113 thoughts on “Douluo Dalu – 328 – Sun Angel”

For what? Bad grammar? Spelling mistakes or typos every two words?
My eyes are almost bleeding from reading this… the author should learn English and re-read this shit before posting it. Looks worse than the homework of a 10 year old fag.

lol all of you are spouting bullshit. I could do that with google translaitor, just like your fanboy crush did and I would also reread it to make the text fluently. But hey thats my opinion and by the way I found that other translation. I must say its not that bad at least not worse than this shit.

All of you who say I’m mr. perfect in English, you just accept things as they are. I at least can criticize, when I think somethings not good. You wanna get at me for not comprehending Chinese? lol I would do a hundred times better just with google. But why should I? Because some pu++ys can’t even criticize some random idiot who lets google do his work and gets money form all of you? HAHAHAHA I belittle all of you. Get some backbone this writing is garbage and everyone who opposes this opinion should re enter preschool.

Hey, i wanna see it… or had i already seen you snapped? More dude! I’m getting kinda bored…I think, i’ve read this somewhere before. Show me something else. Hahaha. Anyway, you’ve mispelled *google translator, *something’s…*pu++ys? Seriously, you have the audacity to even think that anyone would think of you as mr. Perfect or a perfectionist with high standards. This is hilarious.

he probably likes it, he might just have a different way of showing it. hahaha. what the hell is he doing here if not for that? i’ve seen him hanging around here for a quite a lot even though he seems pissed off almost everytime.

but then again, he might be a she. i’m not sure about that, so, i just assumed. apologies if i am wrong.

I stopped reading a while ago. Just thought I’d check to see how it’s going… I think the last time I checked was in June. We’ve only come 4 or 5 chapters along and it’s nearly October 1. I’m more concerned with the frequency. But if the translation is really that bad(I dont feel like checking and being even more disappointed) then that’s even more to be concerned about.

Dear Mr. No Life,
Your grammar isn’t any better. You might want to spell check before criticizing someone else. I’m not sure about everyone else, but I had a hard time comprehending you. Reading novels, especially foreign ones can be tricky. We hobbies are trying to enjoy and maximize the little to none liberty we accumulated from our busy lives. No one is perfect; if you had a hard time, you can, by all means, use google translate and not stick around until chapter 328.
Sincerely,
Not Your Fan

thank you Bagelson, for keep translating this novel.
with no proofreader, the typo is considered small.
there’s a little bit more, hope you can continue translate it to the end (although it redundant with other sites) for your own achievement & satisfaction.

ps: ignore those malicious words. i think there’s a lot of supportive reader out there, but we (including me) normally be a silent reader.

hope the best for u
* many2 thanks for all both the author and translator in the world that fulfill our thirst of reading good stories and maybe enrich our life along. *

first: thanks for the chapter.
second: the only explaination i have for not beeing able to find them with his devine sense is death, so maybe bibi dong killed them all cause she also reached god level.
but that is just my guess sadly we have to wait if we want to read it here.

Yup my guess as well, definately Bibi Dong’s hand in there, if you read carefully you notice that the author says when Tang San allows Renxue to escape that Tang San didn’t know that allowing her to escape would put him in mortal danger later. This tells me that in the next few chapters we will see an antagonist flip and Bibi Dong will be the final boss and who knows maybe Renxue will manage to convince TS to allow her to be a concubine. Honestly I feel sorry for her, she looks quite hot from what the author mentioned, so TS would be an idiot to refuse a harem situation in the end.

I don’t agree with the harem route. Also the way the author wrote this novel, relationships are monogamous and couples don’t tolerate additional members. Perhaps you feel that TS would be an idiot to refuse a harem, but he would be an even bigger idiot to break XW’s heart and lose her. I highly doubt she would accept another women intruding on their relationship. Just go back to the chapter where TS encountered Renxue’s shadow during the Seagod trial. Even though it was an illusion XW still felt sharp heartache and pain.

I see everyone posting about Bibi-don’t killing or helping the Title douluo and Quran renxue, but did you all forget that Bibi dong consumed Renxues father to become the Rakasha inheritor or something. The reason letting Renxue go is so dangerous to Tang san is because Bibi song, after becoming a god, consumed the god of angels making her a lot more powerful.

Don’t get your hopes up. Hahaha. That is if he feels like it. Anyway, i think that he had already finished reading it…and…translating it takes a lot of time and effort and i think he’s loosing interest in this community…i would also feel the same, if i am in his position with the ungrateful guys still lurking around here

(this is not about you anymore, i’m just too lazy to bother creating another comment). well, it’s not like they have anymore business here. anyway, they said that bagelson is doing this as his hobby, and a lot of smartass here said a lot of bad stuffs and info they did not fully understand which is kinda normal for people who think they are special and wants attention. In a sense, i got to know how narrow minded a lot people are, while hanging around in this community. i think those people in real life are those pathetic people who complains a lot, not happy with their lives. Well, i already developed a quite higher tolerance with these people over time, which is quite a good thing for me.

anyway, i’m hoping to read a new release from bagelson again…soon.. but anytime is also good. keep doing what makes you happy bagelson! just wanna let you know that you are awesome!

lol you should stop promoting a pre schooler. I mean come on bad grammar, spelling mistakes and this whole garbage text looks like its out of google translaitor. And even if he is writing this by himself, he should be ashamed to post something like this. A little more effort wouldn’t be bad… But hey its hobby right? So its all ok… Not really he gets money though ads and translates with google. Its even easier than being a YouTuber, so whats there to be thankful for? Just because he’s the only one translating it a little bit better than someone else? Not for me and my opinion has a right to be published, just like this shit.

Bagelson, please stop posting, there are already completed versions of this and you obviously can’t make it better than them so just quit. I can’t believe you are doing this for the money, because that wage would be way too low. And If you still continue, you should at least reread the stuff you translated wit google otherwise you would just embarrass yourself.

I have tried that site and it gets blocked by my anti virus advising it collects data usage and other personal information that id rather not give away. Also I don’t see any ads here that you are talking about there are no ads that actually get in the way of reading are you promoting wuxiadream because you are one of them, and are wanting the money from this maybe.

Taking a direct quote from their translated chapter of 328, “Once Qian Ren Xue had restored her powers, big troubles would come. She was a god-ranked spirit master anyway. If she couldn’t hold the ethics of a true spirit master and began to stealth them, she would be a big threat to them.”

And now take a look at bagel’s translation, “If Qian Renxue was allowed to recover, she would still be a huge headache. After all, she was a god level power. If she didn’t persist with her conviction and fought a guerilla war against the Heaven Dou army, she would become an enormous threat.”

According to your first comment on this chapter, you just criticized bagel for his bad grammar, among other things. Even on this comment you say that it’s “not any worse than this.” Either you honestly have no fucking clue how to differentiate between good and bad levels of writing, or you’re the one who should “re enter preschool,” taken directly from your first comment 😉 Please, stop embarrassing yourself and just get off this site you fucking piece of trash. Just stop existing you “10 year old fag.” No one wants you nor your brain-dead stupid ass.

Please Bagelson, finished the story. it’s almost 2 years and the novel already finished a long time ago. Please let this end and give us, your reader, a proper closure. We deserve it for sticking with you from start to end.

Seem the few fans the other translator has come here often. They probably jealous that this translation is a head. The new people to the wuxia/xianxia novels forget the release schedule we had before and most of us would take chapters with some mistakes over no chapters at all. Go buy a book if it ever releases for no mistake version.

Thank you so much for translating this.
I had been hooked since i started reading your translations last month. Finally (sadly) caught up to the latest chapter.
Looking forward to your future translations too.

Ummm it’s getting kind of ridiculous now that there’s been no update in over a month. I don’t even mean a new chapter, but some sort of explanation as to what’s going on. If you’re not going to continue translating, or are going to wait more than a month between chapters, I’d ask that you give us a post saying that you’re done so someone else can finish the translation without stepping on anyone’s toes. If you don’t want to translate anymore, that’s absolutely up to you, but you shouldn’t make readers suffer in limbo. That’s just unprofessional.

This story, and this website, are what got me into the world of wuxia and xianxia novels. To the point where I’m currently part of a translation team on Wuxiaworld. Which means… I owe Bagelson quite a bit.
That said, updates have been so inconsistent lately that I’ve lost interest in how this story is going to end. I’ve read DD2, I’ve read the wikia… I can guess the rest.
If you’re reading this, Bagelson, I wish you all the best. And thank you.

Bagelson thank you for the great run. While all of us do wish you continued..During your translation run you brought a lot of entertainment to a big audience. Hope you continue to bring the same level of excellence in whatever you’re doing now as you did with these translations.

Has anyone actually thought that something might have happened to Bagelson????
So much negativity here for a person who does this for nothing.
I would love to see some of you guys doing this and getting chewed out by keyboard warriors.

i want to stick here until new year, so, if you do not mind bagelson, please take your time translating the rest of the chapters. you deserve it. =) never mind some of the annoying people here, they just want to be heard, and it’s always just a reflection of their own personal issues. so don’t take those to heart. always remember that awesome people are blessed. enjoy whatever it is that is keeping you busy.

While I understand that translating is not easy, it’s been five months, and only 5 chapters have shown up. I think it is time to pass the story on to someone with more time to dedicate to it. Respect for everything you’ve done so far, but the translation for part two has already passed this.