Yo veenerick, I think this sprite is pretty good. the GSC styled ones look more like GSC mixed with RSE, thought. Did you use color palletes from the original games, or did you get these colors yourself? Anyways, I was wondering if you took requests, instead of comissions. At the moment I'm to poor to be able to pay for commissions, and if I see someone who looks like they make awesome work, I can't pay them to make something for me. If you don't, that's okay, but if you do please respond to my comment. Thank you. ~Luxx

The backside's design is incorrect, though there are quite a few Gold/Silver backsprites that had errors later fixed in Crystal so it does still fit the style somewhat. I personally would recommend using a green in the palette since the green spots are like the only feature that differentiate Goomy from a standard blob of muck. The Electrode sprites in GSC are very good style references for a mon like this one and how to make the most of the two colours: www.spriters-resource.com/full…

Also, contrast! In GSC sprites the white is always clearly visible with the two other colours being vibrant (vibrant being a key word here) and clearly darker, so you can easily notice the shading everywhere. A few shiny palettes are unnaturally pale but those are rare. As for Goomy itself, the swirls and the spots on the back are symmetrical, it's only the mouth on the front that isn't. Used the ingame model as a reference, you can rotate it in the PokÚdex view.imageshack.us/scaled/landing/2…

Study existing party icons to get a general idea of heights and the style they're made in.

They have minimal shading, the outlines on the lower part of the sprite are lighter. It's always at an angle, so usually you only see one eye, and the right leg is always placed higher than the left one.Why don't you show me something? It's a bit easier to give advice based on your work.

It's not bad. It looks like the Party Icon is a mix of Pidove and Psyduck, though. Try and make them from scratch.Also, the fact that the beak's outline is much darker than the rest is a bit odd.If you look at existing Party Icons, you see that the upper parts of the Pokemon have dark outlines, and the lower parts have lighter outlines.

Also, why are the wings and tail a much darker colour than the body, but in the Front Sprite it's all the same?