Great job on the neatness of the cleaned-up lines. Had you considered leaving the bottoms of their legs "open" (no u-shaped curve to connect the vertical lines of the thighs)? With the leg shapes being closed like that, it almost gives the impression that they don't have lower legs. Logically we know that isn't true, but visually the possibility for such an interpretation is there.

Nice use of balance and symmetry! Are the girls on the left and right supposed to be twins or mirror images, or do you plan to add details later to visually distinguish the two? A bit of difference, even in just the shape of the hair and garment flow, could make the overall effect more dynamic.

l1chen Inking: I actually have something in mind to remedy cut-off leg look, but I get where you are coming from. Staging: since the girls were very similar I just copied them over for making composing it a little easier, but they will definitely have a few differences between the two (although the two younger girls do look quite similar irl haha). Thanks for your input!