Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2012-08-23 17:42:20

Decent writing, decent voice acting, subdecent drawing, and animation needs a lot of work. Some jokes were funny, some weren't. The plane burning and people running around was dragged on for a while. The joke with the native chief rabbling on with some evil intent about his atmosphere turning into him asking about rap was really funny, I thought. You've got a lot of potential, but I think most importantly you need to storyboard with friends you can bounce ideas off of and work on those animation skills!