Thanks both, when I get back in front of my Mac I'll have a play with the crop again. as for the spot by the teddy, it's a sparkly thing on her PJ's.. I'll take that out too, now you've pointed it out it's getting to me.

I think the shot is great, shadowing looks great, and as dubaiphil pointed out, focus is spot-on and she's separated from the background nicely. I also agree with breadandbutterfly, I don't think she's lost in the picture, I think that without the crop it'd look better, but that's just personal opinion. I do like the color version over the B&W as well. Nice one