12 Responses to “nothing is in place”

Adityasaid

I have seen everyone writing long posts about how they feel about the tragedy at Mumbai; None of them bring out the feelings that you have so succintly brought out in your poem.
Surely am putting this blog on my blogroll.

I dont want to light a candle to bury my remembrance for those who have died. My heart’s full of anger resentment, pain and revenge.I see no victory. I see no reason to celebrate. I see no reason to hoist my national flag outside Taj hotel. 10 terrorists had the power to make the entire nation go crazy for 60 hours we must fight back. If the government cant save us, let the army rule this country. The subtle speeches of Manmohan Singh & Pratibha Patil fail to extinguish my anger. For the first time in my life, I dont feel proud to be an Indian, a country which is unsafe, volatile and corrupt. We want reaction. India needs leaders, not businessmen but social volunteers who can lead. Its time to wakeup….

@Aditya: Everyone who wrote abut the tragedy at Mumbai, must have felt the same things in the same way, its just the limitation of words and language – that this feeling is expressed differently! I wish I could do more than just write a poem… Maybe I can – but I dont know my potential, Maybe I can – but I am not that brave!

Thanks for the honoring words… If you can give me your blog address, I can link you from here as well…

Pranaysaid

Shiwu, a very lovely, hearth-touching patriotic poem, which in fact if circulated among the people at different levels, will bring some patriotism among the readers and may be some of them come across and join their hands to fight against the terrorism and the so called social workers – politicians – too. God bless.