Good breakdown thus far of everyone and their relationships. I think Wheeler's man should be some sort of secret agent type guy, since we have no clue as to who he is :) Can't wait for the next chapter

Holy crap. Yeah, this series is definitely realistic enough to actually happen. You did wonderful realizations of their personalities and such to the extent that I was annoyed with Dan for thinking three hours worth of cleaning was enough of an effort. Brilliantly done.

Okay, honestly, this series is just plain weird but I think I can let my curiosity take over. It's definitely fair, though I'm having a bit of trouble figuring out the parentage of several characters. *shrugs*