This story was AMAZING! I read the whole thing in one gosince I couldn't find it in myself to stop. xD Loved how you kept the plot gripping, interesting, and exciting through the progression of each chapter. Now, that is real writing talent. Good on ya! :D Reid and Anna were SO adorable! x3

Sophia chapter 28 . 12/16/2014

Omg this story is like life! You are such a talented author and I can't wait to read more of your stories!

JP chapter 28 . 9/3/2014

Really great reimagining of the original! Would really enjoy reading your take on a sequel to this version!

Not half bad. It felt a little rushed to me and could have used a bit more detail though. Anna seemed like someone who could have substance and was a way kick ass chick but you didn't really give the reader's time to get to know her. Reid seemed a bit OOC too in some bits. Though it flowed well I just felt like you inserted your character into the story and focused mainly on scenes that would revolve a bit more around her (though I am thankful you didn't make her beat up Aaron Abbott in your Nicky's chapter like so many others who have written similar plot lines. That always irks me). I liked the idea of there being other pacts out there, obviously the witch trials were everywhere for a reason so why shouldn't there be other covenants? That's an idea I've been exploring myself. However, back to you and your fic. Like I've said it's quite well written but something about it just strikes me as a Mary-Sue I hate to say. An enjoyable one though, don't be put off by that label. Essentially though, I would have liked to see more substance from all the characters and for you to have gone a bit deeper into the story line. Well done though :)