5/11/2013 c611Stuck in OblvionAh, Granny Rags, what a creepy old lady. When I saw her in the game I was really apprehensive, I thought she was going to attack me lol. Glad you made the Outsider talk to Corvo bout her :))

5/11/2013 c5Stuck in OblvionThis chapter is great, I really love the lore with the Outsider and the Leviathan! Really cool. Also I liked how you put the bath scene in, a lot of fics portray Corvo as messy, oily and dirty. Because he just goes around without care in the sewers. I pictured him as a more clean person, especially after working with Royalty as the Protector. :) Nice touch!

5/11/2013 c3Stuck in OblvionIn this chapter you show a sense of remorse in Corvo which I love, that he is really a protector and not an assassin. When he killed the boy but felt that guilt, it shows he is human, not just someone that can be used. Also how you depict Samuel is great, how he let Corvo fall asleep. In the game, whats the possibility for Corvo to be awake so often. Great chapter!

5/11/2013 c2Stuck in OblvionGreat chapter, the relation you are putting between the empress and Corvo seems highly sexual at this point but I can really tell that Corvo loves Emily. That is what is guilting him currently, possibly more than Jessamines death. Corvo knew what he was doing was entirely illegal and if it was his choice most likely would not have gone through with it, Jessamine wanted him, he wanted to please his empress in any way.

This chapter is great, at first it was a little tough for me to get into, but I enjoyed how you turned it around emphasizing on how the Outsider it messing with him. Also on how much Jessamines death is ailing him. Because he was not only her Lord Protector but "lover" and father of Emily. Very good!

5/11/2013 c16Stuck in OblvionHey, I absolutely love your rendition of the plot dishonored, although you are keeping it close to the actual story I love how you give it more meaning. By giving Corvo more emotion, especially about his past with Jessamine and in the prison. Also with the Outsider, toying with his thoughts. I hope you continue with Callista's and their little romance. :) Continue soon !

4/27/2013 c153BlueWallTackThis is such a good story, the best Dishonored fic in my opinion. I can't wait to read more!

3/26/2013 c1Hetekoswhy does it say complete on the status? this is getting good