This is great!
I'm not sure if this is just me or what your intent for the picture was. But to me, it seems a little odd how the hair in the front is falling forward, but the rest is being sucked back.

It still makes sense thought because the head is tilted forward, so I guess it all depends on what you meant.

i think it's represented what was going on my mind at that time. and yes, i meant the picture like that--like some part of the head being sucked in. 'tercerabut' in Indonesian means 'tore apart', as you can see. thanks grace!