I've really enjoyed this story so far. I wish you'd finish it but I don't have much hope for you doing that. I usually don't read a story if it looks like it won't be finished but I like your writing so much that I am willing to read your unfinished work.

This is such a coincidence. I have a daughter named Demelza and her father's middle name is Willard:D Too bad about Mrs. Pettigrew. I guess that even if Peter had come to visit her she wouldn't have remembered.

Oh no! I didn't expect Kingsley. In the movies they always showed him as a really nice guy. I suppose he does have to follow the rules though. Wasn't there a time when all of them, including Sirius, got together as the Order at Grimmauld Place? I guess you could've changed the story though.

I really liked this chapter but if I were to say something critical I'd say that it seemed a little rushed. On the other hand I don't see any reason for you to rewrite what JKR wrote either. What a hoot--they rolled into the river:D

Poor Charity. It's becoming more clear to everyone that Remus and Tonks have a good thing going. I hope you get to the part when people realize Sirius is back and he's not all bad. It seemed to me in the books that he was a "bad" wizard. Then, all of a sudden, he was back in everyone's good graces. I've always questioned that. There was a lot that JKR didn't explain but I hope you do.

In hindsight, after we know what really happened, we realize that Sirius was after Scabbers. At the time, however, it looks like Sirius is very guilty. I love this perspective from Remus and Tonks. Too bad Tonks had to see Remus with Charity. I've always loved Harry's Patronus.

How exciting! Tonks got to meet Martha! I hope they can get together. People are starting to notice that Remus and Tonks are interested in each other. I didn't think things would work out with Rob. I'm glad they didn't.

With Remus leaving Tonks at the lake as he did and making her feel like she was a nuisance, I don't think he has any claims on her heart and she should go out and have a good time. Once again I don't care for Proudfoot. I wonder if it's just his rubbish name:D

I know, I know. Can't Remus just let himself love her. It takes a few years if you use the canon timeline. I'm glad Tonks and Remus were able to spend that time together and that Tonks has her Patronus under control.

I figured that Remus would be back but I was still surprised to see him when I did. I thought for sure that Charlie had come back from the lake. I'm so happy that Remus and Tonks were able to see each other again.

I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm sad that Tonks broke up with Charlie but the feelings were not mutual. It's best to just move on. It was also sad when Snape obviously saw Lily in Tonks' auburn hair. It's fun to see the beginnings of love stir between Tonks and Remus.

Reviewer: FynnsmomDate: 09/17/14 15:13 Chapter: Chapter 2- More of a Miss than a Kiss

I guess if Charlie's going to ask an uncomfortable question he might get an uncomfortable answer. It's hard to be sneaky around a werewolf. They seem to hear everything.