The Freeze

We all have known cold, whether it be snow or the AC in the car. It's everywhere; there's no escaping. But when the temperatures around the world drastically drop, no one knows what to do. It is the Freeze, and there is no escaping it.

That was awesome! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I really like the tome and the suspenseful start. Is there going to be a specific day that you're going to upload?

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Mon, May 2nd, 2016 4:55pm

Thank you! And no, I don't set specific days I upload things because then I'd be pressured to write something up super quick because I'd end up saving it for the last minute... I basically write something whenever and then publish it when I'm done. I tend to write the beginning chapters faster than the others.

I like this so far, I'm intrigued as to what is causing the freeze. One thing I found a little odd though was how Melody and Derrek didn't seem majorly affected by what just happened. As in, Derrek's comment about his friends being dead seems a little too casual for having just seen them freeze solid? Unless they were just so caught up in what was going on, and will only begin to really grasp the gravity of the situation later?

Anyway, keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this one too :)

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Tue, May 10th, 2016 10:45am

Thank you! A few friends had noticed that as well so I might change the chapter a little and add Melody going through shock. Or, I might just add it later. I started doing that in the second chapter where she's realizing what just happened. Thank you again!