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Review:

Indiewikkan says:OK, reading through the other comments i realised i missed the citique or whatever it is so...in my opinion the thing thats missing is probably what happened next, with draco's dad and what he'd do to him. in a way i think you made the ending too abrupt, because of what draco said about what might happen tomorow with his dad, the next big event would come far too early for the story to end there so in a way, or to me, it seems unfinished. you should write a sequel. hint hint.

i also noticed that you've write comments back to everyone, well i won't be back to see them, no offense, so i'm here www.indiewikkan.deviantart.com. if you want to reply.
wait, that just sounded so rude. i mean, who write this story me or u?
ingnore this if it sound's like i'm being rude ^^;
love d/g btw.

Author's Response: I may write to you there as well, I am inlove with that sight. :-) We shall see. About the ending, yes, I do believe you may be right! Thank you for the review!