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Great job meeting this topic! I enjoyed this poem.
Many of your rhymes sound forced. You may want to try to find more creative rhymes, or a less strict rhyming pattern.
I like the line of the virus "messing with your minds". Viruses certainly do that to us. Keep up the good work!