I started to translate the song yesterday, but gave up. So sad the song... Especially if it was written by young woman. Я бы зашел в эту песню с другой стороны: Начался проливной дождь, теперь стою я в лужах на полу, мокрая насквозь. Раскрылись небеса и полилось как из ведра. На мне сумок больше чем надо. "Мне надо забрать своих детей от их отцов," it's not the same as in English. There must be a Russian version of pick up the kids from their fathers, who looked after them for me, while I was at work. It could be understood as though she taking away the kids from their fathers. It could lead to tragedies.
Cheers,
Anatoli

There must be a Russian version of pick up the kids from their fathers, who looked after them for me, while I was at work. It could be understood as though she taking away the kids from their fathers. It could lead to tragedies.

Hello ... thank you, that is interesting to learn (about the way the words read in Russian). I am nearly 28 and my children are 9 and 10. I did write this when I was sad because I was literally standing in broken shoes with an injured ankle after a long day of work and with too many bags - but it is not a sad song because when I sang in the street on my journey it became peaceful