I really hope you update soon. Very good storyline, even if it's a bit OOC, what are fanfictions for, eh? Not very many grammar or spelling mistakes, for the good. And lastly it flows well. Maybe have a more insight on who Cloud is sopposed to be in the next chapter?

Finally... I get to review. My server's ALWAYS experience problems when opening the review popup window. But anyhoo, problem solved. So here I am, posting a review you've been waiting for~

I can't say anything, but I really really REALLY love your story. I dunno why, but it got into me pretty fast. But still, I have a few things to critic v_v;;

First off, I like how your characters get along. IMO, Aeris and Rufus are merely the ones who stayed in their original personalities. Tifa is clearly a bit pushy here, since we all know she's more tolerant and all. About Cloud... well... I never see Cloud as a cold d00d, so I found that Cloud of yours amusing. Still, he's an attractive blonde

I read this story somewhere else but I know you wrote it! Nywyas I really like this story I wonder what secrets Cloud has? Will he ever kiss Aeris? Come on you have to finish this story for me oh and heres my site XXAeris4rmff7XX

Wow.. this is getting more and more "The Prince and The Pauper"-ish! _

I really like your way of writing and how you describe the characters and city's appearances, even though I have to say Cloud's a bit OOC here... not that it's a bad thing though, most people do expect Cloud as a cold d00d ;; As for Rufus, you tell it like it is, 'cause without doubt Rufus always ends up being the First Son in almost every story.

And yes, I do reckon the similarities between our 2 lovable blonde bombshells. You're not the one first one to write about them!

Anyway, I haven't read more, so I'll go for it later. If you can, describe the looks of Reco, please! Curiosity is enough to kill me too *lol*. I had to think why it's Reco instead of Reno though...

Oh I was just about to suggest that you write a new summary! It doesn't do your story justice-at all! XD Oh and is Reco Reno, or are they two different people?

Hmm summary...

Well put something like, "...forced into service of Midgar's newly bethrothed princess, or is he?" or something like that. I suck at summaries. _ At least put something about Aeris in, right now it sounds like the story's about Cloud being a ruffian. p

Oh my I just realised you're the author of For Always, Forever! I loved that story so much! Phew, that means this story is definitely Cleris, ne? D