Survivor - Chapter 1 - The Trip

This is the first part of a story of friendship, betrayal and war. A group of people are stranded on an undiscovered island which not even the ancient dwellers inhabited. But how did they get there? Read on to find out...

Submitted: January 23, 2012

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The wind swept Kimi's hair away from her face. Kimi knew about these things; there was a storm coming. She didn't know when, but it was going to be a big one. She started to get a little nervous,
as well as worried about the four kids.

None of them were hers, they were the kids of two other young couples, Mark and Susan, and Lewis and Kate. Mark and Susan were very social people. Susan went nowhere without her mobile phone, and
Mark couldn't bear it without his cigarettes. Susan, however, to the confusion of Mark, did not want to take up the habit.

Lewis and Kate, however, were quite the opposite. But lets not get into those details now. As Kimi had predicted, the storm came about three hours later, and oh, what a storm it was! Salt water
sprayed all over the deck, and Mark had almost died because the window in his cabin had shattered to pieces and the water came flooding in, but Lewis saved him.

But Mark's way of thanks was not well appreciated. He picked up a gun, loaded it, and started pushing everyone overboard! One of the children tried to resist, and Mark shot her in the leg. She
survived, but fell into the water. Lewis, on the job again, saved her from drowning. Mark kept Susan with him, but left the others to die...