Very nice poem. I liked the images you created. My only suggestion is that I don't think you need the parentheses and ellipses you used. The poem would be more readable without them and it would take nothing from your meaning. Good job.

Oh, that I could live where 'sunrise on the mountain...' marked my awareness on every point in my journey.
"Son-rise" truly casts His light...on each moment...making special, even the simple things. If I could but stay in the reality of this truth.
I love your work. It is so visual. I see it! I feel it! I hear it! And I am blessed! I think we all needed 'the mountain,' in the formative years of our life. Thank you for bringing it to us, so beautifully.