Wow... I... wow. I don't know what to say. This was just... spellbinding. It was amazing! The point of it was just so unique and written in such a powerful way and the ending was so beautiful and the title and summary just drew me in from the start and... oh, wow. I love the way you don't write cliche poetry about guys and stuff (unlike me -cough-)- you write different things that people actually want to read. And you write it really well. Keep up the great work!