"Good or bad, it doesn't matter, just to be something" I wsould suggest italics on the word "something"

"I guess little do they know that ultimately because they have forever struggled to find an answer that was in their laps to begin with, being either good or bad was of no concern any longer." It may be just me, but this whole sentence makes no sense to me... Perhaps remove the word "ultimately" and insert a semi colon after the first "that"

"ones that deserve it not" remove the word "not"

"humans from will come and we wil" insert a comma between "come" and "and"

"in between" inbetween is one word

"But if you could see them too, well… let's just assume that it's going to be quite a surprise" change "if" to "when" and "could" to "can". The tense needs to be changed because humans will be seeing them when "the stitches come undone"

"All that is real now for humanity will survive when the world fails them" this section of sentence doesn't make sense.

"I triggered" insert "was" between "I" and "triggered"

"sisters as well for we were" insert a comma between "sisters" and "as"

"Upon triggering" insert "being" between "Upon" and "triggering" and alter "triggering" to "triggered"

"who triggered" insert "were" between "Who" and "triggered"

"until needed when the world" insert a comma between "needed"

and "when"

"the in between and he would rise" replace "and" with a comma

"Icy May, as his human self-deemed him was our creator" this sentence makes no sense and I can't understand what you want it to mean, so I have no corrections to offer.

"we call him May and he is our" insert a comma between "May" and "and"

"revelation that this all around him" replace "this" with "the world"

"In this dream was where I" Remove "In"

"I say as I walked from" incorrect tense, alter to "said" insert the word "out" between "walked" and "from"