It seems you haven't really looked at the SW-SIF stuff either so I took the liberty of having a go at creating Arkin. But is was based upon the 20XP Arkin that was on the PC Page. I have no idea of what he is now, but he will be easy to advance anyway.

I do hope you get around to having a look at him. I would love to discuss this at some stage.

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It appears you haven't seen developments on the system since I was down there. A few things to change or consider.

1. Coercion: You have an old Ability List. Not big prob, but Coercion is a new ability now. (See which Specialties were moved from Persuasion on main site).
2. Vigor (Durability): You might want to consider placing some Specialty dice in this. It is the Spec used to Soak wounds/vs crits.
3. Dwarven Poison Res: Might want a little note after the actual Ability/Specialty to remind you of this. Same with Iron Jaw and Vigor (Durability).
4. Spell Rolls: It appears you have not settled on any of the options we spoke about. (See other post in this Forum).
5. Hindrance Descriptions.

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I redid this and didn't notice Coercion wasn't on the list I was using. I've gone in and added it now.
Made a couple of alterations/notes against Vigor.
I've decided to go with the fatigued, much as Nerdanye. I figure it'll be easier to keep it straight that way.
I've put in the basic descriptions from the Edges & Hindrances sheet also.

New sheet uploaded tonight.

Hanlon's Razor - Never attribute to malice that which can be explained by stupidity.

In Arcane BG (Cleric) Description you need to remove the part about getting 1 Heroic rank spell.

Furthermore, the description for Crisis of Faith is not what I had in mind for clerics. You don't roll on the backlash table BUT you Fatigue level can only be removed by AN EXTENDED REST! Please change this (see new Arcane BG's Page I have added to central site).

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Not sure anyone has noticed, but I have placed descriptions of the SW Arcane BGs on their own page. I also addressed it in post above, but seems no one is interested. Anyway, make sure your Cleric description matches the one I posted on the main site.

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Arkin doesn't have any Vehicle Operation, so I've just left that blank.

Added in the relationships, including the specific dwarven deities. Also added the Madness table under Wounds & Fatigue (asked on the main page whether the mods for that are right, that it affects Pace as well as Trait rolls).

I know I started it, but really prefer the older format to the booklet style. :)

Hanlon's Razor - Never attribute to malice that which can be explained by stupidity.

Yeah, most 'old school RPers' I have shown prefer the standard sheet. I honestly do not care what people use, as long as we can all follow them. Keeping the colours the same for eg makes finding things faster/easier.

Did you get the Sanity Table too. You mentioned Madness.

And, yes, the mods affect the same things as Wounds as per Realms of Cthulhu. I thought of changing that, but…I will mention it over there ;)

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Pretty good. I like the no column lines of the Abilities and Weapon tables. :)

A few things I noticed (seems you are doing the sheet, i will let you change them).

1. Remove the Charisma brown box.
2. Remove the 'extra edge' frm 0XP. You don't get that anymore. Just write "All starting Advances spent" or something. (You don't have to remove an Edge, as you now get a 2nd Ability at d8 when start. If you took the extra d8, then you will need to lose 1 Advance from somewhere).
3. I can't remember what you have before, but if you don't want Brawny I am sure there is another Entry Edge for it. (Maybe Hard to Kill or something)?
4. Arcane resistance is no longer for free as a Dwarven Trait. It is on the racial TT list though. So if you want it you have to spend an Advance on it. (remove from green AND red section).
5. Add Dwarf to your available TTs.
6. See new Advancement chart - it lists what you can do with Advancements. Up to you whether you want that on PC sheet.
7. Does Cleric Edge (and I would just call it that now - no Arcane BG stuff which confuses 'sourses of magic') grant access to Arcana TT too? I will have to check.
8. You may wish to add shield to weapons chart. Shields are a Fighting Group and listed as such on the Weapon Properties doc. Check your shield has the right adjustments. I think I altered slightly, with adding new shields.

Thanks for that. You can keep changing Arkin. I will now work on Awareness and Tough TTs, though I think I added the latter last night. :)

BTW: Can start new Thread called B&B PC Sheet too.

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