Tom, the context looks bad there ~ picture of a mostly nekkid girl and that reminds you that you & PC Tiki need to go out "riding". If I didn't know you were an avid bike rider I would call your wife and suggest she hire a private investigator!

Palm City Tiki, that is shaping up well, can't wait to see how it turns out.

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As for composition: Is that monkey getting ready to stick that torch
up the cute girls bum?

I would think seeing a monkey with a lit Tiki torch would not be a good thing
& maybe running would be a better thing to do?

As for Style: The Disney/Pinup aesthetic is pleasant enough but not very original
how you use color & texture here will be the deciding factor on how well it works
But I look forward to seeing the finished art.

I like it, very fun and sexy as hell! ATP Disney/Pin-up? That's an odd combo _________________ATTENTION MEMBERS! If you take the TC War Canoe on a head hunting party, be sure to remove the decapitated bodies before returning it. See club bylaws for more details

I just noticed that "Soooo Cute" managed to light her skirt on fire _________________ATTENTION MEMBERS! If you take the TC War Canoe on a head hunting party, be sure to remove the decapitated bodies before returning it. See club bylaws for more details