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Secret Santa says:I can't believe Hermione lost the baby! That's so terribly sad! I think you really captured the emotions in this chapter, and did a good job of showing how heartbroken everyone was. The pacing was really nice, and I think you chose a good place to end the chapter. I just feel so bad for Ron and Hermione, and I was really hoping that the baby would be ok! I also think that an experience like this would make them seem much older than 19 and you did a really nice job showing that. 10/10

Author's Response: Hey there, I'm glad you thought I wrote this chapter well, I was a little hesitant to put it up becuase I didn't know how well I'd pulled it off, so thanks for that!
Thank you for your review! :)