Hi Darlene, if you are looking for suggestions as to how to improve what is there, I would suggest trying to add another instrument at the time the initial chord progression resumes, or around :46. BTW, I didn’t offer this comment before because you placed your post in the Music Analysis and Critique forum, which is mostly for asking others to offer critique on what you present in a more general sense. If you post instead in the Suggestions Wanted/Open to Revision forum, you generally get a wider range of comments back on how the piece might be improved.

It sounds like the underscore to a tragic or heavy moment in an artsy movie.

I'm new to composing--I know nothing; I'm still trying to learn how to read sheet music. I did enjoy this. I found it beautiful. Again, I got the feeling it was the underscore to a movie that was meant to be cinematic art.