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2.
Learning Intentions
• To understand how to access the marks in
your textual analysis essay.
• To identify targets for improvement in your
next textual analysis essay.

3.
Get the marks
Explanation, analysis and argument (20 marks)
Use of examples (20 marks)
Use of terminology (10 marks)

4.
Example Analysis
Camera
Analysis (20)
Examples (20)
Terminology (10)
• During the sequence with the
plumbers and the sink, the
framing is quite tight with Doc
Martin in the back ground
framed between the two
plumbers. This framing gives a
sense of the doctor being
trapped and useless in resolving
the problem and getting
increasingly frustrated.

5.
Example Analysis
Camera
Analysis (20)
Examples (20)
Terminology (10)
• During the sequence with the
plumbers and the sink, the
framing is quite tight with Doc
Martin in the back ground
framed between the two
plumbers. This framing gives a
sense of the doctor being
trapped and useless in resolving
the problem and getting
increasingly frustrated.

6.
Marking...
Assessment Criteria
Student’s Example
Explanation, analysis and
argument (20 marks)
Use of examples
(20 marks)
Use of terminology
(10 marks)
the doctor being trapped and useless in
resolving the problem and getting
increasingly frustrated.
the sequence with the plumbers and the
sink... Doc Martin in the back ground
framing is quite tight ... framed between
the two plumbers

8.
Example Analysis
Mise-en-scene
• Doc Martin is the only one is the
sequence to wear a formal business
Analysis (20)
Examples (20)
Terminology (10)
suit. This connotes his sense of
authority and sense of self
importance. The rest of the
community by contrast are dressed
more casually ,fitting their rural &
casual life styles or working class
professions.

9.
Example Analysis
Mise-en-scene
• Doc Martin is the only one is the
sequence to wear a formal business
Analysis (20)
Examples (20)
Terminology (10)
suit. This connotes his sense of
authority and sense of self
importance. The rest of the
community by contrast are dressed
more casually ,fitting their rural &
relaxed life styles or working class
professions.

10.
Editing
• Once the doctor enters the police
station, we cut from his reaction to an
Analysis (20)
Examples (20)
Terminology (10)
eyeline match of the police officer
doing the vacuuming. This cut
highlights the more relaxed attitudes
the community seems to have
compared to Doc Martin.

11.
Editing
• Once the doctor enters the police
station, we cut from his reaction to an
EAA (20)
Examples (20)
Terminology (10)
eyeline match of the police officer
doing the vacuuming. This cut
highlights the more relaxed attitudes
the community seems to have
compared to Doc Martin.

12.
Sound
• The local community constantly use the term
‘bodmin’ to suggest an unusual event. This
Analysis (20)
Examples (20)
Terminology (10)
dialogue, delivered with a thick west country
accent, serves to represent the doctor as an
outsider, who doesn’t understand. Also it is
used to make fun of him as an uptight and
stressed city dweller, who doesn’t get local
attitudes and ideas.

13.
Sound
• The local community constantly use the term
‘bodmin’ to suggest an unusual event. This
Analysis (20)
Examples (20)
Terminology (10)
dialogue, delivered with a thick west country
accent, serves to represent the doctor as an
outsider, who doesn’t understand. Also it is
used to make fun of him as an uptight and
stressed city dweller, who doesn’t get local
attitudes and ideas.