I really think this has some potential, but it needs help. and that's where YOU come in.

My first reaction: rather a one-trick whore pony, nyet? Second, slower reaction: Who drank the last beer DAMMIT! OK, enough bullshit. Any reader who is not drunk or idiotic will get the pun as soon as he reads the title, correct? OK, so that's over. Now the article has to be funny. It has some points -- funny names, a bit of sarcasm. It also treats certain women as something less than slaves. Some readers (juvenile males of all ages) will think this is funny; everyone else will think it's creepy and not very funny. Why don't the whores say anything in the article? There's where Johnny Swift would shave stuck his satirical knife in, me lad: right where sex workers' organizations start talking about the rights of women used as vehicles. Personally, the idea does not kickstart my Harley, though.----OEJ 02:30, 16 July 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for the advice. I've got some time off from work this coming week, so I'll rewrite most of the body then. If it gets any better I'll let you know. --FociP 04:43, 16 July 2006 (UTC)

Man, I love this idea. I kind of would like to see it made a little less explicit and more subtle in its references. A few puns might be nice: take a look at Googlewhack. -- HindleyiteConverse 20:55, 5 December 2006 (UTC)