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Yukio's character is quite... interesting. Reminds me kinda of a mashup between some other various manga characters. Interesting fullbring too. And at the end... What's with Ishida? This is why I hate waiting... LOL

Gotta love Video game fullbring. Love the lack of battery remarks. And he sounds so epic confronting Tsukishima. Then at the end he's whining about not wanting to help train Ichigo.

Although, it kinda sucks that we'll probably never see Time Tells no Lies/Invaders must Die/Dollhouse offensively. (CoughEmphasisOnTheMiddleOneCough)

Wondering what the Love Gun is, but it isn't delved too deeply upon.

EDIT: Uhh...I think Luke just gave me a theme song That sucks. I like the music, the voice, not so much. that...is about lack of resolve? Eh-hem. *begins sharpening some javelins and knives agaisnta very large grindstone*

In other news. It seems there now a time-based fullbring (With two parts O.o.) That...has the same beginning form as a certain someone else's.

Blueprint still is aweseom.

And I agree with Arc about Yukio. I was NOT expecting a "Me" either

Last edited by rotrum; 12th May 2011 at 12:57 AM.

Originally Posted by Northern Lights

I have that effect on most men for some reason. no wonder i've been feeling lesbian lately >.>

@kusari: im dying to see your next chapter, it should be fun, and can you pm me your shinigami stats and zan? i'd like to put you in my fic because you were nice enough to put me in yours

and someone smarter than ILPy? *gasp*

and me an ILPy is more like, I'm an average dell inspiron core duo computer, and ILP is a NASA mega computer

anyway

fullbring time!

Fullbring Name: Aegis

Item: the key hung around my neck

Activation description:
I take the key off it's chain, and "unlock" something invisible, meaning i turn the key. After I turn the key, it disappears, and a large double ended scythe appears. Spoiler:- It looks like this:

ignore the hands gripping the blade, as apparently this wasn't clean cut, also, the pic is from a game, though the scythe looks awesome, this is pretty much what i imagine it to be like, except with some gears here and there

i then grasp the handle of the scythe

Ability Details:
I can slow down time with this scythe, to an extent of course, I can only slow it down up to 15 minutes slower than usual, but each extra minute takes up a significant amount of reiatsu, the time returns to normal after it achieves the length of time slowed down, (ie, slow it down 15 minutes slower, lats for 15 minutes. though it takes reiatsu to keep it slowed down

i can also speed up time, the same as slowing down time, except reverse it
this means i can make myself faster, or my opponent slower, i can only effect one objec at a time, not all of time itself

Second ability:
Fullbring Name: Chrono

Activation description:
I spin the scythe, which creates a clock made of energy, i then say "Chrono" and the clock takes physical form, and counts down the minutes left for the opponent, and it changes depending on the current situatuation in battle, if the opponent has the upper hand, the clock goes counter clockwise, if i do, it goes clockwise, when it hits the top, that is the precise moment the opponent is dead
so this means, i can look at the clock to see if they still live

Ability details: clock part is above, second part is... i can creates round blades of time energy by swinging my scythe, if cut by the blades, the wound will have a "time-lock" which means it cannot heal for the duration of the battle, though those with significantly high reiatsu can break it
the blades also mean for long range
also, the scythe itself will be able to fight, as it has a chain at the bottom of the blade, which makes it similar to nnoitora's, i can swing it, but i can also hit with it
i can also use a significant amount of reiatsu to "fast forward" my wounds, allowing them to have sprung forward in time to where they healed naturally. the greater the wound, the more reiatsu used
if used in conjunction with my bankai, the gunblade and shield are sheath, and my armor turns dark blue, and the wings disappear

... *breathes* I . AM . A . FEMALE ... *snarl*
Why do you think my Zanpaktou using the all the powers of Mother Nature. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.

Ilp and Arceus03: Aww, wow, you have a paired fullbring, which is pretty cool, kinda reminded me of the giant wizards chess board in the Philosphers Stone XD

Oooh! Popcorn time?

Thanks =D

Originally Posted by Eon Master

Topic:Arc

Mhm. Arc's powers aren't exactly useful against me. His protective water bubble thing also fails against my Bankai. (And please, don't say "IT'S NOT A BUBBLE!" because the physics in play won't be stopped by completely encasing yourself in water either. Less damage, perhaps, but not much else.)

Arc: *Water Bubble*

Me: *flying leap into an eight-sided Jyuusei Shuusoku, blasting right through the bubble*

Arc: X.x

Or I could just come straight down while using the same move. Squish.

Mhm. Idk why people think that my Bankai can't do stuff like that just because it's primarily close range. Circ said the same thing at school when I showed the draft to him. It's not easy, but it's possible. And I can still use Tsuzuri Raiden. I suck at Kido, but Hado #11 isn't exactly difficult to pull off.

First chapter either tonight or tomorrow, depending on how tired I am when I get home from practice.

IT'S NOT A BUBBLE! What I meant to imply when I said bubble was, either way you'd still have to charge through a huge mass of churning, pressurizes water, so inevitably you'd be soaked, at the very least. Since every movement would be like taking a hundred knife stabs to you, I figure being soaked with water would somehow or other put more pain. But I forgot about your Jyuusei Shuusoku, in which, I assume, you'd be shielded from the water?

About Hado #11, though, I could easily counter that with a higher-leveled Kido.

Looking forward to that. =D

Originally Posted by kusari

I picture that as pretty awesome looking.

Fullbring coming sooner.

Yeah, provided you don't fall asleep during the fight. XP

Woo.

Manga Spoiler:

I love Yukio even more now :3
Also, Kubo seems to shift from drawing his right eye exposed to his left one now.

"Who am I fighting now?" "Me."
AWWWWW. I thought he was going to say "Yukio". >.>

But Orihime is going to play a major role next chapter? Sounds cool.

And... "The situation accelerates to its limits." Better be something worth it.

I thought Jackie would be dark-skinned, but the fan artist thought otherwise.

EDIT:
OH HAI BLUE!

Originally Posted by rotrum

Spoiler:- Manga:

Although, it kinda sucks that we'll probably never see Time Tells no Lies/Invaders must Die/Dollhouse offensively. (CoughEmphasisOnTheMiddleOneCough)

Yup.

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

anyway

fullbring time!

Fullbring Name: Aegis

Item: the key hung around my neck

if i do, it goes clockwise, when it hits the top, that is the precise moment the opponent is dead
so this means, i can look at the clock to see if they still live

if used in conjunction with my bankai, the gunblade and shield are sheath, and my armor turns dark blue, and the wings disappear

Fullbring item is similar to Eon's.

First ability is just a differently-worded version of ILPy's zanpakto, except without the need to cut. I don't think ILPy is going to allow it.

Second ability is... what? It gives you a countdown, and when it's up, the opponent is dead? Sounds cheap

I don't understand the blades of time part.

And no, we don't combine them. It's normally JUST Fullbring, or JUST zanpakto. Because by default, Spoiler:

Fullbringers are normal people whose mothers got attacked by a Hollow, not a shinigami. And before you argue: Ichigo is, again, the weird one out of the party.

Do you read the manga, btw?

To cap, underpowered is a nonexistent issue. Overpowered, maybe a bit, see what others think.

anyway, I got my laptop back.
Since I'm not a good strategist, i don't think im going to reply to all these bleach vs us, us vs us, me vs us, etc etc topics, because I can't even remember half your zanpaktous, atleast to the fullest. ^-^
Let's see what else we got here...
I might edit this later when i'm not so disgruntled and nervous, I don't believe if i ever posted my chapter i made, a short prologue called Undead Flowers, I might post it later.
And until next time. Off I go.. to go..do..something..
Edit: @Lucario:...Did you just rip off the Judgement Scythe from Dragonfable?EditEdit: (Forgot i tl;dr'ed) Deepest apologies. Either way, this CAN be overpowered depending on the situation/how stubborn you are when rp'ing.
Editing my edit's edit inside a edit. editception Anyway, i forgot to mention to thank you guys for all being so accepting of my whole thing.

thanks, everyone.

EDITEDITEDITimnotbothering @ the latest post that belongs to Luke, now isn't THAT acid ace from Megaman Starforce? ._. I mean, cmon, it's kind of okay if it's your bio, i wouldn't suggest ripping out armor from another game for a fanfic.

And no, we don't combine them. It's normally JUST Fullbring, or JUST zanpakto. Because by default, Spoiler:

Fullbringers are normal people whose mothers got attacked by a Hollow, not a shinigami. And before you argue: Ichigo is, again, the weird one out of the party.

Spoiler:

Do we know 100% for a fact that his mother wasn't attacked before he was born as well? It could have happened... Right?

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

Since I'm not a good strategist, i don't think im going to reply to all these bleach vs us, us vs us, me vs us, etc etc topics, because I can't even remember half your zanpaktous, atleast to the fullest.

Do we know 100% for a fact that his mother wasn't attacked before he was born as well? It could have happened... Right?

Spoiler:

Ichigo's mother probably was attacked by a Hollow, hence why he does have a Fullbring. What I meant was that most Fullbringers are normal humans, they aren't shinigami, since Luke was combining his Fullbring with his bankai.

Correct me if I'm wrong, someone. I don't actually really understand that part, to be honest. But I'm pretty certain I was correct.

BTW... Do you guys think we'll see the Soul Society again? You know, in the manga. I'd kinda like some clarification about the Royal Family and stuff... There's this current arc, which is supposed to be followed by a final, long arc, right? Think that it might cover that?

BTW... Do you guys think we'll see the Soul Society again? You know, in the manga. I'd kinda like some clarification about the Royal Family and stuff... There's this current arc, which is supposed to be followed by a final, long arc, right? Think that it might cover that?

Spoiler:

I don't want to hope too much, but hopefully, yeah. Although, seeing the way Bleach is progressing, the probability of Kubo closing all his plotholes are as good as the probability of ILPy suddenly become uninterested in Relativity Theories, dimensions and pi, which is to say, as good as negative infinity. (What am I babbling about? XD)

So yeah. Aizen plot had a bunch of plotholes, and we didn't see them solved. Kubo could explain all those at the end of Bleach, but it just seems unlikely. Though, I'm certain we'll at least see SS again, because of the rumored Unohana fight. Ah well. I hope, at least, Kubo will disclose all bankai, though of course we're never going to see Aizen's, imo. But the remaining Captains would be good.

Activation description:
I take the key off it's chain, and "unlock" something invisible, meaning i turn the key. After I turn the key, it disappears, and a large double ended scythe appears. Spoiler:- It looks like this:

ignore the hands gripping the blade, as apparently this wasn't clean cut, also, the pic is from a game, though the scythe looks awesome, this is pretty much what i imagine it to be like, except with some gears here and there

i then grasp the handle of the scythe

Ability Details:
I can slow down time with this scythe, to an extent of course, I can only slow it down up to 15 minutes slower than usual, but each extra minute takes up a significant amount of reiatsu, the time returns to normal after it achieves the length of time slowed down, (ie, slow it down 15 minutes slower, lats for 15 minutes. though it takes reiatsu to keep it slowed down

i can also speed up time, the same as slowing down time, except reverse it
this means i can make myself faster, or my opponent slower, i can only effect one objec at a time, not all of time itself

Second ability:
Fullbring Name: Chrono

Activation description:
I spin the scythe, which creates a clock made of energy, i then say "Chrono" and the clock takes physical form, and counts down the minutes left for the opponent, and it changes depending on the current situatuation in battle, if the opponent has the upper hand, the clock goes counter clockwise, if i do, it goes clockwise, when it hits the top, that is the precise moment the opponent is dead
so this means, i can look at the clock to see if they still live

Ability details: clock part is above, second part is... i can creates round blades of time energy by swinging my scythe, if cut by the blades, the wound will have a "time-lock" which means it cannot heal for the duration of the battle, though those with significantly high reiatsu can break it
the blades also mean for long range
also, the scythe itself will be able to fight, as it has a chain at the bottom of the blade, which makes it similar to nnoitora's, i can swing it, but i can also hit with it
i can also use a significant amount of reiatsu to "fast forward" my wounds, allowing them to have sprung forward in time to where they healed naturally. the greater the wound, the more reiatsu used
if used in conjunction with my bankai, the gunblade and shield are sheath, and my armor turns dark blue, and the wings disappear

this one was tough, kida, just felt like this may have sounded like one for you, i dunno..........

I'm listening to it now ... good call on the Trance music btw *dances while sitting down*

Originally Posted by arceus03

Oooh! Popcorn time?

Thanks =D

POPCORN!
Your welcome.

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

anyway, I got my laptop back.

Woot!

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

Since I'm not a good strategist, i don't think im going to reply to all these bleach vs us, us vs us, me vs us, etc etc topics, because I can't even remember half your zanpaktous, atleast to the fullest. ^-^

I was actually comparing Luke to his opponent. Comparing you and him would be toaster to the average computer.

I want to fight this supercomputer, now.

Originally Posted by rotrum

*Cough* You didn't inspire blueprint at all ILP

Suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuure

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

and me an ILPy is more like, I'm an average dell inspiron core duo computer, and ILP is a NASA mega computer

You guys aren't helping, I'm trying to be more modest.

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

Ability Details:
I can slow down time with this scythe, to an extent of course, I can only slow it down up to 15 minutes slower than usual, but each extra minute takes up a significant amount of reiatsu, the time returns to normal after it achieves the length of time slowed down, (ie, slow it down 15 minutes slower, lats for 15 minutes. though it takes reiatsu to keep it slowed down

i can also speed up time, the same as slowing down time, except reverse it
this means i can make myself faster, or my opponent slower, i can only effect one objec at a time, not all of time itself

I think this is quite similar to my zanpakutou, but I think maybe we should take a vote to see if the other captains think you need to change it (or just take it away).

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

I spin the scythe, which creates a clock made of energy, i then say "Chrono" and the clock takes physical form, and counts down the minutes left for the opponent, and it changes depending on the current situatuation in battle, if the opponent has the upper hand, the clock goes counter clockwise, if i do, it goes clockwise, when it hits the top, that is the precise moment the opponent is dead
so this means, i can look at the clock to see if they still live

Ability details: clock part is above, second part is... i can creates round blades of time energy by swinging my scythe, if cut by the blades, the wound will have a "time-lock" which means it cannot heal for the duration of the battle, though those with significantly high reiatsu can break it
the blades also mean for long range
also, the scythe itself will be able to fight, as it has a chain at the bottom of the blade, which makes it similar to nnoitora's, i can swing it, but i can also hit with it
i can also use a significant amount of reiatsu to "fast forward" my wounds, allowing them to have sprung forward in time to where they healed naturally. the greater the wound, the more reiatsu used
if used in conjunction with my bankai, the gunblade and shield are sheath, and my armor turns dark blue, and the wings disappear

To be honest, I think just the clock on its own is good enough. It's simple and makes sense, and these extra bits (time-locks, fast-forwarding wounds, etc.) are unneccesary. It would also get rid of the problem of making it like mine.
And yeah, Fullbring is completely seperate to Zanpakutou powers.

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

and ILPy

Na Na Na
by My Chemical Romance

and ILPy, though the song says in the beginning "drugs gimme drugs..." that does NOT reflect my opinion of you, it's just that the song and tune itself seemed to fit you.

XD It's a good song, but I don't think it suits me as a theme song. Then again, I think I'm very biased towards the Tron music, and Darth Vader's theme.

Originally Posted by arceus03

We should have a match again sometimes.

We should.

Originally Posted by VizardBlue

anyway, I got my laptop back.
Since I'm not a good strategist, i don't think im going to reply to all these bleach vs us, us vs us, me vs us, etc etc topics, because I can't even remember half your zanpaktous, atleast to the fullest. ^-^
I might edit this later when i'm not so disgruntled and nervous, I don't believe if i ever posted my chapter i made, a short prologue called Undead Flowers, I might post it later.

1. Welcome back!
2. That's why I go to the second post (the first one has a mistake) and just look at all the Zans. All you need to do is remember at least the element each Captain/member controls.
3. I know you posted a few chapters of a previous story...
4. Sam and Adam, right?

YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to. Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:

^ILP: not Sam and Adam. it's from the episode Tall Tales when Dean tells his version of what happened and makes Sam an overly emotional wuss who is "always saying pansy stuff like that." Sam hugs that guy, who was a witness to one of the Trickster's schemes, and asks him about his feelings.

Activation description: The deck flashes silver indicating that it has been randomized. To activate each card's ability I have to draw the card, say "Fate's hand had dealt you..." or "Fate's hand has dealt me..." (the former is used for targeting the opponent while the latter is for targeting me) followed by the name of the card. Most of the abilities are not offensive. They require using the hinderances laid upon the opponent to the user's advantage.

Other: Myself or an opponent can't be subject to more than three "Fate"s at once. Once a card is used it may not be recycled.

Fullbring Ability: Each card has a different ability. The card's ablities can be canceled by destroying the card or what the card manifests.

The Fool- Seals the target's reishi based attacks

The Magician- Absorbs an attack fired at the target

The High Priestess- Allows the target to predict the attacks of the enemy

The Empress- Creates a feeling of serenity in the target, preventing them from assaulting the user

The Emperor- A pressure overwhelms the target, bringing them to their knees

The Hierophant- Gives the target knowledge of the opponents abilities

The Lovers- The target's mind is overwhelmed by raw instinct. In this state they are unable to reason and become easier to hit and dodge, but gain the advantage of extra speed and strength.

The Chariot- Manifests a white sword and black sword to be used by the target

Justice- Gives the target Clear Vision, or the ability to find every weak spot in the enemy's defenses.

The Hermit- Hides the target's spirtual pressure from the opponent

Wheel of Fortune- Fires an energy beam that's strength is determined by a spin of the wheel. The strength ranges from 1-10.

Strength- Doubles the physical strength of the target

The Hanged Man- Chains of light restrain the target's limbs

Death- Manifests a black sickle for the target's use. Is able to reap the life of all spirtual or physical beings

Temperance- Heals the wounds of the target

The Devil- The target, unknowingly, begins to make weaker attacks. The card makes the target's ego believe the weak attacks are actually damaging the enemy severely

The Tower- A stone pillar rises from the earth to strike the target

The Star- Creates seven balls of light that launch at the enemy and explode on impact (think Senju Koten Taiho)

The Moon- Raises a wall of water in front of the target as defense

The Sun- Enables the target to launch fireballs from their hands

Judgement- Creates a spear for the target that causes tremors when struck against something

The World- Manifests a large sword for the target. Think of Rebellion, Dante's sword from Devil May Cry 4. Once the sword is active, all other cards abilities disapper. The World will appear on top of the deck after 6 cards have been destroyed.

That's it for now.

Last edited by kusari; 13th May 2011 at 2:29 AM.

PRETEND THERE IS A SIGNATURE HERE FULL OF WITTY JOKES AND CLAIMS TO FAME AND UNDESERVED BRAVADO AND SELF PROMOTION

Personality: Cold, calculating, he has no physical emotions since his tragic accident, he decides not to show them.

Battle Style: in battle, he is relentless in attack, because he cannot die, he often just throws random kido at his opponent and messes with their minds, he then strikes when it is least expected

Appearance: is physically a skeleton, the bones are charred a brownish black, he wears a hood to conceal his bony face. He also wears bandages on his hands, and wears a dark navy trench coat with gray runes etched into them. he wears a belt that has a deck box in which his zanpakuto is kept.

Spoiler:- Zanpakuto:

Zanpaktou Name; Kādo no ēsu (Ace of cards)
Type; kido
Zanpaktou Spirit; a skeleton made of playing cards, he helps to use stronger techniques
Release Command; Shaffuru (shuffle)
Shikai Details; the cards turn into metal cards, and fly around Ryaku at high speeds

Techniques:

Kādokurasshu (card clash)
Ryaku uses one of his cards to block an opponents attack, if it is a kido spell, or a ranged attack, it is reflected back at the user

Kādo no arashi (card storm)
Ryaku launches dozens of his cards at the opponent at high speeds, the cards are razor edged, and can cut, the cards return to ryaku after the attack is finished

Kido kādo (Kido Card)
Ryaku performs a kido spell using one of his cards, the cards greatly amplify the kido spell's power

Bankai Name; Okunote (Ace in the hole)
Bankai Details; the cards flutter around ryaku and form an armor around him, which increases his speed and defenses, they also create a sword
all shikai techniques are available in bankai

Techniques:

Keiyaku (Deal)
A random card is picked and dealt, the type of card signifies the attack. other than that, the symbol on the card signifies the element, and if a card with a number is drawn, ryaku launches the number of cards signified on the card, at the opponent, the card dealed is put on the sword to activate it's power, and can also be used by the sword for the same as the cards (ie, the metal one makes the sword sharper, fire makes it covered in flames)
Clubs: Earth (hit deals damage and creates flying rock debris from the ground)
Spades: Metal (hits with enhanced sharpness and accuracy)
Diamonds: Ice (freezes on contact, ice easily broken but the moments in which you take to break it can cause a deadly attack by ryaku)
Hearts: Fire (flaming cards launched at opponent, deals burns)
the ace cards are just enhanced versions of the above though one single card is launched
Ace of Clubs: causes a small earthquake, and rock to jut up from the ground
Ace of Spades: ryaku sharpens his blade and strikes with 20 extremely fast movements
Ace of Diamonds: A blizzard hits the area, clouding enemy vision, and causing severe damage
Ace of Hearts: Launches one HUGE fireball at the enemy
each jack card deals the opposite element as to what the symbol on it depicts, for the same as a 10 card
kings launch 20 cards of the element at the opponent
queens launch 15 cards of the element at the opponent

Roiyarufurasshu (Royal Flush)
every card is drawn from ryaku's deck and put on his sword, which deals a combined storm of every element, for extreme damage, his armor is released after this attack, and he cannot use deal anymore

Zanpaktou Spirit; A tall hooded figure. This tall hooded figure stands tall although he is constantly carrying a large coffin that is about the same size he is. The hooded figure is shrouded in black, and neither his face, hands nor feet are visible. The sleeves of the hood are extremely long which prevents his arms from being seen although he is carrying a large heavy coffin. The coffin itself is black and shaped in the stereotyical coffin shape, however there is a crown egraved into it and emphasised by silver paint. Underneath the crown symbol, in golden letters, is written "dis manibus sacrum" (Literal translation: Sacred to the ghost-gods | Translation in a modern day sense: To the memory of)

Release Command; In the memory of Death, smile
There are two release commands. There is the release command that does not let the zanpaktou go into full release mode (a sort of lazy release and then the full release. For the lazy release to occur, one just needs to say "Smile Hakaishi", for the full release, one must say "In the memory of Death, smile Hakaishi"

Unreleased Details; It is a Baselard. The hilt is black, and so is the sheath.

Shikai Details;
Upon release of the lazy command (Smile) the Baselard lengthens about five centimetres and becomes extremely flexible. The top part of the hilt bends into a smile. The tip gains a toxic quality to it – i.e. Anyone it pierces gets injected with a poison that will make them writher in great pain, however, it will take multiple doses (hence multiple stabbings) to kill them.

Abilities in this form:
-Causes intense pain to a person if stabbed.
-Multiple stabs will cause the death of a person
-Flexible, hence, can bend, hence stabbing does not have to occur in a straight line

Upon release of the full command (In memory of Death, smile) the Baselard lengthens dramatically until it pierces deep into the ground and takes root. The top part of the hilt then bends into a smile. Out from the ground, a coffin bursts through, identical to the coffin that the zanpaktou spirit carries.

Abilities in this form:
-Toxic gas: Toxic gas spews from the coffin and can cause death if inhaled. the death would be very slow though. It would take at least an hour for the slow moving poison to fully kill a person, however, it will paralyse the areas it has spread through
-If I point at the person I am fighting, a Baselard will appear out of thin air and hurtle towards the person. Its tip is also toxic
-Defense: Upon calling out "Defense", a sheild temporarily appears infront of me to fend off the incoming attack and disappears immediately afterwards
-If necessary, I can grab a Baselard out of thin air

Bankai Name; Utsukushii Hakaishi

Bankai Details; Upon crying out bankai, the Baselard that lengthened and pierced the ground is sucked into the ground. The coffin opens and out steps a beautiful naked woman. Her eyes remain closed, and her skin is as pale as death. She has rosy red lips with fangs peeping out. Her long silky blonde hair floats behind her. Around her head appears a halo, a halo that is shaped like a crown. Finally, a Baselard appears in her hand, however, the hilt is silver.

-toxic gas: Toxic gas constantly spews from the opened coffin throughout the battle (same capabilities as in shikai)
-Attack: Utsukushii Hakaishi can attack the enemy and defend me by using the same abilities as the shikai (full)
-Hair: Upon command, her hair can turn into a batch of writhering snakes that she can send out after the enemy
-Toxic bite: if a snake, or Utsukushii Hakaishi herself bites someone, then they will die instantly
-Servant: She has the ability to call any nearby dead people to become her slaves and do her bidding (this ability only works when she is near a cemetary or there are dead people nearby). The limit to the amount of people she can control at a time is based on the riatsu I have remaining. The longer the battle goes on, the fewer dead she can control. She can only summon the dead that are within a ten kilometre radius, though this radius reduces the weaker i am/my riatsu is
-Immortality: Since she is already dead, stabbing her or piercing through her skin will have no effect

to defeat her, one will either need to severe her head from her body so that she no longer has any control over her body or successfully hurt me.

Zanpaktou Spirit; A tall hooded figure. This tall hooded figure stands tall although he is constantly carrying a large coffin that is about the same size he is. The hooded figure is shrouded in black, and neither his face, hands nor feet are visible. The sleeves of the hood are extremely long which prevents his arms from being seen although he is carrying a large heavy coffin. The coffin itself is black and shaped in the stereotyical coffin shape, however there is a crown egraved into it and emphasised by silver paint. Underneath the crown symbol, in golden letters, is written "dis manibus sacrum" (Literal translation: Sacred to the ghost-gods | Translation in a modern day sense: To the memory of)

Release Command; In the memory of Death, smile
There are two release commands. There is the release command that does not let the zanpaktou go into full release mode (a sort of lazy release and then the full release. For the lazy release to occur, one just needs to say "Smile Hakaishi", for the full release, one must say "In the memory of Death, smile Hakaishi"

Unreleased Details; It is a Baselard. The hilt is black, and so is the sheath.

Shikai Details;
Upon release of the lazy command (Smile) the Baselard lengthens about five centimetres and becomes extremely flexible. The top part of the hilt bends into a smile. The tip gains a toxic quality to it – i.e. Anyone it pierces gets injected with a poison that will make them writher in great pain, however, it will take multiple doses (hence multiple stabbings) to kill them.

Abilities in this form:
-Causes intense pain to a person if stabbed.
-Multiple stabs will cause the death of a person
-Flexible, hence, can bend, hence stabbing does not have to occur in a straight line

Upon release of the full command (In memory of Death, smile) the Baselard lengthens dramatically until it pierces deep into the ground and takes root. The top part of the hilt then bends into a smile. Out from the ground, a coffin bursts through, identical to the coffin that the zanpaktou spirit carries.

Abilities in this form:
-Toxic gas: Toxic gas spews from the coffin and can cause death if inhaled
-If I point at the person I am fighting, a Baselard will appear out of thin air and hurtle towards the person. Its tip is also toxic
-Defense: Upon calling out "Defense", a sheild temporarily appears infront of me to fend off the incoming attack and disappears immediately afterwards
-If necessary, I can grab a Baselard out of thin air

Bankai Name; Utsukushii Hakaishi

Bankai Details; Upon crying out bankai, the Baselard that lengthened and pierced the ground is sucked into the ground. The coffin opens and out steps a beautiful naked woman. Her eyes remain closed, and her skin is as pale as death. She has rosy red lips with fangs peeping out. Her long silky blonde hair floats behind her. Around her head appears a halo, a halo that is shaped like a crown. Finally, a Baselard appears in her hand, however, the hilt is silver.

-toxic gas: Toxic gas constantly spews from the opened coffin throughout the battle
-Attack: Utsukushii Hakaishi can attack the enemy and defend me by using the same abilities as the shikai (full)
-Hair: Upon command, her hair can turn into a batch of writhering snakes that she can send out after the enemy
-Toxic bite: if a snake, or Utsukushii Hakaishi herself bites someone, then they will die
-Servant: She has the ability to call any nearby dead people to become her slaves and do her bidding (this ability only works when she is near a cemetary or there are dead people nearby). The limit to the amount of people she can control at a time is based on the riatsu I have remaining. The longer the battle goes on, the fewer dead she can control
-Immortality: Since she is already dead, stabbing her or piercing through her skin will have no effect

to defeat her, one will either need to severe her head from her body so that she no longer has any control over her body or successfully hurt me.

Anything Else;
[coming soon]

Woah. That's a nice one. I like it. Mainly because I always win over poison zanpakto And 2 shikai, cool.

Though, you're going to make MC's someone's day EVERY TIME you go bankai. >.> And your zanpakto reminds me of quite a lot of GGX character. Millia, Dizzy, Testament.. Hmm.

(Plot of land used as a training area approximately a mile from Rukongai. Antebellum 3 months.)

“Don’t have any masculinity? Or pride?” Cameron sighed, cracking the whip several times by Cell’s head. He remained in a ball. With two girls hiding behind him. Cameron certainly had his work cut out for him. He whipped Cell across the back to get a reply.

A large puff of smoke came and limp doll-versions of Cell, Saph, and Erin were strewn across the ground. A little wooden sign was put in the ground among the dolls. “Kawarimi no Jutsu!” was in black lettering upon said sign.

Cameron promptly used the whip to do an Indiana Jones/Spiderman Style trick on a ridiculously convenient pole as he searched for the three. He muttered under his breath, “They can live…until I get my prize~”
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(Twelfth Squad Training Lab. Antebellum 3 months)

“I’m getting dizzy. Can you help me already!?” Min screamed, currently spinning randomly through the air as she flailed her arms and legs wildly. The rifle lay on the ground near Gira, having been utterly misused as an oar and eventually dropped.

“I would if I could…” Gira sighed. At one point he had finally been able to move under the weight. He moved…downwards. His constant struggle left him staring at the ceiling-which Min kept bashing into-and virtually frozen.

Meanwhile Kai…managed to break his chakram against the wall and had continued to take potshots at horribly abused targets.

From a one-way window up above Magnus sighed. “This is not going quite as planned.”

“You’re telling me” Ryuu muttered, sketching new design ideas to better fit with the team. “I’ve lightened Gira’s armor and lowered the amount of ammo the heavy claymore will be able to hold. I’m still having trouble fine-tuning and stabilizing Min’s Soul Drive. Kai can’t practically use the Chakram Shooter…or aim for that matter. On top of that we’re behind schedule with getting resources to actually make the parts, The White Star isn’t going to be able to get to depart towards Earth for at least another week…”

Magnus sighed again, “I think Min just knocked herself out by ramming into the ceiling and landing on Gira.”

“Now…” Cameron smiled maliciously. “Time to test your reflexes!” He quickly threw three knives off at the three shinigami.

Cell dodged to the side, firing a counter-arrow at the black shadow-knife. “You’re moving slowly” he analyzed quickly, firing a second arrow at Cameron soon after the first. Cameron caught it between his hands before firing off a round of shadow needles.

Saph caught the dark projectiles coming her way using her vines, the fan as a guard in case the vine was too slow. “And your guard is wide open” she added as Cameron began firing weapons of shadows at them like the worlds largest Gatling Gun.

Erin didn’t have all that much in her arsenal to counteract the assortment of ranged weapons. She fell back on mixing her Zanpakutou with Tsuzuri Raiden and Byakurai. An electrical storm brewing around her as she let off enough electricity to light Beijing, Taipei, and Pakistan for a year. The sheer electricity forced the weapons off course.

“Do you want me to try?” Cameron smirked, snapping his fingers as a dome of shadow-needles appeared insantly around the four of them.

A simultaneous “NO” resounded before the needles dispersed and normal training ensued.

“Lightning Strike!” Cell called out to the others, who instantly understood what he meant. Saph opened her fan up fully as Cell threw several needles into the air. These needles stopped in mid-air due to Saph’s control over wind. Lastly, Erin began discharging electricity into the floating conductors-making a spider web of lightning. Cell fired a single iron arrow through the center of it, “Hadou no Yon! Byakurai!” The result of this? A very fancy looking attack made up of a very large electric arrow with an iron core.

Cameron took the full brunt of the attack. As the dust cleared he was laughing and bleeding on the ground.
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(OMG Time is flowing linearly now!)

“Finally, we can retrieve the supplies we need to begin construction.” Ryuu said, relieved, as he got comfortable on the Captain’s chair on the White Star, a spherical white ship and the second interdimensional Sereitei ship. In fact, the White Star had it’s own little past on Earth. It was sighted several times and thought of as a second moon by some people. Wanna guess where the term “Lunatic” came from? “Min, could you set the coordinates for me?” Ryuu asked as soon as they had successfully end up somewhere on Earth

“Yes Sir” Min replied, beginning to operate very complex-looking machine involving a touchscreen and a 75 key keyboard. An alarm began sounding, causing Ryuu to jump out of his seat.

“Something emitting reiatsu has been detected besieging the small wealthy (noexistent) nation of Riksent!” Shouted Eun, one of the shinigami stationed on the White Star.

“Princess Shine, I’m so glad you are safe! Our soldiers are trying to keep them away, but they won’t be able to hold them off much longer. We have to get you somewhere safe!” The butler, Sir L’Dhal, urged.

“You’re overreacting” She sighed.

“Shine, you don’t understand. They don’t just want the gold-“

“-They want me, don’t they?” She interrupted bluntly

“…You truly are your parent’s daughter. Please, do not let the lives being lost out there to protect you be lost in vain!”

“I will go out there myself and cease this. Help is on the way. I can feel it.” Shine said confidently, walking towards the front of the castle. From somewhere in her dress twin pistols made their way into her hands.

“Surrender.” Came a metallic voice. They had gotten in. He appeared human, but his expression was unrealistically neutral.

“Make me, I’ll kick your ***!” Shine replied, raising her guns.

“P-princess Shine, that’s unbecoming of a lady!”

“I mean…I shalt not surrender to thee. Hell hath no fury like an attacked princess!” Shine called out, shooting the being squad in the chest despite their dodging.

“A lady from THIS era, perhaps?” L’Dhal sighed as the little 13 year old princess continued to shoot the man.

“Then we shall take you by force.” The being said, even as bullets were filling up his flesh. He exploded as a bullet shot straight through his head. Unfortunately, it was at that moment that several more, all looking exactly alike, appeared in the chamber.

They moved with inhuman precision and speed, lightning fast and all in perfect coordination with one another. Shine, however, moved at a normal pace and dodged every strike and grab, even managing to disable one or two of them with a point-blank shot.

One would try to grab her leg, another her waist, another for her arm, one would be trying to knock her out via solar plexus. Anyone would be utterly amazed as this little girl would easily crush the one going for her foot with her high heel while evading the one trying to grab her waist and simultaneously shooting the ones going for her solar plexus and arm. For the moment, they were gone.

An Indian woman ran in, dressed in overextravagant clothing and caring a small strange gun-shaped weapon. “Princess, my name is Radha and I’m here to protect you.”

“Any help is appreciated, Radha” Shine smiled brightly. L’Dhal just nodded, if Shine could trust someone he certainly could. He grabbed a spear from one of those empty plate armor knights and twirled it around experimentally.

“We must find a way to get out of here” He said urgently.

“I saw this coming in my crystal ball weeks ago. I got first class tickets to Riksent immediately and prepared.” Radha said, as if that was something that happened every other Saturday. Several more of the strange beings appeared behind them. With expert precision Radha and Shine gunned them down before moving on. Radha pulled out a small remote. “Activate. Operation Schutzwald” She said into the remote carefully as they neared the balcony.

“We’re on the fourth floor, what are we going to do?” L’Dhal cried out, exasperated that their hero led them to a balcony.

Radha grabbed their hands and they all went headlong over the railing.
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“We’ve arrived at our destination” Eun said, not taking her eyes off her screen.

“Eh? This isn’t it…” Ryuu murmured. “We’re in…Riksent!?”

“Oops” giggled Min as she grabbed her rifle.

“I SUPPOSE, while we’re here…” Ryuu sighed

Kai ran out with his two Compact Beam Guns, basically lasers. Gira was wearing a red armor. “Ryuu, what is this?” he asked as Ryuu showed them to their weapons.

“That is the MKIII, the third (Illegally, shame on you ILP) produced armor in the Weapon revolution. It was used as a prototype model when we were observing practicality in relation to your training data.” Ryuu replied, like he was giving the recipe for scrambled eggs.

The four of them quickly entered Riksent, finding their opponents to be rather powerful…

“ARL…10000.” Gira murmured as he looked on his scouter visor at the beings.

“…Bioroids” Ryuu murmured, near silently, as he began systematically slicing through them with his scythes. He noted that their remains exploded upon destruction or cease function.

In fact, they arrived just in time to watch the princess jump off a balcony.
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(Present Time. Just because I can’t commit to 100% flashbacks.)

The boy yawned, pressing a button on his 3DS. “Let’s get this over with, I’m low on battery.” A map was displayed on his clearly non-stock 3DS. A 3D holographic map. Not stock indeed. “Blueprint.” The went around them instantly changed. The four of them were in a dark chamber. In fact, they were in two different chambers. The boy and the dragon were in a cave. Simply a cave. Although there were no openings. At all.

Meanwhile the girl and the tiger were in a pumpkin-shaped cave with many holes in it leading to other chambers.

“Ryukooh, why don’t you just give up now?” The boy yawned, closing his 3DS and putting it into his pocket-as well as destroying all light sources.

The dragon, Ryukooh, roared in response. There was no sky here, so he could not bring down lightning. Instead, electricity began charging in the dragon. However, it could not build up. “This cave is made of a mixture of iron sand veins and varying resistors. I can constantly change the outlay of the veins at the slightest moment. Your lightning is useless here.” He said dully, as Ryukooh continued to release electricity into the room.

“Koryuoh, come out to pla-ay~” The girl said in a singsong fashion. There was no light in this room, but she kne3w exactly how to fight in this room. When the tiger roared, winds attempted to pick up. But they died down. “This room is full of sand and pebbles, and it is connected to several vacuum chambers. Wind falls into the grooves in the walls, where it disturbs the sand and pebbles and gets forced into the other chambers. There is a time limit to this battle. But you are going to be the one who runs out.”

I present random funneh XKCD.

Spoiler:- random:

Last edited by rotrum; 14th May 2011 at 4:51 AM.

Originally Posted by Northern Lights

I have that effect on most men for some reason. no wonder i've been feeling lesbian lately >.>

Well, I finally thought of a fullbring that I LOVE. Comments/suggestions are welcome!

Spoiler:- Fullbring<3:

Fullbring Name: Moods of Battle

Fullbring Item: A blue sad face, (as in, circles with a face in them) on one hand, and a yellow happy face on the other.

Fullbring Activation Description: Two chains come out of either hand, and a rip opens up in the sky and earth, the happy face chain goes into the sky, the sad face goes into the earth, and they start reeling in as two beings are pulled out. A being made of pure red water comes out of the sky, extremely lithe and fast, and a constantly cracking being made of blue electricity comes out of the earth, large and sluggish. The tears close. Both are connected to my hands through the chains.

Fullbring ability: I gain the ability to take control of these two, the closer you get to the being of water, the more sluggish and depressed your thoughts and movements are, and it has the ability to move extremely fast, and it can malform it's hands into a high pressure lances or blades.

The lightning being is very large, slow, and the closer you get to him, the more irrational and hyperactive your movements and thoughts become, and your body might twitch or make random jabs or movements. It has the ability to slam down and crack or raise the earth, but no control other then that. Other then that, it's punches hit hard.

@EDITEDIT: Assuming you have to look at the top of the page before you scroll down, you'll be able to see this. Cmon, guys. Can we please stop wasting a entire page arguing over the ramifications and finer points of teh (EFF)ing definitions of pride and arrogance, etc? Is it really that important? Well i mean maybe in a pyschology or linguistics cla-...oh wait.

I lol'd so hard. You have no idea how often you make yourself look like an idiot. For starters, saying that none of us can lay a finger on you. Um, hello? Arc's Zanpaktou is a healing water type. Poisons do nothing to him, no matter how potent. And we all know Kida could kick your ass any day of the week, poison or no poison.

Second, you > us? Arrogance. First lesson any Martial Artist learns is that you are never the best. In fact, the very concept of being the best is an illusion. There is always going to be someone who is better than you no matter what you're doing. And even if you do somehow become the best at one thing, it only means that you're the worst at something else. Think about that before talking about being better than everyone.

...also, for someone who loves poisons so much, you seem to be loath to understand the concept that even your own self-assured nature can be toxic if you let it get out of hand. As your signature says, all things are poisons, but it is the dose that makes it toxic.

Ok, semi-philosophical rant over.

The concept behing your Zanpaktou is fine, but the Bankai just made me collapse into a massive laughing fit at the imagined expression on your opponent's face. You don't even need to do anything against most male combatants xD

Fanfic chapter up sometime this weekend, hopefully. I actually have less to do than usual.

"I'm fighting because there's a battle to be fought, Archer. I'm fighting to win. That's all."

"Hm. Alright, Rin. You are indeed my ideal Master. There is no one else I could hope to serve."

I lol'd so hard. You have no idea how often you make yourself look like an idiot. For starters, saying that none of us can lay a finger on you. Um, hello? Arc's Zanpaktou is a healing water type. Poisons do nothing to him, no matter how potent. And we all know Kida could kick your ass any day of the week, poison or no poison.

I never said poison would be effective against Arc, however, if one depends entirely on the special abilities of their zanpaktou, they aren't strong warriors and would lose in any battle anyway. For example, very early on in bleach, when kira and rangiku fight, Kira loses because he depends heavily on his zanpaktou's ability to make things heavier, however, rangiku's zanpaktou turns to dust s she doesnt have to carry it around. hence he lost. When Mayuri fights the old bount dude, he paralyses the dude, but because of his bount, he is still able to move, but mayuri doenst lose because he doesn't depend on the toxic ability of his zanpaktou, he just has that as an added benefit.
poison is different from other special abilities in the sense that a poison user can never just rely on the poison, but on their skill. a poisoned sword is still a normal sword with an edge. if you stab someone, they will die from the stab wound, regardless of whether it is poisoned or not. it is not like fire where if someone conjures fire, someone else conjures water to douse it. If i stab you, even if my poison has no effect on you, you will still die from the stab wound. hence, it matters not whether or not Arc is resistant to all forms of poison.

as for kida kicking my hiney, in terms of kida and me, she would beat me hands down, however, in terms of my zanpaktou vs hers, the fight is anybody's. it depends on the elements she chooses, and my skill level at the time of facing her. my lazy release is short range. my full release is long range. NL is a long range fighter, so if i am able to get within close range of her, i have the upper hand.

Originally Posted by Eon Master

Second, you > us? Arrogance. First lesson any Martial Artist learns is that you are never the best. In fact, the very concept of being the best is an illusion. There is always going to be someone who is better than you no matter what you're doing. And even if you do somehow become the best at one thing, it only means that you're the worst at something else. Think about that before talking about being better than everyone.

well, i could point towards bleach examples (byakuya, yoruichi, mayuri, kempachi, yumichika) as examples of arrogance. there is nothing wrong with arrogance if it can be backed up and is based on valid evidence. the strongest characters are always the most arrogant, and with good reason. think about that.

Originally Posted by Eon Master

...also, for someone who loves poisons so much, you seem to be loath to understand the concept that even your own self-assured nature can be toxic if you let it get out of hand. As your signature says, all things are poisons, but it is the dose that makes it toxic.

any nature can be toxic. a humble nature can hurt one's chances, or improve them, by either lowering an enemies guard or by having them go all out just to crush you fully. same as any other nature. no matter what your nature, it can be toxic to you. you just have to acknowledge that, look for the weaknesses in your nature, and cover them well or improve on them.

Originally Posted by Eon Master

The concept behing your Zanpaktou is fine, but the Bankai just made me collapse into a massive laughing fit at the imagined expression on your opponent's face. You don't even need to do anything against most male combatants xD

i know eh. its a very disarming bankai, yet incredibly powerful. like rangiku's b00bs ^_^

Reads above posts and sighs, then sips a drink and mutter something about wishing he had alcohol and actually drank.

Before I say anything, all I ask is why? Honestly aside from fan fics that always die, nobody ever Battles here. Aside from Me and Eon, nothing...so it seems pointless to boast saying you could own all the other captains, since you wouldn't be able to prove it.

@Eon
Good argument, I agree with you on alot of points.

@Dac

Pride and arrogance are not the exact same thing, they both are similar enough to be used interchangeably without being grammatically incorrect, but they are not the same.

Pride
-a high or inordinate opinion of one's own dignity, importance, merit, or superiority, whether as cherished in the mind or as displayed in bearing, conduct, etc.

--the state or feeling of being proud.

---a becoming or dignified sense of what is due to oneself or one's position or character; self-respect; self-esteem.

Yoruichi and Byakuya are shining examples of Pride, The latter having it as a character defining trait.

Kenpachi, Yumichika and Mayuri all show this, and all nearly die for it.

Now to link this explanation to the club, I'll use the four Royal members, Arc, Dre, Dac and MC.

Arc is modest.

Modest-having or showing a moderate or humble estimate of one's merits, importance, etc.; free from vanity, egotism, boastfulness, or great pretensions.

He even never rubs his importance in anyone's face, he does boast about having an advantage over fire and poison, but otherwise okay.

Dre is indifferent.

He doesn't care that his is royalty or not, he just wants to have fun and get crunk. XD Seriously, he shows no signs of caring about his royal lineage, in fact we only know about it via his back story.

Dac is arrogant.

He is the most, flashy, narcissistic, overconfident and boastful captain/former captain out of all of us. Kida tells us he has good points, and a few know he has them, but its hard to see with all that ego in the way.

MC is prideful.

I pride myself on being my absolute best, not conforming to anyone's ideals but choosing and following what I personally believe in. I know I'm not the most physically strongest,the fastest, most defensive, most endurant, intelligent or most adept with Kido.

I know this and know my limits in those categories, yet I still have Pride in the fact that I am not the worst or best at any of those, and could take on anyone better than me in one or two particular areas with will skill and experience with the others.

Pride= Proud of yourself even with your short comings and still having the balls/guts to believe your hot stuff anyway.

Arrogance= Believing you are the best and nobody can tell you otherwise.