A bit crass for my taste, kinda reminded me of family guy. You could probably pull off a decent Peter Griffin.

But from a more strategic point of view, why make fun of republicans in a competition that presumably relies on some sort of subjective audience/judge vote? You just alienate half (it's texas, but it's Austin so who knows) of the audience. Kinda seems like you are shooting yourself in the foot; like Fark's favorite firearm instructors.