I loved this! It has a smooth rhythm that just carries me away. You've expressed love in a very expressive way, and most people can relate to this. Nicely done! Makes me jealous cause I've been havin this blasted writer's block, and nothing I write is nowhere as good as this. Now I'm kind of tempted to write something, but I know that I'll get stuck...so I'll just read some more of your poems. awesome work!