Unwavering Schedual

Below is the poem entitled Unwavering Schedual which was written by poet
Kyle
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Unwavering Schedual

She carries temptation in her pocket
With a secret smile, and a subtle beckon
I’ll be damned if I don’t follow
She drags my world behind her as she walks
The centerpiece of every portrait
She shrugs her shoulders as if she doesn’t know
She wears my agenda like a tea shirt
She casually says that I COULD spend the night
As if I may or may not say yes
One breathe of air is all I get
Before I’m drowning in her bed
I couldn’t leave to save my life
Even if i wanted to
By Kyle Ezra Kriticos

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HEY KYLE..IF U GO TO HOME PAGE UP AT TOP OF MEMBER PAGE..CLICK ON 'HOME'..ALL FEATURED POEMS OF POETS THIS WEEK ARE FEATURED ON FIVE PAGES.. U CAN SEARCH THE PAGES FOR YOURS LUV... THIS MEAN ADMINISTRATION OF PS HAS CHOSEN YOUR POEM FROM MANY POETS ON SITE TO FEATURE FOR IT'S QUALITY LUV..CONGRATS AGAIN..

fantastic write Kyle.. brilliant way of constructing this piece ..allure and intrigue in every line luv.. your comment on my collab with Michael made me smile ..as I have done a three way collaboration with two fellow poets a year ago..it is called "Three Way Collabortion"...always open to new material luv.. send me some lines via soup mail .. we are on vacation in Florida for two weeks but no matter.. my cell has internet properties luv..

Awesome write dear poet ! And by the by.....you could put $#%@^&&&&^^^%$#$% and the temptations albums logo on your write....it will still be stolen ! And guess what?! Mostly by the same souls who steal the most stolen book in the world.....the Bible...believe it or not ! Your writes are safe with me though...*smiles* I like mine. Have a wonderful weekend dear poet ! Much love, james

Ah, she must be quite the seductress, Kyle. I could feel the passion mounting throughout the poem. Really like the way you describe how "she wears my agenda like a T-shirt." Obviously she knows how to have her way with you. Of course, this is all to your delight. Thanks for the comment on the Toad poem. I swear it's true. Animal activisits were contacting me left and right to "save the toad." Best wishes, Carolyn