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kaileena_sands says:Wow, I really enjoyed this first chapter! I remember reading your "Hope" fic (which was beautiful) and now I am absolutely sure that it wasn't a fluke that you could give such wonderful insights into a characters. It's just talent. But yes, on this point, I love Eloise. It once again amazes me how you can make me care so much about your OC in one chapter. I love it how much sadness she carries in her, yet she is still hopeful and doesn't give up. Because it's so easy to be strong when you are (or at least feel) pretty and confident, but when you're small and people step on you, it's hard.

Oh, and I just love the tooth gap flow you gave it to her! To tell you the truth, I think it looks lovely on some people (like Anna Paquin from True blood and as a matter of fact that's how I'll be imagining Eloise from now on xD ). Your descriptions are also excellent and contributed much to the overall atmosphere. I cannot wait to see how exactly the broccoli thing incorporates into the whole fic and how she got the name.

Anyway, as I told you, I love how this fic begins and I am adding it to my favs. Don't you dare abandon it now! :P

I'm glad you liked Eloise. It's easy to like her, feel pity towards her, I know, because she has such a sad disposition. :)

Hehe. I was inspired to add the tooth gap thing by one of my RL friend's looks, actually. I agree, it looks lovely on some people (my friend included)! But sadly, Eloise is not one of them. Thanks! I'm glad you found the descriptions good, because that's one thing I struggle with. The next chapter explains the broccoli thing, promise. ;)

I'm not abandoning it, swear! I'm so happy you want to read on! I hope you'll like the rest of the fic as well. :)