Some more from the web. Lily: .out of the water... ...out of itself. *-*-* James W. Hackett won the inaugural Japan Airlines (JAL) haiku contest (1964) by setting his poem in a 5-7-5 syllable form and also using a colon on the first line for punctuation. A bitter morning: sparrows sitting together without any necks. *-*-* Y2K Jupiter rises discreetly

Are you bored right now? Try a haiku for fun ... err, what season is it? Quickly rushing out, excited by the new snow. Your arse, bruised and wet! [ January 15, 2004: Message edited by: Richard Hawkes ]

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Pair of shoes: Side by side in step 'til dying shoe parts the pair I think this is 3-5-3 haiku. [ January 16, 2004: Message edited by: HS Thomas ]