It’s okay, but it’s crooked and love is capitalized for some reason. Your handwriting isn’t bad, though! It might be the crookedness that’s throwing you off. I would pencil on some lines for the next one. As MrsBeck said.

Allyg: Changes…”Please” is thicker/bolder? than the other words I would make it thinner or make the other ones bolder. The “a”s 2 of them are the same the 3rd one is different. You should make them all the same. The “g” seems like you ran out of room in the bottom so the bottom loopy thingy looks like you squished it to make it fit. So I think you should space the words out so everything looks proportional and nicely spaced out and centered on the paper.

Maybe you should write it like this….

Please

Take One

&

Watch Love

Grow

and maybe at the bottom you can put one of those swirl thingies that people put under texts like this one….