Chapter 3 Page 35

I'm honestly quite suprised at how many people believed what I said in the authors comments of the last pages. First off, it would throw aside all that suspense building for nothing, second, I'd be unlikely to blatantly reveal what's coming up in future pages, and thirdly... ... Like I'd be as nice as that ;D

I had a perfect vision in my head for how Feraligatr would do the attack. ... Too perfect, I realised, where had I subconsiously stolen it from... ... Ah. Bahamut. Curses! Just a bit different then.

This chapter is longer than the others, because I'm hoping it to have something of a conclusion... The end of the first arc. I'd like to get this chapter finished before the new year, I'd be most pleased with that.

maybe Atty has that "I'm not moving" look to him because him and Dragonthing snuck in some awsome, high-level training between updates. :D
Actually, I don't know what's going to happen. D:
(also, last page, it was the user comments on the page that threw me off. So I was like, "wait, what? you mean he really is going to give up?" )
(...I think... Actually, I can't remember what I was thinking last page. ^_^" But I didn't think he'd give up.)

lmao some authors can go ahead and reveal the ending of their comics via author comments seeing as how barely anyone reads those (mostly other authors read them, cuz we know its important, but the lerkers and junk just skip through that junk) SO FEEL FREE TO COPY AND PASTE THE ENTIRE MOKEPON SCRIPT INTO THE NEXT AUTHORCOMMENT. you should make a fake script for lulz.

I just wanna say that you draw Feraligatr VERY WELL. Like, the drool and his skin. It's just. Really good. And well. Damn. Lmao, I can't even explain it IT'S JUST REALLY GOOD OKAY?
OH GOD HYDRO PUMP. ;;

Ture, Sonic_Boom a hydro pump would be fitting for this fight against a fire type but I dunno.. could be hydro pump, hyper beam, or ice beam from the looks of it (since he can learn all of the three). x3

Then again, if this turns out like te bubblebeam, then it could be a small jet of water... which only make me invision the watersaws, a small jet of super-pressurized water capable of easily slicing through rock and metal like butter.

@Nyah-HEH?! o.O : That's supposed to be "our little secret"... or did you just notice it now?

@gamemaster1_11@hotmail.com: I never thought of that! That sounds like just the thing Atty would do too! He'd nonchalantly hold the pokeball and (almost inaudibly) mutter "return." This would happen just before the hydro pump hit DT. It would be so close that Atty would be the only one who even knew until the mist settled after the attack and we'd see Atty w/ the pokeball on the next page.

Maybe there'll be something like in the TV series? The hero Pokemon loses its first big battle, the trainer rushes it to the PokeCenter, heals it, and says, "Even though you lost, I still love you and you're mine. So, let's use our friendship and get stronger!" *sparkle, sparkle*

what i think might happen is:feraligator uses hyper beam kills dt then has a little "snack" between meals or maybe a level 1 rattata with endeavor and quick attack bread into it appears wearing a focus sach and it takes the hit left with just 1 hp uses endeavor then attacks with quick attack and defeats feraligator leveling up dt and the rattata a big bunch!

I think this Feraligatr just has a bit of a flair for the dramatic. That's why his hydropump has such an unorthodox beginning. After all, did you see that breath he took for his bubble(beam)? That's probably why he doesn't wipe the drool either. Maskboy bought him a hanky and everything, but he's convinced he's scarier this way.

...Maybe he took steroids as a teenage Croconaw, too. It would explain the monstrous size. I bet he was bullied by all the other Totodile and developed a complex. Who's the big one now, huh?!

He's such a good match for his Gary-types-hating master. Who, judging by the mask, has his own fondness for the dramatic.

Atticus "has to find a way" to win, and he never loses. Clearly there are only three possible outcomes: Atticus wins, he draws, or the battle is postponed. Dragonthing, though determined, lacks the training to defeat Feraligatr; he can't be relied on.

Theory: Atticus will resort to dirty tricks like participating in the battle himself. If I recall correctly, the battle ends when all of your pokémon have fainted and are back in their balls. He might refuse to return Dragonthing long enough for the enemy to forfeit out of impatience, or he might step in front of Feraligatr's attack, forcing it to stop. In the games, the trainer never ever got attacked. Atticus is unconventional enough to kick a Rattata out of his way, for example.

Your comic is very entertaining. All drawings are well done, and the story is interesting to read.
Hmm... maybe Dragonthing will evolve? Or it is too early? Questions, questions...
If they appears that means comic is good.

I love this.I love your comic! I like the take on the issue many of us thought of after having beaten several of these games. If the real world took issues like npcs into account. I hope you update soon!

OVERKILL 99999! ITS OVER NINE THOUSAND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But yeah H0ly, that attack is so stolen. Bahamut will be summoned, and you will be punished in Yevons name.... Jk~ I'm Al-bhed, I don't believe in Yevon :D

heyaI rarely comment on any comic I read, but I just had to tell you about this wierd dream I had this night, in which Atticus and Kahn came into my room and started to battle, and in Kahn's case catch, my pokemon plushies! it was totally wierd, kahn stole my plushies by capturing them in pokeballs! wtf!

Excellent!!I just started reading your comic today, and I've gotta say that this has been a very exciting experience to the very end. From your drawings to your unorthodox plot, I have enjoyed every second of the 45 min. it took to read this (slow computer). Keep up the good work Dood.

XDOMG!!! You SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO need to update soon because I wanna see what happens next before I forget stuff again... That's why I saved it and sent a link to my friends and boyfriend so that they could enjoy it, too. ^_^

@GrifEmmy has a point. It's very difficult to keep up with this kind of stuff--especially with most schools and universities having exams and such. I love H0ly for the incredible work she's done so far and I don't want to see her rush a page if it means reduced quality. If she goes from once a week to once every other week I'll be okay with it because her works is WORTH waiting for.
Please don't post any flame here.