I am speechless! This is so good! I'd better not start telling you how amazing this is cause I won't make it justice, but I'll try!! ;)

Ok, first: the description of the dress and the clothes in general was so good! You really have a hang for descriptions, I really love them! They get you in the mood so much!

Then, the whole encounter with the Founders was nicely conveyed and I could easily picture everything that was going on very easily.

And the final scene with Edward and the rest was very tense which I absolutely loved! It was fast-paced, but just to right amount to keep the reader alert for every single detail!

I think you've picked a really good time of the Founders' story to start. You immediately pull the reader in the plot and it's character and in a very clear and not confusing way, and I congratulate you for that! Plus, the idea about incorporating the Elves and other LotR's creatures is very well thought out.

I can't say more since this is the beginning, but it is an amazing and extremely promissing beginning.

Am off to read the next chapter!! :D

Author's Response: Ohmygod. I LOVE YOU. hahaha. seriously.

Thank you! Descriptions means alot to me. I hate when you find stories with little or no description of the clothing, so you have to use your imagination for that. And I just had exactly what she would look like and wear in my head, I just HAD to right them down.

Really? Wow. Thank you! Haha. Thats exactly what I was going for.

Again, thank you. (I really do love you.)

I will love you forever. Really. This review has made me really happy! :D