Why don't you try writing a chapter with John, Bobby, and Dean coming to Hogwarts and meeting Snape or of Jamie, Dean, and Sam playing pranks (any type will do) on Dumbledore and McGonagall. I know that Dean can't stay at Hogwarts but he could help plan the pranks out. Or you could do a chapter featuring just Jamie, Dean, and Sam. You don't have to do any of these ideas. This is your story after all. Good luck and may your pen stay sharp.

I loved the beginning you know with Jamie being part of the family and taking on the role that Dean did at his age, adored the chapters like that. Shamefully I skipped the majority of the chapters with Harry/Jamie being at Hogwarts until Harry went back with John and the rest. I don't hate but I also don't like stories that have Harry in a muggle that ferries from the canon setting and then he goes off to hogwarts and then comes back, it's all such a drag. I would really like to see one where he stays in the muggle world maybe just once?

Any-ways I'm still interested in your fiction regardless of it being in the don't-like-don't-hate category with the whole hogwarts and stuff like that. Other wise I love it!. I love the concept of big brother Harry; it's cute. Hope to see more chapters soon.

i'm honestly confused, harry is already 11 and i don't believe him to be a squib in this story so why hasn't the Americans contacted him to learn magic? They have their own laws and schools there, oh well, maybe i'm just a bit too impatient, now time to read more and hopefully have some confusing questions answered :)