Marina_Liesau

Marina_Liesau

Melissa_Crocker

Melissa_Crocker

awesome poem when two lovers join you really got that across congrats on your writing you have a gift that should be shared have you ever thought about publishing

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Posted November 12, 2010

the first poem that i wrote on this group has been published but this one is about me and my bestfriends first time of intermacy under the pier.im so glad you could understand it.lol i showed it to her and she didnt understand most of it, esp baby with fawn staring i said it was the colour of our eyes and she was like oh yeah lol and also golden with midnight is our hair colours. oh well she at least got the intermacy part.
thankyou very much for your feedback means a lot