I luv it! Okay I'm really mad that they cancledv bunheads arnt u. I want 2 no y they wld do that. What if shasta tells fanny she's preggos and fanny flips out on her and stuff and then she goes a lives w/ mitchel 4 a bit b 4 tellen all the other girls she's expectin I don't no it's to late 2 imagin cus I cant sleep and it's 1:53 am and I hav my 3rd day of 8th grade Tom. So I dnt no but keep written when yu get an idea. Luv it!

Hi there. I just wanted to leave my opinion on this story and I honestly don't want to sound too harsh. The thing is, this story is extremely incomplete. You should have developed both the characters and the story a lot more and tried to come up with a better and more complete plot. Being only 14 as well, believe me when I say that I know how hard it can be at times. And I also know what it's like to have the worst writer's block in history. But, since you said you liked to get reviews, I simply thought I'd leave you with my opinion and hope this helps you with your writing techinique. Ok, that was all I had to say. Bye (:

I love how you wrote this in first-person as Michelle! Very unique and new to this section of this website! :) I guessed fairly easily that the pregnancy question was to be brought up, it happens in most stories that start at the hospital. I truly (hehe get the punn? ;)) enjoyed this! More please! :D