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Review:

Snapdragons says:I would be lying if I said this wasn't creepy - voodoo dolls are a little freaky! I thought that it was actually good that it was creepy - it means that you definitely managed to get ahold of my feelings and make me shiver, which is excellent. You've definitely nailed the emotions here!

It is quite dark. Chilling, really, to see a version of Bella before she was an adult and to see her in the process of her... turning, if you will. You can see how this would affect her and how she would carry this with her even as an adult.

I definitely feel like the prefect was Tom - or, I guess, any high up Death Eater. I liked the detail with the spell - foreshadowing ftw! :D

You did a really great job here - spooky and a really interesting look at Bella. Nice work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! If I made you shiver, I believe I succeeded in my goal! I'm glad you liked it!