Nicely done. I like the way you found a common thread in these stories and strung them together. It's cool to see the parallels between them. Good characterization, as well. There are a couple of grammatical errors (such as not capitalizing O.W.L.s), but it's not that bad. And the way you separated the paragraphs with the dashes worked really well. Good job!

I think I enjoyed this story so much because a) those are my favorite ships (yes, they are gonna happen people, with the exception of J/L, cuz they already did happen), b) it was nicely written and c) it was very true to the stories. You didn't get all wild and go off the deep end. Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Flame girl Date: 03/04/05 16:05 Chapter: Common Ground

Wow. I was thinking about saying why don't you write a sequal, which would be cool, but I think the stories end here. As I love all three of these ships it's perfect and well written. This is a masterpiece and art in itself that enhances the beauty of writing. Love it!