Aw, so nice. Made me think of my own experiences. Long long time ago. Can you imagine what he hospital staff must have thought at the huge crowd of people waiting for the baby? All of them tough, scarey, and no-nonsense people. It made me laugh to hear Cloud tell Tifa to call an ambulance because he wouldn't be there in time...what were they thinking? That Tifa would ride Fenrir? THAT would have been a trip and a half! Thanks for the threesome. So nice. mc

Oh yes, please. One more. Soon. But I have say I'm suspicious. I don't remember it going quite that way when MY bundle of joys were still in the hopper...Sweeping would be very good exercise for a newly pregnant Tifa, and if Cloud doesn't know it now because of his peculiar childhood and adolescence, I'll bet he gets better info pretty darned quick from Cid... Still, Tifa, you milk it for what you can. Go, Girl! and Cloud will let her, too. Maybe you can get more than one more out of your pen! thx mc

Aw, shucks. Of course this is great. It's Cloti. And it's well done. Reminds me of the famous story, except it's all Cloud doing the selling. Where the heck is he going to carry stuff for his delivery service? Oh well, I don't need to worry-Cloud's pretty smart, he'll have something figured out. Thanks for this-I'm gonna see what else is in the package. mc