i loved this and i think he did a perfect job of getting into sam's head with how he does want to lose his brother and i love how dean just shuts down when things are super bad like from what he said in season one, i love concerned bobby and castiel too, its really good

The story is excellent so far. Poor Sam trying to get through to Dean and poor Dean having the knowledge of what happened in hell. Hopefully Sam and Cas can bring him back from the brink. Thank you for sharing!

I want the boys to talk too! I keep asking of this season, 'where is the love?' But for Sam to have to taken the risk of what he did with Ruby in order to be strong enough to save Dean, that is love, just misguided love. This is a great beginning for a story and I hope for a longer chapter and lots of talking between them and some healing. Nicely done!

Can't wait to see how you play this out (can't wait to see how the show does as well). Poor Dean! He's been fighting to keep the seals from being broken as it was a way to keep his baby brother from going darkside, and here he finds out he was the one to start the whole thing! He must be devastated.