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Hermionesclass101 says:Okay. I'm sure you don't need to say things like: "Ron said nervous, knowing that his sister was famous for her Bat-Bogey hex." Everybody already knows about Ginny's infamous Bat Bogey Hexes! Instead, maybe you could add some more detail, like "Ron said nervously, gesturing wildly with his hands, his eyes widening in terror."

I like Harry's little description of the game. I smiled. Hermione is canon, as are Ron, Ginny and Harry. I'm glad we're getting into the game now. I'm off to review the next chapter now!

~Katie

Author's Response: I'm glad you smiled! : ) I'm going to go and fix that sentence and change it to what you suggested and will credit you at the top. : ) Thanks!
~Cassie