This is by far my worst comic, flow-wise. The artwork was actually a major improvement over chapter 1 (remember: I re-drew every comic from the first chapter - this chapter I just re-did a few frames here and there.) It's hard to explain the order, but eventually it should make some sense. Basically, it goes the bus -side profile - looking up - her finger - the key - her going up stairs - the door - exclamation point - pizza boxes - close-up. Confusing much? Oh, and if you don't catch the reference in the title, just think John Travolta's big break.