So! nice use of Ra and his prejudice is very expected against Western lords and armor... which is so much of a case of what works in one terrain does not in another and... well.
I mean it allways annoyes me to HELL and back that can be cool and evaluative and everything else about a lot but not THAT and bah. all coll and evaluative until they allow prejudice to color their view on people who are COMPLICATED and THENt he author decides to burn those folks into the ground to make the point that they were right and...

still! this is quite odd on that scales, because feudal lords means city but where? Crown lands or? Still, I am curious. Id say the Vale or Riverlands considering the friendship with Ned but...
vale would probably work, more exclusion from the fighting and dealing wth Peter Baylish and his money scams... well.
anyway! odd duck of a story and I am curious where your going to go with it! especially with lesser lordlings and other people of power within his city!

You know what the problem with comics is? They aren't very good. Sure, the premise is always interesting, but the execution is hamfisted and sloppy, with large plot holes and character shields. You should have left the other characters in the DC universe, where they belong.

Guest chapter 70 . 6/1/2016

How come no updates?

Guest chapter 28 . 6/1/2016

In chapter 6 you said you weren't going to change any of the characters stories, but you kinda did here with Arya, didn't you?

I just recently came about your story and finished it today, or at least finished what you have up of course. After 70 great chapters I'm left wanting more, wondering what else you have in store for everyone in this world you've created. I know you haven't updated sense August of last year but I do hope you will find time to update the story again as I'd love to know just what it is that will happen next. I need to know more about your take on Victor, if Jason will ever realize Arry is actually a girl, if he'll ever actually meet Bruce and become The Red Hood for real, how the world will react to Clark and now Barry too, even what befell the Red Viper and Robin after the fight. As well as what happened to a certain Queen from Staring Point.