The brown and purplish pink colors don't quite say "wind and waves" to me. You may want to put it on a black or navy shirt with light blue ink.

The design is awfully "boxy." That's good in that it looks like a woodblock print, but it's not all that appealing on a t-shirt. You may want to extend the edges of some of the wind and wave swirls so that they make an irregular edge.

It looks like you have some talent here. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.

pauseability

Thank you so much for the very detailed comments. Those are very useful things for me to take note.

In fact, I did start off with blue colors but decided to go for a more unexpected combination so that it speaks beyond sea and waves. Even did a cranberry version. Not too sure how well this works exactly.

The brown and purplish pink colors don't quite say "wind and waves" to me. You may want to put it on a black or navy shirt with light blue ink.

The design is awfully "boxy." That's good in that it looks like a woodblock print, but it's not all that appealing on a t-shirt. You may want to extend the edges of some of the wind and wave swirls so that they make an irregular edge.

It looks like you have some talent here. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.

daedalusknight

pauseability wrote:Thank you so much for the very detailed comments. Those are very useful things for me to take note.

In fact, I did start off with blue colors but decided to go for a more unexpected combination so that it speaks beyond sea and waves. Even did a cranberry version. Not too sure how well this works exactly.

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