i love the story! this has been my favorite fan fic that i have read so far! i cant wait till the next chapter! just a suggestion when harry tells neville bout the horcruxes and all u should put in that he could of been harry and all that stuff xD u dont have to just a suggestion!

keep up the good work - lemondroped

Reviewer: LilyPotter20Date: 06/30/07 16:45 Chapter: The Price of a Horcrux

jeez low weez, the mods on this site....geh. I submitted my story a gagillion times and this dude named Robin always emails me and he like, REJECTED! He says because I dont double space, but I clearly do double space! On word document I double space and then copy and paste on this site. What am i doing wrong, and why does this dude keep saying im not double spacing when I am. I have a betta and my story doesnt have problems its just that dang space problem!

Oops. I didn't see there was another chapter. I read it and enjoyed it.

I have to admit, though, I'm not convinced that there actually could be a horcrux where the acromantulas are. That is not specifically a place where Voldemort experienced a sense of power. Also, I don't think they would guard something that was Voldemort's intentionally. Here, I'm sorry, I disagree with you.

Also, the 'Stupefy' curse stuns people, it doesn't freeze them. You'd have to use 'Petrificus Totalus' for that. Whenever a person id stupefied, he or she cannot here anything and is completely unaware of what is happening around him till the time he or she is revived.

I'm sorry, this chapter was quite good, but in my opinion not your best. I know you can do far better.

Ok i submitted my story and all that and well that was like a week ago, but the mods still havent validated and i never got a rejection letter, and well your an author, so what do i do?! Did i do something wrong? please tell me Im justa new kid on the block! How long does it usually take to get a story validated?

Author's Response: If your story is still in queue, meaning, you can still see it under your "manage stories" section, then the mods have not gotten to it. just leave it there and wait... If it mysteriously disappeared from that section and you can't find it anywhere...it was rejected... and you should have recieved an e-mail. Sometimes it takes a while to get validated, a week or a week and a half... Mine usually get done on the weekends, or early week, so just be patient. It sucks, I know it takes a while, but keep plugging at it... The worst is when you wait all week only for it to get rejected... that happens to me all the time! But, just wait it out and keep submitting...you'll do fine! Good luck and I hope this helps! ~Ozma333

Ok i submitted my story and all that and well that was like a week ago, but the mods still havent validated and i never got a rejection letter, and well your an author, so what do i do?! Did i do something wrong? please tell me Im justa new kid on the block!