I feel this. Flow is solid. Lyrics keep it interesting. Your delivery is strong here. I'm not sure what direction youre going in with your mixtape, but i don't know if the beat or production is strong enough to kick off a project. It strikes me as a song that would make more sense somewhere in the middle. I can see how further development of the intro would change my opinion.

Hey man i really appreciate those kind words. Technically this wont be the pop off jam but it's the first one i have pretty close to done. Im at work so when i get home i will check out your stuff man thanks so much man, you know if one person digs it then it's all worth it

Hey I really appreciate the feedback man. Im going to be dropping a mixtape soon and any good vibes help out! I checked out your website and it looks pretty dope, i havent been able to hear the tunes since im at work but i will def give them a listen. Thanks again man!

you're the first person i'm checking since ive been back... i fks wt it. u're ridin the beat real smooth bro. i can see myself bumpin this wherever, its a real feel gd track man. the beat is funky too... smoke weed to it whatever on a road trip... i gotta get a copy of this when its done. shit i'd even love to get on this track witcha i could do it some justice no lie. datpiff.com me. Mess Mooka. I got 2 mixtapes up.

you're the first person i'm checking since ive been back... i fks wt it. u're ridin the beat real smooth bro. i can see myself bumpin this wherever, its a real feel gd track man. the beat is funky too... smoke weed to it whatever on a road trip... i gotta get a copy of this when its done. shit i'd even love to get on this track witcha i could do it some justice no lie. datpiff.com me. Mess Mooka. I got 2 mixtapes up.

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There is defintely room for you in there brother give me some time to check you out and get back to you. I have some personal situations so it might be couple days before can get back to you