Thank you so much for requesting a reviw from me! I apolagise for it being so late - RL has got a bit hectic lately!

I loved this first chapter - you instantly had me hooked. Millie is a really interesting OC, I really took to her. Her first few lines with Lily were brilliant. I'm guessing we've got more to find out about her character. The dream and Lily mentioned somthing about a bad summer. You have me very intrigued! Lily was a bit bossy but I liked the way her and Millie interacted with each other. The last line was great - 'Honey, even you can't get me Batman'

Your Sirius and James were great! James to start with coming off quite mature - as is expected as they go into their final year. James and Sirius together were really great and worked well of each other. I loved the fact James was so concerned about his seeker. Sirius seems very set on Millie though - looks like the start of something good!

Overall the story flowed really well and had me laughing quite a lot. I really hope you re-request as I really enjoyed it!