I love this story. Everything is cute in it. I love how the lyrics fit with the story. I love what Janie said about Harry at school. It seems like him. It must have been really bad for him at school.

I also like the story with Janie's friend and her boyfriend. It was funny. The whole Neville and the wristwatch part was hilarious. It made me laugh when I read it. I also like Ginny's reaction to Harry proposing. It made me smile. :)

All in all, I think this is a great one-shot.

Author's Response: Thanks! I can imagine Harry's time at primary school was very sad. But he gets a happy ending! I'm glad you found the story funny and liked Ginny's reaction to the proposal :)