I liked the way you dropped the clue about Jeffrey being Omega when he looked directly into Caycee’s eyes in the bar after you just mentioned that Omega and she were the same height. Suspecting Jeffrey might be Omega at this point didn’t give anything away but it revealed how bold and diabolical this killer was. It was not surprising later, then, that he penetrated the interrogation facility with his knowledge of FBI methods and his capability of disguise.

While I am a novice at this writing thing, I did want to offer to exchange scripts for mutual review if you think my input would be of any value to you.