Talk to me!

Thanks for your comment on my poem! I wrote that for a poetry class in college. I forget what its specifically called. I think it's called a mosaic poem so the goal was for it to be structurally appealing... but yeah, I'm not that good at speaking words, but writing them and then having people read them is so much easier!

You're very welcome. I saw that it was updated in the library earlier and the title caught my eye. When I started reading your writings, some of them were very relating to me in ways. Was happy to have read it when I had the chance. Love your style.

Thanks for all your critiques on my story, they're a really big help! I do have a few questions about what you read, and if you answered them it would be a huge help!
A) At any time during the reading were you bored? If so, where?
B) Was Aryss' character more likeable/redeemable?
C) Was Erasmus' character likeable/redeemable?
Thanks again!