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Harley Seduces the Teacher

yummy

hot damn~ i wish i could have done that to my teacher i had a huge crush on... 5 yrs after graduation we still speak maybe its time for me to make a move great story!

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Anonymous08/10/06

very...em... amiturish...

this just reeked of amiture schoolboy writing. there was no depth any the story didnt have a flow, it was like reading a step by step guide, not an evolving storyline... first this happened then this then this.... very bad

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Anonymous03/05/07

Brilliant, loved it.

So-so

It would have been good except for the characters names changing. At some parts the teacher was Amy and the student was Harley. At other parts the teacher was Harley and the student was Amy. That just causes confusion and doesn't add anything to the story.

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Anonymous12/24/09

A Video....

Could it be in a video. these girls sound hot and when sucking her pussy it made me warm make it a video and i will love it these hot bitches really turned me on and can i get more so i can see what its really like!!!!

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Anonymous01/22/10

Poo

This was really poorly written; Everything is so abrupt.

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Anonymous03/20/10

Detail

this is terrible its needs way more detail

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Anonymous07/15/10

harley ireally want to fuck you and suck on your tits and eat your pussy until you cum

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Anonymous08/20/10

oh god

i really want to fuck my teacher...

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Anonymous09/24/10

Yummi

Harley, I'm waiting for you

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Anonymous02/09/11

FUCK ME

mm i want to suck amys pussy

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Anonymous02/27/11

meet up

i need u 2 on my pussy we can go three way

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Anonymous09/06/11

meet me

i love it and come meeet me at apples so we can go bac to my place and fuk each other

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Anonymous11/28/11

Fuckkk Yessss . !

I love this story . in the middle of it i started rubbing my pussy . i was so wet . i came . can we get to know each other so then you can write my stories for me? i wish i could just fuck harley .

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Anonymous11/13/12

that is soo good

i dont know if im a lesbain or bi ect but that turned me on , need to find me some pussy now

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Anonymous04/01/13

Pussy

Poorly written yes, but halfway through the story I reached down and flicked that bean so hard I orgasmed 3 times. I wish I knew a slut like Harley so that she could lick my wet cunt

Very Nice!

Anon

Hmmm

Yes, this is a good plot line, I love the hot teacher-hot student relationship. But this is very poorly written. It had not build up and there is very little detail. Good but not great.

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Anonymous10/06/16

A bit to fast

Nice story but it seemed to me that the seduction should have taken longer. I think that it would have been better if these two girls found out that they were attracted to each other and slowly fell in love.instead of the slam bam way that you got them together.
I enjoy the slow seduction as much as the actual physical seduction.
Still a good story just not long enough