personally, I have no issues with this. I suggest that one of the staff make this a sticky. This is a good thread.

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ECHOESHUNTER8 5/14/09 wrote:Denjie, your Squad Leader because I can't be active enough to do so, and also, your the oldest member here (as in experiance). So please don't give me a reason to question your work here please.

ECHOESHUNTER8 5/14/09 wrote:Denjie, your Squad Leader because I can't be active enough to do so, and also, your the oldest member here (as in experiance). So please don't give me a reason to question your work here please.

I agree, good poetry. I liked this one, too, except there's something slightly off in the last stanza.

Memories of you are forever,Life without you is unbearable,My mask is back and repelling,My feelings will never change only strengthen.

When I read it out loud, the very last line kinda . . . clangs a little bit. I'm not good at critiquing poetry, so I don't know exactly how to say it. That last line just doesn't quite want to fit in. I don't know why. I hope this is a help.