Hello there! You once reviewed my Dramione story Love Makes Me, so I decided to return the favor on one of yours! I have a few suggestions for you to improve your writing. Firstly, you spell Hermione with the "i" before the "o" (also in DramIone), but that was just something that bugged me minimally.

Also, I would strongly suggest getting a beta reader to correct and grammar or spelling errors, since some of your sentences didn't flow very well or sounded a little awkward.

Finally, make sure they sound in character--they don't really sound like they do in the books or movies, so if you changed that it would make it seem that much more believable.

I hope you only take this as constructive criticism and not offensively, I'm only trying to help! :) xx

well u asked me to leave a review so i did..
i really liked your story alot...it was very funny nd i laughed nd laughed so much when i read it.could u update soon so that i could read it again..i want to read further
10/10

and please update the chapters of we are never getting back togther or are we plz soon

Author's Response: oh really?? im so happy u liked it :)

well im busy in writin the chapters of we are never gettin back together or are we...so i cant update the second chapter of this story very soon..i hope u understand ok :)

wel yes im writing the 5tn chapter of WANGBTORW vry soon i will update it ok!