tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post3005278689580935861..comments2017-01-15T06:25:28.819-05:00Comments on Magician's Integration: HiatusXenophon Hendrixhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13993059147024069203noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-51829476401497707182017-01-15T06:25:28.819-05:002017-01-15T06:25:28.819-05:00Just want to let you know you still have fans out ...Just want to let you know you still have fans out there! I hope you finish the story some day soon. (If you do, I will buy you a pizza.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-6158943770848963042015-12-29T19:17:22.172-05:002015-12-29T19:17:22.172-05:00Checking in after... 6 years. Sad to see it was ne...Checking in after... 6 years. Sad to see it was never finished. Hope you&#39;re doing well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-43214177542856986012014-04-15T12:37:17.705-04:002014-04-15T12:37:17.705-04:00Checking in, roughly once a year, this will be yea...Checking in, roughly once a year, this will be year three. This story is great and could go interesting places, it&#39;s sad to see that it hasn&#39;t yet.Steve Hoffmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16751591563377507175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-69794566379403663902013-10-04T01:03:24.921-04:002013-10-04T01:03:24.921-04:00Hi,Developing website structure is one of the firs...Hi,Developing website structure is one of the first tasks in a new website planning process. Careful organizing website content in <a href="http://www.theosoftindia.com/" rel="nofollow">Web Design Cochin</a> and creating the website structure sets the foundation for a new website and its future success.Thanks..........aparna johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09701377984223022528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-4641215017627234912013-09-02T19:37:41.125-04:002013-09-02T19:37:41.125-04:00checking in again to see if it&#39;s still going.checking in again to see if it&#39;s still going.xaiverphoenixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01068229622924875374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-80803115939780810172012-03-25T20:59:19.038-04:002012-03-25T20:59:19.038-04:00I too am just checking in. Please, if you&#39;ll n...I too am just checking in. Please, if you&#39;ll not continue this story, let us know it&#39;s dead.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-68658641944227676642012-01-20T18:22:58.371-05:002012-01-20T18:22:58.371-05:00Just checking in again.Just checking in again.The Hoffmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-28421173416785912742011-09-27T20:54:08.445-04:002011-09-27T20:54:08.445-04:00I&#39;d love to see the story continue, and hope i...I&#39;d love to see the story continue, and hope it will someday, but that&#39;s entirely up to you - you&#39;re doing us a favor by posting it.<br /><br />Thanks for what you&#39;ve posted so far, and best wishes on whatever you&#39;re currently busy with.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14922782424313956036noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-54228040059421624192011-06-11T16:15:17.098-04:002011-06-11T16:15:17.098-04:00I still have this page bookmarked, I still check i...I still have this page bookmarked, I still check in from time to time.<br /><br />I&#39;d love to see this story continued.The Hoffmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-56655955998065573572011-05-30T00:35:51.288-04:002011-05-30T00:35:51.288-04:00come back soon, this is a great story!come back soon, this is a great story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-42145426522819877212009-07-24T09:15:44.477-04:002009-07-24T09:15:44.477-04:00I have been reading both MM and MI the last few da...I have been reading both MM and MI the last few days.<br /><br />I loved MM. Utterly. Well written, interesting people, interesting world, exciting story. All the parts of a good novel.<br /><br />MI has all that, except for the story. It is too much of an epilogue for MM. It is still a very enjoyable read, but not quite as good as the original. (The doom of all sequels)<br /><br />I suspect this is the reason for the hiatus?<br /><br />The interaction with Alanna shows promise, it feels like the beginning of a new great story. However, getting there took too long.<br /><br />I am not a writer, but I will nevertheless offer some unsolicited advice. In my defence, I am a very experienced READER.<br /><br />It may sound brutal, but I think you should ditch this half-novel. It does not work.<br /><br />However, you don&#39;t need to start from scratch! You have a well crafted world, a good set of characters and even some prose that can be reused. Feel free to copy-paste parts of this work into the new one where they fit.<br /><br />Just, this time, have some idea of which story you are going to tell before starting.<br /><br />I hope this advice is more encouraging than the opposite.<br /><br />Your fan.Stig Hemmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10498846510946260600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-84288550935910738132009-05-02T23:36:00.000-04:002009-05-02T23:36:00.000-04:00well, you went on hiatus at almost the same tyme t...well, you went on hiatus at almost the same tyme the sahunter took paused on her new story... (scary mary 2) <br /><br />she's back now, so you can start up again as well :P<br /><br />-Father "The wishful thinker" TymeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-30285810948904935672009-04-30T06:01:00.000-04:002009-04-30T06:01:00.000-04:00I second (3rd? 4th?) that. I was heartbroken when ...I second (3rd? 4th?) that. I was heartbroken when Merger halted after the killing, and temporarily very happy when the story reincarnated as Integration.<br /><br />For what it's worth, I had the impression the story was really picking up steam again and progressing realistically and logically; both the style and the plot were getting better, IMO. This makes me even more eager to read more.<br /><br />Whatever the holdup, I join in the best wishes for its reason to go away.Carlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12472048557599823717noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-84450119217694164842009-04-09T13:19:00.000-04:002009-04-09T13:19:00.000-04:00I, too, want to add my well wishes. I hope whateve...I, too, want to add my well wishes. I hope whatever is stopping you from writing is nothing bad, and that you can continue soon; I greatly look forward to the continuation of the story. Thank you for publishing what you have - it has already brought me great pleasure to read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-44343316493680629802009-04-06T21:38:00.000-04:002009-04-06T21:38:00.000-04:00I am sorry that you won't be writing for awhile. I...I am sorry that you won't be writing for awhile. I really love the story.<BR/>I hope everything is ok for you and yours.sirstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14723212322001333721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1839572857333032782.post-3020715558896288712009-04-04T12:33:00.000-04:002009-04-04T12:33:00.000-04:00I hope your OK. I enjoyed your writing quite a bit...I hope your OK. I enjoyed your writing quite a bit, and I am sad to see this happen. I was hoping this was an April Fools, but it is posted on the wrong day :(Rodger Bettishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08517722224654200024noreply@blogger.com