I love everything about this story. All the characters are lovable in their own way, and I hate that they have to leave the halfway house at all. Beautiful work; keep it up!

Kristina chapter 11 . 1/17/2013

love it a lot! your characters are very lively and actually quite likable and different! I also love how you approach the story telling it in such short, independent chapters. please, please continue this! these short stories are funnier than anything I've read on fiction press so far! As a personal opinion: I would not like to see actual flashbacks about Rhen's, Rudy's, Max's or Elliot's past in any of the chapters. the one with the car was great though! :)
But in general I just like how you give the reader more subtle hints in tiny bits and pieces about the characters and also the insights about their everyday lives and interactions.
Please continue and I wish you all the best, I'll definitely look for updates regularly.