Dude, you totally Krull'd it. I love this movie it is my favourite and also Torquil is very funny and nicely in character as well. I am sad for Titch that he has to spend his life with a shapshifter because it would be confusing for him if he thinks that he is getting a puppy again only to realize that it was in fact just Torquil but I guess that is the cost that comes with the choosing to reside and apprentice under a shapeshifter like Torquil.

I liked the details about Lyssa getting pregs and delivering the babe, it seemed really realistic almost as if I was there. Keep up the great work I can't (Black) a-Fortress to miss out on a chance to go back to Krull.

I just saw this movie yesterday and I fell in love with it. It would be great if you continued but you haven't updated in like 6 years, so...Would you possibly be willing to put it up for adoption? I would love to take it on. Anyways, it's a great start.

Well, I guess this hasn't had any chapters added in over 5 years so it's not likely you're going to update now, so I can tell you what I honestly think without fear of stalling your creative impetus ;-)

This doesn't really seem like the first chapter of a story, more like the random thought processes an author scribbles down BEFORE they start writing a story. i.e. It's not a scene, it's just a few paragraphs of expositional notes.

Your readers will get bored if you spend an entire chapter explaining how the politcal situation has evolved since the movie credits rolled. Especially if it's the first chapter, which is where you most need to secure their interest. You need to have some kind of action to grab their attention. Describe a setting, then place some characters in it and make them DO something. The beauty of fanfic is that they're already created for you, so you can cut most of the expostion and really go to town on the plot.

But I guess there won't be more of this plot, so I might have well have spent 5 minutes of my precious friday afternoon talking to the wall.

Hey there. I was skimming through movie fics and I was very surprised to see one for Krull. I saw the movie years ago and never really thought about writing a fic for it. You have a nitch here and your story is really good! I'd definately come back and read more.

This prompts a slight desire to dig that movie up and watch it again. 3

Krullster chapter 1 . 5/11/2005

Dude, PLEASE continue your work on the Sequal to Krull. I love this movie, and you're doing a great job so far.