So, you rock. And “bastard” is exactly what you’d call someone who left you too early. Not that you mean it, just that you don’t know how to process your feelings. I think there were weeds in their relationship to begin with. But then maybe their last encounter was a fight, and then he died. How can you recover/heal from that? In the end, I picture her sitting on his gravestone in a state of madness, pulling weeds because she doesn’t know what else to do. I think “ill nurtured soil” describes the relationship before it was ended by death.

And when I read “stone over his head,” I first pictured her smashing him over the head with the stone and killing him. So that might also play into this as well.

Not like this isn’t right up my ally! I love to dance in madness and the best art is dark! 🙂 Fantastic weave, pen wielder…hope I’m not getting too redundant…but awesome is as awesome does…do you “dabble” in fiction as well?

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