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Yes, the size of most models was brought down on purpose. We used the same scale for models as we do for terrain (1 inch of height equals 1 unit of size). Most Noh models were roughly 2" tall (most humans are roughly 1.5-1.75 inches tall) so while both are size 2, Noh are physically bigger in terms of their models. We were having issues with models seeing over terrain in terms of the rules that the model clearly couldn't physically see over.

The spacing on many of the cards seem a tad short, making it look like 2 words are one. I will mention the more serious offenders to this wanna be writer as well as any other mistakes.
Catalogue: Power Surge: Lots of spaces skipped.
Delphyn: Chatterbox: Should be a space between defense actions.
Lost in the Woods: Should be a space between The attack.
Captain Harker: Calamity Insight: Space between Friendly units.
Kenobo: Gomandi's Knowledge: Space between "action does" and under the press "two cards".
Jenner The Seeker: Enfilade: Press: Spaces between "move up to".
Esmee: Go, Go, Go!: Press: Space between within 5".
Pacer: Ability: Space between this unit's LOS.
Castellan: Siege Breaker: Press: Space between LOS to.
Austrican The Ogre: Ability: Space between "Tactical Awareness" and "another friendly".
Navaree Hauer: Ability: Space between another friendly.
Francis Mallory: Outmaneuver: Press: Plenty of spacing issues.
Swordsworn Command: Into Hell Itself: Needs a space for the title.
Slaved Cypher: Abilities: Esper Slave: spacing issues.
One Shot: Concentrated Fire: Spacing issues.
Beastmaster: Abilities: Spacing issues.
Kasara To: Abilities: Spacing Issues

And that is all that I have. The upgrade cards and cadre ability for questing and relic knights will make this a very interesting game.

Folks have pointed out stuff already. Here's what I have questions on in addition.

Doctrine:
Scribes – Are they supposed to have the Human and Tonerrian trait?

Star Nebula Corsairs:
Blowhards - Are they supposed to have the Human trait?
Breachers - Are they supposed to have the Human trait?
Scallywags - Are they supposed to have the Human trait?
Cerci Speed Circuit:
Faust’s Devils - Are they supposed to have the Human trait?
Hell’s Belles - Are they supposed to have the Human trait?
Pit Crew – Squad Size is 2(6) but the card only has 4 health tracks, should there be 6 health tracks or should the Squad Size be 2(4)? Are they supposed to have the Human trait?

Shattered Sword:
Aspirant - Are they supposed to have the Human trait?
Francis Mallory – Outmaneuver Press, is it intended to move one friendly unit or multiple? If only one please rephrase to “move ONE other friendly unit…”. If multiple please rephrase as “move ONE or MORE other friendly units”.
Paragons - Are they supposed to have the Human trait?
Purifiers - Are they supposed to have the Human trait?
Swordsworn - Are they supposed to have the Human trait?
Swordsworn Command- Banner of Stoicism, is it supposed to mean friendly Swordsworn MODELS or UNITS in 6”? Please specify one or the other. Same question applies to Banner of Wrath. Are they supposed to have the Human trait?
Star Lancer Upgrade – Advanced Esper Cycler, is it supposed to be 1 point or a 2 point upgrade? Please delete the version that is not final cost.

Black Diamond:
Black Dragons - Are they supposed to have the Human trait?
Diamond Corps - Are they supposed to have the Human trait?
M8-Blitz Auto-Tank – Chee Networking, is it supposed to mean friendly Chee, Cyborgs, Mecha, and Robotics MODELS or UNITS in 3”? Please specify one or the other.

Noh Empire:
Seems good :B

Radiant:
Candy – Sugar Fueled, would reword as “Once for each time you would place down a command token, you may discard a card to place a power token on one friendly unit before the command token is placed.” This is to clear up that the cadre ability is only supposed to happen once per command token assignment to one unit before the token is placed.
Enforcers - Are they supposed to have the Human trait?

Void:
Seems good :B

Question on extra actions as a whole, when a card says you can “take this action…” “perform this action…” etc. You still have to pay for the cost of the additional action, correct? For example, Ekhis’s Pocket Monster you pay 2 creation, press for 2 entropy, then you have to pay 2 essence to perform What Big Teeth, correct?