actually, I am a lot more than one, I have used like 20 different screen names :P and, I like reading, can I help it? me thinks not. anyway, du ist sehr Welkommen!! AAHH!!! YOU SHOULD WRITE SOMETHING IN GERMAN!!! (that reminds me of my writing assignment i need to do - _ -) anyway ttyl (haha, like I'm even talking to you :P i am talking to myself right now.)

Interesting poem! I do feel like you're not quite tasting what you're reaching out for.

Something to think about...when I think of night, I think of dark, and along with dark the unknown. Humans are most afraid of what they do not understand--this is why many are afraid of the dark.

Tiggerlily14replied...Dec. 5, 2011 at 6:04 pm

I agree, but I am not afraid of the dark. Like you said, I am afraid of the unknown. The animals that are hiding out in the dark where I can't see them, but they cans see me. Such as my encounter with a possum last winter - _ - scared me half to death.....

Actually, anyone who is a fan of Doctor Who knows that fear of the dark is, in fact, not an irrational fear. We actually don't fear the dark, but creatures that immitate the dark- the Vashta Nerada, the piranas of the air. Swarms of microbial carnivorous creatures that eat pouns of flesh nearly instantly. Oh, and did I mention that no one knows how to stop them?

Anyways, thanks for the review. :)

Tiggerlily14replied...Dec. 6, 2011 at 11:44 am

well I have never seen Doctor Who and don't care to. anyway, you two can have your own opinion I'll have mine. (and that is that I hate possums - _ -)

I very much like this poem, i like how it makes the night seem like a living creatuer. As a point of improvement i might discribe the owl as being something like 'king of the night' to make his image more powerful, and perhaps more intimidating.

Okay, I'll be honest, the first two lines are okay, but I think every other line should rhyme. The first three stanzas in general need work, no offense. The fourth stanza I think the should be, "hiding IN it's protective cover". The fifth and final stanza however, is perfectamundo! Remember this is my opinion, you don't have to listen or agree with me. Altogether though, it shows that you are trying. =)