Uhm...well...I have to say that its a good fanfic...but...I'm kinda confused about the whole thing about Harry and JAMES. Well...heh...please review! I like it, even though the characters scare me...heehee

I like this one. It wasn't very descriptive- how exactly did Snape sexually abuse him? As far as I can gather, he just, well, humped him, through clothes. Doesn't it have to be penetration to be sexual abuse? At least, that's how I see it. Not to make this personal or anything, but it kinda reminds me of my childhood... Only I didn't want my dad, I just wanted someone to want me the way my parents want each other. So.. yeah, enter sister's pedophile of a boyfriend. but let's ot go there. It's just a suggestion, but maybe in the next chapter, Harry can explain to James what happened? From experience, partners don't care that much about if you're 'used'.. It just makes them more gentle. Sorry, stories like this always get me going about my past. God, I'm only 16. I really sound like I'm 40 or something, don't I?

wow...that's bout all I can say in this state. But yeah good wow. So um update on this please. I really like it a lot and I'm not a big fan of this kind of stuff so this is major compliment. Plus you 're a great writer!

Evidently we have much the same tastes in fiction. *grins*
Your story is thin in places - it skips quite fast through the plot. You would do well to flesh it out and add detail, slowing it down some - show, don't tell, your characters' feelings for each other. You'd also do well to sit down and work on one story at a time, and try to finish these. :) You've got some good potential.