I've reread this story so many times and I never get tired of it. You really need to continue this and if you do there was an error. it was in chap.5 where the stingray compact was called sideways, if your sticking with the movie side of it you would call him sideswipe because sideways in the move was a decepticon but that more of a technicality. but long comment made short, this stor is still good and I hope you continue.