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A Formal Letter of Resignation

I rewrited a letter of resignation. I attempt to make some changes to make more formal main in terms of diction. However, the lever of my English language is not high. Could you help me check whether the changes are acceptable to native speakers? And do you have any other suggestions?

Dear Mr. Wang,

I am writing to inform you of my decision to quitresign my position as an editor infrom Fashion & Design magazine. It is my pitya disappointment to end my job with you as well as the colleagues in the department.

I am Li Ming, an editor of western fashion, who enteredentering this company two months ago. I find that I do not fit in with this position because of my major, was computer science. Hence, I thendecidemake up my mind to leave the company and make another choice. I must apologize for the inconveniences that my leave may occurcause.

I would be much gratefulbe deeply indebted to you if you are so kind as to accept my resignation and apology. I wish for a brighter future of the company.