I)Please, help my student! He really needs you! ATTENTION ! Ce texte contient 2O fautes à corriger ! Cependant, cette fois encore, vous en verrez beaucoup plus, car mon élève est très « consistent » une fois fait une faute, il la répète tout le long du texte, car il la fait de bonne foi ! … Merci de corriger ces fautes, en ne les comptant que pour « une seule », à chaque fois …
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There’s a double standard concerning a woman having armpit hairs and a man having armpit hairs… Should you have or wax? There’s most pression for men these days to do that. As a man, have a hairless body is about beauty and not masculinity. In the case of women, have a hairless body means be beautiful and feminine. So, you can’t be feminine and have body hairs…Can the choice between body hairs or not be sexist?
A model who had chosen not to have or wax got rape threads. A rape can be seen as a way to express control. Therefore, here body hairs were considered as something out of control and which needed to be controlled. She had stopped waxing because she had realised that society made her feeling pression to wax, because she was a woman, not because she wanted. She heard «No guys will want you if you don’t have...» or «It’s unhygienic!» Men now! For having his shirt open and showing chesthairs, an actor was asked: «Are you man enough for the hairy- chested revival?» The male body is definitely more visible now: it’s more public, it’s more scrutinized, seen as a problem. Men’s magazines tell their readers that they need to get rid of body hairs and more products are offering to do so; What role has History plaid in our body hairs attitudes? Archaeologists reckon that cavemen and women were the first to start having, using little stones as havers and tiny little shells as tweezers. That was for more safety so that their ennemies had nothing to hold on to. Also, it was to stop frostbite and louse. The Egyptians considered body hairs be uncivilized. Women would remove hairs from eyebrowns down. The Romans made hair removed more about class and used massive tweezer liking things called «volsella». Later, Charles Darwin taught the public that humans are descended from an ape like ancestor. We lost our fur due to sexual selection. We preferred hairless mates. So hairlessness became common, and in turning beautiful. Through the years, that idea has evolved and with clothes getting shorter, it became more of a focus. Males now have an ideal body image which has shifted from hairy to smooth and hairless.
We need a more neutral and natural attitude and see it as a personnal decision and not necessary as a public and politic statement. If there’s more choice, more freedom and fewer body shaming, things could be different in the future.

II) Find the «scrambled » words or reorder them in these three sentences:

Réponse : Rack Your Brains and Help!/ 40 de vaiana, postée le 11-02-2019 à 17:15:16 (S | E)Hello.
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I) There’s a double standard concerning a woman SHAVING HAIRY ARMPITS and a man having HAIRY ARMPITS… Should you SHAVE or wax? There’s most pression for men these days to do that. As a man, HAVING a hairless body is about beauty and not masculinity. In the case of women, HAVING a hairless body means BEING beautiful and feminine. So, you can’t be feminine and have body HAIR…Can the choice between body HAIR or not be sexist?
A model who had chosen not to SHAVE or wax got rape threads. A rape can be seen as a way to express control. Therefore, HER body HAIR were considered as something out of control and which needed to be controlled. She had stopped waxing because she had realised that THE society made her feeling pression to wax, because she was a woman, not because she wanted TO. She heard «No GUY will want you if you don’t SHAVE...» or «It’s unhygienic!» Men now! For having his shirt OPENED and showing CHESTHAIR, an actor was asked: «Are you A man enough for the hairy- chested revival?» The male body is definitely more visible now: it’s more public, it’s more scrutinized, seen as a problem. Men’s magazines tell TO their readers that they need to get rid of body HAIR and more products are OFFERED to do so;What role has History PLAYED in our body HAIR attitudes? Archaeologists reckon that cavemen and women were the first to start SHAVING, using little stones as SHAVERS and tiny little shells as tweezers. That was for more safety so that their ENEMIES had nothing to hold on to. Also, it was to stop FROSTBITES and LICE. Egyptians considered HAVING body HAIR AS TO be uncivilized. Women would remove HAIR from EYEBROWS down. Romans made hair removed more about CLASSES and used massive TWEEZERS LIKE things called «volsella». Later, Charles Darwin taught the public that humans HAD descended from an ape AS AN ancestor. We lost our fur due to sexual selection. We preferred hairless mates. So hairlessness became common, and IT TURNED beautiful. Through the years, that idea has evolved and with clothes getting shorter, it became more of a focus. Males now have an ideal body image which has shifted from hairy to smooth and hairless.
We need a more neutral and natural attitude and see it as a PERSONAL decision and not necessary as a public and politic statement. If there WERE more choice, more freedom and fewer body shaming, things WOULD BE ABLE TO be different in the future.

II)
1. AROUND the WORLD, MEN are SHAVING, INCLUDING CHEST, BACK, LEGS and BROWS.
2. Body hair is increasingly seen as a worry for both women and men.
3. I don't know

There’s a double standard concerning a woman having armpit HAIR and a man having armpit HAIR… Should you SHAVE or wax? There’s MORE pression for men these days to do that. As a man, have a hairless body is about beauty and not masculinity. In the case of women, have a hairless body means be beautiful and feminine. So, you can’t be feminine and have body HAIR…
Can WE HAVE the choice between a HAIRY BODY or not be sexist?
A model who had chosen not to SHAVE or wax got rape THREATS. A rape can be seen as a way to express control. Therefore, here body HAIR were considered as something out of control and which needed to be controlled. She had stopped waxing because she had realised that society made her feeling pression to wax, because she was a woman, not because she wanted TO. She heard «No GUY will want you if you don't SHAVE...» or «It’s unhygienic!» Men now! For having THEIR shirtS open and showing chest HAIR, an actor was asked: «Are you man enough for the hairy-CHEST revival?» The male body is definitely more visible now: it's more public, it's more scrutiniSed,( le z c'est US) seen as a problem. Men’s magazines tell their readers that they need to get rid of body HAIR and more products are offering to do so;
What role has History PLAYED in our body HAIR attitudes? Archaeologists reckon that cavemen and women were the first to start SHAVING, using little stones LIKE havers and tiny little shells LIKE tweezers. That was for more safety so that their ENEMIES had nothing to hold on to. Also, it was to stop FROSTBITES and LICE. The Egyptians considered body HAIR be UNCIVILISED. Women would remove HAIR from eyebrowns down. The Romans made hair removed more about OF class and used massive tweezerS LIKE things called «volsella». Later, Charles Darwin taught the public that humans are descended from THE ape AS ancestor. We lost our fur due to sexual selection. We preferred hairless mates. So hairlessness HAS BECOME common,(pas and)in turning beautiful. Through the years, that idea has evolved and with clothes getting shorter, it became more of a focus. Males now have an ideal body image which has shifted from hairy to smooth and hairless.
We need a more neutral and natural attitude and see it as a PERSONAL decision and not necessary as a public and politic statement. If there’s more choice, more freedom and fewer body shaming, things could be different in the future.

There’s a double-standard concerning a woman having armpit hairs and a man having armpit hairs… Should THEY have TO wax or Not ?
There’s MORE PRESSURE for men these days to do that. As a man, HAVING a hairless body is about beauty and not masculinity. In the case of women, HAVING a hairless body means be beautiful and feminine. So, you can’t be feminine and have body hairs…Can the choice between body hairs or not be sexist?
A model who had chosen not to have or wax got rape THREATS. A rape can be seen as a way to express control. Therefore, HER body hairs were considered as something out of control and which needed to be controlled.
She had stopped waxing because she had realised that society made her feeling PRESSURE to wax, because she was a woman, not because she wanted. She heard «No guys will want you if you don’t have...» or «It’s not HYGIENIC!»

Men now! For having his shirt open and showing CHEST HAIRS, an actor was asked: «Are you man enough for the hairy-chested revival?» The male body is definitely more visible now: it’s more public, it’s more scrutinized, seen as a problem. MEN MAGAZINES tell their readers that they need to get rid of body hairs and more products are offering to do so.

What role has History PLAYED in our body hairs attitudes?

Archaeologists reckon that cavemen and women were the first to start SHAVING, using little stones as SHAVERS and tiny little shells as tweezers. That was for more safety so that their ENEMIES had nothing to hold on to. Also, it was to stop frostbite and louse. The Egyptians considered body hairs be uncivilized. Women would remove hairs from eyebrows down. The Romans made hair removed more about class and used massive TWEEZERS liking things called «volsella». Later, Charles Darwin taught the public that humans are descended from an ape like ancestor. We lost our fur due to sexual selection. We preferred hairless mates. So hairlessness became common, and in turning beautiful. Through the years, that idea has evolved and with clothes getting shorter, it became more of a focus. Males now have an ideal body image which has shifted from hairy to smooth and hairless.

We need a more neutral and natural attitude and see it as a PERSONAL decision and not necessary as a public and politic statement. If there’s more choice, more freedom and fewer body shaming, things could be different in the future.

There's a double standard concerning a woman having armpit HAIR and a man having armpit HAIR ? Should you SHAVE or wax? There's MORE PRESSURE for men these days to do that. As a man, have a hairless body is about beauty and not masculinity. In the case of women, have a hairless body means TO be beautiful and FEMINITY. So, you can't be feminine and have body HAIR ?
Can WE HAVE the choice between body HAIR AND not TO be sexist?

A model, who had chosen NEITHER to SHAVE NOR TO wax ,got rape THREATS. A rape COULD be seen as a way to express control. Therefore, here body HAIR were considered as something out of control , which needed to be controlled. She had stopped waxing because she had realised that society made her feeling UNDER PRESSURE to wax, because she was a woman, not because she wanted TO BE ..

She heard «No GUY will want you if you don't have...» or «It's unhygienic!» Men now! For having his shirt open and showing HIS CHEST HAIR , an actor was asked: «Are you ENOUGH MAN for the hairy-CHEST revival?» The male body is definitely more visible now: it's more public, it's more scrutinized, seen as a problem.

Men's magazines tell their readers that they need to get rid of body HAIR and more products are offering to do so; What role has History PLAYED in our body HAIR ATTITUDE? Archaeologists reckon that cavemen and CAVEWOMEN were the first to start SHAVING , using little stones as SHAVERS and tiny little shells as tweezers.

That was for more safety so that their ENEMIES had nothing to hold on to. Also, it was to stop FROSTBITES and LICE The Egyptians considered body HAIR be uncivilized. Women would remove HAIR from EYEBROWS down. The Romans made hair REMOVE more about class and used massive TWEEZERS LIKE things called «volsella».

Later, Charles Darwin taught the public that humans are descended from ape AS ancestor. We lost our fur due to sexual selection. We preferred hairless mates. So HAIRNESS HAS BECAME common, and in turning beautiful. Through the years, that idea has evolved and with clothes getting shorter, it HAS BECAME more of a focus. Males now have an ideal body image which has shifted from hairy to smooth and hairless.

We need a more neutral and natural attitude and see it as a PERSONAL decision and not necessary as a public and politic statement. If there ARE more choice, more freedom and fewer SHAVED BODY, things WILL be different in the future.

Dear Here4u , I am afraid I haven't helped your friend as he should be to ,I am conscious I have left many mistakes and done others inside my correction despite my good will.
Thanks a lot for your new test

Réponse : Rack Your Brains and Help!/ 40 de joe39, postée le 20-02-2019 à 18:24:56 (S | E)Hello dear here4u,
Here you are my try, ready to be checked.
I)Please, help my student! He really needs you! ATTENTION ! Ce texte contient 2O fautes à corriger !
There’s a double STANDARDS concerning a woman having armpit HAIR and a man having armpit HAIR… Should you HOLD THEM or TO wax THEM? There’s most PRESSURE for men these days to do that. As a man, have a hairless body is about beauty and not masculinity. In the case of women, have a hairless body means be beautiful and feminine. So, you can’t be feminine and have body hairs…
Can the choice between HAIRY AND HAIRLESS BODIES BE or not be sexist?
A model who had chosen not to have or wax got rape THREATS. A rape can be seen as a way to express control. Therefore, here body hairs were considered as something out of control and which needed to be controlled. She had stopped waxing because she had realised that society made her feeling PRESSURE to wax, because she was a woman, not because she wanted TO. She heard «No guys will want you if you don’t have...» or «It’s unhygienic!» Men now! For having his shirt open and showing HIS HAIRY CHESTED, an actor was asked: «Are you man enough for the hairy chested revival?» The male body is definitely more visible now: it’s more public, it’s more scrutinized, AND seen as a problem. Men’s magazines tell their readers that they need to get rid of body hairs and more products are BEING OFFERED to do so;
What role has History PLAYED in our body HAIR attitudes? Archaeologists reckon that cavemen and women were the first to start having THEM, using little stones as SHAVERS and tiny little shells as tweezers. That was for more safety so that their ENEMIES had nothing to hold on to. Also, it was to stop FROSTBITES and LICE. The Egyptians considered body HAIR be uncivilized. Women would remove HAIR from EYEBROW down. The Romans made hair removed more about class and used massive TWEEZERS LIKE things called «volsella». Later, Charles Darwin taught the public that humans are descended from an APE-LIKE ancestor. We lost our fur due to sexual selection. We preferred hairless mates. So hairlessness became common, and in turning beautiful. Through the years, that idea has evolved and with clothes getting shorter, it became more of a focus. Males now have an ideal body image which has shifted from hairy to smooth and hairless.
We need a more neutral and natural attitude and see it as a PERSONAL decision and not necessary as a public and politic statement. If there’s more choice, more freedom and LESS body SHAME, things could be different in the future.

II) Find the «scrambled » words or reorder them in these three sentences:

1.AROUND the WORLD, MEN are SHAVING, INCLUDING CHEST, BACKS, LEGS and BROWS. 9
2. For both men and women body hair is increasingly seen as a worry./ 13
3. Sorry, I give up.

III) OPTIONAL: Please, reorder the words or unscramble them in these sentences so as to make meaningful sentences:
a) Sorry, I give up.
b) In the LAST COUPLE of YEARS PLENTY of ARTICLES have CALLED for women to stop REMOVING and start GROWING. 8

Thanking a lot for the nice exercise, I hope you have a pleasant evening.

correction- ready:
There’s a double standard concerning a woman having armpit HAIR and a man having armpit HAIR… Should you
Shave IT or wax IT? There’s most pression for men these days to do that. As FOR a man, havING a hairless body is about beauty and not masculinity. In the case of women, havING a hairless body means be beautiful and feminine. So, you can’t be feminine and have body hairs…

Can the choice between HAVING body hair or not be sexist? A model who had chosen not to SHAVE or wax got rape threaTs. A rape can be seen as a way to express control. Therefore, here body hairs were considered as something out of control and which needed to be controlled. She had stopped waxing because she had realised that society made her FEEL pression to wax, because she was a woman, not because she wanted. She heard «No guys will want you if you don’t Shave...» or «It’s unhygienic!» Men now! For having his shirt open and showing chesthairs, an actor was asked: «Are you man enough for the hairy- chested revival?» The male body is definitely more visible now: it’s more public, it’s more scrutinized, seen as a problem. Men’s magazines tell their readers that they need to get rid of body hair and more products are offering to do so;
What role has History playED in our body-hair attitudes? Archaeologists reckon that cavemen and women were the first to start having USED little stones as Shavers and tiny little shells as tweezers. That was for more safety so that their ennemies had nothing to hold on to. Also, it was to stop frostbite and louse. The Egyptians considered body hairs be uncivilized. Women would remove hair from eyebrowns down. The Romans made hair removed more about class and used massive tweezer liking things called «volsella». Later, Charles Darwin taught the public that humans are descended from an ape like ancestor. We lost our fur due to sexual selection. We preferred hairless mates. So hairlessness became common, and in turning, beautiful. Through the years, that idea has evolved and with clothes getting shorter, it became more of a focus. Males now have an ideal body image which has shifted from hairy to smooth and hairless.
We need a more neutral and natural attitude and see it as a personnal decision and not necessary as a public and politic statement. If there’s more choice, more freedom and fewer body shaming, things could be different in the future.