Dae Louise Snape.

Dae Louise Snape. Daughter of Lily Evans - soon to be Potter - and Severus Snape. She has lived in Hogwarts for the majority of her life, except from the summer holidays, when she goes to her home in London.
Finally, she's in Hogwarts, getting sorted and making frineds her own age.
There's just one problem. What's wrong with Oliver?
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So far this hase been i really good story but one thing is that you could in the begining use less describing words. Try to remeber less is more and more is less. not saying dont use amy just cut it down a bit!

@EMMalfoy O_x
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please don't kill me...*Huddles in a corner and looks scared*
I'll upload as soon as I can, but my computer went bust and I have to use the school ones...sowwy :(
Thanks for reviewing btw! xxx

Hi! Is it shameful to say I've never read a Harry Potter fanfiction before? Well, I haven't but I'm loving this! I especially look the "He was him" line and the point about orphanages, those made me laugh!
Well done and I'm off to read Chapter 2!
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