Umm... This story needs more content. It also needs more originality. This story line has been done WAY too much. That's why you aren't getting many people. There is soo much more you could do to make them come.

If you want a higher chance of success, a more detailed plot would be invaluable. Check the [link=http://boards.theforce.net/role_playing_resource/b10757/23331985]Community Center and Index[/link] for more information. Happy Roleplaying.