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Snapdragons says:Stop it. How is this fair? You write humor like no one else, are the queen of gloriously silly, and yet you can write angst like this. Not even close to being fair. In no universe is this fair. :(

This was beautiful though. And I'm not a Draco/Luna fan... actually, I'm just not a Draco/anyone fan in general. YOU HAVE WON ME OVER. The way you wrote both of them was so so perfect and so canon and just so lovely all around.

I do love reading about Death Eaters (okay, that sounded creepier than I intended it to) and I especially like reading it where they're given a heart, to some extent. Even Avery was not pure evil. And Draco - you managed to keep him canon and yet likeable.

Your imagery was breathtaking. I could picture Luna as the ghost, ethereal, barely real. It was sentences like this that just painted this beautiful picture in my mind: A moment took a century to pass. Her smile faltered. Silence settled over the scene like thick dust, then was scattered - the lock turned and shut her out of his mind, his dreams, for good.

I could go on forever about this. But basically... I love this. I love everything about this. It's so beautiful - I know I keep reusing that word but it really is. And I'm really impressed by it - this is so different from SA and yet equally wonderful.

And I'm really, really glad this made it onto the archive. GOOD CHOICE. I love this. ♥

Author's Response: Even the silly and cracky among us must, occasionally, take breaks to angst away through the medium of microsoft word *ponderous look*

Oooh thank you so much~ although both draco and luna are stupidly difficult to write ;A;
Draco/Luna was once an OTP of mine, you may be surprised to know. Not anymore, but, you know, I still have a certain fondness for the pairing. That said, I don't like fics where they're happily in true wub. Being an angst magnet, I like Draco/Luna fics where it's all unrequited and there is no such thing as a happy ending (sadist, me, wot?)

Death Eaters and dodgy types are my favourite to write too. I love exploring all those shades of grey in fic. I don't think any of them were purely evil (well, Bellatrix and Voldy aside...) and it's interesting to write about that.

Eee thank you so much! Although this fic has been a long time in the writing and it's been kind of hard at times, I ultimately enjoyed writing it, and, well, glad you liked it too!