"We will be there for eachother like a hand in winter needs a glove." Favorite line. It so deep and shows the true raw emotion that you are trying to portray through this, Note is it? I really liked this and will continue to read more of your work.

I liked most of this one, and except for the second stanza it showed surprisingly mature thoughts about love. "You really amaze me though, wow!" Made me laugh. The rest of it, however, was beautiful. Great poem, keep writing! You have talent. .

Aww this one's sweet. One thing I would say is the rhyming- it sounds forced, but yeah, it's hard not to. Thanks for the review by the way. Oh and the 'just like anyone' thing you commented on is supposed to sound ironic xx

*tear* It's so beautiful. Let me know if this is written about anyone in particular...Haha. Anyways, this is really pretty. It makes me feel so happy! Just...really good. One of your best works. Keep up the awesome job!

But, the rhyming throughout seems forced and not at all natural. If you're going to try to make a rhyming poem, you have to let it flow naturally, and not force it all into rhymes for the sake of rhyming. Because then it looks bad.

But the subject is a great one, and I think it could completely dominate if you did something less forced on it. Maybe a free verse?