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Re: Please help with my letter

Originally Posted by rw6236

Firstly, I would not use "Dear" and "Sir". The terms contradict each other. "Dear" seems to be less formal and "Sir" strikes a more formal tone. I think the term, "Sir" would be sufficient given the circumstance.