Aha, so sweet! Nice 'twist' at the end - didn't see that coming. And Blue's drunkness just made me laugh; unsure why though! :) This is probably nearly perfect. I loved it. :D

vio and shadow chapter 1 . 3/25/2011

I saw this on Da and loved it. Sadly i dont have an account so i couldnt thank you for a wonderful story! One of the best short stories ever ! Thank You! :D

Crystal taiyo wolf chapter 1 . 2/13/2011

Omg it's valentines day tomorrow and I read this it's sooooo funny and ironic buut sadly I hate almost every guy in my class kus there all idiots ." ah well great job and I hope ya never ever run out of cool ideas like this one hahahahahahha