Metaphor and Simile

Last week, Cheri featured a Freshly Pressed blog and suggested that apt use of metaphor had contributed to the post’s appeal. So I thought I’d take a few minutes to consider metaphor and its figurative cousin simile in a little more detail.

Language is inherently metaphoric in a broad sense, as we use sounds and written symbols as substitutes for items and concepts that exist in the world. It’s little surprise, then, that we’re fond of making further figurative leaps and expressing some of these symbols in terms of others. But there are different ways of making these little leaps, and the two that’re perhaps the most well-known are metaphor and simile.

Generally, when looking for metaphor, you look for either the formula X is Y or an outright substitution of thing Y for thing X where the equivalence suggested is not literally true. Some examples from our old friend Shakespeare:

Night’s candles were burnt out

If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head

Death, that hath suck’d the honey of thy breath

We have here stars described as candles, hairs as wires, and breath as honey. But we have a conspicuous absence of any qualifying phrases such as “like” or “as.” It’s not that the stars were like candles but that they were candes. Metaphor, then, is a sort of playful lying that serves to provide clarity or at least more memorable description.

Really good metaphor does more than just describe X in terms of Y, though. Take “the honey of thy breath,” for example. Shakespeare could have used any metaphor here, but the poem would have had rather a different tone had he said something like “Death hath swallowed the carrion of thy breath.” Honey implies sweetness both in smell and taste, which suggests fond attachment to the person whose breath death hath sucked (in this case the attachment is Romeo’s to Juliet). Further, honey is a substance one might actually enjoy tasting and smelling, and one can imagine that a lovestruck young man in fair Verona might entertain similar desires for the tastes and smells associated with nuzzling up to his beloved Capulet. So the metaphor Shakespeare chose here is not merely a word trade but is in fact a pretty complex, sensually evocative way of explaining Romeo’s feelings for Juliet. It’s really quite lovely.

One thing to keep on the lookout for is the mixed metaphor. Take this example from an episode of Futurama (via Wikipedia): “If we can hit that bull’s-eye then the rest of the dominoes will fall like a house of cards… Checkmate.” Here we’ve strung together a bunch of metaphors, and the result is a jumble of what amount to catch-phrases that do more to confuse what’s being said than to amplify it or make it beautiful.

Simile is a little less brash than metaphor because it tends to rely on qualifying words like “like” and “as.” Some examples:

Busy as a bee

Happy as a clam

I slept like a log

Bees we think of as busy because they’re all the time bustling about, clams look happy because their shells open to look like a wide grin, and logs lie very still, so expressing these abstract notions and actions in terms of other things adds a little illustrative punch to the statement. Often a simile brings together two things that are essentially unlike one another, and it always states the resemblance explicitly, drawing attention to the comparison rather than just slipping the comparison in quietly the way metaphor does.

Of course, metaphor and simile are fraught with all sorts of nuance. For example, some things that use “like” look like similes but aren’t because they’re actual non-figurative comparisons. And there’s something called an “epic simile” that’s a lot more involved than the simple X is like Y formula. It doesn’t take much digging to find that there’s vocabulary like “tenor” and “vehicle” associated with both metaphor and simile. There are things called frozen metaphors and dead metaphors. But that’s a lot more than I wanted to cover in a short introduction to these items in the figurative tool belt, so I’ll leave them for another time.

Reminds me of The Highwayman, “the moon was a ghostly galleon” and “the road was a ribbon of moonlight”.

But it also further reminds me of (and in light of your post, you’ll probably enjoy) Ed Byrn’s comic routine about Alanis Morissette. It is initially about irony, but if you watch to the end, metaphor and simile plays a large role: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nT1TVSTkAXg

There is a fantastic Italian film called Il Postino (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Il_Postino) about the Chilean poet Pablo Neruda and his postman who discovers from Pablo the amazing power of ‘la metafora’. I highly recommend it!

II remember
Not too long ago
When sexual harassment
And working men had to go
Find someplace than the job
To find a wife to snow.

My job had a meeting to curb sexual harassment
And I ask, “Why is the Jerry Springer show on TV in the lunch room?”
To this I received a frown.
To this I made a metaphor as many times before,
I said I don’t n\know what I met-her-for
And I didn’t know what her-ass-ment

Daryl tore open the bag of treats like a starving monkey would a bag of peanuts. The monkey who was illiterate couldn’t read the printing on the bag which clearly stated “open here”.The monkey could be excused for his poor manners. The monkey whose name was Dayrell went on to teach other primates etiquette at the WordPressable Institute of Higher Social Behavior and Photography in New York. He was awarded the Golden Peanut Award for excellence, which he promptly ate.
The End.

Reblogged this on La-la-language and commented:
Today’s redundancy. Couldn’t help reblogging this, though. It’s so important for us to think about how we depend on imagery in our everyday language use (that ish ain’t just for Shakespeare, kidz).

Reblogged this on Cheryl Andrews and commented:
Fellow writers, Daryl L. L. Houston does a great job of clarifying the difference between metaphor and simile. I’m keeping this post as a reference point.

Awesome English lesson! Bloggers practice writing on a regular basis, often every day. And the discussion and analysis of writing in the context of blogging . . . well, it’s encouraging a widespread appreciation of the language. Blogging is a better learning experience than College English 101, and definitely more fun. Civilization advances in unexpected leaps and stumbles.