Minor deviations, nothing big, but it makes more sense for Negi to move out. It IS a girl's room, after all. Rather interesting chapter overall, and it seems that the good stuff is about to come! Also, your disclaimers are way too long.

Oh my gosh I feel like I watching the anime but it's better than the anime! I know it's been a while and you may or may not still be continuing this but please please pelase update I really love this story it's probably the best negima fanfiction I've come across so please make another chapter

Is the nail that someone fused the Dresden Files into Negima? :3 I like this story.

RandomReview chapter 8 . 4/28/2014

Can't believe I missed this one. So far the plot is interesting, but the updates are a bit lacking. Do you still have plans on updating/finishing this story in the future or is this all we're going to get? Which would be a shame since it's rather slim pickings getting a badass teen Negi story...oh well best of luck to you.