This is absolutely hilarious! I was laughing the entire I was reading, and now my family is giving me odd looks. Ah, well, I loved this!

I really like how this is written. The way James thinks is so funny, and his "up-himself" antics were brilliant! Also, I love the way he thinks about Lily, and the ridiculous names he calls her. No wonder she hates him!

Dumbledore was very amusing. I think that, despite it not exactly being canon, you have captured the "crazy" Dumbledore perfectly! And I am curious as to why he seems to want to help James to go out with Lily...

I love how this has a few cliches, and mixing it with modern sayings really makes this all the more hilarious. I honestly can't fault this!

10/10 - and I would very much like it if you stopped by again when you update :D

~Lizzie

Author's Response: Hey there!

First off, I'm SOO sorry about the responding time! College life is just busier than I could have imagined!

Thanks so much for the wonderful review. Wow, you can't fault anything? You're making me blush. :D Haha thanks so much! And nce again, I'm SO sorry for the long wait for me to answer!