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ILP: you're right. the club is kinda dead right now. you're also right in thinking you won't get the twist out of me but i can say you will be utterly surprised. and as for the original scene, if i feel like retyping it you will get it. i don't save my writing so i would have to retype the scene from memory.

Hmm, damn. Oh well. You don't have to rewrite the scene just because I'm curious.

Originally Posted by kusari

next chapter will be put off until next week because, sorry in advance NL, from friday to monday i'll be celebrating my country's split from the tea drinking *******s known as the british, with massive amounts of explosives. again NL sorry.

*Is British too*

Originally Posted by kusari

interesting thing i found: this picture of ichigo's half hollow mask which, oddly enough, looks a bit like this a killswitch engage album cover.

The blue-haired boy awoke with a start. Sitting upright in the 4th Squad divisions. He looked around, not recognizing a thing. His eyes widened, seeing all the worried faces around him. "Who are you people? Who am I? Where am I? Why am I here?". Mixed emotions played across their faces. Fear, worry, pain, panic, some of them looked down with a grim look, other's turned away, and some simply stared, awestruck. He tried to recall something, anything.. "Why..Why can't I remember anything? SOMEBODY TELL ME!". The cry rang out, all through the seireitei.

All was alone. A sub-concious thought reminded him this was a hospital of some sort. But he didn't really care. "Well? Tell me dammit! TELL ME!!". He yelled, he raged, he was angry, sad, and confused. No one could help him, no one could give back lost memories.

Well, damn. Amnesia.

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

Arika laughed, responding to his scientist. "Yes, Folle. Begin.". With a sigh, Folle took a thin and glistening sword from his deep black labcoat, easiliy holding down the hollow, not even of the menos grandes level, to the ground. He took the sword, muttering something that sounded like a release. The sword started rapidly shifting shapes between different hospitalistic objects, syringes, needles, and hospital equipment. It finnaly settled on a needle. Folle took it, injecting it into the top of the hollow's hole. Waiting for it to sink in. The beast started shrinking, finnaly settling into a humanoid shape, growing deep black hair. A sizzling sound appeared, and almost instantly along with it, a continous roar of pain. The mask of the hollow completely sizzled off, burning his face and leaving a almost human body, but a large hole in the middle of it's abdomen. The thing stood up, "My Name is Viruu Sakaho. I agree to work with you, I will not be commanded, but a partnership can be accepted. " Arika tilted his head from the other room, a maniacal and insane laugh ringing out. "Ahaha...AHAHAHAH! It's finnaly done!". Folle Selliny was pleased that his expirement had worked for his master, they would soon rain supreme, but one thought struck his mind. "Sir, What about the blue-haired boy we expiremented on? Even after we sent our failed arrancar after him, he was knocked out, he woke up not 10 minutes later, thrashed around, we had to knock him out once again. Even after we were expirementing on him, he used the powers we gave him to blast through, break out, even when we thought he was under our control, he destroyed half of my lab and escaped. What should we do of him?". Arika froze, then, a quick of pure anger broke out across his face. He broke through the glass, stepping through, and gripped Folle by the neck. "Never question my judgement, that boy is an anomalie. A failed test. Nothing to care about. ". With that, he threw aside Folle against a wall. "Now get back to work, you worthless piece of trash."

Massive paragraph x.x Split it into another paragraph whenever someone talks, or there is a change in focus of what's happening.
Though I'm glad that there is a scientist villain 8D. Someone for me to fight And Godamnit I will fight him!

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

Thing's went along quickly, yet painfully at the same time. Experts had been brought in to explain everything to him, who he was, what he was, why he was here, his rank, everything. They told him about how they had found him, brutally wounded with tell-tale signs of a hollow's cero marks on him. After asking what a cero was, and what an arrancar was, everyone looked shocked, and completely stunned. The mood drooped lower. He had been demoted for a while, and sent to a rehabilitation center in Squad 4, everyone was stunned that after 6 months, most of his old bloodlust and personality had returned, and almost all of his fighting skill had been brought back. Everyone was so stunned, he had come back out almost as normal as he was before, everyone so proud (well, as proud as they could be of Cameron..) that anyone could rehabilitate that fast. Thing's had been brought back to normal, he had been given back his Lt rank, re-achieved his old mastery of his zanpaktou, and everything seemed like it was going to be ok. But, The Seretei was worried, and still looking out for the individuals who outside the soul society would have the power to erase someone's memories so..completely.

I hope you will still write those "diary chapters" XP.

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

Cameron sighed, he had to get along with it sometime. He pulled out the rubix cube he had stolen from Ryuu. He had tried cleaning off the blood as best he could, but after he had.. uh.. 'borrowed' it, he had gotten in a HUGE fight with Seijuro. (Waffles will always be better then pancakes! ALWAYS!)

XDD

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

A thought struck his mind. Why use the normal entrance? Why not spice up Ant's day a little? He quickly shunpoed to the top of the roof, and raised up his sword and..

"Ow!"

"Hell!"

"Crap!"

"Traps in the ceiling, really?!"

"AAAH! INTERNET MEMES!"

XDDD I'm not even sure I care who said which exclamation, or why even (internet memes? o.o)

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

It happened.

He started screaming, white bone substance crossing his face, half of his face being covered by a..mask. One horn curving sideways and back, almost as if a bandlet meeting halfway across the side of his head, with a blue stripe running across the middle, and a half grin, (due to the half mask) with large teeth appearing. His eyes turned black. Ryuu quickly reacted, taking a syringe out, after some extreme struggling from Cameron, and the rest of the mask forming, he fell to the ground. Ryuu raised his eyebrow, "Well, looks like we have some testing to do. " He started dragging Cameron by the hand, giving an almost akward sight as if Cameron was a teddy bear.

Ah, the transformation. It's odd how the mask made him fall to the ground, instead of start fighting and destroying everything. Also, TESTING TIME!

Last edited by I like Pokemon (...); 29th June 2010 at 7:52 PM.

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

Everyone: I wrote ILP the scene i cut out of the last chapter. i saved it this time. ILP liked it. if you want to see my original version just tell me and i'll pm it to you.

story info: from the chapter 7 on i'll be cutting down on the focus of everyone. up to this point i've covered everyone's seperate paths in the chapters. from here we'll cut down to two or three pov's.

also, since i wrote ILP's scene i'm on a roll and just gonna write this week's chaper now.

Spoiler:- Chapter 6: Temptation, Captivity and Shrimp:

Cada walked out of an adjacent room holding a bottle of sake in each hand. Seijuro couldn't help watching her breasts bounce slightly as she walked.

"Ahem." She coughed. The blonde sat down on the sofa parallel to Seijuro.

"Uh, why two bottles?" He knew he had been caught looking.

"One for now and one to replace the bottle I finished." She set a bottle on the table and handed the other to the captain. As he took the bottle from her hands a small, silver chain bracelet made itself apparent.

"Nice bracelet."

"Heh, not really. It may look nice but what it does sure isn't."

"What do you mean by that?"

"Well, nothing. Just forget it."

"Um, ok. Would you please stand up and follow me?"

"This is my room. In my home and your giving me orders?" Both stood up and walked behind the couch where Seijuro had been seated. They stood face to face, eight feet apart. Arashi drew his sword.

"I'm sorry. You've been very hospitable but your an enemy and I must kill you." He swung the sword at the precise angle to sever her head. He closed his eyes so he wouldn't see the unpleasentness of killing a friend.

The sword came down, but instead of hearing a scream or feeling blood splatter on him, Seijuro heard the sound of metal clashing with metal. He opened his eyes. His sword had been stopped mid-swing by a large sword. It was at least eight feet long. Five circular holes, each with a diameter of one foot, were placed at even distances along the blade.

"What the ****?"

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Ryuu stared at Eve. "We choose to love, we do not choose to cease loving. Latin huh?"

"Hm, brains too. Now your even better."

"Enough talk."

"Don't say that. I like our little chats."

"Silence the Eternal Pain, Mugen Utsuro!" The sword the reaper held spilt into two crescent blade scythes. One, white as the virgin snow. The other, black as the childish night.

"Those are some pretty little toys. Ready to see mine?" She held her sword horzontally in front of her. "Seduce, Tentadora!"(1) The blade turned into pure white light, which quickly envolped the hollow's body. The captain could only watch and wait.

After what felt like hours, the light dispersed. Eve's hair had grown down to her knees. Her pants turned into a short white skirt and her shirt had disappeared completley. At her shoulders, bone strips formed. They curved down, covered her nipples and curved to meet just below her navel.

"Like me, Mr.Sadist?" The captain's face grew red. He shook it off and dashed at her. The white scythe, named Ivory, raised above his head. I can end this quick. She values her beauty, so I'll take it away. Ivory made contact, cutting her across the abdomen.

"Ha. How do ya like that." Ryuu had closed his eyes. "I aged the 'beauty' of your body."

"Open your eyes. I think your wrong." He did as she said. All there was, was a scar. "The only thing you aged was that cut. Thanks. Now I don't have to patch it up before I have my fun."

"But how? Why didn't you age?"

"My beauty is ageless. It never fades."(2)

Damn. That plan's out the window. He thought. Schiffer launched towards the hollow, with Ebony raised.

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"Who in the hell are you?" Seijuro yelled. He realized he wasn't looking at the man's face. The large blade was strapped to his back. All he'd done was step in the way.

The man didn't respond. He lifted his left hand to his left ear and pushed the hair away, revealing the tatooed number two. Seijuro's eyes went wide as the spiritual pressure hit him.

"Stop messing with this girl. She's not even an Acorazado."

"What do you mean? What's an Acornasido?"

"Not Acornasido. It's Acorazado. It means Armored. That's what we call ourselves. Being called Arrancar was embarrising. Aizen and his Arrancar were defeated by a bunch of humans. They were a disgrace."

"So what did you mean she's not one of you?"

"Zakei tried to maximize potential by turning human souls directly into Acorazado. She was the only subject who survived. She had no mask remnants and no hole, but still developed a sword and radiates hollow type pressure."

"Is that true Cada?"

She nodded yes.

"That bracelet she wears binds her here so she can never leave and expose his secrets. So if you continue to mess with her, I'll be fighting you." He pulled the large sword off his back. "I'm Zoma Kodev. Espada number two in Hayate Zakei's army."

"Fine, I'll back off. Just one thing."

"Yes?"

"Where's my friend, Yasushi Hayashi?"

"Closer than you think." Those were Zoma's last words before sonido-ing away.

Seijuro paced in circles. If Zakei's preforming experiments on turning souls into acorns or whatever, could he have done the same to Yasushi? No what would be the point in that. If I were ILP I would have figured this out by now.

His thoughts were cut short by six consecutive bala pelting him in the shoulder. Seijuro looked up to the ledge behind him. Perched at the top was a shirtless man wearing a cowboy style hat. He aimed a revolver at the captain.

Three shots fired off before he jumped to the ground. Seijuro dodged as the enemy kept firing. The man stopped firing to allow the dust to clear.

"Ravage, Garou!" Seijuro's sword became smaller and heavier. The energy loosed from the swords release cleared away the dust.

"What's your name soul reaper?"

"Seijuro Arashi. Remember it, for it will be the name of your executioner. May I ask what your name is?"

"I'm Drake Bazar." Drake fired off six more shots.

"Kaisou Shikon." The blade absorbed all six blasts and launched them back. Drake fired another six shots, which collided nullifying them. This process was repeated multiple times.

"Ok this is going no where. I need to take the upper hand. Fire, Pistola Camaron.(3) His body became enveloped in white light. The light faded and Drake's new form was revealed. His hands were covered by shrimp-like claws. His forearms became revolver magazine with twelve holes for ammunition.

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Zam slashed at the large in front of him. The sword was blocked by a thick forearm.

"He he, that all you got, soul reaper?" Jenk laughed. "I haven't even released yet and I'm winning."

"You forget too quickly Jenk. I haven't released yet either."

"So why don't you?"

"When did I say I wouldn't? Strike From Nothing, Keiri!" Zam threw his sword to the side and it disappeared into another dimension.

"Throwing your sword away huh? Not very smart." As he finished a blade appeared from behind and stabbed Jenk through the left shoulder.

"Eh. *******. I'll kill you!" Jenk charged, pulling back his fist to punch the reaper. As he swung a blade pierced his fist. "Ahhh." He drew his sword and began to glow red.

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Both Blue and Ashido lay motionless on the ground. The twins just did their weird growl-laugh.

"Now kid." Ashido whispered. Blue jerked his sword causing two shadow hands to form and slam the twin together. Ashido rose, grabbed his hammer and ran towards the restrained hollows.

"Jara han, Colmillo!"(4) Claw grunted.

"Kezk tnav, Garra!"(5) Fang growled.

The twins and their swords all melded together into a small ball of white light, which became full conceiled in the shadows.

Spoiler:- Author's Notes:

1) Temptress

2)Sounds like something Da.c would say

3) Pistol Shrimp

4) Bite, Fang

5) Scratch, Claw

That was a long *** chapter. I think it's the longest i've written so far. Next time the Blue and Zam fights are the focal points. so yeah.

Last edited by kusari; 30th June 2010 at 12:00 AM.

PRETEND THERE IS A SIGNATURE HERE FULL OF WITTY JOKES AND CLAIMS TO FAME AND UNDESERVED BRAVADO AND SELF PROMOTION

AS the four stood outside Squad One, the Soul Society seemed quiet. A gentle breeze blew past, making everyone's hair dance in the wind.

"Great now my sexy hair is turning into a sexy mess." Dac whined.

"Its odd, the breeze here feeds so much nicer than the breeze back home for some reason...." MC said as the breeze brushed against him.

"Atmospheric differences or possibly a different build of configuration of spiritons..." Ilp stated in a slightly bored tone, poking around for in his Captain's Jacket.

"My spiritual pressure seems to react to the environment differently as well." NL said while ignoring Dac's crying.

"Found it..." before Ilp could clarify on what he found, the Captains exited the Squad One barracks. Soi Fon, Unohana, Byakuya, Komamura and Hitsugaya left, likely back to their own Squads. Shunsui, Ukitake, Mayuri and Kenpachi on the other hand, walked towards the group.

"So thats the welcoming comity?" MC asked in monotonous voice.

Mayuri went over to NL, looked her over and examined her head. She quickly smacked his hand away and growled while glaring at him.

"Interesting, how about you become one of my test subjects, I'll even let you be clothed during sleep, generous offer for a mere test subject..."

"Good luck, I've been barking up that tree for two hundred years..." Dac said quietly.

"No!" NL flat out refused.

Kenpachi went over to the other three and asked "Which one of you is the strongest?" Ilp and Dac pointed to MC. Kenpachi grinned while drawing his sword, MC had this one thought going threw his mind "I'm so fu-"
-

"-cked up kind of plan is that!?" Eon asked Blue.

"I just kill Szayel's entire fraccion to settle for the last battle we had. Then I'll beat up Grimmjow, we'll become friends, he'll join us and then we can kill Aizen!"

The two males were standing outside Orihime's room. Arc was inside trading cookie recipes with her. Dre and Zam were...well after the grandstanding with Mila-Rose, both have been missing. Yet another thing for the great Captain Eon to deal with.

"Don't...just...don't..." Eon said holding his head.

"Too late! I already killed Szayel's fraccion and left them in his lab!" Blue said as happy as he could be.

"GRIMMJOW!" Szayel's scream could be herd all over Las Noches.

"I hate my life..." Eon thought to himself.

"So can I kill something now?"

"You just killed Szayel's entire fraccion!"

"But that was like hours ago!"

"No."

"But..."

"No!"

"Aww...please?"

"No!"

"I never get to have4 any fun..."

"Your just..." Eon sighed and looked at Blue.
-

"...a lunatic!" Molly said to Sonja about her plan.

"Its fool proof. fanfiction shows me the biggest threat to KenIchi is GrimmIchi, so I must make Grimmjow fall for me so Ichigo will be all Kenny's!"

"...there are so many things wrong with that plan, I just don't know where to begin." Adam said flabbergasted at Sonja.

"Plus we have to prepare for Master Darkness to arrive here." Molly said walking with the other three to Aizen's room.

Sonja added to the conversation "Which includes the kidnapping crisis and whereabouts of Zero unit."

"Those are sub parts to our main goal." Molly said matter-of-factly.

"They are both parts of our plan, plus Darkness will be focusing on +that part for us, so it only makes sense to focus on the sub-parts." Adam told both girls.

the three stood outside Aizen's room, before Sonja could enter, a voice asked them a question from the shadows.

"What'cha do'in?"
-

Bleach AFTERMATH!

Gin: Good news ya'll! I'm back after a really long a bloody negotiation about my contract!

Eh, that's fine XP It seems like not many people know that, oddly enough >.>

Originally Posted by kusari

story info: from the chapter 7 on i'll be cutting down on the focus of everyone. up to this point i've covered everyone's seperate paths in the chapters. from here we'll cut down to two or three pov's.

Hmm, that's good. Focusing on only a few people, and making it long and detailed.

Originally Posted by kusari

also, since i wrote ILP's scene i'm on a roll and just gonna write this week's chaper now.

woo Spoiler:- Chapter 6: Temptation, Captivity and Shrimp:

Originally Posted by kusari

Cada walked out of an adjacent room holding a bottle of sake in each hand. Seijuro couldn't help watching her breasts bounce slightly as she walked.

Are we all pervs in this fic? XD

[QUOTE=kusari;11387794]

Originally Posted by kusari

"Those are some pretty little toys. Ready to see mine?" She held her sword horzontally in front of her. "Seduce, Tentadora!"(1)

Tentadora. Seriously? The temptess' resurreccion's name has tenta in it?

Originally Posted by kusari

"Open your eyes. I think your wrong." He did as she said. All there was, was a scar. "The only thing you aged was that cut. Thanks. Now I don't have to patch it up before I have my fun."

"But how? Why didn't you age?"

"My beauty is ageless. It never fades."(2)

Ah, that's good. It's rather difficult to be able to counter either Ebony or Ivory, so it's good that you found a way to.

Originally Posted by kusari

"Stop messing with this girl. She's not even an Acorazado."

"What do you mean? What's an Acornasido?"

"Not Acornasido. It's Acorazado. It means Armored. That's what we call ourselves. Being called Arrancar was embarrising. Aizen and his Arrancar were defeated by a bunch of humans. They were a disgrace."

Ah, this is good. Top Ten Espada of the Acorazado. What does that mean, anyway?

Originally Posted by kusari

"So what did you mean she's not one of you?"

"Zakei tried to maximize potential by turning human souls directly into Acorazado. She was the only subject who survived. She had no mask remnants and no hole, but still developed a sword and radiates hollow type pressure."

So she was a beta of Yasushi/Zoma? Interesting...

Originally Posted by kusari

"Where's my friend, Yasushi Hayashi?"

"Closer than you think." Those were Zoma's last words before sonido-ing away.

Oh, poor Seijuro...

Originally Posted by kusari

His thoughts were cut short by six consecutive bala pelting him in the shoulder. Seijuro looked up to the ledge behind him. Perched at the top was a shirtless man wearing a cowboy style hat. He aimed a revolver at the captain.

Three shots fired off before he jumped to the ground. Seijuro dodged as the enemy kept firing. The man stopped firing to allow the dust to clear.

"Ravage, Garou!" Seijuro's sword became smaller and heavier. The energy loosed from the swords release cleared away the dust.

"What's your name soul reaper?"

"Seijuro Arashi. Remember it, for it will be the name of your executioner. May I ask what your name is?"

"I'm Drake Bazar." Drake fired off six more shots.

"Kaisou Shikon." The blade absorbed all six blasts and launched them back. Drake fired another six shots, which collided nullifying them. This process was repeated multiple times.

"Ok this is going no where. I need to take the upper hand. Fire, Pistola Camaron.(3) His body became enveloped in white light. The light faded and Drake's new form was revealed. His hands were covered by shrimp-like claws. His forearms became revolver magazine with twelve holes for ammunition.

So Seijuro has met 3 people? That's a bit weird, no? What will Zoma and Eve do while Drake fights?

Originally Posted by kusari

That was a long *** chapter. I think it's the longest i've written so far. Next time the Blue and Zam fights are the focal points. so yeah.

Hmm, good. There didn't seem to be much to comment on in this chapter on those two.

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

"Quite so, in fact if I experiment on-run a few tests, I can-"

"Shut up Mayuri, I get to fight them first."

"-my , my such a simpleton response."

Very much like Mayuri and Kenpachi.

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

This always happens...Hitsugaya thought to himself.

Poor Hitsu.

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

"For the one thousand seven hundred twenty sixth time, I am not your Fan girl."

"I thought it would be more..." MC added.

same

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

"Atmospheric differences or possibly a different build of configuration of spiritons..." Ilp stated in a slightly bored tone, poking around for in his Captain's Jacket.

Is it bad that I understood?

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

"Found it..." before Ilp could clarify on what he found, the Captains exited the Squad One barracks.

Hmm... No mention of it in the rest of the chapter...

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

"Interesting, how about you become one of my test subjects, I'll even let you be clothed during sleep, generous offer for a mere test subject..."

"Good luck, I've been barking up that tree for two hundred years..." Dac said quietly.

XDD

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

Kenpachi went over to the other three and asked "Which one of you is the strongest?" Ilp and Dac pointed to MC. Kenpachi grinned while drawing his sword, MC had this one thought going threw his mind "I'm so fu-"
-

"-cked up kind of plan is that!?" Eon asked Blue.

Definitely got a good LOL out of me, that did.

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

"Its fool proof. fanfiction shows me the biggest threat to KenIchi is GrimmIchi, so I must make Grimmjow fall for me so Ichigo will be all Kenny's!"

"...there are so many things wrong with that plan, I just don't know where to begin." Adam said flabbergasted at Sonja.

But... But... But... GRIMMICHI!

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

"What'cha do'in?"

8O Mysterious unknown person!

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

Bleach AFTERMATH!

Gin: Good news ya'll! I'm back after a really long a bloody negotiation about my contract!

MC: ...yeah about that...

GIN: Yes?

MC: ...you get a co-host...

Gin: Really who?

MC: You'll see next chapter....

Gin: How nice! Se ya!

Hmm... I wonder who this is...

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

Well I'm back from my four day trip in Las Vegas. I thought I would be able to get on while there, but the you had to pay like 12.99 USD a day for internet access.
And I'm going to be leaving to California on Saturday for a week. >.<
But I'll have internet access while in California, I'll be able to check the club at least once a day.

Originally Posted by kusari

next chapter will be put off until next week because, sorry in advance NL, from friday to monday i'll be celebrating my country's split from the tea drinking *******s known as the british, with massive amounts of explosives. again NL sorry.

interesting thing i found: this picture of ichigo's half hollow mask which, oddly enough, looks a bit like this a killswitch engage album cover.

Bahahaha...I love that description. *patriot high five*

Maybe while I'm in california, I'll read up on all the fanfics going on right now.

Spoiler:- manga 410:

Damn you Kubo and your cliff-hangers!!
I have to say that this was the first decently scripted chapter in a while.
Hichigo appears again! And with a invert version of the hollow mask that was on Ichigo in his fight with Ulquiorra.
I'm very interested and the upcoming interaction between Tensa Zangetsu and Hichigo.
That was some interesting insight into Mizuiro's relationship with Ichigo and what he's been up to lately.
Who is that stepping out of the shadows towards AizenGin and Tatsuki?! I really hope it's Ryuken or Tessai.

Ah. Now we know. Zangetsu's place was once wholly his, until the HIchigo came and cohabits there. I'm guessing either Tensa Zangetsu or Ichigo will battle him. Hopefully they won't have to kill him to obtain the final Getsuga Tenshou, because HIchigo is cool in his own way, but I think they will. =\

Sooo the place was at first filled with 'hopes', then after the Hollow came, it's been degraded? And the constant raining changed to... being sunk in sea. That's why Tensa Zangetsu won't help Ichigo, I guess.

Oh God. Is Aizen going to kill Tatsuki? I swear, if he does, Ichigo will win even without the final GT. But idt so. That someone, probably Ryuuken or Tessai, will save her, maybe at the cost of his/her life.

...waitwhat. Isshin said that his Engetsu was the same way. Which probably meant that Isshin was a Vizard as well? Wee, this is getting exciting. But if it was the same as Ichigo, could mean that his Hollow is already dead, too. Hmmm.

Anime; Spoiler:

Wooooo Los Lobos 8D
We'll see Wonderweiss next week, then the Vizards will come, either in the middle or in the preview, I guess. *waits patiently for Hacchi vs Barragan*

Seijuro paced in circles. If Zakei's preforming experiments on turning souls into acorns or whatever, could he have done the same to Yasushi?

Acorns, lol.

His thoughts were cut short by six consecutive bala pelting him in the shoulder. Seijuro looked up to the ledge behind him. Perched at the top was a shirtless man wearing a cowboy style hat. He aimed a revolver at the captain.

That sounded a lot like Los Lobos. Well let's wait and see his resurreccion then.

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

This always happens...Hitsugaya thought to himself.

I think... His response to that was more around the lines of "Here we go again. Old people arguing among themselves" /referring to the scene in episode 60-ish or somewhere around that.

"Have you guys managed to find your Zanpaktou yet?" MC asked while the group stood outside the meeting.

Your zans disappeared? Didn't notice that. Did the zans of those in living world/Hueco Mundo disappear too?

"They are not as stupid as your Fangirls, Dac."

"You do know you just called yourself stupid, right?"

XDD

Kenpachi went over to the other three and asked "Which one of you is the strongest?" Ilp and Dac pointed to MC.

I kinda like this scene. Especially if you can portray it with pictures. XD

The two males were standing outside Orihime's room. Arc was inside trading cookie recipes with her.

You don't know how long I lol'd at this.

Bleach AFTERMATH!

Gin: Good news ya'll! I'm back after a really long a bloody negotiation about my contract!

MC: ...yeah about that...

GIN: Yes?

MC: ...you get a co-host...

Gin: Really who?

MC: You'll see next chapter....

Gin: How nice! Se ya!

Ah. ILPy, that will be NL. =D As if you don't know already, from the topic he posted...

Originally Posted by ILPy

8O Mysterious unknown person!

That sounds a lot like Gin. Hmm..

And since he's been egging me to comment... XD; *runs away*

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

Spoiler:- Looks like we have testing to do..//Chapter 1, part 1:

He took the sword, muttering something that sounded like a release. The sword started rapidly shifting shapes between different hospitalistic objects, syringes, needles, and hospital equipment. It finnaly settled on a needle.

8O Now I want THAT zan.

Cameron sighed, he had to get along with it sometime. He pulled out the rubix cube he had stolen from Ryuu. He had tried cleaning off the blood as best he could, but after he had..uh..'borrowed' it, he had gotten in a HUGE fight with Seijuro. (Waffles will always be better then pancakes! ALWAYS!)

lol. Ever since Eon started it, there's been a Rubik craze going on.

Never tasted a pancake before (or at least a pancake like those ones I see on Google), so I'll agree with waffle now.

When Ichigo first asked why Tensa isn't lending him his powers, reminded me of the King and his Horse speech.

"Despaired and ceased to walk forward" I'm guessing this was when he learned to control his Vaizard powers, instead of focussing on his Shinigami powers?

I think we all could have guessed what the despair was...

HICHIGO!

Huh, I didn't know Muzuiro and Ichigo were so close.

Of course they would have met Aizen.
Which reminds me, it doesn't feel like Ichigo and Isshin are moving 2000 times faster than Aizen and Gin.

*facepalm* "Ichigo will come with a new power" all according to plan.

Obviously, Tatsuki won't die. Kubo won't start killing people NOW. And anyway, at first I thought of Muzuiro XD Though it's more likely to be Ryuuken or Tessai. Probably Ryuuken, I'd think. Though Tessai would be equally awesome (though probably more useless, I would think).

Originally Posted by Zameric

Well I'm back from my four day trip in Las Vegas.

8D

Originally Posted by Zameric

I thought I would be able to get on while there, but the you had to pay like 12.99 USD a day for internet access.
And I'm going to be leaving to California on Saturday for a week. >.<

D8

Originally Posted by Zameric

But I'll have internet access while in California, I'll be able to check the club at least once a day.

8D

Originally Posted by Zameric

Spoiler:- manga 410:

Hichigo appears again! And with a invert version of the hollow mask that was on Ichigo in his fight with Ulquiorra.

Spoiler:

Yeah, that looked VERY nice.

Originally Posted by Zameric

Spoiler:- manga 410:

I'm very interested and the upcoming interaction between Tensa Zangetsu and Hichigo.

Spoiler:

Yeah, definitely.

Originally Posted by arceus03

Spoiler:

Ah. Now we know. Zangetsu's place was once wholly his, until the HIchigo came and cohabits there. I'm guessing either Tensa Zangetsu or Ichigo will battle him. Hopefully they won't have to kill him to obtain the final Getsuga Tenshou, because HIchigo is cool in his own way, but I think they will. =\

Spoiler:

Yeah, because I think HIchigo is technically a villain (or at least an anti-hero) so he'll probably be killed D8

Originally Posted by arceus03

Spoiler:

...waitwhat. Isshin said that his Engetsu was the same way. Which probably meant that Isshin was a Vizard as well? Wee, this is getting exciting. But if it was the same as Ichigo, could mean that his Hollow is already dead, too. Hmmm.

Spoiler:

Hmm...
I think that it could be possible. I wouldn't be surprised if Kubo did that, especially since we know so little about Isshin's past, and how him and Urahara are friends (because, really, who else would make him a Vaizard?) as well as the fact that Isshin didn't use a mask (or a Bankai, though) when he could have used it (if he does have it).

Originally Posted by arceus03

Ah. ILPy, that will be NL. =D [s]As if you don't know already, from the topic he posted...

What will be?

Originally Posted by Cell

Spoiler:- Spoiler - Manga 410:

I think it's safe to say that Shirosaki is an arrancar.
Reason: Spoiler:- Spoiler:

He looks more humanoid, is intelligent and looks awesome is amazingly powerfull.

*cracks knuckles* Spoiler:

I COMPLETELY disagree with you.
He pulled off his mask, yes, however his mask was not attached to him like a mask is attached to a normal Hollow. It acted more like a normal kind of mask that you can pull on and off.

Also, the term for an Arrancar is a Hollow that gained Shinigami powers by breaking their masks (whether that be by the Hougyoku or not, it doesn't matter). Like mentioned before, it was less like actually breaking his mask than just pulling it off.

One more thing was that he was not initially a Hollow who gained Shinigami powers. He's more of a... physical formation of Hollow powers, rather than an ACTUAL Hollow, though that can easily be argued.

And while he looks more humanoid, he does not look more humanoid than the previous times we've seen him.

Also, Blue is going on holiday for a week from today.

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On Shirosaki possibly being an Arrancar, this might interest some of you.

Spoiler:- .:

I found this one fanfic on FF.net, and it pointed out something very interesting. The first few seconds after Ichigo regained his Shinigami powers (early in the series), the eyes of his Hollow mask actually glowed, showing that there was a Hollow present. Then, "Ichigo" drew his sword and shattered his mask. Afterwards, he didn't even comment on the mask, like he didn't know he'd been the one to break it. Also, he wasn't really bothered by what was left of it, and simply left it on until Urahara cut it off of him during the third lesson. I think these things point to Shiro being an Arrancar.

As for Blue being on holiday, why wasn't I told this?

"I'm fighting because there's a battle to be fought, Archer. I'm fighting to win. That's all."

"Hm. Alright, Rin. You are indeed my ideal Master. There is no one else I could hope to serve."

On Shirosaki possibly being an Arrancar, this might interest some of you.

Spoiler:- .:

I found this one fanfic on FF.net, and it pointed out something very interesting. The first few seconds after Ichigo regained his Shinigami powers (early in the series), the eyes of his Hollow mask actually glowed, showing that there was a Hollow present. Then, "Ichigo" drew his sword and shattered his mask. Afterwards, he didn't even comment on the mask, like he didn't know he'd been the one to break it. Also, he wasn't really bothered by what was left of it, and simply left it on until Urahara cut it off of him during the third lesson. I think these things point to Shiro being an Arrancar.

Spoiler:

I've reread the chapter in which it happened.
We notice that his transformation into a Hollow was different- he should have exploded and reformed, and then his mask made. Instead, his mask was made first, (then the whole inner-world scene) and then a hole exploded in his chest, but his form was still a human's.
Then some explosion happened, and he was in his Shinigami outfit with the mask.

Based on this, if we were to order his inner world time and his outer world time, the point at which he had had gotten Zangetsu, his Hollow hole appeared. Though, obviously, his Shinigami side dominated and all that was left was the mask.

When Urahara cut off his mask, it was pretty clear that the mask was something that can quite easily be taken off (especially since Ichigo had moved it from his face to his head). It obviously is not connected to his actual flash-and-bone, while Arrancar's masks are (Grimmjow, especially, his mask doesn't ever fall off or anything).

HIchigo himself is really just a manifestation of his Hollow powers, but not an Arrancar itself.

Originally Posted by Eon Master

As for Blue being on holiday, why wasn't I told this?

I'm afraid you'll have to ask him when he's back... In a week. I only found out an hour before he left, as well.

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Finally watched 276. I guess I'm just gonna have to wait for 277 to come out on Crunchyroll.com, since most other places I try are either poor quality or have been taken down.
276 was pretty good. It's fun to laugh at Omaeda's failure to fight against Baraggan. xD
I really like Baraggan's Gran Caída. Even though my Kirihanasu is better That is a great way to decapitate someone.
It was funnier in the anime when Soi Fon comes up the steps with her bankai. xD
The way Ukitake toyed with Lilynette is both hilarious and a bit creepy... >.>
Well, we get to see Starrk & Lilynette's resurrección in the next episode.
I hope they add more to the fight like in the latest Naruto episode.

Shirosaki has always been a fan term, some people choose to use it, some don't (it changes the Kuro [which means black] from Kurosaki and turns it into Shiro [meaning white] in Shirosaki, since Ichigo and HIchigo are as opposite as Black and White). Other fan names are Ogihci (since it Ichigo's name appeared mirrored on a title-page).

Originally Posted by Zameric

@ Vizard BlueAt least we won't get bugged for fights every other hour. ;p

XD Well I've tamed him enough to not bother me with fights XP

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

@ Everyone...

Its Hichigo Shirosaki...thats his name...remember it.

Byakuya: Who are you?!HIchigo: I'm nobody!You ask me who I am but... I don't have a name!
Officially, he has no name. A politically correct name would be "The Hollow within Ichigo's conscience" though that's too long. Often used names are Ogihci (like mentioned before, it is the reverse of Ichigo which appeared as a mirror image on a title-page); Hollow Ichigo (shortened to H.Ichigo, HIchigo, Hichigo, etc.) because he is Ichigo's Hollow; White Ichigo because he is a white Ichigo, and Shirosaki which, as mentioned before, is like White Ichigo, but using the pun in his surname.
Soyeah. Feel free to call him anything you want (I'm trying out Chuck, it seems to be catching on in another forum). Just don't say "*** is his name".

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

@Blue leaving for a week...

...so nobody will ask to kill something for a week?

Yup

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Wooo. All this time I never knew about the name Shirosaki. Might have heard somewhere before though. And idk about the HIchigo being an Arrancar or not. I mean, Spoiler:

Arrancars have Resurreccion, right? So if you want to say that HIchigo is just a manifestation of Ichigo's Hollow powers, what about Tousen? His mask, was that a manifestation or a real Hollow? If you wanna put it as manifestation, why did it have a Resurreccion like an Arrancar? But on the other hand, if you want to say that it is an Arrancar on itself, Tousen was a Shinigami, not a Hollow. Of course, Tousen has been tampered with the Hogyoku, so his case might be a bit different.

On another note, I might/might not be coming here for around one week or so, depends. Gone on a vacation with Blue Even if I can come, I might not reply. So, yeah. Excuse my absence. =D I'd say "Please make sure no one destroys my barracks", but since the one and only most likeliest person to do it is on a vacation sooo... I figure it's redundant. XDDDD

Wooo. All this time I never knew about the name Shirosaki. Might have heard somewhere before though. And idk about the HIchigo being an Arrancar or not. I mean, Spoiler:

Arrancars have Resurreccion, right? So if you want to say that HIchigo is just a manifestation of Ichigo's Hollow powers, what about Tousen? His mask, was that a manifestation or a real Hollow? If you wanna put it as manifestation, why did it have a Resurreccion like an Arrancar? But on the other hand, if you want to say that it is an Arrancar on itself, Tousen was a Shinigami, not a Hollow. Of course, Tousen has been tampered with the Hogyoku, so his case might be a bit different.

Spoiler:

The main difference between Tousen being a Vaizard and Ichigo being a Vaizard is how they became Vaizards.
Ichigo became a Hollow and during the transformation, had become a Shinigami.
Tousen was under the effect of the Hougyoku, and given Hollow powers. His "inner desire" would have been to gain Hollow like powers- so a mask, a Hollow-like form, (and did he get a cero?) was what he got. he may or may not have an inner Hollow.

Tousen's Vaizard powers are more comparable to Shinji and his groups, because they were all turned into Vaizards via the Hougyoku, though of course, even THAT would have differences.

Originally Posted by arceus03

On another note, I might/might not be coming here for around one week or so, depends. Gone on a vacation with Blue Even if I can come, I might not reply. So, yeah. Excuse my absence. =D I'd say "Please make sure no one destroys my barracks", but since the one and only most likeliest person to do it is on a vacation sooo... I figure it's redundant. XDDDD

D8
And I'm not going on vacation o.o XP

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as for the fic. had sometime today to think it over. the last chapter contains an event that prompts a continuation. i thought it out and planned the continuation, which is another arc with new villains. though to get to that point i would have to finish the current arc. so what i'm trying to say is i'll be posting at least two chapters a week from here out. i only expected the current arc to last 17 or 18 chapters. and you should all be getting ILP's scene soon.

and on a personal note, i'm typing with one hand because i'm an idiot and burned my left hand with a firework and its wrapped in gauze. yeah for idiocy.

PRETEND THERE IS A SIGNATURE HERE FULL OF WITTY JOKES AND CLAIMS TO FAME AND UNDESERVED BRAVADO AND SELF PROMOTION

Dre shot a massive fireball at the duo, who immediately dashed out of the way in either direction…what they didn’t see was the vacuum slash that only shortly followed Dre’s blast. It hit the fireball, splitting it in two, sending a wave of flames toward each of the two foes.

“Hyah!” Dre expanded the flames rapidly, producing a short fiery explosion that did sufficient damage to both.

“Tch…you’ll pay for that…” Bars stood, and looked at the duo. He held his schmitar up high.

“NO NO.” Spro raised a hand. “This is my universe. Get out. I get to fight them.”

Pazzo turned slowly, staring at the two. “You and you are going to die and die!”

“Tch…” Jin had to admit…every second in this place was taking its toll. He struck the air several times, and the waves connected with the staff that Pazzo wielded. “You’ll need need more than that, weakling.”

Jin almost passed out from the pain that suddenly hit. Pazzo had jumped at him, and lodged the crystal end of his staff in Jin’s stomach. In this new reality, that was indeed the case, as well. His body stretched around the crystal like in a cartoon.

He could only barely hear Dre calling his name as he fell to his knees.

~~~

Mizuhashi was speechless – they were in trouble AGAIN. There was a mysterious black aura laying over the entire Soul Society.

“Don’t leave this area!” Dosu called. “This place is protected…if any place is safe, it should be here!”

Mizuhashi watched as the black aura crept closer…and sure enough, it crawled over the area, as if it was encased in a dome. He was speechless…which was becoming too common of an occurrence as of late, in his opinion.

He looked out again, and saw a young man he knew from the School standing in the black aura. He called his name, and the man turned his head. The look on his face was almost impossible to describe…it was a mixture of what appeared to be hysterical laughter and…fear.

He called louder, but the man drew his sword. Mizuhashi tried to run to the man, but his Captain stopped him.

The man plunged his sword through his heart.

“No…no! WHY!?”

The Captains grip eased. “This aura, can you feel it? It feels…sadistic…insane…that man must have had a weak spirit…he couldn’t take it…

Mizuhashi punched the ground hard, blood spilling from his knuckles…“****!”

“I know, kid. I’ve lost many of my friends too. But there’s nothing that can be accomplished by mourning on a battlefield…there’s work that must be done…”

Mizuhashi sat on his knees for a moment…before getting up…most of the patients have been healed by this time…those that could anyway.

“Wait…” said Dosu. “What are you doing?”

Mizuhashi looked over his shoulder. “You’re right, mourning isn’t the right thing to do…but I think I know what should be done…after all…I’m not solely a healer, you know.”

And with that, he walked into the darkness.

~~~

Dre had launched many waves of Meteor Showers after the man, but to no avail, he was able to dodge them all. But this one had done it’s purpose; it had moved him away from Jin.

Dre threw one of Jin’s arms over his left shoulder and shunpoed as far as he could away.

“Come on!” Dre said, shaking Jin. “What’s the purpose of even being here if you’re not gonna fight?”

Shikai Details: In its Shikai state it becomes a Gatling Gun and fires much stronger poison bullets, these bullets are strong enough to tear off limbs (What do you expect? It's a Gatling Gun!... But there is a 10% chance, nonetheless). If the bullet remains, or atleast comes into contact with living matter. It will react with flesh and spirit energy by releasing its poison. It will release poison continuously until the bullet is not extracted, though it will stop when it dissolves fully into the wound. THE BULLET MUST DISSOLVE FOR THE REACTION TO OCCUR. The first symptoms of the poison are, that the victim's vision will start to blur, then he/she will hallucinate, then it will lead to paralysis of certain body parts. Then, if the antidote is not administered, it will lead to a painful death. These chain of events depend on the hit the victim has taken. If it is anything from a cut to a slightly deep wound, it's effects won't be as adverse. It will only blur the victims vision a little, but... if the bullet has penetrated the body, THEN the following will happen.

Bankai Name: *Please suggest an awesome name*

Bankai Details: Upon releasing, the Gatling Gun becomes an RPG-7. The RPG it fires has moderate homing capabilities as is fast, but not that fast. I can charge my spirit energy into the RPG to make it stronger, faster and more mobile (and therefore make its homing capabilities better.) When it explodes, it releases a Purple gas that has the same effects as what the poison bullets do in my Shikai. The RPG contains phosphorus, when it explodes, so does the phosphorus and releases white flames that will cause extricating pain to anybody who touches it and will give him/her large third-degree burns. The downside, it has a long reloading time (about 1 minute). I construct another RPG using spirit energy.

Anything Else: In its sealed state, the Zanpaktou is a Scorpion sub-machine gun with a bayonet. It's 1.5x stronger than the one in real life and it's bullets poison the target and causes the wound to become soar. Its effects aren't as adverse as my shikai's or my Bankai's

... Well, boys. Say hello to my little friend! I thought I'd ditch the tommy gun, physics and all 'a that. This should be acceptable, you can't say no to it's bad assery!

Eon; wow you got me down really well - i am quite the hypocrite when it cames down to controlling tempers - i like how you worked in the Lupine attributes, and yey~ tribal Ryookami makes an appearance, i really do draw to calm me down and relax XD - DA.C is coming in to help, this should be fun.

I love how this plot is forming, at first i was confused, but now it's following through, well done =]

WOOOOHHH - ENGLAND JUST WON AGAINST SLOVENIA .... YEAH BITCHES
USA and ENGLAND go through XD

Yah so. My vacation got cut short. but THANK GOD. I was lied to! that was no vacation, it was a JW convention, 12. hours. of preaching. for 3 days. o.e. vacation my ***. Besides, I missed you guys! There was no one to kill, by the way.on the way here well i uh..*shows broken wooden piece of a 4* Eh. hehe...*runs from arc*, Since I didn't have access to the internet, i didn't have any place to write my fanfiction. chapter 1 part 2 might be up...eh..not so soon. well anyway, yay!

as for the fic. had sometime today to think it over. the last chapter contains an event that prompts a continuation. i thought it out and planned the continuation, which is another arc with new villains. though to get to that point i would have to finish the current arc. so what i'm trying to say is i'll be posting at least two chapters a week from here out. i only expected the current arc to last 17 or 18 chapters.

Ah, well, at least we'll have more chapters more often!

Originally Posted by kusari

and on a personal note, i'm typing with one hand because i'm an idiot and burned my left hand with a firework and its wrapped in gauze. yeah for idiocy.

I'm sure Arc would be more than happy to fix that up for ya.

Originally Posted by Golde

Spoiler:- Chapter 30 - Battlefield Mourning:

~~~

“Take this! Heat Cannon!”

Dre shot a massive fireball at the duo, who immediately dashed out of the way in either direction…what they didn’t see was the vacuum slash that only shortly followed Dre’s blast. It hit the fireball, splitting it in two, sending a wave of flames toward each of the two foes.

“Hyah!” Dre expanded the flames rapidly, producing a short fiery explosion that did sufficient damage to both.

“Tch…you’ll pay for that…” Bars stood, and looked at the duo. He held his schmitar up high.

“NO NO.” Spro raised a hand. “This is my universe. Get out. I get to fight them.”

Pazzo turned slowly, staring at the two. “You and you are going to die and die!”

“Tch…” Jin had to admit…every second in this place was taking its toll. He struck the air several times, and the waves connected with the staff that Pazzo wielded. “You’ll need need more than that, weakling.”

Jin almost passed out from the pain that suddenly hit. Pazzo had jumped at him, and lodged the crystal end of his staff in Jin’s stomach. In this new reality, that was indeed the case, as well. His body stretched around the crystal like in a cartoon.

He could only barely hear Dre calling his name as he fell to his knees.

~~~

Mizuhashi was speechless – they were in trouble AGAIN. There was a mysterious black aura laying over the entire Soul Society.

“Don’t leave this area!” Dosu called. “This place is protected…if any place is safe, it should be here!”

Mizuhashi watched as the black aura crept closer…and sure enough, it crawled over the area, as if it was encased in a dome. He was speechless…which was becoming too common of an occurrence as of late, in his opinion.

He looked out again, and saw a young man he knew from the School standing in the black aura. He called his name, and the man turned his head. The look on his face was almost impossible to describe…it was a mixture of what appeared to be hysterical laughter and…fear.

He called louder, but the man drew his sword. Mizuhashi tried to run to the man, but his Captain stopped him.

The man plunged his sword through his heart.

“No…no! WHY!?”

The Captains grip eased. “This aura, can you feel it? It feels…sadistic…insane…that man must have had a weak spirit…he couldn’t take it…

Mizuhashi punched the ground hard, blood spilling from his knuckles…“****!”

“I know, kid. I’ve lost many of my friends too. But there’s nothing that can be accomplished by mourning on a battlefield…there’s work that must be done…”

Mizuhashi sat on his knees for a moment…before getting up…most of the patients have been healed by this time…those that could anyway.

“Wait…” said Dosu. “What are you doing?”

Mizuhashi looked over his shoulder. “You’re right, mourning isn’t the right thing to do…but I think I know what should be done…after all…I’m not solely a healer, you know.”

And with that, he walked into the darkness.

~~~

Dre had launched many waves of Meteor Showers after the man, but to no avail, he was able to dodge them all. But this one had done it’s purpose; it had moved him away from Jin.

Dre threw one of Jin’s arms over his left shoulder and shunpoed as far as he could away.

“Come on!” Dre said, shaking Jin. “What’s the purpose of even being here if you’re not gonna fight?”

“I’ll certainly try not to…” he said sarcastically as he held up Rekku at his side again. “Now…Dre, if we play our cards right, we can end this quickly.”

“I’m all ears…”

“Same same” Pazzo appeared next to them, and they simultaneously struck.

Almost over, I swear.

Well, there's not really much I can say. I don't remember much of what happened HAVE A PREVIEW DAMNIT and I don't really think THAT much happened besides some fighting.

Originally Posted by Emperor Giratina

Zanpaktou Name: Scorponok

Type: Poison

Zanpaktou Spirit: A Giant Purple Scorpion

Release Command: Impale

Shikai Details: In its Shikai state it becomes a Gatling Gun and fires much stronger poison bullets, these bullets are strong enough to tear off limbs (What do you expect? It's a Gatling Gun!... But there is a 10% chance, nonetheless). If the bullet remains, or atleast comes into contact with living matter. It will react with flesh and spirit energy by releasing its poison. It will release poison continuously until the bullet is not extracted, though it will stop when it dissolves fully into the wound. THE BULLET MUST DISSOLVE FOR THE REACTION TO OCCUR. The first symptoms of the poison are, that the victim's vision will start to blur, then he/she will hallucinate, then it will lead to paralysis of certain body parts. Then, if the antidote is not administered, it will lead to a painful death. These chain of events depend on the hit the victim has taken. If it is anything from a cut to a slightly deep wound, it's effects won't be as adverse. It will only blur the victims vision a little, but... if the bullet has penetrated the body, THEN the following will happen.
[If you do not have Bankai do not complete the following]
Bankai Name: *Please suggest an awesome name*
Bankai Details: Upon releasing, the Gatling Gun becomes an RPG-7. The RPG it fires has moderate homing capabilities as is fast, but not that fast. I can charge my spirit energy into the RPG to make it stronger, faster and more mobile (and therefore make its homing capabilities better.) When it explodes, it releases a Purple gas that has the same effects as what the poison bullets do in my Shikai. The R[G contains phosphorus, when it explodes, so does the phosphorus and releases white flames that will cause extricating pain to anybody who touches it and will give him/her large third-degree burns. The downside, it has a long reloading time (about 1 minute). I construct another RPG using spirit energy.
Anything Else: In its sealed state, the Zanpaktou is a Scorpion sub-machine gun with a bayonet. It's 1.5x stronger than the one in real life and it's bullets poison the target and causes the wound to become soar. Its effects aren't as adverse as my shikai's or my Bankai's

... Well, boys. Say hello to my little friend! I thought I'd ditch the tommy gun, physics and all 'a that. This should be acceptable, you can't say no to it's bad assery!

Sounds good to me.
I like the use of poisons, though I've usually seen that as Da.c's area of expertise, so you'll have to check with him if it's different enough to his to be allowed, I think.

As for the name of the Bankai, usually the name of the Shikai has a meaning in Japanese, which can then be added onto for a "surname"/Bankai name (like how "Zangetsu" means "Slaying Moon" and "Tensa Zangetsu" is "Heaven Chain Slaying Moon").

Also, your sealed state is a gun? I'm not sure if that's allowed, since I think almost all instances of a Zanpakutou has been a katana in its sealed state.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

W0000T GO ENGLAND!!!! haha

Wow, you're late. They're out. Germany beat them 4-1.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

anyway my exam went horribly (i should have studied more and group chatted less haha) but oh well, its just a summer course

D8. Granted, I did bother you a lot during your "study time" XP

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

KILLI can something now?

No.

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

Yah so. My vacation got cut short. but THANK GOD. I was lied to! that was no vacation, it was a JW convention, 12. hours. of preaching. for 3 days. o.e. vacation my ***. Besides, I missed you guys! There was no one to kill, by the way.on the way here well i uh..*shows broken wooden piece of a 4* Eh. hehe...*runs from arc*, Since I didn't have access to the internet, i didn't have any place to write my fanfiction. chapter 1 part 2 might be up...eh..not so soon. well anyway, yay!

Well, there's not really much I can say. I don't remember much of what happened HAVE A PREVIEW DAMNIT and I don't really think THAT much happened besides some fighting.

Sounds good to me.
I like the use of poisons, though I've usually seen that as Da.c's area of expertise, so you'll have to check with him if it's different enough to his to be allowed, I think.

As for the name of the Bankai, usually the name of the Shikai has a meaning in Japanese, which can then be added onto for a "surname"/Bankai name (like how "Zangetsu" means "Slaying Moon" and "Tensa Zangetsu" is "Heaven Chain Slaying Moon").

Also, your sealed state is a gun? I'm not sure if that's allowed, since I think almost all instances of a Zanpakutou has been a katana in its sealed state.

well, i knew they were out, i just decided to live in the moment :P
i am still epressed that my team did so badly

and yes, you did disturb me haha!
but it was my fault fo being online. I got an OK enough grade, but since I am doing the summer course at an american uni and having it transferred to my uni in canada, the grade will not be shown, and thus, will not affect me =)

is it me or does aizen look sexy now that he no longer looks like a condom?

I am going to watch karate kid today (w000t). in watched avatar the movie last week, and it sucked.... the graphics were awesome but they skipped waaay to many important bits in the story line, infact, its one of those movies tht if you had not watched the cartoons, you would not have understood, at all

I am trying to convince one of my firends to learn objiwe..... she is stubborn (yes, that was random)

anyway i hope everyone is good =)

i wanna see more mayuri action. i am getting tired of the ichigo-centricity

This is my idea for my second form of my bankai, decided to post it first and see what most of you think about it.

Technique Name: False Darkness

Activation:
I need to be in bankai state and charge my spear with (or something equivalent to) Hado 11.Tsuzuri Raiden. I have to drop my spear and Siska takes control of the weapon, once that has happened, I need to recite the following:

"A bolt hits an arrow, the arrow shatters as the bolt continues through on the path to hit it's target. As the skill of the archer increases, so does the weapon's strength and ability."

Siska then stabs me 19mm from the heart. An indestrucable sphere forms around me and exploding sparks scatter over half my bankai's reach (15m) and my spear and chain melt and get absorbed in the wound. All metal objects (as in, real metal) and vacant spirit particles currently in the sphere are drawn into the wound as well, as the amount absorbed increases, more electrical currents appear. The wound is then covered with a film of reiatsu and metal.

Slowly my right forearm molds and reshapes as a crossbow-shape weapon takes it's place. It looks like crossbow limbs with a 3 pointed claw where my hand was before. Halfway between the tip of the bow and my elbow is a handle with an activity bar. A small gap is in the center of the claw and a slight shine of silver reiatsu is visable.

Once this is completely formed, the currents stop and the sphere disappears.

This new form is directly tapping into my reiatsu and fires reiatsu bolts charged with electricity. The more the activity bar is filled, the stronger the next bolt will be. Charging a full power bolt takes 2 minutes. Depending on the amount of metal and vacant particles I was able to absorb, I can fire between 500 and 2000 bolts (in total).

If I go unconsious/stop the technique, the bow disappears and the inflicted wound opens. Medical attention will be urgently needed or I could die.

That's it. Tell me what you think?

Last edited by Cell; 5th July 2010 at 11:28 PM.
Reason: Fixed the spelling faults