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I've always been interested

"alicebrant"
(2017-10-13)

I've always been interested in creative writing and decided to start writing some fiction. What I've written isn't even a page, but I'm really not sure how good it is or how interesting, and I was wondering if you'd all read it and tell me what you think? About the words, the sentence structure, the characters, the dialogue (I find Assignment help very difficult)...everything really. Compliments and constructive criticism both welcome. I'd really appreciate the help. So here's the passage below: