Late for the Competition

Didn't have enough time to submit on time this month but wanted to share what I have so far. I still need a few more days to polish it and get it to where it should be at, but I put in a good amount of time into it so here it is in it's current state. Thanks for viewing!

Re: Late for the Competition

At 00:05 the face droop seems a little linear and it also hit's a wall, even if it's just like a micro ease in, try not to have the face freeze like that as it looks unatural. At 00:07 when he move his arm across the table that seems like a very linear movement as well and then his body hit's a wall.

I really like the poses you've managed on the hands apart from at 00:04 the womans hand seems a little flat to camera maybe have the palm open up towards him. Keep up the good work!

Re: Late for the Competition

Nice work dude!I loved it! maybe the only thing that didn't work for me was how she waved with her hand (so he sees that she doesn't wear any ring). I think you can get away without the that hand gesture, but it's only my opinion..All in all awesome