1Writing an EssayClick here to get startedCreated by Jennifer Davis 2The Diagram

When we write an essay the flow of information can be fit into a diagram that looks something like this

You will find out what fits into all of these shapes. For now lets start at the beginning. Think about the way that you would start an essay. 3The Introduction

When we start a project we usually start at the beginning. Keeping this in mind, where do you think the introduction is found in the essay?

Click on the section in the essay to the right where you think the introduction would be found.

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Hint You use the introduction to let the reader know what the topic of your paper will be. They would read this information first.

Click here to try again. 5Great!

The introduction is that paragraph that is used to introduce the writer to the essay. Therefore, it is the first paragraph in the essay.

For the essay diagram the introduction looks like this

6To Format an Introduction . . .

The first sentence of an introduction should

be about the main theme of your essay.

After the first sentence the information is

narrowed until the thesis is reached.

Broad SentenceThesis 7

Click on the sentence below that you think

would make the best first sentence for an

introduction for an essay on the topic of

your favorite singer.

I am going to talk about my favorite singer in this essay. Frank Sinatra is a great singer. Working hard often helps to add character to a person. 8

Not Quite.

Remember the first sentence should not be too specific and it should include a broad topic that you will address in your essay.

9Right!

The first sentence of an introduction is broad. So using the sentence

Working hard often helps to add character to a person.

means that you will focus on how your favorite singer worked hard to become successful.

10The Thesis

This is the most important sentence in your essay!

A thesis is a sentence that tells the reader what your paper is about. It also provides some main points for your paper.

Click here for an example 11For example. . .

If you were writing an essay on Marilyn Monroe, your thesis might say

Although Marilyn Monroe suffered a tragic end, she had survived a traumatic childhood to become one of the most well-known actresses of all time.

If this was your thesis you would have 3 main points in your paper

Marilyn Monroe suffered a tragic end.

Marilyn Monroe had a traumatic childhood.

Marilyn Monroe is one of the most well-known actress of all time.

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Think of your thesis as an umbrella for your essay. All of the information in your essay should fit under the umbrella.

13Going back to the example

Although Marilyn Monroe suffered a tragic end, she had survived a traumatic childhood to become one of the most well-known actresses of all time.

All of the information in your essay will fit under this umbrella. It will need to fit under one of the three main points.

Marilyn Monroe survived a traumatic childhood.She is one of the most well-known actresses of all time.Marilyn Monroe suffered a tragic end.Supporting InformationSupporting InformationSupporting InformationSupporting Information 14Back to those 3 main points

Marilyn Monroe suffered a tragic end.

Marilyn Monroe had a traumatic childhood.

Marilyn Monroe is one of the most well-known actress of all time.

Based on the three main points listed above, click on the sentence that would make good supporting information in your essay.

Marilyn Monroe was a natural brunette.

Marilyn Monroe was in some movies.

Marilyn Monroe seemed to shine on camera.

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Hint Read the three main points and try to determine which sentence could fit under the umbrella.

16Correct!

That sentence fits under the umbrella of the main point

Marilyn Monroe is one of the most well known actresses of all time.

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The thesis is the last sentence of your introduction.

It is found here on the diagram

The IntroductionThesis 18The Body of the Essay

The body of the essay is where all of the supporting information is located. This is the middle section of the essay.

Its section on our essay diagram looks like this

The body portion is the longest part of an essay.

19What information fits here?

Click on the group of information below that you think would fit the best into the body portion of an essay.

Name

Date

Hour

Topic sentence

Quotes

examples

Thesis

Restatement of thesis

A list of the works cited in the essay.

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Hint The body portion of the essay contains all of the information needed to support the thesis.

What kind of information would you use to back up what you wrote in your thesis?

Click here to try again 21Correct!

In the body portion of the essay we use items like quotes and examples to back up what was stated in the thesis sentence.

Each body paragraph is also started with a topic sentence.

Click here to learn about topic sentences 22Topic Sentences

A topic sentence

is located as the first sentence of each body paragraph

provides the main idea for each paragraph

shows how the information in that paragraph will connect to the thesis

Ties together information in the paragraph

Topic SentenceSupporting InformationA Body Paragraph 23Click on the first word of the topic sentence in the paragraph below. Tom Sawyer and Huckleberry Finn love adventure. For example, Tom convinces Huck and their friend, Joe, to go to Jacksons Island with him to pretend that they are pirates. Later Tom and Huck explore a haunted house in search of treasure. The boys seem to thrive on the adventures that they encounter. 24

Try again.

Remember The topic sentence is like an introduction to

a body paragraph. Think of where an

introduction is located.

Click here to try again 25Right!

The topic sentence introduces the paragraph and fits in with one of the main ideas in your thesis. It also connects the ideas in a paragraph.

26The Conclusion

The conclusion of a book or movie comes at the end. Click on the part of the essay diagram below that you think is the conclusion.

27Yes!

The conclusion of the essay is the last section.

The conclusion is used to

Restate the thesis

Give a finished feel to the essay

Leave the reader with a final thought

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The first section is called the introduction. It is used to introduce the essay and provide the main points.

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Not quite.

This is the body of the essay. It is used to provide supporting information for the thesis.

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Now think back to the shape of the introduction. The conclusion is like the introduction, but it is flipped upside down.

Click the place in the diagram of the conclusion where you think you would restate the thesis.

31Right!

The thesis is stated at the point of the triangle. After the thesis is restated the conclusion moves on to some final thoughts.

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Remember that in the introduction the thesis was the last sentence. It was found at the point of the triangle.

Click here to try again 33Remember. . .

The base of the triangle in the diagram shows us where a broad statement belongs. We started the essay with a broad statement, now we end with one at the base of the conclusion triangle.

Broad Statement 34A Review

Which format is correct for an essay?

35Great Job!

Youre off to a great start for writing your essay!

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Not quite.

Hint Remember the thesis is located at the point in each triangle. It is the last sentence of the introduction and the first sentence of the conclusion.

Click here to try again

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