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"I’m sorry Lauren; I just can’t go out with a girl with a penis”
She slams the phone down and her eyes start to water, she soon bursts in to tears. Her tear drenched pillow is equal to her red puffy eyes. The phones rings, it’s her friend Julia
“Hello?” Julia has also been crying, Julia’s distinctive deep voice is interrupted by sniffles “Lauren, I need to stay with you-my parents caught me in bed with my dog”
“Oh, come over just now, we can talk about it”
Twenty minutes past and Lauren has been crying, the door bell ring,
“Lauren! Your friend Julia is here “shouts Laurens lesbian foster mum,
“Come up, Julia “
Julia comes up, Jillian; her ex’s best friend is lying dead in the corner
“OMG, Lauren what the hell did you do to her “
“I know, I accidentally smothered her” Lauren explains “I didn’t mean to”
“Oh well” they dump Jillian’s body into the closet
“Hey Julia I didn’t know you were bringing your dog! You know I too have a dog fetish”
“Well what was I supposed to do?” “I love him”
Julia notices Laurens cock slowly hardening through her jeans
“Wow, Lauren I didn’t know your fetish was as bad as that?!?”
“Ye , I don’t know what's wrong with me , maybe its because I'm so ridiculously ugly , I look for animals as a source of pleasure because at least they don’t judge me for having huge cellulite thighs and butt and a cock that makes other men puke at the thought of me”
“Don’t worry Lauren I still find you attractive” Julia strokes Laurens manhood through her jeans”
“Do you want to do something with yours dog Julia?”
“Ye okay” says Lauren
They whistle her dog Hamish over, and Hamish bounds over. Lauren takes of her jeans off to reveal her 12 inches of cock; she bends over and shoves her cock into Hamish and the yelp from Hamish shows he loves cock in his ass. Julia is rubbing her 3 inch clit on her bed groaning deeply. Julia decides to join the action she bounds over and starts making out with Hamish the dog. Suddenly Laurens mum comes in to see her daughter her friend and her dog Hamish going at it like horny rabbits. Instead of being disgusted, she strips off to reveal her 7 inch cock and puts her cock into Julia’s ass and she groans deeply.
“I'm going to cum shouts Lauren ass she takes her cock out of Hamish’s ass and spreads her load over her mum Julia and the dog. Hamish laps up the cum as he loves the taste of cock and cum .They start kissing gently until the morning . "I’m sorry Lauren; I just can’t go out with a girl with a penis”
She slams the phone down and her eyes start to water, she soon bursts in to tears. Her tear drenched pillow is equal to her red puffy eyes. The phones rings, it’s her friend Julia
“Hello?” Julia has also been crying, Julia’s distinctive deep voice is interrupted by sniffles “Lauren, I need to stay with you-my parents caught me in bed with my dog”
“Oh, come over just now, we can talk about it”
Twenty minutes past and Lauren has been crying, the door bell ring, "I’m sorry Lauren; I just can’t go out with a girl with a penis”
She slams the phone down and her eyes start to water, she soon bursts in to tears. Her tear drenched pillow is equal to her red puffy eyes. The phones rings, it’s her friend Julia
“Hello?” Julia has also been crying, Julia’s distinctive deep voice is interrupted by sniffles “Lauren, I need to stay with you-my parents caught me in bed with my dog”
“Oh, come over just now, we can talk about it”
Twenty minutes past and Lauren has been crying, the door bell ring,
“Lauren! Your friend Julia is here “shouts Laurens lesbian foster mum,
“Come up, Julia “
Julia comes up, Jillian; her ex’s best friend is lying dead in the corner
“OMG, Lauren what the hell did you do to her “
“I know, I accidentally smothered her” Lauren explains “I didn’t mean to”
“Oh well” they dump Jillian’s body into the closet
“Hey Julia I didn’t know you were bringing your dog! You know I too have a dog fetish”
“Well what was I supposed to do?” “I love him”
Julia notices Laurens cock slowly hardening through her jeans
“Wow, Lauren I didn’t know your fetish was as bad as that?!?”
“Ye , I don’t know what's wrong with me , maybe its because I'm so ridiculously ugly , I look for animals as a source of pleasure because at least they don’t judge me for having huge cellulite thighs and butt and a cock that makes other men puke at the thought of me”
“Don’t worry Lauren I still find you attractive” Julia strokes Laurens manhood through her jeans”
“Do you want to do something with yours dog Julia?”
“Ye okay” says Lauren
They whistle her dog Hamish over, and Hamish bounds over. Lauren takes of her jeans off to reveal her 12 inches of cock; she bends over and shoves her cock into Hamish and the yelp from Hamish shows he loves cock in his ass. Julia is rubbing her 3 inch clit on her bed groaning deeply. Julia decides to join the action she bounds over and starts making out with Hamish the dog. Suddenly Laurens mum comes in to see her daughter her friend and her dog Hamish going at it like horny rabbits. Instead of being disgusted, she strips off to reveal her 7 inch cock and puts her cock into Julia’s ass and she groans deeply.
“I'm going to cum shouts Lauren ass she takes her cock out of Hamish’s ass and spreads her load over her mum Julia and the dog. Hamish laps up the cum as he loves the taste of cock and cum .They start kissing gently until the morning .

“Lauren! Your friend Julia is here “shouts Laurens lesbian foster mum,
“Come up, Julia “
Julia comes up, Jillian; her ex’s best friend is lying dead in the corner
“OMG, Lauren what the hell did you do to her “
“I know, I accidentally smothered her” Lauren explains “I didn’t mean to”
“Oh well” they dump Jillian’s body into the closet
“Hey Julia I didn’t know you were bringing your dog! You know I too have a dog fetish”
“Well what was I supposed to do?” “I love him”
Julia notices Laurens cock slowly hardening through her jeans
“Wow, Lauren I didn’t know your fetish was as bad as that?!?”
“Ye , I don’t know what's wrong with me , maybe its because I'm so ridiculously ugly , I look for animals as a source of pleasure because at least they don’t judge me for having huge cellulite thighs and butt and a cock that makes other men puke at the thought of me”
“Don’t worry Lauren I still find you attractive” Julia strokes Laurens manhood through her jeans”
“Do you want to do something with yours dog Julia?”
“Ye okay” says Lauren
They whistle her dog Hamish over, and Hamish bounds over. Lauren takes of her jeans off to reveal her 12 inches of cock; she bends over and shoves her cock into Hamish and the yelp from Hamish shows he loves cock in his ass. Julia is rubbing her 3 inch clit on her bed groaning deeply. Julia decides to join the action she bounds over and starts making out with Hamish the dog. Suddenly Laurens mum comes in to see her daughter her friend and her dog Hamish going at it like horny rabbits. Instead of being disgusted, she strips off to reveal her 7 inch cock and puts her cock into Julia’s ass and she groans deeply.
“I'm going to cum shouts Lauren ass she takes her cock out of Hamish’s ass and spreads her load over her mum Julia and the dog. Hamish laps up the cum as he loves the taste of cock and cum .They start kissing gently until the morning .

I must agree with the other comments on here, you need to brake down the story into sections,
then work over each one until it makes sense, then follow the flow of the story from one section into the next , and never post until you you reread it