Untouchable: The Stalker Within

Annabel was a happy college student with good friends and a great life but when the new (very hot) kid, Blake, comes to the school, she starts to feel attraction towards him, but he's off limits, untouchable, but they share a few kisses, after that she stops seeing him it all goes down hill but she didn't think it would go as far as a mystery guy following her in the night .....

It was really interesting love the plot! A few mistakes but that's alright. I suggest that you try to separate the dialog away from the paragraphs that way it be easier to read(: but overall it was really good.
- Nanette