Okay, to start off, yes! right? a comic? I'm sorry for not uploading and all, hopefully I'll get to upload more for this series in the very near future. I've been preoccupied with the usual school, work and a big secret project that I may tell you all about someday.

For now, this is the beginning of a new series. It's called PixelGirl and it's about a girl of the same name who is the living embodiment of a video game.

Let me start off by saying that I'm a huge fan of webcomics. Seeing things like this cropping up on DeviantArt is awesome.

The artwork in this comic is clean and detailed, certainly among the top of what I have come to expect from webcomics that update somewhat regularly. Though I can't tell what kind of story it is likely to be(i.e. drama, slice of life, satire, etc.) from the two pages you have posted, the overall premise seems like something that I would be interested in reading.

The primary complaint or issue I have is that it's not really clear why the girl loses all three of her lives just from being kicked with a soccer ball. It's understandable for the first life to be lost, but less clear as to why the other two are lost as well. But that's my only complaint, I look forward to seeing more of this in the future!

Her design is very cute, the pixels kinda look a little off though, like your blurring something inappropriate. I'm sure this can be fixed by adding a little more shades of blue to them. This is a small nit-pick though, so don't get discouraged, this is still very fun.

I like her character design! With those pixels it's quite unique and you're not afraid of using something as normal as brown as her hair color, which is very nice.

What comes to the series itself, it's hard to say anything other than it has great potential. Your series have been funny and imaginative so far so I don't think this one is gonna be anything inferior compared to the others.

It's an interesting idea to have her be the living embodiment of a video game, and if these end up being based off of your real life events like you probably mentioned, it'll be worth the wait to see where this ends up.

i'm a little confused by the giant (demonic in appearance) hand, (is it a video game reference or just a quick plot device to show she's not really dying but being dragged to hell?) but otherwise it seems like a good series and i can't wait to see what her deal is.