Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Scene description week 1 term 4

We were learning to explain the picture, put alliteration and simile's in the scene description.Scene description Aston

Success Criteria

Has strong adjectives

Different sentence beginnings

Different sentence lengths

A simile and/or alliteration

Has an introduction, body and conclusion

Thoughtful word choices

Show examples of single, compound and complex sentences.

I turn around and in front of my eyes is the most amazing scene. Mossy stones lying like big humps in the frothy, flowing lake and trees dangling off the ground. A rusty old shed sitting lonely in the middle of the silent forest. The silent tiny waterfall sliding down the rocky rocks and out into the misty river. Bright light shines like night stars through the smooth green trees. This place is the best place for camping.

Me

About Me

My name is Aston and I am a year six student at Parkvale school. The teachers in my hub are Mr Moriarty , Mr Cooper and Mr Blakey. My favorite subjects are writing , maths and reading. Outside of school I like to go on trips and take the Jet Ski out. The food I like is Thai and Pesto pasta. I like to create things and design. When I am older I want to go to Europe and want to become a Hollywood big shot movie director and become a billionaire.