3 comments:

I love the image of glass air...and the lines: "Dawns first gold undoing, Sod and sky's embrace. I know, you said Time not Dawn. It is unforgivable license to fiddle with someone else's heart-wrought poem, but your photograph inspired me and I am persuaded that you are a kind and generous person and will look the other way just this once...

Oh, I love nothing more than another's input...and it is so special that you picked up on that because I had the word 'dawn' in there...then dilly-dallied between the two words deciding, not only is it dawn's first gold...way back when God said 'let there be' it was time's first gold, but I'm re-thinking that maybe dawn is more fitting to this poem because it is about morning dawning. Thank-you again, dear friend:)

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Why a poetry blog? Because it's kinda hard to know what to do with poetry after it is written so this is one way to share it and hopefully bring a measure of pleasure and encouragement to your day. Enjoy and God bless.

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These poems are written by Janet Martin. (unless otherwise stated) They are free to share in cards, services, to others who might enjoy, etc. but please include author's name for reference sake and to protect copyrights!