Kevin: What The...?

Whilst walking down this corridor, i heard laughing, then the laughing stopped and then came several footsteps, after that mumbling and then nothing. Since i was wandering, i started experimenting about what i could do, i point an open hand at the floor, then the floor started freezeing over. "Whoah" i yelped as i fell to the ground.

"Okay... concentrate" i mumble getting back onto my feet. I jumped up then did the same, I seemed to be doing some kind of flying, like wind surfing, on ice. After many minutes and attempts at trying to stay in the air for longer than 3 seconds. I went over to the room i was going to go into anyway, whilst doing my cool new move. As i went through the doorway, i saw 3 figures to my left, i instantly look to see 3 girls, the one in front with black hair, least i think it was black, cause thats all i saw after she punched me in the face.

I slipped along the ice, and went into a wall. I rebounded off the wall to fall down the stairs. I was out cold.

Exercise summary

People are loked in a house they don't know why, and they can't get out. Everyone is loked inside a room and as they get out they meet other people, and they all start to develop powers. They are all trying to get out

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All these people are locked in a house- and they don't know how they got there and how to get out, they then find themselves on and island when Somone betrays them only to find moretrouble. What are they going to do?Ok, no new characters plz as story is almost finished

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