Rated 4 / 5 stars2009-05-02 01:27:32

Good

You are improving very well. The humor may be fifth grade, but it is smile-able if not laughable. Definitely work on your art. Add some shading so it doesn't look so basic. (Please take no offense of this, I'm just trying to help) It is very good to see that you are exploring. Keep exploring Flash, and look around at some tutorials.
The roughness (I believe you drew with the line tool set to that rough setting) is very interesting and new. It gives it a Blues Clues look. I'm no toddler but it is a pretty good way of animating, simple and yet effective. The sound effects where well synced with the animation, and the animation had a twist which is always good.

Keep practicing, you have a future in animation (I sound like an ad...).