Ok, so I liked the general Idea of the story, and the way you made her have to stay home for the summer, but..

You use way to many exclamation marks and also "he/she stated" for telling how someone said something. You could change it to "He/she replied, answered, told me." stuff like that

Also, you're story seems to go by super super fast and I can tell a romance is going to bloom with Sam and her, but you should make that happen while the she an the 17 year old are going out. Ad more details to make it longer too. And, you need to add commas to some sentences.

Other than that, I liked the story, and I think you have great potential! XD

Eeek I love it Im so glad you posted more. It felt like i was acually post more. Sorry it took me so long to review my computer has been broken. And i love her name. Its so unique. In my story her name is average. Its chlo