I'm really enjoying this story, I guess Batman and The Joker are sort of out of character, but, it makes it all the more funny... This part, I found hilarious:

And he swept from the room.

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Two hours later, Batman swept back in.

First I thought it said two minutes, and I still found it hilarious because it was like 'he swept from the room, and then swept back in' (I don't know the whole 'swept' thing is hilarious) and then I found it even more funny when I realized it said two hours... I don't know I always find these things funny... like in the 'Batman: The Animated Series' episode 'Harley & Ivy', Poison Ivy put an 'Anti Batman' magnet on the fridge and I was just like laughing for five minutes after I first saw it... Ha ha ha... It's just SO funny... I also found this photo of my teacher walking

on this board at school and it was HILARIOUS. My friend and I were just like laughing, for five minutes literally. It was just SO funny... LOL... Also, when The Joker says 'WHAT!', it's hilarious.

Anyway, I have to go finish reading your story...

James Birdsong chapter 4 . 10/29/2006

Quite wonderful

James Birdsong chapter 3 . 10/29/2006

Quite amuseing

James Birdsong chapter 2 . 10/29/2006

*Laughs* Gasp.. Batman's going to stay at Waynme Manor :D

James Birdsong chapter 1 . 10/29/2006

Quite wonderful

Emma chapter 4 . 10/27/2006

It's good, but some things just don't seem very...likley.

Like when harley's yelling at Joker, I would of expected Joker to at least TRY to yell back. I don't think Jokers personality is the same as in the shows/comics. But that's only me. Otherwise I like it.