Okay so lemme just start out by saying I LOVE THESE SUGAR SENSHI! I Love their fuku designs, so original and cute! Super refreshing!

The line art is crisp, and smooth and that's something i look for in line art i might want to color later on so kudos on having a steadier hand than i do haha

The only thing that has gotten me is how light the lines are on the girl with the pony tails hair, i don't know if it was a scanner issue or what not but darker lines there would make the picture a bit easier to color (in my honest opinion)

But other than that i have nothing else to say about how fabulous and wonderful this picture is! I love it! I love your line arts and i wish you'd do more so I can color them!

I get what you mean about the hair. I kinda went super light on it since I was going to give her super light pink hair and didn't want to waste time dimming down the harshness of super dark lines. But I will post a newer version with the lines darkened for you!