one_music_man Profile Review

What do you think of my profile? should there be changes?

What if anything would you like to know about me?Do I sound intriguing or interesting?Do I sound arrogant?What if anything would you change about me or my interests?Are my pictures ok or need improvement?What about me is appealing to you or not appealing?Do you wish me and my kind were not on this dating site?

Please feel free to answer some or all of the above questions in detail if you like, and thanks for your help!Rog

My first though reading through boxed text, was you probably have children older than 18, and that is how most females would I believe view the ages you give.Next, dare I say you are trying to sell yourself too hard, and it becomes almost a ramble, that shouldn't be necessary. That can be covered when you have become a favourite.28 hits and one favourite, is good.The brief mention of what you look for in a lady, is different to the text boxes. Your written text, mentions blonde slim to medium.....not a total variety.Photo's, are great for secondary, but a facial cropped with a smile, for primary always works best. Impact ...'online now.'Niah

niah9: My first though reading through boxed text, was you probably have children older than 18, and that is how most females would I believe view the ages you give.Next, dare I say you are trying to sell yourself too hard, and it becomes almost a ramble, that shouldn't be necessary. That can be covered when you have become a favourite.28 hits and one favourite, is good.The brief mention of what you look for in a lady, is different to the text boxes. Your written text, mentions blonde slim to medium.....not a total variety.Photo's, are great for secondary, but a facial cropped with a smile, for primary always works best. Impact ...'online now.'Niah

What can I say? Other than the fact that you are rite? Thank you for pointing those things out. I will correct them immediately.

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