India And I

I come from a country called India The women here are known for the Bindiya Here there’s lot do with name Khan And the yummy banarasi Paan the land of Bollywood where rice is the staple food Ever increasing rate of corruption Never ending problem of the population One of the largest democracy Proven to be a legacy Minister in race for supremacy And unmarried women suffering from pregnancy The history of the freedom struggle And the IT industry bubble There are a lot of flaws Trying to get out of its claws We still remain developing From what I have been seeing I am from southern city But still I can proudly say there’s Unity in Diversity

I do a bit of writing And make sure its rhyming I have tried to mimic No, that’s not a gimmick I took a shot at the jive dance When I got the right chance Oh yeah, I also have a blog And I would love to hog Something attracts me for the good And that’s the aroma of food On a trek, when I went up the hill The wind there helped the wind mill Something synced with it, that’s my first name Anil

The thoughts of my mind are so subtle To comprehend them and make them unsubtle I need some space for myself and my mind To put them together and get them entwined And make them grow into a tree I visit them again and again like a marquee Something reminds me that I am part of a hierarchy And that’s my last name Kulkarni!!

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India is not as bad as being expressed. Why only the pessimistic features were touched?. One has to be proud to be an Indian. Few will realize this fact only when they go outside of India. Try writing positive as well. Fine.

Dear Muthu, Please read the lines again. The poem ends with the line- But still I can proudly say there’s Unity in Diversity. I respect your feedback but I dont think the poem is negative at all. I have just highlighted some of the flaws in the system and also said that we are still unified. Its not like the poem is highlighting only the flaws you see. There are positive things too but you need an eye to watch them : Thank you

Dear Muthu, Please read the lines again. The poem ends with the line- But still I can proudly say there’s Unity in Diversity. I respect your feedback but I dont think the poem is negative at all. I have just highlighted some of the flaws in the system and also said that we are still unified. Its not like the poem is highlighting only the flaws you see. There are positive things too but you need an eye to watch them : Thank you

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