Dude. This was a good one-shot. I want to know why in the jack-shit moka was freakin bleeding please write more chapters.

Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2014

Omg. I love it. I can't wait for more, please add more to it, I love it so much

Anonymous chapter 1 . 2/2/2014

Good for a first. Simple. Lemony. But little detailed and extremely short. Once again have I found yet another author whom has not exceeded my expectations and, like always, Disappointed me greatly.
At least... Watch the language. Remember this CHAINSAW MONKEY, Remember this.

-Anonymous
(now...soon to be author)

Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2014

It was a really good story you should write another chapter about it please.

Dude, it would be seriously appreciated if you wrote more, besides, it's hard to get people to review the first chapter of a story, let alone request more, so maybe you could consider taking this story up again seeing what sort of feedback you get? I hope so.