The second line adds so much to this. "11:12" is already odd, but the second line just makes this perfect. Very relatable, in a way

Lord Lightning Hurricane chapter 1 . 3/25/2010

The time is 11:12 now and the silence riverbetes with the sounds...this sound i hear so often...your little voice in the back of my head...broken silence...broken dreams and the awareness that resides inside itself...never knowing, never wanting, never having to leave...