Now I'm really surprised that this does not have more reviews, because this has an amazing plot to it, one that is hard to come by, especially considering high school fantasy stories are really hard to write for a lot of people. So kudos to you and great chapter!

I'm really surprised that this has no reviews, this should have some because it is very good and interesting, especially the characters. The synopsis of the story was the most enticing part, it made me want to see just what this was about. So really great beginning!