Carter - Carter was born in Goldenrod city, and was raised by his extended family, as his parents were traveling abroad, studying legendary pokemon. Carter's home was a dare care center, and was around pokemon all the time. One day, a female feraligator gave birth, leaving behind an egg. The Trainer was to preoccupied with training for the Pokemon league, and didn't take the egg, leaving it with Carter's family. Carter took care of the egg. After a few months, it hatched, and out came a small Totodile, which he named Sid. Carter and the totodile were inseparable, as they always went on adventures together. As Carter grew and matured, so did Sid, his personality evolving from cute and harmless into a bit of a pervert, with amazing skills of thievery. Despite all of Carter's efforts, Sid wouldn't evolve, perhaps out of stubbornness, or maybe because girls wouldn't hold him if he was a feraligator. When the time came for Carter to go on his adventure, Sid was the obvious choice as a starter pokemon. Sid proved to be a terrible combantant, as he would hide ontop of Carter's head. Surprisingly, though, carter was able to catch a Cubone, which proved to be his best combantant pokemon. Sid didn't believe in keeping his pokemon in there balls, so he let them tag along with him, even the big ones. Over time, carter got bored of the Johto region, and decided to travel abroad, going to many new and exciting locations, adding more pokemon to his team. While on his adventure, his cubone got sick and died. While burying him, a Ghastly emerged from the cubone's body, and agreed to accompany Carter, acting the same as the cubone. After defeating all the gym leaders in the Hoenn region, carter heard a rumor of a large and dangerous pokemon that was roaming a town near an active volcano. Carter, curious, decides to go, despite Sid's attempts to make his reconsider. When he arrived, the town was destroyed, and he witnessed the legendary pokemon, Groundon, moving away. Foolishly, Carter rushed after it, hoping to see the creature more up close. While moving through the fiorest, Carter witness members of Team magma harassing the pokemon, agitating it further. Carter managed to stop some of them, but the outnumbered him. Before getting harm, the groundon turn back around and attacked the team magma members. Shocked, they fled, and carter was left with the Groundon. Carter was petrified, however Sid, despite it's usually cowardess, made the first move, and walked toward the giant. The Groundon surprisingly lifted the small pokemon up, and appeared to be communicating to it. Carter, after getting the okay signal from Sid, moved toward the giant. Groundon lifted Carter up, and the two locked eyes. In that brief moment, Carter felt at ease, and rest his hand on it's head. Groundon put Carter and Sid down, and appeared to wink at them, as it made it's way back to Mt. Chimmey, to go back to sleep. Carter vowed that he would capture Groundon, and have him be his bestest buddy!Shortly after he runs into two traveling pokemon Trainers, Nero and Mae.

Carter's Pokemon

Sid the Totodile- Carter's best friend, and his own little troublemaker. Whenever Carter get's into trouble, Sid is usually behind it. Sid is something of a kleptomaniac, stealing any and all women's underwear, and often shows it to other pokemon trainers, usually perched on Carter's shoulder, giving people the wrong impression. Sid is a terrible fighter, which might explain why he can't evolve. A bit of a player, he gets people's guard down by acting as clumsy as possible, and haves them hold him, and he steals whatever he could from them, especially from women trainers. Sid is always on Carter's shoulder, or his head, though he loves to jumps on women's cleavage whenever he can. Despite his many flaws, he gets along well with the rest of Carter's more serious pokemon.

Duke The Hauter- Duke was once a Cubone, and Carter's first serious fighter pokemon. After many battles, and traveling with Carter, Duke dies. At his funeral, a ghastly appeared from it's body, being Duke's spirit. Duke continue to follow and serve Carter, eventually evolving into a Haunter. Duke likes to play with Sid, though he doesn't get involved with's perverted antics. Duke loves to let Sid rest upon it's head as he floats around. Duke is unusually large for a haunter, and can even lift Carter of the ground.

Pierce the Houndoom- Pierce is loyal to a fault to Carter, however he doesn't like Sid, as Sid get's Carter in trouble all the time. Sid, in retaliation, pulls pranks on him all the time. Despite all of this, they put their differences aside to help Carter succeed.

Columbo the Metagross- Columbo is possible the strongest pokemon on Carter's team, though Columbo doesn't like to fight. Carter uses Columbo to travel, as Columbo can hover. Metagross also is very playful, and uses his telekinesis to play pranks on Pierce and Sid, as they won't do anything to him.

Max the Electike- Max is a powerful electric pokemon, and has a great sense of pride, and despises when Sid rides on top of him. Max and Pierce sometimes team up to get back at Sid, however they usally are stopped by Carter, as Sid is perched on top of Carter's head.

Machete the Haxorous- Carter uses Machete as his main fighter, though Machete is usually more concerned with rough housing with Carter. Machete and Carter get along great, though Carter usually ends up getting cut up, though he doesn't mind. Machete and Sid are the best of friends, and whenever Carter does get angry at Sid, he usually hides on Machete

While on his adventure, his cubone got sick and died. While burying him, a Ghastly emerged from the cubone's body, and agreed to accompany Carter, acting the same as the cubone.

Not to be a pooper, but that sentenced like, ruined the story. It was all good, but that was kinda random. What you should've said was:

While on his adventure, Carter saw that his Cubone was unsteady and weak and looked as if he was a ghost with his paleness. Cartner than rushed to the Pokemon Center carrying his Cubone, but as he came in to the Pokemon Center it was too late and Cubone had to be put to rest. As he was burring his Cubone, a Gastly appeared and was acting familiar to his Cubone, So Carter then took Gastly with him on his jouney taking Cubone's place.

^ That took me like 10 mins to write xD Hope you do some changes, Hope you enjoy c: