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Pinkie always wondered why she had weird memories and weird abilities. As it turned out she's the reincarnation of a human named Monkey D. Luffy. And it turns out she wasn't the only reincarnation. ·Emma Iveli

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Follow the adventures of Ranma Saotome, martial artist extraordinaire, in Equestria as he is taught all there is to know about friendship from a group of friendly, talking ponies. Ranma 1/2 crossover. ·Dumbledork

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[World of Tanks Crossover] In a long spell of boredom, The Mane Six feel its a great idea to enlist in Competitive Tanking and battle the world for bits, glory, and each other. A slugfest awaits, full of joy, suspense, bullsh*t and friendship. ·Flammenwerfer

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Sergeant Gary "Roach" Sanderson and Lieutenant Simon "Ghost" Riley of Task Force 141 are revived in Equestria after being K.I.A. on the Russian-Georgian border. Is there more to their arrival though? ·Delta 727

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Pinkie always wondered why she had weird memories and weird abilities. As it turned out she's the reincarnation of a human named Monkey D. Luffy. And it turns out she wasn't the only reincarnation. ·Emma Iveli

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When Twilight tries a mass teleportation spell with her friends they get stuck in another universe. What's worse is that their landing point was a magical spring that curses it's victims to transform into whatever drowned there. They are now cursed to turn into human girls whenever splashed with cold water, but hot water changes them back.

They weren't the only ones to fall in that day. They meet Ranma a male traveling martial artist who fell into the same spring (meaning he turns in a girl), his father Genma who becomes a Panda. Twilight agrees to cure them when she figures out a cure while they give her and her friends a place to stay.

Due to a series of events, they wind up in Japan where they must pose as normal high school girls. Where they must deal with a stupid swordsman who falls in love with them, martial arts based on running, rhythmic gymnastics and figure skating, rivals from those sports. And that's barely scratching the surface of the insanity that lies for them...

Never seen the anime past don't know much past what i have had told of me about it by people from time to time so a lil bit flew right over my head was like "ooooh i seen what you did there" but very nicely written enjoyed the read :3

A lot to process...its a good premise really. It has a lot of fun moments (Pinkie is definitely taking the cake)

I don't quite know where to begin with it...its...very...hashed together, hard to follow...and confusing on many levels. Rushed through to introduce all the characters who don't need to be there at the moment either. A lot organization and restructure is what I suggest to you.

It may look hashed, but hey, I've seen worse set-ups. Besides, lots of characters had to be introduced. Both FiM and Ranma have lots of characters, so plot(and I don't mean the innuendo kind) has to be explained. This is normal for Ranma crossovers. If you've seen that series, it'll make more sense. Also, the Mane Six have changed a few things in the Ranma timeline(namely, Ryoga is a Gilda-level jerk without Fluttershy there, and Shampoo would not have shown up as early as she did; and she'd be wanting to kill Ranma-chan among other things.)

Hey there, Emma. This is nightef37 from FanFiction.Net, one of your "beta readers". I am now a user in FiMFiction.Net. I'd like to say that I still prefer to receive what I need to edit via email. Also, as for the third chapter, you forgot to italicize some of the thoughts. Anyway, nice work so far. Better than the one on FF.Net. Thanks to Dr. Tempo and me, of course.

Kuno v. Fluttershy... my money is on Fluttershy. Great chapter Emma, good work on reworking canon and even giving canon a swift kick in the... *cough* I guess while things may have calmed down since the Amazons and Rogya aren't chasing Ranma, and Akane isn't mallet happy, so what chaos will be brought forth to fill the gap? Can't wait to see.

Hmm…so instead of dumb, you decided to call Derpy a feather brain? I don't know if that's supposed to be an insulting on her intelligence or not.

My message:

I hope you at least even consider reading this through and through. You seriously need help and must read it. This review is from a FF.Net author named Lousy Poet Automaton. This review was written sometime after you had posted Chapter 20 and before 21.

"The My Little Pony redo makes me think the world is on LSD, but hey.

This fic is fairly amusing, and has moments where it rises to interesting. It's not great and it's not horrible, so normally, I wouldn't bother writing a review. I'm writing this because I'm hoping that eventually, you'll run into enough reviews like mine that will push you to get over the hump.

You're still kind of raw. And that is just plain odd because you've written over a hundred fics.

A little more detail would be good, and, yeah, do one or two copy edit passes through each chapter before posting (so you can catch those errors that make it through spellcheck, like missing words or correctly spelled but incorrect words like using 'slat' in place of 'salt').

Yes, fanfics are just for fun, and you're not getting paid... but since you're putting so much effort into writing these already, and you've been doing this for more than 5 years now, you really ought to be further along with your writing skills. I haven't read any of your other fics, but I've checked your profile and: 1) English appears to be your first language and 2) the writing quality of your profile is higher than the writing quality in your fic.

This suggests a couple of things to me. You probably rush through posting each chapter. And you may not be trying to stretch yourself when you write.

Look, it's not a race. You don't lose anything by taking the time to do a couple of passes through each chapter to check for errors and think about word choice. Don't tell people to shut up about grammar in your profile. They're trying to help you get better. If you don't care about that, then don't even read your reviews, because what's the point?

You're putting a lot of yourself into your writing already, so it makes no sense to blame your writing flaws on muscular dystrophy and emotional stuff or whatever. That was more than 10 years ago! You're not defined by all those things so far in the past but by what you're doing and how you're living in the present.

You can improve on your own, you can read The Elements of Style by Strunk and White on your own, and voice recognition on computers has gotten quite good, so any physical issues shouldn't be an issue. I'm not a grammar fanatic, but it just makes no sense to *ignore* your writing weaknesses when you obviously like writing so much. The fastest way to get better is not to work on what you're already good at, but to work on what you are BAD at.

This is about more than grammar and spelling. If you don't like writing fight scenes or you don't like writing horror or you don't like writing mysteries, those are the things you ought to try. You might surprise yourself and discover that you like writing stories you thought you'd hate, and at the very least, you'll grow as a writer.

Well, the drafts you send me are fairly bad quality, and perhaps comparable to my first fanfic in FF.Net. And I've improved since. You've written LOADS of stories, but here you are still as (sorry if it's offensive) crappy as ever with the drafts you send me. Don't ignore our advice to you. Implement it in your future stories no matter what site you write them to.

Then wny not at least just Carmen Sandiego? I just thought of putting in both for "rule of funny". Also, you can reply to my messages with the reply button on the right of my comment. Otherwise, I can't tell if you responded, okay?