I always admire it in other stories when writers include little details and asides that bring that much more life to a scene. I admire a mind that works like that, I've struggled to imitate it and gain that instinct.

This is probably the first vore story I've ever truly liked... what have you done to me!?!

But seriously, the descriptions and perspectives were spot on, and I could practically imagine the point of view from both the lady and gentleman. It was refreshing to have a vore story on here that was completely based on sensuality, rather than a female wanting to exert their dominance. I actually had the chills reading it!

Overall a great job! Hope you write something similar in the future!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for saying so. I'm glad it had such an affect on you, especially since you weren't overly disposed toward the motif initially. Same here: it wasn't entirely my thing, but I wanted to see if I could pull it off believably, and the idea had just been haunting me for such a long time. Who knows, maybe it'll start a precedent. Thanks again!

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