Good to see one by you, Main. I thought for a bit that you might have gotten out of writing here . But, the thought was hard for me to consider anway. Nice to see you.

Anyway. About this story.

Nice. Though I did notice a few mistakes in there. Small stuff. Mispelled/used words, flow, slight detail, etc. Nothing major, but it was there. So, as much as you may already do it, proof things carefully and thoroughly.

You know, this kind of reminded me of a scene out of Waterworks. Just the atmostphere and everything. And, you know, from what I have observed, Waterworks may be set on Earth. Why do I think that? Well, you can see a moon and sun through the ceiling, but no ring. Though, the shadow of the moon is way off. That is just what I noticed the other day.

There was a detail that I found odd. The recomissioning of the 'Guard did not happen until after Regret had been killed - but you had him there. Now, perhaps this is just your story line (I cannot say I remember all of it). But I cannot be sure. Just watch out for such mistakes.

Overall, this was quite good. The quality was very enjoyable to read through. Some places that I thought went a tad fast, but it did not disrupt much. Keep up the great work - I mean it._________________-MCC

Well, this storyline doesn't really tie in with the actual storyline at all, in so much that it only incorporates a few well-known characters. Other than that I'll try harder to work on my GPS (catchy ).

And yes, it is a series. You've actually come in towards the middle of it.

Just search Guerilla/Mainevent in the archives and you'll come up with the rest of it. If you like Elites, then you'll enjoy the rest of it. Ika is coming back (the Special Ops Elite sent to Earth with John).

Another great fic by Mainevent. Glad to see you back, Main._________________
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