Dream

Published Feb 12, 2012

We all have difficulty either finding or reaching our dreams. Some already knew what they want from the start, some are struggling to find theirs, while some have forgotten theirs, and while others already have theirs right in front of their eyes. Follow the characters of my story as they find and fight for their, like so many of our dreams at first seem the impossible dream.
Welcome to the very first chapter of “Dream”
Thank you to all the wonderful creators of my CC’s :3

We all have difficulty either finding or reaching our dreams. Some already knew what they want from the start, some are struggling to find theirs, while some have forgotten theirs, and while others already have theirs right in front of their eyes. Follow the characters of my story as they find and fight for their, like so many of our dreams at first seem the impossible dream.
Welcome to the very first chapter of “Dream”
Thank you to all the wonderful creators of my CC’s :3
“Whoa, it’s Jeremy and he’s everywhere!” Tiffany exclaimed as she gestured toward the posters of the hottest idol of the country to her friends.
“Are you listening to pop?” asks by Kristine. She’s a friend and a classmate from one of the special subject Tiffany is taking up. “Idols are a big N-O.” Claire said as she does a no-no gesture. She’s the very first friend Tiffany made when she entered the university. “You do know that people from the music industry is called a one-time millionaire right?” she continued. “That’s right, they shine now and later forgotten. They’re really useless.” Kristine added. “Oh, yeah, I heard your dad is a musician is that why you’re into music?”
“Who said I’m into music? Man, I-I don’t even…sing.” Tiffany said as she raised her hand and made a slight, quick movement toward the right.“Aww!” She exclaimed as she bumped face to face with a boy. “I’m really sorry.” The boy apologized. “Did you get hurt? You should watch where you’re going.” He asks with urgency and concern.
“Whose fault is it that I’m hurt?” Tiffany asks and rolled her eyes when the boy says his sorry. “It’s because you suddenly move without looking.” The boy said. “Are you saying that I’m at fault?” Tiffany asks slightly annoyed. “I’m really sorry but I’m in a hurry. I’ll treat you next time. Bye.” He said as he run off.
“Hey!” Tiffany shouted. “Let him go.” Claire suggested. “Let him go? Did you see, he bumps me when I was just standing here perfectly.” Tiffany said as she points to where she was standing. “People are watching, it’s embarrassing to be seen with a bumpkin. He might not understand you anyway, looking at him, I could tell his out of school youth. In short, his brain might be as small as a peanut.” Kristine laugh. Claire rolled her eyes toward Kristine. “What?” she asks raising her brow. “Nothing, let’s just get something to eat.” Claire suggested.
“Check out that boy.” Kristine suggested as she point toward the hot guy on her left. “Oooh, I’d zeroed him.” Tiffany said winking. “You should check out that boy outside what do you think Claire?” She went on. “Check out your grade.” Claire said as she rolled her eyes on Tiffany. “Hehe.” Tiffany laughs nervously.
“This would be your second time right, your mom will surely blow now. You’ve been changing majors like crazy.” She shook her head back-and-forth in disbelief. “Don’t worry about her.” Tiffany said sipping on her juice. “It’s not like I’ve wanted this course.” She went on. “What do you want then?” Claire asks concerned that her friend might get kick out. “I-I don’t know.” She answered. “You do know that there’s a possibility of you being kicked out right?” Tiffany smiled.
“Call us if you need anything.” Claire said as she bid Tiffany goodbye. “Yeah, I bet your mother will kick you out for sure now.” Kristine tease. Tiffany tense up.
“You know I’m joking right?” she added. Claire sighed “Are you sure you don’t want to come with us?” Tiffany nodded her head. “Have fun guys.”
“See you tomorrow.” Kristine waved. “Just tell your mom that you would do better next time.” Claire suggested.
“I doubt she’ll believe that.” Tiffany sighed as she stirred her wheels.
“I’m home. Empty as always.”
Tiffany has been living with her mother since she was 9 nine years old. Her father used to leave out of town most of the time because he’s a musician. A small paying job that always kept him busy. Eventually her mother got fed up and chooses to leave him behind.
“I’m not into…music…really.” Tiffany sighed.
♫What is wrong with me
Frequently, I tell you
I don’t have a dream
So how should I say it to you
So that you won’t be mean
What Is wrong with me♫
Tiffany giggled. “How long has it been since I played?”
Tiffany played the songs she and her father used to sing together.
“I see why your grade is going down the drain.” “M-mother.” “Didn’t I tell you clearly that music is banned from this house? Why don’t you listen?” Her mother said pissed.
“But mother that’s a gift from father and I just played now really.” “Stop with your lies!” Her mother hissed. “Your school called me, you failed again! You’re gonna be dropped out, your bringing shame to me.” “It’s not my fault, you were the one who forced me to enrol in that school!” “So you’re blaming me now? I was just doing what is good for you.” She closed her eyes, squeezing them as tightly as she physically could she’s trying to restrained herself but “Good for me or for you?” Tiffany snapped.
“Things would have been different if father was here.” She said as tears stream down her face. “You’re no good father? Do you want to live as a beggar? Go ahead. Go to your father.”
“Father…sobs…father.”
“I’m gonna show mom, me and father will make it big. Really big that will shake this country.”
“The taxi is already here, won’t she stop me?” Tiffany sighed. “I guess not.”
“Sobs…Take care my baby. Please help her find her dream.”
“Is this the Graffiti Street? I hope no one I know will see me here.” Tiffany shrugs.
“This bag is getting heavier.” She turned her head to look up. “Aww!” “I’m sorry, I was pacing out.” The boy apologized. Her eyes flew wide open. “You again?” Tiffany asks as she saw the boy she bumped into a while ago.
“I’m really sorry but I’m in a hurry.” The boy said with the same urgency and concern as he waved. “Why is he always on the run?”
“Hey, get off the stage if you’re not singing!” “Get down the stage bumpkin!” “Get off freak!”
“What’s with them?” Tiffany asks as she heard the crowd’s rude comments.
“Huh? Is that him?” Tiffany asks as he saw the boy who she ran to twice. “Does he have a stage fright?” Tiffany crinkles her nose. “Why get on stage if you don’t have the courage.”
“Okay, that one was horrible.” The MC jokes. “Okay for our next participants, they are the representatives from Aery Art School.” The crowds went wild hearing the Aery Art School. “What’s with them?”
♫You’re all I need besides me girl
You’re the one I’ve been looking for
You are the one ♫
“I think I know what I want.” Tiffany exclaimed after seeing the brown haired boy on stage. Tiffany was almost drooling listening to the boy singing when she suddenly heard a familiar voice. “What happened? It was our chance.” Tiffany turned and saw a white haired man.
“How many times did you practice just to blow it?” He went on. “Father?” “Huh?” The man asks as he turns to face Tiffany. “Do I know you?” He asks. Tiffany crinkles her nose “It’s me your princess!” “Tiff-Tiffany?” he asks. Tiffany nodded.
“Is that you? Y-your all grown up now.” Her father exclaimed as he hugged her. “I missed you princess.” He went on as tears beam on his eyes. “Me too father.” “But what brings you here, does your mother know?” he asks as he searches the crowd. “Mother’s not here.”
“I’m gonna stay at your house now father. And I’m tired let’s go home.” Tiffany said as she turned around to get a last glimpse on the boy on stage.
“This is your place?” Tiffany asks surprised she thought this place is only used for movies. “Do people live here? I mean in the movies only you know, hoodlums lives here” Tiffany whispered. Her father chuckles “Yes princess, this is where father lives.”
“And why is this bumpkin slash stage frightened following us here?” Tiffany asks as she rolled her eyes on the boy. “I’m not following you. This is where I live too.” He answered.
“He lives next door?” Tiffany sighed.
“You see princess, father is not living well. You’re not suited to stay on places like this. I mean, I want to stay with you but I think it would be best if you go back to your mother.” Her father suggested. “No, this place is fine. I’m gonna live here.” Tiffany protested. “B-but-“ “No more buts father. I’m staying.”
“And why is he here again?” Tiffany asks. “He’s Johnny and you see princess, his father was my band mate and best friend and now he is my talent.” “T-talent?” Tiffany asks as she points toward the boy. Her father nodded. “I’m still a composer sometimes a singer but a full time manager now.” Her father said with confidence. “Him?” Tiffany asks raising her brows as she still points at him. Her father nodded. “No wonder you’re not having success father. This boy can’t sing, I mean I saw him he has stage fright.” “Tiffany!” “It’s true father.” “Say you’re sorry.” Her father commanded. “But…I’m sorry.” She gave in. His expression was blank as he spoke in a soft, weak voice “It’s okay, it’s the truth.”
Please tune in for the next chapter :3

you have wonderful CC but you need work in taking screenshots; take consideration of the angles and who or what is the focus of the scenario. For example: the first shot, showing the city is excellent but the 2nd & 3rd needs to be zoomed in, specially where the boy bumps into them. Show what needs to be showed. Next is your grammar. “Father…sobs…father.” the word 'sobs' shouldn't be there. Storywise, I think its fairly interesting so I hope you consider my suggestions and improve on those weak points. I'll look forward to the next.

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