Good job! I really like how this story's going and how you integrated Kouchi into Talia. Really, he's the perfect guy for a crossover like this, and you did a great job on starting the second chap on him. Crossover dudes need background info, too. :)

Ganbatte! Gook luck on writing this in the future so that even the people who think Digimon is for n00bs will like it!