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BKL8008 says:Another exciting thrill ride, and the introduction of Seeing is great. The subtlety with which the relationship between father and son, disintegrated, is handled is wonderful in this aspect - you don't need to shout it out or have a confrontation. It's all right there, in one sentence. Again, Excellent!

Author's Response: His lack of a relationship with his father is something he's known for a long time, something he's now beginning to accept, so it seemed better if showing that was just that one moment of clarity rather than this big announcement type thing where he goes into detail about how and why. I'm glad you liked that. :)

Seeing, yes. It had to come up soon for the chapters, especially chapter four. :D