Sage says it wonderfully - this is alchemical. An epic masterpiece, that courts the reader and invites us to join in union with you words, just the way the Earth and the Sky, the Moon and the Sun, the tear and the sigh, you and your love are bound... really, I'm just raving, I loved this.

i like it when people try to explain what their lover is to them.
i like the idea of two being one the way the moon reflects the sun... means neither of them are the glory reciever because both are needed and valid and pivitol for existance.
truely wonderful.

I needed to "hear" this poetry tonight...my celestial eye is beyond sight...better than 20/20 She Equals I...this is like a preservation poem...we want to keep it in sight and maintain love's goal...I see so many spiritual entities in this...The Tree of Life, Andromeda, Romeo & Juliet, Sarah McLaughlin's In the Arms of an Angel, the clarion call of the beating of two hearts bugling as one, when you say "Wakening of the dawn," - I say the Age of Aquarius...Oh Mark, I could go on and on...your quill is alchemical, the pouring of spiritual wealth and prosperity, turning love into more love...be well always...Blessed Be.