With Pinkie Pie's brutal murder the whole of Equestria is on high alert. With no clues leading to who did it, it begins to look like Pinkie's killer will never be found.Rainbow Dash begins to find herself loosing control both mentaly and physicaly. As Applejack tries to comfort Rainbow Dash. But she unintentionally becomes her next target.

Overall it was very good, but there were numorous spelling, and grammerical flaws. Also it doesn't reflect on the known phsych very realisticaly, but realy who wants to dwell on some minor flaws, when it is so AWESOME! The story is gripping and exciting. I loved it.

381314 Thanks you for your feedback. And thanks for your honest opinion. This was my first ever fanfic that I've made and I wasn't sure what kind of reaction I was going to get. I was never really much of a good gramma or spelling master, even now when I'm a collage.I can only learn from my mistakes if I know about them.