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The way you've described the fingers does make me think of Stonehenge and I see them creating that circle over the heart. Willing something magical to happen. But this feels like breaking up to me. The tears, the muffled words that sound distant as though disbelieving and blocking. But the image of the fingers makes me believe that these small hands want to re-ignite a fire. Just my feelings from this... :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1 Year Ago

Very insightful review. This is indeed a "break up poem" and for some reason all those things went t.. read moreVery insightful review. This is indeed a "break up poem" and for some reason all those things went through my mind. I know. I'm crazy.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1 Year Ago

I sometimes am gobsmacked reading you, this is like a tearing separation, the lament is so palpable yet reads like honey if it wasn't laced with such a depth of what seems sorrow, you are one hell of a writer :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Months Ago

The way you've described the fingers does make me think of Stonehenge and I see them creating that circle over the heart. Willing something magical to happen. But this feels like breaking up to me. The tears, the muffled words that sound distant as though disbelieving and blocking. But the image of the fingers makes me believe that these small hands want to re-ignite a fire. Just my feelings from this... :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

Rating /100

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1 Year Ago

Very insightful review. This is indeed a "break up poem" and for some reason all those things went t.. read moreVery insightful review. This is indeed a "break up poem" and for some reason all those things went through my mind. I know. I'm crazy.