kawaii! reminds me of the SD episode... and how Team Guy had to help Orochimaru get a valentine *bursts out laughing at the memory* I gotta rewatch that show, I like it as much as the original! (well, when it has shirtless Neji and Naruto and Lee commenting on Neji's "size", who wouldn't?) ;D

I absolutely loved this! I love the constrast of Naruto and Lee screaming and yelling and then... and then Neji's one liner. Yep that's how you get the girl.

The last scene just seems to sum up the two of them so well. They're not loud, or over emotional, or extravagant- and yet that is somehow strangely more appealing that a sudden blush crush kiss or... a glitter squirrel heart thing?

If you're back in the mood to write, you should definitely write some more!

I love that you rolled so many pairings into one awesome story! The way Tenten manipulated Naruto was genius. Actually, the way you wrote Tenten was genius: "Luckily, she was awesome and pulled herself together." XD Love it!

Oh, and Neji was just soooo smooth at the end! I was waiting for him to enter the scene, and even though he had a small part, it was well done and it made me melt, not gonna lie.

This was absolutely adorable. I really love how the description accented Tenten's journey to the hospital into an adventure.

Tenten's loyalty to Lee, despite refusing at first, was really nice, especially considering how when Naruto had stole the valentine from her, she had sprinted just to get it back. Though, I'm wondering if Lee would have signed his name on the valentine, just so Sakura would know...

The ending was really sweet, it wasn't overly sappy and romantic but a quiet humming that made a smile break across my face. Great job!