An intriguing, surprising short story

It is an intriguing, surprising short story which I hope will give some bit of thrill to all of my readers.
The story is made out of quick and colourfull images which come and go in a rather fast pace.

I really enjoyed reading this short story because it engages all of the senses and captures a moment we can all relate to. It is subtly written, in simple easy to understand language which makes you feel like a part of the story. My only criticism is that it was too short. Excellent work Anna!

2 de Maio 2016

von christine owen

This was a well-written and exciting story, especially for one written by a non-native speaker. The story line was great, but I must agree with one of the commenters -- it was too short! Thank you for sharing your story with us.

well.... 25 de Fev. 2016

von Anonymous

First of all I want to complain! This story is too short! Excellent style of writing, sad but with an unexpected ending. I was pretty sure that I know how it will end and I was wrong. Well done Anna. Looking forward to reading your next publication.

Exciting! 25 de Jan. 2015

von Anonymous

Blurry, as the fog present all over the novel. Very short and very "efficient", mysterious and let the reader rely on his imagination. It's like watching a short film, but in words. Highly creditable!!

Can't wait to read more 25 de Ago. 2014

von Shadya Karawi

This short story is beautifully written. It makes us wonder about the certainty of time and space. Can't wait to read more! :)