This story has quite a bit of potential, I just wished you had developed it a bit more. For instance, what does Daisy look like? Why were she and her friends wanting to go to the club? What sort of zany, wild, wacky adventures have her friends and BTR gotten into? Nobody's going to be angry if you slow down a bit and let the character's have fun. So long as you aren't just padding, you can take your time.
Still though, it has a lot of potential, keep it up. Will definitely continue reading.

Guest chapter 43 . 1/4/2013

LOVE THIS WHOLE STORY!
Almost 200 Reviews :),
Need help;)?

Alex carter chapter 9 . 11/28/2012

Omgzzz you went to a pitbull Enrique and price Royce concert? I went to one too and pitbull is my uncle/dad (my parents died when I was two months old) so yea... I really really love your story :D