Needs more smudging. You need to use the tablet to your advantage. Use the smudging to the focals advantage. Rather than having random lines that connect to the focal, have them "flow" in and out of the focal.

Needs more smudging. You need to use the tablet to your advantage. Use the smudging to the focals advantage. Rather than having random lines that connect to the focal, have them "flow" in and out of the focal.