I like the idea of the track, not my sort of dnb put its sits well and the mix sounds quite nice. Only thing i would say is variate that break your using (is it Danny Byrd pack by any chance) as the cow bell is quite distinct and you know its coming every bar. best suggestion is split that break up, give it some variety even if you add in an extra hi-hat etc, especially when the track changes at like 2 min. But on the whole the track works