Already I can tell this is going to be super cute. There were a couple grammar errors, but nothing too major. I do wish it had been longer, but there are 24 more chapters! Yay! I like the back and forth between James and Lily, it's always so entertaining. On to the next one!

I really like your story. Its very funny and I have enjoyed the previous chapers. In my opion, however -which you can take or leave because I know i'm not the author :) This story would be even better than it already is if it didn't skip around to different parts of Lily and James relationship. You go from them dating, to married and pregant, to hating each other. It just seems backwards. That aside I love the story! I'm off to read more. :)

This chapter wasn't as good as the others, but boy did I burst out laughing at Remus saying I'm serious, thought you were remus etc. I didn't get it at first and read through it about 3 times when it hit me, lol. Very funny line :) Great, awesome, funny story so far btw :)