I may not know anything about the main character yet but even from the way that she thinks and perceives things you can tell that this is a girl who has been raised with only the best of things and surrounded by love. You can tell that this is a girl who is high up in society and has been taught manners and everything.

Does it seem like a lot conveyed through 500 words? Yes but you can tell that.

Anyway, I liked the description and you can really tell that this is going to be a dark story just by the tone of it already. Anyway, good job on it.

Author's Response: Hello! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story so far, and that my main character is coming across the way she's supposed to! I love writing her, and it's great to hear that you liked the descriptions and the tone. Thank you for reviewing!!! :)