This is where you guys maybe able to help me out; my broad Geordie scratch track reading of it is horrid (see above) so looking for alternatives to my own.

Simple though it may be, here is the Crotchets' Ghost Train poem.

Crotchet the Ghost Train owner was always unpleasedHis Train was not scarey - the kids did not scream.He tried spiders on stringsand ghouls in bed sheets.Yet the children just laughedunscared in their seats.In a moment of madness he tied a rope to the backand stood in the darknessfor the traindown track.Tormented by laughterHe wept silently in pain -still stood in the darknessawaiting the train.As it came ever closer it took the ropes slack -A noose around his neckthere was no going back."This is not scarey"the children all said.Not knowing of whatlay in wait up ahead.The train jerked to a stop with an eery bell ring -the children all screamingto see Crotchets feet swing.They ran from the ride -all frightened an weary.Now Crotchets Ghost TrainWILL ALWAYS BE SCAREY.

Re: Crotchets' Ghost Train

This is just an update.

My goal of a Halloween release has passed. Yes, I let it slide. I so wanted it to be done and a million excuses I can give here (I've been super unhappy with the sets I've built) but I'd rather not. I haven't lost a bit of love for this project. It will be done. I think I underestimated how much what my minds eye wanted and the effort and time frame I set myself to achieve it . As much as I could have hammered it out... I would have been ultimately unhappy with it.