This was a very interesting concept. Unique; something that I love. I wasn't expecting the end, but I should have; never under estimate Severus Snape. Also, I was pleasantly surprised by Lucius. Very good:-)

This was so good. I think it's the Death Eaters who have lost not Severus, Harry, Hermione and Ron. The DE's have lost their souls while Severus keeps theirs safe. I would LOVE to see a sequel.

0 chapter 5 . 1/26/2013

Wow... this is pretty angsty...
I really liked the Lucius and the Sanctuary chapter

Guest chapter 5 . 12/8/2012

So beautiful.
The winners are hurt- almost broken- and paranoid (in the end, rightfully so) living in the past, clinking to soulless bodies.
While the losers live their days in peace, and have something to look forward to, they have hope and they may even have a better future

It's heartbreaking and bittersweet, breathtaking and brutally horrible all in the same go. Brilliant idea. I have read other ficts in the same vein, but you draw such emotion. Lucius' chapter and the last one really grabbed ahold of my heartstrings. They are so poignantly full of emotions. I love your other works, but this one... this one to me is your crowning gem.

It feels like they won, even though they lost. I imagine that they eventually do get free and live the rest of Snape's days in his mind... or maybe they could find a way to reconnect with their bodies.

But even as it is, this ending was very peaceful, oddly enough. I love it.