@Alohilani: Just a joke, in 'Doctor Who' (British TV series) the Doctor alters a mobile phone so it can call though vast distances of time and space, just so Rose can call her Mum occasionally. He somehow manages this with a few minutes and a sonic screwdriver. I just found this page reminded me of that.

I like the artwork, but the story really isn't gelling with me. I really liked page 18 in particular, and the characters are dynamic and interesting. I just can't get into the story. I don't know what it is but something is turning me away from your comic and I can't quite put my finger on it.

Nook worked okay for her, though she wound up exclusive on Kindle so she could take advantage of Amazon exclusivity benefits. The only reason KI isn't on Nook right now is because the formatting is different than for Kindle, and I haven't found the time to get it ready for Nook yet. I apologize for the inconvenience! I do want to publish it to Nook when I can.

@Alohilani: I bought it and, um, the DRM's pretty cripply. I tried opening it yesterday on my work computer, but it wanted to install stuff(poorly) and talked about activating on a few computers so I cancelled that. I got it home to Ubuntu, and Adobe Reader completely ignores it. On my Nook both first-party PDF readers reject it(with the same behavior as a completely-corrupt file).

@Darekun: At least, I don't have any control over how Lulu copyrights what they sell, but I can give you a replacement watermarked PDF directly. I won't be able to get it until next week, though. I'm sorry for the inconvenience.