Mwahahaha I see you have continued! 8D I am pleased, because this sounds interesting. And the summary made me giggle. xD

And for your random question, no I would not. For one thing, I hate the smell. And for another, I am allergic and would have an attack if I kissed him. xDD Plus, my parents would never be cool with that, seeing as he'd have to be at least nineteen, lol.

I really like how you've gotten so much more descriptive! Lessee, one of my favorite lines from this was: 'her red hair flowing down to her slim waist and flirting with the hem of her white shorts.' Really really awesome! .

And about continuing, well, that's up to you. If you think you can handle continuing it, then go right ahead! But I also think that, if you wanted to, you could stop and leave this as a one-shot as well. 3