Ahh I love this story! I love Charlie and her point of view (reminds me of myself sometimes lol). Post more soon!

...Geez, the things that happen when a Patil and a McLaggen breed... o_0

Author's Response: I'm so glad you love the story! It makes me so happy to hear that-seriously, there's a huge grin all over my face right now. And I could not resist having a couple of Patil-McLaggen's!!
Courtney :)

Haha I really liked your "Scene of a Sexual Nature" - it was romantic and exciting while still classy and still fitting of the tone of the rest of the story. Bravo. :-)

Author's Response: Haha, thank you! That really does make me feel good. Awkward person that I am, I still think about it and inwardly go, "You wrote that?!?! Ugh." But all those words you've used to describe it are exactly what I hoped to achieve, so I'm thrilled! :)

Thank you so much for the review, and I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story as well!

Haha I absolutely loved this!! A sequel would be amazing if you're up for it!

Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad you liked it. I am trying to write a sequel but its difficult - I think I burned out the Sirius-Andy center in my brain hahah. But if I ever manage to get something decent down I'll definitely share it :)
Cheers!

Oh my gosh I would have written a review sooner but I kept having to move on to the next chapter! This is so good and so well written and I love all of the characters and you simply have to write more FAST!!!

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm so glad you liked the story and that you wanted to keep reading. I love stories that I feel that way about, so it's a compliment that you felt that way about Vital too. And don't worry, there's a new chapter in the queue as of Saturday, so it should be out any day now!

I'd love to hear more from you in the future! And thanks for this review :)