~ I came, I saw, I slept.

hey!

everything you doand saymay not be for meor it mayyou stay near meor stay awaybe it a rainbowor clouds in graybe it nightor be it daywe get cozyor end up in a frayi talk crazyto no yayyou just smileno attention you payyour thoughts are stablein my unstable mind they layi spend my life with youis what i praysay yesor say naywith youi feel like a fairy, fay!

darn!! i was this close to rhyme and ruin ur poem.. (as i always do to poems)but .. whoever that guy is.. he better like poems!! :Dignoring or not listening to people needs "people" to be around.. wat if they are not?

Aw! Mah ladoo howz you?
Wow you in the whirlpool of love…
Sometimes I really wonder lol do men feel the same too….
or r we women more tender sensitive and want of pampering, etc more in us!
Maybe men dont show it, especially asian folks, never conditioned to show their inner feelings, thats how men r suppossed to behave, argh n I hate it!!
Stably yours!!
Love n hugzzzz

Nice one…seems like u’re spinning out a poem quite regularly these days…good going! As for my stuff…I’m always into many things all at the same time. Guess that’s why they say "one thing at a time… :)"

Wonderful poem. One must dig inside to interpret, not what you have written but what it says to the reader. The whole purpose of writing is to get people to examine not only themselves but the world around them. You have done a most excellent job with this one.

Since you are a vegetarian, Here is a little soemthing just for you. I hope you enjoy it.

hey,, ‘you just smile, no attention you pay’ holds lasting meaning,, gray cloud opposite to a rainbow is admirable,, you’ve spelled magic in ‘i smelt you’,, i, after spending fifteen years in deep relationship can feel and sense each and every line you’ve written,, this is an excellent piece of work,, at least in my eyes,, i adore you for writing this poem,, in ‘i know not, but what?’ ‘… i give in ….. what i do ain’t sin’ creates anxiety,, but yr last line ‘or let it be?’ is a brilliant answer to each question this poem’s posted,, congratulations,, in ‘!!!’ last two lines have changed the feeling of entire poem,, feeling.. i’m not saying meaning,, but i wont give yu full marks here,, donno why,, falling in love with death is not bad if you don’t convert yrself in a bride in waiting,, ‘red & her’ well well,, i could never see so many red(s) attached with a bride,, good going D, very good going,, but why you see her.. and ‘you see red’,, ah!! give it a break D,, how are you,, and how’s life going in pune,,

Ladoo I strongly believe and have seen, Indian men are very emotional no doubt, but the western men have been conditioned to express their feelings well….they call a spade a spade…
Ah! You know that rare species is the one you love!! No matter what no matter how…….
Hugzzz babyyyy

Divoo thinks…

it feels funny at times
and cold too
it makes me feel uneasy
and peaceful too
i dunno what i want to say
but i know what i feel
i need to curb my thoughts
but the fruit of thought i peel
i shall and i will
but how and what
i might be able to
but i feel distraught
they overwhelm me
and i give in
i might do what is not right
but what i do ain't a sin
what i ought to know
is what i know not
i know it all i say
though i need not
are my thoughts the culprit
or is it me?
do i continue to question
or let it be?