Monday, January 11, 2016

BRAZEN Deleted Scene

Last year, during the YA Scavenger Hunt, I posted a deleted scene from BRAZEN on another site. It was only up for the few days that the Hunt was going, but I recently received an e-mail from a reader (thank you, Judith!) asking if I might repost it.

This scene occurs before the action of the novel by about six months. Mary Howard is in the coronation procession for Anne Boleyn and describes all that she sees and who she meets...

All around me is
gold and white and crimson, the sky a surprising blue above us.The queen’s hair, brushed a hundred strokes,
hangs down her back like a thick black waterfall.Anne Boleyn, as beautiful and as stony as a
statue.

The men and women of
Cheapside dressed in their best, patched and brushed and so out of place
amongst the white and gold and velvet and silver tissue that hangs from every
house.But the men still wear their caps
and the faces of all alike are sour and insolent.The cheers of “God Save the Queen!” are few
and far between.

My horse shifts
beneath me, eager to be moving. The men and women stare, openmouthed at the
inaudible pageant performed on the street corner.I press one hand to the pocket at my
side.My mother’s letter there crinkles,
the sound louder to me than the stamping of hooves and shouts of the thousands.

Ungrateful wretch – she began.

You dare to ally yourself with that woman – she
continued.

You will hear from me no more – she
finished.

If only my mother
kept her promises.

The bleating of
the sackbut ceases and the procession moves forward again. “HA HA!” One man
crows as we depart.

“I hate it when
the ignorant learn to read.”

I turn to Jane
Boleyn, Lady Rochford, to my left.She
sits upright in her saddle, the crimson of her gown reflecting pink off of her
pale skin, the gold coronet of her hood sparking in a flash of sun.

“What’s he
laughing at?” I ask.

“The initials.”
Lady Rochford waves a dismissive hand at the white and gold canopy that shades
the queen from the sun, embroidered with the Tudor rose, a crowned falcon, and
two letters entwined.H and A – Henry
and Anne.Ha ha.

“Oh.”

Lady Rochford
scowls, the skin around her eyes stretched by fatigue. She served Queen Katherine
for years, but she’s married to the new queen’s brother.I wonder if she, like my mother, believes all
of this pomp is just a sham.A brave
show to try to justify a fabricated marriage.Like a conjurer’s trick, mother said, to make the people believe.

From the faces of
the people around me, it doesn’t seem to be working.

Things are a
little more cheerful at Gracechurch Street, where Mount Parnassus looms over an
archway where a marble fountain spouts Rhenish wine from four spigots.One man – his left hand an open sore – lies
on his back with his head directly underneath a spout while Apollo and the
Muses entertain us, proclaiming all of Queen Anne’s virtues, but especially her
ability to bear sons.Many believe she
already carries one, her belly overlarge beneath the white of her gown.

My brother is near
the head of the procession, standing in for our father who is away in
France.Never one to stand on ceremony,
he Hal turns his horse and comes to me.

“Mary.” We are
virtual strangers.He is better friends
with the king’s son – his obligatory childhood companion – than he is with
me.

“Did Mother
contact you?” he asks.

I nod.No need to tell him what she said.

“Did she threaten
never to speak to you again?”

I lift my eyes to
his.

“She did, didn’t
she?” Hal laughs.“What else did she
say?”

“That I should
think long and hard about who I am.And
about where my loyalties should lie.”

“In other words,
she reminded you of your Stafford descent, that you are royalty in your own
right, and that you should not allow yourself to be taken in by a woman who
appears to have gained her position by witchcraft and seduction.”

“Mother said that
to you?”

He leans closer,
his saddle creaking. “Not in so many words.But it is easy to read between them with our mother, is it not?Especially for someone who savors them like
sweetmeats.”

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TARNISH

When poet Thomas Wyatt offers to coach Anne Boleyn on how to shine at court, she accepts. Before long, Anne's popularity has soared, but more than popularity, Anne wants a voice. What began as a game becomes high stakes as Anne finds herself forced to make an impossible choice between her heart's desire and the chance to make history.

GILT

When her best friend marries Henry VIII, Kitty Tylney must learn to walk the fine line between secrets and treason, discovering that in the Tudor court, the price of gossip could literally be her head.