It's still early in development.Although this one is on hiatus since I'm working on another one.I'm going to use Tumblr to put all the new development posts since DA is usually where I upload finished art only.

Overall, I find it to be quite lovely. However, if you're looking to add some minor improvements, you may want to relieve the stiffness in both of their postures. For example, the boy could stand to have a bit more bend to the waist, with maybe a bit of curve to the back. Is his other arm around her? Maybe show more of a bend in that arm, with hand/fingers seen curving around her waist. Maybe arch his neck down, a bit, too. In the same vein, you can put a bit of a back arch to the girl's neck, angle the head a bit, maybe a bit more bend at the waist and upper back. Their hair could use a little bit more movement, as well.

The background is really nice, as well as the logo, but I agree with the others that the guy's eye looks kind of weird. I've played Frozen Essence, and this art is really a huge improvement. Thank you for drawing/making those VNs!

huge improvements and I love the pose. I think the eye for the dude is a bit awkward since it looks more like a front perspective than a profile view. I really wish I can color like your drawings though. They always give a radiance and not like how Twilight does it XD