This poem comes across as something that transcends the usual princess-prince love subject, that define generic fairy tales or poems. I feel the rhythm of it has a certain chant-like feel to it and this is naturally relates to a jester's tone who dishes out epic tales of bravery and valor. In this chant however, there is a sense of transcendental courage, which is displayed by the jester openly expressing his affection for the princess, which is undoubtedly a risk to his very life.

However, there were some shortcomings of this poem, without which it would have been a complete masterpiece. To begin with, the rhyme scheme is not constant but varied across the 3 paragraphs - this destabilizes the theme - jesters were very good with rhymes in their time. Also, in some places it sounds more like prose - and this is due to the fact that cliched language has been employed. An inclusion of a few poetic devices - alliteration, chiasmus, etc. - would help. I know you have attempted what may be termed a piece of prosetry, but the peril in this is it might end up as neither. So, be careful.

Overall, it's something different, simple and a piece of writing people can connect to. Well done!

Thank you for the comment, though I'm not sure how to reply.Most of the problems that I have has to do with the rhyme scheme, I know it's important, but does it make it better? Then again, poetry does rhyme... It's all about the rhyming, right?

Those who use the least end with the most...in other words, you don't have to have material things to be happy, just the preconceived idea that you can be happy with one thing has the biggest outcomes. Not only can happiness be then easy to find and gain, but then it's also easy to redestribute that happiness. With that four letter word called "love"

Wonderfully done sir, may it become an investment to the future so your writing may continue, for us to always read.