Very well done mydear. This is a very good piece, I actually like that this poem has a plot to it, which a lot of the poems that I have read have not. I can relate to this poem in an abstract way. See I would always miss when another person liked me untill it was to late, We wouldn't actually be dateing or anything but they liked me. i actually choose the boys who have no feelings for me and end up shot down every time... yeah, i know it sounds compleatly messed up but it happens.

I think everyone, somewhere can relate to this piece as either the person who felt like the person ignored them until it was too late or the person that ignored that person until they found someone else and then they opened their eyes and realized how they felt for that person. Good work and keep it up!

Hi there, i got your review so i decided to check out a few of your pieces. i like this one, the short lines keep it on focus. love lost, love found, a circle that doesn't break. well written, keep it up - dave