some time ago i made this pre-version of the first scene...but i am not satisfied... and i was to busy to keep it going... but if anyone of you could help me out, i would be thankful

Script wrote:

Not so long ago… In a server not so far away…

SPARTACUS

Dark times in the universe of Jedi Knight 2. The game is dying. Most servers are empty and deserted, no players and no chances to get any variety.But one clan arose to save the life and spirit of the game. The Roman Empire. Based on popularity and admin control they grew and expanded. Soon they controlled several servers and every player used their servers. But whilst TRE grew their emperor showed his true face. He wanted to take over the control over every player and have an endless amount of blind followers. He and his legions of admins abused their powers to make the people obey and mute every free thought. Finally TRE lost every self-control.Once saved the game, it just seemed like TRE was going to doom it again…

SCENE 1IntroductionCamera show:Server. (yavin_temple for example) 1 pair of duelists fighting. Then a pair of chatting people. Then a couple of guys messing around with emotes. Then a pair of ffa-fighters. One looses. Both say “gg”. Chat is well used at all.

Spartacus: They are totally crazy.Friend: yeFriend: one word and your abusedFriend: :/Spartacus: indeedSpartacus: i wish we could do something about thisSpartacus: you cant play in peace when they are onFriend: lol you can play on an empty server XDSpartacus: lolSpartacus: but being abused is no optionAdmin1 (public): Guys, your funny, I am hc… I can read what you writeAdmin1: have fun playing alone on another server xDAdmin2: lolSpartacus (private): meet me last fridays server usual time get ppl!Spartacus was kickbanned.Admin2: lol pro