Very interesting story you've written, I was instantly drowned in their world. You have a massive talent, I loved how you described their feelings, their thoughts and how they moved around each other. I did notice that they couldn't open the door, which was odd since they both had wands and doors are usually able to be opened from the inside - BUT! As you wrote this story so perfectly, I actually ignored that detail and thought that 'hey! just because they're wizards, doesn't mean they get to do everything their way'. I loved this story, so I'll give you a 10/10 *thumbs up*

Hi. I really loved this story. I can see this happening. With just the one or two errors, which you spoke of already, it was perfect. And I am so glad that you ended it well.
I've read some of your others and have more to read. I can't wait. I like your writing.
Keep up good work.

Author's Response: I hope I've addressed most of the errors by now, though I wouldn't be surprised if some sneaky ones have enaded me! I glad you liked it.

I'm not really a Dramione fan, but this have changed that. It has.
It's beautifully written and it is a very good plot, yes indeed. I love that you don't make Hermione's hair "long, silky, yet curly"-thing that you could find in other stories, and that Draco in fact, is a git. It's details, I know, but I'm very, very, strict on details. ;)

To sum it up - I love it!
Thank you for bringing this story into life. Wonderful.
/MedaBlack

hey,
have read this story about 11 times now and it is just as good now as the first time round
thanks for writing it
also it plagued me the first few times reading how they couldnt magic themselves food but then when you read closer in the real books it one of those law thingies like graphalott's law or whatever that they cannot make food entirely out of magic or watever so then it made it much easier to read as i wasnt questioning myself all the time!!
thanks again.

i read this when i was extreemly tierd and was almost aleep but i couldn't stop reading, it was very good i loved it and just couldn't fall asleep :) but now that i'm done sleep is needed :) loverly story xx

:) that was positively amusing. I adored it. Haha, really, the way you portrayed the lust-relationship and didn't go after a romantic one was a great twist from all the other fanfiction I read (not to mention write, I might have to take a page out of your book and leave them at canon.) Well anyways, I throughly enjoyed that. On to the next story!

(Before even reading the first word to the story) HOLY DAMN. I'm used to reading chapters that are like, at MOST about 2-3000 words. This is incredibly long. I love it.

And now for the actual review- Wow. Your increibly descriptive. It really makes me feel like I can see every detail of whats going on. I love how they're both so conflicted with the dreams they had, can't wait to read on! :)

Haha this story is really good. I really enjoyed reading it! I also think the sexual scenes are really tastefully done. I like the ending too; it had good closure.
Also, there were only rare grammar/spelling etc, mistakes, of which I am thankful. Great story!

Great Short Story.
I really got into that and it's a shame that you didn't add more chapters, but i suppose that was the point. :P
x

Author's Response: Yes, really, all I wanted to do was capture one event in this story, but I do see your want for more. I hope the story you built in your mind was wonderful after this reading, because you're lovely to leave such a review and I would want you as my reader to be satisfied! :D