I understand this poem as if this is my own. I feel there is a spirit through that helps you write this way...just lovely and uplifting.

Anastasia Who chapter 4 . 4/25/2012

This poem was really good. Very nicely written. I love the use of symbolism and how it is written. Beautiful poem.

Getuie chapter 4 . 4/25/2012

Intense expressions of emotion.

"These are the cries I can share with none,

my madness, divine, by none understood,"

These lines were the ones I noticed the most... I could definitely relate with that.

poetic abortion chapter 4 . 4/25/2012

::hugs you.:: - THis was so good ! _

Noelle

Ivriniel chapter 4 . 4/25/2012

Beautiful. Again, I love your images.

Manuel Fajar chapter 4 . 4/25/2012

Patient,—love doth wait,

(Patient love doth wait)

Heart that dwells for perfection,—

(Heart's dwelling of perfect grace)

Fulfillment's circle.

(Circle of fulfillment)

lovelikeamixtape chapter 4 . 4/25/2012

Absolutely gorgeous. Reminds me of a song by Jewel.. 'Absence of Fear.' Amazing work.

Ironic Presence chapter 4 . 4/25/2012

So beautiful, so exactly how I feel. Just one thing: "in the silken flesh of my heart" doesn't really fit right. It's just the "silken", really, that doesn't quite work for me. But the rest is perfect.

Anastasia Who chapter 3 . 4/25/2012

AWESOME! So moving and powerful. This is def. one for my fav. This is a great one to read when I am feeling alone and depressed. It is so awesome to know we have a God who loves us so much. WOW!

Getuie chapter 3 . 4/25/2012

The repetitions in the first stanza really does something to make the reader aware of the anxiousness. It was so beautifully employed, I just had make mention of it.

The rhyme was also something I noted. It really gave pace to the poem. In the second stanza I normally would have said not to use Me to rhyme with twice, BUT its use there really emphasized the longing... again, the repetition, as with the first stanza, just builds onto the poem.

There are some parts of the poem where the rhyme fails a bit, but I personally am not someone so much focused on that. The poem well written and the message is there. The last two lines... gorgeous. It was really something that just stood out to strike me like a sledgehammer.

Although not a favourite of mine from your work. It's still a good poem all the same

elvenstorm chapter 3 . 4/25/2012

Love the title! So beautiful. Anyway, very nice poem, made me smile at it's sweetness. Like the day and night repetition. Keep writing as you are very talented!

Wow! Very powerful poem. I love the message it potrays and the feeling of love behind it. Very nicely written. Great work. I like the end where you say'see the hurt behind the hate,hurl myself towards spike and blade,breaking my heart for love,dying to give you love.'That is really powerful there and a great way to end this poem. Christ died to show and give us love. Awesome job.