tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5152757467022067606.post629218466509548490..comments2015-11-27T11:47:34.750+13:00Comments on Ronald: Film festivalPES Blog Archivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03346754417165409248noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5152757467022067606.post-3922680233567157292011-11-17T10:31:45.122+13:002011-11-17T10:31:45.122+13:00Hey Ronald, sounds like you had a good time at the...Hey Ronald, sounds like you had a good time at the film festival. I think you need to go through your writing and edit it as i found this piece a bit difficult to read, remember to edit for sense :)<br /><br />Have fun and keep writing :)Mr. Hutchingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01458592941386059789noreply@blogger.com