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Other Physical Appearance: shinigami wears a black trench coat, which has tears in the bottom, a black dress shirt underneath with a black leather jacket over it, obsidian bracers covering his arms and a pair of black gloves that make his fingers look clawed, a pair of black metal boots, the toe part comes out in a beak shape. He also wears a pair of orange kamina glasses, which have computer systems inside them to target and analyze enemies

Zanpaktou Name; Sukui o shainingu (Shining Salvation)
Type; fire
Zanpaktou Spirit; Sukui looks like a large eagle, with gold and white feathers and sharp talons
Sealed Form: Just a regular scimitar, about 3 feet in length, weighing roughly 30 lbs
Release Command; Ejji o mekura ken-ka (Blinding edge)
Shikai Details; Looks like a gun blade, image below, with a 44 magnum revolver on the end, but it shoots bullets of fire/light not lead
The shikai lightens the blade to about 20 lbs. The blade's speed and power if effected by light, it collects light and stores it in the revolver, which it lets loose with deadly combos, the more light that is gleaming off the blade, the sharper it gets and the faster it moves

Techniques:

Kajō-gaki no arashi (Bullet storm)
I disappear and reappear in the air, letting loose from the gun on my blade hundreds of bullets made of light (which burn like fire) in all directions, the bullets are made of light, and are basically fire itself, as they can be shot through almost anything due to thei immense heat

Furasshu aitsugu (Flash Flurry)
I run up quickly to the opponent, letting loose dozens of slashes with the blade, each slash shines light off it, creating a large flash that may blind the opponent

Mabayui bakari no furasshu (Blinding Flash)
I raise the sword high up in the air, allowing light from the sun to shine off it's mirrored edge, creating a huge flash that blinds the opponent for a few crucial moments to get some attacks in

Bankai Name; Fenikkusushainingu (Shining phoenix)
Bankai Details; My spirit bursts into an eternal fire and becomes ablaze with wings of fire, becoming a golden phoenix
The spirit wraps its wings around me and bonds with me, giving me a set of miraculous golden armor (picture below) and golden wings, It also makes the gunblade larger and have a golden metal on the revolver, and it gives me a large golden shield (picture below)

In Bankai form, the wings allow me to float in the air and fly around at fast speeds, letting me dodge some attacks with ease, the armor itself increases my defenses, absorbing any and all fire attacks and turning it into light, the armor generates it's own light, so there is no need for the sun to help, BUT it still absorbs light and turns it into reiatsu for me to use
The shield can be used to block melee attacks and some others, and can be thrown at the enemy captain america style, beneath the shield hidden on my gauntlet is a claw weapon, three golden blades that stretch out from under the shield and can be used in a variety of combos

Techniques:
Bankai form retains all original Shikai techniques

Burēdo tatsumaki (Blade tornado)
I stretch out my claws and my sword and spin around at a high speed, creating a smal tornado that rips through the battlefield using many slashing attacks

Burēdo shōgeki (Blade bombardment)
An upgraded form of flash flurry, except this time the slashes are faster, there is little flash, and the claws are utilized

Shīrudobūmeran (Shield Boomerang)
My golden shield is thrown like a boomerang at the opponent, its mirrored surface creates a large flash as it flies around the battlefield

Kajō-gaki no harikēn (Bullet hurricane)
Creates more bullets of light to shoot out in all directions, except this time theres more, and they are extremely fast, though the pattern of the bullets is easily seen and can be dodged sometimes if i'm not careful

Hikari ryūsei danmaku (Light meteor barrage)
This is the ultimate Bankai technique, as is devastating, as it effects the entire battlefield. I fly up into the air, an a huge cannonball of light is shot from my gunblade into the sky, moments later, the entire battlefield begins to be scorched by meteors of light flying around in all directions, this technique is difficult to handle, and if i'm not careful, I could kill myself in the process, this technique requires an insane amount of reiatsu, generated from alot of light absorbed, though, due to the slow moving nature of the meteors, they can be dodged with little damage, but the sheer heat of it is almost too much to handle,
after this attack, my bankai wings disappear, and the armor stops generating light for me to use, as much of my reiatsu is depleted, i cannot do many of my other spiritual techniques due to my loss of reiatsu
Anything Else; Shikai Sealed Bankai Shield Bankai armor the pieces here are based roughly on what is my idea, these pictures are found on the internet, and are not mine, but they are based most like what i am thinking, especially the armor
also, all the lesser bankai techniques require a bit of reiatsu to use (more than regular techniques anyway) the shikai techniques require little reiatsu except for bullet storm, which requires more reiatsu

Personality: Smart, somewhat silent most of the time, sometimes cocky in a battle, when he really gets fired up, he rushes in without thinking, using all his power, he never gives up and tries to do the impossible, and reach the invisible

Primary Hand: right

Battle Style: fast, scans enemy movements and learns their patterns, then strikes, when fired up he rushes in with all his power

District of Origin: did not originate in the soul society, parents were japanese, moved to america, he was born in america

Backstory: Jaku traveled with a man, and they helped save people, however, he left that life to continue his own, and became a soul reaper, the silver key hanging on his neck is all he has to remember his old life. He joined the man when he was 13, traveled for 3 years, joined soul society at 16, been with it for 5 years, father was a soul reaper who took part in the quincy wars

im sorry, i had an eye appointment, couldnt fill everything out, and this will replace my current one

so, anyway, here it is

Zanpaktou Name; Sukui o shainingu (Shining Salvation
Type; fire
Zanpaktou Spirit; Sukui looks like a large eagle, with gold and white feathers and sharp talons
Sealed Form: Just a regular scimitar, about 3 feet in length, weighing roughly 30 lbs
Release Command; Ejji o mekura ken-ka (Blinding edge)
Shikai Details; Looks like a gun blade, image below, with a 44 magnum revolver on the end, but it shoots bullets of fire/light not lead
The shikai lightens the blade to about 20 lbs. The blade's speed and power if effected by light, it collects light and stores it in the revolver, which it lets loose with deadly combos, the more light that is gleaming off the blade, the sharper it gets and the faster it moves

Techniques:

Kajō-gaki no arashi (Bullet storm)
I disappear and reappear in the air, letting loose from the gun on my blade hundreds of bullets made of light (which burn like fire) in all directions, the bullets are made of light, and are basically fire itself, as they can be shot through almost anything due to thei immense heat

Furasshu aitsugu (Flash Flurry)
I run up quickly to the opponent, letting loose dozens of slashes with the blade, each slash shines light off it, creating a large flash that may blind the opponent

Mabayui bakari no furasshu (Blinding Flash)
I raise the sword high up in the air, allowing light from the sun to shine off it's mirrored edge, creating a huge flash that blinds the opponent for a few crucial moments to get some attacks in

The gun blade seems a lil..Cloud'ish. may I ask how long the blade is, can it still be used against a regular long/thick sword?
Bankai Name; Fenikkusushainingu (Shining phoenix)
Bankai Details; My spirit bursts into an eternal fire and becomes ablaze with wings of fire, becoming a golden phoenix
The spirit wraps its wings around me and bonds with me, giving me a set of miraculous golden armor (picture below) and golden wings, It also makes the gunblade larger and have a golden metal on the revolver, and it gives me a large golden shield (picture below)

In Bankai form, the wings allow me to float in the air and fly around at fast speeds, letting me dodge some attacks with ease, the armor itself increases my defenses, absorbing any and all fire attacks and turning it into light, the armor generates it's own light, so there is no need for the sun to help, BUT it still absorbs light and turns it into reiatsu for me to use
The shield can be used to block melee attacks and some others, and can be thrown at the enemy captain america style, beneath the shield hidden on my gauntlet is a claw weapon, three golden blades that stretch out from under the shield and can be used in a variety of combos

Techniques:
Bankai form retains all original Shikai techniques

Burēdo tatsumaki (Blade tornado)
I stretch out my claws and my sword and spin around at a high speed, creating a smal tornado that rips through the battlefield using many slashing attacks

Burēdo shōgeki (Blade bombardment)
An upgraded form of flash flurry, except this time the slashes are faster, there is little flash, and the claws are utilized

Shīrudobūmeran (Shield Boomerang)
My golden shield is thrown like a boomerang at the opponent, its mirrored surface creates a large flash as it flies around the battlefield

Kajō-gaki no harikēn (Bullet hurricane)
Creates more bullets of light to shoot out in all directions, except this time theres more, and they are extremely fast, though the pattern of the bullets is easily seen and can be dodged sometimes if i'm not careful

Hikari ryūsei danmaku (Light meteor barrage)
This is the ultimate Bankai technique, as is devastating, as it effects the entire battlefield. I fly up into the air, an a huge cannonball of light is shot from my gunblade into the sky, moments later, the entire battlefield begins to be scorched by meteors of light flying around in all directions, this technique is difficult to handle, and if i'm not careful, I could kill myself in the process, this technique requires an insane amount of reiatsu, generated from alot of light absorbed, though, due to the slow moving nature of the meteors, they can be dodged with little damage, but the sheer heat of it is almost too much to handle,
after this attack, my bankai wings disappear, and the armor stops generating light for me to use, as much of my reiatsu is depleted, i cannot do many of my other spiritual techniques due to my loss of reiatsuI am extremely pleased that you have given yourself limits.
also, all the lesser bankai techniques require a bit of reiatsu to use (more than regular techniques anyway) the shikai techniques require little reiatsu except for bullet storm, which requires more reiatsu

criticism and comments please, and tell me where I can improve on this one

Other then that, it's actually fairly cool and awesome. So.. I give you this, as my sign of approval.

Zanpaktou Name; Sukui o shainingu (Shining Salvation
Type; fire
Zanpaktou Spirit; Sukui looks like a large eagle, with gold and white feathers and sharp talons
Sealed Form: Just a regular scimitar, about 3 feet in length, weighing roughly 30 lbs
Release Command; Ejji o mekura ken-ka (Blinding edge)
Shikai Details; Looks like a gun blade, image below, with a 44 magnum revolver on the end, but it shoots bullets of fire/light not lead
The shikai lightens the blade to about 20 lbs. The blade's speed and power if effected by light, it collects light and stores it in the revolver, which it lets loose with deadly combos, the more light that is gleaming off the blade, the sharper it gets and the faster it moves

Techniques:

Kajō-gaki no arashi (Bullet storm)
I disappear and reappear in the air, letting loose from the gun on my blade hundreds of bullets made of light (which burn like fire) in all directions, the bullets are made of light, and are basically fire itself, as they can be shot through almost anything due to thei immense heat

Furasshu aitsugu (Flash Flurry)
I run up quickly to the opponent, letting loose dozens of slashes with the blade, each slash shines light off it, creating a large flash that may blind the opponent

Mabayui bakari no furasshu (Blinding Flash)
I raise the sword high up in the air, allowing light from the sun to shine off it's mirrored edge, creating a huge flash that blinds the opponent for a few crucial moments to get some attacks in

Bankai Name; Fenikkusushainingu (Shining phoenix)
Bankai Details; My spirit bursts into an eternal fire and becomes ablaze with wings of fire, becoming a golden phoenix
The spirit wraps its wings around me and bonds with me, giving me a set of miraculous golden armor (picture below) and golden wings, It also makes the gunblade larger and have a golden metal on the revolver, and it gives me a large golden shield (picture below)

In Bankai form, the wings allow me to float in the air and fly around at fast speeds, letting me dodge some attacks with ease, the armor itself increases my defenses, absorbing any and all fire attacks and turning it into light, the armor generates it's own light, so there is no need for the sun to help, BUT it still absorbs light and turns it into reiatsu for me to use
The shield can be used to block melee attacks and some others, and can be thrown at the enemy captain america style, beneath the shield hidden on my gauntlet is a claw weapon, three golden blades that stretch out from under the shield and can be used in a variety of combos

Techniques:
Bankai form retains all original Shikai techniques

Burēdo tatsumaki (Blade tornado)
I stretch out my claws and my sword and spin around at a high speed, creating a smal tornado that rips through the battlefield using many slashing attacks

Burēdo shōgeki (Blade bombardment)
An upgraded form of flash flurry, except this time the slashes are faster, there is little flash, and the claws are utilized

Shīrudobūmeran (Shield Boomerang)
My golden shield is thrown like a boomerang at the opponent, its mirrored surface creates a large flash as it flies around the battlefield

Kajō-gaki no harikēn (Bullet hurricane)
Creates more bullets of light to shoot out in all directions, except this time theres more, and they are extremely fast, though the pattern of the bullets is easily seen and can be dodged sometimes if i'm not careful

Hikari ryūsei danmaku (Light meteor barrage)
This is the ultimate Bankai technique, as is devastating, as it effects the entire battlefield. I fly up into the air, an a huge cannonball of light is shot from my gunblade into the sky, moments later, the entire battlefield begins to be scorched by meteors of light flying around in all directions, this technique is difficult to handle, and if i'm not careful, I could kill myself in the process, this technique requires an insane amount of reiatsu, generated from alot of light absorbed, though, due to the slow moving nature of the meteors, they can be dodged with little damage, but the sheer heat of it is almost too much to handle,
after this attack, my bankai wings disappear, and the armor stops generating light for me to use, as much of my reiatsu is depleted, i cannot do many of my other spiritual techniques due to my loss of reiatsu
Anything Else; Shikai Sealed Bankai Shield Bankai armor the pieces here are based roughly on what is my idea, these pictures are found on the internet, and are not mine, but they are based most like what i am thinking, especially the armor
also, all the lesser bankai techniques require a bit of reiatsu to use (more than regular techniques anyway) the shikai techniques require little reiatsu except for bullet storm, which requires more reiatsu

criticism and comments please, and tell me where I can improve on this one

@Eon: LoZ, so much LoZ, GAHHHHHHHHHHH *headexplode* in all seriousness, very well thought out, im looking forward to reading YOUR fic

i just had a great idea for a new zanpakto, but i already made mine, so ill just tell you what the weapon is and you guys can maybe work with it

my super awesome idea for a zanpakto is..... a deck of cards

yes, a deck of deadly spirit cards that are used gambit style

but like i said, im not using it, so you guys may want to work with it

You do realize your bankai's name is basically "Phoenix Shining" said with a very heavy Japanese accent?
Other than that, I don't see anything wrong with this zanpakutou. Except for the collecting light thing it does which should make it reach full power rather quickly seeing as how light is everywhere and moves at the speed of light.

im sorry, i had an eye appointment, couldnt fill everything out, and this will replace my current one

so, anyway, here it is

Zanpaktou Name; Sukui o shainingu (Shining Salvation
Type; fire
Zanpaktou Spirit; Sukui looks like a large eagle, with gold and white feathers and sharp talons
Sealed Form: Just a regular scimitar, about 3 feet in length, weighing roughly 30 lbs
Release Command; Ejji o mekura ken-ka (Blinding edge)
Shikai Details; Looks like a gun blade, image below, with a 44 magnum revolver on the end, but it shoots bullets of fire/light not lead
The shikai lightens the blade to about 20 lbs. The blade's speed and power if effected by light, it collects light and stores it in the revolver, which it lets loose with deadly combos, the more light that is gleaming off the blade, the sharper it gets and the faster it moves

Techniques:

Kajō-gaki no arashi (Bullet storm)
I disappear and reappear in the air, letting loose from the gun on my blade hundreds of bullets made of light (which burn like fire) in all directions, the bullets are made of light, and are basically fire itself, as they can be shot through almost anything due to thei immense heat

Furasshu aitsugu (Flash Flurry)
I run up quickly to the opponent, letting loose dozens of slashes with the blade, each slash shines light off it, creating a large flash that may blind the opponent

Mabayui bakari no furasshu (Blinding Flash)
I raise the sword high up in the air, allowing light from the sun to shine off it's mirrored edge, creating a huge flash that blinds the opponent for a few crucial moments to get some attacks in

Bankai Name; Fenikkusushainingu (Shining phoenix)
Bankai Details; My spirit bursts into an eternal fire and becomes ablaze with wings of fire, becoming a golden phoenix
The spirit wraps its wings around me and bonds with me, giving me a set of miraculous golden armor (picture below) and golden wings, It also makes the gunblade larger and have a golden metal on the revolver, and it gives me a large golden shield (picture below)

In Bankai form, the wings allow me to float in the air and fly around at fast speeds, letting me dodge some attacks with ease, the armor itself increases my defenses, absorbing any and all fire attacks and turning it into light, the armor generates it's own light, so there is no need for the sun to help, BUT it still absorbs light and turns it into reiatsu for me to use
The shield can be used to block melee attacks and some others, and can be thrown at the enemy captain america style, beneath the shield hidden on my gauntlet is a claw weapon, three golden blades that stretch out from under the shield and can be used in a variety of combos

Techniques:
Bankai form retains all original Shikai techniques

Burēdo tatsumaki (Blade tornado)
I stretch out my claws and my sword and spin around at a high speed, creating a smal tornado that rips through the battlefield using many slashing attacks

Burēdo shōgeki (Blade bombardment)
An upgraded form of flash flurry, except this time the slashes are faster, there is little flash, and the claws are utilized

Shīrudobūmeran (Shield Boomerang)
My golden shield is thrown like a boomerang at the opponent, its mirrored surface creates a large flash as it flies around the battlefield

Kajō-gaki no harikēn (Bullet hurricane)
Creates more bullets of light to shoot out in all directions, except this time theres more, and they are extremely fast, though the pattern of the bullets is easily seen and can be dodged sometimes if i'm not careful

Hikari ryūsei danmaku (Light meteor barrage)
This is the ultimate Bankai technique, as is devastating, as it effects the entire battlefield. I fly up into the air, an a huge cannonball of light is shot from my gunblade into the sky, moments later, the entire battlefield begins to be scorched by meteors of light flying around in all directions, this technique is difficult to handle, and if i'm not careful, I could kill myself in the process, this technique requires an insane amount of reiatsu, generated from alot of light absorbed, though, due to the slow moving nature of the meteors, they can be dodged with little damage, but the sheer heat of it is almost too much to handle,
after this attack, my bankai wings disappear, and the armor stops generating light for me to use, as much of my reiatsu is depleted, i cannot do many of my other spiritual techniques due to my loss of reiatsu
Anything Else; ShikaiSealedBankai ShieldBankai armor the pieces here are based roughly on what is my idea, these pictures are found on the internet, and are not mine, but they are based most like what i am thinking, especially the armor
also, all the lesser bankai techniques require a bit of reiatsu to use (more than regular techniques anyway) the shikai techniques require little reiatsu except for bullet storm, which requires more reiatsu

criticism and comments please, and tell me where I can improve on this one

sounds okay. others may have some objections.

Originally Posted by Jinchuuriki Hunter

Oh guys, did you hear? I'm resigning oh, you heard.

Yeah. We heard. =_=

A final note of business. The other fic I'm currently working on is a Pokemon fic that has been embryonic for a while now. I figure that every once and a while I'll have a character of the day or just random character winning/losing a battle. Anyone who's interested just shoot me a PM with 4-6 non-legendaries that you would want to appear with you. 2 or 3 of you may have multiple appearances. So thanks in advance if you choose to help out.

PRETEND THERE IS A SIGNATURE HERE FULL OF WITTY JOKES AND CLAIMS TO FAME AND UNDESERVED BRAVADO AND SELF PROMOTION

Zanpaktou Spirit; Yuki Senkou appears as a small chipmunk, who's fur is literally as white and pure as the first snow.

Sword Form: Classic Katana with a light blue Flange hilt in the shape of a snowflake. The snow flake pattern seems to change slightly often.

The hilt changes shape... I like it

Release Command; Hyouketsu (Freeze)

Shikai Details; Yuki Sendou becomes two throwing knives. The User's speed increases greatly. The knives are completely white from hilt to blade-tip. the user can channel reietsu in different forms, most often ice, snow, and freezing liquids from distances through the throwing knives. The throwing knives are incredibly sturdy and are used to "Conduct" and control ice, even if the knives are far from the User himself. They're powerful weapons but their main purpose is for them to act as satellites, relaying his control of ice to long distances. Similarly, he can create ice from thin air or by gathering moisutre in the air (For a cost energy-wise, of course) and the satellite attribute of his blades works just as well for that.

... satellite knives? Can you also do GPS functions?

Jokes aside, I quite like it.

Bankai Name; Kaisoku Buriza-do Toride. (High-Speed Blizzard Fortress)

Bankai Details; In Bankai his throwing knives are less confined to a shape, they can become a variety of different throwing weaponry-so long as it is small. They could go from knives to shuriken, bladed boomerangs, needles, smaller chakrams or darts, but he couldn't create a javelin or a larger chakram). He can create these throwing weapons to a large amount, mostly limited only by the mental strain of having to keep track of all of them and the time in which he can maintain his bankai while using energy fighting. From any distance the user can channel Reiatsu throguh their weaponry, an automatic nearly comepletely undraining freeze takes place everytime a daggar hits something; a near perfect Attack system because the battlefield will become colder and more icy with every miss and the opponent will become slower by every hit-on top of that he can make sudden changes to the battlefield by channeling energy through his weapons. Whenever he enters bankai it starts to snow. The users speed is dramatically increased in comparison to his Shikai. The user's clothing and hair turn snow white and their clothes enlarges to cover all skin-allowing him to camouflage into the snow. Even his body temperature fades into the temperature of snow.

Anything Else; The weapons ARE made of metal.

Seems a bit strange that the weapons would be made out of metal, to be honest... Why not just highly concentrated ice?

Wait a minute.. everywhere in the line of sight? So if you're on the highest mountain you could just freeze half a country? I do think this needs a small nerf (say in a 10km radius?)

Mattou Maru Eisei: The ability to form ice anywhere (Within reason) near one of his weapons. (Absolute Zero Satellite, Lit. Complete Zero Satellite) (Abilities involving use of previously thrown weapons work due to each weapon maintain a link to his mind unless it is destroyed or voluntarily dissolved. This causes a mental stress that raises the more blades he summons)

The comment between the (), doesn't it belong at the next technique?

Kakumei Eisei: The ability to form ice over a previously thrown weapon and therefore control the weapon from a distance. (Satellite Revolution.)

Hitoshirezu Gengeki: The ability to hide weapons in his clothing such that he can fight at close range or form ice on himself, around himself, or on an opponent for offensive or defensive purposes. (Hidden Weapons) BANKAI.

Reminds me of a manga I once read. No comments, however.

Fukyuu Kire Naraku: The ultimate technique. Using Kakumei Eisei to control all previously thrown weapons on the battlefield to trap and kill the target or targets. High focus and concentration is required to maintain a steady control. High Maintenance. (Eternal Slicing Hell) BANKAI

You mean you use the previously thrown weapons and make them fly to a target?

Ken Iyou No Auto: Last Resort. A Post-FKN move. All previously formed weapons dissolve into the (Small amount of) reiatsu that was used to form it, relieving the mental stress of maintaining so many weapons and slightly replenish his energy. Contrary to his normal fighting style, he forms two weapons only for the remainder of his bankai state. Two large crescent shapes blades (See below) that "Eat" Ice. The blades become larger, yet without increasing in weight, sturdier, and all the sharper whenever they come in contact with Ice. The negatives are that the User loses the ability to create ice (For the period of activation) and ice dissolves after being "eaten". The snow stops when this is activated. There IS, a long ranged mode, of course... (Odd Blade Out)

im sorry, i had an eye appointment, couldnt fill everything out, and this will replace my current one

so, anyway, here it is

Spoiler:- Zanpaktou:

Zanpaktou Name; Sukui o shainingu (Shining Salvation
Type; fire
Zanpaktou Spirit; Sukui looks like a large eagle, with gold and white feathers and sharp talons
Sealed Form: Just a regular scimitar, about 3 feet in length, weighing roughly 30 lbs
Release Command; Ejji o mekura ken-ka (Blinding edge)
Shikai Details; Looks like a gun blade, image below, with a 44 magnum revolver on the end, but it shoots bullets of fire/light not lead
The shikai lightens the blade to about 20 lbs. The blade's speed and power if effected by light, it collects light and stores it in the revolver, which it lets loose with deadly combos, the more light that is gleaming off the blade, the sharper it gets and the faster it moves

Techniques:

Kajō-gaki no arashi (Bullet storm)
I disappear and reappear in the air, letting loose from the gun on my blade hundreds of bullets made of light (which burn like fire) in all directions, the bullets are made of light, and are basically fire itself, as they can be shot through almost anything due to thei immense heat

Furasshu aitsugu (Flash Flurry)
I run up quickly to the opponent, letting loose dozens of slashes with the blade, each slash shines light off it, creating a large flash that may blind the opponent

Mabayui bakari no furasshu (Blinding Flash)
I raise the sword high up in the air, allowing light from the sun to shine off it's mirrored edge, creating a huge flash that blinds the opponent for a few crucial moments to get some attacks in

Bankai Name; Fenikkusushainingu (Shining phoenix)
Bankai Details; My spirit bursts into an eternal fire and becomes ablaze with wings of fire, becoming a golden phoenix
The spirit wraps its wings around me and bonds with me, giving me a set of miraculous golden armor (picture below) and golden wings, It also makes the gunblade larger and have a golden metal on the revolver, and it gives me a large golden shield (picture below)

In Bankai form, the wings allow me to float in the air and fly around at fast speeds, letting me dodge some attacks with ease, the armor itself increases my defenses, absorbing any and all fire attacks and turning it into light, the armor generates it's own light, so there is no need for the sun to help, BUT it still absorbs light and turns it into reiatsu for me to use
The shield can be used to block melee attacks and some others, and can be thrown at the enemy captain america style, beneath the shield hidden on my gauntlet is a claw weapon, three golden blades that stretch out from under the shield and can be used in a variety of combos

Techniques:
Bankai form retains all original Shikai techniques

Burēdo tatsumaki (Blade tornado)
I stretch out my claws and my sword and spin around at a high speed, creating a smal tornado that rips through the battlefield using many slashing attacks

Burēdo shōgeki (Blade bombardment)
An upgraded form of flash flurry, except this time the slashes are faster, there is little flash, and the claws are utilized

Shīrudobūmeran (Shield Boomerang)
My golden shield is thrown like a boomerang at the opponent, its mirrored surface creates a large flash as it flies around the battlefield

Kajō-gaki no harikēn (Bullet hurricane)
Creates more bullets of light to shoot out in all directions, except this time theres more, and they are extremely fast, though the pattern of the bullets is easily seen and can be dodged sometimes if i'm not careful

Hikari ryūsei danmaku (Light meteor barrage)
This is the ultimate Bankai technique, as is devastating, as it effects the entire battlefield. I fly up into the air, an a huge cannonball of light is shot from my gunblade into the sky, moments later, the entire battlefield begins to be scorched by meteors of light flying around in all directions, this technique is difficult to handle, and if i'm not careful, I could kill myself in the process, this technique requires an insane amount of reiatsu, generated from alot of light absorbed, though, due to the slow moving nature of the meteors, they can be dodged with little damage, but the sheer heat of it is almost too much to handle,
after this attack, my bankai wings disappear, and the armor stops generating light for me to use, as much of my reiatsu is depleted, i cannot do many of my other spiritual techniques due to my loss of reiatsu
Anything Else; ShikaiSealedBankai ShieldBankai armor the pieces here are based roughly on what is my idea, these pictures are found on the internet, and are not mine, but they are based most like what i am thinking, especially the armor
also, all the lesser bankai techniques require a bit of reiatsu to use (more than regular techniques anyway) the shikai techniques require little reiatsu except for bullet storm, which requires more reiatsu

That's much better, a light based Zanapktou - interesting idea with the meteors, and you gave yourself a slight handicap too, good good

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

my super awesome idea for a zanpakto is..... a deck of cards
yes, a deck of deadly spirit cards that are used gambit style
but like i said, im not using it, so you guys may want to work with it

Idea has already been taken in a conversation between myself and RG, i'm afraid - Hopefully he'll finalise it soon

Note: contains programming terms, see the last lines for a small legend;

Fullbring Name:Data Drive

Item: Portable hard disk

Activation description:When I activate my fullbring, the blue power led on the hard disk lights up, A circle made out of strings appears around the disk. Each string is seperated from the next by a &. Empty spots are " _ "

Ability Details:Once I pull out these strings, the hard disk changes into the object that the string represents.

I can drag the string back to the power led (which is present in all forms), reversing the item back to the hard disk model.

I can drag out 2 strings at most, if they're next to each other in the circle. (such as "sword"&"shield")

If I am familiar with an object, I can make a variable of it to place it in the empty string spots in the hard disk. A variable is represented by an incomplete cube.

However, the object will be created out of the hard disk available substances.
I can vaguely change the form of the object though I am limited to use materials made out of:
* magnet wire
* gold (in small amounts)
* iron/steel
* rubber
* (thermo)plastic
* copper (in small amounts)

What it looks like:

*refers to the image*

The dark colour is grey, the light colour is orange.

The cubes are a mix of light and dark blue. (yeah I messed up a bit while drawing, should have used a pencil...)

Spoiler:- Fullbring image:

Legend;

A string is a sequence of characters and is contained within " (such as "sword")

A variable is an object which holds data (in the above example the physical sword cube would be the variable)

All of the new zans/revamps look good. I don't really have anything specific to say about them.
And yes, I DID read all of them.

Originally Posted by Eon Master

And how're you going to control your motion / reactions if you speed up time to the point that I can't track you? Remember, your brain has to be able to keep up with your body for your powers to be effective (If this isn't the case now, I think you could make this work for a weakness / limit). Plus, slowing down time for me is less effective (to an extent) because of my enhanced nervous system; I can react after my opponent and still make it in time (by quite a bit in Bankai). The only way to balance this is to make us roughly equal and then force the fight from there, otherwise neither of us will be able to do anything to the other.

At the moment that isn't a limitation, I might add that in.
While your nervous system is still enhanced because of your shikai/bankai, mine also slows it down. So relative to your slowed down frame, your nervous system is still excited, whereas to me, it wouldn't be as much.

Originally Posted by Eon Master

Do eeet.

The weakness or the list? XD

Originally Posted by arceus03

What is feminine about Arial? o.o I used that font for my essay nooooooo

I meant the colour as well XD. The lighter colour, it's softer, smoother and thinner than verdana, at least to me XD.

Originally Posted by arceus03

...Are you giving me a false hope again?

Probably.

Originally Posted by Eon Master

Yep. Thoughts?

Looks good to me, and I don't really have anything specific to point out. Except it's ironic that you're one of the older shinigamis, when you're not a vet XP

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

criticism and comments please, and tell me where I can improve on this one

Much better.
Though we have another Fire zan XD. It's no wonder that Arc is at the top.

Originally Posted by Northern Lights

I wonder where Golde is? ...

Trying to find our pot stash so we stop being insane.

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

Nothing really to say for the Zanpaktou, I looked them over and all of them looked fine. And Cell's fullbring as well. I should try that when I'm not trying to re-make my Shinigami self.

Originally Posted by Luke

@Eon: LoZ, so much LoZ, GAHHHHHHHHHHH *headexplode* in all seriousness, very well thought out, im looking forward to reading YOUR fic

xD There wasn't any LoZ in the profile! Only the appearance being based on Link, really. And cool, thanks.

Originally Posted by ILP

At the moment that isn't a limitation, I might add that in.
While your nervous system is still enhanced because of your shikai/bankai, mine also slows it down. So relative to your slowed down frame, your nervous system is still excited, whereas to me, it wouldn't be as much.

Mhm. Just figured it might be a good place to start.
And that's exactly it. You can slow me down, but I can still react to your moves well in advance and time my dodges perfectly.

Originally Posted by ILP

The weakness or the list? XD

I meant the list, but the weakness is cool too xD

Originally Posted by ILP

Looks good to me, and I don't really have anything specific to point out. Except it's ironic that you're one of the older shinigamis, when you're not a vet XP

It's just for my fic, really. And did I do a good job of showing how godmoddy my Zan would be if it didn't have such massive limitations?

"I'm fighting because there's a battle to be fought, Archer. I'm fighting to win. That's all."

"Hm. Alright, Rin. You are indeed my ideal Master. There is no one else I could hope to serve."

im sorry, i had an eye appointment, couldnt fill everything out, and this will replace my current one

so, anyway, here it is

Spoiler:

Zanpaktou Name; Sukui o shainingu (Shining Salvation
Type; fire
Zanpaktou Spirit; Sukui looks like a large eagle, with gold and white feathers and sharp talons
Sealed Form: Just a regular scimitar, about 3 feet in length, weighing roughly 30 lbs
Release Command; Ejji o mekura ken-ka (Blinding edge)
Shikai Details; Looks like a gun blade, image below, with a 44 magnum revolver on the end, but it shoots bullets of fire/light not lead
The shikai lightens the blade to about 20 lbs. The blade's speed and power if effected by light, it collects light and stores it in the revolver, which it lets loose with deadly combos, the more light that is gleaming off the blade, the sharper it gets and the faster it moves

Techniques:

Kajō-gaki no arashi (Bullet storm)
I disappear and reappear in the air, letting loose from the gun on my blade hundreds of bullets made of light (which burn like fire) in all directions, the bullets are made of light, and are basically fire itself, as they can be shot through almost anything due to thei immense heat

Furasshu aitsugu (Flash Flurry)
I run up quickly to the opponent, letting loose dozens of slashes with the blade, each slash shines light off it, creating a large flash that may blind the opponent

Mabayui bakari no furasshu (Blinding Flash)
I raise the sword high up in the air, allowing light from the sun to shine off it's mirrored edge, creating a huge flash that blinds the opponent for a few crucial moments to get some attacks in

Bankai Name; Fenikkusushainingu (Shining phoenix)
Bankai Details; My spirit bursts into an eternal fire and becomes ablaze with wings of fire, becoming a golden phoenix
The spirit wraps its wings around me and bonds with me, giving me a set of miraculous golden armor (picture below) and golden wings, It also makes the gunblade larger and have a golden metal on the revolver, and it gives me a large golden shield (picture below)

In Bankai form, the wings allow me to float in the air and fly around at fast speeds, letting me dodge some attacks with ease, the armor itself increases my defenses, absorbing any and all fire attacks and turning it into light, the armor generates it's own light, so there is no need for the sun to help, BUT it still absorbs light and turns it into reiatsu for me to use
The shield can be used to block melee attacks and some others, and can be thrown at the enemy captain america style, beneath the shield hidden on my gauntlet is a claw weapon, three golden blades that stretch out from under the shield and can be used in a variety of combos

Techniques:
Bankai form retains all original Shikai techniques

Burēdo tatsumaki (Blade tornado)
I stretch out my claws and my sword and spin around at a high speed, creating a smal tornado that rips through the battlefield using many slashing attacks

Burēdo shōgeki (Blade bombardment)
An upgraded form of flash flurry, except this time the slashes are faster, there is little flash, and the claws are utilized

Shīrudobūmeran (Shield Boomerang)
My golden shield is thrown like a boomerang at the opponent, its mirrored surface creates a large flash as it flies around the battlefield

Kajō-gaki no harikēn (Bullet hurricane)
Creates more bullets of light to shoot out in all directions, except this time theres more, and they are extremely fast, though the pattern of the bullets is easily seen and can be dodged sometimes if i'm not careful

Hikari ryūsei danmaku (Light meteor barrage)
This is the ultimate Bankai technique, as is devastating, as it effects the entire battlefield. I fly up into the air, an a huge cannonball of light is shot from my gunblade into the sky, moments later, the entire battlefield begins to be scorched by meteors of light flying around in all directions, this technique is difficult to handle, and if i'm not careful, I could kill myself in the process, this technique requires an insane amount of reiatsu, generated from alot of light absorbed, though, due to the slow moving nature of the meteors, they can be dodged with little damage, but the sheer heat of it is almost too much to handle,
after this attack, my bankai wings disappear, and the armor stops generating light for me to use, as much of my reiatsu is depleted, i cannot do many of my other spiritual techniques due to my loss of reiatsu
Anything Else; ShikaiSealedBankai ShieldBankai armor the pieces here are based roughly on what is my idea, these pictures are found on the internet, and are not mine, but they are based most like what i am thinking, especially the armor
also, all the lesser bankai techniques require a bit of reiatsu to use (more than regular techniques anyway) the shikai techniques require little reiatsu except for bullet storm, which requires more reiatsu

criticism and comments please, and tell me where I can improve on this one

IT'S A NEW MEMBER! Hi there, im the Squad 11 Captain!
Im the club's official cloud cuckoolander/crazy sadistic maniac!
My list of achievements include: Person to Visit Squad 4 the Most//Person to be in the most fights//Sadistic Maniac//Cam//Person who walked into Mordor.screwtherulesIhaveBlueHair
How far you in the series?
Do you need any help with your zanpaktou/Have you already made one?
Do you RP at all?
And the most important question of all, do you LIKE SHINJI HIRAKO?

Hello everyone, I would like to join.
I only read the Bleach manga, but I hope to get back into the anime soon.
And I kind of need help making up a Zanpaktou, I've a base idea for it but its very far from done.

Zanpakuto spirit: an adult sized bird with wings of electric and a body mixed with flames.

Non released form - a regular type of sword (the size of tensa zangetsu). Extremely light.

Released form - duel wielded dagger with elemental abilities. One dagger has an electric time and the other fire. As my sword are small in length they give me extreme speed and amazing evasion accapiablities.

Moves

Bright beams - Buraito wa, bīmu

I take a sword, electric or fire doesn't matter, and crush with my bare hands. If I crushed the electric one there's some typeof ball filled with that type of energy. If I crushed the fire the same happens just a different type. With the hand I didn't crush the sword with, the sword I am carrying will extend to the size of a regular sword (tensa zangetsu) and will change to the form i did not crush my hand with. Ex. Sword electric and the hand is fire. The sword will be mainly for defense while hand is my offense ability. With my hand I can shoot some type of cero(no I'm not a espada). I can shoot as much I can handle.

I raise my hands into the air, my two swords take their separate form and duplicate themselves about 50 times and just fire at the opponent. Once the fire has started and misses, it will vanish and will be shot again. I will shoot as many as needed to my opponent. About my defense? No worries I will have two swords of the type of my choosing. But they have no form and don't have much power put into them as I have my elemental powers on my bullet type of thing.
Even while fighting in close combat I can control my swords from the sky. The bad part is while fighting closely with my opponent, the shots I fire from the sky may accidentally attack me as well.

Bankai - Heaven's Force - Ten no chikara
I get wings made out of fire and electric giving me flying capabilities.

Duo slashes - De~yuosurasshu

I raise my hands once again, this time I release my electric sword into the air manipulating the weather allowing me to bring thunderbolts from the sky. With my fire sword I stab it into the ground then it vanishes. Allowing me to bring fire blasts from the ground. The only problem about this is my defenses. I guess I can make walls of fire and lighting deflecting any incoming attack. When the attack is done the swords return to me.

This is my final attack FORM. Both of my swords disappear in my hands and become claws. You should know this by now lol, their made out of fire and electric. I can also shoot the type of ceros again but from this time from both of my hands. When they come close I can battle them with my claws. My reistsu can't hold the power I have for so long. If I am fighting with this form for to long I will end up electrocuting and burning myself.

Swing of Faith - Shinkō no suingu
(FINAL FINAL FINAL ATTACK)

I place all of my power into my blades causing them to both disintegrate, turning into dust. I blow the dust in my hand which magically turns into a double tipped spear. I then swing it into the air (Think about when Ulquiorra swings his sword to deflect one of Hollow Ichigos swings, just swinging it in the air),
As I'm swinging it, bolts of lightning from the sky and fire from the ground are just going inside the blade. I then run up to my opponent with one last blow. By doing so, this may seriously injure me as my powers are very dangerous a bit to much for my to handle.

You'd have to heat Tsukibana to higher than 500 degrees Celsius, and even if you did, it wouldn't be very good...

Originally Posted by badmanjaro

Zachiru

I would love to join! Hopeful I can find a great squad to join!

Originally Posted by PKMN Trainer Rex

Zachiru

Hello everyone, I would like to join.
I only read the Bleach manga, but I hope to get back into the anime soon.
And I kind of need help making up a Zanpaktou, I've a base idea for it but its very far from done.

Welcome the the Bleach club! I am the Captain of the 12th Squad, I like Pokemon (...), though I also go by ILP/Ilpy/Ilpeh/Ilpizzy/Aielpy/Aaroniero/Anternero/Ant/Any other nickname.

Do you guys read the manga or watch the anime (sub or dub?)

Originally Posted by badmanjaro

Zanpakuto - Howling force - Chikara o hauringu

Initiate saying: Fly your prey is before you!

Zanpakuto spirit: a human like figure on fire. Wherever he walks there's electric flowing from his feet, also whatever he touches. He is very dangerous...

Non released form - a regular type of sword (the size of tensa zangetsu). Extremely light.

Released form - duel wielded dagger with elemental abilities. One dagger has an electric time and the other fire. As my sword are small in length they give me extreme speed and amazing evasion accapiablities.

Moves - I'll get these translated later

Bright beams
I take a sword, electric or fire doesn't matter, and crush with my bare hands. If I crushed the electric one there's some typeof ball filled with that type of energy. If I crushed the fire the same happens just a different type. With the hand I didn't crush the sword with, the sword I am carrying will extend to the size of a regular sword (tensa zangetsu) and will change to the form i did not crush my hand with. Ex. Sword electric and the hand is fire. The sword will be mainly for defense while hand is my offense ability. With my hand I can shoot some type of cero(no I'm not a espada). I can shoot as much I can handle.

Final temptation
(last zanpakutos move)

I raise my hands into the air, my two swords take their separate form and duplicate themselves about 50 times and just fire at the opponent. Once the fire has started and misses, it will vanish and will be shot again. I will shoot from the air about 10 each to my opponent. About my defense? No worries I will have two swords of the type of my choosing. But they have no form and don't have much power put into them as I have my elemental powers on my bullet type of thing.
Even while fighting in close combat I can control my swords from the sky. The bad part is while fighting closely with my opponent, the shots I fire from the sky may accidentally attack me as well.

I don't know if I'm allowed to have this but yeah bankai. I get wings made out of fire and electric giving me flying capabilities.

Duo slashes

I raise my hands once again, this time I release my electric sword into the air manipulating the weather allowing me to bring thunderbolts from the sky. With my fire sword I stab it into the ground then it vanishes. Allowing me to bring fire blasts from the ground. The only problem about this is my defenses. I guess I can make walls of fire and lighting deflecting any incoming attack. When the attack is done the swords return to me.

I can't think of an attack name for this so help me out with what I say
(final form)

This is my final attack FORM. Both of my swords disappear in my hands and become claws. You should know this by now lol, their made out of fire and electric. I can also shoot the type of ceros again but from this time from both of my hands. When they come close I can battle them with my claws. My reistsu can't hold the power I have for so long. If I am fighting with this form for to long I will end up electrocuting and burning myself.

Dual fire and electric? Nice. With Final Temptation, if the swords are duplicated 50 times, why do you shoot only 10 of each to your opponent?

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

Hello everyone, I would like to join.
I only read the Bleach manga, but I hope to get back into the anime soon.
And I kind of need help making up a Zanpaktou, I've a base idea for it but its very far from done.

you too should come to Squad 13.

Originally Posted by badmanjaro

Zanpakuto - Howling force - Chikara o hauringu

Initiate saying: Fly your prey is before you!

Zanpakuto spirit: a human like figure on fire. Wherever he walks there's electric flowing from his feet, also whatever he touches. He is very dangerous...

Non released form - a regular type of sword (the size of tensa zangetsu). Extremely light.

Released form - duel wielded dagger with elemental abilities. One dagger has an electric time and the other fire. As my sword are small in length they give me extreme speed and amazing evasion accapiablities.

Moves - I'll get these translated later

Bright beams
I take a sword, electric or fire doesn't matter, and crush with my bare hands. If I crushed the electric one there's some typeof ball filled with that type of energy. If I crushed the fire the same happens just a different type. With the hand I didn't crush the sword with, the sword I am carrying will extend to the size of a regular sword (tensa zangetsu) and will change to the form i did not crush my hand with. Ex. Sword electric and the hand is fire. The sword will be mainly for defense while hand is my offense ability. With my hand I can shoot some type of cero(no I'm not a espada). I can shoot as much I can handle.

Final temptation
(last zanpakutos move)

I raise my hands into the air, my two swords take their separate form and duplicate themselves about 50 times and just fire at the opponent. Once the fire has started and misses, it will vanish and will be shot again. I will shoot from the air about 10 each to my opponent. About my defense? No worries I will have two swords of the type of my choosing. But they have no form and don't have much power put into them as I have my elemental powers on my bullet type of thing.
Even while fighting in close combat I can control my swords from the sky. The bad part is while fighting closely with my opponent, the shots I fire from the sky may accidentally attack me as well.

I don't know if I'm allowed to have this but yeah bankai. I get wings made out of fire and electric giving me flying capabilities.

Duo slashes

I raise my hands once again, this time I release my electric sword into the air manipulating the weather allowing me to bring thunderbolts from the sky. With my fire sword I stab it into the ground then it vanishes. Allowing me to bring fire blasts from the ground. The only problem about this is my defenses. I guess I can make walls of fire and lighting deflecting any incoming attack. When the attack is done the swords return to me.

I can't think of an attack name for this so help me out with what I say
(final form)

This is my final attack FORM. Both of my swords disappear in my hands and become claws. You should know this by now lol, their made out of fire and electric. I can also shoot the type of ceros again but from this time from both of my hands. When they come close I can battle them with my claws. My reistsu can't hold the power I have for so long. If I am fighting with this form for to long I will end up electrocuting and burning myself.

Final attack needs a name xD

Well both of my claws just charge up for one last blow and slash my opponent.

Thank you!! Took me awhile to write it lol. I hope it gets approved. Now to answer the questions!

I like it. Not the run of the mill zan.

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

You'd have to heat Tsukibana to higher than 500 degrees Celsius, and even if you did, it wouldn't be very good...

If you're talking about the ability where Arc sends Tsukibana inside you, then yeah. That's not good.

Welcome newbies. I'm the Captain of Squad 13, Kusari. When joining a squad I hope you would consider 13 as an option. Badmanjaro may I recommend that, if you don't join 13, consider Squad 6. They're an offensive squad and your zan is somewhat like the current captain's.

PRETEND THERE IS A SIGNATURE HERE FULL OF WITTY JOKES AND CLAIMS TO FAME AND UNDESERVED BRAVADO AND SELF PROMOTION