You have accepted the challenge of writing about Roj Kell from another's prospective. It's tough, really, requiring the thoughts of the surrounding characters to interpet to us what Kell MAY BE thinking: reading his expressions, for example.

It amazes me how well you do the personalities of everybody.. from Kell to Yoda to Vader to Leia to wierd alien beings that none of us should be able to understand!

I want to give constructive criticism but I can't find much to criticize. Great job!

Kell knows exactly when to apply force to time it so that even a little bit would give him victory and accomplish his goals.. and he does it suddenly and overwhelmingly, leaving his opponent no time or room to come up with anything hidden, special, or even have time to use its strengths against Kell. A true genius.