Thank you for rewrrting this chapter, you did right, when i first read this, I thought it was a little to fast, but now that she didnt say I love you when she was talking to Natsume in the dreams and did not try to kiss him to wake him up, it is defidently going at a better pace. Nice plot.;D Update, please.

Very sweet (: I think it happened a little bit too fast, but with more between the hate and love, it would be amazing. Kind of like the actual manga, you know? Even though the manga also goes pretty fast... Well, it was really sweet. Like I said, maybe make it a little bit longer and add more chapters and more teasing/anger/hate before the whole love/like scenes. Otherwise, I enjoyed it.