Thanks as always. A couple of minor problem noted, with standard corrections (which may need more modification to fit poet requirements)Three large problems (I think) whch may be several cases of one problem, how to attach a verb phrase to a noun : "I see you talking to your friends". tp can do 'mi lukin e ni: sina toki tawa jan pona' and 'mi lukin e sina. sina toki tawa jan pona' , Neither of these seems to get the sense of the smooth phrasing. mi lukin e sina pi toki pi tawa jan pona' may be closer but is getting long and complex for a simple idea. Any suggestions?

Forgotten Poems

Mon Sep 04, 2017 10:55 am I was cleaning out my tablet and found some unpublished TP poems. I thought I'd (finally) let them see the light of day...

I shed tears.I have love in my heart.I want to give love.But nobody comes to have it [ona].

You and me.

You look at me.I look at you.Good feelings ar in your mouth.Good feelings are in my mouth.You talk to me.I talk to you.You give me hot water.I give you hot water.I think that you like me.I know that I like you.

What am I to you?

I look at you.You don’t look at me.Good feelings are in my mouth because of you.Good feelings are in your mouth because of someone else.I talk to you.You talk to someone else.I want a lover.You want a lover.I want to love you.Why don’t you want to love me.

A mother’s tears.

I want only this [wile e ni taso]That you learnAnd grow up wellAnd bring good to othersAnd are happy.