aahhh OMG i swear i thought Aragorn was hitting on her (despite having a wife coz u never know) and so i totally didnt see that coming... the whole descendant thing. I love her reaction... kind of realistic :)

Absolutely beautiful! Couldnt leave it out of my sight, except when i went to sleep for a few hours. It was a very good read, and im glad I found this site, or else I would've missed quite a few good stories :)

Author's Response: It looks like my spam guards were working overtime because I never got notified about this review. I'm so sorry to just be responding now.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I'm very happy that you enjoyed this story. And I'm glad I found this site, too. I've read a number of wonderful stories here!

Wonderful I have waited for these two chps and I am happy as a lark! I am glad she made it though I wonder why the trussing turkey to the stick thing? Oh well I guess I will find out later. Snarky Haldir! He is so arrogant and then lovable at the same time. Sheesh!

Author's Response: I'm sorry you had to wait so long. Really, I never intended for this story to be so long or to take so much time to write and post. Um, the trussing thing was all about her being a difficult prisoner. The elves were a touch afraid of her, and it was sort of the Middle Earth version of a squad car, LOL. And, they were correct, the minute they let her walk herself, she tried to escape. I LOVE Haldir, and I could NOT let Katie go without meeting him *g*
Thanks so much for being patient, reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it!

Title: Over the river and through the woods... Reviewer: cherry_blossomSigned

i really luv this story can't wait 4 the update

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I finally have this completed and am working on rewrites now, before shipping the chapters off to my beta. Hopefully we will see a new chapter posted in a week's time. Or perhaps, before the end of this week.

Title: Over the river and through the woods... Reviewer: Gemini_ElfSigned

Well, I'd say this is an incredibly amusing fic that is well written and I would be delighted to beta read it for you!

Author's Response: Thank you. I am writing the rest and getting it finished up. I will try and keep my eye out for the items you've pointed out, and hopefully make the job easier for you! I didn't respond to all of your reviews yet. I will wait until I correct the errors you listed first. Thanks again for agreeing. I will contact you as soon as I have it ready.

Dragon had better say it’s peace with it’s maker Correction: Dragon had better say its peace with its maker. It’s belly was no longer exposed.Correction: Its belly was no longer exposedthree well placed shots into it’s belly,Correction: three well placed shots into its belly falter in it’s escapeCorrection: falter in its escape...Basically I'd check all your its/it's for correctness! There were a few more in that paragraph, too many to list.

and they were already a day later Correction: And they were already a day latewhich glows when Orc’s are presentCorrection Which glows when Orcs are present.

I liked the scene with Elrond Elladan and Elrohir...Hm...There was a lot of the twins in your last fic, but none here. Are we going to see more of them?

Title: A dwarf would have gone for the wine. Reviewer: Gemini_ElfSigned

stepping on front of the next Correction. - in front of the next man“I need to go and bade Aragorn a good night.” Correction: "I need to go and bid Aragorn a good night.""I feel his is right"Correction: I feel he is right.

Ok, finally noticed some obvious mistakes;‘Son of a BITCH!” Katie said at once. “I am no horse or..or..wild boar.” she said at once. - Would look better as ‘Son of a BITCH!” Katie said at once, “I am no horse or..or..wild boar!"

Also you have a habit of only putting two full-stops when there's a pause. It's easier for the reader if you put three, because otherwise it looks like you hit the full-stpp button twice by accident XD

Well now you have a beta, so no excuses :P I'm just flicking through this today, I'm kinda dying (Hate being a female!) plus I need to get the chores done today (How fun >.

Author's Response: Awesome, welcome aboard! Oh girl stuff, the joy of being a woman, right? I considered afflicting poor Katie with it but decided against it. She's got enough problems. Ah...chores are never fun. Psstt...see...three stops, not two. You are already a good influence on me ;-)

TequilaAnuir, I would be happy to beta the rest of Katie Spencer. The story is good but the errors distracted me from the flow of the narrative. I do want to read more, so I sincerely offer my services.Tenn' enomentielvo. Celefindel

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy the story. Sorry about all the errors, they really can distract from the story. At the time I posted that last chapter I was waiting to see if the person I had approached about doing the beta for the rest would accept, which she just has and also went through and pointed out what is wrong with the chapters already posted. Thank you so much for offering your services on this, but would it be all right if I keep your name handy for possible future fics?
My new policy is: No more posting any fics in any fandom without proper beta. This is a hobby for me not something I'm taking too seriously, but that doesn't mean I should hurt people's poor eyeballs. I posted my fics hoping that other people can have a good time with a story, not make their eyes bleed. End of vow.
So, it looks like I have a bunch of errors to get to! BTW, what does Tenn enomentielvo mean? I use occasional Elvish in stories, but just what I can get translated on the net. I'm absolutely clueless otherwise, but it just seems so pretty. As in: someone could totally insult you, but you just wouldn't care because it sounded so poetic.

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