no, you did not leave this chapter with that suspensive scence! ur killing me here, especially considering the fact that arnold just got their and helga isn't their. My G-D u really know how to keep the suspense going. PLease update soon. i am really looking forward to reading chapter.

I'm so glad you're back. It was amazing. So many characters, all they are doing something, interacting with each other, and all their actions are part of some big scheme. Your story reminds me Shakespeare's works in this aspect, and I'm not joking.

I still don't feel that Rhonda could help in this situation... and I can't help but feel that the solution should rather have something to do with Olga and the mysterious envelope left by "Mr. Vigil" (You haven't forgotten about it? Sure, I know you haven't).

Are you gonna tell us some legends of the Green Eyed? BTW, do you realize that the best specialist on Viridoculatian ("Green-Eyed" in Latin) mythology in Hillwood is Arnold. As frustrated as he is, he obviously has found and read all the books on the matter.

The very first scene with Olga and the shrine was enough for me to love this chapter, but it has so much more... And the last scene looks very promising. Please, don't make us wait so long.

bahjcb chapter 6 . 4/14/2008

I was so excited to see another chapter. I just love this story. I like all the emotions especially. Like Olga's dilemma, you could almost feel her emotions.

Mighty Falcon chapter 6 . 4/14/2008

Woah, Olga now realize the deeper side of Helga, Gerald is being suspicious and now Arnold's gonna visit Helga's house to talk Helga...whew. Good work on the latest 's right you'll have to keep going.

YAY! I was so excited to see that you updated. This was so very good. I loved Olga's thoughts and her internal battle. And Gerald following the girls. That's one way to get information. I seriously hope that you don't leave with a cliffhanger for another 4 months. This was really good.

PLEASE...update this soon! It's so good. And I want to know more. I want to know all about how the talk between Helga and Rhonda goes. And Olga confronting Helga about the shrine and I want to see how Arnold reacts to Helga helping him and what that note says and I REALLY want to read more of this story.

I really liked your story, can you tell? You did a really good job switching between the POV's of Arnold and Helga. The layout is really good. And it's intrigue is awesome. I hope you're able to update this soon.

I've gotta say, the reactions to the journal from Helga were very fitting. You've managed to "get" Helga really well. I also found that the "I'll be emptier than a corn hus without Arnold" in the previous chapter was REALLY funny, as well as truthful. ; )