“FORBIDDEN was an enjoyable piece in how it tricked us into anticipating many things and coming to an all-out entertaining ending. Good work.”

TSUGIHARA'S COMMENT

“This has the most orthodox form of story telling and is all the better for it. It not only has an enjoyable ending, but good steps throughout leading to that climax.”

HOJO'S COMMENT

“It is a well told story, but I felt it could be made even more impressive if the creator focused on making some key events more "in-your-face". Try exaggerating and cutting out some panels where doing that would give better rhythm. Thank you YOS, for this entertaining piece.”

ZENON+SMAC! Editorial team comment:

“We are blessed with many great entries from Brazil again. This time YOS's story took the top spot.We are happy that he is joining SMA MASTERCLASS and to meet him in Tokyo soon. Looking forward to working with him!”