Jane has always wanted to go to comic-con. And now she has a chance of going with her friends on a school holiday. But she buys something from a shady looking guy and gets sent to equestria with demonic powers. What could go wrong?

A lone Clone Trooper wakes up in the rubble of a Gunship with his brothers dead around him. The Trooper soon realizes that the Gunship has crashed on an unmarked planet in the galaxy, which is full of ponies, unaware of the war just beyond their sky.

Yusuke Urameshi tried to live a normal life, but no matter what, he always kept finding himself getting into trouble, then one day he finds himself dead after an act of heroism. Now in ghost form he thinks he'll go to heaven or most likely hell.

Life is always full of twists and turns, and when you wake up to find your memories erased and that you have been transported to Equestria you can really be thrown for a loop. But what if you were reborn as another species in the process?

From the universe of Tales from Tinies, a tiny baby human named Pupa lives among the Changelings, living under the holed hooves of Queen Chrysilis. And it seems that fate has more plans for the human then the Queen was aiming for.

It's was a normal morning for Fluttershy, doing her usual routine and caring for the animals of Ponyville. She thought it would be a normal day for her.

Fate thought otherwise.

Follow this cute journey as Fluttershy cares for a human that can transform into a wolf by its free will. Of course this story isn't going to be all sunshine and rainbows for the two, for Fluttershy has to keep this human a secret from all of Ponyville (Minus her Friends) and the two rulers of Equestria.

Featured on November 1st, 2014! Thanks everypony! I'll do my best in keeping this fic interesting!

I'll be honest, I think this story has potential, but it needs a lot of work. Your wording is awkward at times, and sometimes the style even shifts. Also, Fluttershy has a moment of extreme OOC;

'You know what? I'm gonna raise this creature and be a better mother than the one who just abandoned this poor creature!'

Remember, she's not very confident in herself. Also, she sounds mechanical in a lot of her speech. For example;

"Now, now, everyone. I was just following Mr. Robin to this odd creature he was talking about and found this." She explained. "I'm not sure what it is, but I want you to treat it with the same respect as you do towards me. Am I clear?"

Try reading the lines aloud to see how they sound.

I'd recommend getting an experienced prereader, and not the kind that just wants to read it early and shower you with praise. The best prereaders are the ones that aren't afraid to criticize your work.

I'll be following, hoping to see this reach its potential.

5150641 Assuming she's 18 when the show started. Their ages are never mentioned.

well it depen on what is still coming, but right now it is a good start. I hope you don´t try let things happen to fast, but i just wait.I know how that Anime maybe went, but i am not sure why i read that Fluttershy would have to hide that child. Well maybe you have a not so friendly Equestria in your story.

I had actually been trying to find a site to watch Wolf Child, so thanks for the link. As for the story...As Fluttershy would say, it's... nice.There's a lot of spots that are strangely/incorrectly worded, changes from past tense to present tense within the same sentence, things of that nature. Then of course there's the glaring continuity error at the end of the chapter, in that the Mane 6 weren't friends with each other until after becoming the Bearers of the Elements of Harmony. They knew each other, yes, but they weren't really friends. (Remember how AJ and Rarity were during the sleepover? And that was AFTER meeting Twi.) I could see maybe Dashie coming to check on Fluttershy, or Pinkie bringing a party invitation or something, but there's no way all of them would have shown up randomly.All in all, this story still has potential, but it needs some pretty heavy revision.

"Eep!" Fluttershy turned around just in time to see somepony she didn't expect- or more like someponies.

It was the other main six.(Minus Twilight) But before Fluttershy could explain.

"WHAT IS THAT!?"

No... Bad author... That is not the proper use of parenthesis!

Instead of that, all you need to say is -

It was her four closest friends in town, however, before she could explain herself one of them exclaimed in horror,

"What is that!?"

Because the 'Minus Twilight' bit is implied from the very start, and the reader is already aware that there is no Twilight. Also, the Mane 6 hasn't formed yet, so that doesn't exist as a proper description of the four ponies.

I am curious to see where this story goes. I had recently watched 'Wolf Children' and I instantly fell in love with it. I want to see who this story will turn out over the long haul despite any problems I might have with it. Nothing to major, just a bunch of why's and how's that's might not even be important to the story as a whole. But I am curious, so I will favorite this story and prepare to take a feels trip.

Don't quote me on this, but I don't think Applejack would be Fluttershy's friend six years before Twilight's arrival. Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy knew each other from flight camp, Fluttershy and Rarity frequent the spa, and Pinkie Pie is everypony's best friend, but how did any of them meet Applejack?

"Yes, what Pinkie said." Rainbow agreed. "She gathered all three of us and told us to meet at your house. But I'd never expect this." Rainbow hovered over to the creature, making the thing giggle.

Oh. But still, why Applejack? It's not a hate move on her, I'm just wondering if Applejack was even friends with Fluttershy at this point. Sure, she would have had to see her in the market, but by that logic, Applejack would be friends with almost as many ponies as Pinkie Pie.

5177920 Well, One thing's for sure. They aren't actual friends, but I think that since Fluttershy is friends with Rainbow Dash, and Rainbow Dash is Friends with Applejack, maybe somewhere along the lines, Rainbow got the two together to make a new friendship bond.

5178163 No, but I've read several of your stories. I tend to be a little disappointed by the final product. I'll tell you what I think when I finish this story in a couple days. I've got a queue setup, so I probably won't get to it today.

FfffffffffffffffuuuuuuUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-!!! Freaking cliffhangers! You're like my brother! I hate you but I love you at the same time! Patient man doesn't want to be patient!!!

Love the chapter though. I have a weakness for cuteness. Can't wait till the next chapter comes out. I wonder how Fluttershy will take (insert her name here) out to play. I know she lives away from everyone else but that doesn't mean that someone might wander by or come over. Speaking of which what's her plan for when someone who doesn't know about (insert her name here) comes over? Does she make (insert her name here) hide in her room, stay out in the open as a wolf or maybe even hides her in a closet? That was kinda mean but what does she do?!