The English German Girl Reviewed By June Maffin of Bookpleasures.com

June Maffin

Reviewer
June Maffin:Living on an island in British Columbia, Canada, Dr.
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Pastoral Care (medical ethics i.e. euthanasia focus). Presently an
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Fourteen year old Rosa
Klein, her older brother Heinrich, younger sister Hedi and parents
Otto and Inga are a loving, happy, financially secure family.
Life for the Klein family in many respects was idyllic - until the
Nuremberg Laws against Jews began to be enforced in Germany and their
lives changed dramatically.

As Jews, their
passports became invalid and try as they might to seek emigration
visas, it was too late. When word came their way about the
Kindertransport program (where one child per family could leave
Germany if a sponsor in England could be found), an agonizing
decision brought Otto and Inge to the realization that Rosa was the
most likely able to arrange visas for the rest of the family.
As Rosa steps on the train, life as she knew it ended as she and
other children on the Kindertransport (including a baby smuggled on
the train that Rosa tries to hide from the Nazi soldiers) left
families, homes, friends and familiar language behind them, beginning
a treacherous journey to a new land and new life. For Rosa,
that meant life with the Kremer family: Gerald (her father’s
cousin), his wife Mimi and Samuel, their eighteen year old son in
London, England.

Rosa’s loneliness in the new country
without her parents is frightening and beyond imaginable as she tries
to balance finding work, cleaning house for Mrs. Kremer, and
constantly seeking visas for her family so they could leave war-torn
Germany and join her in England. An unexpected intimate
relationship with Samuel Kremer leads to a pregnancy that is ended
against her will and Rosa flees the Kremer home. Haunted by the
infrequent and eventual cessation of letters from her parents, what
might be happening to her family in Germany, and memories of her
abortion, Rosa withdraws and fills her days and life with study,
ultimately achieving her life-long dream to become a nurse.

Overall,
lengthy sentences, unbelievably long paragraphs, little “white”
space on many of the actual pages (publisher trying to save money?)
and the lack of quotation marks throughout the book make it difficult
to read and follow. The conclusion of the book (describing what
happened to the baby that Rosa hid on the Kindertransport could have
transformed what became simply an romantic novel genre with
historical overtones into a novel of great strength with dramatic
historical relevance. Sadly, it did not.

The tale of “The English
German Girl” had great possibilities, but the ‘English Rosa’
part of the book is simply a rushed contrived love story with little
of the strength of the first half of the book as the author wasn’t
able to continue the believable story of the ‘German Rosa’ (with
its well-developed plot line, excellent imagery and strong character
development) into the second half of the book for this reviewer.