this story is almost 8 years old! and despite all the great fanfic i've read, like "this pendent heart", this was so simplistic, yet well put, and I really enjoy that no one's name actually gets said (at least not completely, we all saw Duck trying). This is the best and i think this should have been part of the series, 'cuz there's minimal "fluff", and it adds a real story, as opposed to the plot device of "Fakir can't write a story," like all this other fanfic.

:D Much Kudos to you! :D

Vampire Princess Yuki chapter 1 . 9/18/2010

Aaawww...This was such a touching story...I LOVE YOU!...FOR MAKING A GREAT SSSSTTOOOORRRRYYYYY!

I really love how you capture both Fakir and Ahiru's emotions, as they try to find their places again in the world. And how despite the story being over they still try and continue to dance. Just wow, this was beautiful beyond words and so sad, I felt like crying because it had such a bittersweet feel to it.

Wow. Just wow. This was simply incredible! I loved how Fakir and Ahiru decided to continue dancing even if the story has ended. Something about their stories, one about a duck and the other about a knight, both forgotten, has always caught my interest and delight whenever I see them together.