Oh, I love it! I thought the bit about Snape taking off five points from Gryff because Harry snorted was funny!
Although I know I shouldn't wish this, but I do wish that Harry and Hermione would go behind Ron's back in the books...I'd just LOVE to see that!

This is interesting. Caitlyn pointed out that Trelawny is a bit different -- I thought her letter was much more coherent than I'd expect from her normally! -- but you've done an excellent job at keeping them in-character. I don't know if I'd consider Ron a candidate for murder or suicide, but then I never figured he'd lose Hermione :-P. Going to read the rest now!

Good story. Well written. I do feel sorry for Ron but Hermione does love Harry more. Lupin's return as DADA instructor would be great. I think Hermione's parents would think Ron a better choice for Hermione than Harry but they would go along with whatever she wants. I think that Hermione gets what Hermione wants, even if it's not good for her. Nice long chapters. Keep up the good work.

I just found this fic the other day, and I have spent the majority of the days since reading it. This has very quickly become my favorite fic on this entire site. You have a great talent for capturing the characters and drawing the readers in. I am constantly thinking about this story now, and thinking hwo great it is. Please continue to update, and do it quickly, because now that I have read all the chapters, I need more.

Wow this story is great so far! Im sorry I only out one review down, but I simply could not stop reading it. PLEASE update soon! This is my favorite fan fiction, and Im afraid I won't be able to read it soon as my baby is due July 4 but I can have her anyday now. Thanks!

Hey! I absolutely love your story! I started reading it a few months ago, but I lost it, and now I've found it so I'm going to give you a review : )
You capture the characters so well in this story and when I read it I almost feel like I'm reading something JK Rowling wrote [I hope that's the feel you're going for, if not...then I'm sorry] But anyway, I love your story so much and you should really keep writing, you're great at it! Take all the time you want to finish, I love suspense. [H/HR forever ; ) ]

This chapter rocked!!! Yes it's me, iarehampster, i'm late for my review, but I'm gonna part like it is...1972? No that ain't right, no drugs at my party please. Yes, my review is late and others shall be for a while, I'm in Germany, and I need to find internet access since the place I am staying at doesn't have internet access. Once again Harry and Hermione went half way...dangit!!! Well, this was a good chapter, I lioked Voldemort's darkness, it was so...evil!!! Well my personal dilema isn't over, but is getting close, just need to send some e-mails, do some thinking, and it shall be all over, then I can tell you about it...maybe. I saw scary movie last night, that movie is hilarious!!! Anyway, back to the fic! Harry really explained why he loved Hermione. Most guys just say, "Uhhhh...well, you fill up that sweater real nice!". Not a good answer. Harry was different though, he really stood up and said why, bravo Harry, bravo!!! I can sense the end coming, I'm guessing one or two more chapters and then the epilogue. Keep up the good work, it is summer, so don't feel like you have to update sooner than usual, take your time, the stroy is almost over. I'm patient. I'll just watch movies and hang out while I wait. Update when you can, I'm patient. You rule, as always!!!

That was adorable! Even if you think it was a filler, I saw quite a bit of plot points, or possible plot points, hidden around this chapter. lol. I loved the *ahem* moment between Hermione and Harry. lol. They're so cute when they stop thinking. lol. I just have one question... are you ever going to have them, like, go too far? Not that I want them to, it's just what you've sort of been implying with their steady increase of, erm, passion. lol. Yeah, anyway, I LOVED it! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update really soon! 10/10!

hey brilliant like always, and to do with the brittan easter:
im in australia, which is originally a colony of Britain. it follows the same kind of thing for easter it think so this is what happens in australia: easter friday, saturday and sunday are the closest weekend to the full moon in the March/April kind of time thingy. i think britain does the same as australia. ok so i hope that was helpfull.

GREAT Chapter! Allison is actually sitting next to me this time, as apposed to me making up stupid things 4 her 2 say! lol. Allison: God Caitlyn! You're so weird! Caitlyn: So? Yeah so anyway, we loved this chapter! Update really soon! We both {but especially Caitlyn} loved reading the romance aspect of this chapter! lol. It was adorable! Is Hermione's mom's letter going to be in the next chapter? I can't wait to hear what she has to say about Hermione's reaction to her relationship with Harry! lol. Update soon, once again! 10/10... no. 100000000000/10 but I'll settle for a 10!

Aaahhh! The story is going great! How many chaps r u doing? You r a total 0=)!!! Plz, plz submit again, i can't live w/o ur story! I give this a 100!!!

Author's Response: After chapter eighteen (which is the latest that I've submitted) there will be, approximately, two more chapters plus an epilogue.
Thanks very much! I'm sorry I don't update sooner, but still It's here, and it's almost over. Wow. It's so weird. I've been writing this fic since Christmas. =D