Well, nitehawk, as a matter of fact,

In the end or the other end?!

Very HOT Chapter 5!
And of course, now I HAVE to go find out if Jordan gets her in both ends!
Heck, and Emily has to be in the mix as well.
She engaged in some pretty dirrty activity herself.
Off to read.

Maintaining the quality

You're doing a masterful job with this, maintaining the quality of the writing and building the narrative so nicely. And, I must point out, the prose is flawless. Do you self edit? Use a proofreader? I love the growing intimacy, not only between sister and brother but also between sister and friend. Nicely done. I continue to be impressed. You're evoking genuine emotion with your writing, which is not an easy thing to do.

Thanks again, pg

VERY nice stories!

I am up to chapter five and had to tell you this writing is, "so good!". I get a sense of realism and intimacy from each of them, so you clearly have the life experience and patience to bring life into the words. It is an excellent choices of terms for the title and I also enjoyed the pace at which you evolved the storyline. Thank you!