This is a fantastic crossover. Not only is the crossover mechanism perfectly plausible, but the perspective and the characterisations interweave beautifully. I like your Wesley, with all his growth not hiding those glimpses of yearning and insecurity tied up in the Enterprise and Picard and his journey. And his uneasiness about the situation with Anakin and Obi-Wan is perfect, because sometimes an outsider can see those things more clearly than anyone else. Anakin and Obi-Wan and their conflicted relationship plays out very well also. I particularly love Anakin's concern over Shmi and Obi-Wan just... not getting it. At all.

I always thought that Wes should have gone back to visit after he left. Does Wes actually have abilities like the Traveler's or what? Can't remember. That was neat! Sequal would be interesting. Maybe Anakin and Wes meeting up during the events of movie 2 or 3 or something.

An interesting, but a bit confusing idea. I never read a Star Wars/Star Trek -crossover befor, that had Wesley meeting the Jedi. Like I said, it's interesting, with a few good insides into the relationship between Anakin and Obi-Wan, and it has some very funny parts. My favorite line was Wes' thoughts about Yoda: "Yoda struck him as the likely result of what a love child of Captain Picard and Deanna Troi would be like, if it had somehow missed out all the good genes."

Wow. In one little short story you managed to portray, with such depth and such realism, the emotions of several characters. You really captured who Wesley was... and though I don't know Wars like I know Trek, that seemed about right for Anakin. Add in a beautifully portrayed theme... this is just awesome. I only wish I could write like you.