I liked it, I always viewed warbands as kind of unthinking so it was interesting to imagine them with individual thoughts. Though I found I couldn't sympathise with the main character - I have nailed the barbarians using Romans too many times to feel anything for them!

I liked your point of view, that of the British locals. Usually these stories are from the point of view of the major nation, i.e. the Romans or one of the major Japanese clans. But very few are about the British-the detail and description are both excellent and stay true to the gameplay while not sounding too forced, unlike most game-based fanfics.