Its absurd, but still very Seimei like, to consider something as miniscule as a paint smear on fingers to be "casual filth." And Im pretty sure this is the first fiction Ive ever read for Loveless, I just couldnt resist c:

The language itself was pretty, simple but descriptive, and as an art student it was fun to read a fic where the author actually knows anything about art. The characterization was wonderful as well - you always seem to get the hard characters like Soubi and Seimei down exactly right.

Thank you very much for writing such an enjoyable fic. :)

-Yutaan

Teka Lynn chapter 1 . 12/9/2007

You capture Soubi between worlds so well here. Every detail and word placement is perfect.

ylib chapter 1 . 11/29/2007

Interesting character study. I have to ask if you study art. You know a lot a particulars. If not, good researching.

I like character studies, but I personally prefer stories with a stronger plot. Have you thought about doing more with making a new environment or threat?