Awesome story! I love how it is so different to all the story's I have read so far! There should be a sequel with cassie in it but honestly I just am begging you to write something!!! Can you recommend any good fan fictions? What is the riddle thing? 10/10!

Author's Response: Honestly, half of the fanfictions I would recommend aren't even on the site anymore! :( Just browse, it's how you find amazing authours. Trust me.

omg this story is amazing even though I have read it three times now but I am still crying :') I love your storys and the way you didnt make this the common boy loves girl girl hates boy
ps.have you got pottermore if so what is your name and house! :-D

I think you should know that I can actually really see this whole story as a movie. Like on youtube or something. I would definitely watch it. If you ever decide to, just let me be the first reader to know!!!
With Magic,
Arna

Author's Response: That would be amazing!
If only if only!
=] If I ever do that, I will definitely let you know!

i loved it i was nearly crying when i r-read it.gosh it was great! ! ! ! ! !but you made it seem as though Sirius didn't care much about the death of lily and james nor did you mention what happened to Cassie or peter or harry!

Author's Response: RIGHT! I might add one more chapter, having to do with Peter, Cassie, and when they come get Harry, and as for Sirius, I might just make a part where it shows how he really felt.

hm... another thing - maybe you can find some other way of showing the thoughts other than the asterisks? For example... instead of have *asterisks* (haha, I couldn't resist doing that) around it, maybe italicizing the thoughts? That would be a lot less distracting...

Great chapter! I love the Tigger part! :)

Author's Response: Lol, yeah I was only 13, I had the idea that "**" were the best!

=D Great chapter! I have no idea how you did it (If it was you who did), but by the second sentence, I suddenly felt the need to read a fanfiction with a girl like how you made Lily!!!
Once again, I have no idea how you did it :)
However, even though I still understood what word you were using, the question marks in the diamond is a teensy bit distracting. I'm pretty sure you had no idea what you did either, but... well, yeah. :p
And the big spacing between paragraphs. Make it a bit smaller, and it will be great! Great story so far! I love Lily's character!

Rating: 6/10 - I like the story; Good for the first chapter.

Author's Response: Haha, yeah the little question mark things are very annoying! But I can never get rid of them, and as for the paragraph spacing, I'll work on that.

Hi! That was one of the most excruciatingly heartbreaking epilogues I've ever read!! It was simply.wow, I'm lost for words!!!
I loved especially James' and Lily's goodbye at the station, it was so deep, you could actually feel their enormous and gargantuan love!! Simply wow!!
I'm so sad it's finished!!! *pouts and sniffles*
*sighs* You truly are a great writer!! Toodles, Ori

Author's Response: *sighs* Hun, you have no idea how hard and long it took me to write that. The whole time i hadn't posted anything i was writing that. I agree, I love that part for James' and Lily's Goodbye!!!!

Hi!! I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier but I had put thid fic a little asied because it was a long time since you last posted but I'm glad you're back!!
I liked although I must say it wasn't one of your best...Toodles!

Author's Response: ha thats kinda what i thought tooo anyway last chapter next

Aw! How nice!!! *squeals silently* I never squealed before but since I started reading HP FF I've done it more often than comfort!! Howev your fic is absolutely beautiful, interestng and funny so keep going!! Toodles!!!

Author's Response: i started to squeal too....and i thuought i was the only one that said toodles*squeals* i ggueesss i am not alone...thank you for the reviw..!!!!!!!!!