Following Sky

Summary: Chenoa is a Forest, or so her mother says. Long ago their world during The Making, their world was separated into Sections. Each Section with an appearance. Forests have brown hair and brown eyes, whereas Chenoa has blonde hair and green eyes. Chenoa is an outsider, and it does not help that she is picked on because of it. She knows she doesn't belong in Forest and she knows that is not where her birthplace is. Chenoa makes a decision that changes her life completely revealing herself to another dimension of her world.

This is pretty good so far! Chenoa seems like a likable, realistic character and I like the idea; it's very creative. If you would check out and leave a comment on the first chapter of my story, Metalligirl, I'd appreciate it- you do a great job!