Very good story. The shift from POV to POV worked well and suspense in it was nice too. I'm not sure how I feel about the short sub-plot of Hilary/Scott. Parlty, I suspect it's because I am very canon when it comes to shipping, but also because it seems like it is part of something that had been introduced in a previous story, but checking I couldn't find a previous one. For emotional impact it needed further explination. As it was, it sort of assumed we already knew something we did.

Still, I loved all the who-will-be-a-spy and everyone sounded so natural and IC. Yay for Remember WENN fic!

Suzanne chapter 1 . 4/19/2004

Very interesting story. The only detail you got wrong however was that Betty is the only person who besides Jeff who knows about Victor's time in Berlin. This is a secret between the three of them. Can't wait to read more.