Magestic emperor

Glimmering colors in the sky, Aquamarine locked in his eye, His rainbow joins a jolly green, The majestic creature strides with beam, With a secret so brilliant, Delicate shimmies, Oh so radiant, Dazzling gems in its eye, Gazing up in the sky, With its stunning quills So exquisite as treasure, A vibrant shawl hiding pleasure, Beyond this quilt… Is a Peacock built

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Your word choice is so good and you paint such a wonderful picture. I love the title as well. For me that's the hardest part, how to really grab a reader with the title, and you nailed it. Check my poems out too!

excellent! fantistic use of imagery and descriptive words, this is just such a pretty poem and it flows so well :)

i hate to sound like a total user by using your poem to ask for feedback on my own work, but will you please cheack out my poem Imagination, and maybe some of my other stuff too?? i would so appreciate feedback from you, and anybody else :)