A Cry in the Dark by Thomasia Mack 8th grade

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A Cry in the Dark by Thomasia Mack 8th grade

Why do I keep feeling this way?
Like I'm in a dark place.
I have a great life,
but I feel like somethings is missing.
so my heart keeps twisting.
I feel like the dark place I'm in
won't let the light in.
Nobody else but me,
loneliness....how could this be?
Can anybody hear me...
please don't fear me.
I need somebody by my side.
It feels like a scary ride.
Should I hide from the light?
No! It doesn't seem right.