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Yeah i get to come online only in the weekends :\
College is killing me !

Spoiler:- Manga 442:

Really? 'Dirty Boots'? She does look like Yoruichi a little. And where's the Fullbring Transformation?!?! :O And that Tsukishima scene was funny. Getting sneezed on like that :P It made me think for 1 second he is okay.

finally, Eon and I are beginning our battle. Go check it out if you have time.
Eon already posted this

Originally Posted by Eon Master

And this battle is kind of cool, because it's two Bleach Club Captains going up against each other. That, and all of my Pokemon have Japanese names, while all of Kusari's have Norse names. So it's like a clash of the cultures as well xD

Last edited by kusari; 31st March 2011 at 11:17 PM.

PRETEND THERE IS A SIGNATURE HERE FULL OF WITTY JOKES AND CLAIMS TO FAME AND UNDESERVED BRAVADO AND SELF PROMOTION

Alright, to both new members, welcome, but avoid posting one liners/double posting.

Spoiler:- Bleach manga:

I'm still not sure what to think of these fullbringers...>> they're odd. really odd. I must say these 'dirty boots' or whatever are pretty awesome imo. I don't like this girl, but these things are pretty epic.

@Zameric... Ehh no they don't have the dubs on those sites. However you can purchase them for just $2 per episode, or rent an episode for just $1 on iTunes. Or buy a whole season. The price seems to vary for that but it's around $20-$30 per season.

I really dislike watching fan-uploaded content because it does not at all benefit the creators of the show. By watching on an official site, you support the creators by watching the ads or commercials. By buying, you obviously support them with your purchase. If you must watch the dub for free, just watch it on TV. You can always record it... That's what I do since I can't always stay up that late!

If you must watch the dub online, do it, but don't make a habit out of it. And watch the episode from an official site too. Just load it up in a background window some time and mute it. At least you're supporting them somehow.

This may all sound hypocritical and all, considering I read scanlations. But for me, I already subscribe to the American Shonen Jump magazine, so I'll end up getting the chapter eventually anyway... And obviously, I pay for the subscription. (I also buy the books when they're available as well.)

My point, support the industry. If you can't buy, watch ads and support them that way. My reasoning, if we the fans didn't support the creators, there would be no creations, and we would not have our anime.

I'm sorry that was probably a lot more than the simple yes/no you were asking for! LOL

I just wanted to say all that to everyone here, as a general "announcement" of sorts...

Anyway, um... I agree with you guys who are saying Bleach is similar of YYH... That's one of the (relatively) old anime I actually watched all the way through and enjoyed. LOL it's definitely similar in some aspects... But it's also pretty different too. XD

@cyndagirl OMG I LOVE 3RD PHANTOM!!! One of my all time favorite games, actually. =D I happen to love games with that particular type of gameplay... (Coincidentally, there happens to be a YYH game for the GBA that I have that has VERY similar mechanics and gameplay. Forgot what it was called though...)

...I made a LONG post. YAY!!!

Oh PS... New people... You should probably make yourselves aware that I can get very hyper at times... XD Many people here can attest to that!! XD

@Zameric... Ehh no they don't have the dubs on those sites. However you can purchase them for just $2 per episode, or rent an episode for just $1 on iTunes. Or buy a whole season. The price seems to vary for that but it's around $20-$30 per season.

I really dislike watching fan-uploaded content because it does not at all benefit the creators of the show. By watching on an official site, you support the creators by watching the ads or commercials. By buying, you obviously support them with your purchase. If you must watch the dub for free, just watch it on TV. You can always record it... That's what I do since I can't always stay up that late!

If you must watch the dub online, do it, but don't make a habit out of it. And watch the episode from an official site too. Just load it up in a background window some time and mute it. At least you're supporting them somehow.

This may all sound hypocritical and all, considering I read scanlations. But for me, I already subscribe to the American Shonen Jump magazine, so I'll end up getting the chapter eventually anyway... And obviously, I pay for the subscription. (I also buy the books when they're available as well.)

My point, support the industry. If you can't buy, watch ads and support them that way. My reasoning, if we the fans didn't support the creators, there would be no creations, and we would not have our anime.

I'm sorry that was probably a lot more than the simple yes/no you were asking for! LOL

I just wanted to say all that to everyone here, as a general "announcement" of sorts...

Anyway, um... I agree with you guys who are saying Bleach is similar of YYH... That's one of the (relatively) old anime I actually watched all the way through and enjoyed. LOL it's definitely similar in some aspects... But it's also pretty different too. XD

@cyndagirl OMG I LOVE 3RD PHANTOM!!! One of my all time favorite games, actually. =D I happen to love games with that particular type of gameplay... (Coincidentally, there happens to be a YYH game for the GBA that I have that has VERY similar mechanics and gameplay. Forgot what it was called though...)

...I made a LONG post. YAY!!!

Oh PS... New people... You should probably make yourselves aware that I can get very hyper at times... XD Many people here can attest to that!! XD

COOKIES.

oh I know the game, it was yu yu hakusho, tournament tactics^^
anyway, on 3rd phantom, rukia was always the easiest to max level, lol. I loved using momo^^

Welcome to the club.
I'm Captain of Squad 6, MC.
(Eon's former squad...)

@Kusari and Zam

It means weeks of psychological torment along with complex manipulation to aid in the advancement of a several over arching plans to bring about the downfall of all the obstacles in Ilp and Zam's way along with shifting power over to them. Thus they will have complete control of the club's science and political aspects, which fuels their true intentions of massive totalitarian rule.

It means you all played nice and talked about Bleach while i was gone, what else would it mean? :|

On the topic of supporting the release, I agree.

Great companies can go bottom up, without funding.
@Eon
So how was the club been? Anyone proved themselves worthy of respect?

Guys...tell me how this works for an zanpaktou moment...

Spoiler:- Zanpkatou Moment:

Unknown.

It was cold, the darkness made it impossible to see your own hand in front of your face. The place had no warmth at all, your own body heat making the contrast in temperatures more apparent. You notice that you can't feel anything, you can't even feel your own hand on your chest. You smell nothing and can't even feel your own heart beat. All you can hear is silence, not even the sound of your own breathing can be heard, you make the futile effort to make sense of your surroundings, but fail when you come to the crushing realization that all five of your senses have failed you.

This place you in is intangible, you can't see it with your eyes, smell the scent of existence with your nose, taste the flavor of air around you, or hear your own body work. You can't feel any sensation at all, you can't even tell if your awake or not, was this a dream at its most simplistic or a place beyond your comprehension that it destroyed your senses?

Eventually, you see two glowing spots, piercing the darkness with a violent glow of red, the same color of red that your blood resembled, you could feel it, it'd probably be running cold now.

Your mind, which was the only thing that was working in this place of darkness, becomes excited at the site, yet you can't feel your heat race or body sweat, you can't even tell if you even have a body in this place. The look into the spots, becoming mesmerized by the light coming from them.

Confusion, fear, excitement, despair, wonderment and awe all struggle for dominance in your mind. The more you look into the red lights, the more these emotions grow stronger. Desperate for answers as to what this place is, where is it and how you got there, all crying out to be answered in your mind.

You try to speak, but nothing comes from you. The feeling of anger and frustration mix your other emotions, all becoming too much to contain. Desperate for relief from this unknown nightmare, you hope that the lights can save you from this place. You hope and pray that something happens and yet at the same time, wish it would all end. If the lights were keeping you here, the desire to feel death's cold dark embrace into the afterlife became much more enticing.

The two red spots glowed so violently, that the entire area became engulfed with its blood curling light.
You feel nothing, not pain or pleasure or even relief from this, your entire being feels like its frozen and numb, trapped in place along with your emotions. You could compare it with the feeling of being dead, but that comparison would be hard to say with certainty, since you never been dead before...

As the light fades, you know find yourself in a place a pure white space, your senses work again and you can smell and taste plant-life. You still hear only silence, but you could say it was constantly being broken by the sound of your own breathing.

You hold you arms, seeing if you could truly feel again, but notice all the hair on them are missing. You look at your arms and notice they are completely smooth, like a doll, no bumps, bruises or marks. You look at your hands, smooth yet still bendable, no fingernails and the inside of your palm is completely smooth as well. You notice now that your arms have a faint glow and that your body feels...different.

You inspect yourself, you still had the hair on your head, yet no hair anywhere else on your body. Your body was completely smooth, from the eyes down to the toes. You had no toe nails either, your gender specific traits along with your behind has also vanished. Said area's showing no trace of said things ever being there.
Horrified at what happened to your body, you desperately want your old body back, scars and all and wanted to leave this nightmare of a place. You try to move but suddenly feel the sensation of chains constricting your movement. Panicking you see that your limbs are wrapped around in chains, soon your entire body is wrapped up, only your eyes are visible.

Fear dominating your thoughts and your body unable to fight back, desperately want to scream out at defiance to the chains and cry out for help. Your will to survive ignites your body into a furious motion of struggle, the messages your minds wants so desperately to let know in this world unable to be heard.

You feel the chains loosen and your body gaining the freedom to move, you feel relief, but the moment is short lived as your right shoulder is impaled by a large sword. Shocked, you look at it in awe, you felt no pain nor saw any blood. However, you did feel your emotions slowly calm down and fade away.

Another sword impales your stomach, it should have severed your spine in half, yet you felt yourself being set free from a prison. Your true inner-self, no one judging you no one to cast judgment on. No one to rely or depend on, no other existence but your own, confined by nothing.

You slowly start to wonder if this is what true freedom feels like, also if that means you lived your life before confined and constrained by something...

A another sword appears before you, floating right in-front of you, you can feel a strange aura radiating from it. As you reach out to touch it, a chain shoots through your hand, but unlike the other times, you felt every nerve and bone in your hand become torn and damaged. You try to scream out in pain, but still have no voice.

You now can barely feel your emotions now, but instead of feeling too emotionally numb for them, you feel as if you never hand said emotions in the first place. Your mind struggles with the fact it can understand the emotions, and experience the emotions, yet can't comprehend said emotions. You warily look at the sword, moving your other hand to grasp it. The chain in your hand begins to spin rapidly, drowning your body in waves of pain. You close your eyes tightly from it, and begin to see images of yourself with an emotion labeled over it.

All these emotions and more flash before your eyes the more you blink, the chain spins faster, burning the inside of your hand, overwhelmed you can't function very well if at all. The sword is still floating in front of you, the chain causing all your pain, the swords draining all your emotions, causing you to see them vanish every time you close your eyes, most would breakdown from this pressure and reside themselves to this unknown hell.

You call upon all the strength and willpower you have in your entire being and grasp the sword with your good hand. The aura surges through you and blinds you with a flash of blue light.

You find yourself in a building, the halls, the doors and the ceiling was pure white. You find yourself wearing clothes again in your own body. Against your will, you open a door and find a baby all by itself, silently gazing at you. The room was painted black with white blanket the baby was in contrasting against it. You pick up the baby and see upon closer inspection, it is yourself. Your taxed mind tries to process the new information but is unable to comprehend why this was happening or what finding your toddler self meant.

You now find yourself levitating over an ocean with no end in sight, the sky was a dark blue and the light reflected off the water made it look purplish, yet somehow clear. You now see your baby self smiling at you, you look at the water for a moment and see that you have no reflection and only the baby could be seen.

The baby vanishes as the water freezes over, a raging thunderstorm dancing in the sky. You land on the ice and feel the solidness of it under your feet. It dawns on you that even after all this has happened you still have no voice and can't feel any warmth or coldness from your surroundings.

Lightning crashes down from the sky and instantly melts the ice into nothingness, as more lightning strikes you see the icy ground you stood on become that empty darkness you came from. Desperate too escape from the fate, you run across the ice, nearly being struck by lightning at several points.

You see the sword wedged in the icy ground a few feet away from you, you rush over and try to pull it out, placing all your hope of survival on it. Lightning strikes you as you try to pull the sword, your body unable the process the new sensation and mind unable to comprehend what was happening, manage to pull out the sword and screamed...

Hitsuki has lived in a ruined tower deep in Hueco Mundo, for a very long time. it's rumoured that he self exiled himself there for unknown reasons about the same time Yamamoto became head commander of the 13 squads.(yes there may not be a Yamamoto in the forums here, but it's just for backstory purposes.)

Hitsuki: appears as a grey haired(of shoulder length, slightly messy)male. wearing an old style black robe with silver lineings and wearing either black tabi or simple waraji. looks like he's in is mid-to-late 40's.

his zanpakuto spirit appears as a long reddish chinese style dragon.

his zanpakuto is in constant release. it has a red short handle, with a hilt shaped like a dragons maw, biting around his hand. the blade is traditional katana length and has tiny serrations.

In bankai, Hitsuki gains red scaled wings, that together give a wingspan of 4 feet. his right arm is also scaled and dragon-like. his zanpakuto is much more noticeably serrated now, otherwise looks the same.

shikai ability(s): can fire off great arcs of fiery energy.
can generate a gigaflare, using himself as the epicenter(defensive)

bankai special ability: fire rains down from the sky burning everything it touches.

(I still need to work on some other names, but here is the main body.)

Fire zanpakto. It's overrated in this club, mind you. Still, I don't mind. Because of a particular reason 8D

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

Guys...tell me how this works for an zanpaktou moment...

Spoiler:- Zanpkatou Moment:

Unknown.

It was cold, the darkness made it impossible to see your own hand in front of your face. The place had no warmth at all, your own body heat making the contrast in temperatures more apparent. You notice that you can't feel anything, you can't even feel your own hand on your chest. You smell nothing and can't even feel your own heart beat. All you can hear is silence, not even the sound of your own breathing can be heard, you make the futile effort to make sense of your surroundings, but fail when you come to the crushing realization that all five of your senses have failed you.

This place you in is intangible, you can't see it with your eyes, smell the scent of existence with your nose, taste the flavor of air around you, or hear your own body work. You can't feel any sensation at all, you can't even tell if your awake or not, was this a dream at its most simplistic or a place beyond your comprehension that it destroyed your senses?

Eventually, you see two glowing spots, piercing the darkness with a violent glow of red, the same color of red that your blood resembled, you could feel it, it'd probably be running cold now.

Your mind, which was the only thing that was working in this place of darkness, becomes excited at the site, yet you can't feel your heat race or body sweat, you can't even tell if you even have a body in this place. The look into the spots, becoming mesmerized by the light coming from them.

Confusion, fear, excitement, despair, wonderment and awe all struggle for dominance in your mind. The more you look into the red lights, the more these emotions grow stronger. Desperate for answers as to what this place is, where is it and how you got there, all crying out to be answered in your mind.

You try to speak, but nothing comes from you. The feeling of anger and frustration mix your other emotions, all becoming too much to contain. Desperate for relief from this unknown nightmare, you hope that the lights can save you from this place. You hope and pray that something happens and yet at the same time, wish it would all end. If the lights were keeping you here, the desire to feel death's cold dark embrace into the afterlife became much more enticing.

The two red spots glowed so violently, that the entire area became engulfed with its blood curling light.
You feel nothing, not pain or pleasure or even relief from this, your entire being feels like its frozen and numb, trapped in place along with your emotions. You could compare it with the feeling of being dead, but that comparison would be hard to say with certainty, since you never been dead before...

As the light fades, you know find yourself in a place a pure white space, your senses work again and you can smell and taste plant-life. You still hear only silence, but you could say it was constantly being broken by the sound of your own breathing.

You hold you arms, seeing if you could truly feel again, but notice all the hair on them are missing. You look at your arms and notice they are completely smooth, like a doll, no bumps, bruises or marks. You look at your hands, smooth yet still bendable, no fingernails and the inside of your palm is completely smooth as well. You notice now that your arms have a faint glow and that your body feels...different.

You inspect yourself, you still had the hair on your head, yet no hair anywhere else on your body. Your body was completely smooth, from the eyes down to the toes. You had no toe nails either, your gender specific traits along with your behind has also vanished. Said area's showing no trace of said things ever being there.
Horrified at what happened to your body, you desperately want your old body back, scars and all and wanted to leave this nightmare of a place. You try to move but suddenly feel the sensation of chains constricting your movement. Panicking you see that your limbs are wrapped around in chains, soon your entire body is wrapped up, only your eyes are visible.

Fear dominating your thoughts and your body unable to fight back, desperately want to scream out at defiance to the chains and cry out for help. Your will to survive ignites your body into a furious motion of struggle, the messages your minds wants so desperately to let know in this world unable to be heard.

You feel the chains loosen and your body gaining the freedom to move, you feel relief, but the moment is short lived as your right shoulder is impaled by a large sword. Shocked, you look at it in awe, you felt no pain nor saw any blood. However, you did feel your emotions slowly calm down and fade away.

Another sword impales your stomach, it should have severed your spine in half, yet you felt yourself being set free from a prison. Your true inner-self, no one judging you no one to cast judgment on. No one to rely or depend on, no other existence but your own, confined by nothing.

You slowly start to wonder if this is what true freedom feels like, also if that means you lived your life before confined and constrained by something...

A another sword appears before you, floating right in-front of you, you can feel a strange aura radiating from it. As you reach out to touch it, a chain shoots through your hand, but unlike the other times, you felt every nerve and bone in your hand become torn and damaged. You try to scream out in pain, but still have no voice.

You now can barely feel your emotions now, but instead of feeling too emotionally numb for them, you feel as if you never hand said emotions in the first place. Your mind struggles with the fact it can understand the emotions, and experience the emotions, yet can't comprehend said emotions. You warily look at the sword, moving your other hand to grasp it. The chain in your hand begins to spin rapidly, drowning your body in waves of pain. You close your eyes tightly from it, and begin to see images of yourself with an emotion labeled over it.

All these emotions and more flash before your eyes the more you blink, the chain spins faster, burning the inside of your hand, overwhelmed you can't function very well if at all. The sword is still floating in front of you, the chain causing all your pain, the swords draining all your emotions, causing you to see them vanish every time you close your eyes, most would breakdown from this pressure and reside themselves to this unknown hell.

You call upon all the strength and willpower you have in your entire being and grasp the sword with your good hand. The aura surges through you and blinds you with a flash of blue light.

You find yourself in a building, the halls, the doors and the ceiling was pure white. You find yourself wearing clothes again in your own body. Against your will, you open a door and find a baby all by itself, silently gazing at you. The room was painted black with white blanket the baby was in contrasting against it. You pick up the baby and see upon closer inspection, it is yourself. Your taxed mind tries to process the new information but is unable to comprehend why this was happening or what finding your toddler self meant.

You now find yourself levitating over an ocean with no end in sight, the sky was a dark blue and the light reflected off the water made it look purplish, yet somehow clear. You now see your baby self smiling at you, you look at the water for a moment and see that you have no reflection and only the baby could be seen.

The baby vanishes as the water freezes over, a raging thunderstorm dancing in the sky. You land on the ice and feel the solidness of it under your feet. It dawns on you that even after all this has happened you still have no voice and can't feel any warmth or coldness from your surroundings.

Lightning crashes down from the sky and instantly melts the ice into nothingness, as more lightning strikes you see the icy ground you stood on become that empty darkness you came from. Desperate too escape from the fate, you run across the ice, nearly being struck by lightning at several points.

You see the sword wedged in the icy ground a few feet away from you, you rush over and try to pull it out, placing all your hope of survival on it. Lightning strikes you as you try to pull the sword, your body unable the process the new sensation and mind unable to comprehend what was happening, manage to pull out the sword and screamed...

The first half was fine. But I lost track during the second one. But I do like the first half.

by old guy I meant he's on the older side, age wise, lol.
and yes, hyuga, my squad 12er, was planed for a facebook release, but the group died before I had a chance, lol.
anyway, I'm working on fixing some breaks and spelling on hitsuki's data, but I will state that he's about yamamoto's age, give or take a few years.

Ah, I see.

Originally Posted by cyndagirl

Anyway, I always thought bleach was kinda like yu yu hakusho.

Like all the others, I'll have to agree with you there. I think Dragonball and YYH were being released at around the same time, so I wouldn't be surprised if Kubo was also inspired by YYH as well DB. It definitely makes sense, considering the plot and premise of the story.

Originally Posted by Zameric

Yeah, more of just an agree to disagree outcome.

Mmm yeah I tend to do those a lot.

Originally Posted by cyndagirl

his zanpakuto spirit appears as a long reddish chinese style dragon.

his zanpakuto is in constant release. it has a red short handle, with a hilt shaped like a dragons maw, biting around his hand. the blade is traditional katana length and has tiny serrations.

shikai ability(s): can fire off great arcs of fiery energy.
can generate a gigaflare, using himself as the epicenter(defensive)

In bankai, Hitsuki gains red scaled wings, that together give a wingspan of 4 feet. his right arm is also scaled and dragon-like. his zanpakuto is much more noticeably serrated now, otherwise looks the same.

bankai special ability: fire rains down from the sky burning everything it touches.

(I still need to work on some other names, but here is the main body.)

Just something that kind of bugged me, but the order was off (like shikai ability after bankai ability, and bankai release name before any abilities). Just fixing that up would make it more easy to read.

About his shikai ability, what is a "gigaflare"? I Googled it and didn't come up with anything useful. And epicentre as an actual centre is only used for earthquakes (or supernatural activity, according to Google define). "Centre" will do.

Are those the only powers, or are there more?

Originally Posted by kusari

To the veterans: in approximatly two days my fic will resume. In the off time I have trained under the great M. Night Shamallamalmana to create more amazing plot twist than ever before.

WOO!

Originally Posted by kusari

Also, while training under the ghost of Billy Mays, I learned how to give two things for the price of one. So basically I'm giving an omake to you guys. Its name you ask. Look below.

It means weeks of psychological torment along with complex manipulation to aid in the advancement of a several over arching plans to bring about the downfall of all the obstacles in Ilp and Zam's way along with shifting power over to them. Thus they will have complete control of the club's science and political aspects, which fuels their true intentions of massive totalitarian rule.

If either of us could stop procrastinating, that is.

Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15

Spoiler:- Zanpkatou Moment:

Unknown.

It was cold, the darkness made it impossible to see your own hand in front of your face. The place had no warmth at all, your own body heat making the contrast in temperatures more apparent. You notice that you can't feel anything, you can't even feel your own hand on your chest. You smell nothing and can't even feel your own heart beat. All you can hear is silence, not even the sound of your own breathing can be heard, you make the futile effort to make sense of your surroundings, but fail when you come to the crushing realization that all five of your senses have failed you.

This place you in is intangible, you can't see it with your eyes, smell the scent of existence with your nose, taste the flavor of air around you, or hear your own body work. You can't feel any sensation at all, you can't even tell if your awake or not, was this a dream at its most simplistic or a place beyond your comprehension that it destroyed your senses?

Eventually, you see two glowing spots, piercing the darkness with a violent glow of red, the same color of red that your blood resembled, you could feel it, it'd probably be running cold now.

Your mind, which was the only thing that was working in this place of darkness, becomes excited at the site, yet you can't feel your heat race or body sweat, you can't even tell if you even have a body in this place. The look into the spots, becoming mesmerized by the light coming from them.

Confusion, fear, excitement, despair, wonderment and awe all struggle for dominance in your mind. The more you look into the red lights, the more these emotions grow stronger. Desperate for answers as to what this place is, where is it and how you got there, all crying out to be answered in your mind.

You try to speak, but nothing comes from you. The feeling of anger and frustration mix your other emotions, all becoming too much to contain. Desperate for relief from this unknown nightmare, you hope that the lights can save you from this place. You hope and pray that something happens and yet at the same time, wish it would all end. If the lights were keeping you here, the desire to feel death's cold dark embrace into the afterlife became much more enticing.

The two red spots glowed so violently, that the entire area became engulfed with its blood curling light.
You feel nothing, not pain or pleasure or even relief from this, your entire being feels like its frozen and numb, trapped in place along with your emotions. You could compare it with the feeling of being dead, but that comparison would be hard to say with certainty, since you never been dead before...

As the light fades, you know find yourself in a place a pure white space, your senses work again and you can smell and taste plant-life. You still hear only silence, but you could say it was constantly being broken by the sound of your own breathing.

You hold you arms, seeing if you could truly feel again, but notice all the hair on them are missing. You look at your arms and notice they are completely smooth, like a doll, no bumps, bruises or marks. You look at your hands, smooth yet still bendable, no fingernails and the inside of your palm is completely smooth as well. You notice now that your arms have a faint glow and that your body feels...different.

You inspect yourself, you still had the hair on your head, yet no hair anywhere else on your body. Your body was completely smooth, from the eyes down to the toes. You had no toe nails either, your gender specific traits along with your behind has also vanished. Said area's showing no trace of said things ever being there.
Horrified at what happened to your body, you desperately want your old body back, scars and all and wanted to leave this nightmare of a place. You try to move but suddenly feel the sensation of chains constricting your movement. Panicking you see that your limbs are wrapped around in chains, soon your entire body is wrapped up, only your eyes are visible.

Fear dominating your thoughts and your body unable to fight back, desperately want to scream out at defiance to the chains and cry out for help. Your will to survive ignites your body into a furious motion of struggle, the messages your minds wants so desperately to let know in this world unable to be heard.

You feel the chains loosen and your body gaining the freedom to move, you feel relief, but the moment is short lived as your right shoulder is impaled by a large sword. Shocked, you look at it in awe, you felt no pain nor saw any blood. However, you did feel your emotions slowly calm down and fade away.

Another sword impales your stomach, it should have severed your spine in half, yet you felt yourself being set free from a prison. Your true inner-self, no one judging you no one to cast judgment on. No one to rely or depend on, no other existence but your own, confined by nothing.

You slowly start to wonder if this is what true freedom feels like, also if that means you lived your life before confined and constrained by something...

A another sword appears before you, floating right in-front of you, you can feel a strange aura radiating from it. As you reach out to touch it, a chain shoots through your hand, but unlike the other times, you felt every nerve and bone in your hand become torn and damaged. You try to scream out in pain, but still have no voice.

You now can barely feel your emotions now, but instead of feeling too emotionally numb for them, you feel as if you never hand said emotions in the first place. Your mind struggles with the fact it can understand the emotions, and experience the emotions, yet can't comprehend said emotions. You warily look at the sword, moving your other hand to grasp it. The chain in your hand begins to spin rapidly, drowning your body in waves of pain. You close your eyes tightly from it, and begin to see images of yourself with an emotion labeled over it.

All these emotions and more flash before your eyes the more you blink, the chain spins faster, burning the inside of your hand, overwhelmed you can't function very well if at all. The sword is still floating in front of you, the chain causing all your pain, the swords draining all your emotions, causing you to see them vanish every time you close your eyes, most would breakdown from this pressure and reside themselves to this unknown hell.

You call upon all the strength and willpower you have in your entire being and grasp the sword with your good hand. The aura surges through you and blinds you with a flash of blue light.

You find yourself in a building, the halls, the doors and the ceiling was pure white. You find yourself wearing clothes again in your own body. Against your will, you open a door and find a baby all by itself, silently gazing at you. The room was painted black with white blanket the baby was in contrasting against it. You pick up the baby and see upon closer inspection, it is yourself. Your taxed mind tries to process the new information but is unable to comprehend why this was happening or what finding your toddler self meant.

You now find yourself levitating over an ocean with no end in sight, the sky was a dark blue and the light reflected off the water made it look purplish, yet somehow clear. You now see your baby self smiling at you, you look at the water for a moment and see that you have no reflection and only the baby could be seen.

The baby vanishes as the water freezes over, a raging thunderstorm dancing in the sky. You land on the ice and feel the solidness of it under your feet. It dawns on you that even after all this has happened you still have no voice and can't feel any warmth or coldness from your surroundings.

Lightning crashes down from the sky and instantly melts the ice into nothingness, as more lightning strikes you see the icy ground you stood on become that empty darkness you came from. Desperate too escape from the fate, you run across the ice, nearly being struck by lightning at several points.

You see the sword wedged in the icy ground a few feet away from you, you rush over and try to pull it out, placing all your hope of survival on it. Lightning strikes you as you try to pull the sword, your body unable the process the new sensation and mind unable to comprehend what was happening, manage to pull out the sword and screamed...

That was very descriptive, and I liked how you kept referring to the five senses. Though I think it was actually too long. For a zanpakutou "moment", I don't think it should take that long, unless you were spending a whole chapter just describing it or something.

I think you change between past and present tense a few times. I can't remember where I spotted it though XD.

Oh, and towards the end, I felt like I was reading an Inception or something.

Originally Posted by arceus03

No, I've rubbed off on you.

I was like this before, though!

Originally Posted by arceus03

When the lecturer mentions 4D, maybe I will. XD

XD Do eeeet.

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

yes, I know, it's choppy, I messed up on the vocab, so ya. ok, I'll fix it up and try to clean the order, anyway, the special moves, I didn't want to add too many as to come off as cheap and/or overpowered, but I can add in some other special moves.
*sigh*
(lol)

All together to help victims in Japan.

Good afternoon.
We are a group of volunteers who care about the fate of those who got into trouble.
We urge all people to help the citizens of Japan. In the Czech Republic we have organized a fundraising drive. They are very necessary for those who remained without a roof over your head. Hope very much for your help. One we can not cope with this tragedy. All the money will pass to the Embassy of Japan.
Provide a report on the use of money.
Requisites for conversion to U.S. dollars:

All together to help victims in Japan.

Good afternoon.
We are a group of volunteers who care about the fate of those who got into trouble.
We urge all people to help the citizens of Japan. In the Czech Republic we have organized a fundraising drive. They are very necessary for those who remained without a roof over your head. Hope very much for your help. One we can not cope with this tragedy. All the money will pass to the Embassy of Japan.
Provide a report on the use of money.
Requisites for conversion to U.S. dollars:

Uhh..if her fullbring is her clothing, should I assume those boots are REAAAAAALLY dirty, or should I assume that fullbring doesn't have to deal with any given object/aspect, and instead like, fashion in general..

I didn't miss you MC. In fact, Who are you?

I feel like I owe you people something. Here is a story I based off a card game I discovered via fanfiction.

Spoiler:- Randomocity:

It was a ridiculously cliche'dly dark and stormy night in Sereitei, lightning flashed across the night sky and raindrops the size of Japan's Tsunami fell from the sky like a million asteroids collidding with the earth. Buildings shook under the onslaught of water, and the moon's feeble light stood no chance agaisnt the powerful blockading cloud-cover. Thunder crackled loudly as all electricity was cut off.

In the damp and dark, the captains all sat, soaked and shivering, n the dim weak candlelight.

And what did they do?

They played truth or Dare.

I.L.P sat back boredly, it was his turn to do something. He looked at Cameron as a thought came to him. "Truth or Dare?"

Cameron, as always, replied, "Dare, of course."

"I dare you to come into that room with me" Ilp said, his voice entirely unreadable as he pointed to a door behind him with his thumb.

Awkward silence encapsulated the room for moments before Meric loudly stated, "If the little boys wanna experiment, let 'em." This was followed with more awkward silence until the two young captains retreated into said room.

"Golde-Soutaichou, Truth or dare?" Kusari yawned boredly, wishing he was allowed to just sleep in the dark-rather than be forced to paly a game to bond with the other captains in the spare time. He sighed as Golde looked at him analytically.

Seeing Kusari's frustration, Golde quickly said, "Truth"

Moments passed before Kusari thought of what he should ask. Moments later he smirked ith a slight tint of sleepiness. "How old are you"

An awkward silence ensued at the gall of Kusari's question, and finally Golde said, "Dare."

A large sweatdrop seemed to fall from all the other conjoined captains, or it could have been a leak in the roof. Either way, Kusari sighed before saying, "Find us something that is atleast more entertaining to do."

Golde thought for a minute and immediately looked at FLash, who usually had all the good crazy party ideas. Noticing the glance, a devilish look flashed across his features. From seemingly no where, he pulled out a deck of cards in one hand and a bottle of sake the size of Texas in the other. Three words resounded through the air. "Ring of Fire."

A few moments passed, half of the people in confusion and the other half in disapproval. Finally Kida broke the silence. "There are children here, we can't play a drinking game."

"You mean the ones that just went into a bedroom?" Meric countered, a grin spread wide over his countenance as Kida promptly smacked him across the face. Dauc looked over and rubbed his face in pure force-of-habit.

With a sigh, they all sat in a circle in order of captain number, with Dauc sitting next to Kida, as they put the cards into another circle and gave everybody a shot glass-keeping two extra in handy in case I.L.P. and Cameron came back.

"If you flip an Ace, you can make up any rule, A two lets you choose two people to drink, Three, you have to drink, Four, Girls Drink, Five, the last person to raise their hand drinks, Six, all guys drink, seven you have to start singing and the last person to start singing that song drinks, Eight, you get to choose someone who will always drink with you, Nine, keep rhyming until someone breaks the cycle. Ten is I never, anyone who has done it drinks, Jack, everyone drinks, Queen, as a question to randomly people until someone does not ask a question to someone back, King, think of a category and keep going until someone can't answer" Flash said in under fifteen seconds. "Any questions?" Everyone raised thier hand, but he kept on going anyways.

He reached forward and flipped over a card, Three. "Me" he said calmly as he happily downed a shot of the Sake.

MC nervously flipped a card in front of him, "Four. Kida, that would have to be you" He said, relieved, as Kida poured herself a shot and downed it qith a loud gulp. Nobody wanted to be the loser, and no one wanted to be drunk first and say something they didn't want to.

Eon flipped a card in the circle near him, a Jack. Some of them looked at him in resentment, others in gratefulness as everyone poured themselves a shot in turn. They all downed a shot as Cameron and I.L.P. walked in looking rather flustered, but otherwise fine. Noticing the the game, they sat back down in their respective seats and nodded in understanding to the repated rules.

Senny flipped a card with expert precision, which turned out to be an eight. He turned to Kida. "Oh KIda, won't you be my mate?" He joked as they both downed a shot-which they would have to do together from no on in the game. Kida responded with a rhetorical, "Do I have a choice?" and a sigh as she looked over towards Meric.

Rotrum looked at the cards within his reach carefully before flipping a card. "Ace." he said all-too-happily. "Whenever anyone drinks, Jordan(he's Jordan in dialogue) will drink too" he decided quickly before looked at Cameron.

Cameron flipped a random card, another eight already. With a slight blush he looked over at I.L.P. "Won't you be mah mate?" he said completely awkwardly before the two both drank-MC reluctantly downing a shot as well.

Moving on quickly, I.L.P. turned a card over and he and Cameron both facepalmed. A Three. They both, plus MC, drank a shot of the sake before moving onto Kusari.

Kusari rapidly flipped a card, still bored and waiting for something to happen. In his boredom, an evil thought came to mind as he looked at the Two carefully. "Senny, Cameron, Drink. And while you're at it, Kida, I.L.P., and Jordan-who guys drink a shot too." They all looked at him resentfully, except for Cameron, who wasn't allowed to drink normally and sure as hell wouldnt't pass it up.

Golde reluctantly pulled a card out, and it was a Ten, "I never stabbed anyone in the back" Golde said after some thought. Jin, Rotrum, Senny, Kida, MC, I.L.P., Cameron, and Meric each took a shot of the Sake. At this point you could see a hint of drunkenness in most of the people.

JIn silently flipped a card. It was a Jack. Everyone had a shot, the four with Mate and MC having to have a second shot.

Next up up was, obviously, Kida. Kida hesitantly reached to get a card, flipping it over as everybody gazed at it. "Senny do you love me?" She asked Senny casually, to which he looked at Dauc and said, "Why are you chasing a woman who's mine?" DAuc angirly said, "Why are you cheating on her with a man?" An awkward silence followed before Senny replied, "Who are you talking to?" Dauc gritted his teeth. "Kida, why do yu deal with this guy?" he finally burst out. She looked over at Golde, "Why did you match all of us as the captains?" He looked over at Meric, "Why did she have to ask me?" Meric looked devilishly over at I.L.P. "Did you have fun in the bedroom?" "SHUT U-Ohcrap.. I.L.P. shrunk back as he, Cameron, and MC each downed another shot.

Dauc was next, havign situated himself next to Kida. He flipped a card. Eight. "KIda, please be MY mate" He said in a drunken happiness. KIda facepalmed, now there were TWO people she had to drink with. Flash pouted about how he had barely dranken anything.

Arceus held back a laugh as he turned a card over. "Kategory is Kookies. Chocolate Chip" Arceus Started. "Raisin." "Sugar." "Gingerbread." "Oreo." "Cake" "Chocola-..Screw you" Cameron finally broke the chain, and he, MC, and I.L.P. all took a drink.

Finally it was Flash's turn again and he flipped a card, an Ace. "Whenever anyone drinks, I'll drink" He said proudly before turning back to MC, waiting for him to make another card-turnover.

MC flipped over a Seven. He thought for a moment before hoarsely starting, "First you say you need to talk" Rotrum, Jin, Arceus, Kida, and I.L.P. immediately followed up with. "He walks, you say sit down it's juust a talk. He smiles politely back at you." With Cameron, Dauc, Flash, and Senny continuing "You stare politely right on through. Some sort of window to your right, as he goes left and you stay right, between the lines of fear and blame, you begin to wonder why you came. Where did I go wrong, I lost a friend, somewhere along in the bitterness, and I would have stayed up, with you all night" With Eon, Meric, and Kusari finishing, "Had I known, How to save a Life~" and Golde, Flash, and MC each downing a shot.

Suddenly the power went back on. Light flickering-burning the eyes of the drunken captains as they all fell back in sheer astonishment. I.L.P., mostly sober from his partialyl non-organic body and late entrance, pulled a small device from his pocket-emitting a noise that knocked out the other captains in thier drunken and surprised state. He yawned, walking off and returning later with a several colored markers

END

Last edited by rotrum; 3rd April 2011 at 7:57 AM.

Originally Posted by Northern Lights

I have that effect on most men for some reason. no wonder i've been feeling lesbian lately >.>

yes, I know, it's choppy, I messed up on the vocab, so ya. ok, I'll fix it up and try to clean the order, anyway, the special moves, I didn't want to add too many as to come off as cheap and/or overpowered, but I can add in some other special moves.
*sigh*
(lol)

This button is there. Use it.

Originally Posted by rotrum

Stop Double Posting. Seriously.

Oh, and by the way, I'm alive. Sort of.

Umm...sO YEAH...Hi.

Spoiler:- Manga:

Uhh..if her fullbring is her clothing, should I assume those boots are REAAAAAALLY dirty, or should I assume that fullbring doesn't have to deal with any given object/aspect, and instead like, fashion in general..

I didn't miss you MC. In fact, Who are you?

I feel like I owe you people something. Here is a story I based off a card game I discovered via fanfiction.

Spoiler:- Randomocity:

It was a ridiculously cliche'dly dark and stormy night in Sereitei, lightning flashed across the night sky and raindrops the size of Japan's Tsunami fell from the sky like a million asteroids collidding with the earth. Buildings shook under the onslaught of water, and the moon's feeble light stood no chance agaisnt the powerful blockading cloud-cover. Thunder crackled loudly as all electricity was cut off.

In the damp and dark, the captains all sat, soaked and shivering, n the dim weak candlelight.

And what did they do?

They played truth or Dare.

I.L.P sat back boredly, it was his turn to do something. He looked at Cameron as a thought came to him. "Truth or Dare?"

Cameron, as always, replied, "Dare, of course."

"I dare you to come into that room with me" Ilp said, his voice entirely unreadable as he pointed to a door behind him with his thumb.

Awkward silence encapsulated the room for moments before Meric loudly stated, "If the little boys wanna experiment, let 'em." This was followed with more awkward silence until the two young captains retreated into said room.

"Golde-Soutaichou, Truth or dare?" Kusari yawned boredly, wishing he was allowed to just sleep in the dark-rather than be forced to paly a game to bond with the other captains in the spare time. He sighed as Golde looked at him analytically.

Seeing Kusari's frustration, Golde quickly said, "Truth"

Moments passed before Kusari thought of what he should ask. Moments later he smirked ith a slight tint of sleepiness. "How old are you"

An awkward silence ensued at the gall of Kusari's question, and finally Golde said, "Dare."

A large sweatdrop seemed to fall from all the other conjoined captains, or it could have been a leak in the roof. Either way, Kusari sighed before saying, "Find us something that is atleast more entertaining to do."

Golde thought for a minute and immediately looked at FLash, who usually had all the good crazy party ideas. Noticing the glance, a devilish look flashed across his features. From seemingly no where, he pulled out a deck of cards in one hand and a bottle of sake the size of Texas in the other. Three words resounded through the air. "Ring of Fire."

A few moments passed, half of the people in confusion and the other half in disapproval. Finally Kida broke the silence. "There are children here, we can't play a drinking game."

"You mean the ones that just went into a bedroom?" Meric countered, a grin spread wide over his countenance as Kida promptly smacked him across the face. Dauc looked over and rubbed his face in pure force-of-habit.

With a sigh, they all sat in a circle in order of captain number, with Dauc sitting next to Kida, as they put the cards into another circle and gave everybody a shot glass-keeping two extra in handy in case I.L.P. and Cameron came back.

"If you flip an Ace, you can make up any rule, A two lets you choose two people to drink, Three, you have to drink, Four, Girls Drink, Five, the last person to raise their hand drinks, Six, all guys drink, seven you have to start singing and the last person to start singing that song drinks, Eight, you get to choose someone who will always drink with you, Nine, keep rhyming until someone breaks the cycle. Ten is I never, anyone who has done it drinks, Jack, everyone drinks, Queen, as a question to randomly people until someone does not ask a question to someone back, King, think of a category and keep going until someone can't answer" Flash said in under fifteen seconds. "Any questions?" Everyone raised thier hand, but he kept on going anyways.

He reached forward and flipped over a card, Three. "Me" he said calmly as he happily downed a shot of the Sake.

MC nervously flipped a card in front of him, "Four. Kida, that would have to be you" He said, relieved, as Kida poured herself a shot and downed it qith a loud gulp. Nobody wanted to be the loser, and no one wanted to be drunk first and say something they didn't want to.

Eon flipped a card in the circle near him, a Jack. Some of them looked at him in resentment, others in gratefulness as everyone poured themselves a shot in turn. They all downed a shot as Cameron and I.L.P. walked in looking rather flustered, but otherwise fine. Noticing the the game, they sat back down in their respective seats and nodded in understanding to the repated rules.

Senny flipped a card with expert precision, which turned out to be an eight. He turned to Kida. "Oh KIda, won't you be my mate?" He joked as they both downed a shot-which they would have to do together from no on in the game. Kida responded with a rhetorical, "Do I have a choice?" and a sigh as she looked over towards Meric.

Rotrum looked at the cards within his reach carefully before flipping a card. "Ace." he said all-too-happily. "Whenever anyone drinks, Jordan(he's Jordan in dialogue) will drink too" he decided quickly before looked at Cameron.

Cameron flipped a random card, another eight already. With a slight blush he looked over at I.L.P. "Won't you be mah mate?" he said completely awkwardly before the two both drank-MC reluctantly downing a shot as well.

Moving on quickly, I.L.P. turned a card over and he and Cameron both facepalmed. A Three. They both, plus MC, drank a shot of the sake before moving onto Kusari.

Kusari rapidly flipped a card, still bored and waiting for something to happen. In his boredom, an evil thought came to mind as he looked at the Two carefully. "Senny, Cameron, Drink. And while you're at it, Kida, I.L.P., and Jordan-who guys drink a shot too." They all looked at him resentfully, except for Cameron, who wasn't allowed to drink normally and sure as hell wouldnt't pass it up.

Golde reluctantly pulled a card out, and it was a Ten, "I never stabbed anyone in the back" Golde said after some thought. Jin, Rotrum, Senny, Kida, MC, I.L.P., Cameron, and Meric each took a shot of the Sake. At this point you could see a hint of drunkenness in most of the people.

JIn silently flipped a card. It was a Jack. Everyone had a shot, the four with Mate and MC having to have a second shot.

Suddenly the power went back on. Light flickering-burning the eyes of the drunken captains as they all fell back in sheer astonishment. I.L.P., mostly sober from his partialyl non-organic body and late entrance, pulled a small device from his pocket-emitting a noise that knocked out the other captains in thier drunken and surprised state. He yawned, walking off and returning later with a several colored markers

I like that one XD It needs more me
btw, what is rule no 10 again? o.o

I really dislike watching fan-uploaded content because it does not at all benefit the creators of the show. By watching on an official site, you support the creators by watching the ads or commercials. By buying, you obviously support them with your purchase. If you must watch the dub for free, just watch it on TV. You can always record it... That's what I do since I can't always stay up that late!

Actually, those more just support the companies in the ad and the website the video is on. xD

And I watch the dubs on TV too.

Originally Posted by arceus03

Fire zanpakto. It's overrated in this club, mind you. Still, I don't mind. Because of a particular reason 8D

yes, I know, it's choppy, I messed up on the vocab, so ya. ok, I'll fix it up and try to clean the order, anyway, the special moves, I didn't want to add too many as to come off as cheap and/or overpowered, but I can add in some other special moves.
*sigh*
(lol)

Yeah, I'm very good with pointing out mistakes Anyone who writes fanfiction will agree with that.

Spoiler:- Randomocity:

Originally Posted by rotrum

It was a ridiculously cliche'dly dark and stormy night in Sereitei, lightning flashed across the night sky and raindrops the size of Japan's Tsunami fell from the sky like a million asteroids collidding with the earth. Buildings shook under the onslaught of water, and the moon's feeble light stood no chance agaisnt the powerful blockading cloud-cover. Thunder crackled loudly as all electricity was cut off.

Very good description. I like the massively overexaggerated, cliche-self-referenced paragraph it was.

Originally Posted by rotrum

I.L.P sat back boredly, it was his turn to do something. He looked at Cameron as a thought came to him. "Truth or Dare?"

This'll be good.

Originally Posted by rotrum

"I dare you to come into that room with me" Ilp said, his voice entirely unreadable as he pointed to a door behind him with his thumb.

Awkward silence encapsulated the room for moments before Meric loudly stated, "If the little boys wanna experiment, let 'em." This was followed with more awkward silence until the two young captains retreated into said room.

LMAO. Oh wow I don't think I've laughed that hard in a while.

Originally Posted by rotrum

Golde thought for a minute and immediately looked at FLash, who usually had all the good crazy party ideas.

Oh no.

Originally Posted by rotrum

Finally Kida broke the silence. "There are children here, we can't play a drinking game."

"You mean the ones that just went into a bedroom?" Meric countered, a grin spread wide over his countenance as Kida promptly smacked him across the face.

I lol'd.
But what about you, also? You, Blue and I (I put it in that order for a reason ) are the only ones underaged (well, depends where you are, I think the 16+ are fine).

Originally Posted by rotrum

"If you flip an Ace, you can make up any rule, A two lets you choose two people to drink, Three, you have to drink, Four, Girls Drink, Five, the last person to raise their hand drinks, Six, all guys drink, seven you have to start singing and the last person to start singing that song drinks, Eight, you get to choose someone who will always drink with you, Nine, keep rhyming until someone breaks the cycle. Ten is I never, anyone who has done it drinks, Jack, everyone drinks, Queen, as a question to randomly people until someone does not ask a question to someone back, King, think of a category and keep going until someone can't answer"

That's a lot to remember

Originally Posted by rotrum

Rotrum looked at the cards within his reach carefully before flipping a card. "Ace." he said all-too-happily. "Whenever anyone drinks, Jordan(he's Jordan in dialogue) will drink too"

XD Of course.

Originally Posted by rotrum

Cameron flipped a random card, another eight already. With a slight blush he looked over at I.L.P. "Won't you be mah mate?" he said completely awkwardly before the two both drank-MC reluctantly downing a shot as well.

Moving on quickly, I.L.P. turned a card over and he and Cameron both facepalmed. A Three. They both, plus MC, drank a shot of the sake before moving onto Kusari.

Kusari rapidly flipped a card, still bored and waiting for something to happen. In his boredom, an evil thought came to mind as he looked at the Two carefully. "Senny, Cameron, Drink. And while you're at it, Kida, I.L.P., and Jordan-who guys drink a shot too." They all looked at him resentfully, except for Cameron, who wasn't allowed to drink normally and sure as hell wouldnt't pass it up.

Ahaha, that's pure evil.

Originally Posted by rotrum

Golde reluctantly pulled a card out, and it was a Ten, "I never stabbed anyone in the back" Golde said after some thought. Jin, Rotrum, Senny, Kida, MC, I.L.P., Cameron, and Meric each took a shot of the Sake. At this point you could see a hint of drunkenness in most of the people.

Does that mean physically stabbing people in the back?

Originally Posted by rotrum

Next up up was, obviously, Kida. Kida hesitantly reached to get a card, flipping it over as everybody gazed at it. "Senny do you love me?" She asked Senny casually, to which he looked at Dauc and said, "Why are you chasing a woman who's mine?" DAuc angirly said, "Why are you cheating on her with a man?" An awkward silence followed before Senny replied, "Who are you talking to?" Dauc gritted his teeth. "Kida, why do yu deal with this guy?" he finally burst out. She looked over at Golde, "Why did you match all of us as the captains?" He looked over at Meric, "Why did she have to ask me?" Meric looked devilishly over at I.L.P. "Did you have fun in the bedroom?" "SHUT U-Ohcrap.. I.L.P. shrunk back as he, Cameron, and MC each downed another shot.

Took me a second read to understand XD
And to be honest, I'd probably ask Blue something and make her drink Only so I get more alcohol but not having to lose.

Originally Posted by rotrum

Finally it was Flash's turn again and he flipped a card, an Ace. "Whenever anyone drinks, I'll drink" He said proudly before turning back to MC, waiting for him to make another card-turnover.

XD Of course.

Originally Posted by rotrum

MC flipped over a Seven. He thought for a moment before hoarsely starting, "First you say you need to talk" Rotrum, Jin, Arceus, Kida, and I.L.P. immediately followed up with. "He walks, you say sit down it's juust a talk. He smiles politely back at you." With Cameron, Dauc, Flash, and Senny continuing "You stare politely right on through. Some sort of window to your right, as he goes left and you stay right, between the lines of fear and blame, you begin to wonder why you came. Where did I go wrong, I lost a friend, somewhere along in the bitterness, and I would have stayed up, with you all night" With Eon, Meric, and Kusari finishing, "Had I known, How to save a Life~" and Golde, Flash, and MC each downing a shot.

Again, took me another read to realise that he was singing a song. Why that song, though? So serious. Should've picked Friday or Never Gonna Give You Up.

Originally Posted by rotrum

Suddenly the power went back on. Light flickering-burning the eyes of the drunken captains as they all fell back in sheer astonishment. I.L.P., mostly sober from his partialyl non-organic body and late entrance, pulled a small device from his pocket-emitting a noise that knocked out the other captains in thier drunken and surprised state. He yawned, walking off and returning later with a several colored markers

Epic win.

Originally Posted by arceus03

btw, what is rule no 10 again? o.o

You say "I never blah blah blah" and anyone who does it, drinks.

Most fun you had that was Bleach related?
Like the others, joining this club led to so much fun. Reading all the fanfics, and all the debates and analyses were also very fun ^^

Originally Posted by kusari

So, I was just wanting to drop by and tell you guys that due to personal things, the only way I can post for now is on my phone.

if I can somehow get to a computer I'll put up the chapter but don't be mad if it doesn't show up.

That's a shame. Oh well.

Last edited by I like Pokemon (...); 3rd April 2011 at 10:46 PM.

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

Quote:
Originally Posted by cyndagirl View Post
yes, I know, it's choppy, I messed up on the vocab, so ya. ok, I'll fix it up and try to clean the order, anyway, the special moves, I didn't want to add too many as to come off as cheap and/or overpowered, but I can add in some other special moves.
*sigh*
(lol)
Yeah, I'm very good with pointing out mistakes Anyone who writes fanfiction will agree with that.

ya I write short stories myself,

@Cyndagirl;
Your Zanpakto seems quite short so far, have you seen the template in the main post?

yes, I went by the template, names, type, release comands, and details. as far as I know it's right.