When I first read the summary, I didn't think this would work, but after just having read through the entire thing in one go, I must say this fanfic was very, very good.

Although it was pretty confusing at times (wondering when a passage was taking place, what one character had to do with another, and just how the members of the Edgeworth, Von Karma and Fey families were related) I understood the plot by the end. While I don't like thinking of Mia or Misty Fey as people who would engage in kidnapping, it had to be for the plot to make sense. I like how you portrayed the Von Karmas though. Manfred looks downright human next to Morgan, and yet still in-character.

Overall this story was very interesting, dramatic and well-written. And as long and somewhat-hard-to-follow as it was, I still want more. Perhaps give Miles a chance to reconcile with the Von Karmas? And for Franziska to get her "little brother" back? 3

I remember reading this in the kink meme. It's stuff like this that makes me adore the kink meme. I really do enjoy the story, the concept of Franziska being Morgan's daughter really interests me. I love how everyone is characterized here, especially Manfred, Miles and Franziska. I loved the details and mood into this.