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Bella was left by Edward to clean up the ruins of her life after his betrayal. What happens when Edward finds out that not all was as it seems. What are the consequences of his sins and what will he do to get her back?

I wonder who said that Dreams are the window to the soul ...??????.....at least her sleeping mind wants him needs him desires him ....lets just hope that it bleeds into her waking mind ...I was so hoping that thats was real and he siad all thies things to her ...but its a start and just the thought of her thinking of him that way makes me smile ...we all kbiw the heart wants what the heart wants .......he wont burn that letter will he ??????on mo he needs to get her to listen ......and whats up with the stranger in her bed ....it can't be Edward can it he is swith Carlie >>>>>oh not another week with me going crazy trying to figure things out

this is such a happy time for them all i am hoping Carlie went out to call her dad and keep him in the loop ...since he is not included in the famliy gathering I bet he is about to bite his fingers off ..so by that your saying its going to be bad right ...i want happy again ..but i refelect to your briliant crazy mind ..so hit me do your worst ...she can see and I am happy

well with 5 at home I know what being busy is ...happy mothers days to you ...where do you find the time ...and then write this beautiful story ....I wonder if it somthing silly like glow in the dark condoms ....that would be emmett ..I am glad they are young enough to give carlie a sibling ..that would be wonderful if they are are every able to get past his rules of earning her trust back ...she may have to be a little more insistant with him

Please dont you ever again feel the need to explaine yourself or the plot line you follow ...my dear you have had my heart since the first chapter ...there are evil spite full people out there that reak havoc on other lives and this story has been a wonderful expression of that ....that it relates to the sorrowful drama going on in the lives of 2 people gives me hope that maybe they can get past this like our couple here is trying to do ...I LOVE THIS STORY AND AM A HUGE FAN OF YOUR WRITTING ....THIS CHAPTER WAS PERFECT

your story contains a wonderful mix of emotions and though i want to get right to the heart of the matter only reading B/E there are so many other factors that need to be added to make the story well rounded just hoping for a HEA

WELL I THINK THAT IT WENT WELL ...WE KNEW IT WAS NOT GOING TO BE ALL SUNSHINE AND PUPPIES RIGHT...BUT CARLIE IS A BRIGHT GIRL AND SHE CAN SEE THE LOVE IN HER FATHERS EYES FOR HER MOTHER ...AND MOST YOUNG CHIDREN HAVE A DREAM OF THEIR PARENTS BEING TOGETHER LETS HOPE SHE IS HAVING THAT DREAM SOON

Author's Response:

HA! Well, it might not be immediate, she still has to rake him over the coals. ;)

I was praying that soon em would let him know that the braclet they both cherished so much was not lost forever ....after everything today ....this really brough out the tears.... happy tears .....with a promise of healing them both

well last chapter I really though my heart would break . but knowing the damage the gun did to him i did not have high hopes for recovery but after the harsh words from his daughter and his loss of hope that B was finally happy and knowing the dark place his mind was in ....he must of heard her through all the pain ..knowing he is loved and wanted by thse 2 women in his life would give him a fierce desire to get well ...and thank you for getting this chapter out in time for our book club tonight we have a all been holding our breath for news of an update

I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS CHAPTER FOREVER ...THE REGRET DRIPPING FROM THIS GIRLS HEART ..SHE NEEDED TO GET IT OUT ...TO LET HIM KNOW HOW ANGRY SHE WAS THAT HE SHOVED HER MOTHER OUT OF HIS LIFE ...AND NOW THEY ARE REALLY READY TO BE A FAMILY ...THIS WAS WONDERFUL

OMG THAT WAS INTENSE ....AND OF COURSE I HAVE TO CRY FOR A MINUTE BEFORE I CAN RESPOND .....AND YOU KNOW I THINK HIS DUMB ASS WOUND BE AT PEACE KNOWING THE TWO WOMEN HE LOVE MOST IN THE WORLD ARE SAFE AND HAPPY ...AND THAT HE WAS ABLE TO STEP IN AND MAKE SURE THAT THE EVIL WAS GONE FROM THEIR LIVES..... CARLIE WILL NEVER FORGIVE HERSELF IF THE LAST WORDS SAID TO HER FATHER WERE FILLED WITH HATE ....ALICE IS PROBALLY IN SHOCK ....AND I HOPE THAT THIS WAS NOT THE END FOR HIM I WILL BE HERE BITING MY NAILS ALL DAY WAITING

so I was right her fall at the hands of alice blinded her ....and of corse Tanya knew some one should really kill that bitch off once and for all but even if jake is so not my favorite his presence is easier to take if he is married to someone else .......and we know even if his sins are in vast numbers she always forgives him ....right.......so lets focus her ....and she what dr. cullen Sr can do to right this medical condition

Author's Response:

:) HA! Its all coming - promise. But the fall is not at the hands of Alice - you'll see.

even I feel good after her talk with jake he will alwys hold the daddy card for her he holds all her child hood secrets in his heart ...but there are many new memories to be be had with dad growing up and moving on into a new blended family life with mom and dad ..its all good and sam 2 ...almost make you want to be adopted by them

well kudo to jake for raising such a smart and thought ful child.... children see the truth clearly they are born without blinders on they see into the heart and want the heart to be happy .....edward is what makes bellas heart happy ...carlie wants this for them you can tell and hearing her mom call out for him will make her double her effort to see it happen make it happen seth want carlie to be happy too ...he will help her make this happen a lovely chapter I though it might be lacking but it was full of hope and promise

THE FACT THAT HEE EVEN WOKE UP IS AMAZING THE FACT THAT HE IS SO CONFUSED IS UNDERSTANDABLE CAUSE HE THOUGHT HE WAS DEAD HEARING HIS ANGEL CALL HIM AND BEING CALLED DADDY BY HIS LITTLE GIRL AND PAIN WELL I BET HE FEELS LIKE A TRAIN WENT THROUGH HIM HOPE WE ALL HOPE FOR THE BEST THE THING WITH THE BRACELET MADE ME CRY KNOWING HE WENT BACK TO FIND IT AND SEEEING HOW MUCH EMMETT LOVES THEM BOTH

this was so kick ass i never saw any of it coming 40 cal close range i know the odds but i have hope his death will kill his daughter send bella back into the darkness of her pain ...we need hope here the praying thing crushed me but i will pray with them if it helps

to carry that heavy of a burden all that time know in that one act she was the one to distroy all thoes lives ...but it is al in the past now and all has been forgiven ....i wonder what E will think of the painting ......now for more of that

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