Dear Theo - help with letter

I have read through and follow all your advice, but I have seen a post and am interested but have lost a bit of confidence because for the last 2 applications I have not been shortlisted.
Could you check it through for me?

Well, Vinny, what do you think would happen if I said Yes ?
I'll tell you: Mrs TG would never get the lawn mowed, nor the car washed, nor the kitchen door mended, because everybody on here would be asking me to do the same!
So you can guess that I am going to have to say that, sorry, no, I can't.
However if you contact Julia on advice @ tes.co.uk (without the gaps), she can give you details of both the TES application checking service, and how to book a meeting with me personally when I will help you with an application, with preparing for an interview, with deciding which jobs you should apply for - general or specific advice.
Best wishes
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TheoGriff. Member of the TES Careers Advice Service.
For the full TES Weekend Workshop programme please visit www.tes.co.uk/careerseminars or contact advice @ tes.co.uk for one-to-one sessions.