Not bad. Hao/Ren is just plain awsome no matter how yuh write it. There's no doubting that. You did a brilliant job with this fic. It might've been nice if there was a little more teasing but it was still good. YAY! Ren was on the bottom! That's always the best one. I always think he'd be best on the bottom of any relationship no matter how yuh flip it.

You've no longer got that title by the way, it's changed to 'shiny,shiny,shiny,shiny,shiny star!'

Thankyou so much! It was brilliant! A true master piece- and all for me! Yay! I feel special, and honoured that you took the time to write such a beautiful fiction for me! I'm so glad I requested this by you, no-one could have written it so perfectly.

I especially liked the end- the silence before Ren admits hat Hao has him finally.

If I've ever attempted oversoul? -shifty eyes- Er...I have to leave a quick review cuz I gotta make my bed. -laughs- Or I could just make you do it for me...kidding kidding. Remember at camp how you were always cleaning up my crap? -laughs- Yeah okay you're not laughing. oh right this was supposed to be short. Okay, Hao is love! Ren is milk! (i lost)