I love this Bella. The Bella from the book and story I want to smack fro being stupid. And the whole laughing when Edward showed her him in the sunlight, I actually did the same thing when I saw the movie. I was think glitter, really. I laughed too. Because there's nothing dangerous then a "fangless glittering vampire" lol. I like that she tough and able to handle herself and I love love love her come backs she is so Sarcastic and knows how to shock everyone around her. Love it.

Really liked this, though I hoped you'd have adapted the two things better. When Edward left it didn't make sense at all, considering her position. I know he's blind, but this is like really crazy blind.
So for the future: you don't have to learn too close to the books. Do like you do with SuperN, just keep it simple, keep the names, keep the personalities - to some extent. Otherwise you end up making seem very out of place... But looking forward to the next chapter. I am adding it to favs :D

Please Update when you can, this is my favorite story on here. I think... Lol, there's so many. If you update then I'll update. Can u check out my story? I love this story SO much, I hope it won't be abandoned or shut down. IDK if I could even stand if it was put on hiatus. :) PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE WHEN U CAN. :) - Kat