Hi Darren, where have you been in the past years? Not sure if you still remember me?

Anyway, I think your theme is not that bad tho. But as you know, the standards raised in the past few years There are a few areas that required improvements especially the content area and typography. Design wise, it looks a bit dated at the moment. However, with some refinements, it could stand stronger with its ‘unique’ style.

Of course, I remember you. You rejected so many of my themes in the past, how can I forget? Just kidding. For a while, I’ve given up on design and focused on development and stuff. Now I decided to design again and this is what I came up with. So I guess that’s the reason my design looks “dated”.

Thanks a lot for the input. I will try to improve the design but I just don’t know where to begin. So I hope you don’t mind me asking – if you were asked to improve this theme and make it “TF ready”, what are the specific things you’ll change? I would really appreciate just a few pointers.

Thanks man!

Darren

kailoon said
Hi Darren, where have you been in the past years? Not sure if you still remember me?

Anyway, I think your theme is not that bad tho. But as you know, the standards raised in the past few years There are a few areas that required improvements especially the content area and typography. Design wise, it looks a bit dated at the moment. However, with some refinements, it could stand stronger with its ‘unique’ style.

well for me the nav really kills it… the dividers are way to strong that light bluish color border really stands out to much, and it kind of feels cramped there the content just aint breading. The nav typo is also a bit blurish and not so nice clean cut.

The corrections on the nav should improve it greatly. Tho there are more issues with spacings.

For me personally the background just doesn’t fit with the design, design is fairly modern and relatively clean tho the background is oldish medieval like.

Some image hovers and links hovers would give an overall more quality feel.

The learn more buttons under the 3 icons: i would align it with the text the the overall icon and content “box” now it just looks messy.

And as i sad already overall spacing need to be improved a lot… more spacing between the tittles and content, between overall parts of page. Everything is to stacked up, give it some breeding area.