I'm happy with the comments, but my job is far from the quality of the masterpiece of Will Murai, I really hope he likes, for me it would be very rewarding! From the first moment I saw him, I was fascinated with the dash and beauty of the scene!

-As mentioned before by other members, the cup is floating and I think that you could create a more interesting material for the guy's drink and the girl's one. It supposed to be water and milk shake?
-The lighting could be more interesting, perhaps if you keep the backlight from the outside and darken a bit the interior to get it more contrasted and then achieve a more dramatic scene, focusing the story on the couple and not on the entire scene.
-The clothing, mainly the girl's dress looks fake, not cartoon. The fabric is not natural
-The girl seems to be looking at the infinity.
-The window showing the outside is weird, it looks more like a poster lit by a bakclight
-I don't know if the picture on the left on the right is deformed in a cartoonish style or you have a perspective problem. If the first is correct you could exaggerate more the distortion.

keep going

gus

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jonhlost - thanks Jonh!
jonferCgartist - Hello friend, you're right, I missed those details, thank you for observation, will try to adjust this error. I promise to be more careful with these details! thanks!

gu - Hello Gu okay?
very good your tips and suggestions! I really vacillating on glass that is floating, and the liquid should have given more attention to these details! : (
As for the clothes of the girl, I did a simulation using a "chair" than the "chair" that she is actually sitting, and I agree with you, it was a bit odd, I'll see if I can set ....
several people gave me great tips on lighting and coincide with yours, they're great! Thank you for your help! I'm doing uam new image simulating the same couple in the future and I'll apply these tips ....
For perspective, I left the table with a twisted design on purpose, but I think the idea was not cool, I'll pay more attention to details ESSS! thank you for your obserbaçoes! and will be great help!
For perspective, I left the table with a twisted design on purpose, but I think the idea was not cool, I'll pay more attention to details ESSS! thank you for your obserbaçoes! and will be great help!

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