Author Comments

My first comic project of this length, It was done within 5 weeks and I didn't wanna do anything too over the top. Don't take the whole thing seriously and if youre looking for something deep or meaningful you wont find it.
It is what it is, I hope some may enjoy it.

Cause of the file size it had to be divided in 2 parts.

Warning: Contains Cartoon Porn, if you are easily offended by that you shouldn't look through it!

Rated 5 / 5 stars2010-07-12 00:53:07

Shit, I'm excited.

The only bad thing was the font. Sometimes I skipped words because I couldn't read them.
It's good as a comic. I came wanting to fap, but it's serious. And it's not, "aw wtf no sex?" it's "holy shit nice comic." Now I really want to see how Jack deals with John.
Shit, I'm excited.

Rated 5 / 5 stars2010-07-09 03:52:18

Amazing artwork

Dude, you have talent. I mean, I had already seem your artwork, but this comic was so detailed... everything was nicely colored, and the whole storyline and characters were believable. Well, at least they were for me. I can relate to Jack, for the most part.

I didn't have any problems whatsoever with how the comic worked in Flash, the actionscript worked fine, and the Expand Movie button helped a lot. I also really liked the way you didn't show an whole page at once, but rather, blacked out most of it and gradually show it all with the press of the right arrow key. Nice touch.

Also, not trying to sound like an ass, but just a heads up. Through the whole comic, you wrote "you're" (as in, you are) instead of "your". It wasn't really annoying or anything, but it's just something you might want to keep in mind for future works.

Now, if you'd excuse me, I'm curious to see what will happen with Jack and Kelly. Keep up the good work.