I know this is an old game, but there are a few minor typos you might look at if you have time.

Original:
Even though living secluded in my own little world by routine brings me peace of mind, I would never live life to its fullest.

Suggestion:
I would recommend changing the 'by' before routine to 'of'. 'By' implies it was caused by something. This would give:
Even though living secluded in my own little world of routine brings me peace of mind...

Suggestion:
You may wish to change 'feel' to 'fell'. Although, with her injury, Heileen undoubtedly feels down.

Original:
John lifts me carries me in his arms.

Suggestion:
This looks incomplete. You could either put an 'and' between 'me' and 'carries', but I would recommend putting a comma after the first 'me' and change 'carries to 'carrying' to get:
John lifts me, carrying me in his arms.

Original:
Lora
What more can we ask?

Suggestion:
Since it was talking about Elias' appearance, you might wish to add a 'for' after 'ask' to get:
What more can we ask for?

Original:
And you didn't follow her right?

Suggestion:
I would recommend putting a comma after 'her' to get:
And you didn't follow her, right?

Original:
You don't have to afraid of the dark, pretty one.

Suggestion:
Add 'be' after 'to' to get:
You don't have to be afraid of the dark, pretty one.

Suggestion:
I recommend putting a semicolong after 'guy', and changing the last portion to 'why are you asking?' I think it flows better putting 'are' before 'you' and you could get:
I think he's the typical "I-know-everything" guy; why are you asking?

Original:
Captain Adam says we're half way to the New World.

Suggestion:
Put 'half' and 'way' as one word:
Captain Adam says we're halfway to the New World.

Original:
She rubs my back, massages me shoulders.

Suggestion:
That 'me' should be 'my' to get:
She rubs my back, massages my shoulders.

Original:
I see like a sparkle in Marie's eyes.

Suggestion:
Remove the 'like' to get:
I see a sparkle in Marie's eyes.

Original:
Marco
W-what? why did you steal it?

Suggestion:
The 'why' should be capitalized:
W-what? Why did you steal it?

Original:
Burt
Who invited you here? I don't need such a snob, arrogant person on my boat!

Suggestion:
You probably want to make 'snob' into an adjective like 'snobbish':
Who invited you here? I don't need such a snobbish, arrogant person on my boat!

Original:
I'd never I'd consciously want to go see those two.

Suggestion:
Remove the second 'I'd' to get:
I'd never consciously want to go see those two.

Original:
I noticed something was wrong with you, so you and Burt out to the captain.

Suggestion:
There seems to be a little missing with 'with you, so you and Burt out'. Maybe add, 'so I pointed you and Burt' to get:
I noticed something was wrong with you, so I pointed you and Burt out to the captain.

Original:
What girl wouldn't want to be seduced by such handsome boy?

Suggestion:
I recommend adding an 'a' before 'handsome' to get:
What girl wouldn't want to be seduced by such a handsome boy?

Original:
Why would any woman want stay down there?

Suggestion:
Put a 'to' before 'stay' to get:
Why would any woman want to stay down there?

Original:
incredible...I've never seen such a beautiful woman before!

Suggestion:
Capitalize the i in 'incredible' to get:
Incredible...I've never seen such a beautiful woman before!

Original:
Marie
...Heileen, you musthurry!

Suggestion:
Put a space between 'must' and 'hurry' to get:
...Heileen, you must hurry!

Original:
Ebele
But don't worry. Found manyfruits.

Suggestion:
Put a space between 'many' and 'fruits' to get:
But don't worry. Found many fruits.

Original:
Heileen
Marie need me!

Suggestion:
'need' should be 'needs':
Marie needs me!

Original:
Marie couldn't saved energy by not saving me.

Suggestion:
I think you meant to say Marie 'could've saved energy' along the lines of:
Marie could've saved energy by not saving me.

Original:
I have Marie, afterall...

Suggestion:
There should be a space between 'after' and 'all':
I have Marie, after all...

Original:
Even as the tables fill up, Lora doesn't playing entertainer.

Suggestion:
'playing' seems like it should be 'play' to get:
Even as the tables fill up, Lora doesn't play entertainer.

Original:
Marie:
I'm sorry...to have doubted and Otto...

Suggestion:
It looks like it either needs 'Lora' before the 'and', or else, you can remove the 'and' entirely. It could look like:
Marie
I'm sorry...to have doubted Lora and Otto...
or
I'm sorry...to have doubted Otto...

Original:
Heileen
Thanks you!

Suggestion:
Should be 'Thank' instead of 'Thanks' to get:
Thank you!

Original:
I to look at her.

Suggestion:
Remove the 'to' to get:
I look at her.

Original:
She tries to hide it from everyone, though is clear that there's something wrong with her.

Suggestion:
I'd recommend put 'it' before 'is', or combine the two:
She tries to hide it from everyone, though it's clear that there's something wrong with her.

Original:
She (and Otto) made the decision to bring Robert and Ebele aboard the Cat's Dreams, did she?

Suggestion:
'did' should be 'didn't' to get:
She (and Otto) made the decision to bring Robert and Ebele aboard the Cat's Dreams, didn't she?

Original:
She's had to deal with the throughts and the worries.

Suggestion:
'Throughts' isn't a word. Did you mean 'thoughts' or 'threats'?

Original:
Burt
I know this! we can't survive here!

Suggestion:
The 'we' should be capitalized for:
I know this! We can't survive here!

Original:
It as like a dream.

Suggestion:
I think that 'as' should be 'is':
It is like a dream.

Original:
Living all day like if was the last one.

Suggestion:
Feels a bit fragmented. Maybe go with:
Living all day as if it was the last one.