Date: Sat, 13 Feb 2010 11:47:43 +0000
From: Adam McDonald
Subject: jigsaw's return
Disclaimer: This story is adult in nature and is not intended for audiences
below the age of 17. I neither own, not claim identity to, the 'Saw' story
or franchise or the 'Jigsaw' character, and all rights and representations
are reserved by their creators. The original characters introduced herein,
are my own and may not be re-introduced into other stories without my
consent.
His eyes snap open, and reality invades like a punch to the face. His head
reels with pain and his body convulses with nausea, and as he tries to sit
up. he finds that he is bound to what appears to be a gurney. He struggles
against his restraints, but the more he does, the more the fiery pain from a
million points rips through his body, so he stops out of sheer desperation.
As his gritty eyes adjust to the low light, he sees that he is in a filthy
room and that, more importantly, he has hundreds of syringes inserted over
the whole of his body. Not only that, but he is completely naked and has a
full raging erection which is surrounded by an evil looking bladed device.
His breathing is rapid and scared as he yells out, "WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING
ON!"
There is no answer.
He squirms some more, but each movement disturbs the needles which deliver
more pain into his ravaged body.
"Ok, ok, OK!" he murmurs as he tries to collect himself to stay calm, "Just
stay still, and I'll be fine."
As his breathing subsides and he begins to think things through, an electric
current hits him, and his body convulses, leading to an even greater level
of pain than he has ever imagined.
"WHAT THE FUCK!?" he screams, "OH GOD, HELP ME!"
As if in answer, a TV monitor, unseen before, flickers to life, and the face
of a ventriloquist's dummy flashes on the screen.
"Hello, Kevin," it begins, "I want to play a game."
"A GAME?!" Kevin yells, "What the fuck is going on?!"
Uncaring, the video plays on, "In life, you were given the gift of being
incredibly attractive. A gift you used to seduce men of all ages and types
to fulfill your sexual desires."
"So?" Kevin yells as he struggles more, increasing his agony.
The video continues, "Aside from breaking the hearts of many men who fell
for your charade, you have also knowingly infected 10 men with the HIV virus
since you discovered you were a carrier of this disease."
"No, NO!" Kevin insists, "I had no idea, and they WANTED to do it bareback!"
The lifeless recording continues, "Since you have not only wasted your life,
but destroyed those of the innocents, I give you this choice. As you have
noticed, you have been injected with hundreds of syringes, each one filled
with a substance of very diluted sulphuric acid, and you also have a device
strapped to what you consider your 'prize' feature. Look to your left and
right hands."
Kevin dartingly glances to the left and right, and he sees buttons lying
underneath each finger and thumb of both hands.
"Under each of your fingers," the recording continues, "you will find the
controls to cut off one tenth of what you prize most ... and what led to the
infection of your victims. However, at the end of this recording, you will
only have 60 seconds to press all of them and thus, remove your entire
member before the syringes will completely compress, and the concentration
of sulphuric acid in your body will be enough to eat you through
completely. I bid you hurry, though. The longer you take, the greater
chance the acid will leave permanent damage. Live or die, the choice is
yours."
With a maniacal laugh, the video shuts off and a motor begins to whir.
Kevin looks and sees that a hydraulic press has begun to operate, and the
plungers on all the syringes are beginning to slowly press downwards.
At first, he almost laughs, since he feels nothing. Moments later, as the
acid begins to eat away at his insides, he screams and tries, to no avail,
to grab at them and pull them out.
"No way, no FUCKING way!" he yells, as he glances at the controls left to
him to end his torment.
More acid floods his veins, and blood begins to seep from his mouth.
"No ... n ... o , I can't ..."
He glances over and sees 30 seconds have elapsed.
"Oh God, OH GOD!!!!" he screams, as he starts to give in and looks at the
control under his left index finger.
"Ok, OK, I can do this!"
Kevin pushes the button, and the blade above his dick clamps down, and a
tenth of it flies off with a spurt of blood.
"OH GOD!!!!!!" he screams in agony as even yet more acid floods his veins.
Whimpering with pain from every sense he knows, Kevin slams his whole right
hand down, and five blades slice.
Kevin can not even cry out, as he is unable to even make a sound.
He begins to cry as he looks over to see 5 seconds left on the timer.
"No, I CAN'T, it's too much. I'm sorry, I'm SORRY!" he yells as the clock
reaches 0 before he convulses as the acid becomes potent enough to eat
throughout his body, destroying bone and tissue as he begins to melt into a
puddle on the floor.
The remnants of Kevin are pooling and smoking through the gurney and onto
the ground as the door slams open and three policemen swarm into the death
chamber, guns drawn.
"Jesus CHRIST!" one yells, as he covers his nose from the smell, "What the
FUCK is that?!"
One of the policemen stands next to Kevin's destroyed body and shakes its
head sadly at what it sees.
The policeman pulls its helmet off, shakes its hair loose and frowns at what
it sees.
"It's a new victim," Agent Wolfly says, as she turns to her teammates, "and
it's not pretty. Get CSU in here now to check for evidence!"
Her crew, aghast at the scene before them, tries to regain their composure.
"Who do you think killed him?" one murmurs.
"Should be obvious, don't you think?" she replies sarcastically, "This is
Jigsaw's MO."
One member of her crew scoffs, "Jigsaw?! He's dead! What the fuck are you
talking about?"
Wolfly simply shakes her head and says, "Jigsaw may be dead, but true evil
never dies, and it just left us its calling card."
Well, that's it for chapter 1 ... and I apolgize if anyone found it
offensive, but this IS meant to be a horror story based on the 'Saw' series,
so it's supposed to be gruesome. Feedback is welcome at ender2155@gmail.com