Great end line! I love this fic, it's so cute and the twins are well-characterized.

Reviewer: CheddarTrek

Date: 2004-08-18

Reviewid: 97832

Chapter: 1

"You know, now we really can call ourselves Gred and Forge."

^^ Great fic, certainly one of the funner ones I've read in a bit.

Reviewer: Purple Eyed Weasley

Date: 2004-08-18

Reviewid: 97813

Chapter: 1

that was really funny. poor fred and george. great job

Reviewer: Miss Stephanie D.

Date: 2004-08-18

Reviewid: 97810

Chapter: 1

I loved it, Nundu. Splat, Split, Splinch had me laughing out loud. It is very well written -- especially your characterization of the twins, how they interact with eachother, and your non-hackneyed use of the the term 'Gred and Forge.'

I am impressed by the variety and the creativity of your work.

Gramercy,Miss Stephanie D.

Reviewer: US HP Fan

Date: 2004-08-18

Reviewid: 97790

Chapter: 1

Very clever story! I never thought about Fred & George splinching themselves before. Well done!

Reviewer: Liz

Date: 2004-08-17

Reviewid: 97733

Chapter: 1

I really enjoyed this one-shot. What's funny is that my mom and I were wondering the exact same thing a couple hours ago in the car! Your vision is hilarious.

Reviewer: bansheeqwn

Date: 2004-08-17

Reviewid: 97732

Chapter: 1

you cracked me up!!! :) that was incredibly funny.

Great job with the twins character presentation. i can definitely see them getting into that kind of trouble and responding to each other in that fashion. kudos galore!

Reviewer: Ada Kensington

Date: 2004-08-17

Reviewid: 97682

Chapter: 1

Ahhhh! I was wondering when this would appear on the updates list! Great use of Fred and George, both of whom you write very well, right down to the little, subtle differences from twin to twin. My favourite line would have to be: "I just thought about giving you a swift kick and wound up kicking myself."

You came up with a really great splinching situation, too! Kudos on that, and for the one-shot in general.

Brilliant!

Reviewer: Pineapple Queen

Date: 2004-08-17

Reviewid: 97647

Chapter: 1

That has got to be the best ending line ever! Hilarious.

-PQ

Reviewer: B. Nonymous

Date: 2004-08-17

Reviewid: 97638

Chapter: 1

I wonder if the Nonymous twins (who are not identical) will be like F&G someday. Reading good G&F stories like this always reminds me of what I may get to look forward to someday.

(Now if you could have the same thing happen to Padma and Parvati... THAT would be something!)

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