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Lunaverse story. Trixie, Pokey and Raindrops investigate strange fires occuring all around Ponyville. Meanwhile, Corona unleashes one of her minion on the world to get her revenge on the Elements. Could the two events be related? ·Fizzy Orange

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With no other options left, Trixie takes a job on Humble Pie's rock farm. It's bad enough that she's been reduced to manual labor, but the longer she spends with Humble, the odder he seems to become. ·xjuggernaughtx

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This story takes place in The Lunaverse. After the events of Longest Night, Longest Day, Trixie's house has been destroyed by rioting ponies, so now she must seek out the help of her friends to find a place to stay until her place can be fixed. Hilarity ensues.

Now, I'm sorry but I must break character (from myself) and correct what both you, RK_Striker and Emeral somehow missed.

wondering if the Universe had planned this

Don't you mean the Lunaverse? Okay, that's one's a joke. Now for the seriousless stupid actual corrections.

I wouldn't be able to look myself in the mirror if I did that"

I think there's a quote mark missing at the start. And an 'at' in the middle.

praying to Luna herself that would not have to

- 'that she would not have to'

'Cheerilee was right She DOES have a strong command of the Equestrian tongue...'

missing punctuation of some sort after "right"

Raindrops house

Add an apostrophe for possession

"Snips in gonna be SO jealous!"

Snips in? Snips is.

Wow. I never expected to actually do correcting for anything here (as in FiMFiction in general), no matter how much I saw. I guess stuff like the thousand instances of 'drug' instead of 'dragged' finally drove me over the edge required for proofing.

([not to you specifically, just need to vent this] I don't care if 'drug' is what you learned to use in school, I don't care how many teachers tell you that you should use it. It's wrong. You're supposed to use dragged.)

Including not capitalizing names, or the beginning of sentences? And the 'Fifth time's a charm' the end " marks, where are the beginning ones supposed to be? But the lines though, I can get that ... one of those weird artistic license with paragraphs that I see every now and then.