There really are some things you say as well as actions you do that you really shouldn't. Things like this really do screw up a friendship too far beyond repair that you can't ever go back to how things were. One screw up can set off a chain of screw ups and when all is said and done, that's what the situation is...screwed up

Wow. That was truly incredible. In the story, we see Lindsay as this hard-ass who never really thinks too in-depth about anything; a wild-child if you will. But this shows just a sliver of vulnerability, which was great. Excellent job :)

I'm Sheaver chapter 1 . 12/2/2012

:) This is nice! I really like stuffs written in Lindsay's pov because she's someone new. A fresh sight.
I like how you portrayed her in this piece.
I hope to see more of Lindsay!

A very believable - and very sad - take on the consequences of Sam's death on the other girls. Almost makes you feel sorry for Lindsay, in spite of her problems being mostly her own fault.
I especially liked the idea of Sam being the rock that kept them all together; it's something we don't really see in the book, since it's from Sam's perspective, but it probably would be something none of the girls realized until she was gone.