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My Husband Sucks

Finally!

a cuckold, wimp story that is got the reasons right. the wife is just being used by the closeted husband to have some of taste of cocks. of course, coming out would have been cheaper and probably more pleasurable.

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Anonymous06/24/08

Micro-soft (LMAO)

Micro-soft LMAO, great image.

The dialogue, especially in the beginning was wonderful, especially Charles's character. I could nearly envision him.

A very fun story.

Only, I would think that this was more of a gay story than a loving wife story. Boy, if she was my wife, I wouldn't think she loved me at all. Calling her a loving wife is oxymoronic.

Good luck in the contest.

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Anonymous06/24/08

Boy, you hate men don't you??

Good one, sarahhh. Of course, your REAL husband treats you like the stupid slut you are and gives you NO money -right???

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Anonymous06/24/08

WHEN DID YOU GET MARRIED, LITTLE WHORE?

DAMN IT TO HELL SARAH!! IF YOU'VE GOTTEN MARRIED WITHOUT MY PERMISSION, YOU WILL NOT RECEIVE THE HEFTY INHERITANCE I'VE GOT SET UP FOR YOU! WHEN YOU GET HOME LATER TODAY, I'M PULLING THE CAR KEYS TO YOUR PT CRUISER CONVERTIBLE. A JAG XKR!!! HA HA!!
YOU MARRIED A COCKSUCKING HUSBAND, HUH? SO, WANTED TWO COCK SUCKERS IN ONE HOUSE? WHY NOT YOUR LITTLE ASIAN FRIEND, LIN? OH THAT'S RIGHT, LIN STAYS HERE WITH ME. WELL, GUESS WHO'S GETTING A NEW CAR FOR GOOD GRADES IN COLLEGE? NOT YOU, THAT'S FOR SURE!
NOW GET YOUR SCRAWNY ASS HOME RIGHT NOW!!
DADDY

WHEN DID YOU GET MARRIED, LITTLE WHORE?

DAMN IT TO HELL SARAH!! IF YOU'VE GOTTEN MARRIED WITHOUT MY PERMISSION, YOU WILL NOT RECEIVE THE HEFTY INHERITANCE I'VE GOT SET UP FOR YOU! WHEN YOU GET HOME LATER TODAY, I'M PULLING THE CAR KEYS TO YOUR PT CRUISER CONVERTIBLE. A JAG XKR!!! HA HA!!
YOU MARRIED A COCKSUCKING HUSBAND, HUH? SO, WANTED TWO COCK SUCKERS IN ONE HOUSE? WHY NOT YOUR LITTLE ASIAN FRIEND, LIN? OH THAT'S RIGHT, LIN STAYS HERE WITH ME. WELL, GUESS WHO'S GETTING A NEW CAR FOR GOOD GRADES IN COLLEGE? NOT YOU, THAT'S FOR SURE!
NOW GET YOUR SCRAWNY ASS HOME RIGHT NOW!!
DADDY

Slut

Now listen Daddy (RichardS50)

You're so fucking senile you keep repeating yourself. I'm just amazed you don't have ED (Erectile Dysfunction). I got tired of pimping for you so I got married. What do I need you for, anyway? Besides the sex, I mean. When I kill off Charles I'll be rich and set for life. Stay tuned for my next story entitled "My Husband Took a Dirt Nap."

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Anonymous06/24/08

Should have been under Humor & Satire

Fewer trolls that way.

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Anonymous06/24/08

More from sarahhh

Nice story line. You marrying an older man who likes to suck adds an Interesting twist to the "tail." Not as sexually intense as some of your other stories, but better written than most on L.

Happy Nude Day

Nice entry in the Nude Day contest. But, isn't every day nude day for you? Good dialog and story plot. Typically sarahhh in its lust for expensive cloths. I sometime wonder how much of that is the Sarah character and how much is Sarah the author of RATTRAP. Good luck in the contest.

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Anonymous06/24/08

The story is what sucks

although the husband in the story is a totally accurate representation of BOSTONFICTIONWRITER.

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Anonymous06/24/08

The perfect wife

The life of my dreams.

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Anonymous06/24/08

Hot

It is not my style but in that kind of story it ia ahot one

Francis

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Anonymous06/24/08

The story sucks worse than Sarahh

but the comments are a riot. Seriously, though, would have been better in humor.

Isn't Sarahh your mother's name ass w/o a name?

I SUCKING LOVED IT!

Baby, loved the story! Would love to be your husband to take care of your needs, and you would take care of mine too! Servicing you, your men, keep writing Sarahhh!

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Anonymous06/24/08

Id like to be your husband

Well, I would not put up with any of your shit, that is for sure. The
only spaoling you would get is the three times a day fucking you would be
getting. You would be bound most of the time and whipped regularily whether
you needed it or not. Discipline wopuld be fair but harsher than you are
accustomed to but then - you would get used to it. Either that or out you
go on your ass with only the skimpy clothes on your back. You would not be
mistreated but you would be treated like the slut you are. You would also
find that after a while you would start enjoying what is happening to you -
either that or you would not be getting any sex at all. Jorell1455
Sorry to burst your dreams but married to me would not be a bed or roses
except for the thorns as I would not put up with your cheating ways.

Magnifico!!!!! There’s no one better!!!!

**The preoccupied young women ignored the peanut gallery** And that is just what you should do beautiful maiden. Ignore the critics – they are simply jealous of your wonderful talents. Already the mistress of INCEST and HUMOR, you’ve now trumped everyone who attempts LW stories….You ask, *** Do dogs bark, Charles?***. Well sarahhh you make me bark!!!....Best of luck in the contest. And maybe in future you’ll write in even stranger categories…like Romance…or Non-Human…or Mind Control…or… of fuck, the possibilities are endless....All your friends on South Beach celebrate you young lady!

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Anonymous06/24/08

Why are stories like this not in the gay section?

Seriously, those of us who are into the "Loving Wives" thing are not gay and we don't like that crap in the stories we read. Why not just leave it in the section that fits it and will be there for those who are looking for that stuff.

ZZZ-ZZZZ-ZZZ-ZZZ

I think this is supposed to be funny,

I made the MILF's husband suck

Reminded me of a (married) MILF I was doing in college when her husband caught us fucking. He was a State Trooper - I was waiting to get pumped full of lead.

Instead he pulled out his dick and started to jerk off while watching us.

It was a different, turned me on in a strange way having her husband watch us, and I swear I pounded his wife's pussy through the mattress.

Well... being a primed 20 year old and still hard after cumming in her, I felt in total control after I fucked the shit out of his wife while he watched. I told him to strip and get his ass into bed with us. He didn't cum yet so his dick was still hard. I shoved him on his back and straddled his face shoving my cock in his mouth and told my MILF to mount him and finger my asshole.

OMG, I felt like I shot a testicle or two out when I came - and the term buddysuck took on a whole new meaning. His wife was obviously hotter than ever - she squirted more on him while fingering my ass and fucking her husband.

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06/24/08

give up charles...

Hi honey… living on South Beach I know just how you feel about Charles. Before I met jim and became a film actress I was hit on all the time by guys like Charlie. Older guys that had money but wanted to have a young, beautiful chick on their arms to draw the big cocked, straight boys. So my advice is to give the guy up...It’s just not worth it sweetie – you should cum down here to Miami – we’d put you up - you could write screenplays for our films… hey, act in them too if you like. Love your writing… hope you win the contest…gabby

interesting idea

While I liked the story, and particularly the end, I did not enjoy it quite as much as many of your others. This was just because it really wasn't part of my tastes, so I wouldn't take that negatively at all though.

Hard to win anything when your intention is to piss off more than 95% of the readers - so why bother.

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Anonymous06/25/08

Here's an idea!

Write a story about a serial killer named Sarahhh who offs wannabe authors. She euthanizes (murder is such a harsh word for a public service) BOSTONFICTIONWRITER and Scouries and then kills herself, making the world of erotic literature a much better place.

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Anonymous06/25/08

re: Brilliant

Uh, how are people supposed to know the like it before they read it? The only -- ONLY -- way your statement makes any sense is if you are stating that these stories are all alike and there is no talent, no intelligence, no worth at all in them.

Well you should know ass w/o a name you are total

sorry baby

I am not into gay stuff period.. you are so beautiful to me and I jack off alot to your stories... but I wont touch another man at all... I woulb be happy just jacking off with you watching me... that would be like heaven to me... but another man... NO WAY... sorry...

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Anonymous06/25/08

Good Stuff, Bad Stuff

You write both, no problem, but for a stright male, this is bad, Yikes!

Great story

WILL YOU MARRY ME !!!

Good story Sarah as usual, you've done
it again!! -- -EXCEPT, you didn't give
enough detail's about chales sucking the
different guys.
I'm NOT a Fag but a FEW times when i was
married, i sucked a cock (at my wife's request) during a few of our 3-somes!!
This was a BIG Turn on for Her!!.... Frankly, i think guys are childish about
this.......they think it's 100% okay
for girl's to suck tit's/pussy----but not
for a guy to suck a cock sometimes!!
Whats the damn difference!!!!
Anyway.....can i be your husband and
help you suck some!! But of course, i
still get to fuck you!!
Well Sarah, good story....COULD have been better with more detail, but still good.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~
TITTYSUCKER !!
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LMFAO!!!

Well Sarahhh, it certainly looks like you have awakened the latent homosexual tendencies of some of these critics (especially the girls named Anonymous). I can just picture them getting off to this story with one hand while posting a negative comment with one finger of the other hand. Such bitter little bitches.

Oh Yesssssss

As per usual Sarahhh such a kinky story. Where oh where do u ever cum up with these ideas, we'll never know but got to love them. Can I be your hubby and play with you and the boy toy?? Keep up the great writing Sarahhh and looking forward to the next story.

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Anonymous06/25/08

I was all ready to hate it...

I am not a fan of force or coersion, so I was a mix of reactions to the great sex (the heroine always makes me hard) and to poor Charles...until the last part. All's well that ends well! Red's rule!

MNGentleman

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Anonymous06/25/08

just a sucking sensation

sarahhh,Another sexy story from your good self.
All us males love the way you write.Keep em cuummming.

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Anonymous06/25/08

Deer Titisucker responder several back

Your Key words were "when you were married" do you think cock sucking had anything to do with that failure? Not rocket science is it.

Who could respect a pimp who sucks cocks that were her's by your request. Selfish gay cuck never wins any respect but a lot of laughs - by them and us.

Next time just rent a whore to pay then pass around to watch then suck her cocks - Ooopps - thats kind of what you did but now pay alimony and child support - swiftoe jaded one.

Damn sarahhhaha - you do stir up the sludge of humanity - on accident huh! Your kinda bright fan.