I thought it was wonderful ... you want to hate Mia and Lawrence, but you can't because they are genuinely kind people, and they love Gabe and are completely unaware that they are hurting him. And Gabe loves them and doesn't want to put his own wants/needs above theirs. These are the type of characters I adore - flawed but with good hearts and intentions.

That was crutial! I was on the brink of tears! I don't think I'd have been able to go to the wedding or even stay friends with them, but ah well. This was really good even if I did almost want to murder Lawrence.

That was just well done. Gabe's a really sweet character and I love how you were able to balance out conveying his ambivalence about the wedding. His ideal girl is getting married to someone else; however, it's also his two best friends. It was really a heart breaker, but the ending seemed really optimistic to me. Even though Gabe was heart broken, he was still happy in some respects about the marriage and he tried his best to preserve his friends' special day. I think that was just... It takes a lot of strength for a person to be able to do that, but he isn't perfect and you really showed that in describing his feud with the best maid. I really would have loved to have seen a bit of that in the story. But I guess that's the hallmark of a great story, it always leaves you wanting more.

Eek. I was so confused when he was talking about himself at the 3rd person, but having thoughts that should be with "i'. I dunno. It was a good fic though, except those parts. And it could've been more dramatic... longer.. like you could've inserted more memories. It's still good.