please can what need to be changed

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Compare too Lesley was living independently, her life was not institutional, yet her family treated her has individual; also she was allow to live on her own in the community with her family support and other support from outside.

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Compare too Lesley was living independently, her life was not institutional, yet her family treated her has individual; also she was allow to live on her own in the community with her family support and other support from outside.