pedos and galileo in the same reference is beyond stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!! — unknown

LOL. — unknown

There are a few phrases/images that I enjoy here but the word "badness" and the galileo stanza definitely need to go. Both left a bad taste in my mouth and not in the good wow-that's-some-vivid-pain kind of way, just bad. To be kind, I won't rate this.

The title and the last 4 lines though - perfect - nice enough that you could condense this to 24 lines ending with those 4 and you'd have a clean work of art. — nakedowl