like I've said before, I don't really control the process... I go line by line letting my mind run with it...

I think people are getting the impression that I think about the writing and purposely go line by line figuring it out. I just read the writing, and I see if my mind is in the mood to write a reflection. If my mind is in the mood, the twisted reflections just flow out of me. I have a rather large thesaurus inside of my own mind at times, so I rarely have to pause or think about the next word. I have a strange method of writing.

Technically, it is call Stream of Thought. Literature classes rarely distinguish anymore between Stream of Thought and Stream of Consciousness referring to both styles as the same thing when they are not. I just rarely call it Stream of Thought because people will confuse me with a Stream of Consciousness writer. Also... I tend to hear music in my head as I write, so my writings are often lyrics... people don't seem to associate Stream of Thought with lyrics... I am just odd.

Funny you mention the fact you hear music while writing after I watched this documentation about synaesthesia that ^NicSwaner mentioned in his journal. But I am curious: on first sight I don't understand the difference between Stream of Thought and Stream of Consciousness either. So which is the important difference to you?(By the way I would never think of you as odd. I would choose a different word: unique. )

Stream of Consciousness is a narrative device. It is just a flow of narrative from the author's (character if the author using first person for the character) that appears as flowing monologue often without proper punctuation and conjugation. The writing reflects common speech or thought without holding to the rigid rules of language mechanics.

Stream of Thought is literary device. It is not restricted to a narrative, and it may use punctuation or language mechanics if the author just happens to think or feel the punctuation/language mechanics as he or she writes. It is a flow of the mind onto paper in the purest form without restriction. It is essentially free-writing with the intention of the free-write becoming the final copy.

Thank you very much honey I am really happy about this wonderful and helpful critique from you I fixed the two commas you mentioned, thanks for pointing them out to me. The grammar rules regarding commas are a bit different for German, so I sometimes get a bit confused about these little guys. Is every comma in its proper place now?

Thank you very much for the feature, it is very much appreciated (My first feature, ever! ). I also like the idea of your feature game, I'll see how much I can manage in two weeks And of course, thank you very much for the