That was fantastic and lovely and I can't believe I missed this story over the years but it was so,
and the way Charles talked, you must be the one person that got his couth vocab right and the proposal, oh glory how Erik meant it and you just got right in there from the beginning with that crack humor which I love and the gap where Erik just left and suddenly theyre best friends was just so smooth and fast yet new and I loved it and Im sorry this is probably going to give you a headache, I usually proof and refine my reviews but there is just so many notes running through my mind and praises and adorations I need to voice that I can't risk losing them all and oh, the best is how many times Charles has said 'I love you', and I just, I just ASKUNKCJOSU9UJ FEELS 3
Please more?

Oh my... This was a fantastic story.
I haven't laughed so much because of a fanfiction for a long, long time?

I love your characterization of Erik and Charles. For me, they come across like what they could have been in another world; another time. All sarcastic and crazy and silly...
And the way these two are committed to each other. It's the same feeling that comes across in the movies..

You covered an immense amount of ground in only 4 chapters...that's quite a feat considering that you were able to paint a complete picture with some really funny highlights. I was cracking up so many times throughout...this was the perfect pick-me-up.

donna chapter 4 . 5/23/2012

THISLOVE!

Have you considered doing it from Eric's POV?

UnknownFiles chapter 4 . 5/21/2012

Oh my gosh! That was just too awesome for words. And the ending... I fan-girled all over the place! Lol x)