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LightLeviosa5443 says:I really enjoyed this chapter, I like how you've characterized Morgaine and written her voice. I think it's a very unique approach, and it read very differently from other fics I've read. I really liked that about it.

You said you were worried about dialogue and relations, and honestly, you shouldn't be. I can see clearly that Morgaine loves her brothers, I understood her feelings towards Godric, and Godrics to Salazar, and I felt those feelings. You did a fantastic job of conveying them.

I felt like the Aunt was mystical, in a way. She was kind of unknown in a way, and I really liked how you ended the chapter, because I think that of all things really described how Morgaine felt about her Aunt. I think the most interesting relationship you introduced this chapter was definitely Morgaine's Mom and her Aunt. I think that it was a very different relationship, and it was interesting to read. Part of me kept reading in hopes of better understanding that relationship. I kind of wanted to observe them and pick apart their relationship to know them both better. Because to Morgaine, she focused more on the boys than she did on her mother and aunt. It was just different, I really enjoyed it.

I think you did a really fantastic job with this chapter, and I can't wait to read what else you have in store. I hope this review was helpful! I -hope you re-request!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: That's a relief! I struggled with the interaction between Rosalind (Morgaine's Aunt) and Elena (Morgaine's mother), because they are both strong characters, and really at odds with each other. But despite their differences, they are still sisters. Hopefully I've managed to show just enough of their relationship not to give too much away, but not make it sound like a completely disconnected babble.

I love your reviews! They are so clear as to what a reader is feeling reading this, which is so helpful :D