What bebe said, also, just try drawing more bodies, seriously. I regret not bothering to draw hands, legs, and such. They're just a pain, but do it anyways! Hah, I'm off to take my own advice.. Lol! Good job though. :)

the waist of her body is too thin & long but the shouldr is too wide if she has a thin waist! i really like how you drew her clothes and the accessories on her head! howevr, her nose is a little off to the right & her eyes are not equally in position

however, she is still pretty xD yu should loosen up her hair a bit more b/c it makes it more natural :D for her hair, you should add at least 3 shades of color so that it will make it pop out more :D anywayss, nice job xD srry for talking too much!