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Here is the plot but I want the plot to be longer so please give me some ideas on what I could add and what I could get rid of.

~Plot~
Over two thousand years ago, Omi, Raimundo, Clay and Kimiko fought in a battle against evil that determined the destiny of the earth and during this battle, master fung had died of old age and of a heart attack. After days and days of fighting and using their elemental powers, the battle was won by the four monks. Then as the monks grew older, they started to lose their elements, and their Wudai weapons started getting out of control. Soon it got to the point where the monks died along with the elements, and their weapons left to find their new wielders. As time passed, a new evil started rising and causing havoc using the new element of Darkness. What is the element of darkness you ask, well not much is known about it now but most people say that who ever has that element can control shadows then walk into them and come out somewhere different. The user of this element could also transport others into a shadow of perpetual darkness, which is what he did to wuya when she apposed him. This person with the element of darkness is trying to take over the world and his name is Luke Torom. Soon the Wudai weapons and the elements then found their new masters that would be destined to save the world. As for the Shen Gong Wu, they spread throughout the world in new places awaiting their new users, and as for Dojo, he had been locked in the secret volt at the old Temple for one thousand years waiting for someone to set him free.

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A War Lies Upon The Horizon...Gather Your Heroes & Take Your Places. We're Fighting For The World.Poison/Us

4) This is just kind of something you're supposed to do, but after you end your sentence with a period, you put a space before starting the new sentence. Like so. See? Spaces! Yeah, it makes the whole thing look a little neater.

5) You don't want to get rid of anything. >.< That'll make it shorter then it already is. xD You might want to describe what's going on with past characters, like if Dojo, Master Fung, and Wuya are still around. (Forgive me if I'm being narrow minded, I haven't watched any of the more recent episodes)

Over two thousand years ago, Omi, Raimundo, Clay and Kimiko fought in a battle against evil that determined the destiny of the Earth. During this battle, Master Fung had died of old age, and after days and days of fighting, the battle was won by the four monks. As the monks grew older, they started to lose their elemental power, and their Wudai weapons started getting out of control. Soon it got to the point where the monks died along with the elements, and their weapons left to find new wielders. As time passed, a new evil started rising and causing havoc using the new element of Darkness. What is the element of darkness you ask, well not much is known about it now but most people say that who ever has that element can control shadows, then walk into them and come out somewhere different. The user of this element could also transport others into a shadow of perpetual darkness, which is what he did to Wuya when she opposed him. This person with the element of darkness is trying to take over the world. His name is Luke Torom. Soon the Wudai weapons and the elements then found their new masters that would be destined to save the world, and the Shen Gong Wu? They spread throughout the world in new places awaiting their new users. As for Dojo, he had been locked in the secret vault at the old Temple for one thousand years waiting for someone to set him free.

(Hahaha, you should add, 'and causing quite the noise' at the end of the last sentence)

I edited it a bit to make it seem cleaner and smoother. (And I fixed a few capitalization errors) If you don't like it, ignore that, but another thing you might add that could count as the plot is like,

Fire, Water, Wind, Earth. These elements will band together to fight this new nemesis, and bring peace back to the world!

Or something filler-ish like that. Because, you still need like, two more lines before it looks okay to me. >.<

Over two thousand years ago, Omi, Raimundo, Clay and Kimiko fought in a battle against evil that determined the destiny of the Earth. During this battle, Master Fung had died of old age, and after days and days of fighting, the battle was won by the four monks. As the monks grew older, they started to lose their elemental power, and their Wudai weapons started getting out of control. Soon it got to the point where the monks died along with the elements, and their weapons left to find new wielders. As time passed, a new evil started rising and causing havoc using the new element of Darkness. What is the element of darkness you ask, well not much is known about it now but most people say that who ever has that element can control shadows, then walk into them and come out somewhere different. The user of this element could also transport others into a shadow of perpetual darkness, which is what he did to Wuya when she opposed him. This person with the element of darkness is trying to take over the world. His name is Luke Torom. Soon the Wudai weapons and the elements then found their new masters that would be destined to save the world, and the Shen Gong Wu? They spread throughout the world in new places awaiting their new users. As for Dojo, he had been locked in the secret vault at the old Temple for one thousand years waiting for someone to set him free. The element of darkness wasn't the only new element, one other element formed which was the element of lightning. With the element of lightning the user can create bolts of lightning out of their hands, and just like the other elements, this one also found it's user. Now that the elements have found their destined user's, they must join together to save the world from eternal darkness.

(Hahaha, you should add, 'and causing quite the noise' at the end of the last sentence)

I edited it a bit to make it seem cleaner and smoother. (And I fixed a few capitalization errors) If you don't like it, ignore that, but another thing you might add that could count as the plot is like,

Fire, Water, Wind, Earth. These elements will band together to fight this new nemesis, and bring peace back to the world!

Or something filler-ish like that. Because, you still need like, two more lines before it looks okay to me. >.<

Ok, I edited this to show what I added.Would that be accepted?

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L i g h tCredit Goes To: t w e n t y - t w o . :]

A War Lies Upon The Horizon...Gather Your Heroes & Take Your Places. We're Fighting For The World.Poison/Us

Over two thousand years ago, Omi, Raimundo, Clay and Kimiko fought in a battle against evil that determined the destiny of the Earth. During this battle, Master Fung had died of old age, and after days and days of fighting, the battle was won by the four monks. As the monks grew older, they started to lose their elemental power, and their Wudai weapons started getting out of control. Soon it got to the point where the monks died along with the elements, and their weapons left to find new wielders. As time passed, a new evil started rising and causing havoc using the new element of Darkness. What is the element of darkness you ask, well not much is known about it now but most people say that who ever has that element can control shadows, then walk into them and come out somewhere different. The user of this element could also transport others into a shadow of perpetual darkness, which is what he did to Wuya when she opposed him. This person with the element of darkness is trying to take over the world. His name is Luke Torom.

Soon the Wudai weapons and the elements then found their new masters that would be destined to save the world, and the Shen Gong Wu? They spread throughout the world in new places awaiting their new users. As for Dojo, he had been locked in the secret vault at the old Temple for one thousand years waiting for someone to set him free. The element of darkness wasn't the only new element, one other element formed which was the element of lightning. With the element of lightning the user can create bolts of lightning out of their hands, and just like the other elements, this one also found it's user. Now that the elements have found their destined user's, they must join together to save the world from eternal darkness.