Your version is refreshing and fun. The Maraudr's aftraid of a Slytherin and a Slytherin girl at that! They've always been the brightest two in their class, except for Lily in Potions, and it's fun to see them as entirely different people.

As I had said before, they found out in 2nd year, and that's what decided them to become Animagus' which they achieved in 5th year. Since I'm reading this much later than most, you've probably already been told this.

I'm beginning to like the idea of your non-canon stuff. It's really fun and funny to see the Marauder's afraid of a Slytherin girl, and Snape not nearly as nasty as he is usually portrayed. You do good work.

So some things are way not canon, like the Marauder's finding out about Remus in 2nd year. Or are they not going to become Mssrs. Mooney, Padfoot, Prongs and Wormtail of the Marauder's Map? And I still like Anne. Snape doesn't fit the imagine of him I had at school in the least.

Well, that answered my Evans/Snape question. They hadn't met before school in your story. I like Anne, and she is very definitely Slytherin material. Hopefully we will still find out when the other Marauder's discovered Remus' "furry little problem"