i really love this story. there's just one thing- La Lorena is really spelled La Llorona. Adn she's not really a women in white because she a legand that's suspossed roam the streets of mexico calling for the kids she drowned.

Ha ha, nice ending there. Great chapter too, the flashbacks were interesting. Now you've got me wondering about alternate timelines and parallel universes and junk like that. Good job.

Though this stuck out at me.. "Either she was a cunning linguist, or.." Ahem. Wondering of you are aware of the...what is the word.. double entendre? Something like that.

Mediator Fan chapter 6 . 10/11/2006

I LOVE this story! Seriously, it's so well written and I can totally see them actually saying the lines. And now Paul is in it! It's just so good. Except for Elizabeth. Jesse's not falling for her, right? He HAS to go with Suze, right?

tell me Jesse doesn't like Elizabeth. If you don't, I'm going to stop reading this story, & that would make me very unhappy

Anywho, so far, I love your story. The descriptions and the way its generally written are definetly better than most of the stories on this site (high praise coming from me, I assure you). The plot line is also great, i have no idea where your going with it (& i mean that in a VERY good way). Please update soon, i wanna see what happens