Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2009-03-18 01:35:19

Better...

Well, this is another good piece that has a BUNCH of potential...The main melody is quite catchy for the first 30 seconds, but quickly dies because of repetition... A suggestion would be to integrate more percussion because in the present state it sounds more like notes only...You sort of begin to lose interest after a while...But anyways, good job and keep at it.
~TC