(Carl) It appears you were too eager to win, so you didnt think about it and just attacked

(Chazz) yes I suppose your right

(?) hey you, kid! Chazz kid!

(Chazz) huh? Counselor Lilly Ta-

(Lilly) thank you for not saying my last name, but i'm here to offer a price for admission

(Chazz) i'm sorry I dont follow, do you mean I can pay to get in?

(Lilly) Yes I do, actualy I'll let you in for free, you see Carl over there?

(Chazz) yes, I do

(Lilly) thats Carl Tracshire, and when you put your deck in the randomizer, we selected the order of your cards, our apolagies, but we were seeing how well you would hold up, and you held up fine, so we will let you in

A couple hours passed and the three found themselves hanging around at J's house

(Anthony) well... at least you got in

(J) yeah it would have been boring if you didnt

(Chazz) I thought my entire deck was strong and had no room for error, but I guess...

(J) just stop thinking about it, we'll talk about it tommorrow when we get in

(Anthony) ok, now remember, when they let you choose your dorm, we cant get separated ok?

(Chazze,laghing) ok, but dont run or the teachers will catch us

End Chapter One (Still to be revised)

Chapter Two

Chapter Two

The Duel School

(Anthony) rise and shine nimrod

(Chazz) wha-

(J) you missed rec room time before classes, we cant let you miss the first class

(J) I spent about $200.00 on cards so that my deck was invinceable, you cant beat me, go Armed Dragon LV5 attack his Zanji

(Zanji is Destroyed)

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Anthony's Turn-DRAW-lets see....

and Anthony thought thier was nothing he could do

(Anthony) I surrender, I cant win...

After that they went on with class, and right before they walked out the door

(Sario) and J?

(J) yes?

(Sario) I expect to duel you tommorrow

(J) those cards weren't my strongest

(?) excuse me?

A man dressed in black was walking up to them, and three or four ladies were right behind him

(J) yes?

(?) my names Lukas, and you are

(Anthony) I'm Anthony

(Lukas) was I talking to you?

(Anthony) excuse me?

(Lukas) im joking, im joking, its nice to meet you

(J) well.. i'm J, so see you around?

(Lukas) you will see me in the training rings, in the rec room

(J) day rec or night rec?

(Lukas) night

(Anthony) c'mon we have to hurry or we'll be late

(Girl Behind Lukas) you know? Lukas isnt the best dueler around, but he cares about dueling the most

(J) so you mean... you get followed around by girls just because your good at dueling?

(Lukas) of course not! I bet once YOU get known for dueling, some girl will start talking to you, and then realize your more than just a good dueler, thats how it happened to me

(Chazz,Impatiently) WE HAVE TO HURRY!!

(Lukas, as Chazz is sprinting down the hall) HEY!! WHATS YOUR NAME?

(Chazz) My names Chazz

End Chapter Two

Chapter Three

Chapter 3

Chazz and steps Forth

(Announcer) The night recreation room is open

(J) you ready Luke?

(Lukas) as ready as ever

(Anthony) hold on, J has a duel with Mr. Ojima dosn't he?

(J) well...

(Chazz) you dont want him to know your deck. Points. see hes right over there

(J) ok, so who's gonna duel him in my place?

(Anthony) I wi-

(Chazz) no I will

(Anthony) ok, good luck

Chazz and Lukas approach the dueling stage. A bunch of people crowd around

(Lukas) I challenged, so I go first, I summon Gladiator Beast Hoplomus,in defence mode and end my turn

Chazz's Turn-DRAW- (thought) good, one of my strongest cards in my first hand (speak) ok... like, J, I spent a lot of money on extra cards, I summon Insect Queen and attack your Gladiator, I end

(Gladiator Beast Hoplomus is Destroyed)

Lukas's Turn-DRAW- ok, lets see. A smirk strts to run across his face. I activate Polymerization, and since I have Gladiator Beast Sparticus and another Gladiator Beast monster in my hand, I can summon this, Gladiator Beast Gaiodiaz

(Chazz) what?!

(Lukas) go Gaiodiaz attack his Insect Queen

(Insect Queen Destroyed)

Chazz's Turn-DRAW- (thought) wow that was just dumb luck! I drew Polymerization! (speak) ok, I activate the effects of polymerization, and since I have two Cyber Dragons in my hand I fuse them together to create, Cyber Twin Dragon, and I attack your monster!

(Gladiator Beast Gailodiaz destroyed)

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Lukas's Turn-DRAW- good... I summon Test Ape in defence mode and lay one card face-down, and I end my turn

(Lukas) now I can summon two more Gladiator Beasts from my deck, I choose Gladiator Beast Liqari and Gladiator Beast Dimacary, and then I activate Monster Reborn, to bring back Gladiator Beast Hoplomus, and now I send them all to my deck to summon this, Gladiator Beast Heraklinos

(Intercom) will Freshmen Chazz Hasmetm,J (whatever his last name is), and Anthony Hawkins please report to princaple Higgins, also I need second year Lukas (whatever his last name is) and 5th Year student Zack Anderton

they walk up the long hall to Princaple Higgins's office, and just before they got there Lukas noticed a card on the ground

Personality: Easy-going, Loves to be challenged, hates seeing his friends in painFake,Real, or Mixed cards?: MixedHobbies: Dueling. Saving the world on a daily bases >_<Other Info: Chairman of the industrial Rainbow Corp.Student or Teacher: StudentAge: 13

deck

Monstersx1 Armor Breakerx2 The Six Samurai - Yaichix2 The Six Samurai - Kamonx2 The Six Samurai - Yarizax2 The Six Samurai - Nisashix2 The Six Samurai - Zanjix2 The Six Samurai - Iroux2 Shiens Footsoldierx1 Great Shogun Shienx1 Grandmaster Of The Six Samuraix1 Chamberlain Of The Six Samuraix1 Spirit Of The Six Samuraix1 Enishi, Shien's Chancellor

Spellsx2 Legendary Ebon Steedx2 The A. Forcesx1 Shiens Castle Of Mistx1 Reinforcement Of The Armyx1 The Warrior Returning Alivex1 Cunning Of The Six Samuraix2 Six Samurai United

Name: Sario OjimaDeck: Rise of the Dragon Lords, modified to perfection.Appearence: look at attachmentPersonality: Very strict, and agressive, but very respectful.Fake,Real, or Mixed cards?: All real cardsHobbies: Likes to play chess.Other Info: Sario has had some very promising duels in the past, and he's usually very respectful at the end of every match, though during the match he's competitive and very aggressive. But he always makes sure he doesn't insult his opponent, unless his opponent really ticks him off during the match.Student or Teacher: Teacher (if I can't then student) (and if I can be a teacher, have him be a Teacher for advanced tactics and card combos for General Beat-Down styles.)Age: 18

Posted 15 March 2008 - 11:52 PM

Posted 16 March 2008 - 12:02 AM

Careless Whisper

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I guess I'll apply. Sense I got nothing better to do...if I still can here is my form,.

Name: Sario Ojima
Deck: Rise of the Dragon Lords, modified to perfection.
Appearence: look at attachment
Personality: Very strict, and agressive, but very respectful.
Fake,Real, or Mixed cards?: All real cards
Hobbies: Likes to play chess.
Other Info: Sario has had some very promising duels in the past, and he's usually very respectful at the end of every match, though during the match he's competitive and very aggressive. But he always makes sure he doesn't insult his opponent, unless his opponent really ticks him off during the match.
Student or Teacher: Teacher (if I can't then student) (and if I can be a teacher, have him be a Teacher for advanced tactics and card combos for General Beat-Down styles.)
Age: 25

Posted 16 March 2008 - 02:30 AM

Posted 16 March 2008 - 03:03 AM

Careless Whisper

United Under One Ghost

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Sorry, for double posting but..I would also like another character submited...In ties with Sario...This'll make the Fan-Fic more interesting.

Name: Cydonia Ojima
Deck: does not duel, and does not have one..
Appearence: look at attachment (no, she doesn't wear that dress, she wears a casual clothing, like a shirt and girl's-blue-jeans...it's only her facial features that matter in that pic)
Personality: very sweet and gentile.
Fake,Real, or Mixed cards?: no cards at all.
Hobbies: Watching her husband (Sario Ojima) duel. And also playing chess.
Other Info: She is Sario Ojima's wife, they have been married for 3 years. She usually sits on the side-lines and watches Sario duel. She also loves watching him teach, so she is always a guest in his class room.
Student or Teacher: Guest
Age:24

and I would like to change Sario's age to 25, I got carried away and said 18 by accident and just noticed that.

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Posted 16 March 2008 - 04:09 AM

Atomix

This title, I like it. ANOTHER.

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Name: Zack AndertonDeck: Evil Hero Appearence: Is very unknow as he aways has black shoes, black trousers, black shirts, black socks, black hair and a black cape with a duel disk on his left armPersonality: Never takes alway has a angry face on himFake,Real, or Mixed cards?: Mixed CardsHobbies: DuelingOther Info: This boy duels his opponents like the supreme king did but with different Evil Heroes he is even more powerful. When he wins a duel the opponent is knocked unconsicousStudent or Teacher: StudentAge: 21