Vocaloid Wallpaper: VOCALOID : VNO2 Miku Hatsune

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sucks, the characters for tittle are not enough XD hha
so the title as such. and I want the title Chromatic Fascination written, I do
not understand exactly what that means but it sounds cool, something strong.. lol

well, of course you all already know who it is Miku - Hatsune Miku
but this time I draw it with a different costume, u can find info about this one in this cosplay pictureclick here
great thanks for inspiring me! hhe
hope u all like this one >.<

Speed ​​drawing and coloring, I have not had time to add details of a jerk as too desire to finish quickly hha!
and forget to edit the creditor...

stock : city and sky
found other pict on my DA~! sakon04.deviantart.com at deviantart
HAPPY MONDAY~!

The cityscape could be tweaked a bit more to lose that 'stock photo' edge it still has but other than that, you
incorporated all the elements into the image nicely. One tip though - when placing your signature, please put it to the
bottom; sigs on top of the wall (or that are visible like that) tend to ruin the wallpaper composition and take the
attention away from the wallpaper itself. Keep it up!

The thumb looks pretty good, but upon downloading, this wall is lacking quality control in key areas. For one, the text
is extremely pixellated - please use some fonts that are anti-aliased next time and it will improve the quality of your
wall. Also, like alenas mentioned, the sig at the top is a bit unorthodox in walling - the only reason why I'd see
placing it there might work is if you use a Mac computer, otherwise as an image, what alenas says about composition is
true. Props for drawing your own artwork, but again, the jagged outlines on it are a bit of a concern. There are ways to
prevent this though - like starting big and resizing down, or applying a small gaussian blur to it. Also, your art seems
to be lacking lighting effects to integrate it with the lighting of the bg. With stronger lighting effects/gradients on
her, the wall would have a greater dramatic effect. And speaking of the bg, alenas already mentioned the city stock, but
the quality of the clouds is also blurry and conflicts with the sharpness of your character art. So, with the lack of
lighting effects on her and the difference in sharpness between her and the bg, these give evidence that you simply
placed your character on top of the bg instead of fully integrating/blending her into it. So, while you say this was a
speed drawing, if a little more time was taken into composing the wall as a whole (the concept for it is very good),
this would be much more epic wall! :)

You did a lovely job on the drawing. But i agree that the background could use more work on it. The sky could use a
higher contrast on it because it currently looks washed out and faded as compared to the cityscape and Miku. I like the
whole general idea for the wallpaper. But it could use some improvements on the blending aspect of the wallpaper. As
Nysha mentioned, the stock images don't blend so well with your drawing. Some lighting and adjustments could help in
achieving that. So try experimenting with those and it will definitely help in improving this wallpaper to it's fullest
potential. ;)