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Nicole

I look at the pictures of when I was happy Before I ever knew of the things that you could do Your love gave me life, Like my first breath You picked me up Took away my pain Then you must’ve had your share of me and left I fell and no one catched me Im dying, bleeding Thinking of what we could’ve had There’s nothing left to do I let you inside my soul You crushed till nothing was left You gave me my first breath And you took my last

I was reading your poem and it was amazing, Im a 32 yr old womangonna such a tough time right now and do not even want to live anymore, so I’ve a question, is this poem about a situation you have gone threwand if so how did you do it? Please help!!

I think that it's a very beautiful poem…….The reason why i'm saying this is because, same thing happened to me, and now all memories came back……..I just can't get over this realtionship………Great Poem Brava!

this poem is just great i enjoyed reading it, it was just great it was good and many people cannot write the wat that you wrote this poems its wjust wonderful. Anways that’s all i could say and hopefully you will write more poems like this it will be fun reading them…….

I really like your style, the way you write your poems. And for this poem I have to say I thought it was Deep!! The ending is what got to me. I look forward to reading any new material that you might have:)