It's kind of sad to think that eventually, (and I know it's just a game, but bear with me) Fran will have to face watching everyone in the party dying (unless of course something were to happen to her)...that makes me sad...

So I peered up into this fic, oput of curiosity and because the "character death" in the summary pulled me in :) I like sad stories, that run off from the conventional happy endings :)

I liked it very much :) it was sad, yet I was glad that someone touched the delicate subject of - hmm, Balthier and Fran look so great together... they belong to each other. But if thet both survive to the risks that are inherent to a like of piracy... when Balthier grows old... what will happen? It sads anyone if one thinks through it, yes? :)

"We flew the skies together everyday and I soon realized…

There was a heaven."

Great, great ending :)

Annie chapter 1 . 3/15/2008

this fanfic was truly sublime. i have been reading a lot of Fran/Balthier fics and this is the first one in which i write a review...that means this is the best fran/balthier fic i have read until now.