Very few fics which start with Vic and Teddy as children are so good and so well-thought; usually those chapters are used only as a background to the story. But, you, here- you make this a real part of your story. You show their characters, you show who they are and what kind of children they are. And what's the most important factor of all, is that you present them as children with childish thoughts and behaviors.

I really liked this small chapter, and I honestly hope you'll keep writing this. It's very promising!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it :) I will keep writing as much as possible, even though this story was intended as a kind of a break from my other ones. But showing their relationship from when they were little is really important to me, because to me that's what changes the future!
Anyway, thanks for reviewing! x