my first reaction after reading this was to laugh, dont ask, it's almost inexplicable (i cant spell, yay!..my excuse is that im a physicist) but the humor to this seemed undeniable or maybe that's just bitterness, anywayz, i love the image yet again that you presented, very concise yet says so much, excellent job

First of all, thank you for your lovely review. :) To explain the Adam and Eve part: once a particularly extreme evangelist told me same-sex marriage is "wrong" because "God made Adam and Eve not Adam and Steve or Anna and Eve." Thus, I mocked it mercilessly in my poem ;). Thanks again!

Wow, what a cruel thing! I hate gossip! Especially if you're going to hurt someone's feelings in the process, which most of the time you are! :( Nice imagery, beautifully written, although in a lot of your poems, I get this sense of darkness and cold because they're so dark... kind of a lonely feeling, ya know? I hope you're ok! I don't want you to feel really sad or angry! :( :( But poetry does let your feelings out, yes? _ XD _ So that's awesome!