This was so poignant. As another reviewer said, I felt so many different emotions throughout. I love your prose, your use of metaphors, and your imagery. Honestly, the best SoKai fic I've read.

Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2013

Ah! I was the "guest" I don't know why it did that :D

Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2013

Loved it! AHHHH! You wrote it soooo good! And you captured me and I couldn't stop reading! My favorite ever! Loved it! Keep writing! I don't just mean SoKai, I mean, anything. You have an amazing talent. Show it off! :D

ommg... after scanning a few fanfictions today, yours was the first tonight that made me really want to read and keep reading. this made me feel so many diff emotions: happiness, excitement, sadness, anxiety. ack i loved this! great job!