i dig the instrumental bit but it's not really the style of hip hop i'd listen to, though i don't listen to much to begin with. so i'm not the best critic in that sense but the beat still has a cool vibe to it.

Hey man I was expecting it to be really bad but honestly it wasn't to bad! Wish I could've heard the lyrics better cause the quality was kinda shitty but I liked it.
You should experiment with some different beats and vocals. But Im geussing your Irish? Not that it matters but I caught the accent when you said good.
Keep it up, if you could post more I will probably listen to them and give you my opinions on them.

Thanks for the comments folks. The quality is shit, yes, youtube did it Sounds decent on my computer. Typical.

I'll post the lyrics up tommorow, they're on a different computer now and i'm about to sleep.

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You should experiment with some different beats and vocals.

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I do! ha, i do quite alot of what i call...creative recording. I'm apprehensive to call it music. Not just rap, tho.

Whole lotta pot said:

Keep it up, if you could post more I will probably listen to them and give you my opinions on them.

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I have a few more rap songs on that youtube channel. Just click the drop down box saying videos or something above that video (first view the song on youtube) to see em. If you do comment id really aprreciate it.