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Review:

soapman333 says:This is one of the best Marauder's era pieces I've ever read. Suffice to say I'm adding it to my favorites.

The imagery...I could go on and on about how your beautiful imagery kept me reading each word, even though I know the "ending" of this sad story. You're like a poet, twisting the words to an art that just touched my soul.

The style is just perfect. Each "casualty" had their own slot, own story within this story. Each of these characters caught my attention (even Pettigrew), and earned my sympathy (even empathy in some cases.).

The strong bond between these characters is only touched briefly upon, but it was just enough for me to tear up :(.

Geez, way to ace this. It was a sad story, but, I don't know, you had a way of weaving in a sense of hope through it all. Well, I picked up on a tone of hope in it anyways :P

It was all just brilliant. BRAVO!
10/10
Jack

Author's Response: Hi Jack! Thank you so much for stopping by!

Awww ♥ Thank you so much for all your amazing compliments. I'm a bit obsessed with this era, mainly these five. Sometimes when I'm working on Before They Fall, I get so sad when I think about what's going to eventually happen to all my babies. And then, well, stuff like this story happens when I have to run my feels all over the page :P

I'm really happy that each character was able to grab your attention. It was hard for me not to give Sirius too much special attention, because I just love that man. But I hope it seemed all evened out pretty well.

Thank you again for coming by to review ♥ And for all your insanely kind compliments!