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There is no one to find you. It is you who must find yourself. And when you do, you might discover there is no one there. Then, you will either despair or you will survive to MAKE yourself. One must not find themself, one must create themself. There is no devil to oppress you, there is only you. You are the devil and you are the angel. These forces of good and evil compose your being. To wrestle with the devil is to refrain your own hand. Understand and embrace yourself for everything that you are; good and evil, right and wrong. Embrace who you are. This is hope. This is faith. To hope in yourself. To have faith and believe in yourself both as you are and as you can become. Why do you cry aloud for someone else who cannot help you? YOU can help you. You define you, you are you, you control you. Don't wait to be found. Build something for us to discover.

2 Years Ago

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The mind is the adversary of the heart. This makes me just want to reach out and hold the pain and longing still and away, so that peace and serenity can embrace this beautiful soul. Beautifully painfully and conflicted poetry. Wonderful job!

Posted 2 Years Ago

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2 Years Ago

Thank you Jen... that would be nice :) I appreciate your kind words and review... thank you!

it is so beautiful poem. You have explained in detail what demon do to us. he hurts us. Thank you for writing such a realistic peace which says that now we are not we are. today we are surrendered by demons.
Find me... I'm lost and alone.
it is the best line.

Posted 2 Years Ago

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2 Years Ago

Thank you irenic... yeah that line "find me.. I'm lost and alone" is a deep one... just asking for .. read moreThank you irenic... yeah that line "find me.. I'm lost and alone" is a deep one... just asking for anyone to find me and make me happy. Kind of a desperate plea to not be lost and alone. Appreciate your review :)

Posted 2 Years Ago

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2 Years Ago

The cry for help pervades every line. The helpless feeling is transferred to the reader making a part of them remember or relate to all you say. Powerful stuff.

Posted 2 Years Ago

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2 Years Ago

Thank you Relic... was hoping the reader would feel that coming through the words. Appreciate the r.. read moreThank you Relic... was hoping the reader would feel that coming through the words. Appreciate the review buddy :)

Wow. This is beautiful. There is SO much emotion in this and I can really relate to this. The imagery you used really helps convey the sense of angst and the struggle. Amazing job Aaron. Amazing

Posted 2 Years Ago

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2 Years Ago

Thank you Shadow Poet :) This one was a tough one... these feelings came straight from the heart. .. read moreThank you Shadow Poet :) This one was a tough one... these feelings came straight from the heart. Appreciate your kind words, your compliment and you taking the time to read and review :) Send me any read requests any time :)

Powerful piece, with so much depth. We've all been down this dark road. " I want to be loved, yet…
Want to be alone." Very relatable write for everyone.

Posted 2 Years Ago

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2 Years Ago

Those 2 lines seem to be the 2 that have stood out the most. It's definitely a major contradiction .. read moreThose 2 lines seem to be the 2 that have stood out the most. It's definitely a major contradiction and what sucks is that is one I am going through. Appreciate your review my friend :)

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WoW!!!
powerful and dark.......
cries of help........praying to be found.....
this fight is the worst......fighting with the self.....
unfortunately, i could relate to most of it.......
beautiful writing.....
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago

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2 Years Ago

I am glad you could relate... you know what its like fighting through those dark times. It happens... read moreI am glad you could relate... you know what its like fighting through those dark times. It happens... can't change it but mine as well write about it, share it and hope others connect to it :) I appreciate your review and support buddy :)

2 Years Ago

Sometimes we need that time alone to straighten ourselves out. Accept the demons with the light as the demons are still a part of us. I know that it took me years of hiding alone by myself to figure out who I was and how to be happy with myself. I didn't even believe in God until I met my boyfriend. I was Wiccan in high school but even that didn't seem right. I'm sorry you've been feeling like this though. I'm always here for you if you need someone to talk to. As long as you don't push me away. You do that, it'll be hard for me to help you lol. Thanks for sharing my friend :)

Posted 2 Years Ago

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2 Years Ago

The more we push, the more we will feel the resistance. You did a great job describing it my friend. :D

Posted 2 Years Ago

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2 Years Ago

Thank you moonskittles.... my page always looks prettier once your smile is on it :) lol thanks for.. read moreThank you moonskittles.... my page always looks prettier once your smile is on it :) lol thanks for the review...I''ll be a few hours away from you in July... headed to LA house of blues for a concert.... sooooooo excited!

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I love to write, most my work tends to be on the darker side. I write from my heart and tend not to mess with it too much. I guess sometimes I write and post without focusing on what everyone else w.. more..