This could be funny, but as it is, it isn't funny enough to get me to laugh.

A lot of people would likely get annoyed, because I think this is something that's been tried quite a few times. The -Js take a certain balance to work, and that is hard to achieve, hence why it isn't recommended for newbies.

Try showing this to as many people as possible, since -Js require a lot more calibration than normal SCPs. The IRC chat would be a good place to do that.

—General editing. The key is that to make this sound comedic, you need to employ overly scientific language. Doing so has a deadpan effect, as in seriously considering SCP-XXXX-J a serious SCP to be secured, contained, and protected, amplifying this fourth-wall breaking joke.

Overall an excellent concept and comedically fresh, keep up the creativity!—

General editing. The key is that to make this sound comedic, you need to employ overly scientific language. Doing so has a deadpan effect, as in seriously considering SCP-XXXX-J a serious SCP to be secured, contained, and protected, amplifying this fourth-wall breaking joke.

Overall an excellent concept and comedically fresh, keep up the creativity!

Now that the joke is out of the way, it's an OK -J. Sure, it could use some general improvements, such as a couple more jokes, or maybe more in depth description. But what it could really benefit from is a

haha get it its a joke. cuz unfinished. but in all actuality it just needs a little more work and then i'd say it's good.

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