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Sunday, July 9, 2017

Nuts and Bolts of Fiction Writing 2

The Right Opening
By Joanne Guidoccio

Have you ever experienced the tyranny of the blank
page?

If you’re nodding in agreement, you are in good
company. In fact, I believe every writer—from beginner to published—has
experienced those feelings of doubt and apprehension, especially at the start
of a new manuscript. That’s when gremlin thoughts are most powerful.

In this post, I will offer several suggestions on
how to squash those gremlins and start writing the first page of your next
manuscript.

First, I will dispel three popular rules:

Rule
#1–Start with a bang

Some writers believe the first page needs drama: a
passionate argument between two people or a man running out of a burning house.
One problem: the reader is not yet invested in the characters. The two people
arguing could be murderers, and the man running out of the burning house could
be a burglar.

The reader needs to know more about the characters and their
motivations before the drama occurs.

Rule
#2—Start at the beginning

You can use a prologue to cut forward to later
events or recall much earlier events. A three- to five-page prologue that
introduces the crime or dead body can whet the reader’s appetite for more
details.

This works well with mysteries and thrillers.

Rule
#3—Never start with dialogue

Used effectively, dialogue can establish the
writer’s or protagonist’s voice. This will quickly draw the reader into the
writer’s world.

So, what should the “right opening” accomplish?

Very simply, the first sentence needs to draw the
reader’s attention to the next sentence and the rest of the first paragraph.
And so on. That first sentence does not have to be loud or flashy…only
intriguing.

Five
“Intriguing” Examples:

“It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks
were striking thirteen.” 1984 by George Orwell.

“They shoot the white girl first.” Paradise
by Toni Morrison

“It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a
single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife.” Pride
and Prejudice by Jane Austen

“Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family
is unhappy in its own way.”Anna Karenina by Leo Tolstoy

“When I think of my wife, I always think of her
head.” Gone Girl by Gillian Flynn

If you’re struggling with “intriguing,” start with
a simple sentence, and use the rest of the paragraph to follow up with details.

Five
examples of the “Simple” Approach:

“Mrs. Dalloway said she would buy the flowers
herself.” Mrs. Dalloway by Virginia Woolf

“It was love at first sight.” Catch-22 by
Joseph Heller

“We slept in what had once been the gymnasium.” The
Handmaid’s Tale by Margaret Atwood.

“Nothing happens the way you plan it.” The
Pillars of the Earth by Ken Follett

“When he was nearly thirteen my brother Jem got his
arm badly broken at the elbow. To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee

Hard-to-read and grammatically incorrect sentences
can turn off readers, agents, and publishers. But sometimes they work! (English
majors and editors–start cringing!)

Two
examples of the “Breaking the Rules and Getting Away with It” approach:

“You better not never tell nobody but God.” The
Color Purple by Alice Walker

“If you really want to hear about it, the first
thing you’ll probably want to know is where I was born, and what my lousy
childhood was like, and how my parents were occupied and all before they had
me, and all that David Copperfield kind of crap, but I don’t feel like going
into it, if you want to know the truth. The Catcher in the Rye by J. D.
Salinger

More
tips…

Think
of opening lines and paragraphs as introductions to new people. You
probably wouldn’t be interested in getting to know a person who
immediately launches into a monologue about her divorce, her latest car
accident, or upcoming surgery. Instead, you want to learn just enough about
the person so that you can have a pleasant conversation.

Gently
lead the reader into the rest of the paragraph and the next page. The
reader doesn’t have to fall in love with that first sentence, but she
needs to be curious enough to keep reading.

Leave
the reader with unanswered questions. She should be asking the question
“Why” as she reads that first chapter. Why did those characters fall in
love? Why did that murder happen?

Reread
your favorite novels and critically analyze the opening sentences and
paragraphs. Ask yourself what intrigued you as a reader and then apply the
same approach to your own writing.

Keep
in mind that the first chapter of a novel is the most heavily revised
section of the book. You don’t have to get it right the first time.

In 2008, Joanne Guidoccio retired from a 31-year
teaching career and launched a second act that tapped into her creative side.
Slowly, a writing practice emerged. Her articles and book reviews were
published in newspapers, magazines, and online. When she tried her hand at
fiction, she made reinvention a recurring theme in her novels and short
stories. A member of Crime Writers of Canada, Sisters in Crime, and Romance
Writers of America, Joanne writes cozy mysteries, paranormal romance, and
inspirational literature from her home base of Guelph, Ontario.