I finally got around to watching TF:Prime, and the bunnies are bitin' me HARD! Sadly my list of fics-to-write is as long as my arm, so I have to settle for reading other people's instead. So far yours are my favorites; you've really nailed the Knock Out/Breakdown dynamic. Well done!

I like how you thought through technical details, like how Starscream is hungry for power and tried to destract him from rescuing BD for his own 1-up on Megatron. Having background characters in character is good.

Since they first appeared on screen, I'm head over heels for those two, too. - And you write them beautifully! I wish I had more to say than that, but this is just perfect, - there's so much subtext, both in the show (how convenient LOL) and here, I like it "You know I would have come for you" - aw! Just LOVE IT!

I enjoyed reading this lovely fic. Not only do you show both Knock Out and Breakdown's emotions and interactions well, but you also give a believable reason as to why Knock Out was not in Operation: Breakdown. Bravo! :)