S.C. Setai

Sleep - Poem by S.C. Setai

As I stand by the unnamed love, and see her joke, smile laugh and jeast, her face is like the heavenly dove, may I lie with you and sleep for time the reast.Your eyes shine like the brightest star, lost in a sea of endless space, I would go for you anywhere, no matter how far, I would die a thousand deaths to see your wondrous face.I love you always when you are happy and sad, my thoughts are of you forever, in life and death, I once hated life but you made me glad, now so precious is my every breath.O angel of endless beauty, I love you with all my heart so deep, and may I follow you throughout our lives, and with you lie in everlasting sleep.

Comments about Sleep by S.C. Setai

I really liked the rhyme scheme within this poem. I see that you speak of love, as if you have experienced it in such a way that you know what it is to be loyal and want to show this appreciation forever, with an everlasting touch. Very well written.

I am going to point out some spelling mistakes: brightest**, always**, Thoughts** and Beauty**. I am not sure about the grammar. but it seems fine.