Fiu... I've been searching forever for a decent Mai/Mikoto fic! Glad I finally found one...

The both of your chapters were okay, even though pretty short. I like the plot, and even though Mikoto obviously matured, she's till her hyper self... Hope she hasn't changed too much, I'm not fond at all of OOCness (unless it's parody, but your fic isn't one).

It looks like you usually update fast... Then again, it was partly because you were trying to be the tousandth... Sorry you failed. I still hope you won't give that story up.

this chapter was too short and i want mai/mikoto. i almost miss the playfulness and hyperness in mikoto's character. but then again her seriousness is so cool, cute and new to me! i wonder how she's going to act around mai when she comes.

bigtomato chapter 2 . 2/19/2008

*cries* Where's Mai? I need my Mai fix! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! It's good to see a Mikoto centric fiction!

Whew, so many distractions! I've been trying to read this since it was updated! So, that was interesting! Hehe wonder where mikoto is going to? haha, and she's still hungy. xD Luv the chapter and it's making me very eager for the next! Keep it up and take ur time in updating. _

Hehe, ur ending notes r funny. xD Anyway, it's pretty good so far! I'm wondering how Mai will get into the picture and it looks like Mikoto has a new name. Interesting. I'm look'n forward to more naomi-chan~! I'll wait patiently, of course. XD