The middle ones legs are too fat.She should swap her shorts
with the one wearing the tight long pants to hide her fat legs and big backside.
The one with the tight long pants should stop eating hot dogs and fries
otherwise she will not get her tight pants back on the next morning.
I have no issues with the one being served.Her legs are
fine and her shorts are a nice snug fit upon a petite backside.
I hope you do not mind my critique here but after all we are all
here for a learning curve.Whether that curve is fat legs
or a fat backside is still a learning curve in my book !!
Mick.

Mick has nailed the critique on this shot. I am sooooooooo pleased that you chose sepia toning for this one. A full colour portrayal of the plump girl in the middle's hanging out butt would have been toooooooo much.

Seriously, a well taken and well processed candid.

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Everyone likes nice legs. Let's not overlook the drama in the gal who is serving the
junk food. Very heavy times and long hours there, I think. One pair of shorts is
just reckless behaviour yet all entertaining in this fine slice of life image. TG

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