Kibby: The one in the first picture with the drips is the best is the only thing I can say
Hydro: That is absolutely horrible. Almost as bad as my shit when I first started. First of all, that's not even a throwie, it's more of a shitty piece. Go to flickr, and look at pictures of throwies. HUNDREDS AND HUNDREDS of pictures. For crits though: GO SIMPLE! Your bars are TOTALLY horrible, your lines curve in and out everywhere. Make all of your letters the same size and angle. Make all of your lines the same width. Ditch the shitty arrow extension on the Y, and lose the one on the right side of the H too. Your D... Look at a D please. The bottom of a D does not go outwards, it comes back in. That's not a D. The R is the worst. It looks the your first Y, but upside down. Therefor shittier. Your O is whatever. It's simple, however all your lines are still crooked as fuck. DRAW STRAIGHT LINES! Your 3D is off just about everywhere. Ditch ass the colors and fills, and get your shit down before wasting ink. Once again go simple. Need inspiration? Look at your damn keyboard.