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26 thoughts on “the air chirped by sparrows”

could be attributed to a lot of people, though the majority would be uncomfortable admitting it to even themselves. a critical, but great line that i can hear a lot of people saying to themselves ‘i do that’ but whether they’ll say ‘i should try & alter this’ is perhaps a line for another poem.
have you had many poems published? as your work has a fluidity, density of voice & humour that could find a home with a broader audience.

you should try, your work is very unique, it has that balance of vacillating between mundane & fantastical which gives the poems a humour & observation not tackled by many.
i am trying to get more blog traffic & i want to start featuring poets, photographers & artists i find. i hope when i feel ready i could feature you. but i am stuck between do i do it now & risk people thinking this guy have no leverage why should we trust his options; or do i do it an in fact the blog will grow because i am bothering to showcase others rather than just myself. so i am testing the waters, as with my post about my pal Argus Paul, & also with any publications i do get, trying to include others alongside me. so far i am seeing some encouraging results.

Thanks Daniel, and I’m happy to participate whenever you decide to go ahead, sounds like it’s on the runway.

I find social media complicated and I don’t have anywhere near as much time as I’d like for the interaction which is essential. Adding to that, perhaps your own taste is a very good thing–your audience is self-selecting anyway and I think that personal interaction is vital. One or two of my pieces have been reblogged but in kind of a grab bag with a lot of posts. I suspect that’s not the best way to do it.

the etiquette of social media can seem complex, but i have discovered that simply engaging people earnestly, if you like their output, makes a huge difference. i don’t have a lot of time, but i just get into a habit of spending an hour or so a day responding & reading stuff. i don’t labour over my comments, i just say wat comes into my head. it is less pretentious that way.
i am meeting people & keeping a mental list of people i like. but when i do it, i won’t just put the poem up, i’ll say a little about it, speak to the author or creator about what should be said, perhaps do a brief or long q&a. try to establish some context. one thing i discovered is that no one is going to come along & say you are a genius i will publish you with Faber blah blah. that never happens now, you have to work, connect with people, get to know them. from this you never know who might be looking in. & never know what doors might open. & it doesn’t mean you have to sit all day at your computer or in front of your phone. well, i don’t anyway.

Makes sense and sounds good. I do occasionally get messages from short story publishers, you know, stuff like “Thanks very much for sending us your story. We printed it out and lined the kitty litter box with it.”

they sound like bastards. you should go piss in their letter boxes & when they say “why did you do that?” you can say “well i thought you said you lined the letter box with my story, so i thought if it’s no good, y’know…this.”

The paradox….is it a paradox? The writer already spends time in an imaginary world; if the writer spends time on the imaginary world of the internet…creating further imaginary worlds…do they become real? (Your poem makes me aspire to write lovelier poems.)

Well I didn’t write it on the space station, but I did write it through the week in a stray coffee shop I went into because I was early for a meeting. This is a rare event, so I was feeling pretty laid back.