it was good but theres a couple things you need to change, in one of the paragraphs you talk about leslie and James but you typed lily instead: also the gryffindor animal is not a gryffin, its a lion!!!

I\'ve read a lot of fan fics but this one has a pretty new plot to me and I also have to say it\'s good also! Can\'t wait till you update! (It rhymes, haha I\'m so stupid, haha) Anyways, keep up the good work!

Ooo...very good, Amy! I don\'t know what\'s up with me, but I\'m speechless again (second fic in a row)...Seems we all like the name Leslie! :) My fic, Gazing and Knowing, is based on a girl called Leslie. :) Oh yeah, this is (was) Alexa Carter...
*~LT. Dan~*
~Alexa~
Overall rating: 6 out of 10

So far, the story has proved very enjoyable. It hasn\'t mattered that you haven\'t put too many plot twists in the story, as it works fine as it is. I enjoyed the change in the teachers, most of which were within the books, but not often part of the main cast of characters. I hope that the omission of Hagrid from the teachers list doesn\'t mean he won\'t appear. The flow of the story is very good and my interest has been kept all the way through. I hope the rest of the story is as good as it has been.

yes, im sure i did call her lily during parts.. you aren\'t the stupid one I AM i should fix that eh. thanks. i kept doing that as i was writing but I forgot to check over it. *blushes* ugh i feel so dumb. keep up the reviews
~Amy~

Yeah, like JenniferRoyal says above in her review, your story ought to be a
little bit spaced out.
I like the way you are using Potter and Malfoy. They sounded kinda silly
at that incident at the train station. But it\'s good. Really good. Please
please keep updating. I\'ll be coming back, hopefully, to read the new
chapters.
Please will you go and review my story? I only have one right now... it\'s
under my name CARNE
Thanx...
Cate aka Carne

hey guys, thanks for the reviews, they really help! I don\'t really understand what you mean when you say \'spread it out,\' forgive me, for i am a bit slow! lol well keep up the reviews, i could use a little more constructive critisism! thanks guys!
~Amy~

Good Job Amy!
You have an interesting plotline going on. Perhaps Romeo and Juliet in similarity!
Keep up the good work. I think what they mean by spacing out your writing, they mean by breaking it up into paragraphs. So that it doesn\'t look like one long one and making it easier to read!
Update soon,
Rei