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Hello! Amusing your coming here from deviantART, I didn't post this because using someone else's sprites are against the deviantART rules. (And that's why I deleted the first WIP.)
And if you're not coming from dA, this is a Work In Progress for a flash game I am working on.

Reviews

Rated 4 / 5 stars2013-03-11 21:31:47

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars2011-06-26 03:00:21

It is only a start...

Listen,dude-this might be your first entry,but I have told to lot of people like you-Newgrounds is NOT a test site.It is a proffesional site,where people can upload their flash content(games,movies,art,music and etc.)But without making sure your game is OK,you shouldn't post it.Eveyone is excited about their first game,but they shouldn't post it when they are not sure is it good enough.And now back to the game review...So here there are no instruction,I find it somewhat annoying than fun actually.Also you can't use WASD,mouse can't interact with anything at all and all you can do is walk and jump.Also the field isn't unendable,but worst-we see the white field and can walk on it.Now that is just lame...You can't jump on the platforms(they don't look realistic by the way)and there is absolutely no point and instructions,no menu,no nothing.This game deserves only 1 star for you time making it and for a start.But that might be even too much for you.Anyways,you need to improve graphics,add music maybe,platforms,instruction(and an actual menu) and add enemies perhaps,if that is the point of the game in the future.So work on them and you might get better.;D

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2011-06-25 10:34:53

Rated 0 / 5 stars2011-06-25 03:39:31

Not bad, but not even started...

Just as GamekrazzyProduction said: NG isn't meant to put your "work in progress" up. So you can't get any more than a couple of points for this.

1. you can move outside your walking area (which is REALLY bad and should be first to fix)
2. no music / sound
3. nothing to do atm
4. movements (only left and right - and actually you don't move Miku, but the background. (i know ... this is usually what you do, but this is just a too "bold" way to do it)
5. no menu
6. you start without any instructions (what should i do to move my char? (arrow-keys? wasd? mouse) Am i Miku or am i sth. else?
7. no story
8. nothing to interact
9. nothing to upgrade, improve or individualize
10. no medals (okay ... you can't give medals for this game atm... but this would be worth a star in my rating)

This is some sort of start. But with all respect: its not that much work and could be done within 1h (with given graphics).

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars2011-06-25 02:53:21

Looks good so far...

Oh yeah, and contenue is actually spelled continue.
lol JK.
And now for the actually review.
First off, it is looking great. nice spritework and tilesets. For the finished project though you will need to have a menu and "loader". Also, please try not to post WIP's into the Flash portal, because I believe there is an actual place you can post it other then here, as the portal is ment for finished project. The title lies at the moment, as there is no RPG element to this yet. I like the way you are doing the tutorial so far. Keep up the good work.