Very interesting concept. Will be interesting to see what you have planned for this.
Also it would be cool if you had a CORE Database accompaniment that lists the powers and Taken/real names of the various Cromozonians in the story.

This is so awesome! Do you have a Deviantart account by any chance? We ask because we imagine this as a graphic novel and would love to see these characters in action! Great chapter, cant wait to read the next.

This story seems very interesting to us. We enjoy stories about super humans. We have a story about super humans as well, fell free to take a look at it. We hope you update again soon because we would love to trade reviews with you.