I just read through your comic in two days. Yay me! I got here from Frankenstein Superstar, which I got to from Pulse and Magellan. Complicated linking is fun.

Anyways, I second comments about this being similar to Evil Inc. It’s like the heroic version but, thankfully, never comes off as a ripoff. It’s its own animal, and Parker very quickly deviated from my idea of “she’s the Lightning Lady of this comic.” But the dynamic here means that if you can ever get together with Brad Guigar for a crossover, things would work very well together (I can imagine the two organizations getting together to plan battles for maximum revenue).

On to the page itself: I hold a BA in English and I like to flagrantly violate stupid grammatical rules. It’s only a rule because it’s a rule in Latin–where it’s impossible to split an infinitive. Also: ending a sentence in a preposition–why not? It’s much better than shoving more words into your speech to try and make it work “properly”.