A dead-end story this is what happens when you focus on paired and not the story itself and as long as the fanfic I just keep obsessing on couples and parents this will be the end result of the story maybe you guys should go read Star Wars fanfic to learn how to properly do a fanfic then again this is what I expect you guys weren't actually do a good Naruto story remember the story is the first key II is the characters who have a good story characters have nothing to work with don't get me wrong I like the pairing you did in this one but I forgot rule 1 of writing a story have a good story to keep people interested not your fantasy couples this is why most fanfic spell put a fanfic artist see themselves as the characters that they're in love with so that's why he put them together or they're in love with the actress who voices them or they live in the field romance is from high school so they take it out on the characters in the story wrong choice just try to keep that in mind when you write a story don't follow your personal emotions to influence your story that's why most fanfic fail

Guest chapter 23 . 3/29/2016

Is Naruto supposed to act like a retard or is he going to kill himself.

SoFarFromEms chapter 23 . 4/21/2015

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I want to know what happens to Narutos relationship with Tayuya