isn't it sad how everyone builds up summer to the point that it's almost as if it's a castle in the sky and in the awesomnesity of it all it will pull everyone out of this exam funk while in reality the heat is settling into us practically like a second skin and going outside without the comfort of ac is bloody impossible?

Wow, I love the tone of this. I especially like the lines "slur my speech with syllables I've yet to comprehend" and "back in burning bright daylight drought." Just the words in those two lines are wonderful. I enjoy alliteration, so yeah, definitely my fave lines. Keep writing! :)