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PADDYBOY60

7 years agofrom Centreville Michigan

Very imaginative. Well done.

AUTHOR

Writer of Man

7 years agofrom United Kingdom

Thank you AP! :D

alastar packer

7 years ago

Reminds me a bit of a poem out of'Through the Looking Glass' and that's a compliment. Keep at it WM.

AUTHOR

Writer of Man

7 years agofrom United Kingdom

Thank you guys for your comments. The chocolate makes me start to crave it right now!

And yes its a great oic! :)

David Sproull

7 years agofrom Toronto

I quite like that picture you used!

Hattie

7 years agofrom Europe

Ha ha! Very good! Like the chocolate part! lol That was something:)

Tweetmom

7 years agofrom Newark

we all are improving our writing skills. hope we could help each other. i used to write poems but dint work for me the way i liked it. but you are in a bright path. keep on writing your poem here in hubpages.

AUTHOR

Writer of Man

7 years agofrom United Kingdom

Thank you Tweetmom! Yes its a bit of nonsense! :)

Tweetmom

7 years agofrom Newark

I wished i could understand the story. But it is very catchy poem. i liked it. keep up the good work :)

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