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dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:Fred. My boy, my light child. Dead. His thread cut far before his rightful time, his life stripped away by twisted men who see children as threats to their own existence.

This is your first piece? You are one powerful writer. I felt like this was so poetic and just kind of heartbreaking. I felt Molly's emotion and I actually felt like crying with each person she name. First Fred, that's where it started to read poetically and then when you named Harry, and then Ginny, the repition was just wonderful it packed such a powerful punch and that scene at the end is a huge one in Harry Potter that I'm amazed at how you were able to connect Molly's feelings to it. She's really a complicated character to write in my opinion because she's such a strong woman.

Excellent job!

Author's Response: It was my first HARRY POTTER piece, but yeah, it was one of my early fan fics. It was completely random that I was writing Molly but I am rather proud of how it ended up. Thank you so much for this review!