I loved this challenge. After putting together sleep with “daki kago”, part 1, I could not get Chèvrefeuille’s example above out of my head. My mind kept seeing the basket weave of the daki kago similar to a spider’s web. So here is my second attempt. Again, I seem to have a darker, survivalist spin to mine or perhaps I was just hungry…….

3 thoughts on “sleep with “daki kago”, part 2”

Ah scrumptious! That deadly kiss, so symbolic! …A real metaphor there…..one knows, yet one always succumbs. Great haiku, made me really chuckle, though only because it is to close to the bone, and I, too attracted to the flame just like your trapped moth.