I think that this story is very nice! I like that you did a Rose/OC instead of a Rose/Scorpius. I also really enjoyed the fact that it wasn't Adrian who kissed her. I agree with "little angel" that this story definitely has some potential to be expanded into a short story! Great work :)

~LJ

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the Rose/OC thing. I have to say I like Rose/Scor stories but how often is your first kiss with the person you end up with.