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To me the over all painting is looking flat. The lighter areas in the bumps are popping out of the page, where as the body feels like it's a flat surface. I'd work a bit more on the body so that it has more volume (kind of like the tongue - that's looking like it has more of a 3D feel to it.) Also, if you follow the lighting direction of the tongue, then parts of the body that are in shadow should be a lot darker (like under it's neck). That will help give it more shape and might be why you're having trouble with the shadows on the face. Good luck!