MY PET GOAT

Author Comments

This is MY PET GOAT. Turn this up loud, or it won't sound like it's supposed to.
L/is/ten to e/ntire/ thing befo///e review/ng or r/ating.

myspace.com/samcashion.

These are the lyrics:

Soundscape escape
Peripherals of memory
You can't handle
The fucked up thoughts inside of me
I'll read a childrens book
While the world comes crashing down
I killed four thousand men
And I cannot dawn a frown
Stock up and facts
And preach the lies
While there are families that I pry
Silencing the infidels by force at night
I put down the protest but I know you're right

We travel the earth
We tread over ground
We grimace at all
The dead bodies we found

I can't tell
Exactly what will happen next
Motivations from
A man on a crucifix
I'm apathetic to
the world we need to fix

We travel the earth
We tread over ground
We grimace at all
The dead bodies we found

compress your voice more
eq the crash's 4800+ hz up more
pan the shaker so you can put more around 1500 hz
reverb the bg vox more
have the guitar/bass eqed up more and louder for some of the parts where you werent singing and it wasnt
was that chorus or flange at the end that was sounding all wobbly?

It's always nice to hear something with vocals in them, though in this one some of them seem to be a little hard to hear and not to clear. Nice to post the lyrics in the comments though. The intro part was done pretty well and all the music here seems to be played pretty well and fitting together, which is good.

The vocals seem to sound like they fit in with the song, the only problem I have with them is they seem a little hard to hear through much of the music, so might want to work on that. But otherwise everything here sounds to come together pretty well, good job.

This song is certainly alternative. The lyrics sound like they've been borrowed from somebody like the Beatles, the Red Hot Chili Peppers or Beck, as they are completely off the wall.

I think that the vocal effects were nicely done - was it all by you, or did you have some other vocalists assisting you? How did you set up the music as well - was it all done from in front of your computer screen, or do you actually have a band for this?