Figures:> They're really creepy. Not sure if that was intentional, it's probably the poses and doll faces. > The shading is really nice and gradual, I really like it. > I like how the dolls are two different shapes as well.> The curly hair on the one doll is so cute.

Construct:> The thing at the top. Is it smiling? A nose? A mustache? I can't really tell, it looks somewhat like a cat version of Hitler or Charlie to me. > I like the mixed media, the wood and lace especially. > I can't really make out what's behind the red and white fabric. Is it supposed to be something?

Overall: > It'd be nice if you rotated the picture before uploading. > This is pretty cool but creepy. Like something from a movie.

First, I just want to let you know how creative this piece is. I love how you use different elements, like string, lace, and brick. I also like the originality of this artwork.

I think your presentation is lacking though. The picture is clearly sideways, which shows you didn't put a lot of effort in its appearance online. Also, you put this under the "miniatures" category. From the picture, I can't tell it's size. Finally, tell us more! What happened in school that made you create this? What does it depict?

Next time, I recommend you focus on the online process. When taking the picture, make sure to include a penny or button so we know the size. Once on the computer, make sure it's facing up and the subject is clear. And take the message underneath seriously! Tell us the what, the why, and anything else you think is important.