This is just too adorable for words! awwww, i wish i lived in japan so that i could work as a BL editor, that would be like a dream-come-true... XD
this was such an eloquent piece of work, and i was constantly reminded of the Yokozawa Takafumi no Baai chapters, and with the way the story just flowed, you sounded like you could have been actual author of this, because you seemed to know the characters so well, as it you were their creator. :)
as well as being a hilariously entertaining story, it also had moments where your heart just clenched, and others when you just wanted to throw a fit...like i did...
i really just ADORE all your stories... XD keep up the good work! :3

It's as if you have just completely re-written the Erotica pairing but yet kept it the same in a lot of ways... And I loved it! Oh my god, this has to be by far my favorite fanfic of that pairing! Good job! _