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Fri, March 7th, 2008 1:28am

Oh Snow. How awful she was no friend at all.Your pain shows in your writing.
Lydia

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Fri, March 7th, 2008 1:38am

lydia you are right about that she turned out to be no friend at all, but we learn from experience. i choose my friends much more carefully now. thanks for the comment and for stopping by to read.
take care
snow x

It is "better Than the cat sat on the mat". Ironic that. She insulted you, hurt you to the point of tears, then inspired you to write a very heart-felt poem.

"The cat sat on the mat": you managed to make her words a very meaningful part of your poem. Well done!

craaig

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Sun, March 9th, 2008 10:42am

thank you craaig. it took a lot of months before i could write this poem. it still hurts that she treated me like that, but i have other better friends that treat me well.
take care and thanks for reading
snow x

You will meet many people along this journey that we call life, who will insult and discourage us for the sole purpose of making themselves appear grander. They aren't worth a second thought. "The Cat Sat on the Mat" would have been a good title for this piece, Snow!! Learn from this incident and rise above.....Jerry

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Sun, March 9th, 2008 10:45am

jerry, how right you are. i never thought of The Cat Sat On The Mat as the title, i think it would probably have been better. Though it still hurts i am moving on, contact is kept to a bare minimum. thanks for your support.
take care
snow x

Snow my mum once told me your best freind can be your worst enemy.......sometimes this is true like you this happened to me many years ago......keep smiling though for all of us on Booskie care as you know....Til Later :)

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Sun, March 9th, 2008 10:46am

juliet, how true your mum's words are. it is really good to know that you all care. it gets me through some fairly bad days.
take care
snow x

Snow, I think you're a wonderful poet! I have a tendancy to get into one-sided relationships - trust me, you are so much better off without her.

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Mon, March 10th, 2008 2:51pm

thank you lacey, i think you are an amazing writer too. it took me a good few months and the support of my good friend to make me realise how right you are. i am trying to keep our contact to a minimum to save me any more heartache. my friends on booksie are better friends than her.
take care
snow xx

Wow! Strong words snow! Friends must always say the truth about feelings , be clear and honest. You are a good person and deserve the better.

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Tue, March 11th, 2008 2:47am

thank you juliano. it took me a while to figure out i deserved better, but now i have a much better friend who is always encouraging me never putting me down and i also have my booksie friends.
take care
hugs snow xx

Unknown

Comment | 63 words

Mon, March 24th, 2008 5:20am

it hurts to hear an insult to your friend especially if it come from your bestfriend. Of all who will so those words it is your bestfriend. But what hurts most?insulting like what your bestfriend does or your bestfriend who ignores you and make you feel you are nothing to him now? Without knowing the reason of it.

cecile_degracia@yahoo.com

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Mon, March 24th, 2008 7:47am

it is very hurtful to find that your best friend thinks so little of you and wants to make themselves look funnier, more likeable at your expense. this is no friend at at all. i moved on and found a new friend. there is no point in trying to find out why they did what they did. sooner or later they will find they have lost the best friend they could have had and you are much happier with the friends you now have.
take care
snow

wow, your ex-friend is no firend at all. I mean you don't know me and i don't know you, but i really felt your pain, and i could feel how you felt, and this "friend" is really not. I'm really glad that in your poem you expressed how you moved on, it was nice. And you seem like a good person! Anyways that's what i wanted to say, i'm glad that your other friend is there, they seem really great! And i'd always be your friend if you want!
great writing!
-Seesawmae

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Fri, March 28th, 2008 11:43am

thank you for this lovely comment and i welcome you as a friend. i do still feel the pain of what she did but my other friend is always around and encouraging.
take care
snow x

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Mon, March 31st, 2008 4:17pm

This poem reminds me of some friends I thought I had. They seem to have desserted me. Maybe they were not such great friends after all. Well written and painful to read.

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Mon, March 31st, 2008 4:36pm

thank you for this comment. i hope things work out as well for you as they did for me.
take care
snow

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Mon, March 31st, 2008 4:20pm

I wish things were different for you and that your friend had not treated you like that. Good for you for moving on. Sensitively written.
D =)

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Mon, March 31st, 2008 4:34pm

thank you for this kind comment. moving on was the best thing i could have done.
take care
snow x

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Mon, March 31st, 2008 4:26pm

Snowbelle, yet another amazing poem.

Your so called friend was nasty and two faced. I am so pleased you saw the light and found a proper friend instead.

I hope your new friend treats you kindly.

Amazing

eddie the 'ead

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Mon, March 31st, 2008 4:31pm

thank you eddie for this very kind comment.i agree with you. and yes my new friend is the best friend i could wish for.
take care
snow x

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Tue, April 1st, 2008 6:32am

Am new to Booksie and picked your name at random. So glad I did. Haven enjoyed every poem I have read so far and this is no exception. Please stay as far away from this woman as possible. There are enough people in the world who will put you down without your 'friends' doing so. Amazing writing.

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Tue, April 1st, 2008 9:34am

thanks for picking my name and taking the time to read my poems. i have not seen this woman in 4 months and i do not miss her.
thanks again.
take care
snow x

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Tue, April 1st, 2008 4:50pm

What can I say?

What a cow she was to you ! Good riddance to bad rubbish I say......... I am very happy that you seem to have found a "proper" friend to share your time with I hope that he takes proper care of you Snowbelle and supports your talents.

Although I dont know you I know you are better off without her girl !.

Fantasic poem as well

I am new to reading poems online and I hope my comments are ok....

(sorry I do tend to get carried away sometimes!!!!!!)

Be true

Fie Brown

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Wed, April 2nd, 2008 1:58am

fie, thank you for this lovely comment. i know now i am better off without her and my 'proper' best friend supports me in every way. hope you carry on enjoying reading poetry online
take care
snow x

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Wed, April 16th, 2008 6:29am

I agree with all the other comments this was no friend of yours. You are so much better off without her. Do not even be tempted to contact her she is poison. Another amazing poem.

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Wed, April 16th, 2008 8:18am

thank you for your comment. i do keep thinking i should get in contact but i cannot let myself go through a barrage of insults again so i will not see her.
take care
snow

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Wed, April 23rd, 2008 1:44am

I feel your hurt in this poem. Keep writing, you are so good at it.

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Wed, April 23rd, 2008 11:03am

thank you for this very kind comment. she did hurt me a lot, even now the hurt is still there.
snow

She was a b****....and I am happy that she is out of ur life....U don't need such people around you...You r a warm human being and u should never never be hurt by such brainless persons.....

One’s who like to talk as equals
And appreciate what I am

how true

We all r one big family in Booksie and now u have a great friend by ur side.....

Don't ever go back to her.....

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Tue, May 6th, 2008 11:59am

pratibha thanks for this comment. i agree with you she was never a friend. and i agree with you wholeheartedly about the booksie family, they are the best.
take care
snow x

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Sun, May 11th, 2008 11:55am

Wow, with friends like that who needs enemies. Its amazing though how long we stick with people like that trying desperately to see the good side. Good for you for getting rid and finding a true friend who will support you. Loved the poem

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Sun, May 11th, 2008 12:06pm

thank you for your kind comment. i guess i kept trying to see the good side, it took a lot of persuasion from my other best mate for me to see what she was doing. i am much better off without her.
take care
snow

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Thu, May 29th, 2008 11:13am

Wow. This poem is doing really well for you. Came back for a re-read as I saw it in the top 20. Hope you have stuck to your guns and avoided this person...Lydia

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Thu, May 29th, 2008 11:32am

Thank you for re-reading lydia this poem is indeed doing amazingly well for me and i thank everyone who has taken the time to read and/or comment. I have stuck to my guns and havent spoken to her in five months, sometimes though i do think about giving in and contacting her but something stops me....snow x

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Fri, May 30th, 2008 5:17am

I Think This Is A Really Nice Poem And Please Write More On Best Friends :);)

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Fri, May 30th, 2008 8:00am

thank you for this lovely comment. i will try and write some more about my real best friend that i have now. snow

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Sat, May 31st, 2008 5:04am

Truely yes that was a wonderful poem. When i had my firt Reconciliation, when we should forgive and be good friend. The best friend i thought i had was all bad. She never said sorry so i never actually really forgived her. At least i have other friends! Take care in the future!

Emma

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Sun, June 1st, 2008 8:59am

i thank you for your very kind comment. too many people who call themselves our friends open their mouths and offend then try to laugh it off never actually thinking sorry may be the answer. we are better off without people like this. take care
snow