Much better, especially you, Camelfox...still though some things seem too stilted or else the louder parts are too reserved...also, some of the jokes were fairly amusing and I realize you're trying to hit a wide audience with your jokes but the opening joke with saying "om nom nom" was reminiscent of a bird smacking into a window, sadly, in my mind...the waterbottle and biology parts of the skit were far superior though.