OK I looked at the download count an it was like 18 and this only had 3 comments at the time which led me to believe the music wasn't up to par and people just decided if they had nothing nice to say then they'd not say anything at all. But I ain't the bite the tongue type so here ya go........

The recording quality is very poor...rhyming ability and knowledge is there but not channeled properly it honestly reminded me of canibus over clef's beats...production nobody liked mixed with lyrics no one cared about..then ya rhyme scheme is off like similiar to wale's but not really...but different can be a good thing but it was hard for me to catch..it was uneccessary usage of words...like ill shattter your clavicle bone/ bone density/ city boys, boise idaho....

like i see the relativeness of the words but it's over exaggerrated...and the female song just wasn't you i didnt even sound comfortable...

I suggest definately recording somewhere else, better production, and not trying so hard.