What do you think about this poem? I would love for someone to critique it.

We two aged friends were caught today,By shared glance. Words I could not sayentranced. Not you, new friends looked on,As old friends spoke. The grey false dawnBroke thoughts while round us sunset played

Once, enemies trapped in the fray, Alike, but souls between us layWe two aged friends.

Freed, parted, only you could prayCold comfort: if we’d met halfwayThen emptiness would be foregone,Swan fletched arrows not be withdrawn,You loved not, yet this eve you stayed.We two aged friends.