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Again many can relate to this. I thought it was great. It had a nice message. People may make mistakes, as we all do, but we can't sit and grieve about it forever. We have to learn from them, and find our place in this world before it's too late.

I really liked this poem. The message you gave was amazing. I really like the whole poem but my favorite is at the end where you said "And in life I may be lost But someday I may be found". Please let me know again when you wrie another poem.:)

Hello again :) To me, the same tone in "Why do i drive them away" is used here, but in a slightly altered version. This isn't a bad thing though. You have a serious and honest theme to your poems that are really unmistakable and great. Another great one :) Take care, Regan

Very nice and expressive. It flows well, and I quite enjoyed this. When you have some time, please give my new work The Smuggler's Weakness a peek when you can. I'm off to read the other new poem of yours. =D

If only we could go back and try again...fix all those mistakes we made in the past. But, I have thought about this for a long time and the thought occurred to me: All those decisions, good and bad, made me the person I am today. Should I really change anything if I could go back?

wow that was something im glad i read my year is starting out all bad i have two that i have that i think u should read because there close to what iv just read one is untitled and the other is lost in a world that doesnt seem to exist u should read them ant tell me what u think

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Thougts come in my mind and leave but not the pain it brings. Images, Memeries, and Emotions
Alcoho can be thought as water in a plant that helps it grow. Alcoho is my blood that run my life but now it has stop growing its done its perpose in life now its time to... and go back to the ground where it came from. The same for me and my images, memeries and emotions about YOU.

You have been found... An Angel has been set for all of us! Spread your wings and take in the beauty of love, passion and devotion. Everyone makes mistakes, why let it spoil the rest of what life has to offer? Open your eyes and follow your heart, it will lead you on the right path... xXx