Comments about Mahfooz Ali

sometimes when we are very young we get so very scared will she love me will she report me what will she do no one ever knew it's all in a woman's mind to love or to be kind but in memories we alone have she has made us lose our mind and an opportunity we all leave far behind in the annals of time call it infatuation if you may

I just found this site, and have to say that after reading a bunch of poems from others and yourself, you have a real interesting state of mind. Your thoughts are unique and the way you describe and portray your thoughts is very thoughtful and well put. I also write poems and short stories. They usually come from feelings that are sometimes hard to depict to others in word of speech. But when I write them down it makes me understand my feelings and frame of mind better. I read the peom about your mother, I thought it was lovely. And Inshallah She knew and continues to know how much you love her. Keep up your good work, so we can continue enjoying your beautiful works of literature. Take care, Ma'salama

You are writing immensely and have deep rooted affections. Let a Xanthic Flower give fragrance in your life. I am proud of reading your poems but it is too late. Allah never let down any one nor put you to suffer. Always hopes bring light.

Vanishing Love

I'm still your loving partnercan't you wash away all yourwrath and resentments, Try to understand my sentimentsI'm going crazy for just knowingthe reason, the spring is about to go, this is not the wrath season.Come, come along with me