Very deep, Hadeeth. And you know I don't have very much love for Angel but nice writing! Roses bleeding can be a real pain. I mean you stain your arms and then it's just a whole dry-cleaning debacle of your favourite shirt...

Ignore that asshole. This is a great look into the chaos that is Angel's mind especially during his time in the coffin under the sea. He's obviously going mad. This shows the detatchment he's feeling. Good work.

I hadn't planned to review this story, as I feel that Angel deserves whatever comes to him, but I read your author's note, so I took a second look. You write very well with great emotional depth. I think you have a lot of potential, and I look forward to your next works. Don't give the rude person a second though.