very nice, i loved seeing this newfound depth that you have added to draco's character. the christmas carol theme is cool too, put's you in the holiday mood. you really seemed to capture the essence of who draco his, the way he thinks, the things he does...good job! :D

Author's Response: Thank you. I've only just become interested in Draco and the possibilities of his redemption. I don't think he became a saint, but there was some good in him. Glad you're enjoying the story. ~Carole~

I love stories where Draco redeems himself, and Charity was a great example to teach him a lesson- update soon!

Author's Response: Chapter 2 is written and with my beta. The story will be completed by December 15th because it's for a challenge. Hmm, if you like Draco redemption stories you may like Shrouds ... Thank you for the review ~Carole~

Author's Response: The theme is down to the Christmas Challenge on the beta-boards. I probably wouldn't have thought of it withoiut that (although Draco and Charity are my own idea). Glad you're enjoying it. ~Carole~

Lovely start! Charity Burbage is such an original choice - and the perfect ghost to come back to Draco, given what happened to her at Malfoy Manor. You're so good. Nice job setting up Draco's post-battle angst. Looking forward to the scenes you choose for him to visit! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: I hope you like his Christmas past. Present will be coming up soon .... ish. Thanks for the review, Gina.