activity used something that was quoted from something that the activity generated

:quote1, :publicationActivity1123

Qual section: A diagram was also requested for after the first paragraph of 3.3, with another comment later regarding the same section focusing on rearranging the example/text; the raised editorial says "not sure how to resolve this" - I guess we should hold off doing a diagram until a decision is made?

Tim only got the first one in for LC.

TODO: David to review the comments on the daigram/ ordering in qualificatoin section narrative and provide recommendation to group.

Jun

(TL: I think everything in Jun's section that does NOT have a TODO should be dropped, since they are settled.)

4th column of qualification tables is hard to understand (we're up to 6 now!)

Jun: I don't have the same old problem with using terms from the old 4th column terms, the now 5th column. But I see this issue is being expanded to a totally separate discussion now. I suggest if we do keep this new discussion theme going on, we should move it out of this context.

Daniel

The only 2 things that I have detected is that in section 3.2 there is no example for mention and asInBundle (even though the example has bundles) and there is no wasInfluencedBy in the example (it could be easily added as an inference of wasAttributedTo).