Down by MacDougal-- You flitting your eyes at me, sparks dancing out through the humid air and
Erupts into neon-bright fire flies, splashes the pavement and burns like the bridge between us
And I stand less straightly
Cause I bent myself backwards to cover this gap between you and me

Opens curtains kill awaiting dreams of love, sex, and home...

Grasping the edge of the winding metal parapet
Sketching neon breaths and incandescent eyes of the city
Those blinking pseudo suns speaking in exotic tongues
"Morse code's for suckers, Morse code's for suckers" they rant.

Every time I come to you
You fall in shock of what?s become of me
Anger is my attitude
And my sadness is you

Clenching weathered nails in my ceramic palm
As I grasp for oxygen, breathing you in;
Surfacing from the depths of the fluoride ocean calm
Bubbling with a million specks of interest

DanteR*

10-22-2006, 06:27 PM

Emerald

Jammydude44

10-23-2006, 07:05 AM

I'm with Green ^

Jamie

#1 synth

10-23-2006, 02:28 PM

*insert bitching here*

none of the four :p:

Dæmönika

10-23-2006, 03:00 PM

Green.

pixiesfanyo

10-23-2006, 03:13 PM

These suck.

Phoebus

10-23-2006, 03:24 PM

yeah....they do

but green

Dæmönika

10-23-2006, 03:36 PM

These suck.

You're not very likely to write a masterpiece in four lines.

Dirk Gently

10-23-2006, 03:46 PM

^ It doesn't help when they try their hardest to stuff as much pretentiousness into four lines as possible. I think it'd be better if they did 4/5 of a Limerick.

Anyway, Red. It gave me the smallest headache.

Dæmönika

10-23-2006, 04:07 PM

^ It doesn't help when they try their hardest to stuff as much pretentiousness into four lines as possible.

Yeah...but...b...how the hell do you have an answer for everything?

_Mayday_

10-23-2006, 04:22 PM

Yeah...but...b...how the hell do you have an answer for everything?

He's a lawyer, Satan himself gave him his degree.

Dæmönika

10-23-2006, 04:23 PM

He's a lawyer, Satan himself gave him his degree.

Satan's really not living up to his reputation these days...:sad:

_Mayday_

10-23-2006, 05:13 PM

Satan's really not living up to his reputation these days...:sad:

I forgot to mention, Dirk's actually got the Plague.

Dæmönika

10-23-2006, 05:14 PM

Ah, that's OK then.

Dirk Gently

10-23-2006, 05:16 PM

*cough*

Damn boils...

_Mayday_

10-23-2006, 05:46 PM

*cough*

Damn boils...

:haha

Anyways, on topic:

Green and Orange were too ...Blahh... and blue was too simple. Red was just right.

Grasping the edge of the winding metal parapet
Sketching neon breaths and incandescent eyes of the city
Those blinking pseudo suns speaking in exotic tongues
"Morse code's for suckers, Morse code's for suckers" they rant.