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Court says:I really liked this chapter. The chess metaphor was really interesting and well done. I do have to wonder if Pacquet has some kind of system to know if her mind's been infiltrated that they don't know about, but I figure they'll have a hard enough time even with the element of surprise. I loved Selena and Rose's talk. I hope that Rose doesn't just let Scorpius manipulate her into being guilty about everything and hope they figure things out at some point despite everything else going on. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: The Legilimency part was possibly my favourite bit to write of the entire series so far. The Rabbit's Foot has some good defences, and maybe some protections against things like what happened to Paquet. The gang are going to have the odds seriously stacked against them.

Rose is reaching the point of accepting what she did wrong - and viewing it in its proper context. Some things she did wrong. Some things he did wrong. Now the question is how to handle all that. She's getting there.