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Hmm...I think the vocals may be a tad bit high in remix. The problem wasn't the Eq on the vocals in the original (or even the remix, for that matter), it's the quality of the iPhone mic recording. I think it can only be so good. Frankly, I wouldn't worry about it. The first recording was the better of the two and it was fine for what it was. Are you having fun making the recordings? That's half the game. Give some of my crap a listen. There is no way you can honestly say the quality of many of my recordings are anywhere near average amateurish efforts. But they were fun (for the most part) producing.

Hmm...I think the vocals may be a tad bit high in remix. The problem wasn't the Eq on the vocals in the original (or even the remix, for that matter), it's the quality of the iPhone mic recording. I think it can only be so good. Frankly, I wouldn't worry about it. The first recording was the better of the two and it was fine for what it was. Are you having fun making the recordings? That's half the game. Give some of my crap a listen. There is no way you can honestly say the quality of many of my recordings are anywhere near average amateurish efforts. But they were fun (for the most part) producing.

Ok, I have re-uploaded another mixed where I am taken back some of the volume and EQ hopefully that improves it a bit?

Definitely having fun recording, I'm just a bit of a perfectionist.

This is all good practice for when I do get proper recording equipment and want to sound a bit more professional.

I like your work, but the vocals sound distorted a bit in some spots. The guitar sounds fine. You say you recorded the vocal on an iphone mic. This is my big concern about the coming trend with recording on small devices. If the practice becomes widespread I hope the equipment gets better.

EDIT-I did let the next song on your Soundcloud play (Dying of the Light). The vocals sound much better on this tune IMO.