I didn't really like that the Haiku only had one comparison. In my opinion, well written Haikus should give out several message. I liked the idea of waking up on a Sunday morning and having coffee with your Sweetheart, it gave off a warm tone.

As an author, I feel like it's good as it is. Doesn't need to be longer. I personally love coffee on a Sunday morning. It's refreshing. If it went on too much longer, it'd just drag on. It's meant to be short I think.

short and sweet! it's amazing how so few words can say so much- something so significant. especially for people who like coffee! and sorry to advertise here, but i just submitted my first stuff-please give me feed-back

Exuse me! but did you know this poem, word for word, was writtin two years ago and placed elsewear online by someone of the name, Samantha B. That was longer ago than you have been a member. Did you place that one as well, or is this a word for word plagerism? I would aprecait an honest answer.

You know, SMWells, something you might appreciate noticing, is this person's username: 'sammyso3'; before you are so quick to judge, did it even dawn upon you that they are possibly one and the same person?

S M Wellsreplied...Jul. 2, 2011 at 1:49 pm

Oviously it did, or I wouldn't have asked. But I somehow doubt it, as the person gave there age as 21.