iight keystyled in less than 15 minutes (pardon the grammar and spelling)

This battle like a BAD SCHOOL KID WHO’S NOT SMART versus a GRAD STUDENT WHO’S GOT HEART/
and I just finished up at York University so I guess u in for an ASS WHOOPING FROM
CHOP CHOP/ (get ready boi)
I “construct” and ‘cater’ my verses with “punches” and ‘prayers’ like the MAPPED BLUEPRINTS FOR LARGE MOSQUES/
so it’s only ‘holy’ that we stay drunk with that ‘moonshine’ cuz once we get ‘high’…nigga we HAVE LANDINGS LIKE ARMSTRONG! (Neil Armstrong landed on the moon)and as far as my crew…we BANG DEUCES AND POP OFF and we ‘roll so deep’
that we call GANG TRUCES IN BALLPARKS/
But if ya team ACT FOOLISH AND SQUAD NARCS then ya’ll getting ‘swung at by my club’…like ya whole MASS UNIT IS GOLF BALLS! (golf balls are swung at by golf ‘clubs’ and a club=team=crew=squad=gang=mass unit)
murkfest winnin this battle…lol…it will never happen like SHAQ LOSING HIS BALD SPOT, illMAC SHOOTING A LONG SHOT, or seeing STAN KUBRICK IN POM POMS or PAT EWING IN SEAN JOHN!
Plus u get no pussy to impress a chick u the type to get a TATTOO OF A WARTHOG/
so that makes me believe that when u say that ur ‘pullin chicks’…nigga ur ‘full of shit’…like a BATHROOM FOR AN AARDVARK! (haaaaan)
my DAD’S TRUE GRIT IS HARDBALL he raised me as a soldier…by the ‘age of 6’ I ‘sprayed the clip’ and learned the basics on DEFUSING A CAR BOMB/
plus on the streets ur WACK, STUPID, AND SOFT DAWG so when the ‘foes arrive’ it’s ‘no surprise’ that ur fate is like this website…cuz we RAP MUSIC…AND DOT COM! (omg)

i put the MAG TO HIM, GO POP POP
you know your MAN'S RUTHLESS WITH SAWED OFFS
how you gonna PACK RUGERS WITH POM POMS?
bitch, you probably think SAZOO IS A MOB BOSS
i think this FAGS SUITED FOR HOPSCOTCH
if you were sisqo's music video directer, you wouldve HAD DUDES FOR THE THONG SONG
he has a crush on conceited, like "i love TATTOOS ON A HOT BOD"
he wishes he was BLACK TOO LIKE A DOS PROMPT
next to his mac, hes got MAD LUBE AND A WASHCLOTH
his favorite movie is qp's porno, and when this FAG VIEWS IT, HES NOT SOFT
infact he WACKED TO IT AND GOT CAUGHT
yelled out "stay out of my DAMN ROOM MOM, YOU COCKBLOCK"
if he tried to commit a crime hed be like "i CANT DO THIS" AND CALL COPS
while i GRAB TOOLIES, LET SHOTS OFF and bring the CRACK THROUGH TO GET BLOCK GWAP
you only hustle WACK MUSIC ON BLOGSPOTS
ya TRACKS USELESS, THEY NOT HOT
while mine got the VALUE OF A PAC SONG
get this FAG BOOTED AND TOSSED OFF from RAP MUSIC NOW CHOP LOST
when you rap, the timekeepers got their HANDS GLUED TO THE STOPWATCH
cause everything you spit is WACK STUPID AND SOFT DAWG

I got to go wit murkfest for legibility and actually using a couple of personals. I know its tough when you're stuck to one scheme but he actually made fun of choppa, where as chop didn't really hit murkfest with anything that directly related to him.

I gave my reasoning against that because I thought murkfest actually dissed choppa's character directly while maintaining less-forced patterns. Its hard to not force a little when using a 7 syllable scheme for 16-20 bars, and I just thought murkfest did it less.

I do respect choppa for coming with his verse quickly, but its just like freestyling in GT. Might get you a little respect but at the end of the day not gonna win you battles. I think maybe choppa is just lazy to show us his best material yet because nobody is ready for his pen game. He is part of SONS camp which is known for being some of the best writers, so I know he prolly got a sharp pen game but maybe isn't allowed to share his creations with us yet because of strict training regimen with SONS.

hes probably crafting 16 bars on one concept with 13 multis (none forced) in the time it takes murkfest to do his hair like mine (not actually that long of a time). But he has to submit those bars to QP / con I'm guessing and they benchmark his progress. So he just has to use throwaway shit here, and still doing dope

I got to go wit murkfest for legibility and actually using a couple of personals. I know its tough when you're stuck to one scheme but he actually made fun of choppa, where as chop didn't really hit murkfest with anything that directly related to him.

both went in crazy doe

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This ^ tbh.
Although Choppa came very nice this time around, I liked how he took a leaf from his idol qp and explained the bars. He also had nice set ups and it flowed very nicely considering it was done in 15 mins, etc which is impressive. However I honestly think as fast as you write your bars you should take your time as well because they kind of lose their novelty once the other persons puts theirs down.

I thought Murkfest took it overal, his was just more precise and directed to choppa, he also had some nice heaters which were pretty fire, and I really digged the simplicity of his bars, they just hit harder.

while i GRAB TOOLIES, LET SHOTS OFF and bring the CRACK THROUGH TO GET BLOCK GWAP
you only hustle WACK MUSIC ON BLOGSPOTSya TRACKS USELESS, THEY NOT HOT
while mine got the VALUE OF A PAC SONG

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*facepalm*

This is fucking horrible, I would vote but I can't figure out which one of you was the worst..I guess Choppa since I felt Murk stretched his multis and forced the shit out of them, after using the same multi scheme for a couple bars I got bored with you not hitting on any of them. Then again props for using the same syllabic rhyme schemes the entire verse, I know it can be difficult but I personally would of strayed away from it after 4 bars.

Keep buildin, I'd be interested in seeing a format without the same syllables the whole verse.