Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.
What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

There is an opinion that toddlers ought to spend their time mostly in games and not go to school. I am inclined to suppose that attending special preparatory classes plays a significant role in children's growing up.

To begin with, it is undoubtful fact that all of children need to learn communication skills. We live in society and have to interact with many people - our families, friends, acquaintances, neighbours and many more. So, it is extremely important to make these contacts easy because it is the grounds of our behaviour. At the same time, organised groups of youngsters, like at primary school, give a great possibility to socialise not even paying special attention to this process.

Moreover, there are plenty of excellent games and studies at school that are hard to be organised at home. As a mother, I know how much imagination and creativity it takes just to invent some interesting activities for your baby. At schools it is the work of teachers who know a lot of educational games. Not only they show pupils how to play, but they also teach them basics of mathematics, literacy and so on. Anything becomes better if it is done by a professional and upbringing is not an exception.

The last but not the least my argument is health. It is widely known that children are vulnerable to many particular infections that are much easier to bear at early age. Many of them are almost impossible to avoid and it is very reasonable decision to get such illnesses at that time when it is not not so crucial for child to miss a couple of weeks at school being sick.

In conclusion I would say that it is not a surprise for me that classes for toddlers are so common. I do believe that it is the best choice for children in most of cases and I would prefer it for my baby in a couple of years.

From my experience I can say it is appropriate to use 'toddlers' and 'kids' and 'children' and 'offspring(s)'. Examinators also (aside from grammar and spelling etc.) look at you ability to use different synonyms, vary them in your essays.
By the way, my dictionary says 'infant' is a child of 4-7 yo. G'luck!

From my experience I can say it is appropriate to use 'toddlers' and 'kids' and 'children' and 'offspring(s)'. Examinators also (aside from grammar and spelling etc.) look at you ability to use different synonyms, vary them in your essays.
By the way, my dictionary says 'infant' is a child of 4-7 yo. G'luck!

No, toddlers won't fit here аs it's too restrictive. Kids - too conversational and shouldn't be used in a more formal essay writing. Infants could be an option but may also be rather confusing as this word means different things in different situations. Offsprings is mostly used sarcastically.
So... wait till I finish reading your essay and then I'll tell you what can be 'done' with children

I hope you don't mind me answering in English. I type much faster in English and I'm so tired after work that well... I don't feel like making any additional efforts. Please ask me if there's something you don't understand.

Anyway, general comments first.
You will find it difficult to get 7. I think your English is at 6 - 6.5 level (but I'd be more inclined to say 6). I'm sorry but you simply do not have enough English skills at this stage. So first of all you need to work on different sentence structures (how to combine sentences) and learn to choose the right words.

Your introduction is weak as you have only addressed half of the topic and haven't mentioned the other half.

There are some problems with articles.

There is absolutely no modality in your essay and this is not good.

I've been a bit lazy and didn't colour code the mistakes and corrections in your essay so you will have to put yours and the corrected one side by side and compare them.

I hope you don't mind me answering in English. I type much faster in English and I'm so tired after work that well... I don't feel like making any additional efforts. Please ask me if there's something you don't understand.

Anyway, general comments first.
You will find it difficult to get 7. I think your English is at 6 - 6.5 level (but I'd be more inclined to say 6). I'm sorry but you simply do not have enough English skills at this stage. So first of all you need to work on different sentence structures (how to combine sentences) and learn to choose the right words.

Your introduction is weak as you have only addressed half of the topic and haven't mentioned the other half.

There are some problems with articles.

There is absolutely no modality in your essay and this is not good.

I've been a bit lazy and didn't colour coded the mistakes and corrections in your essay so you will have to put yours and the corrected one side by side and compare them.

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Mankind was always divided into two big parts – those who prefer living at the same place and working at the same job and those who love everything new. At all times people argued what is the best way to live their lives and now this matter remains as exciting as ages ago. I suppose that both sides have strong evidence of being right and I will try to consider these points of view.

Stability and reliability are the principal arguments of the first idea’s followers. How can we live out without any particular and known things in our lives? Society at the most consists of citizens who want to think about their plans in advance. It is hard to deny that building your own house or upbringing your children are much easier if you are confident about you job and income next year or what schools are located near your place. Many people like feeling safe and predictable.

At the same time, we would lie saying that is the only essential thing because change is the driving force of any progress. How could we have lived in contemporary environment if every person has decided to live in familiar conditions and not to change lifestyle? In my opinion, really open-minded people are the only who able to make any significant discoveries and develop brilliant new ideas, sometimes in spite of breaking some rules or even laws. So, I believe that changes by themselves are always positive and they are the absolutely necessary condition for any evolution and moving forward.

Summarise all these facts and points of view, I can conclude that we as a society would not be able to survive if only one type of thinking on this matter exists. I do think that it is the best way for most of people – to live that way they used to, but as for me personally – I would like to change my life according to my current views and not only my habits.

You've got several big tasks as far as I can see from reading just a couple of you essays

1. get a textbook, Advanced English level and work on your general English level. Make sure it's not one of the Runglish ones. I'd recommend Cutting Edge or Opportunities or similar.
2. Work on your grammar. You don't really make mistakes but you don't have enough variety of grammatical structures to get 7. So I'd say something like Grammar for IELTS
3. Vocabulary for IELTS or any other Vocabulary in Context book to practise using 'smart' words.
4. And read read read, especially magazines and websites like Scientific America, Discover channel, ABC (Au), newspapers.
5. Work on your sentence structure. The key word here is 'variety'!

The recent survey of the ancient Egypt tables has shown that people were interested in fashion over three thousand years ago. For time being, fashion affects our life beginning from clothes and household items and finishing with the choice of a profession. Especially, fashion tendencies play a tremendous role for youth. Weather this vogue’s influence has positive or adverse effect is a frequent topic of discussions.

Proponents of fashion claim that definition “to be fashionable” is not limited dress and contemporary technological devices only. Healthy life style and necessity of high education are regarded to vague also. These fashion tendencies embolden young people to keep themselves in a good physical condition, choosing right diet and doing regular exercises as well as devote their time and energy to study hard in order to be educated because it is fashionably.

Nevertheless, drawbacks of vague can not be underestimated. The social scientists prove that a question of first-rate importance for teenagers is being a part of a group. Young people often act under peer pressure, in particular, wearing determinate clothes or listening to a concrete music. In case young individual has no an opportunity for being likewise others or having the same up-to-date gadget he or she may feel insecurity and lack of self-confident. Moreover, such unsatisfactory can lead to committing a crime even.

In addition, sometimes following fashion, young people choose an occupation they have not real aptitude to. Evidences demonstrate us a great number of lawyers and accountants nowadays which undergo from absence of job. Had these young people thought carefully couple years ago they would not have been disappointed today.

To summarize all mentioned above, I personally think that reasonable following vague has a positive influence on youth. However, the blind desire to be a fashionable person may cause losing individuality.

Nowadays thanks for the development of the Internet, computers and other electronic devises more and more people prefer to read news and magazines using high technologies. I agree with the point that in future paper sources of information will be replaced with digital devises. There are several reasons why this will happen.

One of the major benefits of using computer devices that is cheap and convenient to post information and update it. For example, updating one web site with necessary information takes less money and save more time than to print a new circulation of newspapers and public it. Moreover, you should not pay money for the paper and equipment and also you do not need paying for selling. Thus, using the Technology can save the money, which is so important for the commercial.

Another advantage of using the Internet recourse while reading an article is that the one can always receive up-to-date information and give his opinion which is a great benefit for a person. It is not a secret that there are a lot of blogs are posted on livejournal.com portal and a web site has the option to write the comment on one or another article. In addition, the rate of such web sites is really high. In comparison, the popularity of this web site is grown in 3 times for the past 2 years.

All things considered can show that the WWW reduces such notions as magazines and newspapers, but new options became available such as a news web site, a magazine web size, which are in common with the old notions. Nevertheless, the technology capped the audience and gave the new ways of using information, but, i believe, it will takes years while newspapers and magazines will disappeared in these kinds we have now.

You've got several big tasks as far as I can see from reading just a couple of you essays

1. get a textbook, Advanced English level and work on your general English level. Make sure it's not one of the Runglish ones. I'd recommend Cutting Edge or Opportunities or similar.
2. Work on your grammar. You don't really make mistakes but you don't have enough variety of grammatical structures to get 7. So I'd say something like Grammar for IELTS
3. Vocabulary for IELTS or any other Vocabulary in Context book to practise using 'smart' words.
4. And read read read, especially magazines and websites like Scientific America, Discover channel, ABC (Au), newspapers.
5. Work on your sentence structure. The key word here is 'variety'!

If children behave badly ,should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

In today's chaotic life which speed continually increases people who are busy at work have less and less time for social activities. This puts pressure on family life and their children in particular. So should parents be held responsible for doings of their children in this case or not? This essay will try to find an answer to this question.

There are several reasons why parents should take responsibility for their children's behavior. First of all, there is a firm belief in almost any society that parents have to teach their youngsters norms of interaction accepted withing the society. The public expects them to do so and be accontable for their child's mistakes when they fail to live to such expectations. Secondly, punishment directed to teenagers will not yield any positive results. They have no ability to distinguish between good and bad things, which makes it impossible to get a message of wisdom across their minds. Finally, each child is different and finding a key to an individual might prove to be a real challenge. In this regard, only parents who know personality of their child can work out a sound solution.

Some say that children must face consequences of their actions themselves. To begin with, taking responsibility for offensive behavior benefits a child. The sooner a person can learn the difference between appropriate and inappropriate behavior the faster he or she will adapt to realities of everyday's life. Besides, nurturing parents who tolerate every activity of their children, good or bad one, might actually do more harm to them than good. If they raise an overconfident child fearless to outside pressures he or she might get affected by results of his or her wrong doings far more severely than that who are ready for them when exposed to adult life. Moreover, knowing what is right or wrong will help children to behave more responsibly. A child who has been punished before will likely be inclined to make a more calculated decision in order to avoid getting into the same trap again.

In conclusion, I think that children should be forced to face the justice for their offences just like any other member of our society. It will relief pressure from their parents and help children to become better citizens who tolerate people that leave around them.