Hey there Hawke! Thank you so much for your reviews again, you don't know how much they mean _

About my poem 'My little loved ones', yeah, I feel that way sometimes. I have these periodes in which all I can think of is cutting...They last like, 3 or 4 weeks and then they leave for 3 or 4 weeks. So yeah. Thanks for offering that I can talk to you! Means so much to me! Really..._

Anyway, back to the real purpose of this review _

I really love what you're doing to this story, it's so awesome! It's so different from all the other stories that I read, so that's really cooL!

"“How long have you been in here,” Josphitha asked the cat " you want a question mark there...i'm sure you know that, everyone makes proofing mistakes. but it might be a good idea to look it over carefully before posting.

how long exactly will this be? because so far, these three parts could all easily fit into one chapter, both length-wise and content-wise.

anyhow, it's interesting so far...not quite sure what you're aiming for just yet, but that's pretty much the way it goes, isn't it?