Harry's getting close to spilling that cauldron (about his feelings for Hermione). The Wizengamot tossed out the (bad-tasting) Fudge, and Arthur Weasley gets his Way Overdue Promotion. (I know; why Arthur Weasley, and not Amelia Bones, for example? Amelia Bones is quite happy being MLE Director; besides, if anything, she is of better use as Albus' deputy in the Wizengamot.)

Great Book overall and I like the very subtle hints at the next book it seems very interesting though you seemed to forget the dumping of Trelawny in Hogwarts perhaps a secret to be later reveled? although I'm disappointed with Voldemort's reaction seeing how it from my assumptions at least a quarter of his army fell in Hogsmeade and so far no response and no clues as to the spy/spies in Hogwarts?? Also lack of suspicion of Draco not being in Hogsmeade when almost all of them were? Oh well good book and I'm looking forward to the next!

This was by far the best chapter I have read although the prank on Lupin and Tonks wasn't very good the pool should have died their skin tye die for a few days or something to that effect but great chapter none the less!!!

Too short and Again its Trelawney and not Trelwany also Rons middle name is spelled wrong again here too and on top of that I have yet to see anything in here that requires more than the 15+ rating it certainly does not deserve the mature rating and the annoying java warning.

Its Gringotts not Gringorts do you honestly ever pay attention to details at all and there is a big shot of the Gringotts building in movie 1 and in book one the spelling is in there more than once I think.

Its ginny not what you have here in this chapter come on

I am also tired of seeing Rowling owns this and that many here only put in at the beginning once its also at the bottom of every page on this site its very annoying.

Never and I mean never do this again (Hermione's face lit up like it always did when she got to answer a question, "Well Sir.") if you where going to end it you should have done so with them arriving at Hagrid's leaving it as you did rendered it incomplete or rather an incomplete thought.

ENVESCO should be ENVESCA and is the second part of a 2 word incantation (book 2 movie 2) snape destroyed or banished a snake with this spell on the dueling platform after draco sent it after him.

Too many interruptions in the story your use of A/N is becoming excessive on this page no one that i know of includes that much in the middle of a story not to mention it still spoils or ruins things for the second or third one.

Still with all spells seeming to end with O please try to be more creative.

The spell incantation Incendio is not correct this is another obvious problem and it is actually inflamare. This is another book 1 movie 1 fact as it is actually part of a two word incantation the last part being inflamare when hermione used the spell to set snapes cloak on fire from under the stands.

It would also seem that people think that every spell incantation has to end with the leter O like both the books and movies this is simply not true it seems to be a lack of creativity or not.

Please never place your a/n in the middle of the story like you did here ((A/N this is never stated specifically in canon, but it explains why Hermione never really talked to Harry about it in the stay at Grimmauld in OoTP)) it is an unnecessary distraction always place them together at the end of the chapter.

I also think its RONALD BILIUS or RONALD BILIOUS and not bilbus thou i cant say for certain.

yes, great job on this one so far . . . I've enjoyed reading your work. I'm trying to write one myself. I started with a Harry/Ginny ship one, but after 3 months of non-stop reading on fan fics, realized that I am a Harry/Hermione enthusiast. On the swords of Grayson, I'm assuming you're referring to the Honor Harrington series by David Weber. That's one of my favorite series. I just wish David Weber would finish up. He left us hanging on the Mesa issue. Again, great work with this story. I'm looking forward to finishing it and the sequels of course!!!