ORGASM!
I love the rustic and almost animalistic nature of boys that you present in this poem. It's odly sexy and attractive... :/
I also think that the way present your "Pretty plum" is just beautiful, and very you-like ;p
And the last line! OOHHH YEAAAAA!
SO yea, I love - you brillo writer you!

There's a lot of slutty girls at my school, too. Haha. They air their laundry (dirty or otherwise) anywhere, anytime. I've written about my experiences, yes; but at least it's with only one person, and nobody knows who I am out here.