Wizard, learn how to use bars and go simpler, but that character is DOPE. if you did that.
im gunna maake an attempt to bring this thread bacxk to life, no offense, but the past 2 o 3 pages are garbage and chat, with the exception of a couple posts.
goddamn R kills muh flow!! i cant outline in pen, i dont have a steady enough hand yet haha. ill finish it eventually.

Originally Posted by dmgraff

ya so next time you insoult some one think about it cuz they might have done it with there butt

oh, wel its stil nice, props on that, i absolutly suck at characters haha but if you really wanna get serious bout your graff outside art class, check the new to graffiti thread and look at some bar tutorials, once you master basic bars, the world is your oyster. till then dont go crazy with yo letters haha.

Originally Posted by dmgraff

ya so next time you insoult some one think about it cuz they might have done it with there butt

Wizard, learn how to use bars and go simpler, but that character is DOPE. if you did that.
im gunna maake an attempt to bring this thread bacxk to life, no offense, but the past 2 o 3 pages are garbage and chat, with the exception of a couple posts.
goddamn R kills muh flow!! i cant outline in pen, i dont have a steady enough hand yet haha. ill finish it eventually.

Hmmm, I see what you're saying, maybe if you made the right leg of the R extend kinda like the bottom of the E's? Just a suggestion. Any tips concerning my most recent flick post?

"They say that most people can only dream in black and white
That's why he packs a knife and only reappears at night."

the one with yellow around it? if so, work on that neg space like i said, and try some 3d, make sure you rule it out and shit. n is the strongest. dip the thing on the bottom of the E's.
no problem wizard.

Originally Posted by dmgraff

ya so next time you insoult some one think about it cuz they might have done it with there butt

wizard that character is cool, start simple like bigfaggit and u will progress in the right way, keep it up

big faggit that looks dope, maybe on your R the leg that comes out under the loop part should come out on a little bit or a raised angle, just a suggestion though. the way it is looks dope. you should add some 3d on that

comrader make all your bars even, and your letters in a proportioned order. i like the A in the bottom one but the M is way to big and the Z is too small but the Z looks good other then being too small. keep working at it

norfsuthr that looks dope, maybe have the G bigger and the top of it more of an angle when it bends around and down like the O.

Zeam^
You see how I barred that A out in paint, that's what you need to focus on. Try to get all your bars the same size, for instance the back of the E is a lot fatter than the legs of the E, that M is way too big, and the bottom left of the Z is cut in an awkward place, if anything that's the corner you need to keep. Keep at it but go a little bit more basic. (obviously in my drawing the vertical legs would be longer in an actual sketch.)

"They say that most people can only dream in black and white
That's why he packs a knife and only reappears at night."

Zeam^
You see how I barred that A out in paint, that's what you need to focus on. Try to get all your bars the same size, for instance the back of the E is a lot fatter than the legs of the E, that M is way too big, and the bottom left of the Z is cut in an awkward place, if anything that's the corner you need to keep. Keep at it but go a little bit more basic. (obviously in my drawing the vertical legs would be longer in an actual sketch.)

I am not a graffiti artist, I do not condone or participate in illegal graffiti, I simply collect, document, and display the work of anonymous artists, I am not accountable for any vandalism under the names represented in any of my posts, it was not me.

Not all graffiti, but other than graff... I haven't had the inspiration to even doodle for more than a year until recently.
Flicks for talk, crits on the SOAM please (The A sucks, what can I do to fix it?)... I need to practice my piecing a lot...

Regardless of any previous posts, I do not condone nor take part in the act of vandalism. I simply document the work of others.