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The Magic SOB forum is for posts of story sequences that are frequently vignette-based. Put those here while actual battle reports can go in Reports From the Field.You must talk like James T. Kirk in this forum at all times. Leonard Nimoy is fine too.

"Perhaps you should have been more thorough when you checked into my history. Then again, you Menggu could barely hold on to Avalon. I shouldn't be surprised at how badly you screwed up this time." said the prisoner.

"Give me one reason, scum. One reason why I shouldn't blow your head off right now."

The prisoner chuckled then said, "Because if you kill me, then you'll never learn what happened at Hopklis Nur..."

MEANWHILE...

Sky Marshal Myrna stared out the view port in her chambers. Her thoughts often drifted to Avalon and the events that had occurred. A knock on her door startled her.

"Komm, bitte."

"Igraine! You've returned! How did ze search fur ein master go?"

"Arthur is being trained by some of the greatest minds in the galaxy. When he becomes a man, we will be ready."

"And how are you these days? I assume the fleet is keeping you busy." asked Igraine Pendragon

"Yes... isn't it funny how you turn up as I vas z'inking of Avalon?"

"Komm, there ist some'zing I muss show you."

Myrna brings Igraine to a table nearby.

"What is that?" asks Igraine. "It looks strangely familiar..."

"Did your husband tell you vat happened at Hopklis Nur?"

"Only a little. He could barely keep himself together when I mentioned the name of that dreadful place."

It vas ze map to Cymru. Ze same zat ze Varhead Schplinter had been looking fur.

On ze map vas vritten ein strange language. I could not read it, aber dein husband could. He z'aid it vas vritten in ein older form of Avalonian. As he brushed ze surface of ze sphere, ze temple began to shake.

Before ve knew it, ve vere schtanding in ein portal..

Und z'en ve vere gone.

"I can read the word here. It says 'Cymru'. Then you did find my people's homeworld! This is terrific news!"

As your friend I like the storyline and don't want any of my factions shoehorned in where they don't fit. However if you did in a way that made sense like in the battle against your wife (excellent commander btw) with the Third Alliance fighting the Menggu who wanted data then I would be quite pleased.

Silverdream wrote:As your friend I like the storyline and don't want any of my factions shoehorned in where they don't fit. However if you did in a way that made sense like in the battle against your wife (excellent commander btw) with the Third Alliance fighting the Menggu who wanted data then I would be quite pleased.

Who gave Silva pills? The sentence is mostly correct and he seems...normal