Very nice, you have a keen eye for perspective But there's a few thing I'd like to point out about the first piece (coloured one) Because of the atmosphere, things that are farther away tend to get more "transaprent". I think you allready know this, but push the value difference even more to get that cool depth feeling. Oh, and it would be even more stylish if you could just focus on an area, instead of paying atention to every detail. But the best teacher is yourself and the best class is practice. CHEERS

The first one has a really streaky feel to it. It almost looks as though it was done in colored pencil. I think that bigger, broader shapes that define the form would work better, especially as the mountains reach more towards the horizon.

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