我的观点

When asked about a theme, different people will offer different opinions…is no exception. Some people take it for granted that …However, others hold that…

As far as I am concerned, I’m in favor of the second view. The reasons are as follows.

First, there is an element of truth that… but it doesn’t follow that…A case in point is that… Therefore, the first view doesn’t bear much analysis.

In conclusion…

Example:

My View on Adventuring

When asked about a theme, different people will offer different opinions. Adventuring is no exception. Some people take it for granted that human beings should explore the unknown world by adventuring. However, others hold that it is unnecessary and insignificant to be engaged in any adventure in modern times.

As far as I am concerned, I’m in favor of the second view. The reasons are as follows.

Firstly, there is an element of truth that to transform the world human beings should know it first, but it doesn’t follow that people need to go adventuring. It is unnecessary for modern people to sail around the world in a small boat single-handed, or pass through the desert of the jungle on foot alone, etc. The reason is that there are hardly any places in the world that have never been discovered. A case in point is that Yu Chunshun, an adventurer from Shanghai, who went adventuring through many provinces in China, died in the desert in the end. Although his adventure caused a stir in society, I think it was worthless and insignificant because the wen adventuring only out of curiosity and didn’t make any valuable discovery as Columbia did. Therefore, the first view cannot bear much analysis.

In conclusion, in modern times common people need not to adventuring. They can hardly make any new discovery because the world has been explored mostly and is still being explored by scientists.