Rated 4 / 5 stars2009-12-23 14:25:23

Great.

Amazing animation wise. Great sound-wise. Original concept.

Direction could've used some work. Scratch that, direction was great, but scenes were so short and rushed that it felt incomplete. Looks like a lot of work was done for something that couldn't have been elaborated on more. Not without much more work at least.

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2009-10-17 22:05:58

Long way to go.

You're a great artist, but you've got a lot to learn in terms of animation, direction, and fine tuning.

You've gotta think more about those little things like background noise, sound effects as well as just improving your skill before you can pull off something as ambitious as you did. Nice try so far, though.