Wow... I was going to review this for the Review Game, but it's too hard to follow. Your writing and ideas are beautiful, but it is very hard to understand what is happening. It's between a song and poetry and a story, and despite having trouble comprehending what you were talking about, I couldn't stop reading it. At the end I wasn't sure if she was a robot or a hybrid or what and if he was a robot or not. It was crazy, like a stream of thought more than anything.