I know that much of lagooners have a talent to write storylines and that gave me the idea to make a contest. Why do you not write a complete scenario which can be used for a game?

General organization: - one prologue (presentation of the story and characters) - 3 parts developing each one a typical situation in the story.- one conclusion scene.

In each part, 3 or 4 scenes. A scene takes place in a single place and with the same characters and it is during these scenes that are built the playable actions. Between two scenes, a short series of dialogues between the characters to connect a scene and the following one.

So, I propose that, while following this organization, the writers can propose a scenario. Others will have the possibility of choosing the best scenario or proposing improvements.

I think your ideas (they are very good) can be adapted to the topic. About Wendy behavior , do not forget that: - It's a party, and with a little alcohol, all is possible...- After HA4, the girls can use "informations" they have about Nanny and Franck so that Nanny is more... permissive .

shark wrote : I think your ideas (they are very good) can be adapted to the topic. About Wendy behavior , do not forget that: - It's a party, and with a little alcohol, all is possible...- After HA4, the girls can use "informations" they have about Nanny and Franck so that Nanny is more... permissive .

OOOhhh!!!I think you give me too much information! This is Wendy's Birthday Party! What might she be gifted? More exactly who might be on her guest list?

Shark I did not expect your response to my email to be so quick and answered here. I'll propose something which hopefully gets the Lagoon into thought.

Ok! For what it's worth, here is my offering. Note that I have not provided all details as that would take away some of the surprise, and would also tend to be a "walkthrough". Dialog is also scant but not necessary for the overview.

It was also my intention to allow some relationships to be implied. --------------------------------------------------

Wealth brings privilege.The Wendy and Franck properties are close to Malfort Castle.It is Wendy's [18th] birthday, a BIG occasion in the life of an active youthful girl, mature in body but frivolous in dealing with other people’s emotions.

The venue is to be the Malfort Castle Ballroom.

The Guestlist will include, Florian and Alancy;Martin and Li-Ann;Wendy’s parents [I envisage as a “Sophia Loren” & “David Suchet” – Poirot]Cloe, Kenny, Nanny and Franck;Angela, Wendy’s father’s secretary [from Late Night at the Office];Ka-la and Tarak [The Rebelu];Piano Tutor [Horny Afternoon]An artiste of renown. [Wendy likes her work and would enjoy a collage which later commemorates the birthday night]. She comes offering two gifts, a self-portrait for Wendy and one which seems a mystery, and for whom?(The servants on the list will perform some duties before being able to engage in festivities).

[This proposal attempts to make use of models and sceneries which I assume Shark still has. If that is correct then just a few new characters need to be created and some additional scenery]

Prologue:Wendy, Cloe, Alancy and Li-Ann are in discussions as guests arrive.Martin, as butler, is greeting guests on arrival and Li-Ann offers a small plate of hors d’oeuvres, a small beverage and ushers to tables.

There is a stage area in a Persian/Bedouin styled décor, and the Piano tutor is nearby.

First:While the pianist is playing Ka-la is performing a traditional veil/belly dance of her people enticing the men to drink.

Wendy, Franck, Cloe, and Nanny are at a table in on the edge. Wendy’s parents are nearby with Tarak and Angela. Wendy’s mother and Tarak seem to have an attraction but Angela gently rebuffs advances by Wendy’s father (he’s remembering that night) but as her table partners appear to becoming involved she begins to allow him more freedom.

Li-Ann and the gorgeous blonde are to be seen in conversation.

Cloe causes a minor distraction [small ice cube down Nanny’s front]. Prim Nanny rebukes, Wendy suggests Franck can retrieve it. “Miss Wendy! A lady cannot allow….” “But you know that his hands are gentle and warm!” Convey the rest of the indictment with a thought bubble from the boudoir scene.Wendy then drops some sticky sauce onto Nanny’s knee with the prompt that Franck would love to lick her knee clean. Further retort. Nanny yields. In the shelter of the table they convince Nanny to give Franck a light oral pleasuring.

Shortly three pairings disappear from the room, one to the stables, one to the battlements and the other into the gardens. We just have to wonder from there on.

Two:Alancy and Li-Ann approach Wendy, “Time for that big occasion. Florian and Martin will give you a tour of the dungeon.”Cloe also joins the tour.“Oow, a rack! And a Pillory! Show me how you use them.” Wendy indicates to Martin and Florian. Alcohol slows judgement and reaction. Two girls lock Florian onto the rack while the others lock Martin into the pillory. If Martin is not properly secured he has access to a method which will release him and bring a real dampener on the occasion.

Both men’s lower garments are lowered. Alancy finds something which she feels fitting for Martin and Li-Ann reveals her special toy. Cloe and Wendy grow Florian and then Cloe and Alancy swap. Cloe and Li-Ann cause Martin to cum and with a few well-chosen tools bring Florian on.

Our artiste has done cursory explorations of the victims but is sharing her attentions otherwise.

On release. Martin to Li-Ann: “Later you get the real thing in your glory hole!” “Promise? Never had a man, but …. Hmm...”Alancy to Florian: “Well Darling, later you should nearly be able to make it morning!”

Three:The evening is over. Alancy has made a few guest rooms available.

Wendy escorts the Pianist to one, Cloe and Ka-la take Kenny to the other.

Wendy knows that the Pianist is a little shy by wants to finish the party with a party. She has to get him prepared for the thought of sharing widely. She is not so concerned about Kenny since he’s had that exposure. A failing on her part means the Pianist will leave.

When Wendy is comfortable she has arranged with Cloe to bring in the others (who will have been doing their own exploring). With everyone comfortable they have to go about bringing satisfaction to each other. Later the lights are out and a door is heard to open as someone disappears.

Ending:Where and how do we find everyone in the morning? Who is waking up with whom? Let us have a “comic book” slide presentation, or maybe Wendy, with her partners of the night, greets the respective partners on the castle steps.

Where has that blonde been all night too? Her gorgeous tresses are a complete mess!

“Wow! Looks like my birthday meant as much to all of you as it did to me!”

mudplugger wrote : Shark, can I suugest that competition entries are submitted via a Private Message otherwise everyone will know the story before the game is released.

While I had wondered about the polling method.I think it wise that the author does not give away every last little detail so that there is still something fresh about the chosen story when published. Those details can be shared and discussed with Shark when at the "studio" level.

It would be nice to see some rendition of it, my post is more as a thought provoker.

i´d like to recreate the setting of HA3, so we got the villa and the pool (for later scene) in backyard all in party decoration of course.guests: wendy, cloe, nany, frank, piano teacher (HA1), kenny + mum (she was hot ) maybe sb brings a friend from polonesia...

1st part: late afternoon (thats why its called HA5)1 scene: lobby of villa/ living room (both rooms kinda open)meet and greet... piano teacher playing on the grand piano2 scene: bithday game(s) twister guests move to diff areas of mansion 4-5 ppl start playing pulling other ppl clothes off or not trying to loose their own (stay teasing softcore here)nany of course will be helping guests with drinks... + checking if everybody is behaving. so you need to untwist and make ppl proper again 2-3 times.kennys mom seems to be attracted (in a teasing manner) to piano teacher while playing of course.

//(part 4) here could be room for some more or less dirty presents, which could be used in later scenes//

2nd part: eveningparty shifts outside to pool area, which is decorated with some pro lighting effects, pool bar, ppl standing around, talking, dancing (hot dancing) swimming...since nany is around cloe and wendy get in some action in the pool where they are less seen. they ask nany to bring some more snacks from the kitchen to send her away.kamera goes back inside, where the piano teacher and kennys mom are having some fun on the grand piano. nany on the way to fetch snacks stops by and gets aroused, pleasuring herself. outside the girls got kenny to join in the pool. to be safe the send frank after nany.

3rd part: finaleinside nany hears somebody coming leaves the piano scene, forgetting her panties, she dropped and moves to kitchen.frank finds her there and they get it on quickly.meanwhile outside the fun continues, but in the extasy of love some pool water or better body fluids get onto some cables of the high tech lighting systems, and a power out occurs. nany and frank get interrupted start looking for the fuses. outside the wendy and cloe use the distraction to get their share of pleasure.

Ending: lots of kisses and wet dreams of the day

hope you´ll enjoy my birthdy fantasy, mort

Edit: i couldn´t read other suggestions, so i wouldn´t spoil my own creativity. now i did read yours Squeeky and LRM and i sure liked your ideas. cheers, mort

Edit 2: i realized mine is really just an outline more details could be added

I am about to go to bed. Your thoughts look good. By all means go back and add to you story, just don't tell us that "Cloe has to tickle XXX so he gets an erection ...." or when Wendy's Mum gives the piano player ...

Those are the moments which I would suggest as "triggers". Don't mention those. If need, Shark and you can discuss what action is needed for transition to the next event.

Oh! I scanned, didn't read, but did you have one or two "bad" endings? Apologies if you have those added. Many thanks.

Day 1Wendy invited some of her graduated boarding school classmates and their dates. > Wendy and her date Luke (a mid level, executive with the Louvre) greet guests as they arrive. Cloé and her date Tarak are first to arrive. Wendy introduces her date (explains Luke), all exchange pleasantries (Wendy glances around the room for Nanny – not there) She exchanges a big wet passionate kiss with Cloé. (No look around room Nanny sees the kiss game over) Melek is next arriving with her date Gigant, an Austrian. As they exchange pleasantries with Wendy, Gigant absent mindedly rubs Melek’s bottom, she purrs as he does. The Melek duo joins the Cloé pair, Wendy and Luke at the bar.Third guest is Ka-La with her date Hoges an Australian. Wendy moves to greet them and does introductions. The two girls whisper to each other Wendy asks “Really?” Ka-La nods yes and Wendy hefts Hoges’s genitals and replies “You are correct, it is quite large. I would like to see it erect”. Hoges is pleasantly surprised and after ensuring the chaperons are otherwise occupied pulls Wendy’s top away from her chest and peers within. They all mingle at the buffet. Nanny suggests they all dance and turns on the music. The last to arrive is Li-Ann with her Portuguese friend Oscar the entire group moves to greet them and introduce themselves. Nanny leaves the room to refill the cheese and cracker tray and Li-Ann demonstrates a dance move to the young people that discloses she is not wearing panties. Oscar nudges Luke and says (muted voice or it is overheard and game over) it tastes better than it looks and it looks pretty good. (laughter) End of Day 1

Night 1:Most of the young women are very tired having traveled some distance by aircraft and sleep soundly in their rooms. Cloé and Wendy are alert, and venturesome. They with some peril and a little ingenuity get past the doors of the chaperons. They make the male wing and find room by room the same is true for the majority of the males; there are a couple of eager young males found chatting together in one bedroom. No more details for Night 1.

Day 2: There are moments of enticement by both sexes.>

A pair of youngsters tries to sneak away to the outdoor shower. Who are they? Are they of the same sex? Will they succeed or be discovered? Will any young people eagerly act the voyeur?

Another tries to meet in the bath. Who might it be? Will they be seen leaving or be missed at the pool? If successful might they be overheard?

After the cake has been eaten and washed down with even more alcohol, Nanny gives Wendy a key ring containing 2 keys. One fits a private entrance into a new bedroom that she may furnish as she sees fit. The second is to a sporty new Renault Wind.

After the jubilation ebbs, Wendy and Cloé approach Nanny. They suggest they are no longer children and do not need close supervision. Nanny of course objects; the ladies spring the knowledge of her deeds with Frank and strongly suggest she find some method to keep his father entertained away from the pool. Nanny must (grudgingly?) comply. They walk arm in arm into the house.

It is now early evening, the pool lights are on, the young people are alone; clothing optional and no adults to spoil any interaction. What might occur? Who might partake? Will the revelry last all night?

Day 3: Everyone is preparing to return to their homes. Food, hugs, kisses and mifepristone; the final scene is Wendy and a radiant Nanny. Wendy suggests she was not the only one to have received a gift. L