Please, oh please, continue this story. I only started reading this tonight and already I'm hooked! I'm not entirely sure how far you initially intended to take this story but I can tell you put a lot of thought into it. While Ranma as a demon is not a new concept, Ranma as a Yuki-onna is! I've studied the lore on the Yuki-onna and I really want to see how you might expand these two chapters into a full-blown story arc. My suggestion is to continue expanding and incorporating your breadth of knowledge on the subject of yokai so that you can include these as "to-be-revealed" characters in later chapters. I was pretty upset that Soun kicked poor Ranma out of the house simply for "reminding" him of his daughters. I mean, his daughters are the strongest reminder that Soun has when it comes to his late wife and, based on your AU telling, Soun's daughters are all hanyo!

Please, continue to add new chapters to this story and, if possible, incorporate a "coming-to-terms" chapter for Tendo, Soun. I've always had a soft spot for the crybaby and I really want to see him receive, or seek, help for his depression regarding his wife's passing. Thank you for creating this lovely story and know that your storytelling already has me on the edge of my seat! Don't let this story die it has *so* much potential and seeing that potential go to waste is physically painful for me!

Your Fan,
Darien Munden

Guest chapter 2 . 12/26/2014

Here is a review so write more I think it is awesome( I saw the episode of inuyasha that was in the story it's the one with the flesh eating mask) can't wait for more