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Wednesday, 6 September 2017

Take Flight

WALT: Engage our readers by using precise language

I was travelling in the 'Radio-Flyer; when all of a sudden my grandpa and I were in a jungle. There were black monkeys with purple eyes that were screeching at us. Long scaley alligators were all around us searching for food. For a moment I wondered if we were going to be their next meal. Slowly, grandpa and I realised that the alligators were coming towards us, their long jaws snapping hungrily. My grandpa and I tried to escape but there was no way out of the jungle. Wherever we went, there were deadly animals chasing us like they wanted to rip our skin off. Eventually, we came to a clearing and the animals were all gone. I guess they found a better meal with better protein!!!

This week, we're focusing on using precise language in our writing. Up above, is my
writing about the Radio - Flyer and there's a video you can watch. Hope you enjoy!!

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Htet Htet

About Me

Kia ora, my name is Htet htet and I’m in Mr Wiseman class this year. I’m 12 years old and my favorite subject is maths. My home class teacher is Mr Wiseman, math class teacher is Ms Tapuke. My goal for this year is to finish my work in time. I hope 2017 is the best year.