This is the second time i read this fic and i liked it more now that u typed the 2 paragraphs on the bottom. question...Did u have Atemu being raped?

none chapter 1 . 1/13/2007

If it was meant to be confusing, good job, it was. You lost my interest about halfway through. Good thoughts, don't get me wrong, but there should really be a plot that's more easy to follow and supporting details.

Chinese Dragon Keeper chapter 1 . 2/5/2006

Hey. This fic's kinda confusing, but all right.

RocketsAreGood chapter 1 . 11/23/2005

...Emm, you lost me. You rushed this fic. I have no idea what the hell is going on...But, hey keep trying, and try not to lose me in the next chapter, thats is you're gonna continue...

Roxanne de Winter chapter 1 . 9/23/2005

I just wanted to say I love this fanfic, especially the end XD

Anyone who disagrees is a fucktart, hai ! I love how you write Mahaado, he's obsessed yet in such a sexy way o.o!

I don't want to write an uber-long review, because it'll be an uber-spoiler. Good job Phantomness _! I printed this one out, btw.