I thought I'd read this one of your stories because the summary drew me in so! We all know how it feels when a relationship ends badly, and on some level I can perfectly understand what Molly is feeling, but on another she is so far gone it's unsettling.

The whole structure of it and how there is sometimes just an unbroken stream of words and thoughts in her mind, and the repitition is completely believable. It's very illustrative of exactly what is going through her and how crazed and heartbroken and angry she is.

I would say I feel sorry for Lysander but because he left her with a somewhat knowledge of her mental state makes me dislike him xD

Stunning, great job! :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for this review! I'm so pleased that you liked this story! Even if she's a bit far gone to really relate to. Bad break up's are bad enough to deal with without adding the extra crazy in. You're the first to tell me of your mixed feelings with Lysander and i'm not going to defend him but also, on his side of it, he's dealt with this kind of behaviour before, he's had to deal with her and her obsession with perfection. This doesn't excuse him from just leaving her like that, but he's just tired and doesn't know how to deal and doesn't see it as his responsibility anymore. Also, in that moment, it was her way to try and manipulate his feelings to get him to come back and he wasn't going to fall for it again.