The Girl Who Made The Devil Weak

Hanna Williams was purity in every sense of the word.
Never once cheated on anything or anyone, never drank, no drugs whatsoever.
She's never even kissed a boy before.
She was just a normal, boring 20-year old.
But when a terrifying twist of events leads her straight to the Devil himself, her life is never the same.

Okay first of all, the prologue was a little short... But you worked that to your advantage!! You have me hooked in like 500-700 words!! It was perfect, introduced the main character and already set the rest of the book in action!!