“Baltics” by Tomas Tranströmer

Tomas Tranströmer’s Baltics, a long poem, first appeared in 1974, but this time around Samuel Charters has added a new afterword to his original translation, and his wife Ann Charters has included photographs from 1973 of Tranströmer and his wife at their summer home on the island of Runmarö. As for the photos, imagine ABBA but in depressing black and white. And, yes, the poem itself is also drained of color, making its nihilistic ennui stand out all the more.

Still, in its scope Baltics remains calmly ambitious and unafraid. Tranströmer explores ideas about the self in relation to family history, the passing of time, and nature. And these are not abstractions because he heaps together details that make his ruminations concrete. In lines taken from the middle of the poem, for example, we see such detail accumulate. Such detail, coupled with the music in the lines, creates surprise for both the speaker and reader, both of whom come to see a strange, vast world:

here and on the sides of other vessels crowded with people, figures on their way out of the stone.

The eyes’ kernel of good and evil bursting there.

Herod at the table: the roasted cock flying up and crowing “Christus natus est”—the servant executed—

close by the child born, under clumps of faces as worthy and helpless as young monkeys.

The detail in these lines—the preposition “in” placed twice at the very beginning to locate the reader in time and place—anchor both the poem and its readers while preparing us to see that memory creates us as much as we create it, to understand that memory disorients and surprises. With the descriptions of what the speaker sees carved into the baptismal font and other stonework in the church, we’re taught that

(The scenes [remain] stronger in memory than when you stand in front of them,

strongest when the font spins like a slow, rumbling carousel in the memory.)

Nowhere the lee-side. Everywhere risk.

As it was. As it is.

It’s the outside and its textured surfaces that cause danger, and the speaker thus imagines that

Only inside there is peace, in the water of the vessel that no one sees,

but on the outer walls the struggle rages.

And peace can come drop by drop, perhaps at night

when we don’t know anything,

or as when we’re taped to a drip in a hospital ward.

In addition to the pleasure of the poem’s precise detail and the music created by the alliterative “s” sound that saturates the lines, Baltics asks us to think about the limits of writing exactly while it creates urgent and necessary images through language. The speaker tells us near the end of the poem:

I looked at the sky and the earth and straight ahead

and since then I’ve been writing a long letter to the dead

on a typewriter that doesn’t have a ribbon, only a horizon line

so the words beat in vain and nothing stays.

Like different versions of the self, and like family, history, memory, and nature, nothing remains in one piece, if there ever was wholeness to begin with. “As it was. As it is.”

Jim Zukowski’s poems have appeared in Nimrod, Northwest Review, Provincetown
Arts, and other journals. He has recently completed work on his first manuscript, The
Vanisher.
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