Lovely story! Though there were a few grammatical and spelling errors, the story itself was lovely. Also one of the best endings I've read in a while, people never seem to know how to end a story properly. Overall, a very well written story, and I look forward to reading more of your works. :)

this story made my heart flutter, there are a few grammatical errors but it never took away from what i saw in the story. :D does this story take place in the 21st century? because they use words like carriage and market and i was confused upon setting...but overrall, great job!