Thank you Alan
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[mailto:na-discuss-bounces at atlarge-lists.icann.org] On Behalf Of Alan
Greenberg
Sent: Friday, August 9, 2013 6:14 PM
To: NA-Discuss
Subject: [NA-Discuss] Operating Procedures for discussion at NARALO meeting
on Monday
Attached are a red-line and a clean version to be discussed at the NARALO
meeting on Monday.
There are only a small number of changes from the previous version (this
time in purple):
13. Make it clear that the sentence on tie-breaking is for the ALAC member
(the subject of the entire paragraph).
16. Grammar correction "participates IN online discussions"
17. Remove a redundant "submitting".
This and older drafts can be found at
https://community.icann.org/display/NARALO/NARALO+ROP+Review++2013.
Alan