How they always walk into the sunset. Why can't they EVER walk into foreboding darkness and Roy gets his a(EEP!) kicked by Team Homo—snicker, snicker, snicker—then Burns Lust so bad she gets a big-a(EEP!) 'fro? That'd be f(EEP!)ing awesome.

If you're still updating this, how about the cliché where they learn a lesson in environmentalism by discovering a town, resort, et cetera that is being polluted by some mean business or something and have to face off and help the angry Pokémon (or Pokémists for this fanfic) that live there?

Its been quite some time since I've read a fic that made me laugh like this. I grew up on pokemon, and I've recently discovered FM., This combo was great! Your mottos, and parody of the theme song were the best. If you do write another chapter I will certainly be back for more!

Your stories are so amazing! I really like this one 'cause it's hilarious and you bring up so many of the horrible cliches in Pokemon. The biggest one for me would be when Team Rocket always shows up, they say their stupid catchphrase and they get blasted off again and somehow manage to stalk the main characters no matter where they go. Wouldn't they freakin' give up? If they wanted to give pokemon to their leader, (who never appears anymore,)why wouldn't they just go ahead and catch wild pokemon? Because stealing sure ain't working for them. xD Another cliche I hate, is when some random filler characters just go ahead and hand over their pokemon to the heros. Seriously? Did those trainers not care at all about their own pokemon, lulling them into a false sense of security and then trading them off to some other trainer to be ordered around like some slave, (again?) Lol, I used to love pokemon but now that series has gone to pot XD Lmao, sorry for ranting! Looking forward to the next chapter. -