One of the stories that I always come back to reread even though it's been 5 years. I always try to picture what happens next, but I lack any of my own creative juices. I feel like Bella isn't as understanding as she should be to what Edward is currently going through. I think they need some alone time. (I wonder if my opinion has changed over time)

Nell chapter 12 . 8/15/2016

I dont know why you stopped writing this, but please! Come back! it is such a different scenario than the original but i find myself liking it even more :) dont stop!

I don't get it. If they are watching entire days through one another, how could they believe the other is imaginary. Especially edward. I mean he watched her grow right? So... what the hell? Where's all that brain power? They should have figured this out in a month (Edward at least) and he should have been in contact from then on. What is all this 'I think am crazy business?"

Sorry, but I don't see how anyone could miss such an obvious catch. There is no way Edward is that stupid. How is it possible that he couldn't figure this out?

And given her day to day life. Why not think to reach out to one another? Penpals something? Especially after letting Bella know that he is a vampire.

Wait... wait wait... if he thought she was imaginery, then why all the procaution to hide that fact or any explicit activities? To him she wasn't real tell today so why the pretense?

I cant believe u wasted a chapter and then not finish the story...dude some people liled it and u just abandoned it lole wtf i really lived this story and u abandoned it...

jk chapter 10 . 1/17/2016

now shes a fucking cutter...seriously...just cause her mom died? god bella grow the fuck up. miss her, think about her every so often, cry sometimes...but for the love of god stop being a pussy.

and bellas inner monologue is fucking annoying...emo whore should shut the fuck up. she just goes on and on and on and on and on and on and on...about not much!

kl chapter 7 . 1/17/2016

what the hell was that...Edward says hes seen a naked Tanya when she...then it just cuts off. OMG was he with Tanya sperm dumpster denali? sOSOOOOOOOO gross

jk chapter 6 . 1/17/2016

lol she acts like shes been through SOOOO much...wish I had her problems ya know...pussy

jk chapter 3 . 1/17/2016

I hate people that cant or wont talk about shit...its been three months and she clams up like a pussy and cries immediately when telling people that her mom died...ya its a bg deal but deal with your shit ya know? and she just comes off as a pussy...like shes milking it for attention...I just wouldn't have made it without you...yaaaaa ooookkkkk

and what the fuck is infant school? you mean elementary? preschool? wtf is infant school?