TORN BETWEEN TWO LOVERS

Below is the poem entitled TORN BETWEEN TWO LOVERS which was written by poet
dixie
fallin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

TORN BETWEEN TWO LOVERS

I'm sitting here all alone,
emotions numb, with words you've shown.
You chose to leave our bed last night,
precious time wasted, to hold me tight....
I'm still in shock of what you said,
how you cared for her, when tears she shed?
You're probably right, when you confessed,
you shouldn't have pulled me into your mess!...
You honestly believe that it's okay?
to care for lovers, that went away.
I ask if it, would be alright,
if I cared this much for an "ex" tonight?...
You lie and say it wouldn't bother you!
if I showed compassion, while he's so blue.
I'm lost in thoughts of how to feel?
your words ring loud, as they reveal....
"You care for her, is what you say",
those words still sting, I must convey.
What was I thinking?.. to let you in,
my heart is broken yet again....
I don't need lovers, from past gone by,
to talk me through tears I cry.
The way I see it, they had their chance,
but you need 'her' more, than our romance...
Go figure?....

* “First I Wish Apologize For The Typos In My First Com * Dear Beautiful Dixie Fallin * Second I Would Like to Say That * I LovVve What I See In This * Beautiful Poetess * If Not Evolved Then Thus * I Also Love The Depth I Find * Which Makes Your Lovely Gifted Light * Twice As Bright * Keep Banking The Pages With Sweeet * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Sarah” ~

What a beautiful afternoon I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this afternoon Dixie. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love, Carol