Next chapter is so long its fallen into infinity and reversed its own existence.
I loved your story dear but its a shame you never continued it, it was an interesting read for a few hours on a Friday night.

Hi there! Just commenting to say I love your story. I actually haven't read it all yet, but I'm impatient, so yeah. I'll just comment now and again when I've caught up. I love Yumi. You do a really good job of making her an interesting and believable character, and your writing is awesome.

Ahh, after not being able to read for months, I'm back to reading! I must say, I know I was loving the story before, but it must have left a lasting impression on me because I didn't have to do any backtracking or quickly flicking through chapters to remember what was happening! The minute I started reading, it was a case of 'Oh yes, I remember everything!' Shame the same can't be said for Yumi ;)

As usual, brilliantly written. The cliffhanger at the end of this chapter has got me VERY excited for what's soon to come! And I have to say, Tsunade throwing the desk in the previous chapter almost killed me!

OMG! OMG! :O You're evil because there's not another chapter for me to read! UGH! This story is so interesting! XD I just wanna read what will happen, since Tobi obviously doesn't like her, but everyone else does! Please update!