Hey guys! I would absolutely love if someone could take a look at my story "The Extras" (work-in-progress title >.>) and let me know how I'm doing, specifically on character development. Like all other authors, I want readers to connect or at least empathize with my babies, and I need some feedback on how I'm doing with that!If you want to add feedback about something else (plot, style of writing, etc) please feel free to do that as well (:

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