MY GOALS AS A FANFIC WRITER: to learn how to develop a plot line and keep the same tone and quality throughout the story and improve my writing skills and style before moving on to writing my own original story--(and I don't mean one-shots)

MY GOALS AS A REVIEWER: to give advice to fellow writers and help them improve their writing skills

!! LESSON TIME !!

What is the difference between constructive criticism and a flame?

A Flame:

A review that tells you your flaws but gives no or not enough of an explanation about why you should improve. Often has incorrect grammar and/or spelling.

Constructive Criticism:

A review that is not necessarily flattering but is mostly respectful and points out your flaws and explains why they are flaws, etc.

-SasuSaku- -Complete- It was almost time, Orochimaru was going to take his body as a vessel. He hated being used...he refused to be used. With that thought, he took the kunai in his hand and slashed across his eyes.

Anzu is good at reading the body language of others, but not so great at understanding the wider implications for herself. Yuugi has been trying to tell her something for a long time, but he doesn't know the right words. Anzu/Yuugi.

After pissing his mother off for the last time, Li gets the worst punishment ever. With the help of Tomoyo and Eriol, he must turn an extremely stubborn and feisty tomboy into a real & true lady . Impossible? Nope. Hard? Definitely.

SasuSaku. Sakura-centric. “I get to be mixed-up and messed-up and jumbled and confused. I get to not know what I want. This is recovery—and it takes time. It’ll never be what it used to be. And maybe that’s OK. Maybe I still get to have everything.”

In a rare moment of freedom, Orihime searches the halls of Las Noches and finds, what else but a kitchen? Oh joy! Watch Orihime as she decides to whip up something special to share with her espada friends! [Crack fic]

[SasuSaku Oneshot] And so, armed with her romance novels, Ino decided to conduct a little study concerning Sasuke and Sakura's relationship. It had to be done, of course, with the proper scientific procedures.

A Naruto Harry Potter crossover. Fainting forward, he was the only one in the class who didn’t see the shivering pink haired girl appear in the middle of the room, naked except for rivulets of her own blood which dripped slowly onto the stone tiles.

In which Namine finds herself enamored by coffee and cute waiters, both of whom are called 'Roxas'. She isn't quite sure which 'Roxas' she likes better but she does know that she wouldn't have one without the other.

The holidays have a way of bringing unexpected surprises. First it was a pink bundle, then a kunai to the stomach, and now a plotting shark for a partner. Throw in some sake and you get a very happy Christmas. [Threeshot]

A cabin, one futon, and a cold night. NejixTenten. This isn't just a oneshot anymore. It's turned into a series of oneshots. But they all have the key theme of a cold night. But the ending is always warm and fluffy.

Though having graduated and long gone, she is a well known legend passed down on the school grounds of the Ninja Academy. Some protest that she was nothing more then a made up legend. Others claim they saw the spectacle with their own eyes. For she is

/Done with Permission/v 2.0/ Congratulations! You are now the proud owner of an UCHIHA SASUKE unit! With a little help from this manual, you'll learn the basics of feeding, bathing, and glomping an UCHIHA SASUKE!

A little version of Sakura and Sasuke's married life: The day they were married, it rained. It’s what Sakura thinks about as she stares out the window, waiting for him to come home. He is never late. One Shot.

The journey is coming to a close. Sakura holds the last feather in her hand. Glowing, silent, perfect. The last key to unlock her soul. It was in her hands, and all she had to do was take the final step, to put the key in the lock, and turn it.

Collection of short stories, scenes, snippets, featuring Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura and Kakashi at Hogwarts. Warning: utter crack. This is NOT A REAL STORY but a dozen small stories. It's also AS COMPLETE AS IT WILL EVER BE.

AkitoXD A Young girl bless with the power to curse illness and bring it upon herself. She removed Akito's illness. She slowly removed her own life.Will she die and how will the Sohma Family change if she dies?

It's been 4 years since Tokyo Mew Mew began, and the battle continues for all but one as in the midst of all the fighting, a Mew disappears. Where has she gone and why? Find out in an uniqe tale about the side of a Mew, the world has yet to see.1st fanfic

Tohru makes a wish that has very...erm..hilarious effects on those around her. Now, as the clock is ticking, will she be able to get everything back to normal? This fic is going to be funny, I swear! Lots of Kyoru fluff! .

“So, the bird disappeared in the horizon huh? Well its time for the little birdie to come back to its cage.” He said, his eyes burning with a dark desire. A single feather and the haunting melody were the only things left. KyoxTohru, HatorixKana

[One shot, DarkRiku] It began and continued like the weddings from storybooks, the ones where the prince marries a princess and they live happily ever after. But not all stories end with a fairytale ending...

rated for violence and adult themes! When there isn't enough seats for everybody on the ship, they try magic to send Sora home, but when Kairi finds him everybody thinks he's dead...Romeo and Juliet take off.

Dark and Riku meet once again after Dark awakens from deep slumber. Memories are aroused within Dark's mind, but Riku's remain hidden to her. Will Dark be able to help her remember their past romance, or will he be left heartbroken and alone? Revising.

Sakura and Syaoran have finally found each other again after many years of hurt and pain. But there is something wrong. Someone has given Sakura a task to fulfill. And she cannot deny that task. Oneshot.

[A Halloween Special] Halloween is here, and Tohru is excited about the holiday! For, like every year, the high school is holding a special event. A fashion show! Will Tohru win, or will she be the laughing stock of the whole school? Oneshot.