After being shipwrecked and stranded on an unknown island, a human stumbled across a land filled with tiny creatures known as "Breezies". Now, with the aid of one of them, the two must learn how to send the human back to his home.

Rainbow Dash promised to take the rambunctious Scootaloo under her wing on the whim of pride. However, when Scootaloo's repressed emotions come to surface, Dash finds there's more to the little filly than fun and flight training.

Scootaloo, trying to comprehend the fact that Rainbow will be gone for a very long time, comes across a colt walking by the lake. He has a note. She finds it. She reads it. She discovers somepony loves her.

While doing a census of ponies in Ponyville, Twilight discovers something peculiar about pegasi. Ever the curious one, she decides to investigate and get to the bottom of it. Will what she learns change the way she views her friends? Probably not.

no other comments? well I'm new to fimfiction so this is my first comment.good story anything half well written to do with scootaloo's past is great.though i would have thought that most ponies especially fluttershy would rather talk about it with scootaloo in private.but anyhow i really enjoyed it and hope you continue.

Wait if she knew that scootaloo was living in a club house then why the fuck is she only bothering her arse to help her now? I mean how low do you have to be. Starving child in club house meh long lost sister less meh

okay please don't take this the wrong way but after finishing the fic I was dissapointed.

The storyline itself was a good plotline, yet there was/is so muchj more scope for what you've got here. On top of which considering who the mane six are I don't think if they knew scoots was an orphan that they would be leaving her homeless, they have a direct line to the rulers of Equestria.

i'm liking this, but the way the sentences are structured make it a little confusing.

my first is that you had two characters talking without a space between to indicate and shift in character.

also, right at the end, she would talk to Scootaloo in front of the others, show her the documents, and tell her that she is my sister."it went from narrative to fluttershy saying it without any indication.

made if you make a few small fixes it could work like maybe scoots was just A tiny baby last time flutters saw her and maybe scootaloo isn't her real name but she calls her self that cause she hates her name, maybe its like, sunshine breeze, or butterfly shine, or something really girly that she would hate