Clannad Wallpaper: Field of hope

Artist Comment

I haven’t watch this series yet ,I just found the scan when I searched a scan for my next wallie
So I don’t know anything about this anime (though I often seen the wallies)and I didn’t put the little thing beside
her.
And here is the original scan

I did a little reconstructed with the scan .
and painted the background.

Comments

I like the background and how calming the whole composition is.
However, the text doesn't fit. I suggest you write your sig somewhere down in a corner, change the font of the title and
put it somewhere on the field with an Overlay or Soft Light blending option.
The font should be a calligraphic one (I think ^^")
The vector is beautiful, but take care of the color leaks. There are a few at her neck and face.
Your painting is awesome! I really wish I could be as good as you are at it <3
Also, try to vector the leaves and petals from other scans, the brushes are too transparent.
Sorry for the long comment, but I love it so much, I had to point out some things ^3^

The new version = much much better! <333
I liked the other color scheme but this one isn`t bad. I love the gradient in her hair. The vector itself is beautiful
but you still need to fix the leaks around the neck. The addition of the rose petals are nice but all of them needs
shading + outlines not just a few. The feathers should also have shading. I`m usually against putting text on a scenic
wall so I think you should just completely take out the text. ((:
Other than that, I am in love with your background. It is so beautifully painted. *-*
Also glad to see that scan finally walled. Beautiful job!

whoa o.o I'm impressed by this.... this is really surprising. it looks liek you painted it when I look at the very
details of the shades you did. O_O don't know what to say, but I'm impressed with the result and I like the version you
alreayd posted for MT because it looks more like a melancholy morning with the colors and all. so it's perfect the way
it is. oh and plus the only thing that bothers me is that blue sun ray coming from the sun, but other than that this is
really lovely. hope you could consider a textless version of this. :3

plus, I like the title how you didn't add the s in field. That's interesting without the s. XD

well the mountains are too round, and again with the flower field, more overlapping with the circles + more colors would
make them look less random. her cheekbone is a little too softly shaded, and the lines are a little too jagged...
BUT nevertheless i love this wall because you can really use color in a uniquely you way =]
lol and as for the sig, it really should be smaller and if you want to have big text, don't use a fancy text.. use
serifed fonts in different sizes and overlap'/blend them into the background. i should also be moved more towards the
center where there's an open space. but my thought is just to get rid of it and make a sig ^^

i see, rose petals, autumn-nish to green-ish and, text placed a bit differently. Good one, and elite too! :) congrats!
:) i like Both versions. :D

merged: 05-09-2009 ~ 09:54am
oh i had not checked the scan before, seeing how you turned that to this, well more points, i guess. wow, and yup i
agree, "field" of hope. No other title could have been more fitting. :D

I like this version much better than your previous ones. Although, there's a block of dis-colouration at the bottom
right corner of the wallpaper -- there's a different kind of tint or something going on there. It's subtle, but
noticeable.