not bad. id suggest you not only in order to save paint but because of esthetical reasons to use the red as second outline and than here n there some black bubbles for background. get some bucket paint n roll the shit first.
too much space between t and h...the r is weird and the s , i bet you see it.
half of the 3d is fairly enough at least for me...

yeah i agree with everyone's crits on my paintin , i freestyle them all right now , cause i honestly want to learn control , and cuttin back , and outlinin real good before i get into goin crazy on pieces . sounds like an excuse but i just aint that good. i got about eight or nine gallons of white , but i'm too lazy to mix it and roll it on .i onlyused maybe half a tin on the red anyways so i'm over it.

imo i rather try different things when i go out and paint.. painting the same thing over and over again is boring.. changing it up all the time is how you get your style.. you find something you like and then you modify it to exactly how you think it should be.. im just trying to find the style i can get good at.. simples are boring and dull as i said. and learning different ideas is good too

Dude, you can do whatever you want.
You're definitely free to do you, y'know what I'm sayin'?

All I'm saying is it looked wack when you tried to stray away from simple letters, and I suggest going back to simps. And hey, if you think you're beyond that, at least get some inspiration before you go and smash shit. That's the type of shit that gets ragged where I'm from.

yeah bro i got you on all that...
im just trying new shit.. kids wanna rag my shit i just go over them dont bother me hahah... but most the writers in my area aint about that but the young bucks who think they are writers and scribble dicks n shit on the good shit...those kids get beat the fuck up.
and im sticking wit simples but i was trying new shit but as ive said ill start from scratch and do it again but hopefully better.

You should space out your RE a little more so the letters are more even. And that W to W extension is hideous, try making it look more like either a.) a 90's style telephone cable, or b.) a piece of gum being stretched across both ends.

I like how you finally got the T to fit without floating, and the can control is pretty good, especially the orange part in the drop shadow, nice and clean.

But all of those extensions need to either be more relaxed, but tight, like a loose curl, or stretchy so it doesn't look wrong. I also think it'd be cool if you did all the letters with the same way you did the top of the R and the middle of the E. the whole letter, too.