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*laughs* I was just starting on writing some porn based on this (dedicated to you, of course), but I certainly don't mind adding it to the fic in the future! (Provided we can get Harry to do something silly enough to earn this punishment--perhaps Snape's trying to teach him to take better care of the... Potions instruments after Harry accidentally breaks a few. 'Obviously, Mr Potter, you haven't been taught the value of things. I'm going to ensure that you never treat my property carelessly. Ever. Again.')

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--Wait, wait. I just got an idea. How about co-writing this like 'Nights Nothings'? A few paragraphs from Harry's perspective, alternated with a few paragraphs from Snape's... That'd save us the formatting, and would make a 'proper' fic, instead of, say, comment-porn.

And d'you want to start with being late to detention, or breaking the vials? (Or exploding the cauldron, or whatever?) We could launch straight into the punishment, if you'd like... ;)

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Well, if you want to write it on its own, far be it from me to stop you. My brain stopped functioning a while back.

But I can't imagine it will be difficult to get Harry to break shit. I think he's going to be pretty jumpy around Snape. And, ha. Snape could startle him on purpose so he drops things. And then, obviously, he'll need to be punished.

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Oh god, same here. All I can feel--I mean see--now is Snape standing behind Harry, sliding the vial in and out as Harry shakes and gasps, trying to hold himself still... And Harry's hard, so hard, but he's more terrified than he's ever been in his life--and Snape's murmuring in his ear, bringing up a palm to grasp Harry's throat:

'You like this, don't you? It's supposed to be a punishment, Potter, you're not supposed to be hard--but you always need something inside you, don't you? Does it even matter what it is?'

And then Snape--twists it--and Harry rises to his toes and whines. His eyes are wide and dark, and sweat beads his forehead...

'Little whore,' Snape whispers. 'Perhaps I should let you come like this--let you feel the glass crack the moment you do, until you can feel it, piercing you, cutting you as you cry out--'

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Snape could startle him on purpose so he drops things. And then, obviously, he'll need to be punished.

:D You've got Snape down pat, there. D'you know I actually wrote something similar ages ago? 'A Man of Habit', I think, in which Snape casts secret hexes in class just to make Harry stuff up, and then he assigns Harry detentions (which end in shagging)...