I love the lines "I want to fade into black/like fog over sea" because it reminds me a lot of Alzheimer's or just forgetting entirely, and fog is normally foreboding, but you call to it and want it to come to you. I also like as the part in the fourth verse where you represented the dichotomy of wanting to see her but also wanting to forget her.

I liked the feel of this piece quite a bit. The sensation of contrast brought to mind by "I want to set my skin on fireWith Death’s icy embrace." was really vivid, and I absolutely LOVED the end of the third stanza "I want to miss out on heavenJust to escape this cursed hell." One of my favorite little quips is 'If I die and there's a Heaven, I look forward to burning in Hell' and those lines just connected with me.