Hi everyone! I really need some native speakers to check the readability of my writing!So, if you please, here we go:

"The night was filled with slightly chilly air of early spring. The typical city's sounds, those of speeding cars, leaving behind choking, rushing skyward whiffs of dust, and people'sconstant buzzing chatter, were slowly dying away. Weakeninghollow din was retreating, it seemed, to the distant, menacingoutskirts, where it was kept in dark and damp, enormous underground chamber by some powerful, shadowlike guarduntil morning light..."

The night was filled with the slightly chilly air of early spring.The typical city's sounds, those of speeding cars, leavingbehind choking, rushing skyward whiffs of dust, and people'sconstant buzzing chatter, were slowly dying away. A weakeninghollow din was retreating, it seemed, to the distant, menacingoutskirts, where it was kept in a dark and damp, enormousunderground chamber by some powerful, shadow like guarduntil morning light...