Okay. I like this story. It's very interesting, and there aren't many Charlie/OC stories out there, next to none where the OC is a muggle, and fics where the OC wasn't a childhood/Hogwarts friend.
However, and I have to say this, just because it's okay for Emilia to know about magic (because she and Charlie fell in love/are dating) that's not okay for Talia or anyone else *cough*Waylon*cough* to know about it. It's a very big Statute of Secrecy breach. Talia found out about magic through being nosy and Charlie not being careful enough when displaying magic, but that's why Obliviate was invented. If all muggles who were friends with other muggles who knew about the magical world were told about magic as well, it's safe to assume that soon it wouldn't be a secret anymore.
That's really the only nit-picky thing I have to say about this fic.
In all other aspects, great job! :)

Hey, I just have a quick question. Why is it that Charlie never seems to use magic? He could have easily stunned the dogs and saved the lab mix if only he'd used his wand. And even for the clothing issue, why didn't he just transform the colour of his shirt; I mean, isn't that basic 2nd year stuff he should've learned in Hogwarts?

soccerluver11 chapter 30 . 12/31/2008

Wow. I just stayed up past midnight to finish reading your story, and by far this is the best CharlieXoc story I've read. It's nice seeing some good stories about Charlie. He's a great character that deserves some more attention. All in all, great story! Keep on writing!

The rating confuses me. There is no where that suggests higher than a K, maybe K, rating. Overall, the grammar is really good. You must have an awesome beta! It is much more detailed than other stories I've read. Great job!

*sob* its all over! one of my favorite stories that ive been reading since the beginning!

but it was a great story and completely worth reading :) i was completely expecting charlie to propose (because that is how it always goes in fanfics) but i thoroughly enjoyed the ending you created and it was so sweet with a happy ending for both the human couple and the dragon family... i only hope that emilia and talia continue to have their close friendship, especially since talia knows about magic now too and can visit! but this is my mind getting away with me. loved your story. thank you for writing it! :D

I just had a very nice couple of hours eating biscuits and reading this story. I like Emilia and smiled at her introduction to the magical world. The plot is really intrieguing too - I look forward to seeing what happens next!