What do you like about my stories?

So I'm beginning to feel the itch to try and do some live writings again, though there will be a few additional rules with how they work. Mainly that the live writes are meant to be simple things and written the way I feel. If you're looking for something exact, write something on your own, or inquire about potentially commissioning me. I have never accepted a commission for a story before, so it's something that would require a great deal of negotiation.

However, before I start up considering any of this, I'd like to know what you've liked about what I posted so far and what you are hoping to see in the future. I know it's only three stories, but feedback is quite useful in knowing where to steer some of the content.

I love your thoroughness of your descriptions, moving at an slow enough pace to get plenty of details in but never bore your audience , and I love how you manipulate your characters into doing stuff before they realize what they have gotten themselves into. I like your smaller details too, like how you name the rats in The El after big cats. :3

Edit: Oh, I really liked the story you did for thanatos too, you should post it as well. :3

I love your thoroughness of your descriptions, moving at an slow enough pace to get plenty of detail