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Archu61Senior Member

I been following this story and payal and her mom and aunt are so shallow that they did not trust on khushie and believed her lie ,eve arnav seems selfish in this story ,and self centered ,hope babuji and Lavanya bring them to their knees in front of khushie ,they need to apoligise for their attitude and behavior ,they could have lost khushie forever .she shd go back with Lavanya complete her education arnav shd go to her for redemption ,,hope you can make your updates longer ,as rt now it comes across as very fragmented ,

.LadyHitler.IF-Sizzlerz

This fic of yours left me speechless! Everything was penned down so beautifully!! Wonderful write up!But you left at a crucial point! Khushi was dying! What hapenned to her? Is she suffering from any disease? And Arnav? Hope to see their confrontation in the next update! This is going really great! Loved it!

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