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Did I get this right, that the main character suffocates her mother to put her out of her misery from a long-term illness? If that's true I liked the sense of desperation and confusion you portray. The only thing I didn't like was "She sat quietly and sipped her tea." because with a decision like that, just before you're about to carry it out, I don't think anyone could be so calm and reserved. Maybe if she was downing a whisky with a shaking hand or something, it would be more believable. Otherwise, great work in so few words :)