In my eyes you have truly captured these characters perfectly. I can imagine them so perfectly and easily and I'm blown away by your talent and skills. I have not found one mistake or anything I would think could be written differently. Bravo, bravo.

Aw. Why does peter have to be so nice? That sucks because we know he turns bad in the end...but then again if there was no peter or if he hadn't turned evil there would be not HP series or this website (considering that if he wasn't there lily and James wouldn't have switched him to secret keeper) so I guess it's ok he's not nice ... Well ... He won't be nice later !!

Sorry for not reviewing before but I love your story ... Keep writing more !!

~Annie (a.k.a. Voldy_needs_a_hug )

Author's Response: Ha ha. Peter is probably nice because I have a hard time writing mean people. :) Well... with the exception of the Blacks.

But I just had to believe (in my kinder softer universe ;) ) that he had to have some redeemable qualities at some time or the others wouldn't have let him in on so many secrets.

Thanks again for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

This chapter was kinda boring but don't get me wrong I LOVE YOUR WORK!

Author's Response: Hey, no worries. Thank you for being honest. And I'm glad to hear it wasn't so boring that you're not going to continue.

Thank you.

Oh, by the way, I'm not sure if I'd actually do any editing (more out of laziness than because I think it doesn't need to be), but if you ever have suggestions - like how that chapter could be less boring- I'm open to hearing them.

Peeves turned when he heard the student coming down the hall. "Student out of bed," he yelled. "Student out of bed! Oh!" Peeves said with a cackle of delight. "It’s you. Lupin. Lupine Lupin. Lunar Lupine Lupin. Loony Lupin. Loony Loopy Lupin." Peeves delighted himself with his usual word games; but, much to Remus’ horror, it seemed obvious the poltergeist knew that he was a werewolf.

"Shut up!" Remus said in frustration.

"Ooo! Lupin has a temper." Peeves finished tying the rope, then took to following Remus down another corridor, calling the whole time, "Loony Loopy Lupin! Loony Loopy Lupin!"

I cracked up at that bit.
~Sal1705

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed that part. Oh, you are a Remus fan, right?