This was really good. I like how you took the idea of Brian talking Gerard down, like it really happened, and kinda, like, let us see the conversation and how it made Gerard see that he needed to change.

Did that make much sense? 'Cause it didn't really to me. : P

anyways, i think this story was well written and just good all around.

xoxo, michelle.

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