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Anyway, remember that this is in the very early stages, I mean I just came up with this about 4-5 days ago. The characters are still in the works. I just started working on Eric's info and he's just the first of 4, 5 maybe 6 characters (including support/re-occuring ones). So expect Eric's info to change in reguards of his "Personality" (I even put a little notice on it). So the prologue, let alone the first chapter, won't be come out anytime soon.

Anyway, remember that this is in the very early stages, I mean I just came up with this about 4-5 days ago. The characters are still in the works. I just started working on Eric's info and he's just the first of 4, 5 maybe 6 characters (including support/re-occuring ones). So expect Eric's info to change in reguards of his "Personality" (I even put a little notice on it). So the prologue, let alone the first chapter, won't be come out anytime soon.

To make it simple, what will be the reader`s opinion in your IS fanfic( if you have one)?

Random question for my fic material, "When did Houki and Ichika met? Before or after WK incident?" I knew that Tabane announced about the existence of IS after they met, because Houki and Ichika separated when they're 9-10 years old.

Because if Ichika and Houki met after incident...ohh the plot bunnies (I have two version of the draft right now, and confused which one I should decide).

Speaking of which "Old Man" Wavehawk is sidesplittingly funny, cannot stop laughing reading that one...you can found it in page 46, I think.

Random question for my fic material, "When did Houki and Ichika met? Before or after WK incident?" I knew that Tabane announced about the existence of IS after they met, because Houki and Ichika separated when they're 9-10 years old.

Because if Ichika and Houki met after incident...ohh the plot bunnies (I have two version of the draft right now, and confused which one I should decide).

Speaking of which "Old Man" Wavehawk is sidesplittingly funny, cannot stop laughing reading that one...you can found it in page 46, I think.

Okay guys, here's the Plot for my Fanfic. I just want to point out that this is set outside of IS Academy and through the eyes of a group of guys in IS Society.

Spoiler for Project Silverback:

Ever since the introduction of the IS, the social status for men has taken a decline. Some are actually okay with it, others are not. Meet Alpha Squad, a former squad of a now disbanded mercenary group called Thunder Crash. Since Thunder Crash's disbandment, these guys have developed a hatred towards the IS for breaking the balance of power. They also have a dislking towards women for getting the better treatment, all because the IS can only be controlled by women (except for Ichika Orimura). And get this, Alpha Squad consists of teenage boys with the average age of 17-18. They believe that men and women should be treated equally. With that in mind, they have a goal of taking on the IS and restoring the balance of power, a goal that seems to be nothing more than a mear fantasy. Until Alpha Squad recieved an unexpected message from their Weapons/Armor Technician, who they believed had "died" shortly after Thunder Crash disbanded.

This is their story... This is Project Silverback.

And here's an update on my first OC's info and possibly the "Baseline" of him.

Background/Personality:
A Squad Captain of a mercenary group called Thunder Crash until it "disbanded". During his days in Thunder Crash, he earned the nickname "Hot Shot", for his impressive sharpshooting skills, and the respect of his fellow mercenaries. But to Eric, Thunder Crash was more than just a mercenary group, Thunder Crash was his "family". Being there for him when needed the most. But those who are closest to him and considers them as his "Brothers", is his squad, Alpha Squad. Which comprised of:

Other than his own squad, Eric felt close to Derrick "Shockwave" Garcia (another Squad Captain and blood-related older brother of Eddie "Sideswipe" Garcia) as his "Older Brother" figure, and Thunder Crash's Weapons/Armor Technician, Daniel Tezla as a friend/personal counsler.

Eric is a very cold person, rarely showing any emotions other than anger. This mainly stems from Thunder Crash's "disbandment", the "Women-Favoring-Treatment-System" (refer to Vol. 6 Ch. 2 in the Light Novels) and the dislike towards women, due to the fact that only they can control the IS (with the mysterious exception with Ichika Orimura). But despite his cold personality, Eric shows signs of caring underneath the tough exterior of his by putting his "Brothers" and friends first before himself.

As you can see, there's been a change in Eric's personality info and his "Older Brother" figure.

Last edited by DarkJak2050; 2011-09-02 at 02:13.
Reason: Nationality/Ethnicity added.

Google helps. But for most parts, I specialize in Sue material. I just try to present it in a way that is appealing.

For example, technically an IS pilot who can use a G2 IS to kick G4 asses is kind of a Stu, because of the amounts of plot armor needed. But that's the good kind of Stu that people like; make the fight interesting, use enough brains, and make his background not that cookiecutter and interesting, even a Stu can suffice.

That said... A lot of people need proper Stu training. It took me a long time to master how to portray Space Marines, the biggest Stu Marties of the galaxy that everyone loves.