Reviews

This is really good, I love this chapter. There's a few things I've noticed though about the story as a whole, not anything bad don't worry but, what happened with Bob and Alicia afterwards? Did they get arrested... And did the guys end up building the tree house? I'm not sure if you'll be including these later on in the story or not. It doesn't really matter whether you do or don't but there just two things that I thought of... But yeah, this story is awesome. I love frerard fanfics were Gerard or Frank bullied the other, I know I shouldn't like Gerard or Franks pain but there to amazing not to read. Anyways, update this soon please... For me!! Love this story, your an awesome writer! :)