I'm usually not really a fan of this type of stories but this is one is fantastic.

I like the way the story develops and how Tony and Ziva think about their actions and what they actually mean. The hopes and desires that come along with the gestures is very well written and described. I really admire how you described the different side if the characters without making them being unrealistic or out of character. I really like that.

The scene where Tony and Ziva talk about the different cultures and when Tony suddenly talks to her in Hebrew and she tells him that she wants him right now, is just priceless and really made me laugh. I like those moments in a story.