Chapter 3: Page 11

May 8th, 2008, 11:11 pm

I Say...

Haha, just a few minutes late today, as it's 12:11 AM and officially Friday where I'm at XP Sorry, I've been downright lazy this week. I still need to finish inking the pages for this weekend ^^; It might have something to do with the fact that the first time like, ever, my English teacher assigned us a good book to read that I had to finish before I could comfortable spend time on anything else, and then the band practiced tonight, and...yeah, I'll shut up. (Oh, and seeing as I've been too preoccupied/lazy to deal with it, you're gonna have to wait until Sunday for the contest stuff XP Sorry.)

Wasn't expecting Riza to step up so quickly, this just makes her more kick butt and awesome! ^^ I still love the rain effect you have going through this page, as well as the last panel, it just gives you an awe for a moment, before AWESOME! suddenly pops into your mind.

I also adore Luna's expression and inking in the first panel, I just stared at that for about 5 minutes before moving on to the rest of the page. xD Looking extra forward to this weekend!

@BlackCatz: Haha, glad someone likes my action scenes XP 'Cause personally I don't think I'm very good at them. But anyway, the book was Lord of the Flies. I couldn't even really say why I liked it, but it begged to be finished before I did much else XD

@Baeslays: Ya know...now that I think about it...you're quite right. Oops. But then again, Riza's naturally got that sort of personality where killing something out of self-defense doesn't bother her as much as it should. To her, those rats might as well be that wasp she squished the other day to avoid getting stung. Add that to the fact that she's been hanging around in Rokenthia with Luna, who has fighting and killing in her nature (which'll be highlighted a bit in the next couple chapters :P), and that there's some other forces influencing her that I can't explain now (for that would be a spoiler), and you've got a 13-year old that killing rat demons doesn't bother near as much as it normally should XP. And that was a really long excuse.

Haha, anyway, thanks, glad you like the comic. :3

@Aussie: Haha, yeah, but Riza doesn't really have a choice but to step up if she wants to, you know, not get eaten by rats XD And good, I wasn't sure if that last panel was any good or not XP

Also, thanks about the first panel, I was pretty proud of that myself. The inking actually looked cooler in real life for once there, but in the end I still like how that one came out XD So yay.