Whew! That was hot! I might sound strange saying this (I feel strange saying this because I consider myself to be a feminist), but I love when you described Edward's fantasy of Bella being pregnant with their son. My heart just melted. Much fun with the karate scenes - you're very good at writing (and may I say) perverting them! Can't wait to see more! P.S. - I'm sure everyone has told you this, but his calling her "love".... *sigh*

Wow. Imean, literally,WOW. I just discovered this story and I spent the last few hours glued to my computer screen, reading this story. I am hopelessly addicted. Also, I am in need of a cold, cold shower. This story is so hot. The chemistry, the heat. I love the storyline. I can't wait to read more!!!!

I have to admit, you have me on pins and needles with this story. I started reading this on my cell phone at work and now I am at home chuckling and laughing at the antics of human Bella and Edward. I was wary of reading Human fics of these character but hell, you put my fears to rest! Good Job!

Damn that was good. I hope Bella comes clean to Edward though. I think he deserves to know. He is growning up and falling for Bella, her too, so the truth shall set them free. Not without some fall out first, probably.

Really wonderful chapter. I love how Bella can see Edward lie to himself. And how sweet was Jasper giving Bella her first kiss. LOVE that.

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