...A little vague, but very good. You paint a very vivid picture of the corpse itself, and leave all the other charecters in shadow, I like that. You are very good at what you do. I'll tell you right now that this is really NOT the kind of stuff I write, OR read. But hey Dude, you deffinetly got my attention. I'm usually into humor,the only things I can think of of mine that you might appericiate is Witch's Well or Leper. Anyway, good job kiddo, you're very good at what you do.