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Well it was brought to my attention that my last version shared the same ambient background as another song previously submitted so i went ahead and changed it, that is the only difference between this version and the old version of the song and, as far as i can tell, the end of the similarities between my song and "Gold Clone" (by the way check it out its pretty cool haha) well let me know what you think

peace
-fosterchild

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Rated 4 / 5 stars2008-07-08 04:29:37

Hey, long time no see.

Know what? I actually had noticed you were gone. Noticed it had been a while without submitting new songs XD. For the song now, the beginning is really good. The sounds come in on a not too long regular basis. After the sound that comes in at approxemetly 1:30, it's starts to get repetitive there. But cheer up! they're is worse repetitiveness (is that even a word? XD). Overall, it was good, with a slight repetitivity (well this one is for sure). Rust hasn't gained you yet, so keep 'em coming ^_^.

really? haha well thanks for noticing! thanks! well if it wasnt before it is now haha, thats good to hear haha thanks for reviewing yet again! oh and i just put up the third version of this song, is quite a bit less repetitive haha

Rated 4 / 5 stars2008-07-05 21:46:24

Like already said, too repetitive

The beats here are all good, but they repeat over and over with no change. Every time a new beat comes in, its exciting again, but that excitement is ruined when the same beat continues for another minute or so. What really would have done the track justice is if you added some melody to go over what you already have. Maybe a string-imitation synth or an eery casiotone or distorted bass guitar, etc. something to give more flare to what you already have. However, the track is still pretty good, especially at the end.

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars2008-07-05 20:09:00

Welcome back =]

hey man, welcome back to newgrounds! You got a pretty good song going on here. Only thing that could be improved on would be diversity. It tends to get repetitive. i did like that downplaying synth at 2:08. The ending was good, a simple low energy fading out ending....
Overall song had very good elements, the panning hi-hats, low grumbling sounds, the eerie melodies. But extreamly repetitive. Work on having more diverse sounds...
Keep up the awesome work. Oh and i dont think you lost any skill =P
4/5
9/10

haha thanks
yeah i know what you mean, i found myself jumping through sections cuz i was getting bored of them while editing....probably a clue....haha, dont worry ill edit it again, make it a song actually worth listening to....haha
thanks again