"We those love with whom we fly" - I thought "We love those with whom we fly" would be better in gramma. And I wrote to you 'cause you invited. Sorry if I put it wrongly, didn't mean to offend you. I'm really sorry!

не тот билет -> "the wrong ticket" or something?
Might be my English, but the sentence sounds unfinished to me.
"The ticket that wasn't meant for us" could work, but that doesn't really mean the same, or does it?

Akin to star will flash good luck -> "akin to a star".
"akin" rather sounds like "equivalent" or "comparable to" in my French ear, but a native might well disagree.
And that sounds a bit Yoda-ish to me too.
"good fortune will sparkle/shine/flash like a star" maybe?

bad days knock -> ... at the door ? I mean, you could also expect "bad days knock us down".

From them we shouldn't run,
With kindness we will them overcome. -> frankly I don't think putting the verb at the end really suits English.
It makes it sound like the Bible or some epic tale from the dark ages
"we will them overcome" really hurts my eye. "them we will overcome" as a strong emphasis on "them", maybe, but putting something between "will" and "overcome" that is not an adverb (like "we will soon overcome...") sounds odd to me.

It was lighted -> did you mean "lit" ? "lighted" would mean "set/put on fire". Here it's about a light, right? Or is it my English again?