Nice composition... the flowers are great! Have you decided if the lamp is turned on? If so, you could darken your background significantly, leaving a glow of light from the lamp... That would help in assessing your shadows from each of the objects on your desk...

Margie L

04-25-2003, 09:07 AM

Excellent idea ,Char--Darker backgound. It would be nice to see some more darks in your blue areas. Shadows on the vase and the table under it and the paint box. Like the blue and just the touch of color in the paints and flowers.
Margie

Uschi

04-25-2003, 09:03 PM

Iris, what's next is what you want it to be :D
It has it's own charm the way it is right now.
Uschi

mpopinz

04-25-2003, 09:19 PM

Thanks Uschi, you're so sweet & have been most encouraging.

I appreciate your comments.:cool:

taghera

04-25-2003, 10:55 PM

It depends what you want from it....as Uschi says....it has its own charms as is...:)