What cce said. This is built upon mood and atmosphere, but all that is sadly marred by the drab fog/background, color channel clipping, the general barrenness of the environment and disappointing music. Small thumb because it was still mildly interesting and a step in the right direction :)

I can see what was tried here. Kind of nice idea with the visuals, but it's quite lame and tasteless. Or maybe it's naive art. The music is horrible. Please stop using the 4klang preset sounds, particularly the "snare".