After reading Schmerg's review, I second the suggestion of throwing in Whizzo chocolates. Besides getting the idea for Cockraoch Clusters from them, I do believe she also got Chocolate Frogs from them too (except they were real frogs with the bones left in for that extra crunch. :D

Another recommendation is to have a random ghost sound like Mr. Gumby (another Cleese-y thing to do) or have them look Spanish and a student will call them senor (can't do a ~ on the n, sorry) to make him mad (Chapman) or have a bunch of people say randomly "lemon curry?" tee hee...Now where's my bloody parrot.... ;)

FABULOUS, FABULOUS! I'm so glad that this story isn't dead, it's my absolute favourite on fanfiction! But this chappie was worth the wait. I loved the bit about Uncle Vernon, that was hilarious. (Ponty Mython, anyone?)

I have only one suggestion-- you should put in something about Whizzo chocolates, since that's where JK Rowling got Cockroach Clusters. And it would be funny to make Nearly Headless Nick (aka John Cleese) do the Silly Walk, or something else Cleese-y.

YAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! An update!!!!!!!!!! And it was a good one too!!!!! Have Fred and George finally realized that James isn't Harry? Poor Neville, turned into an armadillo, how the irony never ceases. What happened to Peter? And where did younger Sirius end up (if that's "Padfoot"). lily_writesshall finish this review by begging for an update very soon and by asking if the pre-school teacher before Sirius was Mr. Gambolputty- *mysterious hand interrupts by slapping over mouth to stop lily_writes from saying an incredibly long name*. lily_writes liked writing this review in the third person, lily_writes may do it again if Kelsid wishes. ;)

oh my! why must you leave me hanging like this! As soon as Sirius met pavement I kept thinking oh it's just a dream. but perhaps not. oh my 4:30 A.M. I'm not sure if i'm tired, or if I've been to befuddled with quoting every shakespearian play ever written right along with Sirius.

I always check to see if this story has been updated, and I have to admit that I almost lost hope. It's been so long, I was wondering if next chapter or something you could clarify where everyone is and what has happened, because I kind of forgot. Thanks!

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