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I ended up posting it but it immediately got very bad feedback. Now i'm just working at one of my smaller ideas. A small, simple idea that you can't really complain about. But being that my first one sucked, you can probably find a lot wrong with it.

"Item #:" should be bolded. Should be written as "SCP-3789", not just "3789"
Same thing with "Object Class" and headers, such as "Special Containment Procedures".

SCP-3789 are

Should be "is", as SCP-3789 is a singular object, while there are multiple instances of SCP-3789. If you want them to be kept together, I'd say "SCP-3789 and all instances of SCP-3789 are to be kept in a vault located at Site-76"

It is recommended to keep SCP-3789 away from all unauthorized personnel.

This is implied for basically all SCPs, especially when you say only Level 3 personnel are allowed to access the vault immediately after.

Entrance to SCP-3789's vault is allowed to level 3 personnel and above only.

Something like "Entrance to SCP-3789's vault is to be restricted to Level 3 and above personnel only." might work better. Also, I personally think that Level 3 is overkill. Level 2 will suffice.

In order to come in contact with SCP-3789 requires a petition so be signed by the majority of Class A personnel.

Class A personnel wouldn't be contacted over such a trivial thing as this. They're zipties. They aren't a threat to the integrity of the entire foundation, or even the local site.

Do not let Dr.███ view this document under all circumstances. In the instance that Dr.███ views or learns of this document, termination is requested.

There's no reason for this. There was no reason to wipe the memory of the doctor in the first place. The foundation has access to top-tier medical equipment, so her hand could probably have been re-attached. She could just see a psychiatrist if she's mentally unstable afterwards, but amnesics shouldn't be the first thing you do.

The description was rough. Usually, a description should be
1. What it is
2. What it does
3. Extra details/origin

SCP-3789-1 are .45 meters in length are like any normal Zip-Tie in all detectable senses apart from the fact that nothing in any way can destroy SCP-3789-1.

"SCP-3789-1 instances" might work better in most cases. "damage" would work better instead of destroy (in my opinion)

This includes cutting, melting, any acidic chemical, compression, controlled explosives, or tearing.

Not really a complete sentence

SCP-3789-1 is as well stain proof and can have any substance washed off of it without a trace of it being applied to SCP-3789-1.

Elaboration on "stain proof" isn't really necessary

When tied, SCP-3789 is still unable to be undone in any way. This includes all the methods stated above.

SCP-3789 is the bag, not one of the zipties. "still" doesn't make sense in this context.

Of the 8 used SCP-3789-1's only 2 of them have a known location. Both are placed in the same vault as SCP-3789, separated from the original SCP-3789-1's. There is no known origin of SCP-3789. Still awaiting disclosure on origin.

Should be a comma after the first "SCP-3789-1's". The origin is that they were found in the female doctor's desk, more or less. Why not investigate into the brand that made them?

From now on, admittance to SCP-3789 is restricted to Class A personnel.

For a safe class object, this is kinda dumb, and not allowed in-universe.
"Class A personnel are not allowed access to the areas of the facility containing such anomalies and are to be kept in secured areas at all times."

Mishandling SCP-3789 could really mean someones life.

Welcome to the SCP foundation. People die all the time. Not a big deal. People are replaceable.

Dr.███ reports that she was simply "bored with no work to do"

This is kinda dumb. Why would someone do this in the first place?

All testing and interrogation proves that Dr.███ is in fact not lying.

Unnecessary information in my opinion.

I already went over the problems with her being given amnestics.

Addendum-3789-1: Shortly after being reported, Dr.██████ arrived to analyze and test SCP-3789. Dr.██████ was able to confirm after multiple tests that SCP-3789 did in fact have anomalous properties. SCP-3789 is known to completely resist all damage from blades, fire, acidic substances, explosions, and tearing.

Again, not really important information

TLDR: It's boring, with too much importance and no hook. There's nothing interesting about it. It's an indestructible object. We already have a ton of those, but they all have one thing in common; they're not JUST indestructible. There has to be more to it than it just being indestructible.

Space is a whole lot of stuff and a whole lot of not-stuff — charles sagen