That was crazy good! I really really loved how you threw in that big twist at the end! I was actually really scared to read the last few chapters to see what happened after he prevented Bella from leaving Phoenix. I had tears streaming down my face the whole time because it was such a selfless act and it made my heart warm knowin that he was going to give up the greatest person in his life so she could have a better life. I LOVED IT! I hope you continue to write more stories because you just so amazing! I would love to read more of your work! I still have one more story of yours to read an I'm going to go start it right now!

I think that you did a great job wrapping this up. I was just wondering about this story yesterday...thinking that I hadn't seen a chapter recently. I read your A/n about you being sick. I hope that your are doing well now. Anyway this was a great story. Thanks for sharing. :)