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Originally named Disregarding Italian Cheese, this is an intro to what i hope to make into a small series. If you're a little confused now, things will be much better when *ahem* Ibay delivers the electronic briefing notebook.

Tell me what you think :D and yes, the audio was somehow messed up with exporting. Gotta fix that somehow...

(Trivia: My first movie with sound effects! :D)

Reviews

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars2009-09-09 21:55:12

close, reeeeaaaaal, close.

im a stickler for spelling and grammar and it really bugs me when things dont make sense in a sentence and the language is just weird. i love the graphics and the story is not terrible, but if you're gonna put that much effort into the graphics then i'd try and match it with the level of english competency haha. otherwise great job.

Same as me, but I'll admit to my (very strict) English teacher, I didn't make a first nor a second draft :D I let myself go this time. I'll make sure not to let that happen again. Thanks for the review ^.^