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Review:

CoCo says:Wow! You never cease to amaze me!! Your writing and your similies have matured and become so much deeper and more mysterious. You truly are an amazing writer and I look forward to the day I can be as good as you. The only thing I suggest you work on is the flow of your poetry. To a normal person, you sound great. But to a well versed poet it's a bit choppy. I like the repettive "mirror mirror" though, that sounds very good abu some of the stanzas don't fit your syllable patter so well. All in all another beautiful story and I hope you keep getting better!

Author's Response: Thank you!! Lol I love being able to post my writing like this because it shows my writing progression since I've started, you know? And to think that all this has only been posted within 8 months!!! Lol... And I happen to think that my writing has deepened, too. Fanfiction is a SUPER way to practice writing. None of the non-fanficcers believe me when I say that, but it's true!! But, omg thank you soooo much!! I feel honored to be looked up to by anyone, let alone the magnitude of people that admire my work.
If there's anything I can't stand about poetry, though, It's the meters and scales. To me, poetry is about expression of what you really feel and having famboyant disregard for rules as you do so. It's about feeling and passion, not meter and balance lol. Although balance in poetry is bloody lovely. I, also, liked the repitition of the poem.... All in all, thanks so much for your review!!!