Hi you guys, It's me again. I was looking thru the topic and I noticed that people seem to like to argue about 'Gilgath'. The new name isn't too bad. And is Smockclay's first name, Abobado? If it is, then what is with that? And when do you think that the movie's tailers will go onto TFN?

Kay: Greetings, all. I welcome you to the Republic Warship Thunderbolt. You are a large group? (indrawn breath) Nighthawk! You would betray the ruling of the Jedi Council?
Nighthawk: Whoa!! Kay, whatd'you mean? I haven't disobeyed a single word of the Council since I left the order!
Kay: You've taken an apprentice, and you know full well the Council has expressly forbidden any but Jedi Masters to instruct in the ways of the Force.
Nighthawk: Kay, I haven't trained an apprentice since before I left the order. I haven't the slightest... idea... Oh. I get it. (he looks at Cindy). Opps.
Cindy: What? What is it?
Nighthawk: I guess I have been getting a bit rusty after all.
Kay: You didn't sense it at all? I am surprised at you, Nighthawk.
Cindy: What? Sense what?
Nighthawk: I guess you'll be taking her off my hands, then...
Kay: Sorry Nighthawk, you know the rules. I sense much potential in this one.
Cindy: Hey!!! You can speak to me. I'm right here.
Kay: Much impatience in her as well.
Nighthawk: I didn't need the Force to find that out. She's all yours, right?
Kay: The rules say, he or she who finds a Force-Sensitive creature, it is their responsibility to train them.
Nighthawk: I know that Kay. I am known in the annals of the Jedi as one who could quote the rules at the earliest age- 3. But I am forbidden to teach anyone the Ways of the Force.
Kay: However, I can help you out in this. Have her come to room 64 as soon as possible. It is on deck 15.
Nighthawk: She will be there when she can.
Cindy: So, are you too just going to ignore me or what?
Nighthawk: Lets go Cindy. Robert is waiting for you on the Bridge.

Well, here it is at last. I would like to thank each and every person on TFN who contributed to this. Also I would like to point out yet again, this is not a disscusion threed for the name 'Gilgath'. Thanks. And without futher adu, here is the script for the Star Wars Fan Film, Dawn of Evil. See ya all later!

STAR WARS:
EPISODE 0
BEGINNING OF DARKNESS

IT IS A TIME OF PEACE FOR THE OLD REPUBLIC. WITH THE JEDI AT THEIR SIDE, THEY STAND ALL BUT INVINCIBLE.

BUT PRESSURES ARE BUILDING OUTSIDE, AND EVEN INSIDE THE REACH OF THE REPUBLIC. ONE SUCH PRESSURE IS THE FACTION LED BY THE DARK JEDI LORD DARTH TIBERIUS. COMMANDING A POWERFUL FLEET FROM HIS FLAGSHIP
SITHSPAWN, HE CONTROLS ONE OF THE MOST TERRIBLE, WELL-KEPT SECRETS IN THE GALAXY. ONE THAT THREATENS TO ERADICATE ALL THAT THE REPUBLIC HAS LABORED SO LONG TO BUILD.

BUT ALL IS NOT LOST, FOR THE JEDI MASTER KE-SON MAAL HAS DISCOVERED THE SECRET OF THE SITHSPAWN. SUPPORTED BY A GROUP OF JEDI AND THEIR ALLIES, KE-SON IS ALL THAT STANDS BETWEEN THE REPUBLIC AND TOTAL DESTRUCTION. BUT THERE ARE STILL MORE TO JOIN THE FIGHT AGAINST THE JEDI.

DARTH TIBERIUS'S APPRENTICE, DARTH TORVIS, IS SOON TO BECOME A SITH LORD. WITH HIS ELEVATION, THE FIGHT WILL COMMENCE FOR FREEDOM AND JUSTICE IN THE GALAXY...

(Darth Torvis and Darth Tiberius are fighting in this opening scene. It is his final test for becoming a Sith Lord. In this battle Darth Torvis wins by disarming his master...)

Tiberius: You are indeed a worthy apprentice! Your training is nearly complete, but your final test is still to come...
Torvis: I am ready, my master.
Tiberius: Ke-Son Maal and Abobado Smocklay have found out about the cloning chambers. They are fleeing this sector in a pair of T-Wing-class Starfighters. Return only after they have been slain.
Torvis: Yes, my master.

(Darth Tiberius and Darth Torvis walk toward a building that rises over trees in a forest...)

---Fade to new scene---

---In the Toprawa Control Room...---

(Camera views everybody, then switches to Kay Mardorn who is pointing to holographic image of the starship Sithspawn...)

Kay Mardorn: This is the Sithspawn?Gathered sources say that the Jedi Master Ke-Son Maal and Republic Pilot Abobado Smocklay are being followed by this ship. Smocklay and Ke-Son must survive for they have information vital to the security of the Republic. They have fled to the distant planet of Galdimari. We must intercept the Sithspawn at near that location.

([Scott] is leaning against the wall and then swiftly walks away, unnoticed...)

---Screen moves from left to right shifting over to Ke-Son Maal and Smocklay in their Starfighters...---

Ke-Son: There! In that cave.

(View of camera panning down to a mountainous terrain toward a cave...)

Smocklay: Yes, Sir.

(The two ships floats down and enters the rather large cave...)

Smocklay: We are receiving a transmission from the Republic. They have sent reinforcements to assist us. I hope it?s not too late.

---2 Sith ships come out of light speed near a moon...---

(The two ships split in two opposing directions and the Sithspawn jumps alone while the Dark Falcon joins the rest of the Sith fleet, consisting of 1 Frigate, 2 Victory Star Destroyers, and 1 Modified Corvette, plus 30 K-Wings, 30 Blastboats, and 30 I-7s...)

Smithee and droideka, I hope you'll reconsider using Gligath in your movies. Personally, I don't think it's a very attractive name. It sounds barbaric (ie, connotations of Goliath), but it seems to mean a lot to Gligath. However, you legally can use it, but be prepared to have a flame war, should your movies ever be released. Don't you think it'd be strange to have like 4 fanfilms all with a character named Gligath?! Gligath, I think you should write a short little sci-fi script, submit it to the writer's guild before these fanfilms are released, and copywrite your character (if it means that much to you), thus preventing either of those people from using a character with the likeness of yours. As for Scott, it doesn't sound very star-wars-ish, like someone said, but if they want to use it they can, seeing as it's a common name, and unless they use the same first and last name as you, you can't file a suit about name defamation or indentity security. ( in case anyone is wondering, my father is a lawyer, my source of information, along with the internet.) Also, Gligath, I wouldn't go around claiming to have copywritten something if you actually haven't anymore. Do you know what it is to copywrite something? It's a legal transaction, not just a claim.

Another thing: your use of fancy catch-words that sound military-ish really annoys me, being in the ROTC myself. If you're going to write about anyone's military (any good military, anyway) you must be consistant. Your commanders just don't feel authentic. Look for some old WWII books and read a few excerpts from them, and study their style and lingo. (theres an answer for that other guy, who asked about battle lingo.)

As for names, I suggest using this tool called the name-gen, a program for coming up with names for use in RPG's. To find it, ask anyone on rpg.net where to find it. It's only about 200kb, so it's not a big download. Also, you could search for a few online name generators (I know there's a metal gear solid one, that comes up with code names.) And I have a few names you could use: Lan Oran, Flita (long i, pronounced "ee") McJolie, Artsyu Mohagas, Dreamba Iu-iu-Succus (pronounced you-you-suckus), Naple Infero (pronounced napel in-pharoah.) I just made those up just now, so if you'd like to hear more, I'm good at making original names. [Edit: You could also use this old writer's trick: look up synonyms to words that describe the character you need a name for and change the spelling slightly.)

Dont be a hypocrit, crunchy, think outside of your own box, create your own character (you'd end up feeling better if you did) and respect Gligath's wishes.

Hopefully, Darth Apporth, you're being sarcastic.

And nighthawk is a copyrighted comic book character, so i wouldnt use that.

Well said SilverFox0440. I completely agree with you on most of those comments, and yes, names have been a problem for us from the beginning. We tried the SW name generator, useless. I'll take up your advice on the rpg namegen. Thanks for all the feedback everyone! We hope to make this fanfilm enjoyable for all star wars fans.

EDIT: And yes, JEDIBYKNIGHT, we are going to use your title Dawn of Evil. Thank you very much for your suggestion.