did you write this and if you did its really good but next time type it in word then copy and paste and read over it to check to see if you wrote it write because there were many things that you could have changed to make it sound better but nonetheless it is a really good story and i would like to read more

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"It's to bad stupidity isn't painful. Then maybe some of these people would go get some help."

oh no, it's I forgot this story is on my other computer and its broke. So it will take a while for me to post the rest. I only have the Third story on this computer I'm using. I will try to post it as soon as possible.