear.Thank you. I felt super stressed about it, and now having to run the group while the admin is away... I just had to get everything right. Did you want me to post something for you to read as well?

I saw that your partner for The Writer's Exchange hasn't left you feedback. I apologize a ton for that. To make up for his negligence, I'll be reviewing your piece instead. Also, for your troubles, I'll read another piece of your choice as well, if you wish. --------------

On to the review, I've read this piece before, and as I stated, it's one of my favorites. It's a great song that I'm sure would speak to many. It's catchy as well as moving and that's a feat in and of itself.

The only 'errors' in this, that I found, were on a few lines, you forgot to capitalize the first word, but other than that, it's flawless. Bravo!