Page 2 paragraph 3 verb tenseCurrently:If the party give him a day he can use his last magical ingredients to create a number of potions, equal to the number of characters.Suggest:If the party gives him a day he can use his last magical ingredients to create a number of potions, equal to the number of characters.

Currently:Leofric will ask each character which of the available potions will he like.Suggest:Leofric will ask each character which of the available potions he or she would like.

Should the rooms be renumbered so there aren’t repeat number from 9 on up?

Page 5 – 10. Prison – paragraph 3Currently:When they were first put in the cage it held several other prisoners, but they have taken away one by one and fed to Sycorax.Suggest:When they were first put in the cage it held several other prisoners, but the others have been taken away one by one and fed to Sycorax.

Page 6 – 14. The Cavern of Sycorax – text box paragraph 1Currently:Suddenly you hear a loud flapping sound and looking up you see a large red dragon swooping down from high perch.Suggest:Suddenly you hear a loud flapping sound and looking up you see a large red dragon swooping down from his high perch.

Page 8 – 17. Large Bronze Doors – paragraph 3Currently:At this point they will be spotted and would be well advised to scarper.Suggest:At this point they will be spotted and would be well advised to scamper.

Page 8 – 18. Small Archway – Lizard MenParagraph 1 of this section states there are ”two lizard man sentries” there is only one lizard mans stats listed.

Page 10 – Conclusion May need to conclude the original quest of getting the black diamond back to Leofric and if he is actually able to create a cure from it. (It would appear so since the next adventure is set within Drakeshaven.)

Also don't forget to include proofreaders that made suggestions in the rest of the posts on this adventure.

Ok I've uploaded R11. Most of the numbers have been fixed, but there's still a few (particularly the entrance chamber, cavern of sycorax, and fire mountain maps) that I know need further work; I just need another set of eyes to help out.