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Pinepaw--Approved

File:Pinepaw.png Wow, this, I think is my third apprentice. Or my Fourth. Actually, it's my fifth. I've done way to many apprentices; over have my images are apprentices. I could ramble on and on....but I won't. So, Comments? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Maplefern (talk • contribs)

L.O.L Mapple, I always have to stop my self from asking especialy, when user won't comment on yours, but will other peoples... I feel like I have to be held back! >:P. L.O.L your not alone... --MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 16:20, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

For some reason this image looks really bad to me =/ My first ginger cat. I took the colors from his kittypet image which it why it looks a little different from his leader image. Anyway... Comments? insanTASTETHERAINBOWeular 15:21, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded made it a little redder, is it okay now? I can't make it much redder without having to completely redo it... and since his Kittypet image got approved and I used colors from that, I would have thought it'd be okay... insanTASTETHERAINBOWeular 16:26, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should add more highlights--Nightshine★ 19:13, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded accentuated the highlights more; the reason they got dulled was because I put a semi-transparent layer of red over the original pic to make it redder, which covered up the highlights... but I fixed it so they show more. insanTASTETHERAINBOWeular 20:18, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

This is really great. I see nothing. ∑✐+ᖱ =ᶊ⍶ᵰᗫᎽ 21:25, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Might not be necessary, but the area below her ears and above her tabby stripes looks a little bare, maybe add one more spot or stripe there? This is amazing though! insanTASTETHERAINBOWeular 15:24, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Are the changes showing? I blurred the tabby marks, added shading (oh yes I forgot to) and I added some tabby marks down the legs. IcestormHi There! 02:37, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, now that there's shading, it needs to be darkened, and the two legs in the back (his left legs) need to be darker than the front two (his right legs), and also add a few more stripes to his left legs. Otherwise, this looks really good! --Icy-chan☆ 03:11, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better? Are the changes showing? And thanks everyone. I thought this one was going to be a total fail. IcestormHi There! 22:23, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

I really like how his tail looks like a foot. anyway all I can say is that on his leader version his stripes arent furry like you have. I'm not sure if it matters tho.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:50, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

While a rogue his fur probably would have been messier anyway so I think it's okay. The only thing I can see is that I think the ear pink was blurred too much, as I now can barely see it, try drawing it again and then blurring again, but if it's still barely visible then make it a brighter color. --IcethroatHappyValentine'sDay! 12:45, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Right where the tail connects with the body at the top, there is a spot that looks flat. Add some shading there, and this should be good :)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:44, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Cody (KP)- For Approval

I should put up Spiderkit, but I like her a little better xD.Darkhallows 21:09, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

She's beautiful, Darkhallows! I only see a few small things. One, the collar tag is... blue? Maybe it should be gold or silver? Also, maybe thin out the tabby stripe down her spine, it looks a bit thick to me, but if other people don't think it's too thick then it's okay. :) This is amazing though!!! insanTASTETHERAINBOWeular 21:11, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Oh, nice texture on the stripes! And you did a mackerel tabby! *purrs* The only thing I see is that there's a bit on white on our left side of her cheek. (Her right side.) And the blue tag. This is great though. Mosswhisker&Steatlhfire 21:14, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I hadn't seen Moss's comment, hold on a sec.Darkhallows 21:22, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Well because her other charart doesn't show her back I put teh tabby markings like this because i tried making them shorter but it looked really ugly and on teh tail well I can fix it.Hidden-Valentine ღ 20:27, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome! But I think her eyes look darker on her medicine cat image. What does everyone else think? Mistyheart 17:32, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

If I put deep green eyes, they will look really bad on her and unreal.(and your siggy looks just like mine confused me for a second) I put the other image with the green eyes beside her.which one is better?Hidden-Valentine ღ 14:23, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Minnow. And I can't see anything else. ∑✐+ᖱ =ᶊ⍶ᵰᗫᎽ 15:35, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one on the right, too, and I can't find anything else that's wrong with the image. --Icy-chan☆ 16:33, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Personally, I like the one on the left. But that's just me. You should probably go with the right one, seeing as that matches her description more. Mosswhisker&Steatlhfire 21:27, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I do like the one on the right, but you're right when you say it looks a bit unreal. Try lightening it just a tad more, and there are ways to add more depth to it. Like, make it darker on the top, closer to her eye lid, and lighter as it goes down. The queen and leader images are good examples for that--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:11, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

So I looked at his warrior image and went "WOW THOSE ARE THE COOLEST TABBY STRIPES EVER!" So here's his apprentice image. Unfotunately, my shading style conflicted with the cool stripes a bit... but does it look okay? insanTASTETHERAINBOWeular 23:47, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks great! Blur the shading on his midriff, and there's this one spot on his belly that's lighter than the shading--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:02, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, any better? It's tough to blur the shading without blurring out his stripes, but if it's necessary to blur it more then I can figure it out. How is it though? insanTASTETHERAINBOWeular 20:46, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Nightfall, there is shading. I've learned a trick, when I look at my laptop from different angles determines whether you can see the shading on a white cat or not...Spottedsky, thicken and darken the shading and this should be good. This is awesome for your first try! --Icy-chan☆ 02:18, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

In Bluestar's Prophecy its mention that her ears are gray.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 19:10, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Must have been a typo, because they're blue. It says right here- "Snowkit!" Bluekit breathed. "What is it?" Snowkit blinked open her eyes. They were blue.. Bluestar's prophecy, pg 10. And, after Whitestorm was born Bluestar mentioned countless times of how much Whitestorm's blue eyes reminded her of Snowfur's eyes. And on top of that, her apprentice, warrior, and queen images have blue eyes.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:13, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Huh changes aren't showing. Try it again, then upload. If not you'll have to change the file name. So add the gray ear tips and blur the shading more. IcestormHi There! 01:21, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? they are showing up now Seastar 01:28, January 25, 2010 (UTC)
Can you maybe darken the shading a tad? I know it's there, but it would be easier to run over the burn tool once or twice, then blur. SwiftyHow's the prey running?

I already darkened the shading once should it still be darker? Seastar 00:55, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

No, I think the shading is fine :) But, the ear pink looks almost purple. Make it more, reddish-pink. And the gray on her ears needs to be at the tip of the ears. Right now, the whole ear is gray. Put it more on the tip, and darken it--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:42, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

This may be my computer but I barely see any shading - just some around the legs and left side. Can you darken the shading under her chin and on her head and her (our) right side? ∑✐+ᖱ =ᶊ⍶ᵰᗫᎽ 15:26, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made it more of a reddish-brown color, but if I made it the same color as the ear pink then it would be way too dark, so I chose the ear pink color with the colorpicker tool and then made it a lighter color of the colors in that range. (If any of that actually made sense then yay. :P) The point being: does it look any better? --Icy-chan☆ 19:06, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look odd, not like tabby stripes. I'm not sure would you could do about it, though, maybe just tinker with them?Darkhallows 18:56, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe it's just me, but it looks like the stripes in the highlighted area look more blurred than in the shaded area. But this is wonderful, way better than how mine would look!MossI'm Up There! 20:46, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

...I'm not exactly sure what to do, could you maybe try and explain it a little bit more? --Icy-chan☆ 22:27, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes on the back where the highlights are the brightest are more blurred than the ones, oh, let's say on the haunch and such. They need to be blurred evenly. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥60px 00:07, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. *cries in horror* Ah~ I ended up drawing the tabby stripes again with the burn tool...and this now officially looks horrible! Let me know what I can do to fix this horrible thing. --Icy-chan☆ 22:56, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

O.o OMG THIS IS SOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!! I love it sooooooo much.Minnowclaw 01:32, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on her body aren't bad at all :) But the stripes on her face look strange. They look way to thick, make them thinner. Especially the tabby M above her eyes--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:52, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Minnow and Night, I'm glad you think that this is getting better because I think that it's getting worse and worse. :) --Icy-chan☆ 23:05, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Don't be so hard on yourself Icy. I like the image. Just blur the face highlight more and maybe disconnect the m from the stripe on the side of her face.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:10, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Aww, thanks Ash. The only reason I'm so hard on myself is because I'm horrible at tabbies and can't seem to find a good style that I like. :) Anyway, is this better? --Icy-chan☆ 23:33, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lol. Who are you telling about tabbies. If you look on my page at all the tabbies i've done they're all a different style XD. any about the pic, yup its better.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:43, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

It might just be the highlights that make the stripes look weird. Maybe break that extra long stripe that starts on the mostly hidden haunch.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:45, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Mistyfoot (Ki)- Approved

File:Mistyfootki2.pngThis is my first Charart, I hope it's okay :3 I think I might need to fix the shading on the head, it looks a bit square. But yeah. :) I think it went quite well for a first one :D Brightfrost 16:41, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad. Darken her pelt color some so it matches her other images and blur the shading some.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:44, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded... any better? I found it quite hard to darken her. Brightfrost 16:52, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

On the right side of the body, blur the shading some more. The part near the highlight. Blur the top of the head, and the left paw. It's really good though! Birchy 16:59, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Well theres a gap in the shading. If you scroll down and look at sasha, I think you can see what I mean. If not I could made you a diagram.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:10, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't see it Evanphoto 00:27, February 1, 2010 (UTC)
Sory, I don't see it

I think Ashshadow means that little squarish spot on his back. Like, where it's thick, then it stops being thick, then continues being thick again. Just thicken that part in the middle. Is that what you meant Ashy?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:57, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Ruby (KP)-Approved

I don't have much to say. First kittypet. Everyone seems to be in the mood, and I don't want to be left out :)MossI'm Up There! 21:27, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, this is good but does she need a kittypet image? Think about it. They were kits when they were kittypets, and these blanks are for full grown cats. We wouldn't use a rogue blank for Tadpole. I think they're good with the images they've got already, the kit blanks but with collars. I don't know, what do the rest of you think?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:28, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Firetstar has a kittypet image, and nobody said anything about him. Besides, how much time did elaspse during the Rise of Scourge? MaplefernHi everyone! 00:54, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Nightfall, it's true. they were kittypets in the rise of Scourge while he started BloodClan so wouldn't they kittypet images. They would have grown up as Kittypets AngelPaw 00:59, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, for the image, darken the shading a little bit or add some brighter highlights. Other wise it looks great!--Minnowclaw 01:05, January 29, 2010 (UTC)