This thread is for people to post their fanfic works. The reason I do this is because they are creating a lot of clutter at the moment, and I'm looking to keep things nice and tidy! ^.^

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I thought I would entertain you guys with my writing, I love writing stories and I think many people who read like them too. I want to start my Fanfic which is based on the Star Wars Trilogy, it is set after Return of the Jedi, the last of the movies in the series (though one of the original 3). It follows the travels of a Pilot in the Federal Alliance (Formerly the Rebel Alliance). He is part of a Jedi Blood line but does not realise his powers and is later taught by Luke Skywalker to use them to their fullest.

The Dark Seal of the Panther threatens peace in the Galaxy and once again save the Galaxy.

Star Wars Episode 7: Tyranny of The Dark Panther

The Rebel Alliance sucessfully quelled the Evil Empired final push and destroyed the Evil Lord Palpatine. Years after a new galaxy system has been established called the Federal Alliance System. It controls the Galaxy with a fair hand. The Jedi Race is again growing after the destruction of Lord Darth Vader.

A rival Group the following of the Black Panther Seal opposed the Federal Alliance as a evil democracy ruling with an invisible hand. Lead by the Sith Lord Jano Nixt, they threaten the peace of the Galaxy. Princess Leia sends a squadron to explore the unknown areas of the new system, to discover the origin of the Dark Seal.

Once again the Galaxy is in Peril and the peace of a new system is threatened by a Dark Force......

CHAPTER 1: NAISA HUMA : PILOT OF THE FEDERATION

In the distant star system a squadron of x-wing fighters were exploring the space near the planet of Elchera as there have been reports of hostility from enemy fighter ships.

NAISA: NEON LEADER, I have completed my scan of the area, there are no enemy ships on scope.

HARSCO: NEON 5, I hear you prepare to pull out of the system, we have done all we can.

RETT: NEON LEADER? Was it a hoax reading?

HARSCO: Aye, NEON 3

After a disapointing watch in the nearby system, the pilots of the Neon squadron returned to the Battle Cruiser to await further orders.

RETT: Hey Naisa, how have you been?

NAISA: Rett Larcox, I thought I recognised the voice, I have been doing well.

RETT: Why did you leave home so soon? Your Parents are worried.

NAISA: I had a dream, I want to become the greatest star pilot in the galaxy.

RETT: I am afraid General Solo holds that position.

NAISA:.......yeah you are right.

The two walked to the control room to recieve their debriefing.

HARSCO: Rett, Naisa good job on your first assignment, pity we could not see what you learnt at the academy.

NAISA: I would rather avoid unessesary combat sir!

HARSCO: Good!

RETT: Did we gain anything from our assignment.

HARSCO:............we were fooled it was a diversion by the Dark Pantero, they attacked a Federal Stronghold and have destroyed one of our shipments.

A man entered the room wearing a generals uniform.

SOLO: They are beginning to be a bother for us!

HARSCO: *salutes* General Solo, glad you could join us!

SOLO: At ease soldier, you too kid!

HARSCO: We need to neutralise this threat sir, we are taking damage from their attacks.

SOLO:........hmm.

NAISA: My I suggest something?

HARSCO: Silence!

SOLO: No let him speak, what is it kid!

NAISA: Do the enemy attack in a pattern.

HARSCO: Dantoine, Hoth, another Dantoine.......

SOLO: Yeah! of course, somebody followed the battles 10 years ago.

NAISA: Where will they next?

SOLO: It will be cloud city or Endor, build up the defenses on these bases.

The order was put forward by Harsco and the two young pilots were ready for action.

Please can I have feeback or any suggestions?

No problem my friend

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Hey Dave, the fanfic seems a little short.. Maybe you should have made it longer. But the story seems good and looks like its going somewhere. Id always hoped that there would be a Episode 7 and this seems like a good continuation of 6..

But no one dies in the right placeOr in the right hourAnd everyone dies sooner than his timeAnd before he reaches home.