Rated 4.5 / 5 stars2011-09-18 13:06:57

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2011-09-12 15:03:09

Well done.

I liked the art style and simplicity of the setting. The idea is very straightforward as well. However, my only gripe is when the clown kills himself. It doesn't seem obvious what he kills himself with since it happens quickly and then the flash ends right after. Were it somewhat slower and more obvious what he was killing himself with, I wouldn't have any problems with it. Otherwise, everything else is, to me, fine as it is.

Definitely right; I got quite lazy at the end and hoped maybe it would be clear enough but adding another camera shot, like when he put his book down, made that four hours I had left to sleep seem like heaven haha.

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2011-09-12 14:50:32

Nice

I like the set up and the sound effects where great, along with the artwork you really created an office feel. I liked the idea of a depressed clown stuck with some shitty day job. But i think the pacing was a little off, and the ending was far to fast and sparsely animated for me to really enjoy it. You should have drawn it out it a bit more having the clown sigh heavily, pick up the shredder, look at it, THEN kill himself. As is you have a fairly nice piece of work, which having been made in what i assume was a rush, is good going.

Thanks for your kind words - I tried hard for the details. And I totally agree - I may finish the ending properly as I envisioned it soon and put a dump link on this page so I don't feel so unsatisfied! :D