You want your closing statement to be the Mariano Rivera of letters of intent: a clean win, effective, and unambiguous. Don't overthink it! Basic, professional closings are the way to go.

Also, her closing call to action sounds more like a threat. You want to leave the reader with an avenue for follow-up, but don't intimidate them into responding. After all, they're not obligated to respond. You want to make them want to reach out to you for more information or next steps.