tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post1728848881119765135..comments2015-04-23T20:55:39.985-04:00Comments on KmercPoetry: Star ChildKenn Merchanthttps://plus.google.com/112201235882373439756noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-32128598393804754552015-01-07T20:53:56.634-05:002015-01-07T20:53:56.634-05:00I agree with you Susie, everyone needs something t...I agree with you Susie, everyone needs something to sock and awe them every once in a while. Kenn Merchanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-15290135942347174482015-01-07T18:24:06.166-05:002015-01-07T18:24:06.166-05:00I love this. We are always in need of a star child...I love this. We are always in need of a star child to bring awe.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-52948825402777434262015-01-07T15:48:29.055-05:002015-01-07T15:48:29.055-05:00I kind of imagined myself as a Greek philosopher a...I kind of imagined myself as a Greek philosopher and a astrologist when I wrote this. It helped give me the mindset that I needed. Kenn Merchanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-25393136064888952122015-01-07T15:47:24.241-05:002015-01-07T15:47:24.241-05:00I was kind of inspired by a mix between the ancien...I was kind of inspired by a mix between the ancient philosophers of Greece talking to their students about space, and raveling it together with a futuristic feel. Kenn Merchanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-73073227145099387802015-01-07T15:45:56.534-05:002015-01-07T15:45:56.534-05:00Originally I was going to use silver nuggets becau...Originally I was going to use silver nuggets because of the color, but then I thought &quot;who is to say that stars aren&#39;t made of gold?&quot; So it kind of stuck. Kenn Merchanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-16761354656269453572015-01-07T12:18:31.494-05:002015-01-07T12:18:31.494-05:00I&#39;m enchanted by the sense of science fictiona...I&#39;m enchanted by the sense of science fictional prophecy of this poem. It reads like sitting in mythical garden, in space, watching science and belief dancing happily.Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-29880362311807307202015-01-07T09:24:57.519-05:002015-01-07T09:24:57.519-05:00luv the seeker&#39;s mood in this poem
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╭✿ ...luv the seeker&#39;s mood in this poem<br /><br /><br />╲\╭┓╱<br />╭✿ ╯Happy New Year <br />┗╯\╲<br /><br />http://myblog-verses.blogspot.com/2015/01/one-word-listening.html<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-20683393679722653482015-01-06T22:06:05.096-05:002015-01-06T22:06:05.096-05:00Such a lovely desritption of the night sky and its...Such a lovely desritption of the night sky and its amazing to see these gold nuggets twinkle!Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-62650755785399373412015-01-06T18:13:54.659-05:002015-01-06T18:13:54.659-05:00Yeah weird things seem to happen during the moon s...Yeah weird things seem to happen during the moon shifts. Probably some kind of science could explain it.Kenn Merchanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-10401319881880510862015-01-06T18:13:07.682-05:002015-01-06T18:13:07.682-05:00Thanks Marian!Thanks Marian!Kenn Merchanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-811735519659229852015-01-06T18:12:50.379-05:002015-01-06T18:12:50.379-05:00I&#39;m glad that they seemed personal because tha...I&#39;m glad that they seemed personal because that means I was writing a poem the correct way. Poems need to be raw and organic because it allows the reader to feel connected in some way. Kenn Merchanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-63138852715628623792015-01-06T18:10:55.355-05:002015-01-06T18:10:55.355-05:00I saw a wonderful picture of the aurora borealis t...I saw a wonderful picture of the aurora borealis the other day, and that half-inspired me to write this. You literally have to be in the high northern hemisphere in order to see it in real time nowadays. Kenn Merchanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-67443469351571394112015-01-06T17:48:02.866-05:002015-01-06T17:48:02.866-05:00LOL... i agree with your comment. must be the full...LOL... i agree with your comment. must be the full moon, lately, for poetic inspiration. like the fantasy in your linesWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-45681931931803858492015-01-06T16:38:09.656-05:002015-01-06T16:38:09.656-05:00ohhh the language in this. very satisfying!ohhh the language in this. very satisfying!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-15215991637027242802015-01-06T15:58:28.828-05:002015-01-06T15:58:28.828-05:00I like this very much Kenn. You&#39;ve made your w...I like this very much Kenn. You&#39;ve made your words very personal and organic, and the rhyme scheme is subtle but has that rhythmic support which adds so much to a poem. I especially like the second and third stanzas, for the images they paint.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2059054710948954061.post-31611983821733630612015-01-06T15:28:47.149-05:002015-01-06T15:28:47.149-05:00Love the dreaminess of that.. if just we can see a...Love the dreaminess of that.. if just we can see and watch that starlight sky so we can draw conclusions from the constellations... but alas we pollute the sky with lamplight so we cannot drown in that star-light any longer.. maybe that&#39;s why it all is going to hell..Björn Rudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com