Writing

Introducing Tommy from The Devil Within

It’s 5 AM, and my dog is outside barking at the world. It might be time for a bark collar.

Today I’m going to introduce you to Tommy from The Devil Within. Tommy is one of my favorite characters, because he’s multi-dimensional. Tommy is William’s cousin, in his twenties, who takes on the role of an older brother or father figure for William. Tommy grew up in a fairly charmed life with his mother Mimi and his Dad, also named Tom. He went off to college then dropped out, came home and knocked a girl up then married her. Tommy struggles with being an adult while feeling a lot like a kid. But Tommy has a soft side, and he turns into a savior for William in many ways. Without Tommy in the picture, William would have been lost.

When I wrote about Tommy, I wanted his character to be complicated. In the book, William struggles with thoughts of guilt and sin, and Tommy is perhaps the most sinful character in the book, but he’s also the most loving, caring, and kind. He’s the character who knows right from wrong even though his choices might not always reflect that.

After finishing this book, Tommy’s character has stuck with me. I keep thinking about him. I’ve thought about expanding his story, or maybe writing shorts about him. Through the writing process, he became my favorite character in the book. I wonder if you’ll feel the same way.