Very good but i dont get the poem or title..you shoulld have saved it for a later fic....anyways i loved how you prtrayed sirius and you did petunia really well too.....keep up the good work bc your writting style id good as well

Author's Response: The title came about from a line in the fic that says: 'appraising the chances that she could ever outshine her sister. No, she had far to go before that could even form a laughable threat.' Petunia doesn't think she can compete with her sister, and as the poem also says, Thursdays Child has far too go. Not very well explained, but I hope that makes a bit more sense to you now. I am very glad you liked the portrayal of Sirius, since he comes off as something of a jerk in this, which people don't always like. Thank you for taking the time to review.