I thought that song was just awfull :P so tell your friend that he needs practice.. and i guess he uses FL ^^ The beginning was really wtf :P but the editing was nice i liked it more or less :) yea he started to learn FL some months ago... but he needs some Plugin pack for FL to make music more awe...

Technically not bad, but it just didn't interest me much. Also wished you would have actually added some music in the beginning, rather than just the scenes and the text, seemed kinda boring there. i wanted to put there some voice that reads that stuff =o but couldnt finde anybody who can readi it ...