hye walkure, part 1: you're armed (...and your sick shit)

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at last, my holidays are over! It took me way too long, I'm so fucking lazy sometimes! I started two months ago and I couldn't finish it. Now I did it. Same shit with the mic: still have no pro mic, so it's still low-fi, but I like low-fi: too much mastering is for wankers and tossers.

About the song: it's the first part of three songs about love! volture goes emo, brilliant!!! This first part is the negative one (2 will be the neutral, 3 the positive). It's kind of emotional (in fact, it's pure evil :))
lyrics: I'd like to sleep in your arms but you're armed, with widow's mourning, and devil's seed, with vixen poison and viper's teeth, no matter what I do, I will bleed, I will bleed, until eternity//when you wake up, when you wake up gain, suddenly it's all clear, when you wake up, wake up again: I hate the junk inside your veins, I hate the scum inside your brain, and your sick shit still remains//don't you fucking see me? it's cold out here! Don't you fucking reach me! I'm done with you dear!//Let me haunt you, in your sleep, so crude, I'll give you the blade, when you give me a cry, baby, I'd like to come when you die//crucify you, crucify you!!!

HyeVolture [be] - 9 years ago

teebo [be] - 9 years ago

euhm

wtf, i just smoked pure hasj so the timing is perfect but...
this was by far the best eltrobel-experience i've ever had, wow, it started like M83 and than it was like massive attack! i mean like, ow my...
huge respect! not perfect but still great, as well as the story behind. beautifull piece. i'm going to check some more now

meutn [be] - 9 years ago

djsennahoj [be] - 9 years ago

Naaais!
Nice sound. Some parts are a bit too shifty maybe. It seems like it changes too suddenly from a song into chaotic rumble. I like the rumble part, but the transition is pretty vague and unaccentuated. And, of course, the mastering of the vocal is really very bad. I didn't understand a word of the lyrics.
But i have to say: the sounds, the melody, the composition: 18/20! You rule!

HyeVolture [be] - 9 years ago

IskaRiot [be] - 9 years ago

'bout time i gave you a comment! (on ebel that is, i prefer to give it face to face): fucking great!

and like you said, to much mastering is for wankers and tossers, the rawness of your voice in the song adds a bonus that would've been lost if you were a fucking tossah (wich in fact you are ;))

get your ass back from spain and start working on the other parts!

StorungStelle [be] - 9 years ago

thumb up,
and realy good track,
idd the best i've heard from you.
i'm surprised

HyeVolture [be] - 9 years ago

thnx!

Rabauw [be] - 8 years ago

Musically it's very good.
A decent intro that grabbed my attention, and the progression is very good, slowly building up. Good click/beats.

I just think you really fucked up on the vocals, they are very badly recorded.
I disagree that too much mastering is for losers :) Mastering turns your composition from an electronic sketch into the way you have it sound in your head. So yeah it's mainly the vocals that turn your sound into a mess, as others already pointed out as well.

But from a musical point of view, it's quite typical a Volture-song, I mean after having listened to several of your songs I'm started to recognize your typical way of working.

HyeVolture [be] - 8 years ago

yeah this one's a little bit older now too, now I have a decent mic and cool edit, I know mastering is very important. Part two will bemore sophisticated (I hope so). Thnx for comment!