right out of the bat, I loved how you built momentum on your opener
although I think it would've been nice if you were to get a kick from the first spin, or a punch from the second spin instead of getting a simple split from that kick of yours.
It still gave you the opportunity to make the rest of the replay interesting so don't take that as a complaint.

You did a very nice job pushing uke's upper body in the air again without losing much momentum. I personally kinda disliked the manipulation - not because it was bad, it was very good actually, but it looked like you were struggling a lot. It ended up looking a bit messy.
It was a bit hard to keep up with what was going on up until that moment in which you grabbed uke and did that sweet, sweet boomhit.

Aside from all the picky things I complained about, the replay was very nice, and probably much better than anything I could've pulled off.

i kinda feel like when u went to dm in this replay u got into super weird positions
the split kick was kind of ugly at the start, and i know it would have been hard to close the gap otherwise but idk the wrist dm/pulling him towards you was pretty awkward looking

whole manip was cool beans

felt like the kick didnt really hit properly and hand of the dms were like grab/hand dms on the last boom but overall pretty good

everything other than what i mentioned was super nice your movement is rly good jgj

Opener was really good man.. i like it. The way that you get the manip was great, and transitions were nice. The only thing that i am not comfortable is with the grab part, but i don't think that is a great problem because i have seen a lot of manips with they, and they were nice. I mean, without grab it can be more awesome but thats ok. Keep it up and finish, i hope it will be godlike. Don't forget to be creative.