2. Replace the words: part time service employees with part-time international student employees, to indicate you are referring to the supermarket, not to other service business.

3. Revise the bibliography, make sure everything is in alphabetical order.

4. Make all the changes indicated now and previously and send everything to me. I spend 4 times the number of hours allocated to the supervision. Please do the work. please make all the changes otherwise that would be effect you in dissertation. i can support you to an extent not like the way i should do every changes and do your dissertation.