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Space

Space
A woman knows when she needs her space
Now and then, she has to embrace
The space where the mind has to go
The place where your spirit can just flow
Could be a night to put on them dancing shoes
Dance the night away, let it all loose
Could be a night for some peaceful escape
Relax to your own personal dreamscape
Whatever your space, feel the ease
Good for the soul, tension release
Written for Black Eyed Susan's Contest
Space
March 1, 2013

REALLY nice poem...gotta admit the title caught my eye cuz I just finished watching the HBO series: From the Earth to the Moon (DVD set) & my mind is ALWAYS in space!@?! if ya know what I Mean & THANKS so much 4 yer comments on "If We Are All Just Dreaming and Life Has No Meaning" & yer awesome :) & keep up the GREAT poetry): Terry Thanks Again Terry): O & did I say PEACE?