Why must everyone make Inculta a crazed lustful fuckbuddy in their stories!? :-(
Anyways, it's cum. Not come. You didnt came on him, you'd begin to cum on him. If you're going to write pornish things do it right.

Anon chapter 1 . 11/25/2014

Hot OTP smut is the greatest. God, I love this.

Megan Colorless chapter 1 . 11/26/2012

That was amazing, your writing style is very refreshing to read and flows very nicely. Point being, you really paint a picture.

My. Brain. Is. Fried. This is so friggin perfect, I don't even know where to begin. It's one of the best pieces of smut I've ever read. You have a very lovely talent in writing, and I would reeeealllly love to see something more come of this. A multi-chapter story from you would be amazing. XD