excellent! Three different points of view each concise but complete. Your English structure has always been very good but your high school and college experience have really made this a polished piece (of course it helps that you have talent also).

I can see why you fell inlove with this piece of writing. I mean, it's so unique with the different POV. I don't like all the same writing for different POVS but you did a good job here. Keep up the gooood work Kayla. I really enjoy your writing. (: