Saturday, April 6, 2013

TMNT (Vol. 1) #23

Publication date: July, 1989 (cover), August, 1989
(indicia)

Story and art: Mark Martin

“Totally Hacked!”

Summary:

After a lengthy recap of the previous two installments,
we catch up with Dale in the utopian future of 1995. Dale is peeved that she was tricked and the
world is going to be invaded by the Skwal soon, so she marches into the forest
to think. She’s approached by the Fannywhacker,
a vigilante (and anthropomorphic rat) who targets truants because hooky is the
only crime left in the world. Dale
reminds him that it’s Sunday and Fannywhacker laments that all he wants is to
live in a world polluted by crime and violence so he’ll have something to
do. Realizing that Fannywhacker is on
her side, Dale puts him into her time machine and sends him back into history to
undo her mistake.

In 1988, April feeds her four new pet turtles. The turtles aren’t fond of being kept in a
terrarium, but haven’t the strength to escape, so they make the best of the
situation.

2,000,000 BC, Fannywhacker arrives shortly after Dale’s
first trip to that period. He finds the
homo habilis and decides that the only way to reintroduce violence to human
evolution is to bully the ape-man.
Unfortunately, creature comforts have turned the homo habilis into a
sissy and he refuses to fight back.
Eventually, after destroying all the things Dale brought back from the
future, Fannywhacker succeeds in enraging the homo habilis and escapes in the
time machine just as the homo habilis gives up his thoughts of peace and
harmony in exchange for malice and cruelty.

Having successfully repaired the time stream,
Fannywhacker is restored to his original identity: Millionaire Boo Swain, alias
Gnatrat. Unfortunately, the time machine
blinks out of existence before completing its journey back to 1995.

In 1988, the Turtles are restored to being teenage
mutants and bust out of their terrarium in April’s apartment.

Elsewhere, Splinter fortifies himself in his secret
chamber to watch anime. He’s interrupted
by Gnatrat, who was left stranded in 1988 when the time machine
disappeared. Gnatrat asks Splinter for
help and Splinter suggests they manipulate the morbidly obese superhero
Supperman. They’ll feed him until he
goes into a state of suspended animation, then Gnatrat will perform a Vulcan
mind-meld with him until he wakes up in 1995.

Using a million dollars he had in his pocket, Gnatrat buys
a restaurant (employing Splinter as a waiter) and lures Supperman in with an
All You Can Eat promotion. They proceed
to feed the glutton, eventually coming one meal short of putting Supperman into
a food coma. They prepare the final
dish, which is unfortunately pizza, and it attracts the Ninja Turtles to the
restaurant. Splinter begins to tell his
sons to back off from the pie, but Gnatrat gets too absorbed in his “boss”
role and starts ordering Splinter around.
Incensed, Splinter feeds the pizza to the Turtles just to tick Gnatrat
off. Gnatrat attacks Splinter, but
Splinter bats him away with a pizza oven paddle. Gnatrat crashes into Supperman, who in return
hits Gnatrat with a burp so powerful it launches him forward in time. Gnatrat arrives in 1995 and lands in the
bedroom of obese hippo-woman, Lasagna Lagna.

Elsewhere in 1995, Dale confronts George of the
Skwal. George tells Dale that she’s made
a grievous error in defeating the aliens by restoring the timeline, but Dale
simply shoos him back into his spaceship.
Dale returns home, where she receives a stern lecture from her mother
for talking to strangers, as strangers are dangerous, and for staying out late,
as it’s dangerous to be out after dark.
Dale looks at a newspaper and reads all the violent headlines and sighs.

*Gnatrat is a character created and owned by Mark
Martin. According to an editor’s note,
from Gnatrat’s continuity, this story takes place between “The Dark Gnat
Returns” and “Happy Birthday Gnatrat”.

*As a guest issue, this issue is non-canon to the proper
Mirage TMNT series.

*This issue contained two bonus pin-ups by Mark Martin
made to look like faux school reports by Dale, and the original piece of art
that inspired “The Fannywacker” by Dragan Flaesc.

*This issue and the previous issue can be seen sitting by a toilet in Ghoulies III: Ghoulies go to College. Truly an honor.

Review:

Ugh. This was just
awful.

It’s a real pain to read Mark Martin’s “Time and Time
Again” trilogy, as the story just deteriorates so rapidly after the first
installment. In this concluding chapter,
Martin goes completely off the wall and falls back on that old standby of the
uninspired ‘80s indie comic creator: Stream-of-consciousness nonsense. Because being “random” is the same as being
clever, right?

The overarching storyline comes to a screeching halt
after the first 6 or so pages (two of which are recaps) and the entire thing
devolves into a promotion for Martin’s creator-owned character
Gnatrat. If you’re a Gnatrat fan then I’m
sure you’ll get a lot more out of this issue than I did. However, if you’re like me and you’re
response to seeing Gnatrat in this issue is, “Who the fuck is Gnatrat?” then
prepare to be annoyed.

Dale, who was the star of the first two chapters, is
completely removed from the story once Fannywhacker/Gnatrat makes his
gratuitous crossover appearance and she won’t appear again until the epilogue
(which tries to be bittersweet and thoughtful, but it’s way too late by that
point). The actual conflict set up in
the last chapter is resolved midway through the issue and the remainder is just
Gnatrat acting cuh-raaaaaaaaayzee! Lots
of stupid, random bullshit used as a substitute for humor and creativity and it’s
all very boring. It’s just
Gnatrat spouting gibberish (“Ha Ha Ha spanking.
Ha ha ha Supperman. Ha ha ha
Vulcan mind-meld”) and reminding everyone that he’s in a comic that you can buy
right now.

And as with the last two installments, there is still
absolutely no reason this needed to be a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles
comic. The Turtles spend the issue
sidelined in a terrarium and the only thing of consequence they do is eat a
pizza at the end (though the plot impact of the pizza would have had the same
consequence if it had just been dropped on the floor). Splinter enters the actual storyline, but he
doesn’t act a thing like Splinter and could have just as easily been
substituted with an original character.
Across all three installments, none of the Turtles acted with an
individual personality, because why bother?
All this entire “Time and Time Again” arc amounted to was an opportunity
for Mark Martin to advertise Gnatrat to a larger audience, not actually write a
Ninja Turtles story.

And yet, Mark Martin’s skill as a cartoonist gives even
this insipid sequel a silver lining. He
employs his usual variety of art styles and makes even recap and expository
pages “neat” to look at. In the end,
though, my favorite pages in this issue were the two faux school reports done
by Dale. They were very cute and
actually felt like the sincere work of an 8 year-old and not an adult
pretending to be an 8 year-old. On that
note, I was really starting to like Dale, so seeing her removed from the plot so
mother fucking Gnatrat could mug the camera really pissed me off.

This was an awful story and it sure as hell didn’t make
me want to read any Gnatrat comics.
Martin uses the TMNT brand as a tool for advertising himself and his
work, but half-asses actually writing the TMNT.
His scheme is transparent, which makes it all the more irritating. What began as a really clever one-shot
adventure soon bloated into a tedious trilogy, eventually ending on a bunch of
stream-of-consciousness bullshit, strung together in the hopes that being “random”
might mask the fact that none of it is “funny”.
Or clever.

If you want a great story, read TMNT #16. Then just do as I do and pretend that Martin
never made any sequels.

Grade: D- (as in, “Dude, stop calling him ‘Leon’. That is not Leonardo’s nickname and it never
will be”.)

Oh, and on the offchance you didn't believe me in the Turtle Tips when I said that this issue and last issue made an appearance in Ghoulies III: Ghoulies go to College...

7 comments:

Mark Martin might have been one of most talented artists to draw a TMNT comic, but his merits were certainly wasted on his failure to understand the personalities of book's title characters and actually craft a coherent story for them.

Would you believe Martin actually tried to Kickstart a campaign to bring Gnatrat back from the dead? I don't really know what ever became of it, but I didn't bother to donate because this arc made me realize the world is better off without Gnatrat:http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1797614516/gnatrat-lives-1