Like this:

Ben, I like how you tried to make your picure you mad about drawing.
I also like Sydney’s drawing of someone drawing. It kind of makes you have perspective about how people look and what you look like when you are drawing.

I completely agree with you on Sydney’s drawing. My favorite hobby is drawing and when I do draw I am oblivious to the “outside” world. It’s sort of nice to see what I may look like. I, though, would probably be much more involved.

Conrad, I like how you incorporated Mt. Fuji in your drawing. It reminds me of all the pictures we saw at our last meeting. It is just so symbolic and such a major part of Japan. I was going to draw a village but I decided against it since it was sort of intimidating. I think you captured it really well.

Persephone, as usual, your talent is outstanding. It gives me similar vibes as the orignal picture itself in the book.
I also like Jacob’s drawing, the shrine’s structure was really cool, especially the top of it. I thnk yours caught my eye along with Persephone’s.

Jake, I really like the detail, texture, and shading you put into your drawing. It really brings out the beauty. And Ben, I love the colors of yours. I can easily tell that you spent a lot of time on that picture.

Another piece I found brilliant was Bobby’s. It was so amazing dude! That looked like the exact one from the book. Plus, I adored that way you made it sideways, giving me the feeling that it was on a scale, showing the one higher up is winning. Keep it up man! 🙂

Persephone your drawing is beautiful! I love the bright colors and the details of Mt. Fuji. I also like how it shows detail within the sky to show that it’s not there just to be there, it has a purpose. In this picture, the purpose is to show emotion.

Jacob I liked the way that you shaded in the picture. It gave the sense of perspective and shadows. Persephone I really liked the colors you used. They all sort of blend in with each other and give a sense of peace, which is one of Japan’s main focuses.

I loved everyone’s drawing. I especially like Persephones drawing. The thing that I loved about everyone’s drawing was they tried to add their own touch to each of their drawings. Like trying to add a little bit of each of them. That made the picture even more special and valuiable.

I really like Persephone’s she can really draw you can tell she put alot of thought and effort into her drawing of the view of mt fuji. Another of my favorites would have to be Lyssette it shows ALOT of detail .