*sniffle* You're so mean. You put them through all that trouble just to have a bad ending. WHY WHY WHY? Please tell me that in a sequel they will escape. Poor Shadii and Ankhkare and Senui.I hope they'll be okay

*sob* It's over! I can't believe it. Oh well. It was a sort of gross way. He keeps the items in his flesh? Ew. *shudders* You're right, this is wide open for a sequel. I hope you get to write one someday!

*blinks* That's it? It's over? So soon? Sorry, but I expected it to be like one of those soap operas that goes on and on and on. but I'm sure this is much better than any soap opera.

I certainly never expected it to end like this. I was kinda knocked out for a minute, I was so surprised. I kept on thinking about the chapter when they had trouble with that Bobasa guy snoring, and how funny it was, and I kept comparing it to this chapter, and I was just. shocked that it could do such a flip-flop and manage to maintain credibility at all. Not that the writing's bad, it's just that it doesn't feel like an ending. To me, anyway.

Yami Li - *sits cross-legged in front of Bobasa and stares at the spot where the Scales would be if his vest was openend*

Bobasa What is this.?

Li Sorry. She's obssessed with the Scale's spirit. And since she's been away, I guess he finally found a good hidng spot.. somewhere where she COULDNT get to him.

Bobasa *gasp* Obssessed with the Items? *blink* Wait, you have one too. *eyes go red* I MUST PROTECT! _ *grabs Armband and puts it in this weird donut shaped hole*

Li OO; NO! MY ARMBAND!

Yami Li Squee! I'm coming, Scale! _

*from somewhere out of sight Scale screams VERY audibly*

Li ; Sowwy, Scale. Anyways, Indigo, I have an idea. If you don't feel like writing a sequel or want to see where the story would go if you DIDN'T write it, you could always challenge reviewers to do it, then write your own, and see what ideas people have. You get the credit, the readers get to have fun and free the poor guys, and Scale would have a chance of getting AWAY from Yami Li. I just thought it would be interesting. U Anyways, I loved the story as usual, and am VERY sad that it's done! ;_;

*muffled, from somewhere out of sight:

YL Squee! I wuv you! _

Scale *pitifully sobbing* ;_; Wahhehwa.

Li Wahehwa?

Scale WAHEHWA! GOT A PROBLEM? *hic* Weh.

Li Weh..?

Scale CAN'T YOU LEAVE ME ALONE? IT'S BAD ENOUGH WITH YOUR OTHER HALF!

Li Er. sorry. U

Scale *grumble wah*

Li Er. I hope VERY much to see a sequel! *hopeful look* See? Anyways. bai for now, and I'll see you later!

*gapes, then bursts out laughing* BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA! A far lesser (shorter) man than the pharaoh! *continues laughing* It's too bad that there aren't any more chapters past 30 *sighs* I've always loved this story *sighs* I'm getting to be a Ankhare/Senui fan _

radiany

P.S. Sorry this is so short! I'm having a moment of distress here!

Guest chapter 30 . 2/23/2003

! You aren't really gonna end this fic are you? You can't! My life won't be complete if this story doesn't continue! NO! T_T

(0_0) Wow! That was . . . unexpected, to say the least! I’m glad that you saved Shadi’s (beautiful! _- ) body, though. I think I already hate Bobasa enough. -;; (What the heck happened to Shadi in the official manga? I haven’t read the more recent chapters yet, but I don’t think anyone said anything about him falling off the face of the earth. . . .)

You did a fantastic job on this fic, and I’m sorry to see it ending. *Crosses her finger and prays for more* I’d love it if you were to write a prequel of when Shadi first got Scale and Ankh. I’m curious as to how he would have reacted to meeting them. _

Anyway, I loved every chapter of this. You’re a wonderful writer, and I’m looking forward to seeing more of your work. _