Easy

first thing, on easy you dont use red ticks D: unless its really necessary, just keep that in mind, and going from white tick to a red tick isnt good, like you did with these two 01:17:297 (1,2) - im not compleeeeetely sure but, I have gotten warnings about this before but yeah

01:02:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - here it is lot of overlapping, I think you could do better here dont overlap too much :3

Im not good at modding normal and hard so ill just skip to hyper >.<

Hyper

00:08:373 (1) - remove NC

00:08:847 (4) - NC

00:09:132 (1) - remove NC

00:08:847 (1,2) - could move this two notes a bit further to the side so it doesnt overlap with 00:09:322 (4) -

00:10:081 (1) - could also move this alittle bit so you are making a good triangle here 00:09:512 (5,6,1) - like this for example http://puu.sh/iaDjA/894f836f4d.jpg (I curved the slider a bit different so the blanket here is good 00:10:081 (1,2) - )

For your diff, I just think that if it is a old-style mapping, because all the notes placed in st line, and most of the slider are st also.And I hate that.Also the combo chain.... just nc just place wrongly, use 1nc per 8 beat (2 big tick) in EZ and NM and 4 beat for >HD

00:19:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this is a old-style mapping...Oh.... all the notes follow the distance snap?

00:13:119 (1,2) - a little weird

btw, where are the hitting sound. hitting sound are too loud. set about 40% to 50% is okay

the melody I think is okay, just about the position of the notesI think your star of diff only come from the streams-----------------------------2nd, about the flowing, 00:20:335 (7,1) - this is one of the example for poor flowing3rd, 00:39:512 (6) - some slider are unblanketed

I think that you need to remap all, and the extra also... just play more ranked map