Hello. I found this piece of work quite good, I liked the different points of view portrayed and how you worked with those to reveal different aspects of the girl's character. I especially liked the part 'The dark night, the smell of the grasshoppers, formed the set and soundtrack of her climactic movie scene.'. It made quite a big impact on me.
Anyway, keep it up.
Do read and review some of my work too, (if you have time), especially the latest (Gamine), I really need some feedback on that. Thanks )