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Review:

Serendipity1234 says:I really like how he messed up the proposal -it was really
endearing and sweet and funny :)
I did like Vanessa a lot more in the beginning of the story -
before she fell in love with Hugo and was all clueless. But
even though she turned out to be a bubblehead, I liked how
she was generally a very nice, sweet, and caring person.
And though this story was a bit soppy at times (a lot of the
time...haha) I still enjoyed it because it was funny and silly
and it made me smile :)

Author's Response: well, this story was already full of cheese so why not add a little bit more? blargh. i hate this thing.
i didn't really like vanessa throughout any of the story, because she was such a bubblehead ~ but i know what you mean, it seemed to get much worse after she fell in love with hugo. she became even more ditzy that she used to be. she was a nice person... just very irritating.
a /bit/ soppy? a /bit/? this story makes me cringe, because as much as i like fluff, it being that chock full of it? it's painful. actually painful.
but thank you :)