It definately shows Snape's softer, more passionate side and how it differs from his bitter personality throughout the HP series. I'm really glad you wrote this and I definately see a possible career as a writer for you!

That was amazing! Thank you so much for writing it (: I love the fact that Snape's deepest desire at the end is for her to be alive, and it doesn't matter who she's with. It was so moving. Subscribed (:

Oh my goodness! This is so sad! *whimpers* Poor Sev! Although I like the progression from him being desperate for her to love him back to eventually just wishing that she were alive. It's like a gradual acceptance. Well done.