Comments for 'The Last War, Chapter Two: Futile Pleas of Help'

Agent Shade
7:28 pm | August 13, 2003
my bad, i had to make up for the the last fiction update, thanks, anymore comments?

Alpha Lance
7:06 pm | August 13, 2003
Nice,and your grade is...10/10!

Elfster
6:14 pm | August 13, 2003
My god. That was so long that I actually almost got to bored near the end to read it. Im not saying it wasnt a good story, but it was a VERY VERY long chapter. I recommend splitting it up next time.