The boobs look like they're sagging massively, they could use to be rounder and less triangular shaped too. (The idea would be to move the accentuating lines a bit further inward and 'round' them)

Her collarbone is shaped unnaturally.

All of the details on the wing-things are lost in-game and are nonsensical anyways, either contrast them better or make the details larger such that they're noticeable.

Nice handling of the shitty forehead wrap, it doesn't look too bad considering how wretched I know it to be.

Her lips are too thick and far apart and her eyes are a slight bit too far apart. (Look how far they are from the bridge of her nose)

I'm not going to comment seriously on the skin tone since I'm guessing it's intentional, but it makes her look like she's only eaten carrots her entire life.

She isn't wearing any underwear according to the texture wrapped on the model. (See for yourself!)

The black on her boots and armbands should 'shine' more, right now it's this pitch black, static shade of black and it looks very ugly. You should make it shine like leather does and lighten it with whites on the backsides. This will give a more seductress look to what she's wearing anyways. I particularly like the coloring on the skeletal heads on her boots, they just need the 'shine'.

I quite like it really, i'd approve it, but seeing as how dusk had a couple of things to say about it we'll wait for a second opinion, but this most certainly has my blessing. Apart from the squigly weird green lines on the back, the level of detail is just right, wich is something even the most experienced amongst us still not always get right.

There isn't one, that list isn't comprised of problems, rather comments. :)

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Originally Posted by erwtenpeller

I quite like it really, i'd approve it, but seeing as how dusk had a couple of things to say about it we'll wait for a second opinion, but this most certainly has my blessing. Apart from the squigly weird green lines on the back, the level of detail is just right, wich is something even the most experienced amongst us still not always get right.

I definitely agree on the detail level, aside from the wing-things, it holds really well with the coloring and structure in-game; that's impressive. And hey Erwt, if you think it's good enough, you can move it up and I can harass Dio to improve it on his own time. :p