Application Length

Ok looking at the yogscast forum thread it seems that a lot of the people don't understand that we want their background too short but we don't want 20 paragraphs. I was thinking of just making a medium/long sized background for a character as an example or i could just post this link below which is what one of the admins did for their next character in another role play server:

Note: There is a lore that people applying have to follow with their character