Sunday, May 20, 2007

Thursday, May 3, 2007

OutlineArticle:To judge and not hiring a person without poper infomationI. IntroductionA. Attention-getter1. A bushy eye brows may not earn you a job _____________________________________________________________________(Transition sentence goes here) B. Preview main points1.Employer should look at the work history and preformances before throwing out the applications._______________________________________________________________________2.height, size, looks, (ect..) does it matter?_______________________________________________________________________3.Employer should be stright forward and say things like "if you want a chance at this job you need to change your appearance, cause you will be representig *____*."_______________________________________________________________________(Transition sentence goes here) C. Thesis statement1.I think everyone deserve a job but if they have 5 feet long hair they should reconsider the job or get a hair cut. _______________________________________________________________________ (you may also put the thesis before the preview if you find it to be a better flow for your paper)II. BodyA. Body paragraph #1 (first proof of your thesis statement)1. Topic sentencea. Employers seeing and looking are two different things._____________________________________________________________________2. Supporting details (proof of topic sentence; be specific with details and have enough information)a.Employers can read the applications but looking at it maybe some use too.______________________________________________________________________b. ______________________________________________________________________c. ______________________________________________________________________d. ______________________________________________________________________e. ______________________________________________________________________f. ______________________________________________________________________B. Body paragraph #1 (second proof of your thesis statement)1. Topic sentencea. _____________________________________________________________________2. Supporting details (proof of topic sentence; be specific with details and have enough information)a. ______________________________________________________________________b. ______________________________________________________________________c. ______________________________________________________________________d. ______________________________________________________________________e. ______________________________________________________________________f. ______________________________________________________________________