I Envy the Weekend

Below is the poem entitled I Envy the Weekend which was written by poet
HGarvey Daniel
Esquire. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

I Envy the Weekend

Friday night the weekend begins for most
Mothers, Fathers, with family members host
To be together with those they LOVE most
While a lonely man speaks with his Wife's ghost
On my computer the POETRY site
Saturday mornings some comments I write
My former students all work through the night
An old man see's his Wife's Heavenly Light
After Church, there is my A A meeting
Forlorn lonesomeness,now takes a beating
I get home; Featured POETS; I'm greeting
Images of my lovely Wife : Fleeting
Monday, a new week, new POEMS I shall start
I pick up my quill and write from my Heart
Author's note: Dear Andrea, all lines have 10 syllables(Thanks for the Spelling)
I still have to work on the format - aabb- This looks like aaaa but it's not ; a - just happens to rhyme with - b -

that's how i see life there are people that have more to look forward to, simple life is not for me, but I look forward to writing and letting out my emotions, I enjoyed your write,
I wanted to thank you for your words of comfort on my write Angel Wings I truly take comfort in my memories from all my doctor appointments thanks to you I remember the joy of hearing my sons heartbeat or watching him move on the screen, I thank you..., hugs-x, Royal

This a love poem in monorhyme time that goes directly to the heart.....
wish I was your 24/7 nurse watching the spruce pines lifting their skirts above the lake.....wishing you moonlight to write by tonight you adorable man.
Sleep well you are the light of encouragement in my eyes.
SOUP MAIL coming.
SuZ

Hi Harry, thank you for everything , stopping by to say hi, and wish you an early Happy Easter, just in case I don't have time to stop by in the next few days. take care and have yourself a good one~ Always & Forever *LINDA"

Cute note to Andrea...Great work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..I don't have time to do but so much on the internet..What I do takes up a large portion of my time..I try to return comments, congrats to those who are in a contest with me, and sometimes I just look at who is on the site and comment then sometimes I go to see who is new to the site..Some days I hardly have time to come on..Soup mail soon..Sara

This is very nice. I like the personal touch and how you discuss those things that make up your daily life, HG. You don't have to worry about pleasing me with syllable counts and rhyme scheme. There are plenty of places online that teach one how to do a classic sonnet, but if you ever have a question on anything, just soupmail me. Yes, I call this a modern sonnet!