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Review:

Harveyboy says:I am speechless...you handled the love scene wonderfully...they have such a need for each other at the moment but I am glad you didn't have them going any further I think it would have spoilt it at the moment...impressed you haven't used dialogue yet...your writing is so descriptive and I love the idea of it raining in every chapter adds to the feeling of sorrow...

Author's Response: Harveyboy,

Awe, wow, you're speechless? I'm so glad that you mentioned them stopping. Sometimes there is more meaning behind obstaining than actually going through with it. It was just too soon and their emotions too raw and they are adults who are wise to slow down and just breathe.

Yes, still no dialogue. Sometimes there really aren't words when someone is going through tradegy. And it shows how much they know each other already... a connection from knowing each other since they were ten or eleven years old.

And oh, the rain... it is a serious and sad theme in this story that I enjoyed writing about in each chapter, especially the last.