Wow, a very nice beginning. You can tell you put a lot of thought into this story idea. Even better, you are able to present your ideas in a very well written way. I truly enjoyed the beginning and do hope you continue this story.

PA

Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2010

This is promising start. I would love to see more chapters in this story.

Great start to your story and I am looking forward to your next update. Since Harry is going to be taught by Flamel, does't that mean that he won't be going to Hogwarts his next school year. If so, the Dumbledore is going to have a fit that he has lost his weapon and Hermonie is going to be jealous and think that she should have been the one asked, because she is so much smarter than Harry. Ron, well we all know how he will act.