Wow. You have a terrific talent for creating a picture of emotion... I felt what you were feeling through your writing. It was very sincere and amazing to read. Only thing I might improve on: if the veil is vanishing wouldn't he be visible again? Probably just a misunderstanding on my part; otherwise, great writing, keep it up.
Thanks for your review!

You have an amazing talent. You draw the reader in so that they feel like they are in your shoes. I wish I had your skill. Nonetheless, fantastic job, and I'll keep checking to see if you have anything new for me to get weepy over..