This series was da GUH! Seriously, though, you have a brilliant mind and it plays well in this genre. I enjoyed the various power shifts throughout the series, although I was a little disappointed that Ronon didn't have more of a role. But my word, Lorne...wow. I LOVED Lorne in this series. You did an amazing job!

Read my way through the whole series tonight and all I can say is...wow! I'm new to the fandom and I haven't run across much kink, so to find something this good made me quite happy. I'm looking forward to reading further stories in this series. :)

Ooh, yum! I'm glad Rodney got over his jealousy- it would've been a great shame for him to have missed all that. Loved possessive!John. He's building himself quite the little harem. He's going to have to find a couple more collars at this rate *g*. When do we get Nick joining them for the ultimate OT4? ::offers cookies:: *vbg*. Laura.

OMFG!!! My eyes are bleeding. But in a good way. I REALLY REALLY hope you're planning to continue this sucker, because the McShorne (my own personal nickname for this 3some) was so hot that parts of my brain that I use on a regular basis melted clean out of my head. So, you know, no more long division for me. Hope you're happy. I sure am!

Hot, but troubling. I reread this series to see if I felt the same the second time. I still struggle with Rodney and his "runner up" presentation. He's not good enough for Lorne and he's only entertaining to Sheppard. After this Interlude, it looks like Rodney is at best a 3rd wheel. I wonder what is in the next chapter...

This comment is for the story up to The LorneSheppard Interlude. Wow, very hot. Though, it really feels like Rodney is second best. He's a bad dom, Nick really wants John, and John is perfectly in control. I like a Rodney whumping as much as the next person, but I don't like seeing him treated like this by John or Nick who supposedly care about him. Obviously, this is well written to get such a strong response. I look forward to the next chapter.

What a hot little interlude. Loved the whole trust thing and Nick's little clues that he was getting to John just as much as John was getting to him. Can't wait to see what happens next, especially what Rodney might have to say about things. Laura.

Well, "Yum" is the short feedback :). For longer fb: I liked the uncertainty, no one entirely sure what the other two want from him. All the misunderstandings were nicely angsty; Rodney unsure in his dom persona, Nick wondering why the collar was taken from him and then having to deal with John all smirking and silent and challenging, Rodney thinking he's going to lose Nick to John. I'm glad it all worked out. Loved Rodney's sort of disbelieving awe at getting the two others in his bed and I liked how John kept everything hidden behind the amused smirk. I'd love to know what was going through his mind. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it will have more of this threesome and no one will feel the sudden urge to freak out or anything. Laura.

Am really loving this series, complete with the characterisations you're building up. There's definitely something going on between McKay and Lorne, going to start rooting for them now! Looking forward to the next part!!

"And if you choose to wear it in my presence when you're not on duty I'll probably be forced to make sure you deserve it. Understood?"
Oh yeah..you know he's going to have to put that collar on. grins... thanks for this hot little story. I do hope you're planning on continuing the intrigue. :) thanks for sharing... fans self happily.

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