I'm ASHAMED of myself for never attributing Luna to the Cheshire Cat (one of my favorite characters). In that sense you could attribute Harry to Alice, and that is just hilarious and perfect at the same time. Kudos

Ok, I've got to admit, that I like the slow, sweetness that this story exhibits. The Harry/Luna ship is one that personally appeals to me, and I think that they complement each other better than Harry/Ginny. You've done an admirable job in writing both characters, and I don't think they're OoC at all.

Good job on this story, though the whole Fred/Hermione thing threw me for a bit. Just not a common pairing.

This is the definitive story that convinced and converted me to HP/LL. No non-sense like "soul bonds" or "suddenly in love", but a more gradual discovery of feelings from Harry.

The idea of a Family Day is refreshing (I haven't encountered it yet).

I liked Luna's act of kindness towards Cho, although I felt Harry should've paid for the flowers (something like, Harry beats Luna to paying for the flowers, and then realize how it must seem, especially to people like Pansy). Also, the fact that he scolded Pansy for calling Luna names: it may be better if he called her "Parkinson" instead of "Pugface".

But most of all, I love this passage in Chapter 5:

"The thoughts of the prophecy, the war, and Sirius, had all but left his mind for the first day in along time. It didn't feel like this girl occupied the same dark world he had suffocated in during the summer, somehow. She seemed almost like a star, some beacon of hope, that shone above these things, and although she could not make them go away, she was something to look for in the darkness surrounding him."

This is simply beautiful. I fall in love with Luna Lovegood there and then.