OMG I LOVE CHEESE SO MUCH! This was really cute and really sweet and really... OMG Seamus is just so Irish, with his thinking of "manly" drinks and all that!

Whilst your story was awesome, what I enjoyed the most were the little things - the description of the owl landing, the mirror that yelled at you, the waiter's piercings... I thought they really lended some fullness to the story, just fleshing it out and adding those little touches that made it even more uniquely your story.