So I was glad to find this entry here another in the series and must say while there is not a lot of animation the art and how you present it is really amazing so really awsome job here the view shots and art together really play well especially with how the story comes along still would have loved some subtitles it could ad some stylish element to the series as a whole, anyways nice work here

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None other then some small added stuff as mentioned.

I know I said with the previous episode that I couldn't give it more than 3.5 stars because it was an animatic. But I read your explanation and, to be honest, you got me hooked. This episode, besides the little jokes, got pretty intriguing. So, I'll leave a 3.5 here (it was funny, though not as much as the first) and fix the previous one with 4 stars. Kudos on some pretty good writing and that top-notch voice acting.

Dinosaur Boy suddenly turned into a real detective fiction/murder/noir type drama. XD Two characters coming together though... bound to get interesting in the next one! Seems a bit shorter this one btw. Not that I mind. Long enough to be entertaining still. Looking forward to seeing where this all goes!

We progressively get weirder, looking forward to what you hear on the next few episodes! The next one is a huge downer, and the fourth episode contains the weirdest scene I have ever written in the past three years of screenwriting. Should be an interesting ride.

In terms of length, I think episode two is the shortest of the season. Episode three clocks in at around six and a half minutes, episode four is around eight minutes and episode five is still in the editing bay. I like to believe that every episode is as long as it has to be.

Thanks for the review man! Looking forward to hearing what you think about the next one :)