I can see that you've grown a lot. There's a lot of things that I can see that would improve this piece (not fix).

Really good work. Remember to focus on lighting and really think about black levels and atmospheric perspective even within some of the foreground elements. Composition is very important too and there's a few things you can do to improve the composition. Gimme 30 minutes tonight and I'll show you.

I know there is tons to do in this and I am taking the mistakes with me on the next matte. I have now worked out a workflow that works for me, I have had a lot of help with this and those of you many many thanks,

Its not the greatest matte out there, however comparing it to my first ever matte its really shows what I have learnt here. The design was done in sketch up and hopefully I can show some of the WIP.