It's pretty good considering I partly helped you make that movie. Maybe trying to learn some better computer art and some better story lines, you can make a killer movie. The sound you can work on, and maybe a better flash program.

the sound was too jumpy, i either couldnt hear anything or it was loud...could have put a little more effort into the animation, looks a little like you rushed thought it...but what drove me nuts was the sound....screechy and loud...it frightened me :(