This was a phenomenal little vignette, and a truly unique take on the birth of Crystal Tokyo. I think you conveyed the emotions one might feel in such upheaval with depth, deftness, and accuracy. Great Job!

Review by Anonymous

2013-01-14

That hits the target dead center! Great awsner!

Review by Jaded Catalyst

2007-01-28

This is one of my favorites. You always wonder if a paradise is really all its worked up to be. Personally, I don't think it is. This story is a perfect portrayl of that. A paradise can never truly exist because there will always be at least one person that is unhappy. That's just the way it is.

I can't begin to describe how this story makes me feel. It's almost like a reflection to what I tell my friends whenever they come to me for help. "If everything went the way you think it... (more)

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