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This is a very small sample of work that I have recently been working on. Critiques would be great. I really want to improve my writing in so many ways.
This is basically about a teenager who considers herself lifeless, and often finds herself stuck in her own thoughts.

It's been offically a month since the breakup. I've gotten alot better and moved on from her for good but this is something regardless for what purpose, something I wanted to write for a long time. It's a song yes, but it's kinda different from the rest of what I write. I hope you like it :)

taken from my book, "The Flies Are Bothering The Pig!"

This is about the struggle of surrendering to yourself that it is okay to have the help of friends, family, and anyone really. That it is alright to have a helping hand instead of always being there for yourself.