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Delia’s Story, Chapter 131: Visit

Delia sat at the table with her parents and her father’s slaves. She wondered why Julia and Rebecca were there, but she found herself wildly hoping that this visit was the end of her time here at the bar.

Her mother said, “Did your father send over some clothes, dear?”

Delia replied, “The word came in to get me in clothes. I think Joan knew what was going on. It turns out we are near the same size. This is her dress and her shoes.”

John signaled the waitress. He asked, “Delia, what would you like to drink?”

She told the waitress, who was looking at her slyly. The waitress knew she was a bar slave, but must have been given special permission to wear clothes. The waitress soon returned with the margarita she asked for. After the waitress left, Delia asked, with some hope, “OK, what’s the reason for this welcome visit?”

Mona answered. “Your father finally figured something out that we three had figured out a long time ago.”

Delia had a blank look on her face, then a growing awareness, then a smile. “You are all moving into one house, right?”

John said, “Right. We’ll figure out which house later on.”

“And will I be moving into it?”

John looked at her. “No, not for a while, anyway. The four of us need privacy. You need to come to terms with your new situation. I think you’ll be staying here for a while. For now, just enjoy the visit. Have a few drinks. Mr. Johnson told me you have the night off.”

Delia looked disappointed, but drank her drink and ordered another when the waitress came back. She was aware that she was still wearing the collar that Mr. Johnson had put on her at his home. That’s when she noticed that her mother and the other two women were wearing collars. “Mom! Were you enslaved too?”

Mona started, then relaxed. “Oh, the collar. No, that’s just part of a new wrinkle in our marriage. Your father got identical collars for Julia and Rebecca as a part of the … merger.”

John laughed. “That’s the best description of what we have here that anyone has come up with.”

They made small talk for a while, then Delia asked, “Was it this table that the order for three lickers was for?” The wide grins on the three women’s faces was all the confirmation she needed. “I heard an order for a sucker and another licker after that.”

“Those were for Joan and Mr. Johnson,” answered her father. “He ordered it for Joan, had her get a drink, and gave her the night off.”

“He loves that girl. She loves him and her new boyfriend. There’s another complicated relationship.”

They sat for three hours, drinking, talking, and laughing. After two hours, John ordered four lickers for the table. He found that Delia may have been wearing a dress, but they didn’t give her any panties. The slave licking Delia looked shocked to be licking a fellow bar slave who was wearing clothes, but she did a good job. After the lickers left, Delia said, “It’s likely I’ll be doing that for my roommate later tonight, so it’s nice to get some myself.”

John said, “Delia, I think you are probably upset that I’m leaving you here. However, I do think you need to learn the lessons that I sent you here to learn a lot more deeply. We almost lost you to slavery. You were enslaved, but we managed to keep you. Lending you out shows you a little of what could have happened. It could have been a lot worse, like what happened to Julia and Rebecca, where they ended up before coming to us. It could have been even worse than that. I talked to Mr. Johnson, and you will be staying here for some time. You’ll go to college when the fall term starts, and you’ll get the time, equipment, and clothing you need to succeed in school, but you will be staying here and you will be sucking cocks. I hope you understand.”

“I was expecting that, especially when I found out that Joan was going to college while she was a slave here.”

“I will arrange for a bunch of your stuff to be delivered when Mr. Johnson says he is ready for it. By the way, he sings your praises as a good worker, a customer pleaser, and as a bed partner.”

Delia was happy to hear that, but shocked to hear her father tell her, in the presence of her mother, that her boss liked fucking her. Her mother, however, took it in stride. In fact, she didn’t react at all to the news.

Her father and his harem finally rose to leave. Delia stood, too, and said, “Please don’t wait so long before you visit again.”

“We won’t. We were hoping to let you settle in. Mr. Johnson said that you were to go see the floor supervisor when we left.”

“I will.” Delia hugged her parents and the other two, then walked to the floor supervisor’s station. The four left the bar.

Delia asked the floor supervisor, “I’m reporting to you. What do I do now?”

“Go to your room, remove the clothes and hang them up so you can give them to Joan tomorrow, and take the rest of the night off. Watch some TV in the white-collar lounge or something.”

…

The four revelers got back into the limo and sat. Mona said, “You said you wanted to go to several sex businesses tonight. That was one. What next?”

“You’ll see.”

The limo pulled up in front of The Slave Store. They all got out and the women followed John inside. John spoke. “Each of you is to select one toy you want used on you, and one toy that you want to use or have used on the other two. Go looking.”

Mona went to the collar and electronics area and got one of the expanding electric dildos that worked with the collars. John knew that she wanted it used on the others. She wandered around a long time to find a toy for herself.

Julia got a double-ended dildo with a strap to attach it to the active partner. John wasn’t sure what role that toy was to take until he saw her pick up a remote-controlled vibrating egg that he was certain she wanted in her butt while she was being fucked.

Rebecca looked around looking lost. She finally selected a ring gag with a head harness that had handles at the side. It was labelled “Oral Rape Harness.” He thought it was to be used on her. He knew he was incorrect about that when she picked up a quirt like the one he had used on her.

Mona was still looking. She finally saw something she liked and selected it. It was a set of ankle cuffs that locked on and shocked the wearer if they got too close together, keeping the wearer spread wide and completely available, whether in bed or not. She smiled to herself and brought her items to John, who had already received the items for the other two.

John said, “Very good. Get three sets of handcuffs and cuff yourselves behind your backs. I’ll pay for these and the cuffs.” The women did as he had commanded while he paid. The slave who handled the sale said, “I compliment you on three well-trained slaves.”

“Thank you. I also own the slave that was previously in charge of this store.”

“You own Roberta? I only knew her for a little while, but I liked her. I’m glad she got a good owner.”

“You seem to be sure I’m a good owner.”

“I see those three and I know.”

“Only two are slaves. Can you pick the free woman?”

She studied them. Finally, she said, “No.”

John laughed. “I’ll have Roberta give you a call. Maybe she can take you to lunch sometime.” He paid his bill, picked up the sacks of merchandise, and left the store trailed by three women in long fancy dresses wearing handcuffs.

15 thoughts on “Delia’s Story, Chapter 131: Visit”

I’m looking forward to what happens when John gets those three home. But I think I’m jumping too far ahead….Mona mentioned ‘several businesses’, so how many more businesses are the going to and more importantly what will they do when they get there?? Can’t wait to find out

Comment on anything that comes to mind. If something amuses, confuses, annoys, interests, contradicts, inspires, or offends; all are fair game for a comment. Propose a direction; question a decision or direction… or simply applaud or condemn what you’re reading. Stating why you applaud or condemn is helpful too.

Whatever you propose or question may not have immediate effect, or any at all… but it might.

Criticism is always welcome, particularly if you explain the basis for the criticism. Way back, when I was posting my story here, a reader wrote that he was quitting because there was too much violence and not enough story in my story. All I could say to him was that more “story” was coming. He eventually wrote back to say that after many months he picked it up again and found that what I had said was correct. He went on to say that he was very much enjoying the story. Had he not given a reason for his dislike I could never have pointed to a possible favorable resolution. Had he said only that he didn’t like my writing all I could have said in response would have been “don’t read it”. That would have been a loss for both of us.

Hearing gushing praise is nicest, but knowing why is still better. To point to myself again, I had labored over how to end one chapter. One reader commented to say that the chapter had a “perfect ending”. I had thought so too when I wrote it and hearing that confirmed was substantially more meaningful to me than hearing “nice chapter”.

Of all the chapters in ths story 100-105 are my favourite ones, guess why ^^? Obviously each writer has to find their own balance between character development and sex, and how heavy that sex is. But I would really like to see some more torture, snuffing, and humiliation here. There are, for example, a lot of references to black collars, but no real detail, know what I mean?

So my question to Og is simply whether or not we can expect more of that sort of thing in the future.

P.S: I an e-mail response back a couple of hours ago, and I`m manxious to see what you think.

You won’t see a lot of torture, snuffing, and not much humiliation. That’s never been my thing. Control and sex, yes. The small amount of snuff in the bar was mostly because the stories on the original site had noose sucks too, and I was conforming. I later rebelled and abolished noose sucks in George’s bar, because they didn’t make him any money.

You want that kind of content, write it yourself, or convince others to write it.

You might be able to edit your comments if you use a WordPress account to make comments. If you are signed into a WordPress account, the comment is automatically made via that account, and I think it will allow you to edit your own comments. If you just supply an email account, it cannot tell if it is really you when someone attempts to edit the comment.

I’ve been “absent” for a week or two, and just read this “half-chapter,” Og. I consider it, really, a half-chapter because it seems like it ends in the middle, to me. But then that’s how many of your chapters in “Delia” do, which can be ADDICTIVE if reading it at one sitting, as it’s VERY HARD to find a “breaking point.” I almost got no sleep when reading the rest of it, until I finished it, lol, and I also CAN’T WAIT to see where the foursome go from here, as well as the rest of the story… As I said before, you COULD HAVE ENDED “Delia” where it was and many would have accepted that, as almost all the main characters were united at a sort of “resolution point.” Now that it’s continued, I’m REALLY looking forward to see where it goes from here. Your writing is excellent and your story is top-notch!

I haven’t gotten to reading the other new writer’s story, yet, but Caeser, I’m journalist, on disability, who’s never written fiction, but toyed with the idea, and have committed to writing “The Torture Channel.” Trust me, you’ll have all the torture and snuff you could ask for in that series, PLUS more than a few surprises (I’ve been working on it in my head for weeks now, but haven’t put anything “to paper/computer” yet). That’s how I usually write. In the past, whether I was writing a 500-word column or a 10,000-word in-depth story, it was mostly written “in my head” before I sat down to do the actual writing. I’ve actually been watcthing all sorts of torture and fake snuff videos online for ideas, so trust me when I say that in addition to things I’ve thought of on my own, I have plenty of inspiration.

That’s also why my real name (as with most here) is nowhere NEAR what I’m using. I won’t say I’m ashamed of my writing, or fetishes, but embarrassed my be a better word. By using a nom de guerre, as it were, I can “go anywhere” and not worry about it, and just because I write it in a story DOES NOT MEAN I advocate it, or even fetishize or fantasize about it (I may some of what I plan to write in “The Torture Channel” series, but MOST is WAYYYYYYYYY BEYOND anything I fantasize about. MAYBE in THAT world, but even THERE I kind of see myself as the guy who might be trying to SAVE people from that sort of fate, sort of like Delia’s father.

That doesn’t mean I can’t describe it, and trust me, it WILL BE DESCRIBED IN EVERY EXCRUCIATING DETAIL, INCLUDING HOW THE SLAVES FEEL EVERY BIT OF PAIN. YOU WILL FEEL HER PAIN WITH HER, if that’s what you want (even if it isn’t), and I fully expect some people will complain these stories are too violent. That’s OK. Nobody likes everything.

NOTE: They may also explore the “Hill’s Fine Meats” angle a bit more, as well.
Reddy.

I visit here infrequently. I usually read stories on SOL or ASSTR but there are other sites I visit. I like longer stories, but I seldom read stories until they are complete. The major reason is so often stories end before they are completed. Without resolution the time spent reading seems wasted, to me. The two main authors on this site have stories that have no evidence of being resolved before the authors quit writing them. If anyone else intends to write stories for this site I recommend shorter stories that either end or have a reasonable stopping point and then start with part 2, part 3 etc so readers can enjoy a complete reading experience. Draw us in with stories that have some resolution before the 100dreth chapter.

There’s only one story here I’ve had that issue with, so far. Unfortunately it happened to be the first one I read, the one by Au1Corsair, which got to 4 chapters and then appeared to JUST STOP (3 chapters, plus one that looked sort of “different direction”). That left me a bit disappointed, but I just moved on.

I read the first 10 chapters of “Willow” after that and, where it stopped, I considered that could be “the end,” as it was a shocker, but shortly after he posted a new chapter that picks the story up. Similar with “Delia.” I read all 137 chapters that were online and they, too, “ended” with a sort of “semi-resolution.” I wasn’t totally sure if that was the end, or not, but posted about possible continuation ideas to “flesh out” the end, just in case… Now there’s a new chapter, with more to come, and frankly, I don’t mind waiting… Delayed gratification can be good, and good things come to those who wait is more than just a cliche. And patience IS a virtue.

Read what’s available and then read other stuff until more becomes available. If you have email updates set, like I do, that’s not hard to do.

As for fiction, NO story is every TRULY over until the author dies. Even JK Rowling keeps toying with more “Harry Potter” stuff. So why sweat it? Just enjoy what’s here, now.
Reddy

We’ve been hoping for Au1Corsair to continue, but he hasn’t. He can spin a story pretty well, so I’m still hoping.

“Willow” is still being written. He’s posting on his original site and is posting on this site some chapters behind.

You are right, no story is finished until the author dies. Some book over 25 years old just got a sequel (I can’t remember the name).

The author dying doesn’t mean much either. “Slan” had no sequel, but the author was working on one with his family, but he got dementia and could not finish it. The family brought in another science fiction author to write it with the materials that the author and family had developed. The results were, to me, underwhelming.

Delia is a travelogue. It will never have an endpoint like a novel. Think of it like “Gunsmoke”, which just kept on going until television watchers in general changed their tastes and wanted something else. If that bothers you, that’s unfortunate, but that’s the way it is. There will be story arcs that have an end, but blend into the future. There are quite a few written but as-yet unposted-here chapters to come.