Ummm... Hi. I love your story and I really hope you update soon. I know you've had family and home problems lately and I really hope you've got all that sorted out. Also, I'm really sorry about mom. I bet she was an awesome person. :D

I love this! I just finished power reading and it was awesome. I love your David, I can't get enough of him in fic form, and i love Mary Margaret, I need her to wake up. Like, yesterday. Also, updating would be swell. Just a suggestion, :) this really is a beautiful piece of work.

I can't honestly remember if I've already sent a review for this chapter already. But after rereading this story I needed to review again! GAH! This is amazing! And heartbreaking! I don't even know how to respond to this! Except to say: PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND WAKE MARY MARGARET UP BECAUSE I NEED A HAPPY CHARMING FAMILY!

Ok I read this whole thing in one day, and I am dying over here! You can't just stop there! It's like the most unfair cliffhanger of all time! pleaaase give me a little more to go on! just one more chapter! This has been quite the emotional rollercoaster. Thank you for an amazing first 34 chapters :) xx

Oh my god...this is the BEST story ever! I just stumbled across this fic a few days ago and have been catching up and wow...just wow.

I'm a huge Captain!Swan shipper but I've always adored Graham also (and still wish for him to come back somehow!) so I was slightly leery of this story but gave it a shot anyway and I was NOT disappointed. This fic is amazing - it made me laugh, it made me cry (a lot) and it even made me angry at certain parts.

I can't wait to read the next chapter and see who dove into the portal with Emma (I'm voting for the newly-awakened-Charming!) There is an obvious hint that we may eventually see Neal in Storybrook, along with Belle, but what about the Enchanted Forest group? Aurora, Mulan, Cora, & Hook? The Captain!Swan fan in me is excited about the prospect of Emma meeting Hook soon, though I am lovin' the Gremma thing you have going in this fic!

Hoping you update soon!

Melissa

Guest chapter 32 . 1/8

Oh my god oh my god oh my god. This is the feels epic of the OUAT community. I love how people keep breaking curses and getting cursed again. I love how Gremma can actually be a thing that doesn't end in tears and broken hearts (no pun intended) and I love David and his little friend group running around and trying to save everyone. Thank you for an incredible 32 chapters, I can't wait to read more!