Aww, how cute. L would be up front in Light's face like that. I love how Light is so freaked out at first then when it realizes he likes it he, along with L, is coming up with any possible reason to continue kissing. "Perhaps a second opinion is necessary," L advised sagely.

Light grinned. "Of course."

Still my favorite part has to be the last two lines.

"Light grinned. "You know, I do have some strawberry chapstick lying around somewhere."

L's eyes widened. "Put it on immediately. I must test it thoroughly." He smiled knowingly at Light."

Ah, yes, strawberries-L's weakness. He'll be wanting to taste that one for some time.

Argh... [Don't throw a flame, don't throw a flame...] Okay, I did not like your take on this... Apart from this entire situation (Yaoi, I mean, if that wasn't clear) not being remotely realistic in the slightest, you could have put further effort in to capture their personalities...While I am not a fan of yaoi, it can be appreciated by me when it is written well. Sorry. It is just that it's one of my pet-peeves when an author completely manipulates the character into what they definately would not do. What I mean by that is, you could have made L go about things much more...'L-like' than you did. And secondly, please don't list it in the 'HUMOR' genre, as it is not humorous. I am trying to come up with something positive to say... Thanks for submitting a story. Remember, you can ignore this reveiw if you don't approve, but it is simply my perspective.