awwwh this one-shot was very bittersweet. they didnt have as much time with one another as they should have had. i loved the part where it was after the first task and cedric smiled at her afterwards just muttering how much it hurt, HAHA. it was adorable! but anyways, a good read i dont regret reading it. i often lurk around for odd pairings and ive always thought cedric / fleur would look good together ;D

hello, new reader here :)
this story is interesting so far.
i can sense something stirring up between
the two of them but what im looking
for is the conflict in this story.
anyways, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! This is the first thing I've wrote and that was the first review I've received. Would you mind giving me some advice? I'm thinking about Draco secretly taking care of Luna while shes at his manor then Draco grabbing ahold of someone when they apparate to shells cottage? Does that sound like it would be good?

the ending, oh the ending! it crushes me that they both had to die. honestly, this has got to be one of the most captivating draco/luna story ive ever read here. the plot is interestingly different but i like it. the ending though, GOD. you killed me. i wish you'd make a sequel to this, a one-shot of some sort ..

but either way, this story 10/10 hun.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It is sad that they both died, but I felt it was the only way to end it, so I'm afraid it would have to be a postmortem one shot. Maybe one day I'll be up to it!

OH MAN! a good read. ive been reading your stories like non-stop
today (i was suppose to be doing my english honors hw but i didnt
want to just because i was distracted LOL). i was just wondering
though in lucius's side of the story, will there still be
draco/luna pairing or will it be focused on lucius?

Author's Response: Non-stop?? Wow! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed them so much as to want to read them non -stop!!

Lucius story is written but I don't really like it. I may start to post it and see how it goes though & it is Draco/Luna, it continues on from their relationship, although Lucius is in it of course.

your vocab use was just lovely. though the situation is a bit cliche, or so to my findings, i think that your use of words made up for it. and must i say that your title is very unique? haha, good job on this one!(=

Author's Response: i guess i can see why you might find it cliche, i've never taken any story as inspiration for this the concept of getting the girl back before it's too late is very popular anywhere... but thank you so much or the kind review, too!