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When Fluttershy finds out that Discord used to keep a mental diary while imprisoned in stone, she begs him to continue it. Grudgingly, he promises to document his thoughts about his new life among old enemies ·xjuggernaughtx

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When Fluttershy finds out that Discord used to keep a mental diary while imprisoned in stone, she begs him to continue it. Grudgingly, he promises to document his thoughts about his new life among old enemies ·xjuggernaughtx

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Trying his hand out in being a teacher, Discord starts his first lesson with Celestia. Time for the princess to learn how chaos theory really works. Hopefully things won't get too chaotic, or at least before the test. ·RainbowBob

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After finding a chess set in the library's storage closet, Twilight is eager to play a few games and turns to Applejack and Rainbow Dash. Teaching the two most competitive ponies in Ponyville a new game should be a snap, right? RIGHT?! ·xjuggernaughtx

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When Fluttershy finds out that Discord used to keep a mental diary while imprisoned in stone, she begs him to continue it. Grudgingly, he promises to document his thoughts about his new life among old enemies ·xjuggernaughtx

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What do you do when you're a princess who doesn't understand a joke about you made by a certain chaos master? You give up and finally ask him over to explain things once and for all. So Celestia wants to know--why would Discord call her K.K.? ·Azure129

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When Fluttershy finds out that Discord used to keep a mental diary while imprisoned in stone, she begs him to continue it. Grudgingly, he promises to document his thoughts about his new life among old enemies ·xjuggernaughtx

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After finding a chess set in the library's storage closet, Twilight is eager to play a few games and turns to Applejack and Rainbow Dash. Teaching the two most competitive ponies in Ponyville a new game should be a snap, right? RIGHT?! ·xjuggernaughtx

Discord has been turned to stone by the power of the Elements of Harmony, but his consciousness has been left uneffected. Now powerless, he can only observe the events around him and think on his past life.

>>15067591506759 Thank you so much for the favorite! It's so rewarding when people like the story and comment on it. I love Discord, so I'm happy that he's back. I kinda hope they don't do too much with him, though. I like that MLP doesn't have a main villain that shows up all the time. Some Discord=awesome. A lot of Discord will be tiring.

>>15070281507028 Thank you so much! I'm not sure. The diary format worked because he couldn't do anything else. I don't think he would continue it, but maybe I'll follow up with a new story. I have a lot to do on Out of Fashion, though. It's my neglected child!

Lol the best I can draw is a stick figure. But if I have a reference I am a demi-god. Just last year I had to draw something for my 3-D animation class and I copied it so perfectly I got an F for tracing , I fixed that problem though. I hope to one day be able to draw ponies on a whim. (Fuck hands, hooves are where it's at!)

>>15072891507289 Come join me at the Reddit MLP drawing school! I went from not being able to draw at all to being fairly competent now. I still have a way to go, but I've improved more than I ever thought possible! The brony support is incredible!

Check it out my gallery you want. This has most of my progression, though my early, really terrible stuff isn't there.

>>15078551507855 The secret is to always use references. I started by just straight up copying images. Now I'm moving on to more original stuff. But no pony artist that I know works totally reference free. It's just like people that draw scenery. They go out into the scenery and draw it. They don't sit at home and imagine it. Well, most of them don't anyway. Ponies are the same. It's a lot easier to draw if you have a model.

>>16078991607899 Thank you so much for reading it and I'm glad you liked it, even with it's mistakes. Would you mind telling me what you saw? It's so hard to get every mistake out of a story. After a while, everything just looks correct because you are so used to seeing it that way.

Not bad. I recently read something that had a similar format. Going from day to day and explaining what has been seen. I noticed once that you had him reflect on how order can breed from prolonged chaos and whatnot. I actually would have been more intrigued if there were more moments like this throughout.

That aside, I had a bit of difficulty getting into the sense of Discord's character at first but it got there soon enough.

Small errors here and there, but they don't bug me as much (unless its my own writing). Here is one:

Discord is the best pony draconequus and we know it! I appreciate your points about Pinkie Pie and Twilight. The language and style is very fitting for Discord. I hope you will continue in this matter to comment from Discord's point of view the events of Season 3. I know his return will be my favourite episode!

Again, good job and good luck with your other projects. You sure have the writing skills for it.

>>>Where is the passion? The spice for life, liberty, and the pursuit of revenge? >>>

*Alondro stands before the statue, with a sadistic smile on his face* That'd be me. Unfortunately for you, you're the object of it all. *pulls Vorpal Sword off his back* Draconequus. Jabberwocky. The sword really can't tell the difference. *begins slicing and dicing Discord*

Discord is a bit of a hypocrite. If he were truly chaos, he'd never think at all. Those who know nothing of neurology cannot comprehend the irreducible complexity of the carefully regulated series of synaptic activations via numerous ion channels, voltage-gated and neurotransmitter-activated, and several types of varied-term potentiated, involved in each and every thought.

If I, as a scientist, were to describe the intense order going on in his mind at every moment, he'd likely destroy himself in frustration or become utterly random in action by banishing all conscious thought from his head, meaning he'd have no capacity to think about such things as stopping the Bearers from retrieving the Elements and sealing him again.

But even then, he would still have a physical form. And such a form must always contain order, lest it'd be unstable and fly apart.

And so, you see that he exists in spite of his supposed nature. It's the single greatest weakness of any chaos god, that they can never fully exercise the extent of their power or they will cease to be.

>>16084851608485 Oops! Good catch. Yes, that is the kind of mistake I make a lot and it's super-hard for me to see them for some reason. I sort of naturally speed read, so I tend to skip over the actual words and just absorb the favor of what I'm reading. It takes me four or five reads of a book to really say I have read it.

>>16086071608607 Thank you for taking the time to read it! Check out my other stuff if you enjoyed this one. I'll have a new Pinkie Pie story up pretty soon, as well. I'm about halfway done writing it.

>>16089181608918 The beginning is definitely the weakest part of that story. I totally understand not getting his character until later. It's like I had to warm up to writing him. I wrote that beginning several times, but for some reason he just wasn't very Discordish until the 5th or 6th entry.

When it comes to Discord, or any villain, I hate two-dimensional, evil-for-the-sake-of-evil type characters. I think most people have motives for their bad behavior, so the key is just to look at it from their perspective. It doesn't have to be the right choices, but it should be an understandable choice.

>>16094241609424 I see Discord as having an over-inflated opinion of his own power. Like a child who is good at video games thinks they are the best player ever, Discord sees himself as the MASTER OF CHAOS, when he's just very proficient. He doesn't see that he needs order to play chaos into or it wouldn't be fun.

This is so awesomly chaotic and Discord-y that I think I'll celebrate by burning down an orphanage or maybe running through the street yelling "UPSIDE DOWN LEMONS". Who know what I'll do, thats the fun.

>>16090951609095 Thank you so much for your compliments. I'm considering a follow up story focusing on Discord and Pinkie struggle to win the other to their way of thinking. It's something I'm tossing around in my head, but I have to get through this Pinkie story I'm writing right now, first.