You need to work on the rhythm a lot more as well. You're ahead of the beat on a lot of it and parts of it are just plain out of time. I think you're probably pushing yourself physically to do it a lot so you're rushing it a bit; even when he was playing fast Dimebag had a pretty relaxed feel to his playing; slightly behind the beat to give it more groove. Concentrate on getting the rhythm work right first before the lead - it's much more important.

The solo was terrible but you know that.

R.I.P. My Signature. Lost to us in the great Signature Massacre of 2014.

You need to work on the rhythm a lot more as well. You're ahead of the beat on a lot of it and parts of it are just plain out of time. I think you're probably pushing yourself physically to do it a lot so you're rushing it a bit; even when he was playing fast Dimebag had a pretty relaxed feel to his playing; slightly behind the beat to give it more groove. Concentrate on getting the rhythm work right first before the lead - it's much more important.