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Friday, September 10, 2010

I got itchy and decided I'd upload the whole comic :D I had a hard time getting the files (and I wanted to wait until I had permission to post them), but here they are!

Again: this was done over a year ago for a yet-unpublished Anthology called Seasons (to be published sometime soon by Sofawolf press...updates will follow!)

This was done at around the same time as Piper's Pet, and it was a source of some frustration to me at the time that Piper is a better comic, even though it was comparatively less work. This was done first, so at least I'm...learning? But for my own sanity: this is OLD. I make better now! I promise!

All I can see now are the flaws. I do realize that it is narratively broken beyond all sense. I ambitiously wanted to do this silently (no words), but see if you can guess what's going on! I posit you cannot!

Points for anyone who gets this without the 'spoiler's at the end of this post :p

I will gladly receive any critiques on the storytelling, since I want to make sure moving forward I work out all the kinks! This probably won't change, but it's useful feedback for the future. Lay it on me.

I'm considering adding text, but I'm afraid it would be too much an afterthought.

Still, I'm glad I did it. It was a good learning experience.

And in unfancified prose, the plot is thus:

A repentant mouse warrior returns from the war with his most regrettable casualty: a small child. He feels he must return the child to her father, but the horror of what he has done doesn't hit home until he see's her father's face. He casts down his sword in a solemn vow to never fight again, and instead of retribution he is met with forgiveness; a chance to start again. Simple enough.

Even typing that out I'm realizing how obscure some of the paneling is. Better next time!

Thursday, September 9, 2010

I promised I'd work on more personal work and as a result would be posting more frequently. Which I have been...but I've just gotten saddled with a large personal project that I am really excited about...and that will be taking up most of my spare time from here up till around February!

In the meantime, I remembered that this old thing had never seen the light of day!

SooOOooOo...this is a preview, the first page of 7, of a comic I did almost a year ago. I'll refrain from going into too much explanation till I post the rest of it.

It was done for an upcoming Anthology called Seasons, being published by Sofawolf Press. I took the opportunity to revisit my love for all things even obliquely related to Redwall :)

Like I said, it's been over a year since I made this and now all I can see are it's flaws. Go easy on me :p