ShonenBoy's Dialogues

I decided to try my hand at a dialogue, mostly for my own personal use, since it seemed easy enough - and it was for the most part, but I also figured I may as well put it out up here. Please give me any feedback you guys might have.

That said, this one is probably a little more specific than most dialogues someone would want. The basis is Pan and Uub from Dragon Ball GT, so it obviously works best with a Pan hair set, but I made a NAME option early on in that can be used to put your own name into it. I tried to give a decent amount of dialogue options for most things that might pop up, but I'm new, so obviously this might not be as good as a lot of other scripts.

I hope to do a few more at least, I'd probably do best at character specific stuff, but I do have a few 'original' ideas in mind as well. Feedback is greatly appreciated. :D