Yeah
probably a little better, but either one suits me fine - actually I've downloaded both! When you reach a certain level on a song you can make considerable changes to it and (at least for me) it's no big deal - it's still just great. I listened to one of my own songs in a couple of different versions today, and sure I could hear some "mistakes" in the earlier versions, but I "knew" how it should sound and that's more or less what I heard in my head. Similarly with this song I hear an excellent piece of music and if a couple of notes here and there are changed I hardly hear it. One positive thing, though, is that this is longer - meaning more time to enjoy it! But it's getting late and I am rambling. I'll try to come back after listening a few more times..!

intriguing!
Welcome back, great to have you around again! What a nice piece too... feels a bit like the Tangerine Dream that I always loved, with the added bonus of a bit of a classical ending, definite Fave here! I like the build at the end and choice of synths/choir.
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Drakonis

Yes, I hear some Tangerine Dreams, too, but that was not intended. The "dolphin phaser" effect gives the wonderful TUMI rhythm loop sometimes a sound like Jean Michel Jarre, this was not intended, too. But I like it nevertheless...
I wasn't really away, but had no time to make music, I am fighting for a better job inside our company and this meant a lot of work the last weeks.
And it's looking not bad...:-)

Hello Bernd
Very nice rhythm, very nice melody...
the scratchy percussion section is quite interesting and adds to the charm; it makes for a great contrast.
Don't be stranger a keep on posting your music!

Music is for me a wonderful counterpart to my job. I work as a"Software Trainer" & "Technical Writer" for a German software company. I sung in a wonderful choir, when I was 11 to 18 years old. (With half a year break during voice changing, when I was... [see more]