tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post665135908106497832..comments2016-12-08T20:03:30.765-06:00Comments on another damn poetry blog: DreamingMama Zenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-81338005254355421872012-03-08T14:17:23.121-06:002012-03-08T14:17:23.121-06:00each of these are pretty cool, but the first one i...each of these are pretty cool, but the first one is my favorite of the three. Although the origami bit in the second I did like a lot as well. dreaming does take one in different directions. Nice pieceFred Rutherfordhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-50726566693614946242012-03-08T13:58:43.963-06:002012-03-08T13:58:43.963-06:00Uh-oh. Someone has a crush. :)
Love these lines:
...Uh-oh. Someone has a crush. :)<br /><br />Love these lines:<br />&quot;Low dose reality.<br />High Freudian frolic.&quot;<br /><br />And the lopsided flying origami! Awesome.<br /><br />Thank goodness you are &quot;old&quot; and &quot;sold to safety&quot; so that you can protect yourself from that persistent moon.<br /><br />~Shawna<br />rosemarymint.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-54532060211808238932012-03-08T11:44:01.367-06:002012-03-08T11:44:01.367-06:00A perfect progression, beautifully written. I love...A perfect progression, beautifully written. I love it.<br />KKay L. Davieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-52169221951514428662012-03-08T11:36:20.768-06:002012-03-08T11:36:20.768-06:00Great Job, the ending ties it in, in such a moving...Great Job, the ending ties it in, in such a moving way~<br />Really well done :DEllahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-23127909505589090842012-03-08T11:11:40.326-06:002012-03-08T11:11:40.326-06:00This is fantastically good. &quot;such a constant ...This is fantastically good. &quot;such a constant moon&quot; &quot;old and sold to safety....except here with you.&quot; And the lopsided papers........the understatement is perfect and the underlying message profound. Sigh. Just lovely.Sherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-23278278262973260282012-03-08T06:26:21.635-06:002012-03-08T06:26:21.635-06:00That second stanza is a humdinger - but it&#39;s t...That second stanza is a humdinger - but it&#39;s the last one that I can really relate to!Dave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-45558324645903023442012-03-08T03:11:12.582-06:002012-03-08T03:11:12.582-06:00woW!The centre piece of this triptych is loaded! I...woW!The centre piece of this triptych is loaded! It flies right off the page, I can imagine you having to fold the side pages over it to contain it!<br /><br />Fluttering pages<br />fold themselves into birds<br />far too lopsided to fly.<br /><br />Wonderful!SweetTalkingGuyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-39624483183311213612012-03-08T01:20:51.118-06:002012-03-08T01:20:51.118-06:00&quot;Fluttering pages
fold themselves into birds
...&quot;Fluttering pages<br />fold themselves into birds<br />far too lopsided to fly.&quot;<br />What a lovely lines!...Beautiful poem :)⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺http://www.blogger.com/profile/02666564014180302696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-5299072340122423002012-03-08T01:20:31.700-06:002012-03-08T01:20:31.700-06:00&quot;Fluttering pages
fold themselves into birds
...&quot;Fluttering pages<br />fold themselves into birds<br />far too lopsided to fly.&quot;<br />What a lovely lines!...Beautiful poem :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-77541247854640140102012-03-07T23:25:47.665-06:002012-03-07T23:25:47.665-06:00breathtaking! and the second verse is exquisite!
♥...breathtaking! and the second verse is exquisite!<br />♥myheartslovesongshttp://myheartslovesongs.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-40821889746409562892012-03-07T23:16:18.057-06:002012-03-07T23:16:18.057-06:00The second stanza really spoke to me. Love it!The second stanza really spoke to me. Love it!Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-49239548972918964972012-03-07T20:18:47.510-06:002012-03-07T20:18:47.510-06:00You have done something special here, something th...You have done something special here, something that has life and depth. I like it, a lot!Mystic_Momhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-64155880384090781272012-03-07T20:02:26.550-06:002012-03-07T20:02:26.550-06:00Great! I love the alliteration.Great! I love the alliteration.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-51407257798983328382012-03-07T19:42:10.073-06:002012-03-07T19:42:10.073-06:00You could give lessons in the art of subtlety, wit...You could give lessons in the art of subtlety, with just the right blend of words and sound, you take us from dreams to reality, youthful perspective to aged reason, each part hinged on &#39;you&#39;.<br /><br />Brilliantly done.Kerry O'Connorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-83779683558663018552012-03-07T19:07:04.502-06:002012-03-07T19:07:04.502-06:00Three panels of the same picture, slightly differe...Three panels of the same picture, slightly different focus, but obviously all parts of a whole--the form rocks, but the poetry is really the winner here.hedgewitchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-3703839215178325112012-03-07T18:58:53.282-06:002012-03-07T18:58:53.282-06:00Love this! From Ambien to ambiance. It&#39;s all d...Love this! From Ambien to ambiance. It&#39;s all dreamy!Lolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-16254542874436104462012-03-07T18:38:45.765-06:002012-03-07T18:38:45.765-06:00Love this...Bold no more,
except here
with you.......Love this...Bold no more,<br />except here<br />with you....<br />good to have that place to be bold :)ayalahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-41121124178876807582012-03-07T18:16:17.880-06:002012-03-07T18:16:17.880-06:00Well, of course, I love it!! A great poem it is --...Well, of course, I love it!! A great poem it is -- as all of yours are! Hope your week is going well. Thanks for your kind thoughts, much appreciated!<br /><br />SylviaSylvia Khttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05484577678585907669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-58997147152412151922012-03-07T17:58:54.439-06:002012-03-07T17:58:54.439-06:00Well.. Ffffff... flippin heck I loved this too!Well.. Ffffff... flippin heck I loved this too!Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-88897300199212471442012-03-07T17:27:00.010-06:002012-03-07T17:27:00.010-06:00I totally love this, all three sections, but espec...I totally love this, all three sections, but especially the last. Gentle urgings of such a constant moon....yeah baby. Great poem, a real mood setter.Herotomosthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-18439928475336433172012-03-07T17:15:13.659-06:002012-03-07T17:15:13.659-06:00~Shay being silent~
(that&#39;s a compliment, and...~Shay being silent~<br /><br />(that&#39;s a compliment, and hard to do.)Fireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-75364713219942666262012-03-07T17:10:26.618-06:002012-03-07T17:10:26.618-06:00love all your ffffffffs.....ha, makes for a fun re...love all your ffffffffs.....ha, makes for a fun read through there...and glad you still have a place to be bold...smiles.Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3002371589503401816.post-92063024743750948432012-03-07T16:52:47.154-06:002012-03-07T16:52:47.154-06:00Oh, YES. This:
Fluttering pages
fold themselves i...Oh, YES. This: <br />Fluttering pages<br />fold themselves into birds<br />far too lopsided to fly.<br /><br />Wonderful.Dehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.com