'Old and Magical' is hardly that, more a collection of new and tacky shop signs. Think about changing your viewpoint to include what you really want us to see. 'If these streets could talk' would probably look better as a 'landscape' shape, much better is 'Untitled 1' with its monochromatic colour palette and subtle lens flare. 'Fishing Boat' looks like it was hastily composed with that office building in the background. An alternative vantage point that removes this from the background would have probably worked better. 'Look!' is a fairly standard picture of a 'wheel', have you included those tree branches in the frame, or are they accidental? 'Peace' is an excellent view, rather bleak, but atmospheric nonetheless. There are two worthwhile images here, the other four could be improved upon

Friday 6 January 2012 10.13 EST

Old and Magical:
Things of old, vintage jewellery and hot chocolates in the Barbican, Plymouth