Its a beautiful image and so is the small yet powerful poetic description. However, in my opinion, it needs to be cropped from all sides. Not only the subject should not be exactly in the centre, the background here is also distracting. follow the minimalist approach in composition. Happy shooting! :)

7 Jul 2014 11:57am

@Neeraj Sahay: Thank you for your feedback, Sir. Will keep the minimalist approach in mind next time :)