promotional video for my boss

as we have a new website I played with the idea to make a promotional video for my employer (computer business)
I am still working on it, so it's not finished yet.
Just tell me what you think so far ...

I think the video could benefit from being "punchier". It needs more attention grabbing sequences in it. At the end of the day this kind of shooting would look great if it was of the fire service or something with natural interest, but at the end of the day you are a PC repair/configure service with a software development element. It's not rivetting stuff (no offence intended - I am in the same industry) and so the videographer is the one who has got to make it seem like the most exciting thing since creation of the universe.

My recommendations are:
1) Replace the music with something more upbeat and snappier
2) Have some fast cut scenes punching out to the music.
3) You have a video that would benefit from some of the transitions and clip effects that we all normally steer clear of. Experiment and see what comes up.
4) End with something like Marc's video wall with software development, customer service (the reception desk), quality control, and PC servicing all occupying their own window and streaming.
5) fade out
6) That's a wrap luvvies

However, it was nicely edited and would have been a great video for something with more action content.