This story is every facet of epicness that makes literature a part of the arts.

Please don't let this wonderfully written and impressively well thought out story be at it's end. It says that the story is complete, that you haven't updated it since 211, but I BEG you to please pick back up your imaginary pen and write some more. I crave more of this fine art like I need to breathe.

It's really, really amazing, what you've done here, and even if you never finish it I'll always be so happy that you got this far. Thank you for putting this out into the world. *hugs*

OOOoooh! Spirit World! This makes me both excited and sad, cause I know what is to come if everything goes according to plan...

OOooh! Azula! Again, the way you write her is amazing. She's so cunning and witty and all cold intelligence, enough so that I am impressed and awed by her even though I hate her for even thinking about hurting Aang.

And Zuko! Only Zuko would respond to a heartfelt thank you over saving a life with such small words. I love him so much. :)

Amazing, amazing, AMAZING writing as always. I am so impressed by you and your brilliant work! *hugs*

I really like how you described the camp. Like, the rebels don't have much, but one can see that the place is most definitely home. And I like how Yue's status isn't forgotten, even though there isn't much to distinguish it. It's the little things. :)

And Yue's reaction towards the idea of the Moon Spirit inside of her was really well written and completely believable. As was Aang's response to it. Amazing job on that.

I think my favorite part of the fic was definitely he very ending though. It was something very beautiful and simple all at once, and the terms used were really beautiful and respectful of the various cultures.

And the Swamp! Oh my goodness you are so creative! I'm uber impressed with your choice. Like. You are so smaaaaart! And I love how there aren't any loose ends that you aren't tying up. You're making sure t cover all your bases, like how the Fire Nation blimp improvements and how the base survived the air attacks, Excellent writing.

And I really love the scene where Yue is talking to Aang about hi scap and his responsibilities. The entire scene was very much in character and I could really get behind it as major character development and motivation. It was very Aang, wanting to be normal even though the world required him to rise, and I loved how you incorporated his cartoon backstory into your story. It really adds to the essence of how this is the same world, except where everything went wrong.

Really, really great so far! Just as amazing, if not more so, as the last time I read it forever ago. :)

Oh my goOOOSHHH! You wrote the Avatar State so well! *swoons* I'm uber impressed. And Aang! Poor Aang, he fell unconscious and he had to be carried and the mental image is surprisingly adorable...

Again, EPIC fight scene. Again, I love the characterization of Azula, and her dynamic with Zuko and is dynamic with her is just brilliant. I love the way he distracts her with his claims to rule. That's just... it's so in character for her to want to prove her worth, and so in character of him to still focus on honour, even if it is in a different sense now then it was in the show.

Yue is brilliant yet again. LoOVED her. Loved her, loved her, loved her. She was grim and desperate, but still very much herself, still royalty and brave and strong. Ilove that one sentence where she thinks about carrying Aang and how the 'princess she was' wouldn't have been able to but the 'woman she had become' could. Just brilliant.

And Iroh! Yes! IRRRROOOHH! I love the little conversation at the end, and how Yue and Zuko kind of just pitched Aang into the water. :)

Okay, but like, I love how you portray Azula. Because you can still see this fourteen year old girl from the show, on the cusp of insanity but still so evil and mean and cruel, lying and backstabbing and treacherous and DANGEROUS. Like, she's so smug. She's everything I imagine Azula would have been, if Ozai had succeeded. Brilliant Job!

And Yue and Aang and Zuko. I can already feel the happiness sparking in my soul as Zuko and Yue have their snark fests, both maintain protective boundaries on the oblivious precious smol bean Aang, and just holding daily battles in sassy one liners.

And Yue gossiping with Aang in the midst of the potential deadly situation. Priceless!

And her reaction to figuring out Aang was the AVATAR. It was perfect! Not overdone, but still everything it needed to be. This was the person destined to save the world, someone Yue had been praying for, but he was also just a kid and just-

The dynamic, the way you write, all of it. Beautiful. Can't wait to read more! :)

I forgot how much I freaking LOVED how you wrote Yue. You write her so... amazing! Like, I can completely and utterly see the Northern Water Tribe Princess from the show, I can see her, but I see her as you see her, hardened by situation and circumstance, still honourable and brave, but a bit desperate, too; no longer held back for stupid reasons, willing to FIGHT! It's Yue, but her polite decorum has been worn down by the war and by the rebellion, and you've just aged up and wised up her character so well. Brilliant job with her!

And Zukoooooo... Zuko, baby, I love you so much, you and your angsty angry ball of fluff ways. And that bit where Aang was like "Where did you learn to bake?" Made me laugh out loud. This story is so deep and funny and well written with such an articulate plotline and story ideas and brilliant characterization all at once.

And I forgot about Appa! And Aang, so torn, thinking of Appa as his family and so convinced no one would ever hurt him. Just, Aang, you smol precious bean, I love you SO MUCH.