Things that I most certainly know suck: Airi’s hair, Aram’s clothes, the field, Airi’s dress, the clouds, the
peonies, FUGLY BUTTERFLIES. D: Everything else I either like or don’t find too
bad. It was really hard to get depth and highlights into the flowers. Do not even mention Airi’s hair. That colour is
hell to paint with – highlights turn into the most disgusting faded orange and shading goes all faded and brown.
x_x
Don’t mention the field either. NEVER AGAIN.
And yes I have been notified that roses do not grow like that, but I’ve decided that they do in Astale. So there.
lol
Yeah I hate this, w/e.

I have a version without the lense flare over the foreground if anyone wants it; its file size is too big for
Photobucket.

Comments

i like the way you did the eyes ^^. the shading on the clothes and hair are a bit messy, and the frames are.. drawn
wrong lol >D but i guess you already know that.
the bg colors are a bit bright--the green of the grass is way to electric and the flat horizon doesnt do anything for
you. the clouds are weak, but i think they fit. the sky just needs some more texture--more colors or some wispy clouds
behind the solid ones
overall its a very happy wall and in general i like the colors aside from the grass :D

xD I'm using the same colors for their clothes :nya:
Is alright, I like the skin, Some lines are a bit jagged, like at her hair.
The fields indeed looks empty but overall is nice given the fact that you had to do the bg from scratch.
Maybe you could add some flowers in the fiels, nothing to detailed, just some colors.

kyaaah finally MeruPuri wall~! ^^
good thing there's finally new wall in that category... It's been so empty XD
Anyway, I think airi looks so cute here... Good work with her eyes :3
I think stuffs you mentioned aren't that bad :P the most obvious thing is probably airi's hair XD overall it's nice~
(though I still saw some color leaks :3)

Is this MeruPuri day or what? xD
I actually like the roses and eyes a lot ^^ Especially the eyes!
Some of the lines are a tad jagged.. Color wise i can't say a thing cos my screen is nuts
About the background.. that flat horizon is a big no-no
Overall it's a nice job