My first book review! I will give sneak peeks and everything!

This is my first story in progress. I'm putting this on here for feedback. This story can be taken in many ways, It's a dark and eye opening fictional story that will keep your hair standing up even after you closed the page....

I am going to a review over the novel I read If I Stay by: Gayle Forman and here is the summary to the novel...
In a single moment, everything changes. Seventeen-year-old Mia has no memory of the accident; she can only recall riding along the snow-wet Oregon road with her family. Then, in a blin...