i really, really love this series. i don't know if you've ever thought about going back and proofreading it, you use soar for sore, and hear for here, things like that, quite a bit. sometimes it can be distracting, which is a shame, because content wise, this is one of the best P&P fics i've ever read.

Brilliant. The writing is GREAT. And the suspense-:)))))D! Very good beginning to a what I'm sure will be beautifully crafted story. But I MUST ask-what happened to the lovely, porcelain, angelic Jane that she threatens nonchalantly to wring her husband's neck? :P

I must say this has been my favourite fanfic read ever I loved the ending. I had to nearly suffocate my self to keep from laughing as I was supposed to be asleep... Although I found several historical inaccuracies I shall let them pass because overall it was a very amusing story.