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Sister and Me Cumming Ch. 02

When?

will we get to read about the first time they have sex? you have only told us they fucked but given no description of what they felt while doing it.

by
Anonymous01/09/18

Ok

Mildly interesting.

JHJ

by
Anonymous01/09/18

Put more into this

I agree with the other comment that you need to tell more about the emotional side of what happens between the brother and sister - although the sister appears to have a somewhat more clinical/political attitude to things.
However the political/religiuos aspect may anyhow possibly add an interesting layer to the story told.