That was a sad chapter :(. Maybe you could do an epilogue of important moments in Emily's life! When she reunites with her family, when she gets married, and when she has her first child! That would be so cool, because then you could also show how she mended her relationship with her father!

woohoo go on Emily. Get her. Really liked this chapter. Kinda hoped for a breakthrough with the Captain and Emikly while they were in the kitchen, but maybe when the witch leaves. Look forward to what happens next.

Thanks for the chapter! I liked how Emily knew about the Leandler and how she tried to stop Maria from leaving. I especially loved the part about Emily's voice and the drama to come as foreshadowed by her glaring to the Captain at the end. Great job.