The animation and the humor were both lacking. Perhaps you should shoot your jokes past some other people and get some feedback before animating them. This flash was really without direction. Both the art and the animation really felt lazy, I think you could have done a much better job on all accounts. Good luck on your next submission.

This wasn't really that good. The animation was mediocre at best, although I will admit the voice work was pretty good. The joke didn't cross me as being that funny, though I guess it was pretty original at least.