This seems kind of rough, writing-wise. The dialogue in particular feels unrealistic to me at some points. Regardless, the idea is really interesting, and there's nothing extremely wrong with it, so +1. Although I hope that you keep working on this.

EDIT: Well, it's going up, so what the hell do I know? Leave it as is.

I took the clunky dialog that they've been altered in some way. I promise you, love or not you would have to royally fuck with my brain to have me be cool with being physically fused to another person.

I made some minor grammar fixes for you, I hope you don't mind - just things like 'it's -> its' and adding a 'to' to 'all attempts surgical separation'. As for the article itself - not really my sort of thing, but it's a good concept, and well-written enough for an upvote from me.