Soccer

My passion forthis sport is enormous It is the most played sport around the globe The crowed of fans screaming is tremendous As the light of the huge stadium glow When the ref blows the whistle, the game starts The player passes the ball to his friend As the fans clap thier hands; it pumps thier hearts A player is open and the ball is sent The player catches the ball in mid-air As he rockets the ball into the net All the player's fans get out of thier chairs To congradulate him on a close set Soccer is a sport that is played by heart That is a good answer in having a good start

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Personally I don't like soccer. But the onomatopeia you used, with the sound of the crowd cheering, made me feel like I was there, and each stanza was put together well to show the series of events that took place.