"Hey," I said. She nodded. That's it. I risk my life falling out of a tree and when I say hi, all I get is a nod?! Well. This is not over.
I think that was my favourite part of the whole chapter. I can imagine him pouting adorably :)

Author's Response: hahah awee that's how i pictured it as i wrote it :$
i'm glad you liked it!!

Dont worry i struggle writing long chapters too i prefer to get straight into the story! Are you annoyed yet by my reviews because it will be very anonying when i read the next 20 chapters because if they're as good as this one there will be another review! sorry!

wow i make this mistake everytime im on then! sometimes i forget im talking to my guy friends and they look a bit sick and im like what? then OH! its pretty funny actually. Good chapter though this is really entertaining.

oh my god, I love every piece of this story so far. its utterly priceless. I find myself laughing out loud twenty times and whenever 'what-eva' comes up I see james poking his hips out and moving his head in a circle. hahahahaha. I love this! :D