I wrote this last summer and finally got around to recording it with my 12 string guitar. I'd love any feedback, critical or not. It's not really Modest Mouse inspired. It's more inspired by a film called Ravenous which is really awesome and you should all watch it. Also, here are the lyrics:

"Down in the caveBeside the riverSome travellers and IWere starving to deathSo we ateEach otherWe ate until our souls were fedAnd a ravenous desire was bred

Fathers and sonsonce and for all will be oneCooked over the campfire tonightMuch to the mothers delightHow she loved her boy so closeNow he's in her stomach againThe good things they never lastBut the hunger, it always does"

The last line is really no good...I'm not much of a lyricist, singer, or guitarist, so please bear with me! I hope you enjoy despite all my musical shortcomings.

Good song. I like your lyrics. Did you write them? It sounds like you just started singing. I have never been a good singer myself, but have been trying more lately. It would be nice if more people started posting music here now that it's summertime.