Reviews

Rated 4 / 5 stars2011-05-09 08:40:16

Nice writing

Hmm, the buildup is quite nice, but a little short, even for some sort of comic book, as you style them - I think that you could double the number of panels and not have it being too long. The size is not a problem, allowing for you to expand the piece, without adversely affecting it all.

The writing has never been a problem for all of your pieces and you're fully capable of taking this from strength to strength. I love the colour scheme that you've used and with the way that it's panned out, I can see myself getting into the tale. Perhaps a little bit more would be a nice way to take it, as opposed to her coming home, going almost straight to bed and not really engaging much, allowing us to get attached to the character.

I wouldn't have been swearing at her if I was a parent or guardian, but perhaps that's a dynamic there that needs to be explored in future episodes? You've certainly made him a sinister character though and I'm curious about him.

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars2011-05-04 16:14:46

Still good so far

Also kind of funny how it covers five chapters here. Enjoyed the speech bubbles since I read them well. As for the extra fancy hand writing it took me a moment or two to read a few of the words but I was able to read them quite well anyways.

The storyline seems strange but good still. She gets a home in her new area and her father seems a bit mean but nice. Funny how that plant is called a cat too. Different name for things I suppose.

The drawings were nicely detailed. As usual I still enjoyed the minimal use of colors and simply sticking to shades and tints of one color to paint the characters and things in this series.

Rated 4 / 5 stars2011-05-03 15:37:27

Okay I guess

Its pretty good, but hardly more than any other web-comic. I Dont think the flash format is really worth it, its a comic sliude show not a movie or game. I think it would get a far better response if submitted to the art portal. But thats just my opinion.

The art style was interesting and pretty good, I wont lie. The characters were interesting and the story was mildly compelling up to a certain point. The characters and the art was really well made and the options and music was pretty good and convenient. I really dont understand the cursor thing, when I go to play a game I usually find them annoying when they arent needed as crosshairs and whatnot so I dont know why you added them.

The story was good, the comic was good, the art was really good but I think that it should remain a comic not a flash slide show. 4/5 and 8/10

Rated 5 / 5 stars2011-05-03 14:21:45

Story unfolds

The story slowly unfolds. I have told you this before, but I will happily tell it again: Your way of storytelling is very good. You just seem to find the right pace to tell your stories. Not too fast, but not too slow so that I get bored either. I always have a feeling of "I HAVE to know how this story continues!" if I read through the chapters.

In this chapter I liked the combination of the pink and the blue colours. They went along very well together and it created some very nice effects. I may have some interpretation of why some characters are in blue while others are in pink, but I'm not too sure yet, so I won't tell it, lol. :P

Anyway, some similarities to the story of Alice in Wonderland cannot be denied. The dream world, the cat... but as I happen to like Alice in Wonderland I am glad to see those similarities.