Something I have been working on for a long time and probably my most complex work to date. A bit rough but I like it Originally supposed to be a ''antithesis'' to one of my old drawings with an summer theme: [link], but decided against it as I couldn't find a place for Shinji, and also because I wanted to better highlight the difference between Asuka and Rei by giving them clothes that have opposing color patterns.

I truly like it. I see the complexity and how hard you worked. It makes me very elated to see people working hard on doing something they enjoy. The colors you used are absolutely marvelous, the shading is done perfectly and the characters look beautiful. My only request is that you try to work a little more the background. It could use more looking at. Otherwise I had no problems with this picture at all. Keep working hard. It looks great. It made me happy to see because it used colors I liked and ,well, the rest is in the critique part before this.

I really like it, and it's so close to looking like professional work. But i don't understand the girl leaning against the post arm, it looks like t should be leaning on something. The other girls arm holding the stick to her mouth strikes me as awkward. For my personal opinion the eyes seem quite high for anime, and something you would see on armature work. And the chain link gets a bit unappealing to the eye in spots close to the bottom of the page and close to the girls. Besides that it looks great, and caught my eye instantly. Love the colors. And the way the outfit colors really look like something people would wear. Great job, keep working.

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I love this image, their poses along with expressions are perfect to their personalities and I'm really liking the contrast between the two of them. The idea behind the outfits is really unique and it's interesting to see how good Asuka looks with blue as Rei looks with red.

I love the use of colors. Very cool and relaxed. Nice use of tones in the colors and shadows. Your main focal point in this image is the two girls and that's were your main focus was and the most detail was place to emphasis on them which was a very well played out idea. The architecture of some of the buildings are well done but a little rough around the edges which to me seems to emphasis they use of focus in your image (Zoomed in on the girls so the backdrop is fuzzy and some what fading out) which was well portrayed. The fence (though does look good) should have had as much detail placed on it since it is also zoomed in on with the girls and emphasized they fence with a more metallic look to show it as looking cold and made of metals to go along with your use of cool colors. But over all the picture is well done and is at an advanced level of creative and well thought out design. The characters are very well done and are the center of your work. The detail between the two is amazing and very elaborate and well thought out. You did and excellent job on this picture and should be very proud of yourself. I see true potential in this work that shows you have a very strong passion for art and that you love to be creative and intuitive and do what you love. You can do wonders and will do wonders you just have to keep up with you work and never lose sight of what your goal is and you'll go far. Also yes people can and will say many thing as I have but the only opinion that matters is your overall and over any. Keep your head held high and never look back keep moving forward. "You did an excellent job! Keep up the awesome job you did with this picture. "