Magic dream

I used a picture of how humans look in different ages from a sience book as reference for the girl. The rest is out of my head. I am very pleased with everything except the eyes. They didn't turn out as I wanted. I was attempting to draw a hooded head and nearly the only thing that would be seen throgh the shadows was these eyes. Any suggestions on how to accomplish this are welcome :). A story? how about this?The princess Everil of the small but beautiful land Feward is kidnapped buy the evil warlock Zûxyrq. Everil's mother queen Alanew asks the arch wizard Meganus to use his powers to see where the princess has been taken. After several hours Meganus finally finds her -Where are you going little princess? He quietly asks the image, well aware that she is unable to hear him. He then summons two spirits in the form of animals to aid her. Now quick plans must be made for her rescue!