I thought it was really interesting how the rhyme scheme changes in this, the first 3 stanzas are free verse and then after the isolated line it goes into this fixed scheme for the rest of the poem. It's like, the word 'you' in bold sort of solidifies something for the speaker..maybe.. Interesting! I like the story in the poem, and how it could also be read as an extended metaphor for a relationship..again, maybe! :L Plus, the first stanza is so relatable.