Reviews

Rated 4 / 5 stars2003-07-27 03:14:13

A good effort!

You obviously put a lot of effort into this and it shows with the quality of your work! Your sense of storyline could use some polish though. Pick better places to pause than a goon fight. A better spot would have been "But they won't be a problem", then cut with him in mid-air.
That way you would start the next episode with a cool fight, leading up to Basura's confrontation (Another good cut spot).
All in all, you're doing great! My only suggestion is to control your storyline. You might want to try storyboarding the whole thing first.