The story so far in this game seems pretty interesting. When I got up to the end of the playable story I wished that it would continue, but you know It's in the beta. The story seems nice, characters are interesting and the choices are good, when you add some music it will give some atmosphere for the scenery.

Overall, a very nice and interesting game so far. I can't wait to see how much better It can get.

I'll give feedback for both the devs and players: (If you are a new player, just scroll down for my review of the game)

For devs:I know you're trying to produce content for the game right now, but I believe your primary focus here should be on the story and how to tell that story. Because I seriously think that you have a beautiful idea here, considering the copy/paste RPG genre today. If we get hooked by the story, we'll play it anyways, and you can always add content in the future. Try to come up with interesting dialogue, and exciting ways to tell this story to us.

Here are some basic ideas that popped out: We can experience different background stories for avatar's real lives back at home. One of them could be a doctor, and he can give life-saving instructions to avatars if their bodies in real life start showing signs of death. One of them could be a famous Hollywood actor/actress who refuses to cooperate with other players because he/she is just to good to be stuck here with these simpletons. One of them could be a banker and find a way to rob the bank of the digital town so they can buy tools in-game to stay alive.

I truly believe your game will turn out beautiful and it'll be very exciting to play. I'm in love with your draft idea. PLEASE: Please do not turn this game into a full hardcore RPG with missions, monsters, items etc. Both Steam and the industry are already full of this type of boring and mediocre RPG games that are just the product of asset manipulation. Do not make this game about "item & character leveling". Make this one about a great story with suspense and thriller elements. You have an exciting idea, and I seriously believe it'll turn out as a game worth having in my library.

Thanks for the early access opportunity, and hope you take our feedback into consideration.

For players:The story is like this: You wake up in the game, and you're a real human. This is probably a VR game, and apparently, players are stuck in this game because the game was somehow broken, and for some reason, they are not allowed to log out of the game and they cannot go back to their real lives. So the characters you see in this game, as you will also discover on your own, are just digital avatars of real people. And they face the danger of getting stuck in this game forever, and dying in real life if the game is not fixed in time. You're also one of the players who got stuck in this VR game, and you should cooperate with others to find your way out of this game.

As you can see, the idea is exciting. But this is just a draft of the base design, blueprints of an idea. So what you need to do is just give your opinions to the devs. Tell them what you want to play, and hope that they'll make it.

I loved it and can't wait for more. The art style, the story about being trapped in a mmo game and the best part is choice's matter. Just less than a hour and I'm so invested in the characters, i can't wait for the full game. I support you all the way.