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Your kick kinda clips so you might wanna throw a limiter on the track to fix that. The melody is great but its like you're trying to capture a bunch of styles with this one, which isn't a bad thing. You might wanna turn the crashes down or just use them sparingly. The flipping of the sample is pretty dope actually. The track just sounds a bit busy percussion wise which makes it a little hard to follow but some eqing and some tweaks can turn this into a killer track.

The flip is good, and I like that you added live instruments in there, but that crash does get kind of annoying...maybe you want to drop it out after 4 bars or lower it. And the 2nd snare that sounds like a "splat", I think you could've used a different type of snare. Other than that, keep going fam!

real smooth and laidback man. i see what you are trying to go for with your drums. it would def work in a rock setting but dont think it will with it being a hip hop beat. the sample is hella smooth tho. lovin your instrumentals as usual. i like the drop when the piano comes in with the synths. that part was dope man. keep it up man creative stuff as usual

- Nice intro
- Sample chop is nice
- I agree the crashes should be toned down a bit
- I feel if you speed up the tempo a little bit on the track, the beat could have a little more boucne and it would be something i could hear Kanye on
- Overall i think the mix could be better
- I feel the kick could go harder
- The change up in the chops is cool -- adds variety to the track

I feel the sample chop has alot of potential but i feel the drums coudlve been executed better!

Thanks for the detailed feedback, BL3.

- I've removed the verse crashes as they did clash too much with the vibe of the song
- I had a limiter to smooth out some of the rough edges and clipping, plus changed up the airy kick that was causing some issues and goes harder

If you have a chance, please check out the updated version I've uploaded.