First Song: Feedback, Please!

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After two months of non-stop working, I finally finished my first official VOCALOID song! Give it a listen and tell me what you think I should do to improve. There are definitely a lot of things that could be changed in the song, so I'd appreciate your feedback/criticism/points to help me improve

I think my biggest issue with it, personally, is that there were too many cymbals. I had a friend come in and do the drum sequence, and they did constant cymbal crashes. While I tried to lessen the numbers, I still feel like there are too many. Aside from that the tuning was a little weird, but it was my first attempt at it, so...yeah.

Please let me know what you think and what I can do to make better songs in the future!