I don't see a lot of lines there to begin with, so I cannot quite say what should be taken away. ^ ^;

oh, but I did notice that the I-pod is strait up and down whereas the slab it's on is slightly tilted. Ya' might wanna do something about that, especially if you're thinking of leaving the I-pod as one of the few objects left in the picture.

hm okay.. i guess there's a little misunderstanding here =x my bad.
I meant as in.. same concept but different visual or something hm , for example simplifying it to something like this one

any other ideas of this sort? .. related to visual / advertising multimedia sort of thing where the visual's simple and it's purpose it's ot make people understand by looking at the logo/symbol etc.. though personally i'm more into manga stuffs , so that's why i'm kinda asking around for ideas =l

Ahhh, so then you were referring to more simplified concepts! Haha, I almost went with the others in this one! haha! I don't really see the issue in this though to be completely honest! I think it looks swell whether it is manga stuffs or not. Quick question if you ever do look in here again: Is this concept about drawing while listening to music?

This might sound a bit indifferent, but then you can draw pencils as piano chords and draw the keys being played. So then maybe the pencils wouldn't be leveled up if the keys are played. Then to show that music is being played, emphasize on the piano chords (pencils). I don't know, just something that came up to my little brain! Sorry if it didn't make any sense!

By the way, I LOVE YOUR ART!!! Your style is splendid and fluid! Great- excellent!

Ahhh, so then you were referring to more simplified concepts! Haha, I almost went with the others in this one! haha! I don't really see the issue in this though to be completely honest! I think it looks swell whether it is manga stuffs or not. Quick question if you ever do look in here again: Is this concept about drawing while listening to music?

This might sound a bit indifferent, but then you can draw pencils as piano chords and draw the keys being played. So then maybe the pencils wouldn't be leveled up if the keys are played. Then to show that music is being played, emphasize on the piano chords (pencils). I don't know, just something that came up to my little brain! Sorry if it didn't make any sense!

By the way, I LOVE YOUR ART!!! Your style is splendid and fluid! Great- excellent!

Ah , thanks. Already done with this work some time ago , that's why I didn't really checked back , but thanks for your opinions though Lol.