That was an enjoyable comic. It was definitely inspired by manga, the entire feel of the comic was just too much that kind of over the top.

I enjoyed the art style. It was very clear what things where there. Despite being mostly black and white things seemed to have a lot of life, more life then I often see in colored comics. One thing I enjoyed, oddly enough, is that whenever you put things in the background, it tended to be there for a reason, and not be too detailed. While I do enjoy highly detailed backgrounds, the amount of work the author normally has to put into compared to my enjoyment is just not that high, i prefer continuation in the story. You did such a fine job doing it I can't pinpoint a specific spot it felt off, I would probably have to go back through page by page and it could just be nit picking at that point. Thanks for taking time to make this, and sharing it with us.

I adore this comic. You really captured the shonen feel with the art and the concepts (the giant mecha built to stop her reaching the harbour was great). I'd love to see a print version one day, I would buy the hell out of it!

Over the tippy-top of the top of the other top. Quite a fun read. Art style was unique. I seem to like writing in sentence fragments today; oh well. Just wanted to say that this was a great use of an hour. Many thanks for the read!

Since it's done, you should mark it as Complete in the comic's profile, so people looking for finished comics can find this one more easily. "Last updated: 8 months ago" makes it look like it's not done, but abandoned instead.