Hmmm...it feels lonely, rather than romantic. Lonely and like the love has been found but won't respond. Dark and womanly, a woman trying to seduce a man, perhaps? It does feel like the precursor to your breezy (à la AndyDoodler).

ryn: I feel like a dodecoganal peg being placed in an octoganal hole. I fit, but it's never going to be just right. There's still spaces around me. I don't want to be a cog or a wheel. I want to be something else. Anything else. I guess I'm just a malcontent *shrug*

IRT ur comment: I think "redemption" not neces since petal's out of context [blowing around a winter downtown night scene], just hard for the bystander to recognize it (got another beautiful work out of it anyhow). Oh, and got a laugh thanks- I was trying to figure out what you meant by "tried"- I didn't even realize the "tryed" should be "tried". When I see a comment of mine w/typo or misspell, I wanna go in and edit it. Whatever, blogger should have a cmnt spellck, hey? and while they're at it, should have a option to post little images in the comments too.