I want you to tell me if it has the potential of getting accepted. And I avoided pretty much all the mistakes the reviewers told me about in the previous designs. I used a grid and used only one font face (just to be safe), and I also read a lot of articles about white space and concept in we design so I can design this one the right way, and I hope I did. you tell me.

And this is the design with the grid, you’ll see that everything lined almost perfectly. So please give me your feedback so I can see if I should continue in this design or not.