Almost didn't read this because I generally do not care for stories that are OC-centric. Glad I gave it a try. I mostly enjoyed the Neal/Peter exchanges out of everything, especially Neal's insecurity and Peter's reassurances at the end. Thanks!-DB

Ummm... I'm pretty sure Sterling Bosh is one person, I can be wrong... Great story!

Guest chapter 18 . 3/10/2013

amazing!

Guest chapter 18 . 3/9/2013

wonderful!great job.

MC70 chapter 7 . 1/2/2013

Fun! I love research...and your story. Just discovered your writing and am thoroughly enjoying myself. Can't wait to read more. Also, just read the first chapter for your latest piece Crosshairs and am super excited to see where it goes!

This was a fantastic story. I loved how you developed the interpersonal relationships between Ender, Neal, Peter and El. I especially loved the banter between Peter and Neal over Neal's insecurities over his status in the family being usurped. I truly hope you do write a story about Neal's past. I look forward to any future stories involving this new "family". You have a great sense of humor which makes your stories a delight to read. Great job.

Awww! I really liked Ender finally latching onto Peter as a source of safety and security, after needing some time to warm up to him. I was not expecting a major shake-up to the status quo on the show, so the Burkes adopting Ender was a surprise, but it's a nice ending for all of them! Poor Peter and Elizabeth - they have gotten themselves a real handful of trouble, especially with uncles Neal and Mozzie to "help out". I would love to see more stories, long or short, in this universe.

Guest chapter 17 . 11/14/2012

I love this story and I am looking forward to epilogue and any other stories about Ender, the Burkes and Neal.