I'm sooo buying that. Seriously. I like the inclusion of the ribbon in the logo.

The package mock-up nails American box art design - dark color scheme, a character plane that's completely seperate from the background plane, ACTION!!, and VIOLENCE!!. I think it'd work as prototype leak with some adjustments.

I've gotten better feedback than expected!Thanks to each one of you. Cheer up! The artwork and idea are there, this almost took me enough work to AT LEAST make it a real playable demo.(Minus the programming part). I would say this was kinda rushed because I only made this in 2 days' work spare time. So because I work, I can't make a full game. But I've even dreamed of making it if GameArts does not!

In the past i've made my own little games, with artwork 100% and every pixel done by me.I am very good with RPG Maker, to a point I can even make the battle system just like that too, but im limited to just that program, as it is easy to use and im not a programmer.