Oh finally...the suspense has been killing me so far. Such beautiful imagery you write! And the thought of Cullen teaching Stephen to swim is so adorable. I love the window scene - the tension hangs so heavily and there is SO much unspoken. I am amazed at how quickly you are able to update, and continue to produce such a high quality piece of writing. Again, I will await your next chapter eagerly.

Wow that was good. I love the line 'it’s only inches between them and he is damned already' it's perfect. I was afraid Amell and Cullen finally kissing was going to feel too rushed but you did it amazingly well.

I'm a fan of Cullen myself, so you can only imagine my delight when I stumbled upon your story. So far the chapters have been quite entertaining, and I keep hitting the refresh button while waiting for another chapter to pop up. Great job.

I hope you realize we all now expect that you'll update this again the next day!

That was definitely worth the wait. And I'm sure I wasn't sitting here refreshing every hour or so since chapter 7 went up.

MariPosaComplex chapter 8 . 11/19/2009

I love this fic so much, I haven't read anything like this in a long time, something that purely made me SQUEE inside. I'm going to devour everything else you've ever written to sate my appetite. Please, update every day!

E! Oh my goodness. Well! Well then! After the sad lack-of-Cullen chapter we had previous, we have THIS. And this, is awesome. I LOVED the description of the kiss, it was fantastic. I really liked the fact that his mental commentary says how he thinks it's a vision from a demon, that was such a neat little moment.

Gah! Alistair and that stupid rose! I can't believe he took it from back! *sigh* Well, it was another great chapter. I got so excited when I checked my email and saw that you had updated. I immediately headed over here to check out the latest chapter. And it didn't disappoint. Keep it up!