Wow, that was such a great chapter. So Tak Wah and Yuk Lin have another son? I wonder who he is. There was a lot of action in the last part of the chapter. Who was that man who took Tin Lok and Wsi Sun away? Please update more, I'm dying to know.

This chapter is one of my favorite chapters. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> The mysterious man might just be me. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> Hehe. just kidding. But really, I love the suspense. Keep up the good work.

Darnit! I had to open my big mouth (or type it out hehehe) that I would give you a review on your story if you give me one. Especially when your cast is huge! <IMG SRC="smilies/nono.gif" border="0"> Anyways, one good turn deserves another. Okay, my mui, your wish is my command ^_^.

Characters:
Vincent - <IMG SRC="smilies/bawling.gif" border="0"> Remember I told you how happy I was to find him in your cast way back in the beginning? Well, I know Iíve stated this many times before, but Ė You cruelly murdered my second favorite guy in the story!!! He didnít even go out with a bang, more like a whimper! Oh the horror. This is getting too painful <IMG SRC="smilies/crying.gif" border="0">
So needless to say, horrible move! Definitely need to bring him back into the plot <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">. I know you will find a way, oh Miss Mel, great writer! <IMG SRC="smilies/kiss.gif" border="0">

Gilbert Ė The hero. I find him to be a very endearing character. Especially since he is so romantic and sweet to Annie. I really like the scenes with them together. I can find no faults with him since he is portrayed as the goody-goody hero. However, Iím more attracted to the dangerous, cold, yet deep down have a good heart kinda guy. Of course, Gilbertís character has good looks, intelligence, great martial arts, and a loving family, but that doesnít really make him stick in my mind. I guess Iím more attracted to the bad guy turned good at the end like in Heroine of the Yangs. Hehehehe. Maybe you could try to spice things up by making him side with the evil force for a good cause? I donít know. This is just my opinion, so you donít have to listen to me. Iím sure your other readers love Gilbert!

Annie Ė Iím a big fan of Annie Man, so great decision in placing her in the cast <IMG SRC="smilies/thumbsup.gif" border="0">. Sheís cute, smart, and lovable. I really like her in this story and find it very humorous that she has no clue regarding Gilbertís profound love for her. Based on their personalities in the story, they really match as a couple. Sheís not evil, but sheís helping the wrong side. Hmmm, you havenít delved deep enough into her background for me to comment much on her character. So many secrets, Mel! Need to reveal more info.

Louis Ė My favorite actor (next to Bae Yong Joon), but sadly he is not the hero of this story. I dun like it that heís also in love with Annie (who I have a hunch will end up with Gilbert). Oddly, I like his character the most so far. Not good, but not exactly evil because heís only following orders from his father and assumed Gilbertís family is evil. Since there are so many characters, I donít have a solid understanding of his personality yet, except that he can be extremely jealous. I find that very sweet though. Maybe you could complicate the plot by letting him find out that his father is evil and that heís caught in between doing what is right and siding with his family? Just a thought.

Gigi Ė It would be very fitting if you could hook her up with Louis. Sheís funny and lively and I especially like the fact that she often acts childish. Louis will certainly have a very entertaining life with her. He needs that extra silliness in his life.

Ekin Ė another favorite actor of mine. Heís sooooo cool in here. Even though he only came out in a couple of scenes, I really like his character. He seems to have a sense of humor and to top that off, great martial arts! Please donít make him that calm, silent type that heís been playing in almost all his series/movies.

Kristy Ė Ekin and Kristy would make a wonderful couple. Not much focused on her so far, so no comments. However, the blind part was a great idea. Make her depend on him for support, both physical and emotionally. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

Benny Ė You do know that I donít regard him too highly as an actor, right? His looks = average, his acting = average. I never liked Benny and no matter how great he is portrayed in a story, my mind is set. Yes, I am very biased. Donít send hate mails, people! Anyways, you havenít really focused on him and I can only hope that he will be a minor character. If he gets killed in the end, eh, even better.

Frankie Ė He is a very versatile actor, but I have an indifferent attitude toward the guy. Plus you havenít really focused on him much.

Andy and Idy Ė one of my favorite onscreen couples. However, I find it difficult to believe that she can still look good after having so many children. Is it 4 or 5? Maybe one of the children is adopted? Anyways, please remember to focus more on them

Ada & Steven Ė Forget about Steven. Kill him off if you need to. I want Ada to be with Vincent. I donít care if Vincent is a minor character.

I love the fact that there are so many hidden agendas in the plot. Sure keeps readers guessing. Oh, your descriptions of the fight scenes are so detailed that I can literally see all the intricate moves. Good job! Contrary to what you said, itís not boring at all. You have a wonderful vocabulary and it sure is a treat to read your story. I know English is a second language for many writers, but I get distracted as well as annoyed when I have to read bad grammar and poorly scripted paragraphs. A good story needs to be well written in order to keep my attention, so even if there is an excellent plot, I still tend to lose interest quite quickly. That goes to show that your story is a good one. Just keep updating.

Are you happy now? I think my fingers are starting to cramp up! So will stop for now.

Chapter 20 is currently being revised. Please check back for updates. If you wish to be notified about updates on this story or on my other story (Legendary Book - The Prequel), please go to Cloud Manor and choose the "follow blog" option. I also welcome comments, gentle nagging for quicker updates, etc. Thank you for reading.

well written chapters. ch.19: the man from the tea stand who saved tin lok and wai sun is felix wong right? <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> you added margie tsang <IMG SRC="smilies/clap.gif" border="0"> even though it's a guest appearance, maybe sean and her can have another guest appearance. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> the fight scenes are detailed, well done. ch.20: what will happen to sui han if she gets caught by fa paul paul? sui han is pretty smart, i bet she'll find a way to escape or have a good excuse. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">

fanfan: Hi! <IMG SRC="smilies/wave.gif" border="0"> I'm so glad you're still reading. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> It sounds like you are a big fan of Margie Tsang Wah Sin and Sean Lau Ching Wan! Yup, I love them too! I think they appeared as a couple at the beginning of The Dragon Sword. I am watching a bit of Grand Canal right now, and I just love them! I actually like them more than the main couple (Idy and Tony), just because Margie and Sean look so cute together. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> I may want to bring them back for another guest appearance, but I will have to think about how to work them into the plot again. Yup, the guy who rescued Gilbert and Louis is Felix. Right now, I bet everyone is wondering what happened to those three. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">

I would like to say that I'm a major fan of Tony and Margie. Love them in The Police Cadet II (1985) and The Yang's Saga. If you haven't watched these two series, you're missing out on something great. I never really liked Sean, no offense to any fans of his. I do think he's a talented actor though.

Oh yeah, please, pleassssssse, hook Ada with Vincent. I'm fine with this couple having minor roles as long as they are together. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

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<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="80%" bgcolor="#dcdcdc" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="1"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="10" bgcolor="#DCDCDC"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor="#eeeeee"><font size="1">Originally posted by Melanie:
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fanfan: Hi! <IMG SRC="smilies/wave.gif" border="0"> I'm so glad you're still reading. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> It sounds like you are a big fan of Margie Tsang Wah Sin and Sean Lau Ching Wan! Yup, I love them too! I think they appeared as a couple at the beginning of The Dragon Sword. I am watching a bit of Grand Canal right now, and I just love them! I actually like them more than the main couple (Idy and Tony), just because Margie and Sean look so cute together. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> I may want to bring them back for another guest appearance, but I will have to think about how to work them into the plot again. Yup, the guy who rescued Gilbert and Louis is Felix. Right now, I bet everyone is wondering what happened to those three. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0"></STRONG></font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>yeah, margie and sean are very cute in the grand canal, this is one of my favorite series and the costumes are beautiful! i hope you can bring margie and sean back for another appearance. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0"> i haven't seen the dragon sword but i read sean plays a villain, he takes margie from miu kiu wai and forces her to be his wife. another couple in your story i haven't heard for quite sometime is tony and kitty. will they be making more appearances? <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

hi mel, wow another chapter already, you're updating fast now. <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0"> interesting chapter, so annie is the seer...i remember a seer was mentioned in an earlier chapter, hehe i checked back and yep, that was chap.15 where idy and andy are searching for the seer. the seer being annie has a guardian by her side, could this guardian be gilbert? <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> i like the details and poetic language you use to describe the surroundings. <IMG SRC="smilies/thumbsup.gif" border="0">

I still havent get past Chapter 10...who was the man in black?????? TELL ME!!!!! Hey i did wrote a song for gilbert so the least you could do is to indulge the villain here. <IMG SRC="smilies/sigh.gif" border="0">

In the meantime between disarming Saddam...Down with Puppet Master! <IMG SRC="smilies/evillaugh.gif" border="0">

hi! I'm not sure if you remember me I haven't come back in a really long time, many because of solo emsemble was coming up...(I won second place <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0"> It was a duet with my friend li, we both play the flute) anywho great story so far it took me all afternoon, 2 cans of vanilla coke, and a bunch of chips to finsh it... yah i know i'm kinda cuckoo. But i cant help it, its almost spring!!! <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> march break dude! anyway is your story on winglin? If it is can i have the url? thanks <IMG SRC="smilies/wave.gif" border="0"> happy st patricks day too, hope you're wearing green!