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Suigintou: I AM NOT A JUNK! *Stabs Flo*
Flo: ZOMG THE PAIN! X_X------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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Winnie-Youka: “WAHAHAHAHAHA! What a joke, you guys are pathetic!”

Suiseiseki: “Nani? How dare you ~desu! We’ll kick your ass right here and now ~desu!”

Stinku: “As long the 5 sisters are united, we can overcome anything!”

Souseiseki: *taps Shinku’s shoulder from behind” “Err Shinku?”

Shinku: “What?”

Souseiseki: “We have a little problem here.”

Souseiseki points to Suigintou, who sulk in a distance mumbling some gibberish to herself.

Suigintou: *In very depressing tone* “Back when everyone used to call me Gin-sama….I’m not a junk…what did I do to deserve this…I’m not a junk…”

Shinku: “Oh no…” *smacks her forehead*

Hina Ichigo: “We’re in deep shit ~nano!”

Clown-Youka: *rofl* “BWAHHAHAHAHAHAHA! I can’t stop! This is too funny!”

Winnie-Youka: “HAHAHA, but enough of this stupidity, we will now end your life! Let’s go Aibou (Buddy)!”

Winnie The Pooh
Winnie The Pooh
chubby little cubby all stuffed with fluff
Hes Winnie The Pooh
Winnie The Pooh
Willy nilly silly old bear
Welcome To you & how do ya do
Here comes a tale 'bout winne the pooh

Now set this to repeat forever and see what happens

Kanaria: “OH SHI- THEIR SINGING IS HORRIBLE!”

Souseiseki: *Cover her ears* “OMG MY EARS!”

Shinku: “THE HORROR!”

Suiseiseki: *Runs arounds fanatically* “MAKE IT STOP DESU!”

Hina Ichigo: “We’re getting owned ~nano!” *XO*

Suigintou: *Still sulking* “I’m not a junk… I’m not a junk… I’m not a junk…”

Clown-Youka: “Hey Kyodai, this one seems unaffected.”

Winnie-Youka: “Does it matter? Once we trash those useless girls…”

Suigintou: *heard something sensitive* “Trash…?”

Winnie-Youka: “We will then take care of that junk right there!” *points at Suigintou*

Winnie-Youka/Clown-Youka: “BLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHH!” *fall to the ground* “You think you have won? There are still many Youkas under Emperor Enju’s command, you cannot stop the Enju Empire! ENJU EMPIRE BANZAI!!!!!”

*KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!*

Hina Ichigo: “We win ~nano” *Jumps in joy*

Shinku: “Good job, Junk Maid-"

Suigintou: *Turns to the sisters with a bloodlusting aura and a very ugly face* “What did you say???”

Shinku: *panicked* “Errrr…I mean good job one-sama!”

Everyone else except Suigintou sweats heavily.

Meanwhile at Enju Empire’s secret base…

Emperor Enju: “Rozen Sentai Alicenger, huh? Now this is a problem…General Bara!”

Barasuishou appears

General Bara: *kneels to Enju* “Yes, my emperor.”

Emperor Enju: “You’re in charge of taking care of this little problem.”

General Bara: “Your wish is my command; nothing can stop you from world domination.”

Emperor Enju: “Good, good. Once those so called Alicenger are out of the way I can finally take over the world! BWAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

***And so the Alicengers somehow manger to defeat their foe, Winne-Youka and Clown-Youka, but this is just a tip of an ice-berg. What will the Enju Empire have in sort for our Heroines? Gambatte, Alicengers!

Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung
Authored by: Flo
Chapter 9------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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2 weeks had passed…

Nurse: “Isn’t it wonderful Megu! You can finally start a new life other than live a ‘boring hospital life’.” *Said jokingly*

Doctors and Nurses were shocked when they last gave Megu a medical check. Her heart problem that terrorized the girl simply vanished and was operating normally. Doctors and Nurses ran through test after test on Megu to find out what caused her recovery, but could find none. In the end doctors had no choice but to conclude that it was a miracle that Megu was cured, however they can’t write that in the report because it’s unscientific. Instead they written it off as natural recover. Megu herself was also surprise by this miracle, but unlike the adults she knew for sure Suigintou was the one responsible.

Mr. Kakizaki: *Bows to the nurse* “Thank you for taking care of our daughter after all this time.”

Mrs. Kakizaki: *Bows to the nurse* “It must be troublesome taking care of her.”

Nurse: *Giggles* “Oh ho ho, aw c’mon there’s nothing to it, as long it’s all nurses’ duty.” *Looks at the clock on the reception counter* “Oh just look at the time, I shouldn’t be keeping you all.”

Megu and her family exited the hospital and into the family car, the parents at the front with Megu at the back seat. The father started the engine and started driving. Driving further and further away from the hospital and closer to Megu’s new home, ‘Home’.

As Mr. Kakizaki drives he couldn’t help but to look at his rear-view mirror watching Megu holding the winged doll.

Mr. Kakizaki: “Megu, are you sure it’s a good idea to bring this doll home?”

An uneasy silence, Jun looked at Suiseiseki’s case; she’s yet to be awake from the fight.

Jun: “Shinku, what exactly happened?”

Shinku: “…We’ve met the seventh Rozen Maiden.”

Jun: “What? The 7th?”

Shinku: “…”

***
[2 weeks ago]

Kirakishou: “Onee-sama?”

Shinku: “Suigintou?”

Suigintou stood between Shinku and Kirakishou, for some reason she looks a little different from before. Her clothes, a long black dress with ribbon lace up front and fine lace trim by the side while she still retained her black rose hair band. Her eyes, once violet, now turned ruby red. Shinku could wonder what happened to Suigintou.

Kirakishou on the other hand feel a strong aura emitting from Suigintou, it wasn’t from the bloodlust during the previous battle with her. Her aura wasn’t filled with hatred nor rage but an aura of brilliance and purity.

Suigintou wings turned into the twin dragons and attacked Kirakishou, which she barely dodged away. Kirakishou tried to counter attack but the dragons make short work of the attempt.

Kirakishou: *helpless dodge Suigintou’s attack* “Onee-sama, what happened to you? This isn’t like you at all.”

Suigintou: “Quiet!” *Continues her attack*

Kirakishou managed to find an opening repelled the dragons’ rampage, which exploded into endless feathers raining all over the place. As Kirakishou looked around, Suigintou disappeared.

Kirakishou: “Onee-sama?”

As the 7th looked around for her sister, she never realized that Suigintou was behind her until it was too late.

Kirakishou: *turned around* “!!”

Suigintou: “This is for Megu!” *Gives a hard punch to Kirakishou’s face*

Kirakishou flew a few clicks from that punch. “Such strength, it’s impossible at this level.” She said to herself. Suigintou’s human master was still alive so power from hatred was out of the question, unless…

Kirakishou: “I see…”

Kirakishou got up, the white rose that was covering the right eye was gone, reveal the empty eye socket.

Suigintou: “What the…”

Kirakishou: *covered her empty eye socket* “*She* gave you this power didn’t she, Onee-sama.”

Suigintou: “…”

Kirakishou: “I see” *Began to smile* “Fufufu…ha ha…HA HA HA HA!”

Suigintou: “What’s so funny?”

Kirakishou: “I’m so happy for you Onee-sama, that you are one step close to Alice.”

Shinku: *Shocked* “What? Alice?”

Kirakishou: “It’s a joyous event for Onee-sama, although it’s totally different from what I’ve planned.”

Suigintou: “I never want to be any part of your plan! I’ll never forgive you for what you did to Megu.”

Kirakishou: *pretends to be hurt by Suigintou’s words, but it’s painful none the less* “So, do you hate me for it, Onee-sama?”

Here's chap 19! just got it finished a little while ago!! the GinXMegu paring folks will like this one

Spoiler:

Chapter Nineteen

“Why Suigintou? What could’ve made you snap?”

Megu says to herself as she lies down in bed, crying her heart out. She’s cried too much lately, and can’t take the stress. The poor girl started to have a major attack in her stressful moment. As she has her attack, Suigintou had come back and watches Megu struggle to stay alive. She didn’t know what to do, if she should leave...or sit with Megu.

“Just let me die Suigintou.....” Megu says as she gasps for her breaths.

Gin just stood there, tears flowing down her cheeks. She was frozen with fear that Megu might die, and she can’t help her. Swooping over to Megu’s side Gin lies down beside her struggling medium. Holding her arm close to her little body, Gin clutched Megu as tight as she could.

“Just go away! You’ve done enough damage Suigintou!!” Megu tried to pry Gin off of her. When Gin fell to the floor she had this sad look like a lost puppy and gripped Megu’s hand, nuzzling her cheek against it.

“Megu.......please don’t....I’m sorry...I was just....”

She felt Megu’s hand become limp in hers. Looking up she didn’t seem to be moving, or breathing. She climbs back up on the bed and sat at Megu’s chest, gripping her shoulders.

She shook the girl a bit. Megu had actually been holding her breath, wanting to see what Suigintou does, if she really does care, she’d wake up. She felt Gin shaking her to wake her up, and felt Gin’s tears on her cheeks. When Gin was giving her CPR, that’s what got her thinking, it was mostly Gin’s lips on her own that did it. Gin had watched one of the nurses do this once or twice before, she’s a faster learner.

Gin had rested her head just above Megu’s breasts and cried hard. Gin soon felt Megu’s chest rising and falling, and her heart beat pounding again and arms around her tightly. “Oh Megu....you’re okay...”

The girl caught her breath and sat up. She was still sore at what Gin said before, but now that she knew Gin just saved her life again...she held onto that doll so tightly. Suigintou looked up as she held either side of Megu’s face firmly.

“Don’t....do that ever again”

Megu looked away a little and let go of Suigintou a moment. “Gin...we’ve been through this before, now I’m not sure if I want to keep this contract....if you keep flipping out. Why do you keep flipping out anyway?”

Gin looked way as well, and sighed. “Kirakishou is within me....she’s making me do these things....you know I’d never say anything or do anything to harm you Megu.”

“How can I really trust you though? I know you love me but, if you keep going crazy, I’m going to have to ask you to cancel the contract for good.”

Gin’s eyes went wide as she heard Megu say that. She held Megu’s hand and looked up into her eyes. Gin’s eyes had gone back to the warm caring look once more. Her small hand held her mediums hand tightly, and kisses her palms. Inside of Gin, Kira felt a twinge and realized finally and sighed to herself. She knew what she had to do. It was Kira’s decision to leave Gins body.

They saw a light pink light escape Gin’s body and it took the shape of Kira, and then vanished. Megu looked to Gin and held her tightly after that. Pulling back, she looked down to Suigintou, her thumb comes up and wipes away Gin’s tears, and just holds her so close against her chest once more.

“I’ll always love you though Onee-sama. .I’ll go back to my own body...you’ve shown me that...love is stronger then anything else...”

Kira returned to her N-field and sat down in her shack and cried. For the first time she just cried...mostly since she has failed..and figured out how much Megu meant to Gin.

Souseiseki had helped Rein up the steps and into his room. He sat down on the bed as Sousei gathered the first aide kit from the bathroom. When she came back in he was wincing a bit and watching the small tomboy doll walk towards him, then sits beside him on the bed to tend to his arm.

“She’s been crazy lately...but then again Suigintou has always been a little...different.” Sousei says a she wrapped his arm.

“I....want to thank you for saving me out there....damn she’s scary” He winced as Sousei applies a little rubbing alcohol to clean his wound.

“So what’s your name?” He asks, wondering if this was one of those Rozen dolls.

“Souseiseki, the fourth Rozen Maiden” She says proudly.

“I’m Rein and thanks again Souseiseki.....that’s a nice name.” He said looking to her small fingers as they gently worked on him.

“Thank you” She had blushed a bit. Her Green and Red eyes look up to him a moment, well her blush was even deeper then.

“So you’re the second Gardener twin...just as cute as your older twin. I was reading about you and your sisters earlier...but..how’d you know this is where I lived?” He was a little confused.

“Grandma and Grandpa take care of me until I can find a true medium” She says softly.

“Iv’e been here two weeks..how is it I haven’t seen you?” He was even more confused now.

He chuckles a little. He was starting to like little Souseiseki, even though she wasn’t as tall as Megu..or have long dark hair..he still thought the tomboy doll was a cutie. The two were chatting like old friends in

no time though. Rein was sitting at his small desk, showing Sousei all sorts of different internet sites just about the Rozen Maidens. He noticed how interested Sousei was and that made him smile.

“So what are your other sisters like? Besides the nutty Suigintou that flies into jealous fits..” He rubbed his arm.

“They are all so kind. The fifth sister, Shinku, she’s like the princess of the group, she can be very bossy, and stuck up at times, but when she is with her medium, she has this smile that I haven’t seen in a very long time. The sixth sister, Hina Ichigo, well she’s just a little kid at heart, my twin Suiseiseki is always picking on her. My second sister Kanaria thinks she’s a genius or something though her medium is just..weird...And the Seventh sister..well..” She paused a moment.

“I met the seventh sister at my friend’s home earlier today. Kirakishou right?” He says as he picked Sousei up and set her on the bed.

“Yes that’s her. All of us didn’t even know if she was real until after we met her. So you know Ari-san? Isn’t she awesome?” Sousei smirked, she looked up to Ari.

“Yeah she’s pretty cool, and those other two dolls of hers..Barasomething... and Shaina. Interesting dolls”

Sousei giggled a bit. “Yeah Barasuishou, we just call her Bara-chan and Shay-chan too! They are really nice once you get to know them.

After they had been talking for hours, it was evening time and Grandpa came up to check on them. Once he saw Sousei sitting on Rein’s lap as he was reading to her, the old man smiled before he announced that dinner was almost ready.

Night time had come quickly once dinner was over. Rein was just coming back from his class, when he spotted Suigintou sitting up on a lamp post..looked like she was waiting for him.

“So you’ve come back to take the rest of my arm?” He grumbled

“No...I haven’t....”

She floats down and stood before him. Her wings were white again, having calmed down. The street lamp highlighted her silvery hair very nicely, and almost seemed to make her eyes glow a warm color. She curtsies to him and looked up again. Megu told her all about how Rein was going to help her get better, it was Megu’s idea to find him and apologize for earlier.

“I uhm...I’ve come to apologize for my actions before....I was not myself...that and....Megu was quite cross with me for how I behaved...my bottom almost wore her hand mark.”

He had to chuckle seeing this doll that almost killed him before, begging for forgiveness.

“Well it’s alright, I sort of deserved to be attacked....Trust me..Megu’s always been like a little sister to me..I guess we both got carried away earlier”

He knelt down in front of her and looks into those soft magenta eyes a moment. “You’re kinda cute....just like Megu”

She’d blush and smile, thankful that he was not mad at her either.

“Thank you; I can see why she fancies you as well. If you get a chance to speak with my younger sister Souseiseki....please tell her I am very sorry as well...I suppose she knocked some sense in to me...I should be going, I promised Megu I’d return before it grew too dark...”

She bows to him and glanced back up as he patted the top of her head gently.

“You’re not so bad after all, I’ll talk to Sousei, she seems to like me, heck I sort of like her now...she was saying something about making a contract...I’d like to see what its like to be a medium to a doll...well I’ll let you get back to Megu...give her a kiss for me!”

Gin grins and winks as she took off, thinking that went well, she smiles to her self as she flew home to Megu.

“Aww she isn’t so bad...maybe a little nutty...but it makes her cute” Rein chuckles as he headed back home as well.

A few moments later Suigintou arrived back at Megu’s window and hopped down.

“So how’d it go? He wasn’t mad was he?” Megu asked as Gin climbs up the bed and sits beside her.

“No he was fine. He and Souseiseki seem to be getting along. I think she might find a decent medium in that boy. I can see why you like him Megu, he is handsome indeed”

Megu blushed and tickled Gin playfully. “Oh well yeah he is cute...last time I saw him, I was just a little taller then you” She giggles.

Gin looked up to her medium and sighed, they had another close call, she couldn’t afford to loose Megu again. As Megu held her hands around Gin’s waist, Gin’s small hands were resting over Megu’s as well.

“Hey....Megu....about what I said before....”

“Forget it Gin, it’s alright...if that naughty Kira really was controlling you...then I trust that it wasn’t you before...besides.....after you said it....I knew you didn’t mean it. I saw the tears in your eyes, and I felt it in my heart”

Megu rested her chin atop Gin’s head a moment. “Mmm....why don’t you get comfy and put those PJ’s on that you got from Mic-chan, you’ll feel better.” Megu says as she stroked her doll’s hair.

“Hmm..alright”

Suigintou slides out of bed and onto the floor where she keeps her case. Opening it she finds the one very pretty night gown Mic-chan gave her, instead of the PJ’s. The doll sized nighty was light blue with dark blue rose designs, with black lace trim on the straps and at the hem. As Gin got undressed, Megu watched and giggled to herself. Those cute doll joints were irresistible to Megu. Once Gin was finished she climbs back on the bed and sits beside Megu with her legs crossed. She left that head band on her head though.

Gin slid her arms around Megu’s neck in a warm embrace that she didn’t want to let go of, then she remembers what Rein said to her before she left. With a grin she pulls back a little and looks to Megu a moment, before leaning in and kissing her tenderly, then put her head on Megu’s shoulder.

“Suigintou....what was that for? “

“Rein said to give you a kiss for him...well that one was from him.....this one is from me..”

Suigintou moves to kiss her again, a little deeper then the last one, a hand comes up and holds Megu’s right cheek as she kisses her so deeply, putting everything she could into showing Megu how much she cared about her. That kiss seemed to last forever too, and getting deeper the longer they held it. Megu’s hands were holding Gin’s sides firmly and returning those wonderful kisses fully.

“Mmm...Gin....I love you” She whispers against her Angel’s lips.

“I love you too my Megu-chan”

Gin says as she kissed down to Megu’s neck and finally rests against her, arms still around her neck firmly. The two had snuggled for quite some time that night. When they woke up the next morning, Megu found that her PJ top was un buttoned halfway, her PJ bottoms were off completely and Suigintou’s nighty was rolled up to her chest. Well they had a good night didn’t they? Megu blushed and remembered what had happened last night. She quickly got dressed and slides Gin’s nighty down to cover her once more.

“Did we.....do that...”

Megu asks herself as she rolls over, holding Gin tightly. Kissing the top of Gin’s head a moment, she think again, then it hit her. Yes...they had crossed that line between a doll and her medium together. Glancing down to Suigintou she noticed something strange about her. She was still in doll size but, Megu couldn’t find any doll joints! Suigintou’s skin was smooth and very free of doll joints. She noticed Gin had more defined features as well now. Her Angel really looked like an Angel!

“Gin....you gotta wake up and see this...” She nudged her gently.

“Mmmm...Megu-chan...” Gin rolled over and looked up, before she sat up a little more.

“Morning Megu” She grins and holds her medium’s hand.

“Morning Gin...Uhm...take a look...” Megu held Gin’s right arm up and ran a finger up and down her elbow.

“What is this? My joints...what happened to them?”

She’d hop out of bed and stand up, looking down to her knees and feeling all over her body for a doll joint. Then looked down the front of her nighty, She had a more defined chest now as well. Her hands were placed over her proportioned breasts and looked up to Megu.

“I’m...starting to become Alice....I think..is it because of what we did last night?” Gin’s eyes started to tear a little; this thought of becoming Alice was wonderful to her.

“I think so Gin, you’re on your way to becoming a full human girl...you’re even more beautiful now. You’ve changed a bit all over. Your hair is wavy, and your eyes are brighter, and body is cuter! You look like a little angel for real!”

Megu was so happy for her, and crawls out of bed, kneels down and held Suigintou in her arms. Those wings seemed a part of her as wel,l and wondered if Gin could control them easier. Kissing Gin’s cheeks they sit back up on the bed, with Megu inspecting Gin pretty much all over, just to make sure this wasn’t a trick. As she does this, Kira watches from her N-field and sighed.

“My Onee-sama is becoming Alice....I”m so happy...and I helped her...”

Before Kira had left last night, she had left behind what little power she had, just for Gin, and that love she carried with her for her sister as well. This left Kira with pretty much nothing inside, all she had now to do was return to her own body. In doing so, she’d give that Kira a chance in becoming Alice as well. When she leaves to find her body, she found her snuggled up in bed along side Ari, with Bara and Shay as well. She takes a deep breath and phases back into her body, feeling the hug from Ari and smiles.

This was where she belonged, and finally, after all this time, she realized this. She didn’t want revenge on Father, she didn’t want to destroy Gin’s happiness, all she really wanted, was to be loved by a family. She wakes up a little and kissed Ari’s cheek, then glanced to Bara and Shay on the other side of their master and crawls over to them, getting in between the two she fell back to sleep.

“I love you guys” Kira whispers softly.

Rein was just waking up that morning, he had a class in a few hours, he figured he’d get up and get ready. As he rolls over, the first thing he sees is Souseiseki, waiting for him with some nice hot tea and a small breakfast of a bagel and an orange.

“Morning Rein-kun, I just came up to see if you were awake. I made some tea for you” She says with a cute blush.

“Hey thanks Sousei, you didn’t have to, that was really sweet” He says as he sat up and patted the top of her head gently.

She sets the small tray on his desk and hopped on the bed as she waited for him to finish getting ready in the bathroom. When he came out she admired his good looks once again as he combed his hair and sat down for his quick breakfast.

“So you’re off to your morning classes Rein-kun?” She asks brushing her bangs from her eyes.

“Huh? Oh yeah got my history class and a few others today, I should be home before five tonight, then I’m off a few days. I’d love to get a few more stories out of you; it’ll help my history class” He chuckles before sipping some tea.

“I’d like that too!” She smiled and watched him eat his breakfast. After he left, she watched him leave and head down the street from her spot in his room, looking out the window.

“He’s a great boy isn’t he?” Grandma says so proudly.

“Yes he is Grandma! I....I really like him” Sousei says with a blush.

“Oh? I think someone has a crush!” Her Grandma teased her.

“Huh? No way!...well..” Sousei looked away a moment.

“It’s alright dear, dolls can have feelings too, you are every much a young lady too, you’re entitled to have a look around to see what’s out there. Grandma sat beside Sousei on the bed and held her close.

“You’re the closest thing I have to a granddaughter, well your sister is sweet, but you’re sweeter”

“Thank you Grandma, I love being here with you and Grandpa and maybe...Rein will be my medium”

“Maybe he will, he does seem to like you dear” Grandma kissed Sousei’s forehead before she left to work on some chores down in the shop.

“I think...he’d make a great medium, almost as great as Jun-kun” Sousei blushed at the thought, her true sweet nature coming out even more since meeting Rein last night.

There seemed to be a lot of love wandering through the Rozen Maidens lately, Shinku and Jun confessed, Suigintou and Megu shared an interesting night together already. And now, Souseiseki and her new friend Rein. Well Sousei wants a medium, and to be his friend. Even Kirakishou has finally found where she belongs. She adored Arianna and her dolls, and seemed to fit right in. Kira didn’t tell them about her evil side coming back to her body; she didn’t want to scare them.

Somewhere however, in the deep recesses of another N-field, where Enju was banished to, He was working on a new creation, against Rozen’s orders to never create another doll. This doll was in the early stages, she didn’t even have a dress or a paint job yet, but Enju, who wanted nothing more then to have a creation of his surpass Rozen’s smirked as he pieces his newest creation together carefully.

“This time....I will not fail. You will be stronger then Barasuishou, faster then Suigintou....my lovely one. A name though...you need a name...something those Rozen creations will fear more then Kirakishou...”

Enju picked at his brain for hours, writing down several different names, even mixing names of Rozen’s dolls together.....Some were, Barasuginku...and Suiseikishou.....No they were terrible names he thought. He wanted this doll to have the perfect name, until he was browsing though some books and saw something that caught his attention.

“Hmm...Your name will be...”*Jigomako*...Yes my little demon girl of Hell...” *which does mean Demon girl of Hell by the way*

Enju laughed a bit to himself as he finished piecing his new creation together. Her body type was that of Suigintou’s with the longer arms and legs, giving her a more grown up body, but he gave her a sweeter face style, much like Hina Ichigo’s. He worked endlessly on creating this doll. Once her eyes were set into place, he gave her a set of eerie silver eyes, that seemed to have a prismatic tint to them when the light hit them a certain way.

Her hair was strawberry blonde, but styled almost in a mix of Bara’s and Shinku’s. Her dress was a cross of Suiseiseki’s sleeves, Hina’s slippers, Suigntou’s torso and shoulders and Kira’s Rose shaped skirt. For a special effect, he placed a silver rose eye patch over the eye where Kira had her rose. Once this doll was finished, he stepped back and admired his darkly dressed little masterpiece.

“Beautiful...” He mutters as he adjusted Jigomako’s dress just a little more. Her dress was colored a deep blood red with black ribbons on the sleeves and black lace trim on the edges of the dress.

“It’s not yet time to awaken you my lovely...very soon...Very soon indeed.” He picked the doll up in his arms and carried her from the workshop and places her in a special black leather case.

Shinku had dozed off on Jun’s bed that after noon, and awakens with a startle. She had foreseen something strange and wicked. Did she just see Jigomako completed? In any case she was quite afraid. Taking a deep breath she sighs a little and looked to Hina.

“Go get Jun, tell him to start some tea please”

“Okay Shinku!!” Hina skittered out of the room and downstairs. As she slides down the railing, she bumped smack into Jun, and almost knocked the boy over!

“Hey careful! You can get hurt that way Hina-chan!” He catches her Just in time and puts her on his shoulders.

“Shinku says to make her some tea Na no!...she looked like she saw a ghost though!”

Jun snuck up behind Suisei and grabbed her sides as he shouted: “BOO!”

Suiseiseki jumped ten feet into the air screaming something about a ghost wanting her soul and took off under the couch. Hina and Jun both got a good laugh from that one.

“Suisei is afraid of Ghosts Na no!!” Hina laughed sweetly as Jun carries her into the kitchen to make Shinku’s tea.

“Hmph...You just ...c..caught me of guard that’s all desu...I’ll let you have that one Chibi ningen desu....but next time you wont be so lucky desu!!” Suisei tried to be brave, even though she clattered all over from being so scared.

Once Jun finished prepareing Shinku’s tea, he set her special little cup on a tray with some cookies and took them upstairs to her.

“Hey your tea’s done, I brought some cookies too” He smiles and peeked in to see Shinku sitting up with her knees up to her chest.

“Shinku? Are you alright?” He set the tray down on the desk and sat on the edge of the bed with an arm around her.

“I saw something, very terrible Jun. She was....like one of us. But with silver eyes...” She muttered.

“Well I’m sure it was just a bad dream...maybe something that happened in the past? Don’t worry about it though, I’m here, and your sisters are too”

Shinku closed her eyes and leans against him, holding his hand in hers. She had been leaving her bonnet off, only because he said she looked prettier without it, which she did, she looked more grown up. She sighed a moment and looked up to him,

“I suppose you are right Jun, it might have been just a passing moment in history coming back...thank you”

She hugged him tight and asked him to get her tea and cookies. Sitting with her for a while, Jun heard Sousei and Suisei down stairs and smiled.

“So you think you might have a medium desu?” Suisei asked her.

“Yes I think so, he’s very kind, and has a lot of knowledge about us, He even knows Ari-san, and Megu-chan too.”

She was telling Suisei about how Gin attacked Rein last night, which didn’t surprise either one really. Suisei just shook her head, but stuck up for Gin, now that was a surprise.

“I don’t blame her desu....sure she was wrong for kicking his ass desu..but...She was only looking out for Megu chan after all desu”

“Suisei....I..I guess your’e right..I was harsh with Gin-sama last night, besides, Rein’s arm is okay. If I see her...I hope I can clear things up with her...”

Jun comes down the steps with Shinku and her tea and wonders what the twins were chattering about down here. After some information he was up to speed, and wondering himself how Gin is able to calm herself after each of her anger episodes. Sousei was telling them all about Rein, and the more she talked about this guy, the more they figured she had a crush on him.

Sousei glanced over to Shinku a moment, she could tell there was something up, but wasn’t too sure if she should press matters any further. Shinku’s glance wandered to Sousei, she noticed her concern and closed her eyes as she set her tea cup down.

“Perhaps I should say something about my dream...who..or whatever it was, it seems to be another doll, it might have been just old memories gone hazy over the years.”

“Wow another one?...you don’t suppose Father is making an eight sister desu” Suisei got a little excited.

No..this one...from what I saw, she didn’t seem like anything Father would make. She had a...Barasuishou quality to her, all I remember, were her silver eyes” Shinku shuddered a little.

“Silver eyes hmm?” Sousei thought and shrugged it off. It might have just been a weird dream Shinku, I wouldn’t worry too much”

Jun patted Shinku’s shoulder a little; he could sense her uneasy-ness. They sat on the couch for some time, Jun kept his eye on Shinku, just to make sure she was going to be alright. Sometime mid afternoon they heard Suigintou’s voice, and wondered what brought her here today. Everyone gathered in the dining room where Suigintou was sitting in a chair, cross legged.

“I have come to share some news with you.” She says as she hopped down from the chair and rolled up her sleeves on her dress.

“What is it Suigintou? Did something happen?” Shinku asked, a bit concerned when Gin didn’t say what it was right away.

“Oh nothing bad happened at all...in fact this is very good news...Notice...anything different about me?”

She stood with her arms folded, but her arms were uncovered, she wondered how long it would take before anyone says something. Suisei walked up and took a short walk around Suigintou, the first thing she noticed, was her eyes, they were still magenta, but had a hint of brown in them now. Upon closer inspection by Shinku, her eyes widened when she noticed Gin’s joints were gone.

“Suigintou....what happened?” She had her hand on Gin’s elbow, feeling how smooth it was.

The first doll smirked, and blushed deeply as she placed her hands over her mystica before she looks to them.

“Something amazing happened last night. Megu and I wake up this morning..and I find that my body has changed. I have a chest now Shinku!..look!”

She was so excited as she leans on Shinku, her defined and firmer breasts press against Shinku gently.

“Oh my God..Suigintou’s got a nice rack now desu” Suisei got a jab in her side from Sousei after that one.

“Wow..Gin how’d it happen?” Jun knelt down and held her hands, he was so happy for her.

Shinku blushed quite deeply feeling Gin’s chest against hers like that and hugged her close. She wondered herself just how it could have happened, and was itching to know the full story. Gin smiles brightly and had no shame in telling her sisters and Jun what she and Megu did last night, after they had a small fight. Say what you want, but Suigintou does love Megu. Once the others heard what Gin and her medium did, they all blushed deeply. Hina however had no clue of what went on, she was just happy that Gin was so happy.

“So..wow...you and Megu huh?...” Jun was speechless, and trying not to picture it either.

“That’s wonderful Suigintou; I suppose this is one of the steps to becoming Alice”

Shinku had blushed deeply again, she couldn’t get over how beautiful Gin had become; well she was before, but now even more so. They were all sitting on the couch together; Gin was showing off her knees and giggling about how good she feels. Suisei got a little jealous since the first sister was the very first to have grown up so much, but then she was happy for her, and admired her new looks.

“You’ve got brown in your eyes like Megu-chan desu, I think you might start to look like her after a while desu!” Suisei giggled.

Suigintou blushed and tried not to blush so deeply, but she couldn’t help herself now, she was truly becoming more and more like a young lady. Even as she sat there with Jun and her sisters, she just had this grown up look about her.

Jun couldn’t help but look to Gin, his eyes had wandered to her cleavage a moment, hey the boy can look cant he? Suigintou grins and leans against him, her chest pressing against his arm as she hugged herself close to him. When Gin was getting ready to leave, she still had a stop over at Arianna’s to make before she headed back to Megu, she hugged her sisters tight and kissed their cheeks, even Jun’s cheek too.

“We’re all so happy for you Suigintou. I know I am” Shinku says as she hugged her tight in return.

The twins had hugged her back and let Gin make her leave, only before hugging Hina so tight.

“I want to be as pretty as Gin-san Na no! I’ll work real hard!!” Hina giggled.

“I know you can do it Hina” Gin pats her head gently before she headed out to find Arianna and her girls to tell them the good news.

As Gin flies to Ari’s home that evening, she hums Megu’s song to herself, getting a warm feeling in her chest, She had spotted below her, Rein coming back from the hospital. She had wondered if everything was alright, and decided to end her visits for the night, and return to Megu, just in case. Landing on the window sill, she found the window was closed again. No big deal she thought, she’d wait patiently. Peeking in she saw the nurses doing their usual tending to Megu, everything seemed alright. Satisfied that Megu was perfectly fine, she continues on her way to Ari’s home. Once there she hopped in the window in the living room.

“So sorry to intrude, but I have wonderful news everyone” She goes about the same way as she did over Jun’s home, getting pretty much the same reaction here as she got over there. Kira ran up and gave Gin a tight hug, and pulled back, admiring Gin’s new look.

“Onee-sama is gorgeous” Kira rested her head against her gently.

“Damn right, look at you Gin-chan, this is great!” Shaina was very excited for her as well as Bara, who shyly blushed as she stood beside Shaina.

“Yes.....she’s truly and Angel” Bara said softly.

Suigintou held her two friends and youngest sister tightly. When she saw Ari she smirked and looked up to her, and winked.

“Well what’s going on here ladies? Oh Suigintou, what’s up Hun?” Ari knelt down to her, and noticed right away the change.

“Goodness, someone’s been drinking their milk...Gin you look great! So this must be the first stop on the road to becoming Alice, I’m impressed! And I think your Father would be too” Ari held Gin close and picked her up a moment.

“I hope so; I want him to see how I’ve grown!” Gin rested against Ari a moment.

“Oh I think he has a good idea, he’s proud of you Suigintou, and so am I....you’ve had some rocky spots but, I think you’ll turn out all right”

Ari ruffled Gin’s soft hair playfully, before Gin whispers to Ari just how she was able to achieve this shape. Much to Ari’s surprise, after hearing what she and Megu did, the young woman did a double take and set her down, patting her backside.

“Little imp, you run along, and go back to Megu before she gets lonely” Ari winked to her as Gin left.

“What’d she say?” Bara asked as she tugged on Ari’s pant leg.

“I....Uhh..I’ll tell you girls when you’ll understand it a little more...its complicated” She needed a drink now after that one.

Gin zipped quickly back up to Megu’s window, found it to still be closed. She peeked in again and noticed Megu wasn’t there. Gin figured the nurses took Megu down to the cafeteria for some real food for a change. Suigintou gripped the window and slides it open herself. After that feat, she was a little worn out, that window was heavy to slide. Sitting on the bed she crossed her legs and turns on the TV. She could hear the shower running in the bathroom, and hearing Megu’s soft song.

Knowing where her medium was, Gin felt better and not so paranoid. With a small grin she got up and peeked inside to see what Megu was doing. Just taking a bath, the water had stopped and Megu was leaning back in the tub as she sang her song to herself.

Gin smiled and watched her for a moment, before shutting the door again and waiting on the bed. Megu had spotted out of the corner of her eye, Suigintou peek in and leave, she pouted a little when Gin didn’t ask to join her. Gin was curious however, and made her way back to the bathroom door and peeked in once more. Now she had done this one other time, but that was before she grew closer to Megu.

Gin’s eyes held that naughty glint which was shown last night. She walked up to the tub and sat on the edge, looking down to Megu in her bubble bath, her body covered in strategic places by suds, that made Gin pout a little.

“So did you tell your sisters about what happened? I bet they were jealous” Megu said as she leans back again.

“Oh they were at first, but everyone was so happy for me and for the both of us as well. I still can’t believe....what we did. It felt like a dream...” Gin’s cheeks tinted a deep pink as she reached over and held Megu’s cheek.

“I know I had a dream a while back that was very similar, only you were in full human size...and very breathtakingly beautiful. My imagination ran away with me that night” She’d giggle and flick some suds on to Gin’s nose.

Gin scrunched her nose and blew off the suds and smiles to Megu again, being careful as to not fall into the tub with her dress on. She sighs happily and both lean in closer, Megu kissing Gin very softly before Gin left to wait for her.

“She’s so cute....and wonderful...and perfect....” Megu says to herself as she relaxes once more.

Ara, Nice Fanfic.... Gotta love the MeguxGin pairing... Even though, if you think a little too much about it, a doll/Human relationship is kinda creepy... but, meh... keep up the good work! and I might also suggest you try to work on:

Quote:

Originally Posted by EnigmaticThief

-- Narration. Right now the voice of narration you use in the story is a bit too familiar, as if you yourself were telling the story. When this happens and your personal biases and excitement slip into phrases of the narration it makes it seem very young and unprofessional.

-- Your chapters are a bit... episodic. I mean that problems tend to introduce themselves and get resolved in very short order. You should think about weaving plotlines together rather than building them up and breaking them down one-at-a-time.

Overall, it *is* a good story... OMG, I just realized there's more chaps!

So, in the end, this is a fanfic thread, so I might as well post the link to mine:

Is there a reason for all some of you writing your fanfictions in dialogue format... Not that it has anything to do with the plot or the general direction of your piece, but I do believe it would work out better to 'colour' your fictions. Adding a little description here and there would paint a more thorough picture and it doesn't really do any harm, no?

Flo - OMFG!!!
How could end the story like that?
When I finally thought that Suigintou and Megu are going to live together and have happy life...
You ended up making Jun meeting Megu...
That was the last thing i wanted to see in fan-fic (i knew i should have now read it) .. I will have really. really bad dreams -_________-
I hope for 3rd season.. I won't be able to live with ending like that -_-
ah ok.. its your story not mine... ( i wish my fantasy was a little bit better)

Hopefully this explains why Suigintou is still alive & kicking. Also my version on how Kirakishou came about. This happens after the first Suigintou VS Kirakishou battle and before Suigintou VS Kirakishou Rematch.

Spoiler for Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung Interlude to Memories:

Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung
Authored by: Flo
Interlude to Memories------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Disclaimer: I do not own anything that is Rozen Maiden except for Original Characters.
Warning: Fic stealing will result in immediate mind fuck.
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‘Where…am I?’

That was the first thing Suigintou thought as she woke up in a hallway of doors. The next thing she noticed was her torn dress she was wearing. The doll tried to recall what happen before.

“That’s right, I was battling the 7th doll…And then used my rozen mystical to save Megu...Does this mean I became a Junk? If so…the why am I here?”

Suigintou pondered, but finds that just standing around won’t get her anywhere.

“Well, I guess I should explore a little bit.”

***
Doors, doors and more doors, Suigintou had walked for hours and all she saw are nothing but doors. Suigintou is starting to get irritated, until she saw one door was slightly ajar. Curious enough she took a peep, she saw a girl hold needle and thread sewing a black dress. As Suigintou was bout to take a closer look, the door slowly closes in front of her.

“The Young Miss is a little busy at the moment and does not wish to be disturbed until she is finished, I hope you understand.

The voice came from behind, the doll turn around to see an old man in his 60s, wearing a butler outfit.

“Welcome to the Hall of Memories, Mercury Lampe.” Said the old man, greeting her with a smile.

“Hall of Memories?”

“Yes, the place where the memories of the Rozen Maiden are stored. More specifically, yours.”

“Mine?”

The door to Suigintou’s right opened, revealing Suigintou’s battle against Kirakishou

“I believe this is your last memory before you arrived here.” Said the old man as he closed the door.

“Who are you anyway?” Suigintou responded, sighed for his lack of introduction.

“My apologies for my rudeness.” The old man bowed, “My name is Lucifer. I am nothing but a wandering old butler.”

“A wandering old butler who knows something that I don’t.” Suigintou replied.

“You are observant, and I believe that you also have questions for me.”

“Why am I here?”

“Because it’s your desire to be here.” Came a quick responds from Lucifer

That’s not really an answer she wanted to hear. Before she could ask another question, another door opened, revealing Suigintou’s first meeting with Megu at the abandon church.

“I believe this girl is very dear to you, so much so you are willing to forfeit your Rozen Mystical to keep her alive. To forfeit to become Alice, to forfeit Sir Rozen’s ultimate ideal. So tell me, what does Alice mean to you?” Lucifer closed the door.

Suigintou gave a little thought before answering, “Alice…I guess it is to be solely loved by father. For him to love her, his ideal lady and no one else. That is why I joined the Alice Game.” She paused for a while, and then continues “But after meeting Megu, I begin to realize something. After the last Alice Game, I believe that in Father’s eyes, there is an Alice in me, as well as the other doll, as much as I hate to admit it. To Megu…I was her angel…” She gave another pause, “Her Alice.”

Then, another door opened.

***Suigintou flew back to Rozen’s mansion, well what was left of Rozen’s mansion. The place was left in ruins and half of the place was burned to the ground with bits and pieces of porcelain laying everywhere.

As she explored the place, she saw something stood out from the ruins. A stalk of white rose, among the charred wreckage. It was beautiful, however it was withering and it’s as if it could die at any moment.

Suigintou couldn’t help but to take pity for the rose. She picked up the rose and took it to what was then Rozen’s backyard, which was surprisingly somewhat intact. She planted the rose at the most fertile soil she could find and sprinkle the rose with water.

“I believe this is the best I can do” Suigintou said to the rose, “What ever happens afterwards no longer concerns me.” However deep down she had hoped that in the future the ruins would be beautified by a garden of white roses. With nothing else left for her in this place, Suigintou flew off to find her arch nemesis, Shinku.

***

“I believe the Young Miss is done with her work.” Lucifer closes the door, “Please, come with me.”

Lucifer opened the door where the girl was. This time the girl was nowhere in sight, just a mannequin wearing a black Victorian dress, the same dress that Suigintou once wore.

“That’s…” The doll’s eyes widen at her discovery. The old man clears his throat before giving Suigintou another surprise, “If I were to say that the Young Miss has given you a second chance, will you accept it?”

She was definitely surprised, “What? But I thought I gave my Rozen Mystical to Megu?”

Lucifer expected her to say that, he took something out of the left breast pocket, revealing a sparkling prism crystal shaped of a rose petal.

Lol man now you confused me even more dammit XD.
'Gin vs Kira' - was battle where Megu died?
'Gin vs Kira Rematch' - was where Suigintou had awesome power and torned off Shinku's arm?
I'm really stupid. I guess i'm the only one who didn't understand this -.-
So... what was the end after all? ... I thought end was when Megu and Suigintou went living next to Jun's house.... But now you confused me that much, that I think that Suigintou is actually dead, Megu is living next to Jun (omfg nooo ;_;], Alice is acutally Kira?..... T_T.... I'm so stupid