Wow! I'm so happy there's strega slash out there! *-* Poor Jin being left to do all the work. I feel bad for him. Anyway, I love your story, please continue! X3

despaircupcake chapter 2 . 2/15/2009

Ah, I'm really glad you decided to update this! As I said before, you've been doing a great job with their characterizations, and you kept that up with Jin's POV. Um... I hope it's not bad of me to ask you to update quicker this time D Because I suspect there may be some slash in the next chapter.

Like others have stated, there aren't many Strega-centric fics around so this definitely caught my attention. You have a very clean style/tone of writing, somehow I felt that helped bring out the mood and philosophy of the Strega very well. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Loving it so far. The characters are IC and the story flows quite nicely. I hope you update soon. :D

despaircupcake chapter 1 . 11/5/2008

Oh man, this is starting out really good. There aren't a lot of good Strega fics out there, much less Takaya/Jin. Your characterizations are really spot-on, too, especially Jin's. Looking forward to more!

scraper chapter 1 . 10/29/2008

I love this. I've been wanting to see some strega fanfic for a while now, and yes, I would definitely want some jin/takaya slash. XD

I really enjoyed this story, though there doesn't seem to be a specfic timeframe mentioned, or maybe I just overlooked it... A few points seemed to repeat upon themselves, especially when describing Takaya's fondness of the his gun. Otherwise, I can definiately see this well written piece of work being accepted as fannon! I'll certainly keep an eye out for any of your other works. _

Azka chapter 1 . 7/3/2008

That was... veryvery well done. All of the Strega characters were in character, and I've been wanting to see some Strega stuff for a while now. They could be expanded on quite a bit in the fanbase, but not many people have bothered... But this is well written and has piqued my interest. I'm thoroughly impressed. :D Moar.