Lovely poem Priya.
Each and every word is so meaningful. I could visualize every instance you have written and relate to it as if it was happening now. Loved it! Would you mind if i can forward it to the person i love unconditionally….ofcourse with due credit given to u!!!!

After reading “Unconditional Love”, I wasn’t really looking forward to a reply from her but was still curious to find out what you had to tell us in “Unconditional love-2”. Believe me, I was pleasantly surprised at the difference between the two posts. I liked the surprise. Also liked the fact that the emotions were not carried from 1 to 2. And your writing surprises me every time {that’s a compliment 🙂 }

hey, unconditional love-2 was not a reply to the guy’s letter in part 1. in the second part, i just penned down what i felt unconditional love should be like. maybe it is an illusion, maybe it is the truth.

Hey, had read this a long time ago. But then, got reminded of it now and found it after digging the archives. A very mushy lady that I am, I LOVED this one 🙂 Esp, the nightmare and paper masala dosa lines. Aaawwww 🙂

//Love is what I feel
When I puke my stomach out
When I look like what
Even the cat won’t drag in,
And you say
‘I love you,
‘cos you are the most beautiful
Girl in the world.’
And say it from your heart; //

Cho sweet… Love these lines..

Love is what I feel
When you know
I am choked up,
I am numb,
When I need my space,
And you just leave me alone,
Unquestioned;

Exactly what I’d expect 🙂

Love is what I feel
When you keep mum,
Though irked by my habit
Of keeping my room
Thoroughly unorganised,
Cluttered,
Because you know that’s just
The way I am,
You don’t judge,
And don’t hold it
Against me;

Mister where art thou 😉

Love is what I feel
In all the little things you do
For me,
Unselfishly,
And each time
I fall in love with you
All over again.

Awwww…. Mush at its best..

Somehow missed this before.. Am glad I caught it up now…
Wondering how a print out of it would look on my wall.. You wouldn’t mind.. would you.. 😛