Hi, I just like to start of with saying thank you very much for reviewing a few of my pieces, it's very much appreciated! This poem is beautiful. It haves that angelic vibe and sense of peace that I think a lot of people would like to experience. The words flow together very well and makes it a smooth, relaxing read. I really enjoyed this!

Hey! First off, I'd just like to say that this poem is AWESOME! I haven't read anything else by you YET but from reading this, I can tell it'll be great! a little bit of constructive critism, you don't have to agree with it, but I found some parts a tad confusing, but that may just be the result of a long day at school...Just if you have time, it may be useful to go over it a bit and clear a few things up...But it was great! I love it! Also, I'd like to thank you a lot for reading my stuff! I'll keep checking in with you! Thanks! :)

OMG I love this poem! Maybe it's just me, but this poem seems so... special. It's like something so powerful, like the elements and spirits all combine to create something beyond man and earth. Excellent!