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"Just an escapist who sometimes writes her heart out."
Sakshi is one of those people who cherish fiction and fantasy. She loves spending her free time reading and listening to music, and sometimes, she also writes stuff. For her writing started as an escape from the real life, and that's the reason behind the name "the escapist". She prefers not to be known as a writer because she believes that she has a long way to go to be that much proficient. Until then, she is just an ordinary blogger with an extraordinary addiction to books and music.
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Lovely description of the scene? “Or the mist slithering through trees”- lovely line. I am curious as why the character cannot touch this person. Is the person unreal or no more? A good food for thought.

Realization dawned that if I try to touch you, you’ll disappear. This peaceful dream will twist into an everlasting nightmare. And I absolutely loved the ending, I’ll begin to fear even the crunching sound my feet makes on fallen and dried out leaves.. this somehow made me compare it with the outside world..that the writer feels safe in dreams and afraid to wake up and face the outside world.

I just let you know, though. You made me find it beautiful. I see the loss of loved ones, and the fear of losing the memories left to hold on to as well. I don’t know if that what you meant, of course, but that doesn’t really matter, does it:)

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