This was amazing because I felt that it fits in really well with Charlie's character and I loved the bit where he was showing her his scars or imperfections, as it were. It was just so overwhelmingly adorable. *squee*

I like that you kept the notion of speaking without words troughout the story and you had some wonderful imagery going on. I also liked the mention of the opals, it's always nice when someone takes little moments of canon and incorporate them like this. Well done!

I like how fleshed out Charlies character is - this makes sense, being of few words most the time. I love the comparisons between the two of them, they seem so perfect the way you write them. I loved the last line - aw! Adorable. I like that it had no dialogue, too, it was fitting.

This was great! Again, I don't ship the pairing but I love how you've written them. Charlie seems very in-character, I can definitely picture him being a man of few words unless he's asked about dragons, then he'll just talk on and on and on. I like the way you characterize Katie as well, how she's confident and fiery and a fighter, because I see her written in so many different ways. It's nicely-written, also, no SPaG errors. The last sentence is really adorable! I really like how you're writing about how Charlie is a man of few words and there's no dialogue in here - that just fits together really smoothly, I love that. Haha, I can definitely picture Charlie preferring pissed off dragons to emotional girls, that definitely seems like something he'd think. Nice job!

This is awesome. I think you've done the dragon/Katie comparison before, but it works so well, and I really like the way you drag it out in this one. I love the sentence about diamonds and opals, as well as every other sentence... but that one especially. Your characterizations of Katie and Charlie are excellent and this is just so fluffy and awesome. :) Well done!

It's rather refreshing to read a story that is devoid of dialogue because I think so many people depend on it to tell a story. It's definitely interesting, but I think to be a good author, you need to be able to tell a story using narration, also. Beautiful imagery and analogies here, and very high emotion - all of which I can appreciate.

For that last libe you deserve a few good "aww's" Super duper cuteness right there. I loved the metaphor (Or was it a metaphor really?) with the dragon. How with just a look in the eye they can see what a person/s like. I like that the idea that charlie learns about things from his dragons. They give him more than just burns. This was very good you did a nice job with explaining Charlie and Katies relationship in a fairly short amount of time. Nice work!