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harrylilyjames says:I am totally with you with hating Cho...grrr.
The first thing I noticed was on the first sentence you wrote, "and her giggling." -which isn't correct grammar, probably something along the lines of "and her soft girlie giggles erupted throughout the hall."
OMG!! How dare she call Ginny a slut! I couldn't believe it when I read that. -gasps-
I think you did a really good job with her, I could totally relate to her feelings, especially how she regretted breaking up with Harry- I always had a feeling that she didn't walk away and say 'oh well, that was fun' and then turn back up a few years later to try to get with him again, that she always secretly regretted ever breaking up with him.
Nice job.

Author's Response: Well, I can't exactly make it say that because the thing was 500 words exactly... But I'll try to word it better.