MY COMMENTS

I haven't ever done too much in the way of pure action scenes in any of my previous work. So, we're exploring new territory here, and there are bound to be some bumps in the road. I hope you guys are patient, and you enjoy watching the (hopeful) improvement of the work as we start to encounter more and more action scenes.

Page sixteen of chapter four. Pages appear once a week on Fridays. However, become a Patron at https://www.patreon.com/prengaman and get the pages a month early (and in high definition - 2100x3150).

Just read thru what you've posted so far...

... at one swell foop, at 2AM, which says something about how well it's going​. I'm already following a few too many feeds, but I may have take time for this. By the way, she may not be happy if someone points out that "zorra", like "vixen" but more so, has a rather rude slang meaning.