Comments 25 comments

This was beautiful, extraordinaire! So much feeling, heart and soul. You did very well, I loved it!

Levertis Steele 3 years ago from Southern Clime

So beautiful! The loss of a loved one is so painful, and the healing takes its own sweet time. It is hard to let go, so we make frequent trips to the grave where our love lies. O, that we could get a sign at a time that the pain is so sweetly severe!

Thanks for sharing such sorrowful beauty.

AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

Beautiful, beautiful write Rasma!

passionate77 3 years ago

OMG, so lovely, awesome explanation of those lovely feelings that we come across when we regain some other true love that heals our wounded soul, after getting the pain in previous one. such a nice poetic expression i bookmarked the poem, thanks for sharing it Rasma, BEAUTIFUL, AWESOME AND ALSO SHARED AND VOTED UP. stay blssed dear!

wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Sad beginning, but you left us with comforting beauty.

Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

I love the point you make of them not actually being in the grave but just a point of contact. I find that so true. ^

Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

So wonderfully laid out. thank you

Anna Haven 3 years ago from Scotland

The continual love from beyond our mortal life is beautifully portrayed here. An ending full of hope.

jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Wonderful and beautiful. I hope that you have a wonderful weekend. Jamie

Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Wow, Gypsy, this is stunningly beautiful and profound! Thank you for this beautiful write here.

Have a great weekend!

Up and more and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper

Sueswan 3 years ago

Hi Gypsy,

Heartfelt, beautiful and romantic. Loved it!

Voted up ++++

ocfireflies 3 years ago

I love a happy ending. Thank You!

Kim

Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

Beautiful poem gypsy, its lovely when someone can find another love after all the heartache, nell

thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

Loneliness is so hard to bear. Your poem is very nice.

Minnetonka Twin 3 years ago from Minnesota

You really gave me goosebumps with this love story. Very touching and tender. Hit many buttons and voted up.

Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

What a wonderful thing to read in the morning here in Kathmandu. Your poem evokes sweet memories that create lingering taste.

shampa sadhya 3 years ago from NEW DELHI, INDIA

It's just fantastic. I lack words to do justice to this poem.

ImKarn23 3 years ago

And, they lived happily ever after! EVERYBODY DANCE !

Rasma has created a musical number that only SHE can. I always leave your little hub-corner feeling uplifted and hopeful, my friend..

Thanks for that..

sharingxx

BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Beautiful poem and lovely thoughts.

Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia Author

Had a busy weekend. Hope you all have a great week. Wishing you all lots of sunshine and good thoughts.

Glad you enjoyed this wetnosedogs.

Glad you enjoyed this bluebird.

Glad you enjoyed this Levertis. I was listening to that song and it just kind of inspired.

Glad you enjoyed this Audrey.

Glad you enjoyed this passionate77 and thanks for the vote and share. Blessings to you.

I often think that beginning again is the hardest part when you lose a loved one Wayne. Made me think of people receiving signs.

Jackie our loved ones always remain with us the grave is just a place to put some symbolic flowers.

Glad you enjoyed this Martin.

I feel that there must always be hope Anna.

Glad you enjoyed this Jamie.

Glad you enjoyed this Faith. Thanks for the vote and share. God bless.

Glad you enjoyed this Sueswan and thanks for the vote.

Happy endings are the best Kim.

Right Nell it's always great if you can go on and find another love.

Loneliness is hard Thost always good to find someone to share life with.

Glad you enjoyed this Linda and thanks for the vote.

Glad this brings memories Vinaya.

Glad you enjoyed this Shampa.

Glad I can bring you uplifting feelings Leslie. Thanks for the vote and share. Hugs.

Glad you enjoyed this Blossom.

Vellur 3 years ago from Dubai

Beautifully expressed sad thoughts. Touched my heart. Voted up.

Kathryn Stratford 3 years ago from Manchester, Connecticut

This is beautiful. It sent chills up my arm!

~ Kathryn

Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Oh how truly beautiful Ruby; you are so talented and I am glad I have the time today to catch up with you. Lots of love my hub sis and enjoy your day.