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Frank Atanacio 3 years agofrom Shelton

thank you Cyndi and tanktop for visiting my page again bless you both :)

Tanktop 3 years ago

wow this was very well done

Cynthia B Turner 3 years agofrom Georgia

Where do you hang out? You really expose the dregs of life. You very nearly wrap us in it with your words as you expose what we would rather not see or know about.

Excellent, as is your style!

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Frank Atanacio 3 years agofrom Shelton

thank you savvy...:)

savvydating 3 years ago

I'm so glad I stumbled upon you. You're not afraid to reveal the dark, ugly side of life, an unfortunately a reality for some. As always, your choice of words is compelling, stark, and beautiful despite the sadness and darkness of this story. Another thumbs up.

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Frank Atanacio 4 years agofrom Shelton

Thanks Raci :)

raciniwa 4 years agofrom Naga City, Cebu

ouch...that's highly gross...

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Frank Atanacio 5 years agofrom Shelton

LOL thanks for stopping by thelyricwriter :)

Richard Ricky Hale 5 years agofrom West Virginia

Up, awesome, and inyeresting Frank. Dang Frank, organs popping? Vivid writing brother. Even I twitched on that one. Another painted vision in my mind courtesy of you Frank. LOL Awesome work! Have a great weekend.

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Frank Atanacio 5 years agofrom Shelton

thanks for comment X-man bless you :) Frank

Jim Higgins 5 years agofrom Eugene, Oregon

Hard to read, impossible not to finish! Another right between the eyes poem.

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Frank Atanacio 5 years agofrom Shelton

and thank you so much Lathing Ruch and tilson for your wonderful comments on my disposal purposes :)

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Frank Atanacio 5 years agofrom Shelton

thanks so much Angelme and Just ask Susan for stopping by :) bless you both

Mary Craig 5 years agofrom New York

Goodness, not much left to the imagination in the few words you used to paint this horrible, yet imitation of reality, scene. Well done my friend. Voted up and interesting.

Ruchira 5 years agofrom United States

gosh...the scene is ugly and you portrayed it well, Frank!

LaThing 5 years agofrom From a World Within, USA

Very graphic! Your words are powerful..... What a scene. Voting up....

Angelme566 5 years ago

A well written social issue...

Susan Zutautas 5 years agofrom Ontario, Canada

OH! Frank I cringed as I read this. Wow brilliant!

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Frank Atanacio 5 years agofrom Shelton

thanks so much Rosemay50 and Gypsy for your comments and support :)

Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years agofrom Riga, Latvia

WOW Remind me not to venture into any back alleys. Super and graphic.

Rosemary Sadler 5 years agofrom Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Powerful imagery of of life and death in the back alleys. Awesome write

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Frank Atanacio 5 years agofrom Shelton

Patty thank you again and Valley Poet thank you too bless you both :)

Valleypoet 5 years ago

A macabre and graphic scene you have created here Frank, delivered with poetic expertise. Good job.

Patty Kenyon 5 years agofrom Ledyard, Connecticut

Awesome and UP!!! Very dark but WOW!!!! I am impressed as usual!!! Keep up the Awesome Job!!!

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Frank Atanacio 5 years agofrom Shelton

Thanks VG for stopping by and thank you too Josh for your comment :) Frank

Joshua Zerbini 5 years agofrom Pennsylvania

Wow! What a read, Whew, so little words, but the depiction so very real! DO not know how you do it Frank, you are a great poet!