Oh my goodness me oh dear I can't handle this wow I think I mentally screamed when I saw them! Ahh love it :) and the last chapter! Been a bit behind haha! Ahhh love, omg Jayland, William, oh dear the feels... Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Emmaa x chapter 5 . 3/17/2014

I read the chapter of this ages ago when you first posted it and it enchanted me straight away so I was majorly depressed when you didn't update! So now I've just been catching up and it's AMAZING :D as always, you're writing flows so well and leaves me wanting to read more and more
Even though it's only 5 chapters in, I already feel connected to Keira and chase seems nice! Can't wait to read more!

Aw hi there (: No problem, I loved reading your stories if I didn't favorite or follow them I think that would be a mistake on my half. I really do love your writing, its descriptive and flows and keeps you on edge. Never to sure what is going to happen. Haha this chapter just proved that it was a good decision to start reading the story, I see that two new characters have been introduced. Jay seems like a promising character and Emma seems like such a sweetie(even though she has heard so much about Keira, Chase seemed to have forgotten to mention anything about Emma). But Keira is still by far my favorite, she just seems so...complex. And I have noticed that she is different from your other characters. In a good way of course, its extraordinary how you can change the outlooks they have so smoothly. Most people would have difficulty changing from a caring and considerate, wants to be there for you, strong and loyal(My Foolish Ways and Ice Cream Cravings) human being to a complex, closed off, indifferent, wise, strong willed survivor(Water Colors). But that is just my opinion. Oh my gosh I'm so sorry for the long review. Cutting it short: Enjoying it, will continue and your welcome!

It is barely the third chapter and I am completely and utterly hooked! I can honestly say that I got lost in the story, the characters are intriguing and pushes me to uncover the story behind Keira and Chase, even the sweet cousin. I literally went to press the button for the next chapter and was disappointed to see that it wasn't posted yet, haha but you have another reader to this story (: I really do love the way you write it is amazing and just freaking wonderful. I have started reading your other stories and I'm happy to admit you have an amazing talent. But back to what I was originally saying, already loving the story so far especially the aspects of their personalities and views on life. Really cant wait for the next chapter! Hope its soon.