Saturday, April 29, 2006

Take a short poem or stanza (or piece of a song) that is unfamiliar. (He suggests about 30 words.) Make a list of all the words. (If you're clever with word processors you can do a global replace of all the spaces with carriage returns to make a list.) He suggests alphabetizing. It might be more fun to cut the words up so you can shuffle them around easily. Then each person tries to recreate the poem. (Or make up an even better one!)

The idea of the cinquain (and haiku) have inspired a lot of forms! I think the limitations and the compactness must have an appeal. When you look at the simplicity of the patterns it gives you the feeling "I could do that!"

The line length is the only firm rule, but there are other guidelines that people have tried to impose from time to time.

Write about a noun. Cinquains generally fail if you try to make them about emotions, philosophies or other complex subjects. They should be about something concrete.

Don’t try to make each line complete or express a single thought. Each line should flow into the next or the poem will sound static.

Cinquains work best if you avoid adjectives and adverbs. This doesn’t mean you can’t have any, but focus on the nouns and the verbs. This almost always works best in a cinquain.

The poem should build toward a climax. The last line should serve as some sort of conclusion to the earlier thoughts. Often, the conclusion has some sort of surprise built into it.

Write in iambs (Two syllable groupings in which the first syllable is unstressed and the second syllable stressed. For Example: i DRANK she SMILED we TALKED i THOUGHT) For the last line of the cinquain, however, both syllables should be stressed, NICE BAR.

There are more patterns and examples at Cinquain Poems. (The 3rd pattern is the traditional one.)

Cinquains are 5 line poems with a strict syllable count inspired by haiku. As I've mentioned before, I like rules! But rather than going right to the real rules of the Cinquain as the rule-follower in me wants, I'll begin with the much easier:

Sunday, April 23, 2006

Saturday, April 22, 2006

This week pay attention to smells in your notebooks. Fresh bread. New mown grass. Rain after a long dry spell.

This will be trickier! We tend to pay even less attention to smells than to sounds. Again, no suggestions this week. Pay attention to anything and everything. Just close your eyes and breathe in for a few minutes wherever you are.

Make a haiku generator. Stack 5 haiku on top of one another, staple then slice the pages between the lines. Then you can mix and match the lines of the poems to make a total of 125 haiku.

You can write your own 5 haiku (there's some of Basho's below to choose from if you want). When you print them out make sure you leave enough room between the lines to cut.

You can choose or write any haiku but if the corresponding lines of each are grammatically similar, that is, all first lines are noun phrases, then they'll all mix and match, at least grammatically! (Not all of the haiku below match each other grammatically.)

This idea comes from Queneau ... at Rhizome. It, in turn, comes from an idea by Raymond Queneau who wrote a book of 10 sonnets (14 lines each) that were grammatically similar so that lines could be mixed and matched freely to form 100,000,000,000,000 poems!

It will give you lists of words grouped by syllables. Choose a word from each of the groupings of syllables that "go" together: they might suggest a story, a commentary, or be a collection of nice images and sounds. (If you see a better word than the one you began the search with, by all means abandon the original and grab the new one.)

Not all words will turn up a good set of rhymes. And sometimes Rhymezone can be a bit quirky about what words it wants to give you rhymes for.

Here's an example:

detention cellalarm bellrebelyell

(Of course you can also turn the exercise on its head and go from a single syllable to multiple syllable word or phrase.)

Feel free to use your own words but here's some words that have a decent number of multiple syllable rhymes:

thrillcreephellbloombooripdawn

(Spawn includes dawn among the words that rhyme with it but for some reason gives more rhymes than dawn. -- Though perhaps too many! -- Rhymezone, as I said, can be quirky.)

Write 2 rhyming couplets that poke gentle fun at a well known person or character and you've got a clerihew. They're like mini-biographies.

There are a few rules for clerihews:

The first line has the person's name in it.

They're 4 lines long.

Lines 1&2 rhyme and lines 3&4 rhyme.

It should be gently funny.

Pick one or a few (or come up with your own, of course):

Harry Potter

Hermione Granger

Obi Wan Kenobi

Vlad the Impaler

Cinderella

Captain Kirk

Veronica Mars

Buffy Sommers

They're short. They're funny. They should be more popular! I tried to find some clerihew examples of contemporary people or characters but there just wasn't that much :-/ But here's some about some people and characters you may recognize.

Sunday, April 16, 2006

Saturday, April 15, 2006

This week pay attention to sounds in your notebooks. No suggestions this week since we tend to filter out what we hear so sound is not as overwhelming as what we see. Pay attention to anything and everything. Just close your eyes and listen for a few minutes wherever you are.

(There is more about writers' notebooks if you click the link in the category list to the right.)

Locations: This is a a city where your wealth, social standing and everything is decided by the society of prohecy who keep the rich, rich and poor, poor.

Character: A voice as supple as silk, a face hidden in the shadows of a hood, yet the words she speaks are colder than the grave and burn more furiously than any inferno.

Plots: At the base of the Cyllerean Mountains a small coven of witches has laired where once was a Temple of Good.

Systems: The Way of the Many - One spellcaster cannot achieve very much, but many minds can. Like insects, spellcasters are at their most formidable when they are united.

Item: The Tome of Life - Book with initially blank pages which records the life of the holder from the time it is picked up to the day someone else picks it up, at which point it starts again as blank pages.

Story Generator at TVTropes
Generate Setting, Plot, Narrative device, Hero, Villain, Character as device, Characterization device. A massive site you can lose several hours of your life to. It's a user generated compilation of tropes, eg, recurring character types, plot devices and so forth. It can be confusing at first, but check out your favorite movie and start reading through the tropes in contains and you'll get it.

Thursday, April 13, 2006

In simple terms, Karma in Hindu belief is a sum of everything you've done, are doing and will do. Past deeds create the present and future.

Basically it's cause and effect for lives.

If your life is the effect, what was the cause? What things did you do in a past life that caused your present life?

Feel free to embellish your life or make up a character. If you make up a character, stretch yourself and try to avoid the extremes. It would be very easy to picture a miserable life lived by someone who had been a bad person in a previous life. But what about a person who's life is neither blissful nor hellish? What did Harry Potter do in a previous life? Squidward? Indiana Jones? Marty McFly?

So much to read about so few syllables! If you really get into haiku, here's an essay written by Jane Reichhold, the author of the Aha! Poetry website, called Haiku Techniques. She lists a lot of techniques/approaches to haiku that might give you a place to get started.

The Technique of Comparison - In the words of Betty Drevniok: "In haiku the SOMETHING and the SOMETHING ELSE are set down together in clearly stated images. Together they complete and fulfill each other as ONE PARTICULAR EVENT." She rather leaves the reader to understand that the idea of comparison is showing how two different things are similar or share similar aspects.a spring napdownstream cherry treesin bud

What is expressed, but not said, is the thought that buds on a tree can be compared to flowers taking a nap. One could also ask to what other images could cherry buds be compared? A long list of items can form in one's mind and be substituted for the first line. Or one can turn the idea around and ask what in the spring landscape can be compared to a nap without naming things that close their eyes to sleep. By changing either of these images one can come up with one's own haiku while getting a new appreciation and awareness of comparison.

The Technique of Contrast - Now the job feels easier. All one has to do is to contrast images.

long hard rainhanging in the willowstender new leaves

The delight from this technique is the excitement that opposites creates. You have instant built-in interest in the most common haiku 'moment'. And yet most of the surprises of life are the contrasts, and therefore this technique is a major one for haiku.

She goes on to describe and give examples for each of the following techniques:

Tuesday, April 11, 2006

I really like haiku. They seem to offer so much in such a small package.

Haiku is a short Japanese poem of that captures a moment of nature, like a snapshot. They are 3 lines and 6-10 words (in English translations, 17 syllables in Japanese).

Haiku are two observations about nature and a third line that ties them together creating an "Ah!" moment. Here's 3 by Basho, sort of the father of haiku (even though he never wrote haiku!)

Temple bells die out.The fragrant blossoms remain.A perfect evening!

~ oOo ~old pond --frog jumps insound of the water

~ oOo ~

wild sea --lying over Sado islandthe galaxy

The best way to learn to write haiku is by reading it. They're short. They're often amusing. Basho is a great place to begin because he saw the humor in nature.

And then go out in nature and write.

BTW, there's a related form, senryu, that has the same structure as haiku but pokes fun at human nature.More

nature captured!a moment in timehaiku

That's in the form of a haiku but not a haiku -- because it's not about nature!

Here's the basic form:

nature image --nature imageah!

(The -- is a pause or break usually written in English as a -- or ! at the end of the 1st or 2nd line.)

For those who like to know the real rules I've adapted these from the Haiku book mentioned below.

3 lines of 6-10 words (but, in English, not necessarily 17 syllables)In Japanese, haiku have 17 syllables written (in English) in 3 lines of 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables. I like rules :-) And 17 syllables arranged in a precise order appeals to the mathematician in me. But Patricia Donegan in Haiku, a children's book about haiku, made a very good point about those 17 syllables. She explains that in Japanese 17 syllables is about 6 words. But in English, 17 syllables is about 12. If you try to write haiku with 17 English syllables it's going to be too bulky. So she suggests 3 lines with 6-10 words total.

ImagePaint an image, capture a moment. It should be descriptive and appeal to the senses (sight, hearing, smell, taste, touch).

Season word (kigo)The first or second line should contain a word relating to the season to help the reader paint a more accurate picture. (There are lists of Kigo course! But you don't need to limit yourself. They can be helpful to get you thinking if your brain gets stalled trying to think what words could represent a season.)

Here and nowImmediacy. Write about the present moment or a memory, not something you imagine.

FeelingDon't explain or tell. Show a feeling through an image. Like:

cold rain --tiny frog sitswrapped in mist

Does it feel lonely? Yet it doesn't need to tell you the frog is lonely. The words paint that impression.

SurpriseThere should be an "Ah!" moment, a surprising insight often about an ordinary event that wakes you up.

16 words of each of the 5 senses (80 words in all). Words that evoke a sense to you. They can be poetic like "birdsong" for hearing, "dessicated" for touch.

10 words of motion. Not necessarily verbs! Just words that to you bring feelings of motion, like wind, race car.

3 abstractions. Love, freedom, truth ...

7 anything else.

All the words must have:

significance to you

be specific (eg, robin is better than bird.)

sound good to you. (Did I mention to you enough? ;-))

Also:

No adverbs. (Perhaps to encourage strong verbs. But why allow adjectives? Not sure.)

No plurals.

Write your favorites on index cards (as suggested in the exercise) or on popsicle sticks (which I've done for other similar prompts) or business size cards (as suggested by someone else). Whatever feels right to you.

Draw words randomly and use them as a story prompt or to create the skeleton of a poem or to spark to a piece that you're stuck on.

Take out old words and add new words occasionally. You can even recreate the whole deck from scratch every once in a while.

If Rhymer gives you an overwhelming number of rhymes try choosing "Last syllable rhymes" or "Double rhymes" from the drop down menu. (Annoyingly, you need to type the word into the search box again.)

Rhymezone returns fewer rhymes (which can be a good thing!) but it offered no rhymes for vampire, nor, when I realized it also rhymed, for empire. It turned up stuff for expire but *I* shouldn't be the one coming up with the rhymes!

Prose writers can be as conscious of what sounds go together and the pictures they paint as poets are.

Use the words below as Lewis Carroll did in Jabberwocky, interspersing them with real words. You don't need to write a poem (but you can if you want!) You can use them in a story. Don't try to use all the words! Pick and choose the ones that sound good to you. Add endings as needed (eg., -ly to make adverbs, -ed or -ing or whatever necessary to make the right tense verb.)

Rather than pay attention to the beginning sounds as in alliteration or the ending sounds as in rhyme, listen to the sounds inside the words. For instance bimarian misqueme sounds better than pication misqueme because the "m"s in the first echo each other but pication would go with something with a "k" or "g" sound (they're both said at the back of the throat) or strong "a" sound (well, assuming you're pronouncing it as piCAYshun! If you've come up with a different pronunciation it might go with something else better.)

MoreThere's a physical reason why some sounds go together. With practice you'll just unconsciously feel that sounds using the same part of the mouth seem to go together. But I like lists so I'll include the list from the exercise. If you pay attention to where your tongue is, or what part of your mouth you're using or whether your nose is involved when you say the following letters, you'll see why they're listed together.

The oca moaned all night in the dumpamong cars rhonchused, cankered withthe maravedi dust. Dextraningpavvidly in moonlight itwoke neighbors who umbled tectumlydown to the pit with guns and baseball bats,a saccade crowd bent on murder.

She says: "To break this down a bit: oca and moaned are paired for their "o" sound; night picks up the nasals in moaned and dump. In the next line the nasals of among match with the "on" of rhonchused and the "n" in cankered. "C" marches through the line from cars to rhonchused to cankered."

Sunday, April 02, 2006

Saturday, April 01, 2006

As sort of a wrap up to a month of character questions, speculate on who the people are around you at the grocery store, in the car next to you, in the coffee shop ...

Why are they here?What brought them to this place?

Is the woman pushing a cart an international spy?Is the couple at the corner table travelers from the future?Is the bland looking man actually a superhero?Is the too quiet child contemplating world domination?

I saw this idea in the book Poemcrazy by Susan Goldsmith Wooldridge a poet and wordlover. Reading Poemcrazy will make you want to dabble with words and poetry even if you think you don't like poetry. (Which I can say because I think I don't like poetry ;-))

How toCut up paint chip samples keeping the color name. (The color names are often very cool.) Write a word or a phrase on each. Use permanent marker or gel pens (milky gels for the dark paint samples) or metallic markers or paint markers or stamps. Cut -- or tear -- words from magazines (or printouts) and paste them on. The paint chip samples will get swirled around in a bowl and shuffled about in pockets so keep that in mind if you feel the need to add embellishments.

Then whatKeep them in a bowl or a hat or an old shoe. Keep a handful in your pocket or purse. Keep some blank ones too to jot down words and phrases that strike you as you come across them. (It helps to shake them up in a grocery bag once in a while since they aren't slick and tend to clump together.) Draw them out in pairs and triples and see where the serendipitous connections take you. Get a handful and turn them into a poem. Or a story prompt. Put them around the house randomly against and within objects. Paste them on Art Trading Cards.

WhereYou can find words and phrases anywhere but I found the ideas and words in the book inspiring so here's some ideas if you need a jumpstart.

Poetry books - even -- or maybe especially! -- if you don't like poetry. Poets love words so they've already done the filtering for you. Look in poems for words and phrases that make you pause.

Maps - Wamphray, Blinkbonny, Scrishve, Cambus-puttock ...

Road signs - out of context "one way", "no turns", "soft shoulder" take on new meanings.

Opposites to include the darkness with the light.Angel and devil, spring peepers and zombies, light and extinguish, benevolent and malevolent, somewhere and nowhere, destruction and happy-kitty-bunny-pony (which is the title of a book described as "a saccharine mouthful of super cute".

Things that work less well: people's names and familiar places because they're too specific. Brad Pitt will just be Brad Pitt and Harry Potter will be Harry Potter though brad -- pit or hairy -- potter or (Peter) may -- hew may not be. Sweden will be Sweden though Skrinklehaven (Wales) can be whatever you imagine.

Serendipitously I ordered several poetry books last month from the library to work some poetic prompts in beginning in April. Turns out April is National Poetry Month and I didn't know it.

Try your hand at "tabloid poetry". Some suggestions are:

Look for headlines that have a theme: space aliens, Elvis, animals, etc. (If you need more headlines than the 10 in the April list down below, check at The City Newsstand where they go back to 1998.)

Print out your favorites, cut them up and shuffle them around into groups that seem to go together. Try grouping them in 3s and then write a 4th line that comments or expands on the 3 previous. If you're using just this month's headlines, create 3 groups of 3 lines, add a 4th line to each group then, if you can, use the 10th headline as part of a two line summary.

It doesn't need to rhyme!

Don't be afraid to change the titles a bit to make them flow better.

Take some of the shorter lines and turn them into rhyming couplets:

"Elvis Sighted in Wax Museum" could turn into:

Just as I visited his mausoleumElvis was sighted in a wax museum.

That was inspired (as well as dictated) by RhymeZone's revelation that there were very few words that rhyme with museum!

Don't be afraid to throw in some extra words or take some out in order to give it a better or different rhythm.

"Shaquille O'Neal's Parents Are Pygmies" actually has sort of the rhythm of a limerick if I'm getting my stress syllables right:

Shaquille O'Neal's Parents were Pygmies.They stuffed their small son with big berries.He grew really tall,While they remained small.Now Shaq's parents are as tall as his pinkies.

Not bad! There's something off in the rhythm of the second line so it could use some work. (And according to RhymeZone pygmies doesn't have any "perfect rhymes", that is, nothing rhymes with "mies" only with "ies".)

APRIL

NUNFIGHT AT THE O.K. CHAPEL — WWN

LAWYER SHEDS HIS SKIN — THREE TIMES A YEAR! — WWN

SLEEP EXPERT CAN DESCRIBE A PERSON PERFECTLY JUST BY HEARING THEM SNORE! — WWN

PROM KING AND QUEEN SEEK U.N. RECOGNITION OF THEIR OWN COUNTRY...PROMVANIA! — WWN

There are some more ideas by Bruce Lansky at his website Gigglepoetry.

Above all have fun while you play with words!

(The list of top 10 tabloid headlines was, as usual, compiled by The City Newsstand, a newsstand in Chicago. (The lists there go back to Jan 1998.) (It says they're mostly from Weekly World News (WWN) and the SUN.)