Zoe Arc15 pg2

on January 18, 2018at 5:10 am

So Abi and Tommy have reconnected. The next week page will also be about half flashback but then it will probably be all current. I did a flashback within a flashback to sort of retcon in an aunt for Zoe so that down there line there will be more relatives for her to hook up with, decided against the page but might finish it for the VIP section (currently have it sketched and after I finish next weeks page tomorrow I will also post where I am with that). I think you all will be pretty happy with where the arc is going and it will probably be about 5 pages total, then will show what Zoe is up to in the next arc.

Discussion (13) ¬

Personal opinion: I think you hit a good balance showing enough of the early sexploits of your characters without getting into ‘dangerous’ territory. Obviously, there are mentally ill prudes out there who try to pretend that sex doesn’t happen before 21, but screw ’em if they show up and try to make trouble. This is some solid reality-based plot development.

I’ll always be happy to see Abi being happy. Even better if she’s getting some nasty on while being happy.

Last panel there: got a lot of that Helen Parr/Mrs. Incredible sort of vibe going on with much of the current web-art-porn depictions of her. Some time ago you had mentioned wanting do do a few side projects such as Futrama porn. You’ve got a solid base design there to do a Helen Parr art or two if you were so inclined.

Well Abi’s sister would be older than Abi, probably 37, but yeah there could be a few cousins, I haven’t really decided on who they could be but have plenty of time to figure those things out.
As for the Incredibles, was never a big fan of that one, not saying I would do a porn parody but if I did I would choose Big Hero 6 over Incredibles (liked that honey lemon character)

Been thinkin’ on it for a couple days now. No reason Abi might not have both an older and a younger sister. Obviously your call, especially how you want to do it if you do it at all. My original line of thought had been an incest scene between Zoe & her aunt, and a younger aunt (maybe ~25-27-ish) with a wild &/or lesbian streak seemed likely. Especially if it involved Audry somehow. Because, two girls, with experience with other girls, getting Zoe between them and showing her some toys & tricks, for possibility. Because Audry. Somehow.

Not trying to push, just thinking out loud. The family dynamics of Abi getting pregnant so young have to be … complicated. It would have deeply affected either an older or younger sister in their own maturing process and psychology. I’m curious to know what support Abi did or did not have from her family members. An older sister (37) who had a kid at the age of 19 would mean Zoe has a cousin born very close to her. It would be interesting if Abi’s older sister & she were pregnant at the same time and shared & supported each other, or were driven apart.

And, the Incredibles thought was a throw-away, sort of a free-association with the general look & position of Abi in that final panel. If anything was intended, it was just the possibility of a one-off art piece for diversion, not anything like a full parody set of pages. I’m rather agnostic on most of the Incredibles fanporn myself, excepting a few unusually quality pieces I’ve run across. Sexy pinups are more my style as a general rule of thumb. I’d remembered your Futurama comment and don’t have much more context than that.

I’ve always pictured Zoe being mostly raised by her grandparents until about kindergarten, so that is why the sister is older, so she will be mostly gone to college during that period where Abi still lived at home and went to highschool.

Been thinking about your comment. Why not a special non-canon page for Memorial Day or Veteran’s Day? Banging a regiment seems a bit much, although after they’ve been stationed overseas she could probably arrange a 21 gun salute without much trouble. But she could show her appreciation to a single soldier to welcome him back and thank him for his service. Just an idea (and I’m sure yellowgerbil is wondering WTF?).

I have the opacity on my brushes really low, it helps with my lining as I don’t have good control, So with opacity down and a lot of tiny sketchy strokes it gives it the appearance of pencils (at least that is what I am going for). These pages are lower than normal opacity on the shadows as being indoors and artificial lighting washes things out a bit more (again at least that is what I was going for)