So I first made my SCP. It didn't do to well, so I decided to get some help with it. I reposted it about a few months later and it did worse than last time. I am trying to search for more help with my SCP.

it looks like this suffers from major conceptualization and execution issues. First off, I recommend getting the base idea polished up in the Ideas and Brainstorming forumbefore you try fixing the draft, because the core idea here isn't going to do well on the site.