A4 bristol board portrait of deviant _ [link] many thanks for the great photo reference , _ [link] Done with various graphite pencils tissues and erasers, wasnt very happy with the hair but need to find a decent tool to pick out the fine hairs? Again photo taken with crappy camera phone

I like that there's plenty of contrast and you kept the face soft. You also did a lovely job on the eyes. The only thing I might add is a tiny bit of the bar that goes through her skin on the facial piercing so it doesn't look like its floating there. Otherwise, awesome work!