That was wonderfully writen and I greatly enjoyed reading it. I like X Men and Charmed. And I feel you wrote the characters quite well, as long as you live room for artistic license by this I mean that they were not completely true to the orginial characters, which would be quite impossible unless you were the creator though this is one of the closest I've seen. You quite seamless combine the world of Charmed and X Men and in that I am truely impressed. I look forward to reading more of works.

you've done so well and it is so great that you've made Storm the main character

Storm rocks!

Ice

Storm1663 chapter 2 . 6/27/2001

Wow!

That is very different. I don't watch "charmed" so i am just a tad bit confused! But otherwise i love how Storm is becoming sluttly. Not many people show that side of her, its interesting becuase it is captivating. Just one question how come Jean and Prof. X. sense that there is another presences in Ororo's mind?