1. are you ever going to go back over this and proofread it? For example, your use of "me" is woefully inadequate...

"And because me and Naruto are now a couple"

should be

"And because Naruto and I are now a couple"

the reason?

A general rule of thumb to use when you're deciding when to use the "I" or "me" is to split each one into two seperate sentences. It the grammar correct?

"And because Naruto is now a couple"
"And Because me are now a couple."

nope.

"Because Naruto is now a couple."
"Because I am now a couple."

Huzzah!

Also you're missing a lot of commas and semicolons.

Lucifer chapter 29 . 5/15/2012

Dope story!

99 luffy chapter 7 . 2/27/2012

I do not want to sound mean, but can you please clarify your sentences it seems like you change your thought process in the middle of them. It's really annoying to try to find out what you mean as a reader. Also I suggest spell check it helps out a lot.

the summery made me curious, there ain't enough stories of Ino, while she has such a cool jutsu. Anyway: please get a beta, cause there are some lines that make no sense and a lot of grammar mistakes. it is a waste if people leave because of that, for the story is interesting enough!