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Grab a solid object, repeatedly bashAgainst ya head, Catastrophic felt the need to be backWe snap brackets in half till we get a W,You bet we're here to kill, we spit with thunder too.Planets collapse when we rap, smashing other groupsYes you fear the skill of Catastrophic but that's nothing new.Let you feel the chill, hey D-GAF, wasn't it us?That perfected the back and forth in this section? Nothing to fuck -With, session one is finally back to work againMoving in, killing presence, we Slaughter house warming giftsThis is your warning, kid, we carry the whole section,Burying those questioning stepping to known legends.We're cursing you guys to lose, hurting your mind,It's tournament time, our verses defy the turning of tidesYou're burning alive under how worthy of limelightWe are, looking sour thatour verses will shine bright?We turd on your jive, we formally back break,No feelings hurt for our crimes, we're not morally that way.Performing our rap name on numerous pathsHurricanes hurling flames while the two of us laughMoving us past the competition with a certain skillWorkin' till we get the perfect thrill to make our verses illYou're hurt and peel the scrapes from the wounds when we're awayThen emerges new groups, but these two are back and here to stay.

Spyder = Bold Just Silver = Reg

Just ready to bust? Fuck a tourney I’ve been in it for the sport of itSpit crack or snortin shit, fresh to death… abortionist!I can’t afford the shit I grab the whore, force a splitFold that baby up and shove it back up like a contortionist.Get ya to the morgue quick snappin out ya organsTake your spinal cord to my mic when I’m preformin!Its my time I own it, my zone, fine componentsI line up opponents smoke o's like donuts – Go nutsI’m a overdose of composure and over flowinThese hoes get no emotion Butt some dick in their Colon – oh Shit!Live in your moment before I take it erase it and blow itFuck your penny loafin throw your two cents in the oceanIm spittin the wrath, this aint lyrics its syllable mathYo Just Silver, guess who else is Just Silver, Who? Mr.DGAF - ouchWho are they? Bunch of Cartoon Punches like ToonamiI’m throwin more money shots than Bukkake’s in Tsunamis.Sketchy fuck, gravedigger, crooked shirt your man be shookYou sayin you put in work? Nah I put em in dirt when I throw Sandy Hooks!Too soon? Stay steady focused hey Spyder they don’t know us – Oh Shucks We are flyer than hang gliders and ready to blow up… So whatYou sayin I should… go… slow. No bro ima go rough.Ruff ridin while im muff divin and double time –So fast I go past any kind of flow, and get so tongue tied – I Swallow the knot and throw up till I blow chunks… yuck

ROUND 1 VOTING SHEET: Back'N'Forth[5] Chemistry (How well did they work together. Important for this round)[3] Rhyming/Multis [2] Complexity (How complex were the thoughts/rhyme schemes?)[1] Flow[1] Vocabulary (Word choice and lexicon)[1] Structure (How presentable and easy to read was the verse?)[1]* WOW! Factor (A particular phrase or rhyme that stood out)* This point can be added at judge's discretion, but is not mandatory.

Note: By writing to a beat, flow can be better achieved and may help the judges vote for the Flow point.

Although I'm not a judge, this isn't a battle tournament. Eedee & DGAF clearly had better chemistry more multis better rhyme schemes. I feel the judges went the other way because the punches do make the piece seem stronger, however again this is a Creative Writing tourney not a Rap Battle tournament and they shouldn't have been rewarded some of the points.