Looks:Zorro de La Tempestad, when sealed, is a four foot long katana. The guard is a bright silver color with a golden yellow sheen. It's shaped like a seven pointed star with a jagged arc coming from in between each point. The handle is wrapped in bright yellow silk with a bit of a light blue tinge to it. The blade itself is polished to perfection and has a lightning bolt shaped design that runs the length of the blade. The sheathe is made of fine ebony with yellow accents.

Looks:When first summoned, four large, dark clouds begin to move in, blottingout the sky. (The clouds are just regular dark storm clouds, folks o.onothing special. >.>) A bolt of spiritual pressure, condensed toresemble a massive burst of lightning, envelops her, triggering hertransformation. Her mask fragment enveloped her head, becoming a helmet like structure that is shaped like a fox's skull. Her body becomes overed in a light coat of silver fur that hardens her hierro to match that of La Cero Espada. Her legs buckle into a new shape, becoming more animal like in appearence. The jaws on her helm open and close like normal jaws, giving her the ability to fire her ceros from her mouth if she can't from her hands. Her primary weapon is the Naginata she weilds. Theblade surges with an electrical current that delivers a powerful joltwhen it comes in contact with the flesh of her enemy. The jolt itdelivers is usually anywhere between 500-1000 volts of concentratedelectricity. Her agujas de acero deliver a weak yet paralyzing 200-450volt shock.Special Ability: Agujas De Acero (Steel Needles) : Her fur Hardens to thin needles which she can fire at an enemy. Each needle is charged with staticelectricity. If the needle sticks into the flesh of an enemy, it candeliver a nasty jolt that may cause paralysis The needles take two posts to reform after the first set is fired, and she can fire up to 100 needles in one set. The amount of needles in Val's body are endless as long as she's in her released state. As long as Val has fur, she'll have her needles.Techs:

Name -Tormenta del Juicio (Storm of Judgement)Attributes:DamageClass:Reiatsu'She leaps into the air and by spinning her body, her fur and tailscreate a massive thunderstorm that takes on the form of a hurricane.When it hits the opponent, (ie: When the lightning storm comes in contact with it's target) it delivers nearly half a million volts ofpure concentrated electricity. The storm can cover nearly fifty feet,but the majority of the damages is caused in the first fifteen feet ofthe storm. Val has full control over the lightning and can curve it and aim it at will'Post Durations:3 postsCooldown:6 posts

Name -Trueno Del Rugido (Thundering Roar)Attributes:DamageClass:Reiatsu'Valentina inhales deeply, then lets out a thundering roar that createsa massive Shock wave. The blast can only reach about twenty feet indiameter, but may do serious damage to those who are caught in range.The attack is nearly fatal due to the massive damage it can cause. The shock wave alone, if hit point blank, can shatter bones and scorch flesh. However, ifit strikes at a distance, it may only leave minor burns and lacerationsat the most'Post Durations:1 postCooldown:3 posts

Name: Anni CeroAttributes:DamageClass: Reiatsu'A cero only used by the espada within their first release, it issimilar to the gran ray cero as the Espada in question will have to mix theirown blood with the Cero to increase it's power. But it is also enhanced evenfurther by adding their element to the mix with each element, each element addsa different type of power. By adding their elemental Reiatsu it increases thepowerof the cero dramatically, of course each power varies due to the user.The cero is Bright yellow in color and is a medium-long range cero,only reaching 10 meters in distance.Lightning = Increases the cero's potential to smash through an enemies defenseand as the explosion takes place it sends out a wave of electricity shockingany opponents foolish enough to be around it'Cool down: 4 postsDuration: Cero fires in one post. The effects of the electric shock lasts for two posts.

Looks:In her second release, Valentina takes on the shape of a large ninetailed fox. The markings on her body glow bright yellow andoccasionally arc with an electric current. She stands at almost sevenfeet tall in her final form. Each tail is nearly five feet long andsurge with a powerful electric current. She is incapable of humanspeech due to her vulpine muzzle. Her eyes become empty and vacant. In her mind, only destruction of her enemy exists. Her entire body is covered in astatically charged pelt of thick silver fur that will shock anyone who comesin contact with her body.The fur works also as heavy armor, strengthening her hierro tenfold.

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Special Ability:In her final form, Val can summon a thunderstorm out of even theclearest skies, and gains full control over electricity. She calls downthe thunderbolts with specialized barks and growls, the intensity ofthe bolt it decided by the intensity of her cry.Techs:Name:El Granizo del RelámpagoAttributes:DamageClass: Reiatsu'The attack only can occur if she is airborne. Val lets out aloud series of barks and howls, and releases a storm of five to tenthunderbolts from her body. They surround an enemy while a large boltcomes down the center to strike the trapped enemy'Cool down:4 postsDuration:1 posts

Name:El Resplandor CeroAttributes:DamageClass: Reiatsu'This cero is a reverse of the Cero Oscura. It is bright white in colour. The cero is summoned by Val charging it in her mouth like a normal cero. It is twice as powerful as a gran rey and can only be used during segunda etapa. It's a long range cero, usually reaching 15-20 meters in distance. Cool down:6 postsDuration:1 posts instant release

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Name -Tormenta del Juicio (Storm of Judgement)Attributes:DamageClass:Reiatsu'She leaps into the air and by spinning her body, her fur and tailscreate a massive thunderstorm that takes on the form of a hurricane.When it hits the opponent, it delivers nearly half a million volts ofpure concentrated electricity. The storm can cover nearly fifty feet,but the majority of the damages is caused in the first fifteen feet ofthe storm.'Post Durations:3 postsCooldown:6 posts

this tech creates a thunderstom correct? define "when it hits the opponent". I assume you mean if a lightning bolt strikes the opponent but I'd like to be sure. if this is true, are the bolts randomly sent down or do you have some form of control over them such as in the segunda res.?

Name -Trueno Del Rugido (Thundering Roar)Attributes:DamageClass:Reiatsu'Valentina inhales deeply, then lets out a thundering roar that createsa massive Shock wave. The blast can only reach about twenty feet indiameter, but may do serious damage to those who are caught in range.The attack is nearly fatal if it strikes at point blank range, but ifit strikes at a distance, it may only leave minor burns and lacerationsat the most'Post Durations:1 postCooldown:3 posts

define near fatal for me, such as how much physical damage is done like you did later in the tech with minor burns/ lacerations

Looks:The fur works also as heavy armor, strengthening her hierro to rival that of the Cero Espada.

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please don't compare your hierro to that of another players, it makes it vary way to much, simply say that it strengthens it or something along those lines, i didn't mention it in your first release to save time on my part but both need to be changed slightly

Special Ability:In her final form, Val can summon a thunderstorm out of even theclearest skies, and gains full control over electricity. She calls downthe thunderbolts with specialized barks and growls, the intensity ofthe bolt it decided by the intensity of her cry.

nothings wrong with this as long as you know you will need to explain how intense each cry is in a fight

[/b]Name:El Granizo del RelámpagoAttributes:DamageClass: Reiatsu'The attack only can occur if she is airborne. Val lets out aloud series of barks and howls, and releases a storm of five to tenthunderbolts from her body. They surround an enemy while a large boltcomes down the center to strike the trapped enemy'Cool down:6 postsDuration:3 posts

this duration is way to long considering the parameters of this attack. this should be a one post duration seeing as how it "traps the opponent" either that or drastically change how powerful it is.with this being said, you may also change the cooldown time to about 4 or 5, 6 turns is a long time in a fight

i think you view of a ability is different from mine armond, I see an ability a constant aspect of the character, something they will always be able to do while a tech is a special form of said ability that requires some amount .but i will side with you on the basis that A.) she does need a total amount of needles B.) how long it takes for those needles to "grow" back. a duration isn't needed but I do advise on a cooldown after total amount has been fired.