I enjoyed reading this very much. I find the dark twist on the classic Disney movie to be intriguing and believable. "One day, really soon, we'll find a human who can swim." That line shows that Ariel is still quite innocent despite her darker tendencies.

Great work!

JosephBroseph chapter 1 . 11/9/2012

I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO FEEL?! In one way I feel sorry for Ariel she wants to meet a human and learn more about them and stuff but every time she gets close to them they die because of her song. For a moment I thought she was doing it on purpose or she didn't care that they died but shes doesn't or does she?, then again she will just keep killing people and continue to add to her collection and that's just sick. I'm torn dang it. Love this tragic and darker version of Ariel and I would love to see more come about from this story maybe more stories about her collecting more things or past events or something...please and thank you.