This is absolutely beautiful! I was hoping you'd continue with this, but considering it's been 6 years...

Well, even if you don't decide to finish this, I'd like to thank you for putting up this fic. There are too little fics for this anime, and the ending actually leaves more chances for many different fics to be written. Its a shame that no one's writing for this fic nowadays...

wow, I really like it so far. Please keep writing because there's like hardly any fanfictions here. So keep it up and update soon. I was thinking someone should write about when or if Hakuoro would come back, so thank you.

I haven't written a story or reviewed on in YEARS. I've been on hiatus until I *grew up* and my writing skills improved as I went to college. Well, I'll be making my return to in the form of a fanfic months and months from now, but I just HAD to review this particular fanfic.

I don't think you should cut off the story here. For starters, WHY is Hakuoro back? As I recall from having played through and beaten the game, wasn't Hakuoro just one-half of a god? Hakuoro disappeared when the god was defeated at the end of Utawarerumono. So why is Hakuoro back? Does that mean that the destructive half of that god is back too? Doesn't that defeat the whole purpose of Hakuoro's sacrifice?

I have faith that you'll come up with a decent explanation, and I'm looking forward to it.

Finally, I'll be more than HAPPY to volunteer to be your "beta reader", checking for spelling and grammar. Your story's gotten me curious and I'd like to see where you're going with this.