I hope to hear more of this, definatley have been enjoying your thoughts on Crow's past and just how he came to be. Curious to how the rest of the story will play out, I kinda hope that the part with Seto gets involved in this at least. Would be fun reading about your thoughts on their encounter together.

OMG I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! You are definatly an amazing writer. I love how Crow is acting you're definatly getting his character write and I love how Norman and the Professor are, they have really good personalities (sorry if I spelled that wrong) usually with outside characters they only have one personality but yours don't. Great job.

I liked the video tape thing. It's like he got to the 'C' section of the dictionary and read the definition of 'camera' and went ape on the security footage. Though, somehow, I get the feeling Crow is almost a little evil here _'

actually, he scared me at first when I met him in the game, so it's kinda perfect.

In the game came the picture of Crow next to a scientist. Was that the Professor or Norman?

And thanks so much for getting this chapter done so fast! You made my bad day into a good one just now :)

Lol Crow! You tell him! Well I guess he's always been his amazingly self arrogant self even when he was first made. And I definatly will keep reading this no matter how long it takes you to update. You have an amazing talent and good luck in college.

Though, I thought that Crow got his name from that children's book with Pirate Captain Crow, and got the attitude from admiring the devil-may-care character who managed to make a friend...

Then again, the game hinted that he read a lot of books (cuz thats how he learned about gift giving and smooching)

I like the new take on it, though. Are you gonna give a reason for his eye change? like a robot epiphany that...idunno, manifested through his eyes? Or maybe I'll just imagine that for myself so you can get down to more serious business. For instance, when is the apocalypse gonna happen? GYAAAAH! I live the apocalypse, its so intense XD (yeah, I'm weird)

Heehee, I REALLY REEEAAALLY hope you continue this more! Reading your writing just gives me chills of anticipation. Did you know you had a really relaxing writing style? It's almost professional. Like, millimeters off.

Hey, be faster with the next chapter, yeah? You can't keep me waiting forever!

...unless the apocalypse...but that's circumstantial...

Great work!

mizakichi chapter 3 . 4/12/2011

agh! that is a cliffhanger or whatever it is called! you can't do that!

please you have to upload more soon! pretty please with cream and sugar on top?

Oh wow this was a really good chapter and very well written. Thank you so much for updating I really loved this chapter. It seemed...I don't know but it made me hold my breath for some reason. In a good way lol.

Wow! You write it smoothly and naturally. I can picture this perfectly in my head.

And I love that Norman created PF! It just links everything together so nicely and just...YAY! Everything's interconnected And I want to know what happens next so badly! however, I must sleep. Damn school and its energy consuming was :(