The Image is so captivating- and so are the words.. You really know how to take the reader glide through a passionate dream.. strong words.. sweet emotions and undying passion to stay committed and being wanted……

And your comments are most beautiful and so much appreciated my dear Olivia, your presence here means so much to me, I value your friendship and dedication to this so very much!! Love you beautiful girl xxxx

Oh maaan!! How you write so passionately, totally leaves me awestruck!
This was blazing hot, girlie!
And the crescendo you mentioned… yea, I totally heard/felt it!! WOW!
But then again, I was destined to 🙂

A strong buildup in this verse overflows with imagery leading to a climax, a statement of love and devotion. The illustration of fire on the ocean vividly sets the mood for this amazing verse. Thank you for sharing with us this beautiful expression of passion.

Wowww this left me so absolutely speechless! Truly amazing, beautiful, full of passion and “fire” Such a beautiful beginning “Chasing a dream” =)) Such an amazing talent you have, and you certainly set my heart to racing with this!!! ~ April 🙂