Awesome story! You need to write more though. It's a complete and total Hermy/Ron love story.

Reviewer: Joanna

Date: 2003-12-27

Reviewid: 64907

Chapter: 1

That was sooo sweet! I hope that you will write more in the future. I really enjoyed this a lot.

~Joanna

Reviewer: Hermione Granger

Date: 2003-11-23

Reviewid: 60600

Chapter: 2

Very good! You sound like a wonderful writer! You're very artistic! ~H.G~

Reviewer: Veritaserum

Date: 2003-11-15

Reviewid: 60095

Chapter: 2

Fantastically fluffy!

Reviewer: miss_lily_lupin

Date: 2003-11-15

Reviewid: 60075

Chapter: 2

Loads of fluffiness! I love it! I say, "Bring on the H/G, now!" *grins*

Reviewer: Allie

Date: 2003-11-14

Reviewid: 59939

Chapter: 2

I love it write me more !!! If ya got any etra exciting work e-mial it to me!!! omg i want to no what happens next a.s.a.p!!

Reviewer: Polina

Date: 2003-11-12

Reviewid: 59864

Chapter: 2

Great story! I especially liked the way you captured Hermione's bewilderment in the first chapter - it made me smile!

My favorite part:"Well, would you want me to tell you or just walk up to you in the corridor and kiss you?" Ron asked, continuing to be oblivious to Hermione's struggle, which she was quite visibly losing.

"The latter, I think," she said before she could stop herself. "No. Wait. That's ridiculous. Forget it." Hermione had suddenly gone very red and flustered...

:)

Reviewer: line

Date: 2003-11-12

Reviewid: 59835

Chapter: 2

He, he... he past out? ... He, he...Great fanfiction :D-Line

Reviewer: beck

Date: 2003-11-12

Reviewid: 59819

Chapter: 2

love the end of this chapter it is so perfect "Would you , I mean as corny as it sounds, would you be my girlfriend?" so great love it hope you write more maybe you should have a harry revalation about ginny any way love the story great writting hope you write more

Reviewer: Marsha

Date: 2003-11-12

Reviewid: 59813

Chapter: 2

Fluffy, yes but beautifully done. And I for one think fluffy is great. Please write more

Reviewer: L

Date: 2003-11-12

Reviewid: 59800

Chapter: 2

aw...and I love the last line!! It's so cute!!

Reviewer: Fawkes101

Date: 2003-11-11

Reviewid: 59722

Chapter: 2

I'm so glad you updated! Amazing ending to a brilliant fic! :) I loved the last line: "Ron barely had enough time to realise just how lucky he was before he was lost in the intensity of the moment and the purity of young love." That just summed everything up for me. Excellent job!

Reviewer: Myster web

Date: 2003-11-11

Reviewid: 59706

Chapter: 2

Very well done! You have a talent that will leave many in the dust. Please give us more!Favorite line:The proper response when someone kisses you is to kiss them back. But not Ron Weasley - oh no, he had to be a complete moron and pass out.

Reviewer: Don

Date: 2003-11-11

Reviewid: 59688

Chapter: 2

Very sweet! That is a nice finish to the story. I like the idea that they are both shy around each other. I like this line:>>"You know I'm a git, right?" Ron asked, breaking the silence. <<Well Done!

Reviewer: sheila plickney

Date: 2003-11-10

Reviewid: 59631

Chapter: 2

i like it.

Reviewer: Sallyna

Date: 2003-10-21

Reviewid: 57327

Chapter: 1

Say you will continue!

Reviewer: HeatherK

Date: 2003-10-20

Reviewid: 57139

Chapter: 1

Hhmmm I think this is just a little too much insight for ron. But so far it's a cute story!

Reviewer: Incurable Romantic

Date: 2003-10-20

Reviewid: 57131

Chapter: 1

Adorable!

Reviewer: Hannah

Date: 2003-10-20

Reviewid: 57126

Chapter: 1

'Say I liked this girl...' Oldest line in the book, but oh such a goodie!One thing though... you make it all straight forward and Ron and Hermione-ish, then chuck a word like intoxicating in at the end... a word that doesn't spring to mind as a word that would spring to mind for either Ron or Hermione. Do you get what I mean?

Reviewer: Alanna

Date: 2003-10-20

Reviewid: 57112

Chapter: 1

You're so evil. Need more NOW!!!

Reviewer: Sarah

Date: 2003-10-20

Reviewid: 57103

Chapter: 1

Fabulous start! I liked how Ron got out of cleaning.. very Ron.. heh heh. Can't wait to read what comes next!Sarah :0)

Reviewer: DemonAngi

Date: 2003-10-20

Reviewid: 57090

Chapter: 1

AWWW … You totally changed the whistling potion to a cleaning potion! Very good, that way you can follow the “Summer after” Rule :o) (I read it on FanFiction.net) Anyways, I absolutely love this story and cant wait till you update again soon ~Angi

Reviewer: s

Date: 2003-10-19

Reviewid: 57074

Chapter: 1

Great! That's really wonderful-not at all like the 'Oh, ronnie, I'm so in love with you' junk. Great! Superb! Keep writing!

Reviewer: _LadyAlli_

Date: 2003-10-19

Reviewid: 57060

Chapter: 1

::grins:: That was WONDERFUL! Your one of my top R/H fics..and trust me I've read hundreds!

Reviewer: Hryptrfn89

Date: 2003-10-19

Reviewid: 57059

Chapter: 1

Wow. I can't wait to hear more of this story! Keep on writing,I'm enjoying it!!!~Hryptrfn89

Reviewer: Kris

Date: 2003-10-19

Reviewid: 57051

Chapter: 1

oh that was cute!

Reviewer: emmeline

Date: 2003-10-19

Reviewid: 57030

Chapter: 1

That was really great! Keep it coming...I need more!Who did Ron actually have in mind though? I can't ever imagine him being able to talk to Hermione about someone else...he's too head-over-heels in love with her! Well that's what *I* think anyway! I thought Ron would be more awkward, that's all.

Reviewer: marsha

Date: 2003-10-19

Reviewid: 57026

Chapter: 1

great start - would love more.

Reviewer: Meianh

Date: 2003-10-18

Reviewid: 57005

Chapter: 1

It was great!!! PLEASE write more!!!

Reviewer: Jada

Date: 2003-10-18

Reviewid: 56964

Chapter: 1

Sweet! So very, very sweet! I liked it a lot! Thanks for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: - - -

Date: 2003-10-18

Reviewid: 56941

Chapter: 1

i luved it!CUTE!!!

Reviewer: Alice

Date: 2003-10-18

Reviewid: 56910

Chapter: 1

lol! lol!

Reviewer: dinka

Date: 2003-10-18

Reviewid: 56876

Chapter: 1

lololololthat was really funny. very cute, I'd love to read more.though I can't imagine Ron asking Hermione a question like that with a straight face. :o)

great story

Reviewer: BaileyMac

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56860

Chapter: 1

Woohoo!!!! What happens next? What happens next??!!!!

Reviewer: Audrey

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56855

Chapter: 1

I've read stories that have made me cry, laugh, and gasp. This, however, is the first story that has made me shriek "Oh my GOD!" at the end of it. And it's only the first chapter! I can't wait until you update!

Reviewer: R1&R2

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56841

Chapter: 1

That was cute but too quick!

Reviewer: Fawkes101

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56839

Chapter: 1

Yeah for Hermione! Very brave! I liked that she kissed him first. Brilliant start. I do hope you continue it soon! :)

Reviewer: Arnel

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56830

Chapter: 1

What fun! I can just see Ron stammering around, trying to figure out how to nervously say what’s on his mind. And leave it to Hermione to turn the tables and just act. Great story. I hope there’s more to it.

Reviewer: Teresa

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56825

Chapter: 1

oh that was so excellent! "I said hypothetically." GOd i love ron.. so very in character and perfectly written. PLease say you're writing more, pretty please?

Reviewer: Leela

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56772

Chapter: 1

Argh! Not fair to end it there! I was just getting going!Will there be more?

Reviewer: Meridun

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56753

Chapter: 1

Wow. You've actually hit upon a plotline here that I don't think I've actually seen before in some permutation, and written a very nice vignette around it. It's nice, cute, seems very in-character thus far, and is just very enjoyable to read.

I look forward to seeing how this turns out and hope that you're able to keep up such an excellent combination of dialogue and characterization that made this so good.

Reviewer: Buckbeaky

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56748

Chapter: 1

Aww, very cute. Sequel? Hee.

Reviewer: miss_lily_lupin

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56745

Chapter: 1

Awwwwwww! Cute! Write more, PLEASE!

Reviewer: Don

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56738

Chapter: 1

Good job! I like the way they sort of stumble into the relationship. Very cute. I'm interested to see how you develop their relationship.

Reviewer: L

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56723

Chapter: 1

aw, that was cute!!

I love all these R/Hr's that have sprung up!

Reviewer: Azyne

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56705

Chapter: 1

"Ron felt his jaw tighten in anger; it was Tonks who had woken up Mrs. Black earlier, not him."

Loved this. Thoroughly describes Ron's temper.

I love this fluffiness! Woo hoo! Read my fics, too, pleeeaase.

Intoxicating, eh? ^.^

Reviewer: Kim

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56692

Chapter: 1

*word captain kathy hates* I love this

Reviewer: Muggle Molly

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56686

Chapter: 1

I love it. Can't ever get too much R/H fluff. Will there be any more?

Reviewer: LutheRon

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56681

Chapter: 1

Very cute!! Write more! Blessed Be!

Reviewer: Veritaserum

Date: 2003-10-17

Reviewid: 56678

Chapter: 1

Yay! Continue Continue! I love Ron and Hermione fluff!!!! Is this gunna be a summer thing or what? Oh I'm exzcited!

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