Saturday, January 22, 2005

Too slow

Writing:Another 7 pages of JOURNEY edited, but this rate of knots is too slow. Ack! I did, however, enjoy myself by writing in a sneeze for the heroine... but it could be just dust. And I added in a lumpy horsehair chair to add to her discomfort but I did give her some honey cake that wasn't there before. I cut some vacuous conversation and I'm also removing a major secondary character from the story, so she had to come out, but as hers was the vacuous conversation this was fairly easy.