Like others i too would like for them to accept the opffer and get the hell out of there; i always tought it would have made sense for harry anyway. I have no idea how the story would progress after that tough, no way in hell they would come back after deciding that enough is enough -.-

I've said it before but it bears repeating: Your Umbridge is delightfully malicious, a true villain. So when Harry and Luna do triumph over her, their victory is all the greater.

Actually, I'm kinda hoping Harry and Luna take Umbridge's offer and go away and have the satisfaction of having the Ministry beg for him to come back when Voldemort reveals himself. And the bonus of how pissed Voldemort would be that Umbridge is responsible for putting Harry out of his reach, oh that would be sweet. But we all know that Harry wouldn't leave his friends.

Again I'd like to say how you deepen a character without changing them. Lavender and Romilda are usually written as twits or vapid, vacuous vixens but without changing what we do know about them, you give us more insight to their character. People forget that these two are in Gryffindor, meaning they have qualities that are shared with Harry, Hermione and Ron.

The pressure Harry and Luna face is staggering. And the bad guys are hateful. On one hand, I'm enjoying the fact that there seems to be plenty of chapter left to read but on the other hand, I want to get to the end so I can finally enjoy Harry and Luna's win over these monsters...although now come to think of, I think a slow but steady victory would be better. Just as I had to sit through chapters watching Umbridge and Jocasta and Malfoy take ten chapters to tear them down, I kinda want as much, if not more, chapters of them losing to Harry and Luna.

I didn't think you could possibly make me hate Umbitch more. Wonderful, horrifying twist, I can't wait until the evil toad gets what she deserves. Though I feel really bad for Harry until they figure this out, because the thought of what will happen if they don't figure it out is horrifying.

Interested to see how things proceed. Interesting change in tactics from Umbridge. I don't see how they could stop Harry form going to a shool in Europe though. They could easily go to wherever and than go to Ireland, Spain, or France etc... from New York or wherever. Plus the Irish hate the British so that works out. lol.

Love it! Definitely a lighter AU of the fifth book (and honestly I prefer it; book five depressed the hell out of me, and it needed more Luna) while still a more confrontational tone than the hilariously fluffy first one. Luna as always is adorable, and the 'I love you' scene was PRICELESS. I actually shed a tear at how honest and winsome it was (winsome, now there's a word you don't hear much).

I hope to see an update soon - this is wonderful, and you've got Umbridge DOWN. Although it's nice to see Fudge being slightly less of an idiot. Thanks for writing this! Ta 3