The point at the end of this story is absolutely true. So true in fact that i'm suprised that DC didn't realize that after blockbuster hurt dick (emotionally or physically) that the titans and all other superheros who know dick would be knocking on his door with revenge for hurting dick on their minds no matter what dick may say about them interfearing.
Great story keep up the good work.

Hey, I read it quickly, so I'll have to read it again to make sure I get everything I want to say down; therefore, you might get two reviews! Anyway, I just wanted to say that I loved the story! The angst, the feelings...you just protrayed Dick so perfectly! I loved him telling Bruce to get away! That was good! Anyway, good shortie, and I'll review again later when I find something to help you improve (see? Productive critism takes times for good authors!)
Dev

Brenda chapter 1 . 3/15/2004

love it! can we have more?

BBfan chapter 1 . 3/14/2004

I liked this very much. Dick's logic seems so...logical. The flow was seamless. Only one thing didn't seem to fit. Bruce saying that little prayer. Does he believe in a higher power? Your writing adds a lot of meaty depth to the comic without corrupting it. Thanks for sharing!