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Mindmen and Mindtown

It was nights ago, I was watching some TV after looking at creepypastas at day, I was getting sleepy, When i was in my dream, An Tape said, Evolution of Mindtown Bloody Version, I put it in my Mind and play it, It weird my mind was a house like in Real life, Mindtown was black and white with some erie Piano music that was made by some shitty pianist, then 2 minutes, The static noises was making my ears bleed due to how loud it is and ended by an black screen, Like Suidicemouse.avi, So it was flashing with static and the Town went fro normal to Death, Every toon killed theirself and the bodies was noosed around mindtown, The town with all the creative Toons was now cursed by there Souls AKA Mindmen, They emerge from their mouth and there were tall and have bloody mouth and eyes, They have Tentacles like the slenderman with spikes on it and with an hand the was lost it skin with a Black claw with blood and ink on it, like the Rake, They came closer and closer and came out the TV In my mind, My creation: Daffytitanic, He is soul is now an Mindman, He bring his Tentacles out and show his eyes and they went back to the TV, Before i wake up, He suck me into the TV and hijacked my mind to believe them and I wake up, at night and watch Adult shows to make it disappear, I never sleep again, My mindman will be following me at day as an Shadow, I will never know what made them want to kill people if they believe in the story. I will never know…

For some reason every time I say the title it makes me think of Charlie Chaplin’s speech in the Great Dictator.

“Mind men with mind towns and mind minds! You are not minds! You are not towns! You are men!”

I have no idea why.

Okay, firstly I’d like to point out that there are literally two sentences in this whole thing. Like, how many commas were used in this?

“When i was in my dream, An Tape said, Evolution of Mindtown Bloody Version, I put it in my Mind and play it”

Wait, what? So, in a dream, you find “an” tape and put it in your mind? Huh?

” It weird my mind was a house like in Real life,”

So you’re in a dream, dreaming that you’re in your mind, dreaming that you’re watching a tape that you inserted into your mind, meaning we’ve got four fucking framing devices here (the dream, the mind, the mind AGAIN and the tape). Why is this so convoluted? Any reason you didn’t just dream it?

“Mindtown was black and white with some erie Piano music that was made by some shitty pianist”

I love how you decide to inform us that the random pianist is shitty, especially since this is all a tape inside your mind inside your mind inside your dream.

“The static noises was making my ears bleed due to how loud it is and ended by an black screen, Like Suidicemouse.avi”

Yep, cutting to black is now exclusive to Suicidemouse.avi.

“So it was flashing with static and the Town went fro normal to Death, Every toon killed theirself and the bodies was noosed around mindtown”

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