Comments & Reviews ( X 6)

To never die, to watch the pumping blood, gorgeously thick leeches lick. Your words have made me sick, but your writing brings thoughts of brew. Gothic Thorns a rite from you...Thanks for sharing...Tony

OH man babe I was eating a strawberry shortcake when read this , you know what happened , no I didnt puke but almost lmao. Hey this one was really gross ( not the poem, the description lol) very detailed babe almost realistic . I wish I had waited to read it when I wasn't eating lol. very good details here babe , I really appreciate the details and was so vivid. eek sure glad its just a poem and not real . excellent poem babe lov p.mom

Continuation of the Gothic Thorns series and really right now it was a great piece and the details were so vivid..that it made me really think about the scene laid out before my eyes. And now I'm a bit squeamish because of it, thanks for allowing me the chance to read this story. Take care.