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Cecilia 100WC – Week 32

The men were in suits, their hair cut straight. Each one had a dead serious face on, and holding a futuristic device. I peeked through the bushes, making sure no one saw me. I needed to report to HQ any info I found out, as I was the head field agent. They were blabbering something to one another, some of the words sounded like a foreign language……I jotted that down in my notebook, when I heard something that gave me the shock of my life, I stumbled forward, completely blowing my cover. They knew where our base was,how?!?!?!?!?

Molly:
I cant wait to see what you come up with fot the hundred word challerge!!!
Cally:Hello, we are from queen victoria primary school! this 100 word challenge is amazing! we cant wait to talk to you more on your blog and on our blog too! 🙂
Cyprus:iam very impressed with the 100wc it is a spectacular idea azmazed so far well done i will love to see more of your fantastic.

Hello!
My name is Emma and I am a 6th grader from Iowa. I loved your story, it was very suspenseful. Maybe you can come to my blog to read some more suspenseful stories!!!! Just go to this website: http://kidblog.org/MrsHeinesClass-3/

What a wonderful entry into this week’s 100 word challenge. You have created an exciting and interesting story. I like the way you have thrown the reader straight into the action and let us wanting more at the end. I wish you could have had more words so I could find out what happened next. Your next step is to think of using a range of connectives.