Fathom Five Problems

I’ve spent most of my weekend rewriting Fathom Five. Chapters five and six weren’t working out, with one focusing solely on Peter and the other focusing on Rosemary. A solution was to combine the two chapters together and interweave the scenes. The action now flows much better, but the alien world isn’t gelling, yet… Chapter four also got a rewrite, changing a dream sequence into a sequence in reality that accomplishes the same things. Always better to have it happen for real than in a dream, and I fixed some logic gaps on the way…