My Dearest Scenery

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Apr 10, 2012 12:49

Please correct my English in the following sentences.

This is one of my dearest scenery of cherry blossoms.There was a kindergarten over the red bridge, which was called a Zushi Church Kindergarten. Until now, Zushi Church is there, however, there isn’t a kindergarten.I have a lot of memories with this scenery. When I remember them, I always feel very happy.

Yes, "dearest" does not sound as natural. You could say it and be understood just fine, but "memorable" is probably better.

However using "dearest", its a little difficult to think of an example, but try this....you would have to re-arrange the sentence, and say..."This scenery of cherry blossoms, is most dear to me(dearest to me)". Saying it this way sounds better.

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Please correct my English in the following sentences.
This is one of my dearest scenery of cherry blossoms.
There was a kindergarten over the red bridge, which was called a Zushi Church Kindergarten. Until now, Zushi Church is there, however, there isn’t a kindergarten.
I have a lot of memorie