Secrecy is Key

Summary: "Welcome to the S.A.F.T.A. Which stands for Suspicious Activity Force for Teenage Agents. We wish for you to join us and work for the most secret intelligence force. Have a great day!" I look around and see all different kinds of teenagers. Ones with spiky green hair, big ones, small ones, girls, boys every type possible. "It only does that when it recognizes a new person in the elevator." Breeya says. "Wow." I say and Breeya looks at me with a proud grin like a parent who's kid just scored a touchdown or got an A+ in all their classes. "Welcome to the S.A.F.T.A. Aria Rose Iyanna we hope you will join us. I will now take you to Mila. You talked to her?" "Yes." I say, still in a trance at how the agency looks.

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This is an interesting idea, and I like it. There are two things, though. 1. I would have liked to know what the phone call said, and 2. I'm super confused between BellE and BellA. Their names are so similar.
Other than that, I think it's great! ;)