The Clapping Monkey

hey everyone, rnrnI wanted to make the words fit the music on the description but I'm not sure about that because I am deaf. I need some critique on this design. tell me if you have any good suggestions for these words. rnrnthanks!rnrnother question: should this pic be with or without description?

Maybe you could highlight the special parts like jukebox, echo, ...
and make the technical stuff in the background a little bit lighter.
Because at the moment, if you see the design of a little distance it gets a gray mass.
You could also outline these parts in an other color or use a glow to outline them??!

Incredible...can't wait to see it on a tee! Some of the details might be hard to see once you actually put it on a tee, so maybe try making all the colors a bit darker? It looks great though, and after that you're ready to submit!

Great design! :)
Text could be scaled a bit, but i think that you need to highlight those parts and maybe change the color of those lines that are linking the words and the parts on a monkey, or maybe add those lines white outlines, you'll need to make them thicker i guess:P... you have to look closely to see exactly, where are those lines going, and that's not good i think.
I hope i've helped :)
Good luck.

That's so cool, I would like to see it on a shirt, maybe a beige shirt or a white one most definitely. After you put it on a shirt show us and submit 'cause it's pretty awesome, maybe the words a bit bigger so people are able to see them? But I like it, it says music all over :)