Awesome story. I really liked it and how Mikey and Donnie got the pony to be calm. I also liked Don's talk with Casey on giving the pony a second chance, and I also liked the name Donnie gave him. It just takes time, but I think the pony will be good for Shadow. Nicely done on this.

The summary sounded funny, tho the story didn't have as much humor as I thought - nonetheless it was a great short story ;) one that dones't really need too much humor to be gud. The pony's name is cool, I like how Mikey cud handle it first time feeding, lol.