I love it... This is actually the first one I read here in Fiction press. It's like really light and well written. I like the tense changing abruptly by the way, cos I do that too with my writings. I also hoped that there would be more details about the happy ending, cos it's like so delicious and I'm like I just wanted more of it! How they hugged, they kissed, or more of the romantic not necessarily adulterated stuff that's just such a sigh to read... :)

Aww... they're are so cute together. You did a good job of writing the story.

Zia chapter 1 . 8/13/2010

Nice. Only confused about the 'I asked you out' part. Don't think I ever read it in the story so it makes it stunning to learn that Ian apparently asked Ryan out.

huimei chapter 1 . 6/7/2010

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hahaha, yeah, it's a bit rough-practice will take care of that. but other than that, it was cute. especially ian. the ending seriously cracked me up. :D i think my favorite part is when ryan's like 'you are such a brat.' but yeah, keep writing!