Critique my new trampoline video !

I'd like to have some critique on my edit. Any tips for filming ( just consider the shot of the guys with the green tank top) and overall filming ?

And also does anyone know I I could of done the motion tracked text so it doesn't move because I tracked it on a pink tape at the bottom of the tramp and while he goes in front the text doesn't follow.

I liked it! the filming was pretty good and editing was alright! I would either get rid of the logo all together, or make it bigger at the beginning or maybe in a bottom corner and somewhat transparent. The split screen was kind of awkward and out of place but besides that it looked good to me! nice work!

Pretty good stuff. I liked the color temp of the video and stuff it gave a good warm summer feel. My only critique has nothing to do with the actual film, just more that the athletes losing their snapback every shot kinda bugged me. Like either pin it down or take it off. I doubt it bugs most people, but I tended to lose focus of the actual film and more started to wonder why they had hats even on if they were only going to come off every time they landed or threw down anything bigger than a flat 3. But that's probably me sounding like your grandpa. Still a sick video

It felt like there wasn't really a good flow throughout the edit. Too many subtle distractions like the split-screen feature (which might've been better if it was used longer), the hat flying off, the frequent slow-mo or in some cases sped-up clips, and changing angles too often never really allowed the edit to get into a rhythm where it was easy to focus on each person's variety of tricks/progression.

I appreciated the multiple angles, creativity, and solid filming. The tricks were high quality which is aIways helps of course. So I just wasn't too fond of the almost constant switching of angles basically.

RIP Jack Wade

ďItís the best thing Iíve found to do with my time. Itís what makes me the happiestótraveling around with your buddies chasing snow, getting to see new places. I canít imagine a better lifestyle. Even if youíre broke at the end of the day, who cares? Look at where you are.Ē - Adam Delorme