This makes me think of my musical-family at school. We were such a tight cast. From the very beginning, we told each other it was us against the world. This kinda shows parts of that love, I think... at least, that's what I get from it. )

I really like this...I have empathy, too. I think that it was very well written. I don't think that the adjective "shitty" did too much for the poem, I think you could have used something stronger without cursing, but that is just my opinion (and I understand the need to do so, I've done so before in my works, too) I just think it might be stronger that way. Nonetheless, this was excellent. Good work. Keep writing. )

Shazz chapter 1 . 10/2/2007

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thats okay. ull know its me

i reaallyy like the first two verses? stanzas? whatever word. the first two of those. especially where it says. fill their minds with happy lies

Ohh that was really powerful, I really love it foo! Its so true, everyone likes to decieve their thoughts and lies with music. No one really does care, and you've portrayed it very well that we need to live for ourselves and not care what other people think of us.