no f*g bags. this site blows. its not even that bad of a story for a little kid and the guy reading in it sounds like my *ssh*le after some chef boyardee. That old HL story about gordon freemans brother was actually funny. this is just lame. Anyone with a younger sibling can find 8 million sh*tty story books they wrote when they were little. My sister has piles of em.

I honestly feel that in the time it took me to watch the whole thing, start to finish, dinosaurs could've re-evolved on earth and still would've been 1000000^23432 times cooler than this crappy YTMND.
You should drown yourself in your own urine.

looks like he memorized the practice-writing stroke worksheets exactly and freaked out if he missed a curve in a letter perfectly lol (im not 1ing it for that, it just sucks anyway nonetheless; dramatic readings are f*cking gay)

I will admit that Fooly and AndrewMadler are one in the same, but that last two are not (I didn't want people making an account with my actual name). This was a group effort, and my comrades spinningobo, idontgetit777, and moolahdiamond all contributed in one way or another (for example, the alternative voice during the third frame). Apologies for the confusion :(

WRONG so many plot holes. #1: They turned into Claws, yet they were dinosaurs. #2: Andrew and Matt's good friend, Colin died, and all they could think of was Track & Field? #3. When he [Colin] was revived from the dead, he didn't know who Matt and Andrew were until they said "We are matt and andrew" #4: No explination to why they weren't changed back into people the first time, yet the second time, they were easily transformed into people again. Reasoning needed. C- See me after class young man

How facile. Clearly the retransfiguration could not take place until the protagonists had accepted the roles they found themselves occupying. Notice that they feast upon the flesh of their fellow creatures, witness the cycle of death and rebirth typified by Colin's journey before they may transgress the boundary back into humanity. The piece is deeply symbolic of cyclic heroes journey's told throughout the age that start and end at the same state with a series of trials in between. Better than LOTR and The

RIGHT on so many plot patches. #1: They turned into Terrible Claws, which means they turned into Deinonychus. #2: Colin died and they wanted to get the hell out of there. #3. Zombies frequently experience memory loss just after being revived. #4: It's a MAGICAL rainbow rock. A+ Here's a publishing grant young man

The Conflict was a little sketchy at certain points in the story. There were to many times when I did not see the Motivation behind the 3 protagonists. For example: When they were turned into "Claws" no reason is given for the three of them continuing to move forward even though they were now presented with the opportunity to head back into town and eat people.

I remember when I wrote a story kind of like this in 3rd grade about a giant squid who gave birth to a dog, and then the giant squid turned into a rocket and they went to outer space and fought aliens. It was pretty awesome.

If it's Btape saying it that's a pretty sure sign that it is. Change your vote kep, it's the only way to control this crap. You know, max doesn't want to deal with 5000 trolls so he leaves it up to us - and most of you are all just "Duh. Top Viewed = 5. Duh" This site is horrible anyway

i think someone might be gay. Going into the woods with your friends, because you are "best friends" and a "Rainbow Rock" you could have made it any color but you chose the gayest color combo of all time.

A little boy wrote a good story for a second grader. Then someone else read it out loud, choosing to emphasize words and sentences to make it sound even more poorly written than it actually was. Where's the funny? God, I hope this doesn't become another How to Prank a Telemarketer. At least HTPAT was funny the first time I heard it.

I think its ridiculous that so many people are 1ing the site because of of the four guys who made this has two accounts. If you think its a bad ytmnd, 1 away. But just cause the creators got 1 extra vote doesn't mean that there need to be 30 1s to compensate for that single extra vote.