There was a girl. A girl, I once knew. She had the beauty, grace and she had my heart. I just couldn’t capture hers. When she walked into our compartment on our last train ride to Hogwarts, I knew I had to have her. I just didn’t realise how hard she would be to get and how badly I would want to keep her.

The ice cream we were sharing had melted away leaving our hands with an unpleasant sticky feeling. I tried to lick it clean, with no success. I chuckled to myself as I wiped my hand, now a gooey mixture of saliva and caramel-toffee ice cream, on the back of Lilyís new flower-printed, cotton dress.
Please read and review - constructive criticism is greatly appreciated because i'm thinking about using it as a final exam piece :)