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well, that was quite romantic if i do say so myself lol one mans love for a woman he needs to make look perfect. such a heartfelt cause. hahaha anyways that was a great chapter. it had all the elements of fucked up and crazy that i like in these kinds of stories. keep up the horrific work! :)

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Tue, May 30th, 2017 12:06am

Who's to say which is which, lol! I was going more for the methodical and insane, rather than the gore. Make no mistake the chapters to come will surely make up for that, lol.

On a side note the story is amazing. Its oddly descriptive for someone whose never turneed a person. Into a mannequin. When she jammed the pole in his ass i actually cringed a bit. Your game is on whole crazy level that is friggin awesome.youre twisted little mind is sooooo amazing

Much love

Xoxo
Kossettes

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Tue, May 30th, 2017 9:15am

LOL, I'm happy to hear you like it, lol. It's super fun to write this. I was thinking how she would see them, and mannequins popped into my head, lol. Also the ass part, I was reading something on Vlad the Impaler and thought, why the fuck not, hahahahha.

I have no idea what to say to this. It was wonderfully descriptive that I actually cringed at some places, it kept me intrigued throughout that no matter how messed up it was I couldn't stop reading. You have one messed up mind Midnight

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Tue, May 30th, 2017 12:21pm

Yes, yes I do, lol! This was fun to write and intense, lol. I'm happy you couldn't stop reading, means I did my job right, hahah!

Oh hoh ho! this is good. I love the descriptions, I especially love the contrast to what's happening in comparison to how the writing seems so calm and composed: THAT is how you make something unsettling. Brilliant job, Midnight. VERY good job.

I love the insanity and clear composure of the text: the fact it's fucked up beyond belief is good, very good. The absolute INSANITY is just... well, it's mind-boggling. I love this type of horror. It's easy to tell someone a gory and disturbing story or to just throw a jumpscare in visual media, but your mind is where the greatest horror dwells, and you take almost full advantage of that. You don't spell it out, you just toss it to us as it is, incomplete. We fill in the gaps and find a full on shocking revelation: it's amazing.

i must say, I can't exactly sympathise with our horrific Mannequin-making Misstress, but I suppose that's not meant to happen.

I love these descriptions, they do detail it in just the right ways to let your mind make up the last of it. Great job!

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Wed, May 31st, 2017 7:24am

High praise indeed Samuel. Thank you so much. It means the world when readers feel what I've written. I was writing, when the idea to make her prim and proper swooped in, lol. I myself enjoy work that stays with me, makes me think and on occasion makes me shiver and hide in fright, lol.

Chapter 2 will soon be posted and I hope you enjoy that as much too. It is very different to chapter 1, but have no fear, there is a method to my madness. ;p

Wow, just wow. Now this is the kinda stuff I wanna see more of. I mean, not because it was insanely messed up, but because of how you wove each word to make not just this guy a masterpiece, but this story as well. The way you just went inside the characters mind, how she saw people and how she only wanted to make them beautiful...... Yeah, it was a crazy way to go about it, and sort of sad in all honesty. But this story just seemed to fit you perfectly with how it was written. You made me feel as if I was the character, well, not the guy, but the main character who was doing this. It was interesting how you used 'you' as well as 'I' in this. I don't see that very often, but I'd say it works, it works very well with what you were hoping to accomplish with this masterpiece of a story. Fantastic job Midnight, this is an exciting collab thing you are doing with Kossettes. I wonder who will win. Honestly, you both are fantastic writers, and you both have met your match. Great job again and I am excited to see how this plays out :)

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Wed, May 31st, 2017 7:52pm

Is it completely weird that I have no idea how to thank you for this amazing comment, lol.

Yes, I wanted to put the reader inside the story, and see what they made of things. I'm so flabbergasted, lol! So before I put my foot in my mouth I shall stop, lol.

Thank you soooo much for that wonderful comment and for taking the time to write it. Means the world to me, thank you!

GOOD GOD!!!!!!!!
This was rather interesting
I can say you were recommended to me for horror and im not disappointed
This was.....pretty messed up
I like it

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Thu, July 13th, 2017 8:31am

Hahaha, indeed. This is one hell of a challenge and one I have to admit, relishing the experience. If you get the chance, please go check out my enemy Kossette's work. In the end, there can be only one killer! ;)